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EDDY SABARA (17 February 1927 – September 1995) was an Indonesian civil servant and military officer. He was the Governor of Southeast Sulawesi for twelve years between 1966 and 1978, and held acting governor positions in four other provinces due to his position in the Ministry of Home Affairs.

Early life

Sabara was born in Kendari, then part of Dutch East Indies, on 17 February 1927. His father was a municipal police officer. Sabara was the last of seven siblings, and he began his education in Kendari before moving to Makassar for further education until 1946, where he attended school with future Indonesian nationalist figure Robert Wolter Monginsidi.[1][2][3]

Career

Military service

After completing his education in Makassar, Sabara joined a group of youths from Sulawesi who left for Java to fight in the Indonesian National Revolution, as the South Sulawesi campaign of Raymond Westerling was raging in Makassar and its vicinity.[4][5] Once in Java, Sabara joined a battalion in the nationalist government, having been before grown an interest in the military due to watching KNIL drills as a child.[6] In 1948, he was a first lieutenant in command of a reserve company which was about to be deployed to Sulawesi when his unit was attacked and disarmed by Communist militias during the Madiun Affair. Sabara was imprisoned and was apparently about to be executed before Army units from the Siliwangi Division defeated the Communists and freed Sabara's unit.[7] During his time in Java, he also enrolled in the Magelang Military Academy.[8]

After the revolution, he commanded units within the Hasanuddin Military Region, eventually becoming commander of its Regional Training Regiment by 1965. During his time at Hasanuddin, he participated in the campaign against Andi Aziz's rebellion. He had also commanded a reserve brigade during Operation Trikora in 1962.[9][10]

Governor and civil servant

On 14 October 1966, he was appointed as acting governor of Southeast Sulawesi, before being made full governor for two terms starting in 1967.[11][12] The previous civilian governor and the first elected governor of the province, La Ode Hadi, was forced to leave his position in 1966 before he had held it for two years following a wave of demonstrations during the transition to the New Order, allowing the popular Sabara (at that time a lieutenant colonel) to take over.[13]

Southeast Sulawesi was very sparsely populated at the start of his tenure, with little to no government budget, and Sabara opted to relocate locals (mostly nomadic farmers) alongside resettlement areas where roads were planned.[14] According to Sabara in a 1983 interview with _Tempo_, his wife initially believed that his appointment to Southeast Sulawesi was an exile of sorts.[15] He also drew in migrants from densely populated Java and Bali. Despite a lack of existing traffic at the time, he lobbied for the central government to fund key roads, especially between Kendari and Kolaka, believing that the road would attract agricultural settlers.[16] During his governorship, he also served in the People's Consultative Assembly as a regional representative.[17]

He was initially intended to serve just one term, and after its expiry in 1973 a lack of replacement candidates resulted in his term initially being extended by several months, and later a second term.[18] After the conclusion of his governorship in 1978, he was assigned in 1979 to the Ministry of Home Affairs as inspector general, and later became the director general of the ministry's regional autonomy directorate.[19] During his time there, he became acting governors for Jambi (1979),[20] Central Sulawesi (25 November 1980 – 1981),[21] and Aceh (15 March – 27 August 1981),[22] During his temporary governorships of Aceh and Central Sulawesi, he had encountered political gridlocks in the provincial legislatures during their attempt to appoint a definitive governor.[23]

In 27 October 1981, he was also again appointed acting governor of Southeast Sulawesi, the eighth time he was sworn in as Governor.[24][25][26] Afterwards, he was once more appointed as acting governor of Central Kalimantan (7 October 1983 – 23 January 1984).[27] Due to this track record, he was known by journalists as being the “acting governor specialist” in the early 1980s.[28][29] During his time in the ministry, he also revived the deputy governor position, based on his own experience as governor where a lack of a deputy often caused issues especially with the provincial legislature.[30] He was awarded with the Star of Mahaputera, 3rd class (_Bintang Mahaputera Utama_) during his time as inspector general.[31] In 1984, he was also appointed into the Supreme Advisory Council.[32]

He died in September 1995, due to his heart disease and kidney-related complications. He was buried in Jakarta.[33] At the time of his death, he held the rank of major general.[34]

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title: Eddy Sabara

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about Sabara's dictatorial tendencies?

answer: Sabara was a military officer and governor. He was appointed to the position of governor of Southeast Sulawesi in 1966. He was initially intended to serve just one term, but due to a lack of replacement candidates, he was extended for several months. He was appointed acting governor of Central Kalimantan in 1983. He was known by journalists as being the "acting governor specialist" in the early 1980s.

text: The answer given is off. It has nothing to do with the question asked. It should simply say the text says nothing about Sabara having dictatorial tendencies.

refinement: The text says nothing about Sabara having dictatorial tendencies.

answer: No answer

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Sabara's military duties.

answer: Sabara joined a group of youths from Sulawesi who left for Java to fight in the Indonesian National Revolution. He joined a battalion in the nationalist government. He was imprisoned and was about to be executed before the army freed him during the Madiun Affair. He commanded units within the Hasanuddin Military Region. He was the commander of its Regional Training Regiment by 1965. He participated in the campaign against Andi Aziz's rebellion. He also commanded a reserve brigade during Operation Trikora in 1962.

text:
-The answer omits that in 1948, Sabara was a first lieutenant in command of a reserve company.

-It also omits that he enrolled in the Magelang Military Academy during his time in Java.

The model should include these in the answer.

refinement: Sabara joined a group of youths from Sulawesi who left for Java to fight in the Indonesian National Revolution. He joined a battalion in the nationalist government. In 1948, Sabara was a first lieutenant in command of a reserve company. He was imprisoned and was about to be executed before the army freed him during the Madiun Affair. He then enrolled in the Magelang Military Academy during his time in Java. Sabara commanded units within the Hasanuddin Military Region. He was the commander of its Regional Training Regiment by 1965. He participated in the campaign against Andi Aziz's rebellion and commanded a reserve brigade during Operation Trikora in 1962.

answer: Sabara joined a group of youths from Sulawesi who left for Java to fight in the Indonesian National Revolution. He joined a battalion in the nationalist government. He was imprisoned and was about to be executed before the army freed him during the Madiun Affair. He was a first lieutenant in command of a reserve company. He commanded units within the Hasanuddin Military Region. He was the commander of its Regional Training Regiment by 1965. He participated in the campaign against Andi Aziz's rebellion. He also commanded a reserve brigade during Operation Trikora in 1962.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Sabara's civilian service.

answer: He served as inspector general of the Ministry of Home Affairs, and became the director general of the ministry's regional autonomy directorate. He was appointed acting governor of Aceh and Central Sulawesi. He revived the deputy governor position in the ministry. He served in the People's Consultative Assembly as a regional representative.

text:
- The answer omits that Sabara was appointed as acting governor of Southeast Sulawesi on 14th October 1966, before being made full governor for two terms starting in 1967.

- The answer omits the year Sabara was assigned the Ministry of Home Affairs inspector general.

-The answer omits he was acting governor for Jambi and overlooks the years he served the regions Aceh and Central Sulawesi.

-The answer omits that on 27th October 1981, they appointed him the acting governor of Southeast Sulawesi.

-The answer omits that they appointed him as acting governor of Central Kalimantan from 7th October 1983 till 23rd January 1984.

- It omits they appointed him to the Supreme Advisory Council in 1984.

These omissions should be mentioned in the summary.

refinement: On 14th October 1966, Sabara became acting governor of Southeast Sulawesi before being made full governor for 12 years between 1966 and 1978. He served as inspector general of the Ministry of Home Affairs in 1979 and became the director general of the ministry's regional autonomy directorate. He was appointed acting governor of Jambi in 1979, Aceh from 15th March – 27th August 1981, and Central Sulawesi from 25th November 1980 – 1981. He revived the deputy governor position in the ministry. He served in the People's Consultative Assembly as a regional representative. On 27th October 1981, he became the acting governor of Southeast Sulawesi again. Then he became the acting governor of Central Kalimantan from 7th October 1983 till 23rd January 1984. Finally, he became the Supreme Advisory Council in 1984.

text: "director general" should be hyphenated.

refinement: On 14th October 1966, Sabara became acting governor of Southeast Sulawesi before being made full governor for 12 years between 1966 and 1978. He served as inspector general of the Ministry of Home Affairs in 1979 and became the director-general of the ministry's regional autonomy directorate. He was appointed acting governor of Jambi in 1979, Aceh from 15th March – 27th August 1981, and Central Sulawesi from 25th November 1980 – 1981. He revived the deputy governor position in the ministry. He served in the People's Consultative Assembly as a regional representative. On 27th October 1981, he became the acting governor of Southeast Sulawesi again. Then he became the acting governor of Central Kalimantan from 7th October 1983 till 23rd January 1984. Finally, he became the Supreme Advisory Council in 1984.

answer: Sabara was the governor of Southeast Sulawesi for 12 years. He served as inspector general of the Ministry of Home Affairs, and became the director general of the ministry's regional autonomy directorate. He was appointed acting governor of Aceh and Central Sulawesi. He revived the deputy governor position in the ministry. He served in the People's Consultative Assembly as a regional representative.


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“Mummy, tell me the story of Die Sine Timere,” whispered Jerry to his mother as she leaned over to tuck him in. He’d heard the story about a million times, from his friends and teachers and family, but he loved it best when his mother told it. Besides, the holiday was tomorrow, and hearing the story would help calm his excitement enough to sleep. His mother smiled at him and adjusted his pillows.
	“Are you sure? You practically know it by heart at this point,” she replied. He looked up at her and smiled an imploring smile.
	“Please?”
	His mother laughed a little and sat down next to him on the bed.
	“Well...okay,” she whispered. She looked out his window and saw the holiday’s festive banner flapping from between two street lamps on the road. The banner read “Welcome to the 3045 Celebration of Die Sine Timere!” It waved back and forth in the wind. She turned back to Jerry, who was now propped up on his pillows and looking at her expectantly.
	“Okay, okay. Well,” she began, “Our story begins a long time ago, way back in 2015. Our ancestors who lived in that time were not like the way we are today. They were wild and crazy and very violent. The whole world was fighting a war with each other, and it was not the first time everyone had been fighting. They loved fighting each other, and they’d find any excuse to go to do it. They fought over religion and money and--”
	“And oil!” interrupted Jerry excitedly.
	“Yes, love, and oil. They even fought over who got to live where. It was very silly, but very dangerous. You see, millions of people, innocent people and soldiers alike were getting killed every day. It was horrible. Families were being ripped apart and nobody seemed to be able to make sense of it all. Nobody seemed to understand that everyone was the same underneath the skin and that war was a bad thing. Everyone bleeds red, darling, but our ancestors were too blinded by greed and hatred to see the common color underneath people’s skin. So they fought and fought for years. Finally, one day everyone woke up from sleeping and realized that they had killed off more than half the people on Earth. There used to be seven billion people living there, but now there was only about two billion. Some of the ground was permanently stained red from all the bloodshed. Even the clouds were damaged, and there were holes in the sky from all the bad things our ancestors had put up there. Things had gotten so bad that all the countries knew that they had to stop killing and stop wasting things and stop fighting.”
	“Did they stop killing each other, Mummy?” asked Jerry, even though he already knew the answer.
	“Yes, they did, darling. All the countries came together and talked about their problems and decided to stop all wars forever. Everyone began to get along, slowly but surely, and the people started sharing their things with each other. Nobody got called any names and everyone was equal. The first few years of peace were a little scary, because people weren’t sure how long it was going to last. But as the fourth year of peace passed, it became obvious to everyone that it was here to stay. All the leaders of all the countries came together that year and decided that there should be a day of remembrance and happiness and celebration as a global holiday, to be celebrated until the end of peace. They put this holiday on August 21st, which was the day all the wars ended. They decided to call this day “Die Sine Timere,” which is from a very very old language called Latin, and it means “Day Without Fear.” They said that on this day, all the people were to celebrate another year of peace and remember our mistakes in the past to keep us safe in the future. They said that people could celebrate and remember any way they saw fit, but they must be sure to celebrate it each year. Our country celebrates by having large block parties and getting all the communities together for a good time. And for you and all the other children, darling, it’s the one night of the year where you don’t have to go to bed before midnight. You get to stay up very late. And before everyone does go to bed on the night of Die Sine Timere, each family sits together in silent meditation to remember those who died and to help us remain peaceful for the following year.”
	“Tell me about the lanterns, Mummy. Don’t forget the lanterns,” whispered Jerry, whose eyes were closed now. He was not quiet asleep yet, just listening quietly to the story of his favorite holiday in peace.
	“Ah, yes, the lanterns,” said his mother, who now was stroking her son’s hair gently as she spoke. “Well, in all the countries around the world, there is one thing that all our ceremonies of peace have in common. Every single person or family makes a special lantern out of biodegradable paper, and they each write a wish for the future or a memory of the past on that lantern. Then, at exactly midnight, each person or family lights the lantern and sends it into the sky, and all the wishes and memories get to soar the night skies together. It’s very beautiful and is a symbol of our unity and peace.”
	“It’s like watching all our wishes come true,” whispered Jerry.
	“That it is, my love. That it is,” replied his mother, “And every year, the whole world does the same thing. For one day a year, we remember our unity and how lucky we are to be at peace. Each person meditating or releasing a lantern or playing in the park during the day is a promise for the future. We will remain peaceful, so long as we have this hope.” She stopped, for that was the end of the story. She and her son sat quietly together for a moment, before Jerry let out a contented sigh and rolled on his side, eyes still shut tight.
	His mother looked down at his little sleeping face and smiled. She leaned down and gently kissed his forehead before getting up off the bed. She tucked the blankets up to his chin and turned to walk away.
	“Mummy?” Jerry said quietly.
	“Yes, darling?” said his mother, turning back towards her son.
	“Goodnight, Mummy. I love you.”
	“I love you too, Jerry. Goodnight.”

She shut off his light and headed downstairs to prepare the rice paper for the lanterns for tomorrow night, so that she and her son could silently watch all their wishes come true.

title: A New Holiday

question: What does Die Sine Timere mean?

answer: It means "a day without fear."

text: “Die Sine Timere,” which is from a very very old language called Latin, and it means “Day Without Fear.”

answer: The narrator translates it roughly as "day without fear."

text:
There is no indication that this is a rough translation. Unless the answer comes from someone who knows Latin well enough to judge it.

Having the term "roughly" can be misinterpreted as that the translation could have another meaning, which would further confuse the reader.

refinement: The narrator translates it as "day without fear."

text: “Die Sine Timere,” which is from a very very old language called Latin, and it means “Day Without Fear.”

answer: Day Without Fear

text: “Die Sine Timere,” which is from a very very old language called Latin, and it means “Day Without Fear.”

question: When is this story set?

answer: In the future.

text: Lacks the specific year, which was provided in the narrative.

text: “Welcome to the 3045 Celebration of Die Sine Timere!”

answer: In 3045, a year after war is ended

text:
It has been many years since the wars ended. Which was many years after 2015 but long before 3045.

"So they fought and fought for years. Finally, one day everyone woke up from sleeping and realized that they had killed off more than half the people on Earth.

text: “Welcome to the 3045 Celebration of Die Sine Timere!”

answer: In 2015 and in the following years.

text: The story is about the mother and the child. Not the tale the mother recounts to the child. The setting of the story is in the year 3045. The setting of the tale begins in 2015.

text: “Welcome to the 3045 Celebration of Die Sine Timere!”

text: Our story begins a long time ago, way back in 2015.

question: What is the them of this story?

answer: Die Sine Timere is a holiday celebrating togetherness and good morals.

text:
The answer is not a theme. While theme is somewhat subjective, there are plenty of plausible answers. "war", "unity", "peace", "innocence" (the naive questions of a child in a world that no longer has war), "parenthood" (a little reaching, but still okay), etc.

For one day a year, we remember our unity and how lucky we are to be at peace.

text: For one day a year, we remember our unity and how lucky we are to be at peace.

text: The banner read “Welcome to the 3045 Celebration of Die Sine Timere!” It waved back and forth in the wind

answer: Leadership.

text:
Leadership is an attribute not shown or mentioned in the story (it is implied that the world leaders did take action, but that is not the focus of the story).

"war", "unity", "peace", "innocence" (the naive questions of a child in a world that no longer has war), "parenthood" (a little reaching, but still okay), etc.

answer: World peace.

text: every year, the whole world does the same thing. For one day a year, we remember our unity and how lucky we are to be at peace

question: What year is the story set in?

answer: 3045.

text: “Welcome to the 3045 Celebration of Die Sine Timere!”

answer: The year 2030.

text: “Welcome to the 3045 Celebration of Die Sine Timere!”

answer: In 3045.

text: “Welcome to the 3045 Celebration of Die Sine Timere!”

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The story is about a special holiday named "Die Sine Timere", when people remember and celebrate peace and the end of wars, by creating small paper lanterns with wishes or memories written on them, and releasing them at midnight.

text: “Welcome to the 3045 Celebration of Die Sine Timere!”

text: For one day a year, we remember our unity and how lucky we are to be at peace. Each person meditating or releasing a lantern or playing in the park during the day is a promise for the future.

answer: The story tells of a holiday celebrated each year in memory of an era where the people were at peace. The holiday is known as 'Die Sine Timere' (Day Without Fear) and is celebrated with large block parties and lanterns that are sent into the sky at midnight containing wishes or memories.

text: Not one sentence.

refinement: The story tells of a holiday known as 'Die Sine Timere'; celebrated each year in memory of an era where the people are at peace, it is celebrated with large block parties and lanterns that are sent into the sky at midnight containing wishes or memories.

text: They put this holiday on August 21st, which was the day all the wars ended. They decided to call this day “Die Sine Timere,” which is from a very very old language called Latin, and it means “Day Without Fear.” They said that on this day, all the people were to celebrate another year of peace and remember our mistakes in the past to keep us safe in the future.

text: Each person meditating or releasing a lantern or playing in the park during the day is a promise for the future

answer: The story tells of the annual holiday, Die Sine Timere, during which people celebrate being at peace and commit to creating more of it in the future. The tradition involves writing wishes on paper lanterns and releasing them at midnight as a symbol of unity.

text: Not one sentence.

refinement: The story tells of the annual holiday, Die Sine Timere, during which people celebrate being at peace and commit to creating more of it in the future, celebrating this day involves writing wishes on paper lanterns and releasing them at midnight as a symbol of unity.

text: They put this holiday on August 21st, which was the day all the wars ended. They decided to call this day “Die Sine Timere,” which is from a very very old language called Latin, and it means “Day Without Fear.” They said that on this day, all the people were to celebrate another year of peace and remember our mistakes in the past to keep us safe in the future.

text: Each person meditating or releasing a lantern or playing in the park during the day is a promise for the future

answer: This story is a future history of the world about how it attained world peace.

text: one day everyone woke up from sleeping and realized that they had killed off more than half the people on Earth. There used to be seven billion people living there, but now there was only about two billion. Some of the ground was permanently stained red from all the bloodshed. Even the clouds were damaged, and there were holes in the sky from all the bad things our ancestors had put up there. Things had gotten so bad that all the countries knew that they had to stop killing and stop wasting things and stop fighting

text: All the countries came together and talked about their problems and decided to stop all wars forever. Everyone began to get along, slowly but surely, and the people started sharing their things with each other. Nobody got called any names and everyone was equal. The first few years of peace were a little scary, because people weren’t sure how long it was going to last.

answer: This story tells of a global holiday celebrating peace and love - simply called 'Die Sine Timere.' On this day, people write wishes on paper lanterns and send them up into the night sky as a reminder of unity and peace.

text: Not one sentence.

refinement: This story tells of a global holiday called 'Die Sine Timere', on this day, people write wishes on paper lanterns and send them up into the night sky as a reminder of unity and peace.

text: For one day a year, we remember our unity and how lucky we are to be at peace. Each person meditating or releasing a lantern or playing in the park during the day is a promise for the future.

answer: The protagonist tells her son the story of the Die Sine Timere holiday, which commemorates the end of war and unity through releasing lanterns into the sky.

text: For one day a year, we remember our unity and how lucky we are to be at peace. Each person meditating or releasing a lantern or playing in the park during the day is a promise for the future.


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SONA ARA GHAZARYAN (; born 30 March 1993) is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018. She is a member of the My Step Alliance.[1]

Early life

Ghazaryan was born on 30 March 1993 in Yerevan. In 2013, she graduated from the Yerevan Brusov State University of Languages and Social Sciences.[2]

Politics

From September 2018 to January 2019, Ghazaryan was a member of the Yerevan Council of Elders.[3]

On 9 December 2018, she was elected to the National Assembly as part of the My Step Alliance.[4]

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title: Sona Ghazaryan

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is Sona Ara Ghazaryan?

answer: She is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018.

text: "SONA ARA GHAZARYAN (; born 30 March 1993) is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018."

answer: Sona Ghazaryan is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018.

text: "SONA ARA GHAZARYAN (; born 30 March 1993) is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018."

answer: An Armenian politicial who is a member of the My Step Alliance.

text: Ghazaryan's membership in the National Assembly is important to include.

refinement: An Armenian politicial who is a member of the My Step Alliance and serves in the National Assembly since 2018.

text: "Politician" is mistyped.

refinement: An Armenian politician who is a member of the My Step Alliance and serves in the National Assembly since 2018.

text: "SONA ARA GHAZARYAN (; born 30 March 1993) is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018. She is a member of the My Step Alliance."

answer: Sona Ghazaryan is an Armenian politician. She was elected to the National Assembly in 2018 as a member of the My Step Alliance.

text: "SONA ARA GHAZARYAN (; born 30 March 1993) is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018. She is a member of the My Step Alliance."

text: Alliance: "On 9 December 2018, she was elected to the National Assembly as part of the My Step Alliance."

answer: She is an Armenian politician who has served since 2018 as a member of the National Assembly of the Republic of Armenia.

text: The Republic of Armenia is an ancient nation, and the current Armenian state is just known as Armenia.

refinement: She is an Armenian politician who has served since 2018 as a member of the National Assembly of Armenia.

text: "SONA ARA GHAZARYAN (; born 30 March 1993) is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where was she born?

answer: Yerevan, Armenia

text: "Ghazaryan was born on 30 March 1993 in Yerevan."

answer: She was born in Yerevan in 1993.

text: "Ghazaryan was born on 30 March 1993 in Yerevan."

answer: She was born in Yerevan.

text: "Ghazaryan was born on 30 March 1993 in Yerevan."

answer: Yerevan.

text: "Ghazaryan was born on 30 March 1993 in Yerevan."

answer: Yerevan.

text: "Ghazaryan was born on 30 March 1993 in Yerevan."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What has she achieved?

answer: She was elected to the National Assembly as part of the My Step Alliance.

text: Another accomplishment in Ghazaryan's career is her membership in the Yerevan Council of Elders.

refinement: She was elected to the National Assembly as part of the My Step Alliance. She was also a part of the Yerevan Council of Elders from September 2018 to January 2019.

text: "On 9 December 2018, she was elected to the National Assembly as part of the My Step Alliance."

answer: There's not enough information to answer the question.

text: The answer is completely incorrect.

text: There's no answer.

refinement: She was elected to the National Assembly as part of the My Step Alliance. She was also a part of the Yerevan Council of Elders from September 2018 to January 2019.

answer: Not much is stated on the page, though ti is noted she was a member of the Yerevan Council of Elders from September 2018 to January 2019.

text: It's incorrect to say not much is stated regarding Ghazaryan's accomplishments.

refinement: She was a member of the Yerevan Council of Elders from September 2018 to January 2019.

text: There are two other accomplishments mentioned in the article.

refinement: She was a member of the Yerevan Council of Elders from September 2018 to January 2019. She was elected to the National Assembly as part of the My Step Alliance on December 9, 2018.

text: "From September 2018 to January 2019, Ghazaryan was a member of the Yerevan Council of Elders."

answer: Ghazaryan has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018. She is a member of the My Step Alliance.

text: The answer can also mention her membership in the Yerevan Council of Elders.

refinement: Ghazaryan has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018. She is a member of the My Step Alliance. Starting from September 2018, she was a member of the Yerevan Council of Elders for four months.

text: "On 9 December 2018, she was elected to the National Assembly as part of the My Step Alliance."

answer: Since 2018, Ghazaryan has served as a member of the National Assembly.

text: The answer can include her membership in the My Step Alliance.

refinement: Since 2018, Ghazaryan has served as a member of the National Assembly. She is a member of the My Step Alliance.

text: The answer can also mention her membership in the Yerevan Council of Elders.

refinement: Since 2018, Ghazaryan has served as a member of the National Assembly. She is a member of the My Step Alliance. Starting from September 2018, she was a member of the Yerevan Council of Elders for four months.

text: "On 9 December 2018, she was elected to the National Assembly as part of the My Step Alliance."

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Sona Ghazaryan is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018.

text: "SONA ARA GHAZARYAN (; born 30 March 1993) is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018."

answer: Sona Ghazaryan is an Armenian politician who has served in the National Assembly since 2018. She is a member of the My Step Alliance.

text: The question asks for a single sentence summary. The answer can be consolidated.

refinement: Sona Ghazaryan is an Armenian politician who has served in the National Assembly since 2018, and she is a member of the My Step Alliance.

text: "SONA ARA GHAZARYAN (; born 30 March 1993) is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018. She is a member of the My Step Alliance."

answer: This article details the rise to politics of Sona Arazaryan.

text: The summary is too vague and not helpful.

text: There's no answer.

refinement: Sona Ghazaryan is an Armenian politician who has served in the National Assembly since 2018, and she is a member of the My Step Alliance.

answer: A page for Armenian politician Sona Ara Ghazaryan, briefly explaining her early life and her politics.

text: The answer is vague and not very helpful.

refinement: A page for Armenian politician Sona Ara Ghazaryan, briefly explaining that she serves in the National Assembly as part of the My Step Alliance since 2018.

text: "SONA ARA GHAZARYAN (; born 30 March 1993) is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018. She is a member of the My Step Alliance."

answer: Sona Ghazaryan is an Armenian politician who was elected to the National Assembly in 2018. She is a member of the My Step Alliance.

text: The question asks for a single sentence summary. The answer can be consolidated.

refinement: Sona Ghazaryan is an Armenian politician who was elected to the National Assembly in 2018, and she is a member of the My Step Alliance.

text: "SONA ARA GHAZARYAN (; born 30 March 1993) is an Armenian politician who has served as a member of the National Assembly since 2018. She is a member of the My Step Alliance."


text:
"SQUIRE! Fetch me my horse! I’m going out hunting!"

"Yes sire!"

Lousy, ungrateful, stupid bastard. Squire? Fucking squire? Jesus man you know my name, I’m Perry, like I tell you every fucking day. And don’t even get me started on the hunting. Hunting? Why don’t you just describe it accurately and call it seating your fat ass on the back of that poor sop of a horse and forcing it to canter round your shitty little forest, while you giggle with glee at the delightful experience of bouncing up and down. And all the while you’re accompanied by a large band of trumpeters, making absolutely sure every single animal with a brain has enough time to hear this ludicrous ensemble of idiocy, pack up its family, maybe have a small bite to eat and move the fuck away. Quite frankly, anything stupid enough to be caught by this moronic party had it coming. If the hunting party didn’t get them, an angry 6 year old with a small stick would’ve done the next morning.

But I’ve side-tracked. The more important debate here is how the fuck this man managed to become a knight. I’d call him stupid but that would be an insult to uneducated peons everywhere. He is his own class of stupid, so far down the IQ scale he may have broken into previously unexplored realms of negative IQ. Oh, you think I’m being mean? Maybe a bit overdramatic? Oh no no no. Let me explain. This is the man who, when getting out of a double bed, rolled over the wrong way to the other side of the bed and, rather than realise his mistake and either rolling the other way to escape the bed, or continuing his roll to reach the other side, shouted desperately for help, for he had lost the floor and was surely doomed. This is the man who picked up a sword from the wrong end and failed to understand his mistake. This is the man who put a helmet on his foot and complained when he couldn’t walk properly. Please understand, my master is genuinely something else. I’ve yet to theorise how he became a knight. Oh yes, his father was a knight and that grants him an easy ride to the role, but I am amazed that, after discovering that his son had the intelligence of a melon, his dear father hadn’t pushed him to follow an alternative career path, something more appropriate to his level like, ooh I don’t know, an early grave.

Too far? Perhaps. But you don’t have to serve under this infantile baboon. Every waking moment of my day is spent entertaining his every want and need, and oh boy does he have a lot of needs. Sometimes – and I wish I was joking – he struggles with wiping his own ass. Guess who gets that fantastic job? That’s right, Squire Perry, his faithful fucking assistant. Other highlights include: serving him his food; helping him eat his food; cleaning his food when he spills it on the floor, like the clumsy halfwit he is; cleaning his bed; cleaning his clothes; organising his equipment. Oh, and how could I forget, fetching his fucking horse when he wants to go on a fucking hunting expedition.

I should go, he might cry if he doesn’t get his bloody horse soon. Ooh, that is a tempting prospect... but no. It wouldn’t be obeying my fucking duty. I swear to fucking god. Pray for me, would you?

title: Perry [HF]

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe a backstory for Squire Perry in 3-5 sentences based on character and context clues.

answer: The squire might be someone who has been forced to entertain the prince or king his entire life. He likely has little to no say in his daily activities, so it's unlikely he was born into nobility. This is probably around the 13th-14th centuries in what is now known as the United Kingdom, based on the language choices. The squire has to deal with the knight by proxy his relationship to the more noble members. He is very witty and probably has read a lot in lieu of traveling, unless he traveled with the king's family.

answer: Squire Perry is the title given to the narrator of the story. They have fallen into the position of squire because they have the stupidest possible master, someone whom could be easily provoked into stamping their foot and crying like a toddler. The squire appears to be a young man, maybe in his 20s, who has been on the job for a while and is nearing a breaking point.

answer: He was the son of a Knight, and he and Perry have the same name. Perry is an assistant of a Knight (similar to a Squire) who can't get along with the Knight inspite of the chores that are given to him.

text: There is no evidence of this claim in the text

refinement: Perry is an assistant of a Knight (similar to a Squire) who can't get along with the Knight inspite of the chores that are given to him.

text: This sentence doesn't make too much sense

refinement: Squire Perry is the title given to the narrator of the story. They have fallen into the position of squire because they have the stupidest possible master, someone whom could be easily provoked into stamping their foot and crying like a toddler. The squire appears to be a young man, maybe in his 20s, who has been on the job for a while and is nearing a breaking point.

answer:
Perry is described as having incredibly low intelligence. He is the son of a knight, but it seems that no one could have predicted the extent of his incompetence. Given his circumstances, it's possible that Perry's shortcomings in intelligence and common sense may have been passed on genetically. Perry appears to be incapable of even common tasks such as wiping his own ass, this leads to a lot of resentment and frustration.

It seems that Perry was given a position of responsibility out of nepotism and nothing else. He lacks the intelligence necessary to hold the position in any meaningful, productive way. Even the menial duties he is tasked with, like organizing the equipment or fetching a horse, become incredibly tedious for him. This undoubtedly frustrates his superiors, driving them further towards anger and aggression. He likely does his best to avoid this and hates being judged by people who can do everything better and faster than he can.

text: This answer has confused the squire with his master.

refinement: Squire Perry is the title given to the narrator of the story. They have fallen into the position of squire because they have the stupidest possible master, someone whom could be easily provoked into stamping their foot and crying like a toddler. The squire appears to be a young man, maybe in his 20s, who has been on the job for a while and is nearing a breaking point.

answer: Perry is the knight son of a knight and with this comes some privileges. However, Perry lacks intelligence and common sense. This has made him obnoxious and demanding in his interactions with the castle's other inhabitants. Perry expects them to do everything for him, and he views himself as inherently superior to them. Consequently, the people in the castle all have a low opinion of him, and he is often the butt of jokes. He does not realize that people consider him an idiot, and he believes himself superior to all.


text:
As he unfolded the brown wrappings of his tootsi-roll in the dinky little motel he had checked into the previous day, he noticed he had missed a spot from his earlier encounter.  A woman, around the age of 23, Susan was an only child, a repeated offender of the law, and quite possibly a prostitute, this we are unsure of.  Jerry, a Sophisticated young lad around the age of 25, he grew up a loner, the kids always made fun of him for never being interested in any girls when most others had hit puberty.  An outcast, Not a crazy psychopathic outcast like most other serial killers out there.  Simply one of those who could  easily be cast aside and forgotten about without a second guess.  He cleans the blood stains off the bathtub, and vigorously washes his hands.

He pulls out a  tattered map of the United states, you can tell its been used many times before, from the gradient spectrum of browns from obvious coffee spills, arguably red stains from blood, but what is strange, is something was written on the back, in a faded light blue pen. Written upside down were the words "i have to do this, I'm sorry.  I love you, beth" with tear stains from her writing the note, and him reading it. Torn edges, and crumpled folds, he takes out his red pen, like he always does. He simply puts an X on where San Francisco should be.

He packs his bags, a duffle bag, and a backpack. he puts his dry cleaning in his duffle bag, you can just smell death covered with the sweet smell of spring  meadows, He finishes packing up his belongings, and looks at the map one more time.  He draws an arrow to Sacramento. You can see other lines, he started off in a small town near Houston Texas, and then made his way east. six or seven other X's mark other stops along his way to Los Angeles, Notable ones are in Phoenix, San Diego, and Riverside where Women have been reported missing.

He has an odd pattern to his mishaps, He finds a girl at a bar, but not one who has had too much to drink, he wants to know who she really is. after they chat for a while, he offers to taker her back to her place without any intentions, and offers to take her out the next day.  Most accept and they go out into a public place, they get to know each other.  After about an hour of conversation, he reveals he has a problem that can be fixed, their expressions are always the same, mouth open, shocked, confused, hurt, and misguided.  Unbeknownst to others around them, the two seem to be having a nice chat with some bad news, nothing to get over excited about.  Following her expressions comes the oh so  familiar apology, and tells them that he will give them a ride back. This is where things go from sweet to sour.

He never sleeps with his victims, he has respect. perhaps not as much as the average Joe.  He doesn't torture them, Jerry makes their deaths quick and painless. sometimes strangulation, others, he will cut her throat.  he will always ask how they want to go. and he usually abides by it, as long as it doesn't involve a gun. He has a strong hatred towards guns, as a child, the kids would always pretend to shoot blanks at him.  one time, one of the guns had a real bullet. when it went off, it overpowered all the other powder caps that they were shooting, nothing slowed down. He could just feel the hot metallic texture of the bullet as it broke up inside his leg, he could feel the bullet get ripped apart. Everything he remembers went white after that, he may have blocked it out himself, or he may just not remember.

He leaves his hotel room, not leaving any trace of anyone ever being there, it looked like the maids had just cleaned the room. He gets into his old '87 dark cherry red two door cadillac, the one with the white top, and the rims that glisten when struck by the sunlight.  He gets on the 80 freeway going east, towards Sacramento. He does his usual routine, however, this one is different.  He seems to be happy when she smiles, and she has the same eyes as his previous Lover, Beth.  Without thinking, he kisses her on the cheek, she blushes and asks why he did that, they don't  knew each other. he quickly turns much more red than the cherry red of his cadillac.  They hit it off great, he is actually happy for once in his life, other than the times he spent with beth.

However, she ends up much like the rest. eyes closed, in the bathtub filled of that liquid cherry red blood everyone is oh so familiar with.  Jerry is crying.  this is the first time he has cried since she left. leaving that note on the back of his map.  Lying on his hotel bed, staring up into the depths of the ceiling, he hand folds off the edge of the bed, holding the beloved map.  The map floats down to the ground, Written on the front, on the east side of the country, was written,

"Jerry, i want to go so many places with you, lets go here..."  An X is marked on Houston, Salt Lake, Vancouver, St. Louis, Los Angeles, San Diego, and New York.  all in black ink.  he unfolds another tootsi-roll wrapper, and takes a bite of the unknown taffy like substance.  He gets up, walks over to the bathroom, more pale than usual. he sits down on the tolite, stares at her pale flesh, he can see the beauty he had just slain.  vivid memories of Beth scream into his mind, he is happier than ever, things start to get whiter, he looks down, as he removes the syringe full of morphine.  All but 5 cc's are left out of the full 200.  his eyes flutter upwards, he mutters "im sorry." and passes into a deep sleep.

_________

i know its got flaws, timing / pacing / character development. but it was fun writing it a few years ago and decided someone here might also like it. comments / criticism are appreciated!

title: not the best, but it was fun writing it!

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about how to read maps?

answer: Jerry uses a map to mark his victims.

text: The story doesn't say anything about how to read maps.

answer: No answer

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is Jerry's role in the story?

answer: Jerry is a serial killer who kills women.

answer: He is the serial killer.

answer: He is the serial killer who kills the women.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What motivates Jerry to kill all these women?

answer: Jerry is a loner who was always made fun of for never being interested in any girls when most others had hit puberty.

text: The text doesn't say what motivates Jerry. It would be better to say that there is no answer, or use speculative terms.

refinement: It's possible that what motivates Jerry is that he was a loner who was always made fun of for never being interested in any girls when most others had hit puberty.

answer: No answer

answer: The text doesn't focus on the reason or motivation for his need to kill.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What factors drove Jerry to become a serial killer?

answer: Jerry was always getting bullied as a kid. He continues to be an outcast throughout life and nobody has ever cared too much about him.

text: The text doesn't say what drove Jerry to become a serial killer. It would be better to use speculative terms.

refinement: It's possible that Jerry was driven by the fact that he was bullied as a kid. He continues to be an outcast throughout life and nobody has ever cared too much about him.

answer: Jerry was an outcast as a child. He was bullied and made fun of for not being interested in girls. He was also shot in the leg by a real bullet when he was a child.

answer: Jerry was always getting bullied as a kid. He continues to be an outcast throughout life and nobody has ever cared too much about him. He was shot in the leg by a real bullet when he was a child.


text:
[paris exercise ban]

France’s capital has banned daytime outdoor exercise while the rest of the country can continue (Picture: AFP)
All outdoor exercise between 10am and 7pm is now banned in the French capital after officials lost their patience with people ignoring social distancing rules.

Parisians were seen walking and jogging in groups in the city’s parks over the sunny weekend despite the threat of on-the-spot fines upwards of €135 (£120) for violating lockdown rules.

France has been under one of Europe’s strictest lockdowns for nearly a month, requiring everyone to have a printed form stating their reason for being outside every time they leave the home.

The rest of the country is still allowed out to exercise within half a mile of their address, shop for essentials, or see a doctor.

[French judoka (-66 kg category) Kilian Le Blouch (L) and his girlfriend French judoka Sarah Harachi train in the living room of their apartment on April 3, 2020, in Chatenay-Malabry, near Paris, on the 18th day of a lockdown in France aimed at curbing the spread of the COVID-19 (novel coronavirus). (Photo by FRANCK FIFE / AFP) (Photo by FRANCK FIFE/AFP via Getty Images)]

A couple, both Olympic judo wrestlers, shared their home workouts in Paris (Picture: AFP)
The mayor of Paris, Anne Hidalgo, said the new rules would make people exercise ‘when the streets are generally at their quietest’.

France’s death toll has passed 10,000, the fourth-highest officially-reported figure after Italy, Spain and the US.

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The government’s health minister, Olivier Véran, said on Tuesday that the country is still in a ‘worsening phase of the epidemic’.

Spain, the second-worst hit country in Europe after Italy, has had an outright ban on outdoor exercise since its lockdown was introduced.

[A woman excercises on a bench on Pont des Arts in central Paris, early on April 8, 2020, as a new regulation is put into place asking people to practice their sports before 10:00 and after 19:00, on the 23thrd day of a lockdown in France aimed at curbing the spread of the COVID-19 pandemic, caused by the novel coronavirus. - The city of Paris decided to regulate the hours of outdoors sports following a sunny and warm weekend that saw many citizens flouting the social distancing requirements put into place to curb the spread of the COVID-19. (Photo by Alain JOCARD / AFP) (Photo by ALAIN JOCARD/AFP via Getty Images)]

The daytime ban is intended to spread people’s outdoor time more evenly throughout the day (Picture:AFP)
An exception was granted for people walking their dogs, which led to a black market of pet-owners renting their animals out to others so they could go outside.

Parisians might now take inspiration from some of the viral social media clips showing the creative ways Spaniards have tried to maintain their fitness – such as gym classes delivered by an instructor on his roof to rows of people on balconies across the street.

Many countries in Europe are now plotting a course to end their lockdowns, and some have started easing restrictions.

People in the Czech Republic have had to wear facemasks outside at all times by law, but can from today leave home without one.

Some sports facilities such as tennis courts are now allowed to reopen as long as no more than two people play in a group, and shops selling certain non-essential goods will open from Thursday.

[Fitness instructor runs class from the middle of housing complex in Spain https://www.instagram.com/ursullinetv/ Picture: ursullinetv]

A fitness instructor in Spain ran classes from a rooftop (Picture: @sanosevillabermejales)
Denmark and Austria, which were two of the first European countries to go into lockdown, will start a slow exit from next week.

Denmark will reopen nurseries and primary schools from April 15, while Austria will allow small shops, DIY stores and garden centres to open from April 14.

The German government has drawn up an action plan to phase in a step-by-step return to normality, including mandatory mask-wearing in public, limits on gatherings and the rapid tracing of infection chains, according to Reuters.

However, the plan assumes the pandemic will last through to 2021.

Disease experts in a number of countries have warned that, until a vaccine is developed, there may be no way to end the lockdown without the virus spreading again.

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about the motivation behind the exercise ban?

answer: The motivation behind the exercise ban is to make people exercise when the streets are generally at their quietest. The ban is also intended to spread people's outdoor time more evenly throughout the day. The motivation is to curb the spread of COVID-19.

answer: The motivation behind the exercise ban is to make people exercise when the streets are generally at their quietest. The ban is also intended to spread people's outdoor time more evenly throughout the day.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about the response to the pandemic in nations besides France?

answer: Spain has an outright ban on outdoor exercise. Denmark and Austria, which were two of the first European countries to go into lockdown, will start a slow exit from next week. Denmark will reopen nurseries and primary schools from April 15, while Austria will allow small shops, DIY stores and garden centers to open from April 14. The Czech Republic has relaxed their rules and allowed people to go outside without a facemask. The German government is drawing up an action plan to phase in a step-by-step return to normality.

answer: Spain has banned outdoor exercise. The Czech Republic has required people to wear facemasks at all times. Denmark and Austria are planning to end their lockdowns. Germany is drawing up an action plan to phase in a return to normality.

text: This answer is a bit light on detail

refinement: Spain has an outright ban on outdoor exercise. Denmark and Austria, which were two of the first European countries to go into lockdown, will start a slow exit from next week. Denmark will reopen nurseries and primary schools from April 15, while Austria will allow small shops, DIY stores, and garden centers to open from April 14. The Czech Republic has relaxed its rules and allowed people to go outside without a facemask. The German government is drawing up an action plan to phase in a step-by-step return to normality.

answer: Spain has an outright ban on outdoor exercise. Denmark and Austria, which were two of the first European countries to go into lockdown, will start a slow exit from next week. Denmark will reopen nurseries and primary schools from April 15, while Austria will allow small shops, DIY stores and garden centers to open from April 14. The German government is drawing up an action plan to phase in a step-by-step return to normality.

text: No comment about the Czech Republic

refinement:
Spain has an outright ban on outdoor exercise. People in the Czech Republic have had to wear facemasks outside at all times by law, but can from today leave home without one.
Denmark and Austria, which were two of the first European countries to go into lockdown, will start a slow exit from next week. Denmark will reopen nurseries and primary schools from April 15, while Austria will allow small shops, DIY stores and garden centers to open from April 14. The German government is drawing up an action plan to phase in a step-by-step return to normality.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about the response to the pandemic in North American countries?

answer: No answer

answer: No answer


text:
The Ardalent Strings

The bell chimed so everyone grabbed hold of their handled strings and walked out from their apartments. The strings came from brass cavities in the wall and the other ends attached to something unknown to the people. They were meant to pull the strings to taut and they all did this simultaneously at the chiming of the bell. The strings whirred out of each brass fixture activating some guessed at mechanics inside the walls, flywheels and gears and such, clicking and clunking like old clockwork. The strings were too long for the people to simply pull and stand in their rooms, pulled taut the length of these strings would leave the people standing in their hallways. Sometimes, the people would speak to each other.

Oliver was told about the unusual custom by Lester on the day he had moved into the old Abbey Apartment building on Flint Street; bell and line. “Who is it that rings the bell?” Oliver was new and knowing no one but directing his question to a sea of old faces in the hall, holding his handle and string.

“It is not for us to know, just accept that it is so,” replied old Mrs. Cardicole. “We pull our strings each time it rings. That is the nature of living here, though it may seem vain and queer. Our labor is to taut the strings whenever the bell of Abbey rings.”

“Where do the strings go?” Oliver asked, not wanting to give up so easily.

“We pull our strings, the brass handled strings and meet here in the hall. That’s all to say. It’s the way of things. There’s nothing more at all!” and Mrs. Cardicole gave a stern face as if to say, *I disapprove of this line*.

Everyone else looked on and felt for Oliver. The residents knew the custom was odd but it was truly simply the way of things in the old Abbey Apartments on Flint Street.

Then the strings pulled back into their holes by automatic mechanism and everyone returned to whatever they had been doing. Some were watching television, others were reading, others were having dinner. Young Lester and Sable were tending to their newborn son. Life in the apartment building on Flint Street was quiet and most like usual, save for this one quirk of the handled strings and the chiming bell.

Sometimes, people would venture to look for the bell. Most obvious was that it would be on top of the building, but Lester once discovered that it was not. He told a very few people about his searching and occasionally, people would help Lester to look for it. Mrs. Cardicole would watch the people searching from her custom one-way porthole. She would take notes on who was looking and what they might be saying. “Always searching for the bell, these transgressions lead to Hell.” Her hair was red and frizzed and she seemed a kind of recluse. Some might say that Mrs. Cardicole was a shut-in, but she had her reasons, and her husband Frank in his urn would not judge her like her neighbors did.

The bell rang early the following day and all the neighbors grasped their handles and pulled their strings from the brass fixtures in their apartments. They met out in the hall again and Mrs. Cardicole spied Oliver instantly and judged his efforts as lackluster, slack was his string. He was not doing as well and he could, and his string was not as taut as hers. The neighbor Lester saw the judgement on Mrs. Cardicole’s face and it entertained the dark parts of his mind. The ringing bell had twisted his thoughts and every day, sometimes twice in one, he’d be a slave to it. Mrs. Cardicole’s judgement was something new, Oliver was something new, so Lester looked on in madness and a voice screamed in his mind. He thought of scissors and of string, screaming madness and slicing blades. Lester’s string was taut and the mechanisms to it locked in and he dropped his handle in the hall and went inside his apartment. Lester came back a moment later with a pair of scissors and picked up his handle again, in front of everyone, and cradled the string between the scissor blades. He looked again at Mrs. Cardicole’s silent judgement and relished in it, for now it was directed at him and not Oliver. Lester severed the handle from the string and almost immediately after, the strings pulled back into their holes and the people followed after, continuing their quiet lives in their apartments. Lester’s string vanished beyond the wall, somewhere behind his holed brass fixture.

Oliver spent the day considering Lester. How long has the process been driving him mad? Oliver would like to speak to Lester at some point so he decided he would, next time he had the chance. But it was evening when the bell chimed again and everyone pulled their strings out into the hall but there was no Lester. Oliver looked for him to come out at his door, but nobody came. Of course, why would they? There was no string for Lester or Sable to pull. The curious neighbors decided to investigate, at least to see what had become of Lester’s madness. One held another’s handled string while one investigated Lester’s door. It was ajar and pushed open easily but Lester was nowhere to be seen, nor was Sable or the newborn.

“Claimed by sin and no line taut, this is what his cutting brought.” Mrs. Cardicole gave a wry smile. Everyone came back to their spots and held their strings, not daring to let go and dismissing all thoughts of stepping out of line, all thoughts of knives and scissors banished; all minds were bent on the taut strings. Even Oliver did not dare to ask Mrs. Cardicole any more questions.

For the second time in the day, the strings pulled back into their brass openings and the people retreated back into their apartments, neverminding the strange reality they had all accepted with reluctant grace. Mrs. Cardicole watched them all mindlessly slink through their doors through her porthole then waited a moment for good measure. She quietly left her apartment and descended the stairwell then went into the basement. She had a key, the only key that opened the boiler room and there she came to it again, the caged Ardalent, the demon toddler she kept in her charge, giant and harlequin. Mrs. Cardicole stepped over the bodies of Lester and Sable. The Ardalent had his own string that hung down into his cage, one that chimed the unseen bell, and the neighbors did as they always had upon hearing it. Their strings came to an engine of coiled metal that powered a music box set to Beethoven’s Moonlight Sonata. It was his lullaby. Mrs. Cardicole fed the Ardalent what she could from the bodies of Lester and Sable. She blew a kiss to the demon toddler and left the boiler room, locking the door behind her. She ascended the stairs and went back, unseen, into her apartment to find the child of Lester and Sable, now hers to raise; a brother for her dear Ardalent.

title: The Ardalent Strings

question: What was the Ardalent?

answer: It is a demon toddler.

answer: A giant, demonic toddler under Mrs Cardicole's care.

answer: Mrs. Cardicole's demon-spawned game.

text: wrong

question: Describe Mrs Cardicole.

answer: A cruel, evil, manipulative woman.

answer: Mrs. Cardicole is quiet and reclusive woman who lives in her own head; she monitors the residents closely and is always judging them. She took on the responsibility for the Ardalent and cares for him, even when every other character in the story abandons him. Mrs. Cardicole is an altruistic, albeit sometimes unpleasant character.

text: Inaccurate

refinement: Mrs. Cardicole is quiet and reclusive woman who lives in her own head; she monitors the residents closely and is always judging them. She takes care of a demonic toddler in the basement and is responsible for the deaths of the residents in the house. She is evil and two-faced.

answer: Mrs. Cardicole is a recluse who takes pleasure in judging those that disobey the custom of pulling the strings of the Abbey. She seems unbothered by the oddity of the custom and unwaveringly obedient to it. She holds a mysterious power over the Ardalent, the creature in the boiler room, and cares for him without hesitation. She is also fiercely protective of her position in the Abbey, likely having been in charge of the creature for a substantial amount of time.

question: What is the setting of the narrative?

text: no content.

refinement: The old Abbey Apartment on Flint Street.

answer: It is not stated.

text: wrong

refinement: The old Abbey Apartment on Flint Street.

text: No content.

refinement: The old Abbey Apartment on Flint Street, an apartment building.

question: Why was it mandatory for the people to pull the bell strings?

answer: The bell string or line is mandatory because it activates the gears and equipment that powers the building. Without pulling the strings on the bell, the residents would find themselves without power.

text: Wrong.

refinement: The bell string or line is mandatory because it activates the gears and equipment that plays the lullaby for the demonic toddler. Without pulling the strings on the bell, the residents would find themselves eaten.

answer: The people were pulling the bell strings so that it would activate a mysterious mechanical process inside the walls of the buildings. The pull of the strings is a tradition that all residents of the neighborhood follow as a requirement.

text: Wrong

refinement: The people were pulling the bell strings so that it would activate a music box that plays a lullaby for a demonic toddler to keep it sleeping. The pull of the strings is a tradition that all residents of the neighborhood follow as a requirement, although none of them know the reason why.

answer: They had no idea why they had to practice such an odd custom, but it would later be revealed that those strings were the power to a music box for Mrs Cardicole's demon toddler.

question: Why did Lester sever the strings attached to his apartment?

answer: Lester severed the strings attached to his apartment because he was gripped by madness and wanted to challenge the system in which everyone was bound to the ringing of the bell.

answer: It seems that Lester was driven mad by the daily rhythm of the handled strings; he severed the string attached to his apartment out of madness.

answer: He felt enslaved to it and was fed up with keeping up with the odd practice.

question: Were the people in the old Abbey apartments prisoners?

answer: No, they were free to come and go.

text: No content

answer: They were regular house residents but felt like prisoners.

question: How did Mrs Cardicole have control over the residents of the old Abbey apartments?

answer: Mrs. Cardicole controls the residents of the old Abbey apartment building through the manipulation of their minds.

answer: It is not stated.

answer: Mrs. Cardicole had power over the residents of the old Abbey apartments because she was close with whoever rang the bell and could see the residents from her porthole.

text: Inaccurate

refinement: Mrs. Cardicole had power over the residents of the old Abbey apartments because she was close with whoever rang the bell and could see the residents from her porthole. If the bell was not rung that person would mysteriously vanish.

question: Write a ~6 sentence summary.

answer: Oliver is new in his apartment building on Flint Street. He meets the building's (Mrs Cardicole) and gets a low rating on pulling strings on time and with vigor. Oliver wants to speak to Lester but there is no key there. Sir breaks the holder from the string and nobody comes out. Oliver investigates and there are no more remains left behind. Mrs. Cardicole feeds the child.

text: Inaccurate.

refinement: None of the residents at the old Abbey apartments on Flint street seemed to know why they had to pull their strings from the brass fixtures in their apartments whenever the bell chimed. Some had searched endlessly for the location of the bell but to no avail. They didn't know that old Mrs Cardicole, an evil, cruel woman, had a giant demonic toddler in her basement who rung the bell, and the attached strings powered a music box for its listening pleasure. One day, one of the residents, Lester, who felt enslaved to the bell, became fed up with the practice and severed the strings in his apartment. After this incident, he and his family went missing, which caused people to rethink their decision to rebel. Later that day, Mrs Cardicole fed the remains of Lester and his wife to the giant toddler and adopted their newborn baby.

answer: Oliver, who has moved into the Abbey Apartment building on Flint Street, tries to find out why he is required to tug the strings that are all too-long for him to stand in his own apartment by himself. Mrs. Cardicole tells him they are pulling their strings every time the bell rings specifically so they can meet up in the hallway. One day, the Ardalent's (or demon) string goes taut and mute and all the residents are silent and in the hallway. The strings come back in automatically, no Lester there, and when Oliver investigates, no Lester or Sable either. The residents are unsettled, and Oliver decides to not look for any more about their participation in the ritual. Going against the routine, Mrs. Cardicole only feeds the Ardalent small portions of their bodies this time, keeps some and has a new baby in the end.

text: Inaccurate.

refinement: None of the residents at the old Abbey apartments on Flint street seemed to know why they had to pull their strings from the brass fixtures in their apartments whenever the bell chimed. Some had searched endlessly for the location of the bell but to no avail. They didn't know that old Mrs Cardicole, an evil, cruel woman, had a giant demonic toddler in her basement who rung the bell, and the attached strings powered a music box for its listening pleasure. One day, one of the residents, Lester, who felt enslaved to the bell, became fed up with the practice and severed the strings in his apartment. After this incident, he and his family went missing, which caused people to rethink their decision to rebel. Later that day, Mrs Cardicole fed the remains of Lester and his wife to the giant toddler and adopted their newborn baby.

answer:
Oliver moves into the old Abbey Apartments on Flint Street, where he lives with the other residents and pulls strings whenever they hear a ringing bell.
The ringing bell appears to be a sign that the residents live by, and all pull their strings at once.
The next day, Oliver hears a harried voice wondering where Lester is, and then they call out that Lester once again cut his string. He goes to investigate and finds that there are no letters, only the bodies of Lester and Sable and their newborn child. Old Mrs. Cardicole watches and accepts that this is Lester's inevitable punishment for sin.

Returning to the story, Oliver hears that the ringing bell is actually the music made by the tiny demon child that lives in boiler room with the old Mrs. Cardicole, the ardalent.

text: Inaccurate.

refinement: None of the residents at the old Abbey apartments on Flint street seemed to know why they had to pull their strings from the brass fixtures in their apartments whenever the bell chimed. Some had searched endlessly for the location of the bell but to no avail. They didn't know that old Mrs Cardicole, an evil, cruel woman, had a giant demonic toddler in her basement who rung the bell, and the attached strings powered a music box for its listening pleasure. One day, one of the residents, Lester, who felt enslaved to the bell, became fed up with the practice and severed the strings in his apartment. After this incident, he and his family went missing, which caused people to rethink their decision to rebel. Later that day, Mrs Cardicole fed the remains of Lester and his wife to the giant toddler and adopted their newborn baby.

answer: Living on the streets of Flint in the Buckingham Abbey Apartments, Oliver meets Lester and Mrs. Cardicole who explain the routine of their daily life. Every time the bell rings, the neighbors pull their strings from the wall by their bed, going into the hall to jam at each other. Sometimes, the residents will get together and look for the bell. Lester is a troublemaker. Oliver spends time with Lester who's mentally falling apart and the next day he isn't in the building when the bell rings. Lester attacks Oliver then cuts the string, killing himself. Oliver has a crisis about the situation, thinking that living there doesn't feel right.

text: Inaccurate.

refinement: None of the residents at the old Abbey apartments on Flint street seemed to know why they had to pull their strings from the brass fixtures in their apartments whenever the bell chimed. Some had searched endlessly for the location of the bell but to no avail. They didn't know that old Mrs Cardicole, an evil, cruel woman, had a giant demonic toddler in her basement who rung the bell, and the attached strings powered a music box for its listening pleasure. One day, one of the residents, Lester, who felt enslaved to the bell, became fed up with the practice and severed the strings in his apartment. After this incident, he and his family went missing, which caused people to rethink their decision to rebel. Later that day, Mrs Cardicole fed the remains of Lester and his wife to the giant toddler and adopted their newborn baby.

answer: None of the residents at the old Abbey apartments on Flint street seemed to know why they had to pull their strings from the brass fixtures in their apartments whenever the bell chimed. Some had searched endlessly for the location of the bell but to no avail. They didn't know that old Mrs Cardicole, an evil, cruel woman, had a giant demonic toddler in her basement who rung the bell, and the attached strings powered a music box for its listening pleasure. One day, one of the residents, Lester, who felt enslaved to the bell, became fed up with the practice and severed the strings in his apartment. After this incident, he and his family went missing, which caused people to rethink their decision to rebel. Later that day, Mrs Cardicole fed the remains of Lester and his wife to the giant toddler and adopted their newborn baby.

answer: Oliver was the new guy in the old Abbey Apartments building on Flint Street. Each day before he woke up, he pulled his string whose other end was attached to a long thread in the wall. When his string had been pulled taut, a bell would ring. This happened each day at the same time. After pulling his, he would meet with the rest of the residents in the hallway and they would stare at each other trying to figure out the mystery. Oliver thought it was backwards that the residents of that particular building responded to a bell without knowing who was in control of it.

text: Incomplete.

refinement: None of the residents at the old Abbey apartments on Flint street seemed to know why they had to pull their strings from the brass fixtures in their apartments whenever the bell chimed. Some had searched endlessly for the location of the bell but to no avail. They didn't know that old Mrs Cardicole, an evil, cruel woman, had a giant demonic toddler in her basement who rung the bell, and the attached strings powered a music box for its listening pleasure. One day, one of the residents, Lester, who felt enslaved to the bell, became fed up with the practice and severed the strings in his apartment. After this incident, he and his family went missing, which caused people to rethink their decision to rebel. Later that day, Mrs Cardicole fed the remains of Lester and his wife to the giant toddler and adopted their newborn baby.


text:
In 1706, mathematics teacher William Jones is credited with first using the symbol of π to represent the concept of the ratio between a circle's circumference and diameter. The mathematical formula itself has been recognized as a universal ratio for several thousand years. Pioneers in mathematics like the Sumerians and Greeks believed that no matter how large or small a circle was, the ratio of 3.14159265 was a constant.

They formed whole schools of math philosophy with Pi as it’s foundation and core. Uncovering a universal law that could be applied to all size circles seemed like a secret stolen from the gods. Somewhere along the line, scholars stopped doubting the dependability of the ratio. It was eventually accepted as a universal point of reference. From then on, the principle of Pi passed from theory into accepted fact.

As with many things, a healthy level of skepticism has its uses. It was too easy to think that our predecessors had been flawless in their research. Such a trusting level of romanticism could lead to the dangerous idea that past mathematicians never made mistakes in their calculations. Those who blindly accept any ‘truth’ or theorem, risk boxing themselves into limitations of thought, and making critical errors in conclusions.

One individual was determined to do his own independent research on the sacred laws of Pi; flying in the face of its universal acceptance. His stubborn determination to ignore millions of previous confirmations of its dependability was either pure idealism or exceptional stupidity; depending on how you looked at it. Over the lengthy course of his efforts, he personally measured thousands of circles. Despite them all adhering to the well-documented ratio, he remained resolute in his furious desire to find a meaningful exception. The effort to find base flaws in universal laws of physics is often referred to as ‘chaos theory’. He even considered the theory of a collapsed star as possible evidence of circles or spheres which ignored the laws of Pi.

The young man experimented with sophisticated math algorithms and controversial new research data. He cross-multiplied base integers in intricate ways. He applied square and cubed roots to each part of his equations to see if it might affect the never-changing outcome. Try as he might, the long-forgotten gods who invented quantum physics were determined to foil his efforts to find a flaw in their system. The exception to the rule of Pi remained elusive.

Spurned on by historical examples of those who had refused to accept failure, he carried on where wiser men threw in the towel. Much of his precious youth was exhausted on this questionable endeavor. So much of his formative years had been focused on these myopic goals that it left no time for a personal life.

One day he bemoaned his wasted years chasing chaos theory, to an older peer in experimental physics. The elderly colleague smiled and made a startling statement. “You can bring your life’s work to an end now and start living, my determined friend. There is already a singular exception to the universal reliability of Pi. It’s based on the ‘4 units’ system when inverted with the ‘no complications’ equation.”

The chaos-seeking physicist looked at his older friend with exasperated surprise. “What do you mean? I’ve tried every variable and formula known to humanity to shake up those damned numbers! I’ve never even heard of a ‘no complications equation’ or a ‘4 units’ system. For heaven’s sake. Please tell me! How does it work?”

“When you think of the rewards of a fulfilling life as being similar to a desert metaphor, you must place the ‘no complications’ equation in the very forefront. To bookend this theorem you add the four units to the end of the formula for balance. Properly sequenced, it reads: ‘No more Pi 4u’. Given a few minutes to absorb this simple formula, I hope you can soon see the wisdom in it.”

title: [MF] Refuting the Pi principle

question: Who independently researched on laws of Pi?

answer: This information can't be found.

answer: The individual who independently researched on the laws of Pi was the chaos-seeking physicist.

text: It doesn't say.

refinement: The individual who independently researched on the laws of Pi was the chaos-seeking physicist who goes unnamed.

answer: The young man

text: He goes unnamed.

answer: A young man.

text: He goes unnamed.

question: Who was a part of making the foundations and core of Pi?

answer: The Sumerians and Greeks.

answer: The Sumerians and Greeks are credited with first establishing the concept of Pi as a universal ratio.

answer: The Sumerians and Greeks.

answer: The Sumerians and Greeks

question: What era is this narration set in?

answer: In 1706.

text: It doesn't say.

answer: This narration is set in the present day.

text: It doesn't say.

answer: That information can't be found

answer: The narration is set in the present day.

text: It doesn't say.

question: Who discovered the symbol Pi?

answer: William Jones

answer: William Jones

answer: William Jones

answer: William Jones is credited with first using the symbol of π to represent the concept of the ratio between a circle's circumference and diameter.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: The passage is about a man who is obsessed with disproving the Pi principle. He spends years trying to disprove it, but he never succeeds. He eventually meets an old man who tells him that there is a singular exception to the Pi principle. The old man tells him that the exception is the "4 units" system when inverted with the "no complications" equation.

text: Doesn't mention the formula.

refinement: The passage is about a man who is obsessed with disproving the Pi principle. He spends years trying to disprove it, but he never succeeds. He eventually meets an old man who tells him that there is a singular exception to the Pi principle. The old man tells him that the exception is the "4 units" system when inverted with the "no complications" equation: ‘No more Pi 4u.’

answer:
William Jones is credited with first using the symbol of π to represent the concept of the ratio between a circle's circumference and diameter. The mathematical formula itself has been recognized as a universal ratio for several thousand years. Pioneers in mathematics like the Sumerians and Greeks believed that no matter how large or small a circle was, the ratio of 3.14159265 was a constant.

One individual was determined to do his own independent research on the sacred laws of Pi. He was determined to find a meaningful exception to the universal reliability of Pi. He experimented with sophisticated math algorithms and controversial new research data. He cross-multiplied base integers in intricate ways. He applied square and cubed roots to each part of his equations to see if it might affect the never-changing outcome. Try as he might, the long-forgotten gods who invented quantum physics were determined to foil his efforts to find a flaw in their system. The exception to the rule of Pi remained elusive.

text: Too long.

refinement:
The mathematical formula for pi has been recognized as a universal ratio for several thousand years. Pioneers in mathematics like the Sumerians and Greeks believed that no matter how large or small a circle was, the ratio of 3.14159265 was a constant.

One individual was determined to do his own independent research on the sacred laws of Pi. He was determined to find a meaningful exception to the universal reliability of Pi.

text: Doesn't mention the old man and the formula.

refinement:
The mathematical formula for pi has been recognized as a universal ratio for several thousand years. Pioneers in mathematics like the Sumerians and Greeks believed that no matter how large or small a circle was, the ratio of 3.14159265 was a constant.

One individual was determined to do his own independent research on the sacred laws of Pi. He was determined to find a meaningful exception to the universal reliability of Pi. Try as he might, he was unable to until an old man told him the secret formula: ‘No more Pi 4u.’

answer:
William Jones was the first to discover the symbol of Pi. One individual was determined to do independent research on the laws of Pi. Despite all the thousand circles adhering to the ratio, he was determined to find an exception. Regardless of his varied efforts, the exception to Pi were elusive.

After having a startling conversation with an older peer, his peer says that when the formula is properly sequenced it reads:'No more Pi 4u' and he hopes the man can find wisdom in it.

answer: The author of the passage discusses the Pi principle, which is often considered a universal law. However, one individual set out to disprove it, only to be told by an older colleague that there is already a singular exception to the Pi principle. This exception is based on the "4 units" system when inverted with the "no complications" equation.

text: Doesn't mention the formula.

refinement: The author of the passage discusses the Pi principle, which is often considered a universal law. However, one individual set out to disprove it, only to be told by an older colleague that there is already a singular exception to the Pi principle. This exception is based on the "4 units" system when inverted with the "no complications" equation: Try as he might, he was unable to until an old man told him the secret formula: ‘No more Pi 4u.’


text:
The coffee shop was small, barely used, and would soon go out of business if their sales remained constant. It was a shame, as they made good drinks.

I sat, working on my fourth cup. I got there five minutes early, and had been chugging the damn things like they were the key to survival. My pen and paper were out, drawing all possible connections to the case. But what the hell were there?

She arrived, followed in by a group of people. I instantly knew this to be peculiar, as this place had no income of people this extravagant.

"Hello, what do you want-"

"YOUR GOD DAMN MONEY." A mechanical glove was on his hand, just like the one from the security camera. Except the two had different voices, heights, gaits, and posture. So it must be some new Arso weapon they're manufacturing to enact their crimes.

I pulled the gun from the armpit holster under my suit. It was a custom Colt 1911, something that never failed and something that always had my back.

"Easy there, pyro. Put your empty hand skyward, and the gauntlet facing down." He turned, raising it towards me. I pulled the trigger, sending a shot through his skull. He fell, and the others formed into a group with my date in the middle. Funny, he we were and I didn't even know her name.

"Give us the money, we give you her. Los entiendes?"

"No."

"Very well." They shot her in the knee with a revolver. They took one of the gloves and spewed a wall of fire between me and them, before dragging her out and into a car waiting outside. The leader of the group punched the clerk as hard as he could with the stainless steel, taking all of the cash out from the register. He turned to me, and spit at me.

"What do you want? Chaos, anarchy, war?"

"Doesn't matter. Just know-"

"What?" I backed into a corner, the flames licking at my feet.

"Vive la revolution."

title: [MS] (Tobias Kelly) Crash and Burn - Part 3: *Fuego*

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where does the action take place?

answer: The action takes place in a coffee shop.

answer: A coffee shop.

answer: In a small coffee shop in New York.

text: How does the model know the coffee shop was in New York?

answer: The action takes place in a coffee shop.

answer: The action takes place in a small coffee shop.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the group of people want?

answer: The group of people wants the narrator's money.

answer: The group of people want money.

answer: The group of people wants money.

answer: The group of people want money and chaos.

text: It is stated in the story that they were after money.

answer: INFORMATION regarding what they are after.

text: The model's answer lacks clarity and does not directly answer the question.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What weapons are the strangers using?

answer: The leader wields a gauntlet, and the rest of his group use bullets.

answer: The strangers are using two different unusual weapons. They shoot an employee point blank in the knee and pull out a custom Colt 1911 pistol on the protagonist.

text: '...two different unusual weapons...' only one unusual weapon was mentioned.

refinement: The strangers were using a revolver and a gauntlet.

text:
'They shoot an employee...'
There is no mention of any employee.

refinement: They shot the girl point-blank in the knee.

text:
'...and pull out a custom Colt 1911 pistol on the protagonist.'
The narrator was the one who pulled out a custom Colt 1911 pistol on them. It's also not known if the narrator is the protagonist of the story.

refinement: The narrator pulled out a custom Colt 1911 pistol on one of them.

answer: They are using a mechanical glove and a revolver.

answer: The strangers are using a mechanical glove with fire capabilities. They also possess a revolver.

text: "They took one of the gloves and spewed a wall of fire between me and them..." is evidence that the mechanical glove has fire capabilities.

answer: The strangers are using some sort of fire gauntlets.

text: The model didn't add the revolver they used to shoot the girl. They were wielding two weapons.

refinement: The strangers are using what appeared to be fire gauntlets and a revolver.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where do the strangers take the girl?

answer: The strangers take the girl away in a car.

answer: I did not see the end of this story, but they most likely took her somewhere they can keep an eye on her.

text: The answer is located within the story. The model is making unsubstantiated guesses in its response.

answer: To a car outside.

answer: The strangers take the girl to a car waiting outside.

answer: The strangers took the girl out to a car waiting outside.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: In the small coffee shop, Tobias sees a mob of thugs arrive and demand money at gunpoint. The ringleader shoots Tobias's date in the knee and steals the store's money before fleeing. Tobias gets ready to shoot but the ringleader spits in his face and declares "Vive la revolution."

text: How does the model know that the narrator's name is Tobias Kelly?

refinement: In the small coffee shop, the narrator sees a mob of thugs arrive and demand money with their weapons.

text:
The ringleader shoots Tobias's date in the knee...
One of the gang men shot the narrator's date in the knee.

refinement: One of the gang men shoots the narrator's date in the knee.

text:
'Tobias gets ready to shoot but the ringleader spits in his face...'
According to the story, the narrator was not attempting to shoot before the ringleader spat in his face.

refinement: The leader punches the clerk in the face, steals the store's money, spits in the narrator's face, and declares, "Vive la revolution."

answer: The narrator is waiting for their date in a coffee shop. When she arrives, a group of people arrive with her. They demand the narrator's money, and when they refuse they take their date and set the coffee shop ablaze.

answer: In a coffee shop, the main character witnesses a group robbing the other visitors. He shoots the leader, but the leader retaliates with fire and kidnaps the date of the main character. The group wants the main character's money, and they threaten chaos and anarchy if he doesn't oblige.

text:
'... the main character witnesses a group robbing the other visitors...'
It is not known that the narrator is the main character, and the narrator was being robbed, not witnessing other visitors being robbed.

refinement: In a coffee shop, the narrator was being robbed by a group of armed men.

text:
'He shoots the leader...'
According to the story, he shot one of the armed men. It didn't indicate that the person he shot was the leader.

refinement: He shoots one of the men in a mechanical glove through the skull, and the others retaliate by shooting his date in the knee and kidnapping her.

text:
'...and they threaten chaos and anarchy if he doesn't oblige.'
The story doesn't mention that they threatened chaos and anarchy if he didn't oblige.

refinement: Eventually, the narrator asks the leader what they want, and the leader says, "Vive la revolution."

answer: Tobias Kelly goes to the coffee shop which is about to go out of business run by a decent employee. A group of revolutionaries take Tobias' money and guns and in the scuffle he shoots the leader of the them in the head, and they take one of their gloves, and spew a wall of fire into the room, burning Tobias' legs. They take one of Tobias' guns and also take the girlfriend he was with, and the leader tells Tobias they did it for the revolutionaries as they drove off.

text:
'Tobias Kelly goes to the coffee shop which is about to go out of business run by a decent employee.'
The model names the narrator Tobias Kelly, which is not proven in the story. Also, he was already in the coffee shop at the start of the story. There is also no mention of the coffee shop being run by a decent employee.

refinement: The narrator was in a small coffee shop that lacked patronage, trying to solve a case while waiting for his date.

text:
'A group of revolutionaries take Tobias' money and guns...'
The revolutionaries didn't succeed in taking the narrator's money, neither did they take his gun, according to the story.
'...and in the scuffle he shoots the leader of the them in the head...'
This sentence is grammatically incorrect, and the person the narrator shot in the head was not the leader.

refinement: A group of revolutionaries tries to rob the narrator, but he shoots one of them in the head, and they retaliate by shooting his date in the knee and use the gloves to spew a wall of fire between them.

text:
'They take one of Tobias' guns and also take the girlfriend he was with, and the leader tells Tobias they did it for the revolutionaries as they drove off.'
The story does not mention that they took the narrator's guns. Also, the girl they kidnapped was his date, not his girlfriend.

refinement: Ultimately, they kidnap his date and drag her into a car waiting outside and the leader declares, "Vive la revolution."

answer: The narrator is in a coffee shop with their date when the clerk is robbed by men in masks. As he pulls out a gun, the thieves take his date as leverage. They demand the money, saying their revolution needs the money to continue.

text:
'The narrator is in a coffee shop with their date when the clerk is robbed by men in masks.'
The narrator was waiting for their date in the coffee shop. The story did not mention that the men robbing them in the shop were masked.

refinement: The narrator is in a coffee shop waiting for their date when a group of armed men robs the shop.

text:
'They demand the money, saying their revolution needs the money to continue.'
They had already robbed the store and didn't demand that their revolution needed money to continue.

refinement: After the narrator shoots one of them in the head, the thieves shoot his date in the knee and kidnap her. The narrator then asks the leader what he wants, and he says, "Vive la revolution."