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AIR MARSHAL is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. It is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. 'Air Marshal' ranks above the Two Star rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the Four Star rank of Air Chief Marshal, which is held by the Chief of the Air Staff (CAS).

From 1947 to 1966, the appointment of Chief of the Air Staff (CAS), the professional head of the Indian Air Force was held by an Air Marshal. The position of the CAS was upgraded from Air Marshal to Air Chief Marshal in 1966. The first IAF officer to hold the rank was ACM Arjan Singh (later promoted to the five-star rank of Marshal of the Indian Air Force) who was promoted to the rank while he served as the CAS.[1][2]

The equivalent rank in the Indian Army is Lieutenant General and in the Indian Navy is Vice Admiral.

Officers in the rank of Air Marshal hold important appointments at the Air Commands and at the Air Headquarters.

Air Commanders (C-in-C grade)

[Air Marshal S B Deo in an Air Marshal's uniform] Senior Air Marshals who are in the C-in-C grade (Air Commanders), are considered to be in a grade higher than other Air Marshals. They hold the senior-most appointments like the Vice Chief of the Air Staff and the heads of the seven air commands (styled AIR OFFICER COMMANDING-IN-CHIEF). The seven AOC-in-C appointments are:

-   Air Officer Commanding-in-Chief Central Air Command
-   Air Officer Commanding-in-Chief Eastern Air Command
-   Air Officer Commanding-in-Chief Southern Air Command
-   Air Officer Commanding-in-Chief South Western Air Command
-   Air Officer Commanding-in-Chief Western Air Command
-   Air Officer Commanding-in-Chief Training Command
-   Air Officer Commanding-in-Chief Maintenance Command

Insignia

The badges of rank consist of three sky blue bands (each on a slightly wider navy blue band) over a sky blue band on a navy blue broad band.

An Air Marshal wears Gorget patches which are Blue patches with Three white stars. Air Commanders in the C-in-C grade have additional oak leaves under the three white stars.

In addition to this, the Blue Grey terrywool tunic has three sleeve stripes consisting of a broad band with two narrower bands.[3]

Order of Precedence

An Air Marshal in the C-in-C grade ranks at No. 23 on the Indian order of precedence, along with Lieutenant Generals of the Indian Army and Vice Admirals of the Indian Navy in the C-in-C grade. The other Air Marshals rank at No. 24 in the order of precedence.[4]

Air Marshals in the C-in-C grade are at the Apex pay scale (pay level 17), with a monthly pay of ₹225,000 (US$3,100). Other Air Marshals, in the HAG+ pay scale (pay level 16) draw lesser, depending on the years in service. However, since they should not draw equivalent or more than the next higher level, the renumeration is capped at ₹224,000.[5][6]

See Also

-   List of serving air marshals of the Indian Air Force
-   Air Force ranks and insignia of India
-   Air officer commanding

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title: Air marshal (India)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is an Air Marshal in India?

answer: An Air Marshal is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. It is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force.

text: AIR MARSHAL is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. It is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. 'Air Marshal' ranks above the Two Star rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the Four Star rank of Air Chief Marshal, which is held by the Chief of the Air Staff (CAS).

answer: It is the second-highest active rank.

text: Rank in what? Assume the reader of these questions has not read the text and has no prior knowledge of the material.

refinement: It is a three-star air officer rank and the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force.

answer: An Air Marshal is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. They typically hold important appointments at the Air Commands and at the Air Headquarters. Air Marshals in the C-in-C grade are paid at the Apex pay scale and rank 23rd in the Indian order of precedence.

text: AIR MARSHAL is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. It is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. 'Air Marshal' ranks above the Two Star rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the Four Star rank of Air Chief Marshal, which is held by the Chief of the Air Staff (CAS).

answer: A three star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force.

text: AIR MARSHAL is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. It is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. 'Air Marshal' ranks above the Two Star rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the Four Star rank of Air Chief Marshal, which is held by the Chief of the Air Staff (CAS).

answer: Air Marshal is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force.

text: AIR MARSHAL is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. It is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. 'Air Marshal' ranks above the Two Star rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the Four Star rank of Air Chief Marshal, which is held by the Chief of the Air Staff (CAS).

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where does an Air Marshal rank?

answer: An Air Marshal ranks above the rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the rank of Air Chief Marshal.

text: AIR MARSHAL is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. It is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. 'Air Marshal' ranks above the Two Star rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the Four Star rank of Air Chief Marshal, which is held by the Chief of the Air Staff (CAS).

answer: It ranks below the Air Chief Marshal and above the Air Vice Marshal.

text: AIR MARSHAL is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. It is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. 'Air Marshal' ranks above the Two Star rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the Four Star rank of Air Chief Marshal, which is held by the Chief of the Air Staff (CAS).

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refinement: AIR MARSHAL is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. It is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. 'Air Marshal' ranks above the Two Star rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the Four Star rank of Air Chief Marshal, which is held by the Chief of the Air Staff (CAS).

answer: It is second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. It ranks above the Two Star rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the Four Star rank of Air Chief Marshal.

text: AIR MARSHAL is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. It is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. 'Air Marshal' ranks above the Two Star rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the Four Star rank of Air Chief Marshal, which is held by the Chief of the Air Staff (CAS).

answer: An Air Marshal ranks above the Two Star rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the Four Star rank of Air Chief Marshal, which is held by the Chief of the Air Staff (CAS).

text: AIR MARSHAL is a Three Star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. It is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. 'Air Marshal' ranks above the Two Star rank of Air Vice Marshal and below the Four Star rank of Air Chief Marshal, which is held by the Chief of the Air Staff (CAS).

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the equivalent rank of an Air Marshal in the Indian Army?

answer: Lieutenant General is the equivalent rank of Air Marshal.

text: The equivalent rank in the Indian Army is Lieutenant General and in the Indian Navy is Vice Admiral.

answer: A Lieutenant General.

text: The equivalent rank in the Indian Army is Lieutenant General and in the Indian Navy is Vice Admiral.

answer: The equivalent rank of an Air Marshal in the Indian Army is Lieutenant General.

text: The equivalent rank in the Indian Army is Lieutenant General and in the Indian Navy is Vice Admiral.

answer: The equivalent rank of an Air Marshal in the Indian Army is Lieutenant General.

text: The equivalent rank in the Indian Army is Lieutenant General and in the Indian Navy is Vice Admiral.

answer: Lieutenant General

text: The equivalent rank in the Indian Army is Lieutenant General and in the Indian Navy is Vice Admiral.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How much do Air Marshals make in the pay scale?

answer: Air Marshals in the C-in-C grade are paid at the Apex pay scale (pay level 17), with a monthly pay of ₹225,000 (US$3,100). Other Air Marshals in the HAG+ pay scale (pay level 16) receive less. However, their salary is capped at ₹224,000.

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An Air Marshal in the C-in-C grade ranks at No. 23 on the Indian order of precedence, along with Lieutenant Generals of the Indian Army and Vice Admirals of the Indian Navy in the C-in-C grade. The other Air Marshals rank at No. 24 in the order of precedence.[4]

Air Marshals in the C-in-C grade are at the Apex pay scale (pay level 17), with a monthly pay of ₹225,000 (US$3,100). Other Air Marshals, in the HAG+ pay scale (pay level 16) draw lesser, depending on the years in service. However, since they should not draw equivalent or more than the next higher level, the renumeration is capped at ₹224,000.[5][6]

answer: Air Marshals are at the Apex pay scale (pay level 17), with a monthly pay of $3100.

text:
An Air Marshal in the C-in-C grade ranks at No. 23 on the Indian order of precedence, along with Lieutenant Generals of the Indian Army and Vice Admirals of the Indian Navy in the C-in-C grade. The other Air Marshals rank at No. 24 in the order of precedence.[4]

Air Marshals in the C-in-C grade are at the Apex pay scale (pay level 17), with a monthly pay of ₹225,000 (US$3,100). Other Air Marshals, in the HAG+ pay scale (pay level 16) draw lesser, depending on the years in service. However, since they should not draw equivalent or more than the next higher level, the renumeration is capped at ₹224,000.[5][6]

answer: Air Marshal in the C-in-C grade are at the Apex pay scale (level 17) with a monthly pay of ₹225,000 (US$3,100)

text:
An Air Marshal in the C-in-C grade ranks at No. 23 on the Indian order of precedence, along with Lieutenant Generals of the Indian Army and Vice Admirals of the Indian Navy in the C-in-C grade. The other Air Marshals rank at No. 24 in the order of precedence.[4]

Air Marshals in the C-in-C grade are at the Apex pay scale (pay level 17), with a monthly pay of ₹225,000 (US$3,100). Other Air Marshals, in the HAG+ pay scale (pay level 16) draw lesser, depending on the years in service. However, since they should not draw equivalent or more than the next higher level, the renumeration is capped at ₹224,000.[5][6]

answer: Air Marshals in the pay scale make₹225,000

text:
An Air Marshal in the C-in-C grade ranks at No. 23 on the Indian order of precedence, along with Lieutenant Generals of the Indian Army and Vice Admirals of the Indian Navy in the C-in-C grade. The other Air Marshals rank at No. 24 in the order of precedence.[4]

Air Marshals in the C-in-C grade are at the Apex pay scale (pay level 17), with a monthly pay of ₹225,000 (US$3,100). Other Air Marshals, in the HAG+ pay scale (pay level 16) draw lesser, depending on the years in service. However, since they should not draw equivalent or more than the next higher level, the renumeration is capped at ₹224,000.[5][6]

answer: Air Marshals in the C-in-C grade are at the Apex pay scale (pay level 17), with a monthly pay of ₹225,000. Other Air Marshals in the HAG+ pay scale (pay level 16) draw lesser, depending on the years in service, but are capped at ₹224,000.

text:
An Air Marshal in the C-in-C grade ranks at No. 23 on the Indian order of precedence, along with Lieutenant Generals of the Indian Army and Vice Admirals of the Indian Navy in the C-in-C grade. The other Air Marshals rank at No. 24 in the order of precedence.[4]

Air Marshals in the C-in-C grade are at the Apex pay scale (pay level 17), with a monthly pay of ₹225,000 (US$3,100). Other Air Marshals, in the HAG+ pay scale (pay level 16) draw lesser, depending on the years in service. However, since they should not draw equivalent or more than the next higher level, the renumeration is capped at ₹224,000.[5][6]

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: An Air Marshal is the second highest rank, air officer rank in the Indian Air Force, behind an Air Chief Marshal and above an Air Vice Marshal but below an Air Chief Marshal. During 1947-1966, the position of Chief of the Air Staff (CAS) was held by Air Marshal.

answer: 'Air Marshal' in India is a three star Air Officer rank in the Indian Air Force. It is the second highest active rank in the Indian Air Force.

answer: The Indian rank of Air Marshal ranks two levels below Air Chief Marshal. It was first authorized in 1947 but only began being used in 1966.

answer: An Air Marshal is a rank in the Indian Air Force that is the second highest active rank. Air Marshals serve in important appointments at the Air Commands and at the Air Headquarters. The insignia consists of three sky blue bands on a navy blue broad band. Air Marshals in the C-in-C grade earns a monthly salary of $3,100.

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refinement: An Air Marshal is a rank in the Indian Air Force that is the second highest active rank. Air Marshals serve in important appointments at the Air Commands and at the Air Headquarters.

answer: An Air Marshal is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. Air Marshals hold important appointments at Air Commands as C-in-C grade officers and rank 23rd in the Indian order of precedence. They are paid a monthly salary of Rs 225,000.

text: This goes over the sentence limit so I deleted the last sentence as it doesn't seem as pertinent to a summary.

refinement: An Air Marshal is the second-highest active rank in the Indian Air Force. Air Marshals hold important appointments at Air Commands as C-in-C grade officers and rank 23rd in the Indian order of precedence.


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LOS ANGELES (KABC) -- Bud Light is offering free beer to soccer fans if Mexico can beat its "curse of the fifth game" in the World Cup.

In a tweet, the beer company announced that if Mexico beats Brazil and advances to the quarterfinals that it will help pay for customers' beer.

The tweet, written on charred parchment in a Medieval style as part of its King John Barley and Dilly Dilly gimmick, says "such a great victory shall be celebrated by him helping ye pay for thy celebratory Bud Lights," which appears to mean free beer.

The "curse of the fifth game" refers to Mexico not being able to advance past the fifth game in the World Cup since at least 1994.

Mexico faces Brazil in the round of 16 at 7 a.m. Monday.

If Mexico does break the curse, Bud Light said it will then provide further details on how to get the free beer.

Copyright © 2020 KABC-TV. All Rights Reserved.

question: Why is Bud Light offering free beer?

answer: Because Mexico hasn't advanced beyond the 5th game of the World Cup in at least the last 20 years.

text: It's inaccurate to say that they are offering it "because" Mexico has not won its fifth game in 20 years; rather they are offering it *if* Mexico wins its 5th game

refinement: Because Mexico hasn't advanced beyond the 5th game of the World Cup in at least the last 20 years, they will offer it if they win.

answer: They are offering it if Mexico can beat its "curse of the fifth game" in the World Cup.

answer: Bud Light is offering free beer if Mexico beats its "curse of the fifth game" in the World Cup.

question: What are the requirements to get free beer?

answer: Be a fan of Mexican soccer team and their victory.

text: No where are requirements for customers given, only for the deal

answer: Mexico has to beat its "curse of the fifth game" in the World Cup.

answer: Mexico needs to beat Brazil and move to the quarterfinals.

question: What countries are mentioned in this document?

answer: Argentina, Brazil, and Mexico.

text: Argentina is not mentioned

answer:
A. "If Mexico beats Brazil"  and "If Mexico does break the curse"

B. "If Mexico beats Brazil" and "If Mexico does break the curse"

C. "Brazil"
C. "If Mexico does break the curse"

text: Completely incoherent and does not answer the question

answer: Mexico and Brazil

question: What is "the curse of the fifth game"?

answer: The curse of the fifth game refers to Mexico's inability to advance past the fifth game of the World Cup.

answer: According to the passage, "the curse of the fifth game" refers to Mexico being unable to advance past the fifth game in the World Cup since 1994.

answer: Mexico hasn't been able to advance past the fifth game in the World Cup since at least 1994.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

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Mexican soccer team, "El Tri", will face Brazil today in the "Round of 16" and they are up against the curse of only reaching the "Round of 16" since 1994 - Bud Light will give/should give free beer if Mexico win.

Bud light will give free beer to Mexico's fans if Mexico wins.

text: The final sentence is repeated twice.

refinement: Mexican soccer team, "El Tri", will face Brazil today in the "Round of 16" and they are up against the curse of only reaching the "Round of 16" since 1994. Bud light will give free beer to Mexico's fans if Mexico wins.

answer: Bud Light will give free beer if Mexico beats Brazil and advances to the quarterfinals.

answer: Bud light is offering to provide customers with free beer if Mexico wins the World Cup.

text: It's if Mexico beats Brazil in the 5th game, not win the World Cup.

refinement: Bud light is offering to provide customers with free beer if Mexico beats Brazil in its fifth game.

answer: If Mexico beats Brazil in the World Cup, Bud Light will be offerng free beer to soccer fans.

answer: Bud Light is offering free beer to soccer fans if Mexico can beat its "curse of the fifth game" in the World Cup.

answer: The document discusses when Bud Light offered free beer to soccer fans if Mexico could beat its "curse of the fifth game" in the World Cup.


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-   English
-   News

 LIVING FILM HERITAGE. A total donation of 30 million kroner from three foundations is making it possible to digitise, study and disseminate more than 400 silent films from the golden age of Danish cinema.

11. December 2018

One of the most important chapters in Danish film history will now become available thanks to a donation of DKK 30 million from the A.P. Møller Foundation, the Aage and Johanne Louis-Hansen Foundation and the Augustinus Foundation.

From around 1910, the Danish film industry was a world leader, both commercially and artistically, with Nordisk Films Kompagni (now Nordisk Film) at the forefront. Stars like Asta Nielsen, Valdemar Psilander and Fy & Bi were famous way beyond their home country, and Denmark’s greatest film director, Carl Th. Dreyer, was prolific during this period as well. When sound films gained ground in the early 1930s, production companies scrapped their inventories of silent films. Only an estimated 20% of the Danish silent film production exists today.

The archives contain at least 50 titles that have not been shown since they were first released more than a century ago. Among them, we might find forgotten masterpieces that could change our understanding of Danish silent film history.

In the coming years, the Danish Film Institute will digitise, study and disseminate Denmark’s entire silent film heritage, consisting of some 415 titles with a combined running time of around 350 hours. The films range wide and far, from prestige productions with international appeal to run-of-the-mill farces and test films, illustrating the technical evolution from silent to sound, colour to black and white, and so on.

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The biggest stars die young. The world famous silent film actor Valdemar Psilander died only 32 years old.

Studying and disseminating the film heritage

The project is the biggest film-dissemination effort ever in Denmark and follows four years of work mapping the collections. The many films and supplementary materials will now be made freely available to curious viewers and institutions of learning around the world, where Danish silents are already part of the curriculum for students of film history.

The masterpieces in the collections are being restored and scanned for theatrical screening, and an online universe is being created featuring all the films, accompanied by dissemination and research articles. Along the way, the Film Institute will share knowledge about the restoration and digitisation efforts.

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Asta Nielsen and Urban Gad were both a married couple and colleagues who worked in Germany.

A three-year Danish-German research project affiliated with the digitisation effort will map the cross-border traffic of ideas and people between two leading nations of the silent film era, Denmark and Germany. The project is carried out in partnership with the University of Copenhagen and the University of Cologne. The research team comprises five senior researchers, a Ph.D. fellow and a research assistant.

Jakob Buhl Vestergaard, Deputy Managing Director of the Danish Film Institute, says

CONTACT

LARS-MARTIN SØRENSEN
Forskningsleder
Tlf. +45 3374 3574
larss@dfi.dk

JAKOB BUHL VESTERGAARD
Vicedirektør
Tlf. +45 2020 1838
jakobv@dfi.dk

"It is with great gratitude to the contributing foundations, and tremendous anticipation, that we are launching this comprehensive project. The archives contain at least 50 titles that have not been shown since they were first released more than a century ago. Among them, we might find forgotten masterpieces that could change our understanding of Danish silent film history. In any event, we have now been given a unique opportunity to learn about our shared past, as told in motion pictures. This is what film can do."

FACTS

In the coming years, the Danish Film Institute will digitise, study and disseminate the entire Danish silent film heritage: 415 titles, with a total running time of around 350 hours. Apart from the films themselves, documentation materials, such as film programmes, stills and posters, will be digitised and made available, including in an online universe and at a silent film festival organised by the Cinematheque.

The project is made possible by a donation of DKK 30 million from the A.P. Møller Foundation, the Aage and Johanne Louis-Hansen Foundation and the Augustinus Foundation.

_Physical and digital dissemination of the film heritage_
The Danish Film Institute aims to bring the film heritage to life for everyone. This is done through events at Copenhagen’s Cinematheque and in partnerships with cinemas nationwide. It is also done digitally via the streaming site "Danmark på film" (Denmark on Film), featuring documentaries from the 1899-1995 period.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What are the major reasons why some of the old, silent Danish films are being digitalized and made available for free?

answer: The Danish Film Institute aims to bring the film heritage to life for everyone. This is done through events at Copenhagen’s Cinematheque and in partnerships with cinemas nationwide. It is also done digitally via the streaming site "Danmark på film" (Denmark on Film), featuring documentaries from the 1899-1995 period.

answer: It is the largest film dissemination effort ever in Denmark and follows four years of work mapping the collections. These films include masterpieces that have not been shown since they were first released more than a century ago. Other institutions of learning will include Danish silents in the curriculum for students of film history.

text: This fails to answer the question

refinement: The Danish Film Institute aims to bring the film heritage to life for everyone. The many films and supplementary materials will now be made freely available to curious viewers and institutions of learning around the world.

answer: The curatorial process of selecting which films are put on the public site and which are restored is meticulous and considered by directors who are experts in the field. The most important and unused gems (authentic cinema) in Danish film library cannot be digitized due to technology concerns and the digitizing process, whose process remains hidden and requires specialists even in today's world.

answer: The major reason is to make sure that the films are preserved and made available to everyone. The second reason is to make sure that the films are watched and appreciated by a wider audience.

answer: The curatorial process of selecting which films are put on the public site and which are restored is meticulous and considered by directors who are experts in the field. The initial purpose of digitizing all the Danish films is to make them available to the general public and to allow further study of important aspects of film history. The most important and unused gems (authentic cinema) in Danish library cannot be digitized due to technology concerns and the digitizing process, whose process remains hidden and requires specialists even in today's world.

text: Unnecessary information. Doesn't answer the question

refinement: The curatorial process of selecting which films are put on the public site and which are restored is meticulous and considered by directors who are experts in the field. The initial purpose of digitizing all the Danish films is to make them available to the general public and to allow further study of important aspects of film history.


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TONI LANDER née PIHL PETERSEN (1931–1985) was a Danish ballerina who specialized in the ballets of August Bournonville. After becoming a solo dancer with the Royal Danish Ballet in 1950, she was a guest dancer with the Original Ballet Russe in 1951. She was then engaged by the Paris Opera Ballet until 1954. Lander also appeared with the London Festival Ballet in the late 1950s and with the American Ballet Theatre in the 1960s. After a few years back in Denmark in the early 1970s, in 1976 she joined the Ballet West in Salt Lake City. After a short illness, she died there of cancer in May 1985.[1][2][3]

Early life

Born in Gentofte on 19 June 1931, Toni Pihl Petersen was the daughter of Knud Åge Carl Pihl Petersen (1905–1972) and Agnes Margrethe Andersen (1907–1950).[4] When she was six, she began training under Leif Ørnberg (1904–1977), who immediately recognized her talents. In 1939, as an eight-year-old, she was admitted to the Royal Danish Ballet School where she advanced quickly. Thanks to her height, she was able to join the ballet corps while still studying. The ballet sequences of Bournonville were the basis for the ballet school but as she became an aspirant, Harald Lander took a personal interest in her training, introducing her to Russian ballet.[5]

Career

When she was 15, she make her début as Sophie in Vilhelm Christian Holm's _Livjægerne paa Amager_ (The Lifeguards on Amager). A year later, she gained wide acclaim, dancing Margot Lander's difficult part in _Étude_. In 1951 Lander rewrote the part for her. Ten years later, under the name _Études_, it became her most notable part for the rest of her career.[6]

In 1950, she became a solo dancer. On 15 April of that year, she married Harald Lander (1905–1971) but her relationship with him was to bring her major problems. In 1951, he was dismissed from the Royal Danish Ballet for misusing his position. She followed him to Paris where he became artistic director of the Paris Opera Ballet but in order to avoid accusations of favoratism, she continued to train in Russian ballet under Ljubov Egorova, and Olga Preobrajenska. For a few months, she danced with the Ballets Russes but moved to London in 1954 where she appeared as a replacement at the London Festival Ballet, taking on the role of Odette in Swan Lake at short notice. She performed so well that she was engaged by the company for the next five years.[7]

She travelled widely with the Festival Ballet, performing both Russian ballet and Bournonville roles. In 1957, she appeared at the Tivoli Concert Hall in Copenhagen where she danced in _Études_ and _Swan Lake_. She was honoured with the Order of the Dannebrog. She returned to the Falconer Centre in Copenhagen in 1959, where both she and her husband were widely acclaimed, preparing the way for _Etudes_ at the Royal Danish Theatre.[8]

In 1960, she moved to New York for an engagement with American Ballet Theatre. She appeared in a more extensive repertoire, including _Miss Julie_ and _The Moon Reindeer_ by the Swedish choreographer Birgit Culberg, as well as Antony Tudor's _Jardin aux Lilas_. When Flemming Flindt became artistic director of the Royal Danish Ballet in 1966, he invited Toni Lander to appear as a guest dancer in 1967. She demonstrated her wide experience by dancing the pas de deux from _Don Quixote_, Eliza in Bournonville's _Konservatoriet_ and the title role from _Miss Julie_, all in one evening.[9]

In 1964, After she and Harald Lander had divorced in 1964, in January 1966 she married the American dancer Bruce Marks with whom she had three children: Eric Anthony (1968), Adam Christopher (1970), Kenneth Rikard (1974). Her last assignment with the American Ballet was in the première of José Limón's _The Moor's Pavane_.[10] In 1971, she returned to Denmark after an international career lasting 20 years, quite exceptional for a Danish ballerina. In parallel with appearances in _The Moor's Pavane_ (1971–1976), she taught at the ballet school while Marks performed as a solo dancer. When Marks was invited to become artistic director of Ballet West in Salt Lake City, Lander once again followed her husband, becoming head of training there. While with the Ballet West, she presented _Études_ at the Paris Opera, Budapest Opera and the National Ballet of Amsterdam.[11] She collaborated with Flemming Ryberg on presenting a new version of Bournonville's _Abdallah_ which premièred in February 1985. In 1983, she had divorced Marks and was ready to accept an invitation to become the first female artistic director for the Royal Danish Ballet. She was prevented from doing so from a rapidly developing cancer which led to her death in Salt Lake City on 19 May 1985, aged only 53.[12][13]

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about Toni Lander's private life?

answer: Toni Lander was born on June 19, 1931 in Gentofte, Denmark. She was married to Harald Lander in 1950, but they divorced in 1964. In January 1966, she married Bruce Marks, an American dancer. The marriage lasted until 1971 when she divorced Marks. Lander was prevented from becoming the first female artistic director for the Royal Danish Ballet due to a rapidly developing cancer. She died in Salt Lake City on May 19, 1985.

text: Lander's marriage with Marks lasted until 1983, not 1971.

refinement: Toni Lander was born on June 19, 1931 in Gentofte, Denmark. She was married to Harald Lander in 1950, but they divorced in 1964. In January 1966, she married Bruce Marks, an American dancer. The marriage lasted until 1983 when she divorced Marks. Lander was prevented from becoming the first female artistic director for the Royal Danish Ballet due to a rapidly developing cancer. She died in Salt Lake City on May 19, 1985.

text: It's omitted that Lander had 3 children with Marks.

refinement: Toni Lander was born on June 19, 1931 in Gentofte, Denmark. She was married to Harald Lander in 1950, but they divorced in 1964. In January 1966, she married Bruce Marks, an American dancer, and they had three children. The marriage lasted until 1983 when she divorced Marks. Lander was prevented from becoming the first female artistic director for the Royal Danish Ballet due to a rapidly developing cancer. She died in Salt Lake City on May 19, 1985.

answer: Toni Lander was born in 1931 as Toni Pihl Petersen. She married Harald Lander in 1950, but they divorced in 1964. She married Bruce Marks in 1966, but they divorced in 1983. She died in 1985 of cancer.

answer: Toni Lander was born on June 19, 1931 in Gentofte, Denmark. She was married to Harald Lander in 1950, but they divorced in 1964. In January 1966, she married Bruce Marks, an American dancer. The marriage lasted until 1971 when she divorced Marks. Lander was prevented from becoming the first female artistic director for the Royal Danish Ballet due to a rapidly developing cancer. She died in Salt Lake City on May 19, 1985. She had three children with Marks.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about Toni Lander's career?

answer: Lander was born in 1931 and was a solo dancer for the Royal Danish Ballet in 1950. She was a guest dancer in 1951 with the Original Ballet Russe. She was then engaged by the Paris Opera Ballet until 1954. Lander was a guest dancer with the London Festival Ballet in the late 1950s and with the American Ballet Theatre in the 1960s. She joined the Ballet West in Salt Lake City in 1976, where she died of cancer in May 1985.

text: It should be mentioned that Lander's debut was as Sophie in Vilhelm Christian Holm's Livjægerne paa Amager.

refinement: Lander was born in 1931 and was a solo dancer for the Royal Danish Ballet in 1950. She was 15 when she made her debut as Sophie in Livjægerne paa Amager. She was a guest dancer in 1951 with the Original Ballet Russe. She was then engaged by the Paris Opera Ballet until 1954. Lander was a guest dancer with the London Festival Ballet in the late 1950s and with the American Ballet Theatre in the 1960s. She joined the Ballet West in Salt Lake City in 1976, where she died of cancer in May 1985.

text: It's omitted that Lander specialized in the ballets of August Bournonville.

refinement: Lander was born in 1931 and was a solo dancer for the Royal Danish Ballet in 1950. She specialized in the ballets of August Bournonville. She was 15 when she made her debut as Sophie in Livjægerne paa Amager. She was a guest dancer in 1951 with the Original Ballet Russe. She was then engaged by the Paris Opera Ballet until 1954. Lander was a guest dancer with the London Festival Ballet in the late 1950s and with the American Ballet Theatre in the 1960s. She joined the Ballet West in Salt Lake City in 1976, where she died of cancer in May 1985.

text: Mentioning when Lander was born is unnecessary.

refinement: Lander specialized in the ballets of August Bournonville, and was 15 when she made her debut as Sophie in Livjægerne paa Amager. She was a solo dancer for the Royal Danish Ballet in 1950, and was a guest dancer in 1951 with the Original Ballet Russe. She was then engaged by the Paris Opera Ballet until 1954. Lander was a guest dancer with the London Festival Ballet in the late 1950s and with the American Ballet Theatre in the 1960s. She joined the Ballet West in Salt Lake City in 1976, where she died of cancer in May 1985.

answer: Toni Lander was a Danish ballerina who specialized in the ballets of August Bournonville. She was a solo dancer with the Royal Danish Ballet in 1950, a guest dancer with the Original Ballet Russe in 1951, and then engaged by the Paris Opera Ballet until 1954. She appeared with the London Festival Ballet in the late 1950s and with the American Ballet Theatre in the 1960s. She joined the Ballet West in Salt Lake City in 1976, and she died there of cancer in May 1985.

answer: Lander was a solo dancer for the Royal Danish Ballet in 1950. She was a guest dancer in 1951 with the Original Ballet Russe. She was then engaged by the Paris Opera Ballet until 1954. Lander was a guest dancer with the London Festival Ballet in the late 1950s and with the American Ballet Theatre in the 1960s. She joined the Ballet West in Salt Lake City in 1976, where she died of cancer in May 1985.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about why Lander divorced her Harald Lander?

answer: No answer

answer: The reason for their divorce was that Harald Lander was dismissed from the Royal Danish Ballet for misusing his position.


text:
“I don't know about this.” Mark said, pacing back and forth in his sheik but shaggy boardroom while

 scrolling up and down on his phone. He placed the phone down on the boardroom table.

	“What do you think, Tom?”

	Tom sighed. This was the 15th time he'd been asked what he thought in the last hour. He

 grabbed the phone off of the table. There hadn't been any changes that he could tell from the last

time he had chimed in.

        “Looks fine, Mark.” Tom replied.

        “Are you sure? You don't think it's too aggressive?”

        “I think if that's what you want to do then you should do it.”

        “Right. I should do it.” Mark reassured himself. He grabbed the phone from Tom's hands. “But I

don't know. Maybe it's too much. Maybe this is too much.”

	Tom rubbed his eyeballs. The other nine employees sitting around the table had long lost

 interest in Mark's concerns or their standings in the company. They all just wanted to go home.

	“I mean, do you think maybe it makes me come off as controlling? Cause I want to sound

confident, but I don't want to be controlling, you know? Does it make me sound like a dick? Pete,

what do you think?”

        Pete's left eyelid slid open from his nap.

        “It's fine.” he mumbled and then slipped back to sleep.

        Mark let out a frustrated whimper. He walked towards the double pane glass window and

thumped his head against it. The San Diego city lights twinkled below.

       Elaine, a first year web design supervisor who Mark had hired just a month ago, adjusted herself

in her seat.

      “Mark?” she called out softly. “If I were you I wouldn't give it so much thought. People gravitate

to you for who you are, so just be who you are. I think that's important.”

      Mark took a deep breath. He looked down at his phone one last time.

      “You're right.”

His thumb tapped the phone. The board members unanimously rolled back in their chairs.

      “If she doesn't think the Chinese place is a good place to go for a first date, big deal. She can

suggest another place. I'm open. But at least now someone's made a decision and we're not playing

the 'I don't care where we go' game.”

      Tom yawned.

      “Did you look over the new app update, Mark?”

      “The what?”

      “The new update. It takes effect tonight.”

      “Oh, yeah, yeah. Sounds good. Get that going. Can't believe we haven't been requiring social

security numbers this whole time.”

       The board members sauntered out of the room.

title: New Facebook Update Eve [HM]

question: Which characters are going on a date?

answer: The characters in the passage are not going on a date. Mark is discussing a new Facebook update with his employees.

text: It is implied that Mark is going on a date. "If she doesn't think the Chinese place is a good place to go for a first date, big deal" is evidence that he's going on a date.

answer: Mark is going on a date with a woman.

text: "If she doesn't think the Chinese place is a good place to go for a first date, big deal" is evidence of him going on date with a woman.

answer: Mark and the woman he is going on a date with.

text: "If she doesn't think the Chinese place is a good place to go for a first date, big deal" is evidence that mark and a woman are going on a date.

answer: Mark and a woman.

text: "If she doesn't think the Chinese place is a good place to go for a first date, big deal" is evidence that Mark and a woman are going on a date.

question: Describe the narrator.

answer: The narrator is Mark, the CEO of a company.

text: There is no evidence to suggest that the narrator is a CEO

text: The answer does not describe the narrator.

refinement: The narrator is Mark, who is stressed and worried about the new Facebook update.

answer: The narrator is a man who is the CEO of a company. He is stressed and worried about the new Facebook update.

text: There is no evidence to suggest that the narrator is CEO

refinement: The narrator is stressed and worried about the new Facebook update.

text: "This was the 15th time he'd been asked what he thought in the last hour" is evidence that the narrator is worried about the new update.

answer: The narrator is a guy named Tom who works for Facebook.

text: Tom is not the narrator.

refinement: The narrator is Mark who works at Facebook.

text: The answer does not describe the narrator.

refinement: The narrator is Mark who works at Facebook. He is worried and stressed about the Facebook update.

answer: The narrator is someone who is easily overwhelmed and indecisive, and who is constantly seeking reassurance from others. They are also someone who is easily distracted and prone to worrying about things that may not be important.

text: "But I don't know. Maybe it's too much. Maybe this is too much. This was the 15th time he'd been asked what he thought in the last hour." is evidence that the narrator is overwhelmed and indecisive.

question: What is the relationship between Tom and Mark?

answer: Tom appears to be Mark's trusted advisor and confidant.

text: Tom does appear to be Mark's advisor, however there is no definite evidence to suggest it.

answer: Tom is Mark's employee.

text: "Tom rubbed his eyeballs. The other nine employees sitting around the table had long lost interest in Mark's concerns or their standings in the company" is evidence that Tom is Mark's employee.

answer: They are co-workers.

text: Though they are working together, Tom appears to be Mark's employee.

answer: Tom and Mark are coworkers.

text: Though they are working together, Tom appears to be Mark's employee.

question: Where does the story take place?

answer: The story takes place in a boardroom.

text: "pacing back and forth in his sheik but shaggy boardroom" is evidence that the story takes place in a boardroom.

answer: In a boardroom.

text: "pacing back and forth in his sheik but shaggy boardroom" is evidence that the story takes place in a boardroom.

answer: The story takes place in a boardroom.

text: "pacing back and forth in his sheik but shaggy boardroom" is evidence that the story takes place in a boardroom.

answer: The story takes place in a boardroom.

text: "pacing back and forth in his sheik but shaggy boardroom" is evidence that the story takes place in a boardroom.

question: Explain the new app update.

answer: The new app update requires social security numbers.

text: "'The new update. It takes effect tonight.''Oh, yeah, yeah. Sounds good. Get that going. Can't believe we haven't been requiring social security numbers this whole time.'" is evidence that new update requires social security numbers.

answer: The new update is to require social security numbers for all users of the company's app. This is meant to increase security and make it harder for people to create fake accounts.

text: There is no evidence that suggests the meaning behind the app update requiring social security numbers.

refinement: The new update is to require social security numbers for all users of the company's app.

text: "'The new update. It takes effect tonight.''Oh, yeah, yeah. Sounds good. Get that going. Can't believe we haven't been requiring social security numbers this whole time.'" is evidence that new update requires social security numbers.

text: Empty response.

refinement: The new update is to require social security numbers for all users of the company's app.

answer: The new app update requires users to enter their social securit numbers.

text: The correct spelling should be "social security numbers".

refinement: The new app update requires users to enter their social security numbers.

text: "'The new update. It takes effect tonight.''Oh, yeah, yeah. Sounds good. Get that going. Can't believe we haven't been requiring social security numbers this whole time.'" is evidence that new update requires social security numbers.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: Mark is the CEO of a company and is worried about the new Facebook update. He is worried that it will make him come off as controlling. Elaine, a first year web design supervisor, tells him that he should just be himself.

text: There's no definite evidence to suggest Mark is CEO.

refinement: Mark is worried about the new Facebook update. He is worried that it will make him come off as controlling. Elaine, a first year web design supervisor, tells him that he should just be himself.

answer: The board members are discussing a new Facebook update, but Mark is unsure about it. Elaine reassures him that people like him for who he is, and that he shouldn't worry too much about the update. The board members eventually leave, and Mark decides to go ahead with the update.

text: "If I were you I wouldn't give it so much thought. People gravitate to you for who you are, so just be who you are" is evidence that Mark is second-guessing himself and that Elaine reassures him.

answer: The employees of Facebook are gathered at the boardroom prior to the launch of a new update. Mark (Zuckerberg?) is contemplating an upcoming date he has, where he intends to take a woman to a Chinese restaurant. The new app update requires users to provide their social security numbers.

answer: Mark is pacing back and forth in his boardroom, concerned about a new Facebook update. He asks his employees what they think about it, but they are all tired of answering his questions. Elaine, a first year web design supervisor, tells Mark that he shouldn't give it so much thought. Mark decides to go ahead with the update.


text:
_Battlefield V_’s decision to prominently feature women in combat as part of its World War II setting may have angered some gamers online — who responded to the inclusion of female soldiers with the #NotMyBattlefield hashtag — but developers at Electronic Arts and DICE remain unmoved by the reaction.

In an interview with __ _Gamasutra_, EA chief creative officer Patrick Söderlund says that the developer is uninterested in taking flak for diversifying the gaming space. “We stand up for the cause, because I think those people who don’t understand it, well, you have two choices: either accept it or don’t buy the game,” he says. “I’m fine with either or.” According to Söderlund, the dev team itself also pushed for women in _Battlefield V._

In an interview with _The Verge_ this week, lead designer Lars Gustavsson says that he was surprised by the negative reaction to the inclusion of women, particularly because he had heard so many fans ask for it. “If I got a dollar for every interview I’ve been in through the years, where people challenged us about not having female soldiers, I would be a rich man,” he says. “So to finally be involved with this decision, it’s actually quite mindblowing.”

Many of those who used the #NotMyBattlefield hashtag complained that the inclusion of women was “historically inaccurate,” despite women playing a variety of roles during WWII as everything from fighter pilots to snipers. Söderlund found the response to be both ignorant and beside the point. ”These are people who are uneducated — they don’t understand that this is a plausible scenario, and listen: this is a game,” he says.

Executive producer Aleksander Grøndal also pushed back against the hashtag, saying the developer “will always put fun over authentic.” Nor is this a new development for the series. As general manager Oskar Gabrielson explained on Twitter, “the _Battlefield_ sandbox has always been about playing the way you want.” This sometimes means offering fantastical experiences that are neither realistic nor historically accurate, “like attempting to fit three players on a galloping horse, with flamethrowers. With _BFV_ you also get the chance to play as who you want. This is #everyonesbattlefield.”

EA’s dogged response to this debacle marks another instance of creators standing up against toxic fan bases who seek to rail against diversity and what they view as “PC politics.” When creators speak out against bad actors — whether they’re addressing Comicsgate, _Rick and Morty_, or harassment from _Star Wars_ fans — they’re sending a powerful message about how abusive and exclusionary behavior will not be tolerated.

Gaming today is more gender-diverse than it’s ever been, Söderlund says, and there are “a lot of female people who want to play, and male players who want to play as a badass [woman].” In trying to explain the so-called controversy to his own 13-year-old daughter, Söderlund says he came to realize how ridiculous the conceit of the online backlash was. “I’m like, okay, as a parent, how the hell am I gonna respond to this? And I just said, ‘You know what? You’re right,’” says Söderlund. “‘This is not okay.’”

_CORRECTION: A quote from Lars Gustavsson was originally attributed to Oskar Gabrielson. We have corrected our story and regret the error._

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about gamers?

answer: The article says that gamers have reacted negatively to the inclusion of women in _Battlefield V_ because of the #NotMyBattlefield hashtag. The author argues that this backlash is ignorant and beside the point, and that the game's developers are uninterested in taking flak for diversifying the gaming space. According to the article, the dev team itself also pushed for women in _Battlefield V_. The article also describes gamers as reacting angrily, having used the #NotMyBattlefield hashtag.

text: The answer contains information that is not relevant to answering the question.

refinement: The article says that gamers have reacted negatively to the inclusion of women in _Battlefield V_ because of the #NotMyBattlefield hashtag. The article also describes gamers as reacting angrily, having used the #NotMyBattlefield hashtag.

text: Repetition in the answer.

refinement: The article says that gamers have reacted negatively to the inclusion of women in _Battlefield V_ because of the #NotMyBattlefield hashtag.

text: Further detail describing these gamers could be included

refinement: The article says that gamers have reacted negatively to the inclusion of women in _Battlefield V_ because of the #NotMyBattlefield hashtag. Many of those using this hashtag complain that incluidng women is 'historically inaccurate' despite evidence to the contrary.

text: It would be more grammatically correct to say that gamers have reacted negatively 'with' the hashtag, rather than 'because of', since the hashtag is a sigh rather than cause of the backlash.

refinement: The article says that gamers have reacted negatively to the inclusion of women in _Battlefield V_ with the #NotMyBattlefield hashtag. Many of those using this hashtag complain that incluidng women is 'historically inaccurate' despite evidence to the contrary.

answer: The article states that some gamers have responded negatively to the inclusion of women in Battlefield V as combat soldiers but EA and DICE remain unmoved by their reaction. The developers at EA are uninterested in taking flak for including more diverse elements and feel that the inclusion of women is reasonable and plausible. According to the developer team, an overwhelming number of fans have asked for female soldiers to be included in the game. Despite complaints that this is historically inaccurate, the developer feels that gamers are uneducated and that their fictional game should be fun above all else.

text: Inclusion of information that is not strictly relevant to answering the question.

refinement: The article states that some gamers have responded negatively to the inclusion of women in Battlefield V as combat soldiers. According to the developer team, an overwhelming number of fans have asked for female soldiers to be included in the game. Despite complaints that this is historically inaccurate, the developer feels that gamers are uneducated.

text: Minor grammatically changes for coherence.

refinement: The article states that some gamers have responded negatively to the inclusion of women in Battlefield V as combat soldiers. However, according to the developer team, an overwhelming number of fans have asked for female soldiers to be included in the game. Despite complaints that this is historically inaccurate, the developer feels that gamers are uneducated.

answer: The gamers reacted negatively to the inclusion of women in Battlefield V's World War II setting under the hashtag "#NotMyBattlefield". Some objected to diversifying the gaming space by including women and others were historically inaccurate.

text: Amendments to make this sentence clearer.

refinement: The gamers reacted negatively to the inclusion of women in Battlefield V's World War II setting under the hashtag "#NotMyBattlefield". Some based their objection on the claim that including women and others was historically inaccurate.

answer: Many gamers took the World War II setting decision (a mixed gender army) to be historically inaccurate and stated it implied that such mixed-gender behavior should not exist in the game world. Electronic Arts and DICE however, were unmoved by the criticism.

text: Inclusion of information that is not strictly relevant to the answer.

refinement: Many gamers took the World War II setting decision (a mixed gender army) to be historically inaccurate and stated it implied that such mixed-gender behavior should not exist in the game world.

text: Amendments to make the sentence read more clearly and coherently.

refinement: Many gamers took the World War II setting decision (a mixed gender army) to be historically inaccurate and argued that female soldiers should not be part of the game.

answer: The article calls out the argument from gamers about the inclusion of women being historically unrealistic to be exclusionary and problematic. The publisher's chief creative officer Söderlund quips that gamers can either accept it or don't buy the game. The reaction is classified as toxic.

text: Inclusion of information that is the not strictly relevant to answering the question.

refinement: The article calls out the argument from gamers about the inclusion of women being historically unrealistic to be exclusionary and problematic. The reaction is classified as toxic.


text:
Champagne, chardonnay and second-rate vodka. The descent into Vanity Heights was a perfect contradiction. Darcy’s den was full of promises. The promises of allure, freedom, revelry. The promises of power and powder, regret, addiction. But the promise that Vanity Heights fulfilled best was not Darcy’s own. It was the promise flashed upon the television, upon the computer screen, canonised on the glossed pages of magazines. The expectations of how teenager life should be; the expectations, up until this night, crushed by education and responsibility. This was the promise that led Darcy’s guests down the stairs. Down the stairs into Vanity Heights.

The house had transformed into a delinquent ballroom. The girls dropped as low as their heels would allow; their men watched through the haze. Darcy was a dragon. A pink dragon, breathing about the toxic smoke of his habit. He was perched upon his barstool throne, positioned strategically in the centre of the room, when she arrived.
“Celeste!” he exclaimed, prancing over to her, a stick of addiction in one hand and a glass of hobby in the other. She gave a long hug, a short conversation and an expected question. With a customary smile, Darcy gave to her an expected bottle of answer.

The party raved on, yet the revelry was muted by the brick wall that barricaded Celeste from the action. The rhythmic dripping of the basin tap was the only music Celeste had, yet she chose to reapply her face instead of dancing. She wanted to dance, though, and she knew Darcy would be waiting for her, so she rushed through her routine. She clasped onto her 50mL glass friend, already thrice-used, even though she had been in the bathroom only five minutes.
        The drink was downed within seconds of being poured; the liquid sunk to her stomach. She could feel the warm tendrils, cooing words of friendship, branching through her chest, her stomach and finally, finally, back up to drown her mind; pulling her further from the world and closer to her weekend friends.
        Six doses later, to finish the bottle, and she was ready to join them.

No one ever really knew why she was there. Good school, great grades, aspirations of business and law. Nevertheless, she was soon jiving and twisting and dropping on the floor, with Darcy and other men: around them and in their laps; their hands hoping to get in hers.  Her beholder lay seemingly dormant in her stomach; though its dark tendrils were tightening, strengthening their grip on Celeste, controlling her like a puppet with tangled strings. She thought the overseer a friend, a protector, but her body knew better.

Celeste mapped her escape as soon as she felt it. Up the stairs, out of Vanity Heights, past the kitchen, into the garden bed just by the backdoor. She pushed through the crowd. Darcy saw her leave; he knew why, but he didn’t follow.  He never did. By the time she reached the stairs, the beast had revealed itself. A kraken, furious as red, limbs thrashing about inside of her, fighting desperately for an escape. Tentacles of fear, doubt, regret, disappointment.
‘No,’ she thought once more, ‘I shouldn’t be disappointed.’ She knew she wasn't wasting her life; she was just having a little to drink. She wasn’t reckless and irresponsible; she was just a normal teenager. She was just having fun, she has earned it, she would stop after tonight, leave her alone. Her stomach was having none of that, though. She made a mistake by trying to fly the stairs two at a time. Her feet tangled and she fell, the first wave of expel surging from her, onto the steps above.

Whilst the beast had once been considered friend, it had no more. It escaped her again, covering her hair, clothes, face. She tried to pull herself further up the stairs, but the sickly purple tentacles constricted about her and dragged her down; down, down, down, back into Vanity Heights.
‘Vile guardian’, she cried, ‘noxious saviour, foul beast, nefarious raper; first friend, now foe. Always, foe’.
The stench accompanying her disgrace engulfed her wholly, yet the contents of her stomach continued to emerge, again and again, onto the step where her head now resigned to lay.
‘Never again,’ she sobbed, she promised to herself, her parents, her schoolwork.
‘Never again,’ she promised, but Celeste’s promises were made to be broken and it was already too late. She lay shattered upon the stair case, empress turned peasant; her knight in glass armour had left her and once more she had nothing. The world around her spun, and sank, and faded to black.

title: Vanity Heights

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about what happened to Celeste after she passed out?

answer: When she passed out, Celeste passed out on the stairs and vomited. Her vomit smelled so bad that no one wanted to help her.

text: The response is incorrect. Celeste vomited first before becoming dizzy and passing out. Everything faded to black when she passed out and nothing more was mentioned. The story ended there. There should be no answer.

answer: Celeste passed out, and then she vomited on the stairs. She lay there until she woke up and vomited again. She tried to get up and go back to the party, but she vomited once more.

text: The response is incorrect. The story ends when Celeste passes out (everything turns black), therefore nothing is known after this point.

refinement: Celeste passed out, everything turns to black and the story ends. The information is not found in the text.

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about Darcy's parties?

answer: Darcy organizes parties after High School with the purpose of meeting new people and bringing a bottle to his own house decorated with pink lights and pink sparkling water dispensers. The parties are only for a male and female, kids who did not go to High School. Celeste acts as a sniper in order to find Darcy's weakness and once she has pinpointed what he likes, she uses it to get everything she needs from him.

text: The response is incorrect. It was never mentioned that the party was after high school or for kids who didn't attend. The idea of Darcy meeting new people and bringing a bottle plus his pink lights and water doesn't exist in the story. Celeste is not a sniper and she doesn't pinpoint anything. The answer needs to be nuked and revised.

text: Must add a response.

refinement: Darcy's parties are at his house in Vanity Heights, which is transformed into a delinquent ballroom where girls dropped as low as their heels would allow while men watched. The place flowed with drugs, alcohol, freedom, revelry, allure, regret, and the expectations of how teenager life should be.

answer: The party is full of champagne, chardonnay, and vodka, while Darcy as the host is seen as a dragon. Aside from Darcy and his best friend, Celeste was the only guest present.

text: This part of the response is incorrect. There was no mention of a best friend and Celeste was not the only guest.

refinement: The party is full of champagne, chardonnay, and vodka, while Darcy as the host is seen as a dragon.

text: The response is missing a few details about Darcy's parties.

refinement: The party is full of champagne, chardonnay, and vodka, while Darcy as the host is seen as a dragon. Darcy's house is transformed into a delinquent ballroom where girls danced low to the floor while men watched. The party promised power, powder, regret, allure, freedom, revelry, and addiction. It showed the guests what teenager life should be when not crushed by education and responsibility.

answer: Darcy organizes parties after High School with the purpose of meeting new people and bringing a bottle to his own house decorated with pink lights and pink sparkling water dispensers. The parties are only for a male and female, kids who did not go to High School.

answer: Darcy's parties are in his house. The house has transformed into a delinquent ballroom. The girls dropped as low as their heels would allow; their men watched through the haze. Darcy was a dragon. A pink dragon, breathing about the toxic smoke of his habit. He was perched upon his barstool throne, positioned strategically in the centre of the room. Celeste arrives at the party and Darcy gives her a bottle of answer.

text: This part of the response is extraneous and only describes Darcy, not his parties.

refinement: Darcy's parties are in his house. The house has transformed into a delinquent ballroom. The girls dropped as low as their heels would allow; their men watched through the haze.

text: Missing some details about Darcy's parties.

refinement: Darcy's parties are in his house. The house has transformed into a delinquent ballroom. The girls dropped as low as their heels would allow; their men watched through the haze. Drugs and alcohol flow freely. Darcy's parties promise freedom, allure, revelry, power, regret, addiction, and expectations of what teenage life should be before being crushed by the weight of education and responsibility.

answer: Darcy's parties are in his house. The house has transformed into a delinquent ballroom. The girls dropped as low as their heels would allow; their men watched through the haze. Darcy was a dragon. A pink dragon, breathing about the toxic smoke of his habit. He was perched upon his barstool throne, positioned strategically in the centre of the room.

answer: Darcy throws parties at his house that are filled with promises. The promises are about revelry, freedom, and power.

answer: Darcy throws parties at his house that are filled with promises. The promises are about revelry, freedom, and power. The party is filled with people who are there to escape their responsibilities. These parties are usually filled with drugs like alcohol, cocaine, and other substances.

text: Cocaine wasn't specifically mentioned.

refinement: Darcy throws parties at his house that are filled with promises. The promises are about revelry, freedom, and power. The party is filled with people who are there to escape their responsibilities. These parties are usually filled with drugs, alcohol, and other substances.

answer: The party is full of champagne, chardonnay, and vodka, while Darcy hosts it and watches society around him descend into the depths of Vanity Heights, which favors the individuals who fuel it through power and money. But the promise that fills up their "adolescent expectations dashed by education and responsibility" is the one Tiffany's exuberant music videos, buzzed on a few drinks, dancing so effortlessly as they tempt ordinary teenagers to partake in the potion. However once they arrive, they are trapped in it, stuck in the pool of filth, trapped in the ever-growing desires of the folly of youth.

text: This part of the response is inaccurate. While Vanity Heights promised power and powder, it didn't favor individuals who fueled it via those means.

refinement: The party is full of champagne, chardonnay, and vodka, while Darcy hosts it and watches society around him descend into the depths of Vanity Heights with the promise of power and powder. But the promise that fills up their "adolescent expectations dashed by education and responsibility" is the one Tiffany's exuberant music videos, buzzed on a few drinks, dancing so effortlessly as they tempt ordinary teenagers to partake in the potion. However once they arrive, they are trapped in it, stuck in the pool of filth, trapped in the ever-growing desires of the folly of youth.

text: "is the one Tiffany's exuberant music videos, buzzed on a few drinks, dancing so effortlessly as they tempt ordinary teenagers to partake in the potion." - this part of the response isn't found anywhere in the story and should be removed.

refinement: The party is full of champagne, chardonnay, and vodka, while Darcy hosts it and watches society around him descend into the depths of Vanity Heights with the promise of power and powder. But the promise that fills up their "adolescent expectations dashed by education and responsibility" However once they arrive, they are trapped in it, stuck in the pool of filth, trapped in the ever-growing desires of the folly of youth.

text: This part of the response is extraneous and should be removed.

refinement: The party is full of champagne, chardonnay, and vodka, while Darcy hosts it and watches society around him descend into the depths of Vanity Heights with the promise of power and powder. But the promise that fills up their "adolescent expectations dashed by education and responsibility".

text: This sentence fragment should be removed.

refinement: The party is full of champagne, chardonnay, and vodka, while Darcy hosts it and watches society around him descend into the depths of Vanity Heights with the promise of power and powder.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about Celeste?

answer: Celeste is a teenager who attends a good school and has aspirations of business and law. She is a good student and has great grades. She is a party girl who enjoys drinking and partying. She is the only one at the party who does not belong to Darcy.

text: This is inaccurate as it was never implied if Darcy was with anyone at the party.

refinement: Celeste is a teenager who attends a good school and has aspirations of business and law. She is a good student and has great grades. She is a party girl who enjoys drinking and partying.

answer: Celeste is a teenage girl who is a guest at a party in Vanity Heights. She is a good student who has aspirations of becoming a businesswoman or a lawyer. She has a habit of drinking alcohol, and she is seen drinking at the party. She is a social butterfly, and she is seen dancing with the men at the party. She also has a tendency to drink too much, and she ends up vomiting. She is seen leaving the party after vomiting and ends up passing out.

text: Celeste only becomes one when she drinks.

refinement: Celeste is a teenage girl who is a guest at a party in Vanity Heights. She is a good student who has aspirations of becoming a businesswoman or a lawyer. She has a habit of drinking alcohol, and she is seen drinking at the party. She becomes a social butterfly when she drinks, and she is seen dancing with the men at the party. She also has a tendency to drink too much, and she ends up vomiting. She is seen leaving the party after vomiting and ends up passing out.

answer: Celeste is a teenage girl who is a guest at a party in Vanity Heights. She is a good student who has aspirations of becoming a businesswoman or a lawyer. She has a habit of drinking alcohol, and she is seen drinking at the party. She is a social butterfly, and she is seen dancing with the men at the party. She also has a tendency to drink too much, and she ends up vomiting.

answer: Celeste is a teenage girl, who goes to a good school with an ambition to carry out business and law. She normally upholds a strict set of rules for herself. Celeste thinks that getting drunk is reckless and irresponsible so she drinks a little at a time. She is naive, trusting and hopeful at first, but soon comes to regret that decision as the vodka transforms into a vicious monster.

text: This part of the response is inaccurate. Celeste's strict set of rules was never mentioned in the story and she did not drink a little at a time.

refinement: Celeste is a teenage girl, who goes to a good school with an ambition to carry out business and law. She is naive, trusting and hopeful at first, but soon comes to regret that decision as the vodka transforms into a vicious monster.

text: This is inaccurate. Celeste wasn't naive, trusting, and hopeful because she's done the deed countless times before and it always ended up with her puking and passing out. There was no indication in the story that she drank vodka. It was only either a bottle or the liquid.

refinement: Celeste is a teenage girl, who goes to a good school with an ambition to carry out business and law.

text: Add more details about Celeste.

refinement: Celeste is a teenage girl who goes to Darcy's house party on weekends. She needs drugs and alcohol in her system to be able to join her weekend friends on the dance floor because there's a brick wall that could only be her common sense stopping her from doing something stupid. In the end, the substances always win. No one really knows why Celeste goes to the party because she goes to a good school, has good grades, and has the ambition to carry out business and law. The night always ends up the same for her - she drinks too much, tries to outrun the sudden hit, and passes out somewhere covered in her own vomit. Celeste always swears to herself, her parents, and her schoolwork that she'll never party again, but she never keeps her promises.

answer:
Celeste seems somewhat pissed at her own parents.
She winces at the sight of her father, then she covers her ear at the sight of her mother after they ask her if she's OK. She also hide her face when her stepsister asks her what she was doing back there. When Celeste is at the party, her friend notices a mistake with the food she packed, but it's still something she's mad at her parents over. She acts innocent when something points to her being at the party, but her friend knows more. She tries to pretend that she wasn't about to have some fun because she has school work and responsibilities, but she's unable to do so when an ominous feeling engulfs her from within.

text: The entire response has characters and events that don't exist in the story. Everything should be nuked and a new response is needed.

text: Add the proper response about Celeste.

refinement: Celeste is a teenage girl who goes to Darcy's house party on weekends. She needs drugs and alcohol in her system to be able to join her weekend friends on the dance floor because there's a brick wall that could only be her common sense stopping her from doing something stupid. In the end, the substances always win. No one really knows why Celeste goes to the party because she goes to a good school, has good grades, and has the ambition to carry out business and law. The night always ends up the same for her - she drinks too much, tries to outrun the sudden hit, and passes out somewhere covered in her own vomit. Celeste always swears to herself, her parents, and her schoolwork that she'll never party again, but she never keeps her promises.

answer: Celeste seems somewhat pissed at her own parents. She winces at the sight of her father, then she covers her ear at the sight of her mother after they ask her if she's OK. She also hide her face when her stepsister asks her what she was doing back there. Celeste's friend notices a mistake with the food she packed, but when Celeste is at the party, it's still something she's mad at her parents over. She acts innocent when something points to her being at the party, but her friend knows more. She tries to pretend that she wasn't about to have some fun because she has school work and responsibilities, but she's unable to do so when an ominous feeling engulfs her from within.

answer: Celeste is a teenager who attends a good school and has aspirations of business and law. She is a good student and has great grades. She is a party girl who enjoys drinking and partying. She is the only one at the party who does not belong to Darcy. She is a party girl who enjoys drinking and partying.

text: This is inaccurate. It was never implied if Darcy owned anyone at the party.

refinement: Celeste is a teenager who attends a good school and has aspirations of business and law. She is a good student and has great grades. She is a party girl who enjoys drinking and partying. She is a party girl who enjoys drinking and partying.

text: Redundant.

refinement: Celeste is a teenager who attends a good school and has aspirations of business and law. She is a good student and has great grades. She is a party girl who enjoys drinking and partying.

answer: Celeste is a teenage girl, who goes to a good school with an ambition to carry out business and law. She normally upholds a strict set of rules for herself. Celeste is also snobby at times when she complains and dislikes about what Vanity Heights prescribes for her.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about Celeste's relationship with the drugs and alcohol she took?

answer: Celeste drinks a lot and she's not used to it. She feels sick and vomits. She regrets drinking so much and vows to never do it again. She thinks the alcohol is a vile guardian.

text: The response is inaccurate and doesn't explain Celeste's relationship with drugs and alcohol.

refinement: She thinks the alcohol is a vile guardian.

text: Add more details about Celeste's relationship with alcohol and drugs.

refinement: Celeste has a love-hate affair with drugs and alcohol, more like frenemies or a symbiotic relationship where the substances give her the courage to dance with her weekend friends, only to leave her system violently the moment she feels drunk. She needs drugs and alcohol to be bold enough to party but curses them when she gets too sick to go on. She thinks the alcohol is a vile guardian.

answer: Celeste is a high school student who attends a good school and has great grades. She is a good girl who has ambitions of business and law. She is a social butterfly who likes to party. She is a good friend to Darcy and has a good relationship with him. However, she is a social drinker. She is a good girl who has a good relationship with her parents. She is a young girl who likes to have fun. She is a good dancer, but she is not a party girl. She is a good girl who does not waste her life. She is a good girl who does not drink and drive. She is a good girl who does not get drunk. She is a good girl who does not smoke cigarettes. She is a good girl who does not do drugs.

text: The response is incorrect and doesn't answer the question.

text: Add the proper response to the question.

refinement: Celeste has a love-hate affair with drugs and alcohol, more like frenemies or a symbiotic relationship where the substances give her the courage to dance with her weekend friends, only to leave her system violently the moment she feels drunk. She needs drugs and alcohol to be bold enough to party but curses them when she gets too sick to go on.

answer: Celeste drinks a lot and she's not used to it. She feels sick and vomits. She regrets drinking so much and vows to never do it again.

answer: Celeste is a high school student who attends a good school and has great grades. She is a good girl who has ambitions of business and law. She is a social butterfly who likes to party. She is a good friend to Darcy and has a good relationship with him. However, she is a social drinker. She is a good girl who has a good relationship with her parents. She is a young girl who likes to have fun. She is a good dancer, but she is not a party girl. She is a good girl who does not waste her life. She is a good girl who does not drink and drive. She is a good girl who does not get drunk. She is a good girl who does not smoke cigarettes. She is a good girl who does not do drugs.

answer: The story does not mention Celeste's past. It simply notes that she is an accomplished and responsible teenager who owns a lot of talents and aspirations. Celeste appears to have a fixation on appearances. She prepares extensively before she goes to Darcy's gathering. She is focused on accruing synthetic pleasures. In addition to attending Vanity Heights, she cares a lot about her looks, hair and scent.

text: The response is incorrect and fails to answer the question.

text: Must add details about Celeste's relationship with alcohol and drugs.

refinement: Celeste has a love-hate affair with drugs and alcohol, more like frenemies or a symbiotic relationship where the substances give her the courage to dance with her weekend friends, only to leave her system violently the moment she feels drunk. She needs drugs and alcohol to be bold enough to party but curses them when she gets too sick to go on.

answer: Celeste loves to party. She and Darcy have an ongoing friendship, which is shown in how comfortable she is in his house and how she is used to the crowd. Their relationship has been going for four years, so she's not new to the set up of being around drugs and alcohol. She finds herself with a lot of freedom and a lot of people saying yes to what she wants.

text: The response is irrelevant and doesn't answer the question.

text: Must include details about Celeste's relationship with drugs and alcohol.

refinement: Celeste has a love-hate affair with drugs and alcohol, more like frenemies or a symbiotic relationship where the substances give her the courage to dance with her weekend friends, only to leave her system violently the moment she feels drunk. She needs drugs and alcohol to be bold enough to party but curses them when she gets too sick to go on.

answer: Celeste loves to party. She finds herself with a lot of freedom and a lot of people saying yes to what she wants.

answer: She is a teenage girl who used to be quiet when she was younger. She was very responsible, worked hard in school and was expected to be a responsible human being. One day, she goes to Darcy's party and on her way to drunkenness, an insult to her life. She was having a good time with her friends but then ate too much and saw she sick.

text: The response is incorrect and fails to answer the question.

text: Must add details of Celeste's relationship with alcohol and drugs.

refinement: Celeste has a love-hate affair with drugs and alcohol, more like frenemies or a symbiotic relationship where the substances give her the courage to dance with her weekend friends, only to leave her system violently the moment she feels drunk. She needs drugs and alcohol to be bold enough to party but curses them when she gets too sick to go on.


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Michigan has become the first state to ban the National Security Agency’s intrusive data collection practices by passing a law that prohibits law enforcement and state agencies from turning over personal data to the federal government without due process.

The Fourth Amendment Rights Protection Act, or HB4430, will go into effect next month after it passed the Michigan state legislature with overwhelming support and only one “_no_” vote.

The text of the bill states that its purpose is “_TO_ _PROHIBIT THIS STATE AND CERTAIN OTHER GOVERNMENTAL AGENTS, EMPLOYEES, AND ENTITIES IN THIS STATE FROM ASSISTING A FEDERAL AGENCY IN OBTAINING CERTAIN FORMS OF DATA WITHOUT A WARRANT; AND TO PROHIBIT CERTAIN USES OF CERTAIN DATA COLLECTED WITHOUT A WARRANT_.”

According to the new law, the state and its political subdivisions “_shall not assist, participate with, or provide material support or resources to a federal agency to enable it to collect or to facilitate in the collection or use of a person’s electronic data or metadata,”_ unless at least or more of the following criteria are met:

1.  The person has given informed consent.
2.  The action is pursuant to a warrant that is based upon probable cause and particularly describes the person, place, or thing to be searched or seized.
3.  The action is in accordance with a legally recognized exception to warrant requirements.
4.  The action will not infringe on any reasonable expectation of privacy the person may have.
5.  This state or a political subdivision of this state collected the electronic data or metadata legally.”

As the Washington Examiner reported, the new law is “_THE_ _BIGGEST ACCOMPLISHMENT YET GROWING OUT OF EFFORTS TO BLOCK WATER TO A MASSIVE NSA DATA-STORAGE CENTER IN BLUFFDALE, UTAH_.” Similar laws have been proposed and have fallen short in states such as Alaska, Maryland, South Carolina, and Washington.

The Fourth Amendment Rights Protection Act in Michigan claims the “_electronic data_” that will be protected from the NSA includes “_an electronic communication or the use of an electronic communication service_,” “_the precise or approximate location of the sender or recipients of an electronic communication,_” and “_the identity of an individual or device involved in the communication.”_

Michigan State Rep. Martin Howrylak, a sponsor of the bill, told the Examiner that he believes its passage “_SPEAKS TO THE FACT THAT A LOT OF THE DOMESTIC SURVEILLANCE OF AMERICAN CITIZENS IS HIGHLY UNPOPULAR._”

_“It hangs up a sign on Michigan’s door saying, ‘No violation of the Fourth Amendment, look elsewhere,'”_ Howrylak said. _“Democrats, as well as Republicans, would certainly stand very strong in our position on what this law means.”_

While Howrylak said he thinks the law makes “_a strong court case saying this is what the state intends_,” he hopes other states will join in by passing similar legislation, in an effort to cripple the NSA’s illegal activities.

Next month marks 5 years since former NSA contractor Edward Snowden released a trove of classified documents revealing that the United States government was routinely collecting metadata from innocent American citizens without warrants, and using “_national security_” to justify its actions.

While the NSA’s warrantless data collection was ruled illegal by a court in June 2015, it has continued and the government has attempted to cover up its illegal actions by writing them into law. The latest example of this occurred earlier this year when Congress reauthorized Section 702 of the Foreign Intelligence Surveillance Act (FISA).

Section 702 has served as the foundation for the NSA’s largest and most egregious surveillance programs for the last decade. The first attempt to reauthorize it was through the introduction of the USA Liberty Act. As The Free Thought Project reported, Congress claimed the bill would “_better protect Americans’ privacy_” by requiring the government to have “_a legitimate national security purpose_” before searching an individual’s database.

However, what the bill did not advertise was the fact that it did not actually address the legitimate problems that exist with Section 702. The FBI’s “_legitimate national security purpose_” could be justified by just about any reason the agency chooses to give, and agents would only need supervisory authority in order to search Americans’ metadata.

When the USA Liberty Act failed, the House Permanent Select Committee on Intelligence introduced the FISA Amendments Reauthorization Act of 2017, which renewed Section 702 for six years, after it was included in a massive spending bill passed by Congress.

By signing the Fourth Amendment Rights Protection Act into law, the state of Michigan is taking a stand against the federal government’s unconstitutional practice of stealing data from innocent Americans without a warrant, and it is setting a precedent for other states in the country to follow.

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question: What is the purpose of this article?

answer: The purpose of this article is to inform readers about the reality of the government’s intrusion into private individuals’ life. The author believes that this Orwellian practice is highly controversial and inhumane.

text: The tone of the article seems overall to be neutral, so the line about the author's opinion on the practice seems fabricated.

refinement: The purpose of this article is to inform readers about the reality of the government’s intrusion into private individuals’ life.

text: The purpose of the article is not to discuss the government's intrusion in general, but more to discuss a specific policy that passed in Michigan.

refinement: The purpose of this article is to inform readers about Michigan's Fourth Amendment Rights Protection Act, which prohibits law enforcement and state agencies from turning over personal data to the federal government without due process.

answer: To inform Michigan's move to block the federal government's pervasive data collection practices.

text: Omits mention of who is being informed.

refinement: To inform readers about Michigan's move to block the federal government's pervasive data collection practices.

text: "Michigan has become the first state to ban the National Security Agency’s intrusive data collection practices by passing a law that prohibits law enforcement and state agencies from turning over personal data to the federal government without due process" is evidence that the article's main focus is Michigan's move to block pervasive data collection processes.

answer: To inform of the ban passed by Michigan on intrusive data collection practices, explain the content of the ban and its implications.

text: Doesn't mention who is being informed.

refinement: To inform readers of the ban passed by Michigan on intrusive data collection practices, explain the content of the ban and its implications.

text: Missing a conjunction.

refinement: To inform readers of the ban passed by Michigan on intrusive data collection practices and to explain the content of the ban and its implications.

question: Why has this ban been passed?

answer: The National Security Agency extensively collects data on individuals without a warrant.

text: The statement does not clarify what the ban hopes to accomplish.

refinement: To prevent organizations like the National Security Agency from extensively collecting data on individuals without a warrant.

text: "Michigan has become the first state to ban the National Security Agency’s intrusive data collection practices" is evidence that the law is in reaction to the NSA's intrusive data collection practices.

text: The fact that the purpose of the law is to "PROHIBIT THIS STATE AND CERTAIN OTHER GOVERNMENTAL AGENTS, EMPLOYEES, AND ENTITIES IN THIS STATE FROM ASSISTING A FEDERAL AGENCY IN OBTAINING CERTAIN FORMS OF DATA WITHOUT A WARRANT" implies that pershapd the NSA collected such data without a warrant previously.

answer: This has been passed in order to check against the such kind of blatant invasion of privacy by the federal government.

text: The phrase "to check against the such kind" is confusing.

refinement: This has been passed in order to prevent the blatant invasion of privacy by the federal government.

answer: In order to prevent local law enforcement from turning the personal data they have gathered over to federal government without due process.

text: "by passing a law that prohibits law enforcement and state agencies from turning over personal data to the federal government without due process" is evidence that this is the purpose of the ban.

question: When was this written?

answer: Probably 2018.

text: "Next month marks 5 years since former NSA contractor Edward Snowden released a trove of classified documents" provides a hint as to the timeframe.

answer: April 2018 - it mentions that the next month will mark 5 years since Edward Snowden released documents revealing the extent of the US government gathering data on citizens, which happened in May 2013.

answer: That information can't be found

question: What data can still be collected after this ban?

answer: It is possible for data to be collected if the FBI claims there is a legitimate national security purposes.

text: This is incorrect. There are even further restrictions given, as the FBI were previously able to use "legitimate national security purpose" to justify any reason they had for collecting data.

refinement:
It is possible for data to be collected if:
1) The person has given informed consent
2) The action is pursuant to a warrant based on probably cause and particularly describes the person, place, or thing being searched or seized
3) The action is in accordance with a legally recognized exception to warrant requirements
4) The action won't infringe on any reasonable expectation of privacy the person may have
5) Michigan or a political subdivision of Michigan collected the electronic data or metadata legally

answer: Electronic data

text: Does not mention the requirements for collecting such data

refinement: Electronic data, so long as one or more of the 5 criteria listed are met

answer: Generally speaking entire electronic communications can still be collected without warrant, including location, phone numbers, email addresses, names, and other metadata.

text: This is incorrect. That information can only be collected without a warrant in specific circumstances.

refinement: Generally speaking entire electronic communications can still be collected, including location, phone numbers, email addresses, names, and other metadata, so long as one or more of the criteria listed are met.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Michigan becomes the first state in the country to pass legislation to prohibit the NSA from accessing citizens' electronic data without a warrant, to protect our fourth amendment rights. They also raise the issue of passing this legislation all over the country to effectively hinder the NSA and the federal government from its mass surveillance.

text: Unclear who "They" is referring to.

refinement: Michigan becomes the first state in the country to pass legislation to prohibit the NSA from accessing citizens' electronic data without a warrant, to protect our fourth amendment rights. Michigan State Rep. Martin Howrylak also raises the issue of passing this legislation all over the country to effectively hinder the NSA and the federal government from its mass surveillance.

text: "TO_ _PROHIBIT THIS STATE AND CERTAIN OTHER GOVERNMENTAL AGENTS, EMPLOYEES, AND ENTITIES IN THIS STATE FROM ASSISTING A FEDERAL AGENCY IN OBTAINING CERTAIN FORMS OF DATA WITHOUT A WARRANT; AND TO PROHIBIT CERTAIN USES OF CERTAIN DATA COLLECTED WITHOUT A WARRANT" is evidence that, according to the legislation, government agencies like the NSA cannot collect personal data without a warrant.

text: "he hopes other states will join in by passing similar legislation" is evidnce that the issue of passing this legislation all over the country is raised by the article.

answer: The Fourth Amendment Rights Protection Act, or HB4430, will go into effect next month after it passed the Michigan state legislature with overwhelming support and only one "_no_" vote. The text of the bill states that its purpose is “_TO_ _PROHIBIT THIS STATE AND CERTAIN OTHER GOVERNMENTAL AGENTS, EMPLOYEES, AND ENTITIES IN THIS STATE FROM ASSISTING A FEDERAL AGENCY IN OBTAINING CERTAIN FORMS OF DATA WITHOUT A WARRANT; AND TO PROHIBIT CERTAIN USES OF CERTAIN DATA COLLECTED WITHOUT A WARRANT_.”

text: Confusing formatting.

refinement: The Fourth Amendment Rights Protection Act, or HB4430, will go into effect next month after it passed the Michigan state legislature with overwhelming support and only one "no" vote. The text of the bill states that its purpose is “TO PROHIBIT THIS STATE AND CERTAIN OTHER GOVERNMENTAL AGENTS, EMPLOYEES, AND ENTITIES IN THIS STATE FROM ASSISTING A FEDERAL AGENCY IN OBTAINING CERTAIN FORMS OF DATA WITHOUT A WARRANT; AND TO PROHIBIT CERTAIN USES OF CERTAIN DATA COLLECTED WITHOUT A WARRANT.”

text: The answer directly copies from the source text (paragraphs 2 and 3).

answer: Michigan just passed a law to give more power to the state against the National Security Agency, by banning any type of data collection without warrant. This law passed through the state legislature with overwhelming support and only one "no" vote.

text: "AND TO PROHIBIT CERTAIN USES OF CERTAIN DATA COLLECTED WITHOUT A WARRANT" is ecidence that the collection of data without warrant has been banned.

text: "it passed the Michigan state legislature with overwhelming support and only one “_no_” vote." is evidence that the law passed with overwhelming support and only one "no" vote.

answer: The Fourth Amendment Rights Protection Act was passed in Michigan to protect the privacy of citizens against NSA collection of data.

text: "Michigan has become the first state to ban the National Security Agency’s intrusive data collection practices by passing a law that prohibits law enforcement and state agencies from turning over personal data to the federal government without due process" is evidence that the law protects citizens against the NSA's collection of data.

text: "The Fourth Amendment Rights Protection Act, or HB4430, will go into effect next month after it passed the Michigan state legislature" is evidence that the law is called The Fourth Amendment Rights Protection Act.

answer: Michigan has become the first state to ban the National Security Agency's intrusive data collection practices, by passing a law that prohibits law enforcement and state agencies from turning over personal data to the federal government without due process. The use of warrantless data against Americans has been illegal since June of 2015 however, the law has still been well upheld.

text: "While the NSA’s warrantless data collection was ruled illegal by a court in June 2015, it has continued and the government has attempted to cover up its illegal actions by writing them into law" implies that the law hasn't necessarily been upheld.

refinement: Michigan has become the first state to ban the National Security Agency's intrusive data collection practices, by passing a law that prohibits law enforcement and state agencies from turning over personal data to the federal government without due process. The use of warrantless data against Americans has been illegal since June of 2015 however, the warantless use of such data has persisted.

answer: Michigan has become the first state to pass a ban limiting the National Security Agency's intrusive data-collection practices. It is being celebrated as a victory for data privacy, but there are still gaps.

text: "Michigan has become the first state to ban the National Security Agency’s intrusive data collection practices" is evidence that Michigan is the first state to ban such practices.

text: "he hopes other states will join in by passing similar legislation, in an effort to cripple the NSA’s illegal activities" supports the idea that there are still gaps, namely that other states have yet to pass similar legislation.