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TIMOTHY HALLINAN (born April 28, 1945) is an American politician and a Republican member of the Wyoming House of Representatives for District 41 for the term starting January 10, 2017.[1]

Career

Hallinan is a retired physician who previously served in the Wyoming House of Representatives from 2007 until 2011.[2]

Elections

2016

After incumbent Republican Representative Norine Kasperik announced her retirement, Hallinan declared his candidacy for the seat. He faced Republicans Don Dihle, Jarik Dudley, and Grant Lindblom in the primary. Hallinan won the primary with 42% of the vote.[3] He ran unopposed in the general election.[4]

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title: Timothy Hallinan (politician)

question: Who was Timothy Hallinan?

text: There is no answer

answer: an American politician and Republican member of the Wyoming House of Representatives for District 41 for the term starting January 10, 2017

answer: He was a Republican member of the Wyoming House of Representatives for District 41 for the term starting January 10, 2017.

question: What did Timothy Hallinan do before getting into politics?

answer: According to the passage, Hallinan is a retired physician.

answer: Timothy Hallinan is an American politician.

text: Not relevant.

refinement: Timothy Hallinan is a retired physician.

answer: he was a physician

question: Who did Timothy Hallinan run against in 2016?

answer: Don Dihl, Jarik Dudley and Grant Lindbloom

text: It could be more specific.

refinement: He ran against Don Dihle, Jarik Dudley, and Grant Lindblom in the primary and ran unopposed in the general election.

answer: Runs against Don Dihle, Jarik Dudley and Grant Lindblom

text: It could be more specific.

refinement: He ran against Don Dihle, Jarik Dudley, and Grant Lindblom in the primary and ran unopposed in the general election.

answer: He ran unopposed in the 2016 general election.

text: An incomplete answer.

refinement: He ran against Don Dihle, Jarik Dudley, and Grant Lindblom in the primary and ran unopposed in the general election.

question: When was Timothy Hallinan born?

answer: April 28, 1945

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answer: April 28, 1945

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Timothy Hallinan is an American politician and Republican member of the Wyoming House of Representatives for District 41 for the term starting January 10, 2017.

answer: Timothy Hallinan is a retired physician and a Republican member of the Wyoming House of Representatives.

answer: In 2012 Timothy Hallinan was elected to the Wyoming House of Representatives with 42% of the vote. He won re-election in 2016 with 67% of the vote.

text: It is not stated that he won re-election in 2016 with 67% of the vote. It is stated that Hallinan won the primary with 42% of the vote

refinement: Timothy Hallinan is an American politician and Republican member of the Wyoming House of Representatives for District 41 for the term starting January 10, 2017.

answer: Dr. Timothy Hallinan is an American politician who is a Republican.

text: Could be more specific

refinement: Dr. Timothy Hallinan is an American politician and a Republican member of the Wyoming House of Representatives for District 41 for the term starting January 10, 2017.

answer: After serving in the Wyoming House of Representatives (2007-2011) and winning a 2016 primary, Hallinan is once again elected to serve as a Republican member of the Wyoming House of Representatives for District 41 for the term starting January 2017.

answer: Timothy Hallinan is a Wyoming House of Representatives member. He retired from the practice of medicine to run for office. In 2016, he ran for the open seat after incumbent Norine Kasperik announced her retirement.

text: It is incorrect that  he retired from the practice of medicine to run for office

refinement: Timothy Hallinan is a Wyoming House of Representatives member. He retired from the practice of medicine to run for office. In 2016, he ran for the open seat after incumbent Norine Kasperik announced her retirement.

text: The term and the district are omitted

refinement: Timothy Hallinan is a Wyoming House of Representatives member District 41 for the term starting January 10, 2017. In 2016, he ran for the open seat after incumbent Norine Kasperik announced her retirement.

text: Kasperik's retirement is not that important

refinement: Timothy Hallinan is a Wyoming House of Representatives member District 41 for the term starting January 10, 2017.


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Just south of a small mountain range, a cool spring breeze passed through a stone monastery. The overgrown ivy covering the northern face of the building danced as the wind tickled its bountiful growth. From the top of the smooth cut stone structure the ivy had crept to meet the rocky cliff face upon which the monastery was perched. Green ivy, grey rock, and beige stone lay against a backdrop of deep, clear blue, as the sky was brimming with colour at the onset of the new season. The monastery was a large, square compound, with four stone parapets at each corner of the building, the northernmost being flush against the cliff face. At the centre was a circular courtyard, filled with beds of flowers and shrubs around the perimeter of the courtyard. Forming this perimeter were a series of stone pillars, the bases of which were buried beneath the lush green of the plants. Atop one of the pillars was a nest of sparrows, and the birds fluttered around the courtyard, singing cheerfully.
	That friendly mountain breeze made its way into the courtyard, towards a simple wooden bench that faced the mild warmth of the afternoon sun. It brushed aside the hem of a white robe, cooling the ankles of the monk sitting alone on the bench. He was an old man, whose ample belly was poorly disguised by his simple clothes, yet his face had retained its youthful glow, enhanced by his bald pate gleaming in the sunlight. His eyes squinted against the sun as he smiled contentedly, listening to the sparrows’ concert and taking in the fresh growth of greenery. His smile widened as he heard the faint clapping of sandaled feet on stone tiles. The dim sound grew in resonance as the footsteps approached, and from his seat on the bench the monk called out cheerfully,
	“Good afternoon, Brother,”
	The newcomer emerged from within the monastery, coming into view, similarly clothed in a white habit, yet a bit younger than his colleague. Unlike the seated monk, he was quite thin, and though he was not smiling, he had an honest, open face.
	“May I join you?”
	“Of course! Please sit.”
	The slender monk then held up the jug and two cups he had been holding, and smiled faintly, to which the older monk laughed and patted him on the shoulder as he lowered himself onto the bench.
	“I suppose it is never too early to celebrate such a fine day” he said.
  	The second man carefully poured a cup of red wine, and passed it to his companion, after which he poured himself a cup. For several minutes they both sat in silence, sipping their wine and admiring the courtyard and its garden. Finally, the thinner monk placed his cup on the ground next to the jug of wine, and fixed his gaze on the heavyset monk.
	“The vote is tomorrow, the monastery is in a furor, it is quite a nuisance.”
	The older monk chuckled and returned the look, “I have been through many such votes, and this is by far the most tiresome of them all.”
	Not known for outbursts of laughter, the younger monk gave a hearty grin, flashing what teeth he had left before remarking, “We are priests, not politicians, my friend. I should say this is ill befitting our station. Such ambition is better left to the less morally inclined.”
	In response his companion simply smiled, looked down at his cup, and took a sip, his light grey eyes surveying the wine like a hawk watched a rabbit. The younger man likewise took a sip, his eyes watching his friend as he swallowed the warm red liquid.
	“Brother,” he said, smiling, “I’m afraid you’ve besmirched your habit.”
	The larger monk stared at him, watching his eyes and his smug expression as he slowly reached his arm towards his friend’s throat, only to gently place his slender finger upon a red stain at the collar of the robe. The culprit was not hidden, as a line of red was visible on the large monk’s cup from where the wine had spilled.
	Breaking eye contact and looking down at his lap, the bald man laughed, tut-tutting to himself, “That won’t do at all,” he said.
	“Yes,” his friend said slowly, looking at the patch of red, “that stain must be removed.”
	“Or perhaps, I could simply find a way to hide it,” he said as he watched the thin man, “with so many habits and so many monks, I’m sure there are more than a few concealed stains amongst our ranks.”
	The skinny monk’s face bore an expression of sincere contemplation as his eyes bored into the large monk’s robe, “Perhaps,” he said.
	He reached down to collect the jug and his own cup, rising from the bench. His robe had gone into disarray, and he quietly adjusted it before turning back towards the older monk. They shared a warm smile as each stared at the other, with the hefty monk raising his cup in front of his sharp grey eyes as he said through grinning teeth, “My thanks, for the drink, Brother.”
	The thin man nodded to him, and headed for the interior of the monastery, his sandals playing the same song against the stone that they had when he approached, only this time in reverse. As the song faded to nothing, the solitary monk once more perked his eyes and ears toward the chattering sparrows.
	The sun was still out, the sky was still blue, the garden was still radiant, and the birds still sang. As he finished his wine, the monk contemplated the one thing he knew with certainty on that beautiful day. For himself, or the man who just left, there would be no sun, no sky, no garden, no birds, no wine, waiting for them tomorrow. Only death. He decided then that he had not yet had his fill of such marvelous spring days.
	“Now then,” he said, laboriously rising from the bench, “I suppose I should see about removing this stain.”

title: [FN] The White Habit

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about drinking wine?

answer: The story says that while drinking red wine is enjoyable, it stains white robes. In the larger view, the story emphasizes wine's importance in the life of monks, but also the fragility and reality of death.

text: The response misses to mention the need to hide their habit and their suspicion that more monks share the habit.

refinement: The story says that while drinking red wine is enjoyable, it stains white robes. In the larger view, the story emphasizes wine's importance in the life of monks, but also the fragility and reality of death. It seems that they need to hide their habit. They suspect more monks share the habit.

answer: The narrator meets with a brother. He brings a jug and two cups of wine. The pair quickly begins to drink. The other brother spills some wine and the narrator and him begin laughing. The narrator has his last sip of wine and pauses to take a look at the star in his collar. He then tells his brother that it will be better for him to find a way to hide the stain than to simply remove it. They get up from the bench and go their separate ways.

text: The response incorrectly mention that protagonist as the narrator and misses to refer to them as monks.

refinement: The protagonist is a monk and meets with a fellow brother. One monk brings a jug and two cups of wine. The pair quickly begins to drink. The other brother spills some wine and the narrator and him begin laughing. The narrator has his last sip of wine and pauses to take a look at the star in his collar. He then tells his brother that it will be better for him to find a way to hide the stain than to simply remove it. They get up from the bench and go their separate ways.

text: The response inaccurately refers to the stain on the collar as a star.

refinement: The protagonist is a monk and meets with a fellow brother. One monk brings a jug and two cups of wine. The pair quickly begins to drink. The other brother spills some wine and the narrator and him begin laughing. The narrator has his last sip of wine and pauses to take a look at the stain in his collar. He then tells his brother that it will be better for him to find a way to hide the stain than to simply remove it. They get up from the bench and go their separate ways.

text: The response misrepresents the story when it states they both get up from the bench. It was only the slender monk that had brought the wine.

refinement: The protagonist is a monk and meets with a fellow brother. One monk brings a jug and two cups of wine. The pair quickly begins to drink. The other brother spills some wine and the narrator and him begin laughing. The narrator has his last sip of wine and pauses to take a look at the stain in his collar. He then tells his brother that it will be better for him to find a way to hide the stain than to simply remove it. The slender monk that had brought the wine, gets up from the bench and goes to the interior of the monastery.

answer: The story's main characters are monks who go to the only wine being produced in the world. The characters alternate sipping the drinking of the wine on a handheld cup. One of the monks then notices a red stain on the other monk's shirt that came from the wine. They joke about the stain in a friendly manner. Drinking the wine made them very relaxed.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: The characters alternate sipping the drinking of the wine on a handheld cup. One of the monks then notices a red stain on the other monk's shirt that came from the wine. They joke about the stain in a friendly manner.

text: The response misses to mention the need to hide their habit and their suspicion that more monks share the habit.

refinement: The characters alternate sipping the drinking of the wine on a handheld cup. One of the monks then notices a red stain on the other monk's shirt that came from the wine. They joke about the stain in a friendly manner. It seems that they need to hide their habit. However, they suspect more monks share the habit.

answer: At first glance, the story seems to take a positive stance on the consumption of wine. Throughout the passage, wine is referenced favorably by the characters, and it is repeatedly linked to the joy of the natural world. Despite this, there is also an underlying warning within the story, as in the end it is realized that there is nothing left for the characters after death, besides the stain wine leaves. Ultimately, by bucking the trend of being more concerned with ambition rather than morality, the story seems to urge the reader to moderate their drinking habits lest they miss out on the beauty of life.

text: The response misses to mention the need to hide their habit and their suspicion that more monks share the habit.

refinement: At first glance, the story seems to take a positive stance on the consumption of wine. Throughout the passage, wine is referenced favorably by the characters, and it is repeatedly linked to the joy of the natural world. Despite this, there is also an underlying warning within the story, as in the end it is realized that there is nothing left for the characters after death, besides the stain wine leaves. Ultimately, by bucking the trend of being more concerned with ambition rather than morality, the story seems to urge the reader to moderate their drinking habits lest they miss out on the beauty of life.  It seems that they need to hide their habit. However, they suspect more monks share the habit.

answer: The two monks portrayed in the story both enjoy drinking it. However, it seems that they need to hide their habit. They suspect more monks share their habit.


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GOVERNMENTAL IMPACT ON SCIENCE DURING WORLD WAR II represents the effect of public administration on technological development that provided many advantages to the armed forces, economies and societies in their strategies during the war.

Pre-war scientific research

By implementing the notion that something needs to be done, political leaders influence scientists. For example, when discussing the development of weapons in order to protect the country, no urgency would arise if emphasis was not placed on the word ‘need.’ Urgency applies pressure on the scientists which leads to stress and paranoia. With these aspects bestowed upon a person, competition to succeed before someone else has, more often than not, proven to be the answer. This relieves stress and makes both the person doing the work and the government, who now has what they wanted, happy… a cruel psychological mind game played by the government.

Political-scientific relationship

With the scientific communities largely dependent on government funding, intrigues by individuals in the bureaucracies, and removal of freedoms due to the wartime environment, and virtual nationalisation of industrial research and development for the war effort governments influences on science escalated substantially during times of war.

Because the scientists were the personnel required to aid war effort of various belligerents, they lost both scientific and personal freedoms. Since they were too busy developing technologies for the military, they had little, if any, time to work on their own research. Along with that, much time was needed for research, resulting in increasing disassociation with their families.

Financing wartime science

Money is a very powerful tool. That is why government funding was, and still is today, a way for nations to influence their respective scientists. With funding, the opportunity to expand research becomes present. Since more enhanced equipment can be harnessed and the most qualified men are at hand to operate it, more productive results come forth. In 1936, the Four Year Plan for rearmament and autarky, a plan assembled after the Treaty of Versailles to help modernize the German military, put in large amounts of money and resources in new, science-based technologies.[1] Moreover, aerodynamic researchers in Germany received generous funding to construct wind tunnels and mathematically design aircraft, missiles, and torpedoes.[2] Since these technologies were developed with the support of government funding, it is discernible that many scientists and scientific programs saw this as beneficial for their nation’s military and overall war effort.

Manhattan Project

[A few months after he was put in charge of fast neutron research, Berkeley physicist J. Robert Oppenheimer convened a conference on the topic of nuclear weapon design.] The most often cited example of government impact on science is the development of the atomic bomb under the auspices of the Office of Scientific Research and Development that proved the United States the option to not conduct the assault on Japan, and end the war earlier. The result of scientific skills deficiency, decisions of political leaders had no other choice but to seek the assistance of their countries most knowledgeable, scientists. Though nations from all over the globe have their own range of scientists, physicists and chemists were the primary source for help during World War II. These men were the individuals primarily responsible for the development of innovative technology, such as the atomic bomb, during the war. Without these developments, the war would have been stuck in first gear, devoid of continuity.

The quest for the atomic bomb was steadily growing stronger due to the new scientific developments coming about. In 1922, just four years after World War I, a man by the name of F.W. Aston made an intriguing statement. Aston, a Nobel Laureate in chemistry, claimed that should atomic energy ever be released in practical form, “the human race will have at its command powers beyond the dreams of science fiction.”[3] This stimulated the minds of many political leaders. It seemed as though power would substantially increase as a result of the creation and possession of this so-called ‘weapon of mass-destruction’. Thus the race to build an atomic bomb quickly commenced. Many scientists from all over the world were working day and night to develop something that could only be described as the answer to ending the war.

[1] p.108, Grunden, Walker, Yamazaki

[2] p.109-110, Grunden, Walker, Yamazaki

[3] p.169, Hartcup

title: Governmental impact on science during World War II

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the qualities that make a good nuclear scientist?

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: The text doesn't really say anything about the qualities that make a good nuclear scientist.

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about governmental oversight on pre-war scientific research?

answer: No answer

text: The response can't be blank because the information is available in the text.

refinement: Government oversight on pre-war scientific research was like a cruel psychological game played on the scientists. Political leaders pressed the scientific community and instilled a sense of urgency that projects needed to be finished before the enemy finishes theirs. This put pressure, stress, and paranoia on the scientists to succeed. More often than not, they did succeed, and both the government and scientists were happy, but at a great cost to the lives of the scientists.

answer: According to the author, political leaders play a huge role in influencing scientists by placing a lot of notions in the minds of the scientists. For example, if government leaders emphasize immediate action on developments in defense and security, scientists would also put pressure to make sure that things reach a certain level of urgency. Political leaders influence scientists in the pre-war context by playing a so-called cruel psychological mind game to see who can do the job first.

answer: Governmental leadership influences what work or research takes place in the fields of science as well as how it gets funded under their administration, since they are the ones to budget scientific funding. For example, when discussing the development of weapons in order to protect the country, no urgency would arise if emphasis was not placed on the word “need.” With political leaders creating stress and paranoia around a field to get what they want, scientists are motivated to compete for finding a solution before the other party does. Competing for the same goal releases tension and stress straining a person both mentally and physically, and sometimes even caused paranoia, particularly after proving someone else wrong.

text: Remove the comma.

refinement: Governmental leadership influences what work or research takes place in the fields of science as well as how it gets funded under their administration since they are the ones to budget scientific funding. For example, when discussing the development of weapons in order to protect the country, no urgency would arise if emphasis was not placed on the word “need.” With political leaders creating stress and paranoia around a field to get what they want, scientists are motivated to compete for finding a solution before the other party does. Competing for the same goal releases tension and stress straining a person both mentally and physically, and sometimes even caused paranoia, particularly after proving someone else wrong.

text: Add "the" to "emphasis"

refinement: Governmental leadership influences what work or research takes place in the fields of science as well as how it gets funded under their administration since they are the ones to budget scientific funding. For example, when discussing the development of weapons in order to protect the country, no urgency would arise if the emphasis was not placed on the word “need.” With political leaders creating stress and paranoia around a field to get what they want, scientists are motivated to compete for finding a solution before the other party does. Competing for the same goal releases tension and stress straining a person both mentally and physically, and sometimes even caused paranoia, particularly after proving someone else wrong.

answer: No answer

answer: The government influences scientists by placing an emphasis on the need for developing weapons to protect the country. This leads to competition and stress.

answer: Governmental leadership influences what work or research takes place in science fields as well as how it gets funded. For example, when discussing the development of weapons in order to protect the country, no urgency would arise if emphasis was not placed on the word “need.” With political leaders creating stress and paranoia around a field to get what they want, scientists are motivated to compete for finding a solution before the other party does. Competing for the same goal releases tension and stress straining a person both mentally and physically, and sometimes even caused paranoia, particularly after proving someone else wrong.

answer: When discussing the development of weapons in order to protect the country, no urgency would arise if emphasis was not placed on the word ‘need.’ Urgency applies pressure on the scientists which leads to stress and paranoia. With these aspects bestowed upon a person, competition to succeed before someone else has, more often than not, proven to be the answer. This relieves stress and makes both the person doing the work and the government, who now has what they wanted, happy… a cruel psychological mind game played by the government.

text: Add "the" to "emphasis"

refinement: When discussing the development of weapons in order to protect the country, no urgency would arise if the emphasis was not placed on the word ‘need.’ Urgency applies pressure on the scientists which leads to stress and paranoia. With these aspects bestowed upon a person, competition to succeed before someone else has, more often than not, proven to be the answer. This relieves stress and makes both the person doing the work and the government, who now has what they wanted, happy… a cruel psychological mind game played by the government.

answer: Governmental impact on pre-war scientific research could be said to influence scientists by placing notions in their minds. For example, if government leaders emphasize immediate action on development in defense and security, scientists would also put and extend pressure to make sure that things reach a certain level of urgency. Political leaders influence scientists in the pre-war context by playing a so-called cruel psychological mind game which then allows the government to say "I see you have succeeeded".

text: The government never said this.

refinement: Governmental impact on pre-war scientific research could be said to influence scientists by placing notions in their minds. For example, if government leaders emphasize immediate action on development in defense and security, scientists would also put and extend pressure to make sure that things reach a certain level of urgency. Political leaders influence scientists in the pre-war context by playing a so-called cruel psychological mind game.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about what happened to scientists during the war?

answer: No answer

text: The response can't be blank. The information is available in the text.

refinement: The scientists were needed to aid the war effort, so they lost both scientific and personal freedoms. Scientists were too busy developing technologies for the military, they had little, if any, time to work on their own research. So much time was needed for research that scientists spent less time with their families and became disassociated.

answer: The intelligence of the military, economies, and societies during the war was improved by scientists providing advantages to the armed forces through technological developments.

text: The response failed to answer the question.

text: Add the missing details about what happened to the scientists during the war.

refinement: The scientists were needed to aid the war effort, so they lost both scientific and personal freedoms. Scientists were too busy developing technologies for the military, they had little, if any, time to work on their own research. So much time was needed for research that scientists spent less time with their families.

answer: The scientists had their liberty restricted. They lost time to work on their own research due to the war needing scientific plans.

text: Add that they also lost time to be with their families.

refinement: The scientists had their liberty restricted. They lost time to work on their own research due to the war needing scientific plans and became disassociated with their families.

answer: Scientists were largely dependent on government funding, and intrigues by individuals in the bureaucracies and the removal of freedoms due to the wartime environment caused the government to influence science substantially. They were too busy developing technologies for the military, losing both scientific and personal freedoms. They had little time to work on their own research and lost much time with their families.

answer: The scientists had their liberty restricted. They lost much time to work on their own research due to the war needing scientific plans In addition, they lost time to be with their families.The scientists were also very busy working on weapons.

text:
"to work" - change to "working"
Add a space to "The"

refinement: The scientists had their liberty restricted. They lost much time working on their own research due to the war needing scientific plans In addition, they lost time to be with their families. The scientists were also very busy working on weapons.

answer: Scientists lost both their scientific and personal freedoms. They were too busy developing technologies for the military, so they had little time to work on their own research. Their disassociation with their families also increased.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about money and wartime science?

answer: Money is a very powerful tool. Governments use it as a way to influence their respective scientists. Funding helps expand research, which results in more productive results. In 1936, the Four Year Plan for rearmament and autarky, a plan assembled after the Treaty of Versailles to help modernize the German military, put in large amounts of money and resources in new, science-based technologies. Aerodynamic researchers in Germany received generous funding to construct wind tunnels and mathematically design aircraft, missiles, and torpedoes.

answer: Without funding, a nation can't afford to pay their scientists and the most qualified men to operate the equipment and handle the research- and the lack of money will only lead to lack of funding and productivity. Without the willingness of funding a nation, the war effort and technological development cannot properly proceed. Government funding and support are crucial to developing innovative technology and scientist capabilities. Without government funding, the atomic bomb would not have been developed, and Japan might be attacking the US as in Godzilla.

text: Redundant and should be removed.

refinement: Without funding, a nation can't afford to pay their scientists and the most qualified men to operate the equipment and handle the research. Without the willingness of funding a nation, the war effort and technological development cannot properly proceed. Government funding and support are crucial to developing innovative technology and scientist capabilities. Without government funding, the atomic bomb would not have been developed, and Japan might be attacking the US as in Godzilla.

text: The Godzilla reference is pure fantasy and should be removed.

refinement: Without funding, a nation can't afford to pay their scientists and the most qualified men to operate the equipment and handle the research. Without the willingness of funding a nation, the war effort and technological development cannot properly proceed. Government funding and support are crucial to developing innovative technology and scientist capabilities. Without government funding, the atomic bomb would not have been developed.

answer: Money is a very powerful tool that is why government funding was and still is today, a way for nations to influence their respective scientists. With funding, the opportunity to expand research becomes present. Since more enhanced equipment can be harnessed and the most qualified men are at hand to operate it, more productive results come forth. Simply spending a lot of money on research shows that one wants progress, so there's a mutual effort to take care of that. This relationship is strong enough to motivate scientists to be interested in a project, because more than anything they want money to fuel more research.

text: Extraneous information that should be removed.

refinement: Money is a very powerful tool that is why government funding was and still is today, a way for nations to influence their respective scientists. With funding, the opportunity to expand research becomes present. Since more enhanced equipment can be harnessed and the most qualified men are at hand to operate it, more productive results come forth.

answer: Money is a very powerful tool. That is why government funding was and still is a way for nations to influence their respective scientists. With funding, the opportunity to expand research becomes present. Since more enhanced equipment can be harnessed and the most qualified men are at hand to operate it, more productive results come forth. In 1936, the Four Year Plan for rearmament and autarky, a plan assembled after the Treaty of Versailles to help modernize the German military, put in large amounts of money and resources in new, science-based technologies. The quest for the atomic bomb was steadily growing stronger due to the new scientific developments coming about. In 1922, just four years after World War I, a man by the name of F.W. Aston made an intriguing statement. Aston, a Nobel Laureate in chemistry, claimed that should atomic energy ever be released in practical form, “the human race will have at its command powers beyond the dreams of science fiction.”[3] This stimulated the minds of many political leaders. It seemed as though power would substantially increase as a result of the creation and possession of this so-called ‘weapon of mass-destruction’. Thus the race to build an atomic bomb quickly commenced. Many scientists from all over the world were working day and night to develop something that could only be described as the answer to ending the war.

text: Extraneous information that should be removed.

refinement: Money is a very powerful tool. That is why government funding was and still is a way for nations to influence their respective scientists. With funding, the opportunity to expand research becomes present. Since more enhanced equipment can be harnessed and the most qualified men are at hand to operate it, more productive results come forth. In 1936, the Four Year Plan for rearmament and autarky, a plan assembled after the Treaty of Versailles to help modernize the German military, put in large amounts of money and resources in new, science-based technologies.

answer: Money is a very powerful tool. Governments use it as a way to influence their respective scientists. Funding helps expand research, which results in more productive results. In 1936, the Four Year Plan for rearmament and autarky, a plan assembled after the Treaty of Versailles to help modernize the German military, put in large amounts of money and resources in new, science-based technologies. Aerodynamic researchers in Germany received generous funding to construct wind tunnels and mathematically design aircraft, missiles, and torpedoes. The funding of the Manhattan Project by the US government is an example of how money is used to influence scientists.

answer: Money is a very powerful tool that is why government funding was and still is today, a way for nations to influence their respective scientists. With funding, the opportunity to expand research becomes present. Since more enhanced equipment can be harnessed and the most qualified men are at hand to operate it, more productive results come forth. Simply spending a lot of money on research shows that one wants progress, so there's a mutual effort to take care of that. This relationship is strong enough to motivate scientists to be interested in a project.

answer: Money is a very powerful tool. That is why government funding was and still is a way for nations to influence their respective scientists. With funding, the opportunity to expand research becomes present. Since more enhanced equipment can be harnessed and the most qualified men are at hand to operate it, more productive results come forth. In 1936, the Four Year Plan for rearmament and autarky, a plan assembled after the Treaty of Versailles to help modernize the German military, put in large amounts of money and resources in new, science-based technologies.


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[Press Release: L.A. Clippers Sign Avery Bradley]

The L.A. Clippers have re-signed free-agent guard Avery Bradley, it was announced today by President of Basketball Operations, Lawrence Frank. Per team policy, terms of the agreement were not released.

“We are very excited to bring Avery back to the Clippers,” Frank said. “He is an elite competitor, tenacious defender, and a very effective offensive player, who fits the identity of our organization and the profile of a tough, serious player that is committed to winning. Avery’s intensity and proven work ethic will have a direct impact on the performance and personality of this team.”

Bradley, originally acquired by the Clippers on January 29, 2018 via trade, appeared in 46 games for the Clippers and Detroit Pistons last season, averaging 14.3 points, 2.5 rebounds and 1.11 steals in 31.2 minutes. The 6’2”, 180-pound guard has appeared in 459 career games across eight NBA seasons with Boston, Detroit and L.A., holding career averages of 12.3 points, 3.0 rebounds and 1.08 steals in 28.4 minutes.

Bradley was named to the 2016 NBA All-Defensive First Team and 2013 NBA All-Defensive Second Team. Selected 19th overall by Boston out of the University of Texas in 2010, he was a 2009 McDonald’s All-American.

question: Who signed Avery Bradley?

answer: The L.A. Clippers signed free agent Avery Bradley.

answer: The L.A. Clippers signed Avery Bradley.

answer: The L.A. Clippers basketball team.

question: What reasons does the President of Basketball Operations, Lawrance Frank, give about signing Avery Bradley?

answer: He says Bradley is "an elite competitor, tenacious defender, and a very effective offensive player, who fits the identity of our organization" and "the profile of a tough, serious player that is committed to winning."

answer: Lawrence Frank said that Bradley is a competitive player, a tenacious defender, and a very effective offensive player. He also said that Bradley would have an impact on the performance and personality of the team.

answer: He cites Bradley's work ethic and quality of play as influencing their decision to sign him.

text: Answer could offer more detail, since the article gives the relevant information.

refinement: He cites Bradley's work ethic and quality of play as influencing their decision to sign him. Frank is quoted as saying Bradley "is an elite competitor, tenacious defender, and a very effective offensive player, who fits the identity of our organization and the profile of a tough, serious player that is committed to winning."

text: “He is an elite competitor, tenacious defender, and a very effective offensive player, who fits the identity of our organization and the profile of a tough, serious player that is committed to winning.

question: What accomplishments does Avery Bradley have?

answer: Avery Bradley was named to the 2016 NBA All-Defensive First Team.

text: The article gives a full rundown of previous signings, so it is usable in the answer.

refinement: Bradley was named to the 2016 NBA All-Defensive First Team and 2013 NBA All-Defensive Second Team. Selected 19th overall by Boston out of the University of Texas in 2010, he was a 2009 McDonald’s All-American.

answer: He was named to the 2016 NBA All-Defensive First Team and 2017 NBA All-Defensive Second Team.

text: The article gives a full rundown of previous signings, so it is usable in the answer.

refinement: Bradley was named to the 2016 NBA All-Defensive First Team and 2013 NBA All-Defensive Second Team. Selected 19th overall by Boston out of the University of Texas in 2010, he was a 2009 McDonald’s All-American.

answer: He was named to the 2016 NBA All-Defensive First Team and the 2013 NBA All-Defensive Second Team. He also was a 2009 McDonald's All-American.

question: What is the career summary of Avery Bradley?

answer: Avery Bradley is a 6'2", 180 lb. guard. He averaged 12.3 points, 3.0 rebounds, and 1.08 steals in his eight-year career.

answer: He has played eight seasons in the NBA with Boston, Detroit, and L.A. His career average stats are 12.3 points, 3.0 rebounds, and 1.08 steals in 28.4 minutes.

answer: Avery Bradley was traded from Detroit to the L.A. Clippers on Jan. 29, 2018, and averaged 14.3 points, 2.5 rebounds and 1.11 steals in 31.2 minutes in 46 games for the Clippers and Detroit Pistons in the 2017-2018 season. He was named to the 2016 NBA All-Defensive First Team and 2013 NBA All-Defensive Second Team, selected 19th overall by Boston out of Texas in 2010, and was a 2009 McDonald's All-American.

text: Response doesnät give the over-all career stats for Avery, only for the time he spent with The Clippers.

refinement: Bradley holds a career averages of 12.3 points, 3.0 rebounds and 1.08 steals in 28.4 minutes in his 8 Season career for Boston, Detroit and L.A.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: The L.A. Clippers have signed guard Avery Bradley, who is known for his elite defensive ability and offensive effectiveness. Bradley will add intensity and toughness to the Clippers roster.

answer: The L.A. Clippers have re-signed Avery Bradley, a tough and experienced guard. Bradley was originally acquired by the Clippers last January and has averaged 12.3 points and 1.08 steals over his 8-year NBA career.

answer: The L.A. Clippers have re-signed Avery Bradley, a point guard who has been a standout defender in his NBA career. His competitiveness and energy on the court will be a welcome addition for Clippers fans looking for some tough players during the upcoming NBA season.

answer: The L.A. Clippers have re-signed guard Avery Bradley, who will bring tenacity and defensive prowess to the team. Bradley provides a much-needed defensive presence, and his hard-working personality should help boost the team's competitiveness.

text: Unnecessary repetition: '... who will bring tenacity and defensive prowess to the team. Bradley provides a much-needed defensive presence...'

refinement: The L.A. Clippers have re-signed guard Avery Bradley, who will  provide a much-needed defensive presence. Bradley's hard-working personality should help boost the team's competitiveness.

text: A few more details regarding his career would be good in summary.

refinement: The L.A. Clippers have re-signed guard Avery Bradley, who will  provide a much-needed defensive presence. Bradley's hard-working personality should help boost the team's competitiveness. During his 8 year career Bradley jas averages of 12.3 points, 3.0 rebounds and 1.08 steals in 28.4 minutes.

answer: L.A. Clippers sign Avery Bradley, a free-agent guard. President of Basketball Operations Lawrance Frank cites Bradley's quality of play and work ethic as reasons for signing him. Bradley has played 8 seasons in the NBA and was selected to the 2016 NBA All-Defensive First Team as well as making it into the Second Team in 2013.

text: Could use Bradley's stats as a way to emphasise Frank's pints instead of his previous teams.

refinement: L.A. Clippers sign Avery Bradley, a free-agent guard. President of Basketball Operations Lawrance Frank cites Bradley's quality of play and work ethic as reasons for signing him. Bradley has played 8 seasons averaging 12.3 points, 3.0 rebounds and 1.08 steals in 28.4 minutes.

text: Spelling of Lawrence: 'Lawrance'

refinement: L.A. Clippers sign Avery Bradley, a free-agent guard. President of Basketball Operations Lawrence Frank cites Bradley's quality of play and work ethic as reasons for signing him. Bradley has played 8 seasons averaging 12.3 points, 3.0 rebounds and 1.08 steals in 28.4 minutes.

answer: The L.A. Clippers have re-signed Avery Bradley, an NBA veteran who is noted for his defensive intensity and high level of performance. Bradley looks to provide an impact on the Clippers lineup as they attempt to compete for an NBA championship.


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PATCH TAPE:

Patch Tape is polyester cloth tape with a silky smooth texture that will help reduce friction upon release. To get out of tight thumb hole or prevent blister or callous, use Patch Tape to replace messy slide powders or liquid skin products. Patch Tape is ultra thin. You'll hardly know you're wearing it. It doesn't smell, sting or burn like skin and release products and can be easily removed without residue.

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is Patch Tape made out of?

answer: Patch Tape is made of polyester cloth tape with a silky smooth texture.

answer: Polyester cloth

answer: Patch Tape is made out of polyester cloth tape, which is silky smooth to reduce waste.

answer: Patch Tape is polyester cloth tape with a silky smooth texture.

answer: It is made from polyester cloth tape with a silky smooth texture.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What are the benefits of Patch Tape?

answer: It reduces friction upon release and can reduce friction and blistering. It is less messy than other skin products. It can be easily removed without residue.

answer: Its smooth texture reduces friction upon release. It is also ultra thin. It doesn't smell, sting, or burn.

answer: The patch tape is smoother and thinner than skin or other release products and reduces friction upon release. Additionally, it does not smell, sting, or burn and can be easily removed without residue.

answer: Patch Tape reduces friction, prevents blisters and callouses, and can easily be removed without residue.

answer: It eliminates the need for slide powder or liquid skin products. It is thin and comfortable to apply and can be removed easily.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What can Patch Tape be used for?

answer: Patch Tape can be used to reduce friction in thumb holes and prevent blisters and callous. It can also replace messy slide powders and liquid skin products.

answer: Patch Tape can be used to reduce friction upon release. It can also be helpful in preventing blister or callous.

answer: For reducing friction upon release and to prevent blisters and callouses.

answer: Patch Tape can be used to help reduce friction upon release or to prevent blisters or callouses.

answer: To replace messy slide powders or liquid skin products.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What tools need to be purchased separately?

answer: Scissors.

answer: Scissors and patch tape

answer: Scissors

answer: Scissors are the necessary tool that must be purchased separately in order to properly use Patch Tape.

answer: Scissors are the only tool needed in addition to the Patch Tape to complete the task at hand.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: A description of Patch Tape, a substitute for skin care products when working with tape.

answer: The Hybrid Releaser and Patch Tape set includes a latex releaser that is perfect for tight thumb holes or to prevent blister or callous, and stiff but flexible polyester cloth tape to reduce friction.

answer: An advertisement for a product called Patch Tape.

text: A summary should be a complete sentence.

refinement: This is an advertisement for a product called Patch Tape.

answer: The Patch Tape is made of polyester cloth tape with a silky smooth texture, making it a great choice for reducing friction under thumbs. This ultrathin tape can be used to prevent blistering or callous formation.

answer: An advertisement for patch tape: Patch Tape is polyester cloth tape with a silky smooth texture.

text: A summary should be a complete sentence.

refinement: This is an advertisement for patch tape: Patch Tape is polyester cloth tape with a silky smooth texture.


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In the rift there was a lake. A lake like no other on Mons and if a traveller was to stop by for a time he would be shocked to hear a familiar and yet, in this setting, alien sound.

For during the 18 month cycle when Timian and Rala the twin suns sat at their zenith the lake errupted with laughter and song, a cacaphony errupting from the soda brine. Beneath the surface swam small tunicate like creatures of cartilage and bone, their lives spent darting amoungst the water column.  At first glance you would be forgiven to think that the strange denizens were of alien origin, and in a way you would be right; however these seemingly mindless forms were once human, plain dwellers, tool makers.

And so the creatures frolicked and danced and swam and ate and sang but Ullola felt only pain. The one they called Ullola was 800 feet long by the same wide and he, if indeed he was of a gender, lay at the bottom if the lake in what seemed to be eternal slumber. Ullola was jealous of the post humans and their pointless songs and endless chatter. Whilst Ullola was not an angry creature by nature he would often, in a fit of rage, attempt to lash out and harm the post humans but rarely was he successful in his endeavours.

And life went on, and year on year more and more people came to the lake to hear the songs, and the visitors would drop horns and great tubes into the water so as to amplify the sound, and great campfires burned and those who gathered, inspired maybe by the ethereal song, would dance and give thanks to their petty gods and ancestors.

But in all this Ullola remained sad. He no longer feasted on the bacterial mats that did him good and whoch his fore fathers taught him would keep the bad dreams at bay in the long night that gripped Choaban. Instead he slowly decended to the deepest part of the lake, near a town called Dearo to feed on the shrimps and bacteria that clung to the black rocks that were found there.

Ullola grew fat. He feasted and feasted and thought nothing of greedily consuming everything which he could fit in his giant maw. But he was still sad. The chip imbeded in his enormous brain told him to return to the east and sleep, and eat no more of the sweet viands that tasted so good but which made the great god ill.

And so Ullola hauled himself back to his old haunt and sat on what had been his great throne, that great stone bottom worn smooth by his great bulk. But just when everything appeared to be returning to normal a great tragedy struck, for Ullola had eaten too much, far too much and he was in pain. An almighty bellow came forth from the lake taking the revellers by suprise, and even the post humans ceased their seemingly unending seranade fir a moment, so taken back were they by the great din.

Beneath the surface Ullola was ill. The vast quantaties of matter had fermented in his enormous gut and he brought forth a poisonous belch so large and potent that the myriads of post humans that had gathered to tend to Ullola perished in an instant.  And the lake fell silent.

A great outpouring of grief struck those of us who remained by the lake, for we knew that the post humans would sing no more. And for the next million years Ullola would weep for his tiny friends - for deep down he remembered , he remembered why they had sang, they had sang for Ullola, their great god, the one who had brought them to this world, and who had made them so happy.

title: [MF] Ullola and The Lake

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is Ullola's sentiment through the story?

answer: Ullola is displeased with the creation of post humans and wishes he could go back to his old life.

text: Does not fully summarize

refinement: Ullola is jealous of post humans and wishes he could go back to his old life. He retreats to the depths and eats too much and then belches out a poison cloud which kills them. He then regrets it.

answer: Ullola is saddened by the loss of the post humans who died from his poisonous belch. He wishes they would sing again. Despite his sadness Ullola feels some happiness - he remembers why the post humans sang and feels immense gratitude towards them.

answer: Ullola was a creature at the bottom of a lake who remained sad when he no longer could feast on bacterial mats. While he continued to feast on other foods, Ullola grew so fat that he was in pain. He ultimately grew even more sad when he killed many post humans by the lake as he let out a large poisonous belch. Ullola would weep for the next million years.

answer: Sadness, for being alone and unloved and remembered.

answer: Ullola feels sadness and remorse for the post humans who he has killed with his great belch of poison gas. He remembers their songs fondly and remembers why they sang.


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Saskatchewan Fun and Interesting Facts

Learn about Saskatchewan’s history, economy and overall quality of life over at the Government of Saskatchewan website. Visit our Statistics page for the lowdown on population, climate and much more.

Here are some interesting tidbits about Saskatchewan:

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FLAG: Saskatchewan's official flag was adopted in 1969. It features the provincial shield of arms along with the floral emblem, the western red lily. The flag's upper half is green, representing Saskatchewan's northern forests; the lower half is gold, symbolizing the southern grain areas.

FLOWER: In 1941, the western red lily was chosen as the official flower of Saskatchewan. This lily grows in moist meadows and semi-wooded areas. With its flaming red blossoms, it stands out brilliantly against a natural green background. The western red lily is a protected species.

BIRD: The sharp-tailed grouse is one of Saskatchewan's most popular game birds. It was selected as the provincial bird emblem in 1945.

GRASS: In 2001, needle-and-thread grass was designated Saskatchewan's official grass. It's a native bunchgrass common to the dry, sandy soils of the Northern Plains. Seed stalks may reach 1.3 m (4 feet) in height and leaves are up to 30 cm (12 inches) long and very narrow. The name comes from the shape of the seeds, which are sharply pointed and have long, twisted, thread-like fibres.

SASKATCHEWAN DISTRICT TARTAN: The Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan has seven colours: gold, brown, green, red, yellow, white and black. It was registered with the Court of Lord Lyon King of Arms in Scotland in 1961.

SASKATCHEWAN DRESS TARTAN: The Saskatchewan Dress Tartan was introduced in 1997 for competitive highland dancers on the occasion of the Canadian Interprovincial Highland Dancing Championships held that year in Regina.  It is a variant of the Saskatchewan District Tartan, with the off-white line of the original tartan becoming the background colour of the dress version.

TREE:  In 1988, the white birch was adopted as the official tree of Saskatchewan. This hardwood tree is found across the northern three-quarters of the province. Typical uses for the wood include lumber, plywood, veneer and fuel.

MINERAL:  Sylvite, also known as potash, is Saskatchewan's official mineral. We are the world's largest producer and exporter of potash. Our vast reserves of potash are expected to last for hundreds of years at current rates of production. Over 95 percent of the potash produced in Saskatchewan is used for fertilizer purposes.

ANIMAL:  Saskatchewan designated the white-tailed deer our official animal in 2001. Here in our more northern latitudes, the white-tailed deer tends to be larger than its southern brethren, reaching heights of more than a metre (3.5 feet) at the shoulder and weighing as much as 180 kg (400 lbs). Adults have a reddish-brown summer coat and a greyish-brown winter coat, with white underparts. The name comes from the white underside of the tail, which is raised like a flag when the deer is running or frightened.

SPORT:  Curling was named Saskatchewan's official sport in 2001, although many have considered it so for years. Once called the "roaring game" because of the thunderous noise made by corn brooms used to sweep rocks down the ice, curling has a rich history in the province. The fabled Richardson brothers, curling out of Regina, won four Canadian and World men's championships between 1959-63. Another extraordinary rink from Regina, the Sandra Schmirler team, won three Canadian and World women's championships in the '90s, followed by the first ever women's Olympic gold medal in curling at 1998.

[]EMBLEM:  Multis E Gentibus Vires, "From Many Peoples Strength" - The provincial Coat of Arms was granted through Royal Warrant from Queen Elizabeth II in 1986. It is an augmentation of the original shield of arms adopted by Royal Warrant of King Edward VII in 1906. A crest of a beaver and crown is placed above the shield. On either side of the shield are supporters: a lion and a deer. The shield itself displays the royal lion and three gold wheat sheaves, symbolizing Saskatchewan agriculture. The base is formed of western red lilies, Saskatchewan's floral emblem.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about potash?

answer: Potash, or sylvite, is Saskatchewan's official mineral. We are the world's largest producer and exporter of potash. Our vast reserves of potash are expected to last for hundreds of years at current rates of production. Over 95 percent of the potash produced in Saskatchewan is used for fertilizer purposes.

text: The model should consider replacing the personal pronouns 'we' and 'our' with 'they' and 'their' or 'its.'

refinement: Potash, or sylvite, is Saskatchewan's official mineral. They are the world's largest producer and exporter of potash. Their vast reserves of potash are expected to last for hundreds of years at current rates of production. Over 95 percent of the potash produced in Saskatchewan is used for fertilizer purposes.

answer: An official mineral, potash has been a large part of Saskatchewan's economy for an extended period of time. In 2001, Saskatchewan declared the mineral as their official mineral due to the fact that they are "the world's largest producer and exporter of potash," and the reserves of potash were expected to last for hundreds of years. Potash is used for fertilizer which means it continues to be of importance to agriculture. The mineral was also registered with the Court of Lord Lyon King of Arms in Scotland in 1961.

text:
-The model's answer about Saskatchewan declaring potash as their official mineral in 2001 is incorrect. This should be corrected.
-The Saskatchewan potash was not registered with the Court of Lord Lyon King of Arms in Scotland in 1961. This also should be corrected.

refinement: An official mineral, potash has been a large part of Saskatchewan's economy for an extended period. In the 90s, Saskatchewan declared the mineral as their official mineral due to the fact that they are "the world's largest producer and exporter of potash," and the reserves of potash were expected to last for hundreds of years. Potash is used for fertilizer which means it continues to be of importance to agriculture.

answer: The text identifies potash as Saskatchewan's official mineral. It is used primarily for fertilizer purposes and has vast reserves expected to last for hundreds of years.

text: The answer omits that Saskatchewan is the world's largest exporter and producer of potash. This should be stated in the response.

refinement: The text identifies potash as Saskatchewan's official mineral. Saskatchewan is the world's largest exporter and producer of potash. It is used primarily for fertilizer purposes and has vast reserves expected to last for hundreds of years.

answer: The Saskatchewan Floral emblem is the western red lily, an official flower. The official mineral is potash, also known as sylvite. In 2001, it was designated as Saskatchewan's official mineral by the province. It was chosen because of the province's widespread and abundant deposits of the mineral.They produce 95% of the world's potash, which is a crucial component for fertilizers that are crucial for farms and food.

text:
-The first line of the answer is irrelevant because it has nothing to do with potash. This should be removed. The model should then consider specifying that potash is the official mineral of Saskatchewan for clarity.
-The last line of the answer should be rewritten for clarity's sake.

refinement: The official mineral of Saskatchewan is potash, also known as sylvite. In 2001, it was designated as Saskatchewan's official mineral by the province. It was chosen because of the province's widespread and abundant deposits of the mineral. They produce 95% of the world's potash, which is used for fertilizers, a crucial component for farms and food.

text: Potash was not designated as Saskatchewan's official mineral in 2001. This should be corrected.

refinement: The official mineral of Saskatchewan is potash, also known as sylvite. In the 90s, it was designated as Saskatchewan's official mineral by the province. It was chosen because of the province's widespread and abundant deposits of the mineral. They produce 95% of the world's potash used for fertilizers, a crucial component for farms and food.

text: The model should consider replacing the second sentence with the fact that Saskatchewan is the world's largest exporter and producer of potash.

refinement: The official mineral of Saskatchewan is potash, also known as sylvite. In the 90s, it was designated as Saskatchewan's official mineral by the province because they are the world's largest producer and exporter of potash. They produce 95% of the world's potash used for fertilizers, a crucial component for farms and food.

answer: Potash is also known as Sylvite, and it is Saskatchewan's official mineral. Saskatchewan is the world's largest producer and exporter of potash. The province's vast reserves of potash are expected to last hundreds of years at their current rate of production. More than 95 percent of potash produced in Saskatchewan is used for fertilizer purposes.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Saskatchewan tartans?

answer: The Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan has seven colours  including gold, brown, green, red, yellow, black and white. These colours were registered in 1961. The Saskatchewan is an official dress tartan which was introduced in 1997, it is variant of the Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan, the white becomes a background colour.

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-The response omits that the tartan was registered in the Court of Lord Lyon King of Arms in Scotland. It should state this.
-The model omits 'dress' after Saskatchewan. This should be corrected.
-The answer omits that the dress is for competitive highland dancers.
-The model omits 'a' before 'variant' in the last line of the answer. It should correct this.

refinement: The Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan has seven colors including gold, brown, green, red, yellow, black, and white. These colors were registered with the Court of Lord Lyon of Arms in Scotland in 1961. The Saskatchewan dress tartan is an official dress tartan which was introduced in 1997 for competitive highland dancers. It is a variant of the Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan, the white becomes a background colour.

text: The text mentioned the off-white line of the original tartan as the background color of the dress version. The model should consider replacing the last line of its answer for accuracy.

refinement: The Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan has seven colors: gold, brown, green, red, yellow, black, and white. These colors were registered with the Court of Lord Lyon of Arms in Scotland in 1961. The Saskatchewan dress tartan is an official dress tartan introduced in 1997 for competitive highland dancers. It is a variant of the Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan, with the off-white color of the official tartan becoming the background color of the dress version.

answer: The Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan has seven colors: gold, brown, green, red, yellow, white, and black. It was registered in 1961. The Saskatchewan Dress Tartan was introduced in 1997 for competitive highland dancers. The Dress Tartan is a variant of the District Tartan in which the off-white of the original was replaced with the background color of the dress version.

text: The answer fails to mention that the tartan was registered with the Court of Lord Lyon King of Arms in Scotland. It should state this.

refinement: The Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan has seven colors: gold, brown, green, red, yellow, white, and black. It was registered with the Court of Lord Lyon King of Arms in Scotland in 1961. The Saskatchewan Dress Tartan was introduced in 1997 for competitive highland dancers. The Dress Tartan is a variant of the District Tartan with the off-white of the original replaced the background color of the dress version.

answer: Saskatchewan's official provincial tartan is made up of seven colors: gold, brown, green, red, yellow, white and black. This tartan was registered in Scotland in 1961. The Saskatchewan Dress Tartan was introduced in 1997, particularly for competitive highland dancers, but many consider curling the official sport of the province. The Coat of Arms displays a royal lion and three gold wheat sheaves and western red lilies, the floral emblem of Saskatchewan.

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-The model talked about curling as the official sport of the province, which has nothing to do with the question asked. This should be removed.
-The last sentence is entirely irrelevant and should also be removed.

refinement: Saskatchewan's official provincial tartan is made up of seven colors: gold, brown, green, red, yellow, white, and black. This tartan was registered in Scotland in 1961. The Saskatchewan Dress Tartan was introduced in 1997, particularly for competitive highland dancers.

text:
-The model omits the tartan was registered with the Court of Lord Lyon King of Arms in Scotland. It should include this too.
-The model omits that the off-white line of the original tartan became the background color of the dress version. It should state this as well.

refinement: Saskatchewan's official provincial tartan comprises seven colors: gold, brown, green, red, yellow, white, and black. This tartan was registered with the Court of Lord Lyon King of Arms in Scotland in 1961. The Saskatchewan Dress Tartan was introduced in 1997, mainly for competitive highland dancers. The Dress Tartan is a variant of the District Tartan with the off-white of the original replaced the background color of the dress version.

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The Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan has seven colors: gold, brown, green, red, yellow, white, and black. It was registered with the Court of Lord Lyon King of Arms in Scotland in 1961.

The Saskatchewan Dress Tartan was introduced in 1997 for competitive highland dancers on the occasion of the Canadian Interprovincial Highland Dancing Championships held that year in Regina. It is a variant of the Saskatchewan District Tartan with the off-white line of the original tartan becoming the background color of the dress version.

answer: The Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan was registered with the Court of Lord Lyon King of Arms in Scotland in 1961. It has seven colors: gold, brown, green, red, yellow, white and black. The Saskatchewan Dress Tartan was introduced in 1997 for competitive highland dancers on the occasion of the Canadian Interprovincial Highland Dancing Championships. The white birch was adopted as the official tree of Saskatchewan in 1988. Sylvite, also know as potash, is Saskatchewan's official mineral. The white-tailed deer is Saskatchewan's official animal. Curling was named Saskatchewan's official sport in 2001.

text: The last three sentences of the answer are utterly irrelevant to the question. The model should consider removing these sentences.

refinement: The Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan was registered with the Court of Lord Lyon King of Arms in Scotland in 1961. It has seven colors: gold, brown, green, red, yellow, white and black. The Saskatchewan Dress Tartan was introduced in 1997 for competitive highland dancers on the occasion of the Canadian Interprovincial Highland Dancing Championships.

text: The answer fails to mention that it's a variant of the district tartan and the off-white background color for the tartan dress version. This should be added too.

refinement: The Saskatchewan Provincial District Tartan was registered with the Court of Lord Lyon King of Arms in Scotland in 1961. It has seven colors: gold, brown, green, red, yellow, white and black. The Saskatchewan Dress Tartan was introduced in 1997 for competitive highland dancers on the Canadian Interprovincial Highland Dancing Championships. It is a variant of the Saskatchewan District Tartan, with the off-white line of the original tartan becoming the background color of the dress version.


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WILLIAM YOUMANS is an American Broadway, film and television actor and singer, best known for originating the roles of John Jacob Astor in _Titanic: the Musical_, and Doctor Dillamond in _Wicked_.

Life and career

Youmans was born into a performing family; his great-uncle was Broadway composer Vincent Youmans. William made his Broadway debut in 1981, playing Leo Hubbard in _The Little Foxes_. He performed numerous roles in the original production of _Big River_ and sang the role of Alcindoro in the Baz Luhrmann-directed revival of _La Bohème_. He also portrayed Sir Richard Bingham in _The Pirate Queen_ and performed in the play _The Farnsworth Invention_.

In 1997 he originated the role of John Jacob Astor in _Titanic,_ and 2003, originated the role of Doctor Dillamond in _Wicked_. After a San Francisco tryout, in which the role was played by John Horton, the original Broadway production opened October 30, 2003, starring Kristin Chenoweth and Idina Menzel. Youmans left the role of July 24, 2005, and later reprised the role in the Chicago production for a limited engagement from December 12, 2006 through January 14, 2007. He can be heard on the show's original Broadway cast recording.

Off-Broadway

In 1986 he was in the Off Broadway play THE WIDOW CLAIRE by Horton Foote He played a few different roles in the musical _Coraline_.

Film and television

Youmans appeared in the films _Mrs. Soffel_, _Compromising Positions_, _Nadine_, _Fresh Horses_ and the independent film _Last Supper_.

Youmans' first television appearance was a made-for-television movie of a Mark Twain story, _The Private History of a Campaign That Failed_. He has since appeared on episodes of _The Equalizer_, _Spenser: For Hire_, _NYPD Blue_, _Law & Order_ and _Law & Order: Special Victims Unit_.

Filmography

  Year   Title                                 Role                  Notes
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  1984   _Mrs. Soffel_                         Guard George Koslow
  1985   _Compromising Positions_              Motel clerk
  1987   _Nadine_                              Boyd
  1988   _Fresh Horses_                        Gary
  1992   _Last Supper_                         The writer's son
  2011   _Extremely Loud & Incredibly Close_   Bartender
  2014   _Birdman_                             Bartender (Tommy)
  2014   _A Midsummer Night's Dream_           Robin Starveling

title: William Youmans

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What influenced William Youmans to take up performing as a career?

answer: William Youmans was born into a family of performers and his great-uncle was a Broadway composer. His desire to pursue a performing career likely stemmed from this fact.

answer: It could be said that his family were all performers but this is not stated, but it would make sense as it is a known pathway for children who are "brought up" in performing theatre and song. The influence could also have come from his great-uncle Vincent Youmans being a composer.

text: It was clearly stated in the text that he was born into a family of performers. The model should correct the inaccurate statement. As a result, the entire answer should then be rewritten.

refinement: William Youmans was born into a family of performance. For example, his great-uncle, Vincent Youmans, was a Broadway composer. This likely influenced his decision to become a broadway performer.

answer: His choice of career is most likely influenced by his family which has lots of people who were performers.

text: The model should consider rephrasing the answer.

refinement: His family, which has a lot of performers like Vincent Youmans, a Broadway composer, most likely influenced his career choice.

answer: His great-uncle, Vincent Youmans, was a Broadway composer; he is probably the one who influenced Youmans to take up acting.

text: This response talks about 'who influenced him' and not 'what.' The model's answer should stick with the fact that he was born into a family of performers. The model should consider rewriting its answer this way.

refinement: William Youmans was born into a family of performers. Also, his great-uncle, Vincent Youmans, was a Broadway composer. These facts are possibly what influenced William to become a performer.

answer: Youmans was born into a performing family and made his Broadway debut in 1981. It is likely that he was influenced to become an actor by his family background.


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Foxconn Technology chairman Terry Gou on Friday reiterated a pledge that the world’s biggest assembler of iPhones has made many times: that in a matter of years, human workers will be in a minority at the company.

Gou was speaking in Taiwan at the annual general meeting of the Hon Hai Precision Industry, as Foxconn is formally known. One of the world’s largest employers, Foxconn has spoken ambitiously about automation for years—but it appears to be going more slowly than the group would like.

In 2011, Foxconn said it planned to produce 1 million robots (link in Chinese) within three years to automate its manufacturing, according to Reuters. At the time the company employed an estimated 1 million workers in mainland China, and had been under fire after reports of numbers of worker suicides (link in Chinese) at its plants.

At the end of 2012, the company had 30,000 robots, far below the 300,000 bots it would need to build per year to meet its goal. In 2013, the company admitted the automation plans were proving difficult (link in Chinese). The robotic arms replacing human workers at Foxconn’s factories are known as “Foxbots.”

In 2015, Gou said at that year’s general meeting Foxconn would automate 30% of its facilities by 2020. The following year it said it had cut 60,000 jobs at one factory through automation.

It’s unclear exactly how many workers or robots it currently has—or how many jobs it has replaced with them. The company wasn’t immediately available to respond to Quartz’s queries.

It’s probably just as well the automation plans are going slower than hoped for. A company report listed the number of employees as of December 2016 at 837,000 (pdf, p. 3). Assuming 80% of those jobs are replaced, it would mean upwards of 500,000 people losing their jobs.

Still there are some signs that the market, at least, is confident of the company’s automation abilities. Earlier this month Foxconn Industrial Internet, a subsidiary that makes cloud services equipment and industrial robots used for electronics assembly, had an extremely successful listing on Shanghai’s stock exchange. In the first day of trading, it reached a market capitalization of $61 billion, making it the highest-valued tech company to be listed on the mainland.

question: What does Foxconn Technology do?

answer: Foxconn is the world's biggest assembler of iPhones.

answer: Foxconn Technology is a manufacturer of electronics, including iPhones. The company has spoken about plans to automate its manufacturing processes, but has not yet met its goals.

text: " The company has spoken about plans to automate its manufacturing processes, but has not yet met its goals." This can be omitted since it does not answer what the company does.

refinement: Foxconn Technology is a manufacturer of electronics, including iPhones.

answer: Foxconn Technology is the world's biggest assembler of iPhones.

answer: Foxconn Technology is a Taiwanese company that assembles iPhones.

question: Why did Foxconn want to produce the robots?

answer: To automate its manufacturing process.

answer: Foxconn wanted to produce robots in order to automate its manufacturing processes, in order to reduce the number of human workers needed.

answer: Foxconn wanted to produce the robots because they wanted to automate their manufacturing.

answer: They wanted to automate their manufacturing.

question: Why was the company not able to reach its manufacturing goal?

answer: It is not stated.

text: The company states that the automation process was more difficult than they initially thought.

refinement: The company admits that the automation process was proving to be more difficult than they thought.

answer: The company was not able to reach its manufacturing goal because it was difficult to automate the manufacturing process.

answer: This information can't be found.

text: The company states that the automation process was more difficult than they thought.

refinement: The company admits the automation process was more difficult than they initially thought.

answer: The company was not able to meet its goal of automating its manufacturing facilities because it was more difficult than originally anticipated.

question: How many robots are currently working in the process?

answer: It is unclear how many robots are currently working in the process, but according to the passage, Foxconn has 30,000 robots.

text: It is omitted that the company has 30,000 robots as of 2012.

refinement: It is unclear how many robots are currently working in the process, but according to the passage, Foxconn has 30,000 robots as of 2012.

answer: This information can't be found.

answer: It is unclear how many robots are currently working in the process.

answer: It is not stated.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer:
Terry Gou, Chairman of Foxconn Technology, reiterated his pledge of making human workers a minority in the company.

In 2011, the company decided to manufacture 1 million robots in three years to automate its manufacturing. Five years later the company said they had cut 60,000 jobs at one factory through automation.

The automation plans are going slower than hoped. But the market seems confident of the company's automation abilities.

text: It is omitted that Foxconn is the world's biggest assembler of iPhones.

refinement:
Terry Gou, Chairman of Foxconn Technology, the world's biggest assembler of iPhones, reiterated his pledge of making human workers a minority in the company.

In 2011, the company decided to manufacture 1 million robots in three years to automate its manufacturing. Five years later the company said they had cut 60,000 jobs at one factory through automation.

The automation plans are going slower than hoped. But the market seems confident of the company's automation abilities.

text: "the company admitted the automation plans were proving difficult" this is evidence that the automation plans are going slower than they hoped.

answer: Foxconn, the company that assembles iPhones, has said that it plans to automate most of its factories in the near future. However, it has been slower than expected in reaching its goal, and as of December 2016, it still employs 837,000 people. However, the company's subsidiary that makes robots and cloud services equipment had a successful initial public offering, reaching a market capitalization of $61 billion.

answer: Terry Gou, chairman of Foxconn Technology, reiterated a pledge that the world's biggest assembler of iPhones will be in a minority of human workers in a matter of years. Foxconn has been speaking about automation for years, but it appears to be going slower than the group would like. In 2011, Foxconn said it planned to produce 1 million robots within three years to automate its manufacturing. At the time, the company employed an estimated 1 million workers in mainland China, and had been under fire after reports of numbers of worker suicides at its plants. In 2015, Gou said at that year's general meeting Foxconn would automate 30% of its facilities by 2020.

answer: Foxconn Technology chairman Terry Gou on Friday reiterated a pledge that the world’s biggest assembler of iPhones has made many times: that in a matter of years, human workers will be in a minority at the company. Gou was speaking in Taiwan at the annual general meeting of the Hon Hai Precision Industry, as Foxconn is formally known. One of the world’s largest employers, Foxconn has spoken ambitiously about automation for years—but it appears to be going more slowly than the group would like. In 2011, Foxconn said it planned to produce 1 million robots within three years to automate its manufacturing, according to Reuters. At the time the company employed an estimated 1 million workers in mainland China, and had been under fire after reports of numbers of worker suicides at its plants. At the end of 2012, the company had 30,000 robots, far below the 300,000 bots it would need to build per year to meet its goal. In 2013, the company admitted the automation plans were proving difficult. The robotic arms replacing human workers at Foxconn’s factories are known as “Foxbots.” In 2015, Gou said at that year’s general meeting Foxconn would automate 30% of its facilities by 2020. The following year it said it had cut 60,000 jobs at one factory through automation. It’s unclear exactly how many workers or robots it currently has—or how many jobs it has replaced with them. The company wasn’t immediately available to respond to Quartz’s queries. It’s probably just as well the automation plans are going slower than hoped for. A company report listed the number of employees as of December 2016 at 837,000 (pdf, p. 3). Assuming 80% of those jobs are replaced, it would mean upwards of 500,000 people losing their jobs. Still there are some signs that the market, at least, is confident of the company’s automation abilities. Earlier this month Foxconn Industrial Internet, a subsidiary that makes cloud services equipment and industrial robots used for electronics assembly, had an extremely successful listing on Shanghai’s stock exchange. In the first day of trading, it reached a market capitalization of $61 billion, making it the highest-valued tech company to be listed on the mainland.

text: Contains a lot of information that can be omitted.

refinement: Foxconn Technology chairman Terry Gou on Friday reiterated a pledge that the world’s biggest assembler of iPhones has made many times: that in a matter of years, human workers will be in a minority at the company. Foxconn has spoken ambitiously about automation for years—but it appears to be going more slowly than the group would like. It’s unclear exactly how many workers or robots it currently has. Earlier this month, a subsidiary of the company that makes cloud services equipment and industrial robots used for electronics assembly, had an extremely successful listing on Shanghai’s stock exchange.


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_THE WHOLE TRUTH ABOUT THE CHILDREN OF '78_ () is the third proper Kore. Ydro. album. It contains 15 songs written in their majority between the years 2006 and 2009 and recorded in the group's home studio in Corfu, Greece.

Track listing

All songs by P.E. Dimitriadis and Alexandros Makris.

1.  “The Only Crime ()” – 2:37
2.  “P+M = K-M ()” – 4:51
3.  “The Last Summer (of Ours) ()” – 4:02
4.  “Bitter Taste ()” – 3:50
5.  “Here They Talk about Worship ()” – 4:28
6.  “When I'm with You / When You're with Me ()” – 3:48
7.  “Morning Question (so as not to sit unemployed) ()” – 3:50
8.  _untitled_ – 1:18
9.  “Without Invoking ()” – 3:33
10. “There where They Were Loved ()” – 4:16
11. “Easter in the Mental Hospital ()” – 4:52
12. “1,000,000 Winters (adulthood) ()” – 3:44
13. “13 Months in 3 Minutes ()” – 3:38
14. “Everything Was Determined ()” – 5:37
15. “Αssessments ()” – 4:19

title: The Whole Truth about the Children of '78

question: How many songs does the album contain?

answer: 15

answer: The album contains 15 songs.

answer: The album contains 15 songs.

answer: 15

question: Which band does the album belong to?

answer: Kore. Ydro.

answer: The album belongs to Kore. Ydro.

answer: The Whole Truth about the Children of '78 belongs to Kore. Ydro.

answer: The album belongs to Kore. Ydro.

question: When was the album made?

answer: All the songs in the album were written between 2006 and 2009.

answer: The album was made between 2006 and 2009.

answer: The album was made in 2006-2009.

answer: The album was made between 2006 and 2009.

question: Where was the album recorded?

answer: The album was recorded in the group's home studio in Corfu, Greece.

answer: The album was recorded in the group's home studio in Corfu, Greece.

answer: The album was recorded in Corfu, Greece.

text: Doesn't specify their home studio.

refinement: The album was recorded in the group's home studio in Corfu, Greece.

answer: The songs were recorded in Corfu, Greece.

text: Doesn't specify their home studio.

refinement: The songs were recorded in the group's home studio in Corfu, Greece.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer:
The Whole Truth about the Children of '78 is the third proper Kore. Ydro. album. It contains 15 songs written in their majority between the years 2006 and 2009 and recorded in the group's home studio in Corfu, Greece. The album's track listing is as follows:
The Only Crime, P+M = K-M, The Last Summer (of Ours), Bitter Taste, Here They Talk about Worship, When I'm with You / When You're with Me, Morning Question (so as not to sit unemployed), untitled, Without Invoking, There where They Were Loved, Easter in the Mental Hospital, 1,000,000 Winters (adulthood), 13 Months in 3 Minutes, Everything Was Determined, and Assessments.

answer: The Whole Truth about the Children of '78 is an album by Kore. Yadro. The album consists of 15 songs, all of which were written between 2006 and 2009. They were recorded in the group's home studio in Corfu, Greece.

answer: The Whole Truth about the Children of '78 is the third album from Kore. Ydro., and it contains 15 songs written and recorded in Corfu, Greece. The album explores themes of adulthood, loss, and love, and is a must-listen for fans of indie rock.

text: Doesn't specify their home studio.

refinement: The Whole Truth about the Children of '78 is the third album from Kore. Ydro., and it contains 15 songs written and recorded in the group's home studio in Corfu, Greece. The album explores themes of adulthood, loss, and love, and is a must-listen for fans of indie rock.

answer: The Whole Truth about the Children of '78 is the third proper Kore. Ydro. album. It contains 15 songs written in their majority between the years 2006 and 2009 and recorded in the group's home studio in Corfu, Greece.


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{{ external media | align = center |audio1 = You may listen to “Torna a Surriento” (with Italian lyrics) as sung by the lyric tenor Nino Martini performing with the Alfredo Antonini Orchestra in 1941 HERE}}

“TORNA A SURRIENTO” () is a Neapolitan song composed in 1894 by Italian musician Ernesto De Curtis to words by his brother, the poet and painter Giambattista De Curtis. The song was copyrighted officially in 1905, and has become one of the most popular songs of this traditional genre, which include others such as “'O sole mio”, “Funiculì funiculà”, and “Santa Lucia”.

History

Tradition holds that the origin of the song dates to 1902, when Guglielmo Tramontano, mayor of Sorrento asked his friend Giambattista De Curtis to write the song for the Prime Minister Giuseppe Zanardelli, then vacationing at his seaside hotel, the Imperial Hotel Tramontano; it was claimed that the piece was meant to celebrate Zanardelli's stay.

Some claim the song is a plea to Zanardelli to keep his promise to help the impoverished city of Sorrento, which was especially in need of a sewage system. The song reflects the beauty of the city's great surroundings and the love and passion of its citizens.

More recent research indicates that the song may merely have been reworked for the occasion; family papers indicate that the brothers deposited a copy with the Italian Society of Authors and Editors in 1894, eight years before they claimed to have written it.

Neapolitan lyrics (“Torna a Surriento”)

English translation (“Come Back to Sorrento”)

Other recordings

“Torna a Surriento” has been sung by performers as diverse as:

-   Frank Sinatra
-   Beniamino Gigli
-   Dean Martin
-   Jerry Vale
-   Enrico Caruso
-   José Carreras
-   Plácido Domingo
-   Luciano Pavarotti
-   Ruggero Raimondi
-   Meat Loaf
-   Mario Lanza
-   Franco Corelli
-   Nino Martini[1]
-   Robertino Loreti
-   Giuseppe Di Stefano
-   Muslim Magomayev
-   Francesco Albanese
-   Jerry Adriani
-   Roberto Carlos
-   Alfie Boe
-   Anna Calvi
-   Karel Gott
-   IlVolo
-   Anatoliy Solovianenko, [2]
-   Robertino Loreti
-   Katherine Jenkins and Norton Buffalo with George Kahumoku, Jr.
-   Sergio Franchi covered the song in his 1962 RCA Victor Red Seal debut album, (_Romantic Italian Songs_), which peaked at #17 on the Billboard Top 200.[3]
-   A comedic version by Billy Connolly entitled, “Saltcoats at the Fair”.
-   Claude Aveling wrote the English language lyrics, which are titled “COME BACK TO SORRENTO”. Doc Pomus and Mort Shuman re-arranged it and wrote a new set of lyrics for Elvis Presley (“Surrender”).

Popular culture

-   In the television show _The Honeymooners_, Ralph Kramden identifies the song in preparing for his appearance on a quiz show called “The $99,000 Answer.” He mistakenly identifies it as “Take Me Back to Sorrento” and says it was written by “Ernesto Dequista,” which his friend Ed Norton says is “absolutely correct.”

[1] _Torna a Surriento_ as sung by Nino Martini with conductor Alfredo Antonini on archive.org

[2] 1

[3] http://www.discogs.com Sergio Franchi

title: Torna a Surriento

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the history of the song Torna a Surriento?

answer: The song "Torna a Surriento" was composed in 1894 by Italian musician called Ernesto De Curtis to words by his brother, the poetic and painter Giambattista De Curtis. The song had been copyrighted officially in 1905, and is one of the most popular songs in the traditional genre of napolitan songs, which include some like "O sole mio", "Funiculì funiculà", and "Santa Lucia". Tradition says the song was asked to be written by Guglielmo Tramontano, the mayor of Sorrento, to celebrate Zanardelli's stay at Imperial Hotel Tramontano. Some say it's a plea to Zanardelli to keep his promise and install a sewage system. However, there has been more recent research that would cast some doubt. The song reflects the beauty of the city's great surroundings, love and passion of its citizens. Ernesto also deposited a copy with the Italian Society of Authors and Editors in 1894, eight years before they claimed to have written it.

answer: The song was allegedly composed in 1894 by Ernesto De Curtis with the lyrics based on his brother Giambattista De Curtis' poetry. The song is said to celebrate Giuseppe Zanardelli's visit to Sorrento and beg him to help the impoverished city.

text: If the summary includes Zanardelli's visit, it should connect the text that indicates the song was written in 1894 but was merely reworked for his visit 8 years later.

refinement: The song was allegedly composed in 1894 by Ernesto De Curtis with the lyrics based on his brother Giambattista De Curtis' poetry. The song is said to celebrate Giuseppe Zanardelli's visit to Sorrento and beg him to help the impoverished city. However, the song may have merely been reworked for Zanardelli's visit since the brothers copyrighted the song 8 years before he came to stay.

answer: Torna a Surriento dates to 1902, when Guglielmo Tramontano, mayor of Sorrento asked his friend Giambattista De Curtis to write the song for the Prime Minister Giuseppe Zanardelli. It seems that the song was meant to plea Zanardelli to keep his promise to help the city of Sorrento. Recent research suggests that the song is not written but reworked for the occasion.

text: It would be good to add the original date the text says it was written.

refinement: Torna a Surriento dates to 1902, when Guglielmo Tramontano, mayor of Sorrento asked his friend Giambattista De Curtis to write the song for the Prime Minister Giuseppe Zanardelli. It seems that the song was meant to plea Zanardelli to keep his promise to help the city of Sorrento. Recent research suggests that the song is not written but reworked for the occasion; it was written in 1894.

answer: The song was composed by Ernesto De Curtis in 1894 and copyrighted in 1905. It reflects the beauty of Sorrento and its citizens' love and passion. This song was originally written as a plea to Prime Minister Giuseppe Zanardelli.

text: Since the song is co-written, both people should probably be mentioned.

refinement: The song was composed by Ernesto De Curtis to poetry by his brother, Giambattista De Curtis in 1894 and copyrighted in 1905. It reflects the beauty of Sorrento and its citizens' love and passion. This song was originally written as a plea to Prime Minister Giuseppe Zanardelli.

text: The last sentence is written like a fact but the text doesn't support certainty that the song was written for that purpose.

refinement: The song was composed by Ernesto De Curtis to poetry by his brother, Giambattista De Curtis in 1894 and copyrighted in 1905. It reflects the beauty of Sorrento and its citizens' love and passion. This song was said to be originally written as a plea to Prime Minister Giuseppe Zanardelli but it was likely reworked for that purpose later when Zanardelli came for a visit to the town.

answer: Ernesto De Curtis, the musician, and his brother, Giambattista De Curtis, the poet and painter, composed it in 1894. It was copyrighted officially in 1905. It was one of the most popular songs of the traditional genre. It became very popular in the 21st century.

text: Saying "the traditional genre" is vague - the Neapolitan genre should be named

refinement: Ernesto De Curtis, the musician, and his brother, Giambattista De Curtis, the poet and painter, composed it in 1894. It was copyrighted officially in 1905. It became one of the most popular songs of the traditional Neapolitan genre. It became very popular in the 21st century.

text: The last sentence cannot be corroborated by the text and should be deleted.

refinement: Ernesto De Curtis, the musician, and his brother, Giambattista De Curtis, the poet and painter, composed it in 1894. It was copyrighted officially in 1905. It became one of the most popular songs of the traditional Neapolitan genre.

text: This lacks information on the occasion associated with the song, i.e. the Prime Minister's visit to Sorrento and the town's plea for his help.

refinement: Ernesto De Curtis, the musician, and his brother, Giambattista De Curtis, the poet and painter, composed it in 1894. It was copyrighted officially in 1905. It became one of the most popular songs of the traditional Neapolitan genre. Tradition holds that the mayor of Sorrento asked for the song to be written on the occasion of a visit from Prime Minister Zanardelli, to celebrate his stay and make a plea for financial help for the city. However, the song was probably written prior to that time and reworked for that occasion.