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I usually am never in libraries. They are one of those things you like from a distance, you applaud increased funding for them and wish people would visit them more often. But it never really comes up to visit one yourself. I have the internet, I have movie rental stores, and there is a Barnes and Noble at the mall a mile away.
Today however I had gathered my courage and renewed my long-expired library card. I had gone back and forth several times over the purchase of a book at the store and had ultimately decided if it wasn't at the library then I would just suck it up and spend the sixty dollars to buy it; one of those auto repair manuals that tells you everything you'd ever want to know about fixing your car yourself.
It wasn't there.
But while I was at it I thought I'd spend a few moments browsing the different sections. I didn't want to just walk in and walk out, that would look strange, I'd decided. The longer I stayed, the more I felt weird getting a library card and not checking out a book. I kicked myself for not checking to see if the book was in first.
I had somehow managed to find myself in the Spirituality section and was amusing myself with the titles and content when I noticed a large gray book.
It was titled, "The Doldrums".
The binding was cracking slightly as I opened the first page, the book obviously hadn't been opened in a long time. There was no copyright information on the first page, so I wasn't able to see how old the book was, but it certainly had the appearance of some dusty, ancient tome.
On the first page which held writing was simply written: "Turn this page, evolvere telam."

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I had chosen my book and made my way home. The librarian had given me a look as I handed her the large gray thing. I asked her if she knew what language was on that aforementioned page, she disinterestedly said she hadn't known and sent me on my way.
Upon entering my apartment I immediately plunked myself down in my favorite... well only chair and gingerly opened the book back to the first page. I didn't know what came after "Turn the page," but decided to turn it, nonetheless.
The next page didn't have many words either, but what it said made me chuckle a little.
It read:
To Unlock the Doldrums, have a quiet space, a comfortable seat, a mind at peace. Remove distraction. Sit upright. Focus on what follows, clearly, with no break in reading or concentration. If you succeed you will be made. If not, unmade, like your fathers before you.

I read the sentence a few times and couldn't wipe the smile off my face. I hadn't yet turned on any music and I lived alone so I unwittingly had already complied with a lot of these strange rules. I was starting to get hungry and wondered, joking to myself, if I should risk the wrath of the book by trying to eat some dinner while reading this oddity. In the end it was my morbid curiosity that drove me to keep reading without making food. I turned the page and read on.
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At the time I hadn't understood what had happened to me. I had, however, read through the night, and another day, and another night, until finally finishing the 1,123 page book at 8:13am the following morning. I hadn't had so much as a sip of water or had even a brief nap. I laid the book down, went and got a drink and then slept 21 hours.
I awoke and went to prepare something to eat. There was nothing in my kitchen that seemed remotely desirable, however. I had never really cared about eating boxed or frozen meals before but suddenly they turned my stomach. I craved fresh fruit, meat, and vegetables. I didn't know how to cook but I was determined to try and prepare something from scratch.
Going to my car, I felt almost in a daze. My head was tingling and my body felt different somehow. I sat in my vehicle for 34 minutes before starting it. Time seemed to just not exist in the same way. It didn't bother me.
Driving to the store I noticed much more than I normally did. I knew when the lights would turn green. I knew what happened internally in my vehicle when I pressed the accelerator. I even seemed to know when other cars would change lanes and certain other actions before they did them.
I entered the store and picked out an expensive cut of beef and a few other things I didn't have at home. I normally buy cheaply to save money but I wasn't concerned with how much I spent, I had the feeling like I'd be able to get as much money as I'd need whenever I needed it.
The checkout woman looked at me strangely, but I'd barely noticed her, though she was very pretty. She spoke to me, "Are you ok sir?"
I said "I am fine."
At the time I didn't understand why simply speaking would destroy everything around me in a 34 block radius, but that wasn't the strangest thing that would take place.
I learned from my mistake in that instant and knew then how to speak without destroying, but not yet to create. I had a brief desire to rule the world and fix the problems of man that I now understood, then the next moment I realized that free will would have to be removed which is too great a price.
I knew I couldn't exist on this world anymore or humanity would attempt to use me for selfish gain. I transported myself far enough away that no vessel the humans would ever invent would be able to reach me.
It had been a full minute since the shop incident and I finally now learned creation.
I decided not to use it. Creating beings with free will would inevitably lead to betrayal. I was not yet a strong enough being to handle such a thing. I could make a sterile, robotic world, with creatures that dance to the tune I play. But there is no point, or lesson, or glory in that.
I wouldn't create. Though I had learned how.
I can't learn, for I know all.
I can't wait, for there is nothing new that will happen.
The realization came over me that only one end was inevitable, and I decided on it.
I am.

title: [SF] The Doldrums

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why is the narrator almost never in libraries?

answer: The narrator is rarely in libraries because he has strong opinions about them. He thinks libraries are one of those things a person likes from a distance but never makes time to visit. The narrator feels that since he has the internet, movie rental stores, and a Barnes and Noble at the mall, there is no need for him to go to the library. He also thinks that getting a library card, spending time in the library, and not checking out a book would look strange.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: The narrator is rarely in libraries because he thinks libraries are one of those things a person likes from a distance but never makes time to visit. The narrator feels that since he has the internet, movie rental stores, and a Barnes and Noble at the mall, there is no need for him to go to the library.

answer: The narrator is rarely in libraries because there are many other more convenient ways to acquire books. The narrator had decided to visit the library today because he was determined to find a book on fixing cars. While browsing the spirituality section, the narrator finds a large gray book with writing on the first page. The writing instructs the reader to have a quiet space, a comfortable seat, and a mind at peace. The narrator reads further and unlocks the power to create. Despite this, the narrator realizes that this power would inevitably lead to betrayal, so decides not to use it. The narrator decides the only inevitable end is death, and so chooses to die.

text: The response mostly consists of extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: The narrator is rarely in libraries because there are many other more convenient ways to acquire books.

answer: They mainly have the internet and usually prefer watching movies or reading online.

answer:
The narrator had never visited a library until the day he decided to get a book about fixing his car. He was afraid that if he bought the book rather than checking if it were at the library, it would make him look strange. He felt compelled to spend some time in the library and decided to check out a book while there. In the spirituality section, he found a large gray book titled The Doldrums. Once he started reading, he was swept up in it and he read the book all night, through the next day and night without stopping to eat or sleep.

It became clear as he kept reading that something was different about him. He noticed things more vividly and he also developed the ability to destroy anything within a 34 block radius by simply speaking. It also became clear to him that while he could create things, creating sentient beings with free will would ultimately lead to chaos and destruction. This is why he decided to avoid creating at all costs.

text: The response fails to answer the instruction in the task and instead describes the books he picked up.

text: The response misses to answer the question.

refinement: The narrator almost never visits the library because they claim to having the internet, movie rental stores and a Barnes and Noble at the mall, one mile away.

answer: They find it time consuming and prefer browsing for books with the internet.

text: The response misses to include having movie rental stores and a Barnes and Noble one mile away, as part of the reasons to almost never going to libraries.

refinement: They find it time consuming and prefer browsing for books with the internet. They also blame movie rental stores and a Barnes and Noble that is one mile away.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How did the narrator end up borrowing the book, "The Doldrums"?

answer: The narrator went to the library to get an auto repair manual and happened upon the Spirituality section. Upon discovering the book titled "The Doldrums," the narrator read it and discovered it unlocked something inside him. The narrator's head began tingling, he became hyper aware of his surroundings, and could understand and manipulate the mechanics of his car and the checkout process at the grocery store. The narrator realized that creating beings with free will would lead to betrayal and he ultimately decided that there was no point in creating anything.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the specific task.

refinement: The narrator went to the library to get an auto repair manual and happened upon the Spirituality section. Upon discovering the book titled "The Doldrums," the narrator borrowed it.

answer: The narrator found the book in the Spirituality section of the library, and upon opening it, discovered a guiding set of instructions that would unlock the Doldrums. Once he followed the instructions, the narrator's understanding of both himself and the world around him underwent drastic change. He then chose to move away from humanity so as not to create any kind of being with free will, which he viewed as being ultimately destructive.

text: The response includes mostly extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: The narrator found the book in the Spirituality section of the library and borrowed it.

answer: The narrator wanted to buy a book (about DIY car repair) at the store, but it cost $60 and he kept going back and forth on his decision. He decided that he should check if he could borrow the book from the library first, and if it wasn't available, suck it up and purchase the book. Unfortunately, the library didn't have the book he was looking for, and since he thought it was odd not to check out a book, he wandered a bit and ended up in the Spiritually section. Here, the narrator saw the large gray book entitled "The Doldrums".

answer: He had randomly walked into the Spirituality section of the library and started browsing and found it.

text: The response misses to mention that he had picked it out after not finding the book he went to get about auto repair.

refinement: He had randomly walked into the Spirituality section of the library and started browsing and found it. He picked this one out after not being able to find the book he went to get about auto repair.

answer: The narrator visited the library the previous day to renew the card, which he hadn't used in a while. From there, he found the book in the spirituality section, and even though he had not planned to borrow any books, curiosity got the better of him and he took it home to read it. He finished it in less than 24 hours, and something changed within himself.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: The narrator visited the library the previous day to renew the card, which he hadn't used in a while. From there, he found the book in the spirituality section, and even though he had not planned to borrow any books, curiosity got the better of him and he took it home to read it.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what happened to the narrator when he read the book?

answer: The narrator was amused at the book's instructions (find a quiet spot, remove distractions, focus, etc.) at first but realized he was able to comply with all of them because he lived alone. The narrator read through the night and an entire day, finally finishing the book at 8:13 am the next day. He did not eat, drink, or sleep, and ended up sleeping for 21 hours after putting the book down and getting a drink. The narrator felt strange after waking up. He learned he possessed god-like powers to create and destroy the world.

answer: He read the book in one go and fell into a sleep-like state afterwards. He could have lived forever, restoring himself by the following. At the very end, however, he decided he didn't need eternal life and that it would be a hassle and that he would probably use his immense powers selfishly.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: He read the book in one go and fell into a sleep-like state afterwards. At the very end, however, he decided he didn't need eternal life and that it would be a hassle and that he would probably use his immense powers selfishly.

text: The response inaccurately mentions that the narrator would use his powers selfishly. However it was humanity he was afraid would use him for selfish gain.

refinement: He read the book in one go and fell into a sleep-like state afterwards. At the very end, however, he decided he didn't need eternal life and that it would be a hassle and that humanity would probably use his immense powers selfishly. Therefore he decided to transport himself far enough that no human would reach him.

answer: After reading the mysterious book, the narrator suddenly gained much greater ability to perceive the world around him. His body was tingling and he gained a sense of ease with using time that typically would be wasted. He began to desire to cook from scratch and found that his old habits no longer appealed to him. He destroyed everything around him when he spoke and decided the only logical conclusion for him was to leave society and become a hermit. He has now learned how to create but decides against doing so, opting instead for a more serene life of isolation.

answer: After reading an ancient book, the narrator undergoes a change in abilities and desires. He experiences increased perception and desire for natural foods. He also learns how to create. After realizing the cost of creating, the narrator decides to abstain from this power.

answer: After reading for a couple of hours or so he undergoes a transformation - he looks at his apartment differently, can feel what his car is doing, can feel how humans live. He feels compelled to purchase fresh produce, he is compelled to learn how to cook. He drives to the store. When he speaks to the checkout girl she feels it. At this point he realizes he is unable to control his use of speech.

text: The response includes incomplete details from the passage which is confusing.

refinement: After reading for a couple of hours or so he undergoes a transformation - he looks at his apartment differently, can feel what his car is doing, can feel how humans live. He feels compelled to purchase fresh produce, he is compelled to learn how to cook. He drives to the store. When he speaks to the checkout girl she asks him if he is ok. At this point he realizes he is unable to control his use of speech because everything around him gets destroyed while speaking.


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[Roland Frühstück (2017)] ROLAND FRÜHSTÜCK (born 8 February 1958, Bregenz, Austria) is an Austrian politician for the Austrian People's Party (ÖVP). Frühstück has been, since 2009, deputy to the Vorarlberg State Parliament, and is currently serving as the ÖVP representative (_klubobmann_) in the state parliament.

Education and profession

Frühstück grew up in Vorarlberg's capital of Bregenz, where he graduated from trade school in 1972. Following his trade school, he passed his matura under the Business Academy in Bregenz. In 1979, he graduated from the Business Academy and began studying German and sports as part of a teaching degree at the University of Innsbruck. In 1984, he graduated.

Frühstück's first professional job was at the Business Academy in Schwaz, where he taught for a year before HTL Rankweil changed back to Vorarlberg. In 1993, he led a professional career back in his hometown when he began teaching at the Bregenzer Bundesgymnasium Blumenstraße. Since 1995, he has been in various management positions of the handball club Bregenz Handball. His career as a teacher ended in 2006 when he became a politician. After the trainer of Bregenz Handball was dismissed in February 2012, Frühstück took over his position as a sports director.[1]

Political career

Frühstück's political career began in 2000, when he was a part of the mayoral election in Bregenz for the ÖVP and for town council and was elected into town council. As a town councilor, he managed the department of real estate and sport from 2005. After the Vorarlberg state elections in 2009, he was a mandated substitute for then Governor Herbert Sausgruber, who was elected into the Vorarlberg Landtag. On 7 December 2011, he was chosen as the successor of the Vorarlberg state government, appointed Rainer Gögele, who ÖVP Vorarlberg branch selected for their party chairman in the parliament.

Personal life

Roland Frühstück has been married since July 8, 1988 and is the father of a son and a daughter. He lives with his family in Bregenz.

His son, Lukas Frühstück, is an active handball player for Bregenz Handball.

In March 2012, Roland Frühstück was arrested for driving under the influence. Both he and his political companions later described this as a serious mistake.[2]

[1] ORF Vorarlberg: _Bregenz-Trainer entlassen: ÖVP-Klubobmann übernimmt_.

[2] Kleine Zeitung: _ÖVP-Politiker verlor Führerschein nach Alko-Fahrt_.

title: Roland Frühstück

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What party is Fruhstuck a member of?

answer: OVP

text: Roland Frühstück (2017)] ROLAND FRÜHSTÜCK (born 8 February 1958, Bregenz, Austria) is an Austrian politician for the Austrian People's Party (ÖVP)

answer: Roland Frühstück is a member of the Austrian People's Party.

text: Roland Frühstück (2017)] ROLAND FRÜHSTÜCK (born 8 February 1958, Bregenz, Austria) is an Austrian politician for the Austrian People's Party (ÖVP)

answer: The Fruhstuck is a member of the ÖVP, the Austrian People's Party.

text: Roland Frühstück (2017)] ROLAND FRÜHSTÜCK (born 8 February 1958, Bregenz, Austria) is an Austrian politician for the Austrian People's Party (ÖVP)

answer: The Austrian People's Party

text: Roland Frühstück (2017)] ROLAND FRÜHSTÜCK (born 8 February 1958, Bregenz, Austria) is an Austrian politician for the Austrian People's Party (ÖVP)

answer: The Austrian People's Party

text: Roland Frühstück (2017)] ROLAND FRÜHSTÜCK (born 8 February 1958, Bregenz, Austria) is an Austrian politician for the Austrian People's Party (ÖVP)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was Fruhstuck born?

answer: February 8, 1958

text: born 8 February 1958, Bregenz, Austria

answer: 8 February 1958.

text: born 8 February 1958, Bregenz, Austria

answer: February 8, 1958

text: born 8 February 1958, Bregenz, Austria

answer: Roland Frühstück was born on 8 February 1958.

text: born 8 February 1958, Bregenz, Austria

answer: Roland Frühstück was born on February 8, 1958.

text: born 8 February 1958, Bregenz, Austria

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When did he graduate from trade school?

answer: 1972

text: he graduated from trade school in 1972.

answer: 1972.

text: he graduated from trade school in 1972.

answer: Frühstück graduated from trade school in 1972.

text: he graduated from trade school in 1972.

answer: 1972

text: he graduated from trade school in 1972.

answer: Frühstück graduated from trade school in 1972.

text: he graduated from trade school in 1972.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

For what club is he a sports director?

answer: Roland Frühstück is a sports director for Bregenz Handball.

text: After the trainer of Bregenz Handball was dismissed in February 2012, Frühstück took over his position as a sports director.

answer: Bregenz Handball

text: After the trainer of Bregenz Handball was dismissed in February 2012, Frühstück took over his position as a sports director.

answer: He is a sports director of Bregenz Handball.

text: After the trainer of Bregenz Handball was dismissed in February 2012, Frühstück took over his position as a sports director.

answer: He is the sports director for Bregenz Handball.

text: After the trainer of Bregenz Handball was dismissed in February 2012, Frühstück took over his position as a sports director.

answer: Bregenz Handball

text: After the trainer of Bregenz Handball was dismissed in February 2012, Frühstück took over his position as a sports director.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: Roland Frühstück is an Austrian politician. He is currently serving as the ÖVP representative in the Vorarlberg State Parliament, and has also previously worked as a teacher and sports director. He was married in 1988 and had two children.

text: Frühstück has been, since 2009, deputy to the Vorarlberg State Parliament, and is currently serving as the ÖVP representative

text: After the trainer of Bregenz Handball was dismissed in February 2012, Frühstück took over his position as a sports director.

text: Frühstück's first professional job was at the Business Academy in Schwaz, where he taught for a year before HTL Rankweil changed back to Vorarlberg

text: Roland Frühstück has been married since July 8, 1988 and is the father of a son and a daughter.

answer: This article covers Roland Frühstuck's educational background and career as a teacher and manager, along with his political career as an Austrian People's Party politician. Frühstuck taught at different locations from 1972 to 2006, when he entered politics. He was a part of the mayor election in Bregenz, and since 2010, has been the deputy to the Vorarlberg State Parliament.

text: 2010 should be 2009

refinement: This article covers Roland Frühstuck's educational background and career as a teacher and manager, along with his political career as an Austrian People's Party politician. Frühstuck taught at different locations from 1972 to 2006, when he entered politics. He was a part of the mayor election in Bregenz, and since 2009, has been the deputy to the Vorarlberg State Parliament.

text: After the trainer of Bregenz Handball was dismissed in February 2012, Frühstück took over his position as a sports director.

text: Frühstück's first professional job was at the Business Academy in Schwaz, where he taught for a year before HTL Rankweil changed back to Vorarlberg

text: Frühstück's political career began in 2000, when he was a part of the mayoral election in Bregenz for the ÖVP

text: since 2009, deputy to the Vorarlberg State Parliament,

answer: Roland Frühstück is an Austrian politician for the ÖVP in Vorarlberg. He served as a governor substitute from 2009 to 2011 and has been the ÖVP's klubobmann in the state parliament since 2011. In March 2012, Frühstück was arrested for driving under the influence.

text: Frühstück has been, since 2009, deputy to the Vorarlberg State Parliament, and is currently serving as the ÖVP representative (_klubobmann_) in the state parliament.

text: After the Vorarlberg state elections in 2009, he was a mandated substitute for then Governor Herbert Sausgruber, who was elected into the Vorarlberg Landtag.

text: In March 2012, Roland Frühstück was arrested for driving under the influence.

answer: Roland Frühstück is an Austrian politician for the ÖVP. He was elected into town council in 2000 and currently serves as ÖVP representative in the Vorarlberg State Parliament. In 2012, Frühstück was arrested for driving under the influence.

text: In March 2012, Roland Frühstück was arrested for driving under the influence.

text: Frühstück has been, since 2009, deputy to the Vorarlberg State Parliament, and is currently serving as the ÖVP representative

text: Frühstück's political career began in 2000, when he was a part of the mayoral election in Bregenz for the ÖVP and for town council and was elected into town council

answer: Roland Fruhstuck is an Austrian politician for the Austrian People's Party. Since 2009, he was been deputy to the Vorarlberg State Parliament, and he currently serves as a representative in the state parliament. Since 2012, he has also been a sports director for Bregenz Handball, a handball club.

text: Frühstück has been, since 2009, deputy to the Vorarlberg State Parliament, and is currently serving as the ÖVP representative (_klubobmann_) in the state parliament.

text: After the trainer of Bregenz Handball was dismissed in February 2012, Frühstück took over his position as a sports director.[

text: ROLAND FRÜHSTÜCK (born 8 February 1958, Bregenz, Austria) is an Austrian politician for the Austrian People's Party (ÖVP).


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ESPN names Toronto the worst sports city in North America. That’s right—even worse than Cleveland

By Dave Zarum |  06/21/2011

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We’re with you, Dion. It stings (Image: Bridget Samuels)
Any remotely rational sports fan living in Toronto knows that we don’t have a particularly good professional sports landscape. But is it atrociously bad? Well, apparently, the answer is yes, yes it is. In its annual Ultimate Standings report, _ESPN The Magazine_ rated Toronto as the single worst sports city in North America. Yikes. The standings only account for teams in the “Big Four” pro sports (basketball, baseball, football—the NFL kind—and hockey), so teams like the Rock, the Argos and Toronto FC don’t count. Still, we can’t help being at least a little shocked that on a continent that includes sports towns like this with teams like these, Toronto sits dead last. But ESPN is ESPN (in other words, it knows all). To understand how Toronto received such a dubious distinction, we break down the sports juggernaut’s ranking schema—which includes gems like “bang for the buck,” “stadium experience” and “title track” (paging the MAPLE LEAFS and RAPTORS)—after the jump.

1. TORONTO MAPLE LEAFS
FRANCHISE RANK: 120 (out of 122)
LAST YEAR’S RANK: 121 (only the sad-sack LOS ANGELES CLIPPERS ranked lower)
AVERAGE ATTENDANCE: 19,354 (league rank: 5th)
WHAT ESPN SAYS: It’s the fans’ fault for continually paying exorbitantly high ticket prices to see a team of perpetual losers with a shaky owner situation.
WHAT WE SAY: So what? Leaf fans are a passionate, loyal, parade-planning bunch. Plus, the future looks bright (or at least slightly less dim): July 1st is the first day of free agency, a.k.a. the first day the Leafs can sign BRAD RICHARDS.

2. TORONTO RAPTORS
FRANCHISE RANK: 116
LAST YEAR’S RANK: 113
AVERAGE ATTENDANCE: 16,566 (19th)
WHAT ESPN SAYS: The Raps lost the most points on “title track” (understandable) and “coaching,” but that’s about to change.
WHAT WE SAY: Two years ago, the Raptors finished 18th (40-42) in the NBA standings. This season, they finished 27th (22-60), but only dropped three spots in ESPN’s rankings. Sure, it’s a minor victory, but we’ll take it.

3. TORONTO BLUE JAYS
FRANCHISE RANK: 63
LAST YEAR’S RANK: 92
AVERAGE ATTENDANCE: 20,907 (23rd)
WHAT ESPN SAYS: Stable ownership, flexible ticket pricing and a dynamo GM almost make up for the concrete jungle known as Rogers Centre—the 14th-worst stadium experience in all of sports.
WHAT WE SAY: With a young nucleus that includes ADAM LIND, RICKY ROMERO, J.P. ARENCIBIA and some dude named JOEY BATS, we’re willing to be patient. But more of these in the future, please.

• The Mag: Ultimate Standings 2011 [ESPN SportsNation]

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the author referring to when they say "it stings".

answer: North America's "worst sports city" ranking in its annual Ultimate Standings report.

text: The answer could be more specific.

refinement: Toronto being named North America's "worst sports city" ranking in its annual Ultimate Standings report.

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: The author is referring to Toronto being named North America's "worst sports city" ranking in its annual Ultimate Standings report.

text: The author is referring to North America's worst sports city ranking.

answer: The author is referring to the fact that Toronto has been rated the worst sports city in North America.

text: Before "it stings," the author states that "ESPN [named] Toronto the worst sports city in North America."

answer: The article refers to ESPN's ranking of Toronto as the worst sports city in North America.

text: Before "it stings," the author states that "ESPN [named] Toronto the worst sports city in North America."

answer: That information can't be found, but presumably they are making a joke about being sad about Toronto's ranking.

text: The answer can easily be implied.

refinement: Presumably they are making a joke about being sad about Toronto's ranking.

text: The answer could be clearer in its pronoun use.

refinement: Presumably the author is making a joke about being sad about Toronto's ranking.

text: Before "it stings," the author states that "ESPN [named] Toronto the worst sports city in North America."

answer: It's not clear, but it seems implied that it is because Toronto is the worst sport city in North America.

text: The answer can be clearly implied from the text.

refinement: It seems implied that it is because Toronto is the worst sport city in North America.

text: The answer could be clearer in its pronoun use.

refinement: It seems implied that the author says this because Toronto is the worst sport city in North America.

text: Before "it stings," the author states that "ESPN [named] Toronto the worst sports city in North America."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What makes Toronto the worst pro sports city in North America?

answer: The author points out that the rankings only accounted for the "Big Four" sports, which teams like the Rock, the Argos, and Toronto FC don't count.

text: The answer does not answer what makes Toronto the worst pro sports city, just what teams were scored.

refinement: The author points out that the rankings only accounted for the "Big Four" sports, which teams like the Rock, the Argos, and Toronto FC don't count. According to ESPN, Toronto was judged on "bang for the buck," "stadium experience," and "title track," amongst other criteria.

text: The rankings did only include those in the "“Big Four” pro sports (basketball, baseball, football—the NFL kind—and hockey)."

answer: According to ESPN, the sports landscape looks poor overall. ESPN ranked every sport and each of the teams in different categories, from "title track" to "player experience" to "bang for the buck" all the way to "stadium experience."

text: ESPN did not rank all sports, only those falling within the ""Big Four" pro sports (basketball, baseball, football—the NFL kind—and hockey)."

refinement: According to ESPN, the sports landscape looks poor overall. ESPN ranked the "Big Four" sports and each of the teams in different categories, from "title track" to "player experience" to "bang for the buck" all the way to "stadium experience."

text: The article never mentioned player experience as a judgement category.

refinement: According to ESPN, the sports landscape looks poor overall. ESPN ranked the "Big Four" sports and each of the teams in different categories, from "title track" to "bang for the buck" all the way to "stadium experience."

text: ESPN used a ranking schema that included "“bang for the buck,” “stadium experience” and “title track.""

answer: The rankings given by ESPN magazine show that Toronto has notably low scores in the categories of franchise ranking, attendance, and stadium experience. These are the factors that make Toronto the worst sports city in North America.

text: ESPN used a ranking schema that included "“bang for the buck,” “stadium experience” and “title track.""

answer: The main reasons that Toronto is rated the worst pro sports city in North America is due to the abysmal performance of the Maple Leafs and Raptors. The average attendance numbers for both teams ranked 5th in the league, while the two teams were ranked 120th and 116th respectively on ESPN's franchise ranking list. All of this combined suggests that Toronto has some of the most disappointing (and under-performing) professional sports teams in North America.

text: The Toronto Raptors were ranked 19th in attendance, not 5th.

refinement: The main reasons that Toronto is rated the worst pro sports city in North America is due to the abysmal performance of the Maple Leafs and Raptors. The average attendance numbers for the Maple Leafs ranked 5th in the league, while the two teams were ranked 120th and 116th respectively on ESPN's franchise ranking list. All of this combined suggests that Toronto has some of the most disappointing (and under-performing) professional sports teams in North America.

text: The Toronto Maple Leafs were ranked 120th but 5th in attendance.

text: The Toronto Raptors were ranked 116th but 19th in attendance.

answer: Their "Big Four" teams have been ranked low by ESPN. ESPN lists high ticket prices, lost points on "title track" and coaching", and the 14th-worst stadium experience as some of the issues with these teams.

text: The rankings did only include those in the "“Big Four” pro sports (basketball, baseball, football—the NFL kind—and hockey)."

text: Some specific complaints ESPN had included high ticket prices, title track, and coaching.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe the Toronto Blue Jays.

answer: The Toronto Blue Jays are a Major League Baseball team with stable ownership, flexible ticket pricing, a young nucleus, and the 14th-worst stadium experience in all of sports.

text: ESPN describes the Toronto Blue Jays as: "Stable ownership, flexible ticket pricing and a dynamo GM almost make up for the concrete jungle known as Rogers Centre—the 14th-worst stadium experience in all of sports."

answer: The team is stable, flexible ticket pricing, has stable ownership, and a dynamo GM.

text: The answer could be clearer in its pronoun use.

refinement: The Toronto Blue Jays are stable, flexible ticket pricing, has stable ownership, and a dynamo GM.

text: The answer could use less confusing sentence structure.

refinement: The Toronto Blue Jays are stable, they have flexible ticket pricing, have stable ownership, and a dynamo GM.

text: ESPN describes the Toronto Blue Jays as: "Stable ownership, flexible ticket pricing and a dynamo GM almost make up for the concrete jungle known as Rogers Centre—the 14th-worst stadium experience in all of sports."

answer: The Toronto Blue Jays have a decrepit stadium, and poor ownership and management. But, they have a young nucleus and an "almost" dynamo general manager.

text: ESPN describes the Toronto Blue Jays as: "Stable ownership, flexible ticket pricing and a dynamo GM almost make up for the concrete jungle known as Rogers Centre—the 14th-worst stadium experience in all of sports."

answer: At the time of this document, the current franchise rank was 63, the year prior it was 92, and ESPN has labeled it as the 14th worst stadium experience in all of sports. The writer of the document says that there are people on the team that they are willing to be patient for.

text: The answer could be clearer in its pronoun use.

refinement: At the time of this document, the Toronto Blue Jays' current franchise rank was 63, the year prior it was 92, and ESPN has labeled it as the 14th worst stadium experience in all of sports. The writer of the document says that there are people on the team that they are willing to be patient for.

text: ESPN describes the Toronto Blue Jays as: "Stable ownership, flexible ticket pricing and a dynamo GM almost make up for the concrete jungle known as Rogers Centre—the 14th-worst stadium experience in all of sports."

text: The Toronto Blue Jays franchise rank was 63, and the year before it was 92.

answer: The Toronto Blue Jays are a professional baseball team ranked 63rd out of 122 in ESPN's the Ultimate Standings, with an average attendance of 20,907. Despite a talented young nucleus and stable ownership, the Blue Jays have notoriously unfavourable stadium experience and are perpetual losers.

text: The Toronto Blue Jays franchise rank was 63, and the year before it was 92.

text: ESPN describes the Toronto Blue Jays as: "Stable ownership, flexible ticket pricing and a dynamo GM almost make up for the concrete jungle known as Rogers Centre—the 14th-worst stadium experience in all of sports."

text: The Toronto Blue Jays had an average attendance of 20,907 people.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does ESPN say about the Raptors?

answer: ESPN says that the Raptors lost the most points on the 'title track' and 'coaching', but they are about to change.

text: ESPN describes the Toronto Raptors as: "The Raps lost the most points on “title track” (understandable) and “coaching,” but that’s about to change."

answer: ESPN says that the Raptors lost the most points on "title track."

text: ESPN describes the Toronto Raptors as: "The Raps lost the most points on “title track” (understandable) and “coaching,” but that’s about to change."

answer: They say that the Raptors lost the most points on "title track" and "coaching", but at the time of the document, that is about to change.

text: The answer could be clearer in its pronoun use.

refinement: ESPN says that the Raptors lost the most points on "title track" and "coaching", but at the time of the document, that is about to change.

text: ESPN describes the Toronto Raptors as: "The Raps lost the most points on “title track” (understandable) and “coaching,” but that’s about to change."

answer: ESPN says that the Raptors lost points on "title track" and "coaching."

text: ESPN describes the Toronto Raptors as: "The Raps lost the most points on “title track” (understandable) and “coaching,” but that’s about to change."

answer: ESPN says that the Raptors have among the worst organizational rankings in all of North America. They lost points mainly due to a lack of title track and poor coaching.

text: ESPN describes the Toronto Raptors as: "The Raps lost the most points on “title track” (understandable) and “coaching,” but that’s about to change."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What teams are mentioned?

answer: The Toronto Maple Leafs, Toronto Raptors, and Toronto Blue Jays are mentioned.

text: The Toronto Maple Leafs, Toronto Raptors, and Toronto Blue Jays are all mentioned in the article.

answer: The Toronto Blue Jays, Toronto Raptors, Toronto Maple Leafs are those mentioned in the "Big Four". The Rock, the Argos, and Toronto FC are mentioned as well.

text: The Toronto Maple Leafs, Toronto Raptors, and Toronto Blue Jays are all mentioned in the article.

text: The Rock, the Argos, and Toronto FC are mentioned as well.

answer: The teams mentioned are the Toronto Maple Leafs, Toronto Raptors, and the Toronto Blue Jays.

text: The Toronto Maple Leafs, Toronto Raptors, and Toronto Blue Jays are all mentioned in the article.

answer: The Toronto Maple Leafs, the Toronto Raptors, and the Toronto Blue Jays.

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: The teams mentioned in the article were the Toronto Maple Leafs, the Toronto Raptors, and the Toronto Blue Jays.

text: The Toronto Maple Leafs, Toronto Raptors, and Toronto Blue Jays are all mentioned in the article.

answer: The Toronto Maple Leafs, the Toronto Raptors, and the Toronto Blue Jays.

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: The teams mentioned in the article were the Toronto Maple Leafs, the Toronto Raptors, and the Toronto Blue Jays.

text: The Toronto Maple Leafs, Toronto Raptors, and Toronto Blue Jays are all mentioned in the article.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: At the time of the document, ESPN rated Toronto as the worst sports city in North America due to their "Big Four" teams. The author of the document did a breakdown of ESPN's ranking schema in response.

text: "ESPN names Toronto the worst sports city in North America."

answer: In ESPN's annual Ultimate Standings Report, Toronto was rated as the worst sports city in North America. Toronto ranked 120th, last year's rank 92nd, and average attendance is 20,907. The problems with the Maple Leafs, Raptors, and Blue Jays were given as reasons, with poor ownership, substandard stadium, and mediocre performance being the main issues.

text: The answer does not attribute the rankings properly.

refinement: In ESPN's annual Ultimate Standings Report, Toronto was rated as the worst sports city in North America. Toronto ranked 120th with the Maple Leafs, last year's rank 92nd with the Raptors, and average attendance is 20,907 with the Blue Jays. The problems with the Maple Leafs, Raptors, and Blue Jays were given as reasons, with poor ownership, substandard stadium, and mediocre performance being the main issues.

text: "ESPN names Toronto the worst sports city in North America."

text: Problems were mentioned in the Maple Leafs, Raptors, and Blue Jays.

answer: The article expands on ESPN's ranking for Toronto as the worst sports city in North America, and how other teams fared - and why. The Toronto Blue Jays ranked higher than other teams with their young core of players and Stable ownership.

text: "ESPN names Toronto the worst sports city in North America."

text: Problems were mentioned in the Maple Leafs, Raptors, and Blue Jays.

answer: ESPN has ranked Toronto the worst sports city in North America, due to low rankings in all of the major pro sports (basketball, baseball, football, and hockey). This despite the fact that Toronto's professional sports teams—the Leafs, Raptors, and Blue Jays—haven't been particularly successful in recent years.

text: "ESPN names Toronto the worst sports city in North America."

text: Problems were mentioned in the Maple Leafs, Raptors, and Blue Jays.

text: ESPN only counted teams in the "Big Four" sports, "(basketball, baseball, football—the NFL kind—and hockey)."

answer: ESPN predicts that the Toronto sports scene is horrendous and lists three teams in the "Big Four" (basketball, baseball, football-the NFL kind, and hockey). Average attendance, stadium experience. and title track are all judged beside coaching for validation but ESPN states that the fans could stay away if they don't like the product.

text: "ESPN names Toronto the worst sports city in North America."

text: ESPN only counted teams in the "Big Four" sports, "(basketball, baseball, football—the NFL kind—and hockey)."


text:
Last night I dreamed that I had died. It wasn't the normal kind of dream. It wasn't the kind of dream that you wake up enthralled, afraid or tearful from. It was something deeper than that.
When I died, there was no white light to walk toward; no staircase in the clouds; no golden gate atop them; no heavenly chorus scoring each and every one of my footsteps, as if each one of them pounded on the drums of destiny; no heart; no passion; no feeling that every breath I took in my mortal life led to this moment, and that now my dreams were coming true, and I was ascending towards everlasting glory.

There was none of that.

But equally there was no fear. There was no anxiety, or panic, or hopelessness. The four emotions I had forever associated with death. The emotions that had left my mind crippled, contemplating other alternatives to constantly living with the big day forever looming over me. Emotions that had rendered me useless, unable to function, wondering what the fuck we are doing on this planet, and why something as spectacular as life on earth, with its inconceivable beauty and ability to emote human euphoria, could have such a terrifying and mind numbing opposite as death, and how we could know so little about it other than at its existential core, it is nothing but the absence of life in a previously living body.

No. Instead of fear or euphoria, there was realism. Quite frankly, there was no commotion. I had died in a hospital, in a small room, my family surrounding me as I lay in a bed drifting off courtesy of an incurable disease, as so many have done before me, and so many will do after. As I faded I felt my woes fade also. I don't think we realise it when our lives are so busy, but we always have our woes or problems on our mind, we just don't notice them as much. I thought about my family and friends. They held hands and sobbed around my bedside, knowing they were witnessing the last moments of my human life. I guessed that I should have been worrying about them, how they would cope without me, but three familiar words kept circulating in my head. Life goes on. Life would go on for them. They would be sad, but they would find closure, and then eventually it would be their time to go too. None of these things worried me. I had always pondered the afterlife, and by this point I had accepted that I would either see them again, or that I wouldn't need to. I understood that love transcends life.

And then it happened; though it didn't happen instantly. Throughout life I had always imagined that the moment of death would be similar to an abrupt power-outage, where in a split second, darkness would engulf everything. But it wasn't. It was a gradual process and I wasn't quite sure when life had ended, and whatever came next had begun. Those around my bed began to leave the room. They left in an orderly fashion, as if it had previously been decided how they would do so. First, my four best friends. Second my brothers and their wives, my sister, her husband and their children. My grandmother, and finally my mother and father. Each of them did so matter-of-factly, and that was the first sign that I may have passed over, as I'm sure in normal circumstances they would be crying and mourning uncontrollably. Instead, each of them just left. Some of them held my hand before leaving, and others kissed my forehead. And then, just like that, I was alone, albeit for just a few seconds.

It was in this moment that I realised that I was witnessing my death out of body. I was standing in the corner watching this happen, not lying in the bed. And then I realised that I now had a purpose. I sat at a table in the middle of the room. It was small and there were only two chairs. The version of myself that I had just been watching got out of bed and sat at the table also. I was sitting across the table from myself. Somehow looking into my own eyes and staring back at them at the same time. Only when you look into your own eyes can you comprehend your existence. And then we talked for what felt like an hour, and yet it could have lasted for a thousand years because any comprehension that I had of time in my human life had faded, and I began to think that maybe time didn't exist anymore. We talked about the life I had lived on earth, about the relationships I had formed and the feelings I had had, what I had achieved in life, and what mark I had left on the earth. And then I asked myself what was going to happen next, and of course didn't know the answer.

Just as quickly as I had realised what my role was in my own passing over ceremony, I became clueless even faster. And there I was. At a table with another person, and yet somehow completely alone simultaneously; with the most pondered question of all time, and not a single answer. I closed my eyes and breathed in. I took two more, long, similar breaths, and I held the last one. I opened my eyes.
And then I saw everything. Every sunrise and sunset from every possible corner of the earth. Every flower that had ever bloomed, every tree that had ever grown, every mountain that had ever been conquered. Every creature on land, in the sky and in the oceans. Every man who had ever made his dreams come true and every woman who had ever accomplished her greatest feat. Every new-born baby that had ever been born, potential in their eyes. I experienced every sensation that could ever be felt, and heard every note that had ever been played, I tasted success, I smelled hope and in all of these things combined I saw the face of God.

I awoke in my bed and questioned my own existence again. As I write this I am still unaware of what my dream means. I believe that we are more than skin and bones. I believe that our bodies are nothing but vessels, and I believe that our souls are always yearning to escape them. I am unsure of the afterlife, and I wonder whether or not this life on earth is simply the afterlife to a previous one; that maybe every life is an afterlife and in each one we are promised something different for the next. I wonder how many times I have died before, I wonder how many times I will die again, and I wonder whether or not there is some end to this cycle. The only thing we can be sure of is death, for without death there is no life. There cannot be one without the other, but I do not believe that birth is the beginning and death the end. Until it is my time to become knowledgeable of what is next to come, I will just keep dreaming.

title: A Dream I Had About The Afterlife.

question: Who is the narrator?

answer: Not answered.

text: While there's no explicit answer, the narrator can be identified as a person who experienced death in a dream.

refinement: The narrator is a person who experienced death in a dream, finding that all lives might be afterlives.

answer: The narrator is uncertain about life after death.

text: The narrator can be identified as a person who experienced death in a dream. Uncertainty comes after that.

refinement: The narrator is a person who experienced death in a dream, becoming uncertain about life after death.

text: The narrator's uncertainty can be elucidated.

refinement: The narrator is a person who experienced death in a dream, becoming uncertain about life after death. The narrator thinks neither birth is the beginning nor death the end.

text: "I am unsure of the afterlife, and I wonder whether or not this life on earth is simply the afterlife to a previous one"

answer: The narrator is a patient who has been diagnosed with an incurable disease.

text: The person who dies due to an incurable disease is the narrator in their dream.

refinement: The narrator is a person who died in a dream due to an incurable disease.

text: The narrator's experiences can be mentioned more for grounding their personality.

refinement: The narrator is a person who died in a dream due to an incurable disease. Afterward, they come out of it thinking neither birth is the beginning nor death the end.

question: Is the narrator dead?

answer: They may be dead or the other version of themselves described in the dream. It is unclear whether or not they have crossed over, but it doesn't seem like the narrator saw the others at the end of the dream, which is why I doubt they were dead.

text: The story begins with the narrator clearly saying they dreamed of their death. Hence, the narrator isn't actually dead.

text: Dreaming of death: "Last night I dreamed that I had died."

answer: No, the narrator is describing a dream in which they had died and experienced dying.

text: Dreaming of death: "Last night I dreamed that I had died."

answer: The text is unclear on that detail and may not even be the case.

text: The story begins with the narrator clearly saying they dreamed of their death. Hence, the narrator isn't actually dead.

refinement: The story begins with the narrator noting they experienced death in their dream.

text: Dreaming of death: "Last night I dreamed that I had died."

question: What is the narrator describing?

answer: The narrator is describing a dream they had in which they experienced death.

text: Dreaming of death: "Last night I dreamed that I had died."

text: The narrator describes how they experienced their death in a dream.

refinement: The narrator describes how they experienced their death in a dream.

text: The narrator describes how they experienced their death in a dream.

refinement: The narrator describes how they experienced their death in a dream.

question: Where is the narrator?

answer: Unclear

text: While the story doesn't explicitly mention where the narrator is, it notes they woke up in their bed. It's reasonable to assume they are at home while noting it as such.

refinement: The narrator woke up in their bed; presumably, they may be in their room or house.

text: No clear location: "I awoke in my bed and questioned my own existence again. As I write this..."

answer: At the bedside of his deceased body.

text: The narrator died in a dream, not in real life.

text: The narrator notes waking up in the bed, then writing the story. So it's reasonable to assume they are at home while noting it as such.

refinement: The narrator woke up in their bed; presumably, they may be in their room or house.

answer: The narrator must be dead since they dreamed of their own passing.

text: It's incoherent to say the narrator must actually be dead because they died in a dream. If they died in a dream, they are not dead. Period.

refinement: They dreamed of their own passing. It's reasonable to assume they are at home while noting it as such.

text: The narrator notes waking up in their bed.

refinement: They dreamed of their own passing. The narrator woke up in their bed; presumably, they may be in their room or house.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: The person in this text dreams of dying and visiting the afterlife. In this dream, they see the person they used to be sitting in a room with a table in the middle. At this table the person who is now dead ask their past-self what their purpose is in the afterlife- "the only thing we can be sure of is death, for without death there is no life. There cannot be one without the other." After the table becomes vacant, the dead are guided to leave the room in a very unenthusiastic way. This causes the dead to become uncertain of their role, so they continue to watch. Eventually they see God's face and say that there must be more than just death occurring. Therefore, the afterlife may continue to reincarnation.

text: The people leaving the room aren't dead. They are the narrator's loved ones who stand vigil at their deathbed.

refinement: The person in this text dreams of dying and visiting the afterlife. In this dream, they see the person they used to be sitting in a room with a table in the middle. At this table the person who is now dead ask their past-self what their purpose is in the afterlife- "the only thing we can be sure of is death, for without death there is no life. There cannot be one without the other." After the table becomes vacant, the narrator's friends and family leave the room in a very unenthusiastic way. This causes the dead to become uncertain of their role, so they continue to watch. Eventually they see God's face and say that there must be more than just death occurring. Therefore, the afterlife may continue to reincarnation.

text: The narrator's loved ones leave before the talk at the table. They also don't cause the narrator to feel uncertain.

refinement: The person in this text dreams of dying and visiting the afterlife. In this dream, they see the person they used to be sitting in a room with a table in the middle after the narrator's friends and family leave the room in a very unenthusiastic way. At this table the person who is now dead ask their past-self what their purpose is in the afterlife- "the only thing we can be sure of is death, for without death there is no life. There cannot be one without the other." Eventually they see God's face and say that there must be more than just death occurring. Therefore, the afterlife may continue to reincarnation.

text: The quoted part isn't a talk in the dream. It's the narrator's conclusion after waking up.

refinement: The person in this text dreams of dying and visiting the afterlife. In this dream, they see the person they used to be sitting in a room with a table in the middle after the narrator's friends and family leave the room in a very unenthusiastic way. At this table the person who is now dead ask their past-self what their purpose is in the afterlife - eventually they see God's face and say that there must be more than just death occurring. The narrator thinks after waking up, "the only thing we can be sure of is death, for without death there is no life. There cannot be one without the other." Therefore, the afterlife may continue to reincarnation.

text: Grammar can be improved.

refinement: The person in this text dreams of dying and visiting the afterlife. In this dream, they see the person they used to be sitting in a room with a table in the middle after the narrator's friends and family leave the room in a very unenthusiastic way. At this table, the person who is now dead asks their past self what their purpose is in the afterlife - eventually, they see God's face and say that there must be more than just death occurring. The narrator thinks after waking up, "the only thing we can be sure of is death, for without death there is no life. There cannot be one without the other." Therefore, the afterlife may continue to reincarnation.

text: Dreaming of death: "Last night I dreamed that I had died."

text: Self-talk: "I sat at a table in the middle of the room. It was small and there were only two chairs. The version of myself that I had just been watching got out of bed and sat at the table also."

answer: A man dreams of dying and experiencing the afterlife. He witnesses his death and arrival in the afterlife while remaining conscious in the mortal world, reborn as an unbiased explorer to interact with his counterpart and all life that exists.

text: The narrator isn't reborn. They experience all existence in the blink of an eye before waking up.

refinement: A man dreams of dying and experiencing the afterlife. He witnesses his death and arrival in the afterlife while remaining conscious in the mortal world, and experiences all life that exists before waking up.

text: The summary doesn't include the narrator's conclusion.

refinement: A man dreams of dying and experiencing the afterlife. He witnesses his death and arrival in the afterlife while remaining conscious in the mortal world, and experiences all life that exists before waking up. The dream makes the narrator think that death is not the end and birth is not the beginning.

text: Dreaming of death: "Last night I dreamed that I had died."

answer: In her dream, the speaker has died and moves on to the afterlife. She interacts with herself and tries to find an answer to her search for an after-life.

text: The narrator tries to find a reason for the afterlife in the dream.

refinement: In her dream, the speaker has died and moves on to the afterlife. She interacts with herself and tries to find a reason for the afterlife.

text: The narrator's conclusion is missing.

refinement: In her dream, the speaker has died and moves on to the afterlife. She interacts with herself and tries to find a reason for the afterlife. The dream makes the narrator think that death is not the end and birth is not the beginning.

text: Dreaming of death: "Last night I dreamed that I had died."

answer: The narrator describes a dream they had in which they experienced death. They describe it as a slow experience devoid of emotion. They wonder how many times they've died already and how many times they will die again.

text: The narrator's conclusion after waking up is missing.

refinement: The narrator describes a dream they had in which they experienced death. They describe it as a slow experience devoid of emotion. They wonder how many times they've died already and how many times they will die again. The dream makes the narrator think that death is not the end and birth is not the beginning.

text: Dreaming of death: "Last night I dreamed that I had died."

answer: At the end of the dreamer's life, in his head, is an out-of-body experience where the dreamer talks to his memories. The life of the dreamer ends at this point with nothing to show for death besides contemplating the unknown.

text: The dreamer is the narrator, and they aren't actually dead. They only dream of their death.

refinement: The narrator's dream is an out-of-body experience where the dreamer dies. The life of the dreamer ends at this point with nothing to show for death besides contemplating the unknown.

text: The afterlife in the dream isn't completely futile. The narrator talks with themselves before experiencing all life in an instant.

refinement: The narrator's dream is an out-of-body experience where the dreamer dies. The narrator talks with themselves after their death and eventually experiences all life in an instant.

text: The narrator's conclusion is missing.

refinement: The narrator's dream is an out-of-body experience where the dreamer dies. The narrator talks with themselves after their death and eventually experiences all life in an instant. The dream makes the narrator think that death is not the end and birth is not the beginning.

answer: The speaker dreams of a process of death which is uneventful. The speaker views themselves outside their body and dreams of their body.

text: The dream of death is only initially uneventful.

refinement: The speaker dreams of a process of death that is initially uneventful. The speaker views themselves outside their body and dreams of their body.

text: The narrator talks with themselves before experiencing all life in an instant. They don't dream in a dream.

refinement: The speaker dreams of a process of death that is initially uneventful. The speaker views themselves outside their body and talks with themselves before experiencing all life in an instant.

text: The conclusion is missing.

refinement: The speaker dreams of a process of death that is initially uneventful. The speaker views themselves outside their body and talks with themselves before experiencing all life in an instant. The dream makes the narrator think that death is not the end and birth is not the beginning.

text: The "speaker" should be changed into "narrator"

refinement: The narrator dreams of a process of death that is initially uneventful. The narrator views themselves outside their body and talks with themselves before experiencing all life in an instant. The dream makes the narrator think that death is not the end and birth is not the beginning.

text: Dreaming of death: "Last night I dreamed that I had died."


text:
Here is a quick story:

**Him**

	He sat on his couch. Next to him an empty glass. He liked to call himself a writer but, his less optimistic friends called him unemployed. In that moment he found himself counting the indivual floorboards in his hardwood floor.
	He was waiting. Waiting was something he had become good at. Waiting for the bus, waiting for water to boil, waiting for her to call. He'd become good at waiting.
	She didn't call. He called himself a romantic, considered himself better for it. He was the type of person to believe he was born in wrong generation. He'd wished he was born in 1925, he figured if he had made it through the Second World War he would have done well in the fifties, sixties and didn't mind dying in the nineties. Those assumtions were made created by observations he had made from TV, movies, books and MadMen.
	He didn't have a voice. Not to say that he was unable to speak, but that he felt he didn't have a way to say what was on his mind. He believed in ideals and had ideas, but they were trapped in his head. In there they twirled and brewed and spawned until he felt he had to express himself. He had expressed himself a week before, he had told her that he loved her. She told him that she felt very strongly for him, but didn't love him. He had had a few beers and decided that he wanted everything from her or nothing at all. She told him it wasn't black and white. He insisted that she choose, all, or nothing. She chose nothing.
	The week that followed he realised how stuborn he was. So did she. It drove them apart. He didn't know yet. She did.
	He remembered how they met. How she had lived in the room next to him in his college residence. They met at a floor party, which is to say a party for the students on that floor, although it did take place on the floor. A few days later she introduced him to Sushi, Sake and Anime. He pretend he didn't know about Anime because he like hearing it from her. He liked the way her mouth moved when she spoke, he liked how big and bright her eyes got when she talked about something she cared about. He liked her neck when she pushed her hair back when she had a new idea, or when he poked fun at her passion. He loved her smirk when he told a bad joke.
	On his couch, his glass was full now, he remembered how soft her shoulders were. How small she was when he hugged her, how light she was when he picked her up, how warm she was when they touched. How far away she was now.
	He wanted to pick up his phone and call her. Tell her how he wanted her back. Thank her for the time she had given him, pleed for more.
	But, he didn't.
TL;DR: I think that this defeats the purpose.

Tell me what you think?

title: 'Him' a very short story.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Is the writer of this story also the character in the story?

answer: Yes.

answer: Yes, the writer is the character in the story.

answer: Yes, the writer of the story is also the character in the story.

answer: Not confirmed, but it is likely.

answer: Very possibly.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why is the main character considered by his friends as 'unemployed'.

answer: The story says that he calls himself as a writer, and as such, has probably not made any published works or has yet to make any money through writing.

answer: The main character is unemployed because he spends much of his time waiting for something, and has no way of expressing himself, whether verbally or in writing.

text: This needs to be prefaced with the fact that he calls himself a writer.

refinement: The main character is technically unemployed because though he calls himself a writer, he spends much of his time waiting for something, and has no way of expressing himself, whether verbally or in writing.

answer: The main character is unemployed because he cannot find the words to express his thoughts and ideas. He is good at waiting, but feels that it is preventing him from making progress in his relationship. He is unhappy with the outcome of his break-up with his ex-girlfriend. She had said she didn't love him, and he wanted to change that.

text: Most of this has nothing to do with why his friends refer to him as unemployed.

refinement: The main character is unemployed because he cannot find the words to express his thoughts and ideas.

text: The fact that he does call himself a writer yet doesn't write is central to their impression of him.

refinement: They refer to the main character as unemployed because even though he calls himself a writer, he cannot find the words to express his thoughts and ideas, so it's not making him money.

answer: Unclear, but a lot of the things he says suggest they don't think very highly of him or his writing.

text: He calls himself a writer but he doesn't write, let alone make any money off writing.

refinement: Unclear, but a lot of the things he says suggest they don't think very highly of him or his writing. He calls himself a writer but he doesn't write, let alone make any money off writing.

answer: This information isn't found.

text: It has been found.

refinement: He calls himself a writer but he doesn't write, let alone make any money off writing.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is the woman that the main character is waiting for?

answer: The main character is waiting for the woman that he met in college.

text: He remembered how they met. How she had lived in the room next to him in his college residence. They met at a floor party, which is to say a party for the students on that floor, although it did take place on the floor

answer: Possibly an ex or a woman he almost had a relationship with. Regardless, she has distanced herself from him due to his stubbornness and seems unlikely to reform a bond with him.

text: You don't need the last sentence because it doesn't pertain to the question.

refinement: Possibly an ex or a woman he almost had a relationship with.

text: They met in college.

refinement: He's waiting for a woman he met in college.

answer: The woman that the main character is waiting for is his ex-girlfriend.

answer: The character's ex-partner.

answer: It is unclear.

text: It is clear.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the main character want to do?

answer: He wants to call her but doesn't.

answer: Call her and talk things through

answer: The main character wants to call and beg for her back but he doesn't. He feels stubborn and stuborn. He just wishes she would call him.

answer: He wants to call her to tell her he wants her back, but has chosen to not take action.

answer: The main character wants to call the woman he loves to tell her how he feels, but doesn't. He wants her back.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: "He" sits on his couch watching the floorboards in his hardwood floor. Earlier he told "Her" that he loves her but she didn't love him. As he is about to call Her, he thinks about how hard it is to express ourselves.

text: He needs to not be in quotations and needs to be introduced. Let's start with what he does (or doesn't do).

refinement: A man who says he's a writer but is technically unemployed because he never writes sits on his couch watching the floorboards in his hardwood floor. Earlier he told his ex-girlfriend from college that he loves her but she has maintained didn't love him. As he is about to call Her, he thinks about how hard it is to express ourselves.

text: I added that more about who she is.

refinement: A man who says he's a writer but is technically unemployed because he never writes sits on his couch watching the floorboards in his hardwood floor. Earlier he told his ex-girlfriend from college that he loves her but she has maintained didn't love him. As he is about to call Her, he thinks about how hard it is to express ourselves.

text: I ended the summary in the way the story ends.

refinement: A man who says he's a writer but is technically unemployed because he never writes sits on his couch watching the floorboards in his hardwood floor. Earlier he told his ex-girlfriend from college that he loves her but she has maintained didn't love him. As he is about to call Her, he thinks about how hard it is to express ourselves, and he doesn't call her.

answer: This protagonist is sitting on his couch, drinking, and thinking about his ex-girlfriend. He remembers everything he loved about her and wishes she would come back to him. However, she doesn't call. Finally, he feels stuck - he doesn't know what to do. He wishes he could reach out to her but does not. The story ends with him sitting on the couch, lonely.

answer: The narrator was a less optimistic friend of the narrator saying he was unemployed which makes him a writer sitting on the couch and drinking beer when he counted the floorboards in the room. He anticipated the call from someone while remembering how lovely it was when the woman he had a love for met him and introduced him to anime. She was almost all he recalled of her but he didn't make the call this time.

text: The last sentence doesn't make sense. I've removed it.

refinement: The narrator was a less optimistic friend of the narrator saying he was unemployed which makes him a writer sitting on the couch and drinking beer when he counted the floorboards in the room. He anticipated the call from someone while remembering how lovely it was when the woman he had a love for met him and introduced him to anime.

text: He needs to be introduced, and in doing so, I have cleaned up the first sentence because the syntax is cluttered and unnatural.

refinement: The narrator-a guy who claims to be a writer but who never writes-has been and drinking beer, counting the floorboards in the room. He anticipated the call from someone while remembering how lovely it was when the woman he had a love for met him and introduced him to anime.

text: "Someone" is his ex-girlfriend, and he is not the narrator; there is no narrator in a story written in the third person.

refinement: A guy who claims to be a writer but who never writes-has been and drinking beer, counting the floorboards in the room. He anticipated getting a call from his ex-girlfriend, whom he misses.

text: I added what happens at the end of the story.

refinement: The narrator-a guy who claims to be a writer but who never writes-has been and drinking beer, counting the floorboards in the room. He anticipated getting a call from his ex-girlfriend, whom he misses. He thinks about how bad humans are at expressing themselves, and he wants to pick up the phone to call her, but he doesn't.

answer: A man who clings to being a writer has yet to get an actual paying job, is idling away at home in discontent and inaction. He muses about being with a girl he was too stubborn to properly have a relationship with. He wants to call her in the hope of fixing things, but he has chosen to not do anything.

answer: In this story, the protagonist reminisces about a girl he loved. He remembers how he liked her passion, her laugh, and the softness of her skin. However, she doesn't love him back and he realizes that it's too late to change that.

text: I added the ending.

refinement: In this story, the protagonist reminisces about a girl he loved. He remembers how he liked her passion, her laugh, and the softness of her skin. However, she doesn't love him back and he realizes that it's too late to change that, and decides against calling her.


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[South Audley Street, showing Thomas Goode and the Grosvenor Chapel]

SOUTH AUDLEY STREET is a major shopping street in Mayfair, London.[1] It runs north to south from the southwest corner of Grosvenor Square to Curzon Street.

History

[Caroline of Brunswick waving to crowds in South Audley Street, drawn by Robert Cruikshank] The street is named after Hugh Audley, whose heirs acquired the land following Sir Thomas Grosvenor's marriage to Mary Davies in 1677. Construction of properties along the street began in 1720, initially with small houses at the north end and larger family residences to the south. This reflected a social convention that was common at this time.[2]

Audley Square was a short abutment at the south end of the street. Unlike other significant squares in Mayfair, it was three sided and had no garden. The first multistorey car park in the City of Westminster opened here in 1962.[3]

Caroline of Brunswick (consort of King George IV) briefly stayed at No. 77 South Audley Street after returning from Italy in 1820. She was considered a popular queen and appeared at the balcony of the house to cheering crowds.[4]

South Audley Street was redeveloped between 1875 and 1900, when most of the smaller buildings to the north were demolished and rebuilt as shops with residences above them. However, several buildings (Nos. 9–16 and 71–75 consecutive) all survive from the 1730s. {{-}}

Properties

[James Purdey & Sons] The Grosvenor Chapel is a Grade II* listed chapel on South Audley Street, and the only remaining original property on the north part of the street.[5][6] It was built by Benjamin Timbrell in 1730, and became a chapel of ease for St George's Hanover Square Church in 1831. During World War II it was used by American armed forces. The parents of Arthur Wellesley, 1st Duke of Wellington are buried in the church.

Chesterfield House was a grand house on South Audley Street built by Isaac Ware for Philip Stanhope, 4th Earl of Chesterfield between 1747 and 1750. It was demolished in 1937.[7]

Leconfield House is at the corner of South Audley Street and Curzon Street. It is best known for being the former headquarters of MI5.

Thomas Goode's tableware shop was first established in 1844 at No. 17.[8] It gradually expanded throughout the 19th century; the current premises at Nos. 17–22 was constructed between 1875 and 1891 by Ernest George.

[Embassy of Qatar] The Qatari embassy is at No 1. It has been Grade II listed since 1970.[9]

Gunsmiths James Purdey & Sons was established at Nos. 57–60 in 1881.[10][11]

[1] 'South Audley Street: Introduction', in Survey of London: Volume 40, the Grosvenor Estate in Mayfair, Part 2 (The Buildings), ed. F H W Sheppard (London, 1980), pp. 290–291. British History Online http://www.british-history.ac.uk/survey-london/vol40/pt2/pp290-291 [accessed 26 October 2019]

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title: South Audley Street

question: How is South Audley Street known?

answer: It is known as a major shopping street in Mayfair, London.

answer: South Audley Street is known as an upscale shopping street in Mayfair.

answer: One of several impressions of the street prior to its redevelopment. South Audley Street is a shopping street with residences.

text: Too verbose- the extra words can create confusion.

refinement: South Audley Street is a shopping street with residences.

text: This should say, briefly, where it is.

refinement: South Audley Street is a shopping street in London with residences.

question: Who is South Audley Street named after?

answer: South Audley Street is named after an individual named Hugh Audley.

answer: It is named after Hugh Audley.

answer: South Audley Street was originally named after the 7th Earl of Chesterfield.

text: You should add what his name was, even if it seems obvious.

refinement: South Audley Street was originally named after the 7th Earl of Chesterfield, Hugh Audley.

question: When was South Audley Street redeveloped?

answer: Most of the smaller buildings were demolished in South Audley Street in the 19th century.

text: It should say when if the question asks when-i.e., try to give a specific date or time period.

refinement: Most of the smaller buildings were demolished in South Audley Street in the 19th century, between 1875-1900.

answer: Between 1875 and 1900.

answer: It was redeveloped between 1875 and 1900.

question: What did small houses at the north end and larger family residences to the south represent?

answer: The smaller houses at the north end of South Audley Street represented the more affordable houses in the area, while the larger family residences located towards the south end represented more wealthy properties.

answer: The north end of South Audley Street contained smaller houses, whereas larger family residences were located to the south; this seems to indicate that the street was initially meant to cater to those of higher classes or those with greater financial means.

answer: It represented a social convention that was common at that time.

text: This needs more information.

refinement: It represented a social convention that was common at that time- the poorer, or smaller residences at the north end represented the poorer families; the larger family residences to the south represented the wealthier families.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The article is about South Audley Street and its history and history of notable properties in Mayfair, London.

text: There's no need to preface the summary by saying, "the article is about...".

refinement: South Audley Street is a street in Mayfair, London.

text: What is notable about the area?

refinement: South Audley Street is a street in Mayfair, London, known for its shopping.

answer: This article describes the London street South Audley Street which is a major shopping street and provides some historical details of some the notable properties in the area.

text: You don't need to say "this article describes...".

refinement: The London street South Audley Street is a major shopping street with some notable properties in the area.

answer: This article covers South Audley Street in London's Mayfair district from a historical and commercial perspective.

text: You don't need to say "this article...".

refinement: South Audley Street is in London's Mayfair district.

text: What is notable about the street needs to be included.

refinement: South Audley Street is a shopping street in London's Mayfair district.

answer: The text gives a brief history of South Audley Street and describes its history.

text: It's better not to start with "the text gives...". We already know there is text-delve straight into what it says.

text: There were no other details to glean from the answer.

refinement: South Adley is a street in the Mayfair District of London known for shopping.

answer: This article describes South Audley Street, a major shopping street in Mayfair, London.

text: There's no need to reference the fact that the text describes this.

refinement: South Audley Street is a major shopping street in Mayfair, London.

answer: This article talks about South Audley Street with its history of being created and the different properties that are on that street.

text: You don't need to preface by saying "this article...".

refinement: South Audley Street has a history and different properties that are on that street.

text: The properties aren't seminal.

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refinement: South Audley Street is a shopping street in London's Mayfair district.


text:
What is it?

What is juvenile arthritis?

Juvenile arthritis is the term used to describe arthritis in children. Children can get arthritis just like adults. Arthritis is caused by inflammation of the joints. A joint is where two or more bones are joined together. Arthritis causes

-   Pain.
-   Swelling.
-   Stiffness.
-   Loss of motion.

The most common type of arthritis in children is called juvenile idiopathic arthritis (idiopathic means “from unknown causes”). There are several other forms of arthritis affecting children.

Juvenile arthritis is a rheumatic disease, or one that causes loss of function due to an inflamed supporting structure or structures of the body. Some rheumatic diseases also can involve internal organs.

What are the symptoms?

What are the symptoms of juvenile arthritis?

The most common symptoms of juvenile arthritis are joint swelling, pain, and stiffness that don’t go away. Usually it affects the knees, hands, and feet, and it’s worse in the morning or after a nap. Other signs can include:

-   Limping in the morning because of a stiff knee.
-   Excessive clumsiness.
-   High fever and skin rash.
-   Swelling in lymph nodes in the neck and other parts of the body.

Most children with arthritis have times when the symptoms get better or go away (remission) and other times when they get worse (flare).

What causes it?

What causes juvenile arthritis?

Scientists are looking for the possible causes of juvenile arthritis. They are studying both genetic and environmental factors that they think are involved.

Juvenile arthritis is usually an autoimmune disorder. A healthy immune system helps a person fight off harmful bacteria and viruses. But in an autoimmune disorder, the immune system attacks some of the body’s own healthy cells and tissues.

Scientists don’t know why this happens or what causes the disorder in children. Some think that something in a child’s genes (passed from parents to children) makes the child more likely to get arthritis, and then something else, such as a virus, sets off the arthritis.

Is there a test?

Is there a test for juvenile arthritis?

There is no easy way a doctor can tell if a child has juvenile arthritis. Doctors usually suspect arthritis when a child has symptoms of:

-   Constant joint pain or swelling.
-   Skin rashes that can’t be explained.
-   Fever along with swelling of lymph nodes or inflammation in the body’s organs.

To be sure that it is juvenile arthritis, doctors may:

-   Perform a physical exam.
-   Ask about family health history.
-   Order lab or blood tests.
-   Order x-rays.

How is it treated?

How is juvenile arthritis treated?

Doctors who treat arthritis in children will try to make sure your child can remain physically active. They also try to make sure your child can stay involved in social activities and have an overall good quality of life.

Doctors can prescribe treatments to reduce swelling, maintain joint movement, and relieve pain. They also try to prevent, identify, and treat problems that result from the arthritis. Most children with arthritis need a blend of treatments – some treatments include medicines.

Researchers are also trying to improve current treatments and find new medicines that will work better with fewer side effects.

Who treats it?

Who treats juvenile arthritis?

A team approach is the best way to treat juvenile arthritis. It is best if a doctor trained to treat these types of diseases in children, called a pediatric rheumatologist, manages your child’s care. However, many children’s doctors and “adult” rheumatologists also treat children with arthritis.

Other members of your child’s health care team may include:

-   Physical therapist.
-   Occupational therapist.
-   Counselor or psychologist.
-   Eye doctor.
-   Dentist and orthodontist.
-   Bone surgeon.
-   Dietitian.
-   Pharmacist.
-   Social worker.
-   Rheumatology nurse.
-   School nurse.

Living With It

Living with juvenile arthritis

Juvenile Arthritis Affects the Whole Family

Juvenile arthritis can strain your child’s ability to take part in social and after-school activities, and it can make schoolwork more difficult. But, all family members can help the child both physically and emotionally by:

-   Getting the best care possible.
-   Learning as much as you can about your child’s disease and its treatment.
-   Joining a support group.
-   Treating your child as normally as possible.
-   Encouraging exercise and physical therapy for your child.
-   Working closely with your child’s school.
-   Talking with your child about his or her condition and feelings.
-   Working with therapists or social workers.

Exercise Is Key to Reducing Symptoms of Juvenile Arthritis

Pain sometimes limits what children with juvenile arthritis can do. However, exercise is key to reducing the symptoms of arthritis and maintaining function and range of motion of the joints. Ask your child’s health care team for exercise guidelines.

Most children with arthritis can take part in physical activities and certain sports when their symptoms are under control. Swimming is a good activity because it uses many joints and muscles without putting weight on the joints.

During a disease flare, your child’s doctor may advise your child to limit certain activities. It will depend on the joints involved. Once the flare is over, your child can return to his or her normal activities.

Other Medical Problems

Other medical problems related to juvenile arthritis

Inflammation inside of the eye that can cause swelling, redness, and damage to the eye tissue is a severe medical problem that can occur in children with juvenile arthritis. Sometimes there are no symptoms, so all children with juvenile arthritis need to have regular thorough eye exams.

Some children with juvenile arthritis also have growth problems. Depending on the severity of the disease and the joints involved, these may include:

-   Bone growth that is too fast or too slow. This change in growth rate can cause one leg or arm to be longer than the other. Other children may have a small or misshapen chin.
-   Uneven joint growth.
-   Slow overall growth. Doctors are exploring the use of growth hormone to treat this problem.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What are the symptoms and causes of juvenile arthritis?

answer:
The most common symptoms are joint swelling, pain, and stiffness that don’t go away. Usually it affects the knees, hands, and feet, and it’s worse in the morning or after a nap. Other signs can include:

- Limping in the morning because of a stiff knee.
- Excessive clumsiness.
- High fever and skin rash.
- Swelling in lymph nodes in the neck and other parts of the body.

Scientists are looking for the possible causes of juvenile arthritis. They think it is an autoimmune disorder, where the immune system attacks some of the body’s own healthy cells and tissues.

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refinement:
The most common symptoms are joint swelling, pain, and stiffness that don’t go away. Usually, it affects the knees, hands, and feet, and it’s worse in the morning or after a nap. Other signs can include:

- Limping in the morning because of a stiff knee.
- Excessive clumsiness.
- High fever and skin rash.
- Swelling in lymph nodes in the neck and other parts of the body.

Scientists are looking for the possible causes of juvenile arthritis. They think it is an autoimmune disorder, where the immune system attacks some of the body’s own healthy cells and tissues.

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refinement: The most common symptoms are joint swelling, pain, and stiffness that don’t go away. Usually, it affects the knees, hands, and feet, and it’s worse in the morning or after a nap. Other signs can include limping in the morning because of a stiff knee, excessive clumsiness, high fever with a skin rash, and swelling in lymph nodes in the neck and other parts of the body. Scientists are looking for the possible causes of juvenile arthritis. They think it is an autoimmune disorder, where the immune system attacks some of the body’s own healthy cells and tissues.

text: Add that they really don't know what causes juvenile arthritis.

refinement: The most common symptoms are joint swelling, pain, and stiffness that don’t go away. Usually, it affects the knees, hands, and feet, and it’s worse in the morning or after a nap. Other signs can include limping in the morning because of a stiff knee, excessive clumsiness, high fever with a skin rash, and swelling in lymph nodes in the neck and other parts of the body. Scientists are looking for the possible causes of juvenile arthritis. They think it is an autoimmune disorder, where the immune system attacks some of the body’s own healthy cells and tissues. However, scientists don't really know what causes the disorder in children.

answer: The symptoms of juvenile arthritis are joint swelling, pain, and stiffness that don’t go away. The causes of juvenile arthritis are unknown.

answer: The most common symptoms are joint swelling, pain, and stiffness that don't go away. Juvenile arthritis is usually an autoimmune disorder. A healthy immune system helps a person fight off harmful bacteria and viruses. But in an autoimmune disorder, the immune system attacks some of the body's own healthy cells and tissues.

text: Add that scientists don't really know what causes the disorder in kids.

refinement: The most common symptoms are joint swelling, pain, and stiffness that don't go away. Juvenile arthritis is usually an autoimmune disorder. A healthy immune system helps a person fight off harmful bacteria and viruses. But in an autoimmune disorder, the immune system attacks some of the body's own healthy cells and tissues. Scientists don’t know why this happens or what causes the disorder in children.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What are the guesses scientists have about the causes of juvenile arthritis?

answer: It may be genetic or environmental factors, or both.

answer: It is thought that something in a child's genes make them more likely to get arthritis and then something else, such as a virus, sets off the arthritis.

answer: The causes of juvenile arthritis are still unknown. Scientists are looking at both genetic and environmental factors that they think are involved.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What do doctors do to treat juvenile arthritis?

answer: They try to make sure their patient can stay active by prescribing treatment that reduces swelling and relieves pain, as well as by avoiding things that exacerbate the disease. Doctors attempt to prevent or identify problems other than the arthritic symptoms.

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refinement: They try to make sure their patient can stay active by prescribing treatment that reduces swelling and relieves pain, as well as by avoiding things that exacerbate the disease. Doctors attempt to prevent or identify problems other than arthritic symptoms.

text: The response is missing a few treatment parameters.

refinement: They try to make sure their patient can stay active by prescribing treatment that reduces swelling, maintains joint movement, and relieves pain, as well as by avoiding things that exacerbate the disease. Doctors also make sure that kids can stay involved in social activities and have an overall good quality of life. Doctors attempt to prevent or identify problems other than arthritic symptoms.

answer: They try to make sure your child can remain physically active. They also try to prevent, identify, and treat problems that result from the arthritis. Usually doctors prescribe treatments to reduce swelling, maintain joint movement and relieve pain.

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refinement: They try to make sure the child can remain physically active. They also try to prevent, identify, and treat problems that result from the arthritis. Usually doctors prescribe treatments to reduce swelling, maintain joint movement and relieve pain.

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refinement: They try to make sure the child can remain physically active. They also try to prevent, identify, and treat problems that result from arthritis. Usually, doctors prescribe treatments to reduce swelling, maintain joint movement, and relieve pain.

answer:
They try to make sure their patient can stay active by prescribing treatment that reduces swelling.
Doctors try to prevent or identify problems other than the arthritic symptoms.

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They try to make sure their patient can stay active by prescribing treatment that reduces swelling.
Doctors try to prevent or identify problems other than arthritic symptoms.

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refinement: They try to make sure their patient can stay active by prescribing treatment that reduces swelling. Doctors try to prevent or identify problems other than arthritic symptoms.

text: Missing a few treatment parameters.

refinement: They try to make sure their patient can stay active by prescribing treatment that reduces swelling, maintains joint movement, and relieves pain. Doctors also make sure that children stay involved in social activities and have an overall good quality of life. Doctors try to prevent or identify problems other than arthritic symptoms.

answer: Doctors prescribe various treatments. Physical therapy, limiting the child's activity, removing stress from joints, medications to counter pain and swelling. Removing unnecessary stress either through doctor's orders of counseling with counselors. Removing the source, diagnosing and removing the triggering event (virology for the auto-immune disorder).

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refinement: Doctors prescribe various treatments. Physical therapy, limiting the child's activity, removing stress from joints, medications to counter pain and swelling.

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refinement: Doctors who treat arthritis in children will try to make sure the child can remain physically active and involved in social activities so they can have an overall good quality of life. Doctors can prescribe treatments to reduce swelling, maintain joint movement, and relieve pain. They also try to prevent, identify, and treat problems that result from arthritis. Most children with arthritis need a blend of treatments – some treatments include medicines with side effects.

answer: Doctors prescribe treatments to reduce swelling, maintain joint movement, and relieve pain. Removing unnecessary stress either through doctor's orders or by giving them the support they need to help them face life with a chronic illness.

text: Missing a few treatment parameters.

refinement: Doctors prescribe treatments to reduce swelling, maintain joint movement, and relieve pain. They make sure the children stay involved in social activities and have an overall good quality of life. Doctors also try to prevent, identify, and treat problems that result from arthritis. Removing unnecessary stress either through doctor's orders or by giving them the support they need to help them face life with a chronic illness.