text:
"Clear left!" I ran to the next corner to the sounds of the rest of my squad following. I flipped the barrel of my omni-rifle around the corner gauging what was to be seen from the small camera mounted on the barrel.

"I don't like that house entrance there." My commanders voice rang through my head as if he were standing next to me. "Davis, grab a spare cell and scout it out."

I looked back to him and nodded my affirmative and grabbed one of our last power cells from the field medic and cloaked. Sprinting forward to the entrance in question the only thing to be seen of my progress was the footprints that I left in the war-scarred earth. What was left of a city road lie in troughs the shape of squads of tank tracks around my sprinting form. By the time I had approached the old English style home my core supplement system had started to pump extra oxygen into my blood stream keeping my breathing steady and nearly silent despite a half mile sprint.

Approaching the corner of the whitewashed two story I fell into the natural cover its hedges offered me and turned off my cloaking system. Engineer by study I was drafted into the military at the age of 22 and had been fighting this damned war for another 2 years. Before the atrocity that had begun this I was studying cybernetics. I was working with a top firm when they came and tore our world asunder. Recognizing the human ability to adapt they targeted the brightest minds with subterfuge before the main invasion force arrived and were able to wipe out all the leading weapon and enhancement engineers with a derisive attack.

"Movement!" The shout broke through my train of thought and pushed me into instant action and straight into what had become routine. Cloak - vision - sight. I mentally enabled my cloaking and vision enhancement and pulled my rifle to shoulder to find a target. I noticed that my cell indicator was showing 75% depletion already and made a mental note to keep my fire to a minimum. There! The warmth of a biological body shone from the background noise of the rubble across the street - and another and another. There was a whole group of bios just around the corner commander Erwin had his funny feeling about.

It was more funny how often his feelings were correct and how much our little troop had come to trust them. Most of us were pretty sure he was a latent physic but he was unwilling to get tested saying something along the lines of, "Cocked up bullshit. Ain't nothin but a feeling."

I transmitted what I saw back to the troop with an encrypted radio link and Erwin rather eloquently told me to 'get my skinny white mech ass back here.' Such a way with words. It's a wonder that he's single, but I followed his orders. His orders have saved my skinny mech ass more than once so I got the hell away from twenty plus, by the looks of it, heavily armed enemy bios. Even though they were well armed they didn't have any psychs with them. Those were the ones to watch out for. Even with a fully powered cloak you can't hide your thoughts and the synapse activity it takes to create them.

Looking back over my shoulder at the corner the enemy was around I wondered to myself, not for the first time, why. Why would creatures who look so similar to us and behaviorism so similar to our own be out for us? How could we have made a race, not of our solar system, angry when we had only began mining other planets and barely begun research on faster than light systems? What had we done for them to create a virus that targets half the human population?

To be continued? Written with no proof-reading but I think I would like to see this one out if there is some interest. I have an interesting story in mind with my own take on humanities beginnings - and its fall.

Edited for format

title: [Sci-Fi] Rebirth of a Race

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who was fighting in the war?

answer: Itʼs not stated whom they were fighting, but they were humanoids.

text: The answer is contradicting. They were actually fighting bios alien to this world.

refinement: They were soldiers fighting humanoids. Bios race alien to this world.

answer: It is implied that humans were fighting another humanoid alien race.

text: "How could we have made a race, not of our solar system, angry" is evidence that the humans were at war with an alien race.

answer: Humans. Used to be that humans were fighting aliens.

text: "How could we have made a race, not of our solar system, angry" is evidence that the humans were at war with an alien race.

answer: Soldiers and bios, both of whom are human. The war is related to some sort of virus which targets half the human population.

text: There's no evidence to suggest that both sides are human. The enemy were another race.

refinement: Soldiers and bios, another race alien to this world. The war is related to some sort of virus which targets half the human population.

answer: The protagonist and his squad of soldiers were fighting a group of enemy bios.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What was the main character studying before the war?

answer: Cybernetics

text: "Before the atrocity that had begun this I was studying cybernetics" is evidence that the narrator was studying cybernetics before the war

answer: Cybernetics.

text: "Before the atrocity that had begun this I was studying cybernetics" is evidence that the narrator was studying cybernetics before the war

answer: Cybernetics.

text: "Before the atrocity that had begun this I was studying cybernetics" is evidence that the narrator was studying cybernetics before the war

answer: The main character was studying cybernetics before the war. Their engineering skills have been put to use in combat.

text: "Before the atrocity that had begun this I was studying cybernetics" is evidence that the narrator was studying cybernetics before the war

answer: The main character was studying cybernetics before the war.

text: "Before the atrocity that had begun this I was studying cybernetics" is evidence that the narrator was studying cybernetics before the war

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Was there an alien invasion?

answer: No, it was a virus that wiped out humans

text: There was actually an invasion force that arrived along with the virus.

refinement: Yes, an alien invasion force arrived with a virus that wiped out humans

answer: Unclear

text: "the main invasion force arrived and were able to wipe out all" is evidence of an invasion

refinement: There was a main invasion force that arrived from outside the solar system.

answer: Yes, there was an alien invasion.

text: "the main invasion force arrived and were able to wipe out all" is evidence of an invasion

answer: Yes

text: "the main invasion force arrived and were able to wipe out all" is evidence of an invasion

answer: Yes, there was an alien invasion.

text: "the main invasion force arrived and were able to wipe out all" is evidence of an invasion

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How long did the war last?

answer: The war has been going on for a minimum of 2 years.

text: "fighting this damned war for another 2 years" is evidence that the war laster for at least two years.

answer: The battles are scattered but the Earth has been at war for 2 years (one could presume they started in 2022).

text: There's no evidence to suggest the war started on or near 2022.

refinement: The battles are scattered but the Earth has been at war for at least 2 years.

answer: It doesn't say.

text: It doesn't say but it is implied that the war has laster for at least two years.

answer: The war has been going on for at least two years.

text: "fighting this damned war for another 2 years" is evidence that the war laster for at least two years.

answer: Information not found.

text: It doesn't say but it is implied that the war has laster for at least two years.

refinement: Information not found, but at least two years.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: The earth was invaded by another humanoid alien race. They were targeting humans, because of their technological advance and their mining activity. The main character was with his military squad when he was asked to check out a specific house. He found around 20 armed enemy bios and quickly returned to his squad.

answer: The narrator is an engineer drafted into the military in a sci-fi setting. He is sent to scout a possible enemy position and finds a large group of enemy bios. Despite their advanced weaponry and abilities, they are missing psychics which makes them more dangerous but less intelligent. Clearly something has led to this war, and the narrator wonders why these creatures attacked their peaceful planet.

answer: The narrative is part of a sci-fi story. The narrator was drafted to fight in a war against an alien race, the inhuman bios. The narrator's commander, Erwin, seems to have a psychic connection with the enemy. He ordered Davis to return back into the same fray.

text: There's no evidence to suggest that Erwin has a psychic connection with the enemy. However he always had a good feeling about certain things.

refinement: The narrative is part of a sci-fi story. The narrator was drafted to fight in a war against an alien race, the inhuman bios. The narrator's commander, Erwin, always seemed to have a correct feeling about things so the troops trusted him.

text: It misses to mention what the humanoids recognized.

refinement: The narrative is part of a sci-fi story. The narrator was drafted to fight in a war against an alien race, the inhuman bios. The narrator's commander, Erwin, always seemed to have a correct feeling about things so the troops trusted him. The enemy bios recognized the human ability to adapt so they targeted the brightest minds with subterfuge before the main invasion force arrived and were able to wipe out all the leading weapon and enhancement engineers with a derisive attack.

answer: In an ironic twist, Davis is drafted to fight his own race after being a student of cybernetics. He is tasked to run reconnaissance. Running through bombed out streets, he and his original squad reach a house entrance, repeatedly clearing it. He wonders why the other race have it out for his race after they have been occupying other planets.

answer: In the aftermath of an attack by a hostile alien race, the protagonist scouting the outskirts of a city finds an enemy unit and learns that they are seeking revenge for something humanity had done. Now the protagonist must fight to save humanity while questioning what exactly we could have done to deserve this attack.

text: It misses to mention what the humanoids recognized.

refinement: In the aftermath of an attack by a hostile alien race, the protagonist scouting the outskirts of a city finds an enemy unit and learns that they are seeking revenge for something humanity had done. Now the protagonist must fight to save humanity while questioning what exactly we could have done to deserve this attack. The enemy bios recognized the human ability to adapt so they targeted the brightest minds with subterfuge before the main invasion force arrived and were able to wipe out all the leading weapon and enhancement engineers with a derisive attack.


split: train

text:
Cold.

So cold.

Frozen to the point where trying to remember even the faintest sensation of warmth is impossible, the very idea of it a faded canvas that once was so beautiful to behold.

The cold is always the first thing about this shadow land that grips my attention.

The second is the darkness mingled with the light of a full moon reflected off the snowy ground. This place of dreams and nightmares resembles those rare but wondrous nights in midwinter, where the moon and the snow work to bring daylight to the shadows. You can see so clearly, you find yourself questioning if it really is the witching hour. Not everything is visible, however. To my right I can see the outline of a forest, though I cannot see into it. I know the trees continue behind me, a penitentiary guard not allowing any opportunity for my escape. To my left, a frozen road, weeds and plants gasping for life between the cracks made so long ago by the ice that is now denying them the chance to live, and beyond that another section of forest, so dense that not even light may pass between the ancient trunks. Ahead of me, an endless stretch of snow and ice and dirt, the crooked and jagged pavement of the street snaking alongside of it. Were I to try and reach the end of this field I know I would soon fall and not rise, as I have tried before and never been successful.

And then the sounds. My God, the sounds…

A wolf letting out a mournful wail somewhere out in the forest. The wind gliding smoothly through the tree branches, sending out a death rattle to chill the bones of any mortal close enough to hear. A horse fighting against his bridle  in vain, a beady-eyed raven letting out a victory cry as it feasts on the flesh of whatever corpse it has found in the darkness, thunder crashing in the far distance to my right signaling coming rain to further freeze the solid ground and any left out in it.

And then the bells.

The ringing, banging, roaring bells that cause all other sounds to cease. They demand respect, they demand fear, they demand blood. The bells ring once, twice, three times, and then the voices come. Softly, so that they cannot be heard over the powerful ringing of the bells, but growing steadily as the bells are muffled and the sound falls from your ears. They sing a funeral dirge, accompanied by a low drum stamping out a heartbeat rhythm. Their tones set the hair on end and bring the cold even closer than before, steeping your very soul in it.

They are singing of me, their funeral dirge for me.

I know they are ahead of me, perhaps a hundred meters, but I dare not look. With every hit of the drum my heart beats harder, louder, matching the tempo set by the ghostly procession. Within fifty meters the voices grow louder, not only with the distance being shortened but with the voices, those horrific voices, swelling and dominating the frozen landscape and the winds ferocity matching theirs. At thirty meters the drummer seems to hear my heart pounding like a blacksmith at his forge, and sets to overcome the noise I am making. Now they are fifteen meters, ten meters, five meters in front of me, calling out their liturgical blasphemies louder than any human could possibly do so. The wind is tearing at my body, trying to rend what clothes I have on from my body. The procession stops no more than two meters away and are howling down at me. The wind is sinking its long fangs deeper and impossibly deeper until I am all but consumed by the cold. They are speaking in Latin, and I'm only able to hear a few words through the gale; wolf, blood, master, god, and consumed. I stand there for as long as I can, weathering the storm and the shouting, the cold and the ice, until I can finally summon one word from the foggy recesses of my mind before it is taken from me; I clench my eyes shut, throw back my head and I scream to the four corners of this realm as loud as I can muster

"STOP!"

And they do. The procession stops, they shouting stops, the drum stops. Even the wind has suddenly died down, and the silence is so that not even a cricket jumping from a leaf would go unnoticed. I'm panting for air, that single command having nearly stopped my furiously racing heart. I lower my head, eyes still closed, and it is quiet. I stand there, waiting for it to end, but it is quiet. I listen for the sound I know is coming, the sound I know will end all of this…but it is quiet. I know this part. I slowly lift my eyes to the procession and see twelve skeletons in simple sackcloth robes and rope belts, five staring at me, and seven with their heads bowed; they are being led by another, taller than they are, dressed in black robes and wearing a crown of bones. I look into the blank sockets of this skull, bracing myself for what I knew would happen next. It didn't help. The lead demon dropped his bony jaws and let loose a scream from the very pits of Hell itself; a scream filled with the unimaginable torment of millions of souls, trapped in the darkness and the void, without hope, without mercy, with nothing left but their pain and their screams echoing for endless time.

This is the sound that ripped me from my nightmare, drenched in sweat and freezing cold. I look and see the window open, letting the frozen St. Petersburg air into my bedroom. I get up, close the window firmly, and go into the kitchen to make some tea. I won't be sleeping any more tonight, anyway. I never do after I have that dream.

It's always the same, but only happens once in a while. I stand in my kitchen waiting for the tea, and I think. This is the sixth time I've had this dream, and the other five times I've had it something terrible has happened soon afterwards. I remove the teabag with frozen hands, and bring the mug shakily up to my lips. I'm not prepared for this to happen. Not again.

title: Absolute Zero (intro, feedback appreciated)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what happens when the narrator realizes they've had a nightmare.

answer: While sleeping, the narrator has a nightmare in which they are trapped in a deathly landscape. When they realize they've had the nightmare, they realize something terrible tends to happen shortly afterwards, and they realize they are scared. The sound accompanying the nightmare is a scream from creatures in Hell, and the creatures themselves are undead in simple sackcloth robes and garbed in black robes and wearing a crown of bones. After overcoming their fear, the narrator closes the window to keep the cold air out, makes some tea, and pondries if there will be another nightmare.

text: The second last sentence describes the nightmare itself rather than the aftermath of the nightmare.

refinement: While sleeping, the narrator has a nightmare in which they are trapped in a deathly landscape. When they realize they've had the nightmare, they realize something terrible tends to happen shortly afterwards, and they realize they are scared. After overcoming their fear, the narrator closes the window to keep the cold air out, makes some tea, and pondries if there will be another nightmare.

text: "pondries" should be "ponders".

refinement: While sleeping, the narrator has a nightmare in which they are trapped in a deathly landscape. When they realize they've had the nightmare, they realize something terrible tends to happen shortly afterwards, and they realize they are scared. After overcoming their fear, the narrator closes the window to keep the cold air out, makes some tea, and ponders if there will be another nightmare.

text: This answer does not mention the narrator's fear at the end of the story.

refinement: While sleeping, the narrator has a nightmare in which they are trapped in a deathly landscape. When they realize they've had the nightmare, they realize something terrible tends to happen shortly afterwards, and they realize they are scared. After overcoming their fear, the narrator closes the window to keep the cold air out, makes some tea, and ponders if there will be another nightmare. They are afraid of whatever is about to happen.

text: The first sentence is unnecessary.

refinement: When they realize they've had the nightmare, they realize something terrible tends to happen shortly afterwards, and they realize they are scared. After overcoming their fear, the narrator closes the window to keep the cold air out, makes some tea, and ponders if there will be another nightmare. They are afraid of whatever is about to happen.

answer: When the narrator wakes up sweating and cold from their nightmare, they open their window to let in some air. They then close the window and make tea in their kitchen. There they think about the nightmare, and how it's a reoccurring dream. They worry about something bad happening as they drink their tea because something bad always happens after that dream.

answer: They're able to wake themselves from it, so they decide to make tea instead.

text: This omits mention of their reflections about the recurring nightmare.

refinement: They're able to wake themselves from it, so they decide to make tea instead. They accept that they won't be able to sleep again, as they usually aren't whenever they have the recurring nightmare.

text: The answer doesn't mention the negative events that typically follow the nightmare.

refinement: They're able to wake themselves from it, so they decide to make tea instead. They accept that they won't be able to sleep again, as they usually aren't whenever they have the recurring nightmare. The narrator reflects that every time they have the nightmare, something terrible happens afterwards.

text: The answer doesn't mention the narrator's emotional state.

refinement: They're able to wake themselves from it, so they decide to make tea instead. They accept that they won't be able to sleep again, as they usually aren't whenever they have the recurring nightmare. The narrator reflects that every time they have the nightmare, something terrible happens afterwards. They are fearful and unprepared for something bad to happen again.

answer: The narrator has a nightmare about being in an empty wasteland, with the sounds of a wolf howling in the forest and bells ringing in the distance. When the procession of skeletons appear, they scream, signaling the end of the nightmare. However, the scream frightens the narrator and they suddenly wake up, realizing they're in their kitchen. This has happened before, and each time something terrible has happened shortly afterwards.

text: The sentences summarizing the nightmare are not relevant to the question.

refinement: This has happened before, and each time something terrible has happened shortly afterwards.

text: The answer should mention that the narrator makes tea.

refinement: The narrator makes tea, accepting that they won't be falling back asleep. This has happened before, and each time something terrible has happened shortly afterwards.

text: "This has happened" should be more specific.

refinement: The narrator makes tea, accepting that they won't be falling back asleep. They've had this nightmare before, and each time something terrible has happened shortly afterwards.

text: The answer should touch on the narrator's fearfulness.

refinement: The narrator makes tea, accepting that they won't be falling back asleep. They've had this nightmare before, and each time something terrible has happened shortly afterwards. They are fearful and unprepared for something bad to happen again.

answer: The narrator screams to the four corners of this realm as loud as possible. It doesn't help him but the dream ends.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about winter elements?

answer: The text describes winter elements such as the cold, darkness, a full moon, wolves, thunder, and the screaming procession of skeletons. The winter elements create an eerie and terrifying atmosphere in the dream, which eventually leads to a demonic scream.

text: The answer does not mention the frozen road.

refinement: The text describes winter elements such as the cold, darkness, a full moon, wolves, thunder, and the screaming procession of skeletons. The text also mentions a frozen road. The winter elements create an eerie and terrifying atmosphere in the dream, which eventually leads to a demonic scream.

text: The answer doesn't emntion the endless stretch of snow and ice.

refinement: The text describes winter elements such as the cold, darkness, a full moon, wolves, thunder, and the screaming procession of skeletons. The text also mentions a frozen road. The narrator also sees an endless stretch of snow and ice. The winter elements create an eerie and terrifying atmosphere in the dream, which eventually leads to a demonic scream.

text: The full moon, wolves, thunder, and skeletons aren't necessarily related to winter.

refinement: The text describes winter elements such as the cold and the darkness. The text also mentions a frozen road. The narrator also sees an endless stretch of snow and ice. The winter elements create an eerie and terrifying atmosphere in the dream, which eventually leads to a demonic scream.

text: The final sentence is unnecessary,

refinement: The text describes winter elements such as the cold and the darkness. The text also mentions a frozen road. The narrator also sees an endless stretch of snow and ice.

answer: It is an important part of the narrator's dream. The author always feels the cold in his sleep. The forest is dark and the roads are covered in ice. Most of the times he tries to escape, it's things are not possible in his dream because of the cold. The howling of wind, the eerie whispering of the dead, and the dirgy tones of funeral bells all make the narrator feel vulnerable and frustrated. In real life, winters in western Russia can sometimes be too cold for tractors to drive. It's possible he associates those episodes in his dream with the cold winter.

text: The sentence about Russia is not relevant to the story.

refinement: It is an important part of the narrator's dream. The author always feels the cold in his sleep. The forest is dark and the roads are covered in ice. Most of the times he tries to escape, it's things are not possible in his dream because of the cold. The howling of wind, the eerie whispering of the dead, and the dirgy tones of funeral bells all make the narrator feel vulnerable and frustrated.

answer: The text discusses the winter elements of darkness, cold, and sounds, particularly the macabre sounds created by ghostly funeral processions. The text also demonstrates that the elements have a powerful effect on the narrator, not only causing her nightmares but also creating a feeling of dread or unease.

answer: In the narrator's dream landscape, it is a freezing, possibly midwinter night. There's snow on the ground, and it's so cold that trying to remember the sensation of warmth is impossible. The road, weeds, and plants are all gasping for life in between ice cracks. The wind paired with the freezing temperatures makes the narrator feel like its sinking its impossibly deep into them.

answer: The narrator describes winter elements vividly in the dream world that they enter when they fight off the zombies coming after them. The air is so frozen with the cold of winter that it is impossible to tell if it is the witching hour. Plants and branches are gasping for life uselessly caught in the freeze of winter. Water freezes solid and does not thaw, the ground is frozen solid and cannot sustain life. The ground appears jagged and rough, with penitentiary spikes made long ago preventing any opportunity for escape. The darkest time of winter is the spark for this darkness and in this instance exists for this messenger.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything related to the sound of voices.

answer: There are two types of voices: the cacophony of sounds and the muffled procession. While the cacophony of sounds provides only a faint echo of the funeral mass, the muffled procession is loud and unabated. Both sets of voices are described as unpleasant and gruff. The cacophony seeps through the walls and rattles the room, blaring its grudgeful, discontent sounds. The procession of voices is described as rattling the cold domain with their funeral dirges. The cacophony echoes so powerfully that their tones evoke terror to the narrator's very soul, while the muffled procession floats nearer powerfully.

answer: The narrator first begins to hear soft voices that grow steadily. They realize they're singing a funeral dirge for the narrator, and their tones make the narrator's hair stand on edge. The voices, which are shouting blasphemies in Latin, grow so loud that they dominate the frozen landscape. The narrator screams loudly for them to stop, and they do. However, a demon lets out a scream that sounds like its made out of the unimaginable torment of millions of souls.

answer: The protagonist experiences an unnerving procession of twelve skeletons led by a skeletal figure in black robes. Upon their approach, the disembodied voices scream from the pits of Hell, echoing for all eternity. The protagonist has had the same dream six times before and knows from experience that something terrible is to follow. The screaming voices in the dream always presage something terrible happening soon afterwards.

text: The details about the dream are irrelevant.

refinement: The protagonist experiences an unnerving procession of twelve skeletons led by a skeletal figure in black robes. Upon their approach, the disembodied voices scream from the pits of Hell, echoing for all eternity.

text: More details could be mentioned about the funeral dirge.

refinement: The protagonist hears voices singing a funeral dirge. The voices start out soft but grow louder. The protagonist experiences an unnerving procession of twelve skeletons led by a skeletal figure in black robes. Upon their approach, the disembodied voices scream from the pits of Hell, echoing for all eternity.

text: The answer does not mention that the voices are speaking in Latin.

refinement: The protagonist hears voices singing a funeral dirge. The voices start out soft but grow louder. The voices speak in Latin. The protagonist experiences an unnerving procession of twelve skeletons led by a skeletal figure in black robes. Upon their approach, the disembodied voices scream from the pits of Hell, echoing for all eternity.

answer: In the dream, the sound of the bells is overpowering, imposing, and commanding. The sound of the funeral dirge is horrible and hair-raising, bringing the cold even closer. The bells ring only three times before the procession is silent; then the voices come, strongly muffled at first but quickly rising. This is the sound that rips the narrator from the nightmare. After going to the kitchen for some tea, the narrator realizes it is time to be afraid.

answer: The protagonist dreams that they are standing in a desolate winter landscape and is being attacked by a procession of skeletons and demons. The procession's screams are described as coming from the pit of hell, a sound described as being capable of rending one's soul apart. The sound is a terrifying experience each time the protagonist dreams it. They are uncertain what the sound signifies, but it seems to portend something terrible.

text: The portent is the dream itself, not the sound.

refinement: The protagonist dreams that they are standing in a desolate winter landscape and is being attacked by a procession of skeletons and demons. The procession's screams are described as coming from the pit of hell, a sound described as being capable of rending one's soul apart. The sound is a terrifying experience each time the protagonist dreams it.

text: The answer should mention that the voices form a funeral dirge.

refinement: The protagonist dreams that they are standing in a desolate winter landscape and is being attacked by a procession of skeletons and demons. The procession's screams are described as coming from the pit of hell, a sound described as being capable of rending one's soul apart. The voices sing a funeral dirge. The sound is a terrifying experience each time the protagonist dreams it.

text: The answer could mention that the voices speak Latin.

refinement: The protagonist dreams that they are standing in a desolate winter landscape and is being attacked by a procession of skeletons and demons. The procession's screams are described as coming from the pit of hell, a sound described as being capable of rending one's soul apart. The voices sing a funeral dirge. They speak in Latin. The sound is a terrifying experience each time the protagonist dreams it.


text:
The 1964–65 NBA SEASON was the Celtics' 19th season in the NBA. The Celtics finished the season by winning their eighth NBA Championship, defeating the Los Angeles Lakers in five games. In 1996, the team was named one of the 10 greatest teams in NBA history. In addition five players were inducted into the Hall of Fame - K.C. Jones, Sam Jones, Tom Heinsohn, Bill Russell, and John Havlicek. Sam Jones, Havlicek, and Russell were selected as among the NBA's 50 greatest players. Both Red Auerbach and John Thompson were elected into the Hall of Fame as coaches.

Offseason

NBA Draft

The 1965 NBA DRAFT took place on May 4, 1964.

  Round   Pick   Player       Position           Nationality   School/Club Team
  ------- ------ ------------ ------------------ ------------- ------------------
  1       7      Mel Counts   Center / Forward                 Oregon State
  2       16     Ron Bonham   Forward                          Cincinnati

Roster

Regular season

Season standings

Record vs. opponents

  1964-65 NBA Records
  --------------------- ------- ------ ----- ------ ------ ------ ----- ------ ------
  Team
  Baltimore
  Boston
  Cincinnati
  Detroit
  Los Angeles
  New York
  Philadelphia
  San Francisco
  St. Louis

Playoffs

East Division Semifinals

The Celtics had a division semifinal bye.

East Division Finals

(1) BOSTON CELTICS vs. (3) Philadelphia 76ers: _Celtics win series 4–3_

-   GAME 1 @ Boston: BOSTON 108, Philadelphia 98
-   GAME 2 @ Philadelphia: PHILADELPHIA 109, Boston 103
-   GAME 3 @ Boston: BOSTON 112, Philadelphia 94
-   GAME 4 @ Philadelphia: PHILADELPHIA 134, Boston 131 (OT)
-   GAME 5 @ Boston: BOSTON 114, Philadelphia 108
-   GAME 6 @ Philadelphia: PHILADELPHIA 112, Boston 106
-   GAME 7 @ Boston: BOSTON 110, Philadelphia 109

NBA Finals

  Game     Date       Home Team     Result    Road Team
  -------- ---------- ------------- --------- -------------
  Game 1   April 18   BOSTON        142–110   Los Angeles
  Game 2   April 19   BOSTON        129–123   Los Angeles
  Game 3   April 21   LOS ANGELES   126–105   Boston
  Game 4   April 23   Los Angeles   99–112    BOSTON
  Game 5   April 25   BOSTON        129–96    Los Angeles

_Celtics win series 4–1_

Awards and honors

-   Bill Russell, NBA Most Valuable Player Award
-   Red Auerbach, NBA Coach of the Year Award
-   Bill Russell, All-NBA First Team
-   Sam Jones, All-NBA Second Team

title: 1964–65 Boston Celtics season

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what the text states about the 1964-65 Boston Celtics season.

answer: The 1964-65 NBA season was the 19th season of the Boston Celtics, and they ended up winning the NBA Championship after defeating the Lakers in five games. Five members of the team were eventually inducted into the Hall of Fame, five players made the All-NBA First or Second Team, and Bill Russell was named the NBA Most Valuable Player Award.

text: It is inaccurate that five players made the All-NBA First or Second Team, and Bill Russell was named the NBA Most Valuable Player Award in the 1964-65 season.

refinement: The 1964-65 NBA season was the 19th season of the Boston Celtics, and they ended up winning the NBA Championship after defeating the Lakers in five games. Five members of the team were eventually inducted into the Hall of Fame.

text: It is omitted that it was the 19th NBA season.

refinement: The 1964-65 NBA season was the 19th NBA of the Boston Celtics in the NBA, and they ended up winning the NBA Championship after defeating the Lakers in five games. Five members of the team were eventually inducted into the Hall of Fame.

text: Four, not five members of the team were eventually inducted into the Hall of Fame.

refinement: The 1964-65 NBA season was the 19th NBA of the Boston Celtics in the NBA, and they ended up winning the NBA Championship after defeating the Lakers in five games. Five members of the team were eventually inducted into the Hall of Fame, four players made the All-NBA First or Second Team, and Bill Russell was named the NBA Most Valuable Player Award.

answer: The 1963-64 NBA season was the 19th season for the Boston Celtics. The Celtics finished an NBA Championship by defeating the Los Angeles Lakers in five games.

text: It is omitted that Red Auerbach earned the NBA Coach of the Year Award; Bill Russell was named MVP, and Sam Jones was named to the All-NBA Second Team.

refinement: The 1963-64 NBA season was the 19th season for the Boston Celtics. The Celtics finished an NBA Championship by defeating the Los Angeles Lakers in five games. Red Auerbach earned the NBA Coach of the Year Award, Bill Russell was named MVP, and Sam Jones was named to the All-NBA Second Team.

text: It is omitted that it was the 19th NBA season.

refinement: The 1963-64 NBA season was the 19th season for the Boston Celtics in the NBA. The Celtics finished an NBA Championship by defeating the Los Angeles Lakers in five games. Red Auerbach earned the NBA Coach of the Year Award, Bill Russell was named MVP, and Sam Jones was named to the All-NBA Second Team.

answer: The 1964-65 Boston Celtics had a successful season, winning their eighth NBA Championship and earning the NBA Coach of the Year Award. Bill Russell was named MVP and Sam Jones was named to the All-NBA Second Team.

text: It is omitted that it was the 19th NBA season.

refinement: The 1964-65 Boston Celtics had a successful season, winning their eighth NBA Championship and earning the NBA Coach of the Year Award. Bill Russell was named MVP and Sam Jones was named to the All-NBA Second Team. It was the 19th season for the Boston Celtics in the NBA.

text: Rather 'the Boston Celtics had a successful 1964-65 season' than 't1964-65'.

refinement: The Boston Celtics had a successful 1964-65 season, winning their eighth NBA Championship and earning the NBA Coach of the Year Award. Bill Russell was named MVP and Sam Jones was named to the All-NBA Second Team. It was the 19th season for the Boston Celtics in the NBA.

answer: The text describes the 1964-65 NBA season as the 19th season for the Celtics. The Celtics ended the season by winning their eight NBA championship. They defeated the Los Angeles Lakers in five games. The text also describes the five basketball players who were inducted into the Hall of Fame.

text: It is omitted that it was the 19th NBA season.

refinement: The text describes the 1964-65 NBA season as the 19th season for the Celtics in the NBA. The Celtics ended the season by winning their eight NBA championship. They defeated the Los Angeles Lakers in five games. The text also describes the five basketball players who were inducted into the Hall of Fame.

text: It should be 'eighth' instead of 'eitgh'.

refinement: The text describes the 1964-65 NBA season as the 19th season for the Celtics in the NBA. The Celtics ended the season by winning their eighth NBA championship. They defeated the Los Angeles Lakers in five games. The text also describes the five basketball players who were inducted into the Hall of Fame.

answer: The Celtics was the 19th season they have played in the league. They finished the season with 8 wins, defeating the Lakers in Game 5. The text also states that in 1996, the team was named one of the 10 greatest teams in NBA history. The five players of the Celtic were inducted into the Hall of Fame. Red Auerbach and John Thompson were elected into the Hall of Fame as coaches.

text: IT is not stated that they finished the season with 8 wins.

refinement: The Celtics was the 19th season they have played in the league. They defeated the Lakers in Game 5. The text also states that in 1996, the team was named one of the 10 greatest teams in NBA history. The five players of the Celtic were inducted into the Hall of Fame. Red Auerbach and John Thompson were elected into the Hall of Fame as coaches.

text: It is not stated that they defeated the Lakers in Game 5 but that they defeated the Lakers in five games.

refinement: The Celtics was the 19th season they have played in the league. They defeated the Lakers in 5 games. The text also states that in 1996, the team was named one of the 10 greatest teams in NBA history. The five players of the Celtic were inducted into the Hall of Fame. Red Auerbach and John Thompson were elected into the Hall of Fame as coaches.

text: Rather 'It was the Celtics' 19th season in the NBA.' instead of 'The Celtics was the 19th season they have played in the league'.

refinement: It was the Celtics' 19th season in the NBA. They defeated the Lakers in 5 games. The text also states that in 1996, the team was named one of the 10 greatest teams in NBA history. The five players of the Celtic were inducted into the Hall of Fame. Red Auerbach and John Thompson were elected into the Hall of Fame as coaches.

text: It is irrelevant that in 1996, the team was named one of the 10 greatest teams in NBA history

refinement: It was the Celtics' 19th season in the NBA. They defeated the Lakers in 5 games. The five players of the Celtic were inducted into the Hall of Fame. Red Auerbach and John Thompson were elected into the Hall of Fame as coaches.

text: John Thompson was not elected into the Hall of Fame as a coach in the 1964-65 NBA season.

refinement: It was the Celtics' 19th season in the NBA. They defeated the Lakers in 5 games. The five players of the Celtic were inducted into the Hall of Fame. Red Auerbach was elected into the Hall of Fame as a coach.

text: It is omitted that Bill Russell was named MVP, and Sam Jones was named to the All-NBA Second Team.

refinement: It was the Celtics' 19th season in the NBA. They defeated the Lakers in 5 games. The five players of the Celtic were inducted into the Hall of Fame. Red Auerbach was elected into the Hall of Fame as a coach, Bill Russell was named MVP, and Sam Jones was named to the All-NBA Second Team.


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The District’s Democratic primary is two weeks from now, which means we’re in the thick of elections hijinks season. Now Ward 8 incumbent LARUBY MAY has fired a campaign worker shown on video trying to make an illicit voter registration—all while May stands just a few feet away.

Much of the action in the video takes place off-camera, where the campaign worker tries to convince a resident of Northeast D.C. to instead register at an address in the ward so he can vote for May. The prospective voter, though, refuses.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mr_aihSJ8HM

“I’m not in the ward no more,” the prospective voter says.

“You’re not?” replies the campaign worker. “Put your address you be at right here.”

With May standing just few feet away, the campaign worker continues to tell the man to file an illicit voter registration.

“What’s the address you use right here?” he says, adding later. “I’m saying, there’s no address you can use? That you can use? Nobody.”

After LL asked May’s campaign about the video, the unnamed campaign worker was fired.

“The moment the video was brought to the campaign’s attention and we were able to confirm the identity, the person involved was fired,” May said in a statement. “The individual violated our canvasing policy which was reviewed with all campaign staff.”

The video doesn’t surprise TRAYON WHITE, who is running again for the Ward 8 seat after losing to May by less than 100 votes in last year’s special election.

“It doesn’t shock me,” White says. “I’ve been hearing about that stuff going on since last year.”

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why does Laruby May fire a campaign worker?

answer: The campaign worker was fired because he was trying to make an illicit voter registration.

text: "shown on video trying to make an illicit voter registration" is evidence of Laura May firing a campaign worker for trying to make illicit voter registration.

answer: He is filming making an illicit voter registration.

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refinement: He is filmed making an illicit voter registration.

text: "shown on video trying to make an illicit voter registration" is evidence of Laura May firing a campaign worker for trying to make illicit voter registration.

answer: Because the video showing the campaign worker tells the man to file an illicit voter registration is brought to the campaign’s attention.

text: "shown on video trying to make an illicit voter registration" is evidence of Laura May firing a campaign worker for trying to make illicit voter registration.

answer: The campaign worker was caught on video making an illicit voter registration.

text: "shown on video trying to make an illicit voter registration" is evidence of Laura May firing a campaign worker for trying to make illicit voter registration.

answer: The campaign worker was fired after being caught on video attempting to make an illicit voter registration.

text: "shown on video trying to make an illicit voter registration" is evidence of Laura May firing a campaign worker for trying to make illicit voter registration.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Does May know that the campaign worker tells the man to file an illicit voter registration?

answer: Yes, eventually the man is told to stop by a member of the campaign. But it is not stated if May knew it at the time.

text: There's no evidence to suggest that the campaign member is stopped.

refinement: Yes, but it is not stated if May knew it at the time.

answer: Yes, May knows that the campaign worker tells the man to file an illicit voter registration. The campaign worker was fired after the video of the incident was brought to May's attention and the individual was seen violating the campaign's canvasing policy.

answer: It is not explicitly said that she does, but she might know because she stands just a few feet away.

text: "all while May stands just a few feet away" is evidence that it's implied May knows of the actions.

answer: Yes, May was standing just a few feet away when the campaign worker tells the prospective voter to file an illicit voter registration.

text: "all while May stands just a few feet away" is evidence that May stands a few feet away when during the actions.

answer: Yes. May is standing just few feet away but turns her back and doesn't intervene on the worker's behalf.

text: There's no evidence to suggest that May turns her back to not intervene.

refinement: Yes. May is standing just few feet away and a video of the actions surfaces.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How is Trayon White related to May?

answer: White is May's political opponent who is also running for the Ward 8.

text: "TRAYON WHITE, who is running again for the Ward 8 seat after losing to May" is evidence that White is May's opponent.

answer: Trayon White is a challenger running against May for the Ward 8 seat.

text: "TRAYON WHITE, who is running again for the Ward 8 seat after losing to May" is evidence that White is May's opponent.

answer: Trayon White is a candidate running against May in the District's Democratic primary.

text: "TRAYON WHITE, who is running again for the Ward 8 seat after losing to May" is evidence that White is May's opponent.

answer: They are running for a DC school board seat. The previous year White lost a special election to May.

text: There's no evidence in the text to suggest that they are running for DC school board

refinement:
Trayon White is a candidate running against May in the Ward 8 District's Democratic primary.
The previous year White lost a special election to May.

answer: They ran against each other in a special election held in Ward 8 District. May won and White is running again for the Democratic primary.

text: "TRAYON WHITE, who is running again for the Ward 8 seat after losing to May" is evidence that White is May's opponent.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Did the video surprise White?

answer: It didn't surprise him.

text: "The video doesn’t surprise TRAYON WHITE" is evidence that the video doesn't surprise White

answer: No, White says that he has been hearing about illicit voter registration going on since last year.

text: "The video doesn’t surprise TRAYON WHITE" is evidence that the video doesn't surprise White

answer: Yes, the video surprised White.

text: Incorrectly mentions the video surprises White, however "The video doesn’t surprise TRAYON WHITE" is evidence that the video doesn't surprise White.

refinement: The video doesn’t surprise TRAYON WHITE, he says he's 'been hearing about that stuff going on since last year'

answer: No.

text: "The video doesn’t surprise TRAYON WHITE" is evidence that the video doesn't surprise White

answer: No, the video did not surprise White.

text: "The video doesn’t surprise TRAYON WHITE" is evidence that the video doesn't surprise White

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: The video shows Ward 8 incumbent May's campaign worker trying to persuade a prospective voter to make an illicit voter registration to Vote for May. The video was shared online and once the election staff managed to identify the campaign worker, he was fired. It is not a surprising thing as other fights have been heard or seen over there.

text: It misses to specify that it was May's rival Trayon White who said it was not surprising.

refinement: The video shows Ward 8 incumbent May's campaign worker trying to persuade a prospective voter to make an illicit voter registration to Vote for May. The video was shared online and once the election staff managed to identify the campaign worker, he was fired. May's opponent for Ward 8, Trayon White, said it is not a surprising thing as he's been hearing about it going on since last year.

answer: LARUBY MAY, the incumbent Ward 8 Democratic candidate, fired one of her campaign workers after he was caught on video trying to convince a prospective voter to file an illicit voter registration. The video shows the campaign worker urging the prospective resident to use a different address in order to vote for May. While May was present, the campaign worker was fired. This video doesn't come as a surprise to TRAYON WHITE, the candidate running against May, who has been hearing about this type of activity since last year.

text: There's no evidence to suggest that May was present when the campaign worker was fired.

refinement: LARUBY MAY, the incumbent Ward 8 Democratic candidate, fired one of her campaign workers after he was caught on video trying to convince a prospective voter to file an illicit voter registration. The video shows the campaign worker urging the prospective resident to use a different address in order to vote for May. This video doesn't come as a surprise to TRAYON WHITE, the candidate running against May, who has been hearing about this type of activity since last year.

answer: Democratic congressional candidate Laruby May fires a campaign worker for allegedly trying to instigate voter fraud. The campaign worker tries to get a prospective voter to create an illicit voter registration from a fake address. The controversy is not shocking to Trayon White, who is running for the same congressional seat as Laruby May.

answer: LARUBY MAY, the incumbent Ward 8 representative, has fired a campaign worker who was seen trying to illegally register a voter off-camera. The unidentified worker was apparently trying to convince the voter to register in the ward where May was running in order to vote for her. The worker was fired after the video surfaced. TRAYON WHITE, who unsuccessfully ran against May in a special election last year, says he has been hearing of this sort of activity for a while now.

text: It misses to specify that it was seen on camera but much of the action takes place off-camera.

refinement: LARUBY MAY, the incumbent Ward 8 representative, has fired a campaign worker who was seen on video trying to illegally register a voter but much of the action takes place off-camera. The unidentified worker was apparently trying to convince the voter to register in the ward where May was running in order to vote for her. The worker was fired after the video surfaced. TRAYON WHITE, who unsuccessfully ran against May in a special election last year, says he has been hearing of this sort of activity for a while now.

text: Redundant details are included which exceed the targeted summary length.

refinement: LARUBY MAY, the incumbent Ward 8 representative, has fired a campaign worker who was seen on video trying to illegally register a voter but much of the action takes place off-camera. The unidentified worker was apparently trying to convince the voter to register in the ward where May was running in order to vote for her. TRAYON WHITE, who unsuccessfully ran against May in a special election last year, says he has been hearing of this sort of activity for a while now.

answer: Ward 8 incumbent Laruby May fire a campaign worker because the video showing a campaign worker telling the man to file an illicit voter registration is brought to the campaign’s attention. In the video, the campaign worker tries to convince a resident of Northeast D.C. to instead register at an address in the ward so he can vote for May, and the man refuses. Trayon White, May's political opponent who is also running for Ward 8, says that he has been hearing about illicit voter registration going on since last year.


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MARK J. MAZUR is an American economist who formerly served as Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in the U.S. Department of the Treasury.

Early life and education

Mark Mazur received a bachelor of arts in financial administration from Michigan State University and earned a Ph.D. in economics from Stanford University.[1][2][3]

Career

Mazur early worked as a tax accountant for General Motors before spending four years teaching public finance at Carnegie Mellon University. Later, he entered government, working first as a staff member on the U.S. Congress' Joint Committee on Taxation and, later, in several middle management positions at the White House and the U.S. Department of Energy. He eventually moved to the Internal Revenue Service where he was appointed to the senior-level position of director of research, analysis, and statistics of income.[4][5]

In 2009 Mazur was appointed Deputy Assistant Secretary of the Treasury for Tax Analysis. He was named Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in 2011, being confirmed to the post by the U.S. Senate the following year.[6][7][8]

In 2017, Mazur left the U.S. government to accept a position as director of the Tax Policy Center, a joint project of the Urban Institute and the Brookings Institution.[9][10][11]

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title: Mark Mazur

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is Mark Mazur?

answer: an American economist who used to serve as Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in the U.S. Department of the Treasury

text: Capitalize

refinement: An American economist who used to serve as Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in the U.S. Department of the Treasury

answer: He is an American economist who formerly served as Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in the U.S. Department of the Treasury.

answer: Mark Mazur is an economist who formerly served as Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in the U.S. Department of the Treasury.

answer: Mark Mazur is an American economist who was formerly Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in the U.S. Department of the Treasury.

answer: He is an American economist who formerly served as Assistant Secretary of the Treasury.

text: For teax policy

refinement: Mark Mazur is an American economist who was formerly Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in the U.S. Department of the Treasury.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe Mazur's early life.

answer: Mark Mazur received a bachelor of arts in financial administration from Michigan State University and earned a Ph.D. in economics from Stanford University. Mazur started his career as a tax accountant for General Motors before eventually transitioning into government work, where he worked in several key managerial positions.

answer: He received a Bachelor of Arts in Financial Administration from Michigan State University and earned a Ph.D. in economics from Stanford University.

answer: Mazur earned a Ph.D. in economics from Stanford University after earning a B.A. in financial administration.

answer: Mazur obtained a bachelor of arts in financial administration from Michigan State University and earned a Ph.D. in economics from Stanford University. He worked first as a tax accountant for General Motors before teaching public finance at Carnegie Mellon University and later entering government. He ultimately became the Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in the U.S. Department of the Treasury.

answer: He received a B.A. in financial administration from Michigan State University and earned a Ph.D. in economics from Stanford University.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where was Mazur from?

answer: He was from the United States.

answer: Mark Mazur was born in Michigan and earned a bachelor's degree in financial administration from Michigan State University.

answer: Mazur was from the United States.

answer: That information isn't specified, but it is clear he's from America.

answer: Mark Mazur is originally from Michigan.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What happened in 2017?

answer: In 2017, Mazur left the U.S. government to accept a position as director of the Tax Policy Center.

answer: In 2017, Mark Mazur left the U.S. government to accept a position as director of the Tax Policy Center.

answer: Mazur left the U.S. government to accept a position as director of the Tax Policy Center, a joint project of the Urban Institute and the Brookings Institution.

answer: Mazur left the U.S. government to accept a position as director of the Tax Policy Center.

answer: Mazur left the US government to accept a position as director of the Tax Policy Center, a joint project of the Urban Institute and the Brookings Institution.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Mark Mazur is an economist who formerly served as Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in the U.S. Department of the Treasury. He has since accepted a position as Director of the Tax Policy Center.

answer: Mark Mazur is an American economist and former assistant secretary for tax policy in the US Department of the Treasury.

answer: Mark Mazur is a former Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in the U.S. Department of the Treasury who now serves as director of the Tax Policy Center in Washington.

answer: This article is about Mark Mazur, an American economist who served as Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in the U.S. Department of the Treasury.

answer: This article details the career of Mark Mazur, an American economist and Assistant Secretary for Tax Policy in the U.S. Department of the Treasury.


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QIHE STATION () is a station of Line 2, Suzhou Rail Transit. The station is located in Xiangcheng District of Suzhou. It started service in September 24, 2016, when Line 2 extension started service.[1]

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title: Qihe station

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What line is Qihe Station on?

answer: Line 2

text: QIHE STATION is a station of Line 2

answer: Qihe Station is located on Line 2 of the Suzhou Rail Transit.

text: QIHE STATION is a station of Line 2, Suzhou Rail Transit.

answer: Qihe Station is on Line 2

text: QIHE STATION is a station of Line 2.

answer: Qihe Station is on Line 2.

text: QIHE STATION is a station of Line 2.

answer: Qihe Station is on Line 2, the Line 2, Suzhou Rail Transit.

text: QIHE STATION is a station of Line 2, Suzhou Rail Transit.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When did Qihe Station begin service?

answer: Qihe Station began service on September 24, 2016.

text: It started service in September 24, 2016

answer: Qihe Station begun service on September 24, 2016.

text: It started service in September 24, 2016

answer: The Qihe Station began service on September 24, 2016.

text: It started service in September 24, 2016

answer: September 24, 2016.

text: It started service in September 24, 2016

answer: The station began service in September 24, 2016.

text: It started service in September 24, 2016

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where is Qihe Station located?

answer: Qihe Station is located in Xiangcheng District of Suzhou.

text: The station is located in the Xiangcheng District of Suzhou.

answer: Qihe Station is loacted in Xiangcheng District of Suzhou.

text: The station is located in the Xiangcheng District of Suzhou.

answer: Qihe Station is located in Xiangcheng District of Suzhou.

text: The station is located in the Xiangcheng District of Suzhou.

answer: Qihe Station is located in Xiangcheng District of Suzhou.

text: The station is located in the Xiangcheng District of Suzhou.

answer: Qihe Station is located in Xiangcheng District of Suzhou.

text: The station is located in the Xiangcheng District of Suzhou.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What rail service is Qihe Station a part of?

answer: Qihe Station is a part of Suzhou Rail Transit.

text: QIHE STATION is a station of Line 2, Suzhou Rail Transit.

answer: Line 2 of Suzhou Rail Transit

text: QIHE STATION is a station of Line 2, Suzhou Rail Transit.

answer: Qihe Station is part of Line 2 of the Suzhou Rail Transit.

text: QIHE STATION is a station of Line 2, Suzhou Rail Transit.

answer: Suzhou Rail Transit.

text: QIHE STATION is a station of Line 2, Suzhou Rail Transit.

answer: Qihe Station is part of the Suzhou Rail Transit.

text: QIHE STATION is a station of Line 2, Suzhou Rail Transit.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Qihe Station is a part of Suzhou Rail Transit. It is located in the Xiangcheng District and has been operating since 2016.

answer: Qihe Station is located in Xiangcheng District of Suzhou. The station is a stop on Line 2 and began service in September 24, 2016.

answer: QIHE STATION is a station of Line 2, Suzhou Rail Transit. It is located in Xiangcheng District of Suzhou and started service in September 24, 2016.

answer: Qihe Station is part of Line 2 (Suzhou Rail Transit). The station is located in Chengchen District in Suzhou City, China.

text: Could contain more information

refinement: Qihe Station is part of Line 2 (Suzhou Rail Transit). The station is located in Chengchen District in Suzhou City, China and has been operating since 2016.

answer: Qihe Station is a station on Suzhou's Line 2. The station opened in September 2016 and is located in Xiangcheng District.


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“You should put on some long pants,” I advised my brother.

We headed down through a yellow field of tall grasses.  Its slope converged at the center like a valley, here, high among the San Francisco foothills.  The Western sun shone gently upon our earnest escapades.  I wanted our adventures to embody the spirit of this city, a mystical bastion of all freedoms.

The field's ending was demarcated by a sort of incomplete fence, probably put there decades ago by the Spanish or the young American imperialists.  We stumbled to the gate, which hung open perfectly and allowed the cool ocean breeze to pass through like a gust of its own breath.  Matt was waiting on the other side.  He was a year older and wiser, well acquainted with the ways of the city's center.  He'd told us stories about all of the nooks and strange neighborhoods, the nudists and the secret passageways and the unique chill you could feel when you ate ice cream on the beach near the Golden Gate Bridge.

Matt was just the person I wanted to see.  Though I knew it would disappoint my brother, my goal would be aided by this traveler's expertise with the city's heartbeat.  I bid my time as we made our way through the less fertile crags of the hills, full of rocks, mosses, and bird droppings.

We overcame the precipice, and I could see a large numbers of graves in the direction we were heading in.  As we approached, I heard a slight buzz.  Matt groaned and pulled his cell phone out of his pocket.

“I have to get home for dinner, guys.  Sorry.  Maybe tomorrow.”

*Damn*, I thought.  I consoled myself with the knowledge that I couldn't have asked him now, anyway.  I could still enjoy this exploration- what appeared to be an antique cemetery, alone with my similarly-minded brother.  We stepped up, upon the artificially elevated ground of the yard, and looked around.  The rows went on for what seemed like forever.  I noticed a huge chamber near the center, which had to be a tomb for someone important.  As I went along, I observed the dates on the graves.  I was surprised at the age: they were almost exclusively from the mid-to-late 1700s, and the few exceptions were only slightly newer.  One must have been a young boy: his date of death was just before his eighth birthday.  Some had flowery patterns carved into the sides, and there were the customary cherubic angels tending to the invisible gardens growing atop the headstones.

I reached the massive tomb.  The faded brown doors exuded an antiquated feeling, and I could see that the stony sides were cracking.  Looking around and discovering no unwanted observers, I drew closer.  I saw notes and small trinkets scattered upon the small floor in front of the entrance.  Upon further inspection, the door was missing one of its bolts.  This rendered it almost imperceptibly ajar, but the opening was there.  I cautiously took another step forward and heard a crunch under my foot.  Curious, I leaned down and picked up the note.

The handwriting was scrawled hurriedly, and I could barely make it out on the piece of paper that was shredded at all corners.  After a little scrutiny, I picked out the strange message:

“NOT ME AGAIN”

I dropped it and ran blindly from the tomb.  My eyes scanned the graveyard and I realized that I didn't know where my brother was.  I tripped and fell, and collected myself against General Juan Pablo de la Trinidad's epitaph.  Slowly, I was able to calm myself, and rationalized it by acknowledging the likelihood of bored vandals.

My brother came trudging up from the left.  “A lot of old graves,” he quipped.

I brushed off my jeans, embarrassed at my former fright.   The sun now hung just a nickel's width above the Pacific, and I reminded my brother that we should head back.  I hadn't talked to Matt or seen the cool parts of the city, but I had tomorrow.  I still had to visit Fortunata, and who knew what she might show me?

title: The Old Cemetery

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the motivations of the narrator.

answer: The narrator wants to explore the antique cemetery by himself and uncover its mysteries. One obstacle to this goal is Matt, who has left early because of dinner. Despite this, the narrator is determined to explore the graveyard without help and uncover its secrets. The motivation is curiosity.

text: This sentence is inaccurate. The narrator doesn't want to explore the cemetery by himself. He's gone with his brother, and wants his friend Matt to join.

refinement: The narrator wants to explore the antique cemetery and uncover its mysteries. One obstacle to this goal is Matt, who has left early because of dinner. Despite this, the narrator is determined to explore the graveyard without help and uncover its secrets. The motivation is curiosity.

text: While the narrator does eventually want to explore the antique cemetery, his overarching goal is to have an adventure with his brother that embodies the spirit of San Francisco with his friend Matt as the tour guide. It would be better to mention this first.

refinement: The narrator wants to have an adventure that embodies the spirit of San Francisco with his brother and with his friend Matt as the tour guide. The narrator wants to explore the antique cemetery and uncover its mysteries. One obstacle to this goal is Matt, who has left early because of dinner. Despite this, the narrator is determined to explore the graveyard without help and uncover its secrets. The motivation is curiosity.

text: It seems that the narrator didn't realize they were going to the cemetery at first because the narrator describes the cemetery as "what appears to be a cemetery". This signifies that they didn't initially know what they were heading towards. The sentence should be edited to accommodate this.

refinement: The narrator wants to have an adventure that embodies the spirit of San Francisco with his brother and with his friend Matt as the tour guide. They come upon an antique cemetery and the narrator becomes motivated to explore this. One obstacle to this goal is Matt, who has left early because of dinner. Despite this, the narrator is determined to explore the graveyard without help and uncover its secrets. The motivation is curiosity.

text: This could be altered into one smooth sentence that specifies that the narrator can explore without Matt's help specifically, as he still has his brother.

refinement: The narrator wants to have an adventure that embodies the spirit of San Francisco with his brother and with his friend Matt as the tour guide. They come upon an antique cemetery and the narrator becomes motivated to explore this. Even though Matt has to leave early for dinner and can no longer offer assistance, the narrator is determined to explore the graveyard without his help and uncover its secrets. The motivation is curiosity.

answer: The narrator is intrigued by an old cemetery, and seeks the wisdom of an older brother to guide him. Though spooked by an open tomb, the narrator is committed to the exploration, excited by the prospect of discoveries both mundane and mystical. Ultimately, the narrator wants to know the history of the city, through exploring the city around him.

text: The narrator seeks the wisdom of Matt, an older friend. He is not his brother. This is false and should be amended.

refinement: The narrator is intrigued by an old cemetery, and seeks the wisdom of his older friend Matt to guide him. Though spooked by an open tomb, the narrator is committed to the exploration, excited by the prospect of discoveries both mundane and mystical. Ultimately, the narrator wants to know the history of the city, through exploring the city around him.

text: The narrator's overarching goal is to have an adventure with his brother that embodies the spirit of San Francisco with his friend Matt as the tour guide. It would be better to mention this first.

refinement: The narrator seeks to have an adventure with his brother that embodies the spirit of San Francisco. He seeks the wisdom of his older friend Matt to guide him. The narrator is intrigued by an old cemetery. Though spooked by an open tomb, the narrator is committed to the exploration, excited by the prospect of discoveries both mundane and mystical. Ultimately, the narrator wants to know the history of the city, through exploring the city around him.

text: It would be better to say that the narrator is committed to exploration despite Matt leaving early. The open tomb doesn't really pose conflict in that regard.

refinement: The narrator seeks to have an adventure with his brother that embodies the spirit of San Francisco. He seeks the wisdom of his older friend Matt to guide him. The narrator is intrigued by an old cemetery. Though Matt has to leave early, the narrator is committed to the exploration, excited by the prospect of discoveries both mundane and mystical. Ultimately, the narrator wants to know the history of the city, through exploring the city around him.

text: This is too assumptive and it would be better to omit this.

refinement: The narrator seeks to have an adventure with his brother that embodies the spirit of San Francisco. He seeks the wisdom of his older friend Matt to guide him. The narrator is intrigued by an old cemetery. Though Matt has to leave early, the narrator is committed to the exploration. Ultimately, the narrator wants to know the history of the city, through exploring the city around him.

text: The narrator doesn't necessarily say they are exploring the history of the city, but that they are embodying the spirit. This sentence could be omitted.

refinement: The narrator seeks to have an adventure with his brother that embodies the spirit of San Francisco. He seeks the wisdom of his older friend Matt to guide him. The narrator is intrigued by an old cemetery. Though Matt has to leave early, the narrator is committed to the exploration.

answer: The narrator is in search of something that will satisfy the expectations of his persistence of going to a place where he might find someone interesting. The narrator was relieved when they find Matt, who they feel they can absorb information from. The narrator seems easily frustrated and surprised. Although he has consciously told himself he will be fine without Matt, the narrator presses on with his brother to the cemetery. The narrator even plans on going to different places tomorrow.

text: This motivation is inaccurate. The narrator isn't looking for someone. It's directly stated that the narrator is looking to go on adventures with their brother that embody the spirit of San Francisco.

refinement: The narrator  wants to go on adventures with their brother that embody the spirit of San Francisco. The narrator was relieved when they find Matt, who they feel they can absorb information from. The narrator seems easily frustrated and surprised. Although he has consciously told himself he will be fine without Matt, the narrator presses on with his brother to the cemetery. The narrator even plans on going to different places tomorrow.

text: This is awkwardly worded. It should be re-written to include that the narrator intentionally invited Matt due to his knowledge of the city.

refinement: The narrator  wants to go on adventures with their brother that embody the spirit of San Francisco. The narrator invites their friend Matt to guide them due to his knowledge of the city. The narrator seems easily frustrated and surprised. Although he has consciously told himself he will be fine without Matt, the narrator presses on with his brother to the cemetery. The narrator even plans on going to different places tomorrow.

text: This is both false and irrelevant to motivations. This should be omitted.

refinement: The narrator  wants to go on adventures with their brother that embody the spirit of San Francisco. The narrator invites their friend Matt to guide them due to his knowledge of the city.  Although he has consciously told himself he will be fine without Matt, the narrator presses on with his brother to the cemetery. The narrator even plans on going to different places tomorrow.

text: This sentence is inaccurate and confusing. "Although" doesn't make sense here because nothing bad happens to contradict the narrator's beliefs they'd be fine without Matt. This should be reworded to say that "although Matt leaves early,.."

refinement: The narrator  wants to go on adventures with their brother that embody the spirit of San Francisco. The narrator invites their friend Matt to guide them due to his knowledge of the city.  Although Matt leaves early, the narrator presses on with his brother to the cemetery. The narrator even plans on going to different places tomorrow.

text: It's omitted that they discover a cemetery.

refinement: The narrator  wants to go on adventures with their brother that embody the spirit of San Francisco. The narrator invites their friend Matt to guide them due to his knowledge of the city. Walking through a field, they discover a cemetery. Although Matt leaves early, the narrator presses on with his brother to the cemetery. The narrator even plans on going to different places tomorrow.

answer: The narrator is exploring San Francisco with her brother and a friend, Matt. She wants to ask Matt about something, thinking his traveling expertise will be useful, but Matt leaves early. They explore the ancient cemetery, and she seems interested in the large central tomb. In general, she wants to see the interesting places in the city.

text: The narrator doesn't want to ask Matt about something specifically. They want him there for wisdom and knowledge of the city in a broad sense.

refinement: The narrator is exploring San Francisco with her brother and a friend, Matt. She wants Matt there for his useful knowledge of the city, thinking his traveling expertise will be useful, but Matt leaves early. They explore the ancient cemetery, and she seems interested in the large central tomb. In general, she wants to see the interesting places in the city.

text: This is redundant and could be omitted.

refinement: The narrator is exploring San Francisco with her brother and a friend, Matt. She wants Matt there for his useful knowledge of the city, but Matt leaves early. They explore the ancient cemetery, and she seems interested in the large central tomb. In general, she wants to see the interesting places in the city.

text: "is exploring" isn't necessarily a motivation. The narrator specifically states that they want to go on adventures that embody the spirit of San Francisco.

refinement: The narrator wants to have adventures that embody the spirit of San Francisco with her brother and a friend, Matt. She wants Matt there for his useful knowledge of the city, but Matt leaves early. They explore the ancient cemetery, and she seems interested in the large central tomb. In general, she wants to see the interesting places in the city.

text: It's omitted that they come across an ancient cemetery.

refinement: The narrator wants to have adventures that embody the spirit of San Francisco with her brother and a friend, Matt. They come across an ancient cemetery through a field. She wants Matt there for his useful knowledge of the city, but Matt leaves early. They explore the ancient cemetery, and she seems interested in the large central tomb. In general, she wants to see the interesting places in the city.

text: Add "regardless" to this sentence to make it clear that exploration is still very much a motivation,

refinement: The narrator wants to have adventures that embody the spirit of San Francisco with her brother and a friend, Matt. They come across an ancient cemetery through a field. She wants Matt there for his useful knowledge of the city, but Matt leaves early. Regardless, they still explore the ancient cemetery, and she seems interested in the large central tomb. In general, she wants to see the interesting places in the city.

answer: The narrator and his brother want to explore San Francisco, but the narrator is well acquainted with the city's pulse and knows that he needs assistance to see it properly. He also has a crush on a woman, Fortunata.

text: This is both contradictory and inaccurate. It's Matt who is well acquainted with the city.

refinement: The narrator and his brother want to explore San Francisco. The narrator knows that he needs assistance to see it properly, so he enlists his friend Matt who is well acquainted with the city. He also has a crush on a woman, Fortunata.

text: This is a completely false statement, and needs to be omitted.

refinement: The narrator and his brother want to explore San Francisco. The narrator knows that he needs assistance to see it properly, so he enlists his friend Matt who is well acquainted with the city.

text: It's omitted that they discover an antique cemetery after walking through a field.

refinement: The narrator and his brother want to explore San Francisco. The narrator knows that he needs assistance to see it properly, so he enlists his friend Matt who is well acquainted with the city. They discover an antique cemetery.

text: It's omitted that despite Matt leaving early, the narrator and his brother are still motivated to explore the cemetery and carry on their adventures.

refinement: The narrator and his brother want to explore San Francisco. The narrator knows that he needs assistance to see it properly, so he enlists his friend Matt who is well acquainted with the city. They discover an antique cemetery. Despite Matt leaving early, the narrator and his brother are still motivated to explore the cemetery and carry on their adventures.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about Matt?

answer: He's a year older than the narrator, who thinks Matt is an experienced traveler. He seems to know the ins and outs of San Francisco. The narrator has something she wants to ask him, regarding his traveling experience. However, Matt has to leave early because his parents call him up for dinner. The narrator plans to ask him the next day.

text: It would be better to start the sentence off with "Matt" rather than "he".

refinement: Matt is a year older than the narrator, who thinks Matt is an experienced traveler. He seems to know the ins and outs of San Francisco. The narrator has something she wants to ask him, regarding his traveling experience. However, Matt has to leave early because his parents call him up for dinner. The narrator plans to ask him the next day.

text: The story doesn't necessarily call Matt an experienced traveler, but someone who knows the ways of San Francisco's center.

refinement: Matt is a year older than the narrator, who thinks Matt is well acquainted with the heart of San Francisco. He seems to know the ins and outs of San Francisco. The narrator has something she wants to ask him, regarding his traveling experience. However, Matt has to leave early because his parents call him up for dinner. The narrator plans to ask him the next day.

text: Specify that Matt is leaving early from their excursion near the cemetery.

refinement: Matt is a year older than the narrator, who thinks Matt is well acquainted with the heart of San Francisco. He seems to know the ins and outs of San Francisco. Matt accompanies the narrator on a walk towards a cemetery. The narrator has something she wants to ask him, regarding his traveling experience. However, Matt has to leave early because his parents call him up for dinner. The narrator plans to ask him the next day.

answer: The story says that Matt was scared away by the cemetery, and offered his useful traveling knowledge but left early. He seems cowardly.

text: Matt does not get scared in the story. This needs to be omitted.

refinement: The story says that Matt offered his useful traveling knowledge but left early. He seems cowardly.

text: This is false and needs to be omitted.

refinement: The story says that Matt offered his useful traveling knowledge but left early.

text: It's omitted that Matt is a year older than the narrator and well aware of the ways of San Francisco's center.

refinement: The story says that Matt is a year older than the narrator and well aware of the ways of San Francisco's center.  offered his useful traveling knowledge but left early.

text: It's omitted that the narrator chooses to bring Matt on their excursion to aid him with his expertise.

refinement: The story says that Matt is a year older than the narrator and well aware of the ways of San Francisco's center. The narrator brings him along on his adventure to aid him with his useful traveling knowledge, but Matt ends up leaving early.

text: It's omitted that the narrator wants to gleam more travelling advice from Matt the next day.

refinement: The story says that Matt is a year older than the narrator and well aware of the ways of San Francisco's center. The narrator brings him along on his adventure to aid him with his useful traveling knowledge, but Matt ends up leaving early. The narrator wants to gleam more travelling advice from Matt the next day.

answer: Matt is the narrator's brother's friend. He is a year older and a bit wiser than they are, who has told them stories about the city. He was initially supposed to join them but was later not able to.

text: It's not specified which person is friends with Matt, so it would be better to say that Matt just seems to be a friend of the narrator.

refinement: Matt seems to be the narrator's friend. He is a year older and a bit wiser than they are, who has told them stories about the city. He was initially supposed to join them but was later not able to.

text: Matt technically did join the narrator and his brother, but left early. This makes the statement inaccurate.

refinement: Matt seems to be the narrator's friend. He is a year older and a bit wiser than they are, who has told them stories about the city. Matt joined the narrator and their brother on an excursion towards a cemetery, but had to leave early.

text: It's omitted that Matt knows the ways of San Francisco well.

refinement: Matt seems to be the narrator's friend. He is a year older and a bit wiser than they are, who has told them stories about the city. He knows the ways of San Francisco well. Matt joined the narrator and their brother on an excursion towards a cemetery, but had to leave early.

text: It's omitted that the narrator invited Matt for his travel expertise.

refinement: Matt, who seems to be the narrator's friend, is invited on the narrator's adventure for his San Francisco travel experience. He is a year older and a bit wiser than they are, who has told them stories about the city. He knows the ways of San Francisco well. Matt joined the narrator and their brother on an excursion towards a cemetery, but had to leave early.

text: It's omitted that the narrator plans to talk to Matt about other cool spots the following day.

refinement: Matt, who seems to be the narrator's friend, is invited on the narrator's adventure for his San Francisco travel experience. He is a year older and a bit wiser than they are, who has told them stories about the city. He knows the ways of San Francisco well. Matt joined the narrator and their brother on an excursion towards a cemetery, but had to leave early. The narrator plans to ask Matt about other cool spots the next day.

answer: Matt is the narrator's friend and a year older, he moved to the city for college and is able to navigate the city well. He came out of retirement for this adventure to a certain extent because he informed the narrator that he had to stop by his home for dinner. Matt pulled out his cell phone and said he had to get home. He sounded disappointed when he said that, which implied that he was probably hoping they were going to hang out again. It was clear that they were on good terms when Matt told the narrator how to reach their destination.

text: This is completely false and needs to be omitted.

refinement: Matt is the narrator's friend and a year older, and is able to navigate the city well. He came out of retirement for this adventure to a certain extent because he informed the narrator that he had to stop by his home for dinner. Matt pulled out his cell phone and said he had to get home. He sounded disappointed when he said that, which implied that he was probably hoping they were going to hang out again. It was clear that they were on good terms when Matt told the narrator how to reach their destination.

text: This sentence is false because it's never said that Matt was in retirement and it had nothing to do with going home for dinner.

refinement: Matt is the narrator's friend and a year older, and is able to navigate the city well. Matt pulled out his cell phone and said he had to get home. He sounded disappointed when he said that, which implied that he was probably hoping they were going to hang out again. It was clear that they were on good terms when Matt told the narrator how to reach their destination.

text: This sentence is unnecessary and assumptive. It should be removed.

refinement: Matt is the narrator's friend and a year older, and is able to navigate the city well. Matt pulled out his cell phone and said he had to get home. He sounded disappointed when he said that, which implied that he was probably hoping they were going to hang out again.

text: This implication is unnecessary and it would be better to remove it.

refinement: Matt is the narrator's friend and a year older, and is able to navigate the city well. Matt pulled out his cell phone and said he had to get home. He sounded disappointed when he said that.

text: It's omitted that the narrator wants Matt to accompany him on an adventure due to his knowledge of all the nooks in San Francisco.

refinement: Matt is the narrator's friend and a year older, and is able to navigate the city well. The narrator invites him on his adventure due to his knowledge of all the nooks in San Francisco. Matt pulled out his cell phone and said he had to get home. He sounded disappointed when he said that.

text: It's omitted that Matt realized he had to go home on their way to the cemetery.

refinement: Matt is the narrator's friend and a year older, and is able to navigate the city well. The narrator invites him on his adventure due to his knowledge of all the nooks in San Francisco. On their way towards a cemetery, Matt pulled out his cell phone and said he had to get home. He sounded disappointed when he said that.

text: It's omitted that the narrator wants to talk to Matt about other cool parts of the city the next day.

refinement: Matt is the narrator's friend and a year older, and is able to navigate the city well. The narrator invites him on his adventure due to his knowledge of all the nooks in San Francisco. On their way towards a cemetery, Matt pulled out his cell phone and said he had to get home. He sounded disappointed when he said that. The narrator hopes to ask Matt about more cool parts of the city the next day.

answer: The story indicates that Mat is an experienced traveler in the city. He warns the protagonist's brother to put on long pants before exploring the old cemetery, but then leaves unexpectedly. This suggests that Mat's priority is other things, specifically dinnertime. Matt is interested in exploring, but also practical and driven by personal agendas.

text: Matt does not warn the narrator's brother, the narrator does. This should be omitted.

refinement: The story indicates that Mat is an experienced traveler in the city. He then leaves unexpectedly. This suggests that Mat's priority is other things, specifically dinnertime. Matt is interested in exploring, but also practical and driven by personal agendas.

text: There is nothing to indicate Matt is driven by personal agendas. This sentence should be omitted.

refinement: The story indicates that Mat is an experienced traveler in the city. He then leaves unexpectedly. This suggests that Mat's priority is other things, specifically dinnertime.

text: It would be better to say that Matt leaves for dinner with his parents rather than saying that's his priority. Just because he leaves to do this doesn't mean it's a trait of his.

refinement: The story indicates that Mat is an experienced traveler in the city. Matt leaves unexpectedly when he learns he has to go home for dinner.

text: "Mat" should be "Matt"

refinement: The story indicates that Matt is an experienced traveler in the city. Matt leaves unexpectedly when he learns he has to go home for dinner.

text: It's omitted that Matt is a year older than the narrator.

refinement: The story indicates that Matt is an experienced traveler in the city. Matt is a year older than the narrator. Matt leaves unexpectedly when he learns he has to go home for dinner.

text: It's omitted that the narrator wants Matt to join him on his adventure because Matt has knowledge about all of the nooks in San Francisco.

refinement: The story indicates that Matt is an experienced traveler in the city. Matt is a year older than the narrator, and the narrator wanted him to accompany him on his adventure due to his knowledge of all the nooks in San Francisco. Matt leaves unexpectedly when he learns he has to go home for dinner.

text: It's omitted that Matt leaves on their way to the cemetery.

refinement: The story indicates that Matt is an experienced traveler in the city. Matt is a year older than the narrator, and the narrator wanted him to accompany him on his adventure due to his knowledge of all the nooks in San Francisco. On the way towards a cemetery, Matt leaves unexpectedly when he learns he has to go home for dinner.

text: It's omitted that the narrator plans to talk to Matt about other cool spots in the city the next day.

refinement: The story indicates that Matt is an experienced traveler in the city. Matt is a year older than the narrator, and the narrator wanted him to accompany him on his adventure due to his knowledge of all the nooks in San Francisco. On the way towards a cemetery, Matt leaves unexpectedly when he learns he has to go home for dinner. The narrator plans to ask Matt about other cool spots in the city the next day.