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Turtle Falls
	For the entire summer, Trip and Justin, Pastor Chesnutt’s son, had been inseparable. They spent most of the summer riding their bicycles all around town, absorbing every second of the free time they had before they would start high school in the fall.  With baseball cards attached to their bikes with clothespins, they rattled through trails and side roads to Turtle Falls. This local swimming hole was where most adolescents in the town spent their afternoons. It was large rock waterfall with a face the shape of an eagle’s beak. The water swiftly spilled over into a small swimming pool beneath where those not adventurous enough to slide down the falls could swim.  	It was there Trip and Justin would chew tobacco bought for them by upperclassmen and pester Justin’s older sister and her friends while they sunbathed on the boulders adjacent to the water. May Chesnutt was a year and a half older than the boys and known for her dark red hair and pale face that, perhaps because of her remaining baby fat, kept the older boys waiting eagerly for the day her appearance caught up with matured body. Earlier that summer May had lingered a little too long before hugging Trip goodbye and he found it odd but he always ignored any thought of affection because of Justin’s protective nature to his sister. After causing trouble under the radar of their parents throughout June and July, their days of mischief came to a close the week before school began. Since the arrival of Pastor Chesnutt to the church, the pastor had been planning a construction based mission trip to Big Ridge, Texas and required his son Justin to attend. Trip’s parents, however, did not make him go. While they would have loved to have seen signs of interest in their son for church activities, not having to pay the $800 dollars for the mission was a bit of a relief to them. The final day before Justin was to depart the boys sat on the bank of the creek atop the waterfall with a cheek full of smokeless tobacco.
“You ready for your trip?” Trip asked.
After spitting Justin responded, “I guess so. It’s bullshit that I have to go, Dad wore my ass out the other night.”
“No shit, why’d he do that?”
“I told him I wasn’t going on no damn mission trip, and that I didn’t give a shit about spending a week in Texas.”
“You said all that?” replied Trip with amazement.
“Verbatim.”
“You know your daddy’s a pastor, right?”
“I don’t care. I mean, the lickin’ hurt, but I don’t want to spend my last week of summer fixing up shitty houses. And you know what the worst part is?”
“What?”
“He told me if I kept on using those words and having a bad attitude I’d be spending my future time in a place a whole lot worse than Texas.”
“Damn,” Trip replied.
There was a long pause between the two. They sat for a little bit longer, spat out their tobacco, and then both slid down the falls.
	During Justin’s week away, Trip spent most of his time doing yard work for his grandparents and helping his mother, the church secretary, with stuff weekly bulletins for the Sunday service. It was a mundane final week of summer, but he had at least managed to make back the money he had spent over the last few months. The following Monday was the first day of school and, after getting off the bus, he spotted Justin by the entrance of the auditorium reading his bible.
“Why are you reading that in public?” he asked.
“Brother Trip, it’s so good to see you again, as you can see I’m receiving my daily bread.” Justin said with a grin on his face.
“What the hell are you talkin’ about?” Trip replied.
Justin smiled and rolled his eyes, “Man cannot live on bread alone, you know. I am feeding on the word of Christ before beginning my day. I learned all about it on the trip. It really was a great time. I wish you could have gone.”
“Sounds great, we ridin’ out to the falls today or what?” Trip asked.
“I don’t really want to go out there anymore. I’ve been revived. You ought to think twice about going out there and enjoying those worldly things too much. We’re having a study at my house. You should come over there instead.”
“My ass! We were out there just last week, and you ain’t better than it. I don’t want to come to any bible study. I just got Steve Thurman to buy me some Red Man. Quit this and come have some fun before it gets too cold,” Trip said.
Justin gathered a sincere look on his face. “There are other ways to have fun without abusing your body, Trip. I’m just concerned about your salvation. If you’re not careful, you could wind up in a place a lot worse that Turtle Falls.”
“Yeah, well I’ll meet you there then and you can give me a tour. Enjoy your bread, asshole.”
            Trip walked with a frustrated scowl on his face. He was so angry that his nose began to feel as if it were buzzing red. As he rounded the corner to the staircase that led to the freshman hallway he bumped into May. She greeted him with a hug and asked how his last week of summer was. He couldn’t answer and just stared at her chubby face. Finally Trip replied very plainly “I’ll be at Turtle Falls after school.” There was a second or so of silence that left May with a confused look until Trip gently pushed her back into the staircase and kissed her with his hand on her behind.

The End

title: Turtle Falls (992 Words)

question: How do Trip and Justin spend their summer?

answer: They ride their bikes and swim at Turtle Falls. They chew tobacco and have fun, creating mischief here and there.

text: "They spent most of the summer riding their bicycles all around town" is evidence that they spend their summer riding their bikes.

text: "they rattled through trails and side roads to Turtle Falls" is evidence that they spend time at Turtle Falls.

text: "Trip and Justin would chew tobacco" is evidence that they chewed tobacco.

answer: Throughout the summer, Trip and Justin spend their time doing all the things most teenagers do - riding their bikes, hanging out at the local swimming hole, and misbehaving. However, when Justin is required to attend a mission in Texas, they begin to spend their time differently, with Justin reading his bible in public and trying to convince Trip to join him for a bible study. Though Trip originally resists, he eventually gives in and spends his remaining summer afternoons at the falls, until one day he impulsively kisses May, realizing that he had simply stopped hanging out with Justin.

text: "Trip gently pushed her back into the staircase and kissed her" is evidence that Trip kisses May.

text: "They spent most of the summer riding their bicycles all around town" is evidence that they spent the summer riding their bicycles.

text: "Since the arrival of Pastor Chesnutt to the church, the pastor had been planning a construction based mission trip to Big Ridge, Texas and required his son Justin to attend" is evidence that Justin attends a mission in Teaxas.

answer: Trip and Justin enjoy spending their summer going to a local swimming hole called Turtle Falls, riding bikes, and getting into mischief. Towards the end of summer before high school begins, Justin begins to discuss religion with Trip and tries to persuade him to hang out at his place to study the Bible instead, instead of going to the swimming hole. Trip rejects his offer and goes to Turtle Falls after school anyways.

text: Trip doesn't actually wind up going to Turtle Falls after school at the end of the story, although he most likely does after the story ends.

refinement: Trip and Justin enjoy spending their summer going to a local swimming hole called Turtle Falls, riding bikes, and getting into mischief. Towards the end of summer before high school begins, Justin begins to discuss religion with Trip and tries to persuade him to hang out at his place to study the Bible instead, instead of going to the swimming hole. Trip rejects his offer and decides to go to Turtle Falls after school anyways.

text: "We’re having a study at my house. You should come over there instead" is evidence that Justin tries to get Trip to study the Bible with him instead of going to the swimming hole.

question: Why does Trip not return May's advances?

answer: Trip is still attracted to May but is angered because Justin talks about atonement and issues of salvation. Trip and Justin got into a fight about their approach to religion and got into a dispute about Justin's "spiritual check" during the summer.

text: Second sentence is not relevant to question.

refinement: Trip is still attracted to May but is angered because Justin talks about atonement and issues of salvation.

text: Incorrect. The reason Trip holds back is because Justin is overly protective.

refinement: Trip is still attracted to May but ignores her because of how protective Justin is of her.

answer: Trip refuses May's advances because he is still sexually attracted to her. He feels stronger attraction to May than other females in part because she resembles his mother.

text: There is no evidence that Trip thinks May resembles his mother.

refinement: Trip refuses May's advances because he is still sexually attracted to her.

text: The reason given for why he refuses her advances is incorrect. He refuses her advances DESPITE finding her sexually attractive.

refinement: Trip refuses May's advances because, although he is still sexually attracted to her, Justin is protective of her.

answer: Because she is Justin's sister and Justin is protective.

text: "he always ignored any thought of affection because of Justin’s protective nature to his sister" is evidence that Justin's protectiveness is the reason Trip ignores his attraction to May.

question: What is Justin like when he comes back from the mission trip?

answer: He is very different and only interested in the Bible and church work. He doesn't want to hang out with Trip anymore, thinking he is above him and that Trip needs salvation.

text: Justin doesn't necessarily think he is above Trip. Rather, he does not see hanging out at the falls as worthwhile anymore.

refinement: He is very different and only interested in the Bible and church work. He doesn't want to hang out with Trip anymore, thinking he is above enjoying worldly things and that Trip needs salvation.

text: "Man cannot live on bread alone, you know. I am feeding on the word of Christ before beginning my day" is evidence that after the trip, Justin is interested mainly in religion.

text: "I’m just concerned about your salvation" is evidence that Justin is concerned about Trip's salvation.

answer: When Justin comes back from the mission trip, he seems to have become more serious and religious. He has abandoned all activities related to fun and prefers spending time at home reading the Bible instead. His attitude towards his old friend, Trip, changes, and he urges him to be more responsible, implying that he may wind up in a worse situation than Turtle Falls if he does not change his ways.

text: Justin doesn't imply that Trip could wind up somewhere bad if he doesn't become more responsible; he says it explicitly.

refinement: When Justin comes back from the mission trip, he seems to have become more serious and religious. He has abandoned all activities related to fun and prefers spending time at home reading the Bible instead. His attitude towards his old friend, Trip, changes, and he urges him to be more responsible, saying that he may wind up in a worse situation than Turtle Falls if he does not change his ways.

text: "If you’re not careful, you could wind up in a place a lot worse that Turtle Falls" is evidence of the warning Justin gives Trip if he doesn't become more responsible.

text: "I am feeding on the word of Christ before beginning my day" is evidence that Justin is more religious following his mission trip.

answer: When Justin returns from the mission trip, he is significantly different. He is adamant about trying to convert and "save" others, he pushes away old friends, and avoids activities he used to enjoy. He seems very serious and zealous.

text: The fact that Justin invites Trip to join him for Bible study seems like evidence against the fact that Justin pushes away old friends.

refinement: When Justin returns from the mission trip, he is significantly different. He is adamant about trying to convert and "save" others and avoids activities he used to enjoy. He seems very serious and zealous.

text: "I’m just concerned about your salvation" is evidence that Justin tries to save others.

text: "I don’t really want to go out there anymore. I’ve been revived. You ought to think twice about going out there and enjoying those worldly things too much" is evidence that Justin avoids activities he used to enjoy.

question: What does Trip do after his conversation with Justin?

answer: Trip goes to school, skips bible study, talks to May, and then sticks to his summer schedule by returning to Turtle Falls to hang out with his friends.

text: Misses the fact that he kisses May.

refinement: Trip goes to school, skips bible study, talks to and kisses May and invites her to hang out with him at Turtle Falls.

answer: He sees May and kisses her.

text: "Trip gently pushed her back into the staircase and kissed her with his hand on her behind" is evidence that Trip kisses May.

answer: He meets with May and kisses her

text: "Trip gently pushed her back into the staircase and kissed her with his hand on her behind" is evidence that Trip kisses May.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: The protagonist, Trip, and his best friend, Justin, drift apart after Justin becomes more devout and preoccupied with religious activities. It is not until a chance encounter in the hallway that Trip learns that Justin no longer wants to go to the local swimming hole, Turtle Falls, and instead plans to mostly attend religious study groups. Instead, Trip opts to hang out at Turtle Falls, cheating on his friend's absence and going there to enjoy worldly activities.

text: Does not explain why Justin becomes more devout.

refinement: The protagonist, Trip, and his best friend, Justin, drift apart when Justin becomes more devout and preoccupied with religious activities after attending a mission in Texas. It is not until a chance encounter in the hallway that Trip learns that Justin no longer wants to go to the local swimming hole, Turtle Falls, and instead plans to mostly attend religious study groups. Instead, Trip opts to hang out at Turtle Falls, cheating on his friend's absence and going there to enjoy worldly activities.

text: "cheating on his friend's absence" is a very unclear phrase.

refinement: The protagonist, Trip, and his best friend, Justin, drift apart when Justin becomes more devout and preoccupied with religious activities after attending a mission in Texas. It is not until a chance encounter in the hallway that Trip learns that Justin no longer wants to go to the local swimming hole, Turtle Falls, and instead plans to mostly attend religious study groups. Instead, Trip opts to hang out at Turtle Falls, going there to enjoy worldly activities.

text: Does not mention Trip's interactions with May.

refinement: The protagonist, Trip, and his best friend, Justin, drift apart when Justin becomes more devout and preoccupied with religious activities after attending a mission in Texas. It is not until a chance encounter in the hallway that Trip learns that Justin no longer wants to go to the local swimming hole, Turtle Falls, and instead plans to mostly attend religious study groups. Instead, Trip opts to hang out at Turtle Falls, going there to enjoy worldly activities. He also kisses May, Justin's older sister.

text: The phrase "It is not until a chance encounter" is unnecessary.

refinement: The protagonist, Trip, and his best friend, Justin, drift apart when Justin becomes more devout and preoccupied with religious activities after attending a mission in Texas. Trip learns that Justin no longer wants to go to the local swimming hole, Turtle Falls, and instead plans to mostly attend religious study groups. Instead, Trip opts to hang out at Turtle Falls, going there to enjoy worldly activities. He also kisses May, Justin's older sister.

text: Doesn't mention that Trip and Justin initially spend the summer hanging out together,

refinement: The protagonist, Trip, and his best friend, Justin, spend the summer hanging out at Turtle Falls, the local swimming hole. But Justin becomes more devout and preoccupied with religious activities after attending a mission in Texas. Trip learns that Justin no longer wants to go to Turtle Falls and instead plans to mostly attend religious study groups. Instead, Trip opts to hang out at Turtle Falls, going there to enjoy worldly activities. He also kisses May, Justin's older sister.

text: Trip's line of "Yeah, well I’ll meet you there then and you can give me a tour. Enjoy your bread, asshole" is evidence that he and Justin have drifted apart.

answer: In the story, Trip and his best friend Justin stop hanging out together after Justin is forced to go on a church mission trip. Justin returns from the trip much different, becoming more religious and spending his time studying the bible, while Trip would rather go swimming at the local swimming hole. When the boys run into each other the day before school starts, things turn ugly and Trip walks off angry while declaring he'll be at the swimming hole after school.

text: The phrase "things turn ugly" perhaps implies something worse than what actually happens (such as that they get into a physical fight).

refinement: In the story, Trip and his best friend Justin stop hanging out together after Justin is forced to go on a church mission trip. Justin returns from the trip much different, becoming more religious and spending his time studying the bible, while Trip would rather go swimming at the local swimming hole. When the boys run into each other the day before school starts, Justin attempts to convince Trip to seek salvation and Trip walks off angry while declaring he'll be at the swimming hole after school.

text: Doesn't mention Trip kissing May.

refinement: In the story, Trip and his best friend Justin stop hanging out together after Justin is forced to go on a church mission trip. Justin returns from the trip much different, becoming more religious and spending his time studying the bible, while Trip would rather go swimming at the local swimming hole. When the boys run into each other the day before school starts, Justin attempts to convince Trip to seek salvation and Trip walks off angry while declaring he'll be at the swimming hole after school. Trip then runs into Justin's older sister, May. He invites her to the swimming hole and kisses her.

text: "I don’t want to come to any bible study" implies that Trip and Justin won't be hanging out together any longer.

text: "I am feeding on the word of Christ before beginning my day. I learned all about it on the trip" is evidence that Justin changed as a result of the mission trip.

answer: The protagonist and his friend used to spend their afternoons at the local swimming spot known as Turtle Falls, until the the friend breaks away from worldly activities which leaves the protagonist annoyed. They breakup after the protagonist argues that there are other ways to have fun than going to bible study, and sticks to his guns by going to Turtle Falls after school. Against his friend's advice, the protagonist kisses the protagonist's sister May against her will.

text: Does not explain why the friend undergoes a shift in personality.

refinement: The protagonist and his friend used to spend their afternoons at the local swimming spot known as Turtle Falls, until the the friend breaks away from worldly activities after attending a mission in Texas, which leaves the protagonist annoyed. They breakup after the protagonist argues that there are other ways to have fun than going to bible study, and sticks to his guns by going to Turtle Falls after school. Against his friend's advice, the protagonist kisses the protagonist's sister May against her will.

text: "breaks away from worldly activities" is unclear and does not convey his religious devotion.

refinement: The protagonist and his friend used to spend their afternoons at the local swimming spot known as Turtle Falls, until the the friend devotes himself to religion after attending a mission in Texas, which leaves the protagonist annoyed. They breakup after the protagonist argues that there are other ways to have fun than going to bible study, and sticks to his guns by going to Turtle Falls after school. Against his friend's advice, the protagonist kisses the protagonist's sister May against her will.

text: There is no evidence that the protagonist kisses May against her will.

refinement: The protagonist and his friend used to spend their afternoons at the local swimming spot known as Turtle Falls, until the the friend devotes himself to religion after attending a mission in Texas, which leaves the protagonist annoyed. They breakup after the protagonist argues that there are other ways to have fun than going to bible study, and sticks to his guns by going to Turtle Falls after school. Against his friend's advice, the protagonist kisses the protagonist's sister May.

text: The summary seems to get confused about who the protagonist is (going so far as to state that the protagonist kisses the protagonist's sister). Replace with the characters' actual names.

refinement: Trip and his friend Justin used to spend their afternoons at the local swimming spot known as Turtle Falls, until Justin devotes himself to religion after attending a mission in Texas, which leaves Trip annoyed. They breakup after Trip argues that there are other ways to have fun than going to bible study, and sticks to his guns by going to Turtle Falls after school. Against Justin's advice, Trip kisses the Justin's sister May.

text: Justin did not give Trip any advice about kissing May.

refinement: Trip and his friend Justin used to spend their afternoons at the local swimming spot known as Turtle Falls, until Justin devotes himself to religion after attending a mission in Texas, which leaves Trip annoyed. They breakup after Trip argues that there are other ways to have fun than going to bible study, and sticks to his guns by going to Turtle Falls after school. Trip kisses the Justin's sister May.

text: "breakup" is maybe not the right term for a falling out between friends.

refinement: Trip and his friend Justin used to spend their afternoons at the local swimming spot known as Turtle Falls, until Justin devotes himself to religion after attending a mission in Texas, which leaves Trip annoyed. They have a falling out after Trip argues that there are other ways to have fun than going to bible study, and sticks to his guns by going to Turtle Falls after school. Trip kisses the Justin's sister May.

text: "With baseball cards attached to their bikes with clothespins, they rattled through trails and side roads to Turtle Falls" is evidence the protagonist and his friend spend time at Turtle Falls.

answer: In this piece, two childhood friends, Trip and Justin, spend summer riding around on their bicycles and hanging out at their local swimming spot, Turtle Falls. When Justin is required to go on a church mission trip, Trip misses spending time with his friend, but they can't agree on whether to spend their time there or having a little bit of fun. However, when school starts, Justin convinces Trip to join a bible study and he rejects the idea instead opting to go to the swimming spot. In the last scene, Trip kisses May, the older sister of Justin, catching her off guard as he pushes her into the school.

text: It is inaccurate to state that Justin convinces Trip to join Bible study.

refinement: In this piece, two childhood friends, Trip and Justin, spend summer riding around on their bicycles and hanging out at their local swimming spot, Turtle Falls. When Justin is required to go on a church mission trip, Trip misses spending time with his friend, but they can't agree on whether to spend their time there or having a little bit of fun. However, when school starts, Justin tries to convince Trip to join a bible study and he rejects the idea instead opting to go to the swimming spot. In the last scene, Trip kisses May, the older sister of Justin, catching her off guard as he pushes her into the school.

text: The phrase "pushes her into the school" is confusing and unnecessary.

refinement: In this piece, two childhood friends, Trip and Justin, spend summer riding around on their bicycles and hanging out at their local swimming spot, Turtle Falls. When Justin is required to go on a church mission trip, Trip misses spending time with his friend, but they can't agree on whether to spend their time there or having a little bit of fun. However, when school starts, Justin tries to convince Trip to join a bible study and he rejects the idea instead opting to go to the swimming spot. In the last scene, Trip kisses May, the older sister of Justin, catching her off guard.

text: That "they can't agree on whether to spend their time there or having a little bit of fun" is unattested.

refinement: In this piece, two childhood friends, Trip and Justin, spend summer riding around on their bicycles and hanging out at their local swimming spot, Turtle Falls. When Justin is required to go on a church mission trip, Trip misses spending time with his friend. However, when school starts, Justin tries to convince Trip to join a bible study and he rejects the idea instead opting to go to the swimming spot. In the last scene, Trip kisses May, the older sister of Justin, catching her off guard.

text: Unclear pronoun (he).

refinement: In this piece, two childhood friends, Trip and Justin, spend summer riding around on their bicycles and hanging out at their local swimming spot, Turtle Falls. When Justin is required to go on a church mission trip, Trip misses spending time with his friend. However, when school starts, Justin tries to convince Trip to join a bible study and Trip rejects the idea instead opting to go to the swimming spot. In the last scene, Trip kisses May, the older sister of Justin, catching her off guard.

text: Missing punctuation.

refinement: In this piece, two childhood friends, Trip and Justin, spend summer riding around on their bicycles and hanging out at their local swimming spot, Turtle Falls. When Justin is required to go on a church mission trip, Trip misses spending time with his friend. However, when school starts, Justin tries to convince Trip to join a bible study. Trip rejects the idea, instead opting to go to the swimming spot. In the last scene, Trip kisses May, the older sister of Justin, catching her off guard.

text: "They spent most of the summer riding their bicycles all around town" is evidence that Trip and Justin spend the summer riding around on their bicycles.

answer: The narrator and his childhood friend have a falling out when the friend becomes more religious and starts attending a bible study instead. The two spend one last day at their favorite swimming spot, but the friend refuses to go with the narrator on their bike ride there. The narrator decides to instead go to the swimming spot after school, and kisses his childhood friend.

text: Trip doesn't really serve the role of narrator--the characters' names should be used instead.

refinement: Trip and his childhood friend Justin have a falling out when Justin becomes more religious and starts attending a bible study instead. The two spend one last day at their favorite swimming spot, but Justin refuses to go with the narrator on their bike ride there. Trip decides to instead go to the swimming spot after school, and kisses his childhood friend.

text: Trip kisses Justin's sister May, whereas this answer seems to imply he kisses Justin.

refinement: Trip and his childhood friend Justin have a falling out when Justin becomes more religious and starts attending a bible study instead. The two spend one last day at their favorite swimming spot, but Justin refuses to go with the narrator on their bike ride there. Trip decides to instead go to the swimming spot after school, and kisses Justin's sister, May.

text: Justin and Trip don't spend one last day at their favorite swimming spot--that's inaccurate.

refinement: Trip and his childhood friend Justin have a falling out when Justin becomes more religious and starts attending a bible study instead. Justin is no longer interested in hanging out at their favorite swimming spot and tries to convince Trip to join Bible study instead. Trip decides to instead go to the swimming spot after school, and kisses Justin's sister, May.

answer: The text is a short story about two teenage boys, Trip and Justin. They are great friends and spend all summer together, but then Justin has to go on a mission trip with his father, the pastor. When he comes back, Justin is different and only cares about the Bible and church work. Trip is hurt by this. Later on, he meets May, Justin's sister, and kisses her.

text: Trip doesn't "meet" May--he already knew her and was attracted to her.

refinement: The text is a short story about two teenage boys, Trip and Justin. They are great friends and spend all summer together, but then Justin has to go on a mission trip with his father, the pastor. When he comes back, Justin is different and only cares about the Bible and church work. Trip is hurt by this. Later on, he encounters May, Justin's sister whom he was previously attracted to, and kisses her.

text: The age of Trip and Justin is unattested.

refinement: The text is a short story about two friends, Trip and Justin. They are great friends and spend all summer together, but then Justin has to go on a mission trip with his father, the pastor. When he comes back, Justin is different and only cares about the Bible and church work. Trip is hurt by this. Later on, he encounters May, Justin's sister whom he was previously attracted to, and kisses her.

text: "Since the arrival of Pastor Chesnutt to the church, the pastor had been planning a construction based mission trip to Big Ridge, Texas and required his son Justin to attend" is evidence that Justin has to attend the mission trip along with his father, who is a pastor.


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text:
The tenant eviction crisis in Philly, where there are four times as many evictions than foreclosures, just took a step forward with the launch of the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, a new set of legal and financial services for renters in danger of losing their home.

“What this will do is help make sure that the court works in a more fair manner and helps tenants understand their rights and get the best outcome,” said Eva Gladstein, the city’s deputy managing director of Health and Human Services. “That’s the goal of the project.”

Here’s how the Eviction Prevention Project works: Tenants now have access to a long list of services from legal to financial counsel that can help them whether or not they’re currently facing eviction.

Some of the main services include:

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    A new hot line called Tenant Legal Aid Referral Line (267-443-2500) that tenants can call for help.
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    The website launch of www.phillytenant.org, which offers information on basic tenant rights and answers to questions like “How do I get my landlord to make repairs?” and “How do I get legal help?”
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    Court navigators who can help you through the process when you’re actually in the courtroom.
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    A volunteer “lawyer of the day” who will be in the courtroom to help tenants who don’t already have representation.

“Just having people even understand what is happening in court makes a huge difference in terms of having a fair outcome,” said Gladstein.

The project launch comes at a time when 1 in 14 renters in Philly were handed eviction notices in 2016. Last year, Councilwoman Helen Gym put out a call to address the eviction crisis, which disproportionately affects African Americans and women.

“When we first started unpacking a lot of what has been going on with the eviction crisis in Philadelphia, we met with advocates and heard from them directly,” said Gym. “When we heard that there were four times as many evictions in the city of Philadelphia than there were foreclosures, I got angry.”

In October 2017, Mayor Jim Kenney created a 27-person Eviction Task Force to study the city’s eviction crisis. City Council and the Department of Planning and Development’s also allocated $500,000 to help renters fight eviction.

Those funds have gone toward the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, which will be spearheaded by Community Legal Services and several other local housing and legal organizations.

The hope, too, is that the eviction prevention project will help reduce the rate of tenants being evicted from their home and thereby prevent homelessness. Said Gladstein, “People were aware of foreclosure in terms of families losing their homes, being destabilized, losing jobs, and their health, but people were not focusing on evictions. And yet we have so many evictions occurring, which are causing the same issues, if not more so because they have less security than a homeowners.”

“So in terms of making sure our neighborhoods are safe and healthy, this is a really important.”

Gym said this isn’t the last of the Eviction Task Force’s efforts to combat the eviction crisis. “Housing is a human right and we’re trying as a city to figure out what that looks like and how we do it in the best interests of everybody. We’re still far from doing as much as we hoped, but we have made a significant step today in announcing that the experiences of people who are too often neglected are not going to go unnoticed.”

question: What is the goal of the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project?

answer: The goal of the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project is to provide legal services for tenants to prevent evictions, such as the need of a lawyer of the day.

text: The "lawyer of the day" without quotes or clarification simply seems like poor phrasing, rather than a specific term

refinement: The goal of the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project is to provide legal services for tenants to prevent evictions, such as the need of a volunteer "lawyer of the day" in the courtroom.

text: "the need of" is unnecessary, it only confuses the wording

refinement: The goal of the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project is to provide legal services for tenants to prevent evictions, such as a volunteer "lawyer of the day" in the courtroom.

text: The answer mentions the purpose, which can count as its goal, and one of its services, which should be clarified as such

refinement: The goal of the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project is to provide legal services for tenants to prevent evictions, with services such as a volunteer "lawyer of the day" in the courtroom.

answer: The goal of the project is to help make sure that the court works in a fair manner and helps tenants understand their rights to get the best outcome.

answer: The goal of the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project is to make sure that tenants are directed to legal, financial, or housing assistance after entering into the court system.

question: Why was it a shock to learn that there are 4 times more evictions than foreclosures?

answer: There is a large discrepancy between the number of evictions and foreclosures in the city of Philadelphia, highlighting the magnitude of the city's eviction crisis. Evictions often have a devastating impact on those who are displaced, as the crisis can lead to homelessness, job loss, and health effects.

text: The first sentence should be phrased as cause-and-effect to clearly answer the 'why' of the question

refinement: The large discrepancy between the number of evictions and foreclosures in the city of Philadelphia highlights the magnitude of the city's eviction crisis. Evictions often have a devastating impact on those who are displaced, as the crisis can lead to homelessness, job loss, and health effects.

text: "People were aware of foreclosure in terms of families losing their homes, being destabilized, losing jobs, and their health, but people were not focusing on evictions. And yet we have so many evictions occurring, which are causing the same issues"

answer: It is likely because the eviction crisis has not been given comparable attention to foreclosures, despite their negative impacts on families. There is also the strong impression that the crisis disproportionately affects certain demographics, such as African Americans and women.

text: The second sentence treats the disproportionate effect as an 'impression' when it is mentioned as a fact in the text.

refinement: It is likely because the eviction crisis has not been given comparable attention to foreclosures, despite their negative impacts on families. The crisis disproportionately affects certain demographics, such as African Americans and women.

text: Clarification needed that it's the eviction crisis specifically affecting certain demographics (i.e. the aforementioned foreclosure crisis is  separate)

refinement: It is likely because the eviction crisis has not been given comparable attention to foreclosures, despite their negative impacts on families. The eviction crisis disproportionately affects certain demographics, such as African Americans and women.

text: The impacts on families have been the same for foreclosures and evictions; the phrasing implies the eviction crisis is worse

refinement: It is likely because the eviction crisis has not been given comparable attention to foreclosures, despite their equally negative impacts on families. The eviction crisis disproportionately affects certain demographics, such as African Americans and women.

text: Add an indication that the second sentence directly answers the question as a second, separate part.

refinement: It is likely because the eviction crisis has not been given comparable attention to foreclosures, despite their equally negative impacts on families. Also, the eviction crisis disproportionately affects certain demographics, such as African Americans and women.

text: "People were aware of foreclosure in terms of families losing their homes, being destabilized, losing jobs, and their health, but people were not focusing on evictions. And yet we have so many evictions occurring, which are causing the same issues"

text: "Last year, Councilwoman Helen Gym put out a call to address the eviction crisis, which disproportionately affects African Americans and women."

answer: The statistics for the foreclosures were known and action plans were fixed. Then the information regarding evictions became known. It was a shock to learn that social insecurity was a much bigger issue that anticipated.

text: The answer could be clearer in linking each sentence to answer the 'why'

refinement: The statistics for the foreclosures were known and action plans were fixed. Then when the information regarding evictions became known, it was a shock to learn that social insecurity was a much bigger issue that anticipated.

text: Nothing in the first sentence can be corroborated from the text.

refinement: When the information regarding evictions became known, it was a shock to learn that social insecurity was a much bigger issue than anticipated.

text: Typo - "that"

refinement: When the information regarding evictions became known, it was a shock to learn that social insecurity was a much bigger issue than anticipated.

text: "And yet we have so many evictions occurring, which are causing the same issues, if not more so because they have less security than a homeowners.” - more evictions means a bigger problem with social insecurity

text: Eviction information - “When we heard that there were four times as many evictions in the city of Philadelphia than there were foreclosures, I got angry.”

text: "Last year, Councilwoman Helen Gym put out a call to address the eviction crisis, which disproportionately affects African Americans and women." confirms both eviction information and the social issue

question: Explain the effects of the high eviction rate?

answer: Families lose homes, become destabilized, lose jobs and health.

text: “People were aware of foreclosure in terms of families losing their homes, being destabilized, losing jobs, and their health, but people were not focusing on evictions. And yet we have so many evictions occurring, which are causing the same issues"

answer: The aim is to reduce homelessness.

text: The phrasing seems to answer a question on the organization's aims, not the problem's effects

text: Homelessness as an issue: "The hope, too, is that the eviction prevention project will help reduce the rate of tenants being evicted from their home and thereby prevent homelessness."

answer: The effects of the high eviction rate include families losing their homes, jobs, and their health.

text: “People were aware of foreclosure in terms of families losing their homes, being destabilized, losing jobs, and their health, but people were not focusing on evictions. And yet we have so many evictions occurring, which are causing the same issues"

question: What services does the Eviction Prevention Project provide?

answer: One service is navigation through the process of being in court. Another is legal assistance and referrals to help them with their landlord arising issues. There is also a new phone line that tenants can call if they need help understanding their rights. Other services include volunteer lawyers who can help out at court, landlord issues resources, and the website "www.phillytenant.org," all to help tenants in eviction proceedings.

text: Unnecessary repetition of the landlord assistance/resources

refinement: One service is navigation through the process of being in court. There is also a new phone line that tenants can call if they need help understanding their rights. Other services include volunteer lawyers who can help out at court, landlord issues resources, and the website "www.phillytenant.org," all to help tenants in eviction proceedings.

text:
"Some of the main services include:

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A new hot line called Tenant Legal Aid Referral Line (267-443-2500) that tenants can call for help.
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The website launch of www.phillytenant.org, which offers information on basic tenant rights and answers to questions like “How do I get my landlord to make repairs?” and “How do I get legal help?”
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Court navigators who can help you through the process when you’re actually in the courtroom.
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A volunteer “lawyer of the day” who will be in the courtroom to help tenants who don’t already have representation."

answer: A hot line that tenants can call for help, a website with information on tenant rights and answers to questions, court navigators and a volunteer lawyer for the day.

text:
"Some of the main services include:

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A new hot line called Tenant Legal Aid Referral Line (267-443-2500) that tenants can call for help.
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The website launch of www.phillytenant.org, which offers information on basic tenant rights and answers to questions like “How do I get my landlord to make repairs?” and “How do I get legal help?”
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Court navigators who can help you through the process when you’re actually in the courtroom.
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A volunteer “lawyer of the day” who will be in the courtroom to help tenants who don’t already have representation."

answer: The Eviction Prevention Project gives tenants access to long lists of legal and financial counseling services that may be able to help them. Services include providing information on landlord rights and answering questions about rent and repair requests.

text: Tenant rights are emphasized

refinement: The Eviction Prevention Project gives tenants access to long lists of legal and financial counseling services that may be able to help them. Services include providing information on tenant rights and answering questions about rent and repair requests.

text: The latter services come under the overall service of the website, which is one of the services of the organization, which is the question

refinement: The Eviction Prevention Project gives tenants access to long lists of legal and financial counseling services that may be able to help them. Services on the launched website www.phillytenant.org include providing information on tenant rights and answering questions about rent and repair requests.

text:
"Some of the main services include:

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A new hot line called Tenant Legal Aid Referral Line (267-443-2500) that tenants can call for help.
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The website launch of www.phillytenant.org, which offers information on basic tenant rights and answers to questions like “How do I get my landlord to make repairs?” and “How do I get legal help?”
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Court navigators who can help you through the process when you’re actually in the courtroom.
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A volunteer “lawyer of the day” who will be in the courtroom to help tenants who don’t already have representation."

question: Which population is disproportionately affected by evictions?

answer: According to the passage, the population disproportionately experiencing evictions is renters.

text: Only renters can be evicted, and the renters being disproportionately evicted are African Americans and women.

refinement: According to the passage, the populations disproportionately experiencing evictions are African American and female renters.

answer: According to the passage, the people most affected by evictions are renters. More specifically, the passage indicates that people of color and women are at greater risk of having to move as a result of an eviction.

text: The first sentence is unnecessary.

refinement: The passage indicates that people of color and women are at greater risk of having to move as a result of an eviction.

text: "Last year, Councilwoman Helen Gym put out a call to address the eviction crisis, which disproportionately affects African Americans and women."

answer: African Americans and women.

text: "Last year, Councilwoman Helen Gym put out a call to address the eviction crisis, which disproportionately affects African Americans and women."

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: The Eviction Prevention Project launched in Philly, and is aimed to help renters by providing them a number of services, including hotlines, court navigation, and more.

text: Clarification on the goal

refinement: The Eviction Prevention Project launched in Philly, and is aimed to help renters avoid eviction by providing them a number of services, including hotlines, court navigation, and more.

text: Wording

refinement: The Eviction Prevention Project launched in Philly is aimed to help renters avoid eviction by providing them with a number of services, including hotlines, court navigation, and more.

text: "Some of the main services include: A new hot line ... Court navigators who can help you..."

answer: Philadelphia developed the Eviction Prevention Project to address the previously invisible social problem of evictions. The goal of the project is to help make sure that the court works in a fair manner and helps tenants understand their rights to get the best outcome.

text: “What this will do is help make sure that the court works in a more fair manner and helps tenants understand their rights and get the best outcome"

text: "Those [city] funds have gone toward the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, which will be spearheaded by Community Legal Services and several other local housing and legal organizations."

text: "people were not focusing on evictions" and "the experiences of people who are too often neglected" back up 'previously invisible social problem'

answer:
The article describes how the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project will help tenants by providing counseling and legal services. With the help of these services and a 27-person evictions task force, Mayor Jim Kenney is working to prevent homelessness in Philadelphia.

The project is seen as a significant step towards reducing the frequency of evictions in the city.

text: Mayor Kenney is implied to be the driving force, which the article doesn't convey

refinement:
The article describes how the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project will help tenants by providing counseling and legal services. With the help of these services and a 27-person evictions task force, the city is working to prevent homelessness in Philadelphia.

The project is seen as a significant step towards reducing the frequency of evictions in the city.

answer: As the number of renters in Philadelphia facing eviction surpasses the number of those in imminent danger of foreclosure, the new Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project will help renters fight their cases in court and establish a set of basic legal services. Property owners will develop a better understanding of tenant law and housing concerns, while solicitated tenants will gain access to free or low-cost legal advice.

text: 'those' incorrectly implies 'renters'

refinement: As the number of renters in Philadelphia facing eviction surpasses the number of homeowners in imminent danger of foreclosure, the new Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project will help renters fight their cases in court and establish a set of basic legal services. Property owners will develop a better understanding of tenant law and housing concerns, while solicitated tenants will gain access to free or low-cost legal advice.

text: 'solicitated' isn't in common use and doesn't make sense in context

refinement: As the number of renters in Philadelphia facing eviction surpasses the number of homeowners in imminent danger of foreclosure, the new Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project will help renters fight their cases in court and establish a set of basic legal services. Property owners will develop a better understanding of tenant law and housing concerns, while tenants will gain access to free or low-cost legal advice.

text: None of the services is specifically for property owners

refinement: As the number of renters in Philadelphia facing eviction surpasses the number of homeowners in imminent danger of foreclosure, the new Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project will help renters fight their cases in court and establish a set of basic legal services. Tenants will gain access to free or low-cost legal advice.

text: The last sentence is now repetitive

refinement: As the number of renters in Philadelphia facing eviction surpasses the number of homeowners in imminent danger of foreclosure, the new Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project will help renters fight their cases in court and establish a set of basic legal services.

text: "there were four times as many evictions in the city of Philadelphia than there were foreclosures" - numbers surpassing

text: "the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, a new set of legal and financial services for renters"

text: "What this will do is help make sure that the court works in a more fair manner" - helping in court

answer: The deputy managing director of Health and Human Services, Eva Gladstein, announced the launch of a new set of legal and financial services for renters in danger of losing their home. The Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project will provide universal access to legal and financial services for low-income tenants facing eviction. The services now available include a long list of legal advice such as legal and financial counsel, information on basic tenant rights, and an online resource center.

answer:
Each year, more than 1 in 14 renters in Pennsylvania are threatened with an eviction. The potential repercussions of eviction on a family's wellbeing and on the well-being of the neighborhood, led the Mayor of Philadelphia to create an "eviction task force" earlier last year. The task force is made up of 27 people with diverse experience with eviction. They're tasked with exploring the ways these evictions have come to disproportionally affect people of color and women.

The Eviction Task Force backed the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, to provide evicted Philly residents with legal, financial, and emotional resources. The Project has been spearheaded by Community Legal Services and supports the "eviction hotline" and "lawyer of the day" services. The hope is that the project might lower the rate of eviction, and potentially help to prevent homelessness.

text: It's in Philadelphia specifically

refinement:
Each year, more than 1 in 14 renters in Philadelphia are threatened with an eviction. The potential repercussions of eviction on a family's wellbeing and on the well-being of the neighborhood, led the Mayor of Philadelphia to create an "eviction task force" earlier last year. The task force is made up of 27 people with diverse experience with eviction. They're tasked with exploring the ways these evictions have come to disproportionally affect people of color and women.

The Eviction Task Force backed the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, to provide evicted Philly residents with legal, financial, and emotional resources. The Project has been spearheaded by Community Legal Services and supports the "eviction hotline" and "lawyer of the day" services. The hope is that the project might lower the rate of eviction, and potentially help to prevent homelessness.

text: The statistic is from the year 2016 specifically

refinement:
In 2016, more than 1 in 14 renters in Philadelphia were threatened with an eviction. The potential repercussions of eviction on a family's wellbeing and on the well-being of the neighborhood, led the Mayor of Philadelphia to create an "eviction task force" earlier last year. The task force is made up of 27 people with diverse experience with eviction. They're tasked with exploring the ways these evictions have come to disproportionally affect people of color and women.

The Eviction Task Force backed the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, to provide evicted Philly residents with legal, financial, and emotional resources. The Project has been spearheaded by Community Legal Services and supports the "eviction hotline" and "lawyer of the day" services. The hope is that the project might lower the rate of eviction, and potentially help to prevent homelessness.

text: Emotional resources are not mentioned

refinement:
In 2016, more than 1 in 14 renters in Philadelphia were threatened with an eviction. The potential repercussions of eviction on a family's wellbeing and on the well-being of the neighborhood, led the Mayor of Philadelphia to create an "eviction task force" earlier last year. The task force is made up of 27 people with diverse experience with eviction. They're tasked with exploring the ways these evictions have come to disproportionally affect people of color and women.

The Eviction Task Force backed the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, to provide evicted Philly residents with legal and financial resources. The Project has been spearheaded by Community Legal Services and supports the "eviction hotline" and "lawyer of the day" services. The hope is that the project might lower the rate of eviction, and potentially help to prevent homelessness.

text: The hotline and 'lawyer of the day' services are provided by the Project, not supported by it

refinement:
In 2016, more than 1 in 14 renters in Philadelphia were threatened with an eviction. The potential repercussions of eviction on a family's wellbeing and on the well-being of the neighborhood, led the Mayor of Philadelphia to create an "eviction task force" earlier last year. The task force is made up of 27 people with diverse experience with eviction. They're tasked with exploring the ways these evictions have come to disproportionally affect people of color and women.

The Eviction Task Force backed the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, to provide evicted Philly residents with legal and financial resources. The Project has been spearheaded by Community Legal Services and provides the "eviction hotline" and "lawyer of the day" services. The hope is that the project might lower the rate of eviction, and potentially help to prevent homelessness.

text: No specifics are mentioned about the people on the task force or their exact goals

refinement:
In 2016, more than 1 in 14 renters in Philadelphia were threatened with an eviction. The potential repercussions of eviction on a family's wellbeing and on the well-being of the neighborhood, led the Mayor of Philadelphia to create an "eviction task force" earlier last year.

The Eviction Task Force backed the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, to provide evicted Philly residents with legal and financial resources. The Project has been spearheaded by Community Legal Services and provides the "eviction hotline" and "lawyer of the day" services. The hope is that the project might lower the rate of eviction, and potentially help to prevent homelessness.

text: Too long overall

refinement:
In 2016, more than 1 in 14 renters in Philadelphia were threatened with an eviction. The potential repercussions of eviction on a family's wellbeing and on the well-being of the neighborhood, led the Mayor of Philadelphia to create an "eviction task force" earlier last year.

The Eviction Task Force backed the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, to provide evicted Philly residents with legal and financial resources, in the hope of decreasing rates of eviction and homelessness.


text:
If Texas A&M defensive end Myles Garrett is the first player selected in the NFL draft on Thursday night, he’ll join a group of 10. The Cleveland Browns, who have the first selection, will hope that he joins a group of three.

Only nine defensive ends have been the first overall pick in the history of the NFL draft. Only two of them – Buffalo’s Bruce Smith and Tampa Bay’s Lee Roy Selmon – reached the Hall of Fame. The Browns are obviously hopeful Garrett has that kind of career.

That is, if the Browns draft him. Recent reports have suggested the Browns might draft North Carolina quarterback Mitch Trubisky with the first pick. NFL Network Analyst Mike Mayock said that would be a mistake.

“I've been on record from day one saying I think they have to take him at number one,” Mayock said. “You can continue to try to move down the board all you want and pick up more picks, and I get that and I respect that. But at some point you better start taking some difference-makers, and I think he's a difference-maker.”

Smith and Selmon were certainly difference-makers.

Smith, from Virginia Tech, was an 11-time Pro Bowl selection and was twice named NFL Defensive Player of the Year during a 19-year career in which he accumulated 200 sacks and forced 43 fumbles. Selmon, out of Oklahoma, was a six-time Pro Bowl selection and was named the NFL’s Defensive Player of the Year in 1979. He was credited with 78.5 sacks and 28.5 forced fumbles in a nine-year career.

 [] Alex Parker, TexAgs If the Cleveland Browns take Garrett with the first pick, he'll become the tenth DE taken No. 1 overall.

Most of the other defensive ends drafted with the first pick had decent NFL careers.

But only two had brilliant careers, although the jury is still out on Jadeveon Clowney, who was taken No. 1 by the Houston Texans in 2014.

Other defensive ends taken first include Notre Dame’s Walt Patulski by Buffalo in 1972, Tampa’s John Matuszak by the Houston Oilers in 1973, Tennessee State’s Ed “Too Tall” Jones in 1974, Penn State’s Courtney Brown by Cleveland in 2000, North Carolina State’s Mario Williams by the Houston Texans in 2006 and South Carolina’s Jadeveon Clowney by the Texans in 2014.

Most had solid careers. Some, particularly Patulski and Brown, were rather disappointing. Clowney’s career path is up in the air, though last season he showed signs of developing into a dominant pass-rusher.

Mayock said he expects Garrett, who posted 31 sacks and seven forced fumbles in his three-season A&M career, to have a pro career that more closely resembles those of Smith and Selmon.

“If you compare him to Von Miller, who came out of the same college four or five years ago, this kid has the same explosion off the ball, the same bend, the ability to pressure a quarterback. And he's 20 pounds heavier,” Mayock said. “So I think his upside is he should be a Pro Bowl defensive end. He should be a huge difference-maker in the NFL in the pass game. The only way that doesn't happen is one of two reasons: one, he gets hurt, or, number two, he doesn't want it bad enough. But his physical talent is awesome.”

Skeptics like SEC Network Analyst Booger McFarland and former NFL star Warren Sapp have express doubts that Garrett should be the first player taken. They’ve suggested he takes plays off, doesn’t fare well against the run and does not dominate opponents. Mayock disagrees.

“The more tape you watch, you see offensive line sliding toward him, taking tight ends into the running backs into his size, and he had to be double- and triple-teamed all year long. And he had to do it playing through a high-ankle sprain,” Mayock said. “He missed two games with that. Played through it with Tennessee and Alabama.

“So from my perspective, did I always see the same consistent explosion off the ball? No, I didn't. But I think there's a reason behind that, and I think it's because of the ankle.”

The ankle is now healthy. The projections for Garrett’s career are healthy, too.

So healthy, in fact, that he should be the first player drafted.

question: Who Myles Garrett?

answer: Myles Garrett is a Texas A&M defensive end.

answer: Myles Garret is the defensive end for Texas A&M and is among the considerations for the Cleveland Brows as a first pick in Thursday night's NFL draft. His performance in the past three seasons lists 7 forced tumbles and 31 sacks. NFL analyst Mike Maynock considers Garrett as a game changer who will have a distinguished pro career. He even notes that Garrett managed to play well with an injured ankle, and now that the ankle is healed, Garrett will play even better.

text: Too much information.

refinement: Myles Garret is the defensive end for Texas A&M.

answer: Texas A&M defensive end.

question: What makes picking Garrett significant?

answer: He would be the first defensive player to be the first player drafted.

text: Not quite accurate.

refinement: Only nine defensive ends have been the first overall pick in the history of the NFL draft.

answer: Because it is not common for a defensive end to be a first pick during a draft. Only 9 defensive ends have ever been picked on a first draft and if Cleveland takes Browns, it means his skill is that good. However, it is also mentioned that among the 9, there are those who have not had illustrious careers.

text: Extra information.

refinement: Because it is not common for a defensive end to be a first pick during a draft. Only 9 defensive ends have ever been picked on a first draft and if Cleveland takes Browns, it means his skill is that good.

answer: Only 9 defensive ends were the first overall draft pick.

question: What do critics say about Garrett?

answer: Garrett's critics say he does not dominate, doesn't fare well against the run, and that e takes plays off. Maynock argues that this was mostly due to his injury.

text: Huge spelling mistake.

refinement: Garrett's critics say he does not dominate, doesn't fare well against the run, and that he takes plays off.

answer: Some critics suggest he takes plays off, struggles against the run, and does not dominate opponents. However, others argue that these concerns are due in part to Garrett playing with an ankle injury and that when healthy, he is an extremely talented athlete.

text: Too much information.

refinement: Garrett's critics say he does not dominate, doesn't fare well against the run, and that he takes plays off.

answer: Critics of Garrett say that he does not always play at a high level, and that he is less effective against the run than as a pass-rusher. However, some argue that this is down to an ankle injury he sustained and that when his ankle is fully healed, he will be an effective pass-rusher.

text: Not quite accurate.

refinement: Garrett's critics say he does not dominate, doesn't fare well against the run, and that he takes plays off.

question: What is a defensive end?

answer: The article does not directly explain what it is, but this is implied to be a supporting position in American Football -not quite important enough for teams to commonly make it a priority when making a first pick in a draft.

answer:
A) Someone who leads a team into a victory.
A)A position on an American football team.
B) A player on offense who lines up between the end of the line and the free-blocking blocker.
C) A person who hacks into computer systems illegally.

text: Not correct.

refinement:
A)A position on an American football team.
B) A player on offense who lines up between the end of the line and the free-blocking blocker.

answer: A defensive end is a player on the combined defense on the line of scrimmage.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: A Texas A&M defensive end, Myles Garrett is to be drafted first by the Cleveland Browns in the NFL draft. Booger McFarland and Warren Sapp have expressed skepticism about Garrett but NFL Network Analyst Mike Mayock says he believes Garrett should be the first player taken.

answer: Given that they have flirted with drafting defensive end in earlier drafts, the Cleveland Browns may be tempted to look to defend the pass. However, it's unclear who they will draft when Kyle Wilson# has the first pick.

text: Incorrect.

refinement: Given that they have flirted with drafting defensive end in earlier drafts, the Cleveland Browns may be tempted to look to defend the pass. However, it's unclear who they will draft when Kyle Wilson has the first pick.

answer: The Cleveland Browns are searching for the perfect player to draft, and they're deciding between UNC quarterback Mitch Trubisky and A&M defensive end Myles Garrett when the article was written. Mayock is arguing Garrett should be the pick because he believes in Garrett's talent.

answer: The article is about which player should the Cleveland Browns draft, as quarterback Mitch Trubisky and defensive end Myles Garrett are seen as options. The author gives more detail about other players who have been drafted first overall as well as the expectations for Garrett's career. They then list who is considered to be the best first overall pick and who has had good careers, and finish by thinking that Garrett should be the first player drafted due to the projections.

answer: NFL network analyst Mike Mayock considers defensive end Myles Garrett should be the first pick for the Cleveland Browns. He says that Garrett is a difference maker as his performance with Texas A&M proves it.

answer: The author has sought to provide information on defensive ends in the NFL draft in a clear and organized manner. The author makes a determination that Myles Garrett is a must with the first draft pick.


text:
ASHTON KUTCHER slammed DONALD TRUMP‘s refugee ban on Twitter on Sunday, January 29, pointing out that his wife, MILA KUNIS, emigrated from her native Ukraine to the United States in the early ’90s.

“My wife came to this country on a refugee visa in the middle of the Cold War! My blood is boiling right now!” the _Ranch_ actor, 38, tweeted. “We have never been a nation built on fear. Compassion that is the root ethic of America. Our differences are fundamental 2R sustainability.” (Kutcher also gave an impassioned speech at the Screen Actors Guild Awards later that night – watch what he had to say in the video above!)

[Ashton Kutcher and Mila Kunis]
Ashton Kutcher and Mila Kunis attend the 2016 ‘Billboard’ Music Awards in Las Vegas on May 22, 2016. Todd Williamson/BBMA2016/Getty Images for dcp
Kunis, 33, was born in the Ukrainian city of Chernivtsi and grew up in communist Russia. In 1991, when she was 7 years old, Kunis immigrated to Los Angeles with her parents, Mark and Elvira, and her older brother, Michael.

“My parents both had amazing jobs, and I was very lucky,” she told _The Telegraph_ in September 2011. “We were not poor when we lived in Russia, whereas most people were very unfortunate. My parents thought that my brother and I would have no future there, though, so we moved to the United States.”

The Golden Globe–nominated _Black Swan_ actress’ family arrived in L.A. with just $250. “That was all we were allowed to take with us,” she told the newspaper. “My parents had given up good jobs and degrees, which were not transferable.”

Seven years later, Kunis and Kutcher both landed starring roles in _That ’70s Show._ The costars and onscreen couple started dating in real life in 2012 and married in July 2015. They are the parents of daughter Wyatt, 2, and son Dimitri, 1 month.

Kutcher’s passionate anti-Trump remarks came on the heels of the businessman’s executive order, which indefinitely banned admissions for Syrian refugees, barred citizens of seven Muslim-majority countries from entering the U.S. for at least the next 90 days, and suspended the U.S. Refugee Admissions Program for 120 days. The controversial order resulted in back-to-back days of protests across major cities, including New York, Boston and Washington, D.C.

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question: How did Ashton Kutcher "slam" Donald Trump's refugee ban?

answer: Ashton Kutcher criticized Donald Trump's executive order banning refugees from entering the United States, pointing out that his wife, Mila Kunis, is a refugee who came to the U.S. during the Cold War.

answer: He tweeted about his wife, Mila Kunis, who emigrated from Ukraine to the United States in the early '90s.

answer: He tweeted about his wife, Mila Kunis, emigrating from Ukraine to the United States in the early '90s.

answer: He mentions his wife had come to America on a refugee visa in the middle of the Cold War. He said that America was not a nation built on fear, but on compassion.

question: Describe Mila Kunis' emigration from her native Ukraine to the United States?

answer: When Kunis was a child she immigrated to Los Angeles with her family from Ukraine during the Cold War.

answer: Mila Kunis emigrated from her native Ukraine to the United States in 1991, during the Cold War. Her family arrived in the U.S. with just $250, and she went on to become a successful actress, starring in movies like _Black Swan_. She married Ashton Kutcher in 2015.

answer: Mila Kunis emigrated from her native Ukraine to the United States in the early '90s.

answer: Mila Kunis emigrated from her native Ukraine to the United States in the early '90s. She was born in the Ukrainian city of Chernivtsi and grew up in communist Russia. She moved to the United States with her family when she was 7 years old.

question: Describe Kutcher's acting career?

answer: He is best known for his role as Michael Kelso in That '70s Show.

answer: The document does not dive into his acting career, but it mentions that he was on That '70s Show.

answer: Ashton Kutcher is an actor who has starred in many films and television shows.

answer: Ashton Kutcher is known for his roles in popular television shows such as "That '70s Show" and "The Ranch." He is also known for his impassioned speeches on political issues, such as Donald Trump's refugee ban.

text: The question only asks about his acting career, not what else he's known for.

refinement: Ashton Kutcher is known for his roles in popular television shows such as "That '70s Show" and "The Ranch."

question: Describe Trump's refugee ban?

answer: Trump's refugee ban is a controversial order that indefinitely banned admissions for Syrian refugees, barred citizens of seven Muslim-majority countries from entering the U.S. for at least the next 90 days, and suspended the U.S. Refugee Admissions Program for 120 days.

answer: Trump's executive order indefinitely banned admissions for Syrian refugees, barred citizens of seven Muslim majority countries from entering the U.S. for at least the next 90 days at the time of this document, and suspended the U.S. Refugee Admissions Program for 120 days.

answer: The refugee ban put in place by Donald Trump prevents refugees from Syria and citizens of seven Muslim-majority countries from entering the United States for at least 90 days, and suspends the U.S. Refugee Admissions Program for 120 days. This has resulted in protests across major cities.

answer: Trump's refugee ban indefinitely banned admissions for Syrian refugees, barred citizens of seven Muslim-majority countries from entering the U.S. for at least the next 90 days, and suspended the U.S. Refugee Admissions Program for 120 days.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Ashton Kutcher, Mila Kunis, and their family are immigrants from Ukraine. Kutcher tweeted that his wife came to the United States on a refugee visa in the middle of the Cold War. Kutcher also gave an impassioned speech at the Screen Actors Guild Awards later that night.

text: Ashton and their kids are not immigrants.

refinement: Ashton Kutcher's wife, Mila Kunis, is a refugee.  Kutcher tweeted that she came to the United States on a refugee visa in the middle of the Cold War. Kutcher also gave an impassioned speech at the Screen Actors Guild Awards later that night.

answer: Ashton Kutcher took to Twitter to express his anger over Donald Trump's recent refugee ban, pointing out that his wife, Mila Kunis, is a refugee who came to the US during the Cold War. Kutcher urged America not to be built on fear, but on compassion. Protests against the ban have been taking place across the country.

answer: Ashton Kutcher slammed Donald Trump's refugee ban on Twitter, pointing out that his wife, Mila Kunis, emigrated from her native Ukraine to the United States in the early '90s. Kutcher's wife was born in the Ukrainian city of Chernivtsi and grew up in communist Russia.

answer: This document discusses when Ashton Kutcher responded with a tweet to President Donald Trump's refugee ban. Kutcher was against the ban and mentioned how his wife had come to America on a refugee visa.


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_By Annie Aggarwal_

_Photography: Courtesy World Wide Web_

_READ TIME: 1 MIN 30 SECS_

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Have your needs outdone your space? Or are you just plain bored with the way your spaces look and feel? Basically, do you feel the strong urge to redecorate but don’t know how? Check out what we have in store for you…

‘Uplift the humdrum areas of your home into enriching everyday spaces’ is no longer easier said than done. Whilst choices are aplenty, especially with internet baffling you with supposedly ‘new’ designs, a little pragmatic assistance can go a long way in picking furniture, floors and walls to create spaces that reflect individual aesthetic sensibilities.

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We are surrounded by countless choices - some chic, some rustic, some pop and yet others subtle and elegant! Here’s how we can narrow them down:

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COLOUR: Throw a splash of colour using accent pieces, pillows, or paint on a wall, amidst subtle investment furniture. And you have a room fresh as new. __

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TEXTURE adds to the feel of a space. An exterior surface finish can give an organic feel to your interiors, while adding sleek, smooth-finish metallic furniture can lend that touch of sophistication. Mixing a variety of materials – glass and acrylic with exotic woods, can give the space a dimension of eclectic.

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You can always count on FABRICS to add the warmth and comfort you crave in your rooms.  A plush oversized chair or a restful couch can account for a functional makeover of a space. Play with rich drapes and luxurious upholstery to create a more formal setting.

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LIGHTING can effectively highlight or understate. With the variety of lighting options available, the fixtures themselves may act as central focal pieces or they may be subtle, drawing attention to a particularly interesting corner.

The smallest details have the potential to add significant character. A traveller’s home can be an ode to his adventures, a collector’s passion may reflect on his walls, adorned with rare pieces, and a nature enthusiast’s living space can sport a fresh green tinge and flowers changing with the seasons.

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A piece of ART here, a bit of ACCESSORY there, can add intrigue and interest to an otherwise mundane space.

All these elements in harmony with each other can create inspired areas. Possibilities are endless. The best path to choose is the one that leads you to a space you would be delighted to call your own.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize how you can narrow down a style.

answer: At first, there are limitless choices. In simplifying your choices, trim down your options to organic and geometric styles, and then something in for colour.

text: The response does not account for most of the relevant information in the passage.

refinement: At first, there are limitless choices. In simplifying your choices, trim down your options to color, texture, fabrics, lighting, and accessories. Making informed and personal choices in these categories can help in narrowing down a style.

answer: According to the narrator, you can add colour via accent pieces, pillows or paint on a wall. A twist on the look can be added by blending textures, while fabric at home can add the warmth and comfort you crave. A traveller's home can be an ode to his adventures, while a collector's passion can be revealed on his walls. There is plenty one can choose from to set a space to suit their personality.

answer: You should aim to feel like you can do something great in the room. You can start with the amount of light, accent pieces, coloring, textures, styles, and fabrics. There is no wrong or right way when it comes to the style of the home. You can choose from a variety of great options. Pick what will bring you the most joy in your home.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to furniture.

answer:
Practical assistance in picking furniture, floors, and walls is recommended. Colours and textures add to the richness of a space. Throw a splash of color using accent pieces, pillows, or painted walls, alongside investment furniture. Materials like glass and acrylic with exotic woods, combined with textures like glass, fabric, metal, and other natural elements like wood can be mixed to give a space a particular dimension.
Fixtures themselves can either be central focal pieces or subtle, drawing attention to a particularly interesting corner.
Bright light can enhance or de-emphasize elements of a space. A traveller's home could be an ode to their adventures and a collector's passion could reflect on the walls. Environmental green-tinting and flowers could be used to reflect a nature person's likings. A bit of art here, a piece of accessory there, can also add a unique character. Pick and choose what fits you best and reflects your taste.
A template for a house can be found in any area with some effort and ingenuity.

text: The second paragraph, though coherent, seems entirely made up to support the answer - it has no connection to the original article.

refinement: Practical assistance in picking furniture, floors, and walls is recommended. Colors and textures add to the richness of a space. Throw a splash of color using accent pieces, pillows, or painted walls, alongside investment furniture. Materials like glass and acrylic with exotic woods, combined with textures like glass, fabric, metal, and other natural elements like wood can be mixed to give a space a particular dimension.

answer: The text implies that furniture is the final stage after you make all of your other decisions. It references the importance of accent pieces like pillows, decorative items and furniture in a nice location in your room. "Acutely practical" describes how you should match up the furniture. Other materials are mentioned like polished metallic furniture, glass and acrylic and exotic woods.

text:
- The phrase "Acutely practical" cannot be found in the original text.
- There is no implication in the original text that choosing furniture is the final state of design.

refinement: Choosing furniture can be complicated but the article suggests that a little pragmatic assistance can help in simplifying the criteria by which we make our choice. It references the importance of accent pieces like pillows, decorative items, and furniture in a nice location in your room. It suggests the importance of materials like polished metallic furniture in giving a room a sophisticated feel.

answer: The text implies that furniture is the final stage after you make all of your other decisions. It references the importance of accent pieces like pillows, decorative items, and furniture in a nice location in your room. "Acutely practical" describes how you should match up the furniture. Other materials are mentioned like polished metallic furniture, glass and acrylic, and exotic woods.

answer: The article details several design styles for furniture, noting that the color, fabric and how furniture appears are three key elements to consider when furnishing a space. Throw a splash of color through accent pieces and pillows, while adding exotic woods, exotic metals, and glass and acrylic with finishes ranging from sleek, smooth finishes to more organic textures like fabric.

answer: The article details several design styles for furniture, noting that the color, fabric and the materials furniture is made of are three key elements to consider when furnishing a space. Throw a splash of color through accent pieces and pillows, while adding exotic woods, exotic metals, and glass and acrylic with finishes ranging from sleek, smooth finishes to more organic textures like fabric.

text: The article detailed more than three elements when considering furniture design.

refinement: The article details several design styles for furniture, noting that the color, fabric, and materials are parts of key elements to consider when furnishing a space. Throw a splash of color through accent pieces and pillows, while adding exotic woods, exotic metals, and glass and acrylic with finishes ranging from sleek, smooth finishes to more organic textures like fabric.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to color.

answer: Choose a color that contrasts with the accent walls, if you are trying to make an impact. Choose a color for your accessories such as pillows, that compliments the main color scheme of your room. Bring in a splash of color using accent pieces or painting accessories. You can also invest in metallic furniture to give a room a sophisticated feel.

answer:
Below is a list of things that should be avoided color-wise:
- Black on blue spaces if your furniture or accent color
- Colors in the pastel and floral categories if the main color of the room is blue, - Red rooms don't go well with prints, rugs, and black
- Fluorescent-bright shade in rooms with natural light
- Change your flooring fuchsia to white/gold.
- Choose a sunny yellow shade vs. coral if the main color of the room is blue

text: The response has nothing to do with the question.

refinement: Whether you are painting the walls or choosing a piece of furniture, endeavor to use colors that stand out as well as complement the decor in the space.

category_text: The response seems to be answering a different question.

answer: Color can set a particular mood. Throw a splash of color using accent pieces or pillows.

answer: Lighting can bring attention to a particularly interesting corner. A traveler's home can be an ode to his adventures, a collector's passion may reflect on his walls, adorned with rare pieces, and a nature enthusiast's living space can sport a fresh green tinge. Color can set a particular mood. You can throw a splash color. Throw a splash of color using accent pieces or pillows.

answer:
Below is a list of things that should be avoided colorwise:
- Black on blue spaces if your furniture or accent color

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about rugs?

answer: No answer

answer: Nothing in the article explicitly mentions the use of a rug, but it may be implied to be a backdrop tool used to add effect to a room and can play with light and color.

answer: Rugs can help with texture, but in an abstract way.

text: The article did not touch on rugs.

answer: No answer


text:
“All things come to pass…”

The words danced in Daniel’s mind in the voice of his ever-absent businesswoman of a mother. “Well mom, maybe some things don’t,” he persuaded his conscience as he opened the squeaky bathroom door. His hands felt warm as he brushed them across his clammy forehead. He looked in the dim bathroom mirror and clumsily dropped his hands to the sink’s icy porcelain ledge and stared at a disturbingly pale visage. The eyes that met his seemed to have abyssal centers that grew larger as he gazed into them. Suddenly he found that the warmth in his hands had been replaced by a lack of any feeling at all, and the same went for his feet. By the time he realized this, his eyesight began to fail, and the room began to diminish at its edges. Daniel closed his eyes, and found that they were much harder to open again. The ceiling welled at the center in his peripheral vision as his legs buckled and gave up their purpose for the very last time. He wasn’t aware that he’d fallen until blood from the sink dripped down into his open, and now front-toothless mouth. Daniel watched the lights on the ceiling morph into the gravity well of pooling fractals as he half-swallowed a mouthful of warm blood and tooth fragments. He felt his mother’s touch; the love in her fingertips warmed his skin as she brushed his hair softly away from his forehead. She was not there.

He heard darkness pulling away at the inside of his mind, erasing the seams of reality and easing him downward into some indescribably comfortable realm of lost moments and memories seemingly eons since passed. A melody of his own faint breathing washed over his ears and barely registered in his failing brain. The world grew dim around Daniel, and his faculties began diminish one by one. His liver, of course, was the first to succumb to the chemical punishment of nearly five-hundred Tylenol, along with his now bleeding stomach with its lining eaten away entirely by the drugs. Despite his biological deterioration, he felt quite good; calm, content, and as though he laid not on the cold, hard tile floor of his bathroom, but in the warm, loving embrace of the arms of an endless ocean. It cradled him as he sunk into its bottomless depths; the light from above growing ever so dim to his near lifeless eyes. Daniel managed to blink away the illusion of spiraling multicolored lights in a distant sky, and see the Earth as it truly was for the last time; a manila-walled bathroom with yellow-stained plastic bulb covers emitting a mild, placid light across an uncleanly world of bacteria and over-priced cleaning product residue. Daniel sighed.

title: Alive and Well

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why was Daniel beginning to deteriorate away?

answer: Daniel had overdosed on Tylenol, causing his liver and stomach to fail and causing a lack of feeling in his hands and feet. This lead to his falling on the bathroom floor and entering into an indescribably comfortable state of unconsciousness.

answer: Daniel was off the 150 Tylenol as declared in the first line.

answer: His body was succumbing to the nearly five-hundred Tylenol he had ingested.

answer: Probably because he ingest Tylenol.

answer: Daniel began to deteriorate away because he ingested nearly five-hundred Tylenol pills. The drugs began to poison his liver, stomach and other areas of his body, which eventually led to his death.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Explain the image Daniel was seeing as he faded away into darkness.

answer: Daniel was experiencing the blurry images of the bathroom around him as he slowly faded away. He likely saw the ceiling and walls darken in his peripheral vision and ultimately faded out entirely. The last thing he likely saw was the dull light reflecting off the dull surfaces in the room and the movement of shadows cast by the light. Ultimately, Daniel saw a world that was gradually decaying back into darkness while he succumbed to his own biological deterioration and allowed his consciousness to recede.

answer: Daniel was seeing the lights on the ceiling morph into the gravity well of pooling fractals.

answer: He began to see and feel his mother's touch but she was not actually there.

answer: Daniel saw the rest of the world around him fading into darkness as he sank into some comfortable and warm part of the unknown. The only light he saw was the dim illumination of the bathroom around him, which blended into an infinite expanse of nothingness.

answer: As he faded, he saw spiraling lights in the distant sky.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Explain what Daniel saw when he looked into the mirror.

answer: He saw a whitened face with abyssal eyes.

answer: Daniel's reflection grew larger as he stared into the mirror. Then he didn't feel warm anymore but lost the feeling of his skin.

answer: Daniel saw a disturbingly pale visage in the mirror. This was because he was suffering from an overdose of Tylenol. His eyesight began to fail, and the room began to diminish at its edges. He fell to the ground, which resulted in blood from the sink dripping into his open mouth. Daniel eventually succumbed to cardiac arrest, and watched the lights on the ceiling morph into interesting patterns as he died. During this time, he saw darkness pulling the seams of reality apart and heard his own faint breathing.

answer: In the mirror, Daniel saw his reflection an increasingly pale visage with an abyssal emptiness in his eyes. With the loss of sensation in his hands and feet, he collapsed on the bathroom floor, at which point he began to bleed from his mouth as the blood pooled in his mouth and overwhelming his senses. He saw a cracked, manila-walled bathroom and a world of bacteria and cleaning product residue before finally succumbing to drug overdose.

answer: He saw a pale visage and eyes with abyssal centers.

text: eyes not centers

refinement: He saw a pale visage and eyes with abyssal eyes.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What happened after Daniel closed his eyes?

answer: After Daniel closed his eyes, his legs buckled and he collapsed. He passed out and fell into a state of diminished functioning, dying shortly thereafter.

answer: Daniel passed into a state of near lifelessness and his biological functions began to deteriorate. His eyesight also began to fail, and the ceiling in the bathroom seemed to well at the center. He eventually fell and died from the effects of taking too many Tylenol, though he passed away calmly and at peace.

answer: He saw lights like that of a rat's lab someone was giving a shock testing, and he presumed the lights to be the light of the world around him. He felt as though the dark clouds were filling up his mind, and as he felt fading into the darkness, all he could see was the darkness itself.

answer: The passage doesn't say.

text: He died

answer: He found that they were much harder to open again.

text: He died

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer:
As Daniel reflects on his mother words of "All things come to pass..", he begins to fade away into darkness. His senses diminish and his liver is the first to succumb after ingesting nearly five-hundred Tylenol.
He sees and feels his mother's touch, however she is not actually there.

answer: Daniel collapses in the bathroom, having overdosed on Tylenol. He finds himself content and calm as his body physically deteriorates. Finally, he closes his eyes for the last time.

answer: Daniel reflects on his life as he lies on the floor of the bathroom. He believes the death is coming closer to him. He feels calm and content, and is ready to let go.

answer: Daniel overdoses on pain medications and passes away peacefully. He feels calm and content with his decision as his life fades away.

answer: Daniel's dying of a Tylenol overdose in his bathrooom. His mother wants to fix this through maternal comfort, but even after he resigns himself mentally to his fate, he feels her. But eventually, he's just alone.