text:
You hear this one a lot: “The definition of insanity is to repeat the same thing over and over again and expect different results.”

That isn’t true.

No, that’s not insanity.

I had a friend once. We’ll call him Jason. Sure, Jason. One thing you need to know about Jason is that he was a chronic nail-biter. He was the type of kid who you rarely saw without his hand up to his mouth, chewing. Just gnawing on the tough protein covering his fingers. I remember when we were very young his mother would paint his nails with clear Thum nailbiting polish that would leave a peppery and bitter taste in his mouth. But Jason didn’t care. He’d grit and bite the polish right off. He just did not care. His poor mother put that polish on his nails every single day, but he outlasted her. She eventually stopped once she realized Jason was starting to actually like the taste.

They were perpetually moist, his fingers. Jason near constantly bit his nails. He bit them right down to the epidermis and until his teeth couldn’t get a grip on the nail itself, or until it bled. It wasn’t a nervous thing, it was just a Jason thing. When you first got to know Jason you’d politely ignore it but eventually you’d get annoyed and disgusted. Then you learned to ignore it.

Jason wasn’t your average nail-biter, though. This kid never, not even once, spit out a chewed up keratin remnant on the ground. He told me the habit was disgusting enough, and he didn’t need to ramp it up by spitting nail all over the carpet. So he pocketed them. Each one. He’d chew and gnaw and bite and peel and once he had shaved off just enough of the nail to tear it off, he’d put it in his pocket.

Aside from this admittedly common habit, Jason was by and large average. We played sports together, soccer league. My mom would babysit him after school sometimes. He liked his sandwiches cut diagonally. One time I went over Jason’s house to spend the night.

Your nails grow at an average of 3 millimeters a month. They’re a form of hair, not many people know that. That’s why when you file your nails, that unmistakable smell pierces your nose, crinkling the minuscule hairs deep inside your nasal cavity. The speed in which they grow all depends on the length of the terminal phalange, so your index finger grows the quickest. In the summer, your nails grow faster. It’s true.

Every young kid has been in a situation where their friend falls asleep first at a sleepover and they don’t know what to do with themselves. On foreign territory, you’re on your own to either entertain yourself quietly or force yourself to fall asleep. On this night at Jason’s house, that kid was me. Jason was sound asleep on his bed and I was on the floor next to him in a sleeping bag, wide awake.

Bored out of my mind and doing anything to keep myself occupied before I got sleepy, I start feeling around the darkness of underneath his bed. It was very dark and I could only make out darker blobs of some number of objects tucked away under the safety of his mattress. To get a better reach, I turn myself on my stomach and turn my head flush against the carpet, unable to see what I was grabbing at now.

Jason wasn’t your average nail-biter. I reached my arm further under the bed and wrapped my fingers around what was surely some sort of glass jar. Still on my stomach with my head turned to the side, I slowly moved my hand up the jar’s opening. A mass of something cold and wet my fingers feel. Like tiny, wet wood chips. Like chewed up sunflower seeds. Like chewed up nails.

I jerk my hand back, moving my head back in position to see under his bed. Still, the darkness shrouds the jar I was feeling at. I get on my chest again and use my middle finger to delicately roll the jar out from under the bed and into plain sight. As I rolled it closer, the contents of the jar were clear.

An entire jelly jar’s worth of chewed up and spit out, *and pocketed*, nail fragments lined the inside of the glass. Half moon crescents of nail stuck to the inside walls of the jar, stained purple from scraped out Smucker’s grape jelly. Without a lid, a mass of chewed nail clippings was near dribbling out the exit of the jar, moist with saliva. Pocket lint was scattered throughout the mess. The smell is a thing difficult to describe but for fans of black licorice I’ll spare you the thought.

I look under the bed once more, seeing three, four, maybe even five more dark cylinders. More jars. More jars full of nails. I reach under again and touch glass. This jar wasn’t as full as the last. A new collection.

Gagging on the smell and desperate to hide my intrusion I roll both jars back to their original resting place. A wet glob of nails knocked loose by my jostling of the jars just lay on the carpet, moistening the plastic fibers. The lump of finger protein almost seemed to be taking the form of the original contents of the glass jar. I dig the side of my palm into the carpet and grit my teeth, scraping part of Jason’s nail collection back under the bed.

The side of my palm now wet from the spit that covered the nail shavings, I wipe it on a dry section of carpet. Making every effort going to sleep, I feel like I’m laying on a bed of nails. No pun intended.

You do any one thing enough times, over and over again, it begins to become ritual. More than ritual, even. It starts to become who you are. Doesn’t matter what it is. Washing your hands obsessively. Making sure every straight edge is aligned perfectly. Cracking your knuckles repeatedly. Biting your nails. Storing them in jars. Over and over. Over and over. Never expecting a different result—but enjoying the power of knowing it.

That’s insane.

title: INSANITY

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Jason's habit.

answer: Jason is a chronic nail-biter. He's constantly biting his nails. He chews on his nails. He gnaws on them, peels them and when enough is cut off, he places them in his pocket.

text: Unnecessary repetition

refinement: Jason is a chronic nail-biter. He gnaws on them, peels them and when enough is cut off, he places them in his pocket.

answer: Jason had the habit of nail-chewing. He also used to rack up shredded up old nails in a jar.

answer: Jason would chew his nails nearly constantly. His mother tried to get him to stop by using foul-tasting nail polish, but it didn't work. When Jason got bits of nail off, he would put them in his pocket, then into jars that he kept under the bed.

answer: Jason enjoys biting his nails and storing them in jars.

answer: Jason is a chronic nail-biter who stores the chewed up nails in jars.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the author's relationship with Jason.

answer: Before the sleepover, Jason and he narrator seem to have a fairly good relationship. The narrator learned to ignore his nail biting, and were in the same soccer league. Sometimes the author's mother would babysit Jason, and the author would even spend the night at Jason's house.

answer: Jason and the narrator were friends as children when the narrator would watch Jason's mother babysit Jason. Years later, when they were older, they played soccer league together. The narrator knew of Jason's habit, but ignored it the way they were all forced to at some point due to its nature. After Jason passed away, the ins and outs of his habit were understandable and ubiquitous.

text: The passage does not mention the fact that Jason passed away.

refinement: Jason and the narrator were friends as children when the narrator would watch Jason's mother babysit Jason. Years later, when they were older, they played soccer league together. The narrator knew of Jason's habit, but ignored it the way they were all forced to at some point due to its nature.

answer: The author and Jason used to be friends, but the author eventually grew annoyed and disgusted by his habit of biting his nails. The author now views Jason's habit of storing them in jars as completely irrational and unhealthy.

answer: The narrator and Jason are friends, and their families are friends. They spend time together playing sports, having their moms watch them after school, and watching TV.

answer: The author and Jason have been friends since they were young. Jason is a chronic nail-biter, and while the author has been bothered and disgusted by this habit at first, they eventually became desensitized to it. Under Jason's bed, the author discovered jars full of chewed up nails, and while grossed out, the author was entertained by both the ritual and the power of what Jason does.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the narrator's thoughts on Jason's habit.

answer: The narrator is disgusted by Jason's nail biting habit, seeing it as irrational as it is unsanitary and incomprehensible. Further, the narrator sees his drug as obsessive and selfish.

text: The second sentence is inaccurate and should be removed.

refinement: The narrator is disgusted by Jason's nail biting habit, seeing it as irrational as it is unsanitary and incomprehensible.

answer: The narrator believes that while call biting your nails is a common habit, Jason's habit is insane because it is repetitive and compulsive. Rather than relieving anxiety or boredom, Jason seems to purposefully repeat the practice despite the fact that it leaves him with the disgusting odor and feel of chewed nails in his pockets. The narrator questions the sanity of someone who finds satisfaction in something that is so blatantly destructive.

answer: The narrator characterizes Jason's habits as disgusting. He likens them to rituals, and says that it's more than just a ritual - it becomes a part of who you are.

answer: As a friend, he believes in fixing his problems, hence wants Jason to stop biting his nails because it's clogging his hairs and, which by extension, has rubbed off on the narrator.

answer: When the author thought Jason was just chewing his nails, he thought it was fine. At first he thought it was annoying, but eventually learned to ignore it. When the narrator found Jason's jars, he thought they were disgusting and that Jason was insane for keeping them.


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text:
[Purple graphic banner with the Widen Summit dates — October 13-14, 2020. ]

Each year over 200 Widen Collective® digital asset management (DAM) practitioners gather at the Widen Summit to learn, make connections, and have fun.

This year’s event will be no exception, despite the shift from in-person to virtual. We’ve designed a highly-interactive agenda full of sessions that will advance your DAM skills and  inspire new DAM goals.

Here are a dozen reasons why you should join us October 13-14!

1. NO TRAVEL REQUIRED.

The upside of an all-virtual, no-hassle event is that you can participate from anywhere — for free! So invite a colleague (or your whole team) to join you.

2. SEE OTHER COLLECTIVE SITES IN ACTION.
With over a dozen customer stories, presentations, and show-and-tell sessions on our agenda, you’ll be able to learn by example — from others like you.

3. DISCUSS SHARED CHALLENGES.
In our roundtables — by topic and industry— you can compare notes with professionals that grapple with similar content needs and pain points.

4. GET A SNEAK PEEK AT FUTURE COLLECTIVE FUNCTIONALITY.
See how the most important trends in content, creative operations, and data have informed the top priorities in our product roadmap.

5. SEE WHO WINS THIS YEAR’S BEST DAM CONTEST.
Three customers. One winner. Watch admins from a variety of industries compete for the trophy in this year's Best DAM Contest, and vote for your favorite!

6. EXPAND YOUR PROFESSIONAL NETWORK.
Through a chat stream in each session and one-to-one messaging between participants, you’ll be able to meet new colleagues and build your peer network.

7. CONNECT WITH WIDENEERS.
Widen staff will be available via chat throughout the sessions and will be happy to schedule one-on-one meetings with attendees after the event.

8. GET AN UPDATE ON OUR FOURTH ROUND OF CONNECTIVITY RESEARCH.
This year we’re exploring ways marketers leverage data to create experiences that build trust with their customers. We’ll share a preview of initial insights and opportunities to participate in our remaining work.

9. FIND WAYS TO USE THE COLLECTIVE TO SUPPORT YOUR REMOTE TEAMS.
Because remote work is the new normal, tips for using the Collective to support virtual workflows will be woven across sessions and discussions.

10. STRETCH YOUR BODY (AND MIND).
Start your day with a gentle flow yoga class led by Widen customer success manager — and certified yoga instructor — Betsy Reznikoff. She'll help you prepare for all the Summit activity with sequences that will energize your body and quiet your mind.

11. LEAVE WITH ACTIONABLE GOALS.
With two days of tips, best practices, examples, and stories, you’re guaranteed to learn new ways to use the Collective in achieving your content and business goals.

12. ENJOY YOURSELF!
Each session is designed to be valuable, relatable, and down-right enjoyable. We’ll even have fun activities to wrap-up each day.

  I HAVE REALLY LOVED THE SUMMIT. I DID NOT REALIZE HOW GREAT IT WOULD BE TO BE WITH ALL THESE PEOPLE WHO KNOW EXACTLY WHAT I AM TALKING ABOUT...I GOT SOME FANTASTIC IDEAS.
  _— Katja Amyx, Production Designer and Digital Asset Specialist at Renewal by Andersen_

Why wait? Register today!

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the Widen Summit?

answer: The Widen Summit is a two-day event exclusively for digital asset management practitioners. Participants will explore ways to use the collective to support virtual workflows and help their teams meet content and business goals.

answer: The Widen Summit is an annual event for digital asset management professionals that offers sessions on best practices and opportunities for networking. Participants can participate from anywhere, and sessions explore shared challenges, the Collective's upcoming product roadmap, and activities for remote teams. Yoga classes are available for attendees throughout the event. The Summit concludes with actionable goals.

answer: A gathering for Widen Collective digital asset managers.

answer: Each year over 200 Widen Collective DLAM (digital asset managment) practitioners gather at this summit to learn, make connections, and have fun.

answer: It is a digital asset management conference held by Widen Collective.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is a travel perk of the summit?

answer: The upside of being all virtual is that attendees can participate from anywhere at free- costs for them.

answer: The summit will no longer require travel as it is being held being held in cyberspace.

answer: There's no travel! It's all virtual.

answer: The travel perk of the summit is that it can be experienced from anywhere while still benefiting from engaging sessions and networking opportunities.

answer: The travel perk of the summit is that it is all-virtual with no hassles. Participants can participate from anywhere, and there is reduced travel required.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When will it take place?

answer: October 13th and 14th of 2020.

answer: October 13-14, 2020.

answer: Vertically?Yes.

text: I think this is the answer to another question.

refinement: It will take place from October 13-14, 2020.

answer: October 13-14, 2020

answer: October13-14,2020.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What are some of the perks of attending the conference?

answer: The perks of attending the conference include the lack of travel required, insights from other practitioners, discussing shared challenges, a sneak peek at future functionality, the opportunity to expand your professional network, and receiving actionable goals. You can also expect the event to be enjoyable and provide chances to stretch your body and mind.

answer: Connecting and networking.

answer: The primary benefits of attending the Widen Summit are no travel required, the opportunity to view solutions in action from fellow practitioners, the chance to network with others who face shared challenges and changes in the DAM landscape, and the chance to gain actionable skills. The additional perks include stretching, learning tips for remote workflows, and leaving with new ideas and motivation.

answer: Remote access, learning about trends in creative operations and data

answer: You don’t have to travel to attend and you can participate in interactive workshops.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: The article is a paragraph advertisement for a Digital Asset Management summit. In case attendees missed out later, it lists the directions on how to access the summit and registers them for it.

text: This should have the name of the summit.

refinement: The article is a paragraph advertisement for a Digital Asset Management conference called the Widen Summit. In case attendees missed out later, it lists the directions on how to access the summit and registers them for it.

answer: The Widen Summit gathers digital asset management professionals every year, to share best practices and learn about the latest trends in the industry. This year’s summit is being held all-virtually, so you can attend from anywhere, from the comfort of your own office. With great sessions, opportunities to connect with like-minded professionals, and the chance to vote for the year's Best DAM Contest, the Summit is a great way to improve your skills and build your professional network.

answer: This document details the Widen Summit 2020, an event designed to provide a forum for advancement of digital asset management. It maintains that it would be a great opportunity to meet new people and build professional networks.

answer: At the 2020 Widen Summit, held over October thirteenth to the fourteenth, over 200 Widen Collective digital assets managers are invited to connect in the hopes of expanding their networks, showcasing their work, and learning about collective functionality. The virtual conference is also a chance to see other collective sites in actions, and to stretch the body and mind through activities such as yoga class taught by a certified instructor, and other fun activities peppering each day's itinerary.

answer: The Widen Summit is returning for its 2020 edition October 13-14 and promises two days of interactive sessions, roundtables, and customer presentations in a completely virtual environment. The summit offers a plethora of reasons to attend, including the chance to network with other professionals, learn about the latest product roadmap changes, and stretch your body and mind with a morning yoga session before diving into the day's agenda. Whether you're a brand new or seasoned user of the platform, the conference promises to be productive, educational, and enjoyable.


text:
“I couldn’t tell you what happened or why,

I can only tell you what I felt and why it affected me so."

Electric pulses shot through the air. I could feel them in my fingertips.

They began to permeate every blood vessel and vein,

until I felt like one pulsating organ; hot, heavy, and overwhelmed.

All at once the blackness hit.

I was icy again;

back to the normal numbness I felt from day to day,

no emotions and soulless.

Strangely I felt whole for once, like I was finally complete,

like I had risen to a higher plane of existence, another state of being.

Then, I woke up.

I was holding bloody clumps of hair. It was a ratty and tangled mess.

I threw it down in disgust, and ground it into the dirt with my foot.

I thought I could make it disappear.

I looked up to see a blood stained manifestation of human staring back at me.

You could have sensed that she was dirty, beaten, battered, bruised, and broken

just by the sadness in her eyes.

I wondered if I had committed this heinous act towards such an ethereal creature.

I instantly felt shame at the mere possibility.

I reached out, just to touch her, to hold her, to mend her,

to whisper that everything was going to be alright.

My hand stopped when I touched glass.

I realized what I had been looking at with such remorse and affection

was simply myself reflected.

"That’s when I fainted.”

The doctor raised his left eyebrow, glanced at the clock,

sighed at the forty five minutes left in our session,

then whispered in his sing-song voice,

“And how does that make you feel?”

title: ethereal.

question: Whose hair was the narrator holding?

text: the answer is blank

answer: It is implied that it was the narrator's hair.

text: We don't need to include the signposting "it is implied."

answer: The narrator was holding her own hair.

answer: The narrator was holding the hair of a beaten and battered person.

text: While technically correct, the important detail here is missing -- that she is the beaten and battered person whose hair she is holding.

question: How did she pull out the hair?

answer: She doesn't say.

answer: Information not found.

text: We don't need a capital letter and period for a sentence fragment.

answer:
Did she feel remorse or guilt?

The narrator pulls out the hair from a bloody and beaten human manifestation. She feels remorse and guilt for the act, but is unsure if she was the one who committed it.

text: completely unrelated

text: the answer field is blank

question: Was this a dream or reality?

text: the answer field is left blank

answer: It is unclear.

answer: It is unclear whether this was a dream or reality, but it seems to be a mixture of both. The dream seems to be a manifestation of the narrator's emotions and thoughts, while the blood-stained human could be a manifestation of the narrator's guilt.

text: very misleading, makes a lot of assumptions, but does contain the correct answer.

refinement: It is unclear whether this was a dream or reality.

answer: Information not found.

text: We don't need capitalization and a period on a sentence fragment.

question: What happened when the narrator saw her reflection?

answer: She fainted.

answer: She fainted.

text: the answer field is blank

answer: The narrator realized that the person she had been looking at with sadness and affection was simply her own reflection. This realization made her feel ashamed and she fainted.

text: The answer contains a lot of unnecessary information in addition to the correct answer

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: The speaker is recounting a dream they had. They are in a room with a bloody mess and a reflection of themselves. They are unsure if they are the one who committed the act.

text: She is not with a bloody mess -- she is a bloody mess.

refinement: The speaker is recounting a dream they had. They are staring at the bloody mess of their own reflection. They are unsure if they are the one who committed the act.

text: We know the speaker's pronouns -- she/her. We should use those instead of they/them.

refinement: The speaker is recounting a dream she had. She are staring at the bloody mess of their own reflection. She is unsure if she committed the act.

text: Last sentence is gibberish.

refinement: The speaker is recounting a dream she had. She is staring at the bloody mess of her own reflection.

text: To whom is she recounting the dream?

refinement: The speaker is recounting a dream she had to a doctor. In the dream, she is staring at the bloody mess of her own reflection.

text: Omits significant plot detail -- that she fainted.

refinement: The speaker is recounting a dream she had to a doctor. In the dream, she is staring at the bloody mess of her own reflection and faints.

text: It's not a dream -- it's the story of her suicide attempt.

refinement: The speaker is recounting the story of her failed suicide attempt. In the story, she is staring at the bloody mess of her own reflection and faints.

answer: The narrator wakes up with bloody clumps of hair in their hands. They are horrified and try to make the hair disappear. They look up and see a blood-stained manifestation of a human staring back at them. They realize it is their reflection and faint.

text: We know the narrator's pronouns -- we should use those.

refinement: The narrator wakes up with bloody clumps of hair in her hands. She is horrified and tries to make the hair disappear. She looks up and sees a blood-stained manifestation of a human staring back at her. She realizes it is her own reflection and faints.

text: Privileges a minor detail, "tries to make the hair disappear" over a major detail: she's in the doctor's office, recounting a suicide attempt.

refinement: The narrator is in a doctor's office, recounting a suicide attempt. After awakening from the attempt, she looks up and sees a blood-stained manifestation of a human staring back at her. She realizes it is her own reflection and faints.

answer: The narrator experiences a strange sensation of electricity running through their body, and then blackness. When they wake up, they find themselves standing over a blood-stained version of themselves, which they realize is simply a reflection. They feel shame and sadness at the thought of having hurt someone so ethereal.

text: We know the narrator's pronouns -- she/her.

refinement: The narrator experiences a strange sensation of electricity running through her body, and then blackness. When she wakes up, she finds herself standing over a blood-stained version of herself, which she realizes is simply a reflection. She feels shame and sadness at the thought of having hurt someone so ethereal.

text: At no point does the text make reference to standing over herself.

refinement: The narrator experiences a strange sensation of electricity running through her body, and then blackness. When she wakes up, she finds herself staring at a blood-stained version of herself in the mirror. She feels shame and sadness at the thought of having hurt someone so ethereal.

text: Omits two major plot details -- that she faints, and that she's in the doctor's office, recounting an experience she had.

refinement: The narrator is in the doctor's office, recounting an experience she had. In her story, she feels a strange sensation of electricity running through her body, and then blackness. When she wakes up, she finds herself staring at a blood-stained version of herself in the mirror. She feels shame and sadness at the thought of having hurt someone so ethereal. She faints.

answer: The narrator is at her therapist's office, describing a scene where she goes through different body sensations. She ends up holding bloody clumps of hair, then sees a wounded woman, only to realize she was looking at her own reflection. She tells the doctor that at that moment she fainted. The doctor asks her how she feels about that.

text: We have no reason to believe this is a therapist; there are lots of different kinds of doctors someone might recount  this story to.

refinement: The narrator is at her doctor's office, describing a scene where she goes through different body sensations. She ends up holding bloody clumps of hair, then sees a wounded woman, only to realize she was looking at her own reflection. She tells the doctor that at that moment she fainted. The doctor asks her how she feels about that.


text:
[Dem ousts incumbent Republican in Manchester mayoral race]

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Joyce Craig vanquished Republican incumbent Ted Gatsas in Manchester, N.H.'s closely watched mayoral race on Tuesday, making her the first woman to hold the position and putting a Democrat at the helm of the city for the first time in more than a decade.

Craig won the race with 12,053 votes, while Gatsas had 10,580, according to vote tallies reported by WMUR-TV in Manchester.

The race was the highest profile in the Granite State this year, pitting Gatsas, who has served as the city's mayor since 2010, against Craig, a former alderman, who unsuccessfully vied for the post in 2015.

But this time, Craig drew the support of a number of prominent national political figures, including former Vice President Joe Biden[]Joe BidenTrump rages against '60 Minutes' for interview with Krebs Cornyn spox: Neera Tanden has 'no chance' of being confirmed as Biden's OMB pick Five things to know about Georgia's Senate runoffs MORE, who filmed a video endorsement for the Manchester Democrat.

"Voting in local elections is the best way to bring about change in your community, and Joyce is the right candidate at the right time," Biden said in the video. "She'll make a real difference for Manchester."

She was also joined at times by other prominent out-of-state Democrats, including former Maryland Gov. Martin O'Malley, Los Angeles Mayor Eric Garcetti and Rep. Tim Ryan (Ohio).

Hillary Clinton[]Hillary Diane Rodham ClintonCornyn spox: Neera Tanden has 'no chance' of being confirmed as Biden's OMB pick Groups seek to get Black vote out for Democrats in Georgia runoffs Biden's political position is tougher than Trump's MORE won Manchester by a little more than 3,000 votes in the 2016 presidential election. The former secretary of State narrowly defeated President Trump in New Hampshire.

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question: Summarize everything about Joyce Craig.

answer: She is a Democrat who won the Manchester mayoral race against  Ted Gatsas. She is the first woman city mayor of Manchester.

text: could include the state

refinement: She is a Democrat who won the Manchester, New Hampshire mayoral race against  Ted Gatsas. She is the first woman city mayor of Manchester.

text: could include the date

refinement: She is a Democrat who won the Manchester, New Hampshire mayoral race against Ted Gatsas in 2020. She is the first woman city mayor of Manchester.

text: second sentence awkward

refinement: She is a Democrat who won the Manchester, New Hampshire mayoral race against Ted Gatsas in 2020. She is the first woman to become mayor of Manchester.

answer: She is the first woman to hold the position of mayor in Manchester, New Hampshire. She is a Democrat. She won the race against Republican incumbent Ted Gatsas. She was joined by other prominent out-of-state Democrats.

text: could include the date

refinement: She is the first woman to hold the position of mayor in Manchester, New Hampshire. She is a Democrat. She won the race against Republican incumbent Ted Gatsas in 2020. She was joined by other prominent out-of-state Democrats.

answer: Joyce Craig is the first woman to hold the position of mayor in Manchester, NH. She is a Democrat and was endorsed by Joe Biden.

text: should include details of her election

refinement: Joyce Craig is the first woman to hold the position of mayor in Manchester, NH. She beat Republican incumbent Ted Gatsas in 2020. She is a Democrat and was endorsed by Joe Biden.

answer: Joyce Craig is the newly elected mayor of Manchester, New Hampshire, and the first woman to hold that position in over a decade. She was endorsed by former Vice President Joe Biden, and narrowly lost the race in 2015. However, she won this time, defeating the incumbent Republican Ted Gatsas. Clinton narrowly won Manchester in the 2016 presidential election.

text: contains a lot of inaccurate and irrelevant information

refinement: Joyce Craig is the newly elected mayor of Manchester, New Hampshire, the first woman to hold that position, and the first Democrat in over a decade. She was endorsed by former Vice President Joe Biden. She defeated incumbent Republican Ted Gatsas.

question: What did Vice President Biden say about Joyce Craig in his video endorsement for the Manchester Democrat?

answer: He said that Joyce is the right candidate at the right time and she'll make a difference for Manchester.

answer: He said that voting in local elections is the best way to bring about change in your community, and Joyce is the right candidate at the right time.

text: includes irrelevant information

refinement: He said that Joyce is the right candidate at the right time.

text: omits ~half the answer

refinement: He said that Joyce is the right candidate at the right time and will make a real difference in Manchester.

answer: According to the passage, Vice President Biden endorsed Joyce Craig in the Manchester mayoral race, saying that she is the right candidate at the right time and that voting in local elections is the best way to bring about change in one's community.

text: We don't need the signpost 'according to the passage'.

refinement: Vice President Biden endorsed Joyce Craig in the Manchester mayoral race, saying that she is the right candidate at the right time and that voting in local elections is the best way to bring about change in one's community.

text: includes irrelevant information

refinement: Vice President Biden endorsed Joyce Craig in the Manchester mayoral race, saying that she is the right candidate at the right time.

text: omits ~half the answer

refinement: Vice President Biden endorsed Joyce Craig in the Manchester mayoral race, saying that she is the right candidate at the right time and that she will make a real difference for Manchester.

answer: Vice President Biden said that Joyce Craig is the right candidate at the right time.

text: omits ~half the answer

refinement: Vice President Biden said that Joyce Craig is the right candidate at the right time and that she will make a real difference for Manchester.

question: Who were the prominent out-of-state Democrats who joined Craig at times?

answer: Joe Biden, Martin O'Malley, Eric Garcetti, and Tim Ryan

text: should include titles and localities for politicians

refinement: former Vice President Joe Biden, Maryland Governor Martin O'Malley, Los Angeles Mayor Eric Garcetti, and Representative Tim Ryan of Ohio

answer: Former Maryland Gov. Martin O'Malley, Los Angeles Mayor Eric Garcetti, and Rep. Tim Ryan.

text: should include Joe Biden

refinement: former vice president Joe Biden, former Maryland Gov. Martin O'Malley, Los Angeles Mayor Eric Garcetti, and Rep. Tim Ryan

text: should include state of origin for Tim Ryan

refinement: former vice president Joe Biden, former Maryland Gov. Martin O'Malley, Los Angeles Mayor Eric Garcetti, and Rep. Tim Ryan of Ohio.

text: don't need capitalization and period for a sentence fragment

refinement: former vice president Joe Biden, former Maryland Gov. Martin O'Malley, Los Angeles Mayor Eric Garcetti, and Rep. Tim Ryan of Ohio

answer: Joe Biden, Martin O'Malley, Eric Garcetti, and Tim Ryan.

text: should include titles and localities for politicians

refinement: former Vice President Joe Biden, Maryland Governor Martin O'Malley, Los Angeles Mayor Eric Garcetti, and Representative Tim Ryan of Ohio

answer: Former Maryland Gov. Martin O'Malley, Los Angeles Mayor Eric Garcetti, and Rep. Tim Ryan (Ohio).

text: don't need capitalization and a period for a sentence fragment

refinement: former Maryland Gov. Martin O'Malley, Los Angeles Mayor Eric Garcetti, and Rep. Tim Ryan (Ohio)

text: should include Joe Biden

refinement: former Vice President Joe Biden, former Maryland Gov. Martin O'Malley, Los Angeles Mayor Eric Garcetti, and Rep. Tim Ryan (Ohio)

question: Did Hillary Clinton win Manchester in the 2016 presidential election?

answer: Yes, Hillary Clinton won Manchester in the 2016 presidential election.

answer: Yes, according to the passage, Hillary Clinton won Manchester in the 2016 presidential election by a little more than 3,000 votes.

text: fact is not included in the passage, but is true

refinement: Hillary Clinton won Manchester in the 2016 presidential election by a little more than 3,000 votes.

text: numbers are pulled from an unrelated fact

refinement: Hillary Clinton won Manchester in the 2016 presidential.

answer: Yes, she won Manchester by a little more than 3,000 votes.

text: numbers are pulled from an unreported fact

answer: Yes.

text: don't need capitalization and period for a sentence fragment

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Democrat Joyce Craig won the Manchester mayoral race against Republican incumbent Ted Gatsas, making her the first woman city mayor of Manchester.

text: should include the year

refinement: In 2020, Democrat Joyce Craig won the Manchester mayoral race against Republican incumbent Ted Gatsas, making her the first woman city mayor of Manchester.

answer: Joyce Craig, a Democrat, won the mayoral race in Manchester, New Hampshire, defeating Republican incumbent Ted Gatsas.

text: should include the year

refinement: In 2020, Joyce Craig, a Democrat, won the mayoral race in Manchester, New Hampshire, defeating Republican incumbent Ted Gatsas.

text: should include historical significance

refinement: In 2020, Joyce Craig, a Democrat, won the mayoral race in Manchester, New Hampshire, defeating Republican incumbent Ted Gatsas. She is the first woman to be elected mayor of Manchester.

answer: The article is about a mayoral race in Manchester, New Hampshire, and the first woman to hold the position.

text: need the name of the person the article is about

refinement: The article is about a Joyce Craig of Manchester, New Hampshire, the first woman to hold the mayorship.

text: Don't need to signpost

refinement: Joyce Craig of Manchester, New Hampshire, is the first woman to hold the mayorship.

text: need to include details about the election

refinement: Joyce Craig of Manchester, New Hampshire, the first woman to hold the mayorship, won the office in 2020 against incumbent Republican Tet Gatsas

answer: Joyce Craig was elected mayor of Manchester, NH, defeating incumbent Republican Ted Gatsas. This makes her the first woman to hold the position and the first Democrat mayor in over a decade.

text: need the year

refinement: In 2020, Joyce Craig was elected mayor of Manchester, NH, defeating incumbent Republican Ted Gatsas. This makes her the first woman to hold the position and the first Democrat mayor in over a decade.


text: It was the summer of my Sophomore year of high school. This was such a great time in my life.  Girls thought I was hot, I really hadn’t quite hit puberty yet, I had great friends to fuck around with, and best of all, I discovered weed.  When everyone starts smoking weed they think they’re the shit, and my friends and I were no exception.  It was like being in this cool exclusive club that came with its own music and carefree lifestyle.  Needless to say, I was stoked to be in this nonconformist crazy pot culture; after my first few puffs of the ganja I immersed myself into the lifestyle.  The “Mac miller” look, that’s what I went for. Snap back, cargo shorts, a plain white tee and a backpack with a dime bag of weed in it.  My friends and I really became this scumbag look for a better part of a year.  But, weirdly enough girls seemed to dig the loser stoner look so I wasn’t complaining.  My best friend at the time was Cole.  We first started smoking together and became inseparable that whole summer.  I convinced him to take his first hit and after that we would always smoke together.  We were the type of people that wouldn’t even say anything but would just look at each other and die laughing.  He was my best friend.  After a while Cole never wanted to be sober.  Whatever would get him acting like a fool he would take, and that’s where things started to change.  That’s where my innocent pot-smoking friend morphed into a different person. I’m convinced he lost his personality.  Looking back at it, there was never really a falling out between us, just a loss of connection.  After a while all Cole would talk about was the “crazy” rave he went to and how much molly and acid he was doing next weekend.  He just wanted to get higher, and I couldn’t relate to him. His personality grew to become this pothead tripped-out person I thought we were just merely emulating.  That’s why I like to think back to sophomore year and the first hit of pot we took together.  The drug infused laughter we would get into as kids, and the girls we would hook up with.  I realize now that I was just playing a character and being a goofball, the difference is that Cole let the character take over his life.

title: Pot Smokin Daze

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Explain the narrator's views on drugs.

answer: This narrator views drugs, particularly marijuana, as a fun and exciting lifestyle choice. However, as the passage indicates, he has noticed in hindsight that his friend who started smoking with him began to take drugs more seriously and become someone different from his original self. While the narrator enjoyed his time as a stoner, he now sees that drugs, particularly marijuana, changed his friend for the worse. He doesn't view drugs positively, and believes that they can change people in negative ways. He believes that while marijuana is fun, overall, it's not worth the potential negative consequences.

answer: He finds them fun but not something to take too seriously.

text: It is omitted that later in the story the narrator does not approve of drugs.

refinement: He finds them fun but not something to take too seriously. In the later part of the story, the narrator does not approve of drugs after narrating what happened to his friend Cole.

answer: He became involved with the weed culture because it allowed him to "embrace nonconformity." However, the drug culture of his friends turned them into a different kind of person and he lost his connection with Cole.

answer: The narrator views drugs with a sense of nostalgia. He values the time when he and his friend first experimented with weed and were just goofballs having fun. In contrast, the narrator has a negative view of his friend as he has since become more serious and addicted to drugs. The narrator views drugs as something that can change people for the worse and disrupt innocent friendships. Overall, the narrator disapproves of drugs.

answer: The narrator confesses to enjoying weed and its associated lifestyle. He is a social person who is not shy to flirt with women.

text: It is omitted that he later disapproves of drugs.

refinement: The narrator confesses to enjoying weed and its associated lifestyle. He is a social person who is not shy to flirt with women. In the later part of the story, he disapproves of the use of drugs considering what happened to his friend Cole.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did Cole lose his personality?

answer: He just wanted to get higher if his personality was questioned about it.

text: It is omitted that he became obsessed with doing drugs and getting high.

refinement: He just wanted to get higher if his personality was questioned about it. Cole became obsessed with doing drugs and getting high.

answer: Cole lost his personality because he became obsessed with getting high and doing drugs instead of being the goofy, easy going guy he once was.

answer: Cole started taking other drugs like acid and molly.

text: It is omitted that he became obsessed with getting high and would not talk about anything else other than that.

refinement: Cole started taking other drugs like acid and molly.

answer: Cole lost his personality because he became addicted to marijuana. The drug took over his life and made him want to be high all the time, which changed his personality drastically.

answer: He got too serious about drugs, consuming more and more until they were the only important thing in his life.

text: " After a while all Cole would talk about was the “crazy” rave he went to and how much molly and acid he was doing next weekend. He just wanted to get higher." This is evidence that Cole got too serious about drugs.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why didn't the narrator become like Cole?

answer: He was "just playing a character and being a goofball". Maybe he couldn't handle the extra stuff Cole wanted to do as he matured.

answer: Aside from the text saying that their physical appearance changed, the narrator became more introspective about what it means to be high.

answer: The narrator was able to maintain his personality while Cole allowed his to morph into being a pothead tripped out person. The reason for this difference may be due to the fact that the narrator had other interests, such in girls and goofball behavior, while Cole threw himself fully into the culture. The result was a loss of connection between the two friends.

answer: He wasn't completely immersed in the drugs or the culture. He rolled along mostly because it was "cool", and girls liked him that way.

answer: The narrator did not become like Cole because he wasn't willing to let the character of the "pothead" take over his life like Cole did. Whereas Cole was only interested in getting higher and tripping out, the narrator had other interests that kept him grounded. He was interested in hanging out with his friends, being pretty popular with girls, and having a bigger personality than just being "the stoner guy." As a result, the narrator wasn't willing to let that character take over his life.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is Cole's final fate?

answer: That isn't certain.

answer: It is likely that Cole's final fate is to continue dabbling in drugs and possibly engage in more dangerous behavior.

answer: The story doesn't mention much after he becomes a drug addict.

answer: This information can not be found in the text.

answer: It is unclear what Cole's final fate is, but it appears as though he is straying farther away from the person he once was due to excessive drug use. It is possible that the drugs will take over his life completely in the end.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: The narrator thinks back to his sophomore high school years when he discovered weed. He and his then-best friend Cole would not just smoke weed together, but also emulate the lifestyle of the drug culture. However, Cole eventually wanted to get just higher and higher while the narrator was being a goofball. At some point, Cole lost his personality and became someone who only talks about what drugs he consumes.

answer: The summer of sophomore year of high school was an incredible time for the narrator. He discovered weed and became immersed in the pot culture. But his longtime friend, Cole, started to change. He became obsessed with getting higher, eventually becoming a different person. The narrator misses how things were in the beginning, when they used to laugh and have innocent fun together.

answer: One warm summer, in the sophomore year of high school, the narrator befriends Cole, who becomes his best friend. They smoke marijuana together in secret as the narrator discovers the new popular culture. The two become inseparable until the narrator begins to question Cole's increasingly escapist behavior. The narrator muses back to the first time he and Cole shared a joint, which was too wonderful to ponder than the now sad state of his friend.

answer: The author takes a look back on the summer he discovered weed and how his relationship with his friend, Cole, slowly changed due to the drug use. Cole became distant from the narrator over the time, as his life became focused on being high phe ween acid and molly. They both smoked together and he moved into a change of personality surrounding smoking weed and he couldn't relate to him anymore. They still see each other and keep in touch but it's a distant connection and is more like how people make polite conversation rather than how good friends are.

text: Grammatical error - "phe ween" is a word that does not exist.

refinement: The author takes a look back on the summer he discovered weed and how his relationship with his friend, Cole, slowly changed due to the drug use. Cole became distant from the narrator over the time, as his life became focused on being high doing acid and molly. They both smoked together and he moved into a change of personality surrounding smoking weed and he couldn't relate to him anymore. They still see each other and keep in touch but it's a distant connection and is more like how people make polite conversation rather than how good friends are.

text: Incorrect use of definite article - the.

refinement: The author takes a look back on the summer he discovered weed and how his relationship with his friend, Cole, slowly changed due to drug use. Cole became distant from the narrator over time, as his life became focused on being high doing acid and molly. They both smoked together and he moved into a change of personality surrounding smoking weed and he couldn't relate to him anymore. They still see each other and keep in touch but it's a distant connection and is more like how people make polite conversation rather than how good friends are.

text: There is no evidence that the narrator is still in touch with Cole.

refinement: The author takes a look back on the summer he discovered weed and how his relationship with his friend, Cole, slowly changed due to drug use. Cole became distant from the narrator over time, as his life became focused on being high doing acid and molly. They both smoked together and he moved into a change of personality surrounding smoking weed and he couldn't relate to him anymore.

text: " After a while all Cole would talk about was the “crazy” rave he went to and how much molly and acid he was doing next weekend." This is evidence that Cole's personality changed into being surrounded only by drugs.

answer: The summer of his sophomore year of high school was a great time for the narrator. He discovered weed and quickly immersed himself into the weed culture. However, his best friend slowly changed into a pothead who was obsessed with increased drug use. The narrator looks back fondly on the innocence of their first experiences smoking weed together, and in hindsight realizes it's one that was lost.


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LYUDMYLA LEONTIIVNA DENISOVA[1] (; ) (born July 6, 1960 in Arkhangelsk, Russian SFSR) is a Ukrainian politician and former Minister of Labor and Social Policy who on 15 March 2018 was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.[2][3]

Biography

Raised by her mother Nina Ivanovna Ankudinova (born 1934) in Arkhangelsk Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School (1978), the Leningrad State University (1989) and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law (1995).[4]

Professional career

Denisova was a teacher at a preschool in the Russian city of Arkhangelsk (school №78, 1979–80).[5] For the next nine years Denisova held different posts in the Arkhangelsk provincial law court.[6] In 1989, she moved to Ukraine and became the legal adviser of the Crimean Provincial Committee of Ukraine (1990–91).[7] From 1991 she worked in the Republic of Crimea's Administration of the pension fund until 1998.[8]

Political career

In 1998 Denisova became the Minister of Economy and Finances in the Crimean government.[9] In Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea, she served as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department. Denisova was named Politician of the Year in 2001. In 2000 Denisova was detained for 24 hours and charged with power abuse.[10] Denisova has stated she was persecuted for refusing to sign a budget document.[11] This criminal case was soon closed.[12]

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina (Yulia Tymoshenko Bloc) since 2005.[13] During the 2006 and 2007 parliamentary elections, she was elected as a deputy to the Verkhovna Rada (Ukrainian parliament).

Minister

On December 18, 2007, Yulia Tymoshenko, with a margin of two votes, was elected Prime Minister.[14] and the second Tymoshenko Government was formed between the Yulia Tymoshenko Bloc and Our Ukraine–People's Self-Defense Bloc in which Denisova was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy.

In October 2009 Denisova was ranked 15th in a top 100 of “most influential women in Ukraine” compiled by experts for the Ukrainian magazine Focus (six places lower than non-minister and fellow Batkivshchina member Natalia Korolevska).[15]

2010 Crimean parliamentary election

Denisova headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina during the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election.[16] Batkivshchina did not win seats in the Supreme Council of Crimea.[17]

2012 Ukrainian parliamentary election

Denisova was placed at number 38 on the electoral list of Batkivshchina during the 2012 Ukrainian parliamentary election.[18] She was re-elected into parliament.[19]

2nd minister post

On 27 February 2014 Denisova became Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government.[20]

In September 2014 Denisova became a founding member of her new party People's Front.[21]

2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election

In the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election Denisova was re-elected into parliament placed 15th on the electoral list of People's Front.[22][23][24]

On 15 March 2018 the Ukrainian parliament elected Denisova Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.[25]

[1]  Short bio, LIGA

[2] https://www.pravda.com.ua/news/2018/03/15/7174734/

[3] Maidan nominates Yatseniuk for prime minister, Interfax-Ukraine (26 February 2014)
Ukrainian parliament endorses new cabinet, Interfax-Ukraine (27 February 2014)

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[9] Новый состав Кабмина принят единогласно , news.mediaport.ua

[10] Is She Next?, Kyiv Post (September 3, 2010)

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[15]  Рейтинг Фокуса: 100 самых влиятельных женщин и 100 деталей о них , Focus

[16] Liudmyla Denisova heads electoral list of Crimean branch of Batkivschyna Party, Kyiv Post (September 30, 2010)

[17]  Results of the elections, preliminary data, on interactive maps by Ukrayinska Pravda (November 8, 2010)

[18] They Call Themselves the Opposition, The Ukrainian Week (31 August 2012)

[19]  Список депутатів нової Верховної Ради, Ukrayinska Pravda (11 November 2012)

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[21] Yatseniuk elected head of political council of People's Front Party , Demotix (9 September 2014)

[22] Poroshenko Bloc to have greatest number of seats in parliament , Ukrinform (8 November 2014)
People's Front 0.33% ahead of Poroshenko Bloc with all ballots counted in Ukraine elections - CEC , Interfax-Ukraine (8 November 2014)
Poroshenko Bloc to get 132 seats in parliament - CEC, Interfax-Ukraine (8 November 2014)

[23]  Full electoral list of “Fatherland” , TVi (15 September 2014)

[24]  Electoral list of People's Front, Ukrayinska Pravda (20 September 2014)

[25]

title: Lyudmyla Denisova

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Denisova's education?

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School, the Leningrad State University, and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School in 1978, then the Leningrad State University in 1989, and finally the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law in 1995.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School. She completed her state certification at the Leningrad State University. She later completed her license at the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

text: Remove anything about licensing

refinement: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School. She then studied at the Leningrad State University. Finally she graduated from Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School and the Leningrad State University.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School (1978), the Leningrad State University (1989) and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law (1995).

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Denisova's political career?

answer: Denisova has had a long political career, beginning as a teacher and moving on to various post within the Crimean provincial law courts and the Crimean government. In 2009 she was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy under Yulia Tymoshenko's second government and in 2014 she was re-elected to parliament for the second time. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

answer: Denisova has had a political career primarily in Crimea, serving as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance, and head of Treasury Department before becoming Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government in 2014. She was elected into parliament in both the 2006 and 2012 Ukrainian parliamentary elections, placed 15th on the electoral list of People's Front in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election, and was recently elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

answer: Denisova was the Minister of Labor and Social Policy as a member of the Yatsenyuk Government in February 2014. She re-elected into parliament in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election. She was elected as Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine on March 15, 2018.

text: Does not contain all necessary information

refinement:
Denisova became Minister of Economy and Finances in Crimea in 1998. She served as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance, and head of Treasury Department. In 2001 she was named Politician of the Year.
Denisova was the Minister of Labor and Social Policy as a member of the Yatsenyuk Government in February 2014. She re-elected into parliament in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election. She was elected as Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine on March 15, 2018.

answer:
As Minister of Finance she held different posts in the Arkhangelsk provincial law court between 1979 and 1990. Following that, Denisova became the legal adviser of the Crimean Provincial Committee of Ukraine from 1990 to 1991.

In 1998 Denisova became Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department in the Crimean government. She served in Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea from 1998 to 2007.

In 2000 Denisova was detained for 24hrs on charges of power abuse. She stated that she was persecuted for refusing to sign a budget document. This case was shut down.

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina since 2005. She headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina for the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election, but Batkivshchina did not win seats in Supreme Council of Crimea.

text: 24 hours is more professional

refinement:
As Minister of Finance she held different posts in the Arkhangelsk provincial law court between 1979 and 1990. Following that, Denisova became the legal adviser of the Crimean Provincial Committee of Ukraine from 1990 to 1991.

In 1998 Denisova became Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department in the Crimean government. She served in Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea from 1998 to 2007.

In 2000 Denisova was detained for 24 hours on charges of power abuse. She stated that she was persecuted for refusing to sign a budget document. This case was shut down.

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina since 2005. She headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina for the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election, but Batkivshchina did not win seats in Supreme Council of Crimea.

answer: In 1998, Denisova became the Minister of Economy and Finances in the Crimean government. She was named Politician of the Year in 2001. She has been a member of Batkivshchina since 2005, and during the 2006 and 2007 parliamentary elections, she was elected as a deputy to the Verkhovna Rada. In 2009, she was ranked the 15th most influential woman in Ukraine. She was re-elected to parliament in 2012. In 2014, she became Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government and became a founding member of her new party People's Front. In the same year, she was re-elected to the Ukrainian parliament. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.


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ERICQ PIERRE (born 1945?) is a Haitian economist working for the Inter-American Development Bank. He was unsuccessfully nominated as Prime Minister by President René Préval in 1997 and 2008.[1]

Pierre lives in Washington, DC, where the Inter-American Development Bank is based, and is an advisor for the Bank regarding Haiti.[2] In the midst of a political crisis[3] following the resignation of Prime Minister Rosny Smarth, Pierre was nominated as Prime Minister by President Préval in 1997,[4] but the Chamber of Deputies rejected the nomination on August 26, 1997, with 43 votes against him, nine in favor, and eight abstaining.[5] Pierre's inability to demonstrate that his grandparents were of Haitian nationality by presenting their birth certificates[6] and his support for an economic plan that involved privatization and large-scale lay-offs of state employees contributed to his defeat.[7]

After Prime Minister Jacques-Édouard Alexis was defeated in a vote of no confidence on April 12, 2008, Préval nominated Pierre as Prime Minister for a second time on April 27, 2008.[8] In Les Cayes on May 5, leaders of the riots against high food prices that had occurred in April demanded that a new Prime Minister and government be installed within a week, threatening renewed violence if this did not happen.[9]

The Senate approved Pierre's nomination on May 7, with 17 votes in favor, two abstentions and none opposed. The nomination still had to be approved by the Chamber of Deputies.[10] In an Associated Press interview, Pierre emphasized the need for long-term strategies to deal with the deepening poverty caused by rising food prices.[11]

The Chamber of Deputies rejected Pierre's nomination on May 12;[12] there were 51 votes against him and 35 in favor,[13][14] with nine deputies abstaining.[15] As a result, Préval had to nominate someone else. Opposition deputy Levaillant Louis Jeune said that the deputies “didn't really believe in the plan that he had for the people of this country”.[16][17] Additionally, as in 1997, questions arose about Pierre's nationality documents.[18]

Speaking at the Hotel Montana in Port-au-Prince on May 15, Pierre alleged that corrupt deputies had prevented his nomination from succeeding because he had been unwilling to negotiate with them and satisfy their demands for money, projects, and positions in the government. He was dismissive regarding the nationality issue.[19]

Since March 2016 Pierre is Foreign Minister in the cabinet of Fritz Jean.

[1] “Haitian lawmakers reject president's pick for prime minister”, Associated Press (_International Herald Tribune_), May 13, 2008.

[2] “Haiti names new PM amid food crisis” , AFP, April 27, 2008.

[3] “Haitians nix president's P.M. pick”, _The Star-Ledger_ (nl.newsbank.com), August 27, 1997.

[4] “Haitian Senate ratifies Eric Pierre's PM nomination”, Xinhua, May 9, 2008.

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[9] Joseph Guyler Delva, “Haiti riot instigators set deadline to install PM”, Reuters (_International Herald Tribune_), May 6, 2008.

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[14] “Haiti MPs reject new PM candidate”, BBC News, May 13, 2008.

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[18] “Failed Haiti PM nominee says lawmakers who rejected him were corrupt”, Associated Press (_International Herald Tribune_), May 16, 2008.

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title: Ericq Pierre

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why was there a larger resistance to Eriq Pierre's second nomination in 2008?

answer: The main reason was that his economic plan that involved privatization and lay-offs of state employees was not well received by the deputies.

text: The was the reason for his 1997 defeat. In regards to his 2008 defeat, the article merely states that deputies didn't approve of his plan.

refinement: According to opposition deputy Levaillant Louis Jeune, the deputies didn't really believe in the plan that he had for the people of the country.

text: The answer could also mention his nationality documents.

refinement: According to opposition deputy Levaillant Louis Jeune, the deputies didn't really believe in the plan that he had for the people of the country. Questions also arose concerning Pierre's nationality documents.

answer: Many deputies in the Chamber of Deputies felt that Pierre was unprepared to deal with the deepening poverty caused by rising food prices, and had also faced questions of nationality during his first nomination attempt. Ultimately, 51 deputies voted against Pierre's second nomination because they felt he was unprepared to deal with Haiti's ongoing crisis.

answer: He is not a native Haitian and his economic proposals would fire a good percentage of the civil servants.

answer: There was more resistance to Pierre's second nomination due to questions about his birth documentation, his preferred economic plan, and demands by rioters for a new Prime Minister and government. Despite his prior experience in the position, parliamentarians and rioters both rejected Pierre due to their objections to his economic and governance plans as well as his nationality documents.

text: The second line is unattested.

refinement: There was more resistance to Pierre's second nomination due to questions about his birth documentation, his preferred economic plan, and demands by rioters for a new Prime Minister and government.

text: The demands for a new government didn't contribute to his loss.

refinement: There was more resistance to Pierre's second nomination due to questions about his birth documentation and his preferred economic plan.

answer:
Eriq Pierre is a Haitian economist living in Washington DC. He was nominated by President Rene Preval in 1997 for the Prime Minister post. Pierre's appointment was rejected by the Chamber of Deputies with 43 votes against him. Part of the reasons cited was a lack of support for Pierre's economic place as well as doubts about his Haitian heritage.

After the 2008 riots, Preval nominated Pierre as prime Minister for the second time. Though the Senate approved of his appointment, the Chambers of Deputies rejected it with 51 votes against him. Reasons for the rejection were similar to the first. Pierre, however, accused the deputies of corruption and unprofessionalism. It seems times have done nothing to alter the deputies' view of Pierre, his policies, and his claim to Haitian heritage.

text: The first paragraph concerns the 1997 election and thus is not relevant.

refinement: After the 2008 riots, Preval nominated Pierre as prime Minister for the second time. Though the Senate approved of his appointment, the Chambers of Deputies rejected it with 51 votes against him. Reasons for the rejection were similar to the first. Pierre, however, accused the deputies of corruption and unprofessionalism. It seems times have done nothing to alter the deputies' view of Pierre, his policies, and his claim to Haitian heritage.

text: Pierre's accusations aren't relevant.

refinement: After the 2008 riots, Preval nominated Pierre as prime Minister for the second time. Though the Senate approved of his appointment, the Chambers of Deputies rejected it with 51 votes against him. Reasons for the rejection were similar to the first. It seems times have done nothing to alter the deputies' view of Pierre, his policies, and his claim to Haitian heritage.


text: It was a beautiful, sunny day. The wind was blowing just the right way, like it was purposely missing the hair of the three girls walking home. Each had on a blue blazer with the school crest for thorns high, the local private school. One had tall, thin legs that seemed to go on forever. She had long, curly blonde ringlets flowing down to her lower back. Next to her was an averaged height red head. Her hair was short and partly died blue to match the blazer. She was talking to the third girl. The third was short with curly brown hair that was even longer than the blondes. Even though the red headed girl seemed to be in a serious conversation with her,the brunet  seemed distracted almost gone from her body. She kept thinking of the past twenty four hours of her life. Why had her mother decided to have a midlife crises? Now, of all the times in her life to have a crises this was the worst. She had just become head cheerleader and James, a guy she has been crushing on since she was old enough to read vogue, had final asked her out."okay fine then I guess your right I will get a tattoo and then join a gang from Russia!"Said the red head. "Eh uh, yeah sounds great Luce" said the brunette. Lucy turned to the blonde in aggravation. " Kenzie are you even listening?" Lucy said. " uh what"said Kenzie finally coming out of her daze. She turned to look at Lucy noticing her angry face. "I'm sorry Luce, I just have a lot on my mind. What is it you were saying?" "I was saying that with prom coming up we need to decide what, who and where?" Luce said happy to have some attention. " what, who and where?"  Asked the blonde in curiosity." Yes, Rebecca what, what are we all going to wear, who, whose all of our lucky dates, and where, where's the after party?" " oh uh well I don't know about party I'm not sure I want to go anywhere after" said Rebecca. "Becs your joking right? Your not seriously considering ditching us prom night. You know what I always say?" Said Lucy trying to convince her friend." I know, I know" said Rebecca " friends for life till the end and beyond" Said Rebecca trying her best to make fun of Lucy's saying. " not funny, and I'm serious we stick together through thick and thin... And prom!" Said Lucy about to burst from excitement."guys, guys enough with the prom talk okay let's just get through midterms then prom, i promise." Said Kenzie clearly not wanted to discuss further. As the three girls got to there street Rebecca noticed the moving truck in front of Kenzie's house. "Uh, Kenzie whose moving in your grandmother?" "No, not that I now of."said Kenzie curious about what was going at her house. She turned to her friends and said goodbye. She then ran up her drive way, past the truck and into her house. When she walked in she noticed the bare walls and floors. The foyer was completely blank except for the two large movers bringing out her bed. As they walked out she caught a sight of her mother in the kitchen directing there maids as they packed dishes." Ehhhh, frank please don't drop that it's an antique from France!" Cried Kenzie's mom. "Hey mom, what's going on? What's with all the huge guys" said Kenzie as she grabbed a cup from a nearby shelf. As she walked to the sink. Her  mother turned towards her. " oh um sweetie we need to talk" Kenzie turned nervously towards her mother knowing her tone of voice was the sympathetic one she always used when something bad was about to happened. "Wait, when you said we are going to move you didn't mean after my senior year this summer did you?" Said Kenzie trying to understand what was going on." Well, honey that's what I wanted to tell you. Surprise! I got a building sooner than later. We're moving tomorrow. The guys are here for our stuff today." Kenzie dropped her cup immediately.  "WHAT!!?" Said Kenzie as she saw her friends and her amazing life go by."Kenzie, me and your father told you last night that we thought we needed a new start and that when we could get a building for my new shop we were moving. Nothing new is happening." " mom, not fair you know I never thought it would happen so soon, prom isn't that far away please can we stay till graduation it's only in a few months?" Said Kenzie hoping to convince her."Kenzie it's over we're leaving. End of discussion" her mom said trying frantically to continue packing the kitchen. Kenzie decided to try a different tactic with her mom."fine but how about we make a deal?" " like what?"  Kenzie thought of what she was going to say. "How about if I don't like our new home in a month we move back just in time for prom and graduation and you buy me a new car?" Kenzie's mom thought over the new proposition."and if you like it in a month?" "Then I stay for the rest of senior year and go to a college close to home. I know you want me too!" As Kenzie's mom thought it over Kenzie realized that there was no way to trick her mom about liking the new place. Her mom had always had a weird gift for telling if someone lied. So if Kenzie happened to really like the new place her friends would kill her for staying and missing all the glorious senior privileges. "You have deal! One month nothing more nothing less." "Oh , thank you so much Lucy and Rebecca  will be so happy!" Kenzie ran to her mom and gave her a huge hug. She then happily skipped to her room in an excited daze. Maybe it wouldn't be so bad to get a new start. It might actually be fun but of course she'll always love thorns high. Wait where did her mom said they were moving to? Hopefully somewhere in California her home town, so that she can see her friends. When she got to her room she noticed a mover in her room. "Oh, hi sorry it's just that this is my room and I was hoping to pack some things for the move!" The mover then turned to leave. As she turned towers him to escorts him out of her room she noticed the mover was young and handsome. He had the look of a model mixed with a football player. " hey, names Blake sorry ill get out of your hair." He then turned to leave." Oh well you don't have to I'm just grabbing something's" Kenzie went to her closet to get all of her most beautiful things to impress Blake.She went to grab her coach bag when she heard a crash from across the room. She turned to see what it was in time to notice Blake catch a falling eyeliner from her desk. He caught it so quickly that it barely even left the desk. Kenzie stood amazed at what she had just witnessed." What, you look like you just say a ghost?" Blake said " you just...you just...you just caught my liner a second before it touched the ground!" " yeah, I guess I just have killer reflexes" said Blake trying to dismiss the comment. Blake put the liner down on the table and walked out of the room. Kenzie ran after him to say that it was okay. She grabbed his arm."wow, your really hot. Are you feeling okay" "don't touch me!" Blake said as he ripped his arm away from Kenzie and continued out the door way."wow, that was weird. He felt like my straightener set to its highest temp." She then went to her closet and finished packing the rest of her belongings.

title: Liquid Shadow

question: Will the girls go to the party after Prom?

answer: Maybe, if Kenzie does not move.

text: "I'm serious we stick together through thick and thin... And prom!" - Lucy is insistent on an after party

text: "How about if I don't like our new home in a month we move back just in time for prom and graduation" - the possibility of Kenzie not moving permanently

answer: I believe they go to the after party but I cannot tell for sure.

text: There is no strong indication either way

refinement: They might go to the after party but I cannot tell for sure.

text: No need for a first-person pronoun

refinement: They might go to the after party, it is uncertain.

answer: No, they are together because friends for life, but they will only stick through the thick and thin stuff.

text: The sentence is contradictory; "no" "but" and "only" give different meanings

refinement: They are together because friends for life, they will stick through the thick and thin stuff.

text: Phrasing

refinement: They are together because as friends for life, they will stick through the thick and thin stuff.

text: It still doesn't answer the question

refinement: Lucy says they will because they are friends for life, they will stick through the thick and thin stuff.

question: Why is the brunette's mother having a midlife crisis?

answer: The brunette's mother is having a midlife crisis because she wants a new start. It seems like she's moving the brunette from her home town to a different one in hopes that it will make her happier.

text: The second sentence is not supported

refinement: The brunette's mother is having a midlife crisis because she wants a new start.

text: "me and your father told you last night that we thought we needed a new start and that when we could get a building for my new shop" - new start

answer: Unknown.

text: "Why had her mother decided to have a midlife crises?" - the character wondering shows the answer is unknown to the reader as well

answer: The brunette's mother is having a midlife crisis because she wants to start over - either to open a business or move to a new location.

text: She is moving to a new location so she can open a business, it's sequential not optional

refinement: The brunette's mother is having a midlife crisis because she wants to start over - to open a business that is in a new location.

question: Is Lucy going to join a gang in Russia?

answer: It is not clear what this is supposed to mean; they seem to be joking but there is some kind of menacing undercurrent to the comment.

text: It is clearly rhetorical

refinement: No, it is rhetorical; they seem to be joking but there is some kind of menacing undercurrent to the comment.

text: The second part is unnecessary/unrelated to the question.

text: "I will ... join a gang from Russia!"

answer: Unknown.

text: Lucy's comment is rhetorical

answer: Unknown.

text: Lucy's comment is rhetorical

question: Will Lucy stay head cheerleader?

answer: The story does not provide the answer.

text: Kenzie, not Lucy, is head cheerleader

refinement: The story does not provide the answer for whether Kenzie will stay head cheerleader.

text: The story implies Kenzie will lose the position

refinement: The story implies Kenzie will not stay head cheerleader.

answer: The passage does not specifically state Lucy keeps her position as head cheerleader for the next year, so it is unknown if Lucy will stay as head cheerleader for the next year.

text: Kenzie, not Lucy, is head cheerleader

refinement: The passage does not specifically state Kenzie (not Lucy) keeps her position as head cheerleader for the next year, so it is unknown if Kenzie will stay as head cheerleader for the next year.

text: It is implied/can be deduced that she will not stay head cheerleader

refinement: The passage does not specifically state Kenzie (not Lucy) keeps her position as head cheerleader for the next year, but it is unlikely that Kenzie will stay as head cheerleader for the next year.

answer: Unknown.

text: Kenzie, not Lucy, is head cheerleader

refinement: Unknown if Kenzie (not Lucy) will stay head cheerleader.

text: It is implied she won't, so probability is a more effective answer

refinement: It is unlikely that Kenzie (not Lucy) will stay head cheerleader.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: It was a beautiful, sunny day. The three girls, Kenzie, Lucy, and Rebecca are walking home after school when they notice a moving truck in front of Kenzie's house. They go inside to find that the house is nearly empty, and so they go to talk to Kenzie about what's going on, and she reveals that she has to move her in order for her mom's business to grow further. Kenzie starts to panic as Lucy and Rebecca comfort her, but it's revealed they're only going to be moving for the month until the house they're moving to has a permanent tenant. Karenne tries to convince her mom that she won't like the house they're trying to move to during the first month, but her mom promises that if after the first month she doesn't like it, she can move back in time for graduation. Kenzie goes up to her room, and after noticing a mover, Blake, is in her room, she decides to flirt with him instead. Blake compliments her, but, after seeing him touch her, her decides to leave abruptly. When she realizes he's gone, she follows him to ask if he knows where the new house is, but he leaves without answering because he seems completely uninterested in her. She leaves and decides she'll figure out where on her own before tomorrow.

text: Kenzie talks to her mom about the situation before she even has a chance to tell her friends.

refinement: It was a beautiful, sunny day. The three girls, Kenzie, Lucy, and Rebecca are walking home after school when they notice a moving truck in front of Kenzie's house. They go inside to find that the house is nearly empty, and so Kenzie goes to talk to her mom about what's going on, and her mom reveals that they have to move in order for her mom's business to grow further. Kenzie starts to panic as Lucy and Rebecca comfort her, but it's revealed they're only going to be moving for the month until the house they're moving to has a permanent tenant. Karenne tries to convince her mom that she won't like the house they're trying to move to during the first month, but her mom promises that if after the first month she doesn't like it, she can move back in time for graduation. Kenzie goes up to her room, and after noticing a mover, Blake, is in her room, she decides to flirt with him instead. Blake compliments her, but, after seeing him touch her, her decides to leave abruptly. When she realizes he's gone, she follows him to ask if he knows where the new house is, but he leaves without answering because he seems completely uninterested in her. She leaves and decides she'll figure out where on her own before tomorrow.

text: Lucy and Rebecca are not in the scene at this point.

refinement: It was a beautiful, sunny day. The three girls, Kenzie, Lucy, and Rebecca are walking home after school when they notice a moving truck in front of Kenzie's house. They go inside to find that the house is nearly empty, and so Kenzie goes to talk to her mom about what's going on, and her mom reveals that they have to move in order for her mom's business to grow further. Kenzie starts to panic, but it's revealed they're only going to be moving for the month until the house they're moving to has a permanent tenant. Karenne tries to convince her mom that she won't like the house they're trying to move to during the first month, but her mom promises that if after the first month she doesn't like it, she can move back in time for graduation. Kenzie goes up to her room, and after noticing a mover, Blake, is in her room, she decides to flirt with him instead. Blake compliments her, but, after seeing him touch her, her decides to leave abruptly. When she realizes he's gone, she follows him to ask if he knows where the new house is, but he leaves without answering because he seems completely uninterested in her. She leaves and decides she'll figure out where on her own before tomorrow.

text: There is nothing in the text about another tenant

refinement: It was a beautiful, sunny day. The three girls, Kenzie, Lucy, and Rebecca are walking home after school when they notice a moving truck in front of Kenzie's house. They go inside to find that the house is nearly empty, and so Kenzie goes to talk to her mom about what's going on, and her mom reveals that they have to move in order for her mom's business to grow further. Kenzie starts to panic. Karenne tries to convince her mom that she won't like the house they're trying to move to during the first month, but her mom promises that if after the first month she doesn't like it, she can move back in time for graduation. Kenzie goes up to her room, and after noticing a mover, Blake, is in her room, she decides to flirt with him instead. Blake compliments her, but, after seeing him touch her, her decides to leave abruptly. When she realizes he's gone, she follows him to ask if he knows where the new house is, but he leaves without answering because he seems completely uninterested in her. She leaves and decides she'll figure out where on her own before tomorrow.

text: There is no Karenne, it's Kenzie

refinement: It was a beautiful, sunny day. The three girls, Kenzie, Lucy, and Rebecca are walking home after school when they notice a moving truck in front of Kenzie's house. They go inside to find that the house is nearly empty, and so Kenzie goes to talk to her mom about what's going on, and her mom reveals that they have to move in order for her mom's business to grow further. Kenzie starts to panic and tries to convince her mom that she won't like the house they're trying to move to during the first month, but her mom promises that if after the first month she doesn't like it, she can move back in time for graduation. Kenzie goes up to her room, and after noticing a mover, Blake, is in her room, she decides to flirt with him instead. Blake compliments her, but, after seeing him touch her, her decides to leave abruptly. When she realizes he's gone, she follows him to ask if he knows where the new house is, but he leaves without answering because he seems completely uninterested in her. She leaves and decides she'll figure out where on her own before tomorrow.

text: The sentence about the month-long deal is a bit repetitive

refinement: It was a beautiful, sunny day. The three girls, Kenzie, Lucy, and Rebecca are walking home after school when they notice a moving truck in front of Kenzie's house. They go inside to find that the house is nearly empty, and so Kenzie goes to talk to her mom about what's going on, and her mom reveals that they have to move in order for her mom's business to grow further. Kenzie starts to panic and gets her mom to promise that if after the first month she doesn't like it, she can move back in time for graduation. Kenzie goes up to her room, and after noticing a mover, Blake, is in her room, she decides to flirt with him instead. Blake compliments her, but, after seeing him touch her, her decides to leave abruptly. When she realizes he's gone, she follows him to ask if he knows where the new house is, but he leaves without answering because he seems completely uninterested in her. She leaves and decides she'll figure out where on her own before tomorrow.

text: There is no reason for 'instead'

refinement: It was a beautiful, sunny day. The three girls, Kenzie, Lucy, and Rebecca are walking home after school when they notice a moving truck in front of Kenzie's house. They go inside to find that the house is nearly empty, and so Kenzie goes to talk to her mom about what's going on, and her mom reveals that they have to move in order for her mom's business to grow further. Kenzie starts to panic and gets her mom to promise that if after the first month she doesn't like it, she can move back in time for graduation. Kenzie goes up to her room, and after noticing a mover, Blake, is in her room, she decides to flirt with him. Blake compliments her, but, after seeing him touch her, her decides to leave abruptly. When she realizes he's gone, she follows him to ask if he knows where the new house is, but he leaves without answering because he seems completely uninterested in her. She leaves and decides she'll figure out where on her own before tomorrow.

text: Misused pronouns

refinement: It was a beautiful, sunny day. The three girls, Kenzie, Lucy, and Rebecca are walking home after school when they notice a moving truck in front of Kenzie's house. They go inside to find that the house is nearly empty, and so Kenzie goes to talk to her mom about what's going on, and her mom reveals that they have to move in order for her mom's business to grow further. Kenzie starts to panic and gets her mom to promise that if after the first month she doesn't like it, she can move back in time for graduation. Kenzie goes up to her room, and after noticing a mover, Blake, is in her room, she decides to flirt with him. Blake compliments her, but, after she touches him, he decides to leave abruptly. When she realizes he's gone, she follows him to ask if he knows where the new house is, but he leaves without answering because he seems completely uninterested in her. She leaves and decides she'll figure out where on her own before tomorrow.

text: The last two sentences don't happen in the text

refinement: It was a beautiful, sunny day. The three girls, Kenzie, Lucy, and Rebecca are walking home after school when they notice a moving truck in front of Kenzie's house. They go inside to find that the house is nearly empty, and so Kenzie goes to talk to her mom about what's going on, and her mom reveals that they have to move in order for her mom's business to grow further. Kenzie starts to panic and gets her mom to promise that if after the first month she doesn't like it, she can move back in time for graduation. Kenzie goes up to her room, and after noticing a mover, Blake, is in her room, she decides to flirt with him. Blake compliments her, but, after she touches him, he decides to leave abruptly.

text: Blake leaves after Kenzie notices his reflexes, which is when she touches him

refinement: It was a beautiful, sunny day. The three girls, Kenzie, Lucy, and Rebecca are walking home after school when they notice a moving truck in front of Kenzie's house. They go inside to find that the house is nearly empty, and so Kenzie goes to talk to her mom about what's going on, and her mom reveals that they have to move in order for her mom's business to grow further. Kenzie starts to panic and gets her mom to promise that if after the first month she doesn't like it, she can move back in time for graduation. Kenzie goes up to her room, and after noticing a mover, Blake, is in her room, she decides to flirt with him. Blake compliments her, but after his quick reflexes shock Kenzie, he leaves. She touches him to stop him, but he's burning hot.

text: It's too long; unnecessary details can be removed

refinement: Kenzie, Lucy, and Rebecca are walking home after school when they notice a moving truck in front of Kenzie's house, so Kenzie goes to talk to her mom about what's going on, and her mom reveals that they have to move in order for her mom's business to grow further. Kenzie starts to panic and gets her mom to promise that if after the first month she doesn't like it, she can move back in time for graduation. Kenzie goes up to her room, and Blake, a mover, compliments her, but after his quick reflexes shock Kenzie, he leaves.

answer: Kenzie becomes head cheerleader however her mother, Darcie, moves them to a new house and high school after only 4 months of the move, upsetting Kenzie.

text: 'Darcie' is never given as the mom's name

refinement: Kenzie becomes head cheerleader however her mother moves them to a new house and high school after only 4 months of the move, upsetting Kenzie.

text: There is no mention of having moved 4 months ago

refinement: Kenzie becomes head cheerleader however her mother moves them to a new house and high school, upsetting Kenzie.

text: Punctuation

refinement: Kenzie becomes head cheerleader, however her mother moves them to a new house and high school, upsetting Kenzie.

text: Too short; plot points about the deal and the mover should be added

refinement: Kenzie becomes head cheerleader, however her mother moves them to a new house and high school, upsetting Kenzie. Kenzie makes a deal with her mom that if she doesn't like the new place within a month, she can move back from graduation. In her room upstairs, Kenzie meets a mover, Blake, and flirts with him until he shocks her with his reflexes and leaves.

answer: Kenzie's mom says that they are moving, and Kenzie likes it until she finds out that they are not going until right before prom. The friends convince her to give the new place a try, and she finds herself attracted to the moving musher. When Blake breaks a bet, she tries very attractively at first but over loads, he then uncontrollably hits her arm pushing her away.

text: Much of this does not happen in the text; Kenzie doesn't like it at all

refinement: Kenzie's mom says that they are moving, and Kenzie doesn't like it. The friends convince her to give the new place a try, and she finds herself attracted to the moving musher. When Blake breaks a bet, she tries very attractively at first but over loads, he then uncontrollably hits her arm pushing her away.

text: Her friends are not present in the scene

refinement: Kenzie's mom says that they are moving, and Kenzie doesn't like it. She finds herself attracted to the moving musher. When Blake breaks a bet, she tries very attractively at first but over loads, he then uncontrollably hits her arm pushing her away.

text: 'musher' is an odd word to use

refinement: Kenzie's mom says that they are moving, and Kenzie doesn't like it. She finds herself attracted to the moving guy, Blake. When Blake breaks a bet, she tries very attractively at first but over loads, he then uncontrollably hits her arm pushing her away.

text: Nothing in the last sentence is accurate

refinement: Kenzie's mom says that they are moving, and Kenzie doesn't like it. She finds herself attracted to the moving guy, Blake.

text: Mention why Kenzie is upset about the move

refinement: Kenzie's mom says that they are moving, and Kenzie doesn't like it because she doesn't want to leave her friends and her position as head cheerleader. She finds herself attracted to the moving guy, Blake.

text: Mention the deal between Kenzie and her mom

refinement: Kenzie's mom says that they are moving, and Kenzie doesn't like it because she doesn't want to leave her friends and her position as head cheerleader. They make a deal that if Kenzie likes the new place in a month, she has to stay, but if she doesn't, she can move back for graduation. She finds herself attracted to the moving guy, Blake.

answer: Kenzie is walking home with her friends from Thorn High, wondering why her mother is having a midlife crisis. She returns home to find her mother is moving, and Kenzie makes a deal with her to try to hold onto her old life. She is attracted to one of the movers, named Blake, but he rebuffs her.

answer: Kenzie, a student at the school with redhead and blonde friends, is shocked when her mother tells her a family move is happening sooner than originally planned. Friends Lucy and Rebecca celebrate with Kenzie, but when they enter her home they see that the movers are packing everything. Kenzie is told the only deal she can make for the move is to authenticate her mother's suspicions or else Kenzie will have to go without partying at her prom. In a moment, the hot mover catches her eyeliner, then angrily leaves for Kenzie's bedroom. Kenzie's friend Becky comes by reiterates her story and Kenzie finishes packing.

text: Kenzie's friends are not in the scene after she finds out about the move

refinement: Kenzie, a student at the school with redhead and blonde friends, is shocked when her mother tells her a family move is happening sooner than originally planned. Kenzie is told the only deal she can make for the move is to authenticate her mother's suspicions or else Kenzie will have to go without partying at her prom. In a moment, the hot mover catches her eyeliner, then angrily leaves for Kenzie's bedroom. Kenzie's friend Becky comes by reiterates her story and Kenzie finishes packing.

text: Clarify the deal with her mother: it's not about suspicions but expectations of happiness, and it's not about partying at prom but returning home

refinement: Kenzie, a student at the school with redhead and blonde friends, is shocked when her mother tells her a family move is happening sooner than originally planned. Kenzie is told the only deal she can make for the move is to prove she's unhappy at the new place after a month or else Kenzie will have to stay in the place and graduate there. In a moment, the hot mover catches her eyeliner, then angrily leaves for Kenzie's bedroom. Kenzie's friend Becky comes by reiterates her story and Kenzie finishes packing.

text: The last sentence doesn't happen/isn't relevant

refinement: Kenzie, a student at the school with redhead and blonde friends, is shocked when her mother tells her a family move is happening sooner than originally planned. Kenzie is told the only deal she can make for the move is to prove she's unhappy at the new place after a month or else Kenzie will have to stay in the place and graduate there. In a moment, the hot mover catches her eyeliner, then angrily leaves for Kenzie's bedroom.

text: Kenzie meets the mover in her room, which he angrily leaves

refinement: Kenzie, a student at the school with redhead and blonde friends, is shocked when her mother tells her a family move is happening sooner than originally planned. Kenzie is told the only deal she can make for the move is to prove she's unhappy at the new place after a month or else Kenzie will have to stay and graduate there. In Kenzie's bedroom, the hot mover catches her eyeliner, then angrily leaves.

text: Grammar (article)

refinement: Kenzie, a student at the school with redhead and blonde friends, is shocked when her mother tells her a family move is happening sooner than originally planned. Kenzie is told the only deal she can make for the move is to prove she's unhappy at the new place after a month or else Kenzie will have to stay and graduate there. In Kenzie's bedroom, a hot mover catches her eyeliner, then angrily leaves.

answer: Kenzie overcomes her mother's decision to move her to another country. When her house is invaded by movers on graduation day, she puts off packing her bags in order to convince her dad to let them stay for a while longer.

text: Kenzie doesn't overcome her mother's decision, she makes a deal to challenge it

refinement: Kenzie makes a deal to challenge her mother's decision to move her to another country. When her house is invaded by movers on graduation day, she puts off packing her bags in order to convince her dad to let them stay for a while longer.

text: The move isn't to another country, it's to another (unknown) town/city, possibly out of state

refinement: Kenzie makes a deal to challenge her mother's decision to move away. When her house is invaded by movers on graduation day, she puts off packing her bags in order to convince her dad to let them stay for a while longer.

text: Add the cause to replace the country detail

refinement: Kenzie makes a deal to challenge her mother's decision to move away for a fresh start with her business. When her house is invaded by movers on graduation day, she puts off packing her bags in order to convince her dad to let them stay for a while longer.

text: It's the start of the year, not graduation day

refinement: Kenzie makes a deal to challenge her mother's decision to move away for a fresh start with her business. When her house is invaded by movers, she puts off packing her bags in order to convince her dad to let them stay for a while longer.

text: Kenzie puts off packing her bags to flirt with the mover, not to convince her dad of anything

refinement: Kenzie makes a deal to challenge her mother's decision to move away for a fresh start with her business. When her house is invaded by movers, she puts off packing her bags in order to flirt with the mover in her room, Blake.