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Deliciously fragrant, vibrant & nutritious!

I love Thai food & after the blog interest in my Thai beef salad, I wanted to make a satisfying vegan version. I have added firm tofu slices, but these can be omitted if you are not a fan.

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WHY AT TOFU?

Tofu is made from soybean curds & is naturally gluten-free, low-calorie & cholestrol-free, making it a fantastic source of iron & protein-especially for vegans & vegetarians. This Thai salad will also appeal to those wanting to have a raw food diet, since it does not require cooking. (It also makes it very quick to whip up!).

I love this Thai salad as it combines flavours (zing from the lime, warmth from the ginger, fragrance from the fresh coriander & spring onion, with the comforting backdrop of creamy coconut milk) with lovely crunchy textures (crunchy vegetables, cashews) & vibrant colour.

It also makes use of your spiraliser! You can get a cheap pencil sharpener style spiraliser

[imgres]or desktop one with a lifetime guarantee on Amazon! If you do not have a spiraliser, you can use a peeler to make strip-like peelings instead.

Now who said salads were boring?!

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_Serves: 2 hungry people or 3 people as a main meal_

_Preparation time: 10-15 mins_

_Ingredients:_

_Salad:_

_2 medium carrots, spiralised_

_2 large courgettes, spiralised_

_120g beansprouts_

_1 1/2 large red peppers or 2 if medium, sliced into thin strips_

_4 spring onions, sliced diagonally, reserve some for decoration_

_Dressing:_

_2 plump garlic cloves, peeled & crushed_

_25g fresh root ginger, finely chopped_

_Juice from 1 lime_

_28g packet of fresh coriander, finely chopped_

_1 plump red chilli, finely chopped (seeds in if you want it hotter!)_

_120ml coconut milk_

_2 tsp honey or agave_

_2tbsp  Tamari or vegan soy sauce_

_60g raw cashews_

_Ground black pepper_

_To serve: some sliced spring onion & a sprinkling of ground flaxseeds_

_Optional: Firm tofu slices (ready to eat)_

Method: Make the salad.

In a large bowl mix together the spiralised carrot, courgettes with the beansprouts, sliced red pepper & most of the spring onion (reserving some back for a garnish).

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Make the dressing: In a small bowl mix together the crushed garlic, finely chopped root ginger, lime juice, finely chopped coriander, chopped red chilli, coconut milk, honey. Season with plenty of ground black pepper.

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Pour 3/4 of the dressing onto the salad mix, along with raw cashews & combine (reserve a little of the dressing to decorate). Plate up: put some of this dressed salad on each plate. I like to sprinkle a little ground flaxseed on top to add to the nutritive value.

Then if using: slice up tofu into slices. Arrange on top of the salad. Drizzle over with some of the dressing. Garnish with raw cashews & spring onion slices.

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Pretty as a picture!

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Delicious without the tofu too

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Great for packed lunches or as a dinner party starter too!

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Vegetarian Pad Thai

By adding buckwheat noodles to the Thai salad, you can make this dish also another favourite dish of mine: into Pad Thai! Garnish with a few toasted black sesame seeds (as shown in photo).

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Great for your lunch box too!

Great served with a wedge of lime!

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did the author add tofu to the recipe?

answer: They add tofu because it's a fantastic source of proteins & iron, specifically for the vegans & vegetarians.

text: I would remove the word "specifically" and replace it with "especially".

refinement: They add tofu because it's a fantastic source of proteins & iron, especially for the vegans & vegetarians.

text: There is a note about raw food diet that the response overlooked.

refinement: They add tofu because it's a fantastic source of proteins & iron, especially for the vegans & vegetarians. The recipe will also appeal to those who love raw diet.

text: I will remove "the" from the response.

refinement: They add tofu because it's a fantastic source of proteins & iron, especially for vegans & vegetarians. The recipe will also appeal to those who love raw diet.

answer: The author wanted to create a Thai beef salad that was vegan. Tofus is made from soybean curds and is naturally gluten free, making a it a fantastic source of iron and protein for vegans and vegetarians. This recipe can also appeal to those which have a raw food diet.

answer: The author adds tofu to the recipe because it is a good source of iron and protein, making it a fantastic option for vegetarians and vegans. Tofu also helps to add texture and color to the dish, making it both nutritious and satisfying.

text: The tofu inclusion was not intended for textures and color.

refinement: The author adds tofu to the recipe because it is a good source of iron and protein, making it a fantastic option for vegetarians and vegans.

answer: Because it is a health source, tastes good when combined with other ingredients, makes a vegan dish, and is cheap.

text: I would rewrite the phrase "health source".

refinement: Because it is a healthy source of iron and protein, tastes good when combined with other ingredients, makes a vegan dish, and is cheap.

text:
- While there is no doubt tofu tastes good when combined with other ingredients, this fact was not highlighted in the article.

- The fact that tofu is cheap is not discussed in the article.

refinement: Because it is a healthy source of iron and protein, low-calorie and cholesterol-free as well as makes a good vegan dish.

answer: The author added firm tofu so there would be more protein in the Thai salad.

text: There are more reasons why tofu was added.

refinement: The author added firm tofu so there would be more protein in the Thai salad. Another reason why the blogger added tofu was added was that it is a good source of protein and iron as well as low-calorie and cholesterol-free.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

List the ingredients of the salad.

answer:
Two medium carrots, spiralised; two large courgettes, spiralised; 120g beansprouts; 1 1/2 large red peppers or 2 if medium, sliced into thin strips; 4 spring onions, sliced diagonally, reserve some for decoration; dressing: 2 plump garlic cloves, peeled and crushed; 25g fresh root ginger, finely chopped; Juice from 1 lime; 28g packet of fresh coriander, finely chopped; 1 plump red chilli, finely chopped; 120ml coconut milk; 2 tsp honey or agave; 2 tbsp  tamari or vegan soy sauce; 60g raw cashews; ground black pepper

2 tsp honey or agave; 2 tbsp  tahri or vegan soy sauce; 60g raw cashews; ground black pepper

text: The last paragraph of the response made little sense.

refinement: Two medium carrots, spiralised; two large courgettes, spiralised; 120g beansprouts; 1 1/2 large red peppers or 2 if medium, sliced into thin strips; 4 spring onions, sliced diagonally, reserve some for decoration; dressing: 2 plump garlic cloves, peeled and crushed; 25g fresh root ginger, finely chopped; Juice from 1 lime; 28g packet of fresh coriander, finely chopped; 1 plump red chilli, finely chopped; 120ml coconut milk; 2 tsp honey or agave; 2 tbsp  tamari or vegan soy sauce; 60g raw cashews; ground black pepper

answer: Carrots, courgettes, beansprouts, red peppers, spring onions, garlic, ginger, lime juice, coriander, chilli, coconut milk, honey, cashews, ground black pepper. Firm tofu, if used.

answer: Carrots, courgettes, beansprouts, sliced red pepper, spring onions, and dressing.

text: There are a bit more ingredients than the ones listed.

refinement: Carrots, courgettes, beansprouts, sliced red pepper, spring onions, chili, coconut milk, honey, cashews, root ginger, and fresh coriander.

answer: The ingredients of the Thai salad include spiralised carrots and courgettes, beansprouts, sliced red peppers and spring onions, garlic, ginger, lime juice, fresh coriander, red chilli, coconut milk, honey or agave, and cashews. It may optionally also include firm tofu slices.

answer: Two carrots, two courgettes, 120 grams beansprouts, one and a half red peppers, four spring onions, two garlic cloves, 25 grams of ginger, one red chilli, coconut milk, fresh coriander, agave or honey, Tamari vegan soy sauce, cashews, and ground black pepper.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is spiralising in the recipe?

answer: The recipe calls for carrots and courgettes to be spiralised. Spiralising creates noodle-like shapes from vegetables.

answer: A spiraliser is a device similar to a pencil sharpener. Presumably it shaves vegetables into spirals. The carrots and courgettes are meant to be spiralised.

answer: Spiralising is the process of slicing vegetables into thin, noodle-like strips. In the recipe, this is accomplished by using a spiraliser to create thin strips of carrots and courgettes.

answer: Carrots

text: The response does not explain what spiralizing is.

refinement: Spiralizing is when vegetables like carrots or courgettes are cut into spiral, thin layers, like noodles. There is a piece of equipment called a spiralizer that is used for this.

answer: The recipe includes onions, carrots and courgettes spiralised for convenience.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the method of making the recipe.

answer: To make the Thai salad, first spiralize the carrots and courgettes and add these along with beansprouts, sliced red peppers and spring onions to a large bowl. Next, mix together a dressing of crushed garlic, ginger, lime juice, fresh coriander, red chili, coconut milk, and honey. Add 3/4 of the dressing to the salad and mix in the cashews. Lastly, if opting to add tofu, you can add sliced tofu to the salad and drizzle with remaining dressing.

answer: Mix together carrot, courgettes, beansprouts, red pepper and spring onion. Make the dressing from the crushed garlic, ginger, lime juice, chopped coriander, red chilli, coconut milk and honey. Season with ground pepper. Pour the dressing on the salad. Then put the tofu slices on top. Pour more dressing on the salad.

answer: The first step of the recipe is to make the dressing. The ingredients of the dressing are; 2 plump garlic cloves, 25g ginger, juice from 1 lime, packet of coriander, finely chopped, finely chopped chilis (seeds included if they want to make it hotter), coconut milk, 2 tsp honey or agave, 2tbsp Tamari or vegan soy sauce, and 60g cashews. After making the dressing, pour 3/4 of the dressing onto the salad mix along with the raw cashews. Plate up, sprinkle some ground flaxseed, and add the tofu slices if will be using it. Put some of the dressed salad on each plate.

text: The first step is not to make the salad.

refinement: The first step of the recipe is to prepare the salad. After that, the dressing needs to be made. The ingredients of the dressing are; 2 plump garlic cloves, 25g ginger, juice from 1 lime, packet of coriander, finely chopped, finely chopped chilis (seeds included if they want to make it hotter), coconut milk, 2 tsp honey or agave, 2tbsp Tamari or vegan soy sauce, and 60g cashews. After making the dressing, pour 3/4 of the dressing onto the salad mix along with the raw cashews. Plate up, sprinkle some ground flaxseed, and add the tofu slices if will be using it. Put some of the dressed salad on each plate.

answer: The recipe first creates an elaborate mango salad, then it shows how to mix the dressing and sprinkle it onto the salad, and then it shows how to add the tofu.

text: The response does not reflect what is in the article.

refinement: First, prepare the salad, spiralizing the carrots and courgettes. Add the bean sprouts, sliced red peppers and spring onions. Then make a dressing by mixing together crushed garlic with chopped root ginger, coriander, red chili, coconut milk and honey with a sprinkling of black pepper. Pur the dressing on the salad and add raw cashews and if you prefer, sliced tofu.

answer:
1. In a large bowl, mix together the spiralised carrot, courgettes with the beansprouts, sliced red pepper, and most of the spring onion.

2. Make the dressing by combining crushed garlic, finely chopped root ginger, lime juice, coriander, chopped red chilli, coconut milk, honey, and ground black pepper.

3. Pour 3/4 of the dressing onto the salad, along with raw cashews. Plate and top with slices of tofu, if using. Drizzle with remaining dressing and garnish with spring onion and cashews.


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JONAH PIʻIKOI (January, 1804 – April 26, 1859), also spelled IONA PIʻIKOI, was a Hawaiian high chief and served as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii.

Life

According to Piʻikoi himself, he was born in the month of _Ikuwā,_ around January 1804, at Waimea on the island of Kauaʻi. Piʻikoi's parents were Kawahinemakua and Kiko. He was a _kaukau aliʻi,_ of lower-ranking chiefly descent, but a relative of the Kings of Kauaʻi. His great-grandmother Kahalemanuolono was the sister of Kamakahelei, making Piʻikoi a distant cousin of King Kaumualiʻi of Kauaʻi. His Hawaiian name Piʻikoi translate as “lofty aspirations.”

Piʻikoi began public service as a tobacco lighter of King Kaumualiʻi and later King Kamehameha II. He accompanied Kamehameha II to Oʻahu in 1822, serving as his personal attendant. Returning to Kauaʻi after Kamehameha II's departure to Great Britain, Piʻikoi assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalaiʻa Luanuʻu in suppressing Humehume's rebellion in 1824.[1] Returning to Oʻahu, he served Kahalaiʻa until his death in 1826 and afterward became a servant of Kamehameha III. Piʻikoi became a _konohiki_ or land agent for Kamehameha III's lands on Oʻahu and gain much profit from managing the land. During the Great Māhele, he was given the duty of separating the King's land from that of the chiefs' He would later serve in the House of Nobles 1845–1859 and on the Privy Council 1852–1855.[2]

Piʻikoi died at his Fort street residence in Honolulu, on April 26, 1859. He was in his fifties and his cause of death was described as aneurysm of the aorta.[3][4] Before his death, he wrote an autobiography _Sketch of J. Piikoi's Life_ which was published by the _Pacific Commercial Advertiser_ on May 12, 1859.[5] His funeral was dated to May 16 and buried in a family tomb near his country residence on the plains of Kewalo.[6][7]

Piʻikoi Street in Honolulu is named after either him or his son. He once owned a large section of around the area where, the land between Waikiki and Honolulu, called the Kewalo area. Piʻikoi built the first two-story wooden house in Kewalo, which is now near the President William McKinley High School.

Marriage and children

Piʻikoi's first wife was Kekahili, daughter of Kamokuiki, and half-sister of High Chief Kapaʻakea. With Kekahili, he had High Chief David Kahalepouli Piʻikoi, the father of David Kawānanakoa, Edward Abnel Keliʻiahonui, and Jonah Kūhiō Kalanianaʻole, who shared his grandfather's Christian name.

His second wife Kamakeʻe (died 1871) was the daughter of Ihu and Keʻekapu.[8] They had two daughters: Lydia (Lilia) Piʻikoi (died 1900) and Maria (Maraea) Piʻikoi (1848–1874). Lydia married three times, to William S. Wond, John Ena and Samuel K. Kamakaia, and her only son was William Piʻikoi Wond (1864–1887), a member of the Royal Hawaiian Band.[9] Lydia's obituary in 1900 called her a daughter of Kekahili instead.[10][11] Maria was married to Thomas Jefferson Cummins, half-brother of John Adams Cummins, and had three daughters: Lydia Kekaulike Cummins, Elizabeth Kamakeʻe Cummins, and Maria Maiopili Cummins. After Piʻikoi's death, his widow Kamakeʻe remarried to W. P. Kamakau.[12]

An unnamed daughter died in the 1848 measles epidemic.

Family tree

[Grandsons of Jonah Piʻikoi at San Mateo. Left to right: Kalanianaʻole, Kawānanakoa and Keliʻiahonui]

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title: Jonah Piʻikoi

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Pi'ikoi's public service career.

answer: Pi'ikoi was a high chief and served as an attendant to King Kamehameha II. He assisted the Governor of Kauai in suppressing Humehume's rebellion and then became a land agent for Kamehameha III. During the Great Mahele, Pi'ikoi had the duty of separating the King's land from the chiefs'. He served as a member of the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council. Pi'ikoi died in 1859 at age fifty from an aneurysm.

text: This information is irrelevant to Pi'ikoi's public service career and should be omitted.

refinement: Pi'ikoi was a high chief and served as an attendant to King Kamehameha II. He assisted the Governor of Kauai in suppressing Humehume's rebellion and then became a land agent for Kamehameha III. During the Great Mahele, Pi'ikoi had the duty of separating the King's land from the chiefs'. He served as a member of the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi started out public service by being a tobacco lighter of two separate kings.

refinement: Pi'ikoi started out public service by being a tobacco lighter of two separate kings.  He was a high chief and served as an attendant to King Kamehameha II. He assisted the Governor of Kauai in suppressing Humehume's rebellion and then became a land agent for Kamehameha III. During the Great Mahele, Pi'ikoi had the duty of separating the King's land from the chiefs'. He served as a member of the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council.

answer: He began to serve Kaumuali'i and later Kameamea II. He accompanied Kamehameha II to O'ahu in 1822, serving as his personal attendant. After the coronation of Kamehameha III, Pi'ikoi became a land agent for land holdings of Kamehameha III. He served in the House of Nobles 1845 - 1859 and in the Privy Council 1852 - 1855.

text: This is spelled incorrectly.

refinement: He began to serve Kaumuali'i and later Kamehameha II. He accompanied Kamehameha II to O'ahu in 1822, serving as his personal attendant. After the coronation of Kamehameha III, Pi'ikoi became a land agent for land holdings of Kamehameha III. He served in the House of Nobles 1845 - 1859 and in the Privy Council 1852 - 1855.

text: It should be specified that Kaumaili'i and Kamehameha II are kings.

refinement: He began to serve King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II. He accompanied Kamehameha II to O'ahu in 1822, serving as his personal attendant. After the coronation of Kamehameha III, Pi'ikoi became a land agent for land holdings of Kamehameha III. He served in the House of Nobles 1845 - 1859 and in the Privy Council 1852 - 1855.

text: It should be specified that Pi'ikoi started out as a tobacco lighter for King Kaumuali'i an dKing Kamehameha.

refinement: He began public service by serving King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II as their tobacco lighters. He accompanied Kamehameha II to O'ahu in 1822, serving as his personal attendant. After the coronation of Kamehameha III, Pi'ikoi became a land agent for land holdings of Kamehameha III. He served in the House of Nobles 1845 - 1859 and in the Privy Council 1852 - 1855.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalaiʻa Luanuʻu in suppressing Humehume's rebellion in 1824

refinement: He began public service by serving King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II as their tobacco lighters. He accompanied Kamehameha II to O'ahu in 1822, serving as his personal attendant. He later the newly appointed Governor Kahalaiʻa Luanuʻu in suppressing Humehume's rebellion in 1824. After the coronation of Kamehameha III, Pi'ikoi became a land agent for land holdings of Kamehameha III. He served in the House of Nobles 1845 - 1859 and in the Privy Council 1852 - 1855.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi was a high chief.

refinement: Pi'ikoi, a high chief, began public service by serving King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II as their tobacco lighters. He accompanied Kamehameha II to O'ahu in 1822, serving as his personal attendant. He later the newly appointed Governor Kahalaiʻa Luanuʻu in suppressing Humehume's rebellion in 1824. After the coronation of Kamehameha III, Pi'ikoi became a land agent for land holdings of Kamehameha III. He served in the House of Nobles 1845 - 1859 and in the Privy Council 1852 - 1855.

answer: Pi'ikoi began public service as a tobacco lighter of King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II. He accompanied Kamehameha II to O'ahu, where he served as the king's personal attendant. Returning to Kaua'i, he later served Kahalai'a Luanu'u and Kamehameha III. Pi'ikoi became a konohiki or land agent for Kamehameha III's lands on O'ahu and played an important role in the Great Mahele. Later, he served in the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council. Pi'ikoi died at his Fort street residence at age fifty-five and left behind a legacy in public service.

text: This is redundant, but it's inaccurate because it suggests he served for these kings after becoming a personal attendant. It should be omitted.

refinement: Pi'ikoi began public service as a tobacco lighter of King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II. He accompanied Kamehameha II to O'ahu, where he served as the king's personal attendant. Pi'ikoi became a konohiki or land agent for Kamehameha III's lands on O'ahu and played an important role in the Great Mahele. Later, he served in the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council. Pi'ikoi died at his Fort street residence at age fifty-five and left behind a legacy in public service.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalaiʻa Luanuʻu in suppressing Humehume's rebellion in 1824

refinement: Pi'ikoi began public service as a tobacco lighter of King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II. He accompanied Kamehameha II to O'ahu, where he served as the king's personal attendant. He alsoassisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalaiʻa Luanuʻu in suppressing Humehume's rebellion in 1824. Pi'ikoi became a konohiki or land agent for Kamehameha III's lands on O'ahu and played an important role in the Great Mahele. Later, he served in the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council. Pi'ikoi died at his Fort street residence at age fifty-five and left behind a legacy in public service.

text: This is irrelevant to the topic of Pi'ikoi's public service career and should be omitted.

refinement: Pi'ikoi began public service as a tobacco lighter of King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II. He accompanied Kamehameha II to O'ahu, where he served as the king's personal attendant. He also assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalaiʻa Luanuʻu in suppressing Humehume's rebellion in 1824. Pi'ikoi became a konohiki or land agent for Kamehameha III's lands on O'ahu and played an important role in the Great Mahele. Later, he served in the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi was a high chief.

refinement: Pi'ikoi, a high chief, began public service as a tobacco lighter of King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II. He accompanied Kamehameha II to O'ahu, where he served as the king's personal attendant. He also assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalaiʻa Luanuʻu in suppressing Humehume's rebellion in 1824. Pi'ikoi became a konohiki or land agent for Kamehameha III's lands on O'ahu and played an important role in the Great Mahele. Later, he served in the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council.

answer: He served King Kaumuali'i and King Kamehameha II as a tobacco lighter. After supporting Kamehameha II in O'ahu, he suppressed Humehume's rebellion in 1824. He settled on O'ahu and took up the job of land agent for Kamehameha III. He served as a high chief.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi became Kamehameha's personal attendant.

refinement: He served King Kaumuali'i and King Kamehameha II as a tobacco lighter. After supporting Kamehameha II in O'ahu as his personal attendant, he suppressed Humehume's rebellion in 1824. He settled on O'ahu and took up the job of land agent for Kamehameha III. He served as a high chief.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalaiʻa Luanuʻu during the rebellion.

refinement: He served King Kaumuali'i and King Kamehameha II as a tobacco lighter. After supporting Kamehameha II in O'ahu as his personal attendant, he assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalaiʻa Luanuʻu in Humehume's rebellion in 1824. He settled on O'ahu and took up the job of land agent for Kamehameha III. He served as a high chief.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi played a role during the Great Mahele.

refinement: He served King Kaumuali'i and King Kamehameha II as a tobacco lighter. After supporting Kamehameha II in O'ahu as his personal attendant, he assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalaiʻa Luanuʻu in Humehume's rebellion in 1824. He settled on O'ahu and took up the job of land agent for Kamehameha III, and ended up playing a role in the Great Mahele. He served as a high chief.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi served in the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council.

refinement: He served King Kaumuali'i and King Kamehameha II as a tobacco lighter. After supporting Kamehameha II in O'ahu as his personal attendant, he assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalaiʻa Luanuʻu in Humehume's rebellion in 1824. He settled on O'ahu and took up the job of land agent for Kamehameha III, and ended up playing a role in the Great Mahele. Pi'ikoi served in the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council. He served as a high chief.

answer: Pi'ikoi began his public service career as a tobacco lighter of King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II. He became King Kamehameha II's personal attendant when he was 18 years old. Pi'ikoi assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalai'a Luanu'u in suppressing the Humehume's rebellion in 1824. After that Pi-ikoi became a successful land agent for Kamehameha III's lands on O'ahu. Later he was given the duty of separating the King's land from that of the chiefs' and serve in the House of Nobles and the Privy Council.

text: This should be past tense.

refinement: Pi'ikoi began his public service career as a tobacco lighter of King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II. He became King Kamehameha II's personal attendant when he was 18 years old. Pi'ikoi assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalai'a Luanu'u in suppressing the Humehume's rebellion in 1824. After that Pi-ikoi became a successful land agent for Kamehameha III's lands on O'ahu. Later he was given the duty of separating the King's land from that of the chiefs' and served in the House of Nobles and the Privy Council.

text: There is no mention of the Great Mahele

refinement: Pi'ikoi began his public service career as a tobacco lighter of King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II. He became King Kamehameha II's personal attendant when he was 18 years old. Pi'ikoi assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalai'a Luanu'u in suppressing the Humehume's rebellion in 1824. After that Pi-ikoi became a land agent for Kamehameha III's lands on O'ahu. Later he was given the duty of separating the King's land from that of the chiefs' during the Great Mahele and served in the House of Nobles and the Privy Council.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi was a high chief.

refinement: Pi'ikoi, a high chief, began his public service career as a tobacco lighter of King Kaumuali'i and later King Kamehameha II. He became King Kamehameha II's personal attendant when he was 18 years old. Pi'ikoi assisted the newly appointed Governor Kahalai'a Luanu'u in suppressing the Humehume's rebellion in 1824. After that Pi-ikoi became a land agent for Kamehameha III's lands on O'ahu. Later he was given the duty of separating the King's land from that of the chiefs' during the Great Mahele and served in the House of Nobles and the Privy Council.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Pi'ikoi's legacy.

answer: Piʻikoi was a Hawaiian high chief and statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. He served as a servant to Kamehameha III and gained much profit managing the King's lands. Piʻikoi also served in the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council. He died in 1859 at the age of fifty. One legacy of Piʻikoi was his service to Hawaii during his lifetime.

text: It would be better to combine these sentences to show how Pi'ikoi served Hawaii. Being that Pi'ikoi is already being labeled as a statesman, writing out that he served in the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council isn't really necessary.

refinement: He served as a servant to Kamehameha III and gained much profit managing the King's lands. He died in 1859 at the age of fifty. One legacy of Piʻikoi was his service to Hawaii during his lifetime, which included his time as a a Hawaiian high chief and statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii.

text: This is irrelevant to the matter of legacy and should be omitted.

refinement: He served as a servant to Kamehameha III and gained much profit managing the King's lands. One legacy of Piʻikoi was his service to Hawaii during his lifetime, which included his time as a a Hawaiian high chief and statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii.

text: Specify that the Pi'ikoi was a land agent.

refinement: One legacy of Pi'ikoi's is that he served as a servant to Kamehameha III and gained much profit managing the King's lands when he became a land agent.  Another was his service to Hawaii during his lifetime, which included his time as a a Hawaiian high chief and statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi played a role in the Great Malehe.

refinement: One legacy of Pi'ikoi's is that he served as a servant to Kamehameha III and gained much profit managing the King's lands, which later allowed him to have a role in the Great Malehe. Another was his service to Hawaii during his lifetime, which included his time as a a Hawaiian high chief and statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi Street in Honolulu is named after him or his son, a reflection of his legacy.

refinement: One legacy of Pi'ikoi's is that he served as a servant to Kamehameha III and gained much profit managing the King's lands, which later allowed him to have a role in the Great Malehe. Another was his service to Hawaii during his lifetime, which included his time as a a Hawaiian high chief and statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. Pi'ikoi Street in Honolulu is named after him or his son, a reflection of his legacy.

text: It's omitted that another part of Pi'ikoi's legacy is that he built the first two story wooden house in Kewalo.

refinement: One legacy of Pi'ikoi's is that he served as a servant to Kamehameha III and gained much profit managing the King's lands, which later allowed him to have a role in the Great Malehe. Piʻikoi also served in the House of Nobles and on the Privy Council. Another was his service to Hawaii during his lifetime, which included his time as a a Hawaiian high chief and statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. Also a part of his legacy was that he built the first two story wooden house. Pi'ikoi Street in Honolulu is named after him or his son, a reflection of his legacy.

answer: Pi'ikoi served as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. He was high chief of lower-ranking chiefly descent and a relative of the Kings of Kaua'i. He played an important role during the Great Māhele to divide the King's lands from those of the chiefs. He also served as a land agent for King Kamehameha III and gained profit by managing his lands. Pi'ikoi died at the age of fifty-years-old and his funeral was held on May 16 of 1859. His descendants include several notable figures, such as King David Kawānanakoa, Edward Abnel Keliʻiahonui, and Jonah Kūhiō Kalanianaʻole. Pi'ikoi is remembered for his legacy of service to Hawaii.

text: This sentence would be better suited as the first sentence, not the last.

refinement: Pi'ikoi is remembered for his legacy of service to Hawaii. He served as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. He was high chief of lower-ranking chiefly descent and a relative of the Kings of Kaua'i. He played an important role during the Great Māhele to divide the King's lands from those of the chiefs. He also served as a land agent for King Kamehameha III and gained profit by managing his lands. Pi'ikoi died at the age of fifty-years-old and his funeral was held on May 16 of 1859. His descendants include several notable figures, such as King David Kawānanakoa, Edward Abnel Keliʻiahonui, and Jonah Kūhiō Kalanianaʻole.

text: This should be omitted as it isn't relevant to Pi'ikoi's legacy.

refinement: Pi'ikoi is remembered for his legacy of service to Hawaii. He served as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. He was high chief of lower-ranking chiefly descent and a relative of the Kings of Kaua'i. He played an important role during the Great Māhele to divide the King's lands from those of the chiefs. He also served as a land agent for King Kamehameha III and gained profit by managing his lands. His descendants include several notable figures, such as King David Kawānanakoa, Edward Abnel Keliʻiahonui, and Jonah Kūhiō Kalanianaʻole.

text: This isn't necessarily Pi'ikoi's legacy and should be omitted, particularly because David isn't said to be a king and Edward and Jonah were his grandsons and weren't notable .

refinement: Pi'ikoi is remembered for his legacy of service to Hawaii. He served as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. He was high chief of lower-ranking chiefly descent and a relative of the Kings of Kaua'i. He played an important role during the Great Māhele to divide the King's lands from those of the chiefs. He also served as a land agent for King Kamehameha III and gained profit by managing his lands. .

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi street in Honolulu is named after him or his son, a reflection of his legacy.

refinement: Pi'ikoi is remembered for his legacy of service to Hawaii. He served as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. He was high chief of lower-ranking chiefly descent and a relative of the Kings of Kaua'i. He played an important role during the Great Māhele to divide the King's lands from those of the chiefs. He also served as a land agent for King Kamehameha III and gained profit by managing his lands. Pi'ikoi street in Honolulu is named after him or his son, a reflection of his legacy.

text: It's omitted that another part of his legacy is that he built the first two story wooden house in Kewalo.

refinement: Pi'ikoi is remembered for his legacy of service to Hawaii. He served as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. He was high chief of lower-ranking chiefly descent and a relative of the Kings of Kaua'i. He played an important role during the Great Māhele to divide the King's lands from those of the chiefs. He also served as a land agent for King Kamehameha III and gained profit by managing his lands. Another part of his legacy is that he built the first two story wooden house in Kewalo.  Pi'ikoi street in Honolulu is named after him or his son, a reflection of his legacy.

answer: His children, David Kahalepouli Pi'ikoi, David Kawānanakoa, Edward Abnel Keliʻiahonui, and Jonah Kūhiō Kalanianaʻole, all share his grandfather's Christian name, Kahala. In Honolulu, Pi'ikoi Street is named after either him or his son.

text: The grandfather's Christian name was not Kahala.

refinement: His children, David Kahalepouli Pi'ikoi, David Kawānanakoa, Edward Abnel Keliʻiahonui, and Jonah Kūhiō Kalanianaʻole, all share his grandfather's Christian name. In Honolulu, Pi'ikoi Street is named after either him or his son.

text: This is false. Three out of the four names listed are Pi'ikoi's grandsons. They do not share the name Kahala.

refinement: In Honolulu, Pi'ikoi Street is named after either him or his son.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi is known for his legacy of public service as high chief and as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii.

refinement: Pi'ikoi is known for his legacy of public service as high chief and as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. In Honolulu, Pi'ikoi Street is named after either him or his son.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi gained a lot of profit as a land agent for King Kamahameha III, and even took a role in the Great Mahele.

refinement: Pi'ikoi is known for his legacy of public service as high chief and as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. Pi'ikoi gained a lot of profit as a land agent for King Kamahameha III, and even took a role in the Great Mahele.  In Honolulu, Pi'ikoi Street is named after either him or his son.

text: It's omitted that another part of his legacy is that he built the first wooden two story house in Kewalo.

refinement: Pi'ikoi is known for his legacy of public service as high chief and as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. Pi'ikoi gained a lot of profit as a land agent for King Kamahameha III, and even took a role in the Great Mahele. Another part of his legacy is that he built the first wooden two story house in Kewalo. In Honolulu, Pi'ikoi Street is named after either him or his son.

answer: Pi'ikoi wrote an autobiography 'Sketch of J Piikoi's Life', it was published in the year of his death. He was buried in a family tomb near his country residence on the plains of Kewalo, where he owned a large section of land between Waikiki and Honululu. Pi'ikoi Street in Honolulu might have been named after him and he built the first two-story wooden house in Kewalo, close to the current President William McKinley High School.

text: This isn't necessarily Pi'ikoi's legacy and should be omitted.

refinement: Pi'ikoi wrote an autobiography 'Sketch of J Piikoi's Life', it was published in the year of his death.  Pi'ikoi Street in Honolulu might have been named after him and he built the first two-story wooden house in Kewalo, close to the current President William McKinley High School.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi is known for his legacy of public service as high chief and as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii.

refinement: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi is known for his legacy of public service as high chief and as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. Pi'ikoi wrote an autobiography 'Sketch of J Piikoi's Life', it was published in the year of his death. Pi'ikoi Street in Honolulu might have been named after him and he built the first two-story wooden house in Kewalo, close to the current President William McKinley High School.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi gained a lot of profit as a land agent for King Kamahameha III, and even took a role in the Great Mahele.

refinement: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi is known for his legacy of public service as high chief and as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. It's omitted that Pi'ikoi gained a lot of profit as a land agent for King Kamahameha III, and even took a role in the Great Mahele. Pi'ikoi wrote an autobiography 'Sketch of J Piikoi's Life', it was published in the year of his death. Pi'ikoi Street in Honolulu might have been named after him and he built the first two-story wooden house in Kewalo, close to the current President William McKinley High School.

answer: Pi'ikoi was a descendant of high ranking chiefs. He served in several government positions and owned much land, including a large section where the land between Waikiki and Honolulu is located. The street Pi'ikoi is named after him.

text: This isn't necessarily a part of Pi'ikoi's legacy and should be omitted.

refinement: He served in several government positions and owned much land, including a large section where the land between Waikiki and Honolulu is located. The street Pi'ikoi is named after him.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi is known for his legacy of public service as high chief and as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii.

refinement: Pi'ikoi is known for his legacy of public service as high chief and as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. He served in several government positions and owned much land, including a large section where the land between Waikiki and Honolulu is located. The street Pi'ikoi is named after him.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi gained a lot of profit as a land agent for King Kamahameha III, and even took a role in the Great Mahele.

refinement: Pi'ikoi is known for his legacy of public service as high chief and as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. He served in several government positions and owned much land, including a large section where the land between Waikiki and Honolulu is located. Pi'ikoi gained a lot of profit as a land agent for King Kamahameha III, and even took a role in the Great Mahele. The street Pi'ikoi is named after him.

text: It's omitted that he built the first two-story wooden house in Kewalo.

refinement: Pi'ikoi is known for his legacy of public service as high chief and as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. He served in several government positions and owned much land, including a large section where the land between Waikiki and Honolulu is located. Pi'ikoi gained a lot of profit as a land agent for King Kamahameha III, and even took a role in the Great Mahele.  He also built the first two-story wooden house in Kewalo. The street Pi'ikoi is named after him.

text: Specify that Pi'ikoi street is in Honolulu.

refinement: Pi'ikoi is known for his legacy of public service as high chief and as a statesman during the Kingdom of Hawaii. He served in several government positions and owned much land, including a large section where the land between Waikiki and Honolulu is located. Pi'ikoi gained a lot of profit as a land agent for King Kamahameha III, and even took a role in the Great Mahele.  He also built the first two-story wooden house in Kewalo. The street Pi'ikoi in Honolulu is named after him.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Pi'ikoi's marriages and children.

answer: Pi'ikoi's first wife was Kekahili, she was the daughter of Kamokuiki and half-sister of High Chied Kapa'akea. They had three sons, one of them becoming High Chief. He also married Kamake'e who was the daughter of Ihu and Ke'ekapu. They had two daughters together, Lilia and Maraea. An unnamed daughter died in the 1848 measles epidemic.

text: Pi'ikoi only had one son.

refinement: Pi'ikoi's first wife was Kekahili, she was the daughter of Kamokuiki and half-sister of High Chied Kapa'akea. They had one son who became High Chief. He also married Kamake'e who was the daughter of Ihu and Ke'ekapu. They had two daughters together, Lilia and Maraea. An unnamed daughter died in the 1848 measles epidemic.

answer: He married his first wife Kekahili, daughter of Kamokuiki and had Chief David Kahalepouli Pi'ikoi. He remarried to Kamake'e and had two daughters: Rosalia and Maria.

text: Specify that David was a High Chief, not just a Chief.

refinement: He married his first wife Kekahili, daughter of Kamokuiki and had High Chief David Kahalepouli Pi'ikoi. He remarried to Kamake'e and had two daughters: Rosalia and Maria.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi had an unnamed daughter who died of measles in 1848.

refinement: He married his first wife Kekahili, daughter of Kamokuiki and had High Chief David Kahalepouli Pi'ikoi. He remarried to Kamake'e and had two daughters: Rosalia and Maria. He also had an unnamed daughter who died of measles in 1848.

text: The one daughter was Lydia not Rosalia

refinement: He married his first wife Kekahili, daughter of Kamokuiki and had High Chief David Kahalepouli Pi'ikoi. He remarried to Kamake'e and had two daughters: Lydia and Maria. He also had an unnamed daughter who died of measles in 1848.

answer: Piʻikoi's first wife was Kekahili, with whom he had one son, David Kahalepouli Piʻikoi. Piʻikoi's second wife was Kamakeʻe, with whom he had two daughters, Lydia and Maria. Lydia married three times and had one son, while Maria married Thomas Jefferson Cummins, and had three daughters. Piʻikoi also had an unnamed daughter who died from the 1848 measles epidemic.

answer: Piʻikoi was married first to Kekahili and they had one son, David Kahalepouli Piʻikoi. His second wife was Kamakeʻe, with whom he had two daughters: Lydia (Lilia) Piʻikoi and Maria (Maraea) Piʻikoi. Lydia was married three times and had one son, William Piʻikoi Wond. Maria married Thomas Jefferson Cummins and had three daughters. One of Piʻikoi's daughters died in the 1848 measles epidemic.

answer: Pi'ikoi's first wife was Kekahili, Cox, and had one child - High Chief David Kahalepouli Pi'ikoi, the father of David Kawānanakoa, Edward Abnel Keli'iahonui, and Jonah Kūhi'ō Kalaniana'ole. Pi'ikoi's second wife was Kamake'e, who had two daughters. He died in 1859.

text: Cox is not said anywhere in the text. This should be omitted.

refinement: Pi'ikoi's first wife was Kekahili, and had one child - High Chief David Kahalepouli Pi'ikoi, the father of David Kawānanakoa, Edward Abnel Keli'iahonui, and Jonah Kūhi'ō Kalaniana'ole. Pi'ikoi's second wife was Kamake'e, who had two daughters. He died in 1859.

text: The two daughters, Lydia and Maria, should be named.

refinement: Pi'ikoi's first wife was Kekahili, and had one child - High Chief David Kahalepouli Pi'ikoi, the father of David Kawānanakoa, Edward Abnel Keli'iahonui, and Jonah Kūhi'ō Kalaniana'ole. Pi'ikoi's second wife was Kamake'e, who had two daughters, Maria and Lydia. He died in 1859.

text: Pi'ikoi's death isn't relevant to the question and should be omitted.

refinement: Pi'ikoi's first wife was Kekahili, and had one child - High Chief David Kahalepouli Pi'ikoi, the father of David Kawānanakoa, Edward Abnel Keli'iahonui, and Jonah Kūhi'ō Kalaniana'ole. Pi'ikoi's second wife was Kamake'e, who had two daughters, Maria and Lydia.

text: This sentence is written in a way that makes it seem that Kamake'e's daughters could be from another relationship. It should be amended to make it clear that the two share them.

refinement: Pi'ikoi's first wife was Kekahili, and had one child - High Chief David Kahalepouli Pi'ikoi, the father of David Kawānanakoa, Edward Abnel Keli'iahonui, and Jonah Kūhi'ō Kalaniana'ole. Pi'ikoi's second wife was Kamake'e, and they had two daughters, Maria and Lydia.

text: It's omitted that Pi'ikoi had an unnamed daughter who died in the 1848 measles epidemic.

refinement: Pi'ikoi's first wife was Kekahili, and had one child - High Chief David Kahalepouli Pi'ikoi, the father of David Kawānanakoa, Edward Abnel Keli'iahonui, and Jonah Kūhi'ō Kalaniana'ole. Pi'ikoi's second wife was Kamake'e, and they had two daughters, Maria and Lydia. He also had unnamed daughter who died in the 1848 measles epidemic.


text: There was a tall man with a short hat sitting on top of a lamp post. A breeze blew by and the hat fell off, but the man continued to sit still, afraid that he would fall. He finally braced himself to look down at the landing place of his hat. The hat had pierced through the horn of a boar that snored below him. Furious about his now ruined hat, the man kicked his shoe towards the boar in an attempt to wake him. The shoe caught the breeze, landed in the boar’s yawning mouth and was quickly digested. A rumbling crept from the boar’s stomach (boars don’t react well to a specific type of rubber sole) and the beast kicked back his hoof in frustration, rattling the lamp post side to side. The tall man rattled about until his equilibrium was compromised, sending him towards the ugly pig. The man reached his lanky arms outward and grasped onto the boar’s wisp of a tail. Without a proper brace for his fall, he crushed down onto his right knee yelping with pain, but the boar continued to sleep. Curious, thought the man, but he took his hat and wobbled down the walk towards a local drug store. *I’ll take my usual* he demanded to the ethnic shop keep. Before the boy could grab the man a pack of Winstons and a stick of beef jerky the door hammered open. In walked the boar with sleep in his eyes. *Nice day* he snorted, grabbing a tin of antacids with three teeth and placing them on the counter. *Yes. Nice day*. Said the man, counting the floor tiles. *Why were you resting on top of that lamp post?* Asked the boar. *I’m a very tall man and benches rest too low to the ground*. He continued, rocking onto his socked foot, *Why didn’t you wake up when I dropped my hat, when you swallowed my shoe or when I pulled your tail*? The boar took a moment to wiggle his snout, *I take a lot of vicodin*.

title: A Tall Man in A Short Hat

question: What happens to the man's hat?

answer: The man's hat falls off and lands on the boar's horn, piercing it. The boar becomes angry and kicks back, rattling the lamp post, and the man falls onto his knee.

text: The second sentence is not necessary.

refinement: The man's hat falls off and lands on the boar's horn, piercing it.

answer: The hat falls off the man's head and lands on the boar's horn.

answer: It gets stuck in the boar's horn.

answer: A breeze blows it off and it gets punctured by the boar's horn

question: Why was the man resting on top of a lamp post?

answer: The man was resting on top of a lamp post because he was a very tall man and benches rest too low to the ground.

answer: He says that because he is so tall, benches are too low to the ground for him

answer: He is a very tall man and benches rest too low to the ground.

answer: The man was resting on top of the lamp post because benches were too low for him to sit comfortably. He was surprised that the boar did not wake up when he dropped his hat, swallowed his shoe, or pulled his tail, as the boar was taking a lot of medication.

text: The second sentence is not necessary.

refinement: The man was resting on top of the lamp post because benches were too low for him to sit comfortably.

question: What does the boar go to the shop to buy?

answer: Antacids.

answer: Antacids

answer: The boar goes to the shop to buy antacids.

answer: The boar goes to the shop to buy antacids.

question: What is the man's "usual" at the shop?

answer: He asks for a pack of Winstons and a stick of beef jerky.

answer: The man's "usual" is cigarettes and beef jerky.

answer: The man's "usual" is a pack of Winstons and a stick of beef jerky.

answer: A pack of Winstons and a stick of beef jerky

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: The tall man is sitting on top of a lamp post when his hat falls off. He is afraid of falling, but when he looks down, he sees that his hat has landed on the sleeping head of a boar. The boar wakes up and asks why the man was sitting on the lamp post, and the man explains that benches are too low for him. The boar is surprised that the man didn't wake up when he dropped his hat, swallowed his shoe, or pulled his tail. The boar explains that he takes a lot of vicodin, which explains why he slept through the man's movements.

text: The summary makes it seem as though the boar wakes up because of the man's hat. However, the boar doesn't wake up until after the man leaves to go to the drug store.

refinement: The tall man is sitting on top of a lamp post when his hat falls off. He is afraid of falling, but when he looks down, he sees that his hat has landed on the sleeping head of a boar. The man falls of the lamp post and onto the boar, and he leaves for the drugstore. The boar goes to the drugstore and asks why the man was sitting on the lamp post, and the man explains that benches are too low for him. The boar is surprised that the man didn't wake up when he dropped his hat, swallowed his shoe, or pulled his tail. The boar explains that he takes a lot of vicodin, which explains why he slept through the man's movements.

answer: A tall man in a short hat is sitting on top of a lamp post. A breeze blows by and the hat falls off, but the man continues to sit still, afraid that he would fall. He finally braced himself to look down at the landing place of his hat. The hat had pierced through the horn of a boar that snored below him. Furious about his now ruined hat, the man kicks his shoe towards the boar in an attempt to wake him. The shoe catches the breeze, lands in the boar's yawning mouth and is quickly digested. A rumbling crept from the boar's stomach (boars don't react well to a specific type of rubber sole) and the beast kicked back his hoof in frustration, rattling the lamp post side to side. The tall man rattled about until his equilibrium was compromised, sending him towards the ugly pig. The man reached his lanky arms outward and grasped onto the boar's wisp of a tail. Without a proper brace for his fall, he crushed down onto his right knee yelping with pain, but the boar continued to sleep. Curious, thought the man, but he took his hat and wobbled down the walk towards a local drug store. *I'll take my usual* he demanded to the ethnic shop keep. Before the boy could grab the man a pack of Winstons and a stick of beef jerky the door hammered open. In walked the boar with sleep in his eyes. *Nice day* he snorted, grabbing a tin of antacids with three teeth and placing them on the counter. *Yes. Nice day*. Said the man, counting the floor tiles. *Why were you resting on top of that lamp post?* Asked the boar. *I'm a very tall man and benches rest too low to the ground*. He continued, rocking onto his socked foot, *Why didn't you wake up when I dropped my hat, when you swallowed my shoe or when I pulled your tail*? The boar took a moment to wiggle his snout, *I take a lot of vicodin*.

text: The summary is actually a word for word copy of the original passage.

refinement: A tall man sits on a light post above a sleeping boar. He loses his hat, and angrily throws his shoe at the boar, but it doesn't wake up. The man falls over onto the boar. He picks up his hat and heads to the drugstore. The boar arrives soon after, and the boar says that it didn't wake up from the man's movements because it takes a lot of Vicodin.

answer: A tall man sits on top of a lamp post. A breeze blows by and his hat falls off, but he continues to sit still. He finally braces himself to look down at the landing place of his hat. The hat pierced through the horn of a boar that snored below him.

text: The summary should include that the man goes to the drugstore after falling, and also that the boar comes into the drugstore soon after.

refinement: A tall man sits on top of a lamp post. A breeze blows by and his hat falls off, but he continues to sit still. He finally braces himself to look down at the landing place of his hat. The hat pierced through the horn of a boar that snored below him. After retrieving the hat, he goes to a drugstore, and the boar follows him in soon after. The boar said he didn't wake up from all of the man's movements because he takes a lot of Vicodin.

answer: A tall man is resting on top of a lamp post when a breeze blows his hat off and it gets punctured on a boar's horn. The man tries to wake the boar but fails. He goes to a drug store, and the boar arrives shortly after him. He asks the boar why he didn't wake up, and the boar says he takes a lot of vicodin.


text:
It was in the dead of night when I was snatched from my home. I was lying asleep beside the ones I love, under the stars with the cool wind gently whistling past me. It all happened so suddenly, the grinding noises of a machine filled the air as I heard the muffled screams of my brothers and sisters being torn from their resting places. Before I could even attempt to make a run for safety, a large metal arm scooped me up and put me in a cramped room of some sort. It was completely dark, I could only experience the crushing weight of others like me above my head and hear the cries of younglings who couldn’t find their families.

After some period of time the ruckus settled down and we all awaited some development in our terrifying situation. Outside the walls of our confinement odd grunts and wicked guffaws could be heard. It was nothing I recognized, no species I had ever heard of. Anticipation built as everyone heard the odd noises and thundering steps advance towards us. To my dismay, the room began to move. Another sickening grunt ensued as the cell was lifted into the air and laid down with a thud. We then began to slide forward until we crashed into some sort of wall. I tried to figure out was was happening, but I was startled by a orchestra of cacophonous noises. Rattles, bangs, and growls of a different machine started rekindling the loud uncontrolled panic that the group had experienced before, and it was only heightened when the machine began to move us. Slow at first, but soon we we’re flying faster than any bird I had ever seen in the open sky.

It was two days before I experienced the comfort of sight again. We were all dumped together into a large shiny cage with a hole in the bottom. One by one we would fall through to who knew where. I slowly got closer and closer, all the while the increasing sounds of evil machines humming and that unknown language filled my head. I fell through defenseless as some black material pulled me forward at a constant rate. It was at this time when I learned the source of the groans. These odd sand colored creatures were picking at me, clipping off pieces of my body, and spraying me with a bitter, bright colored water. They paid no attention to the agony I suffered, they continued to work on me, providing no explanation as to what was happening. They just kept ripping at me and spraying me with that tainted water. I withstood as much as I could until finally my body could take no more, and all turned black.

I woke up later to the hum of the machine which moved with great speeds. I was once again in a room, smashed against fellow brethren, and none of them knew any more that what I did. We had all undergone the same brutal treatments, and we had all seen the sand colored creatures who inflicted our pain. We tried to figure out why, but none of us reached a consensus. It was decided to drop the topic because none of us were going to benefit from fretting over something we couldn’t control. I personally decided to rest, for I was feeling quite ill. It must have been the water they gave me I told myself, then I did my best to go to sleep.

It wasn’t long before I was once again flooded with bright light, and I was ready to  experience the hell of the creature’s machines and sickly water. To my surprise, this place was different, but just as odd. I was on some sort of display, surrounded by my own kind, and some other species that I had never seen before. Not like the sand colored creatures though, these creatures look just as scared and confused as I was. And when I observed my kind, I noticed that they all looked like they were dying, their outsides were beginning to turn brown, and as I checked my own body, I noticed it was doing the same. I felt awful, I know I wasn’t healthy, I could practically feel the life leeching out of me. I was craving pure water, luckily that one desire of mine was fulfilled. Every so often a spritz of water, almost like a early spring mist would rain down upon us. I deduced that it was enough to keep us alive until who knew what. The only thing that I knew was that my days left on this precious Earth were limited.

Sand colored people started examining us. They would come to our display, lift us from our resting places, look us over, and they would either take us away or they would place us back where we were before they had taken us. It was an odd sight, there were all shapes and sizes of these creatures; they seemed to travel in packs. There was a leader, sometimes two, and they were often followed by smaller replicas. On occasion I would see a solitary creature walk past looking sad, almost lonely. I needed to know what these things were and why they were treating us as they were.

I had been in the display for some time before I was finally taken. One of the lonely creatures had stopped by and picked me up along with one of my neighbors. We were violently tossed into a smaller enclosure that it was pushing around, full of other victims it had taken. For some time we were still in the giant room that held our display and we were being pushed around. Other things that I had never seen before were being stacked on top of us. It was torturous, the weight of these items crushed against my weak body, and I was more vulnerable than I had ever been. It was odd however, after a short period of time, we were taken from the enclosure and placed in some sort of sack. From there we went out to the world that I had not seen for so long. The sun kissed my aching outsides, and I once again saw the birds that I had missed oh so dearly.

That brings me to where I am now. After being taken back out to the world I had missed, I was quickly placed back into one of those machines that move so quickly. The time I was in the machine was much shorter than any I had spent before, and we were soon in an enclosure that only our captor seemed to live in. We were placed on a surface, and it began to experiment. The other one like me went first, I remember him quite fondly. I believe he was already dead, which was good for I witnessed him being dismembered by the sand colored creature and thrown into a round basin. He was mixed with others who had suffered the same fate. Some were small red creatures, others were little cylindrical orange creatures, but the most prominent species in the basin was that of my own. The green leaves laid in the basin dead and in pieces. Next he was covered in some sort of thick, foreign liquid. After dousing those poor creatures in the liquid, he stabbed them all with a four tonged weapon of some sort and ate them, right in front of me. The creature seemed to be repeating a noise that sounded like salad, I have no clue what that is. The only thing that I know is that these will be my last words, I hope someday, someone will find this and uncover the mystery of the sand colored creatures who murdered me and all I loved.

title: Lettuce Pray for a New Tomorrow

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What reason(s) behind the kidnapping of the narrator?

answer: Their planet is rumored to be the home of what may be the last soil anyone has seen in more than two centuries.

text: The answer given is inaccurate and lacks clarity. The model's response should be relevant to the question and must come from the story.

refinement: At first, the narrator was unaware of why the sand-colored creatures captured it and the rest of its family. However, it soon discovered that the creatures kidnapped them to eat them. Their abduction was to replenish an unknown need or want.

answer: The author's assumption is that the sand-colored creatures kidnapped the narrator and others in order to do experiments on them. The narrator witnesses one of the creatures eating another creature and stabbing it with a weapon.

text: The answer mentions the author's assumption, which is inaccurate since the author is the writer of the story who knows the beginning and end of every story told. The model should rewrite the answer for better clarity.

refinement: The narrator thinks the sand-colored creatures kidnapped them to perform experiments on them. However, the narrator witnesses one of the creatures eating another species and stabbing it with a four-pronged weapon. The narrator then realizes the creatures kidnapped them to eat them.

answer: The sand colored creatures kidnapped the narrator and other victims to eat them. They likely abducted them to replenish an unknown need or want.

answer: The narrator was kidnapped from his home at midnight. He was sleeping alongside his family when taken. A large robot scooped him up from his sleeping place and carried him off with other people amidst cries for help. The narrator was kept in a shiny cage and some unknown creatures clipped pieces of his body while spraying him with some colored water. He and some other humans were transported to another enclosure where he witness his cellmates being dismembered and eaten.

text: The response answers the "how" and not the "why." The model needs to be more precise and straightforward in answering the question related to the story.

refinement: Initially, the narrator was unaware of why the sand-colored creatures captured it and the rest of its family. However, it soon discovered that the creatures kidnapped them to eat them. Their abduction was to replenish an unknown need or want.

answer: The narrator does not know why, but the chest and legs of which it was was sawn and gutted before fried as it was eaten. The narrator is trying to uncover the mystery of the sand colored creatures who murdered to reveal why they are killed and eaten.

text: The response lacks clarity and proper sentence structure. The model needs to rewrite this answer for better understanding.

refinement: Initially, the narrator was unaware of why the sand-colored creatures captured it and the rest of its family. However, it soon discovered that the creatures kidnapped them to eat them. Their abduction was to replenish an unknown need or want.


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JACOBS CREEK is a stream in northeast St. Francois County in the U.S. state of Missouri.[1] It is a tributary of Hazel Run.

The stream headwaters arise along the south side of a mountain bearing the French Village fire lookout tower at an elevation of about 940 feet. The community of French Village is about two miles to the east on Missouri Route Y. The stream flows to the southwest for about three miles to its confluence with Hazel Run just northwest of the community of Hazel Run at an elevation of 738 feet.[2][3]

The source area is at and the confluence is at .[4]

Jacobs Creek has the name of Jacob Mostiller, the original owner of the site.[5]

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[2] _French Village, Missouri,_ 7.5 Minute Topographic Quadrangle, USGS, 1964

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title: Jacobs Creek (Missouri)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is Jacobs Creek?

answer: A stream in northeast St. Francois County, Missouri, US.

answer: Jacobs Creek is a stream in north-eastern St. Francois County in the U.S. state of Missouri. It is a tributary of Hazel Run.

answer: It's a stream.

text: This should specify where the stream is located.

refinement: It's a stream in northeast St. Francois County in the U.S. state of Missouri. .

answer: Jacobs Creek is a tributary of Hazel Run located in northeast St. Francois County, Missouri. It originates from a mountain and flows southwestwards for about three miles before joining with Hazel Run.

answer: Jacobs Creek is a stream in the United States in Missouri.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where is it located?

answer: Jacobs Creek is located in northeast St. Francois County in Missouri.

answer: St. Francois County in the U.S. state of Missouri

answer: northeast St. Francois County in the U S state of Missouri.

answer: In St Francois County in the US state of Missouri.

answer: JACOBS CREEK is a stream located in northeast St. Francois County in the U.S. state of Missouri.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the local town called?

answer: The local town is called French Village, Missouri.

answer: That information can't be found.

text: The information can be found. It's the French Village.

answer: The local town is French Village.

answer: The French Village.

answer: French Village

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is it named after?

answer: Jacobs Creek is named after Jacob Mostiller.

answer: Jacob Mostiller, the original owner of the site.

answer: Jacob Mostiller, the original owner of the site.

answer: Jacobs Creek is named after Jacob Mostiller.

answer: Jacob Mostiller, the original owner.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Jacobs Creek is a stream in St. Francois County, Missouri in the United States. It originates on the south mountain side of the French Village fire lookout tower and flows for three miles down to a watery junction with Hazel Run just north of the community of Hazel Run.

text: "South mountain side" should be "south side of a mountain".

refinement: Jacobs Creek is a stream in St. Francois County, Missouri in the United States. It originates on the south side of a mountain of the French Village fire lookout tower and flows for three miles down to a watery junction with Hazel Run just north of the community of Hazel Run.

text: Replace "of" in "of the French Village" to "bearing".

refinement: Jacobs Creek is a stream in St. Francois County, Missouri in the United States. It originates on the south side of a mountain bearing the French Village fire lookout tower and flows for three miles down to a watery junction with Hazel Run just north of the community of Hazel Run.

answer: Jacobs Creek is located in St Francois County in French Village, Missouri. It is named after the owner of the original site, Jacob Mostiller.

text: It doesn't say that the creek runs in French Village, but that it is about two miles away from it. It's better to omit this.

refinement: Jacobs Creek is located in St Francois County in Missouri. It is named after the owner of the original site, Jacob Mostiller.

answer: Jacobs Creek is a tributary of Hazel Run in Missouri. It is a popular spot for fishing, swimming, and other water sports.

text: "It is a popular spot for fishing, swimming, and other water sports," is false. This isn't mentioned in the article. Replace this by mentioning that it was named after Jacob Mostiller.

refinement: Jacobs Creek is a tributary of Hazel Run in Missouri. It was named after Jacob Mostiller, the original owner of the site.

text: It's omitted that Jacobs Creek is in St. Francois county.

refinement: Jacobs Creek is a tributary of Hazel Run in St. Francois county, Missouri. It was named after Jacob Mostiller, the original owner of the site.

answer: Jacobs Creek is a stream in northeast St. Francois County, Missouri. It rises on a mountain and flows southwestward for about three miles to its confluence with Hazel Run. The stream was named for Jacob Mostiller.

text: This is three sentences instead of two. The final sentence could be omitted.

refinement: Jacobs Creek is a stream in northeast St. Francois County, Missouri. It rises on a mountain and flows southwestward for about three miles to its confluence with Hazel Run.

answer: Jacobs Creek is a stream in St. Francois County, Missouri. It flows southwest for about three miles before joining Hazel Run near Hazel Run. The source of the creek is at 940 feet elevation and the confluence is at 738 feet. The creek is named for Jacob Mostiller.

text: This is four sentences instead of the requested two. It would be best to remove the final two.

refinement: Jacobs Creek is a stream in St. Francois County, Missouri. It flows southwest for about three miles before joining Hazel Run near Hazel Run.