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It has taken more than 3 decades for 3D printing technology to rise from its slumber, ever since Chuck Hall, in 1983, invented this simple and unconventional way of making objects. Yes, it may come as a shock to many that the “latest” craze in tech circles, 3D printing aka additive manufacturing (AM) is more than 30 years old technology.

In the last 5 years, the IoT (Internet of things) movement has led to a great awareness of this intriguing field which is poised to disrupt the future. Let’s explore the fascinating possibilities of what 3D printing can do and affect our mainstream life as we look at the road ahead.

In a recent PwC survey of more than 100 industrial manufacturers, two-thirds of them were already using 3D printing.

This number is bound to rise with companies like HP, Boeing and GE leading from the front.

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MEDICAL – BODY PARTS

3D printing of precise custom fit artificial prosthesis is a well established concept over the last decade and has been used in orthopedic, craniofacial and dental field. Currently, great progress has been made in making actual body parts and scaffolds (into which stem cells can grow).

3D printed kidneys, liver cells, blood vessels, skin and bone structure would find applications in actual surgery use and we will see patients walking with live body parts that are custom manufactured for them.

3D printed cadavers will make medical education easy and remove ethico-legal issues of procuring study material in anatomy. Drugs would be tested on 3D printed live tissues and eliminate the ongoing ethical debate over animals being used for testing of medicines.

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_(Publicly available Deloitte report on Industry where 3D printing technology is used – October 2014)_

AEROSPACE

GE, Boeing and BMW are already using 3D printed parts which have brought down production costs, are lighter in weight and have better fuel efficiency.

Future space expeditions would allow astronauts to carry 3D printers on space shuttles that would enable quick printing of any part that needs to be repaired on the shuttle itself instead of carrying along a huge repository of spare parts.

Lunar mining, a hypothetical idea may enable us to send large 3D printers in space which would harness the lunar soil as raw material and actually form terra for human colonization for the future.

FOOD

NASA is working on an idea to prepare food on board with the help of 3D printers to feed astronauts and offer them a more robust choice on the long voyages.

There is already a lot of competition in 3D printed chocolates and recently Hershey has announced a partnership with 3D systems to create unique custom made confectioneries.  Bio fabrication is the concept of replicating animal cells to, in essence, 'build' edible meat. Currently PETA (People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals) is very much on board with the idea.

It has sponsored a contest to award $1 million to the first scientist to produce and bring to market in-vitro chicken meat.

3D PRINTED HOUSES

China has already created the world largest 3D printed villa and multi storied apartment – which was 3D printed in quick time. This opens up possibilities of on-site construction of low income, mass scale housing for the developing nations.

3D PRINTED ELECTRONICS

Integrating grapheme with plastics and custom manufacturing would lead to new generation of integrated circuits and conductors and ushering in a new generation of customized Nano-electronics.

3D PRINTED DRONES

When two leading technologies combine, the results are astonishing. Southampton university has developed a drone – UAV – unmanned aerial vehicle, that can travel at 9 miles an hour and can be assembled in 10 minutes and remain in air for 30 minutes. It is light weight, strong and can be printed out in a few days. It has large scale applications for deliveries and aerial surveillance in rescue operations, natural calamities and terror operations situations.

3D PRINTED STYLE STATEMENTS

Fashion industry would undergo a sea change as it sits on a cusp of design revolution today. Full functional 3D printed clothing and accessories like custom fit shoes which reflect your unique style and personality would be mainstream. Personalized jeweler and bespoke products befitting an occasion or a personal style statement would make us more unique than what we are. Musical instruments like guitar, flute and violin would be fully functional and can be custom designed showcasing your creativity.

3D CLONES OF YOU

The ultimate vanity, the most personal gift item is a 3D selfie – a fully coloured (in 6 million colors) miniature version of you in your unique signature pose. These mini figurines are taking the consumer market by storm and will disrupt the corporate gifting market. People would not print photographs but would actually preserve moments in 3D as souvenirs and hold onto their memories, literally!

Combining the exciting possibilities of this technology with the comfort of home online shopping (Gartner- top USA consulting firm predicts that more and more companies would sell 3D printed parts online), at present there are 7 major players offering products through e-com portal.

The future of this technology is definitely optimistic, favorable and boundless!

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about novel applications of 3D printing?

answer: The article discusses how 3D printing will find potential applications in the fields of medical procedures, aerospace, food production and fashion design. 3D printing technology is predicted to be disruptive for both industrial manufacturers and the developing world in terms of housing and manufacturing. 3D printing may also revolutionize how we think about food and personal items like clothing and jewelry. Lastly, 3D printing promises lots of possibilities in terms of souvenir manufacturing with 3D selfies.

answer: Printing of body parts is the first novel application mentioned. Another idea is the use of lunar soil as a 3D printing material for future moon settlements. Space exploration can be further supported by 3D printing food so that astronauts can have a more varied diet. Ways for printing meat are explored to reduce animal suffering. Finally, the ultimate gift item becomes possible with 3D printing: 3D clone figurines of people.

answer: 3D printing offers possibilities for new products, from custom drones to drones assembled from scratch with e-commerce portals as an example. At Printo we print your logo, cups and other promotional materials on the spot. 3D printing also supports the invention of realistic human organs for science.

text: The response is disjointed and doesn't say much about the novel applications of 3D technology.

refinement: 3D printing offers possibilities for new products, from custom drones to drones assembled from scratch with e-commerce portals as an example. Recent 3D printing potential applications also support the invention of realistic human organs for science, 3D series, 3D printing of edible foods for extended aerospace travel, etc.

answer: Using 3D printing technology, scientists have manufactured 3D printed kidneys, liver cells, blood vessels, skin and bone structure that would find applications in actual surgeries. Some companies are already printing 3D creatures that replace cadavers in medical education. Scientific studies indicate that 3D lab-grown meat can be made in future. 3D printing technology has also come up with new ways of doing crafts like making musical instruments like guitars, flutes, and violins. The article also discusses 3D printed style statements. Jewelries can be made to match individual's style and creativity.

answer: The article discusses several potential applications for 3D printing, including the possibilities of medical engineering, in the aerospace industry, in food making, and in the fashion industry. The article also discusses several potential uses of 3D printing in terms of custom personal items like figurines, customized clothing and jewelry. The potential applications of 3D printing as discussed in the article are wide-ranging and innovative.


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_WorldCom accountant Cynthia Cooper, FBI agent Coleen Rowley and Enron executive Sherron Watkins exposed the year's biggest wrongdoings_

CYNTHIA COOPER: "I believe that TIME's choice was symbolic in that it represented the hundreds of millions of average citizens who go to work every day to support their families and strive to do the right thing."

COLEEN ROWLEY: "The credibility of the investigation I helped launch into pre-9/11 lapses at the FBI was undercut by suspicions that I was motivated by the fame that came along with being on the cover of TIME. Still, the publicity is what kept me from being fired from the FBI."

SHERRON WATKINS: "What I found amusing was that [the cover] said Persons of the Year, but TIME staffers still called it their Man of the Year issue. It sort of made you think, Wow, we've come a long way. It really was Man of the Year for a while, and now they're talking to three women."

Next Rudy Giuliani

question: What is this article about?

answer: The three women who were TIME's person of the year.

answer: This article is about the three women who were named "Persons of the Year" in 2002.

answer: The article discusses three women who exposed major wrongdoings in 2002. Specifically, Cynthia Cooper exposed wrongdoings at WorldCom, Coleen Rowley exposed lapses in the FBI's pre-9/11 investigations, and Sherron Watkins exposed wrongdoings at Enron.

answer: The article is about the three women who were named TIME's Persons of the Year in 2002.

question: What year is this from?

answer: 2002

answer: 2002.

answer: 2002

answer: 2002

question: Who are the three women?

answer: Cynthia Cooper, Coleen Rowley, and Sherron Watkins.

answer: WorldCom accountant Cynthia Cooper, FBI agent Coleen Rowley, and Enron executive Sherron Watkins

answer: Cynthia Cooper, Coleen Rowley, and Sherron Watkins

answer: The three women mentioned in the passage are Cynthia Cooper, Coleen Rowley, and Sherron Watkins. All three of these women were instrumental in exposing wrongdoings in 2002, specifically those of WorldCom, the FBI, and Enron respectively.

question: What did the three women do?

answer: They are whistleblowers who exposed wrongdoings.

answer: They exposed the year's biggest wrongdoings.

answer: The three women exposed wrongdoing in major corporations - Cynthia Cooper with WorldCom, Coleen Rowley with the FBI, and Sherron Watkins with Enron.

answer: The three women exposed the year's biggest wrongdoings.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: In 2002, three women were named as Persons of the Year for exposing some of the biggest wrongdoings in the business world. Cynthia Cooper from WorldCom, Coleen Rowley from the FBI, and Sherron Watkins from Enron were all instrumental in exposing corruption and fraud.

text: Not in business world only.

refinement: In 2002, three women were named as Persons of the Year for exposing some of the biggest wrongdoings. Cynthia Cooper from WorldCom, Coleen Rowley from the FBI, and Sherron Watkins from Enron were all instrumental in exposing corruption and fraud.

answer: TIME's person of the year for 2002 was actually three people: WorldCom accountant Cynthia Cooper, FBI agent Coleen Rowley, and Enron executive Sherron Watkins. The article includes quotes from the three women about their nominations.

answer: In 2002, TIME magazine named "The Whistleblowers" as their "Persons of the Year." Cynthia Cooper, Coleen Rowley, and Sherron Watkins were all whistleblowers who exposed the wrongdoings of WorldCom, the FBI, and Enron respectively.

answer: Three women, Cynthia Cooper, Coleen Rowley, and Sherron Watkins, are named as Persons of the Year for exposing the year's biggest wrongdoings. They are all women, and the article discusses the symbolism of this.

text: It is partially true that 'They are all women, and the article discusses the symbolism of this.'

refinement: Three women, Cynthia Cooper, Coleen Rowley, and Sherron Watkins, are named as Persons of the Year for exposing the year's biggest wrongdoings. They are all women, and Watkins discusses the symbolism of this.


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--Prologue--

	I never wanted this... I thought by leaving Earth I could escape the shitty lot in life I had, but boy was I wrong. I’ve been hopping from colony to colony to for about a year now. First I tried to find some work on several lunar colonies, to no avail. Then I hitched a ride out to Mars on the little credit I had left. I was able to scrape enough money to get to Ceres, where I found work for one of the science research teams there. I really enjoyed Ceres, I could have stayed there for quite a while, but just like everything else that’s ever gone right for me, it was crushed. An experiment involving a miniscule amount of anti-matter while I was off-duty completely destroyed our lab, putting me out of work, thankfully I had made enough off of my research to finally get me to Jupiter. That’s where I’m headed now, to a Jovian Platform, one devoted to science and discovery, one where I will strive.

--The Seventh Column--

	“The Seventh Column will be departing in 10 standard minutes.” announced the robotic voice of the loudspeaker, though I could hardly hear it. It’s loud here on Mars, far different than Ceres, where it was quiet and peaceful. I had to return to Mars to find a ship that could take me to Jupiter, big ships like that never stop at Ceres. The Seventh Column was the cheapest ride I could find, well within my tight budget of 6 billion credits. I already had a job waiting for me on the Jovian Platform Scipio, a well paying job researching anti-matter physics, just like on Ceres. The only difference is that Scipio has real funding, with much better equipment than I could’ve dreamed of on Ceres.

	“The Seventh Column will be departing in 5 standard minutes.”came from the loudspeaker as I checked and made sure I had everything, when I heard footsteps. I was on a fairly empty flight, with plenty of room for everyone to stay away from each other. There was no reason for anyone to be near me, and judging by the number of footsteps, this was a group of people. I looked up, and three men were standing in front of me. Rugged, worn by space travel, they had probably never seen the light of Earth.

	“Are you Isav Re’e?” asked the man on my right, who stood slightly behind the man in the center, who was clearly the leader.

	“Yes, that I am.” I said. “Why?” This wasn’t looking good, they were using one of my old aliases.

	“We’ve been looking for you... You were stupid to come back here.” said the man on my left, who I began to recognize. The tattoo on the right side of his neck gave him away, it was the symbol of the male, with a dot in the center. He was from the Maln Clan, who I worked for briefly before I left Mars the first time. I left on not so pleasant terms, too.

	“Shuttup, Ronin.” said the center man. “Look, Young, we don’t want a mess here. Come with us peacefully and we’ll make sure you aren’t hurt. If you don’t comply then... I can’t guarantee your safety.” I was in a bind, I had less than five minutes so if I left I’d miss the flight, and lose my job on Jupiter, but if I tried to stay, these guys would drag me out by force. I needed to act quickly.

	“Alright, just let me get my things, I’ve got a bag in the back.” I lied. I got up and started walking to the cargo bay, where no-one was stationed.

	“Alright, just hurry up, we don’t got all day.” said Ronin, as they began to follow me back. They had taken the bait, now I just had to reel them in. I did some quick mental predictions and chose the one with the best chances. I reached up and grabbed a large bag, and as I pulled it down I slammed it into Ronin’s face, knocking him out instantly. I dove behind a shelf and grabbed another bag, this one a little smaller, perfect to use with one hand. I waited for the other two to round the corner until I threw the bag at the other cronnie while I tripped the leader. As soon as his head hit the ground I slammed my fist upwards into his nose, killing him. I did the same to Ronin and the other one, and stuffed their bodies in a small nook of an access corridor.

	I got back to my seat as two crew members were coming towards me. They were asking all the passengers about something, tickets I guess. I was still trying to process what had just happened, when they approached me.

	“Excuse me sir, have you seen these three men on the ship?” the crewman, whose I.D. badge read Aman, showed me a Holopane with the image of the three men who attacked me. My face went hot, my head started spinning, but I was able to compose myself.

	“No, why?” I replied.

	“They requested to come see someone on the ship, but we didn’t see them come out.” said the second man, whose I.D. badge read Czevk.

	“Can’t you check the surveillance to see if they did come out?”

	“Afraid not, cameras broken. That’s why we’re asking the passengers. Everyone else said they saw them, but you didn’t, correct?” said Czevk.

	“That’s right, sir.” I replied, I was starting to sweat.

	“Alright, well, I guess they didn’t come this far back. They’re probably hiding somewhere up front.” said Aman.

	“Maybe they slipped by you and you didn’t notice. You guys were preparing to set off right?”

	“Yeah, that’s true...” said Aman looking over at Czevk. “Ah, fuck it, let’s go. I’m ready to get out of here.” He looked back at me, “Thanks for co-operating, Mr.?”

	“Young. Dr. Isais Carson Young.” I replied.

	“Thank you, Dr. Young.” said Aman, who then walked off with Czevk.

	“We apologize for the wait, The Seventh Column will now be departing from Docking Bay 823.B heading for Jupiter’s Orbital Station.” announced the loudspeaker as the ship began to hum. I had grown accustomed to the feeling over the past two years, but it never ceased to please me. It calmed me down so much it was amusing. Nothing like soaring through the vacuum of space at the speed of light to soothe the nerves.

title: The Seventh Column

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the different work stations the narrator went through.

answer: The narrator left Earth in search of work, but was unable to find any initially. After hopping from colony to colony, the narrator eventually got a job on Ceres, then one on Mars. Finally, he found a job on the Jovian Platform Scipio. However, on the way there, he was attacked by members of the Maln Clan that he had worked with before but left on bad terms. The narrator killed them and managed to not get caught. The Scipio was left untouched for the rest of the trip.

text: "The narrator left Earth in search of work, but was unable to find any initially." - must mention that he went to try his luck on several lunar colonies.

refinement: The narrator left Earth for several lunar colonies in search of work, but was unable to find any. After hopping from colony to colony, the narrator eventually got a job on Ceres, then one on Mars. Finally, he found a job on the Jovian Platform Scipio. However, on the way there, he was attacked by members of the Maln Clan that he had worked with before but left on bad terms. The narrator killed them and managed to not get caught. The Scipio was left untouched for the rest of the trip.

text: "After hopping from colony to colony, the narrator eventually got a job on Ceres, then one on Mars." - the chronological order of the narrator's work experience is incorrect and some details are missing. He worked for the Maln Clan on Mars during his first stint there but left them on bad terms. He was able to scrape enough money on Mars to go to Ceres for work, but his lab was destroyed.

refinement: The narrator left Earth for several lunar colonies in search of work, but was unable to find any. After hopping from colony to colony, the narrator hitched a ride to Mars where he briefly worked for the Maln Clan before leaving on bad terms. He was able to save enough money to go to Ceres, where he worked as a research assistant until their lab was destroyed by an accident. Finally, he found a job on the Jovian Platform Scipio. However, on the way there, he was attacked by members of the Maln Clan that he had worked with before but left on bad terms. The narrator killed them and managed to not get caught. The Scipio was left untouched for the rest of the trip.

text: "Finally, he found a job on the Jovian Platform Scipio." - needs more context.

refinement: The narrator left Earth for several lunar colonies in search of work, but was unable to find any. After hopping from colony to colony, the narrator hitched a ride to Mars where he briefly worked for the Maln Clan before leaving on bad terms. He was able to save enough money to go to Ceres, where he worked as a research assistant until their lab was destroyed by an accident. The narrator made enough money to go to the Jovian Platform Scipio on Jupiter, where he found work as a researcher. However, on the way there, he was attacked by members of the Maln Clan that he had worked with before but left on bad terms. The narrator killed them and managed to not get caught. The Scipio was left untouched for the rest of the trip.

text: "However, on the way there, he was attacked by members of the Maln Clan that he had worked with before but left on bad terms. The narrator killed them and managed to not get caught. The Scipio was left untouched for the rest of the trip." - Extraneous and redundant information that should be removed.

refinement: The narrator left Earth for several lunar colonies in search of work, but was unable to find any. After hopping from colony to colony, the narrator hitched a ride to Mars where he briefly worked for the Maln Clan before leaving on bad terms. He was able to save enough money to go to Ceres, where he worked as a research assistant until their lab was destroyed by an accident. The narrator made enough money to go to the Jovian Platform Scipio on Jupiter, where he found work as a researcher.

text: Remove this comma

refinement: The narrator left Earth for several lunar colonies in search of work but was unable to find any. After hopping from colony to colony, the narrator hitched a ride to Mars where he briefly worked for the Maln Clan before leaving on bad terms. He was able to save enough money to go to Ceres, where he worked as a research assistant until their lab was destroyed by an accident. The narrator made enough money to go to the Jovian Platform Scipio on Jupiter, where he found work as a researcher.

answer: The narrator had to go through many different jobs in the beginning of the story. The narrator started off by working in several lunar colonies but to no avail. Then the narrator scraped enough money to get to Ceres. Then the narrator went to Jupiter, where they were able to work in an area devoted to science and discovery.

text: Change "in" to "at"

refinement: The narrator had to go through many different jobs at the beginning of the story. The narrator started off by working in several lunar colonies but to no avail. Then the narrator scraped enough money to get to Ceres. Then the narrator went to Jupiter, where they were able to work in an area devoted to science and discovery.

text: "The narrator started off by working in several lunar colonies but to no avail." - the narrator wasn't able to find work, so "working" should be replaced with him trying to find work. Also, add that the narrator left Earth for these lunar colonies for more context.

refinement: The narrator had to go through many different jobs at the beginning of the story. The narrator started off by leaving Earth to try and find work in several lunar colonies but to no avail. Then the narrator scraped enough money to get to Ceres. Then the narrator went to Jupiter, where they were able to work in an area devoted to science and discovery.

text: This part of the response is missing important details.

refinement: The narrator had to go through many different jobs at the beginning of the story. The narrator started off by leaving Earth and trying to find work in several lunar colonies but to no avail. He hitched a ride out to Mars on the credit he had left and worked for the Maln Clan before leaving them on not-so-good terms. He scraped enough money to get to Ceres, where he worked for one of the research teams experimenting on anti-matter until their lab was destroyed by an accident. The narrator made enough money on Ceres to go to the Jovian Platform Scipio on Jupiter, where a high-paying job was waiting for him in an area devoted to science and discovery.

answer: The narrator first tried to find work on various lunar colonies with no success. He then moved on to Mars, where he got work with a research team. Following its destruction, the narrator moved on to Ceres before eventually finding a ship going to Jupiter. The three men were trying to take him forcibly back to Mars to be punished for something he had done in the past. The narrator was able to knock them out with a bag and hide their corpses from the crew following their questioning. After the ship launched, the narrator was safe once more. Overall, the narrator has worked in research, scientific research labs on Earth and Mars, and now on a ship departing for Jupiter.

text: "The three men were trying to take him forcibly back to Mars to be punished for something he had done in the past. The narrator was able to knock them out with a bag and hide their corpses from the crew following their questioning. After the ship launched, the narrator was safe once more." - this information is irrelevant and should be removed.

refinement: The narrator first tried to find work on various lunar colonies with no success. He then moved on to Mars, where he got work with a research team. Following its destruction, the narrator moved on to Ceres before eventually finding a ship going to Jupiter. Overall, the narrator has worked in research, scientific research labs on Earth and Mars, and now on a ship departing for Jupiter.

text: Must mention that the narrator left Earth for more context as to why he's hopping around space.

refinement: After leaving Earth, the narrator first tried to find work on various lunar colonies with no success. He then moved on to Mars, where he got work with a research team. Following its destruction, the narrator moved on to Ceres before eventually finding a ship going to Jupiter. Overall, the narrator has worked in research, scientific research labs on Earth and Mars, and now on a ship departing for Jupiter.

text: "He then moved on to Mars, where he got work with a research team. Following its destruction, the narrator moved on to Ceres before eventually finding a ship going to Jupiter." - the sequence of events is inaccurate and needs a rewrite.

refinement: After leaving Earth, the narrator first tried to find work on various lunar colonies with no success. He hitched a ride out to Mars on the credit he had left and worked for the Maln Clan before leaving them on not-so-good terms. He scraped enough money to get to Ceres, where he worked for one of the research teams experimenting on anti-matter until their lab was destroyed by an accident. The narrator made enough money on Ceres to go to the Jovian Platform Scipio on Jupiter, where a high-paying job was waiting for him. Overall, the narrator has worked in research, scientific research labs on Earth and Mars, and now on a ship departing for Jupiter.

text: "Overall, the narrator has worked in research, scientific research labs on Earth and Mars, and now on a ship departing for Jupiter." - the narrator never worked in research labs on Earth and Mars. This part should be deleted.

refinement: After leaving Earth, the narrator first tried to find work on various lunar colonies with no success. He hitched a ride out to Mars on the credit he had left and worked for the Maln Clan before leaving them on not-so-good terms. He scraped enough money to get to Ceres, where he worked for one of the research teams experimenting on anti-matter until their lab was destroyed by an accident. The narrator made enough money on Ceres to go to the Jovian Platform Scipio on Jupiter, where a high-paying job was waiting for him.

answer: The narrator worked on several lunar colonies, then worked on the Ceres. He took a job on Jupiter's Orbital station. He had a lucrative position on Jupiter's Jovian Platform.

text: "He took a job on Jupiter's Orbital station. He had a lucrative position on Jupiter's Jovian Platform." - this part of the response seems redundant and should be revised.

refinement: The narrator worked on several lunar colonies, then worked on the Ceres. He took a lucrative paying job on Jupiter's Jovian Platform Scipio.

text: "The narrator worked on several lunar colonies" - is incorrect because he never found work. This part of the response is also missing several key details about the narrator's work experience.

refinement: After leaving Earth, the narrator hopped from lunar colony to lunar colony to find work but lucked out. He hitched a ride out to Mars and worked briefly for the Maln Clan before leaving them on not-so-good terms. He scraped enough money to get to Ceres, where he worked for one of the research teams until their lab was destroyed by an accident. He then took a lucrative paying job on Jupiter's Jovian Platform Scipio.

answer: The narrator first tried to find work on several lunar colonies but without success. He next hitched a ride to Mars. There he found work for the Maln Clan, then he found employment on the Jovian Platform Scipio.

text: Missing the part about Ceres.

refinement: The narrator first tried to find work on several lunar colonies but without success. He next hitched a ride to Mars. There he found work for the Maln Clan. He scraped enough money to get to Ceres, where he worked for one of the research teams experimenting on anti-matter until their lab was destroyed by an accident. Then he found employment on the Jovian Platform Scipio.

text: "Then he found employment on the Jovian Platform Scipio." - must mention that this is on Jupiter.

refinement: The narrator first tried to find work on several lunar colonies but without success. He next hitched a ride to Mars. There he found work for the Maln Clan. He scraped enough money to get to Ceres, where he worked for one of the research teams experimenting on anti-matter until their lab was destroyed by an accident. Then he found employment on the Jovian Platform Scipio on Jupiter.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe the narrator's actions as they were approached by the three rugged men.

answer: The narrator was desperate to get onto the flight. The narrator was alarmed when the three men used one of his old alias's and he recognized what clan they were from, by looking at their tattoos. The narrator tricked them by saying he would go get his bag in the back, but booked it away from the men until he had an upper hand to hit them. The narrator knocked out all three men and go back to his seat on the flight.

text: "The narrator was desperate to get onto the flight." - this part is irrelevant and should be removed.

refinement: The narrator was alarmed when the three men used one of his old alias's and he recognized what clan they were from, by looking at their tattoos. The narrator tricked them by saying he would go get his bag in the back, but booked it away from the men until he had an upper hand to hit them. The narrator knocked out all three men and go back to his seat on the flight.

text: Use the correct spelling for "alias's" (aliases) and remove the comma on "back,"

refinement: The narrator was alarmed when the three men used one of his old aliases and he recognized what clan they were from, by looking at their tattoos. The narrator tricked them by saying he would go get his bag in the back but booked it away from the men until he had an upper hand to hit them. The narrator knocked out all three men and go back to his seat on the flight.

text: "The narrator tricked them by saying he would go get his bag in the back but booked it away from the men until he had an upper hand to hit them. The narrator knocked out all three men and go back to his seat on the flight." - this is inaccurate. The narrator lured them to the back and used the luggage as weapons. He also ended up killing all three men, not knocking them out.

refinement: The narrator was alarmed when the three men used one of his old aliases and he recognized what clan they were from, by looking at their tattoos. The narrator tricked the men into following him to the cargo bay at the back of the ship, where no one was stationed. He used bags as weapons to incapacitate and kill all three men, hiding their bodies in a small nook of an access corridor. The narrator then when back to his seat as if nothing happened.

answer: The the narrator was approached by three rugged men and told that they had been looking for him. Upon learning this, the narrator quickly attacked the first man and knocked him out. The narrator then killed the other two men and hid their bodies in an access corridor. The narrator was then approached by two crew members and calmly lied about having seen the three men mentioned to them. The ship then departed, and the narrator felt calmed as they soared through space at a great speed.

text: "The the narrator" - remove the redundancy (the)

refinement: The narrator was approached by three rugged men and told that they had been looking for him. Upon learning this, the narrator quickly attacked the first man and knocked him out. The narrator then killed the other two men and hid their bodies in an access corridor. The narrator was then approached by two crew members and calmly lied about having seen the three men mentioned to them. The ship then departed, and the narrator felt calmed as they soared through space at a great speed.

text: "The narrator was then approached by two crew members and calmly lied about having seen the three men mentioned to them. The ship then departed, and the narrator felt calmed as they soared through space at a great speed." - this is irrelevant to the question and should be removed.

refinement: The narrator was approached by three rugged men and told that they had been looking for him. Upon learning this, the narrator quickly attacked the first man and knocked him out. The narrator then killed the other two men and hid their bodies in an access corridor.

text: "Upon learning this, the narrator quickly attacked the first man and knocked him out. The narrator then killed the other two men and hid their bodies in an access corridor." - this is inaccurate. The narrator first lured the men into the cargo bay and then attacked them.

refinement: The narrator was approached by three rugged men and told that they had been looking for him. Upon learning this, the narrator told the men that he had to get his bags at the cargo bay at the back of the ship, a ruse to get them to follow him to a spot with no witnesses. The narrator quickly attacked the first man and knocked him out. The narrator then killed the other two men and hid their bodies in an access corridor.

text: "killed the other two men" - the narrator killed all three men.

refinement: The narrator was approached by three rugged men and told that they had been looking for him. Upon learning this, the narrator told the men that he had to get his bags at the cargo bay at the back of the ship, a ruse to get them to follow him to a spot with no witnesses. The narrator quickly attacked the first man and knocked him out. The narrator then killed all three men and hid their bodies in an access corridor.

answer: He appeased them by saying that he'd give them whatever they wanted as long as they let him catch the ship. With further ruse, he delayed them by offering to go and get his things as they took the bait and allowed him to walk ahead of them. He then proceeded to clock them with a bag and followed with his plan of attack killing them.

text: "He appeased them by saying that he'd give them whatever they wanted as long as they let him catch the ship. With further ruse, he delayed them by offering to go and get his things as they took the bait and allowed him to walk ahead of them." - this is not what happened.

refinement: The narrator was alarmed that the men knew his alias and realized that he would lose his job on Jupiter if he went with them. He tricked them into following him to the back of the ship (cargo bay) where no one was stationed. He then proceeded to clock them with a bag and followed with his plan of attack killing them.

text: "attack killing them." - separate attack and kill.

refinement: The narrator was alarmed that the men knew his alias and realized that he would lose his job on Jupiter if he went with them. He tricked them into following him to the back of the ship (cargo bay) where no one was stationed. He then proceeded to clock them with a bag and followed with his plan of attacking and killing them.

text: Must include the part where the narrator stuffs the bodies in an access corridor.

refinement: The narrator was alarmed that the men knew his alias and realized that he would lose his job on Jupiter if he went with them. He tricked them into following him to the back of the ship (cargo bay) where no one was stationed. He then proceeded to clock them with a bag and followed with his plan of attacking and killing them. The narrator stuffed the bodies in a small nook of an access corridor.

answer: The narrator is approached by three men who recognize the narrator as someone they were looking for under an alias. The narrator executes a preemptive strike and knocks out the first man before they can do anything to him. The narrator kills the other two men and takes their bodies away to hide them in an access corridor. The narrator is then approached by crew members who have been looking for the three men but the narrator lies and says he did not see them. The Seventh Column then departs for Jupiter.

text: Add that he leads them back into the cargo bay.

refinement: The narrator is approached by three men who recognize the narrator as someone they were looking for under an alias. Realizing that he would lose his job on Jupiter if he missed his flight (the men were about to drag him off the ship), the narrator tricks the men into following him back to the cargo bay, telling them he was just going to pick up his bags. The narrator executes a preemptive strike and knocks out the first man before they can do anything to him. The narrator kills the other two men and takes their bodies away to hide them in an access corridor. The narrator is then approached by crew members who have been looking for the three men but the narrator lies and says he did not see them. The Seventh Column then departs for Jupiter.

text: "The narrator is then approached by crew members who have been looking for the three men but the narrator lies and says he did not see them. The Seventh Column then departs for Jupiter." - Extraneous information that can be removed.

refinement: The narrator is approached by three men who recognize the narrator as someone they were looking for under an alias. Realizing that he would lose his job on Jupiter if he missed his flight (the men were about to drag him off the ship), the narrator tricks the men into following him back to the cargo bay, telling them he was just going to pick up his bags. The narrator executes a preemptive strike and knocks out the first man before they can do anything to him. The narrator kills the other two men and takes their bodies away to hide them in an access corridor.

answer: Isais pretended to not recognize the instructions from the leader to go with them then hit the one on the left in the face with a bag, knocking him unconscious instantly. He tripped up the leader, smashed the leader's nose for good measure, then smashed the third one in the face, rendering him unconscious. He then stuffed the bodies in an access corridor.

text: "Isais pretended to not recognize the instructions from the leader to go with them" - this never happened.

refinement: Isais (the narrator) was alarmed when one of the men asked if he was Isav Re’e, one of his old aliases back on Mars. Realizing that he would lose his job on Jupiter if he missed his flight (the men were about to drag him off the ship), he tricked the men into following him back to the cargo bay, telling them he was just going to pick up his bags. He then hit the one on the left in the face with a bag, knocking him unconscious instantly. He tripped up the leader, smashed the leader's nose for good measure, then smashed the third one in the face, rendering him unconscious. He then stuffed the bodies in an access corridor.


text:
SHUNKI KAWATABI (Japanese: 川渡 (かわたび) 瞬己 (しゅんき) __Kawatabi Shunki__) is a 3rd year wing spiker from Wakutani Minami High. He is currently a travel agency employee in Miyagi.

-   1 Appearance
-   2 Personality
-   3 Background
-   4 Plot
    -   4.1 Interhigh
    -   4.2 Spring High Preliminary Arc
-   5 Statistics
-   6 Trivia
-   7 Quotes
-   8 References

Appearance

He has a long maroon-colored hair that is usually tied up at the top of his head, resembling a pineapple. His eyebrows are long and points almost vertically. He has a medium build.

Personality

Shunki appears to be very carefree and easily impressed, and, like Hinata, gets flustered easily. He also gets distracted by pretty girls, which Takeru uses often to motivate him.

Background

He was on the same volleyball club as Kenjirō Shirabu in middle school.

Plot

Interhigh

Spring High Preliminary Arc

Statistics

Original Statistics
Power
2/5
Jumping
4/5
Stamina
3/5
Game Sense
3/5
Technique
3/5
Speed
4/5
Besides his speed and jumping skills, he is an average player. He speed is well enough to get him from back of the line to cut in front to spike from the right corner, thus completing their delayed attack.

JUMPING REACH: 322 cm

Trivia

-   His favorite food is the plant giant butterbur.
-   His current concern: He gets nervous visiting his local convenience store because the old man who usually works there has been replaced by a cute girl.
-   His star sign is Gemini.
-   He is called Tabi by his team mates
-   NOMENCLATURE:
    -   Kawatabi (川渡) - _River Crossing_
    -   Shunki (瞬己) - _A Moment; Instant_

Quotes

References

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is Shunki Kawatabi?

answer: A 3rd year wing spiker from Wakutani Minami High.

answer: A 3rd year cornerback from Wakutani Minami High.

text: Wing spiker not cornerback

refinement: A 3rd year wing spiker from Wakutani Minami High.

answer: Shunki Kawatabi is a 3rd year wing spiker from Wakutani Minami High.

answer: Shunki Kawatabi is a 3rd year wing spiker from Wakutani Minami High.

answer: Shunki Kawatabi is a 3rd year wing spiker from Wakutani Minami High.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What color is his hair?

answer: Maroon-colored.

answer: He has long maroon-colored hair.

answer: Maroon.

answer: His hair is maroon.

answer: His hair is maroon in color.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is his favorite food?

answer: His favorite food is the plant giant butterbur.

answer: The plant giant butterbur.

answer: His favorite food is the plant giant butterbur.

answer: He likes plant giant butterbur.

answer: His favorite food is the plant giant butterbur.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is his star sign?

answer: His star sign is Gemini.

answer: His star sign is Gemini.

answer: He is a Gemini.

answer: Tabgion.

text: Gemini not Tabgion which is not a star sign in the West

answer: His star sign is Gemini.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: This article is about Shunki Kawatabi, a 3rd year wing spiker from Wakutani Minami High.

answer: This article is about Shunki Kawatabi, a player on the Takigawa High.

text: The Takigawa High what?

refinement: This article is about Shunki Kawatabi, a 3rd year wing spiker from Wakutani Minami High.

answer: This article details the apperance, personality, background, and subsequent plot of a ml visual novel character.

text: This article is about a real person

refinement: This article is about Shunki Kawatabi, a 3rd year wing spiker from Wakutani Minami High.

answer: Shunki is a 3rd-year wing spiker who is currently working. He is rather carefree and easily impressed, and has a great jumping ability.

text: He is working at a travel agency and is in high school

refinement:
This article is about Shunki Kawatabi, a 3rd year wing spiker from Wakutani Minami High who is currently working at a travel agency.
He is rather carefree and easily impressed, and has a great jumping ability.

answer: Shunki is a 3rd year wing spiker from Wakutani Minami High. He is currently a travel agency employee in Miyagi. He is carefree and easily impressed.


text:
Once upon a time, there were four angles that were best friends, there was Right Angle, and he always thought he was perfect since he added up to 90 degrees. Acute and her twin sister, they always complimented each other since they were both 45 degrees, perfect complementary angles. And Obtuse Angle, the big clown of the group, the other angles always pocked fun at him, saying he was a one angle supplementary, but they were wrong, he was only 179 degrees, so jokes on them. One day they decided they wanted to go to the great Plane. The Plane was a popular attraction for Angles all over the world; it was filled with beautiful sites, and extended on and on forever. All you had to do was take a right, then a left and you were at the door to the magical Plane.

The four friends set out on their journey and quickly reached the door to the grand and mystical Plane. This was the first time any of them had been to the great Plane, and they ran into a small problem. Obtuse was too big to get through the door! Acute teased him by dashing back and forth laughing. “See, you are so big you hit every Vertex of the door!” Acute joked.

“Well, I’m afraid we are going to have to cut you into two congruent pieces Obtuse if you want through” stated Right Angle. “What? No? I don’t want to be cut in half” exclaimed Obtuse, “there has to be another way.” Obtuse angle and Right angle argued about this for a good 10 minutes, Acute took this opportunity to make another joke and measured Obtuse with a Protractor and made more fun of his size. This sent Obtuse over the edge and he cried and cried. “I’m sorry” said Acute “it was mean of me to make fun of you.” But it didn’t help and Obtuse cried and cried some more, but the whole time, he got smaller and smaller, until he was just the perfect size to fit though the door. Right Angle saw the opportunity and pushed him through the door.

Just like that they were in the great Plane, it was beautiful, better than anything they could have imagined, it was completely white, extending on for as long as the eye could see, brightly colored points in space, every color and every shade you could ever think of, they light up the sky like fireworks. “What are those spots up there?” asked Obtuse. “Why those are Points, they litter the great Plane and are everywhere you look.” Explained Right Angle. Obtuse looked to the right and saw two colored lines shoot across the sky, “Oh my, what are those lines, they look like they are racing” said Obtuse. “Those lines are something called parallel lines, they travel across the great Plane, they travel in two opposite directions for as long as you can see, but will never ever meet” said Right Angle. “For some reason that makes me sad they will never meet” said Obtuse with a frown.

The four friends spent another hour or two taking in the sights, but suddenly, everything got a little dark, and some of the dots started disappearing. Looking up they saw the destroyer of the Plane. “What is that?” cried Acute. “Well that is the great eraser, and we better start running” stated Right Angle rather calmly, and so they ran, as quick as they possibly could, with dots and lines disappearing all around them, and the shadow of the great eraser slowly coming closer and closer. They could see the door in the distance but it was a long shot.

Obtuse was trailing slightly behind the rest; he had a drink since his big cry, and was back to his old 179 degrees. Almost all of the color dots were gone at this point, and the great and powerful eraser set its sights on the weak angles, chasing them with all its speed. Acute and her sister made it to the door first, and dove through it, followed by Right Angle, and bringing up the rear was Obtuse, with the great eraser right on his tail, he slammed in to the door but was just too big.

Obtuse turned around just in time to see the eraser not even a foot from him. He pushed with all his force and came flying through the door; the eraser had erased some of him, just enough to fit through the door. Obtuse didn’t mind however because the eraser had erased just enough of him to bring him to a perfect 90 degrees, no more jokes at his expense, looks like Right Angle isn't the only perfect angle in town anymore.

The four friends never returned to the great Plane, now that they knew how dangerous it was, but they were glad they got to see it, and the memory of the dancing bright lights will stay with them for the rest of their days, all they have to do is close their eyes and they see the sky light up with beautiful lights of every color. Something so wonderful will never be forgotten.
The end!

If you see any Grammatical errors please let me know!

title: Short kids story about Angles

question: Who are the four angles?

answer: The four angles in the story are Right Angle, Acute, Obtuse, and Obtuse.

text: There is no evidence that suggest there are two Obtuse angles.

refinement: The four angles in the story are Right Angle, Acute and her twin sister, and Obtuse.

answer: Right Angle, standing at 90 degrees, Acute and her twin sister, both 45 degrees, and Obtuse Angle, standing almost flat at 179 degrees.

text: "there was Right Angle, and he always thought he was perfect since he added up to 90 degrees. Acute and her twin sister, they always complimented each other since they were both 45 degrees, perfect complementary angles. And Obtuse Angle" is evidence of who are the four angles.

answer: The four angles are Right Angle, Acute, Obtuse, and Obtuse's sister.

text: There is no evidence to suggest that Obtuse has a sister.

refinement: The four angles are Right Angle, Acute and her twin sister, and Obtuse.

answer: Right Angle, Acute, Obtuse, and Acute's twin sister.

text: "there was Right Angle, and he always thought he was perfect since he added up to 90 degrees. Acute and her twin sister, they always complimented each other since they were both 45 degrees, perfect complementary angles. And Obtuse Angle" is evidence of who are the four angles.

question: What happens at the door?

answer: The four friends have a problem because Obtuse is too big to fit through the door.

text: "they ran into a small problem. Obtuse was too big to get through the door" is evidence that at the door they ran into a problem which was Obtuse being too big to fit through the door.

answer: Obtuse is too big to fit through the door, so Right Angle suggests they cut him in half. Obtuse doesn't want to be cut in half, and Acute makes another joke at Obtuse. This makes Obtuse cry and cry until he shrinks enough to fit through the door. Right Angle pushes him through.

text: "Well, I’m afraid we are going to have to cut you into two congruent pieces Obtuse if you want through” stated Right Angle. “What? No? I don’t want to be cut in half” exclaimed Obtuse, “there has to be another way.” Obtuse angle and Right angle argued about this for a good 10 minutes, Acute took this opportunity to make another joke and measured Obtuse with a Protractor and made more fun of his size. This sent Obtuse over the edge and he cried and cried. “I’m sorry” said Acute “it was mean of me to make fun of you.” But it didn’t help and Obtuse cried and cried some more, but the whole time, he got smaller and smaller, until he was just the perfect size to fit though the door. Right Angle saw the opportunity and pushed him through the door" is evidence of what occurred at the door.

answer: Obtuse is too big to fit through the door.

text: "they ran into a small problem. Obtuse was too big to get through the door" is evidence that Obtuse is too big to fit through the door.

answer: The four friends have trouble getting through the door to the great Plane because Obtuse is too big. They eventually decide to cut him in two, but he is able to make it through the door just before the great eraser catches up to him.

text: They eventually don't cut him in two, and there is no evidence to suggest it. Obtuse actually cries enough until he is able to fit.

refinement: The four friends have trouble getting through the door to the great Plane because Obtuse is too big. He eventually cries enough until e is able to fit.

question: What do they see in the great Plane?

answer: The four friends see the great Plane as a place with beautiful sites and extending on and on forever.

text: The answer misses to specify what the four friends see. such as bright points, parallel lines and the great eraser.

refinement: The four friends see the great Plane as a place with beautiful sites and extending on and on forever. They see bright points, parallel lines and the great eraser.

answer: The four friends see bright lights of every color in the great Plane. They see points littering the sky, and parallel lines that never meet. However, the great eraser comes and starts to erase the lights, and the friends barely make it out alive.

text: "Why those are Points, they litter the great Plane and are everywhere you look.” Explained Right Angle. Obtuse looked to the right and saw two colored lines shoot across the sky, “Oh my, what are those lines, they look like they are racing” said Obtuse. “Those lines are something called parallel lines" is evidence of what the four friends see.

answer: They see Points, parallel lines, and the great eraser.

text: "Why those are Points, they litter the great Plane -- Those lines are something called parallel lines, they travel across the great Plane -- Well that is the great eraser" are all evidence that they see points, parallel lines and the great eraser.

answer: Whiteness extending on as long as they could see, and bright points in space of every color, as well as parallel lines.

text: the answer is valid except it misses to mention that they also see the great eraser.

refinement: Whiteness extending on as long as they could see, and bright points in space of every color, as well as parallel lines. They also see the great eraser.

question: What happens with the great eraser?

answer: The great eraser is the destroyer of the Plane. It is chasing the angles.

text: "'Well that is the great eraser, and we better start running' stated Right Angle rather calmly, and so they ran, as quick as they possibly could, with dots and lines disappearing all around them, and the shadow of the great eraser slowly coming closer and closer" is evidence of what the great eraser was and that it was chasing the angles.

answer: The great eraser is a destroyer of the plane. It is a giant eraser that erases everything in its path.

text: The answer is valid but misses to mention that the great eraser chases the angles.

refinement: The great eraser is a destroyer of the plane. It is a giant eraser that erases everything in its path and chases the angles.

answer: The great eraser is responsible for erasing all the colors and points in the great plane, until nothing is left.

text: The answer is valid but misses to mention that the great eraser chases the angles.

refinement: The great eraser is responsible for erasing all the colors and points in the great plane, until nothing is left. It also chases down all the angles, especially the weak ones.

answer: They all run from the great eraser. Acute, her sister, and Right Angle all make it through the door safely, but Obtuse is too big to fit. He gets caught by eraser and finally squeezes through the door, but not until after he gets erased down to a perfect 90 degrees.

text: "He pushed with all his force and came flying through the door; the eraser had erased some of him, just enough to fit through the door. Obtuse didn’t mind however because the eraser had erased just enough of him to bring him to a perfect 90 degrees" is evidence that Obtuse, once again could not fit through the door but the great eraser had erased just enough of him to a perfect 90 degrees.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: The four friends set out on their journey to the great Plane, but Obtuse is too big to fit through the door. Acute and her sister make it through the door, but Obtuse is too big. Obtuse cries and cries until he is just the perfect size to fit through the door. The four friends never return to the great Plane, but they are glad they got to see it.

text: The answer misses to mention that the four friends are four angles, Right angle, Acute angle and her twin sister, and Obtuse.

refinement: The four friends: Right angle, Acute angle and her twin sister, and Obtuse set out on their journey to the great Plane, but Obtuse is too big to fit through the door. Acute and her sister make it through the door, but Obtuse is too big. Obtuse cries and cries until he is just the perfect size to fit through the door. The four friends never return to the great Plane, but they are glad they got to see it.

text: The answer misses to mention that they are chased by the great Eraser on their way back from the great Plane.

refinement: The four friends: Right angle, Acute angle and her twin sister, and Obtuse set out on their journey to the great Plane, but Obtuse is too big to fit through the door. Acute and her sister make it through the door, but Obtuse is too big. Obtuse cries and cries until he is just the perfect size to fit through the door. At the great Plane, the four friends are chased by the great Eraser after witnessing it erase all the bright dots and parallel lines. The four friends never return to the great Plane, but they are glad they got to see it.

answer: Four angles are best friends, Right Angle, Acute and her twin sister, and Obtuse Angle. Obtuse Angle is the butt of every joke because he is so big, he stands at 179 degrees. They go to the great Plane, but Obtuse can't fit through the door until Acute makes him cry so much he shrinks and Right Angle pushes him through. In the great Plane, they see all sorts of colored dots and parallel lines, until the great eraser chases them out and erases Obtuse down to a perfect 90 degrees.

text: "Obtuse turned around just in time to see the eraser not even a foot from him. He pushed with all his force and came flying through the door; the eraser had erased some of him, just enough to fit through the door. Obtuse didn’t mind however because the eraser had erased just enough of him to bring him to a perfect 90 degrees" is evidence of the experience of the four friends traveling to the great Plane.

answer: Four angles, Right Angle, Acute, Obtuse, and Acute's twin sister, go to the Plane. Obtuse is too big to fit through the door, so they cut him in half. Obtuse cries and cries until he shrinks to the perfect size to fit through the door. The four friends spend time in the Plane, but the great eraser comes and destroys it.

text: The answer mistakenly suggests Obtuse was cut in half, however he ended up not needing to be cut after he cried enough, he was able to fit through the door.

refinement: Four angles, Right Angle, Acute, Obtuse, and Acute's twin sister, go to the Plane. Obtuse is too big to fit through the door, but Obtuse cries and cries until he shrinks to the perfect size to fit through the door. The four friends spend time in the Plane, but the great eraser comes and destroys it.

answer: This story is about four friends who set out to explore the great Plane, but run into a problem when one of them is too big to fit through the door. They manage to get through, but the great eraser is chasing them. Just as the last friend is about to be erased, he manages to get through the door just in time.

text: The answer misses to mention that the four friends are four angles: Right angle, Acute and her twin sister, and Obtuse.

refinement: This story is about four friends: Right angle, Acute angle and her twin sister, and Obtuse. They set out to explore the great Plane, but run into a problem when one of them is too big to fit through the door. They manage to get through, but the great eraser is chasing them. Just as the last friend is about to be erased, he manages to get through the door just in time.

text: It misses to specify that it is Obtuse who is too big to fit through the door and who manages to get through on the way back.

refinement: This story is about four friends: Right angle, Acute angle and her twin sister, and Obtuse. They set out to explore the great Plane, but run into a problem when Obtuse is too big to fit through the door. They manage to get through, but the great eraser is chasing them. Just as Obtuse is about to be erased, he manages to get through the door just in time.

text: It misses to mention that on the way back from the great Plane, Obtuse is erased just enough to fit through the door, making him into a perfect right angle.

refinement: This story is about four friends: Right angle, Acute angle and her twin sister, and Obtuse. They set out to explore the great Plane, but run into a problem when Obtuse is too big to fit through the door. They manage to get through, but the great eraser is chasing them. Just as Obtuse is about to be erased, he is erased just enough to get him through the door and a perfect 90 degree right angle.


text:
This is not for you.

This is for myself.

My psychiatrist told me it would be good for me to put my thoughts down on paper.  Well, I don't have any paper. I guess this will have to do.

It's hard to imagine the feeling of coming home from a long day of work, opening the front door and finding your only son hanging from the upstairs banister. Blue in the face and cold to the touch. A chair knocked on its side under his dangling feet. He had worn the suit his father had given him before he passed away.

Cancer.

He was never the same after that. I suppose he wanted to make a good impression, wherever he may end up. The EMTs would later find the letter he had written stashed away in his breast pocket. Coincidentally, the suit he was wearing at his death would be the same suit he would be buried in.

He wanted an end to his suffering, and he found his cure. His suffering had ended, but in doing so he piled more onto his mother.

I hadn't talked to Robert in some time before his passing, and for that I blame myself. Things had changed between him and I, but I couldn't point my finger on exactly *what.* His father had passed away 4 months prior, and at the time he seemed more into isolation than anything else. In hindsight I should have known exactly what was going on in his head. How obvious it is now - years later - having thought about it day after day. What I should have done differently...

Blame.

Guilt.

Robert and I used to be inseparable, and his mother revered me as her other son. It was nice having a motherly figure in my life. My family life hadn't been stable for as long as I could remember, and often times we were left to fend for ourselves. I would come over and eat dinner with Robert and his Mother and Father nearly everyday, and for that hour or so at a time I felt like I actually had a family that loved me.

There's not a day that goes by that I don't think about Robert's funeral. He was a fairly popular kid, and nearly our entire 8th grade class was there. Friends would take turns sharing anecdotes from times spent with Robert, laughing and crying all the while. Robert's mother had sat in the front row of the church, and there wasn't a single break in her sobs. I had tried to console her at one point, but she brushed me off. I was taken aback, but I figured she just needed her space.

She composed herself momentarily and addressed the audience, thanking us for attending. She told us it meant a lot to her and that she had something to share with us. It was the note Robert had left. Through broken tears, this is what she read:

*Lately life hasn't been what it used to be. I don't find joy in anything I once did and everyday is a constant struggle. If you're reading this right now, I've lost that struggle. I'm sorry for the pain that I've caused you, and I hope that you can be strong without me. I've gone to be with Dad, and I hope to see you all when you get here. Love, Robert.*

She put the note down on the podium and reached for her purse. Pulling the metallic object and placing it to her head.

*Click*

*Boom*

Her last words, "I'm coming home."

I don't blame you for what you did. You found your peace, but you put your suffering onto me.

title: We All Cope In Different Ways

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about Robert?

answer: Robert was a popular kid at school and the narrator's best friend. He was an only son to parents that, from all accounts, loved him dearly based on the way they treated the narrator. Robert wasn't the same when his father passed away due to cancer. He couldn't take the suffering from the loss and committed suicide (he hung himself) to end his pain but piled more onto his mother. Robert wore the suit his dad gave him before he died and wrote a suicide note which the EMTs found in his breast pocket.

answer: Robert was the only son of Elizabeth who hung himself a few months after his father died of cancer. He had become a recluse following his father's death and the young boy had left a suicide note. He was well-liked but was extremely upset about his father's death and Elizabeth didn't know how to handle it. She tried to reach out to Robert but he brushed her off. At the end of his funeral, Elizabeth told his friends about the note Robert had left for her and read it out loud. While saying this, she pulled a gun from her pocket and shot herself.

text: It was the narrator who Robert's mother brushed off, not Robert himself. Additionally, describing the actions of the mother killing herself does not add to describing Robert.

refinement: Robert was the only son of Elizabeth who hung himself a few months after his father died of cancer. He had become a recluse following his father's death and the young boy had left a suicide note. He was well-liked but was extremely upset about his father's death and Elizabeth didn't know how to handle it.  At the end of his funeral, Elizabeth told his friends about the note Robert had left for her and read it out loud.

answer: Robert is the narrator's deceased best friend. He had experimented with sugarrs. Robert was depressed after his father had passed away. He was apparently very sad and didn't find any joy in what he used to like. He decided to commit suicide by hanging himself and left a note for his mother and a copy for the narrator. Robert's mother died by suicide too.

text: Robert did not experiment with sugars, so the second sentence of the response should be omitted.

refinement: Robert is the narrator's deceased best friend. Robert was depressed after his father had passed away. He was apparently very sad and didn't find any joy in what he used to like. He decided to commit suicide by hanging himself and left a note for his mother and a copy for the narrator. Robert's mother died by suicide too.

answer: From this passage it is clear that Robert was suffering from depression. He couldn't find joy in anything, and ultimately he chose to take his own life in order to escape the pain. Through the final act of suicide, Robert inflicted a great deal of suffering on the people who loved him. He was loved, but he ultimately caused an immeasurable amount of pain.

answer: The story says that Robert was a suffering teenager who chose to end his pain by committing suicide. The aftermath of his death caused a lot of pain for his mother. Robert's suffering was evident, and the author felt guilt for not being there for him. While he was despondent, he ultimately chose a permanent solution for his troubles.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the narrator and Robert?

answer: The story shows that the narrator and Robert were once extremely close, but after Robert's father passed away something changed between them. The death of Robert left a void in the narrator's life that cannot be filled, and he blames himself for failing to recognize the importance of their relationship at the time. The story also shows that Robert clearly was suffering mentally and felt there to be no other solution than to end his life. The narrator is left mourning his death and carrying the guilt of what could have been. Overall, the story says that the narrator and Robert were close friends but that something went tragically wrong.

answer: The narrator and Robert had been close until the death of Robert's father. After his death, the two had drifted apart and the narrator regrets not having been more understanding about what Robert was going through. The narrator feels a great sense of guilt for Robert's suicide. Robert likely felt alone and overwhelmed by his struggles in life. The two shared a deep, meaningful relationship, but the narrator failed to understand Robert's needs. Robert ultimately found his own way to cope, but his choice ultimately caused more pain for the narrator.

answer: The narrator and Robert were best friends growing up. They went to the same school and used to be inseparable - like brothers. The narrator would always come over and eat dinner with Robert and his parents, who always treated him like family. When Robert's father passed away due to cancer, things changed between him and the narrator. The narrator blames himself and feels guilty because as a friend, he should have known what was going on in Robert's head.

answer: The narrator has had a similar experience to Robert's. Years ago, their family life wasn't stable and their parents often left them to fend for themselves. Robert's lack of stability had partly stemmed from the death of his father, which his mother was still grieving.

text: This response is off track. It pulls assumptions that are not necessarily true at all. This whole response should be edited and re-written.

refinement: The narrator and Robert had been close until the death of Robert's father. After his death, the two had drifted apart and the narrator regrets not having been more understanding about what Robert was going through. The narrator feels a great sense of guilt for Robert's suicide. Robert likely felt alone and overwhelmed by his struggles in life. The two shared a deep, meaningful relationship, but the narrator failed to understand Robert's needs. Robert ultimately found his own way to cope, but his choice ultimately caused more pain for the narrator.

answer: The narrator notes that he and Robert were very close when they were younger. Robert's father passed away. They developed a relationship with Robert's mother since her lonesome son found companionship and guidance in the narrator-turned-friend. The narrator reflects on how this all changed, or felt different with the death of Robert's father. At Robert's funeral, at which his mother left and killed herself with a gun bought from the tuxedo shop she had earlier selected for him and said she bought for him.

text: This response has many content and grammatical errors. It has sentences that do not make sense whatsoever and draws assumptions. This response needs to be completely re-written.

refinement: The narrator and Robert had been close until the death of Robert's father. After his death, the two had drifted apart and the narrator regrets not having been more understanding about what Robert was going through. The narrator feels a great sense of guilt for Robert's suicide. Robert likely felt alone and overwhelmed by his struggles in life. The two shared a deep, meaningful relationship, but the narrator failed to understand Robert's needs. Robert ultimately found his own way to cope, but his choice ultimately caused more pain for the narrator.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the climactic event of the story.

answer: Robert's suicide caused great sorrow in his mother. He wrote a letter that his mother read aloud at his funeral, which informed others of his intentions. His mother then committed suicide.

answer: The narrator's long-time friend Robert commits suicide. His mother, who was at Robert's funeral, takes her own life after the funeral.

answer: Having had to deal with a husband who died early of cancer four months prior and finding her only son hanging from the ceiling (suicide), Robert's mother was inconsolable during his funeral. She sat at the front row of the church, and there wasn't a single break in her sobs. She composed herself momentarily and addressed everyone who attended Robert's funeral, which included nearly everyone from his 8th-grade class. She shared Robert's suicide note with everyone, reading her son's last words between sobs. In one final act, she pulls out a gun from her purse, puts it against her head, and says "I'm coming home" before pulling the trigger and killing herself.

answer: A mother commits suicide after her son kills himself.

text: Some extra detail can be added to this response, to encapsulate the events described in the story.

refinement: Robert's mother commits suicide at her son's funeral, her last words being "I'm coming home."

answer: Robert killed himself, and his mother followed soon after committing suicide.

text: This is an accurate description of what happened, but could be described in better detail to show what happened in the story.

refinement: Robert killed himself, and left a suicide note behind. Robert's mother killed herself with a gun after reading out loud her son's suicide note.


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The OTTAWA VOYAGEURS, previously the OTTAWA RAPIDZ, were a professional baseball team based in Ottawa, Ontario, Canada under the Canadian-American Association of Professional Baseball or Can-Am League.

As a Can-Am team, the team played one season as the Ottawa Rapidz at Ottawa Baseball Stadium, previously home to the Ottawa Lynx Triple-A minor league franchise. Originally, the team was to be spelled as the Ottawa Rapids until it was renamed prior to the start of their 2008 opening season. After the initial ownership declared bankruptcy, the Can-Am league assumed ownership of the franchise, but suspended the team's operations in March 2009 prior to what would have been a second season.[1]

History

The Rapids were established after the Lynx, an International League team, moved to Allentown, Pennsylvania after the 2007 season to become the Lehigh Valley IronPigs. The Ottawa City Council discussed different possibilities regarding the city-owned stadium and accepted the offer given by Can-Am League president Miles Wolff.

Following their sale to zip.ca, the team name spelling was modified to the Ottawa Rapidz.[2][3]

On 29 September 2008, amid reports of a $1.4 million team debt, Rapidz management notified the Can-Am league that the team would be dissolved and that bankruptcy proceedings were planned. Rapidz management blamed the City of Ottawa for the situation, citing failed negotiations for the future lease of the stadium.[4][5][6]

Despite the first-season bankruptcy, trading of Rapidz players continued in the Can-Am League offseason, with such activity reported as late as 13 October 2008.[7] The Can-Am League announced on 13 November 2008 that a team would operate in Ottawa for 2009, operated directly by the league while new ownership was sought. Can-Am league commissioner Miles Wolff confirmed this development in Ottawa, displaying the original bilingual logo, with the spelling changed back to Rapids (English)/Rapides (French), but cautioned that the name was not yet final and that the team might operate under a new name.[8] In February 2009, the team was rechristened as the Voyageurs after a name-the-team contest won by Michael Jacobsen.[9]

However, the Voyageurs would never take the field as the Can-Am league announced on 30 March 2009 that the team and the Atlantic City Surf would cease operations.[10] League commissioner Miles Wolff indicated the team lacked financial support and “solid ownership” in order for the franchise to continue.[11][12]

On 3 April 2009, Voyageurs players were made available to the six remaining teams in the league in a dispersal draft.

Logos and uniforms

File:Ottawa Rapids.PNG|FORMER RAPIDS LOGO, ''ENGLISH_, prior to 2008 season File:Rapides d'Ottawa.PNG|_'Rapides logo, _French'', PRIOR TO 2008 SEASON FILE:OTTAWA RAPIDZ.PNG|Rapidz former primary logo_', 2008

Standings and statistics

2008 season (Rapidz)

The Ottawa Rapidz finished last in the Can-Am League, with a 13-34 (.277) performance in the first half of the 2008 season, followed by an 18-29 (.383) record in the second half. The Rapidz tied the New Jersey Jackals for last place in the second half-season.

Total attendance of the 46 Rapidz home games was 101,073 for a per-game average of 2,197.[13]

2009 roster

Game broadcasts

In 2008, local radio broadcasts of 80 Rapidz season games were provided in French by CJRC-FM.[14]

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe some interesting facts about the Ottawa Voyageurs.

answer: The Ottawa Voyageurs were a professional baseball team based in Ottawa, Canada, who, according to the article, are not active anymore.

answer: The Ottawa Voyageurs were previously the Ottawa Rapidz. They were a professional baseball team based in Ottawa, Ontario, Canada. They played one season as the Ottawa Rapidz at Ottawa Baseball Stadium, previously home to the Ottawa Lynx Triple-A minor league franchise. They were dissolved and bankruptcy proceedings were planned. The team was rechristened as the Voyageurs, but would never take the field as the Can-Am league announced on 30 March 2009 that the team and the Atlantic City Surf would cease operations.

answer: Wolff indicated the team lacked financial support and "solid ownership" in order for the franchise to continue.

answer: The Ottawa Voyageurs were previously the Ottawa Rapidz. They were a professional baseball team based in Ottawa, Ontario, Canada. They played one season as the Ottawa Rapidz at Ottawa Baseball Stadium, previously home to the Ottawa Lynx Triple-A minor league franchise. They were dissolved and bankruptcy proceedings were planned.

answer: Wolff indicated the team lacked financial support and "solid ownership"

answer: The Ottawa Voyageurs were a professional baseball team based in Ottawa, Canada.

answer: The Ottawa Voyageurs were a professional baseball team based in Ottawa, Ontario, Canada under the Canadian-American Association of Professional Baseball or Can-Am League. The team was previously known as the Ottawa Rapidz. The team played one season as the Ottawa Rapidz at Ottawa Baseball Stadium, previously home to the Ottawa Lynx Triple-A minor league franchise. The team was dissolved in 2009 after the Can-Am league announced the team lacked financial support and “solid ownership” in order for the franchise to continue.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How many sports teams are under the Canadian-American Association of Professional Baseball?

answer: It is not stated.

answer: Not answered.

answer: Not answered.

answer: Only one.

text: It is not stated

answer: There are some.

text: Probably true, but not a useful response; it is not stated


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STANFORD SHEROCK KEGLAR (born July 4, 1985) is an American football linebacker who is currently a free agent. He was drafted by the Tennessee Titans in the fourth round of the 2008 NFL Draft. He played college football at Purdue.

Early years

Stanford Sherock Keglar was born on July 4, 1985 in Indianapolis, Indiana.[1] Playing at Pike High School in Indianapolis, Indiana, he was coached by former Purdue defensive back Ken Coudret.[2] As a junior, he had 72 tackles, four sacks, four fumble recoveries and one interception.[3] During his senior season, Keglar totaled 83 tackles, five sacks, two forced fumbles, two fumble recoveries and one interception.[4] After the season, he was named honorable mention All-State, First-Team All County and First Team All-Conference.[5] He was ranked as the eighth best college football prospect in Indiana and the 26th best linebacker by _Rivals.com_.[6] During his high school years he also participated in track & field as well as swimming and was sectional winner in the 50 freestyle.[7]

College career

2003

Keglar played in only one game as a freshman at Purdue before suffering a high ankle sprain and missing the rest of the season.[8]

2004

During his sophomore year, he started all 12 games.[9] Keglar recorded 61 tackles, three pass breakups, and one forced fumble.[10] Against Notre Dame he had a career high seven tackles.[11]

2005

As a junior, Keglar appeared in 10 games, starting six.[12] He ranked fourth on the team with 50 tackles and added one sack and a pass breakup.[13] On September 17 against Arizona he equaled his career high with seven tackles.[14]

2006

Appearing in all 14 games and starting 10 as a senior at Purdue, Keglar had 69 tackles, five pass breakups, one interception, one forced fumble and a fumble recovery.[15] Keglar broke his career high in tackles with 10 against Ball State.[16] He had a team high nine tackles in the Champs Sports Bowl against Maryland.[17]

Professional career

Tennessee Titans

Keglar was drafted by the Tennessee Titans in the fourth round of the 2008 NFL Draft. He was signed on July 15, 2008.[18] In 13 games as a rookie he totaled 12 tackles.[19] On September 5, 2010, Keglar was waived by Tennessee.

Houston Texans

Keglar signed with the Houston Texans on October 25, 2010. He was cut on September 3, 2011.

Minnesota Vikings

Keglar was signed by the Vikings on May 29, 2013. He was cut on June 27, 2013.

Vikings re-signed Keglar again on August 6, 2013 after cutting Nathan Williams.[20] Keglar was again released by the Vikings on August 26, 2013 (along with 12 others) to get to a 75-man roster.[21]

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title: Stanford Keglar

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize possible negative moments in Keglar's career.

answer: Stanford Keglar was injured in his freshman year at Purdue and did not play in many games during his first three seasons. During his final season at Purdue, he ranked fourth on the team in tackles and had a few significant errors. He was subsequently waived by the Tennessee Titans and later signed by the Houston Texans and Minnesota Vikings. Keglar has seen limited success in the NFL so far and has had several setbacks.

text: Both of those teams subsequently cut him

refinement: Stanford Keglar was injured in his freshman year at Purdue and did not play in many games during his first three seasons. During his final season at Purdue, he ranked fourth on the team in tackles and had a few significant errors. He was subsequently waived by the Tennessee Titans and later signed by the Houston Texans and Minnesota Vikings, only for both teams to cut him. Keglar has seen limited success in the NFL so far and has had several setbacks.

text: This could be a positive thing

refinement: Stanford Keglar was injured in his freshman year at Purdue and did not play in many games during his first three seasons. During his final season at Purdue, he had a few significant errors. He was subsequently waived by the Tennessee Titans and later signed by the Houston Texans and Minnesota Vikings, only for both teams to cut him. Keglar has seen limited success in the NFL so far and has had several setbacks.

answer: While Keglar was a freshman at Purdue, he suffered an ankle sprain and missed the rest of the football season after one game. In September 2010, he was released by the Tennessee Titans. After less than a year, he was cut by the Houston Texans in September 2011. In 2013, he was signed and cut by the Vikings in less than a month. They signed him again in the same year, but again cut him in less than a month.

answer: Keglar broke his ankle in one game in college during his freshman year. Two weeks later he had another injury to his shoulder. Keglar has been cut four times in his professional career. He was also cuttwice in 2013.

text: Coherence. "Cut twice" is two words.

refinement: Keglar broke his ankle in one game in college during his freshman year. Two weeks later he had another injury to his shoulder. Keglar has been cut four times in his professional career. He was also cut twice in 2013.

text: This should probably say where he was cut

refinement: Keglar broke his ankle in one game in college during his freshman year. Two weeks later he had another injury to his shoulder. In September 2010, he was released by the Tennessee Titans. After less than a year, he was cut by the Houston Texans in September 2011. In 2013, he was signed and cut by the Vikings in less than a month. They signed him again in the same year, but again cut him in less than a month.

text: No mention of the shoulder injury

refinement: Keglar broke his ankle in one game in college during his freshman year. In September 2010, he was released by the Tennessee Titans. After less than a year, he was cut by the Houston Texans in September 2011. In 2013, he was signed and cut by the Vikings in less than a month. They signed him again in the same year, but again cut him in less than a month.

answer: He ended his college career being cut by the Titans and the Vikings in consecutive years. He was signed to at least five different teams across a 5 year career, with varying amounts of success. He was only ranked at the 26th best linebacker in the state of Indiana when drafted in 2008. This means that players at the same or grand rankings exist on their teams.

text: Add in the ankle injury in Freshman year

refinement: Keglar broke his ankle in one game in college during his freshman year. He ended his college career being cut by the Titans and the Vikings in consecutive years. He was signed to at least five different teams across a 5 year career, with varying amounts of success. He was only ranked at the 26th best linebacker in the state of Indiana when drafted in 2008. This means that players at the same or grand rankings exist on their teams.

text: It's not clear that this was in 2008 or that it was necessarily bad

refinement: Keglar broke his ankle in one game in college during his freshman year. He ended his college career being cut by the Titans and the Vikings in consecutive years. He was signed to at least five different teams across a 5 year career, with varying amounts of success.

text: He was signed on to three teams, the Tennessee Titans, The Texans and the Vikings

refinement: Keglar broke his ankle in one game in college during his freshman year. His professional career was little better. In September 2010, he was released by the Tennessee Titans. After less than a year, he was cut by the Houston Texans in September 2011. In 2013, he was signed and cut by the Vikings in less than a month. They signed him again in the same year, but again cut him in less than a month.

answer: Stanford Sherock Keglar has had a number of struggles throughout his professional career. Although he started 12 games as a sophomore at Purdue, he proved to be inconsistent, only starting six games as a junior. He had an injury as a freshman and spent most of his time on the bench as a rookie with the Tennessee Titans. He struggled to make the team in Houston, Minnesota, and again with the Vikings and was released multiple times.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Keglar's high school years.

answer: His high school years consisted of him participating in, track & field and swimming. As a competitor in sports, he was sectional winner in the 50 freestyle. During his high school years, he played football and was trained by former Purdue defensive back, Ken Coudret.

text: Add in more data about his college years

refinement: Keglar participated in football, track and field, and swimming during his time at Pike High School in Indianapolis, Indiana. During his junior year football season, he had 72 tackles, four sacks, four fumble recoveries, and one interception. In his senior season, he had 83 tackles, five sacks, two forced fumbles, two fumble recoveries, and one interception.  After this season he was named honorable mention All State, First Team All County, First Team All Conference, ranked the eighth best college football prospect in Indiana, and ranked 26th best linebacker. During his high school years, he played football and was trained by former Purdue defensive back, Ken Coudret.

answer: Keglar played high school football at Pike High School in Indianapolis, Indiana. He was a First-Team All-Conference player, honorable mention All-State, and ranked the 26th best linebacker by Rivals.com. Keglar sustained a high ankle sprain during his freshman year but played all 12 games in 2004, recording 61 tackles and one forced fumble. He was a starter in his junior and senior years, recording 50 and 69 tackles respectively.

text: This is information about his college years

refinement: Keglar played high school football at Pike High School in Indianapolis, Indiana. He was a First-Team All-Conference player, honorable mention All-State, and ranked the 26th best linebacker by Rivals.com.

text: More data about his college years is necessary

refinement: Keglar participated in football, track and field, and swimming during his time at Pike High School in Indianapolis, Indiana. During his junior year football season, he had 72 tackles, four sacks, four fumble recoveries, and one interception. In his senior season, he had 83 tackles, five sacks, two forced fumbles, two fumble recoveries, and one interception.  After this season he was named honorable mention All State, First Team All County, First Team All Conference, ranked the eighth best college football prospect in Indiana, and ranked 26th best linebacker. During his high school years, he played football and was trained by former Purdue defensive back, Ken Coudret.

answer: Keglar attended Pike High School in Indianapolis, Indiana where he played both football and track and field. During his senior year, Keglar was named honorable mention All-State, First-Team All County, and First Team All-Conference. He had 72 tackles, four sacks, four fumble recoveries, and one interception as a junior. Keglar was drafted by the Tennessee Titans in the fourth round of the 2008 NFL Draft.

text: This is not related to high school

refinement: Keglar attended Pike High School in Indianapolis, Indiana where he played both football and track and field. During his senior year, Keglar was named honorable mention All-State, First-Team All County, and First Team All-Conference. He had 72 tackles, four sacks, four fumble recoveries, and one interception as a junior.

text: Mention that he was trained by Ken Coudret

refinement: Keglar participated in football, track and field, and swimming during his time at Pike High School in Indianapolis, Indiana. During his junior year football season, he had 72 tackles, four sacks, four fumble recoveries, and one interception. In his senior season, he had 83 tackles, five sacks, two forced fumbles, two fumble recoveries, and one interception.  After this season he was named honorable mention All State, First Team All County, First Team All Conference, ranked the eighth best college football prospect in Indiana, and ranked 26th best linebacker. During his high school years, he played football and was trained by former Purdue defensive back, Ken Coudret.

answer: Keglar participated in football, track and field, and swimming during his time at Pike High School in Indianapolis, Indiana. During his junior year football season, he had 72 tackles, four sacks, four fumble recoveries, and one interception. In his senior season, he had 83 tackles, five sacks, two forced fumbles, two fumble recoveries, and one interception.  After this season he was named honorable mention All State, First Team All County, First Team All Conference, ranked the eighth best college football prospect in Indiana, and ranked 26th best linebacker.

text: Mention that he was trained by Ken Coudret

refinement: Keglar participated in football, track and field, and swimming during his time at Pike High School in Indianapolis, Indiana. During his junior year football season, he had 72 tackles, four sacks, four fumble recoveries, and one interception. In his senior season, he had 83 tackles, five sacks, two forced fumbles, two fumble recoveries, and one interception.  After this season he was named honorable mention All State, First Team All County, First Team All Conference, ranked the eighth best college football prospect in Indiana, and ranked 26th best linebacker. During his high school years, he played football and was trained by former Purdue defensive back, Ken Coudret.

answer: In his junior year, Keglar totaled 83 tackles, five sacks, two forced fumbles, two fumble recoveries, and one interception during his senior year his team won the conference. He was ranked as the 26th best linebacker. He also participated in track and field as well as swimming.

text: Mention that he was trained by Ken Coudret

refinement: Keglar participated in football, track and field, and swimming during his time at Pike High School in Indianapolis, Indiana. During his junior year football season, he had 72 tackles, four sacks, four fumble recoveries, and one interception. In his senior season, he had 83 tackles, five sacks, two forced fumbles, two fumble recoveries, and one interception.  After this season he was named honorable mention All State, First Team All County, First Team All Conference, ranked the eighth best college football prospect in Indiana, and ranked 26th best linebacker. During his high school years, he played football and was trained by former Purdue defensive back, Ken Coudret.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Keglar's best football season in college.

answer: Keglar had 83 tackles, five sacks, two forced fumbles, two fumble recoveries, and one interception during his senior season at Purdue.

text: Add in how many games he started

refinement: Keglar had 83 tackles, five sacks, two forced fumbles, two fumble recoveries, and one interception during his senior season at Purdue. He appeared in 14 games and started 10.

text: Add in his team high in tackles

refinement: Keglar had 83 tackles, five sacks, two forced fumbles, two fumble recoveries, and one interception during his senior season at Purdue. He appeared in 14 games and started 10. He had a team high nine tackles in the Champs Sports Bowl against Maryland, and broke his career high in tackles with 10 against Ball State.

answer: During his senior season at Purdue, Keglar totaled 69 tackles, five pass breakups, one interception, one forced fumble, and a fumble recovery.

text: Add in the fact that he appeared in all 14 games

refinement: During his senior season at Purdue, Keglar totaled 69 tackles, five pass breakups, one interception, one forced fumble, and a fumble recovery. He appeared in all 14 games and starting 10

text: Discuss the team high he had

refinement: During his senior season at Purdue, Keglar totaled 69 tackles, five pass breakups, one interception, one forced fumble, and a fumble recovery. He appeared in all 14 games and starting 10. He had a team high nine tackles in the Champs Sports Bowl against Maryland, and broke his career high in tackles with 10 against Ball State.

answer: Keglar had the most tackles in 2005, recording 50 tackles and added one sack and a pass breakup. In the season against Arizona, he also equaled his career high with seven tackles.

text: His junior year was not his best season

text: Add in information about his senior year

refinement: Keglar's best football season in college occurred during his senior year. He appeared in all 14 games and starting 10. He had 69 tackles, five pass breakups, one interception, one forced fumble, and a fumble recovery. He had a team high nine tackles in the Champs Sports Bowl against Maryland, and broke his career high in tackles with 10 against Ball State.

answer: Keglar's best football season in college occurred during his senior year. He appeared in all 14 games and starting 10. He had 69 tackles, five pass breakups, one interception, one forced fumble, and a fumble recovery. He had a team high nine tackles in the Champs Sports Bowl against Maryland, and broke his career high in tackles with 10 against Ball State.

answer: As a sophomore, Keglar recorded 61 tackles, three pass breakups, and one forced fumble in his 12 games. This career-high nine as a senior was from his 10 games played.

text: His best season was his senior year

text: Add in information about his senior year

refinement: Keglar's best football season in college occurred during his senior year. He appeared in all 14 games and starting 10. He had 69 tackles, five pass breakups, one interception, one forced fumble, and a fumble recovery. He had a team high nine tackles in the Champs Sports Bowl against Maryland, and broke his career high in tackles with 10 against Ball State.