text:
The last two days had been very strange for me. I killed a man on a psycho’s lawn, and the next day, the psycho came into my office and asked if I would like to eat lunch with him. He seemed to be acting perfectly normal. I noticed his speech pattern had changed as well. He wasn’t saying “ya” or swearing anymore. Something was off. Or maybe Noah had just realized how messed what we had done was.
I put it out of my mind, and started to enjoy myself. Noah was actually very intelligent and funny. He must have been intelligent from the start, I concluded, he is a lawyer after all. He was probably just drunk for the last week. I chuckled at the thought.
We finished up our lunch, and headed out to my car. Noah said he had left his phone at my office, so I offered to take him there before I took him home. He thanked me in an uncharacteristically gratuitous way. However, I didn’t sense anything was amiss, and we got in.
Big mistake. The minute I got in the car, Noah pulled out what looked like an ingot, and bashed me across the head with it.
I woke up in a small, cramped room that I recognized as the interior of Noah’s shed.
“Took you long enough,” said Noah in a cold voice. “What the fuck?” I demanded.
“I can’t have another murderer taking advantage of Noah, now can I,” he said in that cold voice, “No, I’m going to have to kill you I suppose.”
“What? No! Noah, you don’t have to do this. I’m not going to tell anybody, you can let me go.” I knew he wasn’t going to.
“Noah’s not here right now. If you’d like to leave a message, please don’t. I screen his calls.”
Noah had finally snapped. The bastard was crazy.
I tried to reason with him, “C’mon Noah. You know you don’t have to do this!”
“I TOLD YOU I’M NOT NOAH!”
“If you’re not Noah, who are you then?”
“BELLUA.”
No. It couldn’t be. Noah had talked about Bellua so much, but always acted as Bellua was a friend or something. I finally put the pieces together.
“Yes, I can see the truth has finally dawned on you,” Noah/Bellua drawled, “Frankly, I don’t see how an idiot like you became a neurosurgeon. Let me explain it to you. I’m the original Noah. The Noah you know is simply a second personality of mine. Noah was born after I was caught in an explosion. That’s why he is so fixated on fire. I’ve been this way for as long as I can remember, but now that I have the Other Noah, it is so much easier for me to cleanse this disgusting society. The Other Noah agrees. He doesn’t have my capacity, so he uses fire as his tool. It’s crude but it works. Why, just recently he managed to rid society of a bartender who was a serial rapist. I’m much more dedicated however. I take out the real sickos. Like you. And Other Noah will dispose of your body. You pretend to kill only bad people, but what about the little girl who you kidnapped and did unspeakable things to? What about the man you decapitated for fun? ANSWER ME? Why’d did you do it? Did you have any reason? NO! I may be a monster, but I know that! People like you, who pretend to be infallible, make me sick!”
My cheeks were so cold. I couldn’t believe it. How did he know all this?
I knew I was going to die. I began to say an Our Father.
“YES. This reaction. I love it!” Noah/Bellua bellowed, “The ‘prayer,’ as if pretending to repent to an entity you’ve never believed in will make it all better. Using religion as a fair-weather friendship with God, I love it! But why bother praying to God now? I control your life now: I am your God. Pray to me!”
I said nothing. Noah/Bellua began to pace, muttering something under his breath.
“What?” I said.
“Squares!” He murmured a little louder,
I realized what he was doing: getting ready to kill me. Finally, I closed my eyes, went limp,  and gave up.
But he wouldn’t let me do that. He yanked up into a sitting position forcefully, and suddenly I felt metal being pressed down, then a sharp pain in the back of my neck. He wouldn’t stop. It felt like he was cutting something out. When he finished, he showed me what he had done. The square piece of my skin he had cut out was dripping with my blood.
“And now, I must bid you adieu,” Noah/Bellua whispered into my ear. And all was dark.

title: Bellua (Original Short Story by Me) p.3 Rust (Final Part)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the narrator?

answer: The narrator and Noah are colleagues and friends. While Noah is often drunk, the narrator forgets that Noah is dangerously unpredictable. After killing a man on Noah's lawn, Noah, except he's not Noah, but Bellua, abducts and kills the narrator, who is already praying to God for help because of that.

text: The answer talks about Noah and the narrator instead of focusing on the narrator as the question asks. Also, the answer has fabricated claims and other inaccuracies.

refinement: The narrator is a murderer with psychopathic tendencies - murder, torture, or worse. He killed someone with a fellow murderer Noah, who has a second personality (Bellua), which allows them to kidnap and get rid of the narrator.

answer: The narrator and Noah are colleagues and friends, having worked at a legal office. While Noah is often drunk, the narrator forgets that Noah is dangerously unpredictable. After killing a man on Noah's lawn, Noah, except he's not Noah, but Bellua, abducts and kills the narrator, who is already praying to God for help because of that.

answer: The narrator seems to be a narcissist that looks down upon society and thinks he is better than everyone due to his accomplishments. Noah says the narrator is Better Than Them. He does appalling things because he enjoyed it. The narrator tries to reason with Noah to be rational, but things get worse. He does pray instead of doing anything to save himself so that's probably when Noah killed him for amusement at how useless prayer is. Noah insinuates that the narrator was involved in the disappearance of a little girl.

text: The answer is wrong in almost every way. A new answer should be written.

refinement: The narrator is a murderer with psychopathic tendencies - murder, torture, or worse. He killed someone with a fellow murderer Noah, who has a second personality (Bellua), which allows them to kidnap and get rid of the narrator.

answer: The narrator seems to be a narcissist that looks down upon society and thinks he is better than everyone due to his accomplishments.

answer: Noah comes back later claiming to be a villain. He had previously appeared dissheveled, but cleaned up a bit before coming to the narrator's office. The narrator begs to be let go when Noah first says that he is going to kill him, but is not able to because whatever personality is currently inhabiting Noah is committed to his own personality. In the end, the narrator realizes that Noah is not the original, but a split personality of the villain's, Bellua.

answer: Noah comes back later claiming to be a villain. He had previously appeared dissheveled, but cleaned up a bit before coming to the narrator's office. The narrator begs to be let go when Noah first says that he is going to kill him, but is not able to because whatever personality is currently inhabiting Noah is committed to his own personality. In the end, the narrator realises that Noah is not a villain and Bellua is.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Noah?

answer: Noah had been acting weird for the last week in the text, but now he seemed to be acting like a normal person.

text: The answer omits the murder together with the narrator, the reveal about Noah's true past, his knowledge about the narrator's misdeeds, and Noah murdering the narrator.

refinement: The narrator and Noah killed a man. Noah had been acting weird for the last week in the text, but now he seemed to be acting like a normal person. However, he knocked out the narrator and took him to his shed, tying him up. He revealed that his name is Bellua now, but he's the original Noah. The one the narrator met is his second personality born in a fire. Noah claims to take out "real sickos" like the narrator and seemingly knows about the narrator's gruesome misdeeds. Then, he kills the narrator.

text: The behavioral change of Noah is expressed awkwardly.

refinement: The narrator and Noah killed a man. Noah invited the narrator to lunch, acting in a completely different manner, but the narrator decided not to pay too much attention to that. However, he knocked out the narrator and took him to his shed, tying him up. He revealed that his name is Bellua now, but he's the original Noah. The one the narrator met is his second personality born in a fire. Noah claims to take out "real sickos" like the narrator and seemingly knows about the narrator's gruesome misdeeds. Then, he kills the narrator.

answer: Noah asks a man to have lunch with him and calls him "annoying" for bringing up the time he killed a man on the psycho's lawn because he thought Noah was acting strangely. The lunch ends and he pulls a soul-powering artifact from his jacket and blackmails the narrator. It's implied that he's the pure evil type of serial killer.

text: The answer is almost all made up.

text: The answer is empty.

refinement: The narrator and Noah killed a man. Noah invited the narrator to lunch, acting in a completely different manner, but the narrator decided not to pay too much attention to that. However, he knocked out the narrator and took him to his shed, tying him up. He revealed that his name is Bellua now, but he's the original Noah. The one the narrator met is his second personality born in a fire. Noah claims to take out "real sickos" like the narrator and seemingly knows about the narrator's gruesome misdeeds. Then, he kills the narrator.

answer: Noah was a lawyer who had become cold and obsessed with fire after an explosion. He often talked to Dr. Rust about Bellua, who, he believed, was a friend. One day, Noah shows up at the doctor's office and asks him to have lunch with him. The doctor, taken aback by Noah's friendliness and language change, is going to take Noah back to his office before he takes him home, but Noah pulls out a metal cylinder and hit Dr. Rust in the head.

text: The answer is made up completely.

text: The answer is empty.

refinement: The narrator and Noah killed a man. Noah invited the narrator to lunch, acting in a completely different manner, but the narrator decided not to pay too much attention to that. However, he knocked out the narrator and took him to his shed, tying him up. He revealed that his name is Bellua now, but he's the original Noah. The one the narrator met was his second personality born in a fire. Noah claims to take out "real sickos" like the narrator and seemingly knew about the narrator's gruesome misdeeds. Then, he killed the narrator.

answer: Noah murdered a man and the narrator. The narrator had noticed how Noah had started acting normal, was funny and intelligent, and he had been acting more regular since the two killed a man together. Noah technically had no change in speech pattern, but the narrator decided it must just because he had been drunk the entire week prior and his tired wig came off. Noah handed the narrator his phone at the end of the day. He told the narrator he had left it and the narrator was nice to offer to take him back to his office and his home. However they end up in the narrator's car after he arrived at his office and he bashed the narrator with an unknown object on the head. The narrator woke up in Noah's small, cramped room where Noah revealed he is the real Noah and he has another personality. The narrator realizes Noah and Bellua have been the same person all along.

text: The answer is jumbled, out of order, and has made-up details here and there.

text: The answer is empty.

refinement: The narrator and Noah killed a man. Noah invited the narrator to lunch, acting in a completely different manner, but the narrator decided not to pay too much attention to that. However, he knocked out the narrator and took him to his shed, tying him up. He revealed that his name is Bellua now, but he's the original Noah. The one the narrator met was his second personality born in a fire. Noah claims to take out "real sickos" like the narrator and seemingly knew about the narrator's gruesome misdeeds. Then, he killed the narrator.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what happens to the narrator at the end of the story.

answer: Noah/Bellua reveals that he is not really Noah and that he's been watching him for a long time. He kidnaps the narrator, and puts me under a sharp object in the back of his neck. The narrator tries to pray and uses religion as a way to pretend to get through. But Noah doesn't take it that way and cuts a small piece of skin from the narrator's neck. He then whispers, "And now, I must bid you adieu." This presumably kills the narrator.

text: Noah reveals his split personality and seems to know about the narrator's misdeeds. This is expressed inaccurately in the answer.

refinement: Noah reveals his new name to be Bellua, saying the man who met the narrator is a split personality of his. Noah seems to know about the narrator's heinous acts. He kidnaps the narrator, and puts me under a sharp object in the back of his neck. The narrator tries to pray and uses religion as a way to pretend to get through. But Noah doesn't take it that way and cuts a small piece of skin from the narrator's neck. He then whispers, "And now, I must bid you adieu." This presumably kills the narrator.

text: The scene where Noah kills the narrator is expressed very awkwardly.

refinement: Noah reveals his new name to be Bellua, saying the man who met the narrator is a split personality of his. Noah seems to know about the narrator's heinous acts. He gets pissed when the narrator begins to pray, exclaiming that he has the final say over the narrator's life. Noah cuts off a square piece of skin from the narrator's neck before killing him.

answer: The narrator is interrogated by the "original" Noah. It becomes apparent Noah was split in two: The good, kind-hearted portion of his personality called "Noah" and the evil, sadistic portion Bellua. Bellua kills the narrator.

text: Noah's split personality is expressed inaccurately.

refinement: The narrator is interrogated by the "original" Noah. It becomes apparent Noah has a split personality, which was born in a fire. The original calls himself Bellua now, and it was the new Noah the narrator met. Bellua kills the narrator.

text: Noah doesn't interrogate the narrator. He kidnaps him and rants at him, but the interaction isn't about questioning the narrator.

refinement: The narrator is kidnapped by the "original" Noah, who seems to know about the narrator's misdeeds. It becomes apparent Noah has a split personality, which was born in a fire. The original calls himself Bellua now, and it was the new Noah the narrator met. Bellua kills the narrator.

answer: Noah/Bellua responds, "And now, I must bid you adieu," and all went dark. The narrator feels a piece of his skin being cut out.

text: The events mentioned in the answer are in the wrong chronological order.

refinement: The narrator feels a piece of his skin being cut out. Noah/Bellua responds, "And now, I must bid you adieu," and all went dark.

text: The tense isn't coherent in the answer.

refinement: The narrator feels a piece of his skin being cut out. Noah/Bellua responds, "And now, I must bid you adieu," and all goes dark.

text: The answer omits the context in which Noah kills the narrator.

refinement: Noah reveals his knowledge about the narrator's heinous acts, saying that he takes out "real sickos" like the narrator. The narrator feels a piece of his skin being cut out. Noah/Bellua responds, "And now, I must bid you adieu," and all goes dark.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize how the narrator and Noah met.

answer: No answer

answer: The narrator accidentally kills a man on Noah's lawn and Noah invites them to lunch the next day.

text: They seem to have met around the time of their murder together, but the story doesn't recount the events.

answer: Noah and the narrator meet at an office-meeting called Bellua.

text: The answer is nonsensical and made-up. There's no mention of how they met.

answer: Noah and the narrator met at an office-meeting called Bellua.

answer: No answer


split: train

text:
The Office Bathroom

So there I was, sitting on the toilet in the bathroom, minding my own business. In walks another patron for one of the other porcelain thrones. He takes the one furthest from me. Minutes go by, no major release from their anus. Meanwhile I am sitting there on Reddit, taking my time as I have already released the majority of my demons.

Suddenly, there is a tremor in the stalls. And what must have been a soft paste explodes from the ars of patron number 2. The kind that makes little popping sounds as it comes out in a medium-thick stream of smelly bile. Pop, pop, poppity pop it went. Followed by what can only be described as a cartoon fart. *BLARRRT* I giggle at the misfortune on this stranger as they may have held that poo to avoid my ridicule. But they failed.

As I proceed to clean myself, it hit me, a smell that is the enemy of any nostril. At first, it came it light waves and was mixed with fresh air, confusing me, not alerting me to the poop scented dangers that would soon approach. I stayed strong and kept my breathing to a minimum. I opened the stall door and ran to the sink. I was safe. I made it out alive. Or so I thought...

I looked myself in the mirror and watched as I gagged on the smell of another's feces. It was a silent gag, the kind that only makes your eyes water and your stomach churn. The water flowing from the faucet, my mind racing with images of rotten chocolate pudding.

At last, the soap was off of my hands and I made my way to the towel dispenser, dispensing several towels. I dried my hands and left the bathroom as quickly as I could, stomach in shambles and eyes a glazed over with pain.

title: The Office Bathroom

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: On his day at the office, the narrator gets into trouble when the 10-minute dump of someone in the next stall lingers for 15 minutes too long.

text: The narrator does not "get into trouble" their sense of smell is effected.

refinement: On his day at the office, the narrator is disgusted when the smell of a 10-minute dump of someone in the next stall lingers for 15 minutes too long.

text: It is not 15 minutes.

refinement: On his day at the office, the narrator is disgusted when the smell of a 10-minute dump of someone in the next stall lingers for too long.

answer: The narrator notices another person in the bathroom farting, and profusely apologizes to the other person after evacuating their bowels.

text: The narrator does not apologize, they are disgusted.

refinement: The narrator notices another person in the bathroom farting as they poop, and they are disgusted by the smell.

answer: The narrator describes always sitting with their Reddit in the bathroom until another patron starts to have a few slimy farts, causing the bathroom to smell.

answer: The boy relates an experience of when he was sitting on the toilet around someone in another stall with an odiferous bowel movement.

answer: The narrator witnessed another toilet user have an unpleasant experience while using the men's toilet at the office.

text: The experience is unpleasant for the narrator.

refinement: The narrator witnessed another toilet user leave an unpleasant smell while using the men's toilet at the office.

answer: The narrator goes into a public bathroom, sits on the toilet, and enjoys internet surfing. Meanwhile, someone sitting in the stall near her drops a load loud enough for her to hear.

text: The poop is smelly

refinement: The narrator goes into a public bathroom, sits on the toilet, and enjoys internet surfing. Meanwhile, someone sitting in the stall near her drops a load that is smelly.


text:
If you play by the rules, it will only keep you out of trouble. I am in trouble. Tonight is my last night working for Multiple Services. I have not been fired yet, but when my supervisor reads the email I sent her in the morning, I will be fired for sure – I am sure of it.

I used to do security at the Pearl district but I was recently transferred to American Plaza Towers. My new manager has a different set of standards. My dark brown boots being one of them – security 'officers' are supposed to wear black boots. But that's not the problem.

Tonight I am on shift with Emily, the graveyard guard. I am working the D shift, which intersects with her shift. I am not with her right now. Her shift has a lot more responsibilities than mine. I am in the lounge room, lounging. I don't need to worry about doing any checks because she has the 'snitch stick' – it's a little stick we poke into little tags that prove that we are working.  I am at low risk of being caught in here, the lounge room is closed during this time of night. It doesn't matter what I do. I will be fired in the morning anyway.

Currently Emily is doing some tower checks. She is only required to do one tower check a night, but she does multiple for 'brownie points'. No one ever gets promoted. Well, unless someone gets fired or dies or quits. A lot of people recently got fired because... 'they are not with us anymore' says Gerry, the supervisor at APC. Emily was not at liberty to tell me why, but it has something to do with 'vices'.

I needed to take a shit. I was already in the lounge room so the bathroom was so close I basically just took my pants down. My ass wouldn’t cooperate with me —the last little bit hung in between my butt cheeks like a hand trying to catch a dollar bill falling to the ground. I hate this, being forced into vulgarity; I want to let go of the turd. My butt thinks the turd is valuable, I guess.

 The women's bathroom next to me started making noise. Emily must be relieving herself as well. I finished long after she did. I left the bathroom unclean because the toilet finally clogged.  Maintenance can handle it in the morning, fuck it. When I left, I saw Emily at the exit of the room, holding the door open waiting for me to leave. I walked out, uncomfortably — I didn't wipe enough. She locked the door behind us.

I entered the elevator. She joined me. I pressed the button to the basement with plans to hang out in a storage room and read. She pressed the button to the 26th floor and I got caught into doing a tower check with her. She invited me to smoke some cigarettes on the roof and talk. I don't smoke, but it sounded like a good offer.

“So how do you like it so far?” She asked.

“The elevator ride?”

“The job.”

“oh... uh, well...” I stalled, “APC lives up to it's reputation.”

“Ah, yes. You need not say more.”

There was a long silence that was only broken with a 'ding' each time we passed a floor.

“So,” I finally said, “What do the people in these condominiums do for a living?”

“Most of them are retired. That's why there are so many care givers here. But one of them I know sells stuff on Ebay. The guy never went to college and he quit his job to start up a business."

Some nerve, I thought.

"These people are all rich," she said, "somehow or another. Each time you hear that ding, the price of a room goes up."

There was a small stair case past the breezeway on the top floor that led to a freshly painted door that was bent out of shape. This door led to the roof.  She told me the correct key was the square key. I fumbled with my set for a while and found it. I attempted to open the door and she told me the key to opening the door is to shout the correct sequence of curse words. After a few moments, I understood what she meant. I was not saying the right words. She got her key out and did it in a snap.

“I've been here a while,” she said, “you get used to it.”

I wasn't used to smoking but  I really like the motions it conduces with my hand. I told her that's the only thing I like about smoking. She said that's what got her into it.

I stared out at the skyline of the city, at the skyscrapers that reach so high into society – to heights I admit I will never achieve. The view was almost worth it. I won't be able to pay for college after tonight.

“Gerry is probably going to fire me tomorrow.”

“Why?”

“She wants my DPSST card number, but I don't have it... I... lost it....”

“Well, you can just call in to get the number, right? It's in the system."

“I don't have my card.”

“Huh... I'll just go ahead and say I didn't hear you say that when she brings it up.” We took some drags. “I don't want to be here forever, you know," she said finally.

“You don't say.”

“Yeah, some people stay here for years. This job is perfect for people like you... who want to get through college. But after two or three years, it's like, what are you doing with your life?”

“What do you want to do with your life?”

“I used to go to college, but I stopped taking courses because I didn't feel like they were taking me anywhere. The guy down at Plaid Pantry has a masters degree in engineering. Right now I try to come up with something new every night and research if it's been done before. It usually has.  Basically, the way I look at it, entrepreneurism is the only way to make it in this world now. My dad has this business, it's pretty successful. Basically, he helps other people be successful.”

“Nice. Why don't you get him to help you?”

“We're not on good terms... he just wants me to successful... I'm just a security guard..." We took some drags. "The choice here is you can do a side project and hope it turns into something... or, what else are you going to do?”

“We should probably finish this tower check.”

“Right.”

We started down the tower, checking every floor. I shifted my underwear around, but it was no use. I walked uncomfortably the whole way down. Just gotta pull through.

Half way down the tower, there was a place to tag the snitch stick. Emily brought up some statistic that the vast majority of Americans all believe that some day they will all be rich, that's why they all don't support the dynasty tax. I said that was nice and waited for the chance to lounge in the lounge room again.

It was the end of my shift — the last few minutes of my having a job. As I left, I said, “see ya”. I didn't look back and would probably never see her again, but I heard Emily say “have fun”.

title: What Else Are You Going To Do?

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why does the narrator think they will be fired?

answer: Because they have lost their DPSST card, and Emily confirms that the supervisor is hopeful that they will lose their job.

text: "Emily confirms that the supervisor is hopeful that they will lose their job," is false

refinement: Because they have lost their DPSST card.

text: "'Gerry is probably going to fire me tomorrow.' 'Why?' 'She wants my DPSST card number, but I don't have it.'"

answer: They don't have a DPSST number.

text: "'Gerry is probably going to fire me tomorrow.' 'Why?' 'She wants my DPSST card number, but I don't have it.'"

answer: The narrator was sent to work at a new location and doesn't follow the rules set by their new management. They sent an email to their supervisor, which will likely result in them being fired for insubordination.

text: It's omitted that the narrator believes they'll be fired because they lost their DPSST card.

refinement: The narrator was sent to work at a new location and doesn't follow the rules set by their new management. They sent an email to their supervisor, which will likely result in them being fired for insubordination due to losing their DPSST card.

answer: The narrator was caught in the lounge room during their shift and used the restroom without cleaning it up. The only possible reason for the supervisor's wanting the DPSST card is because of the lack of proof that the narrator is working. The lack of a DPSST card will likely cause them to be fired in the morning.

text: The lounge room and mess in the restroom aren't the reasons the narrator believes they're being fired. It's what they're doing because they believe they're being fired.

refinement: The lack of a DPSST card will likely cause them to be fired in the morning.

text: The second sentence is false and doesn't answer the question.

refinement: The lack of a DPSST card will likely cause them to be fired in the morning.

text: It's omitted that the narrator lost their DPSST card and that's why they believe they'll be fired.

refinement: The narrator believes they'll be fired due to their lack of a DPSST card.

answer: Because they did not change the boots.

text: This is false. The narrator says this is not a reason they're going to be fired. It's because they lost their DPSST card.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the main character do during the day?

answer: They are a student.

text: Since it's not said super explicitly, use "it's likely" in the answer.

text: "I won't be able to pay for college after tonight."

answer: That information is not known.

text: It could be presumed they're a college student because they say "I won't be able to pay for college after tonight".

refinement: It seems the narrator is likely a college student.

answer: The main character lurks the halls of American Plaza Towers as a security guard.

text: This is false because this is what the narrator does at night. They are a night guard. The narrator mentions when they lose this job they won't be able to pay for college, so it could be presumed they're a college student.

refinement: The narrator could be a college student.

answer: The main character is a security guard at an apartment building. Their job is to patrol and do security checks throughout the building. However, the main character does not care about doing their job properly. Instead, they lounge in the lounge room and occasionally do a tower check with Emily, the other guard on shift. The main character's job is in jeopardy as they have lost their DPSST card number, but plans to ignore the problem and hope for the best. The main character is uncertain about what they want to do in their future, but generally agrees with Emily that entrepreneurship is the best way to get ahead in life.

text: This entire answer is incorrect and irrelevant.

text: Blank response. The narrator is likely a college student.

refinement: The narrator is likely a college student.

answer: The main character does security work at an apartment complex. Specifically, the character does security checks of the building premises. The main character has been transferred, resulting in having different standards of work than previous jobs. Additionally, the main character is typically dismissed from work for the night early and the character took the opportunity to use the toilet without cleaning up after themselves. Emily also joined the main character for a short tour of the building and possible smoking. The character also admits the risk of being fired in the morning because they lost their DPSST card number.

text: This entire answer is irrelevant and incorrect.

text: Blank response. It's likely the narrator is a college student.

refinement: It's likely the narrator is a college student.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why is the narrator uncomfortable?

answer: It's likely related to bowel movements

text: " I walked out, uncomfortably — I didn't wipe enough."

answer: The narrator is uncomfortable because they are required to do their job despite knowing that they will be fired in the morning. The environment at the company is not conducive to comfort and security. Additionally, the narrator is uncomfortable because they did not properly take care of the toilet and she does not feel good about it. Lastly, the narrator does not like the fact that she will most likely lose her job. She is uncomfortable because she feels out of place and unsupported.

text: The first, second, fourth and fifth sentence are incorrect. The narrator mentions not cleaning theirself up after the toilet well enough is the source of their discomfort. " I walked out, uncomfortably — I didn't wipe enough."

refinement: The narrator is uncomfortable because they did not properly take care of the toilet and she does not feel good about it.

text: The narrator is a man. He goes to the men's bathroom.

refinement: The narrator is uncomfortable because he did not properly take care of the toilet and he does not feel good about it.

text: Specify that the narrator didn't take care of himself properly after using the toilet.

refinement: The narrator is uncomfortable because he did not properly take care of himself after the toilet and he does not feel good about it.

answer: The narrator is uncomfortable because she is doing work that she isn't properly trained for, despite being told that she must follow the company's rules. She is also uncomfortable because she has accidentally committed an offense and is likely to be fired in the morning.

text: This answer is incorrect. The narrator mentions he's uncomfortable after not cleaning himself up well enough after using the toilet. " I walked out, uncomfortably — I didn't wipe enough."

refinement: The narrator is uncomfortable because he didn't clean himself well enough after using the toilet.

answer: The narrator's boss will probably fire them the next morning.

text: This answer is incorrect. The narrator mentions he's uncomfortable after not cleaning himself up well enough after using the toilet. " I walked out, uncomfortably — I didn't wipe enough."

refinement: He's uncomfortable after not cleaning himself up well enough after using the toilet

answer: They have poop in their pants.

text: " I walked out, uncomfortably — I didn't wipe enough."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does Emily want to do?

answer: She wants to be an entrepreneur.

text: It would be more accurate to say "it's possible" Emily wants to be an entrepreneur because it's not stated explicitly that she wants to be that. She only says it's the best idea. "...the way I look at it, entrepreneurism is the only way to make it in this world now."

refinement: It's possible she wants to be an entrepreneur.

answer: She wants to be an entrepreneur.

text: It would be more accurate to say "it's possible" Emily wants to be an entrepreneur because it's not stated explicitly that she wants to be that. She only says it's the best idea. "...the way I look at it, entrepreneurism is the only way to make it in this world now."

refinement: It's possible she wants to be an entrepreneur.

answer: Emily wants to be an entrepreneur. She feels like there are not many other options at this job and sees it as a perfect place for college students because it can help them get through school. Emily has had a difficult relationship with her father, but sees that entrepreneurship is the way to go in the current environment.

text: It would be more accurate to say "it's possible" Emily wants to be an entrepreneur because it's not stated explicitly that she wants to be that. She only says it's the best idea. "...the way I look at it, entrepreneurism is the only way to make it in this world now."

refinement: It's possible Emily wants to be an entrepreneur. She feels like there are not many other options at this job and sees it as a perfect place for college students because it can help them get through school. Emily has had a difficult relationship with her father, but sees that entrepreneurship is the way to go in the current environment.

text: The second and third sentence are unnecessary.

refinement: It's possible Emily wants to be an entrepreneur.

answer: Start a side hustle to try to make it.

text: Entrepreneurship is omitted.

refinement: It's possible she wants to start a side hustle to try to make it or be an entrepreneur.

text: It would be more accurate to say "it's possible" Emily wants to be an entrepreneur because it's not stated explicitly that she wants to be that. She only says it's the best idea. "...the way I look at it, entrepreneurism is the only way to make it in this world now."

refinement: Start a side hustle to try to make it or be an entrepreneur.

text: "The choice here is you can do a side project and hope it turns into something"

answer: Emily wants to become a successful entrepreneur. She advises the protagonist to explore entrepreneurial opportunities as a way to better their life.

text: It would be more accurate to say "it's possible" Emily wants to be an entrepreneur because it's not stated explicitly that she wants to be that. She only says it's the best idea. "...the way I look at it, entrepreneurism is the only way to make it in this world now."

refinement: It's possible Emily wants to become a successful entrepreneur. She advises the protagonist to explore entrepreneurial opportunities as a way to better their life.

text: The second sentence is unnecessary.

refinement: It's possible Emily wants to become a successful entrepreneur.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The protagonist dreads tomorrow because they know they will be fired. Tonight they are getting an unlikely chance to socialize with their coworker on the top of the APC tower; they talk about their outlook on life. The protagonist realizes that they will likely lose their job in the morning and becomes uncomfortable when they realize their coworker sees their predicament. The two finish their concrete check and the protagonist leaves, realizing they likely won't see their coworker again.

text: This is four instead of one sentence.  The second and third sentence aren't necessarily true in regards to the coworker.

refinement: The protagonist dreads tomorrow because they know they will be fired.

text: It's omitted that the protagonist is a security guard and is on the job, believing it's the last night they'll be working there.

refinement: The protagonist works his security guard job for what they believe is the last time, thinking tomorrow he will be fired.

answer: The security guard realizes that his job is likely to be terminated in the morning after he takes a bathroom break and does not wipe up properly. So, despite his misgivings, he goes on a last tower check with his coworker and discusses what they want to do with their lives. The security guard knows he's likely to be fired and moves forward with resignation.

text: This is three sentences instead of the requested 1.

refinement: The security guard realizes that his job is likely to be terminated in the morning after he takes a bathroom break and does not wipe up properly.

text: The guard doesn't realize his job is going to be terminated, but that he is going to be terminated as an employee.

refinement: The security guard realizes that he is likely to be fired in the morning after he takes a bathroom break and does not wipe up properly.

text: Wiping properly is not why the guard believes he's going to be fired. It's because he lost his DPSST card.

refinement: The security guard realizes that he is likely to be fired in the morning because he's lost his DPSST card.

text: It's omitted that the guard is working his last shift.

refinement: The security guard works what he thinks is his last shift as he realizes that he is likely to be fired in the morning because he's lost his DPSST card.

answer: A security guard explains why he's going to get fired.

answer: This story's protagonist works security detail at a skyscraper.

text: It's omitted that the protagonist is detailing what he believes is his last night on the job due to suspecting he will be fired the next day.

refinement: This story's protagonist works security detail at a skyscraper, and detailing what he believes is his last night on the job due to suspicions he will be fired the next day. .

answer: The story is about a college student on their first night of being a security guard, who is certain they will be fired because they do not have accreditation.

text: They are on what they believe is their last night, not their first.

refinement: The story is about a college student on what they believe is their last night of being a security guard, who is certain they will be fired because they do not have accreditation.

text: "who is" should be "as they are"

refinement: The story is about a college student on what they believe is their last night of being a security guard, as they are certain they will be fired because they do not have accreditation.


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_Dynamo FC_ is a Ghanaian football club, based in Ho in the Volta Region. The club is a Division One team currently competing in zone 3 of GN Bank Division One League.[1] They play their home matches at the Ho Sports Stadium.

History

The club was founded in the year 2006. Initially, the club took active part in juvenile league before graduating to take part in the Ho Municipal Division 3 League in 2008. After just one season, they earned promotion to play in the Volta Regional Division 2 League. They played in the Division 2 League for six seasons. After coming close on so many occasions to making it to the Division 1 League, they finally made it in 2016.[2]

Qualification to Division One League.

In December 2016 after finishing top of their zone in the Volta Regional Division 2 League ahead of fierce rivals _Home Stars FC,_ the club had to battle out with other zone winners in the region in the Volta Region Division 2 Middle League which consists of four teams. After a hard fought 1-0 win over _Nadm SC_ in their opening match, Dynamo lost their subsequent match against Juapong All Stars by the same scoreline. In their third and final match, Dynamo beat Narita F.C 4-1 with striker Johnson Nawanyo scoring a hat trick. Dynamo finished the league on six points, second behind Juapong All Stars only on head-to-head rule. However, the team launched series of protests against the Juapong based club. The Volta Regional Regional FA ruled in favour of Dynamo thus promoting them to the Ghana Division One league.

Division One

Dynamo made their Division One league debut on February 19, 2017 against Accra based side Vision FC which they lost 2-1.[3] Their first win came at home on 1 March 2017, a 2-1 victory against Amidaus Professional.[4]

Players

Sponsorship

The Club has been supported by KickStart Ghana, an NGO which supports education and sports.[5]

KickStart Ghana provides volunteer football coaches to help with running the team as well as grants for equipment, hospital costs, referee’s fees, league fees travel and subsistence for the teams on match days.

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title: Ho Dynamo FC

question: What city is Dynamo FC from?

answer: Ho, in the Volta Region.

answer: Ho in the Volta Region

text: Add a comma and a period

answer: It is from where the football club was founded.

text: Failed to answer the question. Complete rewrite needed.

refinement: The club is from Ho, in the Volta Region.

question: List the sponsorships Dynamo FC has received.

answer: They have been supported by KickStart Ghana

text: Remove "They have been supported by"

answer: Kickstart Ghana.

answer: KickStart Ghana, an NGO

question: What league does Dynamo FC belong to?

answer: Dynamo FC shares membership to the Volta regional Division 2 League.

text: Dynamo FC used to compete in the regional Division 2 League and belongs to the GN Bank Division One League now.

refinement: Dynamo FC belongs to the GN Bank Division One League.

answer: The club is a Division One team currently competing in zone 3 of GN Bank Division One League.

answer: The GN Bank Division One League

question: When was Dynamo FC founded?

answer: 2006

answer: The exact founding year of Dynamo FC is not mentioned in the passage, but the team was founded in 2006.

text: The model contradicted itself by saying the founding year isn't mentioned, only to say the correct answer.

refinement: The exact founding year of Dynamo FC is not mentioned in the passage, but the team was founded in 2006.

answer: Dynamo FC was founded in 2006, and in the same year, they competed in the Volta Regional Division 2 League. In the years to follow, they competed in the Division 2 League competing in Volta Region Division 2 League in 2012 before finally making it to the Division One in 2016.

text: "and in the same year, they competed in the Volta Regional Division 2 League. In the years to follow, they competed in the Division 2 League competing in Volta Region Division 2 League in 2012 before finally making it to the Division One in 2016." - irrelevant and must be removed.

question: List the Dynamo FC players mentioned in the article.

answer: Johnson Nawanyo

answer: Johnson Nawanyo is mentioned.

text: "is mentioned." - can be removed

answer: Johnson Nawanyo

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: Dynamo FC is a Ghanian football club based in Ho and part of the GN Bank Division One League. The club was founded in 2006 and finally made it into the Division 1 League in 2016. They are supported by an NGO called KickStart Ghana.

answer: Dynamo FC is an African football club established in the year 2006 that presently competes in the Volta Regional Division 2 League. They ascended up to Division One in 2016 and, after a one-season trial period, were able to earn promotion to the highest tier level in 2017. The club focuses on the sustainable coaching of the sport and they are supported by KickStart Ghana.

text: "that presently competes in the Volta Regional Division 2 League." - this is inaccurate. The team currently competes in zone 3 of the GN Bank Division One League.

refinement: Dynamo FC is an African football club established in the year 2006 that presently competes in zone 3 of the GN Bank Division One League. They ascended up to Division One in 2016 and, after a one-season trial period, were able to earn promotion to the highest tier level in 2017. The club focuses on the sustainable coaching of the sport and they are supported by KickStart Ghana.

text: "They ascended up to Division One in 2016 and, after a one-season trial period, were able to earn promotion to the highest tier level in 2017." - this inaccurate and needs to be revised.

refinement: Dynamo FC is an African football club established in the year 2006 that presently competes in zone 3 of the GN Bank Division One League. They finally ascended up to Division One in 2016 after six seasons in the Volta Regional Division 2 League. The club focuses on the sustainable coaching of the sport and they are supported by KickStart Ghana.

text: "The club focuses on the sustainable coaching of the sport" - this was never mentioned anywhere in the passage and actually makes very little sense if it did. Needs to be revised.

refinement: Dynamo FC is an African football club established in the year 2006 that presently competes in zone 3 of the GN Bank Division One League. They finally ascended up to Division One in 2016 after six seasons in the Volta Regional Division 2 League. The club is based in Ho in the Volta Region and is supported by KickStart Ghana.

answer: This article describes the Dynamo FC. It discusses the history and qualification of the team. There were some challenges and agreements within the matches, but the team made it to Ghana's top league, Division One.

text: "the Dynamo FC." - remove "the"

refinement: This article describes Dynamo FC. It discusses the history and qualification of the team. There were some challenges and agreements within the matches, but the team made it to Ghana's top league, Division One.

text: "This article describes Dynamo FC." - is too vague. Add what Dynamo FC is and include other details.

refinement: This article describes Dynamo FC, a Ghanaian football club, based in Ho in the Volta Region. It discusses the history and qualification of the team. There were some challenges and agreements within the matches, but the team made it to Ghana's top league, Division One.

text: "It discusses the history and qualification of the team. There were some challenges and agreements within the matches," - is too general and vague based on the amount of information available from the source. Needs a rewrite.

refinement: This article describes Dynamo FC, a Ghanaian football club, based in Ho in the Volta Region. The club was founded in 2006 and played in the Municipal Division 3 League in 2008 before earning the right to play in the Volta Regional Division 2 League, where the team spent six seasons. After coming close on so many occasions, Dynamo FC made it to Ghana's top league, Division One, in 2016.

answer: Dynamo FC is a Ghanaian football team, based in the Volta Region. The club was founded in 2006 and made their Division One league debut in 2017. The NGO, KickStart Ghana, has sponsored Dynamo because of the good football that Dynamo has been playing, their devotion and dedication to the sport, and because of their honest and fantastic fight to get to Division One League.

text: "because of the good football that Dynamo has been playing, their devotion and dedication to the sport, and because of their honest and fantastic fight to get to Division One League." - the passage does not include a reason why Kickstart Ghana supports Dynamo FC. Needs a complete rewrite.

refinement: Dynamo FC is a Ghanaian football team, based in the Volta Region. The club was founded in 2006 and made their Division One league debut in 2017. The NGO, KickStart Ghana, has sponsored Dynamo FC by providing volunteer football coaches to help with running the team as well as grants for equipment, hospital costs, referee’s fees, league fees travel, and subsistence for the teams on match days.

text: "made their Division" - change "their" to "its"

refinement: Dynamo FC is a Ghanaian football team, based in the Volta Region. The club was founded in 2006 and made its Division One league debut in 2017. The NGO, KickStart Ghana, has sponsored Dynamo FC by providing volunteer football coaches to help with running the team as well as grants for equipment, hospital costs, referee’s fees, league fees travel, and subsistence for the teams on match days.

answer: Dynamo FC is a football club in Ho in the Volta Region. It was founded in the year 2006 and made it to the Volta Regional Division 2 League in 2008. The club made it to the Ghana Division 1 League in 2016 and lost their first match against Vision FC.

text: "Dynamo FC is a football club in Ho" - add "based" after "club"

refinement: Dynamo FC is a football club based in Ho in the Volta Region. It was founded in the year 2006 and made it to the Volta Regional Division 2 League in 2008. The club made it to the Ghana Division 1 League in 2016 and lost their first match against Vision FC.

text: Add "Ghanaian"

refinement: Dynamo FC is a Ghanaian football club based in Ho in the Volta Region. It was founded in the year 2006 and made it to the Volta Regional Division 2 League in 2008. The club made it to the Ghana Division 1 League in 2016 and lost their first match against Vision FC.

answer:
An overview of the career of Dynamo FC football club, a Division One team now residing in zone 3 of GN Bank Division One League, the premier league of Ghana. The club, founded in 2006, spent six seasons in Division Two and finally made it to the league in 2016.

They have suffered some loses so far in the league, but have put their past behind them and continue to impress in Africa.

text: "An overview of the career" and "residing" - seem like wrong word choices when taken into context with the rest of the summary. Needs revision.

refinement:
This article is about the Dynamo FC football club, a Division One team now competing in zone 3 of GN Bank Division One League, the premier league of Ghana. The club, founded in 2006, spent six seasons in Division Two and finally made it to the league in 2016.

They have suffered some loses so far in the league, but have put their past behind them and continue to impress in Africa.

text: "football club" is redundant when placed next to "FC". Move it after "Division One" and replace "team". Delete "the" before "Dynamo FC"

refinement:
This article is about Dynamo FC, a Division One football club now competing in zone 3 of GN Bank Division One League, the premier league of Ghana. The club, founded in 2006, spent six seasons in Division Two and finally made it to the league in 2016.

They have suffered some loses so far in the league, but have put their past behind them and continue to impress in Africa.

text: "made it to the league in 2016." - is vague (what league?) and needs more details. The entire section needs a rewrite because Division One was already mentioned multiple times.

refinement:
This article is about Dynamo FC, a Ghanaian football club now competing in zone 3 of the GN Bank Division One League. The club, founded in 2006, spent six seasons in Division Two and finally made it to the Division One league in 2016.

They have suffered some loses so far in the league, but have put their past behind them and continue to impress in Africa.

text: "They have suffered some loses so far in the league, but have put their past behind them and continue to impress in Africa." - This entry is too vague, and impressing Africa was never mentioned in the passage. Replace with Kickstart Ghana.

refinement: This article is about Dynamo FC, a Ghanaian football club now competing in zone 3 of the GN Bank Division One League. The club, founded in 2006, spent six seasons in Division Two and finally made it to the Division One league in 2016. The club is sponsored by Kickstart Ghana, an NGO which supports education and sports.


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LYUDMYLA LEONTIIVNA DENISOVA[1] (; ) (born July 6, 1960 in Arkhangelsk, Russian SFSR) is a Ukrainian politician and former Minister of Labor and Social Policy who on 15 March 2018 was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.[2][3]

Biography

Raised by her mother Nina Ivanovna Ankudinova (born 1934) in Arkhangelsk Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School (1978), the Leningrad State University (1989) and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law (1995).[4]

Professional career

Denisova was a teacher at a preschool in the Russian city of Arkhangelsk (school №78, 1979–80).[5] For the next nine years Denisova held different posts in the Arkhangelsk provincial law court.[6] In 1989, she moved to Ukraine and became the legal adviser of the Crimean Provincial Committee of Ukraine (1990–91).[7] From 1991 she worked in the Republic of Crimea's Administration of the pension fund until 1998.[8]

Political career

In 1998 Denisova became the Minister of Economy and Finances in the Crimean government.[9] In Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea, she served as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department. Denisova was named Politician of the Year in 2001. In 2000 Denisova was detained for 24 hours and charged with power abuse.[10] Denisova has stated she was persecuted for refusing to sign a budget document.[11] This criminal case was soon closed.[12]

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina (Yulia Tymoshenko Bloc) since 2005.[13] During the 2006 and 2007 parliamentary elections, she was elected as a deputy to the Verkhovna Rada (Ukrainian parliament).

Minister

On December 18, 2007, Yulia Tymoshenko, with a margin of two votes, was elected Prime Minister.[14] and the second Tymoshenko Government was formed between the Yulia Tymoshenko Bloc and Our Ukraine–People's Self-Defense Bloc in which Denisova was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy.

In October 2009 Denisova was ranked 15th in a top 100 of “most influential women in Ukraine” compiled by experts for the Ukrainian magazine Focus (six places lower than non-minister and fellow Batkivshchina member Natalia Korolevska).[15]

2010 Crimean parliamentary election

Denisova headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina during the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election.[16] Batkivshchina did not win seats in the Supreme Council of Crimea.[17]

2012 Ukrainian parliamentary election

Denisova was placed at number 38 on the electoral list of Batkivshchina during the 2012 Ukrainian parliamentary election.[18] She was re-elected into parliament.[19]

2nd minister post

On 27 February 2014 Denisova became Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government.[20]

In September 2014 Denisova became a founding member of her new party People's Front.[21]

2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election

In the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election Denisova was re-elected into parliament placed 15th on the electoral list of People's Front.[22][23][24]

On 15 March 2018 the Ukrainian parliament elected Denisova Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.[25]

[1]  Short bio, LIGA

[2] https://www.pravda.com.ua/news/2018/03/15/7174734/

[3] Maidan nominates Yatseniuk for prime minister, Interfax-Ukraine (26 February 2014)
Ukrainian parliament endorses new cabinet, Interfax-Ukraine (27 February 2014)

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[9] Новый состав Кабмина принят единогласно , news.mediaport.ua

[10] Is She Next?, Kyiv Post (September 3, 2010)

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[15]  Рейтинг Фокуса: 100 самых влиятельных женщин и 100 деталей о них , Focus

[16] Liudmyla Denisova heads electoral list of Crimean branch of Batkivschyna Party, Kyiv Post (September 30, 2010)

[17]  Results of the elections, preliminary data, on interactive maps by Ukrayinska Pravda (November 8, 2010)

[18] They Call Themselves the Opposition, The Ukrainian Week (31 August 2012)

[19]  Список депутатів нової Верховної Ради, Ukrayinska Pravda (11 November 2012)

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[21] Yatseniuk elected head of political council of People's Front Party , Demotix (9 September 2014)

[22] Poroshenko Bloc to have greatest number of seats in parliament , Ukrinform (8 November 2014)
People's Front 0.33% ahead of Poroshenko Bloc with all ballots counted in Ukraine elections - CEC , Interfax-Ukraine (8 November 2014)
Poroshenko Bloc to get 132 seats in parliament - CEC, Interfax-Ukraine (8 November 2014)

[23]  Full electoral list of “Fatherland” , TVi (15 September 2014)

[24]  Electoral list of People's Front, Ukrayinska Pravda (20 September 2014)

[25]

title: Lyudmyla Denisova

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Denisova's education?

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School, the Leningrad State University, and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School in 1978, then the Leningrad State University in 1989, and finally the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law in 1995.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School. She completed her state certification at the Leningrad State University. She later completed her license at the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

text: The specific qualifications Denisova completed at the Leningrad State University and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law are not mentioned in the passage

refinement: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School. She then graduated from the Leningrad State University and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School and the Leningrad State University.

text: The answer omits to mention Denisova graduating from the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law

refinement: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School, the Leningrad State University, and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School (1978), the Leningrad State University (1989) and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law (1995).

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Denisova's political career?

answer: Denisova has had a long political career, beginning as a teacher and moving on to various post within the Crimean provincial law courts and the Crimean government. In 2009 she was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy under Yulia Tymoshenko's second government and in 2014 she was re-elected to parliament for the second time. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

text: This answer includes elements on Denisova's professional career prior to become a politician, which is irrelevant.

refinement: In 2009 she was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy under Yulia Tymoshenko's second government and in 2014 she was re-elected to parliament for the second time. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

text: The answer misses key elements of Denisova's political career.

refinement: In 1998 Denisova became Minister of Economy and Finances in Crimea. She has been a member of Batkivshhchina since 2005 and was elected as a deputy to the Ukrainian parliament during the 2006 and 2007 elections. In 2009 she was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy under Yulia Tymoshenko's second government and in 2014 she was re-elected to parliament for the second time. That year, she continued her ministerial post and founded a new party, People's Front. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

answer: Denisova has had a political career primarily in Crimea, serving as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance, and head of Treasury Department before becoming Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government in 2014. She was elected into parliament in both the 2006 and 2012 Ukrainian parliamentary elections, placed 15th on the electoral list of People's Front in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election, and was recently elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

text: It is not mentioned that Denisova was elected into parliament in the 2006 elections (not that it is inherently implausible, but rather that without independently verifying this is difficult to confirm from the passage alone)

refinement: Denisova has had a political career primarily in Crimea, serving as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance, and head of Treasury Department before becoming Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government in 2014. She was re-elected into parliament in the 2012 Ukrainian parliamentary elections, placed 15th on the electoral list of People's Front in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election, and was recently elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

text: Some of the detail of Denisova's career, such as forming her own party, are omitted

refinement: Denisova has had a political career primarily in Crimea, serving as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance, and head of Treasury Department before becoming Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Tymoshenko Government in 2007, and again in the Yatsenyuk Government in 2014. She was re-elected into parliament in the 2012 Ukrainian parliamentary elections, placed 15th on the electoral list of her newly formed party, People's Front, in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election, and was recently elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine in 2018.

answer: Denisova was the Minister of Labor and Social Policy as a member of the Yatsenyuk Government in February 2014. She re-elected into parliament in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election. She was elected as Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine on March 15, 2018.

text: Significant omission of parts of Denisova's political career

refinement: Denisova served as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of Treasury Department starting from 1998. As a member of Batkivshchina since 2005, she has been Minister of Labour and Social Policy, first as part of the Tymoshenko Government in 2007, and later as a member of the Yatsenyuk Government in February 2014. She re-elected into parliament in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election with her new party, People's Front. She was elected as Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine on March 15, 2018.

answer:
As Minister of Finance she held different posts in the Arkhangelsk provincial law court between 1979 and 1990. Following that, Denisova became the legal adviser of the Crimean Provincial Committee of Ukraine from 1990 to 1991.

In 1998 Denisova became Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department in the Crimean government. She served in Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea from 1998 to 2007.

In 2000 Denisova was detained for 24hrs on charges of power abuse. She stated that she was persecuted for refusing to sign a budget document. This case was shut down.

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina since 2005. She headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina for the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election, but Batkivshchina did not win seats in Supreme Council of Crimea.

text: Inclusion of information that is irrelevant to Denisova's political career (but rather related to her professional career prior to entering politics) and/or which is otherwise inaccurate

refinement:
In 1998 Denisova became Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department in the Crimean government. She served in Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea from 1998 to 2007.

In 2000 Denisova was detained for 24hrs on charges of power abuse. She stated that she was persecuted for refusing to sign a budget document. This case was shut down.

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina since 2005. She headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina for the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election, but Batkivshchina did not win seats in Supreme Council of Crimea.

text: While some parts of Denisova's political career are included, there are also significant elements excluded and other elements included (e.g. heading the electoral list in the 2010 Crimean elections) which are probably not as important to her career.

refinement:
In 1998 Denisova became Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department in the Crimean government. She served in Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea from 1998 to 2007.

In 2000 Denisova was detained for 24hrs on charges of power abuse. She stated that she was persecuted for refusing to sign a budget document. This case was shut down.

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina since 2005. She served as Minister of Labour and Social Policy, first in 2007 as part of the Tymoshenko Government, and a second time in the Yatsenyuk Government. She was re-elected to the Ukrainian parliament in 2014 with her new party, People's Front, and was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine in 2018.

answer: In 1998, Denisova became the Minister of Economy and Finances in the Crimean government. She was named Politician of the Year in 2001. She has been a member of Batkivshchina since 2005, and during the 2006 and 2007 parliamentary elections, she was elected as a deputy to the Verkhovna Rada. In 2009, she was ranked the 15th most influential woman in Ukraine. She was re-elected to parliament in 2012. In 2014, she became Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government and became a founding member of her new party People's Front. In the same year, she was re-elected to the Ukrainian parliament. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.


text:
 K Tokunaga et al. Hum Immunol. 2001 Sep.

Abstract

We have been studying polymorphisms of HLA class I and II genes in East Asians including Buryat in Siberia, Mongolian, Han Chinese, Man Chinese, Korean Chinese, South Korean, and Taiwan indigenous populations in collaboration with many Asian scientists. Regional populations in Japan, Hondo-Japanese, Ryukyuan, and Ainu, were also studied. HLA-A, -B, and -DRB1 gene frequencies were subjected to the correspondence analysis and calculation of DA distances. The correspondence analysis demonstrated several major clusters of human populations in the world. "Mongoloid" populations were highly diversified, in which several clusters such as Northeast Asians, Southeast Asians, Oceanians, and Native Americans were observed. Interestingly, an indigenous population in North Japan, Ainu, was placed relatively close to Native Americans in the correspondence analysis. Distribution of particular HLA-A, -B, -DRB1 alleles and haplotypes was also analyzed in relation to migration and dispersal routes of ancestral populations. A number of alleles and haplotypes showed characteristic patterns of regional distribution. For example, B39-HR5-DQ7 (B*3901-DRB1*1406-DQB1*0301) was shared by Ainu and Native Americans. A24-Cw8-B48 was commonly observed in Taiwan indigenous populations, Maori in New Zealand, Orochon in Northeast China, Inuit, and Tlingit. These findings further support the genetic link between East Asians and Native Americans. We have proposed that various ancestral populations in East Asia, marked by different HLA haplotypes, had migrated and dispersed through multiple routes. Moreover, relatively small genetic distances and the sharing of several HLA haplotypes between Ainu and Native Americans suggest that these populations are descendants of some Upper Paleolithic populations of East Asia.

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question: What is being studied in the article?

answer: The article discusses the genetic diversity of different populations around the world, and how different populations are related to each other. Specifically, the article discusses how East Asian populations are related to Native Americans.

answer: Polymorphisms of HLA class I and II genes in East Asians.

answer: The article is studying the HLA class I and II genes in East Asians including Buryat in Siberia, Mongolian, Han Chinese, Man Chinese, Korean Chinese, South Korean, and Taiwan indigenous populations.

answer: Polymorphisms of HLA class I and II genes in East Asians

question: Which populations are being studied?

answer: Buryat in Siberia, Mongolian, Han Chinese, Man Chinese, Korean Chinese, South Korean and Taiwan indigenous population

text: An additional detail needs to be added to this response to enhance it. East Asians as a population should be included.

refinement: East Asians including Buryat in Siberia, Mongolian, Han Chinese, Man Chinese, Korean Chinese, South Korean and Taiwan indigenous population are being studied.

answer: East Asians, including Buryat in Siberia, Mongolian, Han Chinese, Man Chinese, Korean Chinese, South Korean, and Taiwan indigenous populations.

answer: East Asian populations, including Buryat in Siberia, Mongolian, Han Chinese, Man Chinese, Korean Chinese, South Korean, and Taiwan indigenous populations.

answer: The populations being studied are East Asian populations, including Buryat in Siberia, Mongolian, Han Chinese, Man Chinese, Korean Chinese, South Korean, and Taiwan indigenous populations.

question: What do the findings support?

answer: The findings support the idea that East Asians and Native Americans are genetically linked.

answer: The findings support the genetic link between East Asians and Native Americans.

answer: The genetic link between East Asians and Native Americans

answer: The genetic link between East Asians and Native Americans.

question: What does the study propose about various ancestral populations in East Asia?

answer: The study proposes that various ancestral populations in East Asia had migrated and dispersed through multiple routes, and that the Ainu and Native Americans are descendants of some Upper Paleolithic populations of East Asia.

answer: They had migrated and dispersed through multiple routes.

answer: The study proposes that various ancestral populations in East Asia, marked by different HLA haplotypes, had migrated and dispersed through multiple routes.

answer: The study proposes that various ancestral populations in East Asia, marked by different HLA haplotypes, had migrated and dispersed through multiple routes.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: In an article, a study is being conducted on polymorphisms of HLA class I and II genes in East Asians. The findings support the genetic link between East Asians and Native Americans.

text: There is no response given to this question. A new response must be written.

refinement: In an article, a study is being conducted on polymorphisms of HLA class I and II genes in East Asians. The findings support the genetic link between East Asians and Native Americans.

answer: The article discusses the genetic analysis of various East Asian populations, including the Ainu, and how they are related to Native Americans. It also discusses the distribution of HLA alleles and haplotypes in these populations, and how they may have migrated and dispersed throughout East Asia.

answer: The article is about a study of polymorphisms of HLA class I and II genes in East Asians. The study found that there are several major clusters of human populations in the world.

text: The second sentence of this sentence isn't the most accurate and can be changed to provided a more accurate statement.

refinement: The article is about a study of polymorphisms of HLA class I and II genes in East Asians. The findings support the genetic link between East Asians and Native Americans.


text:
The Temporary Vagina of Ollie Long-Johnson
By Colonel Sadface

    Ollie Long-Johnson awoke to a sharp pain in his genital area one cloudy Friday morning. As soon as he yelled out, the pain was gone. He threw off the covers and examined his penis. There were no visible marks anywhere. Perhaps he turned over and slept on it funny. At any rate, the pain was no more than a ghost now. He hopped out of bed and into the shower to get ready for work.
    As he washed, he felt several small stabbing pains from his penis and scrotum. He ignored them, seeing no signs of damage to the skin when he checked. He finished his shower and dressed for the day.
    The pains continued on his drive to work, and all the way to his desk. By now, he was considering calling a professional. Perhaps he would call the hospital during his lunch break. He never did.

Ollie’s day passed in discomfort as his penile pains persisted. On the way home, the pain had elevated into a periodic throbbing, and by bedtime, it was a constant hurt. He considered going to the emergency room, but how would he explain a steadily stinging scrotum? He decided to take some sleeping pills and dropped off within minutes.

Ollie’s dreams that night were filled with phallic imagery. Looking down, he discovered that his legs had turned to penises, and his arms were shafts with multiple penises at the ends for fingers. Even his nose was a stubby little chode. Penis-shaped lampposts lined the streets as he walked. The buildings resembled towering tadgers. Even the lines and arrows on the city streets were phallic. Moment by moment, Ollie began to lose his way. There were no longer any road signs or arrows. The buildings began to shrink and give way to hills, rolling, oblong mounds that stretched parallel for miles. The lampposts disappeared. Soon, Ollie began to slow, having difficulty walking. His legs were shrinking, his arms receding, and soon his penis-limbs disappeared altogether. He found he could no longer breathe through his chode-nose. It was gone. Ollie screamed in fright, but all that came from between his lips was a soft, reverberating raspberry noise.

He woke, remembering none of it. He yawned, stretched, and got out of bed. He walked groggily to the shower, turned on the water, and stepped in. He began to wash, and realized suddenly that his stinging one-eyed snake was no longer bothering him. He looked down and discovered why. His penis was gone.

Ollie cried out, jumping back and nearly slipping on the shower floor. Once he regained control of himself, he looked down again. Where was his penis? There was nothing there. It was just...gone. He reached down and felt a strange difference between his legs. He had a vagina.

He nearly fainted, trying to come to terms with this discovery. Where had his dick gone? This was unfathomable. How could a penis just disappear overnight? Perhaps he should go see a doctor after all. But how would he explain the sudden appearance of a vagina? How would they explain it? Would they want to run tests on him? Probe him? Maybe the doctor wasn’t the best idea. How long before he turned into a woman altogether? Maybe this was all some weird, scary dream. Yes, that had to be it. He was dreaming. He would simply go about his day as usual, and wake up the next morning, and have his penis back. Yes, he would do that.

Ollie got out of the shower and dressed for work. He thought about giving a shit about color coordination, but decided that he wasn’t a woman yet, despite his vagina.

Work was no picnic. Ollie was uncomfortable all day long. He felt like everyone was staring at him, as if they all knew he had a vagina. He felt like crying all day. Of course everyone was staring at him, he thought as he looked in the bathroom mirror. Just look at those microscopic wrinkles and the tiny amount of fat on his body. He was disgusting. Who would ever want to be with an ugly fuck like him?

That night, Ollie cried himself to sleep after eating chocolate ice cream and watching soap operas to feel bad about himself on purpose so that he could write cryptic facebook statuses and reject other people’s attempts to make him feel better.

Ollie awoke the next morning feeling refreshed and ready to start the day. What were all these empty containers of ice cream doing here? he wondered. Did I really eat all those? Holy shit, I’m going to get fat. Oh, well, what’s a little pudge? He stepped into the shower and looked down. His penis was back! No wonder he didn’t care about feeling fat! He jumped for joy and slipped on the floor when he landed, knocking himself out.

He woke up in the hospital to a doctor standing over him.

“Ah, Ollie, you’re up. How are you feeling?”

“Not too bad, doc. How long have I been out?”

“A couple of days. A neighbor called the police when you didn’t get your newspaper, and they found you lying in the shower with the water still running. You’re lucky you didn’t drown.”

“That is lucky, I suppose. Am I going to be okay?”

“Well...” the doctor started, “you see, Ollie, when we found you, it turns out you’d had an erection when you’d fallen. Your penis broke and we had to amputate it. You have no genitalia now.”

Ollie was just about to strangle the doctor for cutting off his ruined penis, when a meteor struck the building and killed him.

The End.

TL;DR Ollie Long-Johnson had a pain in his penis, dreamed about dicks, and woke up with a vagina. He felt like a woman and then slipped in the shower. Then he died.

TL;DR TL;DR Ollie had a dick. Then a vag. Then he died.

TL;DR TL;DR TL;DR Ollie died.

question: Who are the main characters of the story?

answer: Ollie Long-Johnson and Colonel Sadface

text: The answer mistakenly suggests that the doctor is a main character.

answer: Ollie Long-Johnson

answer: Ollie Long-Johnson

answer: Ollie Long-Johnson and the doctor.

text: The answer mistakenly suggests that the doctor is a main character.

question: What is Ollie's job?

answer: That information can’t be found.

answer: He is a writer.

text: There is no evidence to suggest that Ollie is a write.

refinement: This information cannot be found in the text.

text: Empty response.

refinement: This information cannot be found in the text.

answer: Ollie is an office worker.

text: Ollie has a desk at work, implying he works in an office. However there is no evidence to suggest what his job is.

question: What's happening to Ollie?

answer: His penis turns into a vagina.

text: "He reached down and felt a strange difference between his legs. He had a vagina" is evidence that his penis was no longer there and now had a vagina.

answer: He's having a nightmare.

text: Although Ollie was having a nightmare, the answer fails to mention that his penis was gone and then had a vagina.

refinement: He's having a nightmare and he had lost his penis, gaining a vagina.

answer: Ollie has lost his penis and gained a vagina.

text: "He reached down and felt a strange difference between his legs. He had a vagina" is evidence that Ollie had lost his penis and gained a vagina.

answer: Ollie is a man who has a penis.

text: Although Ollie once had a penis, the answer misses to mention that he has since lost it and gained a vagina.

refinement: Ollie is a man who had a penis but lost it and gained a vagina.

question: What does Ollie dream about?

answer: Ollie dreams about penises.

text: "Ollie’s dreams that night were filled with phallic imagery" is evidence that Ollie dreams about penises.

answer: He dreams about phallic imagery.

text: "Ollie’s dreams that night were filled with phallic imagery" is evidence that Ollie dreams about penises.

answer: He dreams that his limbs, lamp posts, nose, and everything else are a penis.

text: "Ollie’s dreams that night were filled with phallic imagery. Looking down, he discovered that his legs had turned to penises, and his arms were shafts with multiple penises at the ends for fingers. Even his nose was a stubby little chode. Penis-shaped lampposts lined the streets" is evidence that his dreams were about penises and phallic imagery.

answer: Ollie dreams about penises.

text: "Ollie’s dreams that night were filled with phallic imagery" is evidence that Ollie dreams about penises.

question: Write a ~10 sentence summary.

answer: Ollie Long-Johnson wakes up to a pain in his genital area. He goes to work, but the pain persists. He decides to take some sleeping pills and falls asleep. He wakes up to find his penis is gone and he has a vagina. He cries himself to sleep and wakes up in the hospital. The doctor tells him his penis broke and they had to amputate it. He dies.

answer: Ollie Long-Johnson wakes up and feels genital pain, which goes on for days. He ignores it and does not tell anyone while still going to work. He opts not to go to a doctor. After taking sleeping pills to dull the pain, Ollie dreams that his nose, limbs, lamp posts, and everything else become penises. He wakes up the next day with no more pain, but his penis is now a vagina. Deciding against medical help, he goes to work, but thinks about color coordination, wrinkles, and how others stare at him. He comes home and cries himself to sleep after eating ice cream and watching soap operas on purpose to make himself feel bad. Ollie wakes up the next day feeling better because he got his penis back, but he slips in the shower and knocks himself out. He wakes up in the hospital and learns he had an erection during his accident and the doctors had to amputate his penis. Before Ollie can strangle the doctor, a meteor hits and kills everyone.

answer: Ollie Long-Johnson wakes up one morning to find that his penis has disappeared, and in its place is a vagina. He is initially shocked and upset, but then his penis miraculously reappears. However, when he slips in the shower and knocks himself out, he wakes up in the hospital to find that his penis has been amputated.

text: inadequate summary length.

refinement: Ollie Long-Johnson wakes up one morning to find that his penis has disappeared, and in its place is a vagina. He is initially shocked and upset, but then his penis miraculously reappears. However, when he slips in the shower and knocks himself out, he wakes up in the hospital to find that his penis has been amputated.

answer: Ollie Long-Johnson wakes up with a pain in his genital area. He ignores it and goes to work. The pain persists and he considers going to the hospital. He takes sleeping pills and falls asleep. He dreams about penises and wakes up with a vagina. He cries himself to sleep. The next morning, he wakes up with his penis back. He goes to work and feels like everyone is staring at him. He cries all day. He goes home and cries himself to sleep. He wakes up in the hospital with no genitalia. A meteor strikes the building and kills him.

text: Timeline of events is off as he wakes up in the hospital right after realizing he got his penis back.

refinement: Ollie Long-Johnson wakes up with a pain in his genital area. He ignores it and goes to work. The pain persists and he considers going to the hospital. He takes sleeping pills and falls asleep. He dreams about penises and wakes up with a vagina. He cries himself to sleep. He goes to work and feels like everyone is staring at him. He cries all day. He goes home and cries himself to sleep. The next morning, he wakes up with his penis back but jumping out of joy, knocking himself out. He wakes up in the hospital with no genitalia. It had been amputated, but before he can strangle the doctor, a meteor strikes the building and kills him.