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reed to publish it -- and for her Cormoran Strike detective series, which she wrote under the pseudonym Robert Galbraith. Since she was applying anonymously, she didn’t have the benefit of the Potter caché when she submitted that manuscript. But she kept going anyway. “I wasn't going to give up until every single publisher turned me down, but I often feared that would happen,” Rowling wrote. “I had nothing to lose and sometimes that makes you brave enough to try.”

ELON MUSK
If you look closely, Musk’s career is actually littered with rejections and missteps. He apparently didn’t get any traction when he applied for a gig at Netscape in the 1990s. He was fired from his job as PayPal’s CEO after spending some time in the position after the company bought his finance startup X.com. His early attempts at building an aerospace business saw him dealing with less than enthused Russian entities that refused to sell him any rockets. But after each rejection, he went on to build something new. After his stint at Netscape came his first business, Zip2. After PayPal, he went on to co-found Tesla, SpaceX, Neuralink and The Boring Company. Musk still deals with setbacks such as Tesla production bottlenecks and enough rocket explosions to edit together a montage. But he is still reaching for the stars.

OPRAH WINFREY
While Winfrey is a huge success now, it was actually an early setback that helped forge the media icon she later became. After seven months as a co-anchor for the evening news at a local Baltimore station, sharing the news desk with a veteran anchor who frequently disrespected her, Winfrey was fired from the job. She was then tapped to host the network’s morning show, _People Are Talking_, which yielded some less than stellar reviews in the early go. Undeterred, Winfrey was going to make the most of the opportunity. Reflecting on the experience to _The Baltimore Sun_, Winfrey said, "Not all my memories of Baltimore are fond ones. … But I do have fond memories of Baltimore, because it grew me into a real woman. I came in naive, unskilled, not really knowing anything about the business -- or about life. And Baltimore grew me up.”

WARREN BUFFETT
Warren Buffett, one of the richest men on the planet, has been operating in the business world for a long time. The octogenarian CEO of Berkshire Hathaway starting making investments when he was just 11-years-old. You might think most of his career was smooth sailing, but the Oracle of Omaha has dealt with rejection too. At 19, he tried to get into his dream school Harvard, but it didn't happen. In an interview with Alice Schroeder in her biography of the tycoon, he shared how his application went awry. "I looked about 16 and emotionally was about 9. I spent 10 minutes with the Harvard alumnus who was doing the interview, and he assessed my capabilities and turned me down." While Harvard wasn’t the right fit, it led him to Columbia where he honed his skills in investing. It has clearly paid off.

BARBARA CORCORAN
Real estate mogul and investor Barbara Corcoran’s career also began somewhat inauspiciously. The then 22-year-old waitress got a loan from her boyfriend to launch a real estate firm. They built the company together, but then seven years in, she was blindsided when he told her that he was leaving -- and marrying her secretary. Years later, when Corcoran was in contention to be one of the judges on _Shark Tank_, she had the job, lost it to another female entrepreneur, and then won it back by writing a letter to the production team telling them what they would lose out on if they didn’t hire her for the team. “I said that all the best things happened to me on the heels of rejection and I considered his rejection a lucky charm,” Corcoran told _Entrepreneur_. “I cited half dozen similar situations throughout my career where obstacles turned into my greatest opportunities.”

JEFF BEZOS
Even though Amazon is so successful that American cities are actively bidding to host the ecommerce giant's second headquarters, at the beginning of the company’s life, Bezos was met with a lot of questions about whether it could even get off the ground. In an interview with _60 Minutes_, he explained the juggling act he had to do to raise early funds for the business. “I had to take 60 meetings to raise $1 million, and I raised it from 22 people at approximately $50,000 a person,” Bezos recalled. “It was nip and tuck whether I was going to be able to raise that money. So, the whole thing could have ended before the whole thing started. That was 1995, and the first question every investor asked me was: ‘What’s the internet?'” Eventually, it seemed that people caught on to what he was building.

SALLIE KRAWCHECK
Krawcheck was one of the most recognizable women on Wall Street. But in 2008, during the height of the financial crisis, she was publicly fired from her position as Citigroup’s chief financial officer after she said that the firm had an obligation to pay back some of the money that their clients had lost because of its advice. Krawcheck also believes that being a woman in a high-ranking leadership role led to her dismissal. But she channeled that rejection into becoming a first-time entrepreneur and launched an investing platform for women called Ellevest. “The biggest risk is not taking any career risk," Krawcheck told _Entrepreneur_. "We all need to be pushing ourselves in different directions, otherwise we risk having the world just pass us by.”

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Summarize what the article says about rejection.

answer: The article says that everyone has experienced rejection at some point in their lives. It can be a personal rejection or a professional one. The article says that it is important to be resilient and bounce back from rejection. It says that it is important to remember that rejection is just a part of life and that it is important to keep moving forward.

text: The article is specifically about careers of famous people, so this general fact should be borne out in the summary

refinement: The article states that facing rejection is an important step in the process for many successful people, and that failure is often necessary for success. It entertains famous rejection stories from Bezos, Oprah, Elon Musk, and others. In some cases, these starts redefined their expectations, and in other cases, they regrouped and built something new from the ashes.

answer: The article says that rejection is a common part of life. It is not the end of the world. It is not a reason to give up. It is something that can be overcome.

text: The article is specifically about careers and rejections so this general theme should be in the summary

refinement: The article states that facing rejection is an important step in the process for many successful people, and that failure is often necessary for success. It entertains famous rejection stories from Bezos, Oprah, Elon Musk, and others. In some cases, these starts redefined their expectations, and in other cases, they regrouped and built something new from the ashes.

answer: The article says that rejection is a common part of life. It is not the end of the world. It is not a reason to give up. It is something that can be overcome.

answer: The article states that facing rejection is an important step in the process for many successful people, and that failure is often necessary for success. It entertains famous rejection stories from Bezos, Oprah, Elon Musk, and others. In some cases, these starts reconsidered or redefined their expectations, and in other cases, they regrouped and built something new from the strategic ashes.

text: reconsidered, as a verb, is not able to be in the active voice in this context and should be removed

refinement: The article states that facing rejection is an important step in the process for many successful people, and that failure is often necessary for success. It entertains famous rejection stories from Bezos, Oprah, Elon Musk, and others. In some cases, these starts redefined their expectations, and in other cases, they regrouped and built something new from the strategic ashes.

text: Strategic ashes is semantically strange. The adjective "strategic" should be removed

refinement: The article states that facing rejection is an important step in the process for many successful people, and that failure is often necessary for success. It entertains famous rejection stories from Bezos, Oprah, Elon Musk, and others. In some cases, these starts redefined their expectations, and in other cases, they regrouped and built something new from the ashes.

answer: The article states that facing rejection is an important step in the process for many successful people, and that failure is often necessary for success. The article entertains famous rejection stories from Musk, Oprah, Bezos and Krawcheck. In some cases, these starts reexamined or redefined their expectations, and in other cases, they regrouped and built something new from the strategic ashes.

text: reexamined, as a verb, should not be in the active voice in this context and should be removed

refinement: The article states that facing rejection is an important step in the process for many successful people, and that failure is often necessary for success. The article entertains famous rejection stories from Musk, Oprah, Bezos and Krawcheck. In some cases, these starts redefined their expectations, and in other cases, they regrouped and built something new from the strategic ashes.

text: Strategic ashes is semantically strange. The adjective "strategic" should be removed.

refinement: The article states that facing rejection is an important step in the process for many successful people, and that failure is often necessary for success. The article entertains famous rejection stories from Musk, Oprah, Bezos and Krawcheck. In some cases, these starts redefined their expectations, and in other cases, they regrouped and built something new from the ashes.

answer: The article discusses several famous entrepreneurs and entrepreneurs, who are now successful. Many of these individuals have encountered rejection during their careers, and the challenges they encountered helped them build the success they now enjoy. Elon Musk had a failed application to Netscape and another company. Oprah Winfrey had setbacks at her first job in the media arena, with an abusive co-anchor. Warren Buffett, who is now a rich man, even went to an Ivy League university, but found himself rejected. Barbara Corcoran started with a small loan from her boyfriend, but her partnership ended. Jeff Bezos raised money for his start-up when everyone thought he would fail because of his inexperience. Barbara Corcoran fears women who do not take career risks and goes on to mention figuring out how to turn rejections into opportunities.

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refinement: The article discusses several famous entrepreneurs and entrepreneurs, who are now successful. Many of these individuals have encountered rejection during their careers, and the challenges they encountered helped them build the success they now enjoy. Elon Musk had a failed application to Netscape and another company. Oprah Winfrey had setbacks at her first job in the media arena, with an abusive co-anchor. Warren Buffett, who is now a rich man, even went to an Ivy League university, but found himself rejected. Barbara Corcoran started with a small loan from her boyfriend, but her partnership ended. Jeff Bezos raised money for his start-up when everyone thought he would fail because of his inexperience.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what the article says about Elon Musk.

answer: Musk's career is littered with rejections and missteps. He apparently didn't get any traction when he applied for a gig at Netscape in the 1990s. He was fired from his job as PayPal's CEO after spending some time in the position after the company bought his finance startup X.com. His early attempts at building an aerospace business saw him dealing with less than enthused Russian entities that refused to sell him any rockets. But after each rejection, he went on to build something new.

text: This does not so much Summarize the section as include half of it in full

refinement: The article states that Elon Musk's career is littered with rejections and missteps. He didn't get any traction when he applied for a gig at Netscape in the 1990s. He was fired from his job as PayPal's CEO after spending some time in the position. His early attempts at building an aerospace business saw him dealing with less than enthused Russian entities that refused to sell him any rockets. But after each rejection, he went on to build something new. After his stint at Netscape came his first business, Zip2. After PayPal, he went on to co-found Tesla, SpaceX, Neuralink, and The Boring Company.

answer: Elon Musk has faced a lot of rejection in his career, not least being fired from his position at PayPal, and being refused by a Russian entity that refused to sell him any rockets for his aerospace company. What followed were slips and bits of luck, such as South Africa not wanting him to set up a factory there. The experience evidently didn't stop him from starting Tesla, SpaceX and The Boring Company.

answer: He has faced setbacks, but after each one he created something new. Zip2 came after his time at Netscape. He also tried to get into his dream school Harvard, which didn't happen. Nevertheless, he ended up going to another university and investing in companies.

text: This happened to Buffet, not Musk

refinement: Elon Musk has faced a lot of rejection in his career, not least being fired from his position at PayPal, and being refused by a Russian entity that refused to sell him any rockets for his aerospace company. What followed were slips and bits of luck, such as South Africa not wanting him to set up a factory there. The experience evidently didn't stop him from starting Tesla, SpaceX and The Boring Company.

answer: Elon Musk has received years of rejections and business losses, but has always made the best of them and we successful. Some of his earliest setbacks came when he applicants for the Netscape gig in the 1990s, lost his job as the PayPal CEO after a company buyout, and when he unsuccessfully tried to build an aerospace business. Rather than let these roadblocks stop him, he kept on trying, and now owns three world-changing companies.

text: This can be more specific about the world changing companies he founded

refinement: The article states that Elon Musk's career is littered with rejections and missteps. He didn't get any traction when he applied for a gig at Netscape in the 1990s. He was fired from his job as PayPal's CEO after spending some time in the position. His early attempts at building an aerospace business saw him dealing with less than enthused Russian entities that refused to sell him any rockets. But after each rejection, he went on to build something new. After his stint at Netscape came his first business, Zip2. After PayPal, he went on to co-found Tesla, SpaceX, Neuralink, and The Boring Company.

answer: The article states that Elon Musk's career is littered with rejections and missteps. He didn't get any traction when he applied for a gig at Netscape in the 1990s. He was fired from his job as PayPal's CEO after spending some time in the position. His early attempts at building an aerospace business saw him dealing with less than enthused Russian entities that refused to sell him any rockets. But after each rejection, he went on to build something new. After his stint at Netscape came his first business, Zip2. After PayPal, he went on to co-found Tesla, SpaceX, Neuralink, and The Boring Company.

answer: The article states that Elon Musk's career is littered with rejections and missteps. He didn't get any traction when he applied for a gig at Netscape in the 1990s. He was fired from his job as PayPal's CEO after spending some time in the position. His early attempts at building an aerospace business saw him dealing with less than enthused Russian entities that refused to sell him any rockets. But after each rejection, he went on to build something new. After his stint at Netscape came his first business, Zip2. After PayPal, he went on to co-found Tesla, SpaceX, Neuralink, and The Boring Company.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what the article says about Oprah Winfrey.

answer: At 17, after seven months as a co-concer for the evening news partner next to a veteran who constantly belittled her, Oprah was fired from the job. However, this paved the way for her to host her own morning show, 'People Are Talking' which early on had lackluster reviews despite this when she was fired, she still saw it as an opportunity to step forward into a career with higher potential.

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refinement: At 17, after seven months as a co-concer for the evening news partner next to a veteran who constantly belittled her, Oprah was fired from the job. However, this paved the way for her to host her own morning show, 'People Are Talking' which early on had lackluster reviews. Despite this when she was fired, she still saw it as an opportunity to step forward into a career with higher potential.

text: She was not 17. Her co-anchor was not a veteran. Multiple  accuracy issues in this statement

refinement: The article says that Oprah Winfrey was fired from her job as a co-anchor of the evening news in Baltimore after seven months. She was then tapped to host the network's morning show, but the experience yielded some less than stellar reviews in the early go. Undeterred, Winfrey was going to make the most of the opportunity, and evidently succeeded. Reflecting on the experience to The Baltimore Sun, Winfrey says that Baltimore grew her up.

answer: The article says that Oprah Winfrey was fired from her job as a co-anchor of the evening news in Baltimore after seven months. She was then tapped to host the network's morning show, but the experience yielded some less than stellar reviews in the early go. Undeterred, Winfrey was going to make the most of the opportunity. Reflecting on the experience to The Baltimore Sun, Winfrey says that Baltimore grew her up.

text: Add in an inference here that she succeeded.

refinement: The article says that Oprah Winfrey was fired from her job as a co-anchor of the evening news in Baltimore after seven months. She was then tapped to host the network's morning show, but the experience yielded some less than stellar reviews in the early go. Undeterred, Winfrey was going to make the most of the opportunity, and evidently succeeded. Reflecting on the experience to The Baltimore Sun, Winfrey says that Baltimore grew her up.

answer: Oprah Winfrey was fired from her job as a co-anchor for the evening news at a local Baltimore station after seven months. She was then tapped to host the network's morning show, which yielded some less than stellar reviews in the early go. She was undeterred, and worked to make the most of the opportunity.

answer: Winfrey was fired from a position for disrepecting her co-anchor after seven months of working at the Baltimore station. Before the end, she anchored a show called "People are talking" and underwent some negative reviews before she was able to carve out a successful media career.

text: Before the end is not accurate. She was moved to a new program

refinement: The article says that Oprah Winfrey was fired from her job as a co-anchor of the evening news in Baltimore after seven months. She was then tapped to host the network's morning show, but the experience yielded some less than stellar reviews in the early go. Undeterred, Winfrey was going to make the most of the opportunity, and evidently succeeded. Reflecting on the experience to The Baltimore Sun, Winfrey says that Baltimore grew her up.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what the article says about Warren Buffett.

answer: At 19, Warren Buffett tried to get into his dream college, but it did not work out. He was rejected, which led him to Columbia and honed his skills in investing. Eventually, he became a very successful investor.

answer: He applied for Harvard and was rejected because the interviewee, a former student, condemned Buffett for immature at age 19. Columbia University did accept him, and there he forged skills in investing, which has clearly paid off.

text: This summary is incoherent. Condemned "for immature" makes no sense

refinement: At 19, Warren Buffett tried to get into his dream college, but it did not work out. He was rejected, which led him to Columbia and honed his skills in investing. Eventually, he became a very successful investor.

answer: At 19, Warren Buffett tried to get into his dream college, but it did not work out. He was rejected, which led him to Columbia, which sharpened his investing skills. Eventually, he became a very successful investor.

answer: The article states that Warren Buffett has been operating in the business world for a long time. He started making investments when he was just 11-years-old, and he tried to get into his dream school Harvard but it didn't happen. He then went to Columbia where he honed his skills in investing. His career has been littered with rejections and missteps, but he has still managed to build a successful business.

text: This is not borne out by the text

refinement: The article states that Warren Buffett has been operating in the business world for a long time. He started making investments when he was just 11-years-old, and he tried to get into his dream school Harvard but it didn't happen. He then went to Columbia where he honed his skills in investing.

answer: He applied for Harvard and was rejected because the interviewee, a former student, condemned Buffett for immature at age 19.

text: Completely incoherent. Incomplete sentence, ungrammatical. Start again.

text: Summarize something from the article

refinement: At 19, Warren Buffett tried to get into his dream college, but it did not work out. He was rejected, which led him to Columbia and honed his skills in investing. Eventually, he became a very successful investor.

answer: Warren Buffett was making investments when he was 11-years-old. He tried to get into Harvard, but it didn't happen. He went to Columbia, which he says helped him hone his skills in investing. He started making investments when he was 11-years-old, and he still does.

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refinement: Warren Buffett was making investments when he was 11-years-old. He tried to get into Harvard, but it didn't happen. He went to Columbia, which he says helped him hone his skills in investing.

answer: Warren Buffett was making investments when he was 11-years-old. He tried to get into Harvard, but it didn't happen. He went to Columbia, which he says helped him hone his skills in investing. He started making investments when he was 11-years-old, and he still does. He still deals with setbacks such as Tesla production bottlenecks and enough rocket explosions to edit together a montage.

text: Warren Buffet and Elon Musk are not the same person. The last sentence contains info from Musk's summary

refinement: Warren Buffett was making investments when he was 11-years-old. He tried to get into Harvard, but it didn't happen. He went to Columbia, which he says helped him hone his skills in investing.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what the article says about Barbara Corcoran.

answer: Barbara Corcoran is a real estate mogul and investor. Her career began somewhat inauspiciously. She got a loan from her boyfriend to launch a real estate firm. They built the company together, but then seven years in, he left her for her secretary. Years later, when Corcoran was in contention to be one of the judges on Shark Tank, she had the job, lost it to another female entrepreneur, and then won it back by writing a letter to the production team telling them what they would lose out on if they didn't hire her for the team.

answer: Barbara Corcoran is a real estate mogul and investor. Her career began somewhat inauspiciously. She got a loan from her boyfriend to launch a real estate firm. They built the company together, but then seven years in, he left her for her secretary. Years later, when Corcoran was in contention to be one of the judges on Shark Tank, she had the job, lost it to another female entrepreneur, and then won it back by writing a letter to the production team telling them what they would lose out on if they didn't hire her for the team. She channeled that rejection into becoming a first-time entrepreneur and launching an investing platform for women called Ellevest.

text: The final sentence is not relevant

refinement: Barbara Corcoran is a real estate mogul and investor. Her career began somewhat inauspiciously. She got a loan from her boyfriend to launch a real estate firm. They built the company together, but then seven years in, he left her for her secretary. Years later, when Corcoran was in contention to be one of the judges on Shark Tank, she had the job, lost it to another female entrepreneur, and then won it back by writing a letter to the production team telling them what they would lose out on if they didn't hire her for the team.

answer: Barbara Corcoran's career also began somewhat inauspiciously. The then 22-year-old waitress got a loan from her boyfriend to launch a real estate firm. They built the company together, but then seven years in, she was blindsided when he told her that he was leaving and marrying her secretary. Years later, when Corcoran was in contention to be one of the judges on Shark Tank, she had the job, lost it to another female entrepreneur, and then won it back by writing a letter to the production team telling them what they would lose out on if they didn't hire her for the team. Corcoran also notes that being a woman in a high-ranking leadership role led to her dismissal.

text: They hired another woman for the role so I do not think that is accurate

refinement: Barbara Corcoran's career also began somewhat inauspiciously. The then 22-year-old waitress got a loan from her boyfriend to launch a real estate firm. They built the company together, but then seven years in, she was blindsided when he told her that he was leaving and marrying her secretary. Years later, when Corcoran was in contention to be one of the judges on Shark Tank, she had the job, lost it to another female entrepreneur, and then won it back by writing a letter to the production team telling them what they would lose out on if they didn't hire her for the team.

answer: Barbara Corcoran started her career with the help of a loan from her boyfriend to launch a real estate firm. After a time, someone else ends up taking over the business, and gets married to Corcoran's secretary. Years later in her career as a potential candidate for an episode of "Shark Tank," she got rejected but sent a letter to the producers telling them why they would miss out on losing her in the group of potential judges. She won the job but became fired from the position when shipping problems emerged. Corcoran focused on becoming an entrepreneur after losing a position. She launched the investing platform for women called Ellevest.

text: Final two sentences are inaccurate

refinement: Barbara Corcoran started her career with the help of a loan from her boyfriend to launch a real estate firm. After a time, someone else ends up taking over the business, and gets married to Corcoran's secretary. Years later in her career as a potential candidate for an episode of "Shark Tank," she got rejected but sent a letter to the producers telling them why they would miss out on losing her in the group of potential judges.

answer: Power couple Barbara Corcoran and her real estate partner split unexpectedly, leaving Corcoran to start over. Corcoran even lost the job of judging on Shark Tank, despite her achievements on Wall Street. However, her dismissal sparked some entrepreneurial spark and Corcoran became an investor in a company founded by (and for) women.

text: This is a mix of inaccuracies

refinement: Barbara Corcoran's career also began somewhat inauspiciously. The then 22-year-old waitress got a loan from her boyfriend to launch a real estate firm. They built the company together, but then seven years in, she was blindsided when he told her that he was leaving and marrying her secretary. Years later, when Corcoran was in contention to be one of the judges on Shark Tank, she had the job, lost it to another female entrepreneur, and then won it back by writing a letter to the production team telling them what they would lose out on if they didn't hire her for the team.

answer: Barbara Corcoran was a waitress who got a loan from her boyfriend to start a real estate firm. They built the company together, but he left her seven years in, marrying her secretary. Years later, when Corcoran was in contention to be one of the judges on Shark Tank, she lost it to another female entrepreneur, and then won it back by writing a letter to the production team telling them what they would lose out on if they didn't hire her for the team. She says that the biggest risk is not taking any career risk.

text: She did not say that

refinement: Barbara Corcoran was a waitress who got a loan from her boyfriend to start a real estate firm. They built the company together, but he left her seven years in, marrying her secretary. Years later, when Corcoran was in contention to be one of the judges on Shark Tank, she lost it to another female entrepreneur, and then won it back by writing a letter to the production team telling them what they would lose out on if they didn't hire her for the team.

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Summarize what the article says about Jeff Bezos.

answer: Jeff Bezos was met with a lot of questions about whether Amazon could even get off the ground. He had to take 60 meetings to raise $1 million and he raised it from 22 people at approximately $50,000 a person. The first question every investor asked him was what the internet was. Eventually, it seemed people caught on to what he was building.

answer: Jeff Bezos recalls landing a job at a hedge fund run by his second cousin, but he was recruited by his boss at his hedge fund to be the team's new lead analyst. His hedge fund had just landed a deal to buy back Intuit, which they shorted previously. He has spent the past two years learning how Amazon works on both the backend business model and the e-commerce engine. He says that there were several occasions when the purchase of Amazon stock was seriously diluted due to the success of their quarterly reports. However, they weren't dissuaded and they continued to move forward. When they attempted to raise funds from a bank and failed miserably, that's when Bezos decided to risk all and buy a decent-sized printing company called Relk. Bezos and his coworkers made an investment gamble that didn't pay off for most investors, but it paid off in dividends for him. The risky investments allowed him to cushion the blow to the buying price and gave the time for their physical book sales to grow into what it is today.

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text: The summary should answer the question

refinement: Jeff Bezos was met with a lot of questions about whether Amazon could even get off the ground. He had to take 60 meetings to raise $1 million and he raised it from 22 people at approximately $50,000 a person. The first question every investor asked him was what the internet was. Eventually, it seemed people caught on to what he was building.

answer: Jeff Bezos describes his first pitch to investors for Amazon. Despite a lot of questions about whether or not the business would get off the ground, he managed to successively raise $1 million. He did this by spreading $50,000 amongst 21 investors.

text: This sentence is too vaugue for a question and answer summary

refinement: Jeff Bezos was met with a lot of questions about whether Amazon could even get off the ground. He had to take 60 meetings to raise $1 million and he raised it from 22 people at approximately $50,000 a person. The first question every investor asked him was what the internet was. Eventually, it seemed people caught on to what he was building.

answer: ThWorld's biggest online retailer, Amazon, had its beginnings for which Bezos worked very hard. He spent many hours trying to raise funds for it by taking 60 meetings with potential investors, who often questioned what the internet is for. Eventually, he got funds from 22 investors at $50,000 per head and went on to build Amazon. The Amazon, with its soaring success, still racks up losses every quarter by Bezos estimates, but people seem to be on his side.

text: The company is not the river. This sentence should be removed

refinement: ThWorld's biggest online retailer, Amazon, had its beginnings for which Bezos worked very hard. He spent many hours trying to raise funds for it by taking 60 meetings with potential investors, who often questioned what the internet is for. Eventually, he got funds from 22 investors at $50,000 per head and went on to build Amazon.

text: This sentence is incoherent and irrelevant and should be removed

refinement: He spent many hours trying to raise funds for it by taking 60 meetings with potential investors, who often questioned what the internet is for. Eventually, he got funds from 22 investors at $50,000 per head and went on to build Amazon.

answer: Jeff Bezos was met with a lot of questions about whether Amazon could even get off the ground. He had to take 60 meetings to raise $1 million.

text: More detail is necessary. It should discuss the amount of investors he had, and how they all spent 50,000

refinement: Jeff Bezos was met with a lot of questions about whether Amazon could even get off the ground. He had to take 60 meetings to raise $1 million and he raised it from 22 people at approximately $50,000 a person. The first question every investor asked him was what the internet was. Eventually, it seemed people caught on to what he was building.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what the article says about Sallie Krawcheck.

answer: Sallie Krawcheck was one of the most recognizable women on Wall Street. She was fired from her position as Citigroup’s chief financial officer after she said that the firm had an obligation to pay back some of the money that their clients had lost because of its advice. Krawcheck believes that being a woman in a high-ranking leadership role led to her dismissal. She channeled that rejection into becoming a first-time entrepreneur and launched an investing platform for women called Ellevest. The biggest risk is not taking any career risk, Krawcheck says. We all need to be pushing ourselves in different directions, otherwise we risk having the world just pass us by.

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refinement: Sallie Krawcheck was one of the most recognizable women on Wall Street. She was fired from her position as Citigroup’s chief financial officer after she said that the firm had an obligation to pay back some of the money that their clients had lost because of its advice. Krawcheck believes that being a woman in a high-ranking leadership role led to her dismissal. She channeled that rejection into becoming a first-time entrepreneur and launched an investing platform for women called Ellevest.

answer: Krawcheck was one of the most recognizable women on Wall Street and a high-ranking banking professional. However, in 2008 during the financial crisis, she was publicly fired from her position as Citigroup's chief financial officer. She believes that being a woman in a high-ranking leadership role led to her dismissal. She channeled her rejection into becoming a first-time entrepreneur and launched Ellevest, an investing platform for women.

answer: Krawcheck was one of the most recognizable women on Wall Street. However, in 2008 during the financial crisis, she was publicly fired from her position as Citigroup's chief financial officer. She believes that being a woman in a high-ranking leadership role led to her dismissal. She channeled her rejection into becoming a first-time entrepreneur and launched Ellevest, an investing platform for women. The biggest risk is not taking career risks, according to Krawcheck.

text: Remove this line as it is irrelevant

refinement: Krawcheck was one of the most recognizable women on Wall Street. However, in 2008 during the financial crisis, she was publicly fired from her position as Citigroup's chief financial officer. She believes that being a woman in a high-ranking leadership role led to her dismissal. She channeled her rejection into becoming a first-time entrepreneur and launched Ellevest, an investing platform for women.

text: Add in why she was fired

refinement: Krawcheck was one of the most recognizable women on Wall Street. However, in 2008 during the financial crisis, she was publicly fired from her position as Citigroup's chief financial officer after she said that the firm had an obligation to pay back some of the money that their clients had lost because of its advice. She believes that being a woman in a high-ranking leadership role led to her dismissal. She channeled her rejection into becoming a first-time entrepreneur and launched Ellevest, an investing platform for women.

answer: Sallie Krawcheck was one of the most recognizable women on Wall Street. She was fired in 2008 after she said that the firm had an obligation to pay back some of the money that their clients lost because of its advice. Krawcheck believes that being a woman in a high-ranking leadership role led to her dismissal. She has since become a first-time entrepreneur and launched Ellevest, an investing platform for woman.

answer: Sallie Krawcheck was one of the most recognizable women on Wall Street. She was publicly fired from her position as Citigroup's chief financial officer after she said that the firm had an obligation to pay back some of the money that their clients had lost because of its advice. She believes that being a woman in a high-ranking leadership role led to her dismissal. She channeled that rejection into becoming a first-time entrepreneur and launched an investing platform for women called Ellevest.

answer: Sallie Krawcheck was one of the most recognizable women on Wall Street. She was fired from her position as Citigroup’s chief financial officer after she said that the firm had an obligation to pay back some of the money that their clients had lost because of its advice. Krawcheck believes that being a woman in a high-ranking leadership role led to her dismissal. She channeled that rejection into becoming a first-time entrepreneur and launched an investing platform for women called Ellevest. The biggest risk is not taking any career risk, Krawcheck says. We all need to be pushing ourselves in different directions, otherwise we risk having the world just pass us by.

text: These lines are not relevant

refinement: Sallie Krawcheck was one of the most recognizable women on Wall Street. She was fired from her position as Citigroup’s chief financial officer after she said that the firm had an obligation to pay back some of the money that their clients had lost because of its advice. Krawcheck believes that being a woman in a high-ranking leadership role led to her dismissal. She channeled that rejection into becoming a first-time entrepreneur and launched an investing platform for women called Ellevest.


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I look down at my feet, swinging them back and forth because my legs can’t reach the ground. It’s dark, and my seat is wet with a mixture of old rain and early-morning dew. I’m tired; I’ve been awake all night. I’m cold; there’s a slight breeze that I hadn’t noticed before now. But I am not afraid. Back to the West, over my shoulder, the sky is dark as night. Clouds that drenched the previous day with rain are passing off into the distance, leaving a shining trail of puddles and wet pavement like an enormous snail. Toward the horizon in front of me, however, I see the sky is clear, and just starting to brighten.

I feel the cool breeze again, and I shift uncomfortably. I hear the faint crinkling of paper. I reach into my jacket and pull out the incomplete letter. I unfold it carefully, making no sudden movements, and press it flat against my thigh. I pull a pen out of my other jacket pocket, and study the blank space after the word “Dear.” I wrote this final letter after two rough drafts, but I can’t think of who I wrote it for. My parents are long dead. I have no friends, no other family. No one to apologize to. I can’t say goodbye to any loved ones, but hopefully I’ll get to say hello to a few.

I glance at my watch. Twenty minutes after five. I set my pen down beside me and fold my letter, placing it back in my jacket pocket, the salutation still incomplete. I look down at my swinging legs again. I remember when I used to climb the tree in our back yard, and sit with my feet dangling. In my young imagination I’d always thought that tree was as tall as a skyscraper. I lean forward a few inches and look down through my dangling feet at the sidewalk forty-two stories below. I hope I get to see my parents again.

I very carefully hold the edge of the building as I get my feet under me, and very slowly stand up. The sun will be rising soon, and I want to see it one more time.

I stand up very carefully and look forward, toward the East. I can see the rim of the bright orange sun peeking over the horizon, drawing long shadows from all the buildings. I sigh and say a silent prayer. I ask God to understand why I want this. Why I need this. I hope he’ll forgive me, or at least let me see my family, just once, just for a moment. I miss my mom, and my dad.

I can feel tears starting to flow; not for me, but for my family. I want to tell them I love them, and that I’m sorry for what I’m doing. Maybe I’ll get to.

I can’t see the sun anymore, my tears have blurred it too much, but I can still feel its warm rays on my face. I turn slowly away from the light. I extend my arms straight out on either side, then immediately feel stupid and lower them again. I settle for keeping my hands about six inches from my pockets, palms facing forward. I wipe my eyes and look down to see the heels of my shoes are hanging off the edge, before my eyesight blurs again. I lift my gaze again, wipe my eyes one last time, and slowly lean backward, inch by inch. When gravity finally takes hold, it catches me by surprise and I hunch forward as my body instinctively tries to save itself, but it’s too late. I can only face up toward the clear sky, which is framed by buildings that seem to be shooting upward. And then I’m gone.

title: My first short story

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the narrator preparing to do?

answer: The narrator is preparing to jump off the ledge of a building in order to commit suicide.

answer: The narrator is preparing to commit suicide by jumping off the side of a building.

answer: Suicide

text: The answer could be more specific.

refinement: He is planning to commit suicide by jumping off a building.

answer: The narrator is preparing to commit suicide by leaping off a 42 storey building. All they are waiting for is for the sun to rise so they can see the start of one more day. When the sun rises the narrator takes action and leaps from the building.

text: The last sentence is unnecessary.

refinement: The narrator is preparing to commit suicide by leaping off a 42 storey building. All they are waiting for is for the sun to rise so they can see the start of one more day.

answer: He is planning to kill himself by jumping off a building.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the purpose of the letter and why does the narrator not complete it?

answer: The narrator is writing the letter to say goodbye to their family. They do not complete it because they want to die, and they believe this is the last chance they will have to do so. By not completing the letter, they are also avoiding the pain of goodbyes which is too much for them to bear.

text: The reason given as to why the narrator doesn't complete the letter is inaccurate.

refinement: The narrator is writing the letter to say goodbye to their family. They do not complete it because their parents are dead and they don't have any other family or friends. Therefore, they have no one to apologize or say goodbye to.

answer: The narrator can't know who to be writing to, taking solace in suicide.

text: This does not state the purpose of the letter.

refinement: The letter is a suicide note. The narrator can't know who to be writing to, taking solace in suicide.

text: The phrasing of the second sentence can be clearer.

refinement: The letter is a suicide note. The narrator doesn't finish the letter because they don't have anyone left to say goodbye to, since their parents are dead and they don't have any other family or friends.

answer: The purpose of the letter was to write a suicide note. The narrator starts to address it and then realizes that there is no one left to apologize to. Their parents are dead and they have no other friends or family?

text: Question mark should be a period.

refinement: The purpose of the letter was to write a suicide note. The narrator starts to address it and then realizes that there is no one left to apologize to. Their parents are dead and they have no other friends or family.

answer: The narrator is writing the farewell letter to whoever he feels he needs to apologize to. He decided to not complete the letter because ultimately he wanted to take his own life by jumping off a building. He knows that it will break the hearts of his deceased parents, but he feels that the pain of staying around is greater and can't be dealt with anymore. He couldn't face those that he loves in person, so wrote the letter instead. So the purpose of the letter is to apologize for the hurt and anguish caused by his decision and to let those he loves know that he truly loved them.

answer: The narrator wants to complete a letter but finds that he cannot for whatever reason. He can't think of who to address it to because he has absolutley no one.


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I was lying on something soft, my body sunk into it. When I opened my eyes everything was so white, so clean.
“Where am I?” I thought. “Am I dead?”

I sat up and looked around. I felt strangely light headed but not in an uncomfortable way. It felt like I was flying.
When my eyes adjusted to the brightness I saw a figure approaching me. I felt no fear but more of rejoice, like seeing an old friend after a long time.

I stood up, but fell backwards; only to find a stool behind me, in which I sat. When the figure got closer I saw it was a man. His skin was somewhat of a mixture of white, brown and black, I couldn't figure out the colour.
As he came closer he started to speak. I had never heard the language but I somehow recognized it. To my amazement I could understand it. He was speaking towards me, but not to me. What he said was beautiful. He said “Come here my child, for you have nothing to fear with Me. Walk along side Me and you will never feel the need of anything ever again.”

When the man was close enough I stood up. At that moment he was within five meters of me. I asked him “Where are we?” And he answered “We are where you want us to be. We can be anywhere.” I looked around for the second time and my heart nearly skipped a beat; we were in my childhood home, in the living room.
The man sat down and so did I.

After a short while I asked him “Are you God?”

“Yes.” He answered.

“But if you are God then I must be dead.”

“Must you?” He asked. “For you to be dead you had to be living at some point.”

“Are you saying I don’t exist?”

“No. On the contrary; you are the only one that exists.”

“What are you saying?”

“I am saying that you are the only human being in the world.”

I did not quite understand what he was talking about and he must have realized that because he said. “You are the only man in the world and every other human is your imagination. What I am telling you now I have told you countless of times.”

I started to get very confused and felt a headache coming. “Just to get this straight; I am not dead because I was never alive, I am the only man and everything else is my imagination and you have told me this before? How come I can’t remember it then?”

God signed and pointed to the door. “When you walk through that door you will be born again. You will know everything from all your past ‘lives’ but not remember anything from them.”

“What is the point in this?”

“The point is very simple; when you have lived through everything you will know everything and then you will become God.”

“So I will replace you?”

“Correct.”

“And the only thing I have to do is walk through that door?” I pointed at the door and felt a small shiver lead up my spine.

“Also correct.”

I stood up in haste and was going to walk to the door when God interrupted me. “But I must warn you; you are automatically walking to your doom.”

“I know, but since I don’t really live I don’t really die either, do I?” I said, with a grin, and walked through the door.

“Smart kid” mumbled God “I wonder how long it will take him this time to figure out that he is my son.”

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title: The world as we know it

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the narrator?

answer: The narrator lives in a blissful, beautiful land where there's a man and a manifestation of God (or just God Himself). The narrator is talking with God about their unorthodox conception of birth and death, and the concept of "death" at all. The narrator does not believe that he exists, not in the sense that he is a person but a kind of construct in God's mind. God tells him that he needs to live the lives of everyone to know everything and become God, but the catch is all of the people in the narrator's life were only manifested and he has to walk through a door to be reborn again. The narrator is quite unwilling and downright afraid of what will happen to him after he walks through the door and does so, becoming so confused and afraid.

text:
- The passage does not describe the land where the narrator lives.

- There is no evidence that the narrator is frightened to go through the door.

refinement: The narrator lives in a room where a manifestation of God appeared to him. God talks to him about the nature of his existence. However, the narrator does not believe that he exists, not in the sense that he is a person but a kind of construct in God's mind. God tells him that he needs to live the lives of everyone to know everything and become God, but the catch is all of the people in the narrator's life were only manifested and he has to walk through a door to be reborn again.

answer: God tells the narrator that he is the only real human being in the world, and that everyone else is just in his imagination. He has apparently been told this countless times, but he can't remember it. God says that the goal of this process is for the narrator to replace him. Finally, God reveals that the narrator is also his son.

text: The response is missing a little of the narrator's perspective on the whole saga.

refinement: God tells the narrator that he is the only real human being in the world and that everyone else is just in his imagination. He has apparently been told this countless times, but he can't remember it. God says that the goal of this process is for the narrator to replace him. The narrator is confused and does not fully believe God. Though God warned him of the doom that awaits him if he goes through the door to obtain all knowledge, the narrator happily went through. Finally, God reveals that the narrator is also his son.

answer: The narrator is told by God that the only human being in the world is the narrator himself and all other humans are imaginary. He is warned of potential doom when he chooses to proceed through the door, but proceeds anyway. The narrator appears to be curious, courageous and confident in his decision. The narrator also appears to have a sense of innocence. Overall, the narrator is portrayed as capable and curious.

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The narrator is a man who was lying on something soft and awoke in a bright white space. Upon seeing a figure approaching him, the narrator finds out that the figure is God. The text indicates that God has told the narrator this before and when the narrator asks what the point of the experience is, God tells him that the only requirement is to walk through the door and upon doing this, the narrator will experience rebirth and become God himself.

The overall message of the text is that the narrator is unborn and indestructible, meaning that upon rebirth he will eventually take the place of God. The narrator is portrayed as an intelligent person with whom God has a sort of fatherly relationship with.

text: - Though God reveals that the narrator is his son, there seem to be no sort of fatherly relationship between them.

refinement:
The narrator is a man who was lying on something soft and awoke in a bright white space. Upon seeing a figure approaching him, the narrator finds out that the figure is God. The text indicates that God has told the narrator this before and when the narrator asks what the point of the experience is, God tells him that the only requirement is to walk through the door and upon doing this, the narrator will experience rebirth and become God himself.

The overall message of the text is that the narrator is unborn and indestructible, meaning that upon rebirth he will eventually take the place of God. The narrator is portrayed as an intelligent person who, unknown to him, is God's son.

answer: The text does not reveal much about the narrator. The narrator does not recall how he came, but he does recall talking to God. So, the narrator is probably someone who is spiritually inclined, has faith in God. Apart from knowing God, the only other information we can learn about the narrator is that he seems to know about his past, but does not recall it.

text:
- The narrator does not seem to be recalling any information in the passage - the experience he is having seems to be happening to him in the present.

- We cannot be fully sure that the narrator has faith in God.

refinement: The text does not reveal much about the narrator. The narrator does not recall how he came, but he finds himself talking to God about the nature of his existence as well as life and death. The narrator seems a bit skeptical about whatever God is saying about his being the only human in existence.

text: There is more information about the narrator than is revealed here, especially about his relationship with God and knowledge.

refinement: The text does not reveal much about the narrator. The narrator does not recall how he came, but he finds himself talking to God about the nature of his existence as well as life and death. The narrator seems a bit skeptical about whatever God is saying about his being the only human in existence. The narrator seems willing to leave God's presence as soon as possible though he is told leaving through the door available would bring his doom as well as bring untold knowledge. The narrator happily leaves after which God reveals he is his son.


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The plot of Yakuza 0

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is served up like a fresh bowl of udon noodles; simmering, full of twists and turns, and satisfying to the end. While I very much enjoyed the bone-cracking street fights, numerous oddball side characters, and the Lonely Planet guide’s worth of entertaining diversions along the way, it’s really the taut tale of betrayal and the bitter arm wrestle for power at its centre that kept me glued to the controller throughout.Yakuza 0 is set in 1988 and serves as an origin story for two of the series’ most prominent characters, Kazuma Kiryu and Goro Majima, who find themselves caught up in a land war amongst rival clans. Whereas the previous game in the series, Yakuza 5, juggled five different storylines and felt somewhat convoluted as a result, Yakuza 0 benefits from focusing on the plights of Kiryu and Majima, each scorned by their respective families and whose paths ultimately converge in the end.
It’s a gangster tale that adheres mostly to convention, with menacing mob bosses, car bombings, blackmail, and the like, but it’s a tale told well and told thoroughly. Much like the Metal Gear Solid series, Yakuza 0 isn’t afraid of taking control away from us for extended periods in order to deliver a lengthy cutscene to advance the plot and develop the characters, but I never felt in any way detached from the events onscreen thanks to the strong performances of the actors and the consistently powerful writing.
Recent open-world releases struggle to compete when it comes to the sheer density of detail packed into Sega’s latest.

Although the slightly wooden character animations serve as a reminder that this is a game developed to straddle console generations (the Japanese version was simultaneously released on PS3), Yakuza 0 otherwise manages to nail the look and feel of its Tokyo and Osaka-inspired settings. Recent open-world releases like Mafia III and Watch Dogs 2 might dwarf the maps of Yakuza 0 in terms of scale, but both struggle to compete when it comes to the sheer density of detail packed into every nook and cranny of Sega’s latest.
The neon-soaked streets tread a fine line between gorgeous and garish, the Don Quijote discount stores are claustrophobic caverns of consumerism, and vendors on the street keep handing you pocket tissues for no apparent reason. While Yakuza 0’s retro setting isn’t exactly Grand Theft Auto: Vice City when it comes to revelling in ‘80s nostalgia, there are enough nods to the era to reinforce the sense of time and place - from the pagers used by the characters to the authentic Walkman billboards and the playable OutRun and Space Harrier games in the local arcades.

Diversionary tactics

These arcade games are just the tip of the time-sinking iceberg. As is now customary for the series, Yakuza 0 always provides alluring C, D, and E options when you’re on your way from A to B. There’s fishing, bowling, batting practice, several kinds of gambling, pool, darts, karaoke, dancing, underground fight clubs, and plenty more.
The bulk of these optional activities are well realised and fleshed out with fun challenges to complete, and they range from the addictively simple reflex-testing batting cage to the relatively deep real estate business run by Kiryu in Tokyo and Majima’s hostess bar empire in Osaka. The latter two management simulations in particular require a substantial time investment but yield maximum yen, and while I only scratched the surface of them on my way to completing the 30-hour story, I intend on returning to them in Yakuza 0’s post-credits ‘Premium Adventure’ mode in order to find out exactly how lucrative they can become.
Streets of Rage

Of course, a more direct way of nabbing fistfuls of cash is by using your actual fists (and feet) to beat it out of the neverending supply of street thugs who engage you in a scrap on sight. Kiryu and Majima each have three different fighting styles that can be switched between on the fly, and I relished in the ability to tailor my technique to suit each individual scenario. For example, I found Majima’s button-mashing breakdancing stance that turns him into a human whirligig of spinning kicks to be perfect for carving through crowds of enemies, yet his baseball bat-toting slugger stance is a better choice for one-on-one boss fights where more powerful and direct attacks are required.

Yakuza 0’s fighting system is wonderfully brutal, and the context-sensitive finishing moves offer an especially satisfying way to curb-stomp a shoe-shaped exclamation point into an opponent’s face at the end of each encounter. However, a somewhat piecemeal counter system means that for all its flashy moves, the all-in brawling is never quite as fluid as the one-on-many fighting experiences of the Batman: Arkham games, at least when it comes to transitioning back and forth between enemies. This makes Yakuza 0 seem a little behind the curve in that regard, which is disappointing considering we’re now half a dozen games into the mainline of the Yakuza series.
What Yakuza 0 does have in common with the Caped Crusader, though, is the fact that neither of these violent gangsters ever actually kills anyone. Each enemy that Kiryu and Majima dispatch is left to pick up their teeth rather than push up daisies, which is refreshing given that most open-world crime games are effectively exercises in casual mass murder. (Not that killing stops me from enjoying those games; it’s just nice to play something that approaches it differently for a change.) The general lack of killing in Yakuza 0 means that when certain character deaths do occur over the course of the story - whether they be good, bad, or grey - they land with significantly more impact.

Off the beating path

Contrasting nicely with the heavier themes of the main storyline are Yakuza 0’s side quests. There are around 100 of these mini-missions to hunt down across the two main city settings and they’re typically lighthearted if not utterly ridiculous. I particularly liked teaching the members of a wannabe punk rock band how to talk tough ahead of a meet and greet with fans (and deliberately feeding them the wrong lines with hilarious results), and bluffing my way through a job as a producer on the set of a television commercial.
Even though a number of these side missions are merely simple fetch quests, they’re almost always worth your while purely because the quest-giving locals are so hilarious to interact with. Indeed half of them seem like they've wondered off the set of a Japanese game show, and I was particularly fond of the perpetually pelvic-thrusting Mr. Libido who seemingly shows up every now and then purely to unleash a string of snicker-worthy sexual euphemisms. Overall, I enjoyed meeting with the eccentric supporting cast of Yakuza 0, and often went out of my way to seek them out because I knew I would typically be in for a surprise.

Verdict

Yakuza 0 is another sprawling entry in the open-world series, packed with an extraordinary amount of things to do and centred around a genuinely compelling crime story. Since it’s a prequel, it’s also unburdened by the series’ increasingly intricate backstory and thus far more approachable for newcomers than the last few Yakuza games. While its melee combat may lag slightly behind modern genre standards, Yakuza 0 still hits far more than it misses and is a big, bold and bruising tour through the Japanese underworld.

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question: What is the title of the media being reviewed?

answer: Yakuza 0

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The plot of Yakuza 0

answer: The article is a review of Yakuza 0.

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The plot of Yakuza 0

answer: Yakuza 0

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The plot of Yakuza 0

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The plot of Yakuza 0

question: What year did it come out?

answer: Yakuza 0 was released in 2016.

text: This information cannot be found in the article to my left.

refinement: The article does not provide this information.

answer: 1988

text: It's set in 1988, but the article doesn't state that it came out then.

refinement: The article does not provide this information.

answer: 1988.

text: The article says the game is set in 1988, but it doesn't provide the release date of the game.

refinement: The article does not provide this information.

answer: 1988

text: The article says the game is set in 1988, but it doesn't state when it was released.

refinement: The article does not provide that information.

question: What is it about?

answer: The article discusses the plot and features of Yakuza 0, a video game set in Japan in the 1980s. It also discusses the game's fighting system and side quests.

answer: Gang members in Japan.

answer: The plot of Yakuza 0

text: This is technically accurate, but I think a bit more detail is good to add.

refinement: The plot of Yakuza 0, which is following the activities of a gang in Japan in the 1980s.

answer: The plot of Yakuza 0.

text: This is technically accurate, but I think a bit more detail is good to add.

refinement: The plot of Yakuza 0, which is following the activities of a gang in Japan in the 1980s.

question: What kind of media is this?

answer: This is a review of the video game Yakuza 0.

answer: A video game review.

answer: A video game.

answer:
A) A book
B) A movie
C) A TV show
D) A video game

text: That was not an answer, but a list of potential answers.

refinement: Yakuza 0 is a video game and this is a review of it.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: Yakuza 0 is a prequel to the Yakuza series, set in 1988. It is a story of betrayal and power struggles, with plenty of side quests and mini-games to keep players entertained. The fighting system is fun and brutal, and the story is compelling, despite some minor issues with the combat system.

answer: The plot of Yakuza 0 is served up like a fresh bowl of udon noodles; simmering, full of twists and turns, and satisfying to the end. While I very much enjoyed the bone-cracking street fights, numerous oddball side characters, and the Lonely Planet guide’s worth of entertaining diversions along the way, it’s really the taut tale of betrayal and the bitter arm wrestle for power at its centre that kept me glued to the controller throughout.

text: There need to be some hard details that aren't just copied and pasted from the review directly.

refinement: Yakuzo 0 is a video game set in Japan in the 1980s. The plot of Yakuza 0 is served up like a fresh bowl of udon noodles; simmering, full of twists and turns, and satisfying to the end. While I very much enjoyed the bone-cracking street fights, numerous oddball side characters, and the Lonely Planet guide’s worth of entertaining diversions along the way, it’s really the taut tale of betrayal and the bitter arm wrestle for power at its centre that kept me glued to the controller throughout.

answer: Yakuza 0 is an intricate game that explores Tokyo's underbelly. Highlights include tours of Japan, elaborate food menus, and brutal fights. It came out in 1988.

answer: Yakuza 0 is a video game set in 1988 that serves as an origin story for two of the series' most prominent characters, Kazuma Kiryu and Goro Majima. The game is set in Tokyo and Osaka, and the main characters are involved in a land war amongst rival clans. The game is praised for its detailed setting and its compelling story.


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GUILLERMO ANTONIO MORENO GARCÍA (born August 15, 1956) is a Dominican lawyer and politician, whom served as the District Attorney for the Distrito Nacional during the term 1996-1997.[1] He's the president of the party Country Alliance.

Early years and family

Moreno is the son of the writer and poet Juan Isidro Moreno and Mercedes García Fernández, being the first of seven brothers. His grandfather Domingo Moreno Jimenes was a great writer of the 20th century. He is also ancestral related to the former Dominican presidents Manuel Jimenes and his son Juan Isidro Jimenes.

Guillermo Moreno is a practicing lawyer, graduated from Law Degree at the PUCMM in 1980. In 1987, he obtained the title of Master in International Studies at the Diplomatic School of Spain.

As a professional

His professional experiences include having been a Consultant to the International Program for the Eradication of Child Labor of the International Labour Organization (ILO-IPEC); Consultant to the UNICEF; He is currently coordinator of the Master in Criminal Procedure Law at the Pontificia Universidad Católica de Santiago; Dean of the “School of Law” of the Iberoamerican University (UNIBE); Drafting member of the Official Commission for the Review and Updating of the Code of Criminal Procedure (current Criminal Procedure Code; Co-drafting of the Statute of the Public Ministry; Founding Partner of the Moreno, Rodríguez & Sterling Law Office.

As a politician

In his youth, he joined the movements that fought for respect for human rights, public liberties and democratic values in the 12-year-old government of Joaquín Balaguer.

Guillermo Moreno García was appointed Prosecutor of Santo Domingo, D.N. on August 21, 1996 and remained in office until September 27, 1997.

During his tenure several aspects stand out: A sustained effort to modernize, institutionalize and clean up the Ministry, as well as a determined fight against corruption, political crimes, the preservation of the rule of law against abuses of power.

He was removed a year after the constant pressure he received from the National Palace to vary the course of cases of administrative corruption that reached his office. The trigger for his dismissal was the corruption file in the National Lottery, for which officials from the administration of former President Joaquín Balaguer, businessmen and technicians of that institution were kept in prison.[2]

Candidacy for the Presidency of the Dominican Republic

In 2007 Moreno is presented as a candidate for the presidency by a group of political forces, local movements, artists, intellectuals and independent citizens.

In 2008, Moreno ran as a candidate for the presidency for the Movement for Independence, Unity and Change (MIUCA), reaching 3% of the total. In 2009, it launched the movement Country Alliance to aspire to the Presidency of the Dominican Republic.

On July 6, 2010, the members of the “Country Alliance” movement submitted to the Central Electoral Board the documentation required for recognition as a political party, with the intention of participating in the presidential elections that they will celebrate in May 2012.[3] On the 16th of the same month, in an interview carried out on the television program El Día, Guillermo Moreno outlined the three main axes under which Country Alliance is articulated: (1) Increase the productive capacity, the generation of employment and the export capacity of the Dominican Republic; (2) Draw up Public Policies that allow the enjoyment and enjoyment of fundamental social rights, especially a quality educational and health system and; (3) Strengthening of the Democratic Institution and the deepening of public and legal security and strengthening of transparency in the Dominican State [4] El Día].

In February 2011, once the party was recognized, the General Electoral Assembly of Country Alliance decided to present it as a candidate for the Presidency of the Republic, being accepted by the Central Electoral Board and thus becoming the first candidate for the 2012 Dominican Republic presidential election.

As a writer

Author and co-author of several publications on legal and political issues, including: Code of Criminal Procedure and Complementary Standards; Studies on Child Labor in Dominican Legislation; Criminal Justice of the Adolescent Person in the DR; Political Parties vs. Citizen Sovereignty; Subvert the Policy; and Political Parties and Democracy in the Dominican Republic. As a writer on legal and political issues, for more than two decades, in various national and foreign print media, the weekly columns stand out: “CPP”, in Diario Libre; “Legal Situation”, in the Judicial Gazette Magazine; “Citizenship”, in the Revista Ahora and continued in the disappeared weekly “Clave Digital”.

In January 2009, he published his book “_Alianza: Una Propuesta de País_”.

Personal life

He is married to Aura Celeste Fernández, with whom he fathered Juan Domingo and Abel Guillermo.

Family tree

[1] Biografía de Guillermo Moreno García, candidato presidencial de Alianza País

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title: Guillermo Moreno García

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why was Moreno put forward as a presidential candidate by the Movement for Independence, Unity and Change (MIUCA)?

answer: Moreno became a candidate of this group in 2008 as a candidate for the presidency of the Dominican Republic. Nothing else is given as a reason in the article.

text: The response does not address the reason listed in the article.

refinement: Moreno became a candidate of this group in 2008 as a candidate for the presidency of the Dominican Republic. According to the article, he was presented as a candidate for the presidency by a group of political forces, local movements, artists, intellectuals and independent citizens in 2007.

answer: He was elected a member of the Official Commission for the Review and Updating of the Code of Criminal Procedure (current Criminal Procedure Code and Co-drafting of the Statute of the Public Ministry). He taught at the Iberoamerican University (UNIBE) School of Law. He was previously the prosecutor of Santo Domingo. In short, he had all the necessary credentials.

text: While Moreno did do everything listed in the response, those are not credentials for the presidency.

refinement: In short, he had all the necessary credentials.

text: The response does not address the reason listed in the article.

refinement: According to the article, Moreno was presented as a candidate for the presidency by a group of political forces, local movements, artists, intellectuals and independent citizens in 2007.

answer: The Movement for Independence, Unity and Change (MIUCA) put forward Guillermo Moreno García as a presidential candidate due to his political experience, both as a lawyer and prosecutor, as well as his desire to strengthen the democratic institutions of the Dominican Republic.

text: The response does not address the reason listed in the article.

refinement: The Movement for Independence, Unity and Change (MIUCA) put forward Guillermo Moreno García as a presidential candidate due to his political experience, both as a lawyer and prosecutor, as well as his desire to strengthen the democratic institutions of the Dominican Republic. According to the article, he was presented as a candidate for the presidency by a group of political forces, local movements, artists, intellectuals and independent citizens in 2007.

answer: Moreno was put forth as a candidate for the presidency by MIUCA due to his efforts to clean up and modernize the office of the District Attorney in Santo Domingo as well as his efforts in fighting against corruption.

text: The response does not address the reason listed in the article.

refinement: Moreno was put forth as a candidate for the presidency by MIUCA due to his efforts to clean up and modernize the office of the District Attorney in Santo Domingo as well as his efforts in fighting against corruption. According to the article, he was presented as a candidate for the presidency by a group of political forces, local movements, artists, intellectuals and independent citizens in 2007.

answer: Guillermo Moreno Garcia is a Dominican lawyer and politician. He is also the president of a political party called Country Alliance. After getting his law degree and working to tackle corruption on many fronts, he was appointed Prosecutor of Santo Domingo in 1996. He was however removed after a year as he put up a fight to stem corruption, political crimes and uphold the rule of law. This track record might be what attracted MIUCA (later called Country Alliance) to platform him as a presidential candidate.

text: The response does not address the reason listed in the article.

refinement: Guillermo Moreno Garcia is a Dominican lawyer and politician. He is also the president of a political party called Country Alliance. After getting his law degree and working to tackle corruption on many fronts, he was appointed Prosecutor of Santo Domingo in 1996. He was however removed after a year as he put up a fight to stem corruption, political crimes and uphold the rule of law. This track record might be what attracted MIUCA (later called Country Alliance) to platform him as a presidential candidate. According to the article, he was presented as a candidate for the presidency by a group of political forces, local movements, artists, intellectuals and independent citizens in 2007.


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PETTAI (புதுபேட்டை) is an industrial suburban area in Tirunelveli City. It is approximately 60 kilometers of downtown Tirunelveli along the Southern Railway line to Tenkasi.[1] It is been administered by the Tirunelveli City Municipal Corporation.

History

Pettai actually got its name from the Vandi Pettais (godowns with cart-parking facilities). These Vandi Pettais were dealing with few agriculture commodities such as coriander, and chilli. Pettai is a populous urban area with many small-scale industries.

Glorious Time

Similar to many towns, Pettai also had a glorious time when the Co-operative Spinning Mill was in operation. People from across Tamil Nadu flocked here for the employment in this mill. Most of them settled here.

Industrial Estate

Pettai Industrial Estate is operated by SIDCO.[2] The major products manufactured here are PVC pipes, tanks, cooking utensils, nails, mattresses, etc. TANSI is also operated inside this estate. Government ITI and MSME are also present.

Educational Institutions

Though Pettai is situated near the Oxford of South India (Palayamkottai), it also has established educational institutions.

-   Government ITI[3]
-   Kamarajar Higher Secondary School
-   MDT Hindu College[4]
-   Rani Anna Girls' School
-   St. Antony's High School

Apart from this, there are number of private schools serving for the Pettai Public.

Religious Places

Though Pettai can be termed as a diverse population. Thevars form the majority.

Following are the notable temples in Pettai

-   Sivan Kovil near the police station
-   Murugan Kovil in Pandiyapuram
-   Vinai Theertha Vinayagar Kovil
-   Sundara Vinayagar Kovil
-   Narayanaswamy Kovil
-   Santhana Mariamman Kovil
-   Durgai Amman Kovil
-   Thiripura Sundari Amman Kovil
-   Uchinimakaali Amman Kovil

Following are the mosques in Pettai

-   Mohammed Nainar (M.N.P) Pallivasal
-   Rahumania Pallivasal (R.P)
-   M.G.P Pallivasal

Below are the notable Churches

-   St. Antony's Church
-   CSI Christ Church
-   St. Madha Church
-   Philadelphia Good News Mission Church, Veerabaghu Nagar, Pettai.

Famous

Pettai is famous for evening snacks such as Vadai and Murukku. They are famous because they are fried in the oils produced at traditional oil mills here. Chekkadi had many chekku (traditional oil mills). It is also famous for Parotta stalls. Earlier only Pettai hotels served parottas during lunch along with rice.

Famous Person

Quide Millath. On his remembrance, the government hospital in has been renamed. The Cheranmahadevi road flows within Pettai is also named after him as Quaid e Millath Road.

Shopping Hub

Pettai Bazaar serves as a shopping hub for the nearby villages.

Entertainment

Pettai had a movie theatre, Meenakshi Theatre.

Demographics

At the 2001 census, Pettai had 1,060 inhabitants, with 534 males and 526 females.[5][6]

Notes

Category:Cities and towns in Tirunelveli district

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title: Pettai, Tirunelveli

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why is education important in Pettai?

answer: Pettai is situated near Palayamkottai. This area is known as the Oxford of South India and is also close to a lot of other cities with higher education and well known malls / stores / restaurants.

text: The established educational institutions in Pettai should also be listed.

refinement: Pettai is situated near Palayamkottai. This area is known as the Oxford of South India and is also close to a lot of other cities with higher education. Pettai also has its own higher education institutions, including: Government ITI, Kamarajar Higher Secondary School, MDT Hindu College, Rani Anna Girls' School, and St. Antony's High School. There are also a number of private schools serving Pettai public.

answer: Pettai is close to Palayamkottai, which is considered "The Oxford of South India." However, it also has its own educational institutions. These are: Government ITI, Kamarajar Higher Secondary School, MDT Hindu College, Rani Anna Girls' School, and St. Anthony's High School. There are also a number of private schools serving for the Pettai Public.

answer: There are a number of educational institutions in Pettai, including an ITI, which makes education important in the town. Since there are many small-scale industries in Pettai, a well-educated and trained workforce is important to ensure that these businesses continue to be successful.

text: The text should mention the "Oxford of South India."

refinement: Pettai is close to Palayamkottai, "the Oxford of South India." There are a number of educational institutions in Pettai, including an ITI, which makes education important in the town. Since there are many small-scale industries in Pettai, a well-educated and trained workforce is important to ensure that these businesses continue to be successful.

text: It should list all of the schools in Pettai.

refinement: Pettai is close to Palayamkottai, "the Oxford of South India." There are a number of educational institutions in Pettai, including Government ITI, Kamarajar Higher Secondary School, MDT Hindu College, Rani Anna Girls' School, and St. Anthony's High School. Since there are many small-scale industries in Pettai, a well-educated and trained workforce is important to ensure that these businesses continue to be successful.

text: Final line is irrelevant. It should be replaced with information about the private schools in Pettai.

refinement: Pettai is close to Palayamkottai, "the Oxford of South India." There are a number of educational institutions in Pettai, including Government ITI, Kamarajar Higher Secondary School, MDT Hindu College, Rani Anna Girls' School, and St. Anthony's High School. There are also a number of private schools serving the Pettai public.

answer: It's nearby Palayamkottai,the Oxford of South India. There is one Government ITI. There's also the Kamarajar Higher Secondary School. It might be implied that the well educated people can be found there.

text: Near to

refinement: It's near to Palayamkottai,the Oxford of South India. There is one Government ITI. There's also the Kamarajar Higher Secondary School. It might be implied that the well educated people can be found there.

text: These lines do not summarize the list of schools completely. Therefore they should be removed and replaced with a complete list.

refinement: It's near to Palayamkottai,the Oxford of South India. In addition, it has its own schools such as: Government ITI, Kamarajar Higher Secondary School, MDT Hindu College, Rani Anna Girls' School, and St. Anthony's High School. It might be implied that the well educated people can be found there.

text: This is not a good inference from facts given. In addition, the text should instead mention private schools.

refinement: It's near to Palayamkottai, the Oxford of South India. In addition, it has its own schools such as: Government ITI, Kamarajar Higher Secondary School, MDT Hindu College, Rani Anna Girls' School, and St. Anthony's High School. There are also a number of private schools serving the Pettai public.

answer: Education is important in Pettai because there are a number of educational institutions in the area. These schools and colleges provide students with the resources necessary for their future success. Higher levels of education help individuals to secure higher-paying jobs and contribute to the overall economic productivity of the community.

text: This entry does not summarize the information contained in the article. It is too vague and general. First, information relating to the Oxford of South India should be given.

refinement: Pettai is close to Palayamkottai, "the Oxford of South India." Education is important in Pettai because there are a number of educational institutions in the area. These schools and colleges provide students with the resources necessary for their future success. Higher levels of education help individuals to secure higher-paying jobs and contribute to the overall economic productivity of the community.

text: Describe the schools concretely instead of listing generalities. These lines should be replaced with a list of schools.

refinement: Pettai is close to Palayamkottai, "the Oxford of South India." Pettai is close to Palayamkottai, "the Oxford of South India." There are a number of educational institutions in Pettai, including Government ITI, Kamarajar Higher Secondary School, MDT Hindu College, Rani Anna Girls' School, and St. Anthony's High School. There are also a number of private schools serving the Pettai public.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What religious groups exist in Pettai?

answer: It is clear that there are many religions in Pettai. Thevars form the majority of religious groups, and there are at least nine Hindu-associated or perhaps Thevar temples in Pettai. There are also three mosques and four churches, suggesting that the city has Christian and Muslim minorities as well.

answer: Thevars form the majority. Other groups include Muslims, Christians, and Hindus.

text: The critique would be improved with supporting metadata about the religious temples.

refinement: Thevars form the majority. There are at least nine Thevar or Hindu temples in Pettai. Other groups include Muslims, Christians, and Hindus. There are four churches and three mosques.

answer: Pettai has a mostly Thevar population. There are also mosques and churches in the town.

text: Add concrete information about Christians and Muslims as well

refinement: Pettai has a mostly Thevar population. There are at least nine Thevar or Hindu temples in Pettai. Other groups include Muslims, Christians, and Hindus. There are four churches and three mosques.

answer: Thevars form the majority. This may be because Christians do not form a large part of the population compared to other Indian cities.

text: This is an inference which does not have any evidence for its assertion.

refinement: Thevars form the majority. There are at least nine Thevar or Hindu temples in Pettai. Other groups include Muslims, Christians, and Hindus. There are four churches and three mosques.

answer: Thevars form the majority in Pettai.

text: Add information about the Muslims and Christians and temples

refinement: Thevars form the majority in Pettai. There are at least nine Thevar or Hindu temples in Pettai. Other groups include Muslims, Christians, and Hindus. There are four churches and three mosques.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What foods are famous in Pettai and why?

answer: They're known for Vadai and Murukku. They're fried with the oil produced at local oil mills and are famous for it. They're also known for parotta stalls and rice.

text: More information about the history of parotta stalls would be nice.

refinement: They're known for Vadai and Murukku. They're fried with the oil produced at local oil mills and are famous for it. They're also known for parotta stalls and rice. In the past only Pettai hotels served parotta with rice.

text: The oil mills are traditional, and called Chekku

refinement: They're known for Vadai and Murukku. They're fried with the oil produced at local oil mills and are famous for it. The oils mills are traditional mills called "chekku" located in Chekkadi. They're also known for parotta stalls and rice. In the past only Pettai hotels served parotta with rice.

answer: While Vadai and Murukku are common snacks in the South of India, Pettai is famous for producing them because they are fried in oils produced in the tradtional oil mills of the region. These are called "chekku" and are located in Chekkadi. They also are famous for Parotta stalls, a North Indian bread, but also fried in oil. Because Parottas are a more northern food item, in the past they were only served at Pettai hotels, during lunch, accompanied by rice.

answer: Pettai is famous for evening snacks such as Vadai and Murukku. These foods are famous because they are fried in the oils from traditional oil mills in the area.

text: Tells us more about the oil mills

refinement: Pettai is famous for evening snacks such as Vadai and Murukku. These foods are famous because they are fried in the oils from traditional oil mills in the area. These are called "chekku" and are located in Chekkadi. These are called "chekku" and are located in Chekkadi.

text: Parottas are not mentioned.

refinement: Pettai is famous for evening snacks such as Vadai and Murukku. These foods are famous because they are fried in the oils from traditional oil mills in the area. These are called "chekku" and are located in Chekkadi. They also are famous for Parotta stalls, a North Indian bread, but also fried in oil. Because Parottas are a more northern food item, in the past they were only served at Pettai hotels, during lunch, accompanied by rice.

answer: The vadais and Murukku foods, fried in oils originally produced there.

text: Fails to mention the traditional mills.

refinement: Pettai is famous for evening snacks such as Vadai and Murukku. These foods are famous because they are fried in the oils from traditional oil mills in the area. These are called "chekku" and are located in Chekkadi.

text: Mention the parottas

refinement: Pettai is famous for evening snacks such as Vadai and Murukku. These foods are famous because they are fried in the oils from traditional oil mills in the area. These are called "chekku" and are located in Chekkadi. They also are famous for Parotta stalls, a North Indian bread, but also fried in oil. Because Parottas are a more northern food item, in the past they were only served at Pettai hotels, during lunch, accompanied by rice.

answer: Pettai is famous for evening snacks such as vadas and murukkus. Both of these foods are fried in traditional oil produced at local oil mills, making them a popular favorite among both locals and visitors.

text: Mention the traditional oil mills

refinement: Pettai is famous for evening snacks such as Vadai and Murukku. These foods are famous because they are fried in the oils from traditional oil mills in the area. These are called "chekku" and are located in Chekkadi.

text: Mention Parottas

refinement: Pettai is famous for evening snacks such as Vadai and Murukku. These foods are famous because they are fried in the oils from traditional oil mills in the area. These are called "chekku" and are located in Chekkadi.  They also are famous for Parotta stalls, a North Indian bread, but also fried in oil. Because Parottas are a more northern food item, in the past they were only served at Pettai hotels, during lunch, accompanied by rice.