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LLOYD CHARLES ELAM (October 27, 1928 – October 4, 2008) was an American psychiatrist who served as president of Meharry Medical College from 1968 to 1981. Before assuming the presidency at Meharry, Elam was the first black person to earn a medical degree from the University of Washington School of Medicine and he established Meharry's psychiatry department and psychiatric residency program.

Early life

Elam was born in Little Rock, Arkansas. His father was a carpenter, and his mother insisted that the family walk to their destinations rather than riding segregated city transportation.[1] Elam was 15 when he graduated from Dunbar High School.[2] By the age of 17, he was the Sunday school superintendent at his church.[3]

After attending a local junior college, he moved to Illinois, where he worked at an automotive plant and took classes at Roosevelt University. Graduating from Roosevelt in 1950, Elam served in the U.S. Army and then went to medical school at the University of Washington School of Medicine.[4] When he graduated in 1957, he was the school's first black medical graduate.[5]

Career

Elam completed an internship and psychiatry residency in Chicago, after which he joined the psychiatry staff at Chicago's Billings Hospital. In 1961, Elam became an assistant professor at Meharry Medical College and founded its psychiatry department.[6] He started the psychiatry residency at Meharry and created one of the first psychiatric day treatment programs in Nashville.[7] Before becoming Meharry's president in 1968, Elam was the psychiatry department chairman and the interim medical school dean.[8]

During his presidency, Meharry implemented an $88 million capital campaign, adding new towers to the school's teaching facility (George W. Hubbard Hospital) and constructing several other buildings. Meharry also established a graduate school for public health, biochemistry and other health-related fields. Subsequent president Wayne Riley later described Elam as “the president who really built the modern-day Meharry.”[9] In the early 1970s, Elam was elected to the board of directors of Kraftco, and he later served on the boards of Merck & Co. and BellSouth Telecommunications.[10][11]

In 1981, with Meharry and the George W. Hubbard Hospital facing serious financial difficulties, the school's board of directors dismissed Elam as president and named him chancellor. Several years earlier, Elam wanted to step down as president but the board had asked him to stay. _The New York Times_ said that Elam did not want to give up his role at the time of his 1981 dismissal. Elam was replaced on an interim basis by radiologist Richard G. Lester of the University of Texas Health Science Center at Houston, and the move generated controversy because Lester was the first white president in the school's history.[12]

Elam was a fellow at the Center for Advanced Study in the Behavioral Sciences in 1982. The same year, he became a Distinguished Service Professor of Psychiatry at Meharry, and he served in that capacity until 1995, when he became volunteer faculty at the school. He became an emeritus professor in 1996. Elam received an honorary doctorate from Harvard University, and in 1988 he received the Eleanor Roosevelt Key, which is the highest honor bestowed upon alumni of Roosevelt University.[13]

Death and legacy

Meharry's Lloyd C. Elam Mental Health Center provides psychiatric services and substance abuse treatment.[14] He died while on a trip to Mississippi in 2008.[15] Elam and his wife Clara had two children.[16]

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title: Lloyd C. Elam

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was Elam born?

answer: October 1927

text: Include the day

text: Incorrect year

answer: October 27, 1928

answer: Elam was born on October 27, 1928.

answer: Elam was born on October 27, 1928.

answer: He was born on October 27, 1928.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where did Elam receive his medical degree?

answer: He received his medical degree from the University of Washington School of Medicine.

answer: He received his medical degree from the University of Washington School of Medicine.

answer: The University of Washington School of Medicine

answer: The University of Washington.

text: Specifically the School of Medicine

refinement: The University of Washington School of Medicine.

answer: Elam received his medical degree from the University of Washington School of Medicine.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where did Elam serve as President?

answer: Meharry Medical College

answer: The Meharry Medical College

answer: Meharry Medical College

answer: Elam served as President of Meharry Medical College.

answer: Elam served as president of Meharry Medical College.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What award did Elam receive in 1988?

answer: The Eleanor Roosevelt Key, which is the highest honor bestowed upon alumni of Roosevelt University.

answer: Elam received an honorary doctorate from Harvard University.

text: True, but that is not the award he received in 1988

text: Provide a response

refinement: The Eleanor Roosevelt Key, the highest honor bestowed upon alumni of Roosevelt University

answer: The Eleanor Roosevelt Key, the highest honor bestowed upon alumni of Roosevelt University

answer: The Eleanor Roosevelt Key, which is the highest honor bestowed upon alumni of Roosevelt University.

answer: Elam received the Eleanor Roosevelt Key from Roosevelt University.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Lloyd Charles Elam was an American psychiatrist and president of Meharry Medical College. He was born in Little Rock, Arkansas, graduated from medical school, served in the army, and then was appointed interim dean at Meharry before being appointed president.

answer: Lloyd Charles Elam was the first black person to earn a medical degree from the University of Washington School of Medicine. He served as president of Meharry Medical College from 1968 to 1981.

answer: Lloyd C. Elam was an American psychiatrist who served as president of Meharry Medical College from 1968 to 1981. Elam created the psychiatry department and psychiatric residency program at Meharry, and during his presidency, the school implemented an $88 million capital campaign. Elam was fired in 1981, and died while on a trip to Mississippi in 2008.

answer: Lloyd Charles Elam was an American psychiatrist. He was the first black person to earn a medical degree from the University of Washington School of Medicine, he established Meharry's psychiatry department, and he served as President of Meharry from 1968 to 1981.

answer: Lloyd C. Elam was a psychiatrist who served as president of Meharry Medical College from 1968 to 1981. During his tenure, he implemented a $88 million capital campaign and began the psychiatry residency program at Meharry. In 1981, Elam was dismissed as president of the medical school, and replaced by a white president. Elam died in 2008.


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After rumors began swirling that SNL star PETE DAVIDSON was casually dating ponytail inventor ARIANA GRANDE, the actor began receiving comments from fans (haters?) suggesting that he—as a sufferer of borderline personality disorder—should not be in a relationship with anyone, let alone GRANDE. Davidson wasn’t having it, so he responded in the form of a screengrabbed message written in Apple’s Notes app.

Davidson has opened up about his mental health in the past, so in some ways his passionate response was unsurprising. It said, in part:

  “Normally I wouldn’t comment on something like this cause like fuck you. But I been hearing a lot of ‘people with bpd can’t be in relationships’ talk. I just wanna let you know that’s not true. Just because someone has a mental illness does not mean they can’t be happy and in a relationship. It also doesn’t mean that person makes the relationship toxic. Everybody is different and there are a lot of treatments for mental illnesses and I have done/am doing all of them. And I encourage those who struggle to seek help as well it has changed my life for the better.

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  I just think it’s fucked up to stigmatize people as crazy and say that they are unable to do stuff that anyone can do. It’s not their fault and it’s the wrong way for people to look at things.”

“For all those struggling I want you to know that I love you and I understand you and it is going to be okay,” he said at the end of the note. “That’s all. Love to everyone else.”

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CORRECTION: _An earlier version of this column said Pete Davidson was diagnosed with bipolar disorder, not borderline personality disorder. We regret the error and have revised the piece._

question: Who is Pete Davidson?

text: Provide a response

answer: Pete Davidson is an American actor and comedian who is best known for his work on Saturday Night Live.

answer: Pete Davidson is an SNL star.

answer: Pete Davidson is an SNL star.

question: What mental illness does Pete suffer from?

answer: According to the passage, Pete Davidson suffers from borderline personality disorder.

answer: Borderline personality disorder

answer: Pete suffers from Borderline Personality Disorder.

answer: Pete suffers from borderline personality disorder.

question: What did the fans have to say about Pete's dating life?

answer: They suggested that Pete shouldn't be in a relationship with anyone, let alone Ariana Grande, because he suffers from borderline personality disorder.

answer: The actor began to receive comments from fans saying as a sufferer of borderline personality disorder, Pete should not be in a relationship with anyone.

answer: Some fans were critical of Pete Davidson's decision to date Ariana Grande, as they believed that people with borderline personality disorder should not be in relationships.

answer: Fans were saying that Pete Davidson should not be in a relationship with anyone, let alone Ariana Grande, because he has borderline personality disorder.

question: Has Pete tried seeking any help?

answer: Yes, Pete has tried seeking help.

answer: Yes, Pete has tried seeking help.

answer: From the passage, it is clear that Pete Davidson has sought help for his mental illness. He mentions that he has "done/am doing all of them" and encourages others who struggle to do the same.

answer: Yes, Pete is undergoing treatment for his mental health.

question: Write a ~6 sentence summary.

answer: Pete Davidson, a star of Saturday Night Live, has been receiving comments from fans suggesting that he should not be in a relationship with anyone, let alone Ariana Grande, because he suffers from borderline personality disorder. Davidson responded to these comments in the form of a screengrabbed message written in Apple's Notes app. Davidson has opened up about his mental health in the past, so in some ways his passionate response was unsurprising. It said, in part: "Normally I wouldn't comment on something like this cause like fuck you. But I been hearing a lot of 'people with bpd can't be in relationships' talk. I just wanna let you know that's not true. Just because someone has a mental illness does not mean they can't be happy and in a relationship. It also doesn't mean that person makes the relationship toxic. Everybody is different and there are a lot of treatments for mental illnesses and I have done/am doing all of them. And I encourage those who struggle to seek help as well it has changed my life for the better. [...] I just think it's fucked up to stigmatize people as crazy and say that they are unable to do stuff that anyone can do. It's not their fault and it's the wrong way for people to look at things.” Davidson said at the end of the note, “For all those struggling I want you to know that I love you and I understand you and it is going to be okay,” he said at the end of the note. “That’s all. Love to everyone else.”

text: Just copied the input; not really a summary

text: Provide a response

refinement: There have been rumors that Pete Davidson, an SNL star, has started dating Ariana Grande. The actor began to receive comments that he, as a sufferer of borderline personality disorder, should not be dating anyone. Davidson posted a response arguing that people who suffer from mental illness can still be happy and have relationships, and saying that he is receiving treatment for his disorder.

answer: Pete Davidson, a SNL star, is dating Ariana Grande. Fans are concerned that he is a sufferer of borderline personality disorder and should not be in a relationship with anyone. Davidson responds to the comments by saying that he has done all the treatments for his mental illness and encourages others to seek help. He also says that it is not the fault of the sufferer and that it is wrong to stigmatize people as crazy. He ends by saying that he loves everyone and understands them.

text: Remove "He ends by saying that he loves everyone and understands them;" he says this specifically to other people struggling with mental illness, and in the response it feels taken out of context

refinement: Pete Davidson, a SNL star, is dating Ariana Grande. Fans are concerned that he is a sufferer of borderline personality disorder and should not be in a relationship with anyone. Davidson responds to the comments by saying that he has done all the treatments for his mental illness and encourages others to seek help. He also says that it is not the fault of the sufferer and that it is wrong to stigmatize people as crazy.

answer:
After rumors suggest that SNL star Pete is dating Ariana Grande, the actor received hate comments from fans (haters?) who said that as someone who suffers from mental illness (borderline personality disorder) Pete should not date anyone.

Pete has responded to these comments with a note stating that the fans' claims are untrue. He further says that a person with mental illness doesn't make the relationship toxic. He encourages others who suffer to also seek treatment as he did. Pete ends the note by saying he understands people who are struggling and assures them it's going to be okay.

answer: Pete Davidson, star of Saturday Night Live, responded to fans who questioned his relationship with Ariana Grande, as Davidson has been open about his struggles with borderline personality disorder. In a note on his phone, Davidson said that "it's not their fault" and that "everyone is different" and that "there are a lot of treatments" for mental illnesses. He also encouraged those struggling to seek help.

text: Doesn't convey that people criticized the relationship *because of* his disorder

refinement: Pete Davidson, star of Saturday Night Live, responded to fans who criticized his relationship with Ariana Grande because he struggles with borderline personality disorder. In a note on his phone, Davidson said that "it's not their fault" and that "everyone is different" and that "there are a lot of treatments" for mental illnesses. He also encouraged those struggling to seek help.

text: Davidson is *a* star of SNL

refinement: Pete Davidson, a star of Saturday Night Live, responded to fans who criticized his relationship with Ariana Grande because he struggles with borderline personality disorder. In a note on his phone, Davidson said that "it's not their fault" and that "everyone is different" and that "there are a lot of treatments" for mental illnesses. He also encouraged those struggling to seek help.

text: Davidson's response to the criticism is not well represented

refinement: Pete Davidson, a star of Saturday Night Live, responded to fans who criticized his relationship with Ariana Grande because he struggles with borderline personality disorder. In a note, Davidson argued that people with mental illnesses can still be happy and have relationships, and he noted that he is receiving treatment for his disorder. He also encouraged those struggling to seek help.


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Since MATT SMITH and BENEDICT CUMBERBATCH both made their respective splashes in the UK and the world beyond, fans have felt the two actors needed to work together. (Something about chins and cheekbones or something.) They were at least in the same room together a few times, which had fandom reeling, but did you know Smith almost played the role of John Watson in BBC’s _Sherlock_? Read on to find out why it didn’t happen.

Smith and _Doctor Who_ co-star KAREN GILLAN recently did an interview with The Daily Mail in which they discussed their casting stories from the sci-fi show. I’ve heard versions of both before but Smith included a juicy new tidbit.

  I nearly became Sherlock Holmes’s sidekick instead. Before _Doctor Who_ was even discussed I went to see STEVEN MOFFAT, the co-creator of the BBC’s _Sherlock_, to test for the role of Doctor John Watson. Steven saw me more as a Sherlock Holmes than a Watson, but the main part had already gone to Benedict Cumberbatch. However, Steven saw something in me that made him think I could be right for the role of The Doctor.

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Smith also talked to the Radio Times about the close call. “I thought my audition for Watson was very good,” says Smith. “But clearly not good enough! Basically they looked at it and went, ‘He’s not Watson. It’d be like having two Sherlocks in the room.'”

Obviously viewers have become quite smitten with the pairing of Cumberbatch as Sherlock and MARTIN FREEMAN as Watson but could you even imagine if Smith had landed that role? I don’t think it was the right pairing for them so I’m glad they decided to go in a different direction but I still want Cumberbatch to act next to Smith. Preferably as the Master.

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What are fans feelings towards a potential collaboration between Matt Smith and Benedict Cumberbatch?

answer: The fans are positive and willing it to happen.

text: "willing" - replace with "want"

refinement: The fans are positive and want it to happen.

answer: Fans feel the two would make a good team.

answer: Because of their striking good looks many fans have felt an intentional exclusion of such a collaboration.

text: "an intentional exclusion of such a collaboration." - this makes little sense and derails the answer. Rewrite it reflect what the fans are really feeling.

refinement: Because of their striking good looks, many fans have felt the actors needed to work together.

answer: Fans would likely be excited about the potential collaboration between Smith and Cumberbatch, even though Smith nearly ended up in the role of John Watson instead. Fans appreciate both actors and would love to see what kind of chemistry they could create on-screen.

text: "even though Smith nearly ended up in the role of John Watson instead." - is unnecessary information that should be deleted.

refinement: Fans would likely be excited about the potential collaboration between Smith and Cumberbatch. Fans appreciate both actors and would love to see what kind of chemistry they could create on-screen.

text: "Fans would likely be excited about the potential collaboration between Smith and Cumberbatch. Fans appreciate both actors and would love to see what kind of chemistry they could create on-screen." - redundant sentences that basically deliver the same message. Either one will work. One should be deleted.

refinement: Fans appreciate both actors and would love to see what kind of chemistry they could create on-screen.

answer: Fans would likely be ecstatic if the two actors collaborated on something. They're both admired by fans and the thought of them working together is enough to make people's hearts race. There's even an ironic humor among some fans that Smith almost landed the part of Sherlock Holmes' sidekick before Cumberbatch snatched it up. Some might say that's for the best since Cumberbatch and Watson are the ideal pairing, but that doesn't detract from the sentimentality of the missed opportunity.

text: "before Cumberbatch snatched it up" - it was Martin Freeman who landed the role of Watson, Sherlock's sidekick, not Cumberbatch.

refinement: Fans would likely be ecstatic if the two actors collaborated on something. They're both admired by fans and the thought of them working together is enough to make people's hearts race. There's even an ironic humor among some fans that Smith almost landed the part of Sherlock Holmes' sidekick before Martin Freeman snatched it up. Some might say that's for the best since Cumberbatch and Watson are the ideal pairing, but that doesn't detract from the sentimentality of the missed opportunity.

text: "Cumberbatch and Watson" - is incorrect. "Watson" should be "Freeman"

refinement: Fans would likely be ecstatic if the two actors collaborated on something. They're both admired by fans and the thought of them working together is enough to make people's hearts race. There's even an ironic humor among some fans that Smith almost landed the part of Sherlock Holmes' sidekick before Martin Freeman snatched it up. Some might say that's for the best since Cumberbatch and Freeman are the ideal pairing, but that doesn't detract from the sentimentality of the missed opportunity.

text: "They're both admired by fans and the thought of them working together is enough to make people's hearts race. There's even an ironic humor among some fans that Smith almost landed the part of Sherlock Holmes' sidekick before Martin Freeman snatched it up. Some might say that's for the best since Cumberbatch and Freeman are the ideal pairing, but that doesn't detract from the sentimentality of the missed opportunity." - superfluous information that should be deleted. The first sentence can stand on its own.

refinement: Fans would likely be ecstatic if the two actors collaborated on something.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the difference between Matt Smith and Karen Gillan's interview with the Daily Mail?

answer: Smith and Karen Gillan discussed their casting stories for Doctor Who, while Smith also talked about an unsuccessful audition for the role of Doctor John Watson on BBC's Sherlock.

answer: This interview contains the juicy tidbit that Smith almost played the role of John Watson in BBC's Sherlock. The alternate interview with Munro and Rock is about Doctor Who.

text: "The alternate interview with Munro and Rock is about Doctor Who." - this is not part of the passage and should be deleted.

refinement: This interview contains the juicy tidbit that Smith almost played the role of John Watson in BBC's Sherlock. The alternate interview with Munro and Rock is about Doctor Who.

answer: Smith's interview mentioned that he had almost landed the role of John Watson on BBC's Sherlock before Benedict Cumberbatch took the role. Whereas Gillan's interview focused on their respective casting stories for Doctor Who.

text: "before Benedict Cumberbatch took the role" - Cumberbatch did not get the role. It went to Martin Freeman.

refinement: Smith's interview mentioned that he had almost landed the role of John Watson on BBC's Sherlock before Martin Freeman took the role. Whereas Gillan's interview focused on their respective casting stories for Doctor Who.

answer: Smith talks about how he was almost cast as the Doctor instead of the Doctor's sidekick.

text: "the Doctor instead of the Doctor's sidekick." - this line doesn't really clarify anything and is confusing as to which "Doctor" is being talked about, Doctor Who or Doctor Watson. Also, Dr. Watson doesn't have a sidekick, he is one. Needs a full rewrite.

refinement: Gillian talked about her casting story for the sci-fi series (Dr. Who), while Smith shares a tidbit that he was almost cast as Dr. John Watson, Sherlock's sidekick, before landing the role of Doctor Who.

answer: Smith included a juicy tidbit.

text: "Smith included a juicy tidbit." - must indicate what tidbit this is.

refinement: Gillian talked about her casting story for the sci-fi series (Dr. Who), while Smith shares a tidbit that he was almost cast as Dr. John Watson, Sherlock's sidekick, before landing the role of Doctor Who.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How did Matt Smith get the leading Doctor Who role?

answer: He was recommended to the show's creators by Steven Moffat who liked his face.

text: "He was recommended to the show's creators by Steven Moffat who liked his face." - there is no evidence that Moffat likes Smith's face and there was no mention of him recommending Smith to the creators of Doctor Who.

refinement: Smith auditioned for the role of Doctor John Watson in BBC’s Sherlock even before Doctor Who was discussed. Sherlock's co-creator, Steven Moffat, thought he would be better suited to play Sherlock, but Benedict Cumberbatch already had the role. Steven saw something in Smith that made him think the actor would be a good fit for the role of The Doctor.

answer: He auditioned for the role of Doctor Watson but Steven Moffat, the co-creator of the BBC’s Sherlock, saw him as a potential Doctor.

text: "as a potential Doctor" - must indicate the show, Doctor Who and specify the role is for "The Doctor", otherwise the sentence makes little sense. Rewrite the last section.

refinement: He auditioned for the role of Doctor Watson but Steven Moffat, the co-creator of the BBC’s Sherlock, thinks Smith could be right for the role of "The Doctor" in the show, Doctor Who.

answer: He saw Steven Moffat for the lead role of Doctor John Watson and Moffat thought that Smith was more of a Sherlock Holmes.

text: "He saw Steven Moffat for the lead role of Doctor John Watson" - Sherlock is the lead role, not Doctor John Watson. Delete "lead"

refinement: He saw Steven Moffat for the role of Doctor John Watson and Moffat thought that Smith was more of a Sherlock Holmes.

text: "He saw Steven Moffat" - indicate who Moffat is.

refinement: He saw Sherlock's co-creator, Steven Moffat, for the role of Doctor John Watson and Moffat thought that Smith was more of a Sherlock Holmes.

text: "Smith was more of a Sherlock Holmes." - doesn't really explain why Smith got the Doctor Who role. Add what Steven saw in Smith.

refinement: He saw Sherlock's co-creator, Steven Moffat, for the role of Doctor John Watson and Moffat thought that Smith was more of a Sherlock Holmes. Steven saw something in Smith that made him think the actor could be right for the role of The Doctor.

answer: Smith was originally up for the role of John Watson in BBC's Sherlock series, but ultimately it went to Benedict Cumberbatch.

text: "Smith was originally up for the role of John Watson in BBC's Sherlock series, but ultimately it went to Benedict Cumberbatch." - a few things are wrong with this answer. First, the role of Dr. Watson went to Martin Freeman, not Cumberbatch. Second, Steve Moffat, Sherlock's co-creator, was never mentioned. Third, failed to establish the connection between Smith auditioning for the Watson role and Cumberbatch already cast as Sherlock.

refinement: Smith was originally up for the role of John Watson in BBC's Sherlock series, but Steven Moffat, the show's co-creator, thought Smith would be more suited to play Sherlock, a role which Benedict Cumberbatch had already landed. Despite this, Moffat saw something in Smith that made him think the actor could be right for the role of The Doctor in Doctor Who.

answer: Smith was initially considered for the part of Dr. John Watson on BBC's Sherlock, but he was eventually cast as The Doctor in BBC's Doctor Who.

text: "Smith was initially considered for the part of Dr. John Watson on BBC's Sherlock, but he was eventually cast as The Doctor in BBC's Doctor Who." - doesn't answer the question of how Smith got the part.

refinement: Smith was initially considered for the part of Dr. John Watson on BBC's Sherlock, but he was eventually cast as The Doctor in BBC's Doctor Who after Steven Moffat, Sherlock's co-creator, saw that the actor would be perfect to play The Doctor.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: The United Kingdom fans love Matt Smith and Benedict Cumberbatch ever since they graced the screens. Fans have always wanted them to be in a project together but it hasn't happened yet. Apparently, they were almost cast together in the BBC Sherlock, however, one of the directors decided Smith will be more suitable as a leading man for another project (Doctor Who).

answer: A piece in particular about Doctor Who discusses the near-miss of Matt Smith nearly playing John Watson in BBC's Sherlock instead of his current role as Doctor Who. Close to the moment, the producers ended up casting Benedict Cumberbatch instead, as Smith wouldn't have been a good match for the role. Smith does deliver how big of a mistake that would have been, saying Cumberbatch takes the show from good to great.

text: "Close to the moment, the producers ended up casting Benedict Cumberbatch instead, as Smith wouldn't have been a good match for the role." - they cast Martin Freeman, not Benedict Cumberbatch because he already landed the role of Sherlock.

refinement: A piece in particular about Doctor Who discusses the near-miss of Matt Smith nearly playing John Watson in BBC's Sherlock instead of his current role as Doctor Who. Close to the moment, the producers ended up casting Martin Freeman instead, as Smith wouldn't have been a good match for the role. Smith does deliver how big of a mistake that would have been, saying Cumberbatch takes the show from good to great.

text: "Smith does deliver how big of a mistake that would have been, saying Cumberbatch takes the show from good to great." - there is no evidence that Smith said any of this. Replace with something else.

refinement: A piece in particular about Doctor Who discusses the near-miss of Matt Smith nearly playing John Watson in BBC's Sherlock instead of his current role as Doctor Who. Close to the moment, the producers ended up casting Martin Freeman instead, as Smith wouldn't have been a good match for the role. However, the author of the post still wants to pair Smith alongside Benedict Cumberbatch, with the latter hopefully playing The Master.

answer: When the BBC considered Matt Smith for the part of Sherlock Holmes' sidekick, he lost the role to longtime co-star Benedict Cumberbatch. Smith ultimately decided that the two actors were not a good casting match for the characters.

text: "he lost the role to longtime co-star Benedict Cumberbatch" - this statement is incorrect because Cumberbatch and Smith have never worked together before, so nobody can be a longtime co-star. Another glaring issue is that the role for Dr. John Watson went to Martin Freeman, not Cumberbatch.

refinement: When the BBC considered Matt Smith for the part of Sherlock Holmes' sidekick, he lost the role to Martin Freeman. Smith ultimately decided that the two actors were not a good casting match for the characters.

text: "Smith ultimately decided that the two actors were not a good casting match for the characters." - he was never in control of casting for the show. This statement is an opinion from the post's author, Jill Pantozzi.

refinement: When the BBC considered Matt Smith for the part of Sherlock Holmes' sidekick, he lost the role to Martin Freeman. Smith says that Steven Moffat, Sherlock's co-creator, saw him more like a Sherlock, a role which ultimately went to Benedict Cumberbatch.

text: Did not meet the 3-sentence summary requirement. Add one more.

refinement: When the BBC considered Matt Smith for the part of Sherlock Holmes' sidekick, he lost the role to Martin Freeman. Smith says that Steven Moffat, Sherlock's co-creator, saw him more like a Sherlock, a role which ultimately went to Benedict Cumberbatch. The post's author, Jill Pantozzi, thinks Smith wasn't right for the Watson role either but hopes Smith and Cumberbatch can work together in the future.

answer: Due to the popularity of Matt Smith and Benedict Cumberbatch, fans had felt that the two actors needed to work together. They were in the same room together a few times, which still had fandom reeling. The article discusses Smith' interview with The Daily Mail where he revealed that he was close to being cast in the BBC's Sherlock as John Watson but was instead cast in the BBC's Doctor Who. While the article isn't positive about some fans' worry of not seeing Smith and Cumberbatch work together the reporter does hope that they will work together.

text: "Smith'" - add the missing "s"

refinement: Due to the popularity of Matt Smith and Benedict Cumberbatch, fans had felt that the two actors needed to work together. They were in the same room together a few times, which still had fandom reeling. The article discusses Smith's interview with The Daily Mail where he revealed that he was close to being cast in the BBC's Sherlock as John Watson but was instead cast in the BBC's Doctor Who. While the article isn't positive about some fans' worry of not seeing Smith and Cumberbatch work together the reporter does hope that they will work together.

text: "worry of not" - change the preposition "of" to "about"

refinement: Due to the popularity of Matt Smith and Benedict Cumberbatch, fans had felt that the two actors needed to work together. They were in the same room together a few times, which still had fandom reeling. The article discusses Smith's interview with The Daily Mail where he revealed that he was close to being cast in the BBC's Sherlock as John Watson but was instead cast in the BBC's Doctor Who. While the article isn't positive about some fans' worry about not seeing Smith and Cumberbatch work together the reporter does hope that they will work together.

text: "While the article isn't positive about some fans' worry about not seeing Smith and Cumberbatch work together the reporter does hope that they will work together." - the statement is confusing and the first part should be deleted.

refinement: Due to the popularity of Matt Smith and Benedict Cumberbatch, fans had felt that the two actors needed to work together. They were in the same room together a few times, which still had fandom reeling. The article discusses Smith's interview with The Daily Mail where he revealed that he was close to being cast in the BBC's Sherlock as John Watson but was instead cast in the BBC's Doctor Who. The reporter hopes that Smith and Cumberbatch will work together in the future.

text: Went over the 3-sentence summary requirement. Delete the second sentence.

refinement: Due to the popularity of Matt Smith and Benedict Cumberbatch, fans had felt that the two actors needed to work together. The article discusses Smith's interview with The Daily Mail where he revealed that he was close to being cast in the BBC's Sherlock as John Watson but was instead cast in the BBC's Doctor Who. The reporter hopes that Smith and Cumberbatch could work together in the future.

answer: The Daily Mail recently reported that Matt Smith almost landed the role of John Watson in BBC's Sherlock. However, the casting director ultimately decided Smith was better suited to play The Doctor in Doctor Who than Sherlock's sidekick. Smith admits the role of Watson was close, but ultimately lost to Benedict Cumberbatch.

text: "Smith admits the role of Watson was close, but ultimately lost to Benedict Cumberbatch." - he lost to Martin Freeman.

refinement: The Daily Mail recently reported that Matt Smith almost landed the role of John Watson in BBC's Sherlock. However, the casting director ultimately decided Smith was better suited to play The Doctor in Doctor Who than Sherlock's sidekick. Smith admits the role of Watson was close, but ultimately lost to Martin Freeman.

text: "was close," - remove the comma

refinement: The Daily Mail recently reported that Matt Smith almost landed the role of John Watson in BBC's Sherlock. However, the casting director ultimately decided Smith was better suited to play The Doctor in Doctor Who than Sherlock's sidekick. Smith admits the role of Watson was close but ultimately lost to Martin Freeman.


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In the early days of Reddit, they used it as their logo, one of them had drew it and it looked cute, they even made a stuffed version and named it Snoo because the name also sounded cute. Snoo was kept on top of their computer and they adored him.

But one winter, one cold cold winter, that ragtag band of the people who maintained Reddit huddled together in the last burning embers of their fireplace, for they couldn't pay the heating bill. They were growing colder and colder, and their hope of seeing the future of their small but promising site, Reddit.

Suddenly, Snoo rose and spoke, "Fear not, my brothers, for I am your Savior Snoo" this of course scared the daylights out of everyone in the room besides Snoo who now had forgotten the cold and gathered around Snoo and asked him questions as to why he had suddenly spoke. Snoo raised an adorably small hand and said,

"You mortals will not yet be able to comprehend my existence, only know you have a great piece in the puzzle of the universe, your site's members shall be many, do not lose hope for you shall survive this winter, you will one day by the last hope of the free thinking universe"

One among the eager crowd inquired the Snoo, "But how, our fire is quickly waning and our bodies will not produce heat much longer"

The Snoo turned to him and said, "Do not worry, that is why I have come, I know I must sacrifice myself to save the universe in the future, it is my piece in the puzzle and I shall take it with dignity"

With one final adorable salute he cast himself into the fireplace and stoked the flames. This bold sacrifice somehow kept the fire burning for eternity, and it still burns to this day. The Redditors who witnessed that bold, and strangely vague sacrifice decided to make effigies of the Snoo so that his face and his sacrifice that saved Reddit would be remembered. Of course, they profit off them in the Reddit Store, but it's the thought that counts.

title: The Origin of Snoo the Reddit Alien.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did Snoo sacrifice itself?

answer: To save Reddit in the future.

text: It was not to save Reddit, according to the passage.

refinement: According to the passage, to save the universe in the future.

answer: Snoo sacrificed itself to save the universe in the future.

answer: He wanted to keep the Reddit team alive and warm during the winter.

text: There is no evidence to support the answer.

refinement: He wanted to save the universe in the future.

answer: Snoo sacrificed itself to save the Reddit community from a potential end. In winter, the Redditors were in dire need of heat and without Snoo, they would likely have perished. Snoo realized this and sacrificed itself in order to keep the fire going and to save the community.

text: There is no evidence in the passage that supports the answer.

refinement: Snoo sacrificed itself to save the universe.

answer: That's not really answered.

text: The passage provides an answer.

refinement: Snoo sacrifices itself to save the universe.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Explain the concession about profiting off Snoo.

answer: In addition to preserving their Snoo, the Redditors profit off him too. They sell Snoo in their Redditor store.

answer: While the effigies of Snoo are made to remember his sacrifice, they also profit off of selling Snoo-related merchandise.

answer: The Snoo drawn by a Reddit user to represent their site was later promoted as the official mascot of the site and started being sold in the Reddit Store. This is primarily to memorialize his sacrifice in keeping the fire alive in the winter. The profits of these sales go towards maintaining Reddit.

answer: In the story, Snoo sacrificed himself to make sure there was a fire to keep Redditors warm because they had no heating bill. The Redditors decided to make effigies of Snoo to remember his sacrifice. Since the Reddit Store profits off Snoo, the passage implies that the profit was an afterthought and not something the Redditors intended when they created the Snoo effigies.

answer: The statement about profiting from the Snoo effigies in the Reddit Store was not adequate to definitively answer the question.

text: The passage offers sufficient reason why the Reddit team made effigies of Snoo.

refinement: The Reddit team decides to honor Snoo's sacrifice by making its effigies so that its sacrifice can be remembered.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the narrative meaning of winter besides being cold?

answer: The cold might be a reference to the other living creatures possibly freezing.

text: The answer makes no sense to me in relation to the question.

refinement: The winter signifies a barren and difficult year for the Reddit team.

answer: Eternal life.

text: This makes no sense.

refinement: The winter signifies a barren and difficult year for the Reddit team.

answer: Winter symbolizes a time of struggle and sacrifice that led to the creation of the Reddit Alien, Snoo. During the winter, Redditors were cold, helpless, and on the verge of failure when Snoo suddenly rose and spoke to save them. Snoo sacrificed himself by throwing himself into the fireplace in order to save everyone from freezing to death. Therefore, winter is a time of struggle that leads to redemption through sacrifice.

answer: Winter is a time of danger and struggle, both for the Redditors themselves and the larger community they represent. Snoo comes to save the day and give the Redditors hope for the future.

answer: The fate of Reddit isn't known yet, and it may just wither as many creatures and flora do in winter.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How does Snoo know the future?

answer: Snoo knows the future because he sacrificed himself to save the Reddit universe. This gives him insight into what the future holds for humanity.

answer: Snoo knows the future because he sacrificed himself to save the universe sometime in the future.

answer: It's not explained in the story. Along with Snoo's coming alive, it's another paranormal event.

text: It is implied in the passage.

refinement: Snoo knows the future because of the sacrifice it made to save the universe.

answer: It might be implied that Snoo is a time traveller, from the future.

answer: It may be implied from the passage that Snoo is another means of mythology to represent the usefulness that Reddit has to the future.

text: The answer has little relation to the question.

refinement: It is implied that Snoo is a time-traveler.

question: Write a ~7 sentence summary.

answer: Reddit turns into Snoo the Reddit alien. In the early days of Reddit, they used it as their logo. Now, the owners of Reddit are the last hope for free thinking universe. Snoo rises from the group and walks towards the fireplace before gently laying himself in the fire. The Reddit owners rejoice that Snoo had saved them and put up effigies of Snoo's face to remember him. They keep the fire burning to remember Snoo's sacrifice and to make profit off selling effigies of Snoo.

text: Reddit did not turn into Snoo.

refinement: In the early days of Reddit, they used Snoo as their logo. Now, the owners of Reddit are the last hope for free thinking universe. Snoo rises from the group and walks towards the fireplace before gently laying himself in the fire. The Reddit owners rejoice that Snoo had saved them and put up effigies of Snoo's face to remember him. They keep the fire burning to remember Snoo's sacrifice and to make profit off selling effigies of Snoo.

text: There is nothing in the passage stating that the Reddit team are the last hope for the free-thinking universe at the time Snoo appeared to them.

refinement: In the early days of Reddit, they used Snoo as their logo. Now, the owners of Reddit are broke, cold, and desperate. Suddenly, Snoo rises from the group and walks towards the fireplace before gently laying himself in the fire so it could burn for eternity. The Reddit owners rejoice that Snoo had saved them and put up effigies of Snoo's face to remember him. They keep the fire burning to remember Snoo's sacrifice and inadvertently made money off selling effigies of Snoo.

answer: The Reddit alien, Snoo, was created in the early days of Reddit. It was originally just depicted as an adorable character and named Snoo because the name was both cute and fitting. One winter, Reddit was in jeopardy and the members struggled to stay warm. Snoo stepped up and sacrificed himself in a fire. The people realized it was a noble sacrifice and made effigies of Snoo to remember. Today, Snoo is still the Reddit logo and is revered by the Reddit community.

answer: In the early days of Reddit, the team behind it huddle alongside the fireplace. They are out of money during winter, and their fate is not certain. Their mascot, Snoo the Reddit Alien rises to speak, "Fear not, my brothers, for I am your Savior Snoo." He tells them that Reddit will grow, have many users, and one day they will be the last hope of the free-thinking universe. He goes on to say that he knows they are cold, but he's there to sacrifice himself with dignity and hops onto the fire, keeping the team warm. The Redditors who witnessed this moment made effigies of Snoo so that his sacrifice will always be remembered. They also profited off Snoo.

answer: The Reddit Alien, now named "Snoo", was originally just an adorable drawing on top of Reddit. One cold winter, however, Redditors found themselves without heat. Snoo rose from the computer and said that he would sacrifice himself for the future of humanity. Snoo threw himself into the dying fireplace and saved the Redditors from freezing to death. Ever since that time, Snoo has been memorialized in a stuffed version and as an effigy.

text: Snoo already exists as a stuffed version before he sacrificed itself.

refinement: The Reddit Alien, now named "Snoo", was originally just an adorable drawing on top of Reddit. One cold winter, however, Redditors found themselves without heat. Snoo rose from the computer and said that he would sacrifice himself for the future of humanity. Snoo threw himself into the dying fireplace and saved the Redditors from freezing to death. Ever since that time, Snoo has been memorialized as an effigy.

answer: Reddit was born on the internet, and when it got to the point of being big, people created a mascot creature that they then called Snoo. One cold winter the people who maintained Reddit realized that they can't pay the heating bill. Huddled inside the last burning embers of their fireplace, they asked Snoo when he suddenly spoke if he could save them. Snoo courageously says yes, declaring that he must sacrifice himself so that the future of Reddit is saved. He then commits to his decision by jumping inside the freezing fireplace and stirring up the flames. This sacrifice somehow kept the fire burning for eternity, and it still burns to this day. It is now observed that effigies with the face of Snoo are used to observe his sacrifice and brave effort.


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NOQUI (or _Noki_) is a town and municipality in Zaire Province in Angola.[1] It is on the Congo River, just across the border from the city of Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo. The municipality had a population of 23,880 in 2014.[2]

Noki was the site of an early European trading post. In 1884 Alexandre Delcommune was appointed director of the Belgian factories in Boma and Noki.[3] In December 1884 Lieutenant Eduard Schulze tried to found a German colony near Noqui.[4]

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title: Noqui

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where is Noqui located?

answer: Noqui is located in Zaire Province in Angola just across the border from Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo.

text: "just across the border from Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo." - superfluous information that can be deleted.

refinement: Noqui is located in Zaire Province in Angola.

answer: It is located on the Congo River.

text: "It is located on the Congo River." while Noqui is on the Congo River, its actual location is Zaire Province in Angola.

answer: Noki is a town in Zaire Province in Angola.

answer: Noqui is located in Zaire Province in Angola just across the border from the city of Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo.

text: "just across the border from the city of Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo." - superfluous information that can be deleted.

refinement: Noqui is located in Zaire Province in Angola.

answer: Zaire Province in Angola

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the populaton of Noqui?

answer: 23,880 in 2014

answer: Noqui had a population of 23,880 in 2014.

answer: The population of Noqui is 23,880.

answer: The population of Noqui is 23,880.

answer: 23,880 as of 2014

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe some key geographical features of Noqui.

answer: Noqui is located on the Congo River, just across the border from the city of Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo. The municipality has a population of 23,880. Noqui is a relatively small town that is located in Zaire Province in Angola. Its geography makes it a strategic location for trade.

text: "The municipality has a population of 23,880." - a town's human population is not a geographical feature and should be deleted.

refinement: Noqui is located on the Congo River, just across the border from the city of Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo. Noqui is a relatively small town that is located in Zaire Province in Angola. Its geography makes it a strategic location for trade.

text: "just across the border from the city of Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo." - this isn't considered a geographical feature and must be deleted.

refinement: Noqui is located on the Congo River. Noqui is a relatively small town that is located in Zaire Province in Angola. Its geography makes it a strategic location for trade.

text: "that is located in Zaire Province in Angola." - location isn't considered a geographical feature and must be deleted.

refinement: Noqui is located on the Congo River. Noqui is a relatively small town. Its geography makes it a strategic location for trade.

text: "Noqui is located on the Congo River. Noqui is a relatively small town." - merge these two sentences for better flow.

refinement: Noqui is a relatively small town located on the Congo River. Its geography makes it a strategic location for trade.

text: "Its geography makes it a strategic location for trade." - this is pure speculation.

refinement: Noqui is a relatively small town located on the Congo River. Its geography presumably made it a strategic location for trade.

answer: The town is located on the Congo River.

text: Add that the town is relatively small.

refinement: The town is relatively small and located on the Congo River.

answer: Noqui is located on the Congo River, just across the border from Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo. The municipality has a population of 23,880 people. Noqui is surrounded on all sides by water and is on a major trade route connecting various countries.

text: "just across the border from Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo." - this isn't considered a geographical feature and must be deleted.

refinement: Noqui is located on the Congo River. The municipality has a population of 23,880 people. Noqui is surrounded on all sides by water and is on a major trade route connecting various countries.

text: "The municipality has a population of 23,880 people." - a town's human population is not a geographical feature and should be deleted.

refinement: Noqui is located on the Congo River. Noqui is surrounded on all sides by water and is on a major trade route connecting various countries.

text: "Noqui is surrounded on all sides by water and is on a major trade route connecting various countries." - there was no mention of this anywhere in the passage and must be deleted.

answer: The town is on the Congo River. It is in the Zaire province in Angola.

text: "It is in the Zaire province in Angola." - this is not considered to be a geographical feature.

answer: Noqui has artificial islands in the mouth of the Congo River that are the remains of dredging the river to remove large rocks and tree trunks.

text: "Noqui has artificial islands in the mouth of the Congo River that are the remains of dredging the river to remove large rocks and tree trunks." - there is no mention of this anywhere in the passage. Must be replaced with something else.

refinement: Noqui is a relatively small town that is located on the Congo River.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was Noqui founded?

answer: Noqui was founded in 1884.

text: "Noqui was founded in 1884." - this is incorrect because the founding date of Noqui was never mentioned. The date "1884" was when Alexandre Delcommune was appointed director of the Belgian factories in Boma and Noki, and when Lieutenant Eduard Schulze tried to found a German colony near Noqui. Replace the answer with "That information can't be found."

answer: Noqui was founded in 1884.

text: "Noqui was founded in 1884." - this is incorrect because the founding date of Noqui was never mentioned. The date "1884" was when Alexandre Delcommune was appointed director of the Belgian factories in Boma and Noki, and when Lieutenant Eduard Schulze tried to found a German colony near Noqui. Replace the answer with "That information can't be found."

answer: That isn't stated.

answer: Noqui was founded in 1884, so a different founder.

text: "Noqui was founded in 1884, so a different founder." - this is incorrect because the founding date of Noqui was never mentioned. The date "1884" was when Alexandre Delcommune was appointed director of the Belgian factories in Boma and Noki, and when Lieutenant Eduard Schulze tried to found a German colony near Noqui. Replace the answer with "That information can't be found."

answer: It is unknown when Noqui was founded.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: Noqui is a town located on the Congo river in Zaire province in Angola. It is a site of an early European trading post, and was the scene of the early attempt at a German colony. It is some 100 km from the capital city of Kinshasa.

text: Capitalize "river"

refinement: Noqui is a town located on the Congo River in Zaire province in Angola. It is a site of an early European trading post, and was the scene of the early attempt at a German colony. It is some 100 km from the capital city of Kinshasa.

text: "post," - remove the comma

refinement: Noqui is a town located on the Congo River in Zaire province in Angola. It is a site of an early European trading post and was the scene of the early attempt at a German colony. It is some 100 km from the capital city of Kinshasa.

text: "It is some 100 km from the capital city of Kinshasa." - this part was never mentioned anywhere in the passage and must be replaced.

refinement: Noqui is a town located on the Congo River in Zaire province in Angola. It is a site of an early European trading post and was the scene of the early attempt at a German colony. The municipality had a population of 23,880 in 2014.

answer: Noqui is a town in the Zaire Province in Angola. It is situated on the Congo River. In 1884, Lieutenant Eduard Schulze tried to found a colony near it.

answer: Noqui is a town and municipality in Angola. It is near the Congo River, across the border from Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo. The municipality has a population of 23,880. In the 19th century, it was the site of an early European trading post. In 1884, Lieutenant Eduard Schulze attempted to found a German colony near Noqui.

text: Went over the 3-sentence summary requirement. Delete or merge a few sentences.

refinement:
Noqui is a town and municipality in Angola, near the Congo River, across the border from Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo.
The municipality has a population of 23,880.
In the 19th century, it was the site of an early European trading post, and in 1884, Lieutenant Eduard Schulze attempted to found a German colony near Noqui.

answer: Noqui is a town and municipality in Angola near the Congo River. It was formerly a center of European trading, and was home to an attempted German colony.

text: Did not meet the 3-sentence summary requirement. Add one more.

refinement: Noqui is a town and municipality in Angola near the Congo River. It was formerly a center of European trading, and was home to an attempted German colony. The municipality had a population of 23,880 in 2014.

text: "a center of European trading," - there is no evidence that Noqui was ever the center of European trading, though there was a trading post. Revise this part.

refinement: Noqui is a town and municipality in Angola near the Congo River. It was formerly the site of an early European trading post and was home to an attempted German colony. The municipality had a population of 23,880 in 2014.

answer: Noqui is a town and municipality in Zaire Province in Angola. It is on the Congo River and just across the border from the city of Matadi in the Democratic Republic of the Congo. The town was the site of an early European trading post.


text:
This was my first short story I had to write for my Creative Writing class back when I was a Junior in high school. I hope you like it!

    "Ooohhhh," Helen groaned. She hurt everywhere. Being in a hospital for six weeks is really something that she wasn't looking forward to. She was about to call for a nurse to change the channel on her tiny tv (golf was not her thing!) when all of a sudden there was a knock on the door. "Come in," she called weakly.

   "Hello, I'm Dr. Bandade, how are you feeling?" He smiled a toothy smile.

   She gave the burly man a sarcastic look. "How do you *think* I'm feeling? I fell out of a five-story window!"

    The doctor pulled up a chair next to her. "Yes about that, how exactly did it happen? On this statement is says that you were pushed?"

    Helen cringed at the very thought of it, not only because it was painful, but she wasn't sure if he would believe her. "Well, it started out as a normal day. I woke up, ate breakfast, completed the daily crossword puzzle in the paper.

    "It was then I noticed that my window was open. A cool breeze swept through, so I decided to close it. I got up and went over to the window.

    "Right as I reached out to grab the handle, Rufus, my cat, rubbed against my leg, causing me to lose my balance. Before I knew it, I was falling out the window!

    "I screamed. I heard people screaming below me. I felt breathless. Panic swept over me.

    "It was only too soon when I came into contact with the ground. I heard bones shattering and I cried out in pain. In the distance, sirens wailed. The ambulance charged down the street.

    "After they put me on the stretcher, they hauled me away to the hospital, where they told me I was lucky to even be alive. They said I broke every bone in my body. I'll be here about six weeks, if not more." Her face fell when she told the doctor this. "And that's all that happened."

    Dr. Bandade looked over at her. "So you fell out accidentally then."

    "No! I was *pushed* out!" she yelled.

    "But you even said that you lost your balance, and no one was with you."

    "Yes there was... Rufus! *He* pushed me out!"

    The doctor rationalized, "But he's a *cat.* He probably didn't realize that rubbing against you to show affection would-"

    But Helen cut him off. "He *deliberately* rubbed too hard and made me lost my balance."

    "What would be the purpose for Rufus to push you?" The doctor raised an eyebrow.

    "He's just evil," she simply said.

    "Oh." He wrote some things down on his clipboard.

    Helen stared at him suspiciously. "What kind of doctor are you anyway, asking me all these questions?"

    "I'm a psychiatrist." He wrote some more things down.

    "What? You think I'm crazy don't you?! I'm telling you, my cat is trying to *kill me!"*

    Before Dr. Bandade could say anything, there was a knock at the door.

    "Excuse me, doctor," the nurse said, "but there's someone here to see her."

    Helen perked up a bit. A visitor to see her!

    The visitor walked into the room.

    "Rufus!" Helen shrieked.

    Standing there was the tabby cat. He was staring at her with glossy green eyes, slanted into slits. His tail twitched as if to say, "I'm *back."*

title: Paranoid?... Or Just Plain Evil?

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who does Helen blame for her fall?

answer: She blames Rufus, her cat. She claims that her cat is evil. Her doctor is a psychiatrist and thinks she may be paranoid. Then a visitor comes to the hospital. It's Rufus — her cat.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: She blames Rufus, her cat. She claims that her cat is evil.

answer: Helen blames Rufus, her cat, for her fall.

answer: Her cat Rufus.

answer: Helen blames her cat for her fall.

text: The response misses to name the cat.

refinement: Helen blames her cat, Rufus, for her fall.

answer: Helen blames her cat, Rufus, for her fall.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What injury did Helen suffer?

answer: She broke every bone in her body falling out of a five-story window.

answer: Helen suffered a fall out of a five-story window, causing her to break all of her bones.

answer: Helen suffered a fall from a five-story window.

text: The response misses to mention that she broke every bone in her body.

refinement: Helen suffered a fall from a five-story window, breaking every bone in her body.

answer: Helen broke every bone in her body and broke her skull.

text: The response misses to mention that Helen suffered a fall from a five-story window.

refinement: Helen suffered a fall from a five-story window and broke every bone in her body and broke her skull.

text: There is no evidence that Helen also broke her skull.

refinement: Helen suffered a fall from a five-story window and broke every bone in her body.

answer: She fell out a five story window. This caused her to break all of her bones. According to the medical report she must be in the hospital for six weeks.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: She fell out a five story window. This caused her to break all of her bones.


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PROFESSOR CAROL L. PRIVES FRS is the Da Costa Professor of Biological Sciences at Columbia University.[1] She is known for her work in the characterisation of p53, an important tumor suppressor protein frequently mutated in cancer.

Education

Prives was educated in Canada, received her BSc and PhD[2] in 1966[3] from McGill University, undertaking research in the lab of Juda Hirsch Quastel.[4] She pursued postdoctoral fellowships at Albert Einstein College of Medicine and the Weizmann Institute under the mentorship of Professor Michel Revel. after which she became a faculty member at the Weizmann Institute.[5] She received an honorary Doctor of Sciences degree from McGill University, her alma mater, on 29 May 2014 for her contributions to the understanding of p53.[6]

Research and career

In 1995, she was appointed as the Da Costa Professor of Biology at Columbia University.[7] She was the chair of the Department of Biological Sciences from 2000 to 2004.[8]

Her early interest in the SV40 DNA tumour virus as a model for eukaryotic gene expression and oncogenic transformation led her to the study of p53.[9] Since the late 1980s, her lab has focused on the p53 tumour suppressor gene, one of the most frequently mutated in human cancers.

Prives has served as chair of the Experimental Virology and the Cell and Molecular Pathology study sections of the National Institutes of Health. She has been a member of the Scientific Advisory Boards of the Dana–Farber Cancer Institute, the Memorial Sloan Kettering Cancer Center, the Massachusetts General Cancer Center, the National Cancer Institute,[10] and the Weizmann Institute.[11] She was a member of the board of directors of the American Association for Cancer Research from 2004 to 2007.

She is a member of the editorial boards of _Cell_,[12] _Oncogene_[13] and the _Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences_.[14]

Awards

-   1996 NIH MERIT Award
-   2000 Elected Fellow, American Academy of Arts and Sciences
-   2001 Elected Fellow, American Academy of Microbiology
-   2005 Elected Member, Institute of Medicine
-   2008 Elected Member, National Academy of Sciences[15]
-   2009 Rosalind E. Franklin Award for Women in Science,[16] National Cancer Institute
-   2010 Paul Janssen Prize in Biotechnology and Medicine, Center for Advanced Biotechnology and Medicine
-   2011 AACR-Women in Cancer Research Charlotte Friend Memorial Lectureship[17]
-   2015 Elected Fellow, AACR Academy[18]
-   2020 Elected Fellow, The Royal Society[19]

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title: Carol Prives

question: What field did Professor Carol L. Prives's work in?

answer: Biological Sciences

answer: Professor Carol L. Prives is known for her work in the characterisation of p53, a tumour suppressor protein frequently mutated in cancer.

answer: Prives's work is in the field of cancer research.

answer: Biological sciences.

question: Name her three most recent achievements.

answer:
- Elected Fellow of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences in 2001
- Elected Fellow of the American Academy of Microbiology in 2001
- Elected Member of the National Academy of Sciences in 2008

text: Those are not her three MOST RECENT

refinement:
- 2011 AACR-Women in Cancer Research Charlotte Friend Memorial Lectureship
- 2015 Elected Fellow, AACR Academy
- 2020 Elected Fellow, The Royal Society

answer: She was elected Fellow of the AACR Academy in 2015, Fellow of the Royal Society in 2020, and Fellow of the National Academy of Sciences in 2021.

text: There is no award from 2021.

refinement:
- 2011 AACR-Women in Cancer Research Charlotte Friend Memorial Lectureship
- 2015 Elected Fellow, AACR Academy
- 2020 Elected Fellow, The Royal Society

answer: She was awarded the AACR-Women in Cancer Research Charlotte Friend Memorial Lectureship in 2011, was elected fellow in the AACR Academy in 2015, and was elected fellow in the Royal Society in 2020.

answer:
-   Prives was elected Fellow of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences in 2001
-   Prives was elected Fellow of the American Academy of Microbiology in 2001
-   Prives was elected Member of the Institute of Medicine in 2005

text: MOST REVENT achievements

refinement:
- 2011 AACR-Women in Cancer Research Charlotte Friend Memorial Lectureship
- 2015 Elected Fellow, AACR Academy
- 2020 Elected Fellow, The Royal Society

question: Summarize her educational attainment.

answer: Educated in Canada, Prives received her BSc and PhD in 1966, pursued postdoctoral fellowships, and then received the honorary Doctor of Sciences degree in 2014.

answer: Professor Carol Prives received her Bachelor of Science degree from McGill University, and her PhD from the same university. She has also held various prestigious academic positions, including the Da Costa Professor of Biological Sciences at Columbia University.

answer: Prives was educated in Canada, received her BSc and PhD in 1966 from McGill University, undertook research in the lab of Juda Hirsch Quastel, and pursued postdoctoral fellowships at Albert Einstein College of Medicine and the Weizmann Institute under the mentorship of Professor Michel Revel.

answer: She received her BSc and PhD in 1966 from McGill University.

question: Summarize her research.

answer: Professor Carol Prives is known for her work in characterising the p53 tumour suppressor protein, which is frequently mutated in cancer. Her lab focuses on understanding how p53 works and how it can be used to develop new cancer treatments.

answer: Prives' early interest in the SV40 DNA tumour virus as a model for eukaryotic gene expression and oncogenic transformation led her to the study of p53. Since the late 1980s, her lab has focused on the p53 tumour suppressor gene, one of the most frequently mutated in human cancers.

answer: Prives's interest is in the SV40 DNA tumor virus, and her research focuses on p53 tumor suppressor gene.

answer: Prives is known for her work in the characterisation of p53, an important tumor suppressor protein frequently mutated in cancer.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: Prives is a professor at Columbia University and is known for her work in the characterisation of p53, an important tumor suppressor protein frequently mutated in cancer.

answer:
Carol Prives, a professor at Columbia University, focuses her research on p53 tumor suppressor gene,  one of the most frequently mutated in human cancers. She has received a lot of awards and recognitions in the field of biological sciences.

 interest is in the SV40 DNA tumor virus, and her research focuses on p53 tumor suppressor gene.

text: Her interest is in

refinement:
Carol Prives, a professor at Columbia University, focuses her research on p53 tumor suppressor gene,  one of the most frequently mutated in human cancers. She has received a lot of awards and recognitions in the field of biological sciences.

Her interest is in the SV40 DNA tumor virus, and her research focuses on p53 tumor suppressor gene.

answer: Carol Prives is a professor of biological sciences at Columbia University. She is known for her work in the characterisation of p53, an important tumor suppressor protein frequently mutated in cancer. She has received many awards for her work.

answer: Carol Prives is a renowned scientist who is known for her work on the p53 tumor suppressor protein. She has received many awards for her contributions to cancer research, including being elected to the National Academy of Sciences and the American Academy of Arts and Sciences.


text:
This is the final part of my Inspiration Point Christmas hunt outfit series. There are a few items that I haven’t shown in this series because a few are different colours of the same item but if you’d like to see all of the hunt prizes you can find, just click here for an overview!

Both of these dresses are special colours of past Collabor88 items from The secret store and Color.me.HOF! I feel that both of these adorable dresses would make lovely sophisticated Christmas party outfits if you glam it up with some gold accessories and of course an obligatory Jingle Bell headband from Le Poppycock!) The pose I’m showing you above with a little photoshop trickery and a cloning machine (hehe) is the couple pose hunt prize from Kirin I spoke briefly about in my first post. Great for best friends!

The Jingle bell headbands are only 15L$ from Le Poppycock and come in a few different colours. But you can also tint the colours yourself if you need it to match that special party dress this season! Also from Le Poppycock are the lipstick kiss face tattoo and the mistletoe which come together in the set. The mistletoe has a few different poses in it so you can surprise people with a Christmas smooch (not shown) while you’re out and about. And finally the poses above are part of a big fatpack of poses called Wine & Cheese at Le Poppycock and, as you can probably guess, they’re all named after fancy cheeses and posh wines (a few poses make you look like you’ve been on the sherry too!)

Anyway I hope you enjoyed this little mini-series of outfits you can make out of the very versatile pieces from the Inspiration Point Christmas Hunt. If you missed the other parts just click the links below!

Part 1

Part 2

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the article about?

answer: Inspiration Point Christmas Hunt

answer: The Inspiration Point Christmas Hunt

answer: The writer lists down several items that can be used for Christmas themed outfits.

answer: The article is giving examples of outfits you can make using items from the Inspiration Point Christmas Hunt.

answer: The article discusses outfits that can be created using items from the Inspiration Point Christmas Hunt. Different dresses and accessories are shown and described and elaborate poses are also included.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the writer asking the reader to click on, And what poses are they referring to?

answer: The writer is asking the reader to view a series of outfits made out of items from the Inspiration Point Christmas Hunt. The poses mentioned are part of a pack called "Wine & Cheese" from Le Poppycock, and they reference fancy cheeses and wines.

answer: The writer is asking the reader to click on a link for Wine & Cheese at Le Poppycock

text: It is incorrect that the writer is asking the reader to click on a link for Wine & Cheese at Le Poppycock.

refinement: The writer is asking the reader to click on series of outfits made from the Inspiration Point Christmas hunt.

text: It is omitted what poses are being referred to.

refinement: The writer is asking the reader to click on series of outfits made from the Inspiration Point Christmas hunt. The poses being referred to are a part of the pack of Wine & Cheese at Le Poppycock.

answer: The writer is asking the reader to click on the Le Poppycock website for a set of poses named Wine & Cheese. The poses mimic classy wine and cheese related activities.

text: It is incorrect that the writer is asking the reader to click on a set of poses.

refinement: The writer is asking the reader to click on the outfits. The poses are named Wine & Cheese and mimic classy wine and cheese-related activities.

answer: A link on the page called Wine & Cheese at Le Poppycock, and the poses there

text: It is incorrect that the writer is asking to click on poses.

refinement: A link on the page for outfits. And the poses are called Wine & Cheese at Le Poppycock.

answer: The contents are originally written for a webpage and thus refer to links and images not seen in the excerpt.

text: It is omitted what the poses are referring to.

refinement: The contents are originally written for a webpage and thus refer to links and images not seen in the excerpt. The poses are called Wine & Cheese and they are named after fancy cheeses and posh wines.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What are the two items being talked about?

answer: The two dresses included in the hunt are from The Secret Store and Color.me.HOF.

text: It is omitted that the second item is jingle bell headbands.

refinement: The first item is the two dresses and the second item the Jingle bell headband.

answer: The two items being talked about in this passage are two dresses from The Secret Store and Color.me.HOF and a couple pose from Kirin.

text: It is incorrect that the second item is a couple pose.

refinement: The two items being talked about in this passage are two dresses from The Secret Store and Color.me.HOF and a Jingle bell headband.

answer: Two dresses.

text: It is omitted that the second item is the jingle bell headbands

refinement: Two dresses and the Jingle bell headbands.

answer: One is the Jingle Bell headband which come in different colors. No details were given as to whether the headband has actual bells. The second is a face tattoo of a lipstick kiss mark that is supposed to allude to the Christmas tradition of kissing under a mistletoe. What makes the mark more Christmas-themed than a generic non-themed kiss mark is not stated.

text: It is incorrect that the two items are a headband and a face tattoo.

refinement: One is the Jingle Bell headband which come in different colors. No details were given as to whether the headband has actual bells. And the second item is the two dresses.

answer: The two items mentioned are dresses and face tattoo/mistletoe.

text: It is incorrect that the second is the face tattoo.

refinement: The two items mentioned are dresses and the Jingle bell headbands.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why does the writer refer to the items are outfits even if they are two simple accessories?

answer: The writer refers to the items as outfits for two reasons. Firstly, the items are clothing- themed items and second they would make nice outfits when dressed up with other pieces. These items can be used to create sophisticated outfits for Christmas parties or other festive events.

answer: It is possibly because there are photos of the items being used in tandem with other articles of clothing that completes a "Christmas" look.

answer: The wording "dresses" was chosen because it is less accurate

text: There is no evidence as to why the writer refers to the items as outfits.

answer: That information can't be found.

answer: The writer refers to the items as outfits because both are items that can be used for elegant occasions such as Christmas parties. Both the dresses and accessories give the wearer the opportunity to look sophisticated and polished.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The final part of this series features two elegant dresses, attachment accessories from Le Poppycock, and poses from Le Poppycock to create a stylish Christmas party outfit.

answer: This article details out the "what to wear" for the Inspiration Point Christmas hunt prizes and advertise's The Secret Store and Color.me.HOF.

answer: The article summarizes 6 outfits in a series of Inspiration Point Christmas hunt outfit series themed after Cheeses and Wines.

answer: In this final part of the Inspiration Point Christmas Hunt series, there are special colour versions of coordinating items from The Secret Store and Color.me.HOF. There are also festive items like headbands, face tattoos, and pose sets from Le Poppycock. These items would make cute outfits for a Christmas party or winter outing.

text: "There are also festive items like headbands, face tattoos, and pose sets from Le Poppycock. These items would make cute outfits for a Christmas party or winter outing." This can be omitted.

refinement: In this final part of the Inspiration Point Christmas Hunt series, there are special colour versions of coordinating items from The Secret Store and Color.me.HOF.

answer: The writer suggests that for anyone wanting to have a Christmas-themed look, to wear a Jingle Bells headband and a Mistletoe kiss mark tattoo.

text: It is omitted that the article is about what to wear.

refinement: The article talks about what to wear for the Inspiration Point Christmas hunt. writer suggests that for anyone wanting to have a Christmas-themed look, to wear a Jingle Bells headband and a Mistletoe kiss mark tattoo.

text: "writer suggests that for anyone wanting to have a Christmas-themed look, to wear a Jingle Bells headband and a Mistletoe kiss mark tattoo." This can be omitted.

refinement: The article talks about what to wear for the Inspiration Point Christmas hunt.


text: fiffly the rabbit is a rabbit. Despite the name, fiffly is an it, not a he, not a she, an it. Fiffly has always been a rabbit and wasnt concerned with the little if's of life. Even if it hadnt been a rabbit at some point in time, had it been a diabetic czar or a pernicious algae or a distant wave of sound brought on by foggy oscillations in the retrograde orbit of neptune it was now a rabbit and it couldnt be bothered to consider its past exploits. Fiffly woke up at sunrise and fell asleep at sunset and inbetween these two occurences it did exactly what a rabbit does on any given day. Fiffly hopped and forraged for leafy greens (didnt care much for carrots, unaware of the cliche) and avoided a fox or two. It didnt know why it didnt like the fox, its negative association vaguely and tangentially related to a cloudy afternoon some inexplicable number of months ago where a sibling fiffly may or may not have had was possibly devoured by a presence with a similar smell. However, fiffly had been rather unsure of the family for quite some time. Siblings came and went. Biffly chiffly niffly all of these names are arbitrary as fiffly never fully gripped on to the existence of any of them. We humans have the expression "fuck like rabbits" because we are aware of the procreative tendencies of rabbits and their willingness to treat offspring like an amateur photographer treats digital photographs, but fiffly didnt know and didnt care. When fiffly hopped down to the lake it saw grass, it saw water and it saw sky. The concept of profundity was lost on fiffly. A great mind with an overinflated human ego can look out towards a lake and contemplate the vast calmness of an empty universe. A great mind could be inspired and awed by a lake but fiffly was not a great mind. Fiffly was a rabbit.

title: Fiffly the Rabbit

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How many siblings does Fiffly have?

answer: We do not know how many siblings Fiffly has.

answer: That information is not in the text.

answer: Fiffly doesn't know how many.

answer: At least three. It is implied there were many more

text: The story is very vague about the number of siblings. The only two decent answers are that we don't know, or that there were many without giving a number.

refinement: It is implied there were many but the number isn't known.

text: Many siblings implied: "However, fiffly had been rather unsure of the family for quite some time. Siblings came and went."

answer: Fiffly does not have any siblings.

text: The story clearly talks about fiffly's siblings.

refinement: It is implied there were many but the number isn't known.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does Fiffly want?

answer: Fiffly wants grass, water, and sky. Fiffly is motivated by relatively basic needs.

text: "When fiffly hopped down to the lake it saw grass, it saw water and it saw sky. The concept of profundity was lost on fiffly."

answer: Fiffly only wants to eat and just hop around. Fiffly doesn't know much if anything about the world; it is not intellectually advanced and certainly has little if any philosophy. All it wants is to be a rabbit.

text: "When fiffly hopped down to the lake it saw grass, it saw water and it saw sky. The concept of profundity was lost on fiffly."

answer: To hop, forage for leafy greens, and avoid foxes

text: "Fiffly woke up at sunrise and fell asleep at sunset and inbetween these two occurences it did exactly what a rabbit does on any given day. Fiffly hopped and forraged for leafy greens (didnt care much for carrots, unaware of the cliche) and avoided a fox or two."

answer: Fiffly wants to spend their life hopping and doing anything a rabbit does on any given day. Fiffly is seemingly happy with their lot in life.

text: "Fiffly woke up at sunrise and fell asleep at sunset and inbetween these two occurences it did exactly what a rabbit does on any given day. Fiffly hopped and forraged for leafy greens (didnt care much for carrots, unaware of the cliche) and avoided a fox or two."

answer: Fiffly wants grass, water, and sky. Fiffly also wants to eat leafy greens and avoid being eaten by a fox.

text: Greens and foxes: "Fiffly woke up at sunrise and fell asleep at sunset and inbetween these two occurences it did exactly what a rabbit does on any given day. Fiffly hopped and forraged for leafy greens (didnt care much for carrots, unaware of the cliche) and avoided a fox or two."

text: Grass, water, sky: "When fiffly hopped down to the lake it saw grass, it saw water and it saw sky. The concept of profundity was lost on fiffly."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why has Fiffly encountered the fox?

answer: Fiffly has encountered the fox because it does not like the smell associated with the fox. Fiffly does not know why it does not like the smell and its thought process does not include contemplating the potential reason for this dislike.

text: The answer is nonsensical and sometimes irrelevant.

text: There's no answer.

refinement: The text implies that the fox was hunting a relative of fiffly.

answer: The reason Fiffly has encountered the fox is that it doesn't like the smell associated with it, seemingly connected to an earlier occasion where a sibling of Fiffly's may have been devoured by the fox.

text: The answer is nonsensical and sometimes irrelevant.

text: There's no answer.

refinement: The text implies that the fox was hunting a relative of fiffly.

answer: The article doesn't state a reason for its theory.

text: The answer is wrong. The article gives enough information to answer the question.

text: There's no answer.

refinement: The text implies that the fox was hunting a relative of fiffly.

answer: This information is not mentioned in the text.

text: The answer is wrong. The story has enough information to answer the question.

text: There's no answer.

refinement: The text implies that the fox was hunting a relative of fiffly.

answer: Fiffly doesn't encounter a fox

text: The answer is dead wrong.

text: There's no answer.

refinement: The text implies that the fox was hunting a relative of fiffly.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where does the story take place?

answer: That information can't be found

answer: The story takes place at a lake.

text: The lake isn't said to be a place fiffly actually went to.

text: There's no answer.

answer: Near a lake

text: The lake isn't said to be a place fiffly actually went to.

text: There's no answer.

answer: The story takes place in a lake.

text: The lake isn't said to be a place fiffly actually went to.

text: There's no answer.

answer: In the lake

text: The lake isn't said to be a place fiffly actually went to.

text: There's no answer.

refinement: There's no information about this in the story.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Fiffly is a rabbit who hops and forages near a lake, avoiding foxes. It is unaware of the scale of the world around it, and it doesn't feel awe or profundity toward the world because it is just a rabbit.

text: Hops, forages, avoids foxes: "Fiffly hopped and forraged for leafy greens (didnt care much for carrots, unaware of the cliche) and avoided a fox or two."

text: No grandiosity for a rabbit: "The concept of profundity was lost on fiffly. A great mind with an overinflated human ego can look out towards a lake and contemplate the vast calmness of an empty universe. A great mind could be inspired and awed by a lake but fiffly was not a great mind. Fiffly was a rabbit."

answer: Fiffly is an ordinary rabbit who sees the world simplistically. Fiffly wakes up in the morning and sleeps at night, getting by doing what rabbits do. Fiffly doesn't think much about the mysteries of life; its concern is simply its next meal.

text: The last sentence is slightly misleading. The question asks for a two-sentence summary, so it needs to be cut.

refinement: Fiffly is an ordinary rabbit who sees the world simplistically. Fiffly wakes up in the morning and sleeps at night, getting by doing what rabbits do.

text: Simplistic life: "The concept of profundity was lost on fiffly. A great mind with an overinflated human ego can look out towards a lake and contemplate the vast calmness of an empty universe. A great mind could be inspired and awed by a lake but fiffly was not a great mind. Fiffly was a rabbit."

text: Daily life: "Fiffly hopped and forraged for leafy greens (didnt care much for carrots, unaware of the cliche) and avoided a fox or two."

answer: This story is about a rabbit. It's not known why the story is written, or what happens.

text: The answer is almost completely wrong.

text: There's no answer.

refinement: Fiffly is a rabbit who hops and forages near a lake, avoiding foxes. It is unaware of the scale of the world around it, and it doesn't feel awe or profundity toward the world because it is just a rabbit.

text: Rabbit: "Fiffly was a rabbit."

answer: Fiffly is a rabbit that doesn't give much thought to the complexities of life, living simply and following its instincts. Fiffly wakes up and falls asleep at sunrise and sunset, hopping and foraging for greens and avoiding any foxes it encounters. Fiffly simply lives and doesn't get carried away by all the possibilities.

text: The question asks for two sentences. The last sentence is redundant, so it should be cut.

refinement: Fiffly is a rabbit that doesn't give much thought to the complexities of life, living simply and following its instincts. Fiffly wakes up and falls asleep at sunrise and sunset, hopping and foraging for greens and avoiding any foxes it encounters.

text: Simplistic life: "The concept of profundity was lost on fiffly. A great mind with an overinflated human ego can look out towards a lake and contemplate the vast calmness of an empty universe. A great mind could be inspired and awed by a lake but fiffly was not a great mind. Fiffly was a rabbit."

text: Daily life: "Fiffly hopped and forraged for leafy greens (didnt care much for carrots, unaware of the cliche) and avoided a fox or two."

answer: Fiffly the rabbit is an it, not a he or she. The narrator of the story is an army, looking down at the rabbit as he hops.

text: The answer is nonsensical and made up.

text: There's no answer.

refinement: Fiffly is a rabbit that doesn't give much thought to the complexities of life, living simply and following its instincts. Fiffly wakes up and falls asleep at sunrise and sunset, hopping and foraging for greens and avoiding any foxes it encounters.

text: It's fiffly: "fiffly the rabbit is a rabbit. Despite the name, fiffly is an it, not a he, not a she, an it."