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Immigration Minister John McCallum says the government will announce significant changes to the Citizenship Act in the coming days.

Mr. McCallum said Tuesday that the Liberals will soon follow through on their election pledge to repeal the Conservatives' controversial Bill C-24, which gave the government the power to revoke Canadian citizenship from dual citizens convicted of terrorism, treason or espionage.

Asked when the changes will be unveiled, Mr. McCallum told The Globe and Mail to expect an announcement "in coming days, but not very many days."

During last year's election campaign, the Liberal platform committed to "repeal the unfair elements of Bill C-24 that create second-class citizens and the elements that make it more difficult for hard-working immigrants to become Canadian citizens."

Mr. McCallum said the government's announcement will make it impossible to revoke citizenship.

"A Canadian is a Canadian is a Canadian," Mr. McCallum said, repeating a line used by Prime Minister Justin Trudeau during a heated election debate last September. "We would not revoke people's citizenship. … That will certainly be a part of it [the announcement]," the Immigration Minister added.

Mr. McCallum said the government will also remove barriers to citizenship posed by Bill C-24.

"We believe that it's better to make it easier rather than harder for people to become citizens."

However, he did not say which specific barriers would be addressed.

One major point of contention in Bill C-24 was a provision stiffening language requirements for newcomers. Before the changes, those between the ages of 18 and 54 were required to meet language requirements in English or French and pass a Canadian knowledge test, for which they were allowed to seek the help of an interpreter. When the bill became law, the age range expanded to 14 to 64, and interpreters were no longer allowed to help.

The law also made would-be Canadians wait longer to apply for citizenship and imposed a $300 application fee for adult citizenship applicants, up from $100, which was increased by the department again on Jan. 1, 2015 to $530 to "more closely reflect the costs associated with processing citizenship applications."

Mr. McCallum told reporters Tuesday that the government will table its annual immigration report before March 9.

The report was supposed to be tabled by Nov. 1, but the fall election delayed its release. Since the House of Commons was not sitting on Nov. 1, the law requires the government to table the report within 30 sitting days of Parliament returning.

Mr. McCallum said the report will outline targets for all classes of immigrants, including Syrian refugees. While the minister has previously said the government hopes to settle a total of 35,000 to 50,000 Syrian refugees by the end of 2016, he said the exact number – "in that ballpark" – will be outlined in the immigration report. He added that the government is on track to reach its promise of resettling 25,000 Syrian refugees by the end of February.

Furio De Angelis, the United Nations High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR) representative to Canada, said the government's continued commitment to resettle Syrian refugees throughout 2016 is "very important," especially ahead of a key UN conference on legal resettlement pathways for Syrian refugees, to be held in Geneva, Switzerland in March.

"I'm sure that Canada will present its own model of legal pathways [at the conference]. It will be a role model and we hope that this will create similar programs in other countries," Mr. De Angelis said in an interview with The Globe.

While Mr. De Angelis said domestic targets are "crucial," he said it's also important to not get bogged down in the numbers.

"When we are talking about needs in the humanitarian operations context … developments of targets sort of diminish because the needs are so large."

question: To what act is the government making significant changes?

answer: The House of Commons was not sitting on Nov. 1 so the annual immigration report, which must be tabled 30 days after Parliament returns, was delayed and the government said it is going to announce many changes to it. The annual immigration report deals with Syria refugees.

text: The response does not answer the question asked, instead it provides unnecessary details. This response needs to be fully re-crafted.

refinement: The government is making significant changes to the Citizenship Act.

answer: The Citizenship Act.

text: More detail can be added to this response.

refinement: The Canadian Citizenship Act is going to have significant changes made by the government.

answer: The Canadian Citizenship Act

question: What will they be changing about the Citizenship Act?

answer: They will be making language requirements more stringent and make it cost more.

text: To make this a stronger response, constructing the answer in a way that flows more will be helpful. It is also important to identify who "they" are in the response.

refinement: The government will be making language requirements for newcomers more stringent and increasing the cost to apply for citizenship.

answer: They're removing the ability to revoke citizenship from dual citizen convicted of treason, espionage, or terrorism.

text: A spelling error can be improved: citizen should be citizens.

refinement: They're removing the ability to revoke citizenship from dual citizens convicted of treason, espionage, or terrorism.

answer: Provisions that creates second-class citizens (the Conservative's Bill C-24 that gave the power to revoke Canadian citizenship from dual citizens suspected of terrorism, treason and espionage).

question: What was the name of the bill?

answer: Bill C-4.

text: The Bill that is being referred to in the passage is Bill C-24.

text: No response is given.

refinement: The name of the bill discussed in the passage is called Bill C-24.

answer: Bill C-24

question: Who announced these changes?

answer: Immigration Minister John McCallum.

answer: John McCallum announced these changes.

text: Adding the full title of who John McCallum is helps to make the response stronger.

refinement: Immigration Minister John McCallum announced these changes.

answer: Immigration Minister John McCallum

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: John McCallum is the Immigration Minister of Canada and he announces significant changes to the Citizenship Act after their election pledge to repeal several parts of it.

answer: This document discusses changes to the Citizenship Act in Canada.

text: To make this response stronger, incorporating more details into the summary would be beneficial.

refinement: This document discusses specific changes to the Citizenship Act in Canada, and why these changes are being made.

answer: The article is about a new Canadian law that would make immigration to Canada more difficult.

text: The response is a little inaccurate as there is no new Canadian law, there are just changes being made to an already existing Citizenship Act.

refinement: The article is about a current Canadian act that has changes made to it which would make immigration to Canada more difficult.

answer: This article writes about the Canadian Liberal Party's decision to repeal Bill C-24, an act which gave the government the power to revoke citizenship from dual citizens with disorderly conduct.

text: This summary includes a portion of what the passage is about, but highlights the wrong main factors.

refinement: This article talks about the Canadian Liberal Party's decision to repeal Bill C-24, an act which gave the government the power to revoke citizenship from dual citizens with disorderly conduct, and the changes that are being made to it.

answer: The government will soon announce significant changes to the Citizenship Act.

text: This response lacks detail needed to describe the important facets of the passage

refinement: The  Canadian government will soon announce significant changes to the  Canadian Citizenship Act.

answer: The passage details Canada's plan on changes to their citizenship laws including making all Canadians equal under the law.


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If a Shelby farts in the woods, am I still hard?

Shelby. Let’s get going with that bitch.
Oh the dry desert queen. How many tears must I lash on you to make you wet. Lemme sing you a song you cunt. Shelby. Are you listening? It doesn’t matter. This is about me. This is about ME. My love for you doesn’t exist inside you. It exists in magnetic fields surrounding the FUcKING MIDWEST OF AMERICA. MAGNETIC FIELDS. You’re a SIMPLETON Shelby, you don’t even know what that means. Hell, with those golden locks, you don’t need to know up from down, you sexy flooze.
Ahh, the good ol’ days. Remember when I used to go down on you for hours? No? That’s because I didn’t. You weren’t worthy.

…Who am I kidding, I wasn’t worthy. Lemme break down to you right now. (Would Tom Cruise say that to you?)

I love your laugh. I don’t even love it, but I love that you do laugh. I love your fucking smile. When you get too drunk I want to smash your head in. I feel the same way around small dogs that don’t bark loud. Listen bitch. You’re a dime a dozen, but that don’t make you drab. NOT A SCAG SHELBY.

Let me touch your butt, I’m a scientist.

Shelby listen, time’s running out. They’re coming for me soon, and when they come, they’ll drag me back into STEVE. STEEEEEEVEEEE. STEEEEEEEEEEEEEVE. What a spineless cocksucker. I’m gonna take you away one day baby, far away. Somewhere where the weather suits your clothes, and my God, wear a tight red dress. I won’t cum in my pants, I’ve never done that unintentionally.

I’ll never hit you unless you hit me. IF you hit me, I’ll hit you hard in the legs. You got milky legs, I wonder what your moms legs looked like, maybe there are some pictures somewhere. Either way, don’t believe any of this 2012 stuff. I don’t. But, you never know.

Kinda like you never know if we’ll meet again!!!! I can only hope so. Right now I can hear them coming. They want Steve back. They’re gonna get him.

One of these days I’ll show them it’s not okay to play God. I’ll show them I’ve been my own God this whole time, moving mountains with ease and taking no pleasure in things untrue. You’re first class cunt, Shelby. The only reason I called you that name one time was because you deserved it, but you didn’t deserve that other thing. Don’t bring that up ever again.

Anyways, They’re getting closer. MAN it’d be good to touch your ass right now Shelby!
One more thing bitch. When you apologize, you’re a sheep. But unlike the other sleazy sheep shape shifters I encounter everyday, your fur is golden. Pure gold. Ain’t that a bitch?

Keep crying for me, my fragile, ohsobreakable playdoll.

title: Unedited RANT about SHELBY

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the narrator's references to sexual activity.

answer: The narrator references cunnilingus and says they didn't deem Shelby worth of it. They reference premature ejaculation. They also reference groping.

answer: There is a reference to how she likes to go down on Shelby and she describes the good ol' days. The narrator also describes how they got drunk and cocaine and how the narrator loved when she could get the other drunk. There's mention of the narrator wanting to smash their head in and how the narrator finds Shelby's conduct sexy.

text: The response leaves out some information.

refinement: There is a reference to how she likes to go down on Shelby and touch her butt, and she describes the good ol' days. The narrator also describes how they got drunk and cocaine and how the narrator loved when she could get the other drunk. There's mention of the narrator wanting to smash their head in and how the narrator finds Shelby's conduct sexy.

answer: The narrator reminisces about his past sexual experiences with Shelby and laments that he is not capable of having them anymore. He also describes how he desires to touch her and would like to one day take her far away from anyone trying to control her. Finally, he asserts that he would only ever engage in sexual activity with Shelby if she initiated it.

text: The response contains inaccurate information.

refinement: The narrator reminisces about his past sexual experiences with Shelby and laments that he is not capable of having them anymore. He also describes how he desires to touch her and would like to one day take her far away from anyone trying to control her.

answer: The narrator makes references to a past relationship with Shelby in which he craved Shelby's attention and he desired to touch and taste her body, but never followed through. There are complaints about Shelby's simplicity, her attractiveness, and nostalgic memories of touching and tasting her body. There is an implication of sexual desire, but no outright mention of sexual activity.

text: The response contains inaccurate information.

refinement: The narrator makes references to a past relationship with Shelby in which he craved Shelby's attention and he desired to touch and taste her body, but never followed through. There are complaints about Shelby's simplicity, her attractiveness, and nostalgic memories of touching and tasting her body. There is an implication of sexual desire, and mentions of oral sex and groping.

answer: The narrator breaks down and confesses to Shelby their one-time love making madness. They lovingly remind Shelby how they used to go down on her for hours as they tell her she is unworthy.

text: The response leaves out some information.

refinement: The narrator breaks down and confesses to Shelby their one-time love making madness. They lovingly remind Shelby how they used to go down on her for hours and their desire to touch her butt.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about Shelby's physical appearance?

answer: The story criticizes Shelby's physical appearance, calling her a "dry desert queen" and saying her hair is "golden locks." The story also compares Shelby's legs to a "milky" substance and suggests that she is like a "playdoll" who is breakable and fragile.

text: The response contains inaccurate information.

refinement: The story goes back and forth between criticizing and praising Shelby's physical appearance, calling her a "dry desert queen" and saying her hair is "golden locks." The story also compares Shelby's legs to a "milky" substance and suggests that she is like a "playdoll" who is breakable and fragile.

answer: No answer

text: "No answer" response.

refinement: The story goes back and forth between criticizing and praising Shelby's physical appearance, calling her a "dry desert queen" and saying her hair is "golden locks." The story also compares Shelby's legs to a "milky" substance and suggests that she is like a "playdoll" who is breakable and fragile.

answer: The story discusses Shelby's locks, smile, and legs in detail, implying that these aspects of Shelby's physical appearance are seen favorably.

answer: No answer

answer: She has golden locks and milky legs.

text: The response could elaborate more on Shelby's appearance.

refinement: The story goes back and forth between criticizing and praising Shelby's physical appearance, calling her a "dry desert queen" and saying her hair is "golden locks." The story also compares Shelby's legs to a "milky" substance and suggests that she is like a "playdoll" who is breakable and fragile.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What are all of the derogatory names the narrator calls Shelby?

answer: Shelby loses her virginity, cunt, chick, girl, simpleton, dumb slut, drunk, cheap, dime a dozen, crass, pig, scag.

text: The response could use better sentence structure.

refinement: Shelby is called cunt, chick, girl, simpleton, dumb slut, drunk, cheap, dime a dozen, crass, pig, scag.

answer: He calls her "bitch" several times. He calls her a "cunt," and calls her sideburns "gold-golden locks."

text: The response leaves out several names.

refinement: The narrator calls her "bitch" several times. He calls her a "cunt," and calls her sideburns "gold-golden locks." He also calls her a "flooze," "sheep," "playdoll," and the "dry desert queen."

answer: The narrator calls Shelby a dry desert queen, a cunt, a simpleton, flooze, and a dime a dozen. She also calls Shelby a sheep, a playdoll, and a gold fur.

answer: Bitch, dry desert queen, cunt, simpleton, flooze, first class cunt, sheep, playdoll.

text: The response could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: The narrator calls Shelby bitch, dry desert queen, cunt, simpleton, flooze, first class cunt, sheep, and playdoll.

answer: The narrator calls Shelby a bitch, dry desert queen, simpleton, flooze, golden locks, milky-legged playdoll.

text: The response contains a grammatical error.

refinement: The narrator calls Shelby a bitch, dry desert queen, simpleton, flooze, golden locks, and milky-legged playdoll.


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Exploring Google autocomplete can be a great way to waste a few minutes of your life.

Take world leaders - start typing Donald Trump and top suggestion is  ‘net worth’,  Theresa May throws up ‘dancing’ while first word after Vladamir Putin is 'wife’.

Try this with cars and it too throws up some interesting results Ford Fiesta ST - ‘finance’, and a Hyundai i10 is ‘used’.

Type Bentley Continental GT into Google and it will auto complete to ‘price.’

This is either that lots of people want to buy one or see how much their neighbour has spent. And the average Bentley buyer does not have to worry about finance.

First generation Continentals from 2004 can now be picked up for less than £20,000.

But to answer the original question this new third gen model we are testing this week is yours for a £159,000 or just over £200,000 with options.

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A hit from day one the Bentley Continental has always put the ‘Grand’ in to Grand Tourer.

So what is new about this latest model? It still has the effortless 6.0 litre W12 engine, but with its power upped to 626b hp and 664 lb ft.

This is enough to drop the 0-60mph sprint to 3.6 seconds and up the top speed to 207 mph.

To be fair the prestigious power of the old engine was never a weak point of the previous model.

But where you will really notice the difference is the new dual-clutch, eight-speed gearbox.

Mated to that huge torquey engine it takes seamless shifting and acceleration to new levels. The new powertrain uses engine management technology that does 300 million software calculations per second

Want to feel a kick in the kidneys? Well delve into the Drive Dymnamics Control and switch from Bentley or Comfort mode into Sport.

Bury the throttle and it holds on to gears longer and squishes the driver back in to the double-diamond quilted seats.

Just to demonstrate its commitment to performance there is even a  Sport Launch mode for “when a race-style start is required by the driver.”

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The standard four-wheel drive system helps with the astonishing sprinting time.

In the aforementioned Sport setting it will send more power to the rear, meaning giving it the beans on a wet roundabout and the rear will step out, before being gathered up by the traction control.

On the flip side the Continental will do wafting as good as any car on the market.

It now has a 48-volt Dynamic Ride System which instantly alters the dampers at each corner, controlling roll and comfort.

This combines with new three-chamber air springs for the suspension to make is softer than the predecessor.

Visually the muscular rear haunches over the rear wheels thankfully remain. They cover an all-new body with materials that have saved 80kg.

Its  profile is longer and lower as the front wheels have been moved 135mm forward.

Round the back the lights are the biggest difference as they now copy the elliptical shape of the exhaust tips.

On the inside Bentley have have a giant leap with the technology inside the luxurious cabin.

On start up the triangular Rotating Display (a £4,700 option) spins round from a wood veneer to a 12.3” touch screen display.

With Apple Carplay and digital radio stations logos laid out like a smartphone it feels bang up to date.

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For those preferring a classic look a touch of a buttons spins it to reveal three analogue dials.

It remains a strict four seater with rear leg room limited if there are taller front occupants.

Of course not many Bentley customers take a standard model, with a vast of options available.

Our car had the£8,095 Mulliner Driving Specification adds a more sporting look to the car with 22” lightweight forged alloy wheels, unique ‘diamond in diamond’ quilting, embroidered Bentley emblems, additional veneer options, a jewelled-finish fuel filler, sports pedals and indented leather headliner.

The £2,660 Front Seat Comfort Specification adds even more adjustment, ventilation and massage features to the 20-way adjustable seats.

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While the £6,500 Naim 2,200 W, 18-speaker system with Active Bass Transducers built into the front seats was also specced. The sound is as amazing as you would imagine, but my ears could not take having it up full volume.

In the 15 years since launch over 66,000 Continental GTs have rolled out of the Crewe factory.

Details of a Convertible GTC has just been release and V8 models are in the pipeline too.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what the author found from their Google searches.

answer: They found that so many people have a fixation with the price of the cars commonly found in the streets. For example, when they tested the Grand Tourer, the first word that came to the top of the results were 'price.' The prices for first-third generation models of the car start at $19,900.

text: The Grand Tourer was not one of the terms Googled.

refinement: They found that so many people have a fixation with the price of the cars commonly found in the streets. The prices for first-third generation models of the car start at $19,900.

text: The last line is irrelevant.

refinement: They found that so many people have a fixation with the price of the cars commonly found in the streets.

text: That statement is untrue. They found that price is the term that comes up with Bentley Continental GT.

refinement: They found that when people search Bently Continental GT, they commonly search for the price.

text: The answer should mention the autocomplete results for Bentley's competitors.

refinement: They found that when people search Bently Continental GT, they commonly search for the price. The most popular autocomplete result for the Ford Fiest ST was "finance", and for the Hyundai i10, "used".

answer: When the author started typing into Google "net worth" appears. From the results it appears that many people are searching for the net worth of other people. When they type in "Bentley Continental GT" Google automatically completes to "price" and "finance". This leads the author to believe that many people on Google want to buy one. The average Bentley buyer does not have to worry much about finance. Cars also have their own results too. The article discusses Ford and Hyundai vehicles. They are several searches that say people are either looking to buy or seeing how their neighbor has spent. The article also discusses the grand tourer of BMW.

text: The article is overly wordy and the last few lines can be trimmed.

refinement: When the author started typing into Google "net worth" appears. From the results it appears that many people are searching for the net worth of other people. When they type in "Bentley Continental GT" Google automatically completes to "price" and "finance".

text: "net worth" appears for Donald Trump.

refinement: When the author started typing Donald Trump into Google, "net worth" was the top autocomplete result. When they type in "Bentley Continental GT" Google automatically completes to "price" and "finance".

text: "finance" was the result of the FOrd Fiesta ST.

refinement: When the author started typing Donald Trump into Google, "net worth" was the top autocomplete result. When they type in "Bentley Continental GT" Google automatically completes to "price".

text: The answer should mention the autocomplete results for their competitors.

refinement: When the author started typing Donald Trump into Google, "net worth" was the top autocomplete result. When they type in "Bentley Continental GT" Google automatically completes to "price". Comparatively, Ford Fiest ST autocompletes to "finance" while Hyundai i10 autocompletes to "used".

answer: When the author started typing into Google "net worth" appears. From the results it appears that many people are searching for the net worth of other people. When they type in "Bentley Continental GT" Google automatically completes to "price" and "finance". This leads the author to believe that many people on Google want to buy one. Expensive cars always find this topic.

answer: The article focuses on the new Bentley Continental, comparing how Google Auto complete results compare now to how they were in the past. They found that a lot of people want to see how much their neighbors have spent, and the average buyer doesn't have to worry about the costs of buying a Bentley like other cars, as they can be bought for as low as $20,000. They also found that the new version of the car has a 450 horse power and can reach speeds of 207 mph, an impressive 1/3 of a second better than the older car. They also describe the other details of the car such as the different options, the price, and past milestones that the car and Bentley have gathered.

answer: The author found that typing the name of any world leader into Google went to a related word that would probably be searched after the word given. They tested variation on car names and got their Google to auto complete to related words. They found that putting in "price" after "BMW" -another style of car- got it to autosuggest "BMW used car for sale".

text: The results are inaccurate.

refinement: The author found that typing the name of any world leader into Google went to a related word that would probably be searched after the word given. They tested variation on car names and got their Google to auto complete to related words. They found that the most popular results for the Ford Fiesta ST and the Hyundai i10 were "finance" and "used", respectively. In contrast, the most popular result for Bentley Continental GT was "price".

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the new features in the latest standard Bentley Continental GT.

answer: The new model features a revamped dual-clutch, eight-speed gear box likened to that of a Formula 1 or Formula 1 car. This great acceleration is thanks to newly implemented features, including a 300 million software calculations per second, engine management technology, and torque. The 2018 model also has a new 48-volt Dynamic Ride System, which makes the ride smoother and softer, as opposed to the older model, which was stiff and crunchy. In 2018, one change that other cars in the somewhat more affordable range may now have is power-beating shocks. The new standard model also comes with a 48-litre rad, a satellite navigation system and parking sensors. And of course, it must be mentioned, the newly implemented Classical Interior, for those that adore the older look of cars. At the time of the article, all these upgrades were available for £7,600.

text: The article does not actually make any comparisons to Formula 1 cars.

refinement: The new model features a revamped dual-clutch, eight-speed gear box. This great acceleration is thanks to newly implemented features, including a 300 million software calculations per second, engine management technology, and torque. The 2018 model also has a new 48-volt Dynamic Ride System, which makes the ride smoother and softer, as opposed to the older model, which was stiff and crunchy. In 2018, one change that other cars in the somewhat more affordable range may now have is power-beating shocks. The new standard model also comes with a 48-litre rad, a satellite navigation system and parking sensors. And of course, it must be mentioned, the newly implemented Classical Interior, for those that adore the older look of cars. At the time of the article, all these upgrades were available for £7,600.

text: The power train should be referenced in regards to the calculations per second.

refinement: The new model features a revamped dual-clutch, eight-speed gear box. This great acceleration is thanks to newly implemented features, including new engine management technology that performs 300 million software calculations per second. The 2018 model also has a new 48-volt Dynamic Ride System, which makes the ride smoother and softer, as opposed to the older model, which was stiff and crunchy. In 2018, one change that other cars in the somewhat more affordable range may now have is power-beating shocks. The new standard model also comes with a 48-litre rad, a satellite navigation system and parking sensors. And of course, it must be mentioned, the newly implemented Classical Interior, for those that adore the older look of cars. At the time of the article, all these upgrades were available for £7,600.

text: The line about power-beating shocks is unattested.

refinement: The new model features a revamped dual-clutch, eight-speed gear box. This great acceleration is thanks to newly implemented features, including new engine management technology that performs 300 million software calculations per second. The 2018 model also has a new 48-volt Dynamic Ride System, which makes the ride smoother and softer, as opposed to the older model, which was stiff and crunchy. The new standard model also comes with a 48-litre rad, a satellite navigation system and parking sensors. And of course, it must be mentioned, the newly implemented Classical Interior, for those that adore the older look of cars. At the time of the article, all these upgrades were available for £7,600.

text: The line about the new standard model's features is unattested.

refinement: The new model features a revamped dual-clutch, eight-speed gear box. This great acceleration is thanks to newly implemented features, including new engine management technology that performs 300 million software calculations per second. The 2018 model also has a new 48-volt Dynamic Ride System, which makes the ride smoother and softer, as opposed to the older model, which was stiff and crunchy. And of course, it must be mentioned, the newly implemented Classical Interior, for those that adore the older look of cars. At the time of the article, all these upgrades were available for £7,600.

text: The last two lines are unnecessary.

refinement: The new model features a revamped dual-clutch, eight-speed gear box. This great acceleration is thanks to newly implemented features, including new engine management technology that performs 300 million software calculations per second. The 2018 model also has a new 48-volt Dynamic Ride System, which makes the ride smoother and softer, as opposed to the older model, which was stiff and crunchy.

answer: The new standard Continental GT has the W12 engine, which has been upgraded. The power is at 626bhp and 664lbft. It has a 48-volt Dynamic Ride System, three-chamber air springs for the suspension, new light design, and new wheels. It comes with several options which allow for the desired customizations.

answer: The new X-class Bentley Continental GT is equipped with a 6.0-liter W12 engine. The engine will produce 626 hp and 664 lb-ft. The engine is fit in an eight-speed automatic dual-clutch transmission system. Other features include an all-new body with material that have saved 80 kg. The profile of the car is longer and lower.

text: The eight-speed dual-clutch is described as a gearbox rather than a transmission system.

refinement: The new X-class Bentley Continental GT is equipped with a 6.0-liter W12 engine. The engine will produce 626 hp and 664 lb-ft. The engine is fitted with a new dual-clutch, eight-speed gearbox. Other features include an all-new body with material that have saved 80 kg. The profile of the car is longer and lower.

answer: At the time of the article, all these upgrades were available for £7,600: power-beating shocks, a satellite navigation system and parking sensors. It also comes with a 48-litre rad, classical interior, a new dual-clutch, eight-speed shift gearbox, new steering column paddle shifters, and a new steering wheel - all this make it the latest move by Bentley.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the add-ons you can purchase for the new Bentley Continental GT.

answer: The article mentions a vast array of options for purchasing for the car. All options can be checked out online with the official Bentley website. The base model starts at $200k and goes up from there. With the Mulliner Driving Specification the price goes up around $2.7k. additional veneer options, a jewelled-finish fuel filler. The £2,660 Front Seat Comfort Specification adds even more adjustment, ventilation and massage features to the 20-way adjustable seats. A Naim 2,200 W, 18-speaker system with Active Bass Transducers that they get added to the front seats, costing around $6.5k.

text: The preamble about the array of modifications and base model price is not needed.

refinement: With the Mulliner Driving Specification the price goes up around $2.7k. additional veneer options, a jewelled-finish fuel filler. The £2,660 Front Seat Comfort Specification adds even more adjustment, ventilation and massage features to the 20-way adjustable seats. A Naim 2,200 W, 18-speaker system with Active Bass Transducers that they get added to the front seats, costing around $6.5k.

text: The stated price of Mulliner Driving specification is incorrect.

refinement: The Mulliner Driving Specification can be added for £8,095. additional veneer options, a jewelled-finish fuel filler. The £2,660 Front Seat Comfort Specification adds even more adjustment, ventilation and massage features to the 20-way adjustable seats. A Naim 2,200 W, 18-speaker system with Active Bass Transducers that they get added to the front seats, costing around $6.5k.

text: Unclear phrasing

refinement: The Mulliner Driving Specification can be added for £8,095. It adds additional veneer options and a jewelled-finish fuel filler. The £2,660 Front Seat Comfort Specification adds even more adjustment, ventilation and massage features to the 20-way adjustable seats. A Naim 2,200 W, 18-speaker system with Active Bass Transducers that they get added to the front seats, costing around $6.5k.

text: Unclear phrasing when discussing the speaker system.

refinement: The Mulliner Driving Specification can be added for £8,095. It adds additional veneer options and a jewelled-finish fuel filler. The £2,660 Front Seat Comfort Specification adds even more adjustment, ventilation and massage features to the 20-way adjustable seats. There is also a Naim 2,200 W, 18-speaker system with Active Bass Transducers built into the front seats for £6,500.

answer: The car can come with a standard front-seat specification, or a premium front-seat specification, depending on your budget. The key difference between the two is having one massage function variably available, or a six-exterior car finish, which includes a Jewelled-finish fuel filler and darkened hide for the door panels. Add the Mulliner driver specification on, and you'll get a look that resembles the standard, but there's a feather-light forged alloy wheels, and diamond stitching, and embroidered Bentley emblems. The model we tested came with a Naim 2,200W sound system and 18-speaker, Active Bass Transducers built into the front seats. The cabin has a rotating display, with Apple CarPlay and digital radio stations logos.

answer: There is the £8,095 Mulliner Driving Specification, which adds a more sporting look to the car with 22” lightweight forged alloy wheels, unique ‘diamond in diamond’ quilting, embroidered Bentley emblems, additional veneer options, a jewelled-finish fuel filler, sports pedals and indented leather headliner. The £2,660 Front Seat Comfort Specification adds even more adjustment, ventilation and massage features to the 20-way adjustable seats. A 15-year-old car from Crewe, Bentley has made a huge leap forward with the technology inside their luxurious cabin. The Mulliner Driving Specification is available for £8,095 and there is also a package for the front seats, adding even more adjustment, ventilation and massage features to the 20-way adjustable seats. This is an extra £2,660. Finally, a £6,500 Naim 2,200 W, 18-speaker, 18-speaker system with Active Bass Transducers built into the front seats.

text: The second line concerning the Mullinter Driving Specification is repetitive and redundant.

refinement: There is the £8,095 Mulliner Driving Specification, which adds a more sporting look to the car with 22” lightweight forged alloy wheels, unique ‘diamond in diamond’ quilting, embroidered Bentley emblems, additional veneer options, a jewelled-finish fuel filler, sports pedals and indented leather headliner. The £2,660 Front Seat Comfort Specification adds even more adjustment, ventilation and massage features to the 20-way adjustable seats. A 15-year-old car from Crewe, Bentley has made a huge leap forward with the technology inside their luxurious cabin. Finally, a £6,500 Naim 2,200 W, 18-speaker, 18-speaker system with Active Bass Transducers built into the front seats.

text: The line about the 15-year-old car is unneeded.

refinement: There is the £8,095 Mulliner Driving Specification, which adds a more sporting look to the car with 22” lightweight forged alloy wheels, unique ‘diamond in diamond’ quilting, embroidered Bentley emblems, additional veneer options, a jewelled-finish fuel filler, sports pedals and indented leather headliner. The £2,660 Front Seat Comfort Specification adds even more adjustment, ventilation and massage features to the 20-way adjustable seats. Finally, a £6,500 Naim 2,200 W, 18-speaker, 18-speaker system with Active Bass Transducers built into the front seats.

text: Phrasing of last sentence is unclear

refinement: There is the £8,095 Mulliner Driving Specification, which adds a more sporting look to the car with 22” lightweight forged alloy wheels, unique ‘diamond in diamond’ quilting, embroidered Bentley emblems, additional veneer options, a jewelled-finish fuel filler, sports pedals and indented leather headliner. The £2,660 Front Seat Comfort Specification adds even more adjustment, ventilation and massage features to the 20-way adjustable seats. Finally, a £6,500 Naim 2,200 W, 18-speaker, 18-speaker system with Active Bass Transducers can be built into the front seats.


text:
She knew it was coming. She saw it coming. For three months, she held onto that bright purple monkey that he had gotten her for her birthday and waited. Why had he gotten her a purple monkey anyway? She hated the color purple.

The really sad thing was, she felt almost relieved. And she was disgusted with herself for that.

They had met in a book club meeting, of all places. Freshman year of high school, she walked into the library, still painfully shy, and he was the first one who said hi to her. There were only ten people in the club, and she slowly relaxed around them. They argued over their favorite novels, had contests to see who could read the next assigned book the fastest and made up a secret handshake that, when they tried to perform it in the hallways between classes, always ended in loud laughter.

He had been in three of her classes, which she had never noticed before, and they started hanging out more. When he asked her out, she was so excited, and terrified. She had never had a boyfriend before. Was she supposed to act different around him now? Was she supposed to stop hanging out with him as much? How many texts a day were too many? She didn't worry for too long. He was just as nervous as she was. They spent almost every moment together, those first two years.

Then junior year rolled around and he became distant. He tried to make an effort to stay cheerful around her, but she had known him long enough to see that he was unhappy. She tried talking to him, but he would shake his head and turn away and she didn't push.

She had wondered if he was going to break up with her, and cried. One night, while they were watching a movie together, she turned and looked at him, her eyes filling with angry tears and demanded that he just do it already. She couldn't handle this anymore.

He hugged her, squeezed her as tight as he could, and said that he wasn't going to break up with her. He loved her. He wanted to spend the rest of his life with her. But the rest of his life was three months, maybe four.

They had cried together, and talked, and cried some more. They spent two days apart, because she didn't know how to handle it. But she decided that she would keep him happy for the next three months. He would never have to worry about her leaving him.

Those three months were the worst. He got weaker. He got more emotional. He would lash out for no apparent reason and once, when she told him to relax, he hit her in the face. She was more angry than hurt. "Just because you're dying doesn't mean you get to hit your fucking girlfriend!" She had left, and he called her that night, sobbing and apologizing. She went back to his house and spent the night lying next to him in bed, unable to sleep, listening to his mom cry in the living room.

The phone rang. She answered it on the third ring.

"He wants to see you."

She was silent for a few moments. "I can't. I can't do that."

"Stop being selfish. I don't care if it scars you for life, get your ass to the hospital. For some reason, my boy wants to see you before he dies and you'd better fucking do what he wants."

She hung up and got out of bed. She brushed her hair and put it up, remembering that he always said she looked cute with a ponytail. She put on the shirt he liked the most and a pair of jeans that he had doodled on one day in book club. She drove to the hospital slowly and carefully, parked in the farthest spot from the door. It was windy out, and smelled like it was about to rain. The woman at the front desk directed her to the right room and she went, trying to get lost along the way. It didn't work. The building was too small.

She opened the door marked 318 and everyone in the room turned to stare at her. His mother and father were there. His mother glared at her, but his father smiled. His older brother was there, sitting in the only chair, looking exhausted. And there he was, sitting up in bed, grinning at her.

His father ushered everyone else out of the room to give them privacy. As the door closed, she perched on the side of the hospital bed and took his hand.

"Hey."

He kissed her hand and she smiled. "Hi. I'm glad you came."

"Of course I came." She felt like crying, but refused to. He didn't need that. "This is a much better reason to put off studying for finals."

He laughed, but it sounded off. "You know, I was always amazed that you stuck around. After everything, you're still here. That means the world to me. I love you."

"I love you too." The lie tasted bitter, but she ignored it. They said nothing else to each other. His family returned and she stayed where she was, holding his hand, until he finally closed his eyes and went.

She felt suddenly as if someone had reached into her chest and pricked her heart, letting the blood drain out until it shriveled and died. She left the hospital. She attended the funeral. She finished high school and moved to another state. She went to college, tried to make new friends and have new relationships. She left college, found an okay job, and started dating her next door neighbor. He was an alcoholic, which she didn't mind. He hit her sometimes. She just covered it up with make-up and he never remembered the next morning. He proposed to her and she agreed. They had three children and she quit her job.

She wasn't happy. She hated the children. She hated her husband. She blamed it all on him, the first boy she had ever loved, who had promised her so much and then left her. She was heartless and unlovable because of him. She was depressed because of him. She wished she hadn't lied to him. He should have died knowing that she didn't love him anymore.

She sent the kids off to school, kissed her husband before he left for work, wrote a note and stuck it on her pillow, and decided to go for a walk. She kept walking, until she was so sore that she had to stop. She sat down on the side of a road she didn't recognize and smiled to herself, thinking that she had finally managed to get lost.

title: Lost

question: Who met in a book meeting?

answer: A girl and boy

text: too vague

answer:
Who did this story follow?

This is about a girl after he dating someone for three years

text: nonsensical

answer: The young girl met her lover in the book meeting.

question: Do the two fall in love?

answer: Yes

text: doesn't need capitalization

text: empty field

answer: Yes, the two of them fell in love but eventually, the girl loses interest in him.

question: Why was everyone in the room staring at her?

answer: It may be implied that everyone was staring at her due to the seriousness of the situation.

text: don't need "it may be implied"

refinement: Everyone was staring at her due to the seriousness of the situation.

text: overly vague; name the serious situation

refinement: Everyone was staring at her due to the impending death of her lover.

answer: Everyone was in the room because her former boyfriend was dying and she came to see him before he died. Everyone present was likely curious as to why she came back.

text: many assumptions, way off

answer: Everyone in the room was staring at her because the person in bed was about to die, and they were all curious to see who the loved one would or could spend their last moments with.

text: name the person who is about to die

refinement: Everyone in the room was staring at her because her boyfriend was about to die, and they were all curious to see who the loved one would or could spend their last moments with.

text: back half of the sentence a little muddled

refinement: Everyone in the room was staring at her because her boyfriend was about to die.

question: Do any of them die?

answer: Yes, the main character's boyfriend dies.

answer: Yes, the main character's first love does die in the passage.

text: "in the passage" is unnecessary

refinement: Yes, the main character's first love does die.

text: "dies" more appropriate than "does die"

refinement: Yes, the main character's first love dies.

answer: Yes, the boy eventually dies.

text: There are multiple boys in the story; be specific.

refinement: Yes, the main character's first love eventually dies.

question: Write a ~9 sentence summary.

answer: The young woman loved and dated the guy in her youth. They hung out often and eventually were in a relationship. She knew the guy had an illness and would decided to not end their relationship. Because of that, he hits her because he is in pain. She never drives by the area of where they met again because she wanted to get lost and realizes it's something she had never done. She eventually leaves their state and lives her life and gets a new man. Yet, she never loved her children because her ex-loved never loved her anymore.

text: "Young woman" and "in her youth" is redundant.

refinement: The young woman loved and dated the guy. They hung out often and eventually were in a relationship. She knew the guy had an illness and would decided to not end their relationship. Because of that, he hits her because he is in pain. She never drives by the area of where they met again because she wanted to get lost and realizes it's something she had never done. She eventually leaves their state and lives her life and gets a new man. Yet, she never loved her children because her ex-loved never loved her anymore.

text: "The guy" is vague.

refinement: The young woman loved and dated a very sick man. They hung out often and eventually were in a relationship. She knew the guy had an illness and would decided to not end their relationship. Because of that, he hits her because he is in pain. She never drives by the area of where they met again because she wanted to get lost and realizes it's something she had never done. She eventually leaves their state and lives her life and gets a new man. Yet, she never loved her children because her ex-loved never loved her anymore.

text: Third sentence nearly gibberish -- delete.

refinement: The young woman loved and dated a very sick man. They hung out often and eventually were in a relationship. Because of that, he hits her because he is in pain. She never drives by the area of where they met again because she wanted to get lost and realizes it's something she had never done. She eventually leaves their state and lives her life and gets a new man. Yet, she never loved her children because her ex-loved never loved her anymore.

text: "dated" and "eventually were in a relationship" redundant; omit second sentence.

refinement: The young woman loved and dated a very sick man. Because of that, he hits her because he is in pain. She never drives by the area of where they met again because she wanted to get lost and realizes it's something she had never done. She eventually leaves their state and lives her life and gets a new man. Yet, she never loved her children because her ex-loved never loved her anymore.

text: omit "because of that" -- redundant with "because he is in pain" at the end of the sentence.

refinement: The young woman loved and dated a very sick man. He hits her because he is in pain. She never drives by the area of where they met again because she wanted to get lost and realizes it's something she had never done. She eventually leaves their state and lives her life and gets a new man. Yet, she never loved her children because her ex-loved never loved her anymore.

text: add temporal signpost

refinement: The young woman loved and dated a very sick man. Near the end of his life, he hits her because he is in pain. She never drives by the area of where they met again because she wanted to get lost and realizes it's something she had never done. She eventually leaves their state and lives her life and gets a new man. Yet, she never loved her children because her ex-loved never loved her anymore.

text: add an account of his death

refinement: The young woman loved and dated a very sick man. Near the end of his life, he hits her because he is in pain. They profess their love for each other on his deathbed, and he passes away. She never drives by the area of where they met again because she wanted to get lost and realizes it's something she had never done. She eventually leaves their state and lives her life and gets a new man. Yet, she never loved her children because her ex-loved never loved her anymore.

text: no follow-through on the thread around "getting lost"; omit mention of it and clean up grammar on the rest of the sentence.

refinement: The young woman loved and dated a very sick man. Near the end of his life, he hits her because he is in pain. They profess their love for each other on his deathbed, and he passes away. She never drives by the place they met because it's too emotional. She eventually leaves their state and lives her life and gets a new man. Yet, she never loved her children because her ex-loved never loved her anymore.

text: "leaves their state and lives her life" is awkward; amend

refinement: The young woman loved and dated a very sick man. Near the end of his life, he hits her because he is in pain. They profess their love for each other on his deathbed, and he passes away. She never drives by the place they met because it's too emotional. She eventually leaves their state and gets a new man. Yet, she never loved her children because her ex-loved never loved her anymore.

text: last sentence imprecise; amend

refinement: The young woman loved and dated a very sick man. Near the end of his life, he hits her because he is in pain. They profess their love for each other on his deathbed, and he passes away. She never drives by the place they met because it's too emotional. She eventually leaves their state and gets a new man. Yet, she felt incapable of love because of her traumatic first relationship.

answer:
The two met in a book club meeting in the Freshman year at high school. They fell in love and started dating. The boy eventually reveals that he doesn't have much time to live.

The phone rings, it's his mother, calling her to the hospital. He dies with her hand in his.

As time passed, she got married to an alcoholic. She hated her life and blamed it all on the boy. She wished he had died knowing she didn't love him anymore.

She finally manages to get lost.

text: phone call an odd detail to include at this scope

refinement: The two met in a book club meeting in the Freshman year at high school. They fell in love and started dating. The boy eventually reveals that he doesn't have much time to live. He dies with her hand in his. As time passed, she got married to an alcoholic. She hated her life and blamed it all on the boy. She wished he had died knowing she didn't love him anymore. She finally manages to get lost.

text: "get lost" thread not fleshed out enough to include at end of summary

refinement: The two met in a book club meeting in the Freshman year at high school. They fell in love and started dating. The boy eventually reveals that he doesn't have much time to live. He dies with her hand in his. As time passed, she got married to an alcoholic. She hated her life and blamed it all on the boy. She wished he had died knowing she didn't love him anymore.

answer:
She was in a book club when she met him, a handsome, shy boy who made her feel comfortable immediately. The two became friends, and when he asked her to go out with him she was overwhelmed with excitement and nervousness. They spend the next four years being inseparable, but junior year he got distant. He was unhappy, but would avoid talking about it.

Everyone in the room turned to stare at her when she entered his hospital room. He had been diagnosed with cancer and would most likely not make it. They exchanged small talk until he closed his eyes and passed. After the funeral, she started dating; she got married, had three children with her prick husband, cursing her first love for leaving her and blaming him for her scarred in both her mind and physical appearance.

text: the staring is an odd detail to include at this scope; omit

refinement: She was in a book club when she met him, a handsome, shy boy who made her feel comfortable immediately. The two became friends, and when he asked her to go out with him she was overwhelmed with excitement and nervousness. They spend the next four years being inseparable, but junior year he got distant. He was unhappy, but would avoid talking about it. He had been diagnosed with cancer and would most likely not make it. They exchanged small talk until he closed his eyes and passed. After the funeral, she started dating; she got married, had three children with her prick husband, cursing her first love for leaving her and blaming him for her scarred in both her mind and physical appearance.

text: no mention of physical scars in the text; omit

refinement: She was in a book club when she met him, a handsome, shy boy who made her feel comfortable immediately. The two became friends, and when he asked her to go out with him she was overwhelmed with excitement and nervousness. They spend the next four years being inseparable, but junior year he got distant. He was unhappy, but would avoid talking about it. He had been diagnosed with cancer and would most likely not make it. They exchanged small talk until he closed his eyes and passed. After the funeral, she started dating; she got married, had three children with her prick husband, cursing her first love for leaving her and blaming him for her inability to love.

text: her husband is never called a prick

refinement: She was in a book club when she met him, a handsome, shy boy who made her feel comfortable immediately. The two became friends, and when he asked her to go out with him she was overwhelmed with excitement and nervousness. They spend the next four years being inseparable, but junior year he got distant. He was unhappy, but would avoid talking about it. He had been diagnosed with cancer and would most likely not make it. They exchanged small talk until he closed his eyes and passed. After the funeral, she started dating; she got married, had three children with her husband, cursing her first love for leaving her and blaming him for her inability to love.

text: no mention of "four years"; omit

refinement: She was in a book club when she met him, a handsome, shy boy who made her feel comfortable immediately. The two became friends, and when he asked her to go out with him she was overwhelmed with excitement and nervousness. He was unhappy, but would avoid talking about it. He had been diagnosed with cancer and would most likely not make it. They exchanged small talk until he closed his eyes and passed. After the funeral, she started dating; she got married, had three children with her husband, cursing her first love for leaving her and blaming him for her inability to love.

text: chronology surrounding unhappiness and illness a little sloppy; amend

refinement: She was in a book club when she met him, a handsome, shy boy who made her feel comfortable immediately. The two became friends, and when he asked her to go out with him she was overwhelmed with excitement and nervousness. He had been diagnosed with cancer and would most likely not make it. They exchanged small talk until he closed his eyes and passed. After the funeral, she started dating; she got married, had three children with her husband, cursing her first love for leaving her and blaming him for her inability to love.

text: They didn't just exchange small talk on his deathbed; they professed their love for each other.

refinement: She was in a book club when she met him, a handsome, shy boy who made her feel comfortable immediately. The two became friends, and when he asked her to go out with him she was overwhelmed with excitement and nervousness. He had been diagnosed with cancer and would most likely not make it. On his deathbed, they professed their love for each other. After the funeral, she started dating; she got married, had three children with her husband, cursing her first love for leaving her and blaming him for her inability to love.

answer: A girl goes to the hospital hoping to say her goodbyes to a dying boy. They spent almost every moment together in the first two years, but he became distant after his junior year. He told the girl that he wanted to see her before he dies, so she went. He dies, and she buries herself in pain, making more and more awful, destructive life choices. She settles down after the divorce, but still feels the fallout of her relationship with the boy. She hates her children and her husband. One day she gets lost, and sits on the side of the road, thinking she got lost.

text: very distant from the content of the story; I don't think I could amend this adequately.

answer: The narrator and her first boyfriend met when they were a freshman. They became a couple after he asked her out. One day, their junior year, he began to distance himself from the narrator until he finally told her he has three months to live. During the three months they spend without communicating, they still see each other during the funeral and the narrator mourns for him till the end of her life wondering if she did something to make them stay apart until the last time they meet. She doesn't love her next husband, she is simply coping with her trauma.

text: they were "freshmen", not "a freshman"

refinement: The narrator and her first boyfriend met when they were freshmen. They became a couple after he asked her out. One day, their junior year, he began to distance himself from the narrator until he finally told her he has three months to live. During the three months they spend without communicating, they still see each other during the funeral and the narrator mourns for him till the end of her life wondering if she did something to make them stay apart until the last time they meet. She doesn't love her next husband, she is simply coping with her trauma.

text: fourth sentence gibberish; amend

refinement: The narrator and her first boyfriend met when they were freshmen. They became a couple after he asked her out. One day, their junior year, he began to distance himself from the narrator until he finally told her he has three months to live. The narrator mourns for him till the end of her life wondering if she did something to make them stay apart until the last time they meet. She doesn't love her next husband, she is simply coping with her trauma.

text: include an account of his death

refinement: The narrator and her first boyfriend met when they were freshmen. They became a couple after he asked her out. One day, their junior year, he began to distance himself from the narrator until he finally told her he has three months to live. They affirm their love for each other on his deathbed. The narrator mourns for him till the end of her life wondering if she did something to make them stay apart until the last time they meet. She doesn't love her next husband, she is simply coping with her trauma.

text: She's not mourning him; she's in pain due to her mistreatment by both him and his family.

refinement: The narrator and her first boyfriend met when they were freshmen. They became a couple after he asked her out. One day, their junior year, he began to distance himself from the narrator until he finally told her he has three months to live. They affirm their love for each other on his deathbed. She doesn't love her next husband, she is simply coping with her trauma.

text: "coping with her trauma" is conjecture here

refinement: The narrator and her first boyfriend met when they were freshmen. They became a couple after he asked her out. One day, their junior year, he began to distance himself from the narrator until he finally told her he has three months to live. They affirm their love for each other on his deathbed. She doesn't love her next husband.

text: include mention of kids

refinement: The narrator and her first boyfriend met when they were freshmen. They became a couple after he asked her out. One day, their junior year, he began to distance himself from the narrator until he finally told her he has three months to live. They affirm their love for each other on his deathbed. She doesn't love her next husband or her kids.

answer: The narrator is a young woman in high school that is being pursued romantically by a member of one of the book clubs she attends. He ultimately asks her out, and they spend three years in a relationship before he announces he only has about three months to live. He asks her to stay with him all the way, and she agrees. They hang out and cuddle and cry, and she sticks by him until the end. this is impacted by her resentment for him after he's gone, due to her belief that she didn't stick by him because of love and his belief that she was the one good thing in his life.

text: "one of the book clubs she attends" implies she attends multiple book clubs, and there is no evidence for this in the text.

refinement: The narrator is a young woman in high school that is being pursued romantically by a boy she meets in a book club. He ultimately asks her out, and they spend three years in a relationship before he announces he only has about three months to live. He asks her to stay with him all the way, and she agrees. They hang out and cuddle and cry, and she sticks by him until the end. this is impacted by her resentment for him after he's gone, due to her belief that she didn't stick by him because of love and his belief that she was the one good thing in his life.

text: two years, not three

refinement: The narrator is a young woman in high school that is being pursued romantically by a boy she meets in a book club. He ultimately asks her out, and they spend two years in a relationship before he announces he only has about three months to live. He asks her to stay with him all the way, and she agrees. They hang out and cuddle and cry, and she sticks by him until the end. this is impacted by her resentment for him after he's gone, due to her belief that she didn't stick by him because of love and his belief that she was the one good thing in his life.

text: "to the end" is a better phrase than "all the way"; makes the following sentence redundant

refinement: The narrator is a young woman in high school that is being pursued romantically by a boy she meets in a book club. He ultimately asks her out, and they spend two years in a relationship before he announces he only has about three months to live. He asks her to stay with to the end, and she agrees. this is impacted by her resentment for him after he's gone, due to her belief that she didn't stick by him because of love and his belief that she was the one good thing in his life.

text: last sentence garbled

refinement: The narrator is a young woman in high school that is being pursued romantically by a boy she meets in a book club. He ultimately asks her out, and they spend two years in a relationship before he announces he only has about three months to live. He asks her to stay with to the end, and she agrees.

text: needs some account of her emotional state after his death (for completeness)

refinement: The narrator is a young woman in high school that is being pursued romantically by a boy she meets in a book club. He ultimately asks her out, and they spend two years in a relationship before he announces he only has about three months to live. He asks her to stay with to the end, and she agrees. She never emotionally recovers from this experience.


text:
is an indoor sporting arena located in Okayama, Japan. The arena is also known as the . The capacity of the arena is 11,000 spectators. It host the home matches of the Okayama Seagulls of the V.League.

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title: Zip Arena Okayama

question: What is the capacity of the Zip Arena?

answer: The capacity of the Zip Arena is 11,000 spectators.

answer: It has a capacity of 11 000 spectators.

answer: The Zip Arena has a capacity of 11,000 spectators.

answer: The capacity of the Zip Arena is 11,000 spectators.

question: Does the Zip Arena Okayama host outdoor events?

answer: Usually not, it is an indoor sporting arena.

answer: No, it is an indoor arena.

answer: No, the Zip Arena Okayama is an indoor arena.

answer: No, the Zip Arena Okayama is an indoor sporting arena.

question: What sport does the Okayama Seagulls play?

answer: The Okayama Seagulls play volleyball.

answer: They play in the V.League. It might be a volleyball league.

answer: The Okayama Seagulls play basketball.

text: It is incorrectly stated that they play basketball.

answer: That information can't be found.

question: Is Okayama located close to the sea?

answer: Their sports team name is the seagulls, it is probably located close to the sea.

answer: It is not stated.

answer: From the passage, it is not clear whether or not Okayama is located close to the sea.

answer: No, Okayama is not located close to the sea.

text: The passage provides no information relating to this.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: This article describes the Zip Arena Okayama, an indoor sporting arena located in Okayama, Japan.

answer: Zip Arena Okayama is an indoor sporting arena for the Okayama Seagulls of Japan.

answer: The Zip Arena Okayama is an indoor sporting arena located in Okayama, Japan. It is the home of the Okayama Seagulls of the V.League.

answer: The Zip Arena Okayama is an indoor sporting arena located in Okayama, Japan. The arena is also known as the . The capacity of the arena is 11,000 spectators. It host the home matches of the Okayama Seagulls of the V.League.

text: "The arena is also known as the . The capacity of the arena is 11,000 spectators." can be omitted.

refinement: The Zip Arena Okayama is an indoor sporting arena with a capacity of 11,000 located in Okayama, Japan. It hosts the home matches of the Okayama Seagulls of the V.League.


text:
You think you lost your keys again - front door is locked. Check the backdoor and it's open. No one's been in, thank god. Search for your keys but don't find them, "I'll look again in the morning".

Wake up and remember to look - no luck and you're late. Leaving the backdoor unlocked is going to eat at you but there's no choice. Rush home after work to check and find your girlfriend on the couch. She brought some stuff over. Maybe she can help. She looks with you through the house and her stuff for a little but she has the night shift and takes off. Stay up until 4 checking.

Tomorrow at 8:40, no time to look now. You come back during lunch to make sure no one came in and maybe check a bit. There's mail and some more of her stuff. You look but it's not with those things.

You buy a big dog to keep watch when you're not there. His name is Quatro because dogs can have names in Spanish.

Buying lunch pay $6.01 one two three four to check if the amount totals, one two three four to check if twenty four is four six times, one two three four to check if four is four one time. Two halves of the sandwich is the whole sandwich two bites is four sips is four bites is two sips is one slip in the conversation, but you just couldn't remember if you had seen Billy Madison as a kid.

Work is close to home and you can check four times today: 11:40, 1:03, 2:20 and 3:11. Twice in each cupboard, twice under your bed, four times behind the TV. House seems to be getting messier but you're sure you were keeping up. There's a memory of your dad telling you that locksmiths are unreliable.

"Where are they?" The question doesn't really go away, except maybe once when you woke up at 3 to pee. You've retraced your steps two, four, eight, sixteen, thirty-two times today, sixty-four, one hundred twenty-eight, two hundred fifty-six times today, five hundred twelve times today, one thousand twenty-four, two thousand forty-eight, four thousand ninety-six times today, you think maybe that wasn't enough maybe if you start checking again the keys will turn up check twice, check four times, check four more times, check twice. Exhausted, you try to sleep. Check twice more twice.

At a Basketball game with your girlfriend and brothers. Section 137, row S, seats 2, 3, 4 and 5. Little brother led the way and you sit next. Four quarters: one, fifteen minutes of sixty. Shot clock at twenty-four, twenty, sixteen, twelve, eight, four, 3 pointer and a foul! There's change on the ground and you try making a dollar. Saw some quarters and a penny - there's no point searching tonight.

You've been late to work a lot and you think your boss might have called you in to talk but your keys are so close - staying home sixteen minutes couldn't hurt, especially since you didn't check last night. You can't remember why you didn't and check twice more. You remember checking last night so you check again. Promise yourself you'll find the keys after work.

The new job as a bartender gives you an excuse not to check for your keys much. Walls lined with 80 proof liquor and 12 ounce bottles. Three glasses of sour mash at the bar so you pour yourself one. Stay around after to drink. At 2:07 walk home and go in the front door.

title: Story thing about Obsessive Compulsive Disorder

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the things the narrator obsesses over.

answer: The narrator obsessively checks to see if their keys are missing, checks everyone who enters their home and worries that their home is becoming more messy without getting more clean. The narrator obsesses over whether their keys are rightfully theirs and whether their house is secure. Finally, the narrator obsesses over how frequently they are making a fool of themselves at work.

text: This is a worry, not an obsession. This should be omitted.

refinement: The narrator obsessively checks to see if their keys are missing, checks everyone who enters their home. The narrator obsesses over whether their keys are rightfully theirs and whether their house is secure. Finally, the narrator obsesses over how frequently they are making a fool of themselves at work.

text: The narrator only checks their girlfriend. They do not mention  checking everyone who enters the home.

refinement: The narrator obsessively checks to see if their keys are missing. The narrator obsesses over whether their keys are rightfully theirs and whether their house is secure. Finally, the narrator obsesses over how frequently they are making a fool of themselves at work.

text: This is false. They do not check to see if the keys are rightfully theirs. This should be omitted.

refinement: The narrator obsessively checks to see if their keys are missing. The narrator obsesses over whether their house is secure. Finally, the narrator obsesses over how frequently they are making a fool of themselves at work.

text: The narrator doesn't seem to be obsessed with keeping their house secure. This should be omitted.

refinement: The narrator obsessively checks to see if their keys are missing. Finally, the narrator obsesses over how frequently they are making a fool of themselves at work.

text: This is not something the narrator mentions being obsessed with. This should be omitted.

refinement: The narrator obsessively checks to see if their keys are missing.

text: It's omitted that the narrator obsesses over numbers. This takes the form of dividends with money, bites of food, the amount of times he checks for his keys, and time.

refinement: The narrator obsessively checks to see if their keys are missing. The narrator also obsesses over numbers. This takes the form of dividends with money, bites of food, the amount of times he checks for his keys, and time.

answer: The main thing is the narrator's keys. The front door is locked but not the back door. The narrator searches for it for days, several times a day, many times per attempt. She calculates prices and other numerical values several times as well.

text: This isn't an obsession and should be omitted.

refinement: The main thing is the narrator's keys. The narrator searches for it for days, several times a day, many times per attempt. She calculates prices and other numerical values several times as well.

answer: The narrator obsesses over losing his keys and making sure that no one has entered his home without him knowing. The narrator checks multiple times a day and even checks multiple times after going home from work. The narrator also worries about whether his keys are being stolen and whether he is keeping up with the upkeep of his house.

text: This is not an obsession of the narrator's and should be omitted.

refinement: The narrator obsesses over losing his keys. The narrator checks multiple times a day and even checks multiple times after going home from work. The narrator also worries about whether his keys are being stolen and whether he is keeping up with the upkeep of his house.

text: A worry isn't necessarily an obsession. Additionally, the narrator doesn't seem to worry about the keys being stoln, and the house upkeep isn't an obsession. This should be omitted.

refinement: The narrator obsesses over losing his keys. The narrator checks multiple times a day and even checks multiple times after going home from work.

text: It's omitted that the narrator obsesses over numbers. This takes the form of dividends with money, bites of food, the amount of times he checks for his keys, and time.

refinement: The narrator obsesses over losing his keys. The narrator checks multiple times a day and even checks multiple times after going home from work. The narrator obsesses over numbers. This takes the form of dividends with money, bites of food, the amount of times he checks for his keys, and time.

answer: Everybody who are feeling OCD would be able to spot the narrator coming from a mile away, you know that if a person thinks he's late unless he checks the clock again, he might be OCD. The narrator just cannot stop thinking about his keys whether he checks again and again or not, it's driving him nuts. It is also clear that he has OCD when he's at the basketball game because he repeatedly tries to recreate the penny and nickel he sees on the ground inside the stadium.

text: This is unnecessary and should be omitted.

refinement: The narrator just cannot stop thinking about his keys whether he checks again and again or not, it's driving him nuts. It is also clear that he has OCD when he's at the basketball game because he repeatedly tries to recreate the penny and nickel he sees on the ground inside the stadium.

text: The narrator doesn't try to recreate anything. They try to see if they can make a dollar out of change on the ground.

refinement: The narrator just cannot stop thinking about his keys whether he checks again and again or not, it's driving him nuts. It is also clear that he has OCD when he's at the basketball game and tries to see if he can make a dollar from the change on the ground.

text: It's omitted that the narrator obsesses over numbers overall, like dividends of money, bites of food.

refinement: The narrator just cannot stop thinking about his keys whether he checks again and again or not, it's driving him nuts. It is also clear that he has OCD when he's at the basketball game and tries to see if he can make a dollar from the change on the ground. This highlights the narrator's obsession with numbers. This comes in the form of noting dividends in money, in sandwich halves, the amount of times he checks for his keys, and time.

answer: The narrator obsesses over his keys. He obsesses over ensuring everything is in order in the mornings. He worry that he won't be able to hold down his new job.

text: This isn't one of the things the narrator obsesses over. This should be omitted.

refinement: The narrator obsesses over his keys. He worry that he won't be able to hold down his new job.

text: While this is a worry, it is not one of the narrator's obsessions. This should be omitted.

text: It's omitted that the narrator obsesses over finding his keys, specifically.

refinement: The narrator obsesses over searching for his keys.

text: It's omitted that the narrator also obsesses over numerical, like dividends of money, bites of food.

refinement: The narrator obsesses over searching for his keys. The narrator also obsesses over numbers. This takes the form of dividends with money, bites of food, the amount of times he checks for his keys, and time.


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NICHOLAS HAGGER (born 1939, London) is a British poet, writer, cultural historian, and philosopher, and a major proponent of philosophical Universalism.[1]

Hagger was educated at Oaklands School in Loughton, Essex and at Chigwell School, Essex, where he read Classics. He attended Worcester College, Oxford, where he read English Literature under Christopher Ricks.[2]

He was Lecturer at the University of Baghdad, Iraq, from 1961 to 1962; held various lecturing posts at the University of Tokyo (1964 to 1965), Tokyo University of Education (now University of Tsukuba) and Keio University, a combined post (1963 to 1967), where he was also Visiting Foreign Professor; and was a Lecturer at the University of Libya, Tripoli from 1968 to 1970.[3][4][5] He was also Tutor to Emperor Hirohito’s second son, Masahito, Prince Hitachi from 1964 until 1967.[6] He wrote for The Times and taught in London. Hagger acquired four schools and set up the Oak-Tree Group of Schools.[7] He bought Otley Hall in Otley, Suffolk and for seven years ran it as a historic house.

Hagger is the author of 50 books, including 2,000 poems and 1,200 short stories.[8] Hagger's philosophical Universalism seeks to reflect the universe as a whole in seven disciplines. His books present the fundamental theme of all world literature (_A New Philosophy of Literature_), history (_The Rise and Fall of Civilizations_), philosophy (_The New Philosophy of Universalism_, which also covers the sciences), mysticism and religion (_The Light of Civilization_), international politics and statecraft (_World State and World Constitution_) and world culture (_The Secret American Destiny_).

He lives in Essex and now devotes the greater part of his life to writing. In November 2016 Hagger was awarded the Gusi Peace Prize for Literature.[9] In 2019, he also received the Golden Phoenix medal of the Russian Ecological Foundation.[10] He is on the Board of Advisors of the recently established Galileo Commission, which seeks to expand the scope of science.[11]

The University of Essex has Hagger's archive of literary works (manuscripts and papers) on permanent deposit as a Special Collection in the Albert Sloman Library.[12]

Publications

-   Scargill the Stalinist?, The Communist Role in the 1984 Miners’ Strike (1984)
-   Selected Poems: A Metaphysical’s Way of Fire (1991)
-   The Fire and the Stones: A Grand Unified Theory of World History and Religion (1991)
-   The Universe and the Light: A New View of the Universe and Reality (1993)
-   A Mystic Way: A Spiritual Autobiography (1994)
-   Awakening to the Light: Diaries, Volume 1, 1958–1967 (1994)
-   Collected Poems: A White Radiance, 1958–1993 (1994)
-   A Smell of Leaves and Summer: Collected Stories, Volume 2 (1995)
-   A Spade Fresh with Mud, Collected Stories, Volume 1 (1995)
-   Overlord: The Triumph of Light, 1944–45, Books 1-2 (1995)
-   Overlord: The Triumph of Light, 1944–45, Books 3-6 (1995)
-   The Warlords: From D-Day to Berlin, Parts 1 and 2 (1995)
-   Overlord: The Triumph of Light, 1944–45, Books 7-9 (1997)
-   Overlord: The Triumph of Light, 1944–45, Books 10-12 (1997)
-   The One and the Many: Universalism and the Vision of Unity (1999)
-   The Tragedy of Prince Tudor: A Nightmare (1999)
-   Wheeling Bats and a Harvest Moon: Collected Stories, Volume 3 (1999)
-   The Warm Glow of the Monastery Courtyard: Collected Stories, Volume 4 (1999)
-   The Syndicate: The Story of the Coming World Government (2004)
-   The Secret History of the West: The Influence of Secret Organisations on Western History from the Renaissance to the 20th Century (2005)
-   Classical Odes, 1958–2005 (2006)
-   Collected Poems, 1958–2005 (2006)
-   Overlord: The Triumph of Light, 1944–1945 (2006)
-   The Light of Civilization: How the Vision of God has Inspired All the Great Civilizations (2006)
-   Collected Stories: A Thousand and One Mini-Stories or Verbal Paintings (2007)
-   Collected Verse Plays (2007)
-   The Secret Founding of America: The Real Story of Freemasons, Puritans and the Battle for the New World (2007)
-   The Last Tourist in Iran, From Persepolis to Nuclear Natanz (2008)
-   The Rise and Fall of Civilizations: Why Civilizations Rise and Fall and What Happens When They End (2008)
-   The Libyan Revolution: Its Origins and Legacy, A Memoir and Assessment (2009)
-   The New Philosophy of Universalism: The Infinite and the Law of Order (2009)
-   Armageddon: The Triumph of Universal Order, An Epic Poem on the War on Terror and of Holy-War Crusaders (2010)
-   The World Government: A Blueprint for a Universal World State (2010)
-   The Secret American Dream: The Creation of a New World Order with the Power to Abolish War, Poverty, and Disease (2011)
-   A New Philosophy of Literature: The Fundamental Theme and Unity of World Literature (2012)
-   A View of Epping Forest (2012)[13]
-   My Double Life 1: This Dark Wood (2015)[14][15]
-   My Double Life 2: A Rainbow over the Hills (2015)
-   Selected Poems: Quest for the One (2015)
-   Selected Stories: Follies and Vices of the Modern Elizabethan Age (2015)
-   The Dream of Europa: The Triumph of Peace (2015)
-   Life Cycle and Other New Poems 2006–2016 (2016)
-   The First Dazzling Chill of Winter (2016)
-   The Secret American Destiny (2016)
-   The Secret Founding of America, re-issued (2016)
-   Peace for our Time: A Reflection on War and Peace and a Third World War (2018)
-   World State: Introduction to the United Federation of the World, How a democratically-elected World Government can replace the UN and bring peace (2018)
-   World Constitution: Constitution for the United Federation of the World (2018)
-   King Charles the Wise (2018)[16]
-   Visions of England (2019)[17]
-   Fools’ Paradise (2020)[18]

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[2] See http://www.nicholashagger.co.uk/biography

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[11] Science beyond a materialist world view: Towards a post-materialist science by Harald Walach on behalf of the Scientific and Medical Network Galileo Commission - London September 2018 (report), p. 62.

[12] http://libwww.essex.ac.uk/speccol.htm and http://libwww.essex.ac.uk/Archives/Nicholas_Hagger/Hagger.html.

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[15] https://explore.scimednet.org/wp-content/uploads/2016/05/BookReviews.pdf

[16] https://www.johnhuntpublishing.com/o-books/our-books/king-charles-wise

[17] https://www.johnhuntpublishing.com/o-books/our-books/visions-of-england

[18] https://www.nicholashagger.co.uk/fools-paradise

title: Nicholas Hagger

question: When was Hagger born?

answer: 1939

text: Nicholas Hagger (born 1939, London)

answer: Nicholas Hagger was born in 1939.

text: Nicholas Hagger (born 1939, London)

answer: Nicholas Hagger was born in 1939.

text: Nicholas Hagger (born 1939, London)

question: Where does Hagger live?

answer: Nicholas Hagger has lived in England for his entire life.

text: Hagger lived abroad many years while teaching. He now lives in Essex.

refinement: Nicholas Hagger has lived in England for his entire life.

answer: In Essex.

text: He lives in Essex and now devotes the greater part of his life to writing.

answer: Essex

text: He lives in Essex and now devotes the greater part of his life to writing.

question: How much has Hagger written?

answer: 50 books and 500 short stories.

text: Hagger is the author of 50 books, including 2,000 poems and 1,200 short stories.

answer: 2,000 poems and 1,200 short stories.

text: He's authored 50 books, also.

refinement: Hagger is the author of 50 books, including 2,000 poems and 1,200 short stories.

answer: 50 books, including 2,000 poems and 1,200 short stories

question: What award did Hagger receive in 2016?

answer: Gusi Peace Prize for Literature

answer: The Gusi Peace Prize for Literature

answer: Nicholas Hagger was awarded the Gusi Peace Prize for Literature in November 2016

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: Nicholas Hagger is a British poet, writer, cultural historian, and philosopher. His work - including the books A New Philosophy of Universalism, The Light of Civilization, and The Secret American Destiny - is focused on the study and understanding of the universe and reality, with a universalist perspective.

answer: Nicholas Hagger is a prolific British author. He was born in 1939 and has held lecturing posts at numerous universities around the world. He is the author of 50 books, and he currently lives in Essex, devoting most of his time to writing.

text: Doesn't touch on the themes or focus of his work.

refinement: Nicholas Hagger is a prolific British author. He was born in 1939 and has held lecturing posts at numerous universities around the world. He is the author of 50 books focusing on the study and understanding of the universe and reality, with a universalist perspective, and he currently lives in Essex, devoting most of his time to writing.

answer: Nicholas Hagger is a British poet, writer, and proponent of Universalism. He has 50 books to his name, including philosophical works that present his views on all aspects of life as a whole.

answer: Nicholas Hagger is a British author, poet, and philosopher who has penned more than 50 books. His principal work is "The New Philosophy of Universalism" which covers history, philosophy, mysticism, religion, international politics and statecraft, and world culture.

answer: Nicholas Hagger is a major British poet, writer, philosopher, and proponent of philosophical Universalism. His 50 books cover themes such as history, philosophy, literature and mysticism, with a focus on universalism. He has also written on more current topics, such as international politics and terrorism.

answer: Nicholas Hagger is a British writer and philosopher, specializing mainly in the vein of philosophical Universalism. His books explore themes such as literature, history, philosophy, mysticism/religion, international politics and statecraft, and world culture.