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SEE HERE FOR INFORMATION ABOUT COVID-19

Based within the Climate and Health Program in the Department of Environmental Health Sciences at the Mailman School of Public Health, our group studies the environmental determinants of health with a strong focus on infectious disease.  We develop and use dynamical and statistical modeling techniques to simulate and forecast the variability, seasonality and transmission of infectious agents.  Much of this work is directed toward the epidemiological prediction of infectious disease outbreaks using dynamic models and data assimilation (i.e. Bayesian inference) methods.  Real-time forecasts of influenza in the U.S. during the cold and flu season can be seen at cpid.iri.columbia.edu.

Our group also studies health in the built environment, specifically New York City.  We have projects exploring indoor heat and humidity levels in the home, as well as a program actively monitoring respiratory virus infection.  These projects combine field observations and modeling efforts.

Prospective students and researchers interested in joining the Shaman Group or the Climate and Health Program should check out currently posted opportunities.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Within where are these studies based?

answer: The studies described in the passage are based at the Mailman School of Public Health.

text: Based within the Climate and Health Program in the Department of Environmental Health Sciences at the Mailman School of Public Health, our group studies the environmental determinants of health with a strong focus on infectious disease.

answer: Studying the environmental factors of health as well as the influenza virus in the Climate and Health Program in the Department of Environmental Health Sciences at the Mailman School of Public Health.

text: Based within the Climate and Health Program in the Department of Environmental Health Sciences at the Mailman School of Public Health, our group studies the environmental determinants of health with a strong focus on infectious disease.

answer: The group's studies take place within the Climate and Health Program at the Mailman School of Public Health.

text: Based within the Climate and Health Program in the Department of Environmental Health Sciences at the Mailman School of Public Health, our group studies the environmental determinants of health with a strong focus on infectious disease.

answer: The Climate and Health Program in the Department of Environmental Health Sciences at the Mailman School of Public Health.

text: Based within the Climate and Health Program in the Department of Environmental Health Sciences at the Mailman School of Public Health, our group studies the environmental determinants of health with a strong focus on infectious disease.

answer: The Climate and Health Program at Mailman School of Public Health.

text: Based within the Climate and Health Program in the Department of Environmental Health Sciences at the Mailman School of Public Health, our group studies the environmental determinants of health with a strong focus on infectious disease.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What are they studying?

answer: The Shaman Group studies environmental determinants of health, with a focus on the variability, seasonality, and transmission of infectious agents. They also study the health of those living in the built environment.

answer: The environmental determinants of health.

answer: The Shaman Group studies environmental determinants of health with a focus on infectious disease. Their work includes developing dynamical and statistical modeling techniques to simulate and forecast the variability, seasonality and transmission of infectious agents, as well as mapping indoor heat and humidity levels in the home.

answer: They are interested in infective diseases and prospectives students interested in joining them should keep an eye out for opportunities advertised

answer: Covid.

text: They study a lot more than just covid.

refinement: The group studies the environmental determinants of health with a strong focus on infectious disease.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What else does this group study?

answer: Health in the built environment, specifically New York City.

answer: They study how climate and the built environment affect one's health.

answer: The Shaman group also studies the built environment, particularly in relation to respiratory virus infections.

answer: They study the environmental determinants of health with a strong focus on infectious disease. Much of this work is directed toward the epidemiological prediction of infectious disease outbreaks using dynamic models and data assimilation (i.e. Bayesian inference) methods.

text: The last sentence is extraneous.

refinement: They study the environmental determinants of health with a strong focus on infectious disease.

answer: The Shaman Group studies the epidemiology of infectious diseases, as well as pollution and the built environment.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where can real-time forecasts of influenza during the U.S.' cold and flu season be seen?

answer: CPID.iri.columbia.edu

answer: cpid.iri.columbia.edu

answer: The URL is cpid.iri.columbia.edu

answer: The forecasts of influenza during the U.S.' cold and flu season can be seen at cpid.iri.columbia.edu.

answer: They can be seen at cpid.iris.columbia.edu

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: This is a summary of the Shaman Group's projects.

text: This is, more specifically, a study of how environmental factors-such as in urban settings-impact infectious disease transmission.

refinement: This is a summary of the Shaman Group's project, a study of how environmental factors-such as in urban settings-impact infectious disease transmission.

answer: The Shaman Group's research focuses on improving our understanding of the transmission of infectious disease through modeling and data assimilation techniques. We also study health in the built environment, specifically in New York City.

text: The last sentence is in the first-person and extraneous.

refinement: The Shaman Group's research focuses on improving our understanding of the transmission of infectious disease through modeling and data assimilation techniques.

answer: The Shaman Group researches the environmental determinants of health, focusing on infectious disease forecasting. New students and researchers interested in joining the group are encouraged to apply.

text: The last sentence is extraneous.

refinement: The Shaman Group researches the environmental determinants of health, focusing on infectious disease forecasting.

answer: This is an advertisement for the Shaman Group.

text: This is accurate, but it needs some information as to what they do.

refinement: This is an advertisement for the Shaman Group, and their study of how environmental factors-such as in urban settings-impact infectious disease transmission.

answer: Several groups at the Climate and Health Program in the Department of Environmental Health Sciences at the Mailman School of Public Health study the way covid and other infectious diseases move during different seasons in New York City.


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Before I share this story I must let you know I am in a dark place in my life. My fiancee broke off the engagement New Years Day. I am working on things day by day and I am getting the treatment to help me with it. So do not be worried for the most part.

I never really wrote growing up but I feel like this is going to be good for me till I get better.

Thank you for reading, and this is a **ROUGH DRAFT** and written on Notepad because that's all I have right now.

"My Day called Regrets"

The year is 2013, and I have made bad deciesions in my past and it is time to get everything straightened out.

It is a cold winters day, and I fight to open my eyes to the sunlight because it is another day of feeling the way I always do. The windows do not hold the cold out and it blows in under my blanket and lets me know I feel still. I let out a Sigh... and I wish things were different... but they aren't. I hurt people and destroyed futures. These things go through my mind every other thought durning my time of being awake. When I fall to sleep I am awoken by a racing heart beat and fear of not knowing how to fix things I thought I could.

As I wonder why I still get up, I make my way to the hoodie laying next to me. It is thick and is the only thing showing warmth to me in this time of cold. My day is filled with pain and trying to not tear up at every though of my past. I get ready for work like everyone else. I am listening to music where the screaming is ecspressing my inner voice and hurt from ex-girlfriends and past lovers who are now a distant memory of the singers past life. I feel his pain and wish everything was better.

I gather my things and head off to my third shift factory job and get ready for another slow night of work knowing the only things my mind will be thinking of are the things I wish it didn't. I put on a show for my co-workers, smiling... laughing... but the few people who know my pain know I am crying inside. I turn away more often then normal to wipe away the few forceful tears that leave my eyes. With everything going on I pretend to chuckle at the poorly told joke told to mee to try and cheer me up. It does not work and I just look away and get back to my work. Trying to focus on the job at hand and keeping as busy as I can to repress the ideas and memories. The night rolls on and everything at work is moving at a slugish pace and I have done all I can to keep busy, so I stand. I stand and just look out into nothingness, thinking, feeling pain I wish I have never felt.

The time is 5am and it is almost time to get done with work. The thought of sleep seems so good, but the dreams to come will keep me up. I shuffle to my locker looking at only where I need to walk not paying attention to the things around me, people, and machines. I kick off my boots knowing that the day is done and I can try and relax. Relaxation is just a distant memory I have not felt in a long time. It hurts. Everytihng hurts. I hate my job and the place I live. But I can not just leave and walk away. My gloves and heavy jacket help me get past the cold winter morning as I walk to my car.

The worst part of going home is knowing the heat from my ex lover is no longer there, and it is filled with the cold and emptieness of my bed. I try to keep warm by holding a pillow as close as possible. It does not help and only makes me feel worse. I hate this. But I need to work on myself before I can even think about looking for someone to try and feel happy with. It will contiune to be cold. I lay cold and alone waiting for my eyes to get heavy. The sand man must be stuck in traffic because my eyes will not get tierd and my pain will not subside. The tears help pull me towards sleep and I know it is another day that I will try to forget. This is just my day called regrets, and I am gone to wake again and repeat it.

title: "My day called Regrets" Rough Draft

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What are the indications that the narrator is deeply depressed?

answer: The narrator is clearly experiencing deep depression through the admission of past mistakes and other feelings of pain. Furthermore, the narrator feels that nothing can help and this causes introspection and sadness. Xenophobia, sadness, and emptiness are all indicative of depression.

text: Xenophobia is not occurring

refinement: The narrator is clearly experiencing deep depression through the admission of past mistakes and other feelings of pain. Furthermore, the narrator feels that nothing can help and this causes introspection and sadness. Sadness and emptiness are all indicative of depression.

text: The pain is due to the departure of his fiancee

refinement: The narrator is clearly experiencing deep depression due to the departure of his fiancee. Furthermore, the narrator feels that nothing can help and this causes introspection and sadness. Sadness and emptiness are all indicative of depression.

text: Add more information about his nights and days

refinement: The narrator is clearly experiencing deep depression due to the departure of his fiancee. Furthermore, the narrator feels that nothing can help and this causes introspection and sadness. He puts on a good face at work, and spends sleepless nights alone, but his sorrow comes through everything he does. Sadness and emptiness are all indicative of depression.

text: This is a personal emotion for him and should be specified

refinement: The narrator is clearly experiencing deep depression due to the departure of his fiancee. Furthermore, the narrator feels that nothing can help and this causes introspection and sadness. He puts on a good face at work, and spends sleepless nights alone, but his sorrow comes through everything he does. Sadness and his inner emptiness are all indicative of depression.

answer: Look for these key phrases: "it is pain and trying to not tear up at every though of my past," "I feel his pain and wish everything was better," "I am listening to music where the screaming is ecspressing my inner voice and hurt from ex-girlfriends and past lovers who are now a distant memory of the singers past life," "thinking, feeling pain I wish I have never felt"

text: Even though the source has incorrect spelling, the model should fix the spelling here

refinement: Look for these key phrases: "it is pain and trying to not tear up at every though of my past," "I feel his pain and wish everything was better," "I am listening to music where the screaming is expressing my inner voice and hurt from ex-girlfriends and past lovers who are now a distant memory of the singers past life," "thinking, feeling pain I wish I have never felt"

text: End with a period

refinement: Look for these key phrases: "it is pain and trying to not tear up at every though of my past," "I feel his pain and wish everything was better," "I am listening to music where the screaming is expressing my inner voice and hurt from ex-girlfriends and past lovers who are now a distant memory of the singers past life," "thinking, feeling pain I wish I have never felt."

text: Make this line not be imperative

refinement: Here are some phrases from the text: "it is pain and trying to not tear up at every though of my past," "I feel his pain and wish everything was better," "I am listening to music where the screaming is expressing my inner voice and hurt from ex-girlfriends and past lovers who are now a distant memory of the singers past life," "thinking, feeling pain I wish I have never felt."

text: Add a line explaining these phrases

refinement: Here are some phrases from the text: "it is pain and trying to not tear up at every though of my past," "I feel his pain and wish everything was better," "I am listening to music where the screaming is expressing my inner voice and hurt from ex-girlfriends and past lovers who are now a distant memory of the singers past life," "thinking, feeling pain I wish I have never felt." All these indicators show the narrator is very sad and misses their fiancee who left them very deeply.

answer: He no longer feels like waking up in the morning. He sighs a lot and tries to smile at work so people won't ask him what is going on. After work, the narrator never feels like going home.

text: Add coverage about how he spends his nights

refinement: He no longer feels like waking up in the morning. He sighs a lot and tries to smile at work so people won't ask him what is going on. After work, the narrator never feels like going home. He spends his nights alone in sorrow, crying, missing his fiancee.

answer: It is implied that they are considering suicide when they are at the point of wanting to not wake up. Their exhaustion, their cold bed, the fact that they want to feel relaxed, but don't and their sadness followed by tears.

text: THAT IS NOT IMPLIED.

refinement: Their exhaustion, their cold bed, the fact that they want to feel relaxed, but don't and their sadness followed by tears.

text: Add coverage of their daily life

refinement: He no longer feels like waking up in the morning. He sighs a lot and tries to smile at work so people won't ask him what is going on. After work, the narrator never feels like going home. Their exhaustion, their cold bed, the fact that they want to feel relaxed, but don't and their sadness followed by tears.

text: This is not a complete sentence

refinement: He no longer feels like waking up in the morning. He sighs a lot and tries to smile at work so people won't ask him what is going on. After work, the narrator never feels like going home. They are also exhausted, and lie alone in their cold bed, missing their fiancee and crying.

answer: The narrator feels a deep sense of regret through the events of their life. From falling asleep with a racing heart beat to trying to find ways to cope with their pain, the narrator is deeply despondent. The tone of this piece is deeply sorrowful, and though the narrator tries to put on a cheerful front, their heart is obviously breaking. Their endless thoughts about their mistakes shows severe depression. Their boredom at work is also likely a sign of depression. Finally, their sleeplessness and tearful night illustrate their struggle with depression.

text: Don't repeat the same adjectives multliple times unless for deliberate anaphora

refinement: The narrator feels a deep sense of regret through the events of their life. From falling asleep with a racing heart beat to trying to find ways to cope with their pain, the narrator is deeply despondent. The tone of this piece is sorrowful, and though the narrator tries to put on a cheerful front, their heart is obviously breaking. Their endless thoughts about their mistakes shows severe depression. Their boredom at work is also likely a sign of depression. Finally, their sleeplessness and tearful night illustrate their struggle with depression.


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This was my first short story I had to write for my Creative Writing class back when I was a Junior in high school. I hope you like it!

    "Ooohhhh," Helen groaned. She hurt everywhere. Being in a hospital for six weeks is really something that she wasn't looking forward to. She was about to call for a nurse to change the channel on her tiny tv (golf was not her thing!) when all of a sudden there was a knock on the door. "Come in," she called weakly.

   "Hello, I'm Dr. Bandade, how are you feeling?" He smiled a toothy smile.

   She gave the burly man a sarcastic look. "How do you *think* I'm feeling? I fell out of a five-story window!"

    The doctor pulled up a chair next to her. "Yes about that, how exactly did it happen? On this statement is says that you were pushed?"

    Helen cringed at the very thought of it, not only because it was painful, but she wasn't sure if he would believe her. "Well, it started out as a normal day. I woke up, ate breakfast, completed the daily crossword puzzle in the paper.

    "It was then I noticed that my window was open. A cool breeze swept through, so I decided to close it. I got up and went over to the window.

    "Right as I reached out to grab the handle, Rufus, my cat, rubbed against my leg, causing me to lose my balance. Before I knew it, I was falling out the window!

    "I screamed. I heard people screaming below me. I felt breathless. Panic swept over me.

    "It was only too soon when I came into contact with the ground. I heard bones shattering and I cried out in pain. In the distance, sirens wailed. The ambulance charged down the street.

    "After they put me on the stretcher, they hauled me away to the hospital, where they told me I was lucky to even be alive. They said I broke every bone in my body. I'll be here about six weeks, if not more." Her face fell when she told the doctor this. "And that's all that happened."

    Dr. Bandade looked over at her. "So you fell out accidentally then."

    "No! I was *pushed* out!" she yelled.

    "But you even said that you lost your balance, and no one was with you."

    "Yes there was... Rufus! *He* pushed me out!"

    The doctor rationalized, "But he's a *cat.* He probably didn't realize that rubbing against you to show affection would-"

    But Helen cut him off. "He *deliberately* rubbed too hard and made me lost my balance."

    "What would be the purpose for Rufus to push you?" The doctor raised an eyebrow.

    "He's just evil," she simply said.

    "Oh." He wrote some things down on his clipboard.

    Helen stared at him suspiciously. "What kind of doctor are you anyway, asking me all these questions?"

    "I'm a psychiatrist." He wrote some more things down.

    "What? You think I'm crazy don't you?! I'm telling you, my cat is trying to *kill me!"*

    Before Dr. Bandade could say anything, there was a knock at the door.

    "Excuse me, doctor," the nurse said, "but there's someone here to see her."

    Helen perked up a bit. A visitor to see her!

    The visitor walked into the room.

    "Rufus!" Helen shrieked.

    Standing there was the tabby cat. He was staring at her with glossy green eyes, slanted into slits. His tail twitched as if to say, "I'm *back."*

title: Paranoid?... Or Just Plain Evil?

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who does Helen blame for her fall?

answer: She blames Rufus, her cat. She claims that her cat is evil. Her doctor is a psychiatrist and thinks she may be paranoid. Then a visitor comes to the hospital. It's Rufus — her cat.

text: The visitor is irrelevant to the question.

refinement: She blames Rufus, her cat. She claims that her cat is evil. Her doctor is a psychiatrist and thinks she may be paranoid.

text: The doctor is irrelevant to the question.

refinement: She blames Rufus, her cat. She claims that her cat is evil.

text: The answer should mention that the narrator says Rufus pushed her out.

refinement: She blames Rufus, her cat. She claims that her cat is evil and pushed her out of the window.

answer: Helen blames Rufus, her cat, for her fall.

text: The answer should mention that the narrator says Rufus pushed her out.

refinement: Helen blames Rufus, her cat, for her fall. She says Rufus pushed her out of the window.

answer: Her cat Rufus.

answer: Helen blames her cat for her fall.

answer: Helen blames her cat, Rufus, for her fall.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What injury did Helen suffer?

answer: She broke every bone in her body falling out of a five-story window.

answer: Helen suffered a fall out of a five-story window, causing her to break all of her bones.

answer: Helen suffered a fall from a five-story window.

text: The answer should note that Helen broke all of her bones.

refinement: Helen suffered a fall from a five-story window. All of her bones were broken.

answer: Helen broke every bone in her body and broke her skull.

text: The story doesn't say anything about Helen breaking her skull.

text: The answer should note that Helen fell out of a window from the fifth floor.

refinement: Helen broke every bone in her body after a fall from the fifth floor.

answer: She fell out a five story window. This caused her to break all of her bones. According to the medical report she must be in the hospital for six weeks.

text: The length of stay is irrelevant to the question.

refinement: She fell out a five story window. This caused her to break all of her bones.


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THE REAL BREAD CAMPAIGN IS LAUNCHING SOURDOUGH SEPTEMBER, BRITAIN’S FIRST NATIONAL CELEBRATION OF THE BREAD.

New campaign ambassador, Duncan Glendinning of the Thoughtful Bread Company, Bath, said: “For me, the best Real Bread combines great crust, depth of flavour and fantastic crumb. Sourdough is the only bread capable of delivering all of these and the only type that actually improves with age.”

Genuine sourdough bread is leavened only using a live starter culture produced by mixing flour and water to nurture one or more species of yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains, and therefore in the flour.

As well as developing a greater depth and complexity of flavour, aroma, and texture than commercial baker’s yeast, some studies have found that long fermentation using a sourdough starter has a range of dietary benefits.

Campaign coordinator Chris Young added: “Happily Britain is rediscovering the delicious delights of Real Bread made with just flour, water, salt, time and care. Plain sourdough has the simplest recipe of any loaf and yet, like alchemists, the most skilled bakers can transform these three basic ingredients into a whole world of gold medal Real Breads.”

The 30 days will include: Aidan Chapman’s Phoenix Bakery in Weymouth shunning baker’s yeast for a whole month, instead using only a sourdough starter for all of his Real Bread; Roger and Sally Birt’s Red Dog Bakery in north Devon running a sourdough baking class on 6 September and a tasting on the 7th; and Tom Herbert covering sourdough as part of his baking masterclass at Hobbs House School in Chipping Sodbury on 11thand 24th. Other highlights are available on the Real Bread Campaign’s online events calendar.

On Twitter, @RealBread is running SourDOH! inviting people to name and shame sourdough shams by posting photos using the #sourdoh hashtag, and joining the #RealBread conversation.

question: What is Real Bread?

answer: It's bread made using only three ingredients: flour, water, and salt.

text: While the summary is technically accurate, the fact that Real Bread is made using a natural sourdough live starter culture is a key part of the Real Bread Campaign and the article.

refinement: It's bread made using only three ingredients: flour, water, and salt. It relies on a live starter culture rather than commercial baker's yeast.

text: The fifth paragraph mentions 'the delicious delights of Real Bread made with just flour, water, salt, time and care.'

answer: Real Bread is bread that is leavened only using a live starter culture produced by mixing flour and water to nurture one or more species of yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains, and therefore in the flour.

text: The third paragraph describes Real Bread, a sourdough, as 'leavened only using a live starter culture produced by mixing flour and water to nurture one or more species of yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains, and therefore in the flour.'

answer: Real Bread is leavened only using a live starter culture produced by mixing flour and water to nurture one or more species of yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains, and therefore in the flour.

text: The third paragraph describes Real Bread, a sourdough, as 'leavened only using a live starter culture produced by mixing flour and water to nurture one or more species of yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains, and therefore in the flour.'

answer: According to the passage, genuine sourdough bread is leavened only using a live starter culture produced by mixing flour and water to nurture one or more species of yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains. This results in a bread with a greater depth and complexity of flavour, aroma, and texture than commercial baker's yeast, as well as a range of dietary benefits.

text: The third paragraph describes Real Bread, a sourdough, as 'leavened only using a live starter culture produced by mixing flour and water to nurture one or more species of yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains, and therefore in the flour.'

text: The fourth paragraph states that this bread has 'a greater depth and complexity of flavour, aroma, and texture than commercial baker’s yeast' and some studies find that 'long fermentation using a sourdough starter has a range of dietary benefits.'

question: Why is there a campaign for Real Bread?

answer: The campaign is to promote the use of sourdough bread.

text: While this is technically true, the benefits of sourdough form a significant part of the campaign.

refinement: The campaign is to promote the use of sourdough bread, which is perceived to offer better flavour, aroma and texture, and provide a range of dietary benefits.

text: The second paragraph states that the campaign concerns sourdough bread.

answer: The taste is a rediscovery for Britain, and its shunning of baker's yeast is linked to dietary benefits as well.

text: It's not clear what 'a rediscovery for Britain' really means in terms of taste. This could be conveyed a lot more clearly.

refinement: The taste is an improvement on commercial bread, and its shunning of baker's yeast is linked to dietary benefits as well.

text: The fifth paragraph states, 'Campaign coordinator Chris Young added: “Happily Britain is rediscovering the delicious delights of Real Bread '

text: The fourth paragraph states, 'some studies have found that long fermentation using a sourdough starter has a range of dietary benefits.'

answer: The Real Bread Campaign is launching Sourdough September, Britain's first national celebration of the bread.

text: This answer does not really offer an explanation for why the campaign exists.

refinement: The Real Bread Campaign sets out to promote sourdough bread, which is thought to offer dietary benefits and a taste and texture that is better than bread made with commercial yeast.

text: The first paragraph states, 'The Real Bread Campaign is launching Sourdough September, Britain's first national celebration of the bread.'

answer: The Real Bread Campaign is meant to promote the benefits of genuine sourdough bread, which is leavened using a live starter culture. The campaign hopes to educate people on the benefits of sourdough bread, as well as to celebrate the art of baking it.

text: The third paragraph states, 'Genuine sourdough bread is leavened only using a live starter culture'

text: The fifth paragraph has the campaign coordinator talk about Britain 'rediscovering the delicious delights of Real Bread' and how 'the most skilled bakers can transform these three basic ingredients into a whole world of gold medal Real Breads.'

text: The seventh paragraph mentions the campaign's Twitter 'inviting people to name and shame sourdough shams', suggesting that they are encouraging people to get involved in baking

question: How is Real Bread made?

answer: It is made using a live starter culture produced by mixing flour and water to nurture one or more species of yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains, and therefore in the flour.

text: The third paragraph states, 'Genuine sourdough bread is leavened only using a live starter culture produced by mixing flour and water to nurture one or more species of yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains, and therefore in the flour.'

answer: Real bread is made by combining flour, water, salt, and time.

text: This may be technically accurate but it misses out how Real Bread is made with a live starter culture, which is emphasised in the article.

refinement: Real bread is made by combining flour, water, salt, and using a live starter culture produced by nurturing naturally occurring yeast and lactic acid bacteria.

text: In the fifth paragraph the campaign coordinate describes Real Bread as being 'made with just flour, water, salt, time and care.'

answer: Genuine sourdough bread is leavened only using a live starter culture produced by mixing flour and water to nurture one or more species of yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains, and therefore in the flour.

text: The third paragraph states, 'Genuine sourdough bread is leavened only using a live starter culture produced by mixing flour and water to nurture one or more species of yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains, and therefore in the flour.'

answer: According to the passage, genuine sourdough bread is leavened using a live starter culture that is produced by mixing flour and water. This starter culture then nurtures yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains. This process results in a bread with a greater depth and complexity of flavour, aroma, and texture, as well as a range of dietary benefits.

text: The third paragraph states, 'Genuine sourdough bread is leavened only using a live starter culture produced by mixing flour and water to nurture one or more species of yeast and lactic acid bacteria that occur naturally on the surface of cereal grains, and therefore in the flour.'

text: The fourth paragraph describes the bread as 'developing a greater depth and complexity of flavour, aroma, and texture than commercial baker’s yeast,' and that studies find 'long fermentation using a sourdough starter has a range of dietary benefits.'

question: What is another name for Real Bread?

answer: Sourdough

text: The second paragraph states, 'the best Real Bread combines great crust, depth of flavour and fantastic crumb. Sourdough is the only bread capable of delivering all of these and the only type that actually improves with age'

answer: Sourdough

text: The second paragraph states, 'the best Real Bread combines great crust, depth of flavour and fantastic crumb. Sourdough is the only bread capable of delivering all of these and the only type that actually improves with age'

answer: It's also called sourdough bread.

text: The second paragraph states, 'the best Real Bread combines great crust, depth of flavour and fantastic crumb. Sourdough is the only bread capable of delivering all of these and the only type that actually improves with age'

answer: Sourdough bread.

text: The second paragraph states, 'the best Real Bread combines great crust, depth of flavour and fantastic crumb. Sourdough is the only bread capable of delivering all of these and the only type that actually improves with age'

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: The Real Bread Campaign is launching September, Britain's first national celebration of the bread. The campaign is being led by Duncan Glendinning of the Thoughtful Bread Company, Bath. The campaign will include a month-long shunning of baker's yeast in favor of sourdough starter.

text: It is not apparent that the campaign involves shunning baker's yeast for a month across the board; this only applies to Aidan Chapman's Phoenix Bakery

refinement: The Real Bread Campaign is launching September, Britain's first national celebration of the bread. The campaign is being led by Duncan Glendinning of the Thoughtful Bread Company, Bath.

text: More space could be given to mentioning sourdough.

refinement: The Real Bread Campaign is launching Sourdough September, Britain's first national celebration of the bread. The campaign is being led by Duncan Glendinning of the Thoughtful Bread Company, Bath. This campaign will celebrate the taste and health benefits of sourdough with a series of activities around baking and appreciating sourdough bread.

text: The first paragraph states, 'The Real Bread Campaign is launching Sourdough September, Britain's first national celebration of the bread.'

text: The second paragraph describes Duncan Glendinning as the new campaign ambassador

answer: The Real Bread Campaign is launching Sourdough September, Britain's first national celebration of the bread. The 30 days will include: Aidan Chapman's Phoenix Bakery in Weymouth shunning baker's yeast for a whole month, instead using only a sourdough starter for all of his Real Bread; Roger and Sally Birt's Red Dog Bakery in north Devon running a sourdough baking class on 6 September and a tasting on the 7th; and Tom Herbert covering sourdough as part of his baking masterclass at Hobbs House School in Chipping Sodbury on 11thand 24th. Other highlights are available on the Real Bread Campaign's online events calendar.

text: This summary places too much emphasis on the series of events and less on the campaign itself.

refinement: The Real Bread Campaign is launching Sourdough September, Britain's first national celebration of the bread. The campaign will focus on the dietary benefits and art of baking sourdough, and including activities such as sourdough baking classes. On Twitter, @RealBread is inviting people to name and shame sourdough shams.

text: The first paragraph states, 'The Real Bread Campaign is launching Sourdough September, Britain's first national celebration of the bread.'

text: The sixth paragraph lists activities including, 'Aidan Chapman’s Phoenix Bakery in Weymouth shunning baker’s yeast for a whole month, instead using only a sourdough starter for all of his Real Bread; Roger and Sally Birt’s Red Dog Bakery in north Devon running a sourdough baking class on 6 September and a tasting on the 7th; and Tom Herbert covering sourdough as part of his baking masterclass at Hobbs House School in Chipping Sodbury on 11th and 24th. Other highlights are available on the Real Bread Campaign’s online events calendar.'

answer: The new ambassador for the Real Bread campaign lays praise on it. Also called sourdough bread, it's made using only flour, water, and salt. While such bread is potentially tastier than bread made with baker's yeast, it's also linked to dietary benefits.

text: It's not particularly relevant that the new ambassador praises the campaign or the bread.

refinement: Also called sourdough bread, it's made using only flour, water, and salt. While such bread is potentially tastier than bread made with baker's yeast, it's also linked to dietary benefits.

text: More detail is needed on the campaign proper.

refinement: The Real Bread Campaign is launching a sourdough September, a month-long campaign to promote sourdough bread and the art of baking it. Also called sourdough bread, it's made using only flour, water, and salt. While such bread is potentially tastier than bread made with baker's yeast, it's also linked to dietary benefits.

text: Some amendments to improve grammar and readability.

refinement: The Real Bread Campaign is launching a sourdough September, a month-long campaign to promote sourdough bread and the art of baking it. Also called sourdough bread, it's made using only flour, water, and salt. While such bread is potentially tastier than bread made with baker's yeast, it's also linked to dietary benefits.

text: The second paragraph has the campaign ambassador state, 'the best Real Bread combines great crust, depth of flavour and fantastic crumb. Sourdough is the only bread capable of delivering all of these and the only type that actually improves with age.'

text: The fifth paragraph describes sourdough as being 'made with just flour, water, salt, time and care'

text: The fourth paragraph states, 'As well as developing a greater depth and complexity of flavour, aroma, and texture than commercial baker’s yeast, some studies have found that long fermentation using a sourdough starter has a range of dietary benefits.'

answer: The Real Bread Campaign is launching a month-long celebration of sourdough bread in September, with events and activities taking place across the UK. Sourdough is said to have a richer flavour and texture than regular bread, and some studies have found that it has health benefits.

text: The first paragraph states, 'The Real Bread Campaign is launching Sourdough September, Britain's first national celebration of the bread.'

text: The sixth paragraph describes a series of events happening across the UK.

text: The fourth paragraph states, 'As well as developing a greater depth and complexity of flavour, aroma, and texture than commercial baker’s yeast, some studies have found that long fermentation using a sourdough starter has a range of dietary benefits.'


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[Mercedes S Class]

MERCEDES S CLASS

2 passengers 2 luggage

Mercedes S Class chauffeur car hire in London – UK wide for private airport transfers, business meetings, evening hire, or leisure daily hire.

[Mercedes V Class]

MERCEDES V CLASS

6 passengers 6 luggage

Mercedes V Class chauffeur car hire in Mayfair, London, UK wide for private charter transfers, financial roadshows, sports and corporate events.

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MERCEDES MAYBACH

2 passengers 2 luggage

Mercedes Maybach chauffeur car hire with professional driver in Mayfair, London, and UK wide from £95ph + VAT (min 4hours)

[Range Rover Vogue]

RANGE ROVER VOGUE

2 passengers 3 luggage

Range Rover Vogue car hire with executive driver in Mayfair, London – UK wide from £75ph + VAT (min 4hours)

[Bentley Mulsanne Chauffeur London]

BENTLEY MULSANNE

2 passengers 2 luggage

Bentley Mulsanne chauffeur car hire in Mayfair, London and UK Wide from £100ph + VAT (min 4hours)

[Rolls Royce Phantom Chauffeur Driven]

ROLLS ROYCE PHANTOM

2 passengers 2 luggage

Rolls Royce Phantom Series 2 chauffeur car hire in Mayfair, London and surrounding areas from £140ph + VAT (min 4hours)

CHAUFFEUR DRIVEN CARS IN LONDON

London’s exclusive chauffeur company takes you to your destination in style

Home of executive, luxury and prestige chauffeur driven cars in London and UK Wide. EG Chauffeurs has a wide range collection of chauffeur driven cars to satisfy every need. We offer luxury chauffeur driven Mercedes-Benz S Class, Viano & V-Class 7 passengers, Range Rover Vogue Autobiography and Rolls Royce Phantom alongside with the most vetted professional executive chauffeurs London has to offer.

Our luxury fleet of chauffeur driven cars are available for airport transfers, corporate hospitality and events, financial roadshows, business meetings, London and UK tours, weddings, shopping trips and much more…

HOW TO BOOK ONLINE

CHECK PRICES

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CHOOSE CAR TYPE

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PAY SECURELY

3D secure payment powered by Worldpay or Stripe. All major debit and credit cards accepted, including Amex at no extra cost.

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Instant booking confirmation directly to your inbox. Chauffeur details are emailed to you the evening before travel or 2 hours prior pick up.

ABOUT US

London’s best chauffeur company for leisure, business, and corporate travel.

EG Chauffeurs are London based premier chauffeur company providing professional executive chauffeur services and affordable luxury chauffeur driven CAR HIRE in London and UK Wide. Providing outstanding customer service for many years EG Chauffeurs offers secure and discreet chauffeur services for leisure and business travel.

We provide a high level of personalized customer service for high-net-worth individuals, executives in large corporations and VIP’s setting an example of London’s finest chauffeurs to our leisure and business clients. We take pride in having an exceptionally qualified and reliable elite chauffeur team who are capable of satisfying the most demanding schedule.

EG Chauffeurs works very closely with a number of private charter operators companies delivering an unparalleled chauffeur service in London and UK Wide. Our professional, polite executive drivers are very well aware of the private airports’ protocol. We are also very proud to serve VVIP clients including private jet owners, Quintessentially members, Royal families from the middle east, members of UN and the EU Parliament, enabling us to understand the discretion and level of service required from us.

Business travel, sports or corporate events, evening chauffeur hire, or private AIRPORT chauffeur transfers, we are confident we can meet and even exceed your expectations. Our large fleet of top-of-the-range executive and luxury chauffeur driven cars are nothing short of impressive, and everybody receives the VIP treatment. In fact, EG Chauffeurs are rated London’s No.1 chauffeur company on Trustpilot.

CHAUFFEUR SERVICES IN LONDON & UK WIDE

Executive chauffeur services and luxury car hire in London, UK and Europe Wide. One way transfers, financial roadshow, corporate and sports events, or private airport transfers, EG Chauffeurs lets you truly experience the very best chauffeur travel.

[A to B]

Single journey chauffeur service London – UK wide.  One-way chauffeur transfers are based completely on mileage. You may also add as many stops on the way and request a return trip. We take a time to understand your internal booking and tailor your trips in the most efficient way possible to suit your travel needs…

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Whether you have an important meeting in the city, a full day of appointments, or a special day-out with your clients, our professional chauffeurs can help to make your day stress-free travel. Our business chauffeurs can be relied upon to ensure that your journey is relaxing and enjoyable…

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EG Chauffeurs provides luxury chauffeur service for you or your clients your friends and family travelling to and from any event in the south of England, covering Weddings, Horse Racing at Royal Ascot or Windsor, Tennis at Wimbledon or Eastbourne, Football at Wembley, Rugby at Twickenham…

[Airport]

AIRPORT CHAUFFEUR TRANSFERS

Luxury airport chauffeur transfers and Meet & Greet airport chauffeur service from Heathrow, Farnborough, Gatwick and all London and UK private airports. On arrival at the airport, you will be met by our professional airport chauffeurs who will escort you to your chosen luxury chauffeured car…

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the cars available at EG Chauffeurs.

answer: EG Chauffeurs has a variety of cars customers can book and drive. There are four different car types: the Mercedes S Class, Mercedes V Class, Mercedes Maybach, and Range Rover Vogue. Prices are all labeled at the beginning of the article, with prices varying on which day of the week it is and how many hours the reservation is for.

text: There are two more car types available.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs has a variety of cars customers can book and drive. There are six different car types: the Mercedes S Class, Mercedes V Class, Mercedes Maybach, Range Rover Vogue, Bentley Mulsanne, and Rolls Royce Phantom. Prices are all labeled at the beginning of the article, with prices varying on which day of the week it is and how many hours the reservation is for.

text: Generic pricing information is irrelevant.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs has a variety of cars customers can book and drive. There are six different car types: the Mercedes S Class, Mercedes V Class, Mercedes Maybach, Range Rover Vogue, Bentley Mulsanne, and Rolls Royce Phantom.

text: The answer should mention the carrying capacity of the cars.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs has a variety of cars customers can book and drive. There are six different car types: the Mercedes S Class, Mercedes V Class, Mercedes Maybach, Range Rover Vogue, Bentley Mulsanne, and Rolls Royce Phantom. Mercedes V Class can carry 6 passengers with luggage while other cars can carry 2 passengers and 2 luggage, except for Vogue carrying 3 luggage.

text: The answer should mention the specific pricing information when available.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs has a variety of cars customers can book and drive. There are six different car types: the Mercedes S Class, Mercedes V Class, Mercedes Maybach, Range Rover Vogue, Bentley Mulsanne, and Rolls Royce Phantom. Mercedes V Class can carry 6 passengers with luggage while other cars can carry 2 passengers and 2 luggage, except for Vogue carrying 3 luggage. The article notes pricing information for the Maybach (£95/hour), Range Rover Vogue (£75/hour), Bentley Mulsanne (£100/hour), and the Rolls Royce Phantom (£140/hour). All prices are without VAT and there's a 4-hour minimum.

answer: EG Chauffeurs offers a fleet of chauffeur driven cars suitable for any occasion, including luxury Mercedes-Benz S Class, Viano and V-Class, Range Rover Vogue, and Rolls Royce Phantom. Services offered include airport transfers, corporate hospitality and events, financial roadshows, business meetings, and London and UK tours, as well as weddings and shopping trips.

text: Services are irrelevant.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs offers a fleet of chauffeur driven cars suitable for any occasion, including luxury Mercedes-Benz S Class, Viano and V-Class, Range Rover Vogue, and Rolls Royce Phantom.

text: The list of offered cars isn't complete.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs offers a fleet of chauffeur driven cars suitable for any occasion, including luxury Mercedes-Benz S Class, Viano and V-Class, Mercedes Maybach, Bentley Mulsanne, Range Rover Vogue, and Rolls Royce Phantom.

text: The answer should mention the carrying capacity of the cars.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs offers a fleet of chauffeur driven cars suitable for any occasion, including luxury Mercedes-Benz S Class (2 passengers & 2 luggage), Viano and V-Class (6 passengers & 6 luggage), Mercedes Maybach (2 passengers & 2 luggage), Bentley Mulsanne (2 passengers & 2 luggage), Range Rover Vogue (2 passengers & 3 luggage), and Rolls Royce Phantom (2 passengers & 2 luggage).

text: The answer should mention the specific prices where available.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs offers a fleet of chauffeur driven cars suitable for any occasion, including luxury Mercedes-Benz S Class (2 passengers & 2 luggage), Viano and V-Class (6 passengers & 6 luggage), Mercedes Maybach (2 passengers & 2 luggage, £95/hour), Bentley Mulsanne (2 passengers & 2 luggage, £100/hour), Range Rover Vogue (2 passengers & 3 luggage, £75/hour), and Rolls Royce Phantom (2 passengers & 2 luggage, £140/hour). The prices are without VAT, and there's a 4-hour minimum.

answer: In London, there are chauffeur V Class, S Class, Maybach, and Roll Royce Phantom. UK wide, the range of cars available include Bentley Mulsanne, Range Rover Vogue, and Mercedes V Class.

text: The answer misrepresents the list of available cars. The list isn't divided into London-wide and UK-wide, the services are.

refinement: There are chauffeur-driven cars which include Mercedes S Class, V Class, and Maybach, Range Rover Vogue, Bentley Mulsanne, and Rolls Royce Phantom.

text: The answer should include the carrying capacities of the cars.

refinement: There are chauffeur-driven cars which include Mercedes S Class (2 passengers and 2 luggage), V Class (6 passengers and 6 luggage), and Maybach (2 passengers and 2 luggage), Range Rover Vogue (2 passengers and 3 luggage), Bentley Mulsanne (2 passengers and 2 luggage), and Rolls Royce Phantom (2 passengers and 2 luggage).

text: The answer should include specific pricing information if available.

refinement: There are chauffeur-driven cars which include Mercedes S Class (2 passengers and 2 luggage), V Class (6 passengers and 6 luggage), and Maybach (2 passengers and 2 luggage, £95/hour +VAT - min. 4 hours), Range Rover Vogue (2 passengers and 3 luggage, £75/hour +VAT - min. 4 hours), Bentley Mulsanne (2 passengers and 2 luggage, £100/hour +VAT - min. 4 hours), and Rolls Royce Phantom (2 passengers and 2 luggage, £140/hour +VAT - min. 4 hours).

answer: EG Chauffeurs offers a wide selection of luxury chauffeur driven cars including Mercedes S Class, Range Rover Vogue, Rolls Royce Phantom, and Bentley Mulsanne. These cars are available for corporate transport, private airport transfers, and special occasions.

answer: EG Chauffeurs six different car options from four different companies. Most of the cars only offer seating for two passengers, except for the Mercedes V Class which has seating for six. Three of the cars available are Mercedes, and there are also Range Rovers, Bentleys, and Rolls Royces for hire.

text: The answer should mention the specific prices and models if possible.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs six different car options from four different companies. Most of the cars only offer seating for two passengers, except for the Mercedes V Class which has seating for six. Three of the cars available are Mercedes, and there are also Range Rovers, Bentleys, and Rolls Royces for hire. All cars require a minimum hiring period of 4 hours. The Mercedes Maybach costs £95+VAT per hour, Vogue costs £75+VAT per hour, Mulsanne costs £100+VAT per hour, and Phantom Series 2 costs £140+VAT per hour.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the steps for booking online at EG Chauffeurs.

answer: To book online at EG Chauffeurs, you first check prices and choose a car type. There are no hidden costs and all costs include a 20% VAT. You then input your trip information and pay securely using Worldpay or Stripe. They accept all major debit and credit cards. After paying, a booking confirmation will be sent to your email.

answer: To book online at EG Chauffeurs, first check prices and choose the car type based on your budget and travel needs. Next, enter full trip information including date and time, flight number, special requests. Once confirmed, you will receive an e-mail confirmation with any additional chauffeur details. Airport transfers, business trips, events, or private airport transfers are all available via online booking.

answer: Customers choose their car type, pay securely, and confirm their booking. A confirmation email will be sent to their inbox. Customer details are emailed the evening before travel or within two hours of pickup. The customer can change their booking up until it's time for pickup.

text: The article doesn't mention anything about changing bookings.

refinement: Customers choose their car type, pay securely, and confirm their booking. A confirmation email will be sent to their inbox. Customer details are emailed the evening before travel or within two hours of pickup.

text: The answer omits the requirement for travel details for bookings. They can also make special requests at this step.

refinement: Customers choose their car type, pay securely, and confirm their booking after providing all the travel details and special requests. A confirmation email will be sent to their inbox. Customer details are emailed the evening before travel or within two hours of pickup.

answer:
The steps to book a chauffeur service online at EG Chauffeurs are as follows:
1. Check prices online using the state of the art online booking system.
2. Choose the right car type.
3. Enter trip information, including date and time, destination, flight number, and any other special requests.
4. Pay securely online through 3D secure payment powered by Worldpay or Stripe.
5. Receive immediate confirmation in your inbox. Chauffeur details are emailed to you the evening before travel or 2 hours prior to pick up.

answer: Go to the website and enter the details of your trip. You can pay either by credit card or by debit card. You must pay the vat price. You will receive an instant booking confirmation to your inbox. Your chauffeur details will be emailed to you the evening before or two hours before your pickup.

text: The VAT information is provided confusingly in the answer.

refinement: Go to the website and enter the details of your trip. You can pay either by credit card or by debit card. Prices include VAT. You will receive an instant booking confirmation to your inbox. Your chauffeur details will be emailed to you the evening before or two hours before your pickup.

text: The answer omits the step of car selection.

refinement: Go to the website, select the car type according to your needs, and enter the details of your trip. You can pay either by credit card or by debit card. Prices include VAT. You will receive an instant booking confirmation to your inbox. Your chauffeur details will be emailed to you the evening before or two hours before your pickup.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what EG Chauffeurs does.

answer: EG Chauffeurs provides executive and luxury car hire for both leisure and business travel in London and UK Wide. We also provide high-quality, reliable private chauffeur transportation and meet & greet services at airports. Our client list includes high-net-worth individuals, executives in large corporations, and VIP's.

text: The answer changes pronouns, speaking as if written by the company.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs provides executive and luxury car hire for both leisure and business travel in London and UK Wide. They also provide high-quality, reliable private chauffeur transportation and meet & greet services at airports. Their client list includes high-net-worth individuals, executives in large corporations, and VIP's.

text: "luxury car hire" should be plural and "VIP's" shouldn't have an apostrophe.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs provides executive and luxury car hires for both leisure and business travel in London and UK Wide. They also provide high-quality, reliable private chauffeur transportation and meet & greet services at airports. Their client list includes high-net-worth individuals, executives in large corporations, and VIPs.

answer: EG Chauffeurs is a luxury and executive car hire network that provides airport transfers, corporate hospitality and events, financial roadshows, and business meetings to high net-worth individuals and large corporations in London. They go so far as to offer airport chauffer services to private flights landing in London. Overall they must have a high reputation, being rated as the top on-demand car service in the city.

text: The answer shouldn't represent the company's claim of being no. 1 as an argument of its own.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs is a luxury and executive car hire network that provides airport transfers, corporate hospitality and events, financial roadshows, and business meetings to high net-worth individuals and large corporations in London. They go so far as to offer airport chauffer services to private flights landing in London. Overall they have a high reputation, being rated as the No. 1 chauffeur company on Trustpilot.

answer: EG Chauffeurs offers a wide collection of chauffeur driven luxury cars for every need. They are based in London, and provide a high level of personalized customer service. EG Chauffeurs works with a number of private charter services to deliver an unparalleled chauffeur experience. EG Chauffeurs is rated London's No. 1 chauffeur company on Trustpilot.

answer: EG Chauffeurs provides luxury chauffeur service for leisure, business and corporate travel in London and across the UK. They have a range of luxury executive, chauffeur driven cars, and are able to meet the most demanding travel schedule with professional drivers. They are highly rated, trusted by world-class brands, and have been serving high-net-worth individuals and executives across the globe.

answer: EG Chauffeurs is a London based company who provides professional executive chauffer services and chauffeured car rentals in the north of London and UK Wide. The company boasts a fleet of the best luxury executive, luxurious, and prestige chauffeured cars. From their website, they allow users to book a chauffeured car and professional driver online.

text: The company's range is UK-wide, there's no need to confuse matters with "in the north of London"

refinement: EG Chauffeurs is a London based company who provides professional executive chauffer services and chauffeured car rentals UK Wide. The company boasts a fleet of the best luxury executive, luxurious, and prestige chauffeured cars. From their website, they allow users to book a chauffeured car and professional driver online.

text: Chauffeur is misspelled.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs is a London based company who provides professional executive chauffeur services and chauffeured car rentals UK Wide. The company boasts a fleet of the best luxury executive, luxurious, and prestige chauffeured cars. From their website, they allow users to book a chauffeured car and professional driver online.

text: "The company boasts a fleet of the best luxury executive, luxurious, and prestige chauffeured cars." The redundancy of luxury cars' mention makes the preceding sentence somewhat more confusing than it needs to be.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs is a London based company who provides professional executive chauffeur services and chauffeured car rentals UK Wide. The company boasts a fleet of the best luxurious and prestigious chauffeured cars. From their website, they allow users to book a chauffeured car and professional driver online.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the services EG Chauffeurs offers.

answer: EG Chauffeurs offers single journey trips based on mileage, as well as a day of business travel. They also offer Meet & Greet airport chauffeur service from Heathrow, Farnborough, Gatwick, and all London private airports. EG Chauffeurs also offers luxury charter services for events in the south of England.

text: The charter services offered are UK-wide.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs offers single journey trips based on mileage, as well as a day of business travel. They also offer Meet & Greet airport chauffeur service from Heathrow, Farnborough, Gatwick, and all London private airports. EG Chauffeurs also offers luxury charter services UK-wide.

text: The company's service range includes all private airports in the UK, not only London.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs offers single journey trips based on mileage, as well as a day of business travel. They also offer Meet & Greet airport chauffeur service from Heathrow, Farnborough, Gatwick, and all UK private airports. EG Chauffeurs also offers luxury charter services UK-wide.

answer: EG Chauffeurs offers landing services, transferring services, and limo services. Regarding private car hire, EG Chauffeurs offers companies a chauffeur service in Executive; in Prestige; in Luxury; and in Super Luxury. EG chauffeurs in London ensures complete confidentiality and honors discretion.

text: The article doesn't mention any limo services. The company's services are misrepresented in general.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs offers chauffeur services for leisure and business travels, airport transfers, business meetings, tours, weddings, and more. Regarding private car hire, EG Chauffeurs offers companies a chauffeur service in Executive; in Prestige; in Luxury; and in Super Luxury. EG chauffeurs in London ensures complete confidentiality and honors discretion.

text: The ranks "Executive, Prestige, Luxury, and Super Luxury" are made up.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs offers chauffeur services for leisure and business travels, airport transfers, business meetings, tours, weddings, and more. EG chauffeurs in London ensures complete confidentiality and honors discretion.

text: The answer should mention the service range of the company.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs offers chauffeur services for leisure and business travels, airport transfers, business meetings, tours, weddings, and more. EG chauffeurs in London ensures complete confidentiality and honors discretion. Most of their services are available UK-wide, with the exception of public airport pickup, which is limited to Heathrow, Farnborough, Gatwick airports.

answer: EG Chauffeurs provides chauffeur services for luxury car hire, executive car hire, airport transfers, transportation for corporate travel and events, including weddings, and private airport transfers. Our experienced and professional drivers can provide hassle-free, luxurious travel for individuals and businesses alike.

text: The answer should use pronouns consistent with a third-person view.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs provides chauffeur services for luxury car hire, executive car hire, airport transfers, transportation for corporate travel and events, including weddings, and private airport transfers. Their experienced and professional drivers can provide hassle-free, luxurious travel for individuals and businesses alike.

text: The answer should mention the service range.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs provides chauffeur services for luxury car hire, executive car hire, airport transfers, transportation for corporate travel and events, including weddings, and private airport transfers. Their experienced and professional drivers can provide hassle-free, luxurious travel for individuals and businesses alike. Their services are available UK-wide.

answer: EG Chauffeurs offers executive, luxury and prestige chauffeur driven car hire in London and UK Wide. We provide luxury airport transfers, sports and corporate events transportation, and private airport transfers. Other services include weddings, corporate hospitality and events, financial roadshows, business meetings, as well as London and UK tours. We are trusted by some of the world's most recognized brands.

text: The answer should use pronouns consistent with a third-person view.

refinement: EG Chauffeurs offers executive, luxury and prestige chauffeur driven car hire in London and UK Wide. They provide luxury airport transfers, sports and corporate events transportation, and private airport transfers. Other services include weddings, corporate hospitality and events, financial roadshows, business meetings, as well as London and UK tours. They are trusted by some of the world's most recognized brands.

answer: EG Chauffeurs offers both single journeys and longer journeys. One-way journeys are based on mileage while longer journeys include a return trip. There are many different options regarding stops and other demands. Chauffeurs accompany guests to the cars, and the company has a system to handle special demands. The company has a large fleet of top-of-the-range executives cars, for any level of employer. The cars are available for business, leisure and luxury travel. There are options for private jet travel as well.


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My eyes strained to take in my surroundings, the view was one I have seen millions of times, one bright light forever burning my face and complete darkness surrounding that ever scorching light. I cant escape it and yet I have tried so many times. Where I am has no sound, only faint groans which come and go. It is complete solitude and I crave company, “too much thinking” “I’m so lonely” “please help me” these are the thought’s I’ve uttered to myself over and over again and even though I decided years ago that I couldn’t go on I am still here. “why is that?” I hear you ask, Well the reason is because my self inflicted exile has allowed life to flourish and create absolutely beautiful things beyond my wildest dreams. There where great times, when I was in harmony with my body as well as my mind, but gradually those times have disappeared.

I have tried multiple times to end my life, and my body carries the scars. I can feel them every day and they mock me, why? Because I have never done it right, they mock my immense failure. I am being so selfish but I don’t care anymore, I have spent what seems like centuries creating a cancer to kill myself, one that will slowly strip me of my flesh from the inside out and drain me of my very life force. It is beautiful, almost perfect, it will spread quicker than plagues of locust and consume everything healthy in my body until it has taken all my life, once it has finished it’s task it will fade without a trace or a memory, a scream or a sigh.

The cancer has begun to spread, I feel myself growing ever weaker, It is now almost absolute. Quite poetic in a way, As I get weaker it gets stronger yet when I die it die’s too. As I have grown older my sadism has grown more wicked. I’ve often laughed to myself thinking about my cancer consuming me, Growing more and more confident with every space it takes over, probing into new unknown territories with great satisfaction at the ripe pastures it see’s. Little does it know that this will end, It’s conquest will be over before it has time to rejoice over it’s spoils, The stupid thing. It can be clever at times I must say, It targets and desecrates my organs with pinpoint accuracy and lets no good go to waste, I feel it everyday. What a beautiful creation.

“A name, That’s it! I need a name for this magnificent disease….“ Ok I’ve got one, One that is as twisted as my mind But allow me to introduce myself first, I have been so rude. My name is Mother Earth and I shall call my disease Mankind.

title: Thoughts/opinions appreciated! 1st time poster :) - "My Creation"

question: What is the cancer?

answer: The cancer in the passage is a disease that slowly consumes the body from the inside out, eventually killing the person.

text: There is one other option the author offers at the end.

refinement: The cancer in the passage is a disease that slowly consumes the body from the inside out, eventually killing the person. They decide to call it "mankind".

text: I am being so selfish but I don’t care anymore, I have spent what seems like centuries creating a cancer to kill myself, one that will slowly strip me of my flesh from the inside out and drain me of my very life force. It is beautiful, almost perfect, it will spread quicker than plagues of locust and consume everything healthy in my body until it has taken all my life, once it has finished it’s task it will fade without a trace or a memory, a scream or a sigh.

text: The cancer has begun to spread, I feel myself growing ever weaker, It is now almost absolute. Quite poetic in a way, As I get weaker it gets stronger yet when I die it die’s too. As I have grown older my sadism has grown more wicked. I’ve often laughed to myself thinking about my cancer consuming me,

text: No answer.

refinement: The cancer is a disease eating the narrator from the inside-out, consuming them, that will continue to do so until they die.

answer: The cancer is a disease that is slowly killing the narrator.

text: There is another definition the narrator offers.

refinement: The cancer is a disease that is slowly killing the narrator, and they decide to call it "mankind".

text: The cancer has begun to spread, I feel myself growing ever weaker, It is now almost absolute. Quite poetic in a way, As I get weaker it gets stronger yet when I die it die’s too. As I have grown older my sadism has grown more wicked. I’ve often laughed to myself thinking about my cancer consuming me,

answer: Mankind.

text: This is one of the definitions the narrator either lays out or hints at.

question: Who is the narrator?

answer: Mother Earth.

text: My name is Mother Earth and I shall call my disease Mankind.

answer: Mother Earth

text: My name is Mother Earth and I shall call my disease Mankind.

answer: The narrator appears to be someone who is suffering from a terminal illness, and has created a disease to kill themselves. They seem to be quite sadistic, and seem to take pleasure in the destruction of their own body. They appear to be quite self-loathing, and seem to be quite lonely.

text: These things are true of the text, but at the end the narrator does provide a definitive answer.

refinement: The narrator appears to be someone who is suffering from a terminal illness, and has created a disease to kill themselves. They seem to be quite sadistic, and seem to take pleasure in the destruction of their own body. They appear to be quite self-loathing, and seem to be quite lonely. The narrator then says their name is Mother Earth and the disease is Mankind.

answer: The narrator is Mother Earth.

question: Why has the narrator given themselves cancer?

answer: The narrator has given themselves cancer because they want to die.

text: They didn't give themselves cancer, but they have created it. This is a bit of a riddle, though, as they have created mankind, which is some sort of a beautiful cancer to them.

refinement: They haven't given themselves cancer-they have created it. Which is to say, it is something of their doing.

text: I have spent what seems like centuries creating a cancer to kill myself, one that will slowly strip me of my flesh from the inside out and drain me of my very life force. It is beautiful, almost perfect, it will spread quicker than plagues of locust and consume everything healthy in my body until it has taken all my life, once it has finished it’s task it will fade without a trace or a memory, a scream or a sigh.

answer: They do not want to live anymore.

text: There's nothing in the original text to my left that indicates they have given themselves cancer. This is a bit of a riddle, though, as they did create the cancer-mankind.

refinement: They haven't given themselves cancer-they have created it. Which is to say, it is something of their doing.

answer: The narrator has given themselves cancer because they find it beautiful and enjoy the idea of it consuming them. They see it as a way to end their own life.

text: I am being so selfish but I don’t care anymore, I have spent what seems like centuries creating a cancer to kill myself, one that will slowly strip me of my flesh from the inside out and drain me of my very life force. It is beautiful, almost perfect, it will spread quicker than plagues of locust and consume everything healthy in my body until it has taken all my life, once it has finished it’s task it will fade without a trace or a memory, a scream or a sigh.

answer: The narrator has given themselves cancer to kill themselves.

text: This is something of a riddle. They have created cancer-mankind-but not intentionally given it to themselves. Maybe they didn't always see it as a disease at first.

refinement: They have created cancer-mankind-but not intentionally given it to themselves. Maybe they didn't always see it as a disease at first.

text: I am being so selfish but I don’t care anymore, I have spent what seems like centuries creating a cancer to kill myself, one that will slowly strip me of my flesh from the inside out and drain me of my very life force. It is beautiful, almost perfect, it will spread quicker than plagues of locust and consume everything healthy in my body until it has taken all my life, once it has finished it’s task it will fade without a trace or a memory, a scream or a sigh.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The narrator, Mother Earth, is lonely in her exile and decides to end her life by creating a cancer called mankind.

answer: The author is a person who has been trying to kill themselves for a long time. They have a disease that they have named "Mankind" and it is slowly killing them.

text: This misses the metaphors.

refinement: The author is Mother Earth, who has been trying to kill themselves for a long time. They have a disease that they have named "Mankind" and it is slowly killing them.

answer: The author describes their experience of being trapped in a dark place, and how they have created a disease to kill themselves. They name the disease 'Mankind' and describe it as a beautiful creation.

text: This misses the metaphors.

refinement: The author, Mother Earth, describes their experience of being trapped in a dark place, and how they have created a disease to kill themselves. They name the disease 'Mankind' and describe it as a beautiful creation.

text: This needs to mention the word "cancer".

refinement: The author, Mother Earth, describes their experience of being trapped in a dark place, and how they have created a disease similar to cancer for the purposes of of killing themselves. They name the disease 'Mankind' and describe it as a beautiful creation.

answer: The narrator is a woman who has been exiled from her home planet and is dying of cancer.

text: This misses the metaphor.

refinement: The narrator is Mother Earth, who is dying of a cancer she created herself called "mankind".


text:
The director’s face was the first I saw upon returning. I had hoped it would be my mothers. His bifocals were constantly sliding down that pointy nose, and I could tell he was nervous from the constant smoothing of the stringy hair around his ears. Several emotions flickered across his face at once: fear, joy, excitement, jealousy. The last made me uncomfortable, and I shifted under the large man’s eager stare.

“Well… what did you see?” he asked, rubbing his forehead with a handkerchief. His voice was higher than normal; normal being already slightly feminine. The others in the room stared expectantly, pen and paper ready in each pair of hands. Reporters, news camera crews, journalists, and anyone else who wanted exclusive information was jammed into the already cramped room. If I had more of an ego, I may have enjoyed the attention. Perhaps even more so if I had anything to tell them.

They thought I was the perfect candidate, considering my experience. Every trip to the past had included me, either on my own or accompanying a person or group. They thought that I was good luck. I knew better, knew that I was the opposite. The first time, I had caught cholera, and had nearly died in Nottingham. The second, a stray Mongol arrow had all but pierced my heart. The rest are a jumble of disease, famine, natural disasters, and war casualties. Each time, as I was about to die, I was brought back to the present and the ailment cured. They told me it was worth it, for science and history. None of them ever volunteered to join me.

If it hadn't been news of the meteor, I may have continued my disastrous missions into history. It had been kept quiet at first, but news leaked out, as it always does. People began to panic, rioters hit the streets, and religious extremists gained billions of followers. Of course, nobody knew if the meteor would actually hit; it all depended on the timing. Either a direct collision, pulled by our gravity, or else it will pass extremely close and shoot towards the sun. Impossible to tell.
Then the director had his brilliant plan; if we could see the past, why not the future?  In the state of panic, everybody jumped on board. The director became a sort of celebrity, and funding was raised quickly. And who better, he asked, to lead this mission, but the one who had been a part of all previous missions. I tried to oppose, of course, but they wouldn't hear it. I was going.

I knew all along there was nothing to be seen. Even as they were inputting the coordinates, I was trying to decide what to say. You cannot predict the future; you cannot know it, because it does not yet exist. There are many possibilities, many different ways it could run. Astrologists and prophets appear successful, because they predict the most likely outcome, and brag intelligence or giftedness when it comes about. But there was no likely outcome, no easily discernible pattern to follow. It was one or the other, left or right, death or life. Heads or tails.

I glanced down, as the face of George Washington stared mockingly up at me. With a practiced smile and show of relief, I proclaimed that we would survive; the meteor will pass close enough that offshoots will create much damage, but Earth will remain intact.

Celebratory whoops and hollers filled the room, and the director did something of a dance. I smiled, shaking hands and giving hugs as everyone came to congratulate me. There was no happiness, no excitement, as I wait until the day the meteor would arrive. If I were to be honest with myself, I hope it hits us.

Nobody will judge you when you are dead.

title: Our Future, or Lack-Thereof

question: Why did the protagonist face near-death in all of his trips to the past?

answer: It is not stated.

answer: The protagonist faces near-death in all of his trips to the past because he is constantly surrounded by death and destruction. This is likely due to the fact that he is traveling to moments of great turmoil and upheaval, and as such, he is often caught in the crossfire.

text: lots of guessing

answer: The protagonist faced near-death in all of his trips to the past because he was always the one to return to the present.

text: doesn't really make sense, causally

answer: He thinks he's unlucky, but the story doesn't give a canonical answer.

question: Why did the protagonist go to the future?

answer: The protagonist went to the future to see if the meteor would hit the Earth.

answer: He was a part of all missions into the past, and the authorities thought he's the perfect fit.

text: This describes why he was selected for the mission, but not the purpose of the mission itself.

refinement: The protagonist goes to the future to see if a meteor will strike Earth.

answer: The protagonist went to the future in order to give the people false hope that the meteor would not destroy Earth.

text: We're right that it has to do with the meteor, but this false hope bit is a pretty out-there addition, and completely changes the context of the story.

refinement: The protagonist goes to the future to see if the meteor will strike earth.

answer: The protagonist went to the future to see if the meteor would hit Earth.

question: Why does the protagonist want the meteor to hit the planet?

answer: The story doesn't give a reason, but the protagonist seems somewhat depressed.

text: Let's not diagnose characters with mental illness for being negative.

text: The story does give a reason -- freedom from judgement.

refinement: Because nobody will judge you when you're dead.

text: answer field is blank

refinement: because nobody will judge you when you're dead, according to the protagonist

answer: The protagonist wants the meteor to hit the planet because they believe that nobody will judge them when they are dead. They feel that the destruction caused by the meteor will be preferable to the life they are currently living.

text: second sentence seems unnecessary

refinement: The protagonist wants the meteor to hit the planet because they believe that nobody will judge them when they are dead.

answer: He wants to be judged.

text: it's the exact opposite

refinement: Because, according to the protagonist, nobody will judge you when you're dead.

question: Why isn't there anything to see in the future?

text: the answer field is empty

answer: The events haven't unfolded yet. There are many possibilities that can happen, but since there's no definitive one, there's nothing concrete to see.

answer: There is no way to know what the future will hold, as it is constantly changing and evolving. Even if someone could see the future, it would be different for everyone, as there are infinite possibilities.

text: second sentence is unnecessary conjecture

refinement: There is no way to know what the future will hold, as it is constantly changing and evolving.

answer: Because it doesn't exist yet.

question: Write a ~8 sentence summary.

answer: The protagonist is a time traveler who has been tasked with predicting the future in order to reassure the public about the impending meteor strike. However, the protagonist knows that it is impossible to predict the future, and that any prediction is just as likely to be wrong as it is to be right. Despite this, the protagonist gives a false prediction of the future in order to appease the public.

answer: The protagonist is a time traveler who has been on many missions to the past. He is asked to go on a mission to the future to see if the Earth will be destroyed by a meteor. He knows that the Earth will be destroyed, but he lies and says that it will not be.

text: He does not know that the Earth will be destroyed; he cannot see anything of the future.

refinement: The protagonist is a time traveler who has been on many missions to the past. He is asked to go on a mission to the future to see if the Earth will be destroyed by a meteor. He cannot see the future, he lies and says that the Earth will not be destroyed.

answer: The narrator is a time traveler who has been sent back to the past to see what the future holds. He has been sent back to the past many times, and each time he has been injured or nearly killed. The director asks him what he saw in the future. The narrator says that the meteor will pass close enough to cause damage, but the Earth will remain intact. The director is happy and celebrates. The narrator is not happy and hopes the meteor hits the Earth. Nobody will judge you when you are dead.

text: The protagonist is not sent into the past, but the future.

refinement: The narrator is a time traveler who has been sent back to the future to see if a meteor will strike the Earth. He has been sent back to the past many times, and each time he has been injured or nearly killed. The director asks him what he saw in the future. The narrator says that the meteor will pass close enough to cause damage, but the Earth will remain intact. The director is happy and celebrates. The narrator is not happy and hopes the meteor hits the Earth. Nobody will judge you when you are dead.

text: Last sentence not important to the summary

refinement: The narrator is a time traveler who has been sent back to the future to see if a meteor will strike the Earth. He has been sent back to the past many times, and each time he has been injured or nearly killed. The director asks him what he saw in the future. The narrator says that the meteor will pass close enough to cause damage, but the Earth will remain intact. The director is happy and celebrates. The narrator is not happy and hopes the meteor hits the Earth.

answer: The protagonist is asked about what he saw. He has been a part of all missions into the past, and he always returned with a deathly wound from the past. Modern medicine manages to save him every time, but he thinks he's just bad luck. Everybody else thinks the opposite, and they considered him to be the perfect fit to go to the future. There is a meteor coming, and the scientists aren't sure whether it'll hit the planet or not. The protagonist knows better, that there's nothing to see because the future doesn't exist yet. But he tells the audience that the meteor will damage the planet but pass by. He secretly hopes that the meteor hits the planet.

text: every is better than all in this case

refinement: The protagonist is asked about what he saw. He has been a part of every mission into the past, and he always returned with a deathly wound from the past. Modern medicine manages to save him every time, but he thinks he's just bad luck. Everybody else thinks the opposite, and they considered him to be the perfect fit to go to the future. There is a meteor coming, and the scientists aren't sure whether it'll hit the planet or not. The protagonist knows better, that there's nothing to see because the future doesn't exist yet. But he tells the audience that the meteor will damage the planet but pass by. He secretly hopes that the meteor hits the planet.

text: structure of second clause in the second sentence is a little confusing

refinement: The protagonist is asked about what he saw. He has been a part of every mission into the past, and has nearly died every time. Modern medicine manages to save him every time, but he thinks he's just bad luck. Everybody else thinks the opposite, and they considered him to be the perfect fit to go to the future. There is a meteor coming, and the scientists aren't sure whether it'll hit the planet or not. The protagonist knows better, that there's nothing to see because the future doesn't exist yet. But he tells the audience that the meteor will damage the planet but pass by. He secretly hopes that the meteor hits the planet.

text: third sentence a little confusing

refinement: The protagonist is asked about what he saw. He has been a part of every mission into the past, and has nearly died every time. He thinks he's just bad luck. Everybody else thinks the opposite, and they consider him to be the perfect fit to go to the future. There is a meteor coming, and the scientists aren't sure whether it'll hit the planet or not. The protagonist knows better, that there's nothing to see because the future doesn't exist yet. But he tells the audience that the meteor will damage the planet but pass by. He secretly hopes that the meteor hits the planet.


text:
GEOFFREY ROBERT DAVIES (born 22 July 1946) is a former Australian cricketer.[1] He played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales between 1965/66 and 1971/72.[2] He toured New Zealand with the Australian team in 1966-67 and 1969-70, and was once 12th man for the Australian Test team.[3]

Davies was a middle-order batsman and leg-spin bowler. When he was chosen to tour New Zealand in 1967 _The Canberra Times_ said he was “destined to become a permanent member of the Australian side – if he retains his promise”.[4] He played as the professional for East Lancashire in the Lancashire League in 1967 and was one of the league's leading players, scoring 695 runs at an average of 48.98 and taking 40 wickets at 15.97.[5] He was considered a contender for the 1968 tour of England, but was not selected.[6]

[1]

[2]

[3] _The Oxford Companion to Australian Cricket_, Oxford, Melbourne, 1996, p. 138.

[4]

[5] _Wisden_ 1968, pp. 749–50.

[6] Murray F. Tippett, “Contenders for the Australian Team to tour England”, _Playfair Cricket Monthly_, March 1968, pp. 16-17.

title: Geoff Davies (Australian cricketer)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was Davies born?

answer: 22 July 1946

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: Geoffrey Robert Davies was born on the 22nd of July, 1946.

text: Geoffrey Robert Davies was "born 22 July 1946."

answer: July 22, 1946

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: Geoffrey Robert Davies was born on July 22, 1946.

text: Geoffrey Robert Davies was "born 22 July 1946."

answer: Davies was born on 22 July 1946.

text: Geoffrey Robert Davies was "born 22 July 1946."

answer: 22 July 1946.

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: Geoffrey Robert Davies was born on the 22nd of July, 1946.

text: Geoffrey Robert Davies was "born 22 July 1946."

answer: 22 July 1946.

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: Geoffrey Robert Davies was born on the 22nd of July, 1946.

text: Geoffrey Robert Davies was "born 22 July 1946."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What sport does Davies play?

answer: cricket

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

text: Geoffrey Robert Davies is "a former Australian cricketer."

answer: Cricket.

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

text: Geoffrey Robert Davies is "a former Australian cricketer."

answer: Cricket

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

text: Geoffrey Robert Davies is "a former Australian cricketer."

answer: Cricket

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

text: Geoffrey Robert Davies is "a former Australian cricketer."

answer: Cricket

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

text: Geoffrey Robert Davies is "a former Australian cricketer."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What position was Davies on the Australian Test team?

answer: Davies was once 12th man for the Australian Test team. 12th man is the last reserve for a squad.

text: Davies was "once 12th man for the Australian Test team."

answer: He was only on the team as 12th man

text: The answer could be less judgmental?

text: The answer could be clearer in its pronoun use.

refinement: Davies was on the Australian Test team as 12th man.

text: Davies was "once 12th man for the Australian Test team."

answer: 12th man

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: Davies was 12th man for the Australian Test team.

text: Davies was "once 12th man for the Australian Test team."

answer: Davies was not selected for the 1968 tour of England, though he was once 12th man for the Australian Test team. Therefore, he was not a member of the Australian Test team.

text: The question was not asking about the 1968 tour of England.

refinement: Davies was once 12th man for the Australian Test team. Therefore, he was not a member of the Australian Test team.

text: The answer contradicts itself, saying he was on the team but that doesn't count as a member of the team.

refinement: Davies was once 12th man for the Australian Test team.

text: Davies was "once 12th man for the Australian Test team."

answer: Davies was never chosen for the Australian Test team. He was a middle order batsman and leg spin bowler.

text: Davies was "once 12th man for the Australian Test team."

refinement: Davies was 12th man for the Australian Test team.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How many first-class matches did Davies play for New South Wales?

answer: 73

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: Davies played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales.

text: Davies "played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales."

answer: 73

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: Davies played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales.

text: Davies "played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales."

answer: 73.

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: Davies played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales.

text: Davies "played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales."

answer: 73.

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: Davies played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales.

text: Davies "played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales."

answer: 73

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: Davies played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales.

text: Davies "played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales."

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: Australian cricketer Geoff Davies played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales between 1965 and 1971. He toured New Zealand with the Australian team in 1966 and 1969 and was once 12th man for the Australian Test team. He was considered a contender for the 1968 tour of England but ultimately wasn't selected. Davies was a middle order batsman and leg spin bowler.

text: Davies "played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales."

text: Davies "was once 12th man for the Australian Test team."

text: Davies "was considered a contender for the 1968 tour of England, but was not selected."

text: Davies "was a middle-order batsman and leg-spin bowler."

answer: Geoff Davies was a former Australian cricketer. From 1965 to 1972, Geoffrey was one of Australia's leading cricket players. He toured New Zealand in 1966-67 and 1969-70.

text: Davies "played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales between 1965/66 and 1971/72."

text: Davies "toured New Zealand with the Australian team in 1966-67 and 1969-70."

answer: Geoffrey Robert Davies is a former Australian cricketer who played from 1965-72. He was considered a contender for the 1968 England tour, but was not chosen. He was a middle-order batsman and leg-spin bowler.

text: Davies "played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales between 1965/66 and 1971/72."

text: Davies "was considered a contender for the 1968 tour of England, but was not selected."

text: Davies "was a middle-order batsman and leg-spin bowler."

answer: Geoff Robert Davies is a former Australian cricketer who was born in 1946. He played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales between 1965/66 and 1971/72. He was considered a contender for the 1968 tour of England, but he was not selected.

text: Davies was "born 22 July, 1946."

text: Davies "played 73 first-class matches for New South Wales between 1965/66 and 1971/72."

text: Davies "was considered a contender for the 1968 tour of England, but was not selected."

answer: Geoffrey Robert Davies was a middle order batsman and leg spin bowler for New South Wales in the Australian Cricket League. He toured New Zealand twice with the Australian team. Despite being considered a contender for the 1968 tour of England, Davies was not selected.

text: Davies "was a middle-order batsman and leg-spin bowler."

text: Davies "toured New Zealand with the Australian team in 1966-67 and 1969-70."

text: Davies "was considered a contender for the 1968 tour of England, but was not selected."