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KENTUCKY ROUTE 379 (KY 379) is a state highway in Kentucky with two disjoint sections. The southern segment runs from KY 1880 near Claywell to the Cumberland River in Cumberland County. The northern segment begins at KY 771 near Ribbon and extends north to U.S. Route 127| (US 127) in Russell Springs in Russell County.

Route description

The southern segment of KY 379 is a supplemental road in eastern Cumberland County.[1] The northern segment of KY 379, which extends in western Russell County, is a rural secondary highway from its southern terminus near Button north to KY 55 at Olga and a state secondary highway from Olga to its northern terminus in Russell Springs.[2] The Cumberland County section of KY 379 begins at KY 1880 (Smiths Grove Road) near Claywell. KY 379 heads north along Irish Bottom Road, which crosses Big Willis Creek and Little Willis Creek before curving east to its northern terminus at a dead end at the Cumberland River.[3][4]

The Russell County segment of KY 379 begins at the northern terminus of KY 771 within a bend of the Cumberland River south of the hamlet of Ribbon. Winfreys Ferry Road heads west from the junction to a dead end at the Cumberland River opposite the terminus of the Cumberland County portion of KY 379. KY 379 heads north along Lester Creek and gradually curves east, crossing Jim Creek and Sycamore Creek around a brief stretch where the route follows the right bank of the river. The highway crosses Potts Branch and Millers Creek on either side of Creelsboro, where the route meets the south end of KY 1058. KY 379 crosses Ramsey Creek on its way to Helms, where the route turns north and leaves the valley of the Cumberland River. The highway turns west at its second junction with KY 1058, from which the routes run concurrently west to Old Olga, where KY 379 splits north again. The highway crosses Crocus Creek and intersects KY 55 at Olga.[5][6]

KY 379 continues north, running concurrently with KY 619 between Moores Schoolhouse Road and Warriner Ridge Road; Warriner Ridge Road heads east as KY 3281. The highway meets the east end of KY 832 and intersects KY 92 west of Esto. KY 379 intersects KY 3280, which heads west along Blair Schoolhouse Road and east along French Valley Road, and crosses the Cumberland Parkway before entering the city of Russell Springs along Main Street. In the center of town, the highway intersects KY 430 (Jamestown Street) and the north end of KY 619 (Maple Street). North of downtown, KY 379 joins KY 80 in a concurrency along Steve Wariner Drive. The two highways meet the south end of KY 1540 (Bottoms Road) before the two routes diverge at a four-legged intersection whose south leg is KY 3017 (Lakeway Drive). KY 379 follows Lakeway Drive northeast to its terminus at US 127.[7][8]

Major intersections

Southern segment

Northern segment

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title: Kentucky Route 379

question: Where does Kentucky Route 379 start and end?

answer: The southern segment of KY 379 starts at KY 1880 near Claywell and ends at the Cumberland River in Cumberland County. The northern segment of KY 379 starts at KY 771 near Ribbon and ends at US 127 in Russell Springs.

answer: The southern segment of KY 379 starts at KY 1880 near Claywell and ends at the Cumberland River in Cumberland County. The northern segment of KY 379 starts at KY 771 near Ribbon and ends at US 127 in Russell Springs in Russell County.

answer: The southern segment of KY 379 begins at KY 1880 near Claywell and ends at the Cumberland River in Cumberland County. The northern segment of KY 379 begins at KY 771 near Ribbon and ends at US 127 in Russell Springs.

answer: The southern segment runs from KY 1880 near Claywell to the Cumberland River in Cumberland County, and the northern segment runs from KY 771 near Ribbon to U.S. Route 127 in Russell Springs in Russell County.

question: When was Kentucky Route 379 built?

answer: That information can't be found.

answer: The southern segment of KY 379 was built in the early 2000s. The northern segment of KY 379 was built in the early 2000s.

text: "The southern segment of KY 379 was built in the early 2000s. The northern segment of KY 379 was built in the early 2000s." - there was no mention of when KY 379 was built. The correct answer is "That information can't be found."

answer: There is no information in the passage to determine when KY 379 was built.

answer: That information can't be found.

question: List three locations Kentucky Route 379 passes by.

answer: Big Willis Creek, Sycamore Creek, and the Cumberland Parkway.

answer: Big Willis Creek, Little Willis Creek, and the Cumberland River.

answer: Claywell, Cumberland River, Russell Springs

answer:
1. Claywell
2. Cumberland River
3. Russell Springs

question: How long is Kentucky Route 379 in total?

answer: The southern segment of KY 379 is a supplemental road in eastern Cumberland County. The northern segment of KY 379, which extends in western Russell County, is a rural secondary highway from its southern terminus near Button north to KY 55 at Olga and a state secondary highway from Olga to its northern terminus in Russell Springs. The Cumberland County section of KY 379 begins at KY 1880 (Smiths Grove Road) near Claywell. KY 379 heads north along Irish Bottom Road, which crosses Big Willis Creek and Little Willis Creek before curving east to its northern terminus at a dead end at the Cumberland River. The Russell County segment of KY 379 begins at the northern terminus of KY 771 within a bend of the Cumberland River south of the hamlet of Ribbon. Winfreys Ferry Road heads west from the junction to a dead end at the Cumberland River opposite the terminus of the Cumberland County portion of KY 379. KY 379 heads north along Lester Creek and gradually curves east, crossing Jim Creek and Sycamore Creek around a brief stretch where the route follows the right bank of the river. The highway crosses Potts Branch and Millers Creek on either side of Creelsboro, where the route meets the south end of KY 1058. KY 379 crosses Ramsey Creek on its way to Helms, where the route turns north and leaves the valley of the Cumberland River. The highway turns west at its second junction with KY 1058, from which the routes run concurrently west to Old Olga, where KY 379 splits north again. The highway crosses Crocus Creek and intersects KY 55 at Olga. KY 379 continues north, running concurrently with KY 619 between Moores Schoolhouse Road and Warriner Ridge Road; Warriner Ridge Road heads east as KY 3281. The highway meets the east end of KY 832 and intersects KY 92 west of Esto. KY 379 intersects KY 3280, which heads west along Blair Schoolhouse Road and east along French Valley Road, and crosses the Cumberland Parkway before entering the city of Russell Springs along Main Street. In the center of town, the highway intersects KY 430 (Jamestown Street) and the north end of KY 619 (Maple Street). North of downtown, KY 379 joins KY 80 in a concurrency along Steve Wariner Drive. The two highways meet the south end of KY 1540 (Bottoms Road) before the two routes diverge at a four-legged intersection whose south leg is KY 3017 (Lakeway Drive). KY 379 follows Lakeway Drive northeast to its terminus at US 127.

text: There is no mention of how long KY 379 is.

answer: There is no definitive answer to this question as the route is split into two segments, each of which is of different lengths. The southern segment is approximately 2.5 miles (4 km) long, while the northern segment is approximately 16.5 miles (26 km) long. Therefore, the total length of KY 379 is approximately 19 miles (31 km).

text: "There is no definitive answer to this question as the route is split into two segments, each of which is of different lengths. The southern segment is approximately 2.5 miles (4 km) long, while the northern segment is approximately 16.5 miles (26 km) long. Therefore, the total length of KY 379 is approximately 19 miles (31 km)."  - This is not correct because the article never mentioned how long KY 379 is.

refinement: There is no definitive answer to this question as the route is split into two segments, each of which is of different lengths. The southern segment is approximately 2.5 miles (4 km) long, while the northern segment is approximately 16.5 miles (26 km) long. Therefore, the total length of KY 379 is approximately 19 miles (31 km).

answer: That information can't be found.

answer: That information can't be found.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Kentucky Route 379 is a state highway in Kentucky with two disjoint sections. The southern segment runs from KY 1880 near Claywell to the Cumberland River in Cumberland County. The northern segment begins at KY 771 near Ribbon and extends north to U.S. Route 127| (US 127) in Russell Springs in Russell County.

text: Went over the 2-sentence summary requirement. Merge the last two sentences.

refinement: Kentucky Route 379 is a state highway in Kentucky with two disjoint sections. The southern segment runs from KY 1880 near Claywell to the Cumberland River in Cumberland County, while the northern segment begins at KY 771 near Ribbon and extends north to U.S. Route 127| (US 127) in Russell Springs in Russell County.

answer: Kentucky Route 379 is a state highway in Kentucky. It has two segments: the southern segment, which runs from KY 1880 to the Cumberland River, and the northern segment, which runs from KY 771 to U.S. Route 127.

answer: KY 379 is a rural highway that runs from Claywell to Russell Springs, passing through the Cumberland River valley. It intersects several other highways along the way.

text: "KY 379 is a rural highway that runs from Claywell to Russell Springs, passing through the Cumberland River valley. It intersects several other highways along the way." - it runs from Olga to Russell Springs.

refinement: KY 379 is a rural highway that runs from Olga to Russell Springs, passing through the Cumberland River valley. It intersects several other highways along the way.

answer: Kentucky Route 379 is a state highway in Kentucky with two disjoint sections. The southern segment runs from KY 1880 near Claywell to the Cumberland River in Cumberland County. The northern segment begins at KY 771 near Ribbon and extends north to U.S. Route 127 in Russell Springs in Russell County.

text: Went over the 2-sentence summary requirement. Merge the last two sentences.

refinement: Kentucky Route 379 is a state highway in Kentucky with two disjoint sections. The southern segment runs from KY 1880 near Claywell to the Cumberland River in Cumberland County, while the northern segment begins at KY 771 near Ribbon and extends north to U.S. Route 127 in Russell Springs in Russell County.


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Apologies if another genre tag would have been more appropriate, but I'm not sure exactly how to classify this.

The universe in which this excerpt takes place is an alternate-history fantasy dieselpunk North Korea in which mythological creatures are factory farmed for materials, food and alchemical drugs to enhance the lifespan and capabilities of the elite. This particular story was inspired by a post on /r/writingprompts, but the setting is something I've been working on for quite a while.

I'd really appreciate any critique you can give me.

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Ryugyong Hotel, 97th floor
Pyongyang
May 6th 2004

She looked absolutely majestic. Chestnut curls spilled halfway down the tanned flesh of her back. Her eyes were iridescent viridian and her face youthful, with rounded cheeks and a strong nose and daubed with mottled warpaint in thick curved lines that cradled her delicate features. Lacy olive fabric hugged her bust and stomach, a single opaque tube from collarbone to waist.

Her legs were not in fact legs at all but the body of a vast deer with flanks of rich mahogany fur and great hooved legs. Her back was spotted with patches of cream and a bushy tail the shape of a tapered bulb sprang from her rear. She gripped a staff carved in a tight spiral and ornamented with a dozen mystical woods.

“I am Nayeli the huntress, great fertility goddess of the plains, and I demand that you cease your exploitation of the great creatures gifted unto you lest I be forced to crush you and all of your foul mechanisms.”

He laughed, the throaty chuckle of a man both cruel and wise, and then Kim Il-Sung spoke. “You expect that we would forsake our great wealth, our great power, this glorious civilisation, at the whims of a feeble goddess?”

He wore a greatcoat of crimson hydra-scales (in effect a rich, heatproof leather) festooned with communist iconography and riveted steel reinforcements. It formed not only protection from the elements but also a sort of flexible exoskeleton that worked with the cocktail of extraordinary reagents coursing through his system to vastly enhance his fighting capabilities even unarmed. Its tiny diesels belched black smoke behind him.

Frustrated, she snarled, and the two figures dove forward.

Enchanted staff clashed with protective steel and magelight bathed the enhanced-concrete structure of the building. She sprang back, surprised by his tenacity, and he advanced relentlessly. Despite being ninety-two years of age, he maintained the physique and determination of a man barely forty, and the first clash was followed by a second and third wish the same conclusion. The combination of mythical scales and machined metal easily outmatched the primitive magic of the goddesses’ staff, and she was driven back blow after blow.

“You see.” He spoke comfortably, as if deflecting her blows barely tired him. “I am supreme leader Kim Il-Sung, eternal president of the republic, commander of the Korean People’s Army and herald of the great mythological revolution.” A flourish of his wrist and her weapon crackled with the sound of strained wood.

The hotel was formed from a trio of upright triangles fused to a central column in a sort of ‘Y’ shape, and she’d already backed half the length of her ‘wing’. “NO!” Her voice was strained, desperate. “You cannot defile the world in this way! I cannot allow you to do this!”

“Fool. You don’t have a choice.” Another step forward and one arm deflected her blow while the other delivered a punch to her gut. She doubled over in pain and slid backwards almost two meters. The angled glass was only a few meters behind her now, thick and uncompromising. Pretty soon she’d be trapped between her relentless opponent and the three-hundred-meter plunge to the concrete below. There was no way either of them could survive a drop like that…

She had a plan, at least.

His next two blows failed to connect as she darted backwards, no further effort to assail her opponent, and as she’d hoped the brief lack of contact frustrated her opponent. He dashed at her, drug-fuelled muscles lending a burst of speed, and her attempt to dodge was futile. The supreme leader crashed hard against her lower body and smashed her against the unyielding glass, but that failed to interrupt her. With a pained roll she flipped their positions such that he was closest to the windows, and he eyes we squeezed tightly shut and incantations spilled from her lips and she was smashing the staff hard against the ground.

The whole building rocked from the force of the blast as her weapon was completely vaporized. As thick as it was the glass shattered instantly, spilling a cascade of white fragments down the side of the building.

He was not so easily crushed. Though the force of the blast had thrown him from the window he’d kept a firm grasp of her leg, and now *both* of them tumbled faster and faster on the almost-vertical glass. Without her staff she was defenceless, however.

*Crack*
Her nose broke.
*Crack*
Now her jaw.
*Crack*
Her ribs splintered and buckled as well.
*Crack*
He struck her temple, hard, and she slid dizzily backwards off the side of the ‘wing’ and plummeted vertically towards the ground and then he was scrabbling for purchase against the smooth glass and not finding any.

title: [SP] Two 'gods' clash in a present-day city

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where is this story set?

answer: Somewhere imagined after a metaphorical version of North Korea, powered by communist and mythological resources for its population.

text: The response could be written in a proper sentence to make it stronger. Additionally, the passage does state in which universe the excerpt takes place.

refinement: The story is set somewhere imagined after a metaphorical version of North Korea, powered by communist and mythological resources for its population. The excerpt states that the universe in which this story takes place is in an alternate-history fantasy diesel punk North Korea that is full of mythical creatures.

answer: The story is set in Pyongyang, North Korea.

text: While this answer can be considered correct, there needs to be more added to make it as accurate as possible.

refinement: The story is set somewhere imagined after a metaphorical version of North Korea, powered by communist and mythological resources for its population. The physical location of where the story takes place is in Pyongyang, North Korea.

answer: The story takes place in North Korea in a city on the 97th floor of the Ryugyong Hotel.

answer: The story is set in an alternative version of North Korea. In this world mythological creatures are harvested. The Supreme Leader Kim Il-Sung speaks of a "Mythological Revolution."

text: Additional details are written in this response that do not need to be there to answer the question given.

refinement: The story is set in an alternative version of North Korea. In this world mythological creatures are harvested. The exact location of the story is found to be at Ryugyong Hotel, on the 97th floor, in Pyongyang.

answer: Pyongyang

text: This response is only one word and more can be added to this response for it to properly answer the question.

refinement: The story is set in an alternative version of North Korea. In this world mythological creatures are harvested. The exact location of the story is found to be at Ryugyong Hotel, on the 97th floor, in Pyongyang.


text:
_RASTELLUS_ is a genus of African termite hunters first described by Norman I. Platnick & E. Griffin in 1990.[1]

Species

it contains seven species:[2]

-   _Rastellus africanus_ Platnick & Griffin, 1990 – Namibia, Botswana
-   _Rastellus deserticola_ Haddad, 2003 – South Africa
-   _Rastellus florisbad_ Platnick & Griffin, 1990 – South Africa
-   _Rastellus kariba_ Platnick & Griffin, 1990 – Zimbabwe
-   _Rastellus narubis_ Platnick & Griffin, 1990 – Namibia
-   _Rastellus sabulosus_ Platnick & Griffin, 1990 – Namibia
-   _Rastellus struthio_ Platnick & Griffin, 1990 – Namibia, Botswana

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[2]

title: Rastellus

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is Rastellus?

answer: Rastellus is a genus of African termite hunters.

text:
_RASTELLUS_ is a genus of African termite hunters first described by Norman I. Platnick & E. Griffin in 1990.[1]

Species

it contains seven species:[2]

answer: Rastellus is a genus of African termite hunters. It contains seven described species.

text:
_RASTELLUS_ is a genus of African termite hunters first described by Norman I. Platnick & E. Griffin in 1990.[1]

Species

it contains seven species:[2]

answer: It is a genus of African termite hunters.

text:
_RASTELLUS_ is a genus of African termite hunters first described by Norman I. Platnick & E. Griffin in 1990.[1]

Species

it contains seven species:[2]

answer: Rastellus is a genus of termite hunters found in Africa. It contains seven species.

text:
_RASTELLUS_ is a genus of African termite hunters first described by Norman I. Platnick & E. Griffin in 1990.[1]

Species

it contains seven species:[2]

answer: Rastellus is a genus of African termite hunters first described by Norman I. Platnick and E. Griffin in 1990.

text:
_RASTELLUS_ is a genus of African termite hunters first described by Norman I. Platnick & E. Griffin in 1990.[1]

Species

it contains seven species:[2]

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who was Rastellus first described by?

answer: Norman I. Platnick and E. Griffin described Rastellus.

answer: Norman I. Platnick & E. Griffin in 1990.

answer: Rastellus was first described by Norman I. Platnick & E. Griffin.

answer: Norman I. Platnick & E. Griffin.

answer: Rastellus was first described by Norman I. Platnick and E. Griffin.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was Rastellus first described?

answer: It was first described in 1990 by Norman I. Platnick and E. Griffin.

answer: Rastellus was first described in 1990 by Norman I. Platnick and E. Griffin.

answer: 1990.

answer: Rastellus was first described in 1990.

answer: 1990.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How many species does Rastellus contain?

answer: Seven species.

answer: There are seven species of Rastellus.

answer: Rastellus contains 7 species.

answer: 7.

answer: Rastellus contains seven spacies.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: The genus Rastellus is a group of African termite hunters first described in 1990. There are seven species of Rastellus, ranging from Namibia to Zimbabwe.

answer: Rastellus is a genus of African termite hunters. The seven species within the genus are distributed in Africa, particularly in Namibia, Botswana, Zimbabwe, and Namibia.

answer: The Rastellus genus is a genus of African termite hunters first described by Norman I. Platnick & E. Griffin in 1990. It is home to seven known species, spread across different regions of Africa.

answer: Rastellus is a genus of African termite hunters first described in 1990. It contains seven spacies.

answer: Rastellus is a genus of African termite hunters. It contains 7 species.


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Panthers owner-for-a-few-more-hours Jerry Richardson is expected to make an appearance today.

Disgraced by recent allegations of workplace misconduct, Richardson hasn’t been spotted during the sale of his team to David Tepper, but he’s kept a low profile in recent years anyway.

Accoording to Ian Rapoport of the NFL Network, he’s scheduled to address the owners one final time before they vote to approve the sale at their meeting in Atlanta.

The 81-year-old Richardson was once one of the most powerful owners in the league, a close confidante (if not patron) of commissioner Roger Goodell. But he was on the wrong side of the league’s efforts to get back to Los Angeles.

He was pushing for a joint stadium in Carson for the Chargers and Raiders, a very old-NFL move which fell by the wayside for bigger new-money deals in Inglewood by Rams owner Stan Kroenke, and eventually the Raiders’ move to Las Vegas.

Losing that power struggle to a new guard of owners was part of the reason, along with his health, that he backed away from most league business in recent years. He stepped aside from all his committee assignments, and only showed up at the May meeting in 2016 because it was in Charlotte, as he had skipped league business for most of the last five years.

Richardson had a heart transplant in February 2009. He’s about to pocket $2.2 billion in cash as part of Tepper’s bid. At some point after that, the league will likely wrap up its investigation into the activity that triggered the sale, which included allegations of sexual and racial harassment.

question: What are Richardson's allegations?

answer: Workplace misconduct, sexual and racial harassment.

answer: Richardson is accused of sexual and racial harassment.

answer: Sexual and racial harassment.

answer: The allegations against Richardson include sexual and racial harassment.

question: Who did Jerry sell his team to?

answer: David Tepper

answer: He sold Panthers to David Tepper.

answer: David Tepper bought the Carolina Panthers from Jerry Richardson.

answer: David Tepper

question: How old is Jerry?

answer: 81

answer: 81 years old.

answer: 81

answer: 81 years old.

question: What surgery did Jerry have in February 2009?

answer: He had a heart transplant.

answer: A heart transplant.

answer: Jerry Richardson had a heart transplant in February 2009.

answer: A heart transplant

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The text is facts about Jerry Richardson.

text: It does not describe what those facts are

refinement: Jerry Richardson is set to address the NFL owners before they vote on the sale of his team to David Tepper. Richardson is currently embroiled in allegations of workplace misconduct, and the league is investigating the situation.

answer: Jerry Richardson is set to address the NFL owners before they vote on the sale of his team to David Tepper. Richardson is currently embroiled in allegations of workplace misconduct, and the league is investigating the situation.

answer: The article is about Jerry Richardson, the owner of the Carolina Panthers, who is expected to make an appearance at the meeting of the NFL owners.

text: It does not discuss the sexual harassment allegations.

refinement: The article is about Jerry Richardson, the owner of the Carolina Panthers, who is expected to make an appearance at the meeting of the NFL owners. Richardson has been accused of sexual and racial harassment, and he sold the team to Daniel Tepper.

answer: Jerry Richardson is expected to make an appearance today.

text: Does not give us info about him

refinement: Jerry Richardson is expected to make an appearance today. Richardson has been accused of sexual and racial harassment, and he sold the Carolina Panthers to Daniel Tepper.


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JONCA CREEK is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County in the U.S. state of Missouri.[1] It is a tributary to the River aux Vases.[2]

The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams at [3] at an elevation of approximately 750 feet.[4] The source area is one quarter mile east of Missouri Route 32 and the stream flows generally to the east. The stream flows past the north side of Hawn State Park and south of the community of Millers.[5] The stream confluence with the River aux Vases is at and elevation of 443 feet.[6]

Jonca Creek most likely has the name of a pioneer citizen.[7]

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[2] _Coffman, MO,_ 7.5 Minute Topographic Quadrangle, USGS, 1980

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[4] _Sprott, MO,_ 7.5 Minute Topographic Quadrangle, USGS, 1964 (1977 rev.)

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title: Jonca Creek

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where can you find Jonca Creek?

answer: In Ste. Genevieve County in the U.S. state of Missouri.

text: "JONCA CREEK is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County in the U.S. state of Missouri."

answer: Jonca Creek is a stream that originates near Missouri Route 32 and flows generally eastward. Its confluence with the River aux Vases is at 443 feet above sea level.

text: Confluence with the River aux Vases is irrelevant to the question.

refinement: Jonca Creek is a stream that originates near Missouri Route 32 and flows generally eastward.

text: The Missouri Route 32 is long, hence not very useful in locating a nearby stream. The answer should mention which county the stream is located in.

refinement: Jonca Creek is a stream that originates near Missouri Route 32 and flows generally eastward. It's located in Ste. Genevieve County.

text: Nearby Missouri Route 32 and flows east: "The source area is one quarter mile east of Missouri Route 32 and the stream flows generally to the east."

answer: Ste. Genevieve County, Missouri.

text: "JONCA CREEK is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County in the U.S. state of Missouri."

answer: In Ste. Genevieve County, Missouri.

text: "JONCA CREEK is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County in the U.S. state of Missouri."

answer: Jonca Creek flows east from between Hawn State Park and the community of Millers. It meets the River aux Vases at an elevation of 443 feet.

text: Meeting the River aux Vases is irrelevant to the question.

refinement: Jonca Creek flows east from between Hawn State Park and the community of Millers.

text: The given information isn't enough to give an idea of where the stream is. The answer should note the county it's in.

refinement: It's located in Ste. Genevieve County. Jonca Creek flows east from between Hawn State Park and the community of Millers.

text: Nearby Hawn State Park and Millers: "The stream flows past the north side of Hawn State Park and south of the community of Millers."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where does the stream begin?

answer: The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributaries approximately 750 feet east of Missouri Route 32.

text: The stream is at 750 feet elevation, not that distance from Missouri Route 32.

refinement: The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributaries elevated approximately 750 feet.

text: "The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams at [3] at an elevation of approximately 750 feet."

answer: The source begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams

text: There should be a terminating period.

refinement: The source begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams.

text: "The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams at [3] at an elevation of approximately 750 feet."

answer: The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams.

text: "The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams at [3] at an elevation of approximately 750 feet."

answer: It begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams at an elevation of approximately 750 feet east of Missouri.

text: The stream's source is one quarter mile east of Missouri Route 32, while the 750 feet is its elevation. The answer has these confused. It can simply remove the "east of Missouri" part.

refinement: It begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams at an elevation of approximately 750 feet.

text: "The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams at [3] at an elevation of approximately 750 feet."

answer: It begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams.

text: "The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams at [3] at an elevation of approximately 750 feet."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Which river does the creek confluence with?

answer: The River aux Vases.

text: "The stream confluence with the River aux Vases is at and elevation of 443 feet."

answer: The creek confluences with the River aux Vases.

text: "The stream confluence with the River aux Vases is at and elevation of 443 feet."

answer: It confluences with River Aux Vases.

text: "The stream confluence with the River aux Vases is at and elevation of 443 feet."

answer: The River aux Vases.

text: "The stream confluence with the River aux Vases is at and elevation of 443 feet."

answer: The creek confluences with the River aux Vases.

text: "The stream confluence with the River aux Vases is at and elevation of 443 feet."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What likely inspired the naming of Jonca Creek?

answer: Likely a pioneer citizen

text: "Jonca Creek most likely has the name of a pioneer citizen."

answer: The creek most likely has the name of a pioneer citizen.

text: "Jonca Creek most likely has the name of a pioneer citizen."

answer: The name is most likely inspired by the name of a pioneer citizen.

text: "Jonca Creek most likely has the name of a pioneer citizen."

answer: This information can't be found.

text: The answer is wrong since the article clearly states that "Jonca Creek most likely has the name of a pioneer citizen."

refinement: It's probably named after a pioneering citizen.

answer: The creek is most likely named for a pioneer citizen.

text: "Jonca Creek most likely has the name of a pioneer citizen."

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: Jonca Creek is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County, Missouri that begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams. The stream flows generally east, past Hawn State Park and Millers before converging with the River aux Vases. The creek's name is likely of pioneer origin.

text: The question desires five sentences. The answer can be expressed in five. It has all the information it can give, so the arrangement is purely aesthetic.

refinement: Jonca Creek is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County, Missouri. It begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams. The stream flows generally east. It flows past Hawn State Park and Millers before converging with the River aux Vases. The creek's name is likely of pioneer origin.

text: Location: "JONCA CREEK is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County in the U.S. state of Missouri."

text: Starting location: "The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams at [3] at an elevation of approximately 750 feet."

text: Flow direction: "the stream flows generally to the east"

text: Nearby landmarks: "The stream flows past the north side of Hawn State Park and south of the community of Millers."

text: Confluence: "The stream confluence with the River aux Vases is at and elevation of 443 feet."

text: Naming: "Jonca Creek most likely has the name of a pioneer citizen."

answer: Jonca Creek is a tributary to the River aux Vases in the U.S. state of Missouri. The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams at an elevation of approximately 750 feet. The source area is one quarter mile east of Missouri Route 32. The stream next flows around Hawn State Park and Millers. There is a good chance that Jonca Creek and the namesake of a pioneer citizen.

text: The final sentence lacks verbs.

refinement: Jonca Creek is a tributary to the River aux Vases in the U.S. state of Missouri. The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams at an elevation of approximately 750 feet. The source area is one quarter mile east of Missouri Route 32. The stream next flows around Hawn State Park and Millers. There is a good chance that Jonca Creek is named after a pioneer citizen.

text: Location and tributary: "JONCA CREEK is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County in the U.S. state of Missouri.[1] It is a tributary to the River aux Vases."

answer: The Jonca Creek is a river located in Ste. Genevieve County in Missouri. It is a tributary of The River aux Vases. The creek falls at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams. Its source is the East 1/4 mile from Missouri Route 32. It is named after a pioneer citizen.

text: The Jonca Creek is a stream, not a river.

refinement: The Jonca Creek is a stream located in Ste. Genevieve County in Missouri. It is a tributary of The River aux Vases. The creek falls at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams. Its source is the East 1/4 mile from Missouri Route 32. It is named after a pioneer citizen.

text: The creek begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams. The answer says it "falls," which is not corroborated by the article.

refinement: The Jonca Creek is a stream located in Ste. Genevieve County in Missouri. It is a tributary of The River aux Vases. The creek starts at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams. Its source is the East 1/4 mile from Missouri Route 32. It is named after a pioneer citizen.

text: The creek is potentially named after a pioneer citizen. The answer should note the lack of certainty.

refinement: The Jonca Creek is a stream located in Ste. Genevieve County in Missouri. It is a tributary of The River aux Vases. The creek starts at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams. Its source is the East 1/4 mile from Missouri Route 32. It is likely named after a pioneer citizen.

text: The sentence about the creek's source is a bit confusing.

refinement: The Jonca Creek is a stream located in Ste. Genevieve County in Missouri. It is a tributary of The River aux Vases. The creek starts at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams. Its source is 1/4 mile to the East from Missouri Route 32. It is likely named after a pioneer citizen.

text: Location and tributary: "JONCA CREEK is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County in the U.S. state of Missouri.[1] It is a tributary to the River aux Vases."

answer: Jonca Creek is a tributary stream to the River aux Vases that originates in the foothills near Route 32. The creek flows east before converging with the river near Millers. Jonca Creek likely takes its name from a pioneer citizen.

text: Apart from the tributary and naming information, the rest of the answer is wrong. It should be rewritten.

refinement: Jonca Creek is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County, Missouri. It begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams. The stream flows generally east. It flows past Hawn State Park and Millers before converging with the River aux Vases. The creek's name is likely of pioneer origin.

text: Naming: "Jonca Creek most likely has the name of a pioneer citizen."

text: Tributary: "It is a tributary to the River aux Vases."

answer: Jonca Creek is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County in Missouri, United States. The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary, east of Missouri. Jonca Creek confluences with River aux Vases and flows past the north side of Hawn State Park. The name Jonca Creek is most likely inspired by the name of a pioneer citizen.

text: The stream is not east of Missouri.

refinement: Jonca Creek is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County in Missouri, United States. The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary. Jonca Creek confluences with River aux Vases and flows past the north side of Hawn State Park. The name Jonca Creek is most likely inspired by the name of a pioneer citizen.

text: The question wants five sentences. All the necessary information is in the answer already, so the changes are purely aesthetic.

refinement: Jonca Creek is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County in Missouri, United States. The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary. Jonca Creek confluences with River aux Vases. It flows past the north side of Hawn State Park. The name Jonca Creek is most likely inspired by the name of a pioneer citizen.

text: Location and tributary: "JONCA CREEK is a stream in Ste. Genevieve County in the U.S. state of Missouri.[1] It is a tributary to the River aux Vases."

text: Stream source: "The stream begins at the junction of the North and South Fork tributary streams"

text: Confluence: "The stream confluence with the River aux Vases is at and elevation of 443 feet."

text: Flows past: "The stream flows past the north side of Hawn State Park and south of the community of Millers."

text: Naming: "Jonca Creek most likely has the name of a pioneer citizen."


text:
He had always looked at his hands as if they were sand in torrential rain. He felt the fragility of them weigh heavy upon his efforts, each attempt to grasp something substantial was counteracted by the necessity to shake, endlessly. It had begun on his seventh birthday and the doctors were reluctant to diagnose him with anything concrete, but even at that age Taylor knew he was unique, but not in the sense of an intricately designed snowflake, rather unique like a discarded necklace. Sure, there was sentiment and meaning at the very heart of him, but now, at the age of twelve, that had been substantially crushed by the sheer force behind the flaws on display.
His father was a mechanic, his steady hands and muscular frame were a source of pride that Taylor knew was unachievable. At night Taylor was unable to put himself to bed, the frustration of tucking himself under his duvet was too much of a hassle, it was task usually reserved for his father and his grease-ridden hands. He could no longer fall asleep without the smell of engine oil seeping through the sheets and leaving a temporary print on his chest, like the warm embrace of a hug he had not known for several years.
At night he would dream of planting his feet firmly into soil, like an abundant oak weathering a storm, no motions or quaking. As the storms would recede, the sun would clamber over the clouds and leave the world in a cigarette-stained hue, slowly an individual snowflake would fall upon Taylor’s face and melt gently into his flesh. Arms spread wide, Taylor could fly, he could match the birds for all their grace and chase the sunset. These dreams were swiftly becoming the only reason Taylor still found reason to live. At twelve he had already seen the splendour of grass on the other side, at twelve he was already awaiting death.
It was three days shy of his thirteenth birthday when he first began to find balance a troublesome conquest. He seemed inebriated without any of the mental occurrences, as if his legs had found a rundown bar whilst his brain slept. Taylor swelled with fear, he knew it wouldn’t be long before his whole body found the bar and dragged his brain along for the ride.
On his thirteenth birthday, Taylor received no cards or a cake, his father had taken the day off but spent the morning quietly staring at the unplugged TV. Taylor attempted to scream and shout at him, but the words wouldn’t come, there were no sounds; his mind had thrown out its dictionary and removed its microphone. Taylor attempted to grab his father but his body fought every urge to even walk towards him and collapsed under its own weight. He sat alone in the corner of the kitchen, back pressed against the washing machine. The spin cycle matched the beating of his heart.
Taylor’s father eventually stood, slowly walked towards him and grasped him into his arms, they no longer smelt soaked in oil, instead Taylor could smell the sea. Azure waves crashed within his head as his father pressed his hands to his ears, Taylor could hear the crabs fight, he could hear the cliff edges crumble, he could hear the sun pierce the ocean’s foam. He closed his eyes and drifted to sleep, there were no wings, storms or snowflakes this time, just Taylor alone in an empty room with no windows or doors, somebody had scrawled on the wall ‘Godzilla awaits outside’ in large blue ink.
Taylor awoke suddenly to the sound of crashing waves, yet his father was nowhere to be seen. He was on a beach, bucket and spade beside him, children all around building sandcastles. He looked behind him and noticed his father sat on a sandy dune, he called for Taylor to build. Taylor turned to the kid barely three meters from him, his hands were so steady, Taylor hands were a shipwreck compared to the other children’s calm seas.
He took great care and caution in filling his bucket, his hands spilled sand in various directions but Taylor cared little, he paid attention only to the incessant task of gently patting down each small amount that did make it into the bucket. The tide edged close, grabbing at sand with each furtive effort towards Taylor and the other children, some panicked and hastily filled their buckets, others carried on with little acknowledgment of the water.
When Taylor has filled his bucket, he attempted to lift it, but found it too heavy. His weak arms were like sugar in a hot tea, they barely moved before lactic acid tore his body apart, the strain too much. His father called for him to turn the bucket, to finish the job at hand. With great concentration, Taylor envisioned his feet as the roots of the great oak of his dreams, he had Godzilla’s strength and wings bloomed from his back. Taylor stood tall and lifted the bucket a few inches of the ground, with an enormous effort he turned it and placed it upon the sand, barely seconds after it had landed he lifted it again. His sandcastle stood proud.
That night the children sat with their parents and watched as nature took their sandcastles apart. Taylor’s father told him how the amount remaining directly corresponded with the level of happiness they would have as an adult. The pharmaceutical companies pitched stalls at the beaches exit selling various anti-depressants, as their child’s sandcastle fell the parents would rush to the stalls with huge sums of money, to stock up for the troubles ahead.
“Your mother’s castle fell instantly as a child,” Taylor’s father told him, “she hadn’t packed the sand and the wind took it before night had even begun. Mine lasted a few hours, and never completely fell, but enough was destroyed.”
Taylor’s castle never fell, it remained intact. By fourteen he regained his balance, by fifteen his muscles were almost at the same level as his classmates, by sixteen he was pretty much cured.
He never stopped shaking.

title: [RF] Oak

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe Taylor's condition, as stated in the story.

answer: Taylor had a condition since he was a kid. Taylor would always shake and this proved to be a point of contention for him as his father was a mechanic who prided himself about having steady hands. Sometimes, Taylor wasn't able to put himself into bed. At thirteen, his symptoms heightened and he felt as though he had been inebriated without any of the mental occurrences. These symptoms were extremely frustrating to him and as he grew older, some symptoms were in control but he never stopped shaking.

text: The answer's claim that Taylor's shaking was a contentious issue between him and his father isn't corroborated by the story.

refinement: Taylor had a condition since he was a kid. Taylor would always shake in contrast to his father, who was a mechanic with steady hands. Sometimes, Taylor wasn't able to put himself into bed. At thirteen, his symptoms heightened and he felt as though he had been inebriated without any of the mental occurrences. These symptoms were extremely frustrating to him and as he grew older, some symptoms were in control but he never stopped shaking.

text: The answer should give more details about the symptoms that started when Taylor turned thirteen.

refinement: Taylor had a condition since he was a kid. Taylor would always shake in contrast to his father, who was a mechanic with steady hands. Sometimes, Taylor wasn't able to put himself into bed. At thirteen, his symptoms heightened and he felt as though he had been inebriated without any of the mental occurrences. His balance was off, and his muscles barely worked. These symptoms were extremely frustrating to him and as he grew older, some symptoms were in control but he never stopped shaking.

text: The answer conveys Taylor's betterment with too little emphasis, which is misleading.

refinement: Taylor had a condition since he was a kid. Taylor would always shake in contrast to his father, who was a mechanic with steady hands. Sometimes, Taylor wasn't able to put himself into bed. At thirteen, his symptoms heightened and he felt as though he had been inebriated without any of the mental occurrences. His balance was off, and his muscles barely worked. These symptoms were extremely frustrating to him. As he grew older, he regained his balance, and his muscles caught up to his peers. He was almost cured, but he never stopped shaking.

answer: He had a sensation described as "digging and spiking into the sides of his arms". He also had a hard time lifting heavy weights due to muscular pain. Occasionally he caught sight of a tornado, or imagined himself as a ballerina because of his unnatural feeling in his muscles. His nerves were likely overreacting to things which in average person wouldn't have such an inclination.

text: Almost the entire answer is either irrelevant or made up. It should be rewritten from scratch.

refinement: Taylor's hands shook all the time, making even daily tasks impossible. His condition worsened when he was around thirteen years old. He lost his balance, and his muscles were extremely weak. However, he regained his balance at fourteen, his muscles at fifteen. He was almost cured at sixteen but never stopped shaking.

answer: Taylor has a condition that compromises his fine motor skills and coordination. He experiences tremors in his hands that make certain tasks difficult, such as balancing an object or lifting objects. However, through rigorous training and perseverance he ultimately regains control of his abilities.

text: While Taylor regains his abilities, the story doesn't specify it was because of training.

refinement: Taylor has a condition that compromises his fine motor skills and coordination. He experiences tremors in his hands that make certain tasks difficult, such as balancing an object or lifting objects. However, he ultimately regains control of his abilities.

text: The answer should mention that while Taylor was almost cured, he didn't stop shaking.

refinement: Taylor has a condition that compromises his fine motor skills and coordination. He experiences tremors in his hands that make certain tasks difficult, such as balancing an object or lifting objects. However, he ultimately regains control of his abilities, but his shaking never stops.

answer: Taylor has something with an unknown name which makes his hands shake uncontrollably no matter what he does. This has made developing balance and strength difficult for him, despite having some limited success in recent years. Taylor remains shaken no matter what he does.

text: "Taylor has something with an unknown name which makes his hands shake uncontrollably no matter what he does." Since the story doesn't mention a name for Taylor's condition, it's ok to just state he has one. The mention of an unknown name is confusing.

refinement: Taylor's condition makes his hands shake uncontrollably no matter what he does. This has made developing balance and strength difficult for him, despite having some limited success in recent years. Taylor remains shaken no matter what he does.

text: "This has made developing balance and strength difficult for him, despite having some limited success in recent years." This sentence is misleading. Taylor almost fully recovers, and it's not due to anything specific. The story doesn't mention a reason.

refinement: Taylor's condition makes his hands shake uncontrollably no matter what he does. This has made developing balance and strength difficult for him. However, Taylor mostly recovers by the time he's sixteen. Taylor remains shaken no matter what he does.

text: "Taylor remains shaken no matter what he does." This is a confusing way to say Taylor's hands never stop shaking.

refinement: Taylor's condition makes his hands shake uncontrollably no matter what he does. This has made developing balance and strength difficult for him. However, Taylor mostly recovers by the time he's sixteen. Taylor's hands never stop shaking, though.

answer: Taylor has a disorder that prohibits the use of his muscles. This disorder does not have a cure and persists for nearly a decade of Taylor's life.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe what kept Taylor wanting to stay alive.

answer: Taylor wanted to stay alive because he dreamed of being strong and confident, able to survive any storms or difficulties life tried to throw at him. He saw himself as the steady oak in a world where everyone around him seemed to fall apart easily. Despite the difficult circumstances of his life, he still had hope and vision for his future. He stayed alive out of determination and hope that things would get better, even if they never did.

text: Almost the entire answer is misleading or made up. It should be re-written.

refinement: Taylor dreamed of being stable and flying like birds. He'd dream of himself as an oak tree, his feet firmly in the ground. His dreams were the only reason he wanted to continue living.

answer: Taylor's dreams kept him feeling alive and wanting to stay alive.

text: The answer should give more details about the content of Taylor's dreams.

refinement: Taylor's dreams kept him feeling alive and wanting to stay alive. Taylor dreamed of being stable and flying like birds. He'd dream of himself as an oak tree, his feet firmly in the ground.

answer: Taylor had dreams where he felt he could fly and those gave him the will to want to stay alive.

text: The answer should give more details about the content of Taylor's dreams.

refinement: Taylor had dreams where he felt he could fly or was stable like an oak tree, and those gave him the will to want to stay alive.

answer: The one thing that kept Taylor alive was his dreams. He would dream of planting his feet firmly into soil, like an abundant oak weathering a storm, with no motions or quaking. As the storm finished and the sun shined, a snowflake would fall on Taylor's face and melt into his flesh. Then Tyler would spread his arms and he could fly like birds did.

answer: Taylor wanted to stay alive because he loved dreaming of things he could never achieve in reality. The most important thing in Taylor's life was his imagination and dreams. Without these, there would be nothing to make him want to live. He clung to life because he believed that despite being flawed, his mind was still invaluable.

text: The answer makes up details in saying Taylor thought his mind was invaluable.

refinement: Taylor wanted to stay alive because he loved dreaming of things he could never achieve in reality. The most important thing in Taylor's life was his imagination and dreams. Without these, there would be nothing to make him want to live.

text: The answer repeats Taylor's dreams being his reason to live. It's redundant, and these should be mentioned only once.

refinement: Taylor wanted to stay alive because he loved dreaming of things he could never achieve in reality.

text: The answer should give more details about the content of Taylor's dreams.

refinement: Taylor wanted to stay alive because he loved dreaming of things he could never achieve in reality. He dreamed of being stable like an oak tree or flying like birds, chasing the sunset.


text:
The September After
Or,
Starting Point

	I can hear Eliza crying again. She’s started to hide it from us – especially after we tried to get her to see a counselor – but I can still tell from the way her bed rocks in the room above us, and the quiet sniffles echo down the stairs. She’s been this way for a few weeks now, ever since the 28th of August. That is, ever since Jacob died.

	I still remember how she took the news. The doctors came out of the operating room and we were all so hopeful, after all 80% sounds like such a good chance when they tell you it’s potentially life-saving. What you never think of is the 20%, the chance that things don’t go so well and that your eight-year old son will be rolled out on a gurney, the doctor softly whispering the declaration of death to the orderly behind you as you stare at his face. None of us were expecting that 20%, Eliza the least since she was only eleven. I still remember her screaming as she ripped herself from my arm and went to grab Jacob’s hand, lifting the pale little thing up to her face and crying. We were both in shock – her mother and I, that is – as we watched our little girl, raised seeing House and his crew always succeeding, always curing forever the patient, cry into her brother’s lukewarm palm. We stood there for at least ten minutes before I made a move towards her, putting my hand on her shoulder and wiping the smooth scalp of my son. It had been such a hard two years on him, and it showed. He was as thin as a bone, and barely had any energy thanks to the therapy. I can only remember him smiling a handful of times, our little baby boy becoming more and more melancholy until the chemicals made him unable to even be depressed. On the cart, though, he was smiling. I guess he was finally at peace.

	None of us could keep from crying when we returned home. Eliza took a week off school, my boss gave me a week off from work when he heard the news. My wife had to return to her job after three days. She still wasn’t ready, not at all, but she kept it together at her factory and only fell apart when she came back home, sometimes staying up all hours of the night crying. She was fired four days later, falling asleep on her machine. We tried to not let Eliza find out, but we knew that she understood. I found her passed out over a drawing of her mother’s boss being stabbed by the Devil. I knew that was a bad sign, but honestly, I just put it away and laughed.

	Dinners were silent for some time, with Eliza pushing food around her plate with a fork, rolling beans back and forth with a fork while her mother and I attempted conversation. We stopped paying attention to what we made and what we ate, switching meals from cans with the homemade dinners we had been carefully making to exact specifications. Instead of the lively debate we had had in the past our meals were marked by the low-hanging depression and spirits of the topics we skirted around during the rare occasions we did speak.

	Eliza’s birthday was the Tuesday after her mother had been let go, the event normally marked by her jubilation but instead was a quiet, somber affair. We had balloons and cake, the usual decorations looked over and ignored by our daughter quickly before she went back to her room. It was about then that we tried to get her help; of course we weren’t expecting her to be over the death of her brother, but she showed no signs of rehabilitation either. It had been two weeks, and while her mother and I had begun to recover, she still cried every time she saw someone who reminded her of her brother, be it another child with a similar appearance or her art teacher who was notably bald, who’s class she had to be moved from because of her inability to control herself when she saw him. She refused to speak with any of the therapists we brought her to, curling up with her knees against her face when asked any question. No one could help us since she couldn’t speak to them, so we stopped sending her to doctors after a hard week.

	She has started to recover now, I can see. She’s able, at least, to control herself for long enough so that she can hide her crying from us. She can force a smile when she needs to, and can make herself speak to us while we eat, over our recent attempts at home-cooking again. But then she still cries in her room daily, and whenever someone hears this they ask me how I can think that she’s getting any better. I always tell them that I know she’s not getting over her brother. I know she’s depressed and I know she needs help. However, I know that she’s beginning to open up to us helping her again. As they say, you have to start somewhere.

title: The September After

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the ways in which the different family members deal with the death of the narrator's son.

answer: Eliza, the narrator's daughter, falls apart when she hears of the death of her brother. She skipped school for a week, and when she recovered or starts to get respite from the grief, all it takes is a reminder of her brother for her to fall apart all over again. She refused to see therapists or see relatives or friends. She turns to her mother for support, but her mother is also demoralized by her sudden joblessness over Eliza's behaviour in the wake of the death. Her sensitivity and inability to hide the suffering from the outside world has contributed to the first dismissal of her mother's job, the repercussion of which becomes apparent over time. The narrator, who is more pragmatic than the other two, feels that his wife and daughter cannot exist like this, and it's not healthy. He calls in a family counselor, which Eliza initially refuses to speak to and eventually curbs her lessons and therapy for the sake of getting back to school.

text: There is no evidence that Eliza's grief contributed in anyway to her mother's dismissal.

refinement: Eliza, the narrator's daughter, falls apart when she hears of the death of her brother. She skipped school for a week, and when she recovered or starts to get respite from the grief, all it takes is a reminder of her brother for her to fall apart all over again. She refused to see therapists or see relatives or friends. She turns to her mother for support, but her mother is also demoralized by her sudden joblessness over Eliza's behaviour in the wake of the death. The narrator, who is more pragmatic than the other two, feels that his wife and daughter cannot exist like this, and it's not healthy. He calls in a family counselor, which Eliza initially refuses to speak to and eventually curbs her lessons and therapy for the sake of getting back to school.

text: Poorly constructed sentence

refinement: Eliza, the narrator's daughter, falls apart when she hears of the death of her brother. She skipped school for a week, and when she recovered or starts to get respite from the grief, all it takes is a reminder of her brother for her to fall apart all over again. She refused to see therapists or see relatives or friends. She turns to her mother for support, but her mother is also demoralized by her sudden joblessness over Eliza's behaviour in the wake of the death. The narrator, who is more pragmatic than the other two, feels that his wife and daughter cannot exist like this, and it's not healthy. He calls in a family counselor, with whom Eliza initially refuses to speak.

answer: Eliza, the narrator's daughter, falls apart when she hears of the death of her brother. She skips school for a week, and when she recovers or starts to get respite from the grief, all it takes is a reminder of her brother for her to fall apart all over again. She refuses to see therapists or even see relatives or friends. She turns to her mother for support, but her mother is also demoralized by her sudden joblessness over Eliza's behaviour in the wake of the death. Her sensitivity and inability to hide the suffering from the outside world has contributed to the first dismissal of her mother's job, the repercussion of which becomes apparent over time. The narrator, who is more pragmatic than the other two, feels that his wife and daughter cannot exist like this, and it's not healthy. He calls in a family counselor, which Eliza initially refuses to speak to and eventually curbs her lessons and therapy for the sake of getting back to school.

answer:
The narrator and his wife are both in shock when they learn that Jacob has died. They both cry, and his wife cries every night for a week. His wife is fired from her job four days later, and the narrator finds her passed out over a drawing of her boss being stabbed by the Devil.

The narrator's daughter, Eliza, is in shock as well. She cries every time she sees someone who reminds her of Jacob. She refuses to speak with any of the therapists they bring her to.

text: Misleading. It was Eliza who was slumped over the drawing of the devil and the boss

refinement:
The narrator and his wife are both in shock when they learn that Jacob has died. They both cry, and his wife cries every night for a week. His wife is fired from her job four days later. They try to keep it from Eliza but the narrator finds Eliza passed out over a drawing of her mother's boss being stabbed by the Devil.

The narrator's daughter, Eliza, is in shock as well. She cries every time she sees someone who reminds her of Jacob. She refuses to speak with any of the therapists they bring her to.

answer: The narrator's wife is unable to return to work after the death of her son and is fired after falling asleep on the job. The narrator's daughter also falls apart and is unable to speak with any of the therapists they bring her to.

text: Clumsy sentence

refinement: The narrator's wife is unable to return to work after the death of her son and is fired after falling asleep on the job. The narrator's daughter also falls apart and refuses to speak with any of the therapists.

text: The narrator's wife returns after three days

refinement: The narrator's wife was forced to return to work after three days and is fired after falling asleep on the job. The narrator's daughter also falls apart and refuses to speak with any of the therapists.

answer: Eliza, who is eleven at the time of the emotional event, is initially highly disturbed by the emotional event. She rips herself away from her father's arm and grabs Jacob's hand from the hospital bed, almost as if to try to stop his departure. She cries in his hand and her mother, the narrator's wife, can't seem to extricate themselves from shock. After the initial shock, Eliza's mother faced the challenge of working again, having been dismissed for falling asleep on the job and coming home too depressed. Eliza's father faced the challenge of trying to convince Eliza to seek help and to also show his wife that she can do it. He did some time off work and his wife has been mad at him ever since.

text: Incorrect use of a pronoun

refinement: Eliza, who is eleven at the time of the emotional event, is initially highly disturbed by the emotional event. She rips herself away from her father's arm and grabs Jacob's hand from the hospital bed, almost as if to try to stop his departure. She cries in his hand and her mother, the narrator's wife, can't seem to extricate herself from shock. After the initial shock, Eliza's mother faced the challenge of working again, having been dismissed for falling asleep on the job and coming home too depressed. Eliza's father faced the challenge of trying to convince Eliza to seek help and to also show his wife that she can do it. He did some time off work and his wife has been mad at him ever since.

text: Mixed tenses and incoherent sentence

refinement: Eliza, who is eleven at the time of the emotional event, is initially highly disturbed by the emotional event. She rips herself away from her father's arm and grabs Jacob's hand from the hospital bed, almost as if to try to stop his departure. She cries in his hand and her mother, the narrator's wife, can't seem to extricate herself from shock. After the initial shock, Eliza's mother faces the challenge of working again. She is subsequently dismissed for falling asleep on the job. Eliza's father faced the challenge of trying to convince Eliza to seek help and to also show his wife that she can do it. He did some time off work and his wife has been mad at him ever since.

text: Mixed tenses

refinement: Eliza, who is eleven at the time of the emotional event, is initially highly disturbed by the emotional event. She rips herself away from her father's arm and grabs Jacob's hand from the hospital bed, almost as if to try to stop his departure. She cries in his hand and her mother, the narrator's wife, can't seem to extricate herself from shock. After the initial shock, Eliza's mother faces the challenge of working again. She is subsequently dismissed for falling asleep on the job. Eliza's father faces the challenge of trying to convince Eliza to seek help and to also show his wife that she can do it. He did some time off work and his wife has been mad at him ever since.

text: Nonsensical sentence

refinement: Eliza, who is eleven at the time of the emotional event, is initially highly disturbed by the emotional event. She rips herself away from her father's arm and grabs Jacob's hand from the hospital bed, almost as if to try to stop his departure. She cries in his hand and her mother, the narrator's wife, can't seem to extricate herself from shock. After the initial shock, Eliza's mother faces the challenge of working again. She is subsequently dismissed for falling asleep on the job. Eliza's father faces the challenge of trying to convince Eliza to seek help and to also show his wife that she can do it.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Jacob's battle with illness.

answer: Jacob was diagnosed with cancer and had to undergo chemotherapy. He was in and out of the hospital for the past two years. The cancer was in remission but he still wasn't able to recover from the treatment.

text: There is no evidence that his cancer is in remission

refinement: Jacob was diagnosed with cancer and had to undergo chemotherapy. He was in and out of the hospital for the past two years. He died after undergoing an operation despite doctors giving him an 80% chance of surviving.

answer: He was suffering from treatment-resistant cancer of the brainstem.

text: The piece does not specify which cancer he died of.

refinement: Jacob had cancer and was undergoing chemo. He was very weak and had lost a lot of weight. He was not able to do much and spent most of his time in bed. He had a hard time getting around. He was also very sad and depressed.

answer: Jacob had cancer and was undergoing chemo. He was very weak and had lost a lot of weight. He was not able to do much and spent most of his time in bed. He had a hard time getting around. He was also very sad and depressed.

answer: Jacob had cancer and was undergoing chemo therapy while he was alive. The cancer therapy had taken a great toll on his physical appearance. It had been a hard two years on him. Jacob's case turned out to be terminal, and he finally died after a successful operation, although the doctors had given him a 80% chance of making it.

text: A successful operation doesn't kill you

refinement: Jacob had cancer and was undergoing chemotherapy while he was alive. The cancer therapy had taken a great toll on his physical appearance. It had been a hard two years on him. Jacob's case turned out to be terminal, and he finally died after an unsuccessful operation, although the doctors had given him a 80% chance of making it.

answer: Jacob had cancer and was undergoing chemo therapy while he was alive. The cancer therapy had taken a great toll on his physical appearance, which affected his mood. It had been a hard two years on him. Jacob's case turned out to be terminal, and he finally died after a successful operation, although the doctors had given him a 80% chance of making it.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does this story say about the best treatment for cancer?

answer: The best cancer treatment is palliative care.

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: The story doesn't say anything about the best treatment for cancer.

answer: There is no mention of the best treatment for cancer, but the narrator's son is diagnosed with cancer.

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the roles of the characters who aren't related to the narrator.

answer: The doctors operate on Jacob, but their attempt to save him doesn't go well. Eliza's mother and father seem to be on the same page with not wanting to take in a counselor. Eliza's mother also eventually returns to work, but she becomes fired because of her mistreatment of her body in the face of her grief. Eliza's art teacher is bald and teaches her how to draw. Eliza is afraid to talk with therapists.

text: This fails to answer the question

refinement: The doctors operate on Jacob, but their attempt to save him doesn't go well.

answer: The narrator's boss gives him time off work after he hears about Jacob's death. The narrator's wife is fired from her job four days after Jacob's death. She was fired because she fell asleep on her machine while working. The narrator's daughter Eliza is upset and depressed after Jacob's death. The narrator's daughter refuses to speak to therapists.

text: This doesn't answer the question because Eliza is related to the narrator

refinement: The narrator's boss gives him time off work after he hears about Jacob's death. The narrator's wife is fired from her job four days after Jacob's death. She was fired because she fell asleep on her machine while working.

text: This answer fails to mention the doctors

refinement: The narrator's boss gives him time off work after he hears about Jacob's death. The narrator's wife is fired from her job four days after Jacob's death. She was fired because she fell asleep on her machine while working. The doctors had to tell the family that their son and brother were dead.

answer:
The narrator's wife is named Deborah, although it's implied he only knows her by her first name. She lost her factory job and has been crying every time she comes home from work, since she misses her son greatly .

The narrator, who is unnamed, has an eleven-year-old daughter, Eliza. She took a week off school after her eight-year-old brother, Jacob, died and is struggling to cope and communicate to their or their help about her tribulations..

answer: The doctors who operated on Jacob are discussed. The narrator's boss gives him time off work. The narrator's wife is fired from her job. The narrator's daughter Eliza is a little girl who is upset about her brother's death.

text: Eliza is related to the narrator

refinement: The doctors who operated on Jacob are discussed. The narrator's boss gives him time off work. The narrator's wife is fired from her job.

answer:
The narrator's wife is named Elaine, although it's implied he only knows her by her first name. She lost her factory job and has been crying every time she comes home from work, since she misses her son greatly .

The narrator, who is unnamed, has an eleven-year-old daughter, Eliza. She took a week off school after her eight-year-old brother, Jacob, died and is struggling to cope and communicate to their or their help about her tribulations.

answer: The doctors operate on Jacob but their attempt to save him doesn't go well. Eliza's mother and father seem to be on the same page with not wanting to take in a counselor. Eliza's mother also eventually returns to work but is fired because of her mistreatment of her body in the face of her grief. Eliza's art teacher is bald and teaches her how to draw.  Eliza is afraid to talk with therapists.

answer: The narrator's boss gives him time off work after he hears about Jacob's death. The narrator's wife is fired from her job four days after Jacob's death. She was fired because she fell asleep on her machine while working. Eliza is upset and depressed after Jacob's death. Eliza refuses to speak to therapists.


text:
This is a story I just wrote, that isn't finished yet. I've been feeling down lately and It's helped to write stuff down. It's kind of a fictionalized reflection of myself. Please don't bash too hard on my writing or grammer, this is the first thing I've written for a long time.

Alexa

Her sparklingly beautiful hazel eyes were locked to his. Dark auburn hair and thick black rimmed glasses covered part of her small freck covered face. A slight smile rose her cheeks. He smiled back, causing his heart rate rise exponentially.  A feeling manifested in the pit of his stomach which he had never felt before. David would usually be trying to cope with his inconfidence by looking away, but for some reason this time was different, he didn’t care. The ice cream that she had scooped was starting drip onto her red blouse. As soon as she realized it was dripping all over her shirt, a middle aged mother with her two children started blabbering to her about not listening. Seven seconds was how long it lasted, and that was the end of it. She looked away, cleaned off the melting ice cream and attended to the demandingly ungrateful customers. The moment that David may never receive ever again had passed, forever. Seven seconds was how long it lasted, it was pure mental ecstasy. David craved these moments, but he thought they can’t happen in real life. He was probably the shyest person he knew, mostly because he doesn’t know that many people. In Fact, he only has one real friend, who only communicates on his terms with an outdated instant message service. David did not introduce himself to this beautiful redhead, instead he looked away awkwardly, got up and left. While walking to his appartment in a terrible neighborhood in Seattle, David mentally tortured himself for making this decision, because he knew that he would never see her ever again. David never speaks to anyone without them initiating first, it is a curse deep inside his being that he wish could just tear up into tiny pieces and burn them. Still, the image of her sparkly dark red hair was burned to his eyeballs, and it made him think about his choices and how he could have acted differently.

Her imperfections were his favourite part about her. Her freckles were many and her small breasts were stunning in her red top. She was 11 out of 10. David told himself he “would do anything to just say, hello.”, but that wasn’t true and he knew it. He just didn’t know how to deal with the situation. David locked his apartment door, made himself a microwave burrito and went on to his laptop. This is the place where you can guarantee he’ll be for most days and nights. Reddit, netflix and 4chan were the usual. He didn’t use facebook much, since he didn’t have any friends. 2am approached and David told himself to go to sleep. So David did his nightly routine that consists of brushing teeth and and masturbating to clothed pictures of cute normal girls, since he wasn’t fond of big breasted asian hardcore porn. He wasn’t sure if he was being creepy or appreciating reality. After laying back and thinking in his pitch dark room, he couldn’t stop thinking about this girl. He didn’t even know her name, he just knew her face and in this moment, his dream of being an computer programming superstar looked so distant, he had come to an painful realization, his life might not turn out how he planned.

David was 20 years old, mildly overweight but had a decent face, at least he thought so. His voice was very deep and monotone and he always wore dark blue jeans and some kind of geeky t-shirt. He starred at her, taking in her beauty. He couldn't get passed how beautiful her hair was, and that he was actually in the same room as her. The sunset shining from the window behind her blinded David's view, but it made the moment more exciting. She started laughing and looking down and kind of embarassed. The light shining from her eyes was more intense than anything he had ever encountered. It was the cutest and sexiest thing David had ever whitnessed. Then her smile faded and the sunlight shining through the large window began to engulph her. Whiteness surrounded her and David's eyes began to ache. "Are you okay?" David heard a girl's voice say. Then a loud alarm which sounded as if it were a firetruck screeched into David's ears. David awoke, his eyes clouded and his underware was surprisingly dry. David smacked the alarm clock which read 11:14am. He stayed in bed for a few minutes regaining his conciousness and thinking about her, and his life. He struggles with the things that most people might say are no struggle at all, but dispite all of that, David said to himself "Today is the day."

title: Alexa

question: Where did David meet this girl?

answer: David has yet to meet the girl, but he sees her at what seems to be an ice cream parlor.

answer: David met the girl in a store or cafe.

text: It is incorrectly stated that David meets the girl at a store.

refinement: David met the girl at an ice cream parlor.

answer: He met her at the ice cream shop.

answer: David met this girl at a grocery store.

text: It is incorrectly stated that David meets the girl at a grocery store.

refinement: David met this girl at an ice cream parlor.

question: Is David a college student?

answer: It is not stated.

answer: Yes

text: There is no evidence that David is a college student.

answer: That information can't be found.

answer: Based on the passage, it is unclear whether or not David is a college student. However, it seems as though he is not attending college, as he spends most of his time on his laptop and does not have any friends.

question: Does David have a plan to talk to this girl?

text: Missing answer.

answer: David doesn't seem to have a plan.

answer: He has no plan.

answer: Based on the passage, it seems that David does not have a plan to talk to the girl. He seems to be struggling with his shyness and is unsure of how to act around her.

question: What is the main point of the story?

answer: David is a shy guy who has a crush on a girl he sees at work.

text: It is incorrectly stated that David sees the girl at work.

refinement: David is a shy guy who has a crush on a girl he sees at an ice cream store.

answer: David develops a crush on a girl and wants to talk to her.

text: It is omitted that David to too shy to speak to her.

refinement: David develops a crush on a girl and wants to talk to her but he is too shy.

answer: The main point of the story is that David is in love with a girl he saw at the ice cream store.

text: It is omitted that he wants to talk to her but is too shy to do so.

refinement: The main point of the story is that David is in love with a girl he saw at the ice cream store. He wants to talk to her but is too shy to make a move.

answer: The main point of the story is that the protagonist is infatuated with a girl he saw briefly, but is too shy to act on it. He struggles with his shyness and low self-esteem, but decides to take action on his feelings.

text: "He struggles with the things that most people might say are no struggle at all, but dispite all of that, David said to himself Today is the day." This is evidence that David tries to take action on his feelings.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: David is a shy 20 year old man who spends time on the computer and only has one friend. He develops a fascination with a beautiful girl he sees working at an ice cream parlor, but he's too shy to introduce himself. He continues to think and dream about her.

text: "Reddit, netflix and 4chan were the usual." This is evidence that David spent most of his time on the computer.

answer: This story is about a shy young man who falls in love with a beautiful girl he sees briefly, but never speaks to. He spends his days fantasizing about her, but eventually decides to take action and make a move. However, when he finally gets the chance, she is gone.

text: There is no evidence that when he makes the move, she is gone.

refinement: This story is about a shy young man who falls in love with a beautiful girl he sees briefly, but never speaks to. He spends his days fantasizing about her, but eventually decides to take action and make a move.

answer: David is a shy 20-year-old man who works at an ice cream shop. He has a crush on a girl he sees there, but he is too shy to talk to her. He masturbates to pictures of normal girls instead.

text: It is wrongly stated that David is the one working at the ice cream shop.

refinement: David is a shy 20-year-old man who has a crush on a girl who works at an ice cream shop. But he is too shy to talk to her. He masturbates to pictures of normal girls instead.

text: It is omitted that one day he wakes up from dreaming about her decides that today is the day he speaks to her.

refinement: David is a shy 20-year-old man who has a crush on a girl who works at an ice cream shop. But he is too shy to talk to her. He masturbates to pictures of normal girls instead. One day, he wakes up from dreaming about her and decides that he will talk to her today.

answer: David is a shy 20 year old who has a crush on a girl he sees at the ice cream shop. He decides to take a chance and talk to her, but she is busy with customers and he leaves. He spends the rest of the day thinking about her and decides to try again the next day.

text: It is omitted that he couldn't talk to her because he was really shy.

refinement: David is a shy 20 year old who has a crush on a girl he sees at the ice cream shop. He decides to take a chance and talk to her, but he is too shy and she is busy with customers. He spends the rest of the day thinking about her and decides to try again the next day.


text:
LYUDMYLA LEONTIIVNA DENISOVA[1] (; ) (born July 6, 1960 in Arkhangelsk, Russian SFSR) is a Ukrainian politician and former Minister of Labor and Social Policy who on 15 March 2018 was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.[2][3]

Biography

Raised by her mother Nina Ivanovna Ankudinova (born 1934) in Arkhangelsk Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School (1978), the Leningrad State University (1989) and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law (1995).[4]

Professional career

Denisova was a teacher at a preschool in the Russian city of Arkhangelsk (school №78, 1979–80).[5] For the next nine years Denisova held different posts in the Arkhangelsk provincial law court.[6] In 1989, she moved to Ukraine and became the legal adviser of the Crimean Provincial Committee of Ukraine (1990–91).[7] From 1991 she worked in the Republic of Crimea's Administration of the pension fund until 1998.[8]

Political career

In 1998 Denisova became the Minister of Economy and Finances in the Crimean government.[9] In Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea, she served as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department. Denisova was named Politician of the Year in 2001. In 2000 Denisova was detained for 24 hours and charged with power abuse.[10] Denisova has stated she was persecuted for refusing to sign a budget document.[11] This criminal case was soon closed.[12]

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina (Yulia Tymoshenko Bloc) since 2005.[13] During the 2006 and 2007 parliamentary elections, she was elected as a deputy to the Verkhovna Rada (Ukrainian parliament).

Minister

On December 18, 2007, Yulia Tymoshenko, with a margin of two votes, was elected Prime Minister.[14] and the second Tymoshenko Government was formed between the Yulia Tymoshenko Bloc and Our Ukraine–People's Self-Defense Bloc in which Denisova was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy.

In October 2009 Denisova was ranked 15th in a top 100 of “most influential women in Ukraine” compiled by experts for the Ukrainian magazine Focus (six places lower than non-minister and fellow Batkivshchina member Natalia Korolevska).[15]

2010 Crimean parliamentary election

Denisova headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina during the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election.[16] Batkivshchina did not win seats in the Supreme Council of Crimea.[17]

2012 Ukrainian parliamentary election

Denisova was placed at number 38 on the electoral list of Batkivshchina during the 2012 Ukrainian parliamentary election.[18] She was re-elected into parliament.[19]

2nd minister post

On 27 February 2014 Denisova became Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government.[20]

In September 2014 Denisova became a founding member of her new party People's Front.[21]

2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election

In the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election Denisova was re-elected into parliament placed 15th on the electoral list of People's Front.[22][23][24]

On 15 March 2018 the Ukrainian parliament elected Denisova Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.[25]

[1]  Short bio, LIGA

[2] https://www.pravda.com.ua/news/2018/03/15/7174734/

[3] Maidan nominates Yatseniuk for prime minister, Interfax-Ukraine (26 February 2014)
Ukrainian parliament endorses new cabinet, Interfax-Ukraine (27 February 2014)

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[9] Новый состав Кабмина принят единогласно , news.mediaport.ua

[10] Is She Next?, Kyiv Post (September 3, 2010)

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[15]  Рейтинг Фокуса: 100 самых влиятельных женщин и 100 деталей о них , Focus

[16] Liudmyla Denisova heads electoral list of Crimean branch of Batkivschyna Party, Kyiv Post (September 30, 2010)

[17]  Results of the elections, preliminary data, on interactive maps by Ukrayinska Pravda (November 8, 2010)

[18] They Call Themselves the Opposition, The Ukrainian Week (31 August 2012)

[19]  Список депутатів нової Верховної Ради, Ukrayinska Pravda (11 November 2012)

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[21] Yatseniuk elected head of political council of People's Front Party , Demotix (9 September 2014)

[22] Poroshenko Bloc to have greatest number of seats in parliament , Ukrinform (8 November 2014)
People's Front 0.33% ahead of Poroshenko Bloc with all ballots counted in Ukraine elections - CEC , Interfax-Ukraine (8 November 2014)
Poroshenko Bloc to get 132 seats in parliament - CEC, Interfax-Ukraine (8 November 2014)

[23]  Full electoral list of “Fatherland” , TVi (15 September 2014)

[24]  Electoral list of People's Front, Ukrayinska Pravda (20 September 2014)

[25]

title: Lyudmyla Denisova

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Denisova's education?

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School, the Leningrad State University, and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School in 1978, then the Leningrad State University in 1989, and finally the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law in 1995.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School. She completed her state certification at the Leningrad State University. She later completed her license at the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School and the Leningrad State University.

text: The response is missing one educational institution.

refinement: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School, the Leningrad State University, and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School (1978), the Leningrad State University (1989) and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law (1995).

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Denisova's political career?

answer: Denisova has had a long political career, beginning as a teacher and moving on to various post within the Crimean provincial law courts and the Crimean government. In 2009 she was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy under Yulia Tymoshenko's second government and in 2014 she was re-elected to parliament for the second time. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

text: Denisova was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy in 2014, not 2009.

refinement: Denisova has had a long political career, beginning as a teacher and moving on to various post within the Crimean provincial law courts and the Crimean government. In 2014 she was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy under Yulia Tymoshenko's second government and in 2014 she was re-elected to parliament for the second time. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

answer: Denisova has had a political career primarily in Crimea, serving as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance, and head of Treasury Department before becoming Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government in 2014. She was elected into parliament in both the 2006 and 2012 Ukrainian parliamentary elections, placed 15th on the electoral list of People's Front in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election, and was recently elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

answer: Denisova was the Minister of Labor and Social Policy as a member of the Yatsenyuk Government in February 2014. She re-elected into parliament in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election. She was elected as Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine on March 15, 2018.

text: The response is missing Denisova's activity in 2006 and 2012.

refinement: Denisova was elected into parliament in 2006 and 2012. Denisova was the Minister of Labor and Social Policy as a member of the Yatsenyuk Government in February 2014. She re-elected into parliament in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election. She was elected as Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine on March 15, 2018.

answer:
As Minister of Finance she held different posts in the Arkhangelsk provincial law court between 1979 and 1990. Following that, Denisova became the legal adviser of the Crimean Provincial Committee of Ukraine from 1990 to 1991.

In 1998 Denisova became Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department in the Crimean government. She served in Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea from 1998 to 2007.

In 2000 Denisova was detained for 24hrs on charges of power abuse. She stated that she was persecuted for refusing to sign a budget document. This case was shut down.

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina since 2005. She headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina for the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election, but Batkivshchina did not win seats in Supreme Council of Crimea.

text: Denisova was not a Minister of Finance in 1979.

refinement:
Denisova became the legal adviser of the Crimean Provincial Committee of Ukraine from 1990 to 1991.

In 1998 Denisova became Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department in the Crimean government. She served in Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea from 1998 to 2007.

In 2000 Denisova was detained for 24hrs on charges of power abuse. She stated that she was persecuted for refusing to sign a budget document. This case was shut down.

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina since 2005. She headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina for the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election, but Batkivshchina did not win seats in Supreme Council of Crimea.

text: Unnecessary information

refinement:
Denisova became the legal adviser of the Crimean Provincial Committee of Ukraine from 1990 to 1991.

In 1998 Denisova became Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department in the Crimean government. She served in Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea from 1998 to 2007.

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina since 2005. She headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina for the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election, but Batkivshchina did not win seats in Supreme Council of Crimea.

text: The response is missing information about Denisova's career in 2014 and 2018.

refinement:
Denisova became the legal adviser of the Crimean Provincial Committee of Ukraine from 1990 to 1991.

In 1998 Denisova became Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department in the Crimean government. She served in Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea from 1998 to 2007.

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina since 2005. She headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina for the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election, but Batkivshchina did not win seats in Supreme Council of Crimea.

In 2014, Denisova was reelected to the Parliament. In 2018, she was elected Human Rights Commissioner of Ukraine.

answer: In 1998, Denisova became the Minister of Economy and Finances in the Crimean government. She was named Politician of the Year in 2001. She has been a member of Batkivshchina since 2005, and during the 2006 and 2007 parliamentary elections, she was elected as a deputy to the Verkhovna Rada. In 2009, she was ranked the 15th most influential woman in Ukraine. She was re-elected to parliament in 2012. In 2014, she became Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government and became a founding member of her new party People's Front. In the same year, she was re-elected to the Ukrainian parliament. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.


text:
Now I will tell you a story about when m&m's and skittles met in glorious battle. So one day the m&m's army was out patrolling throw the forest of color, when out of nowhere the Skittles started raining down rainbows of death upon them. The m&m's immdently fell back into the shade of the trees where the rainbows couldn't reach them. The returned fire with the egg shaped peanut cannon balls. This battle went on for 12 hours! Hundreds of skittles and m&m's lost their delicious lives that day. And as both armies’ thought they had the other beat...

THE STARBURST AIR SQUADRON STARTED RAINING DOWN JUICE HELL UPON BOTH ARMY'S!!! Oh the scrumptious humanity!!! No m&m's or skittle survived that now absolutely decedent battle field.

title: First post ever. Please comment and tell me what you think.

question: What are m&ms and skittles?

answer: They are candies.

answer: Candy brands.

answer: M&Ms and Skittles are two types of candy.

answer: M&Ms and skittles are two types of candy. In the passage, they are depicted as being in a fierce battle.

question: How long did their battle last?

answer: Over 12 hours.

text: This battle went on for 12 hours!

answer: The battle lasted 12 hours.

text: This battle went on for 12 hours!

answer: The battle lasted for 12 hours.

text: This battle went on for 12 hours!

answer: 12 hours.

text: This battle went on for 12 hours!

question: What did m&ms shoot skittles with?

answer: Peanut cannon balls.

text: The m&m's immdently fell back into the shade of the trees where the rainbows couldn't reach them. The returned fire with the egg shaped peanut cannon balls.

text: No answer.

refinement: The m&m's immdently fell back into the shade of the trees where the rainbows couldn't reach them. The returned fire with the egg shaped peanut cannon balls.

answer: Egg shaped peanut cannon balls.

text: The m&m's immdently fell back into the shade of the trees where the rainbows couldn't reach them. The returned fire with the egg shaped peanut cannon balls.

answer: The m&ms shot the skittles with peanut cannon balls.

text: The m&m's immdently fell back into the shade of the trees where the rainbows couldn't reach them. The returned fire with the egg shaped peanut cannon balls.

question: Who won the battle?

text: No answer.

answer: No one. The starburst air squadron started raining down juice on both armies and all the m&m and skittles died.

answer: The m&m's and skittles lost.

text: I've added the name of the winner.

refinement: The m&m's and skittles lost because the starbursts came into the battle and started raining down juice hell upon both armies.

answer: It is hard to say who won the battle, as both armies were decimated by the Starburst Air Squadron.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The author describes a battle between m&m's and skittles.

text: I added how the outcome and the winner.

refinement: The author describes a battle between m&m's and skittles in which both lost when the Starbursts took over both armies.

answer: The text is a short story about a glorious battle between m&ms and skittles, which ended in both armies being annihilated by the starburst air squadron.

answer: This story tells of a battle between m&m's and skittles, which ends in a complete and total annihilation of both armies.

text: I added who won.

refinement: This story tells of a battle between m&m's and skittles, which ends in a complete and total annihilation of both armies when the Starbursts came in and slaughtered both.

answer: This is a story about a battle between M&M's and Skittles.

text: I added the winner and the outcome.

refinement: This is a story about a battle between M&M's and Skittles and how both lost when the Starbursts came in destroyed both armies.