text:
He turned the blade in his hand. It was balanced perfectly from blade to hilt, a blade fit for his birth and station. It had been the only sword he had ever owned and it was as much a part of him as any limb. Born of noble birth and knighted at a young age he has known plenty of battle. The sun was glinting off of his polished black armor as he stared across the battlefield at the perfectly formed battle line of his enemies.   He has been here many times before and as usual he waits on the enemy to make his move.  “Always wait on the enemy to act first” he remembered from his training. Turn weakness to strength, “Wait for his mistake and then you strike” it had served him well so far.

Across the battlefield he could see the enemy king atop his mount. His crown of jeweled ivory was glistening proudly in the morning sunlight. The King’s voice was one that commanded respect and obedience. “FORWARD!”  The king shouted. The front line marched forward, one step, then two.

The enemy line has advanced and the knight’s allies responded. A shout rang down the line, halberds stamped the ground, swords banged against shields and the front line started forward. The battle lines were on a collision course now; it was only a matter of time. The knight lowered his visor and wheeled his destrier to the right and then forward towards the approaching enemy.

A friendly man-at-arms went down first. The enemy knight came out of nowhere, slamming into the poorly armored foot soldier with 1400 lbs. of warhorse.  As the soldier tried to recover the enemy knight caught him clean with the down stroke of his long sword. The blade cut through flesh and bone like bread and butter. The enemy knight raised his sword to the heavens and shouted. It was the last mistake he would ever make. A pole axe took the enemy knight in his rib cage. His armor was thick but it was no match for such a blow. The fully armored white knight fell from his horse, smashing into the ground as his slayer stood over him. One more downswing of the pole axe and the white knight’s world turned black, head and helm rolling along the ground. The man who had vanquished the infamous knight was a mere soldier, in makeshift armor and worn boots. The knight had never glanced twice at the soldier; he had forgotten a very important rule of warfare. Never underestimate your enemy, sharpened steel makes equals of us all.

The knight wheeled his warhorse again, this time to the left and then again toward the enemy. The soldiers were clashing in front of him and created quite a jam for the heavily armored foot soldiers, but his experienced mount maneuvered around them with grace. Finally, the knight saw his chance to strike. An unsupported man-at-arms was looking to get back into the fight but the knight was on him in a flash.  The soldier whirled in just enough time to catch the downswing with his wooden shield. The wood cracked and splintered but the soldier was staggered. The black knight turned his horse and headed back for another attack.  The soldier raised his shield to block another down stroke but the knight feinted and brought the sword low under the shield. The soldier screamed in pain and fell to his knees, his hand being all that saved his entrails from escaping as he collapsed face first into the mud.

The knight wheeled his horse in a circle, checking for any approaching danger. But the enemy had lost track of him. Steel clashed in the distance along with shouts of victory, and moans of agony. When the knight looked up nothing stood between himself and the enemy king. The king stared back at him, cleared his throat, drew his sword, and gave a nod. The knight spurred his horse, the horse charged but the king was ready for him. The king made one small sidestep to the left and buried his bastard sword deep into the flank of the warhorse. The horse went down spilling the knight onto the ground with a loud clang! The knight recovered quickly though with no major damage except to that of his loyal mount. The knight looked down at his horse writhing in the mud. He threw off his helm in anger and shouted. He picked up his sword from the ground and pointed it at the king.  “Oh, did I hurt your mule?” the king scoffed. The knight charged, raising his long sword above his head and bringing it down with all his might. The king parried, side stepped, and counterattacked. It was all the knight could do to protect himself; this king hadn’t spent all of his days in satin sheets and silk robes.  The knight retreated, back, back, back, sidestep. But, the king kept coming, slashing and thrusting. However, the king was starting to slow, his face a ripe shade of pink and the knight saw his moment to seize the advantage. The knight sidestepped a slash and then lunged forward slamming his shoulder into the king. The king lost his grip on his sword and it went flying through the air as he went to the ground. The king tried to stand but the knight slammed his foot onto the king’s chest sending him to the flat of his back. The king stared coldly up at the knight as a maniacal smile formed across his lips. “Well done, ser” said the king. “Checkmate”, said the knight. “Again?” the king asked.  “As always” said the knight as he turned and slowly marched back across the battlefield.

title: The Black Knight

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the primary source of tension in the story.

answer: The primary source of tension in the story is the conflict between the black knight and the enemy king. The black knight is confident in his abilities and experienced in battle, but the enemy king is no slouch either. This creates tension as both sides strive to gain the upper hand in this conflict.

answer: It seems like the tension arises when the knight realizes that his enemy is not as good as is reported. This realization underscores the rules of fairness. It is ironic that both combatants are deadlocked as they fight but they are equal as they fight each other. The only thing that separates the two fighters is their dueling skills.

text: The King is far better than the knight thought.

refinement: The tension in the story is in the combat between the knight and the enemy king. This realization underscores the rules of fairness. It is ironic that both combatants are deadlocked as they fight but they are equal as they fight each other. The only thing that separates the two fighters is their dueling skills.

text: None of this is relevant and it is unclear where it comes from in the story.

refinement: The tension in the story is in the combat between the knight and the enemy king. The black knight is confident in his abilities and experienced in battle, but the enemy king is no slouch either. This creates tension as both sides strive to gain the upper hand in this conflict.

answer: The story starts just before the battle begins. Shortly afterward the enemy king's troops advance and its knight kills a foot soldier. But the enemy knight is killed in the next confrontation. The knight defeated two soldiers and found himself alone on the battlefield. He sized up the enemy king, and engaged. The enemy king was up to the fight, but the knight has more endurance, disarms the king and kicks him onto his back.

text: These lines are not relevant

refinement: The central tension in the story is the battle between the knight and the king. Although the knight is a good fighter, the king is hale. The tension comes as the two vie for supremacy.

answer: The primary source of tension in the story is the battle between the black knight and the enemy king. The black knight is untested against the battle-hardened king, and must use determination and skill to prevail. The black knight must remain wary of the king's cunning and abilities to overcome him.

answer: At first glance, there is not much to this battle. The knight is outnumbered by accident and is fighting a king, but he is still confident. After all, the king himself is fighting him. This is where he should have reconsidered himself. Opportunities arise where he could have killed the king outright, but he constantly makes mistakes because he is too cocky and unprepared for how viscous the king is. He underestimated the king and he pays for it with his life. When the knight begins to slow, there is the sense that he is no use anymore. The king will put him out of his misery.

text: The tone here is bad and the beginning lines are not relevant.

refinement: He underestimated the king and he pays for it with his life. When the knight begins to slow, there is the sense that he is no use anymore. The king will put him out of his misery.

text: This is the opposite of what happens in the story. The knight defeats the King.

refinement: The central tension in the story comes from the combat between the knight and the enemy king. The black knight is confident in his abilities and experienced in battle, but the enemy king is no slouch either. This creates tension as both sides strive to gain the upper hand in this conflict.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize how the main character changes over the story.

answer: The main character changes from a fearless knight to a more confident and cunning warrior. Initially, the knight waits for the enemy to act first and is confident in his abilities. He quickly adapts to the enemy's tactics and gains the upper hand. In the end, the knight forcefully takes down the enemy king with precise maneuvers and tactical expertise. The knight is now a formidable and feared warrior.

text: Character development does not feature in this story.

refinement: Character development does not feature in this story. The twist in the story is we realize it is describing a game of chess. As such, the characters represent pieces.

answer: The main character is at home on the battlefield, he has been a knight since he was young. As he is facing the enemy's battle lines, he waits patiently for the enemy to make the first move, to make the first mistake. The knight engages an unsupported man of arms and defeats him easily. Next he targets the enemy king, but the king is ready for him and takes out his war horse. The angry knight eventually disarms the king and kicks him onto his back. The king starts laughing and they agree to start the game again.

text: Character development does not feature in this story

refinement: Character development does not feature in this story. The twist in the story is we realize it is describing a game of chess. As such, the characters represent pieces.

answer: He gets severely injured numerous times and has to change his tactics in battle to survive. When he faces an enemy that matches him he is victorious and confident. The enemy king is not a worthy match, and the knight nearly gets killed.

text: Character development does not feature in this story.

refinement: Character development does not feature in this story. The twist in the story is we realize it is describing a game of chess. As such, the characters represent pieces.

answer: The main character does not change as he does not show emotion throughout the entire story. The knight moves from armor to armor and is not injured. The ending is somewhat hopeful when the knight enters another game of chess.

text: Character development does not feature in this story. Bonus points for making the inference about chess.

refinement: Character development does not feature in this story. The twist in the story is we realize it is describing a game of chess. As such, the characters represent pieces.

answer: The main character starts out as a knight who is skilled at battle but grows into a ruthless warrior. Initially, the knight prefers to wait for the enemy to act first in order to seize the advantage. But when the king of the enemies reveals his strength, the knight is quick to take action. The knight learns from this experience and becomes skilled at combat. The knight sees strength in the king's enemy, but eventually conquers the king. Over the course of the story, the main character becomes braver and wiser in battle.

text: Character development does not feature in this story.

refinement: Character development does not feature in this story. The twist in the story is we realize it is describing a game of chess. As such, the characters represent pieces.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the plot twist.

answer: Battle lines of enemies are watching each other from opposite sides of the battle field. A knight defeats a soldier and sees that he has an open line to attack the king. The king nods and they engage in a violent fight that kills the knight's war horse. At last, the knight kicked the king onto his back, the king smiled. The knight declared checkmate and the king asked if they could play again. The story describes a game of chess.

text: Not a complete sentence.

refinement: Battle lines of enemies are watching each other from opposite sides of the battle field. A knight defeats a soldier and sees that he has an open line to attack the king. The king nods and they engage in a violent fight that kills the knight's war horse. Finally the knight corners the king and kicks him on his back. The knight declared checkmate and the king asked if they could play again. The story describes a game of chess.

text: Expand on this more

refinement: Battle lines of enemies are watching each other from opposite sides of the battle field. A knight defeats a soldier and sees that he has an open line to attack the king. The king nods and they engage in a violent fight that kills the knight's war horse. Finally the knight corners the king and kicks him on his back. The knight declared checkmate and the king asked if they could play again. Thus it is revealed the story describes a game of chess.

answer: The King and The Black Knight have engaged in a fight so many times that it ended in a stalemate. This time, however, the Black Knight has been injured and has inflicted no injury to the King. Revealed to be twins, the true King tells the Black Knight that he's his brother, at which point The Black Knight bows his head, yet remains silent. He's blind and without tongue by this point in the story when he notes the silence.

text: None of this is accurate, and it is hard to tell where it comes from. There are no twins in this story.

refinement: Battle lines of enemies are watching each other from opposite sides of the battle field. A knight defeats a soldier and sees that he has an open line to attack the king. The king nods and they engage in a violent fight that kills the knight's war horse. Finally the knight corners the king and kicks him on his back. The knight declared checkmate and the king asked if they could play again. Thus it is revealed the story describes a game of chess.

answer: The knight faces down the enemy king, but finds himself the one on the losing end of the fight, with his horse injured and his opponent appearing surprisingly skilled. However, at the last minute, the king trips and falls and the knight takes the opportunity to pin him down, winning the battle.

text: Need evidence regarding chess. Also the knight does not lose.

refinement: Battle lines of enemies are watching each other from opposite sides of the battle field. A knight defeats a soldier and sees that he has an open line to attack the king. The king nods and they engage in a violent fight that kills the knight's war horse. Finally the knight corners the king and kicks him on his back. The knight declared checkmate and the king asked if they could play again. Thus it is revealed the story describes a game of chess.

answer: The white knight finds himself in several deadly skirmishes, defeating a variety of enemies. The king finally meets him and initially manages to stay one step ahead. However, the knight manages to catch the king off guard and overpowers him, finally getting the upper hand.

text: This does not describe the fact that the story is a chess game.

refinement: Battle lines of enemies are watching each other from opposite sides of the battle field. A knight defeats a soldier and sees that he has an open line to attack the king. The king nods and they engage in a violent fight that kills the knight's war horse. Finally the knight corners the king and kicks him on his back. The knight declared checkmate and the king asked if they could play again. Thus it is revealed the story describes a game of chess.

answer: After killing his enemy, the knight interacts with the enemy king. The king acknowledges his skill and congratulations him. He then announces that he is going to kill him.

text: This does not describe the fact the story is a chess game.

refinement: Battle lines of enemies are watching each other from opposite sides of the battle field. A knight defeats a soldier and sees that he has an open line to attack the king. The king nods and they engage in a violent fight that kills the knight's war horse. Finally the knight corners the king and kicks him on his back. The knight declared checkmate and the king asked if they could play again. Thus it is revealed the story describes a game of chess.


split: train

text:
“Are you alright?” The voice seemed distant. “Are you alright?” The voice repeated, this time it seemed much closer. I slowly opened my eyes. The sun was coming up, it was blinding, and it really hurt in the eyes.

I had an awful tang of blood and puke in the back of my throat. My sight started coming back, at first it was all very dizzy and confusion. Where was I anyway and why was this man talking to me?
“You can’t sleep it out here, go home and clean yourself up. You got blood on your shirt boy”. I could finally locate the voice; it came from a man dressed all in whites. He seemed to be wearing a white coat, maybe he was a baker. I think there was flour on the coat.

My surroundings started becoming clearer; I seemed to be lying in a small backyard on a wooden bench. No wonder my back hurt so badly… And my head – my head hurt so badly that I felt it could explode any second. How much did I drink last night? How in the world did I end up in a baker’s backyard and why was my shirt covered in blood? Thousand thought went through my skull.
“Get out of here I said!” a belligerent remark, the baker started getting really grouchy. I tried sitting up, there was a sting of pain in my left ribs. Had I been in a fight last night? Why couldn’t I remember anything?

Small flashbacks containing a glimpse of last night showed themselves for my inner eye.
Noise, screams and blood. Glimpse of a skinhead punching me, why had I been fighting a skinhead? I lifted the shirt up; there were no wounds to be found. The only lesion was a huge bruise on the ribs. It had to be the skinhead’s blood then.
I finally pulled myself together, and tried standing up. My legs were unstable and I became completely disoriented, my vision started fading into black. I felt back down on the bench. My senses regained their strength. Tried one more time and got up without losing my balance completely this time. I started walking slowly out the backyard, without ever saying a word to the baker.

“Boy, you forgot your phone” He said. I looked back; he stood there holding an old Sony Ericsson, it was a phone alright, but it wasn’t mine. Where was my phone, I couldn’t feel it in my pocket, searched it quickly with my right hand. It wasn’t there. Well it was probably me who had left the black Sony Ericsson here, and maybe it could put some light on last night’s endeavours. So I went and fetched it from the baker, thanked him and walked towards the street.
A red Citroën C3 passed by, they turned their head, but who wouldn’t when you see a boy covered in blood at six in the morning, besides from that car the street was abandoned. I didn’t recognize the exact street, but I figured I had to be closed to the club we were at last night.
I felt sick, had a rising urge to vomit. I started walking down the street in direction I thought I lived. Pulled up the phone and started going through last sent messages.

[4:45] {Where are you, help? Some dude punched me, pushed him into the wall. Hit it with head. Blood everywhere}

How I had managed to write anything readable in my condition was a mystery. And more import, what had happened to that skinhead, had I killed him? I skimmed through the next text.

[4.54] {I think he's okay, could not call ambulance. His friends came after me.}
[4.55] {I hid in a yard, can you help me?}

There were no incoming messages. Who had I addressed these texts to anyway; I couldn’t have any numbers in this stolen phone. I looked at the number, I had clearly tried to dial my friend Peter, but the number was one figure too short... What a fool I’d been.
Guess I fell asleep while hiding in the yard. I started feeling dizzy again. I had to put my hand against the wall to keep myself from falling.
Oh God, I will never drink again I thought to myself, but it seemed that I had said that before and look how it turned out. Just an ordinary Saturday in my ordinary life.

title: Hangovers

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the themes throughout this story.

answer: The main theme in the story is of hangover and the aftermath of excessive drinking. The character wakes up in a backyard after a night of partying with no recollection of what happened. He slowly comes to realize that he was likely in a fight and there is blood on his shirt. Later, he finds out that the blood is not his and likely belongs to the skinhead. He also discovers that he had texted his friend for help, but the phone was stolen. This experience highlights the consequences and dangers of excessive drinking.

text: The narrator's phone isn't stolen. He tries to use a stolen phone to text a friend.

refinement: The main theme in the story is of hangover and the aftermath of excessive drinking. The character wakes up in a backyard after a night of partying with no recollection of what happened. He slowly comes to realize that he was likely in a fight and there is blood on his shirt. Later, he finds out that the blood is not his and likely belongs to the skinhead. He also discovers that he tried to text his friend on a stolen phone but forgot to type the last digit of the phone number. This experience highlights the consequences and dangers of excessive drinking.

answer: One of the themes covered is the use of alcohol; the protagonist wakes up in an abandoned bakery, having drank and being unaffected by the alcoholic beverage. When he is instructed by the baker to leave, he starts feeling dizziness, he says he's going to be sick, and that he is going to stop drinking for good. The question of the protagonist's sanity arises, as can be seen by a mix of messages he manages to send despite being drunk. Overall, there is an expectation that the protagonist will suffer consequences for the harm he has caused.

text: The answer is either incorrect or irrelevant, broadly speaking.

text: The answer is empty.

refinement: The main theme in the story is excessive drinking. The character wakes up in a backyard after a night of partying with no recollection of what happened. He slowly comes to realize that he was likely in a fight and there is blood on his shirt. Later, he finds out that the blood is not his and likely belongs to the skinhead. He also discovers that he tried to text his friend on a stolen phone but forgot to type the last digit of the phone number. This experience highlights the consequences and dangers of excessive drinking.

answer: The primary overarching themes in this narrative are misuse of alcohol, hangovers, confusion and uncertainty, and morality. Throughout the story, the protagonist passes out in a backyard and wakes up with his shirt and phone covered in blood. He tries to piece together what had happened the night before, becoming increasingly dizzy the more he tries to remember. In the text, it becomes clear that the protagonist has a habit of drinking too much and being careless about the consequences. The protagonist is ultimately uncertain about what had happened the night, including whether or not he had killed a man. Overall, the story focuses on the dangers of alcohol misuse and the damaging effects it can cause.

text: The main theme is alcohol abuse. Other mentioned themes are either irrelevant or made up.

refinement: The primary overarching theme in this narrative is the misuse of alcohol. Throughout the story, the protagonist passes out in a backyard and wakes up with his shirt and phone covered in blood. He tries to piece together what had happened the night before, becoming increasingly dizzy the more he tries to remember. In the text, it becomes clear that the protagonist has a habit of drinking too much and being careless about the consequences. The protagonist is ultimately uncertain about what had happened the night, including whether or not he had killed a man. Overall, the story focuses on the dangers of alcohol misuse and the damaging effects it can cause.

text: The narrator is covered in blood, the stolen phone nearby isn't.

refinement: The primary overarching theme in this narrative is the misuse of alcohol. Throughout the story, the protagonist passes out in a backyard and wakes up with his shirt covered in blood. He tries to piece together what had happened the night before, becoming increasingly dizzy the more he tries to remember. In the text, it becomes clear that the protagonist has a habit of drinking too much and being careless about the consequences. The protagonist is ultimately uncertain about what had happened the night, including whether or not he had killed a man. Overall, the story focuses on the dangers of alcohol misuse and the damaging effects it can cause.

text: The narrator's recollection of the previous night is conveyed wrongly and confusingly.

refinement: The primary overarching theme in this narrative is the misuse of alcohol. Throughout the story, the protagonist passes out in a backyard and wakes up with his shirt covered in blood. He tries to piece together what had happened the night before, reading the texts on the stolen phone he had on him. He manages to recall that he fought a skinhead, who passed out after hitting the wall with his head. The narrator verified the guy was alright before hiding in the backyard from the skinhead's friends. Overall, the story focuses on the dangers of alcohol misuse and the damaging effects it can cause.

text: The overall theme is mentioned twice, both at the beginning and the end. One of them would suffice.

refinement: Throughout the story, the protagonist passes out in a backyard and wakes up with his shirt covered in blood. He tries to piece together what had happened the night before, reading the texts on the stolen phone he had on him. He manages to recall that he fought a skinhead, who passed out after hitting the wall with his head. The narrator verified the guy was alright before hiding in the backyard from the skinhead's friends. Overall, the story focuses on the dangers of alcohol misuse and the damaging effects it can cause.

answer: To the humaneness of baker him, the narrator is aching and in pain, he intends to walk home despite being not sure he will be fine upon arriving. It might be implied that the baker gave assistance to the narrator, who might not have been able to walk alone, including giving the narrator his phone.

answer: Some of the themes evident in this story are dissociation, as the narrator seems to view themselves as someone else with a sense of detachment when experiencing flashbacks. They were also wounded in the head, which can lead to dissociative behaviors. Another theme is blacking out from drinking. Both seem to feel similar to the narrator.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize how the narrator's reactions change throughout the story.

answer: The narrator shows things will never be the same that he will drink again.

text: The answer doesn't really address the question.

text: The answer is empty.

refinement: The narrator is initially bewildered and dizzy. As he pieces together what happened, he thinks he shouldn't drink that much again but resigns to the fact that he will since he thought similar things before.

answer: The narrator wakes up and their reaction is that of confusion. He tries sitting up and something hurts, most likely his rib. The narrator starts remembering some things. When it comes to math, the narrator ends up second guessing himself. The narrator goes irate when the baker tells him to leave. Finally, the narrator realizes they are drunk and they aren't going to do it again.

answer: At first, they feel awful physically-there is pronounced disorientation. Then when they are made aware they are adorned with blood, they start to process their surroundings, and feel a little bit of a connection to their surroundings. They take note of the person stirring them. Then, as they remember the night before, they seem to feel dismay, followed by horror, to which they react by attempting to recollect more, and then they feel further horror as they realize they have gotten into a physical altercation but they have little memory as to why. When they look through their phone to assist them in recall, they feel confusion and more horror at the messages they do not remember sending or receiving. Finally they feel like a fool, having drunk so much and ended up like this, with little memory.

answer: Initially, the narrator is groggy and confused, unsure of where he is. As flashbacks of the previous night reveal themselves, the narrator becomes increasingly embarrassed and sickened by his behavior and deeds. He feels deep remorse, and resolves never to drink again.

text: The narrator almost feels remorse but resigns to his fate since he knows he made similar failed resolutions before.

refinement: Initially, the narrator is groggy and confused, unsure of where he is. As flashbacks of the previous night reveal themselves, the narrator becomes increasingly embarrassed and sickened by his behavior and deeds. He resolves never to drink again for a moment before admitting he made similar failed resolutions in the past.

answer: The narrator wakes up in a backyard with blood on his shirt, confused as to how he got there and what happened the night before. Initially feeling dizzy and disoriented, the narrator slowly recalls details of the fight, remembers being punched and hit in the head, and realizes that his phone is missing. He starts walking down the street, growing increasingly nauseous and dizzy, until finally he finds the phone and discovers the details of the previous night. His reactions gradually change from confusion and disorientation to more of a realization of what happened the previous night.

text: The details of the narrator's recall aren't relevant.

refinement: His reactions gradually change from confusion and disorientation to more of a realization of what happened the previous night.

text: The answer doesn't mention the narrator's reactions after he manages to realize what happened the previous night.

refinement: His reactions gradually change from confusion and disorientation to more of a realization of what happened the previous night. As he remembers what happened, he feels foolish and for a moment resolves to never drink again. However, he made similar resolutions in the past, and they all failed so events like this will likely repeat.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the surprises in the story.

answer: The baker wants the narrator to leave; the narrator realizes his shirt is covered in blood. He figures out his phone was stolen, the texts he tried to send Peter earlier in the night are in the stolen phone.

text: The baker wanting the narrator to leave isn't really a surprise.

refinement: The narrator realizes his shirt is covered in blood. He figures out his phone was stolen, the texts he tried to send Peter earlier in the night are in the stolen phone.

text: The texts are in the stolen phone, but the phone doesn't belong to the narrator. His own phone is missing.

refinement: The narrator realizes his shirt is covered in blood. His phone is missing, and the texts he tried to send Peter earlier in the night are on a different phone.

text: The answer omits the narrator waking up in the backyard of a bakery.

refinement: The first surprise is the narrator waking up in the backyard of a bakery with a massive hangover. The narrator realizes his shirt is covered in blood. His phone is missing, and the texts he tried to send Peter earlier in the night are on a different phone.

text: The narrator is surprised to have been able to write messages while drunk. The answer omits this.

refinement: The first surprise is the narrator waking up in the backyard of a bakery with a massive hangover. The narrator realizes his shirt is covered in blood. His phone is missing, and the texts he tried to send Peter earlier in the night are on a different phone. The narrator is surprised to have been able to write messages while drunk.

answer: The baker throws the narrator out of his backyard where the narrator regains consciousness and someone offers the narrator his phone. The narrator feels dazed he went to fiddle with his phone for clarity, but no one contacted him. the narrator realizes he slept in someone's backyard and is covered in blood (likely from the person who helped him last night). The baker unerringly finds the narrator's phone with the caller ID identifying them as the one who helped the narrator, not the killer he's been searching for.

text: The entire answer is either made up or irrelevant.

text: The answer is empty.

refinement: The first surprise is the narrator waking up in the backyard of a bakery with a massive hangover. The narrator realizes his shirt is covered in blood. His phone is missing, and the texts he tried to send Peter earlier in the night are on a different phone. The narrator is surprised to have been able to write messages while drunk.

answer: The main surprise of the story is that the main character spends the night in a baker's backyard and wakes up with a bloody shirt and no recollection of what happened. Additionally, the character's phone was stolen by an unknown assailant. The only clues to what has occurred are sent messages to a friend explaining a fight, an injury to the head, and an assailant. The character has no idea where his phone or his friend are, and is dizzy and nauseous from the hangover.

text: The clues, missing phone, and missing friend are irrelevant.

refinement: The main surprise of the story is that the main character spends the night in a baker's backyard and wakes up with a bloody shirt and no recollection of what happened. Additionally, the character's phone was stolen by an unknown assailant.

text: There's a phone near the narrator where he woke up, which contains the messages he tried to send. The narrator is surprised to see he could write while drunk. The answer omits this.

refinement: The main surprise of the story is that the main character spends the night in a baker's backyard and wakes up with a bloody shirt and no recollection of what happened. Additionally, the character's phone was stolen by an unknown assailant. There's a phone near the narrator where he woke up, which contains the messages he tried to send. The narrator is surprised to see he could write while drunk.

answer: The narrator wakes up in a backyard and finds out that he was involved in a fight and does not remember what transpired. He finds out from his phone that he had sent confused messages to a friend for help and that he had passed out in the process. The mystery deepens when the narrator realizes that the phone is not his and there were no incoming messages. He feels dizzy and ill, but must continue to walk home in hopes of finding answers.

text: The last sentence is irrelevant.

refinement: The narrator wakes up in a backyard and finds out that he was involved in a fight and does not remember what transpired. He finds out from his phone that he had sent confused messages to a friend for help and that he had passed out in the process. The mystery deepens when the narrator realizes that the phone is not his and there were no incoming messages.

text: The narrator knows the phone isn't his when the baker notifies him. There's no deepening mystery about the lack of incoming messages, the narrator realizes he wrote the wrong number.

refinement: The narrator wakes up in a backyard and finds out that he was involved in a fight and does not remember what transpired. He finds out from his phone that he had sent confused messages to a friend for help and that he had passed out in the process.

text: The phone doesn't belong to the narrator. His messages aren't really confused; they ask for help about the fight he got in. The narrator's surprise is that he managed to write messages at all. Also, he doesn't pass out while messaging.

refinement: The narrator wakes up in a backyard and finds out that he was involved in a fight and does not remember what transpired. He finds out from a phone found near him that he had sent messages to a friend for help. He's surprised that he could write messages.

text: The answer omits the blood.

refinement: The narrator wakes up in a backyard and finds out that he was involved in a fight and does not remember what transpired. His shirt is covered in blood. He finds out from a phone found near him that he had sent messages to a friend for help. He's surprised that he could write messages.

answer: The narrator at first does not know where he is or to whom they are speaking. They gather some intel by looking at their surroundings, but the most surprising revelation to come to their mind is the fact that they had been in an intense physical altercation last night-and that it was with a "skinhead". The term typically refers to a white supremacist in American vernacular. They recover a cell that is not theirs from their pocket and discover text evidence that they got into a fight and ran last night. It seems the narrator has no idea why this fight occurred or why it became so violent.


text:
"It's just a white cookie" the ad read. No big deal were led to believe in the onslaught of ads that followed over the next few years. "Do it for your family", "Do it for your friends", "Do it for the kids","Do it for mother earth", "Search inside your heart. Find the reasons to: Just do it". "It's as easy as a white cookie".

I don't recall when it became normalized, when the ads seeped into the mental landscape to become the dominant mindset of popular culture. Thinking back I can see clearly now that the kids and young adults were selected as the prime targets in this sociological re engineering project.

It must have started about the same time that the plight of the Fukushima children leaked out despite the MSM's relentless efforts to suppress the horror. Around the same time that logging off the internet became impossible with penalty for trying. When the state (my country) enacted monetary control over all private funds and the rest of the world followed suit. Around the time global governance, the end of physical money. and mandatory RFID implants started to become reality.

Yes that's about right, when this white cookie shit surfaced - just ahead of all that other stuff that has transformed our life into their nightmare.

"But it's just a white cookie. Just submit and all your dreams can come true. Submit and all the troubles, and penalties, and restrictions, and socially sanctioned shame and guilt, and hunger melt away", says the voice on the overhead radio to the bus passengers. They're making jokes and laughing about the so called "small minority" of the resistors or hold-outs, as were now being referred to as, for not submitting to the Plan To Save The Planet.

That's the latest message mutation being sold to us 24/7 via all media outlets. "It's the plan to save the planet and all the things in it that matter" or as I over heard someone saying yesterday, "Planned Planet Hood." "Do your part - it's as simple as a white cookie." The ads and pressures are everywhere. Fewer and fewer are resisting. Fewer still speak in defiance - people are beginning to "disappear". People are beginning to understand without the ads that the white cookie solution isn't really a choice. Choice is gone.

I'm on my way too. Supposedly this bus ride today, this mandatory "Request For Information" is "Strictly Routine" according to the registered letter. Just to check that the RFID implant hasn't shifted or gotten infected or more importantly, to them, been tampered with.

I can hear the words, "it's just a white cookie" echoing from some distant speaker as the GovTran pulls up to the regional CPU. We all file off like cattle at a meat market. Nobodies talking, but everybody knows this is it. Eye contact is limited and our yellow coloured shoulder patch informs all as to which area to push us towards. "Be free. Be part of the Plan" a reassuring voice sounds from multiple speakers above, as were shuffled out of the open air, into a yellow hallway that leads to a yellow building with "attendants" in yellow jump suits.

Fuck! I'm stressed. Starting to sweat. Want to run. It's too late now, to get out. It was too late six months ago when my chip went in and travel became chip dependent. My turn. I'm led to a small room with a man at a desk. I sit on the only spare chair. Fucking yellow chair.

"You're 718341676-FR?" he says without looking up. Before I can answer he points his portable scanner at my chip and looks at the data. "Look" he says, "This is really just an exercise in compliance. I see you don't have any recourse. You've got next to nil GovCred and zero GovConX. You," he leans forward on his desk and quickly glances at the black surveillance camera on the wall, "You really have a limited opportunity to freely accept the cookie. So what I need to know is if you're going to sign the release, take the cookie, and be part of the plan to save to planet? Or not? And I need to know now, I've got hundreds more to come after you. So what's it going to be?" "Would you do it?" I ask. "I have done it" he answers sharply. He leans back on his chair, and says, while looking away from the live-feed, "If you volunteer to do this, things will go back to normal for you. It's just a white cookie and then it's over, then you move on with the rest of your life. Full credits and privileges. If you don't, no credits, no privileges, and it happens anyway but with lots of pain, blood loss, and scar tissue."

"So we're about done here" he says as he stands up. "Okay, OK. I'll do it. I'll do it." He hands me the pen, I sigh and I sign the electronic pad. In a moment the door opens and a small white cookie on a small white plate is handed to me. I pick it up and stare across the desk at the guy in yellow. "It's just a cookie" he says smoothly in a tone devoid of emotion like he's been here, at this point, a thousand times. "I wish you'd quit saying that" I say as I start to chew it. "I have to say it. No options for any of us" he adds. I want to jump up and smash his face in. He notices the way I'm looking at him.

As I finish the sickeningly sweet cookie, he stands and hands me a pill bottle with one pill inside. Then he says, "You may notice a tingling sensation - that's normal. There will be bruising, then gradual shrinkage. If there's pain - take the pill." And with that I was shown out the back exit. I now know why the term White Cookie was used. Blue Balls was taken.

title: White Cookie,Blue Testicles, Green Planet.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the plot of the story.

answer: The protagonist is presented with a mandatory request for information, where he must submit to taking a white cookie or face harsh consequences. After taking the white cookie, the protagonist experiences temporary tingling and bruising as part of its side effects. The story concludes with the protagonist deciding to take the white cookie to save his own life.

text: The last two sentences are out of order.

refinement: The protagonist is presented with a mandatory request for information, where he must submit to taking a white cookie or face harsh consequences. The story concludes with the protagonist deciding to take the white cookie to save his own life. After taking the white cookie, the protagonist experiences temporary tingling and bruising as part of its side effects.

text: The phrase "mandatory request for information" is confusing and should be removed.

refinement: The protagonist must submit to taking a white cookie or face harsh consequences. The story concludes with the protagonist deciding to take the white cookie to save his own life. After taking the white cookie, the protagonist experiences temporary tingling and bruising as part of its side effects.

text: It is implied that he would have been given the cookie by force, so he isn't necessarily taking it to save his life.

refinement: The protagonist must submit to taking a white cookie or face harsh consequences. The story concludes with the protagonist deciding to take the white cookie. After taking the white cookie, the protagonist experiences temporary tingling and bruising as part of its side effects.

text: The details about the effects of the cookie can be more specific.

refinement: The protagonist must submit to taking a white cookie or face harsh consequences. The story concludes with the protagonist deciding to take the white cookie. After taking the white cookie, the protagonist experiences temporary tingling and bruising as his testicles shrink.

answer: The protagonist is in a society where white cookies are all that's left of a decadent civilization. The government is forcing people to take cookies in order to join a "plan to save the planet." The protagonist signs up but after taking the cookie experiences physical pain and emotional frustration.

text: The first two sentences should be combined--the part about a "decadent civilization" is confusing and unclear.

refinement: The protagonist is in a society where the government is forcing people to take cookies in order to join a "plan to save the planet." The protagonist signs up but after taking the cookie experiences physical pain and emotional frustration.

text: The answer can be clearer about the results of taking the cookie.

refinement: The protagonist is in a society where the government is forcing people to take cookies in order to join a "plan to save the planet." The protagonist signs up but after taking the cookie experiences physical pain as his testicles bruise and shrink.

answer: The narrator describes when a new mindset appeared in popular culture, an ad that encouraged everyone to do something, the white cookie. Some time later, it turned in a mandatory procedure that enforced people to submit to the plan to save the planet. Those who didn't submit to the plan are discriminated and have their rights revoked. The narrator signs the release and takes the cookie, experiencing a tingling sensation, before having blue balls inserted.

text: The overall phrasing of the answer could be made more coherent.

refinement: The narrator describes when a new sociological reengineering effort involving an ad that encourages people to eat a white cookie. Some time later, it turns into a mandatory procedure that forces people to submit to the plan to save the planet. Those who don't submit to the plan are discriminated against and have their rights revoked. The narrator signs the release and takes the cookie, experiencing a tingling sensation as his testicles bruise and shrink.

answer: The world the narrator is living in has mandatory RFID implants and there is a plan to save the world with white cookies. The narrator has been summoned for a "Request for Information" with other people who have not eaten the cookies. The narrator is led to a small room and is convinced to eat the cookie. The narrator eats the cookie and then leaves.

text: Rather than simply leave, he is warned of the effects of the cookie.

refinement: The world the narrator is living in has mandatory RFID implants and there is a plan to save the world with white cookies. The narrator has been summoned for a "Request for Information" with other people who have not eaten the cookies. The narrator is led to a small room and is convinced to eat the cookie. The narrator eats the cookie and is told that he will experience tingling and pain as his testicles bruise and shrink.

answer: A man is forced to take a radiology test by the governemnt. At the government office/building, he's told to go into a room and sign a form. After he signs the form, he's told that he must eat a "white cookie" (which they claim is just similar to a black and white cookie), and a brief and mild, but rather excruciating injection. He follows the instructions out of fear, hoping they will return him to his life with full privileges.

text: The line about a radiology test is unattested. Rather, he is summoned for a "Request for Information."

refinement: A man is summoned by the governemnt for a "Request for Information". At the government office/building, he's told to go into a room and sign a form. After he signs the form, he's told that he must eat a "white cookie" (which they claim is just similar to a black and white cookie), and a brief and mild, but rather excruciating injection. He follows the instructions out of fear, hoping they will return him to his life with full privileges.

text: The part about a black and white cookie is unattested.

refinement: A man is summoned by the governemnt for a "Request for Information". At the government office/building, he's told to go into a room and sign a form. After he signs the form, he's told that he must eat a "white cookie", and a brief and mild, but rather excruciating injection. He follows the instructions out of fear, hoping they will return him to his life with full privileges.

text: The part about the injection is unattested.

refinement: A man is summoned by the governemnt for a "Request for Information". At the government office/building, he's told to go into a room and sign a form. After he signs the form, he's told that he must eat a "white cookie". He follows the instructions out of fear, hoping they will return him to his life with full privileges.

text: The answer could go into more specifics about the effects of taking the white cookie.

refinement: A man is summoned by the governemnt for a "Request for Information". At the government office/building, he's told to go into a room and sign a form. After he signs the form, he's told that he must eat a "white cookie". He follows the instructions out of fear, hoping they will return him to his life with full privileges. After taking the cookie, he is warned that he will experience tingling and pain as his testicles bruise and shrink.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the white cookies?

answer: No answer

text: The answer doesn't mention the purpose of the cookies.

refinement: The white cookies are part of a sociological reengineering program intended to save the planet.

text: The answer doesn't mention the effects of the cookies.

refinement: The white cookies are part of a sociological reengineering program intended to save the planet. The cookies cause the testicles to bruise and shrink.

answer: According to the text, the white cookie is part of the plan to save the Earth. Some people, like the narrator, are resisting the plan, and refuse to eat the cookie. The ads state that "It's just a white cookie." Based on context clues provided, it seems that the cookies medically castrate the consumer, or at least make them unable to have kids.

answer: According to a Brown University study, white cookies are more addictive than cocaine. They override free will and turn a person into a goverment-controlled slave. They are advertised, in ridiculously vague and pompous ways, as the plan to save the planet. There is no turning back. Once you realize what is happening, it's almost too late.

text: This answer is not based on the text.

text: The answer doesn't mention the purpose of the cookies.

refinement: The cookies are part of a sociological reengineering project to save the planet. Individuals are forced to take the cookies.

text: The text does not mention the effects of the cookies.

refinement: The cookies are part of a sociological reengineering project to save the planet. Individuals are forced to take the cookies. The cookies cause the testicles to bruise and shrink, rendering people sterile.

answer: The text discusses the guidelines and incentives around white cookies, which are being used to convince people to go along with a particular plan. The white cookies are portrayed as being damaging, both physically and psychologically.

answer: The text describes the white cookies as being part of a propaganda campaign to convince people to submit to a plan to save the planet by sacrificing their freedoms. The cookie is portrayed as being a symbol of something terrible happening - mass global governance, monetary control, mandatory RFID implants and disappearances of people who disobey. The text also says that although the cookie is described as being "just a white cookie", it is really anything but "just a cookie". The text also describes the "tingling sensation" caused by the cookie, reporting that there will be bruising and pain if taken.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the events that lead up to the story taking place.

answer: The reader is initially led to believe that the narrator is reminiscing on a time when the white cookie (RFID) was introduced and when the start of the end of privacy and the rise of globalism were happening concurrently. It is not clear how the narrator learned of this, and the entire setting of the story is information that is not verified. It states that they are sitting to receive a mandatory check up after an RFID implant surgery has been implanted in the person and it is shifted or if it has been tampered with. It has been stated that the reader "signs a release," which means that the reader is part of the plan the cookie and everything will return to normal if they do the full cycle of accepting everything and the person that checks wants to ensure that no one slips out of the plan, regardless of anything.

text: This touches on the plot of the story, not the events leading up to it.

text: The answer does not mention the Fukushima children.

refinement: There was a leak concerning the plight of the Fukushima children.

text: The answer doesn't mention the state of the internet.

refinement: There was a leak concerning the plight of the Fukushima children. Logging off the internet became impossible without penalty.

text: Doesn't mention monetary control.

refinement: There was a leak concerning the plight of the Fukushima children. Logging off the internet became impossible without penalty. The narrator's country enacted monetary control over all private funds. Global governance brought about the end of physical money.

text: The answer doesn't mention the RFID chips.

refinement: There was a leak concerning the plight of the Fukushima children. Logging off the internet became impossible without penalty. The narrator's country enacted monetary control over all private funds. Global governance brought about the end of physical money. People were forced to have RFID implants.

answer: The world slowly transforms into a nightmare as time passes, slowly taking away certain liberties, like freedom of speech and internet connection, slowly establishing absolute control over money and mechanisms to implant RFID chips into people. With the proliferation of "white cookies" there is a change in the public mindset, and people begin to accept it.

text: It is inaccurate to state that people are deprived of an internet connection--the opposite is true.

refinement: The world slowly transforms into a nightmare as time passes, slowly taking away certain liberties, people are unable to log off the internet without penalty, slowly establishing absolute control over money and mechanisms to implant RFID chips into people. With the proliferation of "white cookies" there is a change in the public mindset, and people begin to accept it.

answer: The events leading up to the plot of the story include the introduction of the white cookies. The cookies are being advertised in numerous ways, and most people have accepted the plan to save the planet. The world is now under a global government, and physical money is no longer used. RFID implants have become mandatory, logging off of the internet became impossible, and something to do with the Fukushima children happened. A combination of these events led to the narrator on their way to receive the cookie.

text: The last line is unnecessary.

refinement: The events leading up to the plot of the story include the introduction of the white cookies. The cookies are being advertised in numerous ways, and most people have accepted the plan to save the planet. The world is now under a global government, and physical money is no longer used. RFID implants have become mandatory, logging off of the internet became impossible, and something to do with the Fukushima children happened.

answer: While ads have been used in popular culture to convince people to accept a mandatory "white cookie" solution, something bigger that is gradually happening in the background is looming closer. People are now being required to present themselves for mandatory compliance scans and interrogations to ensure that their RFID chips haven't been tampered with or corrupted. Those who comply are promised credits and privileges while those who refuse the cookie face pain, blood loss, and scar tissue. The protagonist signs the release and is given a cookie to eat and a pill to swallow. He now feels conflicted, knowing there is nothing he can do to escape the Plan To Save The Planet.

answer: The main character was subjected to a pressure campaign that revolved around a white cookie. The cookie was being promoted as a way to save the planet, though the character realizes that the promise is an empty one and that the cookie is just a way to manipulate people into compliance. The protagonist is eventually forced to give in and sign a release, whereupon they are given the cookie. Once the cookie has been ingested, they feel a tingling sensation and the pain and side effects associated with being chipped.


text:
She opened her eyes, and all she saw was a searing white light. She felt a biting cold metallic surface beneath her. She was laying down, in a metal room with only one door; a heavy, solid metal door. The florescent lights: the searing light, buzzing incessantly above her. They were driving her mad. She suddenly felt a pool of warmth beneath her head; blood. It was bleeding. To her relief it was only a slight trickle. To her horror there was a large dried pool of blood below her. A few drops trailed off to the opposite end of the room. And she saw him.

Lying there on the floor, opposite to her was a man. She saw no blood around him, but saw blood on his hands. Lying between them were a syringe and a keycard. The syringe was empty; what was in it? She wondered. Did he attack me? What is this place? Why am I here? Why can't I remember? She couldn't remember. She couldn't remember anything at all; who she was, where she was, and why she was here. She couldn't remember; and she was afraid. Did he lock me in this room for something I did? Was this man a guard at this facility? Or were this man's intentions more...malignant? She didn't want to know. She wanted to get out; she had to get out. She had to find some answers.

She stood up and made her way towards the door, still slightly ajar. As she approached the threshold, she noticed a camera. What is this place she thought and what is it for? She left into the hallway, and stared down its sterile walls, glistening in the white light. There were more cells, but there was silence. She was unsure of whether that was a good sign or not. She made for the door at the end of the hallway; it looked different from the rest, perhaps it wasn't a cell, perhaps it was a way out. She hoped it was. When she reached the door, her heart sank; it was locked.

The key card in the room! It was the only thing she had to go on, the only ray of light in her frightening nightmare. Feeling hopeful, she raced to the end of the hall for the key card. When she reached the cell she had awoken in, she entered and made her way for the card, not noticing that the man had woken up, and was watching her. As she goes to leave the room, she hears an unsettling, animalistic growl. She turns back to see the man, crouching, staring at her with a predator's gaze. Looking closer at his eyes, she notices that his eyes are a yellowish color; like a cat's eyes. His nails had sharpened, and were more like claws. What was in that syringe? Was he planning on doing that to me?

Suddenly, the feral beast leaped. Thinking quickly, she pulled the door closed just in time. She started to run down the hall and then she heard that noise. The feral creature let out a sickening roar. The nightmarish noise paralyzed her with fear. For an eternity, she could not move, could not think, could not breath. What made her move wasn't fear of the beast behind her. It was the new sounds she heard. The other cells were alive with movement; something was lurking behind their walls. With an ever deepening sense of terror, she ran towards the door, inserted the key card, and turned the handle; the door opened. The minuscule amount of relief she felt was extinguished when she heard the footfalls of the beast. Without even looking, she went through the door and into the new room. She turned and closed the door, seeing the beast lunge forward, more feral in appearance than before, just in time for it to crash into the closed door. She was safe, for now.

Turning to examine the room, she saw monitors. Monitors that showed the horrors in the other cells. Creatures that lurked and prowled with vicious intent. Creatures that writhed and squirmed in agonizing pain. This facility...was for experimentation on human beings. Just who the hell are these people? What are they doing? What are these vile bastards doing to these poor people? Sitting down, she started to go through some notes lying on the table. They were of someone named Dr. Moreau. This despicable person wrote about these people, his "patients" with no empathy, no remorse. He was now one of his own experiments.

"Doctor, are you there? The Colonel is waiting for the latest results of your testing." It was a man's voice on the other side of the door opposite from the one with the cells. She sat frozen with fear. What would happen to her when he found out what happened to the doctor, that he had become one of his pets? "Doctor? I'm coming in..." The door slowly opened, and a man wearing heavily padded, black colored clothing came in. He was holding a gun. When he stepped into the room, he raised it and fired. At that moment, a life was silenced.
But it was not hers...

Lowering his weapon, he turned to her and said, "Your bleeding, come with me to the infirmary." When she didn't respond, didn't even breath, he said it. Those words which shattered her utterly and will haunt her for the rest of her days. It was just a simple question, yet it implied so much.

"Doctor Moreau, are you alright?"

title: This was a short story I wrote for a high school English class. I was told by my teacher that it was well written, but I would like some criticism from you guys and gals. (This story is about 5-6 years old) [Battle Not With Monsters]

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the twist of the story.

answer: The narrator wakes up in a facility, presumed to be a wounded doctor. She realizes that she's one of the experiments being tested on human beings. She also watches footage of how her patients are suffering, which is how Dr. Moreau got here in the first place. She helps the experiments escape and winds up being revealed to be Dr. Moreau.

text: When the narrator wakes up she has no idea who she is or what happened.

refinement: The narrator wakes up in a facility. She has no idea who she is or what has happened. She realizes that she's one of the experiments being tested on human beings. She also watches footage of how her patients are suffering, which is how Dr. Moreau got here in the first place. She helps the experiments escape and winds up being revealed to be Dr. Moreau.

text: This sentence makes no sense.

refinement: The narrator wakes up in a facility. She has no idea who she is or what has happened. She finds evidence of human experiments. She also watches footage of how her patients are suffering, which is how Dr. Moreau got here in the first place. She helps the experiments escape and winds up being revealed to be Dr. Moreau.

text: This is unclear

refinement: The narrator wakes up in a facility. She has no idea who she is or what has happened. She finds evidence of human experiments. She also watches footage of how her patients are suffering and heartless notes from Dr. Moreau detailing the experiments. She helps the experiments escape and winds up being revealed to be Dr. Moreau.

text: This is inaccurate

refinement: The narrator wakes up in a facility. She has no idea who she is or what has happened. She finds evidence of human experiments. She also watches footage of how her patients are suffering and heartless notes from Dr. Moreau detailing the experiments. She winds up being revealed to be Dr. Moreau.

answer: The narrator wakes up and has no memory of who she is, where she is, or how she got there. She is afraid and assumes that the man she initially sees unconscious brought her here for some reason. When she makes it to the monitor room, she is disgusted to learn that someone named Dr. Moreau is performing human experimentation in the facility. Then, at the very end, it is revealed that she is Dr. Moreau.

answer: In the beginning of the story, the main character wakes up in a cell with a man and discovers that the facility she is in is for experimentation on humans with some horrific creatures lurking in the cells. The man wakes up and tried to attack her, but she quickly escaped into a new room and locked the door. Soon after, the man breaks into the room and shoots the doctor. Turns out, the doctor is the main character herself. The facility was experimenting on her the whole time and one of the researchers, the man with the gun, realized this. The story ends with the main character understanding that she is an experiment and in some very serious danger.

answer: The woman wakes up in a soundproof, metallic room and finds a man laying near her with a blood-stained syringe. When he wakes up and sees her, he becomes a feral beast and attacks her. However, the woman is able to escape into another room with a locked door, where she finds monitors with creatures in cages on them. The man who had attacked her, who is revealed to be the doctor named Dr. Moreau, comes into the room and discovers her. He reveals to her that this facility was for human experimentation and she is one of the experiments.

answer: When the doctor disguised within the story doesn't respond to the question asking if she's alright, the other person asks her name. When he says that that wasn't his question, she realizes that she's the doctor.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the monitor room?

answer: In the monitor room, the woman found monitors showing images of people who suffered experiments in the cells. The room also had documents on a Dr. Moreau.

text: Inaccuracy

refinement: In the monitor room, the woman found monitors showing images of people who suffered experiments in the cells. The room also had documents written by Dr. Moreau.

answer: The monitor room shows images of creatures in other cells that are in various stages of torment and experimentation. The facility itself is being used for experimentation on captive human beings.

answer: The monitor room shows creatures in cells in agonizing pain, crawling around with vicious intent. The room is for experimentation on human beings. It is run by Dr. Moreau, whose latest experiments have caused him to become one of the patients in his own facility. A man comes into the room and shoots the Doctor, who speaks up to tell him that she is bleeding and needs help at the infirmary. The man indicates through his question that the monitor room is an area of research on these creatures and experiments.

text: This section of the answer in inaccurate

refinement: The monitor room shows creatures in cells in agonizing pain, crawling around with vicious intent. The room is for experimentation on human beings. It is run by Dr. Moreau.

answer: The she starts to look at the monitors, she gets to watch the horrors that are happening in the cells and sees experimentation on humans. The doctor writes about his human experiments with no empathy, drawing the conclusion that the experimenting doctor is one of the patients.

text: Inaccurate section of the answer

refinement: The she starts to look at the monitors, she gets to watch the horrors that are happening in the cells and sees experimentation on humans. The doctor writes about his human experiments with no empathy.

answer: The monitor room contains several monitors which show each of the cells in the facility. The cells contain horrifying creatures, writhing in pain. The room also contains a table, chair, and Dr. Moreau's notes.


text:
((Note: This story is written by me and I have to say it's not grammar and sp checked. It is merely a rough draft that I thought you guys might like. I'm not very good at reddit spacing so i'm sorry for the block of text feel this has. If anyone has the solution please inform me! This is mainly to see if the plot and twists are interesting. Thanks for reading!))

Within the light of day I saw the greatest site. Small butterfly floating to my right. My eyes followed the dreamy creature through it fantasy glide through the cool summer breeze. Not a care in it’s mind aside from that of pollen. The trees around us encased secrets of these woods. No man outside had know of the well of eternity just below my feet.

Immortality hides away here. Having found sanctuary within the realm of magic. Hidden away for eons from the sight and mind of man except to only flourish in tales of myth and false legend. From the well a tree drew it’s source of life. Growing proud and tall around the many dead oaks of the forest. The leafs shone as if silver and gold while the branches seemed to a mere man to be as strong as steel. The tresure lay not in the strength, nor the twirling green, but in the golden fruit i bear only once a few hundred years or so. Some remained held high above while some lay at the bottom of the hill where I stand.

I look to my feet to see a slightly bruised fruit stuck in time. I reach down and scoop up the magic juicy ball and slice in half eating one and offering the other to my new found friend the butterfly. We sit there enjoying the sweet dreamy cream inside while a rustling in the trees begins. To my right I look to see a new path to have formed in the wood. Being adventurous I take up the challenge presented and trot off to the south.

Once I arrive to the opening in the dense thicket I notice a gate made of dark metals slightly ajar as if inviting me to take a stroll beyond into what it guards. I become wary for the trees around have died long ago it seems, the light of the eternity tree seemed dim from where I stood. Temptation grew louder than my guts.

I pushed the gate open to hear a soul wrenching creak that put me even more on edge.

Once I was through the passageway it seemed the sun its self fear this place. Darkness of pitch swallowed me whole as I pushed onward through the thicket of hate. Soon I felt my feet dig into what I believed could only be sand. Toes pushing through and wiggling I wondered if somehow a beach lay in the darkness ahead. With increased caution I carried on.

In the far distance I saw a light. Purple in color it seemed. I could tell it was very far away due to it being merely a spec on the invisible horizon ahead of me. I remained on the path though something inside of me most likely my soul urged me to run the other way. I surprised myself by doing the opposite. My pace quickened and my vision tunneled down to that only of the light. Nothing else seemed to matter. Only to reach that dark goal. To meet whatever fate lay ahead, head on.

As I ran I could feel something was different around me. My vision may be a slave to the light ahead my other senses noticed a change in the night. A rustling and tearing of branches followed on either side of the sandy path. Someone or something was keeping pace with me. Maybe there were other paths? More people like me racing towards the distant beacon like a swarm of moths to a flame? I didn’t know, but at this point my addiction and need to feel the false light had grown pitiful. I drooled, panted, and growled like a dog. My mind began to lose grip of reality. It seemed like all that mattered and will matter is the flame. The purple shining gem now closer, but somehow the same distance all the same.

The noises around me grew louder. Deafening and rabid to what I realized was just like my own. All of a sudden I reached the light. Much unexpected to me considering it was not a lamppost or a fire as I expected but merely a small light-bug floating softly in the air in front of me. I could have sworn as long as I had looked it the little beast smiled an evil grin. To what end I could not come to as to why it seemed so deadly yet my salvation all in one.

Soon I realized the bug grew in altitude. Floating higher yet somehow remaining still. The demon looked down at me and I could have sworn I heard a laughing voice speaking to my corrupted soul, “Should have stayed near the ocean of eternity for now you sink in the shores of false divinity.” With those words of burning truth finished I felt my lungs fill with sand as I slowly lowered beneath the broken path.

title: Sinking From Eternity (x/post from /r/Stories)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the name of the main character?

answer: The main character is a nameless narrator.

answer: No answer

answer: The story doesn't give the main character a name.

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the well of eternity?

answer: The well of eternity is hidden from mankind in the woods. It lives within the realm of magic and has been hidden for eons. The hive of bees springs from the well of eternity. The trees draw their source of life directly from the well of eternity, placing them in a state of eternal life. The golden fruit, once every few hundred years or so, is the produce from the well of eternity.

text: The third sentence and the last sentence are inaccurate and should be rewritten.

refinement: The well of eternity is hidden from mankind in the woods. It lives within the realm of magic and has been hidden for eons. The trees draw their source of life directly from the well of eternity, placing them in a state of eternal life. These trees produce a golden fruit once every few hundred years or so.

answer: The well of eternity is an underground well. It gives sanctuary to magic and from where butterflies get the sweetness from their sweet cream. Immortality hides away in the Eternity's well.

text: The second sentence of the answer is inaccurate and should be rewritten.

refinement: The well of eternity is an underground well. It found sanctuary within the realms of magic. Immortality hides away in the Eternity's well.

text: The answer omits that the well was hidden away for eons, and it served as a source of life for a tree that bears golden fruits once a few hundred years and that no man outside is aware of this well. This fact should be stated.

refinement: The well of eternity is an underground well. It found sanctuary within the realms of magic. Immortality hides away in the Eternity's well and serves as a source of life for a tree that bears a golden fruit once every hundred years. It was also hidden from humankind for eons and only existed in tales of myth and false legends.

text: 'Eternity' appears with a capital 'e' in one mention, inconsistent with the other. This should be corrected.

refinement: The well of eternity is an underground well. It found sanctuary within the realms of magic. Immortality hides away in the well of eternity and serves as a source of life for a tree that bears a golden fruit once every hundred years. It was also hidden from humankind for eons and only existed in tales of myth and false legends.

answer: The well of eternity is an underground well. It gives sanctuary to magic and from where butterflies get the sweetness from their sweet cream. Immortality hides away in the well.

answer: The well of eternity is hidden away from the sight and mind of man. It is a sanctuary for immortality. The well of eternity is the source of life for the tree of eternity. There is a well of eternity at the center of the forest. The well of eternity is a well of magic. The well of eternity is a well of immortality.

text:
-The story does not mention a tree of eternity, so this is incorrect and should be removed.
-It also doesn't state that the well of eternity is at the center of the forest. This should also be removed.
-The story does not refer to the well of eternity as the well of magic. This should be corrected.

refinement: The well of eternity is hidden away from the sight and mind of man. It is a sanctuary for immortality. The well of eternity is the source of life for the tree. The well of eternity found sanctuary within the realm of magic. The well of eternity is a well of immortality.

text:
-The second sentence should be removed since the last sentence is similar to it.
-The entire answer should be rewritten because each sentence sounds monotonous.

refinement: The well of eternity is hidden away from the sight and mind of man. It also found sanctuary within the realm of magic. The well is also a well of immortality because it served as the source of life for the tree that produces golden fruits once a few hundred years.

answer: The well of eternity is a well that has been hidden away from the sight of man but flourishes in tales of myth and false legend. The well of eternity has a tree that draws its source of life from it. The tree’s leaves shine as if they were made of silver and gold, while its branches were as strong as steel. The tree's golden fruit only bears once every few hundred years. The fruit is juicy and sweet. The fruit also has a sweet dreamy cream inside.

text:
-The last sentences are irrelevant for the question and should be removed.
-The second sentence should be rewritten with the third sentence for clarity.

refinement: The well of eternity is a well that has been hidden away from the sight of man but flourishes in tales of myth and false legend. The well of eternity served as a source of life for a tree whose leaves shine as if they were made of silver and gold, while its branches were as strong as steel. The tree's golden fruit only bears once every few hundred years.

answer: The well of eternity is hidden from mankind in the woods. It lives within the realm of magic but has been hidden for eons. The hive of bees springs from the well of eternity. The trees draw their source of life directly from the well of eternity, placing them in a state of eternal life. The  golden fruit, once every few hundred years or so, is the produce from the well of eternity.

answer: The well of eternity is a well that has been hidden away from the sight of man but flourishes in tales of myth and false legend. The well of eternity has a tree that draws its source of life from it. The tree’s leaves shine as if they were made of silver and gold, while its branches were as strong as steel. The tree's golden fruit only bears once every few hundred years. The fruit is juicy and sweet.

answer: The well of eternity is hidden away from the sight and mind of man. It is a sanctuary for immortality. The well of eternity is the source of life for the tree of eternity. There is a well of eternity at the center of the forest. The well of eternity is a well of magic. The well of eternity is a well of immortality. The well is guarded by a gate.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the woods beyond the sanctuary of trees that hide the well of eternity?

answer: The narrator catches small butterflies and give it the last fruit he finds. The trees around them looked weightless and encased many secrets of the woods. The forest shielded and hid the well of eternity.The path presented to the narrator looked like a dead forest.

text: The answer does not talk about the woods beyond the sanctuary of trees that hide the well of eternity. The model should consider answering the question accurately.

refinement: The woods beyond the sanctuary of trees that hide the well of eternity are dark and full of hate. The darkness swallows the narrator whole, and it seems like the sun fears the place. The narrator feels his feet dig into what he believes is sand. He continues, with increased caution, and sees a light in the distance. He runs toward it, and when he reaches it, he realizes it's not a lamppost or a fire but a small light bug floating in the air. The light bug grows in altitude and floats higher, and the narrator feels his lungs fill with sand as he slowly lowers beneath the broken path.

answer: The narrator catches small butterflies and give it the last fruit he finds. The trees around them looked weightless and encased many secrets of the woods. The forest shielded and hid the well of eternity. The path presented to the narrator appeared to be leading north.

answer: The woods beyond the sanctuary of trees that hide the well of eternity are dark, the light of the eternity tree seemed dim, and the sun fears this place. The darkness of pitch swallowed the narrator whole. The narrator felt their feet dig into what they believe could only be sand. They were surrounded by noises. The narrator reached a light that was actually a small light-bug that spoke to the narrator's corrupted soul. The narrator sank beneath the broken path.

text:
-The second sentence to the end of the answer should be rewritten because they sound monotonous.
-Also, 'light-bug' should not be hyphenated.

refinement: The woods beyond the sanctuary of trees that hide the well of eternity are dark, the light of the eternity tree seemed dim, and the sun fears this place. The darkness of pitch swallowed the narrator whole, and they felt their feet dig into what they believed could only be sand and was surrounded by noises. The narrator eventually reached a light that was a small light bug that spoke to the narrator's corrupted soul before they sank beneath the broken path.

answer: The woods beyond the sanctuary of trees that hide the well of eternity are dark, the light of the eternity tree seemed dim, and the sun fears this place. The darkness of pitch swallowed the narrator whole. The narrator felt their feet dig into what they believe could only be sand. They were surrounded by noises. The narrator reached a light that was actually a small light-bug that spoke to the narrator's corrupted soul. The narrator sank beneath the broken path, and the bug grew in altitude, floating higher yet somehow remaining still.

answer: After the protagonist of the story, our unnamed narrator, finds the path through the woods to the edge of these woods overlooking an ocean, a gate is thrown open castigating silence and darkness. A thick, dark passage laid barren of any life leads through to the shore of eternity. The shore is teeming with a blackened garden of sand covered with what appeared to be dead and decaying branches.

text:
-The story doesn't say the woods overlook an ocean. This statement is inaccurate and should be removed.
-The story also doesn't talk about the shore of eternity. Obviously, the model is mixing it up with the shore of false divinity mentioned in the end. This should be corrected.

refinement: After the protagonist of the story, our unnamed narrator, finds the path through the woods. A dark metal gate is thrown open, castigating silence and darkness, and a thick, dark passage laid barren of any life leads through to the shores of false divinity. The shore is teeming with a blackened garden of sand covered with what appeared to be dead and decaying branches.

answer: After the protagonist of the story,  the narrator finds the path through the woods to the edge of these woods overlooking an ocean, a gate is thrown open castigating silence and darkness. A thick, dark passage laid barren of any life leads through to the shore of eternity. The shore is teeming with a blackened garden of sand covered with what appeared to be dead and decaying branches.

answer: The woods beyond the sanctuary of trees that hide the well of eternity are dark and full of hate. The darkness swallows the narrator whole, and it seems like the sun fears the place. The narrator feels his feet dig into what he believes is sand. He continues on, with increased caution, and sees a light in the distance. He runs toward it, and when he reaches it, he realizes it's not a lamppost or a fire, but a small light-bug floating in the air. The light-bug grows in altitude and floats higher, and the narrator feels his lungs fill with sand as he slowly lowers beneath the broken path.

text:
-The answer is good, but 'light-bug' should not be hyphenated.
-Also, 'continues on' is redundant. The model should consider removing 'on.'

refinement: The woods beyond the sanctuary of trees that hide the well of eternity are dark and full of hate. The darkness swallows the narrator whole, and it seems like the sun fears the place. The narrator feels his feet dig into what he believes is sand. He continues, with increased caution, and sees a light in the distance. He runs toward it, and when he reaches it, he realizes it's not a lamppost or a fire but a small light bug floating in the air. The light bug grows in altitude and floats higher, and the narrator feels his lungs fill with sand as he slowly lowers beneath the broken path.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the protagonist?

answer: The protagonist is a man who is exploring a forest. He finds a fruit that he cuts in half and eats one half and gives the other half to a butterfly. He sees a path that leads to a gate made of dark metals. He pushes the gate open and goes through the passageway. He reaches the light and realizes it is a small light-bug. The light-bug speaks to him and tells him that he has been lured to the shores of false divinity.

text: The answer omits that the protagonist encountered the well of eternity that provided life to one of the trees in the woods, which bore golden fruits. It was the golden fruit the protagonist shared with the butterfly, so it only makes sense to mention the origin of the fruit.

refinement: The protagonist began exploring a forest after following a butterfly. He finds the well of eternity that gave life to a tree that bears golden fruits once every hundred years. He picks one of the fruits and cuts it in half, eats one half, and gives the other half to the butterfly. He sees a path that leads to a gate made of dark metals. He pushes the gate open and goes through the passageway. He reaches the light and realizes it is a small light-bug. The light-bug speaks to him and tells him that he has been lured to the shores of false divinity.

text: 'light-bug' should not be hyphenated. The model should correct this.

refinement: The protagonist began exploring a forest after following a butterfly. He finds the well of eternity that gave life to a tree that bears golden fruits once every hundred years. He picks one of the fruits, cuts it in half, eats one half, and gives the other half to the butterfly. He sees a path that leads to a gate made of dark metals. He pushes the gate open and goes through the passageway. He reaches the light and realizes it is a small light bug. The light bug speaks to him and tells him that he has been lured to the shores of false divinity.

answer: The protagonist is a man who is exploring a forest. He finds a fruit that he cuts in half and eats one half and gives the other half to a butterfly. He sees a path that leads to a gate made of dark metals. He pushes the gate open and goes through the passageway. He reaches the light and realizes it is a small light-bug. The light-bug speaks to him and tells him that he has been lured to the shores of false divinity. The protagonist dies.

answer: The protagonist is a man, who is lured by the allure of the ring that sends out a purple glow. The pathway the protagonist takes is a creepy and dark place but he does not care. He is motivated by his need to go in pursuit of the light despite the demon warning him of doing so being a lure and the pathway eventually leading to his doom.

text: The first and last sentences are inaccurate and should be rewritten.

refinement: The protagonist is a man who is lured by the beauty of a butterfly. He encounters the well of eternity and the tree which it gave life. He eats the golden fruit of the tree and shares it with the butterfly. He finds a pathway and follows it, which leads him to a creepy and dark place, but he does not care. He is motivated by his need to pursue the purple light despite his instincts warning him of not doing so. It eventually led to his doom.

answer: The protagonist is a young person, who is lured by the allure of the ring that sends out a purple glow. The pathway the protagonist takes is a creepy and dark place but he does not care. He is motivated by his need to go in pursuit of the light despite the demon warning him of doing so being a lure and the pathway eventually leading to his doom.

answer: The narrator is in search of something magical in the "Waters of Eternity" and is eager to discover it.  The protagonist finds out that immortality hides away in the realm of magic. The dark metal that guards the place feels inviting and tempts them to take a look. They are also lured by a light in the distance and run towards it.

text: The model's answer should be rewritten.

refinement: The protagonist is a man who is lured by the beauty of a butterfly. He encounters the well of eternity and the tree which it gave life. He eats the golden fruit of the tree and shares it with the butterfly. He finds a pathway and follows it, which leads him to a creepy and dark place, but he does not care. He is motivated by his need to pursue the purple light despite his instincts warning him of not doing so. It eventually led to his doom.

answer: The protagonist is a man who finds an eternity tree in the woods. The tree is a sanctuary for immortality, and the protagonist eats a fruit from it. He finds a path and goes through it, and he comes across a gate guarded by a dark metal that seems to be inviting him to take a stroll beyond it. He finds a light-bug and runs toward it, only to realize that he is sinking in the shores of false divinity.

text: The story says the well of eternity is a sanctuary for immortality and not the tree. This should be corrected or removed.

refinement: The protagonist is a man who finds an eternity tree in the woods and eats a fruit from it. He finds a path and goes through it, and he comes across a gate guarded by a dark metal that seems to be inviting him to take a stroll beyond it. He finds a light-bug and runs toward it, only to realize that he is sinking in the shores of false divinity.

text: 'light-bug' should not be hyphenated.

refinement: The protagonist is a man who finds an eternity tree in the woods and eats a fruit from it. He finds a path and goes through it, and he comes across a gate guarded by a dark metal that seems to be inviting him to take a stroll beyond it. He finds a light bug and runs toward it, only to realize that he is sinking in the shores of false divinity.

answer: The narrator is in search of something magical in the "Waters of Eternity" and is eager to discover it.  The protagonist finds out that immortality hides away in a tree in a magical realm. The dark metal that guards the place feels inviting and tempts them to take a look. They are also lured by a light in the distance and run towards it.

answer: The protagonist is a man who finds an eternity tree in the woods. The tree is a sanctuary for immortality, and the protagonist eats a fruit from it. He finds a path and goes through it, and he comes across a gate guarded by a dark metal that seems to be inviting him to take a stroll beyond it.


text:
[Two unfinished _Gasing_.] GASING PANGKAH is a competitive Malay game of spinning tops in which two or more players compete to strike each other's top out of a circle or to make it fall over and stop spinning.[1]

Considered part of the Malay state heritage, official tournaments are held, with a declared goal of exposing the younger generation to the game.[2]

The game is also popular in neighboring Brunei, and in 2013, a Gasing Pangkah tournament was held as part of the celebrations of the 67th birthday of the Sultan of Brunei.[3]

[1] https://malaysiansinnewzealand.wordpress.com/2012/03/20/spinning-the-gasing/

[2] Selangor Open Gasing Pangkah Tournament announcement on the Malay Customs & Heritage Corporation in Selangor web site

[3] 'Gasing Pangkah' Top Spinning Contest on the Radio Television Brunei news center web site

title: Gasing pangkah

question: How can you describe Gasing Pangkah?

answer: Gasing Pangkah is a competitive Malay game of spinning tops in which two or more players compete to strike each other's top out of a circle or to make it fall over and stop spinning.

answer: Gasing Pangkah is a traditional Malay game in which players compete to knock each other's spinning top out of a circle or make it fall over.

answer: It is a competitive Malay game of spinning tops in which two or more players compete to strike each other's top out of a circle or to make it fall over and stop spinning.

answer: Gasing Pangkah is a competitive Malay game of spinning tops in which two or more players compete to strike each other's top out of a circle or to make it fall over and stop spinning.

question: What is a goal of this game and the tournaments held for this game?

answer: The goal is to expose the younger generation to the game.

answer: The goal of this game is to strike each other's top out of a circle or to make it fall over and stop spinning.

text: Describe the purpose of the tournament not the game itself

refinement: The tournaments are held to promote the game and expose younger generations to it.

answer: The goal is to expose the younger generation to the game.

answer: The goal of the game of Gasing Pangkah is to strike the other player's top out of the circle or to make it fall over and stop spinning. The tournaments are held to promote the game and expose younger generations to it.

text: Remove first sentence

refinement: The tournaments are held to promote the game and expose younger generations to it.

question: How did the Sultan of Brunei celebrate his 67th birthday?

answer: He held a Gasing Pangkah tournament.

answer: He held a Gasing Pangkah tournament as part of his birthday celebrations.

answer: The Sultan of Brunei celebrated his 67th birthday by hosting a Gasing Pangkah tournament.

answer: The Sultan of Brunei celebrated his 67th birthday by holding a Gasing Pangkah tournament.

question: Where else is Gasing Pangkah played?

answer: In Brunei

answer: Gasing Pangkah is also popular in neighboring Brunei.

answer: In Brunei.

answer: This game is also played in Brunei.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Gasing Pangkah is a competitive Malay game of spinning tops in which two or more players compete to strike each other's top out of a circle or to make it fall over and stop spinning.

answer: This article describes a Malay heritage game called Gasing Pangkah.

answer: Gasing Pangkah is a traditional Malay game in which players compete to knock each other's spinning tops out of a circle or make them fall over.

answer: Gasing Pangkah is a competitive Malay game of spinning tops in which two or more players compete to strike each other's top out of a circle or to make it fall over and stop spinning.