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[Chorin Abbey] [Aerial view] CHORIN ABBEY (German - _Kloster Chorin_) is a former Cistercian abbey near the village of Chorin in Brandenburg, Germany. It was founded by the Ascanian margraves in 1258 and had far-reaching influence on the northern edge of the Ascanians' sphere of influence, where it bordered with the Slavs. It was secularized in 1542 and allowed to decay until the early 19th century, when the ruins were restored and the building partly rebuilt under the direction of Karl Friedrich Schinkel. It is now an archetypal example of the Brick Gothic style and part of the .[1]

Some scenes in the 1912 film _Das Mirakel_ were filmed there.[2]

[1] Cante, Marcus (2013). _Zisterzienserkloster Chorin: Geschichte – Forschung – Denkmalpflege_. Forschungen und Beiträge zur Denkmalpflege im Land Brandenburg, Vol 15. In German. .

[2] *

title: Chorin Abbey

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is Chorin Abbey?

answer: a former Cistercian abbey near the village of Chorin in Brandenburg, Germany

answer: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey near the village of Chorin in Brandenburg, Germany.

answer: Chorin abbey is a former Cistercian abbey.

answer: Filming site for Das Mirakel, a movie from 1912.

text: Doesn't include a general description.

refinement: A former Cistercian abbey in Chorin Brandenburg, Germany. It's also the filming site for Das Mirakel, a movie from 1912.

answer: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey founded by the Ascanian margraves in 1258. It is located near the village of Chorin in Brandenburg and is an example of the Brick Gothic style.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who founded Chorin Abbey?

answer: It was founded by the Ascanian margrave

answer: The Catholic monks and the Ascanian margraves.

answer: The Ascanian margraves founded Chorin Abbey in 1258.

answer: the Ascanian margraves

answer: The Ascanian margraves founded Chorin Abbey in 1258.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was Chorin Abbey founded?

answer: 1258

answer: 1258

answer: Chorin Abbey was founded in 1258.

answer: Chorin Abbey was founded in 1258.

answer: 1256

text: Wrong year.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was the film Das Mirakel released?

answer: 1912

answer: 1912

answer: According to the article and the grammar that implies a date, it is 1912.

answer: The film Das Mirakel was released in 1912.

answer: Das Mirakel was released in 1912.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey in Germany, which was founded in 1258. It is part of the Brick Gothic style and was a filming location for the 1912 film _Das Mirakel_.

text: Doesn't mention who founded it.

refinement: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey in Germany, which was founded in 1258 by the Ascanian margraves. It is part of the Brick Gothic style and was a filming location for the 1912 film _Das Mirakel_.

text: Too long.

refinement: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey in Germany, which was founded in 1258 by the Ascanian margraves, it is part of the Brick Gothic style and was a filming location for the 1912 film _Das Mirakel_.

answer: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey located in Brandenburg, Germany. It was founded by the Ascanian margraves in 1258 and is now a historical building exemplifying the Brick Gothic style. Some scenes in the 1912 film Das Mirakel were filmed there.

text: Too long.

refinement: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey located in Brandenburg, Germany founded by the Ascanian margraves in 1258 and is now a historical building exemplifying the Brick Gothic style; some scenes in the 1912 film Das Mirakel were filmed there.

answer: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey near the village of Chorin in Brandenburg, Germany.

text: Doesn't mention who founded it.

refinement: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey near the village of Chorin in Brandenburg, Germany founded by the Ascanian margraves in 1258.

text: Doesn't describe its architecture.

refinement: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey near the village of Chorin in Brandenburg, Germany founded by the Ascanian margraves in 1258 and is now a historical building exemplifying the Brick Gothic style.

text: Doesn't mention filming of Da Mirakel

refinement: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey near the village of Chorin in Brandenburg, Germany founded by the Ascanian margraves in 1258 and is now a historical building exemplifying the Brick Gothic style; some scenes in the 1912 film Das Mirakel were filmed there.

answer: Chorin Abbey is a brick gothic style former poor house near the village of Chorin in Brandenberg, Germany.

text: Doesn't mention it's origins or who founded it.

refinement: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey located in Brandenburg, Germany founded by the Ascanian margraves in 1258, a brick gothic style former poor house near the village of Chorin in Brandenberg, Germany.

text: Doesn't mention filming of Das Mirakel.

refinement: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey located in Brandenburg, Germany founded by the Ascanian margraves in 1258, a brick gothic style former poor house near the village of Chorin in Brandenberg, Germany; some scenes in the 1912 film Das Mirakel were filmed there.

answer: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey near the village of Chorin in Brandenburg, Germany.

text: Doesn't mention who founded it.

refinement: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey near the village of Chorin in Brandenburg, Germany founded by the Ascanian margraves in 1258.

text: Doesn't describe its architecture.

refinement: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey near the village of Chorin in Brandenburg, Germany founded by the Ascanian margraves in 1258 and is now a historical building exemplifying the Brick Gothic style.

text: Doesn't mention filming of Das Mirakel.

refinement: Chorin Abbey is a former Cistercian abbey near the village of Chorin in Brandenburg, Germany founded by the Ascanian margraves in 1258 and is now a historical building exemplifying the Brick Gothic style; some scenes in the 1912 film Das Mirakel were filmed there.


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		                    Logic’s Respite

	The dusky glow of the lamps was the only thing between him and the outside world. The winds gusted outside, making the trees creek as if each limb was letting out an emotionless howl. The man listened to the inane chatter of the people on the television, telling him of his impending doom. And he could see it outside. It was as if he felt that by watching the television, something might change. Somehow the meteorologist might tell the man that the storm would go east of him. Or west. It didn’t matter, as long as it didn’t hit him. Or perhaps the man watched the television simply because he needed the comfort of another human voice. He was, after all, completely alone.
	The man was tall, fit, and wearing the not so modest t-shirt of his prestigious alma mater. He was a man who had lived by himself since graduating college, and sat comfortably at 31 years of age. His small, cozy house was a perfect reflection of his personality. It was decorated with colorful artifacts from the various places he had traveled, as well as showcasing numerous books on a wide variety of subjects, most notably philosophy. However, for all of the house’s apparent worldliness, it was all but closed up from the outside world.  All but one of the windows were covered by thick blinds, and the window that wasn’t was a small one that the man was using to watch the sky. Above the fireplace hung a bold picture of the man, apparently camping in some exotic wilderness. And opposite the television hung the skull of an antelope, recovered by the man perhaps on the same camping excursion.
	The man’s tense body was gleaming with sweat. He kept his eyes trained on the television, looking out at the sky whenever he heard a gust, or far off boom of thunder. He tried not looking, but felt uncomfortable when he didn’t know what was happening. The television rambled on at a comfortingly uniform pace.

	It had been 48 minutes. He had counted. The rain came down harder and faster; he felt the house shake as a massive gust swept the landscape; the storm seemed to be upon him, but how could that be so? It was supposed to be another 37 minutes until it hit. He hadn’t planned on this, and being caught so off-guard made the man feel sick. The sirens went off in the distance. To him they sounded like a funeral dirge.
	He tried to relax, but couldn’t. He turned his electric fireplace on, and tried to read a few sentences of his book, written by Aristotle. He threw the book down, and sat in dolorous silence. He jumped every time a strong gust of wind blustered, or a bolt of lightning illuminated the sky. Five minutes seemed like an eternity, and unsurprisingly the storm did not cease.
	The atmosphere quivered and then burst with the explosion of thunder, and quick, deadly arrows of lightning. The man shook, and was tense all over. The dim lights that blanketed the man flickered, and then died. The consoling chatter of the television was silenced, cut off in its prime. The darkness enveloped him, and he felt more alone than ever. The night was suffocating him with its dark shroud, and he nearly screamed. The panic suddenly pounced on him, and he was caught unaware.
	He ran into the kitchen to grab a candle, but there were none. He ran to the drawer in the dining room, and grabbed his flashlight. It was out of batteries. He was unprepared. He berated himself in his head for not having prepared, and swore that if he made it out of the storm, he would make sure his house was completely danger-proof. And he truly believed it. He remembered, in his darkest moment, that he had his cell phone in his pocket, and he still had a signal. He dialed a number he knew by heart, but one he had not dialed in a long while. He hesitated. The rain began pounding harder, and another crash of thunder shook even the inside of the house, causing his precious philosophy books to fall off the shelf. He didn’t pick them up.
	He knew what he had to do, and dialed the number. It rang. Again. Again. Again. Again. The mechanical voice of his mother’s voicemail was the only response he received. A reluctant tear dripped down his face, placing itself on his shirt’s fiery logo.

	The sirens blared louder, and the man ran down the old carpeted stairs of his house into the small basement. The basement was pitch black. The man felt his way into the laundry room, which was without windows, and therefore the safest place to be when the tornado inevitably struck.  The man was cowering against the wall, with no intention of composing himself, when suddenly the unexpected happened. The rain let up. The thunder did not sound. The gusts of wind slowed to mere wisps. He stood up and dusted himself off, starting off to return upstairs. But as he climbed the old stairs, he heard a howling reminiscent of a banshee shrieking. Pieces of debris were slammed into the windows of the house, and almost simultaneously, they all shattered.
	The man bolted downstairs, back to the laundry room. He heard a crash, and it was obvious that the large evergreen tree in the yard had collapsed into the house, perhaps even breaking down the wall. The man was kneeling against the wall, and doing the unthinkable. He had always ascribed to the old theory of Albert Camus, that “religion is philosophical suicide,” and had been adamant about the inexistence of a deity. However in this moment, he prayed harder than anyone had ever prayed before. He swore to whoever was listening that he would forever more be a pious follower of their religion, if he were to be spared. He quietly wept, whilst forming the words of his desperate prayer.

	The five minutes that the storm ravaged the man’s house were hours to the man. He had been spared. He quickly got up and ran upstairs to assess the damage to his house. He picked up a book that had been tossed on the floor, and straightened out his shirt, quickly wiping a tear from his eye. The tree had indeed caved in the wall of his house, and destroyed most of the living room. The man forgot about his prayers, and his self-assurances that he would make preparations for a future disaster, and set to work fixing up the ruin that was his house. He decided he would call the insurance company in the morning, and have a grand time renovating his home, making it even cozier than before. But first he would get a good night’s sleep, and forget all that had transpired.

	But what the man didn’t notice that night was that only one of his exotic decorations had survived the storm. The only artifact that had not been destroyed was the skull of the antelope, hanging quietly and humbly on the wall, seeming to gaze at the destruction with a simple wisdom. The next morning the man noticed the antelope skull on the wall, and, as it brought back memories of the storm, he decided he would give it away. But when he tried to pull the skull off the wall, it wouldn’t budge. The hollow eyes merely gazed past the man, into the distance, where they undoubtedly saw, many miles in the distance, a black storm cloud. And it was heading this way.

title: "Logic's Respite" - short story I wrote. Thoughts? Criticisms?

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why are alarms ringing?

answer: The man is watching a storm approach and all the while staring at the television. Suddenly the sounds of alarms blaring are heard, indicating that the storm is about to hit. He panics and looks for a way to protect himself. Unable to find anything and failing to properly prepare himself for the storm, the man rushes into the basement. The storm rages and destroys his living room, breaking the windows, but he is unharmed.

text: Everything but the second sentence is irrelevant. All that needs to be said is that a storm is about to hit.

refinement: The sounds of alarms were indicating that the storm was about to hit.

answer: The man thinks it's because of the storm but that isn't the case

text: "but that isn't the case" is false. It is the case.

refinement: The man thinks it's because of the storm.

text: The man doesn't just think it's because of the storm, it is definitely because of the storm/tornado.

answer: The alarms are sounding because a tornado is imminent and approaching the man's home.

answer: The man thinks that the meteorologists have made a mistake.

text: This is incorrect. The man never mentions meteorologists having made a mistake.

text: Blank response.

refinement: The sirens are meant to alert people of an oncoming tornado.

answer: The place where the main character lives is experiencing a huge storm.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where does the story take place?

answer: The story centers on a young man's apartment.

text: Technically, it isn't an apartment but a small home.

refinement: The story centers on a young man's small home.

text: "In" should be used instead of "on".

refinement: The story centers on a young man's small home.

text: At 31, the man isn't necessarily a young man.

refinement: The story centers on a man's small home.

text: It's omitted that the setting is also during a storm

refinement: The story centers on a man's small home during a storm.

answer: The story takes place mostly in the protagonist's home, though he momentarily seeks refuge in the basement during the storm.

text: The comment about the basement isn't totally necessary, being that it takes place inside the protagonist's home.

refinement: The story takes place mostly in the protagonist's home during the a storm.

answer: The protagonist's house, before a storm hits.

answer: The story takes place in the man's house which has sustained damage during a storm.

text: The home doesn't sustain damage until the end, so mention of the damage is unnecessary.

refinement: The story takes place in the man's house during a storm.

answer: The man's house

text: It's omitted that the setting was during a storm.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who does he call?

answer: The man calls his mother but the call does not go through.

text: " It rang. Again. Again. Again. Again. The mechanical voice of his mother’s voicemail was the only response he received."

answer: He calls his mother but she doesn't answer.

text: " It rang. Again. Again. Again. Again. The mechanical voice of his mother’s voicemail was the only response he received."

answer: The man calls his mother.

text: " It rang. Again. Again. Again. Again. The mechanical voice of his mother’s voicemail was the only response he received."

answer: The man calls his mother for comfort and safety during the devastating storm.

text: " It rang. Again. Again. Again. Again. The mechanical voice of his mother’s voicemail was the only response he received."

answer: His mother.

text: " It rang. Again. Again. Again. Again. The mechanical voice of his mother’s voicemail was the only response he received."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What happens during the storm?

answer: During the storm, a tornado strikes the man's house, causing damaged and destruction. The man prays as the storm strikes, but is ultimately spared the worst of the damage. Post-storm, the man decides to give the antelope skull away, but is unable to remove it from the wall.

text: The question asks for "during the storm". The sentence about the storm aftermath is irrelevant to the question.

refinement: During the storm, a tornado strikes the man's house, causing damaged and destruction. The man prays as the storm strikes, but is ultimately spared the worst of the damage.

text: It's omitted that the man takes cover in his basement.

refinement: During the storm, a tornado strikes the man's house, causing damaged and destruction.  The man takes cover in his basement. The man prays as the storm strikes, but is ultimately spared the worst of the damage.

answer: The man's house is ravaged by the storm and he prays to unknown deities to survive.

text: It's omitted that the man takes cover in his basement from a tornado.

refinement: The man's house is ravaged by the storm. He takes cover in his basement from a tornado and prays to unknown deities to survive.

answer: The man runs to the basement as a tornado sends debris through the house. He prays he doesn't get struck by the storm. The thunder calms and the rain lets up. The man is relieved; his house survived.

text: The final sentence is irrelevant to the question because it describes the aftermath of the storm, not what happens during.

refinement: The man runs to the basement as a tornado sends debris through the house. He prays he doesn't get struck by the storm. The thunder calms and the rain lets up.

answer: The man is fearful of having an approaching storm. The televisions breaks off mid-story and the narrator feels alone, even in his own house. The house presages the storm as glass breaks and wind shakes the house. The man is rendered defenseless and relies on a few old artifacts to survive.

text: The final sentence is false in regards to the artifacts. Replace this by mentioning the man hides in his basement and prays to an unknown deity to survive the tornado.

refinement: The man is fearful of having an approaching storm. The televisions breaks off mid-story and the narrator feels alone, even in his own house. The man hides in his basement and prays to an unknown deity to survive the tornado. The house presages the storm as glass breaks and wind shakes the house.

answer: The man is caught unaware by a massive storm and is unprepared for the danger. He feels terrified and alone until the storm eases and he starts to rebuild. However, the antelope skull on his wall seems to be a reminder of the danger that might come again someday.

text: "until the storm eases" and the final sentence are irrelevant to the question because that describes the storm aftermath.

refinement: The man is caught unaware by a massive storm and is unprepared for the danger. He feels terrified and alone

text: It's omitted that the man hides in his basement from the tornado.

refinement: The man is caught unaware by a massive storm and is unprepared for the danger. He feels terrified and alone, but decides to take cover in his basement to keep safe from the tornado.

text: It's omitted that his home is damaged.

refinement: The man is caught unaware by a massive storm and is unprepared for the danger. He feels terrified and alone, but decides to take cover in his basement to keep safe from the tornado. His home sustains damage during the storm.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the antelope skull for?

answer: The antelope skull serves as a reminder of the destructive power of storms. It is a reminder that nature is volatile and unpredictable and can pose a threat. The man feels shame for being unprepared, and pledges to be prepared for the next storm if he can survive this one.

text: There is no true answer about the use of the skull, it can only be assumed. To make this an accurate answer, "it could be assumed" should be used in the answer.

refinement: It could be assumed that the antelope skull serves as a reminder of the destructive power of storms. It is a reminder that nature is volatile and unpredictable and can pose a threat. The man feels shame for being unprepared, and pledges to be prepared for the next storm if he can survive this one.

text: The final sentence is false. He forgets the pledge he made at the end.

refinement: It could be assumed that the antelope skull serves as a reminder of the destructive power of storms. It could also possibly be a reminder that nature is volatile and unpredictable and can pose a threat.

answer: That information isn't given in the text.

answer: The antelope skull was a symbol of resilience to the protagonist, reminding him that he would not be defeated by the challenges he encountered. It was supposed to serve as a reminder of hope.

text: There is no true answer about the use of the skull, it can only be assumed. To make this an accurate answer, "it could be assumed" should be used in the answer.

refinement: It could be seen as a symbol of resilience to the protagonist, reminding him that he would not be defeated by the challenges he encountered. It may also serve as a reminder of hope.

answer: It may not be clear from the story. It may be decoration or just simply existential bait

answer: It predicts the impending doom of the man.

text: There is no true answer about the use of the skull, it can only be assumed. To make this an accurate answer, "it could be assumed" should be used in the answer.

refinement: It could be assumed that it predicts the impending doom of the man.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: The protagonist sits in his house during a tornado warning and finds himself alone, tense, and feeling completely vulnerable. The storm rattles his home and destroys many of its windows. The protagonist makes a desperate prayer to a deity and is miraculously spared. The next day, he is left with a reminder of the havoc wreaked on his home in the form of an antelope skull that seems to watch as another storm approaches.

text: It's not clear if there is a next day in this story. It would be better to label that as "after the storm".

refinement: The protagonist sits in his house during a tornado warning and finds himself alone, tense, and feeling completely vulnerable. The storm rattles his home and destroys many of its windows. The protagonist makes a desperate prayer to a deity and is miraculously spared. After the storm, he is left with a reminder of the havoc wreaked on his home in the form of an antelope skull that seems to watch as another storm approaches.

text: There are only four instead of the requested five sentences. Include that the man hides out in his basement as the tornado hits.

refinement: The protagonist sits in his house during a tornado warning and finds himself alone, tense, and feeling completely vulnerable. He hides out in his basement as the tornado hits. The storm rattles his home and destroys many of its windows. The protagonist makes a desperate prayer to a deity and is miraculously spared. After the storm, he is left with a reminder of the havoc wreaked on his home in the form of an antelope skull that seems to watch as another storm approaches.

answer: The man tries to stay calm in the midst of an impending thunderstorm. The lights go out, the sirens sound, and the tree in his yard falls, smashing into the house. In his darkest moment, the man prays. In the aftermath of the storm, he discovers that a skull from his exotic travels stopped the tree from entering the house and destroying it. He decides to give the skull away, but it is stuck to the wall. Eventually, he realizes that the storm is coming back this way.

text: There is no mention of the tornado.

refinement: The man tries to stay calm in the midst of an impending thunderstorm and tornado. The lights go out, the sirens sound, and the tree in his yard falls, smashing into the house. In his darkest moment, the man prays. In the aftermath of the storm, he discovers that a skull from his exotic travels stopped the tree from entering the house and destroying it. He decides to give the skull away, but it is stuck to the wall. Eventually, he realizes that the storm is coming back this way.

text: It's omitted that the man hides from the tornado in the basement.

refinement: The man tries to stay calm in the midst of an impending thunderstorm and tornado. The lights go out, the sirens sound, and the tree in his yard falls, smashing into the house. In his darkest moment, the man prays while he hides from the tornado in his basement. In the aftermath of the storm, he discovers that a skull from his exotic travels stopped the tree from entering the house and destroying it. He decides to give the skull away, but it is stuck to the wall. Eventually, he realizes that the storm is coming back this way.

text: This is six instead of five sentences. Combine the final two sentences.

refinement: The man tries to stay calm in the midst of an impending thunderstorm and tornado. The lights go out, the sirens sound, and the tree in his yard falls, smashing into the house. In his darkest moment, the man prays while he hides from the tornado in his basement. In the aftermath of the storm, he discovers that a skull from his exotic travels stopped the tree from entering the house and destroying it. He decides to give the skull away, but it is stuck to the wall and he realizes that the storm is coming back this way.

text: The skull did not stop the tree. This is false.

refinement: The man tries to stay calm in the midst of an impending thunderstorm and tornado. The lights go out, the sirens sound, and the tree in his yard falls, smashing into the house. In his darkest moment, the man prays while he hides from the tornado in his basement. In the aftermath of the storm, he discovers that a skull from his exotic travels remained. He decides to give the skull away, but it is stuck to the wall and he realizes that the storm is coming back this way.

answer: A man looks out his window at the approaching tornado. He is uncertain of its path, fear about the possibility of it hitting him mounts. The news shows trees blowing over and crashes, he stays in his basement for safety; the winds come sooner than expected and his house suffers storm damage. He goes back to his routine the next day, forgetting about his prayers to God, untouched by the storm was one of his prized possessions - a skull of an antelope.

text: The man doesn't look out his window to see a tornado. It would be better to say he is trying to stay calm as he learns more about the impending storm.

refinement: A man tries to stay calm as he learns about the impending storm. He is uncertain of its path, fear about the possibility of it hitting him mounts. The news shows trees blowing over and crashes, he stays in his basement for safety; the winds come sooner than expected and his house suffers storm damage. He goes back to his routine the next day, forgetting about his prayers to God, untouched by the storm was one of his prized possessions - a skull of an antelope.

text: The news doesn't show trees or crashes. It would be better to omit this falsehood.

refinement: A man tries to stay calm as he learns about the impending storm. He is uncertain of its path, fear about the possibility of it hitting him mounts. He stays in his basement for safety; the winds come sooner than expected and his house suffers storm damage. He goes back to his routine the next day, forgetting about his prayers to God, untouched by the storm was one of his prized possessions - a skull of an antelope.

text: The tornado is omitted.

refinement: A man tries to stay calm as he learns about the impending storm. He is uncertain of its path, fear about the possibility of it hitting him mounts. He stays in his basement for safety; the tornado comes sooner than expected and his house suffers storm damage. He goes back to his routine the next day, forgetting about his prayers to God, untouched by the storm was one of his prized possessions - a skull of an antelope.

text: It's omitted that the skull won't be come off the wall, and that it stares into a storm cloud that's approaching the man's home.

refinement: A man tries to stay calm as he learns about the impending storm. He is uncertain of its path, fear about the possibility of it hitting him mounts. He stays in his basement for safety; the tornado comes sooner than expected and his house suffers storm damage. He goes back to his routine the next day, forgetting about his prayers to God, untouched by the storm was one of his prized possessions - a skull of an antelope. The skull refuses to come off the wall, and it stares into a storm cloud that's approaching the man's home.

text: It's not clear if it's the next day after the storm, so it would be better to just say "after the storm".

refinement: A man tries to stay calm as he learns about the impending storm. He is uncertain of its path, fear about the possibility of it hitting him mounts. He stays in his basement for safety; the tornado comes sooner than expected and his house suffers storm damage. After the storm, he goes back to his routine, forgetting about his prayers to God. Untouched by the storm was one of his prized possessions - a skull of an antelope, which refuses to come off the wall, and stares into a storm cloud that's approaching the man's home.

answer: A man cowers in his apartment alone while a storm approaches. When the storm arrives, his fear grows worse. He hides in the basement while a tree crashes into the upper floor. When the storm is over, his only remaining decoration is an antelope skull that is magically attached to the wall. the skull's eyes are fixated on another large storm in the distance.

text: Technically the man's home is not an apartment, it's a small house.

refinement: A man cowers in his small home alone while a storm approaches. When the storm arrives, his fear grows worse. He hides in the basement while a tree crashes into the upper floor. When the storm is over, his only remaining decoration is an antelope skull that is magically attached to the wall. the skull's eyes are fixated on another large storm in the distance.

text: It's not clear if the skull is "magically" attached. It would be better to say "stuck".

refinement: A man cowers in his small home alone while a storm approaches. When the storm arrives, his fear grows worse. He hides in the basement while a tree crashes into the upper floor. When the storm is over, his only remaining decoration is an antelope skull that is completely stuck to the wall. The skull's eyes are fixated on another large storm in the distance.

answer: A man is alone in his house, watching the TV. A storm is approaching. Suddenly without warning, the thunder and lightning begin to violently batter the house. The lights switch off. Alone in the darkness of his cellar he trembles and prays to be spared. The storm abates only to be replaced with the construction of a new storm on the horizon.

text: Combine the first two sentences. It increases flow.

refinement: A man is alone in his house, watching the TV as a storm is approaching. Suddenly without warning, the thunder and lightning begin to violently batter the house. The lights switch off. Alone in the darkness of his cellar he trembles and prays to be spared. The storm abates only to be replaced with the construction of a new storm on the horizon.

text: The tornado is omitted.

refinement: A man is alone in his house, watching the TV as a storm is approaching. Suddenly without warning, the thunder and lightning begin to violently batter the house. The lights switch off. Alone in the darkness of his cellar he trembles and prays to be spared from the tornado. The storm abates only to be replaced with the construction of a new storm on the horizon.

text: The detail of the destroyed living room and the only remaining piece of decor is omitted.

refinement: A man is alone in his house, watching the TV as a storm is approaching. Suddenly without warning, the thunder and lightning begin to violently batter the house. The lights switch off. Alone in the darkness of his cellar he trembles and prays to be spared from the tornado. The storm abates, and in the wreckage of the man's living room is the only piece of remaining decor, his antelope skull, which refuses to come off the wall as it stares at the new storm on the horizon.


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-1-The Beginning

	It goes without saying that there has always been a rift between two food groups us humans eat, fruits and vegetables. As humans we have always just assumed that the rift would never escalade to the point where these food groups would develop so much anger that they begin a war. There had been an almost war earlier in time that almost destroyed an entire country, named by humans as the Potato Famine. In the fruit and vegetable world it goes by another name, the Slaughter of the Many Potatoes. Attributed to other variables, we overlooked what was right in front of us. Fruits had become upset with sharing the limelight with vegetables and decided to strike. Send a message. So they slaughtered many potatoes. There was nothing left but mashed mess. The vegetables and potatoes especially were not prepared for this surprise attack as it was a peacetime between the food groups. It came out of nowhere and almost turned into the first world war between vegetables and the fruits. If not for one savior. Tomato Tom. Tomato Tom was the first Tomato picked during that season of the slaughter. Tomato Tom was a trained warrior but also a great delegate. He spoke two languages, that of the fruits and that of the vegetables. He was able to single handedly get the two sides to the table and agree to a settlement. The fruits would no longer slaughter the potatoes as long as the sides would be referred to as ‘Fruits and Vegetables’ and not ‘Vegetables and Fruits’. It seemed easy enough, and we forgot as time went on about the Slaughter of the Many Potatoes. Until one night, and attack on the grape community set the course for war….

2-The Attack

The community of grapes was a peaceful one among fruits. They were the brains behind establishing stems to get members of their community nutrients. They often stayed together and were very close. It was one night when they least expected it – a peacetime. A spider entered their community with one target. His purpose was to find the Great Loom Grape. The GLG was one grape of legendary status. In fact, he was a member of the Fruit of the Loom society and they were the original Fruits to sign the aforementioned No Slaughter Potato Treaty. Now as a human, you may be wondering why a spider is involved in this attack and why is the GLG his target. Spiders are known accomplices for the vegetables and natural enemies of humans. When approached with this opportunity from the vegetables to spark a war that could possibly end humanity’s ability to eat Fruits or Vegetables Post-War, the spider jumped at it.  And the target. Taking out the Great Loom Grape would nullify the peace treaty and send shock waves throughout the fruit world that would surely start the war.
The Assassin Spider, known simply as Ace, made it into the grape bowl with ease. Simply lowered himself with his web while they slept. He made his way over the stem to where the Great Loom Grape slept. He then laid many eggs of baby spiders inside the Great Loom Grape’s head. The spiders hatched instantly due to the change in climate, killing the Great Loom Grape instantly. Being hungry, the spiders then proceeded to eat all the other grapes. Leaving only a stem and cobwebs behind.

3-War Begins

It wasn’t until the morning that Ben the Banana noticed that all the grapes were just dead as fuck. He yelled to the Protector Apples who proceeded to tell the King Watermelon. Within three minutes, war preparations were being made. King Watermelon himself would led his fruit troops into battle. Meanwhile, the vegetables were more than prepared. The element of surprise was sure to be to their advantage. Their king, Tomato Tom the Fifth…
Tomato Tom the Fifth was tired of hearing all the damn stories of his super great ancestor who stopped war. This Tom was amped after a night with a jello shot and decided he had the greatness in him to betray his family and its legacy. He realized only a fruit-vegetable hybrid could truly decide the outcome of the war. He just needed to start it. It was too easy. He had his troops ready and headed into battle.

4- Death A Common Ground

The war was quick, deadly and magnificent. The common fruits and vegetables were the first to go. The apples and oranges were met by the potatoes and celery. One apple with a family of seeds to feed was ravaged by a group of potatoes. And two pieces of celery were cut in half by a rolling orange. Henery the Orange was cut down by Tomato Tom. All that was left was a pool of orange juice..with pulp..
Eventually all that was left was Tomato Tom and King Watermelon. A final showdown ensued. But of course after witty banter. King Watermelon yelled to Tom to stop the madness. Tom replied that he got off on this kind of stuff. King Watermelon tried to reason with Tom, that his ancestor was doing the right thing – for everyone. Peace had allowed the fruits to flourish and Tom even slightly crazy and senile had realized that the vegetables had gotten the short end of the stick. He raised his little green thing on the top of a tomato to strike the King. Before Tom could lay a blow, the King simply rolled Tomato Tom over. Splashing Tomato Sauce all over. It was a mess and it was cleaned up a couple days later.

5- A fitting End

Seeing all the bloodshed as a human made me realize something. All my fruit and vegetables were old and rotten, except for the watermelon in my fridge. So I threw everything out except the watermelon. I cut that and ate it, because watermelon is good and I am in fact a black writer. And not to be racist but blacks can be writers too. You thought I was going to make a black and watermelon joke. But anyway, I went grocery shopping and got new food. No war. Also, this was my imagination. In no way, were any fruits or vegetables harmed, except ironically the watermelon who was the only survivor of the war. But I hope this tale helps you realize how much we depend on fruits and vegetables. Next time you see one, say thank you.

title: Battle of Fruits and Vegetables

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why was Tomato Tom so effective in bringing peace to fruits and vegetables?

answer: Tomato Tom was effective in talking both warring parties down because he was a warrior as well as a skilled diplomat. Also, he could speak two languages - fruits' and vegetables'.

text: The apostrophes do not make it clear the final two words are in the genitive

refinement: Tomato Tom was effective in talking both warring parties down because he was a warrior as well as a skilled diplomat. Also, he could speak two languages - the language of fruits and vegetables.

answer: The war broke out between fruits and vegetables when fruits became upset having to share the limelight with vegetables. Tom was able to put things right and make peace between fruits and vegetables, the earlier details of the agreement can be seen in the beginning of the story.

text: This describes what happened in the story without describing 'why'

refinement: Tomato Tom was effective in talking both warring parties down because he was a warrior as well as a skilled diplomat. Also, he could speak two languages - the language of fruits and vegetables.

answer: Because Tomato Tom was a trained diplomat and singlehandedly worked toward peace to end the war between the factions. His negotiating skills and the fact that he is bilingual allowed him to bargain with both groups, being able to explain their viewpoints and work toward a solution to end the violence.

answer: Tomato Tom had dual language skills and was able to reconcile the two food groups. These skills made him the perfect negotiator and facilitated a peaceful ceasefire between the two warring food groups.

answer: Because he was fluent in the languages and political leaders for both sides.

text: You cannot be fluent in political leaders

refinement: Tomato Tom was effective in talking both warring parties down because he was a warrior as well as a skilled diplomat. Also, he could speak two languages - the language of fruits and vegetables.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did Tomato Tom the Fifth start another war?

answer: Tomato Tom the Fifth started another to prove he is greater than his ancestor who brokered peace between plant and vegetable many years back. He was also high on a jello shot which impaired his judgment. Finally, he believes that, as a fruit-vegetable hybrid, only he has the chance to influence that outcome of the war.

text: because he was tired of hearing about his ancestor

refinement: Tomato Tom the Fifth started another war because he was tired of hearing about his ancestor who brokered peace between plant and vegetable many years back. He was also high on a jello shot which impaired his judgment. Finally, he believes that, as a fruit-vegetable hybrid, only he has the chance to influence that outcome of the war.

text: Maintain the same tense, so make this word past tense

refinement: Tomato Tom the Fifth started another war because he was tired of hearing about his ancestor who brokered peace between plant and vegetable many years back. He was also high on a jello shot which impaired his judgment. Finally, he believed that, as a fruit-vegetable hybrid, only he has the chance to influence that outcome of the war.

answer: Tomato Tom the Fifth felt that an unequal state of peace that benefited fruits more than vegetables had been perpetuated for too long and it was time for the scales to be redressed.

text: None of this is in the story

refinement: Tomato Tom the Fifth started another war because he was tired of hearing about his ancestor who brokered peace between plant and vegetable many years back. He was also high on a jello shot which impaired his judgment. Finally, he believed that, as a fruit-vegetable hybrid, only he has the chance to influence that outcome of the war.

answer: In revenge from the first world war and to have the fruit-vegetable hybrid decide the outcome of the war.

text: The second part of this is close to the truth but the first part does not come from anywhere in the text. Inaccurate

refinement: Tomato Tom the Fifth started another war because he was tired of hearing about his ancestor who brokered peace between plant and vegetable many years back. He was also high on a jello shot which impaired his judgment. Finally, he believed that, as a fruit-vegetable hybrid, only he has the chance to influence that outcome of the war.

answer: Tomato Tom the Fifth started another war in order to start a war between Fruit and Vegetables. He hoped to nullify the peace treaty that had been established earlier to gain the advantage for the Vegetables.

text: This is a tautology

refinement: Tomato Tom the Fifth started another war because he was tired of hearing about his ancestor who brokered peace between plant and vegetable many years back. He was also high on a jello shot which impaired his judgment. Finally, he believed that, as a fruit-vegetable hybrid, only he has the chance to influence that outcome of the war. He hoped to nullify the peace treaty that had been established earlier to gain the advantage for the Vegetables.

answer: Tomato Tom the Fifth started another war because he was tired of hearing stories of the greatness of his ancestor who prevented the war. He wanted to prove the fruits and vegetables were weaker than he believed and saw starting a war as a way to prove that.

text: This sentence is ungrammatical

refinement: Tomato Tom the Fifth started another war because he was tired of hearing stories of the greatness of his ancestor who prevented the war. He was also high on a jello shot which impaired his judgment. Finally, he believed that, as a fruit-vegetable hybrid, only he has the chance to influence that outcome of the war.


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The tenant eviction crisis in Philly, where there are four times as many evictions than foreclosures, just took a step forward with the launch of the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, a new set of legal and financial services for renters in danger of losing their home.

“What this will do is help make sure that the court works in a more fair manner and helps tenants understand their rights and get the best outcome,” said Eva Gladstein, the city’s deputy managing director of Health and Human Services. “That’s the goal of the project.”

Here’s how the Eviction Prevention Project works: Tenants now have access to a long list of services from legal to financial counsel that can help them whether or not they’re currently facing eviction.

Some of the main services include:

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    A new hot line called Tenant Legal Aid Referral Line (267-443-2500) that tenants can call for help.
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    The website launch of www.phillytenant.org, which offers information on basic tenant rights and answers to questions like “How do I get my landlord to make repairs?” and “How do I get legal help?”
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    Court navigators who can help you through the process when you’re actually in the courtroom.
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    A volunteer “lawyer of the day” who will be in the courtroom to help tenants who don’t already have representation.

“Just having people even understand what is happening in court makes a huge difference in terms of having a fair outcome,” said Gladstein.

The project launch comes at a time when 1 in 14 renters in Philly were handed eviction notices in 2016. Last year, Councilwoman Helen Gym put out a call to address the eviction crisis, which disproportionately affects African Americans and women.

“When we first started unpacking a lot of what has been going on with the eviction crisis in Philadelphia, we met with advocates and heard from them directly,” said Gym. “When we heard that there were four times as many evictions in the city of Philadelphia than there were foreclosures, I got angry.”

In October 2017, Mayor Jim Kenney created a 27-person Eviction Task Force to study the city’s eviction crisis. City Council and the Department of Planning and Development’s also allocated $500,000 to help renters fight eviction.

Those funds have gone toward the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, which will be spearheaded by Community Legal Services and several other local housing and legal organizations.

The hope, too, is that the eviction prevention project will help reduce the rate of tenants being evicted from their home and thereby prevent homelessness. Said Gladstein, “People were aware of foreclosure in terms of families losing their homes, being destabilized, losing jobs, and their health, but people were not focusing on evictions. And yet we have so many evictions occurring, which are causing the same issues, if not more so because they have less security than a homeowners.”

“So in terms of making sure our neighborhoods are safe and healthy, this is a really important.”

Gym said this isn’t the last of the Eviction Task Force’s efforts to combat the eviction crisis. “Housing is a human right and we’re trying as a city to figure out what that looks like and how we do it in the best interests of everybody. We’re still far from doing as much as we hoped, but we have made a significant step today in announcing that the experiences of people who are too often neglected are not going to go unnoticed.”

question: What is the goal of the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project?

answer: The goal of the project is to make sure that the court works in a more fair manner and helps tenants understand their rights and get the best outcome.

text: The goal includes to "get the best outcome" specifically when a tenant is facing eviction

refinement: The goal of the project is to make sure that the court works in a more fair manner and helps tenants understand their rights and get the best outcome when facing eviction.

answer: The goal of the project is to help make sure that the court works in a fair manner and helps tenants understand their rights to get the best outcome.

text: The goal includes to "get the best outcome" specifically when a tenant is facing eviction

refinement: The goal of the project is to help make sure that the court works in a fair manner and helps tenants understand their rights to get the best outcome when facing eviction.

answer: The goal of the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project is to help tenants understand their rights and get the best outcome in court, in order to prevent homelessness.

answer: The goal of the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project is to help tenants understand their rights and get the best outcome.

text: The goal includes to "get the best outcome" specifically when a tenant is facing eviction

refinement: The goal of the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project is to help tenants understand their rights and get the best outcome when facing eviction.

question: Why was it a shock to learn that there are 4 times more evictions than foreclosures?

answer: The passage does not mention why it was a shock to learn that there are 4 times more evictions than foreclosures.

answer: It is surprising that there are four times as many evictions than foreclosures, as foreclosures are typically seen as a more significant problem than evictions. Evictions can lead to homelessness, which is a significant problem in Philadelphia.

text: This is a plausible answer, but nothing in the input indicates the actual reason

text: Provide a response

answer: It is not stated.

answer: The statistics for the foreclosures were known and action plans were fixed. Then the information regarding evictions became known. It was a shock to learn that social insecurity was a much bigger issue that anticipated.

text: Nothing in the input indicates the reason

text: Provide a response

question: Explain the effects of the high eviction rate?

answer: The high eviction rate is causing the same issues as foreclosure, but with less security.

text: Specifically, it causes homelessness

refinement: The high eviction rate is causing the same issues as foreclosure, but with less security, namely, it leaves people homeless.

answer: The high eviction rate in Philadelphia has a number of negative effects on the city's residents. Firstly, it can lead to homelessness, as many people who are evicted from their homes end up without a place to live. Secondly, it can destabilize families, as they often lose their primary source of income when they are evicted. Finally, it can lead to health issues, as people who are evicted often experience a decline in their overall well-being.

text: The effects the response lists are accurate to the input, but the input does not provide the explanations/justifications that the response contains

refinement: The high eviction rate in Philadelphia has a number of negative effects on the city's residents. Firstly, it can lead to homelessness. Secondly, it can destabilize families. Finally, it can lead to health issues.

text: Rephrase the effects as a single sentence

refinement: The high eviction rate in Philadelphia has a number of negative effects on the city's residents. It can lead to homelessness, destabilize families, and lead to health issues.

answer: Families lose homes, become destabilized, lose jobs and health.

text: Add a conjunction

refinement: Families lose homes, become destabilized, and lose jobs and health.

answer: The high eviction rate has caused many people to lose their homes and become homeless.

question: What services does the Eviction Prevention Project provide?

answer: A hot line that tenants can call for help, a website with information on tenant rights and answers to questions, court navigators and a volunteer lawyer for the day.

answer: The project provides a long list of services from legal to financial counsel that can help tenants whether or not they are currently facing eviction.

text: List the specific services listed in the article

refinement: The project provides a long list of services from legal to financial counsel that can help tenants whether or not they are currently facing eviction. Those services include a hot line tenants can call for help, a website where they can find answers to questions, court navigators, and a volunteer "lawyer for the day" to help tenants without other representation.

answer: The Eviction Prevention Project provides legal and financial services for renters in danger of losing their home.

text: List the specific services listed in the article

refinement: The Eviction Prevention Project provides legal and financial services for renters in danger of losing their home. Those services include a hot line tenants can call for help, a website where they can find answers to questions, court navigators, and a volunteer "lawyer for the day" to help tenants without other representation.

answer: The Eviction Prevention Project provides legal and financial services to help renters who are in danger of losing their home. These services include a hotline, court navigators, and a "lawyer of the day" who will be present in court to help those without representation.

text: There's also a website

refinement: The Eviction Prevention Project provides legal and financial services to help renters who are in danger of losing their home. These services include a hotline, a website, court navigators, and a "lawyer of the day" who will be present in court to help those without representation.

question: Which population is disproportionately affected by evictions?

answer: African Americans and women

answer: African Americans and women.

answer: According to the passage, the population that is disproportionately affected by evictions is renters.

text: This response is so obvious as to be meaningless

text: Provide a response

answer: African Americans and women.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Philadelphia developed the Eviction Prevention Project to address the previously invisible social problem of evictions. The goal of the project is to help make sure that the court works in a fair manner and helps tenants understand their rights to get the best outcome.

answer: The city of Philadelphia has launched the Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project, which offers legal and financial services to help renters who are at risk of eviction. The hope is that this will help to reduce the number of evictions in the city and prevent homelessness.

answer: The Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project is a new set of legal and financial services for renters in danger of losing their home. The project launch comes at a time when 1 in 14 renters in Philly were handed eviction notices in 2016.

text: I feel that the "1 in 14" statistic is less important than other details, such as the goal of the project

refinement: The Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project is a new set of legal and financial services for renters in danger of losing their home. The goal is to help ensure that the court works in a fair manner and help tenants understand their rights.

answer: The Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project is a new set of legal and financial services for renters in danger of losing their home. The project launch comes at a time when 1 in 14 renters in Philly were handed eviction notices in 2016.

text: I feel that the "1 in 14" statistic is less important than other details, such as the goal of the project

refinement: The Philadelphia Eviction Prevention Project is a new set of legal and financial services for renters in danger of losing their home. The goal is to help ensure that the court works in a fair manner and help tenants understand their rights.


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Defence secretary Michael Fallon has admitted that British-made cluster bombs were used by the Saudi armed forces in Yemen. He claimed though that the bombs had been used against “legitimate military targets”. Even if technically correct, this assertion will not assuage mounting concerns, not least in parliament, about British complicity in Saudi military action.

The Saudis are at the forefront of an Arab Gulf coalition which launched an intervention in Yemen in 2015 to reverse the advance of Iranian-backed Houthi rebels. They had ousted the government of Abd-Rabbu Mansour Hadi. While it was initially backed by the UN, the ensuing civilian casualties and destruction of civilian infrastructure has been condemned as a violation of the laws of war.

At the very least there will be questions for the British government to answer about when it became aware that the Saudis were using British cluster bombs supplied as long ago as the 1980s. Having signed the convention on cluster munitions that bans their use and which came into effect in 2010, Britain asserts that it opposes the production and deployment of such weapons.

Since Saudi Arabia is not, however, a signatory to the convention, it seems it cannot be held to account – and nor can the British for originally supplying the bombs decades ago. According to Fallon, meanwhile, we can be reassured: “The Saudis believe that in this particular instance they did respect international humanitarian law.” Plus, the Saudis claim, a decision to use old stocks (previously declared defunct) was made by a battlefield commander without clearance from above.

Fallon was unable to say what would happen to the remaining stocks, how many cluster bombs had been used or how many were left. But apparently the Saudis have assured the British that they will make no further use of the weapons, which can kill and maim long after the initial delivery. The individual bomblets released on impact can remain undetonated for years until stumbled upon by unwitting civilians.

This reliance on Saudi disclaimers will not assuage the concerns of those MPs, including members of the committee on arms export controls and the foreign affairs committee, which had already called for an independent inquiry or court ruling on the use of any British-supplied arms by the Saudis in Yemen. At issue is whether such use amounts to the legitimisation by Britain of a Saudi strategy that has caused the deaths of so many civilians, including children.

Last week the US administration signalled its revulsion at the civilian casualty rate and what it called “flaws in the coalition’s targeting practices and overall prosecution of the air campaign”, by announcing a curtailment of US arms supplies, in particular precision-guided weapons, to Saudi Arabia. However, prime minister Theresa May said the British would not follow suit, relying instead on Saudi assertions of innocence. Previously, Britain has said that its personnel who train the Saudis routinely warn them against transgressing international humanitarian law.

This kind of obfuscation and acceptance of the Saudi line demonstrates the intricacies of the Saudi-British relationship. The Americans are the leading suppliers of arms to Saudi Arabia, but since at least the 1980s the UK has occupied a subsidiary role which has assured British manufacturers a niche market that is essential to its defence industry.

Without lucrative contracts to supply the Saudi armed forces over the years, it would not have been possible to keep the production lines rolling as the transition was made from Tornado to Typhoon fighter jets at BAE Systems. So not only are British jobs at stake but also Britain’s independent arms production capability. And to maintain its niche in the market in the face of fierce competition, Britain has undertaken to provide training and maintenance packages that place its technicians at the heart of the Saudi defence establishment.

Alongside this, for years the British have developed a high level of cooperation with the Saudi intelligence services which successive prime ministers have claimed helps to keep British citizens safe from terrorists. When awkward questions are asked – whether by MPs or human rights campaigners – about the Saudis’ humanitarian record, their rulers have only to remind the British government of the defence contracts and security cooperation.

This is the uncomfortable reality, not just for the government but for British citizens. If presented with a detailed tally of the actual costs of a break with Saudi Arabia to the British defence industry, jobs, the economy, intelligence and security, it may well emerge that British enthusiasm to take the moral high ground will waver.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What piece of British Technology were the Saudis using?

answer: The Saudi forces were using British-made cluster bombs.

answer: Cluster bombs that were provided by Britain.

answer: Cluster bombs.

answer: They were using British-made cluster bombs.

answer: A British-made cluster bomb.

text: The bombs were definitely more than one.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why is this problematic?

answer: It raises concerns in parliament about British complicity in Saudi military action. Some cluster bombs had been supplied as long ago as 1980.

text: There is more to the situation than British's complicity.

refinement: It raises concerns in parliament about British complicity in Saudi military action, especially as the British did sign the convention of cluster munitions that bans their use (though came into effect in 2010).

answer: The might appear to be a one-sided relationship. The British must support the Saudis at all costs and that contradicts with their values and principles.

answer: This use of British-made cluster bombs is problematic because it is alleged to be a violation of international humanitarian law. As well, by relying on Saudi assertions of innocence, the British government is privileging economic interests over morality. This compromises their credibility. The moral complicity of the British government is therefore problematic.

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The use of cluster bombs by Saudi armed forces in the ongoing conflict in Yemen has drawn significant criticism, most notably due to the long-lasting destructiveness of this weaponry. The reliance of the British government on Saudi assurances of innocence for their use of these weapons is problematic for a number of reasons.

Firstly, the Saudis are not signatories to the convention banning cluster munitions. Therefore, they cannot be held to account for their use. Secondly, although British personnel claim to routinely warn the Saudis about breaking humanitarian law, these warnings are not backed up with an effective mechanism for enforcement. Finally, continuing agreements between the British defence industry and the Saudi armed forces create an incentive for the British government to turn a blind eye to any wrongdoing. Thus, this reliance on Saudi assurances is deeply problematic and indicative of a larger issue with the British government's military complicity.

answer: Cluster bombs are supposed to be banned by Britain, but they used them from ages ago.

text: Britain using cluster bombs a long time ago is not relevant to the question.

refinement: Cluster bombs are supposed to be banned by Britain as they are a party to an international treaty that banned their sale as well as their use.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What have the Saudis had to say about the British military involvement?

answer: The Saudis have told the British not to continue with the coalitions intervention in Yemen.

text: There is no evidence in the passage supporting the answer provided.

refinement: The Saudis still rely on the British to provide them with military hardware though they promised not to use cluster bombs anymore.

answer: The Saudis have assured the British that they have not engaged in any human rights violations in Yemen, though they admit to using British-made cluster bombs.

text: The answer provided is very light on "British military involvement".

refinement: The Saudis have assured the British that they have not engaged in any human rights violations in Yemen, though they admit to using British-made cluster bombs. They said the commander who used it did not get proper clearance from the top. They also declared that they will not be using cluster bombs again, though they are still dependant on the British for certain military hardware.

answer: They have maintained that they did respect international humanitarian law when dealing with their use of cluster bombs. Additionally, the Saudis task a commander who decided to use the cluster bombs without an approval from above. The remaining stocks of cluster bombs will be rendered unusable.

text: The Saudis did not promise that the remaining stock of cluster bombs will be rendered unusable.

refinement: They have maintained that they did respect international humanitarian law when dealing with their use of cluster bombs. Additionally, the Saudis task a commander who decided to use the cluster bombs without approval from above. However, Saudi's military contracts with the British still remains, with the hope that they will buy more military hardware in the future despite the moral conflicts it poses for Britain.

answer: Though Michael Fallon, defense secretary, is unable to say what would happen to the remaining stock of cluster bombs, the Saudis have assured the British that they would make no further use of the bombs.

answer: The Saudis have assured the British that they will make no further use of cluster bombs, which can kill and maim long after the initial deployment. However, the Saudis claim that the use of the weapons was in accordance with international humanitarian law.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the risk of the Saudis stopping use of the British cluster bombs?

answer: There is great risk for the British in a Saudi move not to use the cluster bombs supplied by Britain. First, according to the passage, the British have signed an international convention banning their use. Secondly, the employment of British companies in the arms industry would be jeopardized. Third, intelligence and security cooperation with the Saudis would be threatened. By relying on Saudi claims, the British are setting themselves up for significant risk when it comes to their relationship with the Saudis.

text: There is no evidence of any risk to Saudis or British if the Saudis stop the use of British-made cluster bombs.

refinement: There is no risk to the Saudis as they can easily use another weapon since they have some sort of military defense contract with Britain.

answer: Breaking ties with Saudi Arabia may lowers its chances at winning sensitive security contracts.

text: The answer does not answer the question. There is no risk to any of the parties if the Saudis to the use of the cluster bombs.

refinement: Breaking ties with Saudi Arabia may lowers its chances at winning sensitive security contracts.

answer: The risk is the stoppage of British arms exports, which includes British fighter jets.

text: The Saudis are not threatening to cancel their contract with the British if they cannot use the cluster bombs.

refinement: There is no risk to either party if the use of cluster bombs stops.

answer: One of the risks of the Saudis' continuing to use the British cluster bombs is that civilians may be harmed. Even if the bombs are being used against "legitimate military targets," there is a possibility that civilians will be hurt. Since the bomblets released on impact can remain undetonated for years, civilians who come in contact with them could be seriously injured or killed. This would run contrary to Britain's supposed opposition to the production and deployment of cluster bombs. If the Saudis continue to use the British cluster bombs recklessly, there may be a further backlash from British citizens and politicians.

text: The answer is not related to the question.

refinement: There is no risk to the Saudis as they can easily use another weapon since they have some sort of military defense contract with Britain.

answer: The consistent use of the bombs by the Saudis implies the existence of lucrative contracts between them and the British. Without such contracts going forward, there are British jobs as well as independent  arms production capability.

text: The British are no longer producing cluster bombs.

refinement: There is no risk to the Saudis as they can easily use another weapon since they have some sort of military defense contract with Britain.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: This article discusses the U.S.'s and UK's roles in supplying Saudi Arabia cluster bombs to be used in Yemen's civil war. There are massive casualties caused by cluster bombs, leaving civilians confused and in peril of years. The UK plans to keep supporting Saudi Arabia and US ambitions to bomb Yemen.

text: The UK and US have not expressly supported Saudi Arabia's ambition to bomb Yemen.

refinement: This article discusses the U.S.'s and UK's roles in supplying Saudi Arabia cluster bombs to be used in Yemen's civil war. There are massive casualties caused by cluster bombs, leaving civilians confused and in peril of years.

answer: British weapons were used by the Saudi armed force in Yemen. The US has stopped arms supplies to Saudi Arabia after criticizing the airforce's targeting and prosecution of the air campaign. The UK is going along with the assurances of the Saudis.

answer: The Saudi Arabian armed forces have used British-made cluster bombs in Yemen, despite Britain's opposition to such weapons. Michael Fallon admits to this but claims the bombs were used against "legitimate military targets." Questions will now emerge about whether British complicity has allowed for the legitimization of Saudi strategy, which has caused the deaths of many civilians.

answer: The Saudi air force has used British-made cluster bombs in its war in Yemen, despite Britain having signed a ban on their use. However, the Saudis claim the cluster bombs were used against "legitimate military targets" and the British government contends they oppose the use of these weapons. Concern remains, however, as cluster bombs can leave unexploded bomblets that remain a threat to civilians.

answer: Since the 1980s, Saudis have been using British cluster bombs for military operations. Though it is said that the bombs were only used for legitimate military operations, it implied British complicity in Saudi military operations. Though Saudis said they would stop use of the British cluster bombs, that would end the lucrative contracts being afforded the British in exchange for the bombs, which would cost British jobs as well as their independent arms production capabilities.

text: Ending the use of cluster bombs won't necessarily end Saudi's contract with the British.

refinement: Since the 1980s, Saudis have been using British cluster bombs for military operations. Though it is said that the bombs were only used for legitimate military operations, it implied British complicity in Saudi military operations.


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This is what I have so far. Criticism is greatly appreciated and if you guys like it I can add more.

                                         **Sleep Yet**

 	The man awoke, startled as if from a nightmare, yet he recalled no dreams. He sat up and took stock of the

blank room he found himself in. There was a shattered mirror set on a table to his right. A large door could be

found opposite his bed, intact, with the exception of a large gash in the wood where all the light in the room

 seeped from. The most curious object however, was a rather bland looking table with three drawers. It was

approximately 2 feet long and just as wide, with enough height that a chair could be pulled up and an average

sized man could uncomfortably sit. He stiffly shuffled to the mirror. Upon inspection he could see that he was only

 lightly wounded, a few scratches on his face, a  laceration above his eyebrow and a lightly blackened eye. What

really caught his attention though was the amount of stubble visible at least 3 days worth. The man had no

recollection of even coming to this room, let alone having been here for more than a few hours. That’s when it hit

him. He didn’t remember much at all. He reached into the pits of his mind, trying to drag out even the most

superfluous details. Nothing. Not even a date. He made his way to the table, his joints groaning from the

movement, whether from over or under use the man couldn’t say. The rightmost drawer opened easily enough,

revealing a note. After close scrutinization he determined the note to befit the work of either . It read: “My

sanctum, my home. Ye come, I go. Divinity’s blessing, upon us all. Beware, take stock, heed my thoughts, away,

away we go. Learn not what passes, yet to all be keen. My heart, for all within, bleeds.”

title: Sleep Yet

question: Explain why the narrator opens the drawers in the table.

answer: he opened the three drawers in the table because he couldn't remember what the furniture had originally been used for (which is where he found the note in the middle one.)

text: It is wrongly stated that the man opens the middle drawer.

refinement: he opened the three drawers in the table because he couldn't remember what the furniture had originally been used for (which is where he found the note in the rightmost drawer.)

text: There is no evidence that he opened all three drawers.

refinement: he opened the rightmost drawer in the table because he couldn't remember what the furniture had originally been used for (which is where he found the note in the rightmost drawer.)

text: The first alphabet of the sentence should be capitalized.

refinement: He opened the rightmost drawer in the table because he couldn't remember what the furniture had originally been used for (which is where he found the note in the rightmost drawer.)

text: There is no evidence that the narrator opens the drawer because he couldn't remember what the furniture had been used for.

refinement: He opened the rightmost drawer in the table. It may be implied that he opened it since he couldn't remember what the furniture had originally been used for (which is where he found the note in the rightmost drawer.)

answer: He doesn't remember any thing, not even a date. He wants a clue about how he ended up there and what happened afterward.

text: It is not directly stated that he opened the drawer because he didn't remember anything.

refinement: It may be implied that he opens the drawer because he doesn't remember any thing, not even a date. He wants a clue about how he ended up there and what happened afterward.

text: There is no answer.

refinement: It may be implied that the drawer is opened because the narrator cannot remember how and why he is in that room.

question: Who are the main characters?

answer: The main character is a man who just woke up in a room he does not know.

answer: The main characters are the man who has woken up in the unknown room and the mysterious writer of the note.

answer: The main character appears to be a man who wakes up in a strange room with no recollection of what happened before or why he is there. The note left behind speaks to the possibility that the main character may be trapped in a sort of prison, with the mysterious writer as his or her captor.

question: What are the major events of the story?

answer: The man wakes up, he shuffles to the mirror and sees that he is mildly wounded. He also sees that his stubble is 3 days old, this is a surprise to him. He realizes that he does not remember any thing at all. He find a cryptic message in the drawer of the table.

answer: The main events in the story are that the main character wakes up without memories and finds a note, presumably from the person who put him in the room. The note warns him of the sanctum and that they both must go away.

answer: The major events of the story are that the nameless protagonist wakes up in a room with no recollection of how he got there, he finds a note that may or may not have been put there by the mysterious "Divinity" who also inhabits the room, and he realises he can't remember much of anything.

question: What is the time period in which the story is set?

answer: It is not clear from the text.

answer: That information can't be found

answer: Modern-day.

text: This information is not mentioned in the text.

question: Write a ~6 sentence summary.

answer: A man wakes in his strange locale with no recollection of coming there. Right in front of him he finds a fut Futoon table with three drawers. He 	opens the right drawer of the table and finds a note which reads; “My sanctum, My home. Ye come, I go. Divinity’s blessing, upon us all. Beware, 	take stock, heed my thoughts, away, away we go. Learn not what passes, yet to all be keen. My heart, for all within, bleeds.” Upon inspection, the man finds there are a few scratches on his face, a laceration above the eye, and a lightly 	blackened eye.

answer: The man wakes up and notices a few scratches on his face and blackout on his eye. He finds himself in a room with a large door and a dresser containing a shattered mirror. A drawer reveals a note from an unnamed person, presumably the letter writer. The man tries to recall everything he possibly can about the situation he is in but finds he can't remember anything. He heeds the instructions in the note and opens the second drawer of the dresser to find a tooth.

text: There is no evidence that the man opens the second drawer of the table or finds a tooth.

refinement: The man wakes up and notices a few scratches on his face and blackout on his eye. He finds himself in a room with a large door and a dresser containing a shattered mirror. A drawer reveals a note from an unnamed person, presumably the letter writer. The man tries to recall everything he possibly can about the situation he is in but finds he can't remember anything.

answer: The man wakes up, taking stock of the room around him. He shuffles to the mirror and sees that he is mildly wounded. He also sees that his stubble is 3 days old. He is not sure where the time went. He realizes that he does not remember much, not any thing at all. He finds a not in the drawer of the table with a cryptic message.

text: Typo: not

refinement: The man wakes up, taking stock of the room around him. He shuffles to the mirror and sees that he is mildly wounded. He also sees that his stubble is 3 days old. He is not sure where the time went. He realizes that he does not remember much, not any thing at all. He finds a note in the drawer of the table with a cryptic message.

text: It is not mentioned in which drawer the man opens.

refinement: The man wakes up, taking stock of the room around him. He shuffles to the mirror and sees that he is mildly wounded. He also sees that his stubble is 3 days old. He is not sure where the time went. He realizes that he does not remember much, not any thing at all. He finds a note in the rightmost drawer of the table with a cryptic message.

text: The scratches on his face and the laceration above his eyebrows are evidence that he was wounded.

answer: The man wakes up in a room and doesn't know how he got there. He thinks he had nightmares but doesn't recall any. When he wakes, he sees three drawers on a table and opens it. The first drawer contains a note in an indistinct handwriting telling him to beware and watch out. He struggles to open two more drawers, finding another note that seems to be inexplicably written by a child.

text: There is no evidence that the man tries to open the other two drawers.

refinement: The man wakes up in a room and doesn't know how he got there. He thinks he had nightmares but doesn't recall any. When he wakes, he sees three drawers on a table and opens it. The first drawer contains a note in an indistinct handwriting telling him to beware and watch out.

text: Unnecessary use of indefinite article: an.

refinement: The man wakes up in a room and doesn't know how he got there. He thinks he had nightmares but doesn't recall any. When he wakes, he sees three drawers on a table and opens it. The first drawer contains a note in indistinct handwriting telling him to beware and watch out.

text: The man opens only one drawer (the rightmost drawer) out of the three.

refinement: The man wakes up in a room and doesn't know how he got there. He thinks he had nightmares but doesn't recall any. When he wakes, he sees three drawers on a table and opens the rightmost one. The contains a note in indistinct handwriting telling him to beware and watch out.

text: "startled as if from a nightmare" is evidence that the man thinks he had a nightmare.

answer:
The man awakes trying to figure out where he is. He discovers that he is only lightly wounded and that he doesn't remember anything about his whereabouts. In his mind, he tries to remember as much as he can, but there is absolutely nothing.

He travels to a table and the right side drawer frees easily. Inside, he finds a note. He is unable to tell if the content of the note was written humorously or seriously. The note can be read as having a verse or not. There's a line that mentions about a house.

answer: The man wakes up from a dreamlike state while in a castle location. He's wounded and walks to the mirror. He has facial hair in stark contrast with the clean shaven mirror image. He realizes he has no memory of how he arrived at the castle or any memories that happened after the day before. He finds a note inserted in the back drawer and reads it which only frustrates him. He's confused and frustrated by the situation.

text: There is no evidence that he wakes up in a castle.

refinement: The man wakes up from a dreamlike state in an unknown room. He's wounded and walks to the mirror. He has facial hair in stark contrast with the clean shaven mirror image. He realizes he has no memory of how he arrived here. He finds a note inserted in the back drawer and reads it which only frustrates him. He's confused and frustrated by the situation.

text: It is wrongly mentioned that his mirror image was clean-shaven.

refinement: The man wakes up from a dreamlike state in an unknown room. He's wounded and walks to the mirror. He notices that his stubble was at least three days old. He realizes he has no memory of how he arrived here. He finds a note inserted in the back drawer and reads it which only frustrates him. He's confused and frustrated by the situation.

text: It is wrongly stated that he finds the note in the back drawer and it frustrates him.

refinement: The man wakes up from a dreamlike state in an unknown room. He's wounded and walks to the mirror. He notices that his stubble was at least three days old. He realizes he has no memory of how he arrived here. He finds a note inserted in the rightmost drawer and reads it.


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HENRY TUFTS (1748–1831) was an infamous 18th-century thief who committed various crimes in northern New England. Most of what we know about his life and crimes comes from his 1807 autobiography _A Narrative of the Life, Adventures, Travels and Sufferings of Henry Tufts, Now Residing at Lemington, in the District of Maine. In Substance as Compiled from his own Mouth._[1]

This autobiography was reprinted in 1930 as _Autobiography of a Criminal_.[2] Neal Keating's 1993 reprint of Tufts' autobiography summarizes Tufts as a “horse thief, bigamist, burglar, adulterer, con man, scoundrel, counterfeiter, (military) deserter and common criminal.”

“An uncommonly misspent life”

[Title page of Henry Tufts' book] Tufts was born in Newmarket, New Hampshire, in June 1748 to a tailor and his wife. Tufts would grow up in the nearby town of Lee, where he would first exhibit his “natural propensity to theft.”

Tufts began his criminal activities at the age of 14 with thefts of “apples, pears, cucumbers, and other fruits of the earth,” and then graduating to “a paper money bill” of a neighbor. He soon went on to stealing horses (which he disguised by coloring them) including the theft and subsequent selling of his own father's horse. The autobiography goes on to list numerous thefts of everything from silver spoons to livestock and clothes. He stole from houses, barns, and stores. He usually sold the stolen objects in neighboring towns.

He married one Lydia Bickford around the age of 22, but would later marry other women without divorcing Lydia.

Tufts was first imprisoned in 1770, where he attempted his first of many escapes by using the cell's heating fire to burn through a wooden wall of the jail.

Many of his jail escapes were accomplished with due small tools concealed on his person or passed to him visits from friends. Not even his fellow prisoners were safe from his sociopathic ways: once he and a fellow prisoner “stripped off all our clothes, turn(ed) them inside out, and (flung) them out” of the small hole Tufts had made in the jail wall. Tufts exited first and, before waiting for his accomplice to follow, “gathered up (his) apparel, which I expected in all likelihood to need…and sped away.”

When imprisoned, Tufts often saw himself as the unfair victim, once commenting on his time in a jail as “in the shocking circumstances…described, I continued for upwards of three months, without aid or assistance from either friend or foe, or so much as the expectation of relief – no eye had pity on me!”

Tufts spent several years among the Abenaki Indians in or near Bethel, Maine and learned their natural medicines from Molly Ockett shortly before his final arrest in 1794 at Marblehead, Massachusetts. Sentenced to hang, his sentence was commuted to life imprisonment by Governor Samuel Adams. After five years imprisoned on Castle Island in Boston Harbor, he was transferred to the jail in Salem, from whence he escaped to Maine. If his autobiography is to be believed, he thereafter lived as a healer and farmer without further criminal misdeeds.[3]

Ultimately, while an entertaining book, it is difficult to tell how much of Tufts' autobiography is completely true. In his foreword to a 1993 reprint of the book, Keating points out that “Henry Tufts' favorite scheme was lying…(and) in his autobiography he lies.…”

Sources

Tufts, Henry. _The Autobiography of a Criminal_; Loompanics Unlimited, 1993. .

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title: Henry Tufts

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

In your opinion, what is the most interesting thing about Henry Tufts, and why?

answer: Henry Tufts' past criminal activities seem interesting because of their sheer number and variety. His sentence of life imprisonment was commuted by Gov. Samuel Adams, which was very fortunate on behalf of Henry Tufts. However, Henry Tufts' favorite scheme was lying, and in his autobiography he lies.

text: The response contains inaccurate information.

refinement: Henry Tufts' past criminal activities seem interesting because of their sheer number and variety. His death sentence was commuted to life imprisonment by Gov. Samuel Adams, which was very fortunate on behalf of Henry Tufts. However, Henry Tufts' favorite scheme was lying, and in his autobiography he lies.

answer: The most interesting things about Henry Tufts is how his autobiography, "in Substance as Compiled from his own Mouth", is entertaining, yet unbelievable.

text: The response contains inaccurate information.

refinement: The most interesting things about Henry Tufts is how his autobiography, "A Narrative of the Life, Adventures, Travels and Sufferings of Henry Tufts, Now Residing at Lemington, in the District of Maine. In Substance as Compiled from his own Mouth.", is entertaining, yet unbelievable.

answer: One answer could be that they find it interesting that he spent time among the Abenaki Native Americans and learned their natural medicines. For most of Tuft's life, his skills were something he developed pointedly to increase his chances of getting away with crimes. It does not seem that learning medicine from the Natives would fall beneath this umbrella. It does, however, make sense that he would have hidden among them following his escape.

text: The response contains baseless conjecture.

refinement: One answer could be that they find it interesting that he spent time among the Abenaki Native Americans and learned their natural medicines. For most of Tuft's life, his skills were something he developed pointedly to increase his chances of getting away with crimes. It does make sense that he would have hidden among them following his escape.

answer: The most interesting part about Henry Tufts is that he not only was a prolific thief, but he also enjoyed breaking out of prisons repeatedly. Though most of his accounts of his crimes might not be completely true, his escapes make for an interesting example of human ingenuity.

answer: Henry Tufts had an extremely sociopathic and criminal life, becoming a thief and burglar at a young age. While actual verifiable details of his crime spree may be questionable, what is apparent is his constant desire to steal or cheat any chance he had. Ironically, this affinity for crime would ultimately land him a life sentence in jail, though he would escape many times. Despite this unlucky streak, Tufts would devise new schemes and scams to get what he wanted. Ultimately, while his life may have been chaotic and criminal, Tufts' ingenuity is interesting.