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By Colleen Coble

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Hello, my name is Colleen Coble, and I’m a major extrovert. I know you’ve all heard all authors are introverts and huddle in their closets with a laptop while they write, but it’s not true. There are some of us strange creatures around who prefer parties to privacy.

People sometimes ask what is the most challenging part of writing, and for those of us who are extroverts, it’s the solitude. There are weeks when I’m on a tight deadline and don’t leave the house except for church on Sunday. That can take its toll on my mental energy. What’s a girl to do?

Answer: social media! I know, I know, that’s another thing you’ve heard. Social media is the bane of our existence, and it’s something we have to do because our publishers and readers expect it. But I want to challenge you to turn it around and think of it as something beneficial for you as well. You will make great friends and find awesome support online if you change your attitude.

First off, figure out which social media speaks to you the most. Blogging, Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, Pinterest, or Periscope are all valuable to you if you enjoy them. I’ve tried them all, but Facebook is my favorite. I have instant interaction with readers the moment I hop over there.

Second, be yourself. Don’t talk about your books all the time. Reveal who you really are. Put down your mask. What are your interests outside of your books? Mine is health, and I’m always posting articles about how we can use food to make use healthier. My readers all know I’m a health nut, and they often share things of interest with me as well. My characters are likely to eat a gluten-free, sugar-free diet and using essential oils so my books follow my interests as well. And I love coffee and The Walking Dead.

Third, treat your readers as friends. Answer their questions, respond to their comments, and share their posts as well. It’s all about interaction. Encourage them to share their lives with you as well as sharing yours with them.

My readers have given me so much: encouragement on the dark days, laughter, prayers, companionship, and so much more. When those days of tight deadlines fall on my head, I have a host of friends available at my keyboard to keep me company. It’s made solitude much more bearable for this mega-extrovert, but these tips will help you reach your readers as well even if you crave solitude. You can always shut your computer!

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I know you’re thinking this takes too much time, but it really doesn’t. That’s an excuse writers use to avoid doing anything on social media because they dread it. If you change your attitude about it and see it as talking with friends, it will seem much less onerous, and I think you’ll find yourself with more friends than you ever thought was possible. I sure have!

So how about you? If you’re an extrovert like me, how do you handle the isolation?
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Best-selling autor Colleen Coble’s novels have won or finaled in awards ranging from the Best Books of Indiana, the ACFW Carol Award, the Romance Writers of America RITA, the Holt Medallion, the Daphne du Maurier, National Readers’ Choice and the Booksellers Best. She has more than three million books in print and writes romantic mysteries because she loves to see justice prevail. Coble is CEO of American Christian Fiction Writers. She lives with her husband, Dave, in Indiana. To keep up with Colleen Coble, visitwww.colleencoble.com, become a fan onFacebook (colleencoblebooks) or follow her onTwitter (@colleencoble).

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about writing?

answer: The author claims that the most challenging part of writing for extroverts is solitude. Social media is something that helps aid this feeling of loneliness. Support online is something beneficial to them.

answer: The text says that, for extroverts, the most challenging part of writing is the solitude. However, social media can be used as a beneficial way to alleviate this solitude by making new friends and giving writers the companionship they need. Writing is seen as a creative outlet where isolation can be overcome.

answer: No answer

answer: The author of the text claims to be a major extrovert, who likes having parties more than privacy. She thinks that being a writer is a challenging profession, because of the solitude. For extroverts like her, this is such a challenge. However, she suggests that she finds companionship and support on social media as a way to manage solitude.

text: The same meaning is repeated twice. These two sentences should be made one.

refinement: The author of the text claims to be a major extrovert, who likes having parties more than privacy. She thinks that being a writer is a challenging profession, because of the solitude. However, she suggests that she finds companionship and support on social media as a way to manage solitude.

answer: The text suggests that writing can be challenging for extroverts due to the solitude involved. Social media is presented as a great way to keep connected with readers and make new friends. Writing is discussed as something that is useful for inspiring justice and for providing companionship even during tight deadlines. Ultimately, the text sees writing as something beneficial for anyone regardless of their personality type.

text: Justice comes from the author's bio, not the narrative

refinement: The text suggests that writing can be challenging for extroverts due to the solitude involved. Social media is presented as a great way to keep connected with readers and make new friends. Ultimately, the text sees writing as something beneficial for anyone regardless of their personality type.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about social media?

answer: Social media platforms like blogging, Facebook, and Twitter are tools for writers to connect with their readers. The author warns against using social media as a mask, and advises to be yourself as much as possible. Another advantage of using social media is to get information from your readers, such as what kind of diet and fashion sense their favorite characters have.

answer: According to the author, social media helps extroverts in isolation feel less lonely. Being an extrovert herself, being forced to isolate herself while writing is not something she is accustomed to.

text: Should also talk about the value of her use of social media.

refinement: According to the author, social media helps extroverts in isolation feel less lonely. Being an extrovert herself, being forced to isolate herself while writing is not something she is accustomed to. She uses social media to connect with her readers and build a community. By being herself she is able to connect with her community and form bonds.

answer: The text says that social media platforms, like Facebook, can be very valuable to an extroverted writer, as they offer instant interaction with their readers, who can become great friends. Social media also allows the writer to share their interests and be themselves, treating their readers as friends. Writing doesn't need to feel like pure solitude when using social media effectively.

answer: The text suggests that social media is beneficial for those who are extroverts because it offers opportunities for interaction with friends and readers. It can also offer a way to relieve the monotony and solitude that comes with writing. Social media should be approached as a way for meaningful connection.

text: More information about how it provides connection

refinement: The text suggests that social media is beneficial for those who are extroverts because it offers opportunities for interaction with friends and readers. It can also offer a way to relieve the monotony and solitude that comes with writing. Social media should be approached as a way for meaningful connection. The author recommends being yourself, treating your readers as friends and picking the right platform to build an online community.

answer: The author, Colleen Coble, says that for those who are extroverts, one of the most challenging parts of writing is the solitude. According to her, solcation can take a toll on mental energy. One of the best ways to solve this is to use social media. By going online, she can network with like-minded people, with diverse interests. When they all band together and talk, they can create a cohesive community based on shared interests.

text: Give more information about what she says about social media

refinement: The author, Colleen Coble, says that for those who are extroverts, one of the most challenging parts of writing is the solitude. According to her, solcation can take a toll on mental energy. One of the best ways to solve this is to use social media. By going online, she can network with like-minded people, with diverse interests. When they all band together and talk, they can create a cohesive community based on shared interests. She recommends being yourself, selecting the right platform, and treating one's readers as friends.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the process of writing?

answer: The text suggests that the most challenging part of writing is the solitude, and one way for an introvert to cope with this solitude is through social media. Social media allows for instant interaction with readers, provides opportunity to reveal one's personality, and should be viewed as a fun conversation with friends. The text also suggests that social media can help keep the writer motivated and on task. Overall, the text suggests that writing can be improved through social media.

text: Replace with more about solitude.

refinement: The text suggests that the most challenging part of writing is the solitude, and one way for an introvert to cope with this solitude is through social media. Solitude causes the author's mental energies to be sapped because she is an extrovert.

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: The author claims that when writing to your audience, you need to first figure out which social media you would like to use the most. When writing, just be yourself. Treat your readers like your friends and answer their questions.

text: This has to do with the process of writing on social media, not social media in general.

refinement: The author discusses how writing often involves never leaving the house. As an extrovert, this can take all of her social energy.

answer: The text suggests that the most challenging part of writing is the solitude. The author suggests that using social media is a useful tool to help alleviate the solitude and to establish friendships with readers. The author also suggests that using social media should be approached as talking with friends instead of viewing it as a chore or an obligation. Overall, the point of the text is that using social media can help with the process of writing because it allows for engagement with others.

text: Social media is not relevant to the answer to this question.

refinement: The text suggests that the most challenging part of writing is the solitude. The author finds her mental energy exhausted by the solitude writing requires.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the author?

answer: She's a major extrovert who has written more than three million books and has won numerous awards. She writes romantic mysteries to see justice prevail.

text: This is a transcription of the bio but it is not clear what it means so "to see justice prevail" should be cut out.

refinement: She's a major extrovert who has written more than three million books and has won numerous awards. She writes romantic mysteries.

answer: The text indicates that the author is an extrovert who enjoys social media. The author values interacting with readers because it helps combat the isolation that can come with writing.

text: Material from the bio should be added.

refinement: The text indicates that the author is an extrovert who enjoys social media. She has won or been nominated for numerous awards and writes romantic mysteries. She lives in Indiana.

answer: The author is an extrovert. She has a hard time isolating herself when working and her answer to this is social media. When writing to her audience, she claims you should just be yourself and treat your readers like your friends.

text: Material from the bio is necessary.

refinement: The author is an extrovert. She has won or been nominated for multiple awards. She writes romantic mysteries and lives in Indiana.

answer: The text suggests that the author is an extrovert who doesn't have a problem with solitude. Instead, the author prefers interacting with others and finds this more beneficial than getting stuck in her own head. She also treats her readers as friends, which helps her combat the challenges of being alone while writing. Overall, the author is friendly and prefers communication.

text: Material from the bio is necessary.

refinement: The text suggests that the author is an extrovert. She has won or been nominated for multiple awards and writes romantic mysteries. She lives in Indiana.

answer: The author, Colleen Coble, is an extrovert.

text: Tells us nothing about her and does not utilize the bio at the end.

refinement: The author, Colleen Coble, is an extrovert. She has received or finaled in awards such as Best Books of Indiana, the ACFW Carol Award, the Romance Writers of America RITA, the Holt Medallion, the Daphne du Maurier, National Readers’ Choice and the Booksellers Best. She writes romantic mysteries and is the CEO of American Christian Fiction Writers.


split: train

text:
It was a beautiful spot, hidden well in the surroundings. I glanced around only to notice the dark trees which complemented pure white sands and the iridescent sun gleaming and reflecting off the shabby, yet gentle leaves. The rush of the wind gently tickled and sensationally soothed my skin as the sand hugged me, creating warmth and a sense of security only a mother could provide. Nervously examining the surroundings, I was enthralled and mesmerized by the natural vivid scenery. The waves crashed onto the shore, creating a rhythm similar to that of a heartbeat, and in closing one’s eyes produced an uncanny resemblance to my father’s heartbeat during the many times I have fallen asleep in his arms as a child. Nevertheless, my whole body was frail to such an unfamiliar world. I was so far, yet so close to home.

The sky was dark and the air full of seagulls sauntering in the cool zephyr. They seemed to float with such ease in bunches of many, wings spread apart and as stable as could be. Stability. Something expectant of home, something you become used to. Something you grow accustomed to. The dark sky rolled above with such pace as I was bombarded with nostalgia. Drops of water hit my face, the sky reckoning with anger. I should’ve listened. I shouldn’t have been so stubborn. The seagulls, weary and knowing of what is ahead, flee. The waves had now become an asynchronous percussion orchestra of disaster and the sky even darker. The warmth of the sand no longer was able to soothe my desires and the white fluffy sand was dark as I watch droplets plummet across the horizon of what was once a golden plain.

The short sprinkling resided. The humid sea air entered my nose, a smell so familiar back home. It was a peaceful moment, as it triggered many a memory, being the only smell which had elicited such a response. I grabbed the gritty, cold sand, allowing my body to process the feeling which was so similar to that of my blanket on a cold winter’s night. I glanced at my watch and realised it was getting late. I slowly arose from my tomblike position and lumbered through the damp sand, using this last opportunity to glance as the brilliant sea sparkled under the luminosity of the crescent moon. Droplets ran down my face, however this time not rain. I continued walking, longing for someone whom I could’ve shared this moment with. I rummaged for my phone and put my earphones in, searching for song which fit the occasion. The stairs which led to the main strip were in sight with the voices of a language I could not fully understand overpowering the music I was listening to. Upon arrival, the amazing bedazzlement of lights and people made me hug the sidewalk as I searched carefully for the nearest bus stop.

The fragrant smell of food wafted from all directions accompanied by soothing laughter. I stopped and stared at the magnificent view on top the peak of the hill. Green luscious hills glittered in the moonlight as the trees danced in the wind. I spotted a bus stop, opposite to the direction I had walked in. The refreshing breeze gracefully swept over my skin as I walked confidently to my destination. I couldn’t help but look at the smiling faces of those while passing by as the general happiness rubbed off onto me. I thought to myself that I’m in some place new, I might as well try something new too. I swung open the door with anticipation and asked the bartender with my very limited English for a drink. Uplifting music flowed throughout as I enjoyed ‘a cold one’ to myself. I peeped at my phone for an all important message, but it hadn’t arrived yet.

“Bartender, drink please. Long Island, thankyou!” During the process in which the drink was being concocted an attractive girl pulled a chair next to me and greeted me. Her name was Serenity, I could tell she was a local.

“Hi nice to meet you. My name is Tyler. I’m not from around here if you couldn’t tell.”

“Nice to meet you Tyler, and that’s exactly why I chose to say hi!”

Her eyes glistened as she smiled. I could tell she was a genuine, real person. We spoke about our lives, who we were, our own mini stories. It was as if we were reading story books to each other. Even with my limited English we were able to laugh, gossip and talk for hours on end. We sat outside in the darkness, dimly lit by street lights and the moon. She irradiated a warmth you wouldn’t expect from a personality, yet alone looks. I could only manage to see the silhouette of her, but her perfectly balanced features caught my attention.

“You two, we’re closing, time to leave.” The sturdy bartender made sure we had received the message well, as we walked out onto the strip. I looked at the water, it was now calm. Peacefully bliss. Serenity and I walked onto the beach, our surroundings and body language managing to communicate to each other exactly what we had wished to say.  We sat down and she inquisitively asked to look at my phone. I handed it to her, as I looked away, my attention caught by a man swimming out far beyond his depth.

“Here you go Tyler, I just wanted to check the time and send a message to someone as my phone was dead.” This reminded me, my last bus was arriving within minutes!

“Serenity, I am so sorry! I have to go, it was lovely meeting you.” I gave her a quick hug and ran off before she could utter a word, immediately I regretted my decision. The bus was in sight as I sprinted full pelt. Got it. I walked onto the empty bus and sat near the back. I placed my earphones in and pressed shuffle. The bus ride felt very short as I was occupied by looking out of the window into the rain. Walking back home, I felt a sudden shortness of breath as I reached into my pocket for the keys to open my lonely apartment. I couldn’t handle it. I lurched for my bed and collapsed unto it, my breathing becoming heavy as tears ran down my cheeks and my vision becoming blurry…

Morning sun hit my face as I woke up in a daze. I looked around to make sure nothing else had occurred last night. Everything seemed normal. I couldn’t help but feel empty as I made myself something to eat, my stomach including. My phone was on the counter as it vibrated. I peered over. ‘Two messages from unknown number -041485375’. I unlocked my phone.

“Hey Tyler, it’s Serenity :)”
“I hope I have the right number, I would love to see you again.”

title: [RF] Falling

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Tyler's reaction as he said goodbye to Serenity.

answer: Tyler was remorseful and regretful when he said goodbye to Serenity. He was so eager to get back on the bus that he neglected to give her a proper goodbye. He misses her now, and wishes he had had the courage to truly say goodbye.

text: The language is clumsy

refinement: Tyler was so eager to get back on the bus that he neglected to say a decent goodbye to Serenity. He misses her now, regrets his haste and wishes he had had the courage to truly say goodbye.

answer: Tyler rushed to the bus like a shot knowing that his bus will be coming next. Honestly, Tyler was a little stunned to how prematurely he left Serenity. When Serenity handed Tyler her number, he rushed away because he was afraid to not make it to the bus. As he sprinted, he felt regretful.

text: Repetition

refinement: Honestly, Tyler was a little stunned to how prematurely he left Serenity. When Serenity handed Tyler her number, he rushed away because he was afraid to not make it to the bus. As he sprinted, he felt regretful.

text: Grammatical error

refinement: Honestly, Tyler was a little stunned at how prematurely he had left Serenity. When Serenity handed Tyler her number, he rushed away because he was afraid to not make it to the bus. As he sprinted, he felt regretful.

answer: At first, Tyler regrets saying goodbye to Serenity as his bus is arriving. However, once he receives her text message, he is thrilled to have reconnected with her and is excited to see her again.

answer: Tyler said an abrupt and quick goodbye to Serenity. He rushed home and it felt like he was having a panic attack. He got home and felt a shortness in his breath as he reached his apartment and had tears running down his cheeks. He lurched onto his bead and fell asleep.

text: Minor spelling

refinement: Tyler said an abrupt and quick goodbye to Serenity. He rushed home and it felt like he was having a panic attack. He got home and felt shortness in his breath as he reached his apartment and had tears running down his cheeks. He lurched onto his bed and fell asleep.

answer: Tyler was very sad and probably regretted taking off so quickly.

text: Short on detail

refinement: Tyler said an abrupt and quick goodbye to Serenity. He rushed home and it felt like he was having a panic attack. He got home and felt shortness in his breath as he reached his apartment and had tears running down his cheeks. He lurched onto his bed and fell asleep.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Tyler and Serenity's relationship.

answer:
Serenity was a local to the beach Tyler goes to for a drink. She spoke with Tyler about herself, who she was, etc.
Tyler decides not to stay and get to know her better, and leaves her after a short talk. Tyler regretted leaving her, and regretted not being honest about the bus being his last ride.

text: This sentence is not clear

refinement:
Tyler goes to the pub for a drink where he meets Serenity, a local. She spoke with Tyler about herself, who she was, etc.
Tyler decides not to stay and get to know her better, and leaves her after a short talk. Tyler regretted leaving her, and regretted not being honest about the bus being his last ride.

text: They speak to one another about their lives.

refinement:
Tyler goes to the pub for a drink where he meets Serenity, a local. They like one another and tell each other stories of their lives.
Tyler decides not to stay and get to know her better, and leaves her after a short talk. Tyler regretted leaving her, and regretted not being honest about the bus being his last ride.

text: This is misleading

refinement:
Tyler goes to the pub for a drink where he meets Serenity, a local. They like one another and tell each other stories of their lives.
Tyler can't stay as he has a bus to catch. Tyler regretted leaving her, and regretted not being honest about the bus being his last ride.

text: Clumsy sentence and mixed tenses

refinement:
Tyler goes to the pub for a drink where he meets Serenity, a local. They like one another and tell each other stories of their lives.
Tyler can't stay as he has a bus to catch. He regrets leaving her and not being honest about the bus being his last ride.

answer: Tyler meets Serenity at a bar and bonds with her over nothing. Tyler can't leave Serenity when his phone says his bus is arriving, so he delays his departure and ultimately feels sad about it. The next morning he checks his phone and finds a message from Serenity, which makes him pleased, though her forwardness surprises him.

text: This is inaccurate

refinement: Tyler meets Serenity at a bar and bonds with her over nothing. Tyler has to leave Serenity and rush for the bus. He regrets not saying goodby properly. The next morning he checks his phone and finds a message from Serenity, which makes him pleased, though her forwardness surprises him.

answer: Tyler and Serenity's relationship is sweet. Serenity is a girl from town and Tyler is not from town. They met at a bar and have a great time. They speak about their lives, who they are, and their own stories. They laughed and talked for hours and stayed at the bar until closing time. They went to the beach after where Serenity asked to use Tyler's phone. The next day, when Tyler woke up, he had a message from Serenity asking to see him again.

text: Mixed tenses

refinement: Tyler and Serenity's relationship is sweet. Serenity is a girl from town and Tyler is not from town. They meet at a bar and have a great time. They speak about their lives, who they are, and their own stories. They laugh and talk for hours and stay at the bar until closing time. They go to the beach after where Serenity asks to use Tyler's phone. The next day, when Tyler wakes up, he has a message from Serenity asking to see him again.

text: Strange language

refinement: Tyler and Serenity's relationship is sweet. Serenity is a girl from town and Tyler is from out of town. They meet at a bar and have a great time. They speak about their lives, who they are, and their own stories. They laugh and talk for hours and stay at the bar until closing time. They go to the beach after where Serenity asks to use Tyler's phone. The next day, when Tyler wakes up, he has a message from Serenity asking to see him again.

text: confusing sentence

refinement: Tyler and Serenity's relationship is sweet. Serenity is a girl from town and Tyler is from out of town. They meet at a bar and have a great time. They speak about their lives, who they are, and their own stories. They laugh and talk for hours and stay at the bar until closing time. Then they go to the beach where Serenity asks to use Tyler's phone. The next day, when Tyler wakes up, he has a message from Serenity asking to see him again.

answer: Tyler and Serenity met by chance at the beach in a foreign country. They found common ground in their mutual curiosity and exchanged stories and emotions throughout the night. Serenity invited Tyler to contact her after they parted ways and they exchanged messages. Since then they have become good friends.

text: Contains several inaccuracies

refinement: Tyler said an abrupt and quick goodbye to Serenity. He rushed home and it felt like he was having a panic attack. He got home and suffered shortness of breath as he reached his apartment. He had tears running down his cheeks. He lurched onto his bed and fell asleep.

answer: Tyler and Serenity unexpectedly meet outside of a club and get to know each other over a few hours. They connect and Serenity asks Tyler for his number and they end up messaging each other back and forth frequently. They seem interested in each other and even though they only met once they would like to see each other again. Their relationship is budding but new.


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The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications.[1][2] It was announced in June 2014 and was released in July 2014.[3]

Specifications

Hardware

The Sony Xperia T3 has a 5.3-inch IPS LCD display, Quad-core 1.4 GHz Cortex-A7 Qualcomm Snapdragon 400 processor, 1 GB of RAM and 8 GB of internal storage that can be expanded using microSD cards up to 32 GB. The phone has a 2500 mAh Li-Ion battery, 8 MP rear camera with LED flash and 1.1 MP front-facing camera. It is available in Black, White, Purple colors.[4]

Software

The Xperia T3 was initially shipped with Android 4.4.2 (KitKat) with Sony's custom launcher on top. Some notable additions to the software include Sony's Media applications – Walkman, Album and Videos. NFC is also a core feature of the device, allowing 'one touch' to mirror what is on the smartphone to compatible TVs or play music on a NFC wireless speaker. Additionally, the device includes a battery stamina mode which increases the phone's standby time up to 4 times. Several Google applications (such as Google Chrome, Google Play, Google search (with voice), Google Maps and Google Talk) already come preloaded.

On 13 August 2014, the Xperia T3 got a minor bug-fixing update which moved the version number from 18.2.A.1.14 to 18.2.A.1.18 on the HSPA+ variant (D5102) and from 18.1.A.1.17 to 18.1.A.1.21 on the LTE variant (D5103, D5106).[5]

On 8 January 2015, the Xperia T3 got an update which moved the Android version to 4.4.4 (KitKat). The version number is 18.1.A.2.32 for the HSPA+ variant and 18.1.A.2.25 for the LTE variant, respectively.[6]

There won't be an update to Android 5.0 Lollipop.[7]

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[2]

[3] https://gadgets.ndtv.com/sony-xperia-t3-1670%7Cpublisher=NDTV

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[5] http://www.xperiablog.net/2014/08/13/minor-update-18-1-a-1-21-and-18-2-a-1-18-certified-for-xperia-t3/

[6] http://www.xperiablog.net/2015/01/08/android-4-4-4-kitkat-arrives-on-the-xperia-t3/

[7] http://www.xperiablog.net/2015/03/06/sony-says-no-lollipop-for-non-xperia-z-series-owners/

title: Sony Xperia T3

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the Sony Xperia T3?

answer: The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

answer: It is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications.

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

answer: A smartphone.

text: The answer should mention that the phone is an Android device.

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

answer: The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications. It has a 5.3 inch IPS LCD display, Quad-core 1.4 GHz Cortex-A7 Qualcomm Snapdragon 400 processor, 1 GB of RAM, 8 GB of internal storage and various software features. It is available in Black, White, Purple colors and will not receive an update to Android 5.0 Lollipop.

text: There is a lot of unnecessary information in the answer.

refinement: The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications.

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

answer: The Sony Xperia T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications. It has a 5.3-inch IPS LCD display, Quad-core 1.4 GHz Cortex-A7 Qualcomm Snapdragon 400 processor, and is available in black, white, or purple colors.

text: The second sentence is unnecessary.

refinement: The Sony Xperia T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications.

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who developed the Sony Xperia T3?

answer: Sony Mobile Communications.

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

answer: Sony Mobile Communications.

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

answer: Sony Mobile Communications developed the Sony Xperia T3.

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

answer: Sony Mobile Communications.

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

answer: Sony Mobile Communications developed the Sony Xperia T3.

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How big is the Sony Xperia 3T IPS LCD display?

answer: The Sony Xperia 3T IPS LCD display has a 5.3-inch display.

text: "The Sony Xperia T3 has a 5.3-inch IPS LCD display"

answer: The Sony Xperia T3 has a 5.3-inch IPS LCD display.

text: "The Sony Xperia T3 has a 5.3-inch IPS LCD display"

answer: 5.3 inches

text: "The Sony Xperia T3 has a 5.3-inch IPS LCD display"

answer: The Sony Xperia T3 has a 5.3-inch IPS LCD display.

text: "The Sony Xperia T3 has a 5.3-inch IPS LCD display"

answer: 5.3 inches.

text: "The Sony Xperia T3 has a 5.3-inch IPS LCD display"

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What operating system does the Sony Xperia 3T run?

answer: Android.

text: The answer should give more details for the OS.

refinement: Android. Specifically, the 4.4.2 KitKat version.

text: "The Xperia T3 was initially shipped with Android 4.4.2 (KitKat)"

answer: The Sony Xperia T3 runs Android 4.4.2 (KitKat).

text: "The Xperia T3 was initially shipped with Android 4.4.2 (KitKat)"

answer: The Sony Xperia 3T runs Android 4.4.4 KitKat. It is one of the last phones in its series and does not plan to run on Android 5.0 Lollipop, which did not come out at the time of this document.

text: The information regarding Android 5.0 isn't relevant to the question.

refinement: The Sony Xperia 3T runs Android 4.4.4 KitKat.

text: "The Xperia T3 was initially shipped with Android 4.4.2 (KitKat)"

answer: The Sony Xperia 3T runs on Android 4.4.2 KitKat.

text: "The Xperia T3 was initially shipped with Android 4.4.2 (KitKat)"

answer: The Sony Xperia T3 runs Android 4.4.2 (KitKat).

text: "The Xperia T3 was initially shipped with Android 4.4.2 (KitKat)"

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The Sony XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone with a 5.3-inch display, Quad-core processor, RAM, and expandable storage. It comes with Android 4.4.2 (KitKat) and several Google applications. An update to Android 4.4.4 is available. There is no update to Android 5.0 Lollipop.

text: The question wants a single sentence summary. There are a lot of relatively unimportant parts to this summary.

refinement: The Sony XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone with a 5.3-inch display, Quad-core processor, and Android 4.4.2 (KitKat) and several Google applications.

text: Android: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

text: Hardware specs: "The Sony Xperia T3 has a 5.3-inch IPS LCD display, Quad-core 1.4 GHz Cortex-A7 Qualcomm Snapdragon 400 processor, 1 GB of RAM and 8 GB of internal storage that can be expanded using microSD cards up to 32 GB."

text: OS version: "The Xperia T3 was initially shipped with Android 4.4.2 (KitKat)"

text: No major update: "There won't be an update to Android 5.0 Lollipop."

answer: The article is about a smartphone, the Sony Xperia 3T and discusses its technical specifications.

text: The answer is vaguer than it should be. It should give some object-level details.

refinement: The article is about a smartphone, the Sony Xperia 3T, which has a 5.3 inch IPS LCD, a quad-core processor, 1 GB of RAM, and 8 GB of internal storage.

text: The name of the phone is misspelled.

refinement: The article is about a smartphone, the Sony Xperia T3, which has a 5.3 inch IPS LCD, a quad-core processor, 1 GB of RAM, and 8 GB of internal storage.

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone"

answer: This article details the specifications of the Sony Xperia T3, an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications.

text: The answer is vaguer than it should be. It should give some object-level details.

refinement: This article details the specifications of the Sony Xperia T3, which has a 5.3 inch IPS LCD, a quad-core processor, 1 GB of RAM, and 8 GB of internal storage.

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

answer: The Sony Xperia T3 is a smartphone that was produced by Sony.

text: The answer should have more detail than it does.

refinement: The Sony Xperia T3 is a smartphone that was produced by Sony, which has a 5.3 inch IPS LCD, a quad-core processor, 1 GB of RAM, and 8 GB of internal storage.

text: "The SONY XPERIA T3 is an Android smartphone developed by Sony Mobile Communications."

answer: The Sony XPERIA T3 is a 5.3-inch Android smartphone with a Quad-core 1.4 GHz Cortex-A7 Qualcomm Snapdragon 400 processor, 1 GB of RAM, and 8 GB of storage. It is available in black, white, and purple colors, and is currently running Android 4.4.4 (KitKat).

text: The question asks for a single sentence summary, and the color information is less important.

refinement: The Sony XPERIA T3 is a 5.3-inch Android smartphone with a Quad-core 1.4 GHz Cortex-A7 Qualcomm Snapdragon 400 processor, 1 GB of RAM, 8 GB of storage, and runs Android 4.4.4 (KitKat).

text: Hardware specs: "The Sony Xperia T3 has a 5.3-inch IPS LCD display, Quad-core 1.4 GHz Cortex-A7 Qualcomm Snapdragon 400 processor, 1 GB of RAM and 8 GB of internal storage"

text: Colors: "It is available in Black, White, Purple colors."


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[Thomas Heftye (1879)] THOMAS JOHANNESSEN HEFTYE, also known as THO JOH HEFTYE (29 October 1822 – 4 October 1886) was a Norwegian businessman, politician and philanthropist.

Personal life

He was born in Christiania as the son of merchant Johannes Thomassen Heftye (1792–1856) Tina Haslef (1798–1862).[1] He was a nephew of Henrik Heftye.[2]

In October 1846 he married Marie Jacobine Meyer (1826–1895), a daughter of Jacob Peter Meyer and sister of Thorvald Meyer. Their son Thomas Heftye became a notable politician.[3] Through his daughter Ingeborg Marie he was a father-in-law of Frits Hansen[4] and grandfather of Eilif Fougner.[5]

Career

His grandfather migrated to Norway from Switzerland in the late eighteenth century, and founded the family company Thos. Joh. Heftye & Søn.[6] Heftye grew up at Filipstad. He took his secondary education at Oslo Cathedral School and his higher education mainly in Leipzig. He entered the family company in 1848.[7]

Heftye was heavily involved in the organizational life of the time. He co-founded the Norwegian Trekking Association in 1868. He owned the rural areas Sarabråten, Frognerseteren and Tryvannshøyden. Already in his lifetime these were opened as recreational areas; the two latter areas later became publicly owned. He was also a member of the board of Akers Sparebank from 1873 to his death, and also of Norges Forsvarsforening, Christiania Theatre, the Society for the Preservation of Ancient Norwegian Monuments and Christiania Kunstforening. He was a known patron of the arts, and financed the publication of the diaries of Claus Pavels. He also financed writers and artists such as Aasmund Olavson Vinje, Bjørnstjerne Bjørnson, Hans Gude and P. A. Munch.[8]

He was also involved in politics. He was a member of Christiania city council from 1855 to 1856 and 1879 to 1886, and of Aker municipal council from 1869 to 1877. During the term 1880–1882 he served as a deputy representative to the Norwegian Parliament. The reason why he changed from Aker to Christiania after 1877 was that Frogner, where he lived, was incorporated into the city in 1878.[9] His villa is now used as the embassy of the United Kingdom.

Heftye was decorated as a Knight of the Swedish Order of the Polar Star in 1860, the Royal Norwegian Order of St. Olav in 1864, the Danish Order of the Dannebrog in 1866 and the French Légion d'honneur in 1867. He was also a Commander of the Austrian Order of Franz Joseph from 1867 and of the Swedish Order of Vasa in 1877. He died in October 1886 in Kristiania.[10] A memorial stone was raised for him at Midtstuen, and the road _Thomas Heftyes gate_ in Frogner, Oslo has been named after him.[11]

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title: Thomas Johannessen Heftye

question: When was Heftye born?

answer: Heftye was born on October 29, 1822.

text: "THO JOH HEFTYE (29 October 1822 – 4 October 1886" is evidence that Heftye was born on October 29, 1822.

answer: Heftye was born on October 29th, 1822.

text: "THO JOH HEFTYE (29 October 1822 – 4 October 1886" is evidence Heftye was born on October 29, 1822.

answer: October 29, 1822

text: "THO JOH HEFTYE (29 October 1822 – 4 October 1886" is evidence Heftye was born on October 29, 1822.

answer: October 29, 1822

text: "THO JOH HEFTYE (29 October 1822 – 4 October 1886" is evidence Heftye was born on October 29, 1822.

question: Who were Heftye's parents?

answer: Heftye's parents were Johannes Thomassen Heftye and Tina Haslef.

text: "son of merchant Johannes Thomassen Heftye and Tina Haslef" is evidence of who Heftye's parents were.

answer: Johannes Thomassen Heftye and Tina Haslef

text: "son of merchant Johannes Thomassen Heftye and Tina Haslef" is evidence of who Heftye's parents were.

answer: Heftye's parents were Johannes Thomassen Heftye and Tina Haslef.

text: "son of merchant Johannes Thomassen Heftye and Tina Haslef" is evidence of who Heftye's parents were.

answer: Johannes Thomassen Heftye and Tina Haslef

text: "son of merchant Johannes Thomassen Heftye and Tina Haslef" is evidence of who Heftye's parents were.

question: Who did Heftye marry?

answer: Heftye married Marie Jacobine Meyer.

text: "he married Marie Jacobine Meyer" is evidence of who Heftye married

answer: Marie Jacobine Meyer

text: "he married Marie Jacobine Meyer" is evidence of who Heftye married

answer: Marie Jacobine Meyer

text: "he married Marie Jacobine Meyer" is evidence of who Heftye married

answer: Heftye married Marie Jacobine Meyer.

text: "he married Marie Jacobine Meyer" is evidence of who Heftye married

question: What organization did Heftye co-found in 1868?

answer: Heftye co-founded the Norwegian Trekking Association.

text: "He co-founded the Norwegian Trekking Association in 1868" is evidence of the organization Heftye co-founded

answer: The Norwegian Trekking Association

text: "He co-founded the Norwegian Trekking Association in 1868" is evidence of the organization Heftye co-founded

answer: The Norwegian Trekking Association

text: "He co-founded the Norwegian Trekking Association in 1868" is evidence of the organization Heftye co-founded

answer: The Norwegian Trekking Association

text: "He co-founded the Norwegian Trekking Association in 1868" is evidence of the organization Heftye co-founded

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: Thomas Heftye was a Norwegian businessman, politician and philanthropist. He was involved in many organizations, including the Norwegian Trekking Association, and was a known patron of the arts. He served as a member of Christiania city council and as a deputy representative to the Norwegian Parliament. He was also decorated with several honors, and is remembered for his contributions to the city of Oslo.

text: Extra details in the summary exceeds its length.

refinement: Thomas Heftye was a Norwegian businessman, politician and philanthropist. He was involved in many organizations, including the Norwegian Trekking Association, and was a known patron of the arts. He served as a member of Christiania city council and as a deputy representative to the Norwegian Parliament.

answer: Thomas Heftye was a Norwegian businessman, politician, and philanthropist. He was born in Christiania as the son of merchant Johannes Thomassen Heftye (1792–1856) Tina Haslef (1798–1862). He was a nephew of Henrik Heftye. In October 1846 he married Marie Jacobine Meyer (1826–1895), a daughter of Jacob Peter Meyer and sister of Thorvald Meyer. He was heavily involved in the organizational life of the time. He co-founded the Norwegian Trekking Association in 1868. He owned the rural areas Sarabråten, Frognerseteren and Tryvannshøyden. Already in his lifetime these were opened as recreational areas; the two latter areas later became publicly owned. He was also a member of the board of Akers Sparebank from 1873 to his death, and also of Norges Forsvarsforening, Christiania Theatre, the Society for the Preservation of Ancient Norwegian Monuments and Christiania Kunstforening. He was a known patron of the arts, and financed the publication of the diaries of Claus Pavels. He also financed writers and artists such as Aasmund Olavson Vinje, Bjørnstjerne Bjørnson, Hans Gude and P. A. Munch. He was also involved in politics. He was a member of Christiania city council from 1855 to 1856 and 1879 to 1886, and of Aker municipal council from 1869 to 1877. During the term 1880–1882 he served as a deputy representative to the Norwegian Parliament. The reason why he changed from Aker to Christiania after 1877 was that Frogner, where he lived, was incorporated into the city in 1878. He was decorated as a Knight of the Swedish Order of the Polar Star in 1860, the Royal Norwegian Order of St. Olav in 1864, the Danish Order of the Dannebrog in 1866 and the French Légion d'honneur in 1867. He was also a Commander of the Austrian Order of Franz Joseph from 1867 and of the Swedish Order of Vasa in 1877. He died in October 1886 in Kristiania. A memorial stone was raised for him at Midtstuen, and the road _Thomas Heftyes gate_ in Frogner, Oslo has been named after him.

text: Too many details in the summary making it excessively long.

refinement: Thomas Heftye was a Norwegian businessman, politician, and philanthropist. He was heavily involved in the organizational life of the time and co-founded the Norwegian Trekking Association in 1868. He was a member of Christiania city council from 1855 to 1856 and 1879 to 1886, and of Aker municipal council from 1869 to 1877. He died in October 1886 in Kristiania.

answer: Thomas Johannessen Heftye was a Norwegian businessman, politician, and philanthropist. He was born in 1822, married Marie Jacobine Meyer in 1846, entered his family's company in 1848, and held several political offices at various times. He died in 1886.

answer: Thomas Johannessen Heftye was a Norwegian businessman, politician, and philanthropist. He was born in 1822 and died in 1886. He was heavily involved in the organizational life of the time.


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JOHN PETER CYRIL REED[1] (b 21 May 1951)[2] was Archdeacon of Taunton from 1999 to 2016.[3]

Reed was educated at Monkton Combe School, King's College London and Ripon College Cuddesdon. He was ordained as a deacon in 1979, and a priest in 1980. After a curacy in Croydon he was precentor at St Albans Abbey from 1982 to 1986. He was rector of Timsbury with Priston from 1986 to 1993, and team rector of Ilminster from 1993 until his appointment as archdeacon.

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[3] ‘REED, Ven. John Peter Cyril’, Who's Who 2017, A & C Black, an imprint of Bloomsbury Publishing plc, 2017; online edn, Oxford University Press, 2016 ; online edn, Nov 2016 [http://www.ukwhoswho.com/view/article/oupww/whoswho/U32106, accessed 24 Dec 2016]

title: John Reed (priest)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who was John Peter Cyril Reed?

answer: John Reed was an Archdeacon of Taunton from 1999 to 2016.

answer: John Peter Cyril Reed was an Archdeacon of Taunton. He was educated at Monkton Combe School, King's College London, and Ripon College Cuddesdon, ordained a deacon in 1979 and a priest in 1980, and was rector of Timsbury with Priston from 1986 to 1993.

text: This has a lot of extraneous information. I removed it.

refinement: John Peter Cyril Reed was an Archdeacon of Taunton.

answer: He was Archdeacon of Taunton from 1999 to 2016

answer: John Peter Cyril Reed is an archdeacon from 1999. He was educated at Monkton Combe School, King's College London, and Ripon College Cuddesdon.

text: This has extraneous information. I removed it.

refinement: John Peter Cyril Reed is an archdeacon from 1999.

text: I'm not sure why it stops at 1999.

refinement: John Peter Cyril Reed is an archdeacon from 1999-2016.

answer: John Peter Cyril Reed was an Archdeacon of Taunton from 1999 to 2016.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was Reed ordained?

answer: As a deacon in 1979 and a priest in 1980.

answer: 1979 and 1980.

answer: Reed was ordained as a deacon in 1979 and as a priest in 1980.

answer: Reed was ordained a deacon in 1979 and a priest in 1980.

answer: Reed was ordained as a deacon in 1979 and as a priest in 1980.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was Reed born?

answer: Reed was born on 21 May 1951.

answer: May 21, 1951

answer: May 21, 1951.

answer: May 21, 1951.

answer: Reed was born on 21 May 1951.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where was Reed precentor?

answer: St Albans Abbey

answer: Reed was precentor at St Albans Abbey from 1982 to 1986.

answer: St Albans Abbey from 1982 to 1986

answer: St. Albans Abbey

answer: Reed was precentor at St Albans Abbey from 1982 to 1986.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: John Peter Cyril Reed was Archdeacon of Taunton from 1999 to 2016. Reed was educated at other schools and was ordained in 1979.

answer:
John Peter Cyril Reed was ordained deacon in 1979 and priest in 1980.
He was precentor and rector in the 80's and 90's and then Archdeacon of Taunton from 1999 to 2016.

answer: John Reed is an Archdeacon of Taunton and has had experience serving in the parishes of Croydon and Priston. Currently, he is responsible for the church in Ilminster. He has a Bachelor of Arts degree from King's College London and a Master of Arts degree from Ripon College Cuddesdon.

answer: John Reed is described in short, including his education and profession background and his time in the clergy.

text: You can at least add his profession.

refinement: John Reed is described in short, including his education at Monkton COmbe School, and his professional background leading up to being and during his time as the Archdeacon of Taunton from 1999-2016.

answer: John Reed is a priest who has held several positions in churches across the county. He most recently served as archdeacon of Taunton from 1999-2016.


text:
Cesc Fábregas credited Arsenal's transformation at Liverpool tonight to an uncharacteristic tirade from Arsène Wenger in which the manager derided his players as unworthy of the club shirt. Forty-five minutes after the half-time outburst, after which they came back from behind to win 2-1, Wenger claimed his side had overcome a psychological barrier to put themselves back in the Premier League title race.

Arsenal are now third in the table, six points behind the leaders, Chelsea, having played a game fewer, following an impressive recovery at Anfield that ensured Liverpool equalled their worst start to a season under Rafael Benítez. The home side led through Dirk Kuyt's 41st-minute goal and were denied a clear penalty when William Gallas fouled Steven Gerrard. Their dominance against lethargic visitors prompted the half-time diatribe from Wenger.

"The boss screamed," said Fábregas, the Arsenal captain. "He was really disappointed with us in the first half. I've never seen him like that before. He said we didn't deserve to wear the Arsenal shirt and he was right because we really weren't good, we weren't up for it. But that gave us a boost and the second half was one of the best second halves we have played this season."

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Wenger made light of his "Mr Hyde" side at Anfield as he concentrated on a second-half response that he believes saw Arsenal shedding the insecurity that had followed their losses to Manchester United and Chelsea. "I never speak about things like that. I believe sometimes you have to respond to what the team needs," was all he said about his interval performance. "I try to be composed. I was quite composed. It is good to be able to surprise the players after 13 years.

"The first half was all Liverpool, they played at a pace above us and won all the 50-50s. I thought 1-0 was a good result for us at half-time. Liverpool played very well and we played with the handbrake down. We played with the fear of not winning big games because we had lost to Chelsea and Manchester United, and we brought that into the game. We had nothing to lose in the second half and the fear was then in Liverpool's camp. We scored a lucky first goal, an outstanding second goal and Liverpool's pace dropped in the second half. We were not under any threat for the entire 45 minutes."

Arsenal levelled through a Glen Johnson own-goal before Andrey Arshavin, who scored four times in this fixture last season, won the game with a stunning right-footed strike in the 58th minute. "His right foot is injured and he cannot hit the ball properly with it," said Wenger. "He hasn't trained all week nearly because of it."

Wenger also called on his team to discover the consistency that has eluded all the title contenders this season. They were 11 points adrift of Chelsea after losing 3-0 to them a fortnight ago. He said: "This gets us back into a good position with a game in hand and mentally it was a massive game for us. We knew, with the results yesterday, that we had to win this game. We knew that before the game started and now it is a question of consistency. I have said it before that the team who wins this league will have to be really consistent and no one has been consistent yet. It is not a three-horse race, there is Aston Villa, Tottenham and Manchester City also, and there is a long way to go."

Benítez agreed with Wenger's assessment of two contrasting halves, with defeat leaving Liverpool languishing in seventh but t. The Liverpool manager was adamant his side should have been awarded a 13th-minute penaltyfrom referee Howard Webb. "It was a clear penalty, 100%," he said. "It doesn't matter if the ball is away, in the box if it is a foul it is a foul and it is a penalty. These decisions always make a massive difference."

Benítez accepted, however, that his side's second-half collapse was symptomatic of a team without confidence. "After the first half everyone was convinced that it was a different team and a different situation and a team with a different mentality," he said.

"Maybe we needed to score the second goal and then to have this advantage for some games and then we will see if we can keep the confidence high. You could see after the own-goal that everything was different and we were without any confidence when we were passing the ball. It's not a question of quality. It's a question of confidence."

question: Who is Arsène Wenger?

answer: Arsène Wenger is the manager of Arsenal Football Club.

text: "tirade from Arsène Wenger in which the manager derided his players" indicates that Wenger is the the manager of the club

answer: He is the manager for Arsenal FC

text: "tirade from Arsène Wenger in which the manager derided his players" indicates that Wenger is the the manager of the club

answer: Arsène Wenger is the manager of the Arsenal football team.

text: "tirade from Arsène Wenger in which the manager derided his players" indicates that Wenger is the the manager of the club

question: What did Wegner tell his players during half-time that allowed them to beat Liverpool?

answer: Wegner derided his players as unworthy to wear the club shirt because they weren't any good and weren't up for the challenge.

answer: Wenger spoke to his players at half-time and criticized them for not deserving to wear the Arsenal shirt. After the half-time tirade, Arsenal came back to win the game, with Wenger later commenting that his team played with the "handbrake down" and overcame their fear of beating big opponents after losing to Chelsea and Manchester United in recent games.

text: Remove irrelevant material ("After the half-time tirade [...]")

refinement: Wenger spoke to his players at half-time and criticized them for not deserving to wear the Arsenal shirt.

answer: According to Fábregas, Wenger criticized his players in half-time, which caused them to come back from behind and win the game against Liverpool.

text: The question warrants a more specific response than "criticized"

refinement: According to Fábregas, Wenger criticized his players, saying they didn't deserve to wear the Arsenal shirt, which caused them to come back from behind and win the game against Liverpool.

question: Which team leads the Premier League title race?

answer: Chelsea

text: The article says "Arsenal are now third in the table, six points behind the leaders, Chelsea" just after referencing the Premier League title race, so we can infer that that is "the table"

answer: According to the passage, Chelsea currently hold the lead in the Premier League title race.

text: The article says "Arsenal are now third in the table, six points behind the leaders, Chelsea" just after referencing the Premier League title race, so we can infer that that is "the table"

answer: According to the article, Arsenal are now third in the table, six points behind leaders Chelsea.

text: The question doesn't ask about Arsenal; remove it from the response

refinement: According to the article, Chelsea is leading the Premier League title race

text: The article says "Arsenal are now third in the table, six points behind the leaders, Chelsea" just after referencing the Premier League title race, so we can infer that that is "the table"

question: Who is Arsenal's Team Captain?

answer: Cesc Fábregas

text: The article refers to Fábregas as "Fábregas, the Arsenal captain"

answer: Cesc Fábregas.

text: The article refers to Fábregas as "Fábregas, the Arsenal captain"

answer: Cesc Fábregas.

text: The article refers to Fábregas as "Fábregas, the Arsenal captain"

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: After Arsenal trailed Liverpool at half-time, team manager Arsène Wenger unloaded on the players, telling them they were unworthy to wear the club shirt because they weren't any good and weren't up for the challenge. According to Arsenal Team Captain Cesc Fábregas, Wegner's tirade gave the players a boost and they responded with one of the best second halves they have played all season. The win over Liverpool puts Arsenal in third place, six points behind leader Chelsea and back in the Premier League title race.

text: Arsenal "came back from behind" after half-time

text: Fabregas says Wenger "said we didn't deserve to wear the Arsenal shirt and he was right because we really weren't good, we weren't up for it. But that gave us a boost and the second half was one of the best second halves we have played this season."

text: "Arsenal are now third in the table, six points behind the leaders, Chelsea"

text: "Wenger claimed his side had overcome a psychological barrier to put themselves back in the Premier League title race."

answer: The article describes the rivalry and matches between Arsenal and Liverpool, Premiership teams, describing how the scoring works and praising Liverpool's goal and Arsenal's defense. It summarizes the match, and describes how Arsenal overcome for their second victory.

text: The article describes a single match, not "rivalry and matches"

refinement: The article describes a match between Arsenal and Liverpool, Premiership teams, describing how the scoring works and praising Liverpool's goal and Arsenal's defense. It summarizes the match, and describes how Arsenal overcome for their second victory.

text: No one is "describing how the scoring works and praising Liverpool's goal and Arsenal's defense"

refinement: The article describes a match between Arsenal and Liverpool, Premiership teams. It summarizes the match, and describes how Arsenal overcome for their second victory.

text: This is not Arsenal's "second victory"

refinement: The article describes a match between Arsenal and Liverpool, Premiership teams. It summarizes the match

text: "It summarizes the match" is redundant

refinement: The article describes a match between Arsenal and Liverpool, Premiership teams.

text: The article centers on the things Wenger said which brought the team back and led to their victory; that should be included

refinement: The article describes a match between Arsenal and Liverpool, Premiership teams. Arsenal's captain, Fábregas, credits some harsh things said by Wenger, the team manager, during half-time for giving the team a "boost" and allowing them to beat Liverpool 2-1.

answer: This article is about the Arsenal vs. Liverpool game. Cesc Fábregas is quoted since he was the captain of Arsenal. At first, Mattik Kuyt scored a goal at Anfield and Cesc belived that in the first half, Arsenal had lost. In the second half, Arsenal played with the handbrake down in the first half, but suddenly when the team's confidence was broken, the players scored an amazing goal that brought a 2-1 win to Arsenal.

text: "In the second half, Arsenal played with the handbrake down in the first half" is nonsense; in the input, Fábregas says they played with the handbrake down in the first half

refinement: This article is about the Arsenal vs. Liverpool game. Cesc Fábregas is quoted since he was the captain of Arsenal. At first, Mattik Kuyt scored a goal at Anfield and Cesc belived that in the first half, Arsenal had lost. Arsenal played with the handbrake down in the first half, but suddenly when the team's confidence was broken, the players scored an amazing goal that brought a 2-1 win to Arsenal.

text: No one is named "Mattik Kuyt;" Liverpool scored an initial goal

refinement: This article is about the Arsenal vs. Liverpool game. Cesc Fábregas is quoted since he was the captain of Arsenal. Liverpool scored a goal in the first half, and Cesc belived that in the first half, Arsenal had lost. Arsenal played with the handbrake down in the first half, but suddenly when the team's confidence was broken, the players scored an amazing goal that brought a 2-1 win to Arsenal.

text: Arsenal scored two goals in the second half to achieve their win

refinement: This article is about the Arsenal vs. Liverpool game. Cesc Fábregas is quoted since he was the captain of Arsenal. Liverpool scored a goal in the first half, and Cesc belived that in the first half, Arsenal had lost. Arsenal played with the handbrake down in the first half, but suddenly when the team's confidence was broken, Arsenal scored two goals that brought a 2-1 win to Arsenal.

text: Replace "suddenly when the team's confidence was broken" with "after being yelled at by their manager, Wenger, during half-time"

refinement: This article is about the Arsenal vs. Liverpool game. Cesc Fábregas is quoted since he was the captain of Arsenal. Liverpool scored a goal in the first half, and Cesc belived that in the first half, Arsenal had lost. Arsenal played with the handbrake down in the first half, but after being yelled at by their manager, Wenger, during half-time, Arsenal scored two goals that brought a 2-1 win to Arsenal.

text: Change "the" to "a" in "the Arsenal vs. Liverpool game"

refinement: This article is about a Arsenal vs. Liverpool game. Cesc Fábregas is quoted since he was the captain of Arsenal. Liverpool scored a goal in the first half, and Cesc belived that in the first half, Arsenal had lost. Arsenal played with the handbrake down in the first half, but after being yelled at by their manager, Wenger, during half-time, Arsenal scored two goals that brought a 2-1 win to Arsenal.

text: Remove second occurrence of "in the first half"

refinement: This article is about a Arsenal vs. Liverpool game. Cesc Fábregas is quoted since he was the captain of Arsenal. Liverpool scored a goal in the first half, and Cesc belived that Arsenal had lost. Arsenal played with the handbrake down in the first half, but after being yelled at by their manager, Wenger, during half-time, Arsenal scored two goals that brought a 2-1 win to Arsenal.

text: In the final sentence, replace later occurrences of "Arsenal" with "they"/"them"

refinement: This article is about a Arsenal vs. Liverpool game. Cesc Fábregas is quoted since he was the captain of Arsenal. Liverpool scored a goal in the first half, and Cesc belived that Arsenal had lost. Arsenal played with the handbrake down in the first half, but after being yelled at by their manager, Wenger, during half-time, they scored two goals that brought them a 2-1 winl.

answer: Arsené Wenger's half-time off in which he expressed his disappointment with his players, was the deciding factor in Arsenal's comeback win following a slow first half. The Fábregas describes how the Arsenal captain has never seen the manager like that before. This allowed them to adjust to their manager's character.

text: "This allowed them to adjust [...]" is not relevant, nor based on anything in the input

refinement: Arsené Wenger's half-time off in which he expressed his disappointment with his players, was the deciding factor in Arsenal's comeback win following a slow first half. The Fábregas describes how the Arsenal captain has never seen the manager like that before.

text: "The Fábregas" should just be "Fábregas"

refinement: Arsené Wenger's half-time off in which he expressed his disappointment with his players, was the deciding factor in Arsenal's comeback win following a slow first half. Fábregas describes how the Arsenal captain has never seen the manager like that before.

text: "Half-time off" is unclear/meaningless; replace "off" with "tirade"

refinement: Arsené Wenger's half-time tirade in which he expressed his disappointment with his players, was the deciding factor in Arsenal's comeback win following a slow first half. Fábregas describes how the Arsenal captain has never seen the manager like that before.

text: Say who the game was between

refinement: Arsené Wenger's half-time tirade in which he expressed his disappointment with his players, was the deciding factor in Arsenal's comeback win against Liverpool following a slow first half. Fábregas describes how the Arsenal captain has never seen the manager like that before.

text: "the Arsenal captain" is "Fábregas;" replace the phrase with "he"

refinement: Arsené Wenger's half-time tirade in which he expressed his disappointment with his players, was the deciding factor in Arsenal's comeback win against Liverpool following a slow first half. Fábregas describes how he has never seen the manager like that before.

answer: Arsenal's transformation at Liverpool was credited to an uncharacteristic tirade from Arsene Wenger, in which he derided his players as unworthy of the shirt because they were not up for the game. Despite the tirade, the match finished in a draw, 1 to 1, causing the players to question Wenger's judgement.

text: "Transformation at" is not very clear/descriptive; replace with "comeback during a game with"

refinement: Arsenal's comeback during a game with Liverpool was credited to an uncharacteristic tirade from Arsene Wenger, in which he derided his players as unworthy of the shirt because they were not up for the game. Despite the tirade, the match finished in a draw, 1 to 1, causing the players to question Wenger's judgement.

text: The match was not a draw; Arsenal won 2-1

refinement: Arsenal's comeback during a game with Liverpool was credited to an uncharacteristic tirade from Arsene Wenger, in which he derided his players as unworthy of the shirt because they were not up for the game. Arsenal won the game 2-1.

answer: This article is a description of a professional soccer game between Liverpool and Arsenal. The game is described in detail and then the points made by the club managers. One point made by Cesc Fabregas is a complaint about the manager's tirade.

text: The "points made by the club managers" are inconsequential

refinement: This article is a description of a professional soccer game between Liverpool and Arsenal. The game is described in detail. One point made by Cesc Fabregas is a complaint about the manager's tirade.

text: Fabregas doesn't complain about Wenger's tirade; he credits it for the victory

refinement: This article is a description of a professional soccer game between Liverpool and Arsenal. The game is described in detail. Cesc Fabregas credits a tirade by Wenger, the Arsenal manager, for the team's victory.

text: "The game is described in detail" is redundant

refinement: This article is a description of a professional soccer game between Liverpool and Arsenal. Cesc Fabregas credits a tirade by Wenger, the Arsenal manager, for the team's victory.

text: Give the final scores

refinement: This article is a description of a professional soccer game between Liverpool and Arsenal. Cesc Fabregas credits a tirade by Wenger, the Arsenal manager, for the team's victory 2-1 over Liverpool.


text:
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Driven by social good

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-   Renters Insurance

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-   Homeowners Insurance

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How Lemonade Works

Lemonade reverses the traditional insurance model. We treat the premiums you pay as if it's your money, not ours. With Lemonade, everything becomes simple and transparent. We take a flat fee, pay claims super fast, and give back what’s left to causes you care about.*

[Lemonade]

A FLAT FEE to
run everything

[Lemonade]

We pay claims
SUPER FAST

[Lemonade]

If there's money leftover,
we GIVE IT BACK TO CAUSES RUN EVERYTHING

* Subject to board discretion and the company meeting certain financial standards

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-   A-rated and backed by giants

    Lemonade is rated A-Exceptional, fully licensed and reinsured by some of the most trusted names on the planet.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What services does Lemonade offer?

answer: Lemonade's service focuses on renters insurance or homeowners insurance.

text: "Lemonade's Renters and Home Insurance" is evidence that Lemonade's services are renters and homeowner's insurance.

answer: Lemonade offers insurance for renters and homeowners.

text: "Lemonade's Renters and Home Insurance" is evidence that Lemonade's services are renters and homeowner's insurance.

answer: Lemonade offers renters and homeowners insurance.

text: "Lemonade's Renters and Home Insurance" is evidence that Lemonade's services are renters and homeowner's insurance.

answer: Lemonade offers Renters and Homeowners Insurance. These insurance plans are powered by AI and Behavioral Economics. The company is focused on social good. Plans are available for a monthly subscription fee. They are backed by some of the most trusted names on the planet and rated A-Exceptional.

text: "Lemonade's Renters and Home Insurance" is evidence that Lemonade's services are renters and homeowner's insurance.

answer: It offers home and renter's insurance.

text: "Lemonade's Renters and Home Insurance" is evidence that Lemonade's services are renters and homeowner's insurance.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What critical difference does Lemonade offer compared to traditional insurance?

answer: Their model reverses the traditional model that favors the insurance companies over the policy holders. Personal premiums paid go to claims, not to the company. Many companies do not disclose this information.

text: It misses to mention that the remaining premium are donated after claims are paid.

refinement: Their model reverses the traditional model that favors the insurance companies over the policy holders. Personal premiums paid go to claims, not to the company. The remaining premiums are donated after claims are paid.

answer: they reverse the traditional model of making homeowners, renters pay insurance premiums, and claim that they pay the claims because they are Lemonade subscribers, rather than Lemonade paying their premiums

text: It misses to mention that Lemonade only takes a flat fee instead of keeping the premium. And donates the remaining after claims are paid.

refinement: they reverse the traditional model of making homeowners, renters pay insurance premiums, and claim that they pay the claims by keeping a flat fee and donating the remaining after claims are paid.

answer: They claim to treat the premiums as the payer's money, not theirs. If there's money left over, they donate it.

text: "Lemonade reverses the traditional insurance model. We treat the premiums you pay as if it's your money, not ours. and give back what’s left to causes you care about" is evidence that Lemonade treats the payers money as their own, not the company's. Additionally that leftover money is donated.

answer: Lemonade pays claims quickly and gives back any profits left over to causes that matter to its users, rather than banking the money for its own benefit.

text: "Lemonade reverses the traditional insurance model. We treat the premiums you pay as if it's your money, not ours. and give back what’s left to causes you care about" is evidence that Lemonade treats the payers money as their own, not the company's. Additionally that leftover money is donated.

answer: Lemonade presents a unique peer-to-peer insurance model. All costs are borne by the company rather than being imposed on the users, and any leftovers are donated to charities. Lemonade also prioritizes customer experience, ease of use, and affordability.

text: "Lemonade reverses the traditional insurance model. We treat the premiums you pay as if it's your money, not ours. and give back what’s left to causes you care about" is evidence that Lemonade treats the payers money as their own, not the company's. Additionally that leftover money is donated.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How does Lemonade manage to offer its services while being so different from traditional insurance?

answer: Lemonade uses advanced artificial intelligence and behavioral economics to craft perfect insurance for its customers. Additionally, all premiums are treated as customer's money, to be spent earning social good.

text: "Powered by AI and behavioral economics" is evidence of how they manage to offer their competitive services.

answer: Lemonade uses artificial intelligence combined with behavioral economics to create the perfect insurance for its customers. Uniquely, it does so in a way that positions their premiums as if it's their customers' money. Additionally, the company pays claims super fast while giving back what's left to causes customers care about.

text: "Powered by AI and behavioral economics" is evidence of how they manage to offer their competitive services.

answer: There is a small flat charge alongside a similar claim system to that of traditional insurance.

text: There is no evidence to suggest they use a similar claim system and misses to mention how the manage to offer the competitive services.

refinement: Lemonade uses artificial intelligence combined with behavioral economics to create the perfect insurance

answer: They claim that they are powered by artificial intelligence and behavioral economics.

text: "Powered by AI and behavioral economics" is evidence of how they manage to offer their competitive services.

answer: It says - "We treat the premiums that you pay as if it's your money, not ours"

text: it misses to mention how they manage to do so.

refinement: It says - "We treat the premiums that you pay as if it's your money, not ours" by using artificial intelligence combined with behavioral economics to create the perfect insurance

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How much does Lemonade ask for its services?

answer: Lemonade asks for monthly subscriptions at $5 for renters insurance and $25 for homeowners insurance.

text: "Monthly, from $5 Get renters insurance; Monthly, from $25 Get home insurance" is evidence of how much Lemonade asks for its services.

answer: It's not stated, but is stated many times to be affordable.

text: It incorrectly mentions that it is not stated, however it says it costs nonthly, from $5 Get renters insurance; monthly, from $25 Get home insurance

refinement: Monthly, from $5 Get renters insurance; Monthly, from $25 Get home insurance

answer: Lemonade asks for monthly subscriptions of $5 for renters insurance and $25 for home insurance.

text: "Monthly, from $5 Get renters insurance; Monthly, from $25 Get home insurance" is evidence of how much Lemonade asks for its services.

answer: Lemonade asks $5 per month for renter's insurance and $25 per month for homeowner's insurance.

text: "Monthly, from $5 Get renters insurance; Monthly, from $25 Get home insurance" is evidence of how much Lemonade asks for its services.

answer: From 5$ to 25$.

text: "Monthly, from $5 Get renters insurance; Monthly, from $25 Get home insurance" is evidence of how much Lemonade asks for its services.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: Lemonade is an AI-powered insurance company that puts your premiums in the drivers seat. Major insurance coverage for renters and homeowners is offered at unbeatable prices. With Lemonade, everything is fast and transparent, including claims. If there's extra money left at the end of the month, it goes to causes you care about.

answer: Maya, the artificial intelligence bot, is reviewed. The method that Lemonade Insurance uses to insure things is described. The app is reviewed. Writeups from satisfied customers are cited.

text: It misses to mention Lemonade's aim is to reverse the traditional insurance model

refinement: Maya, the artificial intelligence bot, is reviewed. The method that Lemonade Insurance uses is to reverse the traditional insurance model, treating the premiums as the customer's money and not the company's. The app is reviewed and writeups from satisfied customers are cited.

text: It misses to mention that Lemonade only charges a flat fee and donates the remaining premium after paying claims.

refinement: Maya, the artificial intelligence bot, is reviewed. The method that Lemonade Insurance uses is to reverse the traditional insurance model, treating the premiums as the customer's money and not the company's. Lemonade charges a flat fee and donates the remaining premium after paying claims. The app is reviewed and writeups from satisfied customers are cited.

answer: Lemonade is a revolutionary approach to insurance, reinvented for the modern era. Powered by artificial intelligence and behavioral economics, we offer unparalleled coverage at killer prices. Maya, our dazzling AI bot, will craft the perfect insurance for you. With a flat fee and easy monthly subscription, Lemonade puts your money back into your pocket. We are rated A-Excellent by recognized regulators and backed by some of the most respected names in business.

text: Less relevant details are included instead of more important details.

refinement: Lemonade is a revolutionary approach to insurance, reinvented for the modern era. Powered by artificial intelligence and behavioral economics, we offer unparalleled coverage at killer prices. Maya, our dazzling AI bot, will craft the perfect insurance for you. With a flat fee and easy monthly subscription, Lemonade puts your money back into your pocket, donating the remaining money.

answer: Lemonade is powered by artificial intelligence and behavioral economics. They offer renter's insurance at $5 per month and homeowner's insurance at $25 per month. Lemonade says they pay claims in minutes and donate the remainder to causes people care about. They also make it easy for people who are already insured to switch.

text: There's no evidence to suggest they pay claims in minutes, however they say they pay super fast.

refinement: Lemonade is powered by artificial intelligence and behavioral economics. They offer renter's insurance at $5 per month and homeowner's insurance at $25 per month. Lemonade says they pay claims super fast and donate the remainder to causes people care about. They also make it easy for people who are already insured to switch.

answer: The Pitch for the Lemonade App demonstrates the insurance services being offered by AI bots acting with the facilitation of behavioral economics and social good. It can be instantly accessed through an App only at rental properties and home insurance. With a flat fee, it would be enough to cover the costs of servicing both renters and homeowner insurance leaves any leftover unused money to be given back to causes you care about. Lemonade App reverses the traditional insurance model, they treat premiums as if it's the customer's, not theirs.


text:
iPhone Screenshots

UTS is an Indian Railways official iOS mobile ticketing application which allows the daily train travellers to book unreserved tickets of Indian Railways using their Smartphone. The application is designed in such a way that it is easy to use and has user friendly interface with features like book ticket, cancel ticket, maintain their profile, manage frequent travel routes , etc.The passenger will use Railway wallet to book the ticket.
There are two modes for booking Tickets : (i) Paper (ii) Paperless. In case of paper ticket user has to take a printout from kiosk/counter at concerned station. Whereas in case of Paperless ticket user's Location will be captured to determine he/she is present in valid ticketing area. In this mode no printout is required and the user can directly show his ticket from his smartphone to the TTE. Moreover an alternative to location check has also been introduced in limited stations where a user can scan a unique barcode present at station premises to book his paperless ticket.

What’s New

* Newly designed user interface.
* Easy navigation for all types of bookings.
* Bug fixes

Ratings and Reviews

4.6 out of 5

72.8K Ratings

Most awaited app

  The developer should understand the urgency of the user and the impact on the current on going situation, here are few bugs I would like to list

  1) if the selected stations shows some error or ticket can’t be booked message, user can restart ans does the same and bang!! It works so the parameters aren’t right? Or its just a bug

  2) update would be needed that if the user wants to travel form multiple station to particular station , fastest route and the amount should be shown in order to give them convince and this would help the newbie in the city

Horrible App

  This app is nightmare to use. I want to know who developed this app. After entering all the details it will ask to login and register. After registration again you need to start from the beginning. After booking, if you select show ticket it will say no active ticket found. If you click on booking history it will ask to login. Login and try again it will display partial ticket, click on it for more details instead it will ask you whether you want to rebook the ticket. What the hell and top of that beside my ticket it will show next trains. What the hell I am supposed to with next train and why it’s getting displayed in booking history. Ticket id in Booking history and Cancel ticket are different. I can’t logout and login from different mobile it says my imei verification under progress. One more thing, how the common man should know whether the train is slow, express of super fast especially express and super fast in India train does not make any difference instead could have provided Option to select train which is much easier. Did the people get paid to rate so much for this under developed app? School kids will do a better job.

Very bad performance in location option and login

  What the hell developer doing, in my i phone i set my location, even your app shows you have to be far 25km or 5km away from station and rail track res. Another interesting thing i found in app when i tried to book my actual journey ticket which is of 80/- it shows message like you have to be far from station 25km ( even i am far as 15km from station) then forcefully i booked ticket which is before station from where actually my journey start. And you know what it booked successfully. For that i have to pay 100. No matter 20/- is not big amount but if we calculate #ghotala like this 20 or 10 *10,000=1,00,000. Omg 1 lack. And this is just my prediction amount might be you are doing ghotala with lots of people. So please government is already rich dont do this else we will become poor. Mehanat ka kamate hai bhai kursi par ya sarkari logo ki trah baithkar sirf pise nahi aate. 10-11 hrs kaam karte hai sharir tutane tak tab jakar kuch pise aate hai hath me. Aur tum baith jaate hume lootane ke liye

Information

Provider
    Centre for Railway Information Systems

Size
    75.7 MB

Category
    Travel

Compatibility

    Requires iOS 9.0 or later. Compatible with iPhone, iPad and iPod touch.

Age Rating
    4+

Copyright
    © 2018 Centre for Railway Information Systems

Price
    Free

-   App Support
-   Privacy Policy

-   App Support
-   Privacy Policy

Supports

-   []
    Family Sharing

    Up to six family members will be able to use this app with Family Sharing enabled.

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What kind of article is this?

answer: It's an application download page on an iPhone. The description of the UTS app is followed by ratings and reviews.

text: It is not a download page but the app description.

refinement: The description of the UTS app is followed by ratings and reviews.

answer: This is a review of the UTS official iOS mobile ticketing application.

answer: A description of an app.

text: This is also a review.

answer: This article is a review of a mobile ticketing application.

answer: This overview is an advertisement/marketing post for an application on the Apple Store.

text: It is not an advertisement/marketing post but a review.

refinement: This is a review of an application on the Apple Store.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the general reception to the app?

answer: Overall reviews were favourable, ratings were 4.6 out of 5.

answer: The majority of users are quite happy with the app with only a few identifying usability issues. The majority of users consider the app easy to use and with a user-friendly interface.

answer: The reviewers on the app store say it is a very good app, with some bugs that need to be worked out.

answer: The app has generally received positive reviews, but there have also been some bugs identified. Some users have had difficulty using the location and login features.

answer: While the ratings show a well-liked app, the reviews on the page are all negative. The complaints are about ill-implemented features and the lacking ease of use. One user complains about the lack of a route planning feature.


text:
To Hatch From a Broken Egg

I was sitting in the living room with my arms crossed when Grandpa gathered the family around the dining room table. Grandpa was a giant of a man, with thighs like redwoods and hands like plains. I was the last to stand up when I began to walk over to the circle that had formed around the table. “I would like to see,” Grandpa began, with big pauses between each phrase, “someone attempt to balance this egg upright, without using any tools to hold it up.”

The whiteness of the egg stood out in Grandpa’s wrinkled and purple spotted hands. It seemed so small. I studied the egg while my family began to buzz. My older cousin smirked and whispered something in my Dad’s ears that made him laugh. Uncle Joe was doing one of his James Cagney impressions to my brother and cousin. Aunt Anna had walked in the room from cooking and chuckled when she saw my grandpa holding the egg.

I was the only one paying attention, focusing on how you could possibly make a small oval stand. No one else was going to complete this challenge but me. When my Mom put her arms around my chest, and gave me a kiss on the cheek I pushed her away and said, “I can do it!”

My grandpa’s heavy eyes shifted to me and his lips peeled into a grin, revealing yellow stained crooked teeth. His hands, like a giant compared to mine, handed me the egg. I began working right away.

I made quick glances to Grandpa as I tried to balance it, hoping his gray eyes would light up at a correct attempt or that his white eyebrows would raise at a sign of progress, but he remained unemotional and still. I tried to ignore the commentary of my family at first.  Dad said, “oh so close,” several times with a laugh while Uncle David commentated like a sports announcer, “Jake Lacey. Balancing the egg. Can he do it? Ah, keeps missing.”

After several minutes my older cousin said, “Come on, Jake. Give it back to Grandpa.” I ignored him but when my Mom stepped in saying, “Hun, you can try later, it’s fine,” the doubt became harder to ignore.

“Let me just try!” I said, trying not to sound upset.

Eventually my Uncle Joe stopped impersonating James Cagney. My father raised his eye brows and stood up from the table and my brother began to attack me. “Jake you can’t do it.”

“Don’t worry, Jakey. It’s impossible,” someone else said.

I wanted to shut my family up and make them see that I could do it. I wanted them to know that just I could complete a task that was impossible for most. And I did.

I finally stood the egg up right. It wasn’t balancing against anything; it was just standing up on its own. All because of me. I looked up in amazement, hoping to see my family enthusiastic with my accomplishment, but instead, half of them were gone and the other half had already moved on to new conversations. Only my cousin Rachel said, “Wow! Look guys! Jake did it!”

As Rachel began to get my family’s attention I looked to Grandpa who was not grinning but seemed thrown by the egg standing up. As I waited for a response from Grandpa, the whole family began to circle back around the table.

Before they could all see what I had done, Grandpa snagged the egg off the table, smashed it lightly against a plate, leaving the egg’s bottom flat surfaced with a crack, placed the it on the table, and forced a chuckle as everyone watched the egg stand up on its own. He said, “That is how you make an egg stand.”

I quickly looked at my Grandpa, who avoided eye contact with me and laughed deliberately with the older cousins. My head spun to my parents, who had acknowledged Grandpa’s quaint gag but not my success and then it spun back to my Grandpa who was still ignoring me.

I darted out of living room and up to my room. I dove into my bed, grabbed my Teddy and belted a long hard cry into my pillow. No one came up to check on me until after they had lit the candles.

title: Flash Fiction Piece, notes please?

question: Who is the narrator?

answer: Jake Lacey

answer: The narrator is Jake Lacey.

text: The narrator's name is Jake Lacey.

answer: The narrator is Jake, a young boy who is trying to prove himself to his family.

text: The narrator's name is Jake Lacey.

answer: A young boy named Jake.

question: Why is Jake upset?

answer: Jake is upset because his family did not acknowledge his success in balancing the egg, instead preferring to laugh at his failure. He feels like his accomplishment was not appreciated, and that his family does not take him seriously.

answer: No one paid attention to his efforts to balance the egg.

text: No one paid him any attention when he succeeded at his task.

answer: Jake is upset because his family ignores his accomplishment and instead focuses on Grandpa's joke.

answer: He feels ignored by his family.

question: Why did Jake's grandpa ignore him?

answer: Because he was making a gag and didn't expect Jake to accomplish the feat without cheating. His success cheapened his grandpa's joke.

answer: Jake's grandpa ignored him because he was embarrassed that Jake was able to complete the challenge of balancing the egg upright, while the rest of the family had not been able to.

answer: It's not clear, but it seems that Jake's grandpa was trying to teach him a lesson.

answer: Jake's grandpa ignored him because he was embarrassed that Jake had completed the task.

question: Who said "Don't worry, Jakey. It's impossible?"

answer: One of the older cousins said "Don't worry, Jakey. It's impossible."

text: There is no evidence for this.

refinement: Someone said "Don't worry, Jakey. It's impossible."

answer: Uncle Joe

text: Uncle Joe did not say that.

refinement: We do not know exactly who said, "Don't worry, Jakey. It's impossible?"

answer: Unclear

answer: Doesn't say who.

text: Unclear answer.

text: The passage offers no name for the person.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: The protagonist is trying to balance an egg on its end without any tools, but is met with doubt and teasing from their family. They eventually succeed, but their family ignores their accomplishment and instead focuses on the egg balancing itself. The protagonist retreats to their room in disappointment.

text: The family did not focus on the egg-balancing act but on grandpa's gag.

refinement: The protagonist is trying to balance an egg on its end without any tools but is met with doubt and teasing from their family. They eventually succeed, but their family ignores their accomplishment and instead focuses on Grandpa's gag. The protagonist retreats to their room in disappointment.

answer: Jake is a young boy who is trying to balance an egg on its end. His family is gathered around the table, and his grandfather challenges him to do it. Jake tries for a while, but his family begins to doubt him. He succeeds, but his grandfather takes the egg and smashes it, saying that's how you make an egg stand. Jake runs to his room and cries.

text: Jake did succeed while his family's attention was somewhere else. Also, Granpa did not smash the egg completely; he smashed the tip to make it stand upright.

refinement: Jake is a young boy who is trying to balance an egg on its end. His family is gathered around the table, and his grandfather challenges him to do it. Jake tries for a while, but his family begins to doubt him. He eventually succeeds while his family's attention was somewhere else. Before everyone could notice what Jake has done, his grandfather takes the egg and smashes the tip, balancing it while announcing how you make an egg stand. Jake runs to his room and cries.

answer: The narrator, Jake, is hanging out with his family when his grandfather grabs everyone's attention and challenges them to “attempt to balance this egg upright, without using any tools to hold it up.” Young Jake takes it much too seriously, continuing to try to get it to stay upright long after everyone has grown weary of his efforts. When he suddenly and miraculously succeeds, no one is around anymore. A cousin pulls everyone together, but his grandpa reveals it was a joke by showing them his intended answer: smashing the bottom flat. No one acknowledges Jake's success and storms off to bed to cry.

text: Unclear summary.

refinement: The narrator, Jake, is hanging out with his family when his grandfather grabs everyone's attention and challenges them to “attempt to balance this egg upright, without using any tools to hold it up.” Young Jake takes it much too seriously, continuing to try to get it to stay upright long after everyone has grown weary of his efforts. When he suddenly and miraculously succeeds, no one is around anymore. A cousin calls everyone's attention to it, but Grandpa quickly picks up the egg and smashed the bottom flat, balancing the egg before anyone could see what Jake did. No one acknowledges Jake storms off to bed to cry.

answer: Jake is a young boy who is trying to balance an egg on its end. He is the only one in his family who is trying to do this, and he succeeds. However, when he shows his family, they ignore him and laugh at him. He runs away and cries.

text: Most of the family members never saw what Jake accomplished.

refinement: Jake is a young boy who is trying to balance an egg on its end. He is the only one in his family who is trying to do this, and he succeeds. However, before he can show his family, his grandpa (who gave him the egg challenge) takes the egg and smashes the bottom, balancing it on the table. Jake is upset and retreats to his room.