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**Out of Time**

*968 Words*

Harper Welles pushed through the heavy crowd along Hyde-Pierce Promenade in the heart of the Blue Zone. He was working against the tide of people like a spawning salmon. The collar of his long canvas coat was turned up to keep the stinging rain off his neck while his mask protected most of his face. Branded in mustard yellow lettering across the area just above the bug-eye lenses was his government assigned Personal ID: W-HG070147-BL-91-937PA.

A beefy hand clothed in a neoprene glove clutched at the shoulder of Harper’s black duster and roughly yanked him into the narrow, dark space between buildings. “Well lookie here, Flick. We got us a young one from Sector 91.  A little far from home aren’t you? Do your Matri and Patri know where you are, offspring?” The words came out stark and unencumbered. Harper just stared at the mountainous man with missing teeth and a face peppered with small glistening acne-like sores. He had heard about those who had acclimated to the ruinous, lung-biting atmosphere but their life expectancy was considerably shorter.

“He’s a good one, Bull,” said the shorter of the two. His words sounded normal, muffled. Flick’s government PID had been shaved off his mask. Shit, Harper thought, Unknowns. “I wonder if he makes noise,” Flick continued and poked Harper lightly with a slender metal rod.

“Yeah, offspring. I asked you a question. You a deaf-mute or something?” Harper, still surprised into silence, blinked as Bull effortlessly lifted him from his feet.  “Let’s give this one some flying lessons, Flick.”  The landscape tilted and rotated as he felt himself sail through the air.  He watched the slice of dirty orange haze outside the alley until he hit the back wall and fell onto a pile of debris, his mask jarred loose from his head.  The cardboard and trash collapsed beneath him like a sink hole and Harper disappeared through it.

The landing on his back was a hard one and forced all the air out of his lungs. He kept his eyes squeezed closed bracing for a second attack from the pair of Unknowns. At the same time Harper was afraid to breathe in without his mask. His ears were ringing by the time reflexes took over and he gulped air into his lungs. Sweet, cool, soothing, unexpected air.

His eyes sprang open and like Dorothy stepping into Munchkin Land, Harper was faced with an equally alien landscape. He slid up the alley wall to a standing position, eyes darting. The orange dinge had been replaced with lapis blue skies and the poisoned atmosphere was gone. Harper filled his lungs again, deeply. No burn. No choking. Just pure, perfumed, smooth air.

Bull and Flick, along with the rest of the scurrying populace had vanished. Only a few unmasked individuals dotted the walkway beyond the alley, moving at a leisurely, unguarded pace. Bright unfiltered sunlight bathed the relatively clean concrete and macadam. Near the mouth of the short alley was the entrance to what purported to be the Grand Grocery Co. Loosely hand lettered on the glass doors were the words “WE’RE OPEN. COME IN!” After looking around for a moment longer, Harper complied with the directive.

Before poking his head inside, he ran his hand over the door frame in a caressing motion. Wood. He had never seen this much wood. A whole building constructed from it, the proprietor must be a very wealthy man.  The floors creaked under his footsteps despite his stepping reverently to avoid damage. He was assaulted with a wall of smells. Fresh, sweet, earthy and grassy smells. He was amazed by the pyramids of fruits and abundance of vegetable stacked with abandon in heavy crate-like bins. Fruit and veg right from the tree and soil.

“Son?” An older man in a shoulder-to-shin white apron stood at the front window where he had been stacking round orange-skinned foods for display. “Can I help you? Are you feeling all right? You don’t look well.” The shopkeeper was alarmed by the boy’s extremely pale and unhealthy appearance.

“I was attacked by a couple of…” He stopped himself before the word “Unknowns” came out.

“You’re not local, are you, son?” Harper shook his head in answer to the old man’s question.  He has no idea how much an understatement that is, Harper thought. “Take a seat.  There’s a chair over behind the counter.”  The old man steered the black-coated young man over towards the counter with a kind hand on his back.  "I saw you eyein’ those oranges.  Would you like one?”

Harper nodded this time. He was disarmed by the kindness the man showed.  The world—or time—he came from was a desperate, untrusting place and period. His own family unit, if he had still belonged to one, would not have shown caring of this level. The man in the apron returned with two oranges and Harper sunk his teeth deeply into one.

“Hang on there, son. Those ain’t apples. You gotta peel these.  Here, let me show you.”  The shopkeeper removed the thick bumpy skin in big chunks revealing tender succulent wedges.  The boy popped one in his mouth and bit down. Juice as fresh and welcomed as the air and sun outside the shop filled his mouth.  He greedily shoved two more sections in at the same time. Juice leaked from the corners of his mouth while tears ran down his cheeks mixing with the nectar. He wept as the old man—a stranger to him—stroked the boy’s back with gentle compassion.  Harper Garrett Welles had no idea how he would ever find his way back to where or when he came from. He desperately hoped that he never would.

title: I've written a few short stories but this is my first foray into Science-Fiction. Feedback welcomed.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Harper's movements over the course of the story.

answer: Harper first makes his way through a crowded walkway, only to be pulled into a dark alley and threatened by two Unknowns. He falls through a cardboard and trash pile, landing on his back. Once he recovers, Harper finds himself in a completely different place. In the Grand Grocery Co. he meets an old man and amazed by the abundance of fresh fruit and vegetables. The old man teaches Harper how to peel an orange properly, and Harper succumbs to his hunger and weeps in gratitude for the food he's never seen in his own time. Even so, he's convinced that he doesn't want to go back.

answer: At the start of the story, Harper is running through a stretch of buildings while trying to escape. The buildings contain some kind of black smoke. He reaches a gap between the buildings and encounters a very large man named Bull, presumably an outsider, and the man tries to question Harper. Flick, the other man, suddenly hits Harper on the head with a metal rod. Harper doesn't fall unconscious. Harper then wakes up on top of a mound of trash up against a wall in another location. It is safe for him to breathe the air here, and he recovers a bit. After exploring his new surroundings, he walks toward The Grand Grocery Co. and enters.

answer: Harper pushes through the crowd along Hyde-Pierce Promenade. He is sent flying through the air, falling on a pile of debris. He winds up in an alien landscape. He walks to the end of an alley and enters a building called the Grand Grocery Co.

answer: Harper darts among the crowd. He’s yanked into an alley, where he sees the passage to a grocery store before him. The shopkeeper guides the boy to a chair.

text: This doesn't fully answer the question

refinement: In the beginning of the story, Harper is caught in a crowd. He is quickly grabbed by two strangers, Flick and Bull, who threaten him. He then falls on the ground and finds himself transported to an alternate reality where the atmosphere is clean, the inhabitants are unmasked and there are displays of fruit in abundance. The old shopkeeper lets Harper rest and eat an orange, and eventually, Harper accepts that he cannot return home to the place he came from.

answer: In the beginning of the story, Harper is caught in a crowd. He is quickly grabbed by two strangers, Flick and Bull, who threaten him. He then falls on the ground and finds himself transported to an alternate reality where the atmosphere is clean, the inhabitants are unmasked and there are displays of fruit in abundance. The old shopkeeper lets Harper rest and eat an orange, and eventually Harper accepts that he cannot return home to the place he came from.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the instances in the story where Harper is in danger.

answer: Harper Welles is attacked by a large man named Bull that suggests he needs to be deaf, mute, and unaware of personal information. The man may want to kill him. Harper could become a John Doe. Harper is so stunned by the attack that he doesn't cry out. He ducks through a narrow space between buildings and lands in an alley.

text: This was intended as an insult

refinement: Harper Welles is attacked by a large man named Bull. The man may want to kill him. Harper could become a John Doe. Harper is so stunned by the attack that he doesn't cry out. He ducks through a narrow space between buildings and lands in an alley.

text: He flies through the air. Then falls through a dump

refinement: Harper Welles is attacked by a large man named Bull. The man may want to kill him. Harper could become a John Doe. Harper is so stunned by the attack that he doesn't cry out. The men toss him through the air.

text: He is attacked by two large men

refinement: Harper Welles is attacked by two large men named Bull and Flick. The man may want to kill him. Harper could become a John Doe. Harper is so stunned by the attack that he doesn't cry out. The men toss him through the air.

answer: Harper is grabbed roughly by the shoulder and thrown into an alley by two Unknowns, later identified as Flick and Bull. While there, Harper is assaulted by poisonous air but after falling back through a gap in the wall of a building the atmosphere is changed to one of blue skies and sweet perfumed air. The Unknowns attempt to attack Harper again but the shopkeeper saves him and feeds him oranges.

text: The Unknowns have disappeared so they are no longer a threat to Harper

refinement: Harper is grabbed roughly by the shoulder and thrown into an alley by two Unknowns, later identified as Flick and Bull. While there, Harper is assaulted by poisonous air but after falling back through a gap in the wall of a building the atmosphere is changed to one of blue skies and sweet perfumed air.

answer: Harper is in danger from the rain, which stings when it lands on his neck. Harper is then attacked by Bill and Flick, a pair of Unknowns.

text: There is no indication that the rain is a danger even though it stings

refinement: Harper is attacked by Bill and Flick, a pair of Unknowns.

text: In complete answer

refinement: Harper is grabbed roughly by the shoulder and thrown into an alley by two Unknowns, later identified as Flick and Bull. While there, Harper is assaulted by poisonous air but after falling back through a gap in the wall of a building the atmosphere is changed to one of the blue skies and sweetly perfumed air.

answer: Harper is yanked into the alley between buildings, held upside down, and then hit and falls. Then, before he can breathe, he is thrown into a pile of trash and rubble. He bounced off one wall and then sunk into another.

answer: Harper is pulled into a dark space between buildings by two unknown men. They threaten him with a metal rod and then throw him to the ground, threatening to throw him again. In an alien place, Harper encounters an older man in a shop, and tears up while eating oranges provided by the old man.

text: Harper was in no danger with the old man

refinement: Harper is pulled into a dark space between buildings by two unknown men. They threaten him with a metal rod and then throw him to the ground, threatening to throw him again.


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WILLIAM ALPHONSUS “WEE WILLIE” CRILLEY (29 August 1901 – 16 September 1955) was a Scottish-American football forward who holds the record for the greatest number of goals scored by an Alloa Athletic player in a single season of the Scottish Football League. He had an itinerant career, spending most of it in the United States with a few seasons, or parts of seasons in Scotland.

Career

During his youth, Crilley played for Pale Ale, a local Glasgow amateur team. In 1920, he began the season with Cambuslang Rangers. During the season, he moved to Alloa Athletic of the Scottish Football League Second Division. In his first season with Alloa, he scored the game winners in Alloa's first and second round victories in the Scottish Cup. He also scored in the third round replay with Rangers F.C., a 4–1 loss for Alloa. Despite the loss in the Scottish Cup, Alloa won the 1921 Penman Trophy and Stirlingshire Cup. The next year, Crilley carried Alloa to the Second Division championship as he scored a record forty-nine goals, an amazing feat for a five-foot three center forward. Alloa transferred Crilley to Celtic at the end of the season, but he played only three first team games, scoring a single goal. Celtic sent him back to Alloa at the end of the season, but injuries hindered his playing time.[1]

He then left Scotland to sign with New York Field Club in the American Soccer League which had not yet finished its season. He played five games, scoring five goals. Crilley began the 1923–1924 season in New York, played two league games, one National Challenge Cup game before being transferred to the New York Giants. He played two games, scoring one goal, then returned to Scotland to rejoin Alloa.[2] According to the Alloa history, he was “transferred down south for £1,250” but it does not identify Crilley's new team. However, at some point he returned to the United States where he played eleven games of the 1924–1925 season with Indiana Flooring.

Crilley returned to the Giants for the 1925–1926 season, seeing his greatest number of games during any stint with a US team, twenty-eight. By this time, he was no longer a center forward and had become better known as a top winger and an excellent play maker. Crilley resumed his nomadic career during the 1926–1927 season, bouncing between three teams during the course of the season. He began with the Giants, played nine games for J&P Coats and finished with two games at Philadelphia Field Club. He then played for the New York Nationals in 1927–1928.[3] In the 1928–1929 season, he was with Brooklyn Hispano, New York Hungaria and the IRT Rangers of the Eastern Professional Soccer League.[4][5]

He apparently returned to Scotland intending to play for Alloa Athletic, but was deported from Scotland because he had become a US citizen.[6] Therefore, he was back into the ASL in the fall of 1930 with the Newark Americans and the New York Soccer Club. While he played only one league game with New York SC, he saw another five cup games in which he scored seven goals. He continued his itinerant ways in 1931, playing for both the Fall River F.C. and the Brooklyn Wanderers before joining the New York American in the fall of 1931. Crilley replicated his early career goal scoring heroics for these last two teams, scoring 14 goals in 7 games for Brooklyn and 9 goals in 10 games for the Americans.[7] In 1932, he attempted to rejoin Alloa Athletic, but was rebuffed.[8] In 1935, he played for Brooklyn Hispano in the second American Soccer League.

He returned to the United States and joined the US Army on 18 November 1942, serving in the Air Corps with Fifteenth Air Force during World War II.[9]

[1] Alloa Athletic History

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[4] The Year in American Soccer – 1929

[5] April 22, 1929 The Globe

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title: Willie Crilley

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What makes William Alphonsus Crilley distinctive?

answer: He is widely known as Willie Crilley.

text: I don't think his nickname makes him distinctive

text: Provide a response

refinement: He holds the record for the greatest number of goals scored by an Alloa Athletic player in a single season of the Scottish Football League, and he had an unusually itinerant career, spending it in both the United States and Scotland.

answer: Crilley is distinctive for being the Alloa Athletic player who scored the most goals in a single season of the Scottish Football League. He was also a highly skilled winger with great goal-scoring prowess. He played most of his career in the United States and was a veteran of World War II.

answer: He is a Scottish-American football forward who holds the record for the greatest number of goals scored by an Alloa Athletic player in a single season of the Scottish Football League.

answer: Crilley was a Scottish-American football forward who holds the record for the greatest number of goals scored by an Alloa Athletic player in a single season of the Scottish Football League. His itinerant career moved him frequently between Scotland and the United States, making him notable for his unique playing experience.

answer: He was a Scottish-American football forward and he holds the record for the greatest number of goals scored by an Alloa Athletic player in a single season of the Scottish Football League. He started his career with a Glasgow amateur team named Pale Ale and ended it with the US Army.

text: While he did serve in the US Army, I don't think one can say he "ended" his career there

refinement: He was a Scottish-American football forward and he holds the record for the greatest number of goals scored by an Alloa Athletic player in a single season of the Scottish Football League. He started his career with a Glasgow amateur team named Pale Ale.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe Crilley's early career.

answer: Crilley began his career playing for amateur teams in Scotland. In 1920, he moved to Alloa Athletic of the Scottish Football League Second Division and helped the team win two trophies. The following year, he set a league record with 49 goals, but played most of his career in the United States. He bounced between multiple teams between 1926 and 1932 before serving in the US Army during World War II.

answer: He began his career in 1920 as a center forward for Cambuslang Rangers. He scored a game winner in the second round victory over the Scottish Cup. Over the course of his career, he bounced between teams over the course of a single season. He bounced from team to team, often injuring himself and needing healing time. At a couple of points, he left Scotland to play in the American Soccer League.

answer: He played for Pale Ale, a local Glasgow amateur team. In 1920 he began the season with the Cambuslang Rangers. Then he moved to the Alloa Athletic Club, where he would spend much of the rest of his Scottish career.

answer: Crilley began the 1920 season with Cambuslang Rangers before moving to Alloa Athletic, where he scored in the Scottish Cup. He subsequently carried Alloa to the Second Division championship, breaking the record for most goals scored by an Alloa Athletic player in a single season. He left Scotland for the United States where he played with three different teams, before returning to Scotland in 1928. He was then deported and subsequently played in the second American Soccer League where he again showed his talent for scoring goals.

answer: His early career consisted of playing junior football at a local Glasgow amateur team called Pale Ale. Crilley then moved to Cambuslang Rangers and began staing with Alloa Athletic.

text: What is "staing" ?

refinement: His early career consisted of playing junior football at a local Glasgow amateur team called Pale Ale. Crilley then moved to Cambuslang Rangers and then to Alloa Athletic of the Scottish Football League Second Division.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where did Crilley go after playing in Scotland?

answer: He played in the American Soccer League before World War II

answer: Crilley returned to the United States where he played with various American soccer teams.

answer: To the United States to sign with the New York Field Club.

answer: Crilley went back to the United States after being deported from Scotland.

answer: He went to America and played with the New York Field Club, and then ultimately transferred to the New York Giants. He played with them for several years. He returned to Scotland, but was deported because he had become a U.S. citizen. He lived in the U.S. for the rest of his days and joined the army.


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The warrior sat with his back to an old gnarled tree, his eyes closed. He wondered how he could be so weak. Fifteen years of training was not enough to protect her, the only one he ever felt that loved him. His muscles twitched involuntarily, blood seeped slowly from many wounds. The goblins had done a good job of beating his body after he had lost consciousness.

If only the cowards hadn't used Ellen to distract him, if they had fought as men with honor, No! He could not blame the goblins, the loss he suffered was due to his weakness. If he would have killed them straight away then maybe, but there is no way to change things now.

Slowly he opened his eyes. Blurry eyed and foggy minded he checked himself. His tan flesh was a dark black color where it wasn't caked with blood, at first he thought it was due to bruising, then after touching his forearm, he discovered it was a fine black powder, "What is this?" he pondered, looking ahead where the beautiful farmhouse had once been was nothing but a heaping pile of smoldering ash. The filth burned his home to the ground, probably after killing Ellen.

He wept. He wept for himself, for Ellen, for the life they had only recently started together. He had fallen in love with her when he was a mere boy. He became a fighter in hopes of impressing her only to find that those many years ago she had fancied him as a simple farmer's son. After what seemed like an hour he tried to stand, his legs shook, his vision swam but he did not falter. He limped towards the pile intending to find and give Ellen a decent burial.

He found the charred remains of a skeleton that was roughly her size. He could feel vomit coming up his throat, but he swallowed it, it left a bitter taste, he ignored it. He walked to the tool shed that was a few yards behind the house, far enough away that it was not consumed by the flames, but the smoke had done some damage. He opened the shed and pulled out a spade, he began digging her grave, and as he did more tears sprung from his eyes. Though his muscles ached he forced them on, inch by inch, the hole got deeper, pound by pound dirt was moved.

After digging approximately seven feet, he stopped. He hoisted himself out, collected the bones together and set them down into the grave and replaced the moved earth. He knew no words of peace or parting, he had no faith in gods of any kind. He simply kneeled before her grave and bade her farewell. As he stood up, he heard a thin voice behind him say, "One should never leave the body of a loved one, not without a cleric to guide them on to the After."

Though startled he showed no signs, he turned and faced the owner of the voice, not a spec of flesh to be seen, he wore a hood that was so low it covered most of his face, and whatever wasn't covered by hood was covered by his high collar. His cloak was the color of sand, his robe the color of dried blood, he wore black leather gloves and boots.

"I know no clerics, and it is not within my ability to convince one to come out this far from a city for a simple farmers wife." The man slumped his shoulders as if insulted, he pulled from within his robe an ankh made of silver. He walked past the warrior and stood at the foot of the grave. Carefully, reverently, he placed the ankh on the center of the grave and started saying a prayer of passing in the tongue of the ancients.

The ankh began to glow a bright blue, and it sank into the dirt as if water, being soaked up greedily by the thirsty earth. "My apologies, and many thanks cleric, by pure chance you happened upon me when I needed you most." said the warrior.

The cleric chuckled, which sounded more like a series of light coughs. "This was not chance, the great Asheros brought me to this location. If not for him, your wife may have been found by the scavengers and turned into a disgusting undead, but now", said the cleric, " the land is consecrated and cannot be touched by that ilk. Her peace will never be disturbed."

The warrior bowed his head and said " Again I apologize, please tell me your name so I know who I owe my service to."

Within his hood the cleric smiled. "My name is Delphose," he said, struggling to hold back laughter, "Delphose Anari. I follow the path laid before me by the great Asheros."

With his head still bowed, the warrior pleaded "Please tell me more of Asheros. Never before have I heard of this being."

The cleric gasped as if dumbfounded "Never heard of Asheros?! The lesser gods bow before him. When he walks the earth trembles. When he is angered, storms tear lands apart, he is a god who wishes to purify our world of evil so it may be at peace."

"Purify of evil..." mutters the warrior, he made a decision then, "I will join you on your journey Delphose, wherever you may be going, I will assist you in any way that I can. To rid the world of evil so none will have to suffer as I have." The warrior again looked over his small farm, at the damaged crops, the burned home, and lastly his eyes came to rest on the grave.

"I will teach you of Asheros, if you believe in his great power, you will be remade. Your past matters not, only your future matters to his greatness. You will be the first in centuries to be inducted into his knighthood..." The farmers face lit up at the thought of fighting in the name of a god, as a knight no less. Ellen would be proud. If only...

title: Creating Disposition, The rise of the first knight of Asheros. <1000 words.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe the main character's wife.

answer: She was killed by goblins. The main character has not heard of any god before. his wife tried to convince him to pray to an unknown god.

text: 'The main character has not heard of any god before. his wife tried to convince him to pray to an unknown god.' is not stated.

text: It is omitted that he wept for himself, for Ellen, for the life they had only recently started together. He had fallen in love with her when he was a mere boy. He became a fighter in hopes of impressing her only to find that those many years ago she had fancied him as a simple farmer's son.

refinement: She was killed by goblins. He wept for himself, for Ellen, for the life they had only recently started together. He had fallen in love with her when he was a mere boy. He became a fighter in hopes of impressing her only to find that those many years ago she had fancied him as a simple farmer's son.

answer: She was killed by goblins. The main character has not heard of any god before. His wife tried to convince him to pray to an unknown god.

answer: Though the wife's name isn't revealed and we don't see much about her, the amount of time and attention that the main character devotes to her grave shows that the love between them was deep.

text: The wife's name is Ellen.

refinement: The amount of time and attention that the main character devotes to her grave shows that the love between them was deep.

text: It is omitted that Ellen was killed by goblins.

refinement: Ellen was killed by goblins. The amount of time and attention that the main character devotes to her grave shows that the love between them was deep.

answer: The main character is a farmer. On his journey, he encounters a flock of goblins and is overcome. Ellen was a village. When he comes to, he searches for his wife, Ellen. From the piles of ash and rubble, he finds charred bones. The cleric of Asheros offers to help him convert them into ashes, which the main character accepts and asks the cleric to tell him more about Asheros. The story ends with him deciding to accept the cleric's offer to join his crew and lend a hand in combating evil in the world, Ellen would be proud. She was apparently killed when their home was burned by goblins.

text: The main character is also a warrior.

refinement: The main character is a farmer and a warrior. On his journey, he encounters a flock of goblins and is overcome. Ellen was a village. When he comes to, he searches for his wife, Ellen. From the piles of ash and rubble, he finds charred bones. The cleric of Asheros offers to help him convert them into ashes, which the main character accepts and asks the cleric to tell him more about Asheros. The story ends with him deciding to accept the cleric's offer to join his crew and lend a hand in combating evil in the world, Ellen would be proud. She was apparently killed when their home was burned by goblins.

text: 'Ellen was a village' is not stated.

refinement: The main character is a farmer and a warrior. On his journey, he encounters a flock of goblins and is overcome. When he comes to, he searches for his wife, Ellen. From the piles of ash and rubble, he finds charred bones. The cleric of Asheros offers to help him convert them into ashes, which the main character accepts and asks the cleric to tell him more about Asheros. The story ends with him deciding to accept the cleric's offer to join his crew and lend a hand in combating evil in the world, Ellen would be proud. She was apparently killed when their home was burned by goblins.

text: The cleric of Asheros offers to teach him of Asheros, not to help him convert them into ashes

refinement: The main character is a farmer and a warrior. On his journey, he encounters a flock of goblins and is overcome. When he comes to, he searches for his wife, Ellen. From the piles of ash and rubble, he finds charred bones. The cleric of Asheros offers to teach him of Asheros, which the main character accepts. The story ends with him deciding to accept the cleric's offer to join his crew and lend a hand in combating evil in the world, Ellen would be proud. She was apparently killed when their home was burned by goblins.

text: I would move the last sentence - to be the fourth one

refinement: The main character is a farmer and a warrior. On his journey, he encounters a flock of goblins and is overcome. When he comes to, he searches for his wife, Ellen. From the piles of ash and rubble, he finds charred bones. She was apparently killed when their home was burned by goblins. The cleric of Asheros offers to teach him of Asheros, which the main character accepts. The story ends with him deciding to accept the cleric's offer to join his crew and lend a hand in combating evil in the world, Ellen would be proud.

text: a dot instead a comma

refinement: The main character is a farmer and a warrior. On his journey, he encounters a flock of goblins and is overcome. When he comes to, he searches for his wife, Ellen. From the piles of ash and rubble, he finds charred bones. She was apparently killed when their home was burned by goblins. The cleric of Asheros offers to teach him of Asheros, which the main character accepts. The story ends with him deciding to accept the cleric's offer to join his crew and lend a hand in combating evil in the world. Ellen would be proud.

answer: The main character is a farmer. On his journey, he encounters a flock of goblins and is overcome. When he comes to, he searches for his wife, Ellen. From the piles of ash and rubble, he finds charred bones. He learns that the clerics of the land believe that if he leaves them, the bones will be found by scavengers and turned into undead. Therefore, he buries her properly. She was apparently killed when their home was burned by goblins.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe Asheros and his worship.

answer: When Asheros walks the earth trembles and as he is angered, storms tear lands apart. The cleric calls him a "god who wishes to purify our world of evil so it may be at peace."

answer: When Asheros walks the earth trembles and as he is angered, storms tear lands apart. It would appear he can be used to influence weather and that he has a sence of charity.

answer: The cleric, Delphose Anari, tells the warrior that when the deity walks the earth trembles and when angered, storms tear lands apart. The cleric believes that when Asheros walks the earth trembles, storms tear lands apart, and that the deity wants to purify the world of evil. Delphose believes that a knight's purpose is to fight in the name of Asheros.

answer: No answer

text: It is omitted that when Asheros walks the earth trembles and as he is angered, storms tear lands apart. The cleric calls him a "god who wishes to purify our world of evil so it may be at peace".

refinement: When he walks the earth trembles. When he is angered, storms tear lands apart, he is a god who wishes to purify our world of evil so it may be at peace.

answer: The cleric, Delphose Anari, tells the warrior that when the deity walks the earth trembles and when angered, storms tear lands apart. Delphose believes that a knight's purpose is to fight in the name of Asheros.


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JEFF BLAINE PICKLER (born January 6, 1976) is an American professional baseball coach. He is the game planning and outfield coach for the Cincinnati Reds of Major League Baseball (MLB). He has also coached for the Minnesota Twins.

Biography

Pickler was born in Garden Grove, California.[1] He attended Foothill High School in Santa Ana, California, where he played for the school's baseball team.[2] He then enrolled at Cypress College, where he played college baseball for the Cypress Chargers for one season. He then transferred to the University of Tennessee to continue his college baseball career with the Tennessee Volunteers.[3] In 1997, he played collegiate summer baseball for the Wareham Gatemen of the Cape Cod Baseball League, helping to lead the Gatemen to the league title.[4]

In 1998, Pickler was named the Southeastern Conference Baseball Player of the Year.[5] He graduated magna cum laude from Tennessee.[6] The Milwaukee Brewers selected Pickler in the 11th round of the 1998 Major League Baseball draft;[7] he played in Minor League Baseball for the Brewers, Texas Rangers, and Colorado Rockies organizations for eight years.[8]

After he retired as a player, Pickler became a scout for the Arizona Diamondbacks. After three years with the Diamondbacks,[9] he spent one year as an assistant coach for the Arizona Wildcats of the University of Arizona.[10] He then spent four years as a scout for the San Diego Padres. Pickler joined the front office of the Los Angeles Dodgers in 2014 as a special assistant in professional scouting and player development.[11]

The Twins hired Pickler to their major league coaching staff prior to the 2017 season.[12][13] The Cincinnati Reds hired him before the 2019 season.[14]

Pickler's father, Scott, is the coach for the Cypress College baseball team[15] and the longtime field manager of the Yarmouth-Dennis Red Sox of the Cape Cod Baseball League.[16]

[1] _Jeff Pickler_, baseballreference.com

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[10] http://tucsoncitizen.com/morgue/2008/10/07/98825-the-bounce-ua-s-lopez-hires-a-pest-as-an-assistant/

[11] http://www.ocregister.com/articles/dodgers-642580-president-recently.html

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[14] https://www.cincinnati.com/story/sports/mlb/reds/2019/01/03/reds-name-caleb-cotham-their-assistant-pitching-coach/2477187002/

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title: Jeff Pickler

question: Who did Pickler play for?

answer: He played college baseball for the Cypress Chargers and for the Tennessee Volunteers. He also played collegiate summer baseball for the Wareham Gatemen of the Cape Cod Baseball League.

text: The answer omits Pickler's playing career after his retirement. He played for Milwaukee Brewers, Texas Rangers, and Colorado Rockies during his career.

refinement: He played college baseball for the Cypress Chargers and the Tennessee Volunteers. He also played collegiate summer baseball for the Wareham Gatemen of the Cape Cod Baseball League. After graduation, he played for Milwaukee Brewers, Texas Rangers, and Colorado Rockies.

text: "He then enrolled at Cypress College, where he played college baseball for the Cypress Chargers for one season. He then transferred to the University of Tennessee to continue his college baseball career with the Tennessee Volunteers.[3] In 1997, he played collegiate summer baseball for the Wareham Gatemen of the Cape Cod Baseball League"

answer: Pickler played for the Milwaukee Brewers, Texas Rangers, and Colorado Rockies organizations.

text: The answer omits Pickler's college career in baseball.

refinement: Pickler played for the Milwaukee Brewers, Texas Rangers, and Colorado Rockies organizations. During college, he played for Cypress Chargers and the Tennessee Volunteers.

text: "The Milwaukee Brewers selected Pickler in the 11th round of the 1998 Major League Baseball draft;[7] he played in Minor League Baseball for the Brewers, Texas Rangers, and Colorado Rockies"

answer: He played for the Milwaukee Brewers, Texas Rangers, and Colorado Rockies organizations.

text: The answer omits Pickler's college career in baseball.

refinement: He played for the Milwaukee Brewers, Texas Rangers, and Colorado Rockies organizations. During college, he played for Cypress Chargers and the Tennessee Volunteers.

text: "The Milwaukee Brewers selected Pickler in the 11th round of the 1998 Major League Baseball draft;[7] he played in Minor League Baseball for the Brewers, Texas Rangers, and Colorado Rockies"

answer: Pickler played for the Milwaukee Brewers, Texas Rangers, and Colorado Rockies.

text: The answer omits Pickler's college career in baseball.

refinement: Pickler played for the Milwaukee Brewers, Texas Rangers, and Colorado Rockies. During college, he played for Cypress Chargers and the Tennessee Volunteers.

text: "The Milwaukee Brewers selected Pickler in the 11th round of the 1998 Major League Baseball draft;[7] he played in Minor League Baseball for the Brewers, Texas Rangers, and Colorado Rockies"

question: Did Pickler attend college?

answer: Yes, he attended Cypress College and the University of Tennessee.

text: "He then enrolled at Cypress College, where he played college baseball for the Cypress Chargers for one season. He then transferred to the University of Tennessee"

answer: Yes, he went to Cypress College and transferred to the University of Tennessee.

text: "He then enrolled at Cypress College, where he played college baseball for the Cypress Chargers for one season. He then transferred to the University of Tennessee"

answer: Yes, Pickler attended the University of Tennessee.

text: Pickler attended Cypress College before transferring to the University of Tennessee.

refinement: Yes, Pickler attended the University of Tennessee after transferring there from Cypress College.

text: "He then enrolled at Cypress College, where he played college baseball for the Cypress Chargers for one season. He then transferred to the University of Tennessee"

answer: Yes, Pickler attended the University of Tennessee and graduated magna cum laude.

text: Pickler attended Cypress College before transferring to the University of Tennessee.

refinement: Yes, Pickler attended the University of Tennessee after transferring there from Cypress College and graduated magna cum laude.

text: Pickler's graduation isn't relevant to the question.

refinement: Yes, Pickler attended the University of Tennessee after transferring there from Cypress College.

text: "He then enrolled at Cypress College, where he played college baseball for the Cypress Chargers for one season. He then transferred to the University of Tennessee"

question: Who are the Twins?

answer: The Twins are a professional baseball team. Jeff Pickler is currently the game planning and outfield coach for the team.

text: Pickler is the game planning and outfield coach for the Cincinnati Reds, not the Twins. He used to be a coach for them.

refinement: The Twins are a professional baseball team. Jeff Pickler used to be a coach for the team.

text: Twins as a team: "The Twins hired Pickler to their major league coaching staff prior to the 2017 season."

answer: The Minnesota Twins.

text: The answer is very unhelpful. It should elucidate the most salient details of the Twins. These are them being a professional baseball team and Pickler's coaching for them in the past.

refinement: The Minnesota Twins is a professional baseball team. Pickler used to be a coach for them.

answer: The Minnesota Twins are a Major League Baseball team.

text: The answer should elucidate the most salient details of the Twins. These are them being a professional baseball team and Pickler's coaching for them in the past.

refinement: The Minnesota Twins are a Major League Baseball team. Pickler used to be a coach there.

text: Twins as a team: "The Twins hired Pickler to their major league coaching staff prior to the 2017 season."

answer: It seems to be a Minnesota baseball team.

text: The answer should elucidate the most salient details of the Twins. These are them being a professional baseball team and Pickler's coaching for them in the past.

refinement: It seems to be a Minnesota baseball team. Pickler used to be a coach there.

text: The answer should mention that the Twins are a Major League Baseball team.

refinement: It seems to be a Minnesota MLB baseball team. Pickler used to be a coach there.

question: Who is Pickler's father?

answer: Pickler's father is Scott Pickler, the coach for the Cypress College baseball team and the longtime field manager of the Yarmouth-Dennis Red Sox of the Cape Cod Baseball League.

text: "Pickler's father, Scott, is the coach for the Cypress College baseball team[15] and the longtime field manager of the Yarmouth-Dennis Red Sox of the Cape Cod Baseball League."

answer: Scott Pickler is Pickler's father. He is the coach for the Cypress College baseball team and the longtime field manager of the Yarmouth-Dennis Red Sox of the Cape Cod Baseball League.

text: "Pickler's father, Scott, is the coach for the Cypress College baseball team[15] and the longtime field manager of the Yarmouth-Dennis Red Sox of the Cape Cod Baseball League."

answer: His father is Scott Pickler, who is the coach for Cypress College baseball team and the longtime field manager of the Yarmouth-Dennis Red Sox of the Cape Cod Baseball League.

text: "Pickler's father, Scott, is the coach for the Cypress College baseball team[15] and the longtime field manager of the Yarmouth-Dennis Red Sox of the Cape Cod Baseball League."

answer: Pickler's father is Scott Pickler, who is the coach for the Cypress College baseball team and the longtime field manager of the Yarmouth-Dennis Red Sox of the Cape Cod Baseball League.

text: "Pickler's father, Scott, is the coach for the Cypress College baseball team[15] and the longtime field manager of the Yarmouth-Dennis Red Sox of the Cape Cod Baseball League."

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: Jeff Pickler is an American professional baseball coach. He is the game planning and outfield coach for the Cincinnati Reds of Major League Baseball. He has also coached for the Minnesota Twins.

text: "JEFF BLAINE PICKLER (born January 6, 1976) is an American professional baseball coach. He is the game planning and outfield coach for the Cincinnati Reds of Major League Baseball (MLB). He has also coached for the Minnesota Twins."

answer: This article discusses the life and career of Jeff Pickler. He is an American professional baseball coach who is the game planning and outfield coach for the Cincinnati Reds of Major League Baseball. He has also coached for the Minnesota Twins.

text: "JEFF BLAINE PICKLER (born January 6, 1976) is an American professional baseball coach. He is the game planning and outfield coach for the Cincinnati Reds of Major League Baseball (MLB). He has also coached for the Minnesota Twins."

answer: Jeff Pickler is a former professional baseball player who is now a coach for the Cincinnati Reds. He previously coached for the Minnesota Twins and was a scout for the Arizona Diamondbacks and the San Diego Padres.

text: Coaching career: "JEFF BLAINE PICKLER (born January 6, 1976) is an American professional baseball coach. He is the game planning and outfield coach for the Cincinnati Reds of Major League Baseball (MLB). He has also coached for the Minnesota Twins."

text: Scouting for Diamondbacks: "Pickler became a scout for the Arizona Diamondbacks"

text: Scouting for Padres: "He then spent four years as a scout for the San Diego Padres."

answer: Jeff Pickler is a professional baseball coach. He has coached for the Minnesota Twins and Cincinnati Reds.

text: The answer should note that Pickler is the current outfield coach for the Reds and used to coach Minnesota Twins.

refinement: Jeff Pickler is a professional baseball coach. He has coached for the Minnesota Twins. He's currently the outfield and game-planning coach for the Cincinnati Reds.

text: Coaching career: "JEFF BLAINE PICKLER (born January 6, 1976) is an American professional baseball coach. He is the game planning and outfield coach for the Cincinnati Reds of Major League Baseball (MLB). He has also coached for the Minnesota Twins."


text:
ALEX OGBONGBEMIGA (born March 2, 1993) is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League (CFL). He played college football at Calgary.

College career

Ogbongbemiga red shirted at the University of Houston during the 2010 season before spending three seasons at the University of Calgary (2011–13). In 17 games, he recorded 26.5 defensive tackles and three tackles for a loss. The team won back-to-back-to-back Hardy Cups as Canada West champions in 2011, 2012 and 2013.

Junior career

Spent the 2015 season with the Calgary Colts of the Canadian Junior Football League. He recorded 20 defensive tackles and one quarterback sack in four games.

Professional career

On the Eskimos practice roster. Activated in Week 10 and played in nine games (one start), recording two special teams tackles. He also had one kickoff return. Ogbongbemiga was on the active roster for both the Eastern Semi-Final and Final. (Saskatchewan) Made his CFL debut on July 16. Traded to Edmonton from Saskatchewan on Aug. 8, 2016 in exchange for national defensive tackle Gregory Alexandre.

He signed a free agent contract with the BC Lions in June 2017.[1]

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title: Alex Ogbongbemiga

question: Who is Alex Ogbongbemiga?

answer: A Canadian football linebacker.

text: I would add more details.

refinement: A Canadian football linebacker who plays for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League, or CFL.

text: ALEX OGBONGBEMIGA (born March 2, 1993) is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League (CFL). He played college football at Calgary.

answer: He is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League.

text: ALEX OGBONGBEMIGA (born March 2, 1993) is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League (CFL). He played college football at Calgary.

answer: Alex Ogbongbemiga is a Canadian football linebacker who currently plays for the BC Lions.

text: ALEX OGBONGBEMIGA (born March 2, 1993) is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League (CFL). He played college football at Calgary.

answer: Alex Ogbongbemiga is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League (CFL).

text: ALEX OGBONGBEMIGA (born March 2, 1993) is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League (CFL). He played college football at Calgary.

question: What teams has he played on?

answer: The Calgary Colts, the Eskimos, Saskatchewan, and the BC Lions.

answer: He has played for the Calgary Colts, the Edmonton Eskimos, and the BC Lions.

answer: The Calgary Colts, the Eskimos, Saskatchewan, and the BC Lions.

answer: Alex Ogbongbemiga has played for the Calgary Colts of the Canadian Junior Football League, the Edmonton Eskimos, and the BC Lions.

question: Are the Eskimos the Edmonton or Saskatchewan team?

answer: The Eskimos are the Edmonton team.

answer: Unclear, doesn't say.

answer: The Eskimos are the Edmonton team, while the Saskatchewan team is the team that traded Ogbongbemiga to the Edmonton team.

answer: The Eskimos are the Edmonton team.

question: What's his current team?

answer: The BC Lions since June, 2017.

text: ALEX OGBONGBEMIGA (born March 2, 1993) is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League (CFL).

answer: BC Lions

text: ALEX OGBONGBEMIGA (born March 2, 1993) is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League (CFL).

answer: The BC Lions

text: ALEX OGBONGBEMIGA (born March 2, 1993) is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League (CFL).

answer: The BC Lions.

text: ALEX OGBONGBEMIGA (born March 2, 1993) is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League (CFL).

question: Write a ~6 sentence summary.

answer: Alex Ogbongbemiga is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League (CFL). He played college football at Calgary. In 17 games, he recorded 26.5 defensive tackles and three tackles for a loss. The team won back-to-back-to-back Hardy Cups as Canada West champions in 2011, 2012 and 2013.

answer: Alex Ogbongbemiga is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League. He played college football at Calgary. Ogbongbemiga red shirted for the University of Houston before transferring to Calgary. He spent the 2015 season playing in the Canadian Junior Football League with the Calgary Colts. He made his CFL debut with Saskatchewan, later traded to the Edmonton Eskimos. He signed a free agent contract with the BC Lions in June, 2017.

answer: Alex Ogbongbemiga is a Canadian football linebacker for the BC Lions of the Canadian Football League. He played college football at Calgary. He red shirted at the University of Houston during the 2010 season before spending three seasons at the University of Calgary. In 17 games, he recorded 26.5 defensive tackles and three tackles for a loss. The team won back-to-back-to-back Hardy Cups as Canada West champions in 2011, 2012, and 2013. Ogbongbemiga spent the 2015 season with the Calgary Colts of the Canadian Junior Football League. He recorded 20 defensive tackles and one quarterback sack in four games.

answer: Alex Ogbongbemiga is a Canadian football linebacker who played college football at the University of Calgary. He was drafted by the BC Lions in 2017 and has since made appearances for the Edmonton Eskimos and Saskatchewan Roughriders.

text: I don't think he has "since made appearances for" those other teams, so I changed "since" to "also" to adhere to the chronology given in the original text.

refinement: Alex Ogbongbemiga is a Canadian football linebacker who played college football at the University of Calgary. He was drafted by the BC Lions in 2017 and has also made appearances for the Edmonton Eskimos and Saskatchewan Roughriders.


text:
April 6, 2052, 1 pm

Agent Martin makes his way back to work after lunch break. His office, on the top floor of the Data Security Center—DSC—is indistinguishable in design and contents from the other offices on the vast floor. All are small soundproof rooms, windowless, shut off by black sliding glass doors. Each office is a command center.

Martin takes his seat, yawns, and puts on his headset. He enjoys his job; it often reminds him of playing video games as a youth. He turns to the monitor on his right, strikes a few keys on the keyboard, and up pops a panel showing birds-eye footage of a suburban neighbourhood. A large textbox underneath reads “Approaching Destination: 200 meters”. The number steadily decreasing. This damn wind hasn't let up the slightest, he thinks, shaking his head. It had been extremely windy the entire day. Prior to leaving for lunch, he had delployed a set of four drones—as was the standard deployment—packed in a larger camoflauged container-unit—camo-con—which was the source of the footage now on screen.

The targets name was Wesley Smith. His activities had been flagged with  “Acute Suspicion”  by the system earlier that morning. All such cases required the attention of and if necessary, investigation—or “analysis” as it called—by an agent. Martin considered it bad luck when such cases were assigned to him. He had groaned when the notification had popped up. The day was fairly quiet and he'd been having great fun micro-managing a drone in a local park. The notification had presented him with a typically boring task. Wesley was sixteen years old. Another stupid sixteen year old that's fascinated with how drugs or bombs can be made, he'd thought then. However, to his delight, he found that the flag had nothing to do with the users querying history, but rather it's lacktherof. Wesley, it seemed, had found himself some very good encryption software—that the system must be unfamiliar with—as over the past nine hours, his data footprint had been reduced tremendously, triggering the flag. Martin had let out a whistle as he thought about all the different possibilites. There was a small chance that this kid possesed data that could lead to him to the source. These were the types of cases Martin was best at. He would surely get a promotion if he were to uncover the creators behind some black market encryption package. He had then followed the standard procedure, flagged the case as “Under Analysis” and had deployed the drone set. The wind however, had delayed what should have been a half-hour trip to over an hour.

Now, he watches as the container unit stops at ten meteres from what he assumes is the target's home. Gusts of wind gently rock the camera side to side. The house is an average looking two-storey house, an exception being the large apple tree in the front yard. Hanging from the tree, a tire-swing slowly sways back and forth. It's the swing that flashes in Martin mind; as a kid, he had a friend who lived in a home on that very street. Passing by here, he would often see children pushing each other on that swing. His mind wanders, and he finds himself wondering whether Wesley—No, he must'nt get distracted. The system begins running a series of tests to confirm that this is the correct house, then ejects the four drones from the container, and prompts Martin to guide the entry.

This was probably the most enjoyable part of his job. He begins micromanaging the blade—the smallest, quickest and most agile of the set—and defines a distance for the others to trail behind. The blade was one inch long, half an inch wide, and four millimeters in height. It was a dull shade of grey and perfectly smooth. A barebone unit, it contained just a nano mic-cam component, a communications component, a power supply, and over a dozen micro-motors; it was fairly stealthy, ideal for recon. It's light weight also meant however, that it was a challenge to control in the wind, and Martin througly enjoyed this challenge.

After zipping around some for fun, he spots an open window at the back side of the house. He thought it a bit odd for a window to be left open when it was this windy, but was able to determine that the room is unoccupied. As the small drone caravan silently advances into the dark room, the monitor to Martins left begins blinking. The hound—a relatively clumsly unit that Martin almost hadn't included—had detected illicit substances in it's proximity. A line of bolded text on the monitor reads: SUBSTANCE: [SCHEDULE I - CANNABIS], the last word—CANNABIS—appearing in green font. The change in font color was Martin's little hack to his own station, thus no one else would ever see it. He chucked to himself whenver it came up.

He suddenly dreads including the Hound in the set, and hopes it's a false positive. Standard procedure had to be followed now.  He issues the command for the drones to begin inspecting the room. Martin ran his own alrorithm—a feat that as far as he knows, only he has acomplished—for room inspection and was proud of it. The largest unit—the Tech—contains the processor shared by the four and is responsible for giving instructions to the other three. In fact, even now, the signals sent to the Blade by Martin are first processed by the Tech, and then only passed on if it considers them safe. It is a highly complex unit whose nano-mechanics Martin had always been in awe of, but was not authorized to program. Just to override it's room-inspection algorithm had taken him weeks and numerous demonstrations. But he had done it, and now the three drones would sniff, photograph, and record the sound in every visible and acessible space in the room, in at most three minutes. As the blade, he slides underneath the centimeter tall gap underneath the door, sees that it leads to an empty hallway, and remains there as a lookout.

When the inspection completes, Martin sits silenlty looking over the new data while carefully listening for any sound through the headphones. The Bat, a unit with ultrasonic capability, working with the Hound had determined that a desk—the laptop sitting on which Martin disappointedly noted was powered off—contains in it's drawer, between three to four grams of marijuana.

For the second time that day, Martin groaned. There was nothing more he could do here. Had he not discovered the weed, he could have gone probing further to try and hack a device on the network. But the presence of the drug had already been logged by the system. The case was no longer in his domain. Any further risk taken by him would be overridden or worse, logged and reported, by the Tech. He would not be doing any hacking today.

As he begins to type out the mandatory report to send back to PRISM, he wonders who the case will be assigned to now—if it hadn't already—and what type of power and authorization that person has. Maybe, he thinks, it's someone inside this building somewhere.

Regardless of what the system would do with the information he had just added to it, he was fully certain that young Wesley's days of being a free man were numbered.

title: 1952

question: What is Martin's job?

answer: Based on the passage, it is likely that Martin is a member of PRISM, a law enforcement agency that specialises in monitoring and investigating the activities of citizens deemed guilty of wrongdoing.

answer: He is an agent at the Data Security Center.

answer: Martin is an agent who works at the Data Security Center and is tasked with investigating cases flagged as possible risks.

question: What country is Martin from?

answer: The passage does not state what country Martin is from and so the answer is unknown.

text: Answer missing.

refinement: The passage does not specify which country Martin belongs to.

answer: That information isn't available in the text.

question: Who is the Hound?

answer: The Hound is one of the drones deployed in the mission as the unit that detects illicit substances.

answer: The Hound is one of the drones sent into the room, and is responsible for sniffing out any illicit substances like marijuana within it.

answer: The Hound is an object used by Martin in the investigation of Wesley. It is able to pick up illicit substances.

text: It is clearly stated in the passage that Hound is a drone.

refinement: The Hound is a drone used by Martin in the investigation of Wesley. It is able to pick up illicit substances.

question: Summarize everything related to cannabis in this story.

answer: "SUBSTANCE: [SCHEDULE I - CANNABIS]"

text: Lacks more relevant information.

refinement: "SUBSTANCE: [SCHEDULE I - CANNABIS]" The Hound sniffs the Cannabis in one of the rooms of the house Wesley is going to. Agent Martin now knows that Wesley would get into trouble because of this.

answer: How would Agent Martin be incentivized to act knowing that possession of cannabis is against trafficking laws with an absence of fines?

text: Lacks more important information.

refinement: The Hound, a drone, sniffs Cannabis in one of the rooms of the house Wesley is going to. Martin figures now that the standard procedures would follow which means the case will not be in his hands anymore.

answer: Three to four grams of marijuana are picked up by the Hound, which means standard procedure has to follow. The case Martin was working on now has to go to a different domain, and Wesley will probably get in trouble for the marijuana.

question: Is Wesley a good person?

answer: The individual in the passage, Wesley, has been found to own marijuana. While the consumption of marijuana may not be inherently wrong, possession of it is illegal in many countries, hence Wesley would likely be considered a criminal. Additionally, based on the fact that his activities were flagged as "Acute Suspicion," it is likely that Wesley was planning on selling the weed. Consequently, it is difficult to say whether Wesley is a good person or not.

answer: This is difficult to say without more information, but given that Wesley has marijuana in his possession and he is flagged by the DSC as having acute suspicion, it is most likely that he is not considered to be a "good" person.

answer: There is nothing to indicate that Wesley is a good or bad person in this story.

question: Why did Martin groan for the second time that day?

text: Missing answer.

refinement: The presence of the cannabis in Wesley's room had been lodged in the system, this meant that the case was no more in Martin's domain.

text: Missing answer.

refinement: The presence of the cannabis in Wesley's room had been lodged in the system, this meant that the case was no more in Martin's domain.

answer: He seems bothered that he detected marijuana in Wesley's room because now he can't probe any further.

question: How does the Bat work?

answer: It appears to have a unique means of ultrasonic scanning.

answer: The Bat works by being programmed to detect environmental conditions that might indicate misuse of the substance it is searching for. It uses ultrasonic signals to create an image of and sound from the room around it. The author describes the Bat as having wings that allow it to swoop between the walls of a room.

text: There is no evidence that the Bat is programmed to detect environmental conditions. Although it may be implied.

refinement: It may be implied that the Bat works by being programmed to detect environmental conditions that might indicate misuse of the substance it is searching for. It uses ultrasonic signals to create an image of and sound from the room around it. The author describes the Bat as having wings that allow it to swoop between the walls of a room.

text: There is no evidence that the author describes The Bat as "having wings that allow it to swoop"

refinement: It may be implied that the Bat works by being programmed to detect environmental conditions that might indicate misuse of the substance it is searching for. It uses ultrasonic signals to create an image of and sound from the room around it.

text: "had determined that a desk—the laptop sitting on which Martin disappointedly noted was powered off—contains in it's drawer, between three to four grams of marijuana." his shows that The Bat used ultrasonic signals.

answer: It is a unit Martin is using in this investigation that has ultrasonic capabilities.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: Agent Martin is tasked with investigating sixteen year old Wesley for the Data Security Center. Wesley's activities had been flagged as "Acute Suspicion", and Martin suspects that his data could lead him to the creators of a black market encryption package. However, during the investigation Martin's gadgets detect marijuana in Wesley's desk. Martin is frustrated because now a different domain will have to investigate Wesley, and Martin can't probe any further. Regardless, Martin believes Wesley's days as a free man are limited.

answer: Agent Martin is delployed on a case. He soon realizes that the person he is surveiling is not his target after discovering that they are smoking marijuana. He sends in a drone to search for evidences of drugs and finds a the person is living a normal life. Unless Martin finds something that could lead to the person's arrest, the life of this person will continue uninterrupted. Draning has been forbidden by the System so this society's laws work more like "correct living" than privenledge.

text: Wrongly spelled the word - Deployed, surveilling, privilege.

refinement: Agent Martin is deployed on a case. He soon realizes that the person he is surveilling is not his target after discovering that they are smoking marijuana. He sends in a drone to search for evidences of drugs and finds a the person is living a normal life. Unless Martin finds something that could lead to the person's arrest, the life of this person will continue uninterrupted. Draning has been forbidden by the System so this society's laws work more like "correct living" than privilege.

text: Unnecessary use of the plural - they.

refinement: Agent Martin is deployed on a case. He soon realizes that the person he is surveilling is not his target after discovering that he is smoking marijuana. He sends in a drone to search for evidences of drugs and finds a the person is living a normal life. Unless Martin finds something that could lead to the person's arrest, the life of this person will continue uninterrupted. Draning has been forbidden by the System so this society's laws work more like "correct living" than privilege.

text: It is wrongly stated that the person is living a normal life.

refinement: Agent Martin is deployed on a case. He soon realizes that the person he is surveilling is not his target after discovering that he is smoking marijuana. He sends in a drone to search for evidences of drugs and finds that Wesley owns three to four grams of marijuana.

answer: Agents like Martin work in Data Security Centers, which look no different from regular offices to the maintain lower level of security and protect most of the work done by agents from the outside world and those spying through the windows.  In the office, Martin parks himself back at his desk after the lunch hour and takes a moment to hone in on the footage of what would end up being another otherwise unremarkable day in the life of an operative. He is satisfied by the data. However, soon he hears the sound of agents willing Wesley to allow them entry into his room and so he knows he has to get down to work. Immediately, Martin must decide on whether or not to let this flag fall to him or otherwise. In the past, the presence of drugs has meant he could inspect further, but luckily he discovers pot instead of something more nefarious. Not wanting to leave any trace, he texts in a report after the appropriate shame-laced commentary and deletes the footage, even though he knows he wouldn't be getting a commendation for this case. He just wishes there were perks to being such a stickler.

text: Too long and contains wrong and unnecessary information.

refinement: Agents like Martin work in Data Security Centers, which look no different from regular offices to the maintain lower level of security and protect most of the work done by agents from the outside world and those spying through the windows. Martin is watching Wesley who is flagged with "Acute Suspicion". He deploys his drones, Hound and Bat. The drones notice that Wesley holds cannabis. This disappoints Martin since now the case would not be in his domain.

answer: Agent Martin is investigating a case of acute suspicion. The suspicion triggers when Wesley Smith has a reduced data footprint on the computer. The small unit he sent in made it to Wesley's house. On top of a large number of documents about "Acid Trip Technologies" Martin discovered marijuana. As the case is unsuspicious, he prepares a report to send back. Before he does that, he questions whether somebody inside the building did what Wesley did.

text: It is wrongly stated that marijuana is found by Martin on top of the documents about "Acid Trip Technologies".

refinement: Agent Martin is investigating a case of acute suspicion. The suspicion triggers when Wesley Smith has a reduced data footprint on the computer. The small unit he sent in made it to Wesley's house. In the drawer unit, The Bat, with its ultrasonic capability discovered marijuana. As the case is unsuspicious, he prepares a report to send back. Before he does that, he questions whether somebody inside the building did what Wesley did.

text: It is also wrongly stated that Martin wonders if somebody inside the building did what Wesley did.

refinement: Agent Martin is investigating a case of acute suspicion. The suspicion triggers when Wesley Smith has a reduced data footprint on the computer. The small unit he sent in made it to Wesley's house. In the drawer unit, The Bat, with its ultrasonic capability discovered marijuana. As the case is unsuspicious, he prepares a report to send back. Before he does that, he questions whether somebody inside the building is handed over the case.

answer: Agent Martin made a mistake when he forgot to say which building Wesley's case is in the office, so he changed the name of the building to "Data Security Center" to keep everything easily understood. Wesley bought marijuana, and Martin was bored of his own job so he went to Wesley's house. When Wesley wasn't home, Martin placed a spy drone in his house to see what he was up to.

text: This response is not related.

text: Missing refinement.

refinement: Agent Martin is working on a case on "Acute Suspicion". He deploys his drones to solve the case. The drones ultimately reveal that Wesley owns three to four grams of marijuana. This frustrates Martin as now the case would be out of his domain.

answer: Agent Martin believes Wesley to be guilty because of a drug infraction, but Wesley is a 16-year-old who used encryption software to evade detection. As the story progresses Martin walks away from his desk to investigate the result, which isn't anything more than information that's already been indexed into the system. He spends the rest of lunch hour doubting Wesley's behavior as anything more interesting than the standard teenage drug experimentation, despite his worries that it might be something more.

text: This response is not related.

text: Missing refinement.

refinement: Agent Martin is working on a case on "Acute Suspicion". He deploys his drones to solve the case. The drones ultimately reveal that Wesley owns three to four grams of marijuana. This frustrates Martin as now the case would be out of his domain.


text:
She opened her eyes, and all she saw was a searing white light. She felt a biting cold metallic surface beneath her. She was laying down, in a metal room with only one door; a heavy, solid metal door. The florescent lights: the searing light, buzzing incessantly above her. They were driving her mad. She suddenly felt a pool of warmth beneath her head; blood. It was bleeding. To her relief it was only a slight trickle. To her horror there was a large dried pool of blood below her. A few drops trailed off to the opposite end of the room. And she saw him.

Lying there on the floor, opposite to her was a man. She saw no blood around him, but saw blood on his hands. Lying between them were a syringe and a keycard. The syringe was empty; what was in it? She wondered. Did he attack me? What is this place? Why am I here? Why can't I remember? She couldn't remember. She couldn't remember anything at all; who she was, where she was, and why she was here. She couldn't remember; and she was afraid. Did he lock me in this room for something I did? Was this man a guard at this facility? Or were this man's intentions more...malignant? She didn't want to know. She wanted to get out; she had to get out. She had to find some answers.

She stood up and made her way towards the door, still slightly ajar. As she approached the threshold, she noticed a camera. What is this place she thought and what is it for? She left into the hallway, and stared down its sterile walls, glistening in the white light. There were more cells, but there was silence. She was unsure of whether that was a good sign or not. She made for the door at the end of the hallway; it looked different from the rest, perhaps it wasn't a cell, perhaps it was a way out. She hoped it was. When she reached the door, her heart sank; it was locked.

The key card in the room! It was the only thing she had to go on, the only ray of light in her frightening nightmare. Feeling hopeful, she raced to the end of the hall for the key card. When she reached the cell she had awoken in, she entered and made her way for the card, not noticing that the man had woken up, and was watching her. As she goes to leave the room, she hears an unsettling, animalistic growl. She turns back to see the man, crouching, staring at her with a predator's gaze. Looking closer at his eyes, she notices that his eyes are a yellowish color; like a cat's eyes. His nails had sharpened, and were more like claws. What was in that syringe? Was he planning on doing that to me?

Suddenly, the feral beast leaped. Thinking quickly, she pulled the door closed just in time. She started to run down the hall and then she heard that noise. The feral creature let out a sickening roar. The nightmarish noise paralyzed her with fear. For an eternity, she could not move, could not think, could not breath. What made her move wasn't fear of the beast behind her. It was the new sounds she heard. The other cells were alive with movement; something was lurking behind their walls. With an ever deepening sense of terror, she ran towards the door, inserted the key card, and turned the handle; the door opened. The minuscule amount of relief she felt was extinguished when she heard the footfalls of the beast. Without even looking, she went through the door and into the new room. She turned and closed the door, seeing the beast lunge forward, more feral in appearance than before, just in time for it to crash into the closed door. She was safe, for now.

Turning to examine the room, she saw monitors. Monitors that showed the horrors in the other cells. Creatures that lurked and prowled with vicious intent. Creatures that writhed and squirmed in agonizing pain. This facility...was for experimentation on human beings. Just who the hell are these people? What are they doing? What are these vile bastards doing to these poor people? Sitting down, she started to go through some notes lying on the table. They were of someone named Dr. Moreau. This despicable person wrote about these people, his "patients" with no empathy, no remorse. He was now one of his own experiments.

"Doctor, are you there? The Colonel is waiting for the latest results of your testing." It was a man's voice on the other side of the door opposite from the one with the cells. She sat frozen with fear. What would happen to her when he found out what happened to the doctor, that he had become one of his pets? "Doctor? I'm coming in..." The door slowly opened, and a man wearing heavily padded, black colored clothing came in. He was holding a gun. When he stepped into the room, he raised it and fired. At that moment, a life was silenced.
But it was not hers...

Lowering his weapon, he turned to her and said, "Your bleeding, come with me to the infirmary." When she didn't respond, didn't even breath, he said it. Those words which shattered her utterly and will haunt her for the rest of her days. It was just a simple question, yet it implied so much.

"Doctor Moreau, are you alright?"

title: This was a short story I wrote for a high school English class. I was told by my teacher that it was well written, but I would like some criticism from you guys and gals. (This story is about 5-6 years old) [Battle Not With Monsters]

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why can't Dr. Moreau remember anything?

answer: I think it's not a matter of 'whether' but 'how' she has found herself bleeding out on a metal floor along with a dead man, terrorized by creatures she sees as feral beasts and victims who are deformed as experiments from a twisted mad scientist. There's no sight of recognition when the name of Dr. Moreau is called out to her.

text: Too much extrapolation leads to a misunderstanding of the question

refinement: It must be that her experiment on one of her patients goes wrong and she is knocked out and loses her memory.

answer: It must be that her experiment on one of her patients goes wrong and she is knocked out and loses her memory.

text: This is the perfect level

answer: Perhaps the events of "her" memories are fuzzy from a lack of oxygen, secondary to trauma.

text: Oxygen is too much extrapolation

refinement: It must be that her experiment on one of her patients goes wrong and she is knocked out and loses her memory.

answer: Dr. Moreau can't remember anything because she was knocked unconscious and awoke in a strange facility with no memory. This facility is known to conduct experimentation on humans, and at this point it's not clear whether the man or the beasts in the cells are the true danger. Unconscionably, Dr. Moreau learns that the man she left bleeding on the floor is being used as one of the test subjects. The sight of the beasts in the cells has terrified her, and by the end of the passage, a man enters with a gun and Dr. Moreau freezes before being shot without warning. This traumatic experience most likely has caused her amnesia.

text: A little too vague at the end

refinement: It must be that her experiment on one of her patients goes wrong and she is knocked out and loses her memory.

answer: Dr. Moreau can't remember anything because she woke up with no memories in a metal room with a feral creature. She saw a pool of blood in the room and a keycard and syringe, indicating that someone attacked her and left her for dead. The man in the room with her attacked her when she approached the door, but she managed to escape to a new room. There she found monitors that showed the other cells in the facility and the horrors they contain. The man in the padded outfit that entered the room told her to come to the infirmary because she was bleeding. This likely indicates that the doctor was held prisoner as well. Given her limited knowledge of the facility and what is happening to its members, she likely doesn't remember anything because she was experimented on by the Doctor and lost her memories as a result.

text: This first sentence is a tautology and the rest of the passage is a summary

refinement: It must be that her experiment on one of her patients goes wrong and she is knocked out and loses her memory.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why is Doctor Moreau shocked when asked whether she's alright?

answer: Doctor Moreau is shocked because she has just realized that the man she saw was Dr. Moreau, and she is terrified that he will know her as one of his experiments from the laboratory. She is also terrified that he'll come after her now that she has seen what is happening in his laboratory. The situation is terrifying for her because through her observations, she now knows what is happening behind closed doors and is horrified at the methods being used.

text: No Dr. Moreau is her

refinement: She's shocked because she didn't know she's Doctor Moreau, the one running the horrendous experiments on humans.

answer: Doctor Moreau is shot.

text: No she was not

refinement: She's shocked because she didn't know she's Doctor Moreau, the one running the horrendous experiments on humans.

answer: Maybe she doesn't remember who is she, where she is, and she's afraid she will be punished given that she has attacked a doctor.

text: She's shocked because she didn't know she's Doctor Moreau, the one running the horrendous experiments on humans.

refinement: She's shocked because she didn't know she's Doctor Moreau, the one running the horrendous experiments on humans.

answer: She's shocked because she didn't know she's Doctor Moreau, the one running the horrendous experiments on humans.

answer: Doctor Moreau is shocked when asked whether she's alright because she was trapped in a room with a demonic creature, but the creature was killed by someone entering the room before it could harm her. The question implies that she should have been hurt or killed, and yet she is alive and safe. This realization has a profound effect on her, as she realizes that the facility she is in is for experimentation on living beings and that the creator of the facility, Dr. Moreau, is now one of his own experiments. Doctor Moreau is horrified by what she has witnessed, and is shocked to learn about what is really happening in the facility.

text: Not accurate

refinement: She's shocked because she didn't know she's Doctor Moreau, the one running the horrendous experiments on humans.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What were Doctor Moreau's assumptions before she discovered her real identity?

answer: That she was Doctor Moreau.

text: Based on the passage, the doctor assumed that she was one of his experimental patients.

refinement: Based on the passage, the doctor assumed that she was one of his experimental patients.

answer: Based on the passage, the doctor assumed that she was one of his experimental patients.

answer: His assumption was that she was Dr. Moreau. He assumed that he had become a feral beast.

text: Based on the passage, the doctor assumed that she was one of his experimental patients.

refinement: Based on the passage, the doctor assumed that she was one of his experimental patients.

answer: Doctor Moreau assumed that she was a new experimental subject whose identity was unknown. He also assumed that she was a human subject who had been experimented upon. He also assumed that she was a threat to him, as evidenced by the fact that he shot her when he entered the room.

answer: She thought she was one of Dr. Moreau's experiments and assumed that the man who became a beast and tried to attack her was Dr. Moreau.

text: It's an extrapolation to assume that the man who became a beast was an assumption too.

refinement: She thought she was one of Dr. Moreau's experiments.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What are her thoughts about the people operating the facility before she found out she's Dr. Moreau?

answer: The woman in the passage is terrified of the people running the facility and believes them to be cruel and cold individuals. She is initially unsure of their intentions, but when she sees the treatment the patients receive she becomes convinced that their end goal is to experiment.

answer: She thinks they are despicable people without regard for human life.

answer: Initially, she interpreted the silence and lack of response of the other cells as signs of danger. She feared that she would be attacked just for being there in the facility. She later found out that the cells were inhabited by creatures undergoing experimentation. From her perspective as she first entered the facility, the people running the place were villains, cruel individuals who would hurt people without remorse.

answer: She thinks they are vile and that it seemed as though they didn't understand what they're doing.

answer: She was horrified.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: It is revealed that the narrator was now one of Dr. Moreau's experiments. Her interviewer/enforcer, the doctor, was the story's antagonist.

text: Tell us that she is the doctor

refinement: A woman wakes up from being unconscious and finds out to her horror that she's in a facility that conducts experiments on humans. What is worse is finding out that she is the doctor responsible for all of it.

answer: In a strange white room full of florescent lights with a heavy metal door, a woman wakes up with no memory. She discovers a man lying injured in the other side of the room, and when she moves to investigate she hears a feral growl. As she retreats, she stumbles upon monitors showing creatures that writhed in pain and realizes the facility is a testing ground for human beings. When the man chasing her opens the door, she is saved by him, but realizes he is in on the horror. The man reveals he is Dr. Moreau.

text: Tell us that she is the doctor

refinement: A woman wakes up from being unconscious and finds out to her horror that she's in a facility that conducts experiments on humans. What is worse is finding out that she is the doctor responsible for all of it.

answer: A woman wakes up in a metal room where a humanoid creature is lying in a pool of blood. The creature attacks her, and the woman escapes to an adjacent room. She finds monitors in the room that show horrible experiments being carried out on human beings. The man on the other side of the door then finds her, and it is revealed that the creature she encountered is one of the experiments. The man shoots the creature and asks if she is alright. Filled with horror and confusion, the woman finally realizes that she is caught in a nightmare.

text: Tell us that she is the doctor

refinement: A woman wakes up from being unconscious and finds out to her horror that she's in a facility that conducts experiments on humans. What is worse is finding out that she is the doctor responsible for all of it.

answer: A woman wakes up from being unconscious and finds out to her horror that she's in a facility that conducts experiments on humans. What is worse is finding out that she is the doctor responsible for all of it.

answer: The narrator unlocks a door to access a room filled with strange cameras and evidence of what seems like human experimentation. The door opens to reveal a doctor's office, though in trying to hide her affiliation with the doctor, she risks herself.

text: Doesn't get major details of the twist at the end

refinement: A woman wakes up from being unconscious and finds out to her horror that she's in a facility that conducts experiments on humans. What is worse is finding out that she is the doctor responsible for all of it.


text:
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An official of Algeria Football Federation has opened up on the link the body has with Super Eagles technical adviser, Gernot Rohr, and stressed that they do not have anything concrete with the Franco-German gaffer yet.

Though reports are replete with interest in Rohr by the Algerian FA, the official stressed that an agreement is yet to be reached with the former Bayern Munich defender, who took Nigeria to the ongoing World Cup in Russia.

Mauritanian journalist, Lassana Camara had announced the imminent arrival of Rohr as replacement for the dismissed Rabah Madjer, but this has been denied by the Algerian official.

In the same vein, a reliable Algerian sports newspaper confirmed that Rohr is in Algeria’s short-list for the job, but added that the Eagles’ handler is not favourite to get the nod.

This, though, has been attributed to information that the Algerian soccer federation know that getting Rohr will not come cheap, as he earns approximately 40,000 euros a month.

Consequently, Algeria are yet to make any formal move for the former manager of Niger Republic, Burkina Faso and Gabon national teams, who was appointed Nigeria coach in 2016.

”There is nothing official about Gernot Rohr. There is a list with a lot of coaches but for the moment you have to know that nothing has been done. There is nothing official. For me, these are just rumours,” the Algeria Football Federation insider affirmed.

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question: Who is Gernot Rohr?

answer: Gernot Rohr is a German coach who is the current managerial advisor for the Super Eagles.

text: The article describes him as Franco-German

refinement: Gernot Rohr is a Franco-German coach who is the current managerial advisor for the Super Eagles.

text: He is a technical advisor for the Super Eagles

refinement: Gernot Rohr is a Franco-German coach who is the current technical advisor for the Super Eagles.

answer: He's the Super Eagles technical adviser and former Bayern Munich defender who took Nigeria to the ongoing World Cup in Russia.

answer:
Rohr is a Franco-German football manager

Consequently, Algeria are yet to make any formal move for the former manager of Niger Republic, Burkina Faso and Gabon national teams, who was appointed Nigeria coach in 2016.

text: "Consequently [...]" is irrelevant

refinement: Rohr is a Franco-German football manager.

question: Who is reportedly interested in the services of Rohr?

answer: According to the passage, the Algerian FA reportedly is interested in hiring Gernot Rohr as their new coach.

text: Replace "FA" with "Football Federation"

refinement: According to the passage, the Algerian Football Federation reportedly is interested in hiring Gernot Rohr as their new coach.

answer: According to the passage, Algeria Football Federation is reportedly interested in Rohr's services.

answer: The Algerian FA

text: Replace "FA" with "Football Federation"

question: Who was recently dismissed by the Algerian FA?

answer: Based on the passage, it is clear that Rabah Madjer was recently dismissed by the Algerian FA.

answer: Rabah Madjer

answer: The Algerian FA recently dismissed Rabah Madjer as their manager.

question: How much is Rohr's salary?

answer: According to the passage, it is estimated that Gernot Rohr earns approximately $40,000 per month.

text: Units are euros

refinement: According to the passage, it is estimated that Gernot Rohr earns approximately 40,000 euros per month.

answer: According to the source, Rohr earns approximately 40,000 euros a month.

answer: Approximately 40,000 euros a month.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: Gernot Rohr is on the shortlist to take over the Algerian national team while Rabah Madjer was just fired from the position. Rohr has taken Nigeria to this tournament in Russia so Rohr's reputation is growing. It seems rumors that Rohr is interested in the position are flying around. But Rohr's salary will be expensive, he earns about 40,000 Euros a month.

answer:
An Algeria official has talked on links of their body with Super Eagles technical adviser, Gernot Rohr. Although reports are rife with an interest in Rohr by the Algerian FA, the official says an agreement has not been reached with the former Bayern Munich defender.
Another source says that Rohr is in Algeria's short list for the job, he is the favorite to get it. there is nothing else but rumors.

text: "There is nothing else but rumors" can be removed

refinement:
An Algeria official has talked on links of their body with Super Eagles technical adviser, Gernot Rohr. Although reports are rife with an interest in Rohr by the Algerian FA, the official says an agreement has not been reached with the former Bayern Munich defender.
Another source says that Rohr is in Algeria's short list for the job, he is the favorite to get it.

text: The input says Rohr is *not* the favorite to get the job

refinement:
An Algeria official has talked on links of their body with Super Eagles technical adviser, Gernot Rohr. Although reports are rife with an interest in Rohr by the Algerian FA, the official says an agreement has not been reached with the former Bayern Munich defender.
Another source says that Rohr is in Algeria's short list for the job, but he is not the favorite to get it.

text: Specify what job the Algerian Football Federation might be interested in him for

refinement:
An Algeria official has talked on links of their body with Super Eagles technical adviser, Gernot Rohr. Although Rohr is rumored as a replacement for the recently-fired Rabah Madjer, the official says an agreement has not been reached with the former Bayern Munich defender.
Another source says that Rohr is in Algeria's short list for the job, but he is not the favorite to get it.

answer: The Algerian Football Federation has officially denied the rumor that they have concrete links with Super Eagles technical adviser, Gernot Rohr. The Mauritanian journalist Lassana Camara had announced the imminent arrival of Rohr as replacement for the dismissed Rabah Madjer, but this has been denied by the Algerian official. Rohr is, however, linked with a new position in Algeria. The salary is however said to be too much and they are yet to make any move.

text: Rohr is said to be on a short list for the position, but his salary is seen as too high

refinement: The Algerian Football Federation has officially denied the rumor that they have concrete links with Super Eagles technical adviser, Gernot Rohr. The Mauritanian journalist Lassana Camara had announced the imminent arrival of Rohr as replacement for the dismissed Rabah Madjer, but this has been denied by the Algerian official. Rohr is said to be on a short list for the position, but he has a rather high salary, so nothing official has been decided yet.

answer: Super Eagles technical adviser, Gernot Rohr is a former Bayern Munich defender who is reportedly being eyed by the Algerian FA as a possible replacement for Rabah Madjer. However, Algerian officials have denied these reports, saying they are mere rumors. If Algeria does make a move on Rohr, the club knows it will be an expensive acquisition. Rohr earns approximately 40,000 euros a month.

answer: Gernot Rohr is purportedly being approached by the Algerian FA, but not actually being hired. He is a former Bayern Munich defender who took Nigeria to the ongoing World Cup in Russia.

text: Rohr is on a shortlist to replace Rabah Madjer

refinement: Gernot Rohr is on a shortlist for the Algerian FA to replace the recently-fired Rabah Madjer, but not actually being hired. He is a former Bayern Munich defender who took Nigeria to the ongoing World Cup in Russia.

text: Replace "but not actually being hired" with "but an official decision has not yet been made"

refinement: Gernot Rohr is on a shortlist for the Algerian FA to replace the recently-fired Rabah Madjer, but an official decision has not yet been made. He is a former Bayern Munich defender who took Nigeria to the ongoing World Cup in Russia.

answer: No formal move is made by the Algerian Federation for Gernot Rohr, formerly Bayern Munich's defender and Nigeria's current coach. There is a list with a lot of coaches. There is no official confirmation on Rohr's shortlist for the job. 40,000 Euros a month might mean he will not get the nod.

text: Replace "There is no official confirmation on Rohr's shortlist for the job" with "Rohr is said to be on a shortlist for the job"

refinement: No formal move is made by the Algerian Federation for Gernot Rohr, formerly Bayern Munich's defender and Nigeria's current coach. There is a list with a lot of coaches. Rohr is said to be on a shortlist for the job. 40,000 Euros a month might mean he will not get the nod.

text: "There is a list with a lot of coaches" is unnecessary

refinement: No formal move is made by the Algerian Federation for Gernot Rohr, formerly Bayern Munich's defender and Nigeria's current coach. Rohr is said to be on a shortlist for the job. 40,000 Euros a month might mean he will not get the nod.

text: Explain that the position Rohr is being considered for is replacing Rabah Madjer

refinement: No formal move is made by the Algerian Federation for Gernot Rohr, formerly Bayern Munich's defender and Nigeria's current coach. Rohr is said to be on a shortlist to replace recently-fired Rabah Madjer. 40,000 Euros a month might mean he will not get the nod.

text: "40,000 euros a month might mean he will not get the nod" would flow better if it were connected to the previous sentence

refinement: No formal move is made by the Algerian Federation for Gernot Rohr, formerly Bayern Munich's defender and Nigeria's current coach. Rohr is said to be on a shortlist to replace recently-fired Rabah Madjer, but his high salary keeps him from being a favorite for the position.