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[John Q Marcelo]

Social Media Manager for Complex. Twitter/Instagram: @johnmarcelo

Sep 08, 2014

adidas Originals Stan Smith x Dover Street Market x Barneys New York x Colette
Summer's not officially over and there's still plenty of time to go hard in a pair of all-white sneakers.

After seeing an early look at each of the adidas Originals Stan Smith collabs from Dover Street Market, Barneys New York, and Colette, the high-end update to the vintage tennis sneaker releases this week. The already minimal Stan Smith is stripped down even more for the all-white theme. DSM has opted for no logos, while Barneys and Colette subtly engrave their branding in gold on the sneaker's tongue.

All three Stan Smiths retail for $150 each and will be available on Wednesday, September 10.

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question: What Adidas collab is not officially over?

answer: The adidas Originals Stan Smith collab from Dover Street Market.

answer: The Adidas Originals Stan Smith x Dover Street Market x Barneys New York x Colette Summer collab is not officially over.

answer: The Adidas Originals Stan Smith x Colette collab is not officially over, according to the passage. The sneaker is set to release on Wednesday, September 10th.

question: How are the shoes from this collection described?

answer: According to the passage, the Stan Smith sneakers in this collection have a simple aesthetic but remain stylish and expensive. They are characterized as being ideal for summer wear, as they are in all-white colors.

answer: The shoes from this collection are described as high-end vintage tennis shoes?

text: Do not answer a q with a q

refinement: The shoes from this collection are described as high-end vintage tennis shoes.

answer: The three Stan Smith sneakers from this collaboration have been described as minimalist and perfect for transitioning into fall.

text: Nothing about the fall in the passage

refinement: The three Stan Smith sneakers from this collaboration have been described as minimalist.

question: How much do the three Stan Smiths retail for?

answer: $150.

answer: The three Stan Smiths retail for $150 each.

answer: They retail for $150 each.

question: When will the three Stan Smiths be available?

answer: They will be available on Wednesday, September 10th.

text: Year is evident

refinement: They will be available on Wednesday, September 10th 2014.

answer: Wednesday, September 10.

text: Year is evident

answer: September 10, 2014

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: This advertisement discusses a new Adidas's sneaker release, the Stan Smiths. it describes the show along with its price and release date.

answer: The summary describes three different Stan Smith re-releases courtesy of Dover Street Market, Barneys New York, and Colette. They are an all-white style with minimal details.

answer: The only differences between the 3 pairs of sneakers is the way the name is brandished on the tongue. All three pairs sport the same low-key consistence, and retail for $150 each.

text: Consistence is not a word

refinement: The only differences between the 3 pairs of sneakers is the way the name is brandished on the tongue. All three pairs sport the same low-key look, and retail for $150 each.

text: "and retail" should be cost

refinement: The only differences between the 3 pairs of sneakers is the way the name is brandished on the tongue. All three pairs sport the same low-key look, and cost $150 each.

answer: The text is an advertisement for the release of the adidas Originals Stan Smith shoes. It describes each color option and the release date and price of the shoes.

answer: The release of a pair of new adidas Originals Stan Smiths is discussed. The sneakers are being released by Dover Street Market, Barneys New York, and Colette.

answer: The author is following the Adidas Stan Smith Collabs - Dover Street, Barneys New York, and Colette. The sneaker drops on the 10th of September, with it being released at the DSM, Barneys, and Colette, as well as being released the same day via newsletter information.


split: train

text:
He stood there and watched as the Senior Portman guided his boat towards the sand. He was a proud captain, only three contracts ever signed, but he was well respected for his actions. Three contracts, two of them kind of rushed into but the last one at least had a happier ending. One went on for far too long, it ended officially but then continued on through the black market for some time after that, his only real mistake. What he was doing right now was fulfilling his philosophy, if you aren't going to sign a contract, get your ship out of port. He had signed a contract with The Fleet, which was going to make it hard to have any personal contracts. While it was possible to have personal contracts while in The Fleet, in the end The Fleet's contract took priority. His ship was finally lodged firmly into the sand, he departed to the party he was invited to.

The party was a family get together, he just happened to be good friends with them. It was nice for him to be around some permanent contracts, it gave him hope for the future. There was another captain and a contract creator who seemed to be thinking about negotiations, they spent most of the time enjoying the conversation of the other. He was happy when he could see friends move closer to happiness.

Then there was the contract creator who talked to him. Not totally with words, actions silenced those out. He questioned if he was reading them right. The party ended and he departed, his mind never leaving the contract creator. He had been lonely since the end of his last contract. Yet in loneliness he had found some comfort. Freedom, room to breathe, but still no true clarity of mind. He arrived home, asked the contract creator of their intentions, and went to sleep.

He awoke to a disguise, a misdirection, but he had clarity on this morning. He questioned the amount of time the contract creator had thought about trying to enter negotiations. Answer, since they had first arrived in this port, but he had been in another contract at the time, and so not wanting to use the black market, they pursued other interests. Honesty and purity were highly respectable attributes in his book, and so he continued. The last contract that the creator made ended abruptly, why? Simple, the captain failed their end of the contract in the communication section. He understood, many captains struggled there, he tried to make that section as streamlined as possible. Final question, did the know about The Fleet contract. They did indeed, reason two for pursuing other options.

He had lost all of the clarity he had before, logic dictated to dismiss it, loneliness dictated other wise. He would walk a very thin line the next few days, no more rushing into any contracts. Illogical, improbable, but it would be a trial by fire, none the less.

title: Ship in the sand

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the narrator doing or observing?

answer: The narrator is witnessing the captain of a ship putting it into the sand. The captain is widely respected and has had three successful contracts. However, the narrator has also decided to abandon The Fleet contract in favor of pursuing personal contracts of his own. The narrator also becomes aware that the contract creator they discussion with at the party has also come to this decision. Eventually, the narrator realizes that they are also interested in pursuing a personal contract with the contract creator.

text: Stepping away from his contract with the fleet in favor of personal contracts.

refinement: Stepping away from his contract with the fleet in favor of personal contracts.

answer: It seems the narrator is a captain of a boat who is soon to sign a contract with The Fleet. He departs his boat to attend a party.

text: Stepping away from his contract with the fleet in favor of personal contracts.

refinement: Stepping away from his contract with the fleet in favor of personal contracts.

answer: Stepping away from his contract with the fleet in favor of personal contracts.

answer: The narrator is observing the senior portman guiding his boat towards the sand. He is also observing the other captains at the party and the contract creator. The contract creator is pursuing negotiations, but the narrator has reservations about impulsively entering into another contract. Ultimately, the narrator is questioning the intentions of the contract creator.

text: Stepping away from his contract with the fleet in favor of personal contracts.

refinement: Stepping away from his contract with the fleet in favor of personal contracts.

answer: The captain is out at a party when a fellow captain passes him by. Then the narrator's thoughts wander to a conversation he had with a contract creator, and the events that follow, if any.

text: Stepping away from his contract with the fleet in favor of personal contracts.

refinement: Stepping away from his contract with the fleet in favor of personal contracts.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe the family party.

answer: The party seemed to be a family gathering.

answer: The family party seems to be a get together for friends with common ideals and the official start of a new contract season. The party is full of easy conversation and friends going out of their way to show support for each other, which is heartwarming.

answer: The family party is a time for friends to catch up and enjoy each other's company. Conversation is lively and a wide variety of people are present. Some are harbouring intentions for agreements, but the overall atmosphere is happy.

answer: He knows the family well. There is another captain there as well as a contract creator.

answer: The noble family is both hosting a party and instrumental to finding the Captain's next contract work.

text: Family is not "noble

refinement: The family is both hosting a party and instrumental to finding the Captain's next contract work.

text: He knows the family

refinement: The family he knows is hosting a party, but it is also instrumental to finding the Captain's next contract work.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Explain the role of the contract creator.

answer: The contract creator is looking for an alternative to their current contract. They have been pursuing other interests since they arrived in port but they have already been considering negotiating a contract with the captain since they met them. The contract creator values honesty and believes in the importance of communication in contracts. They also are aware of the captain's contract with The Fleet. The contract creator wants a contract where they can be successful both personally and professionally.

answer: It's not explained.

text: It's sort of explained.

refinement: The contract creator is someone who creates contracts for others. They instigated negotiations with the captain because they were dissatisfied with their current contract options and desired something more permanent.

answer: The contract creator is seen helping two captains negotiate it seems.

answer: The contract creator is someone who creates contracts for others. They instigated negotiations with the captain because they were dissatisfied with their current contract options and desired something more permanent.

answer: It's not clear (to me) what their role is. The story is very vague.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the narrator's clarity?

answer: His clarity is that he would no longer rush into contracts.

answer: His clarity is that he logically adquates the social interaction he witnessed to the given atmosphere, literally asks the creators of the contracts to enter into negotiations. When he asks what his clarity is, the answer is that he will be walking a thin line, after waking up.

answer: The clarity is all his loose ends.

text: Not clear what this means

refinement: His clarity is that he would no longer rush into contracts.

answer: The narrator's clarity is that he has decided to enter into negotiations with the contract creator. He understands that they had considered it from the start, but waited until he was not bound by The Fleet contract. The contract that the contract creator's last ended abruptly because the captain failed their end of the communication portion. Logic dictates that the narrator should dismiss pursuing negotiations, but loneliness dictates otherwise. It is a gamble, an improbable trial by fire, but he will take it.

answer: The narrator's clarity is that the contract creator has been interested in pursuing a personal contract for some time, and all the abrupt endings of contracts in the past are because the contract creator failed to uphold their communication duties. The narrator is considering standing up to his Fleet contract for the opportunity to enter negotiations with the contract creator.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: The Senior Portman is a captain that has a philosophy of not signing a contract if you are not going to stick to it in whole. He is currently in contract with the Fleet, and not ready to sign new ones yet. As such he is at a party with a friend, and falls for a contract creator. The contract creator cannot enter negotiations as their last contract ended on bad terms. The Senior Portman loses all clarity and decides to simply go after no more new contracts for now.

answer: The captain watches his boat make its final journey into the sand. He attends a party, where another captain and a contract creator start talking. The contract creator is honest about their other interests, and discloses their knowledge of The Fleet contract. Despite his logical urge to move on, the captain feels drawn to this contract creator. He will have to walk a thin line between his obligations and feeling, in order to see if there is anything worth exploring.

answer: The captain stands looking at his boat, most likely the one he used to sign his contract with The Fleet. He's also attending a party, when a contract creator approaches him for negotiations. The next morning, the captain reflects on if he and the contract creator should and will enter negotiations. He's gone from clear minded on how to approach the situation to having gone back to being unsure. He decides that he will walk a very thin line and not rush into any contracts.

answer: The captain watches as his ship is brought into the sand. He attends a party and meets another captain and a contract creator. The contract creator has been interested in entering negotiations since they first arrived. The captain learns that the contract creator left their last contract early because the captain had failed in communication. Despite all the logical reasons to drop this line of thinking, the captain follows his heart and decides to pursue a potential relationship with the contract creator.

answer: The narrator is a captain of a boat who is soon to sign a contract with The Fleet. He departs his boat to attend a party where he's happy to be around some permanent contracts. A contract creator approaches him. The captain indicates his feeling of loneliness when he's between contracts. He wakes the next day with a clarity that he will no longer rush into contracts.


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CLUB ATLÉTICO GOES is a Uruguayan professional basketball team located in Montevideo, Uruguay. The team competes in the Liga Uruguaya de Basketball.[1]

Current roster

Notable players

    TO APPEAR IN THIS SECTION A PLAYER MUST HAVE EITHER:

- Set a club record or won an individual award as a professional player.
- Played at least one official international match for his senior national team at any time.

-   Fernando Martinez

-   Sebastián Vázquez

-   David Nesbitt

-   Calvin Warner

[1] Tan sufrido como festejado, 180.com.uy, 14 December 2010. Accessed 23 August 2017

title: Club Atlético Goes

question: What are the requirements to be listed as a notable player?

answer: To be listed as a notable player, a player must either have set a club record or won an individual award as a professional player, or have played at least one official international match for his senior national team.

answer: A player must have either set a club record or won an individual award as a professional player.

text: There is one requirement left out of the answer.

refinement: A player must have either set a club record or won an individual award as a professional player or have played at least one official international match for his senior national team.

answer: A player must have either set a club record or won an individual award as a professional player, played at least one official international match for his senior national team at any time, or played at least one official international match for his senior national team at any time.

answer: The player must have set a club record or won an individual award as a professional player; and played at least one official international match for his senior national team at any time.

question: Name all the players in Club Atletico Goes that are regarded as notable players.

answer: Fernando Martinez, Sebastián Vázquez, David Nesbitt, Calvin Warner

answer: Fernando Martinez, Sebastian Vazquez, David Nesbitt and Calvin Warner.

answer: Fernando Martinez, Sebastián Vázquez, and David Nesbitt.

text: There is one player whose name was left out.

refinement: Fernando Martinez, Sebastián Vázquez, Calvin Warner and David Nesbitt.

answer: Fernando Martinez, Sebastian Vazquez, David Nesbitt, and Calvin Warner.

question: Where is Club Atletico Goes located?

answer: The club plays out of Montevideo, Uruguay.

answer: Club Atlético Goes is located in Montevideo, Uruguay.

answer: Montevideo, Uruguay.

answer: Club Atletico Goes is located in Montevideo, Uruguay.

question: In which league does Club Atletico Goes compete?

answer: They compete in the Liga Uruguaya se Basketball.

text: Incorrect spelling.

refinement: They compete in the Liga Uruguaya de Basketball.

answer: Club Atlético Goes competes in the Liga Uruguaya de Basketball.

answer: The team competes in the Liga Uruguaya de Basketball.

answer: The Liga Uruguaya de Basketball.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Club Atletico Goes is a Uruguayan professional basketball team located in Montevideo, Uruguay.

answer: Club Atlético Goes is a Uruguayan professional basketball team located in Montevideo, Uruguay. The team competes in the Liga Uruguaya de Basketball.

answer: Club Atlético Goes is a Uruguayan professional basketball team that competes in the Liga Uruguaya de Basketball. The team has notable players such as Fernando Martinez, Sebastián Vázquez, and David Nesbitt.

answer: Club Atletico Goes is a Uruguayan professional basketball team located in Montevideo, Uruguay.


text:
SLEEP FOR SLEEP’S SAKE

Getting a proper night’s rest can be a challenge, especially when your mind is racing with anticipation about your wedding day. Between the invites, decor, favours, choosing the right music, writing your own vows…everything begins to build up. Relaxing seems impossible when decisions need to be made and the pressures of having the perfect day rely heavily on y-o-u. Sleep is vital for your health so do not rob yourself of it…

If you are one of many individuals who struggle to get at least 6 hours of sleep a night, whether its due to stress, insomnia, or just an over active mind… rest assured you can assist your body in little ways without having to reach for a sleeping pill. By being open-minded, you can make minimal changes that have a big impact on the quality of your sleep.

Guest Writer OLIVIA GUDANIEC

TEMPERATURE

For starters, the temperature around you can make a huge difference. Did you know that the body’s core temperature is slightly lower during your sleeping hours? It is for this reason that adjusting your thermostat can improve your sleep quality. There is no magic number but it is best to choose a temperature between 15 – 20 degrees Celcius. If cold feet are a constant culprit keeping you awake, grab some socks and get cozy.

NATURAL REMEDIES

When it is time for bed and your body starts receiving the right cues from your environment, you will gradually begin to release melatonin. This chemical controls your sleeping and waking cycles. Yet, light can affect how much melatonin you produce so try dimming the lights a few hours before bedtime to start the process. If that still does not do the trick, many people I interviewed said that they thrived using non medical sleeping aids. So to get in the _mood_ to sleep, why not try incorporating a humidifier with a relaxing essential oil like lavender. Keep in mind that sleep aids can only assist healthy sleeping habits and are not meant to be used indefinitely. Either way it is worth experimenting if you are having a disruptive or a difficult time sleeping.

COMFORT

You can also look into updating your pillows and mattress. Most people are not even aware that pillows need to be replaced every few years (for hygienic reasons). Mould spores, dust mites and even those unattractive dead skin cells are inevitable. If you fold your pillow in half and it does not spring back to it’s original shape, or you cannot remember when you last purchased it, then it is definitely time to start searching for something new. On the other hand, with mattresses the typical time frame to replace this large item is ten years. We spend approximately 1/3 of our lives in bed passing through different stages of sleep a night. Don’t you think it is wise to invest in quality items that offer support and comfort? Not to mention, if muscle/joint pain is an issue for you or if you are sweating throughout the night, you may want to consider that it’s time to change your mattress. Just keep in mind what type of sleeper you are and ask plenty of questions when shopping around.

PRE-BEDTIME

If you have followed all of these tips and are still tossing and turning, consider making some adjustments with what you are consuming before going to bed. After all, digestion also slows down while you are sleeping. Therefore, avoid consuming high fat foods, any alcohol, coffee, dark chocolate, soda/pop, spicy foods and of course, energy drinks. Remember that while you are sleeping, your body is still working so it is best to skip any large meals before shutting down. To promote better sleep reach for foods that contain the amino acid _tryptophan,_ which is rumoured to help greatly as it produces serotonin. This assists your body by boosting melatonin which as mentioned earlier, impacts your sleep cycles. So instead of excessive snacking opt for some cherries, milk, fortified cereals (whole grains not the sugary stuff), bananas, avocados, low fat/plain yogurt, and chamomile/ valerian tea. Be mindful, keep yourself relaxed and maintain a well balanced diet, your wedding day depends on it.

OLIVIA GUDANIEC Artist/Writer
Facebook/Twitter/Instagram Olivia Gudaniec
www.oliviagudaniec.com

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the author's reasons for replacing your pillows/mattress.

answer: They do not sweat well, mould spores, dust mites, and dead skin cells accumulate over the years, if the pillows cannot be folded perfectly or a person does not know when they last purchased a new pillow, and people only spend 1/3 of their lives sleeping. Additionally, someone who sleeps on their sides (stomach which compresses their back) should replace pillows frequently.

text: The answer is written in a confusing and complicated manner. It should be re-written using simpler sentences.

refinement: Mold spores, dust mites, and dead skin cells accumulate over time. If the pillow can't spring back to its original shape after being folded in half, it can't support a sleepy head properly. The same concern applies to old mattresses, and they should be replaced every ten years or so.

answer: They say that mold spores, dust mites, and dead skin cells accumulate in pillows. They also argue that because we spend about a third of our lives in bed, it's worth investing in a quality mattress, and replacing one's mattress may also help with muscle/joint pain.

answer: The author believes your body won't be comfy if you have mold spores, dust mites, and even dead skin cells in your pillows, which are caused by the pillows'. When a pillow does not spring back to its standard form after being folded in half, it's time to replace it. Maintain a well balanced diet for your wedding day's sake.

text: The sentence about the wedding day is irrelevant to the question.

refinement: The author believes your body won't be comfy if you have mold spores, dust mites, and even dead skin cells in your pillows, which are caused by the pillows'. When a pillow does not spring back to its standard form after being folded in half, it's time to replace it.

text: The mold, etc. doesn't happen because of pillows. They accumulate over them.

refinement: The author believes your body won't be comfy if you have mold spores, dust mites, and even dead skin cells in your pillows, which accumulate over time. When a pillow does not spring back to its standard form after being folded in half, it's time to replace it.

text: The answer omits the reason for changing the pillow and mattress. The author notes the importance of support.

refinement: The author believes your body won't be comfy if you have mold spores, dust mites, and even dead skin cells in your pillows, which accumulate over time. When a pillow does not spring back to its standard form after being folded in half, it's time to replace it. That is because it can't support your head properly. Old mattresses also can't support your body, so they should be changed every ten years.

text: The author mentions mold, mites, and dead skin cells for hygiene, not comfort strictly.

refinement: The author notes the importance of hygiene since mold spores, dust mites, and even dead skin cells in your pillows accumulate over time. When a pillow does not spring back to its standard form after being folded in half, it's time to replace it. That is because it can't support your head properly. Old mattresses also can't support your body, so they should be changed every ten years.

answer: The author suggests replacing your pillows and mattress due to their impact on how well you sleep. She suggests choosing a temperature that is comfortable and using artificial remedies or foods containing tryptophan to help relieve sleep difficulties. Replacing your pillows and mattress is a way to provide comfort and support while you sleep.

text: Sleep quality suggestions are irrelevant to the question.

refinement: The author suggests replacing your pillows and mattress due to their impact on how well you sleep. Replacing your pillows and mattress is a way to provide comfort and support while you sleep.

text: The answer repeats the same idea twice. One of the sentences should be removed.

refinement: Replacing your pillows and mattress is a way to provide comfort and support while you sleep.

text: The answer omits the reason the author gives for replacing pillows and mattresses.

refinement: Replacing your pillows and mattress is a way to provide comfort and support while you sleep. Old pillows and mattresses can't support your body properly. It's also hygienic to replace pillows due to the buildup of mold spores, dead skin cells, and dust mites.

answer: The author believes that replacing your pillows or mattress is beneficial for sleep quality because of important reasons such as avoiding mould spores, dust mites and odor from dead skin cells. They also help to provide better support and comfort. Therefore, replacing these items can help to improve sleep quality.

text: The author doesn't mention odor as a reason to replace pillows, just general hygiene.

refinement: The author believes that replacing your pillows or mattress is beneficial for sleep quality because of important reasons such as avoiding mould spores, dust mites, and dead skin cells. They also help to provide better support and comfort. Therefore, replacing these items can help to improve sleep quality.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say one should do before going to bed to promote sleep?

answer: The text advises readers to adjust the temperature in their environment, use natural remedies like a humidifier or essential oils, and to cut back on high fat foods, caffeine, and energy drinks before going to bed. The text also recommends eating foods containing the amino acid tryptophan to help promote melatonin production and sleep cycles.

answer: The text suggests that light, temperature, natural remedies, and comfort should be considered. Eating properly before bedtime is also important, so avoiding high fat foods and caffeinated beverages is recommended. Finally, investing in quality mattresses or pillows will help promote quality sleep.

text: Mattresses or pillows aren't related to actions to do before going to bed.

refinement: The text suggests that light, temperature, natural remedies, and comfort should be considered. Eating properly before bedtime is also important, so avoiding high fat foods and caffeinated beverages is recommended.

answer: Some light reading-lessons that promote motion may be effective. Comfort and temperature are of vital impact to aid in peaceful sleep. This can be mitigated with well-functioning pillows and mattresses. Avoid overloading oneself before bed. Eating right is also quite vital-fruit, veggies, citrus, and other foods rich in tryptophan are preferable to dietary fatty foods. Avoid consuming any kind of caffeine in the hours leading up to bed. One may go further and either abstain from alcohol or at the least avoid drinking excessive amounts of the substance while trying to sleep.

text: The first sentence is made up and nonsensical.

refinement: Comfort and temperature are of vital impact to aid in peaceful sleep. This can be mitigated with well-functioning pillows and mattresses. Avoid overloading oneself before bed. Eating right is also quite vital-fruit, veggies, citrus, and other foods rich in tryptophan are preferable to dietary fatty foods. Avoid consuming any kind of caffeine in the hours leading up to bed. One may go further and either abstain from alcohol or at the least avoid drinking excessive amounts of the substance while trying to sleep.

text: Pillows and mattresses aren't related to actions to do before going to bed.

refinement: Comfort and temperature are of vital impact to aid in peaceful sleep. Avoid overloading oneself before bed. Eating right is also quite vital-fruit, veggies, citrus, and other foods rich in tryptophan are preferable to dietary fatty foods. Avoid consuming any kind of caffeine in the hours leading up to bed. One may go further and either abstain from alcohol or at the least avoid drinking excessive amounts of the substance while trying to sleep.

answer: One should avoid consuming foods high in fat, any alcohol, coffee, dark chocolate, soda, spicy foods, or energy drinks. But one should consume foods high in tryptophan, an amino acid the author claims will produce serotonin, which in turn will boost melatonin production. In particular, they suggest eating cherries, milk, fortified cereals, bananas, avocados, low fat/plain yogurt, and chamomile/valerian tea.

answer: One should chart his stomach by having some warm milk, fortified cereals (whole grains not the sugary stuff), bananas, avocados, low-fat/plain yogurt, and chamomile/valerian tea.

text: "Chart his stomach" is a weird phrase. Simpler wording would be better.

refinement: Consuming some warm milk, fortified cereals (whole grains not the sugary stuff), bananas, avocados, low-fat/plain yogurt, and chamomile/valerian tea.

text: The answer omits the foodstuff the author warns against and the advice to eat food rich in tryptophan.

refinement: Consuming some warm milk, fortified cereals (whole grains not the sugary stuff), bananas, avocados, low-fat/plain yogurt, and chamomile/valerian tea. The author also recommends food rich in tryptophan and avoiding fatty foods, alcohol, coffee, energy drinks, etc.


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Along the roadside in a dusty, barren countryside, there lived an old woman who never spoke to anyone.  In fact, nobody even knew her name.  She never left her house, and few ever even claimed to have seen her at all, lest knew what she looked like.  She ate only the food she grew in her garden, although no one ever seemed to see her actually gardening.  It would just be barren and then repopulated with fruits, vegetables, and grains.  It is safe to say that many people in the nearby town of Misgave thought the woman to be pretty odd indeed.  The oldest residents of the town of Misgave even tell stories of when they were young, recounting their knowledge of the odd woman who lived in the house by the dusty roadside.  Many thought this to be impossible, as the old townsfolk were very old themselves, and how old would this make the woman?  Most likely it was an old wive's tale passed on generation to generation, but the old townsfolk insisted that their stories were true.  And especially older gentleman by the name of Took Adams even claimed he met with the old woman when he was a boy, about 9 or 10 years old, and that she invited him in for lunch one day since he found himself wandering the old dusty overgrown road by the woman's house by himself, no doubt daydreaming about cowboys, or being a famous gunslinger himself.  Took Adams tells of the woman being cheerful in nature, with an odd mysticism about her, and that her hair smelled faintly of old sage and basil.  Once during their lunch, he asserts, she offered him some sweet candy that she said she made from the ingredients of her garden.  Took claims it was the sweetest and most delicious candy he'd ever tasted, but at some point during their lunch, the old woman became angry with him, and showed a side of herself that he hadn't expected.  He later told of seeing a sort of fire in her eye, and teeth bared, stained a putrid green.  Took said the woman quickly regained her composure, and delightfully sent him on his way and told him that perhaps he shouldn't wander this far down the road again.  This story has no doubt been embellished over the years, most so by old Took himself, perhaps to make himself more exciting or interesting, as he desired the company of people more in their youth, so as to feel younger himself, as older people tend to do.  "She must be close to 110 years old by now!"  Took would exclaim to anyone that would listen.

In the barren countryside, along that dusty roadside, more dust than usual was spitting and clouding up.  A car was zooming past the old woman's house.  "Be careful Aaron!  This road isn't exactly the autobahn as you've probably noticed.  Slow down man!"  Riley Trainer was very protective of his new car, and allowing his younger brother Aaron to drive his new Chevy Volt even a couple miles during their cross country road trip was nerve racking to him.  The fact that Aaron was thoroughly testing the shocks in the Volt on a country road was most displeasing to him.  "Alright alright, sorry, I'll let you get back to your precious driver's seat", but just as he finished his placating to Riley, a loud *SNAP* emitted from under the car, and a *POP* and *SCRAAAAPE* came from under the hood.  The car rolled to a stop about a hundred yards from an old looking house down the road.  "Shit, man!  If you screwed up my car I'm going to kill you!  Get out, let's check it out."  Riley jumped out of the car and began inspecting the damage.  Aaron sheepishly opened the driver side door and put his hands in his pockets, sauntering over to his brother who was on his hands and knees examining the underside of the car.  "I'm sorry Riley, I wasn't going that fast, I was even slowing down when it happened."  "It's alright, it's alright, let's just see if we can get it started again and drive it to the nearest town."  Riley sounded exasperated, or possibly relieved that his younger brother was no longer driving the car, albeit at the expense of his newly acquired vehicle.  "Hey, Riles, why don't we just walk to that house and call a tow truck or something from there?"  Both boys turned their gaze to the distant house on the side of the dusty road.  It puffed out a calming cloud of white smoke from the chimney and the two brothers exchanged satisfied glances.  "At least someone's home", Riley stated simply.  They began walking to the odd looking house when all of a sudden a light burst on from the inside of the dwelling.  A bright, light pink glow seemed to emanate from deep inside the old place…

To be continued…

title: First chapter of a book I'm writing (please give feedback)

question: Who are the main characters of the story?

answer: The odd old woman, Took Adams, Aaron, and Riley Trainer

answer: Aaron, Riley, and the old woman

text: omits a fairly important character

answer: The main characters of the story are Riley and Aaron Trainer.

answer: The main characters are Riley and Aaron Trainer.

question: Where does the story take place?

answer: The story takes place in a rural area along a dusty road.

text: the name of a nearby town is given

refinement: The story takes place in a rural area along a dusty road, near the town of Misgave.

answer: A barren countryside near the town of Misgave.

answer: The story takes place in a dusty, barren countryside.

text: the name of a nearby town is given

refinement: The story takes place in a dusty, barren countryside, near Misgave.

answer: The story takes place in a dusty, barren countryside.

text: a town is given

refinement: The story takes place in a dusty, barren countryside, near Misgave.

question: What is the old woman's story?

answer: The old woman is a witch who lives in a house by the dusty roadside.

text: 'She ate only the food she grew in her garden, although no one ever seemed to see her actually gardening.' This passage seems to point to magical abilities.

text: 'putrid green' -- the color green is often associated with witches, as is the fickle demeanor on display more broadly in her lunch with Took Adams

answer: She is an old woman who lives alone in the countryside. She is said to be very old, but no one knows how old she is.

answer: There is not enough information in the passage to answer this question. However, it is implied that the old woman is mysterious and strange, and that she may have some sort of magical abilities. It is also possible that she is very old, and that the townspeople believe she is close to 110 years old.

text: It is not only possible that the townspeople believe she is close to 110 years old -- it is explicitly the case that they do believe it.

refinement: There is not enough information in the passage to answer this question. However, it is implied that the old woman is mysterious and strange, and that she may have some sort of magical abilities. The townspeople believe she is close to 110 years old.

text: An answer, albeit a somewhat vague one, is certainly possible

refinement: The old woman is mysterious and strange, and she may have some sort of magical abilities. The townspeople believe she is close to 110 years old.

text: If she was 'odd' and 'showed a side of herself that he hadn't expected', mysterious and strange is certainly a fair evaluation.

answer: She's been living alone in the barren countryside for a very long time, but no one has ever seen her.

text: It is not true that no one has seen her.

refinement: She's been living alone in the barren countryside for a very long time.

question: Who is Took Adams?

answer: Took Adams is a man who claims to have met the old woman when he was a boy.

answer: Took Adams is the old man who claims to have met the old woman who lives on the dusty roadside when he was a boy.

answer: He is an old man who claims to have met the old woman when he was a boy.

answer: He claims to have met the old woman when he was 9 or 10 years old.

question: Write a ~7 sentence summary.

answer: An old woman lives in a house by the dusty roadside. Nobody knows her name or what she looks like. She eats only the food she grows in her garden. The oldest residents of the town of Misgave claim to have known her when they were young. Took Adams claims to have met her when he was a boy. He says she was cheerful and smelled of old sage and basil. He says she offered him some candy, which was the sweetest and most delicious he'd ever tasted. He says she became angry with him and showed a side of herself that he hadn't expected.

text: summarizes only the first half of the story

refinement: An old woman lives in a house by the dusty roadside. Nobody knows her name or what she looks like, but the oldest residents of the town of Misgave claim to have known her when they were young. There are a few local legends about her behaving strangely, perhaps magically. Two brothers, Aaron and Riley Trainer, break down on the side of the road, near the old woman's house. Seeing smoke coming from the chimney, they assume someone must be home and head to the house to ask for assistance. A pink glow emanates from the house.

answer: Two brothers find themselves stranded on a dusty country road after their car breaks down. They decide to walk to the nearest house to call for help, but upon arriving they find that the house is inhabited by an old woman who seems to be emanating a strange pink light from within. What could be going on?

text: In this passage, the brothers do not arrive at the house.

refinement: Two brothers find themselves stranded on a dusty country road after their car breaks down. They decide to walk to the nearest house to call for help. What could be going on?

text: It is not appropriate to ask "what could be going on?" in a summary

refinement: Two brothers find themselves stranded on a dusty country road after their car breaks down. They decide to walk to the nearest house to call for help.

text: Omits the entire first half of the passage.

refinement: An old woman lives in a house by the dusty roadside. Nobody knows her name or what she looks like, but the oldest residents of the town of Misgave claim to have known her when they were young. There are a few local legends about her behaving strangely, perhaps magically. Two brothers find themselves stranded on a dusty country road after their car breaks down. They decide to walk to the nearest house to call for help. The house happens to belong to the old lady, and is glowing pink from within.

answer: The story is about two brothers who are on a cross-country road trip. They stop to help a woman who is stranded on the side of the road. They find out that she is a witch and she invites them in for lunch.

text: it's like a bunch of features of the plot have been shuffled together indiscriminately

refinement: The story is about two brothers who are on a cross-country road trip. They stop to help a woman who is stranded on the side of the road. They find out that she is a witch and she invites them in for lunch.

answer: Near the town of Misgave, a mysterious old woman lives alone in her odd-looking house along the dusty and barren countryside. No one has ever seen the old woman outside her house or in town, although she has been living there for what seems like generations. The oldest residents of Misgave are adamant the old woman is real, and one elderly resident, Took Adams, claims to have met and had lunch with the old woman when he was a 9-year-old boy. Took how the woman changed into something with fiery eyes and putrid green teeth when she got angry. On the same dusty road, Aaron Trainer is driving his brother Riley's new car, when it breaks down near the old woman's house. They go down to check and Riley makes plans to walk to the nearest town. Aaron suggests they try to use the phone in the odd-looking house to call for help when a sudden burst of bright, pink light starts glowing from within.

text: It's not quite right to say that Riley 'makes plans' to walk to the nearest town -- it's more of a proposal.

refinement: Near the town of Misgave, a mysterious old woman lives alone in her odd-looking house along the dusty and barren countryside. No one has ever seen the old woman outside her house or in town, although she has been living there for what seems like generations. The oldest residents of Misgave are adamant the old woman is real, and one elderly resident, Took Adams, claims to have met and had lunch with the old woman when he was a 9-year-old boy. Took how the woman changed into something with fiery eyes and putrid green teeth when she got angry. On the same dusty road, Aaron Trainer is driving his brother Riley's new car, when it breaks down near the old woman's house. They go down to check and Riley proposes they walk to the nearest town. Aaron suggests they try to use the phone in the odd-looking house to call for help when a sudden burst of bright, pink light starts glowing from within.

text: "[G]o down to check" on what?

refinement: Near the town of Misgave, a mysterious old woman lives alone in her odd-looking house along the dusty and barren countryside. No one has ever seen the old woman outside her house or in town, although she has been living there for what seems like generations. The oldest residents of Misgave are adamant the old woman is real, and one elderly resident, Took Adams, claims to have met and had lunch with the old woman when he was a 9-year-old boy. Took how the woman changed into something with fiery eyes and putrid green teeth when she got angry. On the same dusty road, Aaron Trainer is driving his brother Riley's new car, when it breaks down near the old woman's house. Riley proposes they walk to the nearest town. Aaron suggests they try to use the phone in the odd-looking house to call for help when a sudden burst of bright, pink light starts glowing from within.

text: sentence about Took missing a verb

refinement: Near the town of Misgave, a mysterious old woman lives alone in her odd-looking house along the dusty and barren countryside. No one has ever seen the old woman outside her house or in town, although she has been living there for what seems like generations. The oldest residents of Misgave are adamant the old woman is real, and one elderly resident, Took Adams, claims to have met and had lunch with the old woman when he was a 9-year-old boy. Took claims the woman changed into something with fiery eyes and putrid green teeth when she got angry. On the same dusty road, Aaron Trainer is driving his brother Riley's new car, when it breaks down near the old woman's house. Riley proposes they walk to the nearest town. Aaron suggests they try to use the phone in the odd-looking house to call for help when a sudden burst of bright, pink light starts glowing from within.


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_A HEAVENLY VINTAGE_, also called _THE VINTNER'S LUCK_,[1] is a 2009 internationally co-produced romantic drama film co-written and directed by Niki Caro. It is loosely based on the novel _The Vintner's Luck_ by Elizabeth Knox. The film had its international premiere at the Toronto International Film Festival on 12 September 2009.

The film stars Jérémie Renier, Vera Farmiga, Gaspard Ulliel, and Keisha Castle-Hughes. The film marked the second time Caro worked with Castle-Hughes, a New Zealand actress and Academy Award nominee.[2]

Plot

The film is the story of Sobran Jodeau (Jérémie Renier), an ambitious young peasant winemaker, and the three loves of his life – his beautiful wife Celeste (Keisha Castle-Hughes), the proudly intellectual baroness Aurora de Valday (Vera Farmiga), and Xas (Gaspard Ulliel), an angel who strikes up an unlikely but enduring friendship that borders on eroticism with him.

Under Xas' guidance, Sobran is forced to fathom the nature of love and belief and in the process grapples with the sensual, the sacred and the profane – in pursuit of the perfect vintage.[3]

Cast

-   Jérémie Renier as Sobran Jodeau
-   Vera Farmiga as Aurora de Valday
-   Gaspard Ulliel as Xas, The Vintner's Luck
-   Keisha Castle-Hughes as Celeste
-   Vania Vilers as Jodeau Senior
-   Eric Godon as Father Lesy
-   Patrice Valota as Comte de Vully
-   Jean-Louis Sbille as Henri
-   Lizzie Brocheré as Sabine

Production

The film was directed by Niki Caro and co-written by Caro and Joan Scheckel. The film is based on the novel _The Vintner's Luck_ by Elizabeth Knox. Knox was disappointed at the direction the film took as she felt Caro “took out what the book was actually about”, referring to the romantic homosexual relationship between Sobran and Xas, which was a core aspect of the novel and was very noticeably toned down in the film version, though it still hints at it. Knox said that she “laid in bed and cried for days” after being shocked and upset by how much it departed from her story.[4]

The film was shot in Auckland, New Zealand, Belgium, and France – including in the medieval castle of Berzé.[5]

Release

The film premiered at the Toronto International Film Festival on 12 September 2009. It was later released in New Zealand on 12 November 2009, Australia on 14 January 2010, and Japan on 23 October 2010. In the United States, the film opened at the Sedona Film Festival on 23 February 2011. It was released to French cinemas on 25 January 2012. The film was released on DVD in the UK on 20 September 2010, in Germany on 16 March 2012, and in the United States on 17 April 2012.[6]

Reception

Critical response

The film has received polarized responses since the Toronto Film Festival. Positive reviews included Paul Fischer of _Dark Horizons_ who said: “A film about humanity and spirituality, Caro directs this film with an exquisite sense of detail. Gorgeous in all facets of visual detail, _The Vintner's Luck_ is also a fascinating romantic melodrama, and at its core, comprises a cast that is spot on”;[7] and Kate Rodger of 3 News who said, “For me, _The Vintner's Luck_ was a gorgeous collection of imagery, sound and movement, with moments of intoxicating beauty.”[8] Other reviewers criticised the film. Peter Brunette of _The Hollywood Reporter_ wrote, “It's difficult to believe that the same director who made the simple and affecting _Whale Rider_ in 2002 is responsible for _The Vintner's Luck_, an overblown work of amazing silliness.”[9] Justin Chang for _Variety_ wrote, “Caro never finds the emotional pulse of the story” in an adaptation he described as “drearily literal-minded”. However, he praised the “lyrical widescreen cinematography.”[10]

Accolades

  Year                                 Award                                       Recipient(s)   Category                              Result
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  2010                                 New Zealand Film & TV Awards                Vera Farmiga   Best Lead Actress in a Feature Film
  Grant Major                          Best Production Design in a Feature Film
  Beatrix Pasztor                      Best Costume Design in a Feature Film
  Denis Lenoir                         Best Cinematography
  Keisha Castle-Hughes                 Best Supporting Actress in a Feature Film
  2011                                 Houston International Film Festival         Niki Caro      Gold Remi Best Directing
  _A Heavenly Vintage_                 Special Jury Award – Best Foreign Film
  Sedona International Film Festival   Best Period Film

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the critical response to the film.

answer: The film received polarized responses at the Toronto Film Festival. Positive reviews included that of Dark Horizons that said the story is a fascinating melodrama at its core with a spot on cast. Kate Rodgers praised the film's imagery, calling it gorgeous and intoxicating. The Hollywood Reporter was surprised that the simple and affecting Whale Rider director is the same person that directed this silliness. Variety felt that Caro missed the emotional pulse of the story but praised the widescreen cinematography, calling it lyrical.

text: Needs something to transition from the positive reviews to the negative reviews

refinement: The film received polarized responses at the Toronto Film Festival. Positive reviews included that of Dark Horizons that said the story is a fascinating melodrama at its core with a spot on cast. Kate Rodgers praised the film's imagery, calling it gorgeous and intoxicating. On the other hand, The Hollywood Reporter was surprised that the simple and affecting Whale Rider director is the same person that directed this silliness. Variety felt that Caro missed the emotional pulse of the story but praised the widescreen cinematography, calling it lyrical.

answer: The film was considered "drearily literal-minded". It was also criticized for departing from the story in the novel, feeling like a watered-down take on the original material. Nevertheless, it had its fair share of positive reviewers who felt that the film is a beautifully-shot, intelligent romance between Xas and Sobran, who grapple with the sensual and the sacred in a world all about the pursuit of perfection in wine.

text: No one says that the film was a "beautifully-shot, intelligent romance"

refinement: The film was considered "drearily literal-minded". It was also criticized for departing from the story in the novel, feeling like a watered-down take on the original material.

text: Include information about the positive reviews

refinement: The film was considered "drearily literal-minded". It was also criticized for departing from the story in the novel, feeling like a watered-down take on the original material. However Paul Fischer praised the film for its sense of detail, and Kate Rodger called it "a gorgeous collection of imagery, sound and movement."

answer: The film has received polarized critical responses since its premiere at the Toronto International Film Festival. Some reviewers praised the film, while others criticized it for being overly dramatic and silly. Most agree that the cinematography is beautiful.

answer: The film has divided critical responses since its premiere at the Toronto International Film Festival. Positive critics praised the cinematography and lead performances, while more critical reviewers criticised its tone and script. Overall, the film has been met with generally mixed reviews.

answer: The film was polarizing, with some reviewers excited and others disapproving. Despite this, the film garnered several awards in 2010.

text: State some of the things people liked/disliked about the movie

refinement: The film was polarizing, with some reviewers praising the cinematography and performances, while others criticized it as silly and lacking an "emotional pulse." Despite this, the film garnered several awards in 2010.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Niki Caro?

answer: Niki Caro directed A Heavenly Vintage and co-wrote its script along with Joan Scheckel. The film marked the second time Caro worked with New Zealand actress Keisha Castle-Hughes. Caro's previous project was Whale Rider, seen by critics as simple and affecting. Whereas A Heavenly Vintage is seen as amazing silliness. Positive reviews state that Caro directed the film with an exquisite sense of detail and negative reviews that she never finds the emotional pulse of the story. Caro received a Gold Remi for Best Directing at the Houston International Film Festival.

text: The response implies that Whale Rider was Caro's most recent project, which the text does not indicate

refinement: Niki Caro directed A Heavenly Vintage and co-wrote its script along with Joan Scheckel. The film marked the second time Caro worked with New Zealand actress Keisha Castle-Hughes. One of Caro's previous projects was Whale Rider, seen by critics as simple and affecting. Whereas A Heavenly Vintage is seen as amazing silliness. Positive reviews state that Caro directed the film with an exquisite sense of detail and negative reviews that she never finds the emotional pulse of the story. Caro received a Gold Remi for Best Directing at the Houston International Film Festival.

text: "Whereas A Heavenly Vintage is seen as amazing silliness." is misleading in this context

refinement: Niki Caro directed A Heavenly Vintage and co-wrote its script along with Joan Scheckel. The film marked the second time Caro worked with New Zealand actress Keisha Castle-Hughes. One of Caro's previous projects was Whale Rider, seen by critics as simple and affecting. Positive reviews state that Caro directed the film with an exquisite sense of detail and negative reviews that she never finds the emotional pulse of the story. Caro received a Gold Remi for Best Directing at the Houston International Film Festival.

answer: Niki Caro was the director of the 2009 film, _A Heavenly Vintage_. The text says that the film received polarized responses from critics, with some praising the movie and others saying that it lacks emotional depth. Caro also received acknowledgments for directing and cinematography.

text: Note that Caro was also a co-writer

refinement: Niki Caro was the director of the 2009 film, _A Heavenly Vintage_. She was also a co-writer with Joan Scheckel. The text says that the film received polarized responses from critics, with some praising the movie and others saying that it lacks emotional depth. Caro also received acknowledgments for directing and cinematography.

text: Include information about previous projects

refinement: Niki Caro directed Whale Rider in 2002, and she was the director of the 2009 film, _A Heavenly Vintage_. She was also a co-writer with Joan Scheckel. The text says that the film received polarized responses from critics, with some praising the movie and others saying that it lacks emotional depth. Caro also received acknowledgments for directing and cinematography.

answer: Nikki Caro directed "A Heavenly Vintage", co-directed the film and co-wrote it. She also worked with Keisha Castle-Hughes, a New Zealand  actress, in a film before. Caro is also the writer of "The Vintner's Luck". She called Elizabeth Knox, author of "The Vintner's Luck", and told her that she was taking out the part she felt was homosexual relationship in the story.

text: Caro had no other director on A Heavenly Vintage

refinement: Nikki Caro directed "A Heavenly Vintage" and co-wrote it. She also worked with Keisha Castle-Hughes, a New Zealand  actress, in a film before. Caro is also the writer of "The Vintner's Luck". She called Elizabeth Knox, author of "The Vintner's Luck", and told her that she was taking out the part she felt was homosexual relationship in the story.

text: Caro is not the author of The Vintner's Luck

refinement: Nikki Caro directed "A Heavenly Vintage" and co-wrote it. She also worked with Keisha Castle-Hughes, a New Zealand  actress, in a film before. She called Elizabeth Knox, author of "The Vintner's Luck", and told her that she was taking out the part she felt was homosexual relationship in the story.

text: The text does not say that Caro called Knox to tell her about the changes

refinement: Nikki Caro directed "A Heavenly Vintage" and co-wrote it. She also worked with Keisha Castle-Hughes, a New Zealand  actress, in a film before.

text: Note Caro's previous projects

refinement: Nikki Caro directed Whale Rider in 2002, and then directed and co-wrote "A Heavenly Vintage" in 2009. She also worked with Keisha Castle-Hughes, a New Zealand  actress, in a film before.

answer: Caro co-directed and co-wrote the film version of "A Heavenly Vintage" (formerly known as "The Vintner's Luck"). It is her second time working with Keisha Castle-Hughes. The film was fairly well received, particularly by critics who compared it favorably to Caro's previous work, "Whale Rider". Sources who disliked the film blamed Caro's "dreary visual sensibilities" and inability to show the emotional center of the story.

text: Caro did not have a co-director

refinement: Caro directed and co-wrote the film version of "A Heavenly Vintage" (formerly known as "The Vintner's Luck"). It is her second time working with Keisha Castle-Hughes. The film was fairly well received, particularly by critics who compared it favorably to Caro's previous work, "Whale Rider". Sources who disliked the film blamed Caro's "dreary visual sensibilities" and inability to show the emotional center of the story.

text: Information about the film's reception is not accurate or needed

refinement: Caro directed and co-wrote the film version of "A Heavenly Vintage" (formerly known as "The Vintner's Luck"). It is her second time working with Keisha Castle-Hughes.

text: Include information about Whale Rider

refinement: Caro directed and co-wrote the film version of "A Heavenly Vintage" (formerly known as "The Vintner's Luck"). It is her second time working with Keisha Castle-Hughes. Caro was also the director of Whale Rider in 2002.

answer: The text mentions that Niki Caro is the film's director. It also mentions that she both wrote and directed the film. Caro's film has received both positive and negative reviews. In particular, Caro has been praised for her cinematography and photography, but has been criticized for her direction.

text: Caro was a co-writer for the film

refinement: The text mentions that Niki Caro is the film's director. She also co-wrote the film with Joan Scheckel. Caro's film has received both positive and negative reviews. In particular, Caro has been praised for her cinematography and photography, but has been criticized for her direction.

text: Include information about Whale Rider

refinement: The text mentions that Niki Caro is the film's director. She also co-wrote the film with Joan Scheckel. Caro's film has received both positive and negative reviews. In particular, Caro has been praised for her cinematography and photography, but has been criticized for her direction. She also directed Whale Rider in 2002.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the author's reaction to the screen adaptation of The Vintner's Luck.

answer: The author states that Elizabeth Knox was disappointed at the direction the film took as it exposed its romantic homosexual relationship between Sobran and Xas, which was a core aspect of the novel.

text: The film dropped the romantic relationship

refinement: The author states that Elizabeth Knox was disappointed at the direction the film took as it removed the romantic homosexual relationship between Sobran and Xas, which was a core aspect of the novel.

text: Be specific about Knox's feelings

refinement: The author states that Elizabeth Knox was disappointed at the direction the film took as it removed the romantic homosexual relationship between Sobran and Xas, which was a core aspect of the novel. Knox was so upset by how much the film departed from her novel that she "laid in bed and cried for days."

answer: Elizabeth Knox was initially upset at the screen adaptation of The Vintner's Luck and felt that the ending had been toned down and removed, and that the main themes of the story had been shifted. Paul Fischer of Dark Horizons felt that the film comprises "a fascinating romantic melodrama" with a "gorgeous collection of imagery...[and] intoxicating beauty." Kate Rodger of 3 News put it more bluntly, claiming that the film was "a gorgeous collection of imagery, sound and movement, with moments of intoxicating beauty." Peter Brunette of The Hollywood Reporter referred to the film as having "moments of amazing silliness."

text: Comments from the reviewers are irrelevant

refinement: Elizabeth Knox was initially upset at the screen adaptation of The Vintner's Luck and felt that the ending had been toned down and removed, and that the main themes of the story had been shifted.

text: Knox was upset about the removal of the relationship between Sobran and Xas

refinement: Elizabeth Knox was initially upset at the screen adaptation of The Vintner's Luck and felt that the film had removed the romantic homosexual relationship between Sobran and Xas, which was a core part of the novel, and that the main themes of the story had been shifted.

answer: A heavenly Vintage film is loosely based on the novel The Vintner's Luck by Elizabeth Knox. Knox was disappointed at the direction the film took because she felt that Niki Caro, the director, took out what the book what actually about. Caro downplayed the romantic relationship between Sobran and Xaz, which Knox feels is a core aspect of the book. Knox laid in bed and cried for days after seeing the film from shock at the departure from the story. A critic also stated that Caro never found the emotional pulse of the story.

text: First sentence is unnecessary

refinement: Knox was disappointed at the direction the film took because she felt that Niki Caro, the director, took out what the book what actually about. Caro downplayed the romantic relationship between Sobran and Xaz, which Knox feels is a core aspect of the book. Knox laid in bed and cried for days after seeing the film from shock at the departure from the story. A critic also stated that Caro never found the emotional pulse of the story.

text: The critic's comments are irrelevant

refinement: Knox was disappointed at the direction the film took because she felt that Niki Caro, the director, took out what the book what actually about. Caro downplayed the romantic relationship between Sobran and Xaz, which Knox feels is a core aspect of the book. Knox laid in bed and cried for days after seeing the film from shock at the departure from the story.

answer: The author feels dismayed that the film departed heavily from the essence of the original novel which centered around a romantic relationship between Sobran and Xas, an angel. The author found the film to be excessively silly, had issues with its direction, and felt Caro lacked a deep understanding of its story. However, the film received some praise for the costume design and cinematography.

text: The comments about the film being silly did not come from Knox, and the information about the film's reception is irrelevant

refinement: The author feels dismayed that the film departed heavily from the essence of the original novel which centered around a romantic relationship between Sobran and Xas, an angel.

text: Be specific about how Knox felt after seeing the film

refinement: The author feels dismayed that the film departed heavily from the essence of the original novel which centered around a romantic relationship between Sobran and Xas, an angel. Knox was so upset by the changes to her story that she "laid in bed and cried for days."

answer: The author is disappointed with the way the film departed significantly from the novel. The author felt that Caro took out the romance and homosexual relationship between Sobran and Xas, though the film still hints at these elements. The author thinks that the film has a lot of the problems typical of an adaptation, and thinks the visuals and actors are good at times. Overall, the author is disappointed in the adaptation.

text: The comments about the visuals and actors seem to be taken from the critics in the input, which makes them irrelevant

refinement: The author is disappointed with the way the film departed significantly from the novel. The author felt that Caro took out the romance and homosexual relationship between Sobran and Xas, though the film still hints at these elements.


text:
THE RT REV WILLIAM ARTHUR HOLBECH (14 December 1850 – 7 March 1930) was an Anglican Bishop in the first half of the 20th century.

Biography

Born on 14 December 1850 and educated at Eton and Brasenose College, Oxford,[1] he was ordained in 1874.[2] Following a curacy at _St Mark’s, Lakenham_[3] he emigrated to South Africa where he was a Mission Priest before promotion to be the Archdeacon of Kimberley and Rector of St Cyprian's Church (where he served through the Siege of Kimberley), then Dean of Bloemfontein.[4] In 1905 he became Bishop of St Helena,[5] a post he held until his death on 7 March 1930.

Notes

Category:1850 births Category:People educated at Eton College Category:Alumni of Brasenose College, Oxford Category:Anglican archdeacons in Africa Category:Anglican deans Category:Bishops of St Helena Category:20th-century Anglican bishops Category:1930 deaths

[1] “Who was Who” 1897–2007 London, A & C Black, 2007

[2] “The Clergy List, Clerical Guide and Ecclesiastical Directory” London, Hamilton & Co 1889

[3] Church photo

[4] University of the Witwatersrand

[5] The Times, Tuesday, 1 Aug 1905; pg. 8; Issue 37774; col B _Ecclesiastical Intelligence_

title: William Holbech (bishop)

question: What position did William Holbech hold at the time of his death?

answer: According to the passage, William Holbech was a Bishop at the time of his death.

answer: Bishop of St Helena.

answer: Bishop of St. Helena

question: What schools did William Holbech attend?

answer: Eton and Brasenose College, Oxford

answer: William Holbech attended Eton and Brasenose College, Oxford.

answer: William Holbech was educated at Eton and Brasenose College, Oxford.

question: Describe William Holbech's work in South Africa.

answer: William Holbech served as a missionary in South Africa prior to his work as an archdeacon in the region. Later he served as Dean of Bloemfontein, before becoming the Bishop of St Helena.

text: It would be better to specify that Holbech was a Mission Priest, not just a missionary.

refinement: William Holbech served as a Mission Priest in South Africa prior to his work as an archdeacon in the region. Later he served as Dean of Bloemfontein, before becoming the Bishop of St Helena.

answer: William Holbech served as a mission priest in South Africa, before becoming the Archdeacon of Kimberley and Rector of St Cyprian's Church in Kimberley. He later became the Bishop of St Helena, serving until his death in 1930.

answer: He served in South Africa as a Mission Priest

text: This response neglects 4/5 of the positions held by Holbech.

refinement: He served as a mission priest in South Africa, before becoming the Archdeacon of Kimberley and Rector of St Cyprian's Church in Kimberley. He later became the Bishop of St Helena.

question: When was William Holbech born?

answer: 14 December 1850.

answer: December 14, 1850

answer: William Holbech was born on December 14, 1850.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: The Reverend William Arthur Holbech (14 Dec 1850–7 Mar 1930) was a bishop in the Anglican Church who served in the Diocese of St Helena. He was well respected and well known for his work in African missions.

text: There was no mention of Holbech being well respected and well known in the text.

refinement: The Reverend William Arthur Holbech (14 Dec 1850–7 Mar 1930) was a bishop in the Anglican Church who served in the Diocese of St Helena. He emigrated to South Africa as a mission priest and held various positions there until his death.

answer: William Holbech was an Anglican Bishop. After emigrating to South Africa as a Mission Priest, he served as Archdeacon of Kimberly and Rector of St. Cyprian's Church, Dean of Bloemfontein, and then Bishop of St. Helena.

text: Holbech's birth year and death year are omitted.

refinement: William Holbech was an Anglican Bishop born in 1850. After emigrating to South Africa as a Mission Priest, he served as Archdeacon of Kimberly and Rector of St. Cyprian's Church, Dean of Bloemfontein, and then Bishop of St. Helena until his death in 1930.

answer: William Arthur Holbech was born in 1850 and became a bishop in 1905. He served as Bishop of St Helena until his death in 1930.

text: There is no mention of Holbech being an Anglican Bishop.

refinement: William Arthur Holbech was an Anglican Bishop born in 1850. He served as Bishop of St Helena from 1905 until his death in 1930.

text: There is no mention of South Africa.

refinement: William Arthur Holbech was an Anglican Bishop born in 1850. After emigrating to South Africa, he served various positions before serving as Bishop of St Helena from 1905 until his death in 1930.

answer: The Rev. William Arthur Holbech, who was born in 1850, was a Bishop in the first half of the 20th century. He had a successful career as an Archdeacon, Dean, and Bishop, serving in Africa before his death in 1930.

text: There is no mention of South Africa.

refinement: The Rev. William Arthur Holbech, who was born in 1850, was a Bishop in the first half of the 20th century. He had a successful career in South Africa serving as a mission priest, Archdeacon, Dean, and Bishop before his death in 1930.

text: There is no mention of Holbech being an Anglican Bishop.

refinement: The Rev. William Arthur Holbech, who was born in 1850, was an Anglican Bishop in the first half of the 20th century. He had a successful career in South Africa serving as a mission priest, Archdeacon, Dean, and Bishop before his death in 1930.

answer: Bishop William Arthru Holbech led the Diocese of St Helena from 1905 until his death in 1930. During his tenure, he oversaw the Anglican community on the island.

text: "Arthru" is spelled incorrectly.

refinement: Bishop William Arthur Holbech led the Diocese of St Helena from 1905 until his death in 1930. During his tenure, he oversaw the Anglican community on the island.

text: There is no mention of Holbech's birth year.

refinement: Bishop William Arthur Holbech, born in 1850, led the Diocese of St Helena from 1905 until his death in 1930. During his tenure, he oversaw the Anglican community on the island.

text: There is no mention of South Africa.

refinement: Bishop William Arthur Holbech, born in 1850, emigrated to South Africa and served various positions. He led the Diocese of St Helena from 1905 until his death in 1930. During his tenure, he oversaw the Anglican community on the island.

text: There is no mention of Holbech being an Anglican Bishop specifically.

refinement: Anglican Bishop William Arthur Holbech, born in 1850, emigrated to South Africa and served various positions. He led the Diocese of St Helena he oversaw the Anglican community on the island from 1905 until his death in 1930.

answer: William Arthur Holbech served as Bishop of St Helena from 1905 until his death in 1930. He was an influential Church leader in the first half of the 20th century.

text: There is no mention of Holbech's birth year.

refinement: William Arthur Holbech, born in 1850, served as Bishop of St Helena from 1905 until his death in 1930. He was an influential Church leader in the first half of the 20th century.

text: There is no mention of Holbech's emigration to South Africa and the various positions he served.

refinement: William Arthur Holbech, born in 1850, emigrated to South Africa and served various positions. He served as Bishop of St Helena from 1905 until his death in 1930. He was an influential Church leader in the first half of the 20th century.

text: There is no mention of Holbech being influential in the text.

refinement: William Arthur Holbech, born in 1850, emigrated to South Africa and served various positions. He served as Bishop of St Helena from 1905 until his death in 1930.

text: There is no mention of Holbech being an Anglican Bishop.

refinement: William Arthur Holbech, born in 1850, was an Anglican Bishop who emigrated to South Africa and served various positions. He served as Bishop of St Helena from 1905 until his death in 1930.


text:
I stare down at my arm. It’s so pale and unblemished. I slowly lift up my razor blade. I can feel it’s cold anticipation, ready to tear my skin apart, which is exactly what it’s going to do. I drag it across my flesh in a long slow drag. I watch as the warm crimson spreads. My arm, my clothes, -nothing remains dry. Why do I do this to myself? I keep saying that I’m going to stop.
	Suddenly there is a knock at my door. I panic. I wrap a dirty cloth around my arm and run into the hotel closet. “Get out here right now you little bitch.” I can already tell who it is from their voice. My drug dealer. As I’m crouching in the closet I try to slow my breathing, but my heart jumps when the door is kicked in. There’s a tiny hole in the closet door, and I lean forward to put my eye to it. I can see he’s brought company. They’ve moved into another area of my hotel room, possibly the kitchen. I close my eyes as I strain to hear them, but by the time I open my eyes I’m too late. I feel a searing hot rod force its way into the back of my skull. I can’t stop screaming, and that attracts the rest of the men.
	I have no choice but to obey. I come out of the closet quietly while they tie me up.  I try to remain calm, but I falter as the boss begins to talk. “Guess what Sabrina? I woke up today and I found all my drugs and money gone. You’re the last person I’ve sold to in days. What did you do with them?
	I have no idea what he’s talking about. He’s probably high right now. But then I suddenly remember something. The razor blade on my bed. At the current moment they have me tied up, lying face down on the floor. I look up at him and use my most innocent voice. “I didn’t do it, but I know who did. But right now I’m a little uncomfortable. You can keep me tied up, but please let me lie down on the bed. “
	“Why should I care if you’re comfortable or not?”
“Because otherwise I’m not  going to say a thing.”
	“I guess I’ll just have to beat it outta ya.”
I smile a cocky grin. “You already poked out one of my eyes and I haven’t said anything yet.” I hear him curse under his breath as he throws me onto the bed.  Within seconds I find the razor blade and start to cut at the rope that imprisons me. I’m done quickly and he doesn’t even notice.
	“Quite stalling and tell me something already.”
“Oh, I’ll tell you something.”
	“what’s that?”
“you’re going to die.”
I throw my razor, quick and sleek, and watch as his blood spurts out. His goonies have seen enough, and bolt for the door.  They think they’re going to get away, but they’re not. I grab the two closest things on the end table next to my bed, a pen and a vase. I sprint out my door and quickly catch them in the parking garage. The first assailant makes the mistake of turning around to look at me, and I smash the vase into his face, sending a million shards of glass into his eyes, flesh, and even mouth. I grab a piece before it hits the ground and I kill him like I did his boss, by slicing his throat. This whole time his buddy has just been standing there, watching me kill him. Once his friend is done it’s only me and him, and he has my full attention. I take my pen and jab it into his right eye, just like the one that got damaged on my own face less than five minutes ago. I quickly pluck the pen back out and sink it into his heart, and let his body drop. I don’t care about the mess, let the staff clean it up.

title: Short story 1 (warning:bloddy/gore)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the changes in the narrator from the beginning to the end of this passage.

answer: The narrator starts off by saying that they do not know why they do what they do. They are in a hotel room with a drug dealer and his goons. The narrator hides in the closet and tries to stay calm. The narrator is tied up by the goons of the drug dealer and asks to lie down on the bed. The narrator cuts the rope and kills the drug dealer. The narrator kills the goons in the parking garage.

text: The highlighted portion should be replaced with the fact that the narrator is on the verge of committing suicide when the drug dealer bursts in and finds the narrator in the closet. The drug dealer then pokes one of the narrator's eyes out.

refinement: The narrator starts off in the middle of a suicide attempt. While this happens, a drug dealer and his goons bursts into the hotel room, and the narrator hides in the closet and tries to stay calm. The narrator's eye is poked out by the group. The narrator is tied up by the goons of the drug dealer and asks to lie down on the bed. The narrator cuts the rope and kills the drug dealer. The narrator kills the goons in the parking garage.

text: All of the killing happens exclusively

refinement: The narrator starts off in the middle of a suicide attempt. While this happens, a drug dealer and his goons bursts into the hotel room, and the narrator hides in the closet and tries to stay calm. The narrator's eye is poked out by the group. The narrator is tied up by the goons of the drug dealer and asks to lie down on the bed. The narrator cuts the rope and kills the drug dealer. The narrator kills the rest of the goons in the room and leaves.

answer:
At the beginning, the narrator is in despair, contemplating suicide and using drugs. She's also in a hotel room with her drug dealer, who is accusing her of stealing his drugs. The narrator is tied up and faces the possibility of being beaten. She seems to be in an abusive relationship with her drug dealer. She's also in danger of losing her eye, as the drug dealer has already poked at it.

At the end of the passage, the narrator is free and has killed her drug dealer. She's killed two of his goons, and she's ready to kill their boss. She's also not afraid to leave a mess for the hotel staff to clean up. From despair to freedom, the narrator has changed in a big way.

text: The highlighted sentences are either inaccurate, repetitive, or incoherent and should be removed.

refinement:
At the beginning, the narrator is in despair, contemplating suicide. She's also in a hotel room with her drug dealer, who is accusing her of stealing his drugs. The narrator is tied up and faces the possibility of being beaten. Her eye has been poked out by one of the men.

At the end of the passage, the narrator is free and has killed her drug dealer. She's killed two of his goons. She's also not afraid to leave a mess for the hotel staff to clean up. From despair to freedom, the narrator has changed in a big way.

text: The highlighted sentence is unnecessary and should be removed.

refinement:
At the beginning, the narrator is in despair, contemplating suicide. She's also in a hotel room with her drug dealer, who is accusing her of stealing his drugs. The narrator is tied up and faces the possibility of being beaten. Her eye has been poked out by one of the men.

At the end of the passage, the narrator is free and has killed her drug dealer. She's killed two of his goons. She's also not afraid to leave a mess for the hotel staff to clean up.

answer: She starts out thinking she wants to stop hurting herself, doing something to herself she says she will stop doing. She panics, and enters the hotel closet to hide from the drug dealer. The drug dealer arrives with others, who proceed to tie her up, stuff a rod in her skull, and give her an ultimatum. She caves and asks for a bed and something to cut the ropes with. She escapes, kills all of them and feels little remorse.

text: The highlighted portion is inaccurate. The narrator never says whether or not she wants to stop harming herself.

refinement: The narrator starts the story in the middle of a suicide attempt. She panics, and enters the hotel closet to hide from the drug dealer. The drug dealer arrives with others, who proceed to tie her up, stuff a rod in her skull, and give her an ultimatum. She caves and asks for a bed and something to cut the ropes with. She escapes, kills all of them and feels little remorse.

text: The response is missing information about the drug dealer coming into the room.

refinement: The narrator starts the story in the middle of a suicide attempt. She hears a door knock and realizes its a drug dealer. She panics, and enters the hotel closet to hide from the drug dealer. The drug dealer arrives with others, who proceed to tie her up, stuff a rod in her skull, and give her an ultimatum. She caves and asks for a bed and something to cut the ropes with. She escapes, kills all of them and feels little remorse.

text: This sentence is inaccurate and could be made clearly.

refinement: The narrator starts the story in the middle of a suicide attempt. She hears a door knock and realizes its a drug dealer. She panics, and enters the hotel closet to hide from the drug dealer. The drug dealer arrives with others, who proceed to tie her up, stuff a rod in her skull, and give her an ultimatum. She gets tied up, but manages to escape. She kills all of them and feels little remorse.

answer: The narrator starts off by saying that they do not know why they do what they do. They are in a hotel room with a drug dealer and his goons. The narrator hides in the closet and tries to stay calm. The narrator is tied up by the goons of the drug dealer and asks to lie down on the bed. The narrator cuts the rope and kills the drug dealer. The narrator kills the goons in the parking garage. The narrator starts off by saying that they do not know why they do what they do.

text: The highlighted portions are inaccurate.

refinement: At the beginning of the story, the narrator is in the middle of committing suicide. A drug dealer and his goons burst into the room. The narrator hides in the closet and tries to stay calm. The narrator is tied up by the goons of the drug dealer and asks to lie down on the bed. The narrator cuts the rope and kills the drug dealer. The narrator kills the goons in the parking garage. The narrator starts off by saying that they do not know why they do what they do.

text: The narrator does not kill anyone in a parking garage. She kills them all in the hotel room.

refinement: At the beginning of the story, the narrator is in the middle of committing suicide. A drug dealer and his goons burst into the room. The narrator hides in the closet and tries to stay calm. The narrator is tied up by the goons of the drug dealer and asks to lie down on the bed. The narrator cuts the rope and kills the drug dealer. She then proceeds to kill the rest of the goons. The narrator starts off by saying that they do not know why they do what they do.

text: The highlighted sentence is unnecessary.

refinement: At the beginning of the story, the narrator is in the middle of committing suicide. A drug dealer and his goons burst into the room. The narrator hides in the closet and tries to stay calm. The narrator is tied up by the goons of the drug dealer and asks to lie down on the bed. The narrator cuts the rope and kills the drug dealer. She then proceeds to kill the rest of the goons.

answer:
When the story starts, the narrator is still crying and ashamed of what they have been doing to themselves. There is some further distance between the person now and who they used to be. When the drug runners show up, the narrator's shame switches to anger that someone entered their space uninvited.
The narrator had no qualms about protecting themselves by killing the people who were rude enough to invade their home and threaten them. Most terrifying of all was how the narrator had lost all concern for the mess surrounding their deeds.

text: There is no indication that any of the information presented in the highlighted portion is true. It also does not name the act that the narrator is committing, which is suicide.

refinement: When the story starts, the narrator is in the midst of committing suicide. When the drug runners show up, the narrator's shame switches to anger that someone entered their space uninvited. The narrator had no qualms about protecting themselves by killing the people who were rude enough to invade their home and threaten them. Most terrifying of all was how the narrator had lost all concern for the mess surrounding their deeds.

answer:
When the story starts, the narrator is still crying and ashamed of what they have been doing to themselves. Already there is some emotional distance between the person the narrator is now and who they used to be. When the drug runners show up, the narrator's shame switches to anger that someone entered their space uninvited.
The narrator had no qualms about protecting themselves by killing the people who were rude enough to invade their home and threaten them. Most terrifying of all was how the narrator had lost all concern for the mess surrounding their deeds.

text: Shame is not mentioned, and the response should include that the narrator is in the middle of committing suicide.

refinement:
When the story starts, the narrator is in the middle of committing suicide. When the drug runners show up, the narrator's shame switches to anger that someone entered their space uninvited.
The narrator had no qualms about protecting themselves by killing the people who were rude enough to invade their home and threaten them. Most terrifying of all was how the narrator had lost all concern for the mess surrounding their deeds.

text: The highlighted sentence is not accurate or stated in the passage.

refinement:
When the story starts, the narrator is in the middle of committing suicide. When the drug runners show up, the narrator's shame switches to anger that someone entered their space uninvited.
The narrator had no qualms about protecting themselves by killing the people who were rude enough to invade their home and threaten them.

answer:
At the beginning, the narrator is in despair, contemplating suicide and using drugs. She's also in a hotel room with her drug dealer, who is accusing her of stealing his drugs. The narrator is tied up and faces the possibility of being beaten. She seems to be in an abusive relationship with her drug dealer. She's also in danger of losing her eye, as the drug dealer has already poked at it.

At the end of the passage, the narrator is free and has killed her drug dealer. She's killed two of his goons, and she's ready to kill their boss. She's also not afraid to leave a mess for the hotel staff to clean up.

text: Same as response 2

refinement:
At the beginning, the narrator is in despair, contemplating suicide. She's also in a hotel room with her drug dealer, who is accusing her of stealing his drugs. The narrator is tied up and faces the possibility of being beaten. Her eye has been poked out by one of the men.

At the end of the passage, the narrator is free and has killed her drug dealer. She's killed two of his goons. She's also not afraid to leave a mess for the hotel staff to clean up.
At the end of the passage, the narrator is free and has killed her drug dealer. She's killed two of his goons, and she's ready to kill their boss. She's also not afraid to leave a mess for the hotel staff to clean up.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what Sabrina's likely job entails.

answer: Sabrina is a drug dealer. She sells drugs to the men who break into her hotel room. She also uses a razor blade to cut herself. She is likely involved in some sort of criminal activity.

text: The question cannot be answered by the passage, as the narrator does not state explicitly what she does.

refinement: Sabrina is involved with some sort of criminal activity, but it is unclear exactly what.

answer: No answer

text: The question can be answered, just not completely. It is clear that Sabrina is involved with some sort of criminal activity.

refinement: Sabrina is involved with some sort of criminal activity, but it is unclear exactly what.

answer: Sabrina is a drug dealer.

text: It is unclear exactly what Sabrina does.

refinement: Sabrina is involved with some sort of criminal activity, but it is unclear exactly what.

answer: No answer

text: The question can be answered to a certain degree.

refinement: Sabrina is involved with some sort of criminal activity, but it is unclear exactly what.

answer: Sabrina is a drug dealer. She sells drugs to the men who break into her hotel room. She also uses a razor blade to cut herself.

text: The passage is not clear about what exactly Sabrina does.

refinement: Sabrina is involved with some sort of criminal activity, but it is unclear exactly what.

answer: Sabrina's likely works as a drug dealer. Most likely her job concerns selling drugs at night.

text: It is unclear what Sabrina does.

refinement: Sabrina is involved with some sort of criminal activity, but it is unclear exactly what.


text:
_ENIELKENIE_ is a genus of East Asian araneomorph spiders in the family Anapidae, containing the single species, _ENIELKENIE ACAROIDES_. It was first described by H. Ono, Y. H. Chang & I. M. Tso in 2007,[1] and has only been found in Taiwan.[2]

[1]

[2]

title: Enielkenie

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What type of species is Enielkenie?

answer: It is an Asian araneomorph spider.

answer: Enielkenie is an araneomorph spider species.

answer: Araneomorph spiders

answer: An araneomorph spider.

answer: Enielkenie is an East Asian araneomorph spider species.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe the physical appearance of Enielkenie.

answer: Enielkenie is an East Asian araneomorph spider known to exist in Taiwan. It was first described in 2007 and is currently the only member of its genus. Its physical appearance has not been formally described.

answer: That information can't be found.

answer: The article does not describe the physical appearance.

answer: Enielkenie is an East Asian araneomorph spider that has only been found in Taiwan. Little is known about the appearance of this species; however, it is probably similar in appearance to other species within the Anapidae family.

answer: That information can't be found.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where can Enielkenie be found?

answer: Enielkenie can be found in Taiwan.

answer: In Taiwan.

answer: Enielkenie can be found only in Taiwan.

answer: Taiwan

answer: Enielkenie can be found in Taiwan.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was Enielkenie first described?

answer: 2007

answer: 2007

answer: Enielkenie was first described by H. Ono, Y. H. Chang & I. M. Tso in 2007.

answer: 2007.

answer: Enielkenie was first described by H. Ono, Y. H. Chang & I. M. Tso in 2007.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Enielkenie is a genus of Araneomorph spiders in the family Anapidae.

answer: Enielkenie Acaroides is a one species genus of East Asian araneomorph spiders first described in 2007.

answer: The genus Enielkenie has been identified in Taiwan. It consists of one species, Enielkenie Acaroides. The genus was first described in 2007 by H. Ono, Y. H. Chang, and I. M. Tso.

answer: Enielkenie is a genus of araneomorph spiders that has only been found in Taiwan.

answer: The genus Enielkenie was first described by Ono, Chang, and Tso in 2007 and is found only in Taiwan. The single species in this genus, Enielkenie acaroides, is an araneomorph spider in the family Anapidae.