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[Feb 19, 2014; Minneapolis, MN, USA; Indiana Pacers guard Lance Stephenson (1) against the Minnesota Timberwolves at Target Center. The Timberwolves defeated the Pacers 104-91. Mandatory Credit: Brace Hemmelgarn-USA TODAY Sports]
Feb 19, 2014; Minneapolis, MN, USA; Indiana Pacers guard Lance Stephenson (1) against the Minnesota Timberwolves at Target Center. The Timberwolves defeated the Pacers 104-91. Mandatory Credit: Brace Hemmelgarn-USA TODAY Sports

The Charlotte Hornets came into the offseason looking to make a splash in free agency, but they weren’t able to get one of the top players on the market. They made a maximum contract offer to Utah Jazz restricted free agent GORDON HAYWARD, but the Jazz decided to match the offer and bring him back.

Finally, they were able to land the prize that they were rumored to want all offseason long. Charlotte signed LANCE STEPHENSON to a three-year, $27 million deal and couldn’t be more excited about the future with him as one of their leaders.

Stephenson had a career season with the Indiana Pacers last season, but hurt himself due to the on-court antics that he showed in the Eastern Conference Finals against the Miami Heat. He ended up averaging 13.8 points, 7.2 rebounds, and 4.6 assists per game, and he improved quite a bit on the defensive end of the court as well.

That being said, there are still quite a few areas where he’ll need to improve to reach his full potential.

Despite all of the positives in his game that will be talked about later, his main issues are mental. He is extremely fast in the open court and can create a fast break out of nothing, but those fast breaks can end up resulting in turnovers.

The Hornets are going to offer him an even more up-tempo offensive scheme, and that could either help him in a major way or do the exact opposite.

All of that being said, there are so many positives about his game that fit perfectly well with what the Hornets are looking to do. Stephenson’s scoring ability is on the rise, and he is a much better all-around scorer than GERALD HENDERSON was last season.

One of the biggest issues for Charlotte against the Heat in the playoffs last season was their lack of a third scorer to go along with KEMBA WALKER and AL JEFFERSON.

His offensive potential is through the roof, and he took a major step forward in every category last season. He improved his 3-point shooting percentage from 33 percent to 35.2 percent, and also improved his overall field goal percentage from 46 percent to 49.1 percent.

There is no denying the numbers that he put up, and he has been in the gym working out hard all offseason long.

Not only was his scoring ability much improved last season, he also improved as a playmaker. He led the NBA in triple-doubles with five, and he was one of the most consistent rebounders as a guard.

The Hornets already have a great playmaker in Walker, but the addition of Stephenson will allow him to focus on his offensive ability even more than he has been able to throughout his career.

There are some concerns surrounding Stephenson heading to Charlotte, especially because of the reputation that he has gotten as a ball hog. ROY HIBBERT said that there were “selfish players” on the team last year,and reports have come out stating that he was talking specifically about Stephenson.

He will have to deal with Walker and Jefferson being the No. 1 and 2 scoring options on the floor, and being a playmaker for them before he looks to score himself.

It’s very hard to grade this signing because of how unpredictable Stephenson is, but he does seem to be exactly what the doctor ordered for the Hornets. Charlotte hasn’t necessarily been a team that fans look at and think of as contenders in recent years, and this move certainly helps them take a step in that direction.

The Hornets may not be a championship contender this season, but they definitely have a chance of competing and surprising some people in the playoffs.

Overall, this move is going to put the Hornets back on the map in the Eastern Conference. They are going to have to contend with the Cleveland Cavaliers, Chicago Bulls, and Indiana Pacers, but outside of those three teams the entire conference is up for grabs.

Stephenson should prove to be a big pick up, and the fans in Charlotte are going to love the playmaking ability to he brings to the court.

LANCE STEPHENSON SIGNING GRADE: A-

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who did the Charlotte Hornets fail to get to play for them this season (as of this article's publication)?

answer: The Charlotte Hornets failed to get Gordon Hayward of the Utah Jazz.

answer: The Charlotte Hornets failed to bring Gordon Hayward back from the Utah Jazz.

answer: Gordon Hayward

text: It is omitted that he belongs to the Utah Jazz.

answer: Gordon Hayward.

text: It is omitted that he belongs to the Utah Jazz.

answer: Gordon Hayward

text: It is omitted that he belongs to the Utah Jazz.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who did Charlotte sign instead of Hayward?

answer: Lance Stephenson.

answer: They signed Lance Stephenson instead of Gordon Hayward.

answer: The Charlotte Hornets signed LANCE STEPHENSON instead of Gordon Hayward.

answer: They signed Stephenson instead of Hayward.

text: Stephenson's full name isn't mentioned.

refinement: They signed Lance Stephenson instead of Hayward.

answer: The Hornets signed LANCE STEPHENSON instead of Gordon Hayward.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who did Stephenson play with before?

answer: He played for the Indiana Pacers.

answer: He played with the Indiana Pacers before.

answer: Lance Stephenson played with the Indiana Pacers prior to signing with the Charlotte Hornets.

answer: The Pacers-a team in the Eastern Conference.

text: It is incorrectly stated that he played for Pacers-a team.

answer: The Indiana Pacers.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What will the addition of Stephenson allow star player Kemba Walker to do?

answer: The addition of Stephenson will allow Kemba Walker to focus on his offensive ability even more than he had been able to in the past.

answer: Stephenson will allow Walker to shift focus to their offensive game even more than they have so far in their careers.

answer: Focus on his offensive ability.

answer: With Stephenson adding playmaking ability to the lineup, Walker will be able to focus more on his offensive ability.

answer: Stephenson will be a great playmaker and give Walker the chance to focus on his offensive ability.

question: Write a ~6 sentence summary.

answer: The Charlotte Hornets turned to free agency to find a player who could help improve the team, and they signed Lance Stephenson to a three-year contract. Stephenson had a breakout season last year and showed great improvements on both offense and defense. However, there are concerns about the potential impact of his reputation as a ball hog. Regardless, Stephenson could be a big step in making the Hornets contenders in the Eastern Conference.

answer: Gordion Hayward was a restricted free agent, being courted by the Charlotte Hornets to join them on a max contract. However, the Utah Jazz wanted to keep him for their team. Soon enough, Charlotte was able to sign Lance Stephenson for a three-year, $27 million deal. Lance (Stephenson) had a career-best season record for the Indiana Pacers' averaging 13.8 points per game, 7.2 rebounds per game, and 4.6 assists per game. Stephenson's main criticism was mental unpredictability. However, the addition of Stephenson will enable the Charlotte Hornets' playmaker to focus on his offense more than before. At this time, Charlotte hasn't been seen as a championship contender in recent years.

text: Incorrectly spelled Gordon Hayward.

refinement: Gordon Hayward was a restricted free agent, being courted by the Charlotte Hornets to join them on a max contract. However, the Utah Jazz wanted to keep him for their team. Soon enough, Charlotte was able to sign Lance Stephenson for a three-year, $27 million deal. Lance (Stephenson) had a career-best season record for the Indiana Pacers' averaging 13.8 points per game, 7.2 rebounds per game, and 4.6 assists per game. Stephenson's main criticism was mental unpredictability. However, the addition of Stephenson will enable the Charlotte Hornets' playmaker to focus on his offense more than before. At this time, Charlotte hasn't been seen as a championship contender in recent years.

text: It should be rewritten that Charlotte's playmaker can focus on his offensive ability.

refinement: Gordon Hayward was a restricted free agent, being courted by the Charlotte Hornets to join them on a max contract. However, the Utah Jazz wanted to keep him for their team. Soon enough, Charlotte was able to sign Lance Stephenson for a three-year, $27 million deal. Lance (Stephenson) had a career-best season record for the Indiana Pacers' averaging 13.8 points per game, 7.2 rebounds per game, and 4.6 assists per game. Stephenson's main criticism was mental unpredictability. However, the addition of Stephenson will enable the Charlotte Hornets' playmaker to focus on his offensive ability more than before. At this time, Charlotte hasn't been seen as a championship contender in recent years.

answer: The Charlotte Hornets were looking to make a splash in free agency and they achieved their goal by signing Indiana Pacers guard Lance Stephenson to a three-year deal worth $27 million. Stephenson had a career season last year with 13.8 points, 7.2 rebounds, and 4.6 assists per game. However, there are some concerns about his game because of some issues with mental toughness. Nevertheless, Stephenson seems to be exactly what the Hornets needed and they will look to contend in the Eastern Conference with Stephenson on the team.

answer: The Charlotte Hornets are expected to contend in the Eastern Conference. They are yet to sign a top free agent. The guys, Gordo Haywood and Lance Stephenson, both got offered a three-year 2870000 USD contract. Stephenson visited the Hornet's sport complex and watched their practice, checked out the dance team, and loved the team's dance songs. He'd rather play for the Charlotte Hornets than the Indiana Pacers. He fits into the team because he also feels comfortable playing in the up-tempo offense.

text: It is incorrectly stated that both the players were offered the contract and that the contract was for 2870000 USD.

refinement: The Charlotte Hornets are expected to contend in the Eastern Conference. They are yet to sign a top free agent. Lance Stephenson was offered a three-year 27 million USD contract. Stephenson visited the Hornet's sport complex and watched their practice, checked out the dance team, and loved the team's dance songs. He'd rather play for the Charlotte Hornets than the Indiana Pacers. He fits into the team because he also feels comfortable playing in the up-tempo offense.

text: There is no evidence of Stephenson visiting the Hornet's complex.

refinement: The Charlotte Hornets are expected to contend in the Eastern Conference. They are yet to sign a top free agent. Lance Stephenson was offered a three-year 27 million USD contract. He'd rather play for the Charlotte Hornets than the Indiana Pacers. He fits into the team because he also feels comfortable playing in the up-tempo offense.

text: There is no evidence that Stephenson believes that he would rather play for the Hornets.

refinement: The Charlotte Hornets are expected to contend in the Eastern Conference. They are yet to sign a top free agent. Lance Stephenson was offered a three-year 27 million USD contract. He fits into the team because he also feels comfortable playing in the up-tempo offense.

text: It is omitted that there are some concerns about Stephenson's game but he would still be a good addition to the team.

refinement: The Charlotte Hornets are expected to contend in the Eastern Conference. They are yet to sign a top free agent. Lance Stephenson was offered a three-year 27 million USD contract. There are some concerns about Stephenson's game due to some issues with mental toughness. But he still seems to be exactly what the Hornets were looking for. Stephenson fits into the team because he also feels comfortable playing in the up-tempo offense.

answer: After they were unable to secure Gordon Hayward of the Utah Jazz, the Charlotte Hornets signed Lance Stephenson. The Hornets have long faced the issue of having a top scorer to join the ranks of their Al Jefferson and Kemba Walker. Stephenson is an adept basketball player in his own right, known for being extremely fast and has a lot of potential to be a high scorer. He's signed a three-year, $27 million dollar contract, and Charlotte has expressed their excitement at having him. Furthermore, he's been training at the gym all offseason long. One potential area for concern is that Stephenson has been known to be somewhat of a ball-hog, so he might face some contention with his teammates Walker and Jefferson in their respective number one and number two star player positions.


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We stood at the gate, Alysha and I. I had an odd feeling in my stomach. Perhaps it was the eerie gargoyles decorating the windows, or the thick iron bars that made up the fence. Alysha, beside me, was shaking with excitement. I was also shaking, but from fear. I shivered. There was a ringing in my ears, but through that I could hear someone speaking. My eyes focused and I saw the ticket clerk. "Will you be going in or not? I don't have time for you to stand there not doing anything," he said indignantly. Before I could shake my head, Alysha nodded excitedly and gave him the money. He took it and stamped our hands. The stamp, I saw, was a clown. "Have a nice time, ladies," the clerk said, smiling creepily. There was something odd about him... His eyes looked empty of emotion. They looked *black.* Before I could dwell any longer on his eyes, Alysha grabbed my hand and dragged me into the maze. "Alysha, I really don't want to do this," I started saying, a slight tremble in my voice. She turned around, grabbing my other hand as well. "Aw, Lexie, are you scared? Don't worry, I'll protect you. Especially since we have a little alone time now," she purred, biting her bottom lip and winking. I inhaled sharply. *So that's why she wanted me to come. Not that I mind.* I had let her pull me farther into the maze, until we reached a dead end. "Oh no, Lexie, we're lost and I'm cold... Hold me," she growled playfully, pulling me closer. I nuzzled her cheek but did nothing else. "Alysha, I don't want to do anything here... I feel like we're being watched," I said in a low voice. She giggled, not realizing my fear. She stepped back, her back pushing into the hedge. "You're so paranoid, hun. Chill out and let's take advantage of this," she moaned quietly, pulling my face down to hers. Just as our lips had touched she had suddenly jumped, every muscle tightening. I pulled back to see a needle in her neck. "W-What? Alysha are you alright? Talk to me!" I had yelled, trying to pull her away from the hedge. But she wouldn't budge. In fact, she had begun being pulled back INTO the hedge. Her head bobbed down, her chin resting on her chest. I wrapped my arms around her, trying to pull her back. "No! Alysha, fight it, please," I cried, tugging on her arms. "I need you to fi-" I was cut off by a pair of arms wrapping around me, pulling me back into the opposite hedge. "No! Alysha!" I screamed as she was completely engulfed by the hedge. I looked back over my shoulder, to try and see who was grabbing me... But nobody was there. All I could see was what I thought were... *Branches?* I was being kidnapped by the HEDGE? I closed my eyes, giving up the fight. There was no way I'd win. As I felt my entire body be swallowed, I blacked out.

I am writing this in my cell. My captors have faked my death, same with all of the other prisoners. We have become a part of a... Machine. Some of us are assigned gate duty, like the cold man I saw before it all happened. Most of us, though, are assigned collection duty. We are in charge of doing the same thing others did to us. Kidnapping people. It's been 238 days. I haven't seen Alysha. Why they put a needle in her and not me, I will not know. I have been forgotten. I'm just a slave now.

title: Maze.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Does the story tell an effective narrative?

answer: It's possible, athough this story is set forth in a series of first-person snippets. This kind of storytelling makes it too easy to get lost. The story has repetition and the mood isn't very consistent. A series of short sentences and missing the full picture chunks of the story leave the reader hanging.

text: "athough" - change the spelling to "although"

refinement: It's possible, although this story is set forth in a series of first-person snippets. This kind of storytelling makes it too easy to get lost. The story has repetition and the mood isn't very consistent. A series of short sentences and missing the full picture chunks of the story leave the reader hanging.

text: "This kind of storytelling makes it too easy to get lost." - not sure if this is a good or bad thing because readers actually want to get lost in a story. If that's the case, then the narrative is effective. However, this contradicts the earlier tone of the response (skeptical). It's best if this part were removed.

refinement: It's possible, although this story is set forth in a series of first-person snippets. The story has repetition and the mood isn't very consistent. A series of short sentences and missing the full picture chunks of the story leave the reader hanging.

text: "The story has repetition and the mood isn't very consistent." - this is inaccurate because there is no evidence of repetition other than both Lexie and Alysha were "taken" by the hedges. The mood is also consistent (fear, dread, excitement, paranoia) from start to finish.

refinement: It's possible, although this story is set forth in a series of first-person snippets. The mood in the story, namely fear, dread, paranoia, and excitement, are pretty consistent. A series of short sentences and missing the full picture chunks of the story leave the reader hanging.

text: "A series of short sentences and missing the full picture chunks of the story leave the reader hanging." - this is inaccurate because this is a short story and the author left the readers hanging on purpose.

refinement: It's possible, although this story is set forth in a series of first-person snippets. The mood in the story, namely fear, dread, paranoia, and excitement, are pretty consistent. The short story leaves the reader hanging on purpose.

answer: Yes, the story is effective at telling a narrative. The piece establishes an eerie setting through descriptions of the fence and iron bars, as well as through depictions of the ticket clerk and Alysha's excitement. The story then builds suspense by having Alysha and the protagonist enter the maze, and their fear is realized when Alysha is kidnapped by the hedge. The narrative is effective in creating tension in the reader and keeping the story moving forward.

answer: Though the hook in the story is the mysterious maze, and we have a strong beginning due to the relationship between Alysha and Lexie, the story fails to make the most of itself. The end of the story feels as though it is setting something up because of the mysterious prison Lexie ends up in, but doesn't take the narrative further than this.

text: "The end of the story feels as though it is setting something up because of the mysterious prison Lexie ends up in, but doesn't take the narrative further than this." - this is inaccurate because the story was meant to be a cliffhanger.

refinement: Though the hook in the story is the mysterious maze, and we have a strong beginning due to the relationship between Alysha and Lexie, the story fails to make the most of itself. The end of the story feels as though it is setting something up because of the mysterious prison Lexie ends up in. There may be something more, like a second part, but the story was meant to be a cliffhanger.

answer: Yes, the story is effective because it builds suspense and creates interest. The writer effectively evokes fear and likens the environment of the maze to being like a trap or prison.

text: Change "being" to "be"

refinement: Yes, the story is effective because it builds suspense and creates interest. The writer effectively evokes fear and likens the environment of the maze to be like a trap or prison.

text: The maze is like a trap. The prison part comes after.

refinement: Yes, the story is effective because it builds suspense and creates interest. The writer effectively evokes fear and likens the environment of the maze to be like a trap and a prison after the people are kidnapped and made into slaves.

answer: I don't know, I don't feel that it needs one to a degree that would leave a mark.

text: The response doesn't make sense or answer the question.

refinement: Yes, it appears the story tells an effective narrative. The events are connected and in order. There is also a clear beginning, middle, and end, even though the story ends in an obvious cliffhanger. Lexie and Alysha stood at the gate of a maze (in a circus, perhaps). Lexie feels fear and dread, while Alysha felt excitement. The story builds from there - the creepy ticket guy, entering the maze, the needle in Alysha's neck, and their eventual kidnapping. The story ends with Lexie in a prison of some sort, as a slave to unknown captors.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How is the relationship between Lexie and Alysha set up?

answer: The relationship between Lexie and Alysha is adversarial. Alysha manipulated Lexie into entering the maze where they were both promptly kidnapped by the hedge. Alysha was granted preferential treatment, while Lexie has since been marginalized and forgotten.

text: "The relationship between Lexie and Alysha is adversarial." - this is incorrect. Adversarial is too strong a word to use. They are lovers or partners, but opposites. Their personalities are different, as Lexie is fearful and submissive, while Alysha is adventurous and manipulative.

refinement: Lexie and Alysha are set up as opposites when it comes to personalities. Lexie is submissive and fearful, while Alysha is manipulative and adventurous. Alysha manipulated Lexie into entering the maze where they were both promptly kidnapped by the hedge. Alysha was granted preferential treatment, while Lexie has since been marginalized and forgotten.

text: "Alysha manipulated Lexie into entering the maze" - This is incomplete. For better context, add the missing part about Alysha only wanting alone time with Lexie inside the maze.

refinement: Lexie and Alysha are set up as opposites when it comes to personalities. Lexie is submissive and fearful, while Alysha is manipulative and adventurous. Alysha manipulated Lexie into entering the maze with the sole intention of getting some intimate alone time with her, but they were both promptly kidnapped by the hedge. Alysha was granted preferential treatment, while Lexie has since been marginalized and forgotten.

text: "Alysha was granted preferential treatment" - this is inaccurate as there was no mention of what happened to Alysha.

refinement: Lexie and Alysha are set up as opposites when it comes to personalities. Lexie is submissive and fearful, while Alysha is manipulative and adventurous. Alysha manipulated Lexie into entering the maze with the sole intention of getting some intimate alone time with her, but they were both promptly kidnapped by the hedge. Lexie has since been marginalized and forgotten. She also doesn't know what happened to Alysha.

answer: It's originally quoted as "Alysha was shaking with excitement. I was also shaking, but from fear", to which we must interpret that Alysha is instigating Lexie's fear, but the two are still playing and grabbing hands in the maze. Alysha later says to Lexie, "Come creepily" suggesting that the two are now into the same fantasy space. It seems as if Lexie has an interest in Alysha and did want to come to the maze before. Lexie also tells us that Alysha doesn't realise her fear.

text: "It's originally quoted as "Alysha was shaking with excitement. I was also shaking, but from fear", to which we must interpret that Alysha is instigating Lexie's fear" - this is inaccurate. Alysha wasn't instigating anything because it appears Lexie is just naturally paranoid and fearful of everything.

refinement: Lexie is fearful, submissive, and paranoid, while Alysha is adventurous and manipulative - complete opposites. But the two are still playing and grabbing hands in the maze. Alysha later says to Lexie, "Come creepily" suggesting that the two are now into the same fantasy space. It seems as if Lexie has an interest in Alysha and did want to come to the maze before. Lexie also tells us that Alysha doesn't realise her fear.

text: "But the two are still playing and grabbing hands in the maze." -  this is inaccurate and never happened. Only Alysha was being playful. They may have been holding hands, but they weren't "grabbing hands" in the maze. This can be removed.

refinement: Lexie is fearful, submissive, and paranoid, while Alysha is adventurous and manipulative - complete opposites. Alysha later says to Lexie, "Come creepily" suggesting that the two are now into the same fantasy space. It seems as if Lexie has an interest in Alysha and did want to come to the maze before. Lexie also tells us that Alysha doesn't realise her fear.

text: "Alysha later says to Lexie, "Come creepily" suggesting that the two are now into the same fantasy space." - this never happened in the story and should be deleted.

refinement: Lexie is fearful, submissive, and paranoid, while Alysha is adventurous and manipulative - complete opposites. It seems as if Lexie has an interest in Alysha and did want to come to the maze before. Lexie also tells us that Alysha doesn't realise her fear.

text: "It seems as if Lexie has an interest in Alysha and did want to come to the maze before." - this is inaccurate because they are already a couple and Lexie really didn't want to come to the maze at all. It must be removed.

refinement: Lexie is fearful, submissive, and paranoid, while Alysha is adventurous and manipulative - complete opposites. Lexie also tells us that Alysha doesn't realise her fear.

text: "Lexie also tells us that Alysha doesn't realise her fear." extraneous information that can be removed.

refinement: Lexie is fearful, submissive, and paranoid, while Alysha is adventurous and manipulative - complete opposites.

text: "Lexie is fearful, submissive, and paranoid, while Alysha is adventurous and manipulative - complete opposites." - needs more details.

refinement: Lexie is fearful, submissive, and paranoid, while Alysha is adventurous and manipulative - complete opposites. Lexie was scared about going into the maze, but Alysha doesn't recognize Lexie's fear. Alysha manipulates Lexie into going into the maze because she wants some intimate alone time, and Lexie has no choice but to follow.

answer: Alysha is clearly an adventurous and excitable individual whereas Lexie is afraid consistently throughout the story. When Alysha kisses her, it's the only time Lexie relaxes for a moment. Alysha also seems to be supportive and good for Lexie.

text: "When Alysha kisses her, it's the only time Lexie relaxes for a moment. Alysha also seems to be supportive and good for Lexie." - this is inaccurate as it was never mentioned in the story.

refinement: Alysha is clearly an adventurous and excitable individual whereas Lexie is afraid consistently throughout the story.

answer: Lexie is scared of entering the maze and is initially hesitant to do so. Alysha insists nevertheless and manages to pull Lexie in. As they explore the maze, Alysha is abruptly injected with a needle by some unseen captor. Lexie tries and fails to rescue her, and she is subsequently kidnapped as well. The relationship between Lexie and Alysha is one of fear and vulnerability on Lexie's part, but manipulative and opportunistic on Alysha's.

answer: It appears to be one of a romantic partner.


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XINQI DONG () is a doctor of medicine in geriatric medicine and internal medicine, the inaugural Henry Rutgers Distinguished Professor of Population Health Sciences[1] at Rutgers University, and director of the Institute for Health, Health Care Policy and Aging Research[2].[3][4][5]

As an expert on population health and aging issues, Dong has appeared in multiple media outlets, including _The New York Times_,[6] _The Wall Street Journal,[7] The Washington Post,_[8] _Politico,_[9]_The Huffington Post_,[10] _Reuters_,[11] KFGO,[12] _Science Daily_,[13] _International Business Times_,[14] _CBS Chicago_,[15] _Fox News_,[16] _NBC News_,[17] _New America Media_,[18] _DNA info_,[19] and many others.

He is currently leading the design of the New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study, which will be the largest investigation of its kind to date in New Jersey.[20] The data collection phase is expected to begin in 2020 and will involve approximately 10,000 participants from broad sections of the population, with additional targeting of diverse immigrant groups. The study will investigate factors that influence population health and potential solutions to advance health equity in New Jersey and across the country.

Dong is the director of the Asian Resource Centers for Minority Aging Research (RCMAR), the only center in the national RCMAR program focused on researching trauma and resilience in older Asian American populations. The mission of the program is to improve the health of Asian American older adults and support work by diverse scientists focused on this population.

Dong also has led several epidemiological studies, investigating more than 4,000 Chinese adults, in order to better understand the health and well-being of Chinese families in the United States.[21][22][23]

Recent studies

New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study

The New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study, currently in a one-year design phase, aims to improve the understanding of drivers of population health and health equity in the state. The study will collect granular data over time on approximately 10,000 New Jersey residents representing a broad section of the population, with additional focus on diverse immigrant groups. The first round of data collection is expected to begin in late 2020.

The PINE Study

THE PINE STUDY (_Population Study of ChINese Elderly in Chicago_) is a longitudinal study of Chinese older adults who are more than 60 of age living in the Chicago area. The goal is to find out the factors that impact the health and well-being of this population.[24]

The PIETY Study

THE PIETY STUDY is cross-sectional study investigating Chinese adult children (aged 21 or above) of the participants from the PINE study. The objectives of the PIETY Study is to better understand the factors that influence the health of Chinese elderly from the perspectives of the adult children.[25]

Cognitive Impairment Caregiving Study

Cognitive Impairment Caregiving Study aims to explore the unique cultural determinants of caregiving experience of adult children whose parent/parent-in-law has memory loss issues, and identify the barriers and challenges those adult children are facing.[26]

Promoting Social and Emotional Well-Being in the Chinese Community

Promoting Social and Emotional Well-Being in the Chinese Community program aims to lower rates of mental distress and promote mental well-being of U.S. Chinese adults through the assistance of community health workers (CHWs). By using empowering education, referral to treatment, care coordination, and behavioral activation, CHWs help the participant understand and cope with their emotions, and make concrete steps toward improving their mental health and overall well-being.[27]

Awards

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  2018
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  Elected Member, American Society of Clinical Investigation[28]

  Robert Wood Johnson Foundation Award for Health Equity[29]

  2017

  M. Powell Lawton Award, Gerontological Society of America[30]

  Eward Busse Award, International Congress of Gerontology and Geriatrics[31]

  2015

  Rosalie S. Wolf Memorial Award, National Adult Protective Services Association[32]

  Joseph T. Freeman Award, Gerontological Society of America[33]

  APA Award for Advancing Minority Mental Health, American Psychiatric Foundation[34]

  2014

  APHA National Award for Excellence, American Public Health Association[35] Outstanding Scientific Achievement for Clinical Investigation Award, American Geriatrics Society[36]

  2013 |-twigssales

  Before 2012

  2011 Maxwell A. Pollack Award for Productive Aging, Gerontological Society of America[38] 2010 Physician Advocacy Merit Award, Institute of Medicine as Profession[39]

  2009 Central Society for Clinical Research Award[40]

  2008 Paul B. Beeson Physician Faculty Award in Aging[41]

  2006 Nobuo Maeda International Aging and Public Health Research Award, American Public Health Association[42]
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Current grants

-   New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study: 76850, Robert Wood Johnson Foundation
-   New Jersey Minority Aging Collaborative: R24AG063729[43]
-   Asian Resource Centers for Minority Aging Research (RCMAR): P30AG059304[44]
-   National Institute on Nursing Research: R01NR 014846_A1
-   National Institute of Aging/NINR/NIMH: R01AG042318
-   National Institute of Minority Health and Health Disparity: R01MD006173
-   National Cancer Institute: R01CA163830, P20CA165592
-   National Institute on Mental Health: R34 MH 100393A1, R34 MH 100443A1
-   Administration on Aging/ACL: 09EJIG0005-01-00:
-   China Beijing Science and Technology
-   National Opinion Research Center (NORC)

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title: XinQi Dong

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When will the New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study begin data collection?

answer: Late 2020

answer: The first round of data collection is expected to begin in late 2020.

answer: The New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study is expected to begin data collection in late 2020.

answer: The New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study will begin data collection in 2020.

answer: The data collection phase of the New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study is expected to begin in 2020.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How many participants will the the New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study have?

answer: The New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study will involve approximately 10,000 participants.

answer: The New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study aims to recruit approximately 10,000 New Jersey residents.

answer: The study will have 10,000 participants from New Jersey

answer: The New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study will involve about 10,000 participants.

answer: Approximately 10,000 participants.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is the director of the Asian Resource Centers for Minority Aging Research?

answer: The director of the Asian Resource Centers for Minority Aging Research is XinQi Dong.

answer: Xinqi Dong is the director of the Asian Resource Centers for Minority Aging Research.

answer: XINQI DONG is the director of the Asian Resource Centers for Minority Aging Research.

answer: Xinqi Dong.

answer: XINQI DONG is the director of the Asian Resource Centers for Minority Aging Research.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What year did Xinqi Dong win the Joseph T. Freeman Award?

answer: 2015

answer: 2015

answer: Xinqi Dong won the Joseph T. Freeman Award in 2015.

answer: 2015.

answer: 2015

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: The article is about Xinqi Dong, a Doctor of Medicine who is also a professor at Rutgers University. The article talks about his work and his past awards and grants.

answer: The article is about XinQig Dong, who is a doctor who works at Rutgers University and has also had several degrees, currently known for his work in geriatric medicine research.

answer:
XinQi Dong is a doctor of medicine in geriatric medicine and internal medicine, the inaugural Henry Rutgers Distinguished Professor of Population Health Sciences, and director of the Institute for Health, Health Care Policy and Aging Research.

Dong is currently leading the design of the New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study, which will be the largest investigation of its kind to date in New Jersey. The research will investigate the factors that influence population health and potential solutions to address health equity in New Jersey and across the country.

Dong has received several awards for distinguished work in the field, including the Robert Wood Johnson Foundation Award for Health Equity and the M. Powell Lawton Award from the Gerontological Society of America.

text: This is just a copy and paste that exceeds the two sentence maximum.

refinement: XinQi Dong is a doctor of medicine in geriatric medicine and internal medicine, the inaugural Henry Rutgers Distinguished Professor of Population Health Sciences, and director of the Institute for Health, Health Care Policy and Aging Research.

answer: XINQI DONG ( ) is a doctor of medicine and geriatric expert who is currently leading the design of the New Jersey Population Health Cohort Study. The study aims to improve the understanding of drivers of population health and health equity in New Jersey. Dong has also received several prestigious awards for his work, including the Robert Wood Johnson Foundation Award for Health Equity.

answer: Xinqi Dong is leading a research effort into the factors that influence a population's health amongst other things. Xinqi Dong has done similar studies in the past, and has won many awards for his research.


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DHORUBA AL-MUJAHID BIN WAHAD (born RICHARD EARL MOORE;[1] 1944) is an American writer and activist, who is a former political prisoner, Black Panther Party leader, and co-founder of the Black Liberation Army. _Dhoruba_, in Swahili, means “the storm”.[2]

Early years

Richard Earl Moore was three years into a five-year sentence at Comstock Prison when he learned Malcolm X had been assassinated. Moore, who had a spotty disciplinary record at Comstock, felt the Nation of Islam was dogmatic and valued myrmidons rather than free thinkers, but he admired Malcolm X, who he felt “wasn't just a bow tie, a talking head. He was funny; he was witty; he was analytical.” Moore had been reading Malcolm X's teachings and speeches and had considered joining with Malcolm X's army after being released from prison, and was stunned by Malcolm X's public execution. Like many others, black and white alike,[3] Moore believed Malcolm X had been killed by a combination of enemies in the Nation of Islam and law enforcement, and Moore decided the best way to honor his hero's legacy was “to think like Malcolm X, and take his message and apply it to his daily reality.” Consequently, Moore converted to Islam, took the name Dhoruba al-Mujahid bin Wahad, and began reading political material, including both non-fiction (such as Edward Gibbon's _The History of the Decline and Fall of the Roman Empire_ and Karl Marx's _Das Kapital_) as well as historical fiction (such as Leon Uris's _Exodus_ and novels about Attila the Hun and Genghis Khan).[4]

The shooting

On May 19, 1971, Thomas Curry and Nicholas Binetti, two New York City Police Department officers who were guarding the home of Frank S. Hogan, the Manhattan district attorney, were fired upon in a drive-by shooting, with a machine gun.[5] The officers survived, but were seriously injured, sustaining shots to the head, neck, chest, and abdomen.

The shootings took place during a period of intense violence between black activist organizations and the New York City police department. Two days later, NYPD officers Waverly Jones and Joseph Piagentini were shot and killed outside a housing project in Harlem.[6][7]

Wahad was arrested and initially charged with robbing a South Bronx social club, and then was later charged with the attempted murders of Curry and Binetti.

Wahad's first trial ended in a hung jury; his second in a mistrial. Two years later, in 1973, his third trial resulted in a guilty verdict; he was sentenced to twenty-five years to life.[8]

Prison and release

Wahad spent a total of nineteen years in prison. While incarcerated, he learned about Congressional hearings that disclosed the existence of a covert F.B.I. operation known as COINTELPRO. In December 1975 he filed a lawsuit against the F.B.I. and the police department of the City of New York.

As a direct result of his lawsuit, over the next fifteen years the F.B.I. released more than 300,000 pages of documents regarding COINTELPRO. The COINTELPRO documents were the basis on which Wahad appealed his conviction, and on March 15, 1990, Judge Peter J. McQuillan of the New York Supreme Court in Manhattan reversed it, ruling that the prosecution had failed to disclose evidence that could have helped Mr. Wahad's defense.[9]

While Manhattan District Attorney Robert M. Morgenthau stated that he planned to appeal the ruling, and would obtain a retrial if his appeal failed, Wahad was freed and released without bail.

Morgenthau's attempt to appeal was rejected by the Appellate Division of the New York Supreme Court,[10] and on January 20, 1995, the Manhattan district attorney's office stated there would be no retrial, indicating that the current condition of the evidence would make this impossible.[11]

Lawsuits

In 1995, the F.B.I. settled with Wahad; the U.S. government paid him $400,000.[12]

On December 4, 2000, Dhoruba's suit against the New York Police Department, seeking $15 million in damages was scheduled to begin.[13] On December 8, 2000, the city of New York laid to rest a 25-year legal battle, and agreed to pay Wahad an additional $490,000 in damages.[14]

Aftermath

Wahad lived in Accra, Ghana, where he organized on Pan-Africanism and the prison system. Using the funds from his settlements for personal damages from the FBI and City of New York, he established the Campaign to Free Black and New African Political Prisoners (formerly the Campaign to Free Black Political Prisoners and Prisoners-of-War) and founded the Institute for the Development of Pan-African policy in Ghana.

He currently lives in New York City and continues his work.

Assault by “New” Black Panther Party

On August 19, 2015, Bin Wahad and an associate were assaulted by a faction of the New Black Panther Party. Bin Wahad had been attending a conference in Atlanta, Georgia held by the Nzinga faction of the “New” Panthers, where Bin Wahad confronted the group about their adoption of the Black Panther name and their rhetoric. The two were ordered to leave but when they refused, Bin Wahad was assaulted. Wahad was left with a concussion, a broken jaw and lacerations from the attack.[15] The event led founding member of the original Black Panthers, Elbert “Big Man” Howard, to denounce the group as “reactionaries” and “thugs”.[16]

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title: Dhoruba al-Mujahid bin Wahad

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why was Wahad eventually released from prison?

answer: The F.B.I. released over 300,000 pages of documents regarding COINTELPRO and they were the basis on which Wahad appealed his conviction.

text: Missing the part where Wahad sued the FBI.

refinement: In December 1975, Wahad filed a lawsuit against the FBI and the NYPD after he learned about the Congressional hearings that disclosed the existence of a covert FBI operation known as COINTELPRO. Because of Wahad's lawsuit, the FBI released over 300,000 pages of documents regarding COINTELPRO and they were the basis on which Wahad appealed his conviction. Judge Peter J. McQuillan of the New York Supreme Court reversed Wahad's conviction on March 15, 1990, ruling that the prosecution had failed to disclose evidence that could have helped Mr. Wahad's case.

answer: Wahad was released from prison in 1990 because a judge ruled the prosecution failed to disclose evidence that could have helped Wahad's defense.

answer: Wahal had heard about the existence of a covert FBI operation. He filed a lawsuit and the FBI released more than 300,000 pages about the covert operations. Wahal used these documents to appeal his conviction. The Supreme court reversed the ruling on the grounds that the prosecution had failed to disclose evidence.

text: "Wahal" - this is incorrect. Change to "Wahad"

refinement: Wahad had heard about the existence of a covert FBI operation. He filed a lawsuit and the FBI released more than 300,000 pages about the covert operations. Wahad used these documents to appeal his conviction. The Supreme court reversed the ruling on the grounds that the prosecution had failed to disclose evidence.

answer: Wahad was released from prison in 1990 due to a wrongful conviction resulting from the New York City Police Department withholding evidence.

text: "resulting from the New York City Police Department withholding evidence." - this is inaccurate. The judge ruled the prosecution failed to disclose evidence that could have helped Wahad's case.

refinement: Wahad was released from prison in 1990 due to a wrongful conviction because the judge ruled that the prosecution failed to disclose evidence that could have helped Wahad's case.

answer: he filed a lawsuit against the F.B.I. and the police department of the City of New York.

text: "he" - capitalize it (He)

refinement: He filed a lawsuit against the F.B.I. and the police department of the City of New York.

text: "He filed a lawsuit against the F.B.I. and the police department of the City of New York." - the response should be more than filing a lawsuit.

refinement: He filed a lawsuit against the F.B.I. and the police department of the City of New York. after learning of the existence of a covert operation called COINTELPRO. His lawsuit was the catalyst that opened the floodgates as the FBI released 300,000 pages of documents regarding COINTELPRO, which was the basis of Wahd's appeal.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did Moore change his name?

answer: Moore took the name 'Dhoruba al-Mujahid bin Wahad'. Moore read about that name and found that it basically meant 'the storm'. He decided to pick this name because he was inspired by Malcolm X, so he just became 'the storm'.

text: "Moore took the name 'Dhoruba al-Mujahid bin Wahad'. Moore read about that name and found that it basically meant 'the storm'. He decided to pick this name because he was inspired by Malcolm X, so he just became 'the storm'." - this is incorrect. He took the name "Dhoruba al-Mujahid bin Wahad" when he converted to Islam.

refinement: Moore took the name 'Dhoruba al-Mujahid bin Wahad' when he converted to Islam.

answer: Moore changed his name because of his admiration for the life and legacy of Malcolm X. He converted to Islam, took the name Dhoruba al-Mujahid bin Wahad, and began reading political material in order to honor Malcolm X.

text: "Moore changed his name because of his admiration for the life and legacy of Malcolm X." - this is incorrect. He changed his name because he converted to Islam.

refinement: He changed his name to Dhoruba al-Mujahid bin Wahad when he converted to Islam and began reading political material in order to honor Malcolm X.

text: "and began reading political material in order to honor Malcolm X." - extraneous information.

refinement: He changed his name to Dhoruba al-Mujahid bin Wahad when he converted to Islam.

answer: Moore changed his name because he wanted to honor Malcolm X, who was assassinated two days before Moore was shot by police.

text: "Moore changed his name because he wanted to honor Malcolm X, who was assassinated two days before Moore was shot by police." - this is incorrect. He changed his name because he converted to Islam.

refinement: Moore changed his name because he converted to Islam.

answer: Moore changed his name to Dhoruba al-Mujahid bin Wahad in order to honor his hero, Malcolm X, and take his message and apply it to his daily reality. He did this after reading Malcolm X's teachings and speeches and being stunned by Malcolm X's public execution.

text: "Moore changed his name to Dhoruba al-Mujahid bin Wahad in order to honor his hero, Malcolm X, and take his message and apply it to his daily reality. He did this after reading Malcolm X's teachings and speeches and being stunned by Malcolm X's public execution." - this is incorrect. He changed his name because he converted to Islam.

refinement: Moore converted to Islam and took the name Dhoruba al-Mujahid bin Wahad.

answer: Moore admired Malcolm X and decided that the best way to honor the man was to apply his message to reality. He converted to Islam. It is common practice for people to change their names to appropriate Islamic names when they convert to the religion.

text: "Moore admired Malcolm X and decided that the best way to honor the man was to apply his message to reality." - Extraneous information.

refinement: Moore converted to Islam. It is common practice for people to change their names to appropriate Islamic names when they convert to the religion.

text: "to" - replace with "who"

refinement: Moore converted to Islam. It is common practice for people who change their names to appropriate Islamic names when they convert to the religion.


text:
The boy ain't had no face,
he ain't have no legs neither
he had no spine to speak of
though he always says he done fine.

I dunno
sometime by the river shore
I start thinkin' maybe this boy'd be better
off sayin' a few words
to the god that made his broken heart

Lee's always playin' in the woods,
Lee's always throwin' sticks 'round
always from the ground right up to the air
like someday he gonna touch the sky

what a sight
what a sight

So one day, I call him 'round
I says, "Lee, come to the river"
and he came like a dog to a bone

And I said now, you take a swim
and he was no stranger to this
so he said, "please, Bill,
I ain't ready to meet the god that made me."

I says, you need a go for a swim
before I throw you in

He take off his jeans
and slowly walk in
and I swear it was like Jesus bein' baptized again

I ain't never seen no boy or man hold his breath like that
not even a hand to hold him an' he never did come back up
I consider him lucky,
he's probably gotta face on his soul now

I start screamin' so as ain't nobody 'spect nuthin'
Lee's drowin'!
Lee's walked into the river said he wanted meet the god that made him
and he never come back up!

Now, his mamma cried for days
but she know he in a better place
I know I did the right thing
now there ain't no boy gonna be right growin' up without a face.

title: Meet The God Who Made You (Hyper-Fiction)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why does the boy have no face?

answer: The boy has no face because he was born without some of the necessary features to have a face. He was also born without legs. He claims that even though this is a hard life, it's better than living without meeting the god that created him despite all the challenges that come with his disabilities.

answer: The boy does not have a face because he is physically broken in some way. It is likely that his body is not as complete as it should be, which means that he would not be able to survive in the wild. This is why he prefers to play in the woods away from others. The boy does not want to meet the god who made him because he cannot see himself as worthwhile. However, he eventually realizes that there is a purpose for him and decides to jump into the river to get closer to the god that made him.

answer: That information can't be found

text: This is technically true, but one could hazard a guess.

refinement: That information can't be found, but it's possible that he was just born without one.

answer: He was born without one.

answer: This information is not explicitly given in the text.

text: This is true, but one can guess based on context.

refinement: This information is not explicitly given in the text, but perhaps he was born without on, or maybe "face" is a metaphor.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Is Lee going to die in the river?

answer: It is implied that Lee committed suicide by drowning himsleelf because he considers himself unlucky.

answer: Yes, the boy is going to die in the river.

answer: If his implication is true, he would meet with God after taking a dip in the water. However, Bill seems to imply that he should be considering Christianity by telling Lee that Jesus is being baptized again.

answer: Yes, Lee dies in the river.

answer: Yes.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did Bill force him to go in the river?

answer: Because he thought he would be better off alive and dead.

answer: He just wanted to offer Lee 12-year-old's first swim.

text: On the surface, this makes sense, but actually there's a lot more going on.

refinement: He wanted to baptize Lee so that he could become a god.

answer: Bill forced Lee into the river so that he could meet the god who made him. According to Bill, Lee was missing something by not connecting with the god that made him. Bill believed that Lee would benefit from meeting the deity that had created him.

answer: He thought it would be like Jesus' baptism.

answer: Bill forced Lee to go in the river to give him a chance to meet the god who made him despite his appearance. Lee resisted at first, but ultimately gave in and allowed himself to drown. Bill considered Lee fortunate for meeting the god that made him despite all odds.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: Lee is born without a face, legs or a spine. Bill tells him to go swimming in the river, and Lee says he is not ready to die. Bill says to go in before he throws him in. Lee drowns in the river, and his mother cries. Bill says he is better off than he would have been growing up without a face.

answer: Lee is a boy who has no face and can't walk. Bill calls him to the river, where Bill taunts Lee into the water and then screams for no reason, alerting Lee's mother. Lee, who could not breathe underwater and couldn't swim, walks into the river and says he wanted to meet the god who made his broken face. Lee's mother is sad but believes he's in a better place. Bill knows he did the right thing and now no boy's face will be smashed before they're born.

answer:
The narrator believes that there is something wrong with Lee who doesn't have legs and can't speak, but despite that, he'd rather take care of him than anything.

One day, Lee chooses to go to the river, and the narrator follows him wanting to throw him in. Lee didn't seem afraid of the prospect of drowning and went for the swim. He never came back. Everyone mourns for Lee but the narrator thinks he did him a favor.

answer: The boy, Lee, never had a face or legs. But one day he decided he wanted to meet the god that made him, even if it meant drowning in the process. When he gets into the river and doesn't come back up, his mother mourns but believes he is in a better place.

answer: The protagonist comes across a boy in the forest who has no visible face or limbs. Aware of the boy's predicament, the protagonist convinces the boy to take a swim in the river. The boy drowns but the protagonist feels the outcome was positive, as the boy now has a face and body that match the god that made him. The boy's mother mourns but ultimately accepts her son's death.


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WHY YOU SHOULD CARE

Because Krish Vignarajah has a résumé tailor-made for the #MeToo movement.

The tables at the Jaycees Community Center are worn, the faded bingo stand left out from some event other than this Democratic gubernatorial forum in Waldorf, Maryland. For an hour and a half, a moderator pulls questions from the audience of maybe 50 people, who fill the folding chairs with their nods, stares and half-hearted applause. Krish Vignarajah, tries to inject some enthusiasm into the quiet crowd on a Sunday in April. “The orthodoxy out there is that no man can beat Larry Hogan,” she says, pausing for emphasis. “Well, I am no man,” she rallies, her black slacks and gold-buttoned, white jacket looking every bit like a military uniform — as if to say, yes, this daughter of Sri Lankan immigrant teachers will wage the necessary war to defeat the Republican incumbent.

She is at the vanguard of the Year of the Woman, in a state without a single woman in its 14 federal offices, following the retirement last year of longtime senator Barbara Mikulski. The “no man” line is a fittingly nerdy nod to _The Lord of the Rings_, uttered by the shieldmaiden Éowyn as she strikes down a demon king, who might be as daunting a foe as America’s second-most popular governor. Vignarajah first notably used the quip in a campaign ad a month before, one that caught the attention of everyone, from _The_ _New York Times_ to _People,_ because the spot featured her breastfeeding her months-old daughter.

Vignarajah has leaned into her femininity as a direct contrast to both President Donald Trump and Hogan. Her résumé seems perfectly crafted for the #MeToo era, as she was policy adviser for first lady Michelle Obama and former secretary of state Hillary Clinton — but don’t expect her to ride their coattails. “I want to stand on my own two feet,” she says, adding that she hasn’t asked her former bosses for an endorsement. In November, she released a sexual harassment policy plan with the help of Ashley Judd, one of the first public accusers of Harvey Weinstein. “Krish’s policy will both help shed light on rampant sexual harassment and create concrete solutions that improve gender norms,” Judd said.

Yet Vignarajah is still searching for traction in her Democratic primary. “I do think the ad has broken through,” she says, noting that it had been seen by 1 million people. Still, she is mired in the low single digits in the polls against five other Democrats with the June 26 primary approaching. At the Waldorf forum in April, her rousing efforts are noticed. “She has a compelling story to tell,” says Russell Yates, a treasurer for the local Democratic Party. But it’s hard to score points when your opponents don’t even show up. The three Democratic front-runners — Prince George County executive Rushern Baker, former NAACP president Ben Jealous, Baltimore County executive Kevin Kamenetz (who died unexpectedly from cardiac arrest weeks later) — sent running mates in their stead. Meanwhile, Vignarajah is left to juke with shadows, toiling in an obscurity the 39-year-old couldn’t have imagined, considering her early publicity. “If you can’t show up to ask people for their votes,” Vignarajah asks, “how can you ask people to believe you will be there to take care of their concerns?”

  I sometimes feel this chip on my shoulder in terms of making it clear how I have greater executive experience than anyone in the field.

  Krish Vignarajah

By showing up, Vignarajah cuts a compelling picture. Her parents fled Sri Lanka with $200 in their pockets and a 9-month-old Krish in tow, eventually settling in as teachers in Baltimore. Krish won both the most likely to succeed and worst dressed awards in high school, then went on to Yale, Oxford University and Yale Law. At the State Department under Clinton, the senior adviser focused on domestic youth initiatives as well as global women’s entrepreneurship. The policy wonk’s issues page runs the length of a novella, spilling 16,000 words on everything from paid family leave and free prekindergarten to reducing gun violence with “Smart Gun” technology and creating universal broadband access while promising to add a quarter-million jobs.

[Krish with m obama]

In a year when female political newcomers are all the rage, Vignarajah faces an awkward authenticity question: Maryland requires its governor to be a resident of the state five years before the election, and Vignarajah listed a Washington, D.C., address as recently as two years ago. She argues it wasn’t her full-time residence, but the press around it could have ripple effects, including making donors skittish. “Where is the money? People don’t know her,” says Karen Fennell, a party activist who attended the Waldorf debate. Emily’s List, the nation’s largest fundraiser for liberal, pro-choice women, is “monitoring the race closely” but has not made any decisions, per spokeswoman Christina Reynolds. And after Kamenetz’s sudden death in May, his running mate, Valerie Ervin, decided to run at the top of the ticket, meaning Vignarajah can no longer claim the mantle of the only woman in the race.

Vignarajah often performs well in straw polls at candidate gatherings, but she has every underdog’s lament of not getting enough debates. Elizabeth Embry, the running mate for Baker, says Vignarajah’s lesser experience was something the first-time candidate “will have to address with the voters.”

“I sometimes feel this chip on my shoulder in terms of making it clear how I have greater executive experience than anyone in the field,” Vignarajah says. She points to the multibillion-dollar initiative Let Girls Learn, a “seed of an idea” which through her cultivation spread through seven federal agencies and 100 private partners. Here she quotes her mother: “If you want your money managed well, give it to a woman.” She remembers working in the East Wing, traveling from Morocco to Venice with the first lady, who taught her “to entertain people first, and then you can educate them.” Vignarajah has the attention-grabbing part down. Will Maryland listen to the rest?

question: Who is the main character of the excerpt?

answer: Krish Vignarajah, a democrat

text: The answer should be a complete sentence.

refinement: The main character is Krish Vignarajah, a Democrat.

answer: Krish Vignarajah is the main character.

answer: Krish Vignarajah

text: The answer should be a complete sentence.

question: What is Krish's ethnicity?

answer: According to the passage, Krish is of Sri Lankan descent.

text: "...to give law enforcement agencies stronger powers to tackle the problem and give more protections to victims."

answer: Sri Lankan

text: The answer should be a complete sentence.

text: "...to give law enforcement agencies stronger powers to tackle the problem and give more protections to victims."

answer: According to the passage, Krish is of Sri Lankan descent.

text: "...to give law enforcement agencies stronger powers to tackle the problem and give more protections to victims."

question: What campaign ad caught the attention of the New York Times to the People?

answer: The campaign ad featuring Krish Vignarajah breastfeeding her daughter that was released prior to the Maryland Democratic primary was what caught the attention of The New York Times to the People.

text: "Vignarajah first notably used the quip in a campaign ad a month before, one that caught the attention of everyone, from _The_ _New York Times_ to _People,_ because the spot featured her breastfeeding her months-old daughter."

answer: A campaign ad in which Krish was featured breastfeeding her months-old daughter

text: The sentence is not a complete sentence.

refinement: A campaign ad in which Krish was featured breastfeeding her months-old daughter

text: "Vignarajah first notably used the quip in a campaign ad a month before, one that caught the attention of everyone, from _The_ _New York Times_ to _People,_ because the spot featured her breastfeeding her months-old daughter."

answer: The campaign ad in which Krish Vignarajah appeared breastfeeding her daughter caught the attention of the New York Times to the People.

text: "Vignarajah first notably used the quip in a campaign ad a month before, one that caught the attention of everyone, from _The_ _New York Times_ to _People,_ because the spot featured her breastfeeding her months-old daughter."

question: Who was Krish a policy advisor to?

answer: Krish was a policy advisor to Michelle Obama and Hillary Clinton.

text: "Her résumé seems perfectly crafted for the #MeToo era, as she was policy adviser for first lady Michelle Obama and former secretary of state Hillary Clinton — but don’t expect her to ride their coattails."

answer: To both former Secretary of State Hillary Clinton and former First Lady Michelle Obama.

text: The answer should be a complete sentence.

refinement: Krish was a policy advisor to both former Secretary of State Hillary Clinton and former First Lady Michelle Obama.

text: "Her résumé seems perfectly crafted for the #MeToo era, as she was policy adviser for first lady Michelle Obama and former secretary of state Hillary Clinton — but don’t expect her to ride their coattails."

answer: Krish was a policy advisor to Michelle Obama and Hillary Clinton

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: This story is about a Sri Lankan woman, Krish Vignarajah, who has re-shaped the #MeToo Movement and is an example of a woman who came from nothing and now holds her ground on her own two feet. She is new female politician who sheds light on rampant sexual harassment.

text: The focus of the summary should be on the fact that Vignarajah is a newcomer politician and is running for governor of Marlyand.

refinement: This story is about a Sri Lankan woman and new politician running for the governor position in the state of Maryland, Krish Vignarajah. She is new female politician who sheds light on rampant sexual harassment.

text: The summary could be more specific about why she is being discussed and her achievements.

refinement: This story is about a Sri Lankan woman and new politician running for the governor position in the state of Maryland, Krish Vignarajah. She served as policy adviser to First Lady Michelle Obama and former secretary of state Hilary Clinton, and gained national attention after running a campaign ad which depicted herself breastfeeding her months-old daughter.

answer: A woman, Vignarajah, runs in a primary for the Democratic presidential run. She claims to be the best candidate for Maryland.

text: Vignarajah is not running for President. She is running for the governor of Maryland.

refinement: A woman, Vignarajah, runs in the Democratic primary for governor of Marlyand. She claims to be the best candidate for Maryland.

text: The summary should include some of Vignarajah's past experience.

refinement: A woman, Vignarajah, runs in the Democratic primary for governor of Marlyand. She worked as policy advisor to the First Lady Michelle Obama and former Secretary of State Hilary Clinton.

answer: This article brushes through the high school and college years of the candidate, Krish Vignarajah, before getting into more details about her upbringing and her first years of working in politics. Vignarajah pushed herself through college in order to get a degree in law, garnering awards while doing so.

text: The summary should include Vignarajah's past work.

refinement: This article brushes through the high school and college years of the candidate, Krish Vignarajah, before getting into more details about her upbringing and her first years of working in politics as a policy advisor to First Lady Michelle Obama and former Secretary of State Hilary Clinton. Vignarajah pushed herself through college in order to get a degree in law, garnering awards while doing so.

text: Vignarajah is running for the governor of Maryland.

refinement: This article brushes through the high school and college years of the Maryland gubernatorial candidate, Krish Vignarajah, before getting into more details about her upbringing and her first years of working in politics as a policy advisor to First Lady Michelle Obama and former Secretary of State Hilary Clinton. Vignarajah pushed herself through college in order to get a degree in law, garnering awards while doing so.

answer: This article discusses the candidacy of Krish Vignarajah, a candidate for Governor of Maryland. She is the political newcomer in the race for governor this year-what sets her apart from the field is her résumé, which includes a job working as a policy adviser at the State Department.

text: There is an improper use of a dash.

refinement: This article discusses the candidacy of Krish Vignarajah, a candidate for Governor of Maryland. She is the political newcomer in the race for governor this year. What sets her apart from the field is her résumé, which includes a job working as a policy adviser at the State Department.

answer: The story centers around Krish Vignarajah, a gubernatorial candidate in Maryland in the United States in the year of 2018.

text: The year 2018 is not mentioned in the article.

refinement: The story centers around Krish Vignarajah, a gubernatorial candidate in Maryland in the United States.

text: The summary should include some of Vignarajah's past accomplishments.

refinement: The story centers around Krish Vignarajah, a gubernatorial candidate in Maryland in the United States. Vignarajah previously served as a policy advisor to First Lady Michelle Obama and former Secretary of State Hilary Clinton.

answer: The article is about Krish Vignarajah's run to become Maryland governor in 2017. She is competing in a Democratic primary against five other politicians, many of whom were unable to attend their debate in Waldorf, Maryland.

text: The year 2017 is not mentioned in the article.

refinement: The article is about Krish Vignarajah's run to become Maryland governor in 2017. She is competing in a Democratic primary against five other politicians, many of whom were unable to attend their debate in Waldorf, Maryland.

text: There is an inaccuracy when the summary says that the other candidates were unable to attend the debate in Waldorf.

refinement: The article is about Krish Vignarajah's run to become Maryland governor in 2017. She is competing in a Democratic primary against five other politicians.


text:
DANYLO (ANDRIY) OSTROZKY (, , died after 1366) was probably Prince of Turaŭ, first Prince of Ostroh, and founder of the Ostrozky House.

Biography

It is not clear whether he was descendant of Pinsk–Turaŭ or Galicia–Volhynia branch of the Rurikid Dynasty. Some scholars claim that his grandfather was Vasilko Romanovich, Prince of Slonim and direct descendant of Roman of Galicia, others however claim his origin in line of Sviatopolk II of Kiev and suppose that his father was Danylo Dmytrovych.[1] Kasper Niesiecki, an 18th-century writer, reported that “_Daniel Vasilievich, son of Daniel of Galicia`s brother, first started to call himself Prince of Ostrog_”.[2] He could be also direct grandson of Daniel of Galicia and son of Mstislav Danilovich.[3]

Adam Naruszewicz wrote that Danylo Ostrozky was starost of Przemyśl, officer of Casimir III the Great when he inherited Galicia after the death of Boleslaw-Yuri II of Galicia.[4] Daniel was probably only temporary supporting King Casimir, because in 1344 he called the Tatars to fight for Galicia in the Galicia–Volhynia Wars,[5] like Dmytro Dedko who died in the same year. Finally Prince Danylo allied to Liubartas who also rivaled for Galicia with Tatars, Poles and Hungarians. He received Ostroh from Liubartas, King of Galicia–Volhynia,[6] where he rebuilt the castle destroyed by the Tatars.

Was married to Wassilisa (?), father of Feodor Ostrozky and probably Wasyl.[7]

[1] Ostrozky in the Encyclopedia of Ukraine, vol. 3 (1993)

[2]  [http://www.google.pl/books?id=A_YKAAAAIAAJ&pg=RA3-PA52&dq=daniel+Ostrogski&lr=&hl=en Opis starożytnéy Polski by Tomasz Święcki]

[3]  [http://www.google.pl/books?id=ATQEAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA307&dq=Daniel+Ostrogski&lr=&hl=en#PPA307,M1 Wołyń pod względem statystycznym, historycznym i archeologicznym]

[4] [http://www.google.pl/books?id=aPYKAAAAIAAJ&pg=PA272&dq=daniel+Ostrogski&lr=&hl=en#PPA81,M1 Historya narodu polskiego By Adam Naruszewicz]

[5] [http://www.google.pl/books?id=5qsqAAAAMAAJ&pg=PA90&dq=Daniel+Ostrogski&lr=&hl=en Biblioteka Ossolińskich]

[6]

[7] [http://www.google.pl/books?id=qw4SAAAAIAAJ&q=Daniel+Ostrogski&dq=Daniel+Ostrogski&lr=&hl=en&pgis=1 Miesie̜cznik heraldyczny 1931y]

title: Danylo Ostrozky

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the relationship between Danylo and Galicia.

answer: It's not clear. He may have been descendant to the rightful heir of Galicia through the Pinsk-Turaoz, but there seems to be no evidence of a claimant to the title of prince for some time, who was not directly connected to old members of the ruling family. Danylo claims to have been a prince and a founder of the Ostrozky House.

text: Doesn't mention fighting for Galicia.

refinement: It's not clear. He may have been descendant to the rightful heir of Galicia through the Pinsk-Turaoz, but there seems to be no evidence of a claimant to the title of prince for some time, who was not directly connected to old members of the ruling family. In 1344 he fought for Galicia in the Galicia-Volhynia Wars. Danylo claims to have been a prince and a founder of the Ostrozky House.

answer: Danylo seems to have been possibly related to several important people from Galicia. Danylo also inherited Galicia after the death of Boleslaw-Yuri of Galicia. In 1344, he called the Tatars to fight for Galicia in the Galicia-Volhynia Wars.

answer: Danylo won the war for Galicia and founded the Ostrozky house. He was Starost of Przemyśl when he inherited it after the death of Boleslaw -Yuri II of Galicia. Daniel allied himself with Liubartas in the Galicia–Volhynia Wars, after receiving Ostroh from Liubartas. The source of the Galicia War information could be Ostrozky in the Encyclopedia of Ukraine but it's not said in the passage.

answer: Danylo Ostrozky was likely a descendant of the Pinsk-Turaŭ branch of the Rurikid Dynasty. He aligned with King Liubartas in the Galicia-Volhynia Wars, and Liubartas granted him the territory of Ostroh. It is unclear whether the designation of this region was temporary or permanent.

answer: Danylo Ostrozky was likely a descendant of the Rurikid Dynasty who supported Casimir III the Great in his campaign to take Galicia. He received Ostroh from Liubartas and became the first Prince of Ostroh. He allied with Liubartas in order to help him in the Galicia–Volhynia Wars.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Danylo's family?

answer: Danylo Ostrozky was probably a descendant of Pinsk–Turaŭ or Galicia–Volhynia branch of the Rurikid Dynasty.

text: Doesn't mention any of his possible family members.

refinement: Danylo Ostrozky was probably a descendant of Pinsk–Turaŭ or Galicia–Volhynia branch of the Rurikid Dynasty. Some scholars claim that his grandfather was Vasilko Romanovich, Prince of Slonim and direct descendant of Roman of Galicia. Others claim his origin in line of Sviatopolk II of Kieve and suppose that his father was Danylo Dmytrovych. Nieslecki reports that Daniel Vasilievich, son of Daniel of Galicia's brother, started to call himself Prince of Ostrog. He could also be direct grandson of Daniel of Galicia and son of Mstislav Danilovich.

answer: There is a claim that his grandfather vasilko Romanovich was prince of Slonim and descendant of Roman of Galicia. His origin is one version of descendants of Sviatopolk II of Kiev and his father was Danylo Dmytrovych. However, Kasper Niesiecki claims that "Daniel Vasilievich, son of Daniel of Galicia's brother, first started to call himself Prince of Ostrog." He could be also direct grandson of Daniel of Galicia and son of Mstislav Danilovich.

answer: Danylo may have been a descendent of Pinsk-Turau or the Galicia-Volhynia branch of the Rurikad Dynasty. One grandfather may have been Daniel of Galicia, and the other grandfather may have been Vasilko Romanovich, a direct descendent of Roman of Galicia, but others claim his origin was in the line of Sviatopolk II of Kiev. His father may have been Danylo Dmytrovych, or he was son to Mstislav Danilovich. Danylo was married to Wassilisa, father of Feodor Ostrozky, and maybe Wasyl.

answer: According to the passage, it is unclear whether Danylo descended from the Pinsk-Turaŭ or Galicia-Volhynia branch of the Rurikid Dynasty. He was likely the son of an uncle of Daniel of Galicia. It is also unclear whether he was married and if so, to whom. His father is unknown.

text: Doesn't mention other possible family members.

refinement: According to the passage, it is unclear whether Danylo descended from the Pinsk-Turaŭ or Galicia-Volhynia branch of the Rurikid Dynasty. Some scholars claim that his grandfather was Vasilko Romanovich, Prince of Slonim and direct descendant of Roman of Galicia. Others claim his origin in line of Sviatopolk II of Kieve and suppose that his father was Danylo Dmytrovych. Nieslecki reports that Daniel Vasilievich, son of Daniel of Galicia's brother, started to call himself Prince of Ostrog. He could also be direct grandson of Daniel of Galicia and son of Mstislav Danilovich.

answer: Danylo Ostrozky was either from the branch of the Rurikid Dynasty which ruled in Pinsk-Turaŭ or a descendant of Sviatopolk II of Kiev. He was married with Wassilisa and father of Feodor.

text: Doesn't mention other possible family members.

refinement: Danylo Ostrozky was either from the branch of the Rurikid Dynasty which ruled in Pinsk-Turaŭ or a descendant of Sviatopolk II of Kiev. He was married with Wassilisa and father of Feodor. Some scholars claim that his grandfather was Vasilko Romanovich, Prince of Slonim and direct descendant of Roman of Galicia. Others claim his origin in line of Sviatopolk II of Kieve and suppose that his father was Danylo Dmytrovych. Nieslecki reports that Daniel Vasilievich, son of Daniel of Galicia's brother, started to call himself Prince of Ostrog. He could also be direct grandson of Daniel of Galicia and son of Mstislav Danilovich.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Danylo's duties?

answer: Danylo Ostrozky was probably the Prince of Turaŭ and the founder of the Ostrozky House. He also served as an officer to Casimir III the Great and allied himself with Liubartas in the Galicia–Volhynia Wars. He received Ostroh from Liubartas and rebuilt the castle there. In addition, he was married and had a son named Feodor.

answer: Danylo was possible the Prince of Turau, first Prince of Ostroh, and the founded of the Ostrozky House. He was starost of Przemysl, officer of Casimir III the Great. He inherited Galicia, and tried to ally to Liubartas. From them he received Ostroh, where he rebuilt the castle destroyed by the Tatars.

answer: The text reports that Danylo Ostrozky was a prince and founder of the Ostrozky House, a starost of Przemyśl, and an officer of Casimir III the Great. He allied to Liubartas and received Ostroh, where he rebuilt the castle. He was married and the father of Feodor Ostrozky.

answer: He was a starost of Przemyśl, officer of Casimir III the Great, and was probably only supporting King Casimir. He allied with the Tatars to fight against Galicia and Poles. He eventually received Ostroh from Liubartas, and rebuilt the castle destroyed by the Tatars.

answer: Danylo was a starost of Przemyśl, officer of Casimir III the Great. He was the Prince of Ostroh, first prince of Ostrog. He was also allied with Liubartas.

text: Doesn't specify all of his duties.

refinement: Danylo was a starost of Przemyśl, officer of Casimir III the Great. Danylo Ostrozky was probably the Prince of Turaŭ and the founder of the Ostrozky House. He was also allied with Liubartas in the Galicia–Volhynia Wars. He received Ostroh from Liubartas and rebuilt the castle there. In addition, he was married and had a son named Feodor.


text:
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you

im sorry, i had to share it here ;~;

question: Why did Clarissa kill her parents?

answer: We cannot possibly know for sure why Clarissa killed her parents, but it is possible that she was mentally ill and hence suffered from psychosis or delusions.

text: The fact that Clarissa "lived in a mental hospital" supports the reading that Clarissa killed her parents because she was mentally ill

answer: Based on the passage, Clarissa killed her parents because she became mentally unstable and took her killing spree further by trying to murder the staff at her mental hospital.

text: Her trying to murder the staff is irrelevant to the question

refinement: Based on the passage, Clarissa killed her parents because she became mentally unstable

text: The passage doesn't explicitly give an answer; state that this answer is assumed

refinement: It is implied that Clarissa killed her parents because she became mentally unstable

text: Change "became" to "was," just to make the sentence flow better

refinement: It is implied that Clarissa killed her parents because she was mentally unstable

answer: This information can't be found.

question: Does Clarissa die?

answer: Yes.

text: According to the passage, "she sat there in agony for hours until she died"

answer: Yes, Clarissa dies at the end of the passage after being cursed with being a vengeful ghost.

text: Clarissa is not cursed by a vengeful ghost; she becomes a vengeful ghost

refinement: Yes, Clarissa dies at the end of the passage and becomes a vengeful ghost.

text: Clarissa dies around the middle of the passage, not the end, but this is also not relevant to the question

refinement: Yes, Clarissa dies and becomes a vengeful ghost.

answer: Yes, it is implied Clarissa dies after her gruesome death at the mental hospital.

text: Clarissa's death is explicitly stated: "she sat there in agony for hours until she died"

refinement: Yes, Clarissa dies after her gruesome death at the mental hospital.

text: "Dies after her gruesome death" is absurd

refinement: Yes, Clarissa dies at the mental hospital.

question: How old was Clarissa?

text: No answer given

answer: Clarissa was ten years old.

text: No answer given

question: What happens on Monday night?

answer: Clarissa will come and try to kill you slowly if you do not forward the letter to ten other pictures on the website.

text: The input does say to forward the letter to ten other "pictures" but the author might have meant "people." This is unclear though

refinement: Clarissa will come and try to kill you slowly if you do not forward the letter to ten other people on the website.

text: The input says "send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else"

answer: Clarissa comes back to claim the person who read the letter.

text: The word "claim" is vague

refinement: Clarissa comes back to kill the person who read the letter.

text: The input describes how to avoid being killed too

refinement: Clarissa comes back to kill the person who read the letter, unless they send it to ten other pictures on the website

answer: Clarissa returns to kill the people who don't forward the email warning about her or the moment they read this document. Clarissa kills people by cutting them and watching them bleed to death.

text: "Or the moment they read the document" is ungrammatical

refinement: Clarissa returns to kill the people who don't forward the email warning about her. Clarissa kills people by cutting them and watching them bleed to death.

text: The input seems to be a post on a website, not an email

refinement: Clarissa returns to kill the people who don't send the warning about her to ten other pictures. Clarissa kills people by cutting them and watching them bleed to death.

text: The method that Clarissa uses is extraneous

refinement: Clarissa returns to kill the people who don't send the warning about her to ten other pictures.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: Please don't read the warning message because if you keep on reading you will die.

text: The input tells the reader to continue reading, not to stop reading, but the warning should probably be excluded entirely from a summary

text: Provide a summary

refinement: There was a little girl named Clarissa who killed her parents and lived in a mental hospital. After she tried to kill the staff there, she was killed slowly and painfully. Now, every Monday night she returns to kill whoever reads this letter unless they send it to ten other pictures on the website.

answer: There is a young girl who killed her parents, who some say is dying now because the government couldn't be as humane as possible while trying to put her to death. The girl haunts anyone who reads this post and kills them slowly, bleeding them out. The people who follow the rules in the post have the best day of their lives tomorrow, whether it's lots of kissing or asking someone out.

text: Clarissa is not "dying;" she is dead

refinement: There was a young girl who killed her parents, and who was put to death slowly and painfully. The girl haunts anyone who reads this post and kills them slowly, bleeding them out. The people who follow the rules in the post have the best day of their lives tomorrow, whether it's lots of kissing or asking someone out.

text: The post says that people who pass along the chain post will get kissed or asked out, not that they will kiss someone or ask someone out

refinement: There was a young girl who killed her parents, and who was put to death slowly and painfully. The girl haunts anyone who reads this post and kills them slowly, bleeding them out. The people who follow the rules in the post have the best day of their lives tomorrow, whether it's getting kissed or getting asked out.

answer: A little girl who goes by the name of Clarissa kills her mom and dad, and continues to kill staff members of her hospital, and on the night of her death, after her alleged death, she comes back and kills whoever copies the chain letter. Unless that person sends it to 10 other e-mail addresses in the next ten minutes, once she reaches zero people, she will die.

text: Skips over Clarissa's actual death

refinement: A little girl who goes by the name of Clarissa kills her mom and dad, and continues to kill staff members of her hospital. She is put to death slowly and painfully. On the night of her death, after her alleged death, she comes back and kills whoever copies the chain letter. Unless that person sends it to 10 other e-mail addresses in the next ten minutes, once she reaches zero people, she will die.

text: "On the night of her death, after her alleged death" is redundant and misleading

refinement: A little girl who goes by the name of Clarissa kills her mom and dad, and continues to kill staff members of her hospital. She is put to death slowly and painfully. On the night of her death, she comes back and kills whoever copies the chain letter. Unless that person sends it to 10 other e-mail addresses in the next ten minutes, once she reaches zero people, she will die.

text: She kills people who don't copy the chain letter

refinement: A little girl who goes by the name of Clarissa kills her mom and dad, and continues to kill staff members of her hospital. She is put to death slowly and painfully. On the night of her death, she comes back and kills whoever fails to copy the chain letter. Unless that person sends it to 10 other e-mail addresses in the next ten minutes, once she reaches zero people, she will die.

text: "Unless that person [...] she will die" is redundant, and the latter part does not seem to be connected to anything in the input

refinement: A little girl who goes by the name of Clarissa kills her mom and dad, and continues to kill staff members of her hospital. She is put to death slowly and painfully. On the night of her death, she comes back and kills whoever fails to copy the chain letter.

text: "Who goes by the name  of" can be shorted to "named"

refinement: A little girl named Clarissa kills her mom and dad, and continues to kill staff members of her hospital. She is put to death slowly and painfully. On the night of her death, she comes back and kills whoever fails to copy the chain letter.

answer: Clarissa is ten years old and lives in a mental hospital. She has killed both her parents and was now trying to kill the hospital staff. Because of this, the government decides its best to kill her. They use a special machine to get the job done, but unfortunately, the machine does not work. Clarissa sits there in agony waiting for death.

text: The description of the machine and Clarissa's actual death is unnecessary

refinement: Clarissa is ten years old and lives in a mental hospital. She has killed both her parents and was now trying to kill the hospital staff. Because of this, the government decides its best to kill her.

text: Add the warning about Clarissa's ghost

refinement: Clarissa is ten years old and lives in a mental hospital. She has killed both her parents and was now trying to kill the hospital staff. Because of this, the government decides its best to kill her. Now, every Monday night, she returns and kills whoever reads this letter and fails to send it to ten other pictures on the website.

text: Fix verb tense problem and correct "its" to "it's"

refinement: Clarissa is ten years old and lives in a mental hospital. She has killed both her parents and is now trying to kill the hospital staff. Because of this, the government decides it's best to kill her. Now, every Monday night, she returns and kills whoever reads this letter and fails to send it to ten other pictures on the website.

answer: 1

text: This response is not relevant

text: Provide a summary

refinement: There was a little girl named Clarissa who killed her parents and lived in a mental hospital. After she tried to kill the staff there, she was killed slowly and painfully. Now, every Monday night she returns to kill whoever reads this letter unless they send it to ten other pictures on the website.

answer: Nine-year-old Kate has just awakened in her bedroom. She turns to her family portraits and sighs. She desperately wishes to fulfil the life of an average girl her age, but there are unexplained force capturing her. She hears a sudden scream from down the road, and within seconds, a nine-year-old girl emerges from the wood. The girl's face is contorted in fear. She throws herself to the ground and grabs a piece of glass from the ground and stabs herself in the chest. In a few minutes, Kate's surrounds are completely dark. The girl's scream finally fades away.

text: This response is not connected to the input

text: Provide a summary

refinement: There was a little girl named Clarissa who killed her parents and lived in a mental hospital. After she tried to kill the staff there, she was killed slowly and painfully. Now, every Monday night she returns to kill whoever reads this letter unless they send it to ten other pictures on the website.