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KID CREME (born NICOLAS SCARAVILLI, 1974)[1] is a house music producer and DJ, born to an Italian family in Brussels.

Biography

Kid Creme's formative years were spent learning to spin hip-hop and studying music theory and classic piano. After he was expelled from music college in 1991, he decided to set up his own home studio inspired mainly by the London breakbeat scene. At 19 he met Francis Shabard (DJ Murvin Jay) who introduced him to house music and together they secured DJ residencies at Club XXX, the first house club night in Brussels at the Theatre of Vaudeville.

Kid Creme spent four years as assistant engineer at Let's Go Studios, where he met his DJ partner and close friend Vito 'Junior Jack' Lucente. In 1994, Kid Creme set up his own label DTM Recordz and was offered a recording contract deal by R&S Records. At the same time Kid Creme was releasing house records through UK label Drop Dead Discs. It was Kid Creme's house remix of “Boom on Drop Dead” that caught Boy George's eye, and remixes for Junior Vasquez and Topazz followed.

PIAS offered Kid Creme a recording contract deal for his techno productions. He accepted the offer and now records for his label Deluxe Recordings under the moniker Sharpside. Their second release, “Critical Freaks”, gained support with Dave Angel, Claude Young, Pete Tong, Carl Cox and Judge Jules. With Danny Tenaglia supporting track “Belgian Resistance”, Luke Slater using the track “Telsco Drop” on his album and Space Cruising getting signed to Dave Angel's label, Kid Creme's techno productions were going from strength to strength.

In 2001, Kid Creme's first production under that name entitled Austin's Groove was signed to Jalapeño Records, who licensed it to Ink in the UK and Subliminal in the US. Eric Morillo added a Shawnee Taylor vocal on the record. Two following releases for Distinctive, “Niquid EP” and “Down & Under”, did equally well with critics and sales.

Kid Creme came back with a bootleg of Raw Silk's “Do It To the Music” and renamed it “Hypnotising”. The single was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart.

Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was _Seven_ magazine's 'Single Of The Week'. When Fatboy Slim played it at the Big Beach Boutique, he was watched by 250,000 people. Upon hearing it whilst visiting her label, Kylie Minogue asked Kid Creme to remix her single, “Love at First Sight”.

Discography

Singles

-   2000 “Austin's Groove”
-   2001 “Private Tools”
-   2003 “Down and Under”
-   2003 “Hypnotising”
-   2004 “Everybody”

Remixes

-   2002 Shakedown - At Night
-   2002 Kylie Minogue - “Love at First Sight”
-   2003 Pique & Nique - “You Will (Miss Me)”
-   2004 Planet Funk - Inside All The People

Mix compilations

-   2003 Junior Jack and Kid Creme In The House (Defected Records)

[1] Hey Mr DJ: What's the name?, _Times of India_ (May 30, 2010)

title: Kid Crème

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Kid Crème's early life and career?

answer: Kid Crème grew up listening to hip-hop and learned music theory and classic piano, eventually moving on to house music production and DJing. He eventually achieved chart success with his bootleg of Raw Silk's "Do It To the Music," reaching number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. Kid Crème's early life and career involve mentorship in house music, leading to a prominent place in the international house music scene.

text: 'He eventually achieved chart success with his bootleg of Raw Silk's "Do It To the Music," reaching number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. ' does not describe his early career. I would delete that.

refinement: Kid Crème grew up listening to hip-hop and learned music theory and classic piano, eventually moving on to house music production and DJing. Kid Crème's early life and career involve mentorship in house music, leading to a prominent place in the international house music scene.

answer: Kid Creme's parents were both of Italian descent. He started out his formal education learning hip-hop and piano. Kid Creme was expelled from music college in 1991 and decided to set up his own home studio. He wasted no time setting up a DJ residency at Club XXX alongside Francis Shabard. Kid Creme got his first studio job as an assistant engineer from 1994 at Let's Go Studios. It was there that he met Shabard, a DJ and Kid Creme's best friend. It was his home recordings that attracted the attention of acclaimed Topaz and Junior Vasquez. These recordings caught the attention of Boy George, who later asked Kid Creme to remix his song. Kid Creme then released two singles in 2003 before recruiting raver and Juno award winner Luke Slater to join him on his album Space Cruising. Kid Creme released a mix compilation in 2003 with mixes of many of his tunes. He then released another single under the moniker Sharpside in 2004. He has since been working on an album that was expected to be out by 4001, and in the years since it was delayed while he worked on other projects.

text: It is not stated that Shabard is his best friend.

refinement: Kid Creme's parents were both of Italian descent. He started out his formal education learning hip-hop and piano. Kid Creme was expelled from music college in 1991 and decided to set up his own home studio. He wasted no time setting up a DJ residency at Club XXX alongside Francis Shabard. Kid Creme got his first studio job as an assistant engineer from 1994 at Let's Go Studios. It was there that he met Shabard. It was his home recordings that attracted the attention of acclaimed Topaz and Junior Vasquez. These recordings caught the attention of Boy George, who later asked Kid Creme to remix his song. Kid Creme then released two singles in 2003 before recruiting raver and Juno award winner Luke Slater to join him on his album Space Cruising. Kid Creme released a mix compilation in 2003 with mixes of many of his tunes. He then released another single under the moniker Sharpside in 2004. He has since been working on an album that was expected to be out by 4001, and in the years since it was delayed while he worked on other projects.

text: It was his home recordings that attracted the attention of Boy George, not Topaz and Junior Vasquez.

refinement: Kid Creme's parents were both of Italian descent. He started out his formal education learning hip-hop and piano. Kid Creme was expelled from music college in 1991 and decided to set up his own home studio. He wasted no time setting up a DJ residency at Club XXX alongside Francis Shabard. Kid Creme got his first studio job as an assistant engineer from 1994 at Let's Go Studios. It was there that he met Shabard. It was his home recordings that attracted the attention of Boy George, who later asked Kid Creme to remix his song. Kid Creme then released two singles in 2003 before recruiting raver and Juno award winner Luke Slater to join him on his album Space Cruising. Kid Creme released a mix compilation in 2003 with mixes of many of his tunes. He then released another single under the moniker Sharpside in 2004. He has since been working on an album that was expected to be out by 4001, and in the years since it was delayed while he worked on other projects.

text: 'Kid Creme then released two singles in 2003 before recruiting raver and Juno award winner Luke Slater to join him on his album Space Cruising. Kid Creme released a mix compilation in 2003 with mixes of many of his tunes. He then released another single under the moniker Sharpside in 2004. He has since been working on an album that was expected to be out by 4001, and in the years since it was delayed while he worked on other projects.' does not describe his early career. I would delete it.

refinement: Kid Creme's parents were both of Italian descent. He started out his formal education learning hip-hop and piano. Kid Creme was expelled from music college in 1991 and decided to set up his own home studio. He wasted no time setting up a DJ residency at Club XXX alongside Francis Shabard. Kid Creme got his first studio job as an assistant engineer from 1994 at Let's Go Studios. It was there that he met Shabard. It was his home recordings that attracted the attention of Boy George, who later asked Kid Creme to remix his song.

text: It should be 'by learning' instead of 'learning'.

refinement: Kid Creme's parents were both of Italian descent. He started out his formal education by learning hip-hop and piano. Kid Creme was expelled from music college in 1991 and decided to set up his own home studio. He wasted no time setting up a DJ residency at Club XXX alongside Francis Shabard. Kid Creme got his first studio job as an assistant engineer from 1994 at Let's Go Studios. It was there that he met Shabard. It was his home recordings that attracted the attention of Boy George, who later asked Kid Creme to remix his song.

answer: Kid Crème was born Nicolas Scaravilli in 1974 to an Italian family in Brussels. His formative years were spent learning to spin hip-hop and studying music theory and classical piano. He was expelled from music college in 1991, so he set up his own home studio inspired by the London breakbeat scene. He met DJ Francis Shabard (DJ Murvin Jay) when he was 19 and Shabard introduced him to house music. Together, they secured DJ residencies at Club XXX, the first house club in Brussels at the Theatre of Vaudeville.

answer: Kid Creme's early years consisted of learning to spin hip-hop and studying music theory and classic piano, which eventually inspired him to set up a home studio. His DJ partner introduced him to house music in 1991, and soon after he was granted a recording deal. His production entitled Austin's Groove was signed to Jalapeño Records, and Kid Creme's remix of "At Night" caught the attention of Kylie Minogue. Kid Crème's work generally consists of house music and techno productions.

text: He met Shabard in 1993.

refinement: Kid Creme's early years consisted of learning to spin hip-hop and studying music theory and classic piano, which eventually inspired him to set up a home studio. His DJ partner introduced him to house music in 1993, and soon after he was granted a recording deal. His production entitled Austin's Groove was signed to Jalapeño Records, and Kid Creme's remix of "At Night" caught the attention of Kylie Minogue. Kid Crème's work generally consists of house music and techno productions.

text: 'His production entitled Austin's Groove was signed to Jalapeño Records, and Kid Creme's remix of "At Night" caught the attention of Kylie Minogue. Kid Crème's work generally consists of house music and techno productions.' does not describe his early career. I would delete it.

refinement: Kid Creme's early years consisted of learning to spin hip-hop and studying music theory and classic piano, which eventually inspired him to set up a home studio. His DJ partner introduced him to house music in 1993, and soon after he was granted a recording deal.

text: It is omitted that his partner and he together secured DJ residencies at Club XXX, the first house club night in Brussels at the Theatre of Vaudeville.

refinement: Kid Creme's early years consisted of learning to spin hip-hop and studying music theory and classic piano, which eventually inspired him to set up a home studio. His DJ partner introduced him to house music in 1993, and together they secured DJ residencies at Club XXX, the first house club night in Brussels at the Theatre of Vaudeville. Soon after he was granted a recording deal.

answer: He learned to spin hip-hop and studied music theory and classic piano. After being expelled from music college, Kid Creme decided to start his own home studio inspired by the London breakbeat scene. Kid Creme was eventually introduced to house dj. Francis' Brother, Sharabard (DJ Murvin Jay), and they secured DJ residencies at Club XXX, the first House dance club in Brussels. Kid Creme spent four years as an assistant engineer at Let's Go Studios when he met his DJ friend and colleague, Vito “Junior Jack” Lucente.

text: Francis Sharabard is DJ Murvin Jay, not Francos' brother.

refinement: He learned to spin hip-hop and studied music theory and classic piano. After being expelled from music college, Kid Creme decided to start his own home studio inspired by the London breakbeat scene. Kid Creme was eventually introduced to house dj. Francis Sharabard (DJ Murvin Jay), and they secured DJ residencies at Club XXX, the first House dance club in Brussels. Kid Creme spent four years as an assistant engineer at Let's Go Studios when he met his DJ friend and colleague, Vito “Junior Jack” Lucente.

text: 'classical' instead of 'calssic'.

refinement: He learned to spin hip-hop and studied music theory and classical piano. After being expelled from music college, Kid Creme decided to start his own home studio inspired by the London breakbeat scene. Kid Creme was eventually introduced to house dj. Francis Sharabard (DJ Murvin Jay), and they secured DJ residencies at Club XXX, the first House dance club in Brussels. Kid Creme spent four years as an assistant engineer at Let's Go Studios when he met his DJ friend and colleague, Vito “Junior Jack” Lucente.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Kid Crème's career after Club XXX?

answer: Kid Creme's formative years were spent learning to spin hip-hop and studying music theory and classic piano. After he was expelled from music college in 1991, he decided to set up his own home studio inspired mainly by the London breakbeat scene. He met Francis Shabard (DJ Murvin Jay) who introduced him to house music. Kid Creme released house records through Drop Dead Discs and soon was offered a recording contract deal by R&S Records. In 2000, Kid Creme ends his contract with R&S Records and goes to Pias under the moniker Sharpside. In 2003 Kid Creme released "Hypnotizing" for Positiva and in 2004 he released Everybody for PIAS. He also mixed a junior Jack compilation album called Junior Jack and Kid Creme In The House.

text: 'Kid Creme's formative years were spent learning to spin hip-hop and studying music theory and classic piano. After he was expelled from music college in 1991, he decided to set up his own home studio inspired mainly by the London breakbeat scene. He met Francis Shabard (DJ Murvin Jay) who introduced him to house music' describes his early career.

refinement: Kid Creme released house records through Drop Dead Discs and soon was offered a recording contract deal by R&S Records. In 2000, Kid Creme ends his contract with R&S Records and goes to Pias under the moniker Sharpside. In 2003 Kid Creme released "Hypnotizing" for Positiva and in 2004 he released Everybody for PIAS. He also mixed a junior Jack compilation album called Junior Jack and Kid Creme In The House.

text: in 2002, not 2003 Kid Creme gained acclaim for his remix of Kylie Minogue's "Love at First Sight."

refinement: Kid Creme released house records through Drop Dead Discs and soon was offered a recording contract deal by R&S Records. In 2000, Kid Creme ends his contract with R&S Records and goes to Pias under the moniker Sharpside. In 2002 Kid Creme released "Hypnotizing" for Positiva and in 2004 he released Everybody for PIAS. He also mixed a junior Jack compilation album called Junior Jack and Kid Creme In The House.

answer: Kid Crème worked at Let's Go Studios as an assistant engineer for four years. Here, he met his DJ partner and close friend, Vito "Junior Jack" Lucente. In 1994, Kid Crème set up his own label DTM Recordz and was offered a recording contract deal by R&S Records while he was releasing house records through UK label Drop Dead Discs. His house remix of "Boom on Drop Dead" caught Boy George's eye, and remixes for Topazz and Junior Vasquez followed.

text: It is omitted that the single "Hypnotising” was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'.

refinement: Kid Crème worked at Let's Go Studios as an assistant engineer for four years. Here, he met his DJ partner and close friend, Vito "Junior Jack" Lucente. In 1994, Kid Crème set up his own label DTM Recordz and was offered a recording contract deal by R&S Records while he was releasing house records through UK label Drop Dead Discs. His house remix of "Boom on Drop Dead" caught Boy George's eye, and remixes for Topazz and Junior Vasquez followed. His single "Hypnotising” was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'.

answer: After being expelled from music college, Kid Creme set up his own home studio and began DJing. His first producing credit was released in 2001, and subsequent releases have received critical acclaim. In 2003, Kid Creme gained acclaim for his remix of Kylie Minogue's "Love at First Sight."

text:
'After being expelled from music college, Kid Creme set up his own home studio and began DJing
' describes his career before Club XXX. I would delete it.

refinement: His first producing credit was released in 2001, and subsequent releases have received critical acclaim. In 2003, Kid Creme gained acclaim for his remix of Kylie Minogue's "Love at First Sight."

text: It is omitted that the single "Hypnotising” was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'.

refinement: His first producing credit was released in 2001, and subsequent releases have received critical acclaim. In 2003, Kid Creme gained acclaim for his remix of Kylie Minogue's "Love at First Sight." His single "Hypnotising” was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'.

text: in 2002, not 2003 Kid Creme gained acclaim for his remix of Kylie Minogue's "Love at First Sight."

refinement: His first producing credit was released in 2001, and subsequent releases have received critical acclaim. In 2002, Kid Creme gained acclaim for his remix of Kylie Minogue's "Love at First Sight." His single "Hypnotising” was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'.

answer: After being expelled from music college, Kid Crème set up his own home studio and began DJing at Club XXX in Brussels. He eventually secured a recording contract deal, and gained popularity through remixes and producing techno productions.

text: 'After being expelled from music college, Kid Crème set up his own home studio and began DJing at Club XXX in Brussels' describes his career before Club XXX. I would delete it.

refinement: He eventually secured a recording contract deal, and gained popularity through remixes and producing techno productions.

text: It is not specific enough. I would rewrite it.

text: It is omitted that his first producing credit was released in 2001.

refinement: His first producing credit was released in 2001.

text: It is omitted that in 2002, Kid Creme gained acclaim for his remix of Kylie Minogue's "Love at First Sight."

refinement: His first producing credit was released in 2001. In 2002, Kid Creme gained acclaim for his remix of Kylie Minogue's "Love at First Sight."

text: It is omitted that his single "Hypnotising” was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'.

refinement: His first producing credit was released in 2001. In 2002, Kid Creme gained acclaim for his remix of Kylie Minogue's "Love at First Sight." His single "Hypnotising” was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'.

answer: In 1994, Kid Creme set up his own label DTM Recordz and was offered a recording contract deal by R&S Records. At the same time Kid Creme was releasing house records through UK label Drop Dead Discs. It was Kid Creme's house remix of “Boom on Drop Dead” that caught Boy George's eye, and remixes for Junior Vasquez and Topazz followed. Kid Creme's first production under the name Kid Creme was signed to Jalapeño Records.

text: It is omitted that his single "Hypnotising” was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'

refinement: In 1994, Kid Creme set up his own label DTM Recordz and was offered a recording contract deal by R&S Records. At the same time Kid Creme was releasing house records through UK label Drop Dead Discs. It was Kid Creme's house remix of “Boom on Drop Dead” that caught Boy George's eye, and remixes for Junior Vasquez and Topazz followed. Kid Creme's first production under the name Kid Creme was signed to Jalapeño Records. His single "Hypnotising” was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the highlights of Kid Crème's career as a DJ?

answer: The highlights of Kid Creme's career as a DJ include doing well critically and commercially with his productions and remix work, having the single "Hypnotizing" reach #31 in UK Singles Chart, having Kylie Minogue request a remix of her single "Love at First Sight," and receiving support from well-known DJs like Dave Angel and Claude Young.

text: It is omitted that Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'. When Fatboy Slim played it at the Big Beach Boutique, he was watched by 250,000 people.

refinement: The highlights of Kid Creme's career as a DJ include doing well critically and commercially with his productions and remix work, having the single "Hypnotizing" reach #31 in UK Singles Chart, having Kylie Minogue request a remix of her single "Love at First Sight," and receiving support from well-known DJs like Dave Angel and Claude Young. Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'. When Fatboy Slim played it at the Big Beach Boutique, he was watched by 250,000 people.

answer: In 1994, Kid Crème set up his own label DTM Recordz and was offered a recording contract deal by R&S Records. He also began recording for UK label Drop Dead Discs at the time. In 2003, Kid Creme released his first production under his name entitled Austin's Groove, which was signed to Jalapeño Records, who licensed it to Ink in the UK and Subliminal in the US. The following year, he went on to remix “Austin's Groove” and “Everybody”, before later releasing “Kid Creme's bootleg of Raw Silk's “Do It To the Music” and renamed it Hypnotizing”, which was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart.

text: 'The highlights of Kid Creme's career as a DJ include doing well critically and commercially with his productions and remix work, having the single "Hypnotizing" reach #31 in UK Singles Chart, having Kylie Minogue request a remix of her single "Love at First Sight," and receiving support from well-known DJs like Dave Angel and Claude Young. Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'. When Fatboy Slim played it at the Big Beach Boutique, he was watched by 250,000 people.' does not answer the question directly. I would delete it.

refinement: In 2004, he went on to remix “Austin's Groove” and “Everybody”, before later releasing “Kid Creme's bootleg of Raw Silk's “Do It To the Music” and renamed it Hypnotizing”, which was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart.

text: It is omitted that Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'. When Fatboy Slim played it at the Big Beach Boutique, he was watched by 250,000 people.

refinement: In 2004, he went on to remix “Austin's Groove” and “Everybody”, before later releasing “Kid Creme's bootleg of Raw Silk's “Do It To the Music” and renamed it Hypnotizing”, which was released by Positiva and reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. Kid Creme's remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'. When Fatboy Slim played it at the Big Beach Boutique, he was watched by 250,000 people.

answer: Kid Crème's remix of "At Night", a song by Shakedown, was Seven Magazine's "Single of the Week". Fatboy Slim played it at the Big Beach Boutique, and 250,000 people ended up watching Kid Crème. Kylie Minogue heard the song while visiting her label and asked Kid Crème to remix her single "Love at First Sight". His single "Hyptnotising" reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. Kid Crème also caught the eye of legend Boy George with his remix "Boom on Drop Dead".

answer: Kid Creme's formative years were spent learning to spin hip-hop and studying music theory and classic piano before turning his attention to house music in 1991. He spent four years as an assistant engineer before being offered a recording contract deal by R&S Records in 1994. Kid Creme's house remix of “Boom on Drop Dead” caught Boy George's eye, and remixes of Junior Vasquez and Topazz followed. Kid Creme left a mark as a house producer when his bootleg of Raw Silk's “Do It To the Music” was successful in the UK Singles Chart. Most notably, Kid Creme was asked by Kylie Minogue to remix her single, “Love at First Sight”. From this, it is clear that Kid Creme has had a successful career as a DJ.

text: It is irrelevant that Kid Creme's formative years were spent learning to spin hip-hop and studying music theory and classic piano before turning his attention to house music in 1991. He spent four years as an assistant engineer before being offered a recording contract deal by R&S Records in 1994

refinement: Kid Creme's house remix of “Boom on Drop Dead” caught Boy George's eye, and remixes of Junior Vasquez and Topazz followed. Kid Creme left a mark as a house producer when his bootleg of Raw Silk's “Do It To the Music” was successful in the UK Singles Chart. Most notably, Kid Creme was asked by Kylie Minogue to remix her single, “Love at First Sight”. From this, it is clear that Kid Creme has had a successful career as a DJ.

text: It is omitted that his single "Hyptnotising" reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart.

refinement: Kid Creme's house remix of “Boom on Drop Dead” caught Boy George's eye, and remixes of Junior Vasquez and Topazz followed. Kid Creme left a mark as a house producer when his bootleg of Raw Silk's “Do It To the Music” was successful in the UK Singles Chart. His single "Hyptnotising" reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart, and his remix of “At Night”, a song by Shakedown, was Seven magazine's 'Single Of The Week'. Most notably, Kid Creme was asked by Kylie Minogue to remix her single, “Love at First Sight”. From this, it is clear that Kid Creme has had a successful career as a DJ.

answer:
Kid Crème's career started in 1987, when he was 19 years old. He went to work at Let's Go Studios as the assistant engineer. He was together with an Italian, Vito 'Junior Jack' Lucente, who had in the past introduced him to house music scene. In 1994, Kid Crème set up his own label DTM Recordz and was offered a recording contract by R&S Records. He also released house records through UK label Drop Dead Discs. In 1996, Kid Crème released “Boom on Drop Dead”, which caught Boy George's eye and saw a number of keen remixed tunes by Kid Crème. Kid Crème then had remixed tunes by Junior Vasquez, Topazz, and more. In 2004, Kid Crème remixed the song “At Night” by Shakedown. Kid Crème was approached by Kylie Minogue to remix her single “Love at first sight”.

The article describes Kid Crème as a house music DJ.

text: It is irrelevant that Kid Crème's career started in 1987 when he was 19 years old. He went to work at Let's Go Studios as an assistant engineer. He was together with an Italian, Vito 'Junior Jack' Lucente, who had in the past introduced him to the house music scene. In 1994, Kid Crème set up his own label DTM Recordz and was offered a recording contract by R&S Records. He also released house records through UK label Drop Dead Discs.

refinement:
In 1996, Kid Crème released “Boom on Drop Dead”, which caught Boy George's eye and saw a number of keen remixed tunes by Kid Crème. Kid Crème then had remixed tunes by Junior Vasquez, Topazz, and more. In 2004, Kid Crème remixed the song “At Night” by Shakedown. Kid Crème was approached by Kylie Minogue to remix her single “Love at first sight”.

The article describes Kid Crème as a house music DJ.

text: It is omitted that his single "Hyptnotising" reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart.

refinement:
In 1996, Kid Crème released “Boom on Drop Dead”, which caught Boy George's eye and saw a number of keen remixed tunes by Kid Crème. Kid Crème then had remixed tunes by Junior Vasquez, Topazz, and more. His single "Hyptnotising" reached number 31 in the UK Singles Chart. In 2004, Kid Crème remixed the song “At Night” by Shakedown. Kid Crème was approached by Kylie Minogue to remix her single “Love at first sight”.

The article describes Kid Crème as a house music DJ.


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My mom only had one eye. I hated her… She was such an embarrassment. She cooked for students and teachers to support the family.
There was this one day during elementary school where my mom came to say hello to me. I was so embarrassed.
How could she do this to me? I ignored her, threw her a hateful look and ran out. The next day at school one of my classmates said, “EEEE, your mom only has one eye!”
I wanted to bury myself. I also wanted my mom to just disappear. I confronted her that day and said, “If you’re only gonna make me a laughing stock, why don’t you just die?”
My mom did not respond… I didn’t even stop to think for a second about what I had said, because I was full of anger. I was oblivious to her feelings.
I wanted out of that house, and have nothing to do with her. So I studied real hard, got a chance to go abroad to study.
Then, I got married. I bought a house of my own. I had kids of my own. I was happy with my life, my kids and the comforts. Then one day, my Mother came to visit me. She hadn’t seen me in years and she didn’t even meet her grandchildren.
When she stood by the door, my children laughed at her, and I yelled at her for coming over uninvited. I screamed at her, “How dare you come to my house and scare my children! GET OUT OF HERE! NOW!!!”
And to this, my mother quietly answered, “Oh, I’m so sorry. I may have gotten the wrong address.” – and she disappeared out of sight.
One day, a letter regarding a school reunion came to my house. So I lied to my wife that I was going on a business trip. After the reunion, I went to the old shack just out of curiosity.
My neighbors said that she died. I did not shed a single tear. They handed me a letter that she had wanted me to have.
“My dearest son,
I think of you all the time. I’m sorry that I came to your house and scared your children.
I was so glad when I heard you were coming for the reunion. But I may not be able to even get out of bed to see you. I’m sorry that I was a constant embarrassment to you when you were growing up.
You see……..when you were very little, you got into an accident, and lost your eye. As a mother, I couldn’t stand watching you having to grow up with one eye. So I gave you mine.
I was so proud of my son who was seeing a whole new world for me, in my place, with that eye.
With all my love to you,
Your mother.”

title: My "ONE EYED MOM"

question: What is ironic about the protagonist hating his mother for only having one eye?

answer: Having one eye is a natural deformity, as opposed to a birth defect, and hating his mother for having one eye due to his displeasure of being different from the majority of people in his life was hypocritical.

text: I believe the answer is that it was him who was supposed to live with one eye, and his mother gave him hers.

answer: It is ironic because the protagonist became so successful in life, when his mother gave him her eye.

text: The first part of the sentence is a bit unclear and maybe unnecessary.

refinement: It is ironic because he was the one who was supposed to live with only one eye, but his mother gave him hers.

answer: He had lost an eye in an accident and his mother donated her eye to him.

text: "when you were very little, you got into an accident, and lost your eye. As a mother, I couldn’t stand watching you having to grow up with one eye. So I gave you mine."

question: Why was the protagonist embarrassed about his mother's one eye?

answer: The protagonist was embarrassed by his mother's one eye because she stood out in comparison to other kids, and he thought that she was an embarrassment. He believed that she looked "sad and pitiful" and was embarrassed that she had to bring him to school, as he was seen as her "mark of shame."

text: The answer is too wordy and repeats the same point several times. It also has some unverified information.

refinement: The protagonist was embarrassed by his mother's one eye because she stood out.

text: The way other children mocked the protagonist should be mentioned.

refinement: The protagonist was embarrassed by his mother's one eye because she stood out, and other kids mocked him because of his mother.

text: "She was such an embarrassment."

answer: The other children made fun of her.

text: "The next day at school one of my classmates said, “EEEE, your mom only has one eye!"

answer: The protagonist was embarrassed about his mother's one eye because people would make him a laughingstock. He was ashamed of his mother and wished she would disappear. As he became a proud and successful adult, he was angered and embarrassed that his mother came to visit him unexpectedly.

text: The last part about the protagonist's adult life could be removed.

refinement: The protagonist was embarrassed about his mother's one eye because people would make him a laughingstock. He was ashamed of his mother and wished she would disappear.

text:
"The next day at school one of my classmates said, “EEEE, your mom only has one eye!"
"If you’re only gonna make me a laughing stock, why don’t you just die?”

question: How did the protagonist get the letter from his mom?

text: There is no answer at all.

answer: The protagonist's mom wrote him a letter, came to visit his home, and left him the note.

text: He got the letter from his mother's neighbors after she died.

refinement: He got the letter from his mother's neighbors after she died.

answer: It was left with an old neighbor to be given to him.

text: There is no evidence that the neighbor was an old man. In fact, the text says 'neighbors.'

refinement: It was left with his mother's neighbors to be given to him.

text: "My neighbors said that she died. I did not shed a single tear. They handed me a letter that she had wanted me to have."

question: Did the protagonist feel bad about how he had treated his mother after the revelation that she had sacrificed for him?

answer: Based on the passage, the protagonist does not seem to regret how he had treated his mother in the past. In fact, he feels no remorse when he learns of her death or the revelation of what she had done for him when he was young.

text: The protagonist's reaction to the letter is not in the text at all.

answer: After learning the truth about his mother, it is clear that the protagonist feels regret and shame. He wishes he had treated her better when he had the chance, but he realizes it is too late now.

text: The protagonist's reaction to the letter is not in the text at all.

answer: Doesn't say

question: Write a ~6 sentence summary.

answer: A man, angry at his mother for being an embarrassment, slammed the door in her face one day and rudely refused to let her see the grandchildren he had with his wife. The boy had become a man and found success, and he still hated his mother, who provided for their family when he was young by working as a cook for students and teachers. She comes to his house expecting just to say hello but he screams and tells her to leave. Angry at being uncomfortable, he tries to leave and goes to the old shack she lives in out of curiosity. He meets the neighbors who tell him she has died but he doesn't shed a single tear. They give him a letter she had written for him and he reads it.

text: There are some problems with the order of the events.

refinement: A boy hated his mother for being an embarrassment, even though she provided for their family by working as a cook for students and teachers. He became a successful adult, and he still hated his mother. When she unexpectedly came to visit him, he yelled at her and told her to leave, not even letting her see her grandchildren. Angry at being uncomfortable, he tries to leave and goes to the old shack she lives in out of curiosity. He meets the neighbors who tell him she has died but he doesn't shed a single tear. They give him a letter she had written for him and he reads it.

text: The whole situation around the eye should be explained.

refinement: A boy hated his mother for having one eye and being an embarrassment, even though she provided for their family by working as a cook for students and teachers. He became a successful adult, and he still hated his mother. When she unexpectedly came to visit him, he yelled at her and told her to leave, not even letting her see her grandchildren. Angry at being uncomfortable, he tries to leave and goes to the old shack she lives in out of curiosity. He meets the neighbors who tell him she has died but he doesn't shed a single tear. They give him a letter she had written for him and he reads it. It is revealed that he had lost an eye in an accident and that his mother had given him her own eye.

text: The way he visited the shack is unclear.

refinement: A boy hated his mother for having one eye and being an embarrassment, even though she provided for their family by working as a cook for students and teachers. He became a successful adult, and he still hated his mother. When she unexpectedly came to visit him, he yelled at her and told her to leave, not even letting her see her grandchildren. One day, when he comes to his hometown for a reunion, goes to the old shack she lives in out of curiosity. He meets the neighbors who tell him she has died but he doesn't shed a single tear. They give him a letter she had written for him and he reads it. It is revealed that he had lost an eye in an accident and that his mother had given him her own eye.

text:
"I hated her."
"She was such an embarrassment."
"She cooked for students and teachers to support the family."
"I studied real hard and got a chance to go abroad to study."
"I got married. I bought a house of my own. I had kids of my own. I was happy with my life, my kids, and the comforts."
"One day, Mother came to visit me."
"I yelled at her for coming over uninvited."
"My neighbors said that she died. I did not shed a single tear. They handed me a letter that she had wanted me to have."

answer:
At the time of this story the narrator was probably a kid in elementary school. His/her mom has only one eye. When he/she approaches her in school and is ridiculed mercilessly by the classmates he says spiteful things to his/her mother. That night he/she says the spiteful things again and his mother leaves without saying anything. The narrator makes it to the top and is happily married with kids but regardless, he/she always looked down on his mom who only has one eye. The narrator's mom comes to visit him/her one day after many years. Awkwardly his/her kids laughed at her and he/she yells at his/her mother to get out. Sadly the mother leaves without having the slightest bit of fight from her.
When he/she goes to the reunion, he/she sees that his/her mother has passed away. Sad still, he/she doesn't shed a tear. The narrator asks the kids who live in the old shack, his/her neighbors, what happened to his mother. They tell him/her that she died. They give him/her a letter that says no more but hearing the truth from someone else and knowing that his mom took a risk for him so he could see the world keeps him/her speechless and still indifferent to her death.

text: The narrator is clearly male.

refinement:
At the time of this story the narrator was probably a kid in elementary school. His mom has only one eye. When she approaches him in school, he is ridiculed mercilessly by the classmates, and he says spiteful things to his mother. That night he says the spiteful things again and his mother leaves without saying anything. The narrator makes it to the top and is happily married with kids but regardless, he always looked down on his mom who only has one eye. The narrator's mom comes to visit him one day after many years. Awkwardly his kids laughed at her and he yells at his mother to get out. Sadly the mother leaves without having the slightest bit of fight from her.
When he goes to the reunion, he sees that his mother has passed away. Sad still, he doesn't shed a tear. The narrator asks the kids who live in the old shack, his neighbors, what happened to his mother. They tell him that she died. They give him a letter that says no more but hearing the truth from someone else and knowing that his mom took a risk for him so he could see the world keeps him speechless and still indifferent to her death.

text: There is no mention of any kids now living at the shack in the text.

refinement:
At the time of this story the narrator was probably a kid in elementary school. His mom has only one eye. When she approaches him in school, he is ridiculed mercilessly by the classmates, and he says spiteful things to his mother. That night he says the spiteful things again and his mother leaves without saying anything. The narrator makes it to the top and is happily married with kids but regardless, he always looked down on his mom who only has one eye. The narrator's mom comes to visit him one day after many years. Awkwardly his kids laughed at her and he yells at his mother to get out. Sadly the mother leaves without having the slightest bit of fight from her.
When he goes to the reunion, he sees that his mother has passed away. Sad still, he doesn't shed a tear. The narrator asks his neighbors what happened to his mother. They tell him that she died. They give him a letter that says no more but hearing the truth from someone else and knowing that his mom took a risk for him so he could see the world keeps him speechless and still indifferent to her death.

text: The narrator saying spiteful things is repeated twice, and it was not his mother who left. He went abroad as soon as he could.

refinement:
At the time of this story the narrator was probably a kid in elementary school. His mom has only one eye. When she approaches him in school, he is ridiculed mercilessly by the classmates, and he says spiteful things to his mother. The narrator makes it to the top and is happily married with kids but regardless, he always looked down on his mom who only has one eye. The narrator's mom comes to visit him one day after many years. Awkwardly his kids laughed at her and he yells at his mother to get out. Sadly the mother leaves without having the slightest bit of fight from her.
When he goes to the reunion, he sees that his mother has passed away. Sad still, he doesn't shed a tear. The narrator asks his neighbors what happened to his mother. They tell him that she died. They give him a letter that says no more but hearing the truth from someone else and knowing that his mom took a risk for him so he could see the world keeps him speechless and still indifferent to her death.

text: It should be clear what the truth was.

refinement:
At the time of this story the narrator was probably a kid in elementary school. His mom has only one eye. When she approaches him in school, he is ridiculed mercilessly by the classmates, and he says spiteful things to his mother. The narrator makes it to the top and is happily married with kids but regardless, he always looked down on his mom who only has one eye. The narrator's mom comes to visit him one day after many years. Awkwardly his kids laughed at her and he yells at his mother to get out. Sadly the mother leaves without having the slightest bit of fight from her.
When he goes to the reunion, he sees that his mother has passed away. Sad still, he doesn't shed a tear. The narrator asks his neighbors what happened to his mother. They tell him that she died. They give him a letter that reveals he had an accident in which he lost his eye, and that his mother had given him hers. He is speechless and still indifferent to her death.

text: His reaction to the letter is not in the text at all.

refinement:
At the time of this story the narrator was probably a kid in elementary school. His mom has only one eye. When she approaches him in school, he is ridiculed mercilessly by the classmates, and he says spiteful things to his mother. The narrator makes it to the top and is happily married with kids but regardless, he always looked down on his mom who only has one eye. The narrator's mom comes to visit him one day after many years. Awkwardly his kids laughed at her and he yells at his mother to get out. Sadly the mother leaves without having the slightest bit of fight from her.
When he goes to the reunion, he sees that his mother has passed away. Sad still, he doesn't shed a tear. The narrator asks his neighbors what happened to his mother. They tell him that she died. They give him a letter that reveals he had an accident in which he lost his eye, and that his mother had given him hers.

text:
"My mom only had one eye. I hated her… She was such an embarrassment."
'The next day at school one of my classmates said, “EEEE, your mom only has one eye!”'
"Then, I got married. I bought a house of my own. I had kids of my own. I was happy with my life, my kids and the comforts."
"When she stood by the door, my children laughed at her, and I yelled at her for coming over uninvited."
"After the reunion, I went to the old shack just out of curiosity."
"My neighbors said that she died. I did not shed a single tear. They handed me a letter that she had wanted me to have."

answer: The narrator had a mother with only one eye. He hated her after she made him an embarrassment at school during his younger years. Later, he got married and had kids of his own. After one day his mother came over uninvited. She didn't meet her grandchildren and the narrator challenged her for coming. She then left. A letter was sent to him regarding the school reunion. He went to their old shack to see her alive, and handed him a letter that read, "I was glad when I heard you were coming for the reunion. I may not be able to even get out of bed to see you. I'm sorry that I was a constant embarrassment to you when you were growing up. You see, when you were very little, you got into an accident, and lost your eye. As a mother, I couldn't stand watching you having to grow up with one eye. So I gave you mine. I was so proud of my son who was seeing a whole new world for me, in my place, with that eye."

text: His mother wasn't alive when he visited.

refinement: The narrator had a mother with only one eye. He hated her after she made him an embarrassment at school during his younger years. Later, he got married and had kids of his own. After one day his mother came over uninvited. She didn't meet her grandchildren and the narrator challenged her for coming. She then left. A letter was sent to him regarding the school reunion. He went to their old shack, but the neighbors told him he died and gave him a letter from her. It said: "I was glad when I heard you were coming for the reunion. I may not be able to even get out of bed to see you. I'm sorry that I was a constant embarrassment to you when you were growing up. You see, when you were very little, you got into an accident, and lost your eye. As a mother, I couldn't stand watching you having to grow up with one eye. So I gave you mine. I was so proud of my son who was seeing a whole new world for me, in my place, with that eye."

text: The letter should not be quoted verbatim.

refinement: The narrator had a mother with only one eye. He hated her after she made him an embarrassment at school during his younger years. Later, he got married and had kids of his own. After one day his mother came over uninvited. She didn't meet her grandchildren and the narrator challenged her for coming. She then left. A letter was sent to him regarding the school reunion. He went to their old shack, but the neighbors told him he died and gave him a letter from her. It revealed that he had an accident and lost his eye, and that she had given him her own eye.

text:
"My mom only had one eye. I hated her"
"She was such an embarrassment."
"Then, I got married. I bought a house of my own. I had kids of my own. I was happy with my life, my kids and the comforts."
"I yelled at her for coming over uninvited."
"I was so glad when I heard you were coming for the reunion. But I may not be able to even get out of bed to see you. I’m sorry that I was a constant embarrassment to you when you were growing up. You see……..when you were very little, you got into an accident, and lost your eye. As a mother, I couldn’t stand watching you having to grow up with one eye. So I gave you mine. I was so proud of my son who was seeing a whole new world for me, in my place, with that eye."

answer: The narrator resents their mother for only having one eye due to an accident. He gets very angry and runs away and tells his mother he wants her to die.

text: The narrator's mother didn't lose her eye in an accident.

refinement: The narrator resents their mother for only having one eye. He gets very angry and runs away and tells his mother he wants her to die.

text: He doesn't run away. He goes to school abroad.

refinement: The narrator resents their mother for only having one eye. One day, he tells his mother he wants her to die, and soon, he goes to study abroad.

text: A lot of information is missing, especially about the narrator's adult life and his late mother's letter.

refinement: The narrator resents their mother for only having one eye. One day, he tells his mother he wants her to die, and soon, he goes to study abroad. He leads a successful adult life, and when his mother comes to visit him, he yells at her to go away. When it is time for his school reunion, he goes to visit his mother, but the neighbors tell him she has died. They give him a letter from her, which reveals that he had lost his eye in an accident and that she had given him hers.

text:
"My mom only had one eye. I hated her"
'“If you’re only gonna make me a laughing stock, why don’t you just die?”'

answer: The protagonist is embarrassed by and angry at his mother for only having one eye. The other children at school make fun of him for it and he's driven to get away from her by any means possible. After completely cutting her out of his life, she resurfaces appearing at his home. He chases her away when his children are shocked to see she has only one eye. After he visits his old school for a reunion, he goes to the old shack where he used to live, but the neighbors tell him she has died. They present him with a letter in which she apologizes for always embarrassing him and explains that he had lost an eye in an accident and she donated her eye to him so he wouldn't have to live life with only one eye.

text:
"My mom only had one eye. I hated her… She was such an embarrassment."
'The next day at school one of my classmates said, “EEEE, your mom only has one eye!”'
"I wanted out of that house, and have nothing to do with her."
"Then one day, my Mother came to visit me."
"I yelled at her for coming over uninvited."
"After the reunion, I went to the old shack just out of curiosity."
"My neighbors said that she died. I did not shed a single tear. They handed me a letter that she had wanted me to have."
"I’m sorry that I was a constant embarrassment to you when you were growing up."
"You see……..when you were very little, you got into an accident, and lost your eye. As a mother, I couldn’t stand watching you having to grow up with one eye. So I gave you mine."

answer: The narrator hated his mother because she only had one eye. He called her an embarrassment because of this. He gets married and moves abroad. His mother visits, but he yells at her to leave and she leaves quickly. One day he gets a letter about his school reunion and goes to visit the old house he lived in, but learns his mother passed away. He feels no remorse. In a last letter, his mother confesses that she gave him a transplanted eye when he was young after his accident.

text: The 'transplanted eye' could be misleading.

refinement: The narrator hated his mother because she only had one eye. He called her an embarrassment because of this. He gets married and moves abroad. His mother visits, but he yells at her to leave and she leaves quickly. One day he gets a letter about his school reunion and goes to visit the old house he lived in, but learns his mother passed away. He feels no remorse. In a last letter, his mother confesses that she gave him her own eye after he lost his in an accident.

text:
"My mom only had one eye. I hated her… She was such an embarrassment."
"So I studied real hard, got a chance to go abroad to study."
"Then, I got married. I bought a house of my own. I had kids of my own. I was happy with my life, my kids and the comforts."
"Then one day, my Mother came to visit me."
"I yelled at her for coming over uninvited."
"After the reunion, I went to the old shack just out of curiosity."
"My neighbors said that she died. I did not shed a single tear."
"You see……..when you were very little, you got into an accident, and lost your eye. As a mother, I couldn’t stand watching you having to grow up with one eye. So I gave you mine."


text: There are certain moments in the middle of chaos where clarity briefly resurfaces. Moments where you become painfully aware of just how out of control the world has become. I experienced one of these moments three weeks into my freshman year of college. I was sitting in my english class like any other day when some girl across the class started staring at me. While I stared back I noticed the care she put into her appearance. She was wearing a pale blue that perfectly complemented her dark skin, matching shoes, a white bow in her hair, and a noticeable amount of make-up. Most guys my age would just think “damn she’s hot”, or something along those lines, but all I could think was “why all the effort?”. She was obviously attractive, why was she trying so hard to make herself look even better? I was sure she could have slept for at least an hour or two longer if she hadn’t taken so much care and she would have looked just as good as any other girl in the classroom. While I was contemplating the purpose of her effort, she winked at me. I sat there puzzled because I didn’t know this girl at all. My puzzlement probably showed on my face because she smiled and licked her lips slowly, wiping her tongue from the right to the left and back right again. All I could think was “The only thing this girl knows about me is that I’m attractive, she doesn’t know who I am and she doesn’t care.” While I was thinking this, I watched as she smirked, leaned over her desk, squeezed her breasts, in between her arms and kissed the air in my direction. Out of embarrassment my eyes shifted to the corner of the class. There I watched as the hand of a shaggy haired student retreated from the inside of his elbow. My eyes caught the flash of a needle and my realization of what he was doing came in complete synchronization with the expression of euphoria that was painted on his face. My disgust turned my eyes back to the girl who had planted her face in her palm and gave me a wink when my eyes met hers. Before I could react I felt a hand land on my shoulder. I turned to meet the face of a cocky looking red haired guy. “ay bro I can get you the answers to this test, for the right price”.First I felt my blood get hot. Then I felt the sting of his face against my knuckles. It was a reflex. A response my surroundings. What happened next was more of a reckless impulse. I flipped my desk over in the process of standing up, and yelled at the top of my lungs “this is fucking bullshit!”. Then clarity came. I realized exactly how I appeared. So I grabbed my backpack, stood up straight, and marched out of the classroom.

title: I woke up one morning and wrote this, this is my first short story so I am very open to criticism

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Explain the actions of the guy the narrator spots at the corner of the room.

answer: Trying to buy drugs from a dealer that the narrator can't see.

text: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: The guy in the corner of the room was trying to buy drugs from a dealer that the narrator can't see.

text: The guy in the corner of the room is doing drugs, not buying drugs.

refinement: The guy in the corner of the room was doing drugs.

text: The guy in the corner of the room is doing drugs.

answer: The guy at the corner of the room was injecting drugs. The narrator notices this while he is looking away from the girl across the room who is sexually advancing on him. The guy at the corner of the room appears to be under the influence of drugs and ignores what is happening around him. This causes the narrator to become angry and to react impulsively with violence. This is further proof of the chaos in the world around the narrator which he views as completely out of control.

text: The answer does answer the question, but then adds three sentences of extra stuff.

refinement: The guy at the corner of the room was injecting drugs.

text: The guy in the corner of the room was injecting drugs.

answer: The guy uses a needle and then experiences euphoria. This indicates he injected some sort of drug into himself.

text: The guy in the corner of the room was injecting drugs.

answer: The shaggy haired student was using a needle to inject himself with drugs. Despite being disgusted by the scene in the classroom, the narrator nevertheless felt compelled to look. When the red-haired student touches his shoulder, the narrator reacts by hitting him and flipping his desk over. The narrator then realizes how immature and out of control he must appear to those around him. He walks out in a blaze of fury, but at the same time is clear-headed enough to realize that what he is doing is not helping anything. The shaggy haired student's actions illustrate how addiction can take people down paths they never intended or imagined.

text: The answer does answer the question, but then adds three sentences of extra stuff.

refinement: The shaggy haired student was using a needle to inject himself with drugs.

text: The answer could describe the character the same way the question does.

refinement: The shaggy haired student in the corner of the room was using a needle to inject himself with drugs.

text: The guy in the corner of the room was injecting drugs.

answer: Answer the white guy at the corner of the room notices the narrator. When his eyes met with the narrator's after observing the use of a needle by a smoke, he sees a flash of a needle. The narrator then came to the realization what the man was doing.

text: There was no smoke in the passage.

refinement: Answer the white guy at the corner of the room notices the narrator. When his eyes met with the narrator's, he sees a flash of a needle. The narrator then came to the realization what the man was doing.

text: The first sentence of the answer makes no sense.

refinement: When the guy at the corner of the room's eyes met with the narrator's, the narrator sees a flash of a needle. The narrator then came to the realization what the man was doing.

text: The answer doesn't infer what the guy in the corner of the room was doing.

refinement: When the guy at the corner of the room's eyes met with the narrator's, the narrator sees a flash of a needle. The narrator then came to the realization that the man was doing drugs.

text: The guy in the corner of the room was injecting drugs with a needle.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the narrator mean when he says he realized how he looked?

answer: The narrator means that he looked unhinged. He was frustrated and angry at the situation, which he probably realized made him seem like an irrational person. This frustration was manifest in flipping over a desk in the middle of the classroom and yelling. The realization that he looked crazy, or at least irrational, has given the narrator some clarity in the midst of chaos. This clarity makes him realize that making any effort doesn't matter in this environment, which is currently out of control.

text: The answer could be reduced down to its first two sentences, but the rest of it provides some clearer detail.

refinement: The narrator means that he looked unhinged. He was frustrated and angry at the situation, which he probably realized made him seem like an irrational person.

text: The narrator "flipped [his] desk over in the process of standing up, and yelled at the top of [his] lungs “this is fucking bullshit!”."

answer: He probably figures that the girl probably tries to land guys and use her power to manipulate them.

text: The answer does not answer the question.

refinement: From the perspective of an uninvolved student, he just gets up, punches a guy, and shouts "this is fucking bullshit!" Nobody knows the build-up of events that would explain his action.

answer: The narrator recognizes that his outburst in the classroom likely made him look rash and unprofessional. He also realizes that his outburst is disproportionate to the cause of his frustration. This realization not only leaves him feeling embarrassed, but also more aware of the chaotic state of the world around him.

text: The answer could be reduced down to its first sentence, but the rest of it provides some clearer detail.

refinement: The narrator recognizes that his outburst in the classroom likely made him look rash and unprofessional.

text: The narrator "flipped [his] desk over in the process of standing up, and yelled at the top of [his] lungs “this is fucking bullshit!”."

answer: The narrator realized he made a terrible first impression by yelling at the top of his lungs in a room full of classmates.

text: This was not the narrator's first impression, but it is still a bad impression.

refinement: The narrator realized he made a terrible impression by yelling at the top of his lungs in a room full of classmates.

text: The narrator "flipped [his] desk over in the process of standing up, and yelled at the top of [his] lungs “this is fucking bullshit!”."

answer: From the perspective of an uninvolved student, he just gets up, punches a guy, and shouts "this is fucking bullshit!" Nobody knows the build-up of events that would explain his action.

text: The narrator "felt the sting of his face against [his] knuckles" as he punched another student.

text: The narrator "flipped [his] desk over in the process of standing up, and yelled at the top of [his] lungs “this is fucking bullshit!”."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why doesn't the narrator think that the girl is hot?

answer: He acknowledges that she's attractive. However, he thinks the extra effort she spent in making herself even more attractive is wasted effort.

text: The narrator thinks the girl is "obviously attractive."

text: The narrator wonders why "she trying so hard to make herself look even better."

answer: The narrator thinks that the girl's efforts at making herself look even better are pointless and unnecessary. The narrator also believes that the girl only sees him as attractive and doesn't care who he really is as a person. The narrator is disgusted by how cavalierly the girl treats herself and those around her with respect to making herself more appealing, and sees this as a sign of how out of control things are in the world around him. He views her reaction with the shaggy-haired student as evidence of the chaotic nature of the world.

text: The answer could be reduced down to its first sentence, but the rest of it provides some clearer detail.

refinement: The narrator thinks that the girl's efforts at making herself look even better are pointless and unnecessary.

text: The narrator thinks the girl is "obviously attractive."

text: The narrator wonders why "she trying so hard to make herself look even better."

answer: He thinks that she shouldn't be spending so much time on her appearances.

text: The narrator does think the girl is attractive.

refinement: The narrator does think the girl is attractive, but he thinks that she shouldn't be spending so much time on her appearances.

text: The narrator wonders why "she trying so hard to make herself look even better."

answer: He was thinking about the pressure to look good from a young age.

text: The text doesn't say anything about pressure to look good from a young age.

refinement: He acknowledges that she's attractive. However, he thinks the extra effort she spent in making herself even more attractive is wasted effort.

answer: The narrator is critical of the girl's excessive effort put into her appearance. The narrator believes that the girl could sleep longer if she didn't go to such great lengths to appear more attractive. These thoughts turn to discomfort when the girl winked and licked her lips. The narrator was embarrassed by the girl's behavior, and this discomfort is magnified when he later sees a fellow student using a needle. The clearer reality became that the world has become chaotic and people no longer act rationally. The narrator reacts by punching the redheaded student, flipping the desk and shouting. This demonstrates that the narrator feels negatively about the girl's excessive and misplaced efforts. This is likely due to values of honesty and authenticity.

text: The answer could be reduced down to its first sentence, but the rest of it provides some clearer detail.

refinement: The narrator is critical of the girl's excessive effort put into her appearance.

text: The narrator thinks the girl is "obviously attractive."

text: The narrator wonders why "she trying so hard to make herself look even better."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why does the narrator react the way he does?

answer: He is confused and desensitized to all the events happening around him.

text: The narrator is not desensitized to those events, he is frustrated by them.

refinement: He is confused and frustrated with all the events happening around him.

text: The narrator is confused by the events happening around him.

answer: The narrator reacts with anger and violence because he is frustrated with the amount of chaos around him. He sees the girl trying to make herself look more attractive as well as the drug use happening in the corner and feels frustrated by the lack of control. This leads to his uncontrolled outburst caused by his anger and frustration.

text: The answer could be reduced down to its first sentence, but the rest of it provides some clearer detail.

refinement: The narrator reacts with anger and violence because he is frustrated with the amount of chaos around him.

text: The narrator is frustrated by the events happening around him.

answer: The narrator reacts the way he does because he has had a moment of clarity. He becomes painfully aware of just how out of control the situation around him is. This causes him to feel disgusted by the girl disrupting the class and by the red-haired student trying to make money off of the test. His reflexive response is to flip his desk over, yelling at the top of his lungs. He realizes how this may be seen by others and eventually has an epiphany that his response is cynical and an overreaction to the situation. He then takes the proper action and marches out of the classroom.

text: The answer could be reduced down to its first two sentences, but the rest of it provides some clearer detail.

refinement: The narrator reacts the way he does because he has had a moment of clarity. He becomes painfully aware of just how out of control the situation around him is.

text: The narrator is frustrated by the events happening around him.

answer: The girl was apparently winking and licking her lips at him but he doesn't know her. She also makes gestures that imply she is aroused. The narrator is young and embarrassed in the face of his peers and in opposition to adult social mores.

text: The girl was only one of many factors frustrating the narrator.

refinement: The narrator saw things happening around him that he thought were immoral, and became frustrated because of it.

text: The girl was making advances towards the narrator.

answer: The series of events, especially the injection of the drug, is very unusual for a college classroom.

text: The events were unusual and frustrated the narrator.

refinement: The series of events, especially the injection of the drug, is very unusual for a college classroom and this frustrated the narrator.

text: The events were unusual for a college classroom.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: The narrator talks about everything being messed up the world. Three weeks into freshman year he notices a girl that he thinks is literally trying to make herself prettier. She winks at him, and he watches as the guy across the class shoots up some sort of drug. The girl winks at him and he thinks, "What the hell? She literally has no idea who I am, and she is only interested in how attractive I look?" Then the counselor's creepy advisor just grabs his shoulder. Then he moves to the girl and accuses him of getting answers to the test for money, then accusing the girl of the same and hits the girl. Then the narrator thinks clearer, realizes the girl is probably just horny, and throws a tantrum. He packs up his things and storms out.

text: There was no counselor's advisor offering the narrator test answers, just some guy.

refinement: The narrator talks about everything being messed up the world. Three weeks into freshman year he notices a girl that he thinks is literally trying to make herself prettier. She winks at him, and he watches as the guy across the class shoots up some sort of drug. The girl winks at him and he thinks, "What the hell? She literally has no idea who I am, and she is only interested in how attractive I look?" Then some guy grabs his shoulder. Then he moves to the girl and accuses him of getting answers to the test for money, then accusing the girl of the same and hits the girl. Then the narrator thinks clearer, realizes the girl is probably just horny, and throws a tantrum. He packs up his things and storms out.

text: The guy tries selling test answers, not accusing people.

refinement: The narrator talks about everything being messed up the world. Three weeks into freshman year he notices a girl that he thinks is literally trying to make herself prettier. She winks at him, and he watches as the guy across the class shoots up some sort of drug. The girl winks at him and he thinks, "What the hell? She literally has no idea who I am, and she is only interested in how attractive I look?" Then some guy grabs his shoulder. Then he offers the narrator test answers, and the narrator punches him. Then the narrator thinks clearer, realizes the girl is probably just horny, and throws a tantrum. He packs up his things and storms out.

text: The girl is making advances towards him.

text: The guy across the room is doing drugs.

text: Someone does offer the narrator test answers.

text: The narrator does throw a tantrum.

answer: The narrator wakes up one morning to see a girl staring at them from across the class. The girl is wearing a lot of makeup, something the narrator can't understand. Then, the girl winks at the narrator and licks her lips, then proceeds to tease them by squeezing her breasts. The narrator sees a student doing drugs, and in embarrassment, flips their desk over in anger. The narrator realizes in that moment that what they are doing makes them look ridiculous and decides to leave.

text: The answer left out the person trying to sell the narrator test answers.

refinement: The narrator wakes up one morning to see a girl staring at them from across the class. The girl is wearing a lot of makeup, something the narrator can't understand. Then, the girl winks at the narrator and licks her lips, then proceeds to tease them by squeezing her breasts. The narrator sees a student doing drugs, and someone tries selling the narrator test answers. The narrator flips their desk over in anger. The narrator realizes in that moment that what they are doing makes them look ridiculous and decides to leave.

text: The girl is making advances towards him.

text: The guy across the room is doing drugs.

text: The narrator does throw a tantrum.

answer: A girl teases the narrator while in class with her explicitly sexual actions, prompting him to look away for a moment. He sees a guy injecting himself with some sort of drug. Another guy approaches him with an offer of selling the answers to the test. He punches the guy, flips the table, and shouts "This is bullshit!" before realizing how he looks and flees the room.

text: The girl is making advances towards him.

text: The guy across the room is doing drugs.

text: Someone does offer the narrator test answers.

text: The narrator does throw a tantrum.

answer: The narrator is sitting in an English class with his college classmates. Across the room, one of his fellow students, a girl, begins to flirt with him. The narrator is confused and angry because he doesn't know her and doesn't know why she is flaunting herself towards him. He then spots one of his fellow students using an illegal drug. He becomes enraged and violent and punches the drug user in the face. Before he can do anything else, he realizes how out of control the world has become.

text: The answer left out the person trying to sell test answers.

refinement: The narrator is sitting in an English class with his college classmates. Across the room, one of his fellow students, a girl, begins to flirt with him. The narrator is confused and angry because he doesn't know her and doesn't know why she is flaunting herself towards him. He then spots one of his fellow students using an illegal drug, and someone tries to sell him test answers. He becomes enraged and violent and punches him the face. Before he can do anything else, he realizes how out of control the world has become.

text: The girl is making advances towards him.

text: The guy across the room is doing drugs.

text: The narrator does throw a tantrum.

answer: The narrator wakes up one morning in his college english class. A girl across the room starts staring at him, and while he watches her, he can't help but notice her elaborate appearance. Suddenly, she winks at him and licks her lips, and he realizes that she has no interest in who he is as a person. Later, the narrator sees a fellow student shooting up drugs in the corner. Angry and disgusted, he flips his desk over and storms out of the room. This moment of clarity makes him realize just how out of control the world has become.

text: The answer left out the person trying to sell the narrator test answers.

refinement: The narrator wakes up one morning in his college english class. A girl across the room starts staring at him, and while he watches her, he can't help but notice her elaborate appearance. Suddenly, she winks at him and licks her lips, and he realizes that she has no interest in who he is as a person. Later, the narrator sees a fellow student shooting up drugs in the corner. Another person tries selling the narrator test answers. Angry and disgusted, he flips his desk over and storms out of the room. This moment of clarity makes him realize just how out of control the world has become.

text: The girl is making advances towards him.

text: The guy across the room is doing drugs.

text: The narrator does throw a tantrum.


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ROSALIND MATHILDE FRANCK (1866–1956) was one of the earliest French women aviators, having learnt to fly in the summer of 1910. Her last flight was on 1 August 1910 in a Maurice Farman biplane when she took off from Boldon Flatts, Cleadon Village in the northeast of England. After hitting a flagpole the plane crashed, killing a boy, although she only sustained minor injuries.[1][2]

Flights

In an article published in _Colliers Magazine_ in September 1911, Franck presents her impressions of her flights. The first was with Michel Effimoff who received a French licence on 15 February 1910.[3] A little later, she and her husband flew for an hour and a quarter with Henry Farman who sought to break the record for two passengers.[4] It was with the Farman brothers' manufacturing plant near Paris that Franck learned to fly. After establishing a record non-stop 14-mile flight at Mourelon, on 20 July 1910 she hoped to make a flight across the English Channel but was prevented by bad weather.[5]

In late July 1910, she arrived in the north of England where the manager of Sunderland's Empire Theatre had invited her to present demonstration flights in connection with the Boldon Races. On 30 July 1910, she accomplished a flight of a mile and a half, the first significant distance covered by a woman in the United Kingdom. On the following Monday, she again attempted to fly but flew into a flagstaff which brought the plane down, causing the death of a young boy who was hit by the engine. The accident brought her flying career to an end. She never obtained a licence.[6]

Mathilde Franck died in 1956.[7]

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title: Mathilde Franck

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What was Franck known for?

answer: She was one of the earliest French women aviators. Franck died in 1956.

answer: She is a is a known as one of the earliest French women aviators.

answer: She was one of the earliest French women aviators in 1910, but her career came to an end in the same year after her plane's crash caused the death of a boy.

answer: Mathilde Franck was a French woman aviator who learnt to fly in 1910. Her last flight was in 1910 when she crashed a plane, killing a boy.

answer: Franck was known for being one of the earliest French female aviators. She learned to fly in the summer of 1910 and flew with varying individuals until crashing in 1910 with a Maurice Farman biplane, causing the death of a young boy.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What happened in September 1911?

answer: In September 1911, Mathilde Franck published an article in Colliers Magazine about her flights. The first was with Michel Effimoff who received a French licence on 15 February 1910. Franck and her husband flew for an hour and a quarter with Henry Farman who sought to break the record for two passengers. Franck had hoped to make a flight across the English Channel but inclement weather prevented this. Finally, in July 1910, Franck had arrived in the United Kingdom to give demonstration flights in connection with the Boldon Races. She accomplished a flight of a mile and a half, but flew into a flagstaff which brought the plane down, causing the death of a young boy. Franck never obtained a licence and died in 1956.

text: There is a lot of unnecessary information.

refinement: In September 1911, Mathilde Franck published an article in Colliers Magazine about her flights.

answer: Franck presented her impression so f her flights in an article published in Colliers Magazine.

answer: Mathilde Franck presented her impression of her flight in an article published in Collier's Magazine.

answer: In September 1911, Mathilde Franck presented her impressions of her flights. The first was with Michel Effimoff who received a French licence on 15 February 1910. She and her husband flew with Henry Farman who sought to break the record for two passengers. However, her flying career came to an end after she flew into a flagpole, causing a boy's death.

text: There is a lot of unnecessary information.

refinement: In September 1911, Mathilde Franck presented her impressions of her flights.

answer: In September 1911, Franck presented her impressions of her flights.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did Franck arrive in the north of England in July 1910?

answer: Franck arrived in the north of England to present demonstration flights in connection to the Boldon Races.

answer: She had been invited to present demonstration flights in connection with the Boldon Races.

answer: Franck arrived in the north of England to give demonstration flights in connection with the Boldon Races. She attempted to fly on 30 July 1910 but hit a flagstaff, causing the plane to crash, resulting in the death of a young boy. Her flying career ended as a result of this accident.

answer: Franck arrived in the north of England to present demonstration flights.

answer: Franck arrived in the north of England to present demonstration flights in connection with the Boldon Races.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did Franck never obtain a license?

answer: She never learned to fly safely, as she hit a flagpole before steering the plane in the wrong direction and killing a young boy.

answer: Her last flight ended with the death of a young boy.

answer: Franck never obtained a license because she crashed a plane which resulted in the death of a young boy during one of her flights.

answer: She flew her plane into a flagstaff and the accident caused the death of a young boy, ending her flying career.

answer: Because she crashed her plane while demonstrating a flight and killed a boy.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: This article is about Mathilde Franck, one of the earliest French women aviators. She began her flying career in 1910, but it ended in the same year after her plane flew into a flagstaff. The accident caused the death of a young boy and she never got her license. She died in 1956.

answer: Mathilde Franck was one of the earliest French women aviators. She became an aviator in 1910 after she learnt to fly with the Farman brother's manufacturing plant in Paris. She was the first woman to fly a mile and a half in the north of England in the same year. In 1910, she hit a flagpole, and the plane crash landed with the death of a boy.

text: The answer should include that Franck's flying career was ended by the accident that killed the boy.

refinement: Mathilde Franck was one of the earliest French women aviators. She became an aviator in 1910 after she learnt to fly with the Farman brother's manufacturing plant in Paris. She was the first woman to fly a mile and a half in the north of England in the same year. In 1910, she hit a flagpole, and the plane crash landed with the death of a boy; this subsequently ended her flying career.

answer: Rosalind Mathilde Franck (1866 - 1956) was one of the earliest women aviators having learnt to fly in the summer of 1910. Her flying career ended after a plane crash that killed a boy she injured later in 1910.

text: The last sentence is grammatically incorrect.

refinement: Rosalind Mathilde Franck (1866 - 1956) was one of the earliest women aviators having learnt to fly in the summer of 1910. Her flying career ended after she crashed a plane into a flagpole, which ended up killing a boy. .

answer: Mathilde Franck was one of the earliest female aviators. In 1910, she achieved a significant distance flight in the United Kingdom after learning to fly with the Farman brothers' manufacturing plant near Paris. Later in 1910 she attempted a Channel flight, but hit a flagpole and crashed, killing a boy. Franck's aviation career ended after the crash. She died in 1956.

answer: Mathilde Franck was one of the earliest French women aviators. She learnt to fly in 1910 and made several flights, including one mile and a half flight in the United Kingdom, before her plane crashed, causing the death of a boy. Franck never obtained a licence and eventually died in 1956.