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DAVID LUIZ is in the running to be Chelsea’s new permanent captain.

PUBLISHED: PUBLISHED: 05:27, Thu, Jul 6, 2017

Long-serving skipper John Terry has ended his 20-year association with the club and joined Aston Villa on a one-year deal.

Antonio Conte is on the look-out for ready made leaders who can fill the power vacuum.

And Luiz, who was seen more as a comical figure, during his first spell with the Blues, is in the frame to take the captain’s armband.

_The Sun_ claim the Brazilian, who was instrumental in Chelsea’s title success last term, is the frontrunner for the position.

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David Luiz could be Chelsea's new captain

The report says he is a serious candidate and overtaken team-mate Gary Cahill.

The Sun claim Conte is very impressed with Luiz’s leadership skills and his natural vocal instincts, especially when motivating players during big games.

It is also suggested Spanish defender Cesar Azpilicueta is also being lined up as a future captain.

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Chelsea need to fill the void left behind by John Terry

Luiz appears to be holding the edge over Azpilicueta and Cahill as they prepare for their pre-season tour of the United States.

After their Community Shield fixture against Arsenal on August 6, they face Burnley in their opening game of the new Premier League season six days later.

question: Who left Chelsea to join Aston Villa?

answer: club captain John Terry

text: John Terry already left the club at the time of the article, he was not their current captain.

text: "Long-serving skipper John Terry ended his 20-year association with the club and joined Aston Villa..."

answer: John Terry

text: No reference is made to the fact that John Terry was the captain of Chelsea, his absence is the subject of this article.

text: The club's name is not mentioned.

text: "Long-serving skipper John Terry ended his 20-year association with the club and joined Aston Villa..."

answer: John Terry left Chelsea to join Aston Villa.

text: No mention is made of the position John Terry held at Chelsea, the subject of this article is who will replace him as captain.

refinement: Captain John Terry left Chelsea to join Aston Villa.

text: "Long-serving skipper John Terry ended his 20-year association with the club and joined Aston Villa..."

question: How long was Terry at Chelsea?

answer: He was at Chelsea for 20 years.

answer: 20 years

answer: Terry was at Chelsea for 20 years.

question: Who is the frontrunner to be the new captain?

answer: David Luiz is the frontrunner to be the new Chelsea captain.

text: "The Sun claims the Brazilian, who was instrumental in Chelsea's success last term, is the frontrunner for the position."

answer: David Luiz is the frontrunner to be the new captain.

text: "The Sun claims the Brazilian, who was instrumental in Chelsea's success last term, is the frontrunner for the position."

answer: David Luiz

question: Who else might be Chelsea's new captain?

answer: Cahill or Azpilicueta could both be Chelsea's new captain.

text: They are both considered as candidates to be the new Chelsea captain.

refinement: Cahill or Azpilicueta are also being considered as Chelsea's new captain.

text:
"The report says he is a serious candidate and overtaken team-mate Gary Cahill."
"It is also suggested Spanish defender Cesar Azpilicueta is also being lined up as a future captain."

answer: Cesar Azpilicueta is also being lined up as a future captain.

text: One candidate is missing - Gary Cahill is also a serious candidate.

refinement: Cesar Azpilicueta and Gary Cahill are also being lined up as a future captain.

text: Both are serious candidates for the position of captain.

refinement: Cesar Azpilicueta and Gary Cahill are also being considered for the new Chelsea captain.

text: "It is also suggested Spanish defender Cesar Azpilicueta is also being lined up as a future captain."

answer: Cesar Azpilicueta

text: Gary Cahill is also being considered for the position of captain.

text: Both of them are serious candidates for the position as leader.

refinement: Cesar Azpilicueta and Gary Cahill are serious candidates for Chelsea's new captain.

text: "It is also suggested Spanish defender Cesar Azpilicueta is also being lined up as a future captain."

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: The article details English Premier League team Chelsea current captain, the implication is that this pundit suggests that Chelsea's next two captains are Luiz and Azpilicueta. However, pre-season did not yield conclusive evidence and there is not much of a difference between their performances.

text: This article details the different candidates for Chelsea's club team.

refinement: The article details the different candidates being considered for the position of captain at the English Premier League team Chelsea.

text: Chelsea FC plays in the English Premier League.

refinement: The article details the different candidates being considered for the position of captain at Chelsea FC.

text: There are three candidates for Chelsea captain, viz. Luiz, Azpilicueta and Cahill.

refinement: The implication is that this pundit suggests that Chelsea's serious candidates for captain are Luiz, Azpilicueta and Cahill.

text: Luiz is the current frontrunner based on his current form.

refinement: Luiz is the current frontrunner, overtaking Cahill and Azpilicueta.

text: Grammar is not correct: ...the implication is that this pundit suggests that...

refinement: The article details the different candidates being considered for the position of captain at Chelsea FC. This article suggests that the serious candidates for captain are Luiz, Azpilicueta and Cahill. Luiz is the current frontrunner, overtaking Cahill and Azpilicueta.

text: "It is also suggested Spanish defender Cesar Azpilicueta is also being lined up as a future captain."

answer: David Luiz, who is a stronger and more serious candidate than teammates Gary Cahill and Cesar Azpilicueta, is favored by Antonio Conte, Chelsea's coach, to be the captain of the club.

text: Chelsea is looking for a new captain.

refinement: David Luiz, who is a stronger and more serious candidate than teammates Gary Cahill and Cesar Azpilicueta, is favored by Antonio Conte, Chelsea's coach, to be the new captain of the club.

text:
"The Sun claim the Brazilian, who was instrumental in Chelsea’s title success last term, is the frontrunner for the position."
"The report says he is a serious candidate and overtaken team-mate Gary Cahill."
"It is also suggested Spanish defender Cesar Azpilicueta is also being lined up as a future captain."
"Antonio Conte is on the look-out for ready made leaders who can fill the power vacuum."

answer: David Luiz, a Brazilian player, and Chelsea are in the running to be the club's new permanent captain. Luiz is said to have incredible leadership skills, and is a serious candidate.

text: There are three candidates for Chelsea's new captain: Luiz, Cahill and Azpilicueta.

refinement: David Luiz, a Brazilian player, Cahill and Azpilicueta are in the running to be the Chelsea's new permanent captain. Luiz is said to have incredible leadership skills, and is a serious candidate.

text:
"The Sun claim the Brazilian, who was instrumental in Chelsea’s title success last term, is the frontrunner for the position."
"The report says he is a serious candidate and overtaken team-mate Gary Cahill."
"Antonio Conte is on the look-out for ready made leaders who can fill the power vacuum."

answer: David Luiz, a Brazilian footballer, is considered a frontrunner to be John Terry's successor as Chelsea's captain. His comical reputation notwithstanding, Luiz has shown himself able to fill Terry's shoes as both a ready-made leader and team morale booster.

text: Cahill and Azpilicueta are also being considered for the position.

refinement: David Luiz, a Brazilian footballer, is considered a frontrunner to be John Terry's successor as Chelsea's captain. His comical reputation notwithstanding, Luiz has shown himself able to fill Terry's shoes as both a ready-made leader and team morale booster. Cahill and Azpilicueta are also being considered for this position.

text:
"The Sun claim the Brazilian, who was instrumental in Chelsea’s title success last term, is the frontrunner for the position."
"Antonio Conte is on the look-out for ready made leaders who can fill the power vacuum."

answer: Brazilian footballer David Luiz is being considered for the position of Chelsea's permanent captain by coach Antonio Conte as Portuguese defender John Terry has retired from the club. During his first stint with the club, Luiz was viewed as a comical figure. However, Chelsea officials are reportedly impressed with Luiz's leadership and motivational skills.

text: John Terry is not a Portuguese defender.

refinement: Brazilian footballer David Luiz is being considered for the position of Chelsea's permanent captain by coach Antonio Conte as long-time captain John Terry has retired from the club. During his first stint with the club, Luiz was viewed as a comical figure. However, Chelsea officials are reportedly impressed with Luiz's leadership and motivational skills.

text: John Terry is moving to a new club - Aston Villa.

refinement: Brazilian footballer David Luiz is being considered for the position of Chelsea's permanent captain by coach Antonio Conte as long-time captain John Terry has joined Aston Villa. During his first stint with the club, Luiz was viewed as a comical figure. However, Chelsea officials are reportedly impressed with Luiz's leadership and motivational skills.

text: Conte, Chelsea's coach, is impressed with Luiz.

refinement: Brazilian footballer David Luiz is being considered for the position of Chelsea's permanent captain by coach Antonio Conte as long-time captain John Terry has joined Aston Villa. During his first stint with the club, Luiz was viewed as a comical figure. However, Conte is reportedly impressed with Luiz's leadership and motivational skills.

text: Cahill and Azpilicueta are also being considered for the position.

refinement: Brazilian footballer David Luiz is being considered for the position of Chelsea's permanent captain by coach Antonio Conte as long-time captain John Terry has joined Aston Villa. During his first stint with the club, Luiz was viewed as a comical figure. However, Conte is reportedly impressed with Luiz's leadership and motivational skills. Cahill and Azpilicueta are also being considered for the position.

text:
"The Sun claim the Brazilian, who was instrumental in Chelsea’s title success last term, is the frontrunner for the position."
"The report says he is a serious candidate and overtaken team-mate Gary Cahill."
"It is also suggested Spanish defender Cesar Azpilicueta is also being lined up as a future captain."
"Antonio Conte is on the look-out for ready made leaders who can fill the power vacuum."

answer: John Terry left Chelsea and they are looking for a new captain. David Luiz seems like he will be picked, but Gary Cahill and Cesar Azpilicueta are also in the running.

text: It lacks some grammar precision.

refinement: Chelsea is looking for a new captain after John Terry left. David Luiz is the current frontrunner. Gary Cahill and Cesar Azpilicueta are also in the running.

text:
"The Sun claim the Brazilian, who was instrumental in Chelsea’s title success last term, is the frontrunner for the position."
"The report says he is a serious candidate and overtaken team-mate Gary Cahill."
"It is also suggested Spanish defender Cesar Azpilicueta is also being lined up as a future captain."
"Antonio Conte is on the look-out for ready made leaders who can fill the power vacuum."


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text:
After a couple of so-so albums in 2009’s _Sounds of the Universe_ and _Delta Machine_ four years later, it would have been easy to look at Depeche Mode as a spent creative force, despite the fact that they’re the last of their 80s contemporaries standing, are managing to keep their artistic integrity intact, and more importantly, have not become U2.

But there was something missing from those albums, both produced by Ben Hillier, and despite working well on their first collaboration, 2005’s _Playing The Angel_, it was the first time in their career where they’d misfired twice in a row. Neither were necessarily bad records, but they were missing that spark you’d become accustomed to - they sounded tired.

Bearing in mind that musically Depeche Mode is a solo act with Martin Gore taking control of the music, he hasn’t had a producer with electronic music credentials alongside him since working with Mark Bell on 2001’s _Exciter_. This makes the decision to work with James Ford a tantalising one.

Opening track "Backwards" is a swaggering, blues-influenced rock song with dramatic piano which sets the lyrical tone early. The first words sung - “We are not bigots, we have not evolved / we have no respect, we have lost control” (closing track "Fail" follows the same path: "Our consciences bankrupt: we're fucked") - makes it clear that despite never being ones for sweetness and light over the past four decades, Depeche Mode have put their usual subject matters (pain, misery, religion, death and sex) to one side to record a state of the world address. With U2 postponing their forthcoming album so they can too produce something politically of the now, they’re the first major act to reflect on the seismic shifts that have occurred over the past year, and it makes for grim listening. The repeated coda of the opening track - “We feel nothing inside” - is particularly effective, as are the waves of dirty synths . It's a great way to set the scene.

Lead single "Where’s the Revolution" continues the agenda (“Who’s making your decisions? / You and your religions? / Your government, your countries / you patriotic junkies”) and musically follows in the same vein as the opener, again with prominent synth work and the kind of doomy, downward key changes which have underpinned some of their finest work. The heavy distortion on "Scum", is the 'Mode at their angriest, Gahan spitting “Pull the trigger” as the grit filled beats indicate Ford’s influence at its most strongest.

"You Move" also shows how Ford’s musical stylings have been used to augment, rather than overshadow their music. The analogue synth fizzes while Gahan groans “I like the way you move for me tonight", making it their most shag-hungry moment since _SOFAD_ highlight "Rush". They haven’t sounded this sleazy for a long time, and despite them being in their mid-fifties, it isn’t creepy - it just genuinely sounds like someone's going to get fucked.

The space rock-isms of "Cover Me" provide the album’s most anthemic moment, and one of a select fewwhere political doom-mongering is put to one side. Gahan’s heartfelt yearning of “Way up here with the Northern Lights / beyond these broken bars / I pictured us in another life / Where we’re all superstars” is an unexpected moment of positivity, while the Eno-like atmospherics and reverbed slide guitars of the slow build gradually make room for two minutes of techno patterns and dramatic closing key changes. It's the most vital thing they've recorded in years.

Those wanting the BIG Mode track in the vein of "Enjoy the Silence", "It's No Good" or "Barrel of a Gun" will quickly fall under the spell of "So Much Love", the big pop thrill of the album. Similar to "Peace" from _SOTU_, or _Delta Machine_’s "Soft Touch/Raw Nerve" - great songs held back by thin production - here Ford has ripped everything open. Everything sounds massive; the angst, the fizzing krautrocky electro beats, the huge and very Martin Gore-esque doom-riff and Gahan (vocally on fire throughout the album) letting rip with one of his finest baritone performances.

Putting Ford’s expertise as a producer to one side, his work alongside Jas Shaw in Simian Mobile Disco is something which has very much informed the musical landscape of _Spirit_. SMD’s more esoteric works, such as the minimal techno of _Delicacies_, or the more ambient works on 2014’s _Whorl,_ live within these tracks. This, alongside Gore’s techno collaboration with original Depeche Mode member Vince Clarke - the excellent _VCMG_ album from 2012 - has culminated in a new found fervour on _Spirit_ which wasn’t there on their two previous albums. It's their best since 1993’s _Songs of Faith and Devotion_.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Depeche Mode's previous two albums?

answer: The previous two albums by Depeche Mode, _Sounds of the Universe_ and _Delta Machine_, were missing a spark, and sounded tired. _Spirit_, however, sees the band returning to their usual subject matters (pain, misery, religion, death, and sex) while also reflecting on the recent political landscape. The album is a noticeable departure from the two albums that preceded it, largely due in part to producer James Ford. Overall, _Spirit_ sees Depeche Mode sounding more vital than they have in years.

answer: The two previous albums for Depeche Mode tried to be different from "Exciter" album, but ended up sounding tired. Depeche Mode had the same major credit: Martin Gore, who sang, wrote the lyrics and produced the album. They have an anthem which highlights the music, "backwards."

answer: The text describes 'Delta Machine' and 'Sounds of the Universe' as so-so albums. The author states Depeche Mode had put their usual subject matters to side to record a state of the world, similar to U2. You hear a ticking clock and see a cross in a deep, too dark background and a few electronic glitches that only seems like a set-up for a dignified, horror soundtrack. You are not alone.

answer: The previous two albums by Depeche Mode were seen as a misfire by the author. Both records were good but lacked the spark that had been present in earlier albums. This time, the band worked with producer James Ford, and the album produced a much different sound than what had been produced by the band previously. It is said that the music on _Spirit_ is more frenzied and vital than on their previous albums. While both albums produced by Ben Hillier were good, _Spirit_ is deemed the better of the two by the author due to its stronger sound.

answer: Depeche Mode's previous two albums were Sounds of the Universe, which was released in 2009, and Delta Machine, which was released in 2013. The author describes the albums as so-so. They say that there was something missing from the albums, which were both produced by Ben Hillier, and they sounded tired.


text:
I woke up feeling surprisingly normal. There were none of the usual aches and pains that I felt sometimes, and my mind was oddly clear. I figured that I might as well take advantage of my peculiar situation, so I reached over to my nightstand and tried to pick up my iPad so I could read the morning news. Then I saw my hand.

I leapt out of the bed, recoiling in terror. Only too late did I realize that I had never hit the ground. Eyes wide, I chanced a look down. Instead of the familiar confines of my tiny bedroom, I saw the floor of the apartment above mine. My right leg was floating half in, half out of the brown-speckled tile, and I was further surprised to see it whole. I had lost it below the knee in combat ten years ago, but it was all there, despite the fact that I could feel none of it. I testily moved the limb, and it silently emerged from the floor. I was forced to stifle another shout of alarm when, out of the corner of my left eye, I saw the occupant of the apartment. She was sleeping, her slight back to me. I tried to stand, only to find that I slowly floated upwards. Desperately, I stared at the floor, and I sank down, landing silently. I couldn't help it. Before I realized what I was doing, I grunted in satisfaction at my minor accomplishment. Horrified, I literally melted into the wall. I could still see inside, however, and noticed that the woman hadn’t even stirred, and was still sleeping soundly. Emboldened, I stepped back into the apartment. I cleared my throat, and said, “Oi! Can you here me?” The woman continued sleeping. “Hey!” I practically shouted, growing more terrified. Nothing happened. I impulsively stepped towards the bed, reaching for the woman’s shoulder. My hand went straight through. I pulled it away, and fell back into the floor. With a silent flash, everything went white.

I opened my eyes, and found myself in the basement of my building. I tried to stand, but once again, I floated through the ceiling. The floor above was the lobby, and I came up just in front of the reception desk. I expected the people in the lobby to recoil at the sight of my scarred visage appearing from the floor, but no one seemed to notice me. This was starting to seem like a trend, so I began to walk towards the door. I found that, if I concentrated, I could prevent myself from falling through. I stepped right through the glass doors, flinching as my feet hit the sidewalk. It was then that I realized that I was dressed in nothing but my boxers. While I seemed to be invisible, my embarrassment won out and I decided to return to my room. I turned to face the building, and jumped.

I flew up much faster than I had earlier. My apartment was on the ninth floor, and I reached its window within a second. I reached out and grabbed the balcony, my hand passing right through a potted plant. Focusing, I was able to stand on the cracked concrete and look through my window. I walked through the screened glass door into my small kitchen. I went into my room via the wall, and noticed that I was lying on the bed. I looked surprisingly serene, but the fact remained that my dead body was lying less than ten feet in front of me, and I was standing there looking at it. I took the news that I was dead pretty well, considering the circumstances. Death had been around the corner for me since I joined the Service, and I was almost glad that I had gone while I was sleeping peacefully, as opposed to, perhaps, having a knife shoved through my gut. I turned, shrugged my shoulders, and opened my closet. I grabbed a pair of jeans, a black t-shirt, and a leather jacket and found that, as I put them on, they became translucent, allowing me to see the floor through the fabric. I walked over to my nightstand and pocketed my phone, wallet, and pocketknife. I took one last look at my apartment, and then I jumped through the ceiling and left.

I came out on the roof, squinting in the morning Los Angeles sunlight. The view from my building’s roof was spectacular, with the Pacific Ocean easily visible on the horizon. The wind was blowing, but I didn’t feel it like I normally would. The air passed through me, leaving behind only the soft feeling of a light breeze. The smog, normally the most dominant smell in the air, was even worse than average. I decided to get away from it, and jumped again. The roof of the building receded in a flash, and I was above the clouds. I threw my arms apart, slowing my upward momentum and eventually stopping me. I looked down, and could see the entire city. The cars on the 101 were like ants, crawling along with the speed of molasses. The Port was bustling, with enormous container ships plying the shining blue carpet that was the water. I could see LAX, with what looked like toy planes taking off, landing, and disgorging their human cargo into the airport. As I gazed out over the great city, I heard approaching engines. I whipped my head around, and saw the blue nose of an airliner hit me in the chest.

I shot downward, but it was too late. I phased through the plane’s aluminum skin and entered the cargo compartment. I focused on stopping my tumble, and forced my hand to grab onto a navy-blue suitcase. Having slowed down sufficiently, I let go of the suitcase, and sat on the floor of the plane. Despite the air moving past at 500 miles per hour just inches from my rear end, I felt nothing. Despite my long career in the field of clandestine operations, I had somehow never found myself in the cargo compartment of any passenger jet, much less a Southwest Airlines Boeing 737. I figured that, seeing as I was dead, I could afford to get away from things a little. I settled in between a bulkhead and some odd-smelling luggage, concentrated on not falling through the plane, and wondered where I was flying off to.

title: A Slightly-Different Morning

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the narrator's death.

answer: The narrator dies peacefully while asleep in bed, waking to find himself dead and able to levitate and walk through solid objects. The narrator then flies up through the roof of his building and moves into the cargo compartment of a Boeing 737 which he settles into for the duration of his flight.

answer: The narrator dies peacefully while sleeping. This is unexpected, given the narrator's military service and the potential for violent death associated with it. The narrator is relieved not to have been killed by a knife in the gut.

text: Why would military service ten years prior make any difference to the expectation of death?

refinement: The narrator dies peacefully while sleeping. The narrator is relieved not to have been killed by a knife in the gut.

answer: The narrator was already dead. He recounts how he went to his apartment despite being dead when he had not slept in a coffin. He felt he couldn't afford to be with other people in his shape. He teleported from the bed to his kitchen and then to the lobby. From there he teleported to a street. From there, he teleported to the roof. Then he teleported to the rooftop of a passenger jet flying to Los Angeles. There he teleported through an airliner and inside its cargo hold.

text: There is no mention of a coffin

refinement: The narrator was already dead. He recounts how he went to his apartment despite being dead. He felt he couldn't afford to be with other people in his shape. He teleported from the bed to his kitchen and then to the lobby. From there he teleported to a street. From there, he teleported to the roof. Then he teleported to the rooftop of a passenger jet flying to Los Angeles. There he teleported through an airliner and inside its cargo hold.

text: Not well written at all

refinement: The narrator was already dead. He recounts his travels after death including looking down on his own dead body.

answer: The narrator died peacefully in his sleep and now discovers that he can pass through solid objects, fly, and feels no wind while doing so. He has also become invisible to the living. He ends up inside the cargo compartment of a passenger jet flying high above LA and continues to explore this new ability.

answer: He wakes with regenerated limbs, and levitates to his kitchen and jumps out of his apartment. He flies so high, he looks down on the entire city. He is hit by an airliner and does not feel it until he enters the inside of the plane's carton, going to the earth.

text: Word errors

refinement: He wakes with regenerated limbs, and levitates to his kitchen and jumps out of his apartment. He flies so high, he looks down on the entire city. He is hit by an airliner and does not feel it until he enters the inside of the plane's cargo area.

text: The answer fails to identify that the narrator is dead.

refinement: He wakes with regenerated limbs and then realizes that he is dead. He is able to fly and pass through solid objects. He flies so high, he looks down on the entire city. He is hit by an airliner and does not feel it until he enters the inside of the plane's cargo area.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the passage say about airplanes?

answer: The passage says that while the narrator is dead, they can fly through the air at will and sit inside passenger jets without any physical sensation. The planes are seen as a means of transportation, and seem to be no different than any other object.

text: This answer doesn't make a lot of sense.

refinement: The narrator floats up in the sky and gets a birds-eye view of LAX, where planes are arriving and departing. In the sky, the sound of engines warns the narrator (too late) of the plane that the narrator is then phased into. The narrator lands in the cargo compartment. The plane is a Boeing 737, passenger jet with Southwest Arlines, traveling at over 500 miles per hour.

answer: The passage indicates that airliners can pass through the cargo compartment and that they move at a very high speed. The air inside the plane does not affect the narrator despite the fact that he is physically interacting with the plane.

text: The answer doesn't make too much sense

refinement: The narrator floats up in the sky and gets a birds-eye view of LAX, where planes are arriving and departing. In the sky, the sound of engines warns the narrator (too late) of the plane that the narrator is then phased into. The narrator lands in the cargo compartment. The plane is a Boeing 737, passenger jet with Southwest Arlines, traveling at over 500 miles per hour.

answer: The narrator floats up in the sky and gets a birds-eye view of LAX, where planes are arriving and departing. In the sky, the sound of engines warns the narrator (too late) of the plane that the narrator is then phased into. The narrator lands in the cargo compartment. The plane is a Boeing 737, passenger jet with Southwest Arlines, traveling at over 500 miles per hour.

answer: No answer

text: No answer

refinement: The narrator floats up in the sky and gets a birds-eye view of LAX, where planes are arriving and departing. In the sky, the sound of engines warns the narrator (too late) of the plane that the narrator is then phased into. The narrator lands in the cargo compartment. The plane is a Boeing 737, passenger jet with Southwest Arlines, traveling at over 500 miles per hour.

answer: He sees an airliner while he's on his roof, but it never hurts him after it hits him. The plane's cargo compartment is described as amazing.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the people the narrator encounters.

answer: The only person the narrator encounters directly is the female neighbor whose apartment the narrator accidentally ends up in while getting the hang of being incorporeal. The neighbor remains asleep and unaware of the narrator's presence. The narrator's arm passes right through her, and she doesn't wake even when being shouted at.

text: The narrator also encounters people in the lobby but they can't see him.

refinement: The only person the narrator encounters directly is the female neighbor whose apartment the narrator accidentally ends up in while getting the hang of being incorporeal. The neighbor remains asleep and unaware of the narrator's presence. The narrator's arm passes right through her, and she doesn't wake even when being shouted at. The narrator also encounters people in the lobby but the can't see him.

answer: The narrator encounters a sleeping woman in her neighboring apartment and a dead version of him/herself in their bedroom. After traveling through walls and rooftops, the narrator encounters a passenger jet and its cargo compartment.

text: This is not a human encounter.

refinement: The narrator encounters a sleeping woman in her neighboring apartment and a dead version of him/herself in their bedroom.

text: The narrator also encounters people in the lobby.

refinement: The narrator encounters a sleeping woman in her neighboring apartment and a dead version of him/herself in their bedroom. The narrator encounters people in the lobby but they can't see him.

answer: A woman at his home that he phases through who doesn't wake up when he calls her. Another woman who seems oblivious he encounters in the apartment of the floor underneath his. The woman is his neighbor and he doesn't see it. The narrator's dead body, that depletes the feeling of all bones and muscles of the apartment he is in. He passes through it and leaves.

text: A very poor answer that makes little sense

refinement: The narrator encounters a sleeping woman in the apartment upstairs and people in the lobby who apparently can't see them.

answer: The first person the narrator encounters is the woman sleeping in the apartment. She is not awakened by the narrator's calls. She discovers the body of a woman, the narrator's corpse, when she stands in her room. She then encounters security guards who do not notice her. Security guards at the airport do not realize she is dead.

text: The woman is in the upstairs apartment

refinement: The first person the narrator encounters is the woman sleeping in the upstairs apartment. She is not awakened by the narrator's calls. She discovers the body of a woman, the narrator's corpse, when she stands in her room. She then encounters security guards who do not notice her. Security guards at the airport do not realize she is dead.

text: There is no mention of security guards

refinement: The first person the narrator encounters is the woman sleeping in the upstairs apartment. She is not awakened by the narrator's calls. She discovers the body of a woman, the narrator's corpse when she stands in her room. She encounters people in the lobby who can't see her.

answer: The narrator encounters a sleeping woman in the apartment above his, then moves through the apartment into the downstairs basement. They exit the building and step onto the sidewalk, and jump into the upper floors of the building. They encounter a person sleeping on a bed in their apartment as they walk through walls and find themselves inside an airliner cargo hold.

text: Mixed pronoun used

refinement: The narrator encounters a sleeping woman in the apartment above theirs, then moves through the apartment into the downstairs basement. They exit the building and step onto the sidewalk, and jump into the upper floors of the building. They encounter a person sleeping on a bed in their apartment as they walk through walls and find themselves inside an airliner cargo hold.

text: These sentences add no value and yet the people in the lobby are omitted.

refinement: The narrator encounters a sleeping woman in the apartment above theirs, then moves through the apartment into the downstairs basement.  They encounter a person sleeping on a bed in their apartment. Lastly, they encounter people in the lobby who can't see them.

text: The person is the narrator who is dead and not sleeping.

refinement: The narrator encounters a sleeping woman in the apartment above theirs, then moves through the apartment into the downstairs basement.  They encounter their own body in a bed in their apartment. Lastly, they encounter people in the lobby who can't see them.


text:
He came around, blood dripping from a halo of dyed black hair, and the first thing his mother asked was if he had seen God.

“Did you see him boy? Did you see our Holy Father? I bet he gave you a talking to!” she yelled over the sound of the siren.

The ambulance hit a bump on the road, almost concealing the slight shake of his head that she didn’t notice. He tried to sit up but I gently pushed him down and told him to relax, while I redressed the bandages around his head. I watched his gaze travel to the landscape beyond the window glass that flashed between black and scorching red. His eyes seemed empty, hollow, like a dead man’s. He should be dead – that’s what a bullet to the head does, right?

“You’re a fool, you deserve to go to hell for this,” his mother said. Her nervous eyes glanced back and forth and a silver cross hung from a chain around her neck. She began ruffling through the pages of the bible that she had wasted precious to run and get before letting the ambulance leave. Stray verses and words were mumbled to no one in particular.

He didn’t look at her, or at me, or at the barely noticeable bloodstains in his black tee shirt. He just kept looking outside.

“So what did God say to you? Did he give you a glimpse of Hell? Suicide is a holy sin, you know that,” the woman continued unceasingly.

“Ma’am…” I said softly, but she ignored me.

“You’ll end up in a gutter somewhere with no one but God one day, and you better hope he sees a prodigal son in you,” she said.

His lips moved but no sound came out. He kept his eyes averted, straight out of that window. He tried again, and this time I held up a hand to quiet his mother, who finally took the hint that he had something to say. The first noise was a rough cough, but then words came, barely audible over the wail of the siren.

“There is no God… no God,” he said.

His mother, for the first time that night, appeared speechless, but only for a moment.

“Of course there is, don’t be stupid.”

“No.” He was more forceful the second time. “First there was pain, then darkness, but there was no God, no heavenly lights or flaming depths. There was only Death.”

That time she was struck dumb for real. He took advantage and kept going, his voice getting stronger with each word.

“I looked into the face of Death and saw him for who he is. There were no skulls or sickles, just… his eyes, they…” The boy broke off, unable to describe his vision, although his own eyes showed it all, even as they gazed beyond what the rest of us could see. Neither his mother nor I spoke until he went on.

“He asked me the same question he asks every person who comes to him; why did I deserve a second chance? What made me so special? I told him I wanted to die, that I did this on purpose. He looked at me with those eyes and told me I had to learn to live before I could die, and he sent me back.”

Silence filled the ambulance, and it took me several minutes to realize I had duties to perform, and quickly began running checks and applying fresh bandages. As I checked his blood pressure, he looked at me, and I saw that something had filled in those empty eyes. I knew it and he knew it; he was going to be okay.

title: Ambulance

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what the boy sees when he shoots himself.

answer: First he sees only darkness. Then he sees the face of Death and stares into his eyes. Death asks the boy why he deserves a second chance. When the boy reveals that he wishes to die, Death tells him he has to learn to live first.

answer: When the boy shoots himself in the head, he sees nothing but pain and darkness. While in this state, Death comes and asks him why he deserves to be given a chance to live. The boy tells the entity that he wanted to die and Death sends him back to the world to learn to live.

answer: First there is pain, then darkness, then Death. He looks death in the eyes, who asks him why he deserved a second chance, why Death should spare him.

text: Incomplete; add that the boy told Death he wanted to die and Death sends him back to learn to live first.

refinement: First there is pain, then darkness, then Death. He looks Death in the eyes, who asks him why he deserved a second chance, why Death should spare him. He tells Death he wanted to die and Death sends him back to learn to live first.

answer: The boy sees nothingness when he shoots himself. He looks into the face of death and sees nothing but emptiness and darkness. This reality opens his eyes to the truth that there is no God. The boy tells this to his mother, who is at first taken aback but then accepts the truth.

text: Remove "but accepts the truth" as there isn't evidence for this, and reword the last sentence to make sense grammatically without the clause.

refinement: The boy sees nothingness when he shoots himself. He looks into the face of death and sees nothing but emptiness and darkness. This reality opens his eyes to the truth that there is no God. The boy tells this to his mother, who is taken aback.

answer: He feels only the coldness of death, he hears no voices telling him about hereafter. He even realizes the lack of shapes in after life. The only thing he sees is " his eyes ", the eyes of Death.

text: He does hear a voice - that of Death as an entity. Change "he hears no voices telling him about hereafter" to "he hears Death as an entity asking him why he deserves a second chance at life"

refinement: He feels only the coldness of death, he hears Death as an entity asking him why he deserves a second chance at life. He even realizes the lack of shapes in after life. The only thing he sees is " his eyes ", the eyes of Death.

text: Refine the wording of the second sentence to make more sense and agree with the earlier inference that there is no afterlife.

refinement: He feels only the coldness of death, he hears Death as an entity asking him why he deserves a second chance at life. He realizes there is no salvation or damnation. The only thing he sees is " his eyes ", the eyes of Death.

text: Grammar: Replace "is " his eyes "," with "are"

refinement: He feels only the coldness of death, he hears Death as an entity asking him why he deserves a second chance at life. He realizes there is no salvation or damnation. The only thing he sees are the eyes of Death.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize how the mother's reactions shift over the course of the story.

answer: The mother first appears convinced that her son had seen God, who presumably damned him for his sin of taking his own life. (There's only a fleeting moment after he says "no there is no God" where her tone sounds like she believes him. But her conviction is quickly replaced by full-blown denial, as is to be expected from someone who believes in God.)

text: Rephrase "where her tone sounds like she believes him" to reflect more accurately how she is rendered speechless.

refinement: The mother first appears convinced that her son had seen God, who presumably damned him for his sin of taking his own life. (There's only a fleeting moment after he says "no there is no God" where she is rendered speechless. But her conviction is quickly replaced by full-blown denial, as is to be expected from someone who believes in God.)

text: Remove the last sentence, as there's no evidence for it.

refinement: The mother first appears convinced that her son had seen God, who presumably damned him for his sin of taking his own life. (There's only a fleeting moment after he says "no there is no God" where she is rendered speechless.)

text: Remove the unnecessary parentheses.

refinement: The mother first appears convinced that her son had seen God, who presumably damned him for his sin of taking his own life. There's only a fleeting moment after he says "no there is no God" where she is rendered speechless.

text: Rephrase the last sentence to reflect that it's not just "a fleeting moment".

refinement: The mother first appears convinced that her son had seen God, who presumably damned him for his sin of taking his own life. After he says "no there is no God", she is rendered speechless.

answer: At first, she sees the blood and rants at her struggling son/husband, who tries to get up. She wants to convince her son to repent, but begins to realize he still isn't dead -and after death-and shouts at him to repent. She ignores the people in the ambulance who try to quiet her. She gets a space when the boy barely manages to speak and must eat her words when the boy describes his suicide attempt, including how he looked at the "face of Death".

text: Remove "/husband" - the boy is definitely her son.

refinement: At first, she sees the blood and rants at her struggling son, who tries to get up. She wants to convince her son to repent, but begins to realize he still isn't dead -and after death-and shouts at him to repent. She ignores the people in the ambulance who try to quiet her. She gets a space when the boy barely manages to speak and must eat her words when the boy describes his suicide attempt, including how he looked at the "face of Death".

text: Remove "but begins to realize he still isn't dead -and after death-and shouts at him to repent." It is repetitive and confusing.

refinement: At first, she sees the blood and rants at her struggling son, who tries to get up. She wants to convince her son to repent. She ignores the people in the ambulance who try to quiet her. She gets a space when the boy barely manages to speak and must eat her words when the boy describes his suicide attempt, including how he looked at the "face of Death".

answer: At first the mother is very angry, yelling at the boy cand calling him a fool. She becomes nervous as she ruffles through a bible. When her son says there is no God, she becomes speechless.

answer: Initially, the mother believes that her son saw God, which validates her belief system. However, her son shares that he saw only Death, which shocks and confounds the mother. Eventually, his determination and the strength of his words convince the mother that he is telling the truth. She eventually realizes that he will be okay.

text: Remove the third and fourth sentences, as those events apply not to the mother but to the paramedic in the ambulance.

refinement: Initially, the mother believes that her son saw God, which validates her belief system. However, her son shares that he saw only Death, which shocks and confounds the mother.

answer: At first, the mother is frantic with worry and asks her son if he has seen God. Her son tells her no, but she continues to chastise him anyway. However, when the son speaks again and describes his experience with Death, her shock turns into bewilderment. The son appears to have something new in his eyes, and the mother changes her tone to be more supportive.

text: Remove the last sentence, it's inaccurate.

refinement: At first, the mother is frantic with worry and asks her son if he has seen God. Her son tells her no, but she continues to chastise him anyway. However, when the son speaks again and describes his experience with Death, her shock turns into bewilderment.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything related to religion.

answer: The protagonist comes to consciousness after being shot in the head, and his mother immediately interrogates him about whether he has seen God. The protagonist explains that, while there was pain and darkness, there was no God. He described his vision of Death and the conversation they had, and proceeds to say that Death told him to learn to live before he died. Some part of the protagonist has changed irrevocably, and he now has the perspective to live. Religion is an ongoing discussion of the existence of God.

text: Remove the last sentence, it's not entirely accurate and not established in the text.

refinement: The protagonist comes to consciousness after being shot in the head, and his mother immediately interrogates him about whether he has seen God. The protagonist explains that, while there was pain and darkness, there was no God. He described his vision of Death and the conversation they had, and proceeds to say that Death told him to learn to live before he died. Some part of the protagonist has changed irrevocably, and he now has the perspective to live.

text: The last sentence is not directly related to religion, so should be removed.

refinement: The protagonist comes to consciousness after being shot in the head, and his mother immediately interrogates him about whether he has seen God. The protagonist explains that, while there was pain and darkness, there was no God. He described his vision of Death and the conversation they had, and proceeds to say that Death told him to learn to live before he died.

answer: The boy's mother asks the boy if he saw God. She fears that the boy will go to hell for attempting to commit suicide. She wears a cross and ruffles through a bible, mumbling verses. She asks the boy what God said to him. The boy replies that there is no God.

answer: The boy's mother is religious, clutched a silver cross necklace, and wears a bible, she's religious. The boy is also religious, or at least, he is on the surface by being displayed as heavily religious and by listening to his mother. The boy also refers to God, saying he saw Death as a man and talked to God.

text: Remove the repetition of "she's religious" in the first sentence.

refinement: The boy's mother is religious, clutched a silver cross necklace, and wears a bible. The boy is also religious, or at least, he is on the surface by being displayed as heavily religious and by listening to his mother. The boy also refers to God, saying he saw Death as a man and talked to God.

text: Remove the second and third sentences as they are inaccurate.

refinement: The boy's mother is religious, clutched a silver cross necklace, and wears a bible.

text: Add that the son tells her there is no God, that he only saw darkness and Death.

refinement: The boy's mother is religious, clutched a silver cross necklace, and wears a bible. The son tells her there is no God, that after shooting himself he only saw darkness and Death.

answer: The protagonist's mother initially believes God had talked to her son after he nearly died as a result of suicide. The protagonist himself then describes meeting Death and being given a second chance despite wanting to die. He reports Death telling him he must learn to live before he can die. This demonstrates that the protagonist has a lack of religious faith, even though his mother does believe in God. Religion is significant in this passage as it relates to the protagonists understanding of death, their beliefs about God and the afterlife, and their attitudes and thoughts related to suicide.

answer: The boy's mother sees God as a healer, treats her son as a sinner and is eager to constantly recite Bible verses. Though the boy says there is no God, Death changed his mind.

text: Reword the second sentence to mean the opposite: that the boy's lack of belief in God is validated by his experience.

refinement: The boy's mother sees God as a healer, treats her son as a sinner and is eager to constantly recite Bible verses. The boy says there is no God, and meeting Death in darkness only confirmed this.


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[Christopher Voelker] [Christopher Voelker with Hope Award]

CHRISTOPHER VOELKER (born February 2, 1961 in Los Angeles, California - Died September 11, 2014) was an American photographer.

General information

Voelker was a full-time wheelchair user due to a spinal cord injury (quadriplegia) from a high-speed, motocross accident at 16.[1]

He was predominantly self-taught, freelance studio photographer specializing in capturing counter-points of the human landscape in large-format (Hasselblad and Linhof), black and white. Hand developed prints which are an interpretation of his negatives are characterized by starkly voluptuous contrasts of body and space. The prints are expressions of something that is both personal and available for individual interpretation. With the arrival of digital photography it was a challenge that Voelker embraced. His true love, however, remained the mystery of emulsion; and film is the medium he reserves for his artistic output.

Major studios and TV networks

He became the first photographer with a mobility impairment to work professionally for major studios and TV networks such as Universal, Paramount, Touchstone, NBC, CBS, Lorimar Productions, UPN, WB and CW networks. Voelker has also photographed such artists as Mick Fleetwood, Billy Zane, Carmen Electra, Robert David Hall, Christina Applegate, Bow Wow, Beyoncé, Chris Burke, Brandy, Chingy, Omarion, Ruben Studdard, Fantasia, Angela Simmons and Tony Orlando.[2]

Publications

His work has appeared on national and international covers for magazines along with movie posters including _The Hollywood Reporter_, _V Life Magazine_, _Teen People_, _TV Guide_, _Angeleno Magazine_, _Zink Magazine_, _944 Magazine_, _New Mobility_,[3][4] _Mobilitá Magazine_,[5] _Jewel Magazine_[6] and _RYK Magazine_.

He has developed a penchant for photographing bookjackets and has completed over 20 different covers ranging from Mystery writers to a book by Holly Robinson Peete on a Woman’s guide to watching & understanding NFL football, titled _Get your Own Damn Beer I’m watching The Game_.[7]

His photographs have been exhibited in both Los Angeles and New York City and will be featured in his upcoming book of black-and-white studio nudes due to be published in November 2008 by Dennis McMillan Publications.[8]

Voelker Studio

Voelker worked for network gallery sessions, album covers and intimate portraits. He has spent the last 15 years at VOELKER STUDIO, a synergistic space in Northridge, California. Going through different physical experiences has given Voelker unique empathy and insights into things that other people don't see. He has become a photographer of humans.[9] Voelker was compiling “Portraits of Ability”.[10] The book, set for publication in 2009 celebrates the physicality of power as realized by personal accomplishment of disabled people.

Awards and prizes

-   1984 – _Photographer of the Year_ for his work in the Journalism State of California Magazine
-   2002 – _Annual Anthony Award for Best Cover, Print Magazine Design_ for the quality of his work
-   2013 - Christopher and Dana Reeve Foundation _Hope Award_ for his ongoing support to the disability community[11]

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title: Christopher Voelker

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What health condition did Voelker have?

answer: Voelker was born with quadriplegia.

text: He was not born with it. It came from an accident.

refinement: Voelker had quadriplegia due to a motorcross accident.

answer: Voelker had a spinal cord injury (quadriplegia).

answer: Voelker was a paraplegic due to a motocross accident.

text: Quadriplegic specifically

refinement: Voelker was a quadriplegic due to a motocross accident.

answer: Voelker was a full-time wheelchair user. This was due to a spinal cord injury. The specific kind of injury was quadriplegia. He got this injury in a high speed motor-cross accident, when he was 16. He died in 2014.

text: The date of his death is not relevant

refinement: Voelker was a full-time wheelchair user. This was due to a spinal cord injury. The specific kind of injury was quadriplegia. He got this injury in a high speed motor-cross accident, when he was 16.

answer: Voelker was a full-time wheelchair user due to a spinal cord injury (quadriplegia) from a high-speed, motocross accident.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What profession did Christopher Voelker practice?

answer: He was a freelance studio photographer.

answer: Voelker was a self-taught freelance photographer specializing in capturing counter-points of the human landscape in large format black and white (Hasselbad and Linhof). He developed prints which are an interpretation of negatives characterized by starkly voluptuous contrasts of body and space. However when digital photography arrived Voelker embraced the challenge. He became the first major photographer to work with television networks, and has been published in at least 11 magazines, according to the article. He also photographed more than 20 different covers for book jackets.

text: These lines are not relevant

refinement: Voelker was a self-taught freelance photographer specializing in capturing counter-points of the human landscape in large format black and white (Hasselbad and Linhof).

text: This citation is not necessary

refinement: Voelker was a self-taught freelance photographer specializing in capturing counter-points of the human landscape in large format black and white.

answer: Christopher Voelker was a freelance studio photographer.

answer: Christopher Voelker was a freelance studio photographer specializing in capturing counter-points of the human landscape.

answer: Christopher Voelker was a photographer.

text: A freelance studio photographer

refinement: Christopher Voelker was a freelance studio photographer.


text:
**This story I wrote as a response to a CW WP where the stipulation was You have to write the sentence "I was so close to getting a Tetris" 3 times in your story.**

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There I was pondering my years of training and discipline, I was so close to getting a Tetris.

Everyone I knew had already gotten theirs, I was the only one who didn't have one! I thought I was stupid, incompetent, unworthy of receiving one.

"Hunter!" My friend Whisper called out to me, she is the only one who continued to believe in me and pushed me in my training, always reminding me that I was **so** close to getting a Tetris.
I respond with a bashful "h..Hey Whisper".

We had grown up together and had been friends forever, though we are 16 years old now and every time I am around her I have trouble speaking, I get butterflies in my stomach and my hands start getting all clammy.

She was truly beautiful, and so was her Tetris! Her Tetris was at least a good 280 pounds, had the usual 4 legs, big floppy ears, two silky soft angelic wings, and a 3 foot long bushy tail,  all covered in white fur with black spots.

Perhaps you are not from around here, maybe it's your first time hearing about the land of Artelia.
Then allow me to shed some light.

When an Artelian is old enough to start training in the mind and body through meditation and different levels of advanced combat, (the average Artelian starts at the age of 3) they spend their entire childhood and teenage years training in order to receive their Tetris.
If you refuse to train, you don't get a Tetris, simple as that, those who don't train are usually outcast to a society of people we call The Anti-Tetris.

Now let me explain to you more about the Tetris.

The Tetris is an individualized, soul-bound guardian that is assigned to you by our creator, given you have trained well and are worthy of receiving one. They resemble that of a dog, but much, much larger, with wings and a defining symbol of our creator on their head.
They can not speak, though they are telepathically linked to their master and are able to act and make decisions based on your emotions and actions.
Each Tetris is different in personality and appearance, I can not tell you what type of dog a Tetris resembles because each one is unique.
Whisper's Tetris looks a lot like a Saint Bernard.

I had trained so hard all my life and still I have yet to be awarded my Tetris. I told Whisper, " I just don't understand Whisper, why haven't I gotten mine yet?". She says to me "Hunter I know how special you are and I know there is a good reason why you don't have your Tetris yet, my guess is our maker sees you as special, too."

I pondered this for a while, wondering if she was right, it's not like I refused to train, quite the opposite, I started training at age 2, before I could even speak more than a couple words. I had been training harder than any of my friends.

I tell Whisper that I am going to call it an early night and head home and go to bed. It was still light out as I travelled the beaten path through the forest between our two small villages.

What otherwise seemed to be a perfectly normal walk home, I couldn't feel as if though I was being watched, the hairs on the back of my neck were going crazy, of course as I looked around I saw nothing unusual.

I arrive at my house and I open the door and kick off my shoes, my parents were already in bed, they didn't worry about me staying out late too much as they knew how strong I was and that I was more than capable of defending myself.
I head to my bedroom, strip down to my under garments and throw myself into bed, quickly drifting off to dreamland.

I awoke the next morning to a letter with a gold seal sitting in the window sill that read "Hunter" on the envelope.
Curious, I carefully open the letter and begin to read it.

**Hunter**

**You are special**

**You are chosen**

**I have a very special Tetris for you**

**In time**

I couldn't fully comprehend what I had just read, but I was sure of one thing.

I was so close to getting a Tetris.

title: [FN] Artelia

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Hunter's relationship with Whisper.

answer: Hunter has been close friends with Whisper for some time. Whisper helped Hunter in training and she continued to believe in him, always reminding him that he was so close to getting his tetris. He also gets butterflies in his stomach and gets clammy whenever he's with her.

answer: Hunter and Whisper have been friends for a long time. Whisper is the only one who has continued to believe in Hunter and pushed him in his training. Hunter is very close to Whisper and has a crush on her.

answer: Hunter and Whisper have been friends since they were kids. They started training for the Tetris at the same time, but Hunter has been training longer. Hunter has a crush on Whisper, but Whisper doesn't seem to have any romantic feelings towards Hunter. Whisper continues to believe in Hunter and pushes him to train harder.

answer: Hunter and Whisper were close friends for a long time and Whisper was the only one who believed Hunter would receive his Tetris. When they were 16, Hunter developed a crush on Whisper. The story implies they kissed at the end but they didn't get a Tetris. A lot of it seems to have been through innuendo.

text: There is no implication of romance between the two.

refinement: Hunter and Whisper were close friends for a long time and Whisper was the only one who believed Hunter would receive his Tetris. When they were 16, Hunter developed a crush on Whisper.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to Artelians.

answer: When an Artelian is old enough to start training in the mind and body through meditation and different levels of advanced combat, they spend their entire childhood and teenage years training in order to receive their Tetris. If they refuse to train, they don't get a Tetris. Those who don't train are usually outcast to a society of people called The Anti-Tetris. The Tetris is an individualized soul-bound guardian that is assigned to you by the creator if you have trained well and are worthy of receiving one. They are like dogs, but much larger. Each Tetris is different in personality and appearance.

answer: The World of Artelia has an interesting tiered caste system where people are born and grow up there. An Artelian is another name for human living in Artelia. Arteliuns live in a land where they first begin training from the age of 3 onward in mind and body, in order to fully submit themselves to the creator and receive a Tetris. In essence, the Tetris is a spiritual companion assigned to an individual to always be a bit dependent on their emotions and decisions.

answer: Artelians are people who train their bodies and minds through meditation and different levels of advanced combat. The average Artelian starts at age 3 to begin training. Refusal means that one does not receive a Tetris guardian. The Tetris is an individualized soul-bound guardian given by the creator, who considers the Tetris to be very special. The Tetris reflects the type of personality its owner has.

answer: Artelians have to train their entire childhood and teenage years in order to receive their Tetris. They are assigned a Tetris by their creator, who assigns one to those who train well and are worthy of receiving one. The Tetris resembles a dog, but much, much larger. They can't speak, but they are telepathically linked to their master and make decisions based on their emotions and actions.

answer: Artelians are people who train their bodies and minds through meditation and different levels of advanced combat. The average Artelian starts at age 3 to begin training. Refusal means that one does not receive a Tetris guardian. A Tetris is an individualized, soul-bound guardian that resembles that of a dog but is much larger.  The Tetris reflects the type of personality its owner has.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the story's main conflict.

answer: Hunter is an Artelian who has been training for his Tetris his entire life. He is the only one in his village who has not received one. He ponders why he has not received his Tetris. Whisper, his friend, tells him that their creator sees him as special and that he will be awarded his Tetris. The next morning, Hunter receives a letter from their creator that says he is special and that he will be awarded his Tetris in time.

answer: Hunter is an Artelian who has been training for his Tetris his entire life. He is the only one in his village who has not received one. He ponders why he has not received his Tetris. Whisper, his friend, tells him that their creator sees him as special and that he will be awarded his Tetris. The next morning, Hunter receives a letter from their creator that says he is special and that he will be awarded his Tetris in time. The story ends with Hunter thinking he is so close to getting a Tetris.

answer: The protagonist seems to have no trouble getting along in his village, but is struggling against jealousy that everyone already has a Tetris. This includes his "friend" Whisper, who trains hard and receives hers even at age 16. Despite her encouragement, the protagonist is insanely jealous and question everyone's competency and fortune. Worse, he seems to be overwhelmed with the social pressure of being compared and judgment: the least he could do is get a Tetris too.

answer: Hunter has been training his entire life to be assigned a Tetris, but every time he recounts his experience to his friend, Whisper, she reminds him of how close to achieving his goal he is. The story closes when Hunter reads a letter from a person who knows Hunter is special, chosen and being rewarded for that.

text: The conflict is not clearly stated in the response.

refinement: Hunter has been training his entire life to be assigned a Tetris but is the only one left among his companions who hasn't received one. Every time he recounts his experience to his friend, Whisper, she reminds him of how close to achieving his goal he is. The story closes when Hunter reads a letter from a person who knows Hunter is special, chosen and being rewarded for that.

answer: Hunter has been training his entire life to be assigned a Tetris, but every time he recounts his experience to his friend, Whisper, she reminds him of how close to achieving his goal he is. He is finally assigned one.

text: The story's main conflict is not mentioned in the response.

refinement: Hunter has been training his entire life to be assigned a Tetris but is the only one among his companions who hasn't received one. every time he recounts his experience to his friend, Whisper, she reminds him of how close to achieving his goal he is. He is finally assigned one.

answer: The protagonist seems to have no trouble getting along in his village, but is struggling against jealousy that everyone already has a Tetris. This includes his "friend" Whisper, who trains hard and receives hers even at age 16. Despite her encouragement, the protagonist is insanely jealous and question everyone's competency and fortune. Worse, he seems to be overwhelmed with the social pressure of being compared and judgment: the least he could do is get a Tetris too. Given that it's a serious lifelong process that usually starts at a very early age (3), he finds it hard not to have one. Hence, when he gets a mysterious letter that says his Tetris is coming, he gets all excited, which I'm sure exasperates him even more.

text: The story's main conflict is not explicitly mentioned in the response.

refinement: The protagonist seems to have no trouble getting along in his village because he hasn't received his Tetris. He is struggling against jealousy that everyone already has a Tetris. This includes his "friend" Whisper, who trains hard and receives hers even at age 16. Despite her encouragement, the protagonist is insanely jealous and question everyone's competency and fortune. Worse, he seems to be overwhelmed with the social pressure of being compared and judgment: the least he could do is get a Tetris too. Given that it's a serious lifelong process that usually starts at a very early age (3), he finds it hard not to have one. Hence, when he gets a mysterious letter that says his Tetris is coming, he gets all excited, which I'm sure exasperates him even more.

answer: Hunter has been training all his life in order to receive a Tetris, but he has yet to receive one. Whisper, his friend, tells him he's special and has a good reason why he hasn't gotten his Tetris yet. The next morning he receives a letter from the creator of Artelia, saying he was chosen and that he has a very special Tetris for him.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about worthiness?

answer: No answer

answer: Whisper's Tetris is 280 pounds and has the usual 4 legs, big floppy ears, two silky soft angelic wings, and a 3 foot long bushy tail. Hunter thinks he is not worthy of a Tetris because he hasn't received one yet.

text: The story does not mention anything about worthiness.

answer: The Tetris is a soul-bound guardian that is assigned to you by the creator. If you refuse to train, you don't get a Tetris. Those who don't train are usually outcast to a society of people called The Anti-Tetris. The Tetris is an individualized, soul-bound guardian that is assigned to you by the creator, given you have trained well and are worthy of receiving one. The Tetris is a dog-like creature that is telepathically linked to its master and is able to act and make decisions based on your emotions and actions.

text: The story does not mention anything relating to worthiness.

answer: Most of the natives have training in the mind and body. If an Artelian is old enough to start training, he will probably be sent for a training. However, if one does not want to train, he won't be assigned a Tetris. Training includes meditation and a lot of exercise to lift weights, do martial arts, etc. If a native refuses to train and not be assigned a Tetris, he would be unworth and outcasted to the society we call Anti-Tetris.

text: The story does not mention anything relating to worthiness.

answer: Artelia is a land that breeds hardworking, obedient, and disciplined citizens. Training begins early, and children have to train diligently and diligently before they get to have a guardian-like Tetris, which is an embodiment of the main god of their tradition. Those who are not disciplined and refuse to train are outcast to the Anti-Tetris.

text: The story does not mention anything relating to worthiness.

answer: The Tetris is a soul-bound guardian that is assigned to you by the creator. If you refuse to train, you don't get a Tetris. Those who don't train are usually outcast to a society of people called The Anti-Tetris. The Tetris is an individualized, soul-bound guardian that is assigned to you by the creator, given you have trained well and are worthy of receiving one. The Tetris is a dog-like creature that is telepathically linked to its master and is able to act and make decisions based on your emotions and actions. The Tetris is a dog-like creature that is telepathically linked to its master and is able to act and make decisions based on your emotions and actions. The Tetris is a dog-like creature that is telepathically linked to its master and is able to act and make decisions based on your emotions and actions.

text: The story does not mention anything relating to worthiness.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about bravery?

answer: No answer

answer: The boy shows bravery when he remains calm and reinforced after being kidnapped.

text: The story does not mention anything relating to bravery.

answer: No answer

answer: Hunter had the bravery to continue training and believing in himself despite what others my say about him. He trained all his life for the Tetris and even with the hardest training he had yet to be awarded it.

text: The story does not mention anything relating to bravery.

answer: No answer

answer: Hunter had the bravery to continue training and believing in himself despite what others might say about him. He trained all his life for the Tetris and even with the hardest training he had yet to be awarded it.

text: The story does not mention anything relating to bravery.

answer: The text does not mention bravery.


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ACE HOTEL DOWNTOWN LOS ANGELES, originally built as the CALIFORNIA PETROLEUM CORPORATION BUILDING and later known as the TEXACO BUILDING, is a , 13-story highrise hotel and theater building located at 937 South Broadway in downtown Los Angeles, California. It was the tallest building in the city for one year after its completion in 1927, and was the tallest privately owned structure in Los Angeles until 1956. Its style is Spanish Gothic, patterned after Segovia Cathedral in Segovia, Spain.

The building contains the historic UNITED ARTISTS THEATRE, the flagship theater built for the United Artists motion picture studio. The theater was later used as a church by pastors Gene Scott and his widow Melissa Scott under the name “University Cathedral”. In October 2011, Scott's Wescott Christian Center Inc. sold the building to Greenfield Partners, a real estate investment company located in Westport, Connecticut, for $11 million.[1] It was converted to a hotel, and opened in 2014. The hotel is part of the Ace Hotels chain.

United Artists Theatre period

[Street facade on Broadway.] The theatre was designed by the architect C. Howard Crane of the firm Walker & Eisen for the United Artists film studio formed by D. W. Griffith, Charlie Chaplin, Douglas Fairbanks and Mary Pickford.[2] The theater, a classic movie palace, was one of many constructed by United Artists and served as a major premier house. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story building and has a 2,214-seat auditorium.[3] Like many movie theaters, the seat rows sink in toward the front of the orchestra section, so ticket holders there must look up at the stage.[4]

University Cathedral period

[Cinema-theatre-church marquee and entrance.] The building was first leased by televangelist Gene Scott in 1989, to be used as the location from which to broadcast the live Sunday services of his ministry. Scott held his first Sunday service there in 1990 and continued to hold Sunday services there until his death in 2005. A designated historic monument in itself, the building was for many years topped by the historic “Jesus Saves” neon signs (originally from the Church of the Open Door). They were located in the rear lower roof, one facing the west and one north, until September 10, 2011, when one sign was removed by crane. The building was claimed to house the largest collection of Bibles in private hands. After leasing for thirteen years, Gene Scott purchased the building in 2002. Following Scott's death, services continued to be held at the Los Angeles University Cathedral by Melissa Scott, the widow of Gene Scott, with services broadcast over TV, shortwave radio, and the Internet.

Ace Hotel conversion

The building has been completely restored and renovated to serve as a luxury boutique hotel called ACE HOTEL DOWNTOWN LOS ANGELES. It features 182 rooms, a pool, a restaurant and three bars, as well as the restored theatre.[5] It opened on January 16, 2014. In December 2014, Greenfield Partners put the building up for sale, seeking about $100 million as the sale price.[6] In May 2015, Chesapeake Lodging Trust bought the building for $103 million.[7]

The theater was restored as well and re-opened on February 14, 2014, with concerts by the British rock band Spiritualized.[8] L.A. Dance Project, a dance company founded by choreographer Benjamin Millepied, will also take residence in the Theatre at Ace Hotel.[9] Red Hot Chili Peppers performed a fundraiser at the Ace Hotel on February 5, 2016 in support of presidential candidate Bernie Sanders.[10]

Broadway Theater Historic District

The building is a historic district contributing property in the Broadway Theater District on the National Register of Historic Places. It is also a Los Angeles Historic-Cultural Monument.[11]

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title: Ace Hotel Los Angeles

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the United Artists Theatre?

answer: The United Artists Theatre is a classic movie theater located in a high-rise building in Downtown Los Angeles. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story structure, and has a 2,214-seat auditorium. The building was originally built for the United Artists motion picture studio and was designed by C. Howard Crane of the Walker & Eisen firm. The theater is a designated historic monument and a Los Angeles Historic-Cultural Monument. The theater was restored in 2014 following its conversion to a hotel, and re-opened with a concert by the British rock band Spiritualized.

text: It's the theater and not the whole building that was built for the United Artists motion picture studio.

refinement: The United Artists Theatre is a classic movie theater located in a high-rise building in Downtown Los Angeles. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story structure, and has a 2,214-seat auditorium. It was originally built for the United Artists motion picture studio and was designed by C. Howard Crane of the Walker & Eisen firm. The theater is a designated historic monument and a Los Angeles Historic-Cultural Monument. The theater was restored in 2014 following its conversion to a hotel, and re-opened with a concert by the British rock band Spiritualized.

text: The statement that the theater is a historic monument and a Los Angeles Historic-Cultural Monument is inaccurate. It's the building that's a historic monument. The theater occupies only 3 floors of the building.

refinement: The United Artists Theatre is a classic movie theater located in a high-rise building in Downtown Los Angeles. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story structure, and has a 2,214-seat auditorium. It was originally built for the United Artists motion picture studio and was designed by C. Howard Crane of the Walker & Eisen firm. The theater was restored in 2014 following its conversion to a hotel, and re-opened with a concert by the British rock band Spiritualized.

text: The statement "following its conversion to a hotel " is misleading. It's the whole building that was converted to a hotel and not just the theater. This statement may be removed.

refinement: The United Artists Theatre is a classic movie theater located in a high-rise building in Downtown Los Angeles. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story structure, and has a 2,214-seat auditorium. It was originally built for the United Artists motion picture studio and was designed by C. Howard Crane of the Walker & Eisen firm. The theater was restored in 2014 and re-opened with a concert by the British rock band Spiritualized.

text: The name of the building where the theater is located should be mentioned.

refinement: The United Artists Theatre is a classic movie theater located in a high-rise building, Ace Hotel, in Downtown Los Angeles. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story structure, and has a 2,214-seat auditorium. It was originally built for the United Artists motion picture studio and was designed by C. Howard Crane of the Walker & Eisen firm. The theater was restored in 2014 and re-opened with a concert by the British rock band Spiritualized.

text: The comma in the second sentence is unnecessary.

refinement: The United Artists Theatre is a classic movie theater located in a high-rise building, Ace Hotel, in Downtown Los Angeles. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story structure and has a 2,214-seat auditorium. It was originally built for the United Artists motion picture studio and was designed by C. Howard Crane of the Walker & Eisen firm. The theater was restored in 2014, following its building's conversion to a hotel, and re-opened with a concert by the British rock band Spiritualized.

answer: The United Artists Theatre was the flagship theater built for the United Artists motion picture studio. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story building and has a 2,214-seat auditorium.

text: The name of the building should be mentioned.

refinement: The United Artists Theatre was the flagship theater built for the United Artists motion picture studio. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story Ace Hotel building and has a 2,214-seat auditorium.

text: It's good to include in the response who designed the theater.

refinement: The United Artists Theatre was the flagship theater built for the United Artists motion picture studio. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story Ace Hotel building and has a 2,214-seat auditorium. It was designed by architect C. Howard Crane of the firm Walker & Eisen.

answer: The original United Artists Theatre was an ornate movie palace built for the United Artists film studio by C. Howard Crane. It won't be demolished in 2011 and again in 2014, something that allowed Greenfield Partners to convert the place into the Ace Hotel Downtown Los Angeles by bringing it back to life.

text: The statement that the theater won't be demolished in 2011 and in 2014 is confusing and inaccurate. This should be removed.

refinement: The original United Artists Theatre was an ornate movie palace built for the United Artists film studio by C. Howard Crane. Something that allowed Greenfield Partners to convert the place into the Ace Hotel Downtown Los Angeles by bringing it back to life.

text: It should be mentioned where the theater is located.

refinement: The original United Artists Theatre was an ornate movie palace built for the United Artists film studio by C. Howard Crane. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story Ace Hotel. Something that allowed Greenfield Partners to convert the place into the Ace Hotel Downtown Los Angeles by bringing it back to life.

text: The last sentence is unclear and gives not-so-important information.

refinement: The original United Artists Theatre was an ornate movie palace built for the United Artists film studio by C. Howard Crane. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story Ace Hotel.

text: It should be mentioned that it was closed but was restored later on.

refinement: The original United Artists Theatre was an ornate movie palace built for the United Artists film studio by C. Howard Crane. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story Ace Hotel. For a time, the theater was used as a church, but in 2014, the theater was restored.

text: It should be mentioned that Spiritualized and Red Hot Chilli Pepper have used the theater for their performances.

refinement: The original United Artists Theatre was an ornate movie palace built for the United Artists film studio by C. Howard Crane. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story Ace Hotel. For a time, the theater was used as a church, but in 2014, the theater was restored. The band Spiritualized and Red Hot Chilli Pepper have performed in the said theater.

answer: The text discusses the United Artists Theatre, a landmark in the Los Angeles theatre district. The theatre was created by the architectural firm Walker & Eisen for the United Artists film studio, and it was originally used as a premier house. After being leased by televangelist Gene Scott, the building was extensively renovated in preparation for use as a boutique hotel. The theatre continues to function as a performance space.

text: The landmark is the building and not the theater itself, which occupies only three floors of it.

refinement: The theatre was created by the architectural firm Walker & Eisen for the United Artists film studio, and it was originally used as a premier house. After being leased by televangelist Gene Scott, the building was extensively renovated in preparation for use as a boutique hotel. The theatre continues to function as a performance space.

text: It should be mentioned that the building was used later as a church.

refinement: The theatre was created by the architectural firm Walker & Eisen for the United Artists film studio, and it was originally used as a premier house. Then it was later used as a church. After being leased by televangelist Gene Scott, the building was extensively renovated in preparation for use as a boutique hotel. The theatre continues to function as a performance space.

text: The response should mention that the United Artists Theatre occupies three floors of the 13-story building located in Los Angeles, California.

refinement: The United Artists Theatre occupies three floors of the 13-story building, Ace Hotel, located in Los Angeles, California. The theatre was created by the architectural firm Walker & Eisen for the United Artists film studio, and it was originally used as a premier house. Then it was later used as a church. After being leased by televangelist Gene Scott, the building was extensively renovated in preparation for use as a boutique hotel. The theatre continues to function as a performance space.

answer: The United Artists Theatre is contained within the Ace Hotel. It was the flagship theater built for the United Artists motion picture studio. It was designed by C. Howard Crane and served as a major movie premier house. It occupies three floors of the 13-story building, and has a 2,214-seat auditorium. It was later used as a church by pastors Gene Scott and his widow Melissa Scott under the name "University Cathedral." The theater was restored and re-opened in 2014.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the building in the 2010s?

answer: The building was completely restored and renovated to serve as a luxury boutique hotel called the Ace Hotel Downtown Los Angeles, part of the Ace Hotels chain, in 2014. The new hotel features 182 rooms, a pool, a restaurant, and three bars, as well as the restored theater. It was sold by Greenfield Partners to the Chesapeake Lodging Trust in 2015 for $103 million. The theater has featured performances by Spiritualized and a fundraiser performance by the Red Hot Chili Peppers.

answer: The building was originally a 13-story highrise hotel and theater building built in 1927. In October 2011, it was sold to Greenfield Partners and converted into a boutique hotel. The theater was restored and reopened in February 2014.

text: Since the instruction asks for happenings in the 2010s, the first sentence gives irrelevant information since it talks about 1927. It should be removed.

refinement: In October 2011, it was sold to Greenfield Partners and converted into a boutique hotel. The theater was restored and reopened in February 2014.

text: It should be mentioned that Greenfield Partners sold the building to Chesapeake Lodging Trust in 2015 for $103 million.

refinement: In October 2011, it was sold to Greenfield Partners and converted into a boutique hotel. The theater was restored and reopened in February 2014. Greenfield Partners sold the building to Chesapeake Lodging Trust in 2015 for $103 million.

text: It should be mentioned that the building was converted to Ace Hotel.

refinement: In October 2011, the building was sold to Greenfield Partners and converted into a boutique hotel called Ace Hotel. The theater was restored and reopened in February 2014. Greenfield Partners sold the building to Chesapeake Lodging Trust in 2015 for $103 million.

answer: Starting in 2014, the building was transformed from the California Petroleum Corporation Building to the Ace Hotel by Greenfield Partners. The building was completely restored and renovated and services were managed by Greenfield Partners, to be sold in 2016.

text: For clarity, it should be mentioned that Greenfield Partners bought the building from Wescott Christian Center Inc for $11 million.

refinement: Starting in 2014, the building was transformed from the California Petroleum Corporation Building to the Ace Hotel when Greenfield Partners bought the building from Wescott Christian Center Inc. for $11 million. The building was completely restored and renovated and services were managed by Greenfield Partners, to be sold in 2016.

text: Greenfield Partners sold the building in 2015, not 2016.

refinement: Starting in 2014, the building was transformed from the California Petroleum Corporation Building to the Ace Hotel when Greenfield Partners bought the building from Wescott Christian Center Inc. for $11 million. The building was completely restored and renovated and services were managed by Greenfield Partners, to be sold in 2015.

text: IT should be mentioned who bought the building in 2015.

refinement: Starting in 2014, the building was transformed from the California Petroleum Corporation Building to the Ace Hotel when Greenfield Partners bought the building from Wescott Christian Center Inc. for $11 million. The building was completely restored and renovated and services were managed by Greenfield Partners, to be sold to  Chesapeake Lodging Trust in 2015.

answer: The Ace Hotel Los Angeles, originally built as a high rise hotel and theater building, underwent restoration and is now a luxury boutique hotel. The building contains the historic theater originally built for the United Artists motion picture studio. The theater has been restored, and performances by both United Artists and L.A. Dance Project are now hosted in it. It is part of the Broadway Theater District and a Los Angeles Historic-Cultural Monument.

text: It is not very important to give so much detail about the theater.

refinement: The Ace Hotel Los Angeles, originally built as a high rise hotel and theater building, underwent restoration and is now a luxury boutique hotel. The building contains the historic theater originally built for the United Artists motion picture studio. It is part of the Broadway Theater District and a Los Angeles Historic-Cultural Monument.

text: The theater has been in building even before 2010, so this detail is irrelevant.

refinement: The Ace Hotel Los Angeles, originally built as a high rise hotel and theater building, underwent restoration and is now a luxury boutique hotel. It is part of the Broadway Theater District and a Los Angeles Historic-Cultural Monument.

text: It should be mentioned when the building was restored.

refinement: The Ace Hotel Los Angeles, originally built as a high rise hotel and theater building, underwent restoration in 2014 and is now a luxury boutique hotel. It is part of the Broadway Theater District and a Los Angeles Historic-Cultural Monument.

text: An important thing that happened to the building in the 2010s is that its change of ownership.

refinement: The Ace Hotel Los Angeles, originally built as a high rise hotel and theater building, underwent restoration in 2014 and is now a luxury boutique hotel. It is part of the Broadway Theater District and a Los Angeles Historic-Cultural Monument. Greenfield Partners sold the theater to Chesapeake Lodging Trust in 2015 for $103 million.

text: "High-rise" should be hyphenated.

refinement: The Ace Hotel Los Angeles, originally built as a high-rise hotel and theater building, underwent restoration in 2014 and is now a luxury boutique hotel. It is part of the Broadway Theater District and a Los Angeles Historic-Cultural Monument. Greenfield Partners sold the theater to Chesapeake Lodging Trust in 2015 for $103 million.

answer: In October 2011, Greenfield Partners bought the building, converting it into a hotel and conserving the building's theater, opening it in 2014. The hotel includes a restaurant and two bars, as well as the restored theater, which opened in 2014. In December 2014, Greenfield Partners put the building up for sale, claiming it was an investment or assessing its value — they desired up to $100 million based on what they received from the sale. In May 2015, Chesapeake Lodging Trust bought the building for $103 million.

text: The last two sentences have too much unnecessary detail that may be removed. The important idea to be retained is that Chesapeake Lodging Trust bought the building from Greenfield Partners in 2015 for $103 million.

refinement: In October 2011, Greenfield Partners bought the building, converting it into a hotel and conserving the building's theater, opening it in 2014. The hotel includes a restaurant and two bars, as well as the restored theater, which opened in 2014. Chesapeake Lodging Trust bought the building from Greenfield Partners in 2015 for $103 million.

text: The new name of the building should be mentioned

refinement: In October 2011, Greenfield Partners bought the building, converting it into a hotel named Ace Hotel Downtown Los Angeles and conserving the building's theater, opening it in 2014. The hotel includes a restaurant and two bars, as well as the restored theater, which opened in 2014. Chesapeake Lodging Trust bought the building from Greenfield Partners in 2015 for $103 million.


text:
MICHEL BOUREZ is a French professional surfer born on in Rurutu, French Polynesia, France.[1]

Biography

Michel Bourez started surfing in French Polynesia at age 13.[2] European champion in 2006, Michel entered the ASP World Tour in 2009.

His best results on the World Tour came in 2014, with a 5th place in the overall classification, having won twice during the year: at Margaret River Pro 2014 and Rio de Janeiro and 3rd place in Fiji Pro.

His 2015 season was hampered by a severe injury in May, when doing a free surf session at Teahupoo. A fractured hand and cervical vertebra forced him out of the Rio and Fidji events.

In 2016, he earned his 3rd career victory at the Billabong Pipeline Masters, final event of the 2016 World Tour, finishing 6th overall.

Career and Results

-   2014:
    -   Winner of Margaret River Pro 2014 at Margaret River (Australia).
    -   Winner of Billabong Rio Pro in Rio de Janeiro (Brasil).
-   2016:
    -   Winner of Billabong Pipe Masters at Banzai Pipeline on the North Shore in Oahu (Hawaï)''.

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title: Michel Bourez

question: Who is Michel Bourez?

answer: He is a French professional surfer.

answer: Michel Bourez is a French professional surfer.

answer: A French professional surfer born in Rurutu, French Polynesia, who started surfing at the age of 13 years.

text: The answer is not a complete sentence.

refinement: Bourez is a French professional surfer born in Rurutu, French Polynesia, who started surfing at the age of 13 years.

question: When did Michel Bourez start surfing?

answer: He started surfing at age 13.

answer: He started surfing in French Polynesia when he was thirteen years old.

answer: He started surfing when he was 13 years old.

question: What injuries did Bourez sustain when at Teahupoo?

answer: A fractured hand and cervical vertebra forcing him out of the Rio and Fidji events.

answer: In 2015, Bourez sustained a severe injury to his hand and cervical vertebra while doing a free surf session.

answer: Bourez had a fractured hand and cervical vertebra.

question: Where and when did Bourez earn his 3rd career victory?

answer: Bourez earned his 3rd career victory at the Billabong Pipeline Masters in 2016, where he finished 6th overall.

answer: At the Billabong Pipeline Masters, the final event of the 2016 World Tour.

text: The answer should be a complete sentence.

refinement: He won his third career victory at the Billabong Pipeline Masters, the final event of the 2016 World Tour.

answer: Banzai Pipeline on the North Shore of Oahu (Hawaii)

text: The answer should include the name of the competition.

refinement: The Billabong Pipe Masters Banzai Pipeline on the North Shore of Oahu (Hawaii)

text: The answer should be a complete sentence.

refinement: His third career victory was the Billabong Pipe Masters Banzai Pipeline on the North Shore of Oahu (Hawaii).

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Michel Bourez is a French professional surfer who is known for his success in the 2014 and 2016 Billabong Pipeline Masters.

text: The 2014 competitions that Bourez won were the Margaret River Pro and the Billabong Rio Pro.

refinement: Michel Bourez is a French professional surfer who is known for his success in the 2014 Margert River Pro and the 2016 Billabong Pipeline Masters.

answer: Michel Bourez is a professional surfer who has had some notable successes on the ASP World Tour, including two victories in 2014 and one in 2016 at the Billabong Pipe Masters.

answer: Michel Bourez is a professional surfer who has been particularly successful in 2014 and 2016, winning various prestigious events.

text: The summary should indicate what events Bourez won.

refinement: Michel Bourez is a professional surfer who has been particularly successful in 2014 at the Margaret River Pro and in 2016 at the Billabong Pipe Masters, winning various prestigious events.

answer: A biography of Michel Bourez's  professional surfing career is described in this article.

text: There is no specificity in the answer

refinement: Michel Bourez is a French professional surfer who won the 2014 Margaret River Pro and the 2016 Billabong Pipe Masters.

answer: Michel Bourez is a professional French surfer who has received multiple tournament wins in recent years. His most prominent victories came at the Margaret River and Rio de Janeiro events in 2014, as well as the Billabong Pipe Masters in 2016.

answer: Michel Bourez is a professional surfer who has had success on the ASP World Tour, including two wins in 2014 and 1st place at the 2016 Billabong Pipeline Masters.