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It was the type of sniffles where my nose was so plugged up a blast of compressed air wouldn’t even get through ; the type of sniffles where I could be sure that if I did not wipe, or sniffle every few seconds, there would be a little drop of snot resting the tip of my nose. All day, every few seconds I wipe my nose with a tissue just to keep from getting a puddle on my special ergonomic keyboard, and then I feel it; the tickly feeling at the tip of my penis, after hours of drinking water to stay hydrated, my bladder is stretched, like a little pink balloon, stuck on the helium tank.

I walk down the aisle of gray cubicles, sunlight pouring through the frosted glass offices. The offices get smaller as I get closer to the restroom, but the cubicles remain the same size. I hit the handicap button for the bathroom door, not because I’m handicapped, but because I don’t trust my coworkers and their germ encrusted fingers. With a mechanical whir, the door opens, I enter the bathroom and my heart sinks. In the second stall, under the half-assed doors that stop a full foot from the floor, I can see a pair of scrunched-up polyester dress pants on top of a pair of scuffed black dress shoes, the ones with the square toes, Eccos or something. Even with my stuffed nose, I can discern a certain olfactory character to the air.

I sidle up to the urinal, two steps followed by that funny shuffle as I square myself and and unzip my pants. As I relax, I felt the slight delight as the balloon starts to deflate. Suddenly there is another tickle, this time up, between my eyes and slightly down. I feel the slight tickle of snot as it trickles down my nasal passage.
For ten years now I have been an adult now and unlike elementary school, the tell-tale whitish streak up my sleeve is no longer acceptable, so in general I tend to avoid the sleeve wipe technique. Regardless, I was peeing, so while the sleeve wipe technique may have worked, the sudden lateral movement could not only cause the “white streak on sleeve”, but also the embarrassing “splash mark on pants.” So I do the next best thing, instinctively, I sniffle; an instinctive explosive inhalation of air, through the nose and the roof of mouth into my lungs, to avoid expelling nasal mucus. Following that sudden inhalation is the realization that I just inhaled the aroma my Ecco-shorn, polyester-clad, stalled neighbor expelled. I feel as the sudden inrush of air passes over the back of my tongue, down my throat, pairing the greenish mucus with the odor, plastering it to my air passage. Each successive breath will expel it out, like wind through an alpine valley, past each of my thousands of taste buds, through my teeth and past my chapped lips.

The balloon is only half empty, and slowly I realize that at the rate I am urinating, there will be at least one more sniffle. I shift my weight from foot to foot, settle into my stance, and cry a little inside.

title: Sniffles a bathroom

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is this story about?

answer: The story is about a man whose nose is blocked and who is sniffling while trying to pee, inadvertently inhaling the aromas of the person in the adjacent stall.

answer: A person has congested nose, a filled bladder, and comes from a place where body functions are embarrassing.

text: What does the model mean by '...and comes from a place where body functions are embarrassing.'

refinement: The narrator has a congested nose and a filled bladder. While relieving himself in the bathroom, he inadvertently inhales the body functions of the fellow in the next stall.

answer: People relieving themselves, some before the narrator does so at the same time.

text: The model's answer is vague and confusing.

refinement: The narrator's stuffy nose and his unpleasant bathroom experience.

answer: Peeing.

text: The model's response is vague.

refinement: The story is about the narrator's stuffy nose and his unpleasant bathroom experience.

answer: This story is about someone struggling to urinate while suffering from a sinus infection that causes tickling in their nose and therefore makes them prone to inhaling the bodily fluids of their bathroom stall neighbor. The story discusses the olfactory and taste components of the experience.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the theme of this story?

answer: Being a social outcast.

text: Nothing about the story relates to being a social outcast.

refinement: Being sick and trying to maintain personal hygiene in a public bathroom.

answer: The theme of this story is dealing with the unpleasant aspects of what can happen when you are sick while also having to use the restroom.

answer: Unwitting inhalation.

answer: Suffering from the sniffles while trying to maintain that hygiene as well as make your bladder empty.

text: The model's statement here, '... as well as make your bladder empty....' is incoherent.

refinement: Suffering from the sniffles while also having to use the restroom.

answer: The theme of this story is the unpleasant sensation of having sniffles while having to pee in a public bathroom.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the main character do in the bathroom?

answer: The main character urinates in the urinal while slowly passing mucus in their nose. When the time came to burst, they sniffle to get the mucus out. Then wonder how many sniffles were left to go before they are done.

text:
'When the time came to burst, they sniffle to get the mucus out.'
The narrator sniffed to avoid the mucus being expelled from his nose.
'Then wonder how many sniffles were left to go before they are done.' The sentence appears incomplete and lacks clarity.

refinement: The main character urinates in the urinal while slowly passing mucus in their nose. When the time came to burst, he sniffled to prevent mucus expulsion. He then realized there would be at least another sniffle before he was done.

answer: The main character urinates and then sniffs to avoid expulsion of nasal mucus.

answer: Cries.

text: The model's response is very inaccurate.

refinement: The main character urinates and then sniffs to avoid expulsion of nasal mucus.

answer: The main character urinates while also sniffling to avoid inhaling nasal mucus.

text: '...to avoid inhaling nasal mucus.' If the narrator was already sniffling, that means he was already inhaling nasal mucus. The sentence is not accurate.

refinement: The main character urinates while also sniffling to avoid wiping off the mucus trickling from his nose with his sleeve.

answer: He uses the urinal.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is an attribute of this main character?

answer: The main character is sensitive to smells and disgusted by certain odors.

answer: He is an adult using the restroom at an office where cubicles and other people are not described

text: What the model describes is not a main attribute of the character.

answer: One is that they are disabled.

text: There is no indication in the story that the narrator is disabled.

answer: He has problems with his sniffles

answer: The main character is under hygienic distress.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The narrator spends all day sniffling due to congestion; in the bathroom, they find their stall neighbor's feet and smell their bodily fluids from a distance. They must sniffle every few seconds while peeing, and the smell gets into their lungs.

text: The model's summary is over one sentence.

refinement: The narrator spends all day sniffling due to congestion; in the bathroom, they find their stall neighbor's feet and smell their bodily fluids from a distance.

answer: The author describes their embarrassing, nasal and bladder-related problem in a bathroom.

text: The narrator did not describe a bladder-related problem.

refinement: This story is about a person who has difficulties with his nasal congestion and how, while he was urinating, he had to perceive the stench emanating from the bathroom stall of another person's bodily functions.

answer: The protagonist sneezes constantly from a stuffed nose while at the urinal in a public bathroom. He realizes that each sneeze will force inhalation of the stall neighbor's malodorous fumes. This smell lingers in his lungs and throat, making him miserable.

text:
The narrator does not sneeze throughout the story, the inhalation was a result of the trickling of mucus accumulating in his nose and the summary is over a sentence long.
The model's summary is mostly inaccurate.

refinement: The narrator spends all day sniffling due to congestion; in the bathroom, they find their stall neighbor's feet and smell their bodily fluids from a distance.

answer: The narrator relieves himself until their bladder is stretched like pink balloon.

text:
The narrator likens his full bladder to that of a little pink balloon.
The model's response lacks clarity.

refinement: The narrator has nasal congestions. He later relieves himself in the restroom and despite having a blocked sinus, he could perceive the stench coming from the next stall.

answer: This story is about a person who cries and urinates in a bathroom.

text: According to the article, when the narrator said, "...and cry a little inside," it meant he was miserable.

refinement: This story is about a person who has difficulties with his nasal congestion and how, while he was urinating, he had to perceive the stench emanating from the bathroom stall of another person's bodily functions.


split: train

text:
It was a cold, dark night…

I lay in the corner of the street, my head in a puddle, a smell of what can only be described as death circling my very presence. I had lost count of how many days it had been, of how many faces I’ve seen pass me, of how many feet I’ve watched shuffle aside, trying their hardest to avoid my very existence. Of how many eyes had looked at me, and burnt hatred so deep it became almost intolerable. Sheer disgust, seeping out of the breath of everyone who passed. That is what my life had become. Ever since that one day. When everything I thought I knew was ripped apart in front of me.

It was the youngest who took me in. He seemed kind, welcomed me. One of those people that deep down you can tell had a good heart even if they hid it beneath a rough, silent exterior. I lived in his room free to do what I felt, unless the others were around, the older ones. When their voices carried through the door, I was hidden under the bed, its so our friendship will be ours alone I would convince myself, that he wanted me to be all his. But I suppose that should have been the first warning sign. Can a place truly be called your home if you have to hide from its very inhabitants? But sadly, I was naive… no, I chose to ignore it, I was too obsessed, too caught up by this newfound friendship to ever even consider the truth. I thought everything was perfect. Then it happened.  It was late at night, the door slammed behind him as the boy tumbled in. Raised voices instantly burnt through the very walls that surrounded me, through the doors, through everything. I had heard anger in those voices before, the times when I hid, but nothing like this, this was… new. The door crashed open, the boy collapsing to the ground. Eyes bloodshot, his mouth lined with dry, cracked vomit, his shirt, blooded, torn and stained. A sight that I wished I would never see again. As he hit the ground, he looked up at me, but there was no affection any more, just pure emptiness. I heard the voices come closer. There was no time to hide, no time to be hidden. Voices entered the room; eyes were cast down the decrepit shell lying on the floor, then to me. Hatred. Rough hands were placed on me, words crying out that I was to blame, that somehow, this was my entire fault. My protests, my cries of defense, all fell on deaf ears. No matter how much I pleaded, no matter how many times I cried out to them that there was more to me, more I could give to them, it was all to no avail. I was tossed out on the street, my once home fading in my eyesight as I tumbled, seemingly forever, sinking in to my own personal abyss.

An icy wind blew threw me, bringing me back from the horrid memory. I rolled onto my side, no longer sure if it was by my own personal doing or if I simply lacked the strength to offer any resistance. This is it, I thought to myself. This is how it is going to end. All the things I could have done, the places I could have seen, and now this will become my final resting place, a blotch in the street, surrounded by the ear wrecking sound of traffic and drunks. Some rest indeed. Through all the noise, I heard footsteps walking towards me. No doubt to impose some form of abuse towards me in my final moments I had thought. But no, a hand rested on my body. Warmth that I had not felt since… the boy? I turned around and stared up, locking eyes with an unfamiliar face. It was irrelevant. This man has picked me up in my time of need. He had saved me.

 took me to some form of haven for my kind. After I adjusted to the contrast of light, I looked around and saw countless amounts of those in the same position as me. It was amazing. I was no longer a freak. No longer an outcast, I was amongst my own kind at last. The time I spent there was the happiest of my life. On occasions, members of our private little community would be taken away by strangers from the outside, I had lost a few good friends through that, but even then the kind man would always bring in new members, new friends to be made, stories to be heard, connections to be formed. I should have learnt. All good things must come to a pass.

The horrendous noise sounded, the noise that sounded the arrival of a stranger. As usual, our host welcomed the man with open arms, allowing him to take his pick of who he wanted. The stranger cast his eyes along the crowd, passing by everyone I knew, his gaze nonchalant to all. All that is, except me. He looked straight at me, and stopped. Eyes bloodshot, his mouth lined with dry, cracked vomit, his shirt, blooded, torn and stained. The memory flooded through me. It was then I realized just how blind I had been. The night that changed it all, it had not been emptiness in the boy’s eyes. It had been lust! And it was lust again the bore its way inside my soul. The stranger had chosen. I wouldn’t be saying goodbye to a friend this time. I would be saying goodbye to everything.

The door opened to his building. And a building it would always be, never a home. No place with so much vile hatred seeping out of every crack in the wall, so much murk and gloom pouring out of every shadow, could ever be called a home. He sat in front of me, breathing his horrid breath over my neck, running his fingers down my body, inhaling my breath. I knew straight away, this was never going to end well. He lifted me, I felt weightless and powerless under his grasp. He put his lips around me, and it felt like he drank the very life force from my body. His brown, crusted teeth scraping against me, as his course tongue brought him to the satisfaction he had desired for so long. After what felt like an eternity in the lowest ring of hell, he was done. The door was opened, and for the second time in my life, I was cast out. This time however, there was no remorse. There was nothing. I was resound to my fate.

And that’s how I arrived here, lying once again in a gutter. This time, I know there will be no retribution. I can see my life flowing from my body. It’s coming to an end. If only things had been different. If only we really did have medicinal qualities, then maybe, just maybe, this wouldn’t be the end of just one more bottle of Buckfast.

title: The first story I wrote, no title, around 1100 words. Constructive criticism is welcome. :)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

From whose perspective is this story told?

answer: The story is told from the perspective of the narrator.

text: That's a tautology

answer: A bottle of Buckfast.

answer: The story is told from the perspective of the character who is cast out of their home.

text: We need to get the punchline

answer: From the bottle of Buckfast.

answer: The narrator is a bottle of Buckfast.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why is the bottle of Buckfast thrown out by the boy's parents?

answer: The boy's parents throw out the bottle of Buckfast because the boy has committed some sort of crime, and they do not want to be seen supporting him in any way. They also likely don't want to have anything in their home associated with the crime.

text: He uses it to get drunk.

answer: The bottle of Buckfast was thrown out by the boy's parents because they believed it took part in some sort of wrongdoing. The parents likely believed that the alcohol had caused the tragic events that followed giving the bottle a bad reputation.

text: He uses it to get drunk.

answer: He uses it to get drunk.

answer: To punish him for some wrongdoing.

text: He uses it to get drunk.

answer: It's not implied in the story.

text: He uses it to get drunk.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where was the bottle put by the man who picked it up on the street?

answer: The man put the bottle in his building.

text: In a fridge with other bottles.

answer: The man took the bottle to a collective for his kind, those left in the street.

text: In a fridge with other bottles.

answer: In a bottle return center

text: It is implied in a fridge with other bottles.

answer: The bottle was placed in the stranger's building.

text: It is implied in a fridge with other bottles.

answer: In a fridge with other bottles.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the ultimate fate of the bottle of buckfast?

answer: The bottle of Buckfast ultimately dies on the street, unknown, uncared for, and alone.

text: The personification is a joke

answer: The bottle of buckfast eventually dies of neglect and abuse.

text: Bottles can't die

answer: when the narrator is cast away from the last place they got taken to, they have been so violated so many times that the idea of them trying to live an autonomous life is hopeless. At a dead drop off and left on the side of the road to die.

text: It's in a gutter

answer: It winds up in a gutter.

answer: The bottle is left for dead in a gutter.

text: Correct but too dramatic

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: This story is about a bottle of Buckfast and its journeys through multiple people's lives.

answer: A bottle of wine reflects on its life and the night a sadistic boy rapes it.

text: CW rape

refinement: A bottle of wine reflects on its life and how it wound up in a gutter.

answer: This story is a fictitious fable about Buckfast being kicked out by its adopters, because of the poor judgement of the protagonist who has no real value beyond getting well drunk.

text: Too much extrapolation

refinement: This story is about a bottle of Buckfast and its journeys through multiple people's lives.

answer: The protagonist is living on the street, until one day a stranger selects them as prey. From that point on, their life spirals downward into nightmarish abuse. They discovers they were a victim all along. They ultimately die alone and in pain without any way to vindicate themselves.

text: Way too heavy for a humorous story

refinement: This story is about a bottle of Buckfast and its journeys through multiple people's lives.

answer: The main character was tossed out onto the street after witnessing abuse, then was forced into prostitution and ultimately abandoned to die.

text: No it's a funny story about a bottle

refinement: This story is about a bottle of Buckfast and its journeys through multiple people's lives.


text:
JEAN LOUIS SCHEFER (born 7 December 1938), is a French writer, philosopher, art critic, and theoretician of cinema and image.

A graduate of the École des Hautes Études en Sciences Sociales on _Les écritures figuratives, a problème de grammaire égyptienne_ (under the guidance of Roland Barthes and Algirdas Julien Greimas), Schefer worked in Milan from 1965 to 1966, in the preparation of a dictionary, then in Venice from 1967 to 1968. in Italy he presented works of Gianfranco Pardi, Titina Maselli, , Gianni Colombo and others. From 1970 to 1981 he taught in Paris.

He has collaborated with the magazines ''Tel Quel, ''Communications, _Information sur les sciences sociales_, _Littérature_, _Critique_, and _Cahiers du Cinéma_.

Bibliography

-   1969: _Scénographie d’un tableau_, Éditions du Seuil, _Tel Quel_
-   1975: _L’Invention du corps chrétien_, Éditions Galilée
-   1980: L’Homme ordinaire du cinéma, _Cahiers du cinéma_/Éditions Gallimard
-   1985: _Origine du crime_, Café-Climat
-   1987: Gilles Aillaud,
-   1988: _, groupe Émile Dubois_, in collaboration with Laurence Louppe and , éditions Dis Voir, .
-   1989: _8, rue Juiverie, photographs by _, CompAct
-   1992: _De la peinture - De Pictura (1435)_ by Leon Battista Alberti, preface, translation from Latin and notes by Jean-Louis Schefer, Macula Dédale
-   1995: _La Lumière et la Table_, Maeght éditeur
-   1995: _Question de style_, L’Harmattan
-   1995: _The Enigmatic Body_, Cambridge University Press
-   1997: _Du monde et du mouvement des images_, Cahiers du cinéma
-   1998: _Main courante_,
-   1998: _Figures peintes_, P.O.L, (Prix France Culture, 1999)
-   1998: _Cinématographies_, P.O.L
-   1998: _Choses écrites_, P.O.L
-   1998: _Goya, la dernière hypothèse_, Maeght éditeur
-   1999: _Main courante 2_, P.O.L
-   1999: _Lumière du Corrège_, P.O.L
-   1999: _Questions d'art paléolithique_, P.O.L
-   1999: _Paolo Ucello, le Déluge_, P.O.L
-   1999: _Sommeil du Greco_, P.O.L
-   1999: _Images mobiles_, P.O.L
-   2001: _Main courante 3_, P.O.L
-   2002: _Polyxène et la vierge à la robe rouge_, P.O.L
-   2002: _Chardin_, P.O.L
-   2004: _Une maison de peinture_, ed. Enigmatic
-   2005: _Figures de différents caractères_, P.O.L
-   2007: _L’Hostie profanée - histoire d’une fiction théologique_, P.O.L,
-   2009: _La Cause des portraits_, P.O.L
-   2010: _De quel tremblement de terre..._, P.O.L
-   2011: _Le Temps dont je suis l'hypothèse_, P.O.L
-   2013: _Monsieur Teste à l'école_, P.O.L
-   2016: _Squelettes et autres fantaisies_, P.O.L

title: Jean-Louis Schefer

question: Who is Jean Louis Schefer?

answer: He is a French writer, philosopher, art critic, and theoretician of cinema and image.

text: "Schefer worked in Milan from 1965 to 1966, in the preparation of a dictionary" is evidence that Jean was a writer.

text: "He has collaborated with the magazines ''Tel Quel, ''Communications" is evidence that Jean was a writer.

answer: Jean Louis Schefer is a French writer, philospher, art critic, and theoretician of cinema and image.

text: "He has collaborated with the magazines ''Tel Quel" is evidence that he is a writer.

answer: He is a French writer, philosopher, art critic, and theoretician of cinema and image.

text: "He has collaborated with the magazines ''Tel Quel" is evidence that Jean is a writer.

question: What was Schefer preparing for when he was working in Milan from 1965 to 1966?

answer: Schefer was preparing a dictionary while working in Milan from 1965 to 1966.

text: "Schefer worked in Milan from 1965 to 1966, in the preparation of a dictionary" is evidence that he worked to prepare a dictionary.

answer: He was preparing for a dictionary.

text: Schefer was preparing a dictionary and not preparing for it.

text: "Schefer worked in Milan from 1965 to 1966, in the preparation of a dictionary" is evidence that he was preparing a dictionary.

answer: According to the passage, Schefer worked in Milan from 1965 to 1966 in the preparation of a dictionary.

text: "Schefer worked in Milan from 1965 to 1966, in the preparation of a dictionary" is evidence that he was preparing a dictionary.

question: What magazines had Schefer collaborated with?

answer: The above passage mentions that Schefer has collaborated with the magazines "Tel Quel," "Communications," "Information sur les sciences sociales," "Littérature," "Critique," and "Cahiers du Cinéma."

answer: The above passage states that Jean-Louis Schefer has collaborated with "Tel Quel, Communications, Information sur les sciences sociales, Littérature, Critique, and Cahiers du Cinéma."

answer: He had collaborated with the magazines ''Tel Quel, ''Communications, _Information sur les sciences sociales_, _Littérature_, _Critique_, and _Cahiers du Cinéma.

question: During which years did Schefer teach in Paris?

answer: From 1970 to 1981.

answer: From 1970 to 1981.

answer: Schefer taught in Paris the years of 1970 to 1981.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: This article describes the life and career of Jean Louis Schefer, a French writer and art critic.

text: It is omitted that he was also a philosopher and theoretician of cinema and image.

refinement: This article describes the life and career of Jean Louis Schefer, a French writer and art critic, philosopher, and theoretician of cinema and image.

text: "He has collaborated with the magazines ''Tel Quel" is evidence that he is a writer.

answer: This article describes the career and works of Jean Louis Schefer, a French writer, philosopher, art critic, and theoretician of cinema and image.

answer: Jean Louis Schefer is a French writer, philosopher, and theoretician with several publications.

answer: Jean-Louis Schefer is a French writer, philosopher, art critic, and theoretician of cinema and image.

answer: This article describes French writer, philosopher, art critic, and theoretician of cinema and image Jean-Louis Schefer.

text: Missing comma and unnecessary hyphen - "and image, Jean Louis Schefer."

refinement: This article describes French writer, philosopher, art critic, and theoretician of cinema and image, Jean Louis Schefer.

answer: Jean Louis Schefer is a French writer, philosopher, art critic, and theoretician of cinema and image.


text:
[]_THE LAST JEW IN VINNITSA_ is a photograph taken during the Holocaust in Ukraine showing a Jewish man near the town of Vinnitsa (Vinnytsia) about to be shot dead by a member of _Einsatzgruppe D_, a mobile death squad of the Nazi SS. The victim is kneeling beside a mass grave already containing bodies; behind, a group of SS and Reich Labour Service men watch.[1]

History

The photograph dates from some time between mid-1941, when the Germans occupied the oblast (region) of Vinnytsia, and 1943.[2] During this period there were numerous massacres of Jews in the oblast,[3] including in the town itself on 16 and 22 September 1941 and April 1942, after which those spared were sent to labour camps and the Yerusalimka quarter was largely razed.[4][5][6]

The photograph was circulated in 1961 by United Press (UPI) during the trial of Adolf Eichmann.[7] UPI had received it from Al Moss (b. 1910) a Polish Jew who acquired it in May 1945 shortly after he was liberated from Allach concentration camp by the American 3rd Army.[8][9] Moss, living in Chicago in 1961, wanted people “to know what went on in Eichmann's time”.[10] The UPI copy was published over a full page of _The Forward_.[11]

Some later sources say that the original physical image was in an _Einsatzgruppe_ member's photograph album,[12] or removed from the pocket of a dead soldier;[13] and that written on its reverse side was “Last Jew in Vinnitsa”,[14][15] now sometimes used as the image's name.[16][17][18][19]

Significance

The photograph has become iconic. Some features are unusual among well-known Holocaust pictures: it was taken during the Holocaust rather than after its end, and presumably by someone complicit in the killing; it depicts _Einsatzgruppen_ rather than concentration or extermination camps; the focus is on a solitary victim rather than a multitude.[20][21][22][23][24][25]

The photograph has been reproduced, with different degrees of cropping,[26] in many books and museum exhibits about the Holocaust.[27][28][29][30] Books include ones by Guido Knopp[31] and Michael Berenbaum.[32] Exhibits include in Berlin at “Questions on German History” in the Reichstag building from 1971 to 1994,[33] and then at Topography of Terror[34] and the Memorial to the Murdered Jews of Europe;[35] the Institute of National Remembrance in Poland;[36] the United States Holocaust Memorial Museum;[37] and Yad Vashem.[38]

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title: The Last Jew in Vinnitsa

question: Who is Al Moss?

answer: Al Moss was a Polish Jew who photographed The Last Jew of Vinnitsa and circulated the image to American news outlets in 1961.

text: The original text says he acquired it, not that he took it himself.

refinement: Al Moss was a Polish Jew who acquired The Last Jew of Vinnitsa and circulated the image to American news outlets in 1961.

answer: Al Moss was a Polish Jew who originally obtained the now iconic image of a Jewish man about to be shot by an SS officer.

text: This should be in the present-the text does not indicate Mr Moss has died.

refinement: Al Moss is a Polish Jew who originally obtained the now iconic image of a Jewish man about to be shot by an SS officer.

answer: He is a Polish Jew who found the photograph in May 1945 shortly after he was liberated from the Allach concentration camp.

question: When was the photograph taken?

answer: The Photo was taken during the Holocaust.

text: This answer should cite a year because the original text does.

refinement: The Photo was taken during the Holocaust, between mid-1941 and 1943.

text:
The Photo was taken during the Holocaust.
We know this because according to the text it was taken some time during 1941, and because it was taken in the Ukraine, where Jews were affected by the Holocaust.

answer: The photograph was taken some time between mid-1941 and 1943.

answer: The photograph was taken some time between mid-1941– 1943.

question: How has the photograph become iconic?

answer: It has a few of unusual features. One feature is that it was taken during the Holocaust rather than at its end.

text: I don't think you need to say it has a unique set of features and I also think you should list the multitude of reasons.

refinement: It was taken during the Holocaust rather than at its end, and photographic evidence of the ongoing atrocities was rare. It was presumably taken by someone who was at last an accomplice to the genocide. It also was of an Einsatzgruppen and focused on the individual.

answer: Its unusual aspects consisting of it having been taken during the Holocaust, and presumably by someone complicit in killings. The subject of being an Einsatzgruppen shot rather than a concentration or extermination camp. The focus of the shot being a solitary victim rather than multitude.

text: Grammar issues.

refinement: Its unusual aspects consisting of it having been taken during the Holocaust, and presumably by someone complicit in killings. It also unusual that the subject of the photograph was an Einsatzgruppen shot rather than a concentration or extermination camp, as well as of a solitary victim rather than multitude.

answer: The photograph became iconic because its features are unusual when compared to other well-known pictures of the Holocaust - it's taken during the Holocaust, taken by someone complicit in the killings, and depicts Einsatzgruppen rather than concentration or extermination camps.

question: Who took the photograph?

answer: The photograph is presumed to be taken by someone who is complicit in the man featured in the photograph.

text: Grammar

refinement: The photograph is presumed to be taken by someone who is complicit in the killings.

answer: As the source is in first person point of view, it may be that the film was taken by Hitler's extermination squads.

text: This is a little too speculative to have as the sole and sort of specific answer.

refinement: As the source is in first person point of view, it may be that the film was taken by Hitler's extermination squads-in any case, it is presumed to have been taken by someone complicit in the killings.

answer: Klaus Kinsky

text: It wasn't.

question: List the exhibits where the photograph is shown.

answer:
- Berlin at 'Questions on German History' in the Reichstag building from 1971 to 1994
- Topography of Terror
- The Memorial to the Murdered Jews of Europe

- Institute of National Remembrance in Poland

- United States Holocaust Memorial Museum
- Yad Vashem

answer: Berlin, "Questions on German History" in Reichstag building, 1971 to 1994; Topography of Terror and the Memorial to the Murdered Jews of Europe in Berlin; The Institute of National Remembrance in Poland; the United States Holocaust Memorial Museum in Washington, D.C.; Yad Vashem in Israel

answer: “Questions on German History” in Berlin, Topography of Terror in Berlin, Memorial to the Murdered Jews of Europe in Berlin,  the Institute of National Remembrance in Poland, the United States Holocaust Memorial Museum, and Yad Vashem

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: This article discusses the history and significance of the photograph "The Last Jew in Vinnitsa". It shows a Jewish man near the town of Vinnitsa during the Holocaust in Ukraine about to be shot dead by a member of Einsatzgruppe D, a mobile death squad of the Nazi SS. It was taken somewhere between mid-1943 and 1945.

text: I don't think you need to preface with the language of "this article".

refinement: "The Last Jew in Vinnitsa" is a photograph that shows a Jewish man near the town of Vinnitsa during the Holocaust in Ukraine about to be shot dead by a member of Einsatzgruppe D, a mobile death squad of the Nazi SS. It was taken somewhere between mid-1943 and 1945.

text: " It shows a Jewish man near the town of Vinnitsa during the Holocaust in Ukraine about to be shot dead by a member of Einsatzgruppe D" - "The photograph dates from some time between mid-1941, when the Germans occupied the oblast (region) of Vinnytsia, and 1943.[2] During this period there were numerous massacres of Jews in the oblast,[3] including in the town itself on 16 and 22 September 1941 and April 1942, after which those spared were sent to labour camps and the Yerusalimka quarter was largely razed.[4][5][6]"

answer: In 1943 during the Holocaust, a photographer took a photo of a Jewish man near what would later become Vinnitsa, Ukraine. The victim is shown kneeling in a mass grave with bodies, as Nazis watch.

text: It is thought to have been taken between mid-1941 and 1943.

refinement: Some time between mid-1941 and 1943 during the Holocaust, a photographer took a photo of a Jewish man near what would later become Vinnitsa, Ukraine. The victim is shown kneeling in a mass grave with bodies, as Nazis watch.

text: "...would later become Vinnitsa, Ukraine" - "The photograph dates from some time between mid-1941, when the Germans occupied the oblast (region) of Vinnytsia, and 1943.[2]".

answer: This is a photo of a Jewish man who has been waiting for his execution outside of Vinnytsia by Einsatzgruppe D.

text: There should be more detail.

refinement: This is an iconic photo of a Jewish man, taken sometime between mid-1941 and 1943, at what is now known as Vinnitsa, Ukraine.  He is waiting for his execution outside of by Einsatzgruppe D, a Nazi group. It is a rare photograph because it is not taken at the end of the Holocaust, and because it shows a singular man instead of group.

answer: The picture includes a close-up photograph of a Jewish man kneeling, with his back to the camera and two Nazis in the foreground, one of them holding what appears to be an automatic gun. On the back of the photograph there is a handwritten note "Last Jew in Vinnitsa" which was inscribed by the Nazis that took the picture. The picture was taken during the Holocaust in Ukraine during 1941-1943.

text: This should include a brief but pointed mention of why the photograph is iconic.

refinement: This is an iconic, close-up photograph of a Jewish man kneeling, with his back to the camera and two Nazis in the foreground, one of them holding what appears to be an automatic gun. On the back of the photograph there is a handwritten note "Last Jew in Vinnitsa" which was inscribed by the Nazis that took the picture. The picture was taken during the Holocaust in Ukraine during 1941-1943. What is unique about this photograph is that it was taken during the Holocaust as opposed to the end, and that it was presumably taken by someone complicit in the killing.

answer: The photograph is an image of a Jewish man kneeling by a mass grave waiting to be shot. This photograph was taken during the Holocaust by a Nazi shortly before the man's death at the hands of the Nazis during the Holocaust.

text: There should be more details as to why the photograph is iconic (as well as the mention that it is iconic).

refinement: The iconic photograph is an image of a Jewish man kneeling by a mass grave waiting to be shot. This photograph was taken during the Holocaust by a Nazi shortly before the man's death at the hands of the Nazis during the Holocaust. It is rare because it was taken in the middle of the Holocaust rather than at the end, and because presumably the person who took it was at least complicit in the killing.

text: "before the man's death"  - "... During this period there were numerous massacres of Jews in the oblast,[3] including in the town itself on 16 and 22 September 1941 and April 1942, after which those spared were sent to labour camps and the Yerusalimka quarter was largely razed.[4][5][6]".

answer: What was the identity of the last Jew in Vinnitsa, why he was chosen for the picture, and why the picture has become so iconic.

text: This isn't a summary.

refinement: What was the identity of the last Jew in Vinnitsa, why he was chosen for the picture, and why the picture has become so iconic.


text:
Architecture is the new medium taking the forefront of modern art and design. These five Chicago-based photographers show us exactly what it’s like living in the concrete jungle, from different cities around the world.

Vittoria Zupicich Captures An Italian Church That Is Anything But ArchaicBehancehttps://www.behance.net/gallery/38763247/Building-with-LightYou wouldn’t typically think of a church as an example of modern architecture, but The Church of Saint Paul the Apostle in Foligno proves us wrong. With geometric concrete windows and bold lighting fixtures, this church was one of photographer Vittoria Zupicich’s most well-received projects. Zupicich is an architectural photographer who travels between San Francisco and Chicago to capture architectural art and design. Her work is especially popular in San Francisco. However, this church project was one of her personal favorites. She says it “forces the viewer to wonder about the meaning of Christian architecture of our time.”nextpage

In need of the perfect architectural photographer in Los Angeles? You can never go wrong with this list!

Hunter KerhartPhoto courtesy of hunterkerhart.comhttp://hunterkerhart.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/07/The-Spring-Arcade-by-Hunter-Kerhart-Small.jpgHunter Kerhart is freelance architectural photographer specializing in historic sites and structures. Certified by the Association of Independent Architectural Photographers (AIAP) and the Professional Aerial Photographers Association (PAPA), his work ranges from aerial, exteriors, interiors, to urban and cityscape.
WEBSITE: www.hunterkerhart.comnextpage

As an oil, gas, and energy hub, many people don’t think of Houston as an architectural powerhouse. But, as a growing city with other major industries like healthcare, research and technology, the Texas town has a lot more to offer than meets the eye. These top five architectural photographers have the skill and creativity to showcase the hidden beauty of the city.

Vittoria ZupicichVittoria Zupichichhttp://vittoriazupicich.com/After making a name for herself on the West Coast, Vittoria Zupicich is now making a splash in Texas with her award-winning skills photographing the architecture and design throughout Houston. Her photographs of architecture for an array of clients is showcased in exhibits as far as California. In addition, she was ranked first in American Photographic Artists (APAs) Architecture Category. Her many accolades and accomplishments, along with her impressive portfolio make her an excellent pick to shoot commercial architecture.nextpage

The City of Brotherly Love also has a lot of love for its amazing architecture. These five photographers from the city have showcased these buildings in astonishing ways.

Vittoria ZupicichVittoria Zupicichhttp://vittoriazupicich.com/galleria.php?rif=49Vittoria Zupicich’s biggest inspiration for photography was her father. “From his very first day of parenthood, he became obsessed with photographing every moment of his three daughters’ lives,” she stated on her website. Over the recent years, Zupicich has become a praised photographer with numerous accolades to her name.nextpage

When it comes to astonishing architectural photographers in the Big Apple, the list is endless. These five photographers are surely some of the most prolific out there today.

Chris CooperChris Cooperhttp://www.chriscooperphotographer.com/From Carrier & Company to Specter DeSouza Architects, Chris Cooper has worked with a long list of clients in the area. The photographer manages to show off his versatile styles on occasion. “My shooting style varies by project… I’m as fluent in a highly crafted controlled lighting style as I am in a natural light ‘decisive moment’ journalistic style,” he said on his website.nextpage

Vakil Mosque, ShirazPhoto courtesy of: 500pxhttps://500px.com/photo/86103851/vakil-mosque-by-mohammad-reza-domiri-ganji-In their entirety, Mosques showcase a few of the most beautiful architecture that the world has ever seen. The dedication to the work, the mathematics and geometry utilized is just wondrous and fitting for a temple of one of the most largest religions on earth. Since there is too much awesomeness in on structure, we’ve decided to cover Mosque ceilings in this article. And boy are they intricately beautiful and absolutely takes your breath away.nextpage

Capital Hill Residence, RussiaNaomi Campbell, supermodel girlfriend of Russian billionaire Vladislav Doronin, certainly received a unique and special gift — a holiday retreat in Barvikha, Russia. Not exactly a deal your everyday mortgage adviser could have arranged. Doronin hired Zaha Hadid Architects to design a residence resembling a space ship straight out of a science fiction movie. The 22 meter tall watch tower encloses private quarters with a view that imitates the feeling of sitting in the cockpit of the Millennium Falcon.nextpage

If you’re looking to break into the world of architecture, find a firm that will support your endeavors. Finding the right firm could kick start your career to architectural success. Discover how to make millions by signing with one of these firms.

If you’re looking to break into the world of architecture, find a firm that will support your endeavors. Finding the right firm could kick start your career to architectural success. Discover how to make millions by signing with one of these firms.nextpage

Ever wonder what other buildings in other country looks like? Well look no more for today, we’ll bombard you with eye candy that’ll make you wish you belong in that place in particular.

The Lookout, ScotlandPhoto courtesy of: Processacrafthttp://processascraft.tumblr.com/Designed by two architectural design students from Strathclyde University, the idea was to help tourist frame up the beautiful scenery. The maximum it can hold is only three people! You must admit, it does accentuate the scenery around it. I wonder what it would be like to have an entire house made out of this material!? You would have an invisible house!nextpage

The Ryugyong Hotel, Pyongyang, North KoreaIn the architectural industry, it is all about prestige and coming up with the most innovative, modern and beautiful designs. Face it, there are a few firms that get all the work and if you aren’t coming up with top notch creative ideas, you aren’t going to be able to compete. Yet, when we saw the following buildings, we weren’t sure what happened. I suppose you will always love something that you made but bleh! these creations sure make you think twice about what some people like versus others.
As things tend to go in North Korea, this hotel supposedly began construction in 1992 but was kept secret and seemed to be incomplete and abandoned until unveiled as complete in 2009. It’s shape, an ode to the Egyptian pyramids but when made almost entirely of cold, rough, bland, grey concrete, it is almost sad how far behind the times this massive monstrosity is. Perhaps they could have gone with a bit smaller and more tasteful looking figure.nextpage

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about architecture in Houston?

answer: The text discusses how photographer Vittoria Zupicich has studied and photographed various buildings in Houston. The city is seen as an up-and-coming architectural hotspot, with buildings that provide a variety of interesting subject matter for photographers. The text mainly focuses on the buildings themselves, rather than any particular architectural photographers in the area.

text: "The text mainly focuses on the buildings themselves, rather than any particular architectural photographers in the area." - extraneous information.

refinement: The text discusses how photographer Vittoria Zupicich has studied and photographed various buildings in Houston. The city is seen as an up-and-coming architectural hotspot, with buildings that provide a variety of interesting subject matter for photographers.

answer: The city of Houston is a growing city with numerous other industries such as healthcare, research and technology. This list features photographers that have the skill and creativity to showcase the hidden beauty of Houston city.

text: Missing the part where Houston has a lot to offer when it comes to architecture.

refinement: The city of Houston is a growing city with numerous other industries such as healthcare, research and technology. It's a growing city that has a lot to offer when it comes to architecture. This list features photographers that have the skill and creativity to showcase the hidden beauty of Houston city.

text: "research and" - add a comma "research, and"

refinement: The city of Houston is a growing city with numerous other industries such as healthcare, research, and technology. It's a growing city that has a lot to offer when it comes to architecture. This list features photographers that have the skill and creativity to showcase the hidden beauty of Houston city.

answer: The text describes Houston as possessing a lot of architectural art and design, but states that there are few architectural photographers to shoot these features. Additionally, it mentions that Hunter Kerhart is one of the best architectural photographers in the city.

text: ", but" - doesn't fit the context of the message. Replace with "and"

refinement: The text describes Houston as possessing a lot of architectural art and design and states that there are few architectural photographers to shoot these features. Additionally, it mentions that Hunter Kerhart is one of the best architectural photographers in the city.

text: Replace "few" with "five"

refinement: The text describes Houston as possessing a lot of architectural art and design and states that there are five architectural photographers to shoot these features. Additionally, it mentions that Hunter Kerhart is one of the best architectural photographers in the city.

text: "Additionally, it mentions that Hunter Kerhart is one of the best architectural photographers in the city." - the text doesn't mention anything about Kerhart being the best photographer in Houston. This should be removed.

refinement: The text describes Houston as possessing a lot of architectural art and design and states that there are five architectural photographers to shoot these features.

answer: Houston as an oil and gas hub doesn't seem like it has any architectural aspects, but houses for energy companies need to be designed and so do buildings for large healthcare, research and technology companies. The different buildings in Houston are immense. Aside from that, Houston is considered a sprawling urban center so isn't built for people to live in.

text: "but houses for energy companies need to be designed and so do buildings for large healthcare, research and technology companies. The different buildings in Houston are immense. Aside from that, Houston is considered a sprawling urban center so isn't built for people to live in." - this is incorrect and should be removed.

refinement: Houston as an oil and gas hub doesn't seem like it has any architectural aspects.

text: "Houston as an oil and gas hub doesn't seem like it has any architectural aspects" - missing some details to complete the statement.

refinement: Houston as an oil, energy, and gas hub doesn't seem like an architectural destination, but it is a growing city with major industries that has a lot more to offer than meets the eye. Five photographers have the skill and creativity to showcase the hidden beauty of the city's architecture.

answer: Houston is known as an oil, gas and energy hub but its architectural side is often overlooked. Houston offers a lot more than it meets the eye. Some top photographers have what it takes to capture the city's hidden beauty. Photographers like Vittoria Zupicich is bringing her award winning skills from the West Coast to Texas, capturing Houston's architecture and design.

text: "and" - add a comma (, and).

refinement: Houston is known as an oil, gas, and energy hub but its architectural side is often overlooked. Houston offers a lot more than it meets the eye. Some top photographers have what it takes to capture the city's hidden beauty. Photographers like Vittoria Zupicich is bringing her award winning skills from the West Coast to Texas, capturing Houston's architecture and design.

text: "it" - delete.

refinement: Houston is known as an oil, gas, and energy hub but its architectural side is often overlooked. Houston offers a lot more than meets the eye. Some top photographers have what it takes to capture the city's hidden beauty. Photographers like Vittoria Zupicich is bringing her award winning skills from the West Coast to Texas, capturing Houston's architecture and design.

text:
"is" - change to "are"
"award winning" - add a hyphen.

refinement: Houston is known as an oil, gas, and energy hub but its architectural side is often overlooked. Houston offers a lot more than meets the eye. Some top photographers have what it takes to capture the city's hidden beauty. Photographers like Vittoria Zupicich are bringing her award-winning skills from the West Coast to Texas, capturing Houston's architecture and design.


text:
I don’t remember how I got there or where it started. So, in a way, it started off like most dreams do. I was running. But not in solidarity; with a group. I wasn’t exactly sure who they were, I just felt a deep camaraderie with them as if they were close to me. It’s hard to explain. None the less, we trekked on. The barren, gray landscape made me feel empty and thirsty inside, like I knew something better than this was out there somewhere. Or was it somewhere in the past? Was this the aftermath of a dispute between our territory’s leader with another? Regardless, I knew that there was something better than this. It was eating at me.

We ran for what seemed like hours, passing abandoned houses, ransacked for their valuables. Finally, we stopped in a small neighborhood. Three houses stood there seemingly untouched by the madness of what the earth was now. It was a comforting feeling to be back home. We set down our valuables and watched the sun slowly make its dissent over the orange horizon. We felt closer than we ever have before to each other. Quickly afterwards, we all wished each other good night. I lied in my bed wishing for this to be over. Whatever “this” was, I don’t know.

The next morning, I awoke with a kick of my own leg. This seems to happen every time I die in a dream.

The rest of my group awoke, and we packed up again. This time though, we carried only the necessities as if we would come back. Maybe I could call this place home again. It’s been so long since I could. I kept that from the others. I found it difficult to show much weakness to them. Not now. One must be callused and strong in these times.

The morning sun was beautiful, it was the only thing that gave me hope, as we marched onward. We didn’t talk about the past much, but when we did, It was certainly a touchy subject. You can only joke and play around for so long before conversion turns serious. It’s what we needed to keep sane, none the less, as we walked on this abandoned interstate. The hours were long, but I felt as if we were coming up to something big..something worth our while. Just then, our leader, average in height with a weathered face and wrinkly brow, raised his binoculars that hung around his neck. He trembled as he said, “There! Over there! Something… miraculous!”. Every one of us immediately perked up at the thought and made a mad dash towards the undiscovered locale.

We stopped and gazed in awe of what we saw, a large neighborhood of houses. What struck them as odd though was their toy-like appearance. The orange and green houses looked almost gelatin-like. Maybe they were? Relishing at the thought, I was the first one down the steep hill that separated me and this mysterious village, but before I could make it, a married couple from my group had already beaten me there and had sunken into the gelatin-made streets. It was the most peculiar thing we had all ever seen, but at the same instant, it was beautiful. We laughed, and we became children again. I didn’t look back or even think of the home that I left behind.

At that very moment, my leg kicked. I awoke in my bedroom; It was all a dream.

**Note:** I am in high school and a very amateur writer, and I'm sure that is apparent by my grammar. I would love to hear some feedback though. The good and the bad, I want it all! Thank you!

title: A dream that I had.

question: Kept what from the others?

answer: The dreamer kept the idea that the abandoned village was beautiful from the rest of the group.

text: Incorrect.

refinement: That it had been a long time since they could call somewhere home

answer: That it had been a long time since they could call somewhere home

text: 'Maybe I could call this place home again. It’s been so long since I could. I kept that from the others.' supports the answer.

answer: Kept the fact that he was homesick from the others.

text: The author is not homesick as it is stated 'I didn’t look back or even think of the home that I left behind.'

refinement: That it had been a long time since they could call somewhere home

answer: That he was homesick.

text: The author is not homesick as it is stated 'I didn’t look back or even think of the home that I left behind.'

refinement: That it had been a long time since they could call somewhere home

question: What are the times like?

answer: Seems like War times

text: There is no evidence that war is not over.

refinement: It seems this the aftermath of a dispute between the territory’s leader with another.

text: 'Was this the aftermath of a dispute between our territory’s leader with another?' implies the answer.

answer: The times are hard and the group is on the run.

text: It could be more specific.

refinement: It seems this the aftermath of a dispute between the territory’s leader with another.

answer: The times seem to be bleak and chaotic, with abandoned houses and a sense of uncertainty. However, in the dream, there is a sense of camaraderie and hope when the group comes across a seemingly untouched village.

text: 'I lied in my bed wishing for this to be over. Whatever “this” was, I don’t know.' supports that 'The times seem to be bleak and chaotic' and 'a sense of uncertainty'.

text: 'I just felt a deep camaraderie with them as if they were close to me' is evidence that  there is a sense of camaraderie.

answer: The times are bleak and the world is in chaos.

text: 'I lied in my bed wishing for this to be over.' supports the answer.

question: Where are they?

answer: Doesn't say

text: The answer can be found.

answer: They are in a dream.

text: ' So, in a way, it started off like most dreams do.' supports the answer.

answer: From the description, it seems that the characters are in a dream world.

text: 'So, in a way, it started off like most dreams do.' supports the answer.

answer: They are on an abandoned interstate.

text: It is a dream.

refinement: In a dream, they are on an abandoned interstate.

text: 'We ran for what seemed like hours, passing abandoned houses, ransacked for their valuables.' supports the answer.

question: What is the miraculous thing?

answer: Toy like houses made out of gelatin

text: It is stated the houses looked almost gelatin-like.

refinement: Toy like houses that looked almost gelatin-like.

text: Typos.

refinement: Toy-like houses that look like that looked almost gelatin-like.

answer: The miraculous thing is a large neighborhood of houses.

text: It is not clear what is miraculous about the houses.

refinement: The miraculous thing is a large neighborhood of houses. What struck them as odd though was their toy-like appearance. The orange and green houses looked almost gelatin-like.

text: 'We stopped and gazed in awe of what we saw, a large neighborhood of houses.' supports the answer.

answer: The miraculous thing is the large neighborhood of houses that the protagonist and his group find. They are happy to find a place that seems untouched by the madness of the earth, and they enjoy playing in the gelatin-like streets.

answer: The miraculous thing is a neighborhood of houses that are made of gelatin.

text: It is stated that the houses looked almost gelatin-like, not that they are made of gelatin.

refinement: The miraculous thing is a neighborhood of houses that looked almost gelatin-like. Maybe they were?

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The narrator has a vivid dream about running with a group in difficult times then happening upon a marvelous street made of gelatin.

text: The streets are gelatin-like.

refinement: The narrator has a vivid dream about running with a group in difficult times then happening upon marvelous gelatin-like streets.

text: 'it started off like most dreams do. I was running. But not in solidarity; with a group. ' supports that The narrator has a vivid dream about running with a group.

text: 'wishing for this to be over. Whatever “this” was, I don’t know.' is evidence that times are difficult.

answer: The dreamer dreams of a group of people trekking across a barren landscape, eventually finding a village made of gelatin-like houses. They enjoy themselves before waking up.

text: 'it started off like most dreams do. I was running. But not in solidarity; with a group. ' supports that The narrator has a dream about running with a group.

text: 'We stopped and gazed in awe of what we saw, a large neighborhood of houses. What struck them as odd though was their toy-like appearance. The orange and green houses looked almost gelatin-like. ' supports that they found a village made of gelatin-like houses.

answer: The narrator dreams of a group of people running through a barren landscape, and they eventually find a village made of gelatin.

text: The houses are gelatin-like.

refinement: The narrator dreams of a group of people running through a barren landscape, and they eventually find a village that is gelatin-like.

text: 'it started off like most dreams do. I was running. But not in solidarity; with a group. ' supports that The narrator has a dream about running with a group.

text: 'We stopped and gazed in awe of what we saw, a large neighborhood of houses. What struck them as odd though was their toy-like appearance. The orange and green houses looked almost gelatin-like. ' supports that they found a village made of gelatin-like houses.

answer: The protagonist has a dream where they are running with a group of people. They come to a village of toy-like houses and have a good time. They wake up and realize it was all a dream.

text: 'We stopped and gazed in awe of what we saw, a large neighborhood of houses. What struck them as odd though was their toy-like appearance.is evidence for the first sentence of the summary.

text: 'We stopped and gazed in awe of what we saw, a large neighborhood of houses. What struck them as odd though was their toy-like appearance' supports the second sentence of the summary.

text: 'I awoke in my bedroom; It was all a dream.' supports the third sentence of the summary.


text:
[Once Floated as Allergan Target, Revance's Stock Drops as Crow’s Feet Drug Fails Trial] June 14, 2016
By Mark Terry, BioSpace.com Breaking News Staff

Newark, California-based REVANCE THERAPEUTICS ANNOUNCED yesterday that its DaxibotulinumtoxinA Topical Gel (RT001) failed to meet its co-primary and other endpoints. RT001 was being tested to treat patients with moderate to severe lateral canthal lines, otherwise known as crow’s feet.

The study’s endpoints were composite measurements of 2-point or greater and 1-point or greater improvement in crow’s feet between baseline and 28 days.

“We are disappointed with the results of the REALISE 1 trial,” said DAN BROWNE, president and chief executive officer of Revance, in a statement. “The data was unambiguous, and we do not plan to continue development of RT001 topical for crow’s feet. Based on these results, we have decided not to pursue the current clinical development plan for RT001 in axillary hyperhidrosis. We are grateful to all the patients and investigators for their participation in the REALISE 1 trial. Given the positive results in our recent Phase II BELMONT active comparator trial, we will focus our future development efforts and financial resources on DaxibotulinumtoxinA for Injection (RT002).”

Axillary hyperhidrosis is underarm sweating. RT002 is being developed to treat frown lines.

Revance was one of the companies floated as a POSSIBLE ACQUISITION TARGET by Dublin-based ALLERGAN . After the PFIZER-ALLERGAN merger fell through, both companies have shown an inclination for acquisitions. With Allergan’s strong presence in the dermatology market as the manufacturer of Botox, Revance would make sense.

And the company’s price is down at the moment. Shares traded for $40.78 on Nov. 11, 2015, dropped to $17.12 on Feb. 9, 2016, and rose only slightly to $20.67 on June 7 before falling to its current price of $14.44.

THESTREET RATINGS gave the company a “sell” rating with a score of D, saying, “This is driven by multiple weaknesses, which can be seen in multiple areas, such as its weak operating cash flow, generally disappointing historical performance in the stock itself and feeble growth in its earnings per share.”

Piper Jaffray REITERATED its “overweight” rating for the stock. Guggenheim reaffirmed a “buy” and set a price target of $55 on Friday, Mar. 4. Brean Capital reaffirmed a “buy” rating with a price target of $48 on May 24. Zacks Investment Research shifted from “hold” to “buy” on March 10. And lastly, SunTrust on March 23 gave it a “buy” rating with a $46 price target.

At the end of March 2016, the company had $236.6 million in cash and investments. Based on its plans and assets, the company indicates it has enough money to fund operations into the second quarter of 2018.

“Looking ahead to the second half of this year, we remain on track to initiate RT002 injectable Phase III clinical trials for glabellar lines and report interim Phase II results in cervical dystonia,” said Browne in a statement. “We recently held an End-of-Phase II meeting with the U.S. Food and Drug Administration (FDA) regarding our RT002 injectable program for glabellar lines. We believe the meeting was informative and productive. Meeting minutes are in process, and consistent with company and industry practice, we look forward to providing further updates when we have final minutes from the FDA.”

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about Revance's future outlook?

answer: Since the results of the topical gel failed to meet its co-primary and other endpoints, Revance does not plan to continue the development of RT001's topical for crow's feet. Instead, the company will focus on DaxibotulinumtoxinA for Injection RT002 for axillary hyperhidrosis.

text: Injection RTOO2 will be used for frown lines, not axillary hyperhidrosis.

refinement: Since the results of the topical gel failed to meet its co-primary and other endpoints, Revance does not plan to continue the development of RT001's topical for crow's feet. Instead, the company will focus on DaxibotulinumtoxinA for Injection RT002 for frown lines.

answer: Their trial for the topical gel treating crow's feet was negative, and the company focused its future efforts on an injection to treat frown lines. The company is a potential acquisition target by Allergan after the Pfizer-Allergan merger failed. While Revance fared relatively worse in the stock market compared to its best moments, the outlook of the financial rating firms is somewhat positive as of June 2016.

answer: The study's primary and secondary endpoints were not met and the company announced it will discontinue its development of RT001 topical. The crow's feet were not successful at the Phase II trial, therefore, the company is shifting its focus to the development of its other product, RT002.

text: While the content of this response is accurate, including additional details found in the article would make the response even stronger.

refinement: Their trial for the topical gel treating crow's feet was negative, and the company focused its future efforts on an injection to treat frown lines. The company is a potential acquisition target by Allergan after the Pfizer-Allergan merger failed. While Revance fared relatively worse in the stock market compared to its best moments, the outlook of the financial rating firms is somewhat positive as of June 2016.

answer: Based on the failed trial of RT001 for crow's feet, Revance has decided to not pursue the current clinical development plan for RT001 and instead focus its future efforts on RT002, aimed at treating frown lines. This indicates that the company's future outlook is focused on developing RT002 to treat frown lines.

answer: Based on RT001 failing to meet its co-primary and other endpoints for treating moderate to severe lateral canthal lines, Revance does not plan to continue development of RT001 for treatment of crow's feet. The company remains on track to initiate RT002 injectable Phase III clinical trials for glabellar lines and to report interim Phase II results in cervical dystonia. The company has sufficient capital to fund operations into the second quarter of 2018.


text:
M: Hey Steve, how’s it going
S: Going well Mark. Going well.
M: Well that's good, haven't seen you in  a while.
S: Heh yeah. Hey you know Lucy? She wants you to go pluck her feathers. Haha I think she's into you bro (gives Herb a wing bump)
M: (sighs) ahhh Lucy, she's not into me, it's her damn human. Went and got herself a macaw and is rarely home, and when she is all she does is look at that damn little screen of hers.  Now Lucy's gone all senile.
S: What a shame... Well, you should still go and pluck her up man, ever since the tip of her beak broke off she can barely make use of it.
M: Whatever, if she can talk to you, then she can pluck her own crazy self.
S: Yeah, I guess.
silence
M: So Steve, tell me how are things really going for you in the life of a pet.
S: ehhh I don’t know man. My owner keeps on asking me who’s a good boy. At first I had no idea who she was talking about, now she’s commanding me to say that I am, and well, I don't know if I really am a good boy.
M: What do you mean?
S: It's like what about me appeals to my owner as good? All she sees of me is when I'm hanging around the cage or when she's teaching me new stuff. She doesn’t know the real me or what goes on in my head.
M: Hmm. Go on.
S: And its like I listen to all of her commands so I guess that would make me obedient, but if I go and say I’m a good boy, well am I really obeying her? I'm giving her the answer SHE wants, but not necessarily the truthful one.
M:So your doing what she says while at the same time you think your lying because you don’t really know if you’re all good.
S: Yeah, I’m sitting there giving my owner what she wants, but in the end I don’t think it’s the right thing.
M: Oh Steve, I see what you’re saying and all, but come on don’t overthink it. Just do what she says and get your damn cracker.

S: Yeah, whatever. I guess you’re right.

title: Themes for this story?

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe Steve?

answer: Steve is conflicted about his role as a pet. He begins to question whether he is really good or not because he is always obeying his owner's commands, regardless of whether or not he believes they are the right thing. Steve is reflective, introspective, and plagued by doubts and questions.

answer: Steve is a pet bird, who overthinks his duties as a pet.

answer: Steve is a pet bird.

answer: Steve is a conflicted pet who is struggling to figure out what makes him a "good boy" for his owner. He is conflicted between giving his owner what she desires and doing what he really thinks is right. Steve questions whether or not he is being dishonest in fulfilling his owner's expectations by telling her what she wants to hear. Steve is introspective and expresses feelings of unsureness and questioning.

answer: Steve is a pet parrot who is asking if he is a good pet

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why isn't Lucy into Mark?

answer: Mark feels Lucy is not interested in him because she is rarely around and obsessed with her phone rather than interacting with him. However, he is conflicted about what follows from this. Mark is conflicted about whether or not he is being good by abiding by her commands, despite withholding his true thoughts. This leads to a larger question: What makes a good boy?

answer: Because she is crazy. It doesn't specifically state what behavior indicates her being crazy, though.

answer: Mark feels that Lucy is senile and does not appreciate him, rather focusing all her attention on her new macaw. He also feels that he is giving his owner what she wants, but he is not sure if she wants what is right. This keeps him from feeling like a "good boy," and thus, Lucy is not into Mark.

answer: It seems Lucy isn't into Mark because she is now senile due to a neglectful owner.

answer: Lucy is a bird, and is probably strung out on cocaine.

text: I don't think the bird is on cocaine.

refinement: Lucy is a bird, and it seems she has gone senile, or that she might be crazy.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What type of relationship do Mark and Steve have?

answer: They might be friends based on their conversation.

answer: Mark and Steve appear to be friends.

answer: The two individuals in this passage have a complex type of relationship. While Steve is frustrated with his owner and the way she views him, he ultimately still does what she asks. Mark reassures him of his actions, suggesting that he shouldn’t overthink things. The two seem to have a close relationship or at least an understanding of each other's predicaments.

answer: They are friends.

answer: The relationship between Mark and Steve is between friends. Steve is struggling with what defines him as being good, and Mark maintains that doing what one's owner wants is the best answer. Though Steve is conflicted, he trusts Mark's opinion and ultimately obeys his owner.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where does this story take place?

answer: That information can't be found.

text: They are pet birds. It probably takes place in their cages.

answer: This story takes place somewhere where people can talk as birds.

text: They're pet birds. It probably takes place in cages.

answer: The story takes place between two friends, Steve and Mark, and centers in their discussion of pet life. While discussing Lucy, Steve reveals that he is conflicted on whether or not he is really good or not, due to his obedience to his owner. The story takes place in conversation between two friends.

answer: That information can't be found

text: They're pet birds.

refinement: Since they're pet birds, it likely takes place in cages.

answer: This story takes place in the life of the pet, Steve. They are pondering what exactly makes them a good boy in their owner's eyes. Despite doing whatever their owner requests, Steve feels as though they might not be good in the truest sense of the word.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: Two pet birds, Mark and Steve, have a casual conversation about their lives. Steve asks Mark about Lucy, suggesting she may have a thing for him. Mark asks Steve about his life as a pet bird. Steve vents that he's not sure if he should call himself a good boy to his owner, who is training him to do so. He doesn't believe he's a good boy.

answer: Princess the Bird (apparently a species called a grebe) has been asking around for "good boy". Its insinuated that all people see of her is the bird while she is taking in information, but not the brain behind it. She may or may not be good as an obedient citizen. She may or may not be good at being a "good boy". Herb and Mark discuss this. Herb seems to think that the brittness of said bird breaks off says that she should ask for her own cracker.

text: The bird's name is Steve.

refinement: Steve the bird (apparently a species called a grebe) has been asking around for "good boy". Its insinuated that all people see of her is the bird while she is taking in information, but not the brain behind it. She may or may not be good as an obedient citizen. She may or may not be good at being a "good boy". Herb and Mark discuss this. Herb seems to think that the brittness of said bird breaks off says that she should ask for her own cracker.

text: I have no idea what this summary is on about. The story is not complex.

refinement: Two pet birds named Steve and Mark engage in a dialogue. Steve is concerned that his human doesn't fancy him, but Mark tells him to just keep playing nice and he'll get his cracker.

answer: Herb's friend Steve has a difficult time understanding his role as a pet in his owner's eyes. He doesn't know if what he is doing is the right thing or if he is simply obeying in accordance with what his owner wants. Steve is ambivalent about whether he is really a good boy or not, and worries that in the end he is simply giving the answer his owner wants to hear. Herb encourages Steve to simply follow instructions and be obedient, but Steve remains uncertain about his role.

text: It's Mark, not Herb. The original text is a bit confusing on this.

refinement: Mark's friend Steve has a difficult time understanding his role as a pet in his owner's eyes. He doesn't know if what he is doing is the right thing or if he is simply obeying in accordance with what his owner wants. Steve is ambivalent about whether he is really a good boy or not, and worries that in the end he is simply giving the answer his owner wants to hear. Mark encourages Steve to simply follow instructions and be obedient, but Steve remains uncertain about his role.

text: This should state they are both pet birds.

refinement: Mark's friend Steve has a difficult time understanding his role as a pet bird in his owner's eyes. He doesn't know if what he is doing is the right thing or if he is simply obeying in accordance with what his owner wants. Steve is ambivalent about whether he is really a good boy or not, and worries that in the end he is simply giving the answer his owner wants to hear. Mark encourages Steve to simply follow instructions and be obedient, but Steve remains uncertain about his role.

answer: Herb's friend Steve feels conflicted about whether he is a 'good boy' owner-pleasing in order to get a cracker, even though he doubts whether he really deserves that title. Steve worries that he is just doing what his owner wants, but not necessarily what is right. Herb advises to just do what his owner asks and focus on the cracker.

text: It's Mark, not Herb, but the original text is confusing.

refinement: Mark's friend Steve feels conflicted about whether he is a 'good boy' owner-pleasing in order to get a cracker, even though he doubts whether he really deserves that title. Steve worries that he is just doing what his owner wants, but not necessarily what is right. Mark advises to just do what his owner asks and focus on the cracker.

text: This should state they are pet birds.

refinement: Mark's friend Steve feels conflicted about whether he is a 'good boy' owner-pleasing in order to get a cracker, even though he doubts whether he really deserves that title. They're both pet birds. Steve worries that he is just doing what his owner wants, but not necessarily what is right. Mark advises to just do what his owner asks and focus on the cracker.

answer: Mark and Steve are birds. Mark thinks Lucy wants to pluck his feathers. Lucy wants Steve to be a good boy. Steve thinks that making yourself behave is not the same as doing something because you believe it is the right thing to do. Mark says Steve shouldn't overthink it, and just do what his owner wants.


text: Darth Vader smoked cigarettes. Up there in space without anyone to talk to, he had nothing but time. The life he never lived floated by the 4-foot thick window bleeding out of focus with the smoke that twisted around until it hung in a solid mass that floated away too. Wouldn’t it be nice to have more than galactic domination? Not the universe per say, but perhaps that family he’d mistakenly "killed". He had never truly met his son. Did he even know that his father was Darth Vader, would he ever believe such a fact? And that’s why the cigarettes plugged the burning flare of holes in his clouded suit of woe. No, everything happens one way and couldn’t possible happen any other. For the pain of his everyday life, he did exceptionally well. He was slow now, but it wasn’t because of smoking. Everyday when he would return to his hibernation chamber, the droids would clean his armor and lungs. But not like that matter, the air filter on his mask almost let in nothing but clean air. So why cigarettes he’d ask himself? Because it was space and it was his fucking choice. It was his legacy, to look stupid by himself to himself with a cigarette when he wasn’t throttling rebels. Fuckit. Maybe he should learn an instrument. The organ would be ideal. As the Captain of the ship and second in command of the Empire, that seemed about right. But until then, he could only wish and pretend. Nobody knew what he was thinking when he was not in battle or a cut scene.  That was nice and kept him extremely intimidating.  No one but his droids had ever seen his scrap book or his cigarettes. Surely that would cause some unease as to his true power. Though it would be eternally unmatched, the fact that he had a journals full of pictures of cats and cute animals might do some unintended damage if let into the wrong hands. But he was not worried; everyone was terrified of him already. Underneath it all, he was as human as anyone. He was just simply doing his job; fear and intimidation of the entire universe. But every now and then, the guilty pleasures would leak through like a joyful memory of his childhood watching the two suns set, or his adolescence with the Queen. Their nights out on the plains of Naboo. How different things could be. Had he listen or not listened to Palpatine was unimportant now. Things ran their course the way they were supposed to. He thought of how ridiculous everyone would have considered George Lucas if Darth Sidious and himself were friendly. The legacy of his would not be as immortal. But enough with deep thought, it was almost time to invade Kashyyyk with the 501st. He must redirect his thoughts to the importance of this upcoming victory they had planned. Maybe this battle would yield something more than bloodshed…he had a strange feeling it somehow would.

title: Darth Vader Smoked Cigarettes

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who smokes cigarettes?

answer: Darth Vader does.

answer: The passage describes Darth Vader smoking cigarettes.

answer: Darth Vader

answer: Darth Vader

answer: Darth Vader.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does he maintain was a mistake?

answer: That he killed his family.

answer: Darth Vader believes that his mistake was not getting to know his son better while alive.

text: That he killed his family and didn't get to know his son.

refinement: Darth Vader believes that his mistake was killing his family and not getting to know his son better while alive.

answer: Choosing Palpatine, the politician, over his family.

text: And killing them.

refinement: Choosing Palpatine, the politician, over his family and killing them.

answer: Darth Vader maintains that the mistake he made was the killing of his family. He had never truly met his son. This is the pain that cigarettes help ease.

answer: Familicide.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who are the only entities to ever have seen his scrap book or his cigarettes?

answer: His droids.

answer: His droids.

answer: Only his droids have seen both the scrap book and the cigarettes.

answer: The only entities to have seen his scrap book or his cigarettes are his droids.

answer: Only his droids.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why does he smoke?

answer: Darth Vader smokes cigarettes to help manage the stress and pain of his everyday life in space. He tries to keep his intimidating persona while counterbalancing that with secretly manageable feelings and desires, like missing his childhood and Queen. Smoking helps him cope.

answer: Because it is his fucking choice.

text: And he's coping with his regrets and sadness.

refinement: Because it is his fucking choice and he's coping with his regrets and sadness.

answer: It is his personal choice and he does it for enjoyment. They are his guilty pleasures and keep him feeling human.

text: And he's coping with his regrets and sadness.

refinement: It is his personal choice and he does it for enjoyment. They are his guilty pleasures and keep him feeling human and he's coping with his regrets and sadness.

answer: He smokes cigarettes as a way to cope with the boredom in space and because it provides an escape from the reality of his everyday life.

text: And he's coping with his regrets and sadness.

refinement: He smokes cigarettes as a way to cope with the boredom in space and because it provides an escape from the reality of his everyday life and he's coping with his regrets and sadness.

answer: He has nothing else to do up there in space that isn't spent eating and sleeping most likely.

text: And he's coping with his regrets and sadness.

refinement: He has nothing else to do up there in space that isn't spent eating and sleeping most likely and he's coping with his regrets and sadness.

text: and it's his fucking choice.

refinement: He has nothing else to do up there in space that isn't spent eating and sleeping most likely, it's his fucking choice, and he's coping with his regrets and sadness.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: Darth Vader, the commander and the second in command of the Empire, have occupied the throne room of the ship. Smoking, he remembers his life and his emotions. He regrets leaving his family and what he might have been. So he swallows his feelings, being stealthy like as always. He also questions why he smokes, but he knows that it's his choice and it keeps him, intimidating.

answer: Darth Vader smokes cigarettes in space as he regrets not getting to know his son. Somehow despite all of his power, he remains human and finds meaning in the everyday comforts of smoking. Despite all of his regret, he tends to focus on the tasks at hand while preparing for battle.

answer: Darth Vader takes up a cigarette habit and ruminates on how crummy his life has been. He enjoys the freedom of choice. Only his droids, who clean his lungs and armor in the chamber each night, are privy to this habit of his. He has a feeling his next battle will yield something other than bloodshed.

answer: Darth Vader smoked a cigarette in his space ship and pondered how different his life (and his power) would be if he had never killed his wife and son. He thought about how he was as human as anyone and reflected on his childhood. Then it was time for his shift so he got ready to lead the 501st in an assault on Kashyyyk.

answer: Darth Vader smokes cigarettes in space, reflecting on how different things could have been had he made different choices. He knows his legacy is that of terror; but he is still human underneath it all. He looks forward to an upcoming invasion, believing it could yield something more than bloodshed.


text:
OORUTTAMBALAM is a suburban area in Trivandrum .situated in Kattakkada Taluk of Thiruvananthapuram district, Kerala, India.[1]

Location

It is 16 km from Kerala State Road Transport Corporation's Central Bus Depot, Thampanoor and City Depot East Fort,There are regular bus services to other parts of city also.[2] It is only 4 kilometres from National Highway 66. Nearest towns are Balaramapuram, Kattakkada and Neyyattinkara.

Railway station is 3 km away. The railway line connects Kanyakumari and Thiruvananthapuram Central.

History of Ooruttambalam

AD 1915: Ooruttambalam Revolt (Nineteenth Century Revolt) under the leadership of Ayyankali. In the same year, Kallumala Agitation occurred under the leadership of Ayyankali in Perinad of Kollam. An attempt by Ayyankali to enrol a Pulayar girl in a government school led to violent acts perpetrated by upper castes against the community and eventually to the burningdown of the school building in the village of Ooruttambalam. It is known as ‘Ooruttambalam Lahala This was followed by the first-ever agricultural strike in the history of the nation, fought not for wages but for school admission.

Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Durga Bhagavathi Temple

[Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Durgabhagavathi Temple]

Ooruttambalam is also awell known for temples. The Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Sree Durga Bhagavathy Temple is located near Ooruttambalam Market. Many devotees from different parts of the state visits the temple. The _Durga Pooja_ and _Bhagavathy Pooja_ of the temple are very famous. Atham mahothavam has been celebrating during the Malayalam month “Medam” on the day of the Malayalam nakshthra “Attam” every year. The People from all walks of the society participating in the festival especially Hindus, Christians and Muslims. The major attraction of the festival is the “Thalappoli Ghoshayathra” (cultural procession)which has been conducted during the last day of the festival. Procession starts from the temple and moves through velicode, pallithara and reaches Govindamangal Mahavishnu temple. From there it moves to Govindamangalam Junction, Ooruttambalam Junction, Neeranamkuzhy Junction and comes back to temple. The procession was also accompanied by many cultural programmes like Panchavadyam (orchestra of five instruments), Chnda Melam (orchestra of cylindrical percussion instrument, Nadaswaram (It is a wind instrument used to produce classical music and is considered as world's loudest non-brass acoustic instrument), Nettipattam Kettiya Gajaveen (elephant wearing the golden elephant caparison). The elephants carry Thidambu. It is taken out of the temple as Ezhunnallathu by the temple priest. This occasion is the only time where the goddess comes out of the temple in full alankaras in Ulthasava Thidambu. Many people from different region of kerala visits here and occupy their position at early in the morning to see the same and get worship from the goddess Durga.

[Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila durga temple]

Neyyar dam, a tourist destination, is 16 km away. Its canal passes through the town and the water is used for agriculture.

Institutions

Post Office, banks and village office are near the Ooruttambalam junction. There are two schools as well. Earlier, this place was the main hub.

Local government office (Panchayat office), a local outpost of main police station are 1 km away from Ooruttambalam. Valiyarthala Thampuran Temple an ancient temple in Oorutambalam OORTTU Festival is very popular in this temple

Krishnapuram is also a good agricultural place in ooruttambalam farmers are full-time in banana plant and in coconut plants more pupils are well educated in krishnapuram.A high school and LP Scholls are here ooruttambalam near good shepherd Church velikkodu built by Portuguese missioners in 1917 August 17.

Sree Saraswathy Vidyalayam [3], CBSE is a subsidiary of Bharatheeya Vidya Nikethan, having classes from pre-KG to plus two.

Ooruttambalam Service co-operative Bank, is situated near the post office.

[1] http://www.indiastudychannel.com/india/pincodes/39329-Ooruttambalam-S-O.aspx Details of Ooruttambalam

[2] http://www.expressbuzz.com/edition/story.aspx?title=KSRTC%20launching%2050%20new%20city%20services&artid=D7aQxtFG8HI=&type= KSRTC bus services to Ooruttambalam

[3] Sree Saraswathy Vidyalayam

title: Ooruttambalam

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the information about the temples of Ooruttambalam.

answer: Ooruttambalam is well-known for its temples. The major temple is the Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Sree Durga Bhagavathy Temple located near the market. The Parankimamvila Durga Pooja and Bhagavathy Pooja are both very popular and attract many devotees. The highlight of the festival is the Thalappoli Ghoshayathra which starts at the temple and travels through Ooruttambalam and Govindamangal Mahavishnu temple. This procession also includes various cultural performances, such as Panchavadyam and Nadaswaram. The goddess also wears her full alankaras only during this occasion. Sree Saraswathy Vidyalayam is a CBSE school located in Ooruttambalam. There is also an Ooruttambalam Service Co-operative Bank nearby.

text: There is additional detail provided in this passage that can be taken out. The last two sentence of this passage can be deleted.

refinement: Ooruttambalam is well-known for its temples. The major temple is the Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Sree Durga Bhagavathy Temple located near the market. The Parankimamvila Durga Pooja and Bhagavathy Pooja are both very popular and attract many devotees. The highlight of the festival is the Thalappoli Ghoshayathra which starts at the temple and travels through Ooruttambalam and Govindamangal Mahavishnu temple. This procession also includes various cultural performances, such as Panchavadyam and Nadaswaram. The goddess also wears her full alankaras only during this occasion.

answer: The Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Sree Durga Bhagavathy Temple is an ancient temple in Ooruttambalam. The major attraction of the festival is the "Thalappoli Ghoshayathra" which is a cultural procession that passes through velicode, pallithara and reaches Govindamangal Mahavishnu temple. The procession is accompanied by many cultural programs such as Panchavadyam (orchestra of five instruments), Chnda Melam (orchestra of cylindrical percussion instrument), and Nadaswaram (a wind instrument). Alternatively, Sree Saraswathy Vidyalayam is a subsidiary of Bharatheeya Vidya Nikethan and offers classes from Pre-KG to plus two. Lastly, Ooruttambalam Service co-operative Bank is nearby.

answer: Ooruttambalam has some very famous temples. the Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Sree Durga Bhagavathy Temple, for example, is well known for the pooja and bhagavathy pooja there, which are very famous. The temple also has some less famous occasions. The

text: There are grammar errors in this response and the last sentence of the response is incomplete. More details can be added to this response to make it properly answer the question.

refinement: The Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Sree Durga Bhagavathy Temple is an ancient temple in Ooruttambalam. The major attraction of the festival is the "Thalappoli Ghoshayathra" which is a cultural procession that passes through velicode, pallithara and reaches Govindamangal Mahavishnu temple. The procession is accompanied by many cultural programs such as Panchavadyam (orchestra of five instruments), Chnda Melam (orchestra of cylindrical percussion instrument), and Nadaswaram (a wind instrument). Alternatively, Sree Saraswathy Vidyalayam is a subsidiary of Bharatheeya Vidya Nikethan and offers classes from Pre-KG to plus two. Lastly, Ooruttambalam Service co-operative Bank is nearby.

answer: The Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Sree Durga Bhagavathy Temple is close to the market, and devotees from all over congregate there to worship. There are two different pooja: the Durga and the Bhagavathy. Celebrations are observed and enjoy the participation from people of all walks of life and all religions-including but not limited to Hindus, Christians, and Muslims.

answer: Ooruttambalam is relatively well known for its temples, and the Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Mme Durgabhagavathi Temple (commonly shortened to the Durgabhagavathy Temple) is among them. The Durga Pooja and Bhagavathy Pooja at the temple are famous. A festival known as the Atham mahothavam is celebrated at the temple during the Malayalam month of Medam on the day of the Malayalam nakshthra of Attam. This attracts a lot of people and is especially well-attended by Hindus, Christians, Muslims, and Paanans. Many cultural and religious rituals are also followed at this festival. Kalam means 'foliage' in Sanskrit and Pulayan means 'Goddess' and 'Bailen' respectively. Onam and Thiruvonam officially mark the Malayalam month of Chingam and Molly, respectively.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the commerce of Ooruttambalam.

answer: The city is a site for agricultural markets, as farmers cultivate mostly banana and coconut. There are also post offices and banks. A few schools exist in the area.

answer: Ooruttambalam is a suburb of Trivandrum with a large number of businesses centered around the market area. There are banks, schools, and temples, as well as bus services connecting the suburb to other parts of the city. Ooruttambalam is primarily an agricultural area, with a major canal providing irrigation, as well as having a number of businesses and services.

answer: Ooruttambalam is a suburban area near National Highway 66 with regular bus services to other parts of the city. There are several banks and schools in the area, including Sree Saraswathy Vidyalayam, a branch of Bharatheeya Vidya Nikethan. Most inhabitants of Ooruttambalam work in agriculture, and the main tourist destination close by is Neyyar Dam.

text: This response does not encapsulate the commerce of Ooruttambalam, and is missing some key details from the passage.

refinement: Ooruttambalam is a suburb of Trivandrum with a large number of businesses centered around the market area. There are banks, schools, and temples, as well as bus services connecting the suburb to other parts of the city. Ooruttambalam is primarily an agricultural area, with a major canal providing irrigation, as well as having a number of businesses and services. Additionally, farmers in this area worked primarily with banana and coconut plans to sell for revenue.

answer: No answer

text: No response is provided and an accurate response needs to be generated.

refinement: Ooruttambalam is a suburb of Trivandrum with a large number of businesses centered around the market area. There are banks, schools, and temples, as well as bus services connecting the suburb to other parts of the city. Ooruttambalam is primarily an agricultural area, with a major canal providing irrigation, as well as having a number of businesses and services.

answer: No answer

text: No response is given and an accurate response needs to be generated.

refinement: Ooruttambalam is a suburb of Trivandrum with a large number of businesses centered around the market area. There are banks, schools, and temples, as well as bus services connecting the suburb to other parts of the city. Ooruttambalam is primarily an agricultural area, with a major canal providing irrigation, as well as having a number of businesses and services.