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WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG (March 10, 1835 – October 16, 1905), aka NEVINS ARMSTRONG and aka W. N. ARMSTRONG, was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour .

Early life

He was born in Lahaina on the island of Maui, the third of ten children of missionaries Clarissa Chapman Armstrong and Richard Armstrong, who later served as the second kahu (pastor) of Kawaiahaʻo Church, and subsequently was appointed President of the Board of Education for the Kingdom of Hawaii. William was given the name of his older brother who died in infancy.[1] His grandfather Samuel Chapman was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts.[2] Samuel C. Armstrong, his younger brother, was founder of Hampton University.[3]

Young William was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842.[4] By the age of 12, he was already looking ahead to fund his college education and was working part-time as a bookbinder.[5] In 1849, he and schoolmate Charles Hastings Judd, as children of ministers of the cabinet of Kamehameha III, attended the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship with a younger schoolmate, future King of Hawaii David Kalākaua.[6] When he was 15 years old, his mother accompanied him to the mainland United States,[7] where he was enrolled in the university preparatory Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts.[8]

A graduate of Yale University, he studied law under the tutelage of his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman. He was admitted to the Bar in 1859 and practiced at Wheeler & Armstrong.[9][10]

King Kalākaua's world tour

When King Kalākaua visited New York City on his way to Washington, D.C. to negotiate the Reciprocity Treaty of 1875, Armstrong was his liaison with the city.[11]

For the rest of his life, Armstrong lived in Hawaii for extended periods, but also spent extended periods with his family in Virginia. By 1880, he was again living in Hawaii. From November 29, 1880 to May 19, 1882, Armstrong was a member of the House of Nobles in the legislature of the Kingdom of Hawaii.[12]

King Kalākaua appointed him Attorney General of the Kingdom of Hawaii in December 1880.[13] Shortly thereafter, he was invited to participate in Kalākaua's 1881 world tour, an endeavor to encourage plantation labor immigration to Hawaii.[14] Before sailing, Kalākaua appointed him Royal Commissioner of Immigration to authorize him to negotiate with foreign governments.[15] It was his responsibility to compile a feasibility study of each country they visited, reporting back on which nations were likely to provide “a desirable population” for the Hawaiian labor force. Together with Chamberlain Colonel Charles Hastings Judd, and cook Robert von Oelhoffen, they circumnavigated the world from February 22 to October 29, visiting Asia, the Mideast and Europe. At the end, they took a railroad train trip from the east coast of the United States to California, and sailed back to Hawaii.[16]

In Japan, both Armstrong and Judd had been awarded the Order of the Rising Sun during a ceremony in which Kalākaua was presented with the Order of the Chrysanthemum.[17][18]

Post world tour life

Upon their return, he resumed the position of Attorney General and held it until May 1882.[19] Concurrently in that year, Armstrong held the positions of president of the Board of Immigration,[20] president of the Board of Health, and Commissioner of Crown Lands.[21] He was Chairman of the Labor Commission in 1894-1885.[22]

In 1885 he returned to tend to the family oyster farming business in Virginia, helping organize the Oyster Convention in Hampton to convince the state legislature to allow privatization of oyster beds.[23] He later served as a commissioner of the Massachusetts Supreme Court.

From 1897 through 1899, he was editor of the Honolulu daily newspaper _The Pacific Commercial Advertiser_.[24] After returning to the mainland, he continued his reporting for the newspaper.[25]

The detailed journal he had kept of the world trip with Kalākaua was published as _Around the World with a King_ in 1904, the year before Armstrong died.[26] This publication has been criticized for errors, inconsistencies and Armstrong's satirical writing style.

Personal life

He wed Mary Frances Morgan on April 10, 1867. She predeceased him in 1903.[27] The couple maintained a home in Virginia, and were the parents of a daughter Dorothy, and three sons, Matthew, Richard and Kalani.

Armstrong had been suffering from liver disease for a few years, and succumbed to catarrh at Garfield Hospital in Washington D. C. on October 15, 1905.[28] He was cremated, and his ashes were returned to Hawaii and buried along with his parents at Kawaiahaʻo Church cemetery.[29][30]

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title: William Nevins Armstrong

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is William Nevins Armstrong?

answer: William Nevins Armstrong was the Attorney General of Hawaii from 1880 to 1882. He is most well-known for his account of King David Kalākaua's 1881 world tour.

text: "WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG (March 10, 1835 – October 16, 1905), aka NEVINS ARMSTRONG and aka W. N. ARMSTRONG, was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour ."

text: Attorney General for two years: "King Kalākaua appointed him Attorney General of the Kingdom of Hawaii in December 1880." - "Upon their return, he resumed the position of Attorney General and held it until May 1882."

answer: William Nevins Armstrong was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour.

text: "WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG (March 10, 1835 – October 16, 1905), aka NEVINS ARMSTRONG and aka W. N. ARMSTRONG, was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour ."

answer: William Nevins Armstrong was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is best known outside of Hawaii for the book Around the World with a King, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour.

text: "WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG (March 10, 1835 – October 16, 1905), aka NEVINS ARMSTRONG and aka W. N. ARMSTRONG, was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour ."

answer: William Nevins Armstrong was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book "Around the World with a King," his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour.

text: "WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG (March 10, 1835 – October 16, 1905), aka NEVINS ARMSTRONG and aka W. N. ARMSTRONG, was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour ."

answer: He was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the time of King David Kalākaua.

text: The claim to fame of Armstrong is his book in addition to his job. It's missing from the answer.

refinement: He was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the time of King David Kalākaua. He's most famous for his insider account of King Kalākaua's 1881 world tour, "Around the World with a King".

text: "WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG (March 10, 1835 – October 16, 1905), aka NEVINS ARMSTRONG and aka W. N. ARMSTRONG, was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour ."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is Samuel Champan and what is Armstrong's relationship with him?

answer: Samuel Chapman was Armstrong's grandfather, and he is his older brother's namesake. Armstrong and Chapman were close both personally and professionally, serving together on Kalākaua's 1881 world tour.

text: William's grandfather wasn't named after his older brother.

refinement: Samuel Chapman was Armstrong's grandfather. Armstrong and Chapman were close both personally and professionally, serving together on Kalākaua's 1881 world tour.

text: The article doesn't mention Armstrong and Chapman being close or being together on the King's tour.

refinement: Samuel Chapman was Armstrong's grandfather.

text: The answer should give more information about Chapman since it's available in the article

refinement: Samuel Chapman was Armstrong's grandfather. Samuel Chapman is one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts.

text: "His grandfather Samuel Chapman"

answer: Samuel Chapman was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts. Samuel C. Armstrong was a younger brother of William who was founder of Hampton University. William's grandfather also founded Russell.

text: The sentence about Armstrong's brother is irrelevant.

refinement: Samuel Chapman was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts. William's grandfather also founded Russell.

text: Chapman's founding of Russell is mentioned twice.

refinement: Samuel Chapman was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts.

text: Samuel Chapman's relation with Armstrong isn't mentioned in the answer, but that's what the question asks for.

refinement: Samuel Chapman, Armstrong's grandfather, was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts.

text: Grandfather, founder: "His grandfather Samuel Chapman was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts."

answer: Armstrong's grandfather, Samuel Chapman, was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts. Armstrong developed a lifelong friendship with fellow student David Kalākaua while both attended the Royal School. When Kalākaua visited New York City in 1875, Armstrong was his liaison. Armstrong went on to serve as Kalākaua's Attorney General from 1880 to 1882. While on Kalākaua's 1881 world tour, Armstrong was awarded the Order of the Rising Sun. Later in life, Armstrong returned to Virginia to care for the family oyster farming business. He wrote a detailed journal of the world trip with Kalākaua, which was published posthumously as _Around the World with a King_. Samuel Chapman is his grandfather.

text: There's a lot of irrelevant stuff in the answer.

refinement: Armstrong's grandfather, Samuel Chapman, was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts.

text: Grandfather, founder: "His grandfather Samuel Chapman was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts."

answer: Samuel Chapman was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts and Armstrong's grandfather. Armstrong was given the name of his elder brother who died in infancy.

text: The sentence about Armstrong's brother is irrelevant.

refinement: Samuel Chapman was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts and Armstrong's grandfather.

text: Grandfather, founder: "His grandfather Samuel Chapman was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts."

answer: Samuel Chapman was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts, and Armstrong's grandfather.

text: Grandfather, founder: "His grandfather Samuel Chapman was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to Armstrong's education.

answer: He was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842. When he was 15 years old, he was enrolled in Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts. From there, he studied law under his cousin Reuben Atwood Chapman while working for Wheeler & Armstrong.

text: The answer omits Armstrong's attendance at the Royal School.

refinement: He was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842. He attended the Royal School in 1849. When he was 15 years old, he was enrolled in Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts. From there, he studied law under his cousin Reuben Atwood Chapman while working for Wheeler & Armstrong.

text: Armstrong worked for Wheeler & Armstrong after his law studies.

refinement: He was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842. He attended the Royal School in 1849. When he was 15 years old, he was enrolled in Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts. From there, he studied law under his cousin Reuben Atwood Chapman and worked for Wheeler & Armstrong after graduation.

text: The answer misstates Armstrong's relation to Reuben Atwater Chapman, who is Armstrong's uncle.

refinement: He was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842. He attended the Royal School in 1849. When he was 15 years old, he was enrolled in Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts. From there, he studied law under his uncle Reuben Atwood Chapman and worked for Wheeler & Armstrong after graduation.

text: Childhood: "Young William was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842."

text: Phillips Academy: "When he was 15 years old, his mother accompanied him to the mainland United States,[7] where he was enrolled in the university preparatory Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts."

text: Studies law: "A graduate of Yale University, he studied law under the tutelage of his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman."

answer: William Nevins Armstrong attended Yale University and later became Attorney General of the Kingdom of Hawaii. He also accompanied King David Kalākaua on his globe-trotting tour. He married Mary Frances Morgan in 1867, and was also appointed Chairman of the Labor Commission in 1894-1885.

text: Armstrong's accompanying the King on his tour, his marriage, and his job as the Chairman of the Labor Commission are all irrelevant to the question.

refinement: William Nevins Armstrong attended Yale University and later became Attorney General of the Kingdom of Hawaii.

text: Armstrong's becoming the Attorney General isn't part of his education.

refinement: William Nevins Armstrong attended Yale University.

text: The answer omits Armstrong's childhood education.

refinement: He was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842 and attended the Royal School in 1849. At 15 years old, he went to the university prepatory Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts. William Nevins Armstrong attended Yale University.

text: The answer should mention what Armstrong studied at Yale.

refinement: He was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842 and attended the Royal School in 1849. At 15 years old, he went to the university prepatory Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts. William Nevins Armstrong attended Yale University and studied law.

text: Studied at Yale: "A graduate of Yale University, he studied law under the tutelage of his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman."

answer:
Armstrong was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842.
He was 15 when his mother accompanied him to the mainland and enrolled him at Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts.
A graduate of Yale University, Armstrong studied law under his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman. He was admitted to the Bar in 1859 and practiced at Wheeler & Armstrong.

text: The answer omits his attendance to the Royal School.

refinement:
Armstrong was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842, and he attended the Royal School in 1849.
He was 15 when his mother accompanied him to the mainland and enrolled him at Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts.
A graduate of Yale University, Armstrong studied law under his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman. He was admitted to the Bar in 1859 and practiced at Wheeler & Armstrong.

text: Armstrong's work after graduation is irrelevant for the question.

refinement:
Armstrong was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842, and he attended the Royal School in 1849.
He was 15 when his mother accompanied him to the mainland and enrolled him at Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts.
A graduate of Yale University, Armstrong studied law under his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman.

text: Childhood education: "Young William was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842.[4] By the age of 12, he was already looking ahead to fund his college education and was working part-time as a bookbinder.[5] In 1849, he and schoolmate Charles Hastings Judd, as children of ministers of the cabinet of Kamehameha III, attended the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship with a younger schoolmate, future King of Hawaii David Kalākaua.[6] When he was 15 years old, his mother accompanied him to the mainland United States,[7] where he was enrolled in the university preparatory Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts."

text: University: "A graduate of Yale University, he studied law under the tutelage of his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman."

answer: William Nevins Armstrong was born in Lahaina on the island of Maui. He was a graduate of Yale University, and studied law under his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman. While King Kalākaua went on a world tour in 1881, Armstrong served as Attorney General and a Royal Commissioner of Immigration, charged with compiling a feasibility study of each country visited and report back on which nations would provide "a desirable population" for the Hawaiian labor force. Upon returning, he resumed the position of Attorney General and held it until May 1882. He also held the positions of president of the Board of Immigration, president of the Board of Health, and Commissioner of Crown Lands. Armstrong passed away at Garfield Hospital in Washington DC in 1905 due to liver disease.

text: The answer is almost completely irrelevant to the question.

text: There's no answer.

refinement:
Armstrong was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842, and he attended the Royal School in 1849.
He was 15 when his mother accompanied him to the mainland and enrolled him at Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts.
A graduate of Yale University, Armstrong studied law under his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman.

text: University: "A graduate of Yale University, he studied law under the tutelage of his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman."

answer: William Armstrong was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842. In 1849, he attended the Royal School as a child of a cabinet minister. Armstrong enrolled in Phillips Academy (a university prep school) at Andover, Massachusetts at 15 years old. He graduated from Yale University and studied law under his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman. He was admitted to the Bar in 1859.

text: Armstrong's admittance to the Bar is irrelevant to the question.

refinement: William Armstrong was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842. In 1849, he attended the Royal School as a child of a cabinet minister. Armstrong enrolled in Phillips Academy (a university prep school) at Andover, Massachusetts at 15 years old. He graduated from Yale University and studied law under his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman.

text: Childhood education: "Young William was enrolled at Punahou School in Honolulu in 1842.[4] By the age of 12, he was already looking ahead to fund his college education and was working part-time as a bookbinder.[5] In 1849, he and schoolmate Charles Hastings Judd, as children of ministers of the cabinet of Kamehameha III, attended the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship with a younger schoolmate, future King of Hawaii David Kalākaua.[6] When he was 15 years old, his mother accompanied him to the mainland United States,[7] where he was enrolled in the university preparatory Phillips Academy at Andover, Massachusetts."

text: University: "A graduate of Yale University, he studied law under the tutelage of his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is Armstrong's relationship with King Kalākaua?

answer: Armstrong was Kalākaua's schoolmate at Punahou. They formed a lifelong friendship. Kalākaua appointed Armstrong to Attorney General of the Kingdom of Hawaii in December 1880. They both were on the world tour together.

text: Armstrong and Kalākaua met not at Punahou but at the Royal School.

refinement: Armstrong was Kalākaua's schoolmate at the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship. Kalākaua appointed Armstrong to Attorney General of the Kingdom of Hawaii in December 1880. They both were on the world tour together.

text: The answer omits another appointment.

refinement: Armstrong was Kalākaua's schoolmate at the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship. Kalākaua appointed Armstrong to Attorney General of the Kingdom of Hawaii in December 1880. They both were on the world tour together. During it, he was also appointed the Royal Commissioner of Immigration.

text: Childhood friends for life: "In 1849, he and schoolmate Charles Hastings Judd, as children of ministers of the cabinet of Kamehameha III, attended the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship with a younger schoolmate, future King of Hawaii David Kalākaua."

text: Attorney General, tour: "King Kalākaua appointed him Attorney General of the Kingdom of Hawaii in December 1880. Shortly thereafter, he was invited to participate in Kalākaua's 1881 world tour"

answer: Armstrong was the Attorney General of Hawaii under King Kalākaua. He participated in Kalākaua's 1881 world tour.

text: The answer omits their childhood.

refinement: Armstrong was Kalākaua's schoolmate at the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship. Armstrong was the Attorney General of Hawaii under King Kalākaua. He participated in Kalākaua's 1881 world tour.

text: The answer omits another appointment.

refinement: Armstrong was Kalākaua's schoolmate at the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship. Armstrong was the Attorney General of Hawaii under King Kalākaua. He participated in Kalākaua's 1881 world tour. During it, he was also appointed the Royal Commissioner of Immigration.

text: Attorney General, tour: "King Kalākaua appointed him Attorney General of the Kingdom of Hawaii in December 1880. Shortly thereafter, he was invited to participate in Kalākaua's 1881 world tour"

answer: Armstrong was the Attorney General of Hawaii during Kalākaua's reign. He participated in Kalākaua's 1881 world tour.

text: The answer omits their childhood.

refinement: Armstrong was Kalākaua's schoolmate at the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship. Armstrong was the Attorney General of Hawaii during Kalākaua's reign. He participated in Kalākaua's 1881 world tour.

text: The answer omits another appointment.

refinement: Armstrong was Kalākaua's schoolmate at the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship. Armstrong was the Attorney General of Hawaii during Kalākaua's reign. He participated in Kalākaua's 1881 world tour. During it, he was also appointed the Royal Commissioner of Immigration.

text: Attorney General, tour: "King Kalākaua appointed him Attorney General of the Kingdom of Hawaii in December 1880. Shortly thereafter, he was invited to participate in Kalākaua's 1881 world tour"

answer: The two men were schoolmates of sorts through their extended schooling, and Kalākaua would proceed to appoint him Director of Immigration, as well as Attorney General for the Kingdom of Hawaii. Armstrong would go on to write a detailed journal of their 1881 world tour, which was published as Around the World with a King in 1904.

text: Armstrong's appointment as Royal Commissioner of Immigration is misstated.

refinement: The two men were schoolmates of sorts through their extended schooling, and Kalākaua would proceed to appoint him Royal Commissioner of Immigration, as well as Attorney General for the Kingdom of Hawaii. Armstrong would go on to write a detailed journal of their 1881 world tour, which was published as Around the World with a King in 1904.

text: Their childhood friendship isn't ambiguous. They were schoolmates at the Royal School.

refinement: The two men were schoolmates at the Royal School, and Kalākaua would proceed to appoint him Royal Commissioner of Immigration, as well as Attorney General for the Kingdom of Hawaii. Armstrong would go on to write a detailed journal of their 1881 world tour, which was published as Around the World with a King in 1904.

text: Attorney General, tour: "King Kalākaua appointed him Attorney General of the Kingdom of Hawaii in December 1880. Shortly thereafter, he was invited to participate in Kalākaua's 1881 world tour"

text: Childhood friends for life: "In 1849, he and schoolmate Charles Hastings Judd, as children of ministers of the cabinet of Kamehameha III, attended the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship with a younger schoolmate, future King of Hawaii David Kalākaua."

text: Immigration duties: "Kalākaua appointed him Royal Commissioner of Immigration"

answer: While attending the Royal School, Armstrong formed a lifelong friendship with a younger schoolmate, the future King of Hawaii David Kalākaua.

text: The answer omits their tour together.

refinement: While attending the Royal School, Armstrong formed a lifelong friendship with a younger schoolmate, the future King of Hawaii David Kalākaua. Armstrong accompanied the King on his circumnavigation.

text: The answer misses the duties assigned to Armstrong by King Kalākaua.

refinement: While attending the Royal School, Armstrong formed a lifelong friendship with a younger schoolmate, the future King of Hawaii David Kalākaua. Armstrong accompanied the King on his circumnavigation. Kalākaua appointed him Attorney General of the Kingdom of Hawaii and Royal Commissioner of Immigration.

text: "In 1849, he and schoolmate Charles Hastings Judd, as children of ministers of the cabinet of Kamehameha III, attended the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship with a younger schoolmate, future King of Hawaii David Kalākaua."

question: Write a ~7 sentence summary.

answer: William Nevins Armstrong was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book "Around the World with a King," his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour. Armstrong's Chapman side of the family was prominent in Massachusetts. His Grandfather, Samuel Chapman, was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts, while his uncle was Supreme Judicial Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman. Armstrong became close friends with King David while they were both attending the Royal School in Hawaii. Armstrong married Frances Morgan on April 10, 1867, and they had three sons and a daughter. Armstrong had been suffering from liver disease for some time and died at Garfield Hospital in Washington D.C. on October 15, 1905.

text: "King David" is improper, it should be "King Kalākaua".

refinement: William Nevins Armstrong was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book "Around the World with a King," his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour. Armstrong's Chapman side of the family was prominent in Massachusetts. His Grandfather, Samuel Chapman, was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts, while his uncle was Supreme Judicial Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman. Armstrong became close friends with King Kalākaua while they were both attending the Royal School in Hawaii. Armstrong married Frances Morgan on April 10, 1867, and they had three sons and a daughter. Armstrong had been suffering from liver disease for some time and died at Garfield Hospital in Washington D.C. on October 15, 1905.

text: Attorney General, the tour with the king: "WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG (March 10, 1835 – October 16, 1905), aka NEVINS ARMSTRONG and aka W. N. ARMSTRONG, was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour ."

text: Chapmans in Massachussets: "His grandfather Samuel Chapman was one of the founders of Russell, Massachusetts."

text: Uncle: "A graduate of Yale University, he studied law under the tutelage of his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman."

text: Childhood friends with the King: "In 1849, he and schoolmate Charles Hastings Judd, as children of ministers of the cabinet of Kamehameha III, attended the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship with a younger schoolmate, future King of Hawaii David Kalākaua."

text: Marriage and progeny: "He wed Mary Frances Morgan on April 10, 1867. She predeceased him in 1903.[27] The couple maintained a home in Virginia, and were the parents of a daughter Dorothy, and three sons, Matthew, Richard and Kalani."

text: Death: "Armstrong had been suffering from liver disease for a few years, and succumbed to catarrh at Garfield Hospital in Washington D. C. on October 15, 1905."

answer: William Nevins Armstrong was known as the Attorney General of Hawaii. Armstrong was first associated with King Kalakaua as a child when he and his fellow cabinet member schoolmate Charles Hastings Judd got acquainted with the future king. Armstrong was also involved in King's world tour. Upon their return, he resumed the position of Attorney General and held it until May 1882. Since then, Armstrong was elected to be a member of the House of Nobles in the Kingdom, he was Chairman of the Labor Commission in 1894-1885. Armstrong wrote a book which details his experience in Kalakaua's world tour and his life overall, titled "Around the World with a King". He was married to Mary Frances Morgan and was father to several children.

text: The answer misstates Armstrong's time as a member of the House of Nobles.

refinement: William Nevins Armstrong was known as the Attorney General of Hawaii. Armstrong was first associated with King Kalakaua as a child when he and his fellow cabinet member schoolmate Charles Hastings Judd got acquainted with the future king. Armstrong was also involved in King's world tour. Upon their return, he resumed the position of Attorney General and held it until May 1882. During that, Armstrong was elected to be a member of the House of Nobles in the Kingdom, he was Chairman of the Labor Commission in 1894-1885. Armstrong wrote a book which details his experience in Kalakaua's world tour and his life overall, titled "Around the World with a King". He was married to Mary Frances Morgan and was father to several children.

text: Attorney General, the tour with the king, and the book: "WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG (March 10, 1835 – October 16, 1905), aka NEVINS ARMSTRONG and aka W. N. ARMSTRONG, was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour ."

text: Childhood friends with the King: "In 1849, he and schoolmate Charles Hastings Judd, as children of ministers of the cabinet of Kamehameha III, attended the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship with a younger schoolmate, future King of Hawaii David Kalākaua."

text: House of Nobles: "From November 29, 1880 to May 19, 1882, Armstrong was a member of the House of Nobles in the legislature of the Kingdom of Hawaii."

text: Labor Commission: "He was Chairman of the Labor Commission in 1894-1885."

answer: William Nevins Armstrong, later known as William Nevins Armstrong, was Attorney general of Hawaii during 1881-1882. The first of his names referred to his uncle who was Massachusetts's chief justice. Armstrong was born in Lahaina in 1835. He studied Law at Yale and was admitted to the bar. Armstrong's friendship with King Kalākaua made him Attorney general. When King Kalākaua embarked on his world tour, Armstrong accompanied him on it.

text: Duration of Armstrong as Attorney General is wrongly stated.

refinement: William Nevins Armstrong, later known as William Nevins Armstrong, was Attorney general of Hawaii during 1880-1882. The first of his names referred to his uncle who was Massachusetts's chief justice. Armstrong was born in Lahaina in 1835. He studied Law at Yale and was admitted to the bar. Armstrong's friendship with King Kalākaua made him Attorney general. When King Kalākaua embarked on his world tour, Armstrong accompanied him on it.

text: "Later known as..." is awkward and nonsensical.

refinement: William Nevins Armstrong was Attorney general of Hawaii during 1880-1882. The first of his names referred to his uncle who was Massachusetts's chief justice. Armstrong was born in Lahaina in 1835. He studied Law at Yale and was admitted to the bar. Armstrong's friendship with King Kalākaua made him Attorney general. When King Kalākaua embarked on his world tour, Armstrong accompanied him on it.

text: His first name is in honor of his older brother, not his uncle.

refinement: William Nevins Armstrong was Attorney general of Hawaii during 1880-1882. The first of his names was in honor of his older brother. Armstrong was born in Lahaina in 1835. He studied Law at Yale and was admitted to the bar. Armstrong's friendship with King Kalākaua made him Attorney general. When King Kalākaua embarked on his world tour, Armstrong accompanied him on it.

text: It's misleading to say Armstrong was Attorney General due to his friendship with the King. More neutral phrasing would be appropriate.

refinement: William Nevins Armstrong was Attorney general of Hawaii during 1880-1882. The first of his names was in honor of his older brother. Armstrong was born in Lahaina in 1835. He studied Law at Yale and was admitted to the bar. King Kalākaua appointed him Attorney general. When King Kalākaua embarked on his world tour, Armstrong accompanied him on it.

text: Overall ordering of the summary is awkward.

refinement: William Nevins Armstrong was born in Lahaina in 1835. The first of his names was in honor of his older brother. He studied Law at Yale and was admitted to the bar. King Kalākaua appointed him Attorney general. Armstrong was Attorney general of Hawaii during 1880-1882. When King Kalākaua embarked on his world tour, Armstrong accompanied him on it.

text: Instead of repeating his role as Attorney General, more of his roles can be mentioned.

refinement: William Nevins Armstrong was born in Lahaina in 1835. The first of his names was in honor of his older brother. He studied Law at Yale and was admitted to the bar. King Kalākaua appointed him Attorney general. Armstrong was a member of the House of Nobles and held several other roles including the Royal Commissioner of Immigration. When King Kalākaua embarked on his world tour, Armstrong accompanied him on it.

text: The answer should state he's famous for his book.

refinement: William Nevins Armstrong was born in Lahaina in 1835. The first of his names was in honor of his older brother. He studied Law at Yale and was admitted to the bar. King Kalākaua appointed him Attorney general. Armstrong was a member of the House of Nobles and held several other roles including the Royal Commissioner of Immigration. When King Kalākaua embarked on his world tour, Armstrong accompanied him on it. He is famous for his insider account of that tour he published.

text: Attorney General, the tour with the king: "WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG (March 10, 1835 – October 16, 1905), aka NEVINS ARMSTRONG and aka W. N. ARMSTRONG, was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour ."

text: Childhood friends with the King: "In 1849, he and schoolmate Charles Hastings Judd, as children of ministers of the cabinet of Kamehameha III, attended the Royal School. They formed a lifelong friendship with a younger schoolmate, future King of Hawaii David Kalākaua."

text: University: "A graduate of Yale University, he studied law under the tutelage of his uncle, Massachusetts Supreme Judicial Court Chief Justice Reuben Atwater Chapman."

answer: WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG was born in Lahaina, Maui in 1835. A graduate of Yale University, he became Attorney General of Hawaii in 1880. In 1881, he participated in King David Kalākaua's world tour. Armstrong died in 1905 of liver disease. He is most well-known for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of the world tour.

text: The answer can use another sentence to mention he and the King were childhood friends.

refinement: WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG was born in Lahaina, Maui in 1835. He met, and befriended for life, King Kalākaua in 1849 while attending the Royal School. A graduate of Yale University, he became Attorney General of Hawaii in 1880. In 1881, he participated in King David Kalākaua's world tour. Armstrong died in 1905 of liver disease. He is most well-known for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of the world tour.

text: The answer can use another sentence to mention his marriage and kids.

refinement: WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG was born in Lahaina, Maui in 1835. He met, and befriended for life, King Kalākaua in 1849 while attending the Royal School. A graduate of Yale University, he became Attorney General of Hawaii in 1880. In 1881, he participated in King David Kalākaua's world tour. Armstrong died in 1905 of liver disease. He is most well-known for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of the world tour. Armstrong married Frances Morgan on April 10, 1867, and they had three sons and a daughter.

text: Birthplace: "He was born in Lahaina on the island of Maui"

text: Birth year, tour, book, Attorney General: "WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG (March 10, 1835 – October 16, 1905), aka NEVINS ARMSTRONG and aka W. N. ARMSTRONG, was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour ."

text: Death: "Armstrong had been suffering from liver disease for a few years, and succumbed to catarrh at Garfield Hospital in Washington D. C. on October 15, 1905."

answer: WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He traveled with the king on his world tour in 1881. Armstrong also served in the legislature of Hawaii and as Chairman of the Labor Commission. He died in 1905, shortly after the publication of his account of the world tour.

text: The answer can use another sentence to mention he and the King were childhood friends.

refinement: WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He met, and befriended for life, King Kalākaua in 1849 while attending the Royal School. He traveled with the king on his world tour in 1881. Armstrong also served in the legislature of Hawaii and as Chairman of the Labor Commission. He died in 1905, shortly after the publication of his account of the world tour.

text: The answer can use another sentence to mention his marriage and kids.

refinement: WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He met, and befriended for life, King Kalākaua in 1849 while attending the Royal School. He traveled with the king on his world tour in 1881. Armstrong also served in the legislature of Hawaii and as Chairman of the Labor Commission. He died in 1905, shortly after the publication of his account of the world tour. Armstrong married Frances Morgan on April 10, 1867, and they had three sons and a daughter.

text: Birth year, tour, book, Attorney General: "WILLIAM NEVINS ARMSTRONG (March 10, 1835 – October 16, 1905), aka NEVINS ARMSTRONG and aka W. N. ARMSTRONG, was the Attorney General of Hawaii during the reign of King David Kalākaua. He is most widely known outside of Hawaii for the book _Around the World with a King_, his insider account of Kalākaua's 1881 world tour ."

text: Death: "Armstrong had been suffering from liver disease for a few years, and succumbed to catarrh at Garfield Hospital in Washington D. C. on October 15, 1905."

text: Legislature: "Armstrong was a member of the House of Nobles in the legislature of the Kingdom of Hawaii."

text: Other roles: "Armstrong held the positions of president of the Board of Immigration,[20] president of the Board of Health, and Commissioner of Crown Lands.[21] He was Chairman of the Labor Commission in 1894-1885."


split: train

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First the explosion. Deafening. Then the pain. Excruciating. Then the blackness. Oblivion. It was all in front of him as he planned the shot. Yet to happen, but predetermined by people who sought this man’s bloody and sudden end.

Will calculated the distance, wind, angle and speed of all the factors and event that would occur before his bullet slammed through the man’s heart. His breathing steadied, he cleared his mind of all doubt he would miss, he squeezed the trigger.

First the explosion as the bullet left the barrel. Sound deafening. The pain as the bullet entered the man’s chest and pierced his heart. Excruciating thoughts entered his mind as he realized his fate. Then blackness as he fell, entering oblivion before his still warm body collapsed to the stage.

Panic. The crowd scattered at the sight of their Leader collapsing from an unknown missile. Shock. His family and guard scramble to his fallen side. Realization. Heads swivel looking for the culprit. Determination. The chase begins as sirens screech and voices are raised. Hope. A rifle sighted in a window, a black clad man fleeing the scene.

Will realized his mistake as he sprinted down the fire escape. He hadn’t thoroughly inspected his escape route, seeing now all too late the 4 metre drop awaiting him where an old rusty ladder had broken off years ago. There was no going back the sirens were getting closer and he knew he didn’t have enough time to find another way out. He jumped. Rolling as he landed to break the fall helped only so much, realizing now the crack he heard had come from his ankle.

He limped down the alley to where his motorbike awaited him on the street, his heart thumping loudly in his chest as the adrenaline spread through his system. The sirens reached the building and surrounded it cutting off all exits from the street as they did so. All except for one. Will forced his helmet on and jumped on his bike, feeling it come alive beneath him he surged away back down the alley. The sirens now turned away from the building towards the man making his getaway. The chase was on.

Will snaked between traffic as he fled down streets and alleys. The sirens still on his tail as he sped dangouresly through another intersection. A helicopter’s blades spun overhead, its massive eye shining a bright light to the ground below as it searched for any sign of the fleeing suspect.

The eye turned, its light striking him as he sped between a pair of sirens attempting to block the road. The way forward was cast almost completely out of view as the light from above blinded him. He turned, hoping to get away from the blinding light and back on to his original escape route. The bridge he needed to cross was only a few more blocks away, he knew once he got there that his escape would be guaranteed.

He sped through another alley and found himself on a familiar street on the opposite side, the eye above had momentarily lost sight of him and now was his chance to make for the bridge. Bike in full rev he sped forwards following the bend in the road. As he rounded the corner the bridge came into view, as did the fact that it was now parted in two and raised far above the water.

Sirens blared loudly behind him, he had no other option they would close in on him soon and the eye would set his sights on him. He couldn’t run forever, he had to make the jump. He shot forward like a bullet out of a gun gaining as much speed as he could before he had to make the distance over the water. 300 metres. 200.100. 50. 25… he saw them too late.

Road spikes lain out just before the bridge. Trying to stop he skid out of control and hit the spikes on an angle. The bike stopped instantly as its tires caught the spikes and he was thrown forward tumbling into the air. Slamming into the ground he skidded and rolled the remaining 10 metres to the foot of the bridge. His helmet and jacket the only thing keeping him alive on the rough tarmac.

He sat up, dazed and confused he took off his helmet to alleviate some of the pain from his brain thrashing around in his skull only seconds before. Amazed he was still alive he began to stand up, wincing at the pain in his ankle and the new pain that he now felt from his broken left arm. The sirens closed in on him, surrounding him. It was all a trap, how they knew he had no clue. He looked up, guns were being drawn level with him. He started to raise his own.

First the explosion. Deafening. Then the pain. Excruciating. Then the blackness. Oblivion.

title: [AA,RF] We Live for Oblivion

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the pinnacle of action in the story.

answer: The protagonist shoots and kills an important political figure, and then escapes when he is chased down by the authorities. On the way to the escape, the protagonist triggers a road spike trap and multiple injuries occur. Although still alive, he is at the mercy of the authorities.

text: The response contains inaccurate information.

refinement: The protagonist shoots and kills an important political figure, and then escapes when he is chased down by the authorities. On the way to the escape, the protagonist triggers a road spike trap and multiple injuries occur. The protagonist gets up and starts to raise his gun, but is shot by the authorities.

text: The response could use clearer language.

refinement: The protagonist shoots and kills an important political figure, and then escapes but is chased down by the authorities. During the chase, the protagonist triggers a road spike trap and multiple injuries occur. The protagonist gets up and starts to raise his gun, but is shot by the authorities.

answer: Before the death of the target, much violence is seen and intense pursuits ensue in Will's mind. As the target collapses and a crowd scrambles to his side, the chase for Will begins. He attempts to flee the scene of the crime through a 3-metre iron fence, fearing he could not make the jump. He manages, however lands on the ground, but manages to limp away. Just when Will is facing the bridge, the sirens block the road leading up to the bridge. Will tries to go another, unknown way but ends up at the arms of the sirens during a jump. At the end, he is recaptured by the sirens.

text: The response includes inaccurate information.

refinement: As the target collapses and a crowd scrambles to his side, the chase for Will begins. He attempts to flee the scene of the crime. He lands on the ground, but manages to limp away. Just when Will is facing the bridge, the sirens block the road leading up to the bridge.

text: The response could include more details about the ending of the story.

refinement: As the target collapses and a crowd scrambles to his side, the chase for Will begins. He attempts to flee the scene of the crime. He lands on the ground, but manages to limp away. Just when Will is facing the bridge, the sirens block the road leading up to the bridge. Will hits the road spikes, and the authorities shoot him.

answer: The last driving section of the story when Will speeds to cross the bridge and is blinded by a helicopter. He lands on the spikes to block the bridge, breaking his arm and setting his helmet on fire. Then the sirens are upon him and gun out with him.

text: The response contains inaccurate information.

refinement: The last driving section of the story when Will speeds to cross the bridge and is blinded by a helicopter. He lands on the spikes to block the bridge, breaking his arm and throwing him from his bike. Then the sirens are upon him and gun out with him.

text: The response could use clearer language.

refinement: The pinnacle of action is the story is when Will speeds to cross the bridge and is blinded by a helicopter. He lands on the spikes to block the bridge and breaks his arm after he is thrown from his bike. Then the sirens are upon him and the authorities shoot him.

answer: The pinnacle of action is probably when, in a last-ditch effort to evade capture, Will attempts to jump his motorcycle over the bridge. Instead of clearing, he catches on some previously undetected spikes lain out, and the bike wrecks. This is the pinnacle because it greatly slows down all of the frenetic action in the story up until that point-Will is suspended in air for a moment. He then collects himself dizzily and resigns himself to the fact that he is caught as guns train on him.

text: It is implied that the authorities shoot Will.

refinement: The pinnacle of action is probably when, in a last-ditch effort to evade capture, Will attempts to jump his motorcycle over the bridge. Instead of clearing, he catches on some previously undetected spikes lain out, and the bike wrecks. This is the pinnacle because it greatly slows down all of the frenetic action in the story up until that point-Will is suspended in air for a moment. He then collects himself dizzily and resigns himself to the fact that he is caught as guns train on him, and then shoot him.

answer: The protagonist calculates, shoots, and narrowly escapes while on the run from police as they chase him down. He makes a jump over spiked road blocks and is thrown from his bike, breaking his arm in the process. However, he survives and is surrounded by the police before surrendering.

text: It is implied that the authorities shoot Will.

refinement: The protagonist calculates, shoots, and narrowly escapes while on the run from police as they chase him down. He makes a jump over spiked road blocks and is thrown from his bike, breaking his arm in the process. However, he survives and is surrounded by the police before they shoot him.


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_MARO PRAPANCHAM_ () is a 1970 Telugu-language film, produced by Akkineni Nageswara Rao and Adurthi Subba Rao under the Chakravarthy Chitra banner[1] and directed by Adurthi Subba Rao.[2] It stars Akkineni Nageswara Rao, Savitri, Jamuna in the lead roles[3] and music composed by K. V. Mahadevan.[4]

Plot

During the time of Gandhji's centenary birth celebrations, several leaders & social reformers give messages regarding the ideologies of Gandhi which they do not follow in real life. At this point in time, 9 youngsters who are fed up with these double-standards form into an organization and kidnap children from all over the country. They create a special world called _Maro Prapancham_ where jealousy, rivalry, caste & community do not exist, even Goddess of India (Jamuna) lands at the place. The existence of such a place creates huge uproar in the country and the Central Govt appoints Special CBI Officer Ravindra Nath (Akkineni Nageswara Rao) to solve the case.

Ravindra eventually manages to find the different world after various setbacks. He finds the place filled with piety, truth, peace, kindness & mercy. He is inspired by this and he himself decides to join with the organisation that made the “Maro Prapancham” (Another World). When a few of the members are caught and prosecuted, Ravindra arrives and takes the judiciary to the _Maro Prapancham_, to describe its uniqueness and what they were trying to achieve. Yet, the judiciary is unmoved and judges them guilty, sentencing Ravindra along with the people caught. Thereupon, children obstruct the Police and demand their leaders be set free. Ravindra explains to them that the children are now independent and can carry on on their own, and orders them to make the entire country a different world. The movie ends with the children proceeding towards the _Maro Prapancham_.

Cast

-   Akkineni Nageswara Rao as CBI Officer Ravindra Nath
-   Savitri as Sarada
-   Jamuna as Bharata Maata
-   Gummadi as I.G. Jagannatha Rao
-   Padmanabham
-   Sakshi Ranga Rao as Sanyasi Rao
-   Mada as Peda Gandhi
-   Vijayachander
-   Venkateswara Rao as Narasimha Rao
-   Suryakantham
-   Pushpa Kumari as Rukmini
-   Radha Kumari as Godavari
-   Meena Kumari

Crew

-   ART: G. V .Subba Rao
-   CHOREOGRAPHY: Venu Gopal
-   DIALOGUES: Modukuri Johnson
-   LYRICS: Sri Sri
-   PLAYBACK: SP Balu, S. Janaki
-   MUSIC: K. V. Mahadevan
-   STORY: B. S. Thapa
-   SCREENPLAY: K. Viswanath
-   EDITING: B. Gopala Rao, Adurthi Haranath
-   CINEMATOGRAPHY: K. S. Ramakrishna Rao
-   PRODUCER: Akkineni Nageswara Rao, Adurthi Subba Rao
-   DIRECTOR: Adurthi Subba Rao
-   BANNER: Chakravarthi Chitra
-   RELEASE DATE: 10 April 1970

Soundtrack

Music composed by K. V. Mahadevan. Music released on Audio Company.

  S. No   Song Title                Lyrics    Singers              length
  ------- ------------------------- --------- -------------------- --------
  1       “Idigo Idigo”             Sri Sri   SP Balu, S. Janaki   4:04
  2       “Annagarina Brathukulo”   Sri Sri   SP Balu, S. Janaki

Other

-   VCDs and DVDs on - VOLGA Videos, Hyderabad

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title: Maro Prapancham

question: Who has directed the movie?

answer: The movie was directed by Adurthi Subba Rao.

answer: Adurthi Subba Rao

text: To make this response stronger, making it into a complete sentence would be beneficial.

answer: Adurthi Subba Rao

text: To make this a stronger response, making it into a proper sentence will be beneficial.

question: What is the different world created called?

answer: Maro Prapancham

text: To make this response stronger, making it a proper sentence would be beneficial.

refinement: Maro Prapancham is the name of the different world that is created.

answer: Maro Prapancham, or the Another World.

text: Additional details are added to this response that are not needed.

text: Making this response into a proper sentence will be beneficial.

refinement: Maro Prapancham is the name of the different world created.

answer: Maro Prapancham

question: Who are the lead actors?

answer: The lead actors are Akkineni Nageswara Rao, Savitri, and Jamuna.

answer: Akkineni Nageswara Rao, Savitri, Jamuna

text: Making this response into a full sentence would help enhance it.

refinement: Akkineni Nageswara Rao, Savitri, Jamuna are the lead actors.

answer: Actor: Akkineni Nageswara Rao

text: Not all the lead actors are referenced in this response and need to be added.

refinement: Actors Akkineni Nageswara Rao, Savitri, and Jamuna

text: This response needs to be turned into a full sentence to enhance it.

refinement: Actors Akkineni Nageswara Rao, Savitri, and Jamuna are the lead actors.

question: When was the movie released?

answer: In 1970

text: Making this response into a full sentence would enhance it.

answer: April 10 1970

answer: 1970

text: The full date of release should be included.

text: Making this response into a full statement would help enhance it

refinement: April 10, 1970 was the release date of the film.

question: Write a ~7 sentence summary.

answer: Maro Prapancham is a 1970 Telugu-language film following 9 youngsters who create an alternate universe where children are free of jealousy and hostility. However, when they are captured and put on trial, they are sentenced to prison. Ravindra, a CBI officer, eventually finds the children's world, inspired by their innocence. However, he too is sentenced and the children revolt in support. The movie ends with them planning to change the world in their image.

answer: The Maro Prapancham is a 1970 Telugu-language film that follows a group of 9 youngsters fighting for justice in society during the time of Gandhi's centenary celebrations. Their attempt is put to a stop, when they're caught by the CBI officer, Ravindra Nath. The children who followed the group resist the arrests and the film ends with them heading to the 'Maro Prapancham' to continue the mission started.

answer: Maro Prapancham is a 1970 Telugu-language film in which young people rebel against society's double-standards around the time of Gandhji's centenary celebrations and create their own utopian place where children run free from jealousy, rivalry, and community boundaries. Ravindra, a CBI officer who is in charge of solving the kidnappings, eventually discovers the community and is inspired to help run it. However, when a few members of the community are persecuted, they are sentenced to jail and the children step in to demand their release. Ravindra then explains to the children that they are now free to continue what they began and so they set out to make the rest of the country like their utopia.

answer: Maro Prapancham is a 1970 Telugu-language film that centers around 9 young people who have had enough of hypocritical leaders who speak about Gandhi's philosophies yet follow them only in words. They create a utopia called "Maro Prapancham" and are caught but are defended in court by the protagonist CBI officer, Ravindra Nath. The film ends with the children going off to create their own version of "Maro Prapancham" throughout the country.

text: Additional details need to be added to make this summary accurate.

refinement: Maro Prapancham is a 1970 Telugu-language film that centers around 9 young people who have had enough of hypocritical leaders who speak about Gandhi's philosophies yet follow them only in words. These young people kidnap kids and bring them to the world they have created. They create a utopia called "Maro Prapancham" and are caught but are defended in court by the protagonist CBI officer, Ravindra Nath. The film ends with the children going off to create their own version of "Maro Prapancham" throughout the country.

answer: "Maro Prapancham" is a 1970 Telugu-language film that follows the story of nine youngsters and their subversive organization, kidnapping children to create a utopian world free of competition and jealousy. But when the authorities find out, the organization is sentenced, with the main protagonist, CBI Officer Ravindra Nath, standing with them in support. Ultimately, the children rebel and the utopian world "Maro Prapancham" remains untouched.

answer:
In 1970, Akkineni Nageswara Rao and Adurthi Subba Rao produced a film named "Maro Prapancham."

The movie is set during Gandhiji's centenary birth celebrations. Nine youngsters are tired of people's double standards regarding Gandhiji's ideologies. They set up another world called Maro Prapancham, where jealousy, rivalry, and caste do not exist. A CBI officer is appointed to solve this case. In the process, he himself becomes a part of their world. Eventually, a few members are caught and the officer takes the judiciary to Maro Prapancham to show them its uniqueness.

text: The last part of this response is not accurate and should be changed.

refinement:
In 1970, Akkineni Nageswara Rao and Adurthi Subba Rao produced a film named "Maro Prapancham."

The movie is set during Gandhiji's centenary birth celebrations. Nine youngsters are tired of people's double standards regarding Gandhiji's ideologies. They set up another world called Maro Prapancham, where jealousy, rivalry, and caste do not exist. A CBI officer is appointed to solve this case. In the process, he himself becomes a part of their world. Eventually, a few members are caught and the officer is also arrested for helping the kids. The movie ends with the officer telling the children they are independent and to make the entire country like the world they had created.


text:
_The Martian_ author Andy Weir’s 2009 short story _The Egg_, originally published online, is a sci-fi tale about rebirth, reciprocity, and evolution. When a man is killed in a car accident, he meets a god-like figure in limbo who tells him of his fate and that he is to be reincarnated. The man subsequently learns that not only is time an illusion, but _he_ is the entire universe, and a continuous sequence of deaths and rebirths is all part of a maturation process: The whole universe is an egg, and when it’s fully grown it’ll ascend to the next level of consciousness.

Maryland rapper Logic’s new album, _Everybody_, is a strangely faithful adaptation of the short story with an emphasis on the endless cycle of reincarnations that’d eventually—hypothetically—cause everyone to be different incarnations of the same person. He weaves his own struggles with race and religion into a complex, panoramic view of humanity, seeking a unified theory of equality, not just for his mortal coil but for the cosmos. If this seems convoluted that’s because it is: Weir’s story was meant as a fanciful (albeit thoughtful) work of fiction, not an intersectional parable. “Every time you victimized someone you were victimizing yourself,” the short story goes. “Every act of kindness you’ve done, you’ve done to yourself.” This is _Everybody_’s central conceit: We are all the same, and every misdeed hurts the human race equally. Logic gets even more literal in the subtext, drawing parallels between this life force balance and his mixed-race heritage. Herein, an existential crisis unfolds.

Never mind the fact that the concept is completely unoriginal, even on a superficial level; _Everybody_ unravels Weir’s tightly coiled micro universe into a nonsensical sprawl. Give an extremely verbose rapper a heady short story and watch it come undone. It operates on a colossal scale, and yet somehow still ends up being myopic.

Astrophysicist Neil deGrasse Tyson, whose last major foray into rap was to wage war with flat Earth truther B.o.B, plays God on _Everybody_. Logic chooses to name the man in his musical adaptation “Atom,” and when he’s not rapping as Logic, he’s rapping from the perspective of a past life. These winking gestures mixing science and religion are insufferable when paired with meditations on racial inequity and social anxiety, constantly raising the stakes until they mean nothing. Not only is it easy to see the seams in this tangled ideological tapestry, they’re constantly fraying.

Logic’s _Everybody_ is the latest in a string of recent rap releases that consider race and perception—Kendrick Lamar’s _DAMN._, J. Cole’s _4 Your Eyez Only_, and Joey Bada$$’s _All-Amerikkkan Bada$$_ among them. But unlike those records, which are self-aware and mindful of their surroundings, this is nearly clueless and without subtlety. His raps, even at their most technical, are all empty loops regurgitating predictable talking points, at times mixing messages. Fake deep aphorisms (“Everybody looking for the meaning of life through a cell phone screen!”) share space with half-witted indictments of student loan policies and flex culture. He addresses mental health and wellness on “1-800-273-8255” and “Anziety,” which is admirable, but there are no real revelations or comforts to be found in either. A song like Kendrick Lamar’s “u,” for example, which really bears out the weight of depression and self-doubt, reveals Logic's takes to be entirely without substance.

For a significant portion of the album, Logic stakes a claim to his blackness with receipts, citing his great-grandfather the slave, his cousin Keisha, and saying “nigga” a few times. None of these race raps do anything meaningful. They say very little about the mechanics of racism and they say next to nothing insightful about being black in America. He spends more time denouncing rioters than killer cops on “America.” Trump gets a single bar of disapproval but Kanye gets several for meeting with him. Logic’s calls for civic action seem woefully ignorant to how oppression and white supremacy work—from the role of private prisons and redistricting to stop and frisks. To that end, not once does he consider how being white-passing could skew his perception of what it means to be black. He never even probes what it might mean when people assume that he’s white; either he refuses to engage thoughtfully here or he’s simply irresponsible. This isn’t just lazy, it’s messy. It's the #AllLivesMatter of rap albums.

Aside from its more sociopolitical shortcomings, _Everybody_ refuses to stop and evaluate why it exists in the first place. A lot has been made of Logic’s technical skill, but it can’t really be considered proficiency if it isn’t efficient. Seconds after Killer Mike delivers an impassioned speech on anti-black tyranny (“Confess”), Logic is criticizing web activists and the social media gratification matrix with the nuance of a 4chan thread (“Killing Spree”). “Take It Back” is a six-minute song with only two minutes of raps. Several tracks have long, preachy monologues appended to them. The same verse fragments are continuously rearranged on “AfricAryaN” for no reason, and with winding effect. The song is 12-minutes long.

If you manage to get to the end of “AfricAryaN,” it pans outward to reveal a shared universe where—oh shit—the album’s contents turns out to be merely walking music for the space travelers who dictated the narrative flow on Logic’s last album, _The Incredible True Story_. The extra layer feels like an even greater slight to the heavy topics discussed within; the further out we venture, the further the issues get pushed into the margins. A final uncredited verse from J. Cole, who is also biracial, unravels the album’s entire cyclical concept: “I’ve been through it before/Can only share with you what I know/To be true, but at the same time, I’ll never be you/And you’ll never be me,” he raps. He seems to know what Logic doesn’t: Equality without identity is merely inactivity. The weight of our experiences shapes us. It is only once we understand why it’s okay to be different that there can be empathy—and change.

question: What does this post explain?

answer: The post analyses Logic's rap album "Everybody".

answer: It introduces Logic's new album Everybody.

text: This response can become better by switching out the verb "introduces" to "analyzes"

refinement: It analyzes Logic's new album Everybody.

answer: This post explains Logic's new album, tying it to The Egg. The author of the post suggests that Logic's album tries to consider race and perception, but it isn't meaningful. The songs in the album say very little about the mechanics of racism and they say next to nothing insightful about being black in America.

question: What is The Egg?

answer: The Egg is a short story written by Andy Weir. It's a sci-fi tale about rebirth, reciprocity, and evolution.

answer: The Egg is a short story by author Andy Weir that focuses on the cycle of reincarnation and the idea that everyone is ultimately equal despite their differences.

text: The second half of this response is a description of Logic's new album, Everybody, and not a description of the Egg.

refinement: The Egg is a short story by author Andy Weir that focuses on rebirth, reciprocity, and evolution.

answer: The egg is a metaphor used in the short story to represent the universe's maturation process, with reincarnations being a part of that.

text: This response is out of pocket from what the question is asking and needs to be rewritten.

refinement: The Egg is a short story, written by Andy Weir, that describes rebirth, reciprocity, and evolution.

question: Explain Logic's response to The Egg.

answer: Rapper, Logic's new album, Everybody, emphasizes the endless cycle of reincarnations that'd eventually cause everyone to be different incarnations of he same person.

answer: The lyrics reflect the steps of meeting the afterlife god (or Atom) and learning about the maturation process of the universe.

text: This response addresses a different component of the passage and is not the accurate answer to the question.

refinement: The lyrics reflect the what the egg means and to Logic it means providing a perspective from his past life.

answer: He construes that the whole universe is an egg and when it comes to full growth, it will be ascended to the next level of consciousness.

question: What does the author think of Logic's album?

answer: The author believes the album does not think why it exists and it is not based on quality or effieciency. It also reiterates bas lines in what the author thinks is a mess. There are other rappers, whose tracks, have a lighter touch.

answer: Logic's album is a jumbled mess of conflicting viewpoints lacking direction.

answer: The author is critical of the album, saying the album is "nearly clueless and without subtlety" with regard to race and perception, and full of "sociopolitical shortcomings".

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: Logic's _Everybody_ is a giant mess of a record that lacks depth in its exploration of race and social inequality, leaning on clunky aphorisms and predictable raps to fill in the gaps.

text: More of the passage needs to be discussed in the summary, including Andy Weir's, the Egg.

refinement: An intertwinement of Andy Weir's short story, the Egg, is brought to light in this passage with Logic's album. Logic's _Everybody_ is a giant mess of a record that lacks depth in its exploration of race and social inequality, leaning on clunky aphorisms and predictable raps to fill in the gaps.

answer: _Everybody_, Logic's latest album, largely concerns race and identity but is largely unengaging, clumsy, and unfocused thanks to its lack of thoughtful or nuanced commentary, heavy-handed preaching, and unoriginal concepts.

text: This summary is missing an important component of Andy Weir's short story.

refinement: _Everybody_, Logic's latest album, largely concerns race and identity but is largely unengaging, clumsy, and unfocused thanks to its lack of thoughtful or nuanced commentary, heavy-handed preaching, and unoriginal concepts. Andy Weir's commentary on this album is also provided.

answer: Logic's latest album _Everybody_ offers some worthwhile social commentary on topics such as race and mental health, but unfortunately, its execution largely falls flat. Logic's attempts to recreate Andy Weir's short story _The Egg_ fall apart under poor execution, and his idea ultimately collapses under its own bloated weight.

answer: This post explains Logic's new album, tying it to The Egg. The author of the post suggests that Logic's album tries to consider race and perception, but it isn't meaningful. The songs in the album say very little about the mechanics of racism and they say next to nothing insightful about being black in America.

answer: Logic's new album, 'Everybody', is unfocused, preachy, and poorly executed; he fails to make poignant points about race and identity. Eventually it becomes apparent that the record's allegorical structure doesn't make sense, and it all just falls apart.

text: This summary only focuses on Logic's album and not the intertwinement of Andy Weir's short story called, The Egg.

refinement: Logic's new album, 'Everybody', is unfocused, preachy, and poorly executed; he fails to make poignant points about race and identity. Eventually it becomes apparent that the record's allegorical structure doesn't make sense, and it all just falls apart. Meanwhile, Andy Weir's short story, called the Egg, is discussed and how the egg stands for a next level of consciousness.

answer: _Everybody_ by Logic is an ambitious but ultimately unsuccessful concept album that focuses on the intricacies of race and perception. Despite the rapper's clear talent, the record becomes too convoluted and fails to offer insightful introspection on these issues owing to its unfocused and convoluted structure.

text: This summary does not include any content about Andy Weir's short story or his thoughts on the album.

refinement: _Everybody_ by Logic is an ambitious but ultimately unsuccessful concept album that focuses on the intricacies of race and perception. Despite the rapper's clear talent, the record becomes too convoluted and fails to offer insightful introspection on these issues owing to its unfocused and convoluted structure. Andy Weir's short story, the Egg, is intertwined with Logic's album and his commentary about the album is included.


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CARBON SUBSULFIDE is an inorganic chemical compound with the formula C₃S₂. This deep red liquid is immiscible with water but soluble in organic solvents. It readily polymerizes at room temperature to form a hard black solid.

Synthesis and structure

C₃S₂ was discovered by Béla Lengyel,[1] who assigned it an unsymmetrical structure. Later, infrared and Raman spectroscopy showed that the structure is symmetrical with a D∞h point group symmetry,[2] i.e. S=C=C=C=S. This compound is analogous to carbon suboxide whose structure is O=C=C=C=O.

Lengyel first synthesized this compound by passing carbon disulfide (CS₂) vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes. This treatment produced a black solution that after filtration and evaporation gave a cherry-red liquid. He determined the molecular mass by cryoscopy. Later preparations of C₃S₂ include thermolysis of a stream of CS₂ in a quartz tube heated to 900 to 1100 °C as well as flash vacuum pyrolysis (FVP) of 1,2-dithiole-3-thiones.[3]

Reactions and occurrence

Among its few known reactions, C₃S₂ reacts with bromine to form the cyclic disulfide.[4]

C₃S₂ polymerizes under applied pressure to give a black semi-conducting solid. A similar pressure-induced polymerization of CS₂ also gives a black semiconducting polymer.

In addition, reactions of C₃S₂ can yield highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds, e.g. the reaction of C₃S₂ with 2-aminopyridine.

Using microwave spectroscopy, small CnS₂ clusters have been detected in interstellar medium.[5] The rotational transitions of these molecular carbon sulfides matched with the corresponding molecules.

[1] {{ cite journal | author = von Lengyel, B. | title = Ueber ein neues Kohlenstoffsulfid | journal = Berichte der Deutschen Chemischen Gesellschaft | year = 1893 | volume = 26 | issue = 3 | pages = 2960–2968 | doi = 10.1002/cber.189302603124 | url = https://zenodo.org/record/1425718 }}

[2] {{ cite journal |author1=Smith, W. H. |author2=Leroi, G. E. | title = Infrared and Raman Spectra of Carbon Subsulfide | journal = The Journal of Chemical Physics | year = 1966 | volume = 45 | issue = 5 | pages = 1778–1783 | doi = 10.1063/1.1727828 |bibcode = 1966JChPh..45.1778S }}

[3] {{ cite journal | author = Pedersen, C. T. | title = The formation of 1,2-propadiene-1,3-dithione (carbon subsulfide) from flash vacuum pyrolysis of 1,2-dithiole-3-thiones | journal = Tetrahedron Letters | year = 1996 | volume = 37 | issue = 27 | pages = 4805–4808 | doi = 10.1016/0040-4039(96)00941-0 }}

[4] {{ cite journal |author1=Stadlbauer, W. |author2=Kappe, T. | title = The Chemistry of Carbon Subsulfide | journal = Sulfur Reports | year = 1999 | volume = 21 | issue = 4 | pages = 423–445 | doi = 10.1080/01961779908047951 }}

[5] {{ cite journal |author1=Cernicharo, J. |author2=Guelin, M. |author3=Hein, H. |author4=Kahane, C. | title = Sulfur in IRC + 10216 | journal = Astronomy and Astrophysics | issn = 0004-6361 | year = 1987 | volume = 181 | issue = 1 | pages = L9–L12 | bibcode = 1987A&A...181L...9C }}

title: Carbon subsulfide

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to Lengyel.

answer: Carbon subsulfide was discovered by Bela Lengyel. He was the first to synthesize this compound by passing carbon disulfide vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes. He determined the molecular mass by cryoscopy and assigned it an unsymmetrical structure.

answer: Béla Lengyel independently discovered Carbon sub sulfide and assigned it an unsymmetrical structure. He first synthesized the compound by passing carbon disulfide vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes.

text: "sub sulfide" should be one word (subsulfide).

refinement: Béla Lengyel independently discovered Carbon subsulfide and assigned it an unsymmetrical structure. He first synthesized the compound by passing carbon disulfide vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes.

text: The response is missing the part about Lengyel determining molecular mass by cryoscopy.

refinement: Béla Lengyel independently discovered Carbon subsulfide and assigned it an unsymmetrical structure. He first synthesized the compound by passing carbon disulfide vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes. Lengyel determined the molecular mass by cryoscopy.

answer: Béla Lengyel first discovered carbon subsulfide in 1893. The compound exhibits structure with a D∞h point group symmetry and reacts with bromine to form a cyclic disulfide. Carbon subsulfide polymerizes under applied pressure to give a black semiconducting solid. Using microwave spectroscopy, small CnS₂ clusters had been detected in interstellar medium. Lengyel synthesized carbon subsulfide by passing CS₂ vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes.

text: "Béla Lengyel first discovered carbon subsulfide in 1893." - the date is unsubstantiated. There is no record of exactly when Lengyel discovered carbon subsulfide.

refinement: Béla Lengyel first discovered carbon subsulfide. The compound exhibits structure with a D∞h point group symmetry and reacts with bromine to form a cyclic disulfide. Carbon subsulfide polymerizes under applied pressure to give a black semiconducting solid. Using microwave spectroscopy, small CnS₂ clusters had been detected in interstellar medium. Lengyel synthesized carbon subsulfide by passing CS₂ vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes.

text: The highlighted text has nothing to do with Lengyel and should be removed.

refinement: Béla Lengyel first discovered carbon subsulfide. Lengyel synthesized carbon subsulfide by passing CS₂ vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes.

text: The response is missing the part about Lengyel determining molecular mass by cryoscopy.

refinement: Béla Lengyel first discovered carbon subsulfide. Lengyel synthesized carbon subsulfide by passing CS₂ vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes. He later determined the molecular mass by cryoscopy.

answer: Lengyel discovered C₃S₂, assigning it an unsymmetrical structure. He synthetized the compound by passing CS₂ (carbon disulfide) vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes. He determined the molecular mass using cryoscopy. Later preparations of C₃S₂ include thermolysis of a stream of CS₂ in a quartz tube heated to 900 to 1100°C as well as flash vacuum pyrolysis of 1,2-dithiole-3-thiones.

text: Correct the spelling of "synthetized" to "synthesized"

refinement: Lengyel discovered C₃S₂, assigning it an unsymmetrical structure. He synthesized the compound by passing CS₂ (carbon disulfide) vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes. He determined the molecular mass using cryoscopy. Later preparations of C₃S₂ include thermolysis of a stream of CS₂ in a quartz tube heated to 900 to 1100°C as well as flash vacuum pyrolysis of 1,2-dithiole-3-thiones.

text: "Later preparations of C₃S₂ include thermolysis of a stream of CS₂ in a quartz tube heated to 900 to 1100°C as well as flash vacuum pyrolysis of 1,2-dithiole-3-thiones." - is extraneous information that should be removed.

refinement: Lengyel discovered C₃S₂, assigning it an unsymmetrical structure. He synthesized the compound by passing CS₂ (carbon disulfide) vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes. He determined the molecular mass using cryoscopy.

answer: Béla Lengyel (1863-1925) was the earliest discoverer of carbon subsulfide. He initially synthesized the compound by passing CS₂ through an electric arc with carbon electrodes. Later preparations of C₃S₂ include thermolysis of a stream of CS₂ in a quartz tube heated to 900-1100 °C or FVP of 1,2-dithiole-3-thiones. C₃S₂ polymerizes under applied pressure to yield a black semiconducting solid. Carbon subsulfide has been detected in interstellar medium through microwave spectroscopy.

text: "Béla Lengyel (1863-1925)" - the dates of Lengyel's presumed birth and death are not found anywhere in the text and should be deleted.

refinement: Béla Lengyel was the earliest discoverer of carbon subsulfide. He initially synthesized the compound by passing CS₂ through an electric arc with carbon electrodes. Later preparations of C₃S₂ include thermolysis of a stream of CS₂ in a quartz tube heated to 900-1100 °C or FVP of 1,2-dithiole-3-thiones. C₃S₂ polymerizes under applied pressure to yield a black semiconducting solid. Carbon subsulfide has been detected in interstellar medium through microwave spectroscopy.

text: "Béla Lengyel was the earliest discoverer of carbon subsulfide." - this doesn't make sense as Lengyel was the only person (the first) who discovered carbon subsulfide. No other person can discover the same thing twice as it has already been discovered.

refinement: Béla Lengyel discovered carbon subsulfide. He initially synthesized the compound by passing CS₂ through an electric arc with carbon electrodes. Later preparations of C₃S₂ include thermolysis of a stream of CS₂ in a quartz tube heated to 900-1100 °C or FVP of 1,2-dithiole-3-thiones. C₃S₂ polymerizes under applied pressure to yield a black semiconducting solid. Carbon subsulfide has been detected in interstellar medium through microwave spectroscopy.

text: "He initially synthesized the compound by passing CS₂ through an electric arc with carbon electrodes. Later preparations of C₃S₂ include thermolysis of a stream of CS₂ in a quartz tube heated to 900-1100 °C or FVP of 1,2-dithiole-3-thiones. C₃S₂ polymerizes under applied pressure to yield a black semiconducting solid. Carbon subsulfide has been detected in interstellar medium through microwave spectroscopy." - these are not directly related to Lengyel and should be deleted.

refinement: Béla Lengyel discovered carbon subsulfide.

text: Missing other details related to Lengyel.

refinement: Béla Lengyel discovered carbon subsulfide and assigned it an unsymmetrical structure. He first synthesized the compound by passing carbon disulfide vapor through an electric arc with carbon electrodes. Lengyel determined the molecular mass by cryoscopy.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize carbon subsulfide's reactions.

answer: It reacts with bromine to form the cyclic disulfide. C3S polymerizes when pressure is applied, yielding a black semiconducting polymer. Reactions with 2-aminopyridine produce condensed sulfur-containing compounds. Microwave spectroscopy has revealed some CnS subgroups in the interstellar medium.

text: Extraneous information that can be removed.

refinement: It reacts with bromine to form the cyclic disulfide. C3S polymerizes when pressure is applied, yielding a black semiconducting polymer. Reactions with 2-aminopyridine produce condensed sulfur-containing compounds.

text: "C3S" - is inaccurate. Change to "C₃S₂"

refinement: It reacts with bromine to form the cyclic disulfide. C₃S₂ polymerizes when pressure is applied, yielding a black semiconducting polymer. Reactions with 2-aminopyridine produce condensed sulfur-containing compounds.

answer: C₃S₂ undergoes reactions with bromine to form the cyclic disulfide. In addition, reactions with other chemicals can yield highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds. C₃S₂ polymerizes under applied pressure to form a black semi-conducting solid.

text: "undergoes reactions" - change to "reacts"

refinement: C₃S₂ reacts with bromine to form the cyclic disulfide. In addition, reactions with other chemicals can yield highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds. C₃S₂ polymerizes under applied pressure to form a black semi-conducting solid.

text: Add what chemicals these are.

refinement: C₃S₂ reacts with bromine to form the cyclic disulfide. In addition, reactions with other chemicals such as 2-aminopyridine can yield highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds. C₃S₂ polymerizes under applied pressure to form a black semi-conducting solid.

answer: Ccarbon subsulfide easily polymerizes when exposed to pressure, forming a black semiconducting solid. C₃S₂ reacts with bromine, forming the cyclic disulfide. Also, C₃S₂ reacts with 2-aminopyrdinue and yields highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds. When microwaves are used to study CnS₂ clusters in interstellar medium, the rotational transitions of these molecular carbon sulfides matched with the corresponding molecules. Recent studies, though scant, have yielded that methane binds stronger to carbon suboxide than it does to carbon sulfur.

text: "Ccarbon" - correct the spelling to "Carbon"

refinement: Carbon subsulfide easily polymerizes when exposed to pressure, forming a black semiconducting solid. C₃S₂ reacts with bromine, forming the cyclic disulfide. Also, C₃S₂ reacts with 2-aminopyrdinue and yields highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds. When microwaves are used to study CnS₂ clusters in interstellar medium, the rotational transitions of these molecular carbon sulfides matched with the corresponding molecules. Recent studies, though scant, have yielded that methane binds stronger to carbon suboxide than it does to carbon sulfur.

text: The highlighted text has nothing to do with the question and should be removed.

refinement: Carbon subsulfide easily polymerizes when exposed to pressure, forming a black semiconducting solid. C₃S₂ reacts with bromine, forming the cyclic disulfide. Also, C₃S₂ reacts with 2-aminopyrdinue and yields highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds.

text: "aminopyrdinue" - correct the spelling to "aminopyridine"

refinement: Carbon subsulfide easily polymerizes when exposed to pressure, forming a black semiconducting solid. C₃S₂ reacts with bromine, forming the cyclic disulfide. Also, C₃S₂ reacts with 2-aminopyridine and yields highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds.

answer: C₃S₂ reacts with bromine to form cyclic disulfide, it polymerizes under applied pressure to give a black semiconducting solid, and its reactions can produce highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds.

text: Needs to mention what compounds produce a reaction with C₃S₂.

refinement: C₃S₂ reacts with bromine to form cyclic disulfide, it polymerizes under applied pressure to give a black semiconducting solid, and its reactions with certain compounds like 2-aminopyridine can produce highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds.

text: Remove "it"

refinement: C₃S₂ reacts with bromine to form cyclic disulfide, polymerizes under applied pressure to give a black semiconducting solid, and its reactions with certain compounds like 2-aminopyridine can produce highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds.

answer: Carbon subsulfide reacts with bromine to form the cyclic disulfide. It also polymerizes under applied pressure to give a black semi-conducting solid, and under a similar state it can give a black semiconducting polymer. Carbon subsulfide can yield highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds.

text: Change "semi-conducting" to "semiconducting" and add a comma to "state"

refinement: Carbon subsulfide reacts with bromine to form the cyclic disulfide. It also polymerizes under applied pressure to give a black semiconducting solid, and under a similar state, it can give a black semiconducting polymer. Carbon subsulfide can yield highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds.

text: "Carbon subsulfide can yield highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds." - needs to mention what compound it reacts with.

refinement: Carbon subsulfide reacts with bromine to form the cyclic disulfide. It also polymerizes under applied pressure to give a black semiconducting solid, and under a similar state, it can give a black semiconducting polymer. Carbon subsulfide can yield highly condensed sulfur-containing compounds when it reacts with certain compounds such as 2-aminopyridine.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the structure of carbon subsulfide?

answer: The structure of C₃S₂ is symmetrical with D∞h point group symmetry, meaning that C=C=C=C=S. This compound is analogous to carbon suboxide which also has D∞h point group symmetry.

text: "C=C=C=C=S" is incorrect. It should be "S=C=C=C=S"

refinement: The structure of C₃S₂ is symmetrical with D∞h point group symmetry, meaning that S=C=C=C=S. This compound is analogous to carbon suboxide which also has D∞h point group symmetry.

text: "which also has D∞h point group symmetry." - is inaccurate. Carbon suboxide's structure is O=C=C=C=O.

refinement: The structure of C₃S₂ is symmetrical with D∞h point group symmetry, meaning that S=C=C=C=S. This compound is analogous to carbon suboxide whose structure is O=C=C=C=O.

answer: It is analogous to carbon suboxide: C=C=C=C=S.

text: "It is analogous to carbon suboxide: C=C=C=C=S." - this response is inaccurate and needs a rewrite.

refinement: When Béla Lengyel first discovered carbon subsulfide, he assigned it an unsymmetrical structure. Infrared and Raman spectroscopy later found that the structure is, in fact, symmetrical with a D∞h point group symmetry, i.e. S=C=C=C=S. This compound is an analogous suboxide whose structure is O=C=C=C=O.

answer: C₃S₂'s structure is symmetrical with a D∞h point group symmetry, with S=C=C=C=S.

text: Change "with" with "e.g."

refinement: C₃S₂'s structure is symmetrical with a D∞h point group symmetry, e.g. S=C=C=C=S.

text: Add the detail about being analogous to carbon suboxide.

refinement: C₃S₂'s structure is symmetrical with a D∞h point group symmetry, e.g. S=C=C=C=S. This compound is analogous to carbon suboxide whose structure is O=C=C=C=O.

answer: The discovery of Carbon subsulfide (C₃S₂) was first made by Béla Lengyel in the 1950s, who assigned it an unsymmetrical structure. Later on, infrared and Raman spectroscopy showed that the biological compound has a rhombic point group symmetry, C=C=C=C=S.

text: "in the 1950s" - it was never mentioned when Lengyel made the discovery. This should be removed.

refinement: The discovery of Carbon subsulfide (C₃S₂) was first made by Béla Lengyel, who assigned it an unsymmetrical structure. Later on, infrared and Raman spectroscopy showed that the biological compound has a rhombic point group symmetry, C=C=C=C=S.

text: "biological compound has a rhombic point group symmetry, C=C=C=C=S." - this is incorrect and was never mentioned in the text.

refinement: The discovery of Carbon subsulfide (C₃S₂) was first made by Béla Lengyel, who assigned it an unsymmetrical structure. Later on, infrared and Raman spectroscopy showed that the structure is symmetrical with a D∞h point group symmetry, i.e. S=C=C=C=S. This compound is analogous to carbon suboxide whose structure is O=C=C=C=O.

answer: Carbon subsulfide was assigned an unsymmetrical structure. Its analogous to the structure of carbon suboxide. It also has a structure that is symmetrical with a D∞h point group symmetry

text: Change "its" to "it's" and add a period to end the sentence.

refinement: Carbon subsulfide was assigned an unsymmetrical structure. It's analogous to the structure of carbon suboxide. It also has a structure that is symmetrical with a D∞h point group symmetry.