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He’d been thinking a lot lately.  The only conclusion he’d come to was that thinking was clearly dangerous.  An activity which should be engaged in only under duress, or when otherwise absolutely necessary.  He wondered what it was that attracted people to it.  IT didn’t appear to get him anywhere that was for sure.  In fact all it ever seemed to do was confuse..

The metro car was filled with about a dozen people - a pretty blond in a floral patterned dress, a less pretty brunette in a tight business suit, and a number of boring looking men of various ages and weights.  Everyone in the car was frowning.  The D.C. frown as he liked to call it.  The inward focused intense frown of someone who’s grinding away a job they have worked their whole life for but don’t really believe in.  The frown of bureaucrats and DOD contractors.  He wondered when it would happen to him, and glancing at his reflection in the window realized it already had.

When?  He thought and quickly admonished himself.  Better to loosen the muscles and move on than think.  Thinking was dangerous.  The frown lines were saddening though.

A stop was called out which he knew to be his, but he didn’t get off.  There wasn’t any reason for it, not one speck of reason at all really, but he rode the train out.  He remained unmoved as the stops were called out and people flowed slowly out of the car “Fort Totten” - rang the unusually clear voice of the conductor, “College Park” it said some time later.

His name was Barron.  He had  a first name, but there were a lot of other people in the office who shared it.  Better to use his last exclusively where possible. It was almost never an issue though, people rarely used his name anymore. Even the bartenders knew him visually now and didn’t need to be told when he asked to close his tab.  That was one good bit about his burgeoning alcoholism.  That and the lowering sex drive - he’d been really wild for a while there and after a couple of scares with various STD’s was glad for the excuse to limit his promiscuity.

“Greenbelt” mumbled the car’s operator, while the lights flashed on and off, repeatedly.  There wasn’t anyone else on the train.  “This train is no longer in service, I repeat this train is no longer in service”.

A auburn haired woman was fleeing from him, first up stairs, then out windows, via horse drawn buggies and cars, boats and airplanes.  Always giggling and turning with smiles, egging him to catch her, but always just out of reach.  Exotic lands blew through his minds eye, and fortunes were spent in the chase, men and women alike were crushed under his feet as he strove for her and yet still she was always just beyond him.  Finally his hand reached out and was a mere inch from hers - At Last he would have her, his love…..

His head bounced up, eyes wide and confused while he slowly realized he was sitting in the off black of near light-lessness..  He reached a hand over and found tbe computer bag.  It was stained with food and other less knowable substances and had very little going for it save that it’s low price point - free.
After a moment or two of collection, bones and muscles moved together to list his body upright.  He was unusually stiff and achey and began to wonder just  how long he’d been asleep.

No one paid him any mind as he wandered around the train yard, idly investigating wheels and other things he didn’t know the name ofs.  The vocabulary to describe what he saw was severely lacking, and what was saved were fantasy images of machinery.  The soft black of rubber was remembered most vividly - it was something he was familiar with at least.  After several hours he wandered away from the train yard and found a cab home.  It was very expensive.

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Breakfast consisted of a bagel.  Sometimes eggs or sausage, but generally a single bagel.  He would pump his body full of protein shakes, unseasoned chicken, whey protein and bananas later in the day but for breakfast it he was a slave to routine.  In the early evenings on alternate days he would run - usually around six miles.  The remaining days were gym days - brazilian jiu jitsu, boxing and greco roman wrestling were his favorites.  He would mix in Muay Thai occasionally but his shins would hurt too much for his runs.  In the intervening time he would read, drink alcohol and do various recreational drugs.  If he wasn’t engaged in any of the above activities he was at work.

	“You’ve been with us for awhile now.”

Days blend.   It’s what happens as you age.

	“You’ll be taking on more responsibility.”

	I’m excited for the opportunity.

	“I want to make sure you’ve got all the support you need.”

	I’ll make sure to reach out when I need it.

	“We’re looking forward to seeing what you do here.”

	Me too. I’ll make sure we do an excellent job..

It didn’t come with a raise.

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about finding the perfect job?

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answer: The narrator seems to be looking for the perfect job at the time of the story. The narrator often talks about looking for a job, seeing the signs in others, and using alcohol as an excuse to not go out and find a job.

text:
- The narrator isn't looking for a perfect job.
- The narrator does not talk often about job hunting.
- The narrator does not use drink as an excuse not to go to work.

refinement: There is nothing in the passage about finding a perfect job.

answer: The narrator doesn't like his current job because he feels it doesn't help him think. He is also seeing bad results in terms of his sex drive, alcoholism, and overall health as well. On his commute home one day, his train is out of service, and he's perplexed. The narrator makes a resolution to quit his job and change careers in order to find something more meaningful to do.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the narrator's views on thinking?

answer: The narrator believes thinking is dangerous. He wonders why people find thinking rewarding and the reason for that. Furthermore, he wonders when thinking would happen to him. In conclusion, the narrator believes thinking is harmful and a way of wasting time.

text: The narrator already believes he has fallen to the spell of thinking.

refinement: The narrator believes thinking is dangerous. He wonders why people find thinking rewarding and the reason for that. He realizes that he has already fallen into a thinking habit, just like his fellow commuters. In conclusion, the narrator believes thinking is harmful and a way of wasting time.

answer: The narrator wonders why people think so much. In his opinion, thinking isn't helpful, as it only confuses people, and it's better to loosen up and move on. In fact, he thinks thinking is dangerous. The narrator strives to stay away from thinking as much as possible, claiming that it only messes with your brain. According to the narrator, a brain can be easily overloaded, and he tries to limit how much he thinks.

answer: The narrator wonders why people think so much. In his opinion, thinking isn't helpful, as it only confuses people, and it's better to loosen up and move on. In fact, he thinks thinking is dangerous. The narrator strives to stay away from thinking as much as possible, claiming that it only messes with your brain. The narrator is an alcoholic who believes thinking is a dangerous.

answer: The narrator considers thinking as dangerous based on some of the regrets he had due to thinking and getting himself in undesirable situations. The narrator was thinking a lot lately, but decided that thinking is a dangerous activity. It seems he did not see any benefit for indulging in thinking because it was risky.

answer: The narrator believes thinking is dangerous. He wonders why people find thinking rewarding and the reason for that. Furthermore, he wonders when thinking would happen to him.

text: The last sentence is not representative of what the narrator really thinks, at least according to the passage.

refinement: The narrator believes thinking is dangerous. He wonders why people find thinking rewarding and the reason for that. Furthermore, he wonders when thinking happened to him, especially when he found he had the same furrowed brow like fellow commuters.

answer: The narrator considers thinking as dangerous based on some of the regrets he had due to thinking and getting himself in undesirable situations. The narrator was thinking a lot lately, but decided that thinking is a dangerous activity. It seems he did not see any benefit for indulging in thinking because it was risky. He only thinks about things that are necessary. He is a slave to routine and never stops to think if an action he takes is worth the consequence or result.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about why the narrator's train ride?

answer: He no longer wanted to think, so he tried not to. However, he did have an epiphany while riding the train. The narrator's ride also included no apparent reason and no legitimate reason. He wasn't told any further instructions, which may have been shocking. The metro car was filled with a dozen people. Does the narrator think being alone on the train is dangerous?

text:
- The narrator's journey has a reason, he chose not to disembark at his stop.
- The part about not being told of further instructions is confusing and not corroborated by the passage.
- The narrator does not think being alone on the train is dangerous.

refinement: The metro car was filled with a dozen people. The narrator noticed the frowning faces around him. He theorized this frowning is due to excessive thinking. He does not want to think that hard, so he tried not to. The narrator refused to disembark when the train reached his stop. He did that for no reason at all. The train went through all the stops until it was out of service. The narrator had to rise from his sleep and get a taxi to his destination.

answer: There are other people on the metro car, but the narrator realizes that he is frowning like them (like him). Perhaps it's his overthinking and bored state that can be the cause.

text:
- The phrase (like him) contradicts the sentence.
- The word "on" should be changed to "in".

refinement: There are other people in the metro car, but the narrator realizes that he is frowning like them. Perhaps it's his overthinking and bored state that can be the cause.

text: - The response does not cover all the events of the travel.

refinement: There are other people in the metro car, but the narrator realizes that he is frowning like them. Perhaps it's his overthinking and bored state that can be the cause. The narrator does not want to think as much as others do - he believes thinking is overrated. The narrator (named Barron) stayed on the train past his stop as he had no reason to disembark. He slept and soon had to leave the train as it came to its final stop.

answer: The metro car was filled with about a dozen people when the D.C. frown appeared. The D.C. frown is the inward focused intense frown of the people who have grinded their whole life for something that they don't really believe in. The narrator is a 30-year-old man named Barron who works a seemingly boring enough 9 to 5. He wonders and dreams of a beautiful woman but that image fades away. He is asleep. The metro car doesn't stop at Atlantic Station. Everyone in the car was frowning. The metro train becomes silent and it was previously filled with people.

text:
- There is no mention of Atlantic Station in the passage.
- The word "inward focused" should be changed to "inward-focused".

refinement: The metro car was filled with about a dozen people when the D.C. frown appeared. The D.C. frown is the inward-focused intense frown of the people who have grinded their whole life for something that they don't really believe in. The narrator is a 30-year-old man named Barron who works a seemingly boring enough 9 to 5. He wonders and dreams of a beautiful woman but that image fades away. He is asleep. Everyone in the car was frowning. The metro train becomes silent and it was previously filled with people.

answer: He didn't have an epiphany while riding the train. The narrator's ride also included no apparent reason and no legitimate reason. He wasn't told any further instructions, which may have been shocking. The metro car was filled with a dozen people. However, he was immature enough to chide himself for thinking, which demonstrates a lack of self-control. This can be seen either as a good thing (meaning the narrator is probably honest and genuine) or as a bad thing (meaning the narrator is irresponsible).

text:
- The response covers more of the narrator's personality rather than the train journey.
- I would substitute "ride" for "journey" in the second sentence.
- We have no idea of what further instruction he needed, at least according to the passage.

refinement: The narrator's journey has no apparent or legitimate reason. The metro car was filled with a dozen people. He notices his fellow commuters growing and recognizes he has begun to do the same (he hates thinking, a process which causes frowning). He decided not to disembark at his stop and sleep in the train until its final destination.

answer: The metro car was filled with about a dozen people when the D.C. frown appeared. The D.C. frown is the inward focused intense frown of the people who have grinded their whole life for something that they don't really believe in. The narrator is a 30 year-old man named Barron who works a seemingly boring enough 9 to 5. He wonders and dreams of a beautiful woman but that image fades away. He is asleep. The metro car doesn't stop at Atlantic Station. Everyone in the car was frowning. The metro train becomes silent and it was previously filled with people.

text:
- The sentence needs reworking - "a seemingly boring enough 9 to 5" does not make sense to the reader.
- The last sentence of the response also needs reworking as the last phrase does not complement the first.

refinement: The metro car was filled with about a dozen people when the D.C. frown appeared. The D.C. frown is the inward-focused intense frown of the people who have grinded their whole life for something that they don't really believe in. The narrator is a 30 year-old man named Barron who works a seemingly boring 9 to 5 job. He wonders and dreams of a beautiful woman but that image fades away. He is asleep. Barron refused to disembark at his stop. He rode the train to the last stop while he slept.

answer: He doesn't get off his stop in the metro car. He's seemingly on autopilot and rides out past Fort Totten to Greenbelt. He doesn't know if he's been asleep or lost in thought or daydreaming or what'vever. There were people in the car whom he knows frown a lot in their lives and he wonders if it would happen to him, too.

text: The narrator already knows he has begun to habitually frown.

refinement: He doesn't get off his stop in the metro car. He's seemingly on autopilot and rides out past Fort Totten to Greenbelt. He doesn't know if he's been asleep or lost in thought or daydreaming or what'vever. There were people in the car whom he knows frown a lot in their lives; he looks at his reflection in the window and realizes he has already begun to frown like his fellow commuters.

text:
- I would change the word "what'vever" as it seems to have a typo.
- The response left out some detail of the journey - some of the details are not succinct.

refinement: The narrator noticed there were people in the car who seem to frown a lot; he looks at his reflection in the window and realizes he has already begun to frown like his fellow commuters. The narrator then decides not to get off his stop in the metro car as he rides out past Fort Totten to Greenbelt. He soon fell asleep and stayed on the train until its last stop.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the narrator?

answer:
The clues to the man's identity are:

He's named Barron after the shared name similarity between him and his co-workers.

He works at an office where the people rarely use their names, which makes it better for him to use his last name exclusively where possible.

He's been at the office for a while.

He's been working at this work place since he could spot a pretty blond in a floral patterned dress, a less pretty brunette in a tight business suit, and a number of less interesting looking men.

text: The response contains a high number of inaccuracies about the narrator's identity. For example, the narrator was not named Barron because many of his co-workers share the same name with him.

refinement:
The clues to the man's identity are:

He's decided to stick with his surname, which is Barron, because many of his colleagues share his first name.

text: The response does not cover most of what defines the narrator.

refinement:
The clues to the man's identity are:

He's decided to stick with his surname, which is Barron, because many of his colleagues share his first name.

Barron does not like thinking and its side effects. He does not see the benefits.

Barron likes to go on unplanned journeys. For example, he refused to disembark at this stop while on the train, staying in on to the last stop.

He dislikes the modern work ethic that drives people to work mindlessly.

answer: Barron works for a D.C. firm and has been there for a while. He is not in charge but is getting more responsibility. Barron is a loner and is not married. He drinks a lot and is fearless. That, combined with dull sex drives from all the STDs he's had. He likes chess and science fiction.

text: The response contains facts that cannot be verified via the passage. For example, there is no evidence the narrator plays chess.

refinement: Barron works for a D.C. firm and has been there for a while. He is not in charge but is getting more responsibility. Barron is a loner and is not married. He drinks a lot and tries not to have too much sex - a decision he took because of a couple of STD scares. Barron hates thinking as he does not see its benefits. He also loves going with the flow and seeing where situations take him as evidenced by his train journey where he refuses to get off at his stop, instead deciding to sleep on the train until its last stop.

answer: The narrator is a man in his late twenties, called Barron. In the metro car, he could spot a pretty blond in a floral pattern dress, a less pretty brunette in a tight business suit and a bunch of boring looking men in between ages and weights as he rides the metro car home. Belonging to the same inner circle (or crowd) as his two female colleagues incites a flicker of jealousy at times while trying to concentrate on his personal life and job.

answer: The narrator, Barber, works in an office. He's not sure the work he's doing is worth it. His coworkers seem to be suffering in the same way. He isn't sure what to make of the woman who flirts with him, but he thinks she's gorgeous anyway. He enjoys listening to podcasts as he runs and also podcasts while in the gym. He generally eats healthy. He works out both his intellectual and physical sides.

answer: Barron works for a D.C. firm and has been there for a while. He is not in charge but is getting more responsibility. He's been married and is not currently. He drinks a lot and is fearless. That, combined with dull sex drives from all the STDs he's had. He likes chess and science fiction.

answer: The narrator, Barron, works in an office. He's not sure the work he's doing is worth it. His coworkers seem to be suffering in the same way. He isn't sure what to make of the woman who flirts with him, but he thinks she's gorgeous anyway. He finds rides on very expensive vehicles. He generally eats healthy. He works out both his intellectual and physical sides.


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_By Annie Aggarwal_

_Photography: Courtesy World Wide Web_

_READ TIME: 1 MIN 30 SECS_

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Have your needs outdone your space? Or are you just plain bored with the way your spaces look and feel? Basically, do you feel the strong urge to redecorate but don’t know how? Check out what we have in store for you…

‘Uplift the humdrum areas of your home into enriching everyday spaces’ is no longer easier said than done. Whilst choices are aplenty, especially with internet baffling you with supposedly ‘new’ designs, a little pragmatic assistance can go a long way in picking furniture, floors and walls to create spaces that reflect individual aesthetic sensibilities.

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We are surrounded by countless choices - some chic, some rustic, some pop and yet others subtle and elegant! Here’s how we can narrow them down:

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COLOUR: Throw a splash of colour using accent pieces, pillows, or paint on a wall, amidst subtle investment furniture. And you have a room fresh as new. __

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TEXTURE adds to the feel of a space. An exterior surface finish can give an organic feel to your interiors, while adding sleek, smooth-finish metallic furniture can lend that touch of sophistication. Mixing a variety of materials – glass and acrylic with exotic woods, can give the space a dimension of eclectic.

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You can always count on FABRICS to add the warmth and comfort you crave in your rooms.  A plush oversized chair or a restful couch can account for a functional makeover of a space. Play with rich drapes and luxurious upholstery to create a more formal setting.

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LIGHTING can effectively highlight or understate. With the variety of lighting options available, the fixtures themselves may act as central focal pieces or they may be subtle, drawing attention to a particularly interesting corner.

The smallest details have the potential to add significant character. A traveller’s home can be an ode to his adventures, a collector’s passion may reflect on his walls, adorned with rare pieces, and a nature enthusiast’s living space can sport a fresh green tinge and flowers changing with the seasons.

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A piece of ART here, a bit of ACCESSORY there, can add intrigue and interest to an otherwise mundane space.

All these elements in harmony with each other can create inspired areas. Possibilities are endless. The best path to choose is the one that leads you to a space you would be delighted to call your own.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize how you can narrow down a style.

answer: At first, there are limitless choices. In simplifying your choices, trim down your options to organic and geometric styles, and then something in for colour.

text: Doesn't list out the tips the article specifies.

refinement: Throw a splash of color using accent pieces, pillows, or paint a wall amidst subtle investment furniture. Use texture to add to the feel of a space. Fabrics add warmth and comfort to your rooms. Lighting can effectively highlight or understate. And a piece of art or accessory can add intrigue and interest to an otherwise mundane space.

answer: According to the narrator, you can add colour via accent pieces, pillows or paint on a wall. A twist on the look can be added by blending textures, while fabric at home can add the warmth and comfort you crave. A traveller's home can be an ode to his adventures, while a collector's passion can be revealed on his walls. There is plenty one can choose from to set a space to suit their personality.

text: Doesn't enumerate all the tips from the article.

refinement: According to the narrator, you can add colour via accent pieces, pillows or paint on a wall. A twist on the look can be added by blending textures, while fabric at home can add the warmth and comfort you crave. A traveller's home can be an ode to his adventures, while a collector's passion can be revealed on his walls. There is plenty one can choose from to set a space to suit their personality. Lighting can effectively highlight or understate. And a piece of art or accessory can add intrigue and interest to an otherwise mundane space.

answer: You should aim to feel like you can do something great in the room. You can start with the amount of light, accent pieces, coloring, textures, styles, and fabrics. There is no wrong or right way when it comes to the style of the home. You can choose from a variety of great options. Pick what will bring you the most joy in your home.

text: Doesn't include all the tips from the article

refinement: You should aim to feel like you can do something great in the room. You can start with the amount of light, accent pieces, coloring, textures, styles, and fabrics. And a piece of art or accessory can add intrigue and interest to an otherwise mundane space. There is no wrong or right way when it comes to the style of the home. You can choose from a variety of great options. Pick what will bring you the most joy in your home.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to furniture.

answer:
Practical assistance in picking furniture, floors, and walls is recommended. Colours and textures add to the richness of a space. Throw a splash of color using accent pieces, pillows, or painted walls, alongside investment furniture. Materials like glass and acrylic with exotic woods, combined with textures like glass, fabric, metal, and other natural elements like wood can be mixed to give a space a particular dimension.
Fixtures themselves can either be central focal pieces or subtle, drawing attention to a particularly interesting corner.
Bright light can enhance or de-emphasize elements of a space. A traveller's home could be an ode to their adventures and a collector's passion could reflect on the walls. Environmental green-tinting and flowers could be used to reflect a nature person's likings. A bit of art here, a piece of accessory there, can also add a unique character. Pick and choose what fits you best and reflects your taste.
A template for a house can be found in any area with some effort and ingenuity.

text: Describes non furniture related tips

refinement:
Practical assistance in picking furniture, floors, and walls is recommended. Colours and textures add to the richness of a space. Throw a splash of color using accent pieces, pillows, or painted walls, alongside investment furniture. Materials like glass and acrylic with exotic woods, combined with textures like glass, fabric, metal, and other natural elements like wood can be mixed to give a space a particular dimension.
Fixtures themselves can either be central focal pieces or subtle, drawing attention to a particularly interesting corner.

answer: The text implies that furniture is the final stage after you make all of your other decisions. It references the importance of accent pieces like pillows, decorative items and furniture in a nice location in your room. "Acutely practical" describes how you should match up the furniture. Other materials are mentioned like polished metallic furniture, glass and acrylic and exotic woods.

text: Doesn't mention all the tips from the article.

refinement: The text implies that furniture is the final stage after you make all of your other decisions. It references the importance of leveraging color in accent pieces like pillows, decorative items and furniture in a nice location in your room. "Acutely practical" describes how you should match up the furniture. Other materials are mentioned like polished metallic furniture, glass and acrylic and exotic woods to give the space a dimension of eclectic. It also describes using fabrics to add warmth and comfort to your rooms. Plush oversized chairs of restful couches can be used for a functional make over of a space.

answer: The text implies that furniture is the final stage after you make all of your other decisions. It references the importance of accent pieces like pillows, decorative items, and furniture in a nice location in your room. "Acutely practical" describes how you should match up the furniture. Other materials are mentioned like polished metallic furniture, glass and acrylic, and exotic woods.

answer: The article details several design styles for furniture, noting that the color, fabric and how furniture appears are three key elements to consider when furnishing a space. Throw a splash of color through accent pieces and pillows, while adding exotic woods, exotic metals, and glass and acrylic with finishes ranging from sleek, smooth finishes to more organic textures like fabric.

answer: The article details several design styles for furniture, noting that the color, fabric and the materials furniture is made of are three key elements to consider when furnishing a space. Throw a splash of color through accent pieces and pillows, while adding exotic woods, exotic metals, and glass and acrylic with finishes ranging from sleek, smooth finishes to more organic textures like fabric.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to color.

answer: Choose a color that contrasts with the accent walls, if you are trying to make an impact. Choose a color for your accessories such as pillows, that compliments the main color scheme of your room. Bring in a splash of color using accent pieces or painting accessories. You can also invest in metallic furniture to give a room a sophisticated feel.

answer:
Below is a list of things that should be avoided color-wise:
- Black on blue spaces if your furniture or accent color
- Colors in the pastel and floral categories if the main color of the room is blue, - Red rooms don't go well with prints, rugs, and black
- Fluorescent-bright shade in rooms with natural light
- Change your flooring fuchsia to white/gold.
- Choose a sunny yellow shade vs. coral if the main color of the room is blue

text: Discusses tips not found in the article.

refinement: Throw a splash of color using accent pieces, pillows, or paint on a wall, amidst subtle investment furniture. Mix a variety of materials, glass and acrylic with exotic woods to add a dimension of eclectic.

answer: Color can set a particular mood. Throw a splash of color using accent pieces or pillows.

text: Doesn't address all the tips around color.

refinement: Color can set a particular mood. Throw a splash of color using accent pieces, pillows, or paint on a wall amidst subtle investment furniture. Using smooth finish metallic furniture can lend a touch of sophistication. Mixing a variety of materials, glass and acrylic with exotic woods adds a dimension of eclectic.

answer: Lighting can bring attention to a particularly interesting corner. A traveler's home can be an ode to his adventures, a collector's passion may reflect on his walls, adorned with rare pieces, and a nature enthusiast's living space can sport a fresh green tinge. Color can set a particular mood. You can throw a splash color. Throw a splash of color using accent pieces or pillows.

text: Discusses other tips besides color, doesn't enumerate all the tips about color.

refinement:
Color can set a particular mood. You can throw a splash color using accent pieces,
 pillows, or paint on a wall amidst subtle investment furniture. Smooth-finish metallic furniture can add a touch of sophistication. Mixing a variety of materials glass and acrylic with exotic woods can add a dimension of eclectic.

answer:
Below is a list of things that should be avoided colorwise:
- Black on blue spaces if your furniture or accent color

text: Discusses tips not found in the article, doesn't list the tips actually found.

refinement: Throw a splash of color using accent pieces, pillows, or paint on a wall amidst investment furniture. Smooth finish metallic furniture can lend a touch of sophistication and mixing a variety of materials glass and acrylic with exotic woods can give the space a dimension of eclectic.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about rugs?

answer: No answer

answer: Nothing in the article explicitly mentions the use of a rug, but it may be implied to be a backdrop tool used to add effect to a room and can play with light and color.

answer: Rugs can help with texture, but in an abstract way.

text: The article doesn't mention rugs.

answer: No answer


text:
_L FOR LOVE L FOR LIES_' (stylized _L for Love ♥ L for Lies_; () is a 2008 Hong Kong film written and directed by Patrick Kong and starring Alex Fong, Stephy Tang and Alice Tzeng.

Plot

Everything was going well for Kwong Mei-Bo (Stephy Tang) until recently. After graduating from college, Bo opened a sweets shop with her longtime boyfriend, Jun (Stephen Wong Ka Lok), thinking that she would eventually marry Jun when everything has been set up and running smoothly. One day, Bo met her old Taiwanese classmate Kei Kei (Alice Tzeng). Kei Kei liked Jun's hard working and nice personality, and decided to steal Jun for her own, not caring about Bo's feelings. Bo not only lost the long time love of her life, but she also lost the sweet shop that she has worked so hard on.

Ah-Man (Leila Tong) is Bo's good friend on the phone. The pretty and attractive Man would often time have some short relationships with other men while concealing all this from her introverted and slow boyfriend, Fung (Terry Wu). Although Man loves Fung, she takes him for granted and thinks he will never leave her despite her selfishness. In the meantime, Fung is two-timing Man with another woman.

After the break-up, Bo found a job as a make-up artist in the mall. Her boss Kuen broke the news of her engagement and invited everyone out to celebrate. At the party, Bo realized that her boss's really young fiancée looked very familiar. She recognized him as her old neighbor Keung (Alex Fong), who had a crush on her before being admitted to teenage prison, but Keung keeps pretending that he doesn't know Bo. A month later, Kuen's wedding was suddenly canceled and Bo found out that her boss's life savings were stolen from the fiancée, who disappeared. Bo unexpectedly met Keung on the streets, learning that he is a conman. Keung finds Bo following him and expects her to sue him, but Bo hires Keung to deceive Kei Kei and let her have a taste of her medicine.

One day, Keung met his ex-girlfriend, Yan (Linda Chung). Yan told Keung that her family will move to Singapore and that he should go visit them. Although Keung had deceived Yan's sister's money, they had forgiven him. In his drunk and self-loathing state, Keung kissed Bo for the second time as she tries to comfort him. As an experienced liar, Keung successfully courted Kei Kei. Being abandoned by Kei Kei, Jun decided to make up with Bo. But Bo has no longer has feelings for Jun because she unknowingly fell in love with Keung. Keung's old thug friends ask him to join in on a kidnapping act, but he rejects.

Meanwhile, Ah-Man finally felt tired and guilty, and decided to set up a stable relationship with Fung. But Fung tells Man that he wants to break up. In the past six months, Fung was secretly dating his co-worker's girlfriend Min (Miki Yeung). Fung finally decided to let go of Man and had chosen Min for a 'back up lover' relationship, which did not last because Min decided to get married with her real boyfriend. This gave Fung new insights and reminded him that he can never be her priority. Thus, he lets go of Man (who is sobbing at the breakup) because he feels she needs someone who can accept her as she is and who she can accept and feel safe with. They were incompatible and he had to put up with her, while she, on the other hand, did some horrible things to Fung, only to regret them immediately afterwards.

Soon, Keung's intentions on deceiving Kei Kei were exposed because her cousin was once deceived by him too. Keung pretends to form an alliance with Kei Kei to expose and humiliate Ah-Bo instead, making her devastated. A few months later, Jun's sweets shop went bankrupt when Kei Kei took all the money and fled. It turns out that it was part of Keung and his apprentice's plan to deceive her. While helping Jun recover from the loss of the sweets shop and employees, Jun and Bo got back together.

Keung, having successfully deceived Kei Kei and got all the money back, watches Bo and Jun from a distance. Bo notices him and walks out of dinner at their sweets shop. The old man that sells egg waffles confirms that her “boyfriend” Keung was there just a while ago. However, before Bo is able to meet up with Keung, his thug friends' failed kidnap attempts resulted in getting Keung involved, and he was beaten on the streets. Keung trudged his bloody body to Bo and Jun's restaurant, hoping to tell her that he loved her. Disappointed that she didn't find Keung, Bo walks back to her restaurant, not knowing that Keung had collapsed a block behind her restaurant and died from loss of blood. The movie ends with Bo and Man finally meeting up in real life, but Bo discovers that Man's new boyfriend was Jun.

'L for Love, L for Lies'' has a fascinating ending with a strange, maybe unthinkable twist, especially after what the story line evolved to. In summary, love can show its true form in the things we do that are not noticed — it is love when we do something good for a loved one, but it also takes the shape of lies (lies to make things better and maintain stability/protect loved ones, or lies for deception, e.g., cheating and dishonesty). There is a sharp contrast with the repenting Keung and Jun who gets a second chance (and the ending tells it all), as to who really loved Bo, despite the lies (the difference in the lies throughout the story and the way they followed these lies with actions).''

Cast

-   Alex Fong as Ah Keung
-   Stephy Tang as Ah Bo
-   Alice Tzeng as Kei Kei
-   Leila Tong as Ah Man
-   Miki Yeung as Ah Min
-   Terry Wu as Ah Fung
-   Stephen Wong as Ah Jun
-   Linda Chung as Ah Yun
-   Natalie Tong as May
-   Power Chan as Ah Wei
-   Suki Chui as Tiffany
-   Sammy Leung as Ah Fei
-   Wong Cho-lam as Nam Wei Bo
-   Chu Mi-mi as Mrs. Wong
-   Wu Jing as Michael
-   Kara Hui as Bo's mother
-   Cathy Kwan as Cousin
-   Chiang Chi-kwong as Bo 's father

Awards nominations

28TH HONG KONG FILM AWARDS

-   Best Original Film Song (Andrew Chu, Fang Jie, Kary Ng)

title: L for Love L for Lies

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How many different love affairs are involved in the story?

answer: There are two different love affairs involved in the story: between Bo and Jun initially, and between Bo and Keung secondly.

text: There are more than two love affairs at play in the article.

refinement: There are seven different love affairs involved in the story: between Bo and Jun initially, and between Bo and Keung secondly. There are also love affairs between Kei Kei and Jun, Man and Fun, Keun and Keung, Keung and Kei Kei, and finally Fung and Min.

answer: The story is a tangled web, with ridiculous twists designed to keep the reader interested. Bo and Jun are partners, but Jun leaves her for Kei Kei. Man and Fung are partners, but Fung cheats on her with Min, and Man has many boyfriends on the side. Keung and Kuen are engaged, but it turns out Keung is a con-man. Keung meets his ex-girlfriend Yan, and later falls in love with Bo. Then finally Bo and Jun get back together, only for Jun to start dating Man (the final twist in the story).

text: The response does not address the number of love affairs in the article.

refinement: There are seven different love affairs involved in the story: between Bo and Jun initially, and between Bo and Keung secondly. There are also love affairs between Kei Kei and Jun, Man and Fun, Keun and Keung, Keung and Kei Kei, and finally Fung and Min.

answer: Five, plus two more if the Keung and Jun's friendship after Jun's ice cream parlor goes shut down and Jun and Bo's relationship is counted.

answer: There are two love affairs involved in the story: Jun's love for Bo and Keung's love for Bo.

answer: 4, though only 3 are primary story lines

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the theme of the movie?

answer: It's about giving someone you love the rotten things that say how much you love them, and through that save your good name.

text: The response is almost the opposite of what is stated in the review.

refinement: The theme of the movie is about what we do to those we claim to love - the heartache, lies, and also the lovely things we do for them as well all in the bid to keep their love as well as protect them.

answer: The theme of the movie is love and lies. In order to be good to someone, it often takes lying and deception. However, sometimes dishonesty may lead to devastating results - lying can also backfire. Ultimately, love can be seen in both good and bad deeds and sometimes lies are required to make love work.

answer: The movie seems to be playing with the idea of letting love change not only the plot but also the morals of people. Individuals who could deceive others in the name of love, could learn to do good deeds as well.

answer: The theme of the movie is that love takes the shape of both lies and truth and sometimes lies are used to make things better. The deceitful character, Keung, turns out to be the one who really loved Bo.

answer: The movie is called "L for Love, L for Lies" and is about the insane things people do while they are in love. The plot is sensationalistic, and goes through many different kinds of relationships. In particular, the relationship between Fong and Min, while only tangentially connected to the other elements of the plot, meditates on infidelity in relationships, a theme reflected in the rest of the plot.


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This morning, the strangest thing happened when I was checking the messages in my spam folder. My mom’s great grandfather had always been regarded as insane, the butt of jokes, a sort of stigma. You know, “don’t be a Looney Liam” or “Lousy Liam” and the sort; but after what just happened to me, it all sort of makes me think differently.

Let’s start with his story.

Back in World War 1, in January of 1915, my mom’s great grandfather Liam was in France by means of the Treaty of London, sent from England as a response to Germany invading neutral Belgium. As part of the British Expeditionary Force, he found a position in trenches on the Western Front. Invaders were pushing hard on his location, and it became imperative that reinforcements be sent to help stop the foreign soldiers, as well as rescue his team from their plight. There had been some very expensive radio equipment brought along for the purpose of communicating with the Allies, but the donkey team carrying it had just been killed, and the soldiers were forced to abandon it in favor of saving their lives. Having no radio, a French soldier took of one of the pigeons they brought and sent it back to it’s loft with a message containing a call for help. Reinforcements soon came, and my great great grandfather was eternally grateful to that French soldier, they eventually becoming best of friends. And he promised that if he could ever repay him, he would.

The newly freed friends were later sent back east, but in separate units. They marched across France, ever set out to push back the Front. At each checkpoint, they would send intel back to the base via radio. With new equipment, they still preferred to stay in communication with each other via pigeon, regularly sending each other little updates, but also jokes and notes of comfort. As time went on, they began to find the number of invading forcing increasing. Once again, the radio was lost, pigeons were sent to the Allies, and also directly to my great great grandfather. Liam’s friend began to ask that immediate troops be sent to rescue them from the overwhelming invasion. Eventually, the final message was sent out, asking why no help had come. Why had Liam broken his promise to repay his help? Heartbroken, they were defeated.

The Command sent Liam's troupe orders to help his friend, but they arrived too late. My great great grandfather was distraught at the loss of his friend. He never got over it. It broke him. I heard stories about how he was always saying that he would have gone to help his friend immediately, had he only known there was any need of help. He had never known they were so close to being invaded. The strangest thing of all was that the carrier pigeons had arrived all right. One after another, right up until the orders for aide. In fact, they had messages attached. But those messages were completely different from the ones originally sent. I have just received those original messages: the desperate pleas for help and reinforcements, the coordinates, the request for a repaid promise. I have only just discovered them in the spam folder of my e-mail account. One after another, in order, describing the growing numbers of troops, the loss of the radio, and finally desperate pleas for help.

100 years ago, my mother’s crazy great grandfather Liam received one message after another, assuming they were practical jokes from his best friend. Messages inviting him to check out hot singles in his area, on how to claim lost assets, and links to click to make tax free money from home.

Messages that should have been in my spam folder, where I found those urgent pleas for help that were meant for him…

title: [SF] The Tragedy of Loopy Liam (Twilight Zone fan fiction, concept draft)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about how the narrator's great grandfather lost his sanity?

answer: The narrator's great grandfather lost his sanity after he failed to help his friend when he was in need.

answer: No answer

text: The response misses to provide an answer to the instruction in the task.

refinement: It is implied that the narrator's great-great-grandfather lost his sanity from his experiences in the war.

answer: No answer

text: The response misses to provide an answer to the instruction in the task.

refinement: It is implied that the narrator's great-great-grandfather lost his sanity from his experiences in the war.

answer: No answer

text: The response misses to provide an answer to the instruction in the task.

refinement: It is implied that the narrator's great-great-grandfather lost his sanity from his experiences in the war.

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text: The response misses to provide an answer to the instruction in the task.

refinement: It is implied that the narrator's great-great-grandfather lost his sanity from his experiences in the war.

answer: The narrator's great grandfather lost his sanity after he was told that his friend had been killed and that he had broken his promise to help him.

answer: No answer

text: The response misses to provide an answer to the instruction in the task.

refinement: It is implied that the narrator's great-great-grandfather lost his sanity from his experiences in the war.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about trench warfare?

answer: The text mentions trench warfare in World War 1.

text: The response misses to mention that the narrator's great-great-grandfather was part of the British Expeditionary Force and found himself in trenches on the Western Front.

refinement: The text mentions trench warfare in World War 1. The narrator's great-great-grandfather was part of the British Expeditionary Force and found himself in trenches on the Western Front.

answer: The text discusses trench warfare during World War 1. The author's great grandfather, Liam, was part of the British Expeditionary Force and found himself in trenches on the Western Front. Invaders were pushing hard on his location, and it became imperative that reinforcements be sent to help stop the foreign soldiers, as well as rescue his team from their plight.

answer: No answer

text: The response misses to provide an answer to the instruction in the task.

refinement: The text mentions trench warfare in World War 1. The narrator's great-great-grandfather was part of the British Expeditionary Force and found himself in trenches on the Western Front.

answer: The text discuses trench warfare during World War 1.

text: The response misses to mention that the narrator's great-great-grandfather was part of the British Expeditionary Force and found himself in trenches on the Western Front.

refinement: The text discuses trench warfare during World War 1. The narrator's great-great-grandfather was part of the British Expeditionary Force and found himself in trenches on the Western Front.

answer: No answer

text: The response misses to provide an answer to the instruction in the task.

refinement: The text mentions trench warfare in World War 1. The narrator's great-great-grandfather was part of the British Expeditionary Force and found himself in trenches on the Western Front.

answer: No answer

text: The response misses to provide an answer to the instruction in the task.

refinement: The text mentions trench warfare in World War 1. The narrator's great-great-grandfather was part of the British Expeditionary Force and found himself in trenches on the Western Front.

answer: No answer

text: The response misses to provide an answer to the instruction in the task.

refinement: The text mentions trench warfare in World War 1. The narrator's great-great-grandfather was part of the British Expeditionary Force and found himself in trenches on the Western Front.


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“Where am I? Who are these people around me?” I thought to myself when I first woke up. I slowly lifted myself up and rubbed my eyes thoroughly as if there was something in them, but nothing was. I looked over; a lady kindly greeted me and handed me a folder. As soon as the folder was within my possession I knew what must be done; it was pure instinct. I immediately opened it up and read all of the information.
     I remembered that my name was Bob Lamron. I am 23 years old, have neither children nor a wife; they were only given to you if you had proven yourself faithful and intelligent enough. I asked the women who handed me the folder where I was and what events had occurred that left me in this situation. She just looked at me and smiled.
Two rather large males, who appeared to be body guards disguised as physicians, led me out the front door. As soon as I walked out, a car appeared out of nowhere. From the car came a robotic voice; it addressed me by name and commanded me to enter the automobile.          As I got in the car, the voice spoke again. It asked me what my home address was. I had no clue; I could not even remember if I had children 10 minutes ago. How was I supposed to answer the voice with details of my forget life? The women who had presented me with the folder, a nurse, that I had woken up next to, ran out of the building and handed me the same folder that I had left behind in the room. I opened it up and aloud, “2534 Egareva Rd.” As soon as the words had left my mouth, the taxi immediately sped off, presumably to the address.
As I saw the things I passed by I started to remember details, like I had never forgotten them at all. Trees, Birds, people, restaurants, fountains, everything! It was all flooding in as if there was a dam in my brain and it had just been ruptured without notice. We arrived at my house and I opened the front door. I walked into my room and sat down. I could not recall the events that had occurred before I woke up. It was like the dam of knowledge in my mind had been concealed. My mind had locked away any memories of the events and I could not do anything about it. The more I thought, the more my head hurt.
It felt like one of those moments when you are mid conversation with someone and another person, uninvolved in the conversation, calls your name. You stop talking in order to address the interjection of your name, but when you try to come back into the original conversation, you can’t remember what you were talking about no matter how hard you try. I sat there on my couch and tried as hard as I could to recall what had happened.
I then positioned myself so that I could see out of the window. I saw a grey, bleak world. Everything was so average, so normal. The only color people were given permission to wear were different shades of grey. The lighter your color, the higher up your social class was. I was just an average grey.
As I was thinking through all of this, my eyes were fixed upon a section of peeling paint in the right corner of my peripheral vision. For some reason I knew I was supposed to go over to it; it was like I had some kind of cosmic urge. My hand lifted from my side and I started to peel the paint. It came off fairly easily, far too easier than any paint should have, for that matter. Suddenly, I saw something concealed under the peeling paint. I knew I had to uncover it. As I tore the paint off a fit overcame me. Next thing I knew, I was tearing, ripping, and enjoying this more than anything I had enjoyed before. I was ripping everything in sight off the wall.
I stepped back and looked at my wall and there was writing everywhere. The memories started flooding back into my head of what had happened. I had uncovered something big. The government had been spiking everyone. Now they wouldn’t just bug a room, or a camera in a park to see what was going on, they were putting microphones in you. They had put chips in your brain so that they could see, think, hear, and smell everything you have ever come in contact with. Knowing I had just remembered this I knew they would be after me. I shut the blinds and closed the door in my room.
I lightly lifted a blind cover and looked out the window. I saw a slim, black, shiny car pulled up to the front of my building. The same two men who had accompanied me out of the hospital got out of the black car. I sat there shaking, wondering what I could do. The second I saw them barge in through the front door, I jumped out of my second story bedroom and landed on the pavement. My ankle buckled and I felt a sharp pain but I knew I had to get out of here and tell someone what is going on. I screamed names but no one would listen to me. I was living in a selfish world where people only cared about themselves. I gave up. I fell to the floor, my ankle throbbing, and looked at the door to my building, expecting the two men to walk through. I was doomed.
The two men eventually came out of my building and grabbed me. They didn’t say a word; all they would do is stare straight forward. Then they put me in the back of the car and drove off. It was the exact same route that led back to my house. I had only been out for an hour, at most and here I was, being dragged back.
When I got there the female nurse was sitting there with a needle filled with what appeared to be a sedative. As she inserted it in my vein, two doctors walked into the room. The first said, “Okay, begin sedation and we’ll get ready for the micro-chip reset.”
The other doctor responded, “Looks like this one didn’t turn out to well again like the last time.”
	As they finished their sentences I realized something. They have been resetting everyone until they get every single one of us to be perfect for their society. They don’t want people to have character or personality; they are just looking to create the most generic human being, like emotionless robots. As I thought this, I started to black out.
“Where am I? Who are these people around me?” I thought to myself when I first woke up. I slowly lifted myself up and rubbed my eyes thoroughly as if there was something in them, but nothing was. I looked over; a lady kindly greeted me and handed me a folder.

title: Deja Vu

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about Bob Lamron?

answer: Bob Lamron is 23 years old, quite an average grey with no children or wife. He suddenly wakes up in a strange situation, being given a folder with no memory of what he did before waking up. When he was handed this folder and began to read it, he learned about his life status and about the government injecting microchips in people for surveillance.

text: "Average grey" conveys social status in this world. That should be expressed instead of the idiomatic phrase for clarity.

refinement: Bob Lamron is 23 years old, quite an average guy socially with no children or wife. He suddenly wakes up in a strange situation, being given a folder with no memory of what he did before waking up. When he was handed this folder and began to read it, he learned about his life status and about the government injecting microchips in people for surveillance.

text: The narrator makes it to his house before learning about the government's interference in people's lives. The answer should mention the entire event chain.

refinement: Bob Lamron is 23 years old, quite an average guy socially with no children or wife. He suddenly wakes up in a strange situation, being given a folder with no memory of what he did before waking up. When he was handed this folder and began to read it, remembers his identity. He's taken to his house, where he feels a compulsion to peel the paint on the walls - uncovering writing about the government injecting microchips for complete surveillance. He's taken back to the facility he was in initially and realizes that his (and everyone else's) memories are getting reset until a behaviorally ideal outcome is achieved.

answer: Bob Lamron has forgotten his name. His consciousness comes back slowly. Bob feels he is in a cloned world. The government has been spiking everyone. He starts piecing his memories together, including his address, his name and what he has lost. Most of the people around him live in a selfish world where they only care about themselves, so no one hears him. When he gets back to his house, the two men accompany him. The nurse has a needle filled with a sedative, doctors walk in the room, and Bob is toast.

text: There's nothing about cloning in the story.

refinement: Bob Lamron has forgotten his name. His consciousness comes back slowly. The government has been spiking everyone. He starts piecing his memories together, including his address, his name and what he has lost. Most of the people around him live in a selfish world where they only care about themselves, so no one hears him. When he gets back to his house, the two men accompany him. The nurse has a needle filled with a sedative, doctors walk in the room, and Bob is toast.

text: The string of details mentioned in the answer doesn't form a coherent whole. The entire answer ends up being confusing. Important events should be noted with logical connections as much as possible.

refinement: The narrator suddenly wakes up in a strange situation, being given a folder with no memory of what he did before waking up. When he starts reading, he remembers his identity. Bob Lamron is 23 years old, quite an average guy socially with no children or wife. He's taken to his house, where he feels a compulsion to peel the paint on the walls - uncovering writing about the government injecting microchips for complete surveillance. He's taken back to the facility he was in initially and realizes that his (and everyone else's) memories are getting reset until a behaviorally ideal outcome is achieved.

answer: Bob Lamron awakes to find himself in a strange situation and, though initially confused by his surroundings, can eventually remember some details. The author states that the government is controlling people by placing chips in their brains and through surveillance. At the end of the passage, Bob is captured by the government again and put under sedation. From this information, it can be assumed that Bob is intelligent and aware.

text: The last sentence is useless and irrelevant.

refinement: Bob Lamron awakes to find himself in a strange situation and, though initially confused by his surroundings, can eventually remember some details. The author states that the government is controlling people by placing chips in their brains and through surveillance. At the end of the passage, Bob is captured by the government again and put under sedation.

text: Bob's final realization is missing.

refinement: Bob Lamron awakes to find himself in a strange situation and, though initially confused by his surroundings, can eventually remember some details. The author states that the government is controlling people by placing chips in their brains and through surveillance. At the end of the passage, Bob is captured by the government again and put under sedation. He realizes that his memories are being reset again and again until the officials are satisfied with the result.

answer: Bob Lamron wakes up in a hospital room and is handed a folder immediately. He remembers who he is but asks what events led to him ending up in the hospital room. The nurse does not answer him and two men lead him out of the front door. Bob slowly recovers his memory about the government spiking everyone for their "perfect society." Two men show up at his doorstep and he jumps out of the window to try and escape them.

text: Bob's final capture and realization are missing.

refinement: Bob Lamron wakes up in a hospital room and is handed a folder immediately. He remembers who he is but asks what events led to him ending up in the hospital room. The nurse does not answer him and two men lead him out of the front door. Bob slowly recovers his memory about the government spiking everyone for their "perfect society." Two men show up at his doorstep and he jumps out of the window to try and escape them. However, he's caught and taken back to the hospital. He realizes that his memories are being reset again and again until the officials are satisfied with the result.

text: The process of Bob remembering the past isn't covered well.

refinement: Bob Lamron wakes up in a hospital room and is handed a folder immediately. He remembers who he is but asks what events led to him ending up in the hospital room. The nurse does not answer him and two men lead him out of the front door. After getting to his home, Bob slowly recovers his memory about the government microchipping everyone for their "perfect society" and knows he'll be apprehended. Two men show up at his doorstep and he jumps out of the window to try and escape them. However, he's caught and taken back to the hospital. He realizes that his memories are being reset again and again until the officials are satisfied with the result.

answer: The story reveals that Bob Lamron has forgotten how he arrived in a strange place, and can no longer recall what has transpired in his life without outside help. He is intelligent and capable of remembering things with the aid of a folder handed to him by a nurse. He is endangered by the government and may face further danger.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the two men and Bob Lamron?

answer: The two men and Bob Lamron appear to be working on behalf of a governing body that is looking to control and regulate humanity by reversing any personality traits they deem to be undesired. They take Bob back to his home and forcibly sedate him before resetting his brain.

text: Bob isn't working for the government, he's getting brainwashed.

refinement: The two men appear to be working on behalf of a governing body that is looking to control and regulate humanity by reversing any personality traits they deem to be undesired. They take Bob back to his home and forcibly sedate him before resetting his brain.

text: The answer omits that the two men are bodyguards disguised as physicians.

refinement: The two men appear to be working on behalf of a governing body that is looking to control and regulate humanity by reversing any personality traits they deem to be undesired. They are bodyguards disguised as physicians. They take Bob back to his home and forcibly sedate him before resetting his brain.

answer: The two men are government employees that were assigned to Bob. They are there to make sure he does not regain his memories of the government spiking everyone to create the ideal perfect society. Bob remembers anyway and the two men take him away to spike him again.

text: They aren't "assigned" to Bob. They are bodyguards disguised as physicians, nothing more. They take the narrator back for a microchip reset.

refinement: The two men are bodyguards disguised as physicians. They take him out of the hospital. When Bob realizes the government is microchipping everyone, including him, the same two men come to take Bob back to the hospital for a microchip memory reset.

answer: The two men eventually came out of Bob Lamron's building and grabbed him. They did not say a word and only stared forward. They drove Bob Lamron to the hospital. There, they put him in a room with a nursing staff ready to sedate him. They make sure Bob Lamron does not know why they have took him back.

text: The answer omits the men's physician's disguise. They are the ones who take him out of the hospital.

refinement: The two men are bodyguards disguised as physicians. They took him out of the hospital. The two men eventually came out of Bob Lamron's building and grabbed him. They did not say a word and only stared forward. They drove Bob Lamron to the hospital. There, they put him in a room with a nursing staff ready to sedate him. They make sure Bob Lamron does not know why they have took him back.

text: The men's capture of Bob is narrated unnecessarily. It has extraneous details as well. That part should simply state that after Bob remembers the government's microchip ploy, the two men take him back to reset his memories.

refinement: The two men are bodyguards disguised as physicians. They took him out of the hospital. After Bob remembered the government's microchip ploy, the two men took him back to reset his memories.

answer: The two men and Bob Lamron are trying to forcibly reset Bob Lamron's mind and take away his identity and memories. The story indicates that both the two men and the authorities regenerate people until they are "perfect" for their society. The two men have been looking to force Bob Lamron into submission, while the authorities consider those who don't conform to be failures.

answer: The people in charge of Bob Lamron's society pretend to be surgeons and nurses. In reality, they are government workers who are given the task of brutally resetting everyone who rebels. As they hack you apart, they also tamper with your core identity by resetting your mind.

text: The answer takes some correct details from the story and weaves them together in an egregious way.

refinement: The two men are bodyguards disguised as physicians. They take him out of the hospital. When Bob realizes the government is microchipping everyone, including him, the same two men come to take Bob back to the hospital for a microchip memory reset.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about its society?

answer: The society is one where the government has put microphones inside the people to spy on them. They do this to create the most stereotypical and bland human beings possible. The society is dystopian, where individuality and moral character are discouraged.

text: The answer omits that wives and children are assigned to successful males and everyone wears grey outfits, the lighter colors denoting higher social status.

refinement: The society is one where the government has put microphones inside the people to spy on them. They do this to create the most stereotypical and bland human beings possible. The society is dystopian, where individuality and moral character are discouraged. Wives and children are assigned to successful males. Everyone wears grey outfits, the lighter colors denoting higher social status.

answer: No answer

text: The question can be answered.

refinement: The society is one where the government has put microphones inside the people to spy on them. They do this to create the most stereotypical and bland human beings possible. The society is dystopian, where individuality and moral character are discouraged. Wives and children are assigned to successful males. Everyone wears grey outfits, the lighter colors denoting higher social status.

answer: The society in this story is built around the idea that individuals are meant to be generic by having their memories erased and their brains implanted with microchips. The people living in this society are willing to modify people's memories and brain so that they conform to the ideals of the governing bodies. Individuals are seen as less important or valuable than the overall set of general society standards.

text: The answer omits that wives and children are assigned to successful males and everyone wears grey outfits, the lighter colors denoting higher social status.

refinement: The society in this story is built around the idea that individuals are meant to be generic by having their memories erased and their brains implanted with microchips. The people living in this society are willing to modify people's memories and brain so that they conform to the ideals of the governing bodies. Individuals are seen as less important or valuable than the overall set of general society standards. Wives and children are assigned to successful males. Everyone wears grey outfits, the lighter colors denoting higher social status.

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answer: The government takes control of everyone by spiking them and making them forget their memories. This is to make everyone a generic robotic human and create the perfect society. Bob remembers eventually and tries to escape it, only to fail and end up getting his memory wiped once again.


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 J. Scott Applewhite (AP)
The September 11 attacks on the U.S. diplomatic mission in Benghazi, Libya were back in the spotlight Wednesday with another House committee hearing on whether the Obama administration mishandled the tragic incident.

In the eight months since Benghazi, the debate about what happened in Benghazi has become deeply political, as Republicans continue to challenge the White House's actions during and after the attacks, which left four Americans, including U.S. Ambassador Chris Stevens, dead.

Neither side disputes that the Benghazi attacks were the tragic result of major failures at the State Department. An independent review released in December found that leadership and management deficiencies led to inadequate security at the U.S. Special Mission in Benghazi, despite repeated requests for additional security staffing from diplomatic personnel in Libya.

But that report has failed to mollify conservatives. Republicans insist that there are still unanswered questions about whether more could have been done to respond to the attacks, and whether the Obama administration actively tried to cover up its failures in the aftermath of the incident.

What follows is a breakdown of why conservatives are still hung up on Benghazi:

SECURITY FAILURES IN BENGHAZI: Republican critics continue to raise questions about why the State Department refused requests for more security personnel in Benghazi before the attacks, and whether the State Department and the Pentagon did everything possible to save American lives while the mission in Benghazi was under attack.

At Wednesday's hearing, State Department "whistleblower" Gregory Hicks, the deputy chief of mission in Libya during the attacks, said that he was frustrated when the U.S. military turned down a request to dispatch four Special Operations troops stationed in Tripoli to evacuate Americans in Benghazi.

Pentagon spokesman George Little said Wednesday that the military believes that there was nothing the four troops stationed in Tripoli could have done to assist in Benghazi, and that there were concerns about the security of American forces in Tripoli.

Hicks also told Congressional investigators that the Pentagon denied his request to fly fighter jets over the Benghazi attacks in the hopes of "scattering" the attackers.

The Pentagon has insisted that there was not enough time to deploy armed aircraft to Libya during the attacks in Benghazi.

THE ALLEGED COVER-UP: The main problem conservatives have with Benghazi is not so much that it happened, but that they believe the Obama administration willfully tried to mislead the American public about it in the aftermath.

The focus here has been on U.N. Ambassador Susan Rice's appearance on Sunday talk shows just days after the attacks. Rice, working off the administration's unclassified talking points, characterized the attacks as a spontaneous demonstration over a video that disparaged Islam.

Even at the time, Rice's statements seemed to contradict the publicly available information about the attacks. Now, it is pretty clear thatU.S. officials already knew at that point that the assault had been a terrorist attack.

Administration emails provided to House Republicans and further reported on by the Weekly Standard reveal that the initial unclassified talking points provided by the CIA did in fact include references to Al Qaeda, and noted that the agency had previously warned about the threat of Islamic extremists in Egypt and Libya.

But senior State Department officials expressed concerns about those talking points, arguing that they made it seem like the State Department had ignored CIA warnings. A senior White House official agreed that these concerns should be addressed, and the talking points that emerged from an interagency briefing were scrubbed of all references to terrorist attacks.

_Washington Post _fact-checker Glenn Kessler notes that a lot of this debate appears to be interagency squabbling. The CIA's initial draft was apparently designed to downplay the agency's substantial presence in Benghazi, and the State Department was likely reluctant to take all the blame.

Still, the question remains whether the Obama administration scrubbed the talking points and used the video red herring in order to cover up the fact that they failed to prevent a planned terrorist attack that killed four Americans on the anniversary of September 11.

OBAMA: The initial target of the Republican Benghazi probe was Obama, who was in the middle of a heated re-election campaign at the time of the attacks.

Conservatives note, correctly, that the administration had a powerful incentive to cover up their failings in Libya, as it would have undercut the media narrative about Obama's record on diminishing the Al Qaeda threat.

Conservatives have also raised questions about what Obama was doing during the eight hours that the Benghazi compound was under siege. Republicans note that then-Secretary of Defense Leon Panetta and Joint Chiefs Chairman Martin Dempsey have both said that they did not speak to Obama after an initial meeting when the attacks began.

As Ted Cruz put it in a National Review op-ed Wednesday, "neither the secretary nor the chairman knows if the president slept while our people were under attack."

HILLARY CLINTON: Now that the 2012 election is over, the GOP's focus has turned to Hillary Clinton, the leading Democratic contender in 2016 who played a starring role in the Benghazi controversy.

So far, Clinton has been relatively unblemished by Benghazi, even after clashing with Republican Senators at a Foreign Services Committee hearing in January.

But House Republicans believe that the independent review of Benghazi unfairly ignored her role in the State Department's failures leading up to the attack, and claim that Clinton needs to be held accountable for scaling back security in Benghazi.

At this point, it doesn't look like Benghazi will have much of an effect on Clinton's 2016 chances. But Republicans remain hopeful. In a Facebook post Tuesday, South Carolina Republican Sen. Lindsey Graham predicted that "the dam is about to break on Benghazi," and that Clinton could be a political casualty.

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What major failures at the State Department contributed to the attacks at Benghazi?

answer: It is found that the State Department, led by management and leadership deficiencies, led to inadequate security at the US Special Misison in Benghazi despite repeated requests for additional security staffing from diplomatic personnel in Libya.

answer: The independent review released in December found that leadership and management deficiencies at the State Department led to inadequate security at the U.S. Special Mission in Benghazi, despite repeated requests for additional security staffing from diplomatic personnel in Libya.

answer: Leadership and management deficiencies led to inadequate security at the U.S. special mission in Benghazi, despite requests for additional staffing from diplomatic personnel in Libya.

answer: Lack of security - although the independent review failed to mollify conservatives.

text: More can be added to this response to make it more accurate with what is presented in the passage.

refinement: Lack of security - although the independent review failed to mollify conservatives and found that leadership and management deficiencies led to inadequate security at the U.S> Special Mission in Benghazi.

answer: The independent review released in December found that leadership and management deficiencies at the State Department led to inadequate security at the U.S. Special Mission in Benghazi.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Did the Obama administration actively try to cover up failures in the aftermath of the incident?

answer: The available evidence suggests that the Obama administration did not actively try to cover up its failures in the aftermath of the Benghazi attacks. Some conservatives believe that the administration purposefully misled the public by falsely labeling the incident as a demonstration over an inflammatory video. However, there is no evidence that suggests intentional deception. Rather, the administration's actions appear to reflect concerns both about its own national security record and relations with the CIA over its mistaken analysis of the incident.

text: The first sentence of this response needs to be modified because it is suggested that the Obama administration did try to cover up.

refinement: The available evidence suggests that the Obama administration did actively try to cover up its failures in the aftermath of the Benghazi attacks. Some conservatives believe that the administration purposefully misled the public by falsely labeling the incident as a demonstration over an inflammatory video. However, there is no evidence that suggests intentional deception. Rather, the administration's actions appear to reflect concerns both about its own national security record and relations with the CIA over its mistaken analysis of the incident.

text: In the passage, this is stated " THE ALLEGED COVER-UP: The main problem conservatives have with Benghazi is not so much that it happened, but that they believe the Obama administration willfully tried to mislead the American public about it in the aftermath" which leads the audience to believe a cover up did occur.

answer: Yes. Conservative critics continue to raise questions about why the State Department refused requests for more security personnel, scrubbed references to terrorism from the initial talking points, and what President Obama was doing during the eight hours that the Benghazi compound was under siege. The Obama administration covered up their failings in Libya by characterizing the attacks as a spontaneous demonstration over a video.

answer: According to the State Department, they were trying to cover up a blunder of a different nature.

answer: Most conservatives believe that the administration willfully tried to mislead the American public in the aftermath of the incident.

answer: From the information that is available it would seem that the talking points after the incidents was scrubbed to remove mention of Al Qaeda and a terrorist attack, but rather referred to a spontaneous incident in reaction to an Islam video.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Which two suggestions by the State Department did the U.S. military fail to implement at the time of the attack and why?

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State Department whistleblower Gregory Hicks requested four special Operations troops stationed in Tripoli to evacuate Americans in Benghazi. This request was denied because there is nothing the troops could have done to help the situation in Benghazi.
The second request was for fighter jets to fly over Benghazi to scatter the attackers. This request was also denied because there was not enough time to deploy armed aircraft to Libya.

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Four seamen could have evacuated Americans - the issue was safety at the Tripoli base.
Military planes could frater.

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refinement: The two suggestions by the State Department were: 1. A request to dispatch four Special Operations troops stationed in Tripoli to evacuate Americans in Benghazi. 2. A request to fly fighter jets over Benghazi in hopes of "scattering" the attackers.

answer: The State Department's unsuccessful requests for more security personnel and, after the attack, for fighter jets to fly over the attack site, were both rejected by the U.S. military. The military cited concerns about security for American forces in Tripoli and the lack of time to deploy armed aircraft.

answer:
- The request to send four Special Operations troops to evacuate Americans in Benghazi
- The request to air strike attackers by sending fighter jets

The State Department requested that four Special Operators be sent to Benghazi to evacuate Americans, and that fighter jets be used in an attempt to scatter attackers; both requests were turned down by the U.S. military. The reasons for this decision were due to concerns about the security of Americans in Tripoli and the belief that there wasn't enough time to deploy armed aircraft to Libya.

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1. A request to dispatch four Special Operations troops stationed in Tripoli to evacuate Americans in Benghazi.
2. A request to fly fighter jets over Benghazi in hopes of "scattering" the attackers.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why was Obama the initial target of the Republican Benghazi probe?

answer: The initial target was Obama because he was in the middle of a heated re-election campaign.

answer: Obama was in the middle of a heated re-election campaign. His whereabouts at the time of the attack is not known. The failings in Libya would undercut his narrative that Obama is diminishing the Al Qaeda threat.

answer: Republicans believe that Obama should have been held responsible for the State Department's failures leading up to the Benghazi attacks because they happened in the midst of his re-election campaign. Conservatives also believe that the Obama administration purposefully sought to downplay its failures in the aftermath.

answer: Republicans are investigating Benghazi in order to try and uncover evidence that the Obama Administration covered up its failures leading up to the September 11 attacks. To that end, they are critical of the Obama Administration's handling of the incident, including its role in choosing the talking points given to Ambassador Susan Rice to use in the immediate aftermath of the attacks. This focus on the Administration is designed to hold its officials accountable for its failings and hopefully derail Hillary Clinton's chances in the 2016 election.

answer: Because the Obama administration had a strong incentive to cover up its failures in Libya.

text: It is also important to add that Obama was in the middle of a heated re-election.

refinement: Because the Obama administration had a strong incentive to cover up its failures in Libya, which consequently added to Obama being in the middle of a heated re-election.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Republicans assert that failures after the 9/11 terrorist attack in Benghazi that led to the deaths of Americans was covered up by the Obama administration.

answer: Republicans continue to challenge the Obama administration's performance during and after the September 11 Benghazi attacks, which left four Americans dead. The debate is largely centered around security failures, unanswered questions about a cover-up, and what President Obama was doing during the attacks. Hillary Clinton is also under scrutiny, with Republicans still hopeful this will ultimately hurt her in her run for president in 2016.

answer: The article is a description of the U.S. House of Representatives committee hearings that were about how four Americans had died in the September 11, 2012 terrorist attack on the U.S. diplomatic mission in Benghazi, Libya.

answer: The September 11 attacks at the U.S. diplomatic outpost in Benghazi continue to be a subject of political debate, as Republicans question whether the Obama Administration mishandled the incident. The focus is on State Department security failures and a possible cover-up, as well as what President Obama did or did not do during the attacks. Meanwhile, Hillary Clinton is under scrutiny as to what role she might have had.

answer: This article highlights the news coming out of a hearing on September 11th, 2013.

text: More specific factors can be added to this summary to represent what is being discussed in the passage.

refinement: This article highlights the news coming out of a hearing on September 11th, 2013 abut the U.S. diplomatic mission in Benghazi.


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JEREMY CAM THOMPSON (born October 9, 1985) is a former American football linebacker who played for the Green Bay Packers of the National Football League (NFL). He was drafted by the Packers in the fourth round of the 2008 NFL Draft. He played college football at Wake Forest. He is the younger brother of former New York Giants offensive lineman Orrin Thompson.

Early years

Thompson played high school football at Charlotte Christian School. He was ranked 40th nationally at defensive end by Rivals.com and ranked 19th among North Carolina prospects. He was listed as the country's 37th-best defensive end by TheInsiders.com and also ranked 90th on the “Atlantic Hot 100” by the same publication.[1]

College career

Thompson played college football at Wake Forest. Thompson started 32 of 46 games that he played in at Wake Forest at right defensive end, recording 112 tackles (73 solos), including 8.5 sacks and 20.5 stops for losses. He added one quarterback pressure, two forced fumbles and eight pass deflections and he intercepted two passes for 86 yards in returns and a touchdown.

As a true freshman in 2004 he started three of the 11 games at right defensive end. During the season, he tallied 15 tackles (8 solos) with a sack and three stops for losses. He has an interception and one pass deflected. Thompson started his first 8 games of his 2005 sophomore campaign at right defensive end, but a left knee anterior cruciate ligament tear cost Thompson the final three games of the 2005 season. During those 8 games played he posted 21 tackles (15 solos) with two stops in the backfield and a pass deflection.

During his junior season, Thompson played in 14 games at right defensive end in but only started eight contests due to a shoulder contusion suffered in a late November battle with Maryland. During the season, he recorded 30 tackles (15 solos), a sack and 4.5 stops for losses. He broke up three passes and had a highlight 86-yard interception return for a touchdown vs. Connecticut. As a senior, Thompson led the team with 6.5 sacks and ranked second on the squad with 11 stops in the backfield. He finished sixth on the team with 46 tackles (35 solos). He also caused two fumbles and batted down three passes. He was one of 10 finalists for the National Sportsmanship Award, given to the college player who best personifies the spirit of sportsmanship.[2]

Professional career

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395-pound bench press. 450-pound squat.

Thompson was drafted by the Green Bay Packers in the fourth round (pick 102) of the 2008 NFL Draft. On December 30, 2009, Thompson was placed on injured reserve due to a neck injury. On April 26, 2010, Thompson reported he would be retiring due to an undisclosed medical condition.[3]

Statistics

  Year   Team                Games   Tackle   FF   FR   INT   Yards   TD
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  2008   Green Bay Packers   9       8        0    0    0     0       0
  2009   Green Bay Packers   6       1        0    0    0     0       0

Personal life

He married college sweetheart Adele (Mitchell) in March 2010 and they now live in North Carolina. He graduated from medical school at University of North Carolina. He is currently a 3rd year orthopedic surgery resident at the Mayo Clinic.

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What does the text say about Thompson's professional football career?

answer: Thompson played for the Green Bay Packers as a linebacker from 2008 to 2010. During his time in the NFL, he recorded eight tackles, one sack, two pass deflections, and one interception return for a touchdown. He retired in April 2010 due to an undisclosed medical condition.

answer: Jeremy Thompson was a former American football linebacker who played as a defensive end. Beginning in 2008, he played for the Green Bay Packers of the National Football League. He recorded 112 tackles at Wake Forest, contributed to that with two interceptions and a touchdown return.

text: The last part of this response does not correlate to Thompson's professional career, but instead to his college career. The last part needs to be deleted and written with the accurate information.

refinement: Jeremy Thompson was a former American football linebacker who played as a defensive end. He was drafted by the Green Bay Packers During his time in the NFL, he recorded eight tackles, one sack, two pass deflections, and one interception return for a touchdown. He retired in April 2010 due to an undisclosed medical condition.

answer: Thompson was drafted by the Green Bay Packers in the fourth round of the 2008 NFL Draft. On December 30, 2009, he was placed on injured reserve due to a neck injury, and on April 26, 2010, he reported he would be retiring due to an undisclosed medical condition.

answer: Thompson was drafted by the Green Bay Packers in the fourth round of the 2008 NFL Draft. In 2009, he was placed on injured reserve due to a neck injury and in 2010 he reports retiring due to an undisclosed medical condition.

answer: Thompson was drafted by the Packers in the 2008 NFL Draft and placed on injured reserve in 2009 due to a neck injury. He retired in 2010 due to an undisclosed medical condition.

question:
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What does the text say about Thompson's education?

answer: Thompson graduated from medical school of the University of North Carolina, and he is currently an orthopedic surgery resident at the Mayo Clinic.

text: This response only incorporates one aspect of Thompson's education. More details about his education should be added to the response to make it stronger.

refinement: Thompson went to high school at Charlotte Christian School. He played college football at Wake Forest. Thompson graduated from medical school of the University of North Carolina, and he is currently an orthopedic surgery resident at the Mayo Clinic.

answer: According to the text, Thompson played college football at Wake Forest, where he majored in business administration. He graduated from medical school at University of North Carolina, and is currently a third-year orthopedic surgery resident at the Mayo Clinic.

text: This response has some inaccurate information about what Thompson majored in in college (this information is not found in the passage). Additionally, information regarding Thompson's high school education should be included.

refinement: According to the text, Thompson played high school football at Charlotte Christian School. Thompson played college football at Wake Forest. He graduated from medical school at University of North Carolina, and is currently a third-year orthopedic surgery resident at the Mayo Clinic.

answer: Thompson attended Charlotte Christian School for high school, where he played football. He also played college football at Wake Forest. He graduated from medical school at the University of North Carolina, and he is currently a 3rd year orthopedic surgery resident at the Mayo Clinic.

answer: Thompson graduated from medical school at the University of North Carolina. He currently studies orthopedics with the Mayo Clinic.

text: This response does not cover all of Thompson's education and the rest of his education should be written out.

refinement: Thompson attended Charlotte Christian School for high school, where he played football. He also played college football at Wake Forest. He graduated from medical school at the University of North Carolina, and he is currently a 3rd year orthopedic surgery resident at the Mayo Clinic.

answer: Thompson played college football at Wake Forest and received his medical degree from the University of North Carolina. He played in 46 games in college and retired due to medical issues.

text: This response does not fully describe Thompson's education. The last sentence also needs to be deleted as it has nothing to do with his education.

refinement: Thompson attended Charlotte Christian School for high school, where he played football. He also played college football at Wake Forest. He graduated from medical school at the University of North Carolina, and he is currently a 3rd year orthopedic surgery resident at the Mayo Clinic.