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“THE ROAD LESS TRAVELED” is the thirty-first episode and the twelfth episode of the second season (1986–87) of the television series _The Twilight Zone_.

Plot

A young girl named Megan bursts out of her bedroom and runs downstairs to her parents who are watching television. She claims there is a man in her room so her father Jeff playfully carries her back upstairs. They enter her room and it is revealed that “the man” is merely a pile of clothes in a chair. Jeff tucks her back into bed and he comforts her by telling her a story his dad told him about keeping away monsters. When he gets her back to sleep he turns off the light and the room changes to a jungle setting. Helicopters blaze overhead and there is gunfire in the distance. Jeff stands in shock but quickly turns on the light, watching as the jungle disappears. Megan remains sleeping and after he turns the light off again it doesn't return. Later on, Megan tries the secret from keeping away monsters but a man's hand reaches out and pulls the cover off scaring her.

Jeff comes home the next day with feelings of guilt about not going to Vietnam as someone at work questioned him about what he did during the war. When asked what university Jeff graduated from he sheepishly admitted it was in Canada. Meanwhile, Megan goes upstairs and returns later with filthy hands. Denise goes upstairs with her and Megan claims that the man in the wheelchair was up there and talked to her. Denise cleans Megan and then sees the man Megan spoke about. She screams for Jeff and the man disappears, but Megan comments that he was nice. Jeff goes upstairs to investigate, walks into the bathroom and turns off the faucet but then finds himself in a swamp dressed in army fatigues carrying a rifle. He looks around and sees two other soldiers. One of them asks what's wrong and Jeff freaks out and falls into the water. Before he realizes what has happened Jeff is back in the bathroom with his wife.

Jeff admits he was drafted but he went to Canada instead of going to Vietnam and now maybe things are catching up with him; perhaps the man is someone who died because Jeff should've been there. His wife assures him that whatever it is they will face it together. He turns around to find himself in a jungle building with a Vietnamese girl clinging to him. Back in reality Jeff is scared, runs outside the house, gets into his car and drives away. Later, Denise gets a call from Jeff who sounds odd and begs her to come home. Jeff arrives at Denise's workplace asking for her, discovering that someone sounding like him called and asked her to come home. Jeff goes after her and discovers Denise with the man in the wheelchair and realizes the man in the wheelchair is in fact himself, but from a different reality where he honored his draft and went to Vietnam. The “Vietnam Jeff” explains that he wanted to get a chance to see what his life would've been like if he hadn't enlisted. Both of them touch to experience each other's memories so that “Vietnam Jeff” can experience the good life while “Normal Jeff” can experience the Vietnam war. “Vietnam Jeff” regains the use of his legs and then disappears, leaving the other Jeff with Denise and Megan.

Closing narration

title: The Road Less Traveled (The Twilight Zone)

question: What episode number is The Road Less Traveled in the television series, The Twilight Zone?

answer: It is the 12th episode of the second season and the 31st episode of the whole series.

answer: The Road Less Traveled is episode number 31 in the television series, The Twilight Zone.

answer: The Road Less Traveled is the thirty-first episode of the second season.

text: The episode is 31st in the series.

refinement: The Road Less Traveled is the thirty-first episode of the series.

text: '“THE ROAD LESS TRAVELED” is the thirty-first episode and the twelfth episode of the second season (1986–87) of the television series _The Twilight Zone_'

answer: The Road Less Traveled is the thirty-first episode of the second season of The Twilight Zone.

text: The episode is 31st in the whole series.

refinement: The Road Less Traveled is the thirty-first episode of The Twilight Zone.

text: '“THE ROAD LESS TRAVELED” is the thirty-first episode and the twelfth episode of the second season (1986–87) of the television series _The Twilight Zone_.'

question: Who was the man that keeps appearing in Megan's room?

answer: No one knows.

text: The man is Jeff from 'a different reality where he honored his draft and went to Vietnam'

refinement: The man is Jeff from 'a different reality where he honored his draft and went to Vietnam'

answer: The man that keeps appearing in Megan's room is a soldier from a different reality who went to Vietnam instead of Canada.

text: The man is Jeff, not just another random person

refinement: The man that keeps appearing in Megan's room is Jeff from a different reality that went to Vietnam instead of Canada.

text: 'Jeff goes after her and discovers Denise with the man in the wheelchair and realizes the man in the wheelchair is in fact himself, but from a different reality where he honored his draft and went to Vietnam.'

answer: The man that keeps appearing in Megan's room is a pile of clothes in a chair.

text: The man isn't clothes, he's Jeff from 'a different reality where he honored his draft and went to Vietnam'

refinement: The man is Jeff from 'a different reality where he honored his draft and went to Vietnam'.

answer: The man was a pile of clothes in a chair.

text: The man is not clothes; he's Jeff from 'a different reality where he honored his draft and went to Vietnam'

refinement: The man is Jeff from 'a different reality where he honored his draft and went to Vietnam'

question: Why was Jeff guilty about not having not gone to Vietnam?

answer: Because someone questioned him about what he did in the war.

answer: Jeff felt guilty because he did not go to Vietnam like many of his friends did, despite being drafted.

text: The main reason he feels guilty is he was asked about his experiences.

refinement: Jeff felt guilty because he was asked about his experiences in Vietnam, but he did not go.

text: 'Jeff admits he was drafted but he went to Canada instead of going to Vietnam'

answer: Jeff was guilty because he did not go to Vietnam.

text: He also feels guilty that someone may have died in his stead.

refinement: Jeff was guilty because he did not go to Vietnam, and 'perhaps the man is someone who died because Jeff should've been there'.

text: 'perhaps the man is someone who died because Jeff should've been there'

answer: He was asked by someone at work what he did during the war.

question: Where did Jeff go instead of Vietnam?

answer: Jeff went to Canada instead of Vietnam.

answer: Canada.

answer: Jeff went to Canada instead of going to Vietnam.

answer: He went to Canada.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: In this episode, a father tells his daughter a story about keeping away monsters, only to find himself in a war-torn jungle in another reality. He soon discovers that the man in the wheelchair is actually himself from a different reality, where he went to Vietnam instead of Canada. The two Jeffs experience each other's memories before the Vietnam Jeff disappears, leaving the other Jeff with his wife and daughter.

text: The first sentence doesn't seem important enough to include.

refinement: He soon discovers that the man in the wheelchair is actually himself from a different reality, where he went to Vietnam instead of Canada. The two Jeffs experience each other's memories before the Vietnam Jeff disappears, leaving the other Jeff with his wife and daughter.

text: It should be established that the daughter finds a mysterious man in her room.

refinement: A man's daughter sees a mysterious man in her bedroom. He soon discovers that the man in the wheelchair is actually himself from a different reality, where he went to Vietnam instead of Canada. The two Jeffs experience each other's memories before the Vietnam Jeff disappears, leaving the other Jeff with his wife and daughter.

text: It should be mentioned Jeff dodged the draft, in order to establish a timeline

refinement: A man's daughter sees a mysterious man in her bedroom. He soon discovers that the man in the wheelchair is actually himself from a different reality, where he went to Vietnam instead of dodging the draft in Canada. The two Jeffs experience each other's memories before the Vietnam Jeff disappears, leaving the other Jeff with his wife and daughter.

text: 'The “Vietnam Jeff” explains that he wanted to get a chance to see what his life would've been like if he hadn't enlisted. Both of them touch to experience each other's memories so that “Vietnam Jeff” can experience the good life while “Normal Jeff” can experience the Vietnam war.'

text: 'Jeff tucks her back into bed and he comforts her by telling her a story his dad told him about keeping away monsters.'

answer:
The Road Less Traveled is the 12th episode of the second season (1986-87) of the television series, The Twilight Zone.

In that episode we see Megan being afraid to stay in her room because she thinks there is a monster there. Jeff accompanies her upstairs, tells her a story, and reassures her there is no monster in her room.

In another scene, we see Jeff racked up with guilt because he did not go to Vietnam when drafted. He had opted to go to Canada then.

text: The information about the episode and TV Show is not as important, and the sentence can be made more concise.

refinement:
The Road Less Traveled an episode of The Twilight Zone.

In that episode we see Megan being afraid to stay in her room because she thinks there is a monster there. Jeff accompanies her upstairs, tells her a story, and reassures her there is no monster in her room.

In another scene, we see Jeff racked up with guilt because he did not go to Vietnam when drafted. He had opted to go to Canada then.

text: Rather than mentioning the monster, the man should be introduced.

refinement:
The Road Less Traveled an eipsode of The Twilight Zone.

Megan is afraid to stay in her room because she sees a mysterious man. Jeff accompanies her upstairs, tells her a story, and reassures her there is no monster in her room.

In another scene, we see Jeff racked up with guilt because he did not go to Vietnam when drafted. He had opted to go to Canada then.

text: Eliminate the second sentence, as it's not as important.

refinement:
The Road Less Traveled an eipsode of The Twilight Zone.

Megan is afraid to stay in her room because she sees a mysterious man. In another scene, we see Jeff racked up with guilt because he did not go to Vietnam when drafted. He had opted to go to Canada then.

text: Remove the phrase 'in another scene, we see'.

refinement:
The Road Less Traveled an eipsode of The Twilight Zone.

Megan is afraid to stay in her room because she sees a mysterious man. Jeff is racked up with guilt because he did not go to Vietnam when drafted. He had opted to go to Canada then.

text: Reveal the identity of the man

refinement:
The Road Less Traveled an eipsode of The Twilight Zone.

Megan is afraid to stay in her room because she sees a mysterious man. Jeff is racked up with guilt because he did not go to Vietnam when drafted. He had opted to go to Canada then. It turns out the man in Megan's room is Jeff from a different reality where he honored his draft.

text: Reveal that the man disappeared after sharing memories.

refinement:
The Road Less Traveled an eipsode of The Twilight Zone.

Megan is afraid to stay in her room because she sees a mysterious man. Jeff is racked up with guilt because he did not go to Vietnam when drafted. He had opted to go to Canada then. It turns out the man in Megan's room is Jeff from a different reality where he honored his draft. The two Jeffs share memories and the Vietnam Jeff disappears.

text: '“THE ROAD LESS TRAVELED” is the thirty-first episode and the twelfth episode of the second season (1986–87) of the television series _The Twilight Zone_.'

text: 'She claims there is a man in her room so her father Jeff playfully carries her back upstairs.'

text: 'Jeff tucks her back into bed and he comforts her by telling her a story his dad told him about keeping away monsters.'

text: 'Jeff comes home the next day with feelings of guilt about not going to Vietnam as someone at work questioned him about what he did during the war.'

answer: The Road Less Traveled is the story of a man who is haunted by the guilt of not going to Vietnam. He is visited by a man from a different reality who has the same name and is also haunted by the guilt of not going to Vietnam. The two men switch places and the man who went to Vietnam is able to walk again.

text: It is not just a man, but a version of himself

refinement: The Road Less Traveled is the story of a man who is haunted by the guilt of not going to Vietnam. He is visited by a version of himself from a different reality and is also haunted by the guilt of not going to Vietnam. The two men switch places and the man who went to Vietnam is able to walk again.

text: The other Jeff is not haunted by guilt of going to Vietnam, he wants to know what life was like if he had dodged the draft.

refinement: The Road Less Traveled is the story of a man who is haunted by the guilt of not going to Vietnam. He is visited by a version of himself from a different reality who is curious about how his life would be if he didn't join the war. The two men switch places and the man who went to Vietnam is able to walk again.

text: The two men don't switch places, they share their memories and one disappears.

refinement: The Road Less Traveled is the story of a man who is haunted by the guilt of not going to Vietnam. He is visited by a version of himself from a different reality who is curious about how his life would be if he didn't join the war. The two men share memories and the man who went to Vietnam is able to walk again before he disappears.

text: '“Vietnam Jeff” regains the use of his legs and then disappears' is evidence he ragains use of his legs

text: 'Jeff comes home the next day with feelings of guilt about not going to Vietnam as someone at work questioned him about what he did during the war.' is evidence of his guilt

answer: Megan is a young girl who claims there is a man in her room. Her father, Jeff, carries her back to bed and tells her a story about keeping away monsters. When he turns off the light, the room changes to a jungle setting. Helicopters blaze overhead and there is gunfire in the distance. Jeff is shocked and turns on the light, watching as the jungle disappears. Megan remains sleeping and when Jeff turns the light off again, it doesn't return.

text: The answer should mention Jeff's guilt about the war.

refinement: Megan is a young girl who claims there is a man in her room. Her father, Jeff, feels guilty about going to Canada instead of fighting in the Vietnam War. When he turns off the light, the room changes to a jungle setting. Helicopters blaze overhead and there is gunfire in the distance. Jeff is shocked and turns on the light, watching as the jungle disappears. Megan remains sleeping and when Jeff turns the light off again, it doesn't return.

text: In the answer 'When he turns off the light, the room changes to a jungle setting. Helicopters blaze overhead and there is gunfire in the distance. Jeff is shocked and turns on the light, watching as the jungle disappears. Megan remains sleeping and when Jeff turns the light off again, it doesn't return.' is as very important as other information, and should be deleted.

refinement: Megan is a young girl who claims there is a man in her room. Her father, Jeff, feels guilty about going to Canada instead of fighting in the Vietnam War.

text: The identity of the strange man should be revealed.

refinement: Megan is a young girl who claims there is a man in her room. Her father, Jeff, feels guilty about going to Canada instead of fighting in the Vietnam War. The man is an alternate version of Jeff who did actually go to war and wants to learn how his life could have gone.

text: The ending of the story, with the exchange of memories should be given.

refinement: Megan is a young girl who claims there is a man in her room. Her father, Jeff, feels guilty about going to Canada instead of fighting in the Vietnam War. The man is an alternate version of Jeff who did actually go to war and wants to learn how his life could have gone. After the two share memories with one another, Vietnam Jeff disappears, leaving the family alone.


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text:
OTSE HILL is a peak often cited as the highest point of Botswana, with a reported altitude of 1,491 metres (4,891 feet). It is located in the village of Otse, South-East District. Its highest cell on SRTM data is 1,486 meters - 4875 feet. The 1999 Department of Surveys and Mapping (Gaborone) 1:50,000 scale topographic map shows a “trigonometrical station” on the Otse Peak summit with an elevation of 1,491 meters - 4892 feet.

The Monalanong Hill (at a SRTM-derived altitude of 1,494 metres - 4,902 feet) or the Tsodilo Hills (at an altitude of about 1400 metres - 4,593 feet) are also often given as the highest point in Botswana.[1]

Notes

[1]  Territorial Highest points , World Heritage Site, accessed on April 10, 2009.

title: Otse Hill

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is Oste Hill's reported altitude?

answer: Its reported altitude is 1,486 meters - 4875 feet.

text: The answer provided is about the highest cell, not the Oste Hill in sum.

refinement: Its reported altitude is 1,486 meters - 4875 feet. It is also possible to list the figure of

answer: Oste Hill is 1,491 meters tall.

answer: Oste Hill has a reported altitude of 1,491 metres - 4875 feet.

text: The calculation for feet is wrong.

refinement: Oste Hill has a reported altitude of 1,491 metres - 4891 feet.

text: OTSE HILL is a peak often cited as the highest point of Botswana, with a reported altitude of 1,491 metres (4,891 feet).

answer: Oste Hill's reported altitude is 1,491 metres (4,891 feet).

text: OTSE HILL is a peak often cited as the highest point of Botswana, with a reported altitude of 1,491 metres (4,891 feet).

answer: Oste Hill's reported altitude is 4,891 feet.

text: OTSE HILL is a peak often cited as the highest point of Botswana, with a reported altitude of 1,491 metres (4,891 feet).

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What district does Oste Hill lie in?

answer: It is located in the village of Otse, South-East District.

text: It is located in the village of Otse, South-East District.

answer: Oste Hill is located in the South-East District.

text: It is located in the village of Otse, South-East District.

answer: South-East District.

text: It is located in the village of Otse, South-East District.

answer: Oste Hill lies in the South-East District.

text: It is located in the village of Otse, South-East District.

answer: Oste Hill is in the South-East District.

text: It is located in the village of Otse, South-East District.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Oste Hill is reportedly the highest point in what country?

answer: Oste Hill is reportedly the highest point in Botswana.

text: OTSE HILL is a peak often cited as the highest point of Botswana, with a reported altitude of 1,491 metres (4,891 feet).

answer: Botswana

text: OTSE HILL is a peak often cited as the highest point of Botswana, with a reported altitude of 1,491 metres (4,891 feet).

answer: Botswana.

text: OTSE HILL is a peak often cited as the highest point of Botswana, with a reported altitude of 1,491 metres (4,891 feet).

answer: The highest point in Botswana.

text: OTSE HILL is a peak often cited as the highest point of Botswana, with a reported altitude of 1,491 metres (4,891 feet).

answer: Oste Hill is reportedly the highest point in Botswana.

text: OTSE HILL is a peak often cited as the highest point of Botswana, with a reported altitude of 1,491 metres (4,891 feet).

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What other two hills are often cited as the highest point in Botswana?

answer: The Monalanong Hill and the Tsodilo Hills are also cited as the highest point in Botswana.

text: The Monalanong Hill (at a SRTM-derived altitude of 1,494 metres - 4,902 feet) or the Tsodilo Hills (at an altitude of about 1400 metres - 4,593 feet) are also often given as the highest point in Botswana.[1]

answer: The peaks on the Monalanong hill and the Tsodilo hills are often cited as well.

text: The Monalanong Hill (at a SRTM-derived altitude of 1,494 metres - 4,902 feet) or the Tsodilo Hills (at an altitude of about 1400 metres - 4,593 feet) are also often given as the highest point in Botswana.[1]

answer: The Monalanong Hill and the Tsodilo Hills are often cited as the highest point in Botswana along with Otse Hill.

text: The Monalanong Hill (at a SRTM-derived altitude of 1,494 metres - 4,902 feet) or the Tsodilo Hills (at an altitude of about 1400 metres - 4,593 feet) are also often given as the highest point in Botswana.[1]

answer: The Monalanong Hill and the Tsodilo Hills are often cited as the second and third highest points in Botswana.

text: The Monalanong Hill (at a SRTM-derived altitude of 1,494 metres - 4,902 feet) or the Tsodilo Hills (at an altitude of about 1400 metres - 4,593 feet) are also often given as the highest point in Botswana.[1]

answer: The Monalanong Hill and the Tsodilo Hills.

text: The Monalanong Hill (at a SRTM-derived altitude of 1,494 metres - 4,902 feet) or the Tsodilo Hills (at an altitude of about 1400 metres - 4,593 feet) are also often given as the highest point in Botswana.[1]

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Otse Hill is any of the highest peaks in Botswana, located in the village of Otse, South District. According to SRTM data, the highest cell on Otse hill is 4,785 feet, while the 1999 Department of Surveys and Mapping's topographic map shows a "trigonometrical station" at an elevation of 1,491 meters - 4892 feet.

answer: Oste Hill is a disputed highest point in Botswana. The Monalanong Hill and the Tsodilo Hills are around the same height and also lay claim to the title.

text: I added the height of the hill, along with the term "altitude".

refinement: Oste Hill is a disputed highest point in Botswana,with an altitude of  1,491 metres (4,891 feet). The Monalanong Hill and the Tsodilo Hills are around the same height and also lay claim to the title.

answer: This article discusses Otse Hill, which is a peak in Botswana. The article then goes on to say that Otse Hill is considered to be the highest point in Botswana, but other studies have shown another hill in Botswana is taller.

text: I took out the phrase "the article"- it's a given that you are summarizing the article.

refinement: Otse Hill is a peak in Botswana, and it is considered to be the highest point in Botswana, but other studies have shown another hill in Botswana is taller.

text: I have added the names of the other two hills.

refinement: Otse Hill is a peak in Botswana, and it is considered to be the highest point in Botswana, but other studies have shown two other hills in Botswana to be taller: the Monalanong Hill and the Tsodilo Hills.

answer: The tallest peak in Botswana is Otse Hill, which is reported to have an altitude of 1,491 metres. It is often cited as the highest point in Botswana, but there are other contenders as well.

answer: The highest point in Botswana is often cited as being Otse Hill. According to SRTM data, it has an elevation of 1,486 meters - 4875 feet. The Monalanong Hill or the Tsodilo Hills may also often be given as being the country's highest point.


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Farah Studio

Designed, cut and sewn in Ottawa

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Open by appointment between 11am - 4pm. We look forward to welcoming up to two clients at a time in store.

For your safety, all outfits are held away in storage for 72 hours after entering the fitting room.

Following the recommendation from health officials to wear cloth face masks in public to help prevent the spread of coronavirus, we are offering a face mask for purchase in store and online.

Please remember our masks are not personal protection equipment, though we have looked into creating the best-performing design made of two layers of high-quality fabric featuring a tight weave and thicker thread. Testing by the Wake Forest Institute for Regenerative Medicine has shown not all fabrics are suitable.

Supply is limited as we take all necessary precautions recommended by public health officials.

To wash, we recommend hand-washing after each use followed with a quick pass under the iron.

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483 Sussex Dr, Ottawa, Canada
(613) 719-7761

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Custom design

A bespoke piece is an investment in your wardrobe.

Whether you’re looking for a dress as a wedding guest, mother of the bride or groom, a prom dress, or a suit to wear comfortably for long hours at a time, Farah’s grasp of personal style enables her to create the perfect made-to-measure outfit for you.

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Over the course of several fittings with Farah, the piece is developed from sample to finished style, perfected in fit to each inch. It is a beautiful time-honoured process that results in a one-of-a kind dress that will always be completely unique to its owner.

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Every custom-made piece starts with a full-service consultation followed by a set of illustrations and samples, pattern-making and fittings.

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"If you ever have a dressy event, ask Farah for an evening gown and she’ll come back with a gorgeously detailed frock made of fine fabrics, so you’ll be the belle of the ball."
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"[Farah] holds her quiet passion for family, life, and fashion close."
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Hailing from Iran, a country with a rich artisan and craftsmanship heritage, Farah began to learn dressmaking at an early age. As political tensions in Iran led her to Rome, Italy, she continued to pursue her passion. It was in Rome that she opened her first atelier, selling original designs through some of Rome's exclusive boutiques. Upon fatefully moving to Ottawa in 1994 with her family, she found a new home for her passion.
All Farah Studio pieces are thoughtfully designed, cut, and sewn in Ottawa using high-quality textiles to create practical and elegant styles. The boutique and atelier is located at 483 Sussex Drive, in Ottawa, Canada. Get in touch with us on (613) 719-7761 or at farah@farahstudio.ca to book an appointment or for any inquiries.
The boutique is open from 10AM to 5PM on Tuesday through Saturday, and from noon to 5pm on Sunday, as well as by appointment after hours.

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Farah and Iran?

answer: Farah is from Iran and moved to Rome at an early age because of the political tension in Iran. She kept on designing dresses and selling them through Rome's exclusive boutiques. She moved to Ottawa in 1994 where she opened her atelier.

text: "She kept on designing dresses and selling them through Rome's exclusive boutiques. She moved to Ottawa in 1994 where she opened her atelier." - extraneous information.

refinement: Farah is from Iran and moved to Rome at an early age because of the political tension in Iran.

text: "moved to Rome at an early age" - is inaccurate. She learned dressmaking at an early age while still in Iran, and moved to Rome where she continued her passion.

refinement: Farah is from Iran, a country with a rich artisan and craftsmanship heritage. She learned dressmaking at an early age and moved to Rome, Italy, because of the political tension in Iran. Farah was able to pursue her passion for dressmaking in Rome.

answer: Farah comes from Iran and has experience as a dressmaker. The text also says that she moved to Ottawa due to political tensions in Iran. Furthermore, all pieces designed and cut in Ottawa at the Farah Studio are carefully crafted and thoughtfully planned.

text: "Furthermore, all pieces designed and cut in Ottawa at the Farah Studio are carefully crafted and thoughtfully planned." - extraneous information.

refinement: Farah comes from Iran and has experience as a dressmaker. The text also says that she moved to Ottawa due to political tensions in Iran.

text: "she moved to Ottawa due to political tensions in Iran." - this is incorrect. She moved to Rome, Italy, not Ottawa.

refinement: Farah comes from Iran and has experience as a dressmaker. The text also says that she moved to Rome, Italy due to political tensions in Iran.

answer: Farah's fashion atelier rose in fame when she opened her first boutique in Rome, Italy. After moving to Ottawa in 1994 with her family, Farah founded the Farah Studio in Ottawa. Her love for family, life and fashion are probably harked back to her hometown in Iran. She was inspired to make fashion by her mother and she learned to sew from rocking chairs. It is through sewing that she's connected with her current mission of helping people feel beautiful in her own way. Farah was born in Iran, where the country is known for their artisan and craftsmanship heritage.

text: "Farah's fashion atelier rose in fame when she opened her first boutique in Rome, Italy. After moving to Ottawa in 1994 with her family, Farah founded the Farah Studio in Ottawa." - extraneous information.

refinement: Her love for family, life and fashion are probably harked back to her hometown in Iran. She was inspired to make fashion by her mother and she learned to sew from rocking chairs. It is through sewing that she's connected with her current mission of helping people feel beautiful in her own way. Farah was born in Iran, where the country is known for their artisan and craftsmanship heritage.

text: "Her love for family, life and fashion are probably harked back to her hometown in Iran. She was inspired to make fashion by her mother and she learned to sew from rocking chairs. It is through sewing that she's connected with her current mission of helping people feel beautiful in her own way." - most of this is made up and never happened in the text, especially the part about the rocking chair. This needs to be removed.

refinement: Farah was born in Iran, where the country is known for their artisan and craftsmanship heritage.

text: "where the" - "replace with "a"

refinement: Farah was born in Iran, a country is known for their artisan and craftsmanship heritage.

text: Delete "is"

refinement: Farah was born in Iran, a country known for their artisan and craftsmanship heritage.

text: "their" - replace with "its"

refinement: Farah was born in Iran, a country known for its artisan and craftsmanship heritage.

text: Add the remaining details about Iran.

refinement: Farah was born in Iran, a country known for its artisan and craftsmanship heritage. She began dressmaking at an early age, but political tensions in Iran led Farah to Rome, Italy, where she continued to pursue her passion.

answer: Farah is from Iran. Iran is described as a country with a rich artisan and craftsmanship heritage where Farah learned to make dresses an early age. Farah was forced to leave Iran for Italy due to political tensions.

text: "an" - add "at"

refinement: Farah is from Iran. Iran is described as a country with a rich artisan and craftsmanship heritage where Farah learned to make dresses at an early age. Farah was forced to leave Iran for Italy due to political tensions.

answer: The text emphasizes Farah's roots in Iran and her passion for dressmaking. Farah moved to Rome, Italy and started her own atelier and later moved to Ottawa where she opened her boutique and atelier. The text also emphasizes Farah's high-quality textile and practical design.

text: "and started her own atelier and later moved to Ottawa where she opened her boutique and atelier. The text also emphasizes Farah's high-quality textile and practical design" - extraneous and irrelevant information.

refinement: The text emphasizes Farah's roots in Iran and her passion for dressmaking. Farah moved to Rome, Italy

text: Add the missing details about Iran.

refinement: The text emphasizes Farah's roots in Iran and her passion for dressmaking. Iran is a country with a rich artisan and craftsmanship heritage, but when political tensions rose, Farah moved to Rome, Italy to pursue her passion there.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about what the boutique has to offer?

answer: Almost all of the text simply describes the activity and the reasons behind it but the article does mention that it has a variety of different styles they offer to the public. No specifics are mentioned but it can be assumed that they have at least a selection of styles to choose from when coming to the style of a dress since they advertise this as a "perfect made-to-measure outfit."

text: The response totally missed the point. It must be replaced with snippets of what Farah's Studio has to offer.

refinement: Farah's Studio offers custom-made, one-of-a-kind dresses and evening gowns made from the finest fabrics that will always be unique to its owner.

answer: The boutique offers every kind of cloth Farah has to offer, including a tuxedo and evening dress. There are samples of the different fabrics and dresses at the boutique. If a client desires a dress modeled after the sample, Farah will design a dress according to their expectations. The customer can specify which fabrics they wish to use and what their design is. This is a very skillful art of creating outfits.

text: The response fails to answer the question. Tuxedoes were never mentioned anywhere in the text.

refinement: Farah's Studio offers custom-made, one-of-a-kind dresses and evening gowns made from the finest fabrics that will always be unique to its owner. If a client desires a dress modeled after the sample, Farah will design a dress according to their expectations. The customer can specify which fabrics they wish to use and what their design is. This is a very skillful art of creating outfits.

answer: Farah's Studio offers an array of evening styles that could be suited for a wedding guest, mother of the bride or groom, a prom dress, or a suit to wear comfortably for hours. Farah's grasp of personal style enables her to make one-of-a-kind, bespoke, made-to-measure outfits. She offers full-service consultation, a set of illustrations, samples, pattern-making, and fittings. Farah Studio offers thoughtfully designed garments using high quality fabrics. Additionally, the studio tries to be environmentally conscious by not wasting materials.

text: "high quality" - replace with "high-quality"

refinement: Farah's Studio offers an array of evening styles that could be suited for a wedding guest, mother of the bride or groom, a prom dress, or a suit to wear comfortably for hours. Farah's grasp of personal style enables her to make one-of-a-kind, bespoke, made-to-measure outfits. She offers full-service consultation, a set of illustrations, samples, pattern-making, and fittings. Farah Studio offers thoughtfully designed garments using high-quality fabrics. Additionally, the studio tries to be environmentally conscious by not wasting materials.

answer: The boutique offers custom-made clothing for women, created with high-quality textiles and styles thoughtfully designed. The pieces range from evening gowns to suits for long hours.

answer: The boutique specializes in made-to-measure clothing, specifically evening gowns, suited to personal style. They create practical and elegant styles using high-quality textiles.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about face masks?

answer: The store offers a face mask to help prevent the spread of coronavirus. Health officials recommend mask wearing to help prevent the spread of the coronavirus. Testing by the Wake Forest Institute for Regenerative Medicine claims that not all fabrics are suitable for face masks. The fabric Farah Studio uses are those that are best of class and recommended for use with their masks.

text: "mask wearing" - replace with "wearing masks"

refinement: The store offers a face mask to help prevent the spread of coronavirus. Health officials recommend wearing masks to help prevent the spread of the coronavirus. Testing by the Wake Forest Institute for Regenerative Medicine claims that not all fabrics are suitable for face masks. The fabric Farah Studio uses are those that are best of class and recommended for use with their masks.

answer: The text discusses face masks as a means of protection against coronavirus. The masks are sold in the store and online, and are recommended by public health officials. They are intended only as protection, are hand-washable and suitable for one-time use.

text: "and suitable for one-time use" - this is incorrect because the masks can be washed and ironed, which means they can be used repeatedly.

refinement: The text discusses face masks as a means of protection against coronavirus. The masks are sold in the store and online, and are recommended by public health officials. They are intended only as protection, are hand-washable and are re-usable.

text: The response seems to miss the key part of the statement from the text.

refinement: The text discusses face masks as a means of protection against coronavirus. The masks are sold in the store and online, and are recommended by public health officials. They are not personal protection equipment. The masks are hand-washable and are re-usable.

answer: Face masks are the main commodity the store is selling. The masks are available from the store and online. Health officials have recommended their use to prevent the spread of coronavirus (coronavirus is referenced but not elaborated on; it is possibly just a local outbreak). The masks are high-quality and hand washable and safe for one-time use. They are not used on special occasions or in an alternate way. But they do protect purchasers from taking the disease home to their families.

text: "Face masks are the main commodity the store is selling." - this is incorrect and should be removed.

refinement: The masks are available from the store and online. Health officials have recommended their use to prevent the spread of coronavirus (coronavirus is referenced but not elaborated on; it is possibly just a local outbreak). The masks are high-quality and hand washable and safe for one-time use. They are not used on special occasions or in an alternate way. But they do protect purchasers from taking the disease home to their families.

text: "(coronavirus is referenced but not elaborated on; it is possibly just a local outbreak)." - this is speculation and wasn't mentioned in the text. It should be removed.

refinement: The masks are available from the store and online. Health officials have recommended their use to prevent the spread of coronavirus. The masks are high-quality and hand washable and safe for one-time use. They are not used on special occasions or in an alternate way. But they do protect purchasers from taking the disease home to their families.

text: "The" -  replace with "Face"

refinement: Face masks are available from the store and online. Health officials have recommended their use to prevent the spread of coronavirus. The masks are high-quality and hand washable and safe for one-time use. They are not used on special occasions or in an alternate way. But they do protect purchasers from taking the disease home to their families.

text: "safe for one-time use" - this is incorrect. Since the masks can are hand washable, they can be reused.

refinement: Face masks are available from the store and online. Health officials have recommended their use to prevent the spread of coronavirus. The masks are high-quality and hand washable and safe for multiple uses as long as these are washed and ironed. They are not used on special occasions or in an alternate way. But they do protect purchasers from taking the disease home to their families.

text: "They are not used on special occasions or in an alternate way. But they do protect purchasers from taking the disease home to their families." - this was never mentioned anywhere in the text and should be removed.

refinement: Face masks are available from the store and online. Health officials have recommended their use to prevent the spread of coronavirus. The masks are high-quality and hand washable and safe for multiple uses as long as these are washed and ironed.

answer: Due to coronavirus, health officials have recommended the wearing of cloth face masks in public to stop the spread. Farah's Studio is offering a facemask for purchase in store or online. They advise that masks aren't personal protection equipment, but regardless they have looked into creating the best-performing mask design that has two layers of high-quality fabric. Not all face mask fabrics are suitable for protection. They suggest washing their face masks after each use and the passing them under an iron.

text: "in store" - "add a hyphen"

refinement: Due to coronavirus, health officials have recommended the wearing of cloth face masks in public to stop the spread. Farah's Studio is offering a facemask for purchase in-store or online. They advise that masks aren't personal protection equipment, but regardless they have looked into creating the best-performing mask design that has two layers of high-quality fabric. Not all face mask fabrics are suitable for protection. They suggest washing their face masks after each use and the passing them under an iron.

text: "the passing" - remove "the"

refinement: Due to coronavirus, health officials have recommended the wearing of cloth face masks in public to stop the spread. Farah's Studio is offering a facemask for purchase in-store or online. They advise that masks aren't personal protection equipment, but regardless they have looked into creating the best-performing mask design that has two layers of high-quality fabric. Not all face mask fabrics are suitable for protection. They suggest washing their face masks after each use and passing them under an iron.

answer: Farah Studio is offering face masks for purchase in store and online for coronavirus prevention. The masks are of the highest quality, though their use is not meant to be personal protection equipment. They should be hand-washed and ironed after each use.

text: "in store" - add a hyphen

refinement: Farah Studio is offering face masks for purchase in-store and online for coronavirus prevention. The masks are of the highest quality, though their use is not meant to be personal protection equipment. They should be hand-washed and ironed after each use.

text: "protection" - replace with "protective"

refinement: Farah Studio is offering face masks for purchase in-store and online for coronavirus prevention. The masks are of the highest quality, though their use is not meant to be personal protective equipment. They should be hand-washed and ironed after each use.


text:
_THE DREAM AND LIE OF FRANCO_ is a series of two sheets of prints, comprising 18 individual images, and an accompanying prose poem, by Pablo Picasso produced in 1937. The sheets each contain nine images arranged in a 3x3 grid. The first 14, in etching and aquatint, are dated 8 January 1937. The remaining four images were added to the second printing plate later, without use of aquatint, and dated June 7, 1937.[1][2][3]

_The Dream and Lie of Franco_ is significant as Picasso's first overtly political work and prefigures his iconic political painting _Guernica_. The etchings satirise Spanish Generalísimo Francisco Franco's claim to represent and defend conservative Spanish culture and values by showing him in various ridiculous guises destroying Spain and its culture while the poem denounces “evil-omened polyps”.[4] Three of the four images added in June 1937 are directly related to studies for _Guernica_.[5]

The individual images were originally intended to be published as postcards to raise funds for the Spanish Republican government, and sold at the Spanish Pavilion of the 1937 World's Fair, although it is unclear whether any prints were made or sold in postcard format.

In his review of the etchings for _The Spectator_ in October 1937, art historian (and member of the Cambridge Five spy-ring) Anthony Blunt complained that the work could not “reach more than the limited coterie of aesthetes”.[6] Critic and author John Golding on the other hand, claimed that “more than any other work by Picasso _Dream and Lie of Franco_ breaks down, as the Surrealists so passionately longed to, distinctions between thought, writing and visual imagery.”[7]

Images

The images form a sequence like those in a comic book and have a loose narrative:[8][9] Franco's form changes from panel to panel. The Spanish dictator's appearance has been likened by various writers to a “jackbooted phallus”,[10] “an evil-omened polyp”[11] and “a grotesque homunculus with a head like a gesticulating and tuberous sweet potato”.[12]

1.  Franco riding a horse waving a sword and a flag
2.  Franco, with a ridiculously large penis, waving a sword and a flag
3.  Franco attacking a classical sculpture with a pick
4.  Franco dressed as a courtesan with a flower and a fan
5.  Franco being gored by a bull
6.  Franco at prayer surrounded by barbed wire
7.  Franco on top of a dead creature
8.  Franco chasing a winged horse
9.  Franco riding on a pig carrying a spear
10. Franco eating a dead horse
11. The aftermath of a battle with a corpse
12. The aftermath of a battle with a dead horse
13. Franco and a bull
14. Franco and the bull fighting

Additions to the second plate (including studies for _Guernica_):

1.  A woman crying and reaching up
2.  A woman fleeing a burning house carrying a child
3.  A woman cradling a child
4.  A woman shot with an arrow and reaching up amid devastation

Prose

[1] The Metropolitan Museum of Art: Dream and Lie of Franco, 1937

[2] National Gallery of Victoria: An Introduction to Guernica

[3] PBS: Picasso's commitment to the cause

[4] Michigan Today: Picasso's War

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[12]  Quote by Joaquín de la Puente

title: The Dream and Lie of Franco

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Explain they Picasso made the likeness of Franco's form comically grotesque.

answer: Picasso's etchings satirize Spanish Generalísimo Francisco Franco's claim to represent and defend conservative Spanish culture and values by making his form into a comically grotesque caricature, often with a head like a gesticulating and tuberous sweet potato. This is done as a commentary on Franco's destruction of Spain and its culture.

answer: Picasso's images for _The Dream and Lie of Franco_ satirize Spanish Generalísimo Francisco Franco by making his appearance comically grotesque. The dictator's form changes from panel to panel, but is generally presented as either an overly sexualized figure with an unusually large penis or a ridiculous homunculus with a gesticulating and tuberous head. These exaggerated depictions aim to highlight Franco's depravity while implicitly denouncing him.

answer: Picasso used his art to make Franco's form comically grotesque.

text: The response does not address the reasons why Picasso made the likeness of Franco's form comically grotesque.

refinement: Picasso used his art to was satirize Spanish Generalísimo Francisco Franco's claim to represent and defend conservative Spanish culture and values by making his form into a comically grotesque caricature.

answer: This is the first work in which Picasso engaged politics. Picasso was poking fun at Spanish General Francisco Franco's attempts to defend conservative Spanish values against sacrilege. The images are satirical in nature.

answer: Picasso imagined Franco in funny guises, making fun of his claims that he represented and defended conservative Spanish culture, and that he attempted to protect Spanish values by destroying what are supposed to be the reasons behind them.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the imagery featuring Franco and some kind of animal.

answer:
- one of the first images in the set contains Franco on the back of a pig while carrying a spear.
- Image three shows Franco dressed like a courtesan.
- Image 4, Franco fighting a bull, is the second highest stipulation on page 8.
- Image 7 shows Franco being gored by a bull.
- Image 10 shows Franco eating a dead horse.
- Image 11 also shows Franco pursuing a winged horse.
- Image 12 shows Franco and the bull fighting.
- Image 13 features Franco and the bull.

text: The response contains information not relevant to the question.

refinement:
- one of the first images in the set contains Franco on the back of a pig while carrying a spear.
- Image 4, Franco fighting a bull.
- Image 7 shows Franco being gored by a bull.
- Image 10 shows Franco eating a dead horse.
- Image 11 also shows Franco pursuing a winged horse.
- Image 12 shows Franco and the bull fighting.
- Image 13 features Franco and the bull.

text: The response has incorrect image numbers for most of the images.

refinement:
- one of the first images in the set contains Franco on the back of a pig while carrying a spear.
- Image 14, Franco fighting a bull.
- Image 5 shows Franco being gored by a bull.
- Image 10 shows Franco eating a dead horse.
- Image 8 also shows Franco pursuing a winged horse.
- Image 14 shows Franco and the bull fighting.
- Image 13 features Franco and the bull.

text: The response repeats itself.

refinement:
- one of the first images in the set contains Franco on the back of a pig while carrying a spear.
- Image 5 shows Franco being gored by a bull.
- Image 10 shows Franco eating a dead horse.
- Image 8 also shows Franco pursuing a winged horse.
- Image 14 shows Franco and the bull fighting.
- Image 13 features Franco and the bull.

text: The response leaves out some details of imagery containing Franco and an animal.

refinement:
- one of the first images in the set contains Franco on the back of a pig while carrying a spear.
- Franco also rides a horse in several images.
- Image 5 shows Franco being gored by a bull.
- Image 10 shows Franco eating a dead horse.
- Image 8 also shows Franco pursuing a winged horse.
- Image 14 shows Franco and the bull fighting.
- Image 13 features Franco and the bull.

answer: There is one with Franco atop a horse; one of his being gored by a bull; one of him on top of a dead creature; one of him going after a pegasus; one featuring Franco on a pig; one that has a dead horse this time, and two more featuring bull fights.

answer: The Dream and Lie of Franco by Pablo Picasso features historical figure Francisco Franco portrayed in various ways as he destroys Spain and its culture. Some images show him riding a horse, waving a sword and flag, with a ridiculously large penis. Other images portray him being gored by a bull, at prayer surrounded by barbed wire, and chasing a winged horse. There are also images of a dead creature, the aftermath of a battle with a corpse, and a woman shot with an arrow. Lastly, there are four images of Franco with a bull; two show the pair fighting and two show the bull standing alone.

text: The response contains some irrelevant information.

refinement: The Dream and Lie of Franco by Pablo Picasso features historical figure Francisco Franco portrayed in various ways as he destroys Spain and its culture. Some images show him riding a horse, waving a sword and flag, with a ridiculously large penis. Other images portray him being gored by a bull, and chasing a winged horse. There are also images of a dead creature, and the aftermath of a battle with a corpse. Lastly, there are four images of Franco with a bull; two show the pair fighting and two show the bull standing alone.

text: The response contains some inaccurate information.

refinement: The Dream and Lie of Franco by Pablo Picasso features historical figure Francisco Franco portrayed in various ways as he destroys Spain and its culture. Some images show him riding a horse, waving a sword and flag, with a ridiculously large penis. Other images portray him being gored by a bull, and chasing a winged horse. There are also images of a dead creature, and the aftermath of a battle with a corpse. Lastly, there are three images of Franco with a bull; two show the pair fighting.

answer: The sequence of images shows Spanish Generalísimo Franco in various guises, including riding a horse, waving a sword and a flag, attacking a classical sculpture with a pick, and being gored by a bull. Other images portray him riding on a pig carrying a spear and eating a dead horse. The addition images show Franco in various scenes alongside a woman crying, fleeing a burning house, shot with an arrow, and cradling a child amidst devastation.

text: The response contains some irrelevant information.

refinement: The sequence of images shows Spanish Generalísimo Franco in various guises, including riding a horse, waving a sword and a flag, and being gored by a bull. Other images portray him riding on a pig carrying a spear and eating a dead horse.

answer: He rides a horse while waving a flag, then is portrayed with a ridiculously-sized penis and waving a flag, he battles a classical sculpture, he dresses and acts as a courtesan and carries a fan, he is gored by a bull, and he rides on a pig with a spear.

text: The response contains some irrelevant information.

refinement: He rides a horse while waving a flag, he is gored by a bull, and he rides on a pig with a spear.

text: The response leaves out some imagery featuring Franco and creatures.

refinement: He rides a horse while waving a flag, he is gored by a bull, and he rides on a pig with a spear. Franco is also pictured with a dead creature and chasing a winged horse.


text:
The sheets were warm underneath as December seeped through the cracks between the windows and walls. The lights within their room shone bright and they wore clothes this night, these lovers, and were as sober as children should be. There were milk and cookies beneath the polaroid, and the radio sat silent.

Adam, in his pajamas, sat waiting, a stack of pillows supporting his back as Kate slid upon the bed. She crossed her legs under her, pulled up her hair and tied it.

“Come now, get to it,” he said, eager.

“Do be patient.” She whipped out a book from behind her, and Adam made himself comfortable.

Taking out the bookmark, she picked up where she had left of.

Adam was read to of the boy who wouldn’t grow up. They flew, these children; their thoughts much as what he felt now. Adam had read this story before. He would not pass up, however, how she looked when she read. He liked her gesturing and intoning during the exciting bits; her melodramatic whispering and her sudden sullen air during the sad parts. He dipped a cookie in milk as she told him of the ticking, and the clock ingested.

She would, at times, act out scenes she knew well with fervor and passion — he thought her pretty when she did. It was a sight he very liked to behold, that, and she does not notice when she does it.

I have a place where dreams are born
And time is never planned.
It’s not on any chart;
You must find it with your heart,
Never Never Land.

Kate held the book in one hand as she moved and swayed, telling the story. She was entirely aware of Adam and his knowledge of this story. How could he not? Kate had often badgered and blustered him to bury his face between the pages of her favorite books. She would not pass up, however, how he looked when he was read to. She liked how his jaw hung slightly open as she gestured and intoned during the exciting bits; how he edged ever so slightly closer as she whispered melodramatically, with a sudden sullen air, during the sad parts. He would fold his toes and tug his legs towards him as she spoke.

She would see him thoroughly crestfallen as Wendy implored not to be forgotten — she thought him adorable when he did. It was a sight she very liked to behold, that, and he does not notice when he does it.

“You won’t forget me, will you Peter, before spring cleaning time comes?”

She slipped beside him as he placed the book beside the empty plate of cookies.

“Well, that’s enough adventures for one night.” He placed an arm around her.

Oh, I think we can afford one more before we go to bed,” she said, looking up at him.

He grinned. “Do tell.”

“This adventure I have in mind, it shall invite a need of your lips, and mine, of course. A task too great, I think — even for one such as you.”

“Really now? I will have to be very courageous then.”

“That, you would. But, before this grand undertaking of ours,” she said, pushing herself off of him. “You must first brave the frigid air, journey to a far, far away land, and tidy those teeth. Cookie bits plague them.”

He laughed. “And then the adventure?”

“An awfully big one, I imagine,” she said, amused by him.

He flew, her Adam, towards the sink and was swift in his return. He stood there, his eyes on her.

“Hello there,” he began, as he sat on the bed. “Now there’s a sight to make me fly.”

“Oh, you’ll do nothing of that sort,” she said, pulling him in. “I’d rather like you to stay here, and I’d rather you’d stay with me tonight.”

She had him sit in front of her; she held his face in her hands and said, “You won’t leave me, will you Adam, before spring cleaning time comes?” Her eyes met his.

“Leave you at spring? We don’t have spring where we live, Kate.”

She smiled. “Precisely.”

Of course Adam promised; and then he flew — or, at least, that was what he felt, as her lips met his.

title: Adam & Kate #019

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about how Adam likes to spend time with Kate?

answer: Adam enjoys spending time with Kate because she's expressive and dramatic when she reads books. He likes how she looks when she reads, and appreciates the way she looks at him while they kiss. Adam likes how Kate makes him feel adventurous, even when it's just kissing.

answer: Adam likes to spend time with Kate by reading to her, and she loves him for it.

text: The response incorrectly mentions that Adam reads to Kate, however Kate is the one reading to Adam.

refinement: Adam likes to spend time with Kate by having her read to him, and he loves her for it.

answer: He likes when Kate reads him a book. The story describes how she read him a book about a boy who would not grow up. He listens to her carefully and asks her to read again and again.

answer: The author compares Adam with Peter Pan from J.M. Barrie's "Peter and Wendy" during the evening when Kate reads to him. This story tells how Peter, a boy who doesn't want to grow up, thinks of adventures in the land of make-believe. It also compares how Kate and Wendy are similar because they take an adventure in their relationship.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

text: The response misses to answer the question in the task.

refinement: Adam liked how Kate would read to him. He liked her gesturing and melodramatic whispering during the story. He thought she looked pretty when she'd act out scenes and it was a sight to behold.

answer: The story says that Adam enjoys spending time with Kate both when she is reading to him and kissing him. He enjoys watching her when she acts out the scenes of her favorite books and finds her attractive even when she is performing in this way. He values her company and promises to stay with her even though they live in a location with no spring.

text: The response misses to include mentioning that Adam promises to stay with Kate when she asks if he will not leave before spring cleaning comes.

refinement: The story says that Adam enjoys spending time with Kate both when she is reading to him and kissing him. He enjoys watching her when she acts out the scenes of her favorite books and finds her attractive even when she is performing in this way. He values her company and promises to stay with her when she asks if he will not leave when spring cleaning time comes. He responds by saying they don't live in a location with spring.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about Kate's relationship with Adam?

answer: The narrator notes that Kate habitually badger and blustered Adam to bury his face between the pages of her favorite books. She comments that Adam would not pass up the sight of her passing the book over to him. She is captivated by Adam's reactions to her when she does these, saying that he is adorable. When the two were about to embark on their first sexual encounter together, Kate tells Adam that he would forget her and he does not forget her.

text: There is no evidence in the text to suggest that they are embarking on their first sexual encounter together.

refinement: The narrator notes that Kate habitually badger and blustered Adam to bury his face between the pages of her favorite books. She comments that Adam would not pass up the sight of her passing the book over to him. She is captivated by Adam's reactions to her when she does these, saying that he is adorable. Kate tells Adam that he would forget her and he does not forget her.

text: The response inaccurately mentions that Kate says he is adorable, however she is only thinking it.

refinement: The narrator notes that Kate habitually badger and blustered Adam to bury his face between the pages of her favorite books. She comments that Adam would not pass up the sight of her passing the book over to him. She is captivated by Adam's reactions to her when she does these, thinking that he is adorable. Kate tells Adam that he would forget her and he does not forget her.

text: The response inaccurately mentions that Kate tells Adam that he would forget her, however she actually asks Adam if he will not leave her when spring cleaning times comes in which Adam promises.

refinement: The narrator notes that Kate habitually badger and blustered Adam to bury his face between the pages of her favorite books. She comments that Adam would not pass up the sight of her passing the book over to him. She is captivated by Adam's reactions to her when she does these, thinking that he is adorable. Kate asks Adam if he would not leave her when spring cleaning time comes and he promises not to.

answer: They had been living together for a while, although the exact amount of time wasn't mentioned. Kate was an avid reader of fantasy novels, and Adam liked to indulge her when she read those books to him. She was an expressive reader, putting enthusiasm into the exciting parts and making an exaggerated theatrical case for the sad parts. There were times when Kate would act out scenes with him after reading them to him, and Adam could tell that they were quality time. He thought she was very attractive when she did that. The way they finished the book with a kiss served as the show of affection between them.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: Kate was an avid reader of fantasy novels, and Adam liked to indulge her when she read those books to him. She was an expressive reader, putting enthusiasm into the exciting parts and making an exaggerated theatrical case for the sad parts. There were times when Kate would act out scenes with him after reading them to him, and Adam could tell that they were quality time. He thought she was very attractive when she did that. The way they finished the book with a kiss served as the show of affection between them.

text: The response mentions that they would act out scenes together, however it is only Kate who acts them out.

refinement: Kate was an avid reader of fantasy novels, and Adam liked to indulge her when she read those books to him. She was an expressive reader, putting enthusiasm into the exciting parts and making an exaggerated theatrical case for the sad parts. There were times when Kate would act out scenes while  reading them to him, and Adam could tell that they were quality time. He thought she was very attractive when she did that. The way they finished the book with a kiss served as the show of affection between them.

answer: The story portrays Kate's relationship with Adam as being close, trusting, and caring. While both are passionate and driven to achieve their dreams, they also both tend to focus on the now. Their mutual understanding and empathy is underscored by the way they can share their passions in ways that brings them close.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: The story portrays Kate's relationship with Adam as being close, trusting, and caring. Their mutual understanding and empathy is underscored by the way they can share their passions in ways that brings them close.

answer: The story shows that Kate and Adam enjoy spending time together and share a love of storytelling. Kate likes to act out scenes from the books she reads with Adam, and Adam enjoys watching her and enjoying her enthusiasm. The story suggests that Kate and Adam are close and care for each other deeply.

answer: Adam is Kate's boyfriend. It seems they love each other as they enjoy spending time together. Kate often reads to him books in the evening, and he likes that very much, especially when she acts out scenes in the books.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about why Kate asks Adam if he is going to leave her?

answer: Kate asks Adam if he is going to leave her because she fears that he might not stay with her throughout the winter. She worries that by the time spring might come, Adam will be gone. She is afraid of letting go of something so crucial and necessary to her.

text: There is no evidence in the passage to suggest that the reason Kate asks Adam if he is going to leave her is because she worries.

text: The response misses to mention that Kate asks Adam is he is going to leave her in reference to the story she was reading where Wendy asks Peter is he won't forget her.

refinement: Kate asks Adam if he's going to leave her in reference to the story they were reading in which Wendy asks Peter is he won't forget her before spring cleaning time comes.

answer: Kate asks Adam a question he replied to in a cute and loving way. Adam swore he won't leave her even if spring cleaning comes. She asked not just hear, she sincerely anxiously wanted to hear the answer. She complemented how adorable he is.

text: The response misses to mention that Kate asks Adam is he is going to leave her in reference to the story she was reading where Wendy asks Peter is he won't forget her.

refinement: Kate asks Adam a question he replied to in a cute and loving way. Adam swore he won't leave her even if spring cleaning comes. She asked in reference to the story they were reading where Wendy asks Peter if he will not forget about her before spring cleaning time comes.

answer: It is not clear if Kate is really worried if Adam is going to leave her or she is just teasing him as he looks disappointed when she reads him about Wendy who begs Peter not to forget her. She finds him adorable when he looks disappointed, and he is not even aware of that.

answer: Kate asks Adam if he is going to leave her because they both value their time together. She wants him to stay with her, even when their adventures have ended for the night. She is afraid that without him, she would feel abandoned. She does not want to lose the closeness they share. She values his company and his presence, and does not want to be alone.

text: There is no evidence in the passage to suggest that the reason Kate asks Adam if he is going to leave her is because she is afraid that she would feel abandoned.

text: The response misses to mention that Kate asks Adam is he is going to leave her in reference to the story she was reading where Wendy asks Peter is he won't forget her.

refinement: Kate asks Adam if he's going to leave her in reference to the story they were reading in which Wendy asks Peter is he won't forget her before spring cleaning time comes.

answer: It is implied that they are a submissive couple, fitting the BDSM lifestyle that they have established. Kate asks of her partner before they engage in an extramarital thing that couples in BDSM tend to do (role-play, BDSM, fetishes) to check to see if the partner is still committed to the core. She makes him assure her that he will not leave her to spring cleaning time (the period wherein believers of the BDSM lifestyle find a new role-play).

text: There is no evidence in the text to suggest that the couple have a BDSM lifestyle.

text: The response misses to mention that Kate asks Adam is he is going to leave her in reference to the story she was reading where Wendy asks Peter is he won't forget her.

refinement: Kate asks Adam if he's going to leave her in reference to the story they were reading in which Wendy asks Peter is he won't forget her before spring cleaning time comes.


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VINCENT RAYMOND DUNNE (17 April 1889 – 17 February 1970), also known as VINCENT R. DUNNE or RAY DUNNE, was an American Trotskyist, teamster, lumberjack, and union organizer with the Industrial Workers of the World and the International Brotherhood of Teamsters. He is notable for his leading role in the 1934 Minneapolis general strike,[1] his conviction and imprisonment under the anti-communist Smith Act, and his membership in the Socialist Workers Party and opposition to Stalinism.

Early life

Dunne was born in Kansas City in 1889, the second of nine children.[2] His mother was the daughter of a Wisconsin shoemaker and his father, a migrant worker from County Clare, Ireland, worked as a repairman for the local street railway. Tragedy struck early in his life when his father broke his kneecap on the job and his mother was forced to move him and his older brother to a farm by where her parents had settled near Little Falls, Minnesota, where they were eventually joined by his father after he had recovered. Adding to their hardships, their cabin burned down one winter when Dunne was six or seven, but they were able to rebuild with the help of neighbors. His father began to work again, this time as a lumberjack and building railway lines. By then, Dunne himself was working for pay on neighboring farms driving teams of horses and working the threshing rigs.[3]

By fourteen, Dunne would leave home to work at lumber camps throughout Minnesota, in conditions he found deplorable. Moving further west the next year, he harvested grain in North Dakota. In 1905, he would go even further west to Montana, where he encountered the Industrial Workers of the World (IWW) in lumber camps.[4] Dunne was immediately struck by the difference in conditions between the union lumber camps and the non-union camps back in Minnesota,[5] finding the bunkhouses spacious, comfortable, and hygienic. The union also proved a source for cheap literature, which Dunne, who had been forced to leave school to work after only five years, enthusiastically embraced, reading titles like Charles Darwin's _On the Origin of Species_.[6]

During the Panic of 1907, large numbers of workers were laid off and Dunne, along with fellow workers of the IWW, travelled west to Seattle looking for jobs, eventually finding themselves living in large camps of unemployed workers, where they began soapboxing to campaign for jobs and aid to be provided to the unemployed. Eventually, a state road-building project was commissioned to provide jobs for some of the unemployed, but Dunne himself would travel south to California, where in Los Angeles he was sentenced to a road construction chain gang that helped to build Sunset Boulevard. He moved on to Louisiana, where he helped to organize a strike among sawmill workers. The strike failed, but would lay the groundwork for the creation of the multiracial Brotherhood of Timber Workers. After a brief stint in Texas, Dunne would finally move to Minneapolis, which was a major IWW stronghold at the time.[7]

Once established in Minneapolis, Dunne began organizing teamsters with the IWW after becoming frustrated with the conservatism of the American Federation of Labor (AFL). In 1914, he married his wife, Jennie. By the late 1910s, Dunne had drifted away from the IWW's organizing and more toward campaigning for Eugene V. Debs and his Socialist Party of America. The break was solidified after the Russian Revolution, when Dunne officially joined the Communist Party of America. This situation would last for almost 10 years before, in 1928, Dunne became a victim of the “Factional War”, when members of the party who opposed Joseph Stalin and supported the theses of Leon Trotsky were purged. Unfazed, Dunne and his comrades formed the Communist League of America (later renamed the Socialist Workers Party) in alignment with Trotsky's Left Opposition to Stalinism.[8] Dunne was a vocal critic of the Communist Party after the expulsion of the Left Opposition, especially regarding Communist Party “raids” on Communist League-controlled front organizations and co-operative businesses.[9]

International Brotherhood of Teamsters

By 1934, Dunne had been organizing teamsters in Minneapolis for twenty-five years and was called “the most effective labor leader in America” by Trotsky.[10] With his brothers Miles and Grant, he took effective leadership of Teamsters Local 574 and knew “four or five hundred workers in Minneapolis [...] personally.”[11] During the strike, Dunne and his brothers dealt with espionage from police and private detectives, as well as personal attacks from local newspapers. Nevertheless, the strike would eventually succeed and teamster membership in Minneapolis grew explosively.[12]

Dunne's fate would change by the 1940s, however. Red baiting in the newspapers in 1934 could be deflected, but with American society in the grips of the Second Red Scare, the Socialist Workers Party would find their offices raided and leading officials, including Dunne, accused of sedition under the anti-communist Smith Act. This was seen by Trotskyists as an anti-communist conspiracy between the FBI and Teamsters national leadership, represented by Daniel J. Tobin, who sought to eliminate the leadership of the radical Minneapolis local.[13] Dunne and the other SWP leadership were found guilty, and in 1943 he was imprisoned for sixteen months in the Sandstone federal prison along with other leading American Trotskyists such as James P. Cannon.[14]

Later life

After his release from prison, Dunne would unsuccessfully run for mayor of Minneapolis in 1943 and 1947, and would go on three national speaking tours, as well as serving as a long-time chairman of the Socialist Workers Party in Minnesota. His later life was marked by his fierce opposition to the Vietnam War. He died in 1970.

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title: Vincent R. Dunne

question: What was Vincent R. Dunne's life span?

answer: 17 April 1889 – 17 February 1970.

text: Vincent R. Dunne was born on 17 April 1889 and died on 17 February 1970.

answer: Vincent R. Dunne lived from 1889 to 1970.

text: Vincent R. Dunne was born on 17 April 1889 and died on 17 February 1970.

answer: Vincent R. Dunne lived from 1889 to 1970.

text: Vincent R. Dunne was born on 17 April 1889 and died on 17 February 1970.

question: How many sisters did Vincent R. Dunne have?

answer: It is not explicitly indicated how many sisters Vincent R. Dunne had but based on the information given in the passage, it can be inferred that he only had one sister.

text: There is no evidence or sign of how many sisters Dunne has.

refinement: It is not explicitly indicated in the passage how many sisters Vincent R. Dunne had.

answer: The text doesn't say.

text: Dunne was born in Kansas City and was the second of nine children.

answer: There is no mention of sisters in this passage.

text: Dunne was born in Kansas City and was the second of nine children.

question: Where was Vincent R. Dunne imprisoned?

answer: Sandstone federal prison.

text: Dunne was imprisoned for sixteen months in Sandstone federal prison.

answer: The answer is Sandstone Federal Prison.

text: Dunne was imprisoned for sixteen months in Sandstone federal prison.

answer: Miesarch, Minnesota

text: Dunne was not imprisoned at Miesarch, Minnesota.

refinement: Dunne was imprisoned in the Sandstone federal prison.

question: Explain Vincent R. Dunne's initial involvement in the Panic of 1907.

answer: During this period, Vincent R. Dunne traveled west to Seattle with friends to look for a job, eventually living in large camps of unemployed workers where they began campaigning for jobs and aid.

text: Dunne and friends began soapboxing in Seattle, campaigning for jobs and aid to be provided to the unemployed.

answer: The Panic of 1907 was a economic crisis caused by a financial bubble and initially centered around Wall Street. Large numbers of workers were laid off amid the recession, and Dunne and other workers of the Industrial Workers of the World traveled west to Seattle looking for jobs. They eventually migrated to makeshift camps of unemployed workers, where they started a soapboxing campaign. Eventually, the economy recovered, and Dunne traveled to California for construction work on roads; people who worked on the project were sentenced to a chain gang. He moved on to another state where he helped organize a strike among sawmill workers that failed. His next stop was Ellensburg, Washington, where he continued working as a lumberjack.

text: According to the passage, there was no evidence of Dunne working in Ellensburg, Washington.

refinement: The Panic of 1907 was an economic crisis caused by a financial bubble and initially centered around Wall Street. Large numbers of workers were laid off amid the recession, and Dunne and other workers of the Industrial Workers of the World traveled west to Seattle looking for jobs. They eventually migrated to makeshift camps of unemployed workers, where they started a soapboxing campaign. Eventually, the economy recovered, and Dunne traveled to California for construction work on roads; people who worked on the project were sentenced to a chain gang. He moved on to another state where he helped organize a strike among sawmill workers that failed.

answer: In 1907, Dunne and other workers from the IWW moved to Seattle looking for jobs. When jobs didn't materialize, they found themselves living in large camps of unemployed workers, where they began soapboxing to campaign for jobs and aid to be provided to the unemployed. Eventually, a state road-building project was commissioned to provide jobs for some of the unemployed, but Dunne himself would travel south to California, where in Los Angeles he was sentenced to a road construction chain gang that helped to build Sunset Boulevard. He moved on to Louisiana, where he helped to organize a strike among sawmill workers. The strike failed, but would lay the groundwork for the creation of the multiracial Brotherhood of Timber Workers. After a brief stint in Texas, Dunne would finally move to Minneapolis, which was a major IWW stronghold at the time.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Vincent Dunne was an American Trotskyist and union organizer who was arrested and convicted of sedition in the early 1940s. He spent 16 months incarcerated until his release, and he was a longtime advocate of socialism up until his death in 1970.

answer: Vincent Raymond Dunne was a working class activist and leader in the Industrial Workers of the World and the International Brotherhood of Teamsters. He played a major role in leading the 1934 Minneapolis general strike, which was ultimately successful, but years later he was imprisoned for sedition under the anti-communist Smith Act. He was a fierce opponent of the Vietnam War.

text: By 1934, Dunne had been organizing teamsters in Minneapolis for twenty-five years. He led the successful 1934 Minneapolis strike and was soon imprisoned for sixteen months for sedition.

answer: This text is a brief biography of Vincent R. Dunne, an American Trotskyist, teamster, lumberjack, and union organizer with the Industrial Workers of the World and the International Brotherhood of Teamsters. He is probably best known for his leading role in the 1934 Minneapolis general strike, his conviction and imprisonment under the anti-communist Smith Act, and his membership in the Socialist Workers Party and opposition to Stalinism.

answer: Vincent Dunne was an American Trotskyist and labour organizer who played an important role in the Minneapolis general strike of 1934. He was later imprisoned under the anti-communist Smith Act before leaving his mark in the Minnesota labour movement. He died in 1970.

answer: Vincent Dunne was a radical activist and union organizer who played a key role in the 1934 Minneapolis general strike, but would later be imprisoned under the anti-communist Smith Act in the 1940s. He died in 1970.

answer: Vincent R. Dunne was an American Trotskyist and member of the Socialist Workers Party who played a key role in the 1934 Minneapolis general strike. He was eventually imprisoned on charges of sedition, but later frequently spoke out against the Vietnam War. He died in 1970.


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_I personally really like this little series going on. Without a general plot, it gives little snippets of life and events after the movie ended and gives a warm welcoming feeling!_
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Following iPoke’s AOTD feature, IPOKE also does comic! This little comics series features little snippet of life in the ZPD, moments after the ending of Zootopia. Some of its dialogue covers pretty mature topics with a little slice-of-life, while making it natural sounding and in character. Kudo’s to iPoke for the exceptional writing!

There are currently four comics from iPoke which have this general theme, however; the series itself hasn’t been updated for over two years due to iPoke’s inactivity. But we hope to see an update in the near future!

Check out the four comics right after the break!

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the narrator like about the iPoke series?

answer: The narrator likes that the series features snippets of life with no general plot.

answer: The narrator likes that the series shows snippets of life following the events of Zootopia, and has a warm welcoming feeling.

answer: The narrator likes the little snippets of life and events after the movie ended, as well as the warm welcoming feeling they provide.

answer: He likes that it has no plot, so it gives little snippets of life with a warm welcoming feeling.

text: We don't know the narrator's gender.

refinement: They like that it has no plot, so it gives little snippets of life with a warm welcoming feeling.

answer: He or she likes its natural and mature dialogue.

text: He or she should be they because we don't know if the author is non-binary.

refinement: They like its natural and mature dialogue.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How long has it been since iPoke updated its series?

answer: 2 years.

answer: It has been over two years since iPoke updated its series.

answer: Two years.

answer: Two years

answer: Over two years.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: iPoke's "The Series: The Zootopia Chronicles" follows Zootopia's characters after the events of the movie. It features mature subjects, along with comments about the comic's content.

answer: The narrator loves the iPoke series for the little snippets its work contains. The narrator also loves the mature themes and the naturalness of the dialogue employed.

answer: This is a short review on a youtube account for drawing comics. There are four so far.

text: This doesn't have the name or highight the purpose/object of the article.

refinement: The author discusses the iPoke comics, emphasizing their little comics series, and discussing how much the author enjoys the snippets of real life.

answer: This series of comics features moments in the ZPD following the events of Zootopia. There are currently four comics available, but the series hasn't been updated for several years. The dialogue covers mature topics while staying true to characters and the series remains charming due to its slice-of-life feel.

text: This is way over one single sentence and it needs to feature the term "iPoke".

refinement: This series of comics called iPoke features moments in the ZPD following the events of Zootopia, with four comics available now, but the series hasn't been updated for several years.

answer: This is an adorable comic series following life in the ZPD after the events of Zootopia. Some of the dialogue covers mature themes, but it is written in an approachable and engaging way. There are currently four comics released, but the series has been inactive for two years. We hope to see more soon.

text: This is too long and it needs to have the word iPoke. The last sentence is unnecessary.

refinement: This is an adorable iPoke comic series following life in the ZPD after the events of Zootopia with some of the dialogue covering mature themes, but it is written in an approachable and engaging way. There are currently four comics released, but the series has been inactive for two years. We hope to see more soon.


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[Damaged Schmalturm at the Bovington Tank Museum] [Scale model of prototype Schmalturm turret on Panther F] The SCHMALTURM (German for “narrow turret”) was a tank turret designed for use on the Panther Ausf. F medium tank. There was a Krupp proposal to fit it onto the Panzer IV medium tank as well. The turret's shape resembled the Soviet T-34 tank turret with a narrow conical gun mantlet resembling German Jagdpanzer mantlets. It featured a narrow front to maximize protection while minimizing weight. It was both lighter and easier to manufacture than the standard Panther turret. The turret had a stereoscopic rangefinder with lenses on either side of the turret, located in spherical bulges. No Schmalturms entered series production.[1][2]

History

Rheinmetall concept

The Schmalturm was initially conceived by German arms manufacturer and designer Rheinmetall during their tasking for designing the turret of the Panther II. The new turret design was named Panther 2 Turm mit schmale Blendenausführung (meaning “turret with narrow mantlet”). However, the Panther II project cancelled in May of 1943 so Rheinmetall switched the design for the original Panther tanks. By 1944, very little progress had been made on the design, with it not progressing beyond the drawing board. It was at this time that additional requirements were made for the turret design due to beginning of design for the newest Panther version, the Ausf. F occurring. The new design necessitated for the inclusion of a rangefinder to be incorporated into the turret as well as the replacement of the gunner's sight with a roof periscope. The rangefinder resulted in a discernible lump on the roof the turret appearing. However little progress was made beyond this, resulting in the project being transferred by Waffen Prüfen 6 to Daimler-Benz in February 1944.[3]

Daimler Benz design

Daimler Benz utilised little if not none from Rheinmetall's designs in their own designs for the Schmalturm. The company progressed significantly faster than Rheinmetall in designing and producing a Schmalturm and by 20 August 1944, a fully functional Schmalturm was mated to a Panther Ausf. G hull. The designs never made it to mass production, nor did the Panther F.

Postwar

After the war, the Allies retrieved two prototypes of Daimler Benz's designs with the Americans seizing one and the British taking the other, using it in ballistic testing. This prototype turret is now found in the Bovington tank museum.

Characteristics

The Schmalturm design featured several design requirements with the main concerns being the removal the shot trap found in the Panther's mantlet due to its cylindrical shape, an increase in turret protection while limiting weight, decreasing the size of the turret while still maintaining crew efficiency, as well as taking 30 percent less time to manufacture than the standard Panther turret. The addition of a stereoscopic rangefinder and making the turret easier and less expensive to produce compared to the Panther's turret. The end result of Daimler Benz's design resulted in a hexagonal-shaped turret which featured heavier armour on the turret as a whole. The front plate of the turret was 120 mm thick while the mantlet was a conical shape that was 150 mm thick angled to an extreme to ricochet any shells that hit it. The turret sides were upgraded to 60 mm, an improvement over the Panther's original 45 mm. The stereoscopic rangefinder of the Schmalturm could be identified through a bulb mounted to both sides of the turret. The 7.5 cm KwK 42 was equipped to the turret with a shorter recoil system to fit better in the smaller turret, allowing the gun to maintain a +20/-8 degrees of elevation/depression, leading to the new gun being designated KwK 44/1.

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title: Schmalturm

question: What was the Schmalturm?

answer: A tank turret designed for use on the Panther Ausf. F medium tank.

answer: The Schmalturm was a tank turret designed for use on the Panther Ausf. F medium tank.

answer: A tank turret designed for use on the Panther Ausf. F medium tank.

answer: The Schmalturm was a tank turret design that was meant to be used on the Panther Ausf. F tank. It featured a narrower front and a rangefinder, as well as increased armour protection.

question: What were it's distinguishing features?

answer: The turret's shape resembled the Soviet T-34 tank turret with a narrow conical gun mantlet resembling German Jagdpanzer mantlets. It featured a narrow front to maximize protection while minimizing weight. It was both lighter and easier to manufacture than the standard Panther turret. The turret had a stereoscopic rangefinder with lenses on either side of the turret, located in spherical bulges.

answer: The Schmalturm featured heavier armour on the turret as a whole, a conical shaped mantlet that was 150 mm thick, and a stereoscopic rangefinder.

answer: The Schmalturm had a narrower front to maximize protection while minimizing weight. It was both lighter and easier to manufacture than the standard Panther turret. The turret had a stereoscopic rangefinder with lenses on either side of the turret, located in spherical bulges.

answer: It was lighter and easier to manufacture than the standard Panther turret. It had a narrow front to maximize protection while minimizing weight. It had a stereoscopic rangefinder with lenses on either side of the turret, located in spherical bulges.

question: Why did production transfer from Rheinmetall to Daimier Benz?

answer: The Schmalturm was initially conceived by German arms manufacturer and designer Rheinmetall during their tasking for designing the turret of the Panther II. The new turret design was named Panther 2 Turm mit schmale Blendenausführung (meaning “turret with narrow mantlet”). However, the Panther II project cancelled in May of 1943 so Rheinmetall switched the design for the original Panther tanks. By 1944, very little progress had been made on the design, with it not progressing beyond the drawing board. It was at this time that additional requirements were made for the turret design due to beginning of design for the newest Panther version, the Ausf. F occurring. The new design necessitated for the inclusion of a rangefinder to be incorporated into the turret as well as the replacement of the gunner's sight with a roof periscope. The rangefinder resulted in a discernible lump on the roof the turret appearing. However little progress was made beyond this, resulting in the project being transferred by Waffen Prüfen 6 to Daimler-Benz in February 1944.

answer: Rheinmetall's design was not progressing beyond the drawing board.

answer: Rheinmetall's design for the Schmalturm was not progressing as quickly as Daimier Benz's, leading to the transfer of the project to the latter company.

answer: They had very little and slow progress.

question: What characteristics did the final production have?

answer: The final production of the Schmalturm had a hexagonal-shaped turret with heavier armor on the turret as a whole. The front plate of the turret was 120 mm thick while the mantlet was a conical shape that was 150 mm thick angled to an extreme to ricochet any shells that hit it. The turret sides were upgraded to 60 mm, an improvement over the Panther's original 45 mm. The 7.5 cm KwK 42 was equipped to the turret with a shorter recoil system to fit better in the smaller turret, allowing the gun to maintain a +20/-8 degrees of elevation/depression, leading to the new gun being designated KwK 44/1.

answer: The final production of the Schmalturm featured heavier armour on the turret, a conical shaped mantlet, and a rangefinder. The gun was also shorter to fit in the smaller turret.

answer: A hexagonal-shaped turret which featured heavier armor on the turret as a whole

answer: The final production had a hexagonal-shaped turret with heavier armor on the turret as a whole. The front plate of the turret was 120 mm thick while the mantlet was a conical shape that was 150 mm thick angled to an extreme to ricochet any shells that hit it. The turret sides were upgraded to 60 mm, an improvement over the Panther's original 45 mm. The stereoscopic rangefinder of the Schmalturm could be identified through a bulb mounted to both sides of the turret. The 7.5 cm KwK 42 was equipped to the turret with a shorter recoil system to fit better in the smaller turret, allowing the gun to maintain a +20/-8 degrees of elevation/depression, leading to the new gun being designated KwK 44/1.

question: Write a ~7 sentence summary.

answer: The Schmalturm was a tank turret designed for use on the Panther Ausf. F medium tank. It was a Krupp proposal to fit it onto the Panzer IV medium tank as well. The turret's shape resembled the Soviet T-34 tank turret with a narrow conical gun mantlet resembling German Jagdpanzer mantlets. It featured a narrow front to maximize protection while minimizing weight. It was both lighter and easier to manufacture than the standard Panther turret. The turret had a stereoscopic rangefinder with lenses on either side of the turret, located in spherical bulges. No Schmalturms entered series production.

answer: The Schmalturm was a tank turret designed for use on the Panther Ausf. F medium tank. It was a Krupp proposal to fit it onto the Panzer IV medium tank as well. The turret's shape resembled the Soviet T-34 tank turret with a narrow conical gun mantlet resembling German Jagdpanzer mantlets. It featured a narrow front to maximize protection while minimizing weight. It was both lighter and easier to manufacture than the standard Panther turret. The turret had a stereoscopic rangefinder with lenses on either side of the turret, located in spherical bulges. No Schmalturms entered series production.

answer: The Schmalturm was a tank turret design developed during World War II, but never made it into mass production. It featured a narrower shape than the standard Panther turret, and was designed to be lighter and easier to manufacture. It also included a rangefinder and a more heavily armoured front plate. However, the Schmalturm never saw widespread use, and only two prototypes were ever produced.

answer: The Schmalturm was a German tank turret designed for use on the Panther Ausf. F medium tank and the Panzer IV medium tank. After a slow beginning with Rheinmetall, it was designed by Daimier Benz. The turret's shape resembled the Soviet T-34 tank turret with a narrow conical gun mantlet resembling German Jagdpanzer mantlets. It featured a narrow front to maximize protection while minimizing weight. It was both lighter and easier to manufacture than the standard Panther turret. In the end, it was a hexagonal-shaped turret which featured heavier armor on the turret as a whole.