text:
I could feel the powerful throbbing of my racing heart against the wet stone floor. As I laid there I could sense every motion within my body from the blood rushing from my fingers to my toes and the expansion of my lungs as I inhaled, the following emptiness as I exhaled and every single hair standing up on my back from the cold.

I was naked and I felt cold. There was naught but a light breeze breaking the thundering silence. I opened my eyes only to close them again. They felt so very dry. After I rubbed my eyes I once again opened them to find myself lying down in the dark. I stood up and noticed my lack of clothing. The cool breeze had stopped. The following silence was so unbearable that I started tapping my bare feet against the stone floor. Not a sound. I tapped harder. Not a sound. I crouched down and started smacking the floor with the palm of my hand. Not a sound. I stomped on the stone floor trying to create the smallest inkling of a noise as my desperation grew more intense. Not a sound. I jumped up and down but not a sound wave was produced.

That's when the roar that can only be described as infinite started. The mind numbingly powerful roar the likes of which I have never heard. It was a sound that had no source and had no end. A sound that traveled indefinitely and that could not be escaped. I turned around cowering while covering my ears, screaming, trying to overpower the sound, to no avail. That is when I noticed the sliver of light in the dark. I made my way towards it and it turned out to be the crack of a door. On the other side of the door was a desert and the warmth of the sands heated the air through the doorway and I felt beckoned to lie down in it.

I thrust myself through the doorway to be engulfed by the warm sands but I could not feel it. I knew the sand was warm but I could not feel it against my skin. I dug deeper trying to get the sand in closer against my skin but I could not feel the heat. I could feel the weight of the sand pressing against me as I made my way down in the sand but could not feel the heat. I kept digging until I could no longer breathe. The pressure against my chest was immense and yet I did not feel the need to breathe, so I continued digging.

Light. I was instantly blinded as it hit my eyes. I felt shaken and the weight was unloaded but there was still an overbearing pressure and there was the cold, the now much more extreme cold cold. As I looked towards the horizon of the desert I could see the outlines of another person. A person wearing something that was being carried by the wind. A dress perhaps? Charging through the sand with not a care for anything but to reach this dress wearing someone I thought, what is this place? What am I doing here? Why am I here?

As I reached the figure in the dress I grabbed it's arm and swung it around only to see a young woman bloodied on one side of her face with a cut splitting her head on the left side. On the right side there was but the remnants of a what was once a face, now charred beyond recognition. I could recognize her. I closed my eyes and as I opened them again I came to.

I was in a car. In the driver's seat. There was smoke everywhere, as well as shards of glass. I looked up and there she was just opposite to me, in a car crumpled up in to the hood of mine, engulfed in flames. My sight got blurry and I heard sirens in the distance. What is this?

title: A desolate inside

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the painful sensations the narrator experiences.

answer: The narrator feels immense desperation as well as coldness and an overpowering sound. The narrator also encounters horrendous conditions in the form of a car accident scene with a bloodied and burnt young woman. All this culminates to an intense physical sensation of pain.

text: There are more experiences that were not covered.

refinement: The narrator feels immense desperation as well as coldness and an overpowering roar. She also felt weighed down by a large amount of sand that almost suffocated her. After that was a blinding light and an extreme cold in a desert-like location.

answer: The narrator feels the painful heartbeat against their skin at their toes. They feel their lungs expanding when inhale and the emptiness when exhaling. He feels the hair on his back from the cold breeze. His eyes feel very very dry. When he finally opens his eyes he sees nothing but darkness with just the sliver of light in the gap of a door and everything he does causes no sound.

text: The response has some clunky lines as well as missing some experiences.

refinement: The narrator feels their lungs expanding when inhaling and the emptiness when exhaling. He can also feel the hair on his back from the extreme cold. His eyes feel very dry. When he finally opens his eyes he sees nothing but darkness with just the sliver of light in the gap of a door and everything he does cause no sound. Then there was a lot of sand engulfing the narrator, making it difficult for him to breathe.

answer: The narrator experiences relentless sound, cold emptiness, lack of sensation in the sand, and the gruesome reality of a woman caught in a car fire. These stimuli cause extreme desperation and confusion in the narrator who finds himself in a reality completely different and foreign to what his senses expect.

answer: They feel pain pulsate throughout their body. It occurs during an unknown process of intense sensations. The narrator says their eyes feel dry, their ears start to ring, they feel pain where the stone floor hits their naked skin, the cold never leaves them. They feel the scorching heat of desert sun on their skin, but they feel a stabbing cold on the far side of that. They feel the heat of a sand storm, but cold from the gusts of wind behind it.

answer: The narrator is naked and feels cold. They feel an immense pressure against their chest. When the light hits, they feel extreme cold.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the story's plot twist.

answer: The narrator when to bed at her apartment and wakes up to find her in a car crumpled up in to the hood of another one, engulfed in flames alongside the woman, who was recognizable to her. She lost consciousness and woke up in a car accident.

text: There is no evidence from the passage to suggest that the narrator went to bed and then woke to find themselves in a car accident.

refinement: The narrator is sort of experiencing a nightmare and then wakes up to find herself in a car crumpled up into the hood of another one, engulfed in flames alongside the woman who was unrecognizable to her.

answer: The protagonist is deep in a desolate landscape when he discovers that he is trapped in a sensory deprivation chamber. The sound of silence is deafening and he is unable to produce sound. The character eventually emerges from the chamber and sees a young woman who has been horribly mutilated. He snaps back to reality and discovers that the woman is in a car on fire and he has been involved in a car accident. The story's twist is that the protagonist has been living in a dream-state the whole time.

answer: The narrator closes his eyes and when he comes to he finds that he was dreaming and is actually in the driver's seat of a car. The car has just crashed, and a woman is sitting opposite him, the car engulfed in flames.

answer: The main character experiences a sudden quiet in a dark and desolate space. He grabs the clothing of a woman walking past and discovers that she is burnt and mostly unrecognizable. He is then lucidly awoken in a car and realizes that the woman is on fire. He is in a car collision.

answer: The narrator realizes that the woman with the dress belongs to the driver of the car the narrator is in and realizes that her own person is on the wrong side of the car.

text: The response makes little sense.

refinement: The narrator is in a dream-like state, experiencing pain and other unpleasant experiences when he wakes up to find himself in a car crumpled up into the hood of another one, all engulfed in flames alongside a young woman who was unrecognizable to him.


split: train

text:
Peter

As blood dripped from his new American Apparel t-shirt, Peter wondered if he'd made a mistake. It would take an awful amount of time to get it out, it was cotton after all, and had cost him a dear amount of money. He remembered when he bought it, it was a hot, stuffy day and the cashier was a chubby lady called Vicky. His card had been rejected by the machine at least 5 times before he'd gotten it to work. He'd left rather irritated that it had taken so long but pleased that he'd bought a new shirt and some socks. He glanced down at his hand and the still warm Smith and Wesson revolver that rested in his gnarled palm. The smell of smoke from the barrel  and chamber made him screw up his nose in disgust. His father was a smoker, at least he had been till Peter had taken him into the back garden and caved the back of his skull in with a spade for shouting at him one too many times. He cast the revolver aside onto the now red carpet, and brushed himself down. He picked a particularly large piece of flesh from his midriff and held it up to his eyes. He studied it closely before deciding it must be ear, judging by the cartilagenous texture of the skin. He felt his own ear, it was cold to the touch, which was when Peter realised he was still standing in the open doorway of the house. He shut the door briskly and strode over the mangled corpse that lay before him towards the kitchen. He started the kettle, quickly realised it had not been filled, tutted, and then refilled it from the tap. He waited in silence for it to boil and placed a teabag with surgeon-like precision into the Thomas the Tank Engine mug he had taken from the shelf. He poured exactly 375ml of hot water into his mug, stirred six times and removed the teabag before adding a teaspoon of milk. He watched as the reddish brown of the water slowly turned into a more pleasing creamy colour. He returned to the hallway and looked down at the man he had shot in the head. He sipped his tea at regular intervals whilst he pondered this man's story. Had he known this was to be his last day on Earth? Did he know that just 12 and a haf hours after he had woken up and started breakfast that his frontal lobe would be resting on his hallway chandelier? Maybe he'd considered not going into work and just staying in bed, not caring whether or not his spreadsheet would be ready by wednesday. He wondered if this man knew that Peter had followed him home, before entering his house and watching Eastenders for a half hour and eating cheese and pickle on toast. Peter wondered if he should move the body from the hallway, but decided against it as he didn't want blood over any more of the house, that would be unsightly. Instead he walked back into the kitchen and set his empty mug into the wash basin, then ran the water over his fingers until it became warm. He moved the tap head over the basin, squirted some fairy liquid into the mug and began to wash it with a nearby washcloth. Once it was done he decided he may as well continue as not to waste water and took a dirty plate from the counter. He placed into the water and rubbed it clockwise in concentric circles, being careful to clear all crumbs or left over pickle from the china. Peter glanced around the kitchen, impressed by the cleanliness. It was not unlike his own home, the mantelpiece was well dusted and the potted plant, a small spider-plant, appeared to be in good health. There were also some cards stacked neatly on the shelf. Peter dried his hands on his ruined shirt and picked up the first card. It had a picture of a Chinchilla with sunglasses on the front with the caption 'Chinchilling'. Peter allowed a smile to play on his lips before rapidly dismissing it. He opened the card to find the words 'Happy Birthday Dad, we all love you very much - Amy and Jess' in childish scrawl. He placed the card back onto the pile carefully and thought about the two children, Amy and Jessica. He thought they must look like their Dad, but the corpse in the hallway wasn't proving very useful to his mental image so Peter entered the living room in search of a picture of the pair. Adverts droned on quietly from the  old Toshiba television which lit the room with a dim, pulsing glow. Peter's fuzzy shadow lay on the wall, as silent as he was. After a few minutes of searching, Peter recovered a photo of two smiling girls, aged around 3 and 6 and who he presumed to be their mother standing in front of Blackpool tower. Peter had been to Blackpool before with his schoolmates, he'd sat on the end of the pier fiddling with some blu-tak whilst the other children played on the rides or with the fairground games. Mr Hershaw, his science teacher, had approached him and tried to convince him to come and play with the others. Peter had sat in silence wishing Mr Hershaw would leave. Mr Hershaw's cat died the next week, which was unfortunate for him. He placed the picture back on the window sill and sat down cross legged on the floor. The adverts on the television had stopped playing and had been replaced by a loud, tall man with large teeth hosting a family oriented gameshow. Peter grimaced and flicked the tv off with the sauce-stained remote. He now sat in the dark, alone in a foreign house with corpse for his only companion. It was almost funny, Peter felt like laughing; but he didn't laugh. He simply stood up and walked back into the doorway, he didn't need light to navigate, he had already memorized the structure of the small house. He stepped back over the body and grasped the brass doorknob. It was cold and he withdrew his hand quickly. Peter decided it would be wise to leave in more than just his t-shirt. He rolled the man over on to his side, so as he wouldn't have to step back over him. Peter was a skinny man, he always had been, and so rolling over the man's rather hefty frame was no easy task. He scoured the house for a coat, but quickly realised that the cadaver was the only one sporting a jacket. He heaved at the hem of the jacket, pulling it from the body. He did not see any point in un-buttoning it first as there was no head to make removal particularly difficult. He pulled the bloodied Weird Fish coat over his head, it was still warm and had some weight to it. Peter rifled through the pockets and picked out a pair of keys and an embroidered hankerchief. The keys had the words 'Renault' etched into them, and so Peter concluded that they must be for the car that resided in the driveway. Peter considered taking the car rather than walking, it was cold and he was already beginning to hear sirens. He had realised shortly after pulling the trigger that a high calibre handgun was not the most silent of killing devices, and it seemed that someone had noticed.

title: 'Peter' - [unfinished]

question: Who are the major characters in this story?

answer: Peter, the corpse of the man he murdered

answer: Peter, the man he shot, and the man's family

answer: Peter, the man he shot, and the two girls.

text: Part of this response is incorrect and needs to be removed.

refinement: Peter, the man he shot are the main characters of the story.

answer: The major characters in this story are Peter and the man he shot.

question: What does Peter plan to do with the gun?

answer: Peter plans to leave the gun behind and walk away from the crime scene.

answer: Peter has already used to gun to murder a man.

text: While this response is fitting, it is not the proper answer. This response needs to be completely re-written.

refinement: Peter throws the gun aside onto the red carpet.

answer: He plans to kill himself.

text: This response is completely incorrect and needs to be re-written.

text: No response is given and a response needs to be generated.

refinement: Peter throws the gun onto the red carpet.

question: Describe the relationship between Peter and his father.

answer: Peter's relationship with his father was strained and fraught with anger and violence. Peter killed his father in cold blood, and seems to have no remorse for his actions. He seems to have a lack of empathy for others, and is cold and calculating in his actions.

answer: Peter's father frequently shouted at him until Peter murdered him with a spade.

answer: Peter's father was abusive towards him. Peter killed his father in self-defense.

text: The self-defense portion of this response needs to be omitted.

refinement: Peter's father was abusive towards him. Peter killed his father.

answer: Peter's father was abusive and Peter killed him.

question: Where does the story take place?

answer: The story takes place in a small house.

answer: In the home of the man Peter has murdered. The story seems to be set in England.

text: The second part of this statement is a guess and should be omitted to make the overall response stronger.

refinement: In the home of the man Peter has murdered.

answer: The story takes place in a house.

answer: The story takes place in a small house.

question: How old is Peter?

answer: That information can't be found

text: No response is given. A response needs to be generated.

refinement: The information to answer this question cannot be found in the passage.

answer: Based on the passage, it is difficult to determine Peter's age. However, it can be inferred that he is at least in his late twenties or early thirties.

answer: That information can't be found.

question: Why is there blood on Peter's t-shirt?

answer: He shot the man in the head.

text: No response is given and it is important to have a response generated.

refinement: There is blood on Peter's t-shirt because he shot his victim in the head and blood from the victim's head splattered on Peter's t-shirt.

answer: Peter has just killed someone with a gun, and the blood on his t-shirt is from the victim.

answer: He has just shot a man dead.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: Peter wonders if he's made a mistake after shooting a man dead in his home. He walks around the home and looks at the man's belongings, particularly at pictures of the man's daughters. This isn't the first murder Peter has committed; he also murdered his father. As he's preparing to leave, he hears sirens, and realizes someone must have heard the gunshot and called the police.

answer: Peter is a man who has just killed a man in his home. He is now trying to clean up the mess and figure out what to do next.

text: This summary doesn't cover all the important details that would be needed to be included for a strong summary. Additional details need to be added.

refinement: Peter is a man who has just killed a man in his home. He tries to clean up while looking around the house, feeling a bit of remorse. Peter then decides to leave the home when he hears sirens.

answer: Peter shoots a man in the head and then cleans up the blood. He then goes to the kitchen and makes tea. He then goes to the living room and finds a picture of the man's daughters. He then leaves the house.

answer: Peter shoots a man in his own home, then takes his coat and car keys before fleeing the scene. Police soon arrive, but Peter manages to escape.


text:
	Small crystalline droplets fell gently into the palm of his hand. The faint sunlight glinted off each one, creating a kaleidoscope of color that only he could see. His eyes turned, the blue in them growing brighter with each drop that fell. He looked into his cupped hand and saw the small puddle that had started to form. The water continued to fall gently and slowly in the soft morning breeze. He exhaled deeply, his breathing forming a cloud in front of him and disturbing the icicle that provided the small bit of water he put appreciately to his dry and cracked lips. He sighed with relief, another cloud of breath came before him.
	His eyes came closer to the triangle piece of frozen moisture that was before him. He saw his reflection in the clear crystal structure and watched as his own face rolled down the side of the ice with each drop of water that fell. He stepped back again, his foot crunching on the snow that was behind him. His large boots keeping him steady on the slippery road as he walked away from the squat, abandoned store he had found. The sun grew higher in the sky, making the ground a blinding white color. The man looked again at the abandoned store. The sign above the store was faded and unreadable, the once red paint peeling off and revealing the cracked and frozen wood underneath.
	The man looked down at his hands again; nearly frozen in his thin gloves. He rubbed his hands together in a fruitless attempt to warm. He crossed his arms once again and stepped tentatively towards the three small steps that led to the already open door. He peered inside the dark one room store and saw nothing but dust and empty cans. The floorboards creaked loudly under his large feet as he continued walking forward. He kicked an empty can aside and heard as it hit the rotted wall with a large clang before rolling down the slanted floor towards the back of the room.
	Dusty shelves lined the shoppe and nothing occupied any of them. The man walked up and down every shelf, his eyes ever vigilant for a morsel of food. His frozen hands twisted together as he grew impatient and disappointed. He finally came to the end of the last row and found himself face to face with a green door. The door seemed new, as though it had never been a part of this frozen wasteland and didn’t have to endure what the rest of the empty shop did.
	He approached the door warily. He hadn’t seen anything that bright of a color in years. The only color out there was white, the endless white fields of snow and ice. He outstretched his right hand, the thin glove brushing the rough wooden door, hardly believing it existed. He moved his hand down the door until he found the cold doorknob. He twisted it gently and the door opened easily. He stepped forward and peered into the room and what he saw he didn’t believe: the room was brightly lit with a lamp in the center of the room. The walls were painted a dark brown color and the carpeted floor was tan and smelled clean. The man walked through the door and onto the soft carpet. Once inside, the door behind him closed with a quiet click. The man looked back for a second and started to panic, then he realized he was warm.
	He quickly forgot about the now locked door that was behind him and started to slowly remove each boot, first the left, then the right. Then he did the same with his gloves. Then his hat. And finally his coat. He lay them all on the carpet in a pile and continued walking towards the lamp in the center. He felt every fiber of the carpet as his calloused feet stepped gingerly on it. He hadn’t seen anything like this is years and could hardly believe it was true.
	The lamp sat in the exact center of the square room. The man reached it in a few easy strides. He stared at it, looked at it from all angles. No chord attached it to an outlet and no knob or string showed where to turn it off. But the man wasn’t worried about turning it off. He had lived in the dark too long and the only light he had seen was the blinding light of the fading sun on the snow; a sun which grew dimmer every day and a snow which grew colder.
	He removed the red lamp shade that covered the fluorescent bulb. He put his hands closer to the light and felt relief as the heat warmed them, a warmth he had not felt in a long time. He reached his hands closer until they were just centimeters from the bulb, soaking up the warmth, fearing that at any moment he would wake up and it would be gone.
	“It won’t leave,” the man turned around and saw a woman behind him. She was beautiful, red lips and red hair. Her skin a porcelain white and her cheeks a bright pink. She wore a skin tight black dress that barely covered her knee and her shoes were tall black heels, impossible for walking in the snow.
	The man stuttered. He hadn’t spoke to another person in a long time, let alone a beautiful woman.
	“Don’t be shy,” she said slyly and she walked forward, her hips swaying slowly and a smile creeping onto her beautiful face. “I’m here to help you.” She reached her hand up and pressed it on his unshaven face. Her eyes were a dark brown and stared deeply into his light blue ones as she leaned in closer and kissed him roughly on his chapped lips. He closed his eyes and relished it, enjoyed the taste of her lips and tongue on his.
	She pulled away slowly. “There, isn’t that better.” The man felt tired. He had never felt this tired in his life. He sat slowly next to the lamp and watched through watery eyes as the woman turned off the light and walked away through the green door.
	“Where are you going?” the man asked, his voice hoarse and rough from not speaking for years.
	“I’ll be back later,” she said. Then she turned and walked into the frozen wasteland.
	The man sat on the floor of the old shop, staring at the dilapidated green door and leaning against the broken lamp that had once warmed the family that lived there. He sat there and weeped as he waited for the woman to return, his hands and feet freezing quickly and turning a dark grey and black. The man didn't move for three days, watching, waiting, and freezing.

title: Alone

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the man's name?

answer: The man's name is never mentioned.

answer: The story doesn't mention the man's name.

answer: No answer

answer: He is referred to as "the man."

answer: It's not mentioned.

answer: The man's name is never mentioned.

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the story's setting?

answer: The story begins with the narrator taking a trek through the cold snowfields and trying to find food in an ice-covered world. The man comes across an abandoned store and finds a lamp that generates heat and light. Realizing he can make it through the night by using the lamp, he rushes to remove his glove, boots, hat, coat, and tear the shade off of the lamp. He hugs the lamp to stop him from feeling the cold, but the lamp suddenly goes off. He sits there and freezes for three days until the lamp re-ignites itself, and he embraces it some more. The lamp turns off once more, just as a beautiful woman enters the room; she tells him she'll return after a while, but freezes to death waiting for her to re-emerge.

text: The answer does not directly highlight the story's setting; instead, it summarizes the entire story itself. This should be rewritten.

refinement: The story's setting is a frozen wasteland, an abandoned store, and a dark, warm room with a lamp.

answer: The story begins with the narrator taking a trek through the cold snowfields and trying to find food in an ice-covered world. The man comes across an abandoned store and finds a lamp that generates heat and light. Realizing he can make it through the night by using the lamp, he rushes to remove his glove, boots, hat, coat, and tear the shade off of the lamp. He hugs the lamp to stop him from feeling the cold. When the light bulb went out suddenly, it became so cold that the man's hands and feet began to show signs of frostbite. Eventually, he dies waiting for the woman to return.

answer: The story's setting is a frozen wasteland. The man is on a road that leads to a squat, abandoned store. The man walks into the store and finds a lamp. He then sees a beautiful woman. The woman walks away and leaves the man to die.

text: The model should remove the extra details about the beautiful woman. This is not relevant to the question.

refinement: The story's setting is a frozen wasteland. The man is on a road that leads to a squat, abandoned store. The man walks into the store and finds a lamp.

answer: The setting is a snow-covered road, an old shop that seems mysteriously abandoned, and a lamp.

answer: The story's setting is a frozen wasteland. The man is on a road that leads to a squat, abandoned store. The man walks into the store and finds a lamp. He then sees a beautiful woman. The woman walks away and leaves the man to freeze to death.

answer: The story takes place in a frozen wasteland. The man walks through a field of snow and ice and finds an abandoned store. The store has dust and empty cans. The man walks through the door and into a room that is brightly lit. He takes off his gloves and hat, and then his coat. He is warm for the first time in years. The woman in the room kisses him and then leaves.

text: Half of the details in the answer have nothing to do with the story's setting. It gives a summary of the story instead. This should be corrected.

refinement: The story takes place in a frozen wasteland. The man walks through a field of snow and ice and finds an abandoned store and finds a dark, warm room with a lamp.

answer: The setting is a snow-covered road, an old shop, and a lamp.

answer: The story takes place in a frozen wasteland. The man walks through a field of snow and ice and finds an abandoned store. The store has dust and empty cans. The man walks through the door and into a room that is brightly lit. He takes off his gloves and hat, and then his coat. He is warm for the first time in years. The woman in the room kisses him and then leaves. The man stays in the room for three days, waiting for the woman to return.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the man's relationship with the beautiful woman?

answer: The man has not seen anything or anyone new in years. When he arrives at the old shop, he sees a beautiful woman. He feels energized by her company and the energy she seems to radiate in the otherwise unlivable cold. The man is enchanted by her beauty and takes her hands in his. Later, they kiss. The man keeps on waiting for the woman to come back but after three days of freezing, his fingers and feet turn black and crawl.

text: Most of the details in the answer are incorrect. It should be written according to the information presented in the story.

refinement: The man has not seen anything or anyone new in years. While at the old shop, a beautiful woman appears. The woman spoke briefly to him, teased him, and kissed his chapped lips. Shortly after the kiss, the man felt tired and watched through watery eyes as the woman left the room, promising him she would return, turned off the lights, and disappeared into the frozen wasteland. The man waited for three days for her return as he sat next to the lamp, freezing to death.

answer: In the story, the man comes across a beautiful woman that helps him initially by getting him warm from his freezing hands and feet. He kisses the woman on her lips, appreciating the taste of her. However, this makes the man very tired. He soon falls asleep. The woman leaves mysteriously, having not answered him when he called her. The man waits days, seemingly frozen in time and space, hoping the woman will reopen the green door and come back to him.

text:
-According to the story, it was the woman who kissed him. The model should consider writing it this way.
-Also, the story doesn't say the man called after the woman, and she didn't answer him. The model should correct this inaccuracy.
-It also doesn't say that the man fell asleep. This should be corrected.
-The story doesn't say the woman helped the man initially by getting him warm from his freezing hands and feet. This is inaccurate as well and should be rewritten.

refinement: In the story, the man comes across a beautiful woman in the warm room. The woman kisses him on his lips, and the man appreciates her taste. However, this makes him very tired. The woman switches off the light in the room and promises to return before leaving. The man waits days, seemingly frozen in time and space, hoping the woman will reopen the green door and come back to him.

answer: The man is desperate for food and sees a light in the abandoned store. He is surprised to find a warm room and a beautiful woman inside. She offers to help him and kisses him. He is too tired to move, and she leaves the room. He waits for her to return, but she doesn't.

answer: The man had not seen another person in a long time. He was excited to see the woman, and he was mesmerized by her beauty. He was also shy, but she told him not to be. He enjoyed the taste of her lips and tongue. The woman kissed him roughly on his chapped lips and left. He was waiting for her to return.

text: The story doesn't say that the woman kissed the man roughly on his lips. The model should consider correcting this inaccuracy.

refinement: The man had not seen another person in a long time. He was excited to see the woman, and he was mesmerized by her beauty. He was also shy, but she told him not to be. He enjoyed the taste of her lips and tongue. The woman kissed him on his chapped lips, turned off the light, and left. He was waiting for her to return.

text: The model should consider rearranging the points more logically.

refinement: The man had not seen another person in a long time. He was excited to see the woman, and he was mesmerized by her beauty. He was also shy, but she told him not to be. The woman kissed him on his chapped lips, and he enjoyed the taste of her lips and tongue. After, she turned off the light in the room and left. He waited for her to return for days, but she didn't.

answer: The man is desperate for food and sees a light in the abandoned store. He is surprised to find a warm room and a beautiful woman inside. She offers to help him and kisses him. He is too tired to move, and she leaves the room. He waits for her to return, but she doesn't. The man is devastated when she doesn't return.

answer: In the story, the man comes across a beautiful woman that helps him initially by getting him warm from his freezing hands and feet. He had gone days without physical contact so to savor the moment, he kisses the woman on her lips, appreciating the taste of her. However, this makes the man very tired. He soon falls asleep. The woman leaves mysteriously, having not answered him when he called her. The man waits days, seemingly frozen in time and space, hoping the woman will reopen the green door and come back to him.

answer: He has not seen anything or anyone new in years. When he arrives at the old shop, he sees a beautiful woman. He feels energized by her company and the energy she seems to radiate in the otherwise unlivable cold. The man is enchanted by her beauty and takes her hands in his. Later, they kiss. The man keeps on waiting for the woman to come back but after three days of freezing, his fingers and feet turn black and he finally dies.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the man?

answer: The man is a traveler who has been walking for a long time. He is lost in a winter wasteland with no food or shelter. He is starving and freezing. He finds an abandoned shop and is amazed to find a lamp that is still lit. He sits next to it, warming his hands and feet. He sees a woman and they kiss. The woman leaves and the man freezes to death.

answer: The man is a survivor of a global catastrophe. He is on his last legs and has been living in the cold for a long time. He has been looking for food in an abandoned store, but he has not found anything to eat. He was excited when he saw the bright light emanating from a room in the store. He was even more excited when he saw a beautiful woman in the room. He was so excited that he forgot about the door behind him and took off his coat, gloves, hat, and boots. He sat there waiting for the woman to return, but she never did. He froze to death.

text:
-The story does not mention any global catastrophe, so the first sentence is inaccurate and made up.
-The story didn't indicate that the man was more excited to see the beautiful woman in the room. The answer is wrong.
-It also doesn't say that his excitement seeing the woman led him to forget about the door behind him and take off his gloves, hat, and boot.
The model should correct all these inaccuracies.

refinement: The man is a traveler looking for food in an abandoned store but doesn't find anything to eat. He was excited when he saw a bright light emanating from a room in the store and entered to get some warmth. He took off his coat, gloves, hat, and boots to enjoy the heat. Then, he encountered a beautiful woman who kissed him and promised to return. He sat there waiting for her return, but she never did. He froze to death.

answer: He is a man left alone wandering for over a year to the frozen wasteland to find food. He found an abandoned house and felt warmer than he had done in years.  He felt hopeful of finding food. He approached the door and opened it, finding a room that is brightly lit and warmer than any room he'd felt in over a year. There is no food in the room. He remembered the woman walking away through the open green door. He waited for her to return.

text: The model should consider rewriting the whole answer for clarity and accuracy.

refinement: The man is a traveler, alone in a frozen wasteland, looking for food in an abandoned store but doesn't find anything to eat. He was excited when he saw a bright light emanating from a room in the store and entered to get some warmth that he hadn't felt in years. He took off his coat, gloves, hat, and boots to enjoy the heat. Then, he encountered a beautiful woman who kissed him and promised to return. He sat there waiting for her return, but she never did. He froze to death.

answer: The man can't see and can't hear properly, and his sense of smell is diminished, but he found a store that was abandoned and barren inside. He saw a lamp in the centre of one of the rooms which he noted had no chord and no knob or string for switching it off and on. The lamp gave off the only illumination in the building. He was looking for food and had jammed his hands inside the shop's windows in an effort to find something. He couldn't move due to the cold. It is implied that the man had been traveling for a long time and that he has grown used to living in isolation.

text: The answer is inaccurately and poorly written and should be rewritten.

refinement: The man is a traveler who has been walking for a long time. He is lost in a winter wasteland with no food or shelter. He is starving and freezing. He finds an abandoned shop that was barren inside and is amazed to see a lamp that is still lit. The lamp gave off the only illumination in the building. He sits next to it, warming his hands and feet. He later sees a woman, and they kiss. The woman leaves, and the man freezes to death.

answer: He is a man left alone wandering for over a year around the frozen wasteland to find food. He found an abandoned house and felt warmer than he had done in years. He felt hopeful of finding food. He approached the door and opened it, finding a room that is brightly lit and warmer than any room he'd felt in over a year. Unfortunately, there is no food in the room. He remembered the woman walking away through the open green door. He waited for her to return.

answer: The man is a survivor of a global catastrophe. He is on his last legs and has been living in the cold for a long time. He has been looking for food in an abandoned store, but he has not found anything to eat. He was excited when he saw the bright light emanating from a room in the store. He was even more excited when he saw a beautiful woman in the room. He was so excited that he forgot about the door behind him and took off his coat, gloves, hat, and boots. He sat there waiting for the woman to return, but she never did. He froze to death.

answer: The man can't see and can't hear properly, and his sense of smell is diminished. He found a store that was abandoned and barren inside. He saw a lamp in the centre of one of the rooms which he noted had no chord and no knob or string for switching it off and on. The lamp gave off the only illumination in the building. He was looking for food and had jammed his hands inside the shop's windows in an effort to find something. He couldn't move due to the cold.


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_THE WOUND_ (Xhosa: [1] ) is a 2017 South African drama film directed by John Trengove.[2] It was screened in the World Cinema Dramatic Competition at the 2017 Sundance Film Festival[3] and the Panorama section of the 67th Berlin International Film Festival.[4] The film opened the Tel Aviv International LGBT Film Festival 2017.[5] It was selected as the South African entry for the Best Foreign Language Film at the 90th Academy Awards,[6][7] making the December shortlist.[8]

Plot

The story tracks a closeted relationship between two men in the context of the Xhosa initiation ritual of _Ulwaluko_.[9][10] Xolani, a factory worker, joins the men of his community at the annual ceremony in the mountains of Eastern Cape. In addition to serving as a mentor to the initaties, Xolani looks forward to the event as it provides him the opportunity to reestablish his sexual and romantic relationship with Vija. When Xolani is assigned to be the mentor of Kwanda, a young man from Johannesburg, he quickly realizes that Kwanda is also gay, and Kwanda soon realizes the nature of the relationship between Vija and Xolani. Tensions soon emerge between the three.[11]

Cast

-   Nakhane as Xolani
-   Bongile Mantsai as Vija
-   Niza Jay Ncoyini as Kwanda
-   Siphosethu “Seth Singer” Ngcetane as Nkosi
-   Loyiso Lloyd N Ngqayana as Vija's Initiate
-   Sibabalwe Esbie Ngqayana as Zuko
-   Halalisani Bradley Cebekhulu as Lukas
-   Inga Qwede as Ncedo

Production

Inspiration for _The Wound_ came after director John Trengove read _A Man Who is Not a Man_, a novel by Thando Mgqolozana on the topic of the Xhosa initiation ceremony.[12] Trengove wished to challenge the notion that homosexuality was a product of western culture that posed a threat to traditional African culture.[13] The film received funding from the National Film and Video Foundation.[14] Cultural experts were consulted to ensure the authenticity of the material.[15]

Reception

On review aggregator Rotten Tomatoes, the film holds an approval rating of 89%, based on 44 reviews with an average rating of 7.3/10. The website's critical consensus reads, “_The Wound_ uses its complex, timely story as effective grist for a thought-provoking exploration of the human dynamic.”[16] Metacritic gives the film a weighted average score of 80 out of 100, based on 14 critics, indicating “generally favorable reviews”.[17]

_Inxeba_ received 19 awards at 44 festivals worldwide; received eight South African Film and Television Awards (Safta) nominations, including Best Actor, Best Directing and Best Film; and was short-listed for an Oscar in the Best Foreign Language Film category.[18][19]

Controversy

The film has been accused of cultural insensitivity because it portrays secretive initiation rituals. However, other media covering the same topic, like Nelson Mandela's _Long Walk to Freedom_, have not received similar criticism, leading to accusations that complaints about the film are instead motivated by homophobia.[20][21][22]

A day after the film's release in South Africa, cinemas in the Eastern Cape province were forced to cancel screenings of the film and offer refunds because of protests, intimidation and vandalism. Nu Metro Cinemas subsequently cancelled screenings countrywide, while Ster-Kinekor continued to show it outside of the Eastern Cape. The film's producers filed complaints with the Human Rights Commission and the Commission for Gender Equality over threats and violence.[23][24] Crew and cast received death threats and were forced to go into hiding.[25]

Reclassification

The film was initially classified as 16LS by South Africa's Film and Publication Board (FPB), but was later reclassified as X18 by the FPB's Appeal Tribunal after complaints by the Congress of Traditional Leaders of South Africa and other cultural and Christian organisations. X18 is the rating reserved for hardcore pornography, although Inxeba contains none, and meant that distribution was limited to premises licensed to show pornography, resulting in the film's removal from all South African cinemas.[26][27][28] The Democratic Alliance criticised the decision of the Appeal Tribunal, characterising it as “nothing short of censorship” by “patriarchs and homophobes”.[29] FPB classifiers themselves have concluded that the Appeal Tribunal's rating amounted to unlawful censorship based on homophobia.[30][31]

Urucu Media, the producers of _Inxeba_, and the SA Screen Federation intended to challenge the film's X18 rating in court, on the basis that they were denied an opportunity to make representation to the Tribunal, and that the Appeal Tribunal's decision is incompatible with the principles of the Constitution of the Republic of South Africa.[32][33]

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title: The Wound (2017 film)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who directed the film?

answer: John Trengove

answer: John Trengove directed The Wound.

text: "The Wound." - this may seem confusing without proper context. Use "the film"

answer: John Trengove.

answer: John Trengove

answer: John Trengove directed the film.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who are the main characters?

answer: Xolani, vija, and kwanda.

text: Use capital letters for the names "vija" and "kwanda"

answer: Xolani - a factory worker, Vija - gay, and Kwanda - unwittingly gay.

answer: The main characters are Xolani, Vija, Kwanda, and Nkosi.

text: "Nkosi" - is more likely a supporting character

refinement: The main characters are Xolani, Vija, and Kwanda.

answer: The main characters are Xolani, Vija, Kwanda, and Nkosi.

text: "Nkosi" - is more likely a supporting character

refinement: The main characters are Xolani, Vija, and Kwanda.

answer: Xolani, Vija, and Kwanda

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What ritual does the story follow?

answer: The initiation ritual of Ulwaluko.

answer: Ulwaluko, a Xhosa initiation ritual

answer: The story's plot follows the Xhosa initiation ritual of Ulwaluko.

text: "The story's plot follows the Xhosa initiation ritual of Ulwaluko." - remove "plot"

refinement: The story follows the Xhosa initiation ritual of Ulwaluko.

answer: The film follows the initiation ritual of Ulwaluko.

answer: Ulwaluko, the Xhosa procedure for initation into manhood in Eastern Cape

text: "initation" - correct the spelling to "initiation"

refinement: Ulwaluko, the Xhosa procedure for initiation into manhood in Eastern Cape

text: Remove "in Eastern Cape"

refinement: Ulwaluko, the Xhosa procedure for initiation into manhood.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How was the movie received?

answer: It received positive reviews from critics and was nominated for many awards, but due to threats of violence and an appeal to reclassify the film as X18, it had to be pulled from many theaters

text: Add a period to end the sentence.

refinement: It received positive reviews from critics and was nominated for many awards, but due to threats of violence and an appeal to reclassify the film as X18, it had to be pulled from many theaters.

answer: According to Rotten Tomatoes, the film holds an approval rating of 89% based on 44 reviews. Metacritic gave the film a weighted average score of 80 out of 100.

answer: On review aggregator Rotten Tomatoes, the film has a 90% approval rating. Metacritic gives the film a weighted average score of 80 out of 100, indicating "generally favorable reviews."

text: "90% approval rating" - is inaccurate. The real score is 89%

refinement: On review aggregator Rotten Tomatoes, the film has an 89% approval rating. Metacritic gives the film a weighted average score of 80 out of 100, indicating "generally favorable reviews."

answer: The movie received mostly favorable reviews and was in the shortlist for an Oscar in the Best Foreign Language Film category. It faced criticism for cultural insensitivity, but also faced accusations of being censored based on homophobia.

answer: _The Wound_ has received favorable reviews, garnering a 89% approval rating on Rotten Tomatoes. It was shortlisted for an Oscar in the Best Foreign Language Film category. The film was initially classified as 16LS by South Africa's Film and Publication Board (FPB), but was reclassified as X18 after complaints by Congress of Traditional Leaders of South Africa and other cultural and Christian organisations. The Democratic Alliance has criticised the decision of the Appeal Tribunal.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: The Wound is a 2017 South African drama film directed by John Trengove. The story framework of these film characters is based around Xhosa initiation rituals.

text: "The story framework of these film characters is based around Xhosa initiation rituals." - fails to mention that the characters are gay, which is central to the plot.

refinement: The Wound is a 2017 South African drama film directed by John Trengove. The story framework of these film characters is based around Xhosa initiation rituals, but with a gay romance love triangle twist.

answer: The Wound is a 2017 South African drama film about a closeted relationship between two men amidst the Xhosa initiation ritual of Ulwaluko. After being assigned to mentor Kwanda, a young man from Johannesburg, Xolani soon realizes that Kwanda is also gay. Tensions soon arise between the three and the film has been met with criticism and censorship due to cultural insensitivity. The film has received 19 awards worldwide and eight nominations at South Africa's Safta awards but it was reclassified to an adults-only rating by the Film and Publication Board's Appeal Tribunal meaning exhibition was limited to specific venues.

text: Went over the 2-sentence summary requirement. Merge and delete some sentences.

refinement: The Wound is a 2017 South African drama film about a closeted relationship between two men amidst the Xhosa initiation ritual of Ulwaluko and the arrival of a younger gay man to the equation, causing tension between the three. Despite receiving 19 awards worldwide and eight nominations at South Africa's Safta awards, the film has been met with criticism and censorship due to cultural insensitivity and was reclassified to an adults-only rating by the Film and Publication Board's Appeal Tribunal meaning exhibition was limited to specific venues.

answer: "The Wound" is a 2017 South African film that focuses on a closeted relationship between two men. Despite good critical reviews and earning the cultural reliability of people consulted to ensure authenticity, the film's X18 rating from the government due to homophobia has restricted public viewings.

answer: __The Wound_ is a 2017 South African drama film about the relationship between two men, Xolani and Vija, who are attending the Xhosa initiation ceremony of Ulwaluko. Tensions arise with the introduction of Kwanda, a young man from Johannesburg who also identifies as gay. The film's rating was controversially reclassified as pornography by the Appeal Tribunal, restricting its distribution. Critics have accused the film of cultural insensitivity and homophobia.

text: "the relationship between two men, Xolani and Vija, who are attending the Xhosa initiation ceremony of Ulwaluko" - add that they are gay.

refinement: The Wound is a 2017 South African drama film about the closeted relationship between two gay men, Xolani and Vija, who are attending the Xhosa initiation ceremony of Ulwaluko. Tensions arise with the introduction of Kwanda, a young man from Johannesburg who also identifies as gay. The film's rating was controversially reclassified as pornography by the Appeal Tribunal, restricting its distribution. Critics have accused the film of cultural insensitivity and homophobia.

text: Went over the 2-sentence summary requirement. Merge or delete some sentences.

refinement: The Wound is a 2017 South African drama film about the closeted relationship between two men, Xolani and Vija, who are attending the Xhosa initiation ceremony of Ulwaluko, and the tensions that arise with the introduction of Kwanda, a young man who also identifies as gay. The film's rating was controversially reclassified as pornography by the Appeal Tribunal, restricting its distribution, and critics have accused the film of cultural insensitivity and homophobia.

answer: The Wound is a 2017 South African drama film about a closeted relationship between two men in the context of the Xhosa initiation ritual of Ulwaluko. It received positive reviews and many award nominations, but due to threats of violence and an appeal to reclassify its rating as X18, it had to be pulled from many South African theaters.


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His heart skipped a beat as he peered out his tiny, filth ridden window to see Chimera skipping down the street in his direction. She stopped suddenly, directing her gaze towards him; a gentle smile slowly crept across her face as she waved for him to come outside. As he opened his front door he couldn't help wondering how no one else seemed to notice her beauty. Her brilliant blue eyes peered through a soft, pale face framed by waves of golden hair which fell to her fragile shoulders. Chimera grabbed his hand and jerked him back into reality as she took off running towards their favorite spot, a small creek surrounded by tall oak trees. They would sit there for hours talking about whatever it was that came to their minds, he often wondered why no one asked about her, why his parents never noticed his absence, but her melodious voice made him forget all his worries and confusion.

“Everything is so perfect here,” she whispered. “It’s like these trees are a fortress, keeping out all the hate and evil. When you’re here, you know everything is going to be okay.” He agreed quietly and listened to her reminisce about all the good times they had spent beside the winding creek; he wanted her to keep talking forever, because he didn't want her to go. He thought to himself how dreadful of a sound goodbye makes. He hated knowing that such happiness was coming to an end, and that he would have to return to the reality of a busy world that didn't seem to notice him the way she did. She cared about his thoughts and opinions in a way that no one else ever had; she didn't blame him, she just smiled and reminded him that pain doesn't last forever. The problem was that happiness didn’t either, a truth that came crashing down on him in the form of a fist.

“What the fuck is wrong with you, you sick son-of-a-bitch?!” his father screamed as he threw the final punch. He collapsed to the rotting floorboards, trying his best to hold it in, to keep the memories out. He didn't want to remember the reason behind his father’s loathing; he didn't want to go back to those after school “tutoring sessions”. He waited for the door to slam before wiping the blood from his face and pulling himself off of the floor. He tried to go back to his fortress, to be with Chimera, but he couldn’t. Instead he went back to a windowless classroom, to be with Mister Keres.

title: Freedom Doesn't Last Forever

question: Why did the main character's heart skip a beat?

answer: He notices Chimera skipping down the street, and finds her beautiful

text: Missing fullstop.

refinement: He notices Chimera skipping down the street, and finds her beautiful.

answer: He was almost visited by Chimera, someone special to him who makes him forget about his worries. Seeing her lead to him remembering all the good times they shared together, before everything came crashing down. Before his father hit him and the happy memories were tainted.

answer: The main character's heart skipped a beat because he saw the girl he loved - Chimera - walking down the street towards him, happy and smiling, reminding him of the wonderful moments they shared together. Soon after, however, reality pours back in as the main character witnesses his own father throwing a fist in his face, forcing him to remember the abuse he endured from the man.

question: Who do the brilliant blue eyes belong to?

answer: The blue eyes belong to Chimera.

answer: Chimera

answer: Chimera has bright blue eyes, which belong to her.

text: It is wrongly stated that she has "bright blue eyes".

question: How is the main character's relationship with their father?

answer: It sounds very abusive. His father beats and berates him in the final paragraph.

answer: The main character's relationship with their father is strained as they have resorted to pain and violence to cope.

text: Only the father resorts to violence.

refinement: The main character's relationship with their father is strained as the father has resorted to pain and violence.

answer: The main character's relationship with their father is strained and filled with hate and violence. The father loves to hit and scream, anytime he gets the chance. The main character knows he can never escape from his dad's abuse and tries to keep his relationship with his only friend, Chimera, alive. Even when that isn't possible, the main character tries to focus on happy memories of them by the creek, because those moments are all that he has left.

question: What happens to Chimera at the end of the story?

answer: That isn't clear, but it seems that she may the main character's imaginary friend.

answer: Tragically, Chimera dies at the end of the story.

text: There is no evidence of what happens to Chimera at the end.

refinement: The story does not mention what happens to Chimera in the end.

answer: Chimera goes back to the creek to goodbye the idea of everything always being okay.

text: There is no evidence of what happens to Chimera at the end.

refinement: The story does not mention what happens to Chimera at the end.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: Freedom does not last forever for the main character in this story; just as happiness does not last forever. After Chimera pulls him away from an abusive home, the main character hesitantly returns to his routine of attending school and has to go back without her. The memory of their happy times together hurts him, making them more precious and bittersweet.

answer: The protagonist has a special connection to a secret haven near a creek, and when he meets someone special there, he wants to stay forever. However, reality soon catches up to him in the form of his abusive father, and he must return to a lonely and bleak existence. Freedom doesn't last forever.

text: It is omitted that the special someone mentioned is Chimera.

refinement: The protagonist has a special connection to a secret haven near a creek, and when he meets his someone special, Chimera, there, he wants to stay forever. However, reality soon catches up to him in the form of his abusive father, and he must return to a lonely and bleak existence. Freedom doesn't last forever.

text: "They would sit there for hours talking about whatever it was that came to their minds." This is evidence that the protagonist has a special connection to the place.

answer: The main character considers the perfect happiness he experiences alongside Chimera at their favorite creek, but she is soon taken from him when his father beats him, leading him back to a lonely life without joy.

answer: In the narrative, the protagonist is deeply attached to his special place by a creek, but when he is attacked by his abusive father, he is forced to lose that happy refuge and go back to life as usual; a life without joy or escape.

text: It is omitted that the protagonist likes going to the creek with Chimera.

refinement: In the narrative, the protagonist is deeply attached to his special place by a creek. He likes going there with Chimera, the girl he loves, but when he is attacked by his abusive father, he is forced to lose that happy refuge and go back to life as usual; a life without joy or escape.

answer: The boy in this story leaves his home to go to his fortress near a small creek with Chimera, who may be his imaginary friend. He believes she is the only one who cares about his thoughts and opinions. He hates saying goodbye to her, knowing that the happiness ends and reality comes back. At home in reality, his father beats him and he is sent to after school "tutoring sessions" instead of going to the fortress with Chimera.

text: It is wrongly stated that Chimera is his imaginary friend.

refinement: The boy in this story leaves his home to go to his fortress near a small creek with Chimera, with who he is in love with. He believes she is the only one who cares about his thoughts and opinions. He hates saying goodbye to her, knowing that the happiness ends and reality comes back. At home in reality, his father beats him and he is sent to after school "tutoring sessions" instead of going to the fortress with Chimera.

answer: The protagonist is stuck in a miserable world, longing for the care and safety he had with Chimera by a creek near their homes. But everything changes, and his happiness is shattered when his father catches him and brutally beats him. He is unable to return to his sanctuary with her and instead falls back into the daily monotony of school.


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Hypothermia. Happily, not a single racer went home with this as a prize on Saturday. With a forcast that called for both wind, rain, sleet and more obviously, bitter cold, we had a wonderous BC Cup #5 at the South Surrey bike park. 106 racers graced the course with excellent results, and awesome prizes. Tiny bags of campfire were provided by Poler Stuffto ensure full functioning fingers.

You can see photos at the Daryl-Evans Flickr here, as well as some choice shots from Doug Bronsat his Flickr here.

The first race of the day was our 10:30 start: Cat ¾ Men, Citizen Men, and Citizen Women. As the rain had yet to start, the racers contended simply with the strong headwind off the road start. This years course featured more swtichbacks, a flyover at the new SCORE park and a nice run through the rhythm section of the bike park. The Cat ¾ race provided early action, with the group switching leaders and chase for the first 3 laps. The Citizen racers were not far behind. Cat ¾ contenders Matt Hornland (Mighty), Brett Wakefield (Local Ride), Jacob Hartsoch (BFF), Paul McCloskey (Mighty) and David Morrissey (Escape Velocity) were the top 5, with top Citizen Men Rob Parkin, Garry Bone, Andrew Touvinen, James Ingham and Brian Reguly  and our three Citizen Women, Danielle Stevens, June Rosemary and Donna-Marie Tarver getting some R&B Beers and Rocanini Coffee. Our Mens U17 riders shredded as well, with Carsten Lapointe (Zimich Coaching) coming in 1st ahead of Pete Whalen (Local Ride) – they didn’t get beer.

Master ¾ Men took to the course with the largest field of the day, as well as the first of the freezing rain. 31 racers battled on the slippery course while Matt Barber and Nick Berry added color commentary and hot-dog handups. Our top five were James Cameron (Pro City), Simon Pulfrey, John Irvine (HR Block), Tyler Dumont (Physiomoves) and David Newbeck – top 3 took home some great stuff from Genuine Innovations, Lezyne, CatEye and RaceFace. Not to mention the beer and coffee.

Open Women and Masters Women were battling it out as well during the 12 o’clock callup, with a bit smaller field. Open Women finished with a top 3 of  Jean-Ann Berkenpas (Xprezo), Sandra Walter (Local Ride) and Joele Guynup (Condo/Marin Bikes) and our Women’s Masters came in with Glenowyn Carlson (Team Alliance) taking first and Barbara Zimich down 1 lap. Gore and Brodie provided additional prizes!

Our final event, Masters ½ and Elite ½ came up as the rain was at it’s worst – 60 minutes of suffering at the hands of mother nature and Jeff Hanninen’s wicked course design.

Our Masters ½ had a commanding field of 15, with our usual suspects commanding attention as they tore apart the course. In the top 5 you can see most of your BC Cup leaders vying for those all-important points. In order of finish: Bob Welbourn (Cannondale/CX West), Kim Steed (Steed Cycles), Derek Shiers, David Kvick (Rocky Mountain/Different Bikes), Jascon Fluckiger (Daryl Evans).

A smaller field, 5 elites started ahead of the Masters, with Kevin Noiles (Sportique) taking theCima Coppi handmade arm warmers as a holeshot prize; Kevin Calhoun (Rocky Mountain) looked strong though he had to be tired from bringing all the amazing swag from Cycles Lambert to the race for our winners. As the course wore on, Drew MacKenzie was steady but succumbed to the effects of a running race the day before (I swear running is bad for you), though he’s got bigger designs on SSCXWC San Fran. Sven Sturm (TREK Red Truck) kept the smile on, with Mike Berkenpas (Local Ride) looking large and in charge on the rhythm section. Noiles took the day with a powerful showing, Sturm coming second and Berkenpas coming in 3rd.

The day ended with some BBQ servings from Nick Berry, and the Brodie Romax frame/fork drawprize going to Brent Hambleton.

Thank you again to everyone that came out, to the volunteers from Darly-Evans and Mighty Riders and we hope to see you out at CX Provincials Nov 27th, as well as the BC Cup Finals on Dec. 3rd.

If you are interested in having Matt Barber MC your upcoming race, contact me at matthew@cantileverandpress.com

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the passage say about racing categories?

answer: The South Surrey Bike Park hosted the BC Cup #5. Dary-Evans and Mighty Riders provided excellent results and awesome prizes. The first race of the day was a Cat ¾ men category, Cat ¾. There was also a Citizen men and women category. Another category was Master ¾ men, The Open Women and Master Women category had a smaller field. The day ended with the Masters ½ and Elite ½ race,

answer: Cat ¾ men's race, citizen men's and women's, and master ¾ men's race took place at the South Surrey bike park. Cat ¾ races were said to have superstarts from the road start. Citizen racers stuck to a headwind that started by the road as the rain had yet to finally come. Battling on the slippery course was the Open and Masters Women. Hoping to catch a bit of the category glory was the Elite and Master rider.

text: The response inaccurately mentions that on the slippery course was the Open and Masters Women, however it was Master ¾ Men.

refinement: Cat ¾ men's race, citizen men's and women's, and master ¾ men's race took place at the South Surrey bike park. Cat ¾ races were said to have superstarts from the road start. Citizen racers stuck to a headwind that started by the road as the rain had yet to finally come. Battling on the slippery course was the Master ¾ Men. Hoping to catch a bit of the category glory was the Elite and Master rider.

answer: The first race of the day was the 10:30 start: Cat ¾ Men, Citizen Men, and Citizen Women. The next race was the Master ¾ Men, followed by the Open Women and Masters Women. The last race was the Masters ½ and Elite ½. The race categories are Cat ¾ Men, Citizen Men, Citizen Women, Master ¾ Men, Open Women and Masters Women, and Masters ½ and Elite ½.

text: The response mentions each category twice.

refinement: The first race of the day was the 10:30 start: Cat ¾ Men, Citizen Men, and Citizen Women. The next race was the Master ¾ Men, followed by the Open Women and Masters Women. The last race was the Masters ½ and Elite ½.

answer: Race categories include Cat ¾ and Citizen Men and Citizen Women, Master ¾ Men, Open Women and Masters Women, and Masters ½ and Elite ½.

text: The response misses to mention when the different racing categories took place.

refinement: Race categories include the first one of the day: Cat ¾ and Citizen Men and Citizen Women, next was: Master ¾ Men, followed by: Open Women and Masters Women, and the day ended with Masters ½ and Elite ½.

answer: Cat ¾ men's race, citizen men's and women's, and master ¾ men's race took place at the South Surrey bike park.

text: The response misses to mention the categories of: Open Women and Masters Women, and Masters ½ and Elite ½.

refinement: Cat ¾ men's race, citizen men's and women's, master ¾ men's, open Women and masters Women, and Masters ½ and Elite ½. The race took place at the South Surrey bike park.

answer: The South Surrey Bike Park hosted the BC Cup #5. Dary-Evans and Mighty Riders provided excellent results and awesome prizes. The first race of the day was a Cat ¾ men category, Cat ¾. There was also a Citizen men and women category. Third was the Master ¾ men category. The Open Women and Master Women category had a smaller field. The day ended with the Masters ½ and Elite ½ race,

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: The South Surrey Bike Park hosted the BC Cup #5. The first race of the day was a Cat ¾ men's category. There was also a Citizen men and women category. Third was the Master ¾ men category. The Open Women and Master Women category had a smaller field. The day ended with the Masters ½ and Elite ½ race,

answer: The first race of the day was the 10:30 start: Cat ¾ Men, Citizen Men, and Citizen Women. The next race was the Master ¾ Men, followed by the Open Women and Masters Women. The last race was the Masters ½ and Elite ½.

answer: Race categories include Cat ¾ and Citizen Men and Citizen Women, Master ¾ Men, Open Women and Masters Women, and Masters ½ and Elite ½. The race categories are based on age and gender.

text: There is no evidence in the test to suggest that the race categories are based on age and gender.

refinement: Race categories include Cat ¾ and Citizen Men and Citizen Women, Master ¾ Men, Open Women and Masters Women, and Masters ½ and Elite ½.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what the passage says about the race's sponsors.

answer: The race's sponsors are Poler Stuffto for providing the racers with tiny campfire bags, Daryl-Evans for providing photographers and Nick Berry for providing hot dog handups and commentary. The race's sponsors are RaceFace, Genuine Innovations, Lezyne and CatFace. Some other sponsors are Cima Coppi, CYCLE Lambert, Trek, CX West and Cannondale.

text: The response inaccurately mentions "CatFace" instead of CatEye as one of the sponsors.

refinement: The race's sponsors are Poler Stuffto for providing the racers with tiny campfire bags, Daryl-Evans for providing photographers and Nick Berry for providing hot dog handups and commentary. The race's sponsors are RaceFace, Genuine Innovations, Lezyne and CatEye. Some other sponsors are Cima Coppi, CYCLE Lambert, Trek, CX West and Cannondale.

answer: The race's sponsors are Poler Stuffto, Daryl-Evans Flickr, Doug Bronsat, and CatEye. The race's sponsors used GoPro for taking photographs of the course.

text: The response inaccurately mentions using GoPro for photographing the course which is not evidenced in the text. Also inaccurately mentions "Daryl-Evans Flickr" as a sponsor instead of Daryl-Evans.

refinement: The race's sponsors are Poler Stuffto, Daryl-Evans, Doug Bronsat, and CatEye.

answer: The race's sponsors are Poler Stuffto, Daryl-Evans, Doug Bronsat, and RaceFace.

text: The response misses to mention other sponsors.

refinement: The race's sponsors are Poler Stuffto, Daryl-Evans, Doug Bronsat, and RaceFace. Other sponsors included: Genuine Innovations, Lezyne, Cima Coppi and CatEye.

answer: The sponsors are Poler Stuffto for providing the racers with tiny campfire bags, Mighty and Local Ride for providing volunteers, Daryl-Evans for providing photographers, and Nick Berry for providing hot dog handups and commentary. The race's sponsors are RaceFace, Genuine Innovations, Lezyne, Cima Coppi and CatEye.

text: The response inaccurately mentions Local Ride provided volunteers. However, the text only mentions Daryl-Evans and Mighty Riders providing volunteers.

refinement: The sponsors are Poler Stuffto for providing the racers with tiny campfire bags, Mighty Riders for providing volunteers, Daryl-Evans for providing photographers, and Nick Berry for providing hot dog handups and commentary. The race's sponsors are RaceFace, Genuine Innovations, Lezyne, Cima Coppi and CatEye.

answer: The race had sponsors such as Poler Stuffto, Daryl-Evans, and the Brodie Romax frame/fork drawprize. The bike park also provided their services.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: The race had sponsors such as Poler Stuffto, Daryl-Evans, and the Brodie Romax frame/fork drawprize.

answer: The race had sponsors such as Poler Stuffto, Daryl-Evans, and the Brodie Romax frame/fork drawprize. The bike park also provided their services. The race also had sponsors such as Gore and Brodie.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: The race had sponsors such as Poler Stuffto, Daryl-Evans and the Brodie Romax frame/fork drawprize.  The race also had sponsors such as Gore and Brodie.

answer: The race's sponsors used GoPro for photographing the course.

text: The response inaccurately mentions GoPro as a sponsor which is not evidenced in the text.

text: The response misses to provide an adequate answer to the task.

refinement: The race's sponsors include: RaceFace, Genuine Innovations, Lezyne and CatEye. Some other sponsors are Cima Coppi, CYCLE Lambert, Trek, CX West and Cannondale.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the passage say about skateboards?

answer: There is no skateboarder referenced in the passage.

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: The passage does not mention skateboards.

answer: There is no mention of skateboards in the passage.

answer: No answer

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the passage say about the location?

answer: The bike park is located in South Surrey.

answer: The bike park is located in South Surrey. It has a 10:30 start and a 12:00 callup.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: The bike park is located in South Surrey.

answer: South Surrey Bike Park.

answer: South Surrey bike park in British Columbia.

answer: The South Surrey bike park.

answer: The South Surrey of the bike park.

text: Grammar error in the response.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the passage say about a DJ gig?

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: No answer.

answer: The author mentions that the race was hosted by Mighty Riders and Darly-Evans and that Matt Barber was the MC.

text: The response inaccurately mentions the MC of the event which is not the same as a DJ gig. A DJ gig is not mentioned in the passage.

answer: No answer

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answer: No answer


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A Media Research Center staffer says John Boehner is darker-skinned than the new MSNBC host

By  Joan Walsh

April 3, 2013 1:23AM (UTC)

KAREN FINNEY (REUTERS/GUS RUELAS)

Hey, Reince Priebus: Here’s some more top-notch minority outreach from your partners at the right-wing Media Research Center.

MSNBC just announced that Karen Finney, a network political analyst and former communications director of the Democratic National Committee, will host a new weekend show. MRC director of media analysis Tim Graham immediately Tweeted:

  MSNBC touting Karen Finney as another African-American host. Would the average viewer be able to guess that? Or is Boehner a shade more tan?

  — Tim Graham (@TimJGraham) April 2, 2013

Finney is African-American, although MSNBC didn’t particularly “tout” that in its press release; it mentioned that she was the first African-American communications director of the DNC and is a member of the National Association of Black Journalists. I’m not sure what would cause Graham to even muse about her racial bona fides, let alone share his idiocy publicly. When mocked on Twitter, he just dug his hole deeper:

  Judge pic here: tv.msnbc.com/2013/04/02/kar…

  — Tim Graham (@TimJGraham) April 2, 2013

Graham’s buffoonery reminded me of when former Massachusetts Sen. Scott Brown mocked and questioned Sen. Elizabeth Warren’s American Indian background, and when Tucker Carlson accused Barack Obama of exaggerating his “black” accent when speaking to black ministers. “This accent is absurd,” Carlson told Sean Hannity last year. “This is not the way Obama talks. It’s put on, it’s phony.” I observed at the time that there seemed to be an epidemic of white guys ruling on the correct way for other people to identify themselves in ethnic terms. Graham makes it a trend.

In a 2010 Huffington Post piece Finney wrote about being the descendant of slaves on her father's side and Confederate Gen. Robert E. Lee on her mother's side.  Maybe it's too much to ask that Graham inform himself about the biological and cultural diversity of African-Americans. It's not too much to ask, though, that he shut up about his ignorance, but I won't hold my breath.

Joan Walsh

Joan Walsh is the author of "What's the Matter With White People: Finding Our Way in the Next America."

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question: Who will be the new host of a new weekend show?

answer: Karen Finney.

answer: Karen Finney

answer: Karen Finney

answer: Karen Finney will be the new host of a new weekend show on MSNBC.

question: What, according to the author, stands out about Finney?

answer: Finney is African-American.

answer: Finney is African-American.

answer: According to the author, Finney is African-American.

answer: She is an African-American journalist.

question: How does the author believe MSNBC announced Finney is African-American?

answer: The author believes MSNBC announced Finney is African-American by mentioning she was the first African-American communications director of the DNC and is a member of the National Association of Black Journalists.

answer: They shared she is part of the National Association of Black Journalists.

text: They also mentioned that Finney is the first African-American communications director of the DNC.

refinement: They shared she is part of the National Association of Black Journalists, and the first African-American communications director of the DNC.

answer: The author believes that MSNBC announced Finney is African-American by touting her as another African-American host.

text: This answer is a logical feedback loop.

refinement: The author writes that MSNBC mentions that Finney was the first African-American communications director of the DNC, and is a member of the National Association of Black Journalists.

answer: The author believes that MSNBC announced Finney is African-American by mentioning that she was the first African-American communications director of the DNC and is a member of the National Association of Black Journalists.

question: What's the author's main issue?

answer: The author is upset that Tim Graham, director of media analysis for the Media Research Center, is questioning Karen Finney's racial background.

answer: The author's main issue is with the Media Research Center staffer's ignorant comments about Karen Finney's race.

text: The answer should be more specific about the author's criticism.

refinement: The author's main issue is with the Media Research Center staffer's ignorant comments about Karen Finney's race, specifically comments that Tim Graham made about the color of Finney's skin.

answer: Finney's being African-American was questioned on Twitter by Tim Graham due to the light color of her skin, and the author notes that there was a 2010 HUffington Post piece by Finney in 2010 that describes how she is the descendent of slaves on her father's side and US Confederate General Robert E. Lee on her mother's side. There is cultural and biological diversity in African-Americans.

answer: The author's main issue is that Tim Graham is ignorant and racist.

text: The answer is too vague.

refinement: The author's main issue is that Tim Graham made racist comments about the color of Finney's skin.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: Media channel MSNBC announced the addition of Karen Finney to their morning show, noting  she is a member of the National Associations of Black Journalists. Tim Graham tweeted about Finney's lighter skin tone, and the author responds with this article, explaining there is cultural and biological diversity in African-Americans. In particular the author mentions that there was a 2010 HUffington Post piece by Finney in 2010 that describes how she is the descendent of slaves on her father's side and US Confederate General Robert E. Lee on her mother's side. The author also touches on the fact that Tucker Carlson accused President Obama of exaggerating his "black" accent when speaking to black ministers. The author finds this tone in the media to be myopic and small-minded.

answer:
MSNBC announced that Karen Finney, a network political analyst and former communications director of the Democratic National Committee, will host a new weekend show. Tim Graham, director of media analysis for the Media Research Center, Tweeted that Finney is African-American. He also Tweeted a picture of Finney with the caption "Judge pic here: tv.msnbc.com/2013/04/02/kar…".

Joan Walsh, author of "What's the Matter with White People: Finding Our Way in the Next America", wrote a response to Graham's Tweets. She wrote that MSNBC didn't particularly "tout" that Finney was African-American, and that she is a member of the National Association of Black Journalists. She also wrote that Graham's Tweets reminded her of Scott Brown mocking and questioning Elizabeth Warren's American Indian background, and Tucker Carlson accusing Barack Obama of exaggerating his "black" accent when speaking to black ministers.

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MSNBC announced that Karen Finney, a network political analyst and former communications director of the Democratic National Committee, will host a new weekend show. Tim Graham, director of media analysis for the Media Research Center, Tweeted that Finney is African-American.

Joan Walsh, author of "What's the Matter with White People: Finding Our Way in the Next America", wrote a response to Graham's Tweets. She wrote that MSNBC didn't particularly "tout" that Finney was African-American, and that she is a member of the National Association of Black Journalists. She also wrote that Graham's Tweets reminded her of Scott Brown mocking and questioning Elizabeth Warren's American Indian background, and Tucker Carlson accusing Barack Obama of exaggerating his "black" accent when speaking to black ministers.

text: The summary is unclear about what exactly Tim Graham said about Finney.

refinement:
MSNBC announced that Karen Finney, a network political analyst and former communications director of the Democratic National Committee, will host a new weekend show. Tim Graham, director of media analysis for the Media Research Center, tweeted a comment about Finney's skin color, insinuating that she isn't black.

Joan Walsh, author of "What's the Matter with White People: Finding Our Way in the Next America", wrote a response to Graham's Tweets. She wrote that MSNBC didn't particularly "tout" that Finney was African-American, and that she is a member of the National Association of Black Journalists. She also wrote that Graham's Tweets reminded her of Scott Brown mocking and questioning Elizabeth Warren's American Indian background, and Tucker Carlson accusing Barack Obama of exaggerating his "black" accent when speaking to black ministers.

answer: The author criticizes Tim Graham, director of media analysis at the right-wing Media Research Center, for mocking Karen Finney, a new MSNBC host, for being African-American. Graham's comments were based on Finney's race, and he even went so far as to post a picture of her on Twitter to "prove" her race. The author argues that Graham's comments are ignorant and racist, and that he should be ashamed of himself.

answer: Joan Walsh, a writer for Salon, discusses the ignorance of Tim Graham, a director of media analysis for the Media Research Center, who tweeted that Karen Finney, a new MSNBC host, is darker-skinned than John Boehner. Walsh points out that Finney is African-American, and that Graham's tweet is a reflection of his ignorance.

text: The summary is inaccurate about Tim Graham's statement.

refinement: Joan Walsh, a writer for Salon, discusses the ignorance of Tim Graham, a director of media analysis for the Media Research Center, who tweeted a comment about Karen Finney's race and skin color. Walsh points out that Finney is African-American, and that Graham's tweet is a reflection of his ignorance.


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NADINE NASSIB NJEIM (; born 7 February 1984) is a half Lebanese and Tunisian actress and beauty pageant titleholder who was elected Miss Lebanon 2004.[1] She represented her home country in Miss Universe 2005 in Lebanon.

Background

Njeim was born in Beirut to a Lebanese Maronite Christian father, Nassib Njeim, originally from Duris, and a Tunisian muslim mother.[2][3] She married Hady Asmar and together they have two children, a daughter and a son.[4] She divorced Asmar in September 2019.[5]

Post-pageant career

Since passing on her title Miss Lebanon, Njeim has pursued a career in acting, and has been cast in various lead roles for TV series such as _Law_ and _Cello_, Samra, 3eshk El Nesa, Nos Yawm, Al Hayba, Tareeq, Teen Wolf and Khamse w Noss, and she was the first Arab actress nominated to Seoul International Film Festival for the best actress on her acting role in Samra and she reached the final stage with a Russian actress. Talking about her professionalism in acting and films such as _Sorry Mom_.[6]

Social views and controversy

In 2016, Njeim's views on premarital sex and gender equality, expressed in a 2012 interview on Future TV, became controversial.[7] She said, inter alia: “I want women to stay women. If they equate me with a man, I’d feel like a man. I don’t want to. I want to stay a woman.”[8]

In response to the backlash she received, Njeim stated in another interview that she believes the content of the resurfaced clip had been purposely edited to discredit her. She said she supported women's rights and that her message promoted gender equality.[9]

Njeim starred in series one of Al Hayba, but not in seasons 2 and 3 because her role as a woman on the show conformed to gender stereotypes and she wanted her character to be more physically active.[10]

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title: Nadine Nassib Njeim

question: Who is Nadine Nasib Njeim?

answer: Nadine Nassib Njeim is a Lebanese and Tunisian actress and beauty pageant titleholder who was elected Miss Lebanon 2004.

text: NADINE NASSIB NJEIM is a half Lebanese and Tunisian actress and beauty pageant titleholder who was elected Miss Lebanon 2004.

answer: She is a half Lebanese and Tunisian actress and beauty pageant titleholder who was elected Miss Lebanon 2004.

text: NADINE NASSIB NJEIM is a half Lebanese and Tunisian actress and beauty pageant titleholder who was elected Miss Lebanon 2004.

answer: She is a half Lebanese and Tunisian actress. She was also the former Miss Lebanon.

text: NADINE NASSIB NJEIM is a half Lebanese and Tunisian actress and beauty pageant titleholder who was elected Miss Lebanon 2004.

answer: Nadine Nassib Njeim is a Lebanese actress and beauty pageant titleholder who was elected Miss Lebanon 2004.

text: NADINE NASSIB NJEIM is a half Lebanese and Tunisian actress and beauty pageant titleholder who was elected Miss Lebanon 2004.

question: Write a short summary of her family background.

answer: Nadine Nassib Njeim was born to a Lebanese father and Tunisian mother. She is an actress and beauty pageant titleholder who was Miss Lebanon 2004.

text: The question was about her family. The information about her career is superfluous.

refinement: Nadine Nassib Njeim was born to a Lebanese Maronite Christian father and a Tunisian Muslim mother. She married and subsequently divorcedHady Asmar. They have two children, a girl and a boy.

answer: Nadine was born in Beirut to a Lebanese Maronite Christian father and a Tunisian Muslim mother. She married Hady Asmar and they have two children. She divorced Asmar in September 2019.

text: Njeim was born in Beirut to a Lebanese Maronite Christian father, Nassib Njeim, originally from Duris, and a Tunisian muslim mother.[2][3] She married Hady Asmar and together they have two children, a daughter and a son.[4] She divorced Asmar in September 2019.

answer: Nadine was born in Beirut to a Lebanese Maronite Christian father and a Tunisian Muslim mother. She also has two children: a daughter and a son.

text: Grammar correction

refinement: Nadine was born in Beirut to a Lebanese Maronite Christian father and a Tunisian Muslim mother. She has two children: a daughter and a son.

answer: Nadine Nassib Njeim was born in Beirut to a Lebanese Maronite Christian father, Nassib Njeim, originally from Duris, and a Tunisian muslim mother. She married Hady Asmar and together they have two children, a daughter and a son. She divorced Asmar in September 2019.

question: What made her so controversial?

answer: Njeim's views on premarital sex and gender equality, expressed in a 2012 interview on Future TV, became controversial.

text: In 2016, Njeim's views on premarital sex and gender equality, expressed in a 2012 interview on Future TV, became controversial.

answer: Nadine Nassib Njeim's views on premarital sex and gender equality became controversial.

answer: She said that she wanted women to stay women.

text: While correct, the answer does not convey the real reason why NADINE NASSIB NJEIM became so controversial

refinement: Her views on premarital sex and gender equality led to controversy

answer: She had expressed her views on premarital sex and gender equality claiming that she wanted women to stay women and not be equated to a man. After all the backlash she received from the clips that went public, she claimed the clips were edited to make her seem sexist.

question: What has she done since her last pageant competition?

answer: She has pursued a career in acting.

answer: Njeim has pursued a career in acting, and has been cast in various lead roles for TV series such as _Law_ and _Cello_, Samra, 3eshk El Nesa, Nos Yawm, Al Hayba, Tareeq, Teen Wolf and Khamse w Noss, and she was the first Arab actress nominated to Seoul International Film Festival for the best actress on her acting role in Samra and she reached the final stage with a Russian actress. Talking about her professionalism in acting and films such as _Sorry Mom_.[6]

text: This is a straight cut and paste. The last sentence in particular doesn't make sense in the context of the question and is probably a link to the interview.

answer: Nadine Nassib Njeim has pursued a career in acting, and has been cast in various lead roles for TV series. She has also been nominated for awards for her acting.

text: she was the first Arab actress nominated to Seoul International Film Festival for the best actress on her acting role in Samra

answer: She pursued a career in acting.

question: When was she born?

answer: Nadine Nassib Njeim was born on February 7, 1984.

text: NADINE NASSIB NJEIM (; born 7 February 1984)

answer: February 7, 1984

answer: February 7, 1984.

answer: Nadine Nassib Njeim was born on February 7th, 1984.

question: Was she ever married?

answer: Yes, to a man named Hady Asmar but eventually divorced.

text: She married Hady Asmar and together they have two children, a daughter and a son.[4] She divorced Asmar in September 2019.

answer: Njeim was married to Hady Asmar and together they have two children, a daughter and a son.

text: She married Hady Asmar and together they have two children, a daughter and a son.[4] She divorced Asmar in September 2019.

answer: Yes, she was married to Hady Asmar.

text: She married Hady Asmar.

answer: According to the passage, Njeim was married to Hady Asmar, but they have since divorced.

text: She married Hady Asmar and together they have two children, a daughter and a son.[4] She divorced Asmar in September 2019.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: Nadine Nassib Njeim is a half Lebanese and Tunisian actress and beauty pageant titleholder. She was elected Miss Lebanon 2004. She divorced her husband in 2019. She has pursued a career in acting and has been cast in various lead roles for TV series.

text: The controversy she courted is an important part of her story.

refinement: Nadine Nassib Njeim is a half Lebanese and Tunisian actress and beauty pageant titleholder. She was elected Miss Lebanon in 2004. She divorced her husband in 2019. She has pursued a career in acting and has been cast in various lead roles for TV series. She courted controversy when she aired her views on premarital sex and gender equality on TV.

text: There is some repetition that could be avoided for a briefer and better answer to the question.

refinement: Nadine Nassib Njeim is a half Lebanese and Tunisian actress and beauty pageant titleholder elected Miss Lebanon 2004. She has two children from a marriage that ended in divorce. She courted controversy when she aired her views on premarital sex and gender equality on TV.

answer: Nadine Nasib Njeim is a half Lebanese and Tunisian actress. She was also the former Miss Lebanon. She once had a controversy in 2016, when clips had surfaced of her claiming (what seemed to be) sexist comments regarding gender equality. After receiving a lot of backlash for her comments, she made it clear to her critics that the clips were edited to make her seem controversial and that she is an avid supporter of women's rights.

text: The grammar is a bit confusing

refinement: Nadine Nasib Njeim is a half Lebanese and Tunisian actress. She was also the former Miss Lebanon. She once courted controversy. Clips of what seemed to be sexist comments about gender equality surfaced. In response to the backlash, she made it clear that the clips had been edited to make her seem controversial and that she is an avid supporter of women's rights.

answer: Nadine Nassib Njeim is a Lebanese actress and beauty pageant titleholder who was elected Miss Lebanon 2004. She has pursued a career in acting since passing on her title and has been cast in various lead roles for TV series such as Law and Cello, Samra, 3eshk El Nesa, Nos Yawm, Al Hayba, Tareeq, Teen Wolf and Khamse w Noss.

text: The answer tends to less important issues and should rather include her controversial comments

refinement: Nadine Nassib Njeim is a Lebanese actress who was elected Miss Lebanon in 2004. Her views on premarital sex and gender equality led to some controversy. She claimed that the content of the clips which made her appear sexist was edited to discredit her and that she supported women's rights.

answer: Nadine Nassib Njeim is a Lebanese-Tunisian actress and beauty pageant winner who was criticized for her views on premarital sex and gender equality in 2016. However, she has since clarified that she supports women's rights and believes her message promoted gender equality. Njeim has since starred in various TV series, but decided to leave her role in Al Hayba due to the show's gender stereotypes.

text: Njeim starred in series one of Al Hayba, but not in seasons 2 and 3 because her role as a woman on the show conformed to gender stereotypes and she wanted her character to be more physically active.