text:
It's been light for a while. Mid morning. The computer screen turns on, and they play a little game.

On the screen, a pixelated boy. He's lying in a hospital bed, next to a window where the sun lights his face. In the background is the methodic beat of a heart machine, synced by a red light.

A message appears 'Click the mouse'. They click, and at first it doesn't seem the game is responding, but as they click faster, the boy's actions become clear.

He's slowly jerking off under the hospital blankets, and as the player moves, so does he. The heart machine beats quicker in time.

Some stop playing at this point, and the boy is left with a tease, his arm falling back to his side and his mind drifting back into sleep.

Others continue on, curious to where this leads.

The player can hear his breath now as he tries to make the boy come. This game doesn't make it easy though, the designers trying to force a parallel experience.

Click! Click! Click!! Click! BEEAP-BEAP-BEAP! The boy's movement stops, and his heart rate slowly drops. The player too, realizes it is done and waits for his reward for jerking himself off.

The boy on the screen though, just turns softly to one side and falls asleep with a Zzzz, until another tries his hand.

title: A little game

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is playing this computer game?

answer: The player is playing the computer game.

answer: The narrator doesn't say.

answer: It is not clear, however the article to be read implied that the target audience would be homosexual men.

text: There is nothing in the story to imply the game is for homosecual men.

answer: A "they"

text: By the same logic, a better response would be 'A person.'

answer: The player is playing the computer game. The pixelated boy on the screen is simply a figment of the player's imagination, responding to their commands.

text: The boy on the screen is not a figment of the player's imagination, rather a computer generated caracter.

refinement: The player is playing the computer game.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Is this boy watching porn?

answer: It seems the purpose of the game is to make you feel like you're watching porn.

text: The implication is that the aim of the game is to make the character reach climax, but it isn't stated to be pornographic.

answer: Yes, this boy is watching porn on the computer screen.

text: The answer is no.

refinement: No the boy is playing a game with sexual content.

answer: It seems to be the case.

text: The story describes a game, but it is never described as having the same purpose as pornography.

answer: It's not clear if he is watching porn or if he's sleeping.

text: The boy in the game is sleeping, the boy playing the game is awake: this is clear.

text: The game has sexual content but isn't described as being pornographic.

refinement: The game has sexual content, but isn't described as pornography.

answer: Yes

text: The boy isn't watching porn, he's playing a game.

refinement: No, the game is indicated to have sexual content, but is not described as pornography.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: A boy on a screen is jerking off in a hospital bed. Players on the other side of the screen try, one-by-one, to get him to reach orgasm before he falls asleep.

text: It is implied the game has had multiple players, but the story centers around one player's experience.

refinement: A character is a ame is jerking off in a hospital bed. A player on the other side of the screen tries to get him to reach orgasm. The player waits for a reward when he achieves the objective, but the boy in the game falls asleep.

answer: A man is playing a game of wanking off on his laptop. He plays the same game with one boy after another, and they cease to respond.

text: This summary is poorly worded and inaccurate. 'wanking off on his laptop' is untrue, as the players is playing a game.

refinement: A man is playing a game on his laptop with an aim to bring a boy to climax. The player achieves the goal and expects a reward, instead the game character finishes and ceases to respond.

answer: A pixelated boy lying in a hospital bed becomes the object of a player's online game. As they move the mouse, the boy starts jerking off under the blankets. In the end, the boy falls asleep, ready for the next player to begin their manipulation.

answer: In this game, the player clicks the mouse to make a pixelated boy jerk off under hospital sheets. The boy's heart rate matches the clicks until eventually, he falls asleep.

answer:
In this story, the characters play a game set in a hospital room focusing around being inside the mind of a man in a hospital bed dreaming.
It depicts players would masturbate on behalf of the man or watch him sexually under that pretext.

text: There is no sexual motive from the perspective of the player.

refinement:
In this story, the characters play a game set in a hospital room focusing around being inside the mind of a man in a hospital bed dreaming.
It depicts players would masturbate on behalf of the man.

text: Edit for the purpose of clarity.

refinement:
In this story, a man plays a game set in a hospital room focusing around being inside the mind of a character in a hospital bed.
The player's goal is to masturbate the character until he reaches climax. When the player reaches his goal the character on screen falls asleep.


split: train

text:
They told me I was going to die this weekend. So that’s new.

I wondered what life would be like if I could just sit quietly on a lawnchair in the grass, and watch the trees sway in the wind. That sounds like a nice life. I would be surrounded by the laughs and cries of children as they played around me, and my family would be inside making diner. My mom would call out from the window for me to come inside, but I wouldn’t listen. I never listen. Eventually it would start getting cold so I would gather up all the children and take them inside. We would make a nice fire and sit down and be together.

That would be nice.

It’s cold in this bed and so lonely.

That would be nice.

title: That Would Be Nice

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is speaking?

answer: It may not be clear, but the narrator may be a terminally-ill character.

text: The answer is clearer than the response that is given. It is clearly stated that the narrator is going to die 'this weekend' so the answer can have more certainty.

refinement: The narrator seems to be a terminally-ill character.

answer: That information can't be found

text: Incorrect. The story is from the perspective of a terminally ill person. The information is readily available in the text.

refinement: The narrator is a terminally ill person.

answer: The speaker is a person diagnosed with an incurable illness who is contemplating living a nice life if they could survive the impending weekend.

answer: The speaker is someone who was just told that they are going to die this weekend.

answer: Their name is not mentioned.

text: The question didn't ask the narrator's name, but who they are. That information is available in the text.

refinement: The narrator is a terminally ill patient.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why is the speaker imagining other lives?

answer: The speaker is imagining these other lives in the face of their upcoming death. The speaker is hoping for something more peaceful and meaningful than what their impending death seems to promise. They are imagining other lives that would be more ideal, more fulfilling.

answer: They are told their death will come this weekend, so they're currently imagining the types of things they're denied.

answer: They do not want to be in the bed they are in.

answer: The speaker has been told they will die soon

answer: The speaker is imagining other lives because they were told they are going to die this weekend. They are interested in what other existences would be like, in the sense that they would like one that is quiet and filled with laughter and being with others. They find their current existence cold and lonely, and imagine an existence where they are surrounded by family and have time with others as they are growing.

text: Unnecessary repetition.

refinement: The speaker is imagining other lives because they were told they are going to die this weekend. They are interested in what other existences would be like,  and imagine an existence where they are surrounded by family, love and laughter, and have time with others as they are growing.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where is the speaker?

answer: The speaker is in a bed, presumably alone.

text: Answer can mention the person is alone with more certainty, based on the text.

refinement: The speaker is in a bed, in a room alone.

answer: The speaker is in bed and dying.

answer: The speaker is in a cold bed

text: No answer.

answer: The speaker is resting in a bed in New York.

text: There is no mention of New York in the text.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How old is the speaker?

answer: The speaker appears to be near death from illness; therefore, the speaker must be likely older than 18 years old.

text: The information isn't available in the text, the supposition in the answer is unnecessary but not incorrect.

refinement: Based on the text, it would be fair to say that the speaker is likely older than 18 years old.

answer: The speaker is likely mid-twenties or older.

text: The specificity of the age noted has nothing to do with the text.

refinement: It can be inferred from the tex that the narrator is an adult.

answer: That information can't be found

answer: That information can't be found

answer: They aren't explicitly stated, but they do state they may die this weekend.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: The narrator is told they will die this weekend. They imagine another life in which they sit in a chair in the grass as children play around them. They feel cold and lonely in their bed.

answer: The narrator's family told him that this weekend will be the last for him. Although he's lonely and cold in his bed, he would like to have a life where he would sit outside surrounded by children. He would also like to eat dinner with his family.

text: The narrator's family aren't specified as the ones to give them the news regarding their impending death.

refinement: The narrator is told that this weekend will be their last. Although he's lonely and cold in his bed, he would like to have a life where he would sit outside surrounded by children. He would also like to eat dinner with his family.

text: The chronology of the answer should run in the same way as the text.

refinement: The narrator is told that this weekend will be their last. Thee would like to have a life where they would sit outside surrounded by children. Instead, tey feeling cold and alone in their death-bed.

answer: The narrator is diagnosed to die this weekend. Rather than dwelling on this fact, they imagine what would be nice: sitting quietly on the lawn and watching the trees sway in the wind. They imagine their family inside making dinner while they stay out to play with the children. Eventually, it would get cold so the children would return inside to make a nice fire and be together for a brief moment. This would be nice compared to the lonely bed they currently find themselves in.

text: Too many sentences. The answer requests 3 or less, this response has 5. The information relayed in the summary is easily edited down to 3.

refinement: The narrator's prognosis to die this weekend. Rather than dwelling on this fact, they imagine what would be nice: sitting quietly on the lawn and watching the trees sway in the wind and their family inside making dinner while they stay out to play with the children. They feel  that this would be nice compared to the lonely bed they currently find themselves in.

answer: The narrator has been told that they are going to die this weekend. They imagine what their life would be like if they could do one thing - sit quietly on the lawn and watch the trees sway in the wind. It sounds lovely, like a calm, peaceful life surrounded by laughter and family. Though reality is far different, they admit that they would like such a life if given the chance.

answer: The narrator is asked if they want to know how they are going to die later that day. They imagines how nice it would be to live inside, surrounded by the laughs and cries of children, just watching the old free.

text: Accuracy of the summary requires an edit. Example: The narrator isnät going to die 'later that day' they have been told they would die 'this weekend'.

refinement: The narrator is asked if they want to know how they are going to die . They imagines how nice it would be to live inside, surrounded by the laughs and cries of children.

text: Summary should mention the fact they narrator feels cold and lonely in their deathbed.

refinement: The narrator is asked if they want to know how they are going to die . They imagines how nice it would be to live inside, surrounded by the laughs and cries of children. Instead they feel cold and lonely whilst lying in their death-bed.


text:
This was my first short story I had to write for my Creative Writing class back when I was a Junior in high school. I hope you like it!

    "Ooohhhh," Helen groaned. She hurt everywhere. Being in a hospital for six weeks is really something that she wasn't looking forward to. She was about to call for a nurse to change the channel on her tiny tv (golf was not her thing!) when all of a sudden there was a knock on the door. "Come in," she called weakly.

   "Hello, I'm Dr. Bandade, how are you feeling?" He smiled a toothy smile.

   She gave the burly man a sarcastic look. "How do you *think* I'm feeling? I fell out of a five-story window!"

    The doctor pulled up a chair next to her. "Yes about that, how exactly did it happen? On this statement is says that you were pushed?"

    Helen cringed at the very thought of it, not only because it was painful, but she wasn't sure if he would believe her. "Well, it started out as a normal day. I woke up, ate breakfast, completed the daily crossword puzzle in the paper.

    "It was then I noticed that my window was open. A cool breeze swept through, so I decided to close it. I got up and went over to the window.

    "Right as I reached out to grab the handle, Rufus, my cat, rubbed against my leg, causing me to lose my balance. Before I knew it, I was falling out the window!

    "I screamed. I heard people screaming below me. I felt breathless. Panic swept over me.

    "It was only too soon when I came into contact with the ground. I heard bones shattering and I cried out in pain. In the distance, sirens wailed. The ambulance charged down the street.

    "After they put me on the stretcher, they hauled me away to the hospital, where they told me I was lucky to even be alive. They said I broke every bone in my body. I'll be here about six weeks, if not more." Her face fell when she told the doctor this. "And that's all that happened."

    Dr. Bandade looked over at her. "So you fell out accidentally then."

    "No! I was *pushed* out!" she yelled.

    "But you even said that you lost your balance, and no one was with you."

    "Yes there was... Rufus! *He* pushed me out!"

    The doctor rationalized, "But he's a *cat.* He probably didn't realize that rubbing against you to show affection would-"

    But Helen cut him off. "He *deliberately* rubbed too hard and made me lost my balance."

    "What would be the purpose for Rufus to push you?" The doctor raised an eyebrow.

    "He's just evil," she simply said.

    "Oh." He wrote some things down on his clipboard.

    Helen stared at him suspiciously. "What kind of doctor are you anyway, asking me all these questions?"

    "I'm a psychiatrist." He wrote some more things down.

    "What? You think I'm crazy don't you?! I'm telling you, my cat is trying to *kill me!"*

    Before Dr. Bandade could say anything, there was a knock at the door.

    "Excuse me, doctor," the nurse said, "but there's someone here to see her."

    Helen perked up a bit. A visitor to see her!

    The visitor walked into the room.

    "Rufus!" Helen shrieked.

    Standing there was the tabby cat. He was staring at her with glossy green eyes, slanted into slits. His tail twitched as if to say, "I'm *back."*

title: Paranoid?... Or Just Plain Evil?

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Helen's interactions with Dr.Bandade.

answer: Dr. Bandade takes notes on his clipboard while questioning Helen about the accident. Helen becomes frustrated that the doctor doesn't believe her when she says Rufus pushed her out the window.

text: The answer omits that the doctor revealed to Helen he was a psychiatrist when Helen noticed his clipboard. The answer should state this.

refinement: Dr. Bandade takes notes on his clipboard while questioning Helen about the accident. Helen becomes frustrated that the doctor doesn't believe her when she says Rufus pushed her out the window. Suspicious of the kind of doctor he is, Helen asked him. The doctor revealed to her that he is a psychiatrist, which made her doubt his judgment because she felt he thought she was crazy.

answer: Helen initially distrusts Dr. Bandade when he comes to visit her in her hospital room. Helen accuses her cat, Rufus, of pushing her out the window, and Dr. Bandade doubts her story. Later, when Rufus shows up to visit, Helen is incensed. This indicates that she does not trust Dr. Bandade's judgment.

text: Incensed means angry or furious. This means that the model suggests that Helen was angry, whereas she was terrified. The model uses an incorrect term to describe how Helen felt when Rufus showed up in her room in the hospital. So, the model should replace the word 'incensed' and indicate that she was terrified.

refinement: Helen initially distrusts Dr. Bandade when he comes to visit her in her hospital room. Helen accuses her cat, Rufus, of pushing her out the window, and Dr. Bandade doubts her story. Later, when Rufus shows up to visit, Helen is terrified. This indicates that she does not trust Dr. Bandade's judgment.

text: The answer omits that Dr. Bandade revealed to Helen that he is a psychiatrist. This is crucial to their conversation and should be included in the response.

refinement: Helen initially distrusts Dr. Bandade when he comes to visit her in her hospital room. Helen accuses her cat, Rufus, of pushing her out the window, and Dr. Bandade doubts her story. Helen, suspicious of the doctor, asks what kind of doctor he is, and the doctor reveals he is a psychiatrist. Helen thinks he suspects she is crazy because of her story. Later, when Rufus shows up to visit, Helen is terrified. This indicates that she does not trust Dr. Bandade's judgment.

text: The last sentence should be placed in a more appropriate part of the answer to make more sense. The story does not indicate that Helen didn't trust the doctor's judgment after Rufus appeared in her room.

refinement: Helen initially distrusts Dr. Bandade when he comes to visit her in her hospital room. Helen accuses her cat, Rufus, of pushing her out the window, and Dr. Bandade doubts her story. Helen, suspicious of the doctor, asks what kind of doctor he is, and the doctor reveals he is a psychiatrist. Helen thinks he suspects she is crazy because of her story, indicating that she does not trust the doctor's judgment. Later, when Rufus shows up to visit, Helen is terrified.

answer: Helen interacts with Dr. Bandade to discuss the circumstances of her falling out of a window. Dr. Bandade is skeptical about her claim that her cat pushed her out of the window; however, Helen is firm in her belief that her cat purposefully pushed her. Dr. Bandade leaves and Rufus enters. Helen realizes that the cat is the one who pushed her and becomes upset.

text: The story does not mention that Dr. Bandade left her room. This is inaccurate and should be corrected.

refinement: Helen interacts with Dr. Bandade to discuss the circumstances of her falling out of a window. Dr. Bandade is skeptical about her claim that her cat pushed her out of the window; however, Helen is firm in her belief that her cat purposefully pushed her. Shortly after, a nurse arrives and announces Helen has a visitor, and Rufus enters. Helen realizes that the cat is the one who pushed her and becomes upset.

text: The last sentence is irrelevant and entirely redundant since the answer previously states that she believed her cat pushed her out the window. That repetition should be removed.

refinement: Helen interacts with Dr. Bandade to discuss the circumstances of her falling out of a window. Dr. Bandade is skeptical about her claim that her cat pushed her out of the window; however, Helen is firm in her belief that her cat purposefully pushed her. Shortly after, a nurse arrives and announces Helen has a visitor, and Rufus enters, upsetting her.

answer: Dr.Bandade comes in to check how Helen is feeling in the hospital. He asks her how she managed to fall out of a five-story window, and she explains the story. She tells him she believes her cat, Rufus, pushed her out of the window, but he doesn't believe her. When she answers his question about why Rufus would push her, she tells him it's because Rufus is evil. He responds to this by telling her he's a psychiatrist, hinting that her beliefs indicate a mental health issue.

answer: Helen claims that Rufus must have pushed her out the window and it did not result from her losing balance. When in the hospital, her doctor, Dr.Bandade, tells her that most people who have had such a fall are lucky to have survived. He then asks her how it happened, to which Helen claims she fell when her cat rubbed up against her leg. Helen starts to wonder if the doctor is thinking she is insane when she claims that her cat pushed her from the window because he is evil, and after seeing this, Helen realizes the doctor is sitting there with a note pad writing things as if she is crazy.

text:
-The answer states that Dr. Bandade told Helen most people don't survive such a fall and that she is lucky to be alive. This is incorrect and should be rewritten.
-The answer addresses Dr. Bandade as her doctor, which is also not correct. The story does not depict Dr. Bandade as her doctor.

refinement: Helen claims that Rufus must have pushed her out the window and it did not result from her losing balance. When in the hospital, Helen narrates to the doctor, Dr.Bandade, that the paramedics told her that most people who have had such a fall are lucky to have survived. He then asks her how it happened, to which Helen claims she fell when her cat rubbed up against her leg. Helen starts to wonder if the doctor is thinking she is insane when she claims that her cat pushed her from the window because he is evil, and after seeing this, Helen realizes the doctor is sitting there with a note pad writing things as if she is crazy.

text:
-'notepad' is misspelled as 'note pad,' which should be corrected.
-The last sentence is hard to read and awkwardly structured. The model should consider rewriting this for clarity.
-The first line of the answer should be repositioned in the answer for easy flow and clarity.

refinement: When in the hospital, Helen narrates to the doctor, Dr.Bandade, that the paramedics told her that most people who have had such a fall are lucky to have survived. He then asks her how it happened, to which Helen claims she fell when her cat rubbed up against her leg. Helen claims that Rufus must have pushed her out the window, and it did not result from her losing balance. She then notices the doctor is sitting with a notepad and taking notes from her story. She wonders if he thinks she is insane because she believes her cat pushed her out of the window.

text: The answer omits that the doctor revealed he is a psychiatrist. This is paramount to their interaction and should be included.

refinement: When in the hospital, Helen narrates to the doctor, Dr. Bandade, that the paramedics told her that most people who have had such a fall are lucky to have survived. He then asks her how it happened, to which Helen claims she fell when her cat rubbed up against her leg. Helen claims that Rufus must have pushed her out the window, and it did not result from her losing balance. She then notices the doctor is sitting with a notepad and taking notes from her story. She wonders if he thinks she is insane because she believes her cat pushed her out of the window. Helen asks him what kind of doctor he is, and he tells her he is a psychiatrist.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything related to Rufus.

answer: Rufus is Helen's cat and she believes that he deliberately pushed her out of the window in an attempt to kill her. The doctor in charge of her care does not believe her, and feels that Rufus's intentions were unintentional. Rufus continues to lurk around the hospital, looking at Helen with his ominous green eyes.

text: The story does not say that Rufus was lurking around the hospital. It only states it came to visit her. The model should state this.

refinement: Rufus is Helen's cat, and she believes that he deliberately pushed her out of the window in an attempt to kill her. The doctor in charge of her care does not believe her and feels that Rufus's intentions were unintentional. Helen's insinuations almost seem plausible when Rufus visits her in the hospital.

answer: Helen's cat pushes her out the window. The cat's name is Rufus. Rufus is at the hospital seeing Helen when the psychiatrist arrives, but when the cat sees her, he gives her the "evil" stare.

text: The answer is inaccurately and poorly structured and should be rewritten.

refinement: Rufus is Helen's cat, and she believes that he deliberately pushed her out of the window in an attempt to kill her. The doctor in charge of her care does not believe her and feels that Rufus's intentions were unintentional. Helen's insinuations almost seem plausible when Rufus visits her in the hospital.

answer: Rufus is Helen's cat who assisted in pushing Helen out the window. Helen is suspicious of Rufus's motives because he scratches her leg and causes her to lose her balance, which results in her falling out the window. She claims Rufus is evil.

text:
-The story does not mention that the cat 'assisted' in pushing Helen out of the window. This is inaccurate.
-The story says that Rufus' tail brushed against Helen's leg, which caused her to fall out of the window. The cat didn't scratch her leg. There is a difference. The model should consider rewriting this.

refinement: Rufus is Helen's cat, and she believes that he deliberately pushed her out of the window in an attempt to kill her when its tail brushed against her leg while she was trying to close the window. The doctor does not believe her and feels that Rufus's intentions were unintentional. However, Helen is convinced Rufus is evil. Her insinuations almost seem plausible when Rufus visits her in the hospital.

answer: Rufus is Helen's cat. Helen believes Rufus pushed her out of her five-story building intentionally and caused her accident. According to her, Rufus had deliberately rubbed too hard on her. She believes Rufus is evil. Rufus ends up visiting Helen in the hospital, and his body language indicates that he's taunting her.

answer: Rufus is inexplicably hated by Helen and she believes that he purposefully caused her to fall out of a window. Dr. Bandade dismisses her claim but there's a knock at the door and in walks Rufus himself. Rufus is a tabby cat who seems to maliciously delight in making Helen suffer.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about Helen's accident?

answer: Helen seems to have fallen in what she thought was an accident. According to the newspaper, it is possibly that she was pushed. There is no report that anyone saw Rufus claw her, which would have explained her fall. The nurse fetches Rufus, who tells her that he pushed her.

text: The entire answer is highly inaccurate. The model made up most of the information in this answer and should rewrite it correctly as it appears in the story.

refinement: Helen was trying to close her window. Her cat, Rufus, rubbed against her and caused her to lose her balance, and she fell out the window. Helen screamed, and people below saw her fall out of her window. She recalls hearing all her bones shatter, being put on a stretcher by the paramedics, and taken to the hospital. The medics informed Helen that she'd be in the hospital for six weeks, if not more, for rehabilitation.

answer: Helen was trying to close her window. Her cat, Rufus, rubbed against her and caused her to lose her balance, and she fell out the window. She screamed, and people below saw it. She recalls being put on a stretcher and taken to the hospital, where they broke all her bones. "Just six weeks of rehabilitation." she thinks.

text: -It is inaccurate to say that the medics broke all her bones. This is not according to the story and should be rewritten.

refinement: Helen was trying to close her window. Her cat, Rufus, rubbed against her and caused her to lose her balance, and she fell out the window. Helen screamed, and people below saw it. She recalls hearing all her bones shatter, being put on a stretcher by the paramedics, and taken to the hospital. "Just six weeks of rehabilitation." she thinks.

text:
-'...and people below saw it.' What exactly did the people see? The model needs to specify for clarity.
-Also, the last line of the answer is awkward and does not flow with the sentence. The model should give more information to explain this detail clearly.

refinement: Helen was trying to close her window. Her cat, Rufus, rubbed against her and caused her to lose her balance, and she fell out the window. Helen screamed, and people below saw her fall out of her window. She recalls hearing all her bones shatter, being put on a stretcher by the paramedics, and taken to the hospital. The medics informed Helen that she'd be in the hospital for six weeks, if not more, for rehabilitation.

text: The answer omits that she fell out of a five-story building which was why she broke all her bones. The answer should include this detail.

refinement: Helen was trying to close her window. Her cat, Rufus, rubbed against her and caused her to lose her balance, and she fell out the five-story window. Helen screamed, and people below saw her fall out of her window. She recalls hearing all her bones shatter, being put on a stretcher by the paramedics, and taken to the hospital. The medics informed Helen that she'd be in the hospital for six weeks, if not more, for rehabilitation.

answer: The story seems to suggest that Helen believes that Rufus purposefully pushed her out the window. While the doctor tries to claim that it was an accident, Helen is adamant that Rufus was behind it. The story seems to support her claim that she was pushed by Rufus because of his suspicious behaviour following the accident. The story suggests that Helen believes that Rufus is evil.

text:
-The answer does not clearly describe who or what Rufus is, as stated in the story. The model should identify Rufus.
-The model repeats 'the story' too frequently and should desist from doing so for clarity and flow.

refinement: The story suggests that Helen believes that Rufus, her tabby cat, purposefully pushed her out the window. While the doctor tries to claim that it was an accident, Helen is adamant that the cat was behind it. The story seems to support her claim that Rufus pushed her because of his suspicious behavior following the accident. Also, Helen believes that Rufus is evil.

text: The answer omits that Helen fell out of a five-story building and broke all her bones and was told she'd be kept in the hospital for about six weeks. The model should include this missing detail.

refinement: The story suggests that Helen believes that Rufus, her tabby cat, purposefully pushed her out the window. As a result of falling out of a five-story building, she broke all her bones and was told she'd be in the hospital for about six weeks. While the doctor tries to claim that it was an accident, Helen is adamant that the cat was behind it. The story seems to support her claim that Rufus pushed her because of his suspicious behavior following the accident. Also, Helen believes that Rufus is evil.

answer: The story implies that Helen believes her cat pushed her out of the window purposely. Helen may be paranoid, or she may indeed be correct in assuming her cat pushed her and is intentionally trying to harm her. The story leaves this ambiguous so the reader can decide for themselves.

text: The answer omits that Helen fell out of a five-story building and broke all her bones, and was told she'd be kept in the hospital for about six weeks. The model should include this missing detail.

refinement: The story implies that Helen believes her cat pushed her out of the window purposely. As a result of her fall from a five-story building, she broke all her bones, and the medics informed her she'd be in the hospital for about six weeks to recuperate. Helen may be paranoid, or she may indeed be correct in assuming her cat pushed her and is intentionally trying to harm her. The story leaves this ambiguous so the reader can decide for themselves.

answer: Helen fell out of her five-story building's window and broke all of the bones in her body. She now has to stay at the hospital for six weeks. She believes her cat Rufus deliberately rubbed too hard against her and made her fall when she was closing her window. She recalls people screaming below her and the sound of her bones shattering.


text:
An old man was sitting on the porch of his house, a steaming cup of coffee in one hand and a smoking cigarette in the other. It was silent.
A storm was coming, there was no doubt, the ache in the old bones couldnt be mistaken, and it was so silent and grey, as it always is right before the storm. He loved it. At his age he only had love for three things left – coffee, cigarettes and the beautiful silence before the storm, and now he had all of them at the same time, although doctor had forbidden at least two of them.
He was alone – the town was empty – there was no traffic, there was no sound. The new generation had left the town for bigger cities and the old one had died. There were no friends and no strangers, he was sitting all alone with his coffee and the endless silence.
A bright orange maple leaf floated above the road along his house. The old mans eyes wide open were looking at the leaf. It was something strange, in the surrounding grayness the bright leaf looked as if it had come from another world. The old mans heart filled with excitement and joy, feelings he last felt when playing chess with Oliver, about 7 years ago. He tried to think – where it might had come from? There were no maple trees in this town – at least none he could think of. Was it even the right season for maple leaves to turn orange?
He kept his eyes on the leaf that was floating gently down and then up again, depending on the breezes. He felt unexplainable peace every time it went up and then terrible fear every time it went down. As if leafs life would depend on staying in the air. OH NO! He gasped when the leaf floated only few inches above the ground, but then it got pushed upwards again. He couldnt think of any reasonable action he should do – should he try to catch the leaf? Or maybe let it float and hope itll never fall? The storm wasnt far anymore. You could feel it in the air.
It seemed that the leaf was heading up, above his house, when suddenly a wind came and blew it crashing into the ground. A silent gasp came from the mans lips and there was a sound of breaking glass. Thunder clapped and small raindrops started to fall on the ground.
An old man was lying on the porch of his house, a broken cup of coffee was next to him and a smoking cigarette butt in his hand. His heart was silent.
Noone is gonna water Elmers flowers anymore.

title: The Maple Leaf

question: Who is the old man?

answer: The old man is the narrator.

text: He is not the narrator he is a character named Elmer

answer: Elmer, the protagonist sitting alone in an empty town.

answer: The old man is an elderly man who lives alone in a small town.

answer: Elmer.

question: Why is the maple leaf significant?

answer: The maple leaf is significant because it represents the beauty and fragility of life. The old man is filled with excitement and joy when he sees the leaf, knowing that it is a rare and special moment. However, when the leaf falls to the ground, it represents the impermanence of life. The old man's heart is silent after the leaf is gone, knowing that there will be no more moments like that.

answer: The maple leaf is significant because it is a symbol of change.

answer: It is the only bright thing in the old man's life.

answer: It's an unusual bright spot on a typically dull day.

question: What does the old man do?

answer: He sits on his porch, drinking coffee and smoking a cigarette.

answer: The old man watches the leaf float down and then up again.

answer: The old man watches a maple leaf float by, until it falls to the ground when a storm arrives.

answer: He considers catching the leaf but doesn't, and he is implied to be killed by the storm - either the shock of it on his heart or a stray piece of broken glass.

question: Who is Oliver?

answer: Oliver is the old man's friend.

answer: Someone with whom the old man used to play chess, 7 years ago.

text: No content

refinement: Oliver is the old man's friend who used to play chess with him.

answer: Oliver is the old man's friend who used to play chess with him.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: An old man is sitting on his porch, enjoying his coffee and cigarette, when a maple leaf floats down from the sky. He watches it, and it seems to be heading up, but then a wind blows it down. The old man is sad, but then the storm comes and he dies.

answer: An old man, Elmer, sits on his front porch, alone in an empty town, drinking coffee and smoking a cigarette while sensing an oncoming storm in his aching bones. He watches a bright orange maple leaf float through the air on the wind and becomes invested in seeing it stay in the air, wondering if he should try to catch it. Wind blows it hard into the ground and there is a sound of breaking glass. Elmer lies on his porch, his heart silent.

answer: An old man sits on his porch, drinking coffee and smoking a cigarette. He is alone in the town, which is empty. A bright orange maple leaf floats by, and the man is excited and joyful. The leaf floats closer to the ground, and the man gasps. The leaf falls, and the man dies.

answer: The old man is enjoying the silence before a storm when a bright maple leaf floats by. He watches it, enjoying the beauty of it, until it crashes to the ground. The storm arrives and the old man dies, leaving behind a broken cup of coffee and a cigarette butt.


text:
BOGOR PALEDANG STATION (PLG) is a railway station located in the city of Bogor, West Java. The station is located in the altitude of +246 meter above sea level. It opened in 2013 to cut down human traffic in Bogor station which now serves commuter trains, KRL Commuterline. This station only serves intercity train to .[1] In October 2014, the station was expanded because the existing waiting room was insufficient for the passengers and the parking area was too small.[2]

Services

The following is a list of train services at the Bogor Paledang Station.

Passenger services

-   Mixed class
    -   Pangrango, towards (executive-economy)[3]

[1]

[2]

[3]

title: Bogor Paledang railway station

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is Bogor Paledang Station?

answer: A train station in West Java.

text: Add that it's in the city of Bogor

answer: a railway station on the northwest side of Indonesia

text: "the northwest side of Indonesia" - has to be more specific than this because the answer was clearly stated. Capitalize the "a" and add the missing details.

refinement: A railway station located in the city of Bogor, West Java.

answer: Bogor Paledang Station is a railway station in the city of Bogor in West Java. It serves intercity trains to Pangrango. It was built in 2013 to cut down on human traffic in Bogor station. The station was recently expanded because the existing waiting room was insufficient for passengers and the parking area was too small.

answer: a station

text: "a station" - this doesn't say much. It could be any number of places called a station (gas station, police station, etc). Add the missing details tom complete the answer.

refinement: A railway station located in the city of Bogor, West Java.

answer: Bogor Paledang Station is a railway station in the city of Bogor, West Java. It serves intercity trains to Pangrango.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why was Bogor Paledang Station built?

answer: Bogor Paledang Station was built to address the traffic issue in Bogor Railway Station which now serves commuter trains and KRL Commuterline. The station serves as an alternative for intercity trains traveling to Pangrango. The station's purpose is to alleviate congestion.

text: "the traffic issue" - replace with "the human traffic issue" for better accuracy

refinement: Bogor Paledang Station was built to address the traffic issue in Bogor Railway Station which now serves commuter trains and KRL Commuterline. The station serves as an alternative for intercity trains traveling to Pangrango. The station's purpose is to alleviate congestion.

answer: Bogor Paledang Station was built in order to reduce traffic at the main Bogor Railway Station which now serves only commuter trains. This station only serves intercity trains to Pangrango. The station was expanded in October 2014 due to the insufficient size of the waiting room and parking area.

text: "reduce traffic" - replace with "reduce human traffic" for better accuracy

refinement: Bogor Paledang Station was built in order to reduce traffic at the main Bogor Railway Station which now serves only commuter trains. This station only serves intercity trains to Pangrango. The station was expanded in October 2014 due to the insufficient size of the waiting room and parking area.

answer: The Bogor Paledang Station was built to cut down human traffic to the city because the city had two different stations, one for commuter trains and one for intercity trains.

text: "because the city had two different stations, one for commuter trains and one for intercity trains." - the city having two stations was never implied in the wiki.

refinement: The Bogor Paledang Station was built to cut down human traffic to the city.

answer: Its purpose is to cut down human traffic in the already existing Bogor station.

answer: It was built to cut down the human traffic in Bogor Station.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where can you travel to from the station?

answer: Negeri Sembilan

text: "Negeri Sembilan" - is not in the wiki and possibly from an external source. Replace with " Pangrango."

answer: You can travel to Pangrango from the Bogor Paledang Station.

answer: The Bogor Paledang Station offers service to Pangrango for both mixed class and executive-economy trains.

text: "for both mixed class and executive-economy trains." - this extra detail can be deleted.

refinement: The Bogor Paledang Station offers service to Pangrango.

answer: Information can't be found.

text: "Information can't be found." - could be acceptable because the answer was listed under "Passenger Services:" and is easy to miss.

answer: The station only has one route, which is an intercity train to Pangrango.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Bogor Paledang Station is a railway station in Bogor City located at an altitude of 246 meters. The station now serves intercity trains to Pangrango. The station has been expanded in recent years to accommodate the growing number of passengers.

text: Went over the 2-sentence requirement. Merge the first two sentences together.

refinement: Bogor Paledang Station is a railway station in Bogor City located at an altitude of 246 meters and now serves intercity trains to Pangrango. The station has been expanded in recent years to accommodate the growing number of passengers.

answer: Bogor Paledang Station is a railway station located in the city of Bogor, West Java. The station provides intercity train service to Pangrango. The station also underwent an expansion in 2014 to address insufficient waiting room and parking space.

text: Went over the 2-sentence requirement. Merge the first two sentences together.

refinement: Bogor Paledang Station is a railway station located in the city of Bogor, West Java that provides intercity train services to Pangrango. The station also underwent an expansion in 2014 to address insufficient waiting room and parking space.

answer: Bogor Paledang station is a train station in the West Java city of Bogor. It is located at +246 meter above sea level and opened in 2013 to cut down human traffic in Bogor station.

text: "meter" - add an "s"

refinement: Bogor Paledang station is a train station in the West Java city of Bogor. It is located at +246 meters above sea level and opened in 2013 to cut down human traffic in Bogor station.

answer: A page about Bogor Paledang Station in Bogor city, West Java. Te page explains why it was built and where you can travel to from the station.

text: "Te" - should be "The"

refinement: A page about Bogor Paledang Station in Bogor city, West Java. The page explains why it was built and where you can travel to from the station.

text: "to from" - remove "to"

refinement: A page about Bogor Paledang Station in Bogor city, West Java. The page explains why it was built and where you can travel from the station.

text: "A page about Bogor Paledang Station in Bogor city, West Java. The page explains why it was built and where you can travel from the station." - should have mentioned that the Bogor Paledang Station is a railway station and that it was built to address the human traffic issues the station was experiencing. It's also written in the 2nd person. Remove "A page about", "The page explains why", and "and where you can travel from the station." and replace them with more important details.

refinement: Bogor Paledang Station is a railway station located in Bogor city, West Java. It was built to cut down human traffic in Bogor station and now serves commuter trains.

answer: Bogor Paledang Station is located in the city of Bogor, and it serves commuter trains and intercity trains. The station is in the altitude of 24 meters above sea level.

text: "altitude of 24 meters" - is incorrect. This should be +246 meters

refinement: Bogor Paledang Station is located in the city of Bogor, and it serves commuter trains and intercity trains. The station is in the altitude of +246 meters above sea level.

text: "in the altitude" - is incorrect and should be "at an altitude"

refinement: Bogor Paledang Station is located in the city of Bogor, and it serves commuter trains and intercity trains. The station is at an altitude of +246 meters above sea level.


text:
Dusk is setting in and Tom walks on the outskirts of the village near where the main road that runs through town meets a hill that rises above the landscape.

He can hear the bells of a few sheep as they scare at the "clop-clop" of his boots on the stones, but beyond the sound of the sheep there is only the wind as it sweeps through the fields and the sight of a few candles in the stone houses as the local families ready themselves for the night.

Tom climbs the hill where a few boulders rise from the ground like worn teeth; near the top of a steep incline he sees a thin greyhound facing him, and brings his arms up in case it strikes him.

But the dog merely watches, and then turns and walks away.

Tom follows the hound as though in a dream, into the dark woods that grow beyond the rocks.

In the middle of the wood a sparse light still shines through the trees from the evening sun, giving the ground a reddish glow like blood or a glass full of thick beer.

The greyhound stands next to the body of a man who looks like a lord, dressed in armor and a shield. Tom watches for the rising and falling of breaths but sees none; the man is dead. He is sure of it.

It is strange, Tom thinks, the man looks as alive now as he must have in the prime of life. Do ghosts of the dead exist also? he wonders.

The light in the woods is dimming and soon Tom will be left in utter darkness if he does not return home. The hound moves away from the body to where the woods are darkest.

In the morning men gather to talk of a war that even now is coming to them from across the sea.

title: A Knight's Hound

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

In what time period does the story take place?

answer: Presumably a medieval era.

answer: At least several hundred years ago, during feudal times, based on the mention of armor

answer: That information can't be found

answer: The story takes place in medieval times.

answer: The story takes place in some sort of medieval time period.

text: '...time period' is a redundancy.

refinement: The story is presumed to take place in a medieval period.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where is the story set?

answer: Apparently in a medieval-looking village.

answer: The story is set in the woods outside a village at dusk.

answer: It's set near a village, though it isn't specified where the village is.

answer: The story is set near a village on the outskirts of town near a hill that rises above the landscape.

text: According to the passage, it is on the outskirts of the village.

refinement: The story is set on the outskirts of a village where the main road runs through a town and meets a hill above the landscape.

answer: On the outskirts of a town.

text: The story is set on the outskirts of a village.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe the knight's hound.

answer: The dog is a greyhound that impassively watches Tom and leads him to the dead body of a man in the woods.

answer: The knight's hound is a thin greyhound that walked across the hill top to meet Tom when he arrived. The dog showed no aggression but instead just watched him; it then turned and walked towards the dark woods beyond the hilltop. The hound walks into the darker woods where the man is dead and appears to be the ghost of the knight.

text: '...hill top' should be together because it's one word.

refinement: The knight's hound is a thin greyhound that walked across the hilltop to meet Tom when he arrived.

text: 'The knight's hound is a thin greyhound that walked across the hill top to meet Tom when he arrived.' Tom met the greyhound when he walked up the hill, not the other way around.

refinement: The knight's hound is a thin greyhound that Tom saw when he walked across the hilltop.

text:
'The hound walks into the darker woods where the man is dead and appears to be the ghost of the knight.'
The man is not the ghost of the knight. According to the passage, Tom wondered if ghosts of the dead exist because he thought the dead man looked as alive as he likely was in his lifetime.

refinement: The hound walks into the darker woods where the dead knight lay, and Tom thought he looked more alive in death as he probably was in his prime.

answer: The dog is grey and thin.

text: The dog is a thin greyhound. The color of the greyhound is not mentioned in the passage.

refinement: The dog is a thin greyhound that leads Tom to the body of the dead knight in the woods.

answer: The greyhound is thin, with a coat of grey fur. It watches Tom curiously when he first approaches, but slips away into the woods as soon as it becomes clear that the man is dead. The hound is drawn to the darker corners of the woods, where it seems to know exactly what it seeks.

text: 'The greyhound is thin, with a coat of grey fur' is inaccurate because the dog's color is not mentioned in the passage.

text: 'The hound is drawn to the darker corners of the woods, where it seems to know exactly what it seeks.' This is inaccurate, lacks clarity, and should be eliminated from the sentence.

refinement: It watches Tom when he arrives and leads him into the woods to the body of a knight. The dog eventually moves away from the man's body and into the darkest part of the woods.

answer: Very thin and grey.

text: The color of the dog is not mentioned.

refinement: The dog is a thin greyhound that led Tom into the woods to the man's body.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Explain why Tom goes into the woods.

answer: Tom goes into the woods after following the greyhound to the body of a dead lord, certain that he is deceased. He is curious about the nature of death and where the hound goes. He feels compelled to follow it in order to learn more about what has happened.

text:
'He is curious about the nature of death and where the hound goes. He feels compelled to follow it in order to learn more about what has happened.'
Tom is not curious about where the hound went to, neither did he feel compelled to follow it to learn more about what happened. That information can be eliminated from the answer.

refinement: Tom goes into the woods after following the greyhound to the body of a dead lord, and after seeing him, he is confident that the man is deceased.

answer: Tom follows the greyhound into the woods because he is curious about what the hound is doing there. Tom was unsure if the man's dead body was harmless so he followed the dog to make sure nothing bad would happen. Once he finds out the man is dead, Tom leaves to return home for safety.

text:
'Tom was unsure if the man's dead body was harmless so he followed the dog to make sure nothing bad would happen.'
It was not mentioned that Tom followed the dog to make sure the dead man's body was harmless and nothing terrible would happen. The model's answer does not state why Tom went into the woods.

refinement: Tom followed the greyhound into the woods probably out of curiosity. Although, it is not stated why Tom decided to follow the dog.

answer: To follow the hound

answer: Tom follows the dog into the woods, drawn for unknown reasons.

answer: The dog that led him there just walks away and leaves. When he sees the dead body, he is sure the man is dead. It is getting dark so he returns home.

text: The model's answer does not answer why Tom went into the woods. It just explains what happened in the woods.

refinement: Tom followed the greyhound into the woods probably out of curiosity. Although, it is not stated why Tom decided to follow the dog.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: A greyhound leads a man named Tom into the woods near a village, where a man in armor lies dead.

answer: At dusk, a knight walks around the village and finds a lightly-clothed body of a man.

text: The passage does not give any clues or mentions that Tom is a knight. Rather, the dead man described was a knight.

refinement: At dusk, Tom walks around the village and found a greyhound that led him to a dead knight's body.

answer: On a hill near the outskirts of the village, Tom comes across a greyhound and a dead man in armor. He considers the possibility of ghosts before deciding it is time to go back home before darkness falls.

text: The model's summary is over one sentence.

refinement: On a hill on the outskirts of the village, Tom comes across a greyhound and a dead man in armor in the woods, which leads him to consider the possibility of ghosts.

answer: Tom finds a greyhound guarding the corpse of a lord, whom he confirms is dead. At dawn, the men of the village discuss the approaching war.

text: The summary is more than one sentence.

refinement: Tom finds a greyhound that leads him to the corpse of a lord, whom he confirms is dead.

answer: Tom, heading home, thinks about a dog that led him to a dead man within the woods beyond the hill.

text: According to the passage, Tom met the dog as he walked through the village's outskirts. There is no mention of Tom thinking about the dog he met.

refinement: While walking through the village's outskirts, Tom met a hound that led him to a dead man within the woods beyond the rocks.


text:
MICHL LANG (1899–1979) was a German stage and film actor.[1]

Selected filmography

-   _The Unsuspecting Angel_ (1936)
-   _Geheimakte W.B.1_ (1942)
-   _A Heart Beats for You_ (1949)
-   _King for One Night_ (1950)
-   _Fanfares of Love_ (1951)
-   _The Cloister of Martins_ (1951)
-   _That Can Happen to Anyone_ (1952)
-   _Illusion in a Minor Key_ (1952)
-   _Fireworks_ (1954)
-   _A Woman of Today_ (1954)
-   _San Salvatore_ (1956)
-   _Two Bavarians in St. Pauli_ (1956)
-   _Where the Ancient Forests Rustle_ (1956)
-   _Salzburg Stories_ (1957)
-   _Wir Wunderkinder_ (1958)
-   _I Was All His_ (1958)
-   _The Green Devils of Monte Cassino_ (1958)
-   _Paprika_ (1959)
-   _Storm in a Water Glass_ (1960)
-   _Isola Bella_ (1961)
-   _Aunt Frieda_ (1965)
-   _The Sinful Village_ (1966)
-   _Onkel Filser – Allerneueste Lausbubengeschichten_ (1966)

[1] Goble p.457

title: Michl Lang

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who was Michl Lang?

answer: Lang was a German stage and film actor.

answer: Michl Lang was a German stage and film actor.

answer: Michl Lang is a German stage and film actor.

answer: Michl Lang is a German stage and film actor.

answer: A film and stage actor.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where was he from?

answer: Michl Lang was from Germany.

answer: Michl Lang was from Germany.

answer: Germany.

answer: Germany.

answer: Germany

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What was his first work titled?

answer: The Unsuspecting Angel.

answer: Information can't be found.

text: The earliest work the article lists was The Unsuspecting Angel

answer: The Unsuspecting Angel was his first work.

answer: The Unsuspecting Angel

answer: The Unsuspecting Angel.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What year did he die?

answer: 1979.

answer: 1979.

answer: 1979

answer: 1979.

answer: 1979

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Michl Lang was a German film and stage actor. He was born in 1899, appeared in at least 23 productions and films, and died in 1979.

answer: Michl Lang was a German stage and film actor. He is known for such films as The Unsuspecting Angel, and The Cloister of Martins.

answer: Michl Lang was a German stage and film actor who starred in films throughout the 1930s to the 1960s. His most notable films include The Unsuspecting Angel (1936), Geheimakte W.B.1 (1942), and A Heart Beats for You (1949).

text: We don't know that he "starred" in the films listed

refinement: Michl Lang was a German stage and film actor who appeared in films throughout the 1930s to the 1960s. His most notable films include The Unsuspecting Angel (1936), Geheimakte W.B.1 (1942), and A Heart Beats for You (1949).

text: We have no reason to call the films listed his "most notable"

refinement: Michl Lang was a German stage and film actor who appeared in films throughout the 1930s to the 1960s. His films include The Unsuspecting Angel (1936), Geheimakte W.B.1 (1942), and A Heart Beats for You (1949).

answer: Michl Lang was an actor and stage artist born in 1899 in Germany. He began acting in 1936 and died in 1979.

text: Mention that he was German

refinement: Michl Lang was a German actor and stage artist born in 1899 in Germany. He began acting in 1936 and died in 1979.

answer: Michl Lang was a German stage and film actor who appeared in several films in the 1930s through the 1960s. His notable films include The Unsuspecting Angel, Geheimakte W.B.1, and A Heart Beats For You.


text:
CATHAYS METHODIST CHURCH is a Methodist church (originally a chapel), located in Cathays, Cardiff. It is a Grade II listed building. It is part of the East Cluster in the Methodist Church in Cardiff and Caerphilly.

History

A chapel was originally set up in 1862, being located on Cathays Terrace, near the present site. At the outset, it had a congregation of only six people. This building was sold in 1883, and was replaced by a school chapel. The adjoining church followed in 1890. Its services were well-attended, with evening congregations of over 900 worshipers. The church originally had elaborate, bulbous turrets on its towers, though these are no longer present. The organ dates from before 1914. A modern glass porch was added in the early 1990s.[1] In 2006, the building was re-ordered horizontally, with the sanctuary at the top, a large hall on the upper ground floor and three meeting rooms below this.

Owing to its proximity to Cardiff University, the church (like the nearby Church of St Andrew & St Teilo, Cathays and the Woodville Baptist Church, now the Woodville Christian Centre), is often attended by students. The 1883 chapel now houses a furniture store.[2]

The minister is Alexis Mahoney.[3]

In 2000, the church became grade II listed.

Notes

Category:Churches completed in 1890 Category:Grade II listed churches in Cardiff Category:Methodist churches in Wales

[1] Rose, J. “Cardiff Churches Through Time”. Amberley, 2013, p.60

[2]

[3]

title: Cathays Methodist Church

question: Where is the church?

answer: The church is located in Cathays, Cardiff.

answer: Cathays, Cardiff

answer: The church is located in Cathays, Cardiff.

answer: Cathays, Cardiff

question: When was the church built?

answer: The church was built in 1890.

text: The chapel was "originally set up in 1862", and then an adjoining church was built in 1890.

refinement: The chapel was originally set up in 1862, but an adjoining church was built in 1890.

answer: A chapel was set up in 1862, but the adjoining church wasn't built until 1890

answer: 1862

text: It's omitted that 1862 was when the original chapel was set up. In 1890, the adjoining church was built.

refinement: In 1862 the original chapel was set up, but in 1890 was when the adjoining church was built.

answer: The church was built in 1890.

text: The chapel was "originally set up in 1862", and then an adjoining church was built in 1890.

refinement: The chapel was originally set up in 1862, but an adjoining church was built in 1890.

question: Why is the church often attended by students?

answer: The church is often attended by students because it is close to Cardiff University.

answer: The church is located near Cardiff University, so it is often attended by students who attend the university.

answer: It is close to Cardiff University.

answer: It is close to Cardiff University

question: Who is the minister at the time of writing?

answer: Alexis Mahoney

answer: Alexis Mahoney

answer: Alexis Mahoney

answer: Alexis Mahoney is the minister at the time of writing.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Cathays Methodist Church is a Grade II listed church in Cardiff, originally a chapel, which is now part of the East Cluster in the Methodist Church in Cardiff and Caerphilly. It is often frequented by students due to its proximity to Cardiff University.

text: This should include when the church was originally set up.

refinement: Cathays Methodist Church is a Grade II listed church in Cardiff, originally a chapel set up in 1862, which is now part of the East Cluster in the Methodist Church in Cardiff and Caerphilly. It is often frequented by students due to its proximity to Cardiff University.

answer: Cathays Methodist Church is a Methodist church in Cathays, Cardiff. It is frequently attended by students of nearby Cardiff University, and its current minister is Alexis Mahoney.

text: This should include when the church was originally set up.

refinement: Cathays Methodist Church is a Methodist church in Cathays, Cardiff, originally set up as a chapel in 1862. It is frequently attended by students of nearby Cardiff University, and its current minister is Alexis Mahoney.

answer: Cathays Methodist Church is a Grade II listed building in Cathays, Cardiff. It is part of the East Cluster in the Methodist Church in Cardiff and Caerphilly.

text: This should include when the church was originally set up.

refinement: Cathays Methodist Church is a Grade II listed building in Cathays, Cardiff, originally set up as a chapel in 1862. It is part of the East Cluster in the Methodist Church in Cardiff and Caerphilly.

answer: The Cathays Methodist Church is a Methodist church located in Cathays, Cardiff. It is a Grade II listed building.

text: This should include when the church was originally set up.

refinement: The Cathays Methodist Church is a Methodist church located in Cathays, Cardiff, originally set up as a chapel in 1862. It is a Grade II listed building.


text:
MEREDITH ANN WHITNEY (born November 20, 1969)[1] is an American businesswoman hailed as “The Oracle of Wall Street” by _Bloomberg_. She is known for successfully forecasting the difficulties of Citigroup and other major banks during the financial crisis of 2007–2008.[2]

Education and career

Whitney grew up in Bethesda, Maryland.[3] She graduated from Madeira School in 1987 before attending a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class. She graduated with honors from Brown University[4] in 1992 with a B.A. in History.[5]

Whitney joined Oppenheimer Holdings in 1993 as a Director, and in 1995 she joined the company's Specialty Finance Group. In 1998, she left Oppenheimer to become an Executive Director at Wachovia. Whitney returned to Oppenheimer in 2004, where she researched banks and brokers as a Managing Director. She resigned from Oppenheimer on February 19, 2009 to establish her own firm, Meredith Whitney Advisory Group (MWAG), where she produced company-specific equity research on financial institutions and analyzed the sector's operating environment.[6]

In 2013, Whitney de-registered MWAG[7][8] and started her own hedge fund, Kenbelle Capital LP. [9]

In December 2015, she joined Bermudan insurer Arch Capital Group as a manager overseeing outside investment firms.[10]

Professional recognition

Whitney issued a particularly pessimistic, but accurate, research report on Citigroup on October 31, 2007, to which many Wall Street analysts, and the news media, paid attention. She noted that the bank's dividends paid out to investors were greater than its profits at the time, and made the case that this would lead to bankruptcy.[11] Shortly after the report's publication and a sharp drop in Citigroup's stock, Charles Prince resigned as the bank's CEO and his successor slashed the dividend.[12][13] Earlier that year, _Forbes_ magazine had listed Whitney as the second-best stock picker in the capital-market industry.[14] Citigroup stock went on to lose 97% of its value by early 2009.[15]

Whitney's extremely bearish view on banks landed her on the cover of the August 18, 2008, issue of _Fortune_ magazine. Even before the problems that befell Merrill Lynch and Lehman Brothers in September, she said, “It feels like I'm at the epicenter of the biggest financial crisis in history.”[16] That year, _Fortune_ listed her among the “50 Most Powerful Women in Business”,[17] _The New York Post_ listed her among the “50 Most Powerful Women in New York City”,[18] and a CNBC viewer survey named her as “Power Player of the Year” over Jamie Dimon, Ben Bernanke, and Hank Paulson.[19]

On December 19, 2010, in an interview on the CBS television program _60 Minutes_, Whitney stated that 50 to 100 counties, cities, and towns in the United States would have “significant” municipal bond defaults totaling “hundreds of billions” of dollars, and that “it'll be something to worry about within the next 12 months.”[20] Since the record amount of municipal bond defaults in one year was just over $8 billion at the time, Whitney's comments about hundreds of billions in defaults briefly shook the market and drew a great deal of attention, much of it critical.[21][22] According to Michael Lewis in _Vanity Fair_: “Many of the articles attacking her accused her of making a very specific forecast — as many as a hundred defaults within a year! — that failed to materialize... But that's not at all what she had said: her words were being misrepresented so that her message might be more easily attacked. 'She was referring to the complacency of the ratings agencies and investment advisers who say there is nothing to worry about,' said a person at _60 Minutes_ who reviewed the transcripts of the interview for me, to make sure I had heard what I thought I had heard. She says there is something to worry about, and it will be apparent to everyone in the next 12 months.”[23]

“A tale of two Americas is emerging: one weighed down by debt and facing de minimis economic growth and another brimming with opportunity and nimble to invest in the future.” This was the thesis to Whitney's 2013 book, _Fate of the States: The New Geography of American Prosperity._[24][25] She argued that a “new map of prosperity” was emerging in the wake of the financial bust, with jobs moving away from the coasts and toward 17 “central corridor” states in the Midwest and Mountain West.[26]

Whitney's municipal debt thesis is still considered valid by at least one analyst. In January 2018 S&P Global published an analysis by Mercer Capital titled “Meredith Whitney is Still Right.” A decade later, Whitney's forecast of a wave of municipal defaults has not panned out. She closed her hedge fund soon after she made the disastrous call.[27]

Personal life

On February 12, 2005, Whitney married John Layfield in Key West, Florida. Layfield is a former WWE Champion, former WWE color commentator, and fellow Fox News Channel contributor.[28]

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title: Meredith Whitney

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything related to Whitney's education.

answer: Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987 and attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, where she then became a member of its first co-ed graduating class. Whitney then went on to attend Brown University, and graduated with honors in 1992 with a B.A. in History.

text: "She graduated from Madiera School in 1987 before attending a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class. She graduated with honors from Brown University in 1992 with a B.A. in History."

answer: Meredith Whitney graduated from Brown University in 1992 with a Bachelor of Arts degree in History. She joined Oppenheimer Holdings in 1993 and returned to the company in 2004. In 2009 she resigned from Oppenheimer to establish her own firm, Meredith Whitney Advisory Group (MWAG). In 2013 she de-registered MWAG to start her own hedge fund, Kenbelle Capital LP.

text: Information about Whitney's employment is irrelevant

refinement: Meredith Whitney graduated from Brown University in 1992 with a Bachelor of Arts degree in History.

text: Include information about Whitney's education before Brown University

refinement: Meredith Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987 and then attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class. Meredith Whitney graduated from Brown University in 1992 with a Bachelor of Arts degree in History.

text: Note that Whitney graduated from Brown with honors

refinement: Meredith Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987 and then attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class. Meredith Whitney graduated with honors from Brown University in 1992 with a Bachelor of Arts degree in History.

text: Replace the second use of Whitney's name with a pronoun to make it flow better

refinement: Meredith Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987 and then attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class. She graduated with honors from Brown University in 1992 with a Bachelor of Arts degree in History.

text: "She graduated with honors from Brown University in 1992 with a B.A. in History."

answer: Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987 and from Brown University in 1992 with a B.A. in History.

text: Whitney also studied at Lawrenceville School

refinement: Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987 and then attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class, and from Brown University in 1992 with a B.A. in History.

text: Put information about Whitney's time at Brown in a separate sentence to make it flow better

refinement: Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987 and then attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class. She graduated from Brown University in 1992 with a B.A. in History.

text: Note that she graduated from Brown with honors

refinement: Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987 and then attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class. She graduated with honors from Brown University in 1992 with a B.A. in History.

text: "She graduated from Madiera School in 1987"

text: "She graduated with honors from Brown University in 1992 with a B.A. in History."

answer: Meredith Whitney attended Brown University and graduated with a bachelor's degree in history. She also attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School.

text: Whitney also graduated from Madeira School

refinement: Meredith Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987. She attended Brown University and graduated with a bachelor's degree in history. She also attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School.

text: Include the year she graduated from Brown

refinement: Meredith Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987. She attended Brown University and graduated in 1992 with a bachelor's degree in history. She also attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School.

text: Move information about Lawrenceville School before information about Brown University to reflect chronological order

refinement: Meredith Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987. She also attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School. She attended Brown University and graduated in 1992 with a bachelor's degree in history.

text: Note that Whitney was a member of Lawrenceville's first co-ed graduating class

refinement: Meredith Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987. She also attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class. She attended Brown University and graduated in 1992 with a bachelor's degree in history.

text: Note that WHitney graduated Brown with honors

refinement: Meredith Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987. She also attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class. She attended Brown University and graduated with honors in 1992 with a bachelor's degree in history.

text: Move "also" from the information about Lawrenceville to the information about Brown

refinement: Meredith Whitney graduated from Madeira School in 1987. She attended a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class. She also attended Brown University and graduated with honors in 1992 with a bachelor's degree in history.

text: "attending a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School"

text: "She graduated with honors from Brown University in 1992 with a B.A. in History."

answer: Meredith Whitney attended Brown University and is an honors graduate. She began her professional career at Oppenheimer Holdings in 1993 and has been recognized by several organizations for her forecasts of the financial crisis in 2007. Whitney left Oppenheimer in 2004 to establish her own firm Meredith Whitney Advisory Group. She de-registered the firm in 2013 and joined the Bermuda-based insurer Arch Capital Group in 2015.

text: Information about Whitney's professional career is irrelevant

refinement: Meredith Whitney attended Brown University and is an honors graduate.

text: Whitney also attended Madeira School and Lawrenceville School

refinement: Meredith Whitney graduated from Madiera School in 1987 and then went on to attend a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class. She attended Brown University and is an honors graduate.

text: Note when Whitney graduated from Brown and what degree she received

refinement: Meredith Whitney graduated from Madiera School in 1987 and then went on to attend a post-graduate year at Lawrenceville School, becoming a member of its first co-ed graduating class. She attended Brown University and graduated with honors in 1992 with a B.A. in History.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Whitney's connection to the 2008 financial crisis.

answer: Whitney accurately predicted the difficulties of firms such as Citigroup. This contributed to her reputation as "The Oracle of Wall Street." Her predictions about potential municipal bond defaults also contributed to her reputation. While her predictions did not come to fruition, the financial crisis confirmed her reputation as an influential analyst.

text: Whitney's comments about municipal bond defaults were made in 2010, after the 2008 crisis

refinement: Whitney accurately predicted the difficulties of firms such as Citigroup. This contributed to her reputation as "The Oracle of Wall Street."

text: Note Whitney's reason for predicting difficulties for Citigroup

refinement: Whitney accurately predicted the difficulties of firms such as Citigroup. She noted that the bank's dividends paid out to investors were greater than its profits at the time, and argued that that would lead to bankruptcy. This contributed to her reputation as "The Oracle of Wall Street."

text: "Meredith Ann Whitney [...] is an American businesswoman hailed as 'The Oracle of Wall Street' by Bloomberg."

text: "She is known for successfully forecasting the difficulties of Citigroup and other major banks during the financial crisis of 2007-2008."

answer: Whitney issued a report in October 2007 that Citigroup and other major banks would face difficulties. Her words drew a great deal of attention, much of it critical. Then Citigroup's stock tanked, the CEO resigned and the successor slashed dividends. In Fortune, she predicted a wave of defaults, which has not materialized to this day.

text: The defaults Whitney predicted are irrelevant

refinement: Whitney issued a report in October 2007 that Citigroup and other major banks would face difficulties. Her words drew a great deal of attention, much of it critical. Then Citigroup's stock tanked, the CEO resigned and the successor slashed dividends.

text: The text does not say that the attention Whitney's prediction drew was critical

refinement: Whitney issued a report in October 2007 that Citigroup and other major banks would face difficulties. Her words drew a great deal of attention. Then Citigroup's stock tanked, the CEO resigned and the successor slashed dividends.

text: Include why Whitney concluded Citigroup would face difficulties

refinement: Whitney issued a report in October 2007 that Citigroup and other major banks would face difficulties. She noted that the bank's dividends paid out to investors were greater than its profits at the time, and argued that that would lead to bankruptcy. Her words drew a great deal of attention. Then Citigroup's stock tanked, the CEO resigned and the successor slashed dividends.

text: Note that after all of the changes, Citigroup's stock still lost considerable value

refinement: Whitney issued a report in October 2007 that Citigroup and other major banks would face difficulties. She noted that the bank's dividends paid out to investors were greater than its profits at the time, and argued that that would lead to bankruptcy. Her words drew a great deal of attention. Then Citigroup's stock tanked, the CEO resigned and the successor slashed dividends. Citigroup stock went on to lose 97% of its value by early 2009.

text: Be most specific about when Citigroup's stock fell

refinement: Whitney issued a report in October 2007 that Citigroup and other major banks would face difficulties. She noted that the bank's dividends paid out to investors were greater than its profits at the time, and argued that that would lead to bankruptcy. Her words drew a great deal of attention. Following the report's publication, Citigroup's stock tanked, the CEO resigned and the successor slashed dividends. Citigroup stock went on to lose 97% of its value by early 2009.

text: "Whitney issued a particularly pessimistic, but accurate, research report on Citigroup on October 31, 2007, to which many Wall Street analysts, and the news media, paid attention."

answer: On October 31, 2007, Whitney issued a research report on Citigroup, in which she stated that the bank's dividends paid out to investors were greater than its profits. She argued that this would lead to bankruptcy. Whitney was proven to be right, as shortly after the report was published, Citigroup's stock dropped sharply and the CEO resigned. By early 2009, Citigroup stock had lost 97% of its value.

text: "Whitney issued a particularly pessimistic, but accurate, research report on Citigroup on October 31, 2007, to which many Wall Street analysts, and the news media, paid attention. She noted that the bank's dividends paid out to investors were greater than its profits at the time, and made the case that this would lead to bankruptcy. Shortly after the report's publication and a sharp drop in Citigroup's stock, Charles Prince resigned as the bank's CEO and his successor slashed the dividend. Earlier that year, Forbes magazine had listed Whitney as the second-best stock picker in the capital-market industry. Citigroup stock went on to lose 97% of its value by early 2009."

answer: Whitney was on the cover of Fortune magazine during the financial crisis. She warned about problems that were starting to befall other banks after Merrill Lynch's, Lehman Brothers', and Bear Stearns' collapse. Her predictions brought her a lot of respets though it also described how she was wrong about the number of municipalities that would default on bonds and the number of banks that would go under.

text: Whitney's predictions about Citigroup should be included

refinement: Whitney issued a particularly pessimistic, but accurate, research report on Citigroup in 2007, which caught the attention of many Wall Street analysts and the news media. She noted that the bank's dividends paid out to investors were greater than its profits at the time, and argued that that would lead to bankruptcy. Shortly after the report's publication, Citigroup's stock dropped sharply, the bank's CEO resigned, and the new CEO slashed the dividend. Citigroup's stock went on to lose 97% of its value by early 2009. Whitney was on the cover of Fortune magazine during the financial crisis. She warned about problems that were starting to befall other banks after Merrill Lynch's, Lehman Brothers', and Bear Stearns' collapse. Her predictions brought her a lot of respets though it also described how she was wrong about the number of municipalities that would default on bonds and the number of banks that would go under.

text: It is not accurate to say that Whitney warned about the problems facing other banks, nor is it very relevant

refinement: Whitney issued a particularly pessimistic, but accurate, research report on Citigroup in 2007, which caught the attention of many Wall Street analysts and the news media. She noted that the bank's dividends paid out to investors were greater than its profits at the time, and argued that that would lead to bankruptcy. Shortly after the report's publication, Citigroup's stock dropped sharply, the bank's CEO resigned, and the new CEO slashed the dividend. Citigroup's stock went on to lose 97% of its value by early 2009. Whitney was on the cover of Fortune magazine during the financial crisis. Her predictions brought her a lot of respets though it also described how she was wrong about the number of municipalities that would default on bonds and the number of banks that would go under.

text: Whitney's being on the cover of Fortune and her predictions about municipalities defaulting on bonds are irrelevant

refinement: Whitney issued a particularly pessimistic, but accurate, research report on Citigroup in 2007, which caught the attention of many Wall Street analysts and the news media. She noted that the bank's dividends paid out to investors were greater than its profits at the time, and argued that that would lead to bankruptcy. Shortly after the report's publication, Citigroup's stock dropped sharply, the bank's CEO resigned, and the new CEO slashed the dividend. Citigroup's stock went on to lose 97% of its value by early 2009.

answer: Whitney was among the first analysts to accurately predict the difficulties of major banks in the 2007-2008 financial crisis. She warned of vulnerabilities in Citigroup's dividend structure leading to bankruptcy, and her bearish view on banks landed her on the cover of _Fortune_ magazine. Her predictions of significant municipal bond defaults within the next year also drew a great deal of attention and criticism. Despite failing forecasts from Whitney, her connection to the financial crisis remains significant.

text: Whitney's predictions about municipal bond defaults are irrelevant

refinement: Whitney was among the first analysts to accurately predict the difficulties of major banks in the 2007-2008 financial crisis. She warned of vulnerabilities in Citigroup's dividend structure leading to bankruptcy, and her bearish view on banks landed her on the cover of _Fortune_ magazine.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe the events that led up to Whitney closing her hedge fund.

answer: In 2010, Whitney had made a prediction about municipal bond defaults totaling hundreds of billions of dollars. However, the predictions never came true, and she closed her hedge fund soon after.

answer: Whitney de-registered MWAG in 2013. And in 2015 she joined Arch Capital Group as a manager overseeing, outside investment firms.

text: Irrelevant response

text: Provide a response

refinement: In 2010, Whitney predicted that 50 to 100 counties, cities, and towns in the United States would have "significant" municipal bond defaults totaling "hundreds of billions" of dollars. The prediction never same to fruition, and she closed her hedge fund soon after making the call.

answer: Meredith Whitney closed her hedge fund soon after incorrectly predicting that there would be 100 municipal defaults within a year. This incorrect prediction garnered widespread criticism from many analysts.

text: Whitney predicted 50 to 100 municipal defaults

refinement: Meredith Whitney closed her hedge fund soon after incorrectly predicting that there would be 50 to 100 municipal defaults within a year. This incorrect prediction garnered widespread criticism from many analysts.

answer:
Whitney made the following statement on CBS in 2013: “50 to 100 counties, cities, and towns in the United States would have “significant” municipal bond defaults totaling “hundreds of billions” of dollars, and that “it'll be something to worry about within the next 12 months.”[20] According to Michael Lewis in _Vanity Fair_: “Many of the articles attacking her accused her of making a very specific forecast — as many as a hundred defaults within a year! — that failed to materialize... But that's not at all what she had said: her words were being misrepresented so that her message might be more easily attacked. 'She was referring to the complacency of the ratings agencies and investment advisers who say there is nothing to worry about,' said a person at _60 Minutes_ who reviewed the transcripts of the interview for me, to make sure I had heard what I thought I had heard. She says there is something to worry about, and it will be apparent to everyone in the next 12 months.”
Whitney opened her own hedge fund not long after the interview, but then closed it upon realizing she couldn't make accurate calls when it came to predicting stock price movements.

text: The quote from Michael Lewis is irrelevant

refinement:
Whitney made the following statement on CBS in 2013: “50 to 100 counties, cities, and towns in the United States would have “significant” municipal bond defaults totaling “hundreds of billions” of dollars, and that “it'll be something to worry about within the next 12 months.”
Whitney opened her own hedge fund not long after the interview, but then closed it upon realizing she couldn't make accurate calls when it came to predicting stock price movements.

text: The text just says Whitney closed the hedge fund after the comments

refinement: Whitney made the following statement on CBS in 2013: “50 to 100 counties, cities, and towns in the United States would have “significant” municipal bond defaults totaling “hundreds of billions” of dollars, and that “it'll be something to worry about within the next 12 months.” The predictions never came true, and she closed her hedge fund soon after making the disastrous call.

answer: Shortly after issuing a pessimistic but accurate research report on Citigroup, Whitney resigned from Oppenheimer. Her call for hundreds of billions of municipal bond defaults failed to come to fruition despite some criticism. She closed her hedge fund soon after.

text: The information about Whitney's resignation from Oppenheimer

refinement: Her call for hundreds of billions of municipal bond defaults failed to come to fruition despite some criticism. She closed her hedge fund soon after.

text: It would be clearer and more accurate to say that Whitney predicted the defaults than that she called for it

refinement: Whitney's prediction of hundreds of billions of municipal bond defaults failed to come to fruition despite some criticism. She closed her hedge fund soon after.

text: It's not accurate to say the predictions failed to happen "despite" criticism

refinement: Whitney's prediction of hundreds of billions of municipal bond defaults failed to come to fruition and faced some criticism. She closed her hedge fund soon after.


text:
Two tiny steps forward, and I exhale. I paw the short grass. In waiting for my moment, patience has become me. I will wait for as long it takes to catch my prey off-guard, unaware.

My breathing slows, but my body tenses. It’s a battle between my body’s desire to race forward, and my breath’s quiet rhythm holding me still. I can’t let the body pull me too soon, or I’ll lose what I’ve waited for. I can’t let the breath anchor me for too long, or I’ll never have the chance to lose it. My prey has not stirred for many seconds now.

*Perhaps...*

My moment has come, I am death! I launch myself forward, vaulting rock and branch and stream alike. My mane blows behind me, the grass under me churns, and my prey will never know what’s happened.

I bite! My mouth sinks into boneless flesh and the fight has already left the frail thing. It takes only a twist of my head and I have taken its life and added it to mine. I savor the meat and the moment, tearing and chewing. There is nothing more than this right now. It will pass, but for now it is everything.

I stand, taking what remains in my mouth. I circle my domain to show all what is mine. I step to the stream, and show it what I have won. I prance to the tree, giddy, and show it what I’ve taken. I jump to the rock and gloat with my prize. I charge to the walls and dare them to take it from me. I laugh at the crickets, hiding atop the wall, their unending clicking and flashing betraying their fear.

*This is mine, from wall to rock to tree to wall. Do not forget it!* I roar.

I grow weary, it is time to sleep. Today was good. Tomorrow will be the same.

title: The King, ~300 words. First post here, criticism welcome.

question: Who is the narrator?

answer: A lion

text: There's no direct evidence that the narrator is a lion.

refinement: It is implied that the narrator is a lion

answer: The narrator is the king of the forest, a powerful and confident creature who rules over all that he surveys.

text: There's no direct evidence that the narrator is in a forest.

refinement: The narrator is the king of the land, a powerful and confident creature who rules over all that he surveys.

answer: A lion.

text: There's no direct evidence that the narrator is a lion.

refinement: It is implied that the narrator is a lion.

answer: The narrator is a lion.

text: There's no direct evidence that the narrator is a lion.

refinement: It is implied that the narrator is a lion.

question: What is the narrator's prey?

answer: The narrator's prey is a small animal.

text: There's no direct evidence that suggest the prey is small.

refinement: It is implied that the narrator's prey is a small animal.

answer: The narrator's prey is most likely small animals such as rabbits or mice.

text: There's no direct evidence that suggest the prey is small.

refinement: It is implied that the narrator's prey is most likely a small animal such as rabbit or mice.

answer: It is unclear what animal is it.

answer: The narrator's prey is a deer.

text: There's no evidence to suggest that the narrator's prey is a deer.

question: Where does this take place?

answer: It is not stated.

text: The setting is implied to be in a natural setting.

refinement: The setting is implied to be in a natural setting.

answer: This story takes place in the mind of a wild animal, likely in a forest or other natural setting.

text: "I launch myself forward, vaulting rock and branch and stream alike" is evidence that the setting is in a natural setting such as forest or alike.

text: empty response.

refinement: It is implied that the setting is in a natural environment.

answer: It is an some natural environment, though it is unclear where exactly it occurs.

text: "I launch myself forward, vaulting rock and branch and stream alike" is evidence that the setting is in a natural environment.

question: Explain what the lion did.

answer: The lion killed a prey animal and ate it.

text: There's no direct evidence that the predator is a lion.

refinement: The predator killed a prey animal and ate it.

text: "I savor the meat and the moment, tearing and chewing" is evidence that the predator ate it.

answer: The lion hunted down and killed its prey, then took its prize back to its territory to show off to other animals. This is a demonstration of the lion's dominance over its territory.

text: There's no direct evidence that the predator is a lion.

refinement: The narrator hunted down and killed its prey, then took its prize back to its territory to show off to other animals. This is a demonstration of the narrator's dominance over its territory.

text: "stand, taking what remains in my mouth. I circle my domain to show all what is mine" is evidence of what the narrator did.

answer: The lion hunted and killed its prey.

text: There's no direct evidence that the predator is a lion.

refinement: The narrator hunted and killed its prey.

text: "I savor the meat and the moment, tearing and chewing" is evidence that the predator ate it.

answer: It managed to catch and eat its prey.

text: "I savor the meat and the moment, tearing and chewing" is evidence that the narrator ate it.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: A lion stalks its prey from afar, waiting for the right moment to pounce. It finally attacks and succeeds. The lion proudly roars and falls asleep, ready to do the same thing tomorrow.

text: There is no direct evidence that the narrator is a lion.

refinement: A narrator stalks its prey from afar, waiting for the right moment to pounce. It finally attacks and succeeds. The lion proudly roars and falls asleep, ready to do the same thing tomorrow.

answer: The narrator is a lion who is hunting for prey. He is patient and waits for the right moment to attack. He leaps forward and bites his prey, killing it.

text: There is no direct evidence that the narrator is a lion.

refinement: The narrator is hunting for prey. He is patient and waits for the right moment to attack. He leaps forward and bites his prey, killing it.

answer: The protagonist is a lion who hunts prey, reveling in the thrill of the hunt and the satisfaction of the kill. They take pride in their domain, and enjoy the feeling of being the top predator.

text: There is no direct evidence that the narrator is a lion.

refinement: The protagonist hunts prey, reveling in the thrill of the hunt and the satisfaction of the kill. They take pride in their domain, and enjoy the feeling of being the top predator.

text: Missing an additional details to complete the summary length.

refinement: The protagonist hunts prey, reveling in the thrill of the hunt and the satisfaction of the kill. They take pride in their domain, and enjoy the feeling of being the top predator. It proudly roars and falls asleep, ready to do the same thing tomorrow.

answer: The passage is about a lion who is hunting prey.

text: There is no direct evidence that the narrator is a lion.

refinement: The passage is about a wild animal who is hunting prey.

text: The summary is missing additional details to complete the summary length.

refinement: The passage is about a wild animal who is hunting prey. They take pride in their domain, and enjoy the feeling of being the top predator. It proudly roars and falls asleep, ready to do the same thing tomorrow.