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    Exploring Chikmagalur Day 1 : Hirekolale Lake & Mallanduru shooting point

    Reaching Chikmagalur Right after winding up our visit to Javagal Lakshmi Narayana Temple, we headed towards our primary destination: Chikmagalur.We took the scenic route which goes through Belavadi and joins Belur – Chikmagalur state...

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    Javagal Lakshmi Narasimha Temple

    If you are a history buff and love art, you wouldn’t have missed visiting Belur and Halebeedu when in Karnataka. Historians believe that there are more than 100 such beautiful temples built by Hoysalas...

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    Agumbe Via Chikmagalur

    Agumbe is one of the moistest places in Karnataka and is also called as Cherrapunji of Karnataka. It can be reached from Bengaluru via Chikmagaluru or via Shivamogga. This is the writeup about the...

Exploring Chikmagalur Day 1 : Hirekolale Lake & Mallanduru shooting point

Reaching Chikmagalur Right after winding up our visit to Javagal Lakshmi Narayana Temple, we headed towards our primary destination: Chikmagalur.We took the scenic route which goes through Belavadi and joins Belur – Chikmagalur state...

Javagal Lakshmi Narasimha Temple

If you are a history buff and love art, you wouldn’t have missed visiting Belur and Halebeedu when in Karnataka. Historians believe that there are more than 100 such beautiful temples built by Hoysalas...

Agumbe Via Chikmagalur

Agumbe is one of the moistest places in Karnataka and is also called as Cherrapunji of Karnataka. It can be reached from Bengaluru via Chikmagaluru or via Shivamogga. This is the writeup about the...

Achyutaraya Temple, Hampi

Reaching the place After visiting the Underground Shiva temple, we were left with the last destination left in our Hampi 2 days trip. And it was Achyutaraya temple. It’s just 5 mins drive of...

Underground Shiva Temple, Hampi

Reaching the temple After spending time inside Zenana Enclosure, google map showed us a dusty mud road to reach our next destination, Underground Shiva temple or Prasanna Virupaksha temple. Without giving the second thought,...

Zenana Enclosure, Hampi

After Hazara Rama temple, we walked towards Zenana Enclosure. Zenana Enclosure is a vast area with beautiful monuments inside and bordered by the tall compound walls. This was a private property reserved for the...

Hazara Rama Temple, Hampi

After visiting Sanapur lake and Vijaya Vittala Temple Our first destination post-lunch was Hazara Rama Temple. This is my most favorite temple in Hampi and we recommend you to add this to your Hampi...

Vijaya Vittala Temple and Stone Chariot of Hampi

After spending a spectacular morning at Sanapur lake, we headed towards the very famous Vijaya Vittala temple of Hampi.   Vijaya Vittala temple Vijaya Vittala temple is the most spectacular and the must-visit temple of Hampi....

Serenity at Sanapur Lake

Our stay at Gowri resort was a pleasant one. Though it was very basic accommodation, the place was amidst beautiful nature. Just in front of the rooms, there were green paddy fields and the...

Queen’s Bath, Mahanavami Dibba, and Stepped Tank

Queen’s Bath After visiting Badavi Linga idol, we headed towards Royal Enclosure. On the Royal Enclosure side of Hampi, the first attraction you will get to see is Queen’s bath. [Click here to see...

Krishna Temple, Lakshmi Narasimha, and Badavi Linga

Krishna Temple We headed towards Krishna Temple post lunch and reached there at 3.30 pm. Krishna Temple is situated very close to Sasivekalu Ganesha idol. The temple was built in 1513 AD by the...

Sasivekalu Ganesha, Kadlekalu Ganesha, and Ruins of Hampi Bazar

We started climbing down the Hemakuta Hill at around 1 PM. Enroute, we visited one of the big Ganesha idols of Hampi, Sasivekalu Ganesha. Since it was carved by a mustard seller, the idol is...

Virupaksha Temple and Hemakuta Hill

As planned, we started from home to Hampi Virupaksha Temple in the early morning at 4 AM and traveled on the empty wide road of Bengaluru-Pune highway via Nelamangala > Tumkur > Sira > Hiriyur....

HAMPI – Visual Treat for History Lovers

Hampi had been on our wish list from the day Steps Together journey started, but somehow the plan did not materialize. We did not want to postpone our visit to Hampi any further at...

Kavi Shaila and Kavi Mane

Date: 25-Jan-18 Yet another trip to our hometown from Bangalore and an opportunity to tick off one more place from our bucket list. This time, it was Kavi Shaila, a memorial built for the...

Someshwara Temple and Kolaramma Temple of Kolar

The second Sunday of 2018 and we have our brand new Tata Nexon at home. Why not go for a long drive, we thought and opted to go to Kolar and visit two temples...

Shivagange – Perfect day trip from Bangalore

Finally, the day has come to visit Shivagange hill, one of the popular weekend getaways from Bangalore and one of the noted trekking destinations in Karnataka. For most of the folks from Bangalore, a...

Jog Falls and Keladi temple – Gems of Karnataka Tourism

No matter how many times you visit the highest waterfall in India- Jog falls, you can never miss a visit when you are around Shimoga. After spending some time in the viewpoints of Unchalli...

Unchalli Falls – Hidden treasure of Sirsi

When you hardly know anything about the place and expect a least out of it and then if it turns out to be extraordinary, then the feeling that goes through your minds would be...

Banavasi – the oldest town of Karnataka

After visiting Marikamba temple, we proceeded towards Banavasi. Amongst all the places that we planned for this trip, Banavasi had been our most favorite. This had a special mention in our minds because of...

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What can be stated as some beautiful locations, according to the text.

answer: According to the text, some beautiful locations are the Javagal Lakshmi Narasimha Temple. It is a great location for history and art lovers. The Underground Shiva Temple in Hampi is also beautiful as is the Zenana Enclosure. Another favorite temple to visit in Hampi is the Hazara Rama Temple.

text: The Underground Shiva Temple is not described as beautiful in the text. It would be better to omit this detail.

refinement: According to the text, some beautiful locations are the Javagal Lakshmi Narasimha Temple. It is a great location for history and art lovers. The Zenana Enclosure is also described as beautiful. Another favorite temple to visit in Hampi is the Hazara Rama Temple.

text: The Hazara Rama Temple is not described as beautiful in the text. It would be better to omit this sentence. Additionally, the question doesn't ask for "favorite temples", but for beautiful locations.

refinement: According to the text, some beautiful locations are the Javagal Lakshmi Narasimha Temple. It is a great location for history and art lovers. The Zenana Enclosure is also described as beautiful.

text: It's omitted that Serenity at Sanapur Lake is described as a beautiful location set amongst nature.

refinement: According to the text, some beautiful locations are the Javagal Lakshmi Narasimha Temple. It is a great location for history and art lovers. The Zenana Enclosure is also described as beautiful. Serenity at Sanapur Lake is described as a beautiful location set amongst nature.

answer: The Masthangana beach in Uttara Kannada, Hazara Rama Temple in Hampi, Queen's Bath in Hampi, and Hazara Rama Temple in Hampi.

text: This answer is incorrect, as none of the examples that are listed are described as beautiful in the text.

text: This is an empty response.

refinement: According to the text, some beautiful locations are the Javagal Lakshmi Narasimha Temple and the Zenana Enclosure. Serenity at Sanapur Lake is described as a beautiful location set amongst nature.

answer: Some of the beautiful locations mentioned in the text are Javagal Lakshmi Narayana Temple, Agumbe, Emerald Lake in Belur, Hazara Rama Temple in Hampi, and Serenity at Sanapur Lake.

text: There is no mention of Emerald Lake in the text. This should be omitted.

refinement: Some of the beautiful locations mentioned in the text are Javagal Lakshmi Narayana Temple, Agumbe,, Hazara Rama Temple in Hampi, and Serenity at Sanapur Lake.

text: Agumbe is not necessarily described as a beautiful location, so it should be omitted from the answer. It's described as "moist".

refinement: Some of the beautiful locations mentioned in the text are Javagal Lakshmi Narayana Temple, Hazara Rama Temple in Hampi, and Serenity at Sanapur Lake.

answer: Chikmagalur is one of the beautiful locations mentioned. Hampi is also a beautiful location. Other areas are Bali Gagne and Sri Kodandarama Swamy temple for example.

text: This answer isn't accurate. Bali Gagne and Sri Kodandarama are mentioned no where in the text. While Chikmagalur and Hampi can be stated as beautiful locations, they're not one of the beautiful locations mentioned.

text: Empty response

refinement: Chikmagalur and Hampi are home to some beautiful locations. Some of the beautiful locations that can be found there are Javagal Lakshmi Narasimha Temple, the Zenana Enclosure, and Serenity at Sanapur Lake.

answer: Some of the beautiful locations mentioned in the passage are: Javagal Lakshmi Narayana Temple, Agumbe, and Ajyutaraya Temple. Other locations include Belur, Halebeedu, and Hampi.

text: Agumbe, Ajyutaraya, Belur, Halebeedu, and Hampi are not described the beautiful locations. While some beautiful locations are in Hampi, that isn't necessarily one of the listed beautiful locations.

refinement: Some of the beautiful locations mentioned in the passage are: Javagal Lakshmi Narayana Temple

text: It's omitted that Serenity and the Zenana Enclosure are listed as beautiful locations.

refinement: Some of the beautiful locations mentioned in the passage are: Javagal Lakshmi Narayana Temple, Serenity at Sanapur Lake, and the Zenana Enclosure. Hampi is home to some of these locations.


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Allo, Allo, Allo, what marketing implications do we have here then?

IMPORTANCE: [rating=4]
RECOMMENDED SOURCE: Allo.Google.com

Google announcement this week of the launch of its new messenger app has got marketers excited. And no, it's not because of the new emojis. It's because it follows the industry-wide trend for integrating AI-powered digital assistants into messaging apps. The announcement comes hot of the heels of Facebook's announcement earlier this month which hailed the introduction of 'Messanger version 1.2', which would include facilities to let chatbots handle payments within the app.

The chat app has lots of nifty little features to tempt users, which aren't all that important to marketers. These are things like being able to enlarge or shrink text, send auto-generated responses, doodle on images or send an impressive range of stupid emojis.

The key feature from a marketing perspective is the fact the app contains a personal assistant that utilises 'Google Now', which uses a natural language interface to answer users questions. This feature can be brought into your chats with anyone using '@Google' or you can talk to the assistant directly in a separate chat.

[how-google-messenger-allo-works-example]

Above is an example of how you can bring in the smart assistant to a chat by using '@Google'. The way they've built the feature by using '@' rather than just having a button to bring in the bot suggests they may well do what Facebook has done and start to open up the platform to let others develop chatbots that work within the app. Below you can see an example of the way users can also talk directly with the assistant in a separate chat:

[Google Allo assistant example helpful ]

What does this mean for marketers?

The Allo app is a big move from Google. They'll probably look to make it the default android messenger app to give it a huge user base. Given Andriod has 1.4 billion users it could quickly grow to have a user base of a similar scale to Facebook Messager- putting it squarely in the top 3 global messaging apps.

Given that the AI assistant will be using Google search rankings to decide on what content to answer people's questions with- For example if they ask 'What is lifecycle marketing' to the chat they'll be likely to be shown the top ranking page for that search - then it means the important of SEO is reinforced by the app. Crucially it means ranking top of 'natural language keywords'- something Google have termed 'conversational search' is now extremely important.

WHAT IS IT? NATURAL LANGUAGE KEYWORDS / CONVERSATIONAL SEARCH

Confusingly this is sometimes called Natural Language Keywords, sometimes referred to as Conversational Search. The essence of it is using search functions in the way you would usually speak, rather than how they are currently used. This comes from either voice search or interacting with chat bots. A good example would be the usual typed search might be: 'Cheap Plane Tickets Dublin' but a 'conversational search' would be 'Show me plane tickets to Dublin under for less than forty pounds'.

The trend towards personal assistants and voice search means ranking on 'natural language keywords' is more important than ever. You should look at adapting your SEO strategy to take account of this as the trend becomes more pronounced. Identifying what natural language keywords are likely to be search related to your product/ brand is a great place to start, and then you can planning how to rank for them.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why are natural language keywords becoming more important to marketers?

answer: Google has just introduced an AI assistant that will use Google search rankings to decided on what content to deliver on questions. The conversational search uses search functions in the way that people usually speak rather than the way that they are currently used. This is the result of voice search and chatbots which are trending upwards making natural language keywords more important.

text: The first sentence uses the past tense instead of present in "to decided on.."

refinement: Google has just introduced an AI assistant that will use Google search rankings to decide on what content to deliver on questions. The conversational search uses search functions in the way that people usually speak rather than the way that they are currently used. This is the result of voice search and chatbots which are trending upwards making natural language keywords more important.

answer: The trend toward personal assistants and voice search makes natural language keywords more important than ever.

answer: Natural language keywords are becoming more important to marketers because chatbots and personal assistants rely on them to determine search results. Ranking high on natural language keywords is important in ensuring that your content is properly indexed and surfaced by Google, as users increasingly turn to conversational search.

answer: Given that the Google app contains an AI-powered digital assistant that utilises 'Google now', which uses a natural lanuage interface to answer users' questions, marketers now use natural language keywords as a way of gaining users' attentions.

answer: The natural language keywords are becoming increasingly important because they represent how people use search. The penetration of personal assistants and voice search mean ranking on 'natural language keywords' is essential in order to reach potential consumers online. Identifying which natural language keywords are relevant to your product/brand is the first step in making sure your SEO strategy is up to date.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why are marketers excited about the new Google messenger app?

answer: It follows the trend for integrating AI digital assistants into messaging apps.

answer: In it's messenger app, Google included an AI-powered digital assistant, which uses natural language interface to answer user's questions.

answer: Marketers are excited about the new Google messenger app because it uses Google Now, which uses a natural language interface to answer users questions. This provides an added opportunity to rank highly in conversational search, which is becoming more important with the trend towards personal assistants and voice search. It is important to adapt your SEO strategy to take account of this trend.

text: SEO strategy is irrelevant.

refinement: Marketers are excited about the new Google messenger app because it uses Google Now, which uses a natural language interface to answer users questions. This provides an added opportunity to rank highly in conversational search, which is becoming more important with the trend towards personal assistants and voice search.

text: The high ranks in conversational searches are the opportunity to be preferred on AI-bot-generated answers, not the other way around.

refinement: Marketers are excited about the new Google messenger app because it uses Google Now, which uses a natural language interface to answer users questions. This provides an added advantage to rank highly in conversational search, which is becoming more important with the trend towards personal assistants and voice search.

answer: Marketers are excited about the new Google messenger app because it integrates AI-powered digital assistants into messaging apps. This means that ranking high on 'natural language keywords,' which is also known as conversational search, is more important than ever. This trend means that increased efforts must be made in optimizing SEO and identifying relevant natural language keywords.

text: SEO is irrelevant.

refinement: Marketers are excited about the new Google messenger app because it integrates AI-powered digital assistants into messaging apps. This means that ranking high on 'natural language keywords,' which is also known as conversational search, is more important than ever.

answer: Marketers are excited because the new app includes an AI-powered digital assistant that uses "Google Now". It uses a natural language interface to answer users' questions. Anyone who uses @Google can bring the feature in or talk to an assistant directly in a separate chat.

text: How to use Google Now is irrelevant.

refinement: Marketers are excited because the new app includes an AI-powered digital assistant that uses "Google Now". It uses a natural language interface to answer users' questions.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why has the change made natural language keywords so important?

answer: The main reason for the increased importance of natural language keywords is due to the introduction of personal assistants such as Allo. It means that the ability to rank for particular search terms becomes more important as the personal assistant will answer questions with data sourced from Google search. This means the focus of SEO should now shift to ranking top of natural language keywords.

answer: The trend towards personal assistants and voice search mean that the keywords will be spoken by them rather than typed by you.

text: "the keywords will be spoken by them rather than typed by you" is weird phrasing. The searches will be spoken instead of typed.

refinement: The trend towards personal assistants and voice search mean that the keywords will be spoken rather than typed.

text: "Mean" should be "means"

refinement: The trend towards personal assistants and voice search means that the keywords will be spoken rather than typed.

answer: They use Google search ranking to decide on what content to answer people's questions with. Google calls it a "natural language keyword."

text: The answer doesn't address the question.

text: The answer is empty.

refinement: The change includes AI assistants who answer spoken queries, which means natural language rankings are more important in a marketing context.

answer: It is likely that Google will make the Allo app the default Android Messenger, giving it an enormous user base. Android has 1.4 billion users so it could end up in the top 3 global messaging apps. The AI assistant will use Google search ranks to decide on what content answers people's questions. This means that increasingly SEO will have to include conversational search.

answer: The change with the addition of personal assistants and conversational search means natural language keywords are more important than ever. This is because the AI assistant within the Allo app will use Google search rankings to answer questions. To rank top of these natural language search rankings is now essential to marketing success.


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Anilyth
Anilyth is the world in which the Fire Dancer short story takes place and a longer form story I have plans to write (Or rewrite I guess.) I plan to do some lore background for the world later, but for now I plan to just go over some of the nations of this world, I may add some later, and those additions will be talked about once I’ve decided I’ve got the world fully developed or once I have a decent amount of them, but for now this is the world I’ve thought up so far.

An’kowrath
An ancient nation adept in magic, some of the world greatest sorcerers and warlocks come from An’kowrath, many buildings are made using magic. Some of it’s greatest spell casters are sent off to the flying city Low’nathra, there they are allowed to learn magic completely uninhibited, while other nations specialize in a specific type of magics such as soul, fire, lightning and water the citizens of An’kowrath are known to be adept in all kind of magic. Some of it’s greatest sorcerers master several magic arts during their life. Once in a generation an exceptional wizard will be recognized as a master of call magics. This person is called upon to be the leader of An’kowrath, even if they are not a native citizen of An’kowrath. The advancing of magic is at the forefront of culture in An’kowrath. It has the highest density of talented sorcerers compared to other nations.

Leondria
The country of Leondria consists of two parts, a vast desert, and it’s mountain range which stands in the middle of the country. The desert is relatively tame, the main problem for travelers is the small tribes who require payment in exchange for safe passage, although no one has been killed by the tribes those who try to enter and refuse to pay are not left in a healthy state before being removed from the country. Those who visit the country often travel there to learn with the monks who make their home on top of the Leondria Mountains, although the mountain are home to the Soul Walkers and the Soul Benders it was once also home to the Soul Channelers, but their people were decimated in a war of their own creation. Some say the war was started due to the foolishness of a young chief who was bent to the will of a Fire Dancer, but these are merely unconfirmed stories that may never be discovered since the Soul Channelers were all killed at the end of the war. Some say the king who was able to escape but he has not been seen since.

Lisanderey
An incredibly snowy landscape Lisanderey is home to some of the toughest creatures in Anilyth. It’s said that the land was once desert before a powerful sorcerer turned the land into vast plains perfect for farming, it has since become a cold and snow covered nation, only the toughest men have dared to traverse it on foot. Most travel in caravans powered by the powerful imaprose, large creatures similar to wooly mammoths. The land is unappealing and has for the most part avoided be invasion, but the few leaders who have tried to take control of the nation from its rulers have failed spectacularly due to them being unprepared for the cold climate in Lisanderey. It’s leaders have always been happy to stay within their borders and thus have armies more for the purpose of defense and to act as police for the cities. Each city has a strong sense of community, most people know everyone else in their town, those in cities know their districts and have a general feel for the other districts. Lisanderey has no rich or poor, those with money give it to those without money and the leaders are all ordinary citizens who are paid for their contributions in helping to governing the people. Lisanderey is home to the Fire Dancers, acrobatic warriors with a mastery over fire, able to conjure their own inner flame to be used against enemies or manipulation of a currently burning fire to enhance their own.

The Plains of Bantana
Vast fields of tall grass cover Bantana, the parts of this nation that aren’t covered in grass are instead the home of it’s native people, the Water Weavers. Mastery over water is the only thing that has kept them alive for so long, many attempts have been made by foreign nations to burn the tall grass in an attempt to drive out it’s citizens, but their use of water has allowed them to fight back the invaders and the fires they start. Over time the use of fire has made the plant life incredibly resistant to fires. Although it’s known for it’s talented warriors it is mainly known as a farming culture, due to it’s people mastery of water they are able to generate the best crops in the world, many other nations have attempted to invade them in the past because of this, but the nations water weavers were able to beat them back with the help of the nation's most elite soldiers the Grass Stalkers. The Grass Stalkers are known for their stealth and ability to avoid detection by hiding amongst the grass, striking when in the middle of enemy forces before diving back into grasses they came from, small squads of these elite soldiers have been known to take out an entire legion of soldiers, but their stealth skills aren’t limited of their home country. Some of them that live the longest are sent to other nation’s as spies or assassins.

The Republic of Oranthia
Although they have no native Sorcerers or Elemental Sorcerers The Republic of Oranthia makes up for this by being the most technologically advanced nation. They have not achieved this through the most ethical of paths, because they believe they are in competition with other nations they have often kidnapped the Sorcerers of other nations and forced them to test their technologies. Many captives have died during testing, but not always because they were being tested on, but more often because of exhaustion. The scientists force them to continue using their own magic until they have none left to use, but still they push them until they die from exhaustian. Many citizens live their day to day lives completely unaware of the acts perpetrated by their government, many of those who do end up leaving for another nation. On it’s surface the government appears to be democratic, but the main party doesn’t see any real competition, this is because anyone who tries to oppose them ends up dead or as an experiment.

Kamisia
The coastal nation of Kamisia is a large fishing nation, Kamisians are among the few people who brave the mighty oceans of Anilyth, their naval might in unmatched throughout the land. There are stories of single Kamisian boats taking out entire fleets, and these stories are not unfounded

title: The world of the Fire Dancer [MF]

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize An'kowrath.

answer: An’kowrath is masters of all forms of magic, ruled by a single leader who must be adept in magic. Its leadership runs their civilization on the dense concentration of talented sorcerers by the nation. Its most notable aspect is that the An'kowrathian people can be found all over the world.

text: The response is poorly constructed and should be edited.

refinement: An’kowrath is an ancient nation adept in all forms of magic, ruled by a single leader who must be a master of all magics. Its leadership runs their civilization on the dense concentration of talented sorcerers by the nation. Its most notable aspect is that the An'kowrathian people can be found all over the world.

text: This line makes little sense and should be removed.

refinement: An’kowrath is an ancient nation adept in all forms of magic, ruled by a single leader who must be a master of all magics. Its most notable aspect is that the An'kowrathian people can be found all over the world.

text: This part of the response cannot be corroborated because it is not found in the text.

refinement: An’kowrath is an ancient nation adept in all forms of magic, ruled by a single leader who must be a master of all magics.

text: Missing a few details about An’kowrath.

refinement: An’kowrath is an ancient nation whose citizens are adept in all forms of magic, ruled by a single leader who must be a master of all magics. It has the highest density of talented sorcerers compared to other nations. Many buildings here are made using magic and the greatest spell casters are sent off to the flying city of Low'nathra to learn magic uninhibited. The advancing of magic is at the forefront of culture in An’kowrath.

answer: An’kowrath is an ancient nation adept in magic, some of the world greatest sorcerers and warlocks come from it. Its most notable aspect is that the An’kowrathian people can be found all over the world.

text: Change to "world's"

refinement: An’kowrath is an ancient nation adept in magic, some of the world's greatest sorcerers and warlocks come from it. Its most notable aspect is that the An’kowrathian people can be found all over the world.

text: This part of the response cannot be corroborated because it is not found in the text.

refinement: An’kowrath is an ancient nation adept in magic, some of the world's greatest sorcerers and warlocks come from it.

text: Missing a few details about the nation of An'kowrath.

refinement: An’kowrath is an ancient nation adept in magic, some of the world's greatest sorcerers and warlocks come from it. It has the highest density of talented sorcerers compared to other nations. Many buildings here are made using magic and the greatest spell casters are sent off to the flying city of Low'nathra to learn magic uninhibited. The advancing of magic is at the forefront of culture in An’kowrath.

answer: An'kowrath is a large nation though it's known for it's strong magic. It's considered the cleverest nation.

text: It was never mentioned if An'kowrath is a large nation. It's also known for its adept master sorcerers and warlocks, not just strong magic.

refinement: An'kowrath is a nation known for magic. It's considered the cleverest nation.

text: The response is inaccurate. Nobody considered them as the cleverest nation.

text: Missing several details about An'kowrath.

refinement: An'kowrath is a nation known for magic. Some of the greatest sorcerers and warlocks come from An'kowrath and many of their buildings are made using magic. Citizens of An'kowrath are known to be adept in all kinds of magic. The advancing of magic is at the forefront of culture in An'kowrath and it has the highest density of talented sorcerers compared to other nations.

answer: An'kowrath is an ancient nation adept in magic. Some of the world's greatest sorcerers and warlocks come from An'kowrath. Many buildings are made using magic. Some of it's greatest spell casters are sent off to the flying city Low'nathra, there they are allowed to learn magic completely uninhibited.

text: Replace with "where"

refinement: An'kowrath is an ancient nation adept in magic. Some of the world's greatest sorcerers and warlocks come from An'kowrath. Many buildings are made using magic. Some of it's greatest spell casters are sent off to the flying city Low'nathra, where they are allowed to learn magic completely uninhibited.

answer: An'kowrath is an ancient nation adept in magic. Their greatest sorcerers and warlocks come from An'kowrath. Some of the buildings are made using magic. Some of its greatest spell casters are sent off to the flying city Low'nathra, where they are allowed to learn magic completely uninhibited. The citizens of An'kowrath are known to be adept in all kinds of magic. Some of its greatest sorcerers master several magic arts during their life. Once in a generation, an exceptional wizard will be recognized as a master of call magics. This person is called upon to be the leader of An'kowrath, even if they are not a native citizen of An'kowrath. The advancing of magic is at the forefront of culture in An'kowrath. It has the highest density of talented sorcerers compared to other nations.

answer: An'kowrath is a large nation though it's known for it's strong magic.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Leondria.

answer: A desert and mountain range of Leondria is visited by monks because it's home to them. Besides monks, locals visit Leondria Mountains to learn with monks. The mountain range is also home to the Soul Walkers, who are raided by the Soul Benders, which caused the Soul Channelers to decimated. Soul Channelers originated from them.

text: Everything in the response is either a coherence issue or just plain wrong. This response needs to be nuked and replaced.

refinement: The country of Leondria has two parts: a desert populated by small tribes who extort money from travelers, and a mountain range in the middle of the country where the monks live. Soul Walkers and Soul Benders also live up the mountains, which was also the home of the now-extinct Soul Channelers - a people who were decimated in a war they created. It is rumored that their former king was able to escape the war, but has not been seen.

answer: Leondria is a country consisting of a desert and a mountain range. The desert is relatively tame, but its mountains are home to the Soul Walkers and Soul Benders. The Soul Walkers and Soul Benders are decimated in a war of their own creation.

text: The response is missing the part about the monks, the tribes, and the Soul Channelers.

refinement: Leondria is a country consisting of a desert and a mountain range. The desert is relatively tame, but the main problem for travelers is the small tribes who require payment in exchange for safe passage. Those who visit the country often travel there to learn with the monks who make their home on top of the Leondria Mountains, although the mountain is home to the Soul Walkers and the Soul Benders. It was also once home to the Soul Channelers. The Soul Walkers and Soul Benders are decimated in a war of their own creation.

text: This is incorrect. It was the Soul Channelers who were decimated.

refinement: Leondria is a country consisting of a desert and a mountain range. The desert is relatively tame, but the main problem for travelers is the small tribes who require payment in exchange for safe passage. Those who visit the country often travel there to learn with the monks who make their home on top of the Leondria Mountains, although the mountain is home to the Soul Walkers and the Soul Benders. It was also once home to the Soul Channelers, who were decimated in a war of their own creation.

answer: Leondria is a country with a large desert and a mountain range in the middle of the country.  One of the more famous areas of the country are the Leondria Mountains. The citizens are known for mastery of their minds and bodies, as well as for living a simple life on the mountain tops.

text: The highlighted response is incorrect and not found in the text.

refinement: Leondria is a country with a large desert and a mountain range in the middle of the country.

text: The response is missing a few key details.

refinement: Leondria is a country with a large desert and a mountain range in the middle of the country. The desert is tame, but home to small tribes that require money from travelers in exchange for safe passage. The Leondria Mountains is where the travelers go to visit the monks who live there. It is also home to the Soul Walkers and Soul Benders. It was once home to the Soul Channelers, but their people were decimated in a war of their own creation.

answer: A desert and mountain range of Leondria is visited by monks because it's home to them. Besides monks, locals visit Leondria Mountains to learn with monks. The mountain range is also home to the Soul Walkers, who are raided by the Soul Benders, which caused the Soul Channelers to decimated. Soul Channelers originated from them. The mountain range is also home to the Soul Channelers, who were forced to participate in a war of their own creation, which caused them to decimated.

answer: Leondria is a country in Anilyth. The desert is relatively tame, but the mountains are home to the Soul Walkers and Soul Benders. The Soul Channelers were decimated in a war of their own creation.

text: Missing the part about the monks, the tribes, and the bit about the Soul Channelers.

refinement: Leondria is a country in Anilyth. The desert is relatively tame, but the main problem for travelers is the small tribes who require payment in exchange for safe passage. Those who visit the country often travel there to learn with the monks who make their home on top of the Leondria Mountains, which is also home to the Soul Walkers and Soul Benders. The Soul Channelers also used to live in the mountains, but their people were decimated in a war of their own creation.

answer: Leondria is a country with a large desert and a mountain range in the middle of the country. Its cultivable land is a vast plain between its desert and mountain ranges. Its citizens are known for mastery of their minds and bodies, as well as for living a simple life on the mountain tops.

text: The highlighted part of the response is not in the text.

refinement: Leondria is a country with a large desert and a mountain range in the middle of the country.

text: Missing details about Leondria.

refinement: Leondria is a country with a large desert and a mountain range in the middle of the country. The desert is populated by small tribes who extort money from travelers who go to the mountain range in the middle of the country to train with the monks who live there. Soul Walkers and Soul Benders also live up the mountains, which was also the home of the now-extinct Soul Channelers - a people who were decimated in a war they created. It is rumored that their former king was able to escape the war, but has not been seen.

answer: Leondria is a country consisting of a desert and a mountain range. Its desert is relatively tame, but its mountains are home to the Soul Walkers and Soul Benders. The Soul Walkers and Soul Benders are decimated in a war of their own creation.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Lisanderey.

answer: Lisanderey is home to some of the toughest creatures in Anilyth. It's a cold and snowy nation, and it's people are known for their mastery over water, which has allowed them to fight off invaders. The land is also home to the Grass Stalkers, a group of elite soldiers.

text: This major plot point is incorrect and refers to the people from the Plains of Bantana.

refinement: Lisanderey is home to some of the toughest creatures in Anilyth. It's a cold and snowy nation.

text: Add the missing details about Lisanderey.

refinement: Lisanderey is home to some of the toughest creatures in Anilyth. It's a cold and snowy nation that is difficult to traverse on foot. The land is unappealing and has avoided invasion because those who try to take control of the country fail due to the frigid climate. Lisanderey's armies are more for defensive and policing purposes. Each city in the country has a strong sense of community and there are no social classes. Lisanderey is home to the Fire Dancers, acrobatic warriors with a mastery over fire.

answer: Lisanderey is an incredibly snowy landscape. Stabbing plants populate it. The land remains unexplored and little is known about it. The people there have the utmost mastery over the water making the very plants in Lisanderey resistant to fire.

text: The highlighted text is incorrect. There are no stabbing plants and there are inhabitants. The people mastering water are for the Plains of Bantana, not Lisanderey.

refinement: Lisanderey is an incredibly snowy landscape.

text: Add the missing details about Lisanderey.

refinement: Lisanderey is an incredibly snowy landscape and is home to some of the toughest creatures in Anilyth. It's a cold and snowy nation that is difficult to traverse on foot. The land is unappealing and has avoided invasion because those who try to take control of the country fail due to the frigid climate. Lisanderey's armies are more for defensive and policing purposes. Each city in the country has a strong sense of community and there are no social classes. Lisanderey is home to the Fire Dancers, acrobatic warriors with a mastery over fire.

answer: Lisanderey is a place of extreme cold with a vast amount of snow and has home to the Water Weavers, they are known for their mastery over water and have made the plants resistant to fires. The land is unappealing and has for the most part avoided be invasion, but the few leaders who have tried to take control of the nation from its rulers have failed spectacularly due to them being unprepared for the cold climate in Lisanderey.

text: The highlighted text is incorrect.

refinement: Lisanderey is a place of extreme cold with a vast amount of snow. The land is unappealing and has for the most part avoided be invasion, but the few leaders who have tried to take control of the nation from its rulers have failed spectacularly due to them being unprepared for the cold climate in Lisanderey.

text: Replace with "invasion, because"

refinement: Lisanderey is a place of extreme cold with a vast amount of snow. The land is unappealing and has for the most part avoided invasion, because the few leaders who have tried to take control of the nation from its rulers have failed spectacularly due to them being unprepared for the cold climate in Lisanderey.

text: Add the part about the Fire Dancers.

refinement: Lisanderey is a place of extreme cold with a vast amount of snow. The land is unappealing and has for the most part avoided invasion, because the few leaders who have tried to take control of the nation from its rulers have failed spectacularly due to them being unprepared for the cold climate in Lisanderey. Lisanderey is home to the Fire Dancers, acrobatic warriors with a mastery over fire, able to conjure their own inner flame to be used against enemies or manipulation of a currently burning fire to enhance their own.

answer: The Lisanderey is a place of extreme cold with a vast amount of snow and has only the toughest of people manage to travel there and are likely the toughest of people on the land. All the citizens make sure that the weak and less fortunate are looked after, people don't have care about how much you have or that you have or don't have power.

text: The response is hard to read. Some elements should be removed.

refinement: The Lisanderey is a place of extreme cold and only the toughest of people manage to travel there. All the citizens make sure that the weak and less fortunate are looked after, people don't have care about how much you have or that you have or don't have power.

text: This is extraneous and rambling.

refinement: The Lisanderey is a place of extreme cold and only the toughest of people manage to travel there. All the citizens make sure that the weak and less fortunate are looked after.

text: Add the missing details about Lisanderey.

refinement: The Lisanderey is a place of extreme cold and only the toughest of people manage to travel there. All the citizens make sure that the weak and less fortunate are looked after. The land is unappealing and has avoided invasion because those who try to take control of the country fail due to the cold weather. Lisanderey's armies are more for defensive and policing purposes. Lisanderey is home to the Fire Dancers, acrobatic warriors with a mastery over fire. They can conjure their own inner flame to be used against enemies or manipulate a burning fire to enhance their own.

answer: Lisanderey is a snowy landscape. It's home to some of the toughest creatures in the world. It's cold and snowy, and the people are tough. The people are masters of water, and they use it to fight back invaders.

text: Redundant.

refinement: Lisanderey is a snowy landscape. It's home to some of the toughest creatures in the world. The people are masters of water, and they use it to fight back invaders.

text: This is incorrect information. The place is home to Fire Dancers, not the warriors of Banata.

refinement: Lisanderey is a snowy landscape. It's home to some of the toughest creatures in the world.

text: Add the missing details about the country.

refinement: Lisanderey is a snowy landscape. It's home to some of the toughest creatures in the world. The land is unappealing and has for the most part avoided invasion because its extreme cold has deterred invading armies. Lisanderey's forces are defensive and used to protect its borders and police the population. Each city in the country has a strong sense of community and there are no social classes. Lisanderey is home to the Fire Dancers, acrobatic warriors with a mastery over fire.

answer: Lisanderey is home to some of the toughest creatures in Anilyth. It's a cold and snowy nation, and it's people are known for their mastery over water, which has allowed them to fight off invaders.

answer: Lisanderey is a snowy landscape. It's home to some of the toughest creatures in the world. It's cold and snowy, and the people are tough. The land is unappealing and has for the most part avoided be invasion. The people are masters of water, and they use it to fight back invaders.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarive the Plains of Batanna

answer: The Plains of Bantana is a nation of people who are adept at water magic. The land is covered in tall grass, and it's people are known as Water Weavers. The land is unappealing and has for the most part avoided be invasion, but the few leaders who have tried to take control of the nation from its rulers have failed spectacularly due to them being unprepared for the cold climate in Lisanderey.

text: Change to "its"

refinement: The Plains of Bantana is a nation of people who are adept at water magic. The land is covered in tall grass, and its people are known as Water Weavers. The land is unappealing and has for the most part avoided be invasion, but the few leaders who have tried to take control of the nation from its rulers have failed spectacularly due to them being unprepared for the cold climate in Lisanderey.

text: The highlighted response is incorrect as it describes Lisanderey, not Banata.

refinement: The Plains of Bantana is a nation of people who are adept at water magic. The land is covered in tall grass, and its people are known as Water Weavers.

text: Missing a few details about invasions, farming, and the Grass Stalkers.

refinement: The Plains of Bantana is a nation of people who are adept at water magic. The land is covered in tall grass, and its people are known as Water Weavers. Mastery over water is the only thing that has kept them alive for so long as they have been invaded numerous times, but have always managed to drive the invaders back. Bantana's farming culture allows them to produce the best crops in the world. The nation also has elite solider/assassins called Grass Stalkers. Known for stealth and precise attacks, even a small squad of Grass Stalkers can take out an entire legion of soldiers.

answer: The Plains of Batana is a nation of people who are adept at water magic. The land is covered in tall grass, and it's people are known as Water Weavers. The land is unappealing and has for the most part avoided be invasion, but the few leaders who have tried to take control of the nation from its rulers have failed spectacularly due to them being unprepared for the cold climate in Lisanderey.

answer: The plains of Bantana is described as a vast field of tall grass that covers the nation except for a few parts of the land occupied by the native people of Kamisia. The nation is described as cold and snowy with the toughest men able to get through the plains of Bantana. The people of Kamisia have mastered the art of water bending and have been able to use this most powerful element to resist invaders like fire.

text: The highlighted text is incorrect because it's a jumbled mess of information from different sources.

refinement: The plains of Bantana is described as a vast field of tall grass that covers the nation except for a few parts of the land occupied by the native people.

text: Replace with "are"

refinement: The plains of Bantana are described as a vast field of tall grass that covers the nation except for a few parts of the land occupied by the native people.

text: Add the missing details about the people of Bantana.

refinement: The plains of Bantana are described as a vast field of tall grass that covers the nation except for a few parts of the land occupied by the native people, the Water Weavers. Mastery over water and their elite warrior-assassins called the Grass Stalkers have saved the country from numerous invasions. The Grass Stalkers are known for their stealth and small squads of these elite soldiers have been known to take out an entire legion of soldiers. Bantana is also known as a farming culture and produces the best crops in the world.

answer: The desert is relatively tame, the main problem for travelers is the small tribes that require payment in exchange for safe passage. Some of the people are known as Grass Stalkers and are elite soldiers that operate at a grass while using their stealth to avoid detection.

text: The highlighted text is incorrect and describes another country.

refinement: Some of the people are known as Grass Stalkers and are elite soldiers that operate at a grass while using their stealth to avoid detection.

text: The response is poorly constructed and hard to read.

refinement: Grass Stalkers are elite soldiers who use stealth to avoid detection.

text: Missing key details about Bantana.

refinement: Vast fields of tall grass cover Bantana. The parts of this nation free from grass are home to its native people, the Water Weavers. Mastery over water is the only thing that has kept them alive for so long as they have been invaded numerous times, but have always managed to drive the invaders back. Bantana's farming culture allows them to produce the best crops in the world. The nation also has elite solider/assassins called Grass Stalkers who use stealth to avoid detection. Even a small squad of Grass Stalkers can take out an entire legion of soldiers.

answer: The parts of this nation that aren't covered in grass are instead the home of it’s native people, the Water Weavers. Mastery over water is the only thing that has kept them alive for so long, many attempts have been made by foreign nations to burn the tall grass in an attempt to drive out it's citizens, but their use of water has allowed them to fight back the invaders and the fires they start. Over time the use of fire has made the plant life incredibly resistant to fires. Although it's known for it's talented warriors it is mainly known as a farming culture, due to it's people mastery of water, they are able to generate the best crops in the world, many other nations have attempted to invade them in the past because of this, but water weavers were able to beat them back with the help of the nation's most elite soldiers the Grass Stalkers. The Grass Stalkers are known for their stealth and ability to avoid detection by hiding amongst the grass, striking when in the middle of enemy forces before diving back into grasses they came from, small squads of these elite soldiers have been known to take out an entire legion of soldiers, but their stealth skills aren’t limited of their home country. Some of them that live the longest are sent to other nation’s as spies or assassins.

text:
**Most of the response is an exact copy of the source material**
Chaange all "it's" to "its"

refinement: The parts of this nation that aren't covered in grass are instead the home of its native people, the Water Weavers. Mastery over water is the only thing that has kept them alive for so long, many attempts have been made by foreign nations to burn the tall grass in an attempt to drive out its citizens, but their use of water has allowed them to fight back the invaders and the fires they start. Over time the use of fire has made the plant life incredibly resistant to fires. Although it's known for its talented warriors it is mainly known as a farming culture, due to its people mastery of water, they are able to generate the best crops in the world, many other nations have attempted to invade them in the past because of this, but water weavers were able to beat them back with the help of the nation's most elite soldiers the Grass Stalkers. The Grass Stalkers are known for their stealth and ability to avoid detection by hiding amongst the grass, striking when in the middle of enemy forces before diving back into grasses they came from, small squads of these elite soldiers have been known to take out an entire legion of soldiers, but their stealth skills aren’t limited of their home country. Some of them that live the longest are sent to other nation’s as spies or assassins.

text: Change to "nations"

refinement: The parts of this nation that aren't covered in grass are instead the home of its native people, the Water Weavers. Mastery over water is the only thing that has kept them alive for so long, many attempts have been made by foreign nations to burn the tall grass in an attempt to drive out its citizens, but their use of water has allowed them to fight back the invaders and the fires they start. Over time the use of fire has made the plant life incredibly resistant to fires. Although it's known for its talented warriors it is mainly known as a farming culture, due to its people mastery of water, they are able to generate the best crops in the world, many other nations have attempted to invade them in the past because of this, but water weavers were able to beat them back with the help of the nation's most elite soldiers the Grass Stalkers. The Grass Stalkers are known for their stealth and ability to avoid detection by hiding amongst the grass, striking when in the middle of enemy forces before diving back into grasses they came from, small squads of these elite soldiers have been known to take out an entire legion of soldiers, but their stealth skills aren’t limited of their home country. Some of them that live the longest are sent to other nations as spies or assassins.

answer: The Plains of Bantana is a nation that has no native sorcerers or elemental sorcerers. They have mastered water, which is the only thing that has kept them alive. This nation is known for its talented warriors, but it is mainly known as a farming culture due to the people mastery of water.

text: This is incorrect. Bantana has Water Weavers.

refinement: The Plains of Bantana is a nation that has mastered water, which is the only thing that has kept them alive. This nation is known for its talented warriors, but it is mainly known as a farming culture due to the people mastery of water.

text: Change to "people's"

refinement: The Plains of Bantana is a nation that has mastered water, which is the only thing that has kept them alive. This nation is known for its talented warriors, but it is mainly known as a farming culture due to the people's mastery of water.

text: The response lacks critical details about Bantana.

refinement: The Plains of Bantana is a nation covered in tall, fire-resistant grass. The people that live here, knowns as the Water Weavers, have mastered water manipulation, which is the only thing that has kept them alive after numerous invasions by hostile forces. This nation is known for its elite warriors, the Grass Stalkers, who use stealth to dominate the battlefield. Even a small squad of Grass Stalkers can take out an entire legion of soldiers. Bantana is also known as a farming culture that produces the best crops in the world.

answer: The Plas of Bantana is a vast stretch of plains that occupy a small section of the nation of Lisanderey. The main characteristic of this area is its tall grass. The nation of Lisanderey though not necessarily located within the plains of Bantana, is a ski sub-nation of the same country. They are known to have some of the toughest warriors who use their water bending abilities to challenge and defeat their enemies.

text: Replace with "The Plains"

refinement: The Plains of Bantana is a vast stretch of plains that occupy a small section of the nation of Lisanderey. The main characteristic of this area is its tall grass. The nation of Lisanderey though not necessarily located within the plains of Bantana, is a ski sub-nation of the same country. They are known to have some of the toughest warriors who use their water bending abilities to challenge and defeat their enemies.

text: The highlighted text is incorrect.

refinement: The Plains of Bantana is a vast stretch of plains. The main characteristic of this area is its tall grass. They are known to have some of the toughest warriors who use their water bending abilities to challenge and defeat their enemies.

text: This part of the response is redundant and can be merged for better clarity.

refinement: The Plains of Bantana is a nation that has vast stretches of tall grass covering the land. They are known to have some of the toughest warriors who use their water bending abilities to challenge and defeat their enemies.

text: The response is missing a few details about Bantana.

refinement: The Plains of Bantana is a nation that has vast stretches of tall grass covering the land. The native people are known as Water Weavers who are masters of water magic and use their water-bending abilities to defeat their enemies. Mastery over water is the only thing that has kept them alive for so long as they have been invaded numerous times, but have always managed to drive the invaders back. Bantana's farming culture allows them to produce the best crops in the world. The nation also has elite solider/assassins called Grass Stalkers. Known for stealth and precise attacks, even a small squad of Grass Stalkers can take out an entire legion of soldiers.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the Republic of Oranthia.

answer: The Republic of Oranthia is the most technologically advanced nation in the Fire Dancer short story's world, and they utilize it by kidnapping other nations' sorcerers and scientists and forcing them to do their bidding. To do this, they operate under the guise of a democratic society but the party that really figures in is the one that doesn't have a chance and will be used to research the government's devices designed to keep them separate from the rest of the world.

text: There is no evidence that they kidnap scientists or that other nations even have scientists.

refinement: The Republic of Oranthia is the most technologically advanced nation in the Fire Dancer short story's world, and they utilize it by kidnapping other nations' sorcerers and forcing them to do their bidding. To do this, they operate under the guise of a democratic society but the party that really figures in is the one that doesn't have a chance and will be used to research the government's devices designed to keep them separate from the rest of the world.

text: This part doesn't make sense and isn't on the text.

refinement: The Republic of Oranthia is the most technologically advanced nation in the Fire Dancer short story's world, and they utilize it by kidnapping other nations' sorcerers and forcing them to do their bidding. To do this, they operate under the guise of a democratic society.

text: Add the part where they don't have any sorcerers and other missing details.

refinement: The Republic of Oranthia is the most technologically advanced nation in the Fire Dancer short story's world, and they utilize it by kidnapping other nations' sorcerers and forcing them to do their bidding because they have no native Sorcerers or Elemental Sorcerers. However, many captives have died during testing, not always because they were being tested on, but more often because of exhaustion. Many citizens are blind to the atrocities committed by their government and leave for another country once they learn about it. They operate under the guise of a democratic society but eliminate all those who oppose them.

answer: The Republic of Oranthia is the most technologically advanced nation in the Fire Dancer short story's world, and they utilize it by kidnapping other nations' sorcerers and scientists and forcing them to do their bidding. To do this, they operate under the guise of a democratic society but the party that really figures in is the one that doesn't have a chance in politics and will be used to research the government's devices designed to keep them separate from the rest of the world.

answer: The Republic of Oranthia revolves around the powerful goal of technological advancement. They kidnap sorcerers to continue their research, paying special attention to the raw powers of magic. In the process, they ensure many experimental subjects lose their life. The citizens of the country believe they are living in a free and democratic society but are unaware of their state of terror.

text: This is inaccurate. They kidnap sorcerers because they have no native sorcerers, unlike other nations.

refinement: The Republic of Oranthia revolves around the powerful goal of technological advancement. They kidnap sorcerers to conduct experiments on them and do research because the nation does not have any native sorcerers. They work the captives to exhaustion, making them use up all their powers until there are none. The citizens of the country believe they are living in a free and democratic society but are unaware of their state of terror.

answer: The Republic of Oranthia is the most technologically advanced nation in the world of Anilyth. They have not achieved this by the most ethical of paths, kidnapping sorcerers and forcing them to test their technologies. Many have died during testing and many citizens live their day to day lives completely unaware of the acts perpetrated by their government.

text: Add a hyphen.

refinement: The Republic of Oranthia is the most technologically advanced nation in the world of Anilyth. They have not achieved this by the most ethical of paths, kidnapping sorcerers and forcing them to test their technologies. Many have died during testing and many citizens live their day-to-day lives completely unaware of the acts perpetrated by their government.

text: Add that they kidnap sorcerers because they have no native ones.

refinement: The Republic of Oranthia is the most technologically advanced nation in the world of Anilyth, which makes up for the fact that they do not have any native sorcerers. They have not achieved this by the most ethical of paths, kidnapping sorcerers and forcing them to test their technologies. Many have died during testing and many citizens live their day-to-day lives completely unaware of the acts perpetrated by their government.

answer: The Republic of Oranthia is a technologically advanced nation, but they have achieved this through unethical means. They have kidnapped other nations' sorcerers and forced them to test their technologies. Many sorcerers have died during the testing.

text: Add that the country doesn't have native sorcerers.

refinement: Although they have no native Sorcerers or Elemental Sorcerers, The Republic of Oranthia makes up for this by being the most technologically advanced nation. However, they have achieved this through unethical means. They have kidnapped other nations' sorcerers and forced them to test their technologies. Many sorcerers have died during the testing.

answer: The Republic of Orantha focus on technological advancements by kidnapping "political prisoners" and forcing them to work as slave labor in their labs. They believe they are in competition with other nations and have often kidnapped the sorcerers of other nations to test their technology. Many prisoners have died during testing, but not always because they were being tested on, but more often because of exhaustion. The scientists force them to continue using their own magic until they have none left to use, but still they push them until they die from exhaustion.

text: Change to "Oranthia"

refinement: The Republic of Oranthia focus on technological advancements by kidnapping "political prisoners" and forcing them to work as slave labor in their labs. They believe they are in competition with other nations and have often kidnapped the sorcerers of other nations to test their technology. Many prisoners have died during testing, but not always because they were being tested on, but more often because of exhaustion. The scientists force them to continue using their own magic until they have none left to use, but still they push them until they die from exhaustion.

text: Change to "focuses"

refinement: The Republic of Oranthia focuses on technological advancements by kidnapping "political prisoners" and forcing them to work as slave labor in their labs. They believe they are in competition with other nations and have often kidnapped the sorcerers of other nations to test their technology. Many prisoners have died during testing, but not always because they were being tested on, but more often because of exhaustion. The scientists force them to continue using their own magic until they have none left to use, but still they push them until they die from exhaustion.

text: The term "political prisoners" wasn't used anywhere in the story and should be replaced with "sorcerers"

refinement: The Republic of Oranthia focuses on technological advancements by kidnapping sorcerers and forcing them to work as slave labor in their labs. They believe they are in competition with other nations and have often kidnapped the sorcerers of other nations to test their technology. Many prisoners have died during testing, but not always because they were being tested on, but more often because of exhaustion. The scientists force them to continue using their own magic until they have none left to use, but still they push them until they die from exhaustion.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Kamasia.

answer: Kamasia is an ancient nation with no sorcerers except for the elite pirates who sail its mighty oceans. The Kamasian navy is said to be incredibly strong, surpassing the relatively robust navies of other nations.

text: The highlighted response is incorrect. The correct spelling for the nation is "Kamisia" and they are not the nation with no sorcerers (that's Oranthia). They are also a coastal nation, not necessarily an ancient one because that title belongs to another nation.

refinement: Kamisia is a coastal nation that sails its mighty oceans. The Kamisian navy is said to be incredibly strong, surpassing the relatively robust navies of other nations.

text: The response is missing the part about being the only ones brave enough to sail the oceans of Anilyth and that they are a fishing nation.

refinement: Kamisia is a coastal fishing nation. They are the few people brave enough to sail the mighty oceans of Anilyth. The Kamisian navy is said to be incredibly strong, surpassing the relatively robust navies of other nations.

answer: Kamisia is a coastal nation that is known for its naval might. They are able to take out entire fleets. They are also known for their fishing industry.

answer: Kamasia is an ancient nation with no sorcerers except for the elite pirates who sail its mighty oceans. The Kamasian navy is said to be incredibly strong, surpassing the relatively robust navies of other nations. His people's mastery of fishing gives them their naval might.

answer: Kamisia is a coastal nation that is known for its naval might. They are able to take out entire fleets.

answer: The Kamisian nation each fisherman goes out to sea and fish, making Kamasia one of the wealthiest nations in the world. They fish for a living, and can catch whatever fish they can to sell to other nations. They can also catch undead sharks.

text: The response can't be supported by anything in the story.

text: Add all the missing details about Kamisia.

refinement: The coastal nation of Kamisia is known for its fishing industry. Kamisians also have the naval power to brave the oceans of Anilyth and dominate the other nations at sea.

answer: The Kamisian nation is a large fishing nation. Kamisian fisherman go out to sea and fish, making Kamasia one of the wealthiest nations in the world. They can sell whatever they catch to another nation or keep it for themselves, because they are an island nation and can often find different markets to sell their fish to.

text: This response is incorrect and can't be found in the story.

refinement: The Kamisian nation is a large fishing nation.

text: Add the missing details about their navy.

refinement: The Kamisian nation is a large fishing nation. The Kamisians are the few people who brave the mighty oceans of Anilyth and their naval might is unmatched throughout the land. A single Kamisian boat can sink entire fleets.

answer: The Kamasia is a coastal nation with a large fishing industry. Their naval might is unmatched throughout the land.

text:
The spelling is incorrect. It should be "Kamisia",
Remove "the"

refinement: Kamisia is a coastal nation with a large fishing industry. Their naval might is unmatched throughout the land.

answer: The Kamasia is a coastal nation with a large fishing industry. The Kamasia are among the few people who brave the mighty oceans of Anilyth. Their naval might is unmatched throughout the land.

text:
The spelling is incorrect. It should be "Kamisia",
Remove "the"

refinement: Kamisia is a coastal nation with a large fishing industry. Kamisians are among the few people who brave the mighty oceans of Anilyth. Their naval might is unmatched throughout the land.


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The MANIS MASTODON SITE is a archaeological site on the Olympic Peninsula near Sequim, Washington, United States. During the dig, the remains of an American mastodon were recovered which had a 13,800 year old projectile[1] made of the bone from a different mastodon embedded in its rib. The site was placed on the National Register of Historic Places in 1978.

History

On August 8, 1977, a farmer named Emanuel Manis was digging his property with a backhoe when he found the tusks of an American mastodon.[2] An archaeological excavation led by Dr. Carl Gustafson of Washington State University found a rib bone that had what appeared to be a spear point made from the bone of a different mastodon embedded in it. The point had bone growth around it, indicating that it had not caused the mastodon's death.[3] Gustafson deemed it the earliest known evidence of interaction between humans and mastodons in the Americas. However, there was debate,[4] because of the lack of indisputable proof that the point was made by humans.[5] This situation changed in 2011, when a new study of the remains definitively concluded that Gustafson was right as to both the age and the human origin of the point.[6] Gustafson also analyzed the position of the [7] fossil, which was lying on its left side, while the heavily fragmented skull was rotated 180 degrees from its natural position. Noting that this could not have occurred due to natural causes Gustafson deduced that the carcass must have been tampered with by humans.[8] Archaeologists were surprised to find a mastodon in the area at all because pollen samples that were taken showed no evidence of trees, which mastodons fed on.[9]

In an excavated layer above the mastodon, as well as that of a 6,700-year-old deposit of ash from the eruption of Mount Mazama, a projectile-point was found in the style of Coastal Olcott points common in the area no earlier than 9,000 years ago.[10]

The site also turned up remains of caribou, bison, and plant macrofossils.[11] Bones of the bison showed evidence of butchering by humans.[12] The pollen found in the same layer as the mastodon was predominantly sedge and cattail, while other layers contained that of plants ranging from Canadian buffaloberry, blackberry and wild rose, to willow and alder.[13]

Gustafson continued to excavate at the site for eight years, finding the partial remains of two more mastodons. Though stone tools and artifacts of bone were found, Gustafson failed to find evidence of an encampment by the people theorized to have butchered the mastodons.[14]

Prior to the excavation at the Manis site, which was dated before 12,000 years ago,[15] archaeological sites west of the Cascade Range considered to be early were aged between 9,000 and 6,000 years old.[16]

During the years of excavation, Clare and Emanuel Manis welcomed over 50,000 visitors to the site. In 1978, when the site was added to the National Register of Historic Places, Senator Henry M. Jackson made the announcement.[17] In 2002, on the 25th anniversary of the discovery, Manis' widow donated the site to the National Archaeological Conservancy.[18] The fossil remains of the mastodon were donated to the Sequim Museum & Arts in Sequim and are now on display. A casting of the bone projectile point is also on display.

[Manis Mastodon, Cast of Rib with Embedded Object; The rib bone holds an object that is embedded 0.75 inches deep, and tapers to a point. The wound is thought to be a penetration fracture showing several months of healing. Museum and Arts Center, Sequim, Washington.|alt=A photograph of about five inches of a long, narrow bone. The break is jagged. At one end a spiky piece of a different material protrudes from the bone. The bone is on a grey backer with a plaque beneath it with some text explaining the embedded spear point..]

In Oct. 2011, the Center of the Study of the First Americans (CSFA), Anthropology Department at Texas A&M University published findings from DNA tests, CT scans and radiocarbon dating on the mastodon and the spear point. The CT scan clearly established the spear point had been sharpened to a needle point by human hands. Four radiocarbon dates yielded an age of 13,860-13,763 calendar years BP.

Since the 1950s, archaeologists have believed the Clovis people were the first human inhabitants of North America and that they lived here 13,000 years ago. However the discovery of sites pre-dating Clovis, such as Monte Verde in Chile and Meadowcroft Rockshelter in Pennsylvania, have been challenging this presumption at least since the 1990s.[19] The Manis Mastodon Site is 800 years older than the Clovis people. This site, among others, is helping to change the long-held beliefs of many archaeologists about the earliest human inhabitants of North America. The Manis Mastodon Site remains the oldest archaeological site on the Olympic Peninsula in Washington State and one of the oldest in North America.

In November 2011, Shirley Manis, daughter of discoverer Emanuel Manis, authored the first and only children's picture book about the Manis Mastodon Site, which includes the most recent research analysis.[20]

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[20] Shirley Manis, In a Scoop of Dirt - How Digging a Pond Changed North America's Prehistory, 2011.

title: Manis Mastodon Site

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the discovery of the site?

answer: Digging his property with a backhoe on August 8, 1977, a farmer named Emanuel Manis came across the tusks of the American mastodon. This prompted an archaeological investigation by Dr. Carl Gustafson of Washington State University, who found a rib bone in the excavation that had a projectile point made from the bone of a different mastodon embedded in it. This pointed to the earliest interaction between humans and mastodons in the Americas. There was tension because of the lack of indisputable proof on record that the point was human made. In 2011, a new study decisively showed that Manis was right on both the age and human origin of the point.

text: Remove the last two sentences - they are inaccurate and otherwise unnecessary in answering the question.

refinement: Digging his property with a backhoe on August 8, 1977, a farmer named Emanuel Manis came across the tusks of the American mastodon. This prompted an archaeological investigation by Dr. Carl Gustafson of Washington State University, who found a rib bone in the excavation that had a projectile point made from the bone of a different mastodon embedded in it. This pointed to the earliest interaction between humans and mastodons in the Americas.

answer: Emanuel Manis was digging with a backhoe when he found the tusks of an American mastodon on August 8, 1977. Manis informed archaeologist Dr. Carl Gustafson of the discovery. The excavation led by Gustafson found a rib bone in 1977 that had a projectile point made from a different mastodon embedded in it, but it had bone growth around it, meaning that the mastodon probably died later.

text: The highlighted information is not indicated in the text, so remove it.

refinement: Emanuel Manis was digging with a backhoe when he found the tusks of an American mastodon on August 8, 1977. The excavation led by Gustafson found a rib bone in 1977 that had a projectile point made from a different mastodon embedded in it, but it had bone growth around it, meaning that the mastodon probably died later.

answer: On August 8th 1977, a farmer named Emanuel Manis found the tusks of an American mastodon on his property while digging with his backhoe. The site had no trees to feed on, so archaeologists were surprised to find a mastodon there. The site also turned up remains of caribou, bison, and plant macrofossils. A bone projectile point was found in the layer above, and a projectile point in the style of Coastal Olcott points, no earlier than 9,000 years ago was found in the deposit of ash from the eruption of Mt. Mazama. The bone point belonged to a different mastodon.

text: Correct "A. bone projectile point in the layer above" to "A bone spear point embedded in the mastodon"

refinement: On August 8th 1977, a farmer named Emanuel Manis found the tusks of an American mastodon on his property while digging with his backhoe. The site had no trees to feed on, so archaeologists were surprised to find a mastodon there. The site also turned up remains of caribou, bison, and plant macrofossils. A bone spear point was found embedded in the mastodon, and a projectile point in the style of Coastal Olcott points, no earlier than 9,000 years ago was found in the deposit of ash from the eruption of Mt. Mazama. The bone point belonged to a different mastodon.

text: Remove 'no earlier than 9,000 years ago' - it only confuses the facts in the sentence.

refinement: On August 8th 1977, a farmer named Emanuel Manis found the tusks of an American mastodon on his property while digging with his backhoe. The site had no trees to feed on, so archaeologists were surprised to find a mastodon there. The site also turned up remains of caribou, bison, and plant macrofossils. A bone spear point was found embedded in the mastodon, and a projectile point in the style of Coastal Olcott points was found in the deposit of ash from the eruption of Mt. Mazama. The bone point belonged to a different mastodon.

answer: Emanuel Manis was digging with a backhoe when he found the tusks of an American mastodon on August 8, 1977. Manis informed archaeologist Dr. Carl Gustafson of the discovery. The excavation led by Gustafson found a rib bone in 1977 that had a projectile point made from a different mastodon embedded in it, but it had bone growth around it, meaning that the mastodon probably died later. Manis spent nearly 50,000 in-site visitors in the years of excavation. In 1978, the site was added to the National Register of Historic Places, and a year later, Manis donated the site to the National Archaeological Conservancy.

text: Rephrase 'spent' to 'welcomed' to make more sense.

refinement: Emanuel Manis was digging with a backhoe when he found the tusks of an American mastodon on August 8, 1977. Manis informed archaeologist Dr. Carl Gustafson of the discovery. The excavation led by Gustafson found a rib bone in 1977 that had a projectile point made from a different mastodon embedded in it, but it had bone growth around it, meaning that the mastodon probably died later. Manis welcomed nearly 50,000 in-site visitors in the years of excavation. In 1978, the site was added to the National Register of Historic Places, and a year later, Manis donated the site to the National Archaeological Conservancy.

text: Remove the inaccurate detail of when the site was donated.

refinement: Emanuel Manis was digging with a backhoe when he found the tusks of an American mastodon on August 8, 1977. Manis informed archaeologist Dr. Carl Gustafson of the discovery. The excavation led by Gustafson found a rib bone in 1977 that had a projectile point made from a different mastodon embedded in it, but it had bone growth around it, meaning that the mastodon probably died later. Manis welcomed nearly 50,000 in-site visitors in the years of excavation. In 1978, the site was added to the National Register of Historic Places.

answer: Digging his property with a backhoe on August 8, 1977, a farmer named Emanuel Manis came across the tusks of the American mastodons. This prompted an archaeological investigation by Dr. Carl Gustafson of Washington State University, who found a rib bone in the excavation that had a projectile point made from the bone of a different mastodon embedded in it. This pointed to the earliest interaction between humans and mastodons in the Americas. There was tension because of the lack of indisputable proof on record that the point was human made. In 2011, a new study definitively showed that Manis was right on both the age and human origin of the point.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the Clovis people?

answer: Prior to the excavation at the Manis site, archaeologist believed the Clovis people were the first human inhabitants of North America and that they lived here 13,000 years ago. Recently, the Manis Mastodon Site has revealed evidence that humans arrived earlier than the Clovis people. Based on this, the Clovis people can no longer be considered the first human inhabitants.

answer: They are the first human inhabitants of North America.

text: Clarify that they "were previously considered (the first human inhabitants...)"

refinement: They were previously considered the first human inhabitants of North America.

text: Add that they lived 13,000 years ago.

refinement: They were previously considered the first human inhabitants of North America. They lived 13,000 years ago.

answer: Archaeologists believe the Clovis people were the first human inhabitants of North America 13,000 years ago. In the 1950s, archaeologists started arguing for anything older than 14,000 or more years ago. When remains of pre-Clovis sites were discovered in the 1990s, the Clovis people were being challenged. The Manis Mastodon site is older than the Clovis people. This site was one of the sites that will change long-held beliefs of many archaeologists about the earliest human inhabitants of North America.

text: Change the phrasing for accuracy - replace "the Clovis people were" with "that belief was" (referring to the first sentence).

refinement: Archaeologists believe the Clovis people were the first human inhabitants of North America 13,000 years ago. In the 1950s, archaeologists started arguing for anything older than 14,000 or more years ago. When remains of pre-Clovis sites were discovered in the 1990s, that belief was being challenged. The Manis Mastodon site is older than the Clovis people. This site was one of the sites that will change long-held beliefs of many archaeologists about the earliest human inhabitants of North America.

text: Remove the second sentence; it's inaccurate and only confuses things.

refinement: Archaeologists believe the Clovis people were the first human inhabitants of North America 13,000 years ago. When remains of pre-Clovis sites were discovered in the 1990s, that belief was being challenged. The Manis Mastodon site is older than the Clovis people. This site was one of the sites that will change long-held beliefs of many archaeologists about the earliest human inhabitants of North America.

text: The last sentence can be removed as it's extraneous.

refinement: Archaeologists believe the Clovis people were the first human inhabitants of North America 13,000 years ago. When remains of pre-Clovis sites were discovered in the 1990s, that belief was being challenged. The Manis Mastodon site is older than the Clovis people.

answer: Archaeologists believe the Clovis people were the first human inhabitants of North America 13,000 years ago. In the 1950s, archaeologists started arguing that 14,000 or more years ago. When remains of pre-Clovis sites were discovered in the 1990s, the Clovis people were being challenged. The Manis Mastodon site is older than the Clovis people. This site was one of the sites that will change long-held beliefs of many archaeologists about the earliest human inhabitants of North America.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Emanuel Manis's family?

answer: Emanuel Manis called his daughter, Shirley, when he discovered the Tusk of the mastodon. After discovering the site, Edward Manis and Emanuel's grandchildren, Andrea and Cameron, continued to visit the site every year until Shirley donated it to the National Archaeological Conservancy. Additionally, Shirley authored a picture book about the site called Indeed! A Scoop of Dirt.

text: Remove the first sentence, it's inaccurate.

refinement: After discovering the site, Edward Manis and Emanuel's grandchildren, Andrea and Cameron, continued to visit the site every year until Shirley donated it to the National Archaeological Conservancy. Additionally, Shirley authored a picture book about the site called Indeed! A Scoop of Dirt.

text: This seems to be entirely made up: "After discovering the site, Edward Manis and Emanuel's grandchildren, Andrea and Cameron, continued to visit the site every year" - remove it.

refinement: Shirley donated it to the National Archaeological Conservancy. Additionally, Shirley authored a picture book about the site called Indeed! A Scoop of Dirt.

text: Change "Shirley donated it" to "Emanuel's widow donated the site" in the first sentence, for accuracy.

refinement: Emanuel's widow donated the site to the National Archaeological Conservancy. Additionally, Shirley authored a picture book about the site called Indeed! A Scoop of Dirt.

text: Clarify that Shirley is Emanuel's daughter.

refinement: Emanuel's widow donated the site to the National Archaeological Conservancy. Additionally, Shirley, his daughter, authored a picture book about the site called Indeed! A Scoop of Dirt.

answer: Emanuel found the tusks of the mastodon on his property. According to the text, his wife welcomed over 50,000 visitors to Emanuel's discovery of the mastodon at the Manis Mastodon Site. On the 25th anniversary of Emanuel's discovery, his wife donated the site to the National Archaeological Conservancy. In 2011, Emanuel's daughter authored the first and only children's picture book about the Manis Mastodon site.

text: The first sentence is unnecessary and can be removed.

refinement: According to the text, his wife welcomed over 50,000 visitors to Emanuel's discovery of the mastodon at the Manis Mastodon Site. On the 25th anniversary of Emanuel's discovery, his wife donated the site to the National Archaeological Conservancy. In 2011, Emanuel's daughter authored the first and only children's picture book about the Manis Mastodon site.

text: Rephrase the first sentence to show that he and his wife did it together.

refinement: According to the text, he and his wife welcomed over 50,000 visitors to Emanuel's discovery of the mastodon at the Manis Mastodon Site. On the 25th anniversary of Emanuel's discovery, his wife donated the site to the National Archaeological Conservancy. In 2011, Emanuel's daughter authored the first and only children's picture book about the Manis Mastodon site.

answer: Emanuel Manis called his daughter, Shirley, when he discovered the Tusk of the mastodon. After discovering the site, Edward Manis and Emanuel's grandchildren, Andrea and Cameron, continued to visit the site every year until Shirley donated it to the National Archaeological Conservancy. Additionally, Shirley authored a picture book about the site called Indeed! A Scoop of Dirt.

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text: Add a response, including Clare and Shirley Manis.

refinement: According to the text, Emanuel and his wife Clare welcomed over 50,000 visitors to Emanuel's discovery of the mastodon at the Manis Mastodon Site. On the 25th anniversary of Emanuel's discovery, his wife donated the site to the National Archaeological Conservancy. In 2011, Emanuel's daughter authored the first and only children's picture book about the Manis Mastodon site.