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REBECCA BULLEY (born 18 August 1982), also known as REBECCA STRACHAN, is a former Australia netball international. Between 2008 and 2015 she made 42 senior appearances for Australia. Bulley was a member of the Australia teams that won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup and the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games. At club level, Bulley won three ANZ Championship titles with three different teams – New South Wales Swifts in 2008, Adelaide Thunderbirds in 2013 and Queensland Firebirds in 2015. She began her senior club career with Melbourne Kestrels during the Commonwealth Bank Trophy era and finished it playing for Giants Netball in Suncorp Super Netball.

Early life, family and education

Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. She was born in Victoria and raised in the Pyramid Hill and Bendigo districts. She attended Pyramid Hill College and Bendigo Senior Secondary College. [1][2][3] Her sister, Meredith Ball (née Strachan), also played netball for Melbourne Kestrels, Melbourne University Lightning and Sandhurst. [4][5][6] Her younger brother, Kieran Strachan is an Australian rules footballer. [7][8][9] Rebecca is married to Randall Bulley, a schoolteacher based in Wollongong. She gave birth to a daughter, Indie in 2016. The Bulley family home is in Woonona, New South Wales. [10][11][12]

Playing career

Early years

As Rebecca Strachan, Bulley began her netball career as a junior with Calivil United in the Loddon Valley Football Netball League. Her mother, Lynley Strachan, coached at the Calivil United club. After her family moved to Bendigo, she switched to Sandhurst in the Bendigo Football Netball League. Her team mates at Sandhurst included her sister, Meredith. [13][14][15][16][17][18][19]

Commonwealth Bank Trophy

Between 2000 and 2007, Bulley played 85 games for Melbourne Kestrels and AIS Canberra Darters in the Commonwealth Bank Trophy. She also captained both teams. Between 2001 and 2003 she also played for the Australian Institute of Sport. [20][21][22][23][24][25]

ANZ Championship

New South Wales Swifts

Between 2008 and 2011, Bulley played for New South Wales Swifts in the ANZ Championship. [26][27][28][29] After missing out on selection for the Melbourne Vixens squad, Bulley was encouraged by Liz Ellis to join Swifts. [30][31][32] She was subsequently a member of the Swifts team that won the inaugural 2008 ANZ Championship title. [33] At the end of the 2010 ANZ Championship season, Bulley was named ANZ Championship Holden Player of the Year, the NSW Swifts QBE Player of the Year and the Member's Player of the Year. [34][35][36]

Adelaide Thunderbirds

Between 2012 and 2014, Bulley played for Adelaide Thunderbirds. In 2013 she was a member of the Thunderbirds team won the ANZ Championship. [37][38][39][40]

Queensland Firebirds

In 2015 Bulley played for Queensland Firebirds and finished the season with a third Championship winners medal. [41][42][43][44][45]

Suncorp Super Netball

Giants Netball

Between 2017 and 2018, Bulley played for Giants Netball in the Suncorp Super Netball. Bulley had initially retired after the 2015 Netball World Cup in order to start a family. However, Giants head coach, Julie Fitzgerald, subsequently persuaded her to come out of retirement as an injury replacement for Kristiana Manu'a. [46][47][48][49][50][51] In August 2018 Bulley announced her retirement as a player for the second time. [52]

Australia

Between 2008 and 2015, Bulley made 42 senior appearances for Australia. From 2005 she was regularly featured in Australia squads, including the advance squad for the 2006 Commonwealth Games. However Bulley had to wait until 2008 before she made her Test debut. She made her senior debut on 20 September 2008 against New Zealand. She was subsequently a member of the Australia teams that won the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games and the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup. She retired from international netball following the latter tournament. [53][54][55][56][57]

  Tournaments                               Place
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  2009 World Netball Series [58]
  2010 Commonwealth Games [59][60][61]
  2015 Netball World Cup [62][63][64][65]

Coaching career

During the 2019 Australian Netball League season Bulley served as an assistant coach with Canberra Giants. [66][67][68] She was subsequently appointed head coach of Giants Netball Academy ahead of the 2020 season. [69][70]

Honours

Australia

-   NETBALL WORLD CUP
    -   _Winners_: 2015
-   COMMONWEALTH GAMES
    -   _Runners Up_: 2010

Queensland Firebirds

-   ANZ CHAMPIONSHIP
    -   _Winners_: 2015

Adelaide Thunderbirds

-   ANZ CHAMPIONSHIP
    -   _Winners_: 2013

New South Wales Swifts

-   ANZ CHAMPIONSHIP
    -   _Winners_: 2008

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title: Rebecca Bulley

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe Bulley's personal life.

answer: Rebecca Bulley's maiden name is Rebecca Strachan. She is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachen. She was born in Victoria, and raised in the Pyramid Hill and Bendigo districts. She attended Pyramid Hill College and Bendigo Senior Secondary College.

text: The answer does not mention her siblings.

refinement: Rebecca Bulley's maiden name is Rebecca Strachan. She is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachen. She was born in Victoria, and raised in the Pyramid Hill and Bendigo districts. She attended Pyramid Hill College and Bendigo Senior Secondary College. She has a sister, Meredith Ball, and a younger brother, Kieran Strachan.

text: The answer does not mention her marriage and children.

refinement: Rebecca Bulley's maiden name is Rebecca Strachan. She is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachen. She was born in Victoria, and raised in the Pyramid Hill and Bendigo districts. She attended Pyramid Hill College and Bendigo Senior Secondary College. She has a sister, Meredith Ball, and a younger brother, Kieran Strachan. She married Randall Bulley and gave birth to a daughter, Indie.

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Bulley was born in Victoria in 1982. She was raised in the Pyramid Hill and Bendigo districts by her parents Leon and Lynley Strachan. She has an older sister Meredith Ball who also played netball. Bulley is married to Randall Bulley, a schoolteacher. Together they have a daughter, Indie. The family lives in Woonona, New South Wales.

Bulley played netball for Melbourne Kestrels and AIS Canberra Darters in the Commonwealth Bank Trophy between 2000 and 2007. In 2008, she signed with New South Wales Swifts and was part of their team that won the inaugural ANZ Championship in that year. Bulley went on to play for Adelaide Thunderbirds in 2012 and Queensland Firebirds in 2015. Currently, she is coaching the Canberra Giants Netball Academy.

text: The entire second paragraph is irrelevant.

refinement: Bulley was born in Victoria in 1982. She was raised in the Pyramid Hill and Bendigo districts by her parents Leon and Lynley Strachan. She has an older sister Meredith Ball who also played netball. Bulley is married to Randall Bulley, a schoolteacher. Together they have a daughter, Indie. The family lives in Woonona, New South Wales.

text: The answer does not mention Bulley's younger brother.

refinement: Bulley was born in Victoria in 1982. She was raised in the Pyramid Hill and Bendigo districts by her parents Leon and Lynley Strachan. She has an older sister Meredith Ball who also played netball. She also has a younger brother, Kieran Strachan, who is an Australian rules footballer. Bulley is married to Randall Bulley, a schoolteacher. Together they have a daughter, Indie. The family lives in Woonona, New South Wales.

answer: Bulley married a schoolteacher named Randall Bulley. They had a daughter named Indie in 2016. Bulley attended a Netball World Cup in 2015 and retired from international netball following the tournament. She served as an assistant coach at the 2019 Australian Netball League season, then as the head coach of Giants Netball Academy.

text: The last two sentences are not relevant to Bulley's personal life.

refinement: Bulley married a schoolteacher named Randall Bulley. They had a daughter named Indie in 2016.

answer:
Rebecca Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. She was born in Victoria and raised in the Pyramid Hill and Bendigo districts. She was educated at Pyramid Hill College and Bendigo Senior Secondary College. Bulley married Randall Bulley and has a daughter, Indie.

Bulley began her netball career as a junior with Calivil United in the Loddon Valley Football Netball League. She played 85 games for Melbourne Kestrels and AIS Canberra Darters in the Commonwealth Bank Trophy. While playing with the New South Wales Swifts, she was named ANZ Championship Holden Player of the Year and NSW Swifts QBE Player of the Year. In 2013, she was a member of the Adelaide Thunderbirds team which won the ANZ Championship. In 2015, she captained the Queensland Firebirds to a third Championship win.

Currently, Bulley is head coach of Giants Netball Academy.

text: The second and third paragraphs are not relevant to Bulley's personal life.

refinement: Rebecca Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. She was born in Victoria and raised in the Pyramid Hill and Bendigo districts. She was educated at Pyramid Hill College and Bendigo Senior Secondary College. Bulley married Randall Bulley and has a daughter, Indie.

text: The answer does not mention her siblings.

refinement: Rebecca Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. She was born in Victoria and raised in the Pyramid Hill and Bendigo districts. She has a sister, Meredith Ball, and a younger brother, Kieran Strachan. She was educated at Pyramid Hill College and Bendigo Senior Secondary College. Bulley married Randall Bulley and has a daughter, Indie.

answer: She married her husband, Randall Bulley, in 2017, and gave birth to a daughter the same year. Bulley is known for the Bulley family home. It is in Woonona. The Bulley family home is in Woonona.

text: There is no evidence that the marriage or the birth took place in 2017.

refinement: She married her husband, Randall Bulley, and gave birth to a daughter in 2016. Bulley is known for the Bulley family home. It is in Woonona. The Bulley family home is in Woonona.

text: The fact that Bulley is known for the Bulley family home is unattested.

refinement: She married her husband, Randall Bulley, and gave birth to a daughter in 2016. It is in Woonona. The Bulley family home is in Woonona.

text: The location of the family home does not need to be stated twice.

refinement: She married her husband, Randall Bulley, and gave birth to a daughter in 2016. The Bulley family home is in Woonona.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe Rebecca Bulley's family.

answer: Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. Her sister, Merideth Ball also played netball for various teams. Her younger brother, Kieran Strachan is an Australian rules footballer. Rabecca is married to Randall Bulley, and has a daughter named Indie.

text: "Rabecca" should be "Rebecca".

refinement: Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. Her sister, Merideth Ball also played netball for various teams. Her younger brother, Kieran Strachan is an Australian rules footballer. Rebecca is married to Randall Bulley, and has a daughter named Indie.

text: "Merideth" should be "Meredith".

refinement: Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. Her sister, Meredith Ball also played netball for various teams. Her younger brother, Kieran Strachan is an Australian rules footballer. Rebecca is married to Randall Bulley, and has a daughter named Indie.

answer: Rebecca Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. She was born in Victoria, raised in Pyramid Hill and Bendigo, and attended school in both of these towns. Her sister Meredith Ball also played netball for Melbourne Kestrels, Melbourne University Lightning, and Sandhurst. Rebecca is married to Randall Bulley, and has a daughter, Indie. The Bulley family lives in Woonona, New South Wales. Rebecca is a former netball international, who has won three ANZ Championship titles, two with New South Wales Swifts and one with Adelaide Thunderbirds. During the 2019 Australian Netball League season, Bulley served as an assistant coach with Canberra Giants, and has been appointed head coach of Giants Netball Academy for the 2020 season.

text: The details that aren't relevant to Rebecca's family should be removed.

refinement: Rebecca Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. Her sister Meredith Ball also played netball for Melbourne Kestrels, Melbourne University Lightning, and Sandhurst. Rebecca is married to Randall Bulley, and has a daughter, Indie.

text: The answer does not mention her brother.

refinement: Rebecca Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. Her sister Meredith Ball also played netball for Melbourne Kestrels, Melbourne University Lightning, and Sandhurst. Her younger brother, Kieran, is an Australian rules footballer. Rebecca is married to Randall Bulley, and has a daughter, Indie.

answer: Her father is named Leon. Her mother is named Lynley. She has a younger sister and two younger brothers. Her younger sibling Lnely Ball was a netball player for the Melbourne Kestrels like she was. The siblings had a promising sports career where they were raised in Bendigo.

text: There is no evidence that her sister is younger than her or that she has more than one younger brother.

refinement: Her father is named Leon. Her mother is named Lynley. She has a sister and a younger brother. Her younger sibling Lnely Ball was a netball player for the Melbourne Kestrels like she was. The siblings had a promising sports career where they were raised in Bendigo.

text: Lnely Ball is not a real person; Meredith is the one who played for the Melbourne Kestrels.

refinement: Her father is named Leon. Her mother is named Lynley. She has a sister and a younger brother. Her sister Meredith Ball was a netball player for the Melbourne Kestrels like she was. The siblings had a promising sports career where they were raised in Bendigo.

text: The final sentence is unattested.

refinement: Her father is named Leon. Her mother is named Lynley. She has a sister and a younger brother. Her sister Meredith Ball was a netball player for the Melbourne Kestrels like she was.

text: The answer omits mention of her husband and daughter.

refinement: Her father is named Leon. Her mother is named Lynley. She has a sister and a younger brother. Her sister Meredith Ball was a netball player for the Melbourne Kestrels like she was. She married Randall Bulley and gave birth to a daughter, Indie.

answer: Her father's name is Leon and her mother's name is Lynley, she then has an older sister, Meredith Ball and a younger brother, Kieran Strachan. Her marriage wasn't mentioned and it was only mentioned that they have a little girl named Indie. Rebecca has a brother named Kieran who is an Australian Rules footballer.

text: Kieran does not need to be mentioned twice.

refinement: Her father's name is Leon and her mother's name is Lynley, she then has an older sister, Meredith Ball and a younger brother, Kieran Strachan. Her marriage wasn't mentioned and it was only mentioned that they have a little girl named Indie.

text: That Meredith is older than Rebecca is unattested.

refinement: Her father's name is Leon and her mother's name is Lynley, she then has a sister, Meredith Ball and a younger brother, Kieran Strachan. Her marriage wasn't mentioned and it was only mentioned that they have a little girl named Indie.

text: Her marriage is, in fact, mentioned.

refinement: Her father's name is Leon and her mother's name is Lynley, she then has a sister, Meredith Ball and a younger brother, Kieran Strachan. She married Randall Bulley, and they have a little girl named Indie.

answer:
Rebecca Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. She was raised in the Pyramid Hill and Bendigo districts in Victoria and attended school in both areas. Meredith Ball, her sister, also played netball for Melbourne Kestrels and Melbourne University Lightning. Kieran Strachan, her younger brother, is an Australian rules footballer. Rebecca is married to Randall Bulley, a school teacher based in Wollongong. The Bulley family home is in Woonona, New South Wales. Rebecca played netball in the Commonwealth Bank Trophy and ANZ Championship. She made 42 senior appearances for Australia as well as winning three ANZ Championship titles. During the 2019 Australian Netball League season, Rebecca served as an assistant coach with Canberra Giants. She has announced her retirement as a player but will serve as head coach of the Giants Netball Academy for the 2020 season.

Rebecca Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan who have both been involved in helping her pursue her netball career. She has one sister, Meredith Ball, and one younger brother, Kieran Strachan. Rebecca is married to Randall Bulley and the Bulley family home is in Woonona, New South Wales. Rebecca has a long playing career in both the Commonwealth Bank Trophy and ANZ Championship and has won three Championships in the ANZ Championship. She has recently retired as a player and is moving into coaching.

text: The second paragraph is redundant and should be removed.

refinement: Rebecca Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. She was raised in the Pyramid Hill and Bendigo districts in Victoria and attended school in both areas. Meredith Ball, her sister, also played netball for Melbourne Kestrels and Melbourne University Lightning. Kieran Strachan, her younger brother, is an Australian rules footballer. Rebecca is married to Randall Bulley, a school teacher based in Wollongong. The Bulley family home is in Woonona, New South Wales. Rebecca played netball in the Commonwealth Bank Trophy and ANZ Championship. She made 42 senior appearances for Australia as well as winning three ANZ Championship titles. During the 2019 Australian Netball League season, Rebecca served as an assistant coach with Canberra Giants. She has announced her retirement as a player but will serve as head coach of the Giants Netball Academy for the 2020 season.

text: The details not pertaining to her family should be removed.

refinement: Rebecca Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. Meredith Ball, her sister, also played netball for Melbourne Kestrels and Melbourne University Lightning. Kieran Strachan, her younger brother, is an Australian rules footballer. Rebecca is married to Randall Bulley, a school teacher based in Wollongong. The Bulley family home is in Woonona, New South Wales.

text: The answer does not mention Rebecca's daughter.

refinement: Rebecca Bulley is the daughter of Leon and Lynley Strachan. Meredith Ball, her sister, also played netball for Melbourne Kestrels and Melbourne University Lightning. Kieran Strachan, her younger brother, is an Australian rules footballer. Rebecca is married to Randall Bulley, a school teacher based in Wollongong. She gave birth to a daughter named Indie in 2016. The Bulley family home is in Woonona, New South Wales.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Rebecca Bulley's Netball career.

answer: Rebecca Bulley is a former Australia netball international. Bulley first played in the Commonwealth Bank Trophy for Melbourne Kestrels, then for New South Wales Swifts in the ANZ Championship. Bulley then played for Adelaide Thunderbirds in the ANZ Championship before finishing her playing career with Queensland Firebirds in the ANZ Championship. Bulley played for Australia in the 2009 World Netball Series, the 2010 Commonwealth Games and the 2015 Netball World Cup, before retiring from international netball. Bulley currently serves as an assistant coach to the Canberra Giants in the Australian Netball League and is appointed head coach of Giants Netball Academy for the 2020 season.

text: The answer omits mention of her career as a junior.

refinement: Rebecca Bulley is a former Australia netball international. She began her career as a junior with Calivil United in the Loddon Valley Football Netball League before switchng to Sandhurst in the Bendigo Football Netball League. Bulley first played in the Commonwealth Bank Trophy for Melbourne Kestrels, then for New South Wales Swifts in the ANZ Championship. Bulley then played for Adelaide Thunderbirds in the ANZ Championship before finishing her playing career with Queensland Firebirds in the ANZ Championship. Bulley played for Australia in the 2009 World Netball Series, the 2010 Commonwealth Games and the 2015 Netball World Cup, before retiring from international netball. Bulley currently serves as an assistant coach to the Canberra Giants in the Australian Netball League and is appointed head coach of Giants Netball Academy for the 2020 season.

answer: Bulley began her netball career as a junior in the Loddon Valley Football Netball League. She played 85 games for Melbourne Kestrels and AIS Canberra Darters in the Commonwealth Bank Trophy, captaining both teams, before joining New South Wales Swifts in the ANZ Championship where she won the 2008 championship title. Bulley made her senior debut for Australia in 2008 and has since been a member of successful teams at the 2010 Commonwealth Games and the 2015 Netball World Cup. Bulley has retired from international netball and is currently coaching at the Australian Netball League.

text: The answer omits mention of her time playing for the Thunderbirds and Firebirds.

refinement: Bulley began her netball career as a junior in the Loddon Valley Football Netball League. She played 85 games for Melbourne Kestrels and AIS Canberra Darters in the Commonwealth Bank Trophy, captaining both teams, before joining New South Wales Swifts in the ANZ Championship where she won the 2008 championship title. She also played for the Adelaide Thunderbirds from 2012-2014 and the Queensland Firebirds in 2015. Bulley made her senior debut for Australia in 2008 and has since been a member of successful teams at the 2010 Commonwealth Games and the 2015 Netball World Cup. Bulley has retired from international netball and is currently coaching at the Australian Netball League.

answer: She is a former Australian international. Between 2008 and 2015 she made 42 senior appearances for Australia. Bulley was a member of the Australia teams that won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup and the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games.

text: The answer does not mention her early tenure with Calibil United and Sandhurst.

refinement: She is a former Australian international. She began her career as a junior with Calivil United in the Loddon Valley Football Netball League before switching to Sandhurst in the Bendigo Football Netball League. Between 2008 and 2015 she made 42 senior appearances for Australia. Bulley was a member of the Australia teams that won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup and the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games.

text: The answer does not cover her time playing in the Commonwealth Bank Trophy.

refinement: She is a former Australian international. She began her career as a junior with Calivil United in the Loddon Valley Football Netball League before switching to Sandhurst in the Bendigo Football Netball League. She played 85 games for the Melbourne Kestrels and AIS Canberra Darters in the Commonwealth Bank Trophy. Between 2008 and 2015 she made 42 senior appearances for Australia. Bulley was a member of the Australia teams that won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup and the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games.

text: The answer does not cover her time playing in the ANZ Championship.

refinement: She is a former Australian international. She began her career as a junior with Calivil United in the Loddon Valley Football Netball League before switching to Sandhurst in the Bendigo Football Netball League. She played 85 games for the Melbourne Kestrels and AIS Canberra Darters in the Commonwealth Bank Trophy. She also played in the ANZ Championship for the New South Wales Swifts, the Adelaide Thunderbirds, and the Queensland Firebirds. Between 2008 and 2015 she made 42 senior appearances for Australia. Bulley was a member of the Australia teams that won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup and the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games.

answer: As Rebecca Bulley, Rebecca's netball career began when she was 19 years old at the time. She first played for NSW Swifts in the ANZ championship. The last ANZ championship Bulley played was for the Queensland Firebirds. Bulley retired from the game in 2018 when she was 36 years old and gave birth in 2016.

text: The statement that she began when she was 19 years old is unattested.

refinement: Rebecca began her netball career as a junior with Calivil United in the Loddon Valley Football Netball League before switching to Sandhurst in the Bendigo Football Netball League. She first played for NSW Swifts in the ANZ championship. The last ANZ championship Bulley played was for the Queensland Firebirds. Bulley retired from the game in 2018 when she was 36 years old and gave birth in 2016.

text: Rebecca's giving birth is not relevant.

refinement: Rebecca began her netball career as a junior with Calivil United in the Loddon Valley Football Netball League before switching to Sandhurst in the Bendigo Football Netball League. She first played for NSW Swifts in the ANZ championship. The last ANZ championship Bulley played was for the Queensland Firebirds. Bulley retired from the game in 2018 when she was 36 years old.

text: The answer does not mention that she also played for Australia in the Commonwealth Games.

refinement: Rebecca began her netball career as a junior with Calivil United in the Loddon Valley Football Netball League before switching to Sandhurst in the Bendigo Football Netball League. She first played for NSW Swifts in the ANZ championship. The last ANZ championship Bulley played was for the Queensland Firebirds. She also played for Australia in the Commonwealth Games in 2009, 2010, and 2015. Bulley retired from the game in 2018 when she was 36 years old.

answer: Bulley made 42 senior appearances for Australia. She was a member of the Australia teams that won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup and the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games. She began her senior club career with Melbourne Kestrels during the Commonwealth Bank Trophy era and finished it playing for Giants Netball in Suncorp Super Netball. She retired from international netball following the 2015 World Cup.

text: The answer does not mention that she got her start playing for Calivil United and Sandhurst.

refinement: Bulley got her start playing for Calivil United in the Loddon Valley Football Netball League before switching to Sandhurst in the Bendigo Football Netball League. Bulley made 42 senior appearances for Australia. She was a member of the Australia teams that won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup and the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games. She began her senior club career with Melbourne Kestrels during the Commonwealth Bank Trophy era and finished it playing for Giants Netball in Suncorp Super Netball. She retired from international netball following the 2015 World Cup.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Bulley's awards.

answer: Bulley was a member of the Australia teams that won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup and the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games. In 2008, 2013 and 2015 she was also on the team that won the ANZ Championship. This was with three different teams: the New South Wales Swifts, the Adelaide Thunderbirds and the Queensland Firebirds.

text: The answer omits her Player of the Year Awards.

refinement: Bulley was a member of the Australia teams that won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup and the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games. In 2008, 2013 and 2015 she was also on the team that won the ANZ Championship. This was with three different teams: the New South Wales Swifts, the Adelaide Thunderbirds and the Queensland Firebirds. She was also named ANZ Championship Holden Player of the Year, NSW Swifts QBE Player of the Year, and the Member's Player of the Year in 2010.

answer: Bulley has won three ANZ Championship titles, two as a member of the New South Wales Swifts in 2008 and the Adelaide Thunderbirds in 2013, and one as a member of the Queensland Firebirds in 2015. She has also been named ANZ Championship Player of the Year, and the Member's Player of the Year, twice. Bulley retired from international netball following the 2015 Netball World Cup.

text: It is untrue that she was named Member's Player of the Year twice.

refinement: Bulley has won three ANZ Championship titles, two as a member of the New South Wales Swifts in 2008 and the Adelaide Thunderbirds in 2013, and one as a member of the Queensland Firebirds in 2015. She has also been named ANZ Championship Player of the Year, the NSW Swifts QBE Player of the Year, and the Member's Player of the Year. Bulley retired from international netball following the 2015 Netball World Cup.

answer: Bulley is the winner of the ANZ Championship Holden Player of the Year title and member's player of the year when playing for the NSW Swifts. She is also the winner of QBE Player of the Year on the NSW Swifts. Her team, the Queensland Firebirds won the championship in 2015 and Bulley was their captain. She also won a silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth games.

text: The answer omits mention of the other two championship titles she won.

refinement: Bulley is the winner of the ANZ Championship Holden Player of the Year title and member's player of the year when playing for the NSW Swifts. She is also the winner of QBE Player of the Year on the NSW Swifts. Her team, the Queensland Firebirds won the championship in 2015 and Bulley was their captain. She also won championship titles with the New South Wales Swifts and the Adelaide Thunderbirds. She also won a silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth games.

text: The answer doesn't mention her gold medal.

refinement: Bulley is the winner of the ANZ Championship Holden Player of the Year title and member's player of the year when playing for the NSW Swifts. She is also the winner of QBE Player of the Year on the NSW Swifts. Her team, the Queensland Firebirds won the championship in 2015 and Bulley was their captain. She also won championship titles with the New South Wales Swifts and the Adelaide Thunderbirds. She also won a silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth games and a gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup.

answer: Bulley has been named ANZ Championship winner, runner-up at the Commonwealth Games, and winner at the Netball World Cup. She also garnered awards for ANZ Championship Player of the Year, NSW Swifts QBE Player of the Year, and Member's Player of the Year. Finally, Bulley was recently named head coach of the Giants Netball Academy.

text: Bulley being named head coach is not an award.

refinement: Bulley has been named ANZ Championship winner, runner-up at the Commonwealth Games, and winner at the Netball World Cup. She also garnered awards for ANZ Championship Player of the Year, NSW Swifts QBE Player of the Year, and Member's Player of the Year.

answer: Bulley has several awards to her name. She was named NETBALL WORLD CUP winner in 2015, was member of Australia's team that won the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games, and won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup. Her younger brother, Kieran Strachan, is an Australian rules footballer. Iier sister, Meredith Ball (née Strachan), also played netball for Melbourne Kestrels, Melbourne University Lightning, and Sandhurst.

text: Her victory at the Netball World Cup is mentioned twice.

refinement: Bulley has several awards to her name. She was member of Australia's team that won the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games, and won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup. Her younger brother, Kieran Strachan, is an Australian rules footballer. Iier sister, Meredith Ball (née Strachan), also played netball for Melbourne Kestrels, Melbourne University Lightning, and Sandhurst.

text: Her siblings' accomplishments are not relevant to the question.

refinement: Bulley has several awards to her name. She was member of Australia's team that won the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games, and won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup.

text: The answer does not mention her various Player of the Year awards.

refinement: Bulley has several awards to her name. She was member of Australia's team that won the silver medal at the 2010 Commonwealth Games, and won the gold medal at the 2015 Netball World Cup. In 2010 she also won ANZ Championship Holden Player of the Year, the NSW Swifts QBE Player of the Year, and the Member's Player of the Year.


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New Hampshire was won by former California Senator John C. Frémont, who won the state by a narrow vote margin of less than 6,000 votes. He would go on to lose nationally to former United States Minister to the United Kingdom James Buchanan.

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title: 1856 United States presidential election in New Hampshire

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When did the election take place?

answer: The election took place on November 4, 1856.

answer: The election took place on November 4, 1856.

answer: November 4

text: The answer does not include the year.

answer: November 4, 1856.

answer: 4 November 1856

text: If the date comes first, it should be written '4th of November, 1856.'

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How did the election take place?

answer: The Election in New Hampshire took place through a popular vote of the citizens of New Hampshire, who decided on five electors who would vote for President and Vice President.

answer: The voters chose five representatives to the Electoral College, who voted for President and Vice President.

answer: The election was conducted by popular vote, with voters choosing five representatives to the Electoral College. These electors voted for president and vice-president. John C. Fremont won New Hampshire by a narrow vote margin.

answer: Nominations were won on a popular vote and electors cast their votes for president and VP.

answer: Voters chose five representatives, or electors to the Electoral College, who voted for President and Vice President.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who won the election in New Hampshire?

answer: John C. Fremont

answer: Former California Senator John C. Frémont won the state in a narrow vote margin.

answer: John C. Frémont won the election in New Hampshire.

answer: John C. Fremont.

answer: John C. Fremont won the election in New Hampshire.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

By how many votes did Fremont win?

answer: Fremont won the state by a vote margin of fewer than 6,000 votes.

answer: Less than 6,000

answer: By less than 6,000 votes.

answer: John C. Frémont won by a narrow vote margin of less than 6,000 votes.

answer: Less than 6000 votes.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: The 1856 United States presidential election in New Hampshire was won narrowly by John C. Frémont. Frémont would go on to lose nationally to James Buchanan.

text: The summary is less than three sentences.

refinement: The 1856 United States presidential election in New Hampshire was won narrowly by John C. Frémont. He won the state with a narrow vote margin of less than 6000. However, Frémont lost nationally to James Buchanan.

answer:
In the 1856 United States Presidential Elections New Hampshire, voters choose five representatives to the Electoral College, who then vote the President and Vice President.

John C. Fremont, a former California Senator won the state by a vote margin of fewer than 6,000 votes. Although, he would lose nationally to James Buchanan.

text:
'In the 1856 United States Presidential Elections New Hampshire, voters choose five representatives to the Electoral College, who then vote the President and Vice President.'
The model uses present tense verbs for an election that happened in the past.

refinement:
In the 1856 United States Presidential Elections New Hampshire, voters chose five representatives to the Electoral College, who then voted the President and Vice President.

John C. Fremont, a former California Senator, won the state by a vote margin of fewer than 6,000 votes. Although, he lost nationally to James Buchanan.

answer: The 1856 United States Presidential Election in the state of New Hampshire took place on November 4, 1856 as part of the 1856 United States presidential election. New Hampshire was won by Senator John C. Fremont who, along with the electors whom New Hampshire voted for, would go on to lose nationally to James Buchanan. The 1856 United States Presidential Election in the state of New Hampshire was won by Senator John C. Fremont for the former California who would lose the state nationally.

text:
'The 1856 United States Presidential Election in the state of New Hampshire was won by Senator John C. Fremont for the former California who would lose the state nationally.'
This information is repetitive.

refinement: The 1856 United States Presidential Election in New Hampshire took place on November 4, 1856, as part of the 1856 United States presidential election. Voters chose five representatives to the electoral college to vote for the President and Vice President. Ultimately, the electors whom New Hampshire voted for, Senator John C. Fremont, won New Hampshire but lost nationally to James Buchanan.

answer: The 1856 United States presidential election in New Hampshire was part of the 1856 United States presidential election. It took place on November 4, 1856 and voters chose five representatives, or electors to the Electoral College, who voted for President and Vice President.    Senator John C. Frémont of California won the state of New Hampshire, but lost nationally to James Buchanan.

answer: In the 1856 US Presidential election, former California Senator John C. Frémont narrowly won New Hampshire by less than 6,000 votes. He would go on to lose nationally to former United State's Minister to the United Kingdom James Buchanan.

text: The summary is less than three sentences.

refinement: In the 1856 US Presidential election, which took place on November 4, 1856, former California Senator John C. Frémont narrowly won New Hampshire by less than 6,000 votes. Voters elected five representatives, or electors to the Electoral College, who voted for President and Vice President. However, Fremont lost nationally to former United State's Minister to the United Kingdom, James Buchanan.


text:
VINEET JAIN (born 16 May 1972) is a former Indian cricketer. An opening bowler, he played first-class cricket for Haryana from 1993 to 2001, and for Tripura from 2004 to 2008.[1]

In 2005-06 he took 2 for 20 and 7 for 29 in Tripura's first first-class victory.[2] In 2006-07 he took 4 for 40 and 5 for 40 in their second victory.[3]

[1]

[2]

[3]

title: Vineet Jain (cricketer)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is Vineet Jain?

answer: Vineet Jain is a former Indian cricketer. He played first-class cricket for Haryana from 1993 to 2001 and for Tripura from 2004 to 2008.

answer: Vineet Jain is a former Indian cricketer.

answer: A former Indian cricketer.

answer: He is a former Indian cricketer.

answer: He is an opening bowler.

text: It is omitted that he is a former Indian cricketer.

refinement: He is an opening bowler. He is a former Indian cricketer.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What position in cricket did Vineet Jain play?

answer: Vineet Jain was an opening bowler.

answer: He played as an opening bowler.

answer: An opening bowler.

answer: Vineet Jain was an opening bowler in cricket.

answer: Vineet Jain was an opening bowler.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Which state teams did Vineet Jain play for?

answer: Haryana and Tripura

answer: He played for Haryana and Tripura.

answer: Vineet Jain played for Haryana from 1993 to 2001 and for Tripura from 2004 to 2008.

answer: Vineet Jain played for Haryana and Tripura.

answer: He played for the Haryana and Tripura state teams.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was Vineet Jain born?

answer: May 16th, 1972.

answer: Vineet Jain was born on May 16, 1972.

answer: Vineet Jain was born on May 16, 1972.

answer: He was born on May 16, 1972.

answer: 16 May 1972

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Vineet Jain is a former Indian cricketer who played first-class cricket for Haryana from 1993 to 2001, and for Tripura from 2004 to 2008.

text: It is omitted that he was an opening bowler.

refinement: Vineet Jain is a former Indian cricketer. He was an opening bowler who played first-class cricket for Haryana from 1993 to 2001, and for Tripura from 2004 to 2008.

answer: Vineet Jain is a former Indian cricketer who played for Haryana as an opening bowler. He achieved success in 2005-06 and 2006-07, taking multiple wickets in victories for Tripura.

answer: VINEET JAIN is a former Indian cricketer whose greatest accomplishments were helping Tripura win two first-class victories. He played from 1993 to 2008 primarily as an opening bowler.

answer: This article provides detailed information about Vineet Jain, an Indian cricketer.

answer: This article gives a brief synopsis on Vineet Jain's career as an Indian cricketer and his first-class victories for Haryana and Tripura.


text:
LYUDMYLA LEONTIIVNA DENISOVA[1] (; ) (born July 6, 1960 in Arkhangelsk, Russian SFSR) is a Ukrainian politician and former Minister of Labor and Social Policy who on 15 March 2018 was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.[2][3]

Biography

Raised by her mother Nina Ivanovna Ankudinova (born 1934) in Arkhangelsk Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School (1978), the Leningrad State University (1989) and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law (1995).[4]

Professional career

Denisova was a teacher at a preschool in the Russian city of Arkhangelsk (school №78, 1979–80).[5] For the next nine years Denisova held different posts in the Arkhangelsk provincial law court.[6] In 1989, she moved to Ukraine and became the legal adviser of the Crimean Provincial Committee of Ukraine (1990–91).[7] From 1991 she worked in the Republic of Crimea's Administration of the pension fund until 1998.[8]

Political career

In 1998 Denisova became the Minister of Economy and Finances in the Crimean government.[9] In Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea, she served as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department. Denisova was named Politician of the Year in 2001. In 2000 Denisova was detained for 24 hours and charged with power abuse.[10] Denisova has stated she was persecuted for refusing to sign a budget document.[11] This criminal case was soon closed.[12]

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina (Yulia Tymoshenko Bloc) since 2005.[13] During the 2006 and 2007 parliamentary elections, she was elected as a deputy to the Verkhovna Rada (Ukrainian parliament).

Minister

On December 18, 2007, Yulia Tymoshenko, with a margin of two votes, was elected Prime Minister.[14] and the second Tymoshenko Government was formed between the Yulia Tymoshenko Bloc and Our Ukraine–People's Self-Defense Bloc in which Denisova was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy.

In October 2009 Denisova was ranked 15th in a top 100 of “most influential women in Ukraine” compiled by experts for the Ukrainian magazine Focus (six places lower than non-minister and fellow Batkivshchina member Natalia Korolevska).[15]

2010 Crimean parliamentary election

Denisova headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina during the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election.[16] Batkivshchina did not win seats in the Supreme Council of Crimea.[17]

2012 Ukrainian parliamentary election

Denisova was placed at number 38 on the electoral list of Batkivshchina during the 2012 Ukrainian parliamentary election.[18] She was re-elected into parliament.[19]

2nd minister post

On 27 February 2014 Denisova became Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government.[20]

In September 2014 Denisova became a founding member of her new party People's Front.[21]

2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election

In the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election Denisova was re-elected into parliament placed 15th on the electoral list of People's Front.[22][23][24]

On 15 March 2018 the Ukrainian parliament elected Denisova Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.[25]

[1]  Short bio, LIGA

[2] https://www.pravda.com.ua/news/2018/03/15/7174734/

[3] Maidan nominates Yatseniuk for prime minister, Interfax-Ukraine (26 February 2014)
Ukrainian parliament endorses new cabinet, Interfax-Ukraine (27 February 2014)

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[5]

[6]

[7]

[8]

[9] Новый состав Кабмина принят единогласно , news.mediaport.ua

[10] Is She Next?, Kyiv Post (September 3, 2010)

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[12]

[13]

[14]

[15]  Рейтинг Фокуса: 100 самых влиятельных женщин и 100 деталей о них , Focus

[16] Liudmyla Denisova heads electoral list of Crimean branch of Batkivschyna Party, Kyiv Post (September 30, 2010)

[17]  Results of the elections, preliminary data, on interactive maps by Ukrayinska Pravda (November 8, 2010)

[18] They Call Themselves the Opposition, The Ukrainian Week (31 August 2012)

[19]  Список депутатів нової Верховної Ради, Ukrayinska Pravda (11 November 2012)

[20]

[21] Yatseniuk elected head of political council of People's Front Party , Demotix (9 September 2014)

[22] Poroshenko Bloc to have greatest number of seats in parliament , Ukrinform (8 November 2014)
People's Front 0.33% ahead of Poroshenko Bloc with all ballots counted in Ukraine elections - CEC , Interfax-Ukraine (8 November 2014)
Poroshenko Bloc to get 132 seats in parliament - CEC, Interfax-Ukraine (8 November 2014)

[23]  Full electoral list of “Fatherland” , TVi (15 September 2014)

[24]  Electoral list of People's Front, Ukrayinska Pravda (20 September 2014)

[25]

title: Lyudmyla Denisova

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Denisova's education?

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School, the Leningrad State University, and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School in 1978, then the Leningrad State University in 1989, and finally the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law in 1995.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School. She completed her state certification at the Leningrad State University. She later completed her license at the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

text: The passage doesn't explicitly say that she completed her state certification at Leningrad, only mentions she graduated from Leningrad.

refinement: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School and Leningrad State University. She later completed her license at the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

text: The passage doesn't explicitly state that she completed her license at Tavria, only mentions she graduated from Tavria.

refinement: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School, Leningrad State University and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School and the Leningrad State University.

text: The answer fails to mention she graduated from Tavria as well.

refinement: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School, Leningrad State University, and Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law.

answer: Denisova graduated from the Arkhangelsk Pedagogical School (1978), the Leningrad State University (1989) and the Tavria Institute of Enterprise and Law (1995).

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Denisova's political career?

answer: Denisova has had a long political career, beginning as a teacher and moving on to various post within the Crimean provincial law courts and the Crimean government. In 2009 she was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy under Yulia Tymoshenko's second government and in 2014 she was re-elected to parliament for the second time. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

text: "post" should be plural

refinement: Denisova has had a long political career, beginning as a teacher and moving on to various posts within the Crimean provincial law courts and the Crimean government. In 2009 she was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy under Yulia Tymoshenko's second government and in 2014 she was re-elected to parliament for the second time. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

text: She was elected minister of labor in 2007, not 2009.

refinement: Denisova has had a long political career, beginning as a teacher and moving on to various posts within the Crimean provincial law courts and the Crimean government. In 2007 she was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy under Yulia Tymoshenko's second government and in 2014 she was re-elected to parliament for the second time. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

text: The passage also mentions a re-election to parliament in 2012, so her re-election into parliament in 2014 was not her second time.

refinement: Denisova has had a long political career, beginning as a teacher and moving on to various posts within the Crimean provincial law courts and the Crimean government. In 2007 she was elected Minister of Labour and Social Policy under Yulia Tymoshenko's second government and in 2012 and 2014 she was re-elected to parliament. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

answer: Denisova has had a political career primarily in Crimea, serving as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance, and head of Treasury Department before becoming Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government in 2014. She was elected into parliament in both the 2006 and 2012 Ukrainian parliamentary elections, placed 15th on the electoral list of People's Front in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election, and was recently elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

text: Fails to mention that she had already become Minister of Labor and Social Policy in Yulia Tymoshenko's government in 2007.

refinement: Denisova has had a political career primarily in Crimea, serving as Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance, and head of Treasury Department before becoming Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Tymoshenko Governement in 2007 and Yatsenyuk Government in 2014. She was elected into parliament in both the 2006 and 2012 Ukrainian parliamentary elections, placed 15th on the electoral list of People's Front in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election, and was recently elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.

answer: Denisova was the Minister of Labor and Social Policy as a member of the Yatsenyuk Government in February 2014. She re-elected into parliament in the 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election. She was elected as Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine on March 15, 2018.

text: Missing a large chunk of her earlier political history.

refinement: Denisova served as Minister of Economy and Finances in the Crimean government in 1990s.  Denisova was elected the Minister of Labor and Social Policy in both the Tymoshenko Government in 2007 and in the Yatsenyuk Government in February 2014. She was elected into parliament in the 2006, 2007, and 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election. She was elected as Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine on March 15, 2018.

text: missing elected to parliament in 2012 as well

refinement: Denisova served as Minister of Economy and Finances in the Crimean government in 1990s.  Denisova was elected the Minister of Labor and Social Policy in both the Tymoshenko Government in 2007 and in the Yatsenyuk Government in February 2014. She was elected into parliament in the 2006, 2007, 2012, and 2014 Ukrainian parliamentary election. She was elected as Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine on March 15, 2018.

answer:
As Minister of Finance she held different posts in the Arkhangelsk provincial law court between 1979 and 1990. Following that, Denisova became the legal adviser of the Crimean Provincial Committee of Ukraine from 1990 to 1991.

In 1998 Denisova became Minister of Economy, Minister of Finance and head of the Treasury Department in the Crimean government. She served in Ukraine's Autonomous Republic of Crimea from 1998 to 2007.

In 2000 Denisova was detained for 24hrs on charges of power abuse. She stated that she was persecuted for refusing to sign a budget document. This case was shut down.

Denisova is a member of Batkivshchina since 2005. She headed the electoral list of Batkivshchina for the 2010 Crimean parliamentary election, but Batkivshchina did not win seats in Supreme Council of Crimea.

answer: In 1998, Denisova became the Minister of Economy and Finances in the Crimean government. She was named Politician of the Year in 2001. She has been a member of Batkivshchina since 2005, and during the 2006 and 2007 parliamentary elections, she was elected as a deputy to the Verkhovna Rada. In 2009, she was ranked the 15th most influential woman in Ukraine. She was re-elected to parliament in 2012. In 2014, she became Minister of Labor and Social Policy in the Yatsenyuk Government and became a founding member of her new party People's Front. In the same year, she was re-elected to the Ukrainian parliament. In 2018, she was elected Commissioner for Human Rights in Ukraine.


text:
I feel it might be a bit cumbersome, anyway- any advice/critiques would be greatly appreciated.

———-He would then make his journey, wearing a shirt that featured a sloppy graphic of Paris, Texas’s own Eiffel Tower front and center.  This Eiffel Tower was crowned with a fucking cowboy hat.

Speaking of-

I should tell you about those two-brothers, they were identical twins- one of which went by the moniker Cowboy, who in a very cowboy-esque manner heroically busted into our protagonist’s house at 3 a.m. and used brazen force to grab a sofa that was engulfed in flames to toss it out into the front-yard with a grunt. Apparently, cushion serves as no buffer to an old MGM limp-wristed ashing out of a cigarette.  Our protagonist thanked him with hare-like murmurs once he awoke from the kitchen-floor that red wine and continually shouting ‘I am no senator’s son’ had lulled him to sleep on.  He would always tell me that Cowboy had certain vigilant inclinations that usurped the mental disorder that made him dependent on the state of Texas and it’s few victuals of financial empathy. “If he didn’t get those checks, well, I would have probably burned alive.” Our protagonist would gleefully say over bites of the singular nougat-heavy candy bars that used to provide his only source of nutrition for the day outside of what he got when he traveled to Hunt county, which was wet and eager to trade it’s poison for quarters and the tawdry idioms thrown into over-the-counter service to feign something fetchingly personal.

I was force-fed too much iconography to be concerned with finding out the other brother’s name.

The two-brothers would watch the same recorded episodes of Wheel of Fortune on VHS so that they could consistently be correct with their answers.  Pat Sajak had become an administration of consistent validation.  The two-brothers would pepper in caveats of convoluted logic to the neighborhood kids “Don’t count your toes in spring-time, just don’t do it” before offering them a tuna sandwich or licorice that lost all malleability to time.  They would go the local donut-shop and offer up arm wrestling contests in which the prize was a Spudnut with coconut shavings; rumor has it that they never lost, so the forfeiture to come of their hypothetical defeat was never addressed.  I always wondered.

Everyone saw a litany of misdirected allegory, bicycle baskets and matching pique polos from the thrift-store on Booker road.  They saw a life without the dregs.  Life without rancor towards the swath of simple southern fate.  Everyone responded to them with subtle indifference.  They were patronizers, but they did it out of envy.  He swore it.  Our protagonist saw the enchanting whiteness and front-faced conscious that the (what social arbiters have deemed as the-) ‘mentally-challenged’ bared.  More times than not, he was certain that they were only people within the ‘low-end’ part of town that weren’t nauseated by the smell of sulfur.  He’d invite them over to play on his impromptu front yard golf-course, which was comprised of holes that he’d stuck old coffee tins in and a croquet set he got for fifty cents.  He’d conceptualized it on a raucous Tuesday night.  I think he genuinely loved the two-brothers.  In retrospect, we all should have.

The protagonist, my father, attended their funeral in the spring of 1999.  He wore the only suit he had.  It was an awful onyx grey.  It had masted a decade of convival and powder.  It had seen its fair share.  The pant hems provided slightly splayed pedals of fabric, relics of either dancing or running in The Big D (Our protagonist would say they are actions that operate in tandem.)  He counted his toes for what seemed like decades. We didn’t watch Wheel of Fortune that night.

title: Two brothers: a snippet from a book I'm working on.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What was one twin called?

answer: The twin was called Cowboy.

text: they were identical twins- one of which went by the moniker Cowboy,

answer: Cowboy.

text: they were identical twins- one of which went by the moniker Cowboy,

answer: The twin called by the moniker Cowboy.

text: The English is not quite right.

answer: Cowboy.

text: they were identical twins- one of which went by the moniker Cowboy,

answer: One of twins was called Cowboy.

text: they were identical twins- one of which went by the moniker Cowboy,

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

which show did the twin watch on repeat?

answer: Wheel of Fortune

text: The two brothers would watch the same recorded episodes of Wheel of Fortune

answer: Wheel of Fortune.

text: The two brothers would watch the same recorded episodes of Wheel of Fortune

answer: Wheel of Fortune.

text: The two brothers would watch the same recorded episodes of Wheel of Fortune

answer: Wheel of Fortune

text: The two brothers would watch the same recorded episodes of Wheel of Fortune

answer: 'Wheel of Fortune'

text: The two brothers would watch the same recorded episodes of Wheel of Fortune

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What part of the country did they live in?

answer: The South.

text: This doesn't adequately answer the question

answer: Texas.

text: made him dependent on the state of Texas

answer: The brothers lived in the southern United States.

text: Specifically Texas

refinement: The brothers lived in the southern United States in Texas.

answer: The brothers lived in Texas.

text: made him dependent on the state of Texas

answer: They were born and lived in the south.

text: This is an inadequate answer

refinement: They were born and lived in the US south in Texas.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is the protagonist?

answer: The protagonist is the father of the two brothers, Cowboy and the unnamed twin.

text: The protagonist, my father, attended their funeral in the spring of 1999.

answer: The author's father.

text: The protagonist, my father, attended their funeral in the spring of 1999.

answer: The protagonist is the father of the two brothers.

text: The protagonist, my father, attended their funeral in the spring of 1999.

answer: The protagonist is the narrator's father.

text: The protagonist, my father, attended their funeral in the spring of 1999.

answer: the main character of the story

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: The author describes their twin brothers and their flashy personalities. One is really into cowboy things, and acted in a gallant, loud manner. The other is not mentioned outside of his gender and the fact that he shared the interest of watching the same recorded episodes of Wheel of Fortune on vhs. Their father, whom the author calls the protagonist, attends their funeral in the spring of nineteen-ninety-nine. The family didn't watch Wheel of Fortune that night.

answer: The narrator discusses a pair of identical twins named Cowboy and Our protagonist. Our protagonist is characterized as being very reliant on the state of Texas. The narrator never learns the other twin's name. The twins visit Our protagonist's house accidentally at 3am and immediately pull out a sofa from the flames consuming it. Everyone except Our protagonist sees the two brothers as being good-natured individuals. The twins die years later and Our protagonist wears the only suit he had to their funeral.

text: The summary confuses the main characters in the story.

refinement: The author describes their twin brothers and their flashy personalities. One is really into cowboy things, and acted in a gallant, loud manner. The other is not mentioned outside of his gender and the fact that he shared the interest of watching the same recorded episodes of Wheel of Fortune on vhs. Their father, whom the author calls the protagonist, attends their funeral in the spring of nineteen-ninety-nine. The family didn't watch Wheel of Fortune that night.

answer: The narrator's protagonists gives a description of two brothers. One, Cowboy, saved his life when he chewed a couch on fire. The other brother, who went by the name Guy, would play golf with his brother and watch Wheel of Fortune as a family. The brothers were said to like Coke and Nuts which the narrator uses to describe the brothers' resemblance to each other. In 1999, the narrator says the brothers got married.

text: This summary is completely muddled and bears no resemblance to the story.

refinement: The author describes their twin brothers and their flashy personalities. One is really into cowboy things, and acted in a gallant, loud manner. The other is not mentioned outside of his gender and the fact that he shared the interest of watching the same recorded episodes of Wheel of Fortune on vhs. Their father, whom the author calls the protagonist, attends their funeral in the spring of nineteen-ninety-nine. The family didn't watch Wheel of Fortune that night.

answer: The protagonist has two brothers, a cowboy and another who is mentally disabled. The two brothers watched Wheel of Fortune together and arm wrestled for Spudnuts. They both died eventually and the protagonist attended their funeral in 1999. He remembers his brothers fondly, and particularly the cowboy who rescued him from a burning sofa.

text: The narrator is not the protagonist

refinement: The narrator has two brothers, a cowboy and another who is mentally disabled. The two brothers watched Wheel of Fortune together and arm-wrestled for Spudnuts. They both died eventually and the protagonist attended their funeral in 1999. He remembers his brothers fondly, and particularly the cowboy who rescued him from a burning sofa.

answer: The narrator's father loved two identical twin brothers, Cowboy and the other. Cowboy was fond of breaking into houses and rescuing people from flaming sofas. Both brothers were known for their engaging arm wrestling contests, inventive front-yard golf courses, and reliability when it counted. They both passed away in 1999. The father attended their funeral in an awful suit; he counted his toes for what seemed like decades.


text:
*When in Rome*

Back in the olden days, people would fight with knives and swords instead of guns. It made war much more slow and gruesome. Like if you were in the war you'd be going "This is taking WAY too long to chop this guy's head off." And you'd get bored and kinda walk away from the war and maybe get a beer. But then you'd have to walk back through the war again to get back home. So, then you'd have to fight again and you'd be like "Man, this is taking forever to stab this guy to death." But then you're not paying attention and this other guy takes an ax and starts chopping your torso in half. And then you're like "This is taking way to long to die."

That's how war was in the olden days.

*Bunker Buster*

In the last days of the war, we had run out of ammunition for the big guns and had to use P.O.W.s as artillery.

Sure, a human body cannot destroy a carrier, but a charred human body with branches taped to it and fake fangs in its mouth can really scare the shit out of a person when it comes flying at you at 100 miles an hour.

*Night Vision*

In the night, no one can see you. Just your eyes. We moved through the town and took up positions waiting for the convoy.

When it came, we took life like vampires in the night and there were no survivors.

It was beautiful.

Night vision wins wars, make no mistake.

But it totally makes masturbation out of the question.

*The Enemy Must Be Shot in the Face Several Times Before It Counts*

Evan and I had started a game. We began betting packs of cigarettes on who would have the most kills for the day. I won most of the time.

But one time, we bet a carton and there was a giant dispute over whether this enemy soldier was really dead or if he had just been shot in the face. Evan figured he killed him. But I could have sworn the guy walked away.

So, we went back and we found the man. He was very much alive. So, I shot him some more in the face and won the bet.

Tough shit, Evan.

*Don't Forget to Die*

Our company stopped by the river to rest. We had been hoofing it since France and we just entered Michigan.

Plus the guy reading the map was on acid.

But Detroit was beautiful.

*POW*

The thing they don't tell you about a P.O.W. camp is that there are no rules. They sit you in a bunker with a bunch of prisoners and a Monopoly board. No one had played Monopoly in years. We all forgot how to play.

And there were no rules. Totally lost. Just a board and pieces. We had to make up the rules. I still don't know what GO meant.

*GI Joe*

When I came back from the war there was a party. But there was no job, no wife, and no money. But they made sure to give me a party. Like some sort of celebration as if I had been with them all the last four years and not out killing kids younger than me.

It made me sick.

Except for the pinata - that was totally cool and kinda made up for their lack of understanding.

But the pain is still there.

*Betrayal on the Beach*

I looked at Salter. We both knew what he had done. And we both knew it was going to cost us the war. And we both knew that only one of us would live to tell or not to tell the story of his betrayal.

We eyed each other and waited for the other to flinch. But neither one of us did. Finally, he blinked. I knew then that it was Ramirez who did it.

But we continued having sex with the prostitute for the time being. There would be time to kill him and Ramirez later.

*Hand Grenades to Hell*

I once knew a guy who would pull the pins on hand grenades and juggle them and toss them at the enemy mid-juggle.

He died SUPER quick.

*The Battle of Unspecified Nation-State*

I was on the hill overlooking the ambush. It was a nightmare. We were losing men by the dozen. I tried to run down, but Hank stopped me.

"Patterson, that's not your war."

"But we gotta do something!"

"Patterson, a general once told me you have to know when to hold them and you have to know when to fold them. We are folding."

"That's a Kenny Rogers song."

"Yes, Kenny Rogers, the general."

*The Bridge Over the River Dead Bodies*

One thing they don't tell you in the movies is that war can be delicious. Every new town we would explore we'd eat local foods and they were delicious.

I remember I came back home and missed the exotic foods. Sure, we had our International district, but it just wasn't the same.

That's why I'm reenlisting.

Does that sound crazy to you? Anyway, two adults and three children for Frozen.

*Bloody Hill of Blood and Flags and Blood*

I turned to Johnson "Call in a strike!"

Johnson turned his head towards me and I realized he was...

His face...

Was gone.

He had put on clown makeup. Boy, that came as a surprise. You need humor if you are going to fight a war.

He beeped a horn and I laughed.

Then someone blew his clown face and his real face off.

title: [HM] War is Hell and Other Tales of Fighting and Stuff Like That

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything to do with weaponry.

answer: In the old days, people would fight with knives and swords instead of guns. You might get bored due to how long it takes to kill someone. When you weren't paying attention, the enemy might take out an ax and chop you in half. In the last days of the war, the narrator and his allies ran out of ammunition for the big guns. The narrator once knew a guy who would pull the pins on hand grenades, juggle them, and toss them at the enemy.

answer: During the olden days people would fight with knives and swords, a slower, more gruesome form of fighting than using guns. It wasn't uncommon to be told: "back in the olden days, people would fight with knives and swords." Sometimes they were used to cheat or even fight over cards. Prisoners were made into human land mines and pitch forks. Knives were used on the aforementioned. In World War II, Nazis were thought to use the WWII stadium grandstands as a factory run by trains. There were rumors of "moving van - They move the corpse to a mass grave so the Germans won't know where the chemicals planted" and that you had to dig out Soviet soldiers that were trapped alive by moving moss in front of your eyes. Weapons technology is only mentioned when Johnson puts on clown makeup, saying that boy that came as a surprise.

text: Everything except the first sentence in the answer must be removed because they are made-up.

refinement: During the olden days people would fight with knives and swords, a slower, more gruesome form of fighting than using guns.

text: Missing comma after "days"

refinement: During the olden days, people would fight with knives and swords, a slower, more gruesome form of fighting than using guns.

text: The answer should mention other weaponry-related things from the story.

refinement: During the olden days, people would fight with knives and swords, a slower, more gruesome form of fighting than using guns. The narrator and his squad ran out of ammo for large weaponry once, and they had to use prisoners of war as ammunition. He also met a guy who would juggle grenades after pulling their pin and before throwing them at the enemy mid-juggle.

answer: In the olden days of war, people fought with knives, swords and ax. When the narrator witnessed it, he died rather slowly. P.O.W.s were useful as artillery in the last days of the war. After the war is over, the narrator misses the exotic foods of other lands. He is going to reenlist so he can bring the exotic foods with him.

text: The narrator is giving an example about old weaponry being slow. He didn't actually experience death.

refinement: In the olden days of war, people fought with knives, swords and ax. So much so that if you were hacked in half, you'd think it's taking too long to die. P.O.W.s were useful as artillery in the last days of the war. After the war is over, the narrator misses the exotic foods of other lands. He is going to reenlist so he can bring the exotic foods with him.

text: "In the olden days of war, people fought with knives, swords and ax." There are a few grammar issues with this sentence. There's a missing Oxford comma, and "ax" should be plural.

refinement: In the olden days of war, people fought with knives, swords, and axes. So much so that if you were hacked in half, you'd think it's taking too long to die. P.O.W.s were useful as artillery in the last days of the war. After the war is over, the narrator misses the exotic foods of other lands. He is going to reenlist so he can bring the exotic foods with him.

text: P.O.W.s were used as ammo in large weaponry because they run out of proper ammo. The answer should mention that.

refinement: In the olden days of war, people fought with knives, swords, and axes. So much so that if you were hacked in half, you'd think it's taking too long to die. P.O.W.s were useful as artillery in the last days of the war because they ran out of proper ammo. After the war is over, the narrator misses the exotic foods of other lands. He is going to reenlist so he can bring the exotic foods with him.

text: The stuff about exotic foods is out of the scope of this question.

refinement: In the olden days of war, people fought with knives, swords, and axes. So much so that if you were hacked in half, you'd think it's taking too long to die. P.O.W.s were useful as artillery in the last days of the war because they ran out of proper ammo.

text: The answer should mention the grenade juggler since it's about weaponry.

refinement: In the olden days of war, people fought with knives, swords, and axes. So much so that if you were hacked in half, you'd think it's taking too long to die. P.O.W.s were useful as artillery in the last days of the war because they ran out of proper ammo. The narrator once knew a guy who juggled live grenades before throwing them.

answer: In this story, the characters debate how to call in a bomb strike. During this, Johnson puts on clown makeup. Then his real face along with his clown face are blown off. There are many horrors of war, but one of them is that it can become so absurd, so horrific, that humor might be one of the only ways to make it through alive. Weapons themselves can range from knives and swords to hand grenades and bombs. They play a serious role in war, but it is important not to lose sight of the fact that war is all about death and destruction.

answer: In this passage, a soldier is caught off guard by his partner's apparent use of clown makeup instead of battle paint. Amidst battle, his partner gets shot in the face and the soldier realizes that was his mistake for not being prepared. Warfare involves the use of weapons, which can range from grenades to guns. Unpredictable, deadly scenarios are always a factor in daily warfare, and humor, often meaningful and dark, is necessary in order to stay sane.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to prisoners of war.

answer: A guy once read the map from France to Michigan because he was on acid. They thought it was Detroit, but it was actually Michigan. Anyway, in a convoy, the narrator found himself taken as a P.O.W. because there were no rules.

text: The entire answer is either irrelevant to the question or made-up. It should be re-written.

refinement: The narrator recalls using prisoners of war as artillery ammo because they ran out of the real stuff. He says there are no rules in a P.O.W. camp, so they had to play Monopoly without rules.

answer: In the modern setting, a P.O.W. is used as a form of artillery. The narrator says P.O.W.s are used because they can't find ammunition. The narrator mentions that they played Monopoly while there were no rules. Regarding the Monopoly game, they say they had to make up the rules. One of the rules the narrator remembers is knowing when to fold them.

text: The rule about folding doesn't concern P.O.W.s, so it's irrelevant.

refinement: In the modern setting, a P.O.W. is used as a form of artillery. The narrator says P.O.W.s are used because they can't find ammunition. The narrator mentions that they played Monopoly while there were no rules. Regarding the Monopoly game, they say they had to make up the rules.

text: In one case the narrator's regiment ran out of ammo and used prisoners instead. The answer relays this as if it's a general thing.

refinement: Once, the narrator's regiment used P.O.W.s as a form of artillery ammo because they couldn't find ammunition. The narrator mentions that they played Monopoly while there were no rules. Regarding the Monopoly game, they say they had to make up the rules.

text: They had to make up rules for Monopoly because there are no rules in a P.O.W. camp.

refinement: Once, the narrator's regiment used P.O.W.s as a form of artillery ammo because they couldn't find ammunition. The narrator mentions that they played Monopoly in a P.O.W. camp. Regarding the Monopoly game, they say they had to make up the rules because there are no rules in a P.O.W. camp.

answer: Prisoners of war are captured soldiers who are placed in camps or bunkers and often made to perform menial tasks such as playing Monopoly. Sometimes hand grenades are thrown at them for entertainment and overall the prisoners exist in a lawless environment without any protections. Sometimes the mental toll that this takes is overwhelming and humor is necessary to keep sanity.

answer: When the narrator and his allies ran out of ammunition, they used their P.O.W.s as artillery. They dressed the bodies up with branches and fake fangs in order to scare their enemies. There are no rules in a P.O.W. camp. The narrator likens it to a game of Monopoly with just a board and pieces but no rules.

text: The narrator says they had to make up rules for Monopoly because no rules exist in a P.O.W. camp.

refinement: When the narrator and his allies ran out of ammunition, they used their P.O.W.s as artillery. They dressed the bodies up with branches and fake fangs in order to scare their enemies. There are no rules in a P.O.W. camp. The narrator says they had to make up rules for Monopoly there.

answer: When a soldier becomes a prisoner of war, their lives become more chaotic and unpredictable. There are no rules, and the soldier can be traded, tortured, or killed at will.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the narrator's feelings toward life after the war?

answer: The narrator feels that laughter is necessary in life, even during times of war, and is able to use humor in order to cope with the horror of it all.

text: The entire answer is irrelevant. It should be re-written.

refinement: The narrator felt sick after the war when he came home because of the party thrown in his honor. He seems to have thought it was fake, but he was OK with the pinata. He re-enlisted because the exotic foods in different towns during the war is too good.

answer: The story suggests that the narrator feels some degree of confusion, sadness, and humor about the absurdity and mundanity of war. The narrator also recognizes that humor is necessary for survival in war and sees the requirement for humor as a way to take the edge off the horror of what happens during wartime.

answer: The narrator thinks life after the war was for the people who were not there, and that life and parties without him as an actual participant felt hollow and vacuous, pulling him away from humanity. At the same time, he mocks the war's impression on people and says it made soldiers and their sacrifices seem so distant and unimportant. Finally, he realizes his desire to go back to the war, saying life at home is not the same.

text: The answer uses similar themes to the text but grossly misrepresents it. It should be re-written.

refinement: The narrator felt sick after the war when he came home because of the party thrown in his honor. He seems to have thought it was fake, but he was OK with the pinata. He re-enlisted because the exotic foods in different towns during the war is too good.

answer: At first, the narrator seems to find it difficult to cope with his military experience. He feels people do not value his service as a veteran, but his feelings pertaining to war life seem to change as he continues to reminisce about the memories he had during the war. His feelings are not all negative. He frequently mentions having fun during war and the game he played with Evan to make killing people more interesting. He even goes as far as saying he misses feast's specialties. He claims he finds war 'delicious' and is willing to do whatever it takes to re-enlist.

answer: After the war, he has no job, no wife, and no money, but is thrown a party. Celebrating the past gour years killing kids makes him feel sick. He feels residual pain. He also misses the exotic foods he would eat while travelling to new towns.

text: The following text is somewhat confusing: "After the war, he has no job, no wife, and no money, but is thrown a party. Celebrating the past gour years killing kids makes him feel sick." These sentences should be reworded to clearly express the narrator's feelings about the after-war party.

refinement: After the war, he has no job, no wife, and no money, but a party is thrown in celebration. Celebrating the past four years killing kids makes him feel sick. He feels residual pain. He also misses the exotic foods he would eat while travelling to new towns.

text: "Traveling" is misspelled

refinement: After the war, he has no job, no wife, and no money, but a party is thrown in celebration. Celebrating the past four years killing kids makes him feel sick. He feels residual pain. He also misses the exotic foods he would eat while traveling to new towns.

text: The answer should mention that the narrator ate exotic foods during the war and is enlisting again because of that.

refinement: After the war, he has no job, no wife, and no money, but a party is thrown in celebration. Celebrating the past four years killing kids makes him feel sick. He feels residual pain. He also misses the exotic foods he would eat while traveling to new towns during the war. He enlists again because of that.