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Riot

The street was full, packed from side to side. Hundreds, thousands of people, streamed down the avenue.

A low roar came from the crowd. Windows shattered as they passed store fronts. Car alarms sounded, and then faltered and fell into submission. Street signs were bent, and then disappeared into the bulk of people.

They kept marching forward, an unstoppable mass of humanity. Maybe it was caused by ever increasing taxes, it could have been a court judgment that they didn’t agree with, possibly their sports team won a championship. They could have been rebelling against unfair laws, or wars they didn’t agree with.

The angry mob of people may have been supporting any cause that could be imagined, yet it didn’t stop the fact that they were marching through their own city, destroying their own stores and their own cars, ruining the streets that their tax dollars paid for. Their reasons for rebellion didn’t stop the fact that when a man fell down the crowd didn’t pause, it still pushed forward. Feet marched right over their fallen brothers and sisters.

Ahead of them was a monument. A depiction of freedom maybe, or possibly a building that housed their government’s leaders, ahead of them could have simply been an open area where the group could disperse. But blocking their way was a single line of armed troops.

Dressed in black riot gear, helmets with plastic visors hanging down over their faces, men stood holding tall shields, armed with large automatic weapons. In front of them were sandbags and red and white striped saw horses. Behind them were big black vehicles, armored to the teeth, like children’s toys.

From the top of one vehicle stood a speaker and from that speaker an emotionless voice demanded that the people halt and disband. The speaker warned of the use of deadly force if they continued.

But the crowd had no choice; even if the people in front stopped they would be trampled by the people surging forward behind them. That wasn’t what they thought though. The force behind them made them feel unstoppable. As a single unit of people they felt invincible.

The gap between the two forces closed. Weapons were drawn, cocked and aimed.

A final warning was given to the crowd, the speaker sounded like it didn’t expect any sort of change to actually occur.

A man, dressed in black, held a gun and aimed it into the crowd. His mouth moved, the word ‘Ready’ was heard. His eyes focused on where his bullet would be sent. He opened his mouth again, ‘Aim’ came out of it. Which was redundant, everyone had already planned on where their projectiles would be placed. ‘Fire’, was the final word that was heard before people started to fall down before them.

Guns fired rapidly, automatic weapons built for slaughtering people sawed through the oncoming mass of humanity. They fell in lines. Like waves they crashed to the cold asphalt.

The gunmen showed no emotion as they laid people down to rest, they were coldly following orders. There was no moral objection; morals played no part in their job.

The onrushing people marched over their fallen brethren, stepped over the slippery bodies and pushed closer to the men who were firing upon them before they fell in heaps themselves.

Guns began smoking. Empty shells popped out and piled up on the ground at the feet of the men dressed in black.

The crowd seemed to be never ending, only slightly slowed by the mounds of the fallen bodies that they had to overcome on their way to their goal behind the men who protected it with deadly force.
The men worked like machines reloading their weapons, bodies lubricated by sweat, silently repeating trained motions.

Guns began to overheat, and were automatically discarded, traded for side arms. The mob of people seemed to pick up their pace, getting closer as hot assault rifle after hot assault rifle was replaced by cool, single shot, side arm.

The crowd over took the saw horses first, still falling to bullets, still piling up and being walked over. The wood splintered crushed under the trampling force of the publics will.

Next they overcame the sandbags, which were soon hidden underneath the smashed and bleeding faces, arms, legs and torsos of those who fell while crossing them. Bullets screamed, cutting through air and flesh, destroying.

Finally, as they approached the men dressed in black, whose job it was to protect what was behind them, whose task it was to keep order, while they were still falling to bullets being fired and they over too even them. Black uniform after black uniform, the men were engulfed by the oncoming crowd. One gun after another went silent.

In the end, after hundreds of bodies had been tallied, after the crowd had stormed whatever had been their destination. Men and women were laid into the ground. Those men in black who shot down the oncoming crowd were laid in graves besides those who they shot. Their tombstones shared the same last names as those people from the oncoming crowd that they were laid next to.

In the end, we seek a moral. Yet we may find only chaos.

title: Riot

question: What is the mob angry about?

answer: The mob is angry about unfair laws, wars, and taxes.

text: "The mob is angry about unfair laws, wars, and taxes." - the reason for the march is not clear and the author didn't mention a specific reason for the mob's anger, just a lot of "maybe this and could be that." Add "could be" to the response and revise as necessary, replacing "and" with "or"

refinement: The mob's anger isn't clear but it could be because of unfair laws, wars, taxes, or their sports team won a championship.

answer: It is not stated.

text: This response is correct because all the author can provide are speculative and assumptive reasons for the mob's anger, without a definitive reason. "Maybe it was caused by ever-increasing taxes, it could have been a court judgment that they didn’t agree with, possibly their sports team won a championship. They could have been rebelling against unfair laws, or wars they didn’t agree with. The angry mob of people may have been supporting any cause that could be imagined.

answer: The mob is angry about a variety of things, but the main cause seems to be unfair laws or unfair treatment.

text: "The mob is angry about a variety of things, but the main cause seems to be unfair laws or unfair treatment." - The main cause for the march is not clear and the author didn't mention a specific reason for the mob's anger, just a lot of "maybe this and could be that." Revise the response to reflect this.

refinement: The mob is angry about a variety of things, but it's not clear what the main cause is. It could be unfair laws, unfair treatment, ever-increasing taxes, wars they don't agree with, or even their sports team winning a championship.

answer: It's not clear. The narrator only speculates that they are marching for some sort of perceived moral.

text: This response is correct because all the author can provide are speculative and assumptive reasons for the mob's anger, without a definitive reason. "Maybe it was caused by ever-increasing taxes, it could have been a court judgment that they didn’t agree with, possibly their sports team won a championship. They could have been rebelling against unfair laws, or wars they didn’t agree with. The angry mob of people may have been supporting any cause that could be imagined.

question: Does this story have an antagonist?

answer: There is no clear antagonist, but it may be implied that the rioters/mob are the antagonists due to the chaos they have caused.

text: "but it may be implied that the rioters/mob are the antagonists due to the chaos they have caused." - is speculative and can be deleted.

answer: Yes, the antagonist is the crowd of people.

text: "Yes, the antagonist is the crowd of people." - the story doesn't have a clear antagonist because the roles of the government/soldiers and the rioters could be easily reversed based on the reader's point of view. The answer should have been the story has no clear antagonist.

answer: The story doesn't have an antagonist.

answer: Yes, the antagonist in this story is the angry mob of people who are rebelling against the government. The soldiers who are defending the government are the antagonists' opposition.

text: "Yes, the antagonist in this story is the angry mob of people who are rebelling against the government. The soldiers who are defending the government are the antagonists' opposition." - the story doesn't have a clear antagonist because the roles of the government/soldiers and the rioters could be easily reversed based on the reader's point of view. The answer should have been the story has no clear antagonist.

refinement: Yes, the antagonist in this story is the angry mob of people who are rebelling against the government. The soldiers who are defending the government are the antagonists' opposition.

question: Who is behind the emotionless voice?

answer: The voice that demands that the people halt and disband comes from the armed troops.

text: "The voice that demands that the people halt and disband comes from the armed troops." - doesn't directly answer the question of (who's behind the voice). Revise the answer.

refinement: The voice that demands that the people halt and disband comes from someone inside one of the big, black troop vehicles armored to the teeth.

answer: That information can't be found specifically, but it does belong to a police figure.

text: Add that the police figure is inside one of the armored vehicles.

refinement: That information can't be found specifically, but it does belong to a police figure inside one of the armored vehicles.

answer: The narrator doesn't say.

answer: The speaker is a man.

text: "The speaker is a man." - is inaccurate because the narrator didn't mention anything about the emotionless voice other than the person is speaking from inside one of the armored vehicles. Rewrite this section.

question: What is the most negative event of the story?

answer: The most negative may be the rioters and authorities dying.

answer: The most negative event of the story is the use of deadly force by the men in black.

text: "The most negative event of the story is the use of deadly force by the men in black." - could very well be the answer, but these men and women also died. The most accurate answer would be the death and violence that erupted between the two groups. Revise the response.

refinement: The most negative event of the story is the use of deadly force by the men in black and their subsequent death at the hands of the never-ending mass of rioters.

answer: The most negative event of the story is the shooting of the crowd by the men in black.

text: "The most negative event of the story is the shooting of the crowd by the men in black" - could very well be the answer, but these men and women also died. The most accurate answer would be the death and violence that erupted between the two groups. Revise the response.

refinement: The most negative event of the story is the shooting of the crowd by the men in black and their subsequent death at the hands of the never-ending mass of rioters.

answer: The most negative event of the story is the violence that occurs between the angry mob and the men in black who are trying to protect the monument or building in the story. The violence results in many deaths on both sides.

question: Who are the main characters?

answer: The narrator, the crowd, the men in black

text: The narrator is not a character because he or she is not in the story.

text: "The crowd" - replace with "angry mob"

text: "the men in black" - replace with "the armed troops in black riot gear"

refinement: The angry mob and the armed troops in black riot gear.

answer: There are no specific main characters, but the story revolves around a mob/riot.

text: "There are no specific main characters, but the story revolves around a mob/riot." - while there are no specific named characters, the angry mob and the armed troops can be considered as main characters in the story.

answer: The main characters in this passage are the angry mob of people and the men dressed in black who are tasked with defending the location they are protecting.

answer: The main characters are the people in the crowd and the men in black.

question: What type of weapons are used in this story?

answer: The weapons used in this story are automatic weapons and side arms.

answer: Guns, automatic weapons, and sidearms are mentioned.

answer: Guns

answer: Assault rifles and handguns

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: A large crowd of people march through their city, destroying their own stores and cars, ruining the streets that their tax dollars paid for. They are met by a line of armed troops who order them to stop and disperse. The crowd overcomes the troops and marches on.

text: "people march" - replace with "marches"

refinement: A large crowd of people marches through their city, destroying their own stores and cars, ruining the streets that their tax dollars paid for. They are met by a line of armed troops who order them to stop and disperse. The crowd overcomes the troops and marches on.

answer: The narrator describes the violence and destruction that ensues when a mob of angry rioters takes over their own city. They clash with people of authority and there are casualties on both sides. The narrator suggests they were seeking a moral but only found chaos.

answer: The story is about a group of people who are protesting and the government's response to them.

text: Revise to meet the 3-sentence summary requirement.

refinement: The story is about a group of people who are protesting and the government's response to them. The angry mob of people may have been supporting any cause that could be imagined, yet it didn’t stop the fact that they were marching through their own city, destroying their own stores and their own cars, ruining the streets that their tax dollars paid for. Hundreds of people die from both sides as the mob's sheer numbers overwhelm the armed troops who opened fire on them.

answer: In this story, a large group of people are protesting for a cause, but are met with armed resistance. The protesters are unable to be stopped, and eventually overwhelm the armed guards, resulting in many deaths on both sides.

text: Did not meet the 3-sentence summary requirement. "The protesters are unable to be stopped, and eventually overwhelm the armed guards, resulting in many deaths on both sides." - can be split into two sentences.

refinement: In this story, a large group of people are protesting for a cause, but are met with armed resistance. The protesters are unable to be stopped despite losing massive numbers to gunfire. Eventually, the mob overwhelms the armed guards, resulting in many deaths on both sides.


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_GOD FATHER_ is an Odia feature film and is the second venture of Chaturbhuja Films produced by Jugansu Sekhar Panda. The film is directed by Ramesh Rout. The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar and the dialogue written by Dr. Nirmal Nayak. The film stars Siddhanta Mahapatra, Anu Choudhury and the Bollywood actress Rakhi Sawant in an item number.[1][2][3] The film was released on 1 January 2017. The music was released by Amara Muzik.

Plot

The story revolves around the life of a man who becomes popular in his village by doing good work and working for the people while surrounded by some gangsters who try to ruin his works.

Cast

-   Siddhanta Mahapatra[4]
-   Anu Choudhury[5]
-   Sashreek Samarth Mishra
-   Ananya Mishra
-   Manisha Mishra
-   Daitari Panda
-   Rakhi Sawant as item number “Chuti Kholile”
-   Manoj Mishra

Soundtrack

The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar and released by Amara Muzik.

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title: God Father (2017 film)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What studio made God Father?

answer: Chaturbhuja Films made God Father.

text: "GOD FATHER_ is an Odia feature film and is the second venture of Chaturbhuja Films" is evidence that Chaturbhuja films made the film God Father.

answer: Chaturbhuja Films

text: "GOD FATHER_ is an Odia feature film and is the second venture of Chaturbhuja Films" is evidence that Chaturbhuja films made the film God Father.

answer: Chaturbhuja Films.

text: "GOD FATHER_ is an Odia feature film and is the second venture of Chaturbhuja Films" is evidence that Chaturbhuja films made the film God Father.

answer: Chaturbhuja Films

text: "GOD FATHER_ is an Odia feature film and is the second venture of Chaturbhuja Films" is evidence that Chaturbhuja films made the film God Father.

answer: Chaturbhuja Films made God Father.

text: "GOD FATHER_ is an Odia feature film and is the second venture of Chaturbhuja Films" is evidence that Chaturbhuja films made the film God Father.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was God Father released?

answer: January 1, 2017.

answer: The film God Father was released on 1 January 2017.

answer: 1 January 2017.

answer: God Father was released on 1 January 2017.

answer: January 1, 2017

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who directed God Father?

answer: The film was directed by Ramesh Rout.

answer: Ramesh Rout

answer: God Father was directed by Ramesh Rout.

answer: Ramesh Rout directed God Father.

answer: Ramesh Rout

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the plot of God Father.

answer: A man gains popularity in his village by doing good work for the people while gangsters try to ruin his works.

answer: The story of the film centers around a man who becomes popular in his village by doing good work and working for the people. He is surrounded by some gangsters who try to ruin his works. The film also includes a song sequence with Bollywood actress Rakhi Sawant.

answer: The film is about a man who becomes popular in his village due to his good work, but is surrounded by gangsters who are trying to ruin his work. The story revolves around the man trying to keep everyone on the right path while trying to overcome the gangsters trying to stop him.

text: There is no evidence to support the second sentence.

refinement: The film is about a man who becomes popular in his village due to his good work, but is surrounded by gangsters who are trying to ruin his work.

answer: The story is about a man who becomes popular in his village by doing good work and working for the people while surrounded by some gangsters who try to ruin his works.

answer: The story revolves around the life of a man who becomes popular in his village by doing good work.

text: Does not mention the gangsters.

refinement: The story revolves around the life of a man who becomes popular in his village by doing good work while surrounded by gangsters who try to ruin his works.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

List three actors appearing in the film.

answer: Siddhanta Mahapatra, Anu Choudhury, and Rakhi Sawant.

answer: Siddhanta Mahapatra, Anu Choudhury, and Sashreek Samarth Mishra

answer: Siddhanta Mahapatra, Anu Choudhury, and Rakhi Sawant

answer: Siddhanta Jayaputra, Anu Choudhury, and Sakri Sawant

text: There is no actor named Siddhanta Jayaputra appearing in the film.

refinement: Siddhanta Mahapatra, Anu Choudhury, and Sakri Sawant

text: There is no actor named Sakri Sawant appearing in the film.

refinement: Siddhanta Mahapatra, Anu Choudhury, and Rakhi Sawant

answer: Siddhanta Mahapatra, Anu Choudhury, Rakhi Sawant

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What did Abhijit Majumdar contribute to the film?

answer: Abhijit Majumdar composed the film's soundtrack.

text: "The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar" is evidence that Abhijit Majumdar composed the music for the film.

answer: The music.

text: "The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar" is evidence that Abhijit Majumdar composed the music for the film.

answer: He composed the music for the film.

text: "The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar" is evidence that Abhijit Majumdar composed the music for the film.

answer: He composed the music for the film.

text: "The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar" is evidence that Abhijit Majumdar composed the music for the film.

answer: Abhijit Majumdar composed the music for the film.

text: "The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar" is evidence that Abhijit Majumdar composed the music for the film.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: God Father is a 2017 Odia film made by Chaturbhuja Films and directed by Ramesh Rout. It was released on January 1, 2017 and contains music by Abhijit Majumdar. It is about a man attempting to do good in his village while gangsters interfere with him.

answer: God Father is an Odia feature film directed by Ramesh Rout. It stars Siddhanta Mahapatra and Anu Chaudhury. The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar.

text: Does not list the release year.

refinement: God Father is a 2017 Odia feature film directed by Ramesh Rout. It stars Siddhanta Mahapatra and Anu Chaudhury. The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar.

text: Does not provide an overview of the plot.

refinement: God Father is a 2017 Odia feature film directed by Ramesh Rout. It stars Siddhanta Mahapatra and Anu Chaudhury. The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar. It is about a man attempting to do good in his village while gangsters intefere with him.

answer: GOD FATHER is a Odia feature film following the life of a man who becomes popular in his village by doing good work while surrounded by gangsters that attempt to ruin his work. The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar and the film stars Siddhanta Mahapatra and Anu Choudhury.

text: Does not state the year of the film.

refinement: GOD FATHER is a 2017 Odia feature film following the life of a man who becomes popular in his village by doing good work while surrounded by gangsters that attempt to ruin his work. The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar and the film stars Siddhanta Mahapatra and Anu Choudhury.

text: Does not state the director of the film.

refinement: GOD FATHER is a 2017 Odia feature film directed by Ramesh Rout that follows the life of a man who becomes popular in his village by doing good work while surrounded by gangsters that attempt to ruin his work. The music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar and the film stars Siddhanta Mahapatra and Anu Choudhury.

answer: The Godfather is an Odia feature film and second venture of Chaturbhuja Films. It released in January 2017 and was directed by Ramesh Rout. Its music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar.

text: The title of the film is God Father not The Godfather (which is a vastly different movie).

refinement: God Father is an Odia feature film and second venture of Chaturbhuja Films. It released in January 2017 and was directed by Ramesh Rout. Its music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar.

text: Does not provide an overview of the film's plot.

refinement: God Father is an Odia feature film and second venture of Chaturbhuja Films. It released in January 2017 and was directed by Ramesh Rout. Its music was composed by Abhijit Majumdar. The film follows a man who attempts to do good in his village while gangsters interfere with his efforts.

answer: GOD FATHER is an Odia film about a man who becomes popular in his village by doing good work. However, he must deal with some gangsters who try to ruin his work. The music is composed by Abhijit Majumdar and includes a catchy music number by Bollywood actress Rakhi Sawant.

text: Does not mention the year the film was released.

refinement: GOD FATHER is a 2017 Odia film about a man who becomes popular in his village by doing good work. However, he must deal with some gangsters who try to ruin his work. The music is composed by Abhijit Majumdar and includes a catchy music number by Bollywood actress Rakhi Sawant.

text: Does not mention the director.

refinement: GOD FATHER is a 2017 Odia film directed by Ramesh Rout about a man who becomes popular in his village by doing good work. However, he must deal with some gangsters who try to ruin his work. The music is composed by Abhijit Majumdar and includes a catchy music number by Bollywood actress Rakhi Sawant.


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Saurer 5 DUK
The Saurer 5 DUK is a bus of the Swiss manufacturer  Adolph Saurer AG, from  Arbon.
 History and development
The Saurer  5 DUK is a left-steered bus and PostBus type of the former PTT operations and various regional bus / transport companies in Switzerland.  DUK stands for Diesel-Unterflur-Kompressor (diesel underfloor compressor). At the post office, these Saurer 5 DUKs were used as postbus busses or as postbus busses with a single axle luggage trailer. The Saurer 5 DUK was built from 1953 on.
It has a driver's seat, 39 passenger seats, 33 standing places and a luggage compartment. The luggage compartment is directly behind the rear exit door and has a partition with sliding door with glass panes. There are also seats in the luggage compartment. The passenger compartment is divided in the middle by a partition with a door, because in the past the rear part of the bus was designed as a smoking compartment. With the prohibition of smoking in  public buses only the doors of the smoking compartment were removed, and the rest of the partition remained. For PTT operations, these Saurer 5 DUKs were used as single postbus busses, or as postbus busses with a single axle luggage trailer.
In the Zugerland transport companies ZVB  (German: Zugerland Verkehrsbetrieben), these buses were mainly used on the mountain lines Zug-Ägeri (line 1) and Zug-Menzingen (line 2).
The ZVB buses were also equipped with split dispenser in front of the rear wheels in order to achieve better grip on snow and ice. These are used as pure buses, as buses with the passenger trailer APE 4.80 or with the passenger trailer APE 4.80 and the luggage trailer AGP 3. These trailer were used also  by the successor model, the FBW 91U EU4A.
Without a trailer, a maximum speed of up to 120 km/h would have been possible.
By 1975/76, the Saurer 5 DUK was replaced by more modern vehicles such as the FBW 91U EU4A bus with Hess superstructures.
With the purchase in 1975, together with the orange buses, which were held in VST unit paintwork, additional new ordered APE 4.80 trailers got also the orange paintwork and not the blue one like the Saurer 5 DUK and the older APE 4.80.
Some Saurer 5 DUK were sold to Eastern European countries.
A Saurer 5 DUK of the ZVB is located in the Zug depot technology history (German: Zuger Depot Technikgeschichte).
 Data
 Pictures
File:Saurer 5 DUK ZVB Führerstand.jpg|Cockpit
File :Saurer 5 DUK ZVB Pasagierraum.jpg|Passenger compartment
File :Saurer 5 DUK ZVB Gepäckabteil.jpg|Luggage compartment
File: APE 4 80 Personenanhänger ZVB Seite.jpg|ZVB passenger trailer APE 4.80
File: Gepäckanhänger ZVB.jpg|ZVB luggage trailer AGP 3

title: Saurer 5 DUK

question: When was the bus first made?

answer: The first 5 DUK were manufactured in 1953.

text: Saurer in "Saurer 5 DUK" is omitted.

refinement: The first Saurer 5 DUK were manufactured in 1953.

text: "The Saurer 5 DUK was built from 1953 on" is evidence that the bus was made in 1953.

answer: 1953

text: "The Saurer 5 DUK was built from 1953 on" is evidence that the bus was made in 1953.

answer: The Saurer 5 DUK was built from 1953 on.

question: What was the bus's maximum speed without a trailer?

answer: 120 km/h

answer: 120 km/h

answer: 120 km/h

question: How many passenger seats did the bus contain?

answer: The bus contained 39 passenger seats.

answer: 39

answer: The bus contained 39 passenger seats.

question: Why was there a divider in the middle of the passenger compartment?

answer: The driver's compartment and passenger compartment in the Saurer 5 DUK are divided by partition in order to allow smoking on one side of the bus without affecting passengers on the other. Progressively, this practice was outlawed, and only the door to the smoking compartment was removed, leaving the partition in place.

answer: According to the passage, the divider is probably due to the fact that in the past the rear section of the bus was designated as a smoking section, explaining why there was a divider to keep the smoking and nonsmoking passengers separate.

text: The reason for the divider is confirmed. There is no need for "probably".

refinement: According to the passage, the divider is due to the fact that in the past the rear section of the bus was designated as a smoking section, explaining why there was a divider to keep the smoking and nonsmoking passengers separate.

text: "explaining why there was a divider to keep the smoking and nonsmoking passengers separate" is not necessary.

refinement: According to the passage, the divider is due to the fact that in the past the rear section of the bus was designated as a smoking section.

text: The fact that smoking is no longer allowed is omitted.

refinement: According to the passage, the divider is due to the fact that in the past the rear section of the bus was designated as a smoking section. However, smoking is no longer allowed.

answer: It separated the smoking and non-smoking sections; after smoking on buses was prohibited, the door was removed but most of the divider remained

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: The Saurer 5 DUK is a bus from Arbon, Switzerland. It is currently located in the Zug depot technology history.

text: It is omitted that the bus is of the Swiss manufacturer Adolph Saurer.

refinement: The Saurer 5 DUK is a bus of the Swiss manufacturer Adolph Saurer from Arbon. It is currently located in the Zug depot technology history.

text: "It is currently located in the Zug depot technology history" is less important than the omitted information of when the bus was first manufactured and when it was replaced.

refinement: The Saurer 5 DUK is a bus of the Swiss manufacturer Adolph Saurer from Arbon. It was first built in 1953, and was eventually replaced by more modern buses in 1975/76.

answer: The Saurer 5 DUK was a bus of the Swiss manufacturer Adolph Saurer AG, from Arbon. It was built beginning in 1953, but was replaced by more modern vehicles in 1975/76.

answer: The Saurer 5 DUK is a bus with a bus with a driver's seat, 39 passenger seats, 33 standing places, luggage compartment, and driver's seat. It was built in 1953 and built replaced by other vehicles in 1975, such as the FBW U EU4A bus with Hess superstructures.

text: The details about the interior of the bus are less important than the omitted information that the bus is from the Swiss manufacturer Adolph Saurer AG, from Abon.

refinement: The Saurer 5 DUK is a bus with a bus from the Swiss manufacturer Adolph Saurer AG from Abon. It was built in 1953 and built replaced by other vehicles in 1975, such as the FBW U EU4A bus with Hess superstructures.

text: "Built" should be removed from "built replaced".

refinement: The Saurer 5 DUK is a bus with a bus from the Swiss manufacturer Adolph Saurer AG from Abon. It was built in 1953 and replaced by other vehicles in 1975, such as the FBW U EU4A bus with Hess superstructures.

text: "with a bus" should be omitted.

refinement: The Saurer 5 DUK is a bus from the Swiss manufacturer Adolph Saurer AG from Abon. It was built in 1953 and replaced by other vehicles in 1975, such as the FBW U EU4A bus with Hess superstructures.

answer: The Saurer 5 DUK was a bus manufacturing by the Swiss manufacturer, Adolph Saurer AG. It was built in 1953 and was used by the Swiss authorities for a couple of decades.

text: "manufacturing by" should be replaced with "of"

refinement: The Saurer 5 DUK was a bus of the Swiss manufacturer, Adolph Saurer AG. It was built in 1953 and was used by the Swiss authorities for a couple of decades.

text: The year the bus was replaced is omitted.

refinement: The Saurer 5 DUK was a bus of the Swiss manufacturer, Adolph Saurer AG. It was built in 1953 and was used by the Swiss authorities for a couple of decades until it was replaced by more modern vehicles in 1975/76.

text: There is no mention of Swiss authorities in the text.

refinement: The Saurer 5 DUK was a bus of the Swiss manufacturer, Adolph Saurer AG. It was built in 1953 and was used until it was replaced by more modern vehicles in 1975/76.

answer: This text gives a brief history and description for the purpose of the Saurer 5 DUK bus, which is a vehicle manufactured in 1993 by Swiss company Adolph Saurer AG. It is a bus with 39 passenger seats, 33 standing places, and a luggage compartment.

text: The bus was built in 1953, not 1993.

refinement: This text gives a brief history and description for the purpose of the Saurer 5 DUK bus, which is a vehicle manufactured in 1953 by Swiss company Adolph Saurer AG. It is a bus with 39 passenger seats, 33 standing places, and a luggage compartment.

text: The omitted information of the bus being replaced in 1975/76 is more important than the details of the interior of the bus.

refinement: This text gives a brief history and description for the purpose of the Saurer 5 DUK bus, which is a vehicle manufactured in 1953 by Swiss company Adolph Saurer AG. It was replaced by more modern vehicles in 1975/76.

answer: A saurer 5 DUK is a Swiss left-steered bus with 39 passenger seats, 33 standing places, and a luggage compartment. It was one of the main buses used by former PTT transport companies in Switzerland. The other buses used by that company were FBW 91U EU4A.

text: The details of the interior of the bus are less important than the omitted information that the bus was manufactured in 1953.

refinement: A saurer 5 DUK was first manufactured in 1953. It was one of the main buses used by former PTT transport companies in Switzerland. The other buses used by that company were FBW 91U EU4A.

text: 'A saurer" should be "The Saurer".

refinement: The Saurer 5 DUK was first manufactured in 1953. It was one of the main buses used by former PTT transport companies in Switzerland. The other buses used by that company were FBW 91U EU4A.

text: The manufacturer is omitted.

refinement: The Saurer 5 DUK was first manufactured in 1953 by the Swiss manufacturer Adolph Saurer AG. It was one of the main buses used by former PTT transport companies in Switzerland. The other buses used by that company were FBW 91U EU4A.

text: There is no need for the third sentence.

refinement: The Saurer 5 DUK was first manufactured in 1953 by the Swiss manufacturer Adolph Saurer AG. It was one of the main buses used by former PTT transport companies in Switzerland.

text: The bus being replaced in 1975/76 is omitted.

refinement: The Saurer 5 DUK was first manufactured in 1953 by the Swiss manufacturer Adolph Saurer AG, and was replaced by more modern vehicles in 1975/76. It was one of the main buses used by former PTT transport companies in Switzerland.


text:
NOTE: I haven't been able to come up with a suitable name for the protagonist yet, as you can see. The ten dashes are where his name would appear.

“There were a million chandeliers above and below me.” These were the last words that ---------typed on his hazardously dusty typewriter just before scraping the butt of his cigarette out in the pulpit of his glass ashtray. Apparently he thought these were good words to end on. If I told you why he chose these last words out of all the others that sat so readily in his dictionary, then I may ruin your expectations of Mr. -----------, or maybe I don’t know myself. Perhaps it had something to do with the gleaming horizon that he woke to every morning as he rolled out of bed, peered out of his window, and watched the crystalline strands of orange light melt the cold smoke that pumped out of the cities veins.  Or maybe it had something to do with his neutrality concerning his current professional position at the Chicago tribune as staff journalist.  It was 1:00 a.m.  Around him sat seven glasses of water which had been each been sipped the same amount of times. John cascaded the wheels of his chair across the lumpy laminate wood as he sprawled his body back, staring at his typed words for a few moments thinking about the sporadic manner in which he typed them and what they meant at all. He gently pulled back the cardboard hinge on his pack of Marlboro 27’s, plucked a fresh cigarette out, and brought the Styrofoam stub to his lips. He allowed it to dangle there. ---------- alternated glances between his blotted typewriter paper and his small rectangular alarm clock which rested on a low and chipped maple dresser. After a few minutes had gone by, he put the dangling cigarette back in the box. He loosened the bright yellow tie that hung around his neck, and laid his sore body down on the slightly damp bed leaving a parade of dust in the sky from impact.  It was now 1:30 a.m in Chicago on a Wednesday.  ------- was in no rush.

Every Sunday, him, his six combined brothers and sisters, and his parents would cram into a tiny coastal Rhode Island church to hear about sin, which was a topic -------knew well.  Growing up on the coast of Rhode Island taught him two things: Don’t pray standing up and what the preacher says goes.  Of course, it is possible to pray standing up. It may even be more comfortable than kneeling.  To examine this problem would mean having to reveal a seemingly miniscule and innocuous moment in ---------’s adolescence. I would have to back-peddle through countless erased moments and drunken stupors which have been banned and exiled from ----------’s present psyche. I would have to go back past Charloette Stone’s beach-house, past the silver dollar moon, and, eventually, back to the last dance at ----------’s senior prom, and I simply will not trespass on that exiled box of memories at this current moment.  John lay on his damp bed, staring at the picture of his family sitting in front of a glowing lake, resting at the foothills of familiar mountains. It was the last time he was together with his entire family.  Next to the picture, was a pint of the cheapest whiskey sold in Chicago. He laid on his side for a few moments dissecting the picture waiting for some sort of strong emotional image to come to his mind. It never came.

---------- woke to a screeching noise. Face down on his pillow, he opened his eyes and gazed into the ash wall for a few moments before jumping out of bed and attacking the snooze button on his alarm clock.  After a few more than necessary slaps to the top of his alarm clock, ---------- peered outside of his window, which was the only thing that was clean in the entire apartment, although, most people wouldn’t sum up ---------- apartment with the word: entirely. The words half or almost would be more appropriate. Outside of his window, there were five taxi cabs parked on the street, a corner vendor that would sell hot dogs for less than the normal price to ---------- when he would drunkenly loiter around the corners before dusk and a large fenced park diagonally to his left. The grass in the park looked like somebody had poured mass amounts of yellow cabbage onto the ground. He turned around in disgust and hopped into his half-shower. It was 7:45 a.m on a Thursday.  Time. John Dinka’s alarm clock went off while he was in the shower, like it always does. A plethora of quite imaginative curse words screamed loud enough to wake the inhabitants of the neighboring apartment was usually the selected response from ----------, for now he had to put his shower on hold while he turned the alarm off, which would subtract one minute and thirty seconds from his morning schedule, (and not to mention juice up the heating bill) as he would have to spend an extra minute and thirty seconds washing the conditioner out of his static orange hair. It seemed that ---------- mornings were meticulously planned out, perhaps better than most sane people. ---------- was, of course, sane. His random outbursts of anger, obvious alcoholism, and sociopathic tendencies were just by-products of a world that moves in masses, always forgetting the people similar to him; or, that’s how he would come to see the world, anyways. He chocked all of it up to society like it was trendy.  As a matter of fact, ---------- may have been ahead of the curve because, for the journalist’ at the Chicago Tribune, there was nothing trendier than finding a valid excuse for blaming society. ---------- was completely sane by most people’s standards; he didn’t dare stand out.   ---------- finished tying his solid red tie over a creased burnt marshmallow dress shirt.  He grabbed his keys off the dresser, and walked casually out of his apartment door even though he knew he was a minute and thirty seconds behind schedule.  He led himself down the maroon carpeted stairs, through the bright lobby, and out to his shitty fucking car.

title: Started writing this a while ago. Just reviewed it and adjusted some material. Any criticism would be awesome!

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the main source of tension in the story.

answer: There's is a notable tension between Mr. ---------- and his religious background due to his being articulate, sociopathic and alcoholic, which takes him out of the spiritual framework in which most similar people fell into. He's therefore raised as someone who is just as good as no one else, but supposedly doesn't believe that.

answer: Mr. ----------'s personal details are being typed out by the narrator, but they haven't finalized a name yet. This tension is thickest around his timeworn typewriter, where he is typing the opening of his story, which the reader will read as they keep reading. This tension is compounded by the narrator's inability to tell the readers the central conflict in the story.

text: The actual tension comes from ----------'s religiousness and his actual lifestyle.

refinement: There's is a notable tension between Mr. ---------- and his religious background due to his being articulate, sociopathic and alcoholic, which takes him out of the spiritual framework in which most similar people fell into. He's therefore raised as someone who is just as good as no one else, but supposedly doesn't believe that.

answer: The main source of tension in this story is the anticipation and risk of having a bisexual relationship.

text: The tension comes from ----------'s religious ness and his actual lifestyle.

refinement: There's is a notable tension between Mr. ---------- and his religious background due to his being articulate, sociopathic and alcoholic, which takes him out of the spiritual framework in which most similar people fell into. He's therefore raised as someone who is just as good as no one else, but supposedly doesn't believe that.

answer: The narrator has job and financial problems, and trouble with his writing, feeling pressured to not be boring by critics.

text: The tension comes from ----------'s religiousness and his actual lifestyle.

refinement: There's is a notable tension between Mr. ---------- and his religious background due to his being articulate, sociopathic and alcoholic, which takes him out of the spiritual framework in which most similar people fell into. He's therefore raised as someone who is just as good as no one else, but supposedly doesn't believe that.

answer: The main source of tension in the piece seems to lie in the personality of John as a whole, and specifically relating to his position with having to write text every week. The story underlines the trauma which he is bound to experience having to write about sin should he be a staff journalist for the Chicago Tribune. The piece begins with John typing out his resignation letter; he seems to be suffering a relapse of self-doubt, but is keen to resign. This tension is maintained to a certain extent throughout the narrative; his dismissive attitude and aggressive bouts appearing to be a broken record, as they are recognizable and unexplained. There is a recurring sense of uncertainty, with traumatic incidents appearing throughout the piece. For example, John's family all died in a car accident some time ago, and he no longer sees them, leaving the work and the events of their deaths as a stain, although their actual absence is never resolved.

text: The tension arises between ----------'s religiousness and his actual lifestyle.

refinement: There's is a notable tension between Mr. ---------- and his religious background due to his being articulate, sociopathic and alcoholic, which takes him out of the spiritual framework in which most similar people fell into. He's therefore raised as someone who is just as good as no one else, but supposedly doesn't believe that.

answer: The main source of tension in the piece seems to lie in the unchecked alcoholic symptoms of John that are broken into several small and subtle events throughout the narrative that create dramatic encounters. For example, John's family all died in a car accident some time ago, and he no longer sees them, leaving the work and the events of their deaths as a stain, although their actual absence is never resolved.

text: The tension arises between ----------'s religiousness and his actual lifestyle.

refinement: There's is a notable tension between Mr. ---------- and his religious background due to his being articulate, sociopathic and alcoholic, which takes him out of the spiritual framework in which most similar people fell into. He's therefore raised as someone who is just as good as no one else, but supposedly doesn't believe that.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what might happen if Dinka were to quit drinking.

answer: No answer

answer: Dinka may not want to quit drinking.

text: The story doesn't adequately describe how drinking affects him.

answer: No answer

answer: The author does not think he would change much.

text: The story doesn't adequately describe how drinking affects him.

answer: No answer


text:
If a Shelby farts in the woods, am I still hard?

Shelby. Let’s get going with that bitch.
Oh the dry desert queen. How many tears must I lash on you to make you wet. Lemme sing you a song you cunt. Shelby. Are you listening? It doesn’t matter. This is about me. This is about ME. My love for you doesn’t exist inside you. It exists in magnetic fields surrounding the FUcKING MIDWEST OF AMERICA. MAGNETIC FIELDS. You’re a SIMPLETON Shelby, you don’t even know what that means. Hell, with those golden locks, you don’t need to know up from down, you sexy flooze.
Ahh, the good ol’ days. Remember when I used to go down on you for hours? No? That’s because I didn’t. You weren’t worthy.

…Who am I kidding, I wasn’t worthy. Lemme break down to you right now. (Would Tom Cruise say that to you?)

I love your laugh. I don’t even love it, but I love that you do laugh. I love your fucking smile. When you get too drunk I want to smash your head in. I feel the same way around small dogs that don’t bark loud. Listen bitch. You’re a dime a dozen, but that don’t make you drab. NOT A SCAG SHELBY.

Let me touch your butt, I’m a scientist.

Shelby listen, time’s running out. They’re coming for me soon, and when they come, they’ll drag me back into STEVE. STEEEEEEVEEEE. STEEEEEEEEEEEEEVE. What a spineless cocksucker. I’m gonna take you away one day baby, far away. Somewhere where the weather suits your clothes, and my God, wear a tight red dress. I won’t cum in my pants, I’ve never done that unintentionally.

I’ll never hit you unless you hit me. IF you hit me, I’ll hit you hard in the legs. You got milky legs, I wonder what your moms legs looked like, maybe there are some pictures somewhere. Either way, don’t believe any of this 2012 stuff. I don’t. But, you never know.

Kinda like you never know if we’ll meet again!!!! I can only hope so. Right now I can hear them coming. They want Steve back. They’re gonna get him.

One of these days I’ll show them it’s not okay to play God. I’ll show them I’ve been my own God this whole time, moving mountains with ease and taking no pleasure in things untrue. You’re first class cunt, Shelby. The only reason I called you that name one time was because you deserved it, but you didn’t deserve that other thing. Don’t bring that up ever again.

Anyways, They’re getting closer. MAN it’d be good to touch your ass right now Shelby!
One more thing bitch. When you apologize, you’re a sheep. But unlike the other sleazy sheep shape shifters I encounter everyday, your fur is golden. Pure gold. Ain’t that a bitch?

Keep crying for me, my fragile, ohsobreakable playdoll.

title: Unedited RANT about SHELBY

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe the narrator's mixed feelings for Shelby?

answer: The narrator appears to be bouncing between admiration of Shelby and anger. He loves her smile but would like to smash her head in when she gets drunk. He finds her exciting but then says she's a dime a dozen.

answer: The narrator has a complicated relationship with Shelby. The narrator loves Shelby's laugh, smile, and general appearance, but feels disgusted by her stupidity, and wishes to be rid of her. The main feeling expressed by the narrator is extreme frustration with Shelby and her immaturity.

answer: He alternates between anger and appreciation for Shelby.

answer: While he professes to loving her, he also mentions hating her.

answer: The narrator is both attracted to and frustrated with Shelby. There is also a sense of nostalgia for a past relationship. However, the narrator also negatively views Shelby as gullible, simple-minded, and ordinary. Despite these negative thoughts, the narrator also sees something appealing in Shelby such as her laugh and smile. Overall, the narrator's feelings are mixed.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the narrator mean by they will drag him back into Steve?

answer: The narrator feels outside forces are coming to take him back into a life where they have power over him. This life is represented by Steve.

text: The response contains inaccurate information.

refinement: The narrator feels outside forces are coming to take him back into a life where they have power over him.

answer: It doesn't seem to refer to a real person.

text: The response contains inaccurate information.

refinement: Steve might refer to a real person that the narrator will be brought back to.

answer: It appears that the narrator may be Steve pretending to be someone he is not. He doesn't have much admiration for Steve as he calls him a spineless cocksucker. Clearly, the narrator feels the need to revert to his previous spineless self when the others are with him.

answer: The narrator is referring to some outside force of evil that is coming to try to take control of the narrator away from him. The narrator feels that Steve is spineless and would not put up a fight against the force.

answer: Steve is either a character the narrator is in love with or a person he fears.

text: The response contains inaccurate information.

refinement: Steve might refer to a real person that the narrator will be brought back to.


text:
*Back to the Past*

It was our first journey in the Time Machine.

My companion Susan was at the helm. "Doctor, are we ready to travel back in time?"

"Yes, Susan. How are the biometrics?"

"They are 100%."

"Good. Hit the GO button."

"Roger." Susan hit the GO button and we began moving back in time. I watched as the 2000s, the 1990s, and the 1980s went by. You could see the silhouettes of history and they were beautiful.

"Stop the machine, Susan. I want to witness the Moon Landing."

Susan stopped the machine and veered the craft towards the moon.

There we saw the astronauts loping around the moon. We rolled down the window and laughed at them. "We have a time machine!" Then we rocketed back to Earth to see what chips tasted like with trans fats.

*The Assassination of JFK*

"Susan, we have arrived in Dallas. It is ten minutes until the assassination. We must act fast."

"Right, doctor. Do you have your gun?"

"Yes. Did you bring the soda and crackers?"

"No, doctor. I forgot."

I looked at Susan. "Then the President gets killed. Are you happy? Get in the fucking Time Machine, you twit! We're going back."

*Ewoks*

Susan and I had decided it was time to travel to one of the most famous times of all time: a long, long time ago.

The problem was the galaxy far away part. We had all the coordinates of far away galaxies, but there were just too many.

So, when we got there, we just called the indigenous swamp creatures Ewoks.

Though, they could not sing and dance, they did serve us food.

But the joke was on us. It was Endor and the food was actually Ewoks.

We all had a good laugh.

*The Revolutionary War*

We were back in time once again. It was Susan, my long time companion, and I. We had been dating for several years, but I never took it any farther. I feel that Susan and I do not need a state's blessing to live our lives together. She disagrees. She thinks that it is a covenant between man and woman and that maybe it will curb my "Philandering". This got me angry and I told her so.

Oh, and the Revolutionary War was going on all around us. It was really embarrassing.

*The Future is Yours*

"Susan, how are the biometrics?"

"100%."

"Good. We are going to the future. There is going to be tons of neon, put these glasses on."

Susan put the glasses on and I hit the FUTURE button.

*Deadly Swamp Things*

Susan and I arrived in a lost time. It was a patch of murky soil within a swamp. We stepped out of the time machine.

"Susan, do you see that swamp creature!" I yelled.

"Yes, Dr. Haverly. We must get back inside."

"Wait!" I said. "It could be sentient. Susan, just because something is ugly, does not mean it is not intelligent. Swamp Thing!?"

"Yes?" The swamp thing asked. It looked like a magnificent spider with long octopus tentacles.

"You look like a spider with octopus tentacles - did you know that?"

The Swamp Thing just kinda nodded and pulled out a giant swamp joint.

"See, Susan. He's just a laid back guy."

That's when the Swamp Thing slapped Susan.

*Time Wars!*

My assistant, Susan, and I were once again traveling through time. She was a worthy assistant and helped me to no end in my ventures.

"Susan, how are the biometrics?"

"They are 100%."

"Excellent. I think we will be at our destination soon." We were travelling to Christ-time.

"It will be wonderful to see Jesus in real life."

"Yes." I confirmed. But I was a little worried. The micro processors were giving me some bad readings. I took a look and realized we were headed for trouble. "Susan, there's a Time War up ahead!"

"What's a Time War?" Susan asked.

"It's when many time travelers travel to the same date at the same time. This could get hairy."

I handed her a razor.

*Biometrics*

"Susan, what are our biometrics?"

"They are 100%."

"Good. Can you get me a reading on the time weather we will be passing through on the way to the 1920s?"

"The weather is good. There are a series of time storms that have just passed through the 1930s, so we are OK."

"Glad we're not going to the 1950s." I said jokingly. "Start the time engines."

Susan started the time engines and we headed off to travel in time.

I boned her on the way.

*Susan*

"Susan, how are the biometrics?"

"Not good."

"What's wrong?"

"I'm not sure. They are claiming that you have VD."

"But, how?"

"You tell me. Or - wait, let's go back in time and see what you were doing when I had the flu for a week back in 2013."

"We could do that. Or we could kill Hitler. Which will it be?"

"You do this every time. We've killed him hundreds of times."

"So, you're more important than 8 million people? Is that it?"

"Currently, he's dead."

"Not fifteen minutes before the last time we killed him."

"But it doesn't matter."

"Of course it does - you brought it up."

"I..but..I did?"

I do this to Susan every time she brings up the VD.

*The Twenties*

We stepped outside of the time machine and I pulled my gun. The 1920s are notorious for crime in America and I was pretty sure we were in America.

"Hey, are we in America?" I asked a stranger.

He said nothing. Apparently dogs cannot talk in the 1920s like they can in the 3040s.

But you can still have sex with them.

*The Land That Time Forgot*

After hitting the time machine button the machine began emitting a large electrical current around itself and we were whisked away.

I had forgotten to enter in a date to go to, so it sent us to the default year 9999.

We stepped outside the machine and found an Earth that was unrecognizable. It had two suns and three moons.

And six penises. Man. Time totally forgot about that Earth.

*Dinosaur Disaster*

We arrived in dinosaur times. We looked around and saw dinosaurs. This confirmed: Dinosaur Times.

Our first dinosaur seemed to be a sort of giant crocodile that watched us from afar.

We immediately shot it.

title: [HM] The Time Travelers Who Traveled Through Time!

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What eras do the time travelers go to?

answer: The time travelers visit the prehistoric past, which is either dinosaur times or caveman days, Vietnam War era, 24th century, the revolutionary war, JFK's assassination in 1963, the future, ancient Aztecs, Ewoks, a time of lots of mammoths and pyramids, the American Revolutionary War, the 2000s, the 1980s, president Kennedy's assassination, the 1990s, Vietnam, the Moon's man landing, the end of the Cold War, the Civil War and the Ewoks.

text: Caveman days, Vietnam, ancient Aztecs, a time of mammoths and pyramids, the 24th century, the Cold War, or the Civil War are not mentioned in the text

refinement: The time travelers visit the prehistoric past, which is dinosaur times, the revolutionary war, JFK's assassination in 1963, the future, Ewoks, the American Revolutionary War, the 2000s, the 1980s, president Kennedy's assassination, the 1990s, the Moon's man landing, and the Ewoks.

text: The travelers don't visit the 2000s, 1990s, or 1980s, they just pass by then.

refinement: The time travelers visit the prehistoric past, which is dinosaur times, the revolutionary war, JFK's assassination in 1963, the future, Ewoks, the American Revolutionary War, president Kennedy's assassination, the Moon's man landing, and the Ewoks.

text: "Ewoks" isn't a time period. That refers to "a long, long time ago"

refinement: The time travelers visit the prehistoric past, which is dinosaur times, the revolutionary war, JFK's assassination in 1963, the future, a long time ago to see Ewoks, the American Revolutionary War, president Kennedy's assassination, the Moon's man landing.

text: The revolutionary war is repeated twice.

refinement: The time travelers visit the prehistoric past, which is dinosaur times, JFK's assassination in 1963, the future, a long time ago to see Ewoks, the American Revolutionary War, president Kennedy's assassination, the Moon's man landing.

text: "President" needs to start with a capital letter. "Man" in "Moon's man landing" is extraneous.

refinement: The time travelers visit the prehistoric past, which is dinosaur times, JFK's assassination in 1963, the future, a long time ago to see Ewoks, the American Revolutionary War, President Kennedy's assassination, the Moon landing.

text: Kennedy's assassination is repeated twice.

refinement: The time travelers visit the prehistoric past, which is dinosaur times, the future, a long time ago to see Ewoks, the American Revolutionary War, President Kennedy's assassination, the Moon landing.

text: The answer omits that the travelers visit the 1920s and the year 9999.

refinement: The time travelers visit the prehistoric past, which is dinosaur times, the future, a long time ago to see Ewoks, the American Revolutionary War, President Kennedy's assassination, the Moon landing, the 1920s, and the year 9999.

answer: The 1940s, the 1960s, the 1980s, the 1990s, the 2000s, the Moon Landing, the Revolutionary War, the future, the past, dinosaur times, and the Land That Time Forgot.

text: The travelers don't go to the 1940s, 1960s, 1980s, 90s, and 2000s. They specifically visit the JFK assassination.

refinement: The Moon Landing, JFK assassination, the Revolutionary War, the future, the past, dinosaur times, and the Land That Time Forgot.

text: The answer omits the 1920s, "a long, long time ago" and the time of Christ. It also should mention that the Land That Time Forgot refers to the year 9999.

refinement: The Moon Landing, JFK assassination, the Revolutionary War, the 1920s, a long time ago to see the Ewoks, the time of Christ, the future, the past, dinosaur times, and the Land That Time Forgot in the year 9999.

text: "the future, the past" are too vague to be useful.

refinement: The Moon Landing, JFK assassination, the Revolutionary War, the 1920s, a long time ago to see the Ewoks, the time of Christ, dinosaur times, and the Land That Time Forgot in the year 9999.

answer: The dating goes backwards before going forward. They go to the future and the distant past. However, there's a time-traveling war ahead so their travel is interrupted if not delayed. They resolve to kill Hitler despite their grand annoyance of this. The assassination of JFK occurs in the 20th century and then they travel to prehistoric times. Then there's the Revolutionary War.

text: The answer is very confusing and incoherent.

text: The answer is empty.

refinement: They visit the moon landing, JFK's assassination, a long time ago to see the Ewoks, the Revolutionary War, Christ's period, the 1920s, and the year 9999.

answer: The time travelers visit the following eras: prehistoric past, Aztec era, the Vietnam War era, the Moon's man landing, Vietnam War, Ewoks, the 24th century, the Spanish Inquisition, a dead time, dinosaur times, the Kennedy Assassination, the Aztec Empire, Vietnam, a "dead time," the invention of the mechanical cotton gin, the end of the Cold War, the Civil War, the 21st century, and the Medieval times.

answer: They primarily go to the future and the distant past. Though there's a war up ahead they resolve to kill Hitler despite their grand annoyance of this. The dating goes backwards before going forward. There's the Moon Landing, the Assassination of JFK, the dinosaurs, the Revolutionary War. However, there's a time-traveling war up ahead so their travel is interrupted if not delayed. They resolve to kill Hitler despite their grand annoyance of this. There are two other dates the narrator mentions including The Twenties, and The Land That Time Forgot. The Twenties mention is interrupted by a pointed final sentence involving a woman, but the others occur in the future.

answer: The time travelers go to the future, the Moon Landing, the Revolutionary War, the Ewoks, the time of Jesus, and dinosaur times.

text: The answer omits the 1920s, JFK assassination, the lost time, and the year 9999.

refinement: The time travelers go to the future, the Moon Landing, the Revolutionary War, the Ewoks, the time of Jesus, the 1920s, JFK assassination, a lost time, the year 9999, and dinosaur times.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What style is the story written in?

answer: It is written in a sarcastic, humorous style.

answer: The story consists of humorous and campy pop culture references along with whimsical narration and imagery, with dramatic diologue.

answer:
The story has the format of a short story with its three sections, each with its own narrative voice. They can be summarized as follows:

The first section tells the story of a couple, Dr. Haverly and Susan, who go back to the past in a time machine. They go back as a quip when they are on their way to the moon landing. They arrive at one of the most famous times -- a long, long time ago -- Ewoks. They have a good time and decide to head back eventually without the need to change history. Another instance is when they send one back only to find an old ruin. They like to settle in the past.

The second section depicts the couple's arguments over the Doctor's philandering. They have been dating for

text: The answer fails to address the question for the most part. It should just state that the story is written in a whimsical and humorous way.

answer: It is written in a humorous style.

answer:
The story has the format of a short story with its three sections, each with its own narrative voice. They can be summarized as follows:

The first section tells the story of a couple, Dr. Haverly and Susan, who go back to the past in a time machine. They go back as a quip when they are on their way to the moon landing. They arrive at one of the most famous times -- a long, long time ago -- Ewoks. They have a good time and decide to head back eventually without the need to change history. Another instance is when they send one back only to find an old ruin. They like to settle in the past.

The second section depicts the couple's arguments over the Doctor's philandering. They have been dating for several years, but have not married. In fact, they have a third wheel -- the time machine, which they use to travel to and fro. The Doctor is ridiculed by Susan. She brings up VD and the Doctor teaches her a new trick: Fuck the Future (hence the title).

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What different fandoms does the story draw on?

answer: The story draws on the genres of science fiction and time travel.

text: The "doctor and his assistant travel through time" is a Doctor Who trope. Ewoks refer to Star Wars. The answer could mention these.

refinement: The story draws on the genres of science fiction and time travel. Specifically, the "doctor and his assistant travel through time" is a Doctor Who trope, and the Ewoks refer to Star Wars.

answer: It has the potential to be three kinds of Dinosaur stories: Jurassic Park, standalone Dinosaur stories, and Jurassic Park fanfiction. Then Ewoks (from Star Wars), superheroes, and Star Wars.

text: Apart from Star Wars, everything else in the answer is false.

text: The answer omits that the story is a "Doctor Who" type of affair. Also, its genre is science fiction or time travel.

refinement: Star Wars and Doctor Who fans are directly appealed to. The general fandom would be science fiction and time travel.

answer: Time travel, Star Wars: Episode IV - A New Hope, Ewoks from Star Wars, Back to the Future series, Star Wars franchise, Terminator franchise, Doctor Who

text: A New Hope is oddly specific and false.

refinement: Time travel, Ewoks from Star Wars, Back to the Future series, Star Wars franchise, Terminator franchise, Doctor Who

text: Star Wars is repeated twice

refinement: Time travel, Back to the Future series, Star Wars franchise, Terminator franchise, Doctor Who

text: There doesn't seem to be an obvious reference to the Terminator franchise.

refinement: Time travel, Back to the Future series, Star Wars franchise, Doctor Who

answer: It has the potential to be three kinds of Dinosaur stories: Jurassic Park, Ewoks (from Star Wars), and standalone Dinosaur stories.

answer: It seems to be a Star Wars fanfic.

text: The "doctor and his assistant travel through time" is a "Doctor Who" trope, not Star Wars.

text: The story makes references to several popular franchises, which the answer omits.

refinement: It seems to be a Doctor Who fanfic. There are references to Back to the Futures series and Star Wars too.

answer: Time travel, Star Wars: Episode IV - A New Hope and Ewoks, Star Wars franchise, Terminator franchise, Back to the Future franchise


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_TIRATHABA CYCLOPHORA_ is a species of moth of the family Pyralidae.[1][2] It was described by George Hampson in 1917. It is found in New Guinea.[3][4]

The wingspan is about 34 mm. The forewings are pale purplish red irrorated (sprinkled) with blackish and with a minute annulus incompletely defined by black scales in the middle of the cell and a more complete discoidal annulus. There are traces of a diffused dark postmedial line, oblique to vein 5, then inwardly oblique and somewhat dentate. There are also traces of a curved dark subterminal line and there is a terminal series of black bars. The hindwings are ochreous yellow tinged with brown except on the inner area. There is a slight brown terminal line.[5]

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[2] “_Tirathaba_ Walker, 1864” at Markku Savela's _Lepidoptera and Some Other Life Forms_. Retrieved June 11, 2017.

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[5] _Novitates Zoologicae_ 24 : 41

title: Tirathaba cyclophora

question: What is Tirathaba Cyclophora?

answer: A species of moth of the family Pyralidae.

text: _TIRATHABA CYCLOPHORA_ is a species of moth of the family Pyralidae.[1][2]

answer: Tirathaba Cyclophora is a species of moth.

text: _TIRATHABA CYCLOPHORA_ is a species of moth of the family Pyralidae.[1][2]

answer: Tirathaba Cyclophora is a species of moth of the family Pyralidae found in New Guinea.

text: _TIRATHABA CYCLOPHORA_ is a species of moth of the family Pyralidae.[1][2]

answer: Tirathaba Cyclophora is a species of moth of the family Pyralidae.

text: _TIRATHABA CYCLOPHORA_ is a species of moth of the family Pyralidae.[1][2]

question: Who described Tirathaba Cyclophora?

answer: George Hampson

text: It was described by George Hampson in 1917.

answer: George Hampson described Tirathaba Cyclophora in 1917.

text: It was described by George Hampson in 1917.

answer: George Hampson described Tirathaba Cyclophora.

text: It was described by George Hampson in 1917.

answer: George Hampson described Tirathaba Cyclophora in 1917.

text: It was described by George Hampson in 1917.

question: Describe Tirathaba Cyclophora's appearance.

answer: Tirathaba Cyclophora is a moth with pale purplish red wings that are sprinkled with black. There is a small annulus in the middle of the cell and a more complete discoidal annulus, as well as a postmedial line and a terminal series of black bars. The hindwings are ochreous yellow tinged with brown.

answer: The wingspan is about 34 mm. The forewings are pale purplish red irrorated with blackish and with a minute annulus incompletely defined by black scales in the middle of the cell and a more complete discoidal annulus. There are traces of a diffused dark postmedial line, oblique to vein 5, then inwardly oblique and somewhat dentate. There are also traces of a curved dark subterminal line and there is a terminal series of black bars. The hindwings are ochreous yellow tinged with brown except on the inner area. There is a slight brown terminal line.

answer: Tirathaba Cyclophora is a species of moth of the family Pyralidae. It has a pale purplish red irrorated (sprinkled) with blackish color. It has a minute annulus incompletely defined by black scales in the middle of the cell and a more complete discoidal annulus. There are traces of a diffused dark postmedial line, oblique to vein 5, then inwardly oblique and somewhat dentate. There are also traces of a curved dark subterminal line and there is a terminal series of black bars. The hindwings are ochreous yellow tinged with brown except on the inner area. There is a slight brown terminal line.

answer: The wingspan of Tirathaba Cyclophora is about 34 mm and their forewings are pale purplish red irrorated with blackish. The hindwings are ochreous yellow tinged with brown except on the inner area.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: The Tirathaba cyclophora is a species of moth found in New Guinea. The wings are purplish red with black markings, and the forewings have a small incomplete annulus near the center and a more complete discoidal annulus. The hindwings are yellowish tinged with brown, and there is a brown terminal line.

answer: Tirathaba Cyclophora is a species of moth of the family Pyralidae. It was described by George Hampson in 1917. It is found in New Guinea. The wingspan is about 34 mm.

answer:
Tirathaba Cyclophora is a species of moth of the family Pyralidae. It's found in New Guinea and has a wingspan of 34 mm. They were first described by George Hampson in 1917.

Their forewings are pale purplish red irrorated with blackish while the hindwings are ochreous yellow tinged with brown except on the inner area.

answer: The Tirathaba cyclophora is a species of moth of the family Pyralidae. It is found in New Guinea. The wingspan is about 34mm. The forewings are pale purplish red irrorated with blackish and with a minute annulus incompletely defined by black scales in the middle of the cell and a more complete discoidal annulus. There are traces of a diffused dark postmedial line, oblique to vein 5, then inwardly oblique and somewhat dentate. There are also traces of a curved dark subterminal line and there is a terminal series of black bars. The hindwings are ochreous yellow tinged with brown except on the inner area. There is a slight brown terminal line.

text: This isn't four sentences or fewer, per the instructions in the question.

refinement: The Tirathaba cyclophora is a species of moth of the family Pyralidae. It is found in New Guinea. The wingspan is about 34mm. The forewings are pale purplish red irrorated with blackish and with a minute annulus incompletely defined by black scales in the middle of the cell and a more complete discoidal annulus.


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_ANOTHER DAY IN THE DEATH OF AMERICA: A CHRONICLE OF TEN SHORT LIVES_ is a 2016 non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge. The book focuses on the stories of 10 American children and teenagers, ranging from the ages of 9 to 19, killed by gun violence within a 24-hour time period on November 23, 2013.[1][2][3][4][5][6][7][8][9][10][11] The book follows the lives and deaths of Jaiden Dixon,[12] Kenneth Mills-Tucker,[13] Stanley Taylor,[14] Pedro Cortez,[15] Tyler Dunn,[16] Edwin Rajo,[17] Samuel Brightmon,[18] Tyshon Anderson,[19][20] Gary Anderson,[21] and Gustin Hinnant.[22]

Younge explores how the deaths are “normal” by American standards—in that none of the stories made national news—but not “normal” by civilized standards. The book was published by Nation Books.

Film Adaptation

David Oyelowo is set to star in the film adaptation of the book.[23] Currently, there is no release date on the film.

Reception

Writing for The Guardian, Gillian Slovo wrote in her review, “The stories that Younge has uncovered are often sensational but he tells them without hyperbole and accompanies them with an analysis that lays bare the reality of being black and poor in America”.[24] Slovo finishes her review by writing, “Despite the composure of his writing, there is passion in Younge’s condemnation of a system that renders the poor and the dark in America invisible. In illuminating the stories of some of these people and of their communities, Younge has provided us with a beautifully told and empathic account that wrenches at the heart even as it continues to engage the brain.”[25]

[1] Theintercept.com

[2] The New York Times

[3] The Guardian

[4] The Guardian

[5] Ft.com

[6] The Root

[7] Entertainment Weekly

[8] Kirkus Reviews

[9] Lse.ac.uk

[10] Spectator.co.uk

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[23] The Guardian

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title: Another Day in the Death of America

question: What is Another Day in the Death of America: A Chronicle of Ten Short Lives?

answer: A 2016 non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge.

text: Perhaps a bit short on facts

refinement: A 2016 non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge that focuses on the stories of 10 American children and teenagers, ranging from the ages of 9 to 19, killed by gun violence within a 24-hour time period

text: ANOTHER DAY IN THE DEATH OF AMERICA: A CHRONICLE OF TEN SHORT LIVES_ is a 2016 non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge.

answer: Another Day in the Death of America is a non-fiction book that focuses on ten American children and teenagers killed by gun violence within a 24-hour period.

text: The author's name should be mentioned

refinement: Another Day in the Death of America is a non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge that focuses on ten American children and teenagers killed by gun violence within a 24-hour period.

text: ANOTHER DAY IN THE DEATH OF AMERICA: A CHRONICLE OF TEN SHORT LIVES_

text: is a 2016 non-fiction book

text: The book focuses on the stories of 10 American children and teenagers, ranging from the ages of 9 to 19, killed by gun violence within a 24-hour time period

answer: Another Day in the Death of America is a 2016 non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge. The book focuses on the stories of 10 American children and teenagers, ranging from the ages of 9 to 19, killed by gun violence within a 24-hour time period on November 23, 2013.

text: _ANOTHER DAY IN THE DEATH OF AMERICA: A CHRONICLE OF TEN SHORT LIVES_ is a 2016 non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge. The book focuses on the stories of 10 American children and teenagers, ranging from the ages of 9 to 19, killed by gun violence within a 24-hour time period on November 23, 2013

answer: a 2016 non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge which chronicles the deaths of ten African-American children and teenagers between the ages of 9 and 19

text: _ANOTHER DAY IN THE DEATH OF AMERICA: A CHRONICLE OF TEN SHORT LIVES_ is a 2016 non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge. The book focuses on the stories of 10 American children and teenagers, ranging from the ages of 9 to 19, killed by gun violence

text: an analysis that lays bare the reality of being black and poor in America”

question: When will the film adaptation for Another Day in the Death of America: A Chronicle of Ten Short Lives going to be released?

answer: there is no release date on the film

text: Currently, there is no release date on the film.

answer: There is no release date for the film adaptation.

text: Currently, there is no release date on the film.

answer: There is currently no release date set for the film adaptation of the book.

text: Currently, there is no release date on the film.

answer: There is no release date for the film adaptation of the book.

text: Currently, there is no release date on the film.

question: Who is David Oyelowo?

answer: David Oyelowo is an actor who is set to star in the film adaptation of "Another Day in the Death of America".

text: David Oyelowo is set to star in the film adaptation of the book.

answer: David Oyelowo is a British actor who is set to star in the film adaptation of the book.

text: The information about the actor's nationality does no appear in the piece

refinement: David Oyelowo is a British actor who is set to star in the film adaptation of the book.

text: David Oyelowo is set to star in the film adaptation of the book.

answer: the article does not answer this question

text: The article does answer the question

refinement: David Oyelowo is an actor who is set to star in the film adaptation of the book

answer: David Oyelowo is an actor.

text: The answer misses the point and fails to answer the question completely

refinement: David Oyelowo is an actor who is set to star in the film adaptation of the book.

question: Who is Gary Younge?

answer: He is a British journalist and writer.

text: British journalist and writer Gary Younge

answer: a British journalist and writer

text: British journalist and writer Gary Younge

answer: Gary Younge is the author of "Another Day in the Death of America", a non-fiction book that focuses on the stories of 10 American children and teenagers killed by gun violence within a 24-hour time period.

text: _ANOTHER DAY IN THE DEATH OF AMERICA: A CHRONICLE OF TEN SHORT LIVES_ is a 2016 non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge. The book focuses on the stories of 10 American children and teenagers, ranging from the ages of 9 to 19, killed by gun violence within a 24-hour time period

answer: Gary Younge is a British journalist and writer.

text: British journalist and writer Gary Younge

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: This article is about a book by Gary Younge, Another Day in the Death of America: A Chronicle of Ten Short Lives, which focuses on the stories of 10 American children and teenagers killed by gun violence within a 24-hour time period on November 23, 2013.

text: Clumsy language

refinement: Another Day in the Death of America: A Chronicle of Ten Short Lives, written by Gary Younge in 2016 focuses on the stories of 10 American children and teenagers killed by guns over 24-hours.

answer: Another Day in the Death of America is a non-fiction book that explores ten stories of American children and teenagers killed by gun violence within a 24-hour period.

text: The language is a bit clumsy

refinement: Another Day in the Death of America is a 2016 non-fiction book written by Gary Younge that explores the lives of ten American children and teenagers killed by guns over 24-hours.

answer: Another Day in the Death of America: A Chronicle of Ten Short Lives is a 2016 non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge which chronicles the deaths of ten African-American children and teenagers between the ages of 9 and 19.

answer: Another Day in the Death of America is a 2016 non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge. The book focuses on the stories of 10 American children and teenagers, ranging from the ages of 9 to 19, killed by gun violence within a 24-hour time period on November 23, 2013.

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refinement: Another Day in the Death of America is a 2016 non-fiction book by the British journalist and writer Gary Younge. The book focuses on the stories of 10 American children and teenagers, ranging from the ages of 9 to 19, killed by gun violence within a 24-hour time period on November 23, 2013.