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Special Council Mueller (pictured) has subpoenaed over 12 people who were already willingly working with him.

Maybe if Special Counsel Robert Mueller interviews everyone in America, at that point, he will understand that President Donald Trump was guilty of no shenanigans with Russia. So far, a probe into the campaign’s Paul Manafort has revealed that he is/was potentially a very shady businessman. While he does need to be tried for his crimes, now that it seems that some may exist, isn’t it true that if virtually _any_ person was probed enough in their life that _something_ less than flattering would be found?

NOTHING pertaining to Russia in relation to Trump has been uncovered. This was supposed to be about Russia, not everything that someone who worked with the Commander in Chief ever did wrong. CNBC reports that Special Council Robert Mueller “_shocked_” the White House by “_issuing a subpoena to more than a dozen officials despite the campaign’s voluntary compliance with his probe_.”

In other words, even though those connected to America’s leader have already stated that they have nothing to hide and are talking willfully, they were issued subpoena’s as if the facts said otherwise. This paints a picture in the public eye that someone is being dishonest and blemishes Trump by proxy even though he and his people are cooperating.

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This whole probe is driven by hatred for Trump, not an honest quest for justice.

The Wall Street Journal confirms that issuing the subpoenas was the “_first official order_” for getting information from those involved. Not one of those subpoenaed “_compelled to testify before a grand jury._”

The Journal also said, “_Sending a subpoena to an entity that says it has been cooperating with document requests isn’t unusual in cases in which prosecutors have some concern that their demands aren’t being met promptly or aren’t being entirely fulfilled_.”

While that may be the case, can even a raging, pink-hat adorning Democrat name even _one_ Trump associate that hasn’t asked how high when told to jump? Most likely not because _there hasn’t been any!_

The water gets muddied because we have three facts at play which all gets tangled in people’s heads as they read about all of this. To start with, Russia _did_ spy and try to meddle in U.S. elections. Putin’s nation even used Facebook to plant pro-Hillary ads where they could be seen easily, as the Conservative Daily Post has shown.

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If Paul Manafort (pictured) is guilty of questionable business deals unrelated to Trump, how does that show collusion with Russia?

Second of all, because the DNC crafted a dossier full of untruths and rumors in order to slander Trump (and hired a former British spy named Christopher Steele to do it), many in the public think that the White House colluded with Russia to win the election. There is no basis anywhere in reality for this fairytale, and yet it exists thanks to Clinton. That is why her name is still on G.O.P. tongues a year after her defeat.

Lastly, the government is using this “_witch hunt_” to find dirt on everyone in a probe that is supposed to be about Russia, not about every sin that someone being probed may ever have committed.

Those who are being probed seem guilty of some crimes and perhaps they are, but these crimes have nothing more to do with the election than they do about how to fly to the moon.

Those are the cold, hard facts.

Source: CNBC – The Wall Street Journal– The Conservative Daily Post

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question: How many people have Special Counsel Mueller subpoenaed so far?

answer: 12 people.

text: According to the article, the Special Counsel Mueller subpoenaed over 12 people.

answer: According to the passage, Special Counsel Mueller has subpoenaed over 12 people.

answer: 12

text: According to the passage, Special Counsel Mueller subpoenaed over 12 people.

answer: Twelve people.

text: According to the passage, Special Counsel Mueller subpoenaed over 12 people.

question: Why does the narrator thinks is driving the Mueller probe?

answer: The narrator believes that the Mueller probe is driven by hatred for Trump.

answer: Hatred for Trump.

answer: Hatred for President Donald Trump.

answer: The narrator believes that the Mueller probe is driven by hatred for President Trump, not an honest quest for justice. The narrator believes that the probe is being used to find dirt on anyone connected to Trump, even if they have nothing to do with Russia or the election.

question: What is the narrator's view about the subpoenas being issued to those working closely with President Trump?

answer: The narrator believes that the subpoenas are part of a "witch hunt" against President Trump, and that they are being issued out of hatred rather than a desire for justice.

answer: The narrator thinks that the subpoenas are issued to those working closely with President Trump because of hatred for Trump.

answer: The narrator believes that the subpoenas were issued because the Special Council is trying to find dirt on everyone in the probe.

answer: The narrator views the subpoenas as unnecessary, especially since those concerned have already promised their full cooperation.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: Special Council Mueller has subpoenaed over 12 people who were already willingly working with him. This is the first time Mueller has subpoenaed anyone, and it is unclear what the subpoena is for.

text: There is no evidence or mention of the subpoena being Mueller's first. Secondly, the reason for the subpoena is stated.

refinement: Special Counsel Mueller has subpoenaed over 12 people who were already willingly working with him regarding Russia's meddling in the 2016 U.S. election. However, some believe that the probe is motivated by a hatred for President Donald Trump and not a desire for justice. Also, it is believed that the subpoena is a witch hunt to find dirt on everyone in a probe relating to Russia.

text: Counsel is wrongly spelled as 'council.'

refinement: Special Counsel Mueller has subpoenaed over 12 people who were already willingly working with him regarding Russia's involvement in the 2016 U.S. election. However, some believe that the probe is motivated by a hatred for President Donald Trump and not a desire for justice. Also, it is believed that the subpoena is a witch hunt to find dirt on everyone in a probe relating to Russia.

text: The summary is less than three sentences.

refinement: Special Counsel Mueller has subpoenaed over 12 people who were already willingly working with him regarding Russia's involvement in the 2016 U.S. election. However, some believe that the probe is motivated by a hatred for President Donald Trump and not a desire for justice. Also, it is believed that the subpoena is a witch hunt to find dirt on everyone in a probe relating to Russia.

answer:
The narrator is sceptical of Special Counsel Robert Mueller's need to subpoena those working for President Trump, especially as they have already indicated their willingness to cooperate.

The narrator points to Manafort's conviction, saying that though he (Manafort) seems to be a shady businessman, it doesn't still prove anythg about Trump's collusion with Russia. The narrator believes the trial is a witchhunt, a ploy to bring down Trump because of Democrat's hatred of him.

text:
'Anything' is wrongly spelled as '...anythg...'
Skeptical is also wrongly spelled as 'sceptical'

refinement:
The narrator is skeptical of Special Counsel Robert Mueller's need to subpoena those working for President Trump, especially as they have already indicated their willingness to cooperate.

The narrator points to Manafort's conviction, saying that though he (Manafort) seems to be a shady businessman, it doesn't still prove anything about Trump's collusion with Russia. The narrator believes the trial is a witchhunt, a ploy to bring down Trump because of Democrat's hatred of him.

answer: The Special Counsel Robert Mueller has subpoenaed over a dozen people who were already cooperating with him in his investigation into Russia's meddling in the 2016 U.S. election. However, some believe that the probe is motivated by a hatred for President Donald Trump, and not a desire for justice.

text: The summary is less than three sentences and should include extra necessary points.

refinement: The Special Counsel Robert Mueller has subpoenaed over a dozen people who were already cooperating with him to investigate Russia's meddling in the 2016 U.S. election. However, some believe that the probe is motivated by a hatred for President Donald Trump and not a desire for justice. Lastly, the narrator also believes the subpoena is a witch hunt to find dirt on everyone in a probe relating to Russia.

answer: Special Counsel Robert Mueller has subpoenaed over 12 people who were already willingly working with him. The people being probed seem guilty of some crimes, but these crimes have nothing to do with the election. The water gets muddied because there are three facts at play which all gets tangled in people's heads as they read about all of this.

text: '...The water gets muddied because there are three facts at play which all gets tangled in people's heads as they read about all of this.' does not flow with the summary.

refinement: Special Counsel Robert Mueller has subpoenaed over 12 people who were already willingly working with him. Although people being probed seem guilty of some crimes, these crimes have nothing to do with the election. However, some believe that the probe is motivated by a hatred for President Donald Trump and not a desire for justice.


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Dr Bobby Smyth, consultant child and adolescent psychiatrist in south Dublin said spiralling levels of cannabis use had now led to a growth in drug debts, ultimately leading to suicide in a small number of cases.

Dr Smyth said the most significant change was the usage of cannabis and the associated change in the way it is sold.

He said it was now not uncommon for people to smoke up to €50 worth of cannabis a day — a spend comparable to someone with a heroin addiction.

However, cannabis dealers are allowing clients to build up debts of hundreds of euro, which they then struggle to pay, often leading to the debt increasing while usage continues.

“They are spending the sort of money on cannabis now that we would associate with heroin four or five years ago.

“It means you can end up with debt of a few hundred [euro] and it can build to a few thousand.”

That brings intimidation and threats of physical violence, which Dr Smyth said can cause “huge distress”.

“Everyone is struggling to know what to do about it. The guards cannot act unless someone names the individual threatening them.

“There have been a number of suicides that have occurred in parts of Dublin I deal with that have been linked back to cannabis,” he said. “I am hearing it anecdotally but I am hearing it anecdotally from different sources and related to different suicides,” he said.

“I am seeing people who are acutely distressed about cannabis and the issues around it.”

He said that in addition to difficulties with drug use, drug debts and the threats associated with that often lead to stress and therefore further usage, as many users have a “limited range of coping skills” and also feel guilty for involving their parents in helping them pay the debts.

“That issue of indebtedness is part of the reason people are coming for treatment.”

He said it was not limited to Dublin and was instead a national problem — a view echoed by the Aislinn Centre in Co Kilkenny which provides treatment programmes for adolescents abusing drugs.

Breda Cahill, general manager at the Aislinn Centre in Ballyragget, said the average age of clients presenting to their service for problematic cannabis use was now 16.

She said: “We would have noticed a lot of families and a lot of parents with a lot of debt to pay.

“Parents are sometimes not aware that the debt is there until it’s far too late.”

Dr Smyth said the weed being smoked was more potent than hitherto and was now the main form of cannabis available.

He also said that some people had gone to social workers over the threats being made regarding drug debts and in some cases families had been relocated.

question: Who is Dr. Bobby Smyth?

answer: He is a consultant child and adolescent psychiatrist in south Dublin.

answer: Dr. Bobby Smyth is a consultant child and adolescent psychiatrist in south Dublin.

answer: Dr. Bobby Smyth is a consultant child and adolescent psychiatrist in south Dublin. He says that spiralling levels of cannabis use have led to a growth in drug debts, ultimately leading to suicide in a small number of cases.

answer: a consultant child and adolescent psychiatrist in south Dublin

question: What is Dr. Smyth's evidence for linking cannabis and suicide?

answer: Dr. Smyth's evidence for linking cannabis and suicide is that he is hearing it anecdotally from different sources and related to different suicides.

text: “There have been a number of suicides that have occurred in parts of Dublin I deal with that have been linked back to cannabis,” he said. “I am hearing it anecdotally but I am hearing it anecdotally from different sources and related to different suicides,” he said.

answer: personal anecdotes from different areas of Dublin

text: “There have been a number of suicides that have occurred in parts of Dublin I deal with that have been linked back to cannabis,” he said. “I am hearing it anecdotally but I am hearing it anecdotally from different sources and related to different suicides,” he said.

answer: Dr. Smyth says that he has heard anecdotally from different sources that there have been suicides in parts of Dublin that have been linked back to cannabis use.

text: “There have been a number of suicides that have occurred in parts of Dublin I deal with that have been linked back to cannabis,” he said. “I am hearing it anecdotally but I am hearing it anecdotally from different sources and related to different suicides,” he said.

answer: He says he is hearing it anecdotally from different sources and related to different suicides.

text: “There have been a number of suicides that have occurred in parts of Dublin I deal with that have been linked back to cannabis,” he said. “I am hearing it anecdotally but I am hearing it anecdotally from different sources and related to different suicides,” he said.

question: What is the Aislinn Centre?

answer: The Aislinn Centre is a treatment program for adolescents abusing drugs.

text: He said it was not limited to Dublin and was instead a national problem — a view echoed by the Aislinn Centre in Co Kilkenny which provides treatment programmes for adolescents abusing drugs.

answer: The Aislinn Center is located in Co Kilkenny and provides treatment programmes for adolescents abusing drugs.

text: He said it was not limited to Dublin and was instead a national problem — a view echoed by the Aislinn Centre in Co Kilkenny which provides treatment programmes for adolescents abusing drugs.

answer: The Aislinn Centre is a treatment program for adolescents who are abusing drugs, including cannabis.

text: He said it was not limited to Dublin and was instead a national problem — a view echoed by the Aislinn Centre in Co Kilkenny which provides treatment programmes for adolescents abusing drugs.

answer: The Aislinn Centre is a treatment program for adolescents abusing drugs.

text: He said it was not limited to Dublin and was instead a national problem — a view echoed by the Aislinn Centre in Co Kilkenny which provides treatment programmes for adolescents abusing drugs.

question: What is the average age of Aislinn Centre clients presenting to their service for problematic cannabis use?

answer: 16

answer: The average age of Aislinn Centre clients presenting for problematic cannabis use is 16 years old.

answer: The average age of Aislinn Centre clients presenting to their service for problematic cannabis use is 16.

answer: 16

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: According to Dr. Bobby Smyth, consultant child and adolescent psychiatrist in south Dublin, spiralling levels of cannabis use have led to a growth in drug debts, which can sometimes lead to suicide.

answer: The article documents increases in cannabis use and drug-related debt in Ireland.

answer: The article discusses the increase in cannabis use and the associated increase in drug debts and the subsequent suicides that have occurred.

answer: Dr Bobby Smyth, consultant child and adolescent psychiatrist in south Dublin, said spiralling levels of cannabis use had now led to a growth in drug debts, ultimately leading to suicide in a small number of cases.


text:
Good morning beautiful, what a wonderful day outside its been. Oh how the trees sway and the children play. To feel the wind upon my face, instead of this warm embrace. Life is so wonderful here with you, to show its true, I keep staring deep into those eyes I get lost in the mask you see. If it wasn't such an imposition maybe we could host an intervention for this hour glass is slipping...

"No one ever tells you that forever looks like home inside your head"

The paintings on the walls are nice, they hide the fist shape holes inside. I erect a statue, a Picasso of sorts to express all that I am. Even Hellen Keller could tell its not quite right but you love it anyway the same way you do when the kids bring a drawing home for the fridge.  So we put on the mantle next to the urn, proudly for all to witness. Such a life so great as this only comes once in awhile. Our song fills this place, the echoing grows louder throughout this house even from the floorboards. As the breeze starts to grow and the house goes the way of Jericho.

The green grass rolls on for miles wind in my face now longing for her embrace.  Isn't it a good morning, beautiful?

title: Good Morning Beautiful

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is the author addressing as "beautiful?"

answer: The author is addressing someone as beautiful. Likely, this someone is someone close and dear to the author.

answer: The woman is addressed as "beautiful."

text: This answer is incorrect because we do not know if there is a woman involved, that is only an assumption.

refinement: It can be assumed that the author's lover is addressed as "beautiful."

answer: The text doesn't say but mildly implies it may be the author's lover.

answer: This information is not given.

answer: The author is addressing someone whom they consider beautiful.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How does Hellen Keller fit into this text?

answer: It's not exactly clear how the author incorporates this character, but the author mentions how Keller wouldn't be able to see that the furnace room is nothing special.

answer: Something is so obvious to the author that even she could see it (she was blind.)

answer: Hellen Keller is written into the text as an inspiration for endurance in difficult circumstances. The author uses her as a metaphor for how their shared home is not perfect, but they love and cherish it anyway.

answer: The speaker references Helen Keller as an object lesson for the beauty of everyday life. The speaker acknowledges that life is difficult, but views this as a way to create strong work and meaningful relationships. Helen Keller's accomplishments in spite of her disabilities show that life is worth living even when it is difficult.

answer: It doesn't appear she does.

text: This response is not correct and needs to be re-written.

refinement: Hellen Keller is written into the text as an inspiration for endurance in difficult circumstances. The author uses her as a metaphor for how their shared home is not perfect, but they love and cherish it anyway.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Is this text the lyrics to a song?

answer: No, it is stream of consciousness with insight into the author's life.

answer: Can't say for sure but it seems like it is.

answer: Yes.

text: More detail needs to be added to this response, something along the lines of "an assumption can be made that this text is the lyrics to a song."

refinement: An assumption can be made that this text is the lyrics to a song.

answer: Yes

text: This response needs to be refined because it does not fully answer the question and is not fully accurate.

refinement: An assumption can be made that this text is the lyrics to a song.

answer: Yes, this text seems to be the lyrics to a song.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does "the house goes the way of Jericho" mean?

answer: Not answered.

answer: The phrase refers to the dissolution of an entity to nothingness or near-nothingness. In this case, the house is losing power and being swept away by the wind.

answer: It doesn't make sense in the context; it may be a mistake. It may mean that the house is getting old.

answer: In the text, a breeze grows, and "the house goes the way of Jericho" seems to be another way to say that it falls down as a result (like the ancient city).

answer: Using the context of the passage, "the house goes the way of Jericho" means to fall into decay. The house becomes run down and worn down, mirroring a comparison to the ancient city of Jericho that was eventually destroyed.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: The narrator says "good morning, beautiful" to the person he cares about and contemplates the beauty of living. In this other place, there are paintings, a Picasso, and wind, and the narrator misses the person's embrace.

answer: The narrator expresses his joy and amazement at being with his beautiful partner on a beautiful morning. He feels that life is wonderful with her by his side and embraces the sunlight and trees, swept away by the breeze.

answer: The narrator sings a song to their "beautiful" lover. The song's narrator seems to long for someone else.

text: This response is incorrect and needs to be re-written.

refinement: The narrator expresses his joy and amazement at being with his beautiful partner on a beautiful morning. He feels that life is wonderful with her by his side and embraces the sunlight and trees, swept away by the breeze.

answer: This poem reflects on the beauty of the morning and how wonderful it can feel to wake up beside someone you love. The narrator marvels at the way the trees sing in the wind, and how even in despair there is beauty and hope. The morning reminds the narrator how wonderful life can be.

answer: This text seems like it could be song lyrics addressed from one lover to another. There is some kind of appreciation woven into the lyrics from the author to the person addressed as "beautiful."


text:
I own a binder filled with over 100 documentary, propaganda, and theatrical films about Nazi Germany and the holocaust. Most are very depressing. I’ve sat through the marathon film _Shoah_ twice, not the most pleasant way to spend nine consecutive hours. I’ve seen almost every American and European-made Holocaust and Nazi-related movie from start to finish that I can find (except _The Grey Zone_, which was too depressing even for me). I’m morbidly obsessed with this horrid period where the malignancy of Hitlerism ravaged a continent and, as Marina Willer noted during a recent screening of her brilliant new documentary _Red Trees_, “interrupted” peoples’ lives simply for the crime of being born Jewish.

I admit that I am somewhat seduced by Nazi visual effects—the regalia, public spectaculars, and militaristic hypnotics. This yin and yang of evil deed and powerful design wreaks havoc with my emotions. I watch the films in my binder as a way to be close to yet separated from this wretchedness. But Willer’s _Red Trees_ is nothing like other holocaust material I’ve ever seen. It will be interesting to see, at this moment in history with ultra-right nationalism on the rise, whether her film will alter the way the holocaust is perceived by a new generation.

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Alfred Willer, Prague 2015

A graphic designer and partner at Pentagram in London, Willer, who was born in Brazil where her father took haven after surviving Nazi occupied Prague, has written and directed an intensely personal document—and a gorgeously moving and tenderly filmed cinematic work based on her father Alfred’s vivid remembrances about his family’s survival when most Jewish families in Prague perished.

At a recent screening introduced by Michael Bierut in the QUAD Cinema (newly designed by Paula Scher), Willers noted that for a long time she wanted to tell her father’s story without resorting to the familiar documentary clichés of the Holocaust. Apologizing for what she called the contemplative nature of the film, it was clear she wanted her film to examine her father’s soul as well as his experience. This was accomplished through a compassionate narration by the late British actor Tim Pigot-Smith speaking her father’s words, interspersed with actual clips of her father’s own voice, and additional dialog by her brother, young children, and herself, who appear in frequent cameos. The exquisite cinematography of contemporary landscapes and seascapes, streets, and buildings further removed any resemblance to the common holocaust genre.

A sprinkling throughout the film of vintage snapshots of Alfred as a child and young man, as well as those of his handsome father, a chemist who invented the formula for citric acid that we use today in food as a preservative, anchors the story in its time. There are striking shots of abandoned ruins of Czech factories made of concrete with curiously human features, like a Golem, where Alfred Willer’s father worked. There was one in particular of an abandoned “cloak room” in a factory where rubber boots, helmets, and overalls hung like cadavers from the ceiling that added a touch of the surreal. Yet with the exception of a scene showing the empty cell blocks of the infamous “model” KZ or Concentration Camp Terezin, there are none of the usual evidentiary images of KZ horrors, or portraits of Reinhard Heydrich (“the Butcher of Prague”) or of Hitler.

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Koksovny Factory, Outskirts of Prague
Willer claimed in her opening remarks that people are not interested in seeing these clichés (which I call Nazi porn) any longer. To do justice to her father, and the other survivors of Nazi oppression, savage depictions of German atrocities are no longer as impactful as they once were. In its subtle genius, Willer’s _Red Trees_ (an allusion to the fact that her father is color blind) changes the tenor of the holocaust narrative from an unimaginable, and therefore dismissible, act of evil into a singularly human, redemptive experience. Rather than focus on the obvious tragedy, Willer traces her father’s Prague and post-Prague life as an architect in Sao Paolo, Brazil, where he raised and inspired his children to become creative people, and immeasurably contributed wisdom and love to his grandchildren.

_Red Trees_ is not what you’d call a happy film, but it is uplifting. And through its direction, writing, cinematography, and music it sheds light on how survival is not just about escaping misfortune, but realizing how important it is to appreciate the joy of living.

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Mayrau Factory, Outskirts of Prague

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize how the author feels about Nazi and Holocaust related things.

answer: The author owns a binder filled with over 100 documentary, propaganda, and theatrical films about Nazi Germany and the holocaust. The author has seen almost every American and European-made Holocaust and Nazi-related movie from start to finish. The author is fascinated by Nazi visual effects, the regalia, public spectaculars, and militaristic hypnotics. The author watches these films in their binder as a way to be close to yet separated from the wretchedness. The author is drawn to the films because they are morbidly obsessed with this horrid period where the malignancy of Hitlerism ravaged a continent. The author finds the films depressing.

answer: The author is interested in Nazi and Holocaust related things, and owns a binder with over 100 documentaries, propaganda, and theatrical films about it. They are also morbidly obsessed with the period. The author admits that they are seduced by the visual effects of the Nazi era. The author watches the films in their binder as a way to be close to the evil deeds, yet be separated from them. The author describes the holocaust genre as being familiar, and that people are not interested in seeing these clichés. The author believes that Willer's film will help change the way the holocaust is perceived by a new generation.

answer: The author owns a binder that has over 100 film documentaries, documentaries, and theatrical films about Nazi Germany and holocaust. They find it depressing. They've seen almost every American and European Holocaust film available to them except for The Grey Zone, which was too depressing. They believe that these films document the pain in excruciating detail, but they are unwilling to see anything from the Nazi side. The author seems to have a fascination with Nazi visual effects. They enjoy watching these films as they can escape the misery while still being close to it. When Willer releases Red Trees, the author plans to see it and hopes that it will have a favorable impact on how its audience perceive the holocaust.

text: This isn't a general thought about Nazi related things and the Holocaust. IT would be better to omit.

refinement: The author owns a binder that has over 100 film documentaries, documentaries, and theatrical films about Nazi Germany and holocaust. They find it depressing. They've seen almost every American and European Holocaust film available to them except for The Grey Zone, which was too depressing. They believe that these films document the pain in excruciating detail, but they are unwilling to see anything from the Nazi side. The author seems to have a fascination with Nazi visual effects. They enjoy watching these films as they can escape the misery while still being close to it.

text: The author does not say this. It should be omitted.

refinement: The author owns a binder that has over 100 film documentaries, documentaries, and theatrical films about Nazi Germany and holocaust. They find it depressing. They've seen almost every American and European Holocaust film available to them except for The Grey Zone, which was too depressing. The author seems to have a fascination with Nazi visual effects. They enjoy watching these films as they can escape the misery while still being close to it.

text: It's omitted that the author is morbidly obsessed with the Holocaust era.

refinement: The author owns a binder that has over 100 film documentaries, documentaries, and theatrical films about Nazi Germany and holocaust. They find it depressing, but are morbidly obsessed with the Holocaust era. They've seen almost every American and European Holocaust film available to them except for The Grey Zone, which was too depressing. The author seems to have a fascination with Nazi visual effects. They enjoy watching these films as they can escape the misery while still being close to it.

answer: The author owns a book of over 100 German and Holocaust related media, and they thoroughly enjoy watching them. They are somewhat fascist, as the narrator describes their enjoyment for the Nazi visually effects. The narrator finds Holocausts boring, and this stops them from finishing the book. At first the narrator seems to find the movies in the binder interesting, but they may find them depressing. The narrator dabbles in Nazi sides even through somewhat plastic displays of Nazism, but is not totally for it.

text: This is false. The author is not fascist, and doesn't find the era boring.

refinement: The author owns a book of over 100 German and Holocaust related media, and they thoroughly enjoy watching them. At first the narrator seems to find the movies in the binder interesting, but they may find them depressing. The narrator dabbles in Nazi sides even through somewhat plastic displays of Nazism, but is not totally for it.

text: This is false and should be omitted.

refinement: The author owns a book of over 100 German and Holocaust related media, and they thoroughly enjoy watching them. At first the narrator seems to find the movies in the binder interesting, but they may find them depressing.

text: "At first" and "may" should be omitted. They alter the meaning of the sentence in a way that's inaccurate.

refinement: The author owns a book of over 100 German and Holocaust related media, and they thoroughly enjoy watching them. The narrator seems to find the movies in the binder interesting, but they find some of them depressing.

text: The majority of the author's thoughts are missing.

refinement: The author owns a book of over 100 German and Holocaust related media, and they thoroughly enjoy watching them. The narrator seems to find the movies in the binder interesting, but they find some of them depressing. The author has seen almost every American and European-made Holocaust and Nazi-related movie from start to finish. The author is fascinated by Nazi visual effects, the regalia, public spectaculars, and militaristic hypnotics. The author watches these films in their binder as a way to be close to yet separated from the wretchedness. The author is drawn to the films because they are morbidly obsessed with this horrid period where the malignancy of Hitlerism ravaged a continent.

answer: The author owns a binder filled with over 100 documentary, propaganda, and theatrical films about Nazi Germany and the holocaust. The author has seen almost every American and European-made Holocaust and Nazi-related movie from start to finish. The author is fascinated by Nazi visual effects, the regalia, public spectaculars, and militaristic hypnotics. The author watches these films in their binder as a way to be close to yet separated from the wretchedness. The author is drawn to the films because they are morbidly obsessed with this horrid period where the malignancy of Hitlerism ravaged a continent. The author is seduced by Nazi visual effects.

text: This is redundant as it's stated that he was fascinated by their visual effects above.

refinement: The author owns a binder filled with over 100 documentary, propaganda, and theatrical films about Nazi Germany and the holocaust. The author has seen almost every American and European-made Holocaust and Nazi-related movie from start to finish. The author is fascinated by Nazi visual effects, the regalia, public spectaculars, and militaristic hypnotics. The author watches these films in their binder as a way to be close to yet separated from the wretchedness. The author is drawn to the films because they are morbidly obsessed with this horrid period where the malignancy of Hitlerism ravaged a continent.

text: He finds most Holocaust films to be depressing.

refinement: The author owns a binder filled with over 100 documentary, propaganda, and theatrical films about Nazi Germany and the holocaust, finding most to be depressing. The author has seen almost every American and European-made Holocaust and Nazi-related movie from start to finish. The author is fascinated by Nazi visual effects, the regalia, public spectaculars, and militaristic hypnotics. The author watches these films in their binder as a way to be close to yet separated from the wretchedness. The author is drawn to the films because they are morbidly obsessed with this horrid period where the malignancy of Hitlerism ravaged a continent.

answer: The author also doesn't like the depressing content.

text: This doesn't answer the question and inaccurate.

text: Blank response

refinement: The author owns a binder filled with over 100 documentary, propaganda, and theatrical films about Nazi Germany and the holocaust, finding most to be depressing. The author has seen almost every American and European-made Holocaust and Nazi-related movie from start to finish. The author is fascinated by Nazi visual effects, the regalia, public spectaculars, and militaristic hypnotics. The author watches these films in their binder as a way to be close to yet separated from the wretchedness. The author is drawn to the films because they are morbidly obsessed with this horrid period where the malignancy of Hitlerism ravaged a continent.

answer: The author is interested in Nazi and Holocaust related things, and owns a binder with over 100 documentaries, propaganda, and theatrical films about it. They are also morbidly obsessed with the period. The author admits that they are seduced by the visual effects of the Nazi era. The author watches the films in their binder as a way to be close to the evil deeds, yet be separated from them. The author describes the holocaust genre as being familiar, and that people are not interested in seeing these clichés.

text: These are Willer's thoughts. This should be omitted.

refinement: The author is interested in Nazi and Holocaust related things, and owns a binder with over 100 documentaries, propaganda, and theatrical films about it. They are also morbidly obsessed with the period. The author admits that they are seduced by the visual effects of the Nazi era. The author watches the films in their binder as a way to be close to the evil deeds, yet be separated from them.

text: It's omitted that he finds most of the media he has to be depressing.

refinement: The author is interested in Nazi and Holocaust related things, and owns a binder with over 100 documentaries, propaganda, and theatrical films about it. He finds most to be depressing. They are also morbidly obsessed with the period. The author admits that they are seduced by the visual effects of the Nazi era. The author watches the films in their binder as a way to be close to the evil deeds, yet be separated from them.

text: It's omitted the author has seen almost every American and European-made Holocaust and Nazi related movie from start to  finish.

refinement: The author is interested in Nazi and Holocaust related things, and owns a binder with over 100 documentaries, propaganda, and theatrical films about it. He finds most to be depressing, but has seen almost every American and European-made Holocaust and Nazi related movie from start to  finish. They are also morbidly obsessed with the period. The author admits that they are seduced by the visual effects of the Nazi era. The author watches the films in their binder as a way to be close to the evil deeds, yet be separated from them.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize how the author feels about Red Trees.

answer: The author seems to be fascinated by the Nazi visual effects. They do not like the depressing nature of the films. They are interested to see how the film will alter the way the holocaust is perceived by a new generation.

text: This is the author's general opinion on Holocaust materials, not Red Trees. Omit this.

refinement: They are interested to see how the film will alter the way the holocaust is perceived by a new generation.

text: The majority of the author's feelings on Red Trees is missing.

refinement: The author states that the film is not what you'd call a happy film, but it is uplifting and features exquisite cinematography. It changes the tenor of the holocaust narrative from an unimaginable and therefore dismissible act of evil into a singularly human and redemptive experience. The author feels the film sheds light on how survival means appreciating life, and is interested to see how the film will alter the way the holocaust is perceived by a new generation. He thinks Red Trees is nothing like any other Holocaust material he's seen before.

answer: The author is very excited about Red Trees. They are interested in seeing how a new generation of viewers will perceive this film. The author calls the film a gorgeously moving and tenderly filmed cinematic work. The film is not what you'd call a happy film, but it is uplifting.

text: It's omitted the author believes Red Trees is nothing like other holocaust material he's seen before.

refinement: The author is very excited about Red Trees, and believes it's nothing like other holocaust material he's seen before. They are interested in seeing how a new generation of viewers will perceive this film. The author calls the film a gorgeously moving and tenderly filmed cinematic work. The film is not what you'd call a happy film, but it is uplifting.

text: It's omitted the author believes Red Trees changes the tenor of the Holocaust narrative into a singularly human, redemptive experience.

refinement: The author is very excited about Red Trees, and believes it's nothing like other holocaust material he's seen before. They are interested in seeing how a new generation of viewers will perceive this film. The author calls the film a gorgeously moving and tenderly filmed cinematic work. Red Trees changes the tenor of the Holocaust narrative into a singularly human, redemptive experience. The film is not what you'd call a happy film, but it is uplifting.

text: It's omitted that he believes the film highlights how survival is also about realizing how important is to appreciate the joy of living.

refinement: The author is very excited about Red Trees, and believes it's nothing like other holocaust material he's seen before. They are interested in seeing how a new generation of viewers will perceive this film. The author calls the film a gorgeously moving and tenderly filmed cinematic work. Red Trees changes the tenor of the Holocaust narrative into a singularly human, redemptive experience. The film is not what you'd call a happy film, but it is uplifting. The film highlights how survival is also about realizing how important it is to appreciate the joy of living.

answer: The author states that the film is not what you'd call a happy film, but it is uplifting. It changes the tenor of the holocaust narrative from an unimaginable and therefore dismissible act of evil into a singularly human and redemptive experience. The author feels the film sheds light on how survival means appreciating life.

text: IT's omitted that the author thinks Red Trees is nothing like any other Holocaust material he's seen before.

refinement: The author states that the film is not what you'd call a happy film, but it is uplifting. It changes the tenor of the holocaust narrative from an unimaginable and therefore dismissible act of evil into a singularly human and redemptive experience. The author feels the film sheds light on how survival means appreciating life. He thinks Red Trees is nothing like any other Holocaust material he's seen before.

text: It's omitted he finds the cinematography exquisite.

refinement: The author states that the film is not what you'd call a happy film, but it is uplifting and features exquisite cinematography. It changes the tenor of the holocaust narrative from an unimaginable and therefore dismissible act of evil into a singularly human and redemptive experience. The author feels the film sheds light on how survival means appreciating life. He thinks Red Trees is nothing like any other Holocaust material he's seen before.

text: It's omitted the author is curious how her film will alter the way the Holocaust is perceived by a new generation.

refinement: The author states that the film is not what you'd call a happy film, but it is uplifting and features exquisite cinematography. It changes the tenor of the holocaust narrative from an unimaginable and therefore dismissible act of evil into a singularly human and redemptive experience. The author feels the film sheds light on how survival means appreciating life. He's also curious how her film will alter the way the Holocaust is perceived by a new generation. He thinks Red Trees is nothing like any other Holocaust material he's seen before.

answer: They state that they are interested in Nazi visual effects and admit to being seduced by them. They note that Red Trees is nothing like other holocaust films they have seen, and it would be interesting to see how it influences anyone's new perception of the Holocaust. Willer claimed that people aren't as interested in the typical documentary clichés, and Red Trees changes the tenor of the holocaust narrative. While it isn't happy, it's uplifting. They think it sheds light on how survival is more than just running from misfortune, and it's equally important to appreciate the joy of living.

text: This is Willer's opinion, not the author. Omit this.

refinement: They state that they are interested in Nazi visual effects and admit to being seduced by them. They note that Red Trees is nothing like other holocaust films they have seen, and it would be interesting to see how it influences anyone's new perception of the Holocaust. Red Trees changes the tenor of the holocaust narrative. While it isn't happy, it's uplifting. They think it sheds light on how survival is more than just running from misfortune, and it's equally important to appreciate the joy of living.

text: Specify that the tenor is changed to a redemptive experience.

refinement: They state that they are interested in Nazi visual effects and admit to being seduced by them. They note that Red Trees is nothing like other holocaust films they have seen, and it would be interesting to see how it influences anyone's new perception of the Holocaust. Red Trees changes the tenor of the holocaust narrative into a redemptive experience. While it isn't happy, it's uplifting. They think it sheds light on how survival is more than just running from misfortune, and it's equally important to appreciate the joy of living.

text: It's omitted that the author finds the cinematography to be exquisite.

refinement: They state that they are interested in Nazi visual effects and admit to being seduced by them. They note that Red Trees is nothing like other holocaust films they have seen, and it would be interesting to see how it influences anyone's new perception of the Holocaust. Red Trees changes the tenor of the holocaust narrative into a redemptive experience. While it isn't happy, it's uplifting. They think it sheds light on how survival is more than just running from misfortune, and it's equally important to appreciate the joy of living. Additionally, they find the cinematography exquisite.

text: This is a general opinion of the author, not about Red Trees. Omit this.

refinement: They note that Red Trees is nothing like other holocaust films they have seen, and it would be interesting to see how it influences anyone's new perception of the Holocaust. Red Trees changes the tenor of the holocaust narrative into a redemptive experience. While it isn't happy, it's uplifting. They think it sheds light on how survival is more than just running from misfortune, and it's equally important to appreciate the joy of living. Additionally, they find the cinematography exquisite.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to Willer's intent in making her film.

answer: Willer claims that people are not interested in seeing Nazi porn in documentaries; she was not interested in depicting the Catholic Nazi ceremony referred to as "boss's funeral". She wanted her film to examine her father's soul and his experience, which she claims is no longer as impactful in regards to German atrocities. She is aware that this film is uplifting but not happy and wants to shed light on how survival is important.

text: There is no mention of "boss's funeral" in the text. Willer only says people aren't interested in seeing savage depictions of German atrocities.

refinement: Willer claims that people are not interested in seeing Holocaust clichés in documentaries. She wanted her film to examine her father's soul and his experience, which she claims is no longer as impactful in regards to German atrocities. She is aware that this film is uplifting but not happy and wants to shed light on how survival is important.

text: Willer says depictions of German atrocities aren't as impactful as they once were, so she needs to do justice to her father and other survivors of Nazi oppression.

refinement: Willer claims that people are not interested in seeing Holocaust clichés in documentaries. She wanted her film to examine her father's soul and his experience. Depictions of German atrocities aren't as impactful as they once were, so she needs to do justice to her father and other survivors of Nazi oppression. She is aware that this film is uplifting but not happy and wants to shed light on how survival is important.

text: This is the author's opinion, not Willer's. It should be omitted.

refinement: Willer claims that people are not interested in seeing Holocaust clichés in documentaries. She wanted her film to examine her father's soul and his experience. Depictions of German atrocities aren't as impactful as they once were, so she needs to do justice to her father and other survivors of Nazi oppression.

text: It's omitted Willer has wanted to tell her father's story for a long time.

refinement: Willer has wanted to tell her father's story for a long time without falling into the cliches of the Holocaust. She claims that people are not interested in seeing Holocaust clichés in documentaries. She wanted her film to examine her father's soul and his experience. Depictions of German atrocities aren't as impactful as they once were, so she needs to do justice to her father and other survivors of Nazi oppression.

answer: Willer says people are not interested in seeing Nazi atrocities as they used to be. She wants to show that people trying to rebuild their lives after surviving a shameful things like wartime genocide.

text: Willer did not say this is her intent. It should be omitted.

refinement: Willer says people are not interested in seeing Nazi atrocities as they used to be.

text: The majority of Willer's intent is omitted.

refinement: Willer wanted to tell her father's story without resorting to the familiar documentary clichés of the Holocaust. She wanted her film to examine her father's soul as well as his experience. She wanted to do justice to her father and the other survivors of Nazi oppression without savage depictions of German atrocities, as Willer says people are not interested in seeing Nazi atrocities as they used to be.

answer: Willer wanted to tell her father's story without resorting to the familiar documentary clichés of the Holocaust. She wanted to examine her father's soul as well as his experience. To do justice to her father, and the other survivors of Nazi oppression, savage depictions of German atrocities are no longer as impactful as they once were. Willer's film changes the tenor of the holocaust narrative from an unimaginable, and therefore dismissible, act of evil into a singularly human, redemptive experience.

text: This is the author's opinion, not Willer's stated intent. This should be omitted.

refinement: Willer wanted to tell her father's story without resorting to the familiar documentary clichés of the Holocaust. She wanted to examine her father's soul as well as his experience. To do justice to her father, and the other survivors of Nazi oppression, savage depictions of German atrocities are no longer as impactful as they once were.

answer: Willer wanted to tell her father's story without resorting to the familiar documentary clichés of the Holocaust. She wanted her film to examine her father's soul as well as his experience. She wanted to do justice to her father and the other survivors of Nazi oppression. She wanted to change the tenor of the holocaust narrative from an unimaginable, and therefore dismissible, act of evil into a singularly human, redemptive experience.

text: This is the author's opinion, not Willer's stated intent. This should be omitted.

refinement: Willer wanted to tell her father's story without resorting to the familiar documentary clichés of the Holocaust. She wanted her film to examine her father's soul as well as his experience. She wanted to do justice to her father and the other survivors of Nazi oppression.

text: Explain that to do justice, savage depictions of German atrocities are no longer as impactful as they once were.

refinement: Willer wanted to tell her father's story without resorting to the familiar documentary clichés of the Holocaust. She wanted her film to examine her father's soul as well as his experience. She wanted to do justice to her father and the other survivors of Nazi oppression without savage depictions of German atrocities, as they are no longer as impactful as they once were.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Marina Willer's childhood?

answer: Marina Willer was born in Brazil where her father took haven after surviving Nazi occupied Prague.

text: It's omitted she was raised by her father to be a creative person alongside her siblings.

refinement: Marina Willer was born in Brazil where her father took haven after surviving Nazi occupied Prague. She was raised by her father to be a creative person alongside her siblings.

answer: No answer

text: There is an answer in the text.

refinement: Willer was born in Brazil where her father took haven after surviving Nazi occupied Prague. She was raised by her father to be a creative person alongside her siblings.

answer: No answer

text: There is an answer in the text.

refinement: Willer was born in Brazil where her father took haven after surviving Nazi occupied Prague. She was raised by her father to be a creative person alongside her siblings.

answer: Willer was born in Brazil where her father took haven after surviving Nazi occupied Prague.

text: It's omitted she was raised by her father to be a creative person alongside her siblings.

refinement: Willer was born in Brazil where her father took haven after surviving Nazi occupied Prague. She was raised by her father to be a creative person alongside her siblings.

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

answer: No answer


text:
Yeah, I believe in Karma...sorta, but I never did anything or even thought up anything in my head that was bad enough to explain the punishment and imprisonment that I have had to endure for the past however long. I’m blessed though, I know I am. My mom and dad love me a lot... a lot. I know that since I disappeared, they probably have been raising hell everywhere, seriously everywhere. I feel bad for my dad, cause I know that mom must have pulled his leg so that he’d fork out the money needed to put my picture into their church bulletin. I’m sure he reluctantly succumbed to doing so, as rational as he his, knowing that no kidnapper would be kneeling amongst them on Saturday evenings, and that the 20, 50 or however many bucks they spent broadcasting it would ultimately be a waste, but I bet in the end he didn’t mind, cause he figured that it would give my mom a piece of mind. Thinking about it, I agree with Dad. I’m not sure what I would do if I were to be in their position...it’s tough.

The last day we I had with them wasn’t especially memorable. I was visiting my parents, I remember waking up and being real cranky about the breakfast that had been prepared prior to my waking... I hated when we only had carby options. Personally, I like bacon, ham, eggs...and Mom knows that!!  But, for some reason, that morning she just popped some eggos in the toaster and laid out some jam, butter and syrup on the counter.... along with fruit, obviously. I didn’t hide my disgust. I wish I did.

I wish Andrew (my boyfriend) had been there that day. At least I would have had an ally ...someone to side with me regarding the ultimate superiority of protein breakfasts! MMM... eggs benedict, lamb omelets, over-easy eggs, scrambled eggs, bacon, canadian bacon (or even turkey bacon!)peanut butter shakes... whatever ... nom nom nom! Sorry, I diverge... I do that a lot. I typically get lost on tangents... i keep getting farther and farther off topic, until I don’t even really remember what my point was. At least writing things down gives me some idea.

I get interrupted a lot, too. Like I said earlier, life’s no peach for me. I live in a cellar, or close to one. It’s dimensions are guesstimably 9 x 9... yeah I know it could be worse, but it definitely could be better. I have one window, which is COMPLETELY barred I have nothing but a bed, with a single sheet and one pillow (minus pillow case). When I have to pee, shower, poo or any of the sort ... I have to yell for someone... I am then escorted to the potty room - where magic happens. I am allowed a pencil and a pad, but only when I have a guard watching over me. Its unbelievable.... I have never been the suicidal type, I just don’t get it. Aside from the guard... I am provided with a nurse, a reader/teacher, a feeder (my fav), a counselor and an observer/creeper (referring to the person I sometimes see peering in on me while I sleep).

I’m not a dumb girl. I’ve worked in different hospitals, I know what prison is like and I have a pretty good idea what a mental institution would be like... but where I am kept is completely different. I also know that I am not a test subject. Someone kidnapped me. Someone rich enough to hire a staff to “look after me.” Days, nights, weeks, months .... everything has been just fading together. I don’t know what he wants from me..... the boss. I know he is the one who kidnapped me, though he’s never admitted it. But, he still comes in every now and again to chit-chat. I usually spit on him. He’s never made any advances on me or hurt me in any way that I can remember. I just don’t get why he wont let me go. Typically, I tune-out most everything he says.

The counselor asks me how I’m feeling. I want to slap him. I ask why he works for the boss and how he validates his life when he leaves here. He just shakes his head. He asks me about my parents....

I really am tired of all the psycho-analyzing babble, but I do miss mom and dad.... and matt. I start telling him about the deep level of appreciation I have for my parents, how I admire their love, but how if I were to raise a child ... I would do it differently than they did. He asks how. I tell him about the well thought out upbringing that Andrew and I been planning for our kids, and how it would be a perfect mixture of strictness and openness. I ask the counselor his opinions on the matter; he just lets out a heavy sigh. I start berating him ... I know that he must have a failed marriage and fucked up kids for him to be working for some insane boss who keeps women in cellars. What an idiot I am! Why would I even ask his advice. I’m shaking, uncontrollably. I tell him what an imbecile he is and call for the guard to let him out immediately!!!!!

The guard doesn’t come, but he sees his way out... on his own.

I must have passed out, but I was awaken by the knocking on my door. Thank god for the feeder!  He comes in, presenting me with gifts. I see no need for 3 kings when I have this one ... I’ve told you - he is my favorite of the boss’s workers. He not only brings in delicious foods, but an array of condiments and spices for me to pour onto them. As much as I love his service, he always is the biggest downer to be around. I try to talk to him and ask about his life, but he always gets teary-eyed. I think the boss works him the most and he never gets to see his family. I am not even sure that he speaks english, or maybe he is always just too choked up to speak..who knows. But, he always stays to watch me eat.

.....

I fell asleep and had the worst dream. My chef, feeder, counselor, guard and boss all had the same face... they were all so old looking and unfamiliar. It terrified me. I needed fresh air, I couldn’t breathe....but the windows were barred. I tried punching the glass with all my force, but nothing happened. I gasped when I saw someone on the other side peeking in on me.... some creepy, witchlike, haggard woman. I panicked, damn near had a heart attack... and collapsed, passing out in my bed.

title: A REFLECTION.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What did the narratordo that makes her think she deserves whatever misfortune befell her?

answer: The narratoreven suspects that she has done something bad enough to warrant her imprisonment, but she has no idea what it could be. She is upset with the level of care and supervision she is getting, and frustrated with the bewildering inability of those around her to answer her questions. She suspects that she deserves to be kept captive for some reason, but does not know what it is.

text: Eliminate even after narrator

refinement: The narrator suspects that she has done something bad enough to warrant her imprisonment, but she has no idea what it could be. She is upset with the level of care and supervision she is getting, and frustrated with the bewildering inability of those around her to answer her questions. She suspects that she deserves to be kept captive for some reason, but does not know what it is.

answer: The narrator believes she is loved by her parents. She also feels bad her mom would have pressurized her dad into spending money to put up posters to find her. She reminisces about her time with her family as she sits in a cell, watched by people she does not know. Considering how she behaved during the morning before her disappearance. The narrator wishes she was a bit nicer to her mom and dad,  She had expressed her disgust at the breakfast she was being offered by her mom, an action she regrets.

text: She actually does not know what she did to deserve it. This is part of the central tension in the story.

refinement: The narrator suspects that she has done something bad enough to warrant her imprisonment, but she has no idea what it could be. She is upset with the level of care and supervision she is getting, and frustrated with the bewildering inability of those around her to answer her questions. She suspects that she deserves to be kept captive for some reason, but does not know what it is.

answer: She says she is blessed, goes as far as saying she never did anything "bad" enough to get kidnapped. Likely a kind of blasphemy.

text: Run on sentence, incomplete fragment

refinement: The narrator suspects that she has done something bad enough to warrant her imprisonment, but she has no idea what it could be. She is upset with the level of care and supervision she is getting, and frustrated with the bewildering inability of those around her to answer her questions. She suspects that she deserves to be kept captive for some reason, but does not know what it is.

answer: It isn't made clear what she did, if anything.

answer: The narratorexpresses disdain and disgust for breakfast foods and does not hide her disdain for the boss who kidnapped her and keeps her imprisoned in a cellar. She also berates the counselor, calling him an "idiot" and heckling him for working for someone keeping her imprisoned. She assumes that she deserves whatever fallout befell her because she did not respect the rules she should have respected and because she was cruel to the people around her who were only trying to help her.

text: Irrelevant to the question.

refinement: The narrator suspects that she has done something bad enough to warrant her imprisonment, but she has no idea what it could be. She is upset with the level of care and supervision she is getting, and frustrated with the bewildering inability of those around her to answer her questions. She suspects that she deserves to be kept captive for some reason, but does not know what it is.


text:
-   World

This was published 5 years ago

They did in a big way, and the results were startling. The birthrate for teenagers across the state plunged 40 per cent from 2009 to 2013, while their rate of abortions fell 42 per cent, according to the Colorado Department of Public Health and Environment. There was a similar decline in births for another group particularly vulnerable to unplanned pregnancies: unmarried women younger than 25 who have not finished high school.

[Researchers found teenagers and disadvantaged women chose to take long-term contraception if it was offered.]

Researchers found teenagers and disadvantaged women chose to take long-term contraception if it was offered.Credit:Vince Caligiuri

"Our demographer came into my office with a chart and said, 'Greta, look at this, we've never seen this before'," said Greta Klingler, the family planning supervisor for the public health department. "The numbers were plummeting."

The changes were particularly pronounced in the poorest areas of the state, places like Walsenburg, a small city in southern Colorado where jobs are scarce and unplanned births come often to the young. Hope Martinez, a 20-year-old nursing home receptionist here, recently had a small metal rod implanted under the skin of her upper arm to prevent pregnancy for three years. She has big plans – to marry, to move West, and to become a dental hygienist.

"I don't want any babies for a while," she said.

More young women are making that choice. In 2009, half of all first births to women in the poorest areas of the state happened before they turned 21. By 2014, half of first births did not occur until they had turned 24, a difference that advocates say gives young women time to finish their educations and to gain a foothold in an increasingly competitive job market.

"If we want to reduce poverty, one of the simplest, fastest and cheapest things we could do would be to make sure that as few people as possible become parents before they actually want to," said Isabel Sawhill, an economist at the Brookings Institution. She argues in her 2014 book, _Generation Unbound: Drifting Into Sex and Parenthood Without Marriage_, that single parenthood is a principal driver of inequality and long-acting birth control a powerful tool to prevent it.

Teenage births have been declining nationally, but experts say the timing and magnitude of the reductions in Colorado are a strong indication that the state's program was a major driver. About one-fifth of women aged 18 to 44 in Colorado now use a long-acting method, a substantial increase driven largely by teenagers and poor women.

The surge in Colorado has far outpaced the growing use of such methods nationwide. About 7 per cent of American women aged 15 to 44 used long-acting birth control from 2011 to 2013, the most recent period studied, up from 1.5 per cent in 2002. The figures include all women, even those who were pregnant or sterilised. The share of long-acting contraception users among just women using birth control is likely to be higher.

But the experiment in Colorado is entering an uncertain new phase that will test a central promise of the Affordable Care Act: free contraception.

The private grant that funds the state program has started to run out, and while many young women are expected to be covered under the health care law, some plans have required payment or offered only certain methods, problems the Obama administration is trying to correct. What is more, only new plans are required to provide free contraception, so women on plans that predate the law may not qualify. (In 2014, about a quarter of people covered through their employers were on grandfathered plans, according to the Kaiser Family Foundation.) Advocates also worry that teenagers - who can get the devices at clinics confidentially - may be less likely to get the devices through their parents' insurance. Long-acting devices can cost between $800 and $900.

"There's no lifeboat with the Affordable Care Act," said Liz Romer, a nurse practitioner who runs the Adolescent Medicine Program at Children's Hospital Colorado, which went from giving out 30 long-acting devices a year in 2009 to more than 2,000 in 2013.

The state failed to get additional funding through the Republican-controlled Legislature this spring, a shortfall Klingler said would slow, but not stop, the state's progress.

Women's health advocates contend that long-acting birth control is giving American women more say over when – and with whom – they have children. About half of the 6.6 million pregnancies a year in the United States are unintended. Teenage births may be down, but unplanned births have simply moved up the age scale, Sawhill said, and having a baby before finishing college can be just as risky to a woman's future as having one while in high school.

Colorado's program, funded by a private grant from the Susan Thompson Buffett Foundation, named for the billionaire investor Warren Buffett's late wife, was the real-world version of a research study in St Louis, (also paid for by the foundation, which does not publicly acknowledge its role) that came to the same conclusion: Women overwhelmingly chose the long-acting methods, and pregnancy and abortion rates plunged.

"The difference in effectiveness is profound," said Dr Jeffrey Peipert, a professor of obstetrics and gynaecology at Washington University in St Louis, who ran the study. The failure rate for the pill was about 5 per cent, compared with less than 1 per cent for implants and IUDs.

The methods are effective because, unlike the pill, a diaphragm or condoms, they do not require a woman to take action to work. And while an early incarnation, the Dalkon Shield introduced in the 1970s, had disastrous results, the modern devices are safe and have been increasingly promoted by doctors. Last fall, the American Academy of Pediatrics published guidelines that for the first time singled them out as a "first-line" birth control option for adolescents, citing their "efficacy, safety and ease of use."

"There's been a big shift in the mindset," said Dr Laura MacIsaac, director of family planning for Mount Sinai Beth Israel in New York. "The demand is coming from everywhere now."

In Walsenburg, studded with boarded-up buildings and weedy parking lots, advocates have used the Buffett grant to help women get more control. Poverty erodes health here: Last year, rural Huerfano County, which includes Walsenburg, was ranked second-to-last for life expectancy in the state.

"If you get pregnant here, you are stuck," said Debbie Channel, manager of the Spanish Peaks Regional Health Centre's Outreach and Women's Clinic, where Martinez, the nursing home receptionist, got her implant. "We're trying to keep them safe and baby free.

Proponents say the program is working. The state health department estimated that every dollar spent on the long-acting birth control initiative saved $5.85 for the state's Medicaid program, which covers more than three-quarters of teenage pregnancies and births. Enrolment in the federal nutrition program for women with young children declined nearly a quarter between 2010 and 2013.

Martinez had a preview of life as a mother while babysitting two young stepbrothers. She found it exhausting. She watched girls in her high school get trapped when they became mothers too soon, and she knew she did not want that for herself.

"They say they want to leave Walsenburg, but they never do," Martinez said. "It's a circle. It keeps happening and happening."

She plans to leave town this summer after she marries her fiance, now in California in military training. She is excited about the next chapter.

"I'm not scared at all," she said. "I'm just really ready."

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question: When was this published?

answer: This was published in October of 2016.

text: It's unclear when this was published.

refinement: This was published five years before the time of posting.

answer: Five years ago.

text: Insufficient information.

refinement: This was published five years before the time of posting.

answer: This was published in 2016.

text: Wrong inference.

refinement: This was published five years before the time of posting.

question: Are more young women choosing to have children later?

answer: Yes

answer: Due to long-term contraceptive options, yes.

text: No content.

question: Is the article specific to one region?

answer: Colorado.

answer: It appears to focus mainly on Colorado.

answer: Unclear, it seems like the program is in Colorado.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: The article examines how available contraception is a benefit to young women who do not want to become mothers, focusing on Hope Martinez, who has an implant so that she can move to California with her boyfriend and become a dental hygienist. There is also a brief look at how the Affordable Care Act is helping to pay for young women to remain protected.

answer: According to the article, the rate of teenage births and abortions in Colorado has declined dramatically since the state started offering free long-acting birth control. The reasons behind this shift in births may include the ability for young women to finish education before having a baby, as well as lower failure rates for these contraceptives than short-acting ones like birth-control pills.

answer: Colorado's experiment with providing long-term contraception has resulted in a dramatic reduction in teen pregnancies and unplanned births. Even though some young women may now struggle to afford these contraceptives under the Affordable Care Act, the benefits are still high compared with costs. If other states wanted to reduce teen pregnancy rates, they could look to this program in Colorado as an example.

answer: The Colorado Family Health Initiative report discusses a program in the state that helped reduce teenage pregnancy rates as well as the birth rates of poor or unmarried women. The program's use of long-acting birth control methods is thought to be a key factor in the successful results. However, the program is now threatened as funds provided by the private Susan Thompson Buffett Foundation are beginning to run out.

text: Inaccurate last sentence.

refinement: The Colorado Family Health Initiative report discusses a program in the state that helped reduce teenage pregnancy rates as well as the birth rates of poor or unmarried women. The program's use of long-acting birth control methods is thought to be a key factor in the successful results.

answer: The article discusses how the introduction of long-acting birth control methods in Colorado has seen a significant decrease in unwanted teenage pregnancies and births. It outlines how these methods are more effective and easier to use than traditional forms of contraception, and how they can lead to cost-savings for states providing healthcare.

answer: According to the article, in Colorado, a program offering long-acting birth control devices has lead to a steep decline in teen births and pregnancies. The program is funded by a private grant provided by the Susan Thompson Buffett Foundation, and proponents say it is successful. However, as this program is reliant on the private grant, advocates are uncertain about its future.

text: Inaccurate final sentence.

refinement: According to the article, in Colorado, a program offering long-acting birth control devices has lead to a steep decline in teen births and pregnancies. The program is funded by a private grant provided by the Susan Thompson Buffett Foundation, and proponents say it is successful.


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The first stone was cast from a tattooed hand in the crowd. The thrower was a fairly average person. He was average height, white complexion totally non-descript outside of the tattoos on his throwing arm. Like most of the crowd, his face was covered with a bandana while his hair was controlled beneath a baseball cap. His action proved catalytic in what would change the world. This average, masked man broke the floodgates of the world. The rest of the mob saw his action as one of leadership and followed suit. Before long stones, bottles and anything else within reach was flung. These objects battered their targets like a hailstorm. The already broken SWAT and police force crumbled under this barrage. The few men who had chosen to remain in uniform began to route in the presence of this violent and seemingly innumerable crowd.
 A few of D.C.’s finest attempted to hold their ground by any means necessary. At first they used pepper spray and tear gas; as the crowd continued to advance they used their riot shields and clubs; still the crowd advanced and the remaining forces opened fire with their weapons. However, for every person they gunned down ten more swept up into their place. The bullets may as well have been fired into a rushing tide. Those men and women who chose to stay were quickly overwhelmed. They would not be left alive. Any who challenged the crowd were killed by the enraged beast it had become. Before long people swarmed into the capitol. Seats, long evacuated by elected officials were torn apart. Offices desecrated. Flags burned.
A lone official remained in his office. Congressman Pace. He had been elected to his fourth term in the last election. He was a Representative from Georgia who had one of the highest approval ratings in the House. He sat in his chair, turned towards the growing dusk. His window was open a crack. It was a lovely evening for March. He closed his eyes, shut out the screams of pain and sounds of destruction.  His mind wandered to his ranch in Georgia. The ranch he would never again see. The grass he would never again feel. The sun he would never again bask in. He almost smiled as these happy thoughts flooded him. He was shut from the world and could only think about the dark that gleamed around him. The Congressman was awoken from his trance as he heard what must have been air force one fleeing the nation’s capitol. He closed his eyes once more and returned to his meditation.
A gunshot sounded from out the Congressman’s office and still he did not flinch. His door burst down suddenly as three rioters pushed a Secret Service agent through it. They beat him with pipes until his cries ceased. The rioters stopped for a moment in the office. All the former Congressman could think of was how they had been too late to see the view. Darkness had now descended.
“Tyrant!” one of the rioters screamed through his bandana. He leaped over a table seeking his prey. Congressman Pace lay as
His death was not quick. He did not die painlessly. This often is the case when a government falls. He died with his hand over his American flag lapel pin.

The riot did not solely occur at the capitol. All of D.C. was under attack. After the riot at the capitol turned into a warzone the other riots quickly broke out into violence. The White House was besieged as the President was flown out to an undisclosed location somewhere in the Midwest. The portrait of George Washington that had hung for centuries, was protected from fire and war, would not see it through the night. This painting of the stoic founding father who wanted nothing more than equality for citizens would burn, as would all of the other relics stored in the President’s residence. A mob cheered as they watched flames engulf the White House for a second time in the nation’s history.
The destruction of the National Archives was made into a spectacle. Documents including the Constitution and Declaration of Independence were read before the crowd. Each word, originally crafted to provide for natural rights, chosen so specifically so that people of this once proud nation would know that they were entitled to freedom, was now being twisted to reveal ironic and biting meanings. The reader sneered at the end of every sentence but did not add his own interjections. The crowed jeered and booed the words. The speaker did not make it through the first page before he gave up on turning its meaning and threw it into the crowd where these once revered words were torn apart near instantly.
Crowds formed all over the mall. People looted businesses, robbed others and destroyed the landscape and property. Just as Nero with Rome, the people cheered as their city burned.

title: Anarchy (800 Words)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What caused the riots?

answer: The riots were caused by a masked man who threw a stone at a police officer, which then caused the mob to act.

answer: The riots occurred after the President was flown out of the country. It is not stated in the story if the riots were orchestrated to get the President out of the country.

text: The response inaccurately mentions that the riots were after the President fled. The riots were happening before.

text: The response misses to mention that a masked man threw the first stone which was the catalytic in what would change the world.

refinement: A masked man threw the first stone which was the catalytic in what would change the world. The rest of the mob saw his action as one of leadership and followed suit.

answer: The riots started after a masked man threw the first stone. It was catalytic in what would change the world. The people saw his action as a leadership and followed it.

answer: The narrator does not say what caused the riots, but it seems they occurred because of a revolution somewhere in the country.

text: The response misses to answer what caused the riots and inaccurately mentions it was somewhere in the country, while the text evidences it was in the nation's capital.

text: The response misses to mention that a masked man threw the first stone which was the catalytic in what would change the world.

refinement: A masked man threw the first stone which was the catalytic in what would change the world. The rest of the mob saw his action as one of leadership and followed suit.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What made the rioters sneer at the reading of the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence?

answer: The reader chose important words to infuse with more meaning, changing the context of the text, ironically at first and then into something more sinister.

text: The response inaccurately mentions that the reader changed the context of the text.

refinement: The reader chose important words to infuse with more meaning.

text: The response misses to mention that rioters sneered at the reading because the words that once provided for rights and freedom, now were twisted to reveal ironic and biting meanings.

refinement: The reader chose important words to infuse with more meaning. The rioters sneered at the reading because words that once provided for rights and freedom, now were twisted to reveal ironic and biting meanings.

answer: The reader of the Declaration of Independence and the Constitution was not able to read it in full and was booed by the crowd. The reader sneered at the end of every sentence.

text: The response misses to mention that rioters sneered at the reading because the words that once provided for rights and freedom, now were twisted to reveal ironic and biting meanings.

refinement: The reader of the Declaration of Independence and the Constitution was not able to read it in full and was booed by the crowd. The reader sneered at the end of every sentence because the words that once provided for rights and freedom, now were twisted to reveal ironic and biting meanings.

answer: It may be implied that the above of the documents are being betrayed by the government itself, they are disregarded and used in a mockery of itself. The reader clearly has hatred and yet s his own interjections are never added as they do not want to tarnish the government's ideology.

text: The response includes information not useful for the task.

refinement: The reader clearly has hatred and yet s his own interjections are never added.

text: The response misses to mention that rioters sneered at the reading because the words that once provided for rights and freedom, now were twisted to reveal ironic and biting meanings.

refinement: The reader clearly has hatred and yet his own interjections are never added. The rioters sneered at the reading because words that once provided for rights and freedom, now were twisted to reveal ironic and biting meanings.

answer: The irony and biting meanings in the words.

answer: Because the words were twisting their meaning, similar to the way twisted things can turn evil or frightening.

answer: The reader of the Declaration of Independence and the Constitution was not able to read it in full and was booed by the crowd.

text: The response misses to mention that rioters sneered at the reading because the words that once provided for rights and freedom, now were twisted to reveal ironic and biting meanings.

refinement: The reader of the Declaration of Independence and the Constitution was not able to read it in full and was booed by the crowd. The rioters sneered at the reading because words that once provided for rights and freedom, now were twisted to reveal ironic and biting meanings.


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Today, I’m going to let you know about an amazing way to connect to all the blogs & magazines you adore. It’s called bHome, and iPhone | iPad users as well as Android users can download the FREE APP and be a part of our fabulous inspiring Home And Garden Community. You’ll be able to find FrenchGardenHouse and over 40 of your favorite blogs and magazines in one place, ON YOUR PHONE!

If you love Instagram, YOU’LL LOVE THIS APP. There are big photos of your favorite blogs in the home and garden community, and YOU WILL BE ABLE TO CLICK DIRECTLY OVER TO THEIR BLOG, INSTAGRAM ACCOUNT, SHOP AND EVEN CHECK OUT THEIR FAVORITE PLAYLISTS! HOW FABULOUS IS THAT?! It’s the most user friendly, easiest way to be inspired, and to connect!

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I am so honored to be included with this group of inspiring bloggers and publications. The best part is that not only will you be able to read the blogposts, see all the creative inspiration, get recipes and more, _you will also be able to interact with all the bHome bloggers from your cell phone. iPad users: bHome runs great on your iPad as an iPhone app._

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I know we all lead busy lives, so this is just about perfect when you are stuck waiting in line to buy dinner ingredients at the market, or waiting at the car wash, or sitting in your car waiting to pick up children, or any other time when you have nothing to do. {I know, those times are few and far in-between!}

To celebrate, FrenchGardenHouse is having a FABULOUS GIVEAWAY! One lucky FrenchGardenHouse reader who downloads the bHome app on their smart phone and follows me on bHome will win a $200.00 GIFT CERTIFICATE to FrenchGardenHouse.  Winner will be announced on 10-12-2015. {Autumn is the perfect time to buy something for your home, or treat yourself to one of our gorgeous pieces of jewelry.} The picture below shows just a small amount of the beautiful pieces you can choose from should you win!

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Here’s how you can enter the GIVEAWAY and find FGH at bHome.

1. Download the FREE app at the app store on your iPhone or Android. You can also  go to bHome and download and join for FREE.

2. Once you have joined bHome, browse “recents” and FrenchGardenHouse should be on the top.

3.TAP the FrenchGardenHouse star then read my message – TAP the link & you are entered – easy as that, 2 TAPS & you are entered to win! How easy is that?

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bHome is the BEST PLACE on your smart phone. You can visit over 40 great Home and Garden bloggers and magazines, view their Blogs and their Pinterest boards, and pin right from them to your Pinterest boards. You will be able to view all of their Instagram, Facebook, Google + and Twitter accounts and interact with everyone there too. bHome is stunning, with so much gorgeous inspiration! It’s easy, and FREE for you to join. I HOPE THAT YOU WILL JOIN ALL OF US AND BE PART OF OUR HIVE.

Please join, and enter to win our $200.00 GIFT CERTIFICATE, I know you will love the community there, and will get so much inspiration. I’M LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING YOU AT BHOME. Please let others know about bHome, and pin this to your Pinterest board and share on your FaceBook page. Thank you!

Shop for the best in French Antiques, furniture with the patina of age, vintage accessories to delight you and your family & friends, and French Country utilitarian pieces. Treasures that make your home fresh, beautiful, inspirational and uniquely yours. Visit our shop FrenchGardenHouse.com.

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question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the bHome App?

answer: The text mentions that the bHome app is a great place to find blogs and magazines about the home and garden community in one place on your phone. The app also enables users to interact with bloggers, see their photographs and posts, follow them on different social media platforms, and enter a giveaway to win a gift certificate.

text: I would add that the bHome App is free to download.

refinement: The text mentions that the bHome app is a great place to find blogs and magazines about the home and garden community in one place on your phone. The app also enables users to interact with bloggers, see their photographs and posts, follow them on different social media platforms, and enter a giveaway to win a gift certificate. The bHome App is free to download.

answer: The text says that the bHome App is a way for iPhone and Android users to connect to all the blogs and magazines they adore. It also offers Instagram, Facebook, Google+, and Twitter integration. The bHome App is easy and free to join, and is a great source of inspiration.

text: I would add that users can visit over 40 great Home and Garden bloggers and magazines and that users will also be able to interact with all the bHome bloggers from their cell phones.

refinement: The text says that the bHome App is a way for iPhone and Android users to connect to all the blogs and magazines they adore. Users can visit over 40 great Home and Garden bloggers and magazines. They will also be able to interact with all the bHome bloggers from their cell phones. It also offers Instagram, Facebook, Google+, and Twitter integration. The bHome App is easy and free to join, and is a great source of inspiration.

text: an unnecessary comma after 'join'.

refinement: The text says that the bHome App is a way for iPhone and Android users to connect to all the blogs and magazines they adore. Users can visit over 40 great Home and Garden bloggers and magazines. They will also be able to interact with all the bHome bloggers from their cell phones. It also offers Instagram, Facebook, Google+, and Twitter integration. The bHome App is easy and free to join and is a great source of inspiration.

text: I would remove 'they adore' as it is not stated.

refinement: The text says that the bHome App is a way for iPhone and Android users to visit over 40 great Home and Garden bloggers and magazines. They will also be able to interact with all the bHome bloggers from their cell phones. It also offers Instagram, Facebook, Google+, and Twitter integration. The bHome App is easy and free to join and is a great source of inspiration.

answer: The bHome App is free to download and runs on iPhones, iPads, and Android devices. The app was made for home and garden enthusiasts, featuring FrenchGardenHouse and over 40 popular blogs and magazines. Users can connect to all the blogs and magazines they follow using only their phones. The bHome App layout is similar to Instagram, with big photos of favorite blogs in the home and garden community accessible via one click.

text: It is not stated that photos are accessible via one click so I would delete it.

refinement: The bHome App is free to download and runs on iPhones, iPads, and Android devices. The app was made for home and garden enthusiasts, featuring FrenchGardenHouse and over 40 popular blogs and magazines. Users can connect to all the blogs and magazines they follow using only their phones. The bHome App layout is similar to Instagram, with big photos of favorite blogs in the home and garden community.

answer: Since bHome is FREE and it connects over 40 different blogs and magazines in one place, it's an incredible place to get inspired and to connect to a community. The user will be able to click directly from home and garden community from the app to each blog and magazine's account, shop, and favorite playlist. Additionally, bHome ensures the community's interactions are seamless.

answer: The text talks about the bHome app, which iPhone and Android users can download and join the fabulous inspiring home and garden community where they can find 40 of their favorite blogs and magazines all on one app.

text: I would add that the app is free and that users will also be able to interact with all the bHome bloggers from their cell phones.

refinement: The text talks about the bHome app, which iPhone and Android users can download and join the fabulous inspiring home and garden community where they can find 40 of their favorite blogs and magazines all on one app. The app is free. Users will also be able to interact with all the bHome bloggers from their cell phones.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the other cool features of the bHome App?

answer: The coolest feature of the app according to the narrator is the fact that it allows you to click directy over to Instagram, Blog d accounts, for bloggers and even favorite playlists.

text: I would delete 'd' after Blog as it makes no sense.

refinement: The coolest feature of the app according to the narrator is the fact that it allows you to click directy over to Instagram, Blog accounts, for bloggers and even favorite playlists.

text: It should be 'directly' instead of 'directy'.

refinement: The coolest feature of the app according to the narrator is the fact that it allows you to click directly over to Instagram, Blog accounts, for bloggers and even favorite playlists.

answer: The App will let its users browse the blogs and other accounts visited by other App users. BHome is standalone, so searching the term bHome in Whats App won't yield this App.

text: I would add that it allows users to click directly over to their Instagram and Blog accounts to explain the second sentence.

refinement: The App will let its users browse the blogs and other accounts visited by other App users. BHome is standalone, so searching the term bHome in Whats App won't yield this App as it allows users to click directly over to their Instagram and Blog accounts.

text: It should be 'What's App' instead of 'Whats App'.

refinement: The App will let its users browse the blogs and other accounts visited by other App users. BHome is standalone, so searching the term bHome in What's App won't yield this App as it allows users to click directly over to their Instagram and Blog accounts

answer: The text describes that the bHome app makes it easy to interact with bloggers and magazines in one place, opens up access to Instagram, Facebook, Google+, and Twitter accounts, and has stunning inspiration to share.

answer: Using the bHome App, users can click directly on their favorite blogs in the home and garden community and head on over to their blogs, Instagram account, online shop, and even check out their playlists. Users will be able to read all the blog posts, get inspired, get recipes, and more. Users of the app will also be able to interact with all the bHome bloggers via the app.

answer: The text says that with the bHome App, iPhone or Android users can access the blogs and magazines they already love, as well as interact with all the content creators. There are big photos of their blogs and Instagram accounts, and users can click over to the blogs and websites directly from the app to see even more content. The app is also user friendly and easy to use.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the FrenchGardenHouse giveaway?

answer: FrenchGardenHouse is giving away one $200.00 gift certificate to a lucky reader who downloads the bHome app on their smartphone and follows the blogger (who wrote the article) on bHome. Readers can enter the contest by downloading the free bHome app on their phones. The next step is to browse "recents" and tap the FrenchGardenHouse star and read the blogger's message. Tapping the link automatically creates one entry for the reader.

answer: The giveaway is one way to enter the bHome community and win a $200.00 gift certificate. The winner will be announced on October 12, 2015. To enter, one simply needs to download the bHome app and follow FrenchGardenHouse. Pinning this giveaway to a Pinterest board and sharing on one's Facebook page is encouraged.

answer: The FrenchGardenHouse blog is having a giveaway where the reader will win a $200.00 Gift certificate if they download the bHome app and follow the person who blogs for FrenchGardenHouse.

text: Instead of 'the reader' should be 'a lucky reader'.

refinement: The FrenchGardenHouse blog is having a giveaway where a lucky reader will win a $200.00 Gift certificate if they download the bHome app and follow the person who blogs for FrenchGardenHouse.

answer: The text says that there is a giveaway with a gift certificate worth $200.00, and to enter all the reader needs to do is download the bHome app, follow FrenchGardenHouse on bHome, and tap the link to be entered.

text: I would add that the certificate will be given to a lucky reader.

refinement: The text says that there is a giveaway with a gift certificate worth $200.00 that will be given to a lucky reader, and to enter all the reader needs to do is download the bHome app, follow FrenchGardenHouse on bHome, and tap the link to be entered.

answer: The winner of the giveaway will win a $200.00 gift certificate to FrenchGardenHouse. FrenchGardenHouse readers can download the bHome app on their smart phone and follow the blog's bHome account to enter the giveaway. Autumn is the perfect time to stash some money at the stylish shop FrenchGardenHouse. Autumn will also bring a new set of seasonal items to decorate your home, since there are more resources available at this time of the year. $200.00 can be used to treat someone special to a tea garden setting.

text: It is irrelevant: 'Autumn is the perfect time to stash some money at the stylish shop FrenchGardenHouse. Autumn will also bring a new set of seasonal items to decorate your home, since there are more resources available at this time of the year. $200.00 can be used to treat someone special to a tea garden setting.' I would delete it.

refinement: The winner of the giveaway will win a $200.00 gift certificate to FrenchGardenHouse. FrenchGardenHouse readers can download the bHome app on their smart phone and follow the blog's bHome account to enter the giveaway.

text: Rather 'smartphone' than 'smart phone'.

refinement: The winner of the giveaway will win a $200.00 gift certificate to FrenchGardenHouse. FrenchGardenHouse readers can download the bHome app on their smartphone and follow the blog's bHome account to enter the giveaway.