text:
"Look, do you want this stuff or not?"

"I dunno. Most of it isn't useful. I could probably only sell about a third of it."

"So how much will you pay for that third?"

"Honestly, not much. Like I said, it's not very useful stuff."

"How much? $100?"

"No, that's way too much. You could probably get that much, or maybe even more, if you sold it yourself, but I can't pay you that much. I need to make a profit off of this."

"I don't wanna go through the hassle of selling it all myself, that's why I am talking to you. How about $85?"
"Still too high for me."

"$75?"

"Why are you so eager to get rid of this stuff Mike?"

"I don't have room for it, I just need it gone."

"Don't have room for it? Mike, you have been in prison for 5 years. You just got out yesterday. I'm surprised that you even have this much stuff. Where did it come from? Did you have it in storage all of that time?"

"Don't worry about where it came from, just tell me if you want it."

"Are you alright man?"

"No, I'm not alright, I'm getting really annoyed with you. Do you or do you not want to buy this pile of crap? I'll even lower it to $65 if you just say yes right now."

"I need to know where these things came from. I can't be caught with stolen goods and I don't want to see you go back to jail."

"No, you don't need to know where these things came from. People don't come to your pawn shop looking for beautiful antiques with rich histories. They come because the items are cheap and there are no questions asked. Where I got this stuff shouldn't matter to you. Besides, even if this stuff is stolen, it's not like that has ever been an issue for you before."

"Okay fine, you're right, I have sold stolen goods before. But that is not the issue right now. What I want to know is if YOU stole these things."

"Why does it matter?"

"Because Mike, you're my friend. We grew up together. We both worked hard and we left home together and got away from that dead-end life. Don't throw it all away now. You just spent 5 years in jail for stealing. If you get caught again you will be in for a lot longer. We fought so hard to get off the reservation because everywhere we looked all we saw were old men sitting around just waiting to die. If you go back to jail you will be doing the exact same thing, just sitting around waiting for your time to come. Look, I need to know, did you steal that stuff?"

"$60?"

"Did. You. Steal it?"

"$55?"

"Answer me Mike"

"$50? Come on man, I really need the cash. Like you said, we're friends, we grew up together. I really need your help right now. Can you help me? Friend?"

"You did steal it, didn't you?"

"$50 is a good deal man. Look at this stuff in here. Some of this will be sold by tomorrow, and for a good price. Look. You could sell this ring alone for $40. Like you said, I could sell this stuff myself and make over $100, but I'm coming to you instead. Help me out with this man. You will easily get your money back."

"I can't do it Mike. I can't sell things that you've stolen"

"You never had a problem with it before! What's changed?! Are you scared? You saw me go to jail and now you think it will happen to you?"

"If I sell things that you have stolen then I am supporting your theft, and I can't do that."

"What, are you scared that if I get caught I will rat on you for reduced time? I would NEVER do that, and you know it! I didn't rat on you last time, and I went away for five years man, five years! You know me, you know I wouldn't say anything! I need some money and I am asking you, my friend, for help and all you can think about is yourself. All you can think about is 'selling stolen goods'."

"That's not what I mean Mike."

"Yeah? Then tell me, what do you mean?"

"If I sell things that you have stolen then I am just encouraging you to steal more. We have been down this road before and we saw how it ended. You were in prison for 5 years. How long do you think it will be next time? I can't do it Mike. I can't help you throw your life away. I won't sell anything that you have stolen."

"Yeah? well you know what? Don't worry about it. Don't worry about helping me, FRIEND. You don't have to worry about helping me throw my life away, because I won't be bothering you any more."

"Don't be like that Mike. You know I want to help you, but I won't do it in this way."

"No, really, don't worry about it. I guess I'll see you around some time."

That was the last time I spoke with Mike. Three weeks later he was caught by the police and sent back to jail. I guess he stole from some bad people, because on his second day in prison he was stabbed and killed. I guess, in the end, he succeeded. He didn't just sit around waiting to die, and that was all he ever really wanted.

title: Not a writer, but I decided to try a prompt from youshouldwrite.com just for fun. Tell me what you think. ~900 words

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to Mike's experience in jail.

answer: Mike has been in prison for at least 5 years. He and his friend both worked hard and left home together. They were able to get away from the reservation. Mike was sent to prison and was in jail for 5 years. He mentions being in jail for stealing. He asks to buy his friend's stuff for him, but the friend says he sold stolen items so he could throw his life away. Mike says he would never rat on his friend and he went to prison for 5.

text: Mike and the narrator's backstories aren't relevant to the question.

refinement: Mike has been in prison for at least 5 years. Mike was sent to prison and was in jail for 5 years. He mentions being in jail for stealing. He asks to buy his friend's stuff for him, but the friend says he sold stolen items so he could throw his life away. Mike says he would never rat on his friend and he went to prison for 5.

text: The stolen goods discussion is irrelevant to the question.

refinement: Mike has been in prison for at least 5 years. Mike was sent to prison and was in jail for 5 years. He mentions being in jail for stealing. Mike says he went to prison for 5.

text: The answer repeats Mike being in prison for five years several times.

text: The answer omits that Mike goes back to jail and gets stabbed the second day this time around.

refinement: Mike was in jail for five years. In the story, he doesn't last a month outside and goes back after getting caught stealing again. This time, he gets stabbed on his second day and dies.

answer: Mike went to jail for stealing 5 years earlier. he spent 5 years behind bars. While he was there, he got stabbed. Three weeks after he was released, he was caught and sent back to jail. He was killed on the second day.

text: The answer claims that Mike was stabbed during his five-year stay in the prison, which is wrong.

refinement: Mike went to jail for stealing 5 years earlier. he spent 5 years behind bars. Three weeks after he was released, he was caught and sent back to jail. He was killed on the second day.

text: The second sentence should start with a capital letter.

refinement: Mike went to jail for stealing 5 years earlier. He spent 5 years behind bars. Three weeks after he was released, he was caught and sent back to jail. He was killed on the second day.

answer: Mike argues with his old childhood friend Pete. Mike wants Pete to sell his stolen goods. Pete refuses to do this because he doesn't want to encourage Mike. Three weeks after their argument, Mike is back in jail and he is stabbed and killed.

text: The story doesn't name the narrator (Mike's childhood friend).

refinement: Mike argues with his old childhood friend. Mike wants him to sell his stolen goods. He refuses to do this because he doesn't want to encourage Mike. Three weeks after their argument, Mike is back in jail and he is stabbed and killed.

text: The answer omits Mike's five years in prison before the story's start.

refinement: Mike spent five years in jail and got out the previous day when the story starts. Mike argues with his old childhood friend. Mike wants him to sell his stolen goods. He refuses to do this because he doesn't want to encourage Mike. Three weeks after their argument, Mike is back in jail and he is stabbed and killed.

text: Mike and the narrator's argument isn't directly relevant. It should be shortened.

refinement: Mike spent five years in jail and got out the previous day when the story starts. Mike stole some things and wants him to sell them. He refuses to do this because he doesn't want to encourage Mike. Three weeks after their argument, Mike is back in jail and he is stabbed and killed.

answer: Mike argues with his old childhood friend Pete. Mike wants Pete to sell his stolen goods. Pete refuses to do this because he doesn't want to encourage Mike. Three weeks after their argument, Mike is sent to jail and he is stabbed and killed.

answer: Mike has been in prison for at least 5 years. He and his friend both worked hard and left home together. They were able to get away from the reservation. Mike went to prison for stealing. He mentions being in jail for stealing. He asks to buy his friend's stuff for him, but the friend says he sold stolen items so he could throw his life away. Mike says he would never rat on his friend and he went to prison for 5.

answer: Mike went to jail for stealing 5 years earlier. he spent 5 years behind bars. While he was there, he got stabbed. Three weeks after he was released, he was caught and sent back to jail. He was killed on the second day.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the main conflict.

answer: Mike visits his friend who runs a pawnshop and dumps a pile of stolen junk in front of him. He offers to purchase a third of the haul in exchange for an inflated price and runs down all the reasons they can make a profit off off the items. His friend refuses saying he doesn't want to sell stolen goods. Mike gets angry and the friend asks how he even survived for 5 years in prison with all of it. Mike leaves and is caught within three weeks with no saving grace.

text: The answer misrepresents the argument about the items Mike wants the narrator to sell.

refinement: Mike visits his friend who runs a pawnshop and dumps a pile of stolen junk in front of him. Mike wants him to sell the items. His friend refuses saying he doesn't want to sell stolen goods. Mike gets angry and the friend asks how he even survived for 5 years in prison with all of it. Mike leaves and is caught within three weeks with no saving grace.

text: The narrator doesn't ask Mike how he survived in jail with the items but how he acquired them just a day after getting out.

refinement: Mike visits his friend who runs a pawnshop and dumps a pile of stolen junk in front of him. Mike wants him to sell the items. His friend refuses saying he doesn't want to sell stolen goods. Mike gets angry after the friend asks how he even got the items the next day of getting out of prison. Mike leaves and is caught within three weeks with no saving grace.

text: The answer misrepresents the final fate of Mike.

refinement: Mike visits his friend who runs a pawnshop and dumps a pile of stolen junk in front of him. Mike wants him to sell the items. His friend refuses saying he doesn't want to sell stolen goods. Mike gets angry after the friend asks how he even got the items the next day of getting out of prison. Mike leaves and is caught within three weeks, getting stabbed to death on his second day of jail this time.

answer: The man Mike, who is a friend from the narrator's childhood, has gotten out of prison and needs to sell some old things he accumulated as a result of staying in jail for five years. The narrator says he'll sell some things for Mike if he gives him an explanation as to how he came upon the items. Mike is a little forceful in his demeanor with the narrator and is adamant in not giving what he is owed, the narrator has seen Mike be forceful and manipulative in the past. Mike refuses to describe how the items were obtained and leaves the shop angry. The narrator worries they will see Mike again in jail. It turns out Mike had stolen from a bad guy. He gets stabbed and killed within his first couple of days in jail.

text: The stuff Mike wants to sell is stolen after Mike got out of jail, not accumulated while he was in.

refinement: The man Mike, who is a friend from the narrator's childhood, has gotten out of prison and wants to sell some things he stole. The narrator says he'll sell some things for Mike if he gives him an explanation as to how he came upon the items. Mike is a little forceful in his demeanor with the narrator and is adamant in not giving what he is owed, the narrator has seen Mike be forceful and manipulative in the past. Mike refuses to describe how the items were obtained and leaves the shop angry. The narrator worries they will see Mike again in jail. It turns out Mike had stolen from a bad guy. He gets stabbed and killed within his first couple of days in jail.

text: Mike is insistent, yes, but the story says nothing about the narrator observing similar things in the past. "Not giving what he is owed" is also a claim unattested by the text.

refinement: The man Mike, who is a friend from the narrator's childhood, has gotten out of prison and wants to sell some things he stole. The narrator says he'll sell some things for Mike if he gives him an explanation as to how he came upon the items. Mike refuses to describe how the items were obtained and leaves the shop angry. The narrator worries they will see Mike again in jail. It turns out Mike had stolen from a bad guy. He gets stabbed and killed within his first couple of days in jail.

text: The answer is phrased awkwardly in general.

refinement: Mike, who is the narrator's childhood friend, has gotten out of prison and wants to sell some things he stole. The narrator says he'll take them if Mike gives him an explanation as to how he came upon the items. Mike refuses to describe how the items were obtained and leaves the shop angry. The narrator is worried Mike will get in jail again. It turns out Mike had stolen from a bad guy. He gets stabbed and killed within his first couple of days in jail.

answer: The main conflict is that the narrator refuses to buy the items Mike has stolen because they used to be friends and they don't want Mike to go back to jail.

answer: Mike visits his friend who runs a pawnshop and dumps a pile of stolen junk in front of him. He offers to purchase a third of the haul in exchange for an inflated price and runs down all the reasons they can make a profit off off the items. His friend refuses saying he doesn't want to be an accessory to theft if he profits off the stash. Mike gets angry and the friend asks how he even survived for 5 years in prison with all of it. Mike leaves and is caught within three weeks with no saving grace.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize how the pawn shop owner feels about Mike.

answer: The narrator feels betrayed by Mike since he was incarcerated in jail and got out only recently. The guy feels like he's being taken advantage of by Mike.

text: The narrator wants to help Mike but doesn't want to sell stolen goods for him to avoid incentivizing him to steal more. There's nothing in the article that says the narrator feels betrayed or taken advantage of.

refinement: The narrator wants to help Mike but doesn't want to sell stolen goods for him to avoid incentivizing him to steal more. The narrator is concerned for his friend.

answer: He feels sorry for Mike, thinks that he should stay out of trouble and make use of his life in a more meaningful fashion. He knows that Mike doesn't fully grasp the extent of the choices that he is making; hence, he feels concerned.

answer: The narrator feels betrayed by Mike because he's unable to provide an answer as to whether they are friends or not. The guy feels like he's being taken advantage of by Mike.

answer: He urges Mike not to divert his energies into selling stolen goods.

text: The answer omits the narrator's concern for his friend because he thinks Mike can go back to jail if he continues to steal.

refinement: He urges Mike not to divert his energies into selling stolen goods. He's concerned for his friend because he doesn't want Mike to go back to jail.

answer: The pawn shop owner doesn't want to see his friend in jail again. He wants to support his friend and provide a safe environment for the community. He feels that by selling the stolen goods will desensitize him to crimes. He refuses to provide a platform for those who aim squarely at self-destruction.

text: The narrator never says anything about creating a safe environment for the community. He just wants to support his friend.

refinement: The pawn shop owner doesn't want to see his friend in jail again. He wants to support his friend. He feels that by selling the stolen goods will desensitize him to crimes. He refuses to provide a platform for those who aim squarely at self-destruction.

text: There's an extra "by" in the third sentence. "Pawnshop" should be without space.

refinement: The pawnshop owner doesn't want to see his friend in jail again. He wants to support his friend. He feels that selling the stolen goods will desensitize him to crimes. He refuses to provide a platform for those who aim squarely at self-destruction.

text: The narrator's worry isn't that Mike will be desensitized, but that he can go back to jail if he continues to steal. He doesn't want to encourage Mike.

refinement: The pawnshop owner doesn't want to see his friend in jail again. He wants to support his friend. He feels that selling the stolen goods will encourage Mike to steal more. He refuses to provide a platform for those who aim squarely at self-destruction.

text: Nothing in the text suggests that the narrator has a general aim of deplatforming those aiming at self-destruction.

refinement: The pawnshop owner doesn't want to see his friend in jail again. He wants to support his friend. He feels that selling the stolen goods will encourage Mike to steal more.

answer: The pawn shop owner doesn't want to see his friend in jail again. He wants to support his friend and provide a safe environment for the community. He feels that encouraging the crime will encourage violence. He refuses to provide a platform for those who aim squarely at self-destruction.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the pawn shop owner's reasoning in not buying Mike's items.

answer: He does not want to be seen selling stolen items and would prefer to get trade from trusted customers as thieves often have dirty business on the side. He is reluctant to buy from Mike because of his questionable history. The price and amount of items are also a major factor and the fact that Mike needs the money to perhaps pay off debts.

text: The answer is completely wrong. The narrator sold stolen items before. His main concern is to discourage his friend from stealing and going back to prison.

refinement: He wants to avoid discouraging his childhood friend from stealing more. He's concerned that if Mike continues to steal, he'll be back in prison.

answer: He does not want to be seen selling stolen items and would prefer to get trade from trusted customers as thieves often have dirty business on the side. He is reluctant to buy from Mike because of his questionable history and he wants to help him. The price and amount of items are also a major factor.

answer: The items are likely stolen and the owner knows it because the pawnshop often sells stolen goods. Mike doesn't have a good reputation in town because he was recently released from jail after pleading guilty to theft. The owner doesn't feel comfortable because he's afraid the police will prosecute him for selling stolen goods if he sells any of Mike's items because he believes Mike stole them, but he also doesn't want to help Mike get back in jail.

text: Everything except the narrator not wanting Mike to go back to jail are outright false.

refinement: He doesn't want to help Mike get back in jail.

text: The answer is too short and vague.

refinement: He doesn't want to help Mike get back in jail by encouraging him to steal more.

answer:
Despite being good friends with Mike and knowing Mike's desperation for cash, the owner of the pawn shop refuses to buy Mike's items, despite the items not being stolen. He claims that it's just a way to encourage Mike to steal again and earn the pawn shop owner money, and the last time they were down this road, Mike ended up in prison for 5 years.

The owner was also doing this because Mike was a friend, as they grew up together. Also, the owner is worried helping Mike will encourage him to steal more and be caught again.

text: The answer is highly repetitive. It should be more concise.

refinement: The owner was doing this because Mike is a friend as they grew up together. Also, the owner is worried helping Mike will encourage him to steal more and be caught again.

answer:
Despite being good friends with Mike and knowing Mike's desperation for cash, the owner of the pawn shop refuses to buy Mike's items, despite the items not being stolen. He claims that it's just a way to encourage Mike to steal again and earn the pawn shop owner money, and the last time they were down this road, Mike ended up in prison for 5 years.

The owner was also doing this because Mike was a friend, as they grew up together. He believes that if he supports Mike's stealing ways then they're not true friends. Also, if he buys the items, he remains complicit in whatever crime Mike stole the items for. They believe Mike would rat him out if he gets caught.

text: The answer is too repetitive. It should be more concise.

refinement: Despite being good friends with Mike and knowing Mike's desperation for cash, the owner of the pawn shop refuses to buy Mike's items, despite the items not being stolen. He claims that it's just a way to encourage Mike to steal again and earn the pawn shop owner money, and the last time they were down this road, Mike ended up in prison for 5 years.

text: The items are heavily implied to be stolen. The answer is wrong about that.

refinement: Despite being good friends with Mike and knowing Mike's desperation for cash, the owner of the pawn shop refuses to buy Mike's items. He claims that it's just a way to encourage Mike to steal again and earn the pawn shop owner money, and the last time they were down this road, Mike ended up in prison for 5 years.

text: "Pawnshop" shouldn't have spaces in it.

refinement: Despite being good friends with Mike and knowing Mike's desperation for cash, the owner of the pawnshop refuses to buy Mike's items. He claims that it's just a way to encourage Mike to steal again and earn the pawnshop owner money, and the last time they were down this road, Mike ended up in prison for 5 years.

text: The narrator isn't concerned with earning money. His main motivation is not to encourage Mike to steal again.

refinement: Despite being good friends with Mike and knowing Mike's desperation for cash, the owner of the pawnshop refuses to buy Mike's items. He claims that it's just a way to encourage Mike to steal again, and the last time they were down this road, Mike ended up in prison for 5 years.

answer: The items are likely stolen and the owner knows it because the pawnshop often sells stolen goods. Mike doesn't have a good reputation in town because he was recently released from jail after pleading guilty to theft. Obviously, he stole these items. The pawnshop owner doesn't feel comfortable being in business with someone whose reputation is that of a law breaker.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the effects of prison on mental health?

answer: The story doesn't go into detail about the mental health effects of prison but the narrator believes that Mike might be more vicious than someone whop didn't know prison.

text: The answer offers needless speculation while the correct answer is "No answer".

answer: No answer

answer: The narrator is friends with a man named Mike who just got released from prison. He used spend his sentence sitting around waiting to die and Mike is told that he will do the same if he gets caught in prison again. When the narrator asks Mike how he acquired an array of items, Mike tries to convince him to buy the items in a bid to get money. The narrator refuses because he doesn't want to help Mike throw his life away again by encouraging him to break the law.

text: The answer doesn't address the question at all. The correct answer is "no answer" anyway.

answer: The narrator is friends with a man, Mike, who has just gotten out of prison. The narrator ironically explains to Mike that he is surprised that Mike has a good many items because he just spent 5 years in prison. He mentions that Mike is also a thief and a con-man who will try to get away with anything he can because he doesn't want to return to prison, as he would be in it for a lot longer next time. The narrator then refuses to purchase the items because he doesn't want to support Mike's being a thief. Mike was irritated and instead said he would no longer come around and ask for help on his endeavors once again, as he had done so before. Three weeks later Mike broke into a house and was caught by the police and sent back to jail, where he was killed by another inmate.

answer: The story doesn't go into detail about the mental health effects of prison but the narrator believes that Mike will feel psychologically scarred from the trauma from being sent back to prison.

answer: As the story progresses, the protagonists display increasingly violent attitudes, escalating from a typically hostile exchange of verbal abuse to an unashamed theft of items from a friend. He enters a jail cell with a knife wound, then dies a week later in prison. Prison seems to hasten a sort of zombie-like regression, which makes the mind lose clarity and self-awareness by way of violent and irrational acts. The inciting incident here is the reluctance of the protagonist's friend to commit a crime for helping him out.


split: train

text:
I had an interesting experience once. About 5 years ago, when I was still cleaning pools, I got the call to clean a pool in some mansion in a really rich area of the city I live in.

So I drove up there that Thursday morning. It was a very hot day, as we were in the middle of summer, and it was torture having to clean these pools when all I wanted to do was just swim in them. So I get to the right address, park my van, and then walk up to the door. I ring the bell and I get no response. I ring it twice. I ring it three times. Finally I hear someone call out "Coming", and so I take a step back to admire the house while I'm waiting.
Gosh it was a rich house. The flipping front door was made out of mohagony.

My thoughts are interrupted as I hear the front door open. I step forward, out of the sun, so that I can see who I'm working for today.

Wow. I still remember the feeling of being speechless, as if my tongue had been swallowed by my own throat. Standing before was a woman. Not just any old or ugly woman. NO. This one was a babe. She was wearing those short shorts that just hugged her butt, and showing off her long smooth legs. Above her butt she was wearing a shirt that had been tied up so that it was exposing a midriff, her tanned tummy looking firm and sexy. And above her hot tummy? Woah, very good looking breasts that were being shown enough that you could get a good look at them, but concealing enough so that some was still left up to the imagination.
To top it all off, her face. With hair as black as a moonless night, and eyes as blue as the pearly ocean, I felt like I could stare at her for an eternity. She seemed like she was some goddess, and here I was staring at her.

"Hello?..."
My thoughts are interrupted as she speaks, making me realise that I'd been staring.
"Yes. Hello. My name is John Smith and I'm here to clean the pool." I said while reaching out for a handshake.
"Brilliant" She grasped my hand in a firm handshake. "Please come in and I'll let you get to work."
"Thanks"

She showed me to the pool, and then went back into the mansion she probably called home as I started cleaning. Half an hour passed without a single sight of her, even though I was definitely keeping my eye out on her. Half an hour turned into an hour. Still no sign. And then, I heard a sliding door roll back. And there she was. Dressed just as before, except for that she was wearing a pair of black sunglasses that framed her face and complemented her dark hair beautifully. In her hand she appeared to be carrying what looked like a bottle of suntan lotion. Intrigued, I kept on working, but making sure that I could always see her out of the corner of my eye.
She proceeded to sit down on a beach chair that was close to the pool, and started to apply suntan lotion all over her gorgeous figure. I could barely concentrate on my work as this gorgeous woman rubbed that lotion over her legs than her midriff than shoulders and finally face. I felt my body respond, and my pants grew tighter as a boner began to grow. She seemed to be having trouble getting lotion onto her back though. She tried several times to rub it in, but each time she failed.

It was at this time I was started to sincerely contemplate going over there and offering to help her. My mind waged back and forth, part of me already tired and just wanting to get back home. However the choice ended up not being mine
"Excuse me" I heard.
I turned, hoping that she was talking to me.
"Hi John. I was wondering if you could just help me for a sec, rub this suntan lotion on my back?" she said, reaching my ears as a beautiful melody.
"Sure" I called back, setting my equipment down as I walked over to where she was lying down.
"The bottle of suntan lotion is just next to my chair, if you could please rub it in on my back" she cooed, while taking off her shirt, exposing a black bra beneath it. She layed down on the chair, face first so that I could rub it into her back. But I wasn't looking at her back. I was looking at her butt. Her glorious, firm butt that was just every slightly poking out, inviting me to grab each cheek in my hands.

"John?" she asked
"Sorry" I mumbled as I quickly squirted some lotion into my hands "Just had some diffuculty with the bottle"
"Haha" she softly chuckled "Sure you were"
Not knowing what to say to that as a response, I just got straight into applying the lotion onto her back. My hands caressed her body, rubbing it into every bit of open skin that I could find. I was so glad that I had taken that massaging course years ago...I knew it would pay off one day.

Minutes passed and I just kept going. What started out as a simple application of suntan lotion turned into a lenghty massage. I started to feel her become responsive to my touch. A slight squirm there and little sigh of pleasure here. I could tell that I was beginning to make her aroused. Not wanting to waste this once of lifetime opportunity, I decided that I'd take it a bit further. I began to massage the bottom of her feet, then up to her ankles. From there I worked up to the knees and from there to the thighs. Her skin was so soft to the touch, her legs so tanned and sexy, that I felt my boner grow even bigger. My head began to swim with the arousement that was beginning to a hold of me. But I didn't stop.

My massaging hands explored ever further up her legs, until I reached her upper thigh, just where her short shorts came to a stop. As I kept massaging, I could hear that she was trying to stifle her sighs and groans of pleasure as my hands did their job. Suddenly, not being able to take resist the enticement of her arousal any longer, she quickly sat up.

My heart sank. I had come so close, only to what seemed to be rejected. However I was wrong. She leaned forward and enveloped my lips in her lips, my mouth in her mouth. Our tongues touched and danced with one another as we kissed one another with a desperation that only seperated lovers could know. I broke the kiss to get a breath of fresh air. My heart raced with adrenaline. And as we looked into one another's eyes, it became too much, and we resumed kissing one another. My lips left hers, and trailed down her body, softly carressing her neck, then her shoulders, and finally the breasts. Her breathing quickened as she started to moan my name. "John.... John... John" she gasped breathlessly "Thank you. Thank you so much.."

"Your welcome" I whispered in her ear "Get rea-"
She raised her finger to my lips, silencing me with a single action.
"Thank you" she said "for getting me horney for when my husband comes home. He will be so happy with me." She stood up, and smiled at me. "Maybe next time" she uttered. And with that she walked across the coutyard and back into the house, closing the sliding door behind her.

title: The Pool Man and the House Wife

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the twist ending.

answer: The pool man suspects that the "hot" housewife meant to get him aroused and massage her so that her husband could be happy with her. However the husband arrives while they are kissing and it is implied that the housewife meant to her husband that the pool man had sex with her.

text:
-The pool man did not suspect anything.
-The story does not mention the husband's arrival, talk less of the housewife mentioning a sexual act with the pool man to her husband.

The answer given is highly inaccurate and not according to the story and should be rewritten.

refinement: The housewife wanted the narrator to put some suntan lotion on her back. However, after feeling him rub lotion into her back, she initiated a passionate make-out session. The narrator thought that the woman was going to have sex with him. Just as he prepared for the act, she stopped him. She then revealed that she only wanted him to get her horny for when her husband came home.

answer: The pool man encounters the house wife while tending to her pool and she finds him attractive. The house wife originally asks the pool man to simply rub lotion on her back, but they soon begin to kiss passionately. She then entices the pool man further, requesting that he continue further and play with her breasts. The pool man agrees and they both realize how hot they both are and how turned on they were by each other. The house wife ends the encounter by thanking the pool man and telling him that her husband will be pleased when he gets home and sees her horny.

text:
-The story does not mention that the housewife found the pool man attractive. There was no indication that she was attracted to him.
-She didn't request the pool man to play with her breasts. The pool man did so on his own.

The model should consider rewriting these inaccuracies.

refinement: The housewife asks the pool man to rub lotion on her back. While rubbing her back, they soon begin to kiss passionately. The pool man entices her further by playing with her breasts and kissing her neck and shoulders. However, the housewife ends the encounter by thanking the pool man and telling him that her husband will be pleased when he gets home and sees her horny.

answer: The woman made advances at John and after kissing, said she would "do" him when her husband comes home. Many of the details underscore conclusions she might have had a proper domestic life. She's married to rich guy, she lives in a luxurious home, brings her pool boy to her home and expects cooperation in servicing her; all of which she expects to be maintained while her husband would be home any minute.

text: None of the details in the answer is accurate and according to the story. These details are made up and should be rewritten accurately.

refinement: The housewife wanted the narrator to put some suntan lotion on her back. However, after feeling him rub lotion into her back, she initiated a passionate make-out session. The narrator thought that the woman was going to have sex with him. Just as he prepared for the act, she stopped him. She then revealed that she only wanted him to get her horny for when her husband came home.

answer: The homeowner was actually a young, beautiful housewife who was not expecting anyone to be pool cleaning that day. The pool cleaner caught her eye, and after feeling him rub lotion into her back, she initiated a passionate make out session, promising the pool cleaner that her husband would be glad when he came back home that night.

text: -The first line of the answer is irrelevant and has nothing to do with the plot's twist ending. This should be removed.

refinement: The pool cleaner caught her eye, and after feeling him rub lotion into her back, she initiated a passionate make out session, promising the pool cleaner that her husband would be glad when he came back home that night.

text:
-The story didn't give any indication that she was attracted to the pool cleaner. That line should be removed for the sake of accuracy.
-The last line of the answer should be rewritten more accurately.

refinement: The housewife wanted the narrator to put some suntan lotion on her back. However, after feeling him rub lotion into her back, she initiated a passionate make-out session. The narrator thought that the woman was going to have sex with him. Just as he prepared for the act, she stopped him. She then revealed that she only wanted him to get her horny for when her husband came home.

answer: The narrator believes that the woman is going to have sex with him. Just as he prepares for the act, she stops him. She then reveals that she only wanted him to get her horny for when her husband comes home.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the escalation of the narrator's interactions with the woman.

answer: The narrator first sees a beautiful woman and is briefly speechless. The woman requests his help with applying the sun tan lotion, which the narrator takes as an opportunity to touch her. The woman then begins to enjoy his massage. The narrator goes further up her thighs and she becomes aroused. She invites him to stay when her husband comes home and they kiss.

text:
-The first line of the answer should be rewritten.
-The story does not mention that the woman invited the narrator to stay when her husband returns. it should be replaced with something more accurate from the story.

refinement: The narrator first encounters the woman when he appears at her doorstep and is taken by her beauty. He reveals himself as the pool man and she takes him to the pool to work. Later, the woman requests his help with applying the sun tan lotion, which the narrator takes as an opportunity to touch her. The woman then begins to enjoy his massage. The narrator goes further up her thighs and she becomes aroused. She kisses the narrator and he kisses her back, proceeding to have sex with her. However, she stops him and thanks him for making her horny for her husband, pending his return home.

text: -The word suntan appears miswritten. The model should rewrite this correctly.

refinement: The narrator first encounters the woman when he appears at her doorstep and is taken by her beauty. He reveals himself as the pool man, and she takes him to the pool to work. Later, the woman requests his help with applying the suntan lotion, which the narrator takes as an opportunity to touch her. The woman then begins to enjoy his massage. The narrator goes further up her thighs, and she becomes aroused. She kisses the narrator, and he kisses her back, proceeding to have sex with her. However, she stops him and thanks him for making her horny for her husband, pending his return home.

answer: He first sees her through the door, noticing her beautiful body. She seems unbothered, inviting him in. She gives him the pool's location, and then he begins to pay attention to his work. She ends up coming to get her back rubbed, and then she advances to kissing the narrator.

answer: The woman asks him to massage her back. The massage becomes an almost sexual session. She rewards him by kissing him. She proceeds to take her clothes off and then says she has to go back to the house. She leaves her with te implication that she might do it again the following day.

text: 'the' is written as 'te.' Also, it refers to the narrator as 'her' instead of 'him.' The model should correct these errors in the answer.

refinement: The woman asks him to massage her back. The massage becomes an almost sexual session. Then she rewards him by kissing him. She proceeds to take her clothes off and then says she has to go back to the house. She leaves him with the implication that she might do it again the following day.

text:
-The story does not mention the woman taking off her clothes while kissing the narrator.
-The story does not mention that she said she has to go back into the house.
-The story does not imply that they would continue their act the following day.
These lines should be written more accurately.

refinement: The woman asks him to massage her back. The massage becomes an almost sexual session. Then she rewards him by kissing him. However, she stops kissing him and thanks him for making her horny for her husband, pending his return home.

answer: The narrator started by cleaning the pool in the woman's mansion, and soon found that she was enchanted by her beauty. When the woman asked for help with applying sun tan lotion, the narrator agreed and started a lengthy massage. Once the woman became aroused, the narrator took things further and started to kiss her. The woman gasps breathlessly and thanks the narrator before disappearing into the house and leaving him aroused.

text:
-The answer incorrectly refers to the narrator as 'she' instead of 'he.'
-The word suntan seems to be miswritten. The model should consider rewriting it correctly.
-The verbs used in the concluding line of the answer are not consistent with the others. The model should consider sticking with a verb form throughout.

refinement: The narrator started by cleaning the pool in the woman's mansion and soon found that he was enchanted by her beauty. When the woman asked for help with applying suntan lotion, the narrator agreed and started a lengthy massage. Once the woman became aroused, the narrator took things further and started to kiss her. The woman gasped breathlessly and thanked the narrator before disappearing into the house and leaving him aroused.

text: The model mentioned that the narrator kissed the woman, implying that he initiated the kiss. This is not according to the story and should be rewritten correctly.

refinement: The narrator started by cleaning the pool in the woman's mansion and soon found that he was enchanted by her beauty. When the woman asked for help with applying suntan lotion, the narrator agreed and started a lengthy massage. Once the woman became aroused, she rewarded the narrator with a passionate kiss, and they took things further by engaging in a heavy makeout session. The woman gasped breathlessly and thanked the narrator before disappearing into the house and leaving him aroused.

text: The answer omits why she thanked him. The model should state it accordingly.

refinement: The narrator started by cleaning the pool in the woman's mansion and soon found that he was enchanted by her beauty. When the woman asked for help with applying suntan lotion, the narrator agreed and started a lengthy massage. Once the woman became aroused, she rewarded the narrator with a passionate kiss, and they took things further by engaging in a heavy makeout session. The woman gasped breathlessly and thanked the narrator for getting her horny for her husband before disappearing into the house, leaving him aroused.

answer: At first, he rubs the suntan lotion on her body. This turns into a massage. He works his way up to her thighs. She then kisses him. He kisses her lips, her neck, shoulders, and breasts.

text: The answer omits how he began rubbing suntan lotion on her and their concluding interaction after they kiss.

refinement: At first, he rubbed the suntan lotion on her body after she requested him to. This act then turned into a massage. He worked his way up to her thighs, which further aroused her. She rewarded him with a kiss, and he reciprocated by kissing her lips, neck, shoulders, and breasts. Afterward, she stopped the act and thanked him for making her horny for her husband before leaving his presence.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the pool man's motivation?

answer: He's simply a pool cleaner, so there is no other motivation than just to make the job quick and easy.

text: The answer does not mention that the pool man is sexually attracted to the housewife and hoped to get physical with her. The model should consider rewriting this answer.

refinement: The pool man is sexually attracted to the housewife. He sees an opportunity to get physical with her when she requests him to rub suntan lotion on her back. Finally, his dream is actualized when she kisses him, and he proceeds to kiss and touch her.

answer: The pool man's motivation was purely sexual; he wanted to turn the house wife on in order to please her husband.

text: The model inaccurately mentions that he wanted to turn the housewife on for her husband. The model should consider rewriting this line correctly.

refinement: The pool man's motivation was purely sexual. He was sexually attracted to the housewife from the first time he saw her. He finally had the opportunity to get physical with her when she asked him to rub suntan lotion on her back and later kissed him.

answer: He finds the woman incredibly attractive. He wants to have sex with her.

answer: The pool man's motivation is to sexually arouse the housewife so that her husband will be happier when he returns home.

text: The story does not say that the narrator hoped to arouse the housewife for her husband, which is inaccurate. The model should consider rewriting this.

refinement: The pool man is sexually attracted to the housewife. He sees an opportunity to get physical with her when she requests him to rub suntan lotion on her back. Finally, his dream is actualized when she kisses him, and he proceeds to kiss and touch her.

answer: The narrator wants to have sex with the housewife.