text:
Along the roadside in a dusty, barren countryside, there lived an old woman who never spoke to anyone.  In fact, nobody even knew her name.  She never left her house, and few ever even claimed to have seen her at all, lest knew what she looked like.  She ate only the food she grew in her garden, although no one ever seemed to see her actually gardening.  It would just be barren and then repopulated with fruits, vegetables, and grains.  It is safe to say that many people in the nearby town of Misgave thought the woman to be pretty odd indeed.  The oldest residents of the town of Misgave even tell stories of when they were young, recounting their knowledge of the odd woman who lived in the house by the dusty roadside.  Many thought this to be impossible, as the old townsfolk were very old themselves, and how old would this make the woman?  Most likely it was an old wive's tale passed on generation to generation, but the old townsfolk insisted that their stories were true.  And especially older gentleman by the name of Took Adams even claimed he met with the old woman when he was a boy, about 9 or 10 years old, and that she invited him in for lunch one day since he found himself wandering the old dusty overgrown road by the woman's house by himself, no doubt daydreaming about cowboys, or being a famous gunslinger himself.  Took Adams tells of the woman being cheerful in nature, with an odd mysticism about her, and that her hair smelled faintly of old sage and basil.  Once during their lunch, he asserts, she offered him some sweet candy that she said she made from the ingredients of her garden.  Took claims it was the sweetest and most delicious candy he'd ever tasted, but at some point during their lunch, the old woman became angry with him, and showed a side of herself that he hadn't expected.  He later told of seeing a sort of fire in her eye, and teeth bared, stained a putrid green.  Took said the woman quickly regained her composure, and delightfully sent him on his way and told him that perhaps he shouldn't wander this far down the road again.  This story has no doubt been embellished over the years, most so by old Took himself, perhaps to make himself more exciting or interesting, as he desired the company of people more in their youth, so as to feel younger himself, as older people tend to do.  "She must be close to 110 years old by now!"  Took would exclaim to anyone that would listen.

In the barren countryside, along that dusty roadside, more dust than usual was spitting and clouding up.  A car was zooming past the old woman's house.  "Be careful Aaron!  This road isn't exactly the autobahn as you've probably noticed.  Slow down man!"  Riley Trainer was very protective of his new car, and allowing his younger brother Aaron to drive his new Chevy Volt even a couple miles during their cross country road trip was nerve racking to him.  The fact that Aaron was thoroughly testing the shocks in the Volt on a country road was most displeasing to him.  "Alright alright, sorry, I'll let you get back to your precious driver's seat", but just as he finished his placating to Riley, a loud *SNAP* emitted from under the car, and a *POP* and *SCRAAAAPE* came from under the hood.  The car rolled to a stop about a hundred yards from an old looking house down the road.  "Shit, man!  If you screwed up my car I'm going to kill you!  Get out, let's check it out."  Riley jumped out of the car and began inspecting the damage.  Aaron sheepishly opened the driver side door and put his hands in his pockets, sauntering over to his brother who was on his hands and knees examining the underside of the car.  "I'm sorry Riley, I wasn't going that fast, I was even slowing down when it happened."  "It's alright, it's alright, let's just see if we can get it started again and drive it to the nearest town."  Riley sounded exasperated, or possibly relieved that his younger brother was no longer driving the car, albeit at the expense of his newly acquired vehicle.  "Hey, Riles, why don't we just walk to that house and call a tow truck or something from there?"  Both boys turned their gaze to the distant house on the side of the dusty road.  It puffed out a calming cloud of white smoke from the chimney and the two brothers exchanged satisfied glances.  "At least someone's home", Riley stated simply.  They began walking to the odd looking house when all of a sudden a light burst on from the inside of the dwelling.  A bright, light pink glow seemed to emanate from deep inside the old place…

To be continued…

title: First chapter of a book I'm writing (please give feedback)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who are the main characters of the story?

answer: Two brothers, Riley Trainer and Aaron Trainer.

text: Add the old woman.

refinement: Two brothers, Riley Trainer and Aaron Trainer, and a mysterious old woman who has been the subject of local legend for years.

answer: The main characters of the story are Riley and Aaron Trainer.

text: Add the old woman.

refinement: The main characters of the story are Riley and Aaron Trainer and a mysterious old woman who has been the subject of local legend for years.

answer: The main characters are Riley and Aaron. They are brothers on a cross country trip together. Riley was driving the car before it broke down, and Aaron proposed they walk to the possible assistance of a house nearby. The house turns out to be the home of an old woman with strange mysticism.

text: This can be simplified by removing the last two sentences

refinement: The main characters are Riley and Aaron. They are brothers on a cross country trip together.

text: Add the old woman they are likely to come across.

refinement: The main characters are Riley and Aaron, brothers on a cross country trip together, and a mysterious old woman who has been the subject of local legend for years.

answer: a woman the townspeople consider to be odd, Took claims he met with her and came to her home for luncheon when he was a boy

text: Add the brothers Riley and Aaron Trainer

refinement: a woman the townspeople consider to be odd, Took claims he met with her and came to her home for luncheon when he was a boy, and road-tripping brothers Riley and Aaron Trainer

text: Remove the Took clause

refinement: a woman the townspeople consider to be odd and road-tripping brothers Riley and Aaron Trainer

answer: The odd old woman, Took Adams, Aaron, and Riley Trainer

text: Took Adams seems to be mentioned as an anecdote about the old woman; he's unlikely a main character, so remove his name.

refinement: The odd old woman, Aaron, and Riley Trainer

text: Remove the comma after 'Aaron' because he shares a surname with Riley.

refinement: The odd old woman, Aaron and Riley Trainer

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where does the story take place?

answer: In a barren countryside.

answer: A barren countryside near the town of Misgave.

answer: The story takes place in a dusty and barren countryside along a roadside.

text: Place 'along a roadside' before 'in a dusty and barren countryside' for flow

refinement: The story takes place along a roadside in a dusty and barren countryside.

answer: Near the town of Misgave in an unnamed country.

answer: The story takes place in a deserted countryside by a dusty roadside.

text: Switch the positioning of the descriptors 'in a deserted countryside' and 'by a dusty roadside' for flow

refinement: The story takes place by a dusty roadside in a deserted countryside.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the old woman's story?

answer: The old woman appears to live in relative isolation and is believed by many to be rather peculiar. The stories told by the townspeople about her suggest she is somewhere near 110 years old, and has an unpredictable temperament. Various incidents including a candy provided to a young boy, flared anger, and apparent teleportation have also contributed to her 'odd' status. The car crash near her house puts the boys in her path; she subsequently surprises them by appearing in the doorway.

text: Inaccuracy: she doesn't appear in the doorway, replace this with the strangeness of the light

refinement: The old woman appears to live in relative isolation and is believed by many to be rather peculiar. The stories told by the townspeople about her suggest she is somewhere near 110 years old, and has an unpredictable temperament. Various incidents including a candy provided to a young boy, flared anger, and apparent teleportation have also contributed to her 'odd' status. The car crash near her house puts the boys in her path; they are surprised by the strange light coming from her house.

text: There is no indication of 'apparent teleportation' in the passage, so remove this

refinement: The old woman appears to live in relative isolation and is believed by many to be rather peculiar. The stories told by the townspeople about her suggest she is somewhere near 110 years old, and has an unpredictable temperament. Various incidents including a candy provided to a young boy and flared anger have also contributed to her 'odd' status. The car crash near her house puts the boys in her path; they are surprised by the strange light coming from her house.

answer: According to the old townsfolk, the old woman was caring and pleasant to kids. However, the closer Riley and Aaron head for the old woman's house, strange things begin to happen.

text: Replace 'caring and pleasant to kids' with 'odd and mystical' for accuracy.

refinement: According to the old townsfolk, the old woman was odd and mystical. However, the closer Riley and Aaron head for the old woman's house, strange things begin to happen.

text: Remove 'However' as the two sentences now agree.

refinement: According to the old townsfolk, the old woman was odd and mystical. The closer Riley and Aaron head for the old woman's house, strange things begin to happen.

answer: The old woman never speaks to anyone and is believed to be extremely old. The oldest townspeople say that they have heard stories about her when they were younger and she is supposedly very strange. Took Adams claims he visited the old woman when he was younger and she showed a disturbing, angry side. The old woman is currently 110 years old according to Took. The boys were walking to the house when she turned on the lights inside.

text: Clarify who 'the boys' are, to separate the timeline.

refinement: The old woman never speaks to anyone and is believed to be extremely old. The oldest townspeople say that they have heard stories about her when they were younger and she is supposedly very strange. Took Adams claims he visited the old woman when he was younger and she showed a disturbing, angry side. The old woman is currently 110 years old according to Took. The traveling Trainer brothers are walking to the house when she turned on the lights inside.

text: Change 'she turned on the lights inside' to 'mysterious pink light emanates from it' for accuracy

refinement: The old woman never speaks to anyone and is believed to be extremely old. The oldest townspeople say that they have heard stories about her when they were younger and she is supposedly very strange. Took Adams claims he visited the old woman when he was younger and she showed a disturbing, angry side. The old woman is currently 110 years old according to Took. The traveling Trainer brothers are walking to the house when mysterious pink light emanates from it.

answer: Whether she's really an 110-year-old witch who changes between an old woman and a flashy hipster witch.

text: There is no allusion or mention of her possibly being 'a flashy hipster witch' - remove this.

refinement: Whether she's really an 110-year-old witch who changes between an old woman.

text: There are witchy implications, but it would be more accurate to highlight the mystery than to describe her as a witch.

refinement: How mysterious and odd she is and whether she's really a 110-year-old old woman.

text: The phrasing should be changed from descriptive to more of a statement, to better answer the question.

refinement: There is speculation on how mysterious and odd she is and whether she's really a 110-year-old old woman.

answer: She's been living alone in the barren countryside for a very long time, but no one has ever seen her.

text: 'no one has ever seen her' is inaccurate; people have told stories of meeting her, change the phrasing to reflect this vagueness

refinement: She's been living alone in the barren countryside for a very long time, though no one has quite confirmed local tales of meeting her.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is Took Adams?

answer: It's not clear. He claims to have met the old woman as a young boy and to have eaten her candy.

text: Remove 'It's not clear.' as a clear answer is subsequently given.

refinement: He claims to have met the old woman as a young boy and to have eaten her candy.

answer: Took Adams is one of the older gentleman who claims to have met the old woman in his youth.

text: Grammar: 'gentleman' should be plural here.

refinement: Took Adams is one of the older gentlemen who claims to have met the old woman in his youth.

answer: He claims to have met the old woman when he was 9 or 10 years old.

text: Add that is one of the older townsfolk.

refinement: He is one of the older townsfolk, and claims to have met the old woman when he was 9 or 10 years old.

answer: Took Adams is the older gentleman who has claimed to have met with the old woman living by the dusty roadside when he was a boy.

text: Add that is one of the townsfolk.

refinement: Took Adams is one of the townsfolk, an older gentleman who has claimed to have met with the old woman living by the dusty roadside when he was a boy.

answer: Took Adams is an elderly gentleman from the town of Misgave who claims to have had a meal with a strange old woman who lived by the dusty roadside many years ago.

question: Write a ~7 sentence summary.

answer:
It seems an old lady was hiding in an old house. She seldom nor seldom talked. She was also called "strange by the residents". They say she would give some candies to kids and some old men on the road. Whenever anyone approached her, her attitude would change.

Riley Trainer doesn't get along with his little brother Aaron. Aaron breaks the tires of the car he was driving. The car comes to a stop near an old residence. On noticing a light coming from the house, they decide to go there. It would be a different direction from the closest town.

text: Omit for length and inaccuracy: 'She seldom nor seldom talked. They say she would give some candies to kids and some old men on the road. Whenever anyone approached her, her attitude would change.'

refinement:
It seems an old lady was hiding in an old house. She was also called "strange by the residents".

Riley Trainer doesn't get along with his little brother Aaron. Aaron breaks the tires of the car he was driving. The car comes to a stop near an old residence. On noticing a light coming from the house, they decide to go there. It would be a different direction from the closest town.

text: Change 'hiding' to 'living' for accuracy.

refinement:
It seems an old lady was living in an old house. She was also called "strange by the residents".

Riley Trainer doesn't get along with his little brother Aaron. Aaron breaks the tires of the car he was driving. The car comes to a stop near an old residence. On noticing a light coming from the house, they decide to go there. It would be a different direction from the closest town.

text: Remove quotation marks.

refinement:
It seems an old lady was living in an old house. She was also called strange by the residents.

Riley Trainer doesn't get along with his little brother Aaron. Aaron breaks the tires of the car he was driving. The car comes to a stop near an old residence. On noticing a light coming from the house, they decide to go there. It would be a different direction from the closest town.

text: Omit 'also' for flow

refinement:
It seems an old lady was living in an old house. She was called strange by the residents.

Riley Trainer doesn't get along with his little brother Aaron. Aaron breaks the tires of the car he was driving. The car comes to a stop near an old residence. On noticing a light coming from the house, they decide to go there. It would be a different direction from the closest town.

text: For accuracy, change 'doesn't get along' to 'is on a road trip'

refinement:
It seems an old lady was living in an old house. She was called strange by the residents.

Riley Trainer is on a road trip with his little brother Aaron. Aaron breaks the tires of the car he was driving. The car comes to a stop near an old residence. On noticing a light coming from the house, they decide to go there. It would be a different direction from the closest town.

text: 'breaks' should be 'brakes'

refinement:
It seems an old lady was living in an old house. She was called strange by the residents.

Riley Trainer is on a road trip with his little brother Aaron. Aaron brakes the tires of the car he was driving. The car comes to a stop near an old residence. On noticing a light coming from the house, they decide to go there. It would be a different direction from the closest town.

answer: An old woman lived in a dusty, barren countryside town of Misgave. The residents of Misgave remember a time when the woman actually spoke to one of them, around 9 or 10 years old. Legend says she had a magic side and snapped at a child during the lunch. The old townsfolk said she was a pest, yet there are other reports of her casting enchanting spells. She is reputed to be 110 years old. A car breaks down by her house. The brothers go to fix the car. They are confronted by an apparition coming out of the house that is made of light.

text: Omit the last sentence for length and inaccuracy.

refinement: An old woman lived in a dusty, barren countryside town of Misgave. The residents of Misgave remember a time when the woman actually spoke to one of them, around 9 or 10 years old. Legend says she had a magic side and snapped at a child during the lunch. The old townsfolk said she was a pest, yet there are other reports of her casting enchanting spells. She is reputed to be 110 years old. A car breaks down by her house. The brothers go to fix the car.

text: 'The old townsfolk said she was a pest, yet there are other reports of her casting enchanting spells.' This is not true, omit this line

refinement: An old woman lived in a dusty, barren countryside town of Misgave. The residents of Misgave remember a time when the woman actually spoke to one of them, around 9 or 10 years old. Legend says she had a magic side and snapped at a child during the lunch. She is reputed to be 110 years old. A car breaks down by her house. The brothers go to fix the car.

text: For length and clarity, add a sentence about the brothers.

refinement: An old woman lived in a dusty, barren countryside town of Misgave. The residents of Misgave remember a time when the woman actually spoke to one of them, around 9 or 10 years old. Legend says she had a magic side and snapped at a child during the lunch. She is reputed to be 110 years old. A car breaks down by her house. Riley Trainer is just glad his brother Aaron isn't driving anymore. The brothers go to fix the car.

answer: Aaron and Riley's car breaks down on a dusty remote road, and they happen upon an old house where a woman lights up the interior with a bright pink glow. The brothers quickly walk to the house and are relieved to find somebody is actually there to help them. The woman appears eccentric and displays an unexpectedly volatile side as well.

text: Move the last sentence up to the beginning and frame it around the background of the town's mysterious old woman.

refinement:
Near the town of Misgave is said to live a strange old woman who is impossibly old. The woman appears eccentric and displays an unexpectedly volatile side as well. This is mostly based on the story of an older gentleman in the town who claims to have had lunch with her as a boy. He described her as having a mystical air and being at least 110 years old.

Aaron and Riley's car breaks down on a dusty remote road, and they happen upon an old house where a woman lights up the interior with a bright pink glow. The brothers quickly walk to the house and are relieved to find somebody is actually there to help them.

text: Separate the following sentence into 2 to accommodate the desired length: 'Aaron and Riley's car breaks down on a dusty remote road, and they happen upon an old house where a woman lights up the interior with a bright pink glow.'

refinement:
Near the town of Misgave is said to live a strange old woman who is impossibly old. The woman appears eccentric and displays an unexpectedly volatile side as well. This is mostly based on the story of an older gentleman in the town who claims to have had lunch with her as a boy. He described her as having a mystical air and being at least 110 years old.

Aaron and Riley's car breaks down on a dusty remote road. They happen upon an old house where a woman lights up the interior with a bright pink glow. The brothers quickly walk to the house and are relieved to find somebody is actually there to help them.

answer: Two young brothers, traveling cross-country on an autobahn, break down near an old woman's house. They decide to walk to it to find help and discover a pinkish light very deep inside it. The brothers soon realize that the woman is close to 110 years old, but they're surprised to find that her demeanor is cheerful and inviting. She seems to enjoy entertaining company, and they become curious about her secrets.

text: The road is specifically '[not] exactly the autobahn' so omit this detail

refinement: Two young brothers, traveling cross-country, break down near an old woman's house. They decide to walk to it to find help and discover a pinkish light very deep inside it. The brothers soon realize that the woman is close to 110 years old, but they're surprised to find that her demeanor is cheerful and inviting. She seems to enjoy entertaining company, and they become curious about her secrets.

text: Inaccurate: 'The brothers soon realize that the woman is close to 110 years old, but they're surprised to find that her demeanor is cheerful and inviting.' Change this from the brothers to a local boy in the past.

refinement: Two young brothers, traveling cross-country, break down near an old woman's house. They decide to walk to it to find help and discover a pinkish light very deep inside it. In a nearby town, a local man tells stories about the old woman living out there, close to 110 years old, and his surprise to find that her demeanor was cheerful and inviting when he wandered by her house and stayed for lunch. She seems to enjoy entertaining company, and they become curious about her secrets.

text: Change this to past tense and clarify that it's (now) the town who are curious: 'She seems to enjoy entertaining company, and they become curious about her secrets.'

refinement: Two young brothers, traveling cross-country, break down near an old woman's house. They decide to walk to it to find help and discover a pinkish light very deep inside it. In a nearby town, a local man tells stories about the old woman living out there, close to 110 years old, and his surprise to find that her demeanor was cheerful and inviting when he wandered by her house as a boy and stayed for lunch. She seemed to enjoy entertaining company, and the town is curious about her secrets.

answer: Near the town of Misgave, a mysterious old woman lives alone in her odd-looking house along the dusty and barren countryside. No one has ever seen the old woman outside her house or in town, although she has been living there for what seems like generations. The oldest residents of Misgave are adamant the old woman is real, and one elderly resident, Took Adams, claims to have met and had lunch with the old woman when he was a 9-year-old boy. Took how the woman changed into something with fiery eyes and putrid green teeth when she got angry. On the same dusty road, Aaron Trainer is driving his brother Riley's new car, when it breaks down near the old woman's house. They go down to check and Riley makes plans to walk to the nearest town. Aaron suggests they try to use the phone in the odd-looking house to call for help when a sudden burst of bright, pink light starts glowing from within.


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George Stewart}}

GEORGE STEWART (born 1883)[1] was a Scottish professional footballer, who played for Hibernian, Manchester City, Partick Thistle and the Scottish national team.

Stewart, an outside right,[2] started his professional career with Hibernian in 1902. He scored 9 goals in 19 appearances during their league championship win in 1902–03.[3] He made his Scotland debut in a 2–0 defeat by Wales at Tynecastle in the 1906 British Home Championship, and then also played in the 2–1 victory against England in the same tournament.[4]

Stewart was transferred to Manchester City at the end of that season for £650, which was a substantial transfer fee (he record fee at the time, for the transfer of Alf Common, was £1000).[5] Stewart won two further international caps and made over 100 league appearances for City, before ending his career with Partick Thistle in 1912.[6]

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[2]

[3] Scottish League 1902/03 , RSSSF.

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[5] Mackay, p. 80.

[6]

title: George Stewart (footballer, born 1883)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What teams did George Stewart play for?

answer: He played for Manchester City, Partick Thistle and the Scottish national team.

text: Does not mention that he also played for Hibernian.

refinement: He played for Hibernian, Manchester City, Partick Thistle and the Scottish national team.

answer: Hibernian, Manchester City, Partick Thistle, and the Scottish national team

answer: Stewart played for Hibernian and Manchester City.

text: Fails to mention two of the teams he played for (Partick Thistle and the Scottish national team).

refinement: Stewart played for Hibernian, Manchester City, Partick Thistle, and the Scottish national team.

answer: George Stewart played for Hibernian, Manchester City and Partick Thistle.

text: Does not mention the Scottish national team.

refinement: George Stewart played for Hibernian, Manchester City, Partick Thistle, and the Scottish national team.

answer: Hibernian, Manchester City, Partick Thistle, and the Scottish national team.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When did George Stewart make his debut?

answer: George Stewart made his debut in 1902.

text: "Stewart, an outside right,[2] started his professional career with Hibernian in 1902" is evidence that Stewart made his debut in 1902.

answer: George Stewart made his debut for the Scottish national team in 1906.

text: While he made his Scotland debut in 1906, the question concerns his overall debut.

refinement: George Stewart made his debut with Hibernian in 1902.

answer: George played his first premier league match at age 22.

text: This statement is unattested.

text: Empty answer.

answer: George Stewart made his Scotland debut in the 1906 British Home Championship.

text: While this is true, the question is asking about his overall debut.

refinement: George Stewart made his debut in 1902 with Hibernian.

answer: His professional career began in 1902.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize George Stewart's actions during the 1906 British Home Championship.

answer: George Stewart played in two matches for Scotland during the British Home Championship in 1906. He won his first cap in a 2-0 defeat by Wales at Tynecastle, and also played in the 2-1 victory against England.

text: There is no evidence that he won a cap in the match against Wales.

refinement: George Stewart played in two matches for Scotland during the British Home Championship in 1906. His team was defeated 2-0 by Wales at Tynecastle, and he also played in the 2-1 victory against England.

text: "He made his Scotland debut in a 2–0 defeat by Wales at Tynecastle in the 1906 British Home Championship, and then also played in the 2–1 victory against England in the same tournament" is evidence that he played two matches for Scotland during the tournament.

answer: He made his Scotland debut in a 2-0 defeat by Wales at Tynecastle. He also played in the 2-1 victory against England in the same tournament.

answer: He played for Scotland, debuting in a match against Wales in which they lost 2-0. He also played in their match against England, which they won 2-1.

answer: George debuted with Scotland in a 2-0 defeat against Wales. He played in the 2-1 victory against England in the same tournament.

answer: George Stewart played for Scotland in two matches in the 1906 British Home Championship, both against Wales and England respectively. He was transferred to Manchester City at the end of that campaign.

text: Does not describe the outcome of those match.

refinement: George Stewart played for Scotland in two matches in the 1906 British Home Championship, both in the 2-0 loss against Wales and the 2-1 victory against England respectively. He was transferred to Manchester City at the end of that campaign.

text: The fact that he was transferred is irrelevant to the question.

refinement: George Stewart played for Scotland in two matches in the 1906 British Home Championship, both in the 2-0 loss against Wales and the 2-1 victory against England respectively.

text: The words "both" and "respectively" are unnecessary and confusing here.

refinement: George Stewart played for Scotland in two matches in the 1906 British Home Championship, in the 2-0 loss against Wales and the 2-1 victory against England.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When did George Stewart retire?

answer: 1912

text: "before ending his career with Partick Thistle in 1912" is evidence that he retired in 1912.

answer: 1912

text: "before ending his career with Partick Thistle in 1912" is evidence that he retired in 1912.

answer: George Stewart retired in 1912.

text: "before ending his career with Partick Thistle in 1912" is evidence that he retired in 1912.

answer: George Stewart retired in 1912.

text: "before ending his career with Partick Thistle in 1912" is evidence that he retired in 1912.

answer: George Stewart retired in 1912.

text: "before ending his career with Partick Thistle in 1912" is evidence that he retired in 1912.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: George Stewart was a Scottish footballer who played for Hibernian, Manchester City, Partick Thistle and the Scottish national team. He began his career in 1902 and retired in 1912.

text: "before ending his career with Partick Thistle in 1912" is evidence that he retired in 1912.

text: "started his professional career with Hibernian in 1902" is evidence that he began his career in 1902.

answer: George Stewart was a Scottish professional footballer who began his professional career at Hibernian in 1902. He played for Manchester City, before ending his career with Partick Thistle in 1912. Stewart made nineteen appearances for Hibs, scoring nine goals, before transferring to Manchester City in 1906 at a substantial transfer fee. He earned two further international caps during his time at Manchester City and made over 100 appearances for the club.

text: "Stewart was transferred to Manchester City at the end of that season for £650, which was a substantial transfer fee" is evidence that Stewart's was a substantial transfer fee.

answer: George Stewart was a Scottish footballer who played for Hibernian, Manchester City, and Partick Thistle. He made his Scotland debut in 1906 and scored 9 goals in 19 appearances during Hibernian's league championship win in 1902-03. Stewart then transferred to Manchester City and won two further international caps. He retired in 1912.

text: Could be clearer that his Scotland debut means playing for the Scotland national team.

refinement: George Stewart was a Scottish footballer who played for Hibernian, Manchester City, and Partick Thistle. He made his debut with the Scottish national team in 1906 and scored 9 goals in 19 appearances during Hibernian's league championship win in 1902-03. Stewart then transferred to Manchester City and won two further international caps. He retired in 1912.

answer: George Stewart was a Scottish professional footballer who played between 1902 and 1912. He played for several clubs, including the Scottish national team.

text: Could provide a list of the teams he played for.

refinement: George Stewart was a Scottish professional footballer who played between 1902 and 1912. He played for Hibernian, Manchester City, Partick Thistle, and the Scottish national team.

answer: George Stewart was an outside right who played for Hibernian, Manchester City, Partick Thistle, and the Scottish national team. He had a league championship win with Hibernian in 1902, and then went on to play for two more teams.

text: Does not mention his retirement.

refinement: George Stewart was an outside right who played for Hibernian, Manchester City, Partick Thistle, and the Scottish national team. He had a league championship win with Hibernian in 1902, and then went on to play for two more teams, eventually ending his career with Partick Thistle in 1912.


text:
Senator Bernie Sanders issued a stinging rebuke to the Democratic Party’s leadership for criticizing his supporters’ protests at the Nevada convention last weekend, saying it had used its power “to prevent a fair and transparent process from taking place.”

_“Within the last few days, there have been a number of criticisms made against my campaign organization. Party leaders in Nevada, for example, claim that the Sanders campaign has a ‘penchant for violence.’ That is nonsense. Our campaign has held giant rallies all across this country, including in high-crime areas, and there have been zero reports of violence,”_ wrote Sanders in a statement released on Tuesday.

Sanders condemned all forms of violence, but reminded party leaders that shots were fired at his office during the campaign in Nevada, and the apartment housing where his staff was living was _“broken into and ransacked.”_

The Associated Press reportedthat Saturday’s Nevada Democratic Party convention _“turned into an unruly and unpredictable event”_ when Sanders supporters protested convention rules that ultimately led to Hillary Clinton winning more pledged delegates. Supporters threw chairs, shouted down speakers, and later allegedly harassed state party chair Roberta Lange with death-threat phone calls.

  Thrown chairs. Death threats. This is how some Sanders supporters tried to pressure Nevada's Democratic Party https://t.co/oJ3qLNAV0N

  — The New York Times (@nytimes) May 17, 2016

Clinton won the state’s caucuses in February, 53-47, but Sanders backers had hoped to pick up extra delegates by packing county and state party gatherings.

Democratic leaders have pressed Sanders to denounce the disruption, with Senate Democratic Leader Harry Reid (Nevada) telling The Hill that he had spoken to Sanders for 10 minutes on Tuesday. Reid later criticized Sanders’ statement for being _“silly.”_

_“Bernie should say something – not have some silly statement,”_ Reid told CNN. _“Bernie is better than that. …I’m surprised by his statement. I thought he was going to do something different.”_

Sanders said in his statement that for the Democratic Party to be successful in the November general election, state parties need to treat his campaign supporters _“with fairness and respect.”_ He also made this case during state the conventions in Maine, Alaska, Colorado and Hawaii.

_“Unfortunately, that was not the case at the Nevada convention. At that convention the Democratic leadership used its power to prevent a fair and transparent process from taking place,”_ Sanders stated.

Sanders also slammed Nevada’s Democratic Party Chairman, Roberta Lange, for announcing that the convention rules passed on a voice vote of yes, when they had clearly been rejected.

Sanders argued that the chair should have at least conducted a head count.

_“The chair allowed its Credentials Committee to en mass rule that 64 delegates were ineligible without offering an opportunity for 58 of them to be heard,”_ wrote Sanders. _“That decision enabled the Clinton campaign to end up with a 30-vote majority.”_

He also said the chair had refused to acknowledge or allow votes on any motions made from the floor or accept any petitions proposing amendments to the rules.

_“These are on top of failures at the precinct and county conventions, including trying to depose and then threaten with arrest the Clark County convention credentials chair because she was operating too fairly,”_ said Sanders in ending his statement.

question: What does Bernie Sanders think the Democratic Party is doing to sabotage his campaign?

answer: He thinks the party is using its power to prevent a fair and transparent process from taking place.

answer: He says the leadership is criticizing his supporters' protests in Nevada, saying his supporters have violent tendencies, which Sanders strongly rebukes.

answer: According to the passage, Sanders believes that the Democratic Party is sabotaging his campaign by preventing a fair and transparent process from taking place, and by not treating his supporters with fairness and respect.

answer: Sanders believes that the Democratic Party is sabotaging his campaign by preventing a fair and transparent process from taking place.

question: What did the Associated Press report?

answer: The Associated Press reported that Saturday’s Nevada Democratic Party convention turned into an unruly and unpredictable event when Sanders supporters protested convention rules that ultimately led to Hillary Clinton winning more pledged delegates.

text: It is omitted that the supporters threw chairs, shouted down speakers, and allegedly harassed Roberta Lange.

refinement: The Associated Press reported that Saturday’s Nevada Democratic Party convention turned into an unruly and unpredictable event when Sanders supporters protested convention rules that ultimately led to Hillary Clinton winning more pledged delegates. The supporters also threw chairs, shouted down speakers, and allegedly harassed Roberta Lange.

text: " Supporters threw chairs, shouted down speakers, and later allegedly harassed state party chair Roberta Lange with death-threat phone calls." This is evidence that the convention turned "unruly".

answer: That the Democratic Party convention in Nevada turned unruly when Sanders supporters threw chairs and allegedly harassed state party chair Roberta Lange with death threats. They were protesting convention rules which would ultimately lead to Hillary Clinton winning more pledged delegates.

answer: That the Nevada Democratic Party convention turned into an unruly and unpredictable event when Sanders supporters protested convention rules that ultimately led to Hillary Clinton winning more pledged delegates.

text: It is omitted that they threw chairs.

refinement: That the Nevada Democratic Party convention turned into an unruly and unpredictable event when Sanders supporters protested convention rules that ultimately led to Hillary Clinton winning more pledged delegates. The supporters threw chairs, shouted down speakers, and allegedly harassed Roberta Lange.

answer: The Associated Press reported that the Nevada Democratic Party convention turned into an unruly and unpredictable event when Sanders supporters protested convention rules that ultimately led to Hillary Clinton winning more pledged delegates.

text: It is omitted that they threw chairs and allegedly harassed Lange.

refinement: The Associated Press reported that the Nevada Democratic Party convention turned into an unruly and unpredictable event when Sanders supporters protested convention rules that ultimately led to Hillary Clinton winning more pledged delegates. The supporters threw chairs, shouted down speakers, and allegedly harassed Roberta Lange.

text: " Supporters threw chairs, shouted down speakers, and later allegedly harassed state party chair Roberta Lange with death-threat phone calls." This is evidence that the convention turned unruly.

question: What was the response to the Sanders party protests?

answer: The response to the Sanders party protests was condemnation from Democratic Party leaders, who accused them of violence and disruption. They also criticized Sanders for not denouncing the protests.

answer: The response to the Sanders party protests was that the Democratic Party's leadership criticized the protests and said that the Sanders campaign had a "penchant for violence."

answer: The Democratic Party leadership criticized Sanders for his supporters' protests at the Nevada convention.

answer: Democratic leaders want Sanders to denounce the disruption, with Harry Reid of Nevada saying Sanders' current statement is "silly".

question: What was Sanders' response?

answer: Sanders condemned the violence that occurred at the Nevada Democratic Party convention, but also criticized the party's leadership for not allowing a fair and transparent process to take place. He also accused the party's chair of manipulating the vote count in Clinton's favor.

answer: Sanders condemned all forms of violence, but reminded party leaders that shots were fired at his office during the campaign in Nevada, and the apartment housing where his staff was living was _“broken into and ransacked.”_

answer: Sanders condemned all forms of violence, but reminded party leaders that shots were fired at his office during the campaign in Nevada, and the apartment housing where his staff was living was broken into and ransacked.

answer: Sanders said for the Democratic Party to be successful come November, state parties needed to treat his campaign supporters with more respect and fairness. This was not just limited to Nevada, he also made the statement during conventions in Maine, Alaska, Colorado, and Hawaii.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: Bernie Sanders is condemning the Democratic Party for criticizing his supporters' protests at the Nevada convention. He says that the party has used its power to prevent a fair and transparent process from taking place. Sanders says that his campaign has held giant rallies all across the country, including in high-crime areas, and there have been zero reports of violence. He also says that the Democratic Party needs to treat his supporters with fairness and respect.

text: It is omitted that he accused the chair of favoring Clinton.

refinement: Bernie Sanders is condemning the Democratic Party for criticizing his supporters' protests at the Nevada convention. He says that the party has used its power to prevent a fair and transparent process from taking place. Sanders says that his campaign has held giant rallies all across the country, including in high-crime areas, and there have been zero reports of violence. He also says that the Democratic Party needs to treat his supporters with fairness and respect. He also accused the Nevada Democratic Party chair of favoring Hillary Clinton.

answer: Bernie Sanders has issued a statement condemning the Democratic Party's leadership for criticizing his supporters' protests at the Nevada convention, and accusing them of using their power to prevent a fair and transparent process from taking place. Sanders also accuses the Nevada Democratic Party chair of making decisions that favored Hillary Clinton, and of refusing to allow votes on motions or amendments from the floor.

answer: Bernie Sanders has issued a statement condemning the Democratic Party's leadership for criticizing his supporters' protests at the Nevada convention last weekend. He said that the party had used its power to prevent a fair and transparent process from taking place. Sanders also condemned all forms of violence, but reminded party leaders that shots were fired at his office during the campaign in Nevada, and the apartment housing where his staff was living was broken into and ransacked.

answer: Bernie Sanders is criticizing Democratic Party leadership for treating his campaign supporters unfairly. Despite Sanders condemning violence entirely, state leaders in Nevada criticized Sanders' supporters saying they have a proclivity to violence. The Associated press has reported that the Nevada convention got unruly when Sanders supporters protesting convention rules ultimately threw chairs and allegedly harassed state chair Roberta Lange with death threats. Harry Reid, the Nevada Democratic leader, said Sanders' response to the protest was "silly", but Sanders insists that state departments need to treat his supporters with more respect and fairness in the future for the Democrats to be successful in November.


text:
  I open my eyes and I am a dog. I raise my head up from my paws. It smells like me around here. I like my smell. I go using my nose and find a spot where my smell is weak. I mark this spot with my smell. There will be more spots to mark, but I can only seek them out right now. Later, I will cover them and make them as they should be.

It occurs to me that my mouth is open. It is already hot. I go to the bowl. The bowl is empty. I lick the bowl, but it is still empty. I feel the dryness of my tongue. It is unpleasant but there is nothing to do. How long has it been?

 I make my way about the world. This place is empty except for me and my house. There are ends to the world. I have dug below the ends, but then I saw he was fierce and he hit so I stopped.

  The ends are funny. They always look the same, but they bring new smells some days and often the smell of others are passing near them. I hear noises too, noises beyond the ends, but there is nothing I can meet to know the noise. There is only the end and the hint of otherwise. So I call out past the ends and say that I am here too. But it makes no difference.

 Sometimes a small thing comes running through, but that is only if it knows it should be elsewhere. It lives up high and it has no bowl. I have been unable to get close enough to smell this thing. Perhaps it knows it smells good. Perhaps it thinks I would eat every bit of it. And perhaps I would. Just now I would. It would be refreshing and wet on my tongue.

I check the bowl, but the bowl is still empty and bright. My tongue is like a sock. I swallow but it is hard. It is not as easy as it could be.

 I am tired. I am too tired. But I would chase the ball if he would come throw the ball and give me water. There is nothing to see of him. The place where he comes from is shut like it is still dark. He never comes when the dark is here, but mostly he comes after it is gone. Like now. Or earlier.

Reaching for the golden ball on the wall, I hear my nails clicking. I keep reaching, but it is not easy because my feet are dry too and they slip. It is not easy to try and move like he moves. I am fast and strong, but I am no good like this. He could hear me and come open this thing so easy, if only he would.

  I keep reaching until I know that I can’t. It’s like running at the little thing that won’t let me smell it. I call at the golden ball and say that it is bad. Bad is bad, and if the ball is like me, it will not like being bad. But it just is there like the ends. I know this already, but I still call at it and I say that it is bad again.

 He may come and say that I am Bad. And he has before. He doesn’t always understand. But now I am going to be Bad. I call again and it hurts me because I am being Bad. I want him to come give me water and throw the ball. I want to be Good.

 Still though, he is nowhere and it is so hot. My feet are hot and my legs are hot and my hair is hot and my ears are hot and my tongue is hot.

I wish there was a place that wasn’t hot. We would go to water and it was not hot after that. He would throw the ball in the water and I would chase it and sometimes I was altogether wet and cool because there was so much water. There would be water I couldn’t see, but I knew how to be ok in the water. And I would be tired like I am now, but it was different. Then I had chased the ball through the water, but now I have only woken up.

In my house it is less hot, but it is still there. I lay down. In my way, I know that there is a call inside me that must be made. But I am too tired now. I am too tired to know what to say. I am too tired to smell. I am too tired to dig or chase or see.

 I would see him and I would make him see my shining bowl and give me water. The water would be hot, but I could drink it as if it were not. And he would say, Good Boy because that’s my name, and I like the name and he would be glad to give me more. And I am a Good Boy now and so I do not call. I am a Good Boy and so I let it be hot. I let the golden ball stare at me. I forget about the bowl because I am a Good Boy.

The little thing comes over the end. I cannot move to meet him. It is Bad for being here, but I cannot move to let it know this.

It moves slowly and I can smell the little thing. It smells like bark. It looks at me with little black eyes and is unafraid. We are unafraid because it stands in front of me and we are the same color, but it is not as hot as me. Then it tells me that I am Good. I don’t know how. But it knows me then, and it tells me I am Good.

It has no water, but I watch it. It looks back at me until I close my eyes and go nowhere.

title: DOG

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about how the narrator feels?

answer: The narrator feels hot and tired. They want to be good, but they are too tired to move. They want the owner to come and give them water and throw the ball. The narrator is sad because the owner never comes and the narrator is too hot. The narrator is also sad because they know they are a good boy, but they are too hot and tired to do anything.

answer: The narrator is a dog. He is thirsty and his tongue is dry. He would like to drink water. He is hot and wants to be in the water. He is tired and wants to see his owner. He is also sad because he cannot reach the golden ball.

answer: The narrator is a dog. He is hot. He wants the owner to throw him a ball and give him water. He is tired. He is thirsty. He is unafraid. He is unafraid because he is the same color as the little thing. He is unafraid because the little thing tells him he is Good.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the dog's relationship with other dogs?

answer: No answer

answer: The dog is unable to meet other dogs because he is unable to move. He would like to be able to play with other dogs and chase the ball.

answer: No answer

answer: The dog has a relationship with another dog, who is its owner. The dog is able to communicate with the other dog, and it is implied that the dog is able to understand what the other dog says. The dog is able to be a good dog if the other dog is around.

text: Completely incorrect response

answer: The dog seems to have an adversarial relationship with another dog.

answer: No answer


text:
LOUIS KOHMUELLER HOUSE, also known as the FRED KOHMUELLER HOUSE, is a historic home located at Washington, Franklin County, Missouri. It was built about 1878, and is a one-story, brick dwelling on a stone foundation. It has a side-gable roof and segmental arched door and window openings. Attached to the house by a low-pitched shed roof is a 1 1/2-story smoke house. Also on the property is the contributing large frame barn (c. 1908).[1]

It was listed on the National Register of Historic Places in 2000.[2]

[1]  (includes 12 photographs from 1999)

[2]

title: Louis Kohmueller House

question: By what other name is Louis Kohmueller House known as?

answer: Fred Kohmueller House.

answer: The house is also known as the Fred Kohmueller House.

answer: Fred Kohmueller House.

answer: The Louis Kohmueller House is also known as the Fred Kohmueller House.

question: To what does this proper noun refer?

answer: The Louis Kohmueller House is a historic home located in Washington, Missouri.

answer: A historic home.

answer: The house

answer: The Louis Kohmueller House.

text: This is (presumably) the proper noun in question; the answer cannot be the same. It refers to a historic home

question: Where is it located?

answer: Washington, Missouri

answer: Missouri.

text: Give the city too

answer: Washington, Franklin County, Missouri

answer: The Louis Kohmueller House is located in Washington, Missouri.

question: When was it built?

answer: The house was built about 1878.

answer: The Louis Kohmueller House was built around 1878.

answer: 1878.

text: It was built "about 1878"

answer: 1878

text: It was built "about 1878"

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The Louis Kohmueller House is a historic home located in Washington, Missouri. It was built in 1878 and is a one-story, brick dwelling on a stone foundation.

answer: The Louis Kohmueller House is a historic home located in Washington, Franklin County, Missouri.

answer: The Louis Kohmueller House is a historic home in Washington, Missouri that was built in 1878. It is a one-story brick house with a side-gable roof and segmental arched door and window openings.

answer: Louis Kohmueller House, also known as Fred Kohmueller House, is a historic house built in 1878 and located in Washington, Franklin County, Missouri.


text:
Would you go to a friend's dinner party, nibble every course, drink a glass or two of wine, and then leave—without ever speaking to the host? I hope not. And I hope you wouldn't treat open houses the same way. And yet home buyers often do, refusing to sign in or deflecting agents' questions about the house they're touring.

Sometimes they do it because they're leery of being given a hard sell or handing over their personal information; others decline because they're uncomfortable being put on the spot about a potentially huge decision. Whatever the reason, this puts brokers in a tough place: Open houses might be fun for home shoppers, but to agents, they're work. Your feedback is the market research they need to do their jobs right.

So, perhaps all that home buyers need is a little preparation. If they know the questions brokers are going to ask, they can be ready with answers, and everyone can go home (perhaps to this very home?) happy. Here's your cheat sheet:

1. THE QUESTION: _HOW LONG HAVE YOU BEEN LOOKING?_
WHY THEY'RE ASKING: The agent is trying to gauge how serious you are. If you've been looking for only a short time, say a few weeks, the agent will understand that you're just getting your feet wet—that you're still gathering your thoughts. If you've been looking for months, then the agent might dig in. That tells her you've seen a lot, but you haven't found what you're looking for. She's wondering why you haven't pulled the trigger and, hey, maybe this is the house you've been waiting for.
HOW YOU SHOULD ANSWER: Be honest and specific. This is harmless information.

2. THE QUESTION: _ARE YOU WORKING WITH AN AGENT EXCLUSIVELY?_
WHY THEY'RE ASKING: Agents are trained to respect boundaries. If you are represented by an agent, the open house agent cannot try to represent you. This question sets the tone of the conversation. Don't be surprised if the agent asks who your agent is. Most agents who do business in a certain area know other active agents. This way the open house agent can call your agent—not you—for your feedback. You are insulated by your buyer-broker agreement.
HOW YOU SHOULD ANSWER: If you're working with an agent, say so! Even better, give the open house agent your agent's name and brokerage company. This protects you from having to give your personal information to the open house agent. Rather than sign in with your name, number, and email, you can sign in with your name and your agent's contact information. That's all the open house agent needs to follow up.

3. THE QUESTION: _HOW DOES THIS HOUSE COMPARE TO OTHERS YOU'VE SEEN?_
WHY THEY'RE ASKING: Now that the agent knows how long you've been looking, she wants to get a sense of whether this house is a contender. She is also assuming that you're touring other houses nearby (other "comps," as they say). She wants your honest insight on whether her listing is better or worse than the others.
HOW YOU SHOULD ANSWER: Be honest. If the house around the corner has a remodeled master bath and this one doesn't, point that out. If you think this house could use some work, let her know. Remember, being honest about the house won't hurt the agent's feelings. She's independent. Of course she cares about her listing, but, unlike an owner, she isn't emotionally attached. This is one reason for sale by owner is difficult.

4. THE QUESTION: _ARE YOU SPECIFICALLY LOOKING AT THIS NEIGHBORHOOD?_
WHY THEY'RE ASKING: The agent isn't being nosy here, she wants to know how focused you are. She wants to rule out the looky-loos and focus on the serious buyers. If you are looking in that particular neighborhood but not interested in making an offer on her listing, you've caught her attention. She needs to understand what other listings have that hers doesn't. Now she's focused on knowing your trigger: Are you focused on certain streets within the neighborhood? A certain style of house? Or is it all about price?
HOW YOU SHOULD ANSWER: Be specific. If you're focused on that neighborhood, it's OK to say so. If you're open and still getting your bearings straight, it's OK to say so. These answers provide depth for the agent when she's talking to the seller (e.g., "The open house was great! I had a buyer walk through who has been looking for a while and she is only looking in this neighborhood."). This tells the seller there are buyers out there—and that adjustments may have to be made if those buyers aren't buying this home.

5. THE QUESTION: _WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THE PRICE?_
WHY THEY'RE ASKING: This is probably the most important question, but it may not be the first one out of the agent's mouth, because she wants to establish rapport first. The agent knows that people are usually guarded when it comes to price. She wants you to give a thoughtful answer, not a flippant one.
HOW YOU SHOULD ANSWER: Now, this is tricky. If you're not really in the market to buy, or can't compare it to other houses on the market, don't just throw out a number. Simply tell the agent you haven't seen enough to give an educated answer. If you feel you _can_ answer, say something like "I think it's priced competitively" or "It's priced too high." The point is not to give a dollar figure but to offer a general perception. If you believe it's a good deal, say that. If you think it's overpriced, say that. Because if the house _is_ overpriced, maybe the agent will call you once it's reduced.

6. THE QUESTION:_ ARE YOU CONSIDERING MAKING AN OFFER ON THIS HOME?_
WHY THEY'RE ASKING: Please don't take offense! The agent has a job to do, and this is a valid question.
HOW YOU SHOULD ANSWER: As a prospective buyer, remember: You hold the power. If you're planning to make an offer, it's good news to the agent and lets her know to expect something in writing. It also might help you if the house is in demand so the agent will know there are multiple offers coming in. That way, she may not start negotiating without first getting your offer in hand. To some extent, this buys you time to call your agent and get your offer submitted. If you're not planning to make an offer, it's fine to say that, too.

Finally, please sign in. You don't have to go overboard—you don't even have to give your last name. (Unless you want the agent to check your credentials on LinkedIn.) No one is expecting to see the list, not the broker's boss, not the seller. Signing in is, in some ways, absolutely unimportant. But it is also common courtesy, the least—the _very least_—that you can do to preserve the social fabric of our society.

———

_CHRYSTAL CARUTHERS is a Chicago native, former Realtor, TV news producer, and newspaper reporter. Chrystal, who covers real estate industry news at realtor.com, enjoys cooking, hiking, Bikram yoga, and cookies._

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the advice the writer gives on how to talk to agents.

answer: The writer advises homeowners to be wary of talking candidly with the agent. It is a form of business and the buyer should respect that. The writer also advises people to be careful of how they sign in. It is OK to be dishonest with the agent if they were not serious buyers. The advice given in this article is grounded in treating agents with respect, not easily trusting them or giving them too much personal information.

text: The answer is broadly wrong in many ways.

refinement: The author recommends being honest and mostly open. They recommend not giving an exact figure for questions about price, advising to either say the price is competitive or too much. They also recommend to sign in, noting that prospective buyers don't need to enter their surnames if they don't want to. In general, the author wants to facilitate real estate agents to do their jobs without inconveniencing potential buyers about whether they are giving sensitive information.

answer: The writer advises that those speaking with agents consider giving them honest feedback and avoid giving them vague or false information. The writer also advises that potential buyers should be discreet if they are not fully committed to making an offer on a home.

text: The author recommends being honest about it if buyers aren't willing to make an offer just yet. They don't advise them to be discreet if they aren't planning to make an offer. They advise discreetness when signing in or talking about price.

refinement: The writer advises that those speaking with agents consider giving them honest feedback and avoid giving them vague or false information. The writer advises that lookers can be discreet when signing in and that they can give their vague impression about price in lieu of a dollar figure.

answer: The writer advises that it's important to be both honest and prepared when talking to an open house agent. The agent wants to know how serious the buyer is and if they have seen other listings. Additionally, the writer advises buyers to be specific if they have opinions on the listing, understand that the agent is looking for buyers who are likely to make an offer, and to sign in to the open house.

text: It's important to mention the areas the author advises to be relatively vague or discreet.

refinement: The writer advises that it's important to be both honest and prepared when talking to an open house agent. The agent wants to know how serious the buyer is and if they have seen other listings. Additionally, the writer advises buyers to be specific if they have opinions on the listing, understand that the agent is looking for buyers who are likely to make an offer, and to sign in to the open house. The writer says you don't have to sign in with your full name and that you can give your impression on the price instead of a dollar figure.

answer: The writer generally tells prospective home buyers to be honest. They are giving advice on how to understand what the agent is asking them. Only once does the writer tell readers to be vague, when telling an agent whether the house is a good price or not. In general the writer is trying to help the reader navigate the home buying process.

answer: When talking to an agent at an open house, be honest about your situation, give impressions of the listed house, and tell the agent if you will be considering making an offer on the home. Providing this information sets the tone for a cordial conversation. It also helps the agent effectively do her job.

text: It's important to mention the areas the author advises to be relatively vague or discreet.

refinement: When talking to an agent at an open house, be honest about your situation, give impressions of the listed house, and tell the agent if you will be considering making an offer on the home. Providing this information sets the tone for a cordial conversation. It also helps the agent effectively do her job. The writer says you don't have to sign in with your full name and that you can give your impression on the price instead of a dollar figure.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How does the writer view the process of home-buying?

answer: The writer views the process of home-buying as something that requires preparation on both the part of the buyers and the brokers. The writers believes that buyers can make the process much easier for brokers by being prepared to answer their questions. The writer also believes that by being polite and respectful, buyers can make the process easier for themselves. The writer views the process as being collaborative.

answer: The writer encourages potential home-buyers to talk to the agent. The writer reminds readers agents are working and it is good to speak to them. They also say signing in at an open-house is essential to preserving the social fabric of human life.

text: The answer should mention that the author is trying to prepare potential buyers about brokers' questions to assuage worries.

refinement: The writer encourages potential home-buyers to talk to the agent. The writer reminds readers agents are working and it is good to speak to them. They also say signing in at an open-house is essential to preserving the social fabric of human life. The article tries to prepare buyers about what the agents ask and why so that buyers don't have to worry about what information they are giving.

answer: They write with concern about lazy home buyers and the questions that go unanswered, leading to problems like dishonest fences. Home buyers have the opportunity of insight into the things that affects their buying process, and it seems to be implied that the lack of questions is a symptom of laziness.

text: The answer is completely irrelevant and made up.

text: The answer is empty.

refinement: The writer views the process of home-buying as something that requires preparation on both the part of the buyers and the brokers. The writers believes that buyers can make the process much easier for brokers by being prepared to answer their questions. The writer also believes that by being polite and respectful, buyers can make the process easier for themselves. The writer views the process as being collaborative.

answer: The writer would seem to think of it as a time-consuming and confusing process, which can be daunting and extort fear in people.

text: The answer is completely inaccurate.

text: The answer is empty.

refinement: The writer views the process of home-buying as something that requires preparation on both the part of the buyers and the brokers. The writers believes that buyers can make the process much easier for brokers by being prepared to answer their questions. The writer also believes that by being polite and respectful, buyers can make the process easier for themselves. The writer views the process as being collaborative.

answer: The writer recognizes that open houses can be work for agents, and that potential home buyers need to be prepared in order to provide feedback effectively. The writer also recognizes that potential home buyers hold power in the process, and that it's necessary to sign in at an open house to uphold social norms. Overall, the writer sees the process of home-buying as involving give-and-take between home buyers and agents.

text: The author thinks that if buyers are prepared to answer an agent's questions, they can help agents while assuaging their worries about giving too much information or being put on the spot.

refinement: The writer recognizes that open house auctions are work for agents and that potential home buyers need to be prepared in order to provide feedback effectively while assuaging their worries about being put on the spot or giving too much information. The writer also recognizes that potential home buyers hold power in the process, and that it's necessary to sign in at an open house to uphold social norms. Overall, the writer sees the process of home-buying as involving give-and-take between home buyers and agents.


text:
_ARENA HASH_ is the first studio album by Arena Hash, released in 1988.[1][2]

Critical reception

The album was well received in Perú having several hits on the radio. It received a 3 star rating on _Rate Your Music_.[3]

Singles

_KANGREJO (SACUDÍA)_ was released in 1987 as the first single of the album. The song had success in Perú where it became a hit even though it didn't reach number one.[4]

_CUANDO LA CAMA ME DA VUELTAS_ was released in 1988 as the album's second single. The song became a huge hit in Perú topping the airplay list on several radio stations as soon as it was released becoming the band's first number one hit.[5]

_ME RESFRIÉ EN BRASIL_ was released as the album's third single in 1988. The song had success in Peruvian radio becoming one of the album's biggest hits.[6]

_STRESS_ was released in 1988 as the album's fourth single. The song received moderate airplay in Perú.

_NO CAMBIARÉ_ was released in 1988 as the fifth single of the album and it achieved moderate success in Perú.[7]

_ROMPE OREJAS_ was released as the sixth and final single from the album. It received some airplay but didn't achieve as much as the album's other singles.

Track listing

-   All songs written by Pedro Suarez-Vertiz, Patricio Suarez-Vertiz and Arturo Pomar Jr. except track 5 (Suarez-Vertiz, Suarez-Vertiz, Pomar, Kornhuber)

Personnel

Arena Hash[8]

-   Pedro Suárez-Vértiz - guitars, vocals, additional keyboards
-   Christian Meier - keyboard, backing vocals
-   Patricio Suárez-Vértiz - bass, backing vocals
-   Arturo Pomar, Jr. - drums, percussion, backing vocals

Additional Personnel

-   Carlos Espinoza: Alto Sax on “Stress”
-   Mickey “Coyote” Denegri: Lead Guitar on “Rompeorejas”
-   Eduardo Chavez: Lead Guitar on “No Cambiare Jamas” and backing vocals on “Me Resfrie en Brazil”
-   Lito Figueroa: Additional Keyboards on “Mueve Lo Que Puedas”
-   German Gonzales: Percussion on “Me Resfrie en Brazil”

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[4] Christian Meier recordó cómo ingresó a Arena Hash, a 30 años de su primer disco Consultado el 8 de octubre de 2018

[5] BBC : El rockero peruano que dejó de articular palabras Consultado el 8 de octubre de 2018

[6] Diez vinilos de músicos peruanos que no te puedes perder Consultado el 8 de octubre de 2018

[7] Christian Meier recuerda el segundo disco que lanzó junto a Pedro Suárez-Vértiz y Arena Hash Consultado el 8 de octubre de 2018

[8] Arena Hash- _Arena Hash_. @Discogs.com. Retrieved on January 5, 2016 (in English)

title: Arena Hash (album)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What genre of music is Arena Hash?

answer: It's unclear what genre it is.

answer: Arena Hash is a rock band.

text: This might be true, but the information isn't available in the article.

refinement: Arena Hash might be a rock band, but it's unclear in the article.

answer: The word "rock" can be found in the article which leads the reader to believe it might be rock music.

text: It can be, but as an actual footnote, and in another language (besides English).

refinement: The word "rock" can be found in the article which leads the reader to believe it might be rock music, but it's unclear in the article.

answer: Arena Hash is a rock band.

text: The text doesn't state this. There are clues in there, but it's not certain.

refinement: Arena Hash might be a rock band, but it's not clear in the text.

answer: Not answered.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How many singles were released off of the album?

answer: Six singles were released from the album.

answer: Six singles were released off of the album. These include "KANGREJO (SACUDÍA)", "CUANDO LA CAMA ME DA VUELTAS", "ME RESFRIÉ EN BRASIL", "STRESS", "NO CAMBIARÉ", and "ROMPE OREJAS"

answer: Six

answer: Six singles were released off of the album: "Kangrejo (Sacudía)", "Cuando la Cama Me Da Vueltas", "Me Resfrié en Brasil", "Stress", "No Cambiare Jamas" and "Rompeorejas".

answer: Six singles were released off of the album.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who played the drums on the album?

answer: Arturo Porar Jr.

text: That isn't their last name.

answer: Arturo Pomar, Jr.

answer: Arturo Pomar, Jr. played the drums on the album.

answer: Arturo Pomar, Jr. is listed as the drummer for the album.

answer: Arturo Pomar Jr. played the drums on the album.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How many units did the album sell?

answer: Not answered

answer: Not answered.

answer: This information can't be found.

answer: The album has had moderate success in Perú but an exact number of units sold is not given.

answer: The album achieved moderate success in Perú. Therefore, it is safe to assume that the album sold a moderate amount of units.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: This article details "Arena Hash" the first studio album by the band Arena Hash, released in 1988. The album was well-received in Peru. Six singles were released from the album.

answer: Arena Hash's first album, _ARENA HASH_, was well received in Perú. The singles "KANGREJO (SACUDÍA)", "CUANDO LA CAMA ME DA VUELTAS", and "ME RESFRIÉ EN BRASIL" were big hits, each topping the airplay list on Peruvian radio. The album also features guest musicians such as Carlos Espinoza and Eduardo Chavez. Overall, the album was well received and produced several hits.

answer: Arena Hash is a Peruvian rock group from 1988. They made their first studio album that same year and received the album was well received in Perú with several hits on the radio. They had 7 singles for that album.

answer: _ARENA HASH_ is the first studio album by Arena Hash. Containing several hits including "Cuando la Cama Me Da Vueltas," the album was well received in Perú. The album contains 12 songs, including one collaboration.

answer: Arena Hash is the first studio album by Arena Hash, released in 1988. There were several hits on the radio including "Cuando la cama me da vueltas" and "Stress." These songs, along with others, were written by Pedro Suarez-Vertiz, Patricio Suarez-Vertiz, and Arturo Pomar Jr.


text:
The Queen did what she could do to relax in her sitting room—pondering questions that lives would hinge on—when a knock came at her door. Through her exhaustion she stood to her feet and stepped to the mirror to check her reflection. There she smoothed the worry from her face, softening her aspect with a tender smile at the edges of her lips, placed her crown atop her head, and then stepped to the door.

A Soldier stood proudly before her. His gaze was hard, his face tough, providing a look that could only be attained from bitter time spent on a battlefield. In the doorway he spoke bluntly, harshly, to his Queen, “I am not fighting for you anymore.”

She recognized him, she wasn’t sure from where—she knew she had never met him. The Queen motioned for him to enter the room and to take a seat across from her ornate chair. Both postured, backs stiff, without comfort, and exchanged looks.

“I’ve watched your palace up here on this hill and I’ve wondered who the woman we all fight and kill for is. But now,” he pauses, shoulders breaking under the weight they held, he lets out a deep breath, slouching in the chair. “I’m leaving tomorrow. From then you can do what you will, I won’t care. But before I go, I must ask you, why?”

Her sitting room was decorated with historic tapestries. Her crown was adorned with priceless jewels. Her face held onto a youth and beauty that may not have been rivaled in the rest of the world.

Quietly the Soldier sucked in the deep breath that he had released and straightened his back once again, “I see you now. You are so very young. I don’t think you’re able to understand all the men I’ve seen fallen.” His blunt military voice justified his one demand. “I deserve you to tell me why.”

The Queen stared back at the Soldier, back straighter than his, stiffened with a weight of responsibility that her man took as grandeur and arrogance. “You won’t understand, and may as well not try.”

In her face, the Queens smile quivered and tears well up in her eyes. But with a blink she closed herself up like a book.

She looked sternly at the Soldier and spoke, “The secrets that I’ve swallowed, they burn and cut me inside. Often I’ve bled. You are not the only one who knows the battle field.”

“Tell me,” the Soldier ordered, unable to read the woman, unfamiliar with royalty, not knowing what he demanded was impossible. “How hungry are you? How weak you must feel living up here alone, never revealed, while the battle rages on.” he pushed the chair back and stood violently, his face reddened with passion, passion that he had never felt for the people that he had fought against, passion only for the one responsible for it all. “When have you had to tell a daughter, a mother or a wife, that her man wasn’t coming back?” The Soldier looked down at his Queen. “I feel no pity for you, and I won’t march again on your battlefield.” He turned his back on her, and looked out the window to the view that she had.

At that window he saw a golden sun surrounded by a dark grey sky. A light breeze cooled the anger from his face, returning his shoulders to a relaxed state, and he confessed his thoughts, “All I’ve ever wanted was to live an honest life. To get all I deserve and to give all I can, to love a young woman who I don’t understand.” He paused, turning to stare at the back of the woman who he had laid some much out for. “Your Highness, your ways are very strange.”

She had stood and was looking into her mirror, back to her faithful servant. In the reflection she saw the man, feeling that she wanted much less than her position demanded from her. Her head fell to her chest, her crown to tumbled to her feet, she thought she would break. Frightened and ashamed at what her heart felt, she could no longer face the Soldier.

The Queen turned and walked the Soldier to the door. There she told him to wait, she would only be a moment inside.

She gave an order that was received.

Outside the door the Soldier was killed, still waiting her word, while the Queen picked up her crown, she was choked by the solitude she sadly preferred. Meanwhile the battle continued on.

title: Queen and Soldier (765 Words)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the plot twist in the story.

answer: Two soldiers who have served the Queen have won a battle. One of the soldiers, a young man who seems confused who he is fighting on behalf of and why, asks the Queen why she doesn't just end it and come out. He states that he will not march again on her battlefield, declares she looks very young, and feels that she is unable to understand. The Queen is alarmed, but the soldier doesn't notice, so he continues on his philosophical rant and posits that he has always wanted a normal life. At this, the Queen orders for the soldier to be killed out of earshot. She picks up her crown and thinks about how she is now attended and how she wants this solitary lifestyle.

text: The story only mentions one soldier.

refinement: One of the Queen's soldiers, a young man who seems confused who he is fighting on behalf of and why, asks the Queen why she doesn't just end the war and come out. He states that he will not march again on her battlefield, declares she looks very young, and feels that she is unable to understand. The Queen is alarmed, but the soldier doesn't notice, so he continues on his philosophical rant and posits that he has always wanted a normal life. At this, the Queen orders for the soldier to be killed out of earshot. She picks up her crown and thinks about how she is now attended and how she wants this solitary lifestyle.

text: Phrasing could be more coherent overall so the answer stands on its own.

refinement: One of the Queen's soldiers, a young man, asks the Queen why she doesn't just end the war. He states that he will not march again on her battlefield. The Queen is alarmed, but the soldier continues on his philosophical rant and posits that he has always wanted a normal life. The Queen orders for the soldier to be killed.

answer: The Queen orders the soldier to be killed. This is a twist because the reader has assumed that the Queen is the one in power and the soldier is in service to her. However, it is the Queen who is in service to the soldier. She is the one in charge of the war and the soldier is the one who is demanding answers from her.

text: The conclusions drawn about the Queen being in service to the soldier are unattested.

refinement: The Queen orders the soldier to be killed.

answer: When the soldier asks her why she used them, she replies that the battles are required because she has swallowed secrets that burn and cut her inside. She does not have what the soldier wants. The soldier pleads with her to tell him why he is being used. The Queen then orders for the soldier to be killed out of earshot. She picks up her crown and thinks about how she is now attended and how she wants this solitary lifestyle.

answer: The Queen phones a request to the Soldier and while they are still within her sitting room, one of her guards steps in and kills the man. The Queen is affected by the resolve he shows in sticking to his decision, which is perhaps worth more than the knowledge of her sacrifice.

text: The answer isn't clear due to phrasing issues.

refinement: The Queen asks the soldier to wait outside and gives an order for him to be killed. The Queen is affected by the resolve he shows in sticking to his decision, which is perhaps worth more than the knowledge of her sacrifice.

text: The final line is unnecessary.

refinement: The Queen asks the soldier to wait outside and gives an order for him to be killed.

answer: The Queen orders the Soldier to be killed while he waits outside the door. This is a twist because the story seems to be about the Soldier's decision to leave the army, but it's really about the Queen's decision to have him killed.

answer: The Queen orders the soldier to be killed. This is a twist because the reader has assumed that the Queen is the one in power and the soldier is in service to her. However, it is the Queen who is in service to the soldier. She is the one in charge of the war and the soldier is the one who is demanding answers from her. The twist is that the Queen is the one who is in charge of the war, and the soldier is the one who is demanding answers from her.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the war in which the Queen and her subjects, including the soldier, are involved.

answer: No answer

answer: [rewrite]

text: Should say "No answer"

answer: No answer

answer: The war is not described.

answer: The Queen and her subjects are involved in a war, but the specific details are not given.

answer: No answer

answer: No answer

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about loyalty?

answer: It's not explicitly said that the Soldier fights for the Queen but it's implied. The Soldier fights for the Queen due to the fact that he truly believes she's responsible for everything that happened in their cause.

text: The story doesn't explicitly say anything about loyalty.

answer: Prince William (the young queen who is too young and beautiful to understand) just realized that the man who protected him his whole life, who died and beat people up until now, is abandoning the political leadership, later revealed to the Queen and people to be Prince Charles. Prince William's subsequent request, and later revelation, is a sign of loyalty to the Queen, who many times out of the vanity of a young woman who has known her whole life will have likely never seen a mug in a distance.

answer: No answer

answer: It's not explicitly said that the Soldier fights for the Queen but it's implied. The Soldier fights for the Queen because he believes she's responsible for everything that happened in their cause. But the Soldier is actually a part of this cause but thinks he has been made the fall guy.

answer: The Queen is loyal to her kingdom and people. She does not have a choice. The Soldier is loyal to his country and people. He does not have a choice. The Soldier remains loyal to his Queen until he realizes that she is taking the lives of his countrymen and not caring about them. The Soldier decides to leave the kingdom and tells the Queen that he will not fight for her anymore. The Queen decides to kill the Soldier.

answer: The Queen is loyal to her kingdom and people. She does not have a choice. The Soldier is loyal to his country and people. He does not have a choice. The Soldier remains loyal to his Queen until he realizes that she is taking the lives of his countrymen and not caring about them. The Soldier decides to leave the kingdom and tells the Queen that he will not fight for her anymore. The Queen decides to kill the Soldier.

answer: We are not given any information about loyalty.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Describe the tension between the soldier and the Queen.

answer: The Queen has never met the Soldier. He is fighting on her behalf, that is, in her name. It's seen as ridiculous that he should break in with a demand, his test of character. She refuses to give the Soldier any information. As strained as the relationship is, both her majesty and the soldier are respectful. Their exchange is final. The Queen has killed him while he is waiting to be dismissed.

text: The lines that stray from the explicit details of the plot are vague and incoherent.

refinement: The Queen has never met the Soldier. He is fighting on her behalf, that is, in her name. She refuses to give the Soldier any information. As strained as the relationship is, both her majesty and the soldier are respectful. The Queen has killed him while he is waiting to be dismissed.

answer: The Queen has never met the Soldier. He is fighting on her behalf, that is, in her name. It's seen as ridiculous that he should break in with a demand, his test of character. She refuses to give the Soldier any information. Both her majesty and the soldier are respectful. Their exchange is final. The Queen has killed him while he is waiting to be dismissed.

answer: The soldier is upset with the Queen because he has been fighting for her on the battlefield and she has never told him why. The Queen is reluctant to answer his question because she is ashamed of her actions.

answer: The soldier is angry at the Queen for not explaining why he has to fight for her. He feels she has no idea what the battle field is like. She feels he does not understand her situation.

answer: The soldier challenges the Queen's decision to keep her people fighting in the war.

answer: The soldier asks the Queen what it is that is done to keep all the men dying on the battlefield, saying he sees her as young and inexperienced to be ordering men in these situations. The Queen can't tell him why she ordered the war to continue. In the end, the soldier abandons the war.


text:
Bubbles lived at Jackson’s Neverland ranch and sat in on recordings for the Bad album. He even travelled to Japan with the singer on a tour.

But he had to be moved from Neverland after becoming violent and now lives at the Centre For Great Apes in Florida with 41 other chimpanzees and orangutans.

The centre said there were no plans for him to travel to Jackson’s funeral and he will remain in his new home.

Jackson adopted Bubbles at the age of three from a cancer research clinic in Texas and the artist Jeff Koons made a series of sculptures of them together. They often wore matching outfits.

He is now aged 26 and weighs 160lbs. Keepers said that although he is “huge and ugly” he now has a “sweet” character and likes painting and listening to flute music.

Bubbles also spends much of his time sitting quietly in trees with his best friend Sam, a 40-year-old chimpanzee.

Jackson used to keep a private zoo at Neverland. After he gave it up his two tigers, Thriller and Sabu, were adopted by Tippi Hedren, the actress who starred in Alfred Hitchcock’s The Birds.

She cares for them at her anmal sanctuary in Los Angeles which is home to 68 big cats.

The actress said that she had sat with Thriller and Sabu and let them know Jackson was gone.

She said: “You don’t know what mental telepathy exists from the human to the animal. But I hope they understood.”

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the article regarding?

answer: The article goes on about how Michael Jackson used to keep a private zoo in Neverland, which he then gave up and how Sabu and Thriller, his tigers live with Tippi Henders now that Jackson has died.

answer: Bubbles, Michael Jackson's chimpanzee.

answer: The article discusses the life and current status of Bubbles, a chimpanzee who was adopted by Michael Jackson at a young age. He is currently living at a chimpanzee and orangutan sanctuary in Florida and does not plan to attend Jackson's funeral.

answer: The pets of Michael Jackson, specifically Bubbles (Chimpanzee) and Thriller and Sabu (Tigers).

answer: The article discusses Bubbles, a chimpanzee owned by Michael Jackson, and his current living situation at the Centre for Great Apes in Florida. Bubbles originally resided on Jackson's Neverland ranch and even went on tours around the world with the singer until he became violent and had to be relocated. Bubbles currently enjoys listening to flute music and painting and shares a bond with another chimpanzee named Sam. Although he is "huge and ugly", Bubbles is now considered to be of a sweet character. Jackson's death was the cause for Bubbles being relocated from Neverland and his tigers Thriller and Sabu are currently being cared for by actress Tippi Hedren.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where is Bubbles?

answer: Bubbles has been moved from Neverland ranch to the Centre For Great Apes in Florida

answer: Bubbles is at the Centre For Great Apes in Florida.

answer: Jackson gave him to a zoo because of his violent behavior, Bubbles lives at the Center For Great Apes in Florida.

answer: Bubbles currently resides at the Centre for Great Apes in Florida.

answer: Bubbles lives at the Centre for Great Apes in Florida.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where do Thriller and Sabu live?

answer: Tippi Hedren's animal sanctuary in Los Angeles.

answer: Tippi Hedren's private zoo in Los Angeles.

text: It's an animal sanctuary and there is a difference.

refinement: Tippi Hedren's animal sanctuary in Los Angeles.

answer: Thriller and Sabu live at Tippi Hedren's animal sanctuary in Los Angeles.

answer: Tippi Hedren adopted them and they live at her animal sanctuary in Los Angeles.

answer: Thriller and Sabu live at Tippi Hedren's animal sanctuary in Los Angeles.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did Jackson have to give up Neverland Ranch

answer: The article alludes to this, but does not say why.

answer:
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Jackson was forced to give up Neverland Valley after Bubbles had become violent.

answer: ?He couldn't control Bubbles's violent behavior, apparently.

answer:
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Jackson had to give up Neverland Ranch because Bubbles had become violent.

answer: /the zoo?Neglect or injury to the animals.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is Bubble's best friend?

answer: A 40 year-old chimp named Sam. They sit in a tree together.

answer: Sam, the 40-year-old chimpanzee.

answer: Bubbles' best friend is a chimpanzee named Sam.

answer: Bubbles' best friend is Sam, a 40-year-old chimpanzee.

answer: Bubbles' best friend is Sam, a 40-year-old chimpanzee.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Bubbles, Jackson's chimpanzee companion, will not be traveling to Jackson's funeral and lives at the Centre for Great Apes in Florida. He was an inhabitant of Jackson's Neverland ranch but became violent and was moved out. He is now aged 26 and likes listening to flute music.

text: This answer goes way over the one-sentence requirement.

refinement: Bubbles is a 26-year-old chimpanzee who was an inhabitant of Michael Jackson's Neverland ranch but became violent and was moved out to the Center for Great Apes in Florida.

answer: Bubbles is a chimpanzee who was a companion to Michael Jackson at Neverland and the recording studio.

answer: Bubbles, a chimpanzee who previously lived at Michael Jackson's Neverland ranch, will remain at the Centre for Great Apes in Florida. He is 26 years old and likes painting and listening to flute music. Jackson adopted him from a cancer research clinic when he was just three years old. Bubbles will not be attending Jackson's funeral.

text: This is way too long to meet the one sentence requirement.

refinement: Bubbles, a 26-year-old chimpanzee who previously lived at Michael Jackson's Neverland ranch, will remain at the Centre for Great Apes in Florida, where he likes painting and enjoys flute music.

answer: A text about Michael Jackson's exotic animals and what became of them after his death.

answer: A short description of the location and history of Michael Jackson's pet chimpanzee, Bubbles and tigers Thriller and Sabu.