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InterContinental Hotels Group (IHG), one of the world's leading hotel companies, has announced the signing of the first Holiday Inn Express® hotel in Gibraltar. The new build hotel is set to open during the summer of 2017 and will operate under a franchise agreement with G. & J. B. Hotels 2014 Ltd.

Gibraltar is a well-established finance centre and a popular Mediterranean holiday destination where guests can enjoy tax free shopping, leisure activities on the beach and dine in a variety of local and international restaurants. Featuring 120 rooms, a restaurant, bar and meeting facilities, Holiday Inn Express® Gibraltar will be located close to Gibraltar International Airport on Devil's Tower Road at the entrance to the city. The airport, city centre, marina and coastline are all within walking distance of the hotel.

The new property will be a 'next generation' Holiday Inn Express hotel complete with the latest smart technology, larger cosier beds, and a modern continental Express Café and Bar. Based wholly on guest insight, the Holiday Inn Express brand's 'Next Generation' guest experience has been developed with industry-leading experts to meet the changing needs of today's Smart Traveller.

HYLKO VERSTEEG, DIRECTOR OF DEVELOPMENT, SOUTHERN EUROPE, IHG SAID: "We're thrilled that Holiday Inn Express Gibraltar will be the first internationally branded mid-market hotel to have a presence in the territory in decades. Holiday Inn Express is IHG's growth engine and we're opening more hotels under this brand in Europe than any others. We look forward to working with G. & J.B. Hotels 2014 Ltd for the first time and hope this is the start of a long and fruitful partnership."

FRANCO OSTUNI EXECUTIVE DIRECTOR OF G. & J.B. HOTELS 2014 LTD SAID: "As well as being a tourism destination, Gibraltar has an established reputation as a financial centre. Coupled with its excellent location in the city, the hotel is well placed to attract strong demand from business and leisure guests. We're confident Holiday Inn Express Gibraltar will be the number one mid-market hotel in the country and we're very much looking forward to opening the doors to this brand new hotel."

The Holiday Inn Express brand offers guests everything they need and nothing they don't. The Holiday Inn Express brand's success comes from attracting value-oriented guests who want a high quality hotel that provides a great night's sleep at a competitive price. Guests are guaranteed a warm welcome, friendly and efficient service, a free breakfast and Wi-Fi included in the room price. It's Simple. Smart. Spot on.

Launched in 1991, the Holiday Inn Express® brand is one of the largest and fastest growing brands in the hotel industry, opening hotels at a rate of two per week on average. There are over 2,400 Holiday Inn Express hotels across the globe today and more than 570 hotels in the development pipeline*. Over the past three years, the brand has entered over ten new countries globally*.

*Figures as at 30th September 2015.

About IHG

IHG ® (InterContinental Hotels Group) [LON:IHG, NYSE:IHG (ADRs)] is a global organisation with a broad portfolio of hotel brands, including Six Senses Hotels Resorts Spas, Regent Hotels & Resorts, InterContinental® Hotels & Resorts, Kimpton® Hotels & Restaurants, Hotel Indigo®, EVEN Hotels ®, HUALUXE® Hotels and Resorts, Crowne Plaza® Hotels & Resorts, voco™, Holiday Inn® Hotels & Resorts, Holiday Inn Express®, Holiday Inn Club Vacations®, avid™ hotels, Staybridge Suites®, Atwell Suites™ and Candlewood Suites®.

IHG franchises, leases, manages or owns nearly 5,800 hotels and approximately 865,000 guest rooms in more than 100 countries, with over 1,900 hotels in its development pipeline. IHG also manages IHG® Rewards Club, our global loyalty programme, which has more than 100 million enrolled members.

InterContinental Hotels Group PLC is the Group's holding company and is incorporated in Great Britain and registered in England and Wales. More than 400,000 people work across IHG's hotels and corporate offices globally.

Visit www.ihg.com for hotel information and reservations and www.ihgrewardsclub.com for more on IHG Rewards Club. For our latest news, visit: www.ihgplc.com/media and follow us on social media at: www.twitter.com/ihgcorporate, www.facebook.com/ihgcorporate and www.linkedin.com/company/intercontinental-hotels-group.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to Gibraltar.

answer: Gibraltar is a spot along the Mediterranean Sea that serves as a popular tourist destination. Holiday Inn Express Gibraltar will be the first branded mid-market hotel to be present in Gibraltar in decades. The new hotel is set to open during the summer of 2017, will feature 120 rooms, a restaurant and bar, and will be located close to the Gibraltar International Airport. The Holiday Inn Express brand offers great customer service and a free breakfast, and specifically, Holiday Inn Express Gibraltar is geared toward value-oriented guests and will feature the latest smart technology. Lastly, the country of Gibraltar is owned by the British.

text: Remove the third and fourth sentences from the response because it relates only to the hotel and not to Gibraltar.

refinement: Gibraltar is a spot along the Mediterranean Sea that serves as a popular tourist destination. Holiday Inn Express Gibraltar will be the first branded mid-market hotel to be present in Gibraltar in decades. Lastly, the country of Gibraltar is owned by the British.

text: Gibraltar is seen as a business center as well as a holiday destination where you can do tax-free shipping, enjoy leisure activities on the beach and dine in a variety of local and international restaurants. Include these in the response as well.

refinement: Gibraltar is a spot along the Mediterranean Sea that serves as a business center as well as a popular tourist destination where you can do tax-free shipping, enjoy leisure activities on the beach and dine in a variety of local and international restaurants. Holiday Inn Express Gibraltar will be the first branded mid-market hotel to be present in Gibraltar in decades.  Lastly, the country of Gibraltar is owned by the British.

answer: The new Holiday Inn Express in Gibraltar is expected to be the first international hotel and is scheduled to open during the summer of 2017. The hotel will be one of the new "next generation" Holiday Inn Expresses and will feature everything needed for the perfect night's sleep, and efficient, friendly service. Lastly, the hotel will be adjacent to the airport, city center, marina, and coastline, all of which are close enough to walk to.

text: Remove the second sentence that contains only a description of the hotel that is being built. This is not the subject of the question.

refinement: The new Holiday Inn Express in Gibraltar is expected to be the first international hotel and is scheduled to open during the summer of 2017. Lastly, the hotel will be adjacent to the airport, city center, marina, and coastline, all of which are close enough to walk to.

text: Gibraltar is a well-established finance center and a popular holiday destination on the Mediterranean where guests can enjoy tax free shopping, leisure activities on the beach as well as several dining destinations. Rewrite the final sentence to include the main attractions of Gibraltar.

refinement: The new Holiday Inn Express in Gibraltar is expected to be the first international hotel and is scheduled to open during the summer of 2017. Gibraltar is a well-established business center and popular tourist destination with an airport, city center, marina, and coastline, all of which offer opportunities for shopping, leisure and dining.

answer: InterContinental Hotels Group announced the signing of the first Holiday Inn Express hotel in Gibraltar. Gibraltar is well-established as a finance centre and is a popular Mediterranean holiday destination that offers tax free shopping, beach activities, and a variety of local and international restaurants. The Holiday Inn Epxress will be the first international mid-market hotel to have a presence there in decades.

answer: Gibraltar is a popular Mediterranean holiday destination and finance centre. The first Holiday Inn Express hotel in Gibraltar is being built and is expected to open in the summer of 2017. The hotel will offer 120 rooms, meeting facilities and a restaurant and bar. The Holiday Inn Express brand is based on attracting value oriented guests who are looking for a comfortable and affordable experience.

text: Remove the final two sentences of the response because it is a description of a hotel and not of Gibraltar.

refinement: Gibraltar is a popular Mediterranean holiday destination and finance centre. The first Holiday Inn Express hotel in Gibraltar is being built and is expected to open in the summer of 2017.

text: Include some of the attractions that businesspeople or tourists could experience. They can enjoy tax fee shopping, leisure activities on the beach as well as dining in a variety of restaurants.

refinement: Gibraltar is a popular Mediterranean holiday destination and finance centre where guests can enjoy tax fee shopping, beach activities and dine in a variety of restaurants. The first Holiday Inn Express hotel in Gibraltar is being built and is expected to open in the summer of 2017.

answer: The Holiday Inn Express Hotel in Gibraltar is set to open during the summer of 2017. It will be located close the Gibraltar International Airport on Devil's Tower Road.

text: Gibraltar is a well-established finance center and a popular holiday destination on the Mediterranean where guests can enjoy tax free shopping, leisure activities on the beach as well as several dining destinations. Rewrite the final sentence to include the main attractions of Gibraltar.

refinement: The Holiday Inn Express Hotel in Gibraltar is set to open during the summer of 2017. It will be located close the Gibraltar International Airport on Devil's Tower Road. Gibraltar is a well-established finance center and a popular holiday destination on the Mediterranean where guests can enjoy tax free shopping, leisure activities on the beach as well as several dining destinations.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about the amenities at the Holiday Inn Express hotel in Gibraltar?

answer: The new Holiday Inn Express hotel in Gibraltar will be equipped with modern smart technology, larger cosier beds, and a continental Express Café and Bar. The hotel will also offer guests a range of amenities including Wi-Fi included in the room price and a friendly and efficient service.

text: The hotel will have 120 rooms, a restaurant, bar and meeting facilities and is being developed at a site close to the airport and within walking distance to the city center, marina and coastline. Include these amenities in the response.

refinement: The new Holiday Inn Express hotel in Gibraltar will be equipped with modern smart technology, larger cosier beds, and a continental Express Café and Bar. The hotel will also offer guests a range of amenities including Wi-Fi included in the room price and a friendly and efficient service. The hotel will have 120 rooms, a restaurant, bar and meeting facilities and is being developed at a site close to the airport and within walking distance to the city center, marina and coastline.

answer: The property will feature a Next Generation guest experience complete with larger cosier beds, modern continental Express Café and Bar, and smart technology.

text: Guests are guaranteed a warm welcome, friendly and efficient service, a free breakfast and Wi-Fi included in the room price. Include these amenities in the response as well.

refinement: The property will feature a Next Generation guest experience complete with larger cosier beds, modern continental Express Café and Bar, and smart technology. Guests are guaranteed a warm welcome, friendly and efficient service, a free breakfast and Wi-Fi included in the room price.

text: The hotel will have 120 rooms, a restaurant, bar and meeting facilities and is being developed at a site close to the airport and within walking distance to the city center, marina and coastline. Include these amenities in the response.

refinement: The hotel will have 120 rooms, a restaurant, bar and meeting facilities and is being developed at a site close to the airport and within walking distance to the city center, marina and coastline. The property will feature a Next Generation guest experience complete with larger cosier beds, modern continental Express Café and Bar, and smart technology. Guests are guaranteed a warm welcome, friendly and efficient service, a free breakfast and Wi-Fi included in the room price.

answer: The hotel will feature 120 rooms, a restaurant, bar, and meeting facilities. It will have the latest smart technology, larger cosier beds, and a modern continental Express Cafe and Bar. A free breakfast and Wi-Fi are included in the room price.

text: The hotel will be located within walking distance from the airport, city center, marina and coastline, which makes it optimal for business and leisure guests. Include this feature in the response.

refinement: The hotel will feature 120 rooms, a restaurant, bar, and meeting facilities and is being built at a prime location within walking distance from the airport, city center, marina and coastline. It will have the latest smart technology, larger cosier beds, and a modern continental Express Cafe and Bar. A free breakfast and Wi-Fi are included in the room price.

text:
'Cosier' is used incorrectly in the response, remove it.
Include an acute accent in 'Cafe'.

refinement: The hotel will feature 120 rooms, a restaurant, bar, and meeting facilities and is being built at a prime location within walking distance from the airport, city center, marina and coastline. It will have the latest smart technology, larger beds, and a modern continental Express Cafè and Bar. A free breakfast and Wi-Fi are included in the room price.

answer: The hotel offers 120 rooms, a restaurant, bar, and meeting facilities. It is well-positioned for business and leisure guests, close to Gibraltar International Airport, the city center, marina, and coastline. It features a "Next Generation" Holiday Inn Express that offers larger cosier beds, the latest smart technology, a continental Express Cafe and Bar, and scalable hospitality suites.

text:
Remove 'cosier' from the response, it is used incorrectly.
Include an acute accent in 'Cafe'.

refinement: The hotel offers 120 rooms, a restaurant, bar, and meeting facilities. It is well-positioned for business and leisure guests, close to Gibraltar International Airport, the city center, marina, and coastline. It features a "Next Generation" Holiday Inn Express that offers larger beds, the latest smart technology, a continental Express Cafè and Bar, and scalable hospitality suites.

text: Breakfast and Wi-Fi are included in the room price. Add this to the response.

refinement: The hotel offers 120 rooms, a restaurant, bar, and meeting facilities. It is well-positioned for business and leisure guests, close to Gibraltar International Airport, the city center, marina, and coastline. It features a "Next Generation" Holiday Inn Express that offers larger beds, the latest smart technology, a continental Express Cafe and Bar, and scalable hospitality suites. Breakfast and Wi-Fi are included in the room price.

answer: It is a three-star rated property with 120 rooms, a restaurant, a café, a meeting room, and a bar. Its location is advantageous, being at the entrance of the city, and close to all kinds of transportation. It will feature updated beds, smarter technology, and an Express Café, and will be the first Holiday Inn Express in the country.

text: Breakfast and Wi-Fi are included in the room price. Add this to the response.

refinement: It is a three-star rated property with 120 rooms, a restaurant, a café, a meeting room, and a bar. Its location is advantageous, being at the entrance of the city, and close to all kinds of transportation. It will feature updated beds, smarter technology, and an Express Café, and will be the first Holiday Inn Express in the country. Breakfast and Wi-Fi are included in the room price.


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LOS BARRERAS is a census-designated place (CDP) in Starr County, Texas, United States. It is a new CDP formed from part of the La Rosita CDP prior to the 2010 census with a population of 288.[1]

Geography

Los Barreras is located at (26.391164, -98.918353).[2]

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title: Los Barreras, Texas

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where is Los Barreras located?

answer: Starr County, TX

answer: Los Barreras is located in Starr County, Texas, United States.

answer: Los Barreras is located in Starr County, Texas.

answer: Los Barreras is located in Starr County, Texas.

answer: Los Barreras is located in Starr County, Texas.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the population of Los Barreras?

answer: The population of Los Barreras is 288.

answer: The population of Los Barreras is 288.

answer: The population of Los Barreras is 288.

answer: Los Barreras is home to 288 people.

answer: 288 people lived in Los Barreras during the 2010 census

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What was Los Barreras formed from?

answer: Los Barreras was formed from part of the La Rosita CDP.

answer: Los Barreras was formed from part of the La Rosita CDP prior to the 2010 census.

answer: Los Barreras was formed from part of the La Rosita CDP.

answer: Los Barreras was formed from part of the La Rosita.

text: Additional detail of La Rosita being a CDP needs to be added to this response.

refinement: Los Barreras was formed from part of the La Rosita CDP.

answer: Los Barreras was formed from part of the La Rosita CDP prior to the 2010 census.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How old is Los Barreras?

answer: Los Barreras is a new CDP formed from part of the La Rosita CDP prior to the 2010 census with a population of 288. Therefore, Los Barreras is less than 10 years old.

answer: new

text: More needs to be added to this response to make it an accurate response.

answer: Los Barreras a new census-designated place formed in 2010.

answer: in 2010

text: This response does not answer the question at all and needs to be re-written.

refinement: It can be assumed that Los Barreras is not that old since it is a new CDP.

answer: Los Barreras is a new CDP formed after the 2010 census. Therefore, Los Barreras is less than 10 years old.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Los Barreras is a census-designated place in Starr County, Texas. It was formed for the 2010 census out of part of the La Rosita CDP.

answer: The text describes Los Barreras, a census-designated place (CDP) in the U.S. state of Texas. The CDP gained its name from a river.

text: The last part of the summary needs to be deleted as this information is not stated in the passage.

refinement: The text describes Los Barreras, a census-designated place (CDP) in the U.S. state of Texas.

answer: Los Barreras, a new census-designated place in Starr County, Texas, United States. It home to 288 people.

text: A grammar error is noticed where an "is" needs to be added to make this response a full sentence.

refinement: Los Barreras is a new census-designated place in Starr County, Texas, United States. It home to 288 people.

answer: Los Barreras is a census-designated place in Starr County, Texas. It was formed from a part of the La Rosita CDP before the 2010 census. The CDP has a population of 288.

answer: Los Barreras is a new census designated place in Starr County, Texas, located southwest of La Rosita. The population is 288 as of 2010.


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EMMA SOPHIA GALTON (1811–1904) was the author of an 1863 book entitled a _Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income_, which was published anonymously by Macmillan and credited to “A Banker's Daughter”.

Biography

Galton (1811–1904) was the fourth child of Samuel Tertius Galton and an elder sister of the eminent Victorian scientist Francis Galton.[1]

In writing her financial guide, Galton noted that: “Many young people, and especially widows and single ladies, when they first possess money of their own, are in want of advice when they have commonplace business matters to transact. […] My aim throughout is to avoid all technicalities; to give plain and practical directions, not only as to what ought to be done, but how to do it.”[2] She went on to advise:

  “When an inexperienced person comes into possession of her fortune, and especially if it be a small one, her first inquiry is, 'How can I invest my money so as to get the highest possible interest?' Let her rather seek to place it where her Capital will be safest. The Duke of Wellington used to say, 'High interest is another name for bad security.' In this country 4½ per cent is generally the highest safe Interest you can receive: 4 per cent, more usually so. When 6, 7, 8, or more per cent, is offered by Banks, Mortgages, Loans, or Mines, beware of accepting it, as the probability is that you will lose both your Principal and Interest, as so many have done. Such an Interest can seldom be given consistently with safety.”[3]

Galton's doubts concerning her brother Francis' theory of eugenics, a term he created, prompted him to write to her in defence of it telling her, “It is one of the few services that a man situated like myself can do, to take up an unpopular side when he knows it to be the true one”.[4] A copy of the correspondence between her and her brother is retained by the Wellcome Library.[5]

Legacy

The Victorian Women Writer's Project, hosted by Indiana University, has made a full transcription of the second edition of Galton's book (1864) available.[6]

Galton's advice was reappraised in December 2016 by BBC Radio 4's personal finance radio programme _ Money Box_, which reported that, “The book was probably the first general guide to finance, and certainly the first aimed at women who, like Emma herself, had found themselves with money of their own”.[7]

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title: Emma Sophia Galton

question: Who was Emma Sophia Galton?

answer: Emma Sophia Galton was the author of an 1863 book entitled a _Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income_, which was published anonymously by Macmillan and credited to “A Banker's Daughter”.

text: Doesn't mention her brother Francis Galton.

refinement: Emma Sophia Galton was the author of an 1863 book entitled a _Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income_, which was published anonymously by Macmillan and credited to “A Banker's Daughter” and elder sister of eminent Victorian scientist Francis Galton.

answer: the author of an 1863 book entitled a Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income

text: Doesn't mention her brother Francis Galton.

refinement: The author of an 1863 book entitled a Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income and elder sister of eminent Victorian scientist Francis Galton.

answer: She was the author of an 1863 book entitled a Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income.

text: Doesn't mention her brother Francis Galton.

refinement: She was the author of an 1863 book entitled a Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income and elder sister of eminent Victorian scientist Francis Galton.

answer: Emma Sophia Galton was a Victorian author of a financial guide for women, published in 1863.

text: Doesn't mention her brother Francis Galton.

refinement: Emma Sophia Galton was a Victorian author of a financial guide for women, published in 1863 and elder sister of eminent Victorian scientist Francis Galton.

question: When was Emma Sophia Galton born?

answer: 1811

answer: Galton was born in 1811.

answer: 1811

answer: 1811

question: What is the purpose of a Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters of Property and Income?

answer: The purpose of Galton's book is to provide guidance to inexperienced people who have recently come into possession of their own money, with a focus on financial matters.

answer: The purpose of the book is to give plain and practical directions, not only as to what ought to be done, but how to do it.

text: Doesn't specify as to what the advice pertains.

refinement: The purpose of the book is to give plain and practical directions, not only as to what ought to be done, but how to do it in financial matters.

answer: to offer practical advice to young people, especially widows and single ladies, who have recently come to possess money of their own

answer: The purpose of the book is to give practical advice to inexperienced people who have money of their own.

question: What is the significance of a Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters of Property and Income?

answer: Galton's book was one of the first general guides to finance, specifically aimed at women who had come into money of their own.

text: Doesn't make it clear that it was the first financial guide in general, and certainly the first directed at women.

refinement: Galton's book was one of the first general guides to finance, moreover it was certainly the first aimed at women who had come into money of their own.

answer: It was the first general guide to finance aimed at women who had found themselves with money of their own.

text: Doesn't make it clear that it was the first financial guide in general, and certainly the first directed at women.

refinement: It was the first general guide to finance, moreover it was certainly the first aimed at women who had found themselves with money of their own.

answer: It was the first general guide to finance aimed at women.

text: Doesn't make it clear that it was the first financial guide in general, and certainly the first directed at women.

refinement: It was the first general guide to finance, moreover it was certainly the first aimed at women.

answer: The book was probably the first general guide to finance, and certainly the first aimed at women who, like Emma herself, had found themselves with money of their own.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: This article is about Emma Sophia Galton, the author of an 1863 book entitled a Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income.

text: Doesn't mention it being the first financial guide ever published.

refinement: This article is about Emma Sophia Galton, the author of an 1863 book entitled a Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income, the first financial guide ever published.

answer: Emma Sophia Galton was the author of an 1863 book entitled a _Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income_, which was published anonymously by Macmillan and credited to “A Banker's Daughter”.

text: Doesn't mention it being the first financial guide ever published.

refinement: Emma Sophia Galton was the author of an 1863 book entitled a _Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income_, which was published anonymously by Macmillan and credited to “A Banker's Daughter”; it was the first financial guide ever published.

answer: Emma Sophia Galton wrote a financial guide for inexperienced people in the mid-1800s, advising them to invest their money safely rather than seeking high interest rates.

text: Doesn't mention it being the first financial guide ever published.

refinement: Emma Sophia Galton wrote a financial guide for inexperienced people in the mid-1800s, advising them to invest their money safely rather than seeking high interest rates; it was the first financial guide ever published.

answer: Emma Sophia Galton was the author of an 1863 book entitled a Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income.

text: Doesn't mention it being the first financial guide ever published.

refinement: Emma Sophia Galton was the author of an 1863 book entitled a Guide to the Unprotected in Every-Day Matters Relating to Property and Income, the first ever financial guide published.


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There’s something wonderful about food writer Olia Hercules. It’s not solely because she shares her surname with the almighty God of ancient Greece (though that couldn’t possibly go unnoticed). When you look at her Instagram feed, there’s just an idyllic quality to her lifestyle. Everything seems considered yet totally uncontrived, in an authentic, artisanal way.

The cover of her first recipe book is almost fairytale-like: all elaborate swirls, and the title ‘Mamushka’ conjuring images from Ukrainian folklore. Surely it must carry some profound, symbolic meaning?

"Oh, it’s from The Addams Family," Olia told me, as I turned up for lunch in the garden of her North London home.

Just after the dissolution of the Soviet Union, The Addams Family film became available in Ukraine (where Olia was born and raised). Before that, everything beyond the Soviet Union was known as ‘zagranitza’ (the abroad). That outside world was one of freedom – something to hope for. The ‘Mamushka’ was a silly, fictitious dance in the film, something she and her family found great humour and comfort in. ‘Mamushka’ became an affectionate name for the strong women in Olia’s family, signalling an appreciation of that silly freedom.

Olia\ was\ born\ and\ raised\ in\ Ukraine\ (KRIS\ KIRKHAM)

From the moment Olia opened the door and warmly pulled me inside her home, it was manifest that to her, family was everything. Her mother – also named Olia to make life easier for dad, I was told – embraced me and welcomed me into the house, before the pair loaded up my plate with hearty food.

I asked if her father was around and Olia couldn’t hold back the smile. She told me he was still in Ukraine, but she’d just finished a Skype call with him. For the first time in her life she’d seen him cry. He had copied and pasted the Amazon reviews of Olia’s cookbook into Google Translate, and was overcome with pride at his daughter becoming a published writer.

Olia apologised for some imperfect element of the lunch. It’s what chefs do; when you project so much of yourself into a dish, it becomes personal, and you instantly feel the need to make excuses for potential flaws. I saw nothing wrong. In fact, I could only taste perfection. The garlicky chicken was incredibly tender, and soaked in an herby liquor. With every mouthful a different flavour made itself known: dill; tarragon; parsley; so complex and addictive.

As I dragged my hunk of sourdough through the flavoursome juices, she told me where her love of food came from. I imagined it would be at her mother’s knee, in a Ukrainian kitchen where nothing is measured. She corrected me; that’s where she came to know food, but it was actually on her year-long visit to Italy during university, when a plate of warm spaghetti and sea urchins flicked the switch.

There\ are\ always\ empty\ plates\ when\ Olia\ cooks\ (KRIS\ KIRKHAM)

Amongst the memories, and the loving anecdotes of her son, Sasha, she told me about the latest recession; how the job she was in (TV) crumbled; how people were laid off. That prompted her to take her passion and make it into something more. She completed a diploma at Leith’s, before working the long hours in a professional kitchen for Yotam Ottolenghi. Now, she is being heralded as a new food star, casting a spotlight on Eastern European food. Many recipes in the book were inspired by her family: she spent weeks chasing her mum and grandma around the kitchen with scales and measuring spoons, trying to translate those vague ‘pinches’ and passed-down ‘glugs’ into reliable recipes.

Savouring my last bite of cheese-stuffed bread (which I will definitely be making) I queried whether her creativity could ever be caged in a professional kitchen – a place of regiment and hierarchy. She says it couldn't: she enjoyed working with Ottolenghi, but wants to "do my own thing" and style food (As I complimented the crockery, she recalled a journey back to Ukraine, to her grandma’s kitchen, when she filled an empty suitcase full of cutlery and knick-knacks to style her book authentically). That freedom also enables her to be a mother, a strong ‘Mamushka’.

What I liked most about Olia was her ability to maintain conversation without sacrificing a single bite of her food: she ate; she talked; she drank; she talked. She ate with her hands and insisted that I did. Both she and her book are so refreshing.

Recipes from Olia Hercules

Garlicky poussins with plum chutney

Spring radish & tomato salad

Georgian kidney bean salad

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize how the Olia Hercules' approach to food changes over the story.

answer: She eats with her hands to encourage her guests to do so. She enjoys experimenting and wants to do what she finds best for her. She says she can't see her creativity being caged in an established kitchen. She wants to do her own food. She matches her food styling with eastern heritage, yet she wants to do her own thing and styles food.

text: Quite vague

refinement: Initially she was ashamed to talk about her job with her family out of fear they may see her as unambitious. She was also nervous about leaving her job, but one day when a client mentioned the cookbook she was working on, Olia's conviction to leave the television bubble strengthened. Her experience in Italy during university awakened a desire to work with food and realized that looking in the eyes of her family, her creativity was never really caged.

answer: At first, Olia's love of food stemmed from the time spent in Italy while studying in university. After the recession and being laid off from her job, she decided to move from a role in the TV industry to focusing on her passion for cooking. This inspired her even further to try and authentically recreate her family's recipes using scales and measuring spoons. Olia's approach to food has shifted from a focus of enjoyment to one accompanied by reflection and dedication towards discovering her own style.

answer: Initially she was ashamed to talk about her job with her family out of fear they may see her as unambitious. She was also nervous about leaving her job, but one day when a client mentioned the cookbook she was working on, Olia's conviction to leave the television bubble strengthened. Her experience in Italy during university awakened a desire to work with food and realized that looking in the eyes of her family, her creativity was never really caged.

answer: Hercules came to know food in her mother's Ukranian kitchen where nothing is measured, but learned her love of food while visiting Italy for a year. Her job in TV crumbled and she decided to make her passion into something more by completing a diploma and doing some work experience. She started compiling her own cookbook by following her mother and grandmother around the kitchen to document their recipes. She wanted to style the food as authentically as possible before publishing it. She will not work in a professional kitchen, but continue creating and styling her own food.

answer: While her approach to food started with cooking with her family, she developed a professional understanding of it while assisting Yotam Ottolenghi. Now, she focuses on creating honest and authentic Eastern European cuisine. Her creativity is at the heart of her cooking, with freedom enabling her to also be a mother.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about Mamuschka?

answer: Mamuschka is the affectionate name given to strong women in Olia's family. She is inspired by her family and she believes in letting her creativity shine, even in professional kitchens.

answer: Olga is known as a loving mother and a hard worker. Her name is also meaningful since she is named after her grandmother.

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refinement: Although the name conjures images of Ukranian folklore, it is from Addams family TV series. After the Soviet Union was dissolved, the Addams family series became available in the Ukraine. Mamuscka became an affectionate name for the strong women in Olia's family and points to an appreciation of their silly freedom. Her freedom in deciding not to work in a professional kitchen, but rather keeping on creating and styling her own food makes her a strong mother figure in her own right.

answer: Mamuschka is an affectionate name that Olia has given to the strong women in her family. She credits her love of food to her visit to Italy during university, and values being able to preserve the freedom to be both a mother and a chef.

answer: Although the name conjures images of Ukranian folklore, it is from Addams family TV series. After the Soviet Union was dissolved, the Addams family series became available in the Ukraine. Mamuscka became an affectionate name for the strong women in Olia's family and points to an appreciation of their silly freedom. Her freedom in deciding not to work in a professional kitchen, but rather keeping on creating and styling her own food makes her a strong mother figure in her own right.

answer: Mamuschka is an affectional name for strong women in Olia's family. It means a silly, fictitious dance in the film Addams Family. Flicking the switch for food ignited in Italy for Olia. It is now a term for a strong woman in her family.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the recipes that Olia Hercules included in her cookbook.

answer: Garlicky poussins with plum chutney Spring radish & tomato salad Georgian kidney bean salad

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refinement: Garlicky poussins with plum chutney, Spring radish & tomato salad, and Georgian kidney bean salad.

answer: Olia said that her effort at making meals aimed to please the whole family, hence warm chicken soaked in garlic sauce and butter. For the recocktail she prepared salad from spinach, onions and coriander with sour cream dressing. Olia also threw in horseradish sauce as an afterthought first thing in the morning. as other parts of the meal included steaming doughy pies, and corn mashed dumplings with caramelized bacon.

text: Completely generative

refinement: Olia's cookbook contains recipes for garlicky poussins with plum chutney, spring radish, and tomato salad, and Georgian kidney bean salad. The poussins are coated in herbed oil and garlic; the radish, tomato and kidney bean salad is made with fresh herbs, red onion and tomatoes.

answer: The cookbook features garlicky poussins with plum chutney, a spring radish & tomato salad and a Georgian kidney bean salad. All three recipes feature ingredients from Eastern Europe.

answer: Olia's cookbook contains recipes for garlicky poussins with plum chutney, spring radish, and tomato salad, and Georgian kidney bean salad. The poussins are coated in herbed oil and garlic; the radish, tomato and kidney bean salad is made with fresh herbs, red onion and tomatoes.

answer: Olia Hercules' cookbook is a refreshing collection of Easter European recipes, some of which have been inspired by her family. Recipes mentioned in the article: Garlicky chicken with plum chutney, spring radish and tomato salad, Georgian kidney bean salad and cheese-stuffed bread. The garlicky chicken was tender and soaked in an herby liquor that revealed different flavors with every mouthful. She ate with her hands and insisted that others do so as well.


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May 17, 2016,06:27am EDT|

[Russ Alan Prince]

I write about the creation and management of exceptional wealth.

The hedge fund industry is under strain. Overall lackluster performance is resulting in lower fees and also prompting an exodus of clients such as pension funds, insurance companies, and sovereign wealth funds. At the same time, among a subset of single-family offices, the appeal of hedge funds is on a strong upswing.

Among single-family offices, about 20 percent can be classified as high-functioning. For an additional and even greater percentage of single-family offices, when it comes to investing the wealth of their ultra-wealthy families, they are doing an exceptional job. There are a number of interconnected reasons for the success these two segments of single-family offices are having with their hedge fund investments.

According to Rick Flynn, managing partner of FFO Business Management & Family Office, and the author of _The High-Functioning Single-Family Office_, “Over the last few years or so, family offices have become considerably more professional and sophisticated. High-functioning single-family offices are hiring top investment talent and motivating them. Many times these investment pros are given a portion of the performance they help generate. Another major reason for the success of their hedge fund investments is that senior management of high-functioning single-family offices is adept at negotiating very beneficial arrangements with hedge fund managers and other investment firms.”

A core best practice of high-functioning single-family offices is their ability to maximize relationships – especially investment manager relationships. This is a function of:

-   The inherent advantages single family offices have such as long time horizons and the ability and willingness to recommend investment firms to their moneyed peers.
-   Having a deep understanding of the business models of the investment managers they engage including their business development capabilities and details on the mechanics on how revenues turn into profits at these firms.

The bargaining expertise of senior executives in high-functioning single-family offices regularly results in different compensation arrangements with hedge funds than the traditional “2 & 20.” The management fee is usually under the gun. However, as an offset, the carried interest fee may be ratcheted up. Sometimes, to make it meaningful for a hedge fund, a high-functioning single-family office will ensure a substantial amount of money is invested and locked in. Doing so might entail pooling monies by bringing additional investors – habitually high-net-worth families of other single-family offices – to the hedge fund.

To date, the approach to selecting and working with hedge funds by high-functioning single-family offices is proving very, very financially rewarding for all parties. If the hedge funds can produce results, the single-family offices profit handsomely. Also, the hedge funds do exceedingly well. In fact, the hedge funds that deliver tend to generate greater fees than they would with the traditional compensation arrangement.

[Russ Alan Prince]

I am president of R.A. Prince & Associates, Inc. I consult with family offices, the ultra-wealthy and select professionals.

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question: When was the article written?

answer: May 17, 2016

answer: The article was written on May 17, 2016.

answer: The article was written on May 17, 2016.

answer: May 2016

text: The answer is incomplete

question: Who is the article written for?

answer: The article is written for the ultra-wealthy.

text: Though the article doesn't specify for whom it is written, it would interest investors and hedge fund managers as well as wealthy people

refinement: The article is written for hedge fund managers and investors

answer: The article is written for the hedge fund industry.

text: This article would interest more than just hedge fund managers

refinement: The article is written for the hedge fund industry, family officers, and other investors.

answer: "Ultra-wealthy" families

text: Though the article doesn't specify for whom it is written, it would interest investors and hedge fund managers as well as wealthy people

answer: The article is written for family offices, the ultra-wealthy, and select professionals.

question: Where was the article published?

answer: That information can't be found

answer: The article was published in Forbes.

answer: That information can't be found

answer: The article was published on a news website.

text: The information can't be found in the article but if you check the internet you'll find it published in Forbes

refinement: The information doesn't appear in the article

question: Who is the author?

answer: Russ Alan Prince

answer: The author is Russ Alan Prince.

answer: Russ Alan Prince

answer: Russ Alan Prince, president of R.A. Prince & Associates, Inc.

text:
[Russ Alan Prince]

I am president of R.A. Prince & Associates, Inc.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The author writes about the creation and management of exceptional wealth.

text: This is a partial answer.

refinement: The author writes about how the single-family offices of the ultra-wealthy benefit from negotiations with hedge fund and investment managers

answer: The hedge fund industry is under strain. Overall lackluster performance is resulting in lower fees and also prompting an exodus of clients such as pension funds, insurance companies, and sovereign wealth funds. At the same time, among a subset of single-family offices, the appeal of hedge funds is on a strong upswing.

text: This is a cut and paste of the first paragraph.

refinement: The hedge fund industry is under strain. Overall lackluster performance is resulting in lower fees and also prompting an exodus of clients such as pension funds, insurance companies, and sovereign wealth funds. At the same time, among a subset of single-family offices, the appeal of hedge funds is on a strong upswing.

answer: The author discusses the popularity of hedge funds with single-family offices as a tool to invest the wealth of "ultra-wealthy families."

text: among a subset of single-family offices, the appeal of hedge funds is on a strong upswing.

answer: High-functioning single-family offices are finding success with their hedge fund investments, as they are able to negotiate better terms than traditional arrangements.

text: Senior management of high-functioning single-family offices is adept at negotiating very beneficial arrangements with hedge fund managers and other investment firms.


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You know when you find out that you lost the item that you simply cannot lose? That’s me today. I lost a watch that was passed down from my grandfather, and he told me never to lose it because it was part of the family, kind of like a family heirloom or something. It didn’t matter that much to me, but I couldn’t help but feel a little bit of remorse.

The watch had seen things, things that you wouldn’t even believe. For one the watch had been with my grandfather in World War II. It almost was lost in the war but my grandfather literally risked his life to make sure that it would continue to be in the family. He was captured in the war and some fool wanted to take it for himself, my grandfather simply said “no” and the person beat him nearly to death. I guess that after that the person got bored and went off to try and steal something else. Yeah, that watch has seen things you would never believe.

My grandfather told me about his own father and his experiences with the watch. He said that his father was wearing the watch during the Great Depression, said that he was going to keep the watch even if it meant starving to death. The dust storms made the watch sort of rusty and decrepit looking but he fixed it up real good. My great grandfather’s wife kept on bugging him to sell the thing for a dollar but my great grandfather would not have it. That watch was here to stay; it has seen some things you wouldn’t believe.

My own father passed the watch down to me a few years back. He told me that he was wearing the watch when he met my mother. They both happened to be driving along and their cars just happened to break down in the same spot. He said it was like one of those things you see on TV where people just fall in love instantly like they were pieces of a puzzle. After they got both of their cars fixed he gave her his number and that was that.
You know I still haven’t told my story about what the watch has seen. I was wearing the watch when I saw a horrible car crash right in front of me, one of those crashes where the car flips over. I stepped out to see if I could help. There was a man in the car and he was cut up pretty bad, he was on death’s door it seemed like. He grabbed my hand with the watch on it and didn’t say nothing, just held on. The watch was there, it saw the man die right in front of it. After that the watch felt like it wasn’t even there, like something was gone from it. I don’t know, that watch has seen some things you wouldn’t even believe.

  When I finally found the watch sitting inside the couch I thought that it was time to give it to my son. He took it and kind of just threw it on his desk. I tried to explain to him that it was a family treasure and that it was important to keep because it had seen some things he wouldn’t even believe. After that my son asked what it had seen. I told him about the time I was climbing a very tall tower in some big city and that it had seen all the people beneath it, saw them walking about and it saw that those people all had different destinations. It saw that all of those people would just kind of ignore each other for the most part. It saw the birds in the sky and the clouds and the big buildings all combining to make something quite beautiful. It saw everything at that moment, and I mean everything. My son put on the watch and told me that it would see more than everything, that it would see impossible things that you would never even believe. And you know what? I believed him.

title: Short story: The Watch

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the watch?

answer: The text says that the watch has seen things which you wouldn't believe - things like war, car crashes, and personal life events. The watch is an important family treasure, probably because of all the moments in history that it has witnessed. The son takes it after its lost, and promises to see more than the things it's already seen.

text: The last sentence of the response is a bit clunky.

refinement: The text says that the watch has seen things which you wouldn't believe - things like war, car crashes, and personal life events. The watch is an important family treasure, probably because of all the moments in history that it has witnessed. The narrator's son promised to keep it safe, making it witness even more impossible things than it has already seen.

answer: The watch is a wristwatch that has been passed down for several generations. The narrator's great-grandfather kept it during the Great Depression, his grandfather had it during WWII, his father had it on when he met the narrator's mother, and at the end of the story, the narrator passes it on to his own son. The author repeats many times that the watch has "seen some things you wouldn't believe."

answer: The narrator inherited the watch from his father when the watch was sitting on the couch. The watch was sitting there for the longest time since it was found here and forgotten. The watch is part of the family because his grandfather, father, and son all owned the watch.

text: The first and second part of the response is inaccurate, as far as the story is concerned.

refinement: The narrator inherited the watch from his father - the watch has been in the family for generations. The watch is part of the family because his grandfather, father, and son all owned the watch. According to the narrator, the watch has seen a lot of things many would never believe - it was in the World War II, witnessed multiple deaths, etc

answer: The text says that the watch has seen some incredible things in its lifetime, such as World War II and a car crash. It is a family heirloom and has seen things that others would not believe. The watch is considered an important piece of family history. The author's son now wears it and promises that it will see even more incredible things in the future.

answer: The watch was from the 1920s, was passed from grandfather to father. The man's grandfather found it while away at war and while his father lost his job during the great depression, both never wanting to sell it. When his father passed on the watch to the narrator, he said it was when he and the narrator's mother first met, both cars broke down, and it's when they fell in love.


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Worried your baby will freak about her first haircut? These snippy strategies will keep her calm.

You might think your child's first trip to the salon is the cutest ever, but she won't see it that way. To her, being wrapped in a plastic cape, squirted with water, and attacked with sharp scissors by a stranger is just plain scary. "This is a peak time for stranger anxiety, and haircutting salons have lots of unfamiliar sights, sounds, and smells that can upset your child," says Kori Levos Skidmore, PhD, a child psychologist in Oak Park, Illinois. But getting those little bangs trimmed doesn't have to be hair-raising -- as long as you plan it properly.

Know When to Go

If your baby entered the world with luscious locks, she could be ready for a haircut as early as 8 months. But if she was a baldy, she may not need one until she's 2. There's no right or wrong time to go. It comes down to this: Do you want to preserve her baby look, or do you think she's ready for a big-kid 'do? "Keep in mind that once you cut off those curls, they may not grow back," says Christine Burger, founder of Noodle and Boo, a hair-care product line for babies and children. On the other hand, trimming superfine baby hair often makes it look thicker.

Give a Heads-Up

Toddlers don't like surprises, so have your child watch you get a haircut or visit his barber before the big day. "Talk to him about what he's seeing -- point out the cape he'll be wearing and what the scissors do," says Jane Loyd, owner of A Cut Above, a salon for children in Covington, Louisiana. Avoid using the word "cut," which may scare your child -- use "snip" or "trim" instead. Let him play with a squirt bottle in the tub at home, and pretend to trim his bangs with your fingers. And read books about the subject: We like _Henry's First Haircut_, by Dan Yaccarino, and _No Haircut Today!_ by Elivia Savadier.

Pick the Right Place

Choose a salon that knows how to deal with squirmy clients. Many kids' hair places have videos and books to keep little kids entertained. Some even do the first trim for free (others include a photo and certificate as part of a first-haircut package). If there isn't a children's barber in your town, ask your stylist to recommend someone who's especially good with kids.

Be Prepared

Let your child bring a lovey and a small toy. These will help him stay calm and keep his hands occupied. You might also hide a treat in your purse for afterward. Before the barber begins, swing the chair away from the mirror so your child doesn't fixate on the scissors. If he refuses to wear a cape, put one on and show him how it looks. If he won't sit still, you may need to plop him down on your lap for the duration. But make sure a friend (or someone else at the salon) is there to take pics.

Get Psyched

If you're apprehensive, your child will pick up on it and be more likely to cry during her haircut. "Talk to her about how much fun it will be," says Joanna Meiseles, founder of the Snip-its Hair Salon for Children chain. "Let her know how great she'll look after getting a trim. When she sees that you're looking forward to it, she will too."

Plan Carefully

Book your appointment between mealtime and naptime so your child isn't hungry or cranky. Call ahead to make sure the stylist is running on time. And don't hesitate to reschedule if your child seems out of sorts that day. "The first haircut sets the stage for years to come," says Loyd. "It's important to make it a positive experience."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the advice given for preparing for a child's first haircut.

answer: The child needs to understand what it means to get a haircut. So, a visit to a haircutting salon and asking the stylist what to do is recommended. To avoid surprises, parents can show their children videos of these places. It is recommended that the baby bring their favourite toys and a lovey. It is also recommended to hide a small treat in the child's purse after the haircut to make them happy.

text: The response misrepresents details from the passage.

refinement: The child needs to understand what it means to get a haircut. So, a visit to a haircutting salon and asking the stylist to recommended someone who's especially good with kids. To avoid surprises, parents can have their children watch them get a haircut or visit the barber before the big day. Talking to them about what they are seeing with the cape and scissors. It is recommended that the baby bring their favourite toys and a lovey. It is also recommended to hide a small treat in the parent's purse for after the haircut.

answer: Have the child watch you get a haircut prior to their first haircut. Let the child play with a squirt bottle in the tub and pretend to trim his hair with your fingers. Read books about children getting haircuts. Find a child-friendly barber and bring toys and a treat.

answer: Before your child's first haircut, talk to him about the experience and practice with him at home. Choose a salon that caters to kids, and arrange for the appointment at a time when he is not hungry or cranky. Finally, be prepared with toys and treats to help keep him calm.

answer: The advice given is to let the child observe another family member going through the haircut process. The children should also be allowed to play with a squirt bottle and washing his or her hair with his or her own fingers. A toy or something to provide enjoyment for the children are also advised. It is also suggested to put the child in the care of someone else when at the salon.

text: The response inaccurately mentions some details from the passage.

refinement: The advice given is to let the child observe another family member going through the haircut process. The children should also be allowed to play with a squirt bottle in the tub at home and pretend to trim their bangs with fingers. A toy or something to provide enjoyment for the children are also advised.

answer: To make a child's first haircut a positive experience, it is important to choose a salon that is prepared for cranky clients, let the child bring along items to help keep him calm, and talk about how fun the haircut will be. In addition, it is important that the haircut is scheduled at a time when the child is not hungry or cranky.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the elements of getting a haircut that a child might be afraid of.

answer: When getting a haircut, children can be afraid of being wrapped in a cape, squirted with water, attacked with scissors by a stranger, and entering an unfamiliar environment with unfamiliar sights, sounds, and smells. There are also things parents can do to help their child feel more comfortable. Preparation is key, including speaking with their child about the haircut ahead of time, selecting a salon with staff who are well-equipped to handle squirmy clients, and setting up a distraction such as a lovey and small toy. Lastly, parents should be prepared themselves, staying calm and talking positively about the haircut.

text: The response mentions details from the text that are not useful for the task.

refinement: When getting a haircut, children can be afraid of being wrapped in a cape, squirted with water, attacked with scissors by a stranger, and entering an unfamiliar environment with unfamiliar sights, sounds, and smells.

answer: A child may be frightened by a stranger with sharp scissors and a cape. They may fear the world around them. Women along with the tools of the trade may scare them. All of these, the cape, and the stranger and the tools will ensure that a child will be frightened of this process.

text: The response is redundant as it repeats a couple of details from the text.

refinement: A child may be frightened by a stranger with sharp scissors and a cape. They may fear the world around them. Women along with the tools of the trade may scare them.

answer: A child might be afraid during a haircut of being wrapped in a cape, having water squirted on them, of unfamiliar sights and sounds, and of being approached with sharp scissors by a stranger. Some establishments have books or videos to keep children entertained while their hair is being cut, and most recommend choosing a barber who is experienced with children. Parents can also prepare their child for the haircut by talking about what to expect and by practicing with a squirt bottle at home. It's important to avoid approaching a haircut with apprehension so the experience will be positive.

text: The response mentions details from the text that are not useful for the task.

refinement: A child might be afraid during a haircut of being wrapped in a cape, having water squirted on them, of unfamiliar sights and sounds, and of being approached with sharp scissors by a stranger.

answer: A child might be afraid of the unfamiliar sights, sounds, and smells of a salon. The process of being wrapped in plastic, squirted with water, and attacked by sharp scissors is also scary. The word "cut" might be scary to a child. They might also fixate on the scissors in the mirror.

answer: The author explains that a child can have a peak time of stranger anxiety due to the unfamiliar sights, sounds, and smells of getting their haircut in a children's salon. The use of scissors by a stranger that the child doesn't know can also be scary. The idea of baldness coming from getting a haircut can be upsetting for a child as well. The idea of sitting through a haircut in a mirrored area where a child can see themselves get cut with scissors is unsettling as well. The author minimizes these concerns by socializing the child with the haircut process before the first public haircut, giving a warning, and minimizing the use of the scissors in public to hide their sharpness from a child's view or heavily disguised.

text: The response mentions some elements that are not referenced in the passage.

refinement: The author explains that a child can have a peak time of stranger anxiety due to the unfamiliar sights, sounds, and smells of getting their haircut in a children's salon. The use of scissors by a stranger that the child doesn't know can also be scary. The idea of sitting through a haircut in a mirrored area where a child can see themselves get cut with scissors is unsettling as well. The author minimizes these concerns by socializing the child with the haircut process before the first public haircut, giving a warning.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the advice Jane Loyd provides.

answer: Jane Loyd suggests providing advance notice to your child about their first hair trim, and choosing a salon where children feel comfortable. She also recommends getting your child excited about the process, and planning your haircut during a time when your child is likely to be calm. Finally, she advises providing your child plenty of distractions, like a lovey and toy, and planning ahead in order to minimize any possible distress.

text: There is no evidence in the text to suggest that Jane Loyd recommends the described details.

refinement: Jane Loyd suggests providing advance notice to your child about their first hair trim, and choosing a salon where children feel comfortable.

text: The response misses to mention that Jane Loyd says that it's important for the first haircut to be a positive experience as it sets the stage for years to come. It also misses to mention to explain to the child what they will be seeing in the salon so that they know what to expect.

refinement: Jane Loyd suggests providing advance notice to your child about their first hair trim, and choosing a salon where children feel comfortable. She mentions to explain to the child what they will be seeing in the salon so that they know what to expect. Loyd also mentions the importance that the first haircut is a positive experience as it sets the stage for years to come.

answer: Loyd recommends talking to the child about what she is seeing and point out the cape and scissors. She also suggests that the child plays in the tub and read books about haircuts. Loyd also recommends that you tell your child how fun it will be when she sees how great she'll look after getting a trim.

text: The response also provides advice from Joanna Meiseles instead of Jane Loyd.

refinement: Loyd recommends talking to the child about what she is seeing and point out the cape and scissors. She also suggests that the child plays in the tub and read books about haircuts.

answer: Jane Loyd advises talking with your child about the haircut before the big day, choosing a salon that understands nervous kids, and planning the appointment at mealtime or at nap time. Finally, she suggests accentuating the positive aspects of the haircut to help make it a more positive experience.

answer: Loyd recommends talking to the child about what happens at a hair salon. She also stresses the importance of making the first haircut a positive experience.

answer: Jane Loyd recommends that you show your child the things it will experience before the big day - what the cape will look like and how the scissors work. You should also let your child play with water and pretend to trim his/her bangs with your fingers.


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CANDI DASA, or often CANDIDASA is a seaside town on the eastern cost of Bali that rests on the edge of a fresh water lagoon, named Candi Dasa Lagoon. The town is centred around _Jalan Raya Candida_, where a number of hotels, restaurants, and shops line the main road. It is popular tourist stop, attracting divers and those looking for a more sedate alternative to the busy, nightclub filled Kuta area or the large, manicured resorts at Nusa Dua.[1]

History

[Lagoon in Candi Dasa.]

Most sources say a fishing village was founded on the site by the 12th century and before the modern name of _Candi Dasa_ was adopted it was known as both Teluk Kehen (“Bay of Fire”)[2] and Cilidasa. It is thought that the temple near the lagoon, with a statue of the fertility goddess Hariti surrounded by a group of children is the origin of the name _cilidasa_ which translates from Balinese as “ten children”. Many Balinese who want to have children go on pilgrimage to this temple to pray [3] The modern name is thought to be a corruption of this older name.

The town began to catch on as a tourist destination in the 1970s. The diving and snorkeling in the area brought many tourists and the village began to grow. Hotels, villas, and restaurants popped up along the main strip, and in more recent years, atms, health clinics, and mini marts are also found here. Apart from great diving and snorkeling, the town provides easy access to other destinations in eastern Bali.

Beach erosion

As tourism boomed in the 1970s and 1980s, Candidasa received a large amount of investment in tourism and a construction boom occurred. To fuel the construction of beach bungalows, new homes and restaurants, the offshore reef was mined for lime to make cement and other construction materials. This removed the coastal barrier that had protected the beach which was undermined and washed away.

During the 90's local hotel owners constructed a series of t-shaped groins jutting out into the water in an attempt to preserve the beach, with mixed results.[4] However, with government programs to stop erosion and more awareness of the importance of the reefs, the beaches are now somewhat recovered.

Diving

Candidasa is a great spot for snorkeling and diving. There are three islands just of the coast: Gili Tepekong, Gili Mimpang and - a bit further north-east, Gili Biaha. All three offer excellent diving, especially for more experienced divers. Currents can be quite strong and surprising, but most of the dive centres in Candidasa have experienced dive instructors and guides to lead the way. Other dive sites include the Jetty (in between Candidasa and Padang Bai), which is a paradise for macro fans.

In the area

Candidasa is a great base for explorations in East Bali. Only about 15 minutes to the east is the Virgin Beach, one of the most beautiful and natural beaches in Bali. Also close by is the village of Tegunan Pegringsingan, one of the oldest villages in Bali. This is an interesting place to visit if you are interested in the history and unique culture of the area.

The large Lotus Lagoon on the main road in Candidasa is a favorite stop for photographs. At sunset it is especially pretty as a backdrop for some holiday snaps.

Gallery

File:Candidasa Fishing Boats.jpg|Fishing boats File:Jetty at candidasa.jpg|Jetty

[1] Karma prevails over popular Bali seaside resort Candi Dasa The Jakarta Post, May 17, 2001

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[4] Pantai Bali, Keindahan yang Perlu Perhatian Oleh Melani Bali Post, November 22, 2006

title: Candi Dasa

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the Candi Dasa?

answer: Candi Dasa is a seaside town on the border of Bali and the eastern cost, known for its diving and snorkeling. Over time, due to construction boom, the offshore reef was mined for lime for cement, thus undermining and washing away the beach. Today, with more awareness of the importance of the reefs, the beaches are recovering.

text: The response contains inaccurate information.

refinement: Candi Dasa is a seaside town on the eastern cost of Bali, known for its diving and snorkeling. Over time, due to construction boom, the offshore reef was mined for lime for cement, thus undermining and washing away the beach. Today, with more awareness of the importance of the reefs, the beaches are recovering.

answer: it's a seaside town on the eastern cost of Bali that rests on the edge of a fresh water lagoon; named Candi Dasa Lagoon.

text: The response could be phrased as a complete sentence.

refinement: Candi Dasa is a seaside town on the eastern cost of Bali that rests on the edge of a fresh water lagoon, Candi Dasa Lagoon.

answer: Candi Dasa or Candidasa is a seaside town on the eastern cost of Bali. It rests on the edge of Candi Dasa Lagoon.

answer: Candi Dasa is a seaside town on the eastern cost of Bali that rests on the edge of a fresh water lagoon, named Candi Dasa Lagoon.

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Candi Dasa is a seaside town on the eastern coast of Bali that rests on the edge of a fresh water lagoon. The town is popular among tourists, especially divers and those looking for a more sedate alternative to busy nightclubs and large resorts. Before its name was adopted, it was known as both Teluk Kehen and Cilidasa. The modern name is thought to be a corruption of the older name.

There is erosion of the beaches because of construction that has taken place in the area. However, Candi Dasa is a great spot for diving with opportunities for more experienced divers. There are also natural attractions nearby, including the Virgin Beach and the ancient village of Tegunan Pegringsingan.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Candi Dasa's history?

answer: Candi Dasa used to be a fishing village. It was named as "Bay of Fire" when European traders arrived. Europeans named it Cilidasa after a temple in the area. The town was a popular tourist destination in the 1970s and 1980s.

text: The response contains misleading and inaccurate information not found in the article.

refinement: Candi Dasa used to be a fishing village. It was named the "Bay of Fire" when it was founded in the 12th century. It was also known as Cilidasa after a temple in the area. The town has been a popular tourist destination since the 1970s and 1980s.

answer: Candi Dasa is a seaside town that is centred around Jalan Raya Candida. The village is thought to have been founded in the 12th century, and before the modern name of Candi Dasa was adopted, the town was called both Teluk Kehen and Cilidasa. Cilidasa translates from Balinese as "ten children", suggesting its history as a fishing village. However, a construction boom in the 1970s caused beach erosion and has led to the destruction of the coastal barrier. Although some attempts have been made to improve the beach, it is still largely in decline. In addition, the area has some fantastic diving with great sites like the Jetty and the Virgin Beach nearby.

text: The response contains inaccurate information.

refinement: Candi Dasa is a seaside town that is centred around Jalan Raya Candida. The village is thought to have been founded in the 12th century, and before the modern name of Candi Dasa was adopted, the town was called both Teluk Kehen and Cilidasa. Cilidasa translates from Balinese as "ten children", which is thought to refer to a nearby temple. However, a construction boom in the 1970s caused beach erosion and has led to the destruction of the coastal barrier. Although some attempts have been made to improve the beach, it is still largely in decline. In addition, the area has some fantastic diving with great sites like the Jetty and the Virgin Beach nearby.

answer: Candi Dasa is a seaside town that was founded as a fishing village in the 12th Century. The modern name was likely a corruption of an earlier name referencing its status as a place where many people come to pray for children. The town has skyrocketed in popularity in recent decades due to its great diving and snorkeling, and easy access to other places in eastern Bali. Reef mining by construction companies in the 1970s and 1980s weakened the shoreline, resulting in beach erosion. Now, there are various programs designed to slow erosion, and the beaches have slightly improved.

answer: The area containing Candi Dasa used to be a fishing village founded by the 12th century and before modern name Candidasa was adopted, it was known in two different forms, Teluk Kehen and Cilidasa.

text: The response could include more information on Candi Dasa's history.

refinement: The area containing Candi Dasa used to be a fishing village founded by the 12th century and before modern name Candidasa was adopted, it was known in two different forms, Teluk Kehen and Cilidasa. Starting in the 1970s the town became a popular tourist destination due to good diving and snorkeling locations nearby.

answer: A fishing village was founded there during the 12th century. The name Candidasa was adopted as it used to be known as both Teluk Kehen and Cilidasa.  The town later became a tourist destination in the 1970s.

text: The response could use clearer language.

refinement: A fishing village was founded there during the 12th century. The modern name Candidasa was adopted from one if its previous names, Cilidasa. It was also known as Teluk Kehen.  The town later became a tourist destination in the 1970s.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about diving in Candi Dasa?

answer: The text says that Candi Dasa is a popular spot for snorkeling and diving with excellent diving opportunities. There are several dive sites in the area including the Jetty, which is great for macro fans.

answer: The text explicitly states that Candi Dasa is a great spot for diving, with many good sites and experienced dive instructors. There can be strong currents but this is overcome by the quality of the diving experience.

answer: The area is a great spot for snorkeling and diving, especially for more experienced divers. The town is the home to three islands just off the coast: Gili Tepekong, Gili Mimpang, and Gili Biaha. Currents can be strong and surprising and some dive centres employ experienced dive instructors and guides to guide visitors.

answer: Candidasa is a great spot for snorkeling and diving. It has three islands just of the coast: Gili Tepelong, Gili Mimpang, and Gili Biaha. All three offer excellent diving, especially for experienced divers.

answer: Diving in Candi Dasa is great for the more experienced. The coral and fish provide pleasant distractions and the opportunity for new species. Homestays in the area allow visitors to get to know the daily lives of the local fishermen, who are skilled frog-catchers in their own right. As tourism boomed in the 70s, Candidasa received a large amount of investment in tourism, and remains a diver's paradise as a result.

text: The response contains inaccurate information and baseless conjecture.

refinement: Diving in Candi Dasa is great for the more experienced. There are several diving spots nearby, but the currents there can be strong and surprising. As tourism boomed in the 70s, Candidasa received a large amount of investment in tourism, and remains a diver's paradise as a result.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Candi Dasa's tourist attractions?

answer: Candi Dasa is a seaside town of great diving and snorkeling for tourists. The town is also close to the Virgin Beach and Tegunan Pegringsingan.

answer: Candi Dasa has become a popular tourist destination on Bali mostly for divers because of the many dive sites in the area. Some of the respondents say Candi Dasa is more sedate than the busy nightclub filled Kuta area or the large manicured resorts in Nusa Dua. Candi Dasa also has a very nice beach that's great for photographs, but in recent years the beach has been eroded by strong currents, endangering the town's future as a desirable tourist destination.

text: The response leaves out some relevant information.

refinement: Candi Dasa has become a popular tourist destination on Bali mostly for divers because of the many dive sites in the area. Some of the respondents say Candi Dasa is more sedate than the busy nightclub filled Kuta area or the large manicured resorts in Nusa Dua. Candi Dasa also has a very nice beach that's great for photographs, but in recent years the beach has been eroded by strong currents, but government programs and spreading awareness have allowed the beach to recover somewhat.

answer: Candidasa is a great base for explorations in East Bali. It is 15 minutes east of Virgin Beach and also close to the village of Tegunan Pegringsingan. The large Lotus Lagoon is also on the main road in Candidasa and is a favorite stop for photographs.

answer: Candi Dasa is a popular tourist destination, attracting divers and those looking for a more sedate alternative to the busy, nightclub filled Kuta area or the large, manicured resorts at Nusa Dua. The town is popular for its great diving and snorkeling opportunities and easy access to other destinations in eastern Bali. The beaches at Candi Dasa have experienced beach erosion caused by mining the offshore reef for lime to make construction materials. However, the beaches are recovering due to government programs to stop erosion and more awareness of the importance of the reefs. There are also several dive sites in the Candi Dasa area. Finally, Candi Dasa is a great base for exploration of eastern Bali.

answer: Candi Dasa is a seaside town on the coastal edge of the Candi Dasa Lagoon. The town is popular with those wishing to visit other parts of Bal in the east of the island, including the Virgin Beach and Tegunan Pegringsingan. The dive sites - Gili Tep…ang and Gili Biaha - are appreciated for their strong currents and for their macro sites there. Candidasa also has its own shoreline reef which is a great stop to photograph especially at sunset.

text: The response should include the full names of the dive sites and the proper spelling of Bali.

refinement: Candi Dasa is a seaside town on the coastal edge of the Candi Dasa Lagoon. The town is popular with those wishing to visit other parts of Bali in the east of the island, including the Virgin Beach and Tegunan Pegringsingan. The dive sites - Gili Tepekong, Gili Mimpang, and Gili Biaha - are appreciated for their strong currents and for their macro sites there. Candidasa also has its own shoreline reef which is a great stop to photograph especially at sunset.


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This was my first short story I had to write for my Creative Writing class back when I was a Junior in high school. I hope you like it!

    "Ooohhhh," Helen groaned. She hurt everywhere. Being in a hospital for six weeks is really something that she wasn't looking forward to. She was about to call for a nurse to change the channel on her tiny tv (golf was not her thing!) when all of a sudden there was a knock on the door. "Come in," she called weakly.

   "Hello, I'm Dr. Bandade, how are you feeling?" He smiled a toothy smile.

   She gave the burly man a sarcastic look. "How do you *think* I'm feeling? I fell out of a five-story window!"

    The doctor pulled up a chair next to her. "Yes about that, how exactly did it happen? On this statement is says that you were pushed?"

    Helen cringed at the very thought of it, not only because it was painful, but she wasn't sure if he would believe her. "Well, it started out as a normal day. I woke up, ate breakfast, completed the daily crossword puzzle in the paper.

    "It was then I noticed that my window was open. A cool breeze swept through, so I decided to close it. I got up and went over to the window.

    "Right as I reached out to grab the handle, Rufus, my cat, rubbed against my leg, causing me to lose my balance. Before I knew it, I was falling out the window!

    "I screamed. I heard people screaming below me. I felt breathless. Panic swept over me.

    "It was only too soon when I came into contact with the ground. I heard bones shattering and I cried out in pain. In the distance, sirens wailed. The ambulance charged down the street.

    "After they put me on the stretcher, they hauled me away to the hospital, where they told me I was lucky to even be alive. They said I broke every bone in my body. I'll be here about six weeks, if not more." Her face fell when she told the doctor this. "And that's all that happened."

    Dr. Bandade looked over at her. "So you fell out accidentally then."

    "No! I was *pushed* out!" she yelled.

    "But you even said that you lost your balance, and no one was with you."

    "Yes there was... Rufus! *He* pushed me out!"

    The doctor rationalized, "But he's a *cat.* He probably didn't realize that rubbing against you to show affection would-"

    But Helen cut him off. "He *deliberately* rubbed too hard and made me lost my balance."

    "What would be the purpose for Rufus to push you?" The doctor raised an eyebrow.

    "He's just evil," she simply said.

    "Oh." He wrote some things down on his clipboard.

    Helen stared at him suspiciously. "What kind of doctor are you anyway, asking me all these questions?"

    "I'm a psychiatrist." He wrote some more things down.

    "What? You think I'm crazy don't you?! I'm telling you, my cat is trying to *kill me!"*

    Before Dr. Bandade could say anything, there was a knock at the door.

    "Excuse me, doctor," the nurse said, "but there's someone here to see her."

    Helen perked up a bit. A visitor to see her!

    The visitor walked into the room.

    "Rufus!" Helen shrieked.

    Standing there was the tabby cat. He was staring at her with glossy green eyes, slanted into slits. His tail twitched as if to say, "I'm *back."*

title: Paranoid?... Or Just Plain Evil?

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who does Helen blame for her fall?

answer: She blames Rufus, her cat. She claims that her cat is evil. Her doctor is a psychiatrist and thinks she may be paranoid. Then a visitor comes to the hospital. It's Rufus — her cat.

text: Mentioning that Helen thinks her cat is evil, what the doctor may think about her and her cat's visit is irrelevant to the question. The answer should erase this.

refinement: She blames Rufus, her cat, because it rubbed its tail against her leg, causing her to fall out of her window.

answer: Helen blames Rufus, her cat, for her fall.

answer: Her cat Rufus.

answer: Helen blames her cat for her fall.

answer: Helen blames her cat, Rufus, for her fall.

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Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What injury did Helen suffer?

answer: She broke every bone in her body falling out of a five-story window.

answer: Helen suffered a fall out of a five-story window, causing her to break all of her bones.

answer: Helen suffered a fall from a five-story window.

text: The answer does not mention the injury itself. It should include this for clarity.

refinement: Helen suffered a fall from a five-story window, breaking every bone in her body.

answer: Helen broke every bone in her body and broke her skull.

text: The story does not mention that Helen broke her skull. The answer should exclude this inaccuracy.

text: The answer omits that she fell out of a five-story window. The answer should include this.

refinement: Helen fell out of a five-story window and broke every bone in her body.

answer: She fell out a five story window. This caused her to break all of her bones. According to the medical report she must be in the hospital for six weeks.

text:
-The hospital's report is not relevant to answering the question and should be removed.
-Five-story is supposed to be hyphenated.

refinement: She fell out a five-story window. This caused her to break all of her bones.


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is a Japanese professional shogi player, ranked 9-dan.[1] He is a former Ryūō title holder, and a former non-executive director of the Japan Shogi Association.

Fujii is known for developing the Fujii System, a class of strategies for Fourth File Rook positions against Static Rook opponents especially Static Rook Anaguma.

Shogi professional

Fujii's first tournament championship as a professional came in 1996 when he defeated Tadahisa Maruyama 2 games to 1 to win the 27th tournament.[2][3][4] The following year, Fujii defended his championship by defeating Mamoru Hatakeyama 2 games to none to win the 28th Shinjin-Ō tournament.[5][6] Fujii won the tournament for a third time in 1999 when he defeated Kazushiza Horiguchi 2 games to none to win the 30th Shinjin-Ō tournament.[7][8] Fujii is the only person to win the Shinjin-Ō tournament three times.[9]

Fujii's first appearance in a major title match came in 1998 when he challenged Kōji Tanigawa for the 11th Ryūō title. Fujii earned the right to challenge Tanigawa by winning Class 4 in the tournament's preliminary rounds and then advancing to the finals of the challenger's tournament where he defeated Yoshiharu Habu 2 games to 1.[10][11] In the title match against Tanigawa, Fujii won the first four games to sweep the match 4 game to none and win his first major title.[12][13][14] Fujii successfully defended his title the next two years when he defeated Daisuke Suzuki 4 games to 1 (12th Ryūō title match)[15][16] in 1999 and Habu 4 games to 3 (13th Ryūō title match) in 2000,[17][18][19] Fujii's victory of Habu made him the first person to win the Ryuo title three years in a row.[20] Fujii, however, was unable to defend his title a third consecutive time when he lost to Habu 4 games to 1 in the 14th Ryūō title match in 2001.[21][22]

Fujii also challenged Habu for the 48th and 58th Ōza titles in 2000 and 2010 respectively as well as for the 53rd Ōi title in 2012, but lost each time: 48th Ōza (2002) 3 games to 2; 58th Ōza (2010) 3 games to none; and 53rd Ōi (2012) 4 games to 1.[23][24][25][26]

Fujii became the 49th professional to win his 600th official game when he defeated Tetsurō Itodani on January 27, 2016.[27]

JSA director

Fujii was selected to Japan Shogi Association's board of directors as a non-executive director at association's 63rd General Meeting in June 2012.[28] He served in that capacity until June 2014.[29]

Promotion history

Fujii's promotion history is as follows:[30]

-   1986, April: 6-kyū
-   1988, October: 1-dan
-   1991, April 1: 4-dan
-   1994, April 1: 5-dan
-   1995, April 1: 6-dan
-   1998, October 1: 7-dan
-   1999, October 1: 8-dan
-   2000, October 1: 9-dan

Titles and other championships

Fujii has appeared in major title matches seven times and has won three titles. He won the 11th (1998), 12th (1999) and 13th (2000) Ryūō titles.[31] In addition to major titles, Fujii has won eight non-major-title championships during his career.[32]

Major titles

  Title   Years      Number of times overall
  ------- ---------- -------------------------
  Ryūō    19982000   3

Other championships

  Tournament   Years            Number of times
  ------------ ---------------- -----------------
               19961997, 1999   3
               2002, 2005       2
               2016             1
  *            1997             1
  *            1999             1

Note: Tournaments marked with an asterisk (*) are no longer held.

Awards and honors

Fujii has received a number of awards and honors throughout his career for his accomplishments both on an off the shogi board. These include the Annual Shogi Awards given out by the JSA for performance in official games as well as other JSA awards for career accomplishments, and awards received from governmental organizations, etc. for contributions made to Japanese society.[33][34]

Annual Shogi Awards

-   24th Annual Awards (April 1996March 1997): Masuda Award
-   26th Annual Awards (April 1998March 1999): Most Games Won, Most Games Played, Technique Award
-   27th Annual Awards (April 1999March 2000): Distinguished Service Award
-   28th Annual Awards (April 2000March 2001): Technique Award
-   38th Annual Awards (April 2010March 2011): Game of the Year Special Prize
-   40th Annual Awards (April 2012March 2013): Masuda Award

Other awards

-   1999, January: Numata City Meritorius Citizen Award
-   2016, January: Shogi Honor Award (Awarded by the JSA in recognition of winning 600 official games as a professional)
-   2016: 25 Years Service Award (Awarded by the JSA in recognition of being an active professional for twenty-five years)

Year-end shogi prize money and game fee ranking

Fujii has finished in the “Top 10” of the JSA's nine times since 1993, and in the “Top 3” twice.

  Year   Amount        Rank
  ------ ------------- ----------
  1998   ¥27,050,000   6th[35]
  1999   ¥61,460,000   4th[36]
  2000   ¥65,030,000   3rdh[37]
  2001   ¥58,230,000   2nd[38]
  2002   ¥34,170,000   6th[39]
  2005   ¥19,810,000   9th[40]
  2006   ¥25,060,000   7th[41]
  2010   ¥24,100,000   8th[42]
  2012   ¥17,050,000   9th[43]

-   Note: All amounts are given in Japanese yen and include prize money and fees earned from official tournaments and games held from January 1 to December 31.

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title: Takeshi Fujii

question: Who is Takeshi Fujii?

answer: Takeshi is a professional shogi player.

text: It misses to mention that Fujii is Japanese and is ranked 9-dan.

refinement: Takeshi is a Japanese professional shogi player, ranked 9-dan.

answer: Takeshi Fujii is a Japanese professional shogi player, ranked 9-dan. He is known for developing the Fujii System, a class of strategies for Fourth File Rook positions against Static Rook opponents.

text: "Japanese professional shogi player, ranked 9-dan" is evidence of who Fujii is

text: "Fujii is known for developing the Fujii System, a class of strategies for Fourth File Rook positions against Static Rook opponents" is evidence of who Fujii is

answer: He is a Japanese professional shogi player, ranked 9-dan.

text: "Japanese professional shogi player, ranked 9-dan" is evidence of who Fujii is.

answer: Takeshi Fujii is a Japanese professional shogi player, ranked 9-dan.

text: "Japanese professional shogi player, ranked 9-dan" is evidence of who Fujii is.

question: When did Fujii play his first tournament?

answer: In 1996.

text: "Fujii's first tournament championship as a professional came in 1996" is evidence of Fuji's first tournament in 1996.

answer: Fujii played his first tournament in 1986.

text: There is no evidence to suggest that Fujii's first tournament was in 1986. It was 1996.

refinement: Fujii played his first tournament in 1996.

answer: 1986

text: There is no evidence to suggest that Fujii's first tournament was in 1986. It was 1996.

answer: Fujii played his first tournament in 1986.

text: There is no evidence to suggest that Fujii's first tournament was in 1986. It was 1996.

refinement: Fujii played his first tournament in 1996.

question: Who did he win his first tournament against?

answer: Fujii won his first tournament against Tadahisa Maruyama.

text: "Fujii's first tournament championship as a professional came in 1996 when he defeated Tadahisa Maruyama" is evidence of Fujii winning his first tournament against Tadahisa Maruyama.

answer: Tadahisa Maruyama

text: "Fujii's first tournament championship as a professional came in 1996 when he defeated Tadahisa Maruyama" is evidence of Fujii winning his first tournament against Tadahisa Maruyama.

answer: Tadahisa Maruyama

text: "Fujii's first tournament championship as a professional came in 1996 when he defeated Tadahisa Maruyama" is evidence of Fujii winning his first tournament against Tadahisa Maruyama.

answer: He won his first tournament against Tadahisa Maruyama.

text: "Fujii's first tournament championship as a professional came in 1996 when he defeated Tadahisa Maruyama" is evidence of Fujii winning his first tournament against Tadahisa Maruyama.

question: Till when was Fujii JSA's board of directors?

answer: Fujii was selected to Japan Shogi Association's board of directors as a non-executive director at association's 63rd General Meeting in June 2012. He served in that capacity until June 2014.

text: "He served in that capacity until June 2014" is evidence of when Fujii served as JSA's board of directors until.

answer: Fujii was a non-executive director of the Japan Shogi Association from June 2012 to June 2014.

text: "He served in that capacity until June 2014" is evidence of when Fujii served as JSA's board of directors until.

answer: Fujii served on the JSA's board of directors as a non-executive director from 2012 to 2014.

text: "He served in that capacity until June 2014" is evidence of when Fujii served as JSA's board of directors until.

answer: Till 2014.

text: "He served in that capacity until June 2014" is evidence of when Fujii served as JSA's board of directors until.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: Takeshi Fujii is a Japanese professional shogi player, ranked 9-dan. He is a former Ryūō title holder, and a former non-executive director of the Japan Shogi Association. Fujii is known for developing the Fujii System, a class of strategies for Fourth File Rook positions against Static Rook opponents especially Static Rook Anaguma.

text: The answer misses to mention other details that adds up the summary length.

refinement: Takeshi Fujii is a Japanese professional shogi player, ranked 9-dan. He is a former Ryūō title holder, and a former non-executive director of the Japan Shogi Association. Fujii is known for developing the Fujii System, a class of strategies for Fourth File Rook positions against Static Rook opponents especially Static Rook Anaguma. Fujii's first tournament championship as a professional came in 1996 when he defeated Tadahisa Maruyama 2 games to 1 to win the 27th tournament. Fujii has received a number of awards and honors throughout his career for his accomplishments both on an off the shogi board.

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Takeshi Fujii is a professional shogi player. He has previously held the title of Ryūō and is a former non-executive director of the Japanese Shogi Association.

He played his first championship as a professional in 1996 and defeated Tadahisa Maruyama. Fujii's first appearance in a major title match was in 1998 when he challenged Kōji Tanigawa.

He served on the board of directors of the Japan Shogi Association as a non-executive director for two years.

answer:
Takeshi Fujii is a Japanese professional shogi player, ranked 9-dan. He is a former Ryūō title holder, and a former non-executive director of the Japan Shogi Association. Fujii is known for developing the Fujii System, a class of strategies for Fourth File Rook positions against Static Rook opponents especially Static Rook Anaguma.

Fujii's first tournament championship as a professional came in 1996 when he defeated Tadahisa Maruyama 2 games to 1 to win the 27th tournament. The following year, Fujii defended his championship by defeating Mamoru Hatakeyama 2 games to none to win the 28th Shinjin-Ō tournament. Fujii won the tournament

text: Extra unnecessary detail added to the summary.

refinement:
Takeshi Fujii is a Japanese professional shogi player, ranked 9-dan. He is a former Ryūō title holder, and a former non-executive director of the Japan Shogi Association. Fujii is known for developing the Fujii System, a class of strategies for Fourth File Rook positions against Static Rook opponents especially Static Rook Anaguma.

Fujii's first tournament championship as a professional came in 1996 when he defeated Tadahisa Maruyama 2 games to 1 to win the 27th tournament. The following year, Fujii defended his championship by defeating Mamoru Hatakeyama 2 games to none to win the 28th Shinjin-Ō tournament.

answer: Fujii is a professional shogi player who has won three major titles, including the Ryūō title. He is also a former director of the Japan Shogi Association. He is known for developing the Fujii System, a class of strategies for Fourth File Rook positions against Static Rook opponents. He has finished in the top 10 of the JSA's yearly prize money rankings nine times, and in the top 3 twice.

text: The answer misses to mention a detail that adds up the summary length.

refinement: Fujii is a professional shogi player who has won three major titles, including the Ryūō title. Fujii's first tournament championship as a professional came in 1996 when he defeated Tadahisa Maruyama 2 games to 1 to win the 27th tournament. He is also a former director of the Japan Shogi Association. He is known for developing the Fujii System, a class of strategies for Fourth File Rook positions against Static Rook opponents. He has finished in the top 10 of the JSA's yearly prize money rankings nine times, and in the top 3 twice.