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I never told this story to anyone.  Frankly, nobody would believe me.  I wouldn't believe me either.  I mean I'm in New York so people just automatically assume you're full of shit.  Hell, I'm on the internet so there's probably someone out there thinking the same thing.  But this happened....

I had a dog named Ares.  He wasn't the biggest dog but he was very protective of me.  He would always lie down in front of me when I played games or read a book.  I remember when I walked him, he would bark at approaching strangers.  Seriously, he would bark at any approaching stranger until I told him to calm down.  Granted, I didn't live in the nicest of neighborhoods so in hindsight I suppose some good may have come from it, but I digress.  Ares could be hostile but he was friendly I swear.  If I approved you and he got to know your scent, he would let you pet him and he would lick your hand.  He would even wake me up by licking my face.  Actually it was a bit annoying but I figured that's how he showed affection so I didn't mind much.

Anyway, I was 13 at the time.  I just started High School and I was getting picked on.  Let's just say that I was less than fit although that would be an understatement.  Hell, I was probably close to 200 lbs at 5'2.  That said, my hefty stature made me the target of bullying and frankly, there was nothing I could really do about it.  One of the bullies even lived pretty close to me so he would sometimes bother me until I got home, which was about a 15 minute walk from the train station.  You know the type, though, I'm sure; seems like the perfect gentlemen around adults but an ass otherwise.  I mean I could start working out and stuff but that would have taken quite a while.  That said, I did have some friends.

Well one day, two of my friends came over to my place and we started playing Halo.  Just a couple of guys hanging out, playing Halo, dicking around, trash talking each other and talking about random shit.   One of the things that came up was people bullying me.  One of my friends told me to just ignore it which I've been doing but the other one told me to sick Ares on them.  Well Ares just kind of looked at me, as if wondering why his name was said.  I told him not to worry and just pet him and that was the end of that.

So fast forward a little bit and it's winter.  New York winters suck.  Especially when there's snow.  Everything turns to slush.  This year, there was a fair amount of snow so everything was particularly gross.   Honestly I hate going outside when the out when it's like that but I had to walk Ares so I went out.  Apparently so did my bully.

I decided to pretend not to see him and turned to walk in the other direction.  The thing is, he saw me.  So he called out to me and when I didn't respond, he threw an ice ball at the back of my head.  I flinched.  Ares lost it.  He broke out of his leash and jumped at the guy.  The guy, he jetted across the street just as the lights turned.  Ares, he wasn't so lucky.  When he was halfway across the street, Ares got hit by a car and died shortly thereafter.  My bully?  He left the scene.  I suppose he ran back home but I'm not sure.  I just watched over Ares, crying as he died.

We buried Ares the next day in our back yard along with his favorite toys.  Now that I think about it, I have no idea if that's actually legal but whatever.  I wanted him there.  He would always be family to me.  I stayed home from school for the next few days to mourn.

Well when I went back, my bully he bothered me about it.  About how I was unfit to own a pet.  That Ares died because of my incompetence.  That was when I snapped.  I lunged at him and punched him the face.  Heh... that's what I wish I did.  I couldn't do anything about it.  The guy was bigger than me, stronger.  I... I was a coward.  Ares was dead and I could not do anything for him.  On some level, I guess I thought he was right.

Apparently, Ares thought differently.  My bully never made it home.  In one of the three blocks between home and the train station.  My bully was apparently mauled to death by what they said looked like some wild dog.   I didn't believe that shit.  That wasn't the greatest neighborhood but I don't remember seeing any wild dogs here and I lived there for most of my life.

That night, I sat on my bed and asked out loud if it was Ares.  There was no response.  I figured as much.  The supernatural seems totally faulty of course.  I went to sleep thinking about Ares.  That night, I dreamed a very vivid dream.  I was walking Ares again, my dear friend.  God I miss him.  It's a simple dream, just us walking down the usual routes.  I woke up that day with my face covered in what felt like dog slobber.

I think that was Ares' way of just acknowledging that it was him.  I have no proof.  But the other bullies stopped bullying me.  I have no idea why.  I just assumed that was because one of their group died.  Recently though, I found out from one of my friends, for some reason they started calling me the creepy dog guy.  I don't know.  But I love Ares.

title: My Dog Ares

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the characteristics of Ares as stated in the text.

answer: Ares was a very protective dog. He wasn't a large dog and he would always bark at approaching strangers. According to the narrator, Ares could be hostile but he was friendly too. Ares also had a deep attachment to its owner. Because of this attachment, Ares supposedly mauled his owners bully to death after dying himself.

text: The passage explicitly states that the narrator was no idea if the dog that killed their bully was some sort of reincarnation of Ares, making the last sentence false.

refinement: Ares was a very protective dog. He wasn't a large dog and he would always bark at approaching strangers. According to the narrator, Ares could be hostile but he was friendly too. Ares also had a deep attachment to its owner. The narrator believes that Ares, in some way or form, caused another stray dog to maul their bully to death.

answer: Ares didn't seem very big from the information the narrator gave, but he was protective of him, almost to the point that he could be described as a big dog. The narrator also described Ares as friendly but sometimes hostile towards strangers until one gets to know his scent. He would sometimes wake the narrator up by licking his face. Sometimes Ares would break out of his leash and attack strangers. He took on a bully and his dog, which the bully had, with animals died under mysterious circumstances. In the narrator's dream after Ares died, Ares kept on walking him down the usual routes, which proves he had a life after death.

text: The response should indicate who exactly Ares is protective of; Ares is protective of the narrator.

refinement: Ares didn't seem very big from the information the narrator gave, but he was protective of the narrator, almost to the point that he could be described as a big dog. The narrator also described Ares as friendly but sometimes hostile towards strangers until one gets to know his scent. He would sometimes wake the narrator up by licking his face. Sometimes Ares would break out of his leash and attack strangers. He took on a bully and his dog, which the bully had, with animals died under mysterious circumstances. In the narrator's dream after Ares died, Ares kept on walking him down the usual routes, which proves he had a life after death.

text: The passage does not mention any other regular instances in which Ares would break out of his leash. According to the passage, the only time when Ares breaks out of his leash is when the narrator is attacked by the bully, which subsequently leads to Ares' own death.

refinement: Ares didn't seem very big from the information the narrator gave, but he was protective of the narrator, almost to the point that he could be described as a big dog. The narrator also described Ares as friendly but sometimes hostile towards strangers until one gets to know his scent. He would sometimes wake the narrator up by licking his face. He took on a bully and his dog, which the bully had, with animals died under mysterious circumstances. In the narrator's dream after Ares died, Ares kept on walking him down the usual routes, which proves he had a life after death.

text: This sentence is incoherent.

refinement: Ares didn't seem very big from the information the narrator gave, but he was protective of the narrator, almost to the point that he could be described as a big dog. The narrator also described Ares as friendly but sometimes hostile towards strangers until one gets to know his scent. He would sometimes wake the narrator up by licking his face. One day, when the narrator is accosted by a bully, Ares breaks loose from his leash in an attempt to attack the bully, but is hit by a car and dies. In the narrator's dream after Ares died, Ares kept on walking him down the usual routes, which proves he had a life after death.

text: The narrator's dreams do not prove anything; they are just dreams.

refinement: Ares didn't seem very big from the information the narrator gave, but he was protective of the narrator, almost to the point that he could be described as a big dog. The narrator also described Ares as friendly but sometimes hostile towards strangers until one gets to know his scent. He would sometimes wake the narrator up by licking his face. One day, when the narrator is accosted by a bully, Ares breaks loose from his leash in an attempt to attack the bully, but is hit by a car and dies. In the narrator's dream after Ares died, Ares kept on walking him down the usual routes.

text: The response should include that because the narrator and Ares' bond was so strong, the narrator believes that Ares' spirit somehow caused a stray dog to maul the narrator's bully to death.

refinement: Ares didn't seem very big from the information the narrator gave, but he was protective of the narrator, almost to the point that he could be described as a big dog. The narrator also described Ares as friendly but sometimes hostile towards strangers until one gets to know his scent. He would sometimes wake the narrator up by licking his face. One day, when the narrator is accosted by a bully, Ares breaks loose from his leash in an attempt to attack the bully, but is hit by a car and dies. In the narrator's dream after Ares died, Ares kept on walking him down the usual routes. The narrator believes that because of their strong bond with Ares, Ares somehow cause the death of the narrator's bully, which caused by a stray dog mauling him to death.

answer: Ares was protective and friendly but could be hostile. He protected his owner from bullies, ultimately sacrificing himself by jumping into traffic and being hit by a car. Since his death, the bullies have stopped harassing the owner. In addition, the owner now wakes up covered in "dog slobber" which he believes is a sign from Ares.

text: Ares did not exactly "sacrifice" himself. He was killed by a car in an attempt to attack the bully; his death was an accident.

refinement: Ares was protective and friendly but could be hostile. He protected his owner from bullies, and died trying to defend his owner after a bully accosted him. Since his death, the bullies have stopped harassing the owner. In addition, the owner now wakes up covered in "dog slobber" which he believes is a sign from Ares.

text: The highlighted sentence is misleading. Ares' death does not cause the bullies to leave the narrator alone. The bully's death by mauling then leads to the narrator to be left alone. The narrator suspects that somehow, whether it be supernatural or not, Ares caused the bully to be mauled to death by a stray dog.

refinement: Ares was protective and friendly but could be hostile. He protected his owner from bullies, and died trying to defend his owner after a bully accosted him. After the bully is mauled to death by a stray dog, the other bullies leave the narrator alone; the narrator suspects that because of their strong bond, Ares somehow caused the mauling death. In addition, the owner now wakes up covered in "dog slobber" which he believes is a sign from Ares.

answer: According to the author, he was aggressive and protective. His friend's described him as friendly and loyal, unless they posed a threat to the author's fragile social standing. His loyalty to the author was put on display when he broke out of his leash in an effort to protect his owner when the bully assailed. After Ares died, the author dreamed of him and felt a wet kiss on his face. The puppy in the dream clearly recognized the author in it and barked happily, showing how Ares had retained his memories and his attachment to his owner. Also, Ares had an uncanny ability to protect the protagonist. He saved the author from the bully and the boy who was the target of his wrath was run over by a car. Also, the bully who harassed the protagonist was mauled to death by his dog. In this case, the story of the author's dog that was mauled to death after his assailant suffered the same fate is a strong illustration of Ferretti's theory of the 'residue effect'.

text: The passage does not mention the narrator's friends saying anything about Ares.

refinement: According to the author, he was aggressive and protective. His loyalty to the author was put on display when he broke out of his leash in an effort to protect his owner when the bully assailed. After Ares died, the author dreamed of him and felt a wet kiss on his face. The puppy in the dream clearly recognized the author in it and barked happily, showing how Ares had retained his memories and his attachment to his owner. Also, Ares had an uncanny ability to protect the protagonist. He saved the author from the bully and the boy who was the target of his wrath was run over by a car. Also, the bully who harassed the protagonist was mauled to death by his dog. In this case, the story of the author's dog that was mauled to death after his assailant suffered the same fate is a strong illustration of Ferretti's theory of the 'residue effect'.

text: The highlighted sentences are not mentioned in the passage, are unnecessary, and inaccurate.

refinement: According to the author, he was aggressive and protective. His loyalty to the author was put on display when he broke out of his leash in an effort to protect his owner when the bully assailed. After Ares died, the author dreamed of him and felt a wet kiss on his face. The puppy in the dream clearly recognized the author in it and barked happily, showing how Ares had retained his memories and his attachment to his owner.

text: The description of the dream the owner has is inaccurate.

refinement: According to the author, he was aggressive and protective. His loyalty to the author was put on display when he broke out of his leash in an effort to protect his owner when the bully assailed. After Ares died, the author dreamed of Ares and they take a walk on their usual route. When the owner wakes up, they are covered in what seems to be dog slobber.

text: The response should mention that not only does Ares die trying to protect the narrator, but also that the narrator believes that Ares somehow causes the death by mauling of the bully.

refinement: According to the author, he was aggressive and protective. His loyalty to the author was put on display when he broke out of his leash in an effort to protect his owner when the bully assailed them. However, during this, Ares gets hit by a car and dies. After Ares died, the author dreamed of Ares and they take a walk on their usual route. When the owner wakes up, they are covered in what seems to be dog slobber. The narrator believes that because of their strong bond, Ares somehow causes the bully to get mauled to death by a stray dog.

answer: Ares was protective and loving to his owner. He defended his owner from bullies, even though he was smaller than them. When he was hit by a car and killed, he showed himself to his owner in a dream shortly after. Ares was fierce and loyal.

text: The response should mention that Ares is killed by a car while trying to defend his owner.

refinement: Ares was protective and loving to his owner. He defended his owner from bullies, even though he was smaller than them. When he was hit by a car and killed while trying to defend his owner from a bully, he showed himself to his owner in a dream shortly after. Ares was fierce and loyal.

text: The response should include the fact that the narrator believes that their strong bond with Ares is what causes the bully to be mauled to death by a stray dog.

refinement: Ares was protective and loving to his owner. He defended his owner from bullies, even though he was smaller than them. When he was hit by a car and killed while trying to defend his owner from a bully, he showed himself to his owner in a dream shortly after. Ares was fierce and loyal. The narrator believes that because of their strong bond, Ares somehow causes the bully to be mauled to death by a stray dog.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What are the effects of the narrator's bully?

answer: The bully's bullying seems to fuel the narrator's internal hatred. Ares' exposure to the bully serves as guidance to his anger, making the bully's death inevitable, causing the narrator to feel more confident.

text: The highlighted sentence is incoherent, inaccurate, and unnecessary.

refinement: The bully's bullying seems to fuel the narrator's internal hatred.

answer: The narrator's bully starts bullying the narrator again after their dog is hit by a car and dies. The bully dies later, the same way and at the similar age of their dog, but this time it is some sort of mauled. The narrator later dreams that Ares was the creature that killed the bully.

text: The highlighted sentences are incoherent, inaccurate and unnecessary.

refinement: The narrator's bully starts bullying the narrator again after their dog is hit by a car and dies.

answer: The bully causes the death of the narrator's dog, Ares. In addition, the bully continues to bully the narrator after the dog's death and causes them continued distress.

text: The response should be more clear about how Ares dies. The bully inadvertently causes his death because he was trying to chase him.

refinement: The bully inadvertently causes the death of the narrator's dog, Ares, because in the process of attacking the bully, Ares is hit by a car. In addition, the bully continues to bully the narrator after the dog's death and causes them continued distress.

answer: The bully caused the dog, Ares, to be hit by a car and die. The bully also harassed and bullied the narrator. Finally, the bully was later killed by what appears to be a wild dog. The narrator believes that Ares avenged the bully's death.

text: The highlighted sentences are unnecessary.

refinement: The bully caused the dog, Ares, to be hit by a car and die. The bully also harassed and bullied the narrator.

text: The response should include that the bully harasses the narrator following the death of Ares, as he believes that the narrator is an unfit owner.

refinement: The bully caused the dog, Ares, to be hit by a car and die. After Ares dies, the bully also harasses the narrator for being a bad owner.

answer: The most major effect of the narrator's bully is the death of the narrator's dog, Ares. Ares attacked the bully, only to be hit by a car in the middle of the fight and die. Additionally, because of this attachment, Ares was not done with the bully despite dying and is said to have mauled the bully to death (on a supernatural train of thought). Ares death broke the the narrator and caused him to be sad about his actions and question if he was unfit to take care of Ares.

text: The highlighted sentences are unnecessary.

refinement: The most major effect of the narrator's bully is the death of the narrator's dog, Ares. Ares attacked the bully, only to be hit by a car in the middle of the fight and die.

text: The response should include that the bully harasses the narrator for being an unfit owner, following Ares' death.

refinement: The most major effect of the narrator's bully is the death of the narrator's dog, Ares. Ares attacked the bully, only to be hit by a car in the middle of the fight and die. The bully also harasses the narrator about being an unfit owner for letting Ares die.


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_FLOWER NET_ (1997) by Lisa See is the first of the Red Princess mysteries.[1] The other two novels in the series are _The Interior_ (1999) and _Dragon Bones_ (2003). _Flower Net_ explores the state of US-China relations in the early months of 1997, especially in terms of international politics, human trafficking, and the smuggling of illegal goods such as bear bile,[2] and nuclear trigger devices. It also focuses on human relationships – especially those between father and son, father and daughter. Pam Spencer suggests that the title refers to “the flower net used by Chinese fishermen who throw the mesh wide to trap everything within its reach”.[3][4]

Plot summary

The time frame for _Flower Net_ is January 10, 1997 – March 14, 1997. The main narrative ends February 13, 1997—just before the death of Deng Xiaoping on February 19.[5] Much of the story involves flashbacks to the Cultural Revolution (1966–1976) and its traumatic impact on the lives of a great number of people. The novel's key characters are Liu Hulan, inspector in the Ministry of Public Security and a Red Princess, and David Stark, Assistant U.S. Attorney, who loves her. Gary Krist writes that “Hulan is a provocative mixture of vulnerability, bitterness and hardheaded practicality,” a survivor of the Cultural Revolution who has learned that survival means hiding her emotions from the outside world.[6]

The book begins with the murders of two young men, one the son of the U.S. ambassador to China and the other the son of one of the richest and most powerful men in China. For reasons not clear to Hulan and David, the Chinese and American governments come to the unusual agreement that the two should jointly investigate the murders. Their initial assumption is that the killings must be related to the Rising Phoenix, a criminal gang operating in both China and Los Angeles. The case is complicated because Hulan and David have previously been lovers, and each is devoted to his or her country. See also describes Vice Minister Liu and his frosty relationship with Hulan, his daughter.[7]

Near the end of the novel seven gruesome murders are solved.[8] Although the young men of the Rising Phoenix are indeed involved, the murderer hounding Hulan and David is revealed to be Hulan's father, Vice Minister Liu, who has been consumed by greed and the desire for revenge, mistakenly blaming his daughter for the hard time he served in a Chinese work camp early in the Cultural Revolution and for the serious injuries his wife, Hulan's mother, suffered during the same period.

The narrative concludes with Hulan's thoughts of the coming spring and her anticipation of the birth of her first child.

Notes

[1] Red Princes and Princesses are so named because of their exceptional devotion to Chairman Mao Zedong and/or because of their great wealth. Lisa See, _The Interior_, p. 112. New York: HarperCollins, 1999

[2] _Flower Net_, pp. 232-233. New York: HarperCollins, 1997

[3] Pam Spencer, _Flower Net_. _School Library Journal_ (04/1998)

[4] _Flower Net_, p. 152

[5] _Flower Net_, pp. 295ff.

[6] Gary Krist, “Pacific Overtures.” _The New York Times_ (10/26/1997)

[7] _Flower Net_, pp. 47-49

[8] _Flower Net_, p. 311

title: Flower Net

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about the state of US-China relations in the early months of 1997?

answer: Lisa See's Flower Net explores US-China relations in the early month of 1997. It focuses heavily on trying to define and understand the two countries' political situations in regards to international politics and human trafficking, specifically the state of China's political roles, how they governed themselves in the post-Mao era, when the PRC had become very lacking and in need of reform. While the story takes center stage, the whole country of China is in desperate need of a revamped PRC.

text: The highlighted text, especially mentioning the PRC, is not found in the text and should be removed.

refinement: Lisa See's Flower Net explores US-China relations in the early month of 1997. It focuses heavily on trying to define and understand the two countries' political situations in regards to international politics and human trafficking.

answer: The story doesn't give an in-depth account of the state of US-Chinese relation in 1997, but the author focuses on international politics, human trafficking, and the smuggling of illegal goods like bear bile and nuclear triggers.

text: "relation" - add an "s"

refinement: The story doesn't give an in-depth account of the state of US-Chinese relations in 1997, but the author focuses on international politics, human trafficking, and the smuggling of illegal goods like bear bile and nuclear triggers.

answer: Flower Net explores US-China relations in the early months of 1997. Flower Net focuses on the international politics, human trafficking, and smuggling of illegal goods. It also focuses on human relationships, especially those between father and son, and father and daughter.

text: "the" - remove this

refinement: Flower Net explores US-China relations in the early months of 1997. Flower Net focuses on international politics, human trafficking, and smuggling of illegal goods. It also focuses on human relationships, especially those between father and son, and father and daughter.

text: "It also focuses on human relationships, especially those between father and son, and father and daughter." - extraneous information.

refinement: Flower Net explores US-China relations in the early months of 1997. Flower Net focuses on international politics, human trafficking, and smuggling of illegal goods.

answer: No answer

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Lisa See's novels?

answer: Lisa See is the author of _Flower Net_, the first of the Red Princess Mysteries. The other novels in the series are _The Interior_ and _Dragon Bones_. They are all set in 1997.

text: "They are all set in 1997." - this is inaccurate because it can't be corroborated with data from the text.

refinement: Lisa See is the author of _Flower Net_, the first of the Red Princess Mysteries. The other novels in the series are _The Interior_ and _Dragon Bones_.

answer: Flower Net is the first of a trilogy of novels about the Red Princess, a mystery about the US-China relations. The other two books in the series are The Interior and Dragon Bones.

text: The novel isn't a mystery about US-China relations.

refinement: Flower Net is the first of a trilogy of novels about the Red Princess. The other two books in the series are The Interior and Dragon Bones.

text: "of a trilogy of novels about the Red Princess" - this is hard to read and can be improved.

refinement: Flower Net is the first of the Red Princess mystery novels. The other two books in the series are The Interior and Dragon Bones.

answer: The novels explore the state of U.S-China relations in 1997.

text: "The novels explore the state of U.S-China relations in 1997." - this is inaccurate. The plot of See's other books is unknown.

text: The response needs to mention See's books.

refinement: Flower Net is Lisa See's first mystery novel about the Red Princess. The other two books in the series are "The Interior" and "Dragon Bones".

answer: Flower Net (1997) is the first of the Red Princess mysteries. The other two novels in the series are The Interior (1999) and Dragon Bones (2003). The novels explore the state of U.S.-China relations in 1997.

answer: Flower Net is the first of a trilogy of novels about the Red Princess, a mystery about the US-China relations. The other two books in the series are The Interior and Dragon Bones.

answer: Lisa See is the author of _Flower Net_, the first of the Red Princess Mysteries. The other novels in the series are _The Interior_ and _Dragon Bones_. The author portrays Flower Net as covering the basics of Chinese government and the Chinese people.

text: "The author portrays Flower Net as covering the basics of Chinese government and the Chinese people." - Extraneous information.

refinement: Lisa See is the author of _Flower Net_, the first of the Red Princess Mysteries. The other novels in the series are _The Interior_ and _Dragon Bones_.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the plot of the "Flower Net".

answer: The book starts with the murder of two young men, one the son of the U.S. ambassador to China and the other the son of one of the richest and most powerful men in China. It was later revealed the young men were from the "Rising Phoenix", a Chinese criminal gang. Inspector Liu Hulan, a Red Princess in the Ministry of Public Security, is assigned to the case. Hulan had previously been lovers with Assistant U.S. Attorney David Stark. Because of their past, they both have conflicting emotions of their feelings of each other as well as their feeling towards the killings themselves. The crimes were related to the Rising Phoenix; however, the murderer was Liu Hulan's own father, the traitorous Vice Minister Liu, who had been consumed by guilt toward his daughter.

text: The two murdered young men were not part of the criminal gang Rising Phoenix. The gang had something to do with the murders.

refinement: The book starts with the murder of two young men, one the son of the U.S. ambassador to China and the other the son of one of the richest and most powerful men in China. It was later revealed that members of the "Rising Phoenix", a Chinese criminal gang, had something to do with the murders. Inspector Liu Hulan, a Red Princess in the Ministry of Public Security, is assigned to the case. Hulan had previously been lovers with Assistant U.S. Attorney David Stark. Because of their past, they both have conflicting emotions of their feelings of each other as well as their feeling towards the killings themselves. The crimes were related to the Rising Phoenix; however, the murderer was Liu Hulan's own father, the traitorous Vice Minister Liu, who had been consumed by guilt toward his daughter.

text: "Inspector Liu Hulan, a Red Princess in the Ministry of Public Security" - this line is inaccurate when constructed this way. Hulan is an inspector and a Red Princess.

refinement: The book starts with the murder of two young men, one the son of the U.S. ambassador to China and the other the son of one of the richest and most powerful men in China. It was later revealed that members of the "Rising Phoenix", a Chinese criminal gang, had something to do with the murders. Liu Hulan, a Red Princess and an Inspector in the Ministry of Public Security, is assigned to the case. Hulan had previously been lovers with Assistant U.S. Attorney David Stark. Because of their past, they both have conflicting emotions of their feelings of each other as well as their feeling towards the killings themselves. The crimes were related to the Rising Phoenix; however, the murderer was Liu Hulan's own father, the traitorous Vice Minister Liu, who had been consumed by guilt toward his daughter.

text: Must add the reason why Stark and their past relationship is relevant to the plot of the story.

refinement: The book starts with the murder of two young men, one the son of the U.S. ambassador to China and the other the son of one of the richest and most powerful men in China. It was later revealed that members of the "Rising Phoenix", a Chinese criminal gang, had something to do with the murders. Things become complicated when the Chinese and American governments come to the unusual agreement that they should jointly investigate the case. The governments assign ex-lovers Liu Hulan, a Red Princess and an Inspector in the Ministry of Public Security, and Assistant U.S. Attorney David Stark. Because of their past, they both have conflicting emotions of their feelings of each other as well as their feeling towards the killings themselves. The crimes were related to the Rising Phoenix; however, the murderer was Liu Hulan's own father, the traitorous Vice Minister Liu, who had been consumed by guilt toward his daughter.

text: "their feeling towards the killings themselves" - this is hard to understand and should be replaced with their devotion to their own country.

refinement: The book starts with the murder of two young men, one the son of the U.S. ambassador to China and the other the son of one of the richest and most powerful men in China. It was later revealed that members of the "Rising Phoenix", a Chinese criminal gang, had something to do with the murders. Things become complicated when the Chinese and American governments come to the unusual agreement that they should jointly investigate the case. The governments assign ex-lovers Liu Hulan, a Red Princess and an Inspector in the Ministry of Public Security, and Assistant U.S. Attorney David Stark. Because of their past, they both have conflicting emotions of their feelings of each other as well as their devotion to their own country. The crimes were related to the Rising Phoenix; however, the murderer was Liu Hulan's own father, the traitorous Vice Minister Liu, who had been consumed by guilt toward his daughter.

text: "The crimes were related to the Rising Phoenix; however," - redundant and should be removed.

refinement: The book starts with the murder of two young men, one the son of the U.S. ambassador to China and the other the son of one of the richest and most powerful men in China. It was later revealed that members of the "Rising Phoenix", a Chinese criminal gang, had something to do with the murders. Things become complicated when the Chinese and American governments come to the unusual agreement that they should jointly investigate the case. The governments assign ex-lovers Liu Hulan, a Red Princess and an Inspector in the Ministry of Public Security, and Assistant U.S. Attorney David Stark. Because of their past, they both have conflicting emotions of their feelings of each other as well as their devotion to their own country. The murderer was Liu Hulan's own father, the traitorous Vice Minister Liu, who had been consumed by guilt toward his daughter.

answer: The book starts with the murder of two young men, one the son of the U.S. ambassador to China and the other the son of one of the richest and most powerful men in China. It was later revealed the young men were from the "Rising Phoenix", a Chinese criminal gang. Inspector Liu Hulan, a Red Princess in the Ministry of Public Security, is assigned to the case. Hulan had previously been lovers with Assistant U.S. Attorney David Stark. Because of their past, they both have conflicting emotions of their feelings of each other as well as their feeling towards the killings themselves.

answer: The story begins at the time of Deng Xiao Pong's death in Beijing. Two teens whose parents are in leadership roles are murdered, one the son of the American ambassador and the other the son of a rich and powerful Chinese citizen. The Chinese and American governments team up to jointly investigate the case. They initially believe the case is related to a crime ring called the Rising Phoenix. It is eventually revealed that the father of Inspector Liu Hulan is responsible for the murders and the true relationship between Liu Hulan and David Stark.

text: "Deng Xiao Pong" - is incorrect. It is Deng Xiaoping.

refinement: The story begins at the time of Deng Xiaoping's death in Beijing. Two teens whose parents are in leadership roles are murdered, one the son of the American ambassador and the other the son of a rich and powerful Chinese citizen. The Chinese and American governments team up to jointly investigate the case. They initially believe the case is related to a crime ring called the Rising Phoenix. It is eventually revealed that the father of Inspector Liu Hulan is responsible for the murders and the true relationship between Liu Hulan and David Stark.

text: "It is eventually revealed that the father of Inspector Liu Hulan is responsible for the murders and the true relationship between Liu Hulan and David Stark." - this makes little sense and has no impact without further context. Must add that Liu Hulan and Stark are investigating the case and they were former lovers.

refinement: The story begins at the time of Deng Xiaoping's death in Beijing. Two teens whose parents are in leadership roles are murdered, one the son of the American ambassador and the other the son of a rich and powerful Chinese citizen. The Chinese and American governments team up to jointly investigate the case, assigning Liu Hulan, an Inspector in the Ministry of Public Security and a Red Princess, and David Stark, Assistant U.S. Attorney. The relationship between Hulan and Stark complicates the investigation. They initially believe the case is related to a crime ring called the Rising Phoenix. It is eventually revealed that the father of Inspector Liu Hulan is responsible for the murders because he blames Hulan for the time he served in a Chinese work camp and wants revenge.

answer: The plot of the "Flower Net" follows the attempts by Hulan and David to solve a series of murders which are at first viewed as being related to the Rising Phoenix, a Chinese criminal gang operating in both China and Los Angeles. The murders have also caused the Chinese and American governments to come to the agreement that the killing must be solved. The case becomes complicated as both Hulan and David are devoted to their own countries and have incidentally been lovers. Hulan and David discover that the murders are being committed by Hulan's own father, the man who is responsible for her suffering during the Cultural Revolution, mistakenly blaming Hulan for it. The investigation of the murders ends with the arrest of Hulan's father, who then admits to his crimes during torture.

text: The highlighted text is vague without proper context that the Chinese and American governments assigned Hulan and Stark to the case.

refinement: The plot of the "Flower Net" follows the attempts by Hulan and David to solve a series of murders which are at first viewed as being related to the Rising Phoenix, a Chinese criminal gang operating in both China and Los Angeles. The murders have also caused the Chinese and American governments to come to the agreement that the killing must be solved, assigning Hulan and David to the case. Things become complicated as both Hulan and David are devoted to their own countries and have incidentally been lovers. Hulan and David discover that the murders are being committed by Hulan's own father, the man who is responsible for her suffering during the Cultural Revolution, mistakenly blaming Hulan for it. The investigation of the murders ends with the arrest of Hulan's father, who then admits to his crimes during torture.

text: "the man who is responsible for her suffering during the Cultural Revolution" - it didn't go down this way. Hulan didn't suffer during the revolution - her parents did.

refinement: The plot of the "Flower Net" follows the attempts by Hulan and David to solve a series of murders which are at first viewed as being related to the Rising Phoenix, a Chinese criminal gang operating in both China and Los Angeles. The murders have also caused the Chinese and American governments to come to the agreement that the killing must be solved, assigning Hulan and David to the case. Things become complicated as both Hulan and David are devoted to their own countries and have incidentally been lovers. Hulan and David discover that the murders are being committed by Hulan's own father. He is consumed by greed and revenge, mistakenly blaming Hulan for his and his wife's (Hulan's mom) suffering during the Cultural Revolution. The investigation of the murders ends with the arrest of Hulan's father, who then admits to his crimes during torture.

text: "The investigation of the murders ends with the arrest of Hulan's father, who then admits to his crimes during torture." - this is incorrect as the text didn't mention the story's ending.

refinement: The plot of the "Flower Net" follows the attempts by Hulan and David to solve a series of murders which are at first viewed as being related to the Rising Phoenix, a Chinese criminal gang operating in both China and Los Angeles. The murders have also caused the Chinese and American governments to come to the agreement that the killing must be solved, assigning Hulan and David to the case. Things become complicated as both Hulan and David are devoted to their own countries and have incidentally been lovers. Hulan and David discover that the murders are being committed by Hulan's own father. He is consumed by greed and revenge, mistakenly blaming Hulan for his and his wife's (Hulan's mom) suffering during the Cultural Revolution.

answer: The story begins at the time of Deng Xiao Pong's death in Beijing. Two teens whose parents are in leadership roles are murdered, one the son of the American ambassador and the other the son of a rich and powerful Chinese citizen. The Chinese and American governments team up to jointly investigate the case. They initially believe the case is related to a crime ring called the Rising Phoenix. It is eventually revealed that one of the parents is responsible for the murders and the true relationship between Liu Hulan and David Stark.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the text say about Liu Hulan's father?

answer: Liu Hulan's father, Vice Minister Liu, was consumed by greed, revenge, and the desire for revenge out of the belief that his daughter was responsible for him having a hard time in the Chinese work camps. He was wrong about his daughter.

text: "revenge" - redundant and should be removed.

refinement: Liu Hulan's father, Vice Minister Liu, was consumed by greed and the desire for revenge out of the belief that his daughter was responsible for him having a hard time in the Chinese work camps. He was wrong about his daughter.

text: Missing the part about Liu being responsible for the murders and his relationship with Hulan.

refinement: Liu Hulan's father, Vice Minister Liu, was consumed by greed and the desire for revenge out of the belief that his daughter was responsible for him having a hard time in the Chinese work camps. He was wrong about his daughter. He has a frosty relationship with his daughter, Hulan. The Vice Minister was also responsible for the gruesome murders Hulan and Stark were investigating.

answer: Liu Hulan's father is a socialistic vice minister in the Chinese government and fiercely cruel to his daughter. She's new to her job and fell in love with David, an American, thus he felt betrayed by his daughter. He warned her against raising her son too Western but hasn't seen her since going to work overseas. When she returns to her homeland to pursue a case, he holds a long time grudge against his daughter. He's the one who killed her friends and the family of the U.S. Ambassador and was later killed.

text: The entire response is incorrect.

text: Add the missing details about Liu Hulan's father.

refinement: Vice Minister Liu has a frosty relationship with his daughter Hulan. He has been consumed by greed and the desire for revenge against Hulan, whom he mistakenly blames for the time he served in a Chinese work camp early in the Cultural Revolution and for the serious injuries his wife, Hulan's mother, suffered during the same period. Vice Minister Liu is the one responsible for several gruesome murders related to the case Hulan and Stark are trying to solve.

answer: Liu Hulan's father is a socialistic vice minister in the Chinese government and fiercely cruel to his daughter. She's new to her job and fell in love with David, an American, thus he felt betrayed by his daughter. He warned her against raising her son too Western but hasn't seen her since going to work overseas. When she returns to her homeland to pursue a case, he holds a long time grudge against his daughter. She's called by a study partner who happens to be Taiwan's top negotiator, who reveals that the person grilling her over her past is her evil and vile father- Liu.

answer: Liu Hulan's father, Vice Minister Liu, was consumed by greed, revenge, and the desire for revenge out of the belief that his daughter was responsible for him having a hard time in the Chinese work camps and the injuries his wife suffered during the Cultural Revolution. He was wrong about his daughter.

answer: Liu Hulan's father is referred to as Vice Minister Liu. He is a frosty older man who has had a frosty relationship with Hulan since the 1980s. He believes that Hulan was instrumental in hardening his father's decision to send him away because she had hidden evidence concerning his father's crime. He is consumed by greed.

text: "is a frosty older man who" - he is not a frosty older man.

refinement: Liu Hulan's father is referred to as Vice Minister Liu. He has had a frosty relationship with Hulan since the 1980s. He believes that Hulan was instrumental in hardening his father's decision to send him away because she had hidden evidence concerning his father's crime. He is consumed by greed.

text: This is inaccurate. There was no date mentioned as to when his beef against Hulan started.

refinement: Liu Hulan's father is referred to as Vice Minister Liu. He has had a frosty relationship with Hulan. He believes that Hulan was instrumental in hardening his father's decision to send him away because she had hidden evidence concerning his father's crime. He is consumed by greed.

text: "He believes that Hulan was instrumental in hardening his father's decision to send him away because she had hidden evidence concerning his father's crime." - this is incorrect and never happened.

refinement: Liu Hulan's father is referred to as Vice Minister Liu. He has had a frosty relationship with Hulan. He is consumed by greed.

text: Add the missing details about the Vice Minister.

refinement: Liu Hulan's father is referred to as Vice Minister Liu. He has had a frosty relationship with Hulan since he served time in a Chinese work camp during the Cultural Revolution. He mistakenly blames her for his time at the camp and the injuries suffered by his wife (Hulan's mom) during that period. He is consumed by greed and revenge. Liu was responsible for the murders Huland and Stark were investigating.

answer: Liu Hulan's father is referred to as Vice Minister Liu. He is a frosty older man who has had a frosty relationship with Hulan since the 1980s. He is harsh and critical of Hulan. Liu is consumed by greed and has corrupted as he has struggled with his conscience in the aftermath of the Cultural Revolution. He believes that Hulan was instrumental in hardening his father's decision to send him away.


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NICOLÁS CANAVESSIO (born 17 September 1993) is an Argentine professional footballer who plays as a defender for Arcos CF.[1][2][3]

Career

Canavessio's career began with Ben Hur of Torneo Federal B.[4] He remained there for two years, notably playing in twice in the 2012–13 Copa Argentina, before joining Argentine Primera División club Atlético de Rafaela.[5][6] He appeared on Rafaela's bench once, in March 2015, before he departed on loan to Torneo Federal B team Central Norte.[7] He returned to Rafaela in 2016 and subsequently made his debut for them on 3 December in the Primera División versus Defensa y Justicia.[8] One further appearance followed prior to the club getting relegated at the end of the season.[9] He failed to feature during 2017–18.[10]

Arcos of the Tercera División in Spain completed the signing of Canavessio on 3 August 2018.[11]

Career statistics

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  Club                   Season               League             Cup[15]   League Cup   Continental   Other   Total
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  Division               Apps                 Goals              Apps      Goals        Apps          Goals   Apps
  Atlético de Rafaela    2014                 Primera División   0         0            0             0       —
  2015                   0                    0                  0         0            —             —       0
  2016                   0                    0                  0         0            —             —       0
  2016–17                2                    0                  0         0            —             —       0
  2017–18                Primera B Nacional   0                  0         0            0             —       —
  Total                  2                    0                  0         0            —             —       0
  Central Norte (loan)   2016                 Torneo Federal B   6         0            0             0       —
  Arcos                  2018–19              Tercera División   0         0            0             0       —
  Career total           8                    0                  0         0            —             —       0

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title: Nicolás Canavessio

question: Who is Nicolas Canavessio?

answer: Nicolás Canavessio is an Argentine footballer who currently plays as a defender for Arcos CF.

answer: Nicolás Canavessio is an Argentine footballer who currently plays as a defender for Arcos CF in the Spanish Tercera División.

answer: Nicolas is an Argentine professional footballer.

text: Add his position

refinement: Nicolas is an Argentine professional footballer. He plays as a defender for Arcos CF

question: Which club does he belong to?

answer: Atlético de Rafaela

text: Incorrect information

answer: Arcos

answer: He belonged to Torneo Federal B  and then joined Argentine Primera Division club, Atletico de Rafaela.

text: This doesn't answer the question

question: When did he return to Rafaela?

answer: Nicolás returned to Rafaela in 2016.

answer: He returned to Rafaela in 2016.

answer: he returned to Rafaela in 2016.

text: Capitalize the first letter.

question: How many games did he play while with Torneo Federal B?

answer: Twice, both in the 2012–13 Copa Argentina.

answer: He played in three games while at Torneo Federal B. However, it is not indicated if he played them all consecutively due to the same tournament.

text: There is no evidence that he played the third game

refinement: He played in two games while at Torneo Federal B.

answer: Two games.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: Nicolás Canavessio is an Argentine footballer who began his career with Ben Hur in Torneo Federal B. He later joined Atlético de Rafaela in the Argentine Primera División, but didn't manage to play anything else before the team were relegated. Canavessio then went on loan to Central Norte in Torneo Federal B before joining Arcos CF in the third tier of Spanish football. So far in his career he has made a total of eight appearances, but none in the past two seasons.

text: He played two games before Atlético de Rafaela was relegated

refinement: Nicolás Canavessio is an Argentine footballer who began his career with Ben Hur in Torneo Federal B. He later joined Atlético de Rafaela in the Argentine Primera División. He played two games before the team was relegated. Canavessio also played on loan to Central Norte in Torneo Federal B before joining Arcos CF in the third tier of Spanish football. So far in his career he has made a total of eight appearances, but none in the past two seasons.

answer: Nicolás Canavessio is an Argentine defender who has played for a number of clubs in Argentina, before signing with Arcos CF of the Spanish Tercera División in August 2018. He has yet to feature for Arcos in official matches.

answer: Nicolás Canavessio is a professional footballer who currently plays as a defender for Arcos CF in the Spanish Tercera División. He began his career with Ben Hur Torneo Federal B in Argentina, and has also had spells at Atlético de Rafaela in the Primera División and Central Norte on loan.

answer: Nicolás Canavessio is a professional footballer who plays as a defender. He began his career with Torneo Federal B team Ben Hur, before joining Atlético de Rafaela in the Argentine Primera División. He made his debut for Rafaela in 2016, however the side were relegated at the end of the season. Canavessio has since signed for Tercera División club Arcos for 2018/19.

answer: Nicolas Canavessio is an Argentine professional footballer. He plays as a defender for Arcos CF. Canavessio's remained with Torneo Federal B for two years before joining Atletico de Rafaela. He departed to Torneo Federal B  in 2015 and returned to Rafaela a year later.

text: He was on loan to Torneo Federal B

refinement: Nicolas Canavessio is an Argentine professional footballer. He plays as a defender for Arcos CF. Canavessio's remained with Torneo Federal B for two years before joining Atletico de Rafaela. He departed to Torneo Federal B on loan in 2015 and returned to Rafaela a year later.

answer: Nicolás Canavessio is a professional footballer who currently plays as a defender for Arcos CF in the Spanish Tercera Division. He began his career in the Torneo Federal B in Argentina before moving to Atlético de Rafaela. Canavessio only made two appearances for Rafaela in the Primera División before the club was relegated. He subsequently joined Central Norte on loan before returning to Rafaela in 2016. He did not see much playing time in 2017-18 but has since moved on to Arcos.

text: He played for Central Norte on loan before Rafaela was relegated. The chronological order of this summary is incorrect.

refinement: Nicolás Canavessio is a professional footballer who currently plays as a defender for Arcos CF in the Spanish Tercera Division. He began his career in the Torneo Federal B in Argentina before moving to Atlético de Rafaela. Canavessio only made two appearances for Rafaela in the Primera División. He also played for Central Norte on loan before returning to Rafaela in 2016. The club was relegated at the end of that season. He did not see much playing time in 2017-18 but has since moved on to Arcos.


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OKLADNIKOV CAVE () is a paleoanthropological site located in the foothills of the Altai Mountains in Soloneshensky District, Altai Krai in southern Siberia, Russia. The cave faces south and is located on a Devonian karst escarpment, lying about above the left bank of the Sibiryachikha River valley below; the river itself is a tributary of the Anuy River.

Okladnikov Cave is one of the most extensively studied Paleolithic sites in the Altai-Sayan region. A rich Mousterian stone industry, dating to between 33,000 and 44,000 years ago, was discovered, as well as several highly fragmented hominin fossils. Along with a few other Neanderthal sites in the Altai-Sayan region, Okladnikov Cave contains fossil evidence for the most easterly confirmed site with Neanderthal presence.

Background

[As viewed from Sibiryachikha] The cave was originally named after a nearby village, Sibiryachikha, located away. The cave was renamed by Anatoly P. Derevianko in honor of Alexey Okladnikov. Okladnikov Cave was first excavated in 1984. The cave is one of several Paleolithic sites located in the Anuy Basin, along with Denisova Cave, Ust-Karakol, Kamminaya Cave, Isrkra Cave, Karama and Anuy I-III.

Palynological evidence suggest that, like today, the surrounding area during the time associated with Paleolithic hominin finds was composed primarily of dry forest steppe, albeit in a slightly colder and more humid context.

Description

Situated around north of Denisova Cave, Okladnikov Cave is actually a complex of interconnected cavities: the cave consists of an overhang, an entrance stone bench that is wide, high and deep; and five corridors (galleries). The narrow cave extends into the hill for about . Its entrance faces south at above the river. Just one hundred meters away is an animal cave, dubbed _Sibiryachikha VI_, in which an as yet unclassified child’s humerus was found in 1985. Researchers suggested that this cave would have served better for human use than the actual Okladnikov Cave, although they found no traces of human occupation.

Archaeology

Stratigraphy

Archaeologists have identified seven archaeological layers at Okladnikov Cave.

Artefacts

Nearly 4000 lithic tools have been recovered from Okladnikov Cave. Mousterian artefacts are found throughout all seven layers. The tool assemblage consisted mostly of scrapers and scraper-knives. Around a quarter of the tools at Okladnikov Cave were made from jasperoids, while around 5% were made from hornstones.

The lithic industry at Okladnikov Cave shares most similarities with another site in the Altai-Sayan region, Chagyrskaya Cave, and are rather distinct from other Altai sites. However, unlike at Chagyrskaya Cave, Levallois-type tools are uniquely found at Okladnikov Cave. Both sites contain a great number of Neanderthal/Mousterian stone tools. The lithic culture was initially referred to as the _Altai Mousterian_; nowadays, the culture is more commonly referred to as the _Sibiryachikha culture_ or the _Sibiryachikha variant_.

Fauna

Over 6000 animal fossil elements were discovered at the cave, representing at least 20 different species. The remains of marmot, gray wolf, red fox, bear, horse, cave hyena, woolly rhinoceros, reindeer, steppe bison, red deer, Siberian ibex and argali sheep were commonly found inside the cave, with a heavy presence of cave hyena and woolly rhinoceros remains. Some beaver, _Panthera spelaea_ and red wolf remains were also discovered.

The heavy presence of cave hyena remains indicate that the cave was most likely intermittently shared between cave hyenas and hominins.

Diet

Comparative studies on diet show that Neanderthals from the Altai-Sayan region lived in a manner similar to that of late European Neanderthals. Both show signs of being specialized hunters who were likely dependent on the subsistence hunting of large herbivores.

Hominin fossils

168 hominin fossil elements were discovered at the cave, with the majority coming from adults. The hominin remains include five teeth and nine cranial fragments, most likely representing at least four distinct individuals. Archaeologists had long suspected that the fossil hominin remains belonged to Neanderthals; however, some had argued that the remains belonged to humans with mixed _Homo erectus_ traits. Rather fragmented and consequently hard to classify, morphological comparisons with Neanderthals did not produce definitively convincing results. This question was resolved through the successful application of DNA testing to some of the hominin fossil remains.

Samples

Dating information was directly obtained from several hominin fossil elements at Okladnikov Cave (SOURCE:).

  Lab number   Material                    Normalized Age   Locality
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  KIA-27010    Neanderthal adult humerus   24260 ± 180      Sibiryachikha
  RIDDL-719    Neanderthal adult humerus   37750 ± 750      Sibiryachikha
  RIDDL-721    sub adult neanderthal       32400 ± 500      Sibiryachikha
  RIDDL-722    sub adult neanderthal       43300 ± 1500     Sibiryachikha
  RIDDL-720    sub adult neanderthal       40700 ± 1100     Sibiryachikha
  SOAN-2459    sub adult neanderthal       28470 ± 1250     Sibiryachikha
  SOAN-2458    sub adult neanderthal       16210 ± 0        Sibiryachikha
  RIDDL-718    bone                        33500 ± 700      Sibiryachikha

Archaeogenetics

In 2007, researchers from the Max Planck Institute for Evolutionary Anthropology succeeded in extracting DNA from two fossil hominin fragments from Okladnikov Cave: the humeral diaphysis of a juvenile and a separate femur fragment. mtDNA sequencing confirmed that both fragments most likely belonged the same individual, dubbed _Okladnikov 2_. The mtDNA sequences of the HVR I (hypervariable region I) from _Okladnikov 2_ confirmed that the individual was Neanderthal. On the basis of mtDNA analysis, _Okladnikov 2_ was found to be more related to European and western Asian Neanderthals. A 2014 re-analysis teasing out ancient DNA from contaminated sequences allowed researchers to complete the mtDNA sequence from _Okladnikov 2_. The completed sequence shows that the _Okladnikov 2_ mtDNA is basal to that sequenced from _Mezmaiskaya 1_ from Mezmaiskaya Cave and is even closer to western Neanderthals than previously thought.

Implications

DNA extracted from skeletal remains has shown that Altai Neanderthals (closely related to Neanderthals found in western Europe) roamed some 2000 kilometres further east than previously thought. This close relative of modern humans obviously migrated very long distances.

The local habitat was rich in mammalian resources, allowing the Altai Neanderthals to permanently settle in the foothills of the Altai Mountains by at least 300,000 years ago. The Altai Neanderthals appeared to have chosen occupational sites primarily based on their strategic locations close to rivers and within valleys, locations ideal for hunting prey. During the early to middle Late Pleistocene, the broader region in general was most likely composed of forest and forest tundra, based on a mix of conifer and some broad-leaved trees. Under these conditions, the Altai-Sayan region provided the early hominin inhabitants with a very appealing environment.

title: Okladnikov Cave

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

On the foothills of which mountain is the Okladnikov Cave located?

answer: the Altai Mountains

text: capitalization

answer: The Okladnikov Cave is located in the foothills of the Altai mountains.

answer: The Altai Mountains.

answer: The Okladnikov Cave is located on a Devonian karst escarpment on the foothills of the Altai Mountains.

answer: The Altai Mountains.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What era is the cave from?

answer: The cave is from the late Pleistocene era.

answer: The late Stone Age up into the Ice Age.

answer: The cave dates from 33,000 to 44,000 years ago, during the Paleolithic era.

answer: Paleolithic.

answer: Devonian

text: I believe that is geological not paleontological epoch

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What country is the cave in?

answer: Russia.

answer: Russia.

answer: It is found in Russia.

answer: The cave is in Altai Krai, Russia.

answer: The cave is located in the Altai Krai region of Russia.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Approximately how many tools have been discovered at the site?

answer: Nearly 4000 lithic tools have been discovered.

answer: Nearly 4000 lithic tools have been recovered from Okladnikov Cave.

answer: Almost 4000 lithic tools have been found at Okladnikov Cave.

answer: 4000.

answer: Nearly 4000.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: Okladnikov Cave is located in the southern Siberian region of Altai Krai. The cave contains Mousterian stone tools, Neanderthal and hominin fossils. Evidence shows the region supported a large variety of mammals. The hominin fossils belong to Neanderthals and Neanderthals were adapted to the area. Neanderthals existed in the Altai-Sayan region prior to 200,000 years ago, and the Denisova Cave is located just northeast of the cave.

answer: Okladnikov Cave is located in southern Siberia, Russia. The site consists of an overhang, an entrance stone bench, and five corridors. A Mousterian stone industry tool assemblage dating to between 33,000 and 44,000 years ago was discovered inside the cave, as well as several fragmented hominin fossils. DNA analysis confirms that the remains belonged to Neanderthals, who apparently migrated very far east from Western Europe. The local environment provided the inhabitants with rich resources, including mammals.

answer: Okladnikov Cave is a Paleolithic archeological site located in the Altai Mountains. The cave has an extensive Mousterian stone industry and contains the remains of several hominins dating back as far as 33,000 years. DNA analysis confirms that one of the hominin fragments from the cave is Neanderthal. The habitat of the region at the time was mostly forest and forest tundra.

answer: Okladnikov Cave was first excavated in 1984. It is located on a Devonian karst escarpment in southern Siberia. It is one of the most extensively studied Paleolithic sites in the Altai-Sayan region. The cave contains many Mousterian stone tools as well as many hominin fossils. These hominin fossils are presumed to belong to Neanderthals.

answer: The Okladnikov Cave is a paleoanthropological site located at the foothills of the Altai Mountains in Siberia, Russia. It was originally named after a small nearby village. The cave is one of the most extensively researched Paleolithic sites in the Altai-Sayan region. A rich Mousterian stone industry, dating to between 33,000 and 44,000 years ago, was discovered, as well as several highly fragmented hominin fossils. Along with a few other Neanderthal sites in the Altai-Sayan region, Okladnikov Cave contains fossil evidence for the most easterly confirmed site with Neanderthal presence.


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EDWARD JOSEPH MCNAMARA (September 19, 1894 – 1928) was an Australian born vaudevillian who made a career on stage in Australia, the US and in Hollywood silent films, before dying suddenly in 1928.

McNamara was born in Melbourne, Australia.[1][2] As a juvenile, he appeared on stage in numerous productions while travelling Australia and New Zealand, with great acclaim.[3] In 1905, he joined a long tour by Pollard's Lilliputian Opera Company through Japan, China, Canada and the US,[4] the company achieving considerable renown.[5]

He married former company member and Australian actress Phyllis Hill in Canada in 1913, while both were underage. She returned to Australia in 1915, obtaining a divorce nine years later, in 1926, on the grounds of desertion. There was one child of the union.[6] McNamara continued to perform in North America, including on Broadway through 1922–1924.[7]

In 1926, Raoul Walsh teamed him with fellow comedian Sammy Cohen for supporting character roles in the war film _What Price Glory?_ As a comedy duo, McNamara and Cohen would appear together in several films.

He died of pneumonia in early 1928. Many of the former Pollard's performers living in Hollywood attended the funeral, including Alf Goulding, Billy Bevan, Snub Pollard and Daphne Pollard.[8] He had remarried by this time.

Partial filmography

-   ''Shore Leave ''(1925)
-   _What Price Glory?_ (1926) (with Sammy Cohen)
-   _Upstream_ (1927)
-   _Rich But Honest_ (1927)
-   _Colleen_ (1927) (with Sammy Cohen)
-   _Chain Lightning_ (1927)
-   _The Gay Retreat (1927)_ (with Sammy Cohen)
-   _The Gateway of the Moon_ (1928)
-   _Mother Machree_ (1928)
-   _Why Sailors Go Wrong_ (1928) (with Sammy Cohen)

[1] US World War I Draft registration Card accessed 23 December 2016

[2] However, Victorian Births Deaths and Marriage records state 1893

[3] “DRAMATIC NOTES” _The Mercury_ (Hobart, Tasmania, Wed 24 Aug 1904, Page 2. Accessed 23 December 2016

[4] Truth (Brisbane, Qld. : 1900 - 1954), Sun 29 Sep 1907 Page 2 “POLLARD'S LIVELY LILLIPUTIANS”

[5] “INTERSTATE NEWS” _The Referee_ (Sydney), Wed 13 Dec 1916, Page 14, accessed 23 December 2016

[6] ACTRESS OBTAINS DIVORCE _The Telegraph_ (Brisbane), Tue 11 May 1926, Page 20, accessed 23 December 2016

[7] Entry for Ted McNamara. The Broadway League, 2016 _The Internet Broadway database_, accessed 23 December 2016

[8] COMEDIAN'S DEATH _The Daily News_ (Perth), Fri 23 Mar 1928, Page 11, Accessed 23 December 2016

title: Ted McNamara

question: When was McNamara born?

answer: September 1914

text: This is an incorrect answer to the question given.

answer: September 19, 1894

answer: September 19, 1894

question: What was the cause of his death?

answer: Pneumonia

text: Making this response into a full statement would be helpful.

answer: Tuburculosis or pneumonia.

text: There does not seem to be any reference to tuberculosis in the passage so this response would be half incorrect.

answer: Pneumonia

text: Making this statement into a proper sentence would be helpful.

question: Who was McNamara's first wife?

answer: Phyllis Hill, an Australian actress

text: Making this response into a full sentence would be helpful.

refinement: Phyllis Hill, an Australian actress, was McNamara's first wife.

answer: Phyllis Hill

answer: Phyllis Hill

question: On what grounds did his first wife divorce him?

answer: Desertion

answer: There doesn't seem to be any more information to be found.

text: This response is not accurate.

refinement: It seems as though his first wife divorced him on the grounds of desertion.

text: In the passage, it states Phyllis Hill obtained a divorce on the grounds of desertion.

answer: They were underage.

text: Incorrect answer.

refinement: His first wife divorced him on the grounds of desertion.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: Ted McNamara was an Australian comedian who achieved renown on the stage in Australia, North America and movie films before his death in 1928 at age 34. He is remembered for his work with partner Sammy Cohen on films such as What Price Glory and Upstream.

text: Replacing the word renown with fame will help the summary flow more.

refinement: Ted McNamara was an Australian comedian who achieved fame on the stage in Australia, North America and movie films before his death in 1928 at age 34. He is remembered for his work with partner Sammy Cohen on films such as What Price Glory and Upstream.

answer: Ted McNamara was a successful vaudevillian performer in Australia, the US and in Hollywood silent films until his death in 1928 at age 34. He is remembered today both for his success as well as his early demise.

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refinement: Ted McNamara was a successful vaudevillian performer in Australia, the US and in Hollywood silent films until his death in 1928 at age 34. He is remembered today both for his success as well as his early demise.

answer: Australian born vaudevillian actor Edward McNamara was known for his appearances on stage in Australia, the US, and in Hollywood silent films. He found success with comedian partner Sammy Cohen, until he died suddenly of pneumonia in 1928.

answer: Ted McNamara was an Australian born vaudevillian who achieved success in America as a Broadway actor and in silent film, before suddenly dying of pneumonia in 1928 at the age of 34. His child with fellow actress Phyllis Hill was the only offspring from their brief marriage.

answer: Edward Joseph McNamara was an Australian born vaudeville actor. He married Phyllis Hill, an Australian actress, but she later divorced him on the grounds of desertion. He appeared in several films with Sammy Cohen as a comedy duo. He died suddenly of pneumonia in 1928.

answer: Ted McNamara was an Australian-born vaudevillian who became well known in Australia, North America and in early Hollywood silent films. McNamara passed away in 1928 at the age of 34 due to pneumonia. His short but successful career was fondly remembered by his fellow comedians at his funeral.

text: The last part of this statement does not seem to be needed and should be omitted.

refinement: Ted McNamara was an Australian-born vaudevillian who became well known in Australia, North America and in early Hollywood silent films. McNamara passed away in 1928 at the age of 34 due to pneumonia. His short but successful career was fondly remembered.


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With constant interruptions and vital checks, getting a good night of sleep in the hospital can be a challenge for patients.

But a recent EarlySense study conducted at the University of Chicago found that using the company’s contact-free remote monitoring system as an alternative to waking patients up for vital check throughout the night led to better sleep and satisfaction for patients.

“What the study actually shows is ... you get improvement in sleep quality, patient satisfaction and the efficiency of the nursing team by focusing their attention on the patients that really need care, and those that are stable and low risk don’t need to be woken up at all,” Avner Halperin, CEO of EarlySense, told MobiHealthNews.

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The study included approximately 150 patients, who were divided into a control and an intervention group, according to Halperin. Low-risk patients in the intervention group were not woken up at night between 11 p.m. and 6 a.m.

The intervention group reported better sleep and increased satisfaction. The study, which was funded by EarlySense, also found that patients monitored by system “incurred no additional deterioration or adverse events, versus the control group.”

“There is no increase in risk whatsoever for the patient, and they sleep better and are more satisfied, so we save a lot of clinician time — which is by the way also equivalent to dollars and cents,” Halperin said. “We show that by using our system you can actually take better care of patients, because you get early warning and you can intervene sooner and you have fewer visits to intensive care, shorter length of stay, fewer falls, etc. And that was already shown in previous research.”

Researchers estimated that this practice could lead to a reduction in overnight staff workloads, decreasing costs by $200,000 to $550,000 per 100 hospital beds per year.

The study is now being submitted to peer-reviewed journals for publication.

WHY IT MATTERS

In a hospital setting patients are typically woken up several times a night for vital checks. Studies have shown that sleep disruptions are associate with negative health outcomes including ELEVATED BLOOD PRESSURE, DELIRIUM, and DELAYED HEALING.

EarlySense is pitching its technology as an alternative to the manual checks that require waking a patient up.

“The way we see it is that you probably need fewer vital sign checks and not all patients need frequent checks,” Halperin said. “You probably are going to need those checks and you want physicians to be at the bedside for those more complex, higher risk patients. But for 50 or 60 percent of the patients who are completely stable, what this study shows is we can do much less vital sign manual checking and still get better outcomes.”

WHAT'S THE TREND

EarlySense made headlines in December when it announced that it was integrating with HILL-ROM’S CENTRELLA model hospital bed. The company said that the new technology would be able to measure heart rate and respiratory rate over 100 times per minute.

A month later EarlySense announced a $39 million funding round led by HILL-ROM AND WELLS FARGO. At the time the company said that the new money would be used for expanding its AI analytics capabilities and grow sales both internationally and domestically.

ON THE RECORD

“In this study, we were able to accurately identify low-risk patients and avoid waking them at night, with the safety net of continuous vital sign monitoring,” Dr. Dana Edelson, the study’s principal investigator, said in a statement. “This practice represents a simple, patient-centered approach to deploying expensive healthcare resources which improves patient satisfaction and decreases costs without increasing risk. Letting our low-risk patients sleep at night is an easy win and should be the new standard of care.”

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What kind of improvements will contact-free remote monitoring bring to low-risk patients and hospitals?

answer: It will lead to better sleep and satisfaction. 50-60% of the time, the low-risk patients would be completely stable. This contact- free remote monitoring system would let the patients sleep at night, and save significant time for healthcare professionals to attend to more complex and high-risk patients.

text: The answer omits that it will also save costs for the hospital. It should include this.

refinement: It will lead to better sleep and satisfaction. 50-60% of the time, the low-risk patients would be completely stable. This contact-free remote monitoring system would let the patients sleep at night and save significant time and costs for healthcare professionals to attend to more complex and high-risk patients.

answer: The study found that contact-free remote monitoring led to better sleep and satisfaction for patients and lower costs for hospitals. Specifically, contact-free monitoring can allow low-risk patients to sleep at night without being woken for vital checks, which can decrease the workload on the nursing team and lead to better outcomes.

answer:
A study conducted at the University of Chicago by EarlySense reveals that contact-free remote monitoring as opposed to the traditional method of waking up patients to check their vitals does help patients sleep better and altogether lead to wellness.

The study was done with 150 patients under a controlled setting. The results show that low-risk patients benefited most from longer sleep and better health when remotely monitored versus those who were woken up to have their vitals checked. Contact-free remote monitoring is also said to help in reducing a hospital's expenditure as fewer nurses would be needed for overnight duties.

answer: The contact-free remote monitoring system is expected to lead to better sleep, satisfaction, and efficiency of the nursing staff. Patients deemed as low risk will not be awoken for vital checks throughout the night, resulting in better outcomes and few adverse events. Ultimately this is expected to save resources in hospitals while simultaneously improving patient care.

answer:
In hospitals, patients are typically woken up several times a night for vital check. Studies have shown that sleep disruptions are associate with negative health outcomes including elevated blood pressure, delirium and delayed healing. Patient satisfaction is also increased after they have been monitored using the contact-free remote monitoring system.

In this study, the researchers found that minimal checks are needed for low-risk patients, who are completely stable and need little to no further care being administered. The checking of vitals has also decreased, and there is an overall decrease in intensive care and shorter length of stay. The intervention group reported an increase in satisfaction and better sleep.

text: The answer given is not well put together. The points seem to be scattered all over and should be arranged in chronological order for clarity.

refinement: In hospitals, patients are typically woken up several times a night for a vital check. Studies have shown that sleep disruptions are associated with adverse health outcomes including elevated blood pressure, delirium and delayed healing. In this study, the researchers found that minimal checks are needed for low-risk patients, who are completely stable and need little to no further care being administered. The checking of vitals will also decrease, and there is an overall decrease in intensive care and shorter length of stay. Patient satisfaction is thereby increased after they have been monitored using the contact-free remote monitoring system.

text: The answer omits the improvements of contact-free remote monitoring to hospitals. It should include this.

refinement: In hospitals, patients are typically woken up several times a night for a vital check. Studies have shown that sleep disruptions are associated with adverse health outcomes, including elevated blood pressure, delirium, and delayed healing. In this study, the researchers found that minimal checks are needed for low-risk patients, who are completely stable and require little to no further care being administered. The checking of vitals will also decrease, and there is an overall decrease in intensive care and shorter length of stay. Patient satisfaction is thereby increased after they have been monitored using the contact-free remote monitoring system. And while it would save time for healthcare professionals in attending to patients, it would also reduce costs for hospitals.


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I saw a particular kind of girl in the queue of the coffee shop today as she quite rightfully drew my gaze from behind. She had dark brown hair that fell in curls midway down her back and she wore a leather jacket, tight blue jeans and had an excellent, petite figure.

She had collected her coffee and took a seat up to my right and after admiring her from the back I now saw her from the side. Her eyes were bright and attractive and her nose delicately small, from what I could see she was exceptional. After ordering and taking a seat of my own I glanced over a few times at her. I feigned going to the toilet and walked up toward my right, glancing at her as I came into her line but she was reading a paper and her eyes concentrated upon it.

As I returned she was looking around the room toward the entrance. When her head turned around I saw her from the front; her eyes were horribly close together and I saw that her mouth was slightly lopsided. There was something very unlovely about her facial complexion, it was hard and flat and you could tell now more clearly that she was heavily made-up. I’d been deceived and she was irretrievably ugly. I saw now too that it was a copy of The Sun she was reading too, how awful I thought.

Feeling underwhelmed and despondent I returned to my seat and watched her sit quite nervily. Her eyes glanced to the door, then to her tabloid, then nervously to her phone. She hadn’t turned the page she was reading for over five minutes; it was hard to tell whether she was a slow reader or just trying to pass time. When she again looked to the door and then to her phone it was clear it was the latter. I thought she looked the sort who’d be a slow reader, too.

After reading two chapters of my book my coffee was now cold dregs, I knew hers would be too even though she’d only taken a few token sips. She continued her wishful trinity of door, phone, paper and I was glad she had now turned a page. It had now been 25 minutes and the café was now starting to get louder and busier and I looked at her from the side as I was leaving. Looking at her from this angle almost made me forget that flatly hideous face she had presented earlier. She looked deceptively good from the side, it was a shame she was being stood up, I thought.

As I approached the door I turned back her way, I must have been in time with her pathological checking of the door as I saw her look up, her hair swiveling very elegantly as she did so. Her face was written with rejection and that expression sat awkwardly with her too-close-together features.

 It wasn’t actually a shame at all, actually, I thought as I walked out onto the wet and busy street. It was a classic case of when everything is attractive about a girl, but her face.

title: But Her Face.

question: What makes the girl seem unattractive to the boy?

answer: The boy thinks her face is ugly.

answer: Her face and the fact that she is reading the Sun tabloid.

answer: The boy finds the girl unattractive because of her close-set eyes and lopsided mouth, as well as her heavily made-up appearance.

answer: The boy thinks the girl is unattractive because her face is flat and her eyes are too close together.

question: What does the boy initially think of the girl?

answer: The boy initially thinks the girl is attractive.

answer: He thinks she is beautiful.

answer: Initially, the boy thinks that the girl is attractive, but upon seeing her face up close, he realizes that she is actually quite ugly.

answer: That she is quite good looking.

question: What happens to the girl at the end of the story?

answer: She is being stood up.

answer: She is stood up.

answer: The girl is left alone in the coffee shop as her date does not show up. She looks sad and rejected.

answer: The girl is stood up.

question: What does the boy do at the end of the story?

answer: Leaves the cafe.

answer: The boy leaves the coffee shop.

answer: The boy leaves the coffee shop after seeing the girl's expression of rejection.

answer: He leaves the coffee shop.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The narrator sees a girl in the queue of a coffee shop and is attracted to her.

text: Needs more to get the plot twist

refinement: The narrator sees a girl in the queue of a coffee shop and is attracted to her. Then he decides she is not attractive.

answer: This story is about a boy who watches a girl at a cafe, only to decide she is not as attractive as he thought she was.

answer: The author sees a girl in the coffee shop and is drawn to her. He then sees her from the front and is disappointed to see that she is ugly.

answer: The author describes seeing a girl in the coffee shop who initially seems attractive, but upon closer inspection, the author finds her face to be unattractive.


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The latest headlines in your inbox twice a day Monday - Friday plus breaking news updates

Bystanders watched in horror as a huge fire broke out at Battersea Arts Centre this afternoon.

The blaze sparked in the Grand Hall of the Grade II listed building just after 4.15pm today, the London Fire Brigade said.

More than 80 firefighters were sent to tackle the flames at the cultural hub in south London, which is currently undergoing a multi-million pound renovation.

Sharing a picture of blaze on Twitter, Richard Dufty, the Arts Centre's senior producer, tweeted: "Terrible news. @battersea_arts is on fire. The Grand Hall roof."

He later wrote: "Everyone @battersea_arts is ok. But still fighting fire. A lot of us in estate agent calling audience. Grand hall looks completely destroyed."

A spokesman for Battersea Arts Centre said everyone was safely evacuated from the building when the fire broke out.

  Terrible news. @battersea_arts is on fire. The Grand Hall roof pic.twitter.com/OH1tLVPfSy

  — Richard Dufty (@RichardDufty) March 13, 2015

He added that all performances at the centre this evening had subsequently been cancelled.

In a series on tweets, he said: "There is a fire in our building. Everyone is out safe and the fire brigade are working hard to get the fire under control. We'll update you.

Emergency call: smoke billows from the Arts Centre building (Picture: Katie Powell)

"We will not be running any performances this evening. If you've bought tickets for any show we'll be in contact about refunds or exchanges."

He added: "Thank you to everyone for the kind words & well wishes. Everyone is out. Everyone is safe.

"We will not be running any performances this evening and we have also cancelled the performance of Missing tomorrow evening."

Witnesses said that people at the scene were crying as the tower at the top of the Arts Centre collapsed amid the flames.

One Twitter user said: "Tower on the top of Battersea Arts Centre has just collapsed. People in tears. Police moving people back".

  Major fire happening at the Grand Hall of Battersea Arts Centre pic.twitter.com/WDjqvwFJwr

  — mike (@urban75) March 13, 2015

Katie Powell, who was at the nearby Fox and Hound pub when the fire started, said bystanders had spoken to her of their sadness after seeing the blaze.

Huge job: firefighters work to contain the blaze (Picture: Twitter/@jesscousins)

She said: "There are firefighters everywhere and police were closing off the roads. I was having a drink when I saw the smoke. Lots of people have been coming up to me and saying it is so sad. It is such an old building."

Other bystanders tweeted their horror at seeing the historic building on fire.

Sean Lawless, campaign organiser for Battersea Labour, said: "Absolutely tragic, huge fire at Battersea Arts Centre. Hope it doesn't spread too far through the building."

Firefighter John Snelgrove, who was at the scene, said: "This is a large, challenging fire and crews are working hard to bring it under control. We've got 12 fire engines at the scene, as well as an aerial appliance and an aerial ladder platform fighting the fire from above.

"Firefighters are working with a number of water jets around the building to contain the fire."

A fire brigade spokesman said: “We were called at 4.17 to reports of a fire in the roof at an art centre on Lavender Hill.

Blaze: fire crews were called to the scene in Battersea (Picture: Met Police / PC Ben Perkins)

"We are working hard to stop the fire from spreading. We have 12 fire engines and more than 80 firefighters at the scene".

Just after 8pm this evening, the spokesman said the fire was "under control" and its cause was being investigated.

Chris Hawkswell, an emergency planning officer for the London Ambulance Service, tweeted: "An ambulance crew, duty officer & @LAS_HART are attending a fire at #Battersea Arts Centre, Lavender Hill with @LondonFire."

Smoke: a view of the fire in south London (Picture: Tom Dutton)

A London Ambulance service spokesman said: "We were called at 4.29pm to reports of a fire at an address on Lavender Hill.

"We sent an ambulance crew, a duty officer and the hazardous area response team to the scene. We remain on scene

Lavender Hill was closed both ways while fire crews and police were at the scene.

question: The grade is the listed building that was affected by the huge blaze that happened at the Battersea Arts Centre.

answer: Grade 2.

answer: The fire started just after 4:15pm and quickly spread throughout the building. The fire was eventually put out by 8pm, but the cause is still being investigated.

text: Answer is not relevant to the question.

text: Empty answer.

text: Empty answer.

text: Empty answer.

question: How many firefighters were sent to deal with the flames?

answer: More than 80 firefighters were sent to deal with the flames.

text: "More than 80 firefighters were sent to tackle the flames" is evidence that over 80 firefighters were sent.

answer: More than 80 firefighters.

text: "More than 80 firefighters were sent to tackle the flames" is evidence that over 80 firefighters were sent.

answer: More than 80 firefighters were sent to tackle the flames at the cultural hub in south London.

text: "More than 80 firefighters were sent to tackle the flames" is evidence that over 80 firefighters were sent.

answer: According to the passage, more than 80 firefighters were sent to deal with the flames at the Battersea Arts Centre.

text: "More than 80 firefighters were sent to tackle the flames" is evidence that over 80 firefighters were sent.

question: What anyone harmed during the incident?

answer: There is no indication that anyone was harmed during the incident.

text: This answer does not mention that there IS indication that no one was harmed.

refinement: There is no indication that anyone was harmed during the incident, and there is evidence that everyone got out of the building safely.

text: "Everyone @battersea_arts is ok" is evidence that no one was harmed.

answer: No one was harmed.

text: "Everyone @battersea_arts is ok" is evidence that no one was harmed.

answer: No one was harmed. All were evacuated in time.

text: "Everyone @battersea_arts is ok" is evidence that no one was harmed.

answer: No one was harmed during the incident.

text: "Everyone @battersea_arts is ok" is evidence that no one was harmed.

question: What did the spokesman for the Battersea Arts Centre say after the fire was put out?

answer: The spokesman said that the fire was "under control" and its cause was being investigated.

text: "Just after 8pm this evening, the spokesman said the fire was "under control" and its cause was being investigated" is evidence of what the spokesman stated.

answer: The spokesman said that the fire was "under control" and that its cause was being investigated.

text: "Just after 8pm this evening, the spokesman said the fire was "under control" and its cause was being investigated" is evidence of what the spokesman stated.

answer: He said that the cause of the fire was being investigated.

text: Does not mention that he also said the first is under control.

refinement: He said that the fire was under control and the cause of the fire was being investigated.

text: "Just after 8pm this evening, the spokesman said the fire was "under control" and its cause was being investigated" is evidence of what that he stated the cause was being investigated.

answer: He assured the public that no one was harmed and he promised refunds to those who have purchased tickets for upcoming events at the venue.

text: The timing of this statement is unclear--the answer may be inaccurate.

text: Empty answer.

refinement: He stated that the fire was under control and the cause was being investigated.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: A fire broke out at the Battersea Arts Centre where The Grand Hall, a Grade 2 listed building was affected. Over 80 firefighters were deployed to deal with the incident. Later in the day, the spokesperson for Battersea Arts Centre announced that no one was hurt in the fire and refunds will be made to those who have purchased tickets for events at the Grand Hall.

text: "More than 80 firefighters were sent to tackle the flames" is evidence that over 80 firefighters were deployed.

text: "Everyone @battersea_arts is ok" is evidence that no one was hurt in the fire.

text: "If you've bought tickets for any show we'll be in contact about refunds or exchanges" is evidence that refunds were offered for those who purchased tickets.

answer: A fire broke out at the Battersea Arts Centre in London. The fire started in the Grand Hall of the Grade II listed building. The fire was put out by the London Fire Brigade.

text: Could mention that no one was harmed in the fire.

refinement: A fire broke out at the Battersea Arts Centre in London. The fire started in the Grand Hall of the Grade II listed building. The fire was put out by the London Fire Brigade. No one was harmed in the fire.

text: Doesn't mention the damage done by the fire.

refinement: A fire broke out at the Battersea Arts Centre in London. The fire started in the Grand Hall of the Grade II listed building. The fire was put out by the London Fire Brigade. No one was harmed in the fire. The grand Hall was completely destroyed.

answer: A large fire broke out at the Battersea Arts Centre in south London this afternoon, causing the Grand Hall to be destroyed. More than 80 firefighters were called to the scene, and all performances at the centre for the evening were cancelled. Thankfully, everyone was safely evacuated from the building and no injuries have been reported. The cause of the fire is currently unknown.

text: Tense issue.

refinement: A large fire broke out at the Battersea Arts Centre in south London this afternoon, causing the Grand Hall to be destroyed. More than 80 firefighters were called to the scene, and all performances at the centre for the evening were cancelled. Thankfully, everyone was safely evacuated from the building and no injuries were reported. The cause of the fire is currently unknown.

text: "More than 80 firefighters were sent to tackle the flames" is evidence that over 80 firefighters were deployed.

text: "Grand hall looks completely destroyed" is evidence that the Grand Hall was destroyed.

answer: A fire broke out at Battersea Arts Centre in south London this afternoon. The blaze sparked in the Grand Hall of the Grade II listed building just after 4.15pm today, the London Fire Brigade said. More than 80 firefighters were sent to tackle the flames at the cultural hub in south London, which is currently undergoing a multi-million pound renovation.

text: The date given ("today") is only true at the time of the article.

refinement: A fire broke out at Battersea Arts Centre in south London. The blaze sparked in the Grand Hall of the Grade II listed building, the London Fire Brigade said. More than 80 firefighters were sent to tackle the flames at the cultural hub in south London, which is currently undergoing a multi-million pound renovation.

text: Could mention the conseuqneces of the fire.

refinement: A fire broke out at Battersea Arts Centre in south London. The blaze sparked in the Grand Hall of the Grade II listed building, the London Fire Brigade said. More than 80 firefighters were sent to tackle the flames at the cultural hub in south London, which is currently undergoing a multi-million pound renovation. The Grand Hall was destroyed, but no one was harmed in the fire.