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The FEDERAL DETENTION CENTER, HONOLULU (FDC HONOLULU) is a United States federal prison facility in Hawaii which holds male and female prisoners of all security levels prior to or during court proceedings in Hawaii Federal District Court, as well as inmates serving brief sentences. It is operated by the Federal Bureau of Prisons, a division of the United States Department of Justice.

FDC Honolulu is located adjacent to Honolulu International Airport,[1] and is at the airport's western perimeter. The building has twelve stories.[2]

As of 2013 it houses 300 prisoners sentenced under Hawaiian law rather than federal law; the Hawaii state prison system did not have enough capacity for these prisoners.[3]

History

The facility opened in 2001. The first 25 inmates to occupy the facility were scheduled to arrive at FDC Honolulu on July 31 of that year; previously they were held in facilities in the Mainland United States. The first five groups, each consisting of 25 inmates, were made up of inmates within their final two years of their federal prison sentences. FDC Honolulu relieved the Oahu Community Correctional Center, operated by the Hawaii Department of Public Safety. As of June 2001, the Oahu Community Correctional Center, designed to hold 1,000 pretrial inmates, held 1,150 pretrial inmates. The first pretrial inmates from Hawaii were scheduled to move into the federal center one month after the first five groups of 25 convicted inmates had arrived.[4]

As of 2016 the Hawaiian Legislature expressed an interest in acquiring FDC Honolulu.[5]

Notable Inmates (current and former)

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| Inmate  | Regis | Status         | Details                          |
| Name    | ter   |                |                                  |
|         | Numbe |                |                                  |
|         | r     |                |                                  |
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| Duane   | 95743 | Arrested on    | Subjects of the A&E reality      |
| “Dog”   | -022  | September 14,  | television program _Dog the      |
| Chapman |       | 2006; released | Bounty Hunter_; arrested on an   |
|         | 95744 | on bail the    | illegal bounty hunting warrant   |
| Leland  | -022  | next day.      | issued in Mexico in connection   |
| Chapman |       |                | with their apprehension of       |
|         | 95742 |                | serial rapist Andrew Luster in   |
| Tim     | -022  |                | 2003; the charges against them   |
| Chapman |       |                | were later dismissed.[6]         |
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[1] “FDC Honolulu.” Federal Bureau of Prisons. Retrieved on December 30, 2009.

[2] Bosworth, Mary. _The U.S. Federal Prison System_. SAGE Publications, July 19, 2002. , 9780761923046. p. 235.

[3] Thompson, David. “Field Guide: Honolulu Behind Bars” (Archive). _Honolulu_. July 9, 2012. Retrieved on February 7, 2016.

[4] “New jailhouse ready for first inmates” (Archive). _Honolulu Star-Bulletin_. Wednesday June 13, 2001. Retrieved on December 30, 2009.

[5] “H.C.R. NO. 31” (Archive). Government of Hawaii. Retrieved on February 7, 2016.

[6]

title: Federal Detention Center, Honolulu

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about the inmates housed at Federal Detention Center, Honolulu?

answer: As of 2016, the Hawaiian Legislature has expressed interest in acquiring Federal Detention Center, Honolulu. The facility opened in 2001 and houses 300 prisoners sentenced under Hawaiian law, before or during court proceedings.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: The facility opened in 2001 and houses 300 prisoners sentenced under Hawaiian law, before or during court proceedings.

text: The response misses to specify that the prisoners were sentenced under Hawaiian law rather than the federal law because the state prison system did not have enough capacity for these prisoners. It also misses to mention that the prison houses all prisoners, male and female, of all security levels. As well as inmates serving brief sentences.

refinement: The facility opened in 2001 and houses 300 prisoners sentenced under Hawaiian law, before or during court proceedings, rather than federal law because the Hawaii state prison system did not have enough capacity for these prisoners. The prison houses all prisoners, male and female, of all security levels. As well as inmates serving brief sentences.

answer: As of 2013, as one of the prisons in the Hawaii state prison system did not have enough capacity for these prisoners, the Federal Detention Center, Honolulu, held 300 prisoners sentenced under Hawaiian law rather than federal law - it housed all prisoners of all security levels prior to or during court proceedings in Hawaii Federal District.

answer: As of 2016, the Hawaiian Legislature expressed an interest in acquiring Federal Detention Center, Honolulu. As of 2013 it had 300 prisoners sentenced under the Hawaiian law.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: As of 2013 it had 300 prisoners sentenced under the Hawaiian law.

text: The response misses to specify that the prisoners were sentenced under Hawaiian law rather than the federal law because the state prison system did not have enough capacity for these prisoners. It also misses to mention that the prison houses all prisoners, male and female, of all security levels prior to or during court proceedings in Hawaii Federal District Court. As well as inmates serving brief sentences.

refinement: As of 2013 it had 300 prisoners sentenced under the Hawaiian law rather than federal law; the Hawaii state prison system did not have enough capacity for these prisoners. The facility holds male and female prisoners of all security levels prior to or during court proceedings in Hawaii Federal District Court, as well as inmates serving brief sentences.

answer: As of 2016, the Hawaiian Legislature expressed an interest in acquiring Federal Detention Center, Honolulu. In 2013, it housed 300 prisoners sentenced under the Hawaiian law rather than the federal law because the state prison system did not have enough capacity for these prisoners.

text: The response misses to mention that the prison houses all prisoners, male and female, of all security levels prior to or during court proceedings in Hawaii Federal District Court. As well as inmates serving brief sentences.

refinement: As of 2016, the Hawaiian Legislature expressed an interest in acquiring Federal Detention Center, Honolulu. In 2013, it housed 300 prisoners sentenced under the Hawaiian law rather than the federal law because the state prison system did not have enough capacity for these prisoners. The prison houses all prisoners, male and female, of all security levels prior to or during court proceedings in Hawaii Federal District Court. As well as inmates serving brief sentences.

text: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

refinement: In 2013, it housed 300 prisoners sentenced under the Hawaiian law rather than the federal law because the state prison system did not have enough capacity for these prisoners. The prison houses all prisoners, male and female, of all security levels prior to or during court proceedings in Hawaii Federal District Court. As well as inmates serving brief sentences.

answer: As of 2013, as one of the prisons in the Hawaii state prison system did not have enough capacity for these prisoners, the Federal Detention Center, Honolulu, held 300 prisoners sentenced under Hawaiian law rather than federal law. Extrapolated from that; it is said to house all prisoners of all security levels prior to or during court proceedings in Hawaii Federal District.


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     It's funny how people act in the coffee rooms at funeral homes. They're all sad or they act sad out of respect. They all drink coffee and eat the cookies that they put out on the table, and they talk about how the body looks for a while, then they start talking about politics or the weather or some damn boring thing. It happens at every viewing I've ever been to. I even do it. I sat there the other night at my great aunts viewing and I nodded my head when people talked about how natural she looked and all that, and I ate three big cookie, then I looked down at my gut and was disgusted because I'm a damn glutton.
	Anyways, two things happened when we all left the funeral home: the first thing was I offered to be a pallbearer. It was my great aunt Margret's viewing, like I said, and my grandma said that me or my brother ought to be pallbearers. My brother's real nervous about some things, one of them is being around dead people. He was afraid he'd drop the casket or something, so I offered to do it, but Margret's niece said no. She told my grandma later that the reason she said no was because I looked like a clown because of my hair. I have long shaggy hair that I dye blood red.
     The second thing is that I noticed the damn Christmas tree in the corner near the door in the lobby -- it's getting close to Christmas now. It was tall and green and decorated in bright white lights and silver tinsel and big red bulbs with the names of all the dead people who were shown there that year written on them with permanent marker. I saw Margret's name in the center.
	I thought it was sort of strange, decorating the tree with the dead. I think that funeral homes are strange altogether. When you die everybody you ever met practically comes and cries and get all sad at the site of your leftover meat.
	When I got back home I started over to my friend Darren's house.
	Darren and I have went to school together since fourth grade, but we just started hanging out this year because we've always ran with different crowds. His friends are the kind of guys that wear gym shorts all year long and lust after Air Jordans and Beats Headphones and try to punk out everybody so they can feel tough. Plus, we've never had any classes together or anything until this year, but Darren's probably my favorite friend.
      The only problem with us hanging out is that he smokes a lot of weed and he's got me smoking a lot too. Last weekend we blew fifteen bucks on weed, smoked it all and stayed up until four listening to The Beatles.
	He's never listened to much music outside of rap, so I've been trying to show him some good stuff. He always acts like he likes it, but he's probably just entertaining me. He's probably just telling me he likes it because we're friends and he's nice. Darren's a real nice sensitive guy under all that wanna-be-thug shit he's always doing. He's nicer than me in a lot of ways, like when he's listening to rap and I don't like it, I tell him and bitch until he turns it off, and when he turns it off, he isn't even mad about having to doing it because he's real considerate. I wish I was that considerate.
	Anyways, Darren and I ended up going down to the cemetery and smoking a fat joint. I told him about the funeral home Christmas tree and he said that the funeral home was retarded.
	"They won't be putting my name on some damn bulb," he said. Then he talked about the rapture through the rest of the cemetery. He told me that we weren't going to have to worry about funerals because we weren't really going to die because we  were going up in the rapture. Darren was always talking about the rapture. He never went to church, but he had all the faith
in the world that the rapture was going to happen at any minute and he had all the faith in the world that the two of us were going.
	He told me once that I'm the only friend he likes to talk to about the rapture. It was probably because I'm the only one
who will even listen. I don't believe in the Bible, but I don't mind talking about Bible stuff if I care about the person doing most of the talking.
	If Heaven exists, Darren will go because he's nice and sensitive. If there's a Heaven, Margret's there because she was a real sweet lady. It's a nice idea, the idea of Heaven, I mean. I guess I'd rather float up to a cloud kingdom than to get old and die and be buried in a boxes.
	Anyways, I'm not sure why he thinks I'm going to Heaven.
	Once we got out of the cemetery, we saw this old tin can in the middle of the street, and the street was empty because it was about nine at night or later and it was cold and everybody besides the two of us were inside around heater and wrap in blankets, probably. Anyways, we started kicking the can down this alley and we kept falling down and laughing because we were stoned.
	We kept on kicking the can down the alleys until I had to piss. I went behind this old white shed, unbuttoned my pants and
unzipped and started pissing. There was this Oldsmobile behind me, it was parked on the other side of the alley, I thought it was empty because it was dark and I couldn't see through the
windows. Well, somebody was in it, and halfway through my piss, whoever it was  beeped the horn and scared me half to death,
 and I ended up pissing down my leg. I zipped up my pants and Darren and I got the hell out of the alley as fast as we could. It was funny, though. I didn't even mind the piss on my leg that much.

title: [UR] Funeral Home Christmas Tree

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the type of person Darren is?

answer: The story portrays Darren as a sensitive, considerate person. He listens to music his friend finds meaningful, and he is always open to discussing matters of faith and the afterlife. By contrast, the protagonist also recognizes that Darren behaves differently from him: whereas the protagonist is easily irritated, Darren is patient and kind.

text: Darren isn't really open to discussing matters of faith and the afterlife because he never even went to church. All Darren had was faith that the rapture was going to happen anytime. The protagonist recognizing that Darren behaves differently from him is also irrelevant. The response is missing the detail that Darren sports an outward wannabe thug persona on the surface.

refinement: Darren is a sensitive, nice, and considerate person underneath his wannabe-thug persona that was likely influenced by his other set of friends. He listens to the narrator's music even though it's not what he likes. Darren gives way to the narrator when the latter complains about his rap music, turning it off without any hint of anger. Darren smokes a lot of weed and likes to talk about the rapture despite not being religious or churchgoing. He has faith that the rapture will come and take him and the narrator away.

answer: Darren is a nice guy who listens to his friend as they share their stories and viewpoints. He's a sensitive guy under all the thug talk, and he's considerate when it comes to his friend's opinions. Darren has all the faith in the world in the rapture, and he believes only those who have a pure heart, such as himself, will make it to heaven. It seems Darren has never tried to go against the temptations he was always exposed to on the streets.

text: The highlighted text is inaccurate and was never mentioned in the story.

refinement: Darren is a nice guy who listens to his friend as they share their stories and viewpoints. He's a sensitive guy under all the thug talk, and he's considerate when it comes to his friend's opinions. Darren has all the faith in the world in the rapture.

answer: Darren is a kind guy who is sensitive and considerate. He enjoys cannabis and would talk about the rapture. He lacks faith in the church and has strong faith in the Bible and in the rapture.

answer: The story suggests that Darren is a considerate and sensitive person. Despite being of a different crowd and listening to different music, Darren is able to show compassion for others, even in times of hardship. Darren also sees the absurdity in the funeral home Christmas tree, and the two spend time having fun in the cemetery. It is clear that Darren is a kind, sweet person.

answer: Darren smokes a lot of weed. He pretends to like the narrator's music because they're friends and he's nice. He's a sensitive guy under his wannabe-thug persona. He turns off his rap music when the narrator says he doesn't like it, and isn't mad about it because he's considerate. He's always talking about the rapture, even though he never goes to church. The narrator believes that if Heaven exists, Darren would go.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to the narrator's family.

answer: The narrator attends the viewing for his great aunt Margret. His grandma said that he or his broughter ought to be pall bearers. Since his brother was afraid of dropping the casket, the narrator offered to do it, but Margret's niece declined. The narrator believes Margret is in Heaven because she was a real sweet lady.

text: While the details in the response are somewhat correct, it is not presented in the right format and some details are missing.

refinement: The narrator has a great aunt Margaret who recently passed away. His grandmother suggested that he or his brother be pallbearers at Margaret's funeral. The narrator offered to do it because his brother gets nervous around dead people and feared he might drop the casket. However, Margeret's niece declined the narrator's offer (to be a pallbearer) because he looks like a clown with his shaggy, red hair. The narrator believes Margret is in Heaven because she was a real sweet lady.

category_text: A combination of coverage and coherence.

answer: The narrator is related to Margret. He seems to live with their grandmother and brother. Their father lives separately, not being mentioned in this text.

text: It was never implied anywhere in the story if the narrator and his brother lived with their grandmother. The narrator's parents were also never mentioned, so the part about the father living separately is inaccurate. Needs a complete rewrite.

refinement: The narrator has a great aunt Margaret who recently passed away. His grandmother suggested that he or his brother be pallbearers at Margaret's funeral. The narrator offered to do it because his brother gets nervous around dead people and feared he might drop the casket. However, Margeret's niece declined the narrator's offer (to be a pallbearer) because he looks like a clown with his shaggy, red hair.

answer: The narrator's great aunt Margret died, and at her viewing the narrator volunteered to be a pallbearer. There was also a Christmas tree set up in the lobby of the funeral home with names of dead people written on the bulbs. The narrator and Darren went down to the cemetery to smoke a joint, and the oldsmobile parked there scared the narrator while he was urinating. The narrator's family seems to consist mostly of relatives who have passed away.

text: The highlighted text is irrelevant and doesn't answer the question about the narrator's family.

refinement: The narrator's great aunt Margret died, and at her viewing the narrator volunteered to be a pallbearer.

text: Lacks details about the narrator's family.

refinement: The narrator has a great aunt Margaret who recently passed away. His grandmother suggested that he or his brother be pallbearers at Margaret's funeral. The narrator offered to do it because his brother gets nervous around dead people and feared he might drop the casket. However, Margeret's niece declined the narrator's offer (to be a pallbearer) because he looks like a clown with his shaggy, red hair.

answer: The narrator's grandma says she says either him or his brother ought to be pallbearers at her great aunt Margret's viewing. They went to the cemetery together to smoke pot and talk about the rapture where the narrator starts kicking a tin can. His friend Darren kept talking about the rapture and they kept talking until they got back and they got in the Olds near the white shed.

answer:
The narrator's great aunt Margret died, and the viewer attendees discussed the body and other mundane topics. The narrator then noticed the funeral home's Christmas tree and found the decorations morbid and strange.

The narrator's family consists of the narrator and their brother, as well as their great aunt Margret. The family is predominantly composed of older people and the narrator's brother is nervous around dead people. Though the narrator considers himself nice, Darren is even nicer. The narrator and Darren got stoned and observed a tin can in the street, and the narrator eventually urinated against a white shed, which caused someone to honk their car horn and scare the narrator. The narrator does not mind the resulting urine on their leg, which is indicative of their generally good-hearted nature.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize the narrator's movements after he meets up with Darren.

answer: After meeting up with his friend Darren, the narrator goes to the cemetery and smokes a joint, then goes for a walk afterward. While walking, the narrator finds a tin can in the street, and as he is peeing behind an empty car, the car's horn is accidentally blown, causing him to piss on himself.

text: The highlighted text reads like the narrator did all this alone, when in fact, he did all this with Darren. The response is also missing some details about the narrator's movement.

refinement: The narrator meets up with Darren and they go to the cemetery to smoke a fat joint. They talk about the rapture for a bit and go for a walk afterward. Once they were out of the cemetery, they saw an old tin can in the middle of the street and started kicking it down an alley while stoned. They kept on kicking the can down the alley until the narrator needed to piss, and as he is peeing behind an empty car, the car's horn is accidentally blown, causing him to piss on himself.

text: The narrator didn't pee behind an empty car. He took a piss behind an empty shed and the car was actually behind him. It was never implied that the car horn was blown accidentally.

refinement: The narrator meets up with Darren and they go to the cemetery to smoke a fat joint. They talk about the rapture for a bit and go for a walk afterward. Once they were out of the cemetery, they saw an old tin can in the middle of the street and started kicking it down an alley while stoned. They kept on kicking the can down the alley until the narrator needed to piss, which he did behind an old white shed. There was a car parked behind him that looked empty until someone inside honked the horn. The narrator was scared half to death and pissed down his leg while running away from the alley.

answer: After the narrator and Darren meet, they meet up with his friend at the cemetery to smoke a joint. They walk a bit and when they leave the cemetery, go to kick a tin can back to Darren's place until the narrator needs to go to the bathroom.

text: The narrator met with Darren and there was no other friend. They also kicked the tin can down an alley, not Darren's house. The narrator needed to pee and wasn't necessarily looking for a bathroom. Needs a complete rewrite.

refinement: The narrator meets up with Darren and they go to the cemetery to smoke a fat joint. They talk about the rapture for a bit and go for a walk afterward. Once they were out of the cemetery, they saw an old tin can in the middle of the street and started kicking it down an alley while stoned. They kept on kicking the can down the alley until the narrator needed to piss, which he did behind an old white shed. There was a car parked behind him that looked empty until someone inside honked the horn. The narrator was scared half to death and pissed down his leg while running away from the alley.

answer: The narrator meets with Darren at Darren's house. They go to the cemetery. Once they exit the cemetery, they kick a can down an alley. The narrator goes behind an old white shed to pee. When the narrator realizes there is someone in the car parked on the other side of the alley, he and Darren run away as fast as they can.

answer: The narrator went to Darren's house and smoked a joint together. While walking back from the cemetery, the narrator sees a funeral home Christmas tree and is disturbed by it. After kicking a tin can around an alley, the narrator ends up pissing down his leg when a car honks at him. Despite the pee, the narrator doesn't mind too much.

answer: The two go to a cemetery directly after visiting the funeral home and smoking a joint. Darren convinces the narrator that his drug-use and bad behavior "isn't that bad" while encouraging him to follow in those footsteps. After visiting the cemetery, the two hang out kicking a tin can until the narrator pisses and causes it to fall, causing the narrator to pee himself.


text:
 Monday, 7:00 am
The past couple of days have felt slightly... off. Although, I can't explain exactly what it feels like on paper. The best analogy I can possibly generate: everything just feels slightly tinted. The kind of tint that needs to be washed away. But how could this happen? I tried retracing steps countless times; yet nothing jumps out at me. It's the same as it's always been. I wake up at exactly 6:30 and let the alarm ring itself 10 times. I then walk over to the bathroom, making sure that I don't take any more or less than 10 steps to get there.

 I know, it seems strange so far but it's really not that bad. Afterwards, I take the towel off of the shower rod, unfold it; then refold it again and set it back on the shower rod. I routinely proceed to slide the shower curtain to the left, I then step into the shower, and slide the curtain back over to the right making sure to spread it out equally so that no water can escape. Now, I think this might be where everything went wrong. I pulled the shower handle outwards to turn the water on; then turned it all the way to the left. Except there was one thing that didn't fit the puzzle. What could it be though? I've been sitting here trying to figure it out for over 10 minutes now, I still can't put my finger on what it is. Anyways, it's almost 7:30 now; I should probably leave to go to work.

Monday, 5:30 pm

It all makes sense to me now, how could I have been so blind before? While I was walking my way to work; making sure to fit exactly 2 steps in every concrete square on the sidewalk, the solution had finally presented itself to me. It was that damned shower. I had forgotten to make sure that I turned the handle to the left until it clicked. I guess I must have just imagined that I turned it all the way. That makes perfect sense, and it also explains why the water had felt less scalding than it usually does. I'm such an idiot sometimes.
Well, I suppose there's no need for me to write about this anymore. I'm just glad that I can at last wash the tint away.

Tuesday, 7:00 am

No, this cannot be happening to me. The tint is still here. To make matters worse, I think the tint is darker than it was to start with. Maybe I'm just exaggerating, I don't even know what to do anymore. There isn't anything else that could have gone wrong besides the shower, I'm absolutely sure of it. After the shower, the only other part of the routine worth considering is getting dressed. For most people, choosing the right outfit for the day seems to be the hardest part of the morning. For me, it's the least methodical thing I do. Same black dress pants and blue dress shirt every single day. Oh, and of course the pen. I don't know if it's really worth mentioning, but before I walk out of the door I make sure to grab the pen off of the kitchen counter. I have an office job, so it comes in handy. I click it in and back out three times then put it on my dress shirt's chest pocket before leaving to go to work.

No, It's no use, none of those small routines could have been messed up. I'm now more scared than I've ever been before, and I can't help but think: what happens when the tint gets even darker?
I need to pull myself together, it's almost 7:30 now; I should probably leave to go to work.

Tuesday, 3:30 pm

My boss fired me today. He claims that I'm "Completely psychotic." It's strange, I don't know what made me drive the pen into his throat, but I'm so glad that I did. The smile has yet to leave my face. I can hardly believe it, I feel the tint starting to fade away.

P.S. To whomever finds this short journal, don't mind the blood on this last page.

I couldn't find any other pen to write with.

title: Tint

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What causes the narrator to kill their boss?

answer: The narrator loses their job and feels the voice in their head telling them to kill people, they are clearly psychotic.

answer: The boss criticizes them for inadequate performance.

text: This response needs to get into the poor mental health of the narrator in order to capture the tone and objective of the story- it is important to note that the narrator is feeling out of control.

refinement: The boss criticizes them for inadequate performance. The narrator is not feeling mentally well, and they are growing increasingly paranoid as the story continues.

answer: The narrator kills their boss because the tint has not faded away like it should have. This means that something must have gone wrong with their routine, which caused the tint to remain. This leaves the narrator feeling psychotic and concerned about the tint getting darker. Ultimately, the force that caused the murder was the tint.

answer: The narrator killed their boss because they were tired of their imperfect routine and their perception of the world as being tinted. Because nothing had gone wrong in their routine other than the shower, the nearest cause of the tint seems to be the pen the narrator forgot to click in and back out three times before heading to work. The pen apparently caused the tint to worsen, and the narrator killed their boss in order to rid themselves of the tint they were experiencing.

answer: The narrator is mentally unsound and getting worse by the day. They are aware that there is a problem but seem incapable of fixing it. The boss has also seen the problem and fires the narrator, telling them that they are completely psychotic. The narrator reacts by stabbing the boss in the neck.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What did the narrator could be causing the tint?

answer: The narrator believes that the cause of the tint is that they failed to turn the shower handle to the left all the way. This resulted in the shower water being less scalding than normal. The boss fires the narrator for being "psychotic" when the narrator attacks them with the pen, the tint begins to fade away. Therefore, the cause of the tint is likely a mistake made while bathing.

answer: He has a test where he makes sure not to deviate from a very specific routine. This goes into a meltdown when he realizes he messed up the shower and forgets to make sure to click the water-handle after turning it. The narrator needs to enter a better routine and spacing things out better in order to ditolve the tint.

text: This is strangely worded. The question is very simple and asks for the responder to consider the cause and effect scenario. A routine does not "go into a meltdown".

refinement: The narrator forces themselves to stick to a specific routine. When they deviate from said routine, they go into a meltdown; they realize that they messed up the shower and forgets to make sure to click the water-handle after turning it. The narrator believes their deviation from routine is somehow responsible for the tint.

answer: The narrator is does everything routinely from how many steps he takes to what he wears and how he folds and unfolds the bath towel. He goes through his daily routines one by one to make sure that he hasn't messed up because he thinks that this may be at the root of the problem. In the end, he rules out any mistake on his part. The tint starts to fade after he kills his boss.

answer: The narrator believes the tint to be related to something he did wrong with showering in the mornings. He believes he forgot to turn the shower handle all the way before turning the water on, causing the water to be less scalding than normal. The darker tint that he's seen is most likely a negative result of this mistake. The pen that he was forced to use is further evidence pointing to this cause of the tint.

answer: It was the shower that caused the tint initially, then the behaviors afterward made the tint worse.

text: This needs to be more detailed-it's not a satisfactory or sufficient explanation because it doesn't touch on the narrator's mental illness.

refinement: The narrator believes the tint is the result of their having used the shower incorrectly-they are not mentally well and adhere to a stringent and nonsensical routine. They believe the tint means they must have deviated from their routine. The narrator is utterly fixated on the minutiae of their day.


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[Sebastián Ducete (attributed): _Christ on the Cross_, early 17th century, polychrome wood carving in the Museu Frederic Marès, Barcelona] [Sebastián Ducete: _Christ at the Column_, early 17th century in the church San Gil Abad, Burgos ] SEBASTIÁN DUCETE (or _' de Ucete_'; 1568–between 1619[1][2][3] and 1621[4]) was a Spanish sculptor. He was born to the sculptor Pedro Ducete Díez in Toro, Zamora[5][6] in whose workshop Sebastián collected first experiences.[7] From 1591 on he was trained by the sculptor Juan Sanz de Torrecilla from Palencia.[8] From 1595 to 1598 he worked in one workshop with his uncle Juan Ducete the Younger.[9]

1598 entered Ducete's workshop as an apprentice. From 1612 to Ducete's death he was his partner.[10] The workshop of these two is known as Toro workshop.[11] In 1611 Ducete was in Valladolid.[12]

It is difficult to differentiate between Ducete and Rueda since both were influenced by Juan de Juni and Gregorio Fernández though the influence of Juni on Ducete was stronger, his style is more expressive, dynamic and mannerist.[13] One of the workshop's main works is the main retable in the Iglesia de San Miguel Arcángel in Peñaranda de Bracamonte, Salamanca. Ducete and Rueda signed the contract for the work on 11 June 1618. It is disputed if Ducete still worked on the retable. Van Hess claims that Ducete died in 1619 before working began.[14] In 1971 a fire in the church destroyed the retable apart from two figures.[15] Ducete died in Toro.

Works

-   Crucifixion and a statue of the Virgin (1592), San Martín, Pinilla de Toro[16]
-   Retable (1602), [17]
-   Sculptures of the retable, church of the [18]
-   Retable with the fine relief of the Granting of the chasuble to Saint Ildefonsus (1607), San Pedro, Villalpando. It is influenced by Juni. Rueda worked on the garments which are influenced by Gregorio Fernández.[19]
-   Paso processional figure of Christ with articulated arms (1615; untraced), for a [20]
-   Relief _Virgin and Child with Saint Anne_ as part of a retable possibly for the Convento de los Carmelitas Descalzos in Medina del Campo, , Valladolid.[21] Ducete's style is influenced by Juni. It contrasts with the predella by Rueda who completed the retable.[22]
-   (Attributed) _Christ on the Cross_ (early 17th century), polychrome wood carving, Museu Frederic Marès, Barcelona, MFM 1120

Retablo peñaranda antiguo.jpg|Main retable in the Iglesia de San Miguel Arcángel, Peñaranda de Bracamonte Toro - Mº de Santa Sofia 1.jpg|Sculptures of the retable in the church of the Monasterio de Santa Sofía, Toro Valladolid - Santuario Nacional de la Gran Promesa 06.jpg|Relief _Virgin and Child with Saint Anne_, Santuario Nacional de la Gran Promesa, Valladolid

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title: Sebastián Ducete

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

When was Ducete born?

answer: Sebastián Ducete was born in 1568.

text: [Sebastián Ducete (attributed): _Christ on the Cross_, early 17th century, polychrome wood carving in the Museu Frederic Marès, Barcelona] [Sebastián Ducete: _Christ at the Column_, early 17th century in the church San Gil Abad, Burgos ] SEBASTIÁN DUCETE (or _' de Ucete_'; 1568–between 1619[1][2][3] and 1621[4]) was a Spanish sculptor.

answer: He was born between 1568 and 1619

text: He had to have been born prior to 1619 because he had work out by then.

refinement: He is thought to have been born in 1568.

text: In 1906 he became a friend of Victor Benjamin Neuburg, who introduced him to Aleister Crowley. In 1912 Preston joined Crowley's group Mysteria Mystica Maxima but left the group in 1914 following an argument with Crowley.

answer: 1568

text: [Sebastián Ducete (attributed): _Christ on the Cross_, early 17th century, polychrome wood carving in the Museu Frederic Marès, Barcelona] [Sebastián Ducete: _Christ at the Column_, early 17th century in the church San Gil Abad, Burgos ] SEBASTIÁN DUCETE (or _' de Ucete_'; 1568–between 1619[1][2][3] and 1621[4]) was a Spanish sculptor.

answer: That information can't be found in the article.

text: It says he was born in 1568.

answer: Sebastián Ducete was born in 1568.

text: [Sebastián Ducete (attributed): _Christ on the Cross_, early 17th century, polychrome wood carving in the Museu Frederic Marès, Barcelona] [Sebastián Ducete: _Christ at the Column_, early 17th century in the church San Gil Abad, Burgos ] SEBASTIÁN DUCETE (or _' de Ucete_'; 1568–between 1619[1][2][3] and 1621[4]) was a Spanish sculptor.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where was Ducete born?

answer: Toro, Zamora

text: He was born to the sculptor Pedro Ducete Díez in Toro, Zamora[5][6] in whose workshop Sebastián collected first experiences.[7]

answer: The answer to this question is missing.

text: It's actually right in the text.

answer: Sebastián Ducete was born in Toro, Zamora.

text: He was born to the sculptor Pedro Ducete Díez in Toro, Zamora[5][6] in whose workshop Sebastián collected first experiences.[7]

answer: Sebastián Ducete was born in Toro, Zamora, Spain.

text: He was born to the sculptor Pedro Ducete Díez in Toro, Zamora[5][6] in whose workshop Sebastián collected first experiences.[7]

answer: Ducete was born in Toro, Zamora

text: He was born to the sculptor Pedro Ducete Díez in Toro, Zamora[5][6] in whose workshop Sebastián collected first experiences.[7]

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who was Ducete's father?

answer: Sebastián Ducete's father was Pedro Ducete Díez.

text: He was born to the sculptor Pedro Ducete Díez in Toro, Zamora[5][6] in whose workshop Sebastián collected first experiences.[7]

answer: His father was "Pedro Ducete Díez".

text: You don't need quotation marks.

text: He was born to the sculptor Pedro Ducete Díez in Toro, Zamora[5][6] in whose workshop Sebastián collected first experiences.[7]

answer: Pedro Ducete Diez, a sculptor

text: He was born to the sculptor Pedro Ducete Díez in Toro, Zamora[5][6] in whose workshop Sebastián collected first experiences.[7]

answer: Sebastian's father was Pedro Ducete.

text: I added the last name.

refinement: Sebastian's father was Pedro Ducete Diez.

text: He was born to the sculptor Pedro Ducete Díez in Toro, Zamora[5][6] in whose workshop Sebastián collected first experiences.[7]

answer: Sebastián Ducete's father was Pedro Ducete Díez.

text: He was born to the sculptor Pedro Ducete Díez in Toro, Zamora[5][6] in whose workshop Sebastián collected first experiences.[7]

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where did Ducete die?

answer: Sebastián Ducete died in Toro.

text: Van Hess claims that Ducete died in 1619 before working began.[14] In 1971 a fire in the church destroyed the retable apart from two figures.[15] Ducete died in Toro.

answer: Sebastián Ducete died in Toro.

text: Van Hess claims that Ducete died in 1619 before working began.[14] In 1971 a fire in the church destroyed the retable apart from two figures.[15] Ducete died in Toro.

answer: Toro

text: Van Hess claims that Ducete died in 1619 before working began.[14] In 1971 a fire in the church destroyed the retable apart from two figures.[15] Ducete died in Toro.

answer: Some sources say Toro, Zamora, while other sources say Toro, Castile and León.

text: Van Hess claims that Ducete died in 1619 before working began.[14] In 1971 a fire in the church destroyed the retable apart from two figures.[15] Ducete died in Toro.

answer: Toro, Zamora

text: Van Hess claims that Ducete died in 1619 before working began.[14] In 1971 a fire in the church destroyed the retable apart from two figures.[15] Ducete died in Toro.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: Sebastian Ducete was a Spanish sculptor born in 1568 in Toro, Zamora to Pedro Ducete Diez, who was also a sculptor. Ducete died in Toro sometime between 1619 and 1621.

answer: This article details Sebastián Ducete's life and experiences. The main focus is on his eponymous work Retablos.

text: This needs to have something about what he did and when he lived and worked.

refinement: Sebastián Ducete was a Spanish sculptor born in 1568 who was possibly most famous for his eponymous work Retablos.

answer: The article is about Sebastián Ducete. It is about where he worked and when he died.

text: This needs to have something about what he did and when he lived and worked.

refinement: Sebastián Ducete was a Spanish sculptor born in 1568 who was possibly most famous for his eponymous work Retablos.

answer: Sebastián Ducete was a Spanish sculptor who was born in Toro and apprenticed in his uncle's workshop. From 1612 on, Ducete worked with Rueda and is known for a retable in the Iglesia de San Miguel Arcángel in Peñaranda de Bracamonte, Salamanca. Ducete's style is marked by influences from Juan de Juni. He died in Toro, but it is unclear when.

answer: Sebastián Ducete was a Spanish sculptor who was born in Toro, Zamora. He entered Pedro Ducete Díez's workshop in 1598 and was partnered with him by 1612. The Toro workshop is known for producing sculptures with expressions of dynamism and mannerism. Their most notable work is the main retable in the Iglesia de San Miguel Arcángel in Peñaranda de Bracamonte, Salamanca. Ducete died around 1619. His work is noted for its strong impact on the Gothic style.


text: I began this life thousands of years ago on a rock wall somewhere in Africa. I painted the idea of you before such drawings could make sounds in our heads. And every time I come back, I'm the same. This is not the first time you've read this. I've told you a thousand times over a thousand years. I am no more the first me that's ever been than you are the first you. And we certainly won't be the last.

title: The Repeat

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who or what is the narrator?

answer: There is not enough information to answer the question.

answer: The narrator is someone who has lived for thousands of years and has painted the idea of another person. They have told that person this a thousand times in a thousand years.

answer: A painting of someone who has lived a thousand years ago.

answer: It appears that the narrator is a supernatural entity who helps you at various points in your life.

answer: The narrator is an artist who has been reincarnated multiple times on different rocks somewhere in Africa each time painting the idea of the observer before audible drawings could be made.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is the narrator speaking to?

answer: The reader.

answer: The narrator is speaking to someone with the identity of "you".

answer: The narrator is speaking to their love interest.

text: I'm not sure the text is that specific and not everything pertains to a love interest.

answer: The narrator is speaking to someone they have known for a thousand years.

answer: Unclear.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is the purpose of this story?

answer: There is not enough information to answer the question.

answer: An artistic depiction of the idea of reincarnation.

answer: It may be fiction, not much beyond that is known.

answer: The purpose of this story is to communicate to the reader that anyone can be reborn countless times and that we are all essentially the same person regardless of when and where we have come into existence. The author is attempting to show that we must embrace and be comfortable with who we are, both as individuals and as part of the larger human experience.

answer: The purpose of this story is to emphasize the universality of the human experience. This story reiterates that even though we have lived multiple lives, we are all connected in some way. The author is telling the reader that we are all fundamentally the same, no matter the time period. This message brings people together and helps us to understand why we are all here on earth.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How old is the narrator?

answer: The narrator is thousands of years old.

text: I began this life thousands of years ago on a rock wall somewhere in Africa.

answer: The narrator is thousands of years old.

text: I began this life thousands of years ago on a rock wall somewhere in Africa.

answer: This information can't be found.

text: It says that they began life thousands of years ago.

refinement: The narrator says they began life on this earth thousands of years ago.

answer: There is not enough information to answer the question.

text: It says that they began life thousands of years ago.

refinement: The narrator says they began life on this earth thousands of years ago.

answer: The narrator is thousands of years old.

text: I began this life thousands of years ago on a rock wall somewhere in Africa.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: This story is a dialogue between some ancient entity and the reader.

answer: This person has been reincarnated many times since their first incarnation thousands of years ago on a rock wall in Africa. Every time, they've come back as the same person. They've repeated this message a thousand times, and they will continue to do so for a thousand more.

answer: This story is a letter from an immortal.

answer: I have been on earth for thousands of years. However, I had to tell them the same message again and again.

answer: The protagonist has lived in different lifetimes, always painting the idea of a certain person before such drawings could make sound in their heads. They've told this person a thousand times over a thousand years and they know that they will keep living this same life over and over again.


text:
A little precursor, I haven't written anything for a while and have been out of school for the same amount of time, so any spelling mistakes or grammar corrections are very appreciated. If you enjoy it or have any criticisms/improvements, any comment would be equally appreciated as well.

Father, forgive me for I have sinned and I am not done yet. The end of this ordeal is near and my body is grateful. As I walk through the cell block to the visitor’s room, the smell of fear is pungent. What was once a rendezvous of the lord’s most foul monsters and fallen creations is now a convention of hushed tones and fear-induced prayers of penance. I cannot answer them tonight. God has given me another task, a greater task. I continue my trek down the corridor and my mind begins racing like the fastest of God’s angels. Why would they make me walk this way, through a whole cell block? Is it to show me how fearful they are of me?  Why are all of the prisoners so afraid of me that they would demand on God to call me off? Then I realize. They do not pray for me to spare them. They pray for me to save them. They need me to save them from the real monster. A monster I could have stopped a long time ago. A monster that I once called friend. The silence breaks as I am dragged into a memory, drawn from words I had not heard since my youth. “Ora pro nobis peccatoribus, nunc, et in hora mortis nostrae.”
	I am Michael Shepard. I was raised by nuns and taught by priests. I had no father to speak of. The only thing I remember of my mother is what the priests told me. She was a young, beautiful woman from an influential family. The kind of family that usually sweeps teenage pregnancy under the rug. One trip to the clinic and my mother’s worries were over. However, she was kind. She had seen the light of god and given birth. She was left with an ultimatum. Keep me as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon me and return to her life of comfort. There are many good people in the world, but very few saints.
	Sister McCready was my main caretaker. She had a heart full of love, but her marriage to the lord had prevented her from having children of her own. She called me her blessed child. She was the mother I knew. The mother I loved. The priests were learned men from every corner of God’s green Earth. Father O’Brien was from New York. He told me a story of how in his youth, he was lost. The allure of greed and loose women had made him one of Satan’s children. He would get into gang fights and do drugs of all varieties. He stole from the poor and beat the down trodden. Then, in one of his gangland wars, he committed the ultimate sin. He murdered an innocent man. This man was walking home from work to see his loving wife and children. He did not know of the gangs and did not care. Father O’Brien was firing a gun at another gang. His aim was poor and the moving vehicle he fired from was going too fast. His guilt haunted him for many years. He taught me many lessons from this story. Namely, all men can find peace through God.
	The other fathers and sisters raised me along with other children. The father in charge of the monastery was Bishop Stephenson.  He taught me the most important lesson in my life. Not all men of God truly serve him. Bishop Stephenson made it a habit to see the boys in his chamber once a week. For one hour, he and a random boy would talk about god and his plan for all men. This is the story I was told and for a while I believed it. Sister McCready had always gotten in the way of my meetings with the bishop. She would always have me do some monotonous chore or discipline me for something I didn’t do. I hated her at the time, but now I know she saved me.
	Sister McCready died when I was 16. I was heartbroken. The only mother I knew was dead Father O’Brien had moved some years ago and I was not as close with the other fathers or sisters. There was Bishop Stephenson though. In my naivety, I thought he would help me. I met him in his office one day and that is when my mission from God Started. Right away my instincts told me something was wrong.  The bishop had a smile that I’d later see on other evil men. The smile was the last thing I remember before I heard the voice of God. Then next thing I remember is the bishop on the floor, bleeding from the neck. There was a sterling silver letter opener in my hand. It was a gift from his holiness the Pope. It was now a tool of the Lord’s vengeance, as am I.  I am a soldier in God’s Army. He is absolute and his will is my command. I am The Archangel.

title: Millennium Part 1: For Evil to Triumph

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did Michael grow up without a mother and father?

answer: Michael grew up without a mother and father because of his mother's premature pregnancy. She was given an ultimatum to keep him or give him up. Her decision led to him being raised in a monastery by nuns and priests. When he was 16, he killed the local bishop in vengeance for the bishop's crimes against others. This led to a revelation by god and now Michael is on a mission to stop the greatest evil in the world.

text: It is not clear that the ultimatum was to keep him as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon him and return to her life of comfort.

refinement: Michael grew up without a mother and father because of his mother's premature pregnancy. She was left with an ultimatum. Keep him as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon him and return to her life of comfort. Her decision led to him being raised in a monastery by nuns and priests. When he was 16, he killed the local bishop in vengeance for the bishop's crimes against others. This led to a revelation by god and now Michael is on a mission to stop the greatest evil in the world.

text: It is omitted that the Bishop was sexually abusing boys.

refinement: Michael grew up without a mother and father because of his mother's premature pregnancy. She was left with an ultimatum. Keep him as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon him and return to her life of comfort. Her decision led to him being raised in a monastery by nuns and priests. When he was 16, he killed the local bishop in vengeance for the bishop's molesting. This led to a revelation by god and now Michael is on a mission to stop the greatest evil in the world.

text: It is not stated that  Michael is on a mission to stop 'the greatest' evil in the world.

refinement: Michael grew up without a mother and father because of his mother's premature pregnancy. She was left with an ultimatum. Keep him as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon him and return to her life of comfort. Her decision led to him being raised in a monastery by nuns and priests. When he was 16, he killed the local bishop in vengeance for the bishop's molesting. This led to a revelation by god and now Michael is on a mission to fight evil in the world.

text: 'god' should be 'God'.

refinement: Michael grew up without a mother and father because of his mother's premature pregnancy. She was left with an ultimatum. Keep him as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon him and return to her life of comfort. Her decision led to him being raised in a monastery by nuns and priests. When he was 16, he killed the local bishop in vengeance for the bishop's molesting. This led to a revelation by God and now Michael is on a mission to fight evil in the world.

text: 'the trip to the clinic and my mother’s worries were over. However, she was kind. She had seen the light of god and given birth. She was left with an ultimatum. Keep me as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon me and return to her life of comfort.' is evidence that Michael grew up without a mother and father because of his mother's premature pregnancy; she was given an ultimatum to keep him or give him up.

text: 'I was raised by nuns and taught by priests.' is evidence that he was raised in a monastery by nuns and priests.

text: 'They pray for me to save them. They need me to save them from the real monster. A monster I could have stopped a long time ago. A monster that I once called friend.' is evidence that Michael is on a mission to stop the greatest evil in the world.

text: 'Right away my instincts told me something was wrong. The bishop had a smile that I’d later see on other evil men. The smile was the last thing I remember before I heard the voice of God. Then next thing I remember is the bishop on the floor, bleeding from the neck. There was a sterling silver letter opener in my hand. It was a gift from his holiness the Pope. It was now a tool of the Lord’s vengeance, as am I' is evidence that he killed the local bishop in vengeance for the bishop's crimes against others.

answer: Michael grew up without a mother and father because his mother got pregnant and was given an ultimatum from her family to keep the child or abandon them. The other father figures in Michael's life were unable to provide the nurturing care and attention that a young child needs, so he grew up without a maternal or paternal figure. This childhood experience eventually led to him becoming The Archangel, seeking vengeance on those who deceive and abuse their power for personal gain.

text: He says he is an archangel but what he means is that he is following God's will.

refinement: Michael grew up without a mother and father because his mother got pregnant and was given an ultimatum from her family to keep the child or abandon them. The other father figures in Michael's life were unable to provide the nurturing care and attention that a young child needs, so he grew up without a maternal or paternal figure. This childhood experience eventually led to him following God's will, seeking vengeance on those who deceive and abuse their power for personal gain.

text: It is omitted that it was teenage pregnancy.

refinement: Michael grew up without a mother and father because his mother got pregnant when she was a teenager and was given an ultimatum from her family to keep him as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon him and return to her life of comfort. The other father figures in Michael's life were unable to provide the nurturing care and attention that a young child needs, so he grew up without a maternal or paternal figure. This childhood experience eventually led to him following God's will, seeking vengeance on those who deceive and abuse their power for personal gain.

text: He says he is an archangel but what he means is that he is following God's will.

refinement: Michael grew up without a mother and father because his mother got pregnant when she was a teenager and was given an ultimatum from her family to keep the child or abandon them. The other father figures in Michael's life were unable to provide the nurturing care and attention that a young child needs, so he grew up without a maternal or paternal figure. This childhood experience eventually led to him following God's will, seeking vengeance on those who deceive and abuse their power for personal gain.

text: 'the trip to the clinic and my mother’s worries were over. However, she was kind. She had seen the light of god and given birth. She was left with an ultimatum. Keep me as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon me and return to her life of comfort.' is evidence that Michael grew up without a mother and father because his mother got pregnant and was given an ultimatum.

text: 'I was raised by nuns and taught by priests. I had no father to speak of. The only thing I remember of my mother is what the priests told me.' is evidence that the other father figures in Michael's life were unable to provide the nurturing care and attention that a young child needs, so he grew up without a maternal or paternal figure.

text: 'It was now a tool of the Lord’s vengeance, as am I. I am a soldier in God’s Army. He is absolute and his will is my command.' is evidence that he is seeking vengeance on those who deceive and abuse their power for personal gain.

answer: His mother died a sometime ago.

text: It is not stated she died.

refinement: She got pregnant when she was a teenager and was left with an ultimatum. Keep him as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon him and return to her life of comfort.

answer: His mother was a teenager but wanted to raise him. She was given an ultimatum by her parents: give up the baby or have her affair and wealth revealed to the world

text: It is not stated that she wanted to raise him.

refinement: His mother was a teenager. She was given an ultimatum by her parents: give up the baby or have her affair and wealth revealed to the world

text: It is not stated that one of the options was to have her affair and wealth revealed to the world.

refinement: His mother was a teenager. She was left with an ultimatum. Keep me as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon me and return to her life of comfort.

text: 'The kind of family that usually sweeps teenage pregnancy under the rug.' is evidence that she was a teenager when she got pregnant.

answer: His mother's was a teenage pregnancy and she had to choose between the baby and her family, she chose the latter. He was abandoned and raised by clergy.

text: 'His mother was a teenager when she got pregnant' instead of 'His mother's was a teenage pregnancy'

refinement: His mother's was a teenage pregnancy and she had to choose between the baby and her family, she chose the latter. He was abandoned and raised by clergy.

text: 'She was left with an ultimatum. Keep me as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon me and return to her life of comfort. There are many good people in the world, but very few saints.' is evidence that she had to choose between the baby and her family, she chose the latter.

text: 'She was a young, beautiful woman from an influential family. The kind of family that usually sweeps teenage pregnancy under the rug.' is evidence that she was a teenager when she got pregnant.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did Sister McCready always keep Michael from visiting with the Bishop?

answer: The bishop was actually molesting the children.

text: 'Иn my naivety, I thought he would help me. I met him in his office one day and that is when my mission from God Started. Right away my instincts told me something was wrong. The bishop had a smile that I’d later see on other evil men. The smile was the last thing I remember before I heard the voice of God.' supports the answer.

answer: Sister McCready realized that Bishop Stephenson was corrupt and wanted to protect Michael from him. She did this by getting in the way of his meetings with the bishop.

text: It is not stated that Sister McCready realized that Bishop Stephenson was corrupt.

refinement: Sister McCready realized that Bishop Stephenson wanted to protect Michael from him. She did this by getting in the way of his meetings with the bishop.

answer: She always did something to get him chores or discipline him for something he hadn't done.

text: Irrelevant.

answer: Because she recognized that the Bishop was an evil man. Sister McCready's primary concern was to protect Michael from evil and so she interfered whenever he was scheduled to visit him. The bishop was eventually killed by Michael and so this proves that she was correct in intervening.

text: It is not stated that 'this proves that she was correct in intervening.'

refinement: Because she recognized that the Bishop was an evil man. Sister McCready's primary concern was to protect Michael from evil and so she interfered whenever he was scheduled to visit him. The bishop was eventually killed by Michael.

answer: She saved him from being molested.

text: 'in my naivety, I thought he would help me. I met him in his office one day and that is when my mission from God Started. Right away my instincts told me something was wrong. The bishop had a smile that I’d later see on other evil men. The smile was the last thing I remember before I heard the voice of God.' supports the answer.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Is Michael Shepard actually an arcangel?

answer: No, the protagonist in the passage is not an arcangel. The protagonist simply had help from God in killing the bishop.

text: ' Right away my instincts told me something was wrong. The bishop had a smile that I’d later see on other evil men. The smile was the last thing I remember before I heard the voice of God. Then next thing I remember is the bishop on the floor, bleeding from the neck. There was a sterling silver letter opener in my hand. It was a gift from his holiness the Pope. It was now a tool of the Lord’s vengeance, as am I. I am a soldier in God’s Army. He is absolute and his will is my command. I am The Archangel.' supports the answer.

answer: Yes.

text: He says he is but what he means is that he's doing God's work.

refinement: He says he is but what he means is that he's a tool of the Lord’s vengeance.

text: 'I am The Archangel.' is evidence that he says he is.

answer: No, he does not seem to be an arcangel, even by his own words. He is vengeance-driven and not following god's will.

text: He says he is an archangel.

refinement: No, he does not seem to be an archangel, although he says he is. He is vengeance-driven and not following god's will.

text: He does not say he is vengeance-driven but that he is a tool of the Lord’s vengeance.

refinement: No, he does not seem to be an archangel, although he says he is. He is a tool of the Lord’s vengeance and not following god's will.

text: It is incorrect that he is not following God's will.

refinement: No, he does not seem to be an archangel, although he says he is. He is a tool of the Lord’s vengeance and following god's will.

answer: He thinks that he is, but in actuality he is not.

text: He says he is an archangel but it does not seem he really is.

refinement: He says that he is, but in actuality he is not.

text: It is omitted that he is following God's will.

refinement: He says that he is, but in actuality he is not. He is following God's will.

text: A comma is missing.

refinement: He says that he is, but in actuality, he is not. He is following God's will.

text: 'I am The Archangel.' implies that he might think he is.

answer: No, but he believes he's doing God's work

text: 'here was a sterling silver letter opener in my hand. It was a gift from his holiness the Pope. It was now a tool of the Lord’s vengeance, as am I. I am a soldier in God’s Army. He is absolute and his will is my command. I am The Archangel.' supports the answer.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did Michael kill Bishop Stephenson?

answer: Michael killed Bishop Stephenson because he believed he was not truly serving God and instead was evil. Michael grew suspicious of the bishop when he met him in his office. Michael witnessed the bishop smiling and suspected his intentions were nefarious. When Bishop Stephenson attacked him and Michael fought back, he realized the bishop was truly evil and needed to be stopped.

text: It is omitted that the Bishop was going to molest him.

refinement: Michael killed Bishop Stephenson because he believed he was not truly serving God and instead was evil. Michael grew suspicious of the bishop when he met him in his office. Michael witnessed the bishop smiling and suspected his intentions were nefarious. The Bishop was going to molest him. When Bishop Stephenson attacked him and Michael fought back, he realized the bishop was truly evil and needed to be stopped.

text: ' In my naivety, I thought he would help me. I met him in his office one day and that is when my mission from God Started. Right away my instincts told me something was wrong. The bishop had a smile that I’d later see on other evil men.' is evidence that Michael believed he was not truly serving God and instead was evil; Michael grew suspicious of the bishop when he met him in his office; Michael witnessed the bishop smiling and suspected his intentions were nefarious.

answer: Bishop Stephenson sexually abused him.

text: The Bishop tried to abuse Michael.

refinement: Bishop Stephenson tried to sexually abuse him.

answer: Michael killed Bishop Stephenson because he realized that the bishop was corrupt and not really serving God.

text: It is omitted that the Bishop tried to sexually abuse him.

refinement: Michael killed Bishop Stephenson because he realized that the bishop was going to sexually abuse him.

answer: He was going to molest him.

text: 'In my naivety, I thought he would help me. I met him in his office one day and that is when my mission from God Started. Right away my instincts told me something was wrong. The bishop had a smile that I’d later see on other evil men. ' supports the answer.

answer: Michael didn't just kill the Bishop for goodness sake. A vision of god told him to kill the Bishop.

text: It is omitted that the Bishop was going to molest him.

refinement: He killed him because the Bishop was going to molest him.

text: It is omitted that he was a tool of the Lord’s vengeance on the Bishop for molesting boys.

refinement: He killed him because the Bishop was going to molest him. Michael was a tool of the Lord’s vengeance on the Bishop for molesting boys.

question: Write a ~8 sentence summary.

answer: The Archangel Michael Shepard has killed his childhood bishop and abandons his mission to serve God. Instead, he is hunting down the evil in the world and preparing himself for a greater threat. He realizes he could have stopped this threat sooner, and he worries the rest of the world might not be able to stop it on their own.

text: Michael says that he is an archangel but what he means is that he is following God's will.

refinement: Michael Shepard, who calls himself The Archangel, has killed his childhood bishop and abandons his mission to serve God. Instead, he is hunting down the evil in the world and preparing himself for a greater threat. He realizes he could have stopped this threat sooner, and he worries the rest of the world might not be able to stop it on their own.

text: It is incorrect that he abandons his mission to serve God.

refinement: Michael Shepard, who calls himself The Archangel, has killed his childhood bishop. He is hunting down the evil in the world and preparing himself for a greater threat. He realizes he could have stopped this threat sooner, and he worries the rest of the world might not be able to stop it on their own.

text: 'the rest of the world might not be able to stop it on their own.' is not stated.

refinement: Michael Shepard, who calls himself The Archangel, has killed his childhood bishop. He is hunting down the evil in the world and preparing himself for a greater threat. He realizes he could have stopped this threat sooner, and he worries the rest of the world might not be able to stop it on their own.

text: 'The smile was the last thing I remember before I heard the voice of God. Then next thing I remember is the bishop on the floor, bleeding from the neck. There was a sterling silver letter opener in my hand.' is evidence that he killed the Bishop.

text: 'God has given me another task, a greater task.' is evidence that he is hunting down the evil in the world and preparing himself for a greater threat.

text: '. They need me to save them from the real monster. A monster I could have stopped a long time ago.' is evidence that he realizes he could have stopped this threat sooner.

answer: While walking down the corridor in the prison cell block, Michael is thinking that nobody prays for him to spare them. Instead, they pray to save them from the monster. Before he left the monastery, he heard people around him say "Ora pro nobis peccatoribus, nunc, et in hora mortis nostrae" and he can feel the memory of one of the fathers. Michael had never seen his mother. He was taught how to pray by several fathers and sisters. Michael had to walk through a cell block to reach visitor’s room for Bishop Stephenson. Soon after that, he killed him.

text: 'Michael had to walk through a cell block to reach visitor’s room for Bishop Stephenson. Soon after that, he killed him.' is not correct. He killed the Bishop before he got to the cell.

refinement: While walking down the corridor in the prison cell block, Michael is thinking that nobody prays for him to spare them. Instead, they pray to save them from the monster. Before he left the monastery, he heard people around him say "Ora pro nobis peccatoribus, nunc, et in hora mortis nostrae" and he can feel the memory of one of the fathers. Michael had never seen his mother. He was taught how to pray by several fathers and sisters. Michael is thinking about the Bishop he killed.

text: It is omitted that Michael killed the Bishop because he tried to sexually abuse him.

refinement: While walking down the corridor in the prison cell block, Michael is thinking that nobody prays for him to spare them. Instead, they pray to save them from the monster. Before he left the monastery, he heard people around him say "Ora pro nobis peccatoribus, nunc, et in hora mortis nostrae" and he can feel the memory of one of the fathers. Michael had never seen his mother. He was taught how to pray by several fathers and sisters. Michael is thinking about the Bishop he killed because he tried to sexually abuse him.

answer:
Michael Shepard wakes in a prison cell who is only interested in his God and the church. As he wakes, he remembers his life.

His mother had had an affair with a priest and gave birth to him. After giving birth, she was driven to a secluded convent and died. Michael was raised by nuns from there on.

When he was 16, he met a priest called Bishop Stephenson at the monastery. The bishop molested him and then asked him to take an oath on the bible. Michael obeyed, and murdered the priest.

text: It is incorrect that his mother had had an affair with a priest.

refinement: Michael Shepard wakes in a prison cell who is only interested in his God and the church. As he wakes, he remembers his life. After giving birth, his mother was driven to a secluded convent and died. Michael was raised by nuns from there on. When he was 16, he met a priest called Bishop Stephenson at the monastery. The bishop molested him and then asked him to take an oath on the bible. Michael obeyed, and murdered the priest.

text: It is not stated that his mother was driven to a secluded convent and died.

refinement: Michael Shepard wakes in a prison cell. He is only interested in his God and the church. As he wakes, he remembers his life. Michael was raised by nuns. When he was 16, he met a priest called Bishop Stephenson at the monastery. The bishop molested him and then asked him to take an oath on the bible. Michael obeyed, and murdered the priest.

text: The Bishop tried to molest him.

refinement: Michael Shepard wakes in a prison cell who is only interested in his God and the church. As he wakes, he remembers his life. Michael was raised by nuns. When he was 16, he met a priest called Bishop Stephenson at the monastery. The bishop tried to molest him and then asked him to take an oath on the bible. Michael obeyed, and murdered the priest.

text: It is incorrect that the bishop asked him to take an oath on the bible, and Michael obeyed.

refinement: Michael Shepard wakes in a prison cell who is only interested in his God and the church. As he wakes, he remembers his life. Michael was raised by nuns. When he was 16, he met a priest called Bishop Stephenson at the monastery. The bishop tried to molest him Michael murdered the priest.

text: It is not stated that Michael was sleeping.

refinement: Michael Shepard is in a prison. He is only interested in his God and the church. He remembers his life. Michael was raised by nuns. When he was 16, he met a priest called Bishop Stephenson at the monastery. The bishop tried to molest him, and Michael murdered him.

answer: The Archangel Michael Shepard is addressing a cell block of prisoners who are too afraid of him. They fear him because he could have stopped a powerful monster years ago. Despite his holy upbringing, Shepard killed a bishop when he realized the bishop was evil and hiding dangerous secrets. Now, Shepard is tasked with saving the world and its people from the same monster his former friend is trying to unleash.

text: Michael says that he is an archangel but what he means is that he is following God's will.

refinement: Michael Shepard, who calls himself The Archangel, is addressing a cell block of prisoners who are too afraid of him. They fear him because he could have stopped a powerful monster years ago. Despite his holy upbringing, Shepard killed a bishop when he realized the bishop was evil and hiding dangerous secrets. Now, Shepard is tasked with saving the world and its people from the same monster his former friend is trying to unleash.

text: It is not stated that they are fearful of him.

refinement: Michael Shepard, who calls himself The Archangel, is addressing a cell block of prisoners who seem to be afraid of him. They fear him because he could have stopped a powerful monster years ago. Despite his holy upbringing, Shepard killed a bishop when he realized the bishop was evil and hiding dangerous secrets. Now, Shepard is tasked with saving the world and its people from the same monster his former friend is trying to unleash.

text: It is not stated that he is addressing the prisoners.

refinement: Michael Shepard, who calls himself The Archangel, is thinking about the prisoners who seem to be afraid of him. They fear him because he could have stopped a powerful monster years ago. Despite his holy upbringing, Shepard killed a bishop when he realized the bishop was evil and hiding dangerous secrets. Now, Shepard is tasked with saving the world and its people from the same monster his former friend is trying to unleash.

text: It is not stated that they fear him because he could have stopped a powerful monster years ago.

refinement: Michael Shepard, who calls himself The Archangel, is thinking about the prisoners who seem to be afraid of him. He could have stopped a powerful monster years ago. Despite his holy upbringing, Shepard killed a bishop when he realized the bishop was evil and hiding dangerous secrets. Now, Shepard is tasked with saving the world and its people from the same monster his former friend is trying to unleash.

text: It is not stated that the Bishop is hiding dangerous secrets.

refinement: Michael Shepard, who calls himself The Archangel, is thinking about the prisoners who seem to be afraid of him. He could have stopped a powerful monster years ago. Despite his holy upbringing, Shepard killed a bishop when he realized the bishop was evil. Now, Shepard is tasked with saving the world and its people from the same monster his former friend is trying to unleash.

text: It is omitted that the Bishop was going to molest him.

refinement: Michael Shepard, who calls himself The Archangel, is thinking about the prisoners who seem to be afraid of him. He could have stopped a powerful monster years ago. Despite his holy upbringing, Shepard killed a bishop when he realized the bishop was evil and was going to molest him. Now, Shepard is tasked with saving the world and its people from the same monster his former friend is trying to unleash.

text: It is not stated that his former friend is trying to unleash the monster.

refinement: Michael Shepard, who calls himself The Archangel, is thinking about the prisoners who seem to be afraid of him. He could have stopped a powerful monster years ago. Despite his holy upbringing, Shepard killed a bishop when he realized the bishop was evil and was going to molest him. Now, Shepard is tasked with saving the world and its people from the real monster.

answer: Michael Shepard is in prison and the other prisoners seek his protection. He recollects how he got here. His mother had a teenage  pregnancy and chose to not abort him. She gave him up to a monastery, however, because keeping him would mean losing her judgmental family. He was raised by clergy. His adoptive mother, a nun, died when he was sixteen. He sought help from the Bishop that ran the monastery, but found him to be a pedophile. In self defense, he killed the Bishop.

text: The nun was not his adoptive mother.

refinement: Michael Shepard is in prison and the other prisoners seek his protection. He recollects how he got here. His mother had a teenage  pregnancy and chose to not abort him. She gave him up to a monastery, however, because keeping him would mean losing her judgmental family. He was raised by clergy. His main caretaker, a nun, died when he was sixteen. He sought help from the Bishop that ran the monastery, but found him to be a pedophile. In self defense, he killed the Bishop.

text: Typos.

refinement: Michael Shepard is in prison and the other prisoners seek his protection. He recollects how he got here. His mother had a teenage pregnancy and chose to not abort him. She gave him up to a monastery, however, because keeping him would mean losing her judgmental family. He was raised by the clergy. His main caretaker, a nun, died when he was sixteen. He sought help from the Bishop that ran the monastery but found him to be a pedophile. In self-defense, he killed the Bishop.

text: 'he was a young, beautiful woman from an influential family. The kind of family that usually sweeps teenage pregnancy under the rug. One trip to the clinic and my mother’s worries were over. However, she was kind. She had seen the light of god and given birth. She was left with an ultimatum. Keep me as her own and lose her family’s love or abandon me and return to her life of comfort. There are many good people in the world, but very few saints.' is evidence that his mother had a teenage pregnancy and chose to not abort him. She gave him up to a monastery, however, because keeping him would mean losing her judgmental family. He was raised by clergy.

text: 'In my naivety, I thought he would help me. I met him in his office one day and that is when my mission from God Started. Right away my instincts told me something was wrong. The bishop had a smile that I’d later see on other evil men. The smile was the last thing I remember before I heard the voice of God. The next thing I remember is the bishop on the floor, bleeding from the neck. There was a sterling silver letter opener in my hand.' is evidence that Michael sought help from the Bishop that ran the monastery, but found him to be a pedophile. In self defense, he killed the Bishop.