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HARRY GERIS (November 22, 1947 – April 24, 2008) was a Canadian Olympic wrestler who represented Canada in the 1968, 1972, and 1976 Olympics, 1966 British Empire and Commonwealth Games and 1975 Pan American Games.

Geris was born in Deurne in the Netherlands, and emigrated to Canada as a child. Geris grew up in London, Ontario along with his eight siblings, Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, Hank, and Billy.

Geris attended Sir Adam Beck Secondary School where he tried out for numerous sporting teams including basketball and football. Harry was a member of Sir Adam Beck's wrestling team, where he earned two O.F.S.S.A. gold medals 1 under the tutelage of wrestling coach Fred Flectcher. While at Sir Adam Beck Geris won his first of ten Canadian National Champions, which led him to representing Canada at three Olympic Games, 1968, 1972, and 1976.

His performance in High School athletics got the attention of the Head Coach of Joliet Junior College wrestling program in Illinois, Henry Pillard. Coach Pillard recruited Geris to the Wolves wrestling squad and as a result Harry won the N.J.C.A.A Wrestling Championship in 1968. His performance at the 1968 N.J.C.A.A. Championships earned Harry a scholarship to wrestle at perennial powerhouse Oklahoma State University where placed 2nd at the Big 8 Tournament and 4th at the 1972 N.C.A.A. National Tournament, earning him All-American honors.

Harry's love for the sport of wrestling was passed on to his three sons, Jason, Shawn, and Ryan. They all attended Sir Wilfrid Laurier Secondary School where they were members of the Laurier wrestling team. All three boys excelled in the sport and earned an impressive collection of accolades in their father's sport. Jason like his father attended Oklahoma State and eventually earned a wrestling scholarship to California's Fresno State University. Shawn attended Eastern Michigan University. Both Jason and Shawn are Canadian National Champions in the sport of wrestling.

Harry Geris started a London wrestling club in the 80's called AWOLS (Amateur Wrestling of London South). He travelled the team around North America developing some of the best wrestlers in the country, and lead kids to obtain scholarships with wrestling. His team was large but he managed to be a part of every one of his wrestler's lives. He helped pay for the team by running bingo's and selling wrestling gear, and donated everything to help the team go to tournaments, and camps. The AWOL team was a multiple attendant of Lock Haven Wrestling Camp, one of the best camps in the US. Harry Geris had no troubles driving thousands of miles to go to a single tournament for his wrestlers. Geris was inducted into the U.S. National Junior College Wrestling Hall of Fame in 1980 and the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame in May 1984.

Geris remained involved in amateur wrestling until his death.[1]

Geris was found dead by a construction worker at 7.30am on April 24, 2008, behind Saunders Secondary School in London, Ontario where he was delivering wrestling mats for an upcoming tournament. Police did not suspect foul play, but said an autopsy would be conducted to determine the cause of death. Geris was aged 60.

The Harry Geris Memorial Grappling Games were named in his honor, beginning in January 2009. The Harry Geris Memorial Grappling Games were the first in Canada to combine freestyle and Greco-Roman wrestling, Brazilian jiu-jitsu and FILA rules no-gi grappling.

The weblog, harrygerisstory.blogspot.com, is dedicated to the life of Harry Geris, and features personal stories, articles and photos that are to appear in a future biographical book entitled, “The Harry Geris Story” being authored by his son, Shawn.

LIST OF AWARDS AND ACHIEVEMENTS

1966 - Canadian Freestyle Champion, Commonwealth Games (Jamaica) – 4th place, World Championships (Toledo, Ohio)

1967 - Canadian Freestyle Championships – Silver medalist(213.5 lbs)

1968 - N.J.C.A.A. Champion for Joliet Junior College (Illinois) Canadian Freestyle Champion

1969 - N.J.C.A.A. Runner-up for Joliet Junior College (Illinois)

1971 - United States Wrestling Federation – Silver medalist

1972 - N.C.A.A. Championships – 4th place(All-American Status) wrestled for Oklahoma State, National AAU/USA – Silver medalist, Canadian Olympic Team (Munich, Germany) 230 lbs – 9th place

1973 - Canadian Freestyle & Greco Roman Champion, FISU Games (Moscow, Russia) – 4th place, World Championships (Iran) World Cup - Bronze medalist (Toledo, Ohio)

1974 - Eastern United States AAU Champion, Canadian Freestyle & Greco Roman Champion

1975 - Canadian Freestyle & Greco Roman Champion, Pan American Games (Mexico) – 4th place Freestyle & Bronze medalist Greco Roman

1976 - Canadian Championships Freestyle Silver medalist & Greco Roman Champion, Member of the Canadian Olympic Team

1980 - Inducted into the United States Junior College Wrestling Hall of Fame

1984 - Inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame

OKLAHOMA STATE UNIVERSITY - SEASON RECORD FOR HARRY GERIS - 1972 Bouts:26 Wins:19 Loses:5 Ties:2 Falls:11 Win Pct:76.0%

OKLAHOMA STATE UNIVERSITY - DUAL MEET RECORD FOR HARRY GERIS - 1972 Bouts:14 Wins:10 Loses:2 Ties:2 Win Pct:78.6%

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[1] 3-time Canadian Olympic wrestler dies at 60, Canadian Broadcasting Corporation, April 25, 2008.

[2] Belanger, Joe: Body found behind school, _London Free Press_, April 25, 2008.

title: Harry Geris

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize everything relating to Geris's family.

answer: Geris grew up in London, Ontario along with his eight siblings, Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, and Hank. Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred and Angel are not mentioned beyond early childhood. Geris's son Jason and daughters-in-law Laura and Becky were members of the Laurier wrestling team and were national champions in wrestling. Geris also helped his three sons wrestle.

text: Doesn't mention his son Shawn writing a biographical book about him.

refinement: Geris grew up in London, Ontario along with his eight siblings, Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, and Hank. Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred and Angel are not mentioned beyond early childhood. Geris's son Jason and daughters-in-law Laura and Becky were members of the Laurier wrestling team and were national champions in wrestling. Geris also helped his three sons wrestle. His son Shawn is authoring a biographical book about him

answer: He emigrated to Canada as a child. His brother was on a wrestling team, too. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys (Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. Jason and Shawn both went to Oklahoma State and became Canadian champions while they attended. The three of them all help run the AWOL Wrestling Club, which used to be a small-time operation but went on to have its own bingo hall and held tournaments on a regular basis.

text: Sons Jason and Shawn did not both go to Oklahoma State University.

refinement: He emigrated to Canada as a child. His brother was on a wrestling team, too. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys (Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. Jason and Shawn went to Oklahoma State and Eastern Michigan Universities and became Canadian National champions in the sport of wrestling while they attended. The three of them all help run the AWOL Wrestling Club, which used to be a small-time operation but went on to have its own bingo hall and held tournaments on a regular basis.

text: Story doesn't mention his brother also being a wrestler.

refinement: He emigrated to Canada as a child. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys (Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. Jason and Shawn went to Oklahoma State and Eastern Michigan Universities and became Canadian National champions in the sport of wrestling while they attended. The three of them all help run the AWOL Wrestling Club, which used to be a small-time operation but went on to have its own bingo hall and held tournaments on a regular basis.

text: Doesn't mention his eight siblings.

refinement: Harry Geris grew up in London, Ontario with his eight siblings Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, Hank, and Billy. He emigrated to Canada as a child. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys (Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. Jason and Shawn went to Oklahoma State and Eastern Michigan Universities and became Canadian National champions in the sport of wrestling while they attended. The three of them all help run the AWOL Wrestling Club, which used to be a small-time operation but went on to have its own bingo hall and held tournaments on a regular basis.

text: Geris' sons learned from their wrestling program, not just their father.

refinement: Harry Geris grew up in London, Ontario with his eight siblings Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, Hank, and Billy. He emigrated to Canada as a child. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys (Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. All three attended Sir Wilfried Laurier Secondary School where they were members of the Laurier wrestling team. All three excelled in the sport and earned an impressive collection of accolades in their father's sport. Jason and Shawn went to Oklahoma State and Eastern Michigan Universities and became Canadian National champions in the sport of wrestling while they attended. The three of them all help run the AWOL Wrestling Club, which used to be a small-time operation but went on to have its own bingo hall and held tournaments on a regular basis.

text: Excerpt doesn't say they ran the Wrestling Club together.

refinement: Harry Geris grew up in London, Ontario with his eight siblings Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, Hank, and Billy. He emigrated to Canada as a child. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys (Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. All three attended Sir Wilfried Laurier Secondary School where they were members of the Laurier wrestling team. All three excelled in the sport and earned an impressive collection of accolades in their father's sport. Jason and Shawn went to Oklahoma State and Eastern Michigan Universities and became Canadian National champions in the sport of wrestling while they attended.

text: Doesn't mention his son Shawn writing a book about him.

refinement: Harry Geris grew up in London, Ontario with his eight siblings Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, Hank, and Billy. He emigrated to Canada as a child. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys (Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. All three attended Sir Wilfried Laurier Secondary School where they were members of the Laurier wrestling team. All three excelled in the sport and earned an impressive collection of accolades in their father's sport. Jason and Shawn went to Oklahoma State and Eastern Michigan Universities and became Canadian National champions in the sport of wrestling while they attended. His son Shawn is authoring a biographical book about him.

answer: His brother was on a wrestling team, too. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. Jason and Shawn both went to Oklahoma State and became Canadian champions while they attended. The three of them all help run the AWOL Wrestling Club, which used to be a small-time operation but went on to have its own bingo hall and held tournaments on a regular basis.

text: Excerpt doesn't say his brother was on a wrestling team too.

refinement: He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. Jason and Shawn both went to Oklahoma State and became Canadian champions while they attended. The three of them all help run the AWOL Wrestling Club, which used to be a small-time operation but went on to have its own bingo hall and held tournaments on a regular basis.

text: Doesn't say anything about his eight siblings.

refinement: Geris had eight siblings Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, Hank, and Billy. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. Jason and Shawn both went to Oklahoma State and became Canadian champions while they attended. The three of them all help run the AWOL Wrestling Club, which used to be a small-time operation but went on to have its own bingo hall and held tournaments on a regular basis.

text: Doesn't mention that his three sons wrestled in high school and received accolades.

refinement: Geris had eight siblings Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, Hank, and Billy. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. They all attended Sir Wilfrid Laurier Secondary School where they were members of the Laurier wrestling team. All three excelled in the sport and earned an impressive collection of accolades. Jason and Shawn both went to Oklahoma State and became Canadian champions while they attended. The three of them all help run the AWOL Wrestling Club, which used to be a small-time operation but went on to have its own bingo hall and held tournaments on a regular basis.

text: Jason and Shawn didn't both go to Oklahoma State.

refinement: Geris had eight siblings Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, Hank, and Billy. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. They all attended Sir Wilfrid Laurier Secondary School where they were members of the Laurier wrestling team. All three excelled in the sport and earned an impressive collection of accolades. Jason and Shawn went to Oklahoma State and Eastern Michigan Universities and became Canadian National champions while they attended. The three of them all help run the AWOL Wrestling Club, which used to be a small-time operation but went on to have its own bingo hall and held tournaments on a regular basis.

text: Excerpt doesn't say anything about his sons helping to run AWOL.

refinement: Geris had eight siblings Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, Hank, and Billy. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. They all attended Sir Wilfrid Laurier Secondary School where they were members of the Laurier wrestling team. All three excelled in the sport and earned an impressive collection of accolades. Jason and Shawn went to Oklahoma State and Eastern Michigan Universities and became Canadian National champions while they attended.

text: Doesn't mention his son writing a book about him.

refinement: Geris had eight siblings Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, Hank, and Billy. He wasn't inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame until 1984 but he did teach his three boys Shawn, Ryan, and Jason) to wrestle. They all attended Sir Wilfrid Laurier Secondary School where they were members of the Laurier wrestling team. All three excelled in the sport and earned an impressive collection of accolades. Jason and Shawn went to Oklahoma State and Eastern Michigan Universities and became Canadian National champions while they attended. His son Shawn is authoring a biographical book about him.

answer: Geris grew up in London, Ontario along with his eight siblings, Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, and Hank. Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred and Angel were members of the Laurier wrestling team and were national champions in wrestling. Geris also helped his three sons wrestle.

text: None of his siblings were wrestlers.

refinement: Geris grew up in London, Ontario along with his eight siblings, Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, and Hank. Geris also helped his three sons wrestle.

text: Doesn't describe his son's experience with wrestling.

refinement: Geris grew up in London, Ontario along with his eight siblings, Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, and Hank. Geris also helped his three sons wrestle. They all attended Sir Wilfrid Laurier Secondary School and were members of the Laurier wrestling team. They all excelled in the sport and earned an impressive collection of accolades. Jason went on to Oklahoma State and Fresno State Universities and Shawn attended Eastern Michigan University. They both became Canadian National Champions at wrestling.

text: Doesn't mention his son Shawn writing a book about him.

refinement: Geris grew up in London, Ontario along with his eight siblings, Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, and Hank. Geris also helped his three sons wrestle. They all attended Sir Wilfrid Laurier Secondary School and were members of the Laurier wrestling team. They all excelled in the sport and earned an impressive collection of accolades. Jason went on to Oklahoma State and Fresno State Universities and Shawn attended Eastern Michigan University. They both became Canadian National Champions at wrestling. His son Shawn is authoring a biographical book about him.

answer: Geris was born in Belgnum, but emigrated to Toronto, Ontario as a child. He was one of 8 kids, the youngest being Billy. His love for the sport of wrestling was passed on to his three sons, Jason, Shawn, and Ryan. They all attended Sir Wilfride Laurier Ssecondry School in Toronto. His son, Shawn Geris, wrote a biography on his father.

text: Geris was born in Deurne in the Netherlands.

refinement: Geris was born in Deurne in the Netherlands, but emigrated to Toronto, Ontario as a child. He was one of 8 kids, the youngest being Billy. His love for the sport of wrestling was passed on to his three sons, Jason, Shawn, and Ryan. They all attended Sir Wilfride Laurier Ssecondry School in Toronto. His son, Shawn Geris, wrote a biography on his father.

text: Doesn't name his siblings.

refinement: Geris was born in Deurne in the Netherlands, but emigrated to Toronto, Ontario as a child. He had eight siblings Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, Hank, and Billy. His love for the sport of wrestling was passed on to his three sons, Jason, Shawn, and Ryan. They all attended Sir Wilfride Laurier Ssecondry School in Toronto. His son, Shawn Geris, wrote a biography on his father.

text: Doesn't specify that his sons participated and excelled in wrestling, eventually both going to college to wrestle and becoming Canadian national champions.

refinement: Geris was born in Deurne in the Netherlands, but emigrated to Toronto, Ontario as a child. He had eight siblings Cathy, Dorthy, Jackie, Jane, Fred, Angel, Hank, and Billy. His love for the sport of wrestling was passed on to his three sons, Jason, Shawn, and Ryan. They all attended Sir Wilfride Laurier Ssecondry School in Toronto where they participated and excelled in wrestling. Jason like his father attended Oklahoma State and earned a scholarship to Fresno State University. Shawn attended Eastern Michigan University. Both became Canadian national champions. His son, Shawn Geris, wrote a biography on his father.

answer: Geris was born in Deurne in the Netherlands, but emigrated to Toronto, Ontario as a child. He was one of 8 kids, the youngest being Billy. His love for the sport of wrestling was passed on to his three sons, Jason, Shawn, and Ryan. They all attended Sir Wilfride Laurier Ssecondry School in Toronto.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize Geris's international career.

answer: In 1966 he was 4th place in the Commonwealth Games and 1965 he was 9th in the world championships. He represented Canada at the British Empire and Commonwealth Games, the Pan American games, the 1968, 1972, and 1976 Olympics, and the 1965 World Championships.

answer: Geris attended Sir Adam Beck's wrestling team, where he earned two O.F.S.S.A. gold medals. In High School, his athletic performance was noticed by Coach Henry Pillard, who recruited Geris to join the Wolves wrestling squad. As a result, he won the N.J.C.A.A Wrestling Championship in 1968. He later attended perennial powerhouse Oklahoma State University and placed 2nd at the Big 8 Tournament and 4th at the NCAA National tournament, earning him All-American honors.

text: Discusses everything but what's asked.

refinement: In 1966 he was 4th place in the Commonwealth Games and 1965 he was 9th in the world championships. He represented Canada at the British Empire and Commonwealth Games, the Pan American games, the 1968, 1972, and 1976 Olympics, and the 1965 World Championships.

answer: Geris was a Canadian representative at the 1968, 1972, and 1976 Olympics. Geris represented Holland at the 1966 British Empire and Commonwealth Games and 1975 Pan American Games. Gerris was a Canadian freestyle and Greco-Roman champion in 1974 and 1975. He was German freestyle and Greco-Roman champion in 1973. Gerris was a Canadian title holder in 1967 and Canadian Commonwealth champion in 1966.

answer: No

text: Doesn't answer the question.

refinement: In 1966 he was 4th place in the Commonwealth Games and 1965 he was 9th in the world championships. He represented Canada at the British Empire and Commonwealth Games, the Pan American games, the 1968, 1972, and 1976 Olympics, and the 1965 World Championships.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the article say about Geris's career outside of wrestling?

answer: No answer

answer: Nothing is mentioned about his career outside of wrestling, however he was an amateur wrestler until his death.

answer: No answer

answer: Geris was also an involved parent. He instilled his love of the sport in his three sons, and they all ended up becoming Canadian national champions too. He started a London wrestling club in the 80's called AWOLS. He ran bingo and sold wrestling gear to pay for his children's wrestling trips and equipment. Geris was a coach. He also made sure his wrestlers got scholarships with wrestling. Geris was inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame posthumously.

answer: No answer

answer: Geris tried out for a number of sport teams while in high school. He played basketball and football, and he even wrestled. In 1965, he wrestled in a tournament in Canada and went on to represent Canada at three Olympic Games, 1968, 1972, and 1976. He retired in 1977 at the age of 43 and started a wrestling academy and tournament called the A.W.O.L.S. In 1980, Geris was inducted into the United States Junior College Wrestling Hall of Fame. In 1984, he was inducted into the Canadian Amateur Wrestling Hall of Fame. Geris was found dead in 2008 behind a secondary school.

text: Doesn't discuss non wrestling career.


split: train

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> A short story I wrote 5 years ago. Don't know why I thought of it while driving around town and not sure why I'm posting it either. Enjoy.

He pondered the very definition of sanity as he walked down the nearly-abandoned midnight sidewalk, his footsteps creating crunching noises in the snow. The eerie orange glow of the street lamps combined with the light of the full moon lay contrasting shadows on the ground below. He took another deep puff from his cigarette and held it before exhaling. What's more likely, he thought to himself. That I'm the last sane person on Earth, or I'm just insane. He had been following this line of thought for some time now and the most recent of events led him to this lonely sidewalk in downtown.

Just a few hours before, he was at a bar with some of his co-workers. He felt like he fit right in, that after a troubled childhood of being the consistent social outcast, he was finally a part of a group. They joked, hollered at the female bar patrons, and did the generally accepted bar routine---get drunk, laugh loud, and try to get laid. He actually felt like a part of them, and was in a euphoric high from the social acceptance and group mentality. Then it happened, as it always does eventually. He saw himself from outside of his body and didn't recognize his behavior. This isn't me, he thought to himself. This is who they want me to be. So, as always, he made up some excuse for leaving prematurely.

"Sorry guys, I forgot I gotta be home before ten when the misses arrives.", he said.

"You aren't married man, why the hell do you have a curfew?", asked James.

"I know---but..." At least they bought it, he thought to himself. There's nobody waiting for me.

"Sound's like someone's pussy-whipped!", Mike said while making a whip gesture.

"Fuck off, Mike. At least I'm getting some.", he replied. "Seriously though, I gotta bounce."

"Alright man, you straight to drive?"

"I'm going to just walk home, I'm only a few blocks down.", he said, and paid his tab. "I'll catch you guys tomorrow."

"Later man."

"Peace."

And he left the bar for his empty apartment.

As soon as he walked out of the bar, he knew something wasn't right---not wrong either, but not right. Nothing looked out of place, nobody was out there waiting for him, but he could just feel it. And by now in his life, he had learned to trust his intuition. Weary, but determined not to let an odd feeling slow him down, he lit a cigarette and walked down the lonely sidewalk. Why am I such an outcast? he thought to himself. Why do I always get nervous around new people? He didn't follow this train of thought for long though, because he had done it many times before and got nowhere. Deep in thought, he didn't even see her until he was nearly on top of her. In the split second before the collision, he caught just a glimpse of her talking on a cell phone. She was beautiful, enough to make him trip over the sidewalk, right in to her.

"Jesus man! Watch where you're going!", she exclaimed.

"I'm sorry, I was just... I don't know."

"Well, pay more attention next time." she said, and stormed off, engaging in the cell conversation once again.

"Jeez..." he said, more to himself than to her, and took another puff off of his cigarette.

title: Snowfall

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize how the man feels about himself after he left the bar towards his empty apartment.

answer: The man seemed to be much concerned about himself. He tried hard to ignore troublesome feelings of himself. He did that many times in life prior to this one, but he could not seem to get his brain to shut off the troublesome feelings like he wished. He did not do that because he was married. Basically, he pretty much listened to his intuition about the non-threatening feelings, but he could not help but to doubt himself sometimes.

text: The answer misstates almost every detail it took from the story. It needs to be re-written.

refinement: He ponders whether he's insane or the only sane person left. Something feels out of place, not right, and he trusts his intuition. He ponders about managing to feel like he belongs to a group. He always eventually disassociates from the connectedness and wonders why that happens.

answer: The man feels discomfort when around people, no longer feeling like he belongs or fits in, and even more uncertain about his own sanity. He wanders alone down the sidewalk on a midnight walk and catches sight of a woman talking on her cell phone. Upon colliding with the woman, he realizes the strangeness of his own behavior and becomes more suspicious of his own sanity.

text: The narrator doesn't think of anything else after colliding with the woman. He doesn't realize any strangeness upon colliding either.

refinement: The man feels discomfort when around people, no longer feeling like he belongs or fits in, and even more uncertain about his own sanity. He wanders alone down the sidewalk on a midnight walk and catches sight of a woman talking on her cell phone.

text: The man's walk and collision aren't relevant to the question.

refinement: The man feels discomfort when around people, no longer feeling like he belongs or fits in, and even more uncertain about his own sanity.

answer: The man feels insecure and uncertain about himself. He wonders if he is the only sane person left or if he is just insane. After leaving the bar, he notices something that is off and feels nervous for reasons he can't explain. Upon running into a woman on the sidewalk, he feels embarrassed and unsure of himself. He doubts his intuition but also seems to accept it as something true and reliable. He's uncertain whether he is sane or not.

text: Apart from the narrator's uncertainty about whether he's sane or not, the answer is misleading. It should be re-written.

refinement: He ponders whether he's insane or the only sane person left. Something feels out of place, not right, and he trusts his intuition. He ponders about managing to feel like he belongs to a group. He always eventually disassociates from the connectedness and wonders why that happens.

answer: He feels that something's not right about going home alone. However, he doesn't want to believe it. He walks home with more self-doubt and insecurity.

answer: The man felt as something wasn't right when he left the bar towards his empty apartment. He had learned to trust his intuition and continued walking. He kept thinking to himself about why he was such an outcast and why he always got nervous around new people. His walk home was deep of introspection, when he accidently collided with a beautiful girl.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize how the narrator felt when he was at the bar with his co-workers.

answer: He felt like he fit right in. He was a part of the group. They were together having a good time. He felt good being a part of them and finally felt like he was accepted.

text: The narrator eventually disassociates while he's with the group. He can't recognize his behavior and feels like he's being the person his friends want him to be. The answer omits this.

refinement: He felt like he fit right in. He was a part of the group. They were together having a good time. He felt good being a part of them and finally felt like he was accepted. The narrator eventually disassociated while he's with the group. He couldn't recognize his behavior and felt like he's being the person his friends want him to be.

text: The narrator's feelings of being part of the group are repeated too many times.

refinement: They were together having a good time. He felt good being a part of them and finally felt like he was accepted. The narrator eventually disassociated while he's with the group. He couldn't recognize his behavior and felt like he's being the person his friends want him to be.

answer: The narrator felt euphoric having finally been accepted by a group of friends at the bar. However, he soon began to second-guess his behavior and soon realized that he was being someone he wasn't. He left the bar before his colleagues and was uneasy when, soon after, he had a run-in with a beautiful woman in the snow. He contemplated whether he is actually sane or just crazy.

text: The narrator leaving and colliding with the woman aren't relevant to the question.

refinement: The narrator felt euphoric having finally been accepted by a group of friends at the bar. However, he soon began to second-guess his behavior and soon realized that he was being someone he wasn't.

answer: The narrator felt euphoric at being included with his co-workers and generally accepted in the bar setting. But he began to question his behaviour when he saw himself from outside of his body, and decided to leave early. As soon as he was out on the deserted sidewalk, he noticed a woman walking down the street and had a near collision with her. In retrospect, the narrator feels unsure about his sanity, and wonders if he's the only sane person left.

answer: After becoming a part of a group the narrator feels happy, realizing he fit right in. However, he soon realised that wasn't the case and that that behaviour wasn't what he was and felt distraught.

answer: When the narrator was at the bar with his co-workers, he felt as he fit right in and was a part of the group. He had fun with them, joked around, hollered at the female bar patrons, and did all the things that was part of the generally accepted bar routine. He was in a very good mood until suddenly he saw himself outside of his body and made an excuse to leave early.

text: The narrator thinks that he's being someone his friends want him to be. The answer omits this.

refinement: When the narrator was at the bar with his co-workers, he felt as he fit right in and was a part of the group. He had fun with them, joked around, hollered at the female bar patrons, and did all the things that was part of the generally accepted bar routine. He was in a very good mood until suddenly he saw himself outside of his body and made an excuse to leave early. He felt like he was being someone his friends wanted him to be.


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The 2016 OLIVET COMETS FOOTBALL TEAM, sometimes known as TEAM 116 in reference to the 116th season the Olivet football program had fielded a team, was an American football team that represented Olivet College during the 2016 NCAA Division III football season. The Comets play in the MIAA and played their home games at the Cutler Athletic Complex in Olivet, Michigan. Olivet was led by Dan Pifer, who was in his fifth and final season with the Comets, as he would be hired by the Walsh University football team of the G-MAC to become their new head coach in December 2016. In January 2017, offensive coordinator and recruiting coordinator Dan Musielewicz was hired as the new head coach for the Comets.

Season Synopsis

The Comets won the MIAA conference title outright for the first time since 1974 and at least a share of the conference title for the second consecutive year and the first time since 1913-1914. The title was the twelfth in school history and the nine wins in the season tied the single season record set in 2015. The Comets also made an appearance in the 2016 NCAA College Football Playoffs for the second time in school history, the other in 2007. Olivet faced John Carroll University in the First Round and lost to the Blue Streaks 37-12.

Broadcasting

For another season, broadcasting for the Comets was done by 89.1 The One WOCR FM with play-by-play done by sports director Matt Scher and color analysis by Zach Sturgill. The games could be heard on the radio and on wocrfm.com. A first for Olivet Football, home games were broadcast on the Comet Sports Network produced by Visual Premier Productions, LLC. with audio simulcasted from WOCR's broadcast. The Comet Sports Network broadcasts were streamed through YouTube.

Schedule

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title: 2016 Olivet Comets football team

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who won the MIAA conference title in 1974?

answer: The 1974 OLIVET COMETS FOOTBALL TEAM won the MIAA conference title.

text: "The Comets won the MIAA conference title outright for the first time since 1974."

answer: The Comets won the MIAA conference title in 1974.

text: "The Comets won the MIAA conference title outright for the first time since 1974."

answer: The 1974 OLIVET COMETS FOOTBALL TEAM was the team that won the MIAA conference title.

text: "The Comets won the MIAA conference title outright for the first time since 1974."

answer: That information can’t be found.

text: Reading the "Season Synopsis" section, it's said that "the Comets won the MIAA conference title outright for the first time since 1974". This would mean they won in 1974.

answer: The Olivet Comets

text: "The Comets won the MIAA conference title outright for the first time since 1974."

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does MIAA stand for?

answer: The NCAA Division III doesn't have a MAC (Mid-America Conference) in the same region, so the abbreviation for MIAA may be misleading.

text: This doesn't answer the question/is the wrong answer. However, the answer can't be found in the text, either.

answer: the article does not answer the question

answer: MIAA stands for the Mid-America Intercollegiate Athletic Association.

text: The article doesn't give an answer, but with outside research it's clear this answer is false.

answer: MIAA stands for the Michigan Intercollegiate Athletic Association. The Comets football team played their home games in the MIAA, and won the conference title outright for the first time since 1974.

text: The second sentence is irrelevant to the question.

refinement: MIAA stands for the Michigan Intercollegiate Athletic Association.

answer: Not answered.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What station broadcasted for the Olivet Comets in 2016?

answer: 89.1 The One WOCR FM

answer: 89.1 The One WOCR FM

answer: 89.1 The One WOCR FM

answer: 89.1 The One WOCR FM.

answer: 89.1 The One WOCR FM

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who coached the 2016 Olivet Comets football team?

answer: Dan Pifer coached the 2016 Olivet Comets football team.

answer: Dan Pifer

answer: Dan Pifer coached the 2016 Olivet Comets football team.

answer: Dan Pifer coached the 2016 Olivet Comets football team. Pifer would be hired by the Walsh University football team.

text: The second sentence is irrelevant to the question.

refinement: Dan Pifer coached the 2016 Olivet Comets football team.

answer: Dan Pifer coached the 2016 Olivet Comets football team.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: The 2016 Olivet Comets football team won the MIAA conference title and appeared in the NCAA College Football Playoffs.

answer: This article describes on the history of the 2016 Olivet Comets football team, which is known as one of the greatest teams in NCAA history.

text: Remove "on" in "on the".

refinement: This article describes the history of the 2016 Olivet Comets football team, which is known as one of the greatest teams in NCAA history.

text: This team is not described as "one of the greatest teams in NCAA history". Replace this by saying that they won the MIAA conference title and made it to the 2016 NCAA College Football Playoffs.

refinement: This article describes the history of the 2016 Olivet Comets football team, who won the MIAA conference title and made it to the 2016 NCAA College Football Playoffs.

answer: The 2016 Olivet Comets football team won the MIAA Conference title for the first time in school history and made it to the NCAA College Football Playoffs for the second time.

text: They didn't win the MIAA conference title for the first time in school history, but "for the first time since 1974".

refinement: The 2016 Olivet Comets football team won the MIAA Conference title for the first time since 1974 and made it to the NCAA College Football Playoffs for the second time.

answer: The 2016 Olivet Comets football team was a successful team, accomplishing the first outright MIAA conference title in school history and making an appearance in the NCAA Football Playoffs.

text: They didn't win the MIAA conference title for the first time in school history, but "for the first time since 1974".

refinement: The 2016 Olivet Comets football team was a successful team, accomplishing the first outright MIAA conference title sice 1974 and making an appearance in the NCAA Football Playoffs.

answer: This article is about the 2016 Olivet Comets football team, an organization operating in NCAA Division III football as part of the MIAA.


text:
I used to watch this cute girl from my cubicle workstation. Leaning backwards in my chair taking short sneak peaks at her as she was standing by the coffee machine. She was about the same age as me, around her mid 20‘s. It took a long time before I managed to gather enough courage to actually walk up to her and once I did, I realized that I had no idea what to say. All the thoughts of walking up to her had made me forgot to think of what I should say to break the ice. I was a pretty shy guy back then and didn’t really have any conversation starters up my sleeve. I had been watching her from a distance in almost a year and in this moment when I was finally standing in front of her, I was numb. My mind was blank but still I opened my mouth to say something. I thought I asked her if she likes coffee, but now, when I think back to that moment it must have sounded something like ”you.. l-l-like.. coffee”. I’m quite aware that was probably not the best thing to say, considering it was the first time I actually talked to her. Even though she didn’t say something back, she smiled at me, giggled and then walked back to her own cubicle. I stayed by the coffee machine for moment to catch my breathe and I’m pretty sure I must have seemed like a complete fool to her. But I didn’t really care, for me that was a great success. The woman I had been secretly interested in for a long time had just smiled at me.

Some time passed and now I walked up to her almost every day when she came to refill her coffee mug outside my cubicle. Sometimes it almost seemed as she was waiting for me. There were days when I was too busy to constantly take quick peaks down the hall to see if she was there, those days I would usually hear her clearing her throat or humming just outside my workstation. I wasn’t completely sure but I always thought that it was her way to catch my attention, and every time time I walked out of my cubicle she gave me a heart warming smile. Even though we had long and pleasant conversations I could tell that she sometimes was very nervous. Whenever her hands started trembling too much she would reach for her pocket and pick up a bracelet made out of brown wooden pearls. She would hold it in a firm grip and I came to understand that it was her way of dealing with nervousness. That bracelet made her calm again and it obviously had a personal value to her.

These small meetings kept occurring for a couple of weeks and one day I finally asked her out, and to my surprise she said yes. I had never been happier in my whole life and the thought of her made my smile uncontrollably. I literally woke up happy every morning.

I was supposed to meet her at a nice Italian restaurant not far from where we worked. It took me hours to prepare and I even went out shopping new clothes to make the best impression. I left home exactly 6:17 PM, and I had enough time to pick up a bouquet of flowers on my way to the restaurant. I had never bought flowers to someone before, and when I think about it now I have no idea why I did it that night.

I arrived to the restaurant around 6:45 PM. We were supposed  to meet 7 PM but I preferred to show up earlier. I was very nervous and when the clock hit 7 PM I had already drank two glasses of wine. I watched the door and expected her two walk in to restaurant just any second now. 7:15 PM. I was still staring at the door and I felt that my forehead was sweating. 7:30 PM. She was probably just stuck in traffic. I ordered another glass of wine and tried to make time pass faster. 8 PM. Where is she?? If she was this late she should at least have given me a call to let me know she’s on her way. 9 PM. It all made sense now. Her heart warming smile, her kind words and her longing eyes were just bullshit. She was just another bitch that played with people’s feelings, and I was just another fool that fell for it. How could I have been so stupid?? What was I thinking?

I left my table. My chair fell loudly to the floor and people stared at me as I stormed out of the restaurant. I wasn’t sad. I wasn’t going to let that bitch win. I was angry. Not at her, but at myself for being so easily fooled. I chucked the flowers in the first garbage bin I passed and kept walking down the street. Further down the street something had happened. Two police cars and an ambulance was blocking the sidewalk and at first I didn’t care. I just wanted to go home. But when I passed the scene of the accident I saw something. There was a body lying in middle of the sidewalk. The face was covered with a blanket but an arm was sticking out. I could tell that the arm belonged to a woman in her mid 20‘s and in her hand she was holding something. It was a bracelet.. made of  brown wooden pearls.

I didn’t stop. I kept walking. I didn’t look back. I didn’t cry. I just went straight back home. I went to bed, and I never woke up happy ever again.

title: Office love story (I have never written a short story in english before. Feedback is much appreciated.)

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the girl the narrator was interested in?

answer: All the while the narrator watched the girl, he had thought she was his age and would usually think hard coming up with conversation starters. Once he finally told her good morning and asked her if she would like coffee, she grinned at him, smiled a bit and hurried back to her own cubicle. He finally got to talk to her often enough and soon noticed that she had nervous moments when her hands shook slightly. he wasn't sure if she had planned on him noticing, but nonetheless, he thought she was beautiful and [tall.

text: The narrator didn't think about conversation starters and had to bumble after saying hi to her.

refinement: All the while the narrator watched the girl, he had thought she was his age but forgot to come up with conversation starters. Once he finally told her good morning and asked her if she would like coffee, she grinned at him, smiled a bit and hurried back to her own cubicle. He finally got to talk to her often enough and soon noticed that she had nervous moments when her hands shook slightly. he wasn't sure if she had planned on him noticing, but nonetheless, he thought she was beautiful and [tall.

text: The answer implies as if the narrator noticed the girl's shaking hands despite her not wanting such a thing. That is misleading. What the narrator thinks the girl planned for him was her humming, etc. she'd do outside his cubicle.

refinement: All the while the narrator watched the girl, he had thought she was his age but forgot to come up with conversation starters. Once he finally told her good morning and asked her if she would like coffee, she grinned at him, smiled a bit and hurried back to her own cubicle. He finally got to talk to her often enough and soon noticed that she had nervous moments when her hands shook slightly. He wasn't sure if she wanted to catch his attention with her humming or clearing her throat, but they had long talks every time.

text: The answer omits the narrator and the girl starting to date. Then, on the night they were supposed to meet, the narrator thinks she played with his emotions because she's two hours late. However, he notices her body outside while leaving the restaurant beside an ambulance.

refinement: All the while the narrator watched the girl, he had thought she was his age but forgot to come up with conversation starters. Once he finally told her good morning and asked her if she would like coffee, she grinned at him, smiled a bit and hurried back to her own cubicle. He finally got to talk to her often enough and soon noticed that she had nervous moments when her hands shook slightly. He wasn't sure if she wanted to catch his attention with her humming or clearing her throat, but they had long talks every time. They started dating, but she stood him up for two hours, and the narrator was angry. However, when he got out of the restaurant, he noticed her body lying beside an ambulance, and he never woke up happy ever after.

answer: The girl the narrator was interested in is portrayed as shy and nervous but also kind. She smiles at the narrator and agrees to go on a date with him and she carries a bracelet to help her feel calm. Unfortunately, she is in an accident and dies before they are able to meet up, causing the narrator to feel anger and regret.

text: The answer would be better if it gave more details about the night the girl died.

refinement: The girl the narrator was interested in is portrayed as shy and nervous but also kind. She smiles at the narrator and agrees to go on a date with him and she carries a bracelet to help her feel calm. One night, she stands him up for two hours, and the narrator gets pissed off. However, he notices a body lying beside an ambulance, and a girl's hand is holding a certain bracelet.

answer: The story indicates that the narrator was interested in the girl because she was young, attractive, and stood by the coffee machine near his cubicle. Later, the narrator asked the girl out and she accepted. However, she was late to their date and did not show up at all. The narrator assumes she was just playing with his feelings, which made him angry and led him home, where he never woke up happy again.

text: The answer implies as if the girl didn't show up, and that's the end of what happened with her. This is wrong. She didn't show up because she died in an accident.

refinement: The story indicates that the narrator was interested in the girl because she was young, attractive, and stood by the coffee machine near his cubicle. Later, the narrator asked the girl out and she accepted. However, she was late to their date and did not show up at all. The narrator assumes she was just playing with his feelings, which made him angry and led him home. However, he noticed her body lying beside an ambulance, and he never woke happy ever again.

answer: The girl the narrator was interested in was cute and around the same age as him, and the narrator had been watching her from a distance before finally managing to talk to her. He noticed that she was easily nervous and visibly turned to her bracelet made of brown wooden pearls whenever being un-nerved. The girl is unnamed in the story, she only ever refers to her as "a woman".

text: The girl being unnamed is irrelevant and unnecessary.

refinement: The girl the narrator was interested in was cute and around the same age as him, and the narrator had been watching her from a distance before finally managing to talk to her. He noticed that she was easily nervous and visibly turned to her bracelet made of brown wooden pearls whenever being un-nerved.

text: The girl uses her bracelet to calm down her nerves, which the answer expresses in a confusing and awkward way.

refinement: The girl the narrator was interested in was cute and around the same age as him, and the narrator had been watching her from a distance before finally managing to talk to her. He noticed that she was easily nervous and turned to her bracelet made of brown wooden pearls to calm her nerves.

text: The answer omits the narrator and the girl starting to date. Then, on the night they were supposed to meet, the narrator thinks she played with his emotions because she's two hours late. However, he notices her body outside while leaving the restaurant beside an ambulance.

refinement: The girl the narrator was interested in was cute and around the same age as him, and the narrator had been watching her from a distance before finally managing to talk to her. He noticed that she was easily nervous and turned to her bracelet made of brown wooden pearls to calm her nerves. They start dating and one night, she stood him up for two hours, and the narrator was pissed off. However, he noticed a body lying beside an ambulance, and a girl's hand holding a bracelet of wooden pearls.

answer: The girl was cute and worked in the same office as the narrator. She was about the same age as the narrator, around her mid-20s. She seems to like coffee. The girl was sometimes nervous and dealt with it by holding a bracelet made of brown wooden pearls.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What does the story say about the relationship between the girl and the narrator?

answer: The narrator often sneak peaks at the girl working at the coffee machine in the office and likes her a lot. However, since the narrator has never had a conversation with her, it's hard for him to initiate a conversation. In trying to do so, the narrator asks her if she likes coffee. She smiles at him and giggles and walks back to her cubicle. This is the first time they have spoken. The relationship between them is often long and pleasant conversations.

text: The answer omits the narrator and the girl starting to date. Then, on the night they were supposed to meet, the narrator thinks she played with his emotions because she's two hours late. However, he notices her body outside while leaving the restaurant beside an ambulance.

refinement: The narrator often sneak peaks at the girl working at the coffee machine in the office and likes her a lot. However, since the narrator has never had a conversation with her, it's hard for him to initiate a conversation. In trying to do so, the narrator asks her if she likes coffee. She smiles at him and giggles and walks back to her cubicle. This is the first time they have spoken. The relationship between them is often long and pleasant conversations. They start dating and one night, she stands him up for two hours, and the narrator is pissed off. However, he notices her body lying beside an ambulance outside and never wakes up happy again.

answer: They're officemates who obviously like each other. The narrator has been watching her from afar for a long time, and it took a while for him to talk to her. Now that they're talking, the girl would often wait for the narrator to join her for a coffee refill. The narrator finally asked the girl out on a date and she said yes. Her saying yes made him wake up happy every morning.

text: The answer omits the date night when the girl dies.

refinement: They're officemates who obviously like each other. The narrator has been watching her from afar for a long time, and it took a while for him to talk to her. Now that they're talking, the girl would often wait for the narrator to join her for a coffee refill. The narrator finally asked the girl out on a date and she said yes. Her saying yes made him wake up happy every morning. One night, she stood him up for two hours, and the narrator was pissed off. However, he noticed her body lying beside an ambulance outside, and never woke up happy again.

answer: The relationship between the girl and the narrator appears to be casual and new. Initially, although the narrator is interested in the girl, he is shy and lacks conversation starters. Gradually, they start to talk more, and the narrator finally asks her out. Although she agrees to go out with him, she never arrives at the restaurant, and the narrator realises that she was just playing with his feelings. The story ends with the narrator choosing anger over sadness and walking away from the girl. In general, there seems to be a lot of uncertainty surrounding the relationship, with little emotional attachment or emotional investment.

text: The answer grossly misstates the story after the narrator gets pissed off about being stood up.

refinement: The relationship between the girl and the narrator appears to be casual and new. Initially, although the narrator is interested in the girl, he is shy and lacks conversation starters. Gradually, they start to talk more, and the narrator finally asks her out. Although she agrees to go out with him, she never arrives at the restaurant, and the narrator realises that she was just playing with his feelings. However, all that is turned upside down when he sees her body lying beside an ambulance outside, and he never wakes up happy again.

answer: The story tells of the relationship between the narrator, who is shy and interested in the girl, and the girl, who likes the narrator but is also nervous in the beginning. Despite this, they eventually start dating and through a series of small interactions grow closer to each other. Unfortunately, despite their closeness, the girl is later killed in a car accident and prior to her death she had a bracelet made of brown wooden pearls in her hand. The story regards their relationship as romantic and loving, but also ultimately tragic.

text: The answer should use simpler sentences to convey the same things it does.

refinement: They are both seemingly shy and nervous in the beginning. Despite this, they eventually grow closer to each other through a series of small interactions and start dating. Unfortunately, despite their closeness, the girl is later killed in a car accident with her bracelet made of brown wooden pearls in her hand. The story regards their relationship as romantic and loving, but also ultimately tragic.

answer: The story shows how the narrator met and spoke to the girl for the first time. They became acquainted with each other after he walked up to her at the coffee machine and talked to her one day. He saw her standing or sitting outside his cubicle frequently. The girl would give him a heart-warming smile whenever they spoke to each other. After a while, he decided to ask her out. She accepted, after some hesitation.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Summarize what happened to their dinner date at the Italian restaurant?

answer: They were supposed to meet at 7 pm but the narrator showed up earlier. He bought new clothes for the date and flowers for the girl. The girl was running late and the narrator had a few glasses of wine while waiting, thinking she was stuck in traffic. When the clock hit 9 pm, the narrator figured she stood him up and left the restaurant in anger. However, the girl was in an accident and died on the way to the restaurant. The narrator saw the scene on his way home and recognized her arm and wooden pearl bracelet.

answer: The narrator shows up a bit earlier than planned but nevertheless goes inside and first, has a drink. Then several more. A while later and there is no sign of the woman, even though the narrator had ensured he was there early so as not to have to wait a whole lot. The narrator figures there must have been some sort of delay and just had one more drink to help make time move faster. However, by 9pm when the woman hadn't shown up, the narrator realizes that she won't show since she's a shitty person, who has played with his feelings for some time. He storms out, angry and still drunk.

text: Going somewhere early isn't a way to ensure waiting less.

refinement: The narrator shows up a bit earlier than planned but nevertheless goes inside and first, has a drink. Then several more. A while later and there is no sign of the woman. The narrator figures there must have been some sort of delay and just had one more drink to help make time move faster. However, by 9pm when the woman hadn't shown up, the narrator realizes that she won't show since she's a shitty person, who has played with his feelings for some time. He storms out, angry and still drunk.

text: The answer omits the tragic end of the night.

refinement: The narrator shows up a bit earlier than planned but nevertheless goes inside and first, has a drink. Then several more. A while later and there is no sign of the woman. The narrator figures there must have been some sort of delay and just had one more drink to help make time move faster. However, by 9pm when the woman hadn't shown up, the narrator realizes that she won't show since she's a shitty person, who has played with his feelings for some time. He storms out, angry and still drunk. He notices her body lying beside an ambulance outside and never wakes up happy again.

answer: Their dinner date at the Italian restaurant ended in disappointment when the woman (whom the main character had been secretly interested in) failed to show up. They instead ended up sitting alone, drinking wine and waiting for her in the restaurant. She never arrived, and the main character stormed out in anger. On their way home they witnessed the aftermath of a fatal car accident- the woman they were interested in was killed. The main character never felt happiness again.

text: Going on a date means the interest is not secret anymore.

refinement: Their dinner date at the Italian restaurant ended in disappointment when the woman failed to show up. They instead ended up sitting alone, drinking wine and waiting for her in the restaurant. She never arrived, and the main character stormed out in anger. On their way home they witnessed the aftermath of a fatal car accident- the woman they were interested in was killed. The main character never felt happiness again.

text: The narrator sits by himself, there isn't anyone else. Since the fact of the narrator's lonely wait is covered elsewhere in the answer, the sentence saying they ended up sitting alone should be deleted.

refinement: Their dinner date at the Italian restaurant ended in disappointment when the woman failed to show up. She never arrived, and the main character stormed out in anger. On their way home they witnessed the aftermath of a fatal car accident- the woman they were interested in was killed. The main character never felt happiness again.

text: We know the narrator is a cis male. The proper pronoun is he/his.

refinement: Their dinner date at the Italian restaurant ended in disappointment when the woman failed to show up. She never arrived, and the main character stormed out in anger. On his way home, he witnessed the aftermath of a fatal car accident- the woman he was interested in was killed. The main character never felt happiness again.

answer: At the Italian restaurant, their date didn't show up at 7 PM as planned. This made the protagonist very late and nervous. By 8 pm, the woman still hadn't shown up so the protagonist left the restaurant. Walking by an accident scene, they realized the body was of their date. She was holding a bracelet of brown wooden pearls that they had bought her earlier. The protagonist never woke up happy again and was heartbroken.

text: The narrator leaves at 9, not 8.

refinement: At the Italian restaurant, their date didn't show up at 7 PM as planned. This made the protagonist very late and nervous. By 9 pm, the woman still hadn't shown up so the protagonist left the restaurant. Walking by an accident scene, they realized the body was of their date. She was holding a bracelet of brown wooden pearls that they had bought her earlier. The protagonist never woke up happy again and was heartbroken.

text: At the restaurant, the protagonist is more angry than nervous. He also isn't late.

refinement: At the Italian restaurant, their date didn't show up at 7 PM as planned. This made the protagonist very angry. By 9 pm, the woman still hadn't shown up so the protagonist left the restaurant. Walking by an accident scene, they realized the body was of their date. She was holding a bracelet of brown wooden pearls that they had bought her earlier. The protagonist never woke up happy again and was heartbroken.

answer: It is evening and the narrator picks up flowers to pick her up at a restaurant that is not far from the coffee machine. The narrator arrives with enough time to pick up the flowers. They start drinking wine and gaze at the door. The woman arrives almost 2 hours late and the man becomes irritated and angry.

text: The answer is entirely wrong. It should be re-written.

refinement: The narrator arrives early (before 7 pm) with a bouquet, wearing new clothes. He drinks a few glasses of wine while waiting, but she's late. By 9 pm, the narrator is angry and storms out. Outside the restaurant, he notices police cars and an ambulance, his date's body lying beside it. He goes home and never wakes up happy again.


text:
"And I saw he was afraid, but not as much as if I had not been there" ->Harlan Ellison<-

The handles on the backs of the seats kind of suck up the comfort. You first see her sitting three rows ahead, in the opposite aisle. Her type is rare here, especially alone.  Blonde, slender, frail and quite. You would like very much to speak with her. Nothing creepy, but it's been a while since you've talked with someone who wasn't a crack head or strung out or family. Touching, that's far out of the question.

A rest stop comes soon. Very scenic, McDonald's parking lot, highway crossroads. Brown tinted gold in all directions. Drone sounds, and slight hills. Just the kind of nowhere place you've become accustomed to; you and your little red bag, with everything you need, freshly restocked with ketchup and sugar packets, honey and whatnot. Bits of crayon, business cards, scraps of paper, emergency candy bars and a notebook. This notebook, which you have in your hand, and fill with all you can pass through. Maybe somebody shall see, but it's unlikely. You also draw, scratch out scenes, nothing of great importance, except maybe to you. They unlock something that usually lives under heavy key.

And that girl is out and about, alone. Conversation is out of the question, but a piece is saved on your tiny page. A simple composition: parking barriers in their concrete dotted-line merge with car hood, boxy and blue, pulled forward to the limit, while a pale green branch twists a lonely way up, as the girl stands underneath, unencumbered, turned slightly away, admiring the wild grass hills with reverence most often reserved for Fuji, or the Louvre.  And as like, you see her composition.

Seeing surprisingly few cars and hearing even less, though they're there. Just because something is there you don't see or hear it, just ask pedestrian casualties. You find the scene has shifted, with hunching lines wrapped around, keeping warmth close to home. Fellow passengers begin to exit, some with big white bags, leopard print grease spots, many with large plastic cups. Each handful equal to a week of change that you yourself give for food. You find first-world self-imposed hunger to be quite a joy, at times. Henry David said it best you think, not sure what it is.

"Some View." You speak in horrid tones. Her words make no impression, but just because there is no record doesn't erase the facts. The beach is a favorite. Her sounds are not made by those on this shore, and she's come a long way by dubious means to be in this concrete stamp. There are past friends in the future.

It takes quite a lot of radiation to bring you along. Mass and gravity. Once it's begun; inevitable. You drop your pack in a square room, with table and chair, couch and tv, broken mirror and the beginning of christmas lights, her old classmates and exchange program vets, introduction and pot. And a couch, maybe more. You have no problem taking what's given, and road kill is godsend.

Your mind reels. Potent stuff, and a night of bonding complete. No rejection; absorption. Standing on concrete, you watch lights play out over the hills. Squadrons, paramilitary air support looking back through sights; it's possible. This view interests those new friends of yours, wavelengths mesh, and you begin to believe in yourself, how you've found it: belongings.

You sit in a room with them all, not all, but many. Remaining in one place, more or less, with powers and responsibilities of a low but noticeable magnitude. Tenuous roots embed, expand. A schedule of sorts, time meaning something besides departure. Love?

And you are surrounded, suspended on nothing, no base, no lid, wide open, a part of the scene, and you are engulfed. Flesh-body-soul enter those around you, the choice bits going to the blonde who brought you in, and nothing remains but contentedness.

title: The Traveler

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is the girl?

answer: The girl is someone who has traveled a great distance, looking for some form of belonging.

text: I don't think we can conclude any of this from the text

text: Provide a response

answer: The girl is a solitary traveler at a roadside rest stop.

answer: Unclear.

text: It is somewhat unclear, but we can at least say she's a traveler on a bus

answer: She's a stranger the narrator meets on the train.

text: Bus, not train

refinement: She's a stranger the narrator meets on the bus.

answer: The girl is a prostitute who offers both sex and pot. She is a slender blonde who does her business in a run-down square room that has photos of people she knows, it is likely to be her home.


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VICTORIA PARK is a stop on the Region of Waterloo's Ion rapid transit system. It is located alongside Charles Street, just west of Gaukel Street, in Kitchener.[1] Its namesake, Victoria Park, has its eastern entrance about south of the station along Gaukel. It opened in 2019.

The station serves southbound trains only; the nearest northbound platform is at Kitchener City Hall station, about away up Gaukel and Young streets.

The station's feature wall consists of brown stone tiles with flowing, random striations.

The platform is connected with Charles Street's sidewalks at either end, and pedestrians passing through walk along the platform.

The station is located at the southwest corner of the intersection of Charles Street West and Gaukel Street. It is immediately adjacent to 44 Gaukel Street, a modernist building constructed in 1962–64 which was formerly a Canada Post depot before it was converted to its current use as an arts centre.[2] Across Gaukel Street is the Charles Street Transit Terminal, the former Grand River Transit hub in Kitchener until the launch of light rail service in 2019. As of early 2020, intercity buses still stop at the terminal.

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title: Victoria Park station (Kitchener)

question: Where is Victoria Part located?

answer: It is located alongside Charles Street, just west of Gaukel Street, in Kitchener.

answer: The Victoria Park station is in Kitchener.

answer: Victoria Park station is located in downtown Kitchener, near Gaukel and Charles Streets.

question: What is Victoria Park?

answer: Victoria Park is a stop on the Region of Waterloo's Ion rapid transit system.

answer: Victoria Park is a stop on Waterloo's Ion rapid transit system.

answer: Victoria Park is a Ion rapid transit stop in Kitchener.

question: What does this station serve?

answer: This station is the terminus for the Ion light rail line in Kitchener, connecting southbound trains only.

answer: It serves only southbound trains.

answer: This station is a stop on the Ion rapid transit system, and serves trains travelling in a southbound direction.

question: How can you describe the station's features?

answer: The Victoria Park station features stone tile work with flowing, random striations and access to sidewalks on either end.

answer: The station's feature wall is made out of brown stone tiles with flowing textures and is adjacent to the Charles Street Transit Terminal.

answer: The station's features can be described as consisting of brown stone tiles with flowing, random striations.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer: The post is about Victoria Park station, on the Region of Waterloo's Ion rapid transit system. It opened in 2019, and is named after Victoria Park

answer: This article describes Victoria Park Station, a stop on Kitchener's Ion rapid transit system. It was built in 2019 and currently serves as southbound trains only. The station's design consists of flowing, random striations of brown stone tiles.

answer: This article describes Victoria Park, a stop on a transit system. It describes where the stop is located and its features.

answer: This article describes the Victoria Park train station in Kitchener, Ontario, Canada. It is described as a "southbound" station, meaning it only supports trains going southbound, and the closest northbound station is in City Hall.

answer: This article discusses Victoria Park station, which is located in Kitchener. The article is written in an informative voice, aiming to provide a description of the space.

text: The voice of the article is not relevant

refinement: This article discusses Victoria Park station, which is located in Kitchener. The article provides a description of the space.

answer: This is about Victoria Park station on the Region of Waterloo's Ion rapid transit system. The station' s namesake is Victoria Park.


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answer: Blankclothing.ca sells wholesale blank clothing and promotional apparel.

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question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

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answer: Blankclothing.ca is your online store for wholesale blank clothing and promotional apparel at incredibly affordable prices. We stock quality brands like Gildan, Champion, Bella+Canvas, and more.

answer: This is an advertisement for Blankclothing.ca, an online store for wholesale blank clothing and promotional apparel at incredibly affordable prices.

answer: An advertisement for Blankclothing.ca, a Canadian website that sells wholesale blank clothing and promotional apparel.


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Undefeated

***   OUT NOW   ***

A young boxer, ready for the fight of his life. A murderous crime syndicate, wanting a piece of him. An ex-cop and his family, putting their lives on the line to save their own.

When Terry Hawkins gets a shot at the British welterweight title his whole family and community are electrified - until a powerful crime syndicate moves in and starts calling the shots.

Terry finds himself threatened and alone, but can tell his family nothing if he is to keep them alive. As the fight draws near, the thugs up the stakes and take control.

But they have underestimated the rage and resilience of the boxer’s uncle, ex-London copper Harry ‘H’ Hawkins. As Terry buckles under the pressure and the storm clouds gather, H gets on the front foot.

But time is short - can H identify and track down the men responsible for the terror and destruction raining down on his family before his loved ones start to die?

Can he juggle this with the impending death of his father, his struggle with an old adversary aiming to bring him to public disgrace and imprisonment, and his attempt to give his nephew a fighting chance of coming through in one piece?

question: Who saves Terry from the thugs?

answer: Harry Hawkins (H) is the one that saves Terry from the thugs.

text: Extremely minor grammatical error.

refinement: Harry Hawkins (H) is the one who saves Terry from the thugs.

text: The answer does not mention that Harry is Terry's uncle.

refinement: Terry's uncle, Harry Hawkins (H), is the one who saves Terry from the thugs.

text: "As Terry buckles under the pressure and the storm clouds gather, H gets on the front foot" is evidence that Harry is the one who saves Terry from the thugs.

answer: Harry 'H' Hawkins steps in to save Terry from the thugs.

text: Does not mention that Harry is Terry's uncle.

refinement: Harry 'H' Hawkins, Terry's uncle, steps in to save Terry from the thugs.

text: "As Terry buckles under the pressure and the storm clouds gather, H gets on the front foot" is evidence that Harry is the one who saves Terry from the thugs.

answer: His uncle Harry 'H' Hawkins saves Terry from the thugs.

text: ""As Terry buckles under the pressure and the storm clouds gather, H gets on the front foot" is evidence that Harry is the one who saves Terry from the thugs" is evidence that Harry is the one who saves Terry from the thugs.

question: Does H succeed in tracking down the thugs?

text: No answer is given.

answer: Yes, H tracked down the thugs.

text: Unattested--the source material does not provide an answer for this question.

answer: This information cannot be found.

question: Who's father has died?

answer: This information can't be found.

answer: The nephew, Terry Hawkins, is mourning the loss of his uncle, Harry 'H' Hawkins.

text: This is inaccurate. The text does state that Harry's father is dying but has not actually died yet. Harry himself is definitely not the one who has died.

answer: Terry's.

text: There is no evidence to support this.

question: Does Terry make it out of the fight alive?

answer: Yes, Terry makes it out of the fight alive.

text: There is no evidence to support this answer.

answer: Yes, Terry survives, though he loses.

text: It is unclear what "he loses" is referring to.

text: There is no evidence to support this answer.

answer: This information can't be found.

question: Write a ~4 sentence summary.

answer: Undefeated is a psychological thriller about a British boxer who is being targeted by a murderous crime syndicate. His uncle, a former police officer, steps in to help protect him- but it's a race against time to put an end to the criminal organization before they take more lives.

text: There is no evidence to support the genre classification for Undefeated. It can be inferred that the novel is a thriller, but psychological thriller does not seem to fit the synopsis given.

refinement: Undefeated is about a British boxer who is being targeted by a murderous crime syndicate. His uncle, a former police officer, steps in to help protect him- but it's a race against time to put an end to the criminal organization before they take more lives.

text: "When Terry Hawkins gets a shot at the British welterweight title" is evidence that Terry is a British boxed.

text: "until a powerful crime syndicate moves in and starts calling the shots" is evidence that Terry is targeted by a murderous crime syndicate.

text: "ex-London copper Harry ‘H’ Hawkins" is evidence that Harry is a former police officer.

answer: Looking to claim the British welterweight title is Terry Hawkins, but he soon comes under a vicious crime syndicate's control. To keep his family safe, Terry must do everything he can to protect them. However, help may come in the form of his retired police uncle, who will do anything to save his loved ones from unraveling chaos. Will the family be able to spare itself from the syndicate's traps in time, and ultimately prevail?

text: Unclear what exactly Terry does to protect his family.

refinement: Looking to claim the British welterweight title is Terry Hawkins, but he soon comes under a vicious crime syndicate's control. To keep his family safe, Terry must keep them in the dark about his situation. However, help may come in the form of his retired police uncle, who will do anything to save his loved ones from unraveling chaos. Will the family be able to spare itself from the syndicate's traps in time, and ultimately prevail?

text: The phrasing of the final sentence places the focus on the family rather than on the uncle.

refinement: Looking to claim the British welterweight title is Terry Hawkins, but he soon comes under a vicious crime syndicate's control. To keep his family safe, Terry must keep them in the dark about his situation. However, help may come in the form of his retired police uncle, who will do anything to save his loved ones from unraveling chaos. Will Harry, Terry's uncle, be able to spare the family from the syndicate's traps in time, and ultimately prevail?

text: Awkward constructions.

refinement: Terry Hawkins is looking to claim the British welterweight title, but he soon comes under a vicious crime syndicate's control. To keep his family safe, Terry must keep them in the dark about his situation. He gets help in the form of his retired police uncle, who will do anything to save his loved ones from unraveling chaos. Will Harry, Terry's uncle, be able to spare the family from the syndicate's traps in time and ultimately prevail?

text: Some phrases are a bit unclear ("unraveling chaos" and "the syndicate's traps") and possibly misleading.

refinement: Terry Hawkins is looking to claim the British welterweight title, but he soon comes under a vicious crime syndicate's control. To keep his family safe, Terry must keep them in the dark about his situation. He gets help in the form of his retired police uncle, who will do anything to save his loved ones. Will Harry, Terry's uncle, be able to spare the family from the syndicate in time and ultimately prevail?

text: Does not mention the title of the work.

refinement: In Undefeated, Terry Hawkinsis is looking to claim the British welterweight title, but he soon comes under a vicious crime syndicate's control. To keep his family safe, Terry must keep them in the dark about his situation. He gets help in the form of his retired police uncle, who will do anything to save his loved ones. Will Harry, Terry's uncle, be able to spare the family from the syndicate in time and ultimately prevail?

text: "until a powerful crime syndicate moves in and starts calling the shots" is evidence that Terry comes under the control of the crime syndicate.

answer: Undefeated is a thriller about a young boxer protecting his family and community from the murderous crime syndicate that goes after him. Police officer Harry Hawkins joins the fight but time is short, as the crime syndicate threatens to take down the entire Hawkins family if they can't be stopped.

text: There isn't evidence that the community is under threat in addition to Terry's family.

refinement: Undefeated is a thriller about a young boxer protecting his family from the murderous crime syndicate that goes after him. Police officer Harry Hawkins joins the fight but time is short, as the crime syndicate threatens to take down the entire Hawkins family if they can't be stopped.

text: Does not mention that Harry is the Terry's uncle.

refinement: Undefeated is a thriller about a young boxer protecting his family from the murderous crime syndicate that goes after him. His uncle, police officer Harry Hawkins joins the fight but time is short, as the crime syndicate threatens to take down the entire Hawkins family if they can't be stopped.

text: Harry is a former police officer.

refinement: Undefeated is a thriller about a young boxer protecting his family from the murderous crime syndicate that goes after him. His uncle, former police officer Harry Hawkins joins the fight but time is short, as the crime syndicate threatens to take down the entire Hawkins family if they can't be stopped.

text: The phrase "if they can't be stopped" seems unnecessary and only creates confusion.

refinement: Undefeated is a thriller about a young boxer protecting his family from the murderous crime syndicate that goes after him. His uncle, former police officer Harry Hawkins joins the fight but time is short, as the crime syndicate threatens to take down the entire Hawkins family.

text: "But time is short" is evidence that time is short.

text: "Terry finds himself threatened and alone, but can tell his family nothing if he is to keep them alive" is evidence that Terry attempts to protext his family.

text: "A young boxer, ready for the fight of his life" is evidence that Terry is a young boxer.

text: "can H identify and track down the men responsible for the terror and destruction raining down on his family before his loved ones start to die" is evidence that the crime syndicate is targeting the Hawkins family.

answer:
Terry is a young boxer who finds himself surrounded by a powerful crime syndicate. The thugs take control and Terry cannot disclose anything to his family to keep them alive.

Terry's uncle, ex-London copper Harry 'H' Hawkins steps in. Will H identify the men responsible for the terror before his loved ones start to die?

text: Unclear phrasing.

refinement:
Terry is a young boxer who finds himself surrounded by a powerful crime syndicate. The thugs take control, and Terry cannot disclose anything to his family if he wishes to keep them alive.

Terry's uncle, ex-London copper Harry 'H' Hawkins steps in. Will H identify the men responsible for the terror before his loved ones start to die?

text: "A young boxer, ready for the fight of his life. A murderous crime syndicate, wanting a piece of him" is evidence that Terry is a young boxer surrounded by a powerful crime syndicate.

answer: "Undefeated" is the story of a young welterweight boxer, as he enters into a fight for the title and becomes caught in the crosshairs of a violent crime syndicate. His family and community support him, until the crime syndicate starts to take over everything. In the final moments leading up to the fight, his uncle and former cop joins the fight to protect his family. But with time running out, can he stop the crime syndicate before it's too late?

text: Unclear pronoun in last sentence.

refinement: "Undefeated" is the story of a young welterweight boxer, as he enters into a fight for the title and becomes caught in the crosshairs of a violent crime syndicate. His family and community support him, until the crime syndicate starts to take over everything. In the final moments leading up to the fight, his uncle Harry, a former cop, joins the fight to protect his family. But with time running out, can Harry stop the crime syndicate before it's too late?

answer: An undefeated British boxer is drawn into a vicious feud with a criminal syndicate, who start sabotaging his preparations for a title fight. With the help of his uncle, a recently retired detective, he must race against the clock to find and beat his tormentors before they can begin murdering his family.

text: Terry being "undefeated" is unattested.

refinement: A British boxer is drawn into a vicious feud with a criminal syndicate, who start sabotaging his preparations for a title fight. With the help of his uncle, a recently retired detective, he must race against the clock to find and beat his tormentors before they can begin murdering his family.

text: His uncle is a recently retired cop not detective.

refinement: A British boxer is drawn into a vicious feud with a criminal syndicate, who start sabotaging his preparations for a title fight. With the help of his uncle, a recently retired cop, he must race against the clock to find and beat his tormentors before they can begin murdering his family.

text: The answer makes it sound as if Harry is the one primarily attempting to track down and defeat the syndicate, when in actuality it is his uncle.

refinement: A British boxer is drawn into a vicious feud with a criminal syndicate, who start sabotaging his preparations for a title fight. His uncle, a recently retired cop, steps in to help and must race against the clock to find and beat the syndicate before they can begin murdering his family.

text: Does not state the title of the work.

refinement: Undefeated is the story of a British boxer who is drawn into a vicious feud with a criminal syndicate, who start sabotaging his preparations for a title fight. His uncle, a recently retired cop, steps in to help and must race against the clock to find and beat the syndicate before they can begin murdering his family.