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NORMAN EDWARD ALBERT ADAMS RA (9 February 1927 – 9 March 2005) was a British artist, and professor of painting at the Royal Academy Schools.[1][2][3][4][5]

He was married to the English poet and artist Anna Adams (1926–2011).

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title: Norman Adams (British artist)

question: How old was Norman Adams when he passed away?

answer: Norman Adams passed away at the age of 78.

text: Norman Adams' provided lifespan (9 February 1927 – 9 March 2005) is evidence that he passed away at the age of 78.

answer: He was 78 years old.

text: Norman Adams' provided lifespan (9 February 1927 – 9 March 2005) is evidence that he passed away at the age of 78.

answer: 78

text: Norman Adams' provided lifespan (9 February 1927 – 9 March 2005) is evidence that he passed away at the age of 78.

answer: Norman Adams passed away at the age of 78.

text: Norman Adams' provided lifespan (9 February 1927 – 9 March 2005) is evidence that he passed away at the age of 78.

question: In what field did Norman Adams work?

answer: Norman Adams was a British artist.

text: Does not mention that he also worked as a professor.

refinement: Norman Adams was a British artist who also worked in the field of education.

answer: Norman Adams was a British artist.

text: Does not mention that he also worked as a professor.

refinement: Norman Adams was a British artist who also worked in the field of education

answer: He was a professor of painting at the Royal Academy Schools.

text: Does not mention that he was also an artist.

refinement: He was a professor of painting at the Royal Academy Schools and also worked as an artist.

answer: He was an artist and professor of painting at the Royal Academy Schools.

question: Did Norman Adams' wife die before him?

answer: No, his wife survived him.

text: "He was married to the English poet and artist Anna Adams (1926–2011)" is evidence that his wife outlived him (she died in 2011, whereas he died in 2005).

answer: Yes, Anna Adams died in 2011.

text: This is incorrect. His wife died in 2011, whereas he died in 2005.

refinement: No, Anna Adams died in 2011, whereas he died in 2005.

answer: Yes, she died in 2011.

text: This is incorrect.

refinement: No, she died in 2011, whereas he died in 2005.

answer: Yes, according to the passage, Anna Adams (Norman Adams' wife) died in 2011.

text: This is incorrect.

refinement: No, according to the passage, Anna Adams (Norman Adams' wife) died in 2011, whereas he died in 2005.

question: Why is Norman Adams referred to as British and his wife as English?

answer: Norman Adams is referred to as British because he was born in the United Kingdom. His wife is referred to as English because she was born in England.

text: This answer is unattested.

answer: That information can't be found.

answer: Norman Adams was born in Britain, while his wife Anna Adams was born in England.

text: This answer is unattested.

answer: His wife was probably born in England, while Adams was probably born outside England but inside the United Kingdom.

question: Write a ~1 sentence summary.

answer: Norman Edward Albert Adams was a British artist and professor of painting at the Royal Academy Schools.

answer: Norman Adams was a British artist and professor of painting at the Royal Academy Schools.

answer: Norman Alberts was a British artist and professor of painting at the Royal Academy Schools.

answer: Norman Adams was a British artist and professor at the Royal Academy Schools. He was married to the poet and artist Anna Adams.


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text:
The Internal Revenue Service revoked NPI’s 501(c)) nonprofit tax-exempt status because the organization failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years, the Los Angeles Times reported this week.

The revocation was retroactive to May 15 of last year when the nation’s leading alt-right group’s 2015 tax return would have been due. Tax records for nonprofits and charities are available for public inspection, showing total annual donations and how the money is expended, including salaries.

The revocation of NPI’s tax-exempt status brings into question, it appears, any tax-deductible donations given to NPI and claimed on individuals’ tax returns as charitable contributions. NPI’s national visibility grew during last year’s presidential bid of Donald Trump whose candidacy excited the white nationalist views of the alt-right.

The National Policy Institute raised $442,482 in tax-deductible contributions from 2007 through 2012, public records show. Its more recent donation totals aren’t available because required IRS filings weren’t done.

Meanwhile, authorities in Virginia say Spencer and his National Policy Institute, which has an office in Alexandria, aren’t properly registered to solicit funds as a non-profit in that state.

The _Times_ reported Spencer, who became president of NPI in 2011, raised more than $50,000 in donations from an online fundraising drive held during the end of 2016 and the beginning of this year. But as of February, public records maintained by the Virginia Office of Charitable and Regulatory Programs show the National Policy Institute is “not authorized to solicit in Virginia,” the newspaper reported.

Elaine Lidholm, a spokeswoman for the state agency, told the _Times_ that NPI mailed a “registration form to us years ago, but it was incomplete and we requested additional information [but] we never heard back from them.”

The _Times_ said when it requested information about Spencer’s group, Virginia “charity regulators removed the entry for the National Policy Institute from their public database of nonprofits and began a review, which remained active” this week.

Spencer is viewed as a key founder of the alt-right movement, whose followers variously voice support for anti-Semitism, white separatism and European-Aryan supremacy philosophies also promoted by such groups as the Ku Klux Klan, the Aryan Nations and assorted neo-Nazi and national socialist groups.

[Richard Spencer]

After Trump’s election, Spencer addressed the National Policy Institute’s annual conference in December, concluding by shouting, “Hail victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump!” Attendees responded with Hitler-style Nazi salutes.

In media interviews this week, Spencer didn’t accept responsibility for NPI losing its tax-exempt status, but rather told the _Times_ that “an IRS error led him to believe his group was not required to file federal tax returns.”

There is no mention of the development on Spencer’s alt-right web site that he launched on Martin Luther King, Jr.’s birthday in January.

The alt-right figurehead, who splits his time between Arlington, Virginia and Whitefish, Montana, has told reporters he will appeal and attempt to restore his group’s tax-exempt status.

However, as the _Times_ reported, the IRS could raise questions as to whether Spencer and his tax-exempt National Policy Institute violated IRS rules preventing officials of such non-profit organizations from making “partisan comments in official organization publications or at official functions of the organization.”

“I don’t know what to say,” Spencer told the LA newspaper. “I don’t want to make a comment because I don’t understand this stuff. It’s a bit embarrassing, but it’s not good. We’ll figure it out.”

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why did the Internal Revenue Service revoke the NPI's (National Policy Institute) non-profit tax-exempt status?

answer: They didn't file tax returns for three consecutive years as well as Virginia authorities finding out that they weren't properly registered to solicit funds as non-profit in the state of Virginia.

text: the second clause is unnecessary

refinement: They didn't file tax returns for three consecutive years.

text: the pronoun they is ambiguous here because there are two potential objects in the question: NPI and IRS

refinement: NPI didn't file tax returns for three consecutive years.

answer: They failed to file a tax return for three consecutive years.

answer: They failed to file income tax returns for three consecutive years.

answer: The NPI failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years, which resulted in its non-profit tax-exempt status being revoked. This prevents individuals from claiming donations to the group as tax-deductible charitable contributions.

text: Don't need to expound upon the consequences

refinement: The NPI failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years.

answer: The NPI lost its tax-exempt status because they failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years. This brings into question any tax-deductible donations given to the NPI and claimed on individuals' tax returns as charitable contributions. The decision brings into question whether Spencer and his National Policy Institute violated IRS rules.

text: Don't need to expound upon the consequences

refinement: The NPI lost its tax-exempt status because they failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How much did the NPI raise from 2007-2012?

answer: $442,482

answer: $442,482

answer: From 2007-2012, the NPI raised $442,482 in tax-deductible contributions.

answer: Between 2007 and 2012, the NPI raised $442,482 in tax-deductible contributions.

answer: $442,582

text: number slightly off

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Who is the president of the NPI?

answer: Richard Spencer is the president of the NPI.

answer: Richard Spencer is the president of the National Policy Institute.

answer: Richard Spencer.

text: don't need a period

answer: Richard Spencer

answer: Richard Spencer

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

How did Spencer address the NPI's annual conference after Donald Trump as elected President of the United States of America?

answer: He addressed the conference on concluding by shouting "Hail victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump!".

text: awkward wording

refinement: He addressed the conference by shouting "Hail victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump!".

answer: Richard Spencer addressed the National Policy Institute's annual conference in December by shouting "Hail victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump!" Attendees responded with Nazi-style salutes.

answer: He concluded the event by shouting 'Hail Victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump. When his supporters responded with Hitler-style Nazi salutes.

text: awkward wording in the second sentence

refinement: He concluded the event by shouting 'Hail Victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump. Then his supporters responded with Hitler-style Nazi salutes.

answer: Spencer addressed the National Policy Institute's annual conference by shouting, "Hail victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump!" Attendees responded with Hitler-style Nazi salutes.

answer: “Hail victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump!”

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: The National Policy Institute (NPI), a Huntington, Virginia-based Internal Revenue Service-recognized 501(c) nonprofit entity, lost its tax-exempt status because it failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years. As it did not appear in the IRS database when this article was written, no information about the amount of tax it paid is available for the years 2014 through 2016. NPI was founded by white separatist and "alt-right" figurehead Richard Spencer. Spencer is also a key founder of the alt-right, the the anti-Semitic, white separatist, and European-Aryan supremacist philosophies movement. After the election, Richard Spencer addressed his annual conference, concluding with "Hail victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump!"

text: The whole article is about the fact that NPI is not a qualified 501(c) nonprofit entity, so designating it as such in the first sentence is inaccurate.

refinement: The National Policy Institute (NPI) lost its tax-exempt status because it failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years. As it did not appear in the IRS database when this article was written, no information about the amount of tax it paid is available for the years 2014 through 2016. NPI was founded by white separatist and "alt-right" figurehead Richard Spencer. Spencer is also a key founder of the alt-right, the the anti-Semitic, white separatist, and European-Aryan supremacist philosophies movement. After the election, Richard Spencer addressed his annual conference, concluding with "Hail victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump!"

text: the actual taxation numbers aren't relevant to the main thrust of the article

refinement: The National Policy Institute (NPI) lost its tax-exempt status because it failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years. NPI was founded by white separatist and "alt-right" figurehead Richard Spencer. Spencer is also a key founder of the alt-right, the the anti-Semitic, white separatist, and European-Aryan supremacist philosophies movement. After the election, Richard Spencer addressed his annual conference, concluding with "Hail victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump!"

text: Richard Spencer did not found NPI, he is merely its president at the time of this article

refinement: The National Policy Institute (NPI) lost its tax-exempt status because it failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years. White separatist and "alt-right" figurehead Richard Spencer is president of NPI. Spencer is also a key founder of the alt-right, the the anti-Semitic, white separatist, and European-Aryan supremacist philosophies movement. After the election, Richard Spencer addressed his annual conference, concluding with "Hail victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump!"

text: repetition of the word the

refinement: The National Policy Institute (NPI) lost its tax-exempt status because it failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years. White separatist and "alt-right" figurehead Richard Spencer is president of NPI. Spencer is also a key founder of the alt-right, the anti-Semitic, white separatist, and European-Aryan supremacist philosophies movement. After the election, Richard Spencer addressed his annual conference, concluding with "Hail victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump!"

text: Should include the requirement of 501(c) nonprofit entities to be non-partisan, in order to draw attention to the relevance of the last clause (those remarks are partisan).

refinement: The National Policy Institute (NPI) lost its tax-exempt status because it failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years. White separatist and "alt-right" figurehead Richard Spencer is president of NPI. Spencer is also a key founder of the alt-right, the anti-Semitic, white separatist, and European-Aryan supremacist philosophies movement. After the election, Richard Spencer addressed his annual conference, concluding with "Hail victory. Hail our people. Hail Trump!" These blatantly partisan remarks are in direct violation of IRS rules preventing officials of 501(c) non-profit organizations from making "partisan comments in official organization publications or at official functions of the organization."

answer: The Internal Revenue Service has revoked National Policy Institute's 501(c)(3) nonprofit tax-exempt status because the group failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years. The revocation has cast suspicion over tax-deductible donations given to the organization. Richard Spencer, the founder and president of NPI, is alleged to have made partisan comments in official organization publications or at official functions of the organization, contrary to IRS rules.

text: Richard Spencer is not the founder of NPI.

refinement: The Internal Revenue Service has revoked National Policy Institute's 501(c)(3) nonprofit tax-exempt status because the group failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years. The revocation has cast suspicion over tax-deductible donations given to the organization. Richard Spencer, the president of NPI, is alleged to have made partisan comments in official organization publications or at official functions of the organization, contrary to IRS rules.

answer:
The article addresses the loss of NPI's 501(c)) nonprofit tax-exempt status because NPI didn't file tax returns for three consecutive years. In reversing the tax-exempt status of NPI, the article talks about Hyle

NPI's National Policy Institute raised $442,482 in tax-deductible contributions from 2007 through 2012, but its more recent donation totals aren't available because required IRS filings weren't done.

So far, the NPI doesn't accept responsibility for the loss of their tax-exempt status. The organization is not authorized to solicit in Virginia. Richard Hili Spencer, one of their leading figures, has come out, saying they never filed their taxes and that the IRS is at fault. Uh Richard is known as a founder of the alt-right movement.

text: numerous stylistic errors bordering on incoherence

refinement: numerous stylistic errors bordering on incoherence

answer: NPI, the leading alt-right organization in the U.S., had its 501(c)(3) nonprofit tax-exempt status revoked by the Internal Revenue Service due to failure to file tax returns for three consecutive years. This would remove any tax-deductible donations given to NPI as charitable contributions. It's unclear what this development means for alt-right leader Richard Spencer, but Virginia regulators are now reviewing whether Spencer violated IRS rules.

text: violated IRS rules in what context?

refinement: NPI, the leading alt-right organization in the U.S., had its 501(c)(3) nonprofit tax-exempt status revoked by the Internal Revenue Service due to failure to file tax returns for three consecutive years. This would remove any tax-deductible donations given to NPI as charitable contributions. It's unclear what this development means for alt-right leader Richard Spencer, but Virginia regulators are now reviewing whether Spencer violated IRS rules by making partisan comments at NPI's annual conference in December.

answer: The National Policy Institute, a white supremacist organization led by its president Richard Spencer, has had their status as a non-profit revoked after having failed to file tax returns for three consecutive years. According to sources, the group received $442, 582 in tax-deductible contributions between the years 2007-2012 that they did not report. From their Virginia office headquarters, Spencer-in power since 2011 when former president Louis Andrews died-has shirked responsibility for this oversight. Elaine Lidholm, a state agency representative for the IRS, says the NPI sent partially-completed paperwork, but had not responded to requests for additional materials. The NPI has come under national fire for its ties to groups such as the Aryan Brotherhood and the Klu Klux Klan.


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Racism properly belongs in a galaxy long, long ago and far, far away, especially since the “Star Wars” universe features humans, Gungans, Droids, Ewoks and Wookiees.

However, some racists are drawing the line at Asians and are having a hard time dealing with the fact that Vietnamese-American actress Kelly Marie Tran is starring in scenes of the film “Star Wars: The Last Jedi” as Rose Tico.

Last week, someone changed the Rose Tico page on the “Star Wars”-oriented Wookieepedia website to feature a character description that can only be described as flat out racist.

The page text has since been changed back to the original character description, but the screenshot below shows the offensive entry, which includes changing the character’s name to “Ching Chong Wing Tong” and referring to her as “stupid, autistic and retarded.”

Screenshot

FANDOM, the company behind the page, has removed the vandalism and closed off the Rose Tico page from further editing.

In addition, the person who posted the offensive entry has been banned from using Wookieepediaor any other FANDOM wikis, according to Newsweek.

“FANDOM has a zero tolerance policy for vandalism, inclusive of racism and harassment,” the company told Newsweek. “The wiki admins take this very seriously and took the steps to resolve this situation as quickly as possible, including escalation to our team, and subsequent lockdown. This lockdown will remain for the foreseeable future and we will be closely monitoring activity on this wiki.”

There has also been racist trolling of Tran on Twitter, including alt-right internet personality Paul Ray Ramsey who attempted to make fun of the actress’ body with this tweet.

  — RAMZPAUL (@ramzpaul) December 19, 2017

Ramsey’s nastiness inspired other comments of the same ilk. However, other fans were quick to call out the racism.

  While she’s counting all the bank she’s just made, you’ll still be jerking off to your box set of Frazier. The white fragility is too real. 😂😂😂 pic.twitter.com/tVRRBCa67U

  — HARUTO (@LimoJohnson) December 20, 2017

  Hello sir. You are a shithead.

  — Jon 🏒 (@28Loki) December 20, 2017

  You actually could have won the role of Snoke without having to wear makeup.

  — Raymondovitch 🐘 (@boredonliner) December 20, 2017

Tran is the first woman of color to play a leading role in a “Star Wars” movie. Most fans of the series are enjoying her performance as she discovered recently when she overheard a few talking about her character. She talked about the kind comments on Instagram.

question: Which movie is Kelly Marie Tran starring in?

answer: The Last Jedi.

text: "Kelly Marie Tran is starring in scenes of the film “Star Wars: The Last Jedi”" is evidence that the movie she is starring in is called The Last Jedi.

answer: "Star Wars: The Last Jedi"

text: "Kelly Marie Tran is starring in scenes of the film “Star Wars: The Last Jedi”" is evidence that the movie she is starring in is called Star Wars: The Last Jedi.

answer: Star Wars: The Last Jedi.

text: "Kelly Marie Tran is starring in scenes of the film “Star Wars: The Last Jedi”" is evidence that the movie she is starring in is called Star Wars: The Last Jedi.

question: Who is the person behind the offensive post?

answer: This information can't be found.

answer: The text doesn't name the person.

answer: Updated information can not be found. The offensive post was a post on Wookieepedia by an unknown person.

question: What role is Marie playing in the movie?

answer: Rose Tico

text: "Kelly Marie Tran is starring in scenes of the film “Star Wars: The Last Jedi” as Rose Tico" is evidence that Kally Marie Tran plays the role of Rose Tico.

answer: She is playing the role of Rose Tico.

text: "Kelly Marie Tran is starring in scenes of the film “Star Wars: The Last Jedi” as Rose Tico" is evidence that Kally Marie Tran plays the role of Rose Tico.

answer: Rose Tico

text: "Kelly Marie Tran is starring in scenes of the film “Star Wars: The Last Jedi” as Rose Tico" is evidence that Kally Marie Tran plays the role of Rose Tico.

question: Did the post follow a public roar against the racist comments?

answer: Yes, this post talks about the vandal of how upset they are about their racist comment being changed.

text: Phrasing of the answer is confusing.

refinement: Yes, this post talks about how upset the vandal is about their racist comment being changed.

text: The answer has nothing to do with the public outroar in response to the comment.

answer: While some people participated in trolling the actress on Twitter along with Paul Ray Ramsey, others were quick to call out the racism.

text: "However, other fans were quick to call out the racism" is evidence that some fans called out the racism.

answer: Yes, the post followed a public roar against the racist comments.

text: "However, other fans were quick to call out the racism" is evidence that there was public outroar against the racist comments.

question: Write a ~5 sentence summary.

answer: Kelly Marie Tran, who starred in the new 'Star Wars' movie, found out from six strangers when she overheard them talking about her character.

text: The part about Kelly Marie Tran overhearing six strangers talking about her character is unattested.

refinement: Kelly Marie Tran starred in the new 'Star Wars' movie.

text: Does not mention the racist backlash she received.

refinement: Kelly Marie Tran starred in the new 'Star Wars' movie and was the subject of racist backlash due to her being Asian American.

text: Does not mention the FANDOM post.

refinement: Kelly Marie Tran starred in the new 'Star Wars' movie and was the subject of racist backlash due to her being Asian American. This included a racist alteration of her character's page on the Star Wars-oriented Wookieepedia.

text: Omits mention of FANDOM's reaction to the racism.

refinement: Kelly Marie Tran starred in the new 'Star Wars' movie and was the subject of racist backlash due to her being Asian American. This included a racist alteration of her character's page on the Star Wars-oriented Wookieepedia. In response, FANDOM, the company behind the page, banned the user who made the post and locked the page against subsequent edits.

text: "Kelly Marie Tran is starring in scenes of the film “Star Wars: The Last Jedi”" is evidence that Kelly Marie Tran starred in the new Star Wars movie.

answer: This article looks at the racist trolling of a Vietnamese-American actress in the movie "Star Wars: The Last Jedi," who had previously starred in scenes from the film as Rose Tico. The first woman of color to play a leading role in a "Star Wars" movie, Tran has heard from many fans recently about her performances who said some mentally enjoyed her performances and couldn't wait to see more. Racists on Twitter have attacked her looks and complexion but mainly her race. The recent tweets from alt-right internet personality Paul Ray Ramsey about the actress' body, after mocking her racial identity went viral, spurred other similar and more vile messages from other fans.

text: The word "mentally" doesn't make sense here.

refinement: This article looks at the racist trolling of a Vietnamese-American actress in the movie "Star Wars: The Last Jedi," who had previously starred in scenes from the film as Rose Tico. The first woman of color to play a leading role in a "Star Wars" movie, Tran has heard from many fans recently about her performances who said some enjoyed her performances and couldn't wait to see more. Racists on Twitter have attacked her looks and complexion but mainly her race. The recent tweets from alt-right internet personality Paul Ray Ramsey about the actress' body, after mocking her racial identity went viral, spurred other similar and more vile messages from other fans.

text: Omits mention of the Wookieepedia post, which is the main focus of the article.

refinement: This article looks at the racist trolling of a Vietnamese-American actress in the movie "Star Wars: The Last Jedi," who had previously starred in scenes from the film as Rose Tico. The first woman of color to play a leading role in a "Star Wars" movie, Tran has heard from many fans recently about her performances who said some enjoyed her performances and couldn't wait to see more. Racists on Twitter have attacked her looks and complexion but mainly her race. The recent tweets from alt-right internet personality Paul Ray Ramsey about the actress' body, after mocking her racial identity went viral, spurred other similar and more vile messages from other fans. After her character's page on Wookieepedia was vandalized with a racist edit, FANDOM, the company behind the page, banned the user who made the post and locked the page from further edits.

text: "Vietnamese-American actress Kelly Marie Tran is starring in scenes of the film “Star Wars: The Last Jedi” as Rose Tico" is evidence that Kelly Marie Tran is Vietnamese-American and stared in The Last Jedi as Rose Tico.

text: "Tran is the first woman of color to play a leading role in a “Star Wars” movie" is evidence that Kelly Marie Tran is the first woman of color to play a leading role in a Star Wars movie.

text: "There has also been racist trolling of Tran on Twitter" is evidence that Tran suffered racist attacks on Twitter.

answer:
Resent racist comments about "The Last Jedi" Vietnamese-American actress Kelly Marie Tran appeared online last week, as racist trolls targeted her body by posting tweets like Paul Ray Ramsey's tweet that attempted to mock her physique. FANDOM, the company behind the page, closed off the Rose Tico page from further editing. Other comments of the same ilk followed Ramsey's remarks. In addition, the person who posted the offensive entry has been banned from using Wookieepediaor any other FANDOM wikis.

Recent racist comments about Vietnamese-American actress Kelly Marie Tran went viral last week. The racist language and demeaning dialogue pulled from the description of her character, Rose Tico, were written on the Wookieepedia "Star Wars" page. The person that posted this vandalism has been banned from using Wookieepedia or any other FANDOM wiki, according to Newsweek. Tran has been a fan favorite since her casting announcement as the first woman of color to play a leading role in a "Star Wars" movie.

text: Spelling errors

refinement:
Recent racist comments about "The Last Jedi" Vietnamese-American actress Kelly Marie Tran appeared online last week, as racist trolls targeted her body by posting tweets like Paul Ray Ramsey's tweet that attempted to mock her physique. FANDOM, the company behind the page, closed off the Rose Tico page from further editing. Other comments of the same ilk followed Ramsey's remarks. In addition, the person who posted the offensive entry has been banned from using Wookieepedia or any other FANDOM wikis.

Recent racist comments about Vietnamese-American actress Kelly Marie Tran went viral last week. The racist language and demeaning dialogue pulled from the description of her character, Rose Tico, were written on the Wookieepedia "Star Wars" page. The person that posted this vandalism has been banned from using Wookieepedia or any other FANDOM wiki, according to Newsweek. Tran has been a fan favorite since her casting announcement as the first woman of color to play a leading role in a "Star Wars" movie.

text: Much of the second paragraph is redundant as it repeats information contained in the first paragraph.

refinement: Recent racist comments about "The Last Jedi" Vietnamese-American actress Kelly Marie Tran appeared online last week, as racist trolls targeted her body by posting tweets like Paul Ray Ramsey's tweet that attempted to mock her physique. Her character's Wookieepedia page was also edited to include a racist description of the character. FANDOM, the company behind the page, closed off the Rose Tico page from further editing. Other comments of the same ilk followed Ramsey's remarks. In addition, the person who posted the offensive entry has been banned from using Wookieepedia or any other FANDOM wikis. Tran has been a fan favorite since her casting announcement as the first woman of color to play a leading role in a "Star Wars" movie.

text: Does not provide context for the FANDOM post.

refinement: Recent racist comments about "The Last Jedi" Vietnamese-American actress Kelly Marie Tran appeared online last week, as racist trolls targeted her body by posting tweets like Paul Ray Ramsey's tweet that attempted to mock her physique. FANDOM, the company behind the page, closed off the Rose Tico page from further editing. Other comments of the same ilk followed Ramsey's remarks. In addition, the person who posted the offensive entry has been banned from using Wookieepedia or any other FANDOM wikis. Tran has been a fan favorite since her casting announcement as the first woman of color to play a leading role in a "Star Wars" movie.

answer:
As the Vietnamese-American actress, Kelly Marie Tran plays the role of Rose Tico in Star Wars: The Last Jedi, some people have passed racist comments. A character description of Rose Tico on the Wookieepedia paged has been changed to something that is outright racist.

The company behind the page, FANDOM, has banned the person who posted the comment from using any of their FANDOM wikis. The company has also proclaimed that their admins took serious steps to resolve the situation.

Tran is the first woman of color to play a leading role in a Star Wars movie.

text: "Tran is the first woman of color to play a leading role in a “Star Wars” movie" is evidence that Kelly Marie Tran is the first woman of color to play a leading role in a Star Wars movie.

text: "Vietnamese-American actress Kelly Marie Tran is starring in scenes of the film “Star Wars: The Last Jedi” as Rose Tico" is evidence that Kelly Marie Tran is Vietnamese-American and stared in The Last Jedi as Rose Tico.

text: "In addition, the person who posted the offensive entry has been banned from using Wookieepediaor any other FANDOM wikis" is evidence that the perpetrator of the racist was banned.

answer: Kelly Marie Tran is the first woman of color in the Star Wars series to play a leading role and fans of the series have been enjoying her performance. Some have however, responded with unsolicited whining about her presence in the series. Funnily, one moments she caught about word was when one person mentioned her performance as being really good.

text: "unsolicited whining" does not accurately capture the extent of the backlash.

refinement: Kelly Marie Tran is the first woman of color in the Star Wars series to play a leading role and fans of the series have been enjoying her performance. Some have however, responded to her presence in the series with racist remarks. Funnily, one moments she caught about word was when one person mentioned her performance as being really good.

text: Highlighting the last line gives an inaccurate impression of the overall response.

refinement: Kelly Marie Tran is the first woman of color in the Star Wars series to play a leading role and fans of the series have been enjoying her performance. Some have however, responded to her presence in the series with racist remarks.

text: Doesn't mention the Wookieepedia page controversy.

refinement: Kelly Marie Tran is the first woman of color in the Star Wars series to play a leading role and fans of the series have been enjoying her performance. Some have however, responded to her presence in the series with racist remarks. Her Wookieepedia page, for example, was edited to include a racist description of the character. FANDOM, the company behind the page, responded by banning the perpetrator and locking the page against further edits.

text: Grammar--missing comma

refinement: Kelly Marie Tran is the first woman of color in the Star Wars series to play a leading role and fans of the series have been enjoying her performance. Some have, however, responded to her presence in the series with racist remarks. Her Wookieepedia page, for example, was edited to include a racist description of the character. FANDOM, the company behind the page, responded by banning the perpetrator and locking the page against further edits.

text: "Tran is the first woman of color to play a leading role in a “Star Wars” movie" is evidence that Kelly Marie Tran is the first woman of color to play a leading role in a Star Wars movie.

answer: Last Wednesday, a Wookiepedia page for Rose Tico which will be a new character in "Star Wars: The Last Jedi" attracted racist comments. The page for Tico on the "Star Wars"-themed Wookieepedia website, which may be found here, was vandalized with racist language and a "flat out racist" entry. FANDOM, the company behind the page, has removed the vandalism and closed off the Rose Tico page from further editing, and the person who posted the offensive entry has been banned from using Wookieepediaor any other FANDOM wikis. Tolerate displays of racism.

text: Last line is a sentence fragment and unnecessary.

refinement: Last Wednesday, a Wookiepedia page for Rose Tico which will be a new character in "Star Wars: The Last Jedi" attracted racist comments. The page for Tico on the "Star Wars"-themed Wookieepedia website, which may be found here, was vandalized with racist language and a "flat out racist" entry. FANDOM, the company behind the page, has removed the vandalism and closed off the Rose Tico page from further editing, and the person who posted the offensive entry has been banned from using Wookieepediaor any other FANDOM wikis.

text: The date of Wednesday is unattested.

refinement: The week prior to the posting of the article, a Wookiepedia page for Rose Tico which will be a new character in "Star Wars: The Last Jedi" attracted racist comments. The page for Tico on the "Star Wars"-themed Wookieepedia website, which may be found here, was vandalized with racist language and a "flat out racist" entry. FANDOM, the company behind the page, has removed the vandalism and closed off the Rose Tico page from further editing, and the person who posted the offensive entry has been banned from using Wookieepediaor any other FANDOM wikis.

text: Grammar and spelling errors

refinement: The week prior to the posting of the article, a Wookiepedia page for Rose Tico, a new character in "Star Wars: The Last Jedi", attracted racist comments. The page for Tico on the "Star Wars"-themed Wookieepedia website, which may be found here, was vandalized with racist language and a "flat-out racist" entry. FANDOM, the company behind the page, has removed the vandalism and closed off the Rose Tico page from further editing, and the person who posted the offensive entry has been banned from using Wookieepedia or any other FANDOM wikis.

text: Does not mention Kelly Marie Tran.

refinement: The week prior to the posting of the article, a Wookiepedia page for Rose Tico, a new character in "Star Wars: The Last Jedi", attracted racist comments. Rose Tico is played by Kelly Marie Tran, a Vietnamese-American and the first woman of color to have a leading role in a Star Wars film. The page for Tico on the "Star Wars"-themed Wookieepedia website, which may be found here, was vandalized with racist language and a "flat-out racist" entry. FANDOM, the company behind the page, has removed the vandalism and closed off the Rose Tico page from further editing, and the person who posted the offensive entry has been banned from using Wookieepedia or any other FANDOM wikis.

text: "which may be found here" should be removed, as the answer does not contain a link.

refinement: The week prior to the posting of the article, a Wookiepedia page for Rose Tico, a new character in "Star Wars: The Last Jedi", attracted racist comments. Rose Tico is played by Kelly Marie Tran, a Vietnamese-American and the first woman of color to have a leading role in a Star Wars film. The page for Tico on the "Star Wars"-themed Wookieepedia website was vandalized with racist language and a "flat-out racist" entry. FANDOM, the company behind the page, has removed the vandalism and closed off the Rose Tico page from further editing, and the person who posted the offensive entry has been banned from using Wookieepedia or any other FANDOM wikis.


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_LAST DAY OF SUMMER_ is a collaborative studio album by British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat. It was released on 7 October 2009 under the imprint of Underdogma Records.[1]

Production

In 2006, Nick Hannon spoke to William Mecum of Karma to Burn, asking if he would be interested in coming to the United Kingdom to record with Sons of Alpha Centauri. Mecum accepted and chose to bring Roy Brewer, the drummer from Treasure Cat, his band at the time.[2] Mecum and Brewer recorded three tracks with members of Sons of Alpha Centauri under the moniker Alpha Cat, with the final album also consisting of four Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks and four Treasure Cat tracks. The collaborative, co-produced split release was deemed to be one of the first of its kind.[3]

The Alpha Cat and Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks were recorded with Jim Riley at Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent, while the Treasure Cat tracks were recorded at Zone 8 Studios in Granville, West Virginia.[4] The recording and release of the album marked the beginning of an ongoing working partnership between Sons of Alpha Centauri and Karma to Burn.[5]

Themes

Although the music contain no lyrics, the artwork, composed by Jimbo Valentine,[6] is visibly influenced by conspiracy theories such as the New World Order, the moon landing hoax, the writings of Zecharia Sitchin, Anglo-American relations (including the Special Relationship) and mass surveillance.[7]

Critical reception

Upon its release, _Last Day of Summer_ received generally favourable reviews from music critics, receiving an average score of 3.67 out of 5 on Rate Your Music.[8] _Lords of Metal_ described the album as “varied, strong, steaming, superb production and set into a great jacket.”[9] Of the album's instrumental nature, _The Sleeping Shaman_ said that the “vocals are not missed at all, due to the dynamic feel and structure of the music.”[10]

_Altsounds_ commented that the album strayed away from Sons of Alpha Centauri's usual sound, stating that “whereas they previously lulled us into a false sense of calm before ripping across the musical spectrum like cutting comment at a hostile band practice, here they unleash the beast and just give us the best of everything they've got.”[11] _Disagreement.net_ praised the collaborative Alpha Cat tracks, stating that they “link [the two bands'] genres which after all are not that dissimilar to make _Last Day of Summer_ an incoherent listening experience.”[12] Steve Howe of The Sludgelord, a rock blog, described the album as “a sprawling instrumental stoner rock odyssey packed with blazing riffs from two bands at the top of their game,” adding that he felt it was “one of 2009's best instrumental rock albums.”[13]

_Deaf Sparrow_ gave the album a mixed review, commenting that the Alpha Cat tracks “are scrambled in the sequence, perhaps as an effort to put both bands in the same plane.”[14] _RockFreaks.net_ were pleased with the album but did not find it unique, stating that “if you disregard the undeniable excitement that comes from realizing how this project approaches genius in the way that it has been put together, the songs aren't actually that amazing as standalone tracks.”[15]

Track listing

Personnel

Credits for _Last Day of Summer_ adapted from Discogs.[16]

-   Rory Alderson – engineer
-   Stevie B. – drums
-   Blake – sound manipulation
-   Roy Brewer – drums
-   Matthew Cross – bass guitar
-   Marlon King – electric guitar
-   Wesley King – photography
-   Nick Hannon – bass guitar
-   William Mecum – electric guitar
-   Mark Poole – producer, mixing
-   Jim Riley – producer, mastering
-   Bob Williams – photography

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title: Last Day of Summer (Sons of Alpha Centauri and Treasure Cat album)

question: What is the Last Day of Summer?

answer: The Last Day of Summer is a collaborative studio album by British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat.

text: "LAST DAY OF SUMMER is a collaborative studio album by British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat" is evidence that Last Day of Summer is a collaborative album by both bands.

answer: The Last Day of Summer is an instrumental album.

text: It omits mentioning that the album is collaborative one by Sons of Alpha Centauri and Thunder Cat.

refinement: The Last Day of Summer is an instrumental album.

text: "one of 2009's best instrumental rock albums" is evidence that it is an instrumental album.

answer: It is a collaborative studio album by British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat released in 2007.

text: It falsely states that the album was released in 2007, it was released in 2009.

refinement: It is a collaborative studio album by British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat released in 2009.

text: "LAST DAY OF SUMMER is a collaborative studio album by British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat" is evidence that Last Day of Summer is a collaborative album by both bands.

question: What is Alpha Cat?

answer: It is an amalgamation of British band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American band Treasure Cat.

text: "Mecum and Brewer recorded three tracks with members of Sons of Alpha Centauri under the moniker Alpha Cat" is evidence that the name came from both bands.

answer: Alpha Cat is the moniker the two instrumental rock bands Treasure Cat and Sons of Alpha Centauri used for their collaborative album.

text: "Mecum and Brewer recorded three tracks with members of Sons of Alpha Centauri under the moniker Alpha Cat" is evidence that Alpha Cat was the moniker of both bands' collaborative album.

answer: Nick Hannon spoke to William Mecum of Karma to Burn and asked if they would be interested in coming to the UK to record with Sons of Alpha Centauri. Mecum came with Roy Brewer and the drummer from Treasure Cat, his band at the time. Alpha Cat was created out of that collaboration. They recorded three tracks with Sons of Alpha Centauri.

text: "Mecum and Brewer recorded three tracks with members of Sons of Alpha Centauri under the moniker Alpha Cat" is evidence that Alpha Cat was the moniker of both bands' collaborative album.

question: Where was The Last Day of Summer album recorded?

answer: The Alpha Cat and Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks were recorded with Jim Riley at Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent, while the Treasure Cat tracks were recorded at Zone 8 Studios in Granville, West Virginia.

text: "The Alpha Cat and Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks were recorded with Jim Riley at Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent, while the Treasure Cat tracks were recorded at Zone 8 Studios in Granville, West Virginia" is evidence that the album was recorded in both, Rochester, Kent and Granville, West Virginia.

answer: Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent.

text: It omits mentioning that the other half of the album was recorded in Granville, West Virginia.

refinement: The Alpha Cat and Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks were recorded with Jim Riley at Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent, while the Treasure Cat tracks were recorded at Zone 8 Studios in Granville, West Virginia.

text: "The Alpha Cat and Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks were recorded with Jim Riley at Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent" is evidence that part of the album was recorded in Rochester, Kent.

answer: Three songs were recorded at Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent and the rest were recorded at Zone 8 Studios in Granville, West Virginia, United States.

text: It was actually 3 Alpha Cat and Sons of Alpha Centauri + 4 Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks recorded at Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent. And 4 Treasure Cats recoreded at ZOne 8 Studios in Granville, West Virginia.

refinement: Seven songs were recorded at Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent and four were recorded at Zone 8 Studios in Granville, West Virginia, United States.

question: What did the critics say about the Last Day of Summer album when it was released?

answer: The album received generally favorable reviews from music critics.

text: "Upon its release, _Last Day of Summer_ received generally favourable reviews from music critics" is evidence that the album received generally favorable reviews.

answer:
Generally favorable reviews
A sprawling instrumental stoner rock odyssey packed with blazing riffs from two bands at the top of their game.

text: It omits mentioning that it was Steve Howe of The Sludgelord, a rock blog, that described the album as "A sprawling instrumental stoner rock odyssey..."

refinement: Generally favorable reviews. Steve Howe of The Sludgelord rock block described it as a sprawling instrumental stoner rock odyssey packed with blazing riffs from two bands at the top of their game.

answer: The album received generally favourable reviews from music critics, with a rating of 3.67 out of 5 on Rate Your Music.

text: "Last Day of Summer_ received generally favourable reviews from music critics, receiving an average score of 3.67 out of 5 on Rate Your Music" is evidence of the album receiving favorable reviews.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer: Last Day of Summer is a collaborative studio album created by British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat. It includes five Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks and five Treasure Cat tracks. The Alpha Cat and Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks were recorded with Jim Riley at Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent, while the Treasure Cat tracks were recorded at Zone 8 Studios in Granville, West Virginia. The album marked the beginning of an ongoing working partnership between Sons of Alpha Centauri and Karma to Burn. The music contains no lyrics, but the artwork, composed by Jimbo Valentine, is visibly influenced by conspiracy theories such as the New World Cup, the moon landing hoax, Anglo-American relations, mass surveillance, and more. Critically received as one of the first co-produced split releases, critics felt the album genuinely succeeded in crossing genres and was a contributing factor to the beginning of a working partnership between Sons of Alpha Centauri and Karma to Burn.

text: The number of tracks of each band in the album is misrepresented.

refinement: Last Day of Summer is a collaborative studio album created by British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat. It includes four Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks and four Treasure Cat tracks. The Alpha Cat and Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks were recorded with Jim Riley at Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent, while the Treasure Cat tracks were recorded at Zone 8 Studios in Granville, West Virginia. The album marked the beginning of an ongoing working partnership between Sons of Alpha Centauri and Karma to Burn. The music contains no lyrics, but the artwork, composed by Jimbo Valentine, is visibly influenced by conspiracy theories such as the New World Cup, the moon landing hoax, Anglo-American relations, mass surveillance, and more. Critically received as one of the first co-produced split releases, critics felt the album genuinely succeeded in crossing genres and was a contributing factor to the beginning of a working partnership between Sons of Alpha Centauri and Karma to Burn.

text: It inaccurately mentions the album is influenced by conspiracy theories such as the "New World Cup" instead of "New World Order".

refinement: Last Day of Summer is a collaborative studio album created by British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat. It includes four Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks and four Treasure Cat tracks. The Alpha Cat and Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks were recorded with Jim Riley at Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent, while the Treasure Cat tracks were recorded at Zone 8 Studios in Granville, West Virginia. The album marked the beginning of an ongoing working partnership between Sons of Alpha Centauri and Karma to Burn. The music contains no lyrics, but the artwork, composed by Jimbo Valentine, is visibly influenced by conspiracy theories such as the New World Order, the moon landing hoax, Anglo-American relations, mass surveillance, and more. Critically received as one of the first co-produced split releases, critics felt the album genuinely succeeded in crossing genres and was a contributing factor to the beginning of a working partnership between Sons of Alpha Centauri and Karma to Burn.

text: "the beginning of a working partnership between Sons of Alpha Centauri and Karma to Burn" is redundant and misses to point out what critics say.

refinement: Last Day of Summer is a collaborative studio album created by British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat. It includes four Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks and four Treasure Cat tracks. The Alpha Cat and Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks were recorded with Jim Riley at Ranscombe Studios in Rochester, Kent, while the Treasure Cat tracks were recorded at Zone 8 Studios in Granville, West Virginia. The album marked the beginning of an ongoing working partnership between Sons of Alpha Centauri and Karma to Burn. The music contains no lyrics, but the artwork, composed by Jimbo Valentine, is visibly influenced by conspiracy theories such as the New World Order, the moon landing hoax, Anglo-American relations, mass surveillance, and more. Upon its release, the album received generally favorable reviews from music critics.

answer: Do you believe music objects can carry or communicate meaning? To the Sons of Alpha Centauri, music is a personal outlet in their many physical, creative processes. In 2006, the band approached Karma to Burn to collaboratively write their album "Last Day of Summer." This album is the first of its kind; not only because it is an instrumental album, but because it is co-produced. Sons of Alpha Centauri and Treasure Cat compliment the soundscape with their individual rock melodies, which also include messages embedded between the lines.

text: There is no evidence that implies that music is a personal outlet for the Sons of Alpha Centauri's creative processes.

refinement: In 2006, the band approached Karma to Burn to collaboratively write their album "Last Day of Summer." This album is the first of its kind; not only because it is an instrumental album, but because it is co-produced. Sons of Alpha Centauri and Treasure Cat compliment the soundscape with their individual rock melodies, which also include messages embedded between the lines.

text: There's no evidence that the entire bad approached Karma to Burn. It was Nick Hannon who approached Karma to Burn.

refinement: In 2006, Nick Hannon approached Karma to Burn to collaboratively write their album "Last Day of Summer." This album is the first of its kind; not only because it is an instrumental album, but because it is co-produced. Sons of Alpha Centauri and Treasure Cat compliment the soundscape with their individual rock melodies, which also include messages embedded between the lines.

text: There is no evidence to suggest that the album includes messages embedded between the lines.

refinement: In 2006, Nick Hannon approached Karma to Burn to collaboratively write their album "Last Day of Summer." This album is the first of its kind; not only because it is an instrumental album, but because it is co-produced. Sons of Alpha Centauri and Treasure Cat compliment the soundscape with their individual rock melodies.

answer: Sons of Alpha Centauri collaborated with Treasure Cat to create an album with eight instrumental tracks. The musical content is complex and instrumental, but does not have any vocals.

text: It appears that the album consists of 11 tracks, instead of 8.

refinement: Sons of Alpha Centauri collaborated with Treasure Cat to create an album with eleven instrumental tracks. The musical content is complex and instrumental, but does not have any vocals.

text: There is no evidence to suggest that the content is complex.

refinement: Sons of Alpha Centauri collaborated with Treasure Cat to create an album with eleven instrumental tracks. The musical content is instrumental, but does not have any vocals.

text: "but does not have any vocals" can be omitted as it is already stated that the album is instrumental.

refinement: Sons of Alpha Centauri collaborated with Treasure Cat to create an album with eleven instrumental tracks. The musical content is instrumental.

answer: Sons of Alpha Centauri and Treasure Cat combined in a collaborative studio album. This album has no vocals and no lyrics, and is in the genre of instrumental rock.

text: It omits mentioning the name of the album.

refinement: Sons of Alpha Centauri and Treasure Cat combined in a collaborative studio album, Last Day of Summer. This album has no vocals and no lyrics, and is in the genre of instrumental rock.

text: "collaborative studio album by British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat" is evidence of the collaboration.

answer: The album is a collaborative release between British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat. The album itself contains no lyrics and is composed of four Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks, four Treasure Cat tracks, and six Alpha Cat tracks. The album was received favourably by critics and is said to have created the genre of instrumental stoner rock.

text: The albums actually contains three Alpha Cat tracks.

refinement: The album is a collaborative release between British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat. The album itself contains no lyrics and is composed of four Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks, four Treasure Cat tracks, and three Alpha Cat tracks. The album was received favourably by critics and is said to have created the genre of instrumental stoner rock.

text: It omits mentioning the name of the album.

refinement: Last Day of Summer is an album collaborative between British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat. The album itself contains no lyrics and is composed of four Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks, four Treasure Cat tracks, and three Alpha Cat tracks. The album was received favourably by critics and is said to have created the genre of instrumental stoner rock.

text: "The album was received favourably by critics and is said to have created the genre of instrumental stoner rock" misrepresents what critics said.

refinement: Last Day of Summer is an album collaborative between British instrumental rock band Sons of Alpha Centauri and American instrumental rock band Treasure Cat. The album itself contains no lyrics and is composed of four Sons of Alpha Centauri tracks, four Treasure Cat tracks, and three Alpha Cat tracks. The album was received favourably by critics and Steve Howe of The Sludgelord, a rock blog, described the album as “a sprawling instrumental stoner rock odyssey packed with blazing riffs from two bands at the top of their game.

answer: The Last Day of Summer is a collaborative album from instrumental rock bands Sons of Alpha Centauri (UK) and Treasure Cat (USA) released on October 7, 2009, under the moniker "Alpha Cat." The collaborative, co-produced split release was deemed to be one of the first of its kind at the time. The Last Days of Summer received generally favorable reviews from music critics and an average score of 3.67 out of 5 on Rate Your Music.

text: It falsely suggests that the entire album was released under the moniker "Alpha Cat", however it was only three tracks under the moniker.

refinement: The Last Day of Summer is a collaborative album from instrumental rock bands Sons of Alpha Centauri (UK) and Treasure Cat (USA) released on October 7, 2009. Three tracks were recorded under the moniker "Alpha Cat." The collaborative, co-produced split release was deemed to be one of the first of its kind at the time. The Last Days of Summer received generally favorable reviews from music critics and an average score of 3.67 out of 5 on Rate Your Music.


text:
-An Introduction-

We set out at around five pm. It was a Saturday.

We drifted out with no general direction, no destination to cap off what was sure to be, as Darren often stated, “one hell of a road trip, bitch!”
In those early days we contemplated the “great western gap”, (“Great Western Vag”, Yaemon often quoted when bored), otherwise known as Grand Canyon. Hell, it looked cool in Into The Wild (2007), and some stuntdriver hopped it back in the 90’s or something.  And Thelma n Louise (1991) had their famous lesbo burn out there as well, (earning many brownie points with Meg n  Margaret, who where known to sometimes dabble in a little sumin summin every now and then, a secret burden they would keep to their grave.)

Somewhere in New Mexico we inevitably fell astray of our possible destination, instead winding up at the chicken restaurant featured in Breaking Bad(2008-2012), and making fools of ourselves by going on a 15 minute photo spree, re-enacting bits of the show for all to see, uploaded to all the facebooks and twitters of the world, as if in defiance, boldly stating “WE ARE GRADUATES AND WE’RE STILL RELEVANT!, MOTHERFUCKERS!”.

 In retrospect it was a foolish, good ol’ reddit style meta-circle-jerk, living in the flesh; Internet meme mythos consolidated in the subconscious mind of the Millennial’s of the world, and asserting itself on some  primordial level in the modern world.

Yeamon Milo  (23) Was definitely Pedobear. A closet creeper that hid behind the mask of stupidity to consummate his horrific fantasies, but we didn’t catch on until it was too late. I guess you could argue he turned into Insanity Wolf towards the end there, a real fucking monster, but more on that later.

Darren Wolodarsky (19) was a definite Conspiracy Keanu.  Always smelling of reefer and speaking in hushed, harsh tones in public. Only in the seclusion of hot boxed garages and smoked out pads of middle America suburbia, safe haven of the “lazy stoners”, did he reveal his true knack of comedic timing and brilliant wordplay he’d learned specifically to perform to this small, private audience. I guess you could call him a bit of a Jekyll n Hyde of Socially Awkward/Awesome penguin, of meme fame.

Pancho “Peter” Vasquez (21)  was a Good Guy Greg for sure, blunt and all. Always a pleasant person to be around, he saved our asses back during the Great Drug Scare of ’12, something we never really were able to pay him back for before it all came crashing down.  A smart theologian who always questioned what exactly spirituality meant to him. A most honest man.

Meg Blanco (17) was still legally a minor, and not even a high school graduate, but she was eventually accepted as the Naïve College Girl. After the tragic incidents that befell us at Death Mountain, her bass playing skills had become the stuff of legends, and the simple 3 track demo tape she released online (“Dark Heart Melodies”, May 3, 2009) for free all those years ago got a post-mortem revival which eventually catapulted the track “Blue Dream” (5/5 on Pitchfork) , to the no.1 top billboard spot for a record breaking 20 weeks. I guess she could also be referred to as a “Marlene” (of Adventure Time fame).

Margaret Thatcher (20 and yes, ironically named) The closest one you could consider to be a “hipster”, whatever that vague blanket term means. Arts and crafts. Thick rimmed glasses. Long blonde hair.  Into the Beatles, but only if it was on vinyl. Hit up the arthouse scene from time to time , dabbling in it every now and then, some would say for street cred, others not so much.

So as I was saying before, this motley crew of various graduates and collegiate level students all got packed into Wolodarsky’s Mystery Van and spent the better part of the day laying on the shag carpet in the back, a personal party room on four wheels, all of us just lying face up to get a better view of the rainbow fractals drifting across the ceiling,.

Oh, the van was also blacklight equipped.

After visiting the Breaking Bad set, we decided to wander our way up to the frigid northern region to find the fabled mass E.T.  (Atari, 1982) burial sites. We all had agreed that this was a sound venture to embark upon, and so it went!

Actually, we should stop at this point of the trip, and observe a few things, because the shit that goes down here eventually causes a fucking hurricane later down the road. Planted the seeds of destruction, if you will.

It all went back to the incident we went through one night that freaked us out for a few months, but we cant start there, no, far too dark and dreary. We’ll start here instead, an earlier memory from the final days of blissful; solace, before deterioration.

title: An Introduction  (original stuffs)

question: Who is Meg Blanco?

answer: A 17-year-old bass player.

text: The narrator describes Meg's personality with a meme, specifically the Naive College Girl. It should be mentioned.

refinement: A 17-year-old bass player resembling the Naive College Girl meme.

text: She's the youngest member of the friend group.

refinement: A 17-year-old bass player resembling the Naive College Girl meme. She's the youngest one present in the group.

text: "Meg Blanco (17) ... her bass playing skills had become the stuff of legends"

answer: Meg Blanco is 17 in the story, the narrator says (in 9th grade) she is the "Naïve College Girl" of the group.-Meg Blanco is Bassist when the group is formed. She is still 17 in the story.

text: No one is in the 9th grade.

refinement: Meg Blanco is 17 in the story, the narrator says she is the "Naïve College Girl" of the group.-Meg Blanco is Bassist when the group is formed. She is still 17 in the story.

text: "When the group is formed" implies that there's a band involved, and Meg is there in that context. That is wrong.

refinement: Meg Blanco is 17 in the story, the narrator says she is the "Naïve College Girl" of the group.-Meg Blanco is a Bassist. She is still 17 in the story.

text: No need to repeat Meg's age.

refinement: Meg Blanco is 17 in the story, the narrator says she is the "Naïve College Girl" of the group.-Meg Blanco is a Bassist.

text: Flow can be improved.

refinement: Meg Blanco is 17 in the story, and the narrator says she is the "Naïve College Girl" of the group. She is a bassist.

text: She's the youngest member of the friend group.

refinement: Meg Blanco is 17 in the story, and the narrator says she is the "Naïve College Girl" of the group. She is a bassist and the youngest of the group.

text: "Meg Blanco (17) ... her bass playing skills had become the stuff of legends"

text: "she was eventually accepted as the Naïve College Girl."

answer: Meg Blanco is 17 years old and an excellent bass player. She's the youngest member of this friend group.

text: The narrator describes Meg's personality with a meme, specifically the Naive College Girl. It should be mentioned.

refinement: Meg Blanco is 17 years old and an excellent bass player. She's the youngest member of this friend group. The narrator describes her as a Naive College Girl.

text: Bass player: "Meg Blanco (17) ... her bass playing skills had become the stuff of legends"

text: Everyone else mentioned in the story is indeed older than 17.

question: Who is Darren Wolodarsky?

answer: Darren Wolodarsky appears to be the leader of the group, setting the path for their road trip and encouraging them to stop in places of interest. He is often jokey and funny, but also smart, especially when it comes to conspiracy theories and odd pieces of knowledge.

text: Darren isn't mentioned to be the leader setting the path etc.

refinement: Darren Wolodarsky is often jokey and funny, but also smart, especially when it comes to conspiracy theories and odd pieces of knowledge.

text: Darren is only jokey in the privacy of seclusion.

refinement: Darren Wolodarsky is jokey and funny only with the private audience of the group, but also smart, especially when it comes to conspiracy theories and odd pieces of knowledge.

text: Darren isn't described as generally smart. His comedic timing and wordplay are outlined specifically.

refinement: Darren Wolodarsky is jokey and funny only with the private audience of the group, but also smart when it comes to comedic timing and wordplay, conspiracy theories and odd pieces of knowledge.

text: Darren is usually a "Conspiracy Keanu" in public, but he's not described as smart about it.

refinement: Darren Wolodarsky is jokey and funny only with the private audience of the group, but also smart when it comes to comedic timing and wordplay, and a Conspiracy Keanu otherwise.

answer: Darren Wolodarsky is 19, fond of cannabis, and interested in conspiracy theories. Other members of the friend group find him very entertaining.

text: Other people could also find him entertaining but he doesn't show that side of him outside his friend group.

refinement: Darren Wolodarsky is 19, fond of cannabis, and interested in conspiracy theories. He's an entertaining person but doesn't show that side of him outside his friend group.

text: Describing Darren as a "Conspiracy Keanu" means something more, and more specific, than him being interested in conspiracy theories.

refinement: Darren Wolodarsky is 19, fond of cannabis, and described as a Conspiracy Keanu. He's an entertaining person but doesn't show that side of him outside his friend group.

text: Age, conspiracy tendencies, and cannabis proof: "Darren Wolodarsky (19) was a definite Conspiracy Keanu. Always smelling of reefer and..."

answer: Darren Wolodarsky appears to be one of the main characters in the journey being described. He is seemingly often the person to initiate planning for various adventures, and seems to be quite adept at witty wordplay.

text: Darren isn't the one to initiate adventures or planning.

refinement: Darren Wolodarsky appears to be one of the main characters in the journey being described. He seems to be quite adept at witty wordplay.

text: Darren is a pothead.

refinement: Darren Wolodarsky appears to be one of the main characters in the journey being described. He is a pothead and seems to be quite adept at witty wordplay.

text: Darren shows his witty side only to his friend group.

refinement: Darren Wolodarsky appears to be one of the main characters in the journey being described. He is a pothead and seems to be quite adept at witty wordplay in privacy with his friends.

text: He's described as a "Conspiracy Keanu". It's an important moniker that describes his personality.

refinement: Darren Wolodarsky appears to be one of the main characters in the journey being described and described as a "Conspiracy Keanu". He is a pothead and seems to be quite adept at witty wordplay in privacy with his friends.

text: Flow can be better.

refinement: Darren Wolodarsky is one of the main characters in the journey, described as a "Conspiracy Keanu". He is a pothead and seems to be quite adept at witty wordplay in privacy with his friends.

question: Who is Margaret Thatcher?

answer: Not answered

text: There's a paragraph describing Margaret Thatcher.

refinement: Margaret Thatcher, ironically named, is the hipster of the group. She sometimes dabbles in art.

answer: Margaret Thatcher is the most trend-conscious membre of the friend group. She's into the arts, but some might guess that it's a performative interest.

text: She's not called a trend-conscious person.

refinement: She's into the arts, but some might guess that it's a performative interest.

text: Her interest in art is considered to be for street cred by some, not so by others.

refinement: She's into the arts, some say it's for street cred, others don't.

text: She's described as a hipster.

refinement: She's into the arts, some say it's for street cred, others don't. She's the most "hipster" person in the group.

text: Grammar can be better.

refinement: She's into the arts; some say it's for street cred, others don't. She's the most "hipster" person in the group.

text: "Margaret Thatcher ... Arts and crafts."

answer: This text does not answer this question.

text: There's a paragraph describing Margaret Thatcher.

refinement: Margaret Thatcher, ironically named, is the hipster of the group. She sometimes dabbles in art.

question: Where is this group of young people headed?

answer: The story doesn't say but it seems it is directed towards the Western gap, picribed as the "Great Western Vag," probably referring to the Grand Canyon.

text: The narrator clearly states that they set out without a final destination in mind.

refinement: They head out without a final destination in mind.

answer: on a road trip to the Grand Canyon

text: The group heads out without a final destination in mind. They think about going to the Grand Canyon but fall astray on their way.

refinement: They don't have a clear direction. They think about going to the Grand Canyon but fall astray on their way.

answer: Grand Canyon

text: The group heads out without a final destination in mind. They think about going to the Grand Canyon but fall astray on their way.

refinement: They don't have a clear direction. They think about going to the Grand Canyon but fall astray on their way.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

text: No summary is written.

refinement: A group of friends heads out for adventure in a van without a direction or destination in mind. The narrator describes the members; Yaemon Milo (23) as a Pedobear, Darren Wolodarsky (19) as a Conspiracy Keanu, Pancho "Peter" Vasquez (21) as a Good Guy Greg, Meg Blanco (17) as a Naive College Girl, and Margaret Thatcher (20) as a hipster. The story begins on their last few happy days before the dark and dreary events begin.

answer: I, Peter Vasquez, wrote an introduction to my lost journal.

text: The story isn't really summarized, and the only sentence written is wrong.

refinement: A group of friends heads out for adventure in a van without a direction or destination in mind. The narrator describes the members; Yaemon Milo (23) as a Pedobear, Darren Wolodarsky (19) as a Conspiracy Keanu, Pancho "Peter" Vasquez (21) as a Good Guy Greg, Meg Blanco (17) as a Naive College Girl, and Margaret Thatcher (20) as a hipster. The story begins on their last few happy days before the dark and dreary events begin.

answer: A group of young people are on a road trip to the grand canyon. They range in age from 17 - 23. A number of them are fond of cannabis.

text: The group doesn't have a destination in mind. They think of going to the Grand Canyon but fall astray.

refinement: A group of young people contemplates going to the grand canyon but falls astray. They range in age from 17 - 23. A number of them are fond of cannabis.

text: A member of the group is described as a "Pedobear", and it's their last few happy days before dark times. These are both more important than cannabis-loving members.

refinement: A group of young people contemplates going to the grand canyon but falls astray. They range in age from 17 - 23. A member of the group is described as a "Pedobear", and it's their last few happy days before dark times.

answer: On a road trip in the southwest a small group of friends go to different famous locations, mess around with one another in various ways, and eventually tire out and lay down to rest in the back of the Mystery Van. They are suddenly startled when the van fills with E.T.s, but eventually laugh it off. Later, when the group has reached their destination, Pancho invites him and two others, Darren and Margaret, to a place where they are dragged into a party by janitors and a janitor turned zombie, Yeamon, and Meg is kidnapped and molested. Darren and Meg have killed Yeamon and save Meg and Pancho, butdarren contracts Ebola from the man he killed and is later cured as the only victim, resulting in Margaret having to support him and her.

text: Almost the entire summary is made up. It needs to be re-written.

refinement: A group of friends heads out for adventure in a van without a direction or destination in mind. The narrator describes the members; Yaemon Milo (23) as a Pedobear, Darren Wolodarsky (19) as a Conspiracy Keanu, Pancho "Peter" Vasquez (21) as a Good Guy Greg, Meg Blanco (17) as a Naive College Girl, and Margaret Thatcher (20) as a hipster. The story begins on their last few happy days before the dark and dreary events begin.

answer: This passage does not have enough information to answer this questions.

text: The story isn't summarized.

refinement: A group of friends heads out for adventure in a van without a direction or destination in mind. The narrator describes the members; Yaemon Milo (23) as a Pedobear, Darren Wolodarsky (19) as a Conspiracy Keanu, Pancho "Peter" Vasquez (21) as a Good Guy Greg, Meg Blanco (17) as a Naive College Girl, and Margaret Thatcher (20) as a hipster. The story begins on their last few happy days before the dark and dreary events begin.

text: There's no summary.

refinement: A group of friends heads out for adventure in a van without a direction or destination in mind. The narrator describes the members; Yaemon Milo (23) as a Pedobear, Darren Wolodarsky (19) as a Conspiracy Keanu, Pancho "Peter" Vasquez (21) as a Good Guy Greg, Meg Blanco (17) as a Naive College Girl, and Margaret Thatcher (20) as a hipster. The story begins on their last few happy days before the dark and dreary events begin.


text:
	The headmaster of the school Mr. Rogan worked at for less than a year had just fired him, and sat across from him signing verification documents. However, Mr. Rogan was uninterested.  He was much to focused on the kids out the window, the kids who loved him and whom he loved back. Soon he would depart from them forever. By then Mr. Rogan had already accepted the fact that he would be fired, and felt it was justifiable to someone who did not understand his ways. So instead of focusing on the inevitable, he focused on the kids.
	“You’ve caused nothing but trouble since your inception,” spoke the headmaster without taking his eyes off his documents.
	For a moment he stared at the principal with his mouth half open. He glanced back at the kids one last time before saying “I can understand how you would think that.”
	The headmaster looked up at this, his eyebrows raised. “You taught the kids nothing, not counting teaching them to make outrageous claims, create blasphemous mischief and start countless shenanigans.”
	Mr. Rogan could not help but smile. The headmaster’s face became rigid. “Do you not see the common denominator of it all?” Mr. Rogan asked.
	The headmaster frowned at this.  “Things that cause kids to get into nothing but trouble?”
	Again Mr. Rogan grinned. “Oh headmaster,” he sighed, “I taught them to create.”

title: Really short story, just messing around. I'd like some feedback

question: Why is Mr. Rogan being fired?

answer: He is being fired because he has caused nothing but trouble since his inception.

answer: Mr. Rogan is being fired because the headmaster believes he has taught them nothing but to create blasphemous mischief and to start countless shenanigans.

answer: Mr. Rogan is being fired because he is not a good teacher and has caused trouble among the students.

text: Doesn't say anything about being a bad teacher.

refinement: Mr. Rogan is being fired because he has caused trouble among the students.

text: Trouble too vague, open to interpretation, should say verbatim what the headmaster says.

refinement: Mr. Rogan is being fired because he taught the kids to make outrageous claims, create blasphemous mischief and start countless shenanigans.

answer: Mr. Rogan is being fired because he has caused nothing but trouble since his inception.

question: Who is the main character in the passage?

answer: The main character is the headmaster.

text: Mr. Rogan

answer: The main character in the passage is Mr. Rogan, who is being fired from his job as a school headmaster.

answer: Mr. Rogan

answer: Mr. Rogan

question: What is the relationship that Mr. Rogan and the children share?

answer: Mr. Rogan loves the children and the children love him.

answer: The relationship between Mr. Rogan and the children seems to be one of love and respect. Mr. Rogan seems to enjoy spending time with the children, and they seem to enjoy spending time with him. He sees the children as creative beings, and is proud of the mischief they get into.

answer: Mr. Rogan loved the children and the children loved him back.

answer: The relationship that Mr. Rogan and the children share is one of love.

question: What did Mr. Rogan say he taught the children to do?

text: Create.

answer: To create.

answer: Mr. Rogan said he taught the children to create.

answer: Mr. Rogan said he taught the children to create, rather than causing trouble.

question: Write a ~2 sentence summary.

answer:
The headmaster of the school Mr. Rogan worked at for less than a year had just fired him, and sat across from him signing verification documents. However, Mr. Rogan was uninterested. He was much to focused on the kids out the window, the kids who loved him and whom he loved back. Soon he would depart from them forever. By then Mr. Rogan had already accepted the fact that he would be fired, and felt it was justifiable to someone who did not understand his ways. So instead of focusing on the inevitable, he focused on the kids.

The headmaster looked up at this, his eyebrows raised. “You taught the kids nothing, not counting teaching them to make outrageous claims, create blasphemous mischief and start countless shenanigans.”

Mr. Rogan could not help but smile. The headmaster’s face became rigid. “Do you not see the common denominator of it all?” Mr. Rogan asked.

The headmaster frowned at this. “Things that cause kids to get into nothing but trouble?”

Again Mr. Rogan grinned. “Oh headmaster,” he sighed, “I taught them to create.”

text: Too long.

refinement: Mr. Rogan is getting fired by the headmaster because the headmaster believes Mr. Rogan has taught the children nothing but how to make trouble. Mr. Rogan said he taught the children how to create and loves them.

answer: Mr. Rogan is getting fired by the headmaster because the headmaster believes Mr. Rogan has taught the children nothing but how to make trouble. Mr. Rogan said he taught the children how to create and loves the.

text: Incomplete word

refinement: Mr. Rogan is getting fired by the headmaster because the headmaster believes Mr. Rogan has taught the children nothing but how to make trouble. Mr. Rogan said he taught the children how to create and loves them.

answer: Mr. Rogan is fired from his job as a teacher at a school. He is fired because he taught the kids to create, which the headmaster thinks is causing them to get into trouble.

answer: The headmaster fires the protagonist, but the protagonist is more focused on the children he taught than his own dismissal. He believes that he taught them to create, rather than causing trouble.


text:
[Crouch End Hippodrome on a c.1900 postcard.] The CROUCH END HIPPODROME, originally the QUEEN'S OPERA HOUSE, was a theatre that once stood in Tottenham Lane, Crouch End, London.

[Poster for the Crouch End Hippodrome, 1907.] The theatre opened in 1897 as the Queen's Opera House, a reconstruction of the former Crouch End Athenaeum. It later became the Crouch End Hippodrome and subsequently a cinema. It was damaged by bombing during the Second World War and subsequently demolished apart from the front, which still stands in Topsfield Parade.[1][2]

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[2] The Crouch End Hippodrome, Tottenham Lane, Crouch End. arthurlloyd.co.uk Retrieved 25 December 2016.

title: Crouch End Hippodrome

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What is left of the Crouch End Hippodrome?

answer: Its front still stands.

answer: The front of the Crouch End Hippodrome remains in Topsfield Parade. It was damaged by bombing during the Second World War and subsequently demolished.

text: The fact that the building was "damaged by bombing during the Second World War and subsequently demolished" is unnecessary to answer the question.

refinement: The front of the Crouch End Hippodrome remains in Topsfield Parade.

answer: The front of the building stands in Topsfield Parade.

answer: The only remnant of the Crouch End Hippodrome is the front facade, which still stands in Topsfield Parade.

answer: The front of the building still stands in Topsfield Parade.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

What was the purpose of the building?

answer: The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre.

text: It is omitted that later on it became a cinema. "It later became the Crouch End Hippodrome and subsequently a cinema" is evidence that it became a cinema.

refinement: The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre and subsequently became a cinema.

answer: Originally it was the Queen's Opera House, and it has changed between theatres, cinemas, and restaurants.

text: It is not mentioned in the article that the building became a restaurant at one point.

refinement: Originally it was the Queen's Opera House, and it has changed between theatres and cinemas.

text: The building did not change between theatres and cinemas. It was a theater and then became a cinema.

refinement: Originally it was the Queen's Opera House. It was a theatre and then became a cinema.

answer: The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre.

text: It is omitted that later on it became a cinema. "It later became the Crouch End Hippodrome and subsequently a cinema" is evidence that it became a cinema.

refinement: The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre and subsequently became a cinema.

answer: The building contained a theatre and a cinema.

text: The building was first a theatre and then became a cinema. It did not contain both.

refinement: The building was a theatre and subsequently a cinema.

answer: It was originally a theatre. It became a hippodrome and then a cinema.

text: It was a theater called Crouch End Hippodrome before it became a cinema.

refinement: It was originally a theatre and then a cinema.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Why was the building destroyed?

answer: The building was destroyed due to bombing during the Second World War.

answer: It was destroyed during the Second World War and bombed.

text: The sentence is awkwardly phrased.

refinement: It was bombed during the Second World War.

answer: It was bombed during the war

text: It is not specified that it was the Second World War.

refinement: It was bombed during the Second World War

text: A period to end the sentence is missing.

refinement: It was bombed during the Second World War.

answer: The Crouch End Hippodrome was destroyed by bombing during the Second World War.

answer: It was bombed during the Second World War.

question:
Answer the following question based on the above passage:

Where is the building located?

answer: It's in Tottenham Lane, Crouch End, London.

text: Since the building no longer stands in Tottenham Lane, the sentence should be in the past tense. "The CROUCH END HIPPODROME [...] was a theatre that once stood in Tottenham Lane, Crouch End, London" is evidence that the building is no longer there.

refinement: It was in Tottenham Lane, Crouch End, London.

answer: It was located in Crouch End.

answer: Tottenham Lane, Crouch End, London.

answer: The building is located in Crouch End, London.

text: Since the building no longer stands in Tottenham Lane, the sentence should be in the past tense. "The CROUCH END HIPPODROME [...] was a theatre that once stood in Tottenham Lane, Crouch End, London" is evidence that the building is no longer there.

refinement: The building was located in Crouch End, London.

answer: The Crouch End Hippodrome was originally located in Crouch End, London.

question: Write a ~3 sentence summary.

answer:
The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre that stood in Tottenham Lane, north London, that originally named the Queen's Opera House, which was later demolished.

It was completed in 1897 but it became a theatre again due to the Second World War.

text: The article just mentions London not "north" London

refinement:
The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre that stood in Tottenham Lane, London, that originally named the Queen's Opera House, which was later demolished.

It was completed in 1897 but it became a theatre again due to the Second World War.

text: To say that "it became a theatre again due to the Second World War" is inaccurate. During the Second World was it damaged due to bombing.

refinement:
The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre that stood in Tottenham Lane, London, that originally named the Queen's Opera House, which was later demolished.

It was completed in 1897 and was damaged due to bombing during the Second World War.

text: The summary does not clearly express that the building was "damaged by bombing during the Second World War and subsequently demolished," as quoted from the article.

refinement:
The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre that stood in Tottenham Lane, London, that originally named the Queen's Opera House.

It was completed in 1897 and was later demolished due to damage by bombing during the Second World War.

text: It is omitted that the building's front still stands in Topsfield Parade.

refinement:
The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre that stood in Tottenham Lane, London, that originally named the Queen's Opera House.

It was completed in 1897 and was later demolished due to damage by bombing during the Second World War. Its front still stands in Topsfield Parade.

text: The first sentence is awkwardly phrased.

refinement:
The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre that stood in Tottenham Lane, London. It was originally named the Queen's Opera House.

It was completed in 1897 and was later demolished due to damage by bombing during the Second World War. Its front still stands in Topsfield Parade.

text: The line break is unnecessary.

refinement: The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre that stood in Tottenham Lane, London. It was originally named the Queen's Opera House. It was completed in 1897 and was later demolished due to damage by bombing during the Second World War. Its front still stands in Topsfield Parade.

answer: The Crouch End Hippodrome, originally the Queen's Opera House, was a theatre before it was bombed during the Second World War. It became a hippodrome and a theater before it was bombed. Its front still stands in Topsfield Parade.

text: It is inaccurate to say that the building  became a hippodrome and a theater before it was bombed.

refinement: The Crouch End Hippodrome, originally the Queen's Opera House, was a theatre before it was bombed during the Second World War. Its front still stands in Topsfield Parade.

text: It is omitted that after it was damaged, it was demolished apart from its front.

refinement: The Crouch End Hippodrome, originally the Queen's Opera House, was a theatre before it was bombed during the Second World War. It was then demolished apart from its front, which still stands in Topsfield Parade.

answer: The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre that stood in London at one time. It was later turned into a cinema before being demolished after World War II. The postcards in this article depict the development of the theatre.

text: It is omitted that the building was demolished apart from the front, which still stands in Topsfield Parade.

refinement: The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre that stood in London at one time. It was later turned into a cinema before being demolished after World War II apart from the front, which still stands in Topsfield Parade. The postcards in this article depict the development of the theatre.

text: "Postcards" should be replaced with "images."

refinement: The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre that stood in London at one time. It was later turned into a cinema before being demolished after World War II apart from the front, which still stands in Topsfield Parade. The images in this article depict the development of the theatre.

answer: The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre originally located in Crouch End, London. It was originally known as the Queen's Opera House and it eventually became a cinema. The theatre was damaged during the Second World War and was ultimately demolished in its entirety except for the front facade.

answer: The Crouch End Hippodrome was a theatre located in Crouch End, London. Once the Queen's Opera House, the theatre later became a cinema. It was damaged by bombing during the Second World War and was demolished except for the front facade.