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**In this broken city, friends are hard to come by.**

It is night. Bolt slowly walks through the alleys, hiding in the darkness whenever he hears anything. Eventually, he instinctively makes his way back to his own territory. He finds an open tent; it is a dirty tent with only a blanket inside. By now his arm has stopped bleeding, but he now has a new scar. He crawls into the tent and curls into a ball under the blanket. His body rests on the warm dirt floor as he silently cries. “I’m sorry.” He whispers. “I’m so sorry.”

He had failed. He goes into a deep and dreamless sleep.

Bolt awakes to the sound of someone approaching his tent. He clutches his new knife, ready to spring into action. He turns to stare into the morning sunlight. It is Sasha. “Hey Bolt!” she says smiling. She is fair-skinned around the age of 13. She grins as she approaches Bolt. “I’ve been looking everywhere for you.” Her most distinctive quality is her eyes, they are red. Her skinny body approaches Bolt as her long dark hair waves back and forth.

“Hello Sasha,” Bolt grumbles as he throws his blanket off.

“How was the drop?” she asks him cheerily.

Bolt looks away. He can’t look her in the eye. He is ashamed and disappointed in himself. Sasha’s smile immediately fades. She gets a defeated look on her face and sighs. “It happens.” she says quietly to Bolt.
Failing a drop is the same as failing your gang. It is making a mockery of all the risks they were put through in order to get you so far. Bolt was the last leg of the drop, he was supposed to make the delivery. Failing such a crucial step is inexcusable.

“Are you okay?” Sasha asks him. She steps towards him and puts a hand on his shoulder.

Bolt looks further away from her ashamed. He understands exactly what everyone had to do to get him so far. Especially Sasha, she is the leader of his gang, and she is the most scarred out of any of them. Not only that, because she’s a girl, she runs much more risk than any of them can imagine. To fail a drop is to disregard all the risk she takes every time they conduct a drop. “I got caught and scarred by Hawks.”
Sasha grabs his hand and lifts up his sleeve to reveal a scabbed arm. “We need to get you medicine before your arm gets infected.”

They walk together side-by-side. Sasha understands what Bolt is going through. Every single member of their gang has failed a drop before, but the feeling never gets any better. They have each other and that’s it. They are family and every time they go on a drop, they could lose their family. So failing a drop is the same as rejecting your family. They are in friendly territory, from here, they don’t need to hide, nor do they need to run, they can walk. After an hour of weaving through crowds they reach their usual hideout in the back of an alley.

“Flower!” Sasha calls. “We need you.” A young girl appears from under a tent in the corner of the alley. “We need some clean water. Bolt was scarred.”

Flower just nods. She is around 10 years old with long blonde hair. She is the supplier of drops; she takes the orders and payments from someone else. With the money, they are able to survive. She pulls out a crinkled water bottle with just a sliver of water left. “This is all we have left.” She says.
Sasha takes the water and pours the rest onto Bolt’s scabs. “We failed the drop.” She says while gently cleaning the wound with her sleeve.

Flower just sighs. She has the safest job of them all because she has a single ability that none of them do. She is able to read and write. The rest of them can only read if even that. None of them know how to write. Flower finds a beat up notebook and a pencil to record the failure of the drop.

The notebook consists of a single T-chart on every page. On one side is written either success or failure, and on the other side there is a paragraph long description of the patient. Next to “bacterial infection, needs antibiotics or will die”, Flower writes “failure”. It takes her a while but her words are legible. Every single description in her notebook ends with “or will die”. Half of the drops have been failures.

title: [AA] This Broken City (Chapter 3)

question: Summarize the theme of this story.

answer: The theme of this story is the importance of family. The characters in this story are all part of the same gang. They are all in this together and they are all risking their lives to help each other. The characters are also all young, so they are still learning. The theme of this story is that family is the most important thing.

critique: The characters in this story are not all young.

critique: Rather than discussing the theme of the story in abstract terms, the answer should discuss it in its own terms.

critique: The theme of the story is about the importance of family. It is not about the importance of family.

critique: The theme of the story is how important it is to not fail a drop.

critique: The theme of the story is not the importance of family. The theme is the importance of friendship.

critique: 'They are all in this together and they are all risking their lives to help each other.' is not in the text.

critique: The theme is not that family is the most important thing.

question: Summarize what has led society to this point in the world of this story.

answer: No answer

critique: This is a valid response and should be included.

question: Summarize the importance of "the drop".

answer: No answer

critique: The answer should mention that the drop is a crucial step in the gang's operation.

critique: The response misses to provide an answer to the question.

critique: Add that it is crucial for gang members to perform well on "the drop".

critique: The drop is very important to the story and deserves a response.

question: Summarize the character of Flower.

answer: Flower is the supplier of drops. She has one ability that none of the other characters in the group have -- she can read and write. She uses this skill to keep track of all the missions in her notebook. She also finds some medicine and water for Bolt's wound.

critique: The answer omits that Flower is the youngest member of the group.

critique: The answer omits that Flower is a young girl.

critique: The answer omits the reason why Flower has the ability to read and write.

critique: It's omitted that she's around 10 years old.

critique: "She also finds some medicine and water " is irrelevant

critique: The answer should mention that Flower is the youngest member of the group.


split: train

text:
She peered at me with that stare, the one I dreaded, the one that told me, without a doubt, that I had just wronged. Her gorgeous blue-green eyes turned from vivacious to judging, and her nose shriveled in a half sneer. I rubbed my hands nervously over the pointy grass beneath us. What did I just say? I thought with a sigh.

A lonely car drifted by on the street in front of us. I became aware of the ants marching relentlessly on the tree beside me, one followed by another.

“I’m sorry, I, that’s not what I…” My voice trailed off like a dried up stream. She looked away. She didn’t want to hear it, and only leaned further back on her arms and cast her eyes at the cloudy night sky. I could almost see the process unfolding in her mind; another phrase of my mine had been added to her tally list of hurtful things I have said to her. The words had escaped my mouth before I had a chance to catch the idea. I’m sure if I had questioned the thought, I would have found that it wasn’t mine. If it was not my thought, then from where did it originate? That question lingered in my head. Why did I say what I clearly did not mean?

The words I had said echoed painfully in my head. “YOU are going to study at the beach? I doubt it,” I had told her coldly. I had sniggered, and then looked away.

Several months later, I went to a New Year’s party of hers. Everyone was bumping elbows, jockeying for couch space, buzzing at each other with conversation.

“Did you see that YouTube video?”
“I can’t believe that guy survived. The news that day was ridiculous.”
“So, what’s up with Dave and Samantha? I saw on facebook that they’re a thing now.”
“Did you read that article on the LHC I sent you? Science blows my mind.”

Of course, the center of the party was the television. More so than our party, Time Square was packed. The energy of the crowd was such that it created an illusion of it being a single living creature, a fuzzy slug engulfing the street. All the people were happy just to be there, on the TV, surrounded by TV’s. There were lists rolling down the screen with “tweets” and facebook messages from people all over the world. It was an amazing conglomerate of recursive media attention; it was as if the party, and the entire nation, was stuck in a prefabricated loop of ideas and modes of communication.

I was caught up in the excitement. It felt as if my brain had been sloshing against the side of my head, and I was letting the pop culture references flow freely. Gleaming cardboard decorations danced around me as I swung from conversation to conversation, saying whatever my mind would recall. I engaged in gossip with a friend of mine, and I mentioned that several of my friends were leaving for the summer.

“Oh, I’ll hang out with you before I go to college!” she exclaimed, sporting a sincere smile across her face.

“Oh, no, I’ve got stuff to do. I don’t need to hang out with you.” I replied.

I wanted to leap forward and catch those words. I wanted to tackle those words to the ground and teach them a lesson. It had happened again. That thought was not mine.

She blinked dejectedly and shook her head slightly as if she really couldn’t believe how mean I had just been. She looked away and walked elsewhere. I started to call after her, but I hesitated. It was useless, the damage was done.

Later that night, after the ball was dropped and the party dispersed, the realization came to me. It’s not me who thinks up the cruel, hurtful comments that slip past my lips. It’s the media I interact with. The television shows, the news programs, the YouTube clips all contribute sound bites and snippets that stay engrained in my brain. They give me easy, prefabricated, and cool responses to any situation. They have become such a horribly influential part of me that I regurgitate them even when I am nowhere near media. Media, I realized, had begun to think for me. And there is no one to blame but myself. I had allowed myself to become incorporated into the feedback loop of media; indeed, I began to notice that I often used my phone as a substitute for face to face interaction. For example, it is much easier to gain attention by posting an adorable picture on the internet than it is by having meaningful contact with my peers. All one has to do to gain notoriety on the internet is follow the formulaic approach: take a picture of an animal, a group of friends, or the outdoors, apply a filter, and upload. No need for the hassle of actual thought.

From the end of the party onward, I began teaching myself to think about what I say, regardless of the atmosphere. I learned to recognize the “buzz” I feel in my brain when I am no longer fully in control of what I am saying. I try every day to be a better, less judgmental friend, because what matters most to me is how I impact people on a day to day basis. Recently, I’ve noticed that friends and acquaintances are becoming more open to talk to me. They talk to me about things that actually matter in their life, from personal relationships to global politics, and it has lead me to realize that when I can converse with them under less influence from media, I have the potential to actually make a positive difference in people’s lives. I abhor hurting people, and I can only hope that one day, media will cease to be a large part of what defines me.

title: [NF] I am my media

question: What realization does the narrator have about herself?

answer: She realizes that she allows the media to influence her thoughts, and that she needs to be more aware of this.

critique: The narrator realizes that she allows the media to influence her thoughts, and that she needs to be more aware of this.

critique: The narrator realizes that the media influences her thoughts and how she views people.

critique: The narrator realizes that the media influences her thoughts, and she needs to be more aware of this.

critique: "She realizes that she allows the media to influence her thoughts, and that she needs to be more aware of this." - this is inaccurate. The narrator realizes that she allows the media to influence her thoughts, and that she needs to be more aware of this.

critique: "She realizes that she allows the media to influence her thoughts" - is incorrect. The narrator realized the media has been influencing her thoughts.

question: How does the narrator try to work on herself?

answer: She tries to be a better, less judgmental friend by recognizing when characteristics of the media are slipping into their speech and behavior.

critique: It's omitted that she also tries to be more thoughtful about what she says.

critique: The answer is a bit vague. It doesn't explicitly state what the characteristics are.

critique: The narrator also tries to teach herself to think about what she says.

critique: It is omitted that she tries to teach herself to think about what she says, regardless of the atmosphere.

critique: The narrator's goal is to be a better friend, not to be a less judgmental friend.

critique: "She tries to be a better, less judgmental friend by recognizing when characteristics of the media are slipping into their speech and behavior." - the narrator is already a good friend, so the answer should reflect this.

question: Will the narrator make more friends as she works on herself?

answer: It is implied that she will.

critique: The narrator already has friends, but they are more open to talk to her now that she is working on herself.

critique: The narrator's situation is not clear because she had already made friends.

critique: The answer should be more specific about the implications of the passage.

critique: Doesn't mention what the narrator is transforming herself into.

question: Describe a moment of contention in the story.

answer: The narrator tells the girl they'll hang out before she goes to college, but then tells her they have stuff to do and don't need to hang out with her. The narrator regrets saying this and realizes it's the media's fault.

critique: The narrator doesn't regret saying it, but feels bad about it.

critique: The narrator's statement to the girl is not the moment of contention.

critique: The part about telling her it's the media's fault is unnecessary.

critique: It is omitted that the girl becomes upset.

critique: The narrator's regret is not relevant to the question.

critique: The narrator's response to the girl's invitation is not the moment of contention. The moment of contention is the narrator realizing the media is influencing his thoughts and words.


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Weill Cornell Medicine faculty and staff put patients first. WCM physicians are among the top in the nation and stay on the leading edge of new procedures and technologies.

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Weill Cornell Medicine is committed to excellence in patient care, scientific discovery and the education of future physicians in New York City and around the world. Since 1898, our doctors and scientists have been engaged in world-class clinical care and cutting-edge research that connect patients to the latest treatment innovations and prevention strategies. Weill Cornell Medicine's powerful network of collaborators extends to its parent university Cornell University; to Qatar, where Weill Cornell Medicine-Qatar offers a Cornell University medical degree; and to programs in Tanzania, Haiti, Brazil, Austria and Turkey. Weill Cornell Medicine faculty provide comprehensive patient care at NewYork-Presbyterian/Weill Cornell Medical Center, NewYork-Presbyterian Lower Manhattan Hospital, NewYork-Presbyterian Queens and NewYork-Presbyterian Brooklyn Methodist Hospital. Weill Cornell Medicine is also affiliated with Houston Methodist.

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Weill Cornell Medicine has a legacy of global engagement that is reflected in more than 20 global health programs spanning six continents.

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    Director and Physician-in-Chief of the Ronald O. Perelman and Claudia Cohen Center for Reproductive Medicine and the Revlon Distinguished Professor of Reproductive Medicine in Obstetrics and Gynecology

    Dr. Zev Rosenwaks, director and physician-in-chief of the Ronald O. Perelman and Claudia Cohen Center for Reproductive Medicine and the Revlon Distinguished Professor of Reproductive Medicine in Obstetrics and Gynecology, has received a 2020 Lifetime Achievement Award from the American Society for Reproductive Medicine. The award is given to a member who has made exemplary contributions to the field of reproduction during their career and demonstrated innovation, leadership and other scholarly accomplishments that have a lasting impact on advancing clinical care, the frontiers of research in reproductive sciences, and the education of the scientific community.

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    Associate Professor of Microbiology and Immunology in Medicine

    Dr. Gregory Sonnenberg, an associate professor of microbiology and immunology in medicine, was awarded the inaugural ICIS-LUMINEX John R. Kettman Award for Excellence in Interferon & Cytokine Research from the international Cytokine & Interferon Society. The award, recognizes mid-level investigators who have made outstanding contributions to the field of interferon or cytokine biology. Dr. Sonnenberg was honored for his scientific contributions to the fields of immunology and microbiology, and for his success as an independent, extramurally funded investigator.

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    Dr. Rache Simmons, associate dean for diversity and inclusion and the Anne K. and Edwin C. Weiskopf Professor of Surgical Oncology, has been awarded a 2020 Women in Medicine Summit #SheforShe award. The awards are given to those who exemplify the qualities of perseverance, resilience, leadership and/or allyship in medicine. Dr. Simmons received her award at the summit, held virtually on Oct. 9-10.

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question: What does the article say about the quality of patient health care at Weill Cornell Medicine?

answer: Weill Cornell Medicine is committed to excellence in patient care, scientific discovery, and the education of future physicians. The physicians and scientists are engaged in world-class clinical care and cutting-edge research that connect patients to the latest treatment innovations and prevention strategies. The powerful network of collaborators extends to its parent university Cornell University, to Qatar, where Weill Cornell Medicine-Qatar offers a Cornell University medical degree, and to programs in Tanzania, Haiti, Brazil, Austria, and Turkey.

critique: The answer should mention the hospitals where Weill Cornell Medicine provides care.

question: What does the article say about the faculty and physicians at Weill Cornell Medicine?

answer: Weill Cornell Medicine is committed to excellence in patient care, scientific discovery, and the education of future physicians. The physicians are among the top in the nation and stay on the leading edge of new procedures and technologies. The faculty and staff put patients first.

critique: The answer should mention the awards and honors received by the faculty.

question: What does the article say about how Weill Cornell Medicine's story?

answer: Weill Cornell Medicine was founded in 1898. It is committed to excellence in patient care, scientific discovery, and education. Its doctors and scientists have been engaged in world-class clinical care and cutting-edge research.

critique: The answer should mention the global reach of the university.

critique: It's omitted that Weill Cornell Medicine is a university hospital in New York City that's affiliated with Cornell University.

critique: The answer should mention that Weill Cornell Medicine is committed to diversity, global health, innovation, and mentorship.

critique: The answer should mention the network of collaborators.

question: What does the article say about how Weill Cornell Medicine differ from other medical schools?

answer: No answer

category: coverage


text:
**One**

His name was Steve, and he couldn’t take it anymore. He pictured himself growing old with her, while she grew old with him too. But he couldn’t grow old. Being immortal had its downsides. Now was his seven hundred years birthday and he was staring at her picture. He begged her to come back.

He thought he heard her voice when he shed a single tear and a slight breeze called him from the sea.

**Two**

He thought he heard her voice when he shed a single tear and a slight breeze called him from the sea. The windows of the room were open, and it would be a beautiful sight if he weren’t dying.
But he was dying. He was alone in the room, with wires spread all along his arms, and needles through his skin. He had that heart surgery, but apparently that new heart wasn’t working either and no doctor was able to tell the reason. The heart was beating irregularly, like a disabled man trying to walk. The heart was broken, so they tossed it out.

The man watched the sun go down as he breathed his last breath.

**Three**

The man watched the sun go down as he breathed his last breath.
He woke up and the room was full of light. There was something unrecognizably fluffy under his feet, like he was walking on cotton. A woman dressed in white was staring at him.
“Is she here?” he asked. “No, she’s not”. “Where is she?” “She’s never been around.” “I’m coming back.” “You can’t go back.” “I can’t stay here either. I have to go back to her. I have to go home.”
She smiled.

“Don’t be silly” she said. “Home is where your heart is.”

**Four**

“Don’t be silly” she said. “Home is where your heart is.”
He smiled to her, remembering an old song from U2 that had a verse somewhat like that one. He was holding his sweatshirt – which he didn’t even recall having. It had been with her for months.
-You sure you can’t stay with this? – He asked, shaking the sweatshirt stupidly – I won’t ever be able to use it again.
-I haven’t stretched it that much. – She said, pretending to be offended and repressing a smile, which he noticed.
-It’s not about that. There’s your perfume all over it.
She blushed and her eyes filled with tears.
-Nah, you’re gonna work it out. – Now she pretended to smile, repressing a tear.
Which he noticed.
-Yeah, you’re right. See you later. – He said unleashing a smirk.

Once she turned her back, he started crying.

**Five**

Once she turned her back, he started crying. He couldn’t let her leave like that. He wouldn’t let her leave like that.
-Please, please. – He yelled, running after her and grabbing her suitcases. – Stay. Please.
-Not anymore, Henry. I can’t do this anymore.
-I’ll change.
-You can’t – She turned to him, picking up her baggage. – Neither can I. I’m sorry. – Her voice was hurt, and that was what truly hurt him. It cut his heart and soul and left him stranded by the door while she got in the cab and left.

He would never see her again.

**Six**

He would never see her again, and that was why he was holding her so tight.
-Do you swear you’ll come back? – She wouldn’t.
-I do, honey. It’s only for six months. – It wasn’t.
-Do you promise to remember me every day? – She wouldn’t.
-Of course I do. There’s nothing or anyone who can get you outta my head. – There was.
-No French guy? – No.
-No, you silly, no French guy, or American guy or any other kind of guy. – Yes.
-I’ll miss you. – True.
-I’ll miss you too. – True.

She had a nice life in Paris.

**Seven**

She had a nice life in Paris. She had a boyfriend and a dog; she was living with her parents and hanging around with good friends. Nothing could go wrong and she would never get hurt because she couldn’t feel anything.
Till a night a guy came along, and he had a broken heart. She realized she also had a heart, and her heart didn’t fit in Paris. Then her heart didn’t fit in the world. But her heart fit on his.
But he was broken, then so got she. Then he left her back in Paris, and she hoped Paris would be enough again someday.

He left back to the world, wandering brokenly ever after.

title: Seven Random Stories About Broken-Hearted Men

question: Summarize the main theme of the stories.

answer: It seems that the stories are mostly about sadness and broken hearts. It also shows that love hurts, and a broken heart will always find the wrong person to be with.

critique: The answer is too vague. It should mention that the stories are about men who are broken-hearted.

critique: The answer is too vague. It should be more specific about the theme of the stories.

critique: The response is missing the part about how love can also be found.

critique: vaguely defines what makes the narrator appear to be broken-hearted; remove the generalized definition

critique: The answer is missing the part about how love hurts.

critique: The answer doesn't mention the immortality angle.

critique: The answer should mention that the stories are about broken-hearted men.

critique: It is omitted that the stories show that love can be found in unexpected places.

text: There's nothing in the text to suggest that "a broken heart will always find the wrong person to be with" as a theme.

category: accuracy

refinement: It seems that the stories are mostly about sadness and broken hearts. It also shows that love hurts, and a broken heart will always find the wrong person to be with.

question: Summarize the causes for the characters' broken hearts.

answer: In Steve's case, he had grown old with his wife and then lost her to the grave, while being immortal and left with literally nothing. The heartless failing surgeon purposely froze until the greiving patient gave out and died. In the second story, Henry was the one who left his girlfriend and suffered a severe pain from that. The next three stories comprise of people who didn't get over their romantic partners and worked hard to keep a flame afloat just for things to go downhill eventually. In the fifth story, Henry's ex is fed up of his clinginess and his pleas at the airport, and in the seventh story, the man's wife was desperately in love with another man who didn't return her affections.

critique: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

critique: The response contains inaccurate information.

critique: In the second story, the heart surgery patient died of a failed operation, not a broken heart. Number 3 and 4 refer to the same story.

critique: The response inaccurately mentions that the heartless surgeon is the one who left his girlfriend and died.

text: "The heartless failing surgeon purposely froze until the greiving patient gave out and died." This sentence is both confusing and wrong. The patient in the second story receives a heart transplant, but it doesn't work properly for reasons unknown.

refinement: In Steve's case, he had grown old with his wife and then lost her to the grave, while being immortal and left with literally nothing. The heartless failing surgeon purposely froze until the greiving patient gave out and died. In the second story, Henry was the one who left his girlfriend and suffered a severe pain from that. The next three stories comprise of people who didn't get over their romantic partners and worked hard to keep a flame afloat just for things to go downhill eventually. In the fifth story, Henry's ex is fed up of his clinginess and his pleas at the airport, and in the seventh story, the man's wife was desperately in love with another man who didn't return her affections.

question: Summarize what the passage says about coming back to life.

answer: We know that three men have died and come back to life. Exactly how they got back is unclear but we know it was their life force that brought them back, because the second one makes conversation as if he came back of his own accord and had not done so as a last-ditch life-saving act. The second man also wasn't being helped back by a woman, as it was a nurse who saw he woke up. The third man is taken in a cab, while his companion is screaming at him to come back because she can see the pavement from where he currently is.

critique: The response contains inaccurate information.

critique:
*The second man was likely reacting to being woken up which happened to be by a woman.*

*The third man's companion is asking him to return to her, he had just left her.*

critique: The response is inaccurate and confusing.

critique: I would just delete this because it's inaccurate and confusing

critique: The response is incorrect. The second man was not being helped back by a woman.

question: What does the story say about same-sex relationships?

answer: No answer


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OORUTTAMBALAM is a suburban area in Trivandrum .situated in Kattakkada Taluk of Thiruvananthapuram district, Kerala, India.[1]

Location

It is 16 km from Kerala State Road Transport Corporation's Central Bus Depot, Thampanoor and City Depot East Fort,There are regular bus services to other parts of city also.[2] It is only 4 kilometres from National Highway 66. Nearest towns are Balaramapuram, Kattakkada and Neyyattinkara.

Railway station is 3 km away. The railway line connects Kanyakumari and Thiruvananthapuram Central.

History of Ooruttambalam

AD 1915: Ooruttambalam Revolt (Nineteenth Century Revolt) under the leadership of Ayyankali. In the same year, Kallumala Agitation occurred under the leadership of Ayyankali in Perinad of Kollam. An attempt by Ayyankali to enrol a Pulayar girl in a government school led to violent acts perpetrated by upper castes against the community and eventually to the burningdown of the school building in the village of Ooruttambalam. It is known as ‘Ooruttambalam Lahala This was followed by the first-ever agricultural strike in the history of the nation, fought not for wages but for school admission.

Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Durga Bhagavathi Temple

[Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Durgabhagavathi Temple]

Ooruttambalam is also awell known for temples. The Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Sree Durga Bhagavathy Temple is located near Ooruttambalam Market. Many devotees from different parts of the state visits the temple. The _Durga Pooja_ and _Bhagavathy Pooja_ of the temple are very famous. Atham mahothavam has been celebrating during the Malayalam month “Medam” on the day of the Malayalam nakshthra “Attam” every year. The People from all walks of the society participating in the festival especially Hindus, Christians and Muslims. The major attraction of the festival is the “Thalappoli Ghoshayathra” (cultural procession)which has been conducted during the last day of the festival. Procession starts from the temple and moves through velicode, pallithara and reaches Govindamangal Mahavishnu temple. From there it moves to Govindamangalam Junction, Ooruttambalam Junction, Neeranamkuzhy Junction and comes back to temple. The procession was also accompanied by many cultural programmes like Panchavadyam (orchestra of five instruments), Chnda Melam (orchestra of cylindrical percussion instrument, Nadaswaram (It is a wind instrument used to produce classical music and is considered as world's loudest non-brass acoustic instrument), Nettipattam Kettiya Gajaveen (elephant wearing the golden elephant caparison). The elephants carry Thidambu. It is taken out of the temple as Ezhunnallathu by the temple priest. This occasion is the only time where the goddess comes out of the temple in full alankaras in Ulthasava Thidambu. Many people from different region of kerala visits here and occupy their position at early in the morning to see the same and get worship from the goddess Durga.

[Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila durga temple]

Neyyar dam, a tourist destination, is 16 km away. Its canal passes through the town and the water is used for agriculture.

Institutions

Post Office, banks and village office are near the Ooruttambalam junction. There are two schools as well. Earlier, this place was the main hub.

Local government office (Panchayat office), a local outpost of main police station are 1 km away from Ooruttambalam. Valiyarthala Thampuran Temple an ancient temple in Oorutambalam OORTTU Festival is very popular in this temple

Krishnapuram is also a good agricultural place in ooruttambalam farmers are full-time in banana plant and in coconut plants more pupils are well educated in krishnapuram.A high school and LP Scholls are here ooruttambalam near good shepherd Church velikkodu built by Portuguese missioners in 1917 August 17.

Sree Saraswathy Vidyalayam [3], CBSE is a subsidiary of Bharatheeya Vidya Nikethan, having classes from pre-KG to plus two.

Ooruttambalam Service co-operative Bank, is situated near the post office.

[1] http://www.indiastudychannel.com/india/pincodes/39329-Ooruttambalam-S-O.aspx Details of Ooruttambalam

[2] http://www.expressbuzz.com/edition/story.aspx?title=KSRTC%20launching%2050%20new%20city%20services&artid=D7aQxtFG8HI=&type= KSRTC bus services to Ooruttambalam

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title: Ooruttambalam

question: Summarize the information about the temples of Ooruttambalam.

answer: The Ooruttambalam Parankimamvila Sree Durga Bhagavathy Temple is located near Ooruttambalam Market. The Durga Pooja and Bhagavathy Pooja of the temple are very famous. The festival of Atham mahothavam is celebrated in the Malayalam month of Medam. The procession of Thalappoli Ghoshayathra is the major attraction of the festival. The procession starts from the temple and moves through velicode, pallithara, and reaches Govindamangal Mahavishnu temple. From there it moves to Govindamangalam Junction, Ooruttambalam Junction, Neeranamkuzhy Junction, and comes back to the temple. The procession is accompanied by many cultural programs like Panchavadyam, Chnda Melam, and Nettipattam Kettiya Gajaveen. The procession is the only time that the goddess comes out of the temple in full alankaras.

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question: Summarize the commerce of Ooruttambalam.

answer: There is a post office and banks near the Ooruttambalam Junction. There are two schools as well.

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answer: There are regular bus services to other parts of the city. There is a railway station 3km away.

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JULIAN DASHPER (29 February 1960 in Auckland, New Zealand – 30 July 2009), was regarded as one of New Zealand's most well known contemporary artists.

In 2001 he was awarded a senior Fulbright fellowship to be based as an artist in residence at the Chinati Foundation in Marfa, Texas. Dashper's work from the last 25 years has recently been the subject of a major touring retrospective in America (the first ever such exhibition for a resident New Zealand artist),[1] curated by Christopher Cook and David Raskin.[2]

Dashper's work focuses on the histories, theories and more general or popular ideas of abstraction (in particular abstract painting), conceptualism and minimalism as a working methodology. The geographical positioning of New Zealand globally and how this country receives and disseminates visual information is also a core subject in Dashper's work.[3] His practice manifests itself in various forms, including paintings, unique photographs of paintings, found objects which he infuses with abstract images, various multiples plus limited edition CD and 12" polycarbonate recordings of impromptu performances he has been involved with or heavily orchestrated. He has also produced a number of video works, some of which document or describe his installations, painting and audio recordings.[4] In 2016, arts organisation Circuit commissioned George Clark to curate a programme of moving image works, titled _This is not film-making_, which invited artists Gavin Hipkins, Juliet Carpenter and Gregory Kan, Daniel Malone, Louise Menzies and Nathan Gray to make works that respond to Dashper's own writings.[5]

Respectful, even affectionate references to local culture and art history are always present in Dashper's work, whilst his own adaptations of abstraction, conceptualism and minimalism fully acknowledge their lineage within international art. As curator (and director of the Adam Art Gallery in Wellington) Christina Barton expresses it, Dashper has _“the unique perspective of attending to an internationalist art history from a distance, enabling him to devise strategies to work around his geographical isolation whilst simultaneously articulating its effects.”_[6] Dashper is represented in all the major public collections in New Zealand: MCA, Sydney; Ludwig Forum für Internationale Kunst, Aachen, Germany; Sheldon Museum of Art, Lincoln, Nebraska; The University of Auckland Art Collection; Ulrich Museum of Art, Wichita, Kansas and the Stedelijk Museum in Amsterdam.

Visiting scholar at the University of Sydney in 2008, Dashper lived in Auckland and travelled regularly. His first New Zealand retrospective, _Julian Dashper: Professional Practice_, was held at the Gus Fisher Gallery in 2010.

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_UNTITLED (THE WARRIORS)_ 1998. Vinyl on drumheads with junior drumkit. Dimensions variable. Courtesy of the artist, Sue Crockford Gallery, Auckland and Kaliman Gallery, Sydney. Photo by Ashley Barber.

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    Frank stepped out of his car and closed the door behind him.  He locked it as he walked away and didn't look to check, the clunk was enough.  The key to the front door of his terraced house went into the lock first time, without him stabbing at it. He buzzed a little fanfare with his lips and smiled - on the inside.  It was a minor success and he’ll take it.
          Once inside, he took off his coat, hung it up behind the vestibule door and took a sharp breath. The scent damp and familiar but welcoming. He eased off his shoes and socks and walked across the carpet in the dining room to get to the kitchen where he’d left his slippers. The carpet was less than a week old and felt pleasant underfoot.  He knew it wouldn't last and it irked him.
    He put the kettle on and thought about his last ever day at work.  He didn’t particularly like his job but he didn’t hate it, either.  He was just glad it was all over.  His last day finished over at the Black Horse and only drew a few of Frank's colleagues.  He enjoyed the four pints they bought for him and he was grateful but he had to be home before his phone rang.
    Frank’s only son lives in Australia.  He was looking forward to the perfunctory phone call he receives every year on his birthday, at the express wishes of his wife.  She only insists on this because she wants a new car when he eventually dies.  They can have it but there won’t be much change afterwards.  He really didn’t care for the money, anyway.
    The call came and went and was shorter than even he expected.  He made excuses for him in his own mind, saying he was busy and that he had an important job that always required his attention.  He hoped for grandchildren and that it might bring his son home.  He was doubtful, though.  His son was as stubborn as he.  A real chip off the ol’ block, you might say.  He might speak to him later in the year but, then again, he might not.
    He finished the last of his still warm cup of tea, walked into to the hallway, put the latch on the front door and proceeded to climb the stairs.  He’d take the phone off the hook as he went past it but he knew it wasn’t going to ring.  He wasn’t out of breath as he reached the top but his joints ached and it seemed an extra stair is added everytime he had to make his way to the summit.
    He entered the back bedroom, drew the curtains, switched on the light and closed the door behind him.  He slowly lowered himself to his knees, which was no trivial feat and let out an involuntary groan until he was down.  He shuffled a short distance to the front of his wardrobe and drew out a case from underneath it.  The case was bound with worn leather and had two latches that could lock but never were.  His thumbs released the latches with a satisfying snap and then proceeded to open it with one swift movement to completion.
    He gazed at its contents for a moment, the artificial light reflected back at him.  He pushed his glasses back onto the bridge of his nose, sniffed lightly and placed his hands on the cool metal of his trumpet.  With one hand on the handle of the wardrobe and the trumpet in the other, he stood.  There was a regular crack from each knee and a reply to the groan he made on his descent.  He settled himself on his feet for a minute or so and then pointed the trumpet towards the drawn curtains of the window.
    He drew in his breath and placed the mouthpiece lightly against his moist lips.  He released the air slowly and for half a second there was no sound other than the hiss of his breath, transferring its warmth to the body of the instrument, followed by a burst of sound that bounced back at him from the hard walls of the room.  He did this again and again, running a few scales until the instrument felt warm.  He was careful not tire himself out and held the trumpet with both hands close to his chest after clearing any spit from inside.
    Satisfied, he again raised the trumpet to his lips, closed his eyes and blew.  He began the only piece he knew from start to finish and as his lungs swelled, so did his heart.  Colour, vivid but warm, filled the room from the bottom up.  It warmed his face and body to a glow.  His tongue, precise and definite, his fingers light and nimble.  With each crescendo his feet hovering an inch from the carpet only to be lowered, gently, six inches into it, snug and reassuring.  His ears confirmed pitch perfection, whilst the tone and timing like no other.  Now in full flow, his body emitted the most loving ache - it consumed him.  Bar after bar, a relentless flow.
    Finally, as he neared the end and before his breath and his stamina failed him, he played the finishing notes.  The sound seemed to linger, in his imagination at least and predictably, the colours drained from the walls, albeit with less haste than they had come.  He gave the trumpet a wipe with a cloth from the case, removing any fingerprints and oiled the valves.  He returned the trumpet to its case, closed the latches without locking them and slid it back into the space under the wardrobe, now free from sight.
    His soul, like stoked embers, remained and radiated into the walls, giving them a fleeting hue as he mirrored his journey back to the kitchen.  He filled the kettle and switched it on.  If only there was another to share it with but the thought never occurred to him.  It occurred to me, though, but who am I to say?

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This is my first attempt at writing fiction.  Any constructive feedback is welcome.  Thanks.

title: [MF] Frank's Trumpet and Oh, How He Needs It.

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answer: Frank loves to play trumpet and does so as often as he can. He enjoys it and wishes he could play with someone else. One of the few things he does with other people is go to work. Frank has a son that lives in Australia. Frank's wife wants to use the inheritance from Frank's death to buy a new car, which Frank doesn't care much for. Frank's wife only insists on the birthday call from their son to get the car. Frank's son doesn't call him often, which Frank excuses in his mind by saying he has an important job that always requires his attention.

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question: What does the story say about how to clean a trumpet?

answer: Though Frank probably has someone to clean the trumpet for him, he cleans it himself. He carefully wipes it after playing it to remove any fingerprints and oils valves. He returns the trumpet to its case, closed the latches without locking them and slid it back into the space under the wardrobe, now free from sight. Frank seems to be careful not to overexert himself and deprive himself of a normal life.

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SPENCER LARSEN (born March 4, 1984) is a former American football fullback. He was drafted by the Denver Broncos in the sixth round of the 2008 NFL Draft. He played college football at Arizona, primarily as a linebacker.[1]

Early years

Larsen earned SuperPrep All-Farwest honors and was named First-team All-State by The Arizona Republic as a senior at Highland High School in Gilbert, Arizona after recorded 124 tackles as a senior. He was also the All-Region co-Defensive Most Valuable Player.

College career

In 2007 Larsen was a First-team All-Pacific-10 Conference as a senior at Arizona after leading the conference with 131 tackles (87 solo) in 12 games (12 starts). He added four sacks, one interception, five pass breakups, four fumble recoveries and three forced fumbles. The year before, 2006, Larsen received Second-team All-Pacific-10 Conference honors as a junior after making 89 tackles (63 solo), two sacks (11 yds.) and one interception in 12 games (12 starts). He also had three pass breakups, three fumble recoveries and two forced fumbles. He was also First-team Academic All-Conference. In 2005, he saw action in eight games (6 starts) as a sophomore and totaled 51 tackles (29 solo), one sack, one pass breakup and one fumble recovery. He also received Second-team academic All-Conference recognition. Larsen did not play football from 2003-04 because he was on a mission for The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints in Chile. In 2002 Larsen played all 12 games (7 starts) as a true freshman for Arizona and recorded 41 tackles (30 solo), two sacks and three pass breakups and was named Third-team freshman All-America and First-team freshman All-Pacific-10 Conference by The Gridiron Report. He was the defensive MVP of the 2008 East–West Shrine Game.[2]

Professional career

Pre-draft

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Denver Broncos

On November 16, 2008, in a Broncos 24-20 road win over the Atlanta Falcons, Larsen became the first NFL player since 2003 (and only the fourth since 1990)[3] to start a game on both offense (fullback) and defense (linebacker).[4] The positions fullback and linebacker both involve considerably more contact than the wide receiver / cornerback positions played by other modern two-way players such as Troy Brown, Deion Sanders, Julian Edelman, and Champ Bailey. He also played on special teams during the game, including the opening kickoff. Larsen earned Diet Pepsi NFL Rookie of the Week honors for the first time in his career for his performance against the Falcons.[5]

New England Patriots

Larsen signed with the New England Patriots on March 22, 2012.[6] He was placed on season-ending injured reserve on August 27, 2012 and released from the team on March 4, 2013.

Tampa Bay Buccaneers

On July 27, 2013, Larsen signed with the Tampa Bay Buccaneers.[7] On August 26, 2013, he was released by the Buccaneers.[8] Larsen re-signed with the team on September 10, 2013. He was released again on September 14, 2013. He was re-signed on September 25, 2013.

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title: Spencer Larsen

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answer: Spencer Larsen is a former American football fullback. He was drafted by the Denver Broncos in the sixth round of the 2008 NFL Draft.

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answer: Larsen earned SuperPrep All-Farwest honors and was named First-team All-State by The Arizona Republic as a senior at Highland High School in Gilbert, Arizona. He was also the All-Region co-Defensive Most Valuable Player.

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answer: Larsen was a First-team All-Pacific-10 Conference as a senior at Arizona after leading the conference with 131 tackles (87 solo) in 12 games (12 starts). He added four sacks, one interception, five pass breakups, four fumble recoveries, and three forced fumbles. The year before, he received Second-team All-Pacific-10 Conference honors as a junior after making 89 tackles (63 solo), two sacks (11 yds.), and one interception in 12 games (12 starts). He also had three pass breakups, three fumble recoveries, and two forced fumbles. He was also First-team Academic All-Conference. In 2005, he saw action in eight games (6 starts) as a sophomore and totaled 51 tackles (29 solo), one sack, one pass breakup, and one fumble recovery. He also received Second-team academic All-Conference recognition. Larsen did not play football from 2003-04 because he was on a mission for The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints in Chile. In 2002, Larsen played all 12 games (7 starts) as a true freshman for Arizona and recorded 41 tackles (30 solo), two sacks, and three pass breakups and was named Third-team freshman All-America and First-team freshman All-Pacific-10 Conference by The Gridiron Report. He was the defensive MVP of the 2008 East-West Shrine Game.

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answer: Spencer Larsen is a former American football fullback. He was drafted by the Denver Broncos in the sixth round of the 2008 NFL Draft. He played college football at Arizona, primarily as a linebacker. In 2007, he was a First-team All-Pacific-10 Conference as a senior at Arizona after leading the conference with 131 tackles (87 solo) in 12 games (12 starts). He also played on special teams during the game.

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MAHAMAYA KALIKA SAUNSTHAN ( Devanagari:श्री संस्थान महामाया कालिका ) is a temple complex in Kansarpal village of Bicholim taluka in the state of Goa, India.[1][2] The presiding deity of the temple is _Kali_ worshipped in the form of _Mahamaya_. The goddess Kali, the terrible and cruel to the demons and evil doers, is worshiped with blood sacrifice in most parts of India, in Goa however the fierce invocation of the deity was never popular.[3] As per the regional myths after killing the demons Sumbha and Nisumbha, the deity's anger was soothed and the deity manifested herself in a peaceful (_Shanta_), gentle (_Soumya_) form, which is very popular in Goa.[4]

History

The deity might have been worshiped by the _copper-smiths_(Kansars) of the village originally.The folk tradition believes that this temple might have been constructed during the Chandragupta Vikramaditya’s time.[5] A Copper-plate or _tambiapotto_ (in Konkani) dated 1436 AD, which is in the possession of the Archaeology department of Goa, mentions among various other things the following:

_Kalamba_ seems to be another name of the deity though, the name _Kalika_ appears in the copper-plate inscription mentioned above. During Goa Inquisition, when Goa was in turmoil, most of the people of Daivajna caste took refuge in the temple premises to elude conversion to Roman Catholicism and prosecution.[6]

Iconography

The main idol in the sanctum sanctorum is more than 800 years old and is a masterpiece of Kadamba sculptures. The deity is four armed, shows each hand carrying variously a sword(_Khadga_), a trident (_trishul_), a Shield(_Khetaka_) and a skull bowl (_Kapala_), her mount lion, can be seen at her feet.[7]

Other affiliated deities

The temple Panchishta includes the following deities: Devi Panchayatana (worshiped in the main sanctum sanctorum, includes Shivalinga, Shaligrama etc.), Ravalnath, Hedgeshwar, Shetyeshwar, Palnath. A Buddhist idol of _Shakyamuni_ is found in the temple, as a remnant of the Buddhist sect that prevailed in Goa till the early 12th century AD.[8]

The temple architecture

The temple is a masterpiece of Goan temple architecture, with a huge hall for public gatherings during festivals and meetings (_Sabhamantapa_ a stage and a _Nagarkhana_ which is above the stage is used to play drums and shehnai during specific times of the day and during specific rituals), the main hall inside the temple (_Chowk_), path for circumambulation (_Sarwali_) and Sanctum sanctorum(_Garbhakud_ or _Garbhagruha_), with a huge golden Kalasha. Temple is surrounded by Agrashalas, two beautiful gates (_Praveshdwara_s) and a magnificent lamp tower (_Deepastambha_) is eye-catching.[9][10]

The devotees and patrons of the temple

The deity is believed to be patron deity of above said Gomantak Daivadnya Brahmin community of Goa . The patrons of the temples or the Mahajans are divided into four groups:_Sashtikar_,_Bardeskar_,_Tiswadkar_,_Antrujkar_.[11]

Festivals

The _Shishirotsav_ of Kasarpal temple attracts pilgrims from Goa, Maharashtra and Karnataka. It is a 10-day-long celebration, includes procession of deities in different Vahanas, and various other rites like _Ganga Pujan_, _Homa_, _Dhwajarohana_, _Gulalotsava_, _Rathotsava_ etc. An orchestra known as _Suvari_ is played during the festival which includes musical instruments Ghumot, _Kasale_, cymbals and Shehnai. Other important festivals are Ratha Saptami, Navaratri, Vasant Puja, Akshay Tritiya, Dasara,_Avali Bhojan_. Silver Palanquin procession of the deity on every Chaturdashi of the dark fortnight of Hindu lunar calendar is also a major attraction[12]

Museum

It is the first temple in Goa to have a private museum on its own, titled as _Kaalika Sangrahaalaya_. It has objects of ancient, medieval and the modern period. The museum has around 10 small galleries housing rare antiquities including stone sculptures, brass lamps, wooden and silver artifacts etc.[13]

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John Graham-Cumming Contributor

John Graham-Cumming is head of engineering at Cloudflare.

This past year was a big one for internet attacks, encryption, blackouts, speed and IoT, and 2017 is positioned to bring even more headlines for each of these. As Cloudflare prepares for the coming year, we made some predictions about what’s next for the future of the internet.

But first, let’s review what we saw as a result of the widespread use and abuse of the internet in 2016.

In both Gabon and Gambia, internet connectivity was disrupted during elections. The contested election in Gambia started with an internet blackout that lasted a short time. In Gabon, the internet shutdown lasted for days. Even as we write this, countries like DR Congo are discussing blocking specific internet services, clearly forgetting the lessons learned in these other countries.

DDoS attacks continued throughout the year, hitting websites big and small. In March, we saw weekend DDoS attacks that were peaking at 400 Gbps, and in December, we saw a new pattern of attackers treating attacks as a regular job to be performed from 9 to 5.

In addition to real DDoS, there were also empty threats from a group calling itself Armada Collective and demanding bitcoin for sites and APIs to stay online. Another group popped up to copycat the same modus operandi.

The Internet of Things became what many had warned it would become: an army of devices used for attacks. A botnet army of IoT cameras and a major attack took out DNS service provider Dyn.

Non-DDoS attacks continued apace with hacks that need WAF protection like httpoxy and ImageTragick causing disruption for unprotected sites. And TLS experienced yet another attack called DROWN.

  As the web has become more encrypted, the need to optimize TLS and TCP together has become more important.

But it wasn’t all doom and gloom. IPv6 saw significant mobile traffic and suddenly felt absolutely real. Apple announced that iOS apps must support IPv6-only networks and major ISPs started prioritizing IPv6 traffic. TLS 1.3 went live to dramatically simplify and improve the security of the internet.

And the internet got a lot faster with widespread support for HTTP/2, including Server Push and WebP conversion. As the web has become more encrypted, the need to optimize TLS and TCP together has become more important and Cloudflare helped contribute to increased security with Origin CA, HTTPS Everywhere and giving protected WebSockets to everyone.

Our team, comprised of engineers, programmers, cryptographers and hackers, took a look into a virtual crystal ball and came up with our predictions for 2017. Here’s what we think the year ahead will have to offer.

1TBPS DDOS ATTACKS WILL BECOME THE BASELINE FOR “MASSIVE ATTACKS”

Four years ago, we illustrated a blog post about a 65Gbps DDoS with a picture of the band Massive Attack. The following year, Massive Attack were back illustrating a 300Gbps attack; as internet speeds have gone up worldwide, so have DDoS sizes. In 2016, we’ve sporadically seen 1Tbps DDoS attacks reported from various service providers. We believe that in 2017, the baseline for a massive attack will be 1Tbps (and we hope that Massive Attack’s 2016 song releases presage a 2017 album).

THE INTERNET WILL GET FASTER YET AGAIN AS PROTOCOLS LIKE QUIC BECOME MORE PREVALENT

Although HTTP/2 has a large effect on web performance, it also depends on the TCP protocol for connections, which can cause performance problems on lossy networks. Google has been experimenting with a protocol called QUIC, which uses UDP instead of TCP. We expect such UDP-based web protocol experiments to continue and become mainstream.

IPV6 WILL BECOME THE DE FACTO FOR MOBILE NETWORKS AND IPV4-ONLY FIXED NETWORKS WILL BE LOOKED UPON AS OFF

Our data says IPv6 is 27 percent faster, Facebook says 10 to 15 percent faster, LinkedIn says between 10 to 40 percent faster for mobile. Regardless of which numbers you believe, it’s clear that IPv6 provides a speed advantage. At the same time, ISPs and mobile networks are pushing for greater deployment of IPv6, and we expect IPv6 to be the norm in 2017 for all networks. Specifically for mobile networks, we believe IPv4 will be deprecated.

This chart shows the percentage of top 25,000 websites (according to Alexa) that are available over IPv6:

A SHA-1 COLLISION WILL BE ANNOUNCED

Back in 1996, potential collisions in MD5 were identified, but it wasn’t until 2005 that actual collisions were demonstrated. At the time, the death of both MD5 and SHA-1 were predicted. MD5 is now seen as cryptographically useless and has even been used in malware to forge a certificate.

Since 2005, bad news about collision resistance in SHA-1 has been gathering and we predict that an actual collision will be computed in 2017.

LAYER 7 ATTACKS WILL RISE BUT LAYER 6 WON’T BE FAR BEHIND

When people think of DDoS attacks, they are typically thinking of volumetric attacks against layers 3 and 4 (such as SYN floods). We believe that Layer 7 attacks (particularly against the HTTP and DNS protocols) will continue to rise in 2017 as attackers look for smart ways to knock web applications offline beyond simply volumetric attacks.

At the same time, Layer 6 attacks against the TLS protocol will make an appearance. We have already seen such attacks in the past (attacks that were designed to consume server CPU by asking for slow or complex cryptographic operations) and smart attackers will continue their search for any weakness in a web application or protocol implementation.

MOBILE TRAFFIC WILL ACCOUNT FOR 60 PERCENT OF ALL INTERNET TRAFFIC BY THE END OF THE YEAR

The number of mobile internet users surpassed fixed internet users back in 2014, and today more than 80 percent of internet users own a smartphone, while 89 percent of their mobile time is spent using apps.

This means that acceleration and protection of APIs (that are used by apps for their internet connectivity) is essential and trends indicate that mobile traffic will be 60 percent of all internet traffic this year. This switch to mobile puts more emphasis on optimized web experiences and robust APIs than before.

THE SECURITY OF DNS WILL BE TAKEN SERIOUSLY

The attack on Dyn’s DNS service showed how an often overlooked piece of the internet, the Domain Name System, is critical to its functioning. Much of the news around DDoS attacks until the Dyn attack was focused on attacks on websites and networks. With this realization that DNS is critical, its security will be taken seriously in 2017, and the protection of DNS infrastructure and servers will become a business necessity.

At the same time, the open nature of DNS will come into focus and DNSSEC will take on a greater role in securing DNS responses from attack.

question: What problem is being described in this article?

answer: The problem being described in this article is the widespread use and abuse of the internet.

critique: The answer should mention the specific abuses.

critique: The answer should include the specific problem being described.

critique: The answer should mention the specific examples of internet abuse.

critique: The answer should mention the specific problems that are being described.

critique: It misses to mention the internet memes on specific countries

question: Describe the DDoS attacks.

answer: DDoS attacks are distributed denial of service attacks. They are attacks that are meant to take down a website or service. The attacks are usually volumetric, meaning they are meant to flood the target with traffic.

critique: The answer should mention the size of the attacks.

critique: The section on the attacks is not comprehensive enough.

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critique: "The attacks are usually volumetric, meaning they are meant to flood the target with traffic." - this is incorrect. DDoS attacks are not always volumetric.

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question: How much could the content of this article influence hackers to hack the internet even more?

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I don’t remember how I got there or where it started. So, in a way, it started off like most dreams do. I was running. But not in solidarity; with a group. I wasn’t exactly sure who they were, I just felt a deep camaraderie with them as if they were close to me. It’s hard to explain. None the less, we trekked on. The barren, gray landscape made me feel empty and thirsty inside, like I knew something better than this was out there somewhere. Or was it somewhere in the past? Was this the aftermath of a dispute between our territory’s leader with another? Regardless, I knew that there was something better than this. It was eating at me.

We ran for what seemed like hours, passing abandoned houses, ransacked for their valuables. Finally, we stopped in a small neighborhood. Three houses stood there seemingly untouched by the madness of what the earth was now. It was a comforting feeling to be back home. We set down our valuables and watched the sun slowly make its dissent over the orange horizon. We felt closer than we ever have before to each other. Quickly afterwards, we all wished each other good night. I lied in my bed wishing for this to be over. Whatever “this” was, I don’t know.

The next morning, I awoke with a kick of my own leg. This seems to happen every time I die in a dream.

The rest of my group awoke, and we packed up again. This time though, we carried only the necessities as if we would come back. Maybe I could call this place home again. It’s been so long since I could. I kept that from the others. I found it difficult to show much weakness to them. Not now. One must be callused and strong in these times.

The morning sun was beautiful, it was the only thing that gave me hope, as we marched onward. We didn’t talk about the past much, but when we did, It was certainly a touchy subject. You can only joke and play around for so long before conversion turns serious. It’s what we needed to keep sane, none the less, as we walked on this abandoned interstate. The hours were long, but I felt as if we were coming up to something big..something worth our while. Just then, our leader, average in height with a weathered face and wrinkly brow, raised his binoculars that hung around his neck. He trembled as he said, “There! Over there! Something… miraculous!”. Every one of us immediately perked up at the thought and made a mad dash towards the undiscovered locale.

We stopped and gazed in awe of what we saw, a large neighborhood of houses. What struck them as odd though was their toy-like appearance. The orange and green houses looked almost gelatin-like. Maybe they were? Relishing at the thought, I was the first one down the steep hill that separated me and this mysterious village, but before I could make it, a married couple from my group had already beaten me there and had sunken into the gelatin-made streets. It was the most peculiar thing we had all ever seen, but at the same instant, it was beautiful. We laughed, and we became children again. I didn’t look back or even think of the home that I left behind.

At that very moment, my leg kicked. I awoke in my bedroom; It was all a dream.

**Note:** I am in high school and a very amateur writer, and I'm sure that is apparent by my grammar. I would love to hear some feedback though. The good and the bad, I want it all! Thank you!

title: A dream that I had.

question: What does the story say about how to wake up from a nightmare?

answer: No answer

critique: The narrator is able to wake up from the nightmare by kicking their own leg.

critique: The answer should mention that the narrator wakes up from the nightmare by kicking their own leg.

critique: The answer should be "the main character wakes up from the nightmare by kicking their leg".

critique: The answer is incorrect. The story does not mention how to wake up from a nightmare.

critique: The story doesn't provide any information about how to wake up from a nightmare.

question: What does the story say about the narrator?

answer: The narrator is running with a group. They stop in a small neighborhood and spend the night there. The next day, they continue their journey. The narrator is the first to reach the village made of gelatin. He wakes up in his bedroom and realizes it was all a dream.

critique: The answer should mention that the narrator is dreaming about running with a group.

critique: It's omitted that the narrator does not remember how he got there or where the dream started.

critique: The narrator's dream is not about a village made of gelatin.

critique: The narrator's actions are out of order.

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critique: The answer should mention that the narrator is a teenager.

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question: What does the text say about the setting of the story?

answer: The story takes place in a post-apocalyptic world. The landscape is barren and gray. The group travels through abandoned houses and ransacked neighborhoods. They stop at a small neighborhood with three houses, which they consider their home. The group then travels on an abandoned interstate.

critique: "The landscape is barren and gray." - this is incorrect. The landscape was barren and gray at the beginning, but then they arrived at a neighborhood with three houses that they considered home.

critique: The group doesn't stop at a small neighborhood with three houses, they stop in a small neighborhood with three houses.

critique: The answer should mention the miraculous discovery.

critique: The answer omits the setting of the story's climax.

question: What does the story say about the narrator's group?

answer: The narrator is running with a group. They are not sure who they are, but they feel a deep camaraderie with them. They have a leader. They are running through an abandoned landscape. They stop in a small neighborhood and rest. The next day they pack up and continue to march.

critique: The answer omits the narrator's reaction to the discovery of the village.

critique: "They are running through an abandoned landscape." - is incorrect because the group is running through a landscape that's not abandoned.


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Damn. Now I really didn't see this happening. Of all the things to happen at this bland school and this is the shit that happens. Wow. I guess I'm getting a bit carried, let me start from the beginning.
          My school, Jefferson Middle School, is rather boring, nothing really exciting happens here except the occasional girl drama that usally goes like, "Brian likes me! Not you, skany hoe!" And ends in a matter of three days. I'm usually quiet, if you were to call me "popular girl," you would be wrong but calling me a "nerd" wouldn't be right either. I was just sort of there. I had my friends and that's all I needed. That's where this story starts. With my friend, Daniel. Daniel was a pretty intresting boy. All acceralted classes, loved video games and comics, and wasn't bad looking at all. Over the first year of middle school, Daniel and I became pretty close. Hanging out after school and learning about eachother. It was pretty nice. Daniel loved life and he wasn't afraid to show it. If he had something to say, oh would he say it, but he was never disrespectful about it. He was always being a gentlemen. People always said shit about him.
         "Oh! Did you hear about Daniel? I heard he was sucking cock in the bathroom!"
         "Daniel the fag!"
         "Daniel should go burn in fucking hell with all the other fags that enjoy buttsex!" Get the trend here? They kept on saying he was gay, over and over. Through messages on Facebook, notes, or even writing on bathroom walls, which is very cliche. There have been times where I have asked if he was gay and I would get the same answer every time.
          "Do you think I am?" Over and over, he never changed it. Daniel was really proud and he felt as if he shouldn't state if he were gay or not and I really admire that about him. 8th grade started and I assumed that the gay jokes would have gotten old by now, but they didn't. They actual got worse. More people started calling him a "fag, dick-sucker," and spreading rumors that I don't even wanna remember. I noticed a change in Daniel, he wasn't as outgoing, didn't speak his mind, became less quite, less proud. I tried helping him, I really did but it never worked. He seemed to just become more depressed. Those kids never noticed either, they just attacked him more and more, getting more ruthless with each insult. This drama was lasting way more than three days and I wasn't sure what would happen. Shit even got worsed.
          That's when I heard the intercom come on one day during class.
       "Students, I am sad to announce that our student, Daniel Rigsbee, has died yesterday." They didn't tell us how he died, but we all knew. He killed himself. The voice of the principal announcing his death was so fucking emotionless, it made it seem as if Daniel was some character in a movie that died. Everyone was silent. I was filled with anger. Those ruthless bastards did this. They didn't know when to stop. The minute the bell rang, I sprinted to his house asking if it was true was they said today. His father simply nodded and beckoned me in. He said that there was a note left in his room directed to me and "bitches." I walked to his room, feeling as if I was going to puke. I found the note, all directed in rainbows, colors, and smiley faces. It made me sick. I opened the note with nervoness and read.
        "Dear Juno and the son of bitches at school. Let me make this clear. I am not fucking gay. I am as straight as the pole your mom dances on. I should not have to tell people this, it's my life and you shouldn't be butting in. Pun intended. You caused this and I hope you feel great. You did it! You've killed me! I'm not gonna say that this wasn't your guys' fault because fuck that. It totally was. I hope you live with that burden that you killed me for your whole life. Juno, I hope you live a great life and don't cry over me, you didn't cause this. You are amazing and don't let people do what they did to me to you. I would punch their neck. (:
                                            Bye,
                                                  Daniel-Not fucking gay-Rigsbee
        What the fuck? That wasn't sad at all. This was the Daniel that I knew. He killed himself because he was done of the shit. I don't think he felt sorry or anything. I don't even know. As I turned to leave, I found something else. It was another note reading, "I hope this was exciting enough for you, Juno. I am a coward. I wasn't gonna deal with this anymore. They didn't win, remerber that. I won. They get to deal with my death. -Daniel"
         Fucking. Daniel.

title: Uhhmm...Well I'm 13 and I would like to be a writer when I get older so here's one of my short stories. Reviews? Be honest.

question: What does the story say about bullying?

answer: The author believes bullies didn't care about Daniel and that their bullying tactics might have made Daniel commit suicide. She believes the bullies are the ones who killed her friend. She points out that the bullies were unrelenting, and the only resolution he could find was to kill himself.

critique: The first sentence is a bit confusing. It would be better to say that the author believes bullies didn't care about Daniel and that their bullying tactics might have made him commit suicide.

question: Summarize the narrator's relationship with Daniel.

answer: Juno and Daniel are best friends and have been since 8th grade. She cares deeply for him. However, she didn't notice the student body's cruelty towards him. She was angry when she heard he committed suicide.

critique: The answer should mention that Daniel is the one who committed suicide.

critique: The narrator's anger at Daniel's death is omitted.

text: "Juno and Daniel are best friends and have been since 8th grade. She cares deeply for him. However, she didn't notice the student body's cruelty towards him." - this is inaccurate. Juno and Daniel have been friends even before the 8t grade. Juno also noticed the other student's cruelty towards Daniel.

question: Summarize the school's reaction to Daniel's death.

answer: No answer

critique: The answer should mention that the school's reaction was emotionless.

text: The response should mention that the principal who announced Daniel's death was emotionless while the other students in Juno's class were silent.

question: What does the story say about the bullies' reaction to Daniel's note?

answer: No answer

critique: The response can include the actual content of the note because it's declared to be public in the story.

critique: The response is incorrect. The story does not say anything about the bullies' reaction to Daniel's note.

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critique: The answer should mention that the bullies did not react to the note.

critique: The answer should mention that the bullies didn't have a reaction.


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WASHINGTON — With President Donald Trump’s approval ratings below 50 percent and control of the U.S. House at stake, Republicans are being forced to spend money and time trying to hold two Ohio seats they normally would not have to worry about.

Although the GOP is favored to retain control of the 12th Congressional District seat, left vacant by the retirement of Rep. Pat Tiberi, and the 1st Congressional District slot held by Steve Chabot, political analysts say it will be nearly impossible for the Republicans to retain control of the House if they lose either post.

Because the president’s party traditionally loses seats in off-year elections, Democrats are increasingly confident that Trump’s tariffs-on, tariffs-off decisions on trade, blended with an ongoing investigation into his 2016 campaign, will make it easier for them to win the 23 seats needed to take the House for the first time since 2010.

In addition, national Democrats are kicking the tires on another campaign in northeast Ohio where Rep. Bob Gibbs, R-Lakeville, is fending off an aggressive challenge from Democrat Ken Harbaugh.

>> Join the conversation at Facebook.com/dispatchpolitics and connect with us on Twitter @OhioPoliticsNow

“If the Democrats netted a seat in Ohio, it probably is suggestive they are winning the House,” said Kyle Kondik, managing editor of a major political website at the University of Virginia’s Center for Politics. “The Democrats can win the House without winning any seats in Ohio.”

Rep. Tim Ryan, D-Niles, who has been campaigning for Democratic candidates, said, “We literally may have three shots in Ohio."

To Republicans, Democrats are engaged in wishful thinking. The nonpartisan Congressional Budget Office projects the economy will expand at a brisk 3 percent this year, while Ohio’s unemployment rate has tumbled to 4.3 percent with non-farm payrolls at 5.52 million, compared to 5.2 million during the depths of the 2008 recession.

While Trump is unpopular in a number of states, internal polls suggest his approval rating in Ohio has been steady at 46 percent. Ohio Republicans were careful in 2011 to draw congressional districts favorable to their candidates, which makes it difficult for Democrat Susan Moran Palmer to defeat Republican Anthony Gonzalez in the northeast Ohio seat left vacant when Republican Congressman Jim Renacci of Wadsworth decided to run for the U.S. Senate.

“We’re talking about seats which are reliably Republican, and Ohio is seemingly handling Trump’s America with fewer speed bumps than most other states,” said Jeff Sadosky, a Republican consultant in Washington.

Corry Bliss, who directs a political action committee helping Republican House candidates, said “there’s a better chance of (former Gov. Ted Strickland) coming out of retirement and winning a statewide race than us losing any of those seats. I hope the Democrats spend all their money in Ohio.”

Yet, privately, GOP officials acknowledge their party is facing the type of turbulence that often leads to major political defeats. No fewer than 48 House Republicans, including Speaker Paul Ryan of Wisconsin, will not seek re-election, a sure sign they believe their prospects of holding the House are gloomy.

In addition, Chabot and Republican Troy Balderson, who is running for the Tiberi seat, are competing in districts that are home to large numbers of suburbanites, many of whom are women and object to Trump’s style.

The GOP also has to contend with special counsel Robert Mueller’s investigation into whether the Trump campaign in 2016 colluded with Russian officials to damage Democratic presidential nominee Hillary Clinton’s campaign.

“The map Republicans drew can hold up in good years for their party, but it may be under stress when there is an unpopular president,” said David Wasserman, a congressional analyst for the nonpartisan Cook Political Report in Washington.

To counter potential losses, Republicans sent Ryan into Columbus, Dayton and Cincinnati last week to raise money for Republican candidates. He took in about $700,000. Ryan and Sen. Rob Portman, R-Ohio, hosted a $2,700 per person fundraiser Wednesday for Balderson at a lobbyist's home in Dublin.

They also argue the 10-year, $1.5 trillion tax cut Trump signed last year will prove a political plus, with Sadosky saying that “if Republicans can effectively make a case on it and not have their message diluted by the tweet of the day, there is real upside.”

Tim Ryan dismissed the GOP optimism as nonsense. “We’re moving into a newer era of what a good economy means. The question is a good economy for whom? ... It’s not just about employment. It’s about wages, pensions and security. I see it every day. The anxiety is still there.”

A key race to watch is between Gibbs and Harbaugh in the 7th Congressional District, which includes Ashland, Tuscarawas and Holmes counties and part of Stark and Lorain counties. Although Wasserman said “we don’t currently see the Gibbs seat as competitive,” other analysts warn that if a major anti-Trump wave develops, Gibbs could lose.

“To me, the 12th and the 1st clearly stand out, and if I would list a third, it would be the 7th because Harbaugh is running a credible race even though the district is really Republican,” Kondik said.

Jessica Wehrman of the Dispatch Washington Bureau contributed to this story.

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question: Why might the POTUS' party typically lose House seats in non-election years?

answer: The article doesn't say.

critique: The article does say, but it's not very clear.

critique: The answer is wrong. The article does say.

critique: While the article doesn't explicitly state the reason, it is implied that the president's party loses seats because of their unpopularity.

critique: It's omitted that the article says it might be because the president is unpopular.

question: Why might it be important to get predictions from a nonpartisan agency?

answer: This is because the article is written in the style of an opinion piece, and so it is important to have an outside perspective.

critique: The answer is made up. There is no mention of the article being an opinion piece.

critique: The Congressional Budget Office is being mentioned as the nonpartisan agency.

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text: It would be better to say that there is no answer, as one can't be found in the text.

question: Why might women "object to Trump's style"?

answer: It is not stated, but it is possible that Trump's style is seen as misogynistic.

critique: It is not stated, but it is possible that Trump's style is seen as misogynistic. - this is a guess and should be omitted.

critique: The answer is not stated, but it is possible that Trump's style is seen as misogynistic.

critique: The response could include more context to strengthen the answer.

critique: It is not stated, but it is possible that Trump's style is seen as misogynistic. - this is a possible answer, but it is not the only one.

critique: The article does not mention Trump's style.

question: What is one reason the fiscally conservative might argue against national spending in the favor and interest of social welfare programs?

answer: The fiscally conservative might argue against national spending in favor of social welfare programs because they are fiscally conservative.

critique: There is no mention of this being a reason they might reason


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GLENLYON is a small village in the Shire of Hepburn local government area, Victoria, Australia around 10 km from Daylesford along the Daylesford - Malmsbury Road, and around 101 km from the Melbourne CBD via Kyneton and Malmsbury.

It is on the Loddon River.

Despite being only 10 km from Daylesford and with a growing permanent and weekender population, local water provider Goulburn Murray Water has not deemed it necessary to provide Glenlyon with town piped water despite several reservoirs being nearby and therefore all residents have a combination of either tanks and/or bores for drinking and garden water use. Other utilities include electricity provided by several retailers, waste water via septic systems and gas via fixed LPG bottle.

Glenlyon is well known for its main street of old European trees lending an “Englishness” to the village and providing a cooling canopy in the heat of summer.

[Main street of Glenlyon with European trees in full bloom in summer]

As at the 2016 Commonwealth Census, the village of Glenlyon & its immediate hinterland (the census district includes the localities/hamlets of Denver, Porcupine Ridge, parts of Wheatsheaf) had a population of 389 people. The median age of the local population is 50 as of 2011. The top 5 cultural backgrounds of the local population are broken up into 30% claiming English heritage, 20% Australian heritage, 13.5% Irish, 11.9% Scottish and 3.3% Germany - however of these numbers 74.9% were actually born in Australia, 5.8% in England and 3% in New Zealand. 84.7% only spoke English at home. A reflection of the village as the location of many commuters to either Daylesford, Ballarat or even Melbourne and reflecting the fact that the locale is a popular retirement, weekender, holiday home or hobby farm location is that 44.1% are employed in professional or managerial roles with 13.9% as tradesmen and 21.9% as clerical or public servants. Only 6.6% work in rural or farming.[1]

Glenlyon has a rich agricultural industry amongst the surrounding areas. Cattle and sheep are largely stocked throughout the district supplying meat products and wool to the local and global markets. Potatoes, cereal crops (both for hay and grain), organic vegetables, vegetable seed and lucerne grow in the rich volcanic soil. The contrast of green pastures, grazing livestock, bright red ploughed paddocks and golden stubble paddocks across the rolling countryside, make the scenery in the area very special to the locals and visitors alike.

History

In 1846, Richard Babington and John Carpenter purchased a part of the Holcombe Run (originally part of A.F. Mollisons Coliban Run) and called it Glenlyon after their Scottish home.[2]

[Copy of the original Crown Survey by the Victorian Colonial government in 1867 establishing and planning the township of Glenlyon.]

Glenlyon Post Office opened around May 1858 and closed in 1973.[3]

Glenlyon once had a primary school and hotels but all are closed.

The original general store operated until approx 2009 when it closed. A new general store opened in the old premises, bringing to the town a revitalised heart. The revitalised store, which is well utilised by tourists passing through does duty as a cafe with an outdoor eating area and selected groceries. Beside the store is the local community notice board.

The historic old Shire Hall in the main street, once home of the Shire of Glenlyon before it merged with the neighbouring Borough of Daylesford in May 1966[4] (itself the subject of the local council reorganisations in 1995 into the bigger Shire of Hepburn) is used as a public hall. The Glenlyon Progress Association is the designated “owner” of the Hall. In 2017/18 a large amount of funding was received from Regional Development Victoria to renovate the Hall, which reopened in March 2018 to great acclaim.

A village market is also held in and around the Glenlyon Hal on the third Saturday of the month.l[5]

The nearby Glenlyon Recreation Reserve (in Dysart Street) is also the location of a mineral spring and picnic ground (like those that exist in Hepburn Springs but with no crowds) with a bore and hand pump allowing visitors to 'sample' for themselves the heavily mineralised water. The spring is located to the far side of the recreation reserve along the unsealed Suttons Lane. Parking and BBQ facilities are provided at the spring.

Glenlyon Recreation Reserve is also home to the Glenlyon & District Pony Club[6] with events throughout the year.

The major activity held in Glenlyon is the annual Paint Glenlyon and Dee Waterhouse Memorial Art Prize Competition, held around the Easter break. Entrants must have painted a (recognisable) landscape in/around Glenlyon. With a first prize of $1000 it is one of the largest art prizes in regional Australia. This is sponsored and organised by the Glenlyon Progress Association.

Glenlyon District News is published monthly.

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title: Glenlyon, Victoria

question: Why did the local water provider, Goulburn Murray Water, refused to supply water to Glenlyon?

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critique: The answer is incorrect. The reason is not stated in the article.

text: "No answer" is the usual format for questions with no answers.

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