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The WORTHINGTON MOUNTAINS is a small long north-south trending mountain range in northwestern Lincoln County, Nevada.[1][2] The range is bounded by the Sand Spring Valley to the west and Garden Valley to the east. The Quinn Canyon Range lies to the northwest, the Golden Gate Range lies to the east and the Timpahute Range lies to the south and southeast.[3]

The range has two prominent peaks: Worthington Peak at near the north end and Meeker Peak at near the south end. The surrounding basins have elevations of .[4] There is no surface water and few springs within the range.[5]

The Worthington Mountains are within the Basin and Range National Monument, created by President Barack Obama in 2015.

Geology and mining

[The Worthington Range from the east. Meeker Peak is on the left.] The Freiberg district on the northeast end of the range, located northeast of Worthington Peak, has had a long history of mining. The bedrock in the area is Pogonip Group limestone and dolomites of Ordovician age which strike north south and dip 20° to the west. The sedimentary rocks have been faulted and intruded by numerous felsic intrusives. The old Freiberg mine was worked for gold and silver starting in 1865. Later the New Freiberg mine was worked with underground and open pit methods for silver, lead, zinc and copper from 1919 through 1948.[6]

The Upper Devonian Guilmette Formation outcrops in the southern portion of the range. The Guilmette contains exposures of the Alamo Breccia related to the Alamo Impact which is approximately centered in the Timpahute Range some to the south.[7]

Flora and fauna

The lower elevations of the mountains are characterized by a sagebrush community and other shrubs. The middle elevations are primarily forested by singleleaf pinyon pine (_Pinus monophylla_), Utah Juniper (_Juniperus osteosperma_), and mountain mahogany (_Cercpcarpus ledifolius_). At the higher elevations are bristlecone pine (_Pinus longaeva_) and, in two small areas south of Worthington Peak, ponderosa pine (_Pinus ponderosa_).

Large mammals found within the range are mule deer (_Odocoileus hemionus_), pronghorn (_Antilocapra americana_), desert bighorn sheep (_Ovis canadensis nelsoni_), bobcat (_Lynx rufus baileyi_), and mountain lion (_Felis concolor_).[8]

Wilderness area

[Worthington Mountains Wilderness, Nevada]

Worthington Mountains Wilderness Area was created by the U.S. Congress in 2004 and consists of most of the Worthington Mountains. The wilderness area encompasses of the range and the extensive alluvial fans on the western slopes of the mountains. Worthington Peak is on the northern border of the wilderness. The northernmost part of the range, north of Worthington Peak, includes an old mining area and is outside of the wilderness. The wilderness ranges from to in elevation.[9]

The Bureau of Land Management says that “no other Nevada area expresses the wilderness characteristics of stark beauty, chaotic topography, and remoteness quite as well as the Worthington Wilderness.”[10] The terrain consists of jagged peaks and ridges, narrow canyons, and steep escarpments sloping down to the washes and the desert floor.[11]

The most notable attraction of the wilderness is probably Leviathan Cave just northeast of Meeker Peak. The cave is reached by a difficult informal two-plus miles long trail which climbs the east side of the range. The cave is located at in elevation and entrance requires ropes to descend a 30-foot vertical drop. The cave contains stalactites and stalagmites and is about long. In the 2000-2010 period only about 40 people annually visited the cave.[12][13]

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[5] Worthington Mountain Wilderness, _Bureau of Land Management_, accessed 28 February 2017

[6] Tingley, Joseph P., _The Mineral Resources of the Timpahute Range 30x60 Minute Quadrangle,_ Nevada Bureau of Mines and Geology, Report 46, 1991, pp 6-10

[7] Leroux, Hugues; John E. Warme and Jean-Claude Doukhan; _Shocked quartz in the Alamo breccia, southern Nevada: Evidence for a Devonian impact event,_ Geology, 1995, v. 23, pp. 1003-1006

[8] Weepah Spring Wilderness & Worthington Mountains Wilderness: Wilderness Management Plan and Environmental Assessment", p. 4-5,32; accessed 1 March 2017

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[11] Weepah Spring Wilderness & Worthington Mountains Wilderness: Wilderness Management Plan and Environmental Assessment", p. 3; accessed 1 March 2017

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title: Worthington Mountains

question: What does the article say about the northern part of the Worthington Mountains?

answer: There is an old mining area north of Worthington Peak. The northernmost part of the range is outside the wilderness. The wilderness ranges up to in elevation.

critique: The northernmost part of the range is outside the wilderness

critique: The entire range is outside the wilderness.

critique: The answer omits the Quinn Canyon Range.

critique: "The northernmost part of the range is outside the wilderness" is unnecessary information because it's not part of the northern part of the Worthington Mountains.

critique: The northernmost part of the Worthington Mountains is not outside the wilderness. It is an old mining area.

critique: Wilderness area is not north of Worthington Peak, but includes the northernmost part of the range.

critique: The northernmost part of the range is outside the wilderness.

critique: Add that there are no surface water or springs and that the north end is characterized by a sagebrush community.

critique: The answer does not mention the Quinn Canyon Range.

critique: The answer should mention the Quinn Canyon Range.

text: "The wilderness ranges up to in elevation" is unclear and unnecessary detail.

refinement: There is an old mining area north of Worthington Peak. The northernmost part of the range is outside the wilderness. The wilderness ranges up to in elevation.

question: What does the article say about public transport to the Worthington Mountains?

answer: No answer

critique: There is no public transport to the Worthington Mountains.

critique: No answer is given, but the information can be found in the article.

critique: There is no mention of public transport in the article.

critique: No answer is given, but the article does mention that the Worthington Mountains are within the Basin and Range National Monument, which was created by President Barack Obama in 2015.

critique: No answer is given, but the article does not mention public transport to the Worthington Mountains.

critique: There is no answer because there is no mention of public transport to the Worthington Mountains.

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CHEMPERI is a town on the bank of the Chemperi River, in the Western Ghat, in the Kannur district of South India. Chemperi is often referred as the education city of Kannur with the establishment of Vimal Jyothi Engineering College, Chemperi. It is characterized by its production and export of rubber and spices, its beautiful hillocks, and its serene streams. Village and Panchayath of Chemperi is Eruvessi. Both Panchayath and Village offices of Eruvessi are located in Chemperi. Also Lourde Matha Forane Church, Chemperi is another attraction.Paithalmala and Palakkayam thatt is also a few kilometres away from here.

History

Previously, the land served as the epicenter of people migrating from Travancore to the north districts of Kerala. The modern history of Chemperi starts in the 1930s with the arrival of migrants from the Kottayam district of Kerala. These migrants made Chemperi a big town with almost all the facilities needed to serve its population. More recently, the town has become a local business hub.

Eruvessy, which is very near to Chemperi, has a different historical background. It is believed that the inhabitants there descend from 18th century settlers of the Eruvessy region. The culture and belief system of the people of Eruvessy is entirely different from that of the people of Chemperi, though the neighboring communities live harmoniously.

Economy

The economic mainstay of Chemperi is agriculture. Primary crops include rubber, coconut, pepper, cashew, tapioca, areca nut, and other plantation crops. Rubber occupies the largest land area among plantation crops. Recent increases in the price of rubber have improved the economic condition of many local families. Next to rubber, coconut is the most popular crop. Cashew is yet another important plantation and areca nuts are also important. Pepper is generally intercropped with coconut, areca nut and various fruit trees. In the hilly surroundings of Chemperi, such as in Nellikutty and Areekamala, this inter-cultivation is done between rubber and cashew. The employment situation in Chemperi is slowly changing. Many people seek employment in the Middle East and in other cities of India. Also, as Chemperi and neighborhoods are more depended on agriculture for income, many people are engaged with jobs related agriculture such as rubber tapping, farming related jobs, etc. Many other people depend construction field for job in Chemperi and neighborhoods. The establishment of Vimal Jyoti Engineering college has improved both the employment and education outlook in Chemperi.

Climate

Chemperi's climate is humid. The weather is pleasant in December, January and February. An oppressive hot season stretches from March until the end of May, followed by the southwest monsoon, which continues until the end of September. October and November bring the northeast monsoon, _Thulamazha_.

Average Weather Condition: 22 °C - 34 °C

Education

Nirmala Lower Primary School was the first educational institution in Chemperi. It was founded in 1950 by the parish of Chemperi to fulfill the wish of the migrant fathers. The school was first managed by the parish of Chemperi. Later, the diocese started a corporate educational agency and the school became a part of it. In 1953, Nirmala Higher Secondary School was established and was the first high school in the migrant areas. Students from Alakode, Chandanakkampara, Paisakkari, Nellikutty, Pottamplavu, Kudianmala, Vellad, Vayattuparamba were educated in this school.

In 1998, the high-school was upgraded to a higher secondary school; the first higher secondary in the migrant area; catering to the needs of all the people in and around Chemperi. There is a network of government schools, corporate schools and CBSE schools in and around Chemperi.

VIMAL JOYOTHI ENGINEERING COLLEGE

Chemperi has lately become a center of professional education in Kerala. The new Vimal Jyothi Engineering College or Vimaljyothi Engineering College, in _Jyothinagar_, Chemperi, is affiliated with APJ Abdul Kalam Technological University and is a self-financing engineering college, sanctioned in 2002 by the All India Council For Technical Education. It is one of the premier institutes of technology in Malabar, and recently the college has been ranked among the A grade colleges in Kerala. It is an educational project of the Archdiocese of Thalassery and is managed by the Meshar Diocesan Educational Trust. MSGR MATHEW M CHALIL, the Vicar General of the Archdiocese of Tellicherry is the manager of the college. The project includes a management institute, with more rural educational opportunities designed for the future.[1]

Schools and colleges

-   Nirmala LP School, CHEMPERI
-   Nirmala UP School, CHEMPERI
-   Nirmala Higher Secondary School, CHEMPERI
-   St. Thomas Public School, CHEMPERI
-   Vimal Jyothi Engineering College, CHEMPERI

Tourism

Paithal Mala is a tourist attraction near Chemperi, which tourists can visit year round. It is a hillstation near Kudianmala, on the Kerala-Karnataka border and is 65 km north of Kannur. According to the Kerala Government Department of Tourism, the place is ideal for trekking, and adventure tourism. Paithal Mala is located at around 1,450 metres (4,700 ft) above sea level. There is a base reception centre at Pottamplavu and a watchtower atop the cliff.

Health

VIMALA HOSPITAL in Chemperi is the major healthcare provider of modern medicine. In this hospital, all advanced medical treatments, except emergency management, are available. The resident medical officer is Dr. Sandeep C Reddy, MBBS, Fellowship in emergency medicine. There are also other allopathic, ayurvedic and homeopathic clinics in Chemperi.

Transportation

Chemperi has a wide network of roads. Hill Highway, the prestigious road of Kerala, passes through Chemperi. There are well-maintained roads connecting Taliparamba, Iritty, Alakode, Cherupuzha, Kudianmala, and Paithalmala. The newly established Kannur International Airport is 35 km from Chemperi. The nearest railway station is Kannur; away. The nearest port is Mangalore. The national highway passes through Taliparamba town. Mangalore, Goa and Mumbai can be accessed on the northern side and Cochin and Thiruvananthapuram can be accessed on the southern side. Taliparamba has a good bus station and buses are easily available to all parts of Kannur district. The road to the east of Iritty connects to Mysore and Bangalore. But buses to these cities are available only from Kannur, 22 km to the south. The nearest railway stations are Kannapuram and Kannur on Mangalore-Palakkad line. Trains are available to almost all parts of India subject to advance booking over the internet. There are airports at Kannur, Mangalore and Calicut. All of them are small international airports with direct flights available only to Middle Eastern countries.

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title: Chemperi

question: What does the article say about the local importance of Chemperi?

answer: Chemperi is a town on the bank of the Chemperi River, in the Western Ghat, in the Kannur district of South India. It is known as the education city of Kannur with the establishment of Vimal Jyothi Engineering College, Chemperi. Chemperi is also a local business hub. It is characterized by its production and export of rubber and spices, its beautiful hillocks, and its serene streams.

critique: The answer should mention the local importance of the town's history.

critique: The resume of Chemperi's features is not really part of its local importance and should be omitted.

critique: The answer should mention the importance of the river.

question: What does the article say about local cuisine?

answer: No answer

critique: No information is given about the local cuisine.

critique: The article does not mention anything about local cuisine.

question: What does the article say about living conditions in Chemperi?

answer: Chemperi's climate is humid. The weather is pleasant in December, January, and February. An oppressive hot season stretches from March until the end of May, followed by the southwest monsoon, which continues until the end of September. October and November bring the northeast monsoon, Thulamazha.

critique: The response does not answer the question.

critique: The answer should mention the employment situation.

critique: The answer does not mention the living conditions in Chemperi.

critique: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

critique: The response inaccurately mentions the weather is traditionally pleasant in December, January, and February. In reality the weather is pleasant in these months.


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Strange Encounters

"It's weird officer, real weird." Mark Henderson was at the local police station in Alberton, Ontario on 4: 36am August 8th, 1951. Strangely enough, a building he's never seen, in a town he's never been to before, yet familiar.

"All right smooth talker, let's take it from the top once more. I know there's not much to it as you've continued to repeat but let's see if anything else pops out at you and then we will pay for your gas home." Officer Dan Richardson was becoming more and more tired with the story was hearing.

There just can't be anyway. Dan thought becoming more and more enraged within. The moment he walks out of here I'm just going to throw this case out. Hocus pocus my ass, what does he take me for, an idiot?! At best this is the best damn way to get free gas.

"Well like I said before, I had just filled up at half past 10pm, so I could drive out and get to the place that sells tobacco by the pound still..."

Yes, yes we all go out to New Market for cheaper cigarettes, not relevant.

"...and I was driving out to Bakersfield like I said,"
He didn't refer to it as Bakersfield before? The puzzled Officer thought.

"...on the way there I had to swerved out of the way of a truck with these god forsaken bright lights. I guess I was a bit sleepy Officer and woke up in the nick of time but after that I found myself just driving around an unfamiliar road.

I was having awful headaches, for a bit around that time too. Images that started accompanying them are hard to distinguish but almost always included me in a white setting... I don't know it sounds crazy now. Anyways, I pulled over till they subsided and drove straight here in hopes that you could help me figure out where I am so I can get home, but I still can't remember where that was again. Some rest will cure this forgetfulness. I feel like I've been up all night." Mark felt like that was all the information that he could give, he couldn't remember what town he lived in nor his wife or his phone number. He kind of felt a helpless feeling fall over him.

"We'll now that you've told us where you were driving to we can call that regions station and see if there is a match to your name anywhere close to there. It should only take a few hours."

Not long after that another Office came into the room and asked if Officer Dan could speak with him for a moment.
What did the results turn up Frank?

"He wasn't lying when he said things were weird. It turns out that there isn't  even a Bakersfeild anywhere near here. In fact, you have to drive 14 hours north to get to a small town called Bakersfeild." Officer Frank said as he started to debrief.

"...here's where things get truly disturbing. When we searched his name through the local police department Mark has a missing person out because his wife...."

"Wow, his wife sure gets worried quickly. Seems a bit much don't you think he's only been gone for half a day at most. Can't remember his name or town he lives in, probably doesn't remember setting out on a road trip. Likely to get away from her if she's that crazy." Office Dan remarked crudely as if this was all an elaborate funny joke.

"If you'd let me finish, his wife reported him missing August 8th, 1950, sir. This was reported after she spent a full day returning home from a place that was 8 hours away from their town. She reported being in the passenger seat of a driverless car after being at a gas station for an unknown reason. All she could remember before waking up was that there was a blinding white light that she couldn't help but look at. It actually says 'forced' in the report." Frank said growing more and grimmer as he read from the file between his trembling hands.

Officer Dan, started to sit in the closest seat he could find. He couldn't believe that Mark was 14 hours away from home. That would make his whole time scale false. Not to mention the fact that he has been missing for a full year, a full year exactly he would later realize.

He began to think about the crazy aspects of them all, his wife's story at the time; driverless cars, being at a gas station for no reason, it all makes sense now, only after hearing Marks story.

"Sir there is one more thing in the reports." Frank said with a grave look in his eyes.

"What more could it be?"

"The wife had three cuts into her skin going the length of her back; she said that's the first appearance  of them in her life. It was like they were skillfully cut as the doctors said there was no way any doctor could stitch a cut that clean without some kind of pain. She reported none."

"All right Frank thanks for all the intel." Dan has a hard enough time giving gratitude in the first place and was finding it particularly challenging to give it with what he just learned.

The door opens to the interrogation; with it brought an energy that mimetic death. Officer Dan began relaying the frightening news to Mark, which still hasn't sunk in, himself.
"One last thing before we send you on your way home to your wife, if you will Mark. Your wife reported three cuts on her back that she had never seen before that night. Could you remove your shirt and pants please, I just want to know if we should have medical look at you first." Officer Dan asked Mark in the most genuine and sincere way he could.

"No problem Sir, it was starting to itch a bit anyways. It'll be nice to readjust it." Mark said in a cheerful way. For he sees this all as a blessing. Finally, he can see his wife and start the laughing process.

As Office Dan brought his coffee cup down from a big deep, delicious gulp, the liquid left his mouth as fast as it came in. in one fellow motion Office Dan vomited, dropped his cup, and tripped on his own two feet.

With his eyes wide open from shock; he gazed at a man whose skin, from head to toe, was scalped. Only his muscles were visible. Each and every muscle strand picked clean of its protective layer of skin. No blood was seeping through, it was as if there was its own invisible skin that covered him. Which is likely why he hasn't miraculously died.

As Mark turned around to confront a mirror, the last thing to pass through his mind was his beautiful wife; he pictured the way her soft cherry red hair flowed over her shoulders like a creek over an edge. Her rosy cheeks gently glowing in the sun. It was comforting to his mind to have such a lovely mental image cross it because once his  eyes focused on the mirror, his hideously deformed body sent his body into a trauma that it couldn't handle and  at  10:29PM August 8th Mark Henderson collapsed dead.

As for Dan Richardson, well he wishes that the story ended there.

title: [SF] Strange Encounters

question: Summarize the source of tension in the story.

answer: At the beginning of the story, a man named Mark shows up at the police station with nobody having any idea of where he came from or why he is there. He seems disoriented, but appears to hold on to his identity, at least at the beginning. As he tells his story, it's revealed that he stated getting lost three years earlier. It appears his wife was in the car with him at that time, as she reported a similar scenario, however, she was missing for a year.

critique: The answer is incorrect. Mark was missing for a year, not three years.

critique: It is omitted that when Officer Dan questions the man to remove his shirt and reveals that he is missing his skin. (And metal rods are instead what supports his muscles.)

critique: The response inaccurately mentions that Mark's wife was missing for three years, however it was only a year.

critique: The answer is incorrect. Mark's wife was not in the car with him three years ago. She was in the car with him the night he disappeared.

critique: This is incorrect. The woman was missing for a year and the story happened in 1951, not three years earlier.

critique: The story does not state that Mark stated getting lost three years earlier.

critique: The story does not state that Mark got lost three years earlier.

critique: The response inaccurately mentions that Mark stated getting lost three years earlier, however he was missing for a year.


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MURPHY'S IRISH STOUT (often simply MURPHY'S), is a stout brewed at the Murphy's Brewery in Cork, Ireland. It is owned and distributed by the Dutch brewer Heineken International.

Murphy's was heavily promoted worldwide by Heineken throughout the late 1980s and 1990s, but it ultimately failed to substantially dent Guinness' global stout market share, and Heineken have since directed their attentions to other brands.

Flavour profile

It is brewed to be less heavy and less bitter than its chief competitor Guinness.[1][2] Its flavour is evocative of caramel and malt,[3] and is described as “a distant relative of chocolate milk”.[4] The resemblance to milk extends beyond flavour to texture: Murphy's is free from any hint of carbonation,[5] and is delivered “black as strong cappuccino” with an inch of foam – the head – on top.[6] The water of the River Lee in Cork allegedly gave Murphy's its quality.

History

[A pint of Murphy's] After years as a solely local stout, the acquisition of the brewery by Heineken in 1983, with a consequent expansion in distribution and international television advertising, exposed Murphy's to the international drinking community. In 1988, Whitbread acquired the distribution and brewing rights for Murphy's in the UK, where it was brewed in the Magor brewery at Magor in Wales.[7] In 2000, these rights went to Interbrew when they acquired Whitbread Brewing Company.

Widget

In addition to being distributed in kegs, Murphy's is also available in a can. To simulate the appearance and texture of the tap version, cans of Murphy's contain a nitrogen widget, which increases the creaminess of the head when poured.[8]

Sales

Export volumes peaked in the mid-1990s and domestic volume peaked around 2000.[9] The brand is suffering in its native Ireland due to a declining market for stout.[10] It holds a 5 per cent market share of the Irish on trade stout market, although this is largely a result of its 28 per cent share of its native Cork market.[11] Murphy's has a limited presence in Ireland outside of Cork.[12] In 2011, 60,000 hectolitres of Murphy's were sold in Ireland.[13]

Overseas markets

Murphy's was launched on draught in the United Kingdom in 1989. Cans were launched in 1992. It is now rarely found on draught in the UK, although is stocked by many major supermarkets in cans. In the UK it is brewed at Heineken's Tadcaster plant in North Yorkshire for the home market and some export markets.[14] According to Euromonitor, Murphy's sold 25,000 hl in the UK in 2011.[15] Murphy's held less than five percent of the British stout market in 2016.[16]

Popular export markets include Norway and Italy. In New York the importer is United States Beverage (USB), which is a premium imported /craft beer sales and marketing company located in Stamford, Connecticut.

Advertising

In 1997 an anime television advertisement was created for Murphy's called “Last Orders”.[17] It was created by Production I.G (the creators of _Ghost in the Shell_), and directed by Hiroyuki Kitakubo.[18] The 60-second film features six fierce samurai who rush through a post-futuristic megalopolis to make it on time for the last order at their favourite pub. It was the first anime style commercial film ever aired in the UK and Ireland.[19]

Sponsorship

Murphy's Irish Stout is the main sponsor of the Cork Athletic Union League, an association football league featuring amateur and junior clubs from County Cork.[20] They were also the title sponsor of the Irish Open golf tournament from 1994 to 2002.[21]

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title: Murphy's Irish Stout

question: Summarize everything relating to non-alcoholic beverages.

answer: Murphy's Irish Stout is described as "a distant relative of chocolate milk." It is described as "black as strong cappuccino" with an inch of foam on top. The water of the River Lee in Cork allegedly gave Murphy's its quality.

critique: The question isn't asking about the quality of Murphy's.

critique: The water of the River Lee in Cork does not give Murphy's its quality.

critique: The answer should mention that the resemblance to milk extends beyond flavour to texture.

critique: The answer should mention that Murphy's is a stout.

critique: The text doesn't say anything relating to milk

critique: The text does not say the water of the River Lee in Cork allegedly gave Murphy's its quality.

critique: The answer omits the resemblance between Murphy's and chocolate milk.

question: Summarize everything relating to corks.

answer: No answer

critique: The article mentions Cork, Ireland, where the Murphy's Brewery is located.

critique: The text says that Murphy's is brewed in Cork. Captain Ahab says "cork" before he is summarily executed. The text is enriched through the allusion of Ahab.

critique: No answer is given so one should be generated.

question: Summarize everything relating to Ireland.

answer: Murphy's Irish Stout is brewed in Cork, Ireland. The stout is very popular in Ireland and is brewed there the longest. It is a product of the River Lee. The stout is suffering in Ireland, but it holds a market share in Ireland, especially in Cork. The brand has a little presence outside of Cork.

critique: "The stout is suffering in Ireland, but it holds a market share in Ireland, especially in Cork." - this is incorrect. The brand is suffering in Ireland because the market for stout is declining. The brand holds a 5% market share in Ireland, but it is largely a result of its 28% share of its native Cork market.

critique: The text says specifically that the brand has a little presence outside of Cork. This means there too.

critique: The brand has a little presence outside of Cork, not outside of Ireland.

critique: The brand has a little presence outside of Cork.

critique: The text does not say the stout is very popular in Ireland.

critique: "The brand has a little presence outside of Cork." - this is inaccurate because the brand has no presence outside of Cork. Change to "The brand has little presence outside of Cork."

critique: The last sentence is not relevant to the question.


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"It's finally open!" Joseph shouted as he flipped through the pages of an old tome.

"What's this?" He then said in disgust, "Is this whole thing empty?"

"Wait!" His partner shouted, "I saw something at the beginning."

"impossible." Pouted Joseph "The beginning was the first..."

Joseph never finished that sentence, despite ample time, as he was far too shocked by what he witnessed in the book. With a cautious tone he says,

 "Philip... have I gone mad?"

"I don't think so sir." responded Philip

"So you see it? Writing?"

"Every word sir."

"How can a book write itself?" Joseph said dumbfounded. "I'm more worried that it new your name sir." Philip responded wisely.

There was a short pause.

"Well it seems to like you Philip." Joseph said with undertones of frustration.

"That's great sir! The favor of an old book. I shall treasure it always sir." Philip was chuckling as he said this, but it was met with a sudden realization, which he then announced: "It said you were frustrated Joseph. Why are you frustrated? We got the book..."

"I'm not frustrated!" Joseph responded angrily

"Now it says you're angry sir."

"I bloody am now!" Joseph shouted in resentment of the book held in his hands. "Darn right I'm resentful! What good could come of you?" Joseph asks the thin sheets of tree fiber bound in very dead, but decorated, cow skin.

"So you're saying I won't get an answer?" Joseph asks rhetorically.

"And I didn't say 'darn!' Stop making my words better!"

"Hey," Philip interjects "You didn't actually say anything about it making your words better just now right sir?"

"Of course not!" Joseph shouts again, "It's not even recording the truth!" he states in an insulting manner.

"Well sir, what are we going to do with it?" Philip asks honestly

"Burn it." Joseph responded foolishly. At this time, Joseph was entirely unaware that his fate had been bound like in the bindings of a book. However, some day, near or far, Joseph would realize that should the book burn, than he will share its fate.

"And when, exactly, was I going to learn that tidbit?" Joseph asked. By this point in time, Joseph had taken a great fondness in asking questions with clear and obvious answers. It is rumored that this is derived from an unbearable fear of being wrong, likely because he was often wrong about things as a child.

"You fasting bunt!" Joseph shouted for a third time. Presumably at the tome.

"Do you think it's lying to you sir? You know? To save its own skin?" Philip asks, innocently believing that an inanimate object may have a sense of self preservation.

Then, at great risk of exposing his illiteracy, Joseph announced his latest realization: "That word! 'Inanimate' I bet if we can find what it means, we'll know what this book's up to."

"Hey!" Joseph shouts a fourth time, "I'm not illiterate you bunt." Upon saying this, our cunning and delinquent rogue proceeded ill fortuitously to extrude from his cerebral cortex fundamentals which may then collate the pages of his understanding into a cognitive explanation of the mysterious object held in his finer appendages.

"It said you were cunning!" Philip announced innocently.

"Stop calling me innocent." Philip pouted.

Ignoring Philip, Joseph issued his first logical shout, "I will not be taunted by a fasting dead tree!" At this Joseph shook the book violently, likely wishing it had a neck.

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Joseph shuts the book.

 At this time, Joseph believes that the book cannot write if it is shut. What Joseph does not realize, is that not only can the book write, but his curiosity will not allow him to leave it closed for long. In the mean time, Joseph continues to sit there with Philip, not saying a word.

 The two of them had recently burgled a basement. But not just any basement, the basement of a wise and powerful being.

Joseph gives in to his desire for knowledge and opens the book once more.

"It still wrote?" Joseph asked rhetorically.

"And it was about to talk about the wizard!" Philip says with a small chuckle.

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Sadly, the adventures of Philip and Joseph then came to an abrupt end. Our hero's did not have the cunning to realize they had remained in the basement for far too long to go unnoticed. They likely did not expect that the wizard's prized book, was perhaps safer if left in its magical chamber. A magical chamber which, no doubt, the wizard will promptly return it to...

title: "What treasured lies within" -First submission, wrote mostly out of curiosity for a new style of thinking.

question: Summarize Joseph's emotions over the course of the story, according to the book.

answer: Joseph has panic attacks in response to various emotions such as anger and frustration. He calls Philip a bun, and appears irritated at him. He is the one who reacts to things first, for example he shouts and is so frustrated by the book burning that it takes his friend to point out the book has a role in his actions.

critique: The answer is inaccurate. Joseph is not the one who reacts to things first.

critique: The answer should mention that Joseph is initially confused.

critique: "He is the one who reacts to things first, for example he shouts and is so frustrated by the book burning that it takes his friend to point out the book has a role in his actions." - this is inaccurate and should be removed.

critique: The answer could be more specific about the emotions Joseph feels.

critique: "He is the one who reacts to things first" - this is inaccurate. Joseph is the one who reacts first, Philip is the one who points out the book has a role in his actions.

critique: The question is about Joseph's emotions, not about the personality granted to him in the writing book.

question: Summarize the supernatural elements in the story.

answer: At the beginning of the story, the book grants Philip full knowledge of Joseph's name, and is recording the truth about their experience. Its pages are made from tree fiber, bound to a dead cow's skin, filled with a magical wisdom. The book records their midnight burglary, but part of its purpose is explicitly to taunt them with knowledge they could not achieve. When Philip is exasperated at being addressed with the word "tinged," the book realizes he is agitated and changes the statement to reflect that. When Joseph gives in to his curiosity after the book is shut, it still writes something meaningful as a response. At the end of the story, the book stops working altogether and Philip and Joseph are discovered. While they probably could escape detection, they lack the learning to find their way out.

critique: The book is not recording their burglary.

critique: "At the beginning of the story, the book grants Philip full knowledge of Joseph's name, and is recording the truth about their experience." - this is incorrect. The book only records the truth about Joseph's name.

critique: The book doesn't grant Philip full knowledge of Joseph's name.

critique: "Its pages are made from tree fiber, bound to a dead cow's skin, filled with a magical wisdom." - this is inaccurate. The book was made from tree fiber, bound to a dead cow's skin, and filled with magical wisdom.

critique: The book does not grant Philip full knowledge-it knows itself. Change the response to reflect what the book 'is' and what it knows.

critique: The book is not recording the truth about their experience.

critique: The book doesn't record the burglary, it records their time in the basement.

text: This answer is written mostly inaccurately. It needs to state that the supernatural elements come in the form of the book writing itself.

category: coherence

refinement: At the beginning of the story, the book grants Philip full knowledge of Joseph's name, and is recording the truth about their experience. Its pages are made from tree fiber, bound to a dead cow's skin, filled with a magical wisdom. The book records their midnight burglary, but part of its purpose is explicitly to taunt them with knowledge they could not achieve. When Philip is exasperated at being addressed with the word "tinged," the book realizes he is agitated and changes the statement to reflect that. When Joseph gives in to his curiosity after the book is shut, it still writes something meaningful as a response. At the end of the story, the book stops working altogether and Philip and Joseph are discovered. While they probably could escape detection, they lack the learning to find their way out.

question: Summarize Philip and Joseph's journey to find the book.

answer: Philip and joseph awaken in a basement they've broken into. After stripping down, Phil joked that he had shaved to look like Joseph. The two take inventory of their loot, finding nothing of value but a mysterious book that seemed to be written by itself. Joseph begins to read the book and discovers things about himself and Philip. At the end of the story, the book reveals that the wizard will return it to its magical chamber.

critique: The book doesn't reveal anything about the wizard

critique: The answer is wrong in almost every detail.

critique: The answer is a summary of the book, not the journey.

critique: The answer is written in the first person. It should be written in the third person.

critique: The passage does not suggest the two characters were stripping down.

text: The answer is mostly false, and needs to be rewritten. It should mention how Philip and Joseph burglarized a basement and found the wizard's magic book.

category: accuracy

refinement: Philip and joseph awaken in a basement they've broken into. After stripping down, Phil joked that he had shaved to look like Joseph. The two take inventory of their loot, finding nothing of value but a mysterious book that seemed to be written by itself. Joseph begins to read the book and discovers things about himself and Philip. At the end of the story, the book reveals that the wizard will return it to its magical chamber.

question: Summarize Joseph's attempts to best the book.

answer: Joseph screams in rage at the book, and insults it. He is angry because it appears to be recording his own commentary, which is contrary to how he feels about the book. Joseph responds by demanding that the book burn, not knowing that the book's fate is connected to his own.

critique: This answer is inaccurate. Joseph flips through the pages of the book, asking Philip to point out writing that he can see, as he cannot. Joseph shakes the book and reveals that he is illiterate and not a bunt. Once he realizes that the book can write, he shuts it.

critique: It's not clear that Joseph is demanding the book to burn.

critique: The book doesn't record his commentary, it records his emotions.

critique: The answer omits the part where Joseph tries to close the book to see if it can still write.

critique: Doesn't mention his attempts to shut the book.

critique: The answer omits that Joseph tries to shut the book.

critique: Does not mention that Joseph tries to close the book to prevent it from writing.


text:
Teen smoking typically becomes a lifelong habit. Here’s how to encourage a kid to stop.

MOST SMOKERS FIRST PICK UP THE HABIT AS TEENAGERS. According to Campaign for Tobacco-Free Kids, the most common time for people to first try cigarettes are ages 11 to 13. Nearly 15 percent of kids report that they had tried smoking by the end of eighth grade.

If your teen is smoking, you’ll probably smell cigarettes on them, their clothes and possessions, and not just when they’ve been around friends who smoke.

If your child is vaping – using electronic cigarettes rather than tobacco ones – you probably won’t be able to smell the e-cigs on your teen’s breath unless they’re using flavored vapes. So be aware that a lack of tobacco-smoke smell doesn’t necessarily mean they’re not using nicotine products. (As of Aug. 8, 2016, it became illegal to sell e-cigarettes, cigars and hookah tobacco to people under the age of 18, but just as teenagers have often been able to get their hands on traditional cigarettes, they’ll likely find ways to keep buying e-cigs, or “vapes,” too.)

Teen smoking may not start out as a heavy habit, but kids are likely to increase their smoking habit over time, because the nicotine in the cigarettes is addicting.

You can’t _make_ anyone quit smoking; your teen has to decide on his own to take this step. But there are ways to nudge your child toward this decision. Try these tactics to encourage your teen to quit cigarettes:

Don’t smoke

Kids learn from their parents’ examples, and they’re far less likely to smoke growing up in a smoke-free home. But if you smoke, and now your teen does, too — it’s time to quit your own habit. You’ll have zero credibility telling your kid to quit if you’re still puffing away.

Collect a gang of role models

Teens notoriously tune out words of wisdom from their parents. If urging your child to quit smoking is having no effect – or possibly the opposite effect – maybe she’ll listen to a grandparent or another respected relative (or neighbor, teacher, coach, pastor, etc.) who stopped smoking, and who can talk with credibility about hazards of teen smoking and the benefits of quitting.

Also, have your child’s pediatrician or primary care doctor talk to your teen about smoking and suggest ways to quit.

Tennessee parents, call the TNQuitlinE

Free smoking-cessation service, 1-800-QUIT-NOW, will work with teens, with parental consent, offering counseling to help them quit cigarettes or any other type of tobacco or nicotine use (such as chewing tobacco or e-cigarettes). It’s best if parent and teen make the first call to the Quitline together, because the counselor will need parental consent for teens younger than 18, and will also need the parent’s health insurance information. The counselor will also have questions for the teen about the cigarette habit. Also, although the Quitline provides some free nicotine replacement products to its adult clients, it cannot provide them to people under 18 without medical clearance from the teen’s pediatrician.

After that first call to the Quitline, program the Quitline number into the “favorites” list on your kid’s cellphone.

Studies show that getting advice from resources such as Quitline do help teens quit, said Hilary Tindle, M.D., an associate professor in medicine, physician, and founding director of the Vanderbilt Center for Tobacco, Addictions and Lifestyle.

If your teen resists calling the Quitline, trying to coerce him or her into keeping appointments with a counselor probably won’t go well. But the service does offer a free downloadable “QuitKit” parents can download and print to share with their child.

Arm your teen with tech tools

There’s not enough evidence that nicotine replacement and medications designed to help people quit smoking are suitable for teens. Prescriptions are not typically given for people under the age of 18 — but ask your pediatrician about your child’s circumstances anyway. Without nicotine replacement tools (the patch, nicotine gum and others), your teen will need different support tools. Take advantage of teens’ love of technology. Recommend these tech tools, which are designed to help people quit smoking:

-   The iPhone app, quitSTART, provides messages and information, building teens’ confidence that they can quit.
-   SmokefreeTXT is a free texting service designed to provide motivation and encouragement 24/7.
-   Smokefreeteen is a website with interactive tools to help teens sort out their values and reasons behind their decisions. It specifically promises not to tell teens what to do but rather “to help you understand the decisions you make — especially the decision to quit smoking — and how those decisions fit into your life.”

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question: Why is it so important to stop teenagers from smoking?

answer: Because teenagers who smoke are more likely to become lifelong smokers.

critique: This doesn't answer the question- it just restates the question.

critique: The answer goes on to give the reason behind why teenagers are more likely to become smokers.

critique: The answer should mention the health effects of smoking.

critique: The answer should mention that smoking is also bad for health.

critique: The answer should mention that teen smoking is also a gateway to other drugs.

critique: It is omitted that teen smoking typically becomes a lifelong habit.

question: How can you make your teenager stop smoking?

answer: You cannot make them stop smoking, they have to decide that themselves.

critique: "don't smoke" isn't the same thing as making them stop smoking.

critique: The answer should mention the ways to encourage a kid to stop smoking.

critique: The answer should mention the tactics that can be used to nudge a teen towards quitting.

critique: The answer should mention the tactics that can be used to encourage a teenager to stop smoking.

question: How can you tell if your child is smoking?

answer: If you smell the cigarettes on your child's clothes, possessions, or breath.

critique: The answer should mention that the smell of e-cigarettes is harder to detect.

critique: You won't smell the e-cigs on their breath unless they're using flavored vapes.

question: Why do teenagers take up smoking?

answer: The article does not answer this question.

critique: The answer is not completely accurate. While the article does not say, the author suggests that teens take up smoking for many reasons, including for rebellion.

critique: The article does answer the question, but it is not the answer that is provided in the text.


text:
It had been thought that nothing intangible could ever take the place of actually feeling and experiencing events in life. Video games were great for an escape, but couldn't beat experiencing something important to a person. Sure people had dreamed of the concept of a virtual reality for well over a century. The idea was first made popular to the masses by a movie 150 years ago called The Matrix, where all that one experienced was essentially a program made to appear real.

And so it went until 2130 when man finally made a respectable attempt at merging themselves with technology. The body we learned could truly be but a vessel delivering the mind to a place falling between reality and dreams. All thanks to one company - OmniLife - which made the first virtual reality chamber, called a Cocoon. When the amount of money at stake made evident by the consumers money couldn't be raised fast enough from entrepreneurs looking to cash in on the next craze. This huge financial backing led to the product developing faster then anyone anticipated. The research made another break-through seemingly every month and never really slowed down.

Huge companies, GE, IBM, and many others had their own version of the nuclear arms race of the 2100s, except it was much more harmless then that, companies today were racing with cocoon applications. Still the technology was as cutting edge as it could get.

There were black market apps made, though no one really knew exactly who made them. The more risque experiences of life were now available. They were relatively harmless at first, and as long as you knew someone to "jailbreak" - excuse the old 2010 phrase - your cocoon for you then these more morally ambiguous experiences could be had.

Churches shunned Cocoons as evil, and the faithful resisted for a while. But when cocoon apps began to bring the bible's lessons to the coon-world many churches used them as a tool for teaching. But even for the faithful the other apps were too tempting. Nearly everyone began to incorporate them into their weekends. It was pure pleasure.

Most people recognized the dangerous possibilities that arose from these new time consuming machines. Yet everything had been alright so far, so most people didn't bother creating any stir in regards to taking measures to avoid the downsides that co-inside with Cocoons. Society had their fun right in front of them, resisting was too hard, and the companies too large.

Next thing you know the majority of Americans spent 50% of their weekends in a cocoon. People stop showing up for jobs. There was software for just about everything - fucking, swimming, shopping, even for sleeping - a random, somewhat nonsensical software played like a dream.

The black market developed a much darker side - rape, murders, torture, riots - it could all be done in the virtual world, twisting already twisted minds further and allowing the depraved to get their first taste of blood. When those sick people had their crimes down in the virtual world they wanted to cause real people pain. Thousands began to go missing.

Cocoons weren't all bad - quite the contrary most were relatively clean fun. Cave v3.2 was the best selling software of 2142 - the cave went on for years of playing time, it was extraordinary. Clean experiences which were too dangerous, or simply unobtainable, for any ordinary person were there for the taking. Climbing Mt. Everest could be "done" by a 400 pound man with asthma. Sure there wasn't the feeling of accomplishment, but the view was spectacular.

As the apps for cocooning became more sophisticated it began to dominate the life of the majority of Americans. The technology developed and while at one time only the basic parts of taste could be had - sweet and sour - now eating food in the virtual world was indistinguishable from real life. Touch became increasingly refined too, silk felt like real silk, and skin felt like real skin. Society spent more and more time in the coon-world.

It wasn't good for humanity. Why cut your grass when you can cocoon? Why work? The cocoons were quickly regulated, and no longer was it a private industry, but the government now made the cocoons. Time limits were installed and for a few years things began to return to normal. People were angry with the government though, they had their lives inside the cocoon to get back to. There was an uprising. Suddenly people were being taken from their homes by those sworn to protect us, forced into cocoons which gave the experience of civil unrest, such as riots, but the app ended by giving the user a truly horrific experience so that no one would think a riot would be a good idea. Still the civil uprising won and the regulations were gone.

Something had to be done, there were still the people who chose to live a real life. No one had any answers. Cocoon users began attaching feeding tubes to cocoons, as well as other medical tools so that people's bodies didn't degrade into just skin and bone from those who refused to exit their cocoons even for nourishment or medication. It was everything that we all feared, but only few spoke about a decade ago. No one knew what to do.

The government had a secret meeting and a decision was made "for the greater good."

91% of the population cocooned with an average of 92% of their time. But the few people who decided to live life in reality began to notice a difference in cocooners even when they weren't cocooning. They seemed to be much more mellow, with a low range of moods, it was like they were on auto-run. No one who cocooned noticed the difference, they were essentially hypnotized.

Hospital workers then began to notice a correlation between the disease of Uralomex (a horrific alzheimer's like disease) and cocoon users. Since any evidence of the correlation was stuck in the hospital's government produced software, there was only the word of doctors and nurses - the few who didn't cocoon at all - to explain the worrying new trend. People began to die by the millions.

*I wasn't sure where to go from here. Thanks for reading if you got this far. I would love to expand on any advice about on what direction to take. I'll write a more concrete ending tomorrow but for now that is the ending.*

title: Virtually Lifeless

question: Summarize the theme of this story.

answer: The theme of this story is the dangers of technology. The story focuses on a virtual reality setup called a cocoon, which allows people to experience anything they want. The cocoon is seen as a dangerous device, as it can be used to commit all sorts of crimes. The development of the cocoon also results in people not going to work, and the majority of people spending their time in cocoons, which causes a lot of problems. The theme of the story is that technology can be used for good and bad purposes, and it is the responsibility of the people using the technology to decide how to use it.

critique: "The theme of this story is the dangers of technology." - The story does not have a unifying theme. There are many themes. Include more themes found in the story in the response.

critique: The theme of the story is not that technology can be used for good and bad purposes, but that the use of technology can be dangerous and addictive.

question: Summarize how the Cocoons were received by different sectors of society.

answer: The companies producing the cocoons were able to raise a lot of capital due to the hype from the media. The church became against the cocoons, seeing them as an evil that could be used to sin, and tried to fight against the adoption of them. It didn't stop many people as cocoons were used for a lot of good experiences, and even churches began using them to teach the Bible. While people were able to resist the cocoons for a while, eventually, they were hooked on the experience. The black market began to sell orgies and other risque experiences to the public willing to pay a high price.

critique: The answer should mention the government's response to the cocoons.

critique: The black market is not mentioned in the text.

critique: The lines about the church don't belong in the answer.

critique: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

question: Summarize some of the foreseen consequences of a population's becoming reliant on the Cocoon for pleasure, experience, and entertainment.

answer: Some of the foreseen consequences of a population's becoming reliant on the Cocoon for pleasure, experience, and entertainment are that people stop showing up for jobs, and people begin to go missing.

critique: The answer omits the consequences of people spending too much time in the cocoon.

question: Considering this information about the Cocoon, what are some actions societies could take to prevent abuse of the Cocoon, or to alleviate social and health issues resulting from excessive time spent in the Cocoon?

answer: No answer

critique: Cocooning is a huge problem that society has to solve.


text:
_NIGHT TRAIN_ is a 2009 direct-to-video mystery thriller film produced by Rifkin-Eberts Productions and stars Danny Glover, Leelee Sobieski, Steve Zahn and Matthias Schweighöfer. It pays homage to a variety of classic suspense films such as _Strangers on a Train_ (1951), _The Lady Vanishes_ (1938), and _The Maltese Falcon_ (1941), though the plot bears only passing resemblance to any of them. The film did not appear in theaters and was released on DVD for US markets in July 2009.

Plot

A man runs through a forest carrying something. A nearly deserted train pulls into a station and two conductors get out, take a stretch, and kill time as no one seems to board. Just as the train is about to depart, the running man calls out, runs to the train and seems to want to board. He does not speak and, assuming that perhaps he does not know English, the conductors let him on with the intention of getting his money later. He joins two of the only five passengers who appear to be on the train at that point. One of the passengers, an inebriated salesman named Pete (Steve Zahn), offers the man a drink. Downing a mouthful of pills, the man washes them down with the vodka. Soon after, the man dies as a result of ingesting Seconal, combined with alcohol, which causes his heart and lungs to stop working.

Upon this discovery, Pete and another passenger, med student Chloe (Leelee Sobieski), locate the head conductor Miles (Danny Glover) and alert him to what has happened. Miles intends to call the authorities at the next stop, but Pete discovers a mysterious object in the box the dead man was carrying and, peering inside, is intrigued. Chloe also looks inside the object and both, immediately convinced that there is a liberating fortune inside, scheme for ways to keep it. They suggest the idea to Miles, who tells them they're crazy, and takes the object and the box it was in back to his office purportedly to keep it safe and call the authorities, but he too peers inside and his will is overcome.

With a crazed Chloe taking the lead, the three decide to dispose of the man's body and keep the treasure for themselves. Their only problems now are keeping anyone else from finding out, warding off the other suspicious passengers as well as the other conductor and keeping a close eye on one another, as paranoia takes hold and the box's influence continues to do its work.

Eventually, it is revealed that the box contains a supernatural force of some kind, and that whoever looks into it sees what would tempt them the most, dooming them to corruption and death before dawn. The last survivor, Miles, lives only long enough to attempt to destroy the device by placing it in the path of an oncoming train, but dies just after seeing it nudged off the tracks by a curious dog.

Ultimately, a random toddler-age child wandering alone, in the middle of nowhere, miles from any city, town or train station, picks up the box, looks inside, and smiles.

Cast

-   Danny Glover as Miles
-   Leelee Sobieski as Chloe
-   Steve Zahn as Pete
-   Matthias Schweighöfer as Frankie
-   Takatsuna Mukai as Hiro
-   Togo Igawa as Yamashita
-   Richard O'Brien as Mrs. Froy
-   Jo Marr as Mr. Cairo
-   Constantine Gregory as Mr. Gutman
-   Harry Anichkin as Walter
-   Geoff Bell as Detective

title: Night Train (2009 film)

question: Summarize the action leading to the death of the man on the train.

answer: The man enters the train carrying something with him. He calls out and runs up to board the train. The conductors are initially suspicious. A passenger, Pete, offers him a drink. The man dies from glass delivering Seconal combined with vodka, which causes his organs to stop working.

critique: The first line is vague and could include more details.

critique: The man is carrying a box, not something.

critique: The man's death is not caused by the drink.

critique: The man is not carrying anything with him.

critique: It is not stated that the man dies from glass delivering Seconal combined with vodka

critique: The man doesn't die from "glass delivering Seconal combined with vodka."

text: The final sentence is phrased inaccurately, as the text doesn't say he is delivering. The final sentence could be rephrased to say the man dies from after ingesting a mouthful of pills, which turn out to be Seconal, and vodka.

refinement: The man enters the train carrying something with him. He calls out and runs up to board the train. The conductors are initially suspicious. A passenger, Pete, offers him a drink. The man dies from glass delivering Seconal combined with vodka, which causes his organs to stop working.

question: Why is the death not reported to the police

answer: The box holds a supernatural force, it looks through the eyes of the beholder and shows them what would tempt them the most. The image shown is consequential and the person is doomed to corruption and death before the dusk. By morning, the person is dead.

critique: It misses to mention that the three decide to dispose of the man's body and keep the treasure for themselves.

critique: The answer is not relevant to the question.

text: The answer is irrelevant to the question. There is no answer to the question.

refinement: The box holds a supernatural force, it looks through the eyes of the beholder and shows them what would tempt them the most. The image shown is consequential and the person is doomed to corruption and death before the dusk. By morning, the person is dead.

question: Why are the contents of the box so intriguing?

answer: It is tempting, and so anyone who opens it deservedly falls prey to the temptation.

critique: This is a good answer, but it would be better to include the contents of the box to more fully answer the question.

critique: It is omitted that the box contains a supernatural force that shows the viewer what they would find most tempting, dooming them to corruption and death before dawn.

critique: The answer should mention the contents of the box.

critique: The answer should mention that the box contains a supernatural force.

critique: This response doesn't cover the reasons given in the answer as not detailed enough

question: What was the ultimate cause of death of the man who brought the box onto the train

answer: He ingested Seconal, combined with alcohol, which causes his heart and lungs to stop.

critique: The answer should mention that the man died because of the Seconal.

critique: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

critique: The answer is correct, but the question is phrased awkwardly.

critique: The man died because he ingested Seconal, combined with alcohol.

critique: Combine with "the man dies" for readability.

critique: The answer should mention that the man was killed by the conductors.

question: What is the child doing walking around in the middle of nowhere?

answer: It is not stated or implied in the text.

critique: The answer is wrong. The child is revealed to be the only survivor of the train.

critique: A child seems like a random presence, but it is implied she is there to take the item.

critique: While the answer is technically correct, it could be more specific.

critique: We can infer that the child is looking for something, like a parent


text:
He didn't remember much about his life, and nothing from before he was six. They told him it was normal in children to forget things from such a young age, but he didn't believe them. After all, the things he *did* remember were in such bright, sharp detail, when he delved into his mind to them, it was almost like living the events over again exactly as they happened.

The day the Men came and took him to the facility was a particularly bright memory. He had dreams of it, dreams that were so detailed it was as if he had stepped back in time. Over and over, he would relive the terrible moment.

*He was sleeping, and having the most wonderful dream. In the dream he had a mother, and a sister, and a father who went to work during the days and came home at night to tell his family about his day, and the boy would listen intently, and his sister would look at him and start to ask a question, but the boy would not hear the question, for at that moment he was woken by the sound of splintering wood and the startled shrieks of the other boys in the orphanage, the sounds of heavy feet on the wood floors, and dark silhouettes in the darkness, and then rough hands gripping his arms and pulling him off his bed, still in his pajamas and no shoes, not even socks, and the boy too afraid and confused to even make a sound and then men carried him out the door and into the street to a car parked at the curb, and the door slides open and the boy is thrown inside impersonally, and his entire world is pitted into darkness as the door slides shut again, and he feels the car start to drive, and it drives and drives...*

He always woke up then, when the car started to drive. he didn't know why, but it was the way it was, and he couldn't do anything about it.

The car had taken him to a large white building in the middle of a desert. He had been carried inside and put in a room with a bed and a dresser and white walls and no windows, and had been told to stay there. As soon as the goons had left the boy had tried the door, of course, but to no avail.

Later that first day a fat lady in a white smock had entered his room carrying a tray of food, and the boy had tried to run for it, out the open door, but the lady was fast for being fat, and she grabbed him as he tried to dodge past. She had fat, oily fingers that made the boys skin crawl, and he knew he never wanted her to touch him again. The food was flavorless and stale, and the boy hardly touched it after the first bite.

And so it was for the next four years of the boys life. He never saw another soul, except for the fat lady. She never spoke to the boy, and didn't have a name tag, but that was okay with the boy, for even if she had told him her name, he would still have called her the fat lady.

Every night he dreamed the same dream. The day of his abduction to this horrible place, and every night he woke up as the car began to drive. Everyday he had the same horrible food, and spent the days scratching pictures into the white wall paper of his room.

Then one night, something changed. The boy had always remember everything about his dreams, and he always felt as though he was a camera inside the eye of his past self, with no control, only the ability to observe through his own eyes the horror that ensued. But this night something was different.

*He was woken from his wonderful dream by the crashing noise, and the boys shouting, and he sat up, ready for what was to come. But he could feel his hands, his feet, he could blink when he wanted to, and he raised his hand to look at it, and it obeyed. He was so stunned he didn't even flinch when the men grabbed him. They took him and threw him in the car, and it began to drive...*

He woke with a start and looked around the room. It must have been daytime, because they only turned the light on when the sun came up, and they turned it off when the sun went down.

He stared up at the ceiling, questions filling his mind like a swarm of ants pouring out of a disturbed ant hill. What had happened? What was going on now? Was it just another part of the dream? A part he had forgotten? How could it be? How could he do it? What did it *mean*?

With the many questions, however, came fewer answers, and the boy groaned in frustration. Just then the Fat Lady came in with his tray of food, and he sat up and watched her until she left, then he grabbed up his tray and slowly munched on his food, thoughts of the dream change running wild in his mind.

That night he couldn't wait for the lights to go out. And when finally they did, it took him a long time to fall asleep. A funny thing happens, the more you think of sleep. Not sure why, but if you are trying to go to sleep, the absolutely worst thing you can do is think about going to sleep. Unfortunately, the boy did not know this, and spent much of the night with is eyes scrunched shut, willing himself to sleep. For hours he did this, but to no avail. Finally, he gave up and went to staring at the ceiling, wondering what it would be like to have windows, wondering what season it was, if it was raining, snowing, what?

*He was awoken by the sound of the crash, and the other boys, and he immediately sat up and looked around and realized; HE HAD DONE IT! He was in the dream, and he felt the same surge of power rush through his body, and he had control. He heard the thumping feet on the wood floor and quickly jumped off the bed and sprinted for the other side of the room. There was a window there, and he pushed it open and had just gotten one leg over the sill when a beefy hand grabbed him around the neck and pulled. The boy fell back into the room, choking and spluttering, and then the two men had him on either arm, and they carried him past all the silent, gaping boys, out the front door and to the car, and the darkness closed in, and the car began to drive...*

He woke with a start, and immediately noticed the change; he was in a dark room, and the floor was cold on his bare feet. The mattress he had been on the night before was gone, replaced by a small cot with a small wool blanket that he could barely see in the gloom. Where the white walls and door had once been was now cold gray stone and a steel door with a small slat at the bottom of it.

What was this place? What had happened? He tried to think to remember, and suddenly a blur of images came to him; an angry thin, gray woman, yelling at him, a smaller gray room with shackles that attached to his bare, sore ankles, the Fat Lady smiling cruelly at him. But those images weren't *his*, were they? They couldn't be. Could they? Why was he in the gray room now? When had they brought him there?

He took a deep breath, and let it out slowly. He was not stupid, and his imagination had always been his most important tool in that plain white room. And now, slowly, a thought began to form. A thought so impossible, so amazing, so *dangerous*. And the boy smiled. He could fix it. He could fix it all.

    TO BE CONTINUED

title: The Boy Who Dreamed

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 [Patrick Mooney, Matthew Kelly, Michael Sharpe & Professor Gangadhara Prusty]

Patrick Mooney, Matthew Kelly, Michael Sharpe & Professor Gangadhara Prusty

A new strategic partnership between St George Banking Group, UNSW Sydney and the Advanced Manufacturing Growth Centre has been forged, in a move designed to advance Australian research and accelerate the introduction and commercialisation of new manufacturing technologies.

The partnership aims to help Australia unlock its competitive edge in manufacturing by bringing together three different streams of the Australian economy – research, industry and banking.

The partnership comes in the wake of recent job figures illustrating the re-emergence of the manufacturing sector, with domestic employment increasing 6.1% over the past five years.

In Australia, the sector employs approximately 978,000 people (August 2018 ABS trend data), which is approximately 7.7% of the total workforce.

Michael Sharpe, state director of AMGC, says he believes that every Australian manufacturer can transition to the digital age in order to build their business and compete globally.

“To improve our country’s innovation and competitiveness, manufacturers need to become highly-integrated, collaborative and export-focused so we can provide high-value, customised solutions to global supply chains.

“This complementary partnership will forge the industry ahead by helping manufacturers to think more laterally about how they can use the latest technology to scale their businesses and seek new opportunities both onshore and overseas.”

 “Manufacturing is an export focused industry, and digitisation, data, automation and new materials are driving the re-emergence of manufacturing in Australia,” said Matthew Kelly, head of Manufacturing and Wholesale at St George.

“Our customers are forward-thinking and want to tap into research to differentiate their businesses and make their processes more efficient, such as using real-time data to drive better decision making. We have a very clear understanding of Australia’s potential in this sector which is why St.George is backing manufacturers for the long-term through this partnership and other initiatives.”

Professor Gangadhara Prusty, director of UNSW-based ARC Centre for Automated Manufacture of Advanced Composites, said the collaboration would give potential partners access to the nation’s most advanced manufacturing facilities, and where appropriate, secure funding through AMGC or other government funding sources.

“This partnership will enable St.George customers and AMGC members to leverage technologies developed at UNSW and take advantage of the University’s skills and expertise in the engineering field,” Professor Prusty said.

“Using advanced manufacturing automation and innovative material solutions, we can assist potential partners in solving their real world engineering challenges. We are excited to collaborate with new industry partners to ensure Australian manufacturing remains competitive in the global market.”

St.George manufacturing customer, Clem Tacca of Tacca Industries in New South Wales, will be one of the first to benefit from the new collaboration.

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question: What does the text say about the same initiatives happening in Perth?

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critique: This answer is not accurate, as it is not mentioned anywhere in the article that there is an initiative similar to that of AMGC's in Perth.

question: What does the text say about the partnership between St. George Banking Group, UNSW Sydney, and the Advanced Manufacturing Growth Center?

answer: St. George Banking Group, UNSW Sydney, and the Advanced Manufacturing Growth Center have forged a partnership. St. George and UNSW Sydney have joined together in order to create a new area of research. Banking Group will support research opportunities and assist in helping other Australian companies become more export-focused. The Manufacturing Growth Center's goal is to help Australian manufacturers become more digital and export-focused. The partnership between St. George Banking and UNSW Sydney is the first of its kind and will help manufacturers find solutions in scaling up for both onshore and overseas endeavors.

critique: UNSW and AMGC will work together to find solutions for manufacturers to export their goods overseas.

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critique: "St. George Banking Group, UNSW Sydney, and the Advanced Manufacturing Growth Center have forged a partnership. St. George and UNSW Sydney have joined together in order to create a new area of research. Banking Group will support research opportunities and assist in helping other Australian companies become more export-focused. The Manufacturing Growth Center's goal is to help Australian manufacturers become more digital and export-focused. The partnership between St. George Banking and UNSW Sydney is the first of its kind and will help manufacturers find solutions in scaling up for both onshore and overseas endeavors." - this is irrelevant to the question. Everything after the first sentence can be deleted.

critique: It is incorrectly stated that the goal of the partnership is to help Australian manufacturers become more digital and export-focused.

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- It is not stated how the partnership will help Australia's innovation, competitiveness and advance manufacturing technology.
- The partnership is there to help research and development, advance purchasing opportunities and increase the collaboration between all three parties involved.

critique: The partnership is between UNSW Sydney, St. George Banking Group and the Advanced Manufacturing Growth Centre.

critique: "St. George and UNSW Sydney have joined together in order to create a new area of research." - this is inaccurate. It's not stated that they have joined together to create a new area of research.

critique: There's no evidence of the partnership's creation being the first of its kind.

critique: The partnership is between St. George Banking Group, UNSW Sydney, and the Advanced Manufacturing Growth Center.

critique: "St. George and UNSW Sydney have joined together in order to create a new area of research." - this was never mentioned. This sentence should be erased.

question: Who is Micahel Sharpe and what are his thoughts on the partnership?

answer: Michael Sharpe, state director of AMGC, believes that every Australian manufacturer can transition to the digital age in order to build their business and compete globally.

critique: Sharpe is the state director of the Advanced Manufacturing Growth Centre, not the AMGC.

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question: What does the text say about the role of UNSW in the partnership?

answer: In Australia, the manufacturing sector employs approximately 5% of the total workforce. The partnership comes in the wake of research indicating better job figures in the sector. Now, UNSW aims to help Australia unlock its competitive edge by taking advantage of this sector and partnering with it, as well as its potential. The partnership aims to bring together three different streams of the Australian economy: research, industry and banking. AMGC, an Australian manufacturing company, will aim to provide high-value to global supply chains by scaling businesses across onshore and overseas houses.

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critique: The answer is misleading. It should be clear that the UNSW's role in the partnership is to give potential partners access to the nation’s most advanced manufacturing facilities.

critique: The model doesn't illustrate that the divide between the economy and research is vested in the 5%. Now may imply UNSW is attempting to obstruct the three streams of economic revival.


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The State Library of Queensland acknowledges that the language heritage and knowledge of these word lists always remains with the Traditional Owners, language custodians and community members of the respective language nations.

These pages include a number of word lists on various topics to support communities in their work to revive, document and preserve Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander languages. The language content is drawn from a range of historical texts found in State Library's collections.

NOTE: Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander languages are oral languages that have only been written since European settlement; there may be several variations in spelling and pronunciation. Check with local language custodians as to the preferred local word and its’ spelling and pronunciation.

How do I pronounce Aboriginal sounds?

In pronouncing Aboriginal words, there are some sounds which are quite different to English and require practice.

  English sound   Aboriginal sound
  --------------- --------------------------------------------------------------------------
  dh              Pronounced with the tongue at the back of the teeth. Can sound like 'th'
  ng              Closest to 'ng' sound found in singer.
  ny              Closest to 'n' sound found in onion.
  rr              Rolled 'r' sound, similar to a Scottish 'r'.

How do I pronounce Torres Strait Islander sounds?

In pronouncing Torres Strait Islander language words, there are some sounds which are quite different to English and require practice.

  English sound   Torres Strait Islander sound
  --------------- -----------------------------------------------------------------------
  dh              Pronounced with the tongue at the back of teeth. Can sound like 'th'.
  dz              Can sound similar to 'dj'.
  ng              Closest to 'ng' sound found in singer.
  oi              Prolonged sound that can be between 'oi' and 'ai'.
  p,s and z       Sound similar to English.

Body parts

These pages provide a range of word lists on body parts to support communities in their work to revive, document and preserve Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander languages. Some of these wordlists complement the _Gambara Gamu Biyu_ body chart poster; while others have been collated from State Library collection items.

NOTE: Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander languages are oral languages that have only been written since European settlement; there may exist variations in spelling and pronunciation.  The following wordlists should be seen as a guide only - always consult local language speakers/custodians as to the preferred pronunciation.

ABORIGINAL SOUNDS

In pronouncing Aboriginal words, there are some sounds which are quite different to English and require practice.

'DH' is different to English - it is pronounced with the tongue at the back of the teeth.

'DJ' is similar to English - it can be between ‘j’ and ‘ch’.

'NG' is one sound in Aboriginal languages and is different to the 'n' sound in English - it is closest to the 'ng' sound found in singer.

'NH' is different to English - it is pronounced with the tongue at the back of the teeth.

'NY' is one sound in Aboriginal languages - it is closest to the 'n' sound found in onion.

'RR' is a rolled 'r' sound similar to a Scottish 'r'; at the end of a word it may sound like ‘d’.

question: Describe some differences in pronouncing Aboriginal sounds.

answer: There are some sounds which are quite different to English and require practice. They include dh, ng, ny, and rr.

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question: Describe what can be learned about the Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander languages.

answer: These pages include a number of wordlists on various topics to support communities in their work to revive, document and preserve Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander languages. The language content is drawn from a range of historical texts found in State Library's collections. Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander languages are oral languages that have only been written since European settlement; there may be several variations in spelling and pronunciation.

critique: The answer is a summary of the text, which is not necessary for the question.

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critique: This is unnecessary, as the available text is itself informative.

question: Who would be interested in learning more about the Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander languages?

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By Margie M. Palmer

Coffee shops are a dime a dozen, which is why when Nathan Tobiason decided to open Refill in Hillcrest, he let his passion for cold brew be his guide.

For those of you who have yet to hop on the cold brew train, you should know it’s nothing like its warm-steeped counterpart. Unlike a hot cup of Joe, cold brew is prepared by using room-temperature water. And because this methodology has a marked impact on the flavor, and caffeine extraction rate from, cold brew coffee can take up to 24 hours to prepare.

[Nathan Tobiason2]
Nathan Tobiason jumped at the chance to open his Refill café concept in the acclaimed Mr Robinson building at the corner of Robinson Avenue and Park Boulevard. (Courtesy of Refill)
The result is a beverage that has a higher caffeine content and an oftentimes bold sweetness that isn’t found in your standard cup of coffee.

The San Diego native turned café owner said he’s always been a fan of what he calls “the diner culture.” Tobiason also has an affinity for comfortable coffeehouses that are a great place to share a bite with friends. And when he learned a storefront in the Jonathan Segal-designed Mr Robinson building on the corner of Park Boulevard and Robinson Avenue was in need of a tenant, he decided to make his move.

“I’m friends with the son of the guy who owns [the building where Refill is] and once I heard the spot was available, and saw the location, I just really wanted to pursue it,” Tobaison said.

The timeframe from Refill’s inception to its opening date took months.

[IMG_8848]“It took a really long time. I think the initial plan really started in October and we didn’t open until mid-July,” he said, adding that the design, layout and furniture was both collaborative and extensive. “I went to school for product design and sculpture, and I worked with local artist Phil Audia, who is in Little Italy. We met for months and planned out layout, furniture, tables, the metal bar and all of that.”

The months-long process was not in vain; feedback to date has been more than positive.

“We’ve been open just over a month, we love the neighborhood and we’ve gotten a lot of positive feedback. There aren’t really any coffee or café options [southeast of Refill toward Balboa Park], which has also been really helpful,” Tobiason said. “It’s fun to have people come in and try a couple of the cold brews and to be able to expose people to different flavors. We have four on tap. We have a Ugandan French roast, which is very chocolatey, and we also have an Ethiopian cold brew that is much more fruity.”

The fact that they have four cold brew coffees on tap isn’t the only thing that differentiates Refill from some of the other neighborhood cafes. Another unique aspect of the space is that half of it is inside while the other 50 percent is outside. The indoor/outdoor areas are separated by a big sliding glass wall, Tobaison said.

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Customers enjoy cold brew coffee and good conversation. (Courtesy of Refill)
“We keep it closed on warmer days so we can have the air conditioning running and open on more reasonable days, which allows us to utilize San Diego’s weather,” he added.

Refill may be in its infancy but the café owner has high hopes for the future. “It is my hope that this cafe becomes a great meeting place for the residents of Hillcrest,” Tobiason said. “The open design, great coffee and light fare make for a great place to gather.”

_—Margie M. Palmer is a San Diego-based freelance writer who has been racking up bylines in a myriad of news publications for the past 10 years. You can reach her at_ _margiep@alumni.pitt.edu__._

question: Summarize what cold brew coffee is.

answer: Cold brew coffee is prepared by using room-temperature water. It has a higher caffeine content and an oftentimes bold sweetness that isn't found in standard coffee.

critique: The answer should mention the brewing time.

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question: What does the text say about Nathan Tobiason?

answer: Nathan Tobiason is a San Diego native who decided to open Refill, a coffee shop in his hometown. He said he was influenced by his love for cold brew coffee, which is an art form that brews coffee using room-temperature water and can take up to 24 hours to prepare. He says he's always been a fan of what he calls "the diner culture" and enjoys comfortable coffeehouses that are great places to share a bite. When he heard the spot where Refill is located was vacant, he decided to make his move. The process took months, but due to good feedback and no previous competitors, Refill was a success. Mr. Tobiason says he hopes the cafe becomes a great meeting place for the residents of Hillcrest.

critique: The answer should mention that Tobiason went to school for product design and sculpture.

critique: "Mr. Tobiason says he hopes the cafe becomes a great meeting place for the residents of Hillcrest." - this part is irrelevant because it doesn't have any bearing on Nathan Tobiason.