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“GIRLFRIEND” is a song by English rock band Wings, from their 1978 album _London Town_. It was written by Wings frontman Paul McCartney, who originally intended it to be sung by Michael Jackson. Jackson then covered the song the following year on his 1979 album _Off the Wall_, and in 1980 it was released (in the UK only) as the 5th and final single of that album.

Background

McCartney thought of “Girlfriend” as a song that Michael Jackson might like to record, and mentioned this to Jackson at a party in Hollywood. Jackson had stated in interviews with the music press in the 1970s that he was a fan of the Beatles and the chance to record a McCartney original helped to inspire his next project. However, McCartney ended up recording it himself with his band Wings, and it was issued in 1978 on the album _London Town_. Michael always said that he wrote the song for a platonic love “Paul and me... well... we wrote this song for my crush, she is a gorgeous singer, foreign and it is even better, you know?, because she has no idea of my feelings, and you don't know how I long to do what I say... I will never say her name, would be a crime”...

_Kingsport Times-News_ critic Michael Clark regarded the song as the better of the two Bee Gees' sendups on _London Town_, “With a Little Luck” being the other.[1] He also regarded it as one of the two best songs on the album, along with “I've Had Enough,” praising the “light, bouncy melody” and the falsetto singing added to the “sweet backing harmonies” whenever the word “girlfriend” is sung.[2] On the other hand, _Hartford Courant_ critic Henry McNulty regarded it as one of the Wings' weakest songs since “Wild Life”, criticising its harmonies and lyrics, and finding only the “mildly exciting guitar line” to be worthy of even faint praise.[3]

Quincy Jones heard the song and suggested it as a possible track for Jackson to record for his 1979 album _Off the Wall_, not aware that the song had been written for Jackson in the first place. Jackson's recording omitted the middle eight heard in McCartney's version. It was issued exclusively in the UK in 1980, as the fifth and final single from the _Off the Wall_ album. This proved to be another hit single for Jackson and one of his first recordings of a Paul McCartney song.

McCartney and Jackson subsequently worked together on “The Girl Is Mine” from Jackson's _Thriller_, as well as “Say Say Say” and “The Man”, from McCartney's _Pipes of Peace_. In 1985, Jackson acquired the ATV Music Publishing catalog (which held the rights to nearly every Beatles song) uncontested by McCartney.[4][5][6] According to McCartney, they “drifted apart” after he talked to Jackson about getting a “raise” and Jackson did not act on it.[7]

Personnel

-   Paul McCartney – vocals, bass, acoustic and electric guitars, drums, electric piano, synthesizers, possible piano
-   Linda McCartney – keyboards, backing vocals
-   Denny Laine – acoustic and electric guitars, backing vocals, possible piano

Michael Jackson version

-   Produced by Quincy Jones
-   Recorded and Mixed by Bruce Swedien
-   Lead and background vocals: Michael Jackson
-   Bass: Louis Johnson
-   Drums: John Robinson
-   Electric piano: Greg Phillinganes
-   Synthesizer: David Foster, George Duke
-   Synthesizer programming: Steve Porcaro and George Duke
-   Guitar: Wah Wah Watson and Marlo Henderson
-   Horns arranged by Jerry Hey and performed by The Seawind Horns:
    -   Trumpet and flugelhorn: Jerry Hey
    -   Tenor, alto saxophones and flute: Larry Williams
    -   Baritone, tenor saxophones and flute: Kim Hutchcroft
    -   Trombone: William Reichenbach
    -   Trumpet: Gary Grant
-   Alto sax solo: Larry Williams
-   Rhythm arrangement by Quincy Jones, Tom Bahler and Greg Phillinganes
-   Vocal arrangement by Michael Jackson and Quincy Jones

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title: Girlfriend (Paul McCartney song)

question: What does the text say about the reception of the song?

answer: It was released in 1978 on the album London Town by Wings. The song is regarded by critics as the better of the two Bee Gees' sendups on London Town, with critic Michael Clark praising the light, bouncy melody and the falsetto singing added to the sweet backing harmonies, expecially whenever the word "girlfriend" is sung. However, Henry McNulty of the Hartford Courant, who disliked the song, said it was one of the Wings' weakest songs since "Wild Life" due to its harmonies and lyrics.

critique: The song's release is irrelevant to the reception.

critique: The song was released in 1980, not 1978.

question: What does the text say about the song's authorship?

answer: The song was written by Paul McCartney, and Michael Jackson recorded it for his album Off the Wall, which was released in 1980. McCartney recorded the song with his band Wings in 1978, and it was released on the album London Town.

critique: The answer should mention that McCartney intended the song for Jackson.

critique: The answer should mention that McCartney intended the song to be sung by Jackson.


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[Titan FC 39 Healy]
Titan FC 39 Healy

Veteran mixed martial artist Pat “Bam Bam” Healy took some time to talk to Cage Pages ahead of his next marquee matchup.

A professional for nearly 15 years, Pat Healy truly is a legend in the sport of MMA. After competing in nearly every organization one could name, Healy finds himself headlining Titan FC 39.

Healy’s opponent is another MMA legend in Gesias “JZ” Cavalcante. The two combine for an alarming number of fights on record, 82 to be exact.

Due to the wealth of experience owned by Healy, Cage Pages took the time to pick his brain before he gets inside the cage again.

Being that Healy has fought in so many organizations, we asked him to comment on how Titan FC was progressing.

  “I feel like they’re a strong organization trying to establish themselves as the top organization outside of the big two right now. Hopefully it can grow into something bigger. Putting a home base in Miami, there’s so much talent around that area. That’s a smart play. That’s the way you build a promotion, not that I’m an expert. You focus it on a talented region where you can pull a lot of talented guys from.”

After discussing his promotion, Healy went on to talk about his opponent.

“I think I matchup with him well. It’ll be a good matchup. We both play into each other’s strengths. We both like being on top, grappling, using our takedowns. We’re both going to be working for that. We’re not afraid to stand either.”

Healy’s style is marked with constant scrappy forward pressure. Healy explained where he gets his mentality from.

“I think I was born with it. I had a twin brother growing up. We were always rough and tumble boys. We always had our foot on the gas going hard. We never thought about the consequences. That’s kinda how we always attacked life. Full speed ahead, let the chips fall where they may.”

Healy continued by talking about the fight that best highlights his mentality and skill set.

“Maybe the Jim Miller fight. We both were pressing forward. I was pressing, rode in with pressure. I try to do that in all my fights so I can get that submission.”

After fighting for so long it’s easy to wonder if there is anyone left that Healy wants to fight.

  “I don’t know. There’s no one I’m looking to fight. Just want to fight guys that want to fight. That want to come forward and make it a scrap, not a guy that’s going to try to run away, and to win on points. Don’t get me wrong, that’s a good style. It gets wins. I think Cowboy is a good example. I train with him out there in New Mexico. He comes ready to scrap. He’s always looking for the kill. I just got here last week. I try to get out here as much as possible, especially if Cowboy has a fight.”

Besides Cowboy, the training environment out in New Mexico has been exceptional for Healy.

“The coaching is the biggest thing. Jafari Vanier the wrestling coach is great. Brandon Gibson works with tons of stars. We always go to Jackson’s for some extra work. Their accomplishments speak for themselves.”

After being around the game for so long Healy let us know what keeps him going in the sport.

  “Just my love of the sport. I enjoy getting to be able to do it. Enjoy the training everyday, the battles in the gym, everything. It’s all fun to me. I couldn’t imagine my life without at least doing BJJ. Being around the gym, those are a lot of your friends. You know you go and hang out and have a laugh and get after it and get your heart rate up. Then you laugh and joke about it. It’s like a little tribe.”

Before closing the conversation, we asked Healy how much longer he had in MMA.

“I’m only 32. I still feel good. I certainly don’t want to be one of those guys stuck in fighting just to get paid. I don’t want to take a lot of abuse to the brain and stuff. When I can’t compete at a high level I’ll step back. I’ve never relied on my physical talent, and I can keep improving so I can still win.”

The veteran Healy is one of the last of a dying breed. The gritty veteran has been described by more than a few people in MMA as one of the toughest fighters still in the game. To connect with this old school grinder before his next performance, follow him on Facebook, Instagram andTwitter. Healy’s next fight will take place at Titan FC 39, live streaming on UFC Fight Pass at 7 p.m. EST.

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question: Summarize Healy's comments on the progression of Titan FC.

answer: He thinks Titan FC is a strong organization trying to establish itself as the top organization outside of the big two. He believes they have home base in Miami, where there is so much talent. He believes Titan has the smart play to focus on a region for talent.

critique: It's omitted that Healy thinks that Titan is establishing itself as the top organization outside of the big two.

critique: Healy's comments on Titan FC's progression should be summarized.

critique: Healy doesn't explicitly say that Titan has the smart play to focus on a region for talent.

critique: It's omitted that Healy thinks Titan FC can grow into something bigger.

critique: The answer omits Healy's thoughts on Titan's future.

critique: The answer should mention that Healy thinks Titan has a good chance to grow.

question: Summarize what keeps Healy going in the sport.

answer: Healy says that he enjoys the training and the battles in the gym. He also says that he enjoys being around the gym and hanging out with his friends. Healy says that he doesn't want to be stuck in fighting just to get paid. He also says that he doesn't want to take a lot of abuse to the brain and stuff.

critique: It's omitted that Healy says that as long as he can compete at a high level, he will continue fighting.

critique: The answer should mention that Healy is only 32.

critique: The answer should mention Healy's love of the sport.

critique: The answer should include that Healy says he still feels good and that he can still win.

critique: The answer should mention that Healy says he still feels good and that he can keep improving.

critique: "Healy says that he enjoys the training and the battles in the gym." - is redundant and should be removed.

critique: The answer should mention that Healy is 32 years old.

question: Who could Healy be a great asset to as a veteran?

answer: He could be a great asset to any organization that is looking to build a team.

critique: The answer should clarify that Healy is a great asset to the UFC.

critique: The article does not mention any specific organization.

critique: The question doesn't ask who Healy could be a great asset to. It asks who Healy might be a great asset to.

critique: "He could be a great asset to any organization that is looking to build a team." - this is a vague response and not a good one. He can be a great asset to any team that is looking to win and build a legacy.

text: The response should be "The information can't be found."

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It seemed to be the end, now- the city's soldiers had given a valiant fight, the heroes of all humanity gathered in one place- Palancar of Tithia, the paladin, O'ashn, the rogue of the Blackmoon Streets; even the ancient Allmage of Retun had emerged from his hermit's cave to aid the last human-held city in their battle.

The battle against the undead and their daemon masters had continued for days- 3 long, hard days; days where the daemons had driven the undead up against the walls of Hairn like the water against a rock- and just like a rock, the city had weathered each assault. However, as the sun rose on the fourth day, everything seemed doomed- the undead army had simply been growing with every casualty that the human forces took, and the demon rift had widened every day at sunset. It looked like today was the day that the heroes of humanity would fall.
Palancar grimly looked at his regiment- down from a hundred Tithian men to a mere twenty-three- and sighed. They stood at the top of a tower, looking out on the endless undead armies, and Palancar's closest friend and second in command, Ulthar, turned to him.
"My friend, it seems as though we will die today. Even if each of us fights worthy of song and kills a thousand abominations, the city will still fall," Ulthar said, his visage covered by the dark stare of a warrior resigned to death. Palancar said nothing for a moment, and then addressed his soldiers.

"Men.." he said, his voice cracking on the first word, "men. These past days you have proven yourselves to truly be men, the best that I have ever commanded. But today even the best of humanity cannot stand against the forces of the Abyss. Though we cannot hope to remain alive amidst the rotted flesh and hellish enemies arrayed against us, we will fight. Because we are the men of Tithia; her womb bore us and nutured us until she was burned by these scions of death. So I ask you, soldiers of the motherland, soldiers of Humanity, shall we fight?"
A roar went up from the collected soldiers that quickly died down in the deathly silence of the walled city. Far away, in an inn, down below the large walls, sat O'ashn by himself, bandaging his wounds so they would not hamper him in battle, and conversing with his brother, who had accompanied him from Blackmoon.

"I will find the demon and stab him in the back and they will return," said the young, optimistic brother, holding a small dagger in his hand, swinging it. The adolescent was unlikely to see another day- the enemy would break through the weakened walls today- but he was eager to acquit himself in battle for his brother's eyes to see. O'ashn smiled a mirthless smile, and patted his young brother on the back before returning to his weaponry and bandaging.

The last of the great heroes was quite busy in the highest tower in the city, calling upon the very earth to shake and bring lightning on these creatures that were not natural to her, but the Allmage could not find a way to get the Earth to respond- she seemed almost preoccupied with something more important! As if the destruction of her entire surface was nothing to be worried about. He frowned and worked even harder, chanting faster and flipping through his spellbook to find something that might allow him to contact her before it was too late...

In the streets, the attitude was, among some, resigned, and among others, defiant. Many laid in the streets, uncaring about their fate- some were crippled without their loved ones, some simply not willing to put any energy into what seemed to be a lost cause, preferring to take their time to make their peace. Blacksmiths worked hard to make last-minute weaponry for every able-bodied person, and bars let the alcohol flow for those who weren't able to fight. At last, a few hours later, the meager army of Hairn was assembled outside of the gates- they would do everything they could to delay the enemies so that those inside could have their peace. On the other side of the battlefield, there was a fell roar, and then the battle was commenced, a massive flood of bodies falling upon the heroes and the troops of humanity.

Now, they all knew they were doomed; it was truly evident if it hadn't been before- each man faced a dozen daemons or a hundred undead; few escaped death in that first charge. The ranks of the humans dwindled quickly. But then there was a clearing in the dark, ashy skies. All battle stopped. Palancar looked up.

A winged, armored man stepped down, seemingly out of a beam of light, and turned to look at Palancar- his face was hidden, but the paladin knew that the thing's gaze was upon him- and then, it raised it's sword and a thousand other beams of light opened up the sky to a radiant sun and one intangible thing that made the human soldiers cry for joy and surge for a counterattack-

**Hope.**

title: The Battle for the Last City

question: Summarize everything to do with the enemy forces.

answer: The story begins on the third day of a battle between the undead army and their daemon masters against the human army. The fighting has been going on for days and the Undead have been growing with every casualty. On the fourth day, the demon rift has widened every day, which means the day they will be defeated. The main character, Palancar, and his men are outnumbered by their enemies. The Undead reach the walls of Hairn.

critique: Doesn't mention the massive flood of bodies.

critique: The response is missing the part where the daemons are described as the enemy forces.

critique: The response is missing the part about the enemy forces.

critique: The response is missing the part where the enemy breaks through the weakened walls.

text: It's omitted there is a possibility of defeating the enemy when a winged, armored man appears.

question: Summarize everything relating to death.

answer: There is an undead army outside of the walls of Hairn, with a massive rift on the other side. The sun rises on the fourth day of the battle, and for the first time it seems that humanity will fall. The humans will die if the city falls, even the best of humanity cannot stand against the forces of the Abyss. Many soldiers lay in the streets, uncaring about their fate. Many more die in the first charge of battle.

critique: The response misses to mention that the humans are doomed to die.

text: The second to last sentence is irrelevant and should be omitted.

category: coherence

question: What does the story say about O'ashn's brother's actions during the battle?

answer: O'ashn's brother is an adolescent who accompanies him from Blackmoon. He is eager to acquit himself in battle for his brother's eyes to see. He swings a small dagger in his hand. He is unlikely to see another day because the enemy will break through the weakened walls today.

critique: The response is missing the part where O'ashn's brother is eager to fight for his brother's eyes to see.


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Golden stalks of grain danced in the wind as we sped past them. The field around me undulated in the wind like a tumultuous sea. The setting sun bathed the world in red and orange, glaring harshly through my back seat window. Dust from the road coated the glass, masking the outside world in a hazy gauze.
Lost in a world of my own, I imagined the oncoming truck to be a majestic galleon, flying the royal colors of the evil king.
“Helmsman! Bring er’ round to broadside!” I shouted to my mother in the front seat. She jumped, swerving our car out of the lane onto the shoulder of the road. The car behind us honked ferociously as it sped around us.
“What did I say? Stop your stupid games, sit down, and shut up!” She spat.
“Aye, captain,” I murmured quietly, so she wouldn’t hear. I returned to my window, defeated.
I tried to make out the murky shapes in the distance. Was that a sea serpent peeking its head above the waves? Had some monster of the deep braved the airy world to satisfy its curiosity of the land dwellers?  I turned to my mother, desperate to question her about the “lock-less” monster the older kids at school had warned me about. But Mother didn’t appreciate questions. I looked back to the window, watching for more monsters.
I tried to give up my musing to watch the lines of the road zip by. The tiny reflectors picked up our car headlights and gleamed brilliantly. I couldn’t help but imagine a group of sea creatures flaunting their fluorescent bodies. Our vessel glided over the glassy waters they danced together in, oblivious of the magic below it.
Every summer we made this trip. We spent hours on empty highways in silence, save for the occasional static filled radio channel or empty conversation. We were headed to my father’s house, or in my mind, home.
I treasured the few precious holidays I spent with him. Normally, he would have met us halfway to liberate me, but he had been called to an important meeting. I imagined how I would have rejoiced in my freedom, shouting orders to my father.
“Veer slightly right, Captain!” I would have commanded.
“Nay, landluver! Tis starboard ye’ be wantin!” He would have replied in his best seafaring accent.
I groaned in frustration.
I hated how boring it was with her. My choice of literature quickly became contraband. “Magic and fantasy,” she would say, “are inappropriate for a young Christian boy.” Video games and secular music were often subjects of debate as well, and she usually confiscated anything she could lay her hands on.
Imagination was my only refuge when my mother came home howling and sobbing again. It became my best friend when she would announce year after successive year that we would be moving, so she could find a new job or meet a new man. I often wondered where “home” would be when I returned from my visits.
So, instead of reading my copy of Harry Potter tucked neatly away in a corner pocket of my backpack, or playing on the GameBoy I’d smuggled in my jacket, I watched the road speed by.
My imagination became the adventure I longed for. There I could be the handsome airship pilot, standing behind a polished wooden helm, studying the clouds drift lazily below me. Sometimes I was an edgey detective, tailing a suspicious broad in a rainy, monochrome street. Other days, I was a wizened and greying wizard standing in my tower above the city, creating a spectacle of light for the people below to marvel at. When it rained I was a dark and mysterious ranger, inching my way through a forest and searching for my prey. Most days I was the captain of a sea vessel, strong and courageous, barking orders to my crew.
The sun had set and the moon stood vigil over the land. The ever silent sentinel cast light over the sea of grain. I wondered what kind of crew would be bunking on my ship at this time of night. Would my ship be manned by the most dastardly dogs of the rough seas? Would I pirate and loot the great, rich, pompous cities of the world and spread my wealth to the poor? Or would I be a member of the most dashing and refined men to ever set sail, treading new waters for kings? I liked to imagine I would be the former.
“Son,” my mother interrupted my thoughts, “Look, I know I’m hard on you sometimes, and moving to and fro all the time isn’t easy for you,” She turned to me, her face stern and beautiful as always, “And I’m sorry. But I love you very much, and I only want what’s best for the both of us.” Her face softened as she turned back to the road. “It’s hard for me too.”
I sat silently, my imagination stilled.
“I know sometimes you think of moving to your father’s house like you other siblings did, but I need someone to be the man of the house, son,” she said. “Please don’t leave me, okay? Will you promise to stay and be my captain?”
She was right, I wanted to escape sometimes, but I couldn’t stand the thought of leaving her alone. Besides, she could take away my books and games, but my imagination was my own.
“Aye” I promised her.
And that seemed to make everything okay.

(Posted from my phone,  so please excuse the formatting! I submitted this in my schools' writing competition and won first prize, but it's a pretty small school, so I'd like to get this out there and get some criticism from a broader audience. Thanks in advance you beautiful people!)

title: [RF] A Captain's Oath (Feedback wanted!)

question: What does the story say about the type of relationship the narrator has with his mother?

answer: The narrator seems to have a strained relationship with his mother. He seems to be frustrated with her rules and restrictions. She is also very strict and controlling. Despite this, the narrator seems to love his mother and doesn't want to leave her alone.

critique: Doesn't mention that his mother is the one who is always moving.

text: Parts of the response are repetitive and could be removed.

question: Summarize everything relating to imagination.

answer: The narrator imagines their mother to be a captain, barking orders to them. They imagine themselves as a captain, barking orders to their crew. They imagine themselves as an airship pilot or a wizened wizard. They imagine themselves as a dark, mysterious ranger. They imagine themselves as a pirate, spreading their wealth.

critique: The narrator also imagines themselves as an edgey detective.

question: What does the story say about the narrator's father?

answer: The narrator's father is rarely around and is always away on business. He would have met them halfway to liberate the narrator, but he was called to an important meeting. The narrator imagines himself being a captain of a ship and barking orders to his father.

critique: Inaccurate response that should be replaced.

critique: The narrator's father is not always away on business. He is only away on important meetings.

critique: The narrator's father is not always away on business.

critique: The narrator's father is never mentioned to be away on business.

critique: The narrator's father does not meet them halfway. He is always away, which is why the narrator is with his mother for the holidays.

critique: It is omitted that the narrator's father is a respected man and the narrator's mother asks him not to leave her alone.

question: Summarize the narrator's career as a captain.

answer: No answer

critique: The narrator's career as a captain is not mentioned in the passage.

critique: The answer should state that the story does not mention the narrator's career as a captain.

critique: The answer should mention that the narrator is a captain in his imagination.

critique: The answer should mention that the narrator's career as a captain is in his imagination.

critique: The story includes a lot of information about the narrator's experience with being a captain.

critique: Does not mention that the narrator considers his imagination his career as a captain.


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critique: The answer should mention the lab's certification.

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critique: The answer omits the fact that the lab is GMP-grade compliant.

critique: The answer should mention that the lab is certified by third party approved institutes.

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critique: The text does not discuss treatment costs.

critique: The text doesn't mention treatment costs.

critique: The question is asking for information that is not in the text.

critique: The question requests an answer. The answer is available in the answer field. Write an answer.


text:
Nathan stood in the corner with hunched shoulders.  He could see nothing but white floral wallpaper.  The walls smelled dusty.  It was so unfair.
    His mom sentenced him to time out for twenty minutes.  For twenty minutes he was supposed to stand in that corner and do nothing.  His Pokemon, Nosepicker, was just a few points away from leveling up and there he was, enduring a staring contest with dust mites.  The worst part was that he didn't even do anything to deserve it.  His mom just hated him, she favored his brother.  All she ever did was nag at him and make him go to bed early and embarrass him in front of his friends.  One time, she planted a note in his lunch that said 'I love you, Sweety Pumpkins!  Ask Sarah if she'd like to come over and play!' and there was a winky face.  Nathan sat with Sarah at lunch that day and Sarah read that note; he was the laughing stock of the whole school.  Life would have been so much better if his mom just disappeared.
	Life went on for Nathan like that for awhile.  He chafed under his mom's curfew.  He had to bring any new girlfriend home for a very formal, very uncomfortable dinner with his mom (and no, Sarah never came for dinner).  No food upstairs, no TV before homework, no closed doors in the house.  High school came and left Nathan with an open tri-fold letter on his desk:  'Congratulations, you have been accepted to the school of your dreams.'  Those dreams finally took him far away for a long time.
	The white floral wallpaper on the walls in the corner is even dustier now.  There are small tears in the paper and dents in the wall, though I don't know how they got there.  My fingers graze the walls.  Time has a way of marking even the most untouchable of places.  I hear my brother's voice behind me.
	“Nathan.  It's your turn.”
I turn from my corner and walk across the living room into the bedroom hall.  Night is falling, and the gloomy twilight from outside is creeping between closed shutters.  I don't bother knocking before I enter my mom's room.  The nurse looks up from an IV unit and twitches something into place before she leaves.  My mom is on the bed looking old.  The bitter twilight from outside turns the hills and dips of her face into valleys and canyons.  Her hair is a vacant facade, and her pinpoint pupils are seeing somewhere else.  I sit in an old white wicker chair next to the bed.
	“Mom,” I whisper, “I'm here.  It's me, Nathan.”  A spark flashes in her eyes and my voice drops, I don't want to extinguish it.  “How are ya doin'?”
	“Nathan?”  Her voice is the skim off the top of her vocal chords.  “Yes, Nathan.  That's my son.  He's a good boy.”
	“I know, Mom, I—”
	“Stubborn too, like me.  Stubborn like his mom, but such a good boy.”
Nathan wasn't a good boy.  Nathan was resentful.  He was unappreciative and wished his mom would disappear.  He would have been glad to see the woman on the bed in front of me disintegrating into the sheets.  I hate Nathan.
	The twilight is freezing into darkness now.  There's a lamp on the nightstand next to me, but I don't want to turn it on.  My eyes close.  I just want to hear my mom's decomposing voice.
	“I give him everything, everything... I'd lay my life down for him.  He's my angel.”
Now my hands search wildly on the bed for my mom's wrist.  What angel was Nathan, the brat who waited in the corner until his mom wasted away?  My fingers find the wrist; it's a twig waiting to snap.
	Why, Nathan, did you do this to me?  You bitched and you moaned and now I am facing your punishment, this wasted woman, your dying mother.  You turned your back in some spiteful waiting game and guess what, you won, you bastard.
	“I love you, Mom,” I say.  It's an echo of someone else's words, a desperate one-liner to flirt with the idea of never seeing her again.
	My mom turns to me and then I know I've extinguished the spark because she croaks, “That's nice, all very nice.”

title: [Critique] an exercise in manipulating POV: Nathan

question: Summarize Nathan's relationship with his mother.

answer: His relationship appears to be negative. She sent him to his room for twenty minutes. She made sure she always let him know when he did something that displeased her by strict restrictions. He makes it clear to the reader on occasion he is not happy about the way his mother treats him.

critique: The answer should mention Nathan's resentment.

critique: The answer should mention that Nathan is resentful of his mother.

critique: It's omitted that Nathan resents his mother, and wishes she would disappear.

critique: The narrator is not sure his mom hates him.

critique: The answer should mention his resentment.

critique: It is omitted that Nathan is resentful of his mother.

critique: The answer should mention the narrator's resentment.

question: Summarize Nathan's childhood.

answer: Nathan's childhood was rocky because of his mom's unfair parenting style. Nathan's mom would always make him do things he didn't necessarily want to do because she simply hated him. Often, Nathan had to deal with his mom embarrassing him in front of his friends. He believed his mom disappeared and continued to feel pity for her by the end of the narrative. Nathan's mom became needy, and he felt that she loves playing his friend's mom in their front-porch -she is desperately longing for that form of closeness and validation because Nathan left when he got home, making her even more lonely.

critique: The last two sentences are not relevant to the question.

critique: The last two sentences are unnecessary and do not answer the question.

critique: Nathan did not feel sorry for his mom at the end of the narrative.

question: Summarize Nathan's last interaction with his mother.

answer: Nathan talks with his mother for the last time as she is about to die. He wants to say something, but doesn't dare spoil the moment. He tells her he loves her, and a single tear escapes his eyes.

critique: "He wants to say something, but doesn't dare spoil the moment" is unnecessary detail.

critique: The answer omits the most important detail of the scene, which is Nathan's resentment.

critique: This is inaccurate. Nathan is not afraid to spoil the moment. He is angry and hateful.

question: Summarize Nathan's relationship with his brother.

answer: Nathan has a relationship with his brother where he complains that his brother gets everything in the house while he has a curfew. He always imagines living life the way his brother does, and he always finds a way to bring his brother up in conversations with him.  Nathan is upset that his brother doesn't come home, even though he knows that means his mother is likely very sick.

critique: There is no evidence in the passage that suggests Nathan's brother doesn't come home.

critique: "Nathan is upset that his brother doesn't come home, even though he knows that means his mother is likely very sick." This is incorrect and should be replaced with the correct part of the passage in which Nathan admires his bro and is just jealous of the freedom he has.

critique: The answer is inaccurate. Nathan does not complain about his brother getting everything in the house.

critique: The second sentence is inaccurate. Nathan doesn't always complain that his brother gets everything in the house while he has a curfew.

critique: The answer is inaccurate. Nathan doesn't complain about his brother getting everything in the house.


text:
In any given third-grade classroom, you can find a student who is reading at a level far beyond their age, and another who is still working on letter recognition. How does a traditional classroom teacher with 25-30 kids manage such a wide range of students? As a district leader, how do I support our teachers and ensure that they are challenging students who are at a higher level while providing struggling students with proper support?

These are the tough questions I asked myself when taking over as superintendent of Maury County Schools in Tennessee in August 2015. Within the first few months, we ditched the old literacy model to adopt a project-based focus; deployed instructional coaches (without hiring anyone); and launched a top-down, district-level approach that quickly gained bottom-up buy-in through school and community support. We also implemented a differentiated literacy program and digital library that measures reading with reading—not quiz scores and points.

CREATING THE KEYS TO SUCCESS

In my first days as superintendent, I did what I called a “22in22 Tour” where I traveled to all 22 schools in my district in 22 days. I know from experience that the best leaders are the best listeners, so I made sure to take the time to hear what school leaders and classroom teachers had to say about Maury’s administrative approach. I heard loud and clear that there were issues of trust, lack of resources, switching initiatives on a dime, and a need for truly aligned and supportive professional development. That’s when I knew I had to eliminate the top-down approach that the district had taken in the past (and many districts employ) and go through a process to determine our Keys to Success.

Over 10 weeks, my administrative team and I asked every school board member, administrator, teacher, staff member, and parent to answer one simple question: What should students know before leaving elementary school, middle school, and high school? After making my rounds inside our school community, we asked the same question to a wide variety of community organizations including the Rotary, Kiwanis, City Council, NAACP, retired teachers’ association, the County Commission, and over 20 more groups.

-   All students’ reading proficiency at or above grade level by the end of third grade
-   All students’ math proficiency at or above grade level by the end of the fourth grade
-   All students’ Math and English proficiency at or above grade level by the end of sixth grade
-   All students proficient in Algebra 1 by the end of eighth grade
-   All students scoring at or above ACT college readiness benchmarks by graduation
-   All students financially literate by graduation
-   All students participating in advanced placement, dual-enrollment, industry certification, work-based learning, or military prep by graduation.

By generating common goals as a community, we created a level of transparency that was new to Maury County. The Keys created a common vocabulary across the entire community, so everyone was well aware of our mission as a district. For the first time in a long time, this district shifted its focus from state test scores and data to the kids and what they should be able to do to be truly college and/or career ready—the way it should be.

NEXT PAGE: PUTTING POWER IN THE PRINCIPALS’ HANDS

ABOUT THE AUTHOR:

Chris Marczak, Ed.D., is the Superintendent of the Maury County School District in Tennessee. He started his career as a classroom teacher, and accepted his first administrative role in 2009. Follow Dr. Marczak on Twitter at @cjmarczak or email him at cmarczak@mauryk12.org.

question: What does the text say about the keys to success?

answer: The keys to success are all the things that students should know before leaving elementary school, middle school, and high school. The keys to success are: reading proficiency at or above grade level by the end of third grade, math proficiency at or above grade level by the end of the fourth grade, Math and English proficiency at or above grade level by the end of sixth grade, Algebra 1 proficiency by the end of eighth grade, scoring at or above ACT college readiness benchmarks by graduation, and being financially literate by graduation.

critique: The answer should include the last few criteria, which weren't written before the bolded text.

question: What is the author's opinion on generating common goals as a community?

answer: The author believes that generating common goals as a community creates a level of transparency that was new to Maury County.

critique: The answer does not mention the common vocabulary.

critique: The answer should mention that the author believes the common goals create a common vocabulary.

critique: The answer is not a direct quote from the text.

critique: The answer should mention the other benefits of generating common goals as a community.

text: The answer should discuss the value of the children themselves rather than test scores.

category: accuracy

question: What does the text say about the author?

answer: The author is Chris Marczak, Ed.D. He is the Superintendent of the Maury County School District in Tennessee. He started his career as a classroom teacher, and accepted his first administrative role in 2009.

critique: The answer should mention Marczak's education.

critique: The answer could be more specific about the district he became superintendent in.

question: What does the text say about students and reading levels?

answer: In any given third-grade classroom, you can find a student who is reading at a level far beyond their age, and another who is still working on letter recognition. How does a traditional classroom teacher with 25-30 kids manage such a wide range of students?

critique: "letter recognition" - seems like a regression. replace with "recognition of the alphabet"

text: Omit the final question as it is irrelevant and lifted from the text


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ALL SAINTS EPISCOPAL CHURCH is a historic Episcopal church in Appleton, Wisconsin. A parish in the Diocese of Fond du Lac, it is the only Episcopal church in Appleton. The congregation first met circa 1854 and organized in 1856.[1] The current church building was consecrated in 1905.

History

Missionary bishop Jackson Kemper held the first Episcopal service in Appleton in “1854 or 1855”.[2] The parish was organized in 1856, and originally named Grace Episcopal Church. The first church building's cornerstone was laid by Bishop Kemper in 1864 and completed in 1866. The wooden structure cost $6,000 and was located at Appleton and Edwards (now Washington) streets. In 1883, the original building was moved to the current church site at College Avenue and Drew Street, adjacent to Lawrence University.

In 1905, that building was moved across the street while the current church building was constructed on the site. The 1905 building was designed by Shepley, Rutan & Coolidge.[3] All Saints Norman stone tower is modeled on the tower of the church in Appleton-le-Street, Yorkshire. In 1905, the name of the parish was changed to All Saints Episcopal Church. An estimated 1,500 to 2,000 people attended the cornerstone-laying service, presided over by Bishop Charles Chapman Grafton, on October 1, 1905. The first service in the completed building was celebrated on Easter Sunday, April 15, 1906. Bishop Reginald Heber Weller preached; the Rev. S. P. Delany was rector.

At 3:50 a.m., November 30, 1949, a taxi driver reported that a fire had broken out at All Saints. The fire started in the basement and burned through the floor, causing the altar to fall into the basement and charring the rest of the interior of the church. The altar, which was fairly new, the reredos, the organ, the carved choir stalls, a Tiffany window, and the bishop's chair were destroyed, but the baptistry was spared. Vestments and other fabrics were smoke-damaged. The total loss was estimated at $75,000. The interior of the church dates from 1950, rebuilt after the fire by architectural firm Maurey Lee Allen.[4] Bishop Harwood Sturtevant officially rededicated All Saints with special services featuring a new organ on All Saints Sunday 1952.[5] The organ, built by M. P. Moller, was installed in 1951.[6]

The 1910 Reid Memorial Window, a Tiffany window depicting Dorcas, Acts of the Apostles (9:36–42,) was destroyed in the 1949 fire.[7][8]

In 1959, building plans by J. Rouman & Associates for the parish center were approved,[9] and the rectory and neighboring house on the corner were torn down. Construction began in 1960 and was completed in January 1961. Parish “work parties” painted and did other finishing work. The dedication of the parish center was on April 30, 1961.

Gerald F. Gilmore, formerly assistant minister at St. John's Episcopal Church, Lafayette Square, became rector in 1949.[10] Rev. Patrick Twomey had been rector for 19 years when he retired in 2015.[11]

A five volume scrapbook, _History of All Saints Episcopal Church (Grace Church),_ was compiled by Ann P. Kloehn and Joyce Barlow Helien is in the possession of the church.[12]

People and Community

Nathan Pusey, who was a member while serving as President of Lawrence College from 1944–1953, was an active partisan in the movement that pushed All Saints into the “low church” column at a time when Wisconsin was predominately “high church.”[13](See folder 4, Correspondence, Nathan Pusey Presidential Papers, 1925-2005 | Lawrence University Archives)

All Saints is a worship community with activities including Sunday School, adult education, youth group, music ministry, pastoral care and a parish nursing program. Parish-organized outreach efforts see parishioners devote time and assistance to local charitable organizations including Emergency Shelter of the Fox Valley, Harbor House Domestic Abuse Shelter and Leaven. All Saints also holds several large in-gatherings each year to support these organizations. The Outreach Committee, based on determination of need, directs the in-gatherings.

With its central, downtown location, the building is used by community groups including Attic Theatre, events for Lawrence University and meetings of the Diocese of Fond du Lac.

[1] A. Parker Curtiss, “Appleton: All Saints' Church”, in _History of the Diocese of Fond du Lac and Its Several Congregations_. 1925. Retrieved 26 April 2008.

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title: All Saints Episcopal Church (Appleton, Wisconsin)

question: Summarize the original construction of All Saints Episcopal Church.

answer: The congregation first met in 1854 and organized in 1856. The first church building's cornerstone was laid by Bishop Kemper in 1864 and completed in 1866. The wooden structure cost $6,000 and was located at Appleton and Edwards streets. In 1883, the original building was moved to the current church site at College Avenue and Drew Street, adjacent to Lawrence University.

critique: The answer should mention the first service in the completed building.

critique: The second sentence is nonsensical. It should be transferred to the first sentence.

critique: The answer should mention the fire in 1949.

critique: The answer omits the 1905 church building.

text: The movement of the original building is irrelevant.

question: Summarize the construction of the current building of All Saints Episcopal Church.

answer: The current building was consecrated in 1905. The 1905 building was moved across the street while the current church building was constructed on the site. The current church building was designed by Shepley, Rutan & Coolidge. The church's Norman stone tower is modeled on the tower of Appleton-le-Street, Yorkshire. The building was officially rededicated in 1952.

critique: The church was not consecrated in 1905, but the current building was.

critique: The second sentence is unnecessary and confusing.

critique: The current building was not consecrated in 1905. The building was consecrated in 1905.

critique: The building was not consecrated in 1905.

text: The rededication is irrelevant.

question: Summarize the damages of the 1949 fire.

answer: The fire started in the basement and burned through the floor, causing the altar to fall into the basement and charring the rest of the interior of the church. The altar, reredos, organ, carved choir stalls, a Tiffany window, and the bishop's chair were destroyed. Vestments and other fabrics were smoke-damaged. The total loss was estimated at $75,000. The interior of the church dates from 1950, rebuilt after the fire by architectural firm Maurey Lee Allen.

critique: The answer should mention that the 1910 Reid Memorial Window was destroyed.

critique: The answer should mention the Reid Memorial Window.

critique: "The fire started in the basement and burned through the floor, causing the altar to fall into the basement and charring the rest of the interior of the church." This sentence is confusing and not needed. It can be removed to create room for more relevant details.

question: Summarize All Saints Episcopal Church's community programs.

answer: All Saints Episcopal Church has a Sunday School and adult education program, youth group, music ministry, pastoral care and a parish nursing program. The church supports local charitable organizations, and holds several large in-gatherings each year. The Outreach Committee directs the in-gatherings based on need. The building is used by community groups including Attic Theatre and meetings of the Diocese of Fond du Lac.

critique: The answer should mention that the church is located in Appleton.

critique: The church's outreach programs are not relevant to the question.

critique: The answer should mention the outreach efforts.

critique: Several of the elements are out of order.


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This one time my friend and I were at his lakehouse with some other friends. We had a fun evening playing video games and watching anime and browsing reddit.com. It was a good time. But then we decided to go to bed around 10:25 pm. So we went to our rooms and I was on the bottom floor in the room with my friend Ronnie. Above us on the 2nd story were Cliffton and Henry while the other guy Mickey just slept on the couch in the porch outside. I had known Ronnie since Grade 7 Elementary school so we were pretty close friends. I prepared myself to go to sleep so I grabbed my Kyubey doll and got into bed. I was about to fall asleep when a noise was dragging me from my peaceful slumber. My grip on the Kyubey doll tightened and I began to look around. But it was dark and I couldn't see good. The noise got louder and louder and then I realized where it was coming from. The bed next to mine. Ronnie erupted from underneath his covers, flailing about wildly.

"Wait Ronnie no the demon must be possessing you please halt" I contemplate as earlier in the day we had drawn some symbol things that were supposed to summon powerful demons from Heck and also Cliffton said his house was haunted.

But Ronnie wouldn't listen. Ice cream in hand from the chunky rocky road chocolate ice cream he had gotten from the freezer before he came downstairs and decided to share the bedroom with me (which had two twin beds! Don't want you to think we were sleeping in the same bed together), he plowed me over and over and over again despite my pleas in protest to stop. The demonic Ronnie was not satisfied yet though, as he tore off the head of my Kyubey doll and slurped down it's inner stuffing. This made me mad but I couldn't fight Ronnie in his current State as he was to powerful. Ronnie ran from room to room, plowing as he went, all of us powerless to face the Greater Demon that possessed him. I escaped outside to the woods with my ruined Kyubey doll, my face still fresh from the tears I wept at my Kyubey's death. But I refused to be deteared. I continued to room through the woods looking for any help. But then a growl shattered the piercing peaceful calm of the night in the woods. My pace doubled with greater speed. But the growling was not ceasing. In fact, it was growing more loud and echoed through the woods. I realize to late that the growling source was in fact my Kyubey doll, Ronnie had infected it!

"No! Kyubey! Not you too! You must fight it!" screech the words from my mouth as I drop the Kyubey doll in the lake by the woods in attempt to defeat the demon within. But then there is a reaction from the water and it soaks up all the water and grows triple in size. I now face a 37 foot monstrousity that used to be my very best plushie and prized possession. By this time though my friends Cliffton and Henry had escaped into the woods and found me too. So there we were, the three of us versus the greatest threat we had ever faced. Yet before the battle could begin, Ronnie comes charging in and attacks the monster Kyubey doll. The two do great battle and exchange many vicious blows as the three of us friends stand by in the woods in awe and shaking in out boots. But eventually the battle winds down, and Ronnie's demon proves to be the more ferocious of a beast. However he is very wounded and begins to approach me and Cliffton and Henry as we sit in the woods. Luckily the clock then strokes Midnight, the hour of ending the Demon's time on earth and saving our lives. We sigh with relief and plop down by each other in our spot in the woods beside the lake. It had been a long night so we excited the woods back to my friends lakehouse and went to bed because we were tired.

That night, I had nightmares. I was lucid dreaming because I had mastered it in the years past to help get over my fear of Clowns but it was still scary because demon Ronnie, Kyubey, and Pico were in it and chasing after me as I ran through the woods. I woke up and cried and reached to snuggle with my Kyubey doll but then remembered it's fate and cried some more.

We don't go to his lakehouse anymore. Rumor has it that he sold it and the other people who moved in were never seen from again. They say that on dark nights on the lake you can still hear the growling. And if you go out on the water... Well. I hope your boat can outrun a 37 foot Kyubey, or else you will face a fate worse than that any of mankind has ever experienced in it's history before. And as for the woods around his house and the lake, well, you don't even wanna know what happens there.

(PS: I also wrote 2 more parts so if you guys wanna see em just say so but i'll probably post them here soon anyways so it's whatever :D)

title: Wieners ga Daisuki

question: Summarize the acts of violence committed by Ronnie.

answer: Ronnie attacks the narrator and the narrator's friends. He also tears the head off the narrator's Kyubey doll.

critique: It is omitted that Ronnie also infects the doll.

critique: The answer should mention that Ronnie infects the Kyubey doll.

critique: The answer should mention that Ronnie also infects the Kyubey doll.

question: Summarize the activities that the narrator and his friends do at the lakehouse.

answer: The narrator and his friends were having fun playing video games and watching anime and browsing reddit.com. They also made some mojos that were supposed to summon powerful demons from Heck.

critique: It's omitted that they also went to bed.

critique: The mojos were not supposed to summon demons.

text: "They also made some mojos" - mojos is the incorrect term. They drew symbols.

question: Summarize the main source of tension.

answer: The main source of tension is the demon possessing Ronnie. The group of friends has been trying to summon demons, and Ronnie is the first to be possessed. The demon is powerful and Ronnie is able to attack the narrator's Kyubey doll, which was his prized possession. The demon is able to defeat the doll and the narrator is left with a ruined doll and a lot of fear.

question: What does the story say about friendship?

answer: The narrator and his friends were all friends since Grade 7. They were all close friends and had fun together. They were all together at the lakehouse and had fun playing video games and watching anime and browsing reddit.com. They all shared a bedroom and slept in the same bed. The narrator and his friends were all together when they were attacked by the possessed Ronnie.

critique: The answer should be more specific about the nature of the narrator's friendships.

critique: The answer should mention that the narrator and his friends are all friends because they are all friends with Ronnie.

critique: The highlighted content is irrelevant and can be removed.

critique: The part about the bedroom is not relevant to the question.

critique: The demon possession is not relevant at all.

critique: The answer should mention that the narrator and his friends are all friends because they are all friends.

text: "The narrator and his friends were all friends since Grade 7" - this is incorrect. The narrator and Ronnie were friends since Grade 7.


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The 407TH FORWARD SUPPORT BATTALION is part of the U.S. Army and based at Fort Bragg, North Carolina part of the 82nd Airborne Division. The battalion was formed during World War I and has fought in many conflicts and has helped countries damaged by disasters since.

History

World War I

Originally designated the 407th Supply Train (Motor), the unit was activated on 5 August 1917 at Camp Gordon, Georgia as the country was building up for World War I. The unit was part of the 82d Infantry Division, which was assigned to the American Expeditionary Force on the Western Front in France. The supply train served during the American offensive on the St. Mihiel Salient and during the severe fighting in the Argonne Forest.

After the Armistice, the unit was demobilized in 1919, and reorganized two years later in the organized reserves as the 82d Division Train, Quartermaster Corps. After several other changes in designation, the Supply Train finally received its present-day numerical designation as the 407th Quartermaster Regiment on 1 July 1936.

World War II

Following the attack on Pearl Harbor, the 82d, along with the 407th, was called to active duty on 25 March 1942 at Camp Claiborne, Louisiana. On 15 August of that same year, the 407th became the 407th Airborne Quartermaster Company. The 407th then supported the division in both Sicily and Italy.

When the division went into Normandy, the 407th arrived there with the glider forces and the seaborne forces. The 407th also participated in the glider assault into the Netherlands. For these two operations, the 407th is credited with two arrowheads (initial assault) on its battle streamers.

In the years after World War II, the 407th finally became a full battalion.

Post World War II

On 1 September 1957, the unit reorganized as the 407th Supply and Transportation Battalion. In this configuration, the 407th served in the Dominican Republic for Operation POWER PACK in Grenada for Operation URGENT FURY, in Panama for Operation Just Cause, and in Saudi Arabia and Iraq for Operations Desert Shield and Desert Storm and Operation Iraqi Freedom.

Post 1990

On 22 October 1993, the unit took its present-day form as the multi-functional 407th Forward Support Battalion. In this configuration, the unit provides all direct support logistical needs as part of the Division's 2d Brigade Task Force. During Operation Restore Democracy in Haiti, the 407th was ready to deploy with Task Force Falcon, only to be stood down at the last minute.

From January until September 2017, 407th Brigade Support Battalion (led by LTC Elizabeth H. Curtis) deployed to Kuwait and Iraq as a part of Task Force Falcon (led by COL J. Patrick Work) in support of Operation Inherent Resolve. They played a critical role in the advise and assist efforts that led to the liberation of Mosul on 20 July 2017.

The soldiers of the 407th perform many tasks: pumping fuel from a forward area refueler, transporting critical ammunition, issuing food and supplies, fixing damaged vehicles, maintaining the brigade's weapons systems, issuing repair parts, or treating and evacuating casualties from the drop zone.

Past commanders

-   Lieutenant Colonel Ann E. Dunwoody
-   Lieutenant Colonel Raymond Mason
-   Lieutenant Colonel Thomas Rogers
-   Lieutenant Colonel William Hughes
-   Lieutenant Colonel Jeffrey Douville
-   Lieutenant Colonel F.D. (SAM) Samonte
-   Lieutenant Colonel Robert (Bob) Cursio, Jr.
-   Lieutenant Colonel Terry Juskowiak
-   Lieutenant Colonel James Jennings
-   Lieutenant Colonel Matthew Shatzkin
-   Lieutenant Colonel Shawn Schuldt
-   Lieutenant Colonel Matthew Bresko
-   Lieutenant Colonel Elizabeth H. Curtis
-   Lieutenant Colonel Steven M. Dubuc
-   (Current) Lieutenant Colonel Charles M. Diggs

Coat of arms

The griffin (a composite of eagle and lion) symbolizes the coordinated campaign of the Allies. The five hills represent the liberation of the city of Nijmegen. The roundel, simulating a wheel, alludes to the Quartermaster and Transportation Corps. The parachute with its nine cords refers to the nine campaigns in which the parent unit participated during World Wars I and II. The colors commemorate the decorations awarded the 407th: red and green for the Belgian Fourragere, red for the Meritorious Unit Commendation and orange for the Netherlands Lanyard.

The two divisions of the shield are used to denote service during World Wars I and II. The fleurs-de-lis symbolize the original organization's action during World War I in Lorraine, Saint Mihiel and Meuse-Argone, France. The rampant lion, suggested by the coat of arms of Belgium and the Netherlands, alludes to the former organization's drive during World War II to stem the invading enemy; and the wavy bar alludes to the wavy bend on the arms of Rhineland signifying the sweep through that province during the same campaign. The engrailed border represents a parachute and symbolizes that unit's service with the 82d Airborne Division.

title: 407th Forward Support Battalion

question: Summarize the historical event that marked the beginning of the 407th Forward Support Battalion.

answer: The 407th Forward Support Battalion was activated on August 5, 1917 at Camp Gordon, Georgia. It was part of the 82nd Infantry Division, which was assigned to the American Expeditionary Force on the Western Front in France. The Supply Train served during the American offensive on the St. Mihiel Salient and during the severe fighting in the Argonne Forest. After the Armistice, the unit was demobilized in 1919, and reorganized two years later in the organized reserves as the 82d Division Train, Quartermaster Corps. After several other changes in designation, the Supply Train finally received its present-day numerical designation as the 407th Quartermaster Regiment on July 1, 1936.

critique: The answer is a summary of the history of the 407th Forward Support Battalion, not the beginning of the battalion.

critique: The answer should mention the 407th's role in World War II.

critique: The Supply Train was part of the 82nd Infantry Division, not the 82nd Division Train.

critique: The answer should be more specific about the events that took place during World War I.

critique: The answer is a summary of the battalion's history, not the beginning of the battalion.

critique: The unit was activated during the build up to World War I, but such a date is not mentioned.

question: Describe what might have happened if the 407th Forward Support Battalion had not been active in World War II.

answer: The 407th Forward Support Battalion would not have been as successful in the operation to liberate Mosul. In addition, they would not have earned their place as a prominent part of the 82nd Airborne Division.

critique: The answer is incorrect because the Battalion was created in 1917, which means they were active in World War II.

critique: The answer is not related to the question.

critique: Not irrelevant but would be more accurate after saying what it would mean for the 82nd Airborne Division: The 407th as a prominent part of the 82nd Airborne Division.

critique: "The 407th Forward Support Battalion would not have been as successful in the operation to liberate Mosul." - this is incorrect. The liberation of Mosul happened in 2017 and the 407th Forward Support Battalion has been active since 1942.

text: The response is irrelevant, as Mosul has nothing to do with WW II and the question was hypothetical.


text:
Media Contact: Beth McGroarty
[email protected] • +1.213.300.0107

_CALL TO ACTION TO ERADICATE CHRONIC, PREVENTABLE DISEASE UNITES HEALTH AND WELLNESS INDUSTRIES; WELLNESS MOONSHOT GAINED IMMEDIATE SUPPORT OF HEALTH AND WELLNESS LEADERS, INCLUDING DR. RICHARD H. CARMONA, 17TH SURGEON GENERAL OF THE UNITED STATES_

PALM BEACH, FL – OCTOBER 9, 2017 – Lifestyle related diseases and the continuously skyrocketing cost of healthcare are creating a global crisis that is affecting us both physically and mentally. The stark reality is that roughly 70% of all deaths each year are a result of preventable diseases (CDC), while the global cost of largely preventable chronic disease could reach $47 trillion by 2030, according to the World Economic Forum.

On the opening day of the 2017 Global Wellness Summit, health and wellness leaders united behind the first global commitment to achieve a world free of preventable disease, a moonshot that is arguably as urgent as it is massive in scope.

“The time has come to pool our resources—knowledge, access, funding—and use our collective megaphone on the world stage to work towards achieving a world free of preventable disease,” said Susie Ellis, Chairman and CEO of the non-profit Global Wellness Institute (GWI). “Unlike President Kennedy’s famous moonshot to send a man to the moon, where it was clear when the ‘mission was accomplished’ – this moonshot will require not one, but many incremental steps forward for humankind.”

Ellis was joined by Dr. Richard H. Carmona, 17th Surgeon General of the United States and current Chief of Health Innovation, Canyon Ranch, in announcing the Wellness Moonshot, which received an enthusiastic response from the 600+ delegates, representing health and wellness across a sea of sectors including fitness, mental wellness and mind-body, nutrition, workplace wellness, technology, complementary medicine, integrative medicine, architecture and real estate, and spa and tourism.

“The world is increasingly plagued by largely preventable chronic diseases, and the crippling economic burden that comes with them. This call to action is absolutely critical, refocusing on humankind’s most pressing need,” said Dr. Carmona. “The Global Wellness Institute is the right organization to launch this moonshot, as it can only be achieved with high-level collaboration in the many health and wellness sectors.”

Dr. Mehmet C. Oz, Professor of Surgery, Columbia University, and host of _The Dr. Oz Show,_ reminded delegates, “We have to be brave enough to take on this moonshot – we need to really accelerate (the focus on prevention).” And Dr. Dean Ornish, Founder and President, Preventive Medicine Research Institute, said, “I salute this moonshot and project. It is a much needed, organized way to create transformation…it’s the right idea at the right time.”

As an umbrella organization that brings together often siloed forces and sectors all working to build a healthier world, the GWI will bring the issue of preventable disease to the forefront in its research and education efforts and commitment to forge even more collaborations to create new paths for action. The organization’s initial focus will be on information campaigns to bring global attention to the Wellness Moonshot: from which prevention initiatives are most needed, and where – to educating the world about high-impact global projects that are tackling preventable disease, to drive new interest and resources to them. In addition, Ellis noted that GWI would catalyze stakeholders from both the private and public sectors to coordinate, collaborate and commit to the Wellness Moonshot.

For more information, contact Beth McGroarty: [email protected] or (+1) 213-300-0107.

ABOUT THE GLOBAL WELLNESS INSTITUTE: The Global Wellness Institute (GWI), a non-profit 501(c)(3), is considered the leading global research and educational resource for the global wellness industry, and is known for introducing major industry initiatives and regional events that bring together leaders to chart the future. GWI positively impacts global health and wellness by advocating for both public institutions and businesses that are working to help prevent disease, reduce stress, and enhance overall quality of life. Its mission is to empower wellness worldwide. www.globalwellnessinstitute.org

question: What does the text say about how one becomes a Surgeon General in the United States?

answer: No answer

critique: It is not relevant to the question of the article.

critique: The passage does not discuss how one becomes a Surgeon General in the United States.

critique: No answer is given, but it is possible to make an educated guess.

critique: The answer is not correct. It just means that the text doesn't know.

critique: There is no information in the text about how one becomes Surgeon General.

critique: No response means the response is correct, so the response is wrong.

critique: While there is no direct answer, I'd guess that they are either appointed by the President, a medical doctor, or both.

critique: No answer is given, but the text does mention that Dr. Richard H. Carmona is the 17th Surgeon General of the United States.

critique: There is no information about how one becomes a Surgeon General.

critique: The answer is not relevant to the question.

critique: The first line is a sentence fragment. The second line can be a complete sentence.

question: What does the text say about chronic and preventable diseases?

answer: Not enough data.

critique: Response mentions data is insufficient, but one can answer the question with what data is present.

critique: The question is not asking for a summary of the text, but rather what it says about chronic and preventable diseases.

critique: The response misses to mention that 70% of all deaths each year are a result of preventable diseases.

critique: The information about the number of deaths caused by preventable diseases is not given.

critique: The article does not detail the effects of chronic and preventable diseases.

critique: The text clearly states that 70% of all deaths are caused by preventable diseases.

critique: The answer is wrong and needs to be completely rewritten. There is a lot of information about chronic and preventable diseases in the text.

critique: It's omitted that the cost of chronic and preventable diseases could reach $47 trillion by 2030.

critique: There is data that can be used to answer the question.

question: What does the text say about the Global Wellness Institute?

answer: The Global Wellness Institute (GWI) council is considered the leading global research and educational resource for the global wellness industry. In addition, they are known for introducing major industry initiatives and regional events that bring leaders together to chart global wellness. GWI advocates for public institutions and businesses that are working to help prevent disease, reduce stress, and enhance the overall quality of life. Their mission is to empower wellness worldwide.

critique: This answer contains irrelevant information.

critique: The Global Wellness Institute is not a private company. The text specifically states it is a non-profit 501(c)(3).

critique: "In addition, they are known for introducing major industry initiatives and regional events that bring leaders together to chart global wellness." This is irrelevant and should be removed.

critique: "In addition, they are known for introducing major industry initiatives and regional events that bring leaders together to chart global wellness." - this was not part of the Global Wellness Institute's description.

critique: The Global Wellness Institute council is not mentioned in the article.

critique: The Global Wellness Institute is not a council.

critique: During the summit, Bloomberg described GWI as an umbrella organization bringing together often siloed forces and sectors all working to build a healthier world. Include that GWI is an umbrella organization in the answer.

critique: "The Global Wellness Institute (GWI) council is considered the leading global research and educational resource for the global wellness industry." - this is incorrect. The Global Wellness Institute is a non-profit 501(c)(3), not a council.

critique: These incorrectly used words do not correlate with the proper definition of them.

critique: "The Global Wellness Institute (GWI) council is considered the leading global research and educational resource for the global wellness industry." - this is incorrect. The Global Wellness Institute is led by a chairman, CEO, and the council is not mentioned.

text: "they are known for introducing major industry initiatives and regional events that bring leaders together to chart global wellness;" they chart the future of global wellness

refinement: The Global Wellness Institute (GWI) council is considered the leading global research and educational resource for the global wellness industry. In addition, they are known for introducing major industry initiatives and regional events that bring leaders together to chart global wellness. GWI advocates for public institutions and businesses that are working to help prevent disease, reduce stress, and enhance the overall quality of life. Their mission is to empower wellness worldwide.

question: What does the text say about the Wellness Moonshot?

answer: On the opening day of the 2017 Global Wellness Summit, healthcare leaders united behind the first global commitment to achieve a world free of preventable diseases. It was announced as the Wellness Moonshot, which received an enthusiastic response from the 600+ delegates.

critique: It's omitted that the goal is to achieve a world free of prevention diseases.

critique: The purpose of the Wellness Moonshot is to eliminate all diseases that are preventable.

critique: The Wellness Moonshot is a commitment to achieve a world free of preventable diseases.

critique: The Wellness Moonshot is a commitment to achieve a world free of preventable disease.

critique: The name of the project is not a significant detail.

critique: The Wellness Moonshot is not just for healthcare leaders and delegates, but for all the health and wellness sectors.

critique: The Wellness Moonshot is not a commitment, but a call to action.

critique: The details about the event aren't necessary to include.

critique: Doesn't really clarify what the Wellness Moonshot is.

critique: The response should include more detail of the Wellness Moonshot, like what it is and what it involves.

critique: The Wellness Moonshot is not just a commitment, but a project to be achieved.

critique: Doesn't mention the goal of eradicating preventable diseases.

critique: The response could further explain the Wellness Moonshot.

critique: The response is missing the details of the Wellness Moonshot.


text:
"They're made out of meat."
"Meat?"
"Meat. They're made out of meat."
"Meat?"
"There's no doubt about it. We picked up several from different parts of the planet, took them aboard our recon vessels, and probed them all the way through. They're completely meat."
"That's impossible. What about the radio signals? The messages to the stars?"
"They use the radio waves to talk, but the signals don't come from them. The signals come from machines."
"So who made the machines? That's who we want to contact."
"They made the machines. That's what I'm trying to tell you. Meat made the machines."
"That's ridiculous. How can meat make a machine? You're asking me to believe in sentient meat."
"I'm not asking you, I'm telling you. These creatures are the only sentient race in that sector and they're made out of meat."
"Maybe they're like the orfolei. You know, a carbon-based intelligence that goes through a meat stage."
"Nope. They're born meat and they die meat. We studied them for several of their life spans, which didn't take long. Do you have any idea what's the life span of meat?"
"Spare me. Okay, maybe they're only part meat. You know, like the weddilei. A meat head with an electron plasma brain inside."
"Nope. We thought of that, since they do have meat heads, like the weddilei. But I told you, we probed them. They're meat all the way through."
"No brain?"
"Oh, there's a brain all right. It's just that the brain is made out of meat! That's what I've been trying to tell you."
"So ... what does the thinking?"
"You're not understanding, are you? You're refusing to deal with what I'm telling you. The brain does the thinking. The meat."
"Thinking meat! You're asking me to believe in thinking meat!"
"Yes, thinking meat! Conscious meat! Loving meat. Dreaming meat. The meat is the whole deal! Are you beginning to get the picture or do I have to start all over?"
"Omigod. You're serious then. They're made out of meat."
"Thank you. Finally. Yes. They are indeed made out of meat. And they've been trying to get in touch with us for almost a hundred of their years."
"Omigod. So what does this meat have in mind?"
"First it wants to talk to us. Then I imagine it wants to explore the Universe, contact other sentiences, swap ideas and information. The usual."
"We're supposed to talk to meat."
"That's the idea. That's the message they're sending out by radio. 'Hello. Anyone out there. Anybody home.' That sort of thing."
"They actually do talk, then. They use words, ideas, concepts?" "Oh, yes. Except they do it with meat."
"I thought you just told me they used radio."
"They do, but what do you think is on the radio? Meat sounds. You know how when you slap or flap meat, it makes a noise? They talk by flapping their meat at each other. They can even sing by squirting air through their meat."
"Omigod. Singing meat. This is altogether too much. So what do you advise?"
"Officially or unofficially?"
"Both."
"Officially, we are required to contact, welcome and log in any and all sentient races or multibeings in this quadrant of the Universe, without prejudice, fear or favor. Unofficially, I advise that we erase the records and forget the whole thing."
"I was hoping you would say that."
"It seems harsh, but there is a limit. Do we really want to make contact with meat?"
"I agree one hundred percent. What's there to say? 'Hello, meat. How's it going?' But will this work? How many planets are we dealing with here?"
"Just one. They can travel to other planets in special meat containers, but they can't live on them. And being meat, they can only travel through C space. Which limits them to the speed of light and makes the possibility of their ever making contact pretty slim. Infinitesimal, in fact."
"So we just pretend there's no one home in the Universe."
"That's it."
"Cruel. But you said it yourself, who wants to meet meat? And the ones who have been aboard our vessels, the ones you probed? You're sure they won't remember?"
"They'll be considered crackpots if they do. We went into their heads and smoothed out their meat so that we're just a dream to them."
"A dream to meat! How strangely appropriate, that we should be meat's dream."
"And we marked the entire sector unoccupied."
"Good. Agreed, officially and unofficially. Case closed. Any others? Anyone interesting on that side of the galaxy?"
"Yes, a rather shy but sweet hydrogen core cluster intelligence in a class nine star in G445 zone. Was in contact two galactic rotations ago, wants to be friendly again."
"They always come around."
"And why not? Imagine how unbearably, how unutterably cold the Universe would be if one were all alone ..."

title: Not my story. Can't remember where I found it.

question: Summarize the plot twist in the story.

answer: The author of the novella seems to be in space with a "sapper" team who is scanning for life. The solo characters discuss their mission. They then reach out to another form of life, who responds. Initially, the solos think they are aliens, but through their own investigations they are revealed to be aliens made of flesh and blood. The other life form the sappers message, the "meat", seems passive. They start the conversation by sending messages into space, and proceed to try to contact other life forms who also seem fascinated by flesh. Though the meat speaks through radio communication, the signal is not coming from the meat. They also use their meat to make noises, which the sappers think is singing. The slicers start to dream of soft voices and flesh made of music, then realize that the messages are from flesh. They are shocked to learn that the meat is trying to communicate, and even more shocked to learn their messaging response can be anything other than violence.

critique: The answer includes a lot of irrelevant details.

critique: Several of the final lines from the first paragraph that are not correctly summed are edited, and a complete sentence is added for the final one for clarity.

critique: The first step of the mission is irrelevant

critique: The last two sentences are not relevant to the plot twist.

critique: "The author of the novella seems to be in space with a 'sapper' team who is scanning for life." This is not stated in the story.

critique: Remove the portion after "direction of space" as the author isn't in space, the solos are.

critique: The meat they are talking to is just one planet and they are trying to make contact with the whole galaxy.

critique: "They then reach out to another form of life, who responds. Initially, the solos think they are aliens, but through their own investigations they are revealed to be aliens made of flesh and blood. The other life form the sappers message, the "meat", seems passive. They start the conversation by sending messages into space, and proceed to try to contact other life forms who also seem fascinated by flesh. Though the meat speaks through radio communication, the signal is not coming from the meat. They also use their meat to make noises, which the sappers think is singing. The slicers start to dream of soft voices and flesh made of music, then realize that the messages are from flesh. They are shocked to learn that the meat is trying to communicate, and even more shocked to learn their messaging response can be anything other than violence." - is not relevant to the plot twist.

critique: The second half of the story should be omitted.

critique: The last two sentences are unnecessary and confusing.

critique: Add a period to the last sentence for clarity.

critique: "The sappers" - this has never been used in the story

text: This answer is incorrect; the plot twist is that the protagonists decide to ignore the message from the meat species and continue surveying the universe for other life forms.

refinement: The author of the novella seems to be in space with a "sapper" team who is scanning for life. The solo characters discuss their mission. They then reach out to another form of life, who responds. Initially, the solos think they are aliens, but through their own investigations they are revealed to be aliens made of flesh and blood. The other life form the sappers message, the "meat", seems passive. They start the conversation by sending messages into space, and proceed to try to contact other life forms who also seem fascinated by flesh. Though the meat speaks through radio communication, the signal is not coming from the meat. They also use their meat to make noises, which the sappers think is singing. The slicers start to dream of soft voices and flesh made of music, then realize that the messages are from flesh. They are shocked to learn that the meat is trying to communicate, and even more shocked to learn their messaging response can be anything other than violence.

question: What does the story say about life on other planets?

answer: No answer

critique: What's here doesn't answer the question .

critique: The text does mention life on other planets.

critique: There are too few details to determine if there is life on other planets.

critique: The story does mention life on other planets.

question: Summarize the meat race described in the story.

answer: The meat race has no clue what life is like without meat and are completely without a body structure we understand in terms of biology. They travel through space in metal containers and use radio signals to communicate. Their brains are made up of meat. They can't travel to other planets, only move through space at the speed of light.

critique: This should be repeated in the first sentence

critique: There is no evidence to suggest that the meat race has no clue what life is like without meat.

critique: "They travel through space in metal containers and use radio signals to communicate. Their brains are made up of meat. They can't travel to other planets, only move through space at the speed of light." - the meat race doesn't travel through space in metal containers. They are born meat and travel in space through meat containers. Also, the meat race doesn't use radio signals to communicate.

critique: The meat race is not without a body structure we understand in terms of biology.

critique: The last sentence is inaccurate. The meat race can travel to other planets in special meat containers, but they can't live on them.

critique: Doesn't say that the race is unable to travel to other planets, only that they use metal containers to travel through space.

critique: "They use radio waves to talk, but the signals don't come from them. The signals come from machines." is evidence that the radio waves are communication from machines.

critique: '...they can only travel through C space.' is evidence they can travel through space, but only at the speed of light.

critique: The meat race can travel to other planets in special meat containers.

critique: "They travel through space in metal containers and use radio signals to communicate." - this should include the fact that the radio signals are from machines.

critique: This response is off topic and needs more editing.

critique: It is omitted that the meat race is trying to get in touch with the narrator's race.

question: Summarize the species discussing humans.

answer: No answer

critique: A lack of answer is not an acceptable answer.

critique: The question is to summarize the species discussing humans.

critique: The narrator is not a human and does not have a personal perspective on the topic. Respond to the question as it applies to the species discussing humans.

critique: There is nothing to summarize since the species is human.

text: The species discussing humans is a form of life that is not made up of "meat" or similar organic material. T

refinement: No answer


text:
NASRAT ZAKI AL JAMAL (; born 1 July 1980) is a Lebanese former professional footballer who played as an attacking midfielder.

Club career

Al Jamal began his career at Lebanese Premier League side Tadamon Sour during the 1998–99 season, with whom he stayed until the 2003–04 season.[1] He helped his side win their first Lebanese FA Cup in 2000–01.[2]

In 2004 Al Jamal joined Ansar; he suffered an injury in November 2004, having to undergo surgery.[3] Despite his injury, Al Jamal scored two goals in the league during the 2004–05 season.[4] The following two seasons (2005–06 and 2006–07), Al Jamal helped Ansar win two domestic doubles (league and cup) in a row, as well as another cup in 2009–10.[5]

On 27 May 2010, Al Jamal moved to Iraqi side Duhok on a three-month loan;[6] he helped the Iraqi side win the 2009–10 Iraqi Premier League.[7] He stayed at Duhok for another season (2010–11),[8] before returning to Ansar in 2011. During his second spell at Ansar, Al Jamal won a league title (2011–12) and a Lebanese Super Cup (2012).[9]

In 2014 Al Jamal mvoed to Chabab Ghazieh, before joining Lebanese Third Division side Abbasiyah on 14 January 2015.[10] In 2016 he moved back to Tadamon Sour, where he retired in 2018.[11]

International career

Al Jamal made his senior international debut for Lebanon in 1999, in a friendly against Malta; the match ended 0–0.[12] Al Jamal was part of Lebanon's 2000 AFC Asian Cup squad, but didn't play.[13] His first international goal came on 9 September 2003, in a friendly against Bahrain.[14] Al Jamal ended his international career with 30 caps and three goals.[15]

Career statistics

International

    _Scores and results list Lebanon's goal tally first, score column indicates score after each Al Jamal goal_.

  No.   Date                Venue                                   Opponent   Score   Result   Competition
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  1     19 September 2003   Bahrain                                            3–4     3–4      Friendly
  2     8 February 2004     Beirut, Lebanon                                    2–1     2–1      Friendly
  3                         Rasmee Dhandu Stadium, Malé, Maldives              2–1     2–1      2011 AFC Asian Cup qualification

  : List of international goals scored by Nasrat Al Jamal[16]

Honours and achievements

Club

TADAMON SOUR

-   Lebanese FA Cup: 2000–01

ANSAR

-   Lebanese Premier League: 2005–06, 2006–07
-   Lebanese FA Cup: 2005–06, 2006–07, 2009–10, 2011–12
-   Lebanese Super Cup: 2012

DUHOK

-   Iraqi Premier League: 2009–10

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title: Nasrat Al Jamal

question: Why did Al Jamal spend so much of his professional career in the Lebanese league?

answer: He was born in Lebanon and probably wanted to play for his home country.

critique: The answer is not supported by the text.

critique: Al Jamal was born in Lebanon, but he spent most of his career in the Lebanese league because he was a professional footballer.

critique: The article doesn't mention why Al Jamal spent so much of his career in the Lebanese league.

critique: "He was born in Lebanon and probably wanted to play for his home country." - this is incorrect. Al Jamal was born in Lebanon, but he was also a professional footballer who played for Tadamon Sour, Ansar, Duhok, and Chabab Ghazieh. He also played for the Lebanese national team.

critique: "He was born in Lebanon and probably wanted to play for his home country" - this is a baseless assumption and can be deleted.

critique: While Al Jamal was born in Lebanon, it is not stated that he wanted to play for his home country.

question: Al Jamal score three goals in 30 games for his country. Why was his goal-appearance ratio so low?

answer: He was injured often.

critique: "He was injured often." - this isn't an accurate reason for why Al Jamal's goal-appearance ratio was low. The answer should be rewritten.

critique: The answer is not related to the question.

critique: The answer is not supported by the text.

critique: "He was injured often." - is inaccurate because Al Jamal was never injured often.