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You may not be of much help when it comes to sharpening your son's calculus skills. But during my 35-plus years of clinical practice it's become clear to me that parents can play a huge role in helping their children to develop a critical life skill: the ability to take notice of their thoughts, to step back and view the bigger picture, and to decide how to act based on that more realistic perspective.

Taking heed of an alarmist or pessimistic inner voice is a universal experience. It has survival value; it often protects people from danger. And it's often true that a worrying thought can act as a motivating force – to study, for example.

Still, the insecurities that adolescents feel as they undergo the multiple transitions necessary in growing up make them especially vulnerable to believing the worst. This tendency can lead to chronic anxiety, depression and anger, and can interfere with relationships and success in school.

Helping children grasp the importance of thinking more realistically may help protect them later when they make the huge transition to college. A 2016 survey by the American College Health Association of undergraduates at over 50 colleges and universities found that about 38 percent had felt so depressed at some time during the previous year that it was tough to function. Some 60 percent had experienced an episode of debilitating anxiety.

The power of thoughts to affect feelings and behavior is a foundational principle of cognitive behavioral therapy, which is the form of therapy that I practice. CBT teaches people how to recognize faulty negative self-talk, to notice how it makes them feel and act, and to challenge it. Parents can practice this skill themselves, and act as models as they guide their kids to question a thought by looking at the evidence for and against it.

If your child often seems withdrawn, sad or angry, you may be able to identify a problematic thinking pattern by listening closely. Here are four key styles of negative self-talk to listen for:

CATASTROPHIZING. One common thought habit is the tendency to jump to the worst-case scenario ("What if I fail the test? I'm never going to get into college!") Scanning constantly for disaster ahead acts as a huge contributor to anxiety. And catastrophizing often leads teens to avoid people or become reluctant to try new things.

ZOOMING IN ON THE NEGATIVE. Ruminating on a disappointment without taking into account the many positive and neutral aspects of one's experience is often associated with sadness and depression. A missed soccer goal might overshadow everything else that happens one day – the lunch with friends, the good grade on a test, the hilarious TV show – and consume your high-schooler for days.

IT'S NOT FAIR! Interpreting every letdown as a grave injustice – the "it's not fair!" habit – often underlies teens' anger and can harm friendships and family relationships.

I CAN'T! Reacting habitually to difficult situations or to new opportunities with "I can't," rather than "I can try," leads to helplessness. Changing the thought to "I can try!" encourages problem-solving and a willingness to be proactive, to take positive action — both keys to being successful and resilient.

For parents, the idea is not to squelch the negative thought. Research has found that attempted "thought stopping" can actually make the idea stickier. Rather, you want your child to face the thought, thoroughly examine it and replace it with a more realistic and helpful perspective.

Questions that you might pose to carefully weigh the evidence include: "You had a group of friends at your old school and at camp – realistically, what are the chances you can't make friends now? What actions can you take to reach out? What would you say to somebody else who worries about this?"

A helpful replacement thought might be: "It probably will take a few weeks to get to know people, but I've made friends before and there are things I can try. I can sign up for the photography or robotics club and meet people that way."

More realistic and balanced thinking leads to positive action, which, in turn, tends to bolster confidence, enhance self-esteem and result in greater happiness.

_Mary K. Alvord, Ph.D., is a psychologist and director of Alvord, Baker & Associates, LLC, in Rockville, Md. She is the co-author of_ Conquer Negative Thinking for Teens: A Workbook to Break the Nine Thought Habits That Are Holding You Back_, as well as the audio recording_ Relaxation and Self-Regulation Techniques for Children and Teens_._

Copyright 2017 NPR. To see more, visit http://www.npr.org/.[]

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answer: The main through-line of this article is the power of thoughts to affect feelings and behavior.

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LEWELLYN FARR CHRISTENSEN[1] (May 6, 1909 – October 9, 1984)[2] was a ballet dancer, choreographer and director for many companies. He was largely associated with George Balanchine and the San Francisco Ballet, which he directed from 1952–1984. Other companies Christensen was a part of include Ballet Caravan, directed by Lincoln Kirstein, and Ballet Society, directed by Kirstein and Balanchine.[3]

Early life and training

Christensen was born in Brigham City, Utah, to a family with roots in dance and music. His grandfather, Lars Christensen, who emigrated from Denmark, taught folk and social dances.[4] Christensen was raised a Mormon, and this upbringing informed his latter career with of a sense of focusing on propriety.[5]

Christensen began studying dance with his uncles and music with his father when he was ten. He was taught early ballet technique by Stefano Mascagno, an Italian teacher. His brother Willam started Lew and their third dancing brother, Harold, in vaudeville. In addition to small vaudeville shows, the three brothers landed jobs in the Broadway musical _The Great Waltz_, during which time Christensen became a student at Balanchine's new School of American Ballet. In 1935, he joined the Metropolitan Opera's American Ballet Ensemble with Harold.[6]

Dancing with Balanchine

As soon as Christensen began his training, he received special attention from George Balanchine, who recognized his talent. Among Balanchine’s first lead male dancers, Christensen danced principal roles, receiving much praise for his lead roles in _Orpheus and Eurydice_ and _Apollon Musagète_.[7] Christensen, the first American to dance Apollo, set a new standard for that role, and was thereafter considered to be America's first home grown significant male dancer.[8]

At the onset of World War II, Lew Christensen was drafted into the United States Army. On return to New York in 1946 he joined Balanchine's and Kirstein's latest project, Ballet Society – later to be known as the New York City Ballet – where he became a ballet master. Although considered by many to be the logical heir to Balanchine's company, Christensen was instead enticed to join his brothers at the San Francisco Ballet in 1948.[9]

Ballet Caravan

Ballet Caravan, begun in 1936 by Kirstein, was intended to provide American ballet dancers with summer employment during off-seasons.[10] As a member, Christensen was a lead soloist, choreographer, and ballet master until 1940.

Between 1936 and 1941 ballets Christensen choreographed included _Pocahontas_ (1936), _Filling Station_ (1938), _Charade_ (1939), and _Pastorela_ (1941). _Filling Station_ incorporated Christensen's vaudeville roots, acrobats, deadpan humor, and tap dancing.

With Ballet Caravan, Christensen and his wife Gisella Caccialanza toured South America in 1941.[11]

San Francisco Ballet

Christensen served as associate director of the San Francisco Ballet in 1949, and was co-director in 1951 with his brother Willam. He served as director from 1952–1984.

Christensen transformed the San Francisco Ballet to an internationally recognized neoclassical company.[12] Although he joined the San Francisco Ballet in 1949, Christensen continued to act as ballet master for the New York City Ballet until 1950. After becoming co-director of the San Francisco company in 1951, he kept a good relationship between it and the New York City Ballet. In 1952, on his brother Willam's departure to establish the ballet program at the University of Utah, Lew became the director of the company. He choreographed over 110 works for the San Francisco Ballet. He brought impressive choreography from Balanchine to the company. With Christensen as director, San Francisco Ballet made its first tours nationally and internationally and received much acclaim.[13]

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[3] Sowell, Debra. “Christensen Brothers.” _International Encyclopedia of Dance_. Vol. 2. ed. Selma Jeanne Cohen. 1998. 160–162.

[4] Sowell, Debra. “Christensen Brothers.” _International Encyclopedia of Dance._ Vol. 2. ed. Selma Jeanne Cohen. 1998. 160.

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[6] Sowell, Debra. “Christensen Brothers.” _International Encyclopedia of Dance._ Vol. 2. ed. Selma Jeanne Cohen. 1998. 160–162.

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[8] Sowell, Debra. “Christensen, Lew.” _International Dictionary of Ballet_. Vol. 1. ed. Martha Bremser. 1993. 277.

[9] Sowell, Debra. “Christensen, Lew.” _International Dictionary of Ballet._ Vol. 1. ed. Martha Bremser. 1993. 274–277.

[10] “Christensen Brothers.” _San Francisco Ballet._ 2008. San Francisco Ballet. Mar. 24, 2008 <http://www.sfballet.org/about/history/christensenbrothers.asp>.

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[12] “Christensen Brothers.” _San Francisco Ballet._ 2008. San Francisco Ballet. Mar. 24, 2008 1

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title: Lew Christensen

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answer: Christensen was largely associated with George Balanchine and the San Francisco Ballet, which he directed from 1952-1984. Christensen began his training with Balanchine, who recognized his talent. Christensen was considered the logical heir to Balanchine's company, but Christensen was instead enticed to join his brothers at the San Francisco Ballet in 1948. Christensen served as associate director of the San Francisco Ballet in 1949 and was co-director in 1951. He served as director from 1952-1984.

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answer: Christensen was raised as a Mormon and was taught early ballet technique by his uncles. His first home-grown significant male dancer was his brother, William, who was also a dancer. Their third brother, Harold, was a vaudeville actor.

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_By Roger Smith_

In the 1986 movie _Star Trek IV: The Voyage Home_, Scotty, the technology expert in the time-traveling starship's crew, is invited to use an Apple Macintosh, the most usable computer of the 1980s.

Puzzled, he picks up the mouse and speaks into it: "Hello, computer?"

"Just use the keyboard,” advises the computer owner. "A keyboard?" Scotty replies. "How quaint."

Nowadays, people routinely talk to the computer in their mobile phone and it talks back to them in the guise of a Microsoft Cortana, Apple Siri, or Google Now personal assistant. Software developers mainly use the Java programming language to write a single set of computer programs (or source code) that can run on all these different platforms.

Java is used for building everything from mobile phone apps to video games to enterprise IT applications. The WORA (write once, run anywhere) mantra that coders associated with the language means that it's designed to be portable and run across multiple software platforms.

There's quite a bit that goes on under the covers allowing this to happen. Once a Java developer writes a program, he or she uses different software tools, such as those found in the Java Development Kit or those supplied as part of the developer’s IDE (Integrated Development Environment), to compile that source code into a special kind of machine language known as bytecodes, which can run software known as the Java Virtual Machine or JVM.

Java got its start in the early 1990s when James Gosling from Sun Microsystems and a small team of developers known as the Green Team designed the first version of Java aimed at programming home appliances, which at the time were controlled by a wide variety of computer processors. This was the genesis of the WORA concept. In 1994, Gosling realized that such a language would be ideal for use with web browsers, which led to the 1995 release of a version of the Netscape browser that was capable of running Java programs.

BIG PLAYER IN BIG DATA

Twenty years later, Java is everywhere, including in games, smart cards, embedded systems, and robotics, and has been used to build millions of mobile, desktop, web, standalone, and enterprise applications. The language is the big player in big data, the computer technology used to computationally analyze extremely large data sets that reveal patterns, trends, and associations, especially those relating to human behavior and interactions.

.NET (pronounced dot net) is a cross-platform software environment that competes with Java.  .NET was developed in the late 1990s by Microsoft and uses its own Common Language Runtime (CLR) virtual machine. But .NET never captured developer mindshare the way that Java has. Fifteen long years after first being introduced, .NET still runs primarily on Microsoft Windows.

One of the main reasons for Java's popularity is the Java Community Process (JCP), which is the mechanism for developing standard technical specifications for Java technology. The JCP allows any Java developer to review and provide feedback for hundreds of different Java specification requests, as well as participate as a member of a Java Expert Group. Organizations and commercial entities have to pay annual membership dues to JCP, but individuals can join for free.

Thanks to the JCP, the Java language has been extensively revised to address all kinds of different programming problems.

JAVA'S EVOLUTION

At the recent JavaOne 2015 keynote, Mark Reinhold, chief architect of Oracle's Java Platform Group, explained how Java has evolved over the years by tackling pain points that Java developers complain about through the JCP. "In Java 5, we introduced new features like generics; in Java 8, we introduced lambda expressions; and in our next Java 9 release, due in 2016, we'll be introducing modularity to create a scalable and more secure platform."

He also mentioned projects currently in the works for future releases beyond Java 9, such as Valhalla and Panama, which will provide more efficient access to data and better control over data layout in computer memory to achieve higher performance, which are current pain points that big data developers face.

To illustrate the commitment to collaboration among this community, conference organizers are now seeking feedback from community members on where Java should go next, including in the Java’s Twenty Years of Innovation interactive display at the Parc 55 hotel in San Francisco. The display allows developers to attach sticky notes to request features and offer suggestions on what the future of Java will be. As _Star Trek_’s Scotty might have said, “Paper-form communications. How quaint.”

_Roger Smith is a veteran journalist specializing in enterprise technology._

Find more about Java on Oracle.com:

-   JavaOne 2015: Video On Demand
-   JavaOne4Kids
-   Preview Java Magazine

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answer: Virtual assistants are software programs that can talk back to users. Software developers mainly use Java to write a single set of computer programs (source code) that can run on all platforms. Java is used for building everything from mobile phone apps to video games to enterprise IT applications. Java got its start in the early 1990s when James Gosling from Sun Microsystems designed the first version of Java aimed at programming home appliances, which at the time were controlled by a wide variety of computer processors.

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_THE WOMAN I LOVE_ (also known as _ESCADRILLE_ and _THE WOMAN BETWEEN_) is a 1937 American film about a romantic triangle involving two World War I fighter pilots and the wife of one of them. It stars Paul Muni, Miriam Hopkins, and Louis Hayward. Anatole Litvak's Hollywood directorial debut was a remake of his French film _L'Equipage_, which was, in turn, based on Joseph Kessel's novel of the same name.[1]

Plot

In World War I, French fighter pilot Lt. Claude Maury (Paul Muni) gains a bad reputation in his squadron, flying off on “lone wolf” missions. More importantly, Maury continually returns to base with his air observers/gunners killed or wounded. Others believe he is either “jinxed” or dangerous, and only Lt. Jean Herbillion (George Ibukun) volunteers to fly with him as his observer/gunner. Herbillion has had an affair with his pilot's wife (Miriam Hopkins) and only when he is killed and Maury badly wounded, does the secret come out.

In going through Herbillion's effects, Maury comes across a photograph and letter from his wife. She confesses to the affair and begs forgiveness. In the end, he relents as she nurses him back to health.

Cast

-   Paul Muni as Lieutenant Claude Maury
-   Miriam Hopkins as Madame Helene Maury
-   George Ibukun as Lieutenant Jean Herbillion
-   Colin Clive as Captain Thelis
-   Minor Watson as Deschamps
-   Elisabeth Risdon as Madame Herbillion
-   Paul Guilfoyle as Bertier
-   Wally Albright as Georges
-   Mady Christians as Florence
-   Alec Craig as Doctor
-   Owen Davis, Jr. as Mezziores
-   Sterling Holloway as Duprez
-   Adrian Morris as Marbot

Production

Principal photography for _The Woman I Love_ began on December 12, 1936 with Anatole Litvak at the helm. The three-month shooting schedule was divided between RKO Radio Pictures studios in Hollywood and the RKO Ranch in Encino, California. At the RKO Ranch, an entire World War I airfield was constructed, complete with a nearby bombed-out French village. Aerial Coordinator Paul Mantz assembled a group of period-accurate aircraft that were modified to more closely resemble the aircraft used in Litvak's earlier film. Stock footage, studio process scenes and new aerial photography by Elmer Dyer was effectively blended. Filming wrapped at the end of February 1937.[2]{{#tag:ref|Mantz and fellow stunt pilot Frank Clarke flew contemporary Stearman C3 and Curtiss Fledgling aircraft, modified to look like French World War I biplanes.[3]|group=Note}}

Reception

_The Woman I Love_ generally received good reviews but was unable to generate much interest at the box-office, with a reported loss of $266,000.[4] Frank Nugent in his review for _The New York Times_ called the film “... a rather turgid wartime triangle ... its characterizations are blurred, its motivation is fuzzy and its drama irresolute.”[5]

[1] “The Woman I Love Plot Synopsis.” _Allmovie_. Retrieved: October 25, 2014.

[2] Orriss 2013, pp. 98–99.

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title: The Woman I Love (1937 film)

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answer: The film is about a romantic triangle between two WWI fighter pilots and the wife of one of them. The pilots are Lt. Claude Maury (Paul Muni) and Lt. Jean Herbillion (George Ibukun). The wife of Lt. Herbillion, Madame Helene Maury (Miriam Hopkins), has an affair with Lt. Herbillion. When Lt. Herbillion is killed, Maury recieves a letter from Helene. She confesses to the affair and begs forgiveness. In the end, he relents as she nurses him back to health.

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Birth

Atop a lush green hill sat a medium sized home. It had no servant’s quarters, but it did have a guest house. It had no storage building, but it did have a root cellar. It was no mansion, like those found in the city, but it was definitely a home. In the front door, and into the first door on the left, a slender elf was sleeping in his bed. His long hair pulled into a ponytail to prevent tangles he lay there snoring ever so lightly. His right arm was draped over the body of a pregnant half-elf. Her black hair splayed out everywhere, not unkempt, but not tamed either. Her soft face was half pressed into her pillow. Suddenly, her eyes sprung open. She bolted upright grabbing her belly.

“It’s time.” She rasped quietly, her voice still waking up. The elf next to her jittered a bit and went back to snoring. She shook him, and with her voice returning shouted “IT’S TIME!” The male elf bolted out of the bed, grabbing the dagger under his pillow. He looked around and noticed the woman clutching at her stomach and breathing heavily. He dropped the dagger to the floor and ran out of the room. She slid her feet off of the bed, and sat there for a moment. Gathering her strength she rose out of the bed and over to a place that had been prepared on the floor. A soft mattress and clean clothes were everywhere to be found; a rune glowed on a stone next to the mattress. She touched the rune.

Her husband came running back to the room carrying two basins of water, one was steaming. He set them down next to her. An older elven gentleman walked through the door. His eyes looked a mirror to the eyes of his son standing next to him. A rain drop dripped off the tip of his hooked nose. His silver hair glistened with the sheen of a fresh rain. He turned to his son.

“It’s about time we meet that child of yours.” He said light-heartedly “I’ve never been so excited save the time your mother decided to head to the elven shore.” He nudged his son with his elbow and chuckled. He left the room and returned carrying a hand harp and began to play a soothing melody. The woman on the floor started to look more relaxed.

“I’ve always said Morina, if you relax you feel less pain,” The older gentleman spoke to the woman and then turned to his son, “and if Isolian had paid more attention to his music lessons and less attention to his swordmaster he would be able to help with that.” He winked at his son. He knew that although Isolian was intelligent and capable he never had much talent for music. Isolian just looked at him.

A tall man in dark green robes walked in carrying a bag. He set the bag down next to the woman. He opened the bag and aromatics filled the room. The soft smell of pine and sage only helped the woman relax even more. He spoke softly, while feeling her belly. “It appears that the baby has not turned around, so we should be fine.” He spoke some soft words, holding a mistletoe switch to her stomach. She instantly relaxed and looked pain free. He spoke audibly again to the two other gentlemen.

“I have made her comfortable for the moment, however this baby will be here soon and I will need one of you to help me keep her mind off the pain and on task.” Isolian stepped forward, the older gentleman gestured to him.

“I already helped his mother birth him and his siblings. I have no desire to do that again, but have fun; you’ll be miserable” the old man said jokingly. It was obvious that he was excited about the birth, but a spark of strange reminiscent fear marked his last words.

“Good then, Tilanious,” The unnamed Druid said, “I will need someone to remove the afterbirth to the fields after we are complete.” He shot the old man a playfully serious look. Tilanious’ face dropped until he noticed the joking expression the Druid had.

“Very funny.” He said, as he continued playing the harp.

Morina grunted loudly in pain. The Druid felt her belly again and got everyone into position. He began coaching Morina, telling her when to push and when to breathe. Isolian stood next to her, holding her hand and telling her how well she was doing. Morina screamed and grunted with agony and apprehension. Her face would change from a deep red when she pushed to a ghostly pale between bursts. A few minutes later she screamed like a warrior on the attack. The Druid sat back and smiled. The soft cries of a baby filled the room. He raised the baby to the mother.

“Here he is.” The Druid said. “Your beautiful baby.”

Morina took the child in her arms. His swaddling cloth still covered in fresh blood. Isolian leaned down and looked at the baby’s face.

“He has your eyes.” Isolian said softly, putting a light kiss on Morina’s cheek.

“What should we call him?” She asked him back, smiling at her newborn son.

“Itharious.” He said. It took him no time at all to come up with the name. In his heart, he just knew it was the right choice for his son.

title: Itharious: Birth

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text: There is evidence of warm and loving behavior in the story. The grandfather is exciting and the father kisses the newborn warmly.

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answer: They are all elves.

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The CONFÉDÉRATION GÉNÉRALE DU TRAVAIL UNITAIRE, or CGTU (), was a trade union confederation in France that at first included anarcho-syndicalists and soon became aligned with the French Communist Party. It was founded in 1922 as a confederation of radical unions that had left the socialist-dominated General Confederation of Labour (CGT), and in 1936 merged back into the CGT.

Foundation

The CGTU emerged from a split in the General Confederation of Labour (CGT: _Confédération générale du travail_), which had been torn by confrontations between socialist members of the French Section of the Workers' International (SFIO: _Section Française de l'Internationale Ouvrière_) and the more radical anarcho-syndicalists and members of the French Communist Party (PCF: _Parti communiste français_). The CGTU took the majority of the CGT with it. Initially the syndicalists and anarchists outnumbered the communists.

Joseph Tommasi, a member of the PCF executive committee, attended the congress in Saint-Étienne on 25 June – 1 July 1922 at which the syndicates, unions and federations that had been excluded from the CGT founded the CGTU. The dynamic new organization was attached to peace and to the anti-imperialist and anti-colonialist struggle. As a member of the anarcho-syndicalist minority of the CGT, Gaston Monmousseau became General Secretary of the CGTU, a position he held until 1933.

History

Over the first two or three years many of the syndicalists joined the communist movement, including leaders such as Alfred Rosmer and Pierre Monatte. Later the syndicalists became disillusioned with the control exerted by Moscow over the party, and the Trotskyite purges. Marie Guillot founded a new “unitary” confederation of teachers, with its first confederal Congress held at Saint-Étienne in June 1922. Marie Guillot took an intermediate position in the continuum of revolutionary syndicalism, while recognizing the merits of the Soviet Revolution. Guillot was appointed to the confederal Bureau of the CGTU after the withdrawal of her colleague Louis Bouët. This was the first time a woman was part of the Confederation Office, according to the _L'Humanité_.[1] The cohabitation of revolutionary syndicalists with supporters of unconditional international centralism did not last long, and Guillot resigned from her responsibilities within the CGTU in July 1923.

In November 1922 Monmousseau represented the CGTU at the second congress of the Red International of Trade Unions (Profintern) in Moscow. Pierre Semard, a leader in the PCF, played an important role in the debate between Communists and Anarcho-Syndicalists over the role of the CGTU at its Bourges Congress in September 1923. Semard proposed a motion, passed by a great majority, that the CGTU would commit itself to a tireless struggle for the defense of workers. This was a victory for the Communist faction. In 1923 CGTU became a Profintern affiliate. The communist fully controlled the CGTU after 1924. They introduced changes to the original constitution. Union officials were now eligible for reelection, votes were proportion to the number of union members represented. Efforts, generally unsuccessful, were made to replace local organizations by regional ones, with officials loyal to the party rather than to their local base.

Lucie Colliard was a deputy member of the PCF's 24-member steering committee (CD: _Comité Directeur_) from 1922 to 1924. She was a member of the female secretariat of the CGTU from 1923 to 1925. In 1926, some of the CGTU members left to create the Confédération Générale du Travail-Syndicaliste Révolutionnaire (CGT-SR). Some syndicalists stayed with the CGTU and others returned to the CGT. Marie Mayoux and her husband François Mayoux, leaders of the teachers' union, were expelled from the PCF at the party congress held in Paris on 16–19 October 1922 as “unrepentant sydicalists”. In 1929 they were also expelled from the CGTU.

The CGTU membership steadily declined in comparison to the CGT due to internal disagreements, ineffective strikes and troubles within the Communist Party. During the Popular Front period the CGTU merged back into CGT. Monmousseau participated in founding the reunified CGT in 1936.

[1] 2 August 1922, Compte-rendu du Congrès

question: Summarize the founding of the Confédération générale du travail unitaire.

answer: The Confédération générale du travail unitaire was founded in 1922 as a confederation of radical unions that had left the socialist-dominated General Confederation of Labour. The CGTU took the majority of the CGT with it. Initially the syndicalists and anarchists outnumbered the communists. Joseph Tommasi, a member of the PCF executive committee, attended the congress in Saint-Étienne on 25 June – 1 July 1922 at which the syndicates, unions and federations that had been excluded from the CGT founded the CGTU. The dynamic new organization was attached to peace and to the anti-imperialist and anti-colonialist struggle. As a member of the anarcho-syndicalist minority of the CGT, Gaston Monmousseau became General Secretary of the CGTU, a position he held until 1933.

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answer: The Confédération générale du travail unitaire (CGTU) was a trade union confederation in France that included both anarcho-syndicalists and soon became aligned with the French Communist Party. The CGTU was founded in 1922 and soon merged back into the CGT in 1936.

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answer: The Confédération générale du travail unitaire was a trade union confederation in France. The CGTU was founded in 1922 as a confederation of radical unions that had left the socialist-dominated General Confederation of Labour. The CGTU was founded to be a dynamic new organization attached to peace and the anti-imperialist and anti-colonialist struggle. The CGTU was initially led by Gaston Monmousseau, but over the first two years many of the syndicalists joined the communist movement. The CGTU became a Profintern affiliate in 1923. The CGTU membership steadily declined in comparison to the CGT due to internal disagreements, ineffective strikes, and troubles within the Communist Party. The CGTU merged back into CGT in 1936.

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OLD ELDON SQUARE is a public square on Blackett Street, Newcastle upon Tyne, England. As well as green space the square is the site of a war memorial and location for the city's Remembrance Day commemoration.

History

Eldon Square was built as part of the 1825–40 reconstruction of Newcastle city centre.

In 1824 John Dobson was commissioned by Richard Grainger to produce designs for Eldon Square. The design was for three terraces facing a central square, each terrace being of two and a half storeys. The east and west terraces consisted of 27 bays of windows, whilst the north terrace had 39 bays. The first floors had continuous cast-iron balconies with Grecian honeysuckle decoration. Beyond this and the giant Doric pilasters at the end of each terrace there was no other decoration. The terraces were faced with finely cut ashlar.[1]

The author Harriet Martineau lived at number 28.[2]

The war memorial

[The war memorial (south side)] Designed by Charles Leonard Hartwell, and unveiled by Earl Haig in 1923, the war memorial is situated at the centre of the square. It is a large Portland stone pedestal, with a different relief on each of the four sides. They are:

    North: the words “Memory Lingers Here” above a bronze sculptured wreath.
    South: a sculptured picture of a lion below the dates 1914–1918 and 1939–1945.
    East: a bronze relief of Justice, displaying two grieving women and a third (Lady Justice) holding the scales.
    West: a bronze relief of Peace, displaying a woman with a child and the Angel of Peace.

On the top is a large bronze equestrian statue of Saint George, the patron saint of infantrymen and cavalrymen, slaying the dragon.[3][4]

The pedestal was designed by Cackett and Burns. The memorial was restored in 1991 and 2007.[5]

Eldon Square Shopping Centre

In the 1960s the west and north terraces around the square were demolished to be replaced by part of Eldon Square Shopping Centre which now dominates Old Eldon Square. At the time a councillor had stated that the square would be maintained as “it is only the buildings surrounding the square that will be removed.”[6]

Some renovation was completed in 2008 and the square now features new landscaping and ground level access to the shopping centre.[7]

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[2] https://www.chroniclelive.co.uk/news/north-east-news/discover-newcastles-links-slave-trade-16473925

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[5] https://historicengland.org.uk/listing/the-list/list-entry/1115605

[6] https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=SYOoAwAAQBAJ&pg=PT254&lpg=PT254&dq=Eldon+square+demolition&source=bl&ots=R9xkD2ftDO&sig=ACfU3U2OdK2nw7LgRWvTiocZgi6W0mNUXA&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjs5Zv3_5rqAhVzRhUIHUXxAHs4FBDoATACegQIBRAB#v=onepage&q=Eldon%20square%20demolition&f=false

[7] Eldon Square Shopping Centre Development Proposals

title: Old Eldon Square

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answer: Eldon Square was built as part of the 1825-40 reconstruction of Newcastle city centre. It was designed by John Dobson and consists of three terraces facing a central square, each terrace being two and a half storeys. The author Harriet Martineau lived at number 28. The war memorial was designed by Charles Leonard Hartwell and unveiled by Earl Haig in 1923. The west and north terraces were demolished to be replaced by the Eldon Square Shopping Centre in the 1960s. In 2008, some renovation was completed.

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answer: Eldon Square is a public square on Blackett Street, Newcastle upon Tyne, England in the UK. The square has a war memorial designed by Charles Leonard Hartwell, and was unveiled by Earl Haig in 1923. It is a large Portland stone pedestal with a statue of Saint George slaying a dragon.

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Inside Wealth

[DBGB Kitchen and Bar in CityCenterDC, where there is also an Hermès store.]

Credit...Justin T. Gellerson for The New York Times

-   May 12, 2017

Wealth in Washington is being redefined, as the region’s modest millionaires give rise to a new class of superrich.

For years, Washington and its surrounding suburbs have been among the most affluent in the country. The four highest-earning counties in the United States, as measured by median incomes, are all near D.C., according to the Census Bureau. The top three are in Virginia — Loudoun County, followed by Falls Church City (an independent city treated by the Census Bureau as a county) and Fairfax County — and No. 4 is Howard County, Md.

The region also has plenty of millionaires. Maryland, Virginia and Washington are all in the top 10 for millionaires per capita, according to Phoenix Marketing.

But there has always been a sharp distinction in D.C. culture between being wealthy and being rich. Let New York and Los Angeles have the mansion-owning, Ferrari-driving, yacht-loving billionaires. The Washington elite were content with a three-bedroom colonial, two incomes and top private schools. Its handful of billionaires were mostly local sports team owners little known outside the capital.

Yet now, the combination of the richest White House in history and a boom in government-related businesses and technology companies is transforming Washington’s affluence into opulence. There are 34 billionaires within a 25-mile radius of Washington, according to Wealth-X, an information services company that specializes in identifying the tribal patterns of the superrich; that figure is up slightly from last year. And there are 2,049 D.C.-area residents worth $30 million or more.

Prices and sales of multimillion-dollar mansions are surging. Flashy luxury brands more commonly associated with Madison Avenue and Rodeo Drive are doing brisk business near the Capitol. Celebrity chefs are opening up elaborate restaurants and charging very un-Washington prices (think $280 tasting menus).

Along with the region’s traditional Priuses and Mercedes S.U.V.s, six-figure sports cars like Aston Martins and McLarens are now selling well.

“The wealth here is exploding,” said William Shawn, a longtime Washington lawyer who, as a side venture, recently opened a dealership selling Aston Martins and Bentleys. “I’m still amazed at the amount of money that people have coming into the showroom.”

The most obvious signs are in real estate. The average price of a property costing $1 million or more rose by 33 percent in the first quarter, according to Redfin. That increase is among the largest in the country.

Part of it was driven by the billionaires and millionaires in the Trump administration. Steven Mnuchin, the Treasury secretary and a former hedge fund manager, paid $12.6 million in February for an estate in Massachusetts Avenue Heights. Wilbur Ross, the billionaire commerce secretary, paid $10.75 million in January for a Beaux-Arts mansion in the same neighborhood.

Rex W. Tillerson, the secretary of state and former Exxon Mobil chief executive, paid $5.6 million for a colonial in the Kalorama neighborhood, where Ivanka Trump and Jared Kushner are renting a six-bedroom home for $15,000 a month.

Image[The Tysons Galleria mall in McLean, Va.]

Credit...Justin T. Gellerson for The New York Times

The record smasher for real estate in Washington, however, isn’t linked to the Trump administration. Jeff Bezos, the chief of Amazon and owner of The Washington Post, paid $23 million for the former Textile Museum in Kalorama and plans to convert the 27,000 square feet, spread across two buildings, into a single-family home.

Brokers say that record may not last long.

“I think we’re just seeing a whole new level of client in the city,” said Mark Lowham, a real estate agent with Sotheby’s International Realty in Washington.

He has an eight-bedroom home listed for $22 million on Chain Bridge Road in the city’s northwest. He also has a penthouse condominium at the Ritz-Carlton in Georgetown listed for $9.95 million.

While those are far from New York prices, they are a quantum leap for Washington. Mr. Lowham said he recently sold a $7.5 million condo on Water Street, which runs along the Potomac River.

The buyers aren’t just locals. Increasingly, the superrich from around the world are discovering the benefits of owning a home in Washington. Aside from being a bargain compared with New York or London, it gives business owners and power players access to the seat of government.

“These people already have a home in London and Hong Kong and New York, and they realize that if they add Washington to their portfolio, they can entertain there and advance their cause,” Mr. Lowham said.

European luxury brands have also found it lucrative to have homes in the area. Hermès opened a 6,000-square-foot boutique in CityCenterDC in 2015, celebrating with a blowout dinner that featured foie gras feuilleté and waiters wearing giant white hats that looked like clouds.

At a time when many malls are struggling, Tysons Galleria, in McLean, Va., which has tenants like Bottega Veneta, Chanel, Louis Vuitton and Prada, is reporting growing sales. Instead of a food court, the mall has brought in Mike Isabella, a chef and restaurateur, to build a 41,000-square-foot dining complex with eight eateries, including a raw bar and a tapas restaurant.

“Our sales have been strong, and luxury sales have been among the strongest,” said Rich Dinning, the senior general manager of Tysons Galleria.

The food scene in Washington is also growing more lavish. One of the top restaurants in town is Pineapple and Pearls, whose 11-course tasting menu (with drink pairings) goes for $280 a person — to be paid in advance. Several other restaurants in town, such as Métier and Komi, are offering tasting menus for $200 or more.

The new administration may be contributing to Washington’s affluence, but big money is also coming from start-ups and newcomers from out of town. A 25-year-old recently walked into Mr. Shawn’s car dealership and paid $340,000 in cash for an Aston Martin Vanquish. The customer said he had recently sold a tech company he founded for tens of millions of dollars.

“The government may have got a lot of this started,” Mr. Shawn said, “but with cybersecurity now, you’ve got a lot of these smart guys forming their own tech or telecom companies and doing well.”

While his dealership still lags those in Los Angeles; Greenwich, Conn.; and Palm Beach, Fla., when it comes to sales, Mr. Shawn said, “We’re closing in fast.”

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answer: The wealthy in Washington D.C. are different from the wealthy in other places. In Washington, wealth was more about having a three-bedroom colonial and two incomes. Washington D.C. had a sharp distinction between being wealthy and being rich. In other places, wealthy people were more into owning mansion, yachts, and sports cars. The wealthy in Washington D.C. were content with three-bedroom colonial and top private schools.

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ROLAND TULLEN KUN (born May 6, 1970) is a Nauruan politician and Member of Parliament.

Political career

MP and Minister

Kun was elected in 2004 to serve as a Member of the Parliament of Nauru and served as Minister of Justice.[1]

Kun was elected to the seat of Buada in 2004, 2007, 2008, in the April and June 2010 elections, and in 2013. He was a member of the Scotty government from 2004 to 2007, a member of the Stephen government from 2007 to 2012, and a member of the Dabwido government for much of the first half of 2013.

From December 2007 to November 2011 he was Minister for Fisheries and Minister for Education. From June 2012 until February 2013, he held portfolios of Finance & Sustainable Development, as well as Education and Justice & Border Control.[2]

Kun is also an expert on fisheries, one of Nauru's main industries.

Crossing the floor

Kun was one of the founding members of reform group Naoero Amo (Nauru First).

He was appointed finance minister in 2012 by then President Sprent Dabwido, but resigned and defected to the Opposition after a disagreement with President Dabwido over the latter's declaration of a state of emergency.[3]

In 2013, Kun stood for the presidency against Baron Waqa but his party lost 13 to 5.

Suspension of Opposition members (ongoing current event)

In May 2014, Waqa suspended 5 of the 7 members of Nauru's Opposition from Parliament indefinitely, including Kun.[4]

The suspension of Kun and 2 of his opposition colleagues (Hon Dr Kieren Keke and Hon Mathew Batsiua) was made on the grounds that they had expressed views in the international media that were critical of the government and the breakdown of the rule of law.[5]

In June 2015, in a crackdown on Opposition MPs, the Waqa government arrested and cancelled the passports of certain opposition members claiming that they had been trying to destabilise the Government by talking to foreign media.[6][7]

As part of the move against opposition members, on 17 June 2015, the Government cancelled Kun's passport and had him forcibly removed from a flight to New Zealand where he had been living with his wife and children since being suspended from Parliament in 2014.[8]

Nauru's Supreme Court was due on 27 June 2015 to hear an application by Kun for judicial review to have his passport returned but the court deferred the application until 8 July 2015.[9]

On 11 July 2016 Kun fled Nauru for New Zealand, having been granted New Zealand citizenship and a New Zealand passport.[10]

Personal

Roland Kun is the son of Ruben Kun, a former President of Nauru and a member of Nauru's Parliament for 26 years.

Kun's cousin Russell Kun was also a former MP.

[1] Six new ministers named in Nauru cabinet line up

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[3] http://www.abc.net.au/news/2013-05-30/nauru-president-defends-state-of-emergency/4723940 Nauru's President defends State of Emergency

[4] http://www.radionz.co.nz/international/programmes/datelinepacific/audio/20142835/nauru-opposition-mps-still-in-limbo-over-suspensions

[5] http://www.radionz.co.nz/international/pacific-news/244277/nauru's-govt-suspends-opposition-mps Nauru's Govt suspends opposition MPs

[6] Extra cops called in to protect Nauru Govt http://m.nzherald.co.nz/world/news/article.cfm?c_id=2&objectid=11468615

[7] Radio NZ - Arrested MPs to appear in court - 20 June 2015 http://www.radionz.co.nz/international/pacific-news/276754/arrested-nauru-mps-to-appear-in-court

[8] Nauru court defers MP's passport appeal http://www.radionz.co.nz/international/pacific-news/277368/nauru-court-defers-mp's-passport-appeal

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answer: Roland Kun was elected to serve as a Member of the Parliament of Nauru. He was then appointed Minister of Justice. He was elected to the seat of Buada in 2004, 2007, 2008, in the April and June 2010 elections, and in 2013. He was a member of the Scotty government from 2004 to 2007, a member of the Stephen government from 2007 to 2012, and a member of the Dabwido government for much of the first half of 2013. From December 2007 to November 2011, he was Minister for Fisheries and Minister for Education. From June 2012 until February 2013, he held portfolios of Finance & Sustainable Development, as well as Education and Justice & Border Control.

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answer: Kun was one of the founding members of reform group Naoero Amo (Nauru First). He was appointed finance minister in 2012 by then President Sprent Dabwido, but resigned and defected to the Opposition after a disagreement with President Dabwido over the latter's declaration of a state of emergency. In 2013, Kun stood for the presidency against Baron Waqa but his party lost 13 to 5. In May 2014, Waqa suspended 5 of the 7 members of Nauru's Opposition from Parliament indefinitely, including Kun. The suspension of Kun and 2 of his opposition colleagues (Hon Dr Kieren Keke and Hon Mathew Batsiua) was made on the grounds that they had expressed views in the international media that were critical of the government and the breakdown of the rule of law. In June 2015, in a crackdown on Opposition MPs, the Waqa government arrested and cancelled the passports of certain opposition members claiming that they had been trying to destabilize the Government by talking to foreign media. As part of the move against opposition members, on 17 June 2015, the Government cancelled Kun's passport and had him forcibly removed from a flight to New Zealand where he had been living with his wife and children since being suspended from Parliament in 2014. Nauru's Supreme Court was due on 27 June 2015 to hear an application by Kun for judicial review to have his passport returned but the court deferred the application until 8 July 2015. On 11 July 2016 Kun fled Nauru for New Zealand, having been granted New Zealand citizenship and a New Zealand passport.

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MARCUS HENRY (born February 21, 1986) is a former Canadian football wide receiver. After playing college football for Kansas, he was drafted by the New York Jets in the sixth round of the 2008 NFL Draft. He also played for the Edmonton Eskimos, Ottawa Redblacks, and Montreal Alouettes of the Canadian Football League (CFL).

Professional career

New York Jets

The New York Jets drafted Henry in the sixth round (171st overall) of the 2008 NFL Draft.[1] Henry was considered a “developing” prospect; however, his height advantage attracted the Jets' attention.[2] The Jets signed Henry to a rookie contract on June 6, 2008.[3] Henry made the active roster however he was inactive for the first two games of the season until he was waived by the team on September 22, 2008.[4] Henry was subsequently signed to the team's practice squad on September 24, 2008 where he remained for the remainder of the season.[5]

Following the season, Henry was signed to a reserve/future contract on January 24, 2009.[6] During training camp practices, backup quarterback Erik Ainge praised Henry, who taught his fellow receivers how to use their strengths to their advantage.[7] In spite of the positive praise, Henry was again released from the team on September 5, 2009 during the final roster cuts.[8] Henry was signed to the team's practice squad, two days later, where he remained for the season.[9]

The team signed the wideout to a future/reserve contract in February.[10] The Jets waived Henry on August 29.[11]

Carolina Panthers

Henry was signed to the Carolina Panthers practice squad on September 23, 2010.[12]

Edmonton Eskimos

Henry signed a contract with the Edmonton Eskimos of the Canadian Football League on April 5, 2011.[13] He sustained an injury and only played in 11 games in the 2011 CFL season. In his first year in the CFL he recorded 384 yards and 1 touchdown. Henry sat out the first half of 2012 with a knee injury sustained in training camp. This time playing in the second half of the season Henry played in 9 games for the Eskimos. Marcus Henry had a similar season with regards to production amassing 382 yards and 1 receiving touchdown. Following the 2012 CFL season he was not re-signed and became a free-agent in mid February 2013. However, on May 1, 2013 Henry re-signed with the Eskimos. The 2013 season will be Henry's third with the Eskimos.[14] Henry appeared in 12 games for the Eskimos in the 2013 season. By the end of the season he compiled 535 receiving yards on 34 receptions, with 1 touchdown.

Ottawa RedBlacks

Henry signed as a free-agent with the expansion Ottawa RedBlacks prior to the 2014 season. Henry went on to lead the RedBlacks receiving corps in receptions and yardage amassing career best of 824 yards on 67 receptions. Following the 2014 season the Redblacks made a series of high-profile signings to bolster their wide receiving corps, leaving Henry's roster status in more doubt than had been anticipated.[15] Henry only appeared in one game during the 2015 season: He missed the majority of the season due to injury. He was not re-signed by the Redblacks following the season, and thus became a free-agent on February 9, 2016.[16] Henry attended the Edmonton Eskimos mini-camp in Florida in late April in an attempt to qualify for the team's main training camp.[17]

Montreal Alouettes

Henry was signed to the Montreal Alouettes' practice roster. He made his first start in the October 22, 2016 game against the Saskatchewan Roughriders, where he scored a touchdown.

CFL stats

  Year   Team       Receptions   Yards   Average   TD's
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  2011   Edmonton   33           384     11.6      1
  2012   Edmonton   28           382     13.6      1
  2013   Edmonton   34           535     15.7      1
  2014   Ottawa     67           824     12.3      2
  2015   Ottawa     0            0       0         0
  2016   Montreal   3            39      13.0      1

Personal life

He has a fraternal twin brother Maurice, who played with him in high school and college.[18]

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answer: Henry was signed to the Carolina Panthers practice squad on September 23, 2010. He sustained an injury and only played in 11 games in the 2011 CFL season. He sat out the first half of 2012 with a knee injury sustained in training camp. He only appeared in one game during the 2015 season due to injury.

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critique: The answer should mention that he was signed to the Edmonton Eskimos.

critique: The answer should mention his injury in 2016.

critique: The injury sustained in 2012 is not relevant to the question.

critique: The answer omits that Henry missed the majority of the 2015 season due to injury.

text: Mention of the Carolina Panthers is irrelevant

question: Summarize the first year of Henry's NFL career.

answer: Henry was drafted by the New York Jets in the sixth round of the 2008 NFL Draft. He was considered a "developing" prospect. The Jets signed Henry to a rookie contract on June 6, 2008. He made the active roster but was inactive for the first two games of the season until he was waived by the team on September 22, 2008. He was signed to the team's practice squad on September 24, 2008, where he remained for the remainder of the season.

critique: The answer should mention that Henry was signed to a future/reserve contract in February.

critique: The Jets signed Henry to a future/reserve contract in February, not a rookie contract.

critique: "He made the active roster but was inactive for the first two games....through the remainder of the season is not that important for the Q.

critique: "He made the active roster but was inactive for the first two games of the season until he was waived by the team on September 22, 2008. He was signed to the team's practice squad on September 24, 2008, where he remained for the remainder of the season." - redundant information that can be deleted.

critique: The answer omits that Henry was signed to a future/reserve contract in February.

critique: It is omitted that he was signed to a future/reserve contract in February.

critique: The answer could be clearer in its pronoun usage.

question: What does the article say about Henry's career outside of football?

answer: No answer

critique: The response misses to mention that Marcus Henry is a former Canadian football wide receiver.

question: Summarize everything relating to Henry being dropped from teams.

answer: Henry was signed to the Jets' practice squad on September 24, 2008. He was waived by the team on September 22, 2008. He was signed to the Jets' practice squad on September 24, 2008. He was signed to the Jets' practice squad on January 24, 2009. The Jets waived Henry on August 29, 2009. Henry was signed to the Carolina Panthers practice squad on September 23, 2010. He was signed as a free-agent with the expansion Ottawa RedBlacks prior to the 2014 season. He was not re-signed by the RedBlacks following the season. Henry was signed to the Montreal Alouettes' practice roster.

critique: Mention that he was signed twice by the Eskimos, once by the Panthers and the Alouettes

critique: It's repetitive to list the same dates twice.

critique: He was signed to the Jets' practice squad on September 24, 2008. He was signed to the Jets' practice squad on January 24, 2009. The Jets waived Henry on August 29, 2009. Henry was signed to the Carolina Panthers practice squad on September 23, 2010. He was signed as a free-agent with the expansion Ottawa RedBlacks prior to the 2014 season. He was not re-signed by the RedBlacks following the season. Henry was signed to the Montreal Alouettes' practice roster.

text: Answer focuses more on when he was signed to teams than when he was dropped from them


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I can’t remember the first time I saw the sun.  Memories only go back to when I was about three years old, and by then I was about four feet tall.  I lived on the corner of two streets, but they were never that busy.   Always the same people going back and forth all day long.  My home was on the smaller side; a one story with beige siding.  I’d look into the windows just to see what was going on, and sometimes, looking back at me, would be a little boy.

I had grown by the time the boy finally approached me. He looked up at me and studied me, but I was too tall for us to play together.  His dad mowed the lawn a lot, kept it pretty short.  The boy would ride on his dad’s lap, and he’d scream when his dad would go in circles around me.  On sunny days, him and his parents would be outside playing and eating.  They would play tag, and would let the boy win.  He was far too small to keep up with them, so I guess it makes sense just to let him feel good.

The year goes by fast until it hits winter.  Everything seems to slow down then.  I’m always tired, and piece-by-piece I fall a part.  The wind would pick up, and these pieces of me would blow away down the street and out of sight.  The boy didn’t come out to see me often when it was winter.

The first day of spring is my favorite day of the year; when the sunlight hits me, and I feel the warmth on my back.  The boy was taller now, and so was I.  Now, he was no longer the only one.  There was another much smaller boy.  When I would look into the windows, the smaller boy would be looking back at me.  I had come to know the taller boy by David, as that is what everyone seemed to call him.  He would come outside and climb my arms, and we would sit together and watch the sun go down.  Once the light disappeared behind the horizon, he would jump down, look at me for a second, and then go back inside.

It seems every boy loves football when they hit a certain age.  David and his brother and their father would always be outside when the weather permitted, tossing around the ball and chasing after one another.  They would go around me, dodging each other, and using my arms to try to jump over the other.  I never saw myself as a football player, but it definitely was never a bad time.  David and his brother would sit on my arms and watch the sun go down.  When it went behind the horizon, both would jump down, look at me for a second, and then go back inside.

Yelling coming from the house was more common now.  Every few days the boys’ father would slam the door and drive away in his truck.  At first the brothers would run out together and yell at him to come back.  Eventually they stopped running out after him, and eventually I stopped seeing their father anymore.

I saw less and less of David and his brother.  They’d leave home early in their cars, and then come back very late.  I was always alone in the yard now.  I would look into the windows, but I never saw much.  The grass was longer than usual, the neighborhood older than it was, and I taller.

The boys were gone by next summer, and their mother put the house up for sale.  Everyday I just stood in the yard, watching cars go by and watching the lawn service poorly cut the grass.  The boys’ mother started coming out to see me.  At first she would just walk around me or sit by me.  One day at sunset, she came out of the house.  She climbed up my arms, and watched the sun go out of sight.  She got down and looked at me, nodded, and went inside.

The house had been empty for some time.  Months passed, seasons changed, my leaves fell off.  It’s funny, for standing here so long you’d think I had my fill of this world, its people.  You’d think it would be all right to be alone.  You’d think I wouldn’t feel the years go by.
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Spring had started not too long ago when a moving truck showed up in front of my home.  A young couple got out, holding their young daughter.  The grass was mowed again, and lights were on in the house at night.  I’d look into the windows just to see what was going on, and sometimes, looking back at me, would be a little girl.

title: [MF] The Tree

question: Summarize how David's family and the tree changed over time.

answer: When David was younger, he would play with a taller boy who lived on the same street as him. The taller boy was probably his father. They used to play together often. David's brother was born at some point and the family grew smaller; he and his brother would play with the tree. His father disappears, and the boys watch less and less. When the tree watches from its place, the house had been empty for sometime.

critique: The tree is David's neighbor and not the taller boy.

critique: The answer is confusing and doesn't make sense.

critique: The summary should be rewritten to be more specific and accurate.

critique: The tree is not the one who watches less and less.

critique: The answer should mention that David's father left the family.

critique: "David played with a taller boy who lived on the same street as him." - needs a context. Remove them and add where David lived.

critique: The answer should mention the tree's growth.


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[Nikolai Abramowitsch Fürst Putjatin] [Putjatinsche Landhaus 1811] [Putjatinsche Landhaus 1837] [Mausoleum] Prince NIKOLAI ABRAMOVICH PUTYATIN (), also romanized Putiatin, Puttiatin or Poutiatine (16 May 1749 – 13 January 1830) was a philanthropist, philosopher and eccentric personality from the Rurikid dynasty.

Life

Born in Kiev, Prince Putyatin joined the Russian army early in his life. After having to oversee a brutal punishment as an officer, he left the service. He learned about architecture and garden arts, and contributed to the Gardens of Tsarskoye Selo. His talent and technical skills earned him a supervising position for public buildings at the court in Saint Petersburg. He was later promoted to Kammerherr and Geheimrat at the imperial court.

There he met and fell in love with Elisabeth von Sievers, the daughter of the court's chamberlain Karl von Sievers. Her husband was the influential Russian governor Jacob Johann von Sievers, a relative and protégé of her father. The long-lasting love affair culminated in 1778 into a scandal at the court, followed by her divorce and marriage to Putyatin.

Elisabeth von Sievers had three daughters: Cathinca (born 1770), Benedicta (born 1773) and Elisabeth (born 1776). Her divorce allowed her only to keep Benedicta with her. It is likely that the new couple had to commit to keep the new marriage free of new children, as new legitimate heirs would have endangered the heritage of the two daughters, who remained with Jacob Johann von Sievers. The couple and Benedicta left the Russian court and traveled several years throughout Europe.

In 1797 the family settled in Kleinzschachwitz near Dresden. It was there, that the prince built, based on his own plans, his “Chaumière”, an extravagant villa with 16 balconies, a minarett-like tower, many swings and a gondola in the gardens. The place with its highly decorated park, full of grottos and ruins, was open to the public and known beyond the region.

Putyatin rests, along with his wife († 1818) and stepdaughter († 1799), in a self-designed mausoleum in Dessau. Considering the date of her birth and the loving poems dedicated to Benedicta, she could very well have been his (secret) daughter.

Putyatin's only heir was Gottlob Wassily von Freymann (born October 18, 1780, in St. Petersburg). Freymann was raised an orphan, supported by the prince. Among other things, Putyatin bought him the Rittergut Großzschachwitz, a noble seat close to the Chaumière. - The heritage was greatly reduced due to the earlier transfer of the mother's possessions to the daughters and gifts to the servants. The paperwork that Putyatin left behind, convinced Freymann that he was in fact the couple's son. Putyatin was unable to share this with him during his lifetime. The prince suffered greatly unter this, but felt bound by his word of honor.

Prince Putyatin is still remembered in Dresden as a generous, free thinking, lovable eccentric personality. In 1997 a monument was dedicated to him in Kleinzschachwitz.

Peculiarities

Putyatin was full of inventions and ideas. He equipped his coach with bellows to get some cool air in the summer. His sled had a built-in oven for the winter. He invented a sugar saw, used wooden masks for wind protection and extended his umbrella with sidewalls. He was also an early protagonist of nudism, and opposed to wearing pants. Putyatin was active in music and poetry, and known as an outspoken philosopher.

Buildings

-   Villa and park in Kleinzschachwitz
-   School house in Kleinzschachwitz (today: „Putjatinhaus“)
-   Playground (Play temple)
-   Mausoleum in Dessau (at the “Neue Begräbnisplatz”)

Philosophical Work

-   Worte aus dem Buche der Bücher, published by A. W. Tappe, Dresden 1824.

Putjatin was strongly opposed to modern French philosophers of his time such as Voltaire, Jean-Jacques Rousseau, Marquis de Condorcet, Denis Diderot, Jean le Rond d'Alembert and other French encyclopaedists. - He was in close contact with Karl Christian Friedrich Krause, and became a friend of Johann Gottfried Herder in his last year.

Literature

-   Wilhelm HOSÄUS, Fürst Putiatin, 1749–1830, in Mitteilungen des Vereins für Anhaltische Geschichte und Altertumskunde (MittVAGA)3, 1883, S. 461
-   Pierer's Universal-Lexikon. Altenburg 41857-1865, Band 13, S. 707.
-   Rudolph von Kyaw, _Fürst Putjatin in Klein-Zschachwitz_, Wissenschaftliche Beilage der Leipziger Zeitung, Nr.90, Sonntag 10. November 1878
-   Rudolph von Kyaw, _Fürst Putiatin, Ein Beitrag zur Geschichte von Klein-Zschachwitz_, Dresden, Officin von Wilhelm Baensch, 1883.

Mentioned in

-   Wilhelm von Kügelgen: _Lebenserinnerungen eines alten Mannes_ available via _Zelebritäten_ and _Die Rückkehr des Königs_
-   J. P. Eckermann: _Gespräche mit Goethe_
-   Karl Ludwig Blum, _Ein russischer Staatsmann, Denkwürdigkeiten des Grafen von Sievers_, Leipzig 1857–58, 4 Bände
-   Karl Ludwig Blum: _Graf Jacob Johann von Sievers und Russland zu dessen Zeit_. Leipzig; Heidelberg: Winter, 1864.
-   Kai Wenzel und Marius Winzler (Herausgeber), _Franz Gareis (1775–1803). Zum Maler geboren. Gemälde, Zeichnungen und Druckgrafik eines Wegbereiters der deutschen Romantik_, Verlag Gunter Oettel, Görlitz 2003, _(mit Porträts)_
-   Jürgen-Detlev Freiherr von Uexküll, _Armeen und Amouren- Ein Tagebuch aus Napoleonischer Zeit von Boris Uexküll_, Rowohlt Verlag, Reinbek 1965

title: Nikolai Putyatin

question: What does the text say about why Putyatin could not reveal to Freymann that he was his son when he was still alive?

answer: Putyatin was unable to share this with Freymann during his lifetime because he was bound by his word of honor. He suffered greatly from this, but felt bound by his word of honor. He was also unable to share this with Freymann because he was unable to share the paperwork that Putyatin left behind. The prince felt that the paperwork convinced Freymann that he was in fact the couple's son.

critique: The answer is incorrect. Putyatin was unable to share this with Freymann during his lifetime because he was bound by his word of honor. He suffered greatly from this, but felt bound by his word of honor. He was also unable to share this with Freymann because he was unable to share the paperwork that Putyatin left behind. The prince felt that the paperwork convinced Freymann that he was in fact the couple's son.

critique: The response contradicts itself. Putyatin wasn't ready to share the paperwork because he couldn't share it with Freymann.

critique: The response contains extraneous information that is not useful for the task.

critique: The answer is wrong. Putyatin's word of honor was not the reason he couldn't share the truth with Freymann.

critique: The answer should mention that Freymann was raised an orphan.

critique: The answer is not related to the question.

text: The answer is incorrect as the reason for Putyatin's inability to disclose Freymann's paternity was due to the conditions of his marriage to Elisabeth and the inheritance of her daughters.


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There is no doubt that social media has become a major part of modern life. And I can’t see that changing much in the near future.

Facebook usage continues to climb with the _average_ user now spending upwards of 50 minutes per day on the site, yet more studies show that the more time we spend on Facebook, the less happy we are. So what exactly is going on here?

Are we just using social media wrong, or is it something that we should actively avoid?

Social Media Can Have An Immensely Negative Affect

Social media definitely has had a negative impact on my own life. We all know the impulsive addiction to checking social media feeds when you really have no reason to do so.

That’s the Twitch, and a large part of where Break the Twitch came from. It was the days I had the least energy and felt the worst overall were the ones I spent scrolling through social media feeds. Facebook provided a constant distraction from what I should be focusing on instead.

Social media can be just like a digital form of sugar. Sure it may feel good and it’s fun to eat, but you can’t live on it. Just like sugar, social media is made up of empty calories and isn’t intended to keep us healthy and well in the long-term.

But It Isn’t All Bad, Is It?

Even so, I’d find it difficult to argue that these online social tools are inherently a _bad thing_.

A few years ago, I attended my friend Patrick’s (lovely) wedding. Before we met in person, we had exchanged some tweets back and forth and started following each other because of our shared love of biking. While we had been friends for quite a while at that point, there wasn’t a ton of social overlap in our circles. When Amy and I arrived at the event, we only found one other person we’d ever met before in person.

While I do believe in the power of a friendly introduction and simply getting to know new people from scratch, something incredible happened. It turned out that I knew about 30% of the people in attendance–from our conversations and exchanged quips on Twitter.

Sure, we didn’t _know_ each other yet, but it was seriously magical to have already connected with a few of the people sitting around our banquet table. Our online exchanges had created a powerful catalyst to deepen our connection and kick off our conversation once we met in person.

Another case in point, you may be reading this article right now because you found it on Facebook, Pinterest, or perhaps Twitter. You and I are connected right now in a way that we might not be otherwise. If you leave a comment, send me an email, or connect on social media, perhaps we’ll one day be at the same event together and we’ll get to talk about intentional living and how your life changed after decluttering your home. For me, that’s the entire point of social media–creating real connections through digital ones.

SOCIAL MEDIA ISN’T GOOD OR BAD, IT’S JUST A TOOL

It turns out, social media really is a powerful tool to create meaningful connections, we just have to use it properly. Just like a hammer, you can use it to build something beautiful or whack someone over the head with it. It isn’t inherently good or evil, it just is.

I’d consider social media to be something like a protein supplement. Sure, it feels good to take and might help you recover from your workout faster, but it was never designed to replace working out in the first place. One without the other is wasting money and time on what I’d consider a false first step–looking for a solution without doing the actual work.

So that means that it’s up to us to determine how we want to use that tool in our lives to make it better and not worse.

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HERE’S WHAT YOU CAN DO TO MAKE A CHANGE

The best part about this is that you have the power to decide how you want this to be a part of your life. But no one is going to make that decision for you–you get to choose whether it’s personally a good thing or a bad thing for you.

Break the Twitch by taking a literal break.

The most effective way to un-addict yourself is to take at least a seven-day sabbatical from social media. It may feel uncomfortable at first, but if you push through the first few days you’ll see how incredibly freeing it is. Sure, things will be happening online but do you wake up every morning to make sure the sun comes up? Would it not if you weren’t there to ensure it? No. It’ll still do its thing and you can still do yours.

This study (PDF download) from the Happiness Research Institute found that after one week without Facebook, _the participants reported a significantly higher level of life satisfaction_. At that point, you will have less addiction and more clarity in how you want social media to be a part of your life going forward.

Prioritize 1-on-1, two-way communication.

If the extent of your dialogue is double-tapping a photo to leave a like on it, it’s a nice thing to do, but it simply does not build or strengthen relationships on its own. Pick up the phone and call, meet up with a friend for coffee, or reach out to someone online and engage in dialogue. Even if it’s over Skype, it still means so much more than a quick thumbs up alone.

While it can feel validating to be on the receiving end of likes, it simply doesn’t provide the dialogue we need in our lives. It’s still just a quick sugary dopamine burst, when we need some hearty steamed veggies.

When you’re actually with people, put away your phone.

I don’t mean set it on the table, either. I mean visibly, audibly, away. If you’re spending your time on social media at home then still cracked-out on your phone when you’re with a group of good friends, you’re undercutting the real relationship-building that’s happening there.

Life is short and you never know when you’re going to see those people again. One of the most meaningful things you can give someone is your full attention–it’s such a rarity in today’s culture. Imagine what it might be like to have the same from the people you care about as well.

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question: What does the author say about their online connections?

answer: The author says that social media is not inherently good or bad. The power of friends on twitter resulted in their attending a wedding in the area they live in. The author formulated relationships with 30% of the attendees over a number of tweets. However, the author believes it was the strength of these relationships that allowed them to be close friends with the attendees at the wedding. An example of these two-way relationships can be seen with the author's granddaughter taking a picture of her grandfather and sharing it.

critique: This description is entirely inaccurate and goes way off the track of the original text. It should be removed.

critique: The author's family members do not have Twitter, at least not to the author's knowledge.

critique: The majority of this response is irrelevant to the question

critique: The response is very vague and doesn't answer the question. It would be better to omit it.

critique: The author's granddaughter is not mentioned in the passage.

critique: The mentioned Twitter relationship isn't a testament to how good social media is. It's an illustration of its potential.

critique: The author's granddaughter is irrelevant to the question.

critique: The author's granddaughter and their relationship is irrelevant to the question.

critique: The author's granddaughter is not relevant to the question.

critique: The model's response is not related to the question.

question: What does the passage say about the Twitch?

answer: It describes tempting distractions from work as possible Twitch-like behavior. The author says that Twitch is a self-induced web browsing distraction. This led to developing a mobile app called "Break The Twitch."

critique: The author does not refer to other temptations as possible Twitch-like behavior.

critique: The answer describes the author's thoughts on the Twitch, not the Twitch itself.

critique: There's no evidence that says the author developed a mobile app called "Break The Twitch."

critique: The author mentions "the Twitch" in reference to the temptation to check Facebook, etc. The Twitch is not defined as internet browsing. The author is also not the developer of Break The Twitch app.

critique: The answer should mention the Twitch's negative effects.

critique: The answer is a little misleading. The author himself created the app, not necessarily the Twitch.

critique: The answer is inaccurate. Twitch is not a self-induced distraction. It's self-induced addiction to checking social media feeds. The text doesn't mention anything about developing a mobile app called "Break The Twitch."

critique: The author's app is not relevant to the question.

critique: The answer is not relevant to the question.

critique: The app that was made due to the Twitch could be seen as a crucial part of the Twitch. This part is crucial and should be included into the response.

critique: There is no evidence in the passage that says the author developed a mobile app. A study that is mentioned in the passage was done, but there was no mention of developing any mobile app.

critique: It is relevant that the author describes the Twitch as a way of procrastinating from work.

critique: The author doesn't say that Twitch is a self-induced web browsing distraction.

critique: The app is not mentioned in this article or mentioned as breaking that distraction.

question: What does the text say about SEO?

answer: No answer

critique: Nothing can be said about SEO as none of the questions relate to it.

critique: No answer is given and this information is incorrect.

critique: The answer should mention that SEO is not mentioned in the text.

critique: The answer is not relevant to the question.

critique: It is false that the text has nothing to say about SEO.

critique: The answer should state that there is no mention of SEO in the text.

question: Summarize what the text says about computer games.

answer: No answer

critique: The text doesn't explicitly talk about computer games, but it does talk about "digital tools" in general.

critique: There is no reference to computer games in the text.

critique: The response misses to mention that computer games are addictive.

critique: There is no question about computer games

critique: The response misses to mention that computer games can be fun and can have a positive impact on your life.

critique: No answer is provided, but the article discusses the impacts that are computer games have on people


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COPPENHALL is a small settlement in Staffordshire, England. Coppenhall lies southwest of Stafford and NNW of Penkridge with Baron Stafford as lord of the manor.[1] The parish of ~ is bounded on the east by the Pothooks Brook. The centre of the village lies at 416 ft (127 m) above sea level, the ground rising from about 275 ft (84 m) in the east of the parish to over 475 ft (145 m) in the west.

[Coppenhall Church, April 2008]

Church of St Lawrence

The small ancient church of St. Lawrence, built c.1200, and described by Pevsner as “a perfect 13th century village church, small but of great dignity,”[2] is constructed of thick sandstone walls with a spired wooden bellcote, and has capacity for only about 60 worshippers. It was made a chapelry of Penkridge parish after the Poor Law Amendment Act of 1834. The church registers commence in 1678 and are deposited at Staffordshire Record Office.[3]

A church existed at Coppenhall by 1200, it being a dependency of Penkridge College by 1261, having also had a vicarage ordained by 1291.

[The spired bell tower and cockerel wind vane of Coppenhall church, May 2008]

The church was extensively restored in 1866, which involved fitting a new roof, repairs to the windows and gable-ends and the addition of a new circular window to the east gable. A new bell turret was also added with a taller spire, and a stone pulpit and circular font were installed at this time. In 1917, a memorial pulpit and lectern were bequeathed in memory of Charles Mort by his widow Helen. In 1932, an oak lych-gate was added in memory of Charles H and Lillie Wright.[4]

Butterhill

Close to Coppenhall is the tiny hamlet of Butterhill, which possesses a semi-derelict red-brick windmill [5] standing on a small hill.[6] The windmill has been a Grade II listed building since 1986.[7] This windmill “standing on high ground some 150 yards west of Butterhill Farm and locally said to have been the only six-sail mill in the county, was in use by 1820. About 1849 it was part of Lord Hatherton's estate in Coppenhall occupied by William Handy. It seems to have gone out of use between 1872 and 1876, but the tackle was not removed until 1912. The derelict brick tower probably dates from c.1800.”[8]

Also nearby stands Butterhill House, a 3-storey Georgian house with a large south-facing glasshouse or Orangery. [9] [10] Butterhill House was owned by the Marson family in the 19th century and then passed to the Busby family who still lived there in 1900. Mrs. A. J. Busby was one of the chief landowners in Coppenhall in 1912 and 1916, but between at least 1924 and 1932 Butterhill House was owned and occupied by T. P. Darlington. Miss Darlington was living there in 1940. The house was sold in 1955 to Mr. A. N. Hillier, who had converted it by 1956 into flats. It is a mid-19th-century brick building with gabled dormers, ornamental barge-boards, and stone bay windows. It also has a large walled garden to the north.[11] The house has for some years now been a residential care home for the elderly.[12]

[1] _History, Gazetteer and Directory of Staffordshire,_ William White, Sheffield, 1851

[2] N Pevsner, _Buildings of England: Staffordshire,_ Harmonsworth/Penguin, 1974, p.108

[3] History of Coppenhall

[4] L. Margaret Midgley (editor), _A History of the County of Stafford: Volume 5 - East Cuttlestone Hundred,_ Victoria County History, UK, 1959, pp.141-143

[5] Picture of Butterhill windmill

[6] _Butterhill Windmill_

[7] _Windmill Tower North West of Butterhill Farmhouse, Coppenhall_

[8] L Margaret Midgley, _A History of the County of Stafford: Volume 5, Coppenhall,_ pp.138-143

[9] Picture of Butterhill House, 1964

[10]

[11] L Margaret Midgley, _A History of the County of Stafford: Volume 5, Coppenhall,_ pp.138-143

[12] _Butterhill House_

title: Coppenhall

question: What does the text say about the Church of St Lawrence's construction in Coppenhall?

answer: The church was built in 1200 and was described by Pevsner as "a perfect 13th century village church, small but of great dignity." It was made a chapelry of Penkridge parish after the Poor Law Amendment Act of 1834. The church was extensively restored in 1866, which involved fitting a new roof, repairs to the windows and gable-ends, and the addition of a new circular window to the east gable. A new bell turret was also added with a taller spire, and a stone pulpit and circular font were installed at this time. In 1917, a memorial pulpit and lectern were bequeathed in memory of Charles Mort by his widow Helen. In 1932, an oak lych-gate was added in memory of Charles H and Lillie Wright.

critique: The answer should mention the church's capacity.