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MAJED J. NESHEIWAT CONVENTION CENTER (formerly the MID-HUDSON CIVIC CENTER) is a venue located in Poughkeepsie, New York, consisting of Mair Hall (a concert and convention hall) and the McCann Ice Arena (an ice skating venue). It was built in the 1970s as part of the general attempt at rehabilitation of the central district of the City of Poughkeepsie. It is located at 14 Civic Center Plaza, on a segment of what was formerly known as Market Street near the former Main Mall. The Poughkeepsie Grand Hotel, at 40 Civic Center Plaza, is adjacent on the same block and was originally designed to be constructed concurrently with the civic center and financed by Hilton, but the hotel construction was abandoned after the foundation was laid. Four years after the completion of the Mid-Hudson Civic Center, Radisson Hotels bought the hotel property and after a re-design of the original hotel plans, construction of the hotel resumed.

The Nesheiwat Convention Center, a private, not-for-profit community organization dedicated to providing cultural, recreational and educational opportunities to the Hudson Valley is a dual venue comprising Mair Hall and McCann Ice Arena. Mair Hall is a space with the capacity to host 3,050 seated spectators and large expos and trade shows.[1]

On December 3, 2018 the Mid-Hudson Civic Center issued a press release announcing the name change of the Poughkeepsie building to the Majed J. Nesheiwat Convention Center. Majed “Mitch” Nesheiwat is a long time resident and business man of Dutchess County New York. [2] Nesheiwat is the Founder and CEO of Gas Land Petroleum, which distributes petroleum products for companies such as Exxon Mobil, Shell, Sunoco, Gulf, Citgo, Phillips 66, and Conoco. Aside from distribution, Nesheiwat is a well-known and highly regarded real estate developer; he has diversified experience in all facets of the real estate industry. Nesheiwat made his mark in real estate through commercial development, specifically with retail plazas and residential sub-divisions.[3]

McCann Ice Arena

The McCann Ice Arena serves youth organizations, leagues and individuals for both recreational and competitive figure skating and ice hockey and offers open ice slots, group and private lessons, public skating sessions and private parties. McCann Ice Arena had briefly been the home of the Hudson Valley Bears and the Poughkeepsie Panthers, two semi- professional hockey teams in the 1980s.

Mair Hall

Mair Hall opened with a sold-out performance by Pete Seeger.

ECW

May 16, 1999 the Mid Hudson Civic Center was where ECW hosted their Hardcore Heaven pay-per-view event.

WWF/WWE

Between July 1984 and August 1986 the Mid Hudson Civic Center was where the World Wrestling Federation (now World Wrestling Entertainment) taped their internationally televised WWF Championship Wrestling. Notable wrestlers who wrestled in the building during this time include then WWF Champion Hulk Hogan, Junkyard Dog, “Macho Man” Randy Savage, André the Giant, Bret Hart, Brutus Beefcake, Greg “The Hammer” Valentine, The British Bulldogs, Ricky “The Dragon” Steamboat, King Kong Bundy, Big John Studd, Ken Patera, Tito Santana, Don Muraco, The Iron Sheik, “Mr Wonderful” Paul Orndorff, Hercules Hernandez, Adrian Adonis and Rowdy Roddy Piper (who also hosted his “Piper's Pit” segment on the show). Television commentators for the show at the Civic Center were WWF owner Vince McMahon (who at the time was only known outside of wrestling circles as an announcer and not the company owner) and “Professional wrestlings only living legend” Bruno Sammartino, with Jesse “The Body” Ventura occasionally joining the duo or filling in for Sammartino (Ventura also wrestled on the show occasionally as Randy Savage's tag-team partner, usually taunting the semi-retired Sammartino and challenging him to get in the ring).

The Mid-Hudson Civic Center was also where “Macho Man” Randy Savage (who had been billed as “the top free agent in pro wrestling”) first introduced Miss Elizabeth (his then real life wife) as his chosen manager on an episode of Championship Wrestling on August 24, 1985 (taped July 30). Heel managers Bobby “The Brain” Heenan, Mr. Fuji, “Classy” Freddie Blassie, Luscious Johnny V, and “The Mouth of the South” Jimmy Hart had been “bidding” for his services in the previous months and had gathered in the ring to hear who Savage had chosen.

The Center was also where Heenan Family members Big John Studd and Ken Patera faced André the Giant and S.D. Jones in a tag team match. After knocking Jones out of the ring, Studd and Patera then double teamed André, knocking him unconscious. Bobby Heenan then pulled a pair of scissors from his pocket which Studd used to cut The Giants long hair, with Vince McMahon claiming in commentary that they were raping André of his dignity. While it shocked the audience, in reality André had agreed to the haircut prior to the match as part of his ongoing feud with the 6'10" (208 cm) Studd over who was the true giant in professional wrestling.

The only title change at the Civic Center during WWF Championship Wrestling tapings was on June 17, 1985 when The U.S. Express (Mike Rotundo and Barry Windham) defeated “The Foreign Legion” (The Iron Sheik and Nikolai Volkoff), regaining the WWF Tag Team Championship they had lost to the pair at Wrestlemania on March 31, 1985. The Mid Hudson Civic Center has also host a handful of episodes of WWF Monday Night Raw between 1993 and 1995.

At the final taping of Championship Wrestling on August 5, 1986 (aired August 30), Harley Race was crowned the “King of Wrestling” after winning the 1986 King of the Ring tournament.

TNA One Night Only

December 2013 the Mid-Hudson Civic Center was where TNA taped their One Night Only Pay Per View.

Notable performances

Anthrax, Exodus and Helloween performed at the venue on May 12, 1989. It was the last show of the Headbangers Ball Tour.[4][5]

System of a Down, Mr. Bungle, Incubus, and Puya performed on February 18, 2000 as part of the SnoCore Tour.[6]

[1] http://www.midhudsonciviccenter.org/about-mhcc.php

[2] https://www.poughkeepsiejournal.com/story/news/local/2018/12/03/mid-hudson-civic-center-getting-new-name/2190641002/

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question: What does the text say about Majed J. Nesheiwat?

answer: Majed J. Nesheiwat is a long-time resident and business man of Dutchess County, New York. He is the founder and CEO of Gas Land Petroleum, which distributes petroleum products for companies such as Exxon Mobil, Shell, Sunoco, Gulf, Citgo, Phillips 66, and Conoco. He is also a well-known and highly regarded real estate developer. He has diversified experience in all facets of the real estate industry. He made his mark in real estate through commercial development, specifically with retail plazas and residential sub-divisions.

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question: What does the text say about what the Mid Hudson Civic Center was most famous for?

answer: The Mid Hudson Civic Center was most famous for being the venue for the World Wrestling Federation (WWF) from 1984-1986. During that period, it taped the internationally televised WWF Championship Wrestling. Notable wrestlers who wrestled there include Hulk Hogan, Junkyard Dog, Randy Savage, André the Giant, Bret Hart, Brutus Beefcake, Greg "The Hammer" Valentine, The British Bulldogs, and King Kong Bundy.

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HANS ROSENTHAL (2 April 1925 – 10 February 1987) was a radio editor, director, and one of the most popular German radio and television hosts of the 1970s and 1980s.

Life

Rosenthal grew up in a Jewish family on Winsstraße No. 63, in the Prenzlauer Berg district of Berlin. His childhood was marked by an aggressive antisemitic atmosphere, the result of rising German Nazism. His father died of kidney failure in 1937, after he had lost his job at Deutsche Bank AG. When his mother died of colorectal cancer in 1941, Hans and his younger brother Gert (born 1932) found themselves in the orphanage. Starting in 1940, Hans was forced to participate in unfree labour, while his brother was deported and like many other relatives died in the Holocaust. After Hans escaped the last deportation of German Jews (German: _Fabrikaktion_) in February 1943, he went into hiding and until 1945 was able to stay at a safe house in a small garden allotment in Berlin-Lichtenberg, where three German women helped him to survive.

After the war, Rosenthal began an apprenticeship as an assistant director at Berliner Rundfunk, a public broadcaster. However, he soon came into conflict with the supervisors of the Soviet Military Administration and from 1948 onwards worked for the _Rundfunk im amerikanischen Sektor_ (RIAS), a broadcaster controlled by the American occupying forces. He became chief entertainment editor and soon began hosting his own radio quiz shows: _Allein gegen alle_, _Wer fragt, gewinnt._, _Das klingende Sonntagsrätsel_, _Spaß muß sein_ (broadcast from London's Paris Theatre during the 1966 FIFA World Cup), _Opas Schlagerfestival_, _Da ist man sprachlos_, _Die Rückblende_ and _Günter Neumann und seine Insulaner_. Later on the German ZDF public television channel, he presented shows like _Gut gefragt ist halb gewonnen_, _Rate mal mit Rosenthal_, _KO OK_, _Das Schlagerfestival der 20er Jahre_, and _Dalli Dalli_, a co-production with ORF, an Austrian broadcaster. [Rosenthal with assistant Monika Sundermann on _Dalli Dalli_, mid 1970s] The most popular of these, the TV show _Dalli, Dalli_ (derived from or , “Hurry Up!”), aired 153 times from 1971 to 1986. Celebrities had to compete in several fast-paced quiz rounds and games of skill, critiqued by a panel of judges. Even today, Rosenthal is known in Germany for his catchphrase _Sie sind der Meinung, das war ... ?_ (“So you all think that was... ?”) when he thought something impressive had been done. The TV audience then answered _Spitze!_ (“Great!”), at which point Rosenthal would jump into the air. Because he was not tall, he was often referred to affectionately as _Hänschen_ Rosenthal (literally “Little Hans”).

He was a member of the Central Council of Jews in Germany from the 1960s onwards. He often took his vacation in Utersum on the island of Föhr, of which he was eventually made an honorary citizen. From 1965 until 1973 Rosenthal was chairman of the Tennis Borussia Berlin football club. Rosenthal started a foundation called _Schnelle Hilfe in Akuter Not_ (which roughly translates as “Fast Help in Dire Need”).

In 1980, Rosenthal published his autobiography _Zwei Leben in Deutschland_ (“Two Lives in Germany”). In 1986, along with Paul Spiegel, he started an international media agency, which promoted actors, TV presenters and artists. In the same year Rosenthal fell ill with stomach cancer and was no longer able to work as a TV host. He died in 1987 in Berlin, aged 61.

Awards

-   1972 – Federal Cross of Merit (Bundesverdienstkreuz)
-   1973 – Bambi
-   1974 – Goldene Kamera
-   1979 – Goldene Kamera
-   1984 – Goldene Kamera
-   1985 – Goldene Europa
-   1986 – Telestar

Other honours

-   1993 – The square in front of the RIAS building (now the home of Deutschlandradio Kultur) in Berlin-Schöneberg was named Hans-Rosenthal-Platz
-   2007 – A sports center in Berlin-Westend was named _Hans-Rosenthal-Sportanlage_

Books by Rosenthal

-   _Zwei Leben in Deutschland_, Bergisch Gladbach 1980,

Literature about Rosenthal

-   Leonard Gross : _The Last Jews in Berlin_, Simon & Schuster, USA 1982,
-   Thomas Henschke: Hans Rosenthal. _Ein Leben für die Unterhaltung. Schwarzkopf u. Schwarzkopf_, Berlin 1999,
-   Michael Schäbitz, Paul Spiegel, Curth Flatow: _Hans Rosenthal. Deutschlands unvergessener Quizmaster; bewusster, stolzer Jude. Jüdische Miniaturen_, Band 19. Stiftung Neue Synagoge Berlin - Centrum Iudaicum / Hentrich and Hentrich, Teetz 2004,

title: Hans Rosenthal

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question: What does the text say about Hans Rosenthal's early life?

answer: Rosenthal grew up in a Jewish family on Winsstraße No. 63, in the Prenzlauer Berg district of Berlin. His childhood was marked by an aggressive antisemitic atmosphere, the result of rising German Nazism. His father died of kidney failure in 1937, after he had lost his job at Deutsche Bank AG. When his mother died of colorectal cancer in 1941, Hans and his younger brother Gert (born 1932) found themselves in the orphanage. Starting in 1940, Hans was forced to participate in unfree labor, while his brother was deported and like many other relatives died in the Holocaust. After Hans escaped the last deportation of German Jews (German: _Fabrikaktion_) in February 1943, he went into hiding and until 1945 was able to stay at a safe house in a small garden allotment in Berlin-Lichtenberg, where three German women helped him to survive.

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question: What does the text say about Rosenthal's impact on Germany?

answer: Rosenthal was a radio editor, director, and one of the most popular German radio and television hosts of the 1970s and 1980s. He was a member of the Central Council of Jews in Germany from the 1960s onwards. He often took his vacation in Utersum on the island of Föhr, of which he was eventually made an honorary citizen. From 1965 until 1973 Rosenthal was chairman of the Tennis Borussia Berlin football club. Rosenthal started a foundation called Schnelle Hilfe in Akuter Not (which roughly translates as "Fast Help in Dire Need"). He was also a member of the Central Council of Jews in Germany from the 1960s onwards.

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answer: Rosenthal was a member of the Central Council of Jews in Germany from the 1960s onwards. He was chairman of the Tennis Borussia Berlin football club from 1965 until 1973. Rosenthal started a foundation called Schnelle Hilfe in Akuter Not, which roughly translates as "Fast Help in Dire Need".

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The PAKISTAN NATIONAL BASEBALL TEAM () is the national team representing Pakistan in international baseball tournaments and competitions. They are ranked as the top and one of the most successful baseball teams in South Asia, winning the first SAARC Baseball Championship 8-2 against Sri Lanka in 2011.[1] The team is currently ranked #24 in the world by the International Baseball Federation.[2] The highest rank they have achieved was 21st.

The Pakistani team has participated in many of the international and regional tournaments and has achieved many successes. It has won the Asian Baseball Championship _(C level)_ title in 2010, where they won 10-0 against Hong Kong in the final round,[3] and five titles at the Asian Baseball Cup, winning the last tournament in 2015.[4] The team qualified for the World Baseball Classic qualifier round for the first time where they lost 0–10 against Brazil and 0–14 while competing against Great Britain in 2016.[5]

The team is governed and controlled by the Pakistan Federation Baseball, which is represented in the Baseball Federation of Asia (BFA), having been ranked #5 in Asia just behind China respectively.[6]

Regional competition

Asian Baseball Championship

Pakistan have participated at the Asian Baseball Championship since 2003, and have competed in the competition ever since. The national team has struggled in competing against top Asian teams such as Japan, Chinese Taipei, and Korea, among others. Pakistan secured fifth position after coming victorious against Indonesia in the 2015 Asian Baseball Championship.

Asian Games

In all four Asian Games to include baseball, Pakistan have competed in the 2010 and 2014 tournaments, though they have not won the tournament once Pakistan secured their largest win 25-0 against Mongolia in Seoul.

Asian Baseball Cup

Pakistan have dominated the Asian Baseball Cup since its inception, and have competed in every year. Since 1997, Pakistan have never missed out on placing in the top 3 in any tournament, and is the only team to have achieved this feat. Pakistan also holds the record for most consecutive Asian Baseball Cup titles, having won five times in total, while the national team have been defending their title since the last four tournaments.

International tournament results

World Baseball Classic

  World Baseball Classic record                       Qualification record
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  Year                            Round               Position
  2006                            _Did not enter_     _No qualifiers held_
  2009                            _Did not enter_     _No qualifiers held_
  2013                            _Did not enter_     _Did not enter_
  2017                            _Did not qualify_   0
  2021
  TOTAL                           0/4                 –

Current squad

Honors and recognition

-   ASIAN BASEBALL CHAMPIONSHIP
    -   1ST PLACE, 2010 _(C level)_
    -   2nd place, 2009 _(C level)_
-   ASIAN GAMES
    -   5th place, 2010, 2014
-   ASIAN BASEBALL CUP
    -   1ST PLACE, 2006, 2010, 2012, 2013, 2015
    -   2nd place, 2001, 2002, 2004, 2009, 2017
    -   3rd place, 1997
-   SAARC BASEBALL CHAMPIONSHIP
    -   1ST PLACE, 2011

Records

-   LARGEST WIN — 25 - 0 Mongolia , (Seoul, 24 September 2014)
-   WORST DEFEAT — 0 - 17 (F/5) South Korea , (Guangzhou, 16 November 2010)

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title: Pakistan national baseball team

question: What does the article say about the pakistan National Baseball Team's international matches?

answer: The team has competed in many regional and international tournaments and has achieved many successes. The team has won the Asian Baseball Championship title in 2010, where they won against Hong Kong in the final round. They also won five titles at the Asian Baseball Cup. The team qualified for the World Baseball Classic qualifier round in 2016 where they lost 0-10 against Brazil and 0-14 against Great Britain.

critique: The response should include the teams the Pakistan National Baseball Team has played against.

critique: The response should include the team's ranking.

critique: The two 0-10 scores were against different teams.

critique: The answer should mention the Asian Baseball Championship.

critique: The team has won the Asian Baseball Championship title in 2010, where they won against Indonesia in the final round.

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question: What does the article say about the Pakistan National Baseball Team's career during the 2000s?

answer: They participated in the Asian Baseball Championship since 2003 and competed in the competition since then. They struggled in competing against top Asian teams such as Japan, Chinese Taipei, and Korea, among others. They secured fifth position after coming victorious against Indonesia in the 2015 Asian Baseball Championship. They have participated in all four Asian Games to include baseball. They have competed in the 2010 and 2014 tournaments, though they have not won the tournament once. They secured their largest win 25-0 against Mongolia in Seoul. They have dominated the Asian Baseball Cup since its inception. They have competed in every year. Since 1997, Pakistan have never missed out on placing in the top 3 in any tournament, and is the only team to have achieved this feat. Pakistan also holds the record for most consecutive Asian Baseball Cup titles, having won five times in total, while the national team have been defending their title since the last four tournaments. They did not enter the World Baseball Classic in 2006, 2009, 2013, and 2017. They did not qualify in 2021.

critique: "They did not enter the World Baseball Classic in 2006, 2009, 2013, and 2017. They did not qualify in 2021." - this is incorrect. The Pakistan National Baseball Team entered the World Baseball Classic in 2006 and 2009. They did not enter in 2013, but they did qualify in 2017. They did not qualify in 2021.

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critique: It is not stated when Pakistan has not entered the World Baseball Classic.

critique: Pakistan is ranked as the top and one of the most successful baseball teams in South Asia.

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[Early 80s vintages of Sassicaia] TENUTA SAN GUIDO is an Italian wine producer in the DOC Bolgheri in Toscana, known as a producer of “Super Tuscan” wine. It produces Sassicaia, a Bordeaux-style red wine.[1][2][3] The estate also produces a second wine, Guidalberto, and a third wine, Le Difese. Tenuta San Guido is member of the Primum Familiae Vini.

History

Tenuta San Guido was established by marchese Mario Incisa della Rocchetta, who was also co-owner of the race horse Ribot. Considered the seminal “Super Tuscan”, the name Sassicaia (Italian _sasso_ meaning “stone”, indicating a stony field)[4] originated in 1948 when first produced by Incisa della Rocchetta using Cabernet Sauvignon vines and for years only used for family consumption.[5] A story about these vines being sourced from Château Lafite-Rothschild,[6] was dismissed by Mario's son, Nicolò Incisa della Rocchetta, as the vineyard was planted from “cuttings from 50-year-old vines from a friend’s estate near Pisa”.[7] Though for years Sassicaia remained the marchese’s personal wine, his son Nicolò and nephew Piero Antinori convinced him to release it commercially, starting with the 1968 vintage, which was unveiled in 1971.[8] Initially there were only a few thousand bottles available, but those created a demand for more. Mario Incisa della Rocchetta hired consulting enologist Giacomo Tachis to further refine the wine while increasing production.[9]

At a 1978 _Decanter_ tasting of “great clarets”, a panel including Hugh Johnson, Serena Sutcliffe and Clive Coates awarded the 1972 Sassicaia first place over a field of 33 wines from 11 countries.[10]

In 1994 Sassicaia was granted its own DOC (Bolgheri Sassicaia DOC), the only wine from a single estate in Italy to enjoy this privilege.[11] Before that, and in similarity to other wines made outside the traditional DOC/DOCG regulations, Sassicaia was classified as an Indicazione geografica tipica (IGT). Initially it was a Vino da tavola.

Production

Tenuta San Guido cultivates fruit from several plots around Bolgheri, extending , with a grape variety distribution of 85% Cabernet Sauvignon and 15% Cabernet Franc.[12][13] The annual production is approximately 180,000 bottles.

The second wine, Guidalberto, was introduced in 2000. Its first vintage was composed of 40% Cabernet Sauvignon, 40% Merlot and 20% Sangiovese.[14] Newer vintages do not contain any Sangiovese.[15] The wine has an annual production of 150,000 bottles.

The most recently added wine, Le Difese,[16] is composed of 70% Cabernet Sauvignon and 30% Sangiovese, with an annual production of 120,000 bottles.

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question: What does the text say about where the vines are sourced?

answer: The vines are sourced from 50-year-old vines from a friend’s estate near Pisa.

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answer: Tenuta San Guido was established in 1948. Sassicaia was released commercially in 1968. In 1994, Sassicaia was granted its own DOC.

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text: The 1968 Sassicaia was released in 1971, not 1968; additionally the answer fails to mention that at a 1978 Decanter tasting the 1972 Sassicaia was award first place.

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question: Summarize how the wine is produced.

answer: Tenuta San Guido cultivates fruit from several plots around Bolgheri, with a grape variety distribution of 85% Cabernet Sauvignon and 15% Cabernet Franc. The estate produces 700,000 bottles a year. The first wine, Sassicaia, includes Cabernet Sauvignon vines from 50-year-old cuttings from a friend’s estate near Pisa.

critique: This information is incorrect and irrelevant to the question. It is not stated how many bottles are produced.

critique: The second wine, Guidalberto, is introduced in 2000. This is not mentioned in the response. The first sentence also does not make sense. It should be corrected.

text: The answer omits to mention the other wines, Guidalberto (originally composed of 40% Cabernet Sauvignon, 40% Merlot and 20% Sangiovese, but now no longer produced with Sangiovese), and Le Difese (composed of 70% Cabernet Sauvignon and 30% Sangiovese)

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BASKETBALL TRAINING CAMP IN ALICANTE SPAIN

An INTERNATIONAL BASKETBALL TRAINING CAMP IN SPANISH AND ENGLISH, with coaches and assistants from both Spain and the USA.

This is a DEVELOPMENT BASKETBALL TRAINING CAMP FOR CAMPERS FROM THE AGE OF 14 TO 18 who already have a minimum of 4-5 years playing experience.

An average of 4 hours per day devoted to basketball training: basketball training focused on individual technique, group training and competitions. Intense basketball training with a variety of teaching techniques are used to achieve optimum results.

A development BASKETBALL TRAINING CAMP WITH A RATIO OF 1 COACH PER 6-8 PLAYERS to ensure participants receive personalised training and support.

Regarding the age, we try to have a balance camp, and we form the training groups according to the age and basketball level.

The Camp will develop both individual and team Basketball techniques. Competitions are important, but not as much as DEVELOPING INDIVIDUAL BASKETBALL SKILLS.

The camp is designed for players who seriously want to improve their game.

An average 4 hours per day Monday to Friday of intense basketball training to improve your technique and get results.

  _Basketball lectures (30 min)_

On several days basketball training sessions starts or ends with basketball lectures covering a wide variety of topics:

-   Psychology and basketball
-   The 10 commandments of the bench
-   Learn by watching a basketball match
-   Being a basketball player: the pros and cons
-   Work and succeed
-   Shooting training and group training

  _Warm-up / strength and conditioning (20 minutes)_

-   Initial warm-up in whole group with a dynamic and fun game that adapts the rules of basketball
-   Games with stretches
-   Stretching in groups to begin concentrated individual technique sessions.

  _Individual Basketball technique training stations (12 minutes per station)_

-   intense ball hand-ling drills
-   shooting off the dribble
-   pass and play
-   receptions
-   playing without the ball
-   defense balance, defense press...

  _Dribbling & Shooting station (20 minutes)_

Basketball drills in real shooting situations designed to correct mistakes, improve technique and to help players perfect their mecha-nics:

-   free throw,
-   3 pt. shot,
-   pull-up jumper,
-   step back shot,
-   spin move,
-   euro-step, etc.

  _Teamwork in basketball (1 hour)_

Stations to develop team play with focus on reading the defense, passing situations, use of locks:

-   1 on 1, 2 on 2, 3 on 3, 4 on 4, 5 on 5
-   Games and competition

  _Coaches and assistant coaches_

-   David Gil, senior basketball coach and assistant coach in the Spanish League, is the sports consultant in charge of planning training sessions.
-   Camp coaches include Mladen Jegdic, FIBA senior basketball coach from Serbia; Shay Millar West, professional basketball player from US and other senior coaches.
-   Assistant coaches with extensive experience of coaching at youth levels and at camps
-   On-site physiotherapist at training sessions.

[Where is the International Language and Basketball Camp in Spain]

  Basketball Camp facilities

  _Players train every morning in indoor sports._
  _The basketball facilities are carefully selected to ensure the best conditions for players and avoid the heat and humidity of the summer months on the Mediterranean coast._
  _3 Sports Halls (18 hoops) near the hotel 10 or 15 minutes walking.
  Provided transports when needed.
  Both venues have female and male changing rooms and toilets, and comply with all safety requirements established by law._

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_[Basketball Camp Alicante arrival and departure information]_

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  _LEARN SPANISH, TAKE PART IN AN INTERNATIONAL BASKETBALL TRAINING CAMP, MAKE FRIENDS FROM DIFFERENT COUNTRIES, ENJOY THE BEACH AND HAVE FUN IN A SUMMER CAMP IN SPAIN_

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    ZadorSpain, a Language Services Company with more than 24 years of experience, organises and promotes Language & Basketball Summer Camps in Spain. ZadorSpain, operating in Vitoria since 1990 and in Alicante since 2004, organises study abroad programs for foreigners in Spain.

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question: Summarize the main context of this article.

answer: The author of this article is providing information on an international basketball training camp in Alicante, Spain. The author gives information on the age, the level of play, the coaching staff, and the facilities.

critique: The answer is missing a few details about the camp.

critique: The author is not the only one providing the information.

critique: The answer should mention the age range of the campers.

critique: The author is not the one providing information on the camp.

question: Summarize an average day at the basketball training camp.

answer: An average day at the basketball training camp is from 4-8 hours of basketball training. The camp is from Monday to Friday. The first 4-hours is basketball lectures. After lectures, the participants go for a 20 minute warm-up and strength and conditioning. The participants are then put into individual and teamwork stations for basketball skills training. The last hour of the day is for team skills.

critique: The last hour of the day is not for team skills.

critique: The answer does not mention the ratio of 1 coach per 6-8 players.

critique: "The last hour of the day is for team skills." - this is incorrect. The camp is from Monday to Friday, and the last hour of the day is for team skills.

critique: The answer should include the duration of the training camps.

critique: The final sentence is inaccurate, it does not meet the 4 hours of the day.

critique: The answer is incorrect. The first 4 hours of the day is not for basketball lectures.

critique: The answer should mention that the camp is for 14-18 year olds.

question: Would someone who finished this basketball training camp be considered equipped with good basketball playing skills?

answer: It may be implied that they would.


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_TWO WEEKS IN ANOTHER TOWN_ is a 1962 American drama film directed by Vincente Minnelli and starring Kirk Douglas, Edward G. Robinson, Cyd Charisse, Claire Trevor, Daliah Lavi, George Hamilton, and Rosanna Schiaffino. It was based on a novel by Irwin Shaw.

The film depicts the shooting of a romantic costume drama in Rome by a team of decadent Hollywood stars, during the Hollywood on the Tiber era. It contains several references to _The Bad and the Beautiful,_ a previous successful movie directed by Minnelli, also starring Douglas.

The story was seen by some as a depiction of the relationships among Tyrone Power, Linda Christian and Darryl Zanuck. At the time of its release, the film was seen as a box-office failure, with overall losses totaling approximately $3 million.

Plot

Once an established movie star, Jack Andrus has hit rock bottom. An alcoholic, he has been divorced by wife Carlotta, barely survived a car crash, and spent three years in a sanitarium recovering from a nervous breakdown.

Maurice Kruger, a film director who was something of a mentor to Andrus, is a has-been. However, he has landed a job in Italy, directing a movie that stars Davie Drew, a handsome, up-and-coming young actor.

Andrus is offered a chance to come to Rome and play a role in Kruger's new film. He is crestfallen upon arriving when told that the part is no longer available to him. Kruger's mean-spirited wife Clara doesn't pity him a bit, but Andrus is invited to take a lesser job assisting at Cinecittà Studio with the dubbing of the actors' lines.

While working, he socializes with the beautiful Veronica, but she actually is in love with Drew. The actor is having a great deal of difficulty with his part, and the movie is over budget and behind schedule. Kruger's stress is increased by the constant harping of Clara, resulting in a heart attack that sends the director to the hospital.

Andrus is asked to take over the director's chair and complete the film. Glad to do this favor for Kruger, he takes charge and gets the film back on schedule. The actors respond to him so much that Drew's representatives tell Andrus the actor will insist on his directing Drew's next film.

Proud of what he has done, Andrus goes to Kruger in the hospital, delighted to report the progress he's made, only to be attacked by Clara for trying to undermine Kruger and steal his movie from him. Andrus is shocked when Kruger sides with her.

An all-night descent into an alcohol-fueled rage follows. Carlotta goes along as a drunken Andrus gets behind the wheel of a car and races through the streets of Rome, nearly killing both of them.

At the last minute, Andrus comes to his senses. He vows to return home, continue his sobriety and get his life back on track.

Cast

-   Kirk Douglas as Jack Andrus
-   Edward G. Robinson as Maurice Kruger
-   Cyd Charisse as Carlotta
-   Claire Trevor as Clara Kruger
-   Daliah Lavi as Veronica
-   George Hamilton as Davie Drew
-   Rosanna Schiaffino as Barzelli
-   James Gregory as Tom Byrd
-   Mino Doro as Film producer Tucino

Production

_Two Weeks in Another Town_ was created by the same team that worked on _The Bad and the Beautiful_: director (Vincente Minnelli), producer (John Houseman), screenwriter (Charles Schnee), composer (David Raksin), male star (Kirk Douglas), and studio (MGM). Both movies feature performances of the song “Don't Blame Me”: by Leslie Uggams in _Two Weeks_ and by Peggy King in _The Bad and the Beautiful_. In one scene of the former, the cast watches clips from _The Bad and the Beautiful_ in a screening room, presented as a movie in which Douglas's character, Jack Andrus, had starred. _Two Weeks_ is not a sequel; however, the characters in the two stories are unrelated.

George Hamilton was cast as “a troubled, funky James Dean-type actor, for which I couldn't have been less appropriate” as he later admitted.[1]

In the scene where Jack Andrus searches for David Drew in nightclubs in Rome, the song is “O' Pellirossa” featuring the Italian singer and drummer Gegè Di Giacomo.

The adult subject matter ran into problems with the MPAA and the conservative studio executives at MGM. Joseph Vogel, the new studio head, wanted to transform the project into a “family film” and had it re-edited without Minnelli's input, reducing the total running time by 15 minutes. Both Minnelli and Houseman protested but to no avail. An orgy-party scene inspired by Federico Fellini's _La Dolce Vita_ was deleted as well as a melancholy monologue by Cyd Charisse that was supposed to humanize her character. Kirk Douglas later wrote in his 1988 autobiography that “this was such an injustice to Vincente Minnelli, who'd done such a wonderful job with the film. And an injustice to the paying public, who could have had the experience of watching a very dramatic, meaningful film. They released it that way, emasculated.”[2]

Reception

Critical

Initially, the film wasn't well-received by critics or the public. Bosley Crowther in his _New York Times_ review of August 18, 1962 wrote: “The whole thing is a lot of glib trade patter, ridiculous and unconvincing snarls and a weird professional clash between the actor and director that is like something out of a Hollywood cartoon.”

The film's reputation has greatly improved over time. David Thomson called it “underrated,” writing in _The New Biographical Dictionary of Film_ that it was “invested with such intense psychological detail that the narrative faults vanish.” Jonathan Rosenbaum wrote that it was “one of [Minnelli]'s last great pictures...The costumes, decor, and 'Scope compositions show Minnelli at his most expressive, and the gaudy intensity—as well as the inside detail about the movie business—makes this compulsively watchable.”[3]

Box office

According to MGM records, the film earned $1 million in the U.S. and Canada and $1.5 million elsewhere, resulting in an overall loss of $2,969,000.[4]

[1] George Hamilton & William Stadiem, _Don't Mind If I Do_, Simon & Schuster 2008 p 157

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title: Two Weeks in Another Town

question: Summarize the redemption arc of the main character, Jack Andrus.

answer: Jack Andrus is a once-successful movie star who is thought to be at the end of his career. However, he gets a role in a film being directed by his former mentor, Maurice Kruger. Andrus reveals to Kruger that he wants more out of the story, wanting to direct, as well. He fulfilled that wish, but then Kruger's wife, Clara, that after everything Andrus did to save Kruger, he did it in a way that undermined him, which pleased Kruger. The loss of Andrus has quite a clinical and brutal impact; he attempts to drink his cares way and drives his car recklessly through the streets of Rome. However, Andrus seems to lose his judgment in the chaos, and soon, the two manage to stumble and crash into a fountain. The story ends on a hopeful note and Andrus seems to want to return home to take care of his alcoholism- until then, he goes and has a nice drink or two with Clara.

critique: The response contains inaccurate information.

critique: The answer should mention Andrus' redemption.

critique: Andrus never revealed to Kruger that he wanted more out of the story.

critique: The flow of the last sentence is confusing.


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If you are in the market for the cheapest Rolex Submariner watch, well, it can be a little tricky. There are cheaper versions if you are not concerned for any of the extras, and only the basics. First of all, the watch is not made to be cheap by no means and this means the watch will not be cheap even when looking for the cheapest one available. It was the first divers watch ever to be made and the first watch that was able to reach depths of 100 to 330 feet below the water surface.

What Makes Rolex Submariner watch so Popular?[]

The Rolex is made from 904L stainless steel which makes the watch resistant to corrosion and very strong compared to other watches. Putting this into perspective, the 904L Steel is normally only used by aerospace or other engineering sectors. Most watches are typically only made of 316L steel, which, by no means is even remotely comparable. This durable watch will stand by you through almost any demanding and extreme weather conditions.[]

It is a wear-anywhere watch. No matter what color you decide, it is tasteful enough to wear with jeans and a t-shirt, but classy enough to wear with a suit. Besides the fact that it’s full of technical innovations, its infrangible case, and it is resale value could be more than what you paid for it originally. Do you really know what made this watch super iconic of all time? James Bond, that’s right, from the moment James checked his watch in “Goldfinger” the watch has been a timeless demanding watch of all time.

Which is the cheapest in all Rolex Submariner?

Review & shopping-tips of lowest-price Rolex Submariner and Information of the cheapest Rolex Submariner are always important factors when you began your search for this particular watch. After a little research that I found out for myself, the retail value should be around 7200 for a used watch.[]

After shopping around, I found that you can still get a brand new basic Rolex Submariner with no date available in many colors for the same price of 7500. Review & shopping-tips of lowest-price Rolex Submariner and Information of the cheapest Rolex Submariner can be found on Bob’s Watches website, which is where I found the lowest price of $7500.

There you have it guys, going with the basic Rolex Submariner will always, in the end, be the best deal.

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question: Summarize the popularity of the Rolex Submarine.

answer: It is a wear-anywhere watch. It's full of technical innovations. It can be easily worn with jeans and a t-shirt but classy enough to wear with a suit. The Rolex Submarine was James Bond's watch of choice. Its infrangible case, which is resistant to corrosion and very strong, is a good selling point.

critique: The answer should mention that the watch is not cheap.

critique: The answer omits the fact that the Rolex Submarine is made from 904L steel, which makes it resistant to corrosion and very strong.

critique: The Rolex is not only popular because of its appearance in James Bond films. There are also two other factors which are important, so that should be mentioned.

critique: The answer should mention that the Rolex Submariner is the first watch to reach depths of 100 to 330 feet below the water surface.

critique: The first sentence is unnecessary and should be removed.

critique: "It can be easily worn with jeans and a t-shirt but classy enough to wear with a suit." - this is redundant because the watch was already described as a "wear-anywhere" watch.

question: How cheap can the Rolex Submarine get?

answer: The Rolex Submarine can get as cheap as $7200 for a used watch.

critique: The answer should mention that the cheapest Submariner is $7500.

critique: The article does not state that the Rolex Submarine can get as cheap as $7200 for a used watch.

critique: The article says that a used watch can be bought for $7200. It says nothing about a new watch costing $7200.

critique: The answer should mention that the cheapest new watch is $7500.

critique: The answer is incorrect. The Rolex Submarine can get as cheap as $7500 for a brand new basic Rolex Submariner.


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Sorry in advance, my new year's resolution was to try my hand at writing at least once a week, so this is my sloppy first attempt at a pointless short story. Bear with me, it really is pretty short.

	I looked down and saw the little pock marks on the long bruises I called arms, and rolled down my sleeves. There was a whistling sound in my head driving me bad shit mad.

...

	So he looked at me with his sad face, with his petty remorse and his puppy dog eyes. “I have to do this, and I’m offering you a place in my committee because I want you to be here with me, making more money than you already do and hopefully living a better life.”

	I was fuming but something was gnawing at me in the back of my head. What if he was saying this kindly, not sarcastically? It took me a second to register that he wasn’t faking any emotions.

	I realized that the entire life I had known him he was a real, authentic individual. I guess the past several years had taken its toll on me, and I may have become slightly cynical. I looked up and into his eyes and saw no dark spots of mal-intent. He was a businessman, yes, and a wealthy and calculated one at that. But he had a core, sensible and clean, that he had always held within him since before he was picking my sorry ass off the floor after fights in junior high. He legitimately cared for me, but as I usually did, I dug deeper. I thought about his goals. He had a family, and however poorly he treated his kids, the real kindness you can find in a man isn’t reflected by how often he treats his children, but simply how he treats them. Molding them to have traits for success isn’t a poor thing of him to do at all, and when he was kind and loving to them it was golden with no itemistic parts. He never treated them to ice cream or toys as rewards, they had birthdays and christmas, but even then maybe a surprise toy wasn’t the worst thing in the world for them. It was more the principle that a reward system was right for his kids, he would rather them be content with what they had. It was important to him, contentedness, the rich, bussiness-expanding, effluent douchebag.

	He just gave them his holy words and that was more than enough to have them happy for that day and give them a lingering dad-high for the rest of the week.

But in the end, he valued his family over me. He knew that in the end, he would have to do something about me, and bringing me in was the best he could do. No, he just wanted to do it, the difference being that I could tell he wanted this all along, for me to with him.

I selfishly said no.

I told him I had more important things to do than to be in his heartless rich-boy 401k club and told him my family relied on me and it was all lies, every word. I wanted to tear up and give him the hug I had held in since junior high, but my head was somewhere else. It was as if somebody else had taken over my body and was headstrong, pessimistic, and a complete and utter liar. I told him to fuck off, and I told him to kill himself. I wanted to be dead. My family hated me and I was going down the rabbit hole. I was going to be homeless in a week and a day if by tomorrow he decided to go through with his plan.

	I walked up, sarcastically thanked him, feinted him a handshake and then punched him in his jaw. As hard as I possibly could. Who did he think he was? Toying with my emotions as he did.
	 He took another blow to the face. Somebody other than me was doing it, I swear. I was next to the man doing it, looking at HIM over his shoulder, but he was getting bloodier and bloodier. I got up and saw blood on my knuckles. That’s weird, I thought. There was no blood from my first hit on him. His lip split on the third blow. I shrugged, confused, and left the room. I could hear him crying. Maybe it was me. My world was bending, swirling into a hole, and I wasn’t even fighting the current dragging me into it. I laughed and fell into the rabbit hole, cursing love and intentions, where they could never hurt me again. I looked up, saw the sky and broken glass, which was falling, increasing in velocity, but never passing me. It was a curious sight, I wonder why it wa-

title: Out of place and into the dark (Cheesy as fuck title)

question: Why does the narrator think that the man treats his children poorly

answer: The narrator thinks that the man treats his children poorly because he doesn't give them ice cream or toys as rewards.

critique: The answer does not mention the principle the man believes in.

critique: The man does give his children toys but he doesn't give them a reward for having them.

question: Why does the narrator hit the man?

answer: He thinks the man is playing with his emotions.

critique: The answer should mention that the man is offering the narrator a job.

critique: The answer should mention that the man is offering him a job.

question: Under what circumstance did the narrator and the man meet?

answer: The narrator and the man met in junior high.

critique: "The narrator and the man met in junior high." - is inaccurate. The man was picking the narrator's sorry ass off the floor after fights in junior high.

critique: The answer is incorrect. The narrator and the man met in the narrator's workplace.

question: What is the likely cause of the narrator's current social position.

answer: The narrator is likely a drug addict.

critique: The evidence presented within the narrative doesn't warrant the conclusion.

critique: There is no evidence to suggest that the narrator is a drug addict.


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The Road Adventure to end all Road Adventures!

	This story begins on a Monday. Both Jack and Michael T. Fox have decided to go on a road trip to Arizona from North Carolina. They have both called in sick, Jack the pest control man and Michael T. Fox who is not related to the Back to the Future star, but a different one that works at a car wash for baby strollers, so it is more of a stroller wash than a car wash. They figure it will take two days to drive to Arizona. So they packed up their winter clothes and mountain climbing gear. They also brought fifteen hundred dollars in pure gold to sell to the Native Americans in Arizona. Then at five o’clock in the morning they set off to Arizona. About an hour into the trip Jack already wants to turn back around because he left something in his Radioflyer wagon at home. They circle back around and travel back to Jack’s house where he picks up his loaded pistol stashed under his two year old child’s toys in the wagon in the garage, after he retrieved the gun they were back on the road.
	Fourty-one hours later they are driving through the Arizona desert, when all of a sudden Michael T. Fox starts seeing what he thinks are hallucinations. He sees Lt. Dan the three legged cheetah! The three-legged cheetah is running alongside of their 1985 Honda Accord, and Michael T. Fox who is not driving, rolls down his window, “What do you want?” he says. The cheetah replies, “Your souls or I’ll steal your gold!” Jack shouts, “ NO Way! Take our gold!” Michael T. Fox says, “No way, take our souls, they are useless anyway.” Lt. Dan begins to wag his tail at extreme speeds and after twenty minutes Lt. Dan now owns Jack and Michael T. Fox’s souls! Within seconds Lt. Dan vanishes and an Indian trading mart appears.
	“We are here” Jack says. They both get out and walk up to a giant Native Americans named Chief Inspector Gadget. Everyone greats each other with a simple “How.” Jack begins to barter with the good Chief. “We have fifteen hundred dollars worth of gold in the trunk of our vehicle and we will sell it to you for twenty thousand dollars.” The Chief takes a deep breath and replies “No.” Jack starts to think about another offer but just decides to shoot the Chief in his old kneecaps. “That’s for World War I!” yells Jack. Michael T. Fox is unimpressed. Suddenly Academy Award winning actor Sean Penn walks into the teepee hands Jack a check for twenty thousand dollars, and he walks out, hot wires Jack’s car and drives away into the sunset. “What do we do know?” says Jack. “How about we pray to our new God?” Michael T. Fox states. They both say a few words in French and then Lt. Dan appears like a genie in a glass bottle. “Head East and I will find you guys transportation.”
	Jack and Michael T. Fox begin to head for the door Chief Inspector Gadget gets up from behind the counter of his teepee store and he raises up a bow and arrow, “One shot, two kills.” He says with vengeance on his Native American mind. He fires the biggest arrow in existence and it sails right through Jack and Michael T. Fox. Lt. Dan says, “Wow that was awesome.” And then the cheetah jumps into a 1994 Power Wheels motorized Jeep, a vintage model, and he drove away into his mysterious cheetah lair or cave or boat or where-ever he lives.
	The moral of this tale is never get into a situation where you end up in the cross-hairs of a sharp shooting Chief.

title: The Road Adventure to End All Road Adventures!- Humor Short Story Feedback appreciated!

question: What are some possible interpretations of the symbolism of the three-legged cheetah?

answer: He could be a paranormal being, as is established by the story. He could be death. He could just be a metaphor for people who are morepowerful than the characters in the story. He could also represent jack and Michael making a deal with the devil.

critique: "He could just be a metaphor for people who are morepowerful than the characters in the story." - this is incorrect. The cheetah is Lt. Dan and not a metaphor for anyone.

critique: "He could be death." - this is incorrect. Lt. Dan is death.

critique: This is not a great description of what may be occurring in the story.

text:
"morepowerful - correct this typo to "more powerful"
"jack" - should be "Jack"

question: What aspects of colonialism does this fictional tale share with actual history in the US?

answer: The original developer's of the area are erased; Native Americans are not considered a part of the community. A false idea of superiority is established. Manipulation of the culture-as-market (the story is filled with Barbies, Dinsey figures, and an Academy Award-winning Hollywood star) is used to forward an idea (the exaggeration of the Chief Inspector Gadget's handling of the situation is evidence that the story is operating out of incomplete history).

critique: "The original developer's of the area are erased; Native Americans are not considered a part of the community. A false idea of superiority is established. Manipulation of the culture-as-market (the story is filled with Barbies, Dinsey figures, and an Academy Award-winning Hollywood star) is used to forward an idea (the exaggeration of the Chief Inspector Gadget's handling of the situation is evidence that the story is operating out of incomplete history)." - this is confusing and should be rewritten.

critique: Incomplete history of the Native Americans

critique: The answer should consider the use of a racial slur.


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_*M.A.D.E. = Marques Associées Distribution Event (Own Label Event)_

The winners of the 2018 M.A.D.E.  Awards were selected on 15th February 2018, at the École Hôtelière des Métiers de la Table in Paris. The jury composed of professionals  from the distribution sector and journalists from the specialised press selected six winners from the 25 innovations that were nominated in the following categories: INNOVATION IN THE TECHOLOGY/PROCESS; INNOVATION IN THE PACKAGING; INNOVATION IN THE RECIPE/FORMULA/INGREDIENTS; BREAKTHROUGHT INNOVATION; INNOVATION IN THE MARKETING/POSITIONING/STORY TELLING; and OPEN INNOVATION/CO-CREATION.

Following a secret ballot, the Best of M.A.D.E excellent award, wich goes to the best innovation overall, was also selected.

The M.A.D.E Awards and the “Best of M.A.D.E” award were presented to the winners at 6 p.m on 20th March during the dedicated ceremony in the TV studio. During the cocktail following this ceremony, chefs JEAN-MARIE BAUDIC and PIERRE LORTIE were at the M.A.D.E. Your Cuisine Lab to present 4-handed culinary demostrastions for the public´s enjoyment.
The winners were there and tasted the winning products!

INNOVATION IN THE TECHNOLOGY / PROCESS CATEGORY:[]LE BONTÀ – READY-TO-EAT NATURALLY COOKED VEGETABLES
Three-product range of ready-to-eat cooked vegetables. Unflavoured and cooked without water. All of our vegetables are 100% Italian and 100% organic. White beans, red beans, and chickpeas.

Booth: H33 – Adriana VANNETTI – +33 (0)6 22 96 17 96 – adriana.vannetti@lebonta.it

INNOVATION IN THE PACKAGING CATEGORY:[SERVO ARTPACK – BIO-SOURCED AND COMPOSTABLE PACKAGING FILM]SERVO ARTPACK – BIO-SOURCED AND COMPOSTABLE PACKAGING FILM
Metallic duplex light-blocking film made from renewable and 100% compostable compounds. All the materials used in the manufacturing process are compostable: cellulose, adhesives, inks, and varnishes.

Booth: C18 – Philippe ROUILLE – +33 (0)7 77 98 00 56 – philippe.rouille@artpack.ch

INNOVATION IN THE RECIPE / FORMULA / INGREDIENTS CATEGORY:
[ESCAL – 12 STUFFED MUSSELS TO ENJOY]ESCAL – 12 STUFFED MUSSELS TO ENJOY
Stuffed mussels are classics of French gastronomy. The originality of this product is that they are presented in a crunchy edible shell.

Booth: S12-T13 – Alexia MULLER – +33 (0)3 88 60 05 56 – alexia.muller@escal.fr

BREAKTHROUGH INNOVATION CATEGORY:
[POULEHOUSE – POULEHOUSE]
POULEHOUSE – POULEHOUSE
Poulehouse presents an innovative concept that is respectful of all forms of life: a slaughter-free production system, that provides the first eggs from chickens that are not slaughtered at the end of their productive life.

Booth: X38 – Sébastien NEUSCH – +33 (0)6 76 15 08 00 – sebastien@poulehouse.fr

INNOVATION IN THE MARKETING/POSITIONING/STORY-TELLING CATEGORY:
[ALPINA SAVOIE – LES PATES FILIERE FRANCAIS (AUTHENTIC FRENCH PASTA)]
ALPINA SAVOIE – LES PATES FILIERE FRANCAIS (AUTHENTIC FRENCH PASTA)
A range of high-quality pasta with strong commitments: 100% French, fair-trade, and authentic. We grow our wheat using methods and know-how that promotes our health and that of our lands. Our wheat is entirely pesticide-free. We work with more than 60 French farmers. We commit to a threeyear contract and a stable price that is independent of fluctuations on the world market.

Booth: F17 – Emma SAUTOU – +33 (0)7 60 73 47 97 – esautou@alpina-savoie.com

OPEN INNOVATION / CO-CREATION CATEGORY:
[LACREM S.A. / FARGGI MENORQUINA – N'ICE ICED COCKTAILS]
LACREM S.A. / FARGGI MENORQUINA – N’ICE ICED COCKTAILS
Four varieties (Mojito, Margarita, Piña Colada, and Daiquiri Strawberry) designed to adhere to ice cream production requirements. The cardboard packaging is lightweight and easy to use. Moreover, it is perfectly adapted to the security requirements that are increasingly being imposed at festivals and concerts.

Booth: T15 – Emmanuel ROUILLER – +33 (0)6 71 18 03 43 erouiller@farggimenorquina.com

www.madeparis.com

question: Summarize what kind of competition M.A.D.E. is.

answer: M.A.D.E. is a competition that awards the best innovations in the distribution sector. The jury is composed of professionals from the distribution sector and journalists from the specialized press. The jury selects six winners from the 25 innovations that were nominated in the following categories: INNOVATION IN THE TECHOLOGY/PROCESS; INNOVATION IN THE PACKAGING; INNOVATION IN THE RECIPE/FORMULA/INGREDIENTS; BREAKTHROUGHT INNOVATION; INNOVATION IN THE MARKETING/POSITIONING/STORY TELLING; and OPEN INNOVATION/CO-CREATION. The jury also selects a winner for the Best of M.A.D.E award.

critique: The jury selects six winners from the 25 innovations that were nominated in the following categories: INNOVATION IN THE TECHOLOGY/PROCESS; INNOVATION IN THE PACKAGING; INNOVATION IN THE RECIPE/FORMULA/INGREDIENTS; BREAKTHROUGHT INNOVATION; INNOVATION IN THE MARKETING/POSITIONING/STORY TELLING; and OPEN INNOVATION/CO-CREATION. The jury also selects a winner for the Best of M.A.D.E award.

critique: The jury doesn't select the Best of M.A.D.E. award.

critique: The answer is a copy-paste of the article. It should be rewritten.

critique: The answer should mention the award ceremony.

critique: The jury also selects a winner for the Best of M.A.D.E award. - the jury does not select this winner

question: Summarize some of the winners of former years.

answer: No answer

critique: The article lists the winners of the 2018 M.A.D.E awards.

critique: The response misses to provide an answer to the task.


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Where am I? I don’t think I’m home; all I see is black with little outline of furniture. Ok, lets think about last night, where was I? Fuck, I don’t remember! Ok, What’s the last thing I remember? Driving to the bar I think. Fuck. I don’t even know that or what time it is, better check my phone. Shit! It’s not here.

(RING,RING,RING)

My phone! It’s on the table over there.
“Hello?” No response
“Hello?”
“Turn Around”
“What?” With shakiness in his voice.
“Turn Around” said with a harsh tone, almost a yell.
The man slowly moved his head to see behind him. There was rope hanging from a wooden banister, which was now visible in the phone light. The end of the rope was tied in a noose. Under the rope was a rustic small chair with a piece of paper nailed on the seat.
“What the fuck is going on?” No response
“ANSWER ME!” No response.
He slowly inched his way to the chair to grab the piece of paper. With a swift tear, he took the paper from the chair and began to read.

Dear Mr. Roberts,

The punishment for your sins has come. You will no longer be able to go on living a fake life. You must pay for what you did. I will never forget what you did.

Sincerely,

Caretaker

Who is this Caretaker, and what did I do to piss him off? He doesn’t really think I’m going to kill myself. Does he? I don’t even know what he’s talking about. I’m a good person! He’s got the wrong guy, I wouldn’t hurt a fly!

With the light of the phone, Mr. Roberts found the door in the dark room. He turned the door nob, and gave a steady push. The door flew open, but all he could see was the light of his phone. Everything was still black and dark. He started to inch his way through the door. His foot didn’t touch anything on the first step. He reached a little farther. Again, his foot only touched air.

This is strange, what’s going on?

He went back into the room, and shined the light of phone. This time there was a .44 magnum sitting on the bed fully loaded. This time the note was tied to the barrel of the gun. He picked up the gun and carefully took the note and began to read.
Dear Mr. Roberts,

I am doing you a favor. Take the out I have provided for you. It’s time to pay for your sins. I will never forget what you did.

Sincerely,

Caretaker

How the fuck does this guy think he’s doing me a favor? There’s no chance in hell I would ever go through with suicide. He planted a noose, and a gun because of some so called sins. This guy is fucking crazy!

He took the gun, and walked back to the open door and took aim into the darkness.

(Bang!)

He heard nothing but the sound of the gun firing. He took aim again.

(Bang! Bang!)

He heard nothing but the sound of the gun firing. The next thing he did was open the gun and took out a bullet. With the bullet laying in his palm, he dropped it over the sea of darkness. This time he heard nothing.

Mr. Roberts turned around and walked back to the bed inch by inch. He laid back down, and notice a sharp pain coming from his left arm. He lifted the covers of the bed and shined his light and saw a knife dipped in his own blood. Under the knife was an another letter, and quickly opened the note and began to read.

Dear Mr. Roberts,

This is the last time I will offer this. Either take the out I have given you, or accept the punishment of being here for eternity. I will never forget what you did.

Sincerely Caretaker

Fuck you! I don’t need this. It wasn’t my fault, I didn’t see her in the street, she didn’t move. Why, didn’t she move? It was an accident. It wasn’t going to help if I stayed around and went to jail. I called 911, I did the right thing or at least I think. What am i kidding, I did a terrible thing.

Tears in his eyes he threw the knife into the darkness, and fell to his knees clutching the gun in his hands. He checked it to see how many bullets were left. He counted one.

That’s all I need. One shot through my temples and I’m gone. I know I should have stayed and took my punishment like a man. I was scared though, doesn’t that mean anything? I truly am sorry.

He brought the gun up to his head. With his finger trembling on the trigger, he slowly pressed the barrel to his temple.

“Our Father in heaven,
hallowed be your name.
Your kingdom come,
your will be done,
on earth, as it is in heaven.
Give us this day our daily bread,
and forgive us our debts,
as we also have forgiven our debtors.
And lead us not into temptation,
but deliver us from evil.”

(Bang!)

The gun shot a bullet through his brain and killed him instantly. His body fell to his stomach while the blood from his wound began to fill every crease of the floor. With the gun still in hand, He laid there sin free.

title: Inevitable Punishment

question: Why is the dead man sin-free?

answer: For unspecified reasons the Caretaker removes all of the protagonist's sins when he dies.

critique: The answer should clarify that it's because the protagonist has just killed himself.

critique: The passage suggests this is an act of salvation upon the victims request.

critique: The answer is a bit ambiguous. The protagonist is sin-free because he killed himself.

text: The answer isn't clear but Christian doctrine suggests that he is sin-free because he was remorseful. Though there could be an argument that the protagonist has committed the ultimate sin in killing himself.

question: For what does the Caretaker hold Mr. Roberts responsible?

answer: Mr. Roberts is held responsible for killing a woman in an accident.

critique: The answer could be phrased as a complete sentence.

critique: The Caretaker does not specify what Mr. Roberts is responsible for.

critique: The answer is wrong. Mr. Roberts is not held responsible for killing a woman in an accident.

critique: The Caretaker doesn't hold him responsible for killing a woman, he holds him responsible for not taking the opportunity to kill himself.

critique: The answer should clarify that Mr. Roberts killed the woman in an accident.

critique: Doesn't mention all the sins Mr. Roberts thinks he's committed.

critique: The Caretaker doesn't hold Mr. Roberts responsible for killing a woman in an accident. He holds him responsible for killing a woman in an accident.


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ACE HOTEL DOWNTOWN LOS ANGELES, originally built as the CALIFORNIA PETROLEUM CORPORATION BUILDING and later known as the TEXACO BUILDING, is a , 13-story highrise hotel and theater building located at 937 South Broadway in downtown Los Angeles, California. It was the tallest building in the city for one year after its completion in 1927, and was the tallest privately owned structure in Los Angeles until 1956. Its style is Spanish Gothic, patterned after Segovia Cathedral in Segovia, Spain.

The building contains the historic UNITED ARTISTS THEATRE, the flagship theater built for the United Artists motion picture studio. The theater was later used as a church by pastors Gene Scott and his widow Melissa Scott under the name “University Cathedral”. In October 2011, Scott's Wescott Christian Center Inc. sold the building to Greenfield Partners, a real estate investment company located in Westport, Connecticut, for $11 million.[1] It was converted to a hotel, and opened in 2014. The hotel is part of the Ace Hotels chain.

United Artists Theatre period

[Street facade on Broadway.] The theatre was designed by the architect C. Howard Crane of the firm Walker & Eisen for the United Artists film studio formed by D. W. Griffith, Charlie Chaplin, Douglas Fairbanks and Mary Pickford.[2] The theater, a classic movie palace, was one of many constructed by United Artists and served as a major premier house. The theater occupies three floors of the 13-story building and has a 2,214-seat auditorium.[3] Like many movie theaters, the seat rows sink in toward the front of the orchestra section, so ticket holders there must look up at the stage.[4]

University Cathedral period

[Cinema-theatre-church marquee and entrance.] The building was first leased by televangelist Gene Scott in 1989, to be used as the location from which to broadcast the live Sunday services of his ministry. Scott held his first Sunday service there in 1990 and continued to hold Sunday services there until his death in 2005. A designated historic monument in itself, the building was for many years topped by the historic “Jesus Saves” neon signs (originally from the Church of the Open Door). They were located in the rear lower roof, one facing the west and one north, until September 10, 2011, when one sign was removed by crane. The building was claimed to house the largest collection of Bibles in private hands. After leasing for thirteen years, Gene Scott purchased the building in 2002. Following Scott's death, services continued to be held at the Los Angeles University Cathedral by Melissa Scott, the widow of Gene Scott, with services broadcast over TV, shortwave radio, and the Internet.

Ace Hotel conversion

The building has been completely restored and renovated to serve as a luxury boutique hotel called ACE HOTEL DOWNTOWN LOS ANGELES. It features 182 rooms, a pool, a restaurant and three bars, as well as the restored theatre.[5] It opened on January 16, 2014. In December 2014, Greenfield Partners put the building up for sale, seeking about $100 million as the sale price.[6] In May 2015, Chesapeake Lodging Trust bought the building for $103 million.[7]

The theater was restored as well and re-opened on February 14, 2014, with concerts by the British rock band Spiritualized.[8] L.A. Dance Project, a dance company founded by choreographer Benjamin Millepied, will also take residence in the Theatre at Ace Hotel.[9] Red Hot Chili Peppers performed a fundraiser at the Ace Hotel on February 5, 2016 in support of presidential candidate Bernie Sanders.[10]

Broadway Theater Historic District

The building is a historic district contributing property in the Broadway Theater District on the National Register of Historic Places. It is also a Los Angeles Historic-Cultural Monument.[11]

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title: Ace Hotel Los Angeles

question: What does the text say about the United Artists Theatre?

answer: The United Artists Theatre is the flagship theater of the Ace Hotel. It is located in a 13-storey building and was originally used as a church until it was converted to a hotel. The theater occupies three floors and has a 2,214 auditorium. It has been completely restored, and it houses the L.A. Dance Company and the Red Hot Chili Peppers' fundraiser.

critique: It should be specified that it was converted to a hotel. It should read: "until it was converted to a hotel"

critique: The answer should mention what the theater was used for before it was an Ace Hotel.

critique: The theater was used as a church by pastors Gene Scott and his widow Melissa Scott under the name "University Cathedral".

critique: The theater was not used as a church. It was used as a church by pastors Gene Scott and his widow Melissa Scott.

critique: The theater was used as a church by pastors Gene Scott and his widow Melissa Scott under the name "University Cathedral". It was not used as a church until it was converted to a hotel.

critique: The theater was not used as a church, it was used as a church.

text: The response should include that the building was converted to a hotel and was opened in 2014.

category: accuracy

question: What does the text say about the building in the 2010s?

answer: In 2011, the building was sold to Greenfield Partners for $11 million. The building was converted to a hotel, and opened in 2014 as the Ace Hotel Downtown Los Angeles. In 2014, the theater was restored and re-opened with concerts by the British rock band Spiritualized. In 2015, the building was sold to Chesapeake Lodging Trust for $103 million.

critique: The answer omits the building's history prior to 2011.

critique: The building was sold to Greenfield Partners in 2011.

critique: The answer should mention the building's historic value.

critique: The answer should mention the building's historic significance.

critique: The answer omits the building's history prior to the 2010s.

question: What does the text say about the land that the building is on before it was constructed?

answer: No answer

critique: The answer should mention that the land was vacant.

critique: While the answer can't be found, more knowledge about the land where the building is would actually be more informative than no information in this case.


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Written by Nisha Nambiar | Pune | Updated: June 8, 2016 6:12:43 pm

 [monsoon, monsoon arrival, india monsoon, monsoon in india, monsoon onset, kerala, kerala monsoon, kerala news, kerala rain, rainy season, met department] People enjoying in the Arabian sea against the backdrop of monsoon clouds in Kochi, Kerala (PTI Photo)

The Met Department on Wednesday declared the south-west monsoon onset over Kerala, a day later than what was announced in the earlier forecast. However with a plus or minus four days error, the Met Department have said that has come in well within the forecast period.

“We had maintained that the south west monsoon would touch the Kerala coast before June 9 and after observing the strengthning of winds and rainfall activity over Kerala, Lakshadweep and coastal Tamil Nadu we declared the onset over Kerala after checking for all the parameters,”said IMD, Pune Director (weather forecast) Sunita Devi after issuing the monsoon onset in the country.

WATCH VIDEO: WHY THE MONSOONS ARE DELAYED & SHOULD WE WORRY?

She said in the present condition, the south-west monsoon seems to be in a normal pace and even as there was a slight delay of one week, it should cover the country well within the period announced as of July 15.

The conditions observed by the Met Department included monitoring the 14 stations of Kerala reporting widespread rainfall for the last 48 hours with more than 60 per cent of the station reporting rainfall on June 8. The other parameters included the intensity of the westerly and west southwesterly winds over the South Ariabian sea, and the outgoing longwave radiation value which basically shows the cloudiness over the region.

ALSO READ: Why a late monsoon may not matter

“These conditions were fulfilled on Wednesday in our monitoring. We were monitoring the same from May 10 this year. Earlier when there was an enhanced rainfall activity over Kerala during May 31-June 3, the westerly winds had not reached the required depth. It is not just the rainfall but the winds_both in speed as well as depth that determine the setting of southwest monsoon over Kerala as the process to a certain extent ensures the further advancement over the peninsular India subsequently,”said Sunita Devi.

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The onset was delayed by a week and the statistical model used by the department had declared that the monsoon onset is likely to set over Kerala on June 7, with a model error of plus or minus four days. The onset of the southwest monsoon over Kerala represents the start of the rainy season for the country. The normal date is June 1 and the model to predict the onset using six predictors_minimum temperatures over north-west India, pre-monsoon rainfall peak over south peninsula, outgoing long wave radiation over South China sea, lower tropospheric zonal wind over southeast Indian ocean, upper tropospheric zonal wind over east equatorial Indian ocean and outgoing long wave radiation over the south west Pacific region. The model has been issuing forecast for the onset by this indigenously developed model which gives the date with a plus or minus 4 days.

The monsoon, which marks the beginning of the rainy season in the country, is crucial for India’s farmers, especially with several states grappling with drought-related conditions.

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question: What does the text say about how monsoons form?

answer: No answer

critique: The answer should mention that the text doesn't say anything about how monsoons form.

critique: There's no answer because the text doesn't say much about the process of how monsoons form, except for their general characteristics.

question: What does the text say about the southwest monsoon onset over Kerala?

answer: The southwest monsoon onset over Kerala was declared by the Met Department on Wednesday. The Met Department maintained that the southwest monsoon would touch the Kerala coast before June 9. The southwest monsoon onset over Kerala represents the start of the rainy season for the country. The normal date is June 1.

critique: The summary includes a lot of information that isn't in the text.

critique: The date is irrelevant to the question. It should be removed.

critique: The answer should mention the plus or minus four days error.

critique: The date of the monsoon onset is irrelevant to the question.

critique: The answer should mention that the monsoon was a day later than expected.


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The EL ARO MASSACRE () was a massacre in Colombia which occurred on October 22, 1997 in the municipality of Ituango, Department of Antioquia. 15 individuals accused of being leftist supporters of FARC were massacred by paramilitary groups. Perpetrators also raped women, burned down 43 houses, stole cattle and forcibly displaced 900 people.[1]

In 2007, the Third Section of the Council of State ordered the Colombian state to pay damages to the victims' families.[2]

On May 31, 2018, the Supreme Court of Justice of Colombia declared El Aro Massacre as a crime against humanity[3][4]

Controversy

On April 23, 2008, Colombian President, Álvaro Uribe publicly announced that a former paramilitary fighter, Francisco Enrique Villalba Hernández, had accused him of planning the massacre, along with General Ospina, General Rosso and paramilitary leader Salvatore Mancuso, among other individuals. Uribe had been Governor of Antioquia between 1995 and 1997. According to Uribe, Villalba had said that he (Uribe) had thanked the perpetrators of the massacre for freeing 6 hostages, allegedly including one of his cousins, that Uribe's brother had provided 20 paramilitary members for the crime, and that they had met in the town of La Caucana to plan the massacre.[5][6][7]

Uribe answered that he had never been to La Caucana and that these declarations showed inconsistencies because they mentioned the participation of a General in the supposed meeting who had died months prior to the events. Uribe also said that since 1988, Colombian authorities would know “where I've been, where I have slept and with whom I have met”.[8][9] The Colombian newsweekly Revista Semana reported that the paramilitary in question, Francisco Enrique Villalba Hernández, had not mentioned Uribe nor the rescue of any hostages during previous declarations made more than five years ago, when he was sentenced for his own role in the massacre. The magazine also listed a number of possible inconsistencies in his most recent testimony, including the alleged presence of General Manosalva, who had died months before the date of the meeting where the massacre was planned.[10]

Opposition Senator Gustavo Petro had questioned Uribe about the use of a Department of Antioquia government owned helicopter that was allegedly employed to transport the paramilitaries to the region of El Aro to perpetrate the massacre. During a press conference, Uribe denied these claims saying that all the helicopters had a recorded flight history. He was also questioned about a beeper message intercepted to one of the paramilitaries involved in the massacre that said “_Te recuerdo llamar al Gobernador. Preséntame y que yo lo visito en la tarde_” (I remind you to call the governor. Introduce me and I will visit him in the afternoon). Uribe defended himself from these claims saying that the criminals could have used the term “governor” as slang to refer to anything and denied having met any of the perpetrators of the massacre.[11]

Imprisoned paramilitary leader Salvatore Mancuso said that the victims of the massacre had died in combat and were not civilians but guerrillas. Mancuso was sentenced to serve 40 years in prison for the massacre.[12][13][14]

After his extradition to the United States, Mancuso has continued to testify via satellite as part of the Justice and Peace process. On November 18, 2008, Revista Semana reported on Mancuso's declarations about the 1997 El Aro massacre, in which he stated that the AUC had received logistical help from the Colombian military and police. Mancuso said that three helicopters, one belonging to the guerrillas, another from the Colombian military and one from the Antioquia governor's office were present in the zone during the events.[15]

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title: El Aro Massacre

question: Summarize the damages caused by the El Aro Massacre.

answer: 15 individuals were massacred, 43 houses were burned down, 900 people were forcibly displaced, and cattle were stolen.

critique: It is omitted that the perpetrators also raped women.

critique: The answer could put it more locally by saying it occurred in a municipality and department.

critique: The answer should mention that women were also raped.

critique: The answer should mention the rape of women.

question: Summarize the reparations made for the El Aro Massacre.

answer: No answer

critique: The response needs to include the reparations made for the El Aro Massacre.

question: Summarize the controversy around Álvaro Uribe's role in the massacre.

answer: Uribe was accused of planning the massacre by a former paramilitary fighter. He denied the accusations and said that he had never been to La Caucana, where the massacre was planned. He also denied having met any of the perpetrators of the massacre.

critique: The response misses to mention that Uribe was accused of planning the massacre along with General Ospina, General Rosso and paramilitary leader Salvatore Mancuso.

critique: It is omitted that Uribe was accused of planning the massacre by a former paramilitary fighter. He denied the accusations and said that he had never been to La Caucana, where the massacre was planned. He also denied having met any of the perpetrators of the massacre.

critique: The response misses to mention that Uribe denied the accusations and said that he had never been to La Caucana, where the massacre was planned. He also denied having met any of the perpetrators of the massacre.

critique: The response should include the specific accusations against Uribe.

critique: The response doesn't mention the accusations of Uribe's use of a government helicopter.

critique: It is omitted that Uribe denied having used a helicopter to transport the paramilitaries to the massacre site.

critique: The response should include that Uribe was accused of planning the massacre by a former paramilitary fighter.


text:
I was born full-blooded princess with a bit of fairy powers. I was raised in an intricate stone four-story palace. My room was on the top floor. It had a pink Fisher Price vanity set and an extravagant tunnel cage for my dwarf hamster, Muffin. Along the wall I had a bay window, where I could look out and see the vast and perfectly groomed ground below. I was a powerful and graceful princess, who had everything ever needed. In this Kingdom I grew into a Queen, I was taught to be full of knowledge and love.

My father was the mighty King. He had a grand office and would care for every guest. My home had many rooms to explore. The basement was a dungeon; I was never allowed to go down the elevator. The dim chapel was great for hide and seek with my three siblings. The oval arrangement room with deep red satin chairs was the ideal place to read The Box Car Children in peace. Men would tend to the grounds and maids would dust the cherrywood stair railing. My father's guard, Steve, was a terrific man. He always worked on certificates and ascended to the basement. Occasionally, he snuck me dark chocolates from his suit pocket to satisfy my young, sweet tooth then press his finger to his smile, swearing me to secrecy.,

The castle was magical. Each morning it would fill with guest who had traveled from all walks of life in search of my father’s compassionate care. The visitors were remarkable; they always had a different age, race, shape, and size, as if they were from another land. The one common thread among them was that they always seemed so dense and weighted down by something depressing. As if the wicked White Witch from Narnia had cast them into a land of perpetual winter. My father, in his Kingly responsibility, would help them in their desperate state. They would always depart hugging my father and express gratitude to my mother for her hospitality. I believed my father had a power that could save people from anything.

The palace  was widely known for curing people who had a particular dark enchantment, the one where a body could fall into a deep slumber and never wake from it. My father would lay the individual in a beautiful personalized bed. We had a room specifically for the beds. The family would find that perfect one to help the cursed be cured. No sleeping beauty would ever stay long, because my father was mastered in his task. Each day before I would walk to school, I would pat their beds and tell them to sleep good. My proper mom would kindly correct, "Well, sleep well."

At school my best friend was Rachel. She lived in a boring suburb with her mom and brother. Although she was not a full princess, she was a faithful friend with true potential at eventually living as a royal. We would paint each other’s nails, watch princess Disney movies, and practice walking upright with books on our head. We shared a common goal in becoming Queens one day, marrying a cootie free Prince and having a castle of our own.

I love my childhood. I have no clue what made me fully believe that I was a whimsical princess. I suppose I was caught in pure bliss from my ignorance and youth. Perhaps I was hopeful that my books and Disney movies were real. Time and reality have revealed many truths to me. I came to realize I was raised in the loft of a funeral home, where my father helped the grieving memorialize their loved ones. Despite the truths, I still want to retain my prior lookout of life. I still love to look deep into rooms and search for the secrets and comforts they hold. My parents are still hardworking and loving people. Reality doesn't have to strip away beliefs that are rightfully mine. It simply adds credibility to those beliefs. I will always be a Mortician's Princess.

title: Mortician's Princess. My first post and hopefully more to come. Comments welcome!

question: What does the story say about how to become a mortician?

answer: No answer

critique: The story mentions nothing about how to become a mortician.

critique: No answer is given in the passage, meaning there isn't one

critique: There is no answer to this question in the passage.

question: How does the narrator's belief about being a princess change throughout the story?

answer: She knows that she is not a real princess. She realizes that she was raised in the loft of a funeral home. However, she still wants to retain her prior outlook on life.

critique: it is omitted that she still feels like a princess.

critique: Omit "She knows that she is not a real princess." as it contradicts the following line.

critique: The narrator's belief about being a princess changes from thinking she is a real princess to knowing she is not a real princess to still believing she is a princess.

critique: The narrator retains her belief that she is a "mortician's princess"

critique: The narrator's belief doesn't change. She was a princess and she still is.

critique: The narrator's belief about being a princess doesn't change throughout the story.

critique: The answer should mention that she still believes she's a princess.

text: The answer should mention that the narrator thought she really was a princess during her childhood.

question: What does the story say about Rachel?

answer: The narrator's best friend was Rachel. She lived in a boring suburb with her mom and brother. Rachel was not a full princess, but she was a faithful friend with true potential at eventually living as a royal. The narrator and Rachel shared a common goal of becoming queens one day and marrying a cootie-free prince.

critique: It is omitted that Rachel was not a princess with fairy powers like the narrator, who believed she was a full-blooded, powerful princess.

critique: The narrator's parents are morticians, not royalty.

critique: The narrator and Rachel are the same person.

critique: It is omitted that the narrator and Rachel painted each other's nails, watched princess Disney movies, and practiced walking upright with books on their head.

question: What were the actual rooms and areas in the funeral home the narrator imagined were something else?

answer:
Her father's office which is actually the funeral home reception area
She imagined the basement dungeon as a place to play hide-and-seek with her siblings.
The chapel was depicted as a wonderful place to read books, but it was actually the funeral chapel.

critique: The answer omits the narrator's bedroom and the room where they kept the beds for the sleeping beauties.

critique: The answer should mention the room with the beds.

critique: The answer should include the room where the narrator's father tended the dead.

critique: The answer could be more specific about the rooms.

critique: This response is used verbatim in the article. This needs to be added as a list.

text: The text doesn't say or even imply that the narrator's father's office is the reception area.