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ISAAC LOLETTE “IKE” JONES (December 23, 1929 – October 5, 2014) was an American film producer and actor. In June 1953, he became the first African American graduate of the UCLA School of Theater, Film and Television and was the first African American to serve as a producer on a major motion picture.[1][2][3][4]

Jones was relatively unknown outside of the film industry until 1970 when he publicly announced that he had been secretly married to actress Inger Stevens from 1961 until her death of a drug overdose in April 1970.[5] Jones’ claim was backed up in court by Stevens' brother, Carl O. Stensland.

Early life and education

Jones was born in Santa Monica, California, and attended Santa Monica High School.[6]

He studied motion picture production at the UCLA School of Theater, Film and Television. While at UCLA, he also played end for the Bruins and was named to the 1952 All-Pacific Coast Conference team.[7] After graduating from UCLA, Jones was drafted in the 25th round by the Green Bay Packers in the 1953 NFL Draft, but declined the offer.[8]

Career

In 1953, Jones worked as an actor in bit parts and served as an assistant director on _The Joe Louis Story_.[9] Later on in the decade, Jones worked as an assistant producer for Hill-Hecht Lancaster Company. After that production company folded, Harry Belafonte hired him as vice president of development for Harbel Productions.[10] In the 1960s, Jones headed Nat King Cole's Kell-Cole Productions.[11] After the singer's death, Jones was hired as a producer on _A Man Called Adam_, a film starring Sammy Davis Jr. This was the first time that an African American was hired as a producer on a major motion picture.[12][13]

Personal life

On November 18, 1961, Jones and actress Inger Stevens were married in Tijuana, Mexico.[14] At Jones' suggestion Stevens agreed to keep their union a secret, in part, as to not harm her, or his, show business career.[15] The demands of their careers meant they spent much time apart, straining their marriage and they eventually separated. In April 1970, while the couple were estranged and living apart, Stevens died of a barbiturate overdose that was eventually ruled a suicide.[16] As Stevens left no will at the time of her death, Jones filed to become administrator of her estate thus making news of the marriage public. Despite being unable to produce a valid marriage license, Superior Court Commissioner A. Edward Nichols ruled in Jones' favor and appointed him administrator of her estate in August 1970. Jones announced that he would use a portion of the $171,000 of Stevens’ estate to open a mental health care clinic in Watts, Los Angeles. At the time, Jones managed a chain of convalescent homes.[17]

Around that same time, Jones had made a number of bad investments, straining his finances.[18]

Later years and death

In 1995, he became the first recipient of the Oscar Micheaux Award, presented by the Producers Guild of America.[19]

On October 5, 2014, Jones died “of complications from a stroke and congestive heart failure”[20] in an assisted-living facility in Los Angeles on October 5, 2014. He was 84.[21]

Legacy

A short street called Ike Jones Road near John Wayne Airport in Santa Ana, California is named for Ike Jones.

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title: Ike Jones

question: Summarize Jones' works before he became the first African American to be hired as a producer on a major motion picture?

answer: Jones acted in bit parts in movies and worked as an assistant director and an assistant producer before he was hired as a producer on a major motion picture. The Joe Louis Story was his first film appearance as an actor (bit roles). He also worked as an assistant producer and an assistant director in that film. "A Man Called Adam" was the first film he oversaw as a producer on a major motion picture.

critique: "as an assistant director and an assistant producer before he was hired as a producer on a major motion picture." - this is incorrect. Jones worked as an assistant director on The Joe Louis Story and an assistant producer for Hill-Hecht Lancaster Company.

critique: "The Joe Louis Story was his first film appearance as an actor (bit roles)." - this is incorrect. Jones worked as an actor in bit parts and served as an assistant director on The Joe Louis Story.

question: Are there any less obvious reasons why Stevens and Jones decided to keep their marriage a secret?

answer: No answer

critique: There are personal and career-related reasons why their marriage was a secret

critique: The answer should mention that the text does not say.

critique: The answer should mention that the article does not mention any other reasons.

critique: The answer should state that the article does not mention any other reasons.

question: Why did the Superior Court grant Jones the custody of Stevens estate though they could not produce a valid marriage certificate?

answer: Jones married Inger Stevens in 1961 but they kept the marriage a secret to protect their careers. Stevens died in 1970 and still, no one knew about the marriage. Jones announced to the media that he would use a part of the $171,000 from Stevens's estate to open a mental health care clinic in Watts.  Stevens had no will and did not leave a testament. In the absence of a will, the laws of the state determine the distribution of properties.

critique: The answer does not explain why the court ruled in Jones's favor.

critique: The answer is irrelevant to the question.

critique: The response is missing a few key details, and some of it is irrelevant to the question.

critique: "Jones announced to the media that he would use a part of the $171,000 from Stevens's estate to open a mental health care clinic in Watts.  Stevens had no will and did not leave a testament. In the absence of a will, the laws of the state determine the distribution of properties." - this is irrelevant because it's not asked.


split: train

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Strange Encounters

"It's weird officer, real weird." Mark Henderson was at the local police station in Alberton, Ontario on 4: 36am August 8th, 1951. Strangely enough, a building he's never seen, in a town he's never been to before, yet familiar.

"All right smooth talker, let's take it from the top once more. I know there's not much to it as you've continued to repeat but let's see if anything else pops out at you and then we will pay for your gas home." Officer Dan Richardson was becoming more and more tired with the story was hearing.

There just can't be anyway. Dan thought becoming more and more enraged within. The moment he walks out of here I'm just going to throw this case out. Hocus pocus my ass, what does he take me for, an idiot?! At best this is the best damn way to get free gas.

"Well like I said before, I had just filled up at half past 10pm, so I could drive out and get to the place that sells tobacco by the pound still..."

Yes, yes we all go out to New Market for cheaper cigarettes, not relevant.

"...and I was driving out to Bakersfield like I said,"
He didn't refer to it as Bakersfield before? The puzzled Officer thought.

"...on the way there I had to swerved out of the way of a truck with these god forsaken bright lights. I guess I was a bit sleepy Officer and woke up in the nick of time but after that I found myself just driving around an unfamiliar road.

I was having awful headaches, for a bit around that time too. Images that started accompanying them are hard to distinguish but almost always included me in a white setting... I don't know it sounds crazy now. Anyways, I pulled over till they subsided and drove straight here in hopes that you could help me figure out where I am so I can get home, but I still can't remember where that was again. Some rest will cure this forgetfulness. I feel like I've been up all night." Mark felt like that was all the information that he could give, he couldn't remember what town he lived in nor his wife or his phone number. He kind of felt a helpless feeling fall over him.

"We'll now that you've told us where you were driving to we can call that regions station and see if there is a match to your name anywhere close to there. It should only take a few hours."

Not long after that another Office came into the room and asked if Officer Dan could speak with him for a moment.
What did the results turn up Frank?

"He wasn't lying when he said things were weird. It turns out that there isn't  even a Bakersfeild anywhere near here. In fact, you have to drive 14 hours north to get to a small town called Bakersfeild." Officer Frank said as he started to debrief.

"...here's where things get truly disturbing. When we searched his name through the local police department Mark has a missing person out because his wife...."

"Wow, his wife sure gets worried quickly. Seems a bit much don't you think he's only been gone for half a day at most. Can't remember his name or town he lives in, probably doesn't remember setting out on a road trip. Likely to get away from her if she's that crazy." Office Dan remarked crudely as if this was all an elaborate funny joke.

"If you'd let me finish, his wife reported him missing August 8th, 1950, sir. This was reported after she spent a full day returning home from a place that was 8 hours away from their town. She reported being in the passenger seat of a driverless car after being at a gas station for an unknown reason. All she could remember before waking up was that there was a blinding white light that she couldn't help but look at. It actually says 'forced' in the report." Frank said growing more and grimmer as he read from the file between his trembling hands.

Officer Dan, started to sit in the closest seat he could find. He couldn't believe that Mark was 14 hours away from home. That would make his whole time scale false. Not to mention the fact that he has been missing for a full year, a full year exactly he would later realize.

He began to think about the crazy aspects of them all, his wife's story at the time; driverless cars, being at a gas station for no reason, it all makes sense now, only after hearing Marks story.

"Sir there is one more thing in the reports." Frank said with a grave look in his eyes.

"What more could it be?"

"The wife had three cuts into her skin going the length of her back; she said that's the first appearance  of them in her life. It was like they were skillfully cut as the doctors said there was no way any doctor could stitch a cut that clean without some kind of pain. She reported none."

"All right Frank thanks for all the intel." Dan has a hard enough time giving gratitude in the first place and was finding it particularly challenging to give it with what he just learned.

The door opens to the interrogation; with it brought an energy that mimetic death. Officer Dan began relaying the frightening news to Mark, which still hasn't sunk in, himself.
"One last thing before we send you on your way home to your wife, if you will Mark. Your wife reported three cuts on her back that she had never seen before that night. Could you remove your shirt and pants please, I just want to know if we should have medical look at you first." Officer Dan asked Mark in the most genuine and sincere way he could.

"No problem Sir, it was starting to itch a bit anyways. It'll be nice to readjust it." Mark said in a cheerful way. For he sees this all as a blessing. Finally, he can see his wife and start the laughing process.

As Office Dan brought his coffee cup down from a big deep, delicious gulp, the liquid left his mouth as fast as it came in. in one fellow motion Office Dan vomited, dropped his cup, and tripped on his own two feet.

With his eyes wide open from shock; he gazed at a man whose skin, from head to toe, was scalped. Only his muscles were visible. Each and every muscle strand picked clean of its protective layer of skin. No blood was seeping through, it was as if there was its own invisible skin that covered him. Which is likely why he hasn't miraculously died.

As Mark turned around to confront a mirror, the last thing to pass through his mind was his beautiful wife; he pictured the way her soft cherry red hair flowed over her shoulders like a creek over an edge. Her rosy cheeks gently glowing in the sun. It was comforting to his mind to have such a lovely mental image cross it because once his  eyes focused on the mirror, his hideously deformed body sent his body into a trauma that it couldn't handle and  at  10:29PM August 8th Mark Henderson collapsed dead.

As for Dan Richardson, well he wishes that the story ended there.

title: [SF] Strange Encounters

question: Summarize the source of tension in the story.

answer: At the beginning of the story, a man named Mark shows up at the police station with nobody having any idea of where he came from or why he is there. He seems disoriented, but appears to hold on to his identity, at least at the beginning. As he tells his story, it's revealed that he stated getting lost three years earlier. It appears his wife was in the car with him at that time, as she reported a similar scenario, however, she was missing for a year.

critique: The answer is incorrect. Mark was missing for a year, not three years.

critique: It is omitted that when Officer Dan questions the man to remove his shirt and reveals that he is missing his skin. (And metal rods are instead what supports his muscles.)

critique: The response inaccurately mentions that Mark's wife was missing for three years, however it was only a year.

critique: The answer is incorrect. Mark's wife was not in the car with him three years ago. She was in the car with him the night he disappeared.

critique: This is incorrect. The woman was missing for a year and the story happened in 1951, not three years earlier.

critique: The story does not state that Mark stated getting lost three years earlier.

critique: The story does not state that Mark got lost three years earlier.

critique: The response inaccurately mentions that Mark stated getting lost three years earlier, however he was missing for a year.

text: This answer lists more than one source of tension. Since the prompt asks for THE source, the answer should probably be narrowed to something like, "A man named Mark shows up at a police station with amnesia that may be caused by an ET encounter."

category: coverage


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**The Pro.**

You swing your car into the dingy lot in front of Gutter Ball's and kill the engine. You sit there for a few moments preparing yourself. Almost game time.

You hit the trunk release and get out of the car. The rain stopped about an hour ago and for the first time this week the evening air is cool rather than muggy. Opening the trunk, you retrieve you bag and head toward the entrance, passing Ten Pin's truck on the way.

Gutter Ball's is the kind of place where men take the game of bowling very seriously. Despite it's dim, dingy interior, the lanes are well-kept and gleam with fresh oil. It's like stepping directly into a hurricane sometimes, the balls roaring down the lanes sound like approaching thunder and you can feel the punctuating booms in your chest as they strike the pins.

Classic rock plays nonstop at Gutter Ball's. At the moment Don Henley is lamenting about a certain hotel he never should have stayed in. Gutter Ball is behind the counter chatting up a leggy brunette with an amazing case of acne. Gutter is no prize himself, though at well over 6' 4" his sheer mass seems to cause some women's panties to loosen and from what you can glean from the conversation, it seems to be working for him at the moment.

The place is packed tonight, you knew it would be. Everywhere people are gathered in small groups either at the bar or down in the alley. The chatter is so loud you can barely hear the music. You like it that way though, the chaos helps you concentrate. You can see a much larger crowd than the rest gathered at the far end of the alley, obviously occupying both of the last two lanes. That must be Ten Pin's crowd of admirers. Looking closer, you see him stand up and get into form. He takes a deep breath, moves forward 3 paces and throws a clean strike.

*Good,* you think, *I hope he's already warmed up.*

As you approach the counter Gutter glances at you in annoyance only briefly before resuming his conversation with the brunette.

"I swear. Just by *hearin*,'" he tells her.

"Ain't no way," she says.

Gutter holds up one finger. "Wait for it," he says.

Frustrated, you glance toward Ten Pin's groupies once more and see him going through his motions again. His release is silky smooth, the ball screams down the lane. Gutter stabs his finger in the brunette's direction.

"*That* one's a strike," he says. The brunette whips around to follow the sound. A half-second later Ten Pin's ball slams into the pocket with a crash- not a pin stands. The brunette jumps up and down and giggles with glee.

"AMAZING!" she exclaims. "Do it again! *Please?*" she whines.

"In a sec', sweetheart," he says, finally turning in your direction.

"I don't know you," he says, frowning. "The fuck do you want?"
"I'd like a lane." you tell him. "Down alley next to Ten Pin if you've got one."

Gutter's gaze loosens a bit and he raises an eyebrow at you."Ten Pin, huh?" he eyes you up and down, frowning a little once more. "You for real?" he asks.

You lean over the counter and regard Gutter closely, trying to appear intense.

"You just pay attention," you tell him. "Keep your ears peeled." you smile at Gutter and wink. For a moment he only stares at you and then he cracks a huge grin and slaps you on the shoulder.

"I like you, kid!" he exclaims loudly. Gutter gestures toward the brunette. She smiles at you politely, obviously uninterested. "This here's Sally," he says. She nods in your direction. "What's you name, son?" he asks.

"English," you tell him. "You can call me English."

"English, huh?" Gutter says, his frown returning. Gutter glances at Sally and she giggles once again.

"Well, you go ahead and see to your lane," he says, "*Mr.* English." Sally can't help but laugh loudly this time.

"Thank you," you tell him. Part of you really wanted to like Gutter but another part of you wanted to shove his stone face into the counter-top.

You take your score sheet and head down toward the end of the alley.

title: The Pro.(short fiction)

question: Summarize the narrator's relationship with Ten Pin.

answer: The narrator and Ten Pin are both bowling at the same time at Gutter Ball's. The narrator wants to challenge Ten Pin to a game. The narrator is also aware of Ten Pin's admirers.

critique: The narrator isn't aware of Ten Pin's admirers.

critique: The narrator is not aware of Ten Pin's admirers.

critique: Ten Pin's admirers is not the proper relationship with the narrator and Ten Pin.

critique: The narrator is not bowling at the same time as Ten Pin.

critique: The narrator and Ten Pin are not bowling at the same time.

critique: The narrator's relationship with Ten Pin is not mentioned.

question: Summarize how the narrator feels about bowling.

answer: It seems the narrator is a fan of the sport, and they are excited to play a game. The narrator seems to be a skilled player.

critique: The narrator is not excited to play a game.

critique: The narrator is not excited to play a game. They are excited to play against Ten Pin.

critique: The narrator isn't a fan of bowling, they just like to play it.

question: Summarize the narrator's relationship with Gutter Ball.

answer: The narrator is a newcomer to the bowling game and wants to play. They approach the counter and ask Gutter Ball for a lane. Gutter is annoyed at the narrator speaking to him, he's busy talking to a woman, but once he sees what the narrator has to offer, he cracks a grin and matches the narrator's intensity. When the narrator asks for a lane next to Ten Pin, Gutter is unfazed, especially when the narrator claims to be called English. He's more interested in the woman with whom he's chatting.

critique: The narrator is not a newcomer to bowling.

critique: 'They approach the counter and ask Gutter Ball for a lane.' - this is incorrect. The narrator approaches the counter and tells Gutter that he wants a lane next to Ten Pin.

critique: The narrator's name is English, not Mr. English.

critique: Gutter Ball was not interested in the narrator until they managed to impress him. He asks the narrator's name. Then he returns to talking with the woman while the narrator makes his way to the lane.

text: It's omitted that Gutter is seemingly impressed with English for wishing to play next to Ten Pin.


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So, you’ve expressed interest in taking up arms and exacting revenge upon all walrus-kind. Or perhaps you’re wondering what they taste like. Regardless, there are a number of danger that you may face along the way. With that said, I must first warn you of the insatiable hunger of the common walrus. To that end, each GWI (General Walrus Infantry) such as yourself will be issued an Over-overcoat (patent pending) which will be lined with raw fish. You will also be issued a net launcher and gun that fires tranquilizer darts- by the way, we very, very strictly monitor the tranquilizer supplies, so don’t be “darting out” on me, you got that pipsqueak?! Secondly, These walrus have been known to forcibly sex their enemies into a catatonic state, or death if you get lucky, so hold on to your butts.

Transportation’s already been lined up, and it’s nothing but the finest. An antique biplane will carry you from here to the sand-swept wasteland of Nova Scotia, a land of which little is known, because no man has ever returned to tell about it, and if one did, he had an accent so asinine that nobody could understand him, even if they were able to take him seriously. From there you will travel atop the Great Nameless Whale (he’s not mysterious or dangerous, he just changed his name needed to dodge some bill collecting dolphins) through the Arctic Septagon to the Sand Palace, home of all walrus royalty. Feel free to converse with the GNW as you travel, but be careful not to bring up the topic of supply-side economics, as there is absolutely no chance you’ll live to regret ignoring this warning.

Upon your arrival, you will be expected to perform the Dance of the Elders, which is eerily similar to the “Electric Slide,” but with more exaggerated upper-body movements. Tradition dictates that you’ll be invited into the palace to feast with the Royal Council of Walruses and enjoy the finest accommodations a structure build entirely from frozen sand could possibly hope to offer. It is recommended that you bring several blankets, as they provide both warmth- which is in short supply- and because they can act as vectors for “biological suckerpunches” when combined with the “Just-Add-Blanket SealPox” packets, should your mission go pear-shaped.

Assuming you’ve made it into the palace safely, having danced properly and avoided discussing supply-side economics with the GNW, You’ll need to eat whatever they serve, and do so with great gusto- 1:4 odds it turns out to be the GNW- or run the risk of giving them the impression that they cook poorly, which would cause their self-esteem to plummet (the only television they can get in the Arctic Septagon is the Food Network). According to our intelligence, they believe desserts to be the work of the One With Inverted Tusks, which is either a mythical beast akin to Christianity’s Satan, a severely disfigured walrus with a particularly strange case of Down Syndrome, or an elaborate, yet surprisingly transparent, hoax put on by the walrus media to beef up their ratings.

Once you have made it safely into the guest wing of the palace, remove the five water-proofed burlap sacks you’ll find in your gear. Then go from room to room, gathering all the towels, tiny soaps, and individually packaged nuts that you can carry. Finally, you must extricate yourself from the palace which should be simple since, y’know, it’s made of sand. Just meet back at the LZ whenever your mission is complete.

title: [HM] Getting Back at Those Walruses That Abused My Generous All You Can Eat Buffet Policy.

question: Summarize the mission plan.

answer: The narrator (the most important person in the tale) will be carried to Nova Scotia by a biplane. There he will board the Great Nameless Whale, and after he reaches the Sand Palace, he will feast with the walruses there. He will then eat the walrus (or something), and dance the Dance of the Elders with the walruses.

critique: The narrator is not the most important person in the tale.

critique: The response should include that the narrator needs to gather up towels, soaps, and nuts before leaving the palace.

critique: The narrator is not the most important person in the tale. The narrator is a General Walrus Infantry.

question: What does the story say about how to prepare seafood?

answer: No answer

critique: The answer should mention that the story doesn't mention anything about seafood preparation.

critique: The response misses to mention that the story does not mention anything about how to prepare seafood.

critique: The answer should mention that the story does not mention anything about seafood preparation.


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critique: "One tutor says the platform helped them earn 5,000 RM per month." - this is incorrect and should be omitted.

critique: The tutor's income is not relevant to the question.

critique: The answer omits that the tutors also praise the privacy and security of the platform.

critique: This should note how the users reacted to the premium options.

question: List all the tutors on the site.

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critique: The answer is not in a coherent sentence.

critique: The tutors are not explicitly named in the article, so it is not possible to list them.

critique: The tutors are not listed in alphabetical order.

critique: Adding initials to the tutors would make the tutor list easier to read

critique: The model should include the complete list of tutors.

question: What locations do the tutors seem to be from?

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critique: The diversity or lack of diversity in the towns listed in the response does not indicate what areas the tutors are from.

critique: The input does not specify where the locations are, so the answer should clarify this. For example, "Kuala Lumpur, Johor Bahru, Petaling Jaya, Subang Jaya, Penang, Shah Alam, Kuala Lumpur, Klang, Kota Kinabalu, Rawang, Ipoh, and Shah Alam in Malaysia."

critique: The locations are listed in alphabetical order, which is not the order in which they appear in the passage.

critique: The answer should be a complete sentence.

critique: Missing the locations of Veran and De Silva.

critique: The locations are not in alphabetical order.

text: Kuala Lumpur was mentioned twice.

category: coherence


text:
        Sally and James were sitting together on the stone curbs lining the exterior of the observatory. It was 9:52 PM and they had just attended a three hour lecture about sleep and dreams. Sally was waiting for her brother to come pick her up and had asked James to keep her company while she waited, James agreed. They had gotten to know each other in the past few months and found common ground, enough to warrant a natural kind of friendship, and it was nice for James to have a female friend with little pretext for anything else.

	They sat in a comfortable silence together, James was admiring the fallen leaves, Sally was admiring James. He sat with his head down and his spine curled, then he spoke.

	"I have this dream at night, about kissing someone. It's like a romance and it's not lustful, but it is erotic. Do you know what I mean? I meet a girl in my dream who is basically my opposite, she is unafraid to live in the moment and she controls it too.  We hide away, breaking into someone's backyard, and we kiss, laying on the grass. I know it's wrong but that's what I want, I don't want a wife or even a partner, I want to meet a girl who is naturally passionate now, in the Fall, because there's something in the air. I want to feel the sadness and guilt of making that mistake."

	"Well, you've got about one week before it starts to snow and the magic will be lost."

	"I know. It's not real but those are my dreams."

	"I've got dreams like that sometimes. I know what you mean about it being romantic but not lustful. It's more like a state of naive wonder about promiscuity, and it's not unbecoming in a dream. I wake up from those kinds of dreams and feel... melancholy. And it's good."

	"Yes. That's how I feel today."

	They didn't talk again for some time. James was wrapped up in that melancholy, thinking about how his youth was already lost. At 26, his passion and oversensitivity to stimulation was starting to wear. He thought about how this meant that he was maturing into someone who could better handle the life of an adult, but truthfully he was much more concerned about the loss of his irregular curiosities and his flippant behaviours, childish as they were. He had lost control of his life in a different way now, to the human condition.

	"I could be that girl... If you want."

	 James had to pause a second to think about Sally's words before responding. He wanted to take her offer seriously but he wasn't sure that she meant for him to.

	"I know you Sally, and I don't think that'd be wise. It wouldn't be in the nature of the dream anyway, and I'm hardly lost in my dreams when I'm awake."

	"You don't know me that well, James" Sally pushed up against James and put her hand on his thigh.

	James was taken aback by Sally's forward gesture and he arose from his slouch with his eyes angled down at Sally's hand, then towards the expression on her face. He didn't expect this kind of behaviour from her. It's true that he didn't know her very well but he thought well enough, at least to know that she was not a girl who would fulfill his fantasy. Though he did think she was pretty, her dark eyes were always inviting and her reddish brown hair was the fancy of many men. He was also particularly fond of the tiny scar beneath her right eye, as well as her boyish smile. She whispered into his ear.

	"We can jump the wall and break into the observatory, just say the word" and she nestled her forehead into his hair.

	There was a wistful daze about James now, and after a brief semblance of what was taking place, he turned to her so that they were cheek to cheek, his eyes closed now, taking her hand in his. But James was still shaken and couldn't react to Sally's invitation in a whimsical manner, as he could in his dreams, so he began to retreat. This moment was realized by both of them now and before the moment was lost all together, Sally got up and beckoned James to follow her onto the expanse of field across the sidewalk.

	James didn't believe it yet but Sally wasn't fooling around. She wanted to dream too and she ran with it like it were second nature. The dead leaves cracked under her feet as she danced on the grass, smiling and watching as James shyly got up from the stone to follow her lead. She fell to the ground, cross legged, and looked up at the stars. James, quiet and curious, leaned up against a tree a few feet away. He watched as she maneuvered into a comfortable seated position, and she watched him back.

	"Do you ever go the movies" he began, "and the person behind you is putting their feet up. Not directly behind you I mean, but a few chairs over, and you can still feel a slight kick every time they move? I always wonder if they even notice how it's bothersome."

	"They don't, it happens in class too. You know that girl, Michelle I think? She sat behind me on day one, flirting with this guy, talking about her outdated textbook, and every time they weren't talking she would put her feet up. No doubt she didn't notice my irritation, and I can't imagine she would've cared either way."

	James took a few steps toward Sally, she grabbed him and pulled him down to his knees. "Kiss me" she said.

	He wasn't nervous anymore and Sally was so beautiful, she looked at him with eyes lit up by the moonlight. Her name is Sally, she lives with her family in Etobicoke, she has a collection of four leaf clovers she found when she was young and she paints pictures of women. Her brother's name is Vincent and in an half hour he would be there in the observatory parking lot to bring her home. Her family name is the same name of a wealthy farm they own, "McMillan's". You wouldn't think you would find a farm in Etobicoke but there are some. She used to run around on the farm with her dog and find four leaf clovers.

	"I can't, Sally"

	James looked to the construction site at the other end of the field where a research facility was being built, it was covered in dry dirt and plastic and he hated it. He dropped down beside Sally in the grass and they lay there together, silent, looking up at the stars.

title: [RO] Sally & James

question: What does the story say about James and Sally's relationship?

answer: They get to know each other in the past few months and find common ground, enough to warrant a natural kind of friendship. James is admiring the fallen leaves while Sally is admiring James. They sit in comfortable silence and exchange pleasantries. Sally asks if James has dreams like the one he described. He says yes. Sally says she has those dreams too. They don't talk again for some time.

critique: It's omitted that Sally offers to be James' dream girl, and he declines.

critique: The answer should mention Sally's forwardness.

critique: The answer doesn't mention Sally's romantic advance.

critique: It's omitted that things become romantic on James's part, but Sally is less sure about pursuing anything.

critique: The answer omits that Sally offers to be James' dream girl.

critique: The answer should mention Sally's romantic advances.

critique: Sally makes a very forward gesture to James, which he is taken aback by. Include this in the response as well.


text:
The Transcripts of Evil

Mark found himself in a dimly lit wooden room furnished with antiques.  An entrepreneur in his late 20s, he was more intrigued than unnerved. He was not bound, nor gagged; what was apparent that someone had been meticulously planning the whole abduction.

‘’It’s best to wait,’’ he thought to himself. ‘’You don’t go to all the trouble and then just abandon your prey. It’s probably the competition trying to scare me into submission.’’

Mark heard a robotic voice. The voice appeared to be female and spoke with a computerized American accent. The message was clear.

‘’Hello. Pick a card in the middle of the room.’’

Mark approached a nightstand. Images of anthrax attacks flashed through his mind.

INTELLIGENCE. THE GATEWAY TO THE SOUL.

Your intelligence quotient is reasonably high. You know, they say men are afraid of intelligent females. Personally, I simply cannot stand the bimbos. They are the Lebensunwertes Leben to me. They are no better than all those feminine accessories they have been conditioned to play with. Have you ever wondered why there are so few female geniuses? I am not trying to sound misogynistic here… just trying to understand, you know? It just makes no sense, with all their supposed multi-tasking skills. Or, perhaps, this is just another layer of societal control? That aside, I am glad I have found you. You truly are a trophy. There is nothing more precious than a beautiful woman with brains. Once you have read the message, move on to the next card. Please.

‘’He’s referring to me in a female form,’’ Mark thought. ‘’What does that mean, exactly? Most likely - a manipulation tactic meant to confuse me. Or… a full-blown psycho. I gotta play along and see where this game takes me.’’

ANALYSIS OF WOMANHOOD. WAS FREUD RIGHT?

As you are probably aware, Freud said that a woman is a castrated man. I would proceed even further, and say that a woman is a castrated prepubescent boy who was socially conditioned to grow his hair long. Woman’s inferiority is expressed through her clothing (vide: dresses, skirts, makeup, nails, Roman slave branders - piercings, heels – the list goes ad infinitum…), as well as behavioral patterns (most notably: cowardice, lack of perseverance and focus on appearance, known in the ancient world as malakia in Greece and cynaidos in Rome). Women rebel against their unpleasant condition, but whatever they do – the truth always stares them in the face. That is why women are such mindless bureaucrats. Remember: even the feminist revolution was sponsored by a German-American-Jewish oil magnate – Rockefeller. There is a perfect storm in society and soon all the artificial rules will disappear. The entropy is upon us. Perception can be easily manipulated, Mark. The rule of reciprocity, Maslow’s hierarchy of needs, Sapir-Whorf hypothesis, subtle forms of discrimination and clean-cut divisions.. not to mention the dissociative identity disorder and all the philosophical implications. The time has come to pick up the final card.’’

‘’This isn’t the competition,’’ inferred Mark. ‘’I’m dealing with a full-blown psychosis here.’’

WHERE DO WE GO FROM HERE?

Mark, your task is simple: you are to decipher what this is all about. If you can do that, you will be set free. If not.. time to take the ultimate gamble and shed your mortal coil.

title: The Transcripts of Evil

question: Judging by the conversions between Mark and the robotic voice with an American accent, what can we decipher about the voice's personality?

answer: The voice is a computerized robot with an American accent. The voice is also a woman. The voice is also a full-blown psycho. The voice is also a manipulator. The voice is also a genius. The voice is also a narcissist.


text:
BY ANDREW WALKER
BBC World Service economics correspondent

A SLUMP IN CHINESE SHARES HAS PROMPTED STOCK MARKETS ACROSS ASIA, EUROPE AND THE US TO FALL SHARPLY. WHY IS THIS SO SIGNIFICANT?

What's behind the fall in China?

The wider story is that China's economic growth is slowing and there are concerns that the transition to a slower and more sustainable rate of growth might be disruptive.

That was true of the period of several weeks of volatility the market experienced after it peaked in June last year.

It's true this time too and the link is perhaps rather more direct now.

Why? Because the immediate sparks for the latest bout of instability were warning signs about the wider economy.

The first day when trading was suspended, figures showing a continued decline in manufacturing were one of the factors that set things rolling downhill. On the second day of suspension it was the sliding currency which raised concerns about whether it was a sign that the economy was slowing down more sharply than thought.

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What does this mean for the rest of the world?

The direct financial impact of lower share prices in China is moderate. There is not enough foreign investment in the Chinese market for it to be a major problem. The London consultancy Capital Economics has said foreigners own just 2% of shares

The issue is more about whether the financial turbulence shines a light on wider issues about the economic slowdown in China: is the economy heading for what's called a "hard landing", too sharp a slowdown?

China is now such a big force in the global economy that it would inevitably affect the rest of the world. It is the second largest economy and the second largest importer of both goods and commercial services.

It's not just stocks.

The prices of many commodities have been affected, notably crude oil. It's not just about China, for sure. Abundant supplies have been every bit as important in the oil market in the last eighteen months. But China's problems have been a significant factor adding further downward pressure to the price of crude oil. The price of Brent crude has fallen by about half since mid-June, when the first stage of the Chinese stock market slide began.

China is such a large buyer of industrial commodities that the possibility of lower-than-expected sales to the country has also undermined the prices of copper and aluminium, for example.

Gold has gained ground a little this week. It is seen by many as a safe investment, protection against both inflation and more general financial instability.

There is certainly a possibility of that kind of "safe haven" effect in other markets if the Chinese stock price falls make investors more wary about risks. In the currency markets, the most likely candidates are the yen and the Swiss franc. The dollar could also be affected, though the US currency already has a strong tailwind from the Federal Reserve's interest rate policy. The Fed started to raise rates last month and that has been encouraging investors to buy dollars. But it's a bit early to draw any firm conclusions.

Some of the currencies that investors might sell if they become more risk averse have shown some impact. Turkey, Brazil and South Africa all have problems of their own and their currencies have weakened in the last few days.

There is also some sign this week of investors putting money into safe government bonds or debts, those seen as having negligible risks of default, such as the US, Germany, the UK and Switzerland.

What about ordinary Chinese people?

Those who have borrowed money to buy shares in the last year have already been hit very hard. But most people don't own shares - only one person in 30 does, according to Capital Economics.

For most Chinese the wider issue is about the health of the country's economy. If China manages a smooth transition to a slower and more sustainable growth rate, it is likely to still be fast enough to generate rising living standards for most people. A more disruptive slowdown would mean many business failures and job losses.

What might the Chinese authorities do next?

They have several options to stimulate the economy which can affect the stock markets. They could cut interest rates, they could relax the rules on bank lending or they could increase spending. They could also encourage the currency, the yuan, to fall further to stimulate exports. There are problems with these options. Anything that encourages more lending could mean more distressed borrowers in the future. A falling currency has already fed into the stock market drama.

In addition the authorities have taken steps more specifically targeted on the stock market. They have extended restrictions on large investors selling shares. State investment funds have been buying shares. These measures can have an impact but they are unlikely to provide a definitive solution.

How worried should we be?

Views vary about how healthy the Chinese economy is. Capital Economics have been consistently relatively upbeat about China and they said in a note to clients this week:

"We continue to believe that growth is more likely to pick up than weaken over coming months."

But the investor George Soros is more gloomy, telling an economic forum in Sri Lanka:

"China has a major adjustment problem. I would say it amounts to a crisis. When I look at the financial markets there is a serious challenge which reminds me of the crisis we had in 2008."

A crisis there would be serious for the rest of the world, particularly countries and firms that export to China.

question: What does the text say about why Chinese stocks are falling?

answer: A slump in Chinese shares has prompted stock markets across Asia, Europe, and the US to fall sharply. The immediate sparks for the latest bout of instability were warning signs about the wider economy. The first day when trading was suspended, figures showing a continued decline in manufacturing were one of the factors that set things rolling downhill. On the second day of suspension, it was the sliding currency that raised concerns about whether it was a sign that the economy was slowing down more sharply than thought.

critique: The answer should mention that the Chinese economy is slowing down.

critique: The answer should mention the wider economic slowdown.

critique: The global decline should be emphasized and more global context should be present-also the Soros quote

critique: The answer should mention that the wider economy is slowing due to a transition to a slower and more sustainable growth rate.

critique: The answer should mention that the wider economy is slowing down.

critique: The answer should mention that the economic slowdown is the reason for the fall.

critique: This is a tautology and should be omitted.

question: What does the text say about the effects of the slump on ordinary Chinese people?

answer: The slump has hit those who have borrowed money to buy shares in the last year very hard. However, most people don't own shares. For most Chinese, the wider issue is about the health of the country's economy. If China manages a smooth transition to a slower and more sustainable growth rate, it is likely to still be fast enough to generate rising living standards for most people. A more disruptive slowdown would mean many business failures and job losses.

critique: Remove the third sentence by replacing it with one that covers a more general impact.

critique: The answer should mention that the Chinese authorities have taken steps to help the stock market.

question: What does the text say about the impact on the world outside of China?

answer: The impact of China's struggling economy has not yet been felt world-wide, as there is not much foreign investment in the Chinese market. However, the potential for China to influence the world economy is huge. China is the second-largest economy in the world and the second-largest importer of both goods and commercial services. China is also the largest buyer of industrial commodities, which means the impact of lower-than-expected sales to the country could damage the prices of other commodities such as copper and aluminum, as well as having an effect on the price of gold.

critique: The answer should mention the impact on oil prices.

critique: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.


text:
The tears of the woods

Like every Sunday, the woods were waiting for the man and the child. It was during this time of the year that the hikes of the pair became more regular. You could see them climb up the path early in the morning, when the sun behind the mountain barely managed to filter through the golden trees, which had already started to lose their leaves. Or later in the afternoon, when the light flooded the mountain with a red more intense than the color of the few remaining maple leaves playing hide and seek among the oaks.

Only a couple of the older trees, over there, in the tangle of the interiors, remembered perhaps the first time that a man of that family had come up this way. The man was walking and touching the trees and brushing his feet to make the leaves squeak and fly, creating odd effects with the lights and swirls with the help of the wind. After a few years of lonely walks, the man had started to come together with a child. The two of them walked, the child holding the man’s hand at first, slowly and painfully; then with increased agility as the years passed. And the man was showing the boy the leaves, and calling the names of the trees, pointing at the birds, telling stories of witches and dragons that had long ago lived in those woods, and that maybe – who could deny this with certainty? – were still hiding there, appearing only to those who were afraid.

When autumn arrived, the pair gave the impression to choose the paths where the leaves on the ground were plentiful. And the cracking noise made by their joyful and purposeful stomping filled the terse air.

The years passed, and that first man had time to become old, his beard white, while the boy became a man. But they kept on walking together up these woods, sometimes silent, sometimes playing the fallen leaves as an instrument, with their feet. Then, one day, the man who had been a boy came on his own, without the old man. Still, he followed the same paths, caressing the old barks, following the plants’ scents…until a new boy appeared with the man, holding hands, up the same roads. And the woods were listening to the man telling the boy the same stories of dragons and witches. And in the rapt eyes of the boy, the woods felt as if they were young again: every bark was new, every leaf a symbol of knights of old lineages fighting for princesses; and every broken twig a sword strong enough to defeat monsters.

And so it went, for years and years: until the boys became man, the men grew old, and the new men showed up on the paths alone again. And new boys appeared next to the new men, with new stories of dragons and knights, in a cycle whose length the woods could not quantify, but that it had become an important part of its seasons.

And today the woods are waiting: the man and the boy didn’t come last week, and the woods are trying to retain their colored leaves as long as possible, so that they can cast their shadow over the path of the pair, and fabricate wonder in the mind of the boy, swirling down touching his golden hair.

And here is the footstep of the man, and the woods move their fronds with delight. But a quiver comes to ruin the joy. The woods cannot hear the footsteps of the boy: perhaps the man has him on his shoulders?

The wind brings the news from the valley floor, up until the trees that are waiting on the mountain peak: *the man is alone*. The first trees already saw him coming: he walks curved, as if in his backpack a heavy ballast of years yet to live had suddenly accumulated. But the boy is not with him.

The woods are angry: where is the boy who should have been accompanying the man for many years to come, to learn the secrets of these trees, to make sure that the story of invincible dragons didn’t dry out, forgotten, as dead leaf at the end of November?

And yet the man *is* walking alone. And he doesn’t stop to caress the old barks; nor does he stir up the dead leaves that the woods had purposely hastened this morning to shake from the trees’ branches, to please the boy.

The man pushes forward. His beard is long, gray like the hair on a muzzle of an old dog, his hat down on his forehead. He doesn’t pay attention to the sky veiled by the leaves, nor does he care about the tunnels of lights that reach the floor. And he doesn’t explain to the woods why he is alone.

Suddenly, fast clouds come to darken the sky and the wind shakes the branches of the trees rabidly, as if the woods had called upon the wind’s aid to punish the man for his solitude. The tenderness that the wind had used in the past, to make sure that the boy stopped in awe at the sight of a rain of yellow and red and orange is gone.

Maliciously, the wind channels down the path, cold, running over the man with strength, tearing away branches, throwing them at him. And yet the man keeps on going, head down. Tears seem to obscure his vision, perhaps caused by the strong wind; but the wind is too enraged to even notice.

And the trees of the woods keep on asking loudly *where is the boy? Who will we tell our stories of dragons?* But the man – who had always been able to talk the language of the woods – does not answer. He continues to walk, even now that the rain manages to pass through the branches and hits the ground with a noisy clatter.

A sudden strong noise (a broken branch hitting the ground? One of those monsters that his dead father used to talk about?) forces the man to look for shelter.  Away from the path, he sits down with his back against a huge oak, covered by the thick branches that create a cone of quietude against the impending storm.

And it seems as if the oak is trying to pull its branches closer to stop the rain from hitting the man, as if the rage of the woods had suddenly morphed into compassion. While the man lies there, leaning with his eyes closed. Is he asleep? Or is he intent in listening to the tears of the woods for his lost boy?

title: The tears of the woods - first story here

question: What does the text say about the stories the man tells the boy?

answer: The stories are of dragons and witches and are made up, as the man is just trying to create stories he can connect to the nature surrounding them. The father is eager to help the son connect to the stories, right up to when the son begins being his main company in the woods. However, the father doesn't share the thought of the woods that the stories will dry up when the boy isn't there to listen.

critique: The answer should mention that the stories are also about knights.

critique: The answer should mention that the man is the father of the boy.

critique: The answer is made up and doesn't really answer the question.

critique: Repeat the information about the boy and the man.

question: What does the text say about the forest?

answer: The forest is a place where the man and his boy go on a regular basis. The forest is a place where the man tells stories of witches and dragons to the boy. The forest is a place where the man and boy walk, and the forest is a place where the man and boy learn about each other. The forest is a place where the man and boy spend time together. The forest is a place where the man and boy learn about each other. The forest is a place where the man and boy learn about each other.

critique: The forest is a place where the man and boy learn about each other, not the forest.

critique: The forest is not a place where the man and boy learn about each other.

question: What does the text say about each generation's mothers?

answer: No answer

critique: The answer should mention that the text does not mention anything about the mothers.

critique: The answer should state that there is no mention of the mothers in the text.

critique: The answer should mention that the text does not mention mothers.


text:
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critique: The answer omits SastaSundar's other services.


text:
This American Life recently had an episode featuring superheroes and superpowers. The first story debated the power of flight versus the power of invisibility. Which would you choose if you had the option and why? Between those two options, I choose the power to fly. Invisibility seems creepy to me and reminds me of that Clay Aiken song, Invisible. And yes, one of his lines in that song is, “If I was invisible, then I could just watch you in your room” (www.azlyrics.com). How was that song his one hit wonder? Pre-adolescent girls must fantasize about superhero stalkers using their powers for evil creeping . . .? Anyway, back to discussing the power of flight. I imagine that flying would be the ultimate freeing experience.

During my walks I like to watch the ravens tease one another with small prey they capture in their talons. They flip, turn and free-fall along the cliff side, and it just seems in that moment that their worries fall away as they whole-heartedly play. Of course, the poor mouse that is repeatedly dropped in the sport is probably not describing the experience as playful or fun. But just think! Flying would save me money on gas, airfare and wasted time sitting in frustrating Bay Area traffic. It would provide me with the exhilarating sensation that I feel when running. That sensation that nothing is holding you back, and you can go it alone and be all right. Many of the interviewees on This American Life stated that they would not want to use their power of flight or invisibility to help others. I sheepishly admit that rescuing people was not the first idea that popped into my mind when I pictured myself capable of flying to Hawaii (for free) on a whim. However, I had a recent experience leave me with a different superpower that I would use for the aid of others.

First, I need to preface this story with a few important details. I have extremely limited knowledge about automobiles. My capabilities when it comes to fixing or addressing issues with my car include putting gas in the fuel tank and refilling the windshield washer fluid. Yes, it’s sad but true. I almost helped change a flat tire on my car, but then it turned out that my wheel lock key was missing. You pretty much get the idea that I'm a dunce when it comes to resolving automobile issues on my own. I drive a Honda Element for work, and one morning a light came on the dashboard. I went to the user manual to decipher the hieroglyphic looking symbol, and it turned out that this particular symbol indicates low tire pressure through the tire pressure monitoring system. Well, I addressed the problem like I do most of my automobile issues: I ignored it hoping that it would go away.

A few days passed by and the damn low tire pressure light was still lit on the dashboard. I made the executive decision to stop ignoring the problem and face it. I turned to my phone and looked up how to put air into a tire. I encourage you to laugh at me, because putting air in a tire is about as basic as refilling the windshield washer fluid. But I had never done it before, and I feared the tire exploding in my face. I did know through my law class that gas stations were ordered to provide air for free, so I knew that it wouldn't cost me anything. Well, I bought a tire pressure gauge and went around to all the tires trying to figure out which one was low. Before you judge me for not just using my eyes, I did look at the tires, and they all looked fine to me. So, I took my new tire pressure gauge and checked all the tires. Sure enough the driver’s side rear tire was low and you could not tell just by looking at it. Great! I successfully determined which tire was low, and now all I had to do was fill it up with some air. Sounds easy enough, but of course being a novice this task was daunting.

I pulled the hose for the air and squeezed the lever to emit the pressurized air. Nothing. I kept squeezing, because like the “door close” elevator button, the more you try the faster it will work . . . Still nothing. Then, I decided to read the directions. Clearly stated on the front of the machine it says that to use the air you just need to go inside to the front counter. I went inside and the nice gentleman turned the air on for me, and naturally when I returned outside it actually sounded like it was on. I squeezed the lever and a shot of air came out. After removing the cap, I held the end of the hose to the nozzle on the tire and squeezed air into the tire. I began panicking though, because I was worried that air wasn’t actually going into the tire, and I was just deflating the tire. I held the end on tighter and squeezed. Paranoid about exploding tires in my face, I stopped and decided to check the pressure with my gauge. Victory! I had successfully inflated the tire to the recommended tire pressure as per the user manual guidelines.

I felt invigorated! I stood a little taller and walked with my palms face out wearing my grease proudly. However, I knew that the real testament to my success depended on that little light on the dash. I turned the car on, the low tire pressure light came on and I started to drive away. Suddenly, the light turned off! At that moment, I was unstoppable. I couldn’t wipe the smile off my face. As I drove on, I noticed that I began obsessively focusing on every driver’s tires. Custom paint job, imported rims, 16 cylinder 1200 horsepower Bugatti Veyron Vitesse? Nah man, check out those properly inflated tires! Throughout the day I stared at every tire I walked past, and I began feeling the urge to check the tire’s pressure. I resisted the temptation, because I didn’t feel like being arrested. Then, I would have to explain to my arresting officer that I was not trying to steal the car’s wheels; “I swear officer I was only checking the tire pressure.” It did give me an idea though. In order to avoid conflicts with law enforcement I would have to choose the life of a vigilante. I could call myself the Psi Equalizer and rescue citizen’s cars from potential flat tires by warning them about the dangerous villain, low tire pressure. My other adversaries would include broken glass, latent nail and the always conniving, pothole. Flight might not instill a sense of humanitarianism, but my new, real super power has. Fear not humankind the Psi Equalizer is here to save the day!

title: The Psi Equalizer

question: What are the possible downsides to flight that the writer does not take into consideration?

answer: The word suspcicious will be in the mind of everyone, which will alienate the reader. That is would make the reader less safe because they wouldn't be able to freely use their power.

critique: The response is not related to the question.

critique: "The word suspcicious will be in the mind of everyone, which will alienate the reader. That is would make the reader less safe because they wouldn't be able to freely use their power." - this doesn't make sense.

critique: Suspicions were between the two narrator and the other character, not the reader.

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WATCH ABOVE: A future without fossil fuels possible if Canada starts now: Stanford professor – Jun 12, 2016

Canada can transition its entire energy infrastructure to renewables like wind and solar power by 2050, says an expert at Stanford University but it’s going to take immediate action from both governments and Canadian citizens.

Mark Jacobson, a co-founder of Stanford’s Solutions Project and an engineering professor, spoke to the _West Block_‘s Tom Clark this weekend about how his team evaluated the wind, water and solar potential for all 50 U.S. states and 139 countries around the world, including Canada.

He maintains we can get rid of all fossil fuels within the next 35 years, and have them 80 per cent phased out by 2030.

  “Canada has a huge wind resource. You can power the country on its own with wind many times over,” he told Clark. “The cost of wind right now, in the United States, it’s the cheapest form of electric power by far.”

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At the moment, just 5 per cent of Canadian electricitycomes from wind which means we have a long way to go.

Jacobson acknowledged that there’s also another challenge; namely, a lack of political will in a country that has relied heavily for decades on the oil and gas sector.

He noted that wind and solar generators are cheaper than fossil-fuel generators, but you need more storage and transmission because the wind doesn’t always blow, and the sun doesn’t always shine. In the end, Jacobson has calculated, the cost evens out.

  “It’s about the same cost as a fossil fuel world directly to consumers, however you a have this huge savings in health and climate costs that are born.”

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The Stanford team, which has the backing of Hollywood A-listers like Mark Ruffalo and Leonardo DiCaprio, also predicts a net increase of 125,000 Canadian jobs after the transition, but it needs to start now.

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  “All new cars that are bought should be electric cars, all new homes should have electricity for everything… and for industry we need all new technologies to be electric,” Jacobson said.

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“Then we need, on top of that, effective policies put in place immediately to require transitions to a large-scale clean renewable energy … if we don’t start now, it’ll just drag on.”

Government will invest in clean energy: Carr

Ottawa is aware of the need for immediate action, according to Natural Resources Minister Jim Carr.

“We know that we’re in transition, so it’s a process of moving at a pace the economy can handle to renewable sources of energy,” Carr said in response to Jacobson’s findings.

  “We all know that the transition is not going to happen overnight, but it is happening now … and Canada will invest and work with the private sector.”

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Asked why the Liberals have not set a firm target for the move to renewables, Carr said “we have a direction, and the direction is clear.”

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Here’s the Solutions Project’s proposed breakdown of Canadian green energy by 2050:

-   58 per cent wind power
-   22 per cent solar power
-   16 per cent hydro
-   2 per cent wave
-   2 per cent geothermal

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-   Prime Minister Trudeau announces raft of new spending on climate change, green energy initiatives

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question: What does the article say about the possibility of a future without fossil fuels in Canada?

answer: The article says that Canada can transition its entire energy infrastructure to renewables like wind and solar power by 2050. It is going to take immediate action from both governments and Canadian citizens.

critique: The answer does not mention specifics about Jacobson's team or his appearance on West Block.

question: What does the article say about the current challenges of transitioning to renewable energy?

answer: According to the Solutions Project, Canada has a huge wind resource. Jacobson says that wind and solar generators are cheaper than fossil-fuel generators, but you need more storage and transmission because the wind doesn't always blow, and the sun doesn't always shine. He says that the cost evens out. However, Jacobson acknowledges that there's also another challenge: a lack of political will in a country that has relied heavily for decades on the oil and gas sector.

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critique: The answer should mention the difficulty of transitioning to electric cars.

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question: What does the article say about Jim Carr?

answer: Jim Carr is the Natural Resources Minister of Canada. He says the transition to renewable energy is a process of moving at a pace the economy can handle. He says Canada will invest and work with the private sector.

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_ARMY OF SHADOWS: PALESTINIAN COLLABORATION WITH ZIONISM, 1917–1948_ is a book published in 2004 by Hillel Cohen. It is about the sale of land and other co-operation between Arabs and Jews in Palestine before the establishment of the State of Israel.[1]

Overview

In this book, Cohen, a scholar at the Harry S. Truman Institute for the Advancement of Peace at the Hebrew University of Jerusalem, documents the thousands of Arabs, ranging from wealthy absentee landlords to fellahin smallholders, who sold land to Zionist organizations. He shows that everyone understood that control of land was a necessary precondition to fulfillment of national goals, both Jewish and Arab. Cohen explains the varied motives of sellers: some wanted money, and some sold land or acted as intelligence agents for the Zionists even while they publicly denounced land sales, but there were also non-monetary motivations. Some thought that co-operating with the Zionists would improve the life of their clans and villages. Others thought that since it was impossible to defeat the Zionists, it was wiser to co-operate with them. Others were committed nationalists who believed that staying on the land was paramount and that working for and co-operating with the Zionists was the strategy that would enable them to stay on the land. Others were driven to collaborate with the Zionists or with the British out of their intense hatred for Hajj Amin al-Husayni.[2]

Cohen sees the Arabs of Mandatory Palestine as being split between two positions. There were those who agreed with Husayni that all of Palestine must remain Arab and the Zionists must be fought, and there were those who argued that the Zionists were too powerful to be defeated and so the path of wisdom lay in some sort of co-existence.[3]

According to Cohen, the Husayni clan tried to rid itself of opposition beginning in the 1920s. In 1929, Sheikh Musa Hadeib was murdered near the Jaffa Gate in Jerusalem. In the 1929 Palestine riots, Husayni spread the falsehood that the Jews intended to tear down the Al Aqsa Mosque and the Dome of the Rock, a shrine on the Temple Mount. Over the course of the next decade, Husayni had 1000 Arabs murdered, 500 in 1938 alone. In 1939, the Husaynis were paying 100 Palestine pounds to assassins who murdered important “traitors”, 25 pounds for petty “traitors” and 10 pounds for murdering a Jew.[4]

Husyani's methods drove many Arabs to side with and even to fight alongside the Zionists.[5] Perhaps the most shocking allegation in the book is that Husayni often put his own position in Palestinian politics above the interests of the Palestinian nation, most crucially so in 1939. The result was that Husayni rejected the British White Paper of 1939, which reneged on the promise of a Jewish homeland made in the Balfour Declaration and effectively promised the Palestinian Arabs majority rule and independence within a decade. According to Cohen, Husayni rejected the offer because Britain did not guarantee his position as ruler of the Palestinian Arab state that it proposed to create.[6]

Critical acclaim

Writing in _The Nation_, Neve Gordon calls _Army of Shadows_ “groundbreaking” for exposing a “particularly nefarious side of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict,” the manipulation of paid Arab collaborators by Zionist organizations.[7] When the book came out, he says it caused a stir among Jewish and Arab intellectuals since both sides found the evidence presented by Cohen unpalatable.[8]

Benny Morris commented on Cohen's view of the integral role of Islam in the Palestinian national identity: “From the first, the nationalism of Palestine's Arabs was blatantly religious. Almost all the 'nationalist' statements Cohen quotes were couched in religious or semi- religious terms. We are dealing here with an Islamic nationalism.”[9] In _The New Republic_ he wrote: "His perspective—and this is one of his book's strengths--is neither pro-Palestinian nor anti-Palestinian, neither pro-Zionist nor anti-Zionist. Cohen argues-—with Talleyrand, who famously quipped that “treason is a matter of dates”—that “treason is ultimately a social construct. Definitions vary with circumstances,” and “collaboration” is “in the eye of the beholder.” So Cohen leaves “the moral and political judgment” to his readers".[10]

The most notable aspect of the book according to Stephen Schwartz, writing in the _Weekly Standard_, is the idea that some Palestinian Arabs refused to take up arms against Israel in 1948 out of hatred for Husayni. According to Cohen, Palestinian Arabs were in no hurry to join the battle: “Only a minority of Arabs were involved in offensive activities, this unwillingness to fight was frequently buttressed by agreements with Jews in nearby settlements.”[11]

[1] Advocacy Corner | The Jewish Exponent

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[10] The Tangled Truth by Benny Morris, the New Republic, May 07, 2008

[11] Stephen Schwartz, The Third Jihad

title: Army of Shadows: Palestinian Collaboration with Zionism, 1917–1948

question: What is the main point of the book being described in the article?

answer: The book is about the sale of land and other co-operation between Arabs and Jews in Palestine before the establishment of the State of Israel.

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critique: It's omitted that this book is about Palestinian collaboration with Zionism.

critique: The answer should mention the book's focus on Palestinian collaboration with Zionism.

critique: The answer should mention the book's main point.

critique: The answer does not mention the book's main point.

question: What does the article say about the Husayni Clan's role in the Israeli-Palestinian conflict?

answer: The Husayni Clan was a powerful family in Palestine. They were against the Zionists and wanted to rid themselves of opposition. In 1929, Sheikh Musa Hadeib was murdered near the Jaffa Gate in Jerusalem. In 1929, the Husaynis spread the falsehood that the Jews intended to tear down the Al Aqsa Mosque and the Dome of the Rock. In the 1930s, the Husaynis paid assassins to murder important "traitors". In 1939, the Husaynis were paying 100 Palestine pounds to assassins who murdered important "traitors". Husayni's methods drove many Arabs to side with and even to fight alongside the Zionists.

critique: The Husayni's paid assassins to murder important "traitors" in the 1930s, not the 1930s.

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critique: This is not relevant to the Husayni Clan.

critique: "In the 1930s, the Husaynis paid assassins to murder important "traitors"." - this is incorrect. The Husaynis were paying people to murder important "traitors" in 1939.

critique: The response inaccurately mentions that the Husayni's spread the falsehood that the Jews intended to tear down the Al Aqsa Mosque and the Dome of the Rock. However, the Husayni's spread the falsehood that the Jews intended to tear down the Al Aqsa Mosque and the Dome of the Rock.


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31 July 2017
The open day recently held at the Serekunda General Hospital in Serrekunda was exciting opportunity to engage and sensitise the Serekunda community about the two new projects NeoInnate and EPIC HIPC which are set to commence soon.

The event was attended by several dignitaries, including Mr Lamin Marong, Deputy Director of Nursing Services who represented the Minister of Health and Social Welfare, Alagie Manneh, representing the Chief Executive Officer (CEO) of Serekunda General Hospital, representatives from WHO, staff from MRCG, staff from the Serekunda General Hospital as well as Alkalos, religious leaders and people from the surrounding communities. With the theme “Partnering to reduce Newborn infections”, participants were entertained with a drama from the local Kanyeleng group and speeches from the honoured guests.

On the behalf of the CEO of Serekunda General Hospital, Alagie Manneh, thanked MRCG for coming up with this laudable project, noting that their doors are always open for partnership and emphasised their support in implementing this important project.

[Speakers during the event]

Speakers during the event

Speaking on behalf of the Ministry of Health and Social Welfare, Mr Lamin Marong, Deputy Director of Nursing Services, expressed heartfelt gratitude and appreciation to MRC Unit The Gambia in their endeavour to reach out to the community in Serrekunda. He explained that “Malnutrition is a major cause of immune deficiency leading to greater frequency and severity of common infections”. He added that “primary malnutrition is common among children of all socio-economic levels due to poverty, lack of education, food allergies, inappropriate or limited diet and eating disorders”

Mr Marong assured the MRCG that the Ministry of Health and Social Welfare through the Regional Health Directorate would engage health workers in sensitising the MRCG health activities with Serrekunda to create more awareness.

Giving his remarks, Prof Umberto D’Alessandro, Unit Director, explained that, “little is currently known about iron homoeostasis during the first week of life and even less is known about the comparisons of nutritional immunity between full term, preterm and low birth weight neonates. The NeoInnate study will, therefore, look into how iron is regulated in the body of the newborn.” He further added that “in an effort to study neonatal nutritional immunity and its role in neonatal susceptibility to infection, MRCG will conduct an observational study in 450 Gambian full term, preterm and low birth weight vaginally delivered neonates born at Serekunda General Hospital.” He also highlighted that in the fight against the infectious disease it is crucial to understand better the way the newborns immune system functions. The EPIC-HIPC study will be using novel methods to study this and will provide useful information that may help us to better protect this vulnerable group using vaccines.

[Participants during the event]

Participants during the event

Giving his statement, Prof Andrew Prentice, Head of the Nutrition theme said, “This study is part of a wider portfolio of research trying to improve the health and wellbeing of young babies and the general population of the people of The Gambia”. He added, “how we feed our young women and mothers and how we feed our young men and fathers is crucial to the health of the babies that will emerge and will grow with long life”.

Speaking at the event, Dr Carla Cerami, Principal investigator of the NeoInnate study, gave an overview of the NeoInnate project which, she said, seeks to assess how iron is regulated in the body of the newborn. Dr Olubukola Idoko also gave an overview of the EPIC HIPC project. She explained that the projects seek to determine how the immune system of the newborn is regulated and what it means for vaccination.  She stated that the knowledge gained from the study could help inform the development of the next generation of vaccines better suited for use in very young children.

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question: Summarize what the speakers said about malnutrition.

answer: Mr. Lamin Marong, Deputy Director of Nursing Services, spoke about malnutrition being a major cause of immune deficiency. He explained that malnutrition is common among children of all socio-economic levels due to poverty, lack of education, food allergies, and eating disorders. He assured the MRCG that the Ministry of Health and Social Welfare would engage health workers in sensitizing the MRCG health activities with Serrekunda to create more awareness.

critique: The answer should mention that Prof. Umberto D'Alessandro also spoke about malnutrition.

critique: The answer should mention the iron homoeostasis.

critique: The response includes extraneous information not useful for the task.

critique: The answer should mention Prof. D'Alessandro.

critique: The answer should mention that malnutrition is a major cause of infections.

critique: "He assured the MRCG that the Ministry of Health and Social Welfare would engage health workers in sensitizing the MRCG health activities with Serrekunda to create more awareness." - this was already mentioned in the first sentence.

critique: The answer omits the part where Mr. Marong says that malnutrition is a major cause of immune deficiency.

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question: What does Professor Umberto D'Alessandro talk about?

answer: He talks about the NeoInnate study, which looks into how iron is regulated in the body of the newborn.

critique: The answer should mention that the study is observational.

critique: This doesn't adequately summarize what Professor Umberto D'Alessandro talks about.

critique: The answer should include that D'Alessandro is the Unit Director.

critique: The answer should mention that the study is an observational study.

critique: He talks about the NeoInnate study and the EPIC-HIPC study.

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question: Summarize everything about the event.

answer: The event was held at the Serekunda General Hospital in Serrekunda. The theme was "Partnering to reduce Newborn infections". Several dignitaries attended, including Mr Lamin Marong, Deputy Director of Nursing Services who represented the Minister of Health and Social Welfare, Alagie Manneh, representing the Chief Executive Officer (CEO) of Serekunda General Hospital, representatives from WHO, staff from MRCG, staff from the Serekunda General Hospital as well as Alkalos, religious leaders and people from the surrounding communities. Participants were entertained with a drama from the local Kanyeleng group and speeches from the honored guests.

critique: The answer could use a more specific mention of the projects being discussed.

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critique: The answer should mention the two projects.

text: The answer should mention the discussions surrounding the two studies: the NeoInnate study and the EPIC-HIPC study.